# Talk:Tolkien: A Cultural Phenomenon

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:19, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Hey again, I'll do this soon too. AryKun (talk) 05:19, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:47, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Alt text for the images.
Done.
Incorporate more of the Reception section into the lead's second paragraph.
Done.
Link for literary aesthetics, perhaps?
Linked.
Link Palgrave Macmillan.
Linked.
tableaux → portrayals
Linked.
"Rosebury shows that Tolkien simultaneously builds up a detailed picture of Middle-earth, on a journey through a series of tableaux of places realistic enough for readers to love, and goes on a quest to save Middle-earth by destroying the Ring." → The sentence is too long and it's hard to figure out what two things are occurring simultaneously.
Edited.
"Orwell and Golding to T. H. White and C. S. Lewis, with Rosebury's search for parallels among the Modernists such as Proust, Joyce, and Eliot" → The authors mentioned should all have their first names given too. Not all the readers will be familiar with them, well-known as they are.
Done. Painful!
J.R.R. Tolkien Encyclopedia → J. R. R. Tolkien Encyclopedia
Done.
Any link or gloss for what VII is?
Added.
Link Sauron.
Linked.
Could ref 16 be improved.
Done.
That's all. AryKun (talk) 15:07, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Cool, have passed the article. AryKun (talk) 04:23, 13 January 2022 (UTC)