# Talk:Raymond Cammock

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Nominator: Zawed (talk · contribs) 00:00, 1 November 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 21:53, 3 November 2025 (UTC)


### Initial review
I plan to review this article for GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:53, 3 November 2025 (UTC)


### Review 1
@Zawed: Please make the following edits or argue your case for not doing so. Got to quit now. Will finish up later. Djmaschek (talk) 22:28, 3 November 2025 (UTC)

Infobox: Add 485 Squadron (1942).  Done
Have added, I originally omitted it since he flew relatively few sorties with the squadron. Zawed (talk) 08:34, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Operation Diver, paragraph 2, sentence 1: "On 28 June" > "On 28 June 1944".  Accepted
From the context of the previous paragraph, I think it is clear that it is 1944. However, I have rephrased that paragraph to help minimise any potential for confusion. Zawed (talk) 08:34, 4 November 2025 (UTC)


### Review2
@Zawed: If I find myself looking around for the year, then I assume other readers might do the same. I was curious whether Cammock was buried in an Allied WW2 military cemetery, but it is apparently not the case. I'm going to assess as GA class, since I don't see anything wrong. Djmaschek (talk) 00:44, 5 November 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, much appreciated. I have added a little extra info RE his place of burial. Zawed (talk) 08:19, 5 November 2025 (UTC)