# Talk:Sunshine Days

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


### Issues
#### General
No dab links. Great work!
No dead links. Great work!
Images have good rationales


#### Infobox
No issues


#### Lede
Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"The episode first aired in the United States on May 12, 2002 on the Fox network" → "It originally aired on the Fox network on May 12, 2002"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
To many "The episode", consider re-writing.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:31, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2 and was viewed by 6.5 million households and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast" → "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2, was viewed by 6.5 million households, and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
finale should be final
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Plot
Link California
I linked Van Nuys, CA instead.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add actor for Blake and Mike
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"was where the popular television series The Brady Bunch was filmed" → "where the comedy series The Brady Bunch was filmed. This is partly per WP:NPOV
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"Later that night" add comma
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Actor for Martin
It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
discovers should be discover
Add actor for Fogelman
Fogleman is the same person as Martin.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add actor for Oliver Martin
It's already there.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:15, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add actor for various others
Where are the other ones your are talking about? I didn't mention them in the prose and citing the whole Brady Family would be ridiculous.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Link Washington, DC
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Should be "Washington, D.C." not "Washington, DC"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Production
finale should be final
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"The Brady Bunch house set featured in the episode was built "from scratch". Huh?
Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Broadcast and reception
Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"Fox Broadcasting Company promoted the episode with the promise that it was the "most bizarre" episode of The X-Files to ever been shown". Firstly, Fox Broadcasting Company should be Fox. Secondly, Fox should not be linked as it is already linked above
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### References
Unlink season 9, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it already linked above
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
The Hollywood Reporter is missing publisher (Prometheus Global Media). The current one is incorrect
According to its page, that's its owner, not publisher, but I'll switch it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### External links
Nothing to be fixed
That's all. On hold, and great work! TBrandley 03:40, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

I believe I've got everything.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:30, 22 July 2012 (UTC)