# Talk:Ghost (Sky Ferreira EP)

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 12:11, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


### General overview
Disambiguation links
According to Dablinks, there are none in this page.
Checklinks lists one 'indeterminate'-class link (uncategorized redirect) for FN18.
 Done


### Original research and reliable sources
FN1 doesn't seem to be reliable... at all. Here's a link from Idolator that says it as well.
 Done


### Prose
#### Lead section
I don't see how the record was criticized for its production. A suitable option here would be its "overall cohesiveness" or reworded, as the criticism went to the musical diversity.
 Done


#### Background and composition
"which was made available on March 22" → "which was made available on March 22 of that year"
 Done
While I'll accept the Facebook reference, please use this as a substitute source for the cover art. If the information (holding her hair, etc) isn't on the link, you'll have to remove it.
 Done, although since the picture the article provides shows the "holding her hair" bits, is it necessary to completely remove it?
Consequence of Sound should be wikilinked.
 Done
Why is there such a prominent use of Consequence of Sound for the Composition part of the section? Maybe try to include some more information based on other sources.
 Done; it looks like I screwed up some of the citations when I originally wrote the article. I've fixed those and added information from a few others.
The C.O.S. reference says that the surname is Hardy, but the surname used in the section is Marvilli?
 Done, I swapped names by accident.


#### Singles
Nothing to address.


#### Reception
##### Critical
Please change the name of this sub-section to "Critical response".
 Done
Wikilink Consequence of Sound.
 Done


##### Commercial
Please change the name of this sub-section to "Commercial performance".
 Done


### References
FN3 can have Facebook wikilinked.
 Done
FN7 can have No Ripcord wikilinked.
 Done
FN8 can have Consequence of Sound wikilinked.
 Done
FN10 should have the following parameter: |people=(Director) |format=(Music video)
 Done
Per the Wikipedia guidelines on Publisher parameter, FN5, FN9 and FN13 should not have 'Inc.'
 Done
FN5 should have iTunes Store wikilinked and Apple too, while FN9 shouldn't.
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### Outcome
Passing! Congratulations, WikiRedactor :) prism △ 17:41, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next time you have a nomination ready! WikiRedactor (talk) 17:56, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
@WikiRedactor: Thank you, I'll definitely let you know next time but we should work on Night Time, My Time. It's nearly done, as I've worked on it in November if I'm not wrong. prism △ 18:19, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
@Prism: Definitely! I listen to that album every day! WikiRedactor (talk) 19:25, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
@WikiRedactor: I've tried to but I only get into half of it. I've already started rewriting the Composition section. prism △ 19:28, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
@Prism: Great! I'll get into the other sections shortly. WikiRedactor (talk) 19:30, 9 February 2014 (UTC)