# Talk:Doug Fisher (American football)

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added Category:Junior college men's track and field athletes in the United States
Changed defensive tackle cat to linemen since aricle doesn't mention tackle
"He placed high in several tournaments and set divisional records in the sport" Source only says he set one record. Also, doesnt say anything about tournaments.
Reworded sentence.
Is CCJCAA the correct abbreviation? When I google that, this article is the first thing that appears.
There seem to be several different names for it - this source (the one used in that part) calls it the CCJCAA - there's some others calling it that.
"all-conference selection" Is that the CCJCAA selection in the infobox?
Yes - should I reword it?
All-Coast means Pacific Coast Athletic Association right? I suggest pipelinking it in the article and infobox
Appears so - linked.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:16, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:34, 22 October 2023 (UTC)