# Talk:Zion Square

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Reviewer: MusikAnimal (talk · contribs) 03:09, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. I'm a city type of guy so this should be fun. — MusikAnimal talk 03:09, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citations to reliable sources: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 


### Concerns
History
Jewish Colonization Association – let's link this
 Done Yoninah (talk)
I am amazed that all of the "largest demonstrations" were reportedly 100,000 or near that in size. That be so, perhaps we could reword the sentence to something like: The largest demonstrations in the square included a May 2000 protest decrying the handover of Arab settlements adjacent to the Mount of Olives, a November 2000 protest against Ehud Barak's "policy of restraint" at the beginning of the Second Intifada, and a 2006 protest against the policies of acting prime minister Ehud Olmert, all of which drew around an estimated 100,000 people.
 Done Thanks, that's nice. Yoninah (talk)
Under "Terrorist attacks": consider linking incendiary device. I wouldn't quite call it a common term and the concept I found interesting.
 Done Yoninah (talk)
On July 4, 1975, ... killing 15 and wounding 77 – I found that the second provided reference (haaretz.com) supported all the claims in this sentence. The print source contains a broken link to Google Books. Up to you whether you want to ditch that source altogether, but if not you should remove or repair the link.
 Done I removed all the dead links here and elsewhere. Yoninah (talk)
Last sentence under "Terrorist attacks", The Jerusalem Post source link is dead. Again, the other two references seem to support the sentence, as far as I can tell.
 Done Yoninah (talk) 21:52, 11 November 2014 (UTC)
Landmarks
Last sentence first paragraph: We should link "Old City"
 Done Yoninah (talk)
This article was an excellent read. Beautiful, flowing prose, to say the least! I have zero doubt this will be a good article. Let me know what you think of the above concerns and we'll move forward with the promotion. — MusikAnimal talk 04:31, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review it, and for your suggestions to improve it. Yoninah (talk) 21:52, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Y Great work! This nomination has passed. Congrats! — MusikAnimal talk 22:00, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Yoninah (talk) 22:03, 11 November 2014 (UTC)