# Talk:SS West Cheswald

A photograph shows loading sugar sacks in Hawaii, but the caption and text discusses a case involving sugar shipped from Java.  The photo therefore seems to be unrelated.  Kablammo (talk) 21:04, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

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Hi!  I will be reviewing this article for GA, and should have the full review up within a couple of hours. Dana boomer (talk) 20:18, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
In the Arctic convoy section, you say "Her closest class occurred".  I'm not sure what this is supposed to say, or I'd change it :)
I don't know what sort of brain lock-up occurred there. It should have said "her closest call occurred". Now fixed. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
I was pretty sure it was something like this, but I figured it was probably better that you made sure :) Dana boomer (talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Just one minor prose issue to be addressed before I pass this article for GA, so I'm putting it on hold.  Drop me a note if you have any questions. Dana boomer (talk) 20:35, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

Reply above. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Everything looks good now, so I'm passing the article. Dana boomer (talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)