# Talk:The Leader (web series)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


### Plot
Again, change "intellectual" per WP:NPOV.
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "with his death".
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


### Production
"merchandisesuch" → "merchandise such"
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


### Broadcast
"social-media" → "social media"
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
"more-serious" → "more serious"
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
"surplus value" → "surplus-value"
Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Add a serial comma after "boils".
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
 Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.


### Reception
In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
Wow, nice catch. Thanks.  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
Thanks again.  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


### References
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### Progress