# Talk:Mac Marcoux

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Reviewer: NickGibson3900 (talk · contribs) 05:29, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs)
I'll take this one. NickGibson3900 Talk Sign my Guestbook Contributions 04:16, 31 August 2014 (UTC)


### Lead/Userbox
Haviland Bay, Ontario should be wikilinked to the area Haviland Bay is in Ontario. I searched google and found no results of Haviland Bay so a wiki article isn't warranted. Or you could just link Ontario and leave Haviland Bay black.
I believe that red links are permitted in WP:GAC
@TheQ Editor: Yes you are aloud to link to titles that could have an article. However Haviland Bay is not-notable so red links aren't aloud. NickGibson3900 Talk 06:38, 1 September 2014 (UTC)


### Personal life
Should just say Marcoux at the start in line with the para-alpine career section (or vice-versa)
 Done
Haviland Bay, Ontario should be wikilinked to the area Haviland Bay is in Ontario. I searched google and found no results of Haviland Bay so a wiki article isn't warranted. Or you could just link Ontario and leave Haviland Bay black.
same as above. It is not necessary.
"Ever since then, his bother B.J. has been his sighted guide using radio communication; something they had never used before." - incorrect Femy has also been his guide.
 Done rephrased to avoid confusion.

In the last sentence the refs at the end should be: before.[5][6] not before. [5] [6]
 Done


### Para-Alpine career
Marcoux is classified as B3 (visually impaired) athlete - needs to be "...classified as a B3..."
He won a bronze medal in the Downhill and another in Super-G, and gold in the Giant Slalom by over two seconds. - I think it should be "He won bronze in both the Downhill and the Super-G, as well as a gold in the Giant Slalom by over two seconds." - this is to make it flow better


### Images
I have replaced File:Home_of_Marcoux_Brothers_2.JPG with File:Home of Marcoux Brothers 3.JPG - however, the caption doesn't make sense Sault Ste. Marie???
 Done I gave wikilinked to Sault Ste. Marie. apparently there's one in Pennsylvania and one in Ontario. Is it better now?  ΤheQ Editor  Talk? 18:25, 31 August 2014 (UTC)


### Other
Please add link to commons category Marc Marcoux
I don't understand what this is and how to do it, can you please explain to me how? Thanks!  ΤheQ Editor  Talk? 18:26, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
@TheQ Editor: Go to this page I work on. See the box at the bottom right. Commons also has a Mac Marcoux category. NickGibson3900 Talk Sign my Guestbook Contributions 05:52, 1 September 2014 (UTC)


### Decision
Putting On hold until above are addressed. NickGibson3900 Talk Sign my Guestbook Contributions 05:17, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
@NickGibson3900: I have addressed the above issues.  ΤheQ Editor  Talk? 18:26, 31 August 2014 (UTC)

@NickGibson3900: All done!  ΤheQ Editor  Talk? 23:08, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
Nice work. Pass. NickGibson3900 Talk 05:33, 2 September 2014 (UTC)

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