Readability, logical flow edits.  No serious change.

Currently requires a background plane.  Given the movement, I was
thinking something nautical.  A wood paneled plane, with two wood
cut-out waves bobbing in counterpoint behind it.  Dual parallel planes
titled 90% currently serve as curtains on either side.  Need to (a) make
it a sinusoidal curve to give it illusion of waviness.  May be easier to
change each lengthwise curtain into multiple smaller ones.