# Talk:Uyarndha Manithan

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 06:43, 22 May 2015 (UTC)

Lede
"The film's soundtrack and background score were composed by M. S. Viswanathan, while the lyrics for the film's" -you can remove both instances of "film's"
 Done as asked. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:04, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
"with the release prints being 4,591 m (15,062 ft) long" -no need to mention in lede.
 Done I followed the ledes of other GAs I had done but I have nevertheless removed it as per your suggestion. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:04, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
It would be OK ro mention it in discussing production, but I think it looks a bit awkward to say it on release.♦ Dr. Blofeld 07:08, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
@Dr. Blofeld: I have written it in the production section. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:17, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
What I meant was if there was a bit mentioning the production of the film in the lede you could mention it within that, but as there isn't don't worry.
Plot
"to retain any job that he gets selected" -awkward, try just "to retain a job".
 Done written as "to retain any job". Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:04, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
"teir love"
 Done as asked. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:10, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
"Raju throws Sathyamurthy out of Raju's house despite Sathyamurthy proclaiming his innocence. "- add comma after house.
 Done as asked. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:10, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
Production
"a deicision" -typo :-)
 Done as asked. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 07:26, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
I took care of the rest.
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Good job.♦ Dr. Blofeld 08:02, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
Just added it to the GA film list after Thunderbirds Are Go LOL. who'd have thought!!♦ Dr. Blofeld 08:05, 22 May 2015 (UTC)

@Dr. Blofeld: Haha. Thank you once again for conducting the review. It was very swift and smooth as well. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 08:07, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
Yeah, you caught me at the right time on this, first thing in the morning, and in some of the past reviews I had a ton of FA reviews and peer reviews to do or was just really busy, hence the delay. Keep up the good work, let me know when you want another reviewed.♦ Dr. Blofeld 08:09, 22 May 2015 (UTC)
@Dr. Blofeld: Most definitely, Dr. Blofeld. Thamizhan1994 (Appo Pesu) 08:12, 22 May 2015 (UTC)