# Talk:Sopiko Guramishvili

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

I think this one has been sitting in the queue for long enough! — GhostRiver 14:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lede
### Early life and background
WL the first instance of Georgia (country)
MOS:OVERLINK discourages linking countries. I usually only link countries once in the infobox (as I did with the Netherlands). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces that they weren't using" → "After she was more intrigued by the chess pieces not being used"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Change note [a] so that it reads "with a score of 7 points in 11 games (7/11), and the note just explains that a win is one point, a draw is 1/2, and a loss is 0
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
On that note, please add a citation to the note explaining how scoring works; it seems common sense, but if it must be explained in the article, then it should be cited.
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


### Chess career
#### 2002-06
Write out and WL the first instance of the Fédération Internationale des Échecs (FIDE)
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"starting at 2142" → "ranked at 2142"
It's a rating, not a ranking. (I didn't want to write "rated at 2142" to avoid repeating "rating" in the sentence.)
"At the former in Budva in Montenegro, she earned a bronze medal" → "She earned a bronze medal at the former tournament in Budva, Montenegro,"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"but losing to the winner Ding" (you already mentioned that Ding won)
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"with a good performance" → "with a strong performance"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Can you name the winners for the Georgian championship?
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:22, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"Guramishvili had a strong finish to the year at the World Youth Chess Championships," → "Guramishvili finished the year with a redeeming performance at the World Youth Chess Championships,"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


#### 2007-09
"Guramishvili consolidated her 2006 World Championship gold medal with another excellent year in 2007" → "Guramishvili followed up her gold medal-winning year with another impressive run of tournaments in 2007"
Changed to "an excellent year" if that was what you were getting at?
Duplicate "Georgian" in the first sentence of the second paragraph
Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"Later in the year in May" → "That May"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


#### 2010-13
"due to her opponents having a much higher average rating of 2492." → "as she had faced opponents with a much higher average rating of 2492."
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Reference [43] does not mention that Guramishvili and Giri eventually married
Added. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"in November" → "that November"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
"was only sufficient for joint fourth place" → "was only strong enough for joint fourth place"
Changed to "only put her in joint fourth place".
"an joint first-place finish" → "a joint first-place finish"
Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Comma after "Femenino Ciudad De Linares"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Comma after "Chennai Open in India"
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:36, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


#### 2014-present
Pipe "knockout event" to One-game playoff
Linked to single-elimination tournament. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:50, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


### Playing style
Good


### Personal life
I think that the switching federations part should be in her career section
Duplicated. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Delink Anish Giri, already linked above
Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:32, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


### References
Archive all references using the tool
I tried using the tool, but couldn't get it to work. You are welcome to do it if it works for you. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)


### General comments
All three pictures are Creative Commons licensed and are relevant to the article
No stability issues in the revision history
Earwig copyvio score looks fantastic at 2.9%!
Putting on hold now to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 14:38, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

I made one change myself to eliminate MOS:PUFFERY. Apart from that, it looks good. Passing now. — GhostRiver 01:14, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for doing the review, GhostRiver! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:42, 10 September 2021 (UTC)