# Talk:Zytglogge

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"Built at around the turn of the 13th century," → "Built in the early 13th century,"
"When it was built – probably at around 1218–20[2] – the Zytglogge served as the gate tower of Berne's western fortifications. " → "When it was built around 1218–20,[2] the Zytglogge served as the gate tower of Berne's western fortifications. "
"the Empire (see: Golden Charter of Bern). At " → "the Empire. At " – remove references like that tell the reader to "see" something because when they print it out, they can't click on it ;) Articles are supposed to be able to be understood in any medium, format, etc.
The image in " Interior" is huge – perhaps use a width of 500px or so. It won't look good on small screens.
" Bibliography" section goes after "References"
Why is there an image in " References"? Move it somewhere else (the text that it is near must discuss it) or remove it.
There are so many images, that I suggest staggering them per MOS:IMAGE
Gary King (talk) 19:59, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

Y All done, thanks!  Sandstein  20:51, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

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