# Talk:John Challen

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:43, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 22:43, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
Didn't even realize I tagged this a week ago, wow. Anyway, here's what I found:

CricketArchive's behind a paywall as well it looks like, so all those should probably be tagged as sub required.
" of schools across the south of England." I'd trim it to "..across southern England" but that's more personal preference than anything.
"Challen scored his team's highest score in" having score right after each other feels a bit odd, i'd reword.
"in the following match; against second-class Devon." rm semicolon
Only a few small things; I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 16:47, 10 March 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review Wizardman. All done. Harrias talk 19:35, 10 March 2018 (UTC)
Looks good, article passes. Wizardman 14:50, 17 March 2018 (UTC)