# Talk:Russian destroyer Orfey

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Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:54, 18 August 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:33, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
I'll claim this one. Parsecboy (talk) 16:33, 28 August 2025 (UTC)

Link ship grounding, Compartment (ship), Hull (watercraft)
Seems odd to pipe normal displacement to just "normally" - I'd expand it to normally displaced
Orfey made seven sorties into the Baltic Sea that year in unsuccessful attempts to interdict the German supply of high-quality Swedish iron ore before the Gulf of Finland was iced over late in the year either by combat or the laying of minefields. - I don't like the placement of "before the Gulf of Finland was iced over late in the year". Maybe it's that the sentence is trying to cram a quart into a pint? Could be split to say:
Orfey made seven sorties into the Baltic Sea that year in unsuccessful attempts to interdict the German supply of high-quality Swedish iron ore either by combat or the laying of minefields.. These operations were carried out before the Gulf of Finland was iced over late in the year.
You're right to split them. I do tend to stuff my sentences with a lot of info all at once.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:34, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
Can you send me at least some of Verstyuk & Gordeyev for spotchecks? I can also look at Budzbon and Halpern, but figure I should take a look at the main source as well. Parsecboy (talk) 16:57, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:34, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
Spotchecks on 1, 4, 5, and 11, all look fine to me. Happy to promote, nice work! Parsecboy (talk) 18:39, 28 August 2025 (UTC)