# Talk:Travis Dermott

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look over the next few days. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead needs more on his professional career. Done
Probably should link minor ice hockey to timbits hockey.  Done
"After being named to the OJHL's 2nd Team All-Stars[11] and Fan Favourite[12] he committed to play for the Erie Otters on May 4, 2013." Comma before ref 12.
No need to relink OHL and Erie Otters one paragraph after. Done
"before they were ultimately eliminated." By who? Done
Link Utica Comets. Done
De-link Kapanen's second mention. Done
Dash needed for 7-game. Done
"However" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
Awards and honours section needs the references (Ref.) label for the column of the table. Done
That's about it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:24, 14 April 2020 (UTC)