# Talk:Rohm and Haas Corporate Headquarters

That sentence looks better. As that statement is referenced, you are correct, it does not violate NPOV, but it would sound more encyclopediac worded in a different way. Also, same with the last sentence. But it's not a big deal, so it passes. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:28, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
I still don't understand and am interested in finding out what you find wrong with "the dean of architecture and planning". Thanks. Medvedenko (talk) 21:08, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
Well, it's not so much as there's a problem with it, but "the dean" is slightly unencyclopediac language. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 23:40, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
I am also puzzled.  I don't have an EB login to check this source, but dean is given as his job title at http://web.mit.edu/newsoffice/1994/belluschi-0302.html . --Hroðulf (or Hrothulf) (Talk) 05:41, 14 June 2008 (UTC)