# Talk:Rachel Henderson

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

As a youngster --> Not sure about the use of this word. What about just "child"?
Changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
As of 2012, she was attending the University of Sydney --> she is attending
Changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Article is well written and well sourced. Only other issues in the article would be the same that I pointed out in Talk:Tyan Taylor/GA1 (to not repeat myself).
Think this is all addressed.  Fewer paragraphs and section headings changed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Information is being randomly removed from the article.  Please comment here to explain why the information should be removed. If there is a good reason for removing neutral, reliably sourced information that complies with WP:BLP, it can be done but an explanation needs to be offered. --LauraHale (talk) 00:38, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

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