# Talk:Magnum P.I. (2018 TV series) season 2

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:36, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Hey, we meet again! I'll be reviewing this article and will have my assessment by Thursday 12:00pm ET. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 02:36, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Sounds great! Definitely looking forward to working with you again. Thanks, TheDoctorWho (talk) 03:21, 10 December 2020 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Archive all archivable sources. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Because it certainly will become an article, I would link "third season" to Magnum P.I. (2018 TV series, season 3). Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Cast section passes MOS:TVCAST so that's good. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Episode summaries are all under 200 words and pass MOS:TVPLOT. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
To add clarity, add the episode title "He Came by Night" in between the sentence found in "production" that reads: "On the November 15, 2019, episode the band". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
In "Marketing", link "tenth season" to Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series, season 10). Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Also in "Marketing", add commas after "the Hawaii Five-0 series finale" and "In Canada". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
"Viewing figures" and "Home media" both pass MOS:TVRELEASE.
Well, those are my first set of suggestions. Ping me when you have added comments. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:58, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Everything you mentioned has been taken care of. TheDoctorWho (talk) 18:25, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
In "Development", remove the comma after 2019 in the sentence, "On the November 15, 2019,". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
Remove the gap between "Marketing" and "Viewing figures". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
In "Marketing", fix the "tenth season" link. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
In reference 36, could you change the link from Variety (magazine) to simply Variety?
@TheDoctorWho: Well, this is my second and final set of suggestions. Great work on the article! Ping me when done. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 18:48, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done with those as well! TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:11, 10 December 2020 (UTC)