# Talk:Ryan Johnson (footballer, born 1996)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:52, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Can we avoid single-sentence paras.
"youth academy" any link?
Link for "loan"?
"joining Stevenage" which league?
"spells at Boreham Wood, as" these were non-League right?
"the Football League " link, but the lead said youngest player ever which presumably could include non-League time?
"being sent-off for" link.
"bookable offence" link.
Link loan again if possible.
Link substitute.
"the National League South club" overlinked.
"heading in a corner" link both.
"international duty in" you haven't yet mentioned for whom.
"manager" link.
" the COVID-19 pandemic in March" link the UK specific Covid pandemic article.
"friendly match" link.
"on penalties" link penalty shoot-out.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:40, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: great spot with the youngest ever player / youngest player in the Football League difference. I have made all of the suggested changes. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 23:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)