# Talk:Kidung Abadi

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:47, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

"Kidung Abadi" ("Eternal Ballad") --> "Kidung Abadi" (English: "Eternal Ballad")

is a song written by father and daughter team Erwin and Gita Gutawa for the Kidung Abadi Chrisye concert, held on 5 April 2012 to commemorate the fifth anniversary of Chrisye's death. --> A bit too long of a sentence. Either seperate into two sentences, or remove the " held on 5 April 2012".
Split with a semi-colon
Where is the source for the song's genre to be pop?
Almost all his songs are pop and the song itself sounds like pure pop, but none of the individual references indicate it. Genre removed
Was it released on April 5, or was it just performed? Released refers to the date it is made available to buy.
Does not seem to have been released; date removed. Trust me, I've been looking. There are pirated copies around the internet, but that's not exactly a "release"
A bit confused with the infobox. Writer refers to someone who writes both music and lyrics, while composer refers to music only. There should really be a "lyricist" section, but for some reason there isn't. I suggest either bringing it to the attention of the template's talk page, or just doing what was done, for example, here.
Done.
The song was well received by the audience and critics. --> What did they say about it?
In the lead? Didn't plan to put specific examples in as the article is fairly short, but I have done so now. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:27, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Happy with the article. Great work; passing! Statυs (talk) 23:39, 20 June 2012 (UTC)