# Talk:Typhoon Bess (1982)

Intro, picture, impact, and more organization in general. Hurricanehink 15:12, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

I'm going to get a picture on this week! Icelandic Hurricane #12 15:14, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
Don't worry. I'm adding some more info as we speak. Hurricanehink 15:48, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

This page is all depending on one source. We need to add additional citations and reliable sources on this page. Jeffrey Gu (talk) 18:16, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
This article isn't edited by anyone else for at least the past 2 months! We'd better hustle up. Jeffrey Gu (contribs) 01:09, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:38, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Hello Yellow Evan, I am going to be reviewing this article today. Luckily my issues with this article are just a bunch of minor things. I may add more stuff later, just so you know.--12george1 (talk) 19:38, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

Just curious (Curious George :P), where does this typhoon rank when it comes to cost of damage in Japan? I'm not real familiar with the basin, but I don't think I have seen very many typhoons in Japan cause over $1 billion USD in damage.
It's likely up there, but I don't like making those kind of templates since there 1) ranky and 2) a pain in the ass. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
I looked myself and couldn't find anything, so I'm gonna let this slide.--12george1 (talk) 23:02, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
"before it briefly turned southwest, After turning north-northwest" - That comma should be a period
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
"and later merged with a low pressure area atop of the Sea of Japan." - What day did this happen on?
Added. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
"Typhoon Bess cut threw a 400 km (250 mi) swath that included the most populated portion of the nation." - Since this is a new paragraph, you should name which country this is in
Added. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
" the typhoon attained a minimum pressure of" - Wikilink minimum pressure to barometric pressure
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
"Many cars and trucks were stranded due to mudslides.[17] Air traffic was paralyzed.[18]" --> "Many cars and trucks were stranded due to mudslides;[17] air traffic was also paralyzed.[18]"
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
"Additionally, 25 ships ran aground or were washed away.[19] Two boats sunk.[6]" - Merge these two sentences
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Is there anymore aftermath, or was that all you could find?
All I could find. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
The names of the authors on reference #5 needs to be changed. They should be: Kenneth R. Knapp; Michael C. Kruk; David H. Levinson; Howard J. Diamond; Charles J. Neumann.
Good now? YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Not done.--12george1 (talk) 23:02, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
This was fixed during a discussion on IRC--12george1 (talk) 23:23, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
The publisher for reference #21 doesn't make sense. Instead of "United States National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's Office of Oceanic and Atmospheric Research", I think it should be "United States National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's Atlantic Oceanographic and Meteorological Laboratory". Remember to remove "Atlantic Oceanographic and Meteorological Laboratory" from the |author= parameter.
Changed. YE Pacific Hurricane 22:40, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
This wasn't fixed either--12george1 (talk) 23:02, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
This was fixed during a discussion on IRC--12george1 (talk) 23:23, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Alright, I am going to be passing this article and listing it as a GA.--12george1 (talk) 23:23, 3 March 2014 (UTC)