On 2013-11-03 4:37 PM, Aron Ahmadia wrote:
>
> In bootcamps/operations.html:
>
> > @@ -5,14 +5,14 @@
> >  ---
> >
> >  <p>
> > -The Software Carpentry Bootcamp Operations Guide includes
> > -checklists for each role involved in running a bootcamp,
> > -and a long-form description of the story of a bootcamp.
> > -The description explains how bootcamps work,
> > -and the checklists explain how each role
> > -contributes to a successful bootcamp.
> > -And, of course, the checklists will be useful
> > -to people who have taken on each role.
> > +  The Software Carpentry Bootcamp Operations Guide includes
> > +  checklists for each role involved in running a bootcamp,
> > +  and a long-form description of the story of a bootcamp.
> > +  The description explains how bootcamps work,
> > +  and the checklists explain how each role
> > +  contributes to a successful bootcamp.
> > +  And, of course, the checklists will be useful
>
> How strongly do we feel about grammar? We might delete the /And,/ here 
> and start the sentence with /Of course,/.
>
Amy's call --- she's the professional editor.