# Talk:Roosevelt Jones

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
NBA Gatorade League should be just NBA G League
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:04, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Wikilink college basketball, Rivals.com
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:08, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Rebounds should be linked to Rebound (basketball)
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:11, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
"and committed to Butler." - and committed to playing for Buller
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:13, 8 June 2018 (UTC)


### Early life
"he couldn't get his shot off " - could not; try to avoid quotations outside of quotes
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:14, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
"In eight grade," - eighth
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:17, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
"leader on a 14-15 team." - 14–15 team; also an en dash should be used in place for an hyphen for all respective game scores after this one
I think I got them all. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:43, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
Wikilink Southeastern Conference to Southwestern Athletic Conference and Rivals to Rivals.com
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:44, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"but he didn't notice Jones's poor shooting style due to his athleticism." - did not
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:45, 9 June 2018 (UTC)


### College career
"Jones tallied a season-high 17 points to go with 10 rebounds." - remove "to go"
Changed to "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points as well as 10 rebounds." ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:46, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"Jones averaged 7.8 points and a team high" - team-high
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:50, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
Link layup
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:52, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"Jones had 23 points in Butler's 67-64 loss to Notre Dame in the NCAA Tournament despite" - wikilink NCAA Tournament to 2015 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:53, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"and rarely shooting outside 15 feet." - use the convert template on 15 feet
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:55, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"he hit a last-second shot to defeat 17th ranked Cincinnati ater" - after
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:56, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
Wikilink Blowout to Blowout (sports)
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
"Jones earned a bachelor of arts degrees" - remove "a"
I'm not so sure about this... my phrasing seems correct. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)


### Reference
Ref 24 is dead and requires archiving
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:00, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
Refs 30 and 34 are lacking the author
Good catch. Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:02, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
That's all the nibbles I found. Going to be putting this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

@Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 9 June 2018 (UTC)