# Talk:Dan Jones (footballer, born 1994)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:22, 5 July 2022 (UTC)

Tend to avoid single-sentence paras, lead could be either expanded to make the first para larger or merge/split accordingly.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"during the 2016–17 season" seems weird to link the Grimsby season when he's playing for other clubs in that season, maybe just the general season article?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"of the 2019–20 season on loan " lnk?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"end of the 2020–21 season" ditto.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"Jones born" ->" Dan Jones was born"
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
Could add DOB there too.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
" the Academy at" no need for capital A.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"youth-team" no hyphen required.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"Jones' progress" Jones's.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"meniscus cartilage tear" link?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"at Victoria Park on" context?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
Link caretaker.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"manager Paul Murray" manager has a link.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"who would last just six weeks" bit tabloid, maybe "who lasted six weeks"
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"helping "Pools" to avoid" avoid unexplained nicks.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"summer.[15][16][14] " order.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"made just 12" "just" is inherently POV.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"in just three league" stop saying "just".
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"only five appearances" ditto with "only", perhaps context so say how many games the team had that season or something to give people a comparison.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"would miss" ->"missed".
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"impressed new" according to whom?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"as the "Bluebirds" finished" nickname again.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"having stood out in an inconsistent Barrow team" your opinion or attributable quote?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"Manager Ian Evatt stated.." it was Alexander a couple of sentences ago?
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"was curtailed early on 16 March" no need for early, curtailed means that.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
" in an EFL Trophy tie against" overlinked.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"on 62-minutes" no hyphen.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"a yellow card" link.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"new "Ammies" manager" nickname...
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"honest... he'll" non-breaking space before ... for an ellipsis.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"red card" link.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"to switch the play" link or explain.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
"throw-in" link.
Done.--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
That is it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:44, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

Brilliant, many thanks!--EchetusXe 23:56, 9 July 2022 (UTC)