# Talk:You See Colours

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 22:11, 13 June 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox
How do you know it was only recorded in 2005? I can't find it in the body of the article.
Genre: pop should be o the body of the article mentioned along with indie rock.
It is in the body: "In contrast to the guitar-centered sound of Faded Seaside Glamour, You See Colours relies on pop songs..." MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
That needs to be in the first sentence of "Composition and lyrics". I don't want for people to go "fishing" for genres. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:08, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Where are those studios located?
Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox album.
 Done


### Lead
The album charted at number 24 in the United Kingdom, while its singles "Valentine" and "Hideaway" charted at number 23 and 35, respectively → The album charted at number 24 in the UK Albums Chart, while its singles "Valentine" and "Hideaway" charted at number 23 and 35 in the UK Singles Chart, respectively
After Delays twice toured the UK, in late 2005 and early 2006, "Valentine" was released as the lead single on 20 February 2006. Delays again toured the UK again before playing festivals in Europe and returning to embark on another UK tour. "Hideaway" was released as the second single on 9 May 2006. → After Delays toured twice in the United Kingdom, in late 2005 and early 2006, "Valentine" was released as the lead single on 20 February 2006. After touring twice in the UK and playing festivals in Europe, "Hideaway" was released as the second single on 9 May 2006.
I did the first one, but what did you want me changing the second one to? MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:14, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
I need to re-write it, give me time. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:15, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Done. MusicforthePeople (talk) 19:08, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
 Done


### Background
embarked on a tour of the United Kingdom → embarked on a tour ib the United Kingdom
November 2004; it charted → November 2004 and it peaked
in the UK → in the UK Singles Chart.
Sutton and Robbie Nelson acted as engineers, and Sutton later mixed the recordings at Dustsucker. → The latter and Robbie Nelson acted as engineers, with Sutton mixing the recordings at Dustsucker.
Dustsucker Sound → was the album both recorded and mixed here?
Yes. MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
 Done


### Composition and lyrics
It was the last song to be completed for the album, recorded at Rockfield → The source, "This will always be Cavalry to me. Last one to record - at Rockfield, Wales.", doesn't state which song was, seems WP:OR
Open this[1], do CTRL+F, enter This will always be Cavalry to me; the tweet above it shows it to be referring to "You and Me". MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Than use that source, otherwise you can't back the claims. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Added. MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:13, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
They had tried recording the song, → They had tried recording it,
for an aborted album → for an attempted album
 Done


### Release
In October 2005, Delays embarked on a tour of the UK → In October 2005, Delays embarked on a tour in the United Kingdom and Ireland.
band again toured the UK → band toured the UK again
as a single → as the lead single
Two versions of what??
"Someday Soon You're Gonna Happen", "Shadows on Our School", "Talking Me Down", and the music video for "Valentine" as bonus tracks → should be in the tracklist as well
Per Wikipedia:ALTTRACKLIST: "Include track listings for alternative editions only when they are significantly different and when the tracks are the subject of extensive commentary in the article." As the bonus tracks lack "extensive commentary", there's no need to add them. MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Good catch! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:22, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Two versions → same as previous
You made a description for the music video for "Hideaway", make one for "Valentine" as well
I don't have a source for the plot of the "Valentine" video. MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Youtube official chanel? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Forgive me if I'm being dumb, but I thought you needed a source that actually mentions the plot, versus just showing it (YouTube)? MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:09, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
To describe a music video you don't need one. YT will suffice, however, if you have one even better! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:10, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Added. MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:17, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
until the decision to change it for "Hideaway" was made. → but it was later changed to "Hideaway".
 Done


### Reception
24 in the UK. → 24 in the UK Albums chart.
"Valentine" charted at number 23 and "Hideaway" reached number 35 → The album's singles, "Valentine" and "Hideaway", charted at number 23 and number 35 in the UK Singles Charts, respectively.
 Done


### Track listing
Writing credits per booklet. All recordings produced by Graham Sutton → Credits adapted from the booklet of You See Colours. All songs produced by Graham Sutton
 Done


### Personnel
Personnel per booklet. → Credits adapted from the booklet of You See Colours.
Use spaced dash,  –
 Done


### Charts
Fine


### References
Reference number 8, 16, 17, 20, 21, 22, 25, 29, 49 and 50, the twitter ones, need to be Template:Cite tweet.
Source check: 3, 4, 5, 8, 14, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 30, 31, 32, 33, 35, 49 and 50
Source 19 has a paywall, that needs to be mentioned; url-access=subscription
Weird. The paywall was seemingly added after I used it as a ref; added now. MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
No problem MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Reference one is missing its author
 Done


### External links
Fine


### Overall
Let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:10, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I've made most of the changes, but have comments on some. MusicforthePeople (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
The other songs on the CD singles of "Valentine" and "Hideaway" are what? bonus? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:25, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
B-sides – the meaning of the term has shifted to meaning album outtakes in the modern era, but for the extra songs on 7"s and CDs, that's what they're called. MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:35, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
added that then, "and the music video for "Valentine" as B-sides". DO the same for the other single MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:41, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Added. MusicforthePeople (talk) 18:43, 15 June 2022 (UTC)