# Talk:Emmett MacDonald

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Nominator: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:09, 6 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:53, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:53, 25 May 2025 (UTC)

Images properly licensed
MacDonald took command a unit in November Missing word here, I think. And what type of unit did he command?
I've rephrased the whole clause here quite a bit Hog Farm  Talk 16:48, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
Missouri Volunteer Militia, and was part of the Missouri Volunteer Militia A certain amount of redundancy here
I've rephrased this to simplify and avoid the redundancy Hog Farm  Talk 16:48, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
Capitalize Battles of in the main body
Done Hog Farm  Talk 16:48, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
What rank was Shelby?
Added Hog Farm  Talk 01:24, 31 May 2025 (UTC)
Short but sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:41, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
@Sturmvogel 66: - thanks for the review!  I have tried to implement all of the suggested changes. Hog Farm  Talk 01:24, 31 May 2025 (UTC)