# Talk:Sarcoscypha occidentalis

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Reviewer: Ucucha 18:51, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Lead could be longer, I think
Added a bit. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Still on the short side, I think—but enough for GA.
Images and graphics are crammed at the top and could be moved a little down, where it's more lonely.
I moved the image in the description section down a bit, but can't see an easy way to adjust anything else.
Molliardiomyces
? Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, should have taken that out before saving. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
What are paraphyses?
Added a parenthetical def'n. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
The alt text under "Similar species" shouldn't be there or should be real alt text.
Leftover from copy/paste. Removed. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Does this add anything or is it too esoteric?
Title: Spore ontogeny in species of Sarcoscypha
Author(s): Li, LT
Source: MYCOLOGIA   Volume: 87   Issue: 6   Pages: 749-758   Published: NOV-DEC 1995
I thought about it, but decided that since it was difficult for me to follow, it was probably too esoteric for Wikipedia. If I decide to take this article to FAC, I'll try to translate it from jargon to English and add a summary paragraph. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
According to Web of Knowledge, the Harrington 1990 cite has "North-America" instead of "North America" in its title.
I checked the original, it does not have the hyphen. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
This is in Japanese and old, but could add some information:
Title: SARCOSCYPHINEAE OF JAPAN
Author(s): OTANI Y
Source: Nippon Kingakukai Kaiho   Volume: 21   Issue: 2   Pages: 149-179   Published:  1980
Unfortunately, my Japanese is limited to どうもありがとうミスターロボット. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps ask for help when you want to get on to FAC. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Same for this, except it's not in Japanese
Title: SOME STIPITATE DISCOMYCETES OF IOWA USA
Author(s): JENSEN R D
Source: Iowa State Journal of Research   Volume: 52   Issue: 1   Pages: 37-52   Published:  1977
I can't access this one, but I doubt it says much more than it's present in Iowa. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
That's also the impression I got from the abstract. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
Overall, only a few small problems. The article is thin but I presume nothing else is known. Ucucha 18:51, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the speedy review! Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
And thanks for the speedy response. I am passing this as a GA now; it appears to pass all criteria. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)