# Talk:Donnie Fatso

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:49, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
"He continued: "Continuing to bite the hand that feeds part of it, Fox broadcasting once again allows its cartoon characters to run wild.", having continued and continuing next to each other looks awkward. Maybe find another word for "continued".
"The scene was later removed from the opening sequence, and was replaced by one reminiscing the film King Kong", clarify this was from "How Munched is That Birdie in the Window?" and mention the helicopter scene remains in Donnie Fatso.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Maybe mention something in the plot that the mafia was attempting to import Belgian guns when Fat Tony found out Homer was an informant and died.
Possibly mention that the football game was on NBC.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
I will place the article on hold to allow for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 01:49, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Should be good now. :) —DAP388 (talk) 21:25, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
I will now pass the article. Dough4872 22:54, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

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It has been a while since this article has been reviewed, so I took a look and noticed lots of uncited statements in the "Cultural references" section. Should this article go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 01:42, 23 November 2025 (UTC)