# Talk:There Goes My Baby (Usher song)

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)


### Lead
The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"
Done.
While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.
Done
favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video
Done. Candyo32


### Composition
was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?
Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.


### Chart performance
solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward
Done
since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?
The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."
a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?
By him, changed.


### Music video
screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol
Confused at what you are getting at lol.
while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded
Done.


### Live performances
You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.
Done. Candyo32 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)
Good work, very few mistakes :)--CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  17:40, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
Looks good. I'm passing.--CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  20:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)