# Talk:Ray Kennedy

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:17, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

I'll take a look. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:17, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

They were though knocked out of the European Cup at the quarter-final stage by eventual winners Ajax - odd place to stick a "though:....
Done.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Kennedy was a substitute as he lost his first team place late in the season due to fatigue -  I think this needs more explanation. Do you mean fatigue over the season or he'd lose stamina during a game?
Fatigue caused him to lose stamina during a game, though I guess this could partly be a mental thing? Anyway I re-ordered the sentence.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Para 6 (1972–73 season) of Arsenal has alotta "Kennedy" s in it
Ah yeah, was careful to not confuse McLintock and Kennedy. Removed a couple of Kennedys.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Arsenal were poor throughout the 1973–74 season, - meaning they ran out of money?
Point taken.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
...the demise of the Double winning team. - hyphen?
Done.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
In July 1974, Kennedy was sold to Liverpool for a club record £200,000. - err, we need four refs for this why?
Removed 3.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
as the "Reds" went on to record a comfortable 3–0 win - why the quote marks around the nickname?
Done.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
The "Swans" had an unsuccessful attempt... - ditto
Done.--EchetusXe 14:51, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Earwig's copyvio tool clear.
Overall a good read - not much to complain about really.....on target for GA. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:05, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, I've acted on your points.--EchetusXe 14:52, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
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Pass or Fail:  - great, well done.  Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 15:20, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

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In Liverpool section, it is more like telling Liverpool history rather than Ray’s story. Paisley Liverpool (talk) 16:28, 25 May 2018 (UTC)