# Talk:Romania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2006

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020 MWright96 (talk) 08:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"through the national selection Selecția Națională 2006" - it should be made more clearer that it was a national selection competition
"Romania ultimately reached fourth place in the contest's Grand Final," - the date of the Grand Final of Eurovision 2006 is missing here


### Selecția Națională 2006
"a competition in order to select their entrant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2006." - the words "in order" are redundant in this sentence
"was eventually disqualified from the contest due to having received television and radio airplay" - the text in bold should be written as due to the song for clarity and completeness
"to 1 October 2005, TVR's cutoff date." - to TVR's cutoff date of 1 October 2005.
"by Heaven were voluntarily withdrawn" - make it clear that the performers voluntarily withdrew their songs as stated in România Liberă


### Indiggo controversy
"In a late-night talk show following the winner's announcement," - the announcement of the winner,
"they based the accusation on reports that their voting line was continuously busy and so people were unable to vote for them when they called." - , preventing people from voting for them when they called.


### Promotion
"Starting with 20 April 2006,"  - correct saying; should be on or from


### At Eurovision
"the show was aired on TVR," - broadcast is more formal
"which yielded in various changes" - saw various changes
"selected countries, except the host country" - try to not repeat the same word close together in the same sentence
"qualified to the final due to their top 11 result the preceding year." - how about result in the 2005 contest. instead?
"A reported €160,000 were" - was


### Voting
"Below is a breakdown of points awarded to Romania in the Grand Final, as well as by Romania in the semi-final" - try not to repeat the country's name in the same sentence
"Romania finished in fourth position, being awarded a total of 172 points including 12 by Moldova and Spain, as well as ten by" - 172 points, including 12 by Moldova and Spain, and ten from  Cyprus, Israel, Malta and Portugal.
"For the Grand Final points announcement," - For the announcement of its points in the Grand Final,


### References
The spelling to EscToday in Reference 22 should be spelt as ESCToday for consistency
Reference 25 is missing the date it was published
Will put the review on hold to give the nominator time to address/respond to the issues raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:27, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

@MWright96: I have solved everything here too. Thank you, again, very much for your reviews. All the best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:45, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
@Cartoon network freak: Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:47, 2 April 2020 (UTC)