# Talk:Yue Hwa Building

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 15:06, 17 June 2014 (UTC)

1b. The needs to be expanded to appropriately summarize the entire article. See this page.
2b. Note, I have made a few changes to the in-line citations.
6a. I added an image.
7. If not for the insufficient lead, this article would pass. Until such time as the lead adequately summarizes the article, I can't pass the article.

@QatarStarsLeague: I have rewritten the lead section. How is the new lead section? It may need some copyediting. --Hildanknight (talk) 04:31, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
It is suitable; the article passes! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 05:19, 19 June 2014 (UTC)