# Talk:Metamorfosis World Tour

González Rodríguez, Juan Francisco (19 November 2012). "Arjona, entre el romance y la reflexión". El Informador (in Spanish). Unión Editorialista. Archived from the original on 2 December 2012. Retrieved 2 December 2012.

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:15, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
General comments

The tenses need checking.  It is now longer "current" so "it was a tour" for example.
Done.
The lead doesn't reflect the fact the tour has finished either.
Done.
"is the first tour before abandoning Warner Music to become" a bit emotive, perhaps "is his first tour before leaving Warner Music to become..."
Done.
"with dates for American, Argentinian and Chilean venues revealed." you don't link USA but you do Argentina and Chile, no need.
Done.
" of four ambiences on top of a rotatory stage through which Arjona performs and each one of them are directly related to the songs being performed" this isn't great English, it needs a proper copyedit, I don't even really understand it.
Did my best rewording it. I wrote that sentence so long ago...
"and fourth and final stage a theatre" no need for "and final".
Fixed with above
"On Buenos Aires, it" you mean "In Buenos Aires"?
<.<
"attended ... attendance" repetitive.
Done.
"As of April 2012" it's finished and it's now June 2013, needs update.
Updated.
"Fellow guatemalan singer-songwriter" capital G for guatemalan.  Check whole article.
On it.
"The tour follows his past Quinto Piso Tour," no need for "past".
Done.
In infobox, surely tour years are 2012–13, not just 2012?
Done.
"Independiente is Arjona's" was.
Done.
"to refocus his career" is that something he said?  If so, it should be quoted and attributed.
"photographer-director" en-dash (as you use en-dash for singer–songwriter).
"Although the album is ..." was.
What are these "ambiences"?
"through which Arjona performs along seven musicians and one showgirl" needs work.
Done
"50 people are..." avoid stating sentences with numbers.
Done
"150 illumination lights," ditto.
Done
For "movable" do you really mean "mobile"?
Yep
"of scenography" you mean "scenery"?
Don't overlink Santiago de Chile.
In general a heavy copyedit would be in order.

I agree. I will try to copyedit this whole article ASAP. Thanks :) — ΛΧΣ21 03:09, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
Comments specific to GAN criteria

Well-written: ✗ Fail (see above)
Verifiable:  Pass
Broad:  Pass
Neutral: ? (see above)
Stable:  Pass
Illustrated:  Pass
Currently I consider this GAN to be on hold pending the resolution of the above.  The Rambling Man (talk) 15:34, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll give it a thorough copyedit in the next day or so. All the best, Miniapolis 17:59, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
It appears that Miniapolis did the copyedit that evening. Was it sufficient? I've just added a missing "url=" parameter to one of the references so it no longer shows an error. Where does the article stand now? BlueMoonset (talk) 14:35, 4 July 2013 (UTC)
Further comments

Non-English-language sources should use a language template.
Done.
Can you check that those pre-collapsed tables are okay per WP:COLLAPSE?
I think they are, yes.
Still conflict of "singer–songwriter" and "singer-songwriter" and "photographer-director".
Ok, I think i finally handled this.
Don't think "lights" needs to be wikilinked.
Delinked that and a couple more things.
"Panoramic photography of the stage" well I don't think the "Panoramic photography of..." is needed.  That much is obvious to the observer.
Fixed.
The Rambling Man (talk) 18:12, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! — ΛΧΣ21 18:18, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

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