# Talk:Ramón Ramírez (Venezuelan pitcher)

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 06:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Please merge all the minor league seasons (2004-7) into one subsection.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
They have been merged. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 11:29, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
I will spend some time with this article over the weekend.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  13:45, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Professional career
Is 2004 his first professional experience? It seems like the San Diego Padres subsection should say that he did not acquire any professional experience during that time.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:29, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
I'm not sure. He may have played in the Dominican Summer League while with the Padres, but I can't seem to find stats for it.Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 11:19, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
In general, I think you should link to season articles in the text. A sentence like "He gave up three runs over seven innings while striking out six, but he received a no decision in a 7–6 victory over the San Francisco Giants" should link to the proper Giants season as should all references to teams he is not playing for.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:44, 31 March 2012 (UTC)

Once again, I do not think this is necessary. I have never needed to do that before when working on a good article, and I do not believe I need to now. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 11:19, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
Dude, you have about a half dozen GA credits. I am approaching 300. Believe me when I say, that linking to the team season helps the reader a lot more. You should go back and fix the other few GAs you have. Although I do mostly football and basketball this is still relevant in baseball. Teams differ from year to year. Please reformat your team links and try to make a habit of it. Also, if you review, try to get other editors to link to team seasons.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  15:00, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
Changed team links. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 17:55, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
Please link the team seasons and MLB years on first appropriate use. I.E., not team seasons for transactions to a franchise.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  14:29, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Fixed. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 20:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Is there a way to work in the 2008 and 2009 Reds?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  21:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Done. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 22:35, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
Great work. I am going to PASS this now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  01:19, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Thanks! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 10:43, 2 April 2012 (UTC)