# Talk:Tony Knowles (snooker player)

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Knowles, with his youthful look and stylish haircut, was one of very few players to bring sex appeal to the game{{FixPOV|date=July 2007}} — something he tried to capitalise on in 1983 by writing of his exploits in the UK tabloid newspaper, The Sun, at a time when this sort of publicity was still shunned, and he was subsequently charged with bringing the game into disrepute.{{Fact|date=July 2007}}
Please do not return this information to the article without a citation to support it.--BirgitteSB 20:42, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tony Knowles (snooker player)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 17:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello BennyOnTheLoose, I'll be taking up the review for this nomination and will present it to you in a couple of days. I hope you will find my feedback to be helpful. Cheers! Tayi Arajakate Talk 17:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
BennyOnTheLoose, apologies for having delayed this for so long. The article more or less complies with the good article criteria except a handful minor issues. So I'm going to go ahead and pass this but do take note of the comments below. Tayi Arajakate Talk 11:24, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks, Tayi Arajakate. I've made some changes as noted below. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:43, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
Looks good now, I've updated the assessment table below. Tayi Arajakate Talk 09:31, 4 February 2022 (UTC)


#### Comments
"...first wound of the 1981 World Snooker Championship...", typo.
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
"... Reardon by the same score in round two ... Ray Reardon (the second seed) ...", the first mention of Reardon should contain his full name and  be wikilinked, instead of the second mention.
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
This is just a minor quibble and feel free to take this more as a suggestion; most last paragraph of the career section could perhaps be integrated in the chronological order that the rest of the section follows? For example, his highest ranking only appears in the last paragraph even though some of his other rankings is mentioned from time to time in a chronological order.
Another suggestion would be that if possible, the section on his career could be expanded further? It appears more as major highlights rather than a comprehensive chronology. For instance, the section on performance and rankings timeline contains many tournaments which don't feature in the section on career.
The lead should perhaps mention that he is commonly or alternatively called Tony.
I've had a look at some other "Tony" GAs and on balance I've not amended for this, per MOS:HYPOCORISM. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
His team members in the 1983 World Team Classic are only mentioned in the lead.
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)


#### Assessment
Comprehension: The comprehension is good. Pass

Verifiability: The article is verifiable. Pass

Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive enough for the good article criteria. Pass

Neutrality: The article is neutral. Pass

Stability: The article is stable. Pass

Illustration: The article is well illustrated. Pass