# Talk:Typhoon Dan (1989)

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Reviewer: maclean (talk) 04:00, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see Wikipedia:What is a good article?)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable. 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Two images: both WPCommons hosted, both public domain
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Notes
"1-minute maximum sustained winds of 130 km/h (80 mph).[1] The JMA indicates that Dan peaked slightly afterward, with 10-minute sustained winds of 140 km/h (85 mph)" - isn't the 1-minute maximum sustained wind supposed to be higher than the 10-minute sustained wind? Which number at [1] records this wind measurement?
"89101212 002 5 168 1113  960     075     90090 0090 90300 0300" – 075 = 75 knots = 85 mph, and the JMA uses 10-minute winds by default. In theory, 1-minute winds should be greater than 10-minute winds, but since they're recorded by different agencies, they don't always coincide. –Juliancolton | Talk 02:00, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for double checking. maclean (talk) 02:34, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
Ref 3 = National Disaster Coordinating Council. - does National refer to the Philippines? Perhaps the |location= parameter would be appropriate here.
Not sure actually. Here's their main home page, but it doesn't mention any location in particular... –Juliancolton | Talk 02:02, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
Looks like it is the Philippines. I added the parameter: [2] maclean (talk) 02:34, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
Yeah its the Phillipine NDCC.Jason Rees (talk) 03:29, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
Cool, thanks both! –Juliancolton | Talk 04:46, 30 January 2010 (UTC)