# Talk:Broken Home (Body of Proof)

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 16:20, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Image: Cut down on the detail (five lines is a lot) a bit.  Done
Intro: "all say that Nikki was suicidal; with evidence at the scene suggesting this" Cut the semi-colon and use a comma  Done
Plot: Again, you don't need to cite the episode with the episode - See Letting Go Review  Not done
Production: "although was credited" -> "although he was credited"  Done
Reception: "Among viewers between ages 18 and 49, it received a 2.1 rating/9 share; a share represents the percentage of households using a television at the time the program is airing." -> "Among viewers between ages 18 and 49, it received a 2.1 rating/9 share. This means that it was seen by 2.1 percent of all 18- to 49-year-olds, and 9 percent of all 18- to 49-year-olds watching television at the time of the broadcast."  Done
Reception: "Nikki's family were" -> "Nikki's family was"  Done
Reception: The critical response section is entirely one critic, and it seems to be rather positive. Please add some more reviews. - See Buried Secrets Review  Not done
Note: I'm not sure I understand what's being said here... - Made clearer  Done
References: add writer and director for Ref 1-3, 6-7 - See Letting Go Review  Not done
References: Use consistent dating...  Done
On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:45, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
- Finished - Thanks! — M.Mario (T/C)  16:57, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

OK, looks good. I will pass. It's a shame about only one critic, though.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:32, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

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