# Talk:The Mansion Family

Did all the people below the waterline in the 'net ball' die? Because if they did, this should be mentioned. Lots42 (talk) 22:54, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

The net ball shouldnt even be floating anyway. Write this one up to a sloppy joke. - Redmess (talk) 11:47, 6 November 2009 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:53, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
It may help to reorder the plot to describe Homer having the party in International Waters then move on to describe Mr. Burns at the Mayo Clinic so the reader does not have to jump back in forth in reading what Homer is doing.
I don't think that would work, since the two plots are connected at the end. I think it's better the way it is now. Theleftorium (talk) 14:27, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Is it possible to find a screenshot from this episode?
I can't think of any that would pass WP:NFCC, so no. Theleftorium (talk) 14:27, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
I will place the article on hold for a few concerns to be addressed. Dough4872 01:53, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 14:27, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
I will now pass the article. Dough4872 01:20, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

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