# Talk:Follow Me (Lyme & Cybelle song)

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Nominator: VirreFriberg (talk · contribs) 20:13, 25 February 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 09:56, 27 June 2025 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
I will review this one today! --K. Peake 09:56, 27 June 2025 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Are you sure raga rock should be listed as a genre of the song since the prose seems to indicate it was an influence rather than a genre?
""Follow Me" is a" → "It is a" although the genres seem disordered here; for instance folk rock is listed as an influence and raga as a genre when it seems to be the opposite from what is written
Any instances where there is three points listed in a sentence using "and" should place a comma before the connective
"after the duo were" → "after lyme & cybelle were" although the Wrecking Crew are not mentioned in the body
Remove overly obvious wikilink on California
"with critics noting" → "with a few critics noting"
Maybe add an example of one of those compilation albums in the lead?


### Background and composition
Why is there a comma in the name of Fairfax High School?
"from Santagelo's artist name cybelle" → "From Santagelo's artist name, cybelle"
In the last sentence, should on the spot be re-worded to something else in your own words at the start since it is cited as a quote at the end?
Change BPM to beats per minute to be specific
[10][6][11] should be in numerical order
You should end the author's quote at 1966 and re word to into a length of 2:30
The third paragraph should be moved to be the second instead since this is focused on background info, therefore should come before the song's composition
"keyboardist Larry Knechtel and" → "keyboardist Larry Knechtel, and" why are the Wrecking Crew not mentioned here?


### Release and reception
Remove overly obvious wikilink on California
"It fared similarly well" → "The song fared similarly well"
"the first on April 23 together" → "the first on April 23, 1966, together"
[31][22] should be in numerical order
"believe the song" → "believes the song"
Should the word noting really be used twice in this same sentence?
Remove speech marks around successful since this is a common term
Remove wikilink on San Francisco
Last para looks good!


### Personnel
Good


### Charts
Good


### References
Could ref 8 be used in ref 9's place since the only page being used for that ref is the same as the last of only two for ref 8?
Cite Ultimate Classic Rock as magazine instead on ref 41


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this came through quickly! --K. Peake 11:17, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake, edited the article after your suggestions! Thanks you once more for the constructive criticism! VirreFriberg (talk) 21:26, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
VirreFriberg You still need to change the wording earlier in the sentence to not being on the spot in your own words and complete the cite of Ultimate Classic Rock as magazine only. --K. Peake 10:15, 28 June 2025 (UTC)
Hi @Kyle Peake! I fixed the issue regarding the Ultimate Classic Rock citation (I was slightly confused). However, I disagree with your assessment that the song isn't raga rock, since Zevon describes it as such (raga and roll), as does Ritchie Unterberger (raga rock-tinged). I instead re-formatted the opening statement to encompass all four genres. VirreFriberg (talk) 13:50, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
VirreFriberg The sentence still uses on the spot twice, can you revise please? --K. Peake 17:27, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake, Done! VirreFriberg (talk) 17:41, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
 Pass now, thanks for finally clearing this one up! --K. Peake 07:05, 30 June 2025 (UTC)