# Talk:Tom Conlon

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:24, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

If I  didn't say it before, I should have done, link "footballer" to association football.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"Football League" link.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link Stevenage.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link Loan (sports).
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"his hometown club" any personal life e.g. the fact he was born near Stoke is in the infobox but not in the prose.
Added birth info.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link scout.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"in a game against" in a game not really needed.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"the "Posh" first" similar comment to before.  Either introduce every nickname after the first formal team name mention, or ditch them.  This is particularly important for things like "Posh" and "Boro" when there's  literally no link to the club names.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"2013–14 campaign" put "campaign" in the pipe.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"substitute's" link.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"2014–15 season" put "season" in the pipe.  Check all subsequent "season"/"campaign" stuff.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"following season turned out to be Conlon's breakthrough season " quick repeat of season.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"an injury sustained" what sort?
Changed it.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"Hertfordshire side's lead" most readers won't connect Stevenage to Hertfordshire.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"season, scoring twice, as" so he didn't score in any other game that season...
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"cruciate knee ligament injury" link.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"The 2017–18 season saw Conlon" overlinked.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"was a key member of the Vale's midfield" where is that in the source?
Changed it.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link sent off.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link volley.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Link free-kick.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
"win at Exeter City;[45]" overlinked.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Spaced hyphens in titles of refs should be en-dashes.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Scorelines should use en-dashes not hyphens.
Done.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
That's it for now.  On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:46, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

OK, I've addressed those concerns.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Cool, looks fine.  Promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:12, 18 March 2021 (UTC)