Content changes on What's Changing page

I've made some content changes to the What's Changing page text to talk about the Charities Open Access Fund: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JUrrgzG0zN6NEp6fjcQLcUuGtazos5Uhl2EjiKUJdIc/edit?usp=sharing

I suggest replacing all the text as there are several small changes.
I agree!

On 20/10/2014 11:42, Mathieu Decoene wrote:
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> In avocet/what-is-changing.html:
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> > @@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
> >                          <header>
> >                              <h3>When do I need to do something?</h3>
> >                          </header>
> > -                        <p>As soon as your peer-reviewed manuscript has been accepted, and before signing a Copyright Transfer Agreement or Open Access form, <a href="/upload" title="Go to the manuscript upload page">upload it</a>.</p>
> > -                        <p>HEFCE policy requires manuscripts to be uploaded no later than three months after acceptance. This policy comes into force on 1 April 2016. Yet at the University we want to ensure this shift is managed sooner rather than later, so that no research is omitted.</p>
> > +                        <p>As soon as your peer-reviewed manuscript has been accepted <a href="/upload" title="Go to the manuscript upload page">upload it</a>. HEFCE policy requires manuscripts to be submitted within 3 months of the acceptance date.</p>
>
> I think this needs a comma between |accepted| and |upload it|
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