# Talk:Pawnee Zoo

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Reviewer: JulieSpaulding (talk) 09:25, 19 January 2010 (UTC)
Hi Hunter, I'll be reviewing this article. I'll be going through the problems I spot semi-haphazardly, so bear with me...

You might like to reference the plot section. If you don't want to cite the Pawnee Zoo episode itself, at least cite a show recap.
I know you know this now, but WP:TVMOS doesn't require citations for plot summaries. — Hunter Kahn 01:08, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
In the first paragraph of the section 'Production', a weasel word appears in the phrase 'Commentators suggested...' and in the sentence before that also. Exactly who suggested that?
Actually, there's no reason to use that wording in this case anyway. I simply dropped the weasel words and changed it to say that the penguin marriage mirrored the real life one. — Hunter Kahn 01:08, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
The word 'said' is used 20 times in the Reception section. I would probably vary my statements like this:
Critic A commented that Poehler's character appeared too cheery, but Critic B viewed this as a mere statement of her individuality.
I dropped some of the "said"s. — Hunter Kahn 01:08, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
Is the use of the word 'literally' in the last sentence of the 'Plot' section necessary?
Dropped it. — Hunter Kahn 01:08, 20 January 2010 (UTC)
I know it's nit-picky, but I'm willing to pass this article right away as soon as these issues are fixed. JulieSpaulding (talk) 10:05, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
JulieSpaulding (talk) 11:56, 20 January 2010 (UTC)