# Talk:Matchbox Educable Noughts and Crosses Engine

In this section, it is not specified what the consequence is for MENACE if the game ends in a draw. This is significant in understanding how the machine learns, as the article indicates that draws are common. One might assume that a draw means that the beads are simply returned to their drawers, but if so this should be stated clearly.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.30.93.144 (talk) 04:04, 30 July 2020 (UTC) 

The article said that Michie wrote a program for an IBM Personal Computer. This is very unlikey, as Michie's work was done in the 1960s, but the IBM PC did not appear until 1981. The cited source simply refers to an IBM computer. I have therefore removed the word Personal. 
I also used the opportunity to add  link to the Pegasus computer mentioned in the same paragraph.
A very interesting article, by the way.
-- Mike Marchmont (talk) 09:51, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks, @Mike Marchmont, and thanks for fixing that WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 15:17, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

Hey @JuPitEer, I noticed you've added a couple of citations from Matthew Scroggs' Blog. It contains a lot of useful things, but I was wondering if it would be considered reliable as per WP:CITE, because it is a blog. Thanks :) WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 10:44, 1 August 2020 (UTC)

Maybe not. I'm pretty sure the information about how the machine works is also in the Martin Gardner and Donald Michie articles that the blog post cites, so I'll dig those out and update the citations. ―JuPitEer (talk) 11:07, 1 August 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Matchbox Educable Noughts and Crosses Engine/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 16:43, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy. 
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 
Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.


### Immediate Failures
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -


### Links
refs need looking at - some are bare links Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 15:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
I'm not so sure, refs 10, 12 and 28 all look dodgy. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 22:04, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
Since I've added some refs, ref 10 is now ref 12, but I don't see what's wrong with it. WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 11:23, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
Never mind, was clarified on the Discord. WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:11, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
At least one has the |location parameter as the url. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 15:51, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Check for publication dates/authors Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
Lee Vilenski, All of them seem to be in order... I'm not sure which ones you have a problem with WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:00, 15 October 2020 (UTC)


### Prose
#### Lede
MENACE was an  - was this decommissioned? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
Lee Vilenski, I wrote this because MENACE is no longer assembled. I've begun addressing some of the other problems. Thanks, WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 20:35, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
games of noughts and crosses (also known as tic-tac-toe)  - just say games of noughts and crosses, the alternative name is irrelevant. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:32, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
The links in the lede, can we add to body? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:25, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Computer equipment was not readily available for non-government use, so Michie worked around this restriction by building it out of matchboxes. - what country is this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:57, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:04, 15 October 2020 (UTC)


#### General
Link Donald Michie in body. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:41, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
beads.[1][5] (or beans)[6] - something is wrong here. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:41, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
link noughts and crosses Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:43, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
You go from Michie wanting to create a program to info on how MENACE worked. The construction para could probably just be placed between the two paras in origin. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 17:22, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
When saying a place, it is best to also include the country (so Edinburgh, Scotland.) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 17:25, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
made up of 304 matchboxes - made from 304... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 17:27, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
Tic-tac-toe is piped to noughts and crosses, which is a redirect to tic-tac-toe. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:06, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
as O, since all matchboxes represented permutations that only one playing as O could ever see. - what? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done, I think WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 08:52, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
probably don't need sections for playing and finishing the game, just one section head is fine. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:26, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
can we remove "reward" and "punish"? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
Lee Vilenski: What do you suggest they're replaced with? WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 11:08, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
Ok,  Working... WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 18:24, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
@Lee Vilenski:  Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:07, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Is is "the MENACE", or simply MENACE? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 11:11, 18 October 2020 (UTC)
This creates a stagnation. - this word does not mean what you mean. Try "stalemate". Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 16:57, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
modern recreations and computer simulation could easily be the same section. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:09, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
 Done WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 08:51, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
He chose Noughts and Crosses as it was a simple game with fewer potential board permutations than other more complex games. - is uncited. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 22:03, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
 Removed, couldn't find a source. WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 11:15, 18 October 2020 (UTC)


### GA Review
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:43, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
Placing on hold. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:11, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Is this an Analogue computer? or a Digital Computer?  I would say it would be a digital computer since the state of each matchbox is set by a finite number of permutations of balls within each matchbox.  The entire computer could easily be simulated using an electronic digital computer. However, just because the matchbox's are not electronic, doesn't mean it doesn't qualify as a digital computer.  If it was analog, you could have 1/2 a ball, or 1/8 of a ball, or any fraction of a ball in the box, which would vary the output.  But, it doesn't work this way. It is either ball, or no ball.  discrete values.    It is quite possible to create an exact copy of the model that is run on this matchbox computer, and run this on another similar 'hardware', and would give exact same results.  Again, this is another tenant of digital computers.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.252.130.191 (talk) 22:33, 3 January 2021 (UTC) 

You're quite correct, I'll switch "Analog" to "Mechanical". Thank you for pointing this out. WikiMacaroonsCinnamon? 11:19, 18 January 2021 (UTC)