# Talk:La Metálica

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
"She is the current, reigning Mexican National Women's Champion," - incumbent
"having won the championship in December 2018." - how about changing the text in bold title to avoid close repetition


### Professional wrestling career
"She made her in-ring debut on May 13, 2009, after having trained under Rocky Santana, Sadico, Judas el Traidor, Terrorista, Negro Navarro, Justiciero and Robin Maravilla prior to her debut." - try to reword the text in bold for the avoidance of repetition
"At some point prior to July 2014," - At an unknown date


### CMLL (2016–current)
"when not needed for CMLL shows." - when she was not needed
"all risk their masks in a Lucha de Apuestas, bet match." - don't  think that the comma is needed here
"The 14-woman torneo cibernetico match where La Metálica was the second competitor eliminated." - saw La Metálica become the second wrestler eliminated.
"to become a double champion," - two-time
"She lost to Dalys in the finals two weeks later." - you mean Daly?
"Daly originally earned a CMLL World Women's Championship match against Marcela, but Marcela was injured." - try not to use Marcela's name too closely in the same sentence


### References
Reference 13 is missing the author
Reference 16 is dead and will need archiving
Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the above responses. MWright96 (talk) 19:57, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

MWright96 I have fixed all issues except one. two-time champion is wrong in this case, because she would hold both the Mexican National Women's Championship AND the CMLL World Women's Championship. Everything else has been addressed. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
@MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:14, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

Tengo las fotos cuando felina metalika ganó el torneo dz y está fechado 189.146.240.216 (talk) 06:10, 16 January 2025 (UTC)