# Talk:Priscilla Duffield

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
Will aim to get this in the next few days... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)

Toolbox check
Dab/EL checker not working.
Checked duplinks via another tool and removed one.
Prose/detail
Just a little copyediting, hope no issues.
Short and sharp but I think enough there for GA.
Structure
The lead certainly does its job of establishing what made her noteworthy but I think it might be a bit short for GA -- perhaps a couple more sentences to flesh out her life details, e.g. "Born Priscilla Browne in California...", then noting her marriage / change of name and perhaps that she spent her later years in Colorado?
Images
Licence checks out.
Referencing
Fully cited to what look like reliable sources.
Formatting seems okay but providing OCLCs for two books looks inconsistent -- suggest none (my personal preference) or all of them.
Pretty well there... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 05:14, 25 October 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. Have expanded the introduction. The idea was to show that the Manhattan Project people were not all physicists. I also gathered material on Anne Wilson Marks, but don't have an image, or quite as much information. Hawkeye7 (talk) 00:13, 2 November 2014 (UTC)
I think it's a great idea to bring more of the project's members to the fore -- well done, passing as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:56, 2 November 2014 (UTC)