# Talk:Malta at the 2012 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### Lead
Is there a need to specifically state it is an "island" country? Not sure the relevance of this addition.
Should Matthew Sultana be linked in the lead and infobox, similar to the results table? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### Background
"Malta debuted in the Paralympic movement at the 1960 Summer Paralympics" - maybe something like "Malta debuted in the Paralympics in the 1960 Summer games". The duplication of "Paralympics" sounds off.
Should Matthew Sultana be linked, similar to the results table?
"Marathon runner Derren French met the minimum qualifying standards for his event though a number of faster athletes causing an upper limit on participants forced him to withdraw" - this sentence doesn't make sense, especially the last part. Please clarify and maybe split into two sentences. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### Disability qualification
No comments. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### Swimming
"At the time of the London Paralympics Matthew Sultana was 15 years old and he was the only athlete to compete for Malta." - comma after "Paralympics" and remove "he"
"This put him 21st (and last) overall and he did not qualify for the final since only the eight overall fastest swimmers made that stage of the competition." - consider an emdash to break up the sentence like: "This put him 21st (and last) overall and he did not qualify for the final—only the eight overall fastest swimmers made that stage of the competition." « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### References/Images
No images except PD flags.
References are formatted correctly and in a uniform manner. They are all archived.
Please update |dead-url=no to |url-status=live
References are all reliable (although Ref 2 seems borderline).
No copyvio issues.
Ref 3 is dead, thus you should update the url-status field in the citation. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)


### Comments
I will review this one shortly. I made a quick copyedit with some minor changes. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  15:49, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
That's all I got. Will place on hold, nice work. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  16:32, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
@Gonzo fan2007: Have made all of the necessary changes. MWright96 (talk) 18:11, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
Looks good. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @  18:24, 20 September 2019 (UTC)