# Talk:Dots and Loops

Pinging Holiday56, since they prominently contributed to the article. There's a chance I might nominate Dots and Loops as a good article at some point, but I wanted to know if you had any other plans with it or if there's other areas for improvement before I do so.웃OO 23:09, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi! Firstly... great work on the new additions to the article! Hmm, if there's any one area I could still see being further expanded it'd be the section on recording – perhaps with interviews and commentary from the band members and producers, if those might be available? (As for me, I wouldn't say I have any major plans for expanding or revamping the article, at least for the near future.) But again, a great job overall. Holiday56 (talk) 06:11, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Dots and Loops/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 06:46, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 14:54, 7 July 2025 (UTC)

Nice to see some Stereolab here, I think for the first time? Will have a closer look soon, preliminary comments below. FunkMonk (talk) 14:54, 7 July 2025 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing. I'm slower on Wikipedia these days so I may or may not resolve all of these issues immediately. Pulse of the Early Brain is actually the first GA Stereolab album. 웃OO  19:47, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
Still editing slowly and steadily. How is the article looking so far? 웃OO  05:36, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
Cool, could you add a "done" sign off to the points below to make it easier to follow the progress? FunkMonk (talk) 12:29, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
The fixes look very good so far. FunkMonk (talk) 02:55, 17 July 2025 (UTC)
There's a good deal of WP:duplinks which can be highlighted with this script:[1]
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"The album's title references Norman McLaren's 1940 animated short films Dots and Loops." Single sentence paragraphs are discouraged, but not sure where else you can merge this into.
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Any photos of the band from around this time to show?
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The two last sections have pretty dense, wall of text-like paragraphs, could each maybe be split in two?
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"The Dots and Loops sessions marked the first time Stereolab recorded straight to Digital Audio Tape, a process the band found enjoyable." State for context what their previous procedure was.
 Done Redid this entirely. 웃OO  21:46, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
Link Andi Toma and Stereolab itself at first mention outside the intro (all terms should be linked both in the intro and article body at first mention in either).
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"said Tim Gane" present band-members (role in band) at first mention, not every reader knows them by name.
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I wonder if there is more from the liner notes of the expanded edition that could be added? Especially since the text about the music itself is very dominated by reviewer opinions.
 Done I feel like I've got a pretty good amount of info from it now. 웃OO  23:03, 18 July 2025 (UTC)
Given this is a mainly British band, I'd expect UK WP:Engvar, such as analogue instead of analog, etc.
 Partly done Analog may have been the only one. I'm not from the UK, I don't know every spelling variation. 웃OO  21:46, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
No word on the cover art and packaging?
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"The album's title references Norman McLaren's 1940 animated short films Dots and Loops." Do we know why?
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The Musical style section consists of a lot of quotes from reviewers, but isn't there more to write based on what the band-members themselves have said?
 Done Tim Gane is basically the brains behind the album. A lot of what is covered from the expanded edition is from his words attributed or not. 웃OO  23:03, 18 July 2025 (UTC)
"with the album seeing the band's chief lyricist Lætitia Sadier" add vocalist for context.
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While you generally do a good job of giving in-text attribution to various quotes and opinions, there are still some flowery ones that come out of nowhere, like "sputter[s] to life like it's being tuned in from outer space on a vintage receiver", and is afterwards anchored by a two-chord keyboard line and "skittering drum and vibraphone loops". I think everything like this should have in-text attribution. Likewise: "an Astrud Gilberto-style dreamy drift of a ditty which sporadically yanks up its swooshing skirt of sumptuous melody to reveal ultra-spartan techno-rhumba undercarriage."
 Partly done Gonna see if I can condense any more. 웃OO  21:55, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
"and finds Tim Gane using" Don't think you need to give full name after first mention in article body.
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Any views on the extra materials in more recent reviews to add under reception?
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Perhaps a given for fans, but any word on the interplay between English and French lyrics on this album? Especially conspicuous in the song sample used here.
 Done I wouldn't say it's any different, though Sadier said she probably would have done the entire album in english. 웃OO  21:46, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
This certainly looks good enough for GA now, so I'll promote it. FunkMonk (talk) 02:28, 20 July 2025 (UTC)