# Talk:Hardnose shark

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Hardnose shark/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jimfbleak (talk · contribs) 05:25, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi, I'll start the review later, got to get some gardening done before the rain starts Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 05:25, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
First pass Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 13:27, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

Looking at the map, there are at least six BE English-speaking countries in this shark's range, and none that are AE English-speaking. AE seems an inappropriate variety of English.
I ran the text through an online AE-BE convertor. I'm not that familiar with BE so let me know if I missed something.
You don't need the species' name in the range map, it's assumed to be for the subject of the article
True, I just like the longer caption because I think less white space looks better in the infobox.
modest-sized—not sure this works, "medium-sized" or "modest" ?
Changed to "modestly sized"
perhaps a couple of words qualifying Theodore Gill, as you have done with the Germans
Added
macloti I understand, but why Maclot's shark when he's named Macklot?
I don't know why. Maybe people forgot the etymology and just went by the binomial.
In the description, I'd be inclined to start with the general appearance rather than the, admittedly peculiar, snout.
Rearranged
originates roughly over the pectoral fin free rear tips.—not sure I understand this, why "free"
This is a specific technical term for sharks. I've added a link for it.
less than 50 km (31 mi) —"31" seems over-precise for a "less than"
Adjusted the sig figs for the conversion
Bony fishes form the main part of its diet—"its" separated from its subject by an intervening sentence
Changed to "this shark's diet"
Known parasites—as opposed to unknown?
"Known" removed
Ref 1 needs italicised binomial
Fixed
I'll have another read after I see your comments Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 13:27, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 17:20, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
Everything above looks OK, I'll probably leave it until tomorrow to have a second read. If I don't find anything significant, I'll do the GA then Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 17:29, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail:  
Jimfbleak -  talk to me? 06:13, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 06:38, 15 May 2013 (UTC)