# Talk:HMS Pomone (1897)

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 23:00, 26 December 2010 (UTC)

These "Third class" cruisers were designed I'm not sure, but shouldn't "Third" be in lowercase?
Indeed. Fixed.
There is inconsistency between spelling out single digit numbers and using numerals for single digit numbers.
The conversion template doesn't allow for numbers to be spelled out. Plus I'm using numerals for all hyphenated measurements like 4-inch.
The lead should be expanded.
Again, not much to work with here. What else do you think can be added?
That's all I see. I'm putting the article on hold for a week. CrowzRSA 01:41, 2 January 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:58, 2 January 2011 (UTC)