# Talk:Into the Unknown: Making Frozen 2

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:45, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Why is the "starring" part of the infobox purposely written to be empty?
Improve the main image's non-free use rationale.
"included" → "includes" (MOS:TENSE)
"shortly after the platform's launch" – specify per WP:LEAD
"Local crew" → "The local crew"
"filming crew were" → "filming crew was" (American English)
"dialogue and singing was" → "dialogue and singing were"
Add a serial comma after "storyboards".
"The cast come" → "The cast comes"
Add a serial comma after "Josh Gad as Olaf".
"lengthy hours" → "long hours"
Add a serial comma between "Bobby, Kristen and Jennifer".
"The crew discuss" → "The crew discusses"
Add a serial comma between "Norway, Finland and Iceland".
"Animation supervisor on Anna Hyun Min Lee" - reword
 Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
Add a hyphen between "half finished".
 Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
"which approaches" → "that approaches"
"decorated by" → "decorated with"
"the crew arrive" → "the crew arrives"
Add a serial comma between "Buck, Unten and Walters".
"afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
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Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:44, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done Wingwatchers (talk) 18:59, 18 July 2021 (UTC)