# Talk:Cal Anderson

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cal Anderson/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:21, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 15:21, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
The image is appropriately tagged; sources are reliable.

"Anderson won the most votes, fifty-one out of one hundred sixteen, at the precinct representatives meeting to recommend a person to fill the vacancy in the 43rd district created by Niemi's resignation from the Washington House of Representatives to join the state senate." Long and hard to parse; can you rephrase?
"He was one of the three nominees on the presented list alongside Harvey Muggy, who replaced Pat Thibaudeau, and Gene Peterson" I don't follow this.  What's the "presented list"?  Presented to whom?  And if Muggy is replacing Thibaudeau, not Niemi, why is he listed here?
Overall the article is in good shape; just a couple of points to fix above. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 15:41, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

@Mike Christie: Thank you. I will do the edits for both Cal Anderson and Addo Bonetti once I get time tomorrow. Jon698 (talk) 03:08, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
OK -- will check back in a few days if I don't hear from you. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 11:24, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
@Mike Christie: I have done some edits to fix the problems you have with the article. Jon698 (talk) 15:15, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 15:30, 27 August 2022 (UTC)

Jon698, I neglected to do spotchecks when I did the GA review for this article, so I'm doing a couple now.  The NYT article that cites 'Anderson stated that he was once caught in drag, but was only given a short reprimand with the commander stating "Now, I don't care what people do in their own time, but the Army doesn't feel that way, so in the future, be more discreet"' doesn't actually say "in drag", but "in the act".  It mentions Mary Humphrey's book My Country, My Right to Serve as the source; that might have more specifics, and it sounds like that would be a good source for this article anyway.  The other citations I checked were fine. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 10:16, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

I went ahead and made the change. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 16:16, 25 September 2022 (UTC)