# Talk:Typhoon Ofelia

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Hi YE, I am going to review this article tonight.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

"was the first of two typhoons in 1990 to directly affect the Philippines within a week." - Wikilink to the 1990 Pacific typhoon season?
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"and on 00:00 UTC on June 24," ---> "and at 00:00 UTC on June 24,". The same thing occurs near the end of the MH section. While you're at it, wikilink Coordinated Universal Time in the lead section
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"Hualien City was the hardest it by the typhoon," ---> "Hualien City was the hardest hit by the typhoon,"
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
I'm counting 56 deaths in the Philippines and 40 in China. So shouldn't the infobox say 96 deaths?
Good catch. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"originated from the monsoon trough situated near the Caroline Islands." - Wikilink monsoon trough
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"According to the JTWC, however, this did not take place until 00:00 UTC on June 25 when it moved offshore" - Replace "it" with "the system/storm/cyclone/etc." to avoid suggesting that the JTWC moved offshore :P
Fair enough. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"and was merging with a frontal zone" ---> "when it moved offshore and merged with a frontal zone"
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
"twenty-tree were rendered missing due to flooding and mudslides." - Twenty-tree? :P
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Insert Template:1990 Pacific typhoon season buttons at the bottom of the page
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Not too bad. Hopefully you can get this done quickly.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the speedy review. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Great! I will pass this article now.--12george1 (talk) 15:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)