# Talk:Deni Avdija

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:43, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
Will be taking on his review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 08:43, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Delink Israel per MOS:OVERLINK
"he plays the small forward and power forward positions." - plays in the
"he joined Maccabi Tel Aviv in 2013, where he shone as a youth player." - more formal; excelled


### Youth career
"Avdija played football until he entered fourth grade," - how about changing it to association football for ambgiutiy?
"Avdija initially competed at the youth level for Bnei Herzliya. In 2013, he joined the youth ranks of Maccabi Tel Aviv." - you could merge these two sentences and rewrite them accordingly
"at Adidas Next Generation Tournament (ANGT) Munich." - at the Adidas Next Generation Tournament (ANGT) in Munich.


### Maccabi Tel Aviv (2017–present)
"he made his professional debut in the Israeli League," - Israeli Premier League
"Avdija recorded a then career-high 22 points," - career-high of 22


### Israeli junior national team
"Avdija led the tournament in rebounds (12.6) and assists (5.3) per game, to go with 15.3 points per game." - with 12.6 rebounds, 5.3 assists and 15.3 per game.
"Appearing tired from his previous tournament," - some missing words at the end of this portion of text and lacking in endurance


### Israeli senior national team
"during 2019 FIBA World Cup qualification." - during the 2019 FIBA World Cup qualification stage.
"during EuroBasket 2021 qualification." - the EuroBasket 2021 qualifiers.


### Personal life
"and her hometown is kibbutz Beit Zera.[1][33][31][34]" - refs should be in numerical order
" Sharon Artzi, is Jewish-Israeli, was a track and field athlete and basketball player," - a Jewish-Israeli from Kibbutz Beit Zera,
"and her hometown is kibbutz B eit Zera." - this is not need since it will be mentioned in the above point
"Avdija holds dual citizenship to Israel and Serbia," - of
"while his basketball season was suspended" - the


### Israeli League table
The minus sign in the PIR column should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH


### References
Those references that have hyphens should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
References 5, 7 and 9 are missing the author(s) who wrote the respective articles
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 12:00, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
@MWright96: All comments have been addressed. Sportzeditz (talk) 15:25, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

@Sportzeditz: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:36, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

It is wrong to add the "free agent" title to him, as the 2020 NBA draft he declared to attend didn't happen yet.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2604:2000:1480:47A0:6053:7B8E:3B1:E822 (talk) 18:58, 30 September 2020 (UTC) 

According to the contract, he has an exit option  to the NBA and Maccabi allowed him to train for the draft, but he is still under contract and if he does not Selected in the draft  then he is committed to Maccabi and if He was selected for the draft  Maccabi will receive compensation for him. שי אוזן (talk) 21:50, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Change ethnicity from Israeli-Serb to Israeli-Kosovar 100.37.38.174 (talk) 01:37, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
He is a Serbian citizen, not "Kosovar".Elserbio00 (talk) 09:42, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

 Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 17:40, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

The Wizards have announced on social media that Avdija has chosen his number to be 9, rather than 44 as he wanted in the first place. BasketballFan411 (talk) 19:30, 20 November 2020 (UTC) Source

Change No. 44 to No. 9 89.237.98.30 (talk) 20:04, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Done. Rikster2 (talk) 20:23, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
Marked as answered Danski454 (talk) 22:42, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Good Day,
I came across this Article about Deni Avdija and got interested into reading it. While doing so, I found a quiet controversial part in the "Personal Life" section.
"In the 2020 NBA draft interview, Avdija stated that his father is from Kosovo, Serbia, appearing with an Israel–Serbia flags pin on the lapel of his suit jacket."
The subject about the Status of Kosovo (see Recognition of Kosovo) is a controversial topic and should not have a place in a Neutral minded Wikipedia.
Please share you view about it. 
@User:Pipsally Do you might want to participate?
--InNeed95 (talk) 19:04, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
People are allowed to hold controversial views. Wikipedia can acknowledge that they do it there is a reliable source. It seems that Avdija believes Kosovo is part of Serbia, and has made a public demonstration of that. Nothing in this means that because there is well documented controversy about the status of Kosovo then we should not public figure s making overt  statements about their beliefs.Pipsally (talk) 19:12, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@User:Pipsally
"People are allowed to hold controversial views"
-Indeed they are. But those "controversial views" shouldnt be reflected thru Wikipedia. 
I dont have anything against his Point of View. I am just looking forward, that Wikipedia stays as neutral on the topic as possible. 
--InNeed95 (talk) 19:36, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

It is not in Wikipedia's voice. It is neatral coverage.Pipsally (talk) 19:39, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@User:Pipsally
Nobody claimed such.
It is Wikipedia reflecting his opinion. Which is not neutral, but controversial. 
Wikipedia has to stay neutral on the Topic.
--InNeed95 (talk) 19:54, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@InNeed95: There is nothing wrong with the paragraph. The paragraph is simply quoting what Avdija said. Elserbio00 (talk) 19:53, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@Elserbio00: How so? You seem to ignore my comments. Please read them again, than you will surely understand the problem.
I will just guess because of your revision history and your name, that you support his view point (if not true, ignore my comment), which I of course respect, but such a view point is quiet controversial because many have other thoughts and might feel offended thru it. So such controversial views shouldnt be reflected thru wikipedia. Wikipedia is a neutral information giver. 
--InNeed95 (talk) 20:00, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

There is controversy between people who like marmite and people who hate it. It is not controversial to report when a public figure chooses to wear a badge saying "I love marmite!" Pipsally (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@InNeed95: I am sorry, however, I really don't understand the problem with this paragraph, except your claim that Avdija's thoughts "might offend" someone. This is not a valid point for removing content. Most people are offended by something. Please check WP:NOTCENSORED and WP:OM. Elserbio00 (talk) 20:14, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

@Pipsally:
The Problem is not about his Badge. Its about claiming Kosovo as Serbian. Which is a controversial topic (see Recognition of Kosovo).
We can let the part about his Badge in. I have no reason to be against it. (I am sorry for the misunderstanding. It seems like I copied to much.)
--InNeed95 (talk) 20:18, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

Let's put it in the right context. There is a controversy between people who support Kosovo's independence and people who don't. It is not controversial to report when a public figure chooses not to support Kosovo's independence or other way around. Elserbio00 (talk) 20:21, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

@Elserbio00: Answer respected. May stay as it is. I am not looking forward a Edit-War, which User:Pipsally would gladly start.
--InNeed95 (talk) 16:09, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

It's not perfect, I think the personal life and early life sections have some duplication, but...there are a lot of ways I think this article could have spiralled out into hotly-contested drivel, and instead it's a strong article. Kudos to those involved. Babajobu (talk) 14:24, 24 March 2023 (UTC)

he’s the #1 option on a playoff-caliber NBA team, probably best to not use a years old picture from a previous team Char3290 (talk) 05:14, 10 November 2025 (UTC)