# Talk:Grigory Potemkin

Nearly all the anecdotes related of him by Helbig, in the biography contributed by him to the journal Minerva (1797-1800), and freely utilized by later biographers, are absolutely worthless.
Well I'm not a historian, but I would assume that it would be necessary to provide some corroboration for such sweeping statements?
--rquinn 06:46, Jun 15, 2005 (UTC)

Dealt with substantially better in the new article, I feel. - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 19:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

There have recently been letters found that prove that Catherine Ii and Potemkin were married. I'll try to find a website that supports this.

Simon Sebag Montefiore's biography of Potemkin discusses this. AllenHansen (talk) 02:27, 11 January 2008 (UTC)
Discussed in the new article. - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 19:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

disagree with this assesment of Potemkin. He was concerned about well-being of his soldiers to the end of his life, and was visibly moved by the masacres that took place, in Ochakov. See Potemkin by Montefiore page 413. He was champion of the Russian and foreigh Jews. They were under his protection during his reign.)

He encouraged them to settle in places like Odessa. AllenHansen (talk) 02:26, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

The Romanization of Потёмкин in this article disregards Wikipedia's own policies on the transliteration of Russian. If I understand correctly, the name should be transliterated as "Potyomkin". If an exception should be made for this proper name, in consideration of the widespread use in existing literature of the form "Potemkin", I would respectfully suggest the placement of a diaeresis on top of the "e", as in "Potëmkin".

I agree, up till the insertion of the diaeresis.  That would have no meaning to a non-Russian speaker, and would probably be interpreted like a German umlaut, rendering it something like "Patermkin".  Better not to mislead people.  Seems "Potemkin" is predominant in the literature, although "Potyomkin" is occasionally found.  If we are making an exception here on that basis, then the diaresis-free spelling that's actually widely used should prevail.  The pronunciation note (Patyomkin) is effective.  --  JackofOz (talk) 21:36, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
I've changed it to straight off Potemkin, per sources. - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 19:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Hey all. I just thought I'd make a note that this article is one of my WP:Wikicup targets for this year. I have, in my possession, the Montefiore biography, which I am first going to go through meticulously to expand the article to a decent length. Montefiore himself regards Potyomkin in a positive light, but his factual analysis seems sound and he often distinguishes between corroborated fact and possible myth. The next stage will be to layer in another book in my possession (a biography of Catherine the Great). After that, I will finish off with what I can glean from Google-Books sources, before putting it through a GA.
That much is certain. In later rounds, when I have more time, it would also be nice to get the article to featured status. But that's a little way off. In the meantime and beyond, any help with the article - if only copyediting and flagging up dubious/misleading sentences - would be much appreciated. Regards and a Happy New Year, - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 12:13, 1 January 2011 (UTC)

Nominating for GA. - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 19:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Upon reflection, my outstanding concern about this article is subheadings. They identify important elements of his life in general rather than summarizing their contents. There are also no subheadings, which would help. 

Lfstevens (talk) 16:41, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
Could you elaborate? I certainly wouldn't be opposed to adding some more level-4 headings, but I'm happy with the present level 2s and 3s. - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 18:44, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

I'm interested in this, though I have a few other things on at the moment. I'll pop back when I have more time, and if it's still untaken, then I'll do the review. SilkTork *YES! 01:32, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

Got it, SilkTork. Hope you don't mind. Jarry asked me, and I've got the time, today, as it happens. Would love you to comment in the GAR though.  Chzz  ►  14:37, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Grigory Potemkin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer:  Chzz  ►  14:36, 26 February 2011 (UTC)


### Progress notes
Links valid (checklinks)
Quickfail check;
Has reliable sources 
WP:NPOV
No cleanup banners/excess tags 
No recent edit wars 
Not a current event 


### Concerns
Note to Jarry: Before you look at other things, please review the edits made by Greyhood (talk · contribs) today - I think they reviewed it for Wikipedia:WikiProject Russia/History of Russia task force, and xe made some edits.
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Please mark {{done}} if fixed, or explain why it doesn't need fixing;

Disambiguation links;  Done
White Eagle
plague
Joseph II
If possible, please add alt text for images (including the infobox image). This is not a GA requirement, but it is a nice thing, and easy enough
Add cite tag to the film.com ref? (just for consistency) Not done
known almost universally in English as Potemkin or Potyomkin - a) "Potyomkin" is not mentioned elsewhere (and the lede summarizes the rest), but b) probably that part - the "Potyomkin" - could be left out of the lede anyway, and put into the body-text. The 'names' stuff is a bit wordy, for the lede. If he's mostly known as "Potemkin" in English, that'll do; I don't think the other variant is needed in lede  Done, kind of - I made it less wordy, and hence a less offensive addition.
(October 11 - no closing bracket  Done
[O.S. September 30] 1739[nb 1] - is all this really necessary in the lede? can it be shifted, all this detail, into body - to keep the lede "cleaner"? Same for October 16 [O.S. October 5] 1791 - how about if there was just one [nb] thing, on the date, and the alternative-format dates were in body? ie, lede would become just ...October 11 1739 in Chizhovo, Russian Empire – October 16 1791,[nb 1] - and, actually, maybe re-order that to move the "in Chizhovo, Russian Empire " part outside the span of date - that'd be clearer.  Not done
commander in Russia's war with Turkey of 1768 to 1774 - I think, possibly, it is clearer to say commander in the Russo-Turkish War of 1768–1774?  Done
Catherine's lover, favorite and possibly her husband and consort - "consort" means spouse, so this is tautalogical (ie "husband and spouse" == "husband and husband") - remove one or the other  Done
Gavrila Derzhavin (and the other one) is mentioned in lede but not in the body  Done
"Let the thunder of victory sound!." needs quotes, I think, not italics? (please check)  Done
Nikolayev (Mykolayiv) - do we need the alt name? I think a piped link would be fine  Done
associated with the "Potemkin village" - should that be plural, ie associated with "Potemkin villages"?  Not done
based on a largely fictional tale about a practice of constructing building façades to mimic proper villages better, based on the largely fictional tale about the practice of constructing building façades to mimic real villages (I think. Or you can otherwise improve the sentence)  Done attempted rewrite
known for his love to women should be love of women...  Done
many magnificent buildings can you think of another word, other than "magnificent"? It's just that, coupled with "many", it all sounds a bit POVvy, if you know what I mean. Done I went with "historically significant", which I feel is uncontroversial here
Potemkin's name was given to the Battleship Potemkin can you rephrase to avoid the repetition?  Done a little bit, might need more
(skipped to 'legacy' here, and spotted...) link on "greatest film of all time" seems unnecessary?
Section name "Catherine II's lover" would that perhaps be better as "Lover of Catherine II"?  Done Favorite of Catherine II
(back up to bio) quoted in Soloveytchik's Potemkin, p. 40. - can that be referenced (footnote) to the book, with details of the book?  Not done Already in bibliography. Is a footnote really justified? I'm tempted to suggest not, but it's not a biggie.
Grigory became the centre of attention, his father's only son among six children and heir to the village. - grammar allows for potential misreading as "Grigory [was] his father's only son / among six children and heir to the village" ie he was amongst six kids and an heir - try to rephrase to fix  Done
I think "gymnasium school" would be better as "gymnasium school" to make it clearer the wikilink is about these schools - because it currently looks like it'd be a link to info on gyms in general (and thus I'd have not bothered looking at it)  Done
placed him in the Horse Guards, an elite regiment. maybe better placed him in the elite Horse Guards regiment. ?  Done
one of the first students to enroll at the University proper - not quite clear on why we're mentioning 'University proper' - maybe you can elaborate / clarify? Footnote if necessary e.g. nb -> Another student had enrolled in XXX which was not an official part of the University  -or whatever the reason is  Done See new text for explanation of what I meant here
equivalent to that of the poorer gentry maybe remove 'the' ?  Not done I prefer the "the" for keeping the sense I intend. Open to complete rewording, naturally.
Potemkin's horse then (appeared to) refuse to leave her side for several minutes before he finally returned to the ranks - "he" is a little bit ambiguous, because it is unusual to use "he" for a horse. How about, before returning to the ranks (and losing the "finally" because it doesn't really add anything)?  Done sort of, a fudge. May need revising.
and her influence got him promoted - can this be improved, for grammar?  Done
promoted him again to Kammerjunker - does that really need cap K?  Not done It's a German noun left untranslated or absorbed into English. Dubious, I guess.
Confidence shattered, he withdrew from court - needs to begin "His confidence shattered," I think  Done
Though Orlov was replaced as her favourite, it was not Potemkin who benefited but another Horse-Guardsman, one Alexander Vassilchikov. clumsy sentence; try to refactor  Done


#### Arbritrary break at Catherine II's lover
rebel army thirty thousand strong -> 30,000 WP:MOSNUM  Not done Deliberately vauge, pretty sure that's covered under MOS.
His "uncouth" behavior are these Scare quotes necessary? {{done} No.
The frequent epistles the pair sent wikilink or wikt for 'epistle'?  Done Somebody changed that from plain old "letter". I've changed it back so as to not confuse readers.
he was appointed: Governor I don't think the colon is necessary  Done
Whether Catherine and Potemkin married is only "almost certain" maybe remove 'only', and then remove *In any case,  from the next sentence  Done reworded
1775, 1784 and 1791 have all been suggested as possible nuptial dates rephrase to avoid starting sentence with a digit ("The years 1775..." or something)  Done implicitly in above
Also re. above 2 sentences - please add an explicit ref to the end of them; I assume they're covered by ref 34, but that isn't entirely clear and they're quite bold claims  Done Well, added to the second sentence.
On January 1, 1775 - in other cases (e.g. DoB) you've used the format "1 January" - it needs to be consistent throughout  Done
An Anglophile - I don't think needs a capital A  Done
Kingdom of Georgia accepted Russian protection a few days later; the Kingdoms of Persia and Armenia initially looked - are there appropriate wiki-links for K of P. and Armenia?  (I realise 'persia' redir to 'iran' was wiki-linked at the start of the para; but maybe there is some article/section explaining what the Kingdom of Persia was?  Done had a go at it.
with fifty or more clerks -> 50  Not done
I'm not sure "Builder" is an appropriate section heading...he was more..."Founder of cities?" or something  Done reverted to city builder. Sure it was that originally - might get complaints.
Akhtiar, annexed with the Crimea: it became Sevastopol. -> Akhtiar, annexed with the Crimea, which later became Sevastopol. ? maybe?  Done
grandest failure - a bit of an oxymoron? maybe just 'biggest failure' or something  Done
Potemkin's most successful city  please add a ref at end of the sentence (it's a bold claim)  Done
diverted from Australia the wikilink to 'transport' doesn't make sense  Done
Certainly, Potemkin had arranged for Catherine to see the best he had to offer (naturally organising numerous exotic excursions) I don't like the POV - 'certainly' and 'naturally' and 'numerous' - rephrase?  Not done
General Alexander Suvorov won an important victory at Kinburn in early October; further attack by Ottoman forces was now impossible before spring. - are those two things linked? If so, put ...which meant... or something. If not, split to 2 sentences  Done
General comment: check numbers as words, per MOS, throughout the document. WP:MOSNUM. They might be acceptable; needs checking  Not done
national anthem, Let the thunder of victory sound!. quotes/italics? (as earlier)  Done earlier
Potemkin was indubitably vain and a great lover of jewelry I suggest removing links of 'vain' and 'jewelry' (common terms) and also suggest remove "indubitably" for POV / not adding to the meaning  Done
(a taste he was only hit-and-miss in paying for), bad grammar. Rephrase.  Done
He only agreed to be painted twice suggest beING, to avoid the idea he was covered in paint twice  Done reworded
his Anglophilia capital A not needed?  Done
described the French revolutionaries as "a pack of madmen") quote needs a reference  Done
sentence beginning Criticisms include "laziness has quotes, needs a ref at the end  Done
Not a military genius, he was "seriously able". is not a complete sentence  Done Adjusted
"worthless and dangerous character". quote, needs a ref  Done
As a result, the name of the giant... maybe remove "As a result, " - not really needed  Done


#### Arb break 2
Needs PERSONDATA Template:Persondata
Book references - please specify the language if not English  Done
For book by "Łojek, Jerzy" please change to ISBN13 for consistency  Done
Infobox Wife Catherine II of Russia (possible) - I don't like (possible) - I'd rather see a footnote  Not done Needs to be stressed immediately. Might there be a third way?
Infobox Born 	11 October 1739(1739-10-11) (N.S.) - add the link to NB1  Done


### Comments
I've fixed a number of NPOV issues in the article, and I think it passes by this criterion in the present state. The issues mostly included the statement of fictional character of the Potemkin Village story, and the usage of dubious claims by Polish underground opposition historian Jerzy Łojek, contradicting both Montefiore and Russian sources. GreyHood Talk 17:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)


### Conclusions
1. Well-written:

(a) the prose is clear and the spelling and grammar are correct
After the changes noted above, and other work on the grammar, I think it generally reads well now. Scope for future improvement to prose, but points are clear, spelling and grammar checked.
(b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.
Checked and edited for MOS; good clear lede, logical layout, POV queries have been addressed.
2. Factually accurate and verifiable:

(a) it provides references to all sources of information, and at minimum contains a section dedicated to the attribution of those sources in accordance with the guide to layout;
Refs all check out; citations include sufficient details and are consistent.
(b) at minimum, it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons
Well referenced with RS. Balanced and neutral, multiple sources as much as possible (although accepting there are few good sources; some older works are now directly challenged in Montefiore).
(c) it contains no original research.

Does not contain OR; book refs accepted in good faith
3. Broad in its coverage:

(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;
Life and achievements are treated with reasonable balance; does not overly concentrate on any areas. Seems to have comprehensive outline of of lifespan, and appropriate coverage of death/legacy.
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
Good level of detail
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias.

Several edits during the GA process have corrected problems with non-neutral phrasing; now appears to present facts in appropriate tone.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day-to-day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Check; no edit-warring
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images:

(a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content
No fair-use images used; all images have appropriate licencing
(b) images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
All in sensible places and appropriate captions

This article has passed the GA review process, and I will promote it to GA status  Chzz  ►  23:47, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

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I thought this to be an unusual name and when I googled it, all hits came back to Wikipedia. I do not have access to the printed book to which it is sourced, but to me it looks like possible vandalism. It's use can be found in the Courtier and general section. --SVTCobra 21:27, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

I have isolated the addition of this alleged flank to this edit from 2018. --SVTCobra 21:42, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
It's been a couple of weeks now. Is this page on the watch list of any current editors? --SVTCobra 19:15, 14 October 2020 (UTC)
I literally joined wikipedia today because this seemed so odd to me. After doing some digging, I am certain this is vandalism. The source is from a game called Guilty Gear, whose character Potemkin appears to have an ability that makes him should something that sounds like "Megufistu". The subreddit is full of people saying similar things. I feel very confident that this is not a real thing, and am removing the reference. Brauwerij89 (talk) 15:57, 26 October 2022 (UTC)

I have raised a citation need against allegation (under subsection Builder) that British convicts diverted from Australia were among those Potemkin encouraged to be resettled in the Crimea as I see no reference to this currently in the wikipedia article on penal transportation.Cloptonson (talk) 06:07, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

I would like to replace the references to "The Crimea" with simply "Crimea".
I believe it is considered belittling to refer to a region as "the XXX", as in "the Ukraine" and "the Argentine". It implies that the region is not a political entity, just a geographical place that any true political entity could simply claim as their own.
MrDemeanour (talk) 06:22, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

No objection, so I went ahead.
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grigory_Potemkin&diff=prev&oldid=1148382629
MrDemeanour (talk) 21:07, 5 April 2023 (UTC)