# Talk:Mal Benning

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Avoid single-sentence paras.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
The end of the first sentence and beginning of the second sentence are somewhat repetitive, about his position.
Removed the first instance.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"moved to left-back" link that position first time in main body.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"joined Southern League club" maybe clarify this was non-League?
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
We have an article about professional football I think which could be linked.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"he was offered his first professional contract " vs "signed his first professional deal" so did he reject the first offer?
That's strange, we'll go with the BBC source.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
" the 2012–13 season" put season inside the pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"15 starts and three" 15/3 or fifteen/three.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"as the "Stags" posted" that nickname is not explained nor intuitive.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"was sent off in" link.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"newly appointed" hyphen.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"2018–19 season" season inside pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"in fourth-place" no hyphen.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"the play-offs despite" link specific.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"converting his penalty" link.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
No need to link Mexico.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
" the 2019–20 season" season inside pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"21st on points per game" find a good link for PPG.
Did the closest I could find.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"the 2020–21 season" season inside pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"represent India in August" perhaps "the India national team"?
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
"attacking left-back, who is also " overlinked although to a different target.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Scorelines in ref titles should use en-dash, not hyphen.
Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
That's about all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:24, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

OKay thank you, I have addressed those points.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)