# Talk:Night of Desirable Objects

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 10:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC)


### Comments
#### Plot
Walter should be wiki-linked the first time the character is mentioned.


#### Production
Nothing here


#### Reception
##### Reviews
"A.V. Club" should be "The A.V. Club".
"writing that despite its 'the relative insignificance'" Remove "the".
"MTV's Josh Wigler thought the episode mystery" Should be "episode's mystery".
"and he wished that more time had been focused on this." "He" is redundant.


#### Lead
Image caption needs punctuation.


### In conclusion
This article is very close to GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that you can make the minor fixes needed. Good luck! Queenieacoustic (talk) 10:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

I made most of your suggested changes. The screenshot caption does not need a period per MOS, as it is an image caption and incomplete sentence (can't find the exact policy now but I will if you need to see it). Thanks very much for the review! One of these days I'm going to make a dent in your own GAN pile. Ruby2010 comment! 13:59, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
Well done! Passed. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:49, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

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