# Talk:Dan Deacon: U.S.A.

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Reviewer: Bentvfan54321 (talk · contribs) 03:02, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll take this one and hopefully will have some initial comments soon. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 03:02, 8 February 2015 (UTC)

Should Dan Deacon be linked in the image caption?
It would seem redundant since he's already linked in both the lead and the first section. 23W
Did it anyway. 23W 03:48, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
"Director and editor Dave Hughes had previously collaborated with Dan Deacon in 2008 for his song "Okie Dokie" from the album Spiderman of the Rings." Remove "Dan" per WP:SURNAME, as Deacon is already mentioned and linked in the body of the article.
Done. 23W
"However, he felt that, given the tracks' length..." Perhaps it's just me, but I'm not a fan of the words I or he followed by "feel". I'd change it to "However, given the tracks' length, he argued," or something similar.
Changed. 23W
No dab links, all links are working fine.
As the article is well written with only a few small issues, I'll place this on hold for now.

@Bentvfan54321: Thanks for your review! I think I've done all your corrections. 23W
@23W: Thanks for your quick response! Also, if you are looking for something to review, my current FAC, 2006 UAW-Ford 500, still needs another review asap. Of course, don't worry about it if you are occupied, but if you could look at it, that would be fantastic. Thanks, --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 03:53, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
@Bentvfan54321: You're welcome. I'll see into the article; last week was hectic, but this next one might be better. 23W 04:11, 8 February 2015 (UTC)

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