# Talk:Thinking 'Bout You (Dua Lipa song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

I will start this review tomorrow; hopefully it does not get in the way of your schedule with the other review, as I can see that one has not been completed... --K. Peake 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"wrote the song with Adam Argyle while" → "co-wrote the song with Adam Argyle, while" because a comma is needed before while in British English for instances like this
I would recommend a comma either before through or as in the release sentence since it reads like a bit of a run-on currently
Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Wikilink acoustic guitar
"using weed, alcohol" → "confessing to using weed, alcohol"
"Commercially, the song charted" → "Commercially, "Thinking 'Bout You" charted"
Include the respective positions on the charts
Mention that the song received the video in February 2017
"A remix by" → "A remix of the song by" to specify so it doesn't sound like you mean a live remix
 Done


### Background and composition
Audio sample text looks good, but you should wikilink acoustic guitar nevertheless!
There is no background info about how any of the collaborators became involved with Lipa; I would suggest mentioning that Koz contributed produced numerous tracks on the album
"and Adam Argyle with" → "and Adam Argyle, with" for correct separation of the roles to avoid confusion
Wikilink synthesizer
Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
"was handled by" → "were both handled by"
""Thinking 'Bout You" is an" → "Musically, "Thinking 'Bout You" is an"
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Swap the order of the Idolator and iTunes Store refs per the prose
"is composed in 44 time" → "is composed in the time signature of 44 time"
Pipe groove to Groove (music)
Wikilink acoustic guitar
Wikilink bluesy
Pipe range to Vocal range
Wikilink lament
"evoking desperation in" → "while evoking desperation in"
 Done


### Release and promotion
Add the word "accounts" after SoundCloud and YouTube
[15] does not source the song as being among the ones performed by her at Eurosonic Noorderslag
Removed. LOVI33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
"she performed it on" → "she performed the song on"
Remove comma after independent record label
"It serves as the" → "It served as the"
Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
"Room for 2" being the previous promo single is unsourced
Added in source. LOVI33 22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
You can split the music video into a third para of its own to separate from release/performances, as there is enough info
"in April of that year alongside" → "in April 2017 alongside one of"
"the setlists for the singer's Self-Titled Tour in 2017 and 2018." → "the setlist for the singer's Self-Titled Tour, which ran from 2017 to 2018."
Remove wikilink on New Zealand and mention that the performance was for Warner Music New Zealand
 Done


### Reception
"Lipa's versatility saying" → "Lipa's versatility, saying"
"that it shows her" → "that the song shows Lipa's"
Wikilink Tanqueray
"thought it is more of a" → "thought the song is of a more"
"but also it's clearest giving one" → "but also among its clearest due to giving one"
"opted that the song" → "opined that the song" because this is not a specific choice
 Done


### Track listings
Good


### Credits and personnel
Wikilink Dua Lipa
 Done


### Charts
Good


### Release history
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks great at 19.4%!!!
Top job with the archiving; shame I can't replicate that for any of my articles right now due to the tool being down
Cite 3VOOR12 as publisher instead for ref 15
Remove WBUR-FM from ref 20
Pipe Warner Music New Zealand to Warner Music Australasia on ref 30
 Done


### External links
Good


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:09, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for the review Kyle Peake! I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. LOVI33 22:53, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
LOVI33  Pass now, great to wake up to your response here in the UK and everything is checked! --K. Peake 06:36, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

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