# Talk:Soviet destroyer Strogy (1939)

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 03:00, 14 January 2019 (UTC)

Taking a look. —Ed!(talk) 03:00, 14 January 2019 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria) (see here for this contributor's history of GA reviews)
It is reasonably well written:
Dup links, dab links and external links tools all show no problems. Copyvio tool returns green.
It is factually accurate and verifiable:
Pass Offline references accepted in good faith. Cursory check of Google Books shows references that back up source material here.
It is broad in its coverage:
Not Yet
"Strogy and several of her sisters were rebuilt as Project 32 rescue and decontamination ships" -- Might be worth it to mention which ones were converted. Was there ever a purpose-built class for this purpose?
Seems a little out of bounds for a ship article and better discussed in the class article. Not to my knowledge.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
"she received two direct hits from an artillery battery on 26 November, killing one and wounding two sailors." -- Any indication of ship damage as well?
Added.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
"expended 1167 and 979 130 mm shells in 1942 and 1943, respectively. ... She expended a total of 4,669 shells..." -- consistency needed in the article as to commas or none in larger figures.
Good catch.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
Modifications indicates believed obsolescence but might be good to add in Postwar service where it can be chronological. If possible, might be good to indicate what advances/classes supplanted this one.
By this time the Soviets had built 10 Ognevoy-class and 70 Skory-class DDs, so it seems pretty obvious, but my sources do not specifically say why they thought the Type 7Us were obsolete.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
It follows the neutral point of view policy:
Pass Multiple references given an appropriate balance between them.
It is stable:
Pass No problems there.
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
Pass One image tagged PD where appropriate.
Other:
On Hold Pending a few minor things. —Ed!(talk) 03:57, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
Pass Thanks as always! —Ed!(talk) 00:31, 15 January 2019 (UTC)