# Talk:Percy Shaw Jeffrey

After a request on my talk page, I'm going to leave a few comments on what would, in my opinion, make the article B-Class:

Categories need to be better... right now, there's only the birth year and death year categories. There really should be others organizing be occupation, nationality, etc. See Category:People and its subcategories.  Done
WP:Persondata should probably be added.  Done
The lead is a bit short compared to the rest of the article.  Done, I think
A number of The Colcestrian references could use some clarifications, such as month and year of publication, author (if applicable), etc. The PDF reference could use an accessdate. Done
Once that's all fixed, I think that this definitely deserves to be B-Class. Hope the GA review goes well! -Drilnoth (talk) 21:24, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Good work there! A few of the The Colchestrian references could use some more clarification, but otherwise it looks good. -Drilnoth (talk) 14:33, 21 January 2009 (UTC)