# Talk:Yogatattva Upanishad

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:44, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Helping with the GAN backlog. Why are such nice articles being made to wait? Will review. Sainsf <^>Talk all words 04:44, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Sainsf. Ms Saraha Welch has associated me with this Upanishad. She will also reply to some of the review comments.--Nvvchar. 09:11, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
My comments follow. - MSW


### Lead
Why is the name of this Upanishad in italics? I have not seen others in italics.
This matter was discussed in the WT:DYK and it was decided that the name of  the article should be in italciis. Please see here [1].
Remove the Yoga Upanishad link if it is a redlink, instead you should explain a bit about it.
There is no article yet on this. Removed the redlink
Colebrooke and Narayana need links or identification
Will add soon
I moved this to main, as it felt undue in the lead, explanation on Narayana more so. Little is known about Narayana. He likely lived sometime between 14th- and 17th-century, we know his father's name, and that while South Asia was torn with invasions and a period of political instability, he was busy saving, compiling, studying and writing his views on the Upanishads (and some other texts). His collection of top 52 Upanishads have been useful, though there is evidence he apparently collected a much larger number of manuscripts. Identification of Narayana in the lead, given the sketchy information we have, will distract the focus of the lead from subject of the article. In the main, I added a link for Colebooke and a bit on Narayana with source.  - MSW
As expounder of Vedanta philosophy, "As an/the (as is appropriate to the subject) expounder of the Vedanta..."
Added "an"
starting with the syllable Om Looking at its significance in Hinduism why not say "sacred Hindu syllable"?
Qualifying it could be controversial. However the linked aricle On  states that.
@Nvvchar has linked it to Om
Add a word explaining "Atman".
Done
also called as Yogatattvopanishad (योगतत्त्वोपनिषत्) Should be in the first line of lead.
Shifted


### Etymology
No origin language for the word roots?
It is Sanskrit. Added now.
Who are Dasgupta and Deussen?
Done


### Chronology and anthologies
Some part is in italics by mistake.
Corrected
Link Upanishad at first mention in the main text
Done
Who are White and Whiteman?
Will come back on Whit.  Joseph Hilary Michael Whiteman was emeritus associate professor of applied mathematics , in the University of Capetown, South Africa. Added now
Added, with source. - MSW
Is it Colebrook (here) or Colebrooke (lead)?
The same person
Link sloka
Added


### Structure
Link Telugu
Done


### Content
On Brahma’s request Vishnu explains that You have not introduced Brahma as a Hindu god
Done
Link shastras
Linked
Who are Aiyar and Lochtefeld ?
Will come back
Added, with sources. - MSW
Arambha, Ghata, Parichaya, and Nishpatti These are redlinked terms, so you can add English translations.
Done
 The detailed procedure and the setting for these are described by the text "In" the text
Fixed. - MSW
List of duplinks:

Yoga and knowledge: Moksha, Brahman
Done
Asanas: Ghata
Done
Kundalini: paricaya, Brahmans, Vajroli, Amaroli
Fixed - MSW
Om meditation: Vedas, Agnis
Fixed - MSW
 In Yogatattva text In "the" ...
Added
wherein the flame of lamp lights up within the pot of body Needs a bit of formatting. What is the lamp?
Fixed - MSW


### Reception
Is it Yoga text or Yogic text?
Chnaged to texts on Yoga
Duplinks: tantric, chakra
Removed
References:Why use bold in ref. no. 6?
It was an author link.  Deleted now.
Suggestion : @Nvvchar: This is an excellent article that describes each facet of its topic in a beautiful language (not being flowery or biased). I even felt a subtle attraction to the topic because of your emotionless yet lively description. I suggest you take this to FAC, it will surely succeed. This must be one of your most excellent works here.
@Ms Sarah Welch: May please check my replies and add wherever not yet replied. Nvvchar. 09:26, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: Thank you for the detailed, specific comments. Very helpful. @Nvvchar: I am done with my edits. I also added who Ayyangar is, etc in the spirit of @Sainsf review, as I went line by line. Some sentences felt unclear, so I reworded them after checking the sources. Have another look, and if I missed something please fix, if I made it worse please revert. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 21:56, 5 February 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf:. Ms Sarah Welch has answered all the review comments and has improved the text as relevant. We are done. We take your suggestion to take this article to FA seriously and expect your Peer review at that stage.  Thanks.Nvvchar. 01:45, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
The article is in a very good shape now. I promote this to GA status. @Nvvchar: Sorry I do not frequent the Peer review page, let other eyes look at it as well. Sainsf <^>Talk all words 04:38, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
Thank you very much, Sainsf for promoting the article to GA. Legobot has again not left a message on my talk page. To Ms Sarah Welch for information.Nvvchar. 05:07, 6 February 2016 (UTC)

@Rudrasharman: Why did you link upasarga (yoga) here? This article does not even contain the word upasarga. Wikipedia seeminlgy contains no explanation for upasarga (yoga) so why even have a redirect for it, especially to this article? If you want the redirect, add an explanation of upasarga to the page. Otherwise I will delete the redirect.Iṣṭa Devatā (talk) 15:53, 16 September 2017 (UTC)

Support delete. Upasarga in yoga context is a form of yogic power attainment (a siddhi). This WP:AGF redirect to this article is inappropriate. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 01:47, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
Because the upanishad has the term.  It refers to the troubles and afflictions that the yoga practitioner has to avoid or overcome. Google it if you're curious.  This redirect is from a gazillion years ago, back when I might have summoned the energy to expand on the placeholder.  Now I don't care. (shrug). rudra (talk) 23:17, 7 October 2017 (UTC)