# Talk:Treehouse of Horror XXV

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Reviewer: Johanna (talk · contribs) 02:41, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
Third on my "to review" list. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 02:41, 8 October 2015 (UTC)


### Comments from reviewer
In the image's caption, I would expand upon what it depicts?
Done '''tAD''' (talk) 09:28, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Why is the showrunner necessary for the infobox?
This seems to be the standard method for Simpsons episodes. See the Featured Articles Lisa the Vegetarian and Homer's Enemy. Even though this is necessarily a season rather than episode detail, some episodes are holdovers from the previous season, such as FA-Class Cape Feare, which was part of the Jean-Reiss season 4 production run but broadcast in David Mirkin's season 5 '''tAD''' (talk) 09:28, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
That's fine. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:39, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Add more from the production section into the lead.
Done (I can add more if more is needed) '''tAD''' (talk) 09:35, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
You have a duplicate link to Homer in the synopsis.
Done '''tAD''' (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
"The segment ends with the original version of Homer unsuccessfully trying to photograph a good portrait of the two families together, a direct homage to the short "Family Portrait" from The Tracey Ullman Show." How do we know this?
Removed as OR '''tAD''' (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
In Production, why is the first paragraph only one sentence long?
Paragraphs merged '''tAD''' (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
I would sprinkle in the EW ref maybe one more time throughout the para (after the direct quote perhaps)--it just makes things better for appearances.
Done '''tAD''' (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Duplicate links here include Stanley Kubrick and A Clockwork Orange (film) (from the lead) and Eyes Wide Shut (from the synopsis)
Done. As far as I know it is acceptable to have links repeated from the lead and image captions '''tAD''' (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Link to "Super Franchise Me" where you say "the previous week's episode."
Done (without WP:EGG) '''tAD''' (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Are these the only reviews you could find?
I can indeed look for more, although it's more about what they say rather than how many we have '''tAD''' (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
Put in a critical consensus sentence as well as things that critics tended to like and dislike about the episode.
Done '''tAD''' (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
@The Almightey Drill: Nice work! Just a few things to fix before I can pass. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 04:00, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

@The Almightey Drill: Good work! I'm satisfied enough to pass now. If you get a chance, could you review one of my Veronica Mars articles up at GAN. If you can't, it's okay. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:39, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: