# Talk:Unshaken

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:06, 30 April 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox
Needs alt
RCA → not on any source
Electric Garden Recording → not in the body of the article or source


### Lead
American singer-songwriter and musician → American singer-songwriter
co-wrote the song → wrote the track
release by Lakeshore Records → released by Lakeshore Records
It features Brian Blade on drums, Cyril Neville on cowbell, Lanois on guitar, and D'Angelo on Rhodes piano → remove it's already below and the lead should be more concise


### Background
Prior to the release of "Unshaken", the last piece of music that D'Angelo put out was his third studio album...→ already stated in the release. Remove the same sentence from the release section below
"each time he was just like, 'it's incredible.' It just blows his mind". → the singer found the game to be "incredible".


### Composition and lyrical interpretation
On the music sample remove "D'Angelo sings in his lower vocal register on the track"
as D'Angelo "crooning bleak imagery over a percussive groove" → as "crooning bleak imagery over a percussive groove"
D'Angelo opens the song singing in an undertone, which The Musical Hype's Brent Faulkner felt matched the "understated nature" of the track → either replace with a reliable source or just remove the sentece (see below)
the game's soundtrack → year of release in between brackets
Lanois took an early version of the song to D'Angelo in New York; they added a percussion track with Brian Blade on drums and Cyril Neville on cowbell, while Lanois played guitar and D'Angelo played Rhodes piano, and turned it into a full song. → Lanois took an early version of the song to D'Angelo in New York. They added a percussion track, with Brian Blade on drums, Cyril Neville on cowbell, Lanois playing the guitar and D'Angelo playing Rhodes piano, and turned it into a full song.


### Release
Remove the photo of D'Angelo, no need for it.
through RCA Records → source?
Add "CD and vinyl" to the formats in the infobox


### Critical reception
The Musical Hype is a blog with no editoral oversight → remove


### Track listing
Fine


### Personnel
Use {{spaced ndash}}


### Charts
Fine


### References
Musicnotes → publisher
KZGO → publisher
Either use publisher and work for eveything or only work/publisher (when its applied)


### Overall
You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:52, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
Appreciate the review, MarioSoulTruthFan. I've gone through and addressed your concerns. Let me know if there's anything else. – Rhain ☔ 00:00, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
@Rhain:I made two chages, one as I felt who palyed the drums and the lead up to the creation of the song and the "rock version" along with everything else would be a better fit on the background, the other as the same description it was already in the text and on the sample. Let me know if you are ok with them. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:18, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Both seem like logical changes to me, thanks for checking. – Rhain ☔ 00:16, 3 May 2020 (UTC)