# Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
"in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
"held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"


### Background
Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
"for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
"in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink


### Before Eurovision
#### Internal selection
Video is a neat addition!
"a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source
This is covered by WP:CALC, similar to how we keep using "x days later". Grk1011 (talk) 15:05, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
"On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
Remove target on snippets
Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
Wikilink pre-order
Target dance to Dance music
"Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
"the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
"program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
Remove comma after "Maybe"
"so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
"of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets
I don't understand this one? Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Grk1011 I meant to put add the release year in brackets. --K. Peake 16:04, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Done. Grk1011 (talk) 17:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)


#### Promotion
"they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
"staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
"staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
"in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."


### At Eurovision
Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
"was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
"for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
Img looks good!
"she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
"with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
"was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014#Grand final
"San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
[1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
"In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
"marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
"both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
"were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"


#### Voting
"of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014." → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, respectively."
"Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013 Michele Perniola." → "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013, Michele Perniola."


##### Points awarded to San Marino
The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)


##### Points awarded by San Marino
Good


##### Detailed jury voting results
The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits


### References
Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%!!!
Nice job using the tool to archive!
Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 27


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am going to sleep soon so this won't be a same day pass like your others unfortunately. --K. Peake 21:30, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
I have made the requested edits. One question above though. Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Grk1011 Sorry about the initial confusion before I cleared it up,  Pass! --K. Peake 18:00, 8 February 2021 (UTC)