Typo/grammar fixes.
More typos and a couple of better word choices
Lots of typos

These I did to the best of my ability, since they were names. I tried to
leave it uncorrected if I had doubts.
Typos, grammar and double/single quote fixes
Typos, grammar and consistency
Typos typos typos. And consistency.
My god, it's full of typos.
made all the (Blah Crew) prompts consistent

A few said (Blah Crewman), (Blah Crew member), etc.
The typos go marching one by one, hurah, hurah.