# Talk:USS West Carnifax

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Hi!  I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have the full review up within a couple of hours. Dana boomer (talk) 18:40, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Everything looks good, so I am passing this article to GA status.  Two comments for you to consider:

Do your sources say how this ship managed to be rammed by two others?  This seems rather remarkable.
The lead probably doesn't need to be quite this long for an article of this length.  Not a huge deal, but you could probably trim it a bit.
These two things aren't going to hold up the GA promotion, though, so congrats, and nice work on another good article! Dana boomer (talk) 19:03, 9 September 2008 (UTC)