OK, so I need to explain a little about what's going on here. The observant will notice quite a good deal of editing has gone on here. Not much in the way of editing the actual words as they may be spoken, but the line structure, the stanza structure, and the overall form have gone from a straightforward prose oriented short narrative and taken on a poetics inspired more by the concrete movement of the mid-late 20th century. This is indeed a lofty experiment as the concrete relied heavily on the intransigence of typesetting and the aesthetics of print--both of which are glaringly absent in a digital context. I am fully expecting the work done in this commit to fail if at least in some small way. Also new in this version is the introduction of quasi mathmatical symbols - a sort of psuedo code is creeping into this particular piece. I'll be greatly insterested to see if this seems faddish or gimmicky to me in a few days, but for now it seems appropriate.