# Talk:Unicorn (song)

I understand the value and importance of accurate and informative content on the internet (Especially topical content, actually writing this at 15 minutes before the Eurovision finals). However, I urge you to consider the relevance and significance of the topic before creating a Wikipedia article on it.
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Therefore, I respectfully request that you carefully evaluate the importance and relevance of a topic before creating an article about it. By doing so, we can maintain the high standards and credibility of Wikipedia and ensure that the information presented is both accurate and significant.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. TheFoolOnTheFill (talk) 18:46, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

@TheFoolOnTheFill:Er... how is it exactly not important? It's charted on many charts and has gotten third in the Eurovision Song Contest. Plus, every song from this year has an article. Nascar9919 (talk) 15:17, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
Yes, i was on the chars. Does this mean it should have a wikipedia page? Don't think so. About the other songs - totally right. Not every song should have a wikipedia page especially when some actual important musical peaces of the modern history of music do not have pages. TheFoolOnTheFill (talk) 15:27, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Unicorn (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 18:37, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:44, 27 January 2025 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
I will review this over today and tomorrow! --K. Peake 08:44, 27 January 2025 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Just got some free time off from university and got around to your edits. Let me know if you need anything else! Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:56, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Nascar9919 Thanks a lot for addressing these points, I have done a slight amount of copy editing too although MOS:QWQ issues still remain. To specify, this is when speech marks are used to surround song names or quotes in references, take "Unicorn" in ref 6 as an example – should be 'Unicorn'. Please let me know when you have fixed these instances! --K. Peake 08:06, 31 January 2025 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: Checked through every source and edited the ones I could find. Let me know if you can find anything else. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 08:20, 31 January 2025 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
WP:OVERLINK of Noa Kirel under songwriters
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"and was released on" → "The song was released on" as a new sentence to avoid a run-on
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"was met with mixed reception" → "received a mixed reception"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
""Unicorn" enjoyed commercial success," → "The song enjoyed commercial success,"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Background and release
""Unicorn" is written and composed" → ""Unicorn" was written and composed"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Re-invoke [2] at the end of the second sentence per usage of direct quoting
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Where is three days sourced?
[3]. According to N12, there's a line in the article that shows up on my translator that states, ""We wrote the song in three sessions, which are three days." In Hebrew, ""כתבנו את השיר בשלושה סשנים שהם שלושה ימים. זה זמן מושלם."
"released on 8 March," → "released as a single on 8 March,"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Composition
I would remove the speech marks around strong country on the img text since that is already quoted in prose
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Any info to add here about the musical elements themselves, rather than only the lyrical meaning?
 Done? Let me know if you want more. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"within much of the international community."" → "among much of the international community"." per the source and MOS:QUOTE
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Is [of the song] needed when you mentioned the song advocating for Judaism earlier in the sentence?
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"with old ones."" → "with old ones"." and re-invoke the ref here
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"we will understand."" → "we will understand"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Music video and promotion
Wikilink music video, although the name of the director is not sourced
 Done. Also, added source for director. Can't believe I forgot that one. Sorry! Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove speech marks around the word inspiration
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


#### Promotion
Img looks good!
This should not be a sub-section when the section is titled Music video and promotion already
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"with Isaac Herzog and Michal Herzog," → "with Isaac and Michal Herzog," since their relation is implied from the titles at the end, however shouldn't the reason for the appearance be mentioned?
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"to honor him and Mansano's friend" → "to honor him and his friend" since otherwise it sounds like a different person's friend
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"on 20 April," → "on 20 April 2023,"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


##### Hope version
Make this only a sub-section of music video and promotion, rather than a sub under a sub-section
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
I would suggest putting the last part about the only way we can win into your own words to avoid MOS:OVERQUOTE
 Done? Let me know if you want it tweaked further. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


##### In popular culture
Again, make this only a sub-section
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Is "first meet" really the most suitable way to describe the appearance?
In my opinion, yes. It was the first meet for Biles since her appearance at the 2020 Summer Olympics. It was essentially her return meet.


### Critical reception
Retitle to Reception
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


#### Israeli media and personalities
"praising the song's" → "praising its"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"wrote that the song had an" → "wrote that the song has an" for the correct tense
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"addictive pleasure."" → "addictive pleasure"." although this quote is not mentioned by the source
Fixed. I think that could be because maybe a translation issue. Let me know if you want it worded differently. The line I got that from is "עם זאת, מה שמרגיש בהאזנה הראשונה כמו כאוס לא ברור, בהאזנה שנייה והשלישית כבר הופך לתענוג פופי וממכר."
Channel 13 and Channel 12 should not be italicised
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Ynet should not be italicised
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"praised the song's mixture of multiple genres, he criticised the song" → "praised the mixture of multiple genres, he criticised it" and re-invoke [38] at the end of this sentence per direct quoting
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"he wrote that it had a" → "it had a" since stating is already used earlier in this sentence
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"from the 80s."" → "from the 80s"." per MOS:QUOTE
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove quote marks around invested and disappointed since these are general language words
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"he also admitted that he was" → "he admitted he was" per while and that already having been used
he admitted he was

"usual homes."" → "usual homes"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


#### International and Eurovision-related media
Wiwibloggs should not be italicised
Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
The ESC Bubble ranking is not sourced
My source lists the top 15 for the semi-final? ESC Bubble does their lists in an unorthodox way, to be fair; they only publish complete lists when their reviewers have released all songs. Hence, why I had to source the list from another song. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"of the year."" → "of the year"." per MOS:QUOTE
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Per WP:RSP, is BuzzFeed really considered reliable when the subject at hand is a Eurovision event and if kept remove italicisation?
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"stating that the song" → "stating that it"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"energetic minutes."" → "energetic minutes"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
BBC should not be italicised
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"vodka & Red Bulls."" → "vodka & Red Bulls"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"songs have."" → "songs have"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Commercial performance
Whether on its own or as a sub-section of Reception, this is missing from prose
Added. Let me know if you want anything else added to the section. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Eurovision Song Contest
#### Internal selection and songwriting process
The ten committee members themselves are not sourced
Added source. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"announced that Noa Kirel had" → "announced that Kirel had"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"Kirel announced the following the day that" → "Kirel announced the following day that"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"on 10 August." → "on 10 August 2022."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


#### At Eurovision
Remove wikilinks on Eurovision Song Contest 2023 and Liverpool
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Img looks good!
"with all performers wearing pink" → "all wearing pink"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove wikilink and italicisation for Ynet
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Where is the 127 points sourced?
Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"on 13 May." → "on 13 May 2023."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove wikilink on Holocaust
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"a true victory."" → "a true victory"." per MOS:QUOTE
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"out of context."" → "out of context"."
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
"the future" according" → "the future", according"
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Track listing
Good


### Charts
Good


### Release history
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks great at 23.7%!!!
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 1, 7, 12, 13, 15, 19, 20, 28, 50 and 51
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
I am unsure about the consistency issues with refs 3, 35 and 32 – either cite Mako or Channel 12, not both and do the same for every ref
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite Ynet as publisher instead on refs 4, 11, 27, 29, 38, 49, 53 and 63
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite I24News as publisher instead on refs 5, 9 and 74
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite Wiwibloggs as publisher instead on refs 10, 17, 30, 40, 41 and 57 – fix MOS:QWQ issues with 17 and 40, as well as MOS:CAPS issues with ref 30
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite Walla! Communications Ltd as publisher instead on ref 26
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Unless you can explain how this is reliable for the review of Eurovision, remove or replace ref 44 per WP:RSP
Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Remove Eurovision Song Contest from refs 56 and 68
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite Jewish News Syndicate as publisher instead on ref 71
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
ifpi.gr → IFPI Greece with the wikilink as publisher instead on ref 80
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Pipe Plötutíðindi to Félag hljómplötuframleiðenda on ref 81
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
Cite Apple Music as publisher on primary sources
 Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; I managed to get this done in the evening here in UK! --K. Peake 21:52, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
 Pass now, looks good to me! --K. Peake 08:46, 31 January 2025 (UTC)