Merge pull request #7 from wangfowen/master

Update Revelation Blues.txt
Lunch break time!

Made Adrianne's name consistent. Added a bit of middle part.
Tried to fix Randy's critiques

Alright, let's see what the stack exchange thinks about this.
One last update before posting on Stackexchange

Fixed some spelling mistakes. I still think the monologue in the middle is a bit too huge.
Tried to highlight the fact that the lyrics are bad on purpose.
Fixed some verb tenses
Started switching to 3rd person

Trying to show more and tell less.
Lunchtime commit 3

We can make this better! I hope...
Update README.md
Jane Moran inline feedback
Trying to finish Scribophile
Fixed some more verb tenses.

Fuck it, it's time to submit this thing.
Last update before sending to Nick

Explained why they just bail after they're done performing.
Quick
Commit from Nick.
Starting to fix this motherfucker

Interrupted by matsuri!
Alright. Time to submit this thing to Nick and then Scribophile and then I am giving the fuck up.
Lux second feedback

Lux. If you ever read these commits. I love you. You are the best critic ever. You aren't afraid to tell me exactly where I fuck up and that is what saves me.
Abby isn't super passive anymore!
One more read-through before really sending it to Nick.