# Talk:Shiena Nishizawa

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:04, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:04, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Make sure every Japanese reference has a translated title.
Original video animation needs to be linked, and the phrase needs to be written out next to its abbreviation.
Refs 2 (Natalie), 3 (M-ON!), 10 (ANN), 13-16 (ANN), 18-19 (ANN), 23 (ANN), and 25 (Manga Tokyo) needs expansion (authors, translated title).
"and she lists artists such as Foo Fighters as her musical inspirations." Might want to add Dave Grohl into this to be even more accurate.
No info on the directors of some MVs?
Archival of references strongly recommended.
Checklinks failed on some of the refs, but all of them worked for me. Also assuming good faith on Japanese references.
Pretty interesting article. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:13, 14 August 2018 (UTC)

@Nova Crystallis: I've done all of the above aside from the archiving, which as far as I can tell is usually optional for these kinds of things. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:46, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
Promoting. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:16, 15 August 2018 (UTC)