# Talk:Nicolas Aubé-Kubel

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:05, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


### Review
WL sophomore slump in the lead
Please add and reference his bday in the early life section
I think it is odd to begin a sentence with 2015–16. Can it be changed to the 2015–16 season?
Same with 2016–17
I don't know if you can say His season output was considered a disappointment by many when the reference is just one guy (Dougherty).
Similar to my last review, please remove nhl.com from refs
Please move reference 24 to after the comma on on to beat the Checkers in the division finals. I don't see why it needs to be at the end
HickoryOughtShirt?4 I believe everything has been addressed, I changed the "disappointment by many" to His performance was more modest than it had been during his junior hockey career,, which I think is a more fair/objective assessment. Kncny11 (shoot) 20:24, 22 June 2021 (UTC)

Kncny11, passing, good job! I would take D'Angello but I don't know if I wish to wade through all of that, sorry.HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:32, 22 June 2021 (UTC)