# Talk:Tule Island

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Similar to the other small island article, this feels too short to be a good article but we'll go with the flow and see what we get.
I think it might be a stretch for this one; I scoured existing references pretty well, but I could try to come up with some more.
"farm potatoes, which now consists mostly" perhaps "but which now" or "and which".
Y Have copyedited this sentence a little.
"USGS aerial imagery ..." fragment, no full stop.
Y Fixed.
" City of Stockton" why is "City" capitalised?
Y No particularly good reason, fixed.
"as a fishing location" you didn't link fishing in the lead?
Y Sure, why not.
"the 1959 musical" no need for that year.
Y Fixed.
"Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" what is that?
Y Added some description in "Geography".
"The Modesto Bee" The is part of the name.
Y Fixed.
"$5 to $6 million" maybe $5–6 million.  And inflate.
Y Done.
Ref 6 SHOUTING.
Y
Fixed.
That's it.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:09, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Well, there we go. jp×g 08:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)