# Talk:Sarah Bryant (Virtua Fighter)

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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 00:48, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

 
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
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b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
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It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
Infobox

Voice talent should be mentioned in the article in some way if possible
Her fighting style is not mentioned in the article, and her location is only mentioned in the lead and infobox
Fixed
Lead

Should mention Yu Suzuki's role as the creator
Fixed
Conception and design

It says Suzuki wouldn't comment on whether she's based on a real person; is the article saying he wouldn't comment on whether she's based on a real human being? It sounds like the article is referring to Sarah Conner as a real person.
Fixed
Consider paraphrasing the quotes a bit more (mainly the Suzuki quote)
Fixed
"While she has had a wide variety of secondary outfits as the series progressed, her main design has been used through the series and in promotional material, only seeing minimal change through the years." - Unsourced
Fixed
In other media

I assume the "tongue-in-cheek" mention comes from the source?
Fixed to be clearer that that comes from the source.
Reception

I feel like "Official Sega Saturn Magazine described her as "one of the most brilliant creations in the world of video games", praising her as a "brainwashed maniac" but further emphasizing their like of her breast size, comparing them to Lara Croft's and describing Sarah's as "larger and better defined"." could be improved. For example: "Official Sega Saturn Magazine described her as "one of the most brilliant creations in the world of video games", praising the brainwashing plot and her breast size." I don't think it's really important that they're bigger than Lara's, y'know? Just means that he likes bigger tiddy.
Yeah I think I was leaning too heavily into the Croft comparison due to the time it was posted. Should be a lot better now.
"true original; until Max Headroom becomes a polygon fighter, she'll be the oldest popular character of her type." Not sure what this means!
Dug up the issue and paraphrased it better to make the comparison clearer between her and later characters.
Image

Image looks a bit poopy
Fair use rationale for the infobox image is invalid
Fixed and fixed.