# Talk:Widerøe Flight 710

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:51, 3 January 2013 (UTC)

Lead
Lead looks very well. No issues here.
Flight
"He had a total flight time of 6,458, of which 85 hours was" --> "He had a total flight time of 6,458 hours, of which 85 were"
"The aircraft had during the morning of 6 May been used" Why not put "been used" before "during the morning"?
"which is received permission to" which is? You can remove "permission to" to avoid breaking the sentence.
"The first first point on the checklist"...
"Three second later" Seconds
Cause
Nothing here
Salvage
Good
Aftermath
Nothing here
Okay. Everything seems very good. Awaiting to pass. — ΛΧΣ21 00:51, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
I've gone through and made the changes you listed. Lukeno94 (talk) 13:30, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
Passed :) — ΛΧΣ21 13:34, 12 January 2013 (UTC)

The final sentence is "The roll-out ... is scheduled for completion in 2013." Can this be updated? Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 06:28, 6 May 2022 (UTC)