# Talk:Joshua Ilustre

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Joshua Ilustre/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:48, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 14:48, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Biography
"Joshua Ilustre was born January 23, 1994 in Tamuning, Guam" - reword this piece of text so it reads as follows: Joshua Ilustre was born in Tamuning, Guam on January 23, 1994.
"Ilustre graduated from George Washington High School." - Wikilink George Washington High School to George Washington High School (Guam)
Do the same with walk-on which should be linked to Walk-on (sports)
"achieving summa cum laude." - Have no knowledge of what "summa cum laude" means but link it to Latin honors to aid those unfamiliar with the phrase


### 2016 Summer Olympics
Wikilink Guam Track & Field Association and universality slots to Wild card (sports)
"Ilustre ran the 800 m in Rio." - Better: Ilustre ran the 800 metres in Rio de Janeiro. and add which heat he ran in
"Since he finished last in his heat, it would not have made a difference in the event if he was not disqualified," -  try this: Since Ilustre finished last in his heat, there would have been no change in circumstances had he not been disqualified,


### Post-Olympics
"He returned to Portland to work as a medical transcriptionist," Ilustre returned to Portlant to work as a medical transcriptionist,


### References
Please remain consistent in how you present the work of your newspaper citations as Refs 3, 4, 7 should be ideally in the work field and not the publisher field
What is Run Guam?
That is all the quibbles I noticed during my read-through. None of these should be of too much difficulty to correct. MWright96 (talk) 15:17, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: I only fixed one of them, someone else snagged the rest (thanks!), so I think it is all good now. Kees08 (Talk) 21:16, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
Alrighty then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:23, 28 February 2018 (UTC)