# Talk:Denmark at the 1964 Winter Olympics

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 03:25, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

I'll review this one. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 03:25, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

Lead
In the infobox, the website looks like it's in Danish. Is there supposed to be a separate link for the English website?
You usually put the flag-bearer(s) in the infobox, right?
Carlsen finished 53rd in the 30 kilometers race, and 57th in the 15 kilometers event. ==> Carlsen placed outside of the top 50 in both of his events. (it's too specific, as is)
Done all, regarding the link, there's a "UK" roundel in the top that changes it to English. Courcelles (talk) 14:49, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Background
Good.
Cross-country skiing
Instead of the current structure --- to create a better introduction --- I would suggest adding as the second sentence of the paragraph that: Carlsen competed in two races, both of which were won by Eero Mäntyranta of Finland.
You can then abbreviate Eero Mäntyranta as Mäntyranta (or the winner, or the winning time, etc.) later in the paragraph.
Carlsen finished completed the race in 1 hour and 20.7 seconds (to avoid re-use of finish/finishers/etc.)
All actioned. Courcelles (talk) 14:58, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Speed skating
He completes completed the race (wrong tense)
Done. 14:58, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
I would close the paragraph with a reference to this being one of Denmark's all-time best individual performances, with something like: "Nonetheless, this was Denmark's best performance in an individual event at the Winter Olympics until figure skater Michael Tyllesen also finished in ninth place at the 1998 Games."
Here is the best reference I could find for that: https://books.google.com/books?id=uCN1CQAAQBAJ&pg=PA150&lpg=PA150&dq=kurt+stille+best+individual++winter+olympic+result+for+denmark+1964+9th+place&source=bl&ots=eOoHnu7htw&sig=h61GJcYlbBnCgD0xEH7MpxJSEVY&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiY0qDXw9fcAhUBCTQIHZvmBhEQ6AEwCXoECAAQAQ#v=onepage&q=kurt%20stille%20best%20individual%20%20winter%20olympic%20result%20for%20denmark%201964%209th%20place&f=false.
I'm uncomfortable using a source I can't read (geographical restrictions), especially since they won a silver in 1998; if it didn't mention that, I question it a bit. Courcelles (talk) 14:55, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Okay, understood. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:16, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Overall
No dab links.
No plagiarism detected.
All of the links work.
Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 05:48, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

Actioned everything, except one point in speed skating. Courcelles (talk) 14:58, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Passed! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 16:16, 6 August 2018 (UTC)