# Talk:Jean-Joseph Ange d'Hautpoul

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Jean-Joseph Ange d'Hautpoul
I checked for problems with external links and references but did not find any.  I also ran the article through AWB and found a couple of minor issues which I fixed, I hope you don't mind.

There is one disambiguous link for Eylau
I think the lead should be expanded a little. Its currently very short and doesn't summerize the article
Since this is a person I think that the persondata template should be added.
There is a broken citation in the revolutionary wars section.
reference 9 in the references is broken. Not sure if this is related to the citation problem above.
Other than these few things it looks good to me. --Kumioko (talk) 20:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
Reviewer: Kumioko (talk) 20:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

thanks for reading. I think I've fixed the points you're raised. I've not found a broken link.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 22:28, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
All items are fixed so I promoted the article, good job. --Kumioko (talk) 01:56, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
thank you! And thanks for the review. Always good to have another pair of eyes~ Auntieruth55 (talk) 02:29, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

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