# Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō

Please discuss the merge proposal at Talk:Kasuga Maru, not here. D O N D E groovily Talk to me 23:28, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No copyvio Y

"The ship torpedoed twice by American submarines with negligible to moderate damage before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life. Probably should "the ship was torpedoed twice by American submarines, with negligible to moderate damage, before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life."
Looks like somebody already added the missing "was", and I don't think the commas are necessary there.
@Sturmvogel 66: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:14, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
@Iazyges: - ditto my comment at the Chūyō review. Let me know if there's anything else you see holding up the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:49, 26 May 2017 (UTC)