# Talk:John I Orsini

This review is transcluded from Talk:John I Orsini/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:23, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
Will take on all three related articles. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:23, 5 February 2023 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y
Passes spot checks Y


### Discussion
### Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.


#### Life
who in turn was the son of Count Matthew Orsini It may be useful to add a qualifier here, that this is generally thought, per the discussion at Richard Orsini that Matthew might have been his grandfather, but this might be too far off-topic to include.
@Cplakidas: That is my only suggestion, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:58, 5 February 2023 (UTC)