# Talk:Sidney Wallingford

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Nominator: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:02, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Dracophyllum (talk · contribs) 01:32, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

Hello, comments to follow. Dracophyllum 01:32, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

1a)
Returning to New Zealand, in June 1929,
Done. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
this was the predecessor of what in 1934 become became
Arg, an annoying typo. Fixed. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
He initially held the rank of captain,; the NZPAF using army ranks at the time he joined
Done. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
A few months later, on 12 September 1929, he married Kathleen Jamieson at St Mary's Cathedral in Auckland
Done, but deleted the year since already established this as 1929. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
He only set fire to a nearby hut. >> He set fire to a nearby hut in retaliation.
Done. Zawed (talk) 09:46, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
1b) lede is good but could maybe? be three paragraphs for aesthetics
Broke the second para into two to achieve this. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
2a) ref layout is consistent and clean
2b) sources are all reliable
2cd) can't access books, but spot checking sites reveals no OR
)) good detail
5 article is very stable
6ab) pics relevant, appropriately licensed, and captions good.
Otherwise excellent. @Zawed: Dracophyllum 05:56, 1 March 2025 (UTC)

@Dracophyllum: thank you for taking the time to review this. I have dealt with your comments above so this is ready for you to take another look when you are free. Thanks again. Zawed (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
Excellent, passing now Dracophyllum 00:26, 2 March 2025 (UTC)