# Talk:Liv Tyler

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"Royston Langdon (2003-2008)" – requires an en dash per WP:DASH
Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:37, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
"trilogy (2001 - 2003), in" – en dash required here, and no spaces
Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:43, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
I think the image should be cropped to only show her upper body – perhaps from right below her right elbow, so that doesn't get cut off. Otherwise, it's long, vertically.
I cropped the image, but I don't know what's wrong with it. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:01, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
"After a brief hiatus" is a pretty short paragraph, but not much can be done there I suppose
"Personal life" is made up of too many short paragraphs. I suggest merging a few, expanding a few, etc. until they aren't as small, stubby paragraphs. Please let me know when that is done then I can take another look at it.
Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:43, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
Reference 2 needs to be formatted.
"born Liv Rundgren[1] at Mount Sinai Hospital" – remove the bold
Done. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:31, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
Gary King (talk) 21:13, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

The following passage is contradictory.  It indicates that she lived with Rundgren from 1972 to 1979, but then later that she was not born until 1977.  I don't have sufficient info/knowledge to correct this, but it's clearly incorrect.

From 1972 to 1979, Buell lived with rock musician Todd Rundgren. In 1976, Buell became pregnant from a brief relationship with Steven Tyler. She gave birth on July 1, 1977

82.13.88.12 (talk) 18:31, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Buell is her mother. - Seasider53 (talk) 01:49, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

For goodness's sake, can anyone find a _better_ picture? You know what I'm talking about. 
Yes, she's attractive, but this is wikipedia, not reddit.com/r/gw.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.235.196.153 (talk) 18:54, 5 January 2014 (UTC) 
Is this picture seriously still being used? Her nipples are poking out of her dress and it looks comical. Spitsonpuppies (talk) 05:17, 7 July 2014 (UTC)

Blue dress photo is still in article, but cropped to basically a head shot. David notMD (talk) 20:53, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

I just don’t think that being a product spokesman counts as part of their personal life, so it had to be moved out of there. Also, converted a web citation from Twitter into tweet citation. Ya have the template, might as well use it--Fradio71 (talk) 10:08, 3 February 2019 (UTC)

Really? Does it matter she got the flu in 2021? Whoever added that needs to stop watching cnn, and google "FUD". Should we add, that she took a dump yesterday also? SMH 67.163.67.112 (talk) 05:13, 24 February 2023 (UTC)