# Talk:Tropical Storm Warren (1984)

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

"After killing 17 while crossing the archipelago," As a disturbance?
Should be pretty clear it was a disturbance already given that end of the sentence and the previous sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
"attaining peak strength." At?
I tend to avoid the JTWC/JMA bullshit in the lead. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
Who issued the TCFA?
It's already mentioned in the wikilink for TCFA so while I sometimes mention it was issued by the JTWC, I don't think it should be something that is required. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
JTWC abbreviation needed.
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
"monsoonal sure of moisture"
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
"afternoon November 2" Missing a word.
Added a word. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
"Offshore Marinduque Island," Here too.
That's fine unless I'm missing something? I use "Offshore X," all the time and it's never been brought up before. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
Probably best to replace Aurora with a red link than what it is right now.
Even better, I replaced it with an actual blue link. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
"Additionally, twelve other people died due landslides." Add "elsewhere".
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
Assuming no Vietnamese impact.
Vietnam is to TC info as oil is to water. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:54, 19 June 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review man. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)