proposed corrections in lines 5 and 9, based on a digital photo (http://quod.lib.umich.edu/a/apis/x-3100/731R.TIF?lasttype=boolean;lastview=reslist;resnum=3;size=50;start=1;subview=detail;view=entry;rgn1=ic_all;select1=all;q1=731)

 - proposed corrections in lines 5 and 9, based on a digital photo (http://quod.lib.umich.edu/a/apis/x-3100/731R.TIF?lasttype=boolean;lastview=reslist;resnum=3;size=50;start=1;subview=detail;view=entry;rgn1=ic_all;select1=all;q1=731)
 - line 5: ὅσων (l. ὅσοι) → ὅσον (l. ὅσοι) based on digital image (Michigan APIS); ed. pr. misread omega for omicron
line 9: ὑύ (l. υἱοί) → οἱύ (l. υἱοί) based on digital image (Michigan APIS); ed. pr. misread upsilon for omicron-iota

Signed-off-by: Joshua D. Sosin <joshuad.sosin@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: James Cowey <james.cowey@urz.uni-heidelberg.de>
Signed-off-by: Rodney Ast <simoeis@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Paul Heilporn <paul.heilporn@unistra.fr>
Signed-off-by: Thomas Kruse <thomas.kruse@oeaw.ac.at>
Signed-off-by: Cisca Hoogendijk <ciscahoogendijk@live.nl>
Signed-off-by: Graham Claytor <gclaytor@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Mark Depauw <mark.depauw@arts.kuleuven.be>
Signed-off-by: Lajos Berkes <berkes.lajos@googlemail.com>
Signed-off-by: Georg Schmelz <georg.schmelz@gmx.de>
Signed-off-by: Alain Delattre <adelattr@ulb.ac.be>
Signed-off-by: Jenny Cromwell <jenniferacromwell@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Tonia Sarri <toniasarri@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Christian-Jürgen Gruber <morunculus@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Hélène Cuvigny <h.cuvigny@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: W. Graham Claytor <gclaytor@umich.edu>
Signed-off-by: Arthur Verhoogt <verhoogt@umich.edu>
Signed-off-by: Esther Garel <esthergarel@gmail.com>
Update revisionDesc

 - Vote - ReturnToSender - In the submission comments box please explain in more detail what has been changed and why.   (Rodney Ast)
 - Vote - ReturnToSender - Please take a look at the following files in papyri.info: papyri.info/ddbdp/sb;22;15336; papyri.info/ddbdp/p.vind.sal;;7; papyri.info/ddbdp/p.oxy;8;112; papyri.info/ddbdp/sb;20;15020. If you click on the Editorial history and look at the submission notes it will indicate to you how we would like to enter these types of correction. (James Cowey)
 - Vote - AcceptText - l. 5: I agree with the new reading, but the correction l. ὅσοι is wrong,  ὅσων is the expected form. The correction l. ὅσοι in DDBDP-text does not reflect the original edition and should be deleted. So I suggest to change into <:ὅσων|reg|ὅσον=PN M. Zellmann-Rohrer (digital image)|ed|ὅσων:>
l. 9: accept MZR's new reading
add for l. 9: change first βεβαιώσω into <:βεβαιώσω|reg|βεβαιώσωι=PN F.A.J. Hoogendijk (digital image)|ed|βεβαιώσω:>
add for l. 6: change into <:<:κασσιτεροποιοῦ|reg|χασιδηροποις=PN F.A.J. Hoogendijk (digital image)|ed|:<κασσιτεροποιοῦ|reg|κασιδηροποις:>:>
[APIS-link to images did not work; see images on http://quod.lib.umich.edu/a/apis/x-3100/731R_A.TIF?chaperone=S-APIS-X-3100+731R.TIF;evl=full-image;quality=0;resnum=;subview=detail;view=entry and http://quod.lib.umich.edu/a/apis/x-3100/731R_B.TIF?chaperone=S-APIS-X-3100+731R.TIF;evl=full-image;quality=1;resnum=;subview=detail;view=entry] (Cisca Hoogendijk)
 - Vote - AcceptText - See Hoogendijk's comments re: ln 5.  The text should be tagged, as she says <:ὅσων|reg|ὅσον=PN M. Zellmann-Rohrer (digital image)|ed|ὅσων:>.  In ln 9 add Hoogendijk's correct markup <:βεβαιώσω|reg|βεβαιώσωι=PN F.A.J. Hoogendijk (digital image)|ed|βεβαιώσω:>.  Hoogendijk's suggestion for ln 6 <:<:κασσιτεροποιοῦ|reg|χασιδηροποις=PN F.A.J. Hoogendijk (digital image)|ed|:<κασσιτεροποιοῦ|reg|κασιδηροποις:>:> is good, although the the first two letters, χα, appear to have been formed ex corr.  Should this be noted? (Rodney Ast)
 - Finalized - Ready. (James Cowey)