# Talk:Christine Nelson

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
It's Late → "It's Late" (all uses)
That's about it here.
All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:24, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Concept and casting
Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
"Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
All fixed - I've made it "Speaking of the filming". to make it more clear. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:26, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Characterization
"father may had" → "father may have"
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:27, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Role in Degrassi
Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
Remove the comma after "were a baby".
There's a word missing between "by parents".
"withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
Is "day care" two words in British English?
"which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"
All fixed. I also just put "daycare" as one word. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Novelization
"based from" doesn't sound right.
Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Reception and impact
"story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
"14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
"for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"
All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### References
The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:
## References
### Citations
### Episodes
### Sources
Done. I didn't think of making subsections! ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)


### Progress