# Talk:When She Loved Me

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:00, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

To do this afternoon. Courcelles (talk) 17:00, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"in Vancouver, British Colombia"  Columbia.  Like South Carolina, not South America.
Careless mistake haha, fixed!--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:09, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"The Singer's Musical Theatre Anthology - Teen's Edition: Tenor Book Only, "  Book Only is a way the book is sold, not a part of the title.
Gotcha, fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:09, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
We could do without the "reviews" by Amazon, CD Universe, and Barnes and Noble.  Stick to people who aren't trying to sell the reader something.
Makes sense, removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:09, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
"inger-songwriter Elvis Costello identified "When She Loved Me" as a song that continues to make him whenever he hears it"  Make him... what?
The missing word was "cry"; fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:09, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
Good work, all I could find to nit-pick. Courcelles (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll wait for your final verdict.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:09, 24 April 2018 (UTC)
A good read.  Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 19:10, 24 April 2018 (UTC)