# Talk:Mike Kullman

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
added philly and coach cat
"After being released" i dont think high schoolers get "released"
"third release" i wonder if theres another word we could use
Changed both to "cut"; sounds better to me; though I could try changing it to something else if you'd like.
"first-team All-Pennsylvania State Athletic Conference." "second-team selection the following year" Add to infobox
Added.
should we link minicamp
Linked.
I think we can link retainer to Retainer agreement?
Linked.
"the game, and Kullman" remove comma
Removed.
"and made nine tackles" remove made
Removed.
hes not actually german is he? Was he just born there? There is a german cat
Not really sure - there wasn't really much talking about that - what would you suggest?
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:16, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:38, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:31, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
@BeanieFan11: Where'd you get his height of 6'2 from? NFL, PFR and PFA all say 6'1. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:58, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: I don't know, but I changed it back to 6'1. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:56, 30 October 2023 (UTC)