Hey there - as someone who isn't using React and is evaluating it for an upcoming project I would say the top two changes are quite effective but this last point could probably be made better.  Personally, `one-way data binding` sounds like repurposed jargon from other projects.  Also - _why_ is the `one-way data binding` simpler, faster, and easier to scale?

`Data Flow` is a great point though.  Why not something along the lines of `React flows data in one direction through your component and into the DOM as efficiently as possible.  This keeps your app lean by reducing boilerplate view code and easy to reason about by eliminating side effects that come with syncing state in both directions.`