# Talk:Yozora

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:05, 2 July 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 23:40, 4 July 2025 (UTC)
I will be reviewing the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 23:40, 4 July 2025 (UTC)

@Tintor2: The article appears to be well-written, stable, verifiable, broad in coverage, neutral, and illustrated.  However, I have some points to address.
The sentence, "Yozora was created by director Tetsuya Nomura as a minor character in his introduction who would be a more important in future projects; his portrayal in the DLC Re Mind was made intentionally difficult to beat" could be rewritten to say, "Yozora was created by director Tetsuya Nomura as a minor character in his introduction who would be a more important in future projects, as his portrayal in the DLC Re Mind was intentionally made difficult to beat."
Done.
The article cites some Valnet sources.  Are you able to find sources that are better than Valnet, per WP:VALNET?  The best Valnet source in the article would be the one from Screen Rant.  I see mentions of Comic Book Resources in the article.  When I worked on the article for Ochaco Uraraka, I removed or replaced instances of Valnet sources if I could.  If you choose to use sources from 	Game Rant or Screen Rant instead, I would suggest including a space before "Rant" and italicizing the titles of the websites.
Removed and revised
Numerial citations should be put in order.
Revised. Am I missing something?
Titles of websites should be italicized.
Done.
This citation needs to be corrected to the following: Williams, Leah J. (April 11, 2022). "Kingdom Hearts 4's Lost Master is a major mystery". GamesHub. Retrieved June 29, 2025.
Done.
If you make these changes, I plan to pass this article as a good article.
Z. Patterson (talk) 01:24, 5 July 2025 (UTC)
@Z. Patterson: Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 01:37, 5 July 2025 (UTC)

@Tintor2: You are welcome.  I passed this as a GA.  Good work. Z. Patterson (talk) 02:02, 5 July 2025 (UTC)