# Talk:Minimum Foundation Program

Cool Article. My only change might be to putting the current legislation and current development pieces closer to the top of the article, like right after the portion that defines what the MFP is and have the history and specific details about how the program works following.  That way, people can know why they are reading this article / why they should care.

173.253.150.193 (talk) 21:57, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
(This is by Allen BTW. I think I forgot to log in)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.253.150.193 (talk) 21:58, 30 March 2011 (UTC) 
Your writing is very spot on - your grammar and organization is phenomenal. As far as suggestions go I would move your second introductory paragraph, more particularly the information about the 2010-2011 MFP formula, into your section titled Per Student Spending. Also, with this particular topic there are several large dollar amounts and numbers that coincide with various dates - perhaps a simple table added into the page with the year, the MFP formula for that year, and the total money allocated/spent would help make the information a little more user-friendly. 
Also, I am not sure if any discussion of the MFP has occurred in the current Extraordinary Special Session on the budget, but, it might be nice to have a recent developments section that would track what is currently happening to the program with so many budget cuts being tossed around.
Your topic is very interesting and you've truly done a great job researching!
Erinfhymel (talk) 04:26, 31 March 2011 (UTC)

I do not feel well rounded enough to do a read review. Here are my recommendations:
I)Add page numbers to reference 1 (Tulane University, n.d.) for each time you use it as a source
II) There shouldn't be a space between the full stop and the reference tag
III) Get a good friend to look over it for spelling and grammar. (or check out these nice people)
In all its a great article
cheers --In actu (Guerillero) | My Talk 04:26, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

The lede section should not have any references as it shouldn't introduce new information. Rather, it should summarize the entire article. I suggest moving them down and ensuring the lede properly summarizes the article without introducing new information. Basket of Puppies 19:55, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Minimum Foundation Program/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Guerillero | My Talk 03:37, 30 April 2011 (UTC)
Since no one has jumped on this yet I will do the review. --Guerillero | My Talk 03:37, 30 April 2011 (U

The bot says that this article has been on hold for 20 days now, and there appears to have been no activity on the review page for a week.  It looks like nearly everything has been ticked off the list.  While WP:There is no deadline, I'd like to have this wrapped up before long, if that's reasonably possible.  If you need help, please let me know.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 16:33, 20 May 2011 (UTC)

There is a sourcing issue. Two PDFs are used as the backbone sourcing of the article. The issue is that page number aren't used; most citation style require this. After that happens I will pass this --Guerillero | My Talk 19:05, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Technically, the Good article criteria do not require complete/consistent/ideal citations, so I don't think that I would fail an article over a failure to provide page numbers (assuming, importantly, that the absence of page numbers didn't prevent me from figuring out whether the content was actually in the source).  But I agree that it would be preferable to have the page numbers included for any book or pdf that's more than a few pages long, so I hope that someone will add them.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:04, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
per the above discussion I will pass this. Since the nominator appears to not be active I will roll up my sleeves and do some work.  --Guerillero | My Talk 02:53, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

Guerillero--
The only abbreviation I saw other than "MFP" was "SPS," but I changed that one. Do I need to use "Minimum Foundation Program" throughout? Most people in Louisiana refer to it as "MFP," but I'm not sure what Wikipedia protocol is on that.  
The only fragments I saw were part of a list after a colon. Did I miss some? 
Is the lede now enough of a summary? Do I have too many citations in it?
I also didn't see any references that weren't after a full stop. Maybe someone changed them?
I didn't have any files, but I will be adding an explanatory video about the actual math of the formula soon. 
Thanks for the suggestions. 
Emilyhholden (talk) 03:08, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Sorry it has been three days. Umm. It seems that most of my MOS issues were resolved by AWB. Each time you cite either of the PDFs you need to include the page that that fact come from. That is my only major issue cheers. --Guerillero | My Talk 22:55, 8 May 2011 (UTC)

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