# Talk:Ted Alford

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to take a look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:40, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

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### BC Lions
"He finished the season as the second most-productive Lions receiver with 721 receiving yards, leading the Lions to nominate Alford for the league-wide Most Outstanding Rookie award." - repetition of the world Lions


### Edmondton Eskimos
"which required a full season of rehab." - rehabilitation
"but he wasn't offered a contract." - was not


### Hamilton Tiger-Cats
"Alford made his debut with the Ticats on August 8, 1997" - Tiger-Cats


### 2001 season
"36–35 upset of the Calgary Stampeders" - 36-35 upset over the Calgary Stampeders


### Calgary Stampeders
"he injured his hamstring and didn't return to the active roster for the rest of the season." - did not


### References
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On hold until all the points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 19:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: I believe everything has been addressed. Note that I reworded the one point under the Stampeders section a bit differently than you suggested, but it still addresses your concern. ~ Rob13Talk 19:30, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for your quick response. GA class has been achieved. MWright96 (talk) 19:34, 18 August 2016 (UTC)