# Talk:SMS Sperber (1860)

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Nominator: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 17:59, 21 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:33, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Will get to this shortly. Jaguar (talk) 15:33, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Lead
The lead summarises the article well, so no issues here
" She was then used as a barge in Kiel." - I think you should add that her ultimate fate was unknown after this sentence
Done
Body
"Sperber was laid down at the Domcke shipyard in Grabow in 1859 and she was launched on 14 February 1860" - can be condensed to Sperber was laid down at the Domcke shipyard in Grabow in 1859 and launched on 14 February 1860
Good idea
"The ship was armed with a battery of one rifled 24-pounder muzzle-loading gun" - ship, or in this case 'gunboat'?
Works for me
There's not much else I can add to the review, I'm afraid. It meets the criteria based on its comprehensiveness and is well written, in similar vein to the others. I will promote this one outright on that basis. Well done.  Jaguar (talk) 15:40, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

Thanks Jaguar! By the way, once I get SMS Iltis (1898) through GAN, I'll put up SMS Jaguar, which would be quite the appropriate one for you to review if you wanted to do more German ships ;) Parsecboy (talk) 20:03, 23 June 2025 (UTC)