# Talk:The Sting (The Office)

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 19:19, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

I think part of a subplot was Jim and Pam trying to figure out why Danny stopped dating her? It should be explained, as the plot currently references Dwight telling him off for his treatment of Pam without elaborating.
Elaborated.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Is there any information about how Olyphant got involved with the show? Did he ask to guest star or did they ask him?
Unfortunately, I couldn't find anything. I have a feel the show's writers just liked him, but I can't back that up.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Again a Cultural references suggestion: You should note Andy's band becomes a small story arc by itself, and note the episode where Robert California "steals" the band.
Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
"The episode's rating dropped 11 precent from the previous episode to its lowest ever fall telecast." -- Again here I think a reason for the ratings should be added.
I can't find a reason for this from the sources.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Also in the next sentence, which show beat out this one in the timeslot?
Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
One dup link in the article (Olyphant)
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Dab link tool returns no problems. All external links seem to be working. The article is illustrated by one image which seems to be properly licensed. There are no apparent problems with neutrality and stability.
Will await responses. —Ed!(talk) 19:33, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
Thank you very much for reviewing this. I believe I have addressed and/or fixed all the problems.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  04:23, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
Great work. Passing the article. —Ed!(talk) 10:54, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

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