# Talk:Homesick (MercyMe song)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 06:18, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
I took over here since the reviewer noted went inactive. Here are my concerns:

"Lead singer Bart Millard initially wrote the chorus following a funeral service for two infants that died in pregnancy, but did not finish it. Millard asserts it was because "I didn’t want to fake my way through it... My dad passed away 13 years ago, and I just couldn’t recall what such a tragedy felt like." The connection between these two sentences doesn't seem to fit. Reword to either connect them better or just note them as separate parts that got the song going.
Reworded
"and twenty-five weeks on the chart in total." 25 weeks
Done
The rationale for the image is poor, basically just saying that it's to have an image in the article. I'd delete that, and if you feel like an image has to be in there, put in a free one of the band.
Done
Most of the spots are written as "No. 3" and the like; change those to number.
Done
Didn't find much. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once this is fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:38, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:34, 25 December 2011 (UTC)