# Talk:Hermann Boeschenstein

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Reviewer: PinkElixir (talk · contribs) 14:07, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be completing this review in the next 2-3 days. Kind regards, PinkElixir (talk) 14:07, 4 September 2021 (UTC)


### Response
Thank you very much for the review, PinkElixir! I've tried to follow your suggestions, even if there is now a slight duplication (the 1928 wedding has to be included in the chronology of the early life and emigration, yet also seems to belong to the new Personal Life section). Writing lead sections is one of my weakest spots, I welcome any other suggestions on what to add or drop. —Kusma (talk) 13:07, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
BTW I'm happy with this: was only added for the DYK nomination anyway. —Kusma (talk) 14:04, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Congratulations on your GAN pass! It was a pleasure reading this article and learning more about Boeschenstein. Kind regards, PinkElixir (talk) 17:37, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Thank you! Oddly enough, I was motivated to write this article while doing the GA review for John Adam Rittinger, where I noticed the name for the second time after an encounter with him as advisor of Robert Ludwig Kahn. I was amazed to discover there was so much more to him than just a standard academic career. —Kusma (talk) 18:12, 7 September 2021 (UTC)