# Talk:Radirgy

I'm going to go ahead and move this back, what with all the cancelling[1] and all. Also, no one seems to have bothered to edit the beginning of the article...

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BetacommandBot 22:24, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

I assume the article's name of Radilgy presupposes that the chosen letters for the contraction are Radio Allergy, but I think the official romanization as Radirgy actually derives from Radio Allergy. Am I wrong in assuming that this could be the case? ChaosAngelZero (talk) 14:26, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

No; "radilgy" stems from a racism kick Elm-39 - T/C/N 21:16, 12 April 2010 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Radirgy/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Yashovardhan Dhanania (talk · contribs) 07:09, 13 April 2017 (UTC)


### Suggestions
#### Initial Observations
Redundant use of Bullet hell elements in the Gameplay section
Radirgy is a vertically scrolling shoot 'em up with bullet hell elements in the first paragraph and The game features bullet hell gameplay elements, in the second. It does feel a bit odd there and copywriting might help.
Fixed
No inline citation in the lead section. You can use some already present references or maybe add new references. (suggestion only)
See below
I will have a deeper look soon. Thanks! Yashovardhan (talk) 08:15, 13 April 2017 (UTC)


#### Notes
The lead section should establish the notability of the article. It should discuss very briefly why the game is notable. Here, It's full of the history instead.
I believe the lead does establish notability. It is not a full history, that is detailed in the release section. I summarized each part of the article into the lead giving due weight when necessary. The most notable part of this game is it's release history, so that needs to be highlighted up front. If you have specific suggestions on how the lead can be improved, please suggest.
A history section would be appropriate to discuss the history of the article. The release may be merged in that section (or as a subsection). However, the lead should not go too much into the history.
The only history of the game I could find was the release history. This game was only released in Japan so finding sources is very difficult. If you can find any, please let me know. As for the lead, see above comment.
There are only 3 source for reception. Though not necessary, more reviews would help and you may find some more content as well.
These were all the reviews I could find. Again, this is an obscure Japan-only release. If you can find any more, please let me know.
The gameplay section could see copy writing, it presently seems a bit too detailed. A concise gameplay summary is helpful rather than going into all the details. The rest may be discussed in a separate plot section.
I gave the section a copy edit to remove some of the details. Since the plot is short and not central to the game, I combined it into the gameplay section. It is acceptable to do this per WP:VGORDER.
The lead section needs more citations
I disagree. It's not customary for lead sections to have citations unless there are quotes or controversial content that needs a citation. See any recent Good or Featured articles. This is because everything in the lead is based upon what is written in prose and cited there, which it is in this article.
Will put it on hold for you to work on these. Let me know if you think of anything else. Yashovardhan (talk) 06:23, 18 April 2017 (UTC)

@Yashovardhan Dhanania: Thank you for reviewing this article. I have addressed all your comments above. TarkusAB 02:59, 19 April 2017 (UTC)
@TarkusAB: thanks for fixing it so fast. My suggestion for the lead section was based on WP:VGORDER. However, you've a good point there. I'll accept this as GA! Good work! Yashovardhan (talk) 04:55, 19 April 2017 (UTC)


### Criteria
### Review
Well-written:

Verifiable with no original research:

Broad in its coverage:

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:


#### Result
#### Discussion
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I will be starting the review soon. Yashovardhan (talk) 07:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)


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