# Talk:Ontario Highway 70

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ontario Highway 70/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 03:11, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Floydian τ ¢
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 03:11, 12 January 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: .
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Check for WP:WTW:  None 
Check for WP:EMBED:   Done

The table is standard in such articles. Checked other FAs - Ontario Highway 401 & Ontario Highway 416

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  very good Checked other FAs - Ontario Highway 401 & Ontario Highway 416

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done  (PD) (Cross-checked with other FAs - Ontario Highway 401 & Ontario Highway 416.) 

As per the above checklist, the issues are:

Include exact points in the first sentence of the lead.
Lead should be expanded to Provide an accessible overview and Relative emphasis.
Fix short paragraphs. Remove Bruce Peninsula subsection or expand it, the paragraph is too short.

This article is a very promising GA nominee. I'm delighted to see your work here. I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:38, 13 January 2014 (UTC)

Done
Beefed it up, not sure if it's enough
I've added some missing info about the early history of the road in the Bruce Peninsula. Fortunately it was already written over at Ontario Highway 6. I've also downgraded the subsections, but I feel the history of the two highways should have some separation, even though the recent incarnation doesn't have quite the colourful history.
Once again, thanks for taking on this pileup of reviews. I'm certain to have some more up in the coming weeks. Cheers, Floydian τ ¢ 01:31, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
My pleasure. Sure. Leave a msg in case I miss, it it's OK with you. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:22, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:22, 16 January 2014 (UTC)