# Talk:Soma Bringer

In this game Welt(Velt) and Idea are the essencial main characters.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.183.91.29 (talk) 08:00, 10 January 2010 (UTC) 

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Reviewer: JDC808 (talk · contribs) 17:17, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

Lead
First para: 

Link "dungeon", "real-time combat" (not sure of the correct link for that), and "top-down perspective". "three-dimensional" and "Multiplayer" could also be linked.
Second para:

role-playing game can be linked.
Spell out "co-op" and link it (in parenthesis, you could put "co-op" and use that shorthand from thereafter).
Gameplay
Anything that I said to link above that isn't already linked here, link them here as well.
First para:

single player -> single-player (and make sure any other instance of "single player" includes the dash).
the players control -> the player controls
Second para:

"...are mapped to the DS face buttons." Spell out Nintendo DS, link it, and make it possessive.
Third para:

respawn - > respawns
Link buffs and debuffs
Synopsis
"At some point prior to the game's opening, mysterious monsters called Visitors being appearing..." I believe that is supposed to be "began appearing"?
Development
Since I said to link Nintendo DS above in Gameplay, unlink it here.
These are what I saw on the first read through. Also did some minor copy/editing. After you've addressed these, I'll have a second read through. --JDC808 ♫ 18:18, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

@JDC808: I've addressed the issues you raised above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:31, 4 January 2017 (UTC)


### Verdict
Nice article. --JDC808 ♫ 18:50, 4 January 2017 (UTC)