# Talk:Sally James (presenter)

I have removed details of her children - which looked like it had been added by them and puff for her shop - which again looked family added. Brookie :) - a will o' the wisp !  (Whisper...) 06:59, 18 June 2007 (UTC)

I am bemused by the "generous proportion of cleavage on display" during Tiswas. That is not my recollection as an avid viewer at the time and neither does it seem to be borne out by still photographs. Surely Ms James was renouned at the time for her shapely legs in short skirts and hotpants, she was never particularly busty. 21st CENTURY  GREENSTUFF 16:23, 26 August 2010 (UTC)

I removed the statement as it had been tagged since last year as citation needed. Although the rest of the article is a bit thin on references as well. MilborneOne (talk) 19:07, 26 August 2010 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Sally James (presenter)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

Avoid starting every paragraph with "In [year]".
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
"she was the music editor, and was a member of" → "she was a member and music editor of"
I've re-organised the lead slightly, to take the music editor role up into the first para. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Dr No → Dr. No
"Jo Mercer, woman" → "Jo Mercer, a woman"
Remove the comma after "converted houses".
Remove the comma after "in 1980".
Remove the comma after "as children".
Amended as per the five points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
With this example, improve the filmography tables.
Make the tables sortable.
Add "!scope=row" for every film/tv title.
Sort each role by last name.
Sort titles (The Wind Blew Her Away should sort as Wind Blew Her Away, The)
Finally, center references.
Done. (Hopefully.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
The scope rows need a bit of work. See Francesca Gonshaw#Credits as a good example. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Ah. Hopefully OK now, Some Dude From North Carolina. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:26, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
#Discography is largely unsourced.
Removed unsourced entries. (After failing to find reliable sources.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
#Bibliography is kinda short so maybe merge it into #Career.
Deleted section as book is already mentioned in the body of the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Properly cite sources.
Added some details, not sure whether more is required. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:11, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Many thanks for undertaking the review, Some Dude From North Carolina. Hopefully I've addressed everything above. Let me know about anything else that is needed. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Who was Sally James in The Railway Children? 
Sally Thomsett was in it but Sally James isn't listed. 2A00:23C4:CB96:701:5D9C:2A45:2615:A4B8 (talk) 07:38, 22 January 2023 (UTC)

She portrayed a maid. (See the BFI page.) Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:07, 22 January 2023 (UTC)