# Talk:Théo Maledon

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 May 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I will use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy. 
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 
Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.


### Immediate Failures
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -
The last sentence of the general/overview section is a troll. -


### Links
### Prose
#### Lede
ASVEL of the LNB Pro A - these are club and league names right? Probably best to spell this out.
Standing 1.92 m (6 ft 3 1⁄2 in), he plays the point guard position. - unless you know about basketball, you wouldn't know why this is relevant.
Probably best to say where Rouen is (Ie, Normandy, France.)
breakout success - puff
becoming the youngest LNB All-Star in history and winning the LNB Pro A Best Young Player award. - needs explaination. Quite jargony.
There's a lot of acronyms here, (LNB, ASVEL, MVP, FIBA, INSEP), might be better to rewrite to explain some of these.
Representing France internationally - well, you wouldn't represent France nationally. Perhaps write "At youth international level, he won a"...


#### General
Could we get a WP:short description?
Birthdate is mentioned in lede and infobox, but not in prose, and is uncited.
U11 - playing at the under-11 age group. This is true for all UX
prestigious - puff
link/explain "starter"
season-high 26 - you say he scored 35 in an early sentence?
Maledon signed his first professional contract, - was his first season not professional?
Even though he played at the pro level in his first season, it was not on a pro contract Sportzeditz (talk) 14:55, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
and four assists, shooting 6-of-7 from the field, in an 88–64 victory over Fos Provence - jargon. Needs explaination
Maledon made his debut for France - generally we refer this would be for the senior squad, perhaps have the word youth in there somewhere.


### GA Review
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have outstanding GA and FA nominations that require reviewing at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these, however it's definitely not mandatory. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
Hi Sportzeditz - not too much to do. See above - on hold for now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:51, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
@Lee Vilenski: I have addressed your comments. Sportzeditz (talk) 14:55, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

It says that Maledon is currently playing in Partizan, which is wrong, since he is playing in Asvel. 109.245.206.171 (talk) 09:56, 5 February 2025 (UTC)