# Talk:Stony Island (Michigan)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Stony Island (Michigan)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:35, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Not sure why so many cites in the lead, see MOS:LEADCITE, as everything in the lead is normally mentioned in the article, reference it there instead.
Y I've written an actual lead.
Put (USGS) after the expanded version.
Y Done.
"in Wayne County.[5]" overlinked.
Y Done.
"″W[1], and" ref after comma.
Y Done.
Lead could use one or two more sentences, perhaps about its history.
Y Done.
I would have the History section ahead of the Ecology section.
Y Done.
"chinkapin oak, hackberry and cottonwood" links?
? I had those linked, but they got tagged with a {{dn}} because they weren't links to specific species. The source itself doesn't give this information (all it says is "There are approximately 20.2 ha (50 acres) of upland area which includes a mix of vegetation; massive chinkapin oak, hackberry and cottonwood are among the old growth"). Since I didn't want to do OR, I just removed the links.
"over 23 species" more than.
Y Done.
"ed lake sturgeon,[6]:4​lake whitefish,[6]:4​rainbow smelt,[6]:8​northern pike,[6]:10​muskellunge,[6]:10​carp,[6]:13​minnow,[6]:17​channel catfish,[6]:19​bullhead[disambiguation needed],[6]:19​white bass,[6]:22​smallmouth bass,[6]:22​yellow perch,[6]:25​walleye,[6]:31​and " spaces after each reference, and one of those is already tagged as [disambiguation needed].
Y Done.
" by Potawatomi, who" context, who were they?
Y Done.
"connecting it to Grosse Ile[2] as" overlinked.
Y Done.
"activity died down" dredging activity?
Y Done.
"1977[10] until the company ceased operations in 1987.[12]" put that [10] at the end, nasty placement now.
Y Done.
Date formats in the references should be consistent.
Y Done.
Ref 1 needs more information, publisher/website and publication/access date etc.
? I assume you're talking about the GNIS ref; I don't think I can do this, since the reference is provided through a template ({{Gnis}}). I can try to look at the documentation, but it doesn't seem like it will work.
That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:49, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I think that covers everything. Thanks for picking up these articles so quickly! jp×g 22:44, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

 jp×g 05:17, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Another one here. jp×g 08:38, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
And here. jp×g 08:39, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
Permit from 1961. jp×g 08:40, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
Unsigned indenture for the island, 1920 jp×g 11:43, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
Who owns the rock piles? When did D&S buy the island? All of these answers and more.
1925 permit from War Department for covering fill with riprap
Letterhead, 1922