# Talk:Hurricane Barry (1983)

Too little information outside of the storm history. While the storm history is nice, it has to have more information that a stub outside of the storm history to remain an article. This storm isn't that notable, and it wasn't a Cape-Verde type hurricane, as inaccurately stated in the intro. Big yes for a merge. Anyone disagree? Hurricanehink 19:51, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

I agree, unless the impact section can be expanded.  (BTW I'm responsible for the "Cape Verde-type storm" terminology; it seemed a simple copyedit of the text that was already there.) Jdorje 20:10, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
Just checked NHC. There is some more information in the NHC report, but the storm was so minor that there would be no point. Hurricanehink 20:35, 4 January 2006 (UTC)
Anyone still opposed? Hurricanehink 21:42, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
Not I. Merge it. -- Hurricane Eric archive -- my dropsonde 04:48, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

Not bad. Needs a minor copyedit for B-class. --Coredesat 20:35, 17 March 2007 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
No offense, but the writing isn't good. The sentences are short and boring, and the use of the name Barry is used way too much in the storm history. Also, there are serious MoS issues. For example:
No casualties were reported from Barry, but thirty fishing boats were sunk in Mexico, along with the destruction of several hundred homes.—Numbers above 10 are numbered, not spelled out. Also:
Damage included four hundred homeless people & a major loss of shrimping nets—There should never be use of & in an article other than in proper names.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
References seem good.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Surely there is more information all-around.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
Good enough, I guess.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
 There are many issues with the article, and at the current time it does not pass the GA criteria. Thus, I've put the article on-hold for seven days for the improvments to be made. Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 20:47, 26 April 2008 (UTC)