# Talk:SMS Medusa (1864)

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:03, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

This article is in fine shape. A few comments from me:

the rounding of the length in the infobox and body doesn't match
Forgot the "in" part
the draft is converted into decimal feet in the body, should be ftin
I could've sworn I fixed all of these when I started writing this series - apparently not.
the engine didn't drive the boilers, it was the other way around. Reword?
Good catch, that hadn't occurred to me ;)
where were the guns positioned? all broadside?
Yes
Prussian Ministryer of War
Good catch
link ship commissioning
Done
suggest "deployment in the interest of improving the crew's rations, rather than relying entirely on hardtack."
That works for me
suggest "necessity offor their presence"?
Done
perhaps mention Saint Thomas was a Danish possession at the time
Good idea
perhaps translate Unterleutnant zur See as you've done with the other rank
Done
perhaps note that Halifax is in Nova Scotia (or Canada)
Good catch.
That's it. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67  (click to talk to me) 03:28, 17 August 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Peacemaker! Parsecboy (talk) 11:49, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67  (click to talk to me) 02:26, 18 August 2018 (UTC)