# Talk:Tuvalu at the Olympics

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists) 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### General
All mentions of "100 m" and its variants need to be written as "100 metres" in the prose for example. -- Done


### National Olympic Committee
Can you clarify who Robert Laupula is? --I believe the sentence clarifies it well enough? If not, could you give me an example?
"TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games" - rewrite to The TASNOC organizes Tuvalu's participation in the Commonwealth Games -- Done
" Isala T. Isala is currently the secretary general," Think Isala T. Isala is the current secretary general would be an improvement over the current version. -- Done


### 2012 Summer Games
"and Manoa set a national record in the event." - clarify for readers that Manoa set a national record in the women's 100 metres dash. --Sounds a bit awkward, but done.
You've made a good effort on this so  far. On hold until the issues have been resolved. MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: See above. Dat GuyTalkContribs 20:48, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
@DatGuy: Looking back with who Robert Laupula is, I believe that is now a non-issue. With that said this article can now be promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)