# Talk:Zina Young Card

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: An interesting, well-written article..
Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:20, 19 February 2020 (UTC)

Would you know if Orson Card is a descendant of Zina? Both have similar physical resemblances, same surname, and are both Mormon. 204.186.241.170 (talk) 20:35, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Yes, she is his great-grandmother! Her son Orson Rega Card (who he was named after) was his grandfather. I'll find a good source and put it on her page, and I already linked to her on his. Thank you! Cstickel(byu) (talk) 17:27, 5 March 2020 (UTC)

Cstickel(byu) (talk) 20:18, 10 March 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Zina P. Young Card/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Aussie Article Writer (talk · contribs) 00:12, 22 July 2021 (UTC)


### Discussion
I’m working from home today (lockdown). This one might take me longer than normal. I’m enjoying reading it though. So far, great job! - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 01:13, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
And I just noticed SarahSV edited this one. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 01:15, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
Progress update: I've gotten through most of the references - some great and detailed research obviously went into this article! I am taking a break and will continue when I'm back from it. - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 06:45, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
Cstickel(byu) as I've said a few times now, a great article. Could you address the (few) issues I have highlighted? - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 08:00, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
@Aussie Article Writer: Thank you! I've gone through your review and addressed your concerns:
1b.I took the inline citations out of the lead. (All of that information is cited in the article.) But I left in the source for the direct quote, and found the name of the historian who called her "the unquestionable female leader of the Alberta colonies" (and wikilinked to her).
2b.I added the references you requested (for "Career and activism," "Personal life," and "Legacy") and corrected the prose in some areas.
3a.I think my sentence about her being dean of two colleges was referring to her being dean of two schools within Brigham Young Academy, but I couldn't find a source about that, so I changed that prose.
Let me know what else needs to be done, and thank you so much for your review and work on the article! Cstickel(byu) (talk) 14:39, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
I moved one sentence from the lead to the legacy section, otherwise well done on a fine article. All issues have been corrected, this passes GA! - Aussie Article Writer (talk) 20:14, 23 July 2021 (UTC)