# Talk:Hobitit

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 03:47, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Link television miniseries.
Surely not worth linking such a common and self-explanatory term.
The lead's quite short, could be expanded with reception, production, etc.
Extended
"adapts quite faithfully the events until" → "adapts the events in the book faithfully until"
Fixed.
Hobbits should be capitalized, this needs to be done throughout the article.
Fixed.
Add Frodo and Sam's last names
Done.
"The series is divided into nine episodes" → Maybe move this later into the paragraph, after mentioning what the series is based on.
Done.
Link War of the Ring.
Done.
Add Merry and Pippin's last names, and maybe specify that these are their nicknames.
Added; not sure this article is that place for talking about nicknames.
"the Barrow-wight" → "a Barrow-wight"?
All right; only one is ever encountered but there must once have been many.
Link Fellowship of the Ring at first mention instead of second.
Done.
Link Orc.
Done.
"Gandalf apparently dies." → " Gandalf apparently dies in a fight with a Balrog." Since you mention the Balrog later.
Done.
It isn't mentioned that Strider is actually Aragorn.
Added.
"new family-produced" → Is this necessary? Also, what does family-produced mean?
Yes, it's a distinctive feature. It just means "produced by members of a family", as it sounds.
"such as" → "including"
OK for variety, it's not exactly better.
Nice work here overall. AryKun (talk) 07:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks, all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:56, 20 January 2022 (UTC)