# Talk:Ottoman ironclad Hamidiye

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

No Copyvio Y
No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y

"Her very lengthy construction period left her obsolete" perhaps "Due to her lengthy construction period, she was already obsolete by the time she was launched"
Works for me. Thanks for another review. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
@Parsecboy: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 19 April 2017 (UTC)