# Talk:Mississippi Highway 434

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:56, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

I'll pick this one up. Courcelles (talk) 00:56, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
"as pavement changes."  Unsourced sentence, and also, what does it mean?
Changed a bit, and it is also reference in the next sentence. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:16, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
"which also known as Delta City"  Needs another word.
Added. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:16, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
"which was removed by 1967."  -> "the designation was removed by 1967" given I think the road still existed ;)
Reworded. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:16, 27 July 2018 (UTC)

Otherwise this looks fine. Courcelles (talk) 01:00, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:16, 27 July 2018 (UTC)
Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 01:17, 27 July 2018 (UTC)