# Talk:HMS Menace (1915)

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)

Image appropriately licensed
Link launched in the lede
Added link.
but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
Moved.
It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
Amended.
What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
Clarified.
Add the sale date to the infobox
Added.
comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Clarified.
@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)