# Talk:Fire (Big Sean song)

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 18:56, 10 January 2014 (UTC)


### General overview
#### Disambiguation links (per Dablinks)
No disambiguation links to correct.


#### External links (per Checklinks)
No exteral links to correct.


#### Usage of files in article
Cover artwork has a valid rationale that allows usage in article.
Image included in Background and composition section is a bit irrelevant to the article. Are there images of the song's composers uploaded in Wiki[Commons] or Flickr?
 Not done, unfortunately there were no pictures on Commons for the songwriters, except for one picture of Big Sean that I feel like not be a free work. I did, however, expand the caption for Kanye so it ties in a little better with the section its in.
The non-free image of Cyrus is unnecessary. An image of Cyrus as she appears live and in music videos nowadays would suffice.
 Done


#### Original research; reliable sourcing
WP:OR is not present; sources are reliable except for an instance in Music video, referenced in "Prose, redundancies and visual aspect".


### Prose, redundancies and visual aspect
#### Introduction
Remove "hip hop" from "American [...] recording artist" and instead reference the song's musical style in the end of the paragraph.
 Done
When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
 Done


#### Background and composition
"When describing his second studio album Hall of Fame (2013) in December 2012, Big Sean stated that he wished to "teach and leave a legacy" with its tracks, admitting that the content on his debut record Finally Famous (2011) "didn't really teach too much."" → irrelevant to the matter; should be in the song's parent album article.
I feel like this would be nice to have in this article though, since the song describes overcoming difficulties and I think it helps to explain the fairly sudden shift to more mature lyrics.
Leak is a bit casual, I think. Could you change that to "surface"?
 Done


#### Music video
VideoStatic is not reliable. Find another source, please.
 Done


#### Charts
When saying "component chart" you should say "component chart to the US Billboard Hot 100".
 Done


### References
R3 — Amazon.com needs to be wikilinked.
 Done


### Comments
### Second read-through
TBC.


### Comments
Another well done article. prism △ 18:56, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your review! Sorry I couldn't get to it earlier, I was a bit busy the last few days. WikiRedactor (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
No problem! Passing right now, keep up the good work. prism △ 21:19, 11 January 2014 (UTC)

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