# Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

This should be done quickly! --K. Peake 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)


### Infobox and lead
How long ago dates were does not need to be noted in the infobox
Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
The exacty recording date and studio are not sourced anywhere in the body
Added the details with a source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
WP:OVERLINK of Columbia under label(s)
"during the sessions for" → "during the sessions for his third studio album,"
"The track was written" → "The song was written"
"by Dylan and produced by" → "by Dylan, and produced by"
"started ninety seconds" → "started 90 seconds" per MOS:NUM
Move the standalone sentence to being in the same para as the rest since this is not enough on its own
"found the track enjoyable." → "found the song enjoyable."
Fixed the seven points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)


### Background and recording
Add a comma after E tuning
"ninety seconds into" → "90 seconds into" per MOS:NUM
"before saying that the song" → "until saying that the song" to avoid using before twice in one sentence
I amended the article per the three points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
"and the stanza's return." is this definitely about one stanza because if multiple, remove the apostrophe
Source has "Dylan accompanies the bridge and stanza’s return with harmonica." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Pipe Jimmie Tarlton to Darby and Tarlton
Add double speech marks around "Percy's Song"
I amended the article per the two points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


### Release and reception
The tense of reviews needs to be consistent
Fixed. (Hopefully). BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:39, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


### Personnel
Good


### References
Copyvio score is totally non existent!
Wikilink Columbia Records
Wikilink Scarecrow Press per MOS:LINK2SECT
Added the links. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:38, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:39, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
Many thanks, K. Peake. Hopefully I've fixed everything, but let me know if more work is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 Pass now, thanks for the response within the expected timeframe of a week! --K. Peake 18:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)