I updated the pull request.


On Mon, Sep 9, 2013 at 3:12 PM, Sam Kleinman <notifications@github.com>wrote:

> In source/includes/ref-toc-aggregation-conditional.yaml:
>
> > @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
> >  name: :expression:`$cond`
> >  file: /reference/aggregation/cond
> > -description: Evaluates a an expression and returns a boolean.
> > +description: Evaluates one expression that returns a boolean. If ``true``, it returns the result of a second (perhaps non-boolean) expression. If ``false``, it returns the result of a third expression.
>
> we should wrap this using the multiline string formating in yaml.
>
> also unclear what "it" is in the description.
>
> also not sure that we need to have such a thorough definition in the table
> of content listing. perhaps it makes more sense to make the page itself
> have this definition (or a related definition, and then have this have a
> small to moderately sized definition that explains what's going on in this
> context.
>
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