# Talk:Jackie Slater

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

Mind expanding the lead a bit? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Maybe mention his coaching career? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Where was Slater born and were did he go to school? on Pluto? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
" Payton often played with a injured elbow." change "a" to "an". YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
"He was a letterman in football and was selected to the Southwestern Athletic Conference All-Star Game three times, and as a senior, he was a First-team All–Black America selection, and was named an All-American selection by the Pittsburgh Courier. After his senior season, he was invited to participate in the College All-Star Game." source? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
"In 1980 he" comma before "he". YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
"Slater was considered by critics the most consistent lineman on one of the best offensive lines in the NFL, which also included Pro Bowlers Kent Hill and Dennis Harrah and was regonized for his "work ethnic and leadership skills" when he was inducted to the Hall of Fame.[4][5] He retired after the 1995 season when injuries reduced him to playing one game the entire year." source? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
"Azusa Pacific was its final year as an NAIA Independent when Slater first started and transitioned to NCAA Division II in 2012." I am a college conference junkie and 1) source this and 2) note that they play in the Pacific West Conference. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Otherwise, it's fine. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:33, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Fixed it all. Thanks Secret account 02:53, 26 March 2014 (UTC)