# Talk:Carpenter Street (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 06:17, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

"something that was attributed to pre-Thanksgiving travel": rephrase as "a decline that was attributed ..."
Done. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
"The critical response was mostly negative": rephrase as "Critical response was mostly negative".
Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
"Using a hand scanner": comma after scanner.
Added. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
I notice a lot of thens in the plot section. Most of them can be removed, as the section already moves in the historical present tense.
I've gone through and removed them. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
"his sixth of the series": sixth what?
It was missing "episode" - now added. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
"He has also previously": shorten to "He previously".
Done. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
"who appeared for fourth occasion": fourth occasion or four occasions?
Should have been "the fourth occasion". The second half of the sentence also didn't make a great deal of sense in that context, so I added a couple of words to improve the flow (and general understanding of what I was trying to say! :) ). Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Are the days of the week relevant in the last paragraph of the production section?
Nope, I've removed them. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Cool article. On hold for 14 days. 23W 09:27, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing! Much appreciated. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
 You're welcome! 23W 19:39, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

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I tried but was unable to find reliable sources that would allow me to point out the obvious that the episode title "Carpenter Street" is a reference to director John Carpenter and it references the film Halloween in several ways. Perhaps someone else will have more luck finding sources and could make sure that the episode title and influences and allusions are properly explained in the Production section. -- 109.78.204.175 (talk) 02:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)