# Talk:Scary Godmother: Halloween Spooktakular

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! HumanxAnthro (talk) 01:49, 28 January 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Using Amazon as a reference doesn't seem like a good choice per WP:AMAZON. I suggest replacing it with this.
Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
As the two references after "first book" are already in #Background_and_development, they're not necessary for the lead.
Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:56, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
Everything else looks good.


### Plot
"Katie, Bert and Daryl" → "Katie, Bert, and Daryl"
"Bert, Daryl and Katie" → "Bert, Daryl, and Katie"
"He declares himself the "leader" out of nowhere by winning a rock, paper, scissors game." → "He declares himself the "leader" after winning a rock, paper, scissors game."
All of the following above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:58, 28 January 2021 (UTC)


### Background and development
"US$350,000" → "$350,000"
"vice president Kim Dent Wilder" → "Mainframe vice president Kim Dent Wilder"
"a TV series" → "a television series"
All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:07, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


### Production
#### Workflow
In the last paragraph of this section, remove the last part of the quote "and generally bugged everyone several times a week with my yammering phone calls" as it seems unnecessary, and add an [and] in-between "designed sets, painted backgrounds".
Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


#### Casting
This section looks good.


#### Animation
""blend"ing" → "blending"
Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


#### Visual style
This section also looks good.


### Release
This reference in the article says the film went to Region 1 DVD on September 3, not September 8. Also, change this in the lead.
"Germany and Italy" → "Germany, and Italy"
All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:10, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


### Reception
"The Chicago Tribune" → "The Chicago Tribune"
Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:09, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


### Overview
#### GAN table
#### Notes
@HumanxAnthro: I just finished adding most, if not all of the rest of my notes. The article is well-written but has a few issues to address. Leave comments and ping me back, and I hope I can promote this article to GA-status soon.  Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 01:06, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: All completed HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:12, 29 January 2021 (UTC)