# Talk:Typhoon Lee (1981)

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Reviewer: Secret (talk · contribs) 18:40, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
Reviewing in a bit. Secret account 18:40, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

"Philippines during December 1981" - shouldn't it be "in" December 1981?
I don't think it matters much. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"Following an increased in organized," - incomplete, and really with the grammar?
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"the storm moved onshore the central Philippines" - grammar
Fine, fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"However, the remnants of the cyclone were last noted" - tense, should be was
Dixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"Across the Philippines, Typhoon Lee killed 188 persons" should be "people"
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"Moreover, 56 people were injured" can be combined with "There, 82 fatalities were reported."
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"in the coastal town of Calapan, 5,600 dwellings received damaged" - grammar
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"On December 21, 1981, an area of convection" can convection be wikilinked?
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"the JMA estimated peak intensity 145 km/h (90 mph)" - missing word
Inserted.
"That afternoon, the typhoon made landfalls along the central portion of the Philippines." should be "made landfall"
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"However, by December 27, Lee began to feel the effects of an extratropical cyclone located to the north of Tropical Storm Lee" repetitive, fix
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"Later that day, a Hurricane Hunter" - caps, not a person or organization
It's capatalized in its wikipedia article. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"the strongest storm to affected the island since 1970." grammar
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"In the coastal region of Legaspi, home to a large volcano," - did the volcano played a factor in the storm, if not, cut the second part of the sentence as irrelevant.
Yes. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"in the fishing village of San Fernando on Masbate Island, 50 thatched huts were flattened.[18]" - Really?
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
"82 people were also killed on the island of Samar." - "also" is redundant, remove
Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:09, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
No close paraphrasing concerns, all sources are reliable, images are rightly in public domain. Needs a copyedit.
Ok passing Secret account 16:12, 11 May 2014 (UTC)

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