# Talk:Hurricane Pauline (1968)

Clean it up some more, review the writing, and try and find out more about the tornado. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:40, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"near Ciudad Constitución, in Mexico" that comma's not needed.
"Even though, the picture" same, no comma needed.
"October 1 was mostly not helpful due to another electronic problem, however," a semicolon after problem works better here.
Just a few punctuation things. Article's on hold and will be passed when done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

All fixed. Thanks for the review. YE  Pacific Hurricane 02:58, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC)