# Talk:New York Life Building

This page needs to be merged with New York Life Insurance Building.  Somehow, a fork has occurred.  See Talk:New York Life Insurance Building.  Slithymatt (talk) 19:58, 23 September 2008 (UTC)

It has been fixed; the other name at this moment is a disambiguation page and should be changed to redirect to disambiguation at New York Life Building (disambiguation) shortly. doncram (talk) 16:20, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:New York Life Building/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 21:44, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

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History and talk clear
Infobox good
Images licensed well
Earwig fine
reliable sources, and a wide selection of coverage
Inline citations look good
Lead satis
In the first sentence of the body, perhaps replace "it" with the name of the building?
Done
Should 'louvered' have a wikilink?
Done
bronze ornamental grills - should this be 'grilles'?
Done
MSG hasn't been established as an acronym for Madison Square Garden before it's used along, could it be added next to the full name
Done, I guess, though the article already had the text "first Madison Square Garden (MSG)". epicgenius (talk) 22:45, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
Should ref [57] be outside the bracket?
Done
What is woolen firms?
Fixed
Real giant candle?
An artificial one. epicgenius (talk) 22:45, 3 May 2020 (UTC)


### Overall
on hold I may have missed some commas, but issues are minor. Kingsif (talk) 22:32, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
@Kingsif: Thanks, I have done these. epicgenius (talk) 22:45, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
Thanks, pass this one, too. Kingsif (talk) 22:48, 3 May 2020 (UTC)