# Talk:Olympic Tower

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)


### Comments
Move "Use" templates below the hatnote.
Add alt text to every image being used.
"the most dense" → "the densest"
"a wind blew" - is the "a" necessary?
Don't use colons in the sentence starting with "Law firm".
Capitalize "President" before Corazon Aquino.
Wikilink The New York Times, John Tierney (journalist), Mimi Sheraton, Bill Geist, and Sarah Lyall.


### Progress
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:05, 9 July 2021 (UTC)