# Talk:Paulina Luisi

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==Wiki Education assignment: HIST 280z== This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2022 and 20 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gemagnes, Adh08 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: SarahO95.

We are students in a wiki Ed class that will be adding information to her involvement in the League of Nations, her work in Uruguay, and sex trafficking.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:24, 20 April 2022 (UTC) 

We have finished our research for the article and will transfer it out of our sandbox. We deleted repeated information that was creating confusion.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:21, 11 May 2022 (UTC) 
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gemagnes/Paulina_Luisi?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:25, 11 May 2022 (UTC) 

Hi all! I will be working on improving this article as part of the Women in Green Good Article Edit-a-thon in the upcoming days and weeks. Based on a preliminary look at this article, here are some major things I would like to accomplish:

Verify all of the sources used. Not all of the claims made are supported by their appended citations. Ideally, I would like to either (a) find evidence for the claim elsewhere in the source or (b) find evidence for the claim in another source. However, if I can do neither, I will (c) delete the unsourced claims.
Consolidate sources. There are a lot of repeated full citations that I would like to consolidate into shorter citations.
Copyedit, as necessary.
I'll be working in my sandbox primarily, and transferring edits as appropriate. If you have any questions, suggestions, or objections, please let me know! I am a new editor, so I might make mistakes. Please let me know if I do. Thanks! Spookyaki (talk) 22:26, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

I think I will also try to rearrange the article per MOS:CHRONOLOGICAL. This may mean that edits will have to come in all at once. I apologize for any inconvenience. Spookyaki (talk) 00:53, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
Okay, so I ended up doing a lot of edits. Here’s a quick summary:
I reorganized the article so that it is more chronological in structure, rather than being a random assortment of ideas. The lead for the “Medical education and teaching” section went to “Early life and education.” The “Sex-health education” section was split between “Early activism” and “Later activism.” “Feminist influences” was split between “Views,” “Early life and education,” and “Early activism.” “Uruguayan feminism” mostly wound up in “Early activism.” “Pan-American feminism” was split between “Death and legacy” and “Views.” “Radio femenina” went under “Later activism.” “League of Nations work on sex trafficking” remained its own section under “Activism and career.”
A lot of information in the article either misrepresented the source documents, was plagiarized from the source documents, or was otherwise not supported by them. A lot of info ended up getting cut when I could not find any other documentation to support it (which I did try to do).
I added a “Death and legacy” section to close things off. There isn’t a lot of information on Luisi’s death, so the section is pretty short.
I reorganized the citations into  “References” and “Sources and further reading” sections. A lot of full citations were consolidated into short citations.
A lot of wording ended up getting changed, sometimes for copyediting reasons, and sometimes because of plagiarism.
Now that I’ve reorganized the article and am more familiar with the source material, I would like to extend the article in a few ways before I submit it for GA status. Specifically, I would like to provide more information on (a) Luisi’s activity during the 1920s, which is under-discussed, and (b) her antifascist activism.
Again, let me know if you have any questions, suggestions, or objections!
Spookyaki (talk) 02:02, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

Lead: should be about two or three times the size, imo. Try to summarize the most important parts of the article. Imagine a reader who only reads the lead, and hit all the key parts.
Images: good.
Citation style: not a GA requirement, but your reviewer will appreciate it if you convert these hand-written short footnotes to use Template:sfn instead (so that they link directly to the sources in the bibilography).
Sources:
For the two books by Luisi, can you link to an archive.org copy? Or at least provide more of the citation? Who published these?
fn 17: what the heck is happening here
everything else looks good, though I haven't done any spot-checks for verification.
Prose:
"worked as educators" - meaning, teachers? Or something else? "educators" is weirdly vague.
"As more women joined the medical field, however, the number of female physicians started to rise." Well, yes, obviously.
"viewing it as a degrading "social evil."" citation needed here, for the quote.
"The White Slave Trade and the Problem of Reglementation." - is that really what it's called in English? not "regulation"?
"on air" - you use this phrase twice in two sentences, swap one for something else
Looks great. Submit it. -- asilvering (talk) 21:59, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for your recommendations! Weirdly enough, reglamentation is the term that's used in most English sources as well, though I do seem to have misspelled it, since it wasn't a term I was familiar with before working on this article. It seems to refer to a very specific set of policies. Per the Hispanic American Historical Review:
Reglamentation—as opposed to repression, in which sexual commerce was illegal, or abolition, in which it was deregulated, in effect neither legal nor illegal—required that women who regularly had sexual relations with more than one man have their photographs taken, give their names and addresses to sanitary authorities, and undergo periodic gynecological examinations to check for signs of syphilis or other contagious genital afflictions. Women were registered as either en comunidad, which meant that they worked in a brothel, or as aisladas, which meant that they worked alone. Depending on the location of the brothel or the aislada's apartment, women were categorized in one of four classes. Those who wished to operate brothels as matronas did so by licensing their houses with municipal authorities. Women who failed to register with authorities but who nevertheless had sexual relations with several men were considered to be illicit prostitutes and were known as clandestinas. Spookyaki (talk) 23:02, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
In that case, I think a note about this somewhere in the article would be helpful. Or perhaps you could spin up a new stub for it? -- asilvering (talk) 00:01, 10 October 2024 (UTC)