# Talk:Superstore season 6

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:38, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"Promotional poster with the season premiere's original airdate." fragment, no full stop.
 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Ben Feldman doesn't need disambiguation.
 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:23, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"fictional big-box store in" seems  strange to call it a "big-box store" when it's called "Superstore" so it's a superstore, right?!
Pretty sure they mean the same thing. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:24, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Nichole Sakura doesn't need to be piped to a redirect back to Nichole Sakura...
 Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:25, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"Due to its impact on television in the United States, it was decided that Superstore would create episodes about the pandemic itself as a test for Universal Television." I don't follow this at all.
 Done Reworded. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:29, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"Victor Nelli, Jr." no comma.
That's how they was credited. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:33, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"missing ring" engagement?
 Done 16:34, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"Jerusha he'd avoid" avoid contractions.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"does some good things around alternative energy" rephrase using encyclopedic language.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
In fact, a lot of the synopses need to be copyedited for tone.  I know it's a sitcom but these synopses need to be factual and properly written/toned.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:36, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"while they're" contraction again.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Link showrunner.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"for Universal Television to test"  what do they have to do with it?
 Done Added mention that they produced the show. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:42, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
"by Thanksgiving, the" not the same date across the world, be specific.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:33, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
"table read" link.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:41, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"her [...] and " do you need those brackets?
 Done Yes since it's not the whole quote. 16:43, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
"original October 22" original scheduled.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
""episodes began airing on Thursdays" episodes aired on Thursdays
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
"beginning with its sixth" -> "from the sixth"
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:34, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
"approval rating of 92% based" but just over 50% from viewers... worth noting.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:38, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Avoid SHOUTING IN CAPS in the ref titles.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:40, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
Ref 22, replace spaced hyphen with en-dash.
 Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:35, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
On hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:19, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I think I have finished addressing all of your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:11, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
Ok, it's fine, promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:45, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

Meaning the last shot? Who writes these things? 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:B15D:AECD:4E4F:2846 (talk) 07:55, 3 October 2021 (UTC)


### Superstore (season 6)