# Talk:The Thin White Line (Millennium)

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:35, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

Plot: The entire fourth paragraph is a repeat of the third. Remove one or the other (personally, I like the first one).
Oops, holdover from the source I was using to base my plot summary on. Took out the pasted bit and kept my own rewrite. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Production: "…as well as directing…" Personally, I would change this to 'direct'. I feel it reads better
Fixed. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Production: The picture seems to be in the wrong section. If you don't want to fit it into the Reception area, maybe use a picture of Herbert Mullin, or maybe this picture from Vietnam, or something similar
I stuck that picture in because it was the only thing I could find that was relevant; Mullin's mugshot isn't free and outside of the plot summary there's nothing to be said about Vietnam. If we could find free images of Morgan and Wong these things would be easy solved. I had a search through Flickr to see what's been released under a creative commons license, and there's nothing there that would be relevant either. If something turns up I'll add something in. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
References: Ref 13 should have a space between 'pp.' and '21–22
Fixed. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Those are the only issues I could find. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:37, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for having a look at this one for me. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
Everything looks good. The picture's not a big deal, so don't sweat it. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:22, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

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