# Talk:Pakistan at the 2014 Winter Olympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Wikilink Federation Internationale de Ski
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Controversy section could be folded into the background one, since now it appears last after we already know they did compete.
Good idea, done Kees08 (Talk)
"sending one male to compete in the giant slalom"  Male strikes me as a strange word choice here.
Reworded Kees08 (Talk)
"He had less than the maximum 140 points needed to qualify,"  Which he is meant here?
Clarified (though, technically both of them). Kees08 (Talk)
Speaking of the above, if "he" didn't qualify, how did he, well, qualify if Pakistan had three who qualified?
Not sure if I cleared it up, but I added more information on the qualification. Kees08 (Talk)
Your EL needs a new description, it is the IOC's page on Pakistan generally, not on just 2014.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Nothing major.  Courcelles (talk) 00:54, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Qualification makes more sense now.  Passing. Courcelles (talk) 14:37, 24 July 2018 (UTC)