# Talk:Pero Dile

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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 01:11, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:43, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
Not sure if this should be showing as the third or second GA but nevertheless, I will crack on with this tonight! --K. Peake 06:43, 7 June 2024 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Move release to being the third sentence of the lead instead
"was handled by Sergio George while its arrangements" → "was handled by Sergio George, while the arrangement"
""Pero Dile" is one of the album's salsa songs; it narrates" → "One of the album's salsa songs, it narrates" to be less wordy
Add a sentence after this mentioning what reviews said about the song
""Pero Dile" was nominated in" → "The song was nominated in"
"where it spent 11 weeks" → "spending 11 weeks"


### Background and composition
"the album's arrangements while" → "the album's arrangements, while"
"lover to "go ahead and tell everyone he" → "lover to proceed to "tell everyone he" to avoid overquoting
"maybe it was my mistake to love you so much" need not be in quotes; re-word to something like "admits that how much he loved her may have been a mistake"


### Reception
"cited it as one of the songs from the album where" → "cited it as one of the songs where" since you already mentioned the album in this sentence
"dynamic singer" despite claiming the genre" → "dynamic singer", despite asserting the salsa genre"
"Parry Gettelman of the Orlando Sentinel praised" → "Parry Gettelman of the Orlando Sentinel praised" with the wikilink
Start a new para after the book review since that is all of the critic's reviews
"of Tropical/Salsa Hot Track of the Year but" → "of Tropical/Salsa Hot Track of the Year, but
"in the US, becoming his eighth number one" → "in the United States, becoming Manuelle's eighth number-one" for consistency with the lead
"was fourth best-performing" → "was the fourth best-performing"


### Charts
See MOS:TABLECAPTION


### See also
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks solid at 20.0%!!!
WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 2
Add the author and cite Orlando Sentinel as newspaper on ref 3 with the wikilink
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 4 only
Wikilink Columbia University Press on ref 6
Wikilink Prometheus Global Media on ref 7 only
Pipe Nielsen Company to Nielsen Holdings on ref 8


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; glad I could pick this one up since it's half a year old! --K. Peake 18:31, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake As always, thanks for the review. Pretty stuff, I'm pretty sure I got all the issues fixed. Erick (talk) 21:40, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Magiciandude  Pass now, I only copy edited a bit of prose and two  minor links you missed; this will be signed off as the second review now! --K. Peake 07:19, 10 June 2024 (UTC)