# Talk:Ge rum i Bröllopsgåln din hund!

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

You do have a good amount of GANs up; here's another review from me! --K. Peake 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you very much! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:59, 24 November 2021 (UTC)


### Lead
What exactly makes the img relevant here?
Contemporary image of just such a scene in Bellman's Stockholm.
Remove comma after the brackets
Done.
Like last time, the best-known and best-loved songs info should not be in the opening sentence; instead, mention that it is Epistle No. 40 them from his 1790 collection
Done.
Add a sentence mentioning the pattern of the verses here
Done.
"with soldiers mixed up" → "where soldiers mixed up"
Done.
The subtitle is not sourced anywhere in the body
Added.
Remove musicologist introduction to James Massengale since this being in the body is sufficient
Done.
Maybe add what writers actually praised about the song and if any of the covers are notable enough, mention them here
Added.


### Context
Pipe King Gustav III to Gustav III on the img text
Done.
[1] should be solely at the end of the sentence
Moved.
"from drinking songs to" → "such as drinking songs and"
Done.
"during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
Done.


### Song
#### Music and verse form
Like last time, add text for the audio sample to comply with WP:NFCCP
Done.
"each of 14 lines." → "each consisting of 14 lines."
Done.
Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
Done.
Img looks good!
Thanks!


#### Lyrics
"the soldiers; the chimney" → "the soldiers. Meanwhile, the chimney" to avoid an overly long sentence, as the voiced parts can be separate from the rest anyway
Split.
Start box looks good!
Noted.


### Reception
Pipe musicologist to Musicology
Done.
"and divisions of the music" → "and divisions of it"
Edited.
"he interjects short" → "Bellman interjects short"
Done.
"at the start and" → "at the start," since this is not the end
Done.
Is the comma supposed to be inside speech marks for "Skyldra"?
Yes.
Thanks for clarifying! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
The word "very" is not needed before beginning
Gone.
Pipe syntactic to Syntax
Done.
Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana on the img text
Done.
"furioso"[11] in which it's" → "furioso",[11] in which it is"
Done.
Start a new sentence at "What Fredman himself"
Done.
"The critic Bo Nordstrand notes" → "Critic Bo Nordstrand notes"
 No, that's way too American. 
Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana
Done.
Start a new sentence at "Like his contemporaries,"
Done.
"and that quote the Bible" → "and draw quotes from the Bible"
Edited.
Pipe book of Psalms to Psalms
Done.
"society chapter rituals and" → "society chapter rituals, and"
Done.
"The Bellman Society describes it as" → "The Bellman Society wrote of the composition," with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
Done.


### Performances and adaptions
The covers need more information than just appearing on albums to remain per WP:SONGCOVER
Removed for now.
If the covers end up lacking notability, then merge the translation with the above section and retitle to Reception and legacy
Done.


### References
Copyvio score looks very good at 26.5%!!!
Thank goodness.
Refs 2 and 8 are duplicates; is this a mistake or are they supposed to be citing separate pages?
Merged.
The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 3 with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
Done.
Add language parameter for refs 10, 12 and 15
Done.
The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 13 and add the language parameter
Done.


### Sources
Good
Noted.


### External links
After the titles of links, add at followed by the website
Done.
Remove the first YouTube link since it is a copyright violation
Gone.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; another relatively quick review! --K. Peake 11:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
I think that's everything done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:45, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
 Pass now, smooth job once again! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)