# Talk:Brandon Medders

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:23, 8 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"a 4-seam" literally no idea what that means.  And should it be four-seam?
"Born in 1980, Medders" you already said in the opening sentence he was born in 1980.
" to draft him" is there a link?
"minor leagues" likewise.
"becoming a free agent" perhaps "once again.."
"three saves.[5] Medders" overlinked.
"2002 was the... " avoid starting sentences with a numeral.
labrum - link.
"call up a fresh arm to help a tired bullpen" hey, I'm certainly no expert but this reads rather whimsical and not particularly encyclopedic in tone.
Changed fresh to rested. The rest is what the source says. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 22:22, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
If it's a quote, quote it.  "rested arm to help a tired bullpen" isn't encylcopedic. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 22:26, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
Decided to just take it out. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 13:54, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"September.[27] He became" merge these two small sentences.
"invitation to spring training.[2] " overlinked.
ESPN is italicised 4 times out of 5...
The external link is a template; I can't change the formatting there. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 22:25, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
Consistency then.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 22:25, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
" Brandon Medders, ESPN: August 26, 2009.[30] fragment, no period.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:28, 9 September 2021 (UTC)