# Talk:Pakistan at the 2010 Winter Olympics

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:31, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
Will read this article and leave comments. MWright96 (talk) 08:31, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"He was also the country's opening and closing ceremonies flag bearer." - change to Abbas was also the country's flag bearer in the opening and closing ceremonies.
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Background
Wikilink Naltar Valley and Ski Federation of Pakistan
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Link 1948 Games to 1948 Summer Olympics
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Wikilink the word opening to 2010 Winter Olympics opening ceremony and closing ceremonies to 2010 Winter Olympics closing ceremony; also the same needs to be done in the lead
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Alpine skiing
"He trained for two weeks in 2008 and six weeks in 2009 in Austria," - try and six weeks in Austria in 2009
Done, not sure it sounds better though. Kees08 (Talk)
" since he did not have money to compete in other competitions." - change to contest to avoid close reptition of the same word
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"The event was supposed to start on February 21, but was postponed two days to allow for another event to take place." - source? and which event exactly?
Added the event and moved the reference closer to the material
"His total was 3:20.58, for 79th place overall," - total time
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### References
Reference 1 is missing the author who wrote it
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Reference 7's publisher The Star needs to be in the work field
Done Kees08 (Talk)
That's all from my side. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 17:38, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: Think I got it all. Kees08 (Talk) 03:40, 12 July 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Good work. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:20, 12 July 2018 (UTC)