# Talk:Palestine at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:45, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

I"ll take these two. Courcelles (talk) 19:45, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
"Palestine sent one athlete to Rio de Janeiro shot put thrower Husam Azzam,"  You need at least one more comma here.
Does Palestine compete in the Olympics, as well?  Since when?
"he won a medal each at the"  Try "he won a medal at each of the"
Good work! Courcelles (talk) 19:54, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: All of the points have been actioned and I have also corrected another point that I noticed. MWright96 (talk) 12:02, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
Promoted. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 14:53, 2 November 2018 (UTC)