# Talk:Mississippi Highway 308

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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Claiming for today. SounderBruce 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Comments
"United States" (or an abbreviation) should be worked into the first sentence
Fine. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
A mention of the county (and its rural nature) should appear
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"North" and "east of Dubbs" should be moved further apart; perhaps like this: "It then turned north near the community of Dubbs" and ended at MS 4 near White Oak.
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Put the gravel road before its designation (as I assume this is chronological).
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"All of the route" would sound better as "The entire route"
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"the intersection" should be "an intersection"
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"travels" should be "traveled", unless you're talking about the current road, in which case it should be spelled out ("Dubbs Road travels")
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Unincorporated community sounds more human
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"at its intersection" should be "at an intersection"
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
"as a gravel road" should be "using an existing gravel road within Tunica County connecting US 61 to MS 4"
Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Who maintains the roads now?
Added. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
References check out, but I would love something from a non-DOT/map source.
Newspapers.com showed nothing. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
That's it. Good work. SounderBruce 13:50, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

I tried my best. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Looks good to go. Passing. SounderBruce 14:29, 19 October 2018 (UTC)