# Talk:King's University College, University of Western Ontario

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  18:37, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
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Linkrot: No linkrot found in this article.


### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
"The school was founded in 1954, first began holding classes in 1955" - unnecessary comma. The school was founded in 1954 and first began holding classes in 1955
Fixed --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
"It is affiliated with St. Peter's Seminary and the University of Western Ontario in London, Ontario, Canada" - this should be merged into the second paragraph, so the lead comprises of two paragraphs
Thanks, re-worded --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
Mission section is unnecessary. You could easily collapse it into a note?
Removed --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
The Founding of the college section contains many choppy sentences which should be merged together to create paragraphs. Also, a lot of it is unsourced
Thanks, re-worded and removed unsourced content --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
Name change section is unsourced. And who are the UWO?
Thanks, re-worded and added citations --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
"King's University College is situated in the city of London, Ontario, located in the southwestern end of the Quebec City – Windsor Corridor. The university college is located adjacent to the Thames River, across from the Richmond Gates of University of Western Ontario. The majority of the campus is surrounded by residential neighbourhoods, with Epworth Ave bisecting the campus." - needs a citation
Added a ctiation --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
The majority of the Academic facilities section needs to be sourced
Thanks, added citations --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
The first paragraph of the Housing and student facilities section reads like original research and is not verifable
Removed --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
Academics and notable people section are completely unsourced. I couldn't find anything to back it up
Thanks, re-worded and added citations --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

I'm so sorry to do this, but the article is suffering from many sourcing issues which prevents this from meeting the GA criteria. It is a requirement that every claim should be backed up by a verifiable reference, and I couldn't see any in this case. Most of the references are also not formatted correctly. Please let me know if you have any questions, and of course I'll be happy to review this again. JAGUAR  19:24, 4 December 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thank you for the review. I've made an attempt to address everything, could you please take a look? I have reworded paragraphs, removed unsourced content while adding citations and updating the reference format. --Kjp993 (talk) 03:04, 18 December 2016 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:King's University College (University of Western Ontario)/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
No missing citations N:
The department also collects used ink toners from on-campus photocopiers and printers, and also accepts household printer cartridges that are then appropriately recycled.
The installation began generating electricity in February 2011.
The solar panel system was expanded an additional 10 kW with the installation of solar panels on the roof of Labatt Hall.
By virtue of King's affiliation with St. Peter's Seminary, Master of Theological Studies and Master of Divinity degrees are also offered.
Social Work (in the Undergraduate program section)
In 2005 nearly 50 graduates of CultureWorks attended King's.
@Kjp993: I will be placing the review on hold until the citation issues are dealt with. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:54, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
@Iazyges: I have updated citations or removed the offending content. Kjp993 (talk) 16:30, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
@Kjp993: You'll have to re-nominate it, I failed it since I didn't think you were coming back. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:26, 29 June 2018 (UTC)


### Prose Suggestions
This review is transcluded from Talk:King's University College (University of Western Ontario)/GA3. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:13, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:13, 3 July 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y


### Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

Upon completion, this new building was to house about one hundred men and become the cornerstone of the new College. suggest:
Upon completion, this new building was to house about one hundred men and be the cornerstone of the new College.
@Kjp993: That is my only suggestion; passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:51, 5 July 2018 (UTC)