# Talk:Nursehound

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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA and have a few comments, mainly about the use of the passive voice (so disliked by WP:WEASEL):

"This species was later moved to the genus Scyliorhinus." - Passive voice, who moved it?
Info added
"he common name "nursehound" came from the belief that this shark attends to its smaller relatives," - again, the passive voice. Who had this belief?
Info added
"The nursehound has been reported from a depth of 1–125 m (3.3–410 ft)," - This sounds like someone went to a depth of 1–125 m (3.3–410 ft) and reported it. A problem with the passive voice. Must be clear what the subject is.
Changed
"This species is less common than the small-spotted catshark." - Should wikilink it again here for the reader.
Done
"Human interactions" - since this section is relatively large, I think it should be reflected in the lede. Also, the fact is is eaten by humans.
Expanded that part of the intro
Although not required by GA, you could add alt text for visually disabled readers.
Done
I reworded a little  - "reproductive mode" didn't sound right to me. Hope that is OK.
Just curious, how did you decide to name this article, given the shark is known by several common names?
Most fish articles on Wikipedia use the primary common name given by FishBase, unless there's a compelling reason not to.
Otherwise, all looks good.
Regards, —Mattisse (Talk) 21:21, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I've addressed the issues; let me know of any others. -- Yzx (talk) 00:25, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Final GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): Clearly written   b (MoS): Follows relevant MoS 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): Well referenced  b (citations to reliable sources): References are reliable  c (OR): No OR 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): Covers major aspect  b (focused): Remains focues 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: Neutral  

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: Stable 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: Pass 

Good work!
—Mattisse (Talk) 15:50, 27 July 2009 (UTC)