# Talk:Jonathan Sánchez

Please correct the spelling so that there is an accent on the a. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.122.93.106 (talk • contribs) 

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Reviewer: Secret account 15:40, 20 December 2010 (UTC)
Article needs some work before becoming an GA.

The lead needs to be expanded a little bit, give the seasons a bit more detail, and his playing style.
A subsection needs to be included about his playing style (only explains it's pitch repertoire), it's not that hard to find considering he's a starting pitcher.
enjoyed a fine start... tone, NPOV
After such an impressive performance... again tone
His performance went relatively unnoticed - I think it should be reworded, rookies who had one at-bat or pitched one inning that aren't a state of the art prospect goes relatively unnoticed.
It explains twice that it was his first Major League win, and it should be explained how the Giants won
Many of the sources cite San Francisco Giants when in fact those are mlb.com news stories correct them.
very well... tone
The word unfortunately a couple of times - reword, that's not proper encyclopedia language
for the first time in his career... unneeded wording since he became mostly a regular that season
His last start before going on the disabled list wasn't bad, though - personal opinion
Sánchez began having a career year - reword 7-6 record isn't a "career year"
Source doesn't mention a son
Ok good enough passed Secret account 16:34, 22 December 2010 (UTC)

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