# Talk:Tour Championship (snooker)

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I'll be reviewing this article in exchange from the Danganronpa review. I'm not familiar with these types of articles but I'll try giving a good review.Tintor2 (talk) 20:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
@Lee Vilenski: I might give it a quick pass but there are some stuff that I kinda wonder:

Is it possible to expand the lead? Only one seems to fail common guidelines
I've had other GAs pass with a one para lede. The deal is if there is anything that is missing - I'd love for there to be more, but the lede currently covers the location, winners, history and the format of the event. If I can think of anything else, I'll add. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:44, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Since this is a small article and I have checked some sources, is it possible to add commentary from the winners and/or runner ups? I'm not familiar with this project but I kinda wonder if this might helpful to expand the article's length. Maybe adding a free pic of Sullivan to the second section might help since he is the first champion.
Agreed. Very good point. Give me a day or two and I'll get something together. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:44, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Anyways, that's all. Ping me once you believe any issue is solved and I'll gladly pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 21:35, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

Just recommendations so don't be pressured to do everything. If you think it's okay, I'll pass it. The current article was updated with stuff I asked so there have been constructive additions.Tintor2 (talk) 11:49, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi Tintor2, yeah I've had a look and added things that I think fit. Thanks for the review. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:54, 30 April 2021 (UTC)