# Talk:Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV

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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
I'll do this one - expect a review tomorrow or during the weekend.--IDVtalk 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)


### Lead/infobox
an in-game reference to Prompto's difficult childhood - We haven't introduced Prompto yet, so I would write "to the character Prompto's...."
alongside fellow spin-off title Kingsglaive: Final Fantasy XV - I would probably specify that this is a film and not another ONA
Genres must reference a RS and not be our own interpretations.
Opinions on the anime [...] were among the most watched videos - the ONA was what was among the most-watched, while this seems to say that reviews of the ONA were watched a lot


### Synopsis
Is this crystal just a regular real-world crystal or is it some magical item? I don't understand its significance.


### Production
Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV forms part of the "Final Fantasy XV Universe" (...) that includes Brotherhood - don't list Brotherhood twice
Link CGI to Computer-generated imagery
Is it relevant at all in this context that XV used to be called Versus XIII?
We should probably clarify how Square Enix is related to XV.
The concept was first proposed some time in 2014 "some time" doesn't add anything to this
Link tech demo to Technology demonstration
after his near-death experience - the use of "his" makes it sound like the reader is meant to know what event this is referring to. I would probably change it to "a near-death experience"


### Release
"Uncovered: Final Fantasy XV", a media event dedicated to the title Does "the title" refer to Brotherhood or XV?
The two formed a close bond, - does "the two" refer to Noctis and Iris or Noctis and Gladiolus?
beaten back - during - use – or — rather than -.


### Reception
GamesRadar called the anime "surprisingly well-written and are well worth watching" - this doesn't work grammatically. I would probably write "called the episodes" or change "and are" to "[and]".
Is PSX Extreme a reliable source? It hasn't been discussed much at the WPVG sources talk page, so unless we have reason to believe it is reliable, I would just remove it, especially considering the only thing it says about Brotherhood is that it is "excellent".


### Comments
@ProtoDrake: Looks good - I did find a few issues, listed above, but I don't think any of them should be very difficult to fix.--IDVtalk 16:37, 19 November 2016 (UTC)

@IDV: I've sorted everything above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 16:52, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
@ProtoDrake: Excellent! Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV is now a GA.--IDVtalk 17:00, 19 November 2016 (UTC)