# Talk:Star Trek: The Next Generation season 3

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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 13:38, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
I'll begin this review today or tomorrow.  --Coemgenus (talk) 13:38, 9 January 2014 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### General points
All images look good, either free or fair use.
Length and scope are good.
No obvious NPOV or edit warring.


### Writing
"But all four writers left the series at the end of the season." I would either remove the "but" or combine it with another sentence.  The first option makes the most sense to me.
I'ved removed the "but". Miyagawa (talk) 20:44, 10 January 2014 (UTC)


### Casting
I made some minor copyedits.  Feel free to revert if any of them changed the meaning of the sentences.
"Her departure has subsequently been blamed on Maurice Hurley"  Who blamed Hurley?
In this case, Keith Candido - he's written a few Star Trek books in the Pocket Books line and knows quite a bit of the background. I've copyedited it to make that clear. Miyagawa (talk) 20:49, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
"There had been a letter writing campaign by fans..." might be better as "Fans started a letter-writing campaign..."
Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 20:49, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
"Todd also appeared as the older Jake Sisko in the Deep Space Nine episode 'The Visitor'."  I'm not sure this line is relevant to the article.
Removed. Miyagawa (talk) 20:49, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
"Katsulas became better known for a main role in another American science fiction television series, Babylon 5, as G'Kar." Again, this may be beyond the scope of the article.
No worries, removed it. Miyagawa (talk) 20:49, 10 January 2014 (UTC)


### Ratings
"By the end of season two, The Next Generation had risen to become the third most viewed series in its timeslots." Timeslots? Is that intentional or a typo?
I've changed it to timeslot. Miyagawa (talk) 20:50, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
Other than those minor points, it all looks fine to me.  Nice article! --Coemgenus (talk) 18:44, 10 January 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated. Miyagawa (talk) 20:50, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
Looks good. Passed.  --Coemgenus (talk) 21:23, 10 January 2014 (UTC)

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I am going to remove the Picard Maneuver from the introduction. To the casual reader it is not clear what this is supposed to mean anyway, and an explanation wouldn't really fit. Also it is just factually inaccurate that the tugging down of the uniform done by Picard originated in season 3. I am currently watching season 2 and Picard does it all the time. OdinFK (talk) 13:37, 21 December 2019 (UTC)

(Feel free to add this to the casting section, if that's where this should be. Along with this intro in the parenthesis. I wasn't entire sure where to put this, if I should've entered a new one, or edited the existing one and trying to add an additional bullet point. That being said,...) I was episode jumping on Paramount+ and I saw a particular guest star appeared in a Season 3 episode. I had previously did a read-through of the casting notes of season 3, and I have to admit, that I was both a little surprised, and....a little annoyed at the slip up. HOW has it gone missed until now that the actor James Cromwell is not mentioned in the casting for season 3? The casting notes for particular actors and/or characters that became notable in later episodes or other areas of the franchise. Everyone who is a major Trek fan knows that Cromwell plays Zefram Cochrane in Star Trek: First Contact. Please do not ask me or permit me to add this additional information myself. I am not that efficient in updating articles, and I am sure that there are those that are better at it than me. I would not seek credit for any additions. I would just like to see it added. Aidensdaddy2k9 (talk) 00:47, 9 June 2024 (UTC)