# Talk:Natal Native Pioneer Corps

This review is transcluded from Talk:Natal Native Pioneer Corps/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Dumelow (talk · contribs) 21:46, 10 October 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 06:20, 13 October 2025 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


### Comments
"They remained in service for some months after the war ended in July" - I'd suggest adding the year here
Added - Dumelow (talk) 11:32, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
A map would be helpful
Excellent suggestion, added - Dumelow (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
That's a really useful map. Nick-D (talk) 09:29, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
Do we know how were the members of the unit were selected by the chiefs? The article notes that at least some were volunteers - was this true for all of them?
I don't think this is covered by the sources.  I think the Natal administration just told the chiefs to supply "x number" of men at a certain place and time.  How the chiefs selected them was presumably up to them - Dumelow (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
"and were noted to be enthusiastic about their duties" - who noted this?
The source isn't clear (it implies by their British officers), removed - Dumelow (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
"they did not ceasefire" - this should be 'cease fire'
Amended - Dumelow (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
" as other native units were disbanded" - is it necessary to use 'native' in this context given it's generally a word to avoid, except where used in a historical context. Nick-D (talk) 09:54, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
Have clarified by naming the specific units that disbanded (the NNC were also kept on, in the main) - Dumelow (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
These changes look good, and I'm pleased to pass this review. Nick-D (talk) 09:29, 21 October 2025 (UTC)


### Assessment against criteria
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There's a bit of aboidable passive voice in the article, but the quality of writing is high.
Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
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Some of the sources are published by obscure firms, but this is likely unavoidable in this subject area. The firms seem OK. The sources are a mix of contemporary and modern works, which is also unavoidable for these types of articles, and the old sources have been used sparingly.
C. It contains no original research: 

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B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): 

Is it neutral?
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File:Wagons crossing Amatikulu drift on the way to Eshowe.jpg and File:Corduroyroad.jpg would benefit from more formal records at Commons, but are PD.
B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
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