# Talk:Typhoon Zola

Divide by 145 when dealing with Japanese yen. YE Pacific Hurricane 04:11, 27 June 2017 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Guam should be linked in the first mention.
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
The track map differs from the prose. It did become extratropical over the Sea of Japan, but the map shows it tropical at that time.
Track map is from JTWC so it's the usual JTWC vs JMA problem that springs up. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
Use some pronouns to refer the storm other than "Zola".
Changed two. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
"7 people" Write out numbers less than ten.
Yeah but I chose not to spell out "30". YE Pacific Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
"Thirty-eight homes" This shouldn't be written out, to be consistent.
...or you can write out all the numbers in the sentence.
You don't start a sentence with a number. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
"Sixteen ships" Same here.
I mean you're correct here, but I had to stick a "a total of" to avoid the same problem :P YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
And in impact section.
The Yen sign should be used.
Good call. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
"Tropical Storm Winona, also assisted" Remove "also".
This made no sense till I read the full context of the sentence :P YE Pacific Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:23, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review :D YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)