Decided to post Draft 3 scene by scene, so now Scene 1 is posted. Perhaps later it can be revised to touch on the major themes of the entire play, like a mini microcosm type thing? Other thoughts: Should Logan appear more sinister. I think that in the beginning of this scene, Candie is conducting business as usual, but at one point she has to realize that Logan is weirder than most and this perhaps causes her to adjust her tone. Not sure this moment is fully realized yet.