# Talk:Joseph Berchtold

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 14:43, 8 August 2015 (UTC)


### Prose
Repeating the same citation over and over again next to each other is unnecessary Done
Section headers that are like "Career in the ..." could be rewritten as "... career" (suggestion only) Done
Second paragraph in lead should be split Done Kierzek (talk) 18:46, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:03, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

Passing, well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 20:10, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Kierzek (talk) 21:24, 9 August 2015 (UTC)