# Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Wikilink Kim Collins and Velma Bass in the lead
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Background
"Saint Kitts and Nevis made its Olympic debut in 1996 sending ten athletes." - better: Saint Kitts and Nevis made their first appearance at the Olympics in 1996, sending ten athletes
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" Velma Bass previously competed at the 1996 Summer Olympics in the women's 4 × 100 meters relay." - change to partook for variety
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### Athletics
"This was the second Olympic appearance for both Collins and Bass, both" - comma inbetween the words "Bass" and "both" needs to be replaced with a semi colon
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"Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter." - Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter dashes
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"Collins finished fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, failing to advance to the finals." - Collins placed fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, and thus failed to advance to the finals.
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"and eighth in the semi finals for the 200 meter." - 200 meter sprint
done Kees08 (Talk)
Good work on this so far. You're on the right track for on getting this series of articles into a Good Topic. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: Addressed everything you noted (and fixed a couple other things I noticed). Let me know if you find anything else and I will fix it. I will hit the other articles soon. Kees08 (Talk) 03:12, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
@Kees08: Thank you for addressing the issues I raised. Spotted nothing else that needs doing so this article can now be promoted to GA. MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 24 October 2017 (UTC)