# Talk:Johnny Fripp

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Copying notes from the GA review:

Could you find anything on his high school career? Did he play football or anything?
Added a little bit and a quote.
What's the Dominion Championships? The article makes it sound like going to the Olympics is a downgrade.
Looks like it might have been the national championship? Should I try to add that in with a source? I did re-word it a bit.
It would probably be helpful to explain what it is if possible? Do you think it's worthy of a quick stub? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:21, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: I added a note explaining it (I don't feel like writing an article on it right now...) – does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:37, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
"competed against American and Austrian professionals" Those are both linked but Canadisn isn't linked in the lead and Americans is earlier in the body but not linked?
I removed the links.
"professionals and placed " A lot of ands here. Suggest changing to "professionals, placing"
Changed.
The "Montreal team" is the Montreal Bulldogs.
Added.
"Baz O'Meara claimed he was ineligible to play due to" should we change it to "play as an amateur"?
Changed.
"re-joined the Ottawa Rough Riders" remove ottawa
Removed.
"before retiring from football" doesnt technically say he "retired"
Re-worded.
Why is he in the QB cat? Is that the flying wing?
To be honest, I have no idea, lol. I removed it.
lol ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:21, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
"He played the flying wing position" i dont see in ref four where it sayd that unless you are using PFA but thats not what is cited. Where did you get "back" from in the infobox"?
I cited PFA. Also changed 'back' to 'halfback', something that is mentioned in the article.
"but left before the season start" The season had already started
Reworded.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:47, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: Responded to everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
That all looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:06, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Nominated. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)