# Talk:Quiero Bailar (song)

Ivy Queen se lanza a conquistar el mercado inglés
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Text: "Ivy Queen's first big hit, "Quiero Bailar," is included on her new collection. In it she berates a lover who thinks that just because they dance together she is automatically going to bed with him."
— ΛẊΣ21 04:48, 7 December 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 02:55, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Background
"United States Recording Industry Association of America" 'United States' is redundant here.
 Done
Composition
"by Ivy Queen herself" no need of "herself"
 Done
The rest of the paragraph is unreferenced.
 Done
What is "Luquid riddim"?
The "Luquid riddim" is a riddim. Such as "Dem Bow". I tried searching to see if there was an article I could link to but apparently not.
"In the song she berates" A comma is missing after "song"
 Done
"to bed to him" to him? or with him?
 Done
Release and chart performance
You don't need to mention all the follow-up singles, I guess.
Is this better?
"2005 becoming" Comma after 2005
"of the week and peaked" Comma before "and"
"Billboard Latin Rhythm Songs chart" On the Billboard.... Try to merge the next sentence with this one, or rewordit to avoid the use of "On the" at the start.
How would you suggest? Those are two different charts so they have different sentences.
"I've worked very hard in my career, but I get surprised because I've never expected to get to these places." Who said this? Add it.
It says "Ivy Queen said." directly after that sentence.
Critical reception
"and as being" --> "as well as being"
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"stated "Quiero Bailar" shows" stated that
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Okay. Everything else seems good but the lead. Try to check at other song articles to see which is the best way to write the lead and mimick that style. Its current state is a bit weird. — ΛΧΣ21 03:04, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

Let me take a look. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 03:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
 Done — DivaKnockouts (talk) 03:50, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
 Passed — ΛΧΣ21 04:24, 9 January 2013 (UTC)