# Talk:Until the Whole World Hears

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Infobox
Put specifics in recording location, instead of "Various locations in the United States"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


### Lead
Two album cuts, "To Know You" and "Joyful, Joyful", also appeared on the Christian Songs chart, peaking at Nos. 27 and 3, respectively. → Replace "Nos." with "numbers"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


### Background and songwriting
No issues


### Composition
...as 'pure American rock',[6] 'soft adult contemporary',[3] and 'CCM';[6] → Put period at end of "CCM"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
One critic observed that most of the songs on the album... → Start the sentence with the name of the critic
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Another theme present throughout the album i... → Not a complete thought and without a source
Whoops, brainfart there. Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Combine two subsections into one section as both are two small to warrant subsections
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


### Release and sales
Billboard magazine ranked Until the Whole World Hears as the best-selling Christian album and the 37th best-selling album overall of 2011.[13][14] It also ranked as the 3rd best-selling Christian album and the 137th best-selling album overall of 2011.[15][16] → Combine sentences into paragraph above in section
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Subsection is not necessary; put "Singles" information in second paragraph of section
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


### Reception
Debra Akins of Gospel Music Channel.com said the album... → Wiki-link entire phrase of "Gospel Music Channel"
Fixed - I thought it winkilinked '.com' add-ons, but I guess it doesn't. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)


### Track listing
No issues


### Personnel
No issues


### Charts and certifications
No issues


### References
Reference 1 → "Gospel Music Channel.com" should not be italicized and should also just be "Gospel Music Channel"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05
Reference 4 → Provide the actual external link to verify information that comes from this source
Aside from linking to the google books page, I switched the template to a 'cite journal' template to represent it being a magazine. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
References 9, 17, 18, 24 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" do not need to be wiki-linked as they were before
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Reference 10 → Provide actual URL to support information brought on by source
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
References 12, 19 → "Jesus Freak Hideout" should be publisher and not italicized or wiki-linked; John DiBiase should be put as author of article
Fixed
Reference 21 → "Allmusic" should not be italicized
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Reference 23 → "The Tennessean" and "Gannett Company" should not be italicized
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold. There are some minor prose issues and citation format issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these issues and/or address issues you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 22:33, 20 June 2012 (UTC)