# Talk:HMS Moresby

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"previous L-class destroyer, capable" destroyer overlinked.
Done.
"First War Construction Programme" this sounds notable, should we redlink it for an article?
None of the programmes have articles yet. This could be a nice task for someone.
"The destroyer was..." last destroyer you mentioned was the rumoured German one.
Thank you. I have clarified this.
"displacement was" capital D.
Good spot.
Link long tons, unusual unit.
Done.
"shaft horsepower" link.
Done.
"296 long tons" avoid starting sentence with numeral.
Reworded.
"torpedoes.[5]The ship" space.
Done.
Could link complement to Ship's company.
Wikilinked.
"changed to Moresby.[8] The new name honoured" -> "changed to Moresby to honour"
Done.
"the Grand Fleet, joining" overlinked.
Done.

"in what would be the" in the.
Done.

"protect the battlecruisers of the Fleet" -> "of the Grand Fleet"
Done.
"the reconnaissance seaplane had been recovered" I missed this happening...
Sentence added.
"rejoined the Flotilla and" flotilla unless you use the full formal title.
Fixed.
"German High Seas Fleet. The two" overlinked.
Removed.
"after 1710 on " make it clear it's the time, i.e. 17:10 or 1710 hours or whatever MOS:TIME suggests.
Done.
"and at 2:15 turned" same.  Is that 02:15, 2:15pm??
Done
"to Buncrana with" where??
Clarified.
Could convoy escort be linked to Escort Group?
I do not think it was not so formal then.
Wouldn't U-boat be a better link than submarine?
Changed.
Pennant number table, no reason to capitalise Number, and row/col scopes would be much appreciated for accessibility.
Fixed.
Ref 11, 12, should just be p.
Fixed.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:43, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you. I have amended the article. Please tell me if there is anything else.  simongraham (talk) 23:01, 3 September 2021 (UTC)