# Talk:Ince Blundell Hall

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 17:18, 13 November 2014 (UTC)

Lede
"impressive" is usually a word to avoid but I think it is probably an accurate description.
I agree and thought more than once about this, but as the Parthenon and the Garden Temple are both listed Grade II*, I think it is appropriate. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
I think the info that "it was inspired by the front of Buckingham Palace, London" is worth mentioning in the lede.
The evidence is not really strong enough to include it in the lead.  I have in fact amended the text in the body and put "evidently inspired" in quotes.--Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
History
"but in about 1790–92 built the Garden Temple, a building in Classical style." I think "he" should be added before built here.
Done. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
"A large bay window was added to the west side of the Drawing Room, and a new Dining Room was built at the east end. " -date?
A vague date added (all that I can find) and a citation for the source. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
"Five parachute bombs fell near the hall. " -can you elaborate a bit? -perhaps mention them in relation to certain raids and some dates.
Sorry no info about this, despite another search.  But I have expended the sentence to make it less bare. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
" Following the war the fabric of the hall and the estate deteriorated, and in 1960 it was decided to sell them." -"fabric" I think is a little confusing here, it makes it look as if you mean selling the actual fabric of the hall! You don't mean that now do you?
Reworded, so I hope it now makes sense. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
pipe link to for Archdiocese to Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Liverpool, it's currently a redirect.
Done.  But during a FLC review I was asked to take out the piped links; referring to redirects, the reviewer said that is what they are for! --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Architecture
Give first names of Pollard and Pevsner.
Done. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
"There is also a complete scheme of Crace decoration" -not sure "complete scheme" is best here.
I have removed "complete", although P&P do say "A complete and splendid Crace scheme".  However this drew my attention to an error.  I had said it was in the Library, but it was actually in the Gallery - corrected. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Associated structures
Please refer to each one as The Pantheon or The Garden Temple rather than "this" following on from the header.
Done. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Are there really no photos available for the Pantheon? I'd be particularly interested in seeing a picture of it and I think it would much help the article.
No, very frustrating.  The hall, with its Catholic connections, has always been very secluded (I drive past it frequently, and there is nothing to see from any road).  Being a nursing home, and being used as a convent, it has retained its privacy.  I have found no recent free-to-use depictions of the hall or of the associated buildings, other than the gateways.  --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
As you even link things like busts, perhaps like stuccoed too.
Done. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
"The frieze contains a Latin inscription, which translates as "In this place it is summer and winter all year round", referring to the fact that the building was heated by air from external fireplaces. " Can you give the Latin inscription in italics literally here for reference purposes?
Done, but I have added this as a footnote rather than placing it intrusively in the text. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Delink "marble" in Garden structures per OVERLINK
"Triglyph" in Gates too.
Both done.  Sorry I missed them. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Appraisal
"although Blundell's service block is "a rather plodding Palladian affair". -although "they consider" ?
Done. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
A fine article, excellent work. Easily passable once you've addressed. Thanks.

Many thanks for a prompt and helpful review.  --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 
B. MoS compliance: 
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 
B. Focused: 
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
You're most welcome Peter. A comfortable GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:55, 14 November 2014 (UTC)

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