# Talk:Edward Opoku

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Early life
wikilink scholarship to Athletic scholarship
 Done
"was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree all four years in high school" - in all
 Done, changed to "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree in all four years of high school".
"and was named as the co-MVP" - co-Most valuable player
 Done
Wikilink recruiting class to College recruiting
 Done


### College and amateur
"As a sophomore, Opoku found his stride," - avoid idioms per MOS:IDIOM
 Done, changed to "As a sophomore, Opoku netted six goals in 18 appearances for the Cavaliers."
Wikilink the first mention of assist to Assist (football) for non-soccer readers
 Done, linked in "after finishing the season with two goals and three assists."
"Opoku was named to the All-ACC Second Team at the end of the season." - season's end
 Done
"He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference nod," - acknowledgement
 Done, changed to "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference honour".
"Opoku departed Virginia following the year, ending his collegiate career with 16 goals in 56 appearances for the Cavaliers." - this sentence requires a citation to a reliable source
 Done, linked to his Virginia profile.


### AC Connecticut
Wikilink yellow card to Fouls and misconduct (association football)#Yellow card (caution)
 Done
"joining up with the club for the 2017 PDL season." - joining the club is sufficient
 Done
"Opoku went on to appear four times on the year," - during
 Done
"Opoku scored once in four total appearances on the year, and concluded his two seasons with the club having played eight times and scored once." - need to be cited to a reliable source
 Done, linked to his PDL profile


### Columbus Crew AC
"the first Generation Adidas player drafted by Columbus since Dilly Duka in 2010." - that statement needs to be supported by a reliable source
 Done, moved the Massive Report reference to the end of the sentence since the ref covers that statement.
"beginning a stretch in which he appeared in four consecutive matches, and concluded the season with six appearances in all competitions." - another reliable source is needed here
 Done, linked to his Columbus profile.
That's all from my perspective. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

@MWright96: I believe I've just about covered everything you've brought up, let me know if any of my changes still ned a bit of adjustment. Otherwise, thanks for the review (the second  you've done for one of my nominations, I believe!) 21.colinthompson (talk) 23:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
@21.colinthompson: Nothing else I could find so am now able to promote this article to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 11:55, 23 February 2019 (UTC)