# Talk:Josh Weinstein

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:07, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:07, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"Weinstein and Bill Oakley became best friends and writing partners at St. Albans high school;" High School should be capitalized.
"Weinstein was born and raised in Washington D.C.," no comma needed.
"For season six they wrote "Sideshow Bob Roberts", basing much of the second" second what? only one episode is noted in this sentence if thats what you meant.
"For season six they wrote "Sideshow Bob Roberts", basing much of the second on the Watergate scandal, in which they had a great interest.[19] They wrote "Grampa vs. Sexual Inadequacy",[20] and "Bart vs. Australia"." the second sentence just seems to kinda hang; combining the two would be beneficial.
I'd chop the writer section into two paragraphs since it's pretty long.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:42, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I believe I have fixed these issues. Thanks for the review. Gran2 15:55, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:11, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

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