# Talk:Göran Lagerberg

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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:50, 2 January 2022 (UTC)


### Comments
#### General
Although optional, you can add {{short description}} and {{Use dmy dates}} at the top of the page. Infobox is properly set-up.
Unlink the third-party link from Blond in the lede. The rest of the lede satisfies the criteria.
"Always being musically interested, he started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson." → As a kid, he was interested into music and started attending piano lessons at the age of six, attending the same school as Danne Larsson.
My recommendation would be to group a couple of sections: Under a new section called "Music career" you should put "Tages" (remove early years and later years subsections), "Blond", "1970s and 1980s" and "Grymlings".
Missing end quote in the first sentence under "Early years" section. → "he was the only guy insane enough to play the washboard".
"Unlike many other Swedish groups, who had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each was allowed at least one lead vocal per show, often harmonizing." → Unlike many other Swedish groups, who only had one lead singer, the members of Tages were each allowed to lead the vocals at least once per one show, often harmonizing.
"...wasted on a flexi disc, thanks to Lagerberg's talent." – are you sure that this is meant to say wasted?
Missing comma between November and Tages in the "In November Tages third studio album Extra Extra was released." sentence.
Add "to" between Parlophone and expire in the "...allowing their contract with Parlophone expire..." sentence.
Unbold "Blond" in the "Blond" section.
Uncapitalize progressive rock in the "The group came out of the Mecki Mark Men and initially had a Progressive rock sound." sentence.
Move the end quote on the left side of the period in the "..."one of the 50 best Svensktopp-songs of all time."" sentence.


#### Images
File:Göran Lagerberg, sång.JPG is tagged as own work. Please find a source and if the image is suitable for Commons. If you don't, remove it from the article and nominate it for deletion.
File:Henkan 70, 2015.jpg same issue.


#### Sources
Move the only-remaining source from the lede to the third paragraph in the "Later years" section.
"His work with the group would be postponed until he graduated in June 1965." – unsourced.
Sources are alright. Discogs is tagged as unreliable since some complained that it is user-generated and not appropriate, if there are other reliable sources that can replace those two then find them, otherwise, they can be kept.
@VirreFriberg: I'm putting this article on hold for a week. If these issues get fixed I will promote it to GA. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 15:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
@Vacant0: Done. --VirreFriberg (talk) 12:09, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. I've removed the other image because the video isn't tagged with a CC 4.0 license. Vacant0 (talk) 12:20, 6 January 2022 (UTC)