Style corr.

l. 24: I've inserted an indefinite article and the relative pronoun due to stylistic reasons (to let it sound "more natural".
l. 40: I've inserted the anaphoric relation relation between the subject of the first part of the sentence and the latter (message - it.
Moreover, I've changed the verb and the adverb due to syntax and context. 
l. 46: I've changed the capitalization.