# Talk:The Girls of the Ghetto

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:17, 29 May 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for all the annoying notifications the GA bot is giving you... JAGUAR  17:17, 29 May 2015 (UTC)
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### Checking against GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
Nothing on the Production in the lead?
The Cast section is unique for these 1910 films. It's also very short, if you want to ever take this further I would recommend merging it into prose
" but the "Thanhouser Kid" Marie Eline and Anna Rosemond are known credits" - should that be "Tanhouser Kids"?
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

If anyone thinks I'm rubber stamping these, I'm not. These are well researched GAs taking in account it's over 100 years old JAGUAR  19:23, 30 May 2015 (UTC)