# Talk:Kevin Grady

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Reviewer: –Grondemar 18:14, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
 Working I will aim to post a complete review within the next couple of days. –Grondemar 18:14, 8 August 2010 (UTC)

One early comment based on my first read-through: what ended up happening to him for the upcoming season?  Did he eventually make it to an NFL training camp; did he sign with a UFL team; is he out of football entirely? I did a Google search but wasn't able to find anything. –Grondemar 18:24, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
I think his career is over.  At least I have been unable to document any signing. I think he retains permanent notability despite never playing professionally.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:32, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
I completed my review and have the following concerns, in addition to the one above:

Under High school career, why is All-State in italics?
Probably an artifact from a prior editor.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:34, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
It would be nice to add a little more about his recruiting.  Did he consider any other schools before selecting Michigan?
According to current refs 4 & 5 he had no interest in other schools.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:53, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
I added a sentence to that effect with the references you mentioned. –Grondemar 03:40, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
I added a sentence to the Junior year (2007) section: "He would miss the entire 2007 season recovering from his injuries; by making use of a redshirt year, however, he was able to not use up a year of eligibility."  I'm pretty sure this is accurate and fills a gap in the narrative; could you find a source for this however?
The next section starts with a ref for the fact that he was still recovering during the following Spring. I just moved that one to your cn tag.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:46, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Do you have statistics for Kevin Grady's senior season?
Added stats to prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:42, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
The article will be on hold for a minimum of seven days to allow the above concerns to be addressed.
Thank you. –Grondemar 16:50, 9 August 2010 (UTC)

With all above concerns addressed, I am  passing this Good Article Nomination.  Congratulations! –Grondemar 03:40, 11 August 2010 (UTC)

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