# Talk:SS Empire Miniver

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Good job on these two articles. The same issues can be seen on both. For one, I would like to see the prose referenced. Also, I would like to see a stub made on both shipbuilding companies. Other than that, these articles look in much better shape than the one that you rushed previously. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ  Drop me a line 17:36, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Also, keep this in mind: Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 tons, use 200 tons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200&nbsp;tons. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ  Drop me a line 17:40, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
The lead is not cited per WP:LEADCITE. Quantities and units generated by {{convert}} have the non-breaking space inserted automatically. For others, I don't use the &nbsp;, but instead a keyboard entered hard space " " (option + space  bar on a Mac). — Bellhalla (talk) 20:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

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