# Talk:Glenn Robinson III

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Reviewer: Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 03:12, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
I will be reviewing the article. Comments will be posted within 12 hours.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 03:12, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

Lead
"He is the son of 1994 NBA first overall draft pick Glenn Robinson." Try to avoid having wikileaks back-to-back. Maybe something like "He is the son of Glenn Robinson, the 1994 NBA first overall draft pick."
done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:35, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"he committed to Michigan before" -> "he committed to Michigan University before"
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:36, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
" three-star prospect" by whom?
added.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:39, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"he was a five-star top 20 prospect in the national class according to some" should be a comma have five-star. Also, by whom?
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:48, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
" selectors, but did appear in" remove comma
I added a he instead.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Background
"was a first-team All-area selection" what does this mean?
Typically all-area means All-city and surrounding area. Something like All-northwest Indiana.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  04:00, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Oh, ok. Makes sense.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:53, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
"and Indiana State and Rivals.com rated him" -> "and Indiana State, and Rivals.com rated him"
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:52, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"He and Mitch McGary had" who is Mitch McGary?
That sentence and the subsequent one provide context and his name is linked. What more do you want?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:56, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Ah, my bad. I didn't see it was linked.
"By the time McGary committed to Michigan in November 2011, Robinson had moved up to the national number 34 player ranking according to Rivals.com." unsourced
The reference for the subsequent sentence covers it. I don't think we need to put the same reference on two consecutive sentences.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:58, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Fair enough.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:53, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
I'll finish the rest once I get off work today.

I apologize for the delay, but I don't really have a lot of extra time because of the Holidays. I will reply back by the end of the week.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:47, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
Once again, I apologize. I am finishing the review now.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:40, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
Background (part 2)
"Robinson earned MVP honors with 33..." I suggest spelling out Mose Valuable Player (MVP), as people outside the sports world might not know what this means.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:49, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
"Although, he finished as the highest rated Indiana basketball player according to Rivals.com and the Indiana Basketball News state MVP,[26][2] he was not a McDonalds selectee." Is there any reason why he wasn't selected? If not, it's fine.
Basically some selectors thought he was top 20 or top 24 and others did not. I don't know how many McDs selected last year, but he was outside the cutoff at the time of selection.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:51, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
College career
"eight field goals in a November 12 91–54 victory against" the 12 91 part looks weird to me for some reason. I'd try to reword it to something like "eight field goals in a 91–54 victory on November 12"
Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:56, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Personal
"Robinson III's nickname is "Trey".[4][1]" -> "Robinson III's nickname is "Trey".[1][4]"
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  00:58, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Refs
Reference #14 doesn't have a work or publisher
publishr --> publisher.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  01:01, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
External links
"Robinson III at ESPN" and "Robinson III @ CBS Sports" Either change them all to "at" or all to "@".
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  01:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Article looks good; once these are completed I will most likely pass the article.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 20:53, 31 December 2012 (UTC)
OK. Passed. Good work.—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 02:24, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

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