# Talk:Week End (Gen Hoshino song)

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Nominator: IanTEB (talk · contribs) 10:11, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
I will go through this completely today! --K. Peake 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"It is the album's sole" → "The song is the album's sole"
 Done
"listeners dance freely." → "listeners to dance freely."
 Done
"It peaked at" → ""Week End" peaked at"
 Done
Lowercase gold
 Done
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
Changed to Billboard Japan
Pipe Yellow Voyage to Live Tour: Yellow Voyage
Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN


### Background and release
"in difference to" → "in contrast to"
 Done
"on November 27," → "on November 27, 2015"
 Done
"with a similar to" → "with a similar visual to"
 Done


### Composition
Where is the upbeat part sourced?
 Removed
Pipe Wurlitzer piano to Wurlitzer electronic piano
Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN
Pipe mastering engineer to Mastering (audio)
Also NOTBROKEN
""Week End" is a" → "Musically, "Week End" is a"
 Done
Pipe black music to Music of the Africa diaspora and shouldn't R&B be piped to Contemporary R&B?´
I'd consider the first NOTBROKEN but the second is done
Is "chaotic freedom" really correct when the source says liberation?
I've reworked the text to only put "true" in quotation. Freedom I'd argue is fine as paraphrasing


### Critical reception
Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception
 Done
Img looks good!
"to Off the Wall (1979) era Michael Jackson" should be re-worded to something like "to Michael Jackson's material at the time of Off the Wall in 1979"
I don't really see what difference this would make. The Kulture says it reminds of the Michael Jackson Off the Wall age.
Remove or replace Liveland since this does not have any evidence of a proper editorial team
 Done


### Commercial performance
Make this the second para of the above section
"It rose to number 48," → "It rose to numbers 48," also shouldn't you cite a history for the chart at large since this is multiple weeks?
Annoyingly, Billboard Japan doesn't provide chart history via a single page. I've added multiple sources into the citation; it's a little unusual but I hope it gets the job done.
Lowercase gold
 Done


### Live performances
Pipe Continues to Live Tour: Continues
NOTBROKEN
Change insitgated → instigated
 Done
""Week End" alongside Mark Ronson on" → ""Week End", alongside Ronson on"
I think the lack of a comma better emphasizes Ronson, which is the main point of the sentece. Unless you have another opinion?


### Personnel
Pipe Wurlitzer piano to Wurlitzer electronic piano
Pipe mastering engineer to Mastering (audio)
NOTBROKEN


### Charts
These needn't be sortable~
 Done


### Certifications
Good


### Release history
None of this should be sortable
Pipe radio airplay to Radio broadcasting
 Both done


### References
Remove or replace ref 18 since there is no evidence of reliability
Rest looks good!
 Done


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this looks solid only some issues to fix to be honest! --K. Peake 15:30, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: I think I've fixed everything up. Since I removed Liveland, I also changed the wording about reception in the lead since there's now only one source calling it representative of Yellow Dancer. Additonally, I added a performance of the song Hoshino gave for Mark Ronson's Love Lockdown: Video Mixtape. IanTEB (talk) 16:32, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
 Pass now, I did only some brief copy editing but this was fast! --K. Peake 20:44, 1 August 2024 (UTC)