# Talk:Whinchat

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 22:09, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I'll reivew this. FunkMonk (talk) 22:09, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
This video is of much better quality than the one currently in the article: [1]
Replaced. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
"The whinchat is a sort-tailed bird" Short I assume?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
"has blackish face mask" Missing a?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
"Its main call is a hue-tac-tac" Maybe add "is described as a"?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
"to a maximum recorded of just over five years" Wild or captive?
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
With such a large range, I'd assume some subspecies are recognised or have been proposed?
Apparently not. Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
Seems the supercilium could be mentioned in the intro?
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
"The whinchat is a solitary species" Only the intro states this.
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for taking on this review.Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
Looks good, passed! FunkMonk (talk) 15:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
That was fast work, thanks indeed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

To what does this Cornish phrase refer? the whinchat bird, see the BBC website referenced below. Or the Redwing, see List of Cornish dialect words, or a Peregrine Falcon, as in Birds of Cornwall the North Cornwall paragraph. I suspect it's the whinchat.BeckenhamBear (talk) 09:05, 6 November 2016 (UTC)