# Talk:Starved

I changed "glowing reviews" to "mixed reviews."
Variety--http://www.variety.com/review/VE1117927790.html?categoryid=32&cs=1&p=0
—Preceding unsigned comment added by Silarius (talk • contribs) 15:50, 2007 June 3

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Looking good. Here are just a few comments to help push it along to becoming a GA:

was cancelled in October of 2005 - just "October 2005" will do.
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Adam Williams (Sterling K. Brown is a police officer - close bracket.
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Starved and Sunny were developed for FX - maybe re-state the whole "Sunny" title; those who've skipped down from the lead wouldn't know.
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Did each episode have a specific writer and director? These should be included in the episode list table.
Neilsen rating of 0.8 and a 2 share - "2% share"?
No, the percent sign is not used in discussing the share, just the number
The Washington Post and The New York Times.
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it was tough to choose [between it and Sunny] - again, spell out the "Sunny" title in case readers have skipped ahead from the lead.
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That's it - the article will be on hold for a week so good luck with the changes :) —97198 (talk) 06:59, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I will review the tape later this week to get the writer and director names, although I think that they were all written and directed by Schaeffer as noted in the lead. Otto4711 (talk) 08:48, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
I have reviewed the tape and Schaeffer did indeed write and direct all seven episodes. I don't think that information needs to be added seven times to the table. Otto4711 (talk) 03:36, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
Definitely - awesome work, I'm happy to promote this to a GA. —97198 (talk) 06:33, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
Thank you for a pleasant and positive GA experience! Otto4711 (talk) 06:38, 28 August 2008 (UTC)