# Talk:Niebla Roja

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:38, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
Shall be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 12:38, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Professional wresting career
"Sergio Chávez and his younger Miguel," - replace the text in bold to younger brother
"better known under the ring name Ángel de Oro" - a comma is needed after this piece of text
"The feud led both Chávez to work for International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG) on opposite sides, but Sergio broke his arm in early 2008 and did not compete for eight months." - are we also refering to his brother? If so, he needs to be mentioned in this sentence.


### Ángel de Plata (2008–2012)
"In Durango he feuded with his younger brother, in a feud that was so well received by the crowd that both his brother and he received an invitation" - replace the text in bold to the sibilings
"to complement his brothers" - brother's
"The duo made their CMLL debut on July 4, 2008 wrestling as a team dubbed Los Angeles Celestiales ("The Celestial Angels")" - a full stop needs to be inserted to end this sentence
"In late 2009 Los Ángeles Celestiales participated in a tournament to crown new Mexican National Trios Champion." - to crown a new
"The team lost in the first round to Los Cancerberos del Infierno (Virus, Pólvora and Euforia" - the closing bracket is missing at the end of this section of text
"On the January 15, 2010 Super Viernes Ángel de Plata" - change the text in bold to January 15, 2010 per MOS:DATEFORMAT


### Niebla Roja (2012–present)
"Niebla Roja competed in CMLL's first ever" - inaugural is more formal in this instance
"but did not qualify for the semi-final part of the tournament." - remove part of the touranment since it is already established it was a tournament beforehand
"Niebla Roja was forced to team up with Dragón Rojo, Jr. from the rival Los Revolucionarios del Terror "rival" group" - reptition of rival


### Hermanos Chávez (2017–present)
"In the spring of 2017 CMLL" - Spring of 2017 is not appropriate. It should be In March 2017,
"with his fellow Los Guerreros Laguneros team mates" - teammates is one word
"and state his legal name;" - a colon is more appropriate here
"successfully defended the lght heavyweight championship" - typo; light
"In the fall of 2018 Niebla Roja" - In late 2018, Niebla Roja per MOS:SEASON
"facing each other repeatedly as Rey Bucanero often cheated to get the upper hand in their rivalry." - gain supremacy


### References
References 1  are missing the authors of their respective articles
Reference 2 is a redirect and requires the addition of an archive link to its original link
References 5 and 6 are to the same link and one of them needs to be deleted
References 19 and 23 are dead and need archiving
Reference 34 needs to be formatted properly
Cagematch should not be captalized in Reference 35
That is all I've got. Some work will be required before it can attain GA status. MWright96 (talk) 13:26, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the great feedback, it is helping make this a much stronger article and I appreciate your detailed feedback. I have addressed the references issues and will work on the rest now. MPJ-DK (talk) 23:20, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
And I've addressed the copy editing issues as well. I believe I've addressed all conserns. MPJ-DK (talk) 23:28, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
@MPJ-DK: Alright then. Am now able to promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:54, 7 December 2018 (UTC)