# Talk:Paul G. Goebel

I have reviewed this article. The result was on hold.

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
This should be <blockquote>d. This needs more information. Instead of 'one article noted', say 'one article in the Bismark Tribune noted' and give the reporter's name if available. Y Cbl62 (talk) 06:30, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Everything needs referencing. Yes, I know 'Ford won the election' but you still need to add a reference to it. On the whole the referencing is OK, but this is good article nomination.  Y Cbl62 (talk) 06:30, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
The headings are a little long in some areas.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
The second picture (i.e. the one not in the infobox) might need a better caption. Maybe cite the source (e.g. taken in 19xx at y by z).  --- The second photo is taken from the Wiki Commons and does not have info on the photographer, but I have revised the caption.   Y Cbl62 (talk) 06:36, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Littleteddy (talk) 10:11, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
I'm not the reviewer for this article, but I just wanted to mention one small problem that stood out to me. The "Other civic and political roles" could use a little work. The first sentence uses several semicolons incorrectly and I think it would be better written as several sentences. I'll leave it for the main editor to decide, as I have not contributed to this article and don't want to mess with formatting. GaryColemanFan (talk) 23:09, 27 February 2008 (UTC)

YPassed. If the nominator could please add to the list of GAs... I'm due to be on a flight shortly and I don't have time. Littleteddy (roar!) 11:04, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

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