# Talk:Doris Stevens

Adam Cuerden you are much better with photo rights than me. What the heck does rights managed mean? I suppose that it probably puts this one out of the question?? [1] but it is a great image. SusunW (talk) 16:57, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, it doesn't actually mean very much at all. If this was published, it has a decent chance of having lost its copyright - copyright renewals tended to be a little spotty. https://www.loc.gov/search/?in=&q=Doris+stevens&new=true&st=  Adam Cuerden (talk) 17:06, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
I don't know, Adam Cuerden. I looked at all the ones on the LOC site and it looks like they are all WP. But that Edna St. Vincent Millay one is lovely but possibly controlled by her estate? Then I just found this which is her giving "the speech" in 1928 to the Pan American Union. Clearly a US government publication, so where do I find it on the government site because this one is so tiny as to be useless? SusunW (talk) 20:33, 26 February 2016 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Doris Stevens/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 19:44, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Lede
"organizer. She was in charge of organizing the women's congress, held at the Panama Pacific Exposition in 1915. When the CUWS became the National Woman's Party (NWP) in 1916, Stevens organized" -Can you find a way to reword "organizr/img/ed to avoud rep?
 Done Not really anything in thesaurus, I guess a labor organizer/union organizer is just that, but I called her a "national strategist" which to my thinking is what she did. SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Jailed for Freedom -year in brackets?
 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Early life
Link Omaha?
 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Suffrage
Palace Hotel, in San Francisco.
 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Equality
"Stevens served as vice chairman of NWP’s New York branch,[4] spearheaded the NWP Women for Congress campaign in 1924. " did you mean to add an and before "spearheaded"?
 Done, no, I actually meant spearheading. Fixed it.SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
League of Nations should be linked in the first instance and delinked elsewhere (at the bottom).
 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Later career
"From 1951 to 1963, " -new paragraph needed
 Done SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Wonderfully comprehensive and well written. Can find little wrong with it, great job SusunW, Megalibrarygirl and Rosiestep♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:29, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Dr. Blofeld you rock! Thank you so much. Coming from you, that is high praise indeed. We worked hard on her. SusunW (talk) 21:28, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable?
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Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
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