# Talk:Weinen, Klagen, Sorgen, Zagen, BWV 12

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Will review within the next three days :-)♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Infobox
pipe Schlosskirche in Weimar to Schloss Weimar.
It's intentionally to the redirect, because some day thatcould become an article.
Lead
A lot of italics. It is really necessary to italicize positions like Konzertmeister and Thomaskantor?
Copied from FA BWV 172, that's my model.
History
" The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, the text of the first recitative is taken from Acts 14:22, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God".  =  "The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, and the text of the first recitative, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God", is taken from Acts 14:22."
taken
Music
A lot of very short paragraphs and quite a lot of short, snappy sentences. Can you merge a few? 
This still reads as a bit rough around the edges in parts. Could use a copyedit for clarity and some tidying up in parts but in terms of content looks adequate for GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:08, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

Will do, but make a few days. rather busy today and tomorrow, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:57, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
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B. Focused: 
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Good job Gerda, looks fine for GA now!♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:51, 16 August 2014 (UTC)