# Talk:Job Fair (The Office)

This needs to be given the "(Office episode)" qualifier in the title, as a page exists for a normal job fair.  The only difference appears to be capitalization.  (I don't know how to change a page's name wholesale.) Slurms MacKenzie (talk) 05:35, 9 May 2008 (UTC)

Good point.  I moved it. - Shaheenjim (talk) 00:18, 10 May 2008 (UTC)

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"Plot synopsis" → "Plot"
Expand the second paragraph in the lead.
Only periodicals need to be italicized in the references, not all publishers.
References need to be consistent; some have comma or period before "Retrieved". I suggest using {{cite web}} for all.
Gary King (talk) 21:31, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Made the changes, tell me what you think. --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:17, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
The prose needs some work. Some examples below (these are only examples; please take a look at the entire article's contents):

"Office—the" → "Office, and the"
"few employees goes to an area high school's job fair" → "few employees go to a high school's job fair"
"Pam does venture to a booth " → "Pam ventures to a booth "
Gary King (talk) 22:28, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Fixed the prose issues you mentioned along with some others that I've found. --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:40, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
Still need an "and" here: "The Office, the show's " → "The Office, and the show's " – otherwise, it might as well be split up into two sentence
"the one's who" → "the ones who"
"At first the client " → "At first, the client "
"to be not interested in talking about businees," → "to not be interested in talking about businees,"
"suppliers, he" → "suppliers; he" – the semicolon needs to be there otherwise the break between the two phrases seems awkward
"After much" → "However, after much" – "however" because the preceding sentence says that he is not interested; his change of mind seems so sudden, that a conjunction word should be placed here
There are probably a few more similar examples like these throughout the article. I think a second pass-through should be made. Cheers. Gary King (talk) 23:15, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Mastrchf and I both went through the article. Here's what we found: [1] --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 14:47, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
Congratulations! This article now meets the Good Article criteria, and has therefore been passed. Gary King (talk) 17:39, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for your time! --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 18:13, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

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The job fair is season 4 episode 13 not episode 17 74.88.49.233 (talk) 23:27, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. The Office (American season 4) states it's the 17th episode.  GoingBatty (talk) 23:41, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
Wikipedia uses the original broadcaster's (NBC's) episode numbers. So episode number 17 is correct. See List of The Office (American TV series) episodes. —Bruce1eetalk 07:45, 12 May 2020 (UTC)