# Talk:Miguel Ángel Mancera

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 15:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
I am glad to review this article. The review should commence in a short while.  QatarStarsLeague (talk) 15:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC)


### Lead
As all the information corroborates with the article's body, the lead passes.


### Infobox
Interesting that a politician is labeled as being associated with a political party, and represents them, but never physically joins the party. Fascinating. A pass here.


### Early life and education
"When he was four, he lived in Tacuba neighborhood..." He lived in the Tacuba neighborhood.
"Mancera asked Victoria Adato Green, then-Attorney General of the Federal District, to pursue the case, assisted by consultor Diego Ramudia, and managed to sanction the responsible driver." Fine is probably a better term here.
"...and after he revalidated four subjects..." What exactly does that mean?
Everything else is good.


### Career
Great section, and a pass, here.


### Candidacy
"On January 6, 2012, Mancera resigned to become candidate... Resigned as attorney general you mean, right?
"but both politicians disassociated themselves the incident." From the incident it should read.
" ...a review the issue of solid waste..." A review of the issue of solid waste, it should read.
Everything else is good here.


### Personal life
"From 2008 to 2009, Mancera dated Alejandra Barrales." Who is that? Can you elaborate?
Everything else is good.


### Conclusion
The bibliography is fine, and the images are good for usage, so as soon as these current issues are addressed, I can pass this nice, succinct little article. Congratulations!  QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:22, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

All done. I made a minor changes, and I replaced the main image while the review was made. I also removed the "and after he revalidated four subjects", it also concerned the user who made the PR, and I don't know how I can translate it correctly. Thank you for choose the article and your review. Tbhotch.™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it! See terms and conditions. 05:33, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

He was in the hospital just recently. [1] 128.83.205.64 (talk) 22:05, 1 November 2014 (UTC)

Added. © Tbhotch™ (en-2.5). 04:23, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

The majority of the sources on the web have "Espinosa". This government page writes it like that too. [2] ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 18:42, 23 June 2015 (UTC)

Yes, his mother's first last name is "Espinosa". I don't know why that IP changed all the "Espinosa"'s and disrupted the whole page and sources. © Tbhotch™ (en-2.5). 04:23, 8 October 2015 (UTC)