# Talk:Cyclone Osea

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
Review will commence in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)


### Lead and infobox
Both fine.


### Meteorological history
"...to the northeast of the Northern Cook Island: Manihiki." "...to Manhiki, in the northeastern Cook Islands." This is more suitable for a reader unfamiliar with the region.

I personally prefer the current wording as its a lot easier to understand and more factually correct since Manhiki is more in the Central Northern Cook Islands.Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
I agree with him actually. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:59, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
"...French Polynesia sialnd group." Island group.

Changed to just French Polynesia.
"...the low level circulation center due to increased wind shear." Please wikilink wind shear.

Unless im mistake WP:Overlink prevents us from linking it twice (its linked in the lead).Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Consistency is the most important thing. They should all be correct now. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:59, 7 June 2013 (UTC)


### Preparations, impact, and aftermath
Please wikilink Scilly.


### Conclusion
A very nice concise article. I will pass when everything has been addressed. Congratulations!  QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:57, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Should be sorted.Jason Rees (talk) 23:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)