# Talk:Spike Albrecht

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Reviewer: FairyTailRocks (talk · contribs) 23:14, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Quick-fail assessment
The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability. - 
The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. - 
There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including {{cleanup}}, {{wikify}}, {{NPOV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{fact}}, {{clarifyme}}, or similar tags. - 
The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars. - 
The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint. - 

I may start this week, and just give me a few days because I have an exam on Monday. Thanks! FairyTailRocks (talk) 06:54, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

Lead
Link "guard" and "sophomore" to its own article.
Although sophomore is an unusual thing to link I have done so.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
He is playing his sophomore season for the 2013–14 team. to He is playing his sophomore season for the 2013–14 squad or lineup Avoid redundancy.
Fixed another way.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:43, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
Replace "IN" to its whole name.
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:45, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
Remove "see" in (see video below), per WP:REDEX#B.
Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:47, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
Don't use currently, as that is conducive to the article growing out of date.
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:53, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
Early life
Link "senior" and "freshman" to its own article
I also find these to be odd links, but I have linked them.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:00, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
What is the meaning of AAA? I assume that it has its own article here. Wikilink it if possible
In high school sports, for statewide competition, schools are divided by enrollment size. States typically use one of three designation systems. Class A, B, C, D, etc; Class 1A, 2A, 3A, 4A, etc; or Class A, AA, AAA, AAAA, etc. I don't see a proper link.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:07, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
I know the meaning of MVP but some readers doesn't know it. Replace to its whole name.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:09, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
What is AAU?
Linked and spelled out.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
College career
Albrecht had a modest role with the 2012–13 Wolverines team never scoring more than 7 points in a game before the NCAA Tournament. Can you make this sentence neutral? Seems like WP:EDITORIALIZING to me.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:44, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
In the regional finals on March 31 against Florida to In the regional finals last March 31 against Florida
In 2 weeks that won't even be true. That change does not even make sense.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:16, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Following the game, Albrecht gained notoriety for tweeting with reigning Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue cover model and Michigan fan Kate Upton about her attendance at the game. to Following the match... Again, avoid redundancy.
Redundancy eliminated.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:24, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
On January 22, 2014, against (#10) Iowa Albrecht made his first career start.. to On January 22, 2014, against (#10 seed) Iowa, Albrecht made his first career start.. Add a comma, and link seed to Seed (sports)
This was a ranking and not a seeding.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:26, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
During the Michigan–Michigan State rivalry game on January 25 against the (#3) 2013–14 Spartans to During the Michigan–Michigan State rivalry game last January 25 against the (#3 seed) 2013–14 Spartans
This would add obsolescence to the sentence. In 10 months I would have to change it back. That is not a good idea. It should be clear that this paragraph is about the 2013-14 season.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Infobox
Minor issue on the image caption, Albrecht giving the three-point shot signal at the 2013 NCAA Tournament against Louisville during his memorable April 8 performance. to Albrecht giving the three-point shot signal at the 2013 NCAA Tournament against Louisville during his performance
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:37, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Upon re-reading the article per my previous suggestions, it looks good, however, I will do one final check against the GA criteria.
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
Improved here
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
I think we are OK here.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
Improved here.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
Good.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Passed
Overall: Congrats! You have promoted the article for GA!
Pass/Fail: