# Talk:Crime and Dissonance

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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)


### Checklist
### Comments
1
Is this in British English or American?
That's a good question. I generally try to use AmE since most topics I cover are American; however I don't speak it myself and now that you bring this up I'm wondering if there's even a particular reason for an album of Italian music to use it. I guess the record label is American but if you convince me one way or the other I'll scan through and standardise anything missing. GRAPPLE X 04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
I can do that. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
proto-sampledelica - Perhaps a link or something?
Linked to sampling (music). Sampledelia exists but it's not in the best condition; should I go with it anyway? GRAPPLE X 04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
I'd link to Sampledelia, as it's a more relevant topic. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
2
Fix the CN tag.
Got it, thanks. GRAPPLE X 04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
3
Possible further sources:
Crime and Dissonance at Stylus Magazine
Already cited in 5 places. :P
ENNIO MORRICONE; Crime and Dissonance at The Stranger
Having a look now. GRAPPLE X 04:20, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Source spotchecks (based on this revision)

FN1
A  Dagored appears nowhere in the article. Otherwise checks out
B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
FN5
A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
D Checks out, no close paraphrasing
E Having trouble with the first sentence. He says "more relevant", perhaps as a way to avoid the "unfortunate" kitsch that Morricone has become known for. Otherwise okay.
FN8
A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
B Checks out, no close paraphrasing
C Checks out, no close paraphrasing
FN11
A Checks out, no close paraphrasing
B Checks out, no close paraphrasing


### Further discussion
I'll let you deal with that before I do a source spotcheck. Holding. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:52, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Spotchecks after lunch. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:04, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Couple issues. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:30, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Did a little extra citing and rephrasing. I should probably get to bed soon though, it's nearly 8. :/ GRAPPLE X 06:41, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
No need to overwork yourself for this. Passing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:44, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

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