# Talk:The Generous Mr. Lovewell

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 19:22, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
Taking over this one as well. Here are my comments:

"The idea for the character of "Mr. Lovewell" and the album while trying to figure out concepts for the record." missing a couple words here. Perhaps ...and the album came up while trying...
Done'
"The song spent 10 weeks at the number 1 spot" at the top spot reads a bit better, but not picky on that one.
Good catch, corrected
Just a couple small things. I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:22, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:51, 25 December 2011 (UTC)