# Talk:Sora ga Suki!

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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 00:34, 19 January 2023 (UTC)

What can I say - I like bishounen, and I like reading about comics history, so here I am again. Should hopefully not take too long, but ping me if I haven't returned with a review a week from now.--AlexandraIDV 00:34, 19 January 2023 (UTC)


### Lead
I would expect the sequels to be mentioned in the lead - and speaking of, rewrite Noel! in title case per MOS:ALLCAPS
Done.
Do we want to mention that Montmartre is part of Paris? Same upon first mention in the plot section.
I don't think it's strictly necessary in the lede.


### Plot
I'll assume good faith on the accuracy, as I haven't read the series.


### Development
Takemiya selected Paris as the setting for the series; at the time, she had developed an interest in Paris and was collecting film soundtracks of movies set in the city.[5] As Takemiya had never been to Paris, uses the word "Paris" a lot in quick succession - I would at the very least change the last one to "As Takemiya had never been there"
Revised.
incorporate its customs and culture - I would consider switching these around, so that you can link "its culture" rather than just "culture", avoiding the impression that the link might lead to the article "culture"
Done.


### Release
I guess that this is really more of a question for that article, but I have been wondering: why do we not refer to Sanrūmu Nite as Sunroom Nite? MOS:JAPAN#General guidelines says: For transliterations from katakana, use the English spelling if available (e.g., Thunderbird (サンダーバード, Sandābādo) instead of just Sandābādo)
That's a good question, and I wasn't aware of that specific policy. If that's the case, it likely makes sense to move the page to Sunroom Nite.
The footnote doubles up on "「quotation marks」" - I really don't think you need both, and would remove the inner Japanese marks.
Done.


### Collected volumes
Seems fine.


### Sequels
Again, rewrite Noel! in title case.
Done.
Can we add a translation of "Marude Haru no Yō Ni"?
It was already there, looks like it was just hidden by some improper tagging.


### Themes and analysis
Seems fine.


### Reception and influence
Seems fine.


### Sources
All seem fine - but I would recommend ensuring that all Japanese-language sources have |language=ja added. Similarly, add {{in lang|ja}} to the end of the external link.
Done.


### Images
Not part of the GA criteria, but it would be nice to give descriptive alt text for readers with impaired vision
Done
Otherwise seems fine
Lovely article! I only had a few minor notes that I would like to see addressed, before I'm ready to promote the article to GA. I will put the review on hold for the customary seven days - please ping me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!--AlexandraIDV 02:43, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

@Alexandra IDV: Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 05:39, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
@Morgan695: Thank you for this - I will go ahead and promote the article now!--AlexandraIDV 06:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)