# Talk:Sam Girard

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 22:50, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:50, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Some of the references that are in French should have |language=French in their templates.  Done
Some of the references seem to be missing |publisher=. Done
Like others said on Discord, the lead should be a bit longer. Maybe talk more about his playing career, with the Preds and Avs? Done
"Guylaine Dion" Didn't find her birth name in the article cited. Done
Midget hockey is minkey, right? Minor ice hockey, right. Done
"Girard moved in with Julie Robitaille" Best to mention her as a power skating coach here. Done
"$35 million contract extension with the Avalanche, carrying an annual average of $5 million, on July 31, 2019, Girard." End of this sentence is missing something. Done
Maybe add his hobby of relaxing to his personal life section. (what hobby?)
References needed for All-Rookie Team and First All-Star Team nominations in the table. Done
Not too much to fix. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:52, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Done except for one. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:21, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
Nova Crystallis, should be g2g. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:01, 3 April 2020 (UTC)