# Talk:Cyclone Filao

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cyclone Filao/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 17:12, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
I will review this article. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:12, 13 May 2013 (UTC)


### Conclusion
I will have to fail this nomination. I feel there is too much copy-editing and grammar correction to be done. I think that with the output of effort into this article, it can eventually meet GA standards, but, for now, this article is unprepared and unqualified to become a GA. I salute your effort and anticipate the second nomination of this article after alterations are made. Thanks for nominating! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 14:09, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

What is wrong with this article in particular? How come you did not do a trough review? IMO the writing is fine. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:51, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
This line jumps out to me upon first glance as not great On February 23, RSMC Reunion's Meteo France (MFR) started to monitor a tropical depression that had developed just north-northwest of Madagascar. While i also note that you say "Data from both agencies suggest that Cyclone Filao quickly weakened over land, dissipating several hours later." which is poor as well especially when we know exactly wehn the JTWC issued their final warning and when it was last noted.Jason Rees (talk) 16:07, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
As for the former, I tweaked it slightly. As for the latter, there is an issue there that you did not mention so, I fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:40, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Make sure metric units go first. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  18:26, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

[1] - add this well-written report from MFR. There is a ton of info there that's missing from the article. User:Jason Rees recently showed me this archive, which has info on storms going back to 1968, so I know what I'll be doing in the SWIO for the next few months :D ♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  15:02, 27 January 2015 (UTC)
Oh boy. I'm suckered in now :P YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 28 January 2015 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cyclone Filao/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 03:48, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Well-written: With a few minor grammatical tweaks, and with the below issues addressed, the article now complies with the MOS policies on grammar and prose, as well as layout and structuring. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 20:30, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct
(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation
Verifiable with no original research: The article's bibliography contains a fairly sizable quantity of reliable publications, and the article makes frequent citations to all of them. No signs of any original research. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 02:29, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline
(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)
(c) it contains no original research
Broad in its coverage: The article looks to provide thorough coverage on all relevant aspects of its topic; nothing trivial or otherwise unencyclopedic has been incorporated. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 02:26, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style)
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. The article takes a fair, unbiased approach to the discussion of its topic. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 02:24, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. A quick look at the revision history shows that the article has not been involved in any editing disputes since at least April, 2013. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 20:24, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: Both images used in the article serve a relevant purpose for encyclopedic illustration, are validly licensed, and are public domain. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 20:25, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content
(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions

In the section, "Meteorological history", it states early on, "On February 23, Météo-France's office on the island of Réunion (MFR) started motioning a tropical depression to the northeast of Madagascar. that developed a closed circulation, which received a rating of T1.5 on the Dvorak Scale..." There are a couple of things I want to be sure about, before I conclude this review. In the first place, is "started motioning a tropical depression" correct, or is the word supposed to be "monitoring"? Secondly, the lower case "that", following "northeast of Madagascar." is obviously incorrect, but is it supposed to be the start of a new sentence, or should the period following "Madagascar" be changed to a comma? Other than that, everything looks fine to me. Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 02:34, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
Apologies for the late reply, but I fixed what you're on about. Feel free to go on with the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:04, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
Thank you, very much! Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 20:29, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 After reading over this article, evaluating it against the criteria, and with the above comments addressed, I now am satisfied that the article meets the criteria for GA inclusion. Congratulations! Grinding, grinding, grinding... what are we finding, finding, finding... (talk) 20:31, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

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