# Talk:Zach Eflin

http://articles.philly.com/2015-03-14/sports/60090453_1_zach-eflin-san-diego-padres-father — Preceding unsigned comment added by Go Phightins! (talk • contribs) 14:53, 2 January 2016‎

Incorporated. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:37, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

I can't review this page since I created it, and am the #2 contributor to it, but a few points that came to me as I glanced at the current version:

The lead needs to be broken up into multiple paragraphs
The Early life needs to be broken up into multiple paragraphs
The Padres section needs a paragraph split too.
The Phillies section needs to be broken up into subsections
Innings pitched should be presented with fractions, not the .1 or .2 decimals.
Pitcher profile could speak to his velocity.
It's way closer to GA status right now than it was yesterday. – Muboshgu (talk) 14:42, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, Muboshgu. It's been a little while. I mostly condensed things into single paragraphs (probably from your former appropriate split paragraphs haha). I tried to fix all the fractions from the existing .1 and .2 decimals, but I clearly missed a few. I'll take a gander at Fangraphs to see about velocity. Hope you're well! Go Phightins! 17:27, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
Go Phightins!, I was thinking that I hadn't seen you pop up on my watchlist in some time. Good to see you're still here. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
Yeah honestly it was not intentional that I faded away nor that I found my way back earlier this month. I had forgotten how fun it can be to actually spend a little bit of time working on an article. Hope to do a little sprucing of some Phillies as we head towards opening day ... I've realized since I was last actively working on articles (~ 5 years ago), there are literally zero players still around from that team. So back to the drawing board, I suppose. I've also tried to do a little bit of administrative scut work as penance for having been gone so long—good ole' AFDs that fester and such. So yeah, I'm back-ish for a little while at least. Glad to see you and Wizardman and co still seem to be holding down the fort! Go Phightins! 17:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)