# Talk:Quincy McKnight

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"won a diocesan championship" what's one of those?
It's a championship for his Catholic diocese. How do you propose I phrase that? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"become better at basketball going forward" going forward feels redundant.  He couldn't do it any other direction.
Removed "going forward." ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"Connecticut and" comma after Connecticut.
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Is there a link for "points per game", like Points per game?
Linked. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"to The Phelps School, where" no comma required.
Removed. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"honor roll performer" what's one of those?
Added "academically" to clarify. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"4.2 rebounds, and 3.5 assists per game" links for rebounds and assists?
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"2015 Jordan Brand Classic Regional Game" is this a big deal?
Yes, it is, and worthy of mention. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
What's PAISSA?
Changed to simply "state championship". ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"lightly recruited, being regarded as a two-star recruit" recruited/recruit repetitive and what does "lightly recruited" mean?
It means not many schools offered him a scholarship. This is a common enough phrase and I don't think it needs to be changed. I did reword "recruit" to "prospect" however. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"play college basketball for" link that again here.
I'm assuming you mean "college basketball." ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"triple-overtime" link?
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
" 1.6 steals" link?
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"free throws" link?
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"listed as day-to-day" what?
It's what his condition was considered. What do you propose? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"with the 7th pick" seventh.
Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Would be nice if the table complied with MOS:DTT for row and col scopes but not a GA requirement.
Honestly, I have no idea how to do this, but feel free to take a stab. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
What does "Redshirt" mean??
Provided a link. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Ref 10 - SHOUTING.
Changed to lowercase. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:32, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

I have responded to all your points. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)