# Talk:Wind phone

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Reviewer: Wasted Time R (talk · contribs) 00:19, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
I've made a few copyedits for clarity and MoS points, hopefully you are okay with them.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
I looked around a bit but didn't find anything to add to what's here.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
I was tempted to say the  where visitors can hold one-way conversations with deceased loved ones in the lede should be reworded for clarity, but the by "talking" to him on the phone later makes that clear and I decided it's better the way it is.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
I scaled down the Ireland image because it was too big relative to the others.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
This is a really nice article.  I almost always place GA nominations on hold, but with the few changes I made, I believe this meets the requirements and I am passing it right now.
@Wasted Time R: Your edits to the article are great. Thank you so much for the review! DanCherek (talk) 01:23, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

I am removing this addition of the Crossroads Hospice Society wind phone by 184.68.142.130 primarily because it is sourced online to their own website, rather than a reliable secondary source like all of the other replicas, and also because it is written extremely promotionally (e.g., beautiful location for grieving individuals to find serenity and comfort). Please gain consensus on this talk page before adding it again. Thank you. DanCherek (talk) 15:45, 10 September 2021 (UTC)