# Talk:Schoolin' Life

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Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:37, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Just so you know, the deluxe edition of the 4 is no longer being sold exclusively at Target: it's now been released to the iTunes Store. I Am Rufus  • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 11:22, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Yes, thanks. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:24, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 Done Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:27, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Schoolin' Life/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Infobox
No issues


### Lead
...which was sold exclusively at Target Corporation... Change "Target Corporation" to "Target"
Jordan Young aka DJ Swivel mixed the song at New York's Jungle City Studios. → Change "Jordan Young aka DJ Swivel" to "Jordan Young, also known by his stage name DJ Swivel"
...and affirms that she certified neither as a teacher... → Fix prose to make phrase read better


### Production and mixing
...which was sold exclusively at Target Corporation[2]... → Change "Target Corporation" to "Target"


### Composition and lyrical interpretation
No issues


### Critical reception
No issues


### Live performance and use in media
No issues


### Chart performance
No issues


### References
Reference 1 → Dead link according to this

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:00, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

All  Done. My love is love (talk) 20:16, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep up the good work you are doing! Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:32, 27 June 2012 (UTC)