# Talk:JAL Express

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Comments:

As with JALways, the link to the Japanese Wikipedia article is not needed in the lead.
Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
In sentence "On July 1, 1998, JAL Express commenced operations from Osaka to Miyazaki and Kagoshima; with two Boeing 737-400s, non-Japanese cockpit crew, and short-term contracted cabin attendants.", remove semicolon after "Kagoshima".
Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
"On the same day, the airline celebrated its tenth anniversary of establishment in April 2007": Remove "April 2007" as it is redundant.
Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
File:JAL Mileage Bank.png and File:JAL Global Club.png do not have a fair use rationale for this article.
Fair use rationale added in images. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
See the GA review of JALways for concerns I have with the JAL Mileage Bank section.
Updated as per comments in JALways GA review. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
The alt text for the images needs some work, it should not simply be a repetition of the caption. See WP:ALT.
All alt text completely rewritten to comply with WP:ALT. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:54, 21 September 2009 (UTC)

All comments reviewed and updated in the article. Thank you for your review. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 21:26, 22 September 2009 (UTC)

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This article appears to have had parts of another article pasted on it, evidenced by some section headers being duplicated.
I came across this when I tried to remove the IATA members category, but can't locate the code to do so.
NYCRuss ☎ 23:40, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

This edit is where things appear to have gone south.  I have no idea how this article was awarded Good Article status.
NYCRuss ☎ 23:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Removed GAR template.  Problem was a template that was inserting content from the Japan Airlines page.  Fixed problem with this edit.
NYCRuss ☎ 19:35, 28 September 2017 (UTC)