# Talk:True North (Once Upon a Time)

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Reviewer: Grapple X (talk · contribs) 17:18, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Oh, hey, Krycek.
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
"in a parallel with the story of Hansel and Gretel (Lord/Collins)" -> I'd say it's already implied that the kids fit these roles, so I'd drop the bracketed bit here."who invites him to hang out." -> seems a little informal." [in 'The Price of Gold']" -> both source and MOS use double quote marks ("The Price of God"), so stick with that."as Young Peter Bishop and Young Olivia Dunham" -> "as younger versions of Peter Bishop and Olivia Dunham""It earned a 3.3/8 among adults between the ages of 18 and 49," -> include a link to Nielsen rating and explain what the numbers mean (% of sets in use/total population)"'ong enough to watch 'True North.'"" -> dropping the single quotes and adding italics would be an acceptable typographical change.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 
Grand
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 
Although it does seem complicated, I'm wondering if the plot section is a little long.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Yep
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Fine
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Images are grand.
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Not a lot of work to be done here, on hold for seven days. GRAPPLE X 20:17, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
Yeah I know the plot is a bit long, but I can't really find anything useless to trim, as this is one of those series that usually has every little detail possessing some level of significance. Otherwise I believe I've addressed your concerns (italicized True North and tweaked the prose). Thanks, as always, for reviewing! Wow, that man certainly knows his science fiction...! Ruby 2010/2013 04:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

Fairy muff then, happy enough to pass this one. Well done! If you haven't checked him out yet, do so. GRAPPLE X 04:23, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

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