# Talk:Vilayet Printing House (Sarajevo)

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
I will take this one. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)


### Lead
Ottoman Empire known as the Tanzimat Better write "Ottoman Empire (known as the Tanzimat)"
I think vilayet should be in italics throughout the article as it is a foreign word. It should be linked/explained in the lead


### Background
Link Bosnia and Herzegovina


### Under Sopron
Link Ignjat Sopron


### Under the vilayet government
 Its subsequent directors were incompetent I think we had better say "not very capable", the present wording may be a bit too strong.
Duplink:  Principality of Serbia
No copyvio detected, sources fine, the text is very well written and the images suffice. That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:35, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:43, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: No prob, just notify me when you're ready. 23 editor (talk) 01:09, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
@23 editor: Read the article once again. The prose is very well-written, and I have no more comments. Please ping me when you are done with the points above; these done, I would be happy to pass the article. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:58, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: I already dealt with all the points you brought up. 23 editor (talk) 12:51, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Thank you... did not notice they were done. This is a great job, I am pleased to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:56, 31 March 2016 (UTC)