# Talk:Sarah Stewart (basketball)

Efforts are being made to add content to this article to get it improved enough to nominate for Good Article.  Efforts to improve the article are nominally being based on the article about Lauren Jackson given the sheer amount of information available about female wheelchair basketball players when compared to other sports like goalball.  Hence, the article could really use a good copy edit, maintaining as much information as possible for the short term until all the content is in to determine what belongs and does not. The goal is to nominate the article for Good Article by the end of September.  In the mean time, the article has also been nominated for Did You Know. --LauraHale (talk) 10:50, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Sarah Stewart (basketball)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "apc":
From Amber Merritt: "Amber Merritt". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Katy Parrish: "Katy Parrish | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Janel Manns: "Janel Manns". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Sam Harding (athlete): "Sam Harding". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Alexandra Green: "Alexandra Green". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Tanya Huebner: "Tanya Huebner". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Michelle Errichiello: "Michelle Errichiello". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Torita Isaac: "Torita Isaac". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Daniel Fox (swimmer): "Daniel Fox". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Jake Lappin: "Jake Lappin | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Jason Maroney: "Jason Maroney". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Rheed McCracken: "Rheed McCracken". Australia Paralympic Committee. 1997-01-20. Retrieved 2012-07-09.
From Ahmed Kelly: "Ahmed Kelly". APC Corporate. Retrieved 2012-12-07.
From Natalie Smith: "Natalie Smith". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Rosemary Little: "Rosemary Little | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Grant Patterson: "Grant Patterson". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From David Nicholas: "David Nicholas". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Grace Bowman (equestrian): "Grace Bowman". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Jay Dohnt: "Jay Dohnt Profile". Australian Paralympic Committee Website. Retrieved 12 March 2012.
From Bradley Mark: "Bradley Mark". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Kara Leo: "Kara Leo". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Hannah Dodd: "Hannah Dodd". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Stuart Tripp: "Stuart Tripp". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Luke Cain: "Luke Cain". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Amanda Fowler (swimmer): "Amanda Fowler". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Katherine Downie: "Katherine Downie". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Scott Reardon: "Scott Reardon". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Leanne Del Toso: "Leanne Del Toso". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Nathan Arkley: "Nathan Arkley". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Brydee Moore: "Brydee Moore". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Ben Weekes: "Ben Weekes". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Australia at the 2004 Summer Paralympics: "Paralympic Games History - Summer". Australian Paralympic Committee website. Retrieved 17 June 2012.
From Matthew Cameron: "Matthew Cameron | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Scott McPhee: "Scott McPhee". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Sarah Vinci: "Sarah Vinci". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Kayla Clarke: "Kayla Clarke". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Nigel Barley (cyclist): "Nigel Barley". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Joann Formosa: "Joann Formosa". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Rob Oakley: "Rob Oakley". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Sean Russo: "Sean Russo". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Felicity Johnson: "Felicity Johnson". Australian Paralympic Committee Team Profile. Retrieved 4 July 2012.
From Jeremy McClure: "Jeremy McClure". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Tim Antalfy: "Timothy Antalfy". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 2012-08-01.
From Maddison Elliott: "Maddison Elliott". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Sam McIntosh: "Sam McIntosh". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Todd Hodgetts: "Todd Hodgetts". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Abebe Fekadu: "Abebe Fekadu". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Michael Roeger: "Michael Roeger". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Reagan Wickens: "Reagan Wickens". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Simone Kennedy: "Simone Kennedy". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Simon Patmore: "Simon Patmore | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Susan Powell (cyclist): "Susan Powell". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Tim Sullivan (athlete): "Tim Sullivan". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 8 September 2012.
From Ray Epstein: "Annual Report 2002-2003". Australian Paralympic Committee. 2003.
From Stephanie Morton: "Stephanie Morton". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.
From Damien Bowen: "Damien Bowen | APC Corporate". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 2012-07-13.
From Michael Auprince: "Michael Auprince". Australia: Australian Paralympic Committee. 2012. Retrieved 13 July 2012.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 20:18, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Sarah Stewart (basketball)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments

Apply all the comments I've made on these sorts of articles:
Lead length.
Reference formatting.
WP:DASH compliance
etc.
See Talk:Clare Nott, Talk:Leanne Del Toso, Talk:Sarah Vinci... etc.
Then we can talk! The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

It should be fine now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:21, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments plus

Is it 3 point or 3.0 point?
Y 3.0 player, but when they talk about the 3 point class, they mean 3.0 and 3,5 point players. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
Not sure we should be wikilinking common geographical terms like London or Australia.
Y Unlinked Australia, kept London for consistency with other cities. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"League (WNWBL) an the National Wheelchair" typo?
Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"since 2002.She has" space needed?
Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"2012, 2010, 2009, 2008 and 2004" etc.  Chronological order is preferred.
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"Career highlights include being" not exactly prose, more of a CV, perhaps rephrase for normal lead prose.
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"Sarah Stewart was born on 13" no need to repeat Sarah.
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"This resulted in her being in a wheelchair" no, it resulted in her needing to use a wheelchair for mobility.
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
Again, check for "She... She... She... She..." which makes for dull prose.
Y Always a problem with any biographical article. Tried to reduce this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"In 2004 she earned the Sydney... " new para so "In 2004, Stewart...
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"Razorbacks.[11][3]" ref order.  Check others.
Ref order is sensitive to small editing changes. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
" 52-44" en-dash.  Please fix this issue in the other GANs you have to save me from having to comment on each and every one every time!
Y Done. Will be checking the others in due course. If you want to raise an RfC to get rid of the ndashes and mdashes, I'll vote for it. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
"She was part of the silver medal " -> "Stewart was part of the silver medal-winning team".
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
List stats table in chronological order (again, please do this in all other GANs).
Y I have to update the bot. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
Why is PTS not in bold (again....)
Y Corrected the bot. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
Avoid SHOUTING in the refs (e.g. ATHENS)
Y Another bot artefact. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
Still on hold.  The Rambling Man (talk) 16:39, 24 August 2013 (UTC)

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)

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