# Talk:Typhoon Hester (1952)

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Another typhoon -- fun will be had by all. Courcelles (talk) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Marshall Islands or the Marshall Islands?  I've always heard it with the definite article?
I think it's the latter, and I changed it to that.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Do you really mean to link Micronesia?  Or the modern day Federated States of Micronesia?  "In the sentence The storm began to rapidly intensify, as it moved north of Micronesia.")
Changed it to Caroline Islands instead.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"Hester began to curve eastward and began to weaken rapidly."  Try to avoid using "began" twice in one sentence.
Fixed.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"The Navy estimated"  Spell out which navy you mean.
Done.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Non-fatal injuries are also casualties, so you have the wrong word in "Overall, eighteen people were injured on Enewetak, and there were no casualties."  You mean no fatalities.
Changed.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Next sentence needs to start with a "The"
Done.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"Hester past south of Guam"  Hester passed.
Fixed.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Courcelles (talk) 16:54, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Once again, thanks for the review.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Two minor changes made myself, and promoted. Courcelles (talk) 21:19, 24 April 2018 (UTC)