# Talk:Movitz blåste en konsert

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

New one for you! --K. Peake 09:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Thanks!
The subtitle info is not sourced anywhere
Reffed.
Regarding this and the other instance of a ref in the lead, you should write out and source this info in the body, but keep the prose only here; no refs are appropriate. --K. Peake 20:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
Moved.
The writing sentence should be the third of the first para instead
Moved.
Add a comma after 1718 opera
Added.
The ball is not sourced as being in the evening
Reffed.
Shouldn't King be capitalised like in the body?
Done.
"The song strikes a refined tone," → "It strikes a refined tone,"
I think the noun is better at the start of the paragraph.
Using the song to start two consecutive sentences is a bad idea, but this sentence had been moved around to create this context so I copyedited for you. --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)


### Context
Pipe Swedish ballad tradition to Scandinavian ballad tradition
Have made it point to the new Sweden section of that article.
Second para looks good!
Thanks!


### Song
#### Music
Add relevant text to the audio sample
Added.
"consisting of twelve lines." → "consisting of 12 lines." per MOS:NUM
Done.
Write epistle No. 12 instead
Done.


#### Lyrics
Why is there spaces before lines for Paul Britten Austin's verse?
You mean the indentations of some lines? That's Paul Britten Austin's formatting, indicating sections of the verse.
Oh, thank you for explaining. --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)


### Reception and legacy
Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren, Djurgården Park to Djurgården and Bensvarvars to Ge rum i Bröllopsgåln din hund! on the img text
Done.
Pipe to Air (music) should solely be on "air"
Done.
"before the singing and" → "After this, the singing and"
Done.
[13] should be solely at the end of the sentence
Done.
I don't think "lending an air" is very appropriate; try something more encyclopedic
Edited.
That looks a lot smoother! --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)


### Notes
Good
Thanks.


### References
Copyvio score looks pretty good at 30.6%!!!
Noted.
Why is ref 12 missing the language parameter?
Added. I didn't think "Epistel No. 51" worth translating but I've done it now anyway.


### Sources
Good
Noted.


### External links
Good
Noted.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; I left a comment above where you did not work on the lead properly. --K. Peake 20:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: All done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:03, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
 Pass time, once again I am very satisfied with your quick responses! --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)