# Talk:Marvel vs. Capcom Origins

This review is transcluded from Talk:Marvel vs. Capcom Origins/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:43, 31 January 2016 (UTC)

I think I'll finish this tomorrow. JAGUAR  20:43, 31 January 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait, I'll definitely finish this tomorrow. JAGUAR  23:02, 1 February 2016 (UTC)


### Initial comments
Once again, I'd recommend unlinking video game in the lead due to potential overlinkage
"The dual pack was released through the PlayStation Network and Xbox Live Arcade in September and October 2012." - The dual pack was released through the PlayStation Network and Xbox Live Arcade in September and October 2012, respectively.
"Origins was released to mixed and positive reviews" - how about The game was met with mixed to positive reviews upon release?
"but criticized it for its clunky, outdated gameplay and unbalanced rosters" - I'd remove 'clunky', makes it sound a bit choppy here
I would recommend splitting the Gameplay section into two paragraphs, to improve prose flow
"which had also included online play using GGPO" - unlink GGPO here, it is already linked in gameplay
Once more, I think it would be best to split the reception section into two paragraphs, with a new one starting at "Taylor Cocke of IGN rated the title 8.2/10..."
No dead refs, and they all meet WP:VG/RS
Nice work on this article, overall it's well written and comprehensive for an online-only game. Sorry for the delay too, I usually review GANs within 24 hours. Once all of the minor issues are out of the way then this can pass.  JAGUAR  16:06, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Done. Thank you once again for your time! Wani (talk) 17:42, 3 February 2016 (UTC)