# Talk:Soak Up the Sun

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

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""Crow. Crow and" repetitive.
"other Billboard rankings" link Billboard.
I included Billboard and Hot 100 as two separate links, so it's already there
"the song, featuring Crow performing the song" the song/the song... repetitive.
"which took place during filming" occurred, it's a passive thing really.
"Radio & Records's" no need for the last s, it's exempted in this case.
"During the Glastonbury Festival in June 2019, Crow" do you mean during a live performance?
I believe so, looking at the source's context
"and Billboard magazine" yeah, this should have been linked above, see my second point.
Already linked
What's an "F/X keyboard"?
That's the term they use on the liner notes. Looking at a quick Google search, I'm not getting a lot of helpful results. I don't know a lot about instruments, but I think it's a keyboard used for sound effects; probably the ones that can be heard during the intro.
" Splice Today" what is that?
"directed the video to "Soak Up the Sun" on Oahu, Hawaii" maybe "directed the video to "Soak Up the Sun" which was filmed on Oahu, Hawaii"?
We really don't need to link surfboard, surfing, curling iron, hair spray etc.
""rock-star surfer" look" that quote isn't referenced.
"Certifications" table has one entry, so no need to be sortable.
As I said on "JCB", cert tables can't be unsortable. Yet.
That's all I have on a first read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:52, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Okay, done. Take a look at my notes above and make your judgements. If I misunderstood what you were saying about linking Billboard, please let me know. ResPM (T🔈 🎵C) 21:02, 6 September 2021 (UTC)