# Talk:HMS Ajax (1912)

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:26, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

No DAB links Y
No Copyvio Y
No Dead links Y

"King George V class was powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines, " perhaps "ships of the King George V class were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines," or else simply the King George Vs were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines.
"By April 1917, the 4-inch guns had been removed from the hull casemates as they were frequently unusable in heavy seas." Might wish to add in salutary in front of "4 inch guns".
They weren't saluting guns.
"and was reduced to reserve" perhaps "and was put into the reserve fleet".
"Placed in" works better, IMO.
That's all my suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:45, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:52, 30 March 2017 (UTC)