# Talk:Christmas Scandal

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 18:37, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing this article and became hung up on this in the plot: "Soon after, Ann is horrified to discover that a news crew secretly followed Dexhart to her home and took a photograph of the meeting, resulting in speculation that Ann is Leslie's lesbian lover."  Isn't Dexhart a guy? Why was Dexhart at Ann's home, and why does that show that Ann is Leslies's lesbian lover? (Sorry for being so dense.)

Not dense at all, I didn't explain it clearly enough. Is it better now? — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
"who revised his recurring role as Dave Sanderson" - do you mean reprised his recurring role?
Yep. I fixed it. — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
"Commentators said NBC may have been received a boost in the ratings due to repeats on ABC on December 10" - how do repeats increase ratings?
I tried to clarify. — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
"but was kept together by a number of strong comedic moments and subplot, including the parks department splitting Leslie's work, the April and Andy subplot and the scenes between Leslie and Dave" - could you clarify this?
Better? — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Xtzou (Talk) 19:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks, you clarified everything. Nice work.  Xtzou (Talk) 19:51, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
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B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
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Is it stable?
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A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: Pass! 

Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 19:54, 16 April 2010 (UTC)