# Talk:Tell the Vision

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tell the Vision/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Like we agreed. – zmbro (talk) 12:37, 1 October 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
No recording dates/ranges?
Not that is known of, sorry. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Does drill apply to both versions? Jw
The NPR review also calls it drill; I have mentioned this in prose now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Shouldn't all writers be linked the first time?
See WP:OVERLINK to understand why some are not linked here. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Shouldn't West just be labeled as "West" in producers?
This is not a track listing; remember Template:Infobox song. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
A choir from what?
I did some research into this now, but unfortunately I can't find anything regarding where the choir are sampled from. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)


### Background and development
Looks good


### Music and lyrics
Same questions from above related to this section apply here
See previous. --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Rest looks good


### Release and reception
Any reviews for the Donda version?
 Done I have added some now --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)


### Commercial performance
Looks good


### Credits and personnel
Looks good


### Charts
Looks good


### Notes and references
I would add a source for the note just to be safe
 Done --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Make sure instances of the album titles are italicized throughout
 Done apart from Tidal refs --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Rest looks good


### Final thoughts
Very well done overall, don't have too many complaints. Should be a GA in no time! – zmbro (talk) 14:00, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
Zmbro Thank you, I have covered everything now! --K. Peake 12:42, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
Fantastic. Happy to  Pass – zmbro (talk) 13:18, 2 October 2021 (UTC)