Hey @philips thankyou for your patience - with your confirmations in the PR discussion, I think I have only one tiny refinement - I'd like to make it bleadingly obvious to the reader who (might know that tcp means exposed on the network, and unix:// is default) has not heard of systemd, that they should ignore this choice (ie, leave fd:// to the packagers) 

I think the tiniest change we can do to achieve this is to change ``To run the daemon with `socket activation`` to add one word:

``To run the daemon with `Systemd socket activation``

I suspect you need to rebase too - the ``-H`` line has changed :)