# Talk:Windows Push Notification Service

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
The image of the "Overview of the WNS architecture" needs an alt image description; please add one


### Lead
Remember: Anything that is mentioned in the lead needs to be mentioned in the article; the facts about "it was first supported on Windows 8 and subsequently on Windows Phone 8.1 upon its release." is cited wonderfully here, but it needs to be brought up in the article as well
Same with Reference #2 please


### Technical details
#### Design and compatibility
No source for the "The service changes are expected to be released alongside an anniversary update to Windows 10." statement


#### Architecture
Great work; nothing to add!


### References
The "Reflist" parameters should be changed to "Reflist|30em"; please do this to prevent extra space in this section
Overlinking issues:
Reference #2 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
Reference #3 – Unlink "Microsoft" please
Reference #8 – Unlink "Microsoft" please


### End of GA Review:
Short and sweet: a good and quick read! Great work! The article will be placed on hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. If you have a question for me regarding this review, feel free to @PING me and I'll respond and I'm sure I will respond swiftly. Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:41, 13 June 2016 (UTC).

Hi Carbrera - I've had a go at fixing the issues you've identified - any further feedback would be welcome! Mike1901 (talk) 21:58, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for your quick response; quick's the wrong word–more like immediate (a whopping 17 minutes!) I have passed the article now and appreciate your improvements. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 14 June 2016 (UTC).