# Talk:Tristimania

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:38, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
No copyvio concerns; no dablinks, duplinks or broken external links.

Noted.
Coming to the prose,

Inline citations missing for the last line of 'Context' and the last lines in the 1st and the 5th paras of 'Book'
Added.
Genetic vulnerability What exactly does it mean? And vulnerability to what?
Glossed.
'She' is a bit repetitive in some places in 'Book', a few of these instances could be replaced with 'Griffiths'.
Done.
describing the Old English wōd A link for Old English? Should 'wōd' be in italics?
Done both.
Mercutio (here played by Orson Welles) Maybe add which play it is referring to, directed by whom, the year?
Done.
A link for 'antipsychotics'?
Done.
seeing people's wings Maybe 'wings' should be in quotes since this was her imagination and not for real?
Added.
As she is wished "Buen Camino" Maybe add a translation here?
Added.
'Shakespeare' should be linked at the first mention
Done.
Tristimania is not in italics consistently throughout the article
Fixed.
Does the article consistently use British English?
I think so, at least it all feels natural to this native. Added tag.
Access date missing for refs, 25, 26, 28
Added.
Ref. 26 has the 'G' in 'Griffiths' in lower case
Fixed.
That is all. A nice read :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:03, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you so much!
Good job. Happy to promote :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:59, 17 April 2020 (UTC)