# Talk:Halt im Gedächtnis Jesum Christ, BWV 67

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

I'm going to take up all four cantatas you have listed at GAN, not sure why they are having to wait so long. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead
Jakob Ebert" hymn Did you mean "Ebert's" or something else?
Wikilink movement, chorale (at first mention) and may be a few other terms readers may be unfamiliar with
yes --GA
History and words
in general whose heart is not at peace I think a comma after "general" would make it clearer.
yes --GA
A link for movement?
if you think so --GA
Jesus appears as to his disciples What is "as to his" here?
trying "as he did to his disciples" --GA
Music
structured in symmetry in seven sections Saying "symmetrically" would avoid the "in...in..." structure.
yes --GA
is accompanied by an obbligato...by an upward run. Don't leave this unsourced.
run sourced, while the oboe is taken from the table higher up, which is sourced to Bischof --GA
I could not get "woodwinds" at first, perhaps add a link? Unless I know too little of this field...
if you think so --GA
Selected recordings
The sortable table Add "following" or "below"
added "below", removed "sortable" because some users can't sort --GA
That is all from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:10, 11 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you so much for reading four of them! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:13, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
Happy to promote. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:52, 13 June 2016 (UTC)