# Talk:Xue Susu

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 03:42, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
The last analogous article was a nice experience. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:42, 9 June 2013 (UTC)


### Criteria
### Review
Well-written:

Verifiable with no original research:

Broad in its coverage:

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:


#### Result
#### Discussion
The comprehensive review has not yet started; I have reviewed the images however. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:25, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

Image PD tags fixed, thanks. Yunshui 雲‍水 07:55, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


### Lead & Infobox
Fine here.


### Biography
"...among the literati and government official who..." Plural form of officials
Does Qian Qianyi garner a wikilink?

Pluralised "officials", good spot. Qian Qianyi is wikilinked, so I'm not sure what you mean - are you suggesting it shouldn't be? Yunshui 雲‍水 21:52, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
I've also change "eremite" in the lead back to "recluse" - for most English-speakers, "eremite" is a comparatively archaic reading of hermit, and she wasn't really a hermit in the sense that the word is usually used in English; her retirement from the world doesn't seem to have been a full-on cave-in-the-desert job - she just stopped going out much! Yunshui 雲‍水 21:52, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
My mistake, and I see. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 22:28, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


### Paintings
Fine here.


### Poetry
Excellent.


### Archery
Intriguing, as well as excellent.


### Conclusion
This is a fine article. Once everything above has been mitigated, it will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:10, 13 June 2013 (UTC)


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