# Talk:Tuarii

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 15:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  Pass
2. Verifiability  Pass
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
1. 

Is the queen in "Queen regnant" capitalized?  I've seen both ways and I'm not sure which one is technically correct
Changed.
"resistance government in the Raiatean rebellion (1887–1897) " - I may be wrong but my gut instinct suggests during instead of in
Changed.
Wikilink Opoa if that's the correct place
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"After Tehauroa's death, a civil war nearly broke out between two rivals for the throne." - Do we know a year on this?
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"In 1887 or 1888" - I think it might read better as "In either 1887 or 1888", but if you don't like that, ignore it.
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Wiklink Consul to Consul (representative)
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"1878 Kanak in New Caledonia" - Kanak is linked to a people group, but the context makes it sound like a rebellion.  I think the same thing came up in the Teraupo'o review
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"Teraupo’o" - Wrong '
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"two French warships, the Duguay Trouin and L'Aube arrived" - Comma between L'Aube and arrived
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"the rebel chief's captured after two months of" - I think it should be capture not captured
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"The casualty of the six-week campaign was nearly fifty deaths mainly on the side of the Raiateans" - I think it should be casualties and were instead of casualty and was
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Wikilink francs
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Can we get a translation for the French quote towards the end?
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I see no issue with the family tree and WP:NOTGENEALOGY, since it's a royal family and is important to the background of the story
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Ref 14 needs the year and the page number, if available.
The date is not available. I've try looking for it to no avail. It’s an online encyclopedia without any dates for its entries.
Makes sense, all fine in that area then.
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Placing on hold.  One ref formatting issue and a handful of minor prose issues.  Good work. Hog Farm (talk) 17:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

@Hog Farm: See changes. KAVEBEAR (talk) 21:03, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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