# Talk:Lurie Children's Hospital

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
It is reasonably well written.
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### Lead
Since the lead is a summary of the article and refs should only be used for contentious subjects, can the 360 beds reference be moved to the body?
Please wikilink U.S.News & World Report


### History
References 13 & 14 don't support sentence
Can some of these one-sentence lines be connected into a paragraph?
Wikilink Ray Kroc
In 2006, hospital administration had announced plans to build an entirely new children's hospital closer to downtown Chicago and closer to the campus of their academic affiliate, Northwestern University. needs a reference
Also, I suggest merging it with the 2008 sentence since it seems odd to jump from the 1980s to late 2000s
Please merge On June 9, 2012, the hospital moved from their old campus to its current location in Streeterville, in a coordinated move of 200 children that took over 10 hours with The hospital also changed its name to Ann & Robert H. Lurie Children's Hospital of Chicago & Ann Lurie stuff paragraph
reference 46 doesn't mention the Fire Department
Fix reference 61
Wikilink COVID-19 pandemic
May, December, and 2021 can be one paragraph


### About
Remove the external link and Wikilink U.S.News & World Report instead


#### Ronald McDonald House
The history section can probably be one paragraph
Please Wikilink Black Lives Matter
Also, remove HealthLeaders as the author of reference 93


### References
Please ensure that all references linking to a newspaper are cited as Cite news not Cite web (such as reference 1)
Please ensure consistency with dates in references (ie. reference 95 says 11 April 2020 while nearly all the others are 2021-01-17)
Reference 17, 18 need website name
Reference 34 needs the author

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