# Talk:Cyclone Sagar

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cyclone Sagar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 18:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 18:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

When did Sagar become a tropical storm? YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Added. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"making landfall over northwestern Somalia." why link those now and not in the first sentence? YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Why not indeed. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"Sagar weakened into a remnant low on May 21. " infobox says May 20. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Eek, thanks. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"The storm also made the westernmost landfall in the North Indian Ocean," something about this bothers me... it's weird to say a system is the westernmost landfall in a given ocean. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)+
Better? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"Along its rare trajectory through the Gulf of Aden, Cyclonic Storm Sagar dropped rainfall in portions of coastal Yemen, northern Somalia, Djibouti, and Ethiopia.[15]" Yemen shouldn't be linked twice in the body. I mean this is an understanable mistake considering you did the impact first but still it id already linked in the MH. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Removed the one mention. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"The storm first affected Yemen's Socotra Island." two things. One, this is a dumpy sentence that could be combined with the previous sentence. Second,same overlinking problem applies here. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Done. (insert poop emoji) ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"Yemen's temporary capital Aden was hit by strong winds as tropical cyclone Sagar approached, prompting authorities to a call on residents to evacuate areas near the shore in the southern port city.[16]" and here too. YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
De-link. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"The United Nations pledged $2.7 million" I assume this is USD, right? YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
I assume so as well, but the source doesn't specify. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
"Norway sent kr30 million to Somalia after Sagar, continuing the humanitarian assistance the country began in 2017.[42]" missing a "that" before "began". YE Pacific Hurricane 08:02, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Got that. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
@Hurricanehink: Did you miss this on your watchlist or just forgot or did you stop stalking my contribs? :P YE Pacific Hurricane 18:38, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
Missed it on my watchlist. I saw when you claimed it but not the review, since I've been  busy. Can I have a few more days? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  18:47, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
Of course lol I almost never fail GANs. YE Pacific Hurricane 18:49, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
@Yellow Evan: - how is it now? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  02:37, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

I'll pass this as soon as I save my edit. YE Pacific Hurricane 06:47, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

@Hurricanehink: is it true?
https://www.nrlmry.navy.mil/tcdat/tc2018/IO/IO012018/txt/trackfile.txt 55 kt  or 65 kt ? Dam222  🌋 (talk) 08:08, 5 December 2020 (UTC)

@Dam222: - that was operational. In post-season analysis, it was upgraded. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  01:14, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

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