# Talk:Dan Osinski

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:22, 13 May 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  On hold
2. Verifiability  On hold
3. Depth of Coverage  On hold
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
1. 

For ballplayers, the nationality is generally inserted into the first sentence, as well.
Is the John Blanchard that hit the minor league home run off Osinski the same person as Johnny Blanchard?  The career dates might fit.
Yes. Thanks for pointing that out! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:04, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
The Ron Ritchie you linked to is a deceased Canadian politician, so I think you have the wrong link there.
Might be best to have a footnote or a gloss that the spitball is an illegal pitch, that context is needed to really understand that section
2.

Associated Press as the author on ref 31.
You've got him as dying in Sun City in the infobox, but it's not cited there, and the text never explicity states that he died in Sun City.
3. 

Is cause of death known?
Obituary doesn't say, just that he died. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:14, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
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Really good work.  Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 22:25, 14 May 2020 (UTC)