# Talk:Reunion (30 Rock)

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Reviewer: BelovedFreak 22:19, 19 May 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
Gave it a slight copyedit, just a couple of queries for clarity.  A couple of tweaks in references.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No problems
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Broad in coverage and focused.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
Neutral
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
No problems
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
No problems
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

No dead links or links to disambiguation pages.


### Plot
Could there be a bit of an explanation as to why Geiss was in a coma, or how long? (Just in this section, the lead's fine)
I think I got it. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:25, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
It's not immediately clear why Jack is distraught that Geiss is remaining CEO; could you make it clearer that he was supposed to get the job (or whatever it is that's happening there!)
Added.
"For upstaging them, Tracy and Jenna start doing his page duties..." - this sentence is not quite right grammatically because it suggests that T & J did the upstaging. It needs something extra at the beginning, like To pay him back for upstaging them, Tracy and Jenna... or As revenge for upstaging them, Tracy and Jenna...
Done.


### Cultural references
I didn't get the Obama reference, until I read her biog and saw that she went to Princeton. Could you clarify that? (remember your non-US audiences!)
Of course.
"often making out" - this sounds a bit too informal, but I don't have an immediate suggestion as you've just said "kissing". Unless, you just have something like Liz's former classmates play Seven minutes in heaven, a game in which two people are selected to go into a closet or other dark enclosed space and do whatever they like for seven minutes, often kissing.
Done.
"Later, Liz's classmates plan to Carrie  her on stage..." - this is also informal, and a little obscure to the uninitiated, perhaps could be solved simply by quotation marks, like Later, Liz's classmates plan to "Carrie" her on stage
Done.
"The bucket of blood is dumped, but misses her entirely." - again, I feel that "dumped" is a bit informal, but feel free to disagree. Also, I think it's clearer if that sentence comes after the explanatory one (that begins "This is a reference to...")
I just removed it. The way I see it, it's better not to have it like that. IMO. IDK. What do you think?
Yeah, that's fine. I agree.--BelovedFreak 14:42, 20 May 2010 (UTC)


### References
Could you link the first instance of IMDb & spell it out, and delink the second & third instances of Entertainment Weekly?
Done.
Not required now, but for further development, recommend adding publishers to all refs where possible.
Another good job, putting on hold.--BelovedFreak 22:19, 19 May 2010 (UTC)

Ok, good job - passed! --BelovedFreak 14:42, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, it is most appreciated. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:46, 20 May 2010 (UTC)

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