# Talk:Robert Kurrle

This review is transcluded from Talk:Robert Kurrle/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Cirt (talk · contribs) 02:15, 10 October 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article. I will do my best to get to at least the various parts of the review of the article within a time period of Seven Days... — Cirt (talk) 02:15, 10 October 2015 (UTC)


### Image review
File:RobertKurrle.1922.jpg = Y = no issues here.
File:RobertKurrle.Cinematographer.December161916.jpg = Y = no issues here.
File:KurrleRobertCareweEdwin.1929.jpg = Y = no issues here.
File:KurrleOnSiteInAfrica.jpg = {{not done}} = please add date to date field. Y
File:KurrleRobert.OnSiteInAfrica.1924.jpg = Y = no issues here.
File:RobertKurrle1932.jpg = Y = no issues here.
— Cirt (talk) 02:27, 10 October 2015 (UTC)

 Done - Onel5969 TT me 04:31, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
Agreed, and thank you! — Cirt (talk) 04:35, 10 October 2015 (UTC)


### Stability assessment
Upon inspection of article edit history = no issues here going back -- to start of article itself in 2014.
Talk page shows absence of problems, as well.
Next, on to rest of review. — Cirt (talk) 02:31, 10 October 2015 (UTC)


### GA on Hold
NOTE: Please respond, below entire review, and not interspersed throughout, thanks! — Cirt (talk) 04:13, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

I will place this article as GA on Hold for a period of approximately Seven Days... — Cirt (talk) 04:21, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
NOTE: Please respond, below entire review, and not interspersed throughout, thanks! — Cirt (talk) 04:13, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Here you go, Cirt.
1a-edited to tighten, break up longer sentences, more succinct.
1b-expanded lead as much as possible with RS. Not much on his early life. Reflects the body of the article better now. Broke out Early life section, and reorganized other sections per your suggestions.
2b-citation for what should be non-contentious issues within the article. If you disagree, will simply remove the citation.
2c-not sure what you want here. You didn't "pass" it, but the comment seems to indicate there is no issue.
3a-expanded the early career slightly. There's not much that can be added about his life/family since there are no reliable sources to cover it.
4-not sure here either.
Regardless, thanks for all the input. Look forward to your response. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Onel5969 (talk • contribs) 


### Passed as GA
Thanks for being so polite and responsive to my recommendations as GA Reviewer. Much appreciated, — Cirt (talk) 06:19, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

One last note: Please, consider reviewing two (2) WP:GAN candidates, for every one that you nominate. Thank you, — Cirt (talk) 06:20, 13 October 2015 (UTC)