# Talk:Trijata

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Reviewer: AmritasyaPutra (talk · contribs) 14:04, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


### Criteria
### Review
Well-written:

Verifiable with no original research:

Broad in its coverage:

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:


#### Result
#### Discussion
I have started the review. It does not have any cleanup banners and does not contain any seemingly copyright infringements, I will continue with the six good article criteria. Thank you. --AmritasyaPutraT 14:05, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
Initial feedback on the lead:

Can you correct the Sanskrit spelling to त्रिजटा.
Corrected. Redtigerxyz  Talk  11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
Could you clarify "In the original Ramayana" in the lead? (Probably adding "by Valmiki" as done in the body?)
Removed word "original". Ramayana is introduced in the lead. Redtigerxyz  Talk  11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
Could you clarify "Southeast Asian versions" (Probably substituting with "in the Thai Ramakien" as done in the body?)
Southeast Asian versions include Thai, Malay, Indonesian versions. Sentence is referenced in "Trijata and Sita" para 1. Redtigerxyz  Talk  11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
@Redtigerxyz: The lead has "Southeast Asian versions often depict her as the wife of Rama's monkey general Hanuman...", it the body it is present in "In the Thai Ramakien, Hanuman helps...". Am I mistaken? --AmritasyaPutraT 12:42, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
AmritasyaPutra, The last para of "After the war" talks about Thai, Malay and Javanese traditions.Redtigerxyz  Talk  12:52, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
Ok, right! All my queries are answered, I will continue with the review. --AmritasyaPutraT 12:56, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
The article looks well-written, neutral. I found a few reference which did not actually support the text but maybe I am not reading the translation correctly. I will continue the review after your response to the above feedback. Thank you. --AmritasyaPutraT 13:26, 9 October 2014 (UTC)

AmritasyaPutra, Thanks for starting the review. I may be a busy in real life over the next few days and may take taime to reply.Redtigerxyz  Talk  11:39, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the pass, AmritasyaPutra. Redtigerxyz  Talk  05:33, 18 October 2014 (UTC)


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