# Talk:Evicted!

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 01:54, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Gen. Quon (Talk)
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:54, 8 January 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  very good (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with other GAs)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license) & (NFC with a valid FUR)

As per the above checklist, the issues identified are:

The lead does not provide an accessible overview for the Reception section.
The lead does not give relative emphasis to the Reception as is given in the body.

This article is a very promising GA nominee. I'm glad to see your work here. I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 21:31, 11 January 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for this very good review. How do these edits look?--Gen. Quon (Talk)  01:29, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
Good. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:03, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:03, 12 January 2014 (UTC)

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