# Talk:John Triscari

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
I will have a look at this tomorrow. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

Should the personal section be changed to "personal life" section?
Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
Do we know where he was born?
No, damn it. I know where he lives, but not where he was born. I could just ask him, but that would be WP:OR. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
"but lost to the Canada" is the the needed here?
Y Deleted. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
The "Coach of the Year" stuff - who gives this award, and why is it noteworthy?
It is from the Western Australian Department of Sports and Recreation. While there are many awatfd for players, there are not so many coaches awards. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
On hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:58, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

OK, looks good. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:41, 15 December 2013 (UTC)

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After reviewing the article, I am concerned that this no longer meets the GA criteria. My concerns are listed below:

There is no information post-2013.
The lede is too short and does not summarise the contents of the article.
Is anyone interested in fixing this up? If not, should it go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 20:46, 2 August 2024 (UTC)

I have expanded the lead and updated it to 2024. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:55, 2 August 2024 (UTC)