# Talk:Terry Bywater

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 09:45, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article only needs a few fixes
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 
I've done a copy edit - revert anything you don't like.
B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
Can you use the medal templates for the Paralympics?
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Can we link Middlesbrough - Super League -  World Wheelchair Basketball Championship ?
 Done World Wheelchair Basketball Championships and Middlesbrough. Super League does not have an article. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 
Any idea what other European clubs he has played for?
After a hunt, I cannot find which ones. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
No worries. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:03, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Can you update it to include the 2012 Summer Paralympics?
Done. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

Is there any reason for using the dark blue in the infobox as in is difficult to read the black text on the dark blue. Keith D (talk) 15:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

I think the author wanted to reflect team GB's colour. Tried switching to a lighter shade of blue. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:41, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Much clearer - thanks. Keith D (talk) 19:00, 16 September 2012 (UTC)