# Talk:Hurricane Dalilia

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Hurricane Dalilia (1989)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "CPHC":
From 1989 Pacific hurricane season: "The 1989 Central Pacific Tropical Cyclone Season". Central Pacific Hurricane Center. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration. May 4, 2007. Retrieved May 26, 2009.
From Tropical cyclone: "Observations". Central Pacific Hurricane Center. 2006-12-09. Retrieved 2009-05-07.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 06:14, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Dalilia (1989)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:22, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

"The storm accelerated, headed directly towards the Hawaiian Islands." - This sentence would read better if you put the word "and" between the comma and "headed".
"the island chain recived more" - Typo
"While tracking near the Hawaiian islands," - Capitalization error; capital "I" on "islands"
"northwestern Hawaiian islands" - Same as directly above
On reference #2, switch "Case" to "Robert Case"
All fixed. Thanks for the review. YE  Pacific Hurricane 03:30, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
Ok then. I will pass this article.--12george1 (talk) 16:31, 26 October 2011 (UTC)