# Talk:Juan Bielovucic

The information is incorrect. The first pilot to fly crossed the Alps was Geo Chavez  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.65.60.16 (talk) 14:33, 24 November 2010 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Juan Bielovucic Cavalié/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 00:33, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Hey Tomobe, I'll be glad to take this one. Comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. Thanks as always for your contributions; I'll be looking forward to reading it. Khazar2 (talk) 00:33, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
As usual, I've made some tweaks and small fixes as I went. I only see a few small issues on my initial pass that I couldn't immediately resolve--let me know your thoughts:

"Most sources refer to him as Jean or Juan Bielovucic, while others refer to him as Juan or Jean Bielovucic Cavalié. In Croatia he is known as Ivan Bjelovučić." -- this should probably be in the body of the article somewhere rather than the lead.
"and the Pacific Ocean" -- this makes it sound as if he crossed it-- is there a way to phrase this better ("part of the Pacific Ocean"? "a bit of the..."?)


### Checklist
Thank you very much for taking up the review. I tried to address your concerns. Could you please revisit those parts of the article to see if the new development is satisfactory?--Tomobe03 (talk) 21:43, 18 October 2013 (UTC)

Yep, that does it--thanks for the quick response. -- Khazar2 (talk) 22:50, 18 October 2013 (UTC)

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