# Talk:Pavel Buchnevich

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

I haven't looked at the rest of the article, but the lead seems a bit short.  Done
Will look in detail tomorrow. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:44, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
So I lied and it wasn't January 26, but I got more of it done.

"his father Andrey worked at a steel factory and now coaches youth soccer" Would it fit the rest of the sentence more by saying he is a youth soccer coach and former steel factory worker?  Done
Watch out for editorials and puffery (i.e. breakthrough).
How did Buchnevich do with SKA Saint Petersburg?  Done
His final season in Russia was 2015, right?
He spent quite a few years on Severstal's reserve/youth team, that part of his career should be mentioned. Done
"However, Buchnevich missed significant time during his rookie season with back spasms, including a stretch of nearly two months from November 2016 to January 2017." Doesn't seem to be supported by the reference, which only states he was being assigned to Hartford.   Done
"Buchnevich finished the season with 1.77 points per 60 minutes of 5-on-5 play and 1.75 primary assists per 60 to be listed amongst the best Rangers forwards in regards to generating shot attempts." Might be needing some punctuation in between.  Done
Corsi For % should be written out on the first mention.  Done
How did he do in the IIHF World Championships?  Done
Pictures would be nice but obviously optional.
It sucks but I got one 
That should be it. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 18:59, 2 February 2022 (UTC)