# Talk:Prides Crossing station

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:05, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

What's a "flag stop"?
 Done linked.
"(B&M) in 1885. The B&M operated" repetitive, why not just "(B&M) in 1885 which operated"?
 Done Reworded.
" level crossing" link.
 Done
"a one-story stick style now" maybe Briteng, but feels like there's a word missing, like "construction" after the style.
 Done Added the missing word.
"The Gloucester Branch opened to" overlinked.
 Done
I see "wealthy residents " is linked to the section on "notable residents" - do we know they all used this station?
On the 8:02 and Beverly Revisited don't refer to specific residents, but state that they were well-used by the wealthy residents. I've added citations that specifically list several of them using the station, and several others arriving on private sidings.
"February 1, 1981 due" comma after year.
 Done
"lasted into" continued into.
I think the existing phrasing works fine.
"The NTSB determined" don't use acronyms without explaining them first.
 Done
Salem link?
 Done
"mini-high platforms " what are those?
 Done
"was nominated for closures " why plural?
 Done Typo fixed.
Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
 Done
Spaced hyphen in ref titles should be spaced en-dash.
 Done
"MBTA - Prides Crossing" also should be an en-dash.
 Done
Is the "depot" building the same as the station building?  If not, it only seems to be mentioned in the lead.  If so, I'm confused.
 Done Yes, the same building. I've standardized on "station" to clarify
Where is "fare zone 5" mentioned or referenced?
 Done Ref added.
Montserrat is not mentioned in the article other than in the infobox.
That's a navigation template, standard for station articles.
That's all I have for now.  On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:30, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed all your items above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 05:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
Ok, happy with that so passing.  Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:07, 12 March 2021 (UTC)