# Talk:KVDO-TV

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good.
Excellent lead (well-sourced and of reasonable length)!


### History of channel 3 in Salem
Remove the comma after "Salem in 1952".
"Telecasters's" → "Telecasters'"
I consider "Salem Telecasters" a singular noun per MOS:POSS, so I left this as is.
No other issues (also well-sourced).


### KVDO-TV as a commercial independent
"telecasting February" → "telecasting on February"
"first ever" → "first-ever"
"with quality" → "with the quality"
Remove the comma after "$410,000".


### Sale to OEPBS
"by Oregon Educational" → "by the Oregon Educational"
Remove the comma after "lead by December".
Add a comma after "two newscasts"
"prime time" → "primetime" or "prime-time"


### Public KVDO
"including of the" → "including the"
"of channel 16, while" → "for channel 16 while"
"Deschutes County" → "Deschutes County's"
That hatnote at the bottom seems out of place. Move it somewhere else, or a #See_also section can be made.


### References
Try archiving sources (especially those from Newspapers.com, which will disappear if the title changes).


### Progress