# Talk:Richard Orsini

This review is transcluded from Talk:Richard Orsini/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 5 February 2023 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y
Passes spot checks Y


### Discussion
### Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.


#### Lede
Recommend expanding the lede with details of his military campaign and death, but I think it still satisfies lede coverage as is.


#### Family
his first wife is unknown perhaps the identity of his first wife is unknown
@Cplakidas: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:41, 5 February 2023 (UTC)