# Talk:Liksom en Herdinna, högtids klädd

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Thanks!
Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
Done.
"The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
Done.
Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
Added.
Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
Done.


### Context
First para looks good!
Thanks.
"during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
Done.


### Song
#### Music and verse form
Audio sample looks good!
Noted.
Merge the first para with the second per the short length
Done.
Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
Done.
Pipe 68 time to Time signature
Done.


#### Lyrics
Nicolas Boileau → Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux on the img text
Done.
Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
Done.
"Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
Done.
"a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
Done.
"But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
Done.


### Reception and legacy
Img looks good!
Thanks.
"Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
Done; both are correct.
"like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
Done.
"However he finds" → "However, he finds"
Done.
"crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?
 Yes. 
"with Epistles 71, "Ulla! min Ulla!", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
Done.
"and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
Done.
Pipe classical to Classical music
Done.


### References
Copyvio score looks superb at 10.7%!!!
Noted.
Add the language parameter to ref 1
Done.
Pipe The Bellman Society to Bellman Society on ref 4 per MOS:LINK2SECT
Done.
Should Eva Toller really be listed as an author for ref 23 when that is on her website?
 Yes, she could be hosting guest authors there too.


### Sources
Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
Done.


### External links
Good
Noted.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until everything is fixed; coincidentally, you expressed gratitude around the same time I started actually reviewing! --K. Peake 09:20, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I think I've fixed everything to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
Chiswick Chap All good, apart from where you forgot to change the pipes for rhyming pattern and 68. --K. Peake 09:46, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
I've done those for you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:48, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now; I am very pleased with such a quick response! --K. Peake 09:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)