# Talk:Tropical Storm Agatha (1992)

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 08:20, 5 August 2011 (UTC)

what's "10 direct"?
It states that 10 people died from the hurricane directly, it is in most WP:WPTC articles.
"As it moved northbound northwards" northbound is an adjective, but we need an adverb.
 Done YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
"Agatha was steered toward the north"
Fixed. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
A bit picky, but I suggest "and stayed remained at sea"

FN 6, why's "National Hurricane Center" italicised while others above and below it aren't.
Beause that ref is a template
"The center of the storm promptly became ill-defined on infrared satellite imagery" I don't get the "ill-defined on infrared satellite imagery" part.
Changed to poorly. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
Does "forecasters" need to be wikified?
Why not? YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
"heavy rains" redirects to a video game. I don't think it should be wikified at all, since it's not technical.
 Done. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
"Mexico" and "landfall" are wikified multiple times.
I don' think they are in the same section. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
"Gased Times" should be formatted as The Gadsden Times.
 Done. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
"The News" should be italicised.
 Done. YE  Pacific Hurricane
date formatting should follow one style, either YMD or DMY.
I made it in DMY to be consistent with other WP:EPAC articles. YE  Pacific Hurricane 04:02, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
Dablinks reveals two occurrences of dabs.
Fixed the first and the second is project standards to have. YE  Pacific Hurricane 02:51, 7 August 2011 (UTC)


### Assessment
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

End note
No major problems. Very happy. Pass Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 04:18, 7 August 2011 (UTC)