# Talk:Markelle Fultz

Until it is officially confirmed that he is wearing that number during the regular season, it shouldn't be listed on his article.--MarcusPearl95 (talk) 05:36, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

Why is Upper Marlboro described as being "23 miles outside of" Annapolis instead of as something like "positioned 8 miles southeast of D.C.", the latter is much more definitive.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:1010:B009:3CAF:8479:6313:45B1:1D39 (talk) 03:49, 12 April 2018 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Markelle Fultz/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
Will review. MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### High school career
"all-boys college-prep private school," - I understand what this means but it should be written as "college-preparatory"
"As a 5-foot, 9-inch sophomore," - use the convert template on 5-foot, 9-inch
"then-assistant coach Cory McCrae said" - THE MOS discourages use of the word "then" in this case
"he measured 6 feet, 3 inches." - same as the second point
Wikilink MVP to Most valuable player


### References
There is no access date to Reference 15
References 16, 17, 18, 19 & 21 are missing their author(s)
Reference 24 is missing Associated Press as the agency
A very good article overall. Just the minor nibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 11:52, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

MWright96 I believe I addressed the points you raised. Thank you for your compliment on the article.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 03:30, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
Yes, everything has been addressed correctly. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

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Markelle Fultz playing for the Sixers in 2018.jpg
Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 20:29, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

"On November 2018" = "In November 2018" 2605:E000:9149:8300:3C3F:FD1E:779D:1F04 (talk) 08:39, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

 Not done The only place November is listed is in the sentence " On November 20, 2018, his agent Raymond Brothers announced Fultz would not participate in practice or games until an apparent shoulder injury was evaluated; Fultz’s also reportedly suffered a right wrist injury." Using the word "In" would not make make sense since it lists a specific date. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:50, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 Already done  Technically was already done, as it was actually changed at 8:45, after the 8:39 request and before the 8:50 response.—Bagumba (talk) 10:04, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

I believe the article would be enriched by changing the first sentence under the High school career heading from "Fultz was born in Upper Marlboro, Maryland, the youngest of two children" to "Fultz was born in Upper Marlboro, Maryland, the younger of two children." I realise that modern usage might not require such a change, but standard usage does still distinguish between the Comparative "younger" and Superlative "youngest" when describing the relationship, respectively, between two versus among three or more substantive terms.
I thank you for your time and efforts. 89.12.233.41 (talk) 07:08, 18 December 2019 (UTC)

 Done—Bagumba (talk) 10:49, 18 December 2019 (UTC)

There is a grammatical mistake. In the description of his rookie season shooting percentage after his injury it is written  "o ravaged his shooting that he shot only 33 perecent from the field". This should be changed to 33 percent from the field". It is a simple spelling mistake that needs to be corrected to enhance the readability of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by HunterJ1929 (talk • contribs) 23:40, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

 Done –Deacon Vorbis (carbon • videos) 23:49, 20 April 2020 (UTC)