# Talk:Woman of the Year (Parks and Recreation)

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Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination drive. It's good, but I'm placing it on hold until issues can be addressed. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Very little issues here so I'll give some brief stuff; fix em and I'll pass it:

"believes is her congratulatory letter as the group's Woman of the Year award." → "letter as the recipient of the group's"
Fixed. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
"who contributes $5,000. Tom still needs $1,000" → that math doesn't add up considering he needs $10,000 in total.
Clarified. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
When does the girls' soccer team appear? The production mentions the coach of the team, but I don't see how he works into the plot.
It was part of a cold open that I didn't mention in the plot summary because it had little to do with the rest of the episode. I tried to explain it better in the production section. Let me know if this is better and if not, I'll add it to the plot section. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
The t-shirt references are broken: they link to the main page of the site.
The t-shirts seem to have been removed from the site, so I took the references out altogether. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
"When Ron said he is attracted to strong and powerful women, Leslie admitted he attends a shocking number of Women's National Basketball Association games.[1][2]" Who says what now?
I tried to make this more clear. Let me know if it works. If not, feel free to remove the sentence altogether. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
"In its original American NBC broadcast on March 4, 2010, "Galentine's Day" was seen[...]" Wrong episode title here ;)
Fixed. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Alright, thanks Hunter for taking care of the above issues, and as always brilliant work. I'm passing this. Cheers, The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 02:54, 4 April 2010 (UTC)