# Talk:Ranger Suárez

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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 14:22, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 14:22, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### References
This section looks good!


### Lead
I think the drug suspension should be mentioned in the lead.  Maybe end the first sentence after 2012, then make it part of the sentence about the Venezuelan Summer League.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”2019 season, but was” – No comma needed.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Early life
”outfield, but” – No comma needed.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Minor leagues
No comma needed after 2012 in the first sentence.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”In five innings pitched, Suárez pitched” – “In five innings pitched, Suarez recorded”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
I think when “By” is used, the verb should be “had been” instead of “was.”
 Fixed — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”a 0.65 ERA, with 20” – No comma needed.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Might be a day missing from the NYPL Player of the Week—26-31 is only six days.
 Fixed whoops, dyscalculia! — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”the season, as decided” – No comma needed.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
I seem to remember from back when I studied German that “Rindfleisch” is beef (Don’t put that in the article!)
”Suárez was named to the South Atlantic League All-Star team, but could not participate in the game, and was replaced by Jordan Jess.[12] On July 4, Suárez was promoted to the Class A-Advanced Clearwater Threshers, joining a rotation of top pitching prospects that also included JoJo Romero, Sixto Sanchez, and Franklyn Kilome” – “Suárez was named to the South Atlantic League All-Star team, but Jordan Jess replaced him on the roster.  This was because before the game, on July 4, Suárez was promoted to the Class A-Advanced Clearwater Threshers.  He joined a rotation of top pitching prospects that also included JoJo Romero, Sixto Sanchez, and Franklyn Kilome.”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”Fightin Phils, as part” – No comma needed.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Philadelphia Phillies
Put who ranked him the #10 prospect; Baseball America and MiLB.com don’t always have the same order.
 Added — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
” He played in 37 games for the Phillies in 2019, all in relief, and with eight closing appearances” – “He made 37 relief appearances for the Phillies in 2019, finishing eight games for them.”  Then take out “There” at the start of the next sentence.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”late August, and was” – “late August before being”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”I’d take out the part about Lidge—not really notable for someone who only has four saves.”
 Done And added that he moved into the rotation after we acquired Kennedy — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Pitcher profile
Change the first two sentences to “Suárez spent most of his professional baseball career as a starting pitcher before being used as a long reliever and closer by the Phillies in 2021.”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
” Suárez is also known for his fastball, which averages” – “Suárez’s fastball averages”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
I’d take out the sentence about depth, since it’s a little too early in his career to tell.
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Personal life
”first player in MLB” – “first MLB player”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
”While playing in” – “While he was playing in”
 Done — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Looks good; just minor stuff.  Let me know when you’re finished, and I’ll give it another look! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 14:44, 13 September 2021 (UTC)

Sanfranciscogiants17 All done! You're really making up for the Austin Nola thing, aren'tcha? ;) — GhostRiver 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
GhostRiver Passed. Nice job, again! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)