# Talk:Justin Suarez

Hey guys, I think this article's references are messed up, I just don't know how to fix them, if any willing contributor wants to help, this is your chance...

I think I've addressed this.  -- Banjeboi 19:10, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Justin Suarez/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Uness232 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 29 May 2021 (UTC)


### Criteria
### Review
Well-written:

Writing this outside the criteria as this just came to my mind, but there are some links that are MOS:OVERLINK, such as  "avoid providing a direct answer", which does not need a link.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uness232 (talk • contribs) 13:22, 30 May 2021 (UTC) 

The use of "sexuality identities" was completely a typo; I've replaced this with "sexuality", in the "Critical response" section. Couldn't find any other instances where this happened. I believe a quote box is the best way to use the actor's entire quote without making the paragraphs too long, so I would rather leave it as-is, if that's okay.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:56, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
I've shortened the sentence in the lead to "Deciding Justin was too young to be sexualized, the show's producers opted to leave his sexual orientation undisclosed for much of the series." In doing so, I've also been able to shorten the lead to three paragraphs instead of four. I've also done some additional shortening and summarizing throughout the article where noticeable.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:56, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
I've removed instances of overlinking that I could find throughout.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:13, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
So, another quick nitpick, is the word "extreme tactics" really appropriate in the 4th paragraph of Creation and casting? You changed it from measures to tactics, which I guess is okay (I think both are okay), but extreme and tactic together does not really sound encyclopedic to me. Uness232 (talk) 18:45, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

Uness232 The best alternative I could think of for here was "great lengths"; let me know if this would suffice.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:34, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research:

Broad in its coverage:

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

Yes, unfortunately free images are hard to come by for this article; I thought about adding a photo of Indelicato's co-star Michael Urie into the "critical response" section since the friendship between their characters was often considered a highlight of the series, but wasn't sure if a photo of an entirely different actor would be considered irrelevant.  I also avoided adding a photo of Indelicato himself in the "creation and casting" section, simply because we already have a photo of the actor as the character in the infobox.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:13, 30 May 2021 (UTC)


#### Result
#### Discussion
Uness232 Thank you very much for your quick review! I've addressed all your comments and am looking forward to your final verdict.--Changedforbetter (talk) 18:15, 30 May 2021 (UTC)