# Talk:Paper Airplane (The Office)

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 00:58, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

" In addition, it was also the final half hour episode of the series." -- You might also want to note that this was the third-to-final episode of the series.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
"Eventually, Darryl Philbin (Craig Robinson) is able to motivate" -- You might want to note why Darryl came along in the first place.
Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
The plot section could use some expansion, as it's a little short. Context might help, such as explaining Athlead and/or Angela's predicament.
Expanded.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
"full-on Lena Dunham." -- You should explain this is specifically a reference to Dunham's 2012 Emmy Awards stunt.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Guest actors need to be referenced, and potentially should be noted in the Production section.
I didn't add this, since the only source would really be the episode itself (the credits; all the actors can be verified by watching the credits), and since this is an article on the episode, I felt that adding an episode cite to the guest actors infobox would be redundant.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
"highlighted by Toby's awkwardness, Dwight's craziness and Kevin's pride" -- None of these are explained in the plot section, and I think a little expansion or something could help.
Reworded, as their individual antics aren't that important to note.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
"was lacking due to its "hallow" nature." -- I assume you mean hollow?
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Duplicate links tool returns two results.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
External links all appear to be working, and I see no problems with disambiguation links. I also see no problems with article neutrality or stability, and images appear to be properly licensed.
Placing the article on hold pending improvements. —Ed!(talk) 01:21, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
I believe I have fixed/responded to your comments--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:07, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Great! Good work. Passing the GA. —Ed!(talk) 19:52, 13 May 2013 (UTC)