# Talk:The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild

I feel as though the VP update for the article is appropriate. Anyone have a good narrative with citations?

"Diving Beasts" in 2nd paragraph of "Plot" should be "Divine Beasts", the name of the game concept. Invisibilibuddy (talk) 17:45, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

 Done ~ Dissident93 (talk) 17:56, 6 November 2024 (UTC)

The "Plot" section of this article was rewritten on October 30, 2024. Although there's nothing wrong with this inherently, the rewrite was riddled with typos, grammatical errors, and confusing language; while many of those errors have been fixed in subsequent edits, I don't think the synopsis needed to be rewritten at all; the old synopsis is closer to the one by which the article was given good article status in 2018 (Old revision of The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild).
The errors can be corrected, but I think we need to decide whether to keep the synopsis from before the rewrite, or after. — gabldotink [ talk | contribs | global account ] 16:48, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

I reverted the synopsis to the original. — gabldotink [ talk | contribs | global account ] 21:02, 16 November 2024 (UTC)