# Talk:French ship Suffren (1803)

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Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:37, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 13:01, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 13:01, 15 August 2025 (UTC)

"The short class of the Téméraires consisted two ships..." - I think this needs a little more context to be clearer to average readers - even something along the lines of "The so-called 'short' variant of the Téméraire-class..."
Sadly, Winfield & Roberts don't give much info about the shortened class and why Forfait thought it important. He was a naval architect of some ability himself, so maybe he just wanted to make a change to claim them for himself. Dunno.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:07, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
Also, not sure I love "several inches", when it was about a foot and a half of difference (not to mention using imperial to describe the difference)
Agreed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:07, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
Any idea why they were shortened?
"Missiessy decided upon to attack Dominica" - something went haywire here
Good catch.
One dupe link
Parsecboy (talk) 13:42, 15 August 2025 (UTC)

All done, see if my changes are satisfactory--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:07, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
Looks good, happy to promote. Parsecboy (talk) 13:44, 18 August 2025 (UTC)