# Talk:German destroyer Z8 Bruno Heinemann

Hi, per the request on WP:MHA I have assessed the article. It looks like a solid B class article to me. I noticed two things that you might consider tweaking:

the last sentence in the Career section could probably be tightened up. For instance: "Only 93 men were not rescued by the other destroyers, although five of the 234 survivors later died of their wounds." This could probably be reworded to: "98 members of the ship's crew lost their lives: 93 were lost at sea, while another five, who had originally been among the 234 men rescued, died of their wounds";
in the Notes there is "Groener" but in the References it is "Gröner". This should probably be consistent. AustralianRupert (talk) 09:25, 7 April 2011 (UTC)
Good ideas.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:09, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:German destroyer Z8 Bruno Heinemann/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Harrison49 (talk) 15:16, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
The article maintains a good style and layout throughout.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 
The article is well referenced.
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 
The article covers the major aspects.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
The article maintains a neutral point of view.
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
The article does not appear to be subject to edit warring.
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
The sole image used is within the public domain under United States law.
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
A very informative article. Harrison49 (talk) 18:48, 27 April 2011 (UTC)