# Talk:The Duel (The Office)

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I only have a few comments, as the article is generally fine. You probably noticed that I did some minor copy editing which you are free to override.

How did they duel? A fist fight, or what? (At first I assumed it was with swords.)
Only a physical fight. I added some language to make that more clear. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
"During the scene when Andy returns to the office and confronts his co-workers amid long standing silence," - how is silence long standing in this situation?
I'm not sure I understand your comment. It's a scene where he goes in and there's a long awkward silence for a long time. I changed the language a bit here too... — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
"The Dwight bobblehead doll is a reference to the second season episode "Valentine's Day", in which Angela gave it to Dwight as a gift." - How is a reference to a previous episode a "cultural reference"?
I guess it's more self-referential, but other television episodes have included these kind of references. If you don't think it works, feel free to delete it. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Reply. What about "a long, awkward silence"? The rest, "for a long time" is redundant.  That would make sense to me: "a long, awkward silence". Xtzou (Talk) 00:21, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
Looks fine. — Hunter Kahn 00:59, 9 May 2010 (UTC)
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Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:  Good

B. MoS compliance:  Complies with  MoS

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:  Reliable sources

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  Yes

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
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Overall:
Pass or Fail: Pass! 

Congratulations!  Xtzou (Talk) 16:34, 9 May 2010 (UTC)

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