# Talk:Karen O'Connor

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:38, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
Comments

Not convinced you need "in the sport of ", just "in three day eventing"
First para, could mix up the "she..." with the odd "O'Connor" just to prevent the repetitive "She... she... she..."
Caption needs no full stop, nor a repeat of her first name.
Put (USEA) after "United States Eventing Association" so when you use the abbreviation, it's unambiguous what you mean.
Did you mean Connemara pony instead of Connemara?
Worth explaining what a CCI3* (etc) event means for non-experts?
"CCI2-4*" ->"CCI2–4*"
Mainly trivial, a nice article which I'll put on hold pending the resolution of the above. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:50, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for the review! I believe I have addressed all of your comments above. Dana boomer (talk) 19:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

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