# Talk:Toyohashi Station


### Toyohashi Station
I've listed this article for peer review because I just wanted to double check the prose conciseness and flow before sending it to GAN.
Thanks, AlphaBetaGamma  (Talk/report any mistakes here)  13:14, 22 June 2025 (UTC)


#### Comments from Z1720
Please note that articles usually do not have an "Overview" section, because that is what the lead of an article does. I suggest moving this information to more appropriate parts of the article or renaming the section. Take a look at other good articles on rail stations for inspiration on what sections to have in the article. Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 26 June 2025 (UTC)


#### Comments
Here'll be some of my comments. Arconning (talk) 16:43, 27 June 2025 (UTC)

"from 5:37 a.m. to 11:44 p.m", add a note specifying which time zone.
"between 6:40 a.m. and 11:30 p.m.,", here as well
"5:53 a.m. to 11:41 p.m.", here again.
"operated by JR Central.", since this is the first mention within the body it should be wikilinked.
"which, as the name suggests,", is this wording directly in the source?
Considering the name is Toyohashi Station and is located in it, the station's location should be sourced within the body as well as it's not.


#### Comments
I fixed some grammar issues, and reworded a few pieces. I also cut the station layout part out of the introduction, because it’s a little too in the weeds for an introduction, and it is so clearly explained in its own section later in the article. Personally I think it’s a lot smoother that way, but that’s one thing you might want to change back if you feel strongly about it.Overall a really solid job though Absurdum4242 (talk) 15:42, 9 July 2025 (UTC)


#### Comments from Icepinner
@AlphaBetaGamma: Just some basic comments. On a side note, I would greatly appreciate comments from anyone on Istana Park's Peer Review, regardless if you have experience in parks or not. Icepinner (formerly Imbluey2). Please ping me so that I get notified of your response  02:15, 11 July 2025 (UTC)

The coordinates in the infobox needs to have a citation, preferably from Japan's geographic database if possible (though at this stage it's acceptable to use Google Maps iirc)
Would like to see "Tōkaidō Main Line" used consistently with its diacritical marks per WP:DGUIDE
have fiercely competed I feel like "fiercely" can be omitted under WP:IMPARTIAL. If there's suitable consensus of "fiercely" being acceptable in this context then I don't mind
For the station numbering part in the history section, what about NH 01?
The bus terminal near this station seems to have a name, it's "Toyohashi Station Bus Center"
Would suggest adding platforms 9-10 to the platform diagram
Is it possible to wikilink "detention line" or explain it (though is it considered common knowledge? Don't think it's documented for Singapore)?