# Talk:Ratu (band)

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 18:29, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
Interesting read. Prose is good and what helps is the article is well sourced. So kudos.
General

No problems with sourcing, nor the reliabity.
No issues with imaging.
No dead links
One dablink needs addressing
Is it acceptable to use a YouTube link as a External link, per WP:YT and WP:EL
Lead

"The group was dissolved permanently in 2007" 'was' is redundant, perfectly fine to remove it.
"they were the first artist" as far as I'm aware of, artist refers to one person, should be artists, per plural
Career

"Maia decided to form a duo, a singer and a musician" replace comma with colon
"This situations was exacerbated" → This situation was exacerbated
Later activities

"and by 2011 Korean-inspired boy and girl bands had become dominant" place comma between '2011' and 'Korean-inspired'
On hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 19:35, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Dab dealt with. RatuVEVO is an official feed, so there are no copyright concerns; should be acceptable.
Was removed, artist changed to musical act (allow the inclusion of solo artists as well), changed to "consisting of", oops, and done.
Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:33, 4 July 2012 (UTC)