# Talk:Scarlet-and-white tanager

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:36, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

What's a "median stripe"?
I've adee.
"It feed mainly" feeds.
Fixed.
It is... repeated several times in the lead.  Perhaps switch one or two out for the name of the species for variety.
Done.
"P.L. Sclater" -> "P. L. Sclater"
Done.
"in Remedios, Antioquia" which country?
Added.
"Union (IOC). Alternative" you never use IOC so not sure of the purpose of abbreviating it.
Removed.
"scarlet and white tanager" and "scarlet-white tanager" alt names are normally given in bold and plausible redirects can be created from them to this article if they don't already exist.
Bolded and created redirects.
Link body parts again in the prose.
Done.
"non-migratory" link appropriately.
Linked.
Can we say what IUCN means?
Not sure what you mean.
Red list was mentioned in the lead but not in the main article, don't have details in the lead which aren't in the main article.
Added to body.
Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen, needs to be en-dash.
Fixed. AryKun (talk) 04:12, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 1 October 2021 (UTC)