# Talk:Ron Taylor (actor)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 12:36, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
I'll give this a review within the next couple days. Wizardman 12:36, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"Taylor was born Ronald James Taylor on October 16, 1952" It can just say "Ronald James Taylor was born on.."; cleaner that way
Done
"He attended Wharton College and later O'Connell High School,[5]" He attended college before high school? I'm confused here (the wharton college link didn't help so maybe adding something there would fix this).
Fixed (I'm assuming this was a combination of misreading the source, forgetting college meant a different thing in America)
"the history of blues music, from" no comma needed
Done
"cornucopia of splendidly interpreted song," is that meant to say songs or is that the actual quote?
That's the quote
""build a long-lasting audience like the Tonys could", leading to dwindling attendance." cite needed for quote.
Done
"the year,It" space after comma.
Done
Ref #11 (Drama Desk Awards) isn't working for me. Site's up so a new link may need to be found.
Fixed
Not too much to fix, I'll put the article on hold. Wizardman 16:43, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Haha, I'd forgotten about this, it's been months! I should probably help out with reviews. Anyway, all fixed (I think), thanks very much! Gran2 17:39, 22 November 2012 (UTC)
Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 22:09, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

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I'm not sure the word original should be used, nor the possessive case, as Little shop of Horrors is an adaptation of a 1960 B-movie.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1700:B270:20F0:25B9:8F06:F840:D5D5 (talk) 07:31, 18 January 2023 (UTC)