# Talk:São Tomé and Príncipe at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

Short, sweet, and not much to comment on...
"São Tomé and Príncipe first competed at the Olympic Games at the"  Two "at the"s in rapid succession.
"The country participated on six" -> "The country participated in the Olympics on six"
"São Tomé and Príncipe participated in the Rio Paralympic Games from 7 to 18 September 2016.[5]"  This is kinda choppy to be here, basically it is the first sentence of the article again.
Did they have a flagbearer for the closing ceremony?
Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 20:29, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: I believe that is all of your points actioned except for whether the country had a flag bearer for the closing ceremony because I could not locate a reliable source to verify it. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Very well.  Then, this passes. Courcelles (talk) 17:53, 16 April 2018 (UTC)