# Talk:The Beauty Process: Triple Platinum

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This review is transcluded from Talk:The Beauty Process: Triple Platinum/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:20, 12 July 2017 (UTC)


### Infobox
Genre?
Use flatlist for studios.
 Done


### Lead
Link Reprise Records
Add the tour with Marlyn Manson
 Done


### Background and recording
which was released by Slash Records in collaboration with Reprise Records, a major record label owned by the Warner Music Group. → source?
"Sparks explained that spending time on the recording studio was very expensive and that the band could not afford to wait for Brinkman" → Sparks explained that there was a huge cost associated with the time spent in the recording studio, henceforth the band could not afford to wait for Brinkman (sounds better)
 Done


### Music and lyrics
The track "Off the Wagon" → The single "Off the Wagon"
Although the song promotes substance abuse → Although the track promotes substance abuse
 Done


### Promotion and release
"The Beauty Process was released on February 25, 1997 by Slash Records." → missing source
To promote the album, L7 signed on as an opening act on a Marilyn Manson tour across the US → year of the tour?
on the US Billboard Top 200 chart and No. 12 on the Heatseekers Albums chart, → full stop
 Done


### Critical reception
music critics → link to music journalism
Stephen Thompson of The A.V. Club  → The A.V. Club's Stephen Thompson
 Done


### Track listing
All tracks written by Donita Sparks and Suzi Gardner. → use credits as it also proves the track listing
 Done


### Personnel
Use {{spaced ndash}} instead of "-".
 Done


### References
Don't link twice to the same page. See Spin, Billboard, AllMusic, MTV, Los Angeles Times, Rolling Stone
According to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking, "a link may be repeated in infoboxes, tables, image captions, footnotes, hatnotes [...] if helpful for readers" --Niwi3 (talk) 20:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Explain it to me how it helpful when you have 24 links? If you had 100... MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:27, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Remove the location from source 20 "New York"
Vice is a magazine, not a publisher henceforth replace Noisey with vice.
MTV source is missing it's author "MTV News Staff"
Philadelphia Media Network (publisher) → The Philadelphia Inquirer (work)
The previous link is dead
 Done


### External links
Fine


### Overall GA review
Needs charts table and genre of the album.
Added punk rock as the album's genre (as per reception section). Also, is it really necessary to add a table just for 2 US charts that are already mentioned in the promotion and release section? In my opinion, charts tables are only useful if the album in question has been commercially successful. --Niwi3 (talk) 20:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Where is that on the commercial section? Well, I have seen with one, some people maybe just looking for that and don't want to read a whoel section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:34, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Few errors to amend and some other picky stuff from my part. It will be GA in no time, on hold for seven days, good luck! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Thank you for your review, really appreciated. I have addressed most of the issues you brought up and left two comments above. Let me know what you think! --Niwi3 (talk) 20:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
Fixed the remaining issues. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be fixed. --Niwi3 (talk) 19:26, 13 July 2017 (UTC)