# Talk:Hurricane (Kanye West and the Weeknd song)

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Reviewer: Realmaxxver (talk · contribs) 11:35, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

Placeholder. Realmaxxver (talk) 11:35, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

"Over time, "Hurricane" went through several iterations, containing vocals from Clemons, Big Sean, Ty Dolla Sign, Young Thug, and 6ix9ine; several leaks of the song have surfaced online.[11][12][13][14]" → "Over time, "Hurricane" went through several iterations, containing vocals from Clemons, Big Sean, Ty Dolla Sign, Young Thug, and 6ix9ine, with several leaks of the song surfacing online.[11][12][13][14]"
"KayCyy recorded a bridge afterwards in an attempt to appear on the track, which West "actually ended up fucking with", according to the singer.[26]" → "In an attempt to appear on the track, KayCyy recorded a bridge which West "actually ended up fucking with", according to the singer.[26]"
 Done for the above --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
"In an interview published by GQ on August 2, 2021, Canadian singer-songwriter the Weeknd stated, "I'd love to work with Kanye again. Especially on production."[12]" it would be better to cite the actual cover story, as the current source is dated August 9th. You don't have to, I'm just saying that the two dates are a bit contradictory.
 Done and I also added the mention of it being a cover story interview --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
"It utilizes West's typical production style, relying on an atmospheric beat.[34][35] The song includes layered organs, heavy bass, and trap drums.[36][37][38]" → "It utilizes West's typical production style, relies on an atmospheric beat;[34][35] while including layered organs, heavy bass, and trap drums.[36][37][38]"
 Partly done I kept the prose about relying the same because that flows smoother --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
"alongside noting "a massive hook" from the Weeknd" → "while also noting "a massive hook" from the Weeknd"
"An army of digital masked avatars dressed in Yeezy Gap hoodies–resembling the music video released for "Heaven and Hell"–are present in the video, which demonstrates a dystopian-looking society.[76][77]" → "An army of digital masked avatars dressed in Yeezy Gap hoodies–resembling the music video released for "Heaven and Hell"–are present in the video, demonstrating a dystopian-looking society.[76][77]"
"In the following scenes, people ascending towards the sky close to a beam of light, as well as swirling hurricane clouds can be seen.[78][80]" → "In the following scenes, people ascend towards the sky close to a beam of light, while swirling hurricane clouds can be seen.[78][80]"
"who has contributed artwork for metal bands such as Behemoth–accused West" random dash, think It's meant to be a comma?
 Done for the above


### Files and copyvio
The image licensing is fine, although I would suggest cutting the audio file by a second or two.
 Done --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Copyvio's looking good!
Just what I expected --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Putting on hold now. Realmaxxver (talk) 22:54, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
Realmaxxver I have covered everything, is this article ready to pass now? --K. Peake 07:21, 7 June 2022 (UTC)


### Overall