# Talk:Training Day (The Office)

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:09, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

Again here, is there a production still you could use for the infobox?
Please note all the characters' full names, as well as their actors, on first reference in the infobox.
Also, I like the idea of grouping the "Plot" paragraphs into each subplot. As it reads right now, the plot jumps around too much and gets confusing.
It's a bit hard to separate the little plot strands, for they are all tied together. -- NoD'ohnuts (talk) 23:06, 24 January 2013 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts
Deangelo's name is misspelled as "deAngelo" a few times. Please make consistent.
In the infobox, guest character "Jahmilla Jackson as Gwyneth Philbin" is noted, but not included in the prose or cited. It at least needs a reference.
Dup links tool shows for duplicate links: Will Ferrell twice; Garage Sale (The Office); and Anchorman.
No problems with dab links. Check links shows all external links are working. The image of Ferrell is appropriately licensed.
You should also note Ferrell's reception for the rest of the story arc, I recall there was a lot of buzz about him appearing. Did reviews on his performance ever change?
Were there no cultural references?
Finally, you should note that this episode is near the end of Steve Carrell's run and why he quit the show.
Will await your responses. —Ed!(talk) 16:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
Excellent work. Passing the GA. —Ed!(talk) 03:38, 28 January 2013 (UTC)