# Talk:Homer's Night Out

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Hi, I will be reviewing your article, Homer's Night Out.  It looks very good. There is a typo that I'll just fix myself. I will be posting further comments here.Please feel free to contact me.  —Mattisse (Talk) 20:48, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

"Bart wanders into the room" - this is another room than the restaurant, I take it, a party room of some sort? This part is a little vague for someone unfamiliar with the episode.
Since you describe the costumes of the  "showgirls" under Production (and have a still of a costume), it would be better if you described their presence in the plot more clearly.
Otherwise, the article seems to fulfill the criteria for GA. I will give a full review when you respond. —Mattisse (Talk) 21:10, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Thanks! I have made some edits now, let me know what you think! =) TheLeftorium 06:33, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Per MOS:LINK#Dates, autoformatting of dates is now depreciated so I delinked them.  —Mattisse (Talk) 15:39, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 Fineal GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

I am pleased to pass this article for GA.  —Mattisse (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Awesome, thanks! BTW, I noticed that in the ratings paragraph the date says "19-25 March March 1990", shouldn't it be "19-25 March 1990"? TheLeftorium 15:47, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Yes. Sometimes the script screws up. I check it visually but don't always catch everything. It needs to be corrected.  —Mattisse (Talk) 16:02, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

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