# Talk:Kit Mueller

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:09, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article upon completion of the peer review. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:09, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Peer review is complete.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  21:53, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"Following the school year, he played in the suburban summer league" I presume basketball league? Clarify since tennis is noted in the previous sentence, so it could be confusing.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  05:58, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
"the team was ranked 23 in the Chicago Sun-Times'" 23rd
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:00, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
"he was not one of the 9 area" nine
That is not consistent with WP:MOSNUM as I recall.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:02, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
"He was benched for one game in early March of his junior year for disciplinary reasons by coach Dick Flaiz." This should be with the other junior info; out of place in his senior year section.
Oops. I added it to the wrong para.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:06, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
"all conference selection." wouldn't All-Conference be capped and hyphenated like All-Chicago and All-State?
Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:08, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
"Mueller's final shot was deflected by Mourning. It is remembered by Princeton fans as an uncalled foul" sentences could be combined (by Mourning, which is remembered by)
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  06:09, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold and pass when issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:18, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

Everything looks good now. I'm fairly sure single digit numbers are written out if they're the only one in a sentence, but no big deal; article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:09, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

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