# Talk:The Tower of Babble

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 11:35, 2 February 2013 (UTC)
Hi! I'll be doing this review. I'll conduct a preliminary review and we will fix the issues raised there before I conduct a formal review with a criteria template.
Thanks! Retrolord (talk) 11:35, 2 February 2013 (UTC)
Preliminary problems:

"He cancelled quality shows". Seems like original research to me, even if it isn't, i dont think it is NPOV compliant. Happy to hear what you think if you disagree though.
"his first new show". Sort of implies ownership over the show. Unless he was the director/producer, seems a little unnecessary?
"The Fall's schedule". Could we change that to Autumn?
corporation's deficiencies, like using the motif "superior losers". Could we change that to "such as"?
Thats everything i've found so far. If you need any help fixing any of them let me know. Retrolord (talk) 11:45, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Made the suggested edits. [1] Regarding the "He cancelled quality shows", I am trying to refer to award-winning/critically-acclaimed shows in a succinct way. maclean (talk) 19:24, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Added a more detailed Fair Use rationale at File:Tower of Babble Stursberg.jpg maclean (talk) 00:50, 3 February 2013 (UTC)