# Talk:Closed on Sunday

This review is transcluded from Talk:Closed on Sunday/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 02:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Because of your numerous amazing reviews of my articles, I will take this on. At first glance it looks good. LOVI33 02:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33 Thanks a lot, cannot wait to see your comments. --K. Peake 08:43, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Are you sure Gospel should be included as a genre since it specifically refers to it's chorus?
Shouldn't it be fine to include as a genre since not only is the chorus included more than once but it is not described as merely "influence" from, or "elements" of gospel? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
"songwriting credit was added" → "a songwriting credit was added"
 Done --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
For the release sentence, add something about it being released through GOOD Music and Def Jam Recordings.
 Done does that look fine? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


### Background and development
"McDonald's" → "McDonald's", with target.
 Done --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


### Composition and lyrics
Looks Good!


### Release and promotion
Looks Good!


### Critical reception
Looks Good!


### Music video
"An accompanying music video was directed" → "An accompanying music video for "Closed on Sunday" was directed"
 Not done since I thought this too, until I learnt otherwise on Talk:Follow God/GA1. --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Shouldn't he be mentioned as "West" instead of "Kanye"?
See MOS:SAMESURNAME, or is this not following that MOS rule properly and should it be "Kanye West" instead? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


### Commercial performance
Looks Good!


### In popular culture
Looks Good!


### Credits and personnel
Looks Good!


### Charts
Looks Good!


### Notes
Looks Good!


### References
Copyvio score looks good at 27.0%
There are a few unarchived citations, but the rest look good.


### External links
Looks Good!


### Final comments and verdict
As always, the article is really well written. I'm going to put it  On hold for now. Just a few small fixes, shouldn't take too long. LOVI33 15:21, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
LOVI33 Thanks for the review and proper feedback, have made some comments to you regarding it though. --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake, you had good reasons for not applying some of my suggestions so I'm going to  Pass it. Great Job! LOVI33 16:10, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

A review quoted in the article says "Closed on Sunday" is a ballads. May I add the article to the category "2010s ballads?"MagicatthemovieS (talk) 21:49, 4 August 2020 (UTC)MagicatthemovieS

Just for anyone who is not aware of the full context, the review is the only source that says the single is a ballad; I tried searching the internet for others but could not find any more RS that say that, plus this is in the Critical reception section. Thought I'd point out to help awareness, though I appreciate the user being constructive and posting this on the talk page. --K. Peake 10:41, 5 August 2020 (UTC)