# Talk:Summer Ranger

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Her first appearance on 23 November 2020 needs a source.
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
"who she later forms a romantic connection with" → "with who she later forms a romantic connection"
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "fun and sarcastic".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
"on the series" → "in the series"
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "Warren or Felix".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "for her character".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "work with Sienna".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "arrested for the drugging".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "admire Sienna".
 Done – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
sources
References are archived. 
Main issue here is WP:METRO.
I've not shied away from using Metro sources on soap articles before since the soap department of Metro is separate from the main tabloid site; it has an editorial team and gets all info from the soaps directly since they deal with spoilers and embargoes. Do you think it would be worth bringing this up in a discussion on the RSP? – DarkGlow • 19:41, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Probably. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:52, 11 June 2021 (UTC)


### Progress