# Talk:Typhoon Holly (1984)

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall: pass
Pass/Fail: 


### Review
#### Lead
form, did you mean from?
Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Can tropical depression be wikilinked?
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


#### Meteorological history
While Tropical Storm Gerald was forming in the South China Sea,the Western Pacific..., please make a space after the comma
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
A large storm, Holly slowly deepened, oddly worded
Better? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


#### References
Reference 16 is freely available here. Is it possible to still attach the URL?
Sure. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Reference 10 is freely available here. Is it possible to still attach the URL?
Not free :P YE Pacific Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Oh sorry, only the first paragraph was. Linking it might still be useful for those with subscriptions/Wikipedia has ways of accessing such resources. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:07, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
IIRC, the – via Lexis Nexis (subscription required) is suppose to cover the issue with accessibility bit. I'd argue adding a url with an accessdate from a paywall would technically be inaccurate since that's not how I personally accessed it. YE Pacific Hurricane 04:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Yellow Evan, Alright, that's fair. I'm passing this article HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 13:23, 10 May 2020 (UTC)