# Talk:Prince Rupert of the Rhine

Surely calling a non-reigning Palatine Wittelsbach "Duke of Bavaria" is taking recognition of titular claims to excess.Septentrionalis 02:33, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Duke of Bavaria was used by all agnates of the palatine house of Wittelsbach, much like Duke of Brunswick and Lunenburg for all members of the house of Hanover and Duke of Wuerttemberg for remaining dynasts of the house of Wuerttemberg. Prince of the Rhine is, at best, an invention or courtesy title. Charles 02:36, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
On the contrary, it is English usage, which "Duke of Bavaria" is not.Septentrionalis 03:27, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
Why would he really be a prince of the Rhine when the family were counts-palatine of the Rhine? I am not saying it isn't English usage. I am saying that it factually was not a true title. However, the title duke of Bavaria is a real title and that is why it is included. Wikipedia practice is to show legal names and titles. That is what was done with Rupert. Charles 03:33, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
Whatever the case, some kind of explanatory note in the article might be in order.  I looked at the articles for "Duke of Bavaria" and the list of counts palatine of the Rhine and Rupert is not listed in either, so it might be nice to explain what's going on.  Ahkond (talk) 05:45, 24 January 2010 (UTC)
You won't find him because he was a junior member of the family and not its head. It is in the same category as the title of duke for all members of the house of Wettin (Herzog zu Sachsen) or title landgrave for all members of the House of Hesse. This is from an era when most dynasties used the same title for all members below the rank of Grand Duke or Elector. Seven Letters 18:08, 21 September 2010 (UTC)

As per: [1]

Between 1673 and 1679 the Admiralty Board was composed of between twelve and sixteen Privy Counsellors who served without salaries.
The next Lord High Admiral after the Duke of York (1661-1673) was Prince George (1702-1708).
Prince Rupert could be styled First Lord of succesive Admiralty Boards ( 1673, 1674, 1677 ).
Let's not comment on the "humiliating failure" until we have the facts straight.
Hoped to have gone fishing,

a salty
(Lunarian 12:40, 1 November 2006 (UTC))

According to Stephen Turnbull in his book, The Ottoman Empire, 1326 - 1699, a son of Prince Rupert fought at the Great Turkish War in the name of the Archduke of Austria. But this article doesn't even mention a wife or mistress - something that is hard to believe given the fact that his cousin Charles II was quite the hedonist, with all due respect (I support the Monarchy).Tourskin (talk) 03:29, 28 December 2007 (UTC)

Strange that there's no mention of it or his role in its instigation and yet the illustration from the pamphlet features it. Jatrius (talk) 21:19, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

Have added in a bit in the extension. Hchc2009 (talk) 19:06, 18 February 2010 (UTC)

I've gone through and fleshed the article out a bit, and added in-line citations. It'll probably need some copy editing, however.
Hchc2009 (talk) 19:28, 15 February 2010 (UTC)
It looks like it's shaping up well.Jatrius (talk) 20:08, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

I have an issue with the following text:

The Four Days Battle was at best a draw, but the St. James's Day Battle the following month allowed Rupert and Monk to use the same tactics to inflict heavy damage on the Dutch, resulting in a significant English victory.[127]
Rupert also played a prominent role in the Third Anglo-Dutch War (1672–4).
Not mentioned is the Raid on the Medway, the article of which lists Prince Rupert of the Rhine as commander. For sake of completeness this should be included as the text now might leave the reader to think that the Second Anglo-Dutch War ended with "a significant English victory" which isn't exactly what happened.
BTW: Are only print references acceptable for the article? 82.170.244.87 (talk) 21:01, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

On-line references are acceptable on wikipedia, but should be a reliable source - i.e. "reliable, third-party, published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy". If a site is self-published (i.e. the author has placed the material on the web themselves, as opposed to it being peer reviewed etc.), you'd probably want to argue on the talk page about why the author had particular credentials to be trusted on that particular topic. A site which lists its sources (e.g. where each bit of information has come from) is usually given more credence than one that just claims particular facts.Hchc2009 (talk) 21:10, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

Just curious about how Prince Rupert redirects to here.  Is he a well-known in British history?  Just curious how it stacks up against Prince Rupert, British Columbia.  A Google search has the city and local information coming as the first few results for me.  It's a city of 10,000 people and a reasonably well-known port in Canada, but I'm not sure how well it's known in the English speaking world. - Wmcduff (talk) 21:31, 15 December 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm English-speaking and I'd never heard of Prince Rupert the place until now. Whereas I first heard of Prince Rupert the person when learning about the Civil War in primary school (age ten or eleven). Opera hat (talk) 23:20, 15 December 2011 (UTC)
Seems to be location based.  Europe (and England specifically, I suspect) are more likely to know Prince Rupert the historic figure, while Canadians are going to think of the place.  And someone from the United States is unlikely to have heard of either, I'd bet (well, not counting history/geography buffs).  As there are more English than Canadians, the redirect seems reasonable. - 69.176.176.99 (talk) 17:39, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
I'm American, I've heard of the man but never heard of the town in BC.  There is also (Prince) Rupert's Land too. Hot Stop talk-contribs 17:49, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
Rupert's Land was always known by that name.  Prince Rupert the city might be looked for by simply the city name, however, thus the adjustment to the disambiguation. - 69.176.176.99 (talk) 22:09, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Prince Rupert of the Rhine/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sabrebd (talk · contribs) 12:13, 29 July 2012 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article over the next few days. Opening impressions are that this is high quality work, well illustrated and largely well sourced. The only immediate issue I can see is the lack of sourcing for the tv, film and literature section. This would also probably be better as prose rather than a list under WP:EMBED, not least because it stops fly by additions of trivial instances. I will give detailed feedback over the next few days.--SabreBD (talk) 12:13, 29 July 2012 (UTC)
My style of review is to go through the prose in detail and make suggestions, please note a lot of these minor points are advisory and would not be a reason for failing GA. However, they will probably come up at FA.--SabreBD (talk) 09:05, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Well-written:
(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
A general point. Is this article using British English - there seems to be a mixture of spellings.
It should be - which ones are off? Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
I spotted "organize". If I see any more I will note them here.--SabreBD (talk) 15:28, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 11:19, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
Lead:
Very minor, but for consistency the English Civil War needs dates. Otherwise the lead is clear and balanced.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Early life and exile:
Opening section: born "during the Thirty Years' War": given that its thirty years long this does not help a lot. I would delete. However, there is a need here to explain that these events are the beginning of the TYW, as this would not be clear to a casual reader.
Amended - see if this works.  Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
That works for me.--SabreBD (talk) 15:28, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
date of the battle of the White Mountain would be useful (it reads as if 1619 not 1620)
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
"By the early 1630s this appeared closer than ever". Some redundancy here. Could be just "By the early 1630s this appeared close". This and the two surrounding sentences need some simplification.
Some ce has been applied - see if it works. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Looks good now.--SabreBD (talk) 15:28, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
battle of Lutzen does not need a pipe link. WP:EGG suggests the whole phrase should be linked or this looks like a link to the place not the battle.
Should be fixed now. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:46, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Teenage years
At the moment an overlink of Thirty Years' War, Linz and English Civil War in this article
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 11:21, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
"As time went on" - beginning of final paragraph. A redundant phrase. I would delete.
Gone. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Too many alsos in the final paragraph.
Culled Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Career during the First English Civil War
"He had considerable success during the early years of the war, his drive, determination and experience of European techniques bringing him early victories" Some redundancy here (two lots of early)
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
"finally found" - just found will do
Removed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Powicke Bridge, worth mentioning that this is usually seen as the first real encounter of the war - a casual reader might not know this.
Added.
"Some of the weaknesses of Rupert's character began to display themselves, however, when he quarrelled with his fellow infantry commander, Lindsey." The however should be at the start of the sentence or removed (otherwise it reads like the second clause contradicts the first).
Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Final paragraph - "in fact" - redundant.
Removed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:50, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
Later stages, 1644-46
"Rupert had quarrelled with Lindsey at Edgehill:" not sure why we need this again and it overcomplicates the sentence. but perhaps I am missing something.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
"Digby was a classic courtier, with a "darting wit and fluent tongue";" Probably enough to know he is a favourite.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
On the Marston Moor campaign, probably too many adjectives: "suddenly", "surprise". "With his sheer speed" might be seen as hyperbole.
Reduced. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
I would have a comma after Leicester and before "but".
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
Is it worth saying that the battle destroyed the king's main army (at least the infantry)? Might help casual readers understand the significance of the loss.
"Earlier interpretations of this event have focused" tense confusion, should be "Earlier interpretations of this event focused"
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:11, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
Reputation
Boye, poodle and Marston Moor have already been linked,
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:14, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
Career during the Second English War and Interregnum
Pipe link Holy Roman Emperor to Ferdinand III. Ferdinand has already been linked, so this may count as an overlink.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
Digby, Louis XIV, Thirty Year's War are all overlinked.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
"steadily losing vessels to their pursuers;" seems to be a sentence ending in a semi-colon.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
"The second phase of the campaign then began, as Rupert crossed back into the Atlantic and, during 1651, cutting west to the Azores capturing vessels as he went." - a confusing sentence, may be better to break this up, e.g.: "The second phase of the campaign then began. Rupert crossed back into the Atlantic and, during 1651, cut west to the Azores, capturing vessels as he went."
Changed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
The next sentence also has a lot of clauses and should probably be split in two.
Changed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
"catching Malaria", normally it would be "contracting Malaria"
Agreed! Changed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
"By bad luck, one of Rupert's notes". Delete the redundant "By bad luck
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:56, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
Career following the Restoration
Royal Navy is linked twice
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:48, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
"The French role in the conflict proved a problem when Charles turned to the appointment of an admiral, however; Rupert's objection to the French alliance was well known, and accordingly the King appointed the Duke of York to the role instead" A bit unclear, may need breaking into two sentences.
Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:48, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
"landing an amphibious army" its an amphibious operation or just landing an army. The bit about planning seems redundant and this sentence should probably be split in two.
Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:48, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
"The result was the Battle of Schooneveld in June and the Battle of Texel in August" - results were?
"selection of officer" officers? This sentence could also split up for clarity.
Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:48, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
Later life
"his primary attentions to North America", could just be - "his attention turned to North America"
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 15:05, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
"although Hughes appears to have held out reciprocating" should be "although Hughes appears to have held out from reciprocating"
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 15:05, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Too many "ultimatelys" in the death section.
Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 15:05, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
Early life and exile:
"enjoying the famous palace gardens": famous may be seen as WP:PUFF and thinking about this, I can see the library is important, but are the gardens that significant to his late life?
I've removed the famous bit; the gardens were renowned as a marvel across Europe (until the war destroyed them), so I've left in for now. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:54, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
I think this looks fine now.--SabreBD (talk) 15:28, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research:
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
Generally fine. A minor point is that p. should be followed by a space according to every example at WP:CITE. Normally all Harvard references give a date, but not really a GA issue.
(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose); and
Early life and exile:
No citation for Rupert's height.
Teenage years
His refusal to convert at the end of the penultimate paragraph of section and the end of the final paragraph are not covered by citations
Career during the First English Civil War
"an image which has endured over the years" is not covered by a citation.
Discussion of advance to London. Does Wedgewood discuss both views? She is the only source. From memory, this debate continues after her work. I am fine with who is saying what being clear from footnotes, but at FA someone may call "who" if it is not clear in the text.
Career following the Restoration
No citation for Battle of Solebay.
No citation for Rupert's retirement.
Later life
Obviously statements tagged for lack of citations here need them.
(c) it contains no original research.
Not an issue
Broad in its coverage:
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and
Very good coverage
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
Seems balanced to me
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
Fine
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
Cannot see any
Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content; and
Most are copyright free. File:Prince Rupert, the Great Executioner.jpg needs transferring to the commons
(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
These are fine.

Lofa, I haven't seen any sources linking the Prince to the Maafa, only to the early slave trade. Can you give a source that does? If so, very happy that we incorporate it. Hchc2009 (talk) 19:03, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

I've changed the first ref to 'Spencer' to a full reference to Charles Spencer, 2008, Prince Rupert: The Last Cavalier as this seems indicated by the Bibliography; can someone confirm that this is correct?  Also, if someone could confirm that this is the same source used in Margaret Hughes I'd be grateful.  GoldenRing (talk) 04:41, 8 December 2014 (UTC)

There's no need to change the citation style here, since as you say, as it is already listed in the bibliography at the bottom of the article. Hchc2009 (talk) 06:30, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
Yes, fair enough.  I'm used to the non-bibliography style of citations and it confused me for a bit.  GoldenRing (talk) 07:14, 8 December 2014 (UTC)
No prob's. On the morganic issue, it sounds a plausible enough statement, but, like you, I can't think of any sources which have actually said it. I'll have a hunt around, but if not, it should probably come out of Peg Hughes' article. Hchc2009 (talk) 14:53, 8 December 2014 (UTC)

"By the age of three he could speak some English, Czech and French, and mastered German while still young . . . ."

Born in Prague to German(sort of) and English(sort of) parents, and raised in The Netherlands, but in an atypical milieu, what was his first language? Is the answer known; is the question even meaningful? {The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 185.74.232.130 (talk) 16:20, 13 November 2015 (UTC)

First sentence of this section of the article: "Rupert spent the beginning of his teenage years in England between the courts of The Hague and his uncle King Charles I, before being captured and imprisoned in Linz during the middle stages of the Thirty Years' War." The Hague is not in England. If this means that he divided his time between The Hague and London, it should say so, not that he spent his time in England.Robocon1 (talk) 11:52, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Putting "Rupert, Count Palatine of the Rhine, Duke of Bavaria, Duke of Cumberland, Earl of Holderness" is inelegant and unnecessary.
To exaggerate to make a point. See for example the article Arthur Wellesley, 1st Duke of Wellington if we were to include all his titles as they were listed at this death the first sentence would be

It does not help to do this because the lead should to be a summary of the article content, and most importantly the first sentence or two need to be succinct, because that is what is returned by a search engine. -- PBS (talk) 16:34, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

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Pepys says "From him I went to see a great match at tennis, between Prince Rupert and one Captain Cooke, against Bab. May and the elder Chichly; where the King was, and Court; and it seems are the best players at tennis in the nation." [2]
I think this indicates he holds Rupert as *among* the best four players, not specifically ranked, especially as 4th. Does anyone have the text from Spencer ranking him 4th? 190.102.1.177 (talk) 14:47, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Just replying to myself, Spencer indeed agrees:
"...he was excellent at real tennis and was rated by Pepys as one of the four finest..."
I'm going to update the article. 190.102.24.138 (talk) 22:55, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

There is this sentence which says, "In 1673, Rupert was urged by Charles Louis to return home, marry and father an heir to the Palatinate, as it appeared likely that Charles Louis's own son would not survive childhood."
However, on Charles Louis' own page, it says his wife never got pregnant. So what son is this sentence talking about? 2600:1700:BC01:9B0:149B:EEDD:A71A:AC9A (talk) 20:46, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Considering we're now in the third decade of the 21st century, I think in terms of calendars the English-speaking world is well past using Old Style (O.S.) and New Style (N.S.) to reflect differences between the Julian calendar and Gregorian calendar.
A pretension that leaps off the page in the lede of this article. Is it truly necessary to inform the reader that there is a 10-day discrepancy of his birth and death dates (depending on the calendar being used)? Wouldn't it be simpler/neater to write a template/bot that when a cursor is hovered over a date, converts N.S. to O.S. instead of this long-hand, long-winded verbosity! Or to be even more prosaic, "no one cares". And without explanation: confusing.

Prince Rupert of the Rhine, Duke of Cumberland,  (17 December 1619 (O.S.) [27 December 1619 (N.S.)] – 29 November 1682 (O.S.) [9 December 1682 (N.S)])
146.90.208.196 (talk) 10:04, 10 September 2024 (UTC)