edits+readability: rs-replace-member
Old
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.372450331125826
   flesch-ease: 44.58619757174395
   flesch-level: 13.292549668874177
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.026490066225165563
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 6
   sentence-len-avg: 25
   smog-index: 7.793537801064561
   word-count: 151
New
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.559030303030301
   flesch-ease: 46.95153409090912
   flesch-level: 11.834356060606058
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.024242424242424242
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 8
   sentence-len-avg: 20
   smog-index: 7.168621630094336
   word-count: 165
edits+readability: rs-replace-member

Old
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.372450331125826
   flesch-ease: 44.58619757174395
   flesch-level: 13.292549668874177
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.026490066225165563
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 6
   sentence-len-avg: 25
   smog-index: 7.793537801064561
   word-count: 151

First Pass
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.559030303030301
   flesch-ease: 46.95153409090912
   flesch-level: 11.834356060606058
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.024242424242424242
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 8
   sentence-len-avg: 20
   smog-index: 7.168621630094336
   word-count: 165

Current -- Latest
---
file: build/master/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.899428571428569
   flesch-ease: 51.943272727272756
   flesch-level: 9.966545454545454
   foggy:
      count: 9
      factor: 0.05142857142857143
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 11
   sentence-len-avg: 15
   smog-index: 8.296473431620573
   word-count: 175
Fix cloneCollection description

cloneCollection copies from a remote mongod to the current instance.

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
edits+readability: replication-introduction

Before:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replication-introduction.json
source: source/core/replication-introduction.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 12.129257641921395
   flesch-ease: 36.54377850557984
   flesch-level: 11.322758369723434
   foggy:
      count: 84
      factor: 0.1222707423580786
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 54
   sentence-len-avg: 12
   smog-index: 10.25414643259724
   word-count: 687

After:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replication-introduction.json
source: source/core/replication-introduction.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.832547770700636
   flesch-ease: 37.77055365017151
   flesch-level: 10.991337579617838
   foggy:
      count: 70
      factor: 0.11146496815286625
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 52
   sentence-len-avg: 12
   smog-index: 9.75724932402239
   word-count: 628