# Talk:Doves in the Wind

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Nominator: PSA (talk · contribs) 12:53, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 14:14, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

A sleeper from Ctrl which I like! Comments coming soon. Ippantekina (talk) 14:14, 1 July 2025 (UTC)

showcasing SZA's more masculine side I would mention that this is SZA's view instead of presenting it in wikivoice; ditto for prose
"Doves in the Wind" is an ode dedicated to vaginas
To a lesser extent, Lamar's critiques of sex obsession are aimed at some women. Is this subjective or objective... if this is attributed to certain critics, pls attribute accordingly
at number 12 on Billboard's Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart, numbers should be plural here, unless you also listed the following chart positions as "number 2", "number 13"
Pls double check where full quotes with periods need to be placed fully within quotation marks per MOS:"
Throughout the years, Lamar became known as SZA's most prolific collaborator how does this relate to this song...?
Overall a nice read and I also did some spotchecks. Putting this on hold for 7 days. Ippantekina (talk) 07:20, 11 July 2025 (UTC)

Hi @Ippantekina! Thanks for the short review. All sans one of those comments have been actioned in the article itself. Re. the last comment, the highlighted sentence is meant to provide context for the paragraph. There's been an explosion of articles about Kendrick and SZA as a duo this year and it helps to know why those listicles are about these two in particular. Elias 🦗🐜 [Chat, they chattin', they chat] 03:43, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
Well I think it could steer towards WP:RECENTISM... but that's not a big problem yet imo. Passing this, great work! Ippantekina (talk) 15:29, 14 July 2025 (UTC)