# Talk:SC Veendam

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SC Veendam/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:10, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"Look-Out" etc, all other names are usually put in bold with a redirect created to this article.
Done
"was founder member" a founder member.
Done
"the Eerste Klasse Noord" you'll  need to tell us what that is.
Expanded a bit
"partook" took part
Done
"home stadion" stadium.
Done
"other juveniles from" young players?
Done
"finished 7th out of 7 sides" -> "bottom of the league of seven teams in their inaugural season".
Done
Why were the Netherlands playing an English club team?   Was it some kind of exhibition match??
It was; added
"players earned 15 guilders per win, 10 per draw and 5 per loss" convert  to a more  recognisable  currency  and inflate.
Done
The article suffers a bit from recentism.  All three history sections are roughly the same size yet the first section covers 66 years, the second 35  and the third 18.   Needs more balance.
A bit of a cheap trick but I amended the year ranges in the headings; the second and third sections have about the same year spans now. Overall, the emphasis lays of course a bit more on the club's heyday during the 1980s and the situation in the 2010s.
"local DWM factory" what  was made there?
Added
"eliminated on aggregate" did they  play in a two-legged tie then?
Yes; Veendam won 2–1 at home but lost 3–0 in the return match
"of €3,2 million" 3.2
Done
"The club dissolved" was dissolved.
Done
"reconstruction of " made by instead of "of"?
Done
"badges throughout their history" but  you only mention the 2011 one?
The refs (at least the ones I have) do not exactly reflect what the former badges did look like, but I added some info about the one used from 1997 to 2011.
"a blue calotte which" that's a dab link.
Fixed
""for a fee of €3,2 million.[23]" didn't you already say  this?
Shortened
In  Honours, "Eerste Klasse Noord" is overlinked.
Fixed
That's all I have on a quick read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:14, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Hi TRM, thanks for the review. I've addressed your comments. WA8MTWAYC (talk) 18:06, 17 September 2021 (UTC)