# Talk:Equitable Building (Manhattan)

The article makes an impression that it was a major, if not principal, cause for the 1916 regulations. Carrol Willis (Form follows finance..., p.69) says the opposite: Equitable was completed when political support for the codes already was solid. In 1913-1915 NYC experienced a local overbuilding crisis and developers supported limitations regardless of any single project. 
I'm not quite sure how to integrate this POV into article without ruining its current flow of content (most of it serving the other POV). Ideas? NVO (talk) 08:31, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Equitable Building (Manhattan)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 15:40, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall: Pass
Pass/Fail: 


### Review
#### Design
Why is penthouse wikilinked so late when its already been mentioned in the previous paragraph?
 Fixed I moved the link up. epicgenius (talk) 19:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


#### Features
Why is marble wikilinked so late when its already been mentioned?
 Fixed I moved the link up. epicgenius (talk) 19:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


#### Landmark status
Are 3 references needed for "The building was designated a National Historic Landmark in 1978"?
 Fixed I combined the refs. epicgenius (talk) 19:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)


### References
Reference 45 needs an author (Christian Salazar)
 Done
Is there any way to better clip reference #53? Is is hard to read the way it is currently clipped.
 Fixed I modified the clipping boundaries. epicgenius (talk) 19:52, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
Thanks, easy pass. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:02, 1 July 2020 (UTC)