# Talk:Decisions (song)

I have an article for "Decisions" drafted in my sandbox. I ask that it be reviewed/placed in the main article space, as there is certainly enough information available regarding the song to turn it into a Good Article with some more work. WikiRedactor (talk) 00:31, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
WikiRedactor (talk) 00:31, 19 January 2014 (UTC)

 Done by Kww. Jackmcbarn (talk) 01:36, 19 January 2014 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Decisions (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 18:59, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: WikiRedactor (talk)
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 18:59, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with the other FA – Fijación Oral, Vol. 1)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (NFC with a valid FUR) & (Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license)

I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview and to give relative emphasis.
I think the layout needs to be fixed.
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. WikiRedactor, please feel free to strike out any recommendation from this review which you think will not help in improving the article which is our main aim here. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 23:13, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for your review! I was a little hesitant to merge the live performance and parody information into a "Live performance and parody" section because they are so unrelated, although I moved both sections' information into a single paragraph under "Background and composition". If you're not really feeling this arrangement, I'll go ahead and create a separate section. I also added a mention of the live performance in the introduction. If there are any other adjustments you'd like made to the article, I'll be more than happy to make them! WikiRedactor (talk) 23:22, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks!  The article looks perfect now. And to be honest, I wanted exactly this modification but was a bit hesitant to suggest in my review because it involved removal of two sections, so thanks a lot! Thanks, WikiRedactor, very much for your diligence, care and precision in writing such great articles.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 22:57, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 22:57, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

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