# Talk:Olaf's Frozen Adventure

Just like Coco this short film was released in Mexico  on October 27, 2017.RubeHM (talk) 00:37, 10 November 2017 (UTC)

Hi! I just ran the tool for the page. The link it caught was a YouTube URL, which I misunderstood as WP:C-P violation, as it was totally copied from Wikipedia. Though still, I changed some prose.
However, the premise added here totally violates C-P, as it is shown in the tool. It could be re-worded here. Thanks! M. Billoo 18:22, 23 November 2017 (UTC)

(duplicate of entire article removed)
 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. –Skywatcher68 (talk) 20:35, 20 September 2018 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Olaf's Frozen Adventure/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:39, 22 July 2021 (UTC)

"who praised for its" → "who praised it for its"
#Plot is 296 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
"Olaf and Sven decides" → "Olaf and Sven decide"
Add a serial comma between "Christmas, Hanukkah and Winter solstice".
"a television special, to be aired on ABC, produced by Roy Conli, and directed by Kevin Deters and Stevie Wermers" – reword
"limited time theatrical release" → "limited theatrical release"
"the story follows Olaf as he tries to find the best holiday traditions for Anna, Elsa, and Kristoff" — is a summary needed?
 – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
 Done. Pamzeis (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
Resolve the "" tag.
Add a hyphen between "limited time" in #Release.
Remove the links to Pixar and Coco in #Release (WP:OVERLINK).
"apologies, and removed the short from exhibition" → "apologies and removed the short from the exhibition"
"It was viewed 5.64 million times." → "It was viewed by an estimated 5.64 million people in the United States."
The Rotten Tomatoes score is wrong (actually 7 reviews, not 10; 5.1 average, not 5.12).
"betteroff" → "better off"
"contributions on the project" → "contributions to the project"
"incoperated" → "incorporated"
"as Tesco-exclusive" → "as a Tesco-exclusive"
"the United Kingdom December 7, 2017" → "the United Kingdom on December 7, 2017"
Metro has been found to be an unreliable source.
Update the British Board of Film Classification link.
Sources are archived. 
#12 should be properly cited.
Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
Is LaughingPlace reliable?
Those are my notes. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:23, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done. Wingwatchers (talk) 21:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)