# Talk:Percy Henn

This one isn't quite up to GA standards yet, see my peer review for reasoning.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 16:37, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

I don't know who assessed this but there is no way it is up to B-class, more like start.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 01:47, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
Reverted pending discussion. My understanding is that Henn is a fairly obscure figure for which little information is available. Thus, even though the article is short, everything seems to have been covered, and there are no key elements missing. I should think it would prove useful to the majority to people visiting in search of information on Henn. Hence B would seem most appropriate per Wikipedia:WikiProject Australia/Assessment#Quality scale. Hesperian 02:02, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
Ah, I see.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 08:12, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

There's a Henn close in Winthrop, Western Australia since winthrop is associated with UWA I wonder whether HEnn close is named after Percy Henn. The question is where to find such information to provide a cite for its inclusion in the article. Gnangarra 08:10, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

I guess there would be a source in the UWA library... Seventy dot 03:55, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

Feel free to resubmit it if you think it qualifies. I don't review the same articles twice, see what someone else thinks.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 11:04, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

Though I must say the concerns I noted were more the enough reason to fail it, GA criteria 1 is "well written" and GA criteria 4 is NPOV, both of which were concerns I noted on my peer review. I would definitely address those if I were the one resubmitting it, just my two cents.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 11:06, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
When I reviewed the GACriteria, I didn't think NPOV was a problem... but I'm looking for any suggestion. Auroranorth (WikiDesk) 11:21, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
Those weasel words was all I noted...anyway, on that, mostly the prose was my concern, I have made a couple additional notes on the peer review. Like I said I won't be the one reviewing it next time (because I thnk articles get better and better the more eyes that look at them) but I am willing to point out anything I notice, I won't mess with geographic locales, promise, I'll just mention if something is confusing here or on the review page. : )A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 11:26, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

I am relisting the article for GA review. Auroranorth (WikiDesk) 11:26, 7 March 2007 (UTC)

This article falls outside the scope of this next release.  However, it will be automatically considered for later, larger releases. Walkerma 04:54, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

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OK, I have completed the suggestions shown here. Auroranorth (!) 10:55, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

This article is being brought to WP:GAR. Auroranorth (!) 11:08, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

It meets the criteria so it gets a pass, but there are a two things I would like to see work on:

Grammatical and MoS errors. I corrected as many as I saw going through, but keep an eye out for proper formatting and writing in this article.
It is a very short article. It doesn't appear to omit anything major, but I would definitely like to see more detailed content.
Good job. Let me know if there are any problems or questions. Dylan (talk) 05:58, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

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