So about the commas... are we supposed to be writing (Southern) USAian English? (I say that because Northern USAian English speakers normally only use them before conjunctions and then there would only be two commas to add). I'm asking because, although I'm a British native speaker (there are few commas in British English and the Queen's English does tend towards quite long sentences), I can write in almost any dialect of English you like but I will always try and correct myself (and, since I am able, other contributions) to that style for consistency... you might think I'm a little pedantic but that would be because I am but it is also my job to be both, at least it is my day job as I'm both an Academic proofreader and English (as a foreign language) teacher.

I apologise if this seems too much but better that you know where I am coming from from the start rather than to discover it during a flurry of commits that only change grammar! :)