# Talk:Naz Mehmet

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:36, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:36, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"Naz is torn between two world:" worlds
"However, when left alone they get close again but Asher interrupts them when he returns." Taking out however and putting a comma after again seems better.
"What Naz wants is to be like everyone around her and to be able to pick her own boyfriend bu" comma after boyfriend. Do a double-check on areas where commas should be added throughout the article.
There's gotta be some reception on here. If there's not much that's fine, but can't be nothing.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:13, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I've made those changes and will look for more missing commas later. As for reception, I did look absolutely everywhere to find some but I couldn't find a single review of series 2 of EastEnders: E20. I'll look again but I really struggled before. –anemoneprojectors– 09:32, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
Ok. I see reception for other characters, so seeing nothing on her threw me off. Granted, it may take some searching. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:56, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
I went and searched high and low for possible reception sources, and you're not kidding, there's really nothing out there. Exhausted all the routes I usually go for sources, so because there's nothing to post I can't penalize you for it. I'm still a bit iffy about passing an article without one, but it nonetheless passes all the GA criteria, so the article does pass as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:02, 24 March 2011 (UTC)

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