# Talk:Closure (The X-Files)

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 17:02, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

Lead
Use En dash (–) between "another truth" and "that his"
Plot
Likewise with lead, use en dash between "Amber" and "without".
Writing
"the episode was "very much a Cigarette-Smoking Man episode" ", try to be consistent here; does Cigarette-Smoking need a hyphen or not?
Filming
"The air force base was renamed April Air Force Base because the producers could not use the name March Air Force Base", is there a given reason for this?
Reception
"...making it the eighth most watched episode that week", on all channels? Or on Sky1 specifically? 'Most watched episode' can be corrected to 'Most watched show/program' whatever floats your boat.
"The episode received mostly positive reviews."...."Not all reviews were so positive.", eh? Bit inconsistent. I suggest removing the latter sentence and starting with "However, Rich Rosell from..." -- Lemonade51 (talk) 17:03, 3 April 2012 (UTC)
OK, I believe I've addressed all the concerns.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:25, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
Shall pass, nice work. – Lemonade51 (talk) 16:40, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

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