# Talk:Fred Pepper

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Fred Pepper/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:26, 19 April 2016 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon.  JAGUAR  22:26, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
"the end of his playing career was marked by short spells at other emerging Northern teams" - unclear, what is 'short spells' referring to? And I assume this means the north of England?
"a small town prospering from the installment" - instalment (British English)
" home to Bethlehem Steel and it's eponymous football club" - its
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

The issues I picked out were very minor, but the article meets the criteria based on its good prose, broadness and coverage.  JAGUAR  14:30, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

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