# Talk:I går såg jag ditt barn, min Fröja

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
"best-known and best-loved songs" → This seems like an exceptional claim and isn't mentioned in the body.
Reworded.
"based on a real event" → This is also not mentioned in the body.
Added.
Link epistle.
One of Fredman's Epistles, already linked.
I meant a general link to what an epistle is.
"Swedish song tradition" → Maybe just write "Swedish ballad tradition", as ballad and song aren't exact synonyms.
Done.
"influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"?
Link epistle.
See above.
Link pastorales.
Done.
"post-baroque" → Shouldn't Baroque be capitalized? Also link.
Done.
Link burlesque.
Done.
Link timbres.
The link is something else; I've added a gloss.
"Gamla stan" → Since this is a proper noun, is the italicization necessary?
Removed.
Is "(song starts at 23:00)" needed in the external link, since it's a recording?
It'll certainly help readers as the place in the concert isn't at all obvious.
All the references seem reliable and are properly formatted, although as they are all books/in Swedish, I can not verify them. AryKun (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Just a sorta note: The article about the lady Ulla was based on states that she was arrested for wearing silk, so that might need to be checked out. AryKun (talk) 10:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)