# Talk:Constantine Doukas (usurper)

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Reviewer: Ucucha 17:58, 23 July 2010 (UTC)
This is generally good, but there a couple of minor problems. I think the lead is rather dense; perhaps use some more words to explain things more clearly. Near the end of the article, the words "leading to the virtual extinction of this branch of the Doukai" seem vague: why "virtually" extinct (who survived?)? what is "this branch"? Ucucha 17:58, 23 July 2010 (UTC)

I tweaked things around, I think it is clearer now. Anything else? Constantine   ✍  22:06, 24 July 2010 (UTC)
No; I'll pass the article. Ucucha 05:27, 25 July 2010 (UTC)

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