# Talk:Charley Hull

Shouldn't we mention the fact that she had a cameo in Happy Gilmore 2? 98.123.38.211 (talk) 05:25, 3 August 2025 (UTC)

 Done Canary757 (talk) 05:23, 5 August 2025 (UTC)

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Nominator: Canary757 (talk · contribs) 05:52, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Edwininlondon (talk · contribs) 06:31, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
Happy to review this over the next few days. Edwininlondon (talk) 06:31, 24 August 2025 (UTC)

Hello Edwininlondon, thankyou for taking the time to review this article. I look forward to your review.  Canary757 (talk) 08:58, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
Hello Canary757. If you don't mind, I just start with some comments and suggestions, none of them will have to be addressed to meet the criteria. Later I will be checking against criteria. I must admit I know very little about golf, so please forgive me if I make mistakes. 

Ladies European Tour (LET) and the LPGA Tour.  --> any reason why LPGA is not explained but LET is? LPGA Tour is known as this across the board. The LPGA Tour is not expanded in the lead of golfers, e.g Michelle Wie West, Lydia Ko, Stacy Lewis etc. The Ladies European Tour is different. It is regularly referred to by both its full name and its acronym, hence I included both. I agree it looks a little strange only giving the expanded name for one of them, but I also think it would look wrong on a golf article to expand LPGA as it isn't commonly done on wikiproject golf.
Aged 9, --> would be good to be consistent use digits of words, as per MOS:NUM Agreed  Done
Her first Ladies European Tour title was achieved --> I would use LET here, since that acronym has been introduced and used already, but maybe in golf lingo that is not done.  Done
Ladies European Tour Order of Merit --> and here as well?  Done
further Ladies European Tour titles in 2019, 2021 and 2024 --> and here?  Done
Hull has won seven professional titles during her career, --> I assume she is still active, so it would be better I think to say something along the lines of "As of August 2025, Hull..." This is the one point I'm not on board with. Novak Djokovic, Iga Świątek and Tiger Woods for example all use the player X has won X amount of titles format which is very commonly used for active players. When players retire, the 'has' is removed such as on Roger Federer where it is player X won.
aged 9/10 --> aged nine or ten  Done
defeating the United States 10.5–9.5 --> in an earlier paragraph we had "USA". Would be good to be consistent if possible  Done
T38th --> is that T a typo or is that how things work in golf? T stands for Tied (tied for 38th). now linked to Glossary of golf
two-rounds or two rounds ? two rounds  Done
which allowed her to play full-time on the LPGA Tour --> a bit confusing to a non golfer: you say she played on both tours in the year, but then also fulltime on one of them. Rewritten, hopefully with more clarity
four-strokes --> elsewhere there seem to be no hyphen Won by three strokes (no hyphen), held a three-stroke lead (hyphen - compound adjective) I have corrected these now.
In the 2019 Solheim Cup at Gleneagles Hotel, Scotland. --> seems something is missing or should the . be a , ?  Done
two shots --> in 2018 we have two-shots as above  Done
her opening round --> no hyphen here, which is how a non-golf would write this. However, I have seen the final-round as well, so I suspect somewhere there is something wrong.   Done
2024 is the only section not ending with her year end ranking. Any reason for this? Added
Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder  --> I don't think that capital A is right Amended
That's it for now. I'll look sources next. At first glance, most looks good, just in the Professional wins section there is quite a bit of unsourced information. That will have to be fixed.
More later. Edwininlondon (talk) 16:48, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
Thankyou for your edits to improve the article Edwininlondon and for your helpful suggestions. I have been in the process of changing two-strokes to two strokes acrosss multiple articles the past week and hadn't reached this one in time! I've made multiple changes per above and will continue. Kind regards. Canary757 (talk) 06:14, 25 August 2025 (UTC)
I agree with your points above. I have checked against the criteria and the only things outstanding are sources related:

missing sources for the info in Results in LPGA majors.
For the Cuts made in 2014 season I get on source 144 a 0, but you have it as 7. Am I missing something?
Professional Team appearances missing sources
That's all I could find. Otherwise all good.Edwininlondon (talk) 17:23, 28 August 2025 (UTC)

Hi Edwininlondon. I have added references for her two International Crown appearances as requested, I have also added further references for the Solheim Cup appearances in the same section although these can also be found again in the very next section focusing on the Solheim Cup, so I wasn't sure if you wanted these added too?
With regards to her 2014 results, this is unfortunate, but it appears to be an issue with the LPGA website. Beneath the 0/0 stats are her ten appearances with positions. There are ten appearances, with 3 showing CUT, meaning she made the cut at seven out of ten.
Her majors' results can all be verified through the results section on reference 144 (now 143) by clicking the results page, choosing a year, and then checking the major results against the chart. Clicking here [1], shows all her results for 2025, Womens's Open T2, Evian Withdrawn, Women's PGA T12, US Women's Open T12, Chevron CUT. I know this is a little inconvenient, but I know of no page which lists every one of her major results on the same page so it is the best that I can do. Hope this is okay.
Thanks again for your time.
Canary757 (talk) 13:38, 29 August 2025 (UTC)