# Talk:The City of Her Dreams

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

I got to get through this. Continuing the 1910 sweep. JAGUAR  11:29, 16 June 2015 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise
The names in the Cast section are not in the lead
"Ella's life at her aunt's home is miserable and she dreams of going to New York City" - no need for "she"
"has all money to buy anything which she fancies" - informal, maybe "desires"
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Well researched and well written, once again. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. I am passing this on the grounds of good research.  JAGUAR  16:36, 16 June 2015 (UTC)