# Talk:Jerry's Painting

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Will review this tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)


### Comments
#### Plot
...while thinking of about powerful women... Drop "of" or "about".
Done. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)


#### Production
"Jerry's Painting" was written by Norm Hiscock and directed by Dean Holland. During its original broadcast, "Jerry's Painting" ran for... Start the second sentence with "the episode" instead.
Done. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
"Jerry's Painting" featured a guest appearance by Darlene Hunt as Marcia Langman, a member of the conservative group, the Society for Family Stability Foundation. Drop the second comma.
Dropped it. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Remember to write (pictured) after the name of the person in the picture.
Added. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)


#### Cultural references
...Andy and April instead start to purchase several "as seen on TV", including... Looks like a noun is missing after "as seen on TV", unless that is the noun?
Nope, you're right. Added "items". — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)


#### Reception
You should probably explain what the "ratings" and "shares" mean, for those who are not familiar with Nielsen ratings.
Added. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Why Leslie Knope mentioned by full name in the middle of the section?
Not sure. Dropped the last name. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)


#### Lead
""Jerry's Painting" is the eleventh episode of the third season of the American comedy television series Parks and Recreation..." Write "Parks and Recreation's third season" instead.
Done. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
With not much at all to complain about, this is overall a very well-written article. Just fix said issues and we've got ourselves another GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that the changes can be made. Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:08, 6 May 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated! — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Looks good. Well done! Queenieacoustic (talk) 14:53, 6 May 2011 (UTC)

Why does April mispronounce the word usted when it's established the character speaks Spanish?Varlaam (talk) 21:05, 14 May 2012 (UTC)