# Talk:German destroyer Z26

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:41, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 16:41, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

One dupe link
I don't think "breakout" can be used as a verb - I'd split it
You might mention that the sortie in September 1941 was of the temporary Baltic Fleet, centered on Tirpitz
Nice work. Parsecboy (talk) 13:25, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Fixed these. I reworked the bit about the Baltic Fleet in Z27; if you like that phrasing, I'll copy it over to the others.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:34, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Yeah, that looks good to me. Parsecboy (talk) 21:04, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Alright, I think everything is in order. Happy to promote. Parsecboy (talk) 13:15, 8 March 2018 (UTC)