# Talk:Rodney Parker

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added cats
"Francis T. Nicholls High School" PFA has a different one
Was Nicholls per [1].
Can you add that source to that sentence? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:54, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
remove maulers from lead or add a line saying he was also a member of the maulers becauss it doesnt look like he played any games? Ill keave it up to you  Done
See later comment.
"September, to replace" remove comma  Done
Done.
"football..." i cant figure out if there should be a period after that or not?  Done
That's how the source had it - I think its better if it stays.
"He impressed in the minicamp was invited" change to and was invited  Done
Done.
"where made" where he made  Done
Done.
"Ron Jaworski then" remove ron  Done
Done.
in the video caption "Parker's touchdown which was called back is shown from 5:58–6:48" put comma after touchdown and after back  Done
Done.
"quarterback Ron Jaworski" remove ron  Done
Done.
"had gotten past" change gotten to something else probably  Done
What wording do you think would be best?
I don't know. Let's just leave it.
"In week nine, against " remove comma  Done
Done.
"a 10–6 record, before" remove comma  Done
Done.
having PHI next to each other in the stats column makes it look like he played for the eagles for 3 years  Done
Changed the stars abbreviation.
are we sure he was even with the maulers? I have seen those empty usfl profiles on statscrew (formerly Just Sports Stats) before and i am not sure what they are because some other people still havd games played listed.  Done
Thinking about it - I decided to remove the Maulers as I was unable to find any other sources confirming that he was with them.
adjust maulers row in table if we change anything.  Done
Done.
i think maybe we should remove falcons and eagles 1982 from the stats table because i dont think we usually put offseason teams in the tables. I think we onlt put "DNP" if they were active or injured reserve.  Done
Removed.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 10:45, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:48, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
@BeanieFan11: only thing left is can you add that source for the high school to the article WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:55, 27 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: Done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:07, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:08, 27 October 2023 (UTC)