# Talk:OutRun Online Arcade

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GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

I'm putting this on hold for one very minor prose change and one source:

In the third paragraph of Gameplay references "the passenger", as if that gameplay element had already been established.  Is Heart Attack the only mode with a passenger?  I think it would read better as something along the lines of:
"In addition to attempting to complete certain stages, a passenger riding in the player's vehicle will frequently request certain stunts and actions."
As far as I know there's not yet been any consensus on using Siliconera (reference 6) as a reliable source.
Reviewer: gakon5 (talk / contribs) 17:46, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

I've made the requested changes.  Both the prose and the reference were easy to replace. --Teancum (talk) 18:49, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
Cool, cool.  Passed then. --gakon5 (talk / contribs) 20:05, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

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