# Talk:Typhoon Imbudo

More intro and impact. Jdorje 19:41, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 02:48, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
Hello Hurricanehink, I am going to be reviewing this article. At first glance, the article looks generally good, with only some minors errors.--12george1 (talk) 02:48, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

"The seventh named storm and fourth typhoon of the season," - Wikilink to the 2003 Pacific typhoon season
"There were also 64 deaths in the country" ... "Throughout China, 20 people were killed," - This is only 84 fatalities. I checked further into the article and there was a death in Hong Kong. Why didn't you mention it?
"Imbudo passed 33 km (21 mi) north of Yap." - Round to the nearest 5th digit
"and a 28 km (17 mi) wide eye formed." and "to a diameter of 11 km (7 mi) in the midst of an eyewall" - Ditto here
"was estimated at about P4.7 billion (2003 PHP, $86 million 2003 USD)" - Why did you include the year here?
"Across southern China, the typhoon damaged over 10,000,000 ha (25,000,000 acres) of crop fields." - Why not just say 10 million and 25 million?
"the Philippine Air Force were mobilized to help deliver supplies" - Grammar error
Nice job, Hurricanehink! I am now going to pass this article and list it as a GA.--12george1 (talk) 04:33, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

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