# Talk:Soviet submarine Shch-310

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Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:07, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:44, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Hmm, it's been a while! Jaguar (talk) 15:44, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Lead
The lead summarises the article, can spot no issues here
"The boat played a minor role during the 1939–1940 Winter War " - curious, why not submarine?
Submariners call their subs boats, not ships. I try to vary how I refer to them.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:20, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
Body
"For surface running, the Series V-bis-2 boats were powered by a pair of 38V-8 diesel engines, one per propeller shaft." - overly technical, try On the surface, the Series V-bis-2 submarines were powered by twin 38V-8 diesel engines, each driving a separate propeller shaft.
"During the Winter War the ship made two patrols in the Baltic Sea" - missing comma
"she was patrolling in the Eastern Baltic and she moved to defend the entrance of the Gulf of Finland the following day" - repetition, you can safely remove this 'she'
Good idea.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:20, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
Overall, a nice compact article. It meets the comprehensiveness part of the criteria, and is well-written. I have made a few nitpicks, but can't see it holding the review back. Well done.  Jaguar (talk) 21:03, 24 June 2025 (UTC)