# Talk:Kellee Santiago

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:46, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:46, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"and intended to pursue it after beginning a a master's degree" change beginning to earning and remove the second a
"which she describes as "simple, but so effective and so evocative" in instilling emotion in the player" since there's a quote, sentence should have a cite.
"where she played video games from a young age and was encouraged by her software engineer to experiment with computers" note that her father is a software engineer. it makes sense in the body, but in the lead it just sounds like she was randomly living with a software engineer at some point.
"In addition to her role as president of he company," the company
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:22, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

All fixed. Perhaps that "father" morphed into an "a" and wandered over several sentences? --PresN 04:59, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
Somethin must be in the water, every article i'm reviewing tonight is getting fixed nearly instantly. :) Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:27, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

news source: EuroGamer
Her CV on her website lists 2006-2012 as her period at thatgamecompany
Someone needs to update this article.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.154.166.28 (talk) 00:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC) 

The article was updated in March, but the first sentence suggests she's still president. I'll fix that. Reach Out to the Truth 15:50, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
The segment that says she's now working at Ouya should not be under "thatgamecompany."  There should be a "Post thatgamecompany" section or the naming system has to be changed.  180.42.119.26 (talk) 16:46, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

I'm always nervous about messing up good articles :) It might be nice to mention someplace that she was listed as one of the top 100 most influential women in technology in 2011. SarahStierch (talk) 23:29, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Added! Feel free to mess up good articles- by definition they can always be improved! --PresN 03:41, 26 October 2012 (UTC)