# Talk:Koh-i-Sultan

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Koh-i-Sultan/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Tisquesusa (talk · contribs) 05:23, 21 January 2017 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
Very complete article about a volcano little known, good job
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
Well-written, correct grammar, lead is ok, but could be expanded a bit, lay-out good
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 
Extensive list of reliable references, wording is not copyvio'd, neat
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Complete overview of the various characteristics of this volcano. Enough detail about the rock types, ages and location
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
No bias in this relatively sensitive region between Iran, Pakistan and Afghanistan
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
No problems
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
More images could be added, but there are none freely available of this mountain at Commons, so ok
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Compliments for creating an extensive well-written article about a relatively unknown and for Pakistan unusual volcano. Great article.
Hum. @Tisquesusa: seems like the passing has not been registered. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 10:57, 22 January 2017 (UTC)