# Talk:Rei II

Hey there TeenAngels1234, I'm copyediting this article as requested at GOCE. Would you mind if I asked a few questions about things I'm unclear about?

A sentence reads "'Rei I' also depicts real existing places, such as Mount Futago", is this supposed to be "Rei II"?
Yeah. Errata corrige.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 18:04, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

Add a short description to the top of the article.
Add alt text to every single image being used.
Add a serial comma after the first mention of "Shinji and Rei".
Add serial commas after "chief animator", "Shikoku", and "Balthazar".
"trace in the map" → "trace on the map"
Add a comma after "the end of the episode" in #Production and #Themes.
"of Minamoto clan" → "of the Minamoto clan"
Add a hyphen between "highest rated".
Add a serial comma after "Misato, Shinji".
WatchMojo is not a reliable source and should not be used.
Make sure to translate citations in different languages with "|trans-title=".
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:40, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 10:53, 17 July 2021 (UTC)