# Talk:David Bedell-Sivright

[1] published in 1904. -- Shudde talk 09:35, 1 June 2014 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

@Peacemaker67: Thanks for your review. I have fixed all the prose and grammar problems you listed. I've attempted to add more information on the date and location of File:Bedellsivright rugby.jpeg. It was almost certainly taken in 1904, probably in Australia, but maybe in New Zealand. I've found a number of images online of the team posing in the same jersey as he is wearing in that photo -- all say they were taken in Australia during his tour there. Let me know whether it's acceptable or not. Thanks again. -- Shudde talk 05:25, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

Licensing looks ok now. Passing GA. Peacemaker67  (send... over) 06:41, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

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