# Talk:Songbird Sings the Classics

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
This should be a nice, smooth review! --K. Peake 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after Regine Velasquez in the first sentence
Done
"as its sponsor." → "as the sponsor."
Done
Pipe 1960s to 1960s in music
Done
Pipe 1970s to 1970s in music
Done
Remove the introduction to Gerard Salonga per it being done in the body
Removed and tweaked
"the intimate show and Velasquez's and" → "the intimate show, and Velasquez's and"
Done
Thanks for the initial comments. Actioned per responses above. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:52, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Pseud 14 I meant pipe to the plural for the 1960s and 1970s music articles; do this in the body too, please. --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
I see what you mean. Done (I think) Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)


### Background and development
"It marked her first collaboration" → "It marked Velasquez's first collaboration"
"with his sister Lea Salonga." → "with his sister Lea." per MOS:SAMESURNAME
Done above


### Synopsis and reception
"into a Henry Mancini tribute number," → "into a Mancini tribute number,"
"The next number saw her perform" → "The next number saw Velasquez perform"
"she stood next to" → "Velasquez stood next to"
"He highlighted how" → "Cruz highlighted how"
Done above


### Broadcast and recordings
Use the full name of RPN
Wikilink live album
Mention that the certification was in the Philippines and how many units it represents
I added the number of units sold and included a source for shipments of albums required to achieve platinum status. Same source can be found in her discography. As for adding Philippines, the certifying body (PARI) already mentions that, so I think it would be redundant to add it again.


### Set list
Good


### See also
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks definitely great at 20.0%!!!
Add via Google Books with the wikilink for refs 1, 4, 5 and 6
Added


### External links
Good


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; shouldn't take long at all especially with your speed! --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for taking up this review K. Peake. I have addressed your comments and provided my responses above. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
 Pass now, great job on this! --K. Peake 20:17, 9 August 2023 (UTC)