# Talk:Cameroon at the 2002 Winter Olympics

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cameroon at the 2002 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:34, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:34, 16 August 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Background
"The Cameroon Olympic and Sports Committee was recognized by" - recognised
"a total of 2,399 athletes took part representing 77 National Olympic Committees." -  a total of 2,399 representing 77 National Olympic Committees took part.


### Cross-country skiing
"About Cameroon, he said" - Menyoli said,
"he was a competitor in the sprint, finishing the qualifying round in a time of 4 minutes and 10.07 seconds, only the top 16 could advance to the next round," - there needs to be a full stop after the qualifying round time to eliminate this run-on sentence
"He finished the event in 65th place out of 69 classified finishers." - ended to avoid close reptition.


### References
Consider archiving Reference 3 like what you've done with the rest of the citations
Reference 9 is missing the author which is located in the top part of the article
Decent work in putting into this article. Just the minor quibbles from yours truly. MWright96 (talk) 12:30, 16 August 2018 (UTC)

Everything done, but the archiving.  I can't get the tool to work right the last few days. Courcelles (talk) 12:57, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: Very well. Article is now at GA status. MWright96 (talk) 14:39, 16 August 2018 (UTC)