# Talk:Introjection (Neon Genesis Evangelion episode)

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Nominator: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 20:33, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 23:28, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article. Already gave it a read. My only advice before the review would be mixing Shinji's growth with toxic masculinity due to similar commentary.

Lead
The first sentence is quite long
Plot
"Shinji is stopped and decides to leave Nerv". Stopped but how?
I recall Kaji only ordering Shinji in the manga. Was it the same in the anime where he is checking his plants?
Production
I think Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water needs an explanation.
shinigami needs also a miniexplanation.
Voice acting and music is too small. How about mixing it?
Themes' first two paragraphs are primarily devoted to Shinji's arc and then there is a start to another section that discusses Shinji's growth. Could these be combined? "Masculinity and deconstruction of mecha genre" on the other hand seems fine.
Reception seems well organized. Good work with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 14:18, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
@TeenAngels1234:

@Tintor2: OK; I think I fixed everything. The only point is that I still want to keep the paragraphs of Themese apart; it still seems more natural to me, and while all the themes are related, I prefer this. Let me know what you think.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 18:38, 1 March 2025 (UTC)
@TeenAngels1234: Good work with the article. Despite its length it was well organized.Tintor2 (talk) 19:50, 1 March 2025 (UTC)