# Talk:Regine Tugade

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this, will post review soon. Kosack (talk) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)


### Infobox
The Dededo, Guam link is a redirect, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked per WP:OVERLINK.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Is the update field needed? There's no competition statistics included so I'm not sure it is.
Well, it says that as of that date, she has no medals. I will update it since she still does not. Kees08 (Talk)


### Lead
Is female necessary? Looking at a number of other female athletes, this doesn't seem to be required.
Okay, removed. I think sometimes it is added if the name is not a common one, but Regine is clear enough. Kees08 (Talk)
I think the opening sentence could do with rewording, "is a Guamanian sprinter" instead of "sprinter from Guam" would be more consistent with this style of page.
I think maybe it was like that so we did not have two links in a row, but Guamanian does flow better. Kees08 (Talk)
Link Beijing and Cali.
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"She competed in the 2016 Summer Olympics of the women's 100 metres preliminary round", this sentence is a bit muddled. Swap it round so the event comes first, "She competed in the women's 100 metres preliminary round at the 2016 Summer Olympics".
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After the use in the second sentence, metres can simply be referred to as m. Change the Olympics event to women's 100 m instead of metres to maintain consistency.
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The opening mentions she competed in the 100m at the 2017 World Championships but the later section states it was the 200m?
Corrected Kees08 (Talk)
Refs 2 and 3 need to be placed after punctuation.
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### Biography
Again, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked.
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Link most valuable player.
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naval academy > United States Naval Academy
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### World Championships
Change Beijing, China link to just Beijing, leaving China unlinked.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
'"She also competed in the 2017 World Championships. She competed", bit of repetition there. Perhaps, "She also competed in the 200 m at the 2017 World Championships, finishing sixth in..."?
Changed competed to ran Kees08 (Talk)
Refs 15 and 16 have an unnecessary space between them.
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### College career
Link 2016 Summer Olympics.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Add "in Rio de Janeiro" after that.
Added a sentence so I could do this, since you cannot do it in section headers. Kees08 (Talk)


### 2016 Summer Olympics
Ref 7 states she was one of just five athletes that were chosen to represent Guam, perhaps mention this?
Added Kees08 (Talk)
Link 2020 Summer Olympics.
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### External links
Remove the stub tag.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Only some very minor issues that can be easily fixed. Placed on hold for seven days. Kosack (talk) 15:52, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
@Kosack: Addressed your comments, thanks for the thorough review. Kees08 (Talk) 19:00, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Nice work. One last point, Guamanian should be unlinked as nationalities are mentioned in WP:OVERLINK as being unnecessary links. This will also clear any issue with two links in a row. Kosack (talk) 19:06, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
TIL. Thanks, done Kees08 (Talk) 19:11, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
Happy to promote to GA. Kosack (talk) 19:17, 4 March 2018 (UTC)