# Talk:Don Zimmerman (lacrosse)

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Overall, this article is pretty good. However, I noticed the following issues:

If the references have the author's name, I'd like to see them added in.
The lead feels a lil on the short side, but seeing as how the article's not that long I'm not too worried.
Seems kinda odd that he attended three schools. Know of any specific reason for this? Nevermind, first one's a high school. Though if there's a sourced reason for his transfer it would be a nice addition.
Any more information about the Loyola tenure? Half a sentence for three years feels a lil short.
"Zimmerman coached the South squad in the 2002 North-South Senior All-Star Game" either a link to it or a short description of what it is would be nice (I'm pretty sure i know what the north-south game is, but i could be wrong)
Otherwise, this article's good. I'll put it on hold, and I expect the stuff will be taken care of pretty quickly since it's minor changes. Wizardman 04:20, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

After re-reading it, I'm satisfied with the changes and will pass the article. Wizardman 02:44, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

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