# Talk:PSLV-C42

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 18:59, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
I'll pick this one up. Review follows shortly.  Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:59, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

Link crore for the non-Indian readers.
Cheesegrater -> "cheese grater"
Some links need access dates
I have preformed these to speed the process along. Revert changes you disagree with.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Looks good.
Is it well written?
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Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:20, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for the review Hawkeye7, it is much appreciated. MBlaze Lightning 06:17, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Hello!
I am late to the party, but having reviewed the page, I have a suggestion.
It is well-written, as far as it goes, but it also reads like an information dump, which makes it somewhat inaccessible to the casual reader.  I suggest writing a "History" or "Background" section explaining why the satellite was developed.  I've done something like this on my Solrad 1 page (and also its parent, Solrad).
Keep up the good work!
--Neopeius (talk) 21:14, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

@MBlaze Lightning: bringing your attention to these comments if you did not notice them. Neopeius edited awhile back, and is getting back in the swing of things. They saw your request for assessment on WP:Spaceflight from awhile ago and provided some input. Wanted to bring it to your attention in case you missed it! Kees08 (Talk) 03:25, 7 January 2019 (UTC)
Gotcha. I'll see what I can do about a background section, but it'd be some time before I start writing one as I've got my hands full, so please bear with me. Thanks.
MBlaze Lightning 06:27, 8 January 2019 (UTC)

The following Wikimedia Commons files used on this page have been nominated for deletion:

06 pslv-c42 second liquid stage at stage preparation facility.jpg
Bjs2135 PSLV C42 lifting off from First Launch Pad.jpg
NovaSAR-1 and SSTL S1-4 satellites before integration with PSLV C42.jpg
PSLV C42 First Launch Pad Panorama.jpg
PSLV C42 vehicle on the First Launch Pad with mobile service tower in the background.jpg
Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 18:29, 20 August 2019 (UTC)