# Talk:Wake Up Call (KSI song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"It is a pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A pop-rap track, its lyrics"
 Done
"finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."
 Done
"and it reached" → "and it further reached"
 Done
"Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."
 Done
Remove wikilink on costume
 Done


### Background
Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?
 Done


### Music and lyrics
Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
 Not done you have still kept this --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
There is information from 4 and 16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example
 Done
"KSI continued," → "He continued,"
 Done


### Release and promotion
"revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
 Done
 Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
"debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
 Done
 Partly done remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
Wikilink YouTube
 Done
"using the hashtag" → "using the challenge's hashtag"
 Done
The replacement and verses info is not sourced; only the release and features are
 Done


### Critical reception
Remove target on synth
 Done
Remove target on bass
 Done
Remove target on instrumentation
 Done
"Dominiq remarked that" → "He remarked that"
 Done
"this current generation."" → "this current generation"." per MOS:QUOTE
 Done


### Music video
Wikilink music video
 Done
"by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence
 Done
"The music video was released" → "The video was released"
 Done
 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
"The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"
 Done
Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
 Not done it is still there but unsourced
Remove wikilink on costumes
 Done
Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
 Done
 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
"Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"
 Done
""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"
 Done


### Commercial performance
"was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"
 Done
The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut
 Done
The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose
 Done
"In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent
 Done
Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?
 Done


### Live performance
Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para
 Done


### Credits and personnel
Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order
 Done


### Charts
Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?
 Done


### Release history
Good


### See also
Good


### References
Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this
 Done
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
 Done
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 2
 Done
Cite Vice as work/website instead for ref 5
 Done
Fix MOS:CAPS issues with refs 9 and 25
 Done
Cite GRM Daily as publisher instead for refs 10, 15 and 18, plus only keep the wikilink for 10
 Done
 Partly done it has not been changed to publisher --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
Cite TikTok as publisher instead for ref 13 and remove it from the title
 Done
Remove or replace refs 22 and 40 per WP:RSP
 Not done this is about the unreliable Metro refs --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36
 Done


### External links
Good


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Timwikisidemen I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
Timwikisidemen You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
Timwikisidemen Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective.  Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)