# Talk:The Pleiades (volcano group)

The sources call the main stratovolcano either "Mount Atlas" or "Mount Pleiones". From the map provided by Kyle 1982 it is not clear which is the main stratovolcano and which name refers to one of its component cones. Anyone has an idea how to clarify this? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 22 March 2020 (UTC)

Nevermind, found another source that explained this problem. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 21:11, 22 March 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Pleiades (volcano group)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:44, 13 April 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  Pass
2. Verifiability  Pass
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
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"140 kilometres (87 mi)[3]-120 kilometres (75 mi) away" - Use an endash
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
"It is formed by three separate cones" - What is it?  I'm assuming it's the compound stratovolcano, can this be made more clear?
Mount Atlas. The toponyms Mount Atlas and Mount Pleiones are used in a incoherent manner in most sources. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
"but much smaller" --> "but is much smaller"
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
" but much smaller, it has two poorly defined craters" - Either replace the comma with a semicolon or break the sentence there.
Broke the sentence here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
"Taygete Cone 6 kilometres (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas" --> "Taygete Cone, which is 6 kilometers (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas,"
Sure? To me this looks like correct grammar. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
"Apart from lava flows " --> "Apart from the lava flows"
Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
AD is duplinked
"A glass layer " - Link this to volcanic glass, I'm assuming that's the intended meaning.
Seems like, added a link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
If I'm reading MOS:DASH correctly, the ranges of years in the Eruption history section should have en dashes.
Seems like, added them. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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Placing on hold, not much to do on this one. Hog Farm (talk) 03:33, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

@Hog Farm: Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
Good work.  Promoting. 15:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)