# Talk:Greece in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:11, 22 April 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020.

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"which was to be held in Rotterdam, Netherlands." - a word missing between the words "was" and "to" can be either scheduled or due
"ERT has stated Stefania will instead represent Greece at the 2021 Contest." - the word in bold does not need to start with a capital letter


### Background
"Following the introduction of semi-finals for the 2004," - 2004 contest
Wikilink 2018 contest to the relevant article and the year 2019 to Eurovision Song Contest 2019
The final two sentences of the first paragraph lack reliable source(s)
resulting in the renaming of NERIT to ERT; ERT began broadcasting once again on 11 June 2015." - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
"The Greek broadcaster has used various methods to select the Greek entry in the past," - nation's
The entire third paragraph in this section requires reliable source(s) to verify the information contained within it
"From 2010 through 2017," - sounds awfully AmEng, how about to?


### Internal selection
"the Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT) announced" - the full name isn't needed since it is mentioned in the previous subsection; just the mention of the acryonms will suffice


### At Eurovision
"On 28 January 2020, the allocation draw was held," - how about adding where exactly the allocation draw was held?
"Fokas Evangelinos was hired to organize" - should be organise since it is a European contest
"choreography for the performance.[11][2]" - refs in numerical order please
"with Stefania for the next contest in 2021." - Wikilink the text in bold to Eurovision Song Contest 2021


### Alternative song contests
"Austria's ORF aired" - broadcast is more formal
"the best-placed in each semi-final advanced to the final round." - best-placed entry or best-placed country


### References
References 2 and 12 is missing the publisher of the article
Reference 4 is missing the agency who provided the story to Deutsche Welle
References 8 and 11 are missing the dates the articles were published
Reference 9 is missing the author, publication date and the title should be in the language it was written with the English translation in the trans-title= field
The title of Reference 12 should be in the language it was written and the English translation in the trans-title= field
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 12:19, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

@MWright96: I've made all the changes you've requested, except I've swapped out the DW source with an alternative and reworded the last paragraph of the Background section to avoid wp:synthesis issues. Grk1011 (talk) 16:55, 22 April 2020 (UTC)
@Grk1011: Now promoting to GA class. I've archived one link that was dead and referenced an unverified portion of text in the article. MWright96 (talk) 17:14, 22 April 2020 (UTC)
Awesome, thanks! Grk1011 (talk) 17:20, 22 April 2020 (UTC)