# Talk:Typhoon Eli

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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
I can take this one on. Eddie891  Talk Work  23:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)


### comments
"known in the Philippines as Typhoon Konsing" suggest mentioning in article body so you can move this out of the lede
It's probably best suited for the lead tbh. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
"23 people were hurt" -> " 23 people were injured"? hurt can be a rather vague term
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
link Shrimp farming?
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
could link Coconut tree and Pepper tree?
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Suggest adding a year to the first paragraph in the body to give the reader something to anchor on
I mean the year is in the title but sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
"Following the recurvature of Typhoon Deanna on July 2" What was Typhoon Deanna? Perhaps one more sentence of introductory set-up would be apt?
Added a link. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
link Monsoon trough?
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
is there a link for 'ridging'?
Added. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
"with both the JTWC and JMA also analyzing a peak intensity" suggest removing 'both' because you then go on to talk about how they differ
Good call. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
" improved drought conditions" -> "alleviated drought conditions"?
Good call. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
" initial reports of 25 fishermen were" -> "initial reports of 25 fishermen"
Re-worded anyway because I use the word "reports" and "reported" twice in a sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
source #9 is available for free here
Replaced. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Ref #2 could use page numbers as it's a 200+ page document
Added. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
That's all from me. The article otherwise meets GA criteria. Feel free to discuss any of these. Nice work! Eddie891  Talk Work  12:17, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Yellow Evan, This article is well written, referenced, illustrated, comprehensive and otherwise meets the GA criteria. I'm happy to pass. Eddie891  Talk Work  21:22, 10 May 2020 (UTC)