# Talk:Tui Manu'a Matelita

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tui Manu'a Matelita/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y


### Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

Suggest expanding lede with information on her not marrying, or the dispute over her death.
Contemporary and posthumous European and American accounts of her life portray her as a helpless figurehead and as a white queen of the South Seas. suggest changing "helpless" to "mere".
@KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Changed prose as suggested.KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)