# Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Try dividing the lead into two paragraphs.
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Mention something from #Development.
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)


### Storylines
Remove the comma after "pregnant".
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"Emma explains to best friend Emma" - who is the first Emma?
Spelling mistake – fixed. – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"to best friend" → "to her best friend"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"The trust ask" → "The trust asks"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"while on her maternity leave" → "while on maternity leave"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)


### Development
"well developed" → "well-developed"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after "escape for Mandy".
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"asked her" → "asked about her"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)


### Reception
Remove the comma after "comments".
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
"everyday" → "every day"
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Link Digital Spy.
 Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)


### References
Sources are archived. 


### Progress