# Talk:Hurricane Manuel

the link on See more detailed information. doesnt work 
and its in the pazific not in the atlantic ;)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.220.88.147 (talk) 16:59, 19 September 2013 (UTC) 

FYI, in response to this, this goes with new deaths/damage. However, I am semi-skeptical of this total, for one, the article sources EMDAT for the damage, which does not even mention Manuel. In addition, it seems like a drastic increase with at first glance, has no additional backing. Thoughts? YE Pacific Hurricane 21:16, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

Long time no see, a blog post from Dr. Jeff Masters also supports the claim Manuel did 4.2 billion in damage and killed 169 people. It also says Ingrid killed 23 and did 1.5 billion in damage. But before we put that in, would that qualify as WP:RS? I believe it would. Rye998 (talk) 14:44, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
Rye, IMO JM is marginally reliable, but JM's total just seems too high. TAWX had an awesome idea, this, but the source provided mentions economical losses, not total damage, which I was told here that economical losses does not count as total damage. Tbh, I think that estimate is a bit high anyway, and I don't know why the missing people were removed, when the source mentions nothing about missing people. Still, I like the source used, though I am torn over whether to revert or not. For now, ill leave it as is; I feel bad on how I've reverted so many edits on this page within the past week. Any comments? YE Pacific Hurricane 16:05, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
I too think the 4.2 billion might be an overestimate, but 37.9 million (the damage before), is too low an estimate, IMO. Overall damage was probably near a billion dollars or so, but maybe we need to find something else that can verify total damage caused. The source seems reliable, but I'd like to see one that says "total damage", and one more recent than the last one. Rye998 (talk) 18:06, 25 October 2013 (UTC)

The original source is AON Benfield, definitely a reliable source in my opinion. I see no reason why we shouldn't use their total. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 18:17, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
Of course it's reliable, and but it says that Maneul did 4.2 billion in economic loss. Does that count as total damage? That's my concern. Regarding 39.7 mil, if that's for its second landfall only. YE Pacific Hurricane 21:16, 25 October 2013 (UTC)

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 02:19, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Hello User:Yellow Evan, I am going to be reviewing this article tonight. You expressed urgency for it to be reviewed, as this effects a GT. So anyway, the following are issues I have with passing this article and listing it as a Good Article.--12george1 (talk) 02:19, 1 July 2014 (UTC)

Wow, just this! Thanks for the review. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
"Within favorable conditions aloft, the storm intensified into a tropical storm" - I think it should be just "With favorable conditions", because it wasn't inside the favorable conditions. Not like "a tropical wave within the ITCZ".
Yea, it was actually. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
"The following day, Manuel curved westward and strengthened to a point just shy of hurricane intensity before making its first landfall at that intensity." - Might want to throw a date in here somewhere, because (1. we are talking about two days here and (2. you are also assuming the reading knows what date "The following day" is referring to.
Noted. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
"additional impacts from Atlantic Hurricane Ingrid. After its" - I think you should wikilink Atlantic hurricane here, unless you want to practice basinism :P
I practice EPACism. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
"There, 20,000 persons were evacuated to shelter." - I think you need to add an "a" between "to" and "shelter".
Wow, I am completely satisfied with the MH, Preps, Impact, and Aftermath!
D :D :DD No kidding. 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
On reference #1, change "Pasch, Richard J; Zelinsky, David A" to "Richard J. Pasch; David A. Zelinsky. Also, why isn't the National Hurricane Center on there?
Did both. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Looking down further at reference #9 and #10, it looks like Richard Pasch and David Zelinsky lost their middle initial.
You can blame Hink, he wrote the MH when he was active. Think of this positively, it set him up to do other TC articles. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
On reference #11, John Cangialosi's middle initial is "P."
Noted. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
On references #35, #38, #46, #51, #52, #54, #65, #96, #98, and #106, you have the publisher as "Relief Web". It should be "ReliefWeb" - one word.
Fixed. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Reference #92 is a deadlink. Replace the url with this one and archive it.
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
On reference #101, the title should start with a capital letter
 Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:44, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Good job, YE! I am now going to pass this article and list it as a GA. Btw, good luck in round 4 of the WikiCup. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 02:50, 1 July 2014 (UTC)

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I should probs add in watches and warnings. Surprised that never came up in the GA review. Ill see if I can pass the 60kb banner.  YE Pacific Hurricane 16:48, 1 July 2014 (UTC)

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