# Talk:Gisa (bishop of Wells)

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Happy to offer a review. Josh Milburn (talk) 20:54, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

I think readers would appreciate a caption to the image; what are we looking at, here?
Done. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Is "chaplain" worth a wikilink? "Anglo-Saxon"? "canons"? I certainly know what they are, but perhaps others wouldn't.
I didn't link chaplain, but did canons. Anglo-Saxon is gone per below. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Was Edward the Confessor the last Anglo-Saxon king? You call Harold Godwinson a king further down the article
removed the "last Anglo-Saxon" king bit - technically ... Harold's probably Danish and Anglo-Saxon, but Edward was Norman and Anglo-Saxon, so... Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Does your link to St Trond go where you expect it to?
Fixed. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
"who successive" Should that be whom?
Changed, although I'm taking your word for it. We don't use "whom" much on this side of the pond. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
"addressed to Abbot Æthelnoth of Glastonbury, the sheriff of Somerset, and the thegns of Somerset" Some links would be helpful, I think
Done - although we don't have an article on Aethlnoth, so I've linked to the list of abbots. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
"Giso asserted his authority over the abbots of Muchelney and Athelney, but failed to do the same to Thurstan, Abbot of Glastonbury" Is to the right word here?
Went with "but failed to uphold the same claim in regards to Thurstan, Abbot of Glastonbury" Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Is there a particular reason you don't cite the Keynes piece? Have you been able to access it? I think the citation could be a little fuller.
I've seen it, and it doesn't add anything that isn't already in the article, as I recall. The volume its in is already packed up for the move, unfortunately. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Category:People from Lorraine (duchy)? Maybe also a more specific one.
I really don't bother with categories, honestly. I'll add this one, but I always end up leaving categories to the people who specialize in them. Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
Hope this is helpful. Please check my edits. Josh Milburn (talk) 21:20, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Monday and Tuesday are hubby's off work days, so will get to this probably Wednesday. (It is possible I might get to it before but...) Ealdgyth - Talk 13:28, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
And it turns out he had a much smaller list to do than I was expecting... Ealdgyth - Talk 15:57, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
No further comments; happy to promote. Josh Milburn (talk) 21:31, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
Actually, sorry, one last thing: Shouldn't the title be "Gisa (Bishop of Wells)"? Josh Milburn (talk) 21:33, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
It was. But we have people who insist that we do not capitalize the B in bishop. I gave up arguing about it a while back... not worth the stress. Some MOS thing or something... and we all know how well you do trying to say MOS is just a guideline... Ealdgyth - Talk 22:46, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
See this diff Ealdgyth - Talk 22:48, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
Bizarre. Oh well... I'm happy enough to promote. Josh Milburn (talk) 00:19, 10 May 2017 (UTC)