# Talk:Together When...

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:52, 27 June 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
Fantastic work!


### Lead
#### Paragraph 1
"...is a song by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki." --> "...is a song recorded by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki."


#### Paragraph 2
"An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which has Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette." --> "An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which displays Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette."


### Background and release
#### Paragraph 1
What about: "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by CMJK," --> "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by musician CMJK,"


### Reception
#### Paragraph 1
"A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labelling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki. The review also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]" --> "A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labeling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki; the reviewer also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]"


### Music video
#### Paragraph 1
"The accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii." --> No source.


### Promotion and live performances
"The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up tour.[21]" --> "The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary Tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again Tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up Tour.[21]"


### Charts and certifications
#### Monthly charts
Did the single peak in 2007/08 or in 2016? The chart box reads 2016


### End of GA Review:
A few changes, good luck! On hold for seven days. Thanks for the review! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:23, 28 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Done and dusted  CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 21:47, 28 June 2016 (UTC)