# Talk:Hearts and Souls

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 22:47, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

Lede: I would change 'season 6' to 'sixth season'; same with 'season 12'
Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:01, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
Background: Same with 'season 2' and 'season 5' and '6'
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:03, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
Background: "In mid-June 1998, rumors surfaced that Rick Schroder could replace Smits" I would change 'could' to 'would'
Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:05, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
I would move the "Plot" section to be the first main section, then I would make "Background" a sub-header under production and break "Production" up into Writing, Filming, etc.
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:15, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
Maybe merge "Awards" and "Rating" into a "Rating and accolades" section, since the ratings part is kind of stubby
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:17, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
Episode: I think you could combine (as in, just delete the line break between them) a few of the paragraphs so that the section doesn't feel so choppy.
I only saw one stubby paragraph and merged it with the one before it.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:22, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
References: Ref 8 states that Jimmy Smits was nominated for the award, but it doesn't prove that it was for this episode. Maybe back it up with another citation
??? Why would he be nominated for this episode?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  12:25, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
I just assumed since it was in this article, it was talking about this episode. I get it now.
On than those issues, looks good. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:47, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Everything looks good. Passing. Good work!--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:16, 15 May 2012 (UTC)