# Talk:Teigan Van Roosmalen

I've re-organised the article to put the personal information at the top of the article.   I've moved the citations out of the info box as they do not belong there.  I have removed the citations from the lead as they also do not belong there.  This should address the problems the tag addressed. --LauraHale (talk) 02:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I think I put that tag on there before I realized what disoriented me about the article. In retrospect, I think it was only that the article uses "she" too many times in consecutive sentences, as well as making use of many simple (as opposed to compound) sentences. I will come back after the article has stabilised some to see if I can reword some things, but I probably tagged the article prematurely. Joe SchmedleyTalk 03:31, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Teigan Van Roosmalen/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 19:50, 4 May 2012 (UTC)


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This is a good article, it doesn't belittle the subject for a disability, yet properly describes the achievements and cites accomplishments properly. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:13, 19 May 2012 (UTC)


### Additional Notes
In this article it states that Teigan failed to finish in the top three in any event in the 2010 Games in Eindhoven. This appears to be true for in the pool, but her IPC profile states that she won the 5km Open water grand finale event in the S11-13 class? I can't access the cite that contests this in the article. Can someone shine light on this? Thanks FruitMonkey (talk) 17:20, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

I've answered my own question, she did win the open waters competition, but that was because she was the only person who entered the event and thus no medals were awarded. I've changed the sentence to reflect this. Good on her though, I wouldn't fancy a 5km swim in Dutch waters. FruitMonkey (talk) 13:24, 28 August 2015 (UTC)

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