# Talk:Rosemary Edna Sinclair

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General
Some close paraphrasing is possible [1]
I have addressed the issue. Some of the sentences are in quotes and others pertain to titles or names
No dablinks or external link issue.
Early life and education
12 year old Hyphens
Done
Personal life
Valentine's Day 1970 Let's give the plain date.
Added "14 February"
Thanks for the review. Addressed above issues in the article. Nvvchar. 12:18, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. This can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you.Nvvchar. 07:06, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Information describing Rosemary Edna Sinclair mistakenly includes information relating to a different Rosemary Sinclair, CEO of .au Domain Administration Limited (auDA).
The following lines are about Rosemary Sinclair (auDA), not the Rosemary Sinclair this page represents, and as such should be removed: 
Intro heading
'She has held many key posts at Telecom Australia. In 2002, she was represented on the Broadband Advisory Group of Federal Government'
'She also works as the Managing Director of the Australian Telecommunications (ATUG).'
Career heading
'In 1980, Sinclair became Managing Director of Australian Telecommunications Users Group (ATUG), an NGO dedicated to protecting the rights of product users in Australia in the field of telecommunications'
Affiliations and memberships heading 
'Some of the key executive posts Sinclair has held are in the Telecom Australia as; "National General Manager – Communications Industry Accounts; Director, Strategic Development at the ABC; and as Director, Education, New Media and Export at Scholastic Australia." In 2002, she was represented on the Federal Government's "Broadband Advisory Group". She is also a member of the Government's "Australian Communications Industry Forum (ACIF), the Australian Telework Advisory Committee (ATAC), Teleworking Task Force, the National ICT Industry Alliance" and the Working Group of the Broadband for Health Program.'
'Sinclair is a represented on the "International Telecommunications Working Group (INTUG) Executive Committee". She is the Vice Chairman of INTUG Asia-Pacific Region.'
Thank you Hayleywigg (talk) 02:13, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

 Not done for now: This is a contentious edit, or this has already been discussed, so you'll need to discuss first with other editors. If there is an existing discussion on the talk page please contribute to that section. If there is no existing discussion you may explain why this edit should be made in this section, or start a new section on this talk page. - FlightTime (open channel) 02:16, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
User:FlightTime FYI the above user appears to have spotted a massive flaw in the article in which the subject has been confused with another person of the same name. ITBF (talk) 14:29, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
@ITBF: OK. and you point to me is ?  - FlightTime (open channel) 18:17, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
User:FlightTime you rejected their edit request. Did you actually read it? ITBF (talk) 12:52, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
I didn't "reject" their concerns (hence the "Not done for now"), I suggested that the editors who regularly watch this page have a look a fix it correctly if needed.  - FlightTime (open channel) 00:38, 24 June 2022 (UTC)