# Talk:Washington State Route 104

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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 09:35, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
Eh. Why not? –TCN7JM 09:35, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
Lead

Nothing wrong to note.
Route description

"SR 104 begins at a partial cloverleaf interchange with an at-grade traffic signal in the center with US 101" This doesn't really read well, but I can't think of a better way to put it. Maybe...gah...I don't know. You try something. :\
I removed traffic signal and moved at-grade in front of partial. It seems better. SounderBruce 22:56, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
Looks better. –TCN7JM 01:59, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
"The highway between Discovery Bay and Kingston and between SR 99 and I-5 in Edmonds and Shoreline are designated as part of the National Highway System," Incorrect subject-verb agreement. Maybe say something like, "The segments of the highway between...are"
Fixed.
History

"to US 99 and PSH 1 Woodway" Did you mean in Woodway?
Fixed.
Spur route/Major intersection

You say in the Spur route section that SR 104 Spur begins at the county line, but this isn't displayed in the RJL. This is inconsistent.
Should I list both cities/both counties? Or use {{jctbridge}}?
Nevermind. Resolved in IRC. SounderBruce 02:13, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
References

Refs 44 and 55 could probably be shortened a bit using hidden text.
Fixed.
Final verdict

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall: Just these couple fixes
Pass/Fail:
Alrighty then. Passing now! –TCN7JM 02:19, 31 January 2013 (UTC)