# Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)

So…the full video was just released and can be watched at kanyewest.com.  I would update the section, but I don’t have the time to watch it in full at the moment.Onomatopoeiaieopotamono (talk) 07:02, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

The article states in the music video section "The nearly six-minute clip features an onslaught of depraved scenes". Isn't this a little bit biased and uncited?

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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)


### Initial Comments
Lead
The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough
 Done
Background
 Done
Composition
"In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.
Reception
 Done
Music video
 Done
Charts and Release History
 Done
References
 Done


### Overall Summary
Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)