# Talk:Potteries derby

There is already a Stoke City season-by-season graph, if a Port Vale graph is created I would think it would be good to combine them and put them on this article to show the teams positions relative to each other.--EchetusXe (talk) 14:04, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

P.S Stoke is most definatley not larger than Nottingham  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.67.138.24 (talk) 20:09, 17 May 2011 (UTC) 

True!--EchetusXe 22:43, 17 May 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Potteries derby/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
I will review this.  The C of E  God Save the King! (talk) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, real life stuff getting in the way, I'll try to get it done on the weekend.  The C of E  God Save the King! (talk) 09:13, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
No rush. EchetusXe 16:53, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
What's the need for the mention of Crewe in the opening paragraph?
Removed.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"said to have been formed in 1876", Said by whom?
By themselves, have amended.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"Vale were complete unknowns", why?
They were a minor team that hadn't received any coverage before that.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
More detail needed about that court case
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"annual Stoke v Vale", vs
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Why were Vale forced to reapply?
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
It needs to be clarified that the Britannia Stadium and Bet365 Stadium are the same
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"trashed the away end at Vale Park", formalise the language
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"Dave Brammer also turned out for Crewe Alexandra after being controversially sold to Crewe", 1, WP:OLINK for Crewe already being linked earlier. And 2, why was it controversial?
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Why are we mentioning the rivalry with Crewe in the players for both clubs section?
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
No need to highlight in purple if you're removing the Crewe reference above
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
WP:OLINK on John Rudge
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Source 2, publisher title shouldn't be italicised as its not a print source and shouldn't be a bare web address
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Same as above for all non-print sources
Think I've done that.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Source 36, publisher title needs spacing
Same for 105
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Source 107 needs an access date.
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Source 111, needs a proper title and has a bare address as a publisher
Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
@EchetusXe: It looks in pretty good shape. Just need those issues pointed out fixed, then please ping me and I'll have another look.  The C of E  God Save the King! (talk) 07:33, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
-Thanks, I've looked at those.@The C of E: --EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

Then I am happy to say you have a new GA. Well done @EchetusXe:!  The C of E  God Save the King! (talk) 19:27, 28 February 2024 (UTC)