# Talk:Mickey Micelotta

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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 14:47, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

The infobox should read (1954–1955)
American is a common term, no need for linking
New York – Penn League, not New York - Penn League
In 1949, Micelotta was promoted to the C-class Vandergrift Pioneers of the Middle Atlantic League. in caps or semicolon, I prefer the latter.
...of the Canadian-American League the following season. His performances that season dull prose
As the 1954 season began, the Phillies noted had a good chance at winning a major league roster spot due to manager Steve O'Neill being impressed with his fielding and hitting power. Is "Micelotta" supposed to be after "noted"?
Smalley returned from the disabled list perhaps link disabled list
He finished the season with only a .201 batting average in 127 games played no need for "only"
Perhaps link to BRM in the ELs
Will pass once these issues are dealt with. Albacore (talk) 21:33, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

Issues fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:51, 7 October 2011 (UTC)