# Talk:German torpedo boat T16

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:10, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
I will take a gander at this one. Comments to follow over next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:10, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
Only a few points here: 

In the lead, the phrase "the ship was transferred to France" makes it sound like T16 was transferred to French service.
In the Construction and career section: through the Channel to Germany clarify English Channel
in the Baltic with...: suggest "in the Baltic Sea with..."
Norway is linked on second mention, not first.
Dupe link: Skagerrak (note the different spelling on links)
That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 July 2020 (UTC)

I dunno why I linked terms that I'd linked to in the lede, but I've fixed all of them. Thanks for taking the time to review this, see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:35, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
Looks good, passing as GA as I consider that it meets the relevant criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:33, 27 July 2020 (UTC)