# Talk:That's the Woman I Want

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:51, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:51, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Pilot
"Lindolfo Chaves is the president of a tobacco company based in Havana," - more concise president of a Havana-based tobacco company
"his doctor diagnoses him with a heart murmur" - what type of heart murmur?
"his uncle's arrival comes at a bad time for Ruperto: " - try not to use word such as "at a bad time"
"with the help of Sócrates, Ruperto's butler," - how about with the help of Ruperto's butler Sócrates instead?
"the three characters play out the farce in front of Uncle Lindolfo. Lindolfo believes the ruse"  - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this


### Production
"by company Bolívar Films," - perhaps clarify what type of company Bolívar Films was
"as an opportunity to create his own feature in Venezuela." - feature film
"and used the same crew as El demonio es un ángel." - from


### Marketing and release
Please state briefly who María Gabriela Colmenares is
"Some of these slogans explicitly promoted the famous Venezuelan composer Eduardo Serrano," - the word "famous" isn't needed IMO
"Some of the promotions before release also include newspaper interviews," - promotions of the film before its release
"The press release on the day of premiere, Colmenares explains" - In the press release on the day of the premiere, Colmenares explains that it,
Also, is the press release from Bolivar Films or another entity? It would help for clarity


### Analysis
"Colmenares writes (in 1999 and 2005) that" - I don't feel that the parentheses are needed as it looks like a sidenote instead
"Azuaga García also notes that That's the Woman I Want is, along with The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon, "the most representative," - The Yacht Isabel Arrived This Afternoon are "the most representative,"
"In 2009, Colmenares looked at the credits of the film," - more formal; observed


### Sources
Be consistent in listing the location field in the sources where possible
Am going to place the review on hold to enable the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you a detailed review - I think I've done everything except the heart murmur, which the film only calls a heart murmur. Kingsif (talk) 17:18, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
@Kingsif: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 9 April 2020 (UTC)