# Talk:Standing Up in the Milky Way

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Think I'll review this one. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 02:16, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Here goes:

Per WP:RS/IMDB, you should probably replace those cites to it, maybe to something like the episode's credits
Two DAB links that need fixing: Enterprise and National Geographic
After you've introduced Neil deGrasse Tyson, all following mentions of him should be just "Tyson"
I think you should mention the episode's ratings in the reception section
"and ready for shipment on June 29, 2014." -> "and is scheduled to be released on June 29, 2014" sounds better
You should mention Nicholson's 8.5 grade
"Positive review was also given by Slate journalist Phil Plait" Shouldn't there be an "a" before "Positive review"?
Looks ok. I'll put in on hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 18:03, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

 Done. Phill24th (talk) 10:38, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
You think you could do anything about the IMDB cites? Otherwise looks good Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 20:01, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
Yeah, OK.  Working. Phill24th (talk) 07:19, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Will that do? Phill24th (talk) 07:38, 22 April 2014 (UTC)