# Talk:Squatting in Hamburg

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Reviewer: Shushugah (talk · contribs) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)


### Review
General comments:

Wikilink Volxkuche
Properly attribute the two authors Karl-Heinz Dellwo and Willi Baerof the book "Wir wollen alles – Die Hausbesetzungen in Hamburg" with their names instead of "Various"
Legalized is a technical/legal concept that is mentioned several times, but not explained.


### Possible copyright violation
It passes copyvio check. Because it's a translated article, I also checked whether attribution was provided. While this article is quite different from the German one, it is a derivative, using same images/sources in various cases. This would be fixed with a talk page template {{Translated page}}. Further instructions available at Help:Translate.
I will give a week before I mark it as succeeded/failed, unless you're actively working on it, in which case I will give more time to address my feedback. Looking forward to working with you! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)


#### Replies
Thanks for taking this on! Mujinga (talk) 20:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
Wow that's great Volxkuche is linked, I should work on that page though, it's not in great condition. Mujinga (talk) 20:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
Refs for wir wollen alles fixed Mujinga (talk) 21:07, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
Add wikilinks for legalized (and housing co-operative). Not sure what else to add, since it seems to me a commonplace term. Mujinga (talk) 21:07, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
I'm not sure about adding {{Translated page}} since I wouldn't say I've translated text per WP:TFOLWP. I did of course look at the German language page for inspiration, but it's not very well referenced and it's more of a list article, so I wouldn't say I actually translated any of it.  I have used some of the same sources and images that is correct but I don't think that requires attribution on my understanding. Also, I did note in the history that I imported text from the EN article on Rote Flora. Mujinga (talk) 21:27, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
I hope I've answered everything Mujinga (talk) 21:28, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
@Shushugah just checking you've seen this Mujinga (talk) 10:21, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for the ping and the satisfactory explanations/follow up edits Mujinga. Congrats on the GA status! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 10:34, 6 June 2022 (UTC)