# Talk:Jewett House

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:57, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
A well-written article. Only a few comments: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

In lead, I am not sure if we need to link "gender". It could be stated more explicitly that it is a co-ed, as you do later in the article.
"gender" was linked to co-ed anyway; I flipped it around so it now reads "Up to 195 students of any gender or class year may live in Jewett" which I think reads more clearly, and in which "any gender" links to co-ed. (The hesitance to use "co-ed" as a term comes from its historical endorsement of a gender binary which is not terribly in line with what I know of Vassar.)
In History,
a vision for the college, it did not open What is "it" here?
I rewrote that entire sentence which was kind of a mess.
By 2002, Jewett hosted a spectrum of problems including Who enlisted these? You should add who all complained about this.
Mentioned.
In Architecture and features,
 Students' Building (1913) to Jewett's east and Josselyn House (1912) to its west Should the 1912 event not come before the 1913 one?
Sure!
That should be it. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Awesome, thanks for the review Sainsf! I think I've addressed everything...let me know if you have any other tweaks you think should be made! Best, BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 14:30, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
Wow, you have been so quick! I don't see any more troubles with the article. I am really glad to promote this. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:20, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

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