# Talk:Charles Allen Thomas

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 16:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Hawkeye7 (talk)
Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 16:49, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with the other FAs)

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (PD)

Hawkeye7, I'm glad to see your work here. I do have some insights based on the above checklist that I think will improve the article: 

I think the lead can be improved in order to provide an accessible overview for the Early life.
"A graduate of Transylvania College and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, (missing) worked as a research chemist at General Motors as part of a team researching antiknock agents." (1a issue)
Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. Please feel free to strike out any recommendation from this review which you think will not help in improving the article which is our main aim here. All the best,  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 17:25, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for your review! I have fixed the typo, and re-worked the lead to add Thomas' contributions to organic chemistry. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:21, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:14, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
Promoting the article to GA status.  --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:14, 16 February 2014 (UTC)

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