# Talk:Brunei at the 2012 Summer Olympics

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Brunei at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: DatGuy (talk · contribs) 11:45, 18 February 2017 (UTC)


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Great job on this one. Dat GuyTalkContribs 13:38, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
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Second review! Dat GuyTalkContribs 11:45, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
Thank you very much for the review DatGuy. I have taken action on the above points where appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 07:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
Additional comments (as the second opinion):
From:Brunei, officially as Brunei Darussalam,
To: Brunei, officially known as Brunei Darussalam,

 Done MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
I'll leave this between you two, but it is known as track and field pretty much only in the United States. Otherwise it is known as athletics.

Changed to athletics. MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
The punctuation in this sentence is not correct: The Brunei delegation included two track and field athletes: Ak Hafiy Tajuddin Rositi and Maziah Mahusin, and one swimmer, Anderson Lim.

 Done MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
Typo here: Mahusin was the flag bearer for the opening ceremonywhile

Fixed MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
Is this sentence relevant for the background?:  Brunei competed in the London Summer Games from 27 July to 12 August 2012

I believe it to be so. MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
Capitalize games:  qualified for the games

 Done MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
All the other criteria seem to be met.

@Kees08: May I ask if there are any other issues that need to be rectified? MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
I am good, you can ask @DatGuy: if he has anything else. Kees08 (talk) 19:54, 24 February 2017 (UTC)


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