# Talk:Hogwarts Legacy

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On the subject of ref consistency, that extends to the case. It doesn't really matter which you go for, sentence or title case, but they should be consistent. You can use User:ZKang123/TitleCaseConverter.js to assist.
(Note: I will do this as the last step). Vestigia Leonis (talk) 10:00, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
The article feels a bit inaccessible if you don't know Harry Potter at present; I get why you have the synopsis after gameplay, as that's normally how game articles are structured and I think the overview is more important, but the fact that all we get on the general shape of the game is "action RPG" and then it starts talking about the character we haven't introduced feels odd. Likewise we tell people about getting sorted into Hogwarts houses without explaining what Hogwarts is.
 Done (Note: Moved trailer to release, let me know if we should remove it. I rarely see trailers in articles.) Vestigia Leonis (talk) 10:00, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
 Next to experiences in Hogwarts Castle, pedantic, perhaps, but the Room of Requirement is in Hogwarts Castle versus the others.
 Done Vestigia Leonis (talk) 09:04, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
I shortened up the bit about magical beasts in the vivariums, but it's weird that this sentence comes before the magical beasts are properly introduced in the following sentence (I get that you want to link it to the room of requirement but it's still oddly structured and repetitious currently.)
or can fly with a broom after participating in flying class Also slightly repetitious with the bit about unlocking gameplay mechanics earlier on in this section.
 Done Vestigia Leonis (talk) 09:04, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
"ancient secret" being in quotes feels weird and interrupts the flow.
 Done Vestigia Leonis (talk) 09:04, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
The Escapist reported that development started around 2017 or 2018." This seems oddly placed, since the rest of it is about game leaks and official announcements.
 Done Vestigia Leonis (talk) 09:04, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
More to come but I will be traveling this weekend and might not have a chance to jot more down. 
--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 18:16, 7 August 2025 (UTC)

Hey @David Fuchs, thanks! I will take a look this weekend. Vestigia Leonis (talk) 19:55, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
Alright @David Fuchs, I addressed some issues. I also tried to improve the information and flow on Magical Beasts / Vivarium. Do you think this is better now? If not, I will try to find a better way to separate Magical Beasts from the Room of Requirement.
I think it would also look better if the paragraphs were more even in size, but I need to take a closer look at how to sort the information. Lastly, I’m now questioning whether we should keep all three pictures, as the gameplay section is more condensed. I could also expand the section if we want to keep all three pictures. I’ll probably go through the reviews again, but if you spot anything that is currently missing or too short, let me know. Vestigia Leonis (talk) 09:19, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
@David Fuchs Ping here - next week I have lots of time available to further improve the article. If you find some time as well, I would appreciate more comments! Vestigia Leonis (talk) 12:12, 28 August 2025 (UTC)

It has a lot of meandering and focus on things that shouldn't be focused on. I think, it's way too long. BlackVulcanX (talk) 06:38, 5 November 2025 (UTC)