# Talk:Mongolia at the 2010 Winter Olympics

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:06, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:06, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

"73rd, by" Comma is unnecessary.
Link the NOC in the prose.
Looking at the picture, there are four people in the delegation if you include coaches.
So when did the two events take place?
For numbers less than ten, spell out the word.
Just a few things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:18, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Everything done except for the middle point.  I can't find any RSes discussing the delegation details, so who is marching with the athletes is a bit of a mystery.  Courcelles (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
Pinging Nova Crystallis, forgot to do it in my first edit. Courcelles (talk) 14:23, 20 May 2018 (UTC)