# Talk:Ottoman ironclad Iclaliye

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

No Copyvio Y
No DAB links Y
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"The design for Iclaliye was based on the earlier Asar-i Şevket-class ironclads built in France, though she carried a slightly more powerful armament consisting of two 228 mm" Perhaps "which were built in France" would work better.
How about "that had been built..." instead? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
Sounds good. Passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:03, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:38, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

This might be usable. Parsecboy (talk) 12:19, 23 April 2018 (UTC)