# Talk:Norman E. Rosenthal

I put the photo back because the permissions were changed by the copyright holder on Wikimedia.
Lalulorlor (talk) 19:36, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Needs some tune up. Help!  :-) -- — Keithbob • Talk •  21:04, 14 July 2011 (UTC)

Looks like the bot got it! -- — Keithbob • Talk •  16:44, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Norman E. Rosenthal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 21:31, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found
Linkrot: one found and tagged.[1] Jezhotwells (talk)


### Checking against GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
In 1984, Rosenthal pioneered seasonal affective disorder, coined the term SAD, and began studying the use of light therapy as a treatment. this does not read well, perhaps "In 1984, Rosenthal pioneered research into seasonal affective disorder, coined the term SAD, and began studying the use of light therapy as a treatment.
The lead does not fully summarise the article, please read and apply WP:LEAD.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Sources appear reliable, all significant statements are cited, no evidence of WP:OR.
Ref #8 is a dead link.
It would be good to use citation templates to display full details of citations.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Good coverage
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
Is there any criticism of his works? This seems to concentrate just on the positives.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
Stable
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
One image used, licensed and captioned.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
On hold for seven days for the above concerns to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:53, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for your quick response. I am happy to pass this as a good article. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 16:45, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for your initial evaluation and suggestions.  Today I have:

Rewrote awkward sentence you cited above.
Removed dead link and obsolete source which was only a supportive, self published citation anyway.
Expanded and improved the lead.
Standardized all citations following the order set out in the citation template
Added criticism of his research on SAD.  I checked every source listed in the article and this was the only criticism I could find -- — Keithbob • Talk •  16:35, 22 October 2011 (UTC)