# Talk:River Works station

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:02, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"to General Electric Aviation employees" isn't the company called "GE Aviation"?
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"MassDOT, " expand before using this.
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Lynn station is linked, but nothing for West Lynn?
? I'm not sure what you mean by this. Where?
"freight sidings" link?
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"grade crossing" link?
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"in 1837. By 1852" bit repetitive.
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You have several bold names, like G.E. Works but they don't all exist as redirects back to this article.
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"Boston, Revere Beach & Lynn Railroad" it was "and" in the lead.
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"railroad.[21][14]:77 " order.
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"The River Works plant" overlinked.
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"1952.[30][23][31]" order.
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"timetables.[34][35][36][37] " likewise.
Those appear to already be in order.
"seven daily inbound boardings in 1983, and 27 in 2018" 7/27 or seven/twenty-seven.
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Is that reference really page 0?
It's the inside front cover, what would be page 0 given the existing pagination. I can't think of a better way to indicate that with {{rp}}.
"schedules based on existing Saturday schedules were in effect from March 16 to June 23, 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. These schedules" schedules/schedules/schedules...
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"July 1, 2020–June 30, 2021" spaced en-dash.
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"made accessible, with"
? Not sure what change you're suggesting here.
"with MassDOT in" again, spell it out.
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Ref 46 could use an endash not a hyphen.
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That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:25, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the detailed review! I've addressed most of your comments, with clarification needed on a few. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:07, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
I looked at the ?'s and can't see any problems!  Promoting. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)