# Talk:Lou Daukas

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 00:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added sportspeople from Nashua cat. I know he is already in the baseball one, but he should be in both until a football one is made. Also added army, St. John's University School of Law alumni and American lawyer cats
Link fort warren WY?
Linked.
Probably couldn't find stats for his college career, right? Being a center and from the 40s, I don't really expect any.
Wasn't able to find any.
"Eastern College Football All-Star team which" comma after team
Done.
That's all I think. Very nice work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:34, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Also, I suggest archiving the ebay source for the image because that is not going to last. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:37, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
Archived. @WikiOriginal-9:. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:18, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work!  WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:18, 22 October 2023 (UTC)