# Talk:The Woo

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Infobox is in great shape!
"a number of" → "several" (less wordy)
"out Roddy Ricch" → "out to Roddy Ricch"
"Roddy Ricch never was able catch up with Pop Smoke when he was alive. They would say hello sometimes while passing each other" does not sound Wikipedia-ish.
Removed
Add references at the end of each sentence containing a quote per WP:QUOTE.
Remove the comma after "from Pop Smoke".
"commented the" → "commented that the"
Add a serial comma after "Pop Smoke, 50 Cent".
"labelled" → "labeled" (American English)
"inspiration creating" → "inspiration for creating"
"also features" → "also feature" (American English)
Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
The reference after "abilities" is missing a "|last5=" parameter.
Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
Some Dude From North Carolina thanks so much for the review. I have addressed all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 08:38, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
@The Ultimate Boss: A recite is needed after "global superstardom" and there are Rolling Stone and Vulture references that need "|url-access=limited". After addressing these issues, ping me, and I'll pass the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:25, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
Some Dude From North Carolina Done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:19, 5 April 2021 (UTC)


### Progress