# Talk:Scott Perunovich

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK  Done
"winning bronze." - the bronze medal.  Done


### Personal life
UMBBullDogs does not state Perunovich's birth date; another source is needed for this  Done
"Perunovich wished to attend the University of Minnesota." - any information to say why?  Done


### Playing career
"where he led the team to a 37-10-5" - think the hyphens can be replaced by en dashes  Done
"Overall, he won 80% of his matches" - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT  Done
"and was named the Mesabi Daily News, Hibbing Daily Tribune and Grand Rapids Herald Review Tennis Player of the Year." - the names of the newspapers are better off italized and wikilinked to their respective articles  Done
"Perunovich joined the U.S. National Under-18 Team for two games against St. Cloud State" - a period is missing from the end of this sentence  Done
Add a link for St. Cloud State to St. Cloud State Huskies men's ice hockey  Done


### Collegiate
Wikilink College of Liberal Arts to University of Minnesota College of Liberal Arts  Done
Wikilink goal to Goal (ice hockey) and overtime to Overtime (ice hockey)   Done
Wikilink Michigan Tech to Michigan Tech Huskies men's ice hockey and Maine Black Bears to Maine Black Bears men's ice hockey  Done
"after the strong play in his rookie season Perunovich made the midterm ranks" - think the wording can be switched for readability  Done
2018 NHL Entry Draft should be wikilinked on the first mention, not the second  Done
Add a link to Bowling Green State University to Bowling Green Falcons men's ice hockey  Done
A wikilink to Assist to Assist (ice hockey)  Done
"On July 28, 2019, Perunovich committed to another year with the Bulldogs. and proved once again to be an asset to the UMD Bulldogs." - repetition of "Bulldogs"  Done
Wikilink National Collegiate Hockey Association  Done
Add a link for NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year to List of NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year
What do you mean? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:19, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
"Perunovich subsequently became the sixth Bulldogs player to receive" - more concise; was the sixth Bulldogs player to receive  Done
"the Hobey Baker." - Hobey Baker Award.  Done


### International play
Wikilink U.S. National Junior Team to United States men's national junior ice hockey team  Done
"After making the cut, he helped Team USA win a bronze medal. He scored one goal and two assists during the 2018 World Junior Ice Hockey Championships." - I believe these two sentences should be merged and shortened accordingly  Done
The sole mention of Team Canada should be wikilinked to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team  Done


### Awards and honors
The USHS award needs a reliable reference to verify it  Done


### References
The titles in references 3 and 43 should not be all in capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS  Done
Reference 6 title: "Meet The RoughRiders - Scott Perunovich" -the hyphen should be an en dash per MOS:DASH  Done
Reference 15 should include the publication date  Done
Reference 32 should have the author as Mahoney, Andrew for consistency  Done
Reference 33 is missing the publication date  Done
Reference 34 is missing Associated Press as the agency who provided the story to CBC  Done
Reference 42 is missing Canadian Press as the agency who provided the article to The Globe and Mail  Done
Reference 43 does not have the date it was published included  Done
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:39, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. I have made one change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 19:18, 12 May 2020 (UTC)