# Talk:Shon the Piper

Just some additional locations not in article.

Arizona.[1]
Oregon[2]
Vermont[3]
Utah[4]
Just in case. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 13:23, 11 September 2014 (UTC)

Added in. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:20, 11 January 2015 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Shon the Piper/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
Time for another lost film article review.
Lead section

"Lon Chaney may have appeared in this film, but it is not proven." Suggest rewrite to: "It was claimed that Lon Chaney appeared in this film, but this has been disputed."
"The film is now considered lost." I would perfer: "The film is presumed lost"
Plot

Link Moving Picture News.
Cast

I would perfer a source thats claims that Lon Chaney was a Clansman in this film.
Production

Link New York Clipper.
Release and reception

"A pre-release review of the film said" I would perfer that you note that The Leavenworth Times reviewed this.
"Another summary describes the film as "remarkably fresh and interesting subject" and described the film as a Scottish ballad." Likewise for The Huntington Herald.
Link all of the places.
References

Link the publishers of these sources if possible.
I will promote once the issues above are addressed. good888 (talk) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

@Good888: All fixed and linked up. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:42, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
I have fixed one error. With that done, I am promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 16:32, 20 January 2015 (UTC)