# Talk:Papyrus Oxyrhynchus 581

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:41, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:41, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

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although the beginning has since been lost. Does this mean the beginning was lost before the Papyrus was found? If so, I suggest a change to although the beginning of the papyrus was lost before it was found.
It is the only of the Oxyrhynchus Papyri presently held in the university's collection suggest It is the only Oxyrhynchus Papyri currently held by the university's collection.
 if not already orphaned or discarded does discarded here mean left to die? If so I would recommend you specify that.
If this stipulation was transgressed, the typical punishment was confiscation of private property. to what extent? Would the slave be taken? Would a certain value worth of property be taken?
Financial declaration of slaving sales should this be slave sales, or does source use slaving sales?
@Curlymanjaro: That is all my comments. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:43, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
Done; thanks so much for your comments. Curlymanjaro (talk) 19:49, 25 January 2018 (UTC)