# Talk:Tony Renna

Somebody should add this box, with the next person who died (Is that Paul Dana?)
From Greg Moore's page:

— Preceding unsigned comment added by 104.235.171.17 (talk • contribs) 

 Done --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 02:16, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 06:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

finishing second at the United States team — for the United States team?
Done MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
was driver coach — was a driving coach? was the driving coach?
Chose the latter option MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Early and personal life

As a child, he was a batboy for the New York Yankees baseball team — When they played in California? Or in New York?
That is not stated in any of the sources MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Jim O'Bryan ... asked if Renna was interested in driving in Europe — When?
Added MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
I mean when did O'Bryan ask?
Have added that information MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Junior career

This would be much easier to read if given one or two subsections.
Added three subsections MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
That's looks far better, thanks.
IndyCar Series career

an agreement for Renna to drive for PacWest's CART team failed — Why?
The reason was not given by the team MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Might want to state that Al Unser Jr. drove for Kelley Racing when he is first mentioned in this section.
Added MWright96 (talk)
and to partner 2003 IndyCar Series champion Scott Dixon — Partner with?
Done MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Is there a natural point to add a subsection?
Moved some information to the prior subsection in the article MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Death

without having made any prior collision against the trackside SAFER barriers — Is the significance of this that they were unlikely to be damaged before he hit them?
Yes, that is the case MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Overall

Looks good, MWright96, very little to point out. A few of the sections do look like walls of text; using subsections, or even adding some more photographs, would help. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Great, passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:08, 7 April 2020 (UTC)