# Talk:Ámame (song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:56, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

I will review this today! --K. Peake 07:56, 6 August 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
""Ámame" was written by Selena, who wrote about" → "The song was written by Selena, penned about"
 Done
Close the first para with a sentence about the song's release
 Done
"is a dance pop disco song inspired" → "is a dance-pop and disco song, inspired" with the wikilink
 Done
""Ámame" received a positive response from music critics, where" → "The song received positive response from music critics, who" with the pipe, adding what critics generally praised about the song
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"The song peaked at number 27 on" → "It peaked at number 27 on"
 Done
"Selena's writing of "Ámame" was" → "Selena's writing of the song was"
 Done
Add a comma after limited drama
 Done


### Background and production
Retitle to Background and release, merging the first para of the following section with this one
 Done
"production of the group's works." → "production of the music."
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"the band hired Joe Ortega" → "the group hired Joe Ortega"
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"Ortega quit the band" → "Ortega quit Selena y Los Dinos"
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"Pérez rejoined the band in" → "Pérez rejoined the group in"
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"Selena requested writing assistance" → "She requested writing assistance"
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Is a comma really needed before Abraham Quintanilla?
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Add the appropriate ref at the end of any sentence using a quote
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Remove comma after third studio album
 Done


### Music, lyrics and reception
Move the first para to being the second of the above section
 Done
"It is the fourth and final single released from" → "The song was released as the fourth and final single from" adding the release month
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The chart positions should be with the critical stuff since commercial is a form of reception
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Is the 40-position part really notable?
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Move the songwriting credit stuff to background instead
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"The singer previously wrote," The singer had previously wrote"
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Remove comma after EMI Latin
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Swap the Houston Chronicle and second Billboard piece since the first is more focused on comp
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"in 1993, to be" → "in 1993 to be"
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"throaty vocals." which displayed a" → "throaty vocals", which displayed a"
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Pipe RodeoHouston to Houston Livestock Show and Rodeo
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""dance-pop anthem" and believed" → ""dance-pop anthem", and believed"
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"into the heavens."" → "into the heavens"." per MOS:QUOTE
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The song being in the drama is not sourced
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Remove comma after limited drama
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"upsets Pérez who suspects" → "upsets Pérez, who suspects"
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"towards Pérez and" → "towards him and"
 Done


### Credits and personnel
Good


### Chart performance
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks fantastic at 10.7%!!!!


### Works cited
Should any sources really be wikilinked after the first instance?
IMO, no. – jona ✉ 00:01, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
Wikilink Houston Chronicle
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Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
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Pipe The Monitor to The Monitor (Texas)
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Wikilink Corpus Christi Caller-Times
 Done
Austin-American Statesman → Austin American-Statesman with the wikilink
 Done
Wikilink Penguin Books
 Done
Little Brown and Company → Little, Brown and Company with the wikilink
 Done


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:54, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
Thanks again for your review! I believe I have fixed all outstanding issues. Best – jona ✉ 00:01, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
AJona1992 You still need to properly change the critical response part in the lead, add the release month of the single, move the songwriting credit to the first para of background and reorder music, lyrics and reception so the comp comes before chart positions. --K. Peake 06:16, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
Hopefully now it is fixed. Best – jona ✉ 13:56, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, I did some quick copy editing but kudos to you for fixing the main issues that stood out! --K. Peake 06:53, 9 August 2022 (UTC)