# Talk:Scorpion pose

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Reviewer: Augustios Paleo (talk · contribs) 20:12, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks. I'm out of office so may respond slowly. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:12, 3 August 2023 (UTC)

I will do this review today or tomorrow.


### Review
Earwig detected low percentages of copying, so this passes that.
Noted.
" yoga as exercise" should it be "as an" exercise?
It's correct as it is, exercise as a thing of quantity.
Is there any more info on the origin? If not, this section should be good.
That's about it on this aspect.
hyphen between "20th" and "century"
Added.
" B. K. S. Iyengar's 1966 Light on Yoga grades it as level 32 out of 60." on what scale? And say something like "Yoga specialist B. K. S...."
The scale is the "out of 60", which is Iyengar's own. Added.
"head is lifted from the ground so the body is supported only by the forearms" remove "from the ground"
Done.
the word "variant" is repetitive, change to "form", "variety", etc.
Would much prefer not to do that, as all the Yoga articles use this word with this meaning.
"props and are able to land safely if they fall; this requires the ability to perform backarches such as Urdhva " change "are able to" to "can", and "backarches" is two words.
Reworded. It's one word as a noun.
"with the back less extremely arched." backless is one word
No, that would be a backless dress, this means that "less" qualifies "extremely".
In the "Beginner to intermediate" section, combine sentences into paragraphs for each form. The current spacing is unnecessary
Done.
"but with only the elbows on the ground, the hands cradling the face, making it a difficult balance" change to "and the hands"
No, as stated the hands cradle the face, which is not on the ground.
"In 2022, the Indian yoga teacher Yash Moradiya held the pose for 29 minutes and 4 seconds, as measured by Guinness World Records in Dubai.[22]" link Dubai and say "Dubai, UAE" or "Dubai, United Arab Emirates
Added.
Great job!
Many thanks!