# Talk:Mise of Amiens

The word "give" in "give a settlement" is used in the same sense as you would say "give a judgement". I wanted to avoid using "make a settlement" because this could give the impression that Louis was party to the settlement. The most precise term would probably be "award a settlement", but I was afraid this could be confusing. I've made a change in the language though (added words in italics), which will hopefully make it clearer:

The Mise of Amiens was a settlement given by King Louis IX of France on 23 January 1264 in the conflict between King Henry III of England and his rebellious barons, led by Simon de Montfort. Lampman (talk) 02:58, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
Hmmm, better, but "given" still seems a little vague to me. I'll give it some thought to see if I can come up with an alternative. Gatoclass (talk) 05:29, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mise of Amiens/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Starting review. Pyrotec (talk) 16:36, 4 October 2009 (UTC)


### Initial comments
After a couple of quick read-throughs, this looks to be quite a reasonable article so I will carry out the review in more depth. Pyrotec (talk) 18:41, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
I've now completed my review.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
Well referenced.
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
Well referenced.
C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
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B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

Congratulations on the quality of the article, I'm awarding GA-status. Pyrotec (talk) 19:28, 4 October 2009 (UTC)