# Talk:HMS Tribune (1918)

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:00, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
I will get to this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 10:00, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
Apologies for the delay in coming back to this, comments as follows:
Design and development

one of thirty-three Admiralty S class destroyers...: is the Admiralty supposed to be there? In the lead only S class is used.
Removed.
The converted p.p length doesn't quite match what is in the infobox, ditto the speed figures
Made consistent.
Should shp be linked/converted in the infobox?
Linked and converted.
The sentence that starts The ship was designed to mount two 18-inch... is quite long with a lot of commas. It could be broken up.
Split in two.
Construction and career

On 21 September 1923, Tribune was recommissioned...: there is no mention of being decommissioned?
Amended.
Other stuff

Image tags OK
dupe links: long tons
That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 09:40, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

@Zawed: Thank you for this review. I believe I have completed the changes. simongraham (talk) 02:53, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
Yes, the changes look fine. I am going to pass this as GA as I believe that it meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:23, 2 August 2022 (UTC)