# Talk:Superstar (Marina song)

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Superstar (Marina Song)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Billboard":
From Disconnect (song): Patrick Crowley (23 June 2017). "This Week's Gay Agenda: Marina & The Diamonds, Cyndi Lauper and a French Adult Film Star". Billboard. Retrieved 25 June 2017.
From Handmade Heaven: "Marina Returns With 'Handmade Heaven,' First Solo Song in 4 Years: Listen". Billboard. Retrieved 9 February 2019.
From Baby (Clean Bandit song): Ding, Sophie (29 October 2018). "Clean Bandit Announce New Single 'Baby' Featuring Luis Fonsi and Marina". Billboard. Retrieved 2 November 2018.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 04:42, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page has been nominated for speedy deletion:

The cover art for the song Superstar by Marina.jpg
You can see the reason for deletion at the file description page linked above. —Community Tech bot (talk) 02:52, 16 August 2019 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Superstar (Marina song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 29 July 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing one of your articles once again, this time I'll be going for one of the oldest songs nominees currently. --K. Peake 17:48, 29 July 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Remove hlist from the infobox
Remove venue parameter as that is only for live recordings
Link to the music video
"for her fourth studio album," → "from her fourth studio album,"
Swap order of writing and release sentences
Target single to Single (music)
"and produced by" → "while produced by"
"she demanded when creating the parent album." → "she demanded, lacking from her previous albums, when creating it."
Target ballad to Sentimental ballad
"that was compared often" → "that was often compared"
"its lyrics describe" → "the lyrics describe"
"received a generally mixed response" → "received generally mixed reviews"
"songwriting on the track was" → "lyrics for the song were"
"which divided critics." not enough reviews to make such a claim so remove it
"A music video featuring the" → "A music video for the" with the appropriate wikilink
"room and gives the impression" → "room, while giving the impression"
"was also included on the setlist to" → "was included on the setlist for"
This sentence should come directly before the first about the acoustic version


### Background and release
"She explained that" → "She explained that,"
"After her announcement, she" → "After the announcement, Marina"
"her first new single under the name," → "her first single under the new name," with the appropriate target
"She also announced Love + Fear" → "She announced Love + Fear"
"and first under her new name." →"and first as Marina."
"The track listing for the project was revealed the same day," → "The track listing was revealed the same day,"
"composed of two acts" → "that is composed of two segments,"
"she specifically asked her label" → "that she specifically asked her record label Atlantic Records" with the wikilink
"She justified this request," → "She justified the request,"
"creative control in her" → "creative control for her"
"and did not this" → "and did not want this"
"and produced by" → "with production being handled by"
"Marina performed her vocals" → "Marina recorded her vocals" since it otherwise sounds like a live performance
"was sent to music distributors such as Amazon Music and Spotify for" → "was released for"
"on 1 March 2019 through Atlantic Records." → "in various countries on 1 March 2019 through Marina's record label."
"It was marketed as" → "It served as"
"A promotional CD single intended for radio airplay was distributed in" → "A promotional CD single, intended for radio airplay, was distributed throughout" with the targets
Remove wikilink on Benelux
"was also recorded and included on the track listing for" → "was later recorded and released as the fourth track on"


### Composition and lyrics
"what the rest of the album" → "what the rest of Love + Fear"
"on Marina's second studio album," → "on Marina's second studio album"
"called the song" → "called the track"
"of a piano on the track." → "of a piano."
"According to the official sheet music published at Musicnotes.com," → "According to the sheet music at Musicnotes.com,"
"is set in common time and has" → "is set in the time signature of common time, and has"
Target key to Key (music)
"in the chord progressions of" → "in the chord progression of" with the wikilink
This sentence implies John Hanes engineered the song at MixStar Studios; is that correct or does it need rewording?
Remove wikilink on Virginia
"In an interview with Apple Music during" → "In an interview with Apple Music, during" with the wikilink
"agreed in calling it a love song, citing the lyric" → "also called it a love song and cited the line,"
"Following an instrumental introduction to" → "Following the instrumental intro to"
"begins the first verse singing:" → "begins the first verse by singing:"
"She alternates to" → "She alternates to,"
"during the second verse." → "at the beginning of the second verse."


### Critical reception
"calling attention to its lyrics," → "calling attention to the lyrics,"
"Wass wrote a review of the single, where he highlighted the lyrics and" → "Wass highlighted the song's lyrics and its"
"her prior releases, and considered this combination" → "Marina's prior releases, and considered the combination"
"favorite part to be the lyric," → "favorite part to be the lyrics,"
"Peyton Thomas from Pitchfork called this same lyric" → "Peyton Thomas of Pitchfork called the same lyrics"
"some more from the song and considered" → "some more from the song, considering"
"The acoustic version of the song was" → "The acoustic version of "Superstar" was"
"Mike Nied from Idolator provided" → "Mike Nied of Idolator provided"


### Promotion
Img looks good
Wikilink lyric video per MOS:LINK2SECT
"of Marina in a black dress" → "of Marina in a black dress while"
"was released on 1 March." → "was released on 1 March 2019."
"An official music video for the song" → "A music video for the acoustic version of the song" to be more specific
"account on 13 September 2019." → "channel on 13 September of that year."
"is the first of three released" → "was the first of three released"
"with her hair arranged" → "and her hair is arranged"
"was also included on the set list" → "was included on the set list"
"who reviewed Marina's show" → "reviewing Marina's show"
"it "didn’t" → "it "didn't"


### Track listing
Digital download/promotional CD single/streaming → Digital download/streaming/promotional CD single


### Credits and personnel
Writers should come first, followed by producers and add that credit before keys in the order


### Release history
See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Format → Format(s)
Distributor → Label(s)
Digital download and streaming should be separated with the targets
Centre the refs
Add the promotional CD single here


### References
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Copyvio score looks good at 23.7%
Cite numerous countries for ref 8 to verify that the release was various and put the retailers in brackets; (CA) for example
Remove refs 10 and 11 since Apple Music verifies digital download/streaming
Remove target on Marina for ref 13
Retitle ref 30 to Motion and cite Nikko La Mere instead for publisher


### External links
(Audio video) → (Audio Video)
Remove the music video from here


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold and I am sorry about the delay in the review, I was a bit stressed out about some real life issues yesterday. --K. Peake 08:55, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – no worries. I believe I addressed all of your comments through my editing. Please let me know if there is anything else I can do for this review. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 18:45, 7 August 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera You did not add a caption to the release history table, also I did not mean to put the countries in brackets for the Amazon citations; fix these issues please. --K. Peake 08:38, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – my apologies. I believe I took care of it now. Carbrera (talk) 17:50, 8 August 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera Looks like you misinterpreted my statement; I meant that the Amazon refs stay the same apart from the countries in brackets being removed, while you fix the publisher so Amazon.com (UK) → Amazon.co.uk, for example. --K. Peake 20:16, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake – Sorry, what about now? Carbrera (talk) 00:59, 10 August 2020 (UTC).
Carbrera Did some slight copy editing to fix the Amazon citations, but it looks fine now. --K. Peake 05:11, 10 August 2020 (UTC)