edits+readability: replica-set-delayed-member

Before:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-delayed-member.json
source: source/core/replica-set-delayed-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.328025078369905
   flesch-ease: 42.56970950888194
   flesch-level: 12.604940438871473
   foggy:
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      factor: 0.06896551724137931
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 15
   sentence-len-avg: 21
   smog-index: 10.047579312681364
   word-count: 319

After:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-delayed-member.json
source: source/core/replica-set-delayed-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.635205047318614
   flesch-ease: 49.16371594493836
   flesch-level: 9.981595927731572
   foggy:
      count: 23
      factor: 0.07255520504731862
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 22
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 8.97023862654752
   word-count: 317
edits+readability: rs-replace-member
Old
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.372450331125826
   flesch-ease: 44.58619757174395
   flesch-level: 13.292549668874177
   foggy:
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      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 6
   sentence-len-avg: 25
   smog-index: 7.793537801064561
   word-count: 151
New
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.559030303030301
   flesch-ease: 46.95153409090912
   flesch-level: 11.834356060606058
   foggy:
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      factor: 0.024242424242424242
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 8
   sentence-len-avg: 20
   smog-index: 7.168621630094336
   word-count: 165
edits+readability: rs-replace-member

Old
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.372450331125826
   flesch-ease: 44.58619757174395
   flesch-level: 13.292549668874177
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.026490066225165563
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 6
   sentence-len-avg: 25
   smog-index: 7.793537801064561
   word-count: 151

First Pass
---
file: build/rs-replace/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.559030303030301
   flesch-ease: 46.95153409090912
   flesch-level: 11.834356060606058
   foggy:
      count: 4
      factor: 0.024242424242424242
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 8
   sentence-len-avg: 20
   smog-index: 7.168621630094336
   word-count: 165

Current -- Latest
---
file: build/master/json/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.json
source: source/tutorial/replace-replica-set-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.899428571428569
   flesch-ease: 51.943272727272756
   flesch-level: 9.966545454545454
   foggy:
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   word-count: 175
Fix cloneCollection description

cloneCollection copies from a remote mongod to the current instance.

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
edits+readability: replication-introduction

Before:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replication-introduction.json
source: source/core/replication-introduction.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 12.129257641921395
   flesch-ease: 36.54377850557984
   flesch-level: 11.322758369723434
   foggy:
      count: 84
      factor: 0.1222707423580786
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 54
   sentence-len-avg: 12
   smog-index: 10.25414643259724
   word-count: 687

After:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replication-introduction.json
source: source/core/replication-introduction.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.832547770700636
   flesch-ease: 37.77055365017151
   flesch-level: 10.991337579617838
   foggy:
      count: 70
      factor: 0.11146496815286625
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 52
   sentence-len-avg: 12
   smog-index: 9.75724932402239
   word-count: 628
DOCS-1644: edits to the mongofiles page
edits: fault tolerance language
edits+readability: rs-elections

Before
---
file: build/rs-elections/json/core/replica-set-elections.json
source: source/core/replica-set-elections.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.084116743471583
   flesch-ease: 45.18247726989665
   flesch-level: 11.328266699879602
   foggy:
      count: 78
      factor: 0.059907834101382486
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 74
   sentence-len-avg: 17
   smog-index: 8.994212911058018
   word-count: 1302

After
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-elections.json
source: source/core/replica-set-elections.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.834186222558667
   flesch-ease: 47.29002628243842
   flesch-level: 10.350657741411428
   foggy:
      count: 79
      factor: 0.05980317940953823
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 89
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 8.51134518750558
   word-count: 1321

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
edits: rs-elections

Current
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-elections.json
source: source/core/replica-set-elections.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.05125
   flesch-ease: 46.00383862229103
   flesch-level: 10.396695433436534
   foggy:
      count: 78
      factor: 0.06414473684210527
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 85
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 8.601562248277599
   word-count: 1216

First Pass
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-elections.json
source: source/core/replica-set-elections.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.834186222558667
   flesch-ease: 47.29002628243842
   flesch-level: 10.350657741411428
   foggy:
      count: 79
      factor: 0.05980317940953823
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 89
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 8.51134518750558
   word-count: 1321

Original
---
file: build/rs-elections/json/core/replica-set-elections.json
source: source/core/replica-set-elections.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.084116743471583
   flesch-ease: 45.18247726989665
   flesch-level: 11.328266699879602
   foggy:
      count: 78
      factor: 0.059907834101382486
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 74
   sentence-len-avg: 17
   smog-index: 8.994212911058018
   word-count: 1302
edits+readability: rs-convert-standalone

Old
---
file: build/rs-convert-standalone/json/tutorial/convert-standalone-to-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/convert-standalone-to-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.426016949152537
   flesch-ease: 54.4452652910833
   flesch-level: 10.763478260869565
   foggy:
      count: 25
      factor: 0.05296610169491525
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 23
   sentence-len-avg: 20
   smog-index: 9.085049710711278
   word-count: 472

New
---
file: build/rs-convert-standalone/json/tutorial/convert-standalone-to-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/convert-standalone-to-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.236104513064134
   flesch-ease: 54.30201995249408
   flesch-level: 9.86881140142518
   foggy:
      count: 32
      factor: 0.07600950118764846
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 25
   sentence-len-avg: 16
   smog-index: 9.592334608150937
   word-count: 421

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
reorg: convert-standalone-to-replica set
edits+readability: rs-expand tutorial

Before:
---
file: build/rs-expand/json/tutorial/expand-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/expand-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.012979591836732
   flesch-ease: 50.723813303099035
   flesch-level: 10.692879818594108
   foggy:
      count: 55
      factor: 0.05612244897959184
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 54
   sentence-len-avg: 18
   smog-index: 8.89449942723447
   word-count: 980

After:
---
file: build/rs-expand/json/tutorial/expand-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/expand-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.497071129707113
   flesch-ease: 52.52360278482752
   flesch-level: 9.826733658001235
   foggy:
      count: 52
      factor: 0.05439330543933055
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 61
   sentence-len-avg: 15
   smog-index: 8.403604778245793
   word-count: 956

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
Initial
---
file: build/rs-expand/json/tutorial/expand-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/expand-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 10.012979591836732
   flesch-ease: 50.723813303099035
   flesch-level: 10.692879818594108
   foggy:
      count: 55
      factor: 0.05612244897959184
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 54
   sentence-len-avg: 18
   smog-index: 8.89449942723447
   word-count: 980

First Pass
---
file: build/rs-expand/json/tutorial/expand-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/expand-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.497071129707113
   flesch-ease: 52.52360278482752
   flesch-level: 9.826733658001235
   foggy:
      count: 52
      factor: 0.05439330543933055
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 61
   sentence-len-avg: 15
   smog-index: 8.403604778245793
   word-count: 956

Current:
---
file: build/master/json/tutorial/expand-replica-set.json
source: source/tutorial/expand-replica-set.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 9.762479532163745
   flesch-ease: 51.422943800178416
   flesch-level: 9.686958073148976
   foggy:
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      factor: 0.05380116959064327
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 59
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 8.17336443882689
   word-count: 855
readability: rs-hidden-members

Old
---
file: build/rs-hidden/json/core/replica-set-hidden-member.json
source: source/core/replica-set-hidden-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 12.233739130434781
   flesch-ease: 36.2294816053512
   flesch-level: 12.60130434782609
   foggy:
      count: 19
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      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 13
   sentence-len-avg: 17
   smog-index: 10.035473477838034
   word-count: 230
New
---
file: build/rs-hidden/json/core/replica-set-hidden-member.json
source: source/core/replica-set-hidden-member.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 11.444660194174755
   flesch-ease: 42.586928802589
   flesch-level: 10.731048543689322
   foggy:
      count: 14
      factor: 0.06796116504854369
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 15
   sentence-len-avg: 13
   smog-index: 8.648137234880735
   word-count: 206

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
minor: edits
readability: rs-high-availability

Before
---
file: build/rs-high-avail/json/core/replica-set-high-availability.json
source: source/core/replica-set-high-availability.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 13.962537313432836
   flesch-ease: 19.15201492537315
   flesch-level: 15.343624733475483
   foggy:
      count: 39
      factor: 0.1455223880597015
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 14
   sentence-len-avg: 19
   smog-index: 12.66393586644259
   word-count: 268

After
---
file: build/rs-high-avail/json/core/replica-set-high-availability.json
source: source/core/replica-set-high-availability.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 12.920875912408757
   flesch-ease: 29.79033230887441
   flesch-level: 12.686765270841338
   foggy:
      count: 35
      factor: 0.12773722627737227
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 19
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 10.882677951670543
   word-count: 274

Signed-off-by: Sam Kleinman <samk@10gen.com>
readability rs-high-availibility

Original:
---
file: build/rs-high-avail/json/core/replica-set-high-availability.json
source: source/core/replica-set-high-availability.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 13.962537313432836
   flesch-ease: 19.15201492537315
   flesch-level: 15.343624733475483
   foggy:
      count: 39
      factor: 0.1455223880597015
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 14
   sentence-len-avg: 19
   smog-index: 12.66393586644259
   word-count: 268

First pass:
---
file: build/rs-high-avail/json/core/replica-set-high-availability.json
source: source/core/replica-set-high-availability.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 12.920875912408757
   flesch-ease: 29.79033230887441
   flesch-level: 12.686765270841338
   foggy:
      count: 35
      factor: 0.12773722627737227
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 19
   sentence-len-avg: 14
   smog-index: 10.882677951670543
   word-count: 274

Current:
---
file: build/master/json/core/replica-set-high-availability.json
source: source/core/replica-set-high-availability.txt
stats:
   coleman-liau: 13.761201716738192
   flesch-ease: 21.95475798760134
   flesch-level: 13.412839771101577
   foggy:
      count: 33
      factor: 0.14163090128755365
      threshold: 3
   sentence-count: 18
   sentence-len-avg: 12
   smog-index: 10.864195022040775
   word-count: 233