# Talk:Hygrocybe appalachianensis

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 11:31, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

Happy to offer a review. Josh Milburn (talk) 11:31, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

"the basionym was erroneously given as "appalachiensis" instead of the original spelling appalachianensis" Maybe I'm being picky, but is the use of the word "erroneously" OR here? Also (and I defer to you here) why do you name only Kronawitter and not the coauthor?
Picky is good! I've left out the value judgement "erroneously" (yes, it was a bit OR) and instead made it more explicit that this is a variant spelling. Coauthor now mentioned. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
"the description of basidia was only for microbasidia while the immature macrobasidia" Jargon? Also "microspores".
Now explained. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
"In a recent (2014) reorganization" I personally don't mind this at all, but it should be avoided, per WP:DATED.
Reworded. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
"Its bright red color fades in age" You're yet to mention it has a bright red colour. How about something like "It is a bright red color, but this fades in age"?
Reworded. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
"The ratio of macrobasidia length to macrospore length is usually less than five" I don't follow. Less than five to one?
Yes, changed. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Is it worth adding a category for the edibility?
I'm reluctant to categorically assign edibility to this species, since the wording of the main source is a little dubious about this. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Perhaps it's worth noting that the Bessette key was published by the Long Island Mycological Club. I know that the author is more important than the publisher in this case, but a fuller citation would still be good.
Done. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Can I recommend that you shift the cladogram to the right? It would scrunch text between it and the taxobox, but it wouldn't push down into the sections below. Just a suggestion.
It was already on the right, but I moved it up a paragraph. Does this solve the issue on your screen? Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Sorry, I meant "left"! Josh Milburn (talk) 20:36, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Ok, that works too. Sasata (talk) 22:15, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Could we have a location for The Alkaloids?
Added. Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Images and sources look great. A very neat article. Josh Milburn (talk) 12:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks! Sasata (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2016 (UTC)
Happy with these responses, and a look through the article reveals no other concerns. I'm happy to promote at this time. Josh Milburn (talk) 11:20, 14 February 2016 (UTC)

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