# Talk:JBL Paragon

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 14:49, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator:  Ohc ¡digame!
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 14:49, 3 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done 

I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis.
I think the lead can be expanded.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. You've done great work, and I am quite happy to assist you in improving it. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 13:40, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments. I have expanded the lead section, and I believe it now provides an adequate summary of the article. -- Ohc ¡digame! 09:49, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 11:12, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 11:12, 6 February 2014 (UTC)