# Talk:BRAC Onnesha

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)

The lead is awfully short, even for a small article. You should expand it to include more on operations and development.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Background section is redundant as majority of the prose is mentioned again in the development section.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
BRAC University has built a ground station at its Mohakhali campus to analyse data and photographs sent from space for further research purposes.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
$500,000 in which currency?
Not sure..when I converted USD to pounds, it didn't match, so I am just going to use pounds so its more clear. Kees08 (Talk)
"inaugurated 25 May," Of which year?
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Future work section belongs on the Birds-1 article more (and possibly an article on the Bird program).
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"where it was launched from the Kibō module." Should be mentioned in the main part of the article.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Should be it for now.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 02:23, 6 February 2018 (UTC)