# Talk:Puhoy

This review is transcluded from Talk:Puhoy/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 01:53, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Gen. Quon (Talk)
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:53, 8 January 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with other GAs)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (NFC with valid FUR) 

As per the above checklist, the issues identified are:

The lead does not provide an accessible overview and does not give relative emphasis to the Reception as is given in the body.
Paragraphs should be long enough to develop an idea. Fix short paragraph in the Reception section.
The caption "An adult Finn, surronded by his ..." has a spelling error, surronded should be surrounded.

This article is a very promising GA nominee. I'm delighted to see your work here. I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 22:41, 10 January 2014 (UTC)

How does these edits look? Thanks for the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:14, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
It's concise now. Good. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:41, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 03:05, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
--68.199.142.57 (talk) 23:34, 3 June 2014 (UTC) Should this article mention that the plot bears a very strong resemblance to the Star Trek Next Generation episode "The Inner Light": http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Inner_Light_(Star_Trek:_The_Next_Generation)

If a legitimate source can be found noting the difference, then yes!--Gen. Quon (Talk)  03:24, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

Why is there no mention of DMT inspiring this episode? I do not see many other possibilities as this mirrors my experiences.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.73.27.207 (talk) 20:14, 16 February 2015 (UTC)