# Talk:Cedric Oglesby

Copying comments from the original GA review to address:

"Conference, while playing" remove comma
Done.
was he first or second team his freshman year
Second-team; clarified
add these honors to the infobox
Added.
"as a punter, after" remove comma
Done.
"With 52 total points in 11 games he placed first on the team" fix grammar
Re-worded.
"tied the record for best punt average, " what record,the record for that bowl game?
Clarified.
"per-punt" remove hyphen
Done.
"coach, Willie Jeffries" is that his head coach
Clarified
was he all-MEAC in 98 or 99?
Doesn't look like it – I did two moderately in-depth newspaper searches and couldn't find anything on him being selected.
Did he have any career records?
The article mentions a single-season made field goals record and a long field goal record; couldn't find any others.
did he do anything his senior year of note
Couldn't find anything.
"released on May 1" that transaction is for the day before because PFA has april 30.
Done.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:03, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: I think I addressed everything from your previous review. Is there anything else, or should I re-nominate it? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:24, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
I think "He finished with 52 total points in 11 games, first on the team" would be better as "He finished with a team-leading 52 total points in 11 games." I think that's everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 18:31, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Changed and nominated. BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:34, 27 August 2024 (UTC)