# Talk:Water (Kanye West song)

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
Hey Kyle Peake, I will start my review now. LOVI33 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Remove wikilink to Kanye West under songwriters WP:OVERLINK
Per Template:Infobox song, only lead producers should be credited in the infobox, therefore remove, Angel Lopez, Vindver and Timbaland
 Done for the above even though I had already set these credits properly before this edit switched things around --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
"Clemons and West had a conversation about Jesus, which the song came from" → "The song came from a conversation between Clemons and West about Jesus"
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### Background and recording
First paragraph is really long, maybe split it up into a few?
 Done how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
[sic] →  [sic], using Template:Sic
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### Composition and lyrics
Looks Good!


### Release and promotion
No problems found, looks good!


### Critical reception
Looks good!


### Commercial performance
"entered at number 51 on the US Billboard Hot 100" → "entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 51"
"the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the Hot 100" → "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the chart"
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### Credits and personnel
Change title to just "Personnel," "Credits and personnel" is used when there are recording locations involved
Are you sure about this? I was thinking that stuff like "recording engineer", "associated performer" and "mastering engineer" makes it titled as of current? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
Okay fair enough, Keep it as is. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### Charts
Looks good!


### Notes
Looks good!


### References
ref 1 is a bare url, replace with a citation
 Not done I instead removed since it was added in the recent edit that changed the infobox --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


### External links
Looks good!


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold for now. Just a few small changes and I will promote it to GA. Amazing work on the article by the way. LOVI33 04:06, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
LOVI33 Have made proper fixes for the changes apart from that one. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake, Okay thats a  Pass. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)