# Talk:Huma Qureshi

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 15:09, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this is a bit later on.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 15:09, 9 April 2013 (UTC)

Intro This strikes me as not neutral. "Critically acclaimed" is repeated too much. "She is considered one of the most promising actresses in Hindi cinema." according to whom?
 Done - tweaked
Early "Qureshi has worked with several NGOs and assisted a documentary filmmaker". What NGOs and films were these?
Well, only that much information is available.Prashant talk 02:18, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
Paragraph break after theatre productions please.

 Done
Acting career Could do with a better balance of quotes, a lot by her and Taran Adarsh but there are some others so should be OK.

her performance earned an honorable mention at the 2012 Indian Film Festival of Los Angeles. What is "an honorable mention"? Award, special award what?
 Done - I think, Special mention was used but, was changed during copy/edit by GOCE.Prashant talk 02:18, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
generally positive reviews from critics; Qureshi's performance (particularly her scenes with Siddiqui)[9]attracted positive feedback from reviewers. Unnecessary repetition, you only need to say positive feedback once.
 Done
"broad critical acclaim". Seems a bit much. I'd like to see some evidence of that and some more negative quotes in the article to balance it out.
 Done - Added new sources for the "wide critical acclaim" and a negative quote for her performance in th film.Prashant talk 02:18, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
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"Qureshi described Gangs of Wasseypur as a "life-changing film"." Shouldn't this be in the career section with the film?
 Done - Added to "Acting career" section.Prashant talk 02:27, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
"She is known for her unconventional appearance." What exactly is an unconventional appearance? Does she have five heads? She looks pretty normal for an actress to me and looks pretty slim too. Sources??
 Done - The source was present but was linked to the following quote. I have tweaked it for now.Prashant talk 03:12, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
References
Inconsistency in linking publisher names. Either link all or don't.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:42, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:28, 9 April 2013 (UTC)

 Done - I have linked all the publisher names to maintain consistency.Prashant talk 02:27, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Pass or Fail: 
Conditional though. She's barely appeared in any films so this article will need to be continuously updated. If she has any negative reviews I'd like to see them added to balance it out a bit more. Give where she is in her career and coverage, I think the article is adequate at the moment and covers what needs to be covered.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 07:36, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

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Filmography
Viceroy's House
Character: Alia (Not Fatima Jinnah)
BishalPaul08 (talk) 10:08, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

 Not done: as you have not cited reliable sources to back up your request, without which no information should be added to, or changed in, any article. I can't find a reliable source, but it appears that Sarah-Jane Dias is playing Aalia. - Arjayay (talk) 12:21, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Hi I'm from Huma's team. The character name for Viceroy's House in Filmography is wrongly mentioned. She's not playing the character of Fatima Jinnah but a character named Aalia. She has requested the admins to kindly change it. Thanks!

183.87.79.24 (talk) 19:47, 7 August 2016 (UTC)

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How do I do that? I hope some experienced editor helps me with this. It's a genuinely bad profile picture, and it would be nice to see a better one, is all. I would have done it myself but the article is protected, sadly. 103.255.115.252 (talk) 17:48, 12 January 2017 (UTC)

Need to add Kaala_(2018_film) in the list of filmography. Sunnyroyeee (talk) 10:22, 26 May 2017 (UTC)

 Not done for now: It redirects to Pa. Ranjith. DRAGON BOOSTER  ★ 07:15, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
hi...huma..i'm your very very very fan..please say something..  — Preceding unsigned comment added by BUDDHADEV KORA (talk • contribs) 15:35, 8 July 2017 (UTC) 

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Nationality: Indaia TO Nationality: India Prassi89 (talk) 20:51, 17 November 2022 (UTC)

 Done Have removed it per MOS:INFOBOXNTLY, infobox already says she was born in India Cannolis (talk) 21:03, 17 November 2022 (UTC)

There's an error in the article: the composer of the music of "Tumhe Dillagi" is not Rahat Fateh Ali Khan but his uncle Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan. 178.51.126.153 (talk) 21:21, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
 Done PianoDan (talk) 00:10, 23 January 2024 (UTC)

Huma qureshi

is best Actress 2405:205:C90B:7244:0:0:16DA:C8AD (talk) 12:40, 31 January 2024 (UTC)