# Talk:Sulu bleeding-heart

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Reviewer: Jimfbleak (talk · contribs) 12:13, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Nice article, but here are the nitpicks

You use a mix of AE and BE, make consistent
I'm guessing Philippine articles are supposed to be in AE. I didn't abbreviated centimeter, which I fixed. Anything else in BE? Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
What's the point of repeating the same ref after consecutive sentences? Seems OTT
Primarily a writing thing. I go through articles source by source, and want to be able to edit paragraphs knowing what is feeding into each sentence. Barring rediscovery, I don't think much is going to change, so I'll trim a few. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
This species is known from two specimens—known only?
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
worth noting that the specimens were from Tataan, not the main island (Gibbs p401)?
Was in Taxonomy, through it into Conservation too. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Link or explain primary forest, secondary forests, canopy, mantle, ethnobiological, scapula, iridescence, primary and greater coverts, secondaries, undertail-covert, iris, extirpated
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
with diffusion at the edges—with diffuse edges?
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Little is known about its behavior as the species has not been definitively reported since its 1891 —pretty much repeats second sentence of lead
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
revealed that the bleeding-heart was common until the 1970s and still survives on small islets near Tawi-Tawi.  — ????
Not sure what you mean here. The surveys reported that the bleeding-heart was somehow common until the 1970s and was just missed whenever biologists ventured to the area, and that after the 1970s it still persisted on offshore islets. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
As such, it is...—For this reason...
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Date of Jolo sighting?
Not sure. It was early, but I'm not finding the specific date. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:44, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Some authors place the Sulu Bleeding-heart—eg?
Not sure. Google turns up only references that say some authors, but that it is better as an allospecies, and Gibbs doesn't specify either. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:51, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
no known subspecies.[2] It is also known as—two "known"s
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
The bill... It is  between 25 and 27—very long bill!
Oops. Fixed. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
In "Description" perhaps explain how it can be distinguished from other species, such as sympatric Emerald Dove or escapes of other bleeding-hearts, as per Gibbs?
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:58, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
50/fifty—one or the other
Done. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Cambridge, UK—Only ref with a country. My personal practice now is only to give the town, since otherwise you either get inconsistency or ridiculous things like "London, UK"
Fair enough. Cambridge is fairly well known anyways. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
I'm going to be away for four days in the next six, so no rush, Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 12:13, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Not a problem. Thanks for doing this review. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 18:36, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
I've tweaked the Jolo bit based on this, which you should probably add as a ref. OK, let's assess Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 10:40, 4 May 2013 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail:  
Thanks. I'll add the ref when I get the chance. Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk) 04:44, 5 May 2013 (UTC)