# Talk:Carel Victor Gerritsen

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Can we link open government?
Linked.
No link for "Neo-Malthusian League"?
There is no article so I have added a redlink.
"in Amersfoort, the" link.
Done.
"Dutch Reformed Church" link?
Done.
Link Groningen.
Done.
"Although Gerritsen probably never" Although he probably...
Done.
"he was influenced by his ideas" -> "Gerritsen was influenced"
Done.
"named De Dageraad, in 1882." sentence is unref.
Added.
"Young Amsterdam" not notable enough for a link?
There is no article. Do you think I should add a redlink?
If you think it could host an article, then I have no problem at all with red links.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
"Gerritsen's wife Aletta Jacobs ..." normally use upright on this kind of image.
Amended.
Could link Legitimacy (family law).
Good idea. Wikilink added.
Ref 15 should be pp.
Fixed.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else.  simongraham (talk) 07:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Red link issue aside, happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)