# Talk:Destination X (2005)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, I got a good reviewer.--WillC 21:09, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"which he has sustained" had sustained.
"whoever the winning team represented," no comma needed here.
"building, when" building. When
"The second stage was a Three Way match," no comma needed
"B.G James," B.G.
Just a bit of copyediting needed. I'll put the article on hold and pass when it's fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:58, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Comment – Fixed the grammar and punctuation errors. Del♉sion23 (talk) 00:50, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I believe they are all fixed now.--WillC 01:23, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
Looks good; article passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
Nice, and thanks for the review man.--WillC 06:40, 15 October 2011 (UTC)