# Talk:Tan Kah Kee MRT station

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tan Kah Kee MRT station/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:24, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"to its present name through" -> "to Tan Kah Kee"
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""as the name was viewed" -> "as it was viewed"
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"misleading" could you give us a clue in the lead as to why?
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"Bus, Taxi" ->"Bus, taxi"
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"at a sum of" value
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"US$240.66 million" 1  decimal place is fine.
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"have to be"  had to be.
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"t was initially considered to underpin the gateways" -> "Underpinning the gateways was initially considered..."
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"in Q4 2012" in the fourth  quarter of 2012
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"contractor had assured that it would finish the construction" this is obvious unless you  mean they assured that after going into insolvency?
 Done replaced to: as the construction was going well by then
"As the LTA seek for a new contractor, the contractor for Beauty World station," unclear, repetitive, link?
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"400 workers affected..." avoid starting sentences with a numeral.
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"US$177.42" no decimal places here.
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"was raised by" increased.
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"breakers, to break up" repetitive.
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"works completed by 95%" -> "works 95% complete."
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"segment will open on"  would.
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"other DTL Stage 2 stations" -> DTL2
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"Exit A of this station"  -> "Exit A of Tan Kah Kee station"
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"a road nearby." -> "a nearby road"
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"it has the" had
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"Then principal of the school" hyphenate.
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"congratulated the station name" you  normally  congratulate someone.
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"most votes through the voting system" no need for  "through the voting system"
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"Road[1] and" move to behind punctuation.
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List of schools here is different from that in the lead, and some linked, some not.
Well in the body there are more schools mentioned than those in the lead.
Link headways.
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"be a grand yet compelling structure, to reflect the youthful ingenuity" etc etc brochure speak, needs copyedit.
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Plenty  of spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes.
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Ref  8 doesn't link Straits Times but ref 11 does...
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Ref 35 is LTA ref 35 is lta.gov.sg etc
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Ref 24 it's a work not a publisher.
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Ref 41 should be  pp.
whats pp?
This. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:29, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
That's  all I  have, so it's on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:50, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Addressed most of the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:11, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Note [A] needs to be referenced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:31, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
ZKang123 just this last point...  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:12, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Ok done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:42, 27 March 2021 (UTC)