# Talk:Hatzegopteryx

the link to the pterosaur database is broken. Kjaer (talk) 21:25, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Removed (went to pdf format, but page was pretty much redundant with this article). J. Spencer (talk) 17:11, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Mark Witton apparently did some work last Thursday that suggests Hatzegopteryx isn't as big as it's made out, and the old measurement is do to not noticing warping in the bone.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.25.101.88 (talk) 14:07, 4 June 2009 (UTC) 

Interesting! Will wait for Witton to publish on it though obviously before including that here. Dinoguy2 (talk) 17:00, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
He has published :o).--MWAK (talk) 19:58, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Where? MMartyniuk (talk) 00:11, 26 September 2010 (UTC)

Dracula is Romanian for "little Dragon"... now we know who the big dragon was.... ^ ^
--94.68.219.64 (talk) 13:52, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

"son of the Dragon" actually - per many linguist friends and sources on Vlad ..... 98.67.182.102 (talk) 22:27, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
Why hasn't Quetzalcoatlus been properly described?

Good question! The institution seems to be sitting on the material and not letting outside parties examine it. MMartyniuk (talk) 13:51, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
No wonder all these pterosaur specimens have compression damage ;o).--MWAK (talk) 19:32, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

Mark Witton has recently published a paper that suggests Hatzegopteryx was actually considerably different in anatomy from Quetzalcoatlus northropi, most notably it was heavier and more robustly built than its western relative, should we update the article to reflect this new knowledge? --24.36.139.110 (talk) 00:25, 30 November 2013 (UTC)

Read this on his blog but didn't know it had actually been published, what is the citation? MMartyniuk (talk) 11:36, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
Maybe it hasn't been published, I was just under the impression that it had. But if not, then maybe we should wait until it is. --24.36.139.110 (talk) 05:37, 1 December 2013 (UTC)

There is an abstract for SVPCA 2015[1] that suggest it was short-necked... FunkMonk (talk) 00:53, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Spinosaurus syndrome strikes again. Restoring all fragmentary species after well-known relatives may be the scientific, conservative thing to do, but doesn't make those restorations less likely to be completely wrong. People tend to get the impression that all species n an extinct "family" look pretty samey because of this. Also why it's probably better to refrain from using restorations of fragmentary species. Doing so gives a false impression of our knowledge of morphological diversity and can only make that diversity look lower than it really is. Dinoguy2 (talk) 08:29, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
Cases like this makes me wonder, has there ever been a restoration of a fragmentarily known animal that turned out to be pretty accurate once more remains were found? FunkMonk (talk) 22:12, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

A lot busier lately, but I'd really like to fix up this article. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 17:13, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

Cool, and PeerJ means free images, which is always nice. By the way, I think this photo of a model[2] was removed because it did not conform to the new, short-necked interpretation when it was first implied, but it doesn't really look much different from Witton's new restorations? FunkMonk (talk) 17:42, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
Indeed. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 20:29, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
Just putting down some TODOs for myself: add discussion of bending strength under paleobiology, reformat all citations. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 20:29, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
Article is all text and no images near the middle.... contributions would be appreciated. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 01:57, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

I was thinking this map[3] could maybe be used? The Hatzegopteryx is of course outdated, but it should be easy to put the new silhouette in instead, or by just shortening the neck. And yeah, I now see that the neck on that model was too thin too, and the nostril should probably be at the front of the nares... FunkMonk (talk) 09:03, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
I've put down a map of Sebes (from the Eurazhdarcho description) for now, but the azhdarchid map would definitely be more attractive. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 17:20, 19 January 2017 (UTC)
I've now replaced the old silhouette in the map with the new one. FunkMonk (talk) 13:40, 21 January 2017 (UTC)
Much appreciated; replaced. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 23:46, 21 January 2017 (UTC)
Mark Witton has a blog post with some circumstantial info, for example when the first specimens were announced[4], which is not mentioned here. Perhaps it could be sourced to one of the papers? If not, a blog post by a co-author of a relevant paper would be fine. Also, the intro here seems too short. FunkMonk (talk) 10:34, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
Good points to both. I'll have to do some work on that. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 18:16, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hatzegopteryx/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Tisquesusa (talk · contribs) 06:15, 26 January 2017 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: 
Some small improvements done on the prose; avoiding repetitive words using synonyms
B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: 
Well-structured, moved the etymology to a separate section with the naming to first chapter
Is it verifiable with no original research?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: 
Good list of verifiable references, nicely linked to abstracts and full papers available online
B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines: 
Complete, reliable sources from different journals
C. It contains no original research: 
All ok
D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: 
Text is written by the author, no literal copies from the refs
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: 
Complete in description/paleobiology, paleoecology and taxonomy
B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): 
Very concise, well summarised
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: 
All good
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: 
No problems
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 
Good images of appropriate status
B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 
Images expanded in size, mainly to highlight better what can be seen in them without the need to open them, added some for clarity about the paleo-environment of the late Maastrichtian southern Europe
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Well-written complete, well-sourced with accessible online references, which is a big plus for an article and a GA in particular. Nice article about an interesting situation; a pterosaur as top predator in a small terrestrial environment in present-day SE Europe. Well done.


### Review
Under review, Tisquesusa (talk) 06:15, 26 January 2017 (UTC)

You there, Tisquesusa? FunkMonk (talk) 19:45, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
Ah, I had forgotten that I nominated this article... Lythronaxargestes (talk) 20:09, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
Yeah, shouldn't really take this long for a review to begin, which is why I dropped by... FunkMonk (talk) 20:23, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the notification, review done, some edits made to the article, nice one; passed. When you have more of these paleontological articles to review, give me a shout, cheers, Tisquesusa (talk) 16:36, 13 February 2017 (UTC)
FunkMonk, any thoughts on the revisions? I'm personally a bit concerned about the skull comparison and old life reconstruction that have been added, because they do not seem very accurate. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 17:48, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, I think those changes are outside the scope of a GA review. Such major layout changes should ideally be suggested at the review page for discussion, not be implemented by the reviewer. That's what the reviews are for, discussion of changes, not simply passing without any correspondence. And there's of course a reason why those images weren't used, they're not accurate according to the latest sources. FunkMonk (talk) 17:53, 13 February 2017 (UTC)
FunkMonk, Lythronaxargestes, if you think any changes or images are inaccurate or otherwise don't belong, then by all means remove them, and start a discussion on the talk page outside of this review. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:38, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

I've gone ahead and made a few minor modifications of my own:

Merge "Discovery and naming" and "Etymology". This seems to be pretty standard.
Specified that the "Teacup" azhdarchid is explicitly an azhdarchid. It's perhaps a bit repetitive, but I do not see an alternate way to phrase it that wouldn't make it more confusing.
Restructured lead slightly by merging the last two short paragraphs, and removing a few details that I don't think would be of particular interest to a non-technical audience (e.g. the Tisia-Dacia block).
One change that I'd like to get approval on before I do it is the moving of the "Discovery and naming" after the "Description". This seems to be quite inconsistent across various paleontology articles, but so far my two GAs have both had the "Description" first. I've tried to write the sections so that they don't rely on each other specifically. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 19:59, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

When I started writing dinosaur articles, all the prior featured dinosaur articles had the description section first, so I followed this. Pterosaurs aren't dinosaurs, but there are no featured pterosaur articles, and only one GA (Pteranodon, which has description first), so it would make sense to follow those precedents. FunkMonk (talk) 20:12, 13 February 2017 (UTC)
I see. Well, sections moved. Lythronaxargestes (talk) 23:40, 13 February 2017 (UTC)