# Talk:Siege of Dundee

Hi AmericanLemming and thanks for spotting the discrepancy. This was in the article, but during GAN the assessor Pickersgill-Cunliffe suggested that some of what I had in Aftermath was too remote from the topic of the article. So I trimmed it down, see [1]. And didn't notice that I had not trimmed the lead to match. I have now done this. Obviously, just where information becomes too remote from the topic is subjective, so feel free to come back with any proposals to work some or all of this back in. Gog the Mild (talk) 11:22, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Argh! I should really have spotted that in my last read through. Apologies! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 15:30, 2 December 2021 (UTC)