# Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Thanks.
"is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
Fixed.
The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
Fixed.
Remove wikilink on Poland
Done.
The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
Fixed.


### Context
Good
Noted.


### Song
#### Music and verse form
Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
Done.
Pipe Songs to Fredmans sånger on the img text
Already done.
Pipe 68 time to Time signature
Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.
Pipe ariette to Aria
Done.
"and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.
Remove "the" before musicologist
No, this is a normal British usage.
"and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
Done.


#### Lyrics
The writing years are not mentioned by the source
Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.
Pipe strings to String instrument
Done.
Pipe notaries to Notary
Done.
"The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
Done.


### Reception and legacy
Pipe Joseph II of Austria to Joseph II, Holy Roman Emperor and polska to Polska (dance) on the img text
Done.
"calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
Reworded.
"Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
BA is the surname.
"Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
Ditto.
"how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
Done.
If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
Done.
"inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
Reworded.
Pipe freedom of expression to Freedom of speech
Done.
Wikilink flute
Done.
Wikilink cello
Done.
Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
Done.
"is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
Done.
"in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
Done.
Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
Done.
Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
Done.


### References
Copyvio score looks solid at 25.9%!!
Noted.
Add the language parameters to refs 10 and 13
Added.
WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 11
Done.


### Sources
Good


### External links
Good, especially with the YouTube publishers added!
Thanks.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until everything is fixed; once again, you have submitted a mostly good article! --K. Peake 08:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, I added in a brief copy edit but this was totally fine elsewise before! --K. Peake 22:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)