# Talk:PS Lotta Bernard

Four references were given for tonnage, one a diving site (rather than a site devoted to ships); it gives grt at 190.  The others support the conclusion that the vessel's tonnage was 147 grt and 190 OM (burthen), which are consistent, as those are separate methods of measurement. I have modified the article accordingly and omitted the diving reference which is the only one to give grt at 190.  Kablammo (talk) 23:06, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Seems like an interesting topic, will start soon. AryKun (talk) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

"PS Lotta Bernard" → "The PS Lotta Bernard"
Perhaps link for PS?
Link sidewheel and barge.
If this is the Northern Transportation Company referenced, link it.
Use "the" before all uses of "Lotta Bernard".
See Kablammo's note below.
"she began to encounter a storm" → "she encountered a storm"
Link wreck.
Link for Official number?
Link piston, bore, and stroke.
Link stern and forward deck.
"S.W. Dorsey" → "S. W. Dorsey"
"daughter, and his own" → comma unnecessary
Flour and kegs don't need links.
Link bow anchor.
"shore, and one of the group died of exposure" → "and" seems like an inappropriate conjunction here, maybe "although" or something else might be better.
"had, passed" → "had passed,"
"As of 2020 the" → "As of 2020, the"
"The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her on June 27–28, 2020, and if not found, they planned to search for her on September 12–13." → "The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her from June 27–28, 2020, and if she was not found, again from September 12–13."
Not necessary, but alt text for both images would be nice.
@AryKun: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 22:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Nice, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 03:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)


### Use of the definite article before a ship's name
See this discussion.  The definite article is not required, but is accepted, unless the ship has an HM prefix. Kablammo (talk) 15:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)