# Talk:Seth Kinman

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:01, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
I will begin reviewing this article and make straightforward changes as I go (explanations in edit summaries). Please revert any changes I make where I inadvertently change the meaning. I will post queries below. cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:01, 13 November 2009 (UTC)

I have rearranged some of the paragraphs for flow. I'd be good to merge or expand some more, but this is challenging to do and not a deal-breaker for GA status.

1. Well written?:

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2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources: 
Citations to reliable sources, where required: 
No original research: 
3. Broad in coverage?:

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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias: 
5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA): 
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Images need WP:ALT text.
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Pass or Fail: 
Prose is a little choppy due to subject matter but quite engaging in a western tall-tale kinda way..interesting read. Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)

{{geodata-check}}
The following coordinate fixes are needed for
Burial at Table Bluff currently maps to East Coast of U.S.
Table Bluff Cemetery outside of Loleta, California correctly maps to 
Lat 40.649412 N         /  Long -124.209428 W
—Ellin Beltz (talk) 02:09, 8 March 2011 (UTC)

 Done. Deor (talk) 04:19, 8 March 2011 (UTC)

Regaarding "He stood over 6 ft (1.83 m) tall and was known for his hunting prowess and his brutality toward bears and Indians.[citation needed]"

We don't require references in the lede as it is supposed to summarize the text blow.
the text related to Indians is at Seth_Kinman#Relations_with_Native_Americans
the text related to bears is widespread in the article.  You can first look in the paragraph starting "Kinman made his name first as a hunter ..." and there is a ref just below that to The Ethics of Grizzly Hunting.[24] I checked the link and its still working.  The text of the essay completely supports "was known for his hunting prowess and his brutality toward bears." And then some. Smallbones(smalltalk) 21:32, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

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