# Talk:Italian cruiser Amalfi

This review is transcluded from Talk:Italian armored cruiser Amalfi/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Below is my review of the article:

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
1. Something missing in 'The projected of her power plant was 20,000 indicated horsepower (15,000 kW)'. I am not sure, if it should be power or something else.
I added the word output so it reads  The projected output of her power plant was… — Bellhalla (talk) 13:27, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
2. The sentence 'The ship was completed on 1 September 1909, just over five years after construction began' kind of suggests that its construction began in 1904, but it was actually 1905. I understand that you meant 'the construction of the class' rather than just the ship, but rewording might remove the ambiguity.
Well, from the source, I think the construction was begun on both ship in 1904, but since I had compared the launch date to the laid-down date, it is confusing to go back and compare the completion date to the a different starting date. I've reworded so that it reads: The ship was completed on 1 September 1909, just over four years after her keel was laid. — Bellhalla (talk) 13:27, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Thanks - DSachan (talk) 09:52, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
I've addressed both points. Please let me know if the rewording on the second sentence reads better. Thanks! — Bellhalla (talk) 13:27, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
Yes, thanks. It reads better. - DSachan (talk) 13:33, 19 April 2009 (UTC)