# Talk:Rhodesia at the 1928 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 11:21, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
Taking, will review soon. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 11:21, 16 October 2016 (UTC)


### Review
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##### 1a
Per MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD unbold "Southern Rhodesia" and "1928 Summer Olympics"
"were allowed by the International Olympic Committee to" → "were allowed, by the International Olympic Committee, to"
When mentioning Malta, link to Malta at the 1928 Summer Olympics not Malta at the Olympics
"received by bye" → "received a bye"


#### Overall
Short but good article. Putting on hold for now. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 05:45, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

@Yellow Dingo: Thanks for reviewing - I hadn't realised about the bolding; I'm going to go back to the other articles I've recently taken to GA and de-bold those too. Miyagawa (talk) 09:38, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
I should have also said - I've made those changes you suggested! :) Miyagawa (talk) 09:38, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
Ok Miyagawa looks good. I'm happy to pass this article. Well done! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:42, 17 October 2016 (UTC)