# Talk:Your Cheatin' Heart

The user Jgm has demanded that I have no right to edit this page and the page 'Superstition' on the grounds that I have no right to edit the article but he does. Users please note that this is not true; I have the equal 'right' to edit pages that everyone else in the world-public do. I do not understand why he makes this bizzare demand but from 7 months experience I have found that if I do not obey such demands I am illegally blocked and experience jeering bullying from people working in packs who say that they abuse me because it "is such fun". (See Jimmy Wales post on The Wikipedia Foundation's mailing list.)
This is causing a serious downer on my health and so I am reluctantly for the present obeying the demand that I do not edit these two articles I started in response to a request for them on the 'requests' page. I have requested that userJgm go to a mediation complaint with me to stop this discrimination against me on the wikipedia.WikiUser 18:37, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Your Cheatin' Heart/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:00, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments

Looks, to me, as if the lead is a little too long for an article of this length (check out WP:LEAD).
"most important standards" standards could use an appropriate link.
"It was released in January 1953" -> "Your Cheatin' Heart" was released in...
"topped Billboard's Country" -> "topped Billboard's Country"
"Rolling Stone" -> Rolling Stone.
If "Setting the Woods on Fire" was important enough to mention in Williams' string of hits, why isn't there an article, or at least redlink?
"Williams met backstage at the Ryman Auditorium, Billie Jean Jones"->"Williams met Billie Jean Jones backstage at the Ryman Auditorium, "
"who was at the time dating" -> "who was, at the time, dating"
"the driver found Williams dead" could say why?
"became quickly a hit" remove "quickly".
"one on Billboard's Top C&W Records" -> Billboard.
" and an "unofficial anthem" of Country Music" -> country music.
Hank Williams chart table doesn't need to be sortable.
Check all the other non-italics used of Billboard, e.g. in the refs.
Refs 18 and 19 need to be fixed.
James Brown is mentioned in the categories but not in the main article.
I'll put the article on hold for a week.  The Rambling Man (talk) 16:51, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

All done.--GDuwenTell me! 16:07, 14 August 2013 (UTC)