# Talk:Out of This Club

Should this not be classified as a "song" because there's no post release coverage which suggests that it was cancelled? It didn't receive any independent release commercially and there's little or NO coverage after the release date saying it was a single in the US? → Lil-℧niquԐ 1 - (Talk) - 13:56, 6 January 2020 (UTC)

It's officially sent to the radio, so it was indeed a single in a similar way as "Fly Like a Bird", "I Care", "Hold Tight". Bluesatellite (talk) 13:40, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Love how you went from not considering it a single to undoing all my edits on this page because I think the same way. No shade, I just find it funny.
Honestly though (this is just me putting in my two cents), if a song didn't receive a commercial release in a single country and wasn't promoted individually, it's just a promotional single or better yet an album cut which just happened to chart. Moonlighttt (talk) 15:52, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

A radio release is a commercial release. There are plenty of songs that are sent only to radio. In the streaming era, song are already available digitally. It's definitely not a album cut that charted - there's a source saying it was sent to radio stations in the US. iTunes countdown singles are released commercially but not to radio - that doesn't make them singles just promo ones. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ If we're not sure go by consensus. On the basis that some notable songs linked by Bluesatellite were only sent to radio they count as singles. >> Lil-unique1 (talk) — 20:06, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Out of This Club/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:38, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

I will conduct this review today! --K. Peake 09:38, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Shouldn't the studio be identified as The Chocolate Factory?
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Pipe Chicago, Illinois to Chicago in the infobox
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"It features its songwriters Polow da Don and its producer" → "The song features guest appearances from record producer Polow da Don and singer"
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Add a sentence after the above one mentioning who wrote and produced it
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"In the United States the song" → "In the United States, the song"
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Pipe child pornography to R. Kelly#Early sexual abuse accusations (1990s–2000s)
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Simply change the "over" part of comp to mentioning piano melodies, minus any quotation marks
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"It received mixed reviews from contemporary critics who either complimented or criticized" → "The song received mixed reviews from music critics, who were split towards"
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"platforms following new allegations" → "platforms, following new allegations"
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### Production and release
"and Jamal "Polow Da Don" Jones," → "and Jamal "Polow da Don" Jones," with the pipe
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"collaborated with the latter who, previously" → "collaborated with the record producer, who previously" to be specific
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Pipe Abel Garibaldi to Die Warzau
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"Jeff Meeks and Eric Schlotzer" → "Jeff Meeks, and Eric Schlotzer"
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Remove overly obvious wikilink on Chicago, Illinois
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Pipe mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
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"and Jaycen Joshua with Kelly" → "and Jaycen Joshua, with Kelly"
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Pipe programmed to Programming (music)
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Remove the comma after second studio album
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Pipe urban contemporary to Urban contemporary music
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Remove the comma after second single
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"follows Kelly's acquittal" → "came a couple of months after Kelly's acquittal" removing the part from the end of the sentence in this context
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### Composition and reception
Audio sample looks good!
""Out of This Club" is" → "Musically, "Out of This Club" is"
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""midtempo jam",[3] production is" → ""mid-tempo jam",[3] the production is" per the source
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""plush beat" which results" → ""plush beat", which results"
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"a cascading fashion" with the artists" → "a cascading fashion", with the artists"
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"According Joey Guerra from the" → "According to Joey Guerra from the"
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Pipe sugar daddy to Sugar dating
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The party lifestyle part is not sourced
 Comment: You mean to remove the pipe to Playboy lifestyle
"is a possbile" → "is a possible"
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Pipe Usher to Usher (musician)
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"Polow Da Don's rap line," → "Polow da Don's rap line,"
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"which was produced by himself." → "which he had previously produced."
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"and producer commenting he is" → "and producer, commenting he is"
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"and noted down" → "and he noted down"
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"didn't expect anything else from Kelly characterizing it" → "lacked expectations for Kelly, characterizing the song"
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"criticized Kelly's songwriting describing it as" → "derided Kelly's songwriting as"
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"as "phoned-in" adding he" → "as "phoned-in", adding he"
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"lambasted "Out Of This Club" highlighting it" → "lambasted "Out Of This Club", pinpointing it"
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Pipe Rohypnol to Flunitrazepam
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Add the Bubbling Under position as the final para of this section, as that is commercial reception
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### Chart
"which represents the 25 songs which failed" → "which represented the 25 songs that failed" since the chart no longer exists
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Make this the section after removal
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### Removal from album and sale
"their former label, Interscope Records to remove the song from all digital and streaming platforms," → "their former label Interscope Records to remove the song from all streaming platforms," per the source
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"Beginning April of that year," → "Beginning April 2019,"
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"with Heat magazine member Kimberly Wyatt" → "with Heat magazine, member Kimberly Wyatt"
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"was out of the group's hands." → "was out of the group's hands:"
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### References
Copyvio score looks fairly decent at 36.7%!!
Cite Radio & Records as work/website instead on ref 4
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Remove the publisher from ref 7
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WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 18
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Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com on ref 19 per MOS:LINK2SECT
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### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 21:21, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
Hey, thanks for doing this! I have done the edits! MrHyacinth (talk) 02:59, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
Pinging @Kyle Peake: Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:39, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
Onegreatjoke Nice work, but you still need to either remove or source the party lifestyle part since none of the refs mention it. --K. Peake 11:20, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
Now? It was written in the Blender article. MrHyacinth (talk) 23:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake MrHyacinth (talk) 23:48, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, nice job on this! --K. Peake 08:56, 16 December 2022 (UTC)