# Talk:Soetran

Ok, I'll check that. Cheers Tomobe03 (talk) 10:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
I did not find the site in the list of mirrors here, but let me check some more.Tomobe03 (talk) 13:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
comment: Earwig's copyvio detector flagged this article [1] as a suspected copyvio, but this appears to be a mirror. I have confirmed this with User:Diannaa and they will flag the mirror as such appropriately to avoid future confusion. Tomobe03 (talk) 14:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
comment: The phrase "Clove Governor" is found in the offered source as "gubernur Cengkeh" (p.28), AGF on foreign-language source
Regardless of the above, could you please check these sentences in Military career section:

Less than a year, in 1963, he was transferred to... - is this meant to be "Less than a year later..."?
In 1967, he was reassigned to East Java, promoted to Mayor, ... - did you mean Major? Tomobe03 (talk) 14:24, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 I am satisfied that the DYK criteria are met. Tomobe03 (talk) 17:11, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Soetran/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

I will review this article. This is my first bio GAN I review, and I would love to learn many things from this decision. GeraldWL 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Lead
Keep either "Indonesian" or "Javanese." "Javanese" already covers Indonesia as a whole. In addition, recommend linking. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Link regent. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Link Trenggalek. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Link Irian Jaya. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
Per tag, I suggest expanding the lead. GeraldWL 14:05, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done and lead expanded. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Military career
Paragraphs 1, 2, and 3 used two citations, placed them at the same place. Mind relocating to the claim(s) it supports? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done except for the 3rd paragraph; citation 1 and 2 is reinforcing each other regarding the dates and fact. --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
"After the war"-- what war? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Trenggalek to Trenggalih
The subsection name is not so clear. Suggest renaming to "Renaming Trenggalek" GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
There's no word on the aftermath: is it renamed or not. Suggest adding that up, if there is one. GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Parasamya Purnakarya Nugraha
First two sentence supported by two citations. Suggest relocate. GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Legacy
"the Soetran award"-- suggest capitalizing to "the Soetran Award." GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Infobox
Three redlinks. Either interwiki link, create stub (if person warrants a WP article), or remove redlinks. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Removed redlinks. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 00:48, 15 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Governor of Irian Jaya
Link Irian Jaya. GeraldWL 14:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
Acub Zainal is redlinked. Suggest removing. GeraldWL 14:08, 17 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done except point 1, as it is already linked in the lead. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)


#### Irian Jaya earthquake
"As a result, 12 large villages in the X Valley were swallowed by the Earth." What is "X Valley" and suggest rewording the metaphoric "swallowed by the Earth." GeraldWL 09:10, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Ah, my apologies. The X Valley was without name prior to the 2000s; it is now known as the Baliem Valley. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 12:35, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Jeromi Mikhael, last thing: in paragraph 3, ref 31 and 27 is used at the same time. Similar case at "Death", last sentence. Mind relocating or removing one of them, if appropriate? GeraldWL 12:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:01, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Jeromi Mikhael, in my opinon this has passed the GA criteria. Congrats! GeraldWL 13:03, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Gerald Waldo Luis, I've done what you requested. Please check. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Jeromi Mikhael, see "Irian Jaya earthquake" above. After that is resolved, I'll do a linking copyedit, and that should make it for a good article. Apologies for the wait. GeraldWL 09:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)