# Talk:Michael Coulson (footballer)

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 14:13, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
General

No issues with imaging
No problems with sourcing
For all the BBC sources, BBC Sport is the 'work', BBC is the 'publisher'.
Not sure I see why? Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
From my understanding, the BBC are the publishers, because they 'publish' and host the content, BBC News or BBC Sport, are the 'work' -- their division worked on the articles. It's a de facto I think, and this isn't a big requirement in GA reviews, though it is something that may come up at WP:FAC or WP:PR should you want to take it there. Either way happy to pass this. --Lemonade51 (talk) 19:04, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Great, thanks! Mattythewhite (talk) 19:12, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Club career

16 year old should be all hyphenated
Done. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
"Scarborough on 5 April", 5 April 2012? 2005? Per WP:CONSISTENCY and WP:STO, you should add the years to all dates with a month and date.
Usually use a rule of thumb of omitting the year after its first instance, but have added them on your recommendation. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
"Manager Andy Ritchie described him...", as you have introduced the manager's full name in the first paragraph, it is fine to use his last name thereafter per WP:MOS.
Done. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
"6 January 2007 to make the score 1–1" → "6 January 2007, making the score 1-1."
Done. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
"Manager Simon Davey claimed" → "Manager Simon Davey commented"
Done. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
"However, these were later removed from the records after Chester were expelled from the Football Conference", on what grounds?
Have expanded on this with a new reference. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Personal life

I'm guessing it would be difficult to find any details about family life, presumably because he hasn't given out any interviews?
Have had a search for more details but haven't had any luck. Mattythewhite (talk) 18:34, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Otherwise very short and readable article, well sourced. Happy to pass this providing corrections are made within seven days. On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 14:13, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

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