# Talk:Pondicherry shark

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Pondicherry shark/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 09:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

I propose to review this article and will be studying it in detail shortly. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:21, 17 June 2013 (UTC)


### A few prose points
"This species is gray above and white below, which extends onto the flanks as an obvious pale stripe." - This sentence needs clarification.
Rephrased to "This species is gray above and white below, with an obvious pale stripe on the flanks." -- Yzx (talk) 14:53, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
"Innocuous towards humans, the Pondicherry shark was caught and used for meat." - I don't much care for the use of the word "innocuous" here.
Changed to "harmless to humans". -- Yzx (talk) 14:53, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
Otherwise, little I can find to criticize. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:30, 17 June 2013 (UTC)


### GA Criteria
1a The article is well written
1b The article conforms with the MOS guidelines as to layout, lead etc.
2a&b The article is well referenced and has inline citations for all contentious statements.
2c There is no original research as far as I can see.
3a&b The coverage is broad enough and the article does not include irrelevant material.
4 The article is neutral
5 The article has been expanded by the nominator in the last week and has hardly been edited by anybody else recently.
6 The images are either in the public domain or are appropriately licensed.
7 The images are relevant to the topic and have suitable captions.
Overall assessment - Pass. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:08, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 05:32, 19 June 2013 (UTC)