# Talk:Ska vi älska, så ska vi älska till Buddy Holly

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Nominator: VirreFriberg (talk · contribs) 00:39, 26 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:16, 4 March 2025 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
I will start this today and run into tomorrow! --K. Peake 11:16, 4 March 2025 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Remove the venue parameter from the infobox
"of his friends. The lyrics were set to an" → "of his friends, setting it to an" to avoid overly short sentences
Remove overly obvious wikilink on Stockholm as a capital
"and the band did not" → "and Gyllene Tider did not"
Shouldn't you mention what was praised about the song as well as it having been noted as weaker?
"in band set list." → "in tour set lists." to more specific.


### Composition and recording
Img looks good!
"and was additionally part of" → "This was additionally part of" to start a new sentence for avoiding a run-on
Wikilink A major to itself
"who has listening to" → "who has listened to"
"as one of Gyllene Tider's biggest inspirations" this needs to be re-worded to either specify Elvis Costello was one of the biggest inspirations himself or "two of" if you are referring to both
Remove overly obvious wikilink on Stockholm as a capital


### Release and commercial performance
[15][14] should be placed in numerical order
"and the album's closing track" → "and the closing track" to avoid repetition of album
"in the top-ten." → "in the top-10." per MOS:NUM on comparative values
"who's host had disqualified" → "whose host had disqualified"
"it spent on" → "the song spent on"
"to being release" → "to being released"
[29] should only be invoked at the end of the sentence; I understand [28] being used before the first comma but [29] backs up all the albums following the second clause
Wikilink live album
[30] should only be invoked at the end of the sentence because this is used for all of the live albums


### Critical reception and legacy
"received primarily positive reviews" → "was met with primarily positive reviews"
"of the band's debut album in" → "of Gyllene Tider's debut album in"
"with the critic who noted the" → "with a critic noting the"
"Upon the single release, Göteborgs-Tidningen called it a" → "A reviewer for Göteborgs-Tidningen called the song a" because the upon part only needs to be used once
Img looks good!
"stated that "any song with 'making love' referenced twice in the titled written" → "stated that a song referencing love twice in the title "written" to avoid overquoting
Boring is too obvious to be in quote marks
"and were included on" → "The song was included on" starting a new sentence to avoid a run-on
The last sentence should only use since either at the end or earlier on


### Personnel
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel
The songwriters and producers should be listed here since they need to be sourced


### Charts
Good


### See also
Good


### References
For any of the notes where the refs cited for them are the same as the ones at that point in the prose, please remove the refs from here
Copyvio score looks really good at 29.6%!!
Cite Time as magazine on ref 2


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed, came through by the end of the evening here in the UK! --K. Peake 20:52, 5 March 2025 (UTC)
Hi! We meet once more, @Kyle Peake! I've revided the article after your suggestions.
The source for songwriters, engineers, mixers and producers is listen in the Gyllene Tider re-issue sleeve notes on ; "produced by Lasse "Trendy Hype" Lindbom, engineer Björn Boström. Mixed by Trendy, Björne, Per and Mats. Lyrics by: Per Gessle. Music by: Mats Persson and Per Gessle, except "Skicka ett vykort, älskling" ("Send Me a Postcard"), lyrics by Per Gessle, music by Robbie van Leeuwen and "Billy", lyrics and music by Per Gessle."
VirreFriberg (talk) 13:58, 6 March 2025 (UTC) VirreFriberg (talk) 13:58, 6 March 2025 (UTC)
 Pass now, this looks great well done sorry for the late reply I've been busy! --K. Peake 20:57, 11 March 2025 (UTC)