# Talk:Tala tank

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 17:57, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
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### Prose
#### Lede
It was inaugurated in May 1911 by the Lieutenant Governor of Bengal after two years of construction. - weird wording. Probably best to start with when the project was started first. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:25, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:47, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
No need to link major landmasses like the United Kingdom Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:25, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:46, 17 July 2021 (UTC)


#### General
Pumped water supply in the city dated back to 1820. - you need to define things in the body even if you say them in the lede - so cover where you are talking about. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
It's in the history section...  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:52, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Sure, but you say "the city" without explaining what that is. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:03, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
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Probably worth mentioning why were are talking about the British. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
Sorry, can you kindly elaborate?  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:12, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Pulta (now Palta - you can just link, you don't need to say what it is now. This happens a few times in the article. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
I mentioned the current name since the readers might think of it as a spelling mistake.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:09, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Engineer of Calcutta Corporation (KMC) - why KMC? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
During the British era, it was Calcutta Corporation. Then it became Calcutta Municipal Corporation. And after the name was changed, it became Kolkata Municipal Corporation. Also, today is popularly known as KMC only.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:07, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
around 7 bigha[6] or 3–4 acres - are these the same thing? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
Yes. "bigha" is a very popular local unit for measuring land area. But there's no exact conversion rate for that.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:04, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Mukherjee and Co. - better way to say this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
I guess no, because "Mukherjee and Co." is a name  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:01, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
The reinforced concrete foundation - can we rearrange to not have the SEAOFBLUE? Maybe "the foundation, made from reinforced concrete..." Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:50, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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and Middlesbrough in the United Kingdom,[ - Middlesbrough (and Leeds) is in England Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:33, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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US$1.55 million in 1911.[ - needs inflation template. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:33, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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Indo-Pak war of 1947–1948 and 1965.[ - was this two different wars? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:33, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
yes  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:59, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
₹25 crore - you link here, but you've already mentioned core. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
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You also duplicate this link a little later. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
The Government of India is bearing 33% - is this still ongoing, or is this the wrong tense? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
It's still ongoing.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:54, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
The largest overhead water tank[13] or reservoir was constructed on the 250-year-old[27] Barrackpore Trunk Road. - why the refs in the middle of the sentence like this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
[13] for the "largest" and [27] for "250 year old"  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:57, 17 July 2021 (UTC)


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:57, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
Lee Vilenski, Addressed concerns stated above  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  16:23, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

Maybe not easy to do at the moment but when convenient I suggest as well as a better overall photo that a pic of the plaque in https://www.ice.org.uk/news-and-insight/latest-ice-news/field-trip-to-the-largest-tank-at-tala would be good. And if possible one from the same point as the old drawing. Chidgk1 (talk) 11:34, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

@Chidgk1, Most probably I will visit the tank and click some pictures by this week.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  16:28, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Also, found a better structural plan of the tank. Will replace the existing one  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  16:35, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
@Chidgk1 Visited the tank today. But, due to the ongoing festival, couldnt enter the complex and most of the areas were covered with banners, decorative lights. Photos I got: c:File:Tala tank 1.jpg ... c:File:Tala tank 8.jpg  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  13:00, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
Glad you got out and about and I hope you enjoyed the festival. I think a brightly colored festival against a drab tank might have worked - but difficult to take. I see it is also tricky to picture because of the surrounding walls and electricity poles. I think 2  gives a good idea of the height and metal supports - maybe crop out a little from the bottom and right but maybe leave the top left for local colour and explain it in brackets in the caption. Or maybe 8 (slightly cropped) if you prefer. Anyway both of your 2 and 8 are better for this article than the current top pic so that could be moved down or removed. If you need me to check alt-text on that or any others you decide to add then ping me. Chidgk1 (talk) 13:29, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
Unless there is any relationship with the trains I think the pic with the guy is a better longshot - it should be cropped from the sides, top and perhaps a little from the bottom. 
Maybe if you tell the renovation company you are improving the article they might let you have one or 2 interior pics Chidgk1 (talk) 16:41, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
I was waiting for your opinion on the images. The uploader of the current infobox image was lucky to get that shot. At that time the bridge was just demolished and was easily accessible. Otherwise its very difficult to get a full image of the tank. Its massive! I will crop it. And will try to visit another day, after the festive season is over.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:39, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

I see the article is in 2 languages so far. With all the recent improvements to the English article I guess it may be translated into other Indian languages in future. So it may be worth putting the infobox info into Wikidata to make it easier for new translations. To find out whether it is worth the effort I suggest experimenting to check which language(s) pick up the Wikidata when Wikipedia just has the empty infobox like {{Infobox building}}. I have found with other infoboxes that some languages do pick up Wikidata for some infoboxes and some don't. Chidgk1 (talk) 13:52, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Duh - I just checked for English and it only picks up the map Chidgk1 (talk) 13:57, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

So the principle of the pumping is still as described in cite 16? If so I think we should explain that in the article as it is not really covered in the article I linked to from "balancer" and most people won't understand "balancer".
I touched on energy storage before and you said it might be feasible. But perhaps you think the pumps are out of scope for this article? If they run the pumps at times of lowest electricity demand can they get cheap electricity? Or in future when the fossil fuel power stations have been replaced by low carbon power - presumably solar - if they pump when solar power exceeds electricity demand can they save much money? Or the pumps are not powerful enough for that? Or as the tank can hold 2 days supply could they do a deal where they get cheap power and keep it fairly full most of the time in return for an hour or so of Energy demand management whenever the electricity company is near a blackout? Chidgk1 (talk) 16:58, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Cite 34 http://aitcofficial.org/aitc/chief-minister-inaugurates-new-pipeline-project-at-tala-reiterates-on-recycle-wastes-to-protect-ganga-pollution/ gives me "access denied". Maybe it is only available in certain countries? And cite 35 is 404 "not found" for me Chidgk1 (talk) 17:19, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

@Chidgk1 Cite 34 is a website of a political party. Thats why it isnt available outside India. Added a url access level "Limited" tag. And cite 35, they are doing something with their website for the last few days.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  05:41, 18 October 2021 (UTC)