# Talk:Hasta la Raíz (song)

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
An alt needs to be provided for the cover image
Stay consistent with your format of the flatlists
Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"


### Lead
#### Paragraph 1
State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."


#### Paragraph 2
Expand this paragraph


### Background
The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
Change 'seven' to 'six' years


### Writing and recording
#### Paragraph 1
Link 'Mexico'
The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses


#### Paragraph 2
The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
Add an author to the Billboard source if available


### Critical and commercial reception
Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception


#### Paragraph 1
Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'


#### Paragraph 2
Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)


### Music video
Try adding a photo of the music video
Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well


### Track listing
Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above


### Credits and personnel
Remove the ';' from each credit
Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens


### References
[6] - Link iTunes store
[8] - Link Discogs
[12] - Link Billboard
[13] - Use a proper n dash
[13] - Link Spotify
[14] - Remove one of the 'Coffee and Saturday' inclusions
[16] - Use a proper n dash
[19] - Use a proper n dash
[20] - Use a proper n dash
[21] - Use a proper n dash
[22] - Use a proper n dash
[27] - Link Sony Music


### End of GA Review:
Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.
Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
Please note, I will be reassessing the article completely, regardless of my previous comments and suggestions; please keep this is mind
Remove the 'caption' area below the 'alt
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Lead
#### Paragraph 1
"attaining success with her previous..." → "attaining success from her previous..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
"with very personal feelings..." → "with personal feelings"
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


#### Paragraph 2
"Upon its release..." → "After its release..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
"received positive reviews from music critics and peaked at number 17... and number five..." → "received positive reviews from music critics. The song was also commercially successful, peaking at number 17... and number five..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
"ranked in the list..." → "on the list..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Background
This first sentence is still extremely long; can you try to condense it?
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Add an apostrophe s after Agustín Lara
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Writing and recording
#### Paragraph 1
"were similar from her previous albums..." → "were too similar compared to her previous albums..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Critical reception
I know I said to say "upon", but "After" would sound better with the current tense
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Commercial reception
"was released as the first promotional single from the..." → "was released as a promotional single from the..."
FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### Track listing
You only include the download for a version called "Canova's Root"; is there a normal download for the album version/single version?
There used to be one, on iTunes, but after the relase of the whole album, the single download is no longer available as a "single". Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)


### End of GA Review:
Overall, a very good article. Most of these comments are regarding tense/grammar. Once fixed, the article will surely pass. Thanks again! Carbrera (talk) 22:40, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks! .Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

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