# Talk:Orange Trees

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 08:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

Starting this review today or tomorrow, after I've been on a brief hiatus from them --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:36, 12 July 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Replace hlist with bullet points
Add the link to music video on YouTube in the infobox
"for her fourth studio album," → "from her fourth studio album,"
"It was released for" → "The song was released for"
Target single to Single (music)
"The song was written by Marina," → "It was written by Marina,"
"and produced by Görres." → "while produced by Görres."
"Several remixes of the single were produced" → "Several remixes of the song were produced"
"and indie pop track with a" → "and indie pop track, with a"
Remove wikilink on nature
Remove wikilink on Greece
"considered it a standout or" → "considered the song a standout and"
"it to previous single" → "it to Marina's previous single"
"a song that also discusses" → "a track that also discusses"
"while others dismissed" → "while other critics dismissed"
"music videos were produced for the song. The original video" → "accompanying music videos were produced and the original video" with the appropriate wikilink
"was released the following month." → "was released in April 2019, featuring..." with some info added
"in April 2019." → "that same month"
"It was also included on the setlist to" → "The song was also included on the setlist of"
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 12:34, 15 July 2020 (UTC).


### Background and release
"She explained that" → "She explained that,"
"and there wasn’t" → "and there wasn't"
"After the announcement, she" → "After the announcement, Marina"
Target single to Single (music)
"On 14 February 2019 she announced Love + Fear," → "On 14 February 2019, she announced Love + Fear,"
"the same day, revealing that "Orange Trees" is" → "that same day, revealing "Orange Trees" as"
"composed of two segments with" → "that is composed of two segments, with"
"It was written by Marina," → "The song was written by Marina,"
"and produced by Görres." → "while Görres handled production."
Img looks good
"on 22 March 2019 through Atlantic Records." → "as a single on 22 March 2019 through Atlantic Records."
"On that same day on" → "On that same day via"
Remove wikilink on extended play
"Atlantic Records commissioned several remixes" → "Atlantic commissioned several remixes"
"was released as a download" → "was released for digital download and streaming"
Add a ref at the end of the sentence to back this info up
"followed and were released on 31 May and 7 June," → "followed, being released on 31 May and 7 June 2019,"
"the last one released on 14 June." → "the last one, released for digital download and streaming on 14 June 2019."
"was also recorded and included on the track listing for Marina's seventh extended play," → "was recorded and included on the track listing for Marina's seventh EP,"
Add source for the production credit of the acoustic version
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 16:44, 20 July 2020 (UTC).


### Composition and lyrics
"and indie pop song with" → "and indie pop song, with"
"referred to this beat" → "referred to the beat"
Target chorus to Refrain
"when considering its" → "when considering the song's"
"electro-pop" and considered" → "electro-pop", while he considered"
"in the chord progressions of" → "in the chord progression of" with the wikilink
"provided by Hassle who plays the guitar" → "provided by Hassle, who plays the guitar,"
"Görres who plays keyboards" → "Görres, who plays keyboards"
"by John Hanes and" → "by John Hanes, while"
Wikilink Erik Hassle on the first mention in the text box
"on writing "Orange Trees" with Erik Hassle." → "on writing "Orange Trees" with Hassle."
"Lyrically, the song uses vivid imagery" → "Lyrically, "Orange Trees" uses vivid imagery" with the wikilink
"to the beauty of Earth’s" → "to the beauty of Earth's"
"the island of Lefkada in Greece," → "the city island of Lefkada in Greece,"
"she said: "[...] it's" → "she said "it's"
"It’s like my body/biology" → "It's like my body/biology"
"them to the ones from" → "them to the ones of"
"Marina opens the song..." this sentence does not have a ref to back it up
"into the first verse where she describes" → "into the first verse, where she describes:"
Target bridge to Bridge (music)
"she sings "Life is beautiful" → "Marina sings, "Life is beautiful"
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 16:50, 20 July 2020 (UTC).


### Critical reception
"Murphy also liked the track," → "Lauren Murphy also praised the track,"
"on the album she felt were" → "on the album that she felt were"
Wikilink upbeat to itself
""It’s achingly lovely and" → ""It's achingly lovely and"
"was reviewed by several critics and received praise." either add more reviews or remove the "and received praise" claim
"and called it the EP's sole highlight." → "and called it the sole highlight."
"The more negative reviews of the song" → "The more negative reviews of "Orange Trees"" to be specific
"of the song and said that it" → "of the song, saying that it"
Wikilink Fanta to itself
Target San Pellegrino to S.Pellegrino
"but there’s something" → "but there's something"
"In her review of the parent album," → "In her review of Love + Fear,"
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 17:09, 20 July 2020 (UTC).


### Music videos
Wikilink music video to itself
"with Marina for the video for" → "with Marina on the video for"
"It was filmed on" → "The visual was filmed on"
Remove wikilink on Mexico
"As indicated, it was uploaded to Marina's official" → "Ultimately, it was uploaded to Marina's"
"The video opens following..." and the following sentences up to "Many of the shots..." do not seem to be backed up by any refs
"on the beach as they" → "on the beach, as they"
"in the sand in a one-piece swimsuit" → "in the sand of the beach in a one-piece swimsuit,"
Remove target on dock
"the release of the music video, the paid download was available for purchase" → "the YouTube release of the music video, it was made available for download"
"A contributor to" → "A contributor for"
"vertical video also directed by Muller was" → "vertical video, also directed by Muller, was"
"The video was eventually posted on Marina's" → "The video was eventually uploaded to her"
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 02:13, 21 July 2020 (UTC).


### Live performances
"of the set list of her" → "of the set list for her" on the img main text
"becoming her first appearance" → "standing as her first appearance"
"review of her performance," → "review of the performance,"
"who reviewed Marina's show in" → "reviewing Marina's show in"
"to a near vibrato" which" → "to a near vibrato", which"
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 12:34, 15 July 2020 (UTC).


### Track listings and formats
Retitle to Track listings
Use bullet points on each track listing header
Remove wikilink on Spotify since that is part of the release's title
Wikilink to Claptone should be on the track name instead of the release's title
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 12:34, 15 July 2020 (UTC).


### Credits and personnel
Any specific order here; like is this how it is ordered in the liner notes, or some other reasoning maybe for all I know?
I arranged them alphabetically by last name. Carbrera (talk) 16:57, 20 July 2020 (UTC).


### Release history
Format → Format(s)
Distributor → Label
Separate Digital download and streaming by using hlist instead, with the targets on first mentions solely
Add a separate col for the versions and call the first two releases Original; the other ones should have their remix titles added as you would've figured
Wikilink Spotify to itself
Wikilink Claptone to himself
Center all of the refs
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 16:55, 20 July 2020 (UTC).


### References
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Copyvio score looks good at 30.6%
Change Amazon Music to Amazon.com on ref 9 with the target
Cite different stores for the above with the same layout for respective countries to verify the release was indeed various; do the same for refs 10, 12, 13 and 14, and only wikilink Apple Music on the first mention but add (CA), (US), etc. when appropriate
Ref 11 is from an unreliable source since directly citing Spotify is wrote against on Wiki; remove or replace
Add (CA) after Apple Music on ref 22
Either reword the prose backed up by ref 35 or cite various countries to verify that the release was that; add (VA) after Apple Music either way
Cite BroadwayWorld as publisher instead for ref 37
All  Done. Carbrera (talk) 14:51, 21 July 2020 (UTC).


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold after we are reunited with a review of this from me, good luck in the response! --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:35, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – thanks for your patience. I completely blanked about finishing up this GAN but I will be able to wrap it within the next two days if that is alright with you. Let me know and thanks, Carbrera (talk) 00:16, 20 July 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera Yeah it is fine, leave comments for anything that I have asked questions about or you have questions about please. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:53, 20 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – Hello. I believe I have completed addressing all of your comments. Thanks again for picking up another article. I appreciate it. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Carbrera (talk) 14:51, 21 July 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera Nice one man, I'll have a look through tonight and see if this is ready to be passed or still needs some fixes! --Kyle Peake (talk) 15:25, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
Carbrera Have done some copy editing but you still need to cite various stores for releases as suggested, plus are you sure ref 11 works? --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:59, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – What about now? I guess I overlooked those citations. And for #11, what is your opinion? I can't find any other source proving the existence of this digital EP other than directly from Spotify. Carbrera (talk) 21:24, 22 July 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera #11 should work fine I guess, #9 still needs more though. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:11, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – I changed 'Various' to just 'United States'. Carbrera (talk) 01:11, 24 July 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera That's fine, did some brief copy editing but will now  Pass, congrats on the well-timed response too. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)