# Talk:Mi Tierra (song)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Mi Tierra (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

You deserve another review, so here it is! --K. Peake 09:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Add a comma instead of in after the studio name in the infobox
"and the artist with her husband" → "and the artist, with her husband"
"handling its production. It was" → "handling the production. The song was"
Add a comma after music critics
"Commercially, it topped the" → "Commercially, the song topped the" because this is a new para
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
"on several European countries. " → "on several European countries' listings."
"by Alberto Tolot features the artist" → "by Alberto Tolot and features Gloria Estefan" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
""Mi Tierra" received several accolades including the" → ""Mi Tierra" received the" since it only won these three awards
Shouldn't this sentence be the first of the para instead?
"at the  Billboard Latin Music Awards and" → "at the Billboard Latin Music Awards, and" also, you should mention that the first two were in 1994 and the second was in 1995
Remove the Puerto Rican singers introduction, as this is not needed in the lead


### Background and composition
Wikilink Gloria Estefan
Pipe Latin to Latin music
Pipe salsa to Salsa music
"by her son, Nayib;" → "by her son Nayib;"
"by Estefan's husband, Emilio Estefan, and" → "by Gloria's husband Emilio Estefan and" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
"of the album's songs including" → "of the album's songs, including"
""Mi Tierra" is a" → "Musically, "Mi Tierra" is a"


### Critical reception and accolades
"called it "genius"." → "called the song "genius"."
"On the club remix, he said it's" → "Of the club remix, he said it is"
Italicise The Daily Vault
"it was the only track" → ""Mi Tierra" was the only track"
"called it a" → "called "Mi Tierra" a"
"rated it three out of five," → "rated the song three out of five," and mention stars if this is the ratings system used
Remove pipe on Latin
Shouldn't you write Record Mirror instead of RM?
"described it as" → "described the song as"
"It was acknowledged as" → "The song was acknowledged as"


### Promotion and commercial performance
"was directed Alberto Tolot" → "was directed by Alberto Tolot"
Shouldn't you write 14th instead of fourteenth studio album?
"in 1994 where she" → "in 1994, where she"
The Latin Recording Academy → the Latin Recording Academy per MOS:THEMUSIC
"In the US, it reached" → "In the United States, the song reached" per MOS:US
"it reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the  Billboard Hot Dance Club Songs charts ." → "the song reached numbers one and five on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and the Hot Dance Club Songs charts, respectively."
"number seventy-seven on" → "number 77 on" per MOS:NUM
Pipe Media Control to GfK Entertainment charts
"twenty-seventh on the" → "27th on the"
Pipe Mega Single Top 100 to Dutch Single Top 100
"in Netherlands and thirty-sixth" → "in the Netherlands, and 36th"


### Formats and track listings
Retitle to Track listing since there is only one format or listing here


### Charts
Good


### Personnel
Move this to being the section directly before charts


### See also
I don't think Billboard Hot Latin Songs Year-End Chart is necessary


### References
Copyvio score looks fabulous at 17.4%!!!!
Pipe Epic to Epic Records on ref 1 instead of ref 23
Remove the publisher from refs 4 and 5
Wikilink Newspapers.com on ref 8 instead of ref 13
WP:OVERLINK of Sun-Sentinel on refs 8 and 30
Ref 9 should cite last name followed by first and middle
Billlboard → Billboard on ref 10 and pipe to Billboard (magazine), plus author-link Larry Flick
Cite The Daily Vault as work/website instead on ref 11
Cite Pittsburgh Post-Gazette on ref 18
WP:OVERLINK of Music Week on ref 19
Cite Univision as the sole publisher on ref 20 instead
Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 24
Wikilink Telemetro on ref 28
WP:OVERLINK of Univision on ref 29
Cite Media Control as publisher instead and pipe to GfK Entertainment charts on ref 33
Pipe Mega Single Top 100 to Dutch Single Top 100 on ref 34, also why so many publishers?
Pipe Official Charts Company to Official Charts on ref 35


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; slick job here once again! --K. Peake 10:15, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
Thanks as always for the review. For the charts refs, I just decided to just reuse the refs from the chart tables (which is what I should've done in the first place!). Erick (talk) 18:59, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
Magiciandude You missed the first three points of infobox and lead. Clarifying the first, I meant to write Crescent Moon Studios, Miami, Florida. --K. Peake 16:12, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 Pass now, I saw your mention through the article page and everything has been implemented! --K. Peake 07:07, 27 January 2023 (UTC)