# Talk:HMS Shalimar

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Shalimar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  On hold
2. Verifiability  On hold
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
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Consider linking minesweeper
Be consistent with Strait of Malacca and Malacca Strait; unless I'm an idiot and they're different bodies of water, the name used should be consistent.  You also use Straits of Malacca
"then sank a coaster two day later" --> "then sank a coaster two days later"
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The final paragraph of the article is completely uncited.
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Good work, placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 23:19, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Done all. Will be doing your review soon. L293D (☎ • ✎) 02:54, 4 June 2020 (UTC)