# Talk:Cool Me Down (Gromee and Inna song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

I will take this on tomorrow! --K. Peake 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
WP:OVERLINK of Gromee under songwriters
It is common practice to link the artist in the infobox if their real name is used, for clarity.
Add "a few" before music critics because only three are noted in this article
""Cool Me Down" lyrically speaks" → "the song lyrically speaks"
The commercial performance sentence should be directly after the above one
"with the single's release, and the song" → "with the song's release, and it"
""Cool Me Down" was a moderate" → "The song was a moderate" and mention the chart it peaked on was the Polish Airplay Top 100


### Background and release
Pipe demo to Demo (music)
The poke fun part is sourced, but where is dissatisfaction mentioned?
"Andrzej Gromala (Gromee)," → "Gromee under his real name of Andrzej Gromala," to be specific
"cover on their social media" → "cover art on their social media accounts"


### Reception and composition
Retitle to Composition and reception, as the Wiwibloggs piece mentioning the genre should come first and commercial reception is already last
"found that "Cool Me Down" had a" → "observed how "Cool Me Down" has a"
"noticed that the song" → "noticed the song"
"Czech Republic and" → "the Czech Republic and"
This may be confusing, but there is not "the" in front of it. It's like that.


### Music video and promotion
Remove "for "Cool Me Down"" after "accompanying music video"
"to the song wearing" → "to the song, wearing"


### Track listing
Good


### Charts
#### Weekly charts
Good


#### Year-end charts
Year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down" → 2021 year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down"


### Release history
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks great at 21.9%!!!
Use the via parameter instead to cite YouTube on refs 11, 12 and 13, adding Polsat as the publisher for #13


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is quite a short article so shouldn't be very long! --K. Peake 08:52, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for your review, I have fixed everything apart where noted. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
@Cartoon network freak: I am glad to see a response before January has ended, but the wikilink under songwriters should be removed since most reading an article about an artist will already know/guess the real name part and even the Czech Republic article uses the term "the" at the start, so add this. --K. Peake 21:18, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake:  Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:06, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, very understanding of you to implement those last changes after my further explanations! --K. Peake 17:02, 1 February 2022 (UTC)