# Talk:Helen Magnus

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Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 15:31, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Never heard of Sanctuary, but my younger self religiously tuned in to SG1 for Amanda Tapping...
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 
Just a few changes needed"The character is over a century and a half old, having been given her advanced longevity from injecting herself with vampire blood." -> should be "by injecting herself""This allowed each member unique abilities." ->  Probably should be "granted each member""By the turn of the 20th century, her research with the abnormal population went into full swing and founded the Sanctuary Network." -> "and she founded...""during which she decided to use the embryo an bear her daughter" -> "use the embryo to bear her daughter""Despite this, Magnus believes her life energy might be in the shield buffer." -> I'm not really sure what this means.
B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
MOS is fine.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 
Citations are grand.
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 
Scope is grand.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Article is neutral.
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Images are used well. One is commons, one is fair-use with a solid rationale.
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Just going to hold this until the 1A fixes are sorted, then it should be ready to pass.
Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I believed I have addressed all the issues. -- Matthew RD 16:26, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
Reviewed the changes, and I'm passing this one. Well done! GRAPPLE X 21:17, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

(I hope I'm entering this correctly.)
Was Helen Magnus really born in 1850?  How about 1950?
Bmwbrucknerfan (talk) 13:22, 19 August 2011 (UTC)

Having read the article during my review, it states she was born in Victorian-era England and has extended her lifespan with vampire blood. She is a fictional character from a fantasy show, after all. GRAPPLE X 15:33, 19 August 2011 (UTC)
That is correct, also she said she is over 157 years old since the show's pilot. -- Matthew RD 17:03, 19 August 2011 (UTC)
From the article: "In the second season her daughter, Ashley was killed off. The producers, as well as the American and Canadian networks to give the character, including Magnus, a deep and most dramatic impact." The second sentence is ill-formed and likely missing a word or two, but I have no idea what was intended. Can anyone correct this, please? 98.207.166.2 98.207.166.2 (talk) 03:27, 29 October 2011 (UTC)

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Seems to be a well written wiki article. With good sourcesRyan2Richardson2 (talk) 00:31, 24 January 2025 (UTC)