# Talk:Radiant Silvergun

The screenshot needs a description to be connected to the article, otherwise it's decorative (->fairuse-policy) --elias.hc 08:47, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

Removed the image from the article. --elias.hc 19:18, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
The page should have some of the examples of Engrish used throughout the course of the game.
Why?  Pretty much every game with English released in Japan has 'Engrish'... its a pretty infantile thing to point out. 207.172.52.41 23:19, 10 June 2007 (UTC)

Here, Engrish is very notable! --Artman40 (talk) 20:39, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
But it certainly needs a reception section. --Artman40 (talk) 12:00, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Radiant Silvergun/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: TheJoebro64 (talk · contribs) 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll finish this by the end of the week. JOEBRO64 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Review
@TarkusAB: Overall, this article is fantastic. I just have a few points:

I'd link to porting when it is first mentioned in the lead. Same thing goes for development.
The story of Radiant Silvergun is told non-linearly through animated videos and scripted dialogue between stages—I think you might need a reference for this, as it's sort of an original claim.
The title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the game → The title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the game
None of the publications (CVG, GameSpot, etc.) in the reception section have links to their respective pages.
The hyphen in "rerelease" is unneeded. Standard style is to omit the hyphen in "re-" words unless it causes an ambiguous meaning (example: "recover" vs. "re-cover").
That's all I found. I think your articles get better every time, Tarkus. Nice work. JOEBRO64 23:55, 9 April 2018 (UTC)

@TheJoebro64: Thanks for reviewing. I am pretty busy this week irl, but will get to Shade and this when I have some time. May not be until weekend. TarkusABtalk 13:43, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
No rush. Take your time. JOEBRO64 19:07, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
@TheJoebro64: Done TarkusABtalk 13:47, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
Great! Let's get this promoted. JOEBRO64 14:47, 15 April 2018 (UTC)