# Talk:Paul Rabone

B class. The Night operations section is very long. Please consider adding 1 or 2 more section headers. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 04:08, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Paul Rabone/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"to Fighter Command and" link.
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"the Blitz" link.
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"intruder missions" what were they?
I've linked this. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"Christchurch in New Zealand' link ChCh.
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"Territorial Force" link?
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"pilot officer" link that rank.
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"he Battle of France commenced " link.
Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"missions.[5][4]" ref order.
Grrr, I'm usually a stickler for these. Fixed. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"the Midlands" link.
This is already linked, perhaps you missed the first mention. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Link for Drem?
This is already linked, ditto here. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Body needs to make mention that he was considered a flying ace, that's only mentioned in the lead.
Done, at the very end. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the review The Rambling Man, I have responded with these edits and comments above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)