# Talk:HTC First

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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 18:22, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
I'll start this review ASAP. Just before we begin, to sort out confusion, I will have a general review then an in depth prose and source review. In the general review, I'll use the "GA tools" box. Cheers! MrWooHoo (talk) 18:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@SSTflyer: Just a couple of tiny prose issues and I'll pass. MrWooHoo (talk) 19:17, 14 May 2016 (UTC)


### General Review
Only thing GA tools is saying is to avoid using "th" as in January 30th, but I can't find any examples of that in the article. No problems then!


### Prose Review
Note: If you have changed the sentence that needed to be corrected, press Enter and start off the line with ::, then use Y or  Done
If the change was only partially done use Y, and N or  Not done if the change could not occur. (If you would explain why, I would be greatly appreciated :P)
To see code, go to edit source and copy the code.

"First, only reportedly sold over 15,000 units of the device, while both ReadWrite and Time named it among the biggest failures in the technology industry for 2013.[1][2]"
You don't need to cite this in the lead, as per WP:WHENNOTCITE.
 Done SSTflyer 02:07, 20 May 2016 (UTC)
" the keyboard messagine HTC Status,"
What's a messagine? I'm assuming it's a typo?
 Done SSTflyer 02:10, 20 May 2016 (UTC)


### Source Review
No dead links, so sources are good. MrWooHoo (talk) 19:17, 14 May 2016 (UTC)
@MrWooHoo: All done I think. SSTflyer 02:11, 20 May 2016 (UTC)