# Talk:Soft Light (The X-Files)

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:03, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Infobox
Match with other X-Files article by linking season 2, then removed the other lists at the very bottom of the infobox
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Lede
Episode can't really "premiered" how about "originally aired"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics. → The episode generally received positive reviews from television critics.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
"like". Isn't really a word you want here. How about "such as"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Plot
Nothing; Huh 0)
Production
"huge" is not needed; same for "even" kind of WP:NPOV
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Who was it directing by ;(  James A. Contner is very sad right now. Lol
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Broadcast and reception
"Soft Light" was first broadcast in the United States on May 5, 1995, on the Fox Broadcasting Company → "Soft Light" originally aired on the Fox network on May 5, 1995.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
UK airing, perhaps?
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
References
Ref. 6: "Sci-Fi Blast From The Past - Tony Shalhoub (The X-Files)" The - should be an en dash as per WP:DASH.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Ref. 6: How is that a good source
Firstly, it's a primary source-based interview, so its notable. Secondly, the author is a regular contributor to Andrew Morton's website/newspaper, The Morton Report, so he isn't just a random crackpot Link--Gen. Quon (Talk)  20:58, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
"Fox Broadcasting Company", not "corporation"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Ref. 9: Doubled periods with Time, Inc., which should be Time, Inc
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
External links
on TheXFiles.com should use "at"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
"The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki". Repetitive. How about: "The X-Files, an external wiki"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
On hold. Good work. TBrandley 17:25, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

There, I believe I've gotten everything. Thank you for the review.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  21:59, 30 July 2012 (UTC)
Will pass the artcle. Congrats! TBrandley 23:14, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

The last segment of the critique section references a page that is no longer being maintained. Additional research being necessary to assess the significance of this critic, which doesn't seem readily available as the critic is not noteworthy themselves, seems to suggest this is a trivial segment and should be removed.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2603:8001:5602:B943:1C2F:21BC:4AD:6F32 (talk) 10:41, 31 March 2022 (UTC)