# Talk:Natlan


### Natlan
I've listed this article for peer review because I am thinking about trying for FAC in the near future and want to know where it currently stands. I am completely unfamiliar with the FAC process, so it's likely the entire article will need to be looked through. I just got it to GA today. In short, where does the article not meet the FA criteria?
Thanks, Gommeh 📖/🎮 23:11, 8 September 2025 (UTC)

Okay based on the article, it seems pretty fine to me already, although I'm quite confused at how the way it states that Natlan is based jointly on Pre-Columbian American and Sub-Saharan African cultures, especially since the nation's music is the only aspect of the nation inspired by those cultures. So you could change some stuff such as the first sentence in the second paragraph in lead and the infobox. plantCOAL 03:14, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
There are other things in Natlan based on those cultures, for example several location names. Gommeh 📖/🎮 21:19, 15 September 2025 (UTC)


#### Vacant0
Gommeh, please ping me in a day or two if I somehow miss this. I'll be happy to take a indepth review and help you get this to FAC status. Cheers, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 14:53, 28 October 2025 (UTC)

Didn't see this till now! I accept. Gommeh 📖   🎮 17:29, 7 November 2025 (UTC)
Illustration

File:Stadium of the Sacred Flame.png
should have a source from where this originated from (a website, for example)
please do not use fixed sizes for images (image_size = 250px). If you want to set a size for an image use image_upright as it is scalable (if the template has this parameter).
suggest adding alt text
Done. In my opinion this makes the infobox picture a little too big, let me know what you think though. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:04, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
OK, yeah I agree. Maybe we should revert it how it was before? Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 15:26, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:10, 15 November 2025 (UTC)
File:Genshin Impact Iansan.png
also should have a source
suggest adding alt text
Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:04, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
References
The reliability of references is usually checked from WP:VG/RS.

Ref 1 (Bahamut) appears to be a reliable source from zh.wiki.
Kotaku (post-2022) is not a high quality source therefore I'd suggest finding a replacement.
Based on this author's prior experience I have reason to think their articles are good enough. Additionally, they became Kotaku's staff writer in 2022 (not after) and have experience at Fanbyte. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
TheGamer and ScreenRant are not high quality sources therefore I'd suggest finding a replacement.
Ref20 (4Gamer) does not have |trans-title=.
Added. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Websites should be consistenly written (e.g., Famitsu is written both in English and Japanese, suggest sticking with English).
I'm not sure I get what you mean by this. Can you explain? Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Ref 11 has ファミ通.com (in Japanese) listed as its website while Ref 4 has Famitsu (in English) as its website. I'd suggest sticking to English (threfore, change non-English website titles to the English ones). Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 15:29, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Got it, changed. There were some other sources that had this too (mostly Bahamut) so I changed those as well. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:42, 15 November 2025 (UTC)
What is the reliability of Ref 15 (kakuchopurei.com)? I am also not sure about the reliability of MSN (Ref 21), as it is a web portal not a news website.
Getting rid of Kakuchopurei as I don't think it is important. MSN got the article from a publication whose English name translates to "Game World", and who is considered reliable on zhwiki. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Titles of video games (in this case Genshin Impact) should be italicised inside the |title= and |trans-title= parameters.
Done. Not sure if this should apply for the Chinese- and Japanese-language titles because I know the proofreading standards are different over there, so I have left those as is. I did italicize them for the English (and one French) source though. Gommeh 📖   🎮 15:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
Other sources appear to be reliable.
Prose
OK, most of my concerns have been adressed (Valnet sources are still in the article, though). I will take at the prose next week. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 20:23, 15 November 2025 (UTC)

The version September 11, 2025 at 06:44:15 was translated into the Chinese Wikipedia with the skipping of "Night Kingdom". --𝐹𝑜𝑟 𝐸𝑎𝑐ℎ ... 𝑁𝑒𝑥𝑡 19:33, 26 July 2025 (UTC)