# Talk:HMS Emperor of India

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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 02:36, 10 March 2015 (UTC)

Well-written: The article complies with MOS policies on grammar, structure and layout. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 05:00, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct
(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation
Verifiable with no original research: No signs of original research; the article has a comfortable quantity of published sources that it makes frequent citations to. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 06:03, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline
(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)
(c) it contains no original research
Broad in its coverage: The article seems to cover all relevant aspects of its topic, for which reliable encyclopedic information was readily available. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 06:01, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style)
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. The article's text shows no signs of bias towards or against its subject. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 06:01, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. The revision history indicates that the article has not been subjected to disruptive editing for at least 5 years. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 17:27, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: The article is well-illustrated; the images all serve a useful purpose. Most of them are public domain, all are accepted by the Wikimedia Commons due to their licensing, so there is no fair use violation. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 17:28, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content
(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions


### Comments
World War I; paragraph 3 - This is the first mention of "Jellicoe" in the article, in reading order; judged by the bibliography I presume John Jellicoe is the man this line identifies. Oughtn't his name and position on the ship be stated in this sentence as well? One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 06:08, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
The same principle of identification should be applied to "Scheer", mentioned in paragraph 5 of the same section. One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 06:11, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
Yeah, sometimes when I'm writing these things, I forget not everyone knows who Jellicoe and Scheer are ;) Thanks for catching those. Parsecboy (talk) 11:50, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
@Wilhelmina Will: - was there anything else you'd like me to fix? Parsecboy (talk) 20:45, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
I'm so sorry; I've been enduring a considerably severe case of burnout, in a quantity of fields. No, aside from the above, everything in the article looks fine to me; I'll get this wrapped up accordingly now. :) One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 04:56, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
 With the above issue/s addressed, and the criteria checked, I am satisfied that this article qualifies for GA status. Congratulations! One hand on the mouse, one hand on the keyboard... and the feet can do the rest! Hee-hee! (talk) 05:02, 30 March 2015 (UTC)