# Talk:Unfinished Tales

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:03, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:16, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead's too short and doesn't contain any information from Analysis.
Extended.
I've performed a minor copy-edit, no other prose concerns.
Noted.
Not necessary, but maybe put in an appropriate image in the analysis section.
Added.
References are reliable and correctly formatted.
Noted, thanks.
Olsen, Corey (2014). "Unfinished Tales". Mythgard Institute. Signum University. Link automatically triggers a blocker for some reason.
Doesn't trigger my blocker app. There's nothing much wrong with Mythgard.
No, I meant that Mythgard blocks me from accessing it for some reason.
Spot-checks:
Barkley, Christine (1996). "Point of View in Tolkien". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
Riga, Frank P.; Thum, Maureen; Kollmann, Judith (2014). "From Children's Book to Epic Prequel: Peter Jackson's Transformation of Tolkien's The Hobbit". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
Kocher, Paul H. (1981). "Reviews: Unfinished Tales". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
Noted.
All I really have. AryKun (talk) 13:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:36, 16 August 2023 (UTC)