# Talk:Union Turnpike local buses

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 01:37, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

"and in the peak-direction during the PM rush hour."  Which is...?
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Q46 locals terminate at Springfield Boulevard, while limiteds alternate between Glen Oaks of LIJ."  Or LIJ
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"eastbound Q46 locals terminate in Glen Oaks, while eastbound Q46 limiteds terminated at LIJ"  They used to?  Or still do?  Whole section could use a copyedit.
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"North Shore Bus was taken over by the Board of Transportation because of its bankruptcy"  Its is ambigious in a sentence with two antecedents.
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From the infobox, "Daily ridership 	6,594,164 (2014)[2]" Um... no.
 Done That was an issue on all the NYC bus pages. Thanks for finding it. Noone else found that one.

"before ost other streets"  Copyedit here, too.
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"Limited-stop service began on April 18, 1977 with the perception that it would attract new riders to the route." Perception is likely not the word you want here.
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"Along with the M15, the two routes became the first to use limited service in the city."  Source?
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"peak-direction during the PM rush hour."  Again, don't make us guess which is "peak"
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"The express Q44As were also intended to compete with privately owned expresses buses operated by Queens Surface–travel times were 20 minutes shorter and the fare was $5 less"  What?  Just how expensive were those private buses?  5 bucks was a ton of money back then...
This was stated in the MTA's Annual Report for 1977.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 00:10, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
"which made the first city route"  Which made it the...
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"{{cite web|title=Service to Glen Oaks operates weekdays only}}"  Kill the cite template, it throws red errors.
I haven't seen any red errors.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 00:09, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
Don't use all-caps in references just because you're copy and pasting.  See refs 5, 10, 12, 14, 17, and 30.
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No bare URL's as citations, ref 25
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Ref 20 needs a better citation
Which reference are you referring to?--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 00:27, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Ref 20.  Needs publisher, ISBN, proof of reliability, not just a point to a useless Google Books page with no info. Courcelles (talk) 00:33, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
It isn't useless. By typing in phrases, I got several pages worth of information.
--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 00:51, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

https://catalog.hathitrust.org/Record/005778122 It is from the ASCE which is credible, and this is cited by the US DOT. https://archive.org/stream/transportations8249urbi_0#page/n1/mode/2up
--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 01:06, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Why haven't you responded? --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 15:17, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
As explained on my talk page (and just putting here for the record) I was inpatient in a hospital for most of the delay, for which I apologize.  Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
Looks good, passing. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)