# Talk:Ralph Stackpole

Well-written
Lead section
Add comma after Great depression in first sentence. In final sentence change "...in 1930-1931." to "...in 1930-1."
In the infobox, italicize LIFE magazine in photo caption.
Early career section
On the death of his dad in the first sentence in the opening paragraph, when did Stackpole's dad died? For the second sentence, what did Tackpole do with his life between 1901 and 1908?
In the lead sentence of the second paragraph, when did Stackpole return to San Francisco?
Also, what did Stackpole do between 1915 and 1923?
San Francisco section
Reword the first sentence of the first paragraph. It sound unclear. In the second sentence, add comma after subjects. Also in that sentence, why was Stackpole not supportive of female students?
For the people listed in the last sentence of the second paragraph, how long did each of them stay with Stackpole?
Also, what did Stackpole do in the 1940s before moving to France?
Personal life section
In the lead sentence of the second paragraph, what region is Puy-de-Dôme located in France?
Also, what did Stackpole do in France between 1949 and his 1973 passing?
Factually accurate and verifiable.
Use WP:CITET to get all links to standard.
Reference 13 is a deadlink. Please fix.
Broad in coverage.
No issues.
Neutral.
Focuses on the main issues of his artwork.
Stable.
Last edits were on 12 April 2010 though prior to that on 23 October 2009.
Images.
All five images listed are valid.
Overall.
Hold. Needs work, but can be done.
Reviewer: Chris (talk) 14:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I have been chugging through the article, making more changes than you asked for, and expanding it because I did not think it was thorough. Now, it's a lot better! It is ready again for your eye. Binksternet (talk) 17:51, 23 April 2010 (UTC)

Good job. It passed. Chris (talk) 18:32, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
Yay! Thanks for your patience, and for your eagle editor eye. Binksternet (talk) 20:40, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

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Was Stackpole married to artist, Hebe Daum? Does anyone know about this? Jooojay (talk) 19:27, 3 October 2019 (UTC)