# Talk:Sydney Johnson

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil Ready • to • Rumble  02:51, 7 May 2011 (UTC)

multiple letter of intent links.
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:38, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
Please check for other multiple links - Penn, Baltimore Sun, The New York Times.
NYT and BS links only redundant in refs.  Penn redundant through placeholder template.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:38, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
he was named Ivy League Player of the week, should that be placed in inverted commas since it's an honour - "Ivy League Player of the week"?
Never heard of that convention, but fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:40, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
No. That was a question. I thought that the honour was a proper noun, and that it should be capitalised and placed between inverted commas. I'm not insisting that you should do it. I was merely asking
I do not believe it is suppose to be in quotes. I never see it in press releases. I am going to undo.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:09, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
"rebuilding 'in which' it posted" --> 'during which'
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:43, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
"2008-2009", add dash; check for other instances, like "2-4 start to win" and "13-14 with an 8-6 record"
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:47, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
"While at Princeton, Johnson was a member of the Cap and Gown Club." - source?
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:04, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
"Johnson has been very involved" --> replace has with had?
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:49, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
format ref 75
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:07, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
shouldn't Collegeinsider.com Coach of the Year be placed in inverted commas? And shouldn't the website be italicised?
No to the first and I don't believe so to the second.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:12, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
[1] yields 3 dead links
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:28, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
Source for "Head coaching record" table?
Refs added.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:00, 7 May 2011 (UTC)


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