# Talk:SS Lac La Belle

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"between Cleveland, and Lake Superior" no need for comma.
"As of 2021, the wreck..." avoid single sentence para, merge that into the previous lead para.
"Cleveland, Ohio by" comma after Ohio.
"She was launched" last "she" was the sister ship.
"her career ... her career..." repetitive.
"on Lake Superior, sustaining" overlinked.
"from Ontonagon, Michigan for" comma after Michigan.
"St Clair River" not St. Clair River like before?
"the Detroit Free Press reported" italics.
Lee and Swayze refs need an en-dash not a spaced hyphen.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)