# Talk:Colton Sissons

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.


### Infobox and lede
"Predators American Hockey League" → "Predators' American Hockey League"  Done
I really hate how adding "Canada" makes the infobox so wide, but I know that someone will add it back even if you or I remove that
Ditto. The worse is when someone is from PEI. It stretches it out so far.


### Early life
Comma after "North Vancouver, British Columbia" per MOS:GEOCOMMA  Done


### Playing career
#### Amateur
"forgo his NCAA eligibility by signing with them."  Done
Comma after "Westside Warriors"  Done
"Sissons'" → "Sissons's" per MOS:'S  Done
Specify first year of NHL draft eligibility, since the junior clubs also do drafts  Done
Comma after "for the 2012-13 season"  Done
Link "Team Canada's national junior team" to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team  Done


#### Professional
"Predators 2013" → "Predators' 2013"  Done
Comma after "Admirals coach Dean Evason"  Done
Link AHL All-Star Game  Done
Link first instance of "rating" to plus-minus  Done
Use some synonym in "His assist marked" to avoid repetition of "assist" in the sentence  Done
"coaching chance" → "coaching change"  Done
Link "captain" to Captain (ice hockey)  Done
"Predators opening goal" → "Predators' opening goal"  Done
"Predators organizations" → "Predators organization"  Done
Comma after "for the 2016 Stanley Cup playoffs"  Done
Link exhibition game  Done
"Predators fourth-line" → "Predators' fourth-line"  Done
Might want to clarify that this meant Sissons was exposed for the Knights to potentially take  Done
No commas in "reached, at least, the 15-point mark"  Done
Mention some sentence that he was invited to the bubble  Done
"Nick Cousins' goal" → "Nick Cousins's goal" per MOS:'S  Done
"Predaots" → "Predators"  Done
"400th career NHL game with the Predators." We know that's the only team for which he's played  Done


### Awards and honours
Good


### References
Per MOS:ALLCAPS, [5] and [56] should be in title case  Done
North Shore News, Kelowna Capital News, and The Tennessean should be work param, not publisher  Done
Add "|url-access=limited" to the Tennessean refs  Done


### General comments
Images are properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site
Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. As always, ping me with questions and let me know when you're finished. — GhostRiver 00:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

GhostRiver, done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:41, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Thank you for working so quickly, happy to pass! — GhostRiver 16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)