typo
smaller code width
a small example of linking
given the current introduction, it looks we should not jump directly into MVC, hence a few more sentences for the connection purposes
use cars, instead of a copy to d
typo
I really cannot find references to reactive programming...
introduce reactive programming directly
move "related work" to the section of discussion
passive voice
maybe this sounds too personal
use $$ instead of \texttt{}
add the reference of grand tour (Asimov)
add a note about the video
add proper references
cranvas is all lower case, so use The cranvas package
figure -> Figure
reference classes and object signals
more on customized meta data
a space