# Talk:The Little Mother

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR  22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)


### Initial comments
The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article. There is nothing on what critics thought about the film in the lead
"The film stars Marie Eline who goes to her mother's employer" - does she have a character name?
I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
"The artist, a wealthy, good-hearted man, pleased with the child's pluck" - pluck??
"The single reel drama, approximately 990 feet long" - always worth converting into metres


### Close - promoted
I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done  JAGUAR  16:36, 20 September 2015 (UTC)