# Talk:Zach Hankins

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for the speedy review. Did not expect one this quick. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Early life and high school career
Wikilink points, rebounds and shooting to their respective articles to help those unfamiliar with basketball
OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"In the fall of 2013," - please avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
So I should just say 2013? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Preferably state the month Hankins injured his left foot or late 2013 MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Changed to late 2013, as I can't find the month but I think it was October. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"Hankins was running up the floor and stopped abruptly, breaking his foot." - you can say it was the left foot Hankins broke as stated by The Detroit News
Clarified. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"so he committed to the Bulldogs." - make it clear that Hankins committed to playing college basketball for the Bulldogs.
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)


### College career
Wikilink Bevo Francis Award
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Wikilink block to Block (basketball) on the first time the term is mentioned and field goal percentage
Done and I already linked field goal percentage. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"for top small college player" - for the top
Good catch. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Wikilink National Player of the Year to NABC Player of the Year
OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Add a link to most valuable player for non-Basketball readers
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"but stuck with new coach Travis Steele after Steele said Hankins was still a priority. " - remained
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"He led the Musketeers to a 19-16 record and had 13 points, nine rebounds and two assists in a 78-76 overtime loss" - replace the hyphens with en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
"in the second round of the NIT." - the 2019 National Invitation Tournament.7
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)


### References
Reference 6: "Ferris State basketball wins Division II national championship, 71-69"." - en dash please
Fixed. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised here. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

I have addressed your concerns. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
@Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:04, 8 April 2020 (UTC)