# Talk:Ryan Boyle

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Overall this article is pretty good. Here are the issues I found:

"As a sophomore option offense quarterback, he totaled 812 yards rushing, five touchdowns and 465 passing yards, including four touchdowns." can be reworded to '812 yards and five touchdowns rushing and...passing.'
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:35, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Write out what USILA is on one of the early mentions of it.
Put a link in the WP:LEAD.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:41, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
"as part of t 14-point 3-game" of a
Good eye.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:42, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Any playoff info for the 2003 championship? 2002 and 2004 are noted so thought I'd ask.
Actually, he is not mentioned in any NYT or Baltimore Sun articles, so for the purpose of WP, he did nothing notable in either of the 2003 games.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:54, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
"Boyle scored 2 goals and had 3 assists in the Philadelphia Barrage 16–15 overtime loss" two/three
Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:55, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
"Boyle's father, Darby, played attack for West Point in the late 1960s and his older brother Michael played for Georgetown." I presume both played lacrosse? Make that clearer.
Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:57, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Not too much to fix. I'll put it on hold and pass when it's done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, GA now passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:05, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

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