# Talk:Marshall Islands at the 2012 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
Going to review this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 17:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### General
All mentions of the "Marshal Islands" needed to be changed to "Marshall Islands" since that is the official spelling for the country.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
All mentions of the word "olympics" must be captialized
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
Wikilink the names of the athletes sent by the Marshall Islands at the first instance they are mentioned in the article.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)


### History
"and gained International Olympic Committee" - the International Olympic Committee needs its acronyms put in parentheses
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
"during the IOC's on February 9, 2006." - Looked through the source and you need to clarify that the Marshall Islands' recognition occurred during the IOC's meeting in Turin, Italy on February 9, 2006.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)


### Athletics
"This was the first olympic appearance for Garstang and the second olympic appearance for Nemra." - reword the second half of this sentence to avoid repetition of "olympic appearance"
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
For the second "The medals in the event went to athletes from Russia and South Africa." sentence, I think replacing the word "event" with "discipline" would be better for variety
 Done
"Haley Nemara competed in the women's 800 meter, where she finished sixth out of seven athletes in her heat." - Haley Nemara participated in the women's 800 meter, where she came sixth out of seven athletes in her heat.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
In the key mini-section, all notes bar the first one should be removed since they are not used in the article
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)


### Swimming
"The medals in the event went to athletes from France, the United States, and Brazil" - missing a period at the end of this sentence.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
"Ann-Marie Hepler competed in the women's 50 meter freestyle, where she finished third in her heat and placed forty-ninth in the standings" - Ann-Marie Hepler partook in the women's 50 meter freestyle, where she placed third in her heat and ranked forty-ninth in the standings.
 Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
Going to place this article on hold until all of the points raised above have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 19:38, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96:  Done --Cameron11598 (Talk)  17:45, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
@Cameron11598: Thank you for addressing the issues. Now promoting this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:18, 30 October 2017 (UTC)