# Talk:Guru Sishyan (1988 film)

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Reviewer: Veera Narayana (talk · contribs) 16:13, 29 November 2019 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this nomination, please be available. Thank you. Veera Narayana 16:13, 29 November 2019 (UTC)

Guru Sishyan actually translates to "Master and Disciple". But if any source actually says "Teacher and Student" then i am fine with it.
 Done went with "Master and Disciple". Because the actual Tamil word for teacher is Vaathiyar. --Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
Too many names in the lead about supporting roles. Almost makes it good to call an ensemble cast.
Removed two names as they were barely cameos. Now better? --Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
Is Geetha a police inspector?
Yes, written. --Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
"Raja realises he is Kandhasamy's first son who went missing years ago" – How?
During a school picnic. Watch around 1:43:38 and tell me if I missed something. --Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
main hero, other hero... No. Two leads, and that's how it should be.
See now. Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
"This was the first film in which the two actors, who were leading stars of Tamil cinema, were seen together onscreen" – The leading stars claim is a bit unencyclopaedic. Can't we simply say that it was their first onscreen appearance together?
See now. Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
Some refs with Tamil sources need translated titles. For example, ref no. 49.
Concluding here. I really think two different people worked in this article. Like two disoriented halves of a film, each having their own narrative. Still, minor reworks could do. Let me know once the comments are addressed Kailash. Regards, Veera Narayana 09:14, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

If you have issues with the plot, either watch the Telugu-dubbed version or the English subtitled version. --Kailash29792 (talk)  15:38, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
No, don't ask the reviewers to do that. Remember Fowler? It gives bad impression about your writing skills. Veera Narayana 04:33, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
Pass or Fail: 

Its a pass. Congratulations. Having said that, the article would be benefited with some copy-editing in the future for a more tight prose. Still, good enough for a GA. Veera Narayana 04:33, 7 December 2019 (UTC)