# Talk:Chandler Stephenson

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lede
Mention in first sentence that he previously played for the Caps  Done
Per MOS:SEAOFBLUE, any "city, state" or "city, province" should be one link (to the city) and not two split; this applies to Saskatoon in both the infobox and lede  Done
and in the midget hockey looks like a couple words are missing  Done
Don't need to include WHL in parentheses if it's only used once  Done
Overall could be expanded: my unofficial system is one paragraph for childhood & juniors (or college), one for professional  Done


### Early life
Comma after "hockey playing family"  Done
Spell out "National Hockey League" with the acronym in parentheses after the first instance  Done
Name for the brother?  Done
Link concussion  Done


### Playing career
#### Amateur
"and in the midget hockey" looks like you forgot a few words there, huh?  Done
he was signed with either "was signed by" or "signed with" works  Done
Turns out we actually have a link for WHL Bantam Draft  Done
The WHL acronym should be introduced at some point  Done
During the offseason prior to his rookie season A little dense  Done
What was his main focus with the personal trainer, etc., if it was mentioned?
Comma after "at the World U-17 Hockey Challenge"  Done
Link the first instances of "goals" and "assists"  Done
"Due to this, he was scratched for the Pats' first five games following the tournament." → "The injury also caused him to miss his first five WHL games after the tournament ended"  Done
Link the first instance of "points"  Done
There should be an apostrophe in "previous seasons", either "season's" or "seasons'" depending on whether you're describing one or all of them
Spell out and link first instance of CHL (not in Top Prospects Game, in "amongst CHL players")  Done


#### Washington Capitals
Comma after "the Hershey Bears"  Done
"on an amateur try-out and made his professional debut at for the tail end" to reduce repetition with "He made his AHL debut" in the next sentence  Done
"to participate in the Capitals' 2014 rookie camp"  Done
"after registering one assist" in how many AHL games?
Comma after "In his first two games with the Capitals"
"Upon joining the Bears" → "Upon rejoining the Bears"  Done
I think I was at the game that broke his drought...
GhostRiver Good Luck Charm circa 2018?  HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Capitals' bottom-six forwards line I mean, technically those are two lines
an average of 87:20 on the penalty kill An average of 87 minutes per game?!
GhostRiver, per the article: Stephenson logged 87:20 of shorthanded time on ice this season Was 3 on 3 OT introduced at this time? because it could also be that....it could also just be a typo ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Comma after "in the conference finals"  Done
Comma after "Humboldt, Saskatchewan" per MOS:GEOCOMMA  Done
"in 64 games during the 2018–19 season." (Then delink in the next sentence)  Done
"played alongside new teammates often" → "often played alongside new teammates"  Done
"attributed his decline in production due to his mental health"  Done
Possessive for "six of the Capitals' seven"  Done


#### Golden Knights
This section should be titled Vegas Golden Knights to parallel Washington Capitals  Done
Lowercase and link general manager  Done
"15-5" → "15–5"  Done
"linemates as they suffered from injuries" → "linemates, who had both been injured early in the season" (checked against source)  Done


### Awards and honours
Specify "Stanley Cup champion"  Done


### References
The following should be reclassified from "publisher" to "work":
Star Phoenix (Saskatoon StarPhoenix)  Done
Regina Leader-Post  Done
The Patriot-News  Done
Las Vegas Review-Journal  Done


### General comments
Pictures look good
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site
FINALLY putting this one on hold. As always, ping me if you have any questions, and let me know when you're finished. Thank you for your patience. — GhostRiver 15:58, 28 December 2021 (UTC)

GhostRiver, done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:12, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
All looks good now, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 19:23, 3 January 2022 (UTC)