# Talk:SMS Schwalbe (1887)

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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this review shortly.--Tomobe03 (talk) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

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Images are suitably sourced and licensed, and have suitable captions - however "Deutsch Ost-Afrika,1892.jpg" (map) licence at the Commons indicates US-PD tag need be added.
Added the US-1923 tag.
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In the section of "Second deployment overseas", there is the following sentence: "There, she was commissioned a second time three days later." Given the context, I get the impression this is an error, and it should read "There, she was decommissioned a second time three days later." Is that so, or is there some other clarification missing?
Yeah, it should be decommissioned, good catch.
Besides an image licensing nag (a minor one at that) there's only one prose issue I spotted in the way of successful promotion of this GAN. Cheers.--Tomobe03 (talk) 14:40, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the review as always, Tomobe. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
You're welcome. All clear now, so passing.--Tomobe03 (talk) 12:46, 21 April 2014 (UTC)