Refresh a lot of the copy

This includes some small and some larger(er) changes, which I'll call out specifically in a moment, but generally:

* Typos and wording (small)
* Bring some tech stuff up to date (small)
* Change a few things about the rails engineering job description (bigger)
@yorthehunter emdashes.  I frequently mis-use commas, parens, and emdashes, but emdashes seems right here