# Talk:Hose's broadbill

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 21:39, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

@AryKun: Reading now! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 21:39, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
and a lack of black markings on the head – "and lack black markings"?
Corrected.
due to its a moderately rapid decline – "a" too much?
Removed "its" instead since I think it reads better that way.
is in honour of the British zoologist Charles Hose. – You know why? Did he collect the holotype specimen?
Yes, added this info in the lead and body.
The species can be differentiated from other Calyptomena by its blue underparts. – Do they also live in Borneo? Maybe worth mentioning earlier?
Yes, added.
It has been recorded eating soft, greyish-yellow berries – this seems somewhat nebulous. Maybe name at least the group of plants this refers to?
Source doesn't mention it. Presumably they were seen eating berries of this description during a survey or such, and the those conducting the survey weren't able to identify the plant and so instead provided a description.
Clutches have 2–4 eggs. – What about egg color, size, and shape? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
No idea, no source mentions it and I've dug through pretty much all the available literature. AryKun (talk) 08:42, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Jens Lallensack, I've replied to all your concerns. AryKun (talk) 04:33, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
Thanks. The rest looks all good, solid work as always. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 07:35, 10 August 2022 (UTC)