# Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2012 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
The Daily Mail citation should be removed per Wikipedia:DAILYMAIL as it is an banned source
Replaced w/ The Telegraph source Kees08 (Talk)


### Background
Wikilink opening to the 2012 Summer Olympics opening ceremony and closing to the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony
Done Kees08 (Talk)
You use Saint Kitts and Nevis and St. Kitts and Nevis throughout the article. Only one of these should be used for consistency
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Athletics
All mentions of"100 m" and its variants need to be spelt as for example "100 metres" in the prose
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"He was disqualified during the semifinals heat." - Is there any information available to state why he was disqualified? Was it a false start?
I checked harder this time and still did not find anything. I was even looking for videos of the event to see if I could figure it out. Do you have any source on it by chance? Kees08 (Talk)
"which was not high enough to advance to the next round" - change to which was not fast enough to advance them to the next round
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"and it was announced July 29 that she would not compete" - reword to and it was announced on July 29 that she would not compete
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Wikilink the World Anti-Doping Agency
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"While the drug is not listed as prohibited by the World Anti-Doping Agency, it falls into the category of veterinary medicine and is therefore prohibited." - repition of prohibited
Better? Kees08 (Talk)


### References
The reflist needs to have a colwidth set at 30em
Done Kees08 (Talk)
The publishers of the citations need to be wikilinked where possible
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Remove the external links section as it is not appropriate to have just solely the navbox inside of it
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Can see the GA potential in this but it will be put on hold until all of the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 13:52, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: I have made an attempt to address all of your concerns, let me know if I missed anything or if you have any replies to anything I noticed above.  Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 07:22, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
@Kees08: With regards to the DSQ claim, I couldn't find anything to say what Adams did to warrant himself disqualification in his event. Nevertheless, this article is now at GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:42, 24 October 2017 (UTC)