# Talk:Tropical Depression Eight (1981)

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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)

"...the remnant low resumed its northeastward motion, before entering Louisiana and dissipating on September 1." - Comma is unnecessary.
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
"and damage or deroofed several homes and buildings, including at the Strand Historic District." - Damaged.
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
You use "about" in the impact section frequently. Try to alternative words.
There's only five now--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
"All creeks exceeded their banks and the Guadalupe and San Marcos rivers rising sharply" - Rising --> rose
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
"The Boggy Creek after exceeded its banks" - Eh?
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
"In Galveston, flooding primarily effected the first floor of buildings damaged by the tornado." Affected
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
Otherwise, this article looks in good shape. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk ·  contributions) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the review!--12george1 (talk) 03:03, 8 August 2017 (UTC)