# Talk:Six Feet Under (Billie Eilish song)

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
DarklyShadows I'm happy to see that you've unblocked yourself. I'll start my review soon. LOVI33 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Cover art needs alt text.
"Finneas O'Connell wrote and solely" → "Finneas O'Connell, Eilish's brother, solely wrote and"
Maybe add something about it's lyrical content after the pop ballad mention.
"it was certified platinum in Canada by Music Canada (MC)" → "Commercially, it was certified platinum by Music Canada (MC)"


### Background and composition
"on Soundcloud" → "through Eilish's SoundCloud"
"Eilish's second ever single." → "her second single."
"According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com" → "According sheet music published by Hal Leonard Music Publishing on Musicnotes.com" with target
Target A3 to A (musical note)
Target D5 to D (musical note)
"The song has been" → "The song is"
"and delicate as" → "and delicate like"
"Lyrics include: "Help, I lost myself again/But I remember you/Don’t come back; it won’t end well/But I wish you’d tell me too."[7]" this sentence seems redundant as you are not analyzing the lyrics. Remove it.


### Reception
"When it was released" → "Upon it's release"
""Six Feet Under" has been awarded" → "The song has been awarded"
Remove Music Canada from the last sentence, already mentioned in previous sentence


### Promotion
"The music video was directed by Eilish. The video shows" → "It was directed by Eilish and shows"
[14][2] refs need to be in numerical order
""Six Feet Under" was used in" → "The song was used in"


### Track Listing
Change title to "Track listing"
"Remix EP" → "Digital EP – Remixes" with target
Add total length for Remix EP


### Personnel
Target Tidal to Tidal (service)


### Certifications
MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Six Feet Under"


### References
Make sure all these are archived using the tool
Copyvio score looks good at 20.6%
I think you misspelled the authors name in ref 5
Target YouTube to itself in ref 14
Target NME to itself in ref 15
Remove target to iTunes in ref 17


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until issues are fixed. It was great reviewing one of your articles again. I hope to do another soon! LOVI33 19:41, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
LOVI33 All the problems should be addressed! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 21:51, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Great, I'll pass it now! LOVI33 22:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)