# Talk:Salil Ankola

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Karachi is the lead should link to the stadium in which the match was played.
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
"from the side after subsequent series'." - Remove '
My bad, removed —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
At age 28 --> At the age of 28
Placed a comma after 28 —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:09, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
"producing a few Hindi films" is misleading as he was an actor anf not the producer.
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
"He made his first-class debut at the age of 20 for Mumbai in 1988–89." - Source needed
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
BCCP should link to whatever it refers to
I could not find any link whatsoever, it's just a local team like Boar President's XI in India —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
"both would go on to become great cricketers on their own ways" - not needed and possibly POV
Rephrased the sentence —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
domestic and overseas tours --> domestic series and overseas tours
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
You should tell the series for which Ankola was seleted
Which series are you talking about? —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
"Despite being selected in the Test squads on domestic series and overseas tours" - Mention the series.
The source doesn't clearly mention which are those series. —Vensatry (Ping me) 07:36, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
he along with ... Bahutule were trained under Frank Tyson --> he along with ... Bahutule was trained under Frank Tyson
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
Shortly after the Pakistan ... a daughter and a son. - The source doesn't says anything about Pak series.
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
In a match that India heavily lost - Either quote heavily lost or use something more encyclopedic.
Done —Vensatry (Ping me) 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
Will see if I can find any other problem, but otherwise the article is fine. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 11:59, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

I wanted to save this in case there was somewhere else to put it. It's not the spoken article so it shouldn't be inside this template. Peppage (talk) 20:12, 4 June 2019 (UTC)

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