# Talk:Per Manum

This review is transcluded from Talk:Per Manum/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Review:

First, Per Manum (The X-Files) should redirect to this page
Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
It was written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners. The episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology. Combine the two sentences; something like: "Written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners, the episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology."
Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Delink the names of the actors in the lead since they're linked in the "plot" section.
Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
FBI special agents John Doggett (Robert Patrick) and Dana Scully (Gillian Anderson) meet Duffy Haskell why not mention who plays Haskell?
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
overhearing a pregnant woman, Mrs Hendershot why not mention who plays Hendershot since she seems important to the plot?
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
believing that Rohrer is a CIA agent. you link FBI so why not CIA?
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Delink Scully from the infobox
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Duffy Haskel in this episode, would return would return->> returned
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
They are driven away, but Hendershot enters labour. Unclear who "they" are hear: the marines or the group
Done. GRAPPLE X 15:40, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Perhaps link "In vitro fertilisation" , and do italicize "in vitro"
Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
In the Broadcast and reception section you have three "the episode"s in a row to begin sentences in the first paragraph; a reword would be nice.
Done, see below--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Ref 12, the date should be formatted as the other dates are
Done, these two were my fault...--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Are there any more reviews you could add or find?
I added a (pretty scathing) review from Cinefantastique.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:02, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
If you could respond to each comment individually that would be great. I'll re-look the article when these are addressed. Albacore (talk) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Reread and passed. Albacore (talk) 22:05, 2 April 2012 (UTC)