# Talk:Orodes I of Parthia

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 23:00, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Will do tonight. NoahTalk 23:00, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

"His reign is relatively obscure, his throne may have been usurped" I don't think a comma is the appropriate punctuation here.
Replaced it with a dot instead. --HistoryofIran (talk) 02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"Shayegan deduces that Gotarzes I reigned till his death in c. 80 BC, and was succeeded by Orodes I." Deduced
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"Babylonian chronicles also makes mention" Should be made
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"It is uncertain if it remained the same case under the Parthians" Could this be rephrased? Also, cut "the" from the next part of the sentence.
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 19:44, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"While Orodes I's grandfather Mithridates II used" separate the name with commas
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 19:44, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"notably followed wrote cuneiform records" ???
Oops, fixed. --HistoryofIran (talk) 02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
"continued ruling the kingdom now as a Parthian vassal." comma after kingdom
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 02:24, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
That should be it for this article. NoahTalk 02:08, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Are there any details about Orodes I that could be added to the article to expand it and the lead a bit? NoahTalk 00:23, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
No unfortunately, I milked every source regarding him as much as possible. HistoryofIran (talk)