# Talk:Twilight's Kingdom

Is Vincent Tong's roles in 'Guest Voices' really necessary? He's always played voices in the series, background ponies and such.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frontdoor6 (talk • contribs) 23:18, 14 May 2014 (UTC) 

68.230.99.47 (talk) 21:31, 6 July 2015 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. JustBerry (talk) 22:38, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

When will it no longer be protected? --68.230.99.47 (talk) 21:31, 6 July 2015 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:00, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

Add a short description and WP:ALT text to the image.
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Non-free use rationale looks good.
 Thank you
However, I would suggest changing the image to one of Tirek, as the article contains commentary of his appearance.
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Remove the links to Canada and the United States.
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"animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" → "animated television series My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" – (WP:SEAOFBLUE)
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"The two-part finale" → "The two-part season finale"
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"airing as an back-to-back" → "airing back-to-back"
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"who praised villain" → "who praised the villain"
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(from "[[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep66|Princess]] [[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep67|Twilight Sparkle]]") – see WP:EASTEREGG. Suggest changing it to (from "[[My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (season 4)#ep66|Princess Twilight Sparkle]]") as we can trust a reader's knowledge of scrolling down.
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Plot section: Part one is 342 words and part two is 397 so this passes MOS:TVPLOT.
Remove the comma after "the edge of Ponyville".
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"and a tail of a horse" → "and tail of a horse"
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"since humans did not exist in Friendship Is Magic" → "since humans do not exist in Friendship Is Magic" – see MOS:TENSE
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"more similarity of a bull" → "more similarity to a bull"
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"a good flow of one to the next" → "a good flow from one to the next"
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Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).
 Already done: The tool didn't make any modifications as far as I can see.
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:56, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments, Some Dude From North Carolina. I have hopefully addressed them and if there are any other changes I should make, please feel free to let me know! Pamzeis (talk) 01:29, 24 July 2021 (UTC)