# Talk:Paul Loudon

don't see birthdate in ref 1
Not sure where I got that – removed.
put playing position "end" in infobox
Added.
"winning All-American honors by Walter Camp." Dont see that in ref 3
Found a ref mentioning it, although I'm not convinced it was true so I put that it was 'all-american according to one source'
"described by several newspapers as a "human battering ram" only one is cited
Re-worded.
where did you get the playing spans for basketball and baseball on the infobox. Those dont seem to be correlated in the body. Those might be true based off ref 7. It also said he played freshman baseball in ref 7 so i think he had 4 years in baseball
I'm not sure exactly where I found them so I changed it to "?–1914" for basketball / baseball.
"As a junior, Loudon was named team captain in both basketball and baseball" that ref seems to be talking about his senior year and it doesnt say he was named captain. He could have been captain earlier than that right?
I changed it to "He was also team captain in both basketball and baseball in his senior year" based on the source.
"Barrett Award" that might be true but i dont see where the source has a name for it.
Removed the name.
link artilleryman
Done.
link AHA to American Hockey Association (1926–1942) i also linked loudon at that article
Linked.
"president of the Central Hockey League" already linked above and actually you can just use abbreviations since you already spelled that out above
Seems to be two different Central Hockey Leagues.
"elected president of the American Hockey Association (AHA)" you can just say AHA
Changed.
link millers on coaching section of infobox. Actually on second thought i dont see that in the body.
Removed Millers coaching – it looks like 'Fred Rocque' actually held the position per [1]
i think northwestern hospital might be this
Linked.
where'd you get 1926 for millers in the infobox, don't see that in the sources
He had some role with the Millers by 1926 per [2], although it doesn't exactly give his position. I added "c." to the 1926 in the infobox.
I don't see in the sources where it said he was a owner of the millers
Not sure where I got that either; removed.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:48, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: Still quite upset I didn't fix this up last year (it would've won me the Cup) but I think I've addressed everything now. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:02, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
Okay, all that looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 00:08, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Nominated. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:10, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: By the way, would you have any interest in reviewing either of my two current GA nominations – Red Weiner or Ed Storm? BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:34, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
No thanks. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 06:04, 26 February 2025 (UTC)