# Talk:SMS Mücke

here. Parsecboy (talk) 13:08, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Mücke/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 15:48, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:42, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Will review soon. Jaguar (talk) 15:42, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Body
"...which included plans to build at least eight vessels, to as many as eighteen armored warships" - try condensing to ranging from plans to build eight to as many as eighteen armored warships.
Works for me
"as designed and 1,163 t (1,145 long tons) at full load" - I assume it increases at full load? Maybe as designed, increasing to 1,163 t (1,145 long tons) at full load
Done
" and in that time, she was refitted with an additional 8.7 cm (3.4 in)" - during which she was refitted
Done
" Mücke again served as the flagship for the unit, which also included Viper, Salamander, and their sister Camaeleon." - can be shortened to  with Mücke once again serving as flagship alongside Viper, Salamander, and their sister Camaeleon.
Good idea. Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 12:12, 26 June 2025 (UTC)
Another well-written article, nothing much from me this time other than those nitpicks. I see no reason to put it on hold, and will promote outright given it's comprehensiveness. Well done.  Jaguar (talk) 20:53, 24 June 2025 (UTC)