# Talk:Smoke Gets in Your Eyes (Mad Men)

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:35, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

Infobox: Just checking; any production number of Guest Stars that could be put in the box?
Lede: Link AMC
Lede: "…the viewer doesn't learn…" Don't use contractions
Lede: "…some of her coworkers . Junior…" Remove the space before the period
Lede: "…interest for Mad Men didn't…" Don't use 'didn't' -> "did not"
Plot: "having an Old Fashioned at a bar" What is this? Maybe a link would help
Plot: "enter into the premises" I would say "onto" instead of "into"
Conception: "Weiner's agents insisted he not" -> "Weiner's agents insisted that he not"
Conception: In the lede it states that the show was on hold for eight years, but in this section is says "next seven years"
Conception: "Movies were an influence [...]." -> "Movies were an influence".
Conception: Link AMC the first time it appears
References: Add "Academy of Television Arts & Sciences" as publisher for the emmys.com cites
References: Ref 35 has a funny bracket issue
References: Some newspapers have their owners in parenthesis (like 23) and others are just listed after the paper (like 26, 27, etc.) I'd pick one style to be consistent
On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:38, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

I wasn't the nominator of this article, but I happened to stumble by, and most of the these were pretty quick fixes. The two not struck out are the ones I didn't deal with, as I thought it'd be better for the nominator to work on those. Drovethrughosts (talk) 22:04, 31 May 2012 (UTC)
Many thanks Drovethrughosts! Everything should be good to go now. :) —DAP388 (talk) 23:45, 31 May 2012
Looks good! I will pass it now! Cheers.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:51, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

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