# Talk:Marauders (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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Reviewer: Johanna (talk · contribs) 01:40, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
Third on my "to review" list. Johanna(talk to me!) 01:40, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Comments
In the first sentence of the lead, please reverse the order of the clauses to better fit other television articles (i.e. "... is the sixth episode of the second season of...")
It should be "characters' interactions" not "character's interactions"
Perhaps a file of Roddenberry for the Production section?
Link to Robert April
Assuming that most of that second paragraph is sourced to ref 3, I would ref name it and sprinkle it in in a few more places for easier access.
In the final sentence of production, there's a typo in the title of the episode.
In your home media paragraph, you say that it was released as part of the season three DVD, which I assume is wrong...
All refs have been archived and look fine.
@Miyagawa: That's all I have for this article. It's not the longest piece but it is comprehensive. Fix these comments and I will be able to promote. Johanna(talk to me!) 04:21, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

@Johanna: Thanks, that should be everything covered. Not sure what I was thinking with that lead mix up (or the season three bit - I thought I'd linked to the wrong source, but it was pointed at the season 2 DVD source). Now I need to go double check the other season 2 GAs to make sure I haven't done the same thing there! Miyagawa (talk) 08:38, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
@Miyagawa: Great. Pass. Johanna(talk to me!) 15:14, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

In a feature article in Script magazine writer David Wilcox
talks about Enterprise. He worked on First Wave (TV series) before this, and creator Chris Brancato recommended him to Enterprise. He discusses all the pitches he made. This is the first episode he wrote based on the story from Braga and Berman.[1]
Maybe there is something there, one line even, that could be added to the production section? Leaving it here for now, will try to come back around to it eventually. -- 109.79.67.53 (talk) 15:24, 24 May 2021 (UTC)