# Talk:Guy Newton (RNZAF officer)

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 13:58, 6 March 2023 (UTC)

 
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

I think you could afford to mention his marriage to Marjorie Hutton when it occurred in 1943.
FWIW I checked a copy of Aces High II and there was no further info on him.
b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)

Thanks for the review Ian Rose, I have added mention of his marriage to the WWII section. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:01, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
No prob, all good then. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:35, 12 March 2023 (UTC)