# Talk:German torpedo boat T22

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Reviewer: Kges1901 (talk · contribs) 01:50, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
The article is well written and comprehensive. A few comments:

The Type 39s were fitted with a pair of geared steam turbine sets, each driving one propeller, were designed to produce 32,000 shaft horsepower (24,000 kW) using steam from four high-pressure water-tube boilers which were designed to propel the ships at 33.5 knots (62.0 km/h; 38.6 mph). can be written more concisely as "The Type 39s were propelled by a pair of geared steam turbines powered by four high-pressure water-tube boilers, which created 32,000 shp, giving her a maximum speed of 33.5 knots" In its current form the sentence is unnecessarily repetitious and has an extra 'were' in the first part. Kges1901 (talk) 01:50, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
Don't want to get rid of the reference to the number of propeller shafts since that's in the infobox. Broke it in half; see how it reads now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:30, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
That's fixed it. Kges1901 (talk) 14:48, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
r. Anti-aircraft defense was provided by four 3.7 cm (1.5 in) SK C/30 AA guns in two twin-gun mounts on platforms abaft the rear funnel and six 2 cm (0.8 in) C/38 guns in one quadruple mount on the aft superstructure and a pair of single mounts on the bridge wings.  Unnecessary repetition of 'and'
Replaced the first "and" with a comma.
carry 30 mines (or 60 if the weather was good). I am curious as to why weather affected mine capacity.
Had to do, I think, with how low the boat sank in the water when loaded down at the stern. Unlike British destroyer minelayers, the aft armament was not removeable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:30, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
Is the exact launch date not known?
Nope. I think that some records were destroyed when the Soviets occupied the shipyard in '45.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:30, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
escorted the Italian blockade runner, SS Cortellazzo, Could be less awkward as "escorted Italian blockade runner SS Cortellazzo"
Took out the commas.
T22, T23, Kondor and the torpedo boats T2 and T5 All of the ships were torpedo boats, so it is not necessary to state 'and torpedo boats'
Probably
2nd Torpedo Boat Flotilla with T22, T2, T5, T23, and the torpedo boat T18  Ditto - by definition torpedo boat flotillas contain only torpedo boats. Also, what flotilla was T22 with before this point or was the 2nd Torpedo Boat Flotilla her original assignment?
Unknown, sources only occasionally mention composition of the flotillas.
 Now assigned to the 5th Torpedo Boat Flotlla, T22, Kondor, Falke and the torpedo boats Greif and Möwe  Typo and Ditto
This is still outstanding. Kges1901 (talk) 14:48, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
Fixed the typo now. L293D (☎ • ✎) 14:51, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
with torpedoes with complete surprise unnecessary repetition of with
Done by Sturm. L293D (☎ • ✎) 14:53, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
link Münsterland, perhaps mention what exactly her cargo was
If only I knew.
she fired star shell missing word
What exactly was she doing between June and August 1944?
Unknown.
 loss of 143 men Is the number of survivors known? Kges1901 (talk) 01:50, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
Only in the aggregate between all three boats. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:29, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: