# Talk:D (video game)

The review at Videogamecritic.net [1] makes a big deal of the game being played in real time, over a period of two hours. "This game is unique because it's played in real time, and it ends exactly after two hours after you start playing, unless you finish it, of course. You can't even pause or save your place, so make sure you have two hours free before you undertake this intense adventure.". Is this the case? -Ashley Pomeroy 17:33, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

Yes. · Tygartl1·talk· 13:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Can somebody please edit out the ridiculously placed spoilers in this article? Example "... especially when you find out that D stands for [BLANK]!" Ruined the game for me, thanks.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.199.246.21 (talk) 18:20, 2 January 2008 (UTC) 

Hi, Per WP:SPOILER - there is a general disclaimer on each page."It is not acceptable to delete information from an article about a work of fiction because you think it spoils the plot" AtaruMoroboshi (talk) 16:24, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

Does anyone know of any speedruns or playthrough videos of this game?
Kelevro (talk) 06:07, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:53, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

I have this on the Saturn. Good game! I should finish this by tomorrow. JAGUAR  20:53, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. I'll have this finished by tomorrow morning at the latest! JAGUAR  20:16, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
"developed by WARP and directed by Kenji Eno" - typically the opening sentence should be "developed by x and published by x", but since the game is essentially an interactive movie it suggests the director is important, so it's up to you if you want to keep it this way
I think it's important to mention Eno up front. Sort of like it's hard to introduce a Metal Gear game without mentioning Hideo Kojima. I added the publishers to the following sentence, I think it flows best that way. When there's a complicated publishing history, it's hard to fit into the lead and keep the flow.
All three paragraphs of the lead begin with "D"—try mixing it up by replacing one of them with "The game"
Done
Shift the gameplay screenshot to the left so it doesn't squash the text below the infobox
Done
"and so Eno felt that if it were not successful he would quit from game development" - how about abandoned the game's development
From the source it sounds like he would quit the gaming industry all-together, not just abandon D. From the source: "When I was creating first major title D, neither I nor and WARP were famous. Nobody knew me. If no success, I had to close. D was my 1st and last game where I was like gambling while creating." I agree that my wording could sound better, I tried re-wording it but if you have a better suggestion, let me know.
Thanks, I think it looks fine the way it is JAGUAR  10:34, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
"D is an interactive movie which features adventure game" - link interactive movie and adventure game here (gameplay section)
Done
" inspired by Polarware's Transylvania adventure game series for the personal computer" - personal computer sounds too broad. Was there a specific platform mentioned? If not, I'd recommend cutting "for the personal computer" entirely
Source only says PC, removed
" Sam Hickman of Sega Saturn Magazine" - from the
Done
" but criticized that the game for its lack of longevity" - but criticized it for its lack of longevity
Done
A very solid and engaging article. It is well researched, well written, and properly sourced, so once all of the above are clarified then this should pass. Nice work on this! JAGUAR  11:49, 1 March 2017 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thanks for your constructive criticism! All points addressed TarkusAB 00:11, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing them so quickly! By all means, promoted  JAGUAR  10:34, 2 March 2017 (UTC)