# Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2005

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:13, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

"Its best placing was fifth" to "Its best performance was a fifth-place finish"?
I tried it for a second, but calling it a performance in this type of article made it seem like I was talking about the "best performance" of a specific song, not performance in terms of success. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
"and the prior year" to "and the previous year" maybe
"broadcaster has used internal selections" to "broadcaster had used internal selections"
"For this year" to "In 2004"
"Christoforou previously represented" had
With word of Christoforou's selection Alongside
"broadcast on RIK 1, RIK Sat as well as online via cybc.cy" to "broadcast on RIK 1 and RIK Sat, as well as online via cybc.cy"
"contained English translation" to "contained an English translation of the show"
"Sokratis Soumelas (EMI Greece)" EMI Greece is his company, not a profession like you've included for the others
Somewhat clarified this. Sort of bound by the source. I don't know what he did at EMI. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
"points from 1–8, 10 and 12 to the" to "1–8, 10, or 12 points to the"
"both evenings of the contest" to "both rounds of the contest"
Refs seem generally reliable; will spot-check later.
Images are fine. AryKun (talk) 16:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

@AryKun: I've taken a look at your initial comments and made some changes! Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

Okay, did some spot-checks, will pass now. AryKun (talk) 06:33, 12 March 2024 (UTC)