# Talk:Sam Zoldak

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate 

use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Early life and career
Wikilink Eastern District High School and captalize the start of the third and fourth words in the school's name
Should semi-pro be changed to semi-professional?
Who was Connie Mack?


### Major league career
"and was used as a reliever his first season," - add either "in" or "during" in this statement


### Later life
"he was traded to the Philadelphia Athletics along with Ray Murray in a trade that also involved the Chicago White Sox." - repititon of the word trade


### References
No dead links
Good work so far. On hold MWright96 (talk) 18:47, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

Issues all fixed, thanks for the review. As an aside, if you think the three-way trade part would be better with the entire trade included I could try to add that. I usually do, but since it involved three teams and seven players I thought it'd be overkill since he didn't play with any of them outside of Murray. Wizardman 00:50, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for the clarification. I found no remaining issues and I am happy to pass this. MWright96 (talk) 06:17, 9 August 2016 (UTC)