# Talk:SMS Freya (1897)

This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Freya/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 13:34, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
prose:   (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Comments
1. She served in this capacity through the end of the war. Suggest - She served in this capacity till the end of the war

How does "in this capacity through to the end of the war" sound? Parsecboy (talk) 18:06, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
Sounds good to me. You planning on nominating the whole class for GA?
Yeah, once they're all done, I'll finish up List of protected cruisers of Germany and take it through WP:FLC, which will make all of the protected cruisers a Good Topic. Parsecboy (talk) 12:11, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 13:34, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Passed. Good job Parsec. Thurgate (talk) 18:35, 11 May 2012 (UTC)