# Talk:Final Symphony II

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Reviewer: Judgesurreal777 (talk · contribs) 02:20, 12 December 2016 (UTC)


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I believe IOU a review, so here is one incoming! I'll be filling it out in the next little bit. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 02:20, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

A fantastic read! Let's give it seven days, let me know if you need more time or have questions about my feedback. Great job @PresN:! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 03:46, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

1a) Changed the one sentence, and clarified a few points that indicated June was the end- that's just the latest concert, and no more have been announced, but they almost certainly will announce some more in a few months for 2017 so it's not "over".
1b) Eh, the first paragraph is 7 sentences, so chopping it up would leave it a bit awkward
2b) JPGames.de: interview, large, active site (dozens of articles a day, numerous interviews), has an editorial team; Cubed3: has an editorial staff, incorporated, numerous interviews; Cubed Gamers: online site of an actual magazine (multiple issues produced), has an editor; Side One: interview, linked from the official Merregnon site here; XOTV: interview, recently defunct online magazine run by Baronet Entertainment as one of their multiple properties
3a) Sample added, good idea
5) Frankly, if the other Merregnon Studios concert articles are any guide, I'll be lucky if there's any editing by anyone else at all!
@Judgesurreal777: Alright, all sorted! --PresN 04:11, 13 December 2016 (UTC)
@PresN:, agreed, all sorted, so GA! Keep up the good work :) Judgesurreal777 (talk) 11:50, 13 December 2016 (UTC)