# Talk:Rob Howard (politician)

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 03:32, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: maclean (talk)
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 03:32, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google.)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images (None)

Maclean, I'm very happy and inspired to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the Provincial politics in the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 08:18, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Response from maclean25
I boosted the lead as recommended [1] Let me know if you find it too detailed - there's a few details I can skim off. maclean (talk) 23:31, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks!  I think it's fine now. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:26, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:26, 10 February 2014 (UTC)