# Talk:Spencer Heath (baseball)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"Spencer Paul Heath, Jr." - problem relating to MOS:JR here
Heath's nationality will need to be mentioned in the first paragraph of the lead
"Listed at 6'0", 170 lb.," - the convert template will be better off used on these figures
Think the lead can be expanded with further details of Heath's playing career


### Early life
"Spencer Paul Heath, Jr.," - MOS:JR problem here
"Spencer Heath, Sr.," - same as above
"Well-known around Chicago for his skills in semipro baseball," - semi-professional


### Winnipeg Maroons (1919)
Winning percentage would be better off wikilinked to the appropriate article for non-baseball readers


### Chicago White Sox (1920)
"Baseball historian Frank Russo points out that this was difficult," - the text in bold is informal; a word such as noted is more appropriate in this instance
The term inning can be wikilinked to its article only on the first mention


### Later years
"Heath returned to playing semipro ball after his time with the White Sox." - semi-professional baseball
Semipro ball is a common term in the baseball world; I never see it spelled out. I linked it to an appropriate article in case people wonder what it means. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 01:37, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to enable the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 21:14, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 06:57, 3 July 2021 (UTC)