# Talk:So Seductive

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Infobox
No issues


### Lead
"So Seductive" is a song by American rapper Tony Yayo... → Make the sentence end there to comply with WP:BEGINNING Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
...reaching number 48 on the US Billboard Hot 100:... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


### Background
...of 50 Cent's album Get Rich or Die Tryin'... → Add year of release for "Get Rich or Die Tryin'" Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
The group also released their debut album, Beg for Mercy... → Add year of release for "Beg for Mercy" Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
...which involved wearing "Free Yayo" shirts advertising his situation... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
...after receiving a call from the Shady Records offices advising him to do so:[4]  → At semi-colon at end Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
...titled Thoughts of a Predicate Felon, almost immediately after leaving prison... → Put year of release for album in parentheses Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


### Writing and composition
According to WP:SAMPLE, an audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 21 seconds and is currently 23 seconds) Done (shortened to 19 seconds) I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 15:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


### Critical reception
No issues


### Music video
No issues


### Live performances
No issues


### Awards and nominations
Get rid of this section, but put information in prose form in "Critical reception" section Done I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


### Track listing
No issues


### Credits and personnel
No issues


### Charts
No issues


### Radio and release history
No issues


### References
No issues

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues among others that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status, until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 06:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel comfortable passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:45, 22 June 2012 (UTC)