# Talk:Right There (Ariana Grande song)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:15, 18 May 2018 (UTC)
Will read this article and leave some comments soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:15, 18 May 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"The song is a throwback to the 1990s R&B music" - rewrite this portion of text to The song is a throwback to R&B music of the 1990s
"directed by team the Young Astronauts who added a concept inspired by William Shakespeare's work Romeo and Juliet. " - directed by the Young Astronauts team
"The single is certified gold in the U.S." - should be United States for consistency
"she also promoted it at the televised show, Jimmy Kimmel Live!." - on


### Background and composition
"Grande's vocals was recorded London Bridge's Studios in Los Angeles, California," = Grande recorded her lines at London Bridge's Studios in Los Angeles, California,
"The singer spoke of the mutual interest she and rapper Big Sean" - delink Big Sean since he's already linked in the same paragraph that this text is in
"Sean agree," - agrees
"And noted Grande's innocence" - Catucci


### Release and reception
"Jenna Rubenstein of MTV wrote praised Grande's performance in the song writing - remove "wrote"
"Kevin Goddarg of HotNewHipHop website felt that" - Kevin Goodard of the website HotNewHipHop felt that
"Williot added that Grande shows off her range once again, with all some" - all with some


### Commercial performance
"The song has spent eight weeks on the chart while archived top ten positions" - The song spent eight weeks on the chart and it placed in the top ten


### Background and composition
Italicize Romeo and Juliet
"Grande, dressed as Juliet, catches the eye of another party-goer dressed as Romeo." - attracts the attention
"The video also received inspirations from the modern film interpretation Romeo + Juliet directed by Baz Luhrmann." - The video was also inspired by the modern film interpretation of Romeo + Juliet directed by Baz Luhrmann.
"During an interview for MTV News website," - the MTV News website
"Todorovic told that the references to Baz Luhrmann's" - drop the first name of Luhrmann since that is mentioned earlier in the paragraph this section of text this is in


### Synopsis
"As the song progress, Grande down the long stairs of the mansion in direction to where the party is taking place," - As the song progresses, Grande walks down own the long stairs of the mansion to where the party is taking place.
"once in the floor, she appears performing a sultry choreography using her hand fan among with the guests of the glamorous event." - Once there,  she appears performing a sultry choreography using her hand fan among with the guests of the glamorous event.
"Swarzenegger arrives at the mansion with his friends, they jump the gate of it as it was closed and they appear to be late." - Swarzenegger arrives at the mansion with his friends. They jump over the gate as if it was closed and they appear to be late.
"He enter the masqueraded event is immediately finds Grande who is seen admired by him, smiling into his face" - He enters the masqueraded event and immediately finds Grande who admires him by smiling into his face.
"She tries to approach him however, some guests embarrass her vision and when she look again, he is not there anymore. " - As she tries to apporach him, some guests block her vision and when she looks again, he is no longer there.
"for a late-night make-out session," - end this part of text with a period not a comma


### Live performances
"In 2013, Grande performed an acoustic version of "Right There" for some radio stations during interview and event" - interviews and events
"She performed the single version at the Jimmy Kimmel Live!," - on Jimmy Kimmel Live!,
Wikilink SAP Center and Dick Clark's New Year's Rockin' Eve
"in Times Square, New York City." - New York City's Times Square


### References
The Twitter citations needs to include the text of what Grande wrote in the title field. See Template:Cite tweet for a few examples
Reference 7 is missing the publisher of the work
Reference 19's access date should be written as January 21, 2014
Reference 22 is lacking the date of when the video was published on Grande's YouTube channel
References 18, 20, 40 and 42 are missing the dates they were accessed
Those were all the things that stood out in my read-through. This review will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 11:05, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: Yo. All issues have been adressed. I apologize for this late response. UrbanJE (talk) 20:18 May 25, 2018 (UTC)
@UrbanJE: Alright then. This article has now attained GA status. MWright96 (talk) 10:05, 26 May 2018 (UTC)