# Talk:Ryo Sakazaki

Why would Ryo, Yuri, and Takuma's names be written in Western order in the Japanese-language versions of their games??? That's definitely not right!
Never played KOF Maximum Impact? When you select the characters the announcer shouts "Ryo Sakazaki" or "Iori Yagami".Tintor2 (talk) 00:45, 29 November 2009 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ryo Sakazaki/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 22:07, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 13:18, 1 March 2025 (UTC)

Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 13:18, 1 March 2025 (UTC)

"He himself had not been rich". What do you mean? The following sentence ("Designing Robert Garcia, who was rich, caused him "trouble"") also sounds trivial without a proper explanation.
"Instead of just media such as magazines and comics". Ditto. What does this mean?
Present Shinseisha.
"…that appears in several spin-off games often called Mr. Karate". Who appears is better.
"They tend to be unable to get involved in the main story and end up in comical roles in contrast to the Art of Fighting". Who's "they"? Also, maybe past is better?
"…giving him more facial hair symbolizing his older age". Maybe "gave him" is better in this context.
"In retrospect, Hiroaki believes he made the right choice with black as it makes Ryo's face stand out". For consecution temporum I would delete "In retrospect" and write this sentence like: "Hiroaki believed that black made Ryo’s face stand out". Or something like that.
"Seriesm". Obviously a typo.
"His moves leave him open, resulting in a useful version of his Tiger Fist for easier combos". Can you explain this better?
"..by his own student". Remove "own".
"..a Mii costume". What is a Mii costume?
"…whereas HardCoreGaming felt Ryo was unfaithful". Remove "whereas".
"In "Os reis da luta: representações do karate nos jogos digitais", Tiago … opposing her growth as a warrior". Put this whole part in another section in Conception.
"…were the first the first  fighting games to include such option". Remove one "the first".
"Both Ryo and Akuma are notable for giving the player a notable challenge". Is there a synonymous for "notable" to avoid this repetition?
I would delete the tengu mask image. It's not informative.
"From The King of Fighters '96 onwards, Tiago Oviedo Frosi noted ... as well as the Jujutsu". This would be more fitting in Conception – Fighting style.
"TheGamer noted his appearance in The King of Fighters XV abandoned his KOF '96 … inspired the mask of the Tengu creature that Takuma and Ryo often wear.[91]". This in Portrayal and design.
@Tintor2: That's all. A very good article. Good job.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 18:57, 2 March 2025 (UTC)
TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) Thanks for the review. I tried covering everything. Not sure if I missed something considering I couldn't the word series well.Tintor2 (talk) 20:12, 2 March 2025 (UTC)

@Tintor2: OK, then. The article is very clear even for me and I read it quickly as no major problems are there. The exposition is also good and I think everythings meets the GAN criteria. Just one thing. I checked the online sources and they're also OK, but I need references for the bibliography (es. note 7, 16, 17, 20, 23 etc.). Can you provide some scans, or Web Archive links, or maybe can you report the original texts like you did for the fifth note?--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 13:51, 6 March 2025 (UTC)
Wouldn't that break copyright violations? I can provide scans of artbooks but from fansites or the wiki but there are some that are almost impossible to find with 7th being from Japanese Wikipedia. Tintor2 (talk) 13:59, 6 March 2025 (UTC)
Nevermind. Found archives and or quotes of each book and magazine Tintor2 (talk) 14:25, 6 March 2025 (UTC)
TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) Went ahead and revised every Japanese source with the archived link. Sadly, a website where I got the scans ended up working and can't find it anywhere else so I removed the content.Tintor2 (talk) 21:58, 6 March 2025 (UTC)

OK! Great job with this article. Now that the sources verification issue is solved, I can pass this.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 08:19, 7 March 2025 (UTC)