# Talk:Tony Okanlawon

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
added cat Players of American football from Maryland  Done
"In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar  Done
Done.
Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline?  Done
Added links for each offline source.
"He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar  Done
Done.
"and by the end of week five had" comma after five  Done
Added.
"Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue  Done
Done.
Add first team all acc to the infobox  Done
Added.
According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17?  Done
Could you provide a link?
sry [1] WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:53, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent.  Done
Made consistent.
Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol.  Done
Does actually have a LinkedIn page, though there's nothing useful on it. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:14, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)