# Talk:Léon Gambetta-class cruiser

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:32, 24 April 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  Pass
2. Verifiability  Pass
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
1. 

"The Léon Gambetta-class cruisers" - I'd say it's probably okay to bold the entire word cruisers, it looks a little odd with just the ending s unbolded
In the text, 12,550 metric tons is rounded to 12,350 long tons, while in the infobox, 12,352 long tons are given.  Is there a way that the rounding can be made consistent?
Done
"She visited the United States in 1907 to" - Is this still the Victor Hugo?
Yep, she's the last ship explicitly named.
"She visited the United States in 1907 to participate in the Jamestown, Virginia, to participate in the Jamestown Exposition" - Grammar's a touch off here
Oops.
" in the Adriatic" - Wikilink the Adriatic, since it's the first mention in the main body of prose
I only link once per article unless it's a really long article.
" with heavy loss of life the following day" - Is this exact figure known?  If so, it may be worth mentioning.
2.

Deck armor is given as 33-65 mm in the infobox, there's no citation and I can't find the 33 mm figure in the text
Three layers of 11 mm mild steel plates.
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"You must also include a United States public domain tag to indicate why this work is in the public domain in the United States" - According to the file information for the blueprint plans "You must also include a United States public domain tag to indicate why this work is in the public domain in the United States", and such a tag is not present.
Done.
7.
Placing on hold, this one doesn't need much work done.

Thanks for the review and catching all these niggles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:31, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Looks good, passing. Hog Farm (talk) 20:41, 25 April 2020 (UTC)