# Talk:Constantin Al. Ionescu-Caion

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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 14:11, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

"Symbolist" links to an article describing the art movement
Which it should. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
"Caion prioritized scandal, accusing Caragiale" - perhaps. "Caion prioritized a scandal, in which he accused Caragiale..." reads better imho
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
What is a "celebrity trial"?
What it says - a court trial where a celebrity is involves.
"Despite his own flirtations with nationalism," - the underlined word is essay-like and should be replaced
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
" Caion focused his verve on the nationalist literary current in " - how about "his verve on the Transylvanian contemporary nationalist literary"
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
"Caion became a figure of infamy and ridicule in the Romanian context," - repetition of "figure", perhaps "Caion was equated with infamy and ridicule", or something similar
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
" under various pseudonyms: C. A. I. Nică Burduşel, Ion Filionescu, Marin Gelea, Isac Şt. Micu, Roman Muşat etc.[1]" - suggest removal of "etc" and simply state "under various pseudonyms, such as ..."
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
Should "Mage" be in lowercase?
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
The usage of etc is not professional imho
 Done - replaced Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
"Under contract with Adevărul's publishing house" - redundant
 Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
"sciolistic amateur.[44]" - socialistic?
It means sciolistic Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
There are far too many red links, distracting the reader
Red links are permitted under the good article criteria and they are only used where there could be a future article on it. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
--Tomcat (7) 13:06, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

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