# Talk:Space Hulk (1993 video game)

What citation is needed about the PC Speaker sounds ? God damn, just play the game and hear them!!!! Use Dosbox if you don't have a old computer, just install it with "PC Speaker" sound and you will hear actual speech using the PC Speaker instead of the common blip sounds. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.232.8.46 (talk • contribs) .

Verifiable information is needed, in accordance with Wikipedia's five pillars. Cheers --Pak21 19:09, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Verifiable information : the game can be downloaded here -> http://www.the-underdogs.info/game.php?gameid=1017 and is playable under a real DOS machine, or emulated using DosBox 0.65 or new.
So, install it with PC Speaker sound option, and hear by yourself the speech, and sound using only the PC speaker (not just typical *blip*blip* sound, but real speech, you can hear the commander speeching "brother marines..." and such).
I cant imagine any more verifiable information than the game itself. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.232.211.93 (talk • contribs) .

That would be original research and is not allowed on Wikipedia; again, please read about Wikipedia's five pillars. One example of what would be acceptable would be a review of the game in a major magazine which comments on the sound effects in the game. Cheers --Pak21 10:08, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
Wouldn't that be original research as well? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 199.200.253.9 (talk • contribs) .
No. Original research is "a term used on Wikipedia to refer to material added to articles by Wikipedia editors that has not been published already by a reputable source." --Pak21 18:52, 15 June 2006 (UTC)

Ok, in one of my travels to my parent's house, I found a The One Amiga magazine, from around feb/199x that has a review of the game. I took the facts from there.
I also have the original game, with box and all, so I took some facts from there too.
Image:space-hulk-game-review.jpg—The preceding unsigned comment was added by Kronoman (talk • contribs) .

Would it be inappropriate to say how hard that this game this game was. Carl 05:29, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

If you have a verifiable, reliable source for this statement, it would be appropriate (I can't imagine it would be too hard to find one, as I remember this being mentioned at the time). If you don't, it wouldn't. Cheers --Pak21 08:21, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

It is written: "The game was one of the first person shooters". I suppose the author meant first first person shooters.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.226.214.34 (talk) 20:00, 17 December 2007 (UTC) 

Hi, I am going to rewrite this article to conform to Wikipedia and Video Games Wikiproject guidelines in the coming few days.
The article will be changed to the following structure.

Lead
Gameplay
Plot and settings
Characters
Story
Development
Reception
References
External links
Jappalang (talk) 01:52, 18 December 2007 (UTC)

Sounds like an excellent idea, I look forward to seeing it. --Falcorian (talk) 07:27, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
Okay it is up, a few notes for those planning to improve the article.

The plot and setting section is based on the game materials themselves. As such, you would note that fluff regarding the Imperium, Marines, and Genestealers from the Horus Heresy and Tyranids are excluded (the game materials are from 1989-1993). I have written this section up to primarily follow the game materials without significant contradiction to current fluff. Anyone wishing to edit this section please keep that in mind. This is after all the article on the computer game, not the Warhammer 40,000 universe, so focus on what is presented in the game and its source materials.
Follow the Wikipedia and Video Game Wikiproject guides please.
Additional verifiable sources regarding the game development is appreciated.
Please write in the British English standards as this game is developed by teams in the United Kingdom
Jappalang (talk) 00:00, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Another article? You never cease to amaze me...
Clyde's already re-assessed it to B-class, low-importance, a rating I agree with. When assessing your major re-writes, changes those values are half the work as the list of things that still need doing is so short! However, before pressing that GAC button you should expand the lead per WP:LS: there currently isn't any information there about the reception the game received. Also, the last portion of the Story section appears to be unsourced - you could just use in-game dialogue if nothing immediate jumps out from a Google search. Fix those problems and you should be good to go. Una LagunaTalk 09:08, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

Thank you. I have added a very summarized sentence to the lead for the Reception section. I have also added one of the game manual, which chronicles the campaign's story, as a reference for the Story section. Would that sufficiently address the concerns? Jappalang (talk) 14:27, 19 December 2007 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

An excellent article! Just a few concerns before I pass this as a Good Article:

Every time I review a video game article I get into a differing argument about whether or not the Gameplay section should have citations or not and whether or not things that are inherent to the game need to be cited or not. I personally think that they should be, as I don't exactly see more citing references as inherently detrimental to Wikipedia's reputation, but I have heard reasonable arguments in the other direction. My new policy is to just go with whatever the author has chosen and let the good folks down at Featured Articles deal with it if it gets that far. I do insist, however, that one of these two methods be chosen and used uniformly throughout the Gameplay section. Since you've chosen to cite the Gameplay section, then I believe it should be fully cited, as it is more a question of style than citation. That's a lot of words to say that I think the second half of the second paragraph of Gameplay needs to be cited. The same logic goes for the "Story" section. An instruction manual, or even in-game dialog, however, is an acceptable way of citing this material.
The "Story" section was entirely referenced from pages 30-43 of the "The World of Space Hulk — Missions" manual (ref #10). I thought it would be unnecessary to inline-cite each following sentence. My usual style is to put the citation at the first instance where it is needed, so following exceptional sentences would be referring to the preceding cite. Is this acceptable? Jappalang (talk) 09:34, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
You don't have to inline cite each sentence (that'd be nuts), but it seems to make more sense to cite the last instance of where it is needed. That way, you're saying "everything before this is covered by this citation." Cheers, CP 18:33, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
 Done Additional magazine and manual reference added at end of paragraphs. Jappalang (talk) 22:52, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
"Briefings on the background and objectives, along with a small preview map are given before missions, and the player can customise the squads' armaments, e.g. close range Lightning Claws, devastating long range Assault Cannons, etc, for certain campaign missions." (Gameplay) Terms such as "e.g. and "etc" are not very encyclopedic and should be reworded in full prose format.
 Done The term "etc" is reworked into "such as" prose. Jappalang (talk) 09:34, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
"Amiga Force complained trying to co-ordinate five-men squads to fend off these quick enemies was just frustration in the making as one single mistake gets all of them wiped out in an instant." (Reception) requires a citation.
I am using a style where if the quoted review is in the review table on the right, inline citation is left out. Whereas if quoted reviews are not in the table (or the quote's source is not mentioned), they would be inline-cited. Hence the sentence in question would be from the Amiga Force review in the table which has the citation. Is this acceptable? Jappalang (talk) 09:34, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
I don't see it as hurting to toss repeat the reference again since, if it has a ref name, all you need to do is type <ref name="refname"/> and all it does is add ^x to the ref that's already there. It allows the reader to access the citation directly and doesn't really increase the size of the choppiness (since it's at the end of a paragraph anyways) that much. Cheers, CP 18:39, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
 Done Additional magazine reference added at end of paragraph. Jappalang (talk) 22:52, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
To allow for these changes to be made, I am putting the article on hold for a period of up to seven days, after which it may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work thus far. Cheers, CP 04:40, 29 December 2007 (UTC)

Excellent! I will now be passing the article as a Good Article. Congratulations, and thank you for your hard work! Cheers, CP 03:54, 30 December 2007 (UTC)

Cool article. A couple of suggestions: it'd be nice to know what the differences are between the Amiga and PC versions of this game. Also more info on the weapons and what monsters there are in the game would be good. Cheers. Ben 2082 (talk) 17:46, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Except for the inability to install the Amiga version onto the hard drive, there are no major differences that are documented between it and the PC version.  The article did mention a few of the weapons.  Listing them out is a tad over-detailed for what Wikipedia is about.  As for the monsters, there is only the Genestealer.  Jappalang (talk) 22:06, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. I'm just wondering though, did one version have slightly more detailed graphics/ sound? It's a small detail but it's interesting, so that you know what is the definitive version. With the weapons, I don't think it would be too much detail to put a bit more about how they work eg some only have limited ammo, and the chances of each one making a successful kill. In other words, what are the significant differences between the weapons as far as they affect the gameplay. Anyway awesome job on the article. How's about a Space Hulk: VOTBA one? Ben 2082 (talk) 01:30, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
Unfortunately, no reviewers touched upon differences between the versions (in those days, it will be rare for a reviewer to have both an Amiga and IBM PC to play on).  As you can see, the review section in this article is mainly on Amiga reviews; PC sources are almost impossible to locate (I am pretty sure Computer Gaming World has one, but I do not have the issue), and I do not know where to find a source for the White Dwarf review.  The assault cannon and flamethrower are the only weapons with limited ammunition.  If we do want to mention this (this being a minor detail since Storm Bolters are the primary weapons), we have to find reliable sources that mention this and work it into the article without disrupting the flow.  I have no experience with VOTBA (no PlayStation console) so there is a lack of inspiration on writing for it.  Jappalang (talk) 01:42, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
Maybe I'll look into the differences between PC and Amiga versions. I'm sure the info is out there somewhere. As for needing reliable sources, there are loads of wikipedia articles that don't have stuff sourced. I mean, the vast majority of statements on wikipedia are like that. I'm guessing you say that because it might not be necessary but it makes the article better right? The info about the number of shots is in the game manual, which is available online here: [1] That said the manual doesn't explain about the odds of each weapon successfully killing genestealers, which would be interesting. I mean you can shoot a genestealer 10 times with a bolter and sometimes it won't kill it, whereas other times one shot will do. BTW VOTBA is well worth checking out. It's like SH but with way better graphics. You can get the PSX/ 3D0 versions on ebay/ amazon pretty cheap, and even the consoles are pretty cheap too. Ben 2082 (talk) 09:53, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

Not quite, please read WP:V and WP:RS.  Those are pretty much what articles on Wikipedia are supposed to follow.  The core of Wikipedia is supposed to be on the basis of making articles out of what is reported by reliable sources.  However, since Wikipedia is said to be open for editing by anyone, there are many cases where contributions are made without regards to the rules.  With the overwhelming amount of articles, there will be articles that violate Wikipedia's policies.  In any case, the Featured Articles (and some Good Articles) are being maintained to better standards than regular ones (although it is also the later articles that are being checked more than the older ones).  One thing why Wikipedia articles should not go down into too much details is that they do not serve as guides.  Wikipedia is more like a summaries of reports from reliable sources.  Please check the links I have pointed out.  Reading the policies and guidelines can help in finding out why current Good and Featured Articles only welcome certain information.  Jappalang (talk) 11:24, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
If "With the overwhelming amount of articles, there will be articles that violate Wikipedia's policies.", why doesn't someone just delete the articles that are like that? Also with the weapons it doesn't make it a game guide to add in the fundamental ways in which they differ. I understand what you mean by not making articles into game guides. The different weapon types have a significant impact on the gameplay. You may as well not mention that the marines can gain experience and fight better on their own in later campaign missions, because that has a similar impact on the gameplay, yet that is in the article. It's ultimately subjective as to deciding some of the things to include.Ben 2082 (talk) 13:28, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
Deletion is not the first course of action for bad articles.  Articles that are notable on their own but are going against policies are to be improved.  However, since Wikipedia has so much articles, there are too few people to ensure all of them are up to the standards.  These lack of "moderators" mean that most articles contents are "governed" by the interested editors, who if uninterested in policies would create "bad" articles.  Note that major cases of copy violations or flagrant made-up stories would be deleted, and articles that are not notable by Wikipedia standards have to go through a deletion process to ensure it is properly deleted.  Venture to WP:AFD if you would like to see how the deletion process goes.  Basically, it is going to take a long time for Wikipedia to sort out the junk and to ensure all articles comply to its standards.  For this article, it has already stated the weapons are split into melee and ranged weapons.  As the assault cannon and flamethrower are the only two weapons with limited ammunition, they are a small portion of the available weaponry and not really a huge impact on gameplay (i.e. the amount of times they are used in the game are few and in between); most of the time the marines are armed with Stormbolters and Power Gloves.  Jappalang (talk) 14:18, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

Since 2007, I have become more familiar with WP:RS and as such, several sources used for my 2007 rewrite are unreliable.  I have removed them, and unfortunately can find no reliable source to qualify the information cited to the removed sources; hence they have to be removed as well.  On the other hand, I have found more reliable sources that focus on the PC version, and so used them.  The Gameplay section is rewritten to make it clearer to the non-gamer.  Furthermore, fluff is removed to make it more succinct to those not so interested in the Warhammer 40,000 universe.  The background of the game is moved to the top since I found that without first defining what a Space Marine or Genestealer is makes things difficult later.  The Reception is also reshaped to put a distinct focus in each paragraph, rather than jumping all over the place.  Ratings are removed as they rarely serve anything to the non-gamers.  Jappalang (talk) 02:37, 25 November 2009 (UTC)