# Talk:Renegade (Big Red Machine song)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:29, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"indie band" link.
"and mental health issues" issues inside the link.
"lyrical zingers" well one critic mentioned this.
"and Evermore, respectively" overlinked.
Who decided Big Red Machine was a supergroup?  That term is not once used in the band's article.
Several critics address the band as a supergroup in the song's reviews. BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
But even our article fails to note that.  If you call them that here, you should call them that at their article, and in both cases provide verifiable sources to back up the claim.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:16, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"studio album, How Long Do You Think It's Gonna Last?, its " overlinked.
"US adult album alternative radio" no need to pipe link, and you explain this "triple-A" thing here, but just assume we know what it means in the lead.  Could use explaining in the lead as well.
I resolved it by directly linking it. An explanation wouldn't be needed now since its the actual title.BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"also impacted adult" what do you mean?  the song was played there?
"between E3 and G4" links.
"strings by Bryce Dessner and" overlinked and no need for the first name if "Dessner" is unambiguous.
No, there are two Dessners; twin brothers. This point is the first time Bryce Dessner is mentioned in the article. The song's producer is Aaron Dessner. BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
No, Bryce is mentioned and linked in the first paragraph of the first main section.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:16, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
"dueling" harmonies spiral" overlinked.
" "a cocoon of" no need to dicdef basic English words.
"multiple Bon Iver duets" overlinked.
"Billboard Alternative Songs " our article just calls it "Alternative Airplay", so could be Billboard's Alternative Airplay...
It's actually Hot Alternative Songs chart, which is different from Alternative Airplay. The former doesn't have its own article. BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Especially when you don't include Billboard in "Billboard Adult Pop Songs" link.
What are Prophet X, rubber bridge guitar and OP1?
They're some specific types/models of synthesizers you'd often see in Aaron Dessner's works. They don't have their own articles. BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be spaced en-dashes.
That's what I have for now.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:24, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done all. BawinV (talk) 07:39, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Response above. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:16, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Resolved them too. Ronherry (talk) 20:06, 7 September 2021 (UTC)