# Talk:The View from Halfway Down

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good.
Don't link dinner party, talent show, or swimming pool per WP:OVERLINK.
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)


### Plot
Without the names in parathesis, this section is 414 words. MOS:TVPLOT says that episode-articles should be at max 400 words so try removing some.
 Done 376 words now, minus the parenthetical acting credits Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Also, some links here and in other sections lead to disambiguation pages, so try fixing those links.
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)


### Production
You can't cite WP:IMDB, even if you disguise it as the Internet Movie Database.
 Done My bad. Some 30 Rock GAs use that format (e.g. "Emanuelle Goes to Dinosaur Land"). Replaced with a podcast interview with Tafel and an online newspaper interview with Winfrey. Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
"Kazzaz'" → "Kazzaz's"
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "within the show".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
"with series finale" → "with the series finale"
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
"V." → "V".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
The line containing "suicide by jumping" should probably link to "Later", the episode in which the event took place.
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
"[i]t felt" → "it felt"
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)


### Reception
"an A writing, stating" → "an "A", stating"
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Link IndieWire.
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
The first sentence says the episode received praise from "many reviewers", but only two are listed that actually talked about the episode. Try adding more.
 Done Rewrote/regrouped the entire section after digging up more articles Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
The last sentence has a source from Gold Derby, a website that isn't that reliable. Can a more reliable source be swapped in?
 Done Replaced with an IndieWire citation saying that "Free Churro" was the first nomination in that category for BoJack Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)


### References
Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Mark references from Forbes with "|url-access=limited".
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Try linking every website used in every citation.
 Done Kncny11 (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)


### Progress