# Talk:Sonic Gems Collection

Just so everyone knows, please don't add anything related to the allegedly cancelled Xbox version of the game. This has never been officially confirmed. (TheJoebro64 (talk) 15:52, 11 December 2016 (UTC))

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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 16:43, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

Lead

The compilation was conceived by developer Sonic Team to introduce younger players to the Sonic franchise. - Wasn't it to introduce younger players to OLD GAMES in the Sonic franchise, not just the franchise as a whole?
Good point. Done.
I don't think any staff should be listed in the infobox since the game is a compilation. If anyone, list the director and producer, not the designer. I don't know why Hirata is even credited for designing in the game credits, there is no game to design!
Removed. I based this on the Rare Replay article, which lists only the designer.
Gameplay

Players can also unlock the two Vectorman games (1995 and 1996), which are run and gun platformers. The Japanese version also features the three Genesis Streets of Rage games (1991, 1992, and 1994) and Bonanza Bros. (1990). It should be mentioned that none of these games were developed by Sonic Team
Done.
Development

to introduce young players to the Sonic franchise - See above
Done.
they had limited involvement with the games included on the compilation -Be a little more clear and say that had limited involvement in the original development of the games included.
Done.
Most of the games included are emulated, but some titles, such as Sonic the Fighters, are proper ports. Where in the interview does it say which are proper ports? I think Fighters is the ONLY port, and you can cite the in-game Sonic the Fighters credits in Gems Collection because there is a "console conversion" staff.
Done. I've heard before that the version of Sonic CD in the game is a port, but I can't be too sure. As for where in the interview, I got it from Ogawa said that they weren't able to port it to the Saturn because it was difficult, but was able to on the GC/PS2.
The Sega Saturn games Nights into Dreams (1996) and Burning Rangers (1998) were also considered - Mention these are Sonic Team games
Done.
AM2 assisted with porting Sonic the Fighters, and its appearance in the compilation marked its first proper release outside Japan. - It was not the first release outside Japan, I know a couple sources say it. It was, however, the first home console release, period. That should be mentioned.
Done.
due to fears of a "T" rating from the Entertainment Software Rating Board (ESRB) - Those from Europe or other regions may not know what a "T" rating is. Maybe say "Teen" rating instead.
I've changed it to due to fears of a "Teen" rating from
Reception

The GameCube version was later branded as a Player's Choice title in 2006. - Doesn't being branded a Player's Choice title mean you sold 1 million copies or something? Worth mentioning what this means.
It just indicates the game sold well for the system. I've added this.
the other six were left out. - the other six Game Gear Sonic games were left out
I've just added "games". It's already mentioned that they're Sonic games, so the first part is unnecessary.
get a T rating - see above
Done.
Other

Verify the author of the Hardcore Gaming 101 blog entry, I think it's John Szczepaniak judging by the username SKETCZ.
Looks like him. Searching his name on the site shows all of "sketcz"'s posts.
Archive links
Done.
Nice article. TarkusABtalk 20:33, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: Thanks for reviewing! Responded above. JOEBRO64 23:11, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
Looks good my man. Pass. TarkusABtalk 17:25, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

Hello, I just wanted to clarify something that has been confusing me about the Sonic R and Sonic CD ports of the game.  It says the Microsoft Windows version, but looking into a Tips & Tricks 2006 Video-Game Codebook, where there is an entire section devoted to Sonic's 15th anniversary, it shows some cheats and tips for many Sonic games, and in the sections where it shows Sonic R and Sonic CD, it seems to imply that the ports used Sonic Gems Collection used are the Sega Saturn ports.  What do you think?  I likely could be wrong, but I just would like this clarified.SoulSnow (talk) 21:01, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Just disregard this (particular) section.SoulSnow (talk) 18:15, 28 June 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for your input. I apologize as I am new here so I am learning what is expecting and how all this works. I saw your comments on an edit I made and wanted to discuss with you about it.
In regards to my edits on Sonic Gems Collection, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonic_Gems_Collection:
I see what you are saying that the content should read like an encyclopedia, as opposed to a list but I strongly disagree since this is a LIST highlighting the component games of the compilation. Every other game compilation that I have seen on Wikipedia is displayed exactly this way: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonic_Mega_Collection, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dreamcast_Collection, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Namco_Museum (each game there has its own list), https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kirby%27s_Dream_Collection, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metal_Gear_Solid_HD_Collection, etc. I have seen examples of pages for game compilations that include four or fewer games without lists, as the content is not difficult to parse through. A compilation that has more than four games with text as the sole means of transferring information uses an explanation that takes effort from the reader to decipher the correct info and should thus have the game contents in a listed format. I hope you consider reverting my edits back or incorporating them into something we can mutually agree upon, as I see the current page to be very ugly when minor changes could be made to drastically improve its potential usefulness.
Thank you.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bchill53 (talk • contribs) 01:41, 4 December 2018 (UTC) 

@TheJoebro64: Ping... Popcornduff (talk) 09:25, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
Those articles really... aren't in good shape—they're lacking citations and are poorly written, whereas this passed a GA review not too long ago. Lists are almost always pointless if you can easily explain it in prose. Furthermore, as Popcornduff pointed out in his edit summary, outside of list articles Wikipedia discourages the use of lists in articles. JOEBRO64 11:34, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
I'm also going to point out that other stuff existing isn't particularly a strong argument. JOEBRO64 20:08, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
I agree that just because something else does it that way, doesn't mean that this page has to. But from my expertise (expert reader of video game Wikipedia pages here, beginner editor..), game compilations have lists to convey the information effectively. That's my ultimate goal here. I read this page and had to stop everything. "Whoa, whoa, whoa, slow down. What games are in this thing?" You're correct that all of the information is there, but it's not readable. If you feel strongly about not having a list, I am fine with that decision. If you don't want to do it in list format, I please ask that you rewrite the text differently as to upfront include all games that are in the compilation, then dissect into the information about them (console, year, genre, etc.). The information about each game in between each listing is distracting (helpful, but distracting) and difficult to absorb the information. I am a firm believe in top-level down, so introduce the compilation (correctly done), then introduce the games, then get into the details. Right now the details and the games are currently mixed in and fluster the reader from getting the main topic. Thanks for hearing me out.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bchill53 (talk • contribs) 23:04, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: How about something like this: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Persona_(series)#Main_series. I loved the list format and enjoyed the prose associated with each item.  This may be something closer to what we can both hopefully agree on. Let me know what you think. Bchill53 (talk) 17:15, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: Any thoughts? Bchill53 (talk) 19:47, 12 December 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: Am I just being ignored? You told me to wait for a consensus and it sounds like you're not doing anything but waiting for me to forget about it. I'm just trying to make this page better and you're filibustering any action against. Please correct me if I'm wrong. Bchill53 (talk) 17:13, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
Didn't get the ping until now. First, the Persona article is about a series, not a compilation. Second, there's only six games. This is has like 15. Making a list here looks ugly and we're not supposed to merely catalogue and document things arbitrarily. I'll reach out to members of WP:VG to see what they think. JOEBRO64 20:11, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: Okay, thank you. I don't mean to be a dick, but I am passionate about helping out. I do appreciate it. Bchill53 (talk) 21:39, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
I initially opposed this, but now I'm in two minds about it. After doing a bit of copyediting on the section as it stands, there are some downsides of explaining it in prose. For example, it would be nice to have a parallel structure, so we can introduce each game with its genre first, like "the racing game Sonic R" and "the fighting game Virtua Fighter", but this becomes awkward once you hit "the two platform Vectorman games". This may seem like a small thing, but actually a lot of fiddly prose issues like that mount up to the point where I wonder if a list is just the cleanest way to present the information. It also allows us to definitely state stuff like the developer of each game.
It may be that a combination of a table and prose (to explain stuff like the museum) could be the most efficient solution. I've whipped up a quick, unpolished mockup in my sandbox. I should stress that it's not finished - I started adding all the developers but got bored. You get the picture. Popcornduff (talk) 22:03, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

I would support a list only in a table form, a la the always fantastic work of Popcornduff above.  It does not serve any purpose to simply state a bulleted list of every game on the collection; that could be best handled in prose aside from the above-mentioned awkwardness.  A table that includes extra information about each release, such as its original console and developer, as well as original release date (or year, since they tend to be missing a lot on older titles), would be helpful information best added as a list table, and I would also agree with supporting it with prose.  It's important to stress this should not be a list article, but an article about the game, which can include a list formatted as a table to provide useful information in a short, easy-to-read form.  I've done so before with Sega Technical Institute and Sega Meganet, both of which became GAs with this incorporation. Side note to Popcornduff: a heads up on your sandbox so far, Sonic Team is NOT the developer of Sonic CD.  Naoto Ohshima worked on the game in Japan with developers from Sega while most of the actual "Sonic Team" was working with Sega Technical Institute at the time.. Red Phoenix talk 22:15, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
@Red Phoenix: Thanks - but if that's true, then you've got some work to do on the Sonic CD page ... Popcornduff (talk) 22:21, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
@Popcornduff: Just corrected it, thanks for the heads up.  It turns out the quote in the article, a GA no less, misrepresented the source that said it was "the remainder of Sonic Team" - the source even calls the development team a "new team".  Red Phoenix talk 22:23, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
Thanks, @Popcornduff:. This is more informative than the solutions I proposed. I believe that your solution is on the right track. There is clarity without distraction, as the current prose cannot offer. Bchill53 (talk) 22:30, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
There is a lot of context to the games included in the collection. As the featured games, Fighters, R, and CD should be identified separately, and further explanation is needed as they are all different genres from different original platforms. The Game Gear games also vary in genre and the featured character (two Tails games). Furthermore, there are unlockable games unrelated to Sonic despite the collection being titled Sonic Gems, and some games only available in certain regions. Expressing this same information using a bulleted list would be less efficient and require more space than the current layout. I have the same concerns with a table. I'm concerned you will need too many columns to convey the same information. I understand that readers these days have short attention spans and will want and expect a quick and easy game list. I think a paragraph form gives them this same information, with less words, better context, and also invites them into actually reading the article and maybe reading other sections. That said, it's not a hill I'm willing to die on. TarkusABtalk 22:28, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

I'm easy with either option, but I'd like to point out that covering all the extra stuff you describe there in prose would be easy. It would be a table for all the data (list of games, release dates etc), and prose for stuff that needs prose. Popcornduff (talk) 22:38, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: @Popcornduff: @TarkusAB: @Red Phoenix: New Year means new format for the games included in this article (hopefully)! I think we are very close to something visually appealing and informative with Popcornduff's idea. Are we able to come to a consensus on what is best or bring in others to help decide? The content in this article is great in my eyes, so I'd like to push for this change to put it over the top. Bchill53 (talk) 17:44, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

I'm not opposed to a table, but the problem was that when Popcornduff tried to implement it, a bunch of references broke. My idea would be to have a paragraph or two explaining the basics (goal of the compilation and modes), followed by a table that lists the game title, platform of origin, release year, genre, and notes (e.g. if it was in the international version). JOEBRO64 20:18, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
If someone wants to implement my table then all they have to do is do it without clumsily breaking refs like I did. That's not a difficult job, it's just boring, so I haven't done it.
Seriously, if someone wants to do it, just be WP:BOLD and if someone else thinks it's a bad move they can revert it and we can discuss it again. Popcornduff (talk) 00:59, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: @Popcornduff: Okay, I was hesitant to change much. I feared you were both more hostile than you really are haha.. Thanks for the support. I added the table and made sure everything worked before finalizing. I hope it's appealing to everyone. Let me know if I need to change anything else. Bchill53 (talk) 20:02, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: @Popcornduff: Thanks for the help! I'm very pleased with how it looks. I don't think I will be the only reader that is helped out by this organization. Now please don't kill me if I go do the same thing over on Sonic Mega Collection. xD Bchill53 (talk) 21:35, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Hi! I don't have an account to edit this protected page, and I'm probably gonna forget about this withing the 4 days I need to wait to be allowed to edit, so I'm just gonna drop a request here. Can someone drop this at the bottom of this game's page? (Also, I put a space in it so that it would actually show in this message)
[[Category:Video game compilations] ]
Thanks 136.54.69.81 (talk) 03:09, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

No need. The game is already in the "Sega video game compilations" category, which is a subcategory of "video game compilations". It doesn't need to be in both. -- Cyberlink420 (talk) 03:10, 16 July 2024 (UTC)