# Talk:The Return (The Office)

I propose moving all of the Quotes to Wikiquote. There is already a significant quote collection there which overlaps the list here, and Wikiquote is probably the correct place for them anyway. -- Raymondc0 00:46, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

that is unethical and idiotic
how could one propose to move all quotes to Wikiqoute when the quote is relevent to the actual show and or page.
think twice and use your brain. --Jkskater4ever 19:16, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

'Unethical' seems a bizarre choice of wording. The point is, the quotes not only overlap with Wikiquote, but offer nothing in terms of plot because of the Synopsis section. They are relevant to the episode, but not necessary or needed in any way, so a link to Wikiquote will suffice. -- Viewdrix 19:27, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:The Return (The Office)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 20:55, 27 January 2012 (UTC)


### Checking against GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
"Helms recorded his cell phone ring on his own computer, and actually bloodied his knuckles while punching the wall, something that took five or six takes." Maybe separate into two sentences because they are complete separate issues.
"Steve Carell and Rainn Wilson had difficulty with their reuniting scene and had to stage in several different ways; imaging and photographic equipment, materials and services company Kodak sponsored the scene." This sentence makes no sense. Please separate and write it more clearly. I'm not sure if Kodak is an imaging and photographic company, or if Kodak provided the equipment and I don't understand why this effects Carell and Wilson

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
All good.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Thorough coverage, no sign of trivia
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
Neural POV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
No edit warring
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Two pictures, properly tagged. I would recommend adding a more thorough caption like: "Andy snaps and punches a hole in the wall. Ed Helms actually bloodied his knuckles while punching the wall." or "Andy snaps and punches a hole in the wall. "The Return" marked Helms' departure from The Office until the season's nineteenth episode "The Negotiation"."
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:06, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Good suggestions which I have now added. Thanks for the review! Ruby 2010/2013 02:40, 29 January 2012 (UTC)
Excellent! I pass the article! Congrats! :)--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:02, 29 January 2012 (UTC)

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