Language correction (2)

1. A comma was added in the lines: 53, 56, 174.
2. stylistic improvements applied in the lines: 75, 168.
3. Translations prepared in the lines: 90-103.
4. Prepositional correction in line 170.
5. You wrote "Unfollow" in line 160, which would be a neologism. Maybe this is the term used on Facebook (?), so you copied that. Nevertheless, I'd propose "De-follow" due to morphological rules(the type of prefix needs to match the root of the verb.