# Talk:Prelude to a Million Years

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:16, 24 May 2014 (UTC)

No DAB links, no dead links
The "Background" section goes unrepresented in the lead, add a sentence describing Ward's background
How does it look now?
Looks fine now, every section represented. Seattle (talk) 13:36, 26 May 2014 (UTC)
Link "Depression of the 1930s" to Great Depression in the text
Done. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)
Link "jingoism"
Done. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)
The most prominent symbol is a flower, representing the artist's distracted quest for beauty. All the while the protagonist remains indifferent to the turmoil around him. combine these sentences.
Done: "The most prominent symbol is a flower, representing the artist's distracted quest for beauty while he remains indifferent to the turmoil around him." Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 02:18, 26 May 2014 (UTC)
French folds Can you link "folds" anywhere? What are "folds"?
I looked, but couldn't find anything.  It's a particular way books were (are?) made in France—the pages were folded in such a way that they had to be cut before reading. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 00:33, 25 May 2014 (UTC)
Actually, I found a brief mention in Book folding.  Now linked. Curly Turkey ⚞¡gobble!⚟ 02:21, 26 May 2014 (UTC)
Image checks out. I'm content with the article in terms of the criteria after these notes are reviewed. Seattle (talk) 13:16, 24 May 2014 (UTC)