# Talk:Jacob C. White Jr.

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:00, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

" 10 miles from" convert for our metric brothers and sisters.
"... products produced by free negro labor, eschewing products produced ..." 44% of this clause contains "produc"...
"graduated from the ICY on May 6, 1857; the class's lone graduate" why not "was his class's lone graduate from the ICY..; he earned..." (to avoid the repeate of "graduate").
"In 1858, accepted" missing a "he" or "White"...
Not sure a link to a common term such as "chess" is strictly needed.
Could add a thumb of Catto to embellish that portion of the article?
I would still consider de facto to be Latin enough to need italicising.
"the Philadelphia Inquirer " is actually "The Philadelphia Inquirer "
That's about it.  An interesting article and very close in my opinion to already being GA standard, just a few comments above so on hold for now. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:19, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

Response - @The Rambling Man: I think I have now addressed your concerns and recommendations. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thank you.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 02:04, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
Good job, easiest review for a long time! The Rambling Man (talk) 08:22, 17 August 2017 (UTC)

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