# Talk:Francis Birch (geophysicist)

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 16:40, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Hawkeye7 (talk)
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 16:40, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with the other FAs)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (PD)

Hawkeye7, I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview for the Post-war.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 17:46, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for your review! I have rewritten the fourth paragraph of the lead to provide a better overview. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:26, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:26, 16 February 2014 (UTC)

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