# Talk:Tyan Taylor

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Taylor was named to the New South Wales team --> Named? Appointed, maybe? I see this type of wording throughout the article as well, so try to fix it in other places as well.
Changed two of them: selected, awarded. --LauraHale (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Personal --> Personal life
Fixed for all.  --LauraHale (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
A few paragraphs are way too small, and should be bonded together.
Did that for this one.  Worried that putting them into fewer paragraphs would make the paragraphs look more disjointed as the together in one paragraph themes work. --LauraHale (talk) 21:00, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Other than that, I have found no issues with the article. Great work!

Information is being randomly removed from the article.  Please comment here to explain why the information should be removed. If there is a good reason for removing neutral, reliably sourced information that complies with WP:BLP, it can be done but an explanation needs to be offered. --LauraHale (talk) 00:39, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

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