# Talk:Prisoners of the Sun

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)


### Lead
Can you wikilink the 2001 musical like you did for the video game?
Good point; done! Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)


### Background
"Some Belgians were upset that Hergé was willing to work for a newspaper controlled by the then occupying Nazi administration, although he was heavily enticed by the size of Le Soir's readership, which reached 600,000." - What does "he was heavily enticed" mean in this case?
It refers to the fact that he was enticed to work for the newspaper by the prospect of his comic strip getting a far wider readership than it had ever had before. We can reword it if you think it should be clarified ? Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:33, 11 March 2015 (UTC)


### Influences
Farr mentions Columbus using the prediction of a solar eclipse. Can you add that info? 
Good point - I've added the referenced information here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:22, 11 March 2015 (UTC)


### References
Footnotes #7 and #29 - Assouline and Peeters pages are missing.
I see what's happened; the page numbers were in there but weren't formatted properly, thus not appearing in the article itself. I've corrected that problem. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
Pass or Fail: 

Once again, great job, Midnightblueowl.  — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 06:48, 12 March 2015 (UTC)