# Talk:Thunderstorm

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Change „Clouds form as relatively warmer air, carrying moisture, rises within cooler air.“
to „Clouds form as relatively warmer air, carrying moisture, rising within colder air.“
English isn’t my native language but I think this is a grammatical error, the wording really confused me so I made this request. Correct me if Im wrong and thank you in advance. Leonard Sunder (talk) 21:46, 14 August 2025 (UTC)

I have replaced "as" with "when" in the sentence, so it now reads "Clouds form when relatively warmer air, carrying moisture, rises with cooler air.“ Hope to is now more clear. I am afraid your suggestion is not an improvement and looks grammatically wrong. Vpab15 (talk) 23:05, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
That reads much better to me. I'll go ahead and close this as  Partly done. UmbyUmbreon (talk) 23:42, 14 August 2025 (UTC)