# Talk:Break My Heart Again

Darkly, thanks for getting rid of that puff nonsense.132.60.240.130 (talk) 17:33, 19 June 2020 (UTC)

Why is this article still up for deletion?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by StaleGuy22 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 11 July 2020 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Break My Heart Again/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 05:37, 18 September 2020 (UTC)

Reunited with you for this review, which I will begin later today! --K. Peake 05:37, 18 September 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Cover art needs alt text
Finneas should be listed by his real name under songwriters
Why is he not listed as the producer?
"as a single on February 9, 2018, for digital download and streaming." → "for digital download and streaming as a single on February 9, 2018." with the appropriate target
"It was later re-released" → "The song was later included"
"of his debut EP," → "of Finneas' debut EP,"
Target ballad to Sentimental ballad
"A one-take music video was" → "An accompanying one-take music video was" with the appropriate wikilink
"turns around the singer as he sings to about" → "moves around Finneas as he sings about"
Add a sentence about the video's reception since you have enough material in the body
"performed the track during" → "performed "Break My Heart Again" as part of"


### Background and composition
Target single to Single (music)
"through his record label" → "through Finneas' record label" with the wikilink
"It was later re-released" → "It was later featured"
"EP Blood Harmony, on August 7, 2020." → "EP Blood Harmony (2019), released on August 7, 2020."
Where does the source say he wrote and produced it?
"described the track as" → "described "Break My Heart Again" as"
"piano appears and accompanies" → "piano appears that accompanies"
"can be heard for almost the whole song." → "is heard for the majority of the song:"
""Break My Heart Again" is almost" → "The lyrics of "Break My Heart Again" are almost"
"between himself and" → "between Finneas and"
"Finneas explained" → "Finneas explained the texting"
"admitting his emotions. His voice" → "admitting his strong emotions and Finneas' voice"
"He confesses to being" → "Finneas confesses to being"
"gets to a point that" → "gets to a point where"
"He then realizes if he's" → "Finneas goes on to realize that he may be"
"the former to do so." → "the former to hurt him,"
"The bridge takes suggests" → "The bridge suggests" with the target
"“the one”," → ""the one","
"and that their relationship is over." → "and their relationship is over for good."
"Finneas then reveals they reunite" → "Finneas then reveals they reunited"
"comes to a stop." → "temporarily comes to a stop."
"over again with just piano" → "over again, featuring piano"
"He says that" → "He confesses that"
"the person he loves is" → "his ex-lover is"
"and more stripped back." → "and stripped back heavier."


### Critical reception
"received mainly positive reviews" → "was met with mainly positive reviews"
"Kasey Caminiti writing for DuJour" → "Kasey Caminiti, writing for DuJour,"
"and "relatable". And further mentions" → "and "relatable", while further mentioning"
"and melody, which, according to him, are" → "and melody of the song, which he viewed as"
"Writing for Atwood Magazine, Nicole Almeida" → "For Atwood Magazine, Nicole Almeida"
"and stated it is" → "and stated that it is"
"of O'Connell's supreme" → "of [Finneas'] supreme" since it is confusing for some readers otherwise
"and complimented that it has" → "and complimented the"
"and the listeners should" → "while opining that the listeners should"
"Modestas Mankus, writing for" → "Modestas Mankus, for"


### Promotion
Retitle to Music video and promotion
Wikilink music video
The word official is not needed here
"while shot in one take in black and white." → "while it was shot in one black and white take." with the wikilink
"around the singer as he sings" → "around Finneas as he sings,"
"how hard it is of letting go" → "how hard it is to let go"
"the singer as he sings, and includes the sounds" → "his singing, alongside the sounds"
"was positively received by music critics" → "was positively received by critics"
"labeled the visual as" → "noted the visual for"
"performed "Break My Heart Again" during" → "performed "Break My Heart Again" live during"


### Release history
See MOS:TABLECAPTION
You need to cite numerous iTunes retailers to verify the release was various


### References
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Copyvio score looks safe at 37.5%
Ref 1 should use the multiple citations template to add the various ones and put retailers in brackets; (US), for example
Target Insider to Insider (website) on ref 12 per MOS:LINK2SECT


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold after reviewing an article that is showing improvements over your previous work, kudos and this should take a quicker amount of time to pass. --K. Peake 12:04, 18 September 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake, I have done everything that you asked! Lmk if anything else needs to be done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:20, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss Great job on implementing all of the changes, I did some brief copy editing but will now  Pass this! --K. Peake 12:14, 19 September 2020 (UTC)