# Talk:Illbleed

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Moved to talk, this seems to be trivia RJFJR (talk) 03:16, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

The narrator can be heard to stammer and flub his lines in the prologue for Killer Department Store. Listen closely when he says "In his warped mind..."
When playing as Nude Eriko, her clothes will magically reappear in cut-scenes, with the exception of the final scenes.
The large breaker panels in Level 5 have the word "DENGAR" on them.
The prize amounts listed in the Cinema Zone are inconsistent with the amounts that you actually receive. For example, the sign in front of Homerun of Death says you receive $10,000 upon completion, yet you really get $50,000. The numbers are correct in the Japanese version - as if the exchange rate hasn't been applied.
The narration text in the prologue for Woodpuppets doesn't match what the Narrator is saying.
The name of Jimmy Banbollow's team is the Minnesota Fires, but the name on his bat says Minnesota Firers.
Before you enter Level 3, the game will ask, "Do you want to enter WOODPPUPPETS?" with an the extra "P".
The Egg Bar logo on the blackboard near the entrance is spelled "Eeg Bar".

This review is transcluded from Talk:Illbleed/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: TheJoebro64 (talk · contribs) 15:58, 27 March 2023 (UTC)

 
I'll claim this. JOEBRO64 15:58, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
OK here's what I have to say:

I think the gameplay section could benefit from a little restructuring. You mention items a lot before you actually explain what the items are and what purpose they serve. Basically I think the last paragraph needs to be moved earlier than the two bigger ones, perhaps integrated into the first paragraph.
I don't think I mention any items before that final paragraph (after my edits), but I moved it towards the top.
If possible, I'd add a reference for the alternate endings bit in plot. It's not necessary, but alternate endings are the kind of thing that I'd say would benefit from having refs to verify them.
I looked and looked but cannot find a direct source. I edited to make it less like a game guide and found a source about the true ending.
I think you need to clarify that Sega had been involved with and published Blue Stinger since it's otherwise unclear why they'd ask for a sequel.
Likewise, I'd clarify that Blue Stinger and Illbleed were developed for the Dreamcast in development.
Above two done
I've added a {{Clarify}} tag in reception. What were the tropes that critics felt it strayed from?
Clarified. Not so much tropes as just similar gameplay.
GameSpy and GameSpot observed that the game was self-aware of how cheesy it was I think "cheesy" is too informal for an encyclopedia, I'd replace or reword it (I didn't because I wasn't sure if you meant "campy" or "cheap")
Fixed to camp
That's what I've got. Overall a solid article, just needs some tightening up. I did some copyediting I assumed would be uncontroversial as I read. JOEBRO64 16:18, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

@TheJoebro64: Thank you for taking a look TarkusABtalk/contrib 03:13, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
OK looks good, passing JOEBRO64 13:21, 3 April 2023 (UTC)