# Talk:SMS Charlotte

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 03:35, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

I love reading about ships for some reason, so another won't hurt anyone. Courcelles (talk) 03:35, 29 July 2018 (UTC)
That works out well for us, seeing as I like writing about them ;)
"The ship's hulls was"  Hulls was, subject-very agreement.
Good catch - I tend to copy sections like that from article to article and adjust as necessary, but I missed that one.
"The ship was powered by a pair of 2-cylinder marine steam engine "  engines?
Fixed
"ducted into two retractable funnel"  Funnels?
Yup
"20,000 dollars"  Which dollar?  US I assume?
That's a good question - Hildebrand et al usually refer to prices in marks, but they just state that one of the demands was a "Zahlung einer Entschaedigung von Dollar 20.000". I'd have to assume they're referring to USD, but I don't know for sure.
"decommissioned for the last time on 31 March 1909 "  The next paragraph indicates this wasn't the last time...
Good point - I was thinking it was the last time of her normal career, but I see that could be confusing and isn't strictly correct.
Good little article you have here.  Well done. Courcelles (talk) 03:48, 29 July 2018 (UTC)
Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 09:42, 29 July 2018 (UTC)
No problem.  Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 13:42, 29 July 2018 (UTC)