# Talk:Hurricane Raymond (1989)

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For the most part, this article has everything the project demands for GA.  The writing is quite good.  However, I see two issues.  The first has to do with Raymond's path within the United States.  The article states that the low moved into Illinois, while the reference used mentioned that the surface low dissipated in New Mexico, with its remnant circulation aloft tracking through the Midwest.  The text in the article needs to correspond with reference 12.  Otherwise, it's missing the standard line about the name Raymond not being retired, and when the name was used in the future.  Once these issues are fixed, I'll pass the article.
Reviewer: Thegreatdr (talk) 19:19, 28 October 2009 (UTC)

Julian has resolved the first issue.  The second issue needs to be addressed for GA passage.  Thegreatdr (talk) 21:21, 29 October 2009 (UTC)
Sorry for the late response but I've addressed the other issue with the lack of retirement now. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:38, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
Okay.  I'm passing the article.  Thegreatdr (talk) 06:02, 1 November 2009 (UTC)