# Talk:North Acropolis, Tikal

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:05, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
Will review this tomorrow.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 19:03, 12 August 2013 (UTC)

Lead
aound -typo
Fixed. Simon Burchell (talk) 16:34, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
"the tombs of Yax Nuun Ayiin I, Siyaj Chan K'awiil II, Wak Chan K'awiil and "Animal Skull"." dates of rule or burial in brackets after each would be useful here.
Done. Simon Burchell (talk) 06:42, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
My feeling is that you need to elaborate more on the monuments to effectively summarize the article.
Done. Simon Burchell (talk) 10:13, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Late preclassic
Wikilink Late Preclassic .
Done. Simon Burchell (talk) 16:35, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
Postclassic
Strange to begin section with "However".
I've cut the "however". Simon Burchell (talk) 21:32, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
Structures
No estimated dates for construction date of 27-31?
I've dropped in some dates; in some cases this is pretty vague since not all of these structures have been excavated. Simon Burchell (talk) 10:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Burial 48
The king wwas -typo
Fixed. Simon Burchell (talk) 21:31, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
plaster of paris
Paris is capitalized in the dictionary for plaster of Paris I believe.

Of course it is... fixed it! Simon Burchell (talk) 21:37, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
Looks in good shape overall, most interesting, especially the red painted skull.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:18, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Many thanks for the review - I've fixed the simple stuff and will come back and do the rest tomorrow. Best regards, Simon Burchell (talk) 21:38, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
OK, I think I've dealt with everything - if not, please let me know. All the best, Simon Burchell (talk) 10:24, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

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Good job!♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:27, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

That's great - many thanks! All the best, Simon Burchell (talk) 15:55, 15 August 2013 (UTC)