# Talk:The Kids from Yesterday

I won't lie, the album this song came from had a lot of synthpop, but this particular track, not so much. Sources? 175.38.204.40 (talk) 01:13, 27 October 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Kids from Yesterday/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: NegativeMP1 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 14:16, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

Comments coming soon. I haven't listened to this track, so this review should be objective, hopefully :) Ippantekina (talk) 14:16, 1 July 2025 (UTC)


### Comments
Copyvio Detector at 24.2%, violation unlikely
Suggest adding ALT text to the cover art
Done.
redundant: consequentially, many have viewed it as a farewell song. ... The song was met with positive responses from critics, who generally viewed it as a farewell song
I agree this is redundant, but since some critics opinions were in-fact based on it being a farewell song... I feel like there's a reason for both of these mentions to be here? I can't really find a way to reword it that reads any better.
I would suggest something like, Many critics have considered it the band's farewell song and generally given it positive reviews. as the opening sentence to the second lead paragraph. Ippantekina (talk) 11:28, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Alright, done.
Any particular reason why you haven't included the band's members in the |songwriters= parameter of the Infobox?
The reason is that I forgot. Added.
Danger Days: The True Lives of the Fabulous Killjoys was released on November 22, 2010, through Reprise Records; introduce that this is their fourth studio album prior to this sentence
Is it not already highly implied with the production of their fourth album came to an end and Following the success of their third studio album?
No, pls be explicit :) Ippantekina (talk) 11:28, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Done.
Include the years of the two tours
Done.
Link Gigwise, PopMatters, Tris McCall
Added links in prose when appropriate.
For the rankings of the band's songs, do we know how it ranks against other songs (i.e. "the band's twenty-seventh best" out of how many songs in total?)
For some of them, yes, but I'm also not sure what it would really add to the understanding of most of the rankings (for instance, whether or not it was specified that Law's ranking had 20 songs in it, we'd still know it ranked 15th).
I would say yes... because if it's 15th out of 20 songs across the band's discography then meh... not a good review. But 15th among the 20 best songs of the band, then yes it's something worth highlighting. Ippantekina (talk) 11:28, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Fair enough.
Sourcing (refer to this revision)
Spotchecks: 7, 14, 15, 17, 26
Done
Reformat using {{cite web}} with refs 3, 9
Done
Add source date to refs 12, 18
Done
Add author to refs 1, 6, 15, 16, 18, 20, 24
Done
Ref 5: SPIN → Spin (don't use all caps)
Done
Ref 7: replace quotation marks with apostrophes in the source title per MOS:'
Done
Ref 14: should progressive pop be added as a genre per this source?
Good catch, added.
Refs 20, 24: popmatters.com → PopMatters
Done
Add links to publications where possible i.e. Billboard, Kerrang! — Ippantekina (talk) 05:54, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
@Ippantekina: thank for reviewing this article! I've responded to all of the above comments. λ NegativeMP1 07:27, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Thanks @NegativeMP1: for the quick turnaround. I've responded to the last remaining points above. Ippantekina (talk) 11:28, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
@Ippantekina: I think I've got everything now. λ NegativeMP1 21:46, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Just thought i'd add that there's no photos. Newtatoryd222 (talk) 05:02, 3 July 2025 (UTC)
In the article. Newtatoryd222 (talk) 05:03, 3 July 2025 (UTC)
The cover arts there (so there is an image) and there's not really any other media files that would be appropriate for the article (band performing would have questionable relevance, not enough critical commentary regarding a specific part of the song to meet WP:NFCC for an audio file, etc. λ NegativeMP1 05:06, 3 July 2025 (UTC)
All good, passing. Nice work! :) Ippantekina (talk) 02:53, 4 July 2025 (UTC)