# Talk:Joseph Clover (artist)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:03, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Avoid single-sentence paragraphs in the lead, probably needs to only be two paras anyway.
"his fiancé" shouldn't that be "his fiancée"?
"the Swedenborgian New Church" I would put "New Church" into the pipe.
"and Aylsham, the small Norfolk town of Aylsham where" not getting this?
"a farmer.[5][3] " ref order.
"the 12 children" twelve.
"working life in Norwich, from" overlinked.
"Swedenborgian New Church" link this again first time outside the lead.
"painted his uncle.[20][15]" ref order.
"c.1803" space.
"until 1807.[15] In 1806" repetitive.
"exceptional".[15][11] " ref order.
Could link List of mayors of Norwich for lead/body.
"1796-1832" etc in gallery captions should be en-dash.
"c.1813" space.
"Northumberland - August" en-dash.
"Arms public House" why capital H?
Year ranges in refs need to be en-dash not hyphens.
ISBNs should be consistent format.
"Society 1810-2010. London" en-dash.
Any watercolourist categories?
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:45, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: All the above have ben addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 08:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)