Initial edits. Is this annoying or helpful?

I've focused on a range of things here including checking translation,
adjusting wording, minor spelling/grammar, and some tips based on my
preferences and experience. I can back off and focus on just translation
checking for instance. I can also take over wording and just edit to my
own style. I assume you want final say on wording so I've kept that to a
minimum. Let me know if this is good, or if less, or more would feel
more comfortable.