# Talk:SkyLoop

Thought it was worth mentioning that this ride seems to be a knock off of the SkyLoop (pic). Once it gets a name and possibly some news sources, we could probably add a "similar rides" section and include Superman at SFDK as well. Themeparkgc  Talk  07:09, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:SkyLoop/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 21:43, 21 November 2012 (UTC)


### Review
#### Prose review
Lead
"although none have yet to be built." --> "those have not been built yet"
History
"The world's first SkyLoop was Sky Wheel which opened in 2004 and is currently located at Skyline Park in Germany." --> "The world's first SkyLoop, Sky Whell, opened in 2004 and is currently located at Skyline Park in Germany."
"This model would continue to be the only model" --> Redundancy of "model".
"built to this day" --> change it with an specific date [e.g. "built as of March 2012"]
"none have been built to this day" --> Same recomendations as above, reword, add an specific date.
XT 150
"The train is then lowered..." --> "it is then lowered..."
"board the ride" --> I guess that "borad the train" is more accurate.
XT 450
"This model is an extension of the XT 150 as the beginning is the same." --> "of the XT 150; the beginning is the same."
I believe I have addressed the above concerns in this edit. Themeparkgc  Talk  22:59, 21 November 2012 (UTC)


#### General comments on broadness
Is there any information about:
Who first designed the rolled coaster? [person or group]
Why the X-Coaster was closed? [Although I see it has its own article]
I've added a brief statement regarding X-Coaster's closure in this edit with an appropriate source. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:15, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
I think that the table does a good job, although I'd also like more information about each installation, but that's me being nit-picky.
What sort of information were you thinking of? Themeparkgc  Talk  23:15, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
I don't exactly know. Don't pay attention to it, i'm just leaving some thoughts :P These comments are optional. — ΛΧΣ21™ 23:18, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
Everything else seems to be good.
— ΛΧΣ21™ 22:02, 21 November 2012 (UTC)

Well, I am passing the article. My general comments can be added/addressed later, they are optional. Article meets GA criteria. — ΛΧΣ21™ 23:20, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
Thanks Themeparkgc  Talk  00:07, 22 November 2012 (UTC)