# Talk:Tropical Storm Etau (2009)

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Note: This Article needs a slight update before its GAN is passed Jason Rees (talk) 23:26, 4 October 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see Wikipedia:What is a good article?)
It is reasonably well written.
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It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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It is broad in its coverage.
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It is stable.
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It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
3 Public domain images (hosted at Commons) ok.
Meteorological history: winds peaked at 95 km/h (60 mph 10-minute sustained) and a barometric pressure of 990 hPa (mbar).[12] - the infobox says the winds peaked at 75 km/h + pressure bottomed at 992 hPa
 DoneJason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC)

Preparations: evacuated roughly 47,000 residents from western regions along the coast - do you know where specifically the evacuations took place? Is this a separate evacuation than the In Hyogo state, another 2,000 people were evacuated...
As far as i am aware they were seperate but i cant check with the primary author to check as he is rather [off at me for some reason]Jason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
Since this assertion that it was a further 2,000 people cannot be verified by the provided references, it fails Wikipedia:Verifiability --maclean (talk) 19:39, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
Ive removed it for now If cyclonebiskit canverify they were seperate he can add them back in.Jason Rees (talk) 23:16, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
Removed what? Nothing has been removed. --maclean (talk) 02:14, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
Actually it has been removed Unless im missing something?.Jason Rees (talk) 02:41, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
ok. maclean (talk) 02:48, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
Make spelling of Hyōgo Prefecture consistent.
 DoneJason Rees (talk) 00:31, 18 November 2009 (UTC)

Do you know if there has been any update on the 2 missing people?
Im trying to keep an eye on damages of the PTS and their hasnt been any update on the 2 missing that ive seen.Jason Rees (talk) 17:43, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
--maclean (talk) 00:22, 8 November 2009 (UTC)

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