# Talk:The Arrival (Fringe)

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Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 00:15, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
MOS is fine, but the prose in your plot summary needs some work. You'll want a comma after "New York", remove one in "he says, 'it has arrived'", take out the "a" in "he greets her with a 'Hello Liv'", and replace "advanced sort of stun gun" with "hi-tech", "futuristic" or just "advanced" - the "sort of" seems very informal. Also why does Peter need to be kept awake? This isn't explained in the article.
I made most of the changes you suggested (the plot was written by someone else, so I have that excuse!) And which part about Peter being kept awake is confusing? Sorry, I just don't see which part you are referring to. :) Ruby2010 talk 02:44, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 
As usual, your referencing and citations are a-okay.
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 
Scope is just as it should be.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Neutral.
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Stable and uncontroversial.
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Images are used well and are sourced correctly.
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Going to stick this on hold until the first point above is seen to. I know you're a pretty prompt editor so this is probably going to be little more than a formality, but I'd rather not rubber-stamp a pass when it can shored up first.|Going to stick this on hold until the first point above is seen to. I know you're a pretty prompt editor so this is probably going to be little more than a formality, but I'd rather not rubber-stamp a pass when it can shored up first.
I'm happy with the improvements. Passed.
See my reply above :) Ruby2010 talk 02:44, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Re-reading it, I think I misinterpreted what was meant in that sentence, so oops on my part. GRAPPLE X 11:13, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the review! Ruby2010 talk 14:57, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

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