# Talk:Cyclone Sose

Heres something from Metservice that i think has some useful information that could be used to expand the article.Jason Rees (talk) 02:10, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Thanks JR, added. – Juliancolton | Talk 22:59, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 14:38, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Hi Juliancolton! I will be reviewing this article for GA.

Be sure to wikilink terms in the lede that may be unfamiliar or entirely unknown to a layman, such as: tropical cyclone, landfall (meteorology), maximum sustained winds, wind shear, etc.
"upper-air pattern took its toll on the cyclone as it progressed due south; it lost tropical characteristics to the northeast of Norfolk Island by April 12." - There are three it/its here, which can make things confusing. Maybe replace the first "its" with "a"? Then you could substitute the "it" after the semicolon with "Sose".
"The storm's large fetch generated enormous swells as far away as Australia's Eastern Seaboard, where surfers took advantage of the abnormally intense conditions." - You forgot to mention that 2 people died in Australia. Quoting later on in the article, "A 53-year-old man and his 9-year-old son both drowned in the heavy surf near Gladstone on April 8."
"In all, Sose killed seven people; total monetary damage is unknown." - I counted a total of 9 deaths; 2 in Vanuatu, 4 in New Zealand, 2 in Australia, and 1 in New Caledonia. 2 + 4 + 2 + 1 = 9.
"a mid-level ridge to the east halted forced the storm to turn due south;" - This doesn't look grammatically correct to me. Maybe try this instead? "a mid-level ridge to the east halted, forcing the storm to turn due south;"
Why is the title of reference #6, "Tropical Cyclone 19P (Waka) Best Track"?
Overall, very nice job on the article! I will likely pass and list it as a GA after these issues are fixed/addressed.--12george1 (talk) 14:38, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review George, I think I got everything. Guess we know which article I used as a model. :) – Juliancolton | Talk 17:16, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
Well then. Thank you for the quick response. With all that said and done, I will now pass this article and list it as a GA.--12george1 (talk) 18:57, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

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