# Talk:Sonic Advance 2

Isn't it something of a spoiler to show that image of Super Sonic in the character section? Paul Haymon 04:02, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
Yes, but this is a part of the game. Knowing there is Super Sonic in the game is not that big of a spoiler. Untii next edit, SonicBoom95 22:16, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

Isn't it just a myth that Amy is unlockable? Untii next edit, SonicBoom95 22:16, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
No. - MasterOtenko
Actally she can be unlockable by getting all the chaos emeralds.
I can't unlock Amy. I'm having a trouble with that. I finished the game with all characters (all the emeralds too) and I simply can't unlock her. What I need to do? 200.55.113.109 03:25, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

should the flash version that's prominent in many free flash game sites be mentioned?

It should be mentioned.  I have writen about it but I need more information. So can anyone play the Flash game to complete this section I wrote. 200.55.113.109 14:57, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
FORGET IT. WIKIPEDIA CLEANED MY SECTION. 200.55.113.109 03:59, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

the first appearence of cream was in sonic adventure (sonicthehedgehog9000).  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sonicthehedgehog9000 (talk • contribs) 19:42, 18 May 2008 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Sonic Advance 2/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 11:09, 8 December 2017 (UTC)

Is it reasonably well written? 
I'd give a very brief description of what Chaos emeralds are in the lead for people not familiar with the series. I'd probably also clarify that Doctor Eggman is a reoccurring villain from the series.
Done.
"who can unlock Cream the Rabbit" - I'd clarify "unlock" means make them playable characters. Non-gamers will not understand this form the current wording.
Done.
"and Amy can swing a hammer throughout levels" - what purpose does swinging a hammer achieve?
Clarified.
"a sound test feature" - what does this mean?
Clarified.
"where toys for Cream's Chao, Cheese" - This is convoluted; I'd just say "for the character Cheese"
Done.
"transforms into Super Sonic" - can you describe what transforming into Super Sonic actual consists of?
I've added a link and that you need Chaos Emeralds.
"was developed by Dimps" - I'd introduce Dimps as a development studio; as it's currently written it could be the nickname of a single person or something else.
Done.
"Sonic Advance 2 received generally positive reviews upon release, according to review aggregator Metacritic" - I'd add what the ranking actually was to the prose
I usually don't do that, since the qualitative summary is much more helpful on its own (WP:VGG#Reception).
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 
There's some inconsistency in date formats in references, I.e "Archived from the original on 2016-03-24. Retrieved 31 October 2017." Pick one date format and stick with it for every single source.
 I'd format reference 18 with Template:Cite magazine for consistency. It looks out of place with detail like "No.915 Pt.2. Pg.121."
B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 
C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage? 
A. Major aspects: 
B. Focused: 
Is it neutral? 
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable? 
No edit wars, etc: 
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic? 
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 
B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Well done overall. Placing on hold until issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 11:27, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
I'll address the references when I've got time. I've worked on the prose already. JOEBRO64 11:43, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
@Freikorp:  Done JOEBRO64 20:12, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
Happy for this to pass now. :) Freikorp (talk) 22:50, 8 December 2017 (UTC)