# Talk:Quests in Middle-earth

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:39, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

 
Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Lots of duplinks found using the usual tool.
Removed.
"into a quest" should be "on a quest"
Done.
"Half-elf" Elf should be capitalized?
Done.
'Frodo "goes with the pain of a sad but noble decision"' doesn't parallel the structure of the earlier clause ("Bilbo's... venal motives"). It would sound better if it did.
Fixed.
The images are all licensed and used correctly.
Noted.
Just as a compliment, the article is very nicely illustrated; the medieval illustrations are used particularly well for the more abstract points.
Thank you!
The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
Spotchecks:
Birns, Nicholas (2012). "'You Have Grown Very Much': The Scouring of the Shire and the Novelistic Aspects of The Lord of the Rings". Journal of the Fantastic in the Arts. Verifies all claims made.
Hirsch, Bernhard (2014). "After the "end of all things": The Long Return Home to the Shire". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
Moore, Clare (2022). "Goddess and Mortal: The Celtic and the French Morgan le Fay in Tolkien's Silmarillion". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
Overall a great article that has just a couple minor prose issues. AryKun (talk) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
Okay, will be passing the article. AryKun (talk) 15:10, 25 July 2023 (UTC)