# Talk:Louis Crews

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 23:35, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added college basketball coaches in the US due to there being no Jarvis coaches cat and added Yale alumni cat.
In the lead should there be a comma after Lewis?  Done
Actually, I don't think noting that there was sometimes misspelling is that important for the lead - I removed that part.
Shouldn't we include the womens basketball championships in the infobox?
Added.
Infobox says when they won the two titles but body doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
Added.
And the Alcorn and Albama baseball also since the football SIAC is included.  Done
Added.
unlink Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Conference in later life. Its already linked in the body.  Done
Delinked.
What's the Lewis Crews Classic?  Done
Explained.
Can we expand a little more and say its the first home game of every season. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
Added.
Where are the Javier records from in the record table?  Done
Jarvis Christian? Here - should I add it in as a ref?
There's already a ref at the end of the table so yes add ref 2 also.
Added.
Do you think we should say something about all three of those schools being historically black?  Idk  Done
Eh, I don't think its needed, but I can add it if you want.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:05, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
"the women's basketball team to two championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) crown in 1953." Having SCAC on just the baseball part makes it sound like the basketball titles weren't SCAC. Were they? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: I would assume the basketball titles were SCAC, as the men's team at least were in the SCAC and I don't think I've seen an instance were the men were one conference and women the other, so I changed the wording to and led the women's basketball team to two South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a SCAC title in 1953 — does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
All issues have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)