# Talk:Louis Adrian

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Nominator: Dumelow (talk · contribs) 20:58, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:06, 19 October 2025 (UTC)

I'll take this one, comments to follow. Zawed (talk) 08:06, 19 October 2025 (UTC)
Lead

link military logistics
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:42, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
This included a metal skull cap to be worn under the kepi. Adrian developed the latter into the Adrian helmet,...: I think that the latter here is the metal skull cap, but I think it should be "former" because the "latter" would be the kepi.
I removed "latter" and just named "skull cap" again - Dumelow (talk) 09:42, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Early career

link German Empire
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:42, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Pipe link Lycée Descartes (Tours) to Lycée Descartes. The (Tours) doesn't need to be visible to the reader
Done, I've mentioned Tours separately as there are a few Lycée Descartes
2nd para: link captain
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:42, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
3rd para: link military logistics, Paris, Arras
Done, I've added a link to Paris earlier in this section so left this particular one - Dumelow (talk) 09:42, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
3rd para: senior sub-intendent; in the next para an equivalent rank is given for first class sub-intendent. Can that be done here?
Yep, found a source and added them for 2nd and 3rd class, also standardised how I named the ranks ("sub-intendent second class" vs "first class sub-intendent") - Dumelow (talk) 09:49, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
First World War

2nd para: suggest linking Salonika and Corfu
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:51, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
3rd para: he designed a new brimmed steel helmet,; this needs a greater correlation to the earlier skull cap, to reflect the discussion in the lead
I've added " Adrian developed the skull cap into..." if this works? - Dumelow (talk) 09:57, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
some of the ordering of the cites in this section aren't chronological if it is a concern for you.
Nah, I'm easy-going on that - Dumelow (talk) 09:51, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Later life

link Genets
Already linked in "Early career"; I have standardised the spelling to "Genêts" - Dumelow (talk) 09:51, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Other stuff

Image tags look OK
A bit limited in source checking, but as much as I can make out, the various pages of cite 1 support what is stated. With Google preview, I can see that cite 4 supports much of the tent stuff at least.
That's about it for me. Zawed (talk) 08:49, 2 November 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for the review Zawed, I've had a go at responding above - Dumelow (talk) 09:57, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Looks all good, sorry I missed those terms already linked. Passing as GA as I consider this article meets the relevant criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:32, 5 November 2025 (UTC)