# Talk:Doug Turley

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:06, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added Steelers, Eagles, Scranton basketball, Baseball players from Delaware, Basketball players from Delaware, and American Basketball League (1925–1955) players cats
Changed receiver cat to ends
PFA and PFR conflict on his death place
Changed to say he just died in Delaware.
"being in addition to a two-way starting end the team's placekicker" Comma after end
Added.
I got rid of the asterick for Steelers because he was released on Sep 9 and the Steelers' first game was Sep 8
"season as the Clippers suspended" change to they suspended operations due to WW2. Also they were only an independent in 1942 because of WW2 as well. At the Wilmington Clippers article, it says they returned to the AA in 1946.
Mentioned that they suspended due to WW2. I seem to mention that they were an independent; Wilmington became an independent team in 1942 and were considered the best pro football team outside of the NFL. Do you want me to add that they returned in '46 (also, I wrote that article and it was one of my first creations )?
i mean to say that the clippers became independent due to ww2 per your clippers article "The 1942 American Association was cancelled due to World War II, but the Clippers kept playing" and yes, when he returns to the clippers later, you can say they returned to the AA. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:17, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Does my change work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:31, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
yes but I also wanted to add that they were idependent because tye 1942 AA season was cancelled due to WW2 WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:43, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: How 'bout now? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:49, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
can you add the source for that? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:52, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Cited. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:12, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
"He coached the semi-professional Wilmington Arrows" Perhaps change to head coach and also in the infobox
Done.
"win over the Card-Pitt" Remove "the"?
Removed.
"We played that game [won by the Rams " link Rams
Linked,
Add head coach to the Clippers in the infobox
Added,
That's all I think. Excellent work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:31, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:46, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
"Turley sat out the 1943 season as the Clippers also suspended due to the war" ref doesnt technically say due to the war, hehe WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:21, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Got one now. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:27, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC)