# Talk:Konstantin Kulikov

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

I will talk a look at this one in due course. Zawed (talk) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
Lead

Suggest English translation in brackets for general-mayor?
Done
Early life...

In a month, he ...: seems unusual phrasing to me, suggest "The next month,..."
Done
English translation for "unter-ofitser"? (like there is for "ryadovoy")
Done
...he returned to Petrograd: should mention this is the new name for St Petersburg
Done
It would make for a short first section, but I would break 'World War I and Russian Civil War' out from the 'Early life' section
Split paragraph instead
Interwar period

English translation for "kombrig"
Done
Kulikov received the rank of major general...: English-language rank used here rather than the Russian general-mayor
Done
World War II

...forced to retreat to the Dnieper.: the phrase "forced to" is used earlier in this sentence, suggest changing this usage here
Done
Sources

Given history of nominator, happy to AGF on sourcing
No ISBN for the Bulkin ref? And is Penza the publisher or place of publication?
No ISBN
Sverdlov: English translation should be title case for consistency with other titles. Also, does it have an ISBN to go with the OCLC number?
No ISBN
Other stuff

One dupe link: Dnieper
Done
I'm uncertain that the image tag for [File:Куликов К.Е.jpg] is correct since the photograph would have been produced by the German authorities?
That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC)

@Kges1901: just checking you have seen this? Zawed (talk) 21:19, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
I only just saw the comments and will respond shortly. Kges1901 (talk) 22:31, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
Happy with your changes, so am passing this as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:23, 5 November 2023 (UTC)