It's just difficult to read long sentences with multiple clauses in them. If that's normal in Britain, then I rescind that comment. Maybe we Americans aren't sophisticated enough to keep all these ideas in our heads without having them separated for us ;)

FWIW, I'd probably write it this way: "As the habitats of this inhospitable world were being built, little thought was given to less essential amenities. This bar was added by grafting it onto the side of the spaceport. Anywhere else in the galaxy, being an afterthought would likely have resulted in a rather cramped and run-down environment, but here in Soromid space it has given it a more organic feel, so much so that it almost feels like it is growing."

Re: commit counts, I'm not the project maintainer, but in general we just want to avoid combining what should be multiple pull requests into 1 pull request. This seems fine to me because they are all related to 1 thing: adding a trader faction rehab mission setup. The fact that it has multiple commits is totally okay. When I'm using git, though, I prefer to use commands like `git rebase -i HEAD~3` after minor fixes like typos: it allows you to combine multiple commits into one, which makes the commit history cleaner.

Congrats on learning vi -- I'm a professional programmer, and a large percentage of us prefer to do our work in vi. It's hard to learn but give it a chance ;)