# Talk:Randall Cunningham II

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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 17:29, 1 January 2014 (UTC)
I'll take this. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:29, 1 January 2014 (UTC)
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Disambig links:OK
External links:OK
Reference check: 3 issues
Booker T. Washington heads to Las Vegas to square off against Bishop Gorman (info) [miamiherald.com] - Expiring link, please archive.
Late touchdowns lead Booker T. Washington past Bishop Gorman in Las Vegas (info) [miamiherald.com] - Expiring link, please archive this one as well.
Cunningham resigns as Silverado aide (info) [nevadapreps.com] - Removes www and changes path.
Comments: Alright, time for another review. This one looks fairly good at first impression, but if you don't mind, I'm going to be a bit nitpicky. The lead looks fine. Though there is no picture, not even a fair use claim, which makes it rather difficult to identify the subject for any readers. Please consider adding one. The parents section of the infobox also misses his mother's name. For the career, we skip right over the early life which is a bit of a concern for me given the fact we do not even know the age of the subject or where he is born. Some of the text's prose also reads awkwardly. "However, in August..." Why is "however" needed here? It works better to just restructure the sentence. Now, I don't understand NIAA rules, you'll need to explain why he was required to sit out his sophomore year in football and track. Just stating so really doesn't help me understand "why". The next sentence has little context "Then, he backed up Anu Solomon as a junior." who is Anu Solomon, a school, a person, the link's red, but I don't get it or why it is mentioned at all. Instead of TDs, you should use the full term. Is it relevant to have his dash speed "laser-timed"? Of curious note is the USA Today prediction of Cunningham's possible favorites... this is just speculation and shouldn't be included.

See WP:NFCC regarding image.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Mother added.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Birth date and birth place missing. We know that as of December 28, 1995, his mother's due date was December 31 in Las Vegas, according to this source. I'll have to contact some Vegas and/or Philly libraries to see when Randall Sr. and Felicity had their first child. It was probably in the Vegas and/or Philly newspapers, but only a local could accesss it for us.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
P.S. I have also left notes at WT:NFL and WT:CFB.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:25, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Added via WP:Highbeam.  A Thursday, January 5, 1996 article refers to the birth being the previous Wednesday, which was January 3, 1996.  I added it into the infobox.  You guys can incorporate into prose if wished.--GrapedApe (talk) 13:02, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
He is still living his early life. All the content starting from his age 13-14 stuff is early life.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:05, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
However removed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:58, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
NIAA rule explained.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:58, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Solomon clarified--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:02, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
touchdown in place of TD.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:08, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
laser-timed is very different from hand-timed. So we make a note of it.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:08, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
I think the USA Today prediction is O.K. according to "Predictions, speculation, forecasts and theories stated by reliable, expert sources or recognized entities in a field may be included, though editors should be aware of creating undue bias to any specific point-of-view." stated at WP:CRYSTAL.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:19, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
The section for his senior season is just written awkwardly. I can't pick out much of a reason why, but the descriptions and word flow was a bit disorienting. The infobox here also contains that averaging of height and weight from Scout and Rival, why? Though it also has no sources listed. Another issue for me. 

Until he has and official height and weight that is published in reliable sources, such as a college football team measurements, those are the best height and weights to use.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:20, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
For track, I don't care what his father's best high jump was... how's it relevant? Again some wording and prose choices get in the way here, but nothing too bad. I believe it is "Well-known" not "well known" because its not an adverb. Also, the next thing to stand out is the fact his brother died at the age of 2 in the family hot tub... why is this really important to bring up on the biography page? Personally, this seems like a little unusual and not really suitable, it came from a one line response that probably was not the best inclusion on an ESPN article and certainly something I wouldn't expect to see on Cunningham's bio. Its not really relevant to him, personally, and its improper weight. I'll place this on hold. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:16, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

It is common to compare athletes to similar athletes. It is sometimes even requested in reviews like this. His father is the most relevant notable comparable to use as a measuring stick at this point in his career.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:18, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
I have eliminated the reference to the hot tub death.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:22, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
Tony left a message on WT:NFL requesting information on the time and place of Cunningham's birth. Based on an article I found from HighBeam, it appears the baby was due on Sunday December 31, and was born on Thursday, which contradicts the article from HighBeam currently cited. See this as compared to this. The former says Thursday morning, the latter says Wednesday night. FWIW. Go Phightins! 14:53, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Update, many of the issues are being resolved, thank you for doing it so quickly. Whenever I question something and a reasonable explaination or need is given, that is more to fix my own ignorance of the definition or the matter. Like the NIAA rules, I doubt many people unfamiliar with the topic would understand it. For laser-timed, the explanation here is more for my own understanding and a test to see if its really important or relevant. Thank you for all the work so far. Just let me know once you can address the rest. I'd really prefer if we can remove the part about the death of his brother, those details may be public, but I do not think it adds to the article or was of anything related to Cunningham's doing. Tragedy, need not always be cited or included just because it is sourced and the family most certainly would not want this on Wikipedia. For that reason, I believe BLP policy on this matter warrants its removal. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 14:58, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
All the issues and questions have been resolved. While I do not like the matter of the brother's death being present, it is verifiable and not done an intrusive way. A good compromise given the situation. The details on the birth date do clarify and properly address an ambiguity in reliable sources, but it has been handled in a proper way. I'm going to pass this because I see no reason not to. Passed. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 16:19, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

In the first 20 days of this month this article had 720 hits (36 per day). Today, the article is looking like it is going to get 700 for the day. Can anyone help me find a story that might explain this.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 15:38, 21 May 2014 (UTC)

I know that the NFL Network has been re-airing the episode of A Football Life featuring RC2's father lately. I'm not really sure why that would drive traffic here, but I suppose it might. Other than that I can't turn up any reason for this page's recent popularity. The article itself is what I would call a "TonyTheTiger special" — an exhaustively researched and overlong article on a subject that doesn't appear to deserve this level of scrutiny. ;) — DeeJayK (talk) 17:18, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
We are approaching the end of the high school season.  The State NIAA Div. ! Finals are this saturday May 24 (9:45 a.m. local time) at Carson High School in Carson City.  The results of this meet are a foregone conclusion--he doesn't need to start jumping until his competitors are done.  This is his last chance to break the NFHS national record (7'5") he claims to want to achieve.  Good as he is, its still going to require a great improvement.  Now without some serious side publicity, I doubt there are that many track freaks around who understand this significance.  RC2 might.  A lot of Twitter or other social media could lead the unknowing masses to wikipedia to figure out what he is talking about. Trackinfo (talk) 18:09, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
I think the TV issue is probably the answer. The double spike in the hourly data suggests the show aired at 10PM ET/PT. I was thinking he may have busted a 7'3" or 7'4" jump. Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:49, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
Actually I was leaning toward Trackinfo's answer. Seems odd that there wouldn't have been a similar spike back in November when the episode aired originally, right? — DeeJayK (talk) 22:09, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
I have been looking at wikiviewstats and see he has had 5 spikes like this since late November. Also see that Novemeber has been his highest month.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:31, 21 May 2014 (UTC)