# Talk:Scherzo in F-sharp minor (Shostakovich)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:51, 10 July 2022 (UTC)

I will review this short article today; it is appropriately the GAN before mine in the queue! --K. Peake 06:51, 10 July 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your review, again! Really appreciate the comments. I have addressed them all now. Let me know if there's anything else to do. Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 15:01, 12 July 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Link anything significant in the infobox like you have elsewhere, e.g. Dmitri Shostakovich
 Done
Introduce who Dmitri Shostakovich is
 Done
Pipe Petrograd Conservatory to Saint Petersburg Conservatory
 Done
"It is one of" → "The composition is one of"
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"It was premiered in" → "The composition was premiered in"
 Done
After the above sentence, add one about the themes of this composition, followed by a critical reception sentence; split into two paras if enough sentences
 Done
Wikilink F-sharp minor
 Done


### Background
Wikilink F-sharp minor
 Done
"during the autumn of early winter months" I don't think this actually makes sense
Should be "or", have changed.  Done
"the composers' first year at" → "the composer's first year at"
 Done
Pipe Petrograd Conservatory to Saint Petersburg Conservatory
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"Shostakovich was almost fifteen." → "Shostakovich was almost 15." per MOS:NUM
Also changed thirteen to 13.  Done
Shouldn't you write "this generally remains" since the date has been disputed as you've cited here?
 Done
Wikilink B minor
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"composition teacher, Maximilian Steinberg, who had taught Shostakovich" → "composition teacher Maximilian Steinberg, who had taught him"
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The last para can be moved to the end of the critical assessment section, which can be also a legacy one as I will later explain
 Done


### Form
Pipe Tchaikovsky to Pyotr Ilyich Tchaikovsky
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See MOS:NUM for the correct formatting of the numbers of the instruments
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"reminiscent of Maximillian Steinberg." → "reminiscent of Steinberg."
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Wikilink D major
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### Critical assessment
Retitle to Reception and legacy
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Add a comma after Nikolai Malko
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Mention the year of Symphony No. 1
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Pipe ballet to Ballet (music)
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Remove wikilink on Tchaikovsky
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Pipe Delibes to Léo Delibes
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Remove comma before Children's Notebook
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"to the composer: Gillies" → "to the composer; Gillies"
 Done


### References
#### Citations
Copyvio score looks phenomenal at 5.7%!!!!
Ref 11 does not lead to any work, so fix it
Link didn't work due to a typo, have fixed now.  Done


#### Works cited
Pipe Grove Music Online to The New Grove Dictionary of Music and Musicians
 Done


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice job on this one! --K. Peake 08:30, 10 July 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now; I did some brief copy editing for appropriate usage of paras! --K. Peake 07:27, 14 July 2022 (UTC)