# Talk:Supersize (album)

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 10:57, 2 June 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox
Fine


### Lead
"Prior, David had primarily been a YouTuber" → She is still a Youtuber right? Because it seems like she gave up that career when reading this
She is no longer a YouTuber. She occasionally posts there, but she's considered a rapper now.
"on what observers categorized as pop rap and R&B songs" → observers? Who are these observers?
reworded.
"It was certified platinum in Germany and Austria, and "On Off" also received gold in the aforementioned countries." → remove, this is already on the body of the article and it is just too much here.
Commercially, Supersize was successful → in German-speaking countries
 Done


### Background and release
"The following day, Universal Music Group released a CD for €17,99 and Vertigo Berlin issued a box set for €49,99" → The prices are irrelevant information. The following day, Universal Music Group released a CD and Vertigo Berlin issued a box set.
About the cover art, showing David → Regarding the cover art, which shows David
 Done


### Music and lyrics
pop rap and R&B → pop rap and R&B genres
and have her adopting the role → can you rephrase this?
talking about empowerment... → addressing themes of empowerment
An editor of VIP.de noticed lyrical connections between "Ice" and "Gib Ihm", calling the former a continuation of the latter. → this should be above, right after describing the tracks
 Done


### Critical reception
Could you please put first the favorable reviews, then the average and ultimately the unfavorable ones?
I didn't do this because we literally have three reviews in total. Would we have around 1000 like in high-profile music articles, then this sort-out would be helpful, but here I think it is not.
Mix1 has too many little starts, put it only in the prose
I removed it overall, I came to the conclusion that this isn't too necessary.
 Done


### Promotion and commercial performance
"Gib Ihm" notably broke → "Gib Ihm" broke
at the Wireless Germany festival, but eventually cancelled the gig →  but the gig was canceled + no reason was given?
Unfortunately no.
was a commercial success → was a commercial success in German-speaking countries
German albums charts → wikilink
first one by a German solo female → first by a German solo female
and is also the first one by a → same as previous
 Done


### Track listing
Not sure about wikilink stuff to other wikis that are not the English one. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:17, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
 Done


### Charts
The "German Hip Hop Albums (Offizielle Top 100)" should redirect to GfK Entertainment hip hop albums chart.
 Done


### Release history
Fine


### Notes
Fine


### References
Source 12, 13, 14, 16 25, 26, 45, 46 and 47 missing author even if they are staff
I believe I have everything done here.
Ref 46 red is the author and on 47 is Agnes W. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:22, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
 Done, though 'red' stands for 'Redaktion', which means staff; added that.
A source check has been conducted on the references mentioned above


### Overall
Regarding the Deustch wikilinks, I was thinking something like this FNSHRS.. Of course, only wikilink once in the body of the article
I ended up removing all links overall. There's too much red if we do this, and it doesn't really look good.
Seven days. Let me know once you are done.
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you for your review! I have responded to some of your comments. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:34, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
Cartoon network freak Only missed two references. Everything else seems great, I will pass it after you fix those references if you are ok with that. Please let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:39, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
MarioSoulTruthFan Everything done. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:29, 5 June 2022 (UTC)