# Talk:Cyclone Xavier (2006)

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Hi, I will be reviewing this article which is currently up for Good Article Nomination. I should have the full review out within an hour. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:50, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Lead
Some of the sentences are a bit clunky and seem like run-ons. Try not to include too much detail in the lead as it is a quick summary of the article, just include major points
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When using an intensity scale, use numerical values for categories, i.e. 1, 2, 3, etc... instead of the word.
Done
Read over WP:MOS#Commas to fully understand when and when not to use commas
Meteorological history
Wikilink all meteorological jargon to their respective articles
Done i think.
Preparations and impact
Good
Just some minor things with WP:MOS that need to be addressed. I'm putting the article on hold for seven days to allow you time to correct the above issues. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:58, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

I've done a final look through and made corrections here and there. The article is now up to snuff with GA standards. As such, I'm passing the article, nice job Jason. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:40, 22 July 2009 (UTC)