# Talk:ʻAkahi

Is there a technical reason that the article title doesn't match the subject name?  The Rambling Man (talk) 10:18, 6 January 2017 (UTC)

I've moved it, but using a straight apostrophe. If that's not right and it needs to be a curly apostrophe as used in the body, then move it again. Schwede66 01:44, 8 January 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:ʻAkahi/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 23:25, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll be starting this soon. Eddie891  Talk Work  23:25, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

The blacklist links template has got to go.
Y Eddie891  Talk Work  12:43, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
If no image is available, so be it. Eddie891  Talk Work  23:26, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Maybe add a sentence about something she did as high chief in the lede.
She didn't do much of note besides held land and married politically active chiefs. The Catholic sympathy incident seems marginal to mention in introduction.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
"became one of the wives" would it make more sense to say "married?" perhaps add the year of the marriage, if available.
Changed but there are no known dates.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
"In his own right" remove, as it is unnecessary.
Changed.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
"was known commonly by foreigners" because was is used a bit before in the sentence, perhaps rephrase as "and commonly known by foreigners as..."
Changed.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
"attended by the chiefs and foreign residents." this reads like all the chiefs and foreign residents attended. Perhaps clarify.
Changed.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
"Her second husband Kalanimoku," saying "her second husband" is unnecessary, because it is described above.
Changed.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
Source 7 needs a URL to determine verifiability.
Added back in.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)
KAVEBEAR: I think I will be promoting upon conclusion of my problems. Eddie891  Talk Work  12:43, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
Will address this on the weekend.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 07:05, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
@Eddie891: Addressed all points.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)

See No reason not to promote. Eddie891  Talk Work  23:52, 16 May 2018 (UTC)