# Talk:The Nemesis of Faith

A few minor comments, generally looks quite good.

"resignation of his post at Oxford University." - what kind of post?
The lead does cover everything, but it feels that if you could say anymore, it would be good.
A references section where the books cited inline are fully cited ({{cite book}} style or whatever you're using) would make the referencing a bit clearer.
"Recent critics, while they tend" - something like "While recent critics tend..." would read better I think (and the rest of the sentence would need minor rewording)
That's all I could find. Leave me a note when you're done. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 08:37, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

All looks good; passed. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 23:31, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
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Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 23:31, 22 May 2008 (UTC)