# Talk:La Pacana

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:37, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 11:37, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

Is there a possible link for indurated?
Then, a most likely tectonic event such as: do you mean "Then a tectonic event, most likely..."?
Three points that are not an issue for GA, but I'll mention here for completeness:

As with Parinacota I see page numbers of the form "547, 548"; these should be "pp.", not "p.".
Your sources are out of order, and you have Shanaka L. de Silva under both S and D.
Why do you separate "Sources" and "Bibliography"?  Wouldn't it make more sense to combine them?
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:11, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

Remedied the non-issues; as for the actual issues I've linked "indurated" and as for the second question, the source says In addition, the evidence for tectonic control on the caldera collapse is compelling..All of these observations are consistent with the hypothesis of an external, tectonic trigger for the eruption of the Atana magma, with or without weakening of the roof rocks as a result of the Toconao eruption. so I am not certain if that alternative is better. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:47, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
The link for indurated is fine.  For the other point, I think the wording I suggested would be OK, if I understand the source; what's in the article now is not very natural English. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 21:25, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
And by the way I now see a harv error on the first de Silva source; there's no cite pointing to it, and vice versa in the references. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 21:26, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
@Mike Christie: Got all issues I think. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:40, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
Looks good; promoting. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 19:08, 11 February 2018 (UTC)