# Talk:The Fourth Horseman (Millennium)

This was missing: * When naming the capitals of Europe ("we have confirmed cases in Bonn, Amsterdam, Rome and Madrid; we have suspected cases in London and Athens"), the Stargate team obviously used a sixteen-year old map of Europe, before the capital of Germany was moved from the small town of Bonn to Germany's major metropolis, Berlin. Don't see why, so back in now. --FlammingoHey 17:42, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
Because they weren't naming European capitals, just infected cities.  JBK405 23:51, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
In one part of the epp, Dr Lee is testing stuff for the anti-prior device using "Dark Pariah", what is the real song name and artist of that song?
--Heruur 18:14, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
Uh...you just said the title is "Dark Pariah". JBK405 03:17, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
Changed town name to Waterloo. I'm watching this episode now and it was incorrectly named in the original article. 666-93-666 (talk) 22:02, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Fourth Horseman (Millennium)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 18:56, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: GRAPPLE X
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 18:56, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with other FAs)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (None)

Grapple X, I'm very happy and inspired to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the layout needs to be fixed.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 23:11, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick review! Which paragraphs do you feel should be rearranged? I've tried to keep separate subjects separated, especially major scene changes in the plot section, but I could probably merge some of them together. GRAPPLE X 00:27, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, Grapple X, very much for writing such excellent articles. I feel that the last paragraph of the plot section "That night, Black answers a ..." can be merged with the previous one. But I'd leave that to your good judgement.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 22:44, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
Done and done. Thanks for the review! GRAPPLE X 23:02, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 22:44, 19 February 2014 (UTC)