# Talk:Lady Apache

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lady Apache/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 14:31, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy. 
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 
Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.


### Immediate Failures
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -


### Links
### Prose
#### Lede
Do we need to link Mexican? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:40, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
González's ring name comes from the "family name" of Mario Balbuena González who wrestled under the name Gran Apache; whom she was married to when she made her wrestling debut in 1986, but later divorced. - I'd move this down, and explain a bit better, it's a bit confusing. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:40, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
First paragraph is about the lineage, rather than what they are notable for. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:40, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
Infobox is full of citations, most could be in prose. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:40, 4 October 2020 (UTC)


#### General
Mexico City, Mexico[1] - missing punct. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
ring name Gran Apache. - reword to avoid SEAOFBLUE. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
career, and married - remove comma. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
Electroshock / Mr. Electro - could we write this in prose rather than like this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
No images at all in this article? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
Could we explain what Luchas de Apuestas is in that section? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
Is there nothing we could use for a professional wrestling persona section? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)


### GA Review
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 14:31, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
Mostly issues with the lede, which needs tightening up. Placing on hold. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:44, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
I don't really have good sources on her ring persona, not enough to build a whole section IMO. I have addressed the rest I think. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:20, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
That's a shame - hopefully in the future there will be a bit more on this. Otherwise, I'm happy to promote. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:08, 10 October 2020 (UTC)