# Talk:Sid Justin

This is my first Wikipedia page other than my own. I don't really know anything about editing, just here to mainly fix small stuff.
If you are a Wikipedia maestro, please help me with Wikipedia stuff. BoopyCarrot12 (talk) 11:23, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

I'm busy at the moment, but at the end of this month/early next month I should be able to help you out with this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:21, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:12, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added cats Junior college football players and coaches in the United States, Otis College of Art and Design alumni, New Orleans football, African-Americans
"in 1973, after his graduation from Crenshaw" remove comma
Removed.
"Crenshaw, and was" remove comma
Done.
"named All-Pacific Coast Athletic Association" do you know if first or second team? add to infobox
Can't seem to find if it was first / second team - just added to the infobox without the -team selection.
"on August 14, 1980, and" that source says its yesterdays transactions so 13th
Fixed.
"He was waived by Tampa Bay on August 26" same for this
Fixed.
"signed with the Winnipeg Blue Bombers of the Canadian Football League (CFL) on September 8" not sure when but probably not the same day the source was published
Sounds like it was around September 6, so I added "c. September 6"
"signed with the Buffalo Bills in April 1981" PFA has Feb.
Changed.
"placed on injured reserve on August 18" that's probably not Aug 18 either but i dont know
Changed to 17 as that seems to have been when it occurred.
add that he was released by the Bills on 8/31/1981 per PFA
Done.
no date spans for coaching career? I'm not asking you to include that if you dont want because that gets confusing sometimes.
The source didn't really give exact dates.
"charts in Asia for five months" ref 25 says 6 months
Do you think we should go with Justin's website, that of The Miracles, or add a note?
Just pick one then add a note for the discrepancy. Also just for my purposes, I am noting that this is the last thing that needs done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:34, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Note added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:39, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:40, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:26, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC)