# Talk:Lambeau Leap

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.


### Lede
"where a player" → "in which a player"
Spell out "Los Angeles Raiders"
Spell out and link [{National Football League]]
Per MOS:CAPTION, as a full sentence, that caption should end in a period


### Background
Just as in the lede, spell out "Los Angeles Raiders"
"4th quarter" → "fourth quarter" per MOS:ORDINAL
Comma after "tossed the ball to Butler"


### Safety concerns
"the NFL" → "The National Football League (NFL)"
"stands reenacting" → "stands to reenact"


### Legacy
"all Packers' players" → "all Packers players"
Same MOS:CAPTION comment as above


### Notable leaps
Link Detroit Lions


### References
In [9] and [12], "SI.com" → "Sports Illustrated"
In [16], "BleacherReport.com" → "Bleacher Report"


### General comments
Images are properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Copyvio score looks great!
Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 17:11, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Thanks GhostRiver, I believe I have addressed all your comments here. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  23:49, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Thank you for making those changes, passing now! — GhostRiver 00:09, 18 January 2022 (UTC)