# Talk:SMS Loreley (1859)

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 10:48, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 10:48, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

She thereafter went to Greece, the Ottoman Empire, and then to Romania before Pipe Greece and Romania to the Kingdom of Greece and the United Principalities of Moldavia and Wallachia.
Done
being recalled to Prussia in 1862 Link Prussia.
Done
slightly to 2.51 m (8 ft 3 in) forward and 3.05 m (10 ft 0 in) aft Remove the "0 in".
Good catch
manufactured by the machine shop operated by the Seehandlungsgesellschaft Maybe add an English translation?
"the royal merchant shipping organization" is basically the translation
the royal merchant shipping organization What's the official name of the organisation?
Seehandlungsgesellschaft ;)
for a top speed of 10.5 knots (19.4 km/h; 12.1 mph) Link knots.
Done
in mid-June 1861 to bring the Prussian ambassador to visit the new Sultan Abdülaziz --> "in mid-June 1861 to bring the Prussian Ambassador to visit the new Sultan Abdülaziz".
I don't think the plain noun is capitalized - if it was "Ambassador So-and-so" it'd be capitalized, but not by itself
had conquered the entire Jutland peninsula and Als --> "had conquered the entire Jutland Peninsula and Als".
Done
next carried Crown Prince Friedrich and his family --> "next carried Crown Prince Friedrich and his family".
Why italicize his name?
@Parsecboy: Friedrich is his German name his official English name Friedrick. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 21:51, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
Right, but we don't italicize names. Parsecboy (talk) 22:06, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
Loreley also carried the German ambassador to the Ottoman Empire on a cruise --> "Loreley also carried the German Ambassador to the Ottoman Empire on a cruise".
Same as above
conducting training cruises to Rhodes, Cyprus, and the coast of Palestine Pipe Cyprus to British Cyprus.
Done
ordered Loreley to take the ambassador to Sultan Abdul Hamid II --> "ordered Loreley to take the Ambassador to Sultan Abdul Hamid II".
As above
Pipe Russian to the Russian Empire.
Done
he engine drove a pair of paddle wheels, one on either side of the ship, that were You mean "was"?
No, the "were" refers back to the wheels.
@Parsecboy: You know I struggle always with the issue. The was/were are always confused for me if you use the "a" before the "were". I also heard this is a British/American issue wherein British you say was after the "a" even there is a plural number after the "a" same if the sentence starts with plural and after it, you use "a" then it's still "were" which is understandable to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:46, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
No edit wars.
Infobox

Looks good to me.
Sources

Some ISBNs have hyphens others don't maybe standardise them.
Done
Hildebrand's ASIN isn't accessible to me.
Changed to an ISBN
The rest look reliable and academic.
No OR.
Images

What's the situation of File:SMS Loreley (1871).jpg in the US?
Added a US tag
No source link for File:Seegefecht bei Jasmund.jpg
The photo was taken by the uploader where the painting is on display, there's no link for it.
That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:22, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 08:16, 14 September 2019 (UTC)