# Talk:Hvila vid denna källa

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:41, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

This is the oldest unreviewed songs GAN so I'll give it a go! --K. Peake 09:41, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:43, 3 December 2021 (UTC)


### Lead
Img looks good!
Thanks!
The word "or" is redundant in brackets since these make it clear you are using an alternate title
Gone.
Not only should best-known and best-loved be in a different sentence from the first one, but the ref shouldn't be in the lead because everything there needs to be cited in the body
Fixed.
Subtitle should come before the narrator's part
Fixed.
What the narrator offers should not be in quotes, unless you use a source and if so, this needs to be the same phrasing
Cited.
That's better but it should only be invoked once in the sentence. --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Wikilink Snipe to itself
Done.
Again, the usage of "or" is useless for the subtitle brackets part per earlier
It's the translation of "eller". The word is particular to this Epistle.
Oh I did not know that, thanks for explaining. --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
"has been performed in" → "has been used in" unless your source says performed, then reword in the body
Done.
There should be a second para of sufficient length, which can be created if you add something about reception alongside the final parts in the new order
Done.


### Context
The first sentence's ref should solely be at the end of it
Moved.
"at the royal court." → at places including the royal court."
Done.
"the eighteenth century." → "the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
Done.


### Song
#### Melody and verse form
Add relevant info for the audio sample text to meet WP:NFCCP
Done. The melody is of course free, however.
Pipe 2/4 time to Duple and quadruple metre
I think we should leave this one; the target article clearly needs work and may one day have a 2/4 section or at least a link anchor.
Pipe key to Key (music)
Done.
"each of 14 lines," → "each consisting of 14 lines,"
Done.
"making it one of" → "standing as one of"
That breaks the connection with the previous phrase.
Remove comma after Epistle 25
No, "Epistle 25" is in apposition to the song's name, which is comma-delimited.
"something Bellman is known" → "which Bellman is known"
Done.
"that it must" → "disputed that it must"
Edited.
"the source is" → "the official source is" to make it clear this is not one of their opinions
Edited.
Imgs look good!
Thanks.


#### Lyrics
Wikilink snipe to itself
Done.
Pipe game to Galliformes
Done.


### Reception
Merge with the below section, retitling to Reception and legacy
Done.
Img looks good!
Thanks.
The film and schoolbook parts should be at the end of the merged section
Moved.
"has featured in" → "has been featured in"
Edited.
"in this, the last" → "in the composition, the last"
No, it's clear as it is: the next word is "Epistle".
"as does the final stanza:" → "like the final stanza does:"
It's already in plain English.
If dying words refers to all of those in the Burman para, then first note it after "is Bellman's" instead
Moved.
"and Bellman knew that" → "while Bellman knew that"
Edited.
"in Bellman's longest poem," → "in Bellman's longest poem" plus merge this with the above para
The commas delimit the poem's name, in apposition. Merged paras.
Pipe parmesan to Parmigiano Reggiano
Done.
Merge the Svenska Dagbladet para with the one below it
Done.
"then than it is now." → "then than at the lecture's time."
Edited.
"dismisses the possibility that it" → "dismissed the possibility that the pimpinella"
I think we're better without that repetition, it's twice above and twice in this sentence already.
Wikilink as aniseed instead
Done.


### Recording and adaptations
Make this the last para of reception and legacy, merging with the films and songbook info
Merged.
"where it forms the title track of" → "forming the title track of"
Edited.
Either add more info for the Sven-Bertil Taube cover or remove it per WP:SONGCOVER
Done.
"It has been" → "The composition has been"
Edited.


### Notes
Pipe little death to La petite mort
Done.


### References
Copyvio score looks solid at 29.6%!!!
Noted.
The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 2, with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
Done.
Refs 7 and 10 are duplicates

What source is ref 8 supposed to lead to exactly?

Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 11
Done.
Pipe Svensk Filmdatabas to Swedish Film Database on ref 15 and add the language parameter
Done.
Wikilink Højskolesangbogen on ref 16 and add the language parameter
Done.
Add the language parameter for ref 17
Done.


### Sources
Wikilink as Albert Bonniers Förlag instead
Done.
Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
Done.


### External links
Add the name of the website that the text is at
Done.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this speedy review! --K. Peake 21:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
All done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:05, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 Pass time! --K. Peake 11:02, 5 December 2021 (UTC)