# Talk:Mark Hudson (footballer, born 1982)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Mark Hudson (footballer, born 1982)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:34, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this by tonight. Courcelles (talk) 19:34, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
well, 24 hours late, but here we go.
"When I came back I wasn't offered a YTS"  What's a YTS?
I shouldn't be on his fourth team and still not know what position he plays.
"and, [29] after" Get rid of the space between the comma and the ref.
Wikilink hernia
"set up the winning goal goal for"  Duplicate word
team–mate"  teammate is one word, or a hyphenated one.  Lose the endash though.
" fifth yellow card after picking up a fifth booking  Reword, both to avoid using fifth twice, and to avoid making it sound like he got five yellow cards in one match.
" In March, Hudson was forced to undergo ankle surgery in March"... too in Marches?
" late–September"  Hyphen, not dash.
"UEFA A Licence"  "UEFA B licence"  Either licence is capitalised or it isn't.
All else looks well. Courcelles (talk) 22:15, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: Thanks very much for another review, I've amended all of the issues above. Kosack (talk) 09:38, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
Looks good.  Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 16:26, 13 May 2018 (UTC)