# Talk:Seethamma Vakitlo Sirimalle Chettu

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I'll finish this soon JAGUAR  18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)


### Initial comments
I would recommend merging the last paragraph into the fourth, per WP:LEADLENGTH
"Produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, it features Daggubati Venkates" - would sound better as It was produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, and features Daggubati Venkates
"the Good Samaritan teaches his sons and Geetha's father the value of spreading love in life; this is the film's centerpiece" - centrepiece
"by his family, lives in the village of that name" - of the same name (minor)
"At the wedding Peddodu and Geetha's father argue" - comma between "wedding" and "Peddodu"
"Relangi Uncle is injured in an accident" - would "Uncle Relangi" be the correct order?
"turns out to be the son of Peddodu's former boss's brother" - boss' (in this case)
"...calls her by name instead of "Hey!" and "Oy!" They are married" - missing full stop


#### References
References all check out, nice work


### On hold
Another well written and comprehensive article, well done! I found no prose issues with the latter half of the article, however I did find a few minor issues with the lead (which can easily be addressed). Once all of the above are clarified this should easily pass  JAGUAR  19:20, 28 September 2015 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thanks for the review, Jaguar. Your comments have been resolved.  — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 01:13, 29 September 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing them, Ssven! This now meets the GA criteria and is good to go. Well done on writing another piece of quality work  JAGUAR  17:05, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

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