# Talk:DMT Azul

In the first main paragraph he's refered to as both.  Which is correct?  207.164.131.30 (talk) 17:10, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

Romano.  MPJ-DK  (59,25% Done) Talk  21:49, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Diamante Azul/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Should be up tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 17:21, 7 August 2016 (UTC)

Excellent, look forward to working with you on this.  MPJ-DK *
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate 

use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

no dab links
Lead
"Professional wrestling promotion" - The first P doesn't need to be capitalised
"In early 2012 was given a new image and ring name," - missing "he"
Professional wrestling career
"Lucha libre has a long held tradition of not revealing the birth name of masked wrestlers unless they are later unmasked" - this sentence is missing a full stop
Metro (2009-2012)
Delink Mexico City since it is already link in the previous sub-section
"slowly advancing up the ranks to some times working in the semi-main event on a few shows." - some times is one word
"The "Metro" ring character was introduced in 2006 and had previously been given given to young wrestlers who had yet to establish their own ring character." - repititon of the word given
"The first part of the tournament took place on December 22, 2009 and the second part of the tournament took place on December 29." - same for took place
"He was the first wrestler eliminated in the seeding battle royal and then lost to Héctor Garza, then-reigning CMLL World Heavyweight Champion. in the first round." - remove the full stop after the word Champion
"On November 18, 2010, Máscara Dorada announced that he was relinquishing his part of the Mexican National Trios Championship due to holding three other championships at the same time.. " - remove duplicate full stop at the end of this sentence
"Diamante Azul was part of "Block B" that competed on the August 6, 2010 Super Viernes show." - You want to change Diamante Azul to Metro for consistency in the sub-section
Diamante Azul (2012-present)
Here you use a mixture of Diamante Azul and Azul - please rectify this
Same for On/in xxxx - only some sentences have a comma and others don't
Delink France per WP:OVERLINK
"Azul and Rush finished their tour with a pay-per-view on December 2," - pay-per-view event?
"the ring in May, 2016working for CMLL" - remove the comma and added space between 2016 and working
"reigning CMLL worl d Tag Team Champions" - remove the space in the word World
References
References 9, 33 & 38 are redirects to their respective home page and not to their intended links. Can archive links be found for those sources?
That's all the points I found. On hold until everything is actioned. MWright96 (talk) 12:05, 8 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: - I believe I have addressed all of your concerns and comments.  MPJ-DK  22:38, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
@MPJ-DK: I made one fix in the article, other than that, it is good for GA quality. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 9 August 2016 (UTC)