# Talk:Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics

This page is so ridiculous. Will Wikipedia make a page for every country in the world, for every JO session?  
Come on, this page is almost empty, 3 competitors for this country and a page? Please group countries for a region at least.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A01:E35:8B4A:86E0:A967:D5D6:8357:B5F3 (talk) 08:05, 22 February 2018 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Background
Wikilink Naltar Valley and Ski Federation of Pakistan
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Add a link to 2010 Olympic Games that goes to 2010 Winter Olympics
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Link 1948 Games to 1948 Summer Olympics
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### Alpine skiing
Add a link to 2014 Winter Olympics in the words 2014 Olympics in Sochi
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"He said he was not able to train much in Pakistan due to lack of snow." - due to a lack of snow.
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"Karim competed in the slalom event," - Karim also competed in the slalom event,
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### Cross-country skiing
The wikilink for Winter Olympics should be in the background section
Added Kees08 (Talk)
"Human is Kirim' nephew." - Kirim's
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"Human is in the Pakistani army in addition to his participation on the national skiing team. The Ski Federation of Pakistan founded a school in his village, the same village Abbas is from. He began training internationally in 2010–2011." - Source?, also the last sentence here should read He began training internationally around 2010 and 2011. or something similar
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"the same village Abbas is from." - change the word in bold to place to avoid close repetition
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"For these Olympics, he spent time training in Turkey and Finland, along with some time he spent in Korea prior to the event." - change to For these Olympics, Human spent time training in Turkey and Finland, and also travelled to Korea prior to the event.
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### References
Reference 1 is missing the author who wrote it
Done Kees08 (Talk)
The publisher in Referneces 7 & 8 needs to be in the work field and italized since it is a print publication
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Also, the work in Reference 8 should be The News International instead of The News
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Will put this review on hold to allow the nominator to take some time to read the suggestions I have raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:18, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: I have addressed your concerns above. Kees08 (Talk) 03:29, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Nice. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:22, 12 July 2018 (UTC)