# Talk:The Shadow of the Past

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


##### Lead
"in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"?
No, in that pair of years.
Mention Frodo's last name.
Done.


##### History
Link philologist.
Linked.
"in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"
As above.
"young cousin Bingo" Bingo? This needs a in square brackets explanation.
Glossed.
In "The crucial chapter", capitalize the races (hobbits, elfs), unless it was done intentionally?
Hey, did you miss this? Everything else is done, so as soon as this is addressed the article can be passed. AryKun (talk) 09:08, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Ah yes, done.
"protagonist, Frodo" → Add last name.
Done.


##### Plot
"The wizard Gandalf" → In other articles, I've seen you capitalize Wizard as well.
Done.
Link Isildur.
Moved link to first mention.
"a hobbit" → Capitalize.
Done.


##### Structure
I don't see "there and back again" in the Tor.com review?
Ah yes, it's in the alternative version, the same thoughts presented in a table, which I've added to the citation.


##### Misc
All the refs are reliable and spot-checks on the ones I could access found that they supported what they were used to cite.
Noted.
I would suggest adding alt text to the images, although it isn't required for GA. AryKun (talk) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
All right, added.
I think that's all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)