IANA 2

The text in 14.10 is missing "Entries in this registry are 8 bit integers
as described in section 6.5.1.1".
Polina Goltsman issue 1

"sec. 1.1
========
old:
   storage rather than for bulk storage of large objects.  Records are
   stored under numeric addresses which occupy the same space as node
new:
   storage rather than for bulk storage of large objects.  Records are
   stored under numeric addresses, called Resource-IDs, which occupy
   the same space as node

Resource-IDs are used in 1.2.2 but not introduced"

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 2

"Furthermore, I propose the following change:
old:
      including setting up connections across NATs using ICE.
new:
      including setting up connections for overlay links across
      NATs using ICE."

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 3

"old:
      directly between nodes.  TLS [RFC5246] and DTLS [RFC6347] are the
      currently defined "link layer" protocols used by RELOAD for hop-
new:
      currently defined "overlay link layer" protocols used by RELOAD
for hop-

avoids confusion with the classic ISO/OSI link layer (layer 2)"

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 4

"old:
      directly between nodes.  TLS [RFC5246] and DTLS [RFC6347] are the
      currently defined "link layer" protocols used by RELOAD for hop-
new:
      currently defined "overlay link layer" protocols used by RELOAD
for hop-

avoids confusion with the classic ISO/OSI link layer (layer 2)"

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 5

"old:
      directly between nodes.  TLS [RFC5246] and DTLS [RFC6347] are the
      currently defined "link layer" protocols used by RELOAD for hop-
new:
      currently defined "overlay link layer" protocols used by RELOAD
for hop-

avoids confusion with the classic ISO/OSI link layer (layer 2)"

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 6

"old:
   Terms used in this document are defined inline when used and are also
new:
   Terms in this document are defined inline when used and are also

avoid double "used""

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 8

"old:
   Connection Table:  The set of nodes to which a node is directly
      connected, which include nodes that are not yet available for
      routing.
new:
   Connection Table:  Contains connection information for the set of
      nodes to which a node is directly connected, which include nodes
      that are not yet available for routing.

it is a data structure ..."

- As suggested.
Polina Goltsman issue 9

"   Node-ID:  A value of fixed but configurable length that uniquely
      identifies a node.  Node-IDs of all 0s and all 1s are reserved and
      are invalid Node-IDs.  A value of zero is not used in the wire
      protocol but can be used to indicate an invalid node in
      implementations and APIs.  The Node-ID of all 1s is used on the
      wire protocol as a wildcard.

what means "invalid" exactly? A wildcard can be used at least on
the wire so it is not invalid being used as destination Node-IDs.
So the above definition is slightly contradictory."

- Restructured the paragraph.
Merge pull request #203 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-1

Polina Goltsman issue 1
Merge pull request #204 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-2

Polina Goltsman issue 2
Polina Goltsman issue 10

"old:
   Responsible Peer:  The peer that is responsible for a specific
      resource, as defined by the plugin algorithm.
new:
   Responsible Peer:  The peer that is responsible for a specific
      resource, as defined by the topology plugin algorithm."

- As suggested.
Merge pull request #205 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-3

Polina Goltsman issue 3
Merge pull request #206 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-4

Polina Goltsman issue 4
Polina Goltsman issue 11

"old:
   Usage:  An usage is the definition of a set of data structures (data
      Kinds) that an application wants to store in the overlay.  An
      usage may also define a set of network protocols (application IDs)
new:
   Usage:  A usage is the definition of a set of data structures (data
      Kinds) that an application wants to store in the overlay.  A
      usage may also define a set of network protocols (application IDs)

Typo: 2x An usage -> A usage"

- As suggested.
Merge pull request #207 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-5

Polina Goltsman issue 5
Merge pull request #208 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-6

Polina Goltsman issue 6
Merge pull request #210 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-8

Polina Goltsman issue 8
Merge pull request #211 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-9

Polina Goltsman issue 9
Merge pull request #212 from petithug/polina-goltsman-issue-10

Polina Goltsman issue 10