# Talk:Jesús Blancornelas

Can this be attributed? Word on the street here in Tijuana is that don Jesús died from other complications.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.160.133.6 (talk) 22:59, 5 November 2009 (UTC) 

Yep, confirmed with reliable sources. Khazar2 (talk) 01:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

This article has been nominated for a DYK.  To review or comment.  7&6=thirteen (☎) 22:46, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jesús Blancornelas/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 09:59, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

"In 1980, Blancornelas and co-founded the weekly magazine Zeta." - and who?
"Their courageous example in the face of adversity – and the murder of 48 journalists – is said to be inspirational.[33]" - the underlined is weasily. Suggest rewording. --Tomcat (7) 20:40, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
I believe I've fixed these. In both instances, the sentences appeared to me simply extraneous: one an accidental redundancy, the second an expendable mention of Blancornelas's inspirational qualities. If ComputerJA disagrees, though, I'm fine with some form of them going back in. Khazar2 (talk) 22:03, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
I think your fixes are fine, Khazar2. Thanks! ComputerJA (talk) 23:13, 18 October 2012 (UTC)