# Talk:Lactarius vietus

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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 01:18, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
Grabbing this one! Do you realize that my first-ever GA review was almost two years ago, on a Lactarius species, written by you? Anyway, I'll have comments up in a day or two (and likely some stuff to add, you know me!) Sasata (talk) 01:18, 28 December 2010 (UTC)

I remember it :) And I remember thinking that, surely, you could spew out fungal GAs if you wanted to. You proved me right there! This one's an article I wrote around the same time that I have revisited. J Milburn (talk) 01:50, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
OK 1st pass—nitpicks: Sasata (talk) 16:48, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

lead could be longer, especially more information about what it looks like. Link fungus, mushroom, birch; floor -> ground, or forest floor
Done. J Milburn (talk) 19:50, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
taxobox width to 234 px? (I guess I'm foisting my personal preferences here, but I think it looks neater when the taxobox width is the same as the mycomorphbox)
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
synonyms ref and synonyms in taxobox? Mention Galorrheus vietus and Lactifluus vietus in taxonomy
Done. J Milburn (talk) 18:10, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Russulales News is well-respected for info about species in that order, and has further taxonomic synonyms
Done; where it conflicted with MycoWeb, I went with MycoWeb. J Milburn (talk) 18:10, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
link "first described" to species description
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Systema mycologicum and Epicrisis systematis mycologici are both on Google books (and Biodiversity Heritage Library), so you can cite these publications directly
Done, in addition to the cites already there. J Milburn (talk) 18:10, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"L. vietus typically" No abbr to start para
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"(0.98 to 3.0 in)" suggest reducing convert template output to 1 decimal place, it's just an approximation anyway, based on a small sample size (other instances later)
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
link umbo
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
I like to replace jargony "incurved" with "curved inwards" or similar
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
link buff, adnate, decurrent, flesh
Done two, but defined adnate and decurrent, as we don't have articles.
"lemellulae (gills that do not reach the cap margin)" -> "lamellulae (short gills that do not reach the stem from the cap margin)"
Massive fail on my part there... J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"which dries as a brownish or greenish grey"
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
link spore print
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"amyloid (staining blue in iodine)" Melzer's reagent is more than just iodine, so probably better to use the reagent name; could also link staining
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"well developed" needs hyphen
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"measuring between 8 and 9.5 by between 6.5 to 7.5" second between unnecessary, it's implied; there's a couple later as well that can be removed
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"The pleurocystidia (cystidia on the edge of the face of the gills)"
I'm sorry, I think I may have literally forgotten to read through this a last time before nominating it at GAC... J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"narrow spindle" -> spindles
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
4-spored -> four-spored per MOS
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"and the mushroom as a whole lacks a distinctive smell."
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
"L. vietus is fairly common" no abbr
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
link conifer, hardwood
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
any more details about the distribution? Europe and North America are big places…
Expanded on the distribution and the ecology. J Milburn (talk) 19:39, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Refs: title case for books, sentence case for journal titles; endashes for page ranges; need page #'s for Trappe 1962; author format for ref #14 is different than the rest
Done. J Milburn (talk) 17:23, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I had my way with it as well, and am confident it meets all of the GA criteria. Pleasure working with you, JM! Sasata (talk) 22:33, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

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