Documentation fixups

These are mostly cosmetic fixes for irritating imperfections:
- "separated with commas" was duplicated, leave just one
- extra whitespace here and there, man pages are not PEP8, drop
- weird extra commas, drop
- Fedora logs to /var/log/messages
- "drive is has failed", drop "is"

Change-Id: I5ceba2e61b16db4855d76c92cbc83663b9b2a0da
Merge "Documentation fixups"