# Talk:Still Life: An Allegory of the Vanities of Human Life

Nice work. Suggest Allegory of the Vanities of Human Life as title. Re the references, it would be better to put the books into a separate "sources" sect, and to refer in the inline notes to the page nr (eg Harrison (2020), p. 121). Ceoil (talk) 19:14, 5 March 2023 (UTC)

Would describe in the lead as a Memento mori. Ceoil (talk) 21:01, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
Ceoil Thanks for the help, I will add you to the DYK. Regarding the title - I think this is the most common and brings back the most results. I will give the title some more research. Bruxton (talk) 21:39, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
Hi Bruxton, I was thinking more I'll review the DYK but my feeling is that while its coming along nicely, could do with another ce. Again, nice work. Ceoil (talk) 21:42, 5 March 2023 (UTC)

A section I always include when critique or reviews exist. I see how parts were deemed unnecessary so I have paired the section. I will also seek out other critiques. Bruxton (talk) 14:31, 15 March 2023 (UTC)