# Talk:Nasreen Paracha

This review is transcluded from Talk:Nasreen Paracha/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Non-free use rationale on the image is in great condition. 
Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk)
"awarded awarded" → "awarded"
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Add parts from every section to the lead to summarize the article.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
The storylines section looks good.
Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
As with other articles, recite references after every quote per WP:REF.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Try to reduce the use of quotes in #Development.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
I couldn't find any actual issues at #Reception, but adding reviews from critics of her character would be nice.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Overall, remove quotes and expand the entire article, as it only has 8 references at the moment.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 13:09, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
The reference after "2020 RTS Yorkshire Awards" should not be linking to highlighted text.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)


### Progress