# Talk:¿Qué Creías?

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:36, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

This is the article before mine in the queue, making a review only appropriate! --K. Peake 07:36, 12 May 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
The A-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
Done
Only keep Mariachi under genre(s) in the infobox, as the other two are only sourced as influences
Done
Pipe EMI Latin to Capitol Latin
Done
Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
Done
"It was written by" → "The song was written by" removing the backup vocalist and brother/music producer introductions since them being solely in the body is sufficient
Done
Add a sentence after the above one mentioning that A.B. challenged Astudillo to write the song before they got to Las Vegas and what it was inspired by
Done
""¿Qué Creías?" is a mariachi ballad, that Selena describes as" → "A mariachi ballad, the song was described by Selena as" with the pipe
Done
"It is the singer's torch song, the lyrics" → "It is the singer's torch song and the lyrics"
Done
"and feminist lyricism" → "and female style of lyricism." per the body, ending the sentence here because the other two parts aren't notable for reception
Done
The commercial performance sentence should be the first of the second para instead
Done
"often asks for a" → "often asked for a"
Done
"in the Netflix two-part limited drama" → "by Christian Serratos in the Netflix two-part limited drama" with the wikilink
Done
Mention the Alicia Villareal performance in the lead after the above sentence
Done


### Background and production
Remove comma after brother and music producer
Done
"the tour bus broke down." → "the bus broke down." to avoid overusage of the full name
Done
"really let it roar."" → "really let it roar"." per MOS:QUOTE
Done
"Guitarist of the group, Chris Perez, recalled" → "The group's guitarist Chris Perez recalled"
Done


### Music, theme and lyrics
Retitle to Music and lyrics, as the theme is to do with the lyrics
Done
Most of the direct quotes in this section should be in critical reception instead; you could start a reception section below with this and the other form of reception in the commercial success section
Done
""¿Qué Creías?" is a" → "Musically, "¿Qué Creías?" is a"
Done
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Done
After ballad, you should write "and a", moving the refs also to the end of the sentence instead
Done
The conjunto influences are not sourced
It is sourced to Browne, 1995 (Entertainment Weekly)
Pipe culture of Latin America to Latin American culture
Done
The instrumentation sentences that are currently at the end of the section should come directly after the above one instead
Done
The part about Selena painting herself as a wronged women should be the first one of the lyrics sentences
Done
"she tells him that he" → "letting him know he"
Done
"confessing that she can live" → "confessing she can live"
Done
Remove comma after Tucson Citizen and it is quotes like this that definitely belong in reception instead
Done
""with such aplomb."" → ""with such aplomb"." per MOS:QUOTE; fix multiple issues like this with the quotes
Done
"and lyrics echoing the" → "and lyrics echo the"
Done
"showcases her as" → "showcasing her as"
Done
"John Storm Robert, believed "¿Qué Creías?" lack" → "John Storm Robert believed "¿Qué Creías?" lacks"
Done
Lola Beltran → Lola Beltrán with the wikilink
Done
For any quotes that will be moved to reception, ensure that you attribute them
Done
"fire." and found the track" → "fire", finding the track"
Done
Pipe cumbia music to Cumbia
Done
"of the Lakeland Ledger, found that" → "of the Lakeland Ledger found that" with the pipe
Done
Wikilink song structure
Done


### Commercial success
Create a Reception section instead here with the critical, radio and commercial reception; place critical commentary as the first para
Done
"it entered at number 38 on" → ""¿Qué Creías?" entered at number 38 on"
Done
I think the radio information should come before commercial performance
Done
"received extensive airplay in" → "received extensive airplay in various locations, including" only mentioning notable ones like Austin and Houston, so you avoid a supermarket list
Done
"rose to number 30,[23] though it fell to" → "rose to number 30 on the chart,[23] though fell to" to avoid overusage of it
Done
Remove the holiday season rise sentence, as the following one will still be succeeding a sentence about the song going up
Done
"to number 24 the following week," → "to number 24 for the week of January 16, 1993,"
Done
"on the chart for an additional four weeks before falling off, for" → "on the Hot Latin Songs chart for an additional four weeks before falling off, lasting for"
Done
The music video, press conference and live performances should be moved to a promotion section instead
Done
Wikilink music video
Done
Pipe EMI Latin to Capitol Latin
Done
"in Monterrey, Mexico, the record company aimed to" → "in Monterrey, Mexico, aiming to" with the pipe
Done
Remove "in the state" at the end of the report sentence because that is implied
Done
"at number ten on" → "at number 10 on" per MOS:NUM
Done
Add the date that the song received the certification and mention it was in the United States
Done
Add the before Del Rio News-Herald
I'm not sure what you're asking here.
"to convey that message" → "to convey the message"
Done
"independence from it."" → "independence from it"." per MOS:QUOTE
Done
"Selena performed "¿Qué Creías?" on" → "Selena's performance "¿Qué Creías?" on" but it is not sourced as being in 1994 anywhere
It is listed on the inlay of the DVD as well as in commentary from Johnny Canales.
Alicia Villareal → Alicia Villarreal with the wikilink
Done
The benefit concert and limited drama should come after the promotion info in the following section because they are not through Selena
Done
""just so badass." because of the singer's" → ""just so badass" because of her heavy" per the source
Done


### Promotion and media appearances
Make this the last section, with one para for Selena's promotion and another for the benefit concert and limited drama
Done


### Charts and certification
#### Weekly charts
Wikilink Hot Latin Songs
Done


#### Certification
Good


### Credits and personnel
This should be the section before charts/certifications
Done
Pipe programming to Programming (music)
Done
Pipe arranger to Arrangement
Done


### References
Copyvio score looks amazing at 13.8%!!!
Should ref 37 really be citing Anon rather than RIAA?
I cite any website that does not explicitly provide an author as Anon rather than the website's name. Let me know if you'd like me to change it for this ref.


### Notes
Retitle to Sources
Done
RIAA.com → RIAA, piping to Recording Industry Association of America
Done
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on the first instance
Done
Austin-American Statesman → Austin American-Statesman with the wikilink, also wikilink Newspapers.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
Done
Tuscan Citizen → Tucson Citizen with the wikilink, also wikilink ProQuest
Done
EW.com → Entertainment Weekly with the wikilink
Done
Pipe La Prensa to the appropriate newspaper and write De la directly after Chito to avoid last name confusion
Done
Del Rio News → Del Rio News-Herald with the wikilink
Done
Add work/publisher for the stories behind Selena's legacy and biggest hits source
Done
Wikilink Abilene Reporter-News
Done
Wikilink San Antonio Express-News
Done
Little Brown and Company → Little, Brown and Company with the wikilink
Done
Wikilink University of Texas Press
Done
Pipe EMI Latin to Capitol Latin
Done
Wikilink Oxford University Press
Done
Pipe Mural to Grupo Reforma if this is the Mexican newspaper
Done
DW.COM → DW, piping to Deutsche Welle
Done
Texas A & M University Press → Texas A&M University Press with the wikilink
Done
Wikilink The Victoria Advocate
Done
The Texas Talent Association interview is from an unreliable source in a self-published YT channel so remove per WP:RSPYT
I've removed the link per WP:RSPYT but retain the source per WP:VIDEOLINK
Wikilink Newsday
Done
Pipe Elle to Elle (magazine)
Done
Pipe Lakeland Ledger to The Ledger
Done
Author-link Elijah Wald and wikilink The New York Times
Done


### External links
Good


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that didn't take too long! --K. Peake 09:21, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for your review! I've left maybe one or two comments for issues that were not made too clear for me. Thanks – jona ✉ 21:49, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
AJona1992 Nice work, however I have two points left; the A-side should be surrounded by speech marks and source it in the body by mentioning the release, also you need to add "the" before Del Rio News Herald. --K. Peake 09:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
 Done Thanks – jona ✉ 11:41, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, did some brief copy editing but good job elsewise! --K. Peake 09:44, 14 May 2022 (UTC)