# Talk:USS Wainwright (DD-62)

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Below is my review:

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
I think Reinstated should go before Struck in infobox, so that the dates follow the chronological order.
Good point. Swapped.
Early Career - 'She returned to Boston on the 10th for a short period in the Navy Yard': 10th of February or March?
Changed to 10 March. — Bellhalla (talk) 05:41, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
World War I - 'Wainwright again briefly patrolled Hampton Roads before heading for the New York Navy Yard on the 14th': 14th of what? I think it is April, which apparently becomes clear later, but should be mentioned here at the first instance.
Good suggestion. Changed. — Bellhalla (talk) 05:41, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
World War I - 'This division— ably led by Comdr. Joseph K. Taussig': I guess the use of words such as ably is discouraged per WP:MoS.
Yes, it is discouraged and I just missed this one. (With some of these DANFS-based articles it's hard to catch all of the jingoistic and/or pro-American statements.) — Bellhalla (talk) 05:41, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Discrepancy in speed - 56 km/h (text) and 56.8 km/h (infobox)

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Thanks - DSachan (talk) 15:52, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

I think I've addressed all of your concerns. If this passes, you will have exhausted all of my GA nominations (except for John Henry Turpin) in a two-day span. Thanks! — Bellhalla (talk) 05:41, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
Bellhalla, speed issue is not yet addressed. I somehow missed Turpin's nomination. I can do it later today. DSachan (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
Don't know how I missed that, but I think I've got it now. Also, thanks for the Turpin review, too. — Bellhalla (talk) 11:26, 18 May 2009 (UTC)