# Talk:Tropical Storm Erika (2009)

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GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

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It is stable.
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It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Pretty good overall, but there are some things that need work. The most significant problems:

Although it was a disorganized system, it was immediately declared a tropical storm. - As opposed to, what?
Clarified Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Although the cyclone was well-organized, it lacked a defined low-level circulation center, leading to the NHC not issuing advisories on the system at that time. - This is a tad confusing, since it couldn't have been too well-organized it it didn't have a low-level center...
Reworded Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
This led to the NHC immediately declaring the low a tropical storm and naming it Erika, the fifth named storm of the 2009 season. - Very poorly constructed sentence.
Reworded Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
In post-storm analysis of these readings, it was determined that they had over estimated the wind speeds in an area of unusually heavy rains. - Who's "they"?
Clarified Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
The first paragraph of the Preparations section can simply be sourced to the TCR rather than numerous advisories.
Just directly sourcing to the original issuance of the watches/warnings Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Well, yes, but redundant or superfluous footnotes should be avoided whenever possible, and since the TCR already provides the same information in one centralized site, I think it would be better to cite that. –Juliancolton | Talk 15:58, 8 December 2009 (UTC)r
The islands of Saint Martin and Saint Barthélemy were placed under an orange alert and Guadeloupe was placed under a yellow alert. - What are orange and yellow alerts?
Clarified Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
In Guadeloupe, heavy rainfall from Erika, peaking at 7.9 in (200 mm), leading to flooding in Côte-sous-le-Vent. - Grammar.
Corrected Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Overall the impact section makes use of passive voice far too often.
I'm not sure how to do this correctly, but I gave it a shot. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 Doing... –Juliancolton | Talk 15:58, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
On-hold for now. –Juliancolton | Talk 13:00, 8 December 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review JC. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:49, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Looking better. Just a couple more issues before I can pass it. –Juliancolton | Talk 15:58, 8 December 2009 (UTC)

Was Erika forecasted to make landfall in Puerto Rico?39.tg (talk)January 14 2011  —Preceding undated comment added 19:25, 14 February 2011 (UTC). 

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