# Talk:Shyam Swarup Agarwal

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Shyam Swarup Agarwal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 11:23, 7 December 2017 (UTC)

I propose reviewing this article which has been waiting for review for seven months. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:23, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Mate, will wait for your comments --jojo@nthony (talk) 11:52, 7 December 2017 (UTC)


### First reading
"His undergraduate studies ..." - This sentence is too long and needs splitting up.  Done --jojo@nthony (talk) 12:45, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
"He superannuated" - This is not an expression I know but presumably means that he retired.  Done --jojo@nthony (talk) 12:46, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
"He died on 2 December 2013" - Can you clarify that you are talking about the father here and not the son.  Done --jojo@nthony (talk) 12:48, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
"... and as well as ..." - I don't think this "and" is wanted. sentence corrected --jojo@nthony (talk) 13:16, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
Panax ginseng needs to be in italics in the caption and the main text.  Done --jojo@nthony (talk) 13:02, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
"he became the founder head of the Medical Genetics and Clinical Immunology." - The head of what? An institute, a department, a course or what? corrected --jojo@nthony (talk) 13:09, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
Wikilink or explain technical terms like seroepidemiology, phytopharmaceutical.  Done --jojo@nthony (talk) 13:13, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
That's all for the time being. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:19, 7 December 2017 (UTC)
User:Cwmhiraeth, corrections done as per comments --jojo@nthony (talk) 12:25, 9 December 2017 (UTC)


### GA criteria
I am happy with the improvements made in response to my comments.

The article is well written and complies with MOS guidelines on prose, grammar, structure and layout. 
The article uses many reliable third-party sources, and makes frequent citations to them. I do not believe it contains original research. 
The article covers the main aspects of the subject and remains focussed. 
The article is neutral. 
The article is stable. 
The images are relevant and have suitable captions, and are either in the public domain or properly licensed. 
Final assessment - I believe this article reaches the GA criteria.  Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:14, 9 December 2017 (UTC)

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