# Talk:New Zealand at the 2014 Winter Paralympics

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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 08:27, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

I will take this up.  The C of E   God Save the Queen! (talk) 08:27, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Overall a good lookng article but a few changes are needed before it can make GA status:
Can we get a source for NZ's Paralympic streak in the lead?
Sourced in the background section, per WP:LEAD there aren't supposed to be citations in the lead. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Likewise one for the Slalom win and the first sentence of the Background section
Same for here, it is sourced lower in in the article when discussed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Shouldn't it be "the Chef de Mission"?
Yep, right, fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
The Disability criteria sentence is far too long and should be broken up
Done. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
The sentence referring to Hall's Super G needs punctuation
I'm not seeing what punctuation is needed in"In the Men's Super-G he did not finish the single-run race." Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Is there really a need to link the IPC in each source? To me that appears to be WP:OLINK.
MOS:REPEATLINK seems to allow it in footnotes. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Source 8, BBC Online shouldn't be in italics as it isn't a published source
Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Sources 10 and 14, Why are the surnames in all capital letters? I would say that would go against MOS:CAPS
Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Sources 13 and 19, do you have any more information for describing that source? An ISBN or ISSN number? I would feel better if there were more in the reference (publisher, date, maybe a quote etc.)
See Ref 3, that's the media handbook I'm citing. For clarity, I've added the full citation every time. Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
All in all @Courcelles:, to me it just needs a little more work and it will be ready.  The C of E   God Save the Queen! (talk) 08:50, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

@The C of E: Responses inline, thanks for the review! Courcelles (talk) 11:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Excellent, All passed now for GA. Well done @Courcelles:.  The C of E   God Save the Queen! (talk) 11:55, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
Thanks! Courcelles (talk) 12:09, 27 April 2018 (UTC)