# Talk:Raymond Riles

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)

Add a serial comma between "attempted rape, burglary and robbery".
Add a serial comma between "moon, barked and tried to bite".
Add a comma after "at various points".
"for attempted murder of a police officer" → "for the attempted murder of a police officer"
Add a serial comma between "piles of papers, Bibles and other books".
"for Henry's murder and for Riles's" → "for Henry's murder and Riles's"
Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk)
Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks for the feedback. I think I have addressed the points above. I got out of the habit of archiving links a long time ago, finding it tedious and not realizing that there was an automated approach. Thanks for letting me know about that - very easy! Should the accessdates remain for archived links? Larry Hockett (Talk) 17:43, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)