# Talk:Leon W. Johnson

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Leon W. Johnson/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)

I'll get to this over the weekend.  auntieruth (talk) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
First section
second sentence is hinky
Y Fixed after looking up "hinky" in the Wiktionary. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
link second lieutenant
 Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
Mitchell Field, New York,  (missing comma after NY)
Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
WWII
Dab
Y Disambiguated . Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
On 14 May 1943 comma
Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
The B-24, carrying incendiaries, came under particularly heavy attack from German fighters, as they were unable to stay close enough the B-17s to be protected by their gunfire, and had to open up their own formation to attack; five of the eight aircraft shot down were B-24s.  confusing to an air fighting noob
the attack on the Ploesti oil fields in Romania....the attack on the Romanian Ploesti oil fields is possibly more readable
 Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
Andy Rooney knew he was a general before he was a general?
Yes, but he didn't like hanging around the bomber outfits, because it was too depressing. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
Postwar
capitalize air
 Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
promotion to major general?
 Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
Nice!  Let me know when you get to this.  auntieruth (talk) 23:03, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
y
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
nicely done.  interesting and concise.  auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)

Today I added a 1952 official biography as a reference. It disagrees by one day re: Capt (permanent). I checked Fogarty's 1953 compilation, it does claim 13 June while the 1952 command-level bio claims 12 June. I left the date as-is given that both sources hold equal stature. A related issue: the reference to Fogarty's work doesn't point to the correct PDF. I made a note to myself to see if we need multiple references or just one. I'll revisit this if no one else beats me to it. Rob Rosenberger (talk) 03:51, 20 October 2021 (UTC)