# Talk:James Milner

I find that Sky Sport's 'Opta Jurys' are useful for supporting claims made in this section. Some info from here may improve the article. Sir-Nobby 17:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
Bit out of date isn't it. Buc 21:01, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

It doesn't matter. Sir-Nobby 16:40, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
The link doesn't work as Sky Sports have changed the whole format of their website around, including the Opta Audit section. I'll try to find it again. Sir-Nobby 17:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

[1]
Clearly I'll need to get there permission first. Buc 14:35, 2 August 2007 (UTC)

I take it you got their permission then? It's certainly a better image to use in the infobox, very clear and shows his face. Sir-Nobby 17:36, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Hello, here are my comments.

First, I'm not sure Milner should be rated as High importance.  After all, Geoff Hurst who scored a hat-trick for England in the World Cup Final is rated as High and I can't imagine Milner being quite on his level of significance yet.
 Done Buc 08:11, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"football player" - just footballer will suffice.
 Done Chensiyuan 02:55, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"As a child Milner was recognised as a talent in football, cricket and as a long distance runner from the age of nine." - why specify the runner age, seems incongruous.
 Done age removed. Chensiyuan 02:55, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"...becoming a ball boy at the club. He began his career..." - missed the bit where he became a footballer and signed for the club?
Well these are touched on, not sure if details are needed in the lead but I've added a bit more anyway. Buc 08:11, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"...hundred appearances for them." - who, Swindon, Villa or Newcastle - it's not clear.
 Done should be clear now. Chensiyuan 01:43, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"...starting 11..." - don't like this - use eleven here.
 Done Chensiyuan 01:45, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
Presume you have permission to use the photograph.
Yes Buc 07:16, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
Ref [2] doesn't verify that he got 11 A's or higher at GCSE.  He got 11 GCSEs, that's all it says.
 Done Removed A's. Chensiyuan 01:48, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"He was the cross-country champion and the district champion over 100 metres for three and two consecutive years respectively.[1]" - difficult sentence to decipher.
How about now? Buc 07:16, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"...striker; Alan Smith..." - why semi-colon?
 Done presumably a typographical. Chensiyuan 01:38, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"...Under-17 summer tournament..." - what is this - a Euro/World tournament?
Neither just a tournament against three other U-17 teams. Buc 07:30, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"He appointed Mick McGuire, who was the deputy, chief executive of the PFA, as his agent." - no citation.
I'd leave it to the principal editors to find the ref; all I could find is McGuire being his agent and a executive of the PFA, but not his date of appointment. Chensiyuan 03:07, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
I've got a better idea, remove it althogether. Buc 08:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"At the start of the 2003–04 season, Milner was sent on a month-long loan to Second Division side Swindon Town to gain experience as a first team player. He saw it as a "valuable experience".[2]" - merge sentences, with "...player which he saw as...".
 Done Chensiyuan 03:16, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"Their ultimate relegation..." just "Their relegation..." will do.
 Done Chensiyuan 01:33, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"In September he made his début in European competition, when Newcastle played Israel's Bnei Sakhnin in the UEFA Cup. He scored his first competitive goal for the club against West Bromwich Albion in a 3–1 win, after coming on as a substitute for Patrick Kluivert." - citations please.
 Done Buc 07:22, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"1 January" - add year.
 Done Chensiyuan 01:36, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"In June, Milner competed for England at the European Under-21 Football Championship where he played in all four of England's matches. He was booked in the semi-final, which meant he would miss the final, yet scored twice in the penalty shootout, which England lost 13–12." - citation needed.
 Done Buc 07:13, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
"He displays maturity beyond that expected from someone of his age, he lives with his parents and sister. He rarely drinks alcohol or goes out at night.[3]  His heroes are former France captain Zinedine Zidane and Barcelona striker Thierry Henry. He owns a BMW X3 and previously owned a Ford Focus. He enjoys most comedies particularly Friends and The Office, he also sees himself as a funny person. He also owns a PlayStation and a pet Canaan hound named Zizzi." - pure fancruft - is it what you'd find in an encyclopaedia?
I know but the Off the pitch section is so thin on the grounds anyway so I'm going to keep it in for now. If something major happen off the pitch I'll remove it. Buc 07:32, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
It's non-encyclopaedic, full stop.  It should go. The Rambling Man 07:43, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
Basically, there shouldn't be a compulsion to keep an "Off the pitch" section simply because many (good) soccer articles have it. If Milner doesn't really do anything noteworthy (in the include-in-WP-sense), then I think there's nothing wrong with removing the section altogether. Those soccer articles which have such a section usually deal with noteworthy pursuits such as extensive philanthropy, big money endorsements and what not. Milner's still young, until he has done something noteworthy off the pitch (or if you can find something), we don't really need the section. It's painful to take away content I know, but why not if it doesn't reduce the quality of the article? Chensiyuan 08:01, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
I vote remove as well (well, I would do, wouldn't I?)... The Rambling Man 09:09, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
So there's quite a lot to do here.  I'll fail it for the time being but I hope it is brought back to WP:GAC improved shortly put it on hold.  Let me know if anything needs additional explanation.  The Rambling Man 20:47, 22 August 2007 (UTC)]]

"...so it remains to be seen if Milner will be able to successfully make the transition...." - original research - remove please.  The Rambling Man 18:14, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
Rephrased Buc 19:01, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
Okay, my criteria are harsh, but I'm prepared to accept this article is good enough to be a GA now.  Well done.  The Rambling Man 19:37, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
While playing there, Graeme Coulson, a coach from Rawdon recognised his talent and asked a parent who he was. Coulson persuaded Milner to play for his Rawdon side in various tournaments.
Is questioning of the parent informative or essential? If not I would suggest:

While playing there, Graeme Coulson, a coach from Rawdon recognised his talent and persuaded Milner to play for his Rawdon side in various tournaments.
No big deal it either way I guess--Random Replicator 04:12, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
Is it possible to get a usable photo of James Milner with the Champions League trophy? This is after all his biggest footballing achievement? TheRealGutripper (talk) 07:52, 3 October 2019 (UTC)

As requested, I am in the process of copy editing this article so it can be nominated for FA status. I think the Career section needs a paragraph before the first heading - maybe some of the content from Early life could be moved there? --carelesshx talk 18:09, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

The images Image:Milnercross.JPG and Image:James Milner 17.JPG are unsuitable for use as the flickr pages show that they are licensed for non-commercial use only. I have contacted the authors of both images requesting that they amend the licence to allow use in this article. I believe Buc has contacted the owner of Image:Milner2.JPG, as this has the same problem.  --carelesshx talk 01:12, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
Image:Milnercross.JPG is now correctly licenced. I am waiting to hear from the creator of Image:James Milner 17.JPG  --carelesshx talk 22:10, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
The creator of Image:James Milner 17.JPG has agreed to change the licence to one suitable for wikipedia. I'll update the page as soon as I hear from him.  --carelesshx talk 12:48, 26 September 2007 (UTC)

How did he qualify to play for them? Sir-Nobby 10:55, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

The ref doesn't say. Buc 14:34, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
You should find one that does.  It's anomolous... The Rambling Man 14:38, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
It has a ref that says he played for them. Buc 14:54, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
But it's a fair question.  If he's England U-21, how did he get to play Ireland U-14?  The Rambling Man 15:02, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
Played for Ireland under 14s before England U-21. 82.6.166.197 (talk) 21:31, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

He didn't play for the Republic - ever. Has actually played for England at every level except under 18's, and senior, being promoted to the 21's very early hence the record number of caps.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.38.75.58 (talk) 17:24, 23 March 2008 (UTC) 

just updated some of the statistics on his appearances for this season, and is one european game and goal i've wrote accurate since 31 august underneath :) Jonoridge (talk) 21:06, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

I added him to the List of teetotalers. However there is no appropriate section to add the info. If in the future a 'personal life' section is added then this fact should be mentioned; as things stand it doesn't warrant creating a section just so this fact is included in the article.--EchetusXe 13:55, 23 October 2010 (UTC)

- tee total - Off2riorob (talk) 14:44, 23 October 2010 (UTC)

how was he still playing for the young lions in 2009 when he was 23?
duncanrmi (talk) 19:27, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

>>This team is for English players aged under 21 at the start of the calendar year in which a two-year European Under-21 Football Championship campaign begins, so some players can remain with the squad until the age of 23.<<
oh.ok.
duncanrmi (talk) 19:30, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

I propose switching this player's height in the infobox to feet and inches first:

England uses feet and inches for height and he is English.
Wikipedia MOS guidelines for articles related to English people says to use feet and inches first.
The PFA Footballers' Who's Who 2010-11 (the English football player bible) gives his height in feet and inches with no meters on page 289.
Please indicate if you disagree with this change. Speccy4Eyes (talk) 23:03, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Disagree, current source (official league organ) and many others uses meter. QED237 (talk) 23:09, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
The Wikipedia MOS guidelines says use feet and inches first for English people. The official Footballers' Who's Who bible produced by the Professional Footballers' Association uses only feet and inches. Why do you want to go against those? Speccy4Eyes (talk) 23:13, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Disagree. Leave it as it is as per Premier League. Michael Glass (talk) 04:21, 3 February 2015 (UTC)

As we have seen with errors in other articles the Premier League site is not the most reliable source for height data. So we should drop it. And as Michael Glass is arguing for Shay Given to use the height given by his national team rather than the height given on the Premier League website then I think he will support doing the same here. The England team website gives his height as 5' 8" (1.75m) [2]. So I propose we do the same here. If anyone disagrees please explain why the different rules for different players. Speccy4Eyes (talk) 22:11, 11 February 2015 (UTC) 

No apparent disagreement in more than 4 months, so actioned. Note too the clause in WP:UNITS which says for articles related to the UK: "the primary units for personal height and weight are feet​/inches and stones/​pounds". Speccy4Eyes (talk) 16:55, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
Reverted, clear disagreement in section immediately above. Qed237 (talk) 19:47, 28 June 2015 (UTC)

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The club career part suddenly stops in 2013 and the international career in 2012. It was in good shape when it was GA, now I it does not suit the criteria, because it fails "broad in coverage" and it hence says only about goals and debuts. Tagging the major editors - @Bucs, Chensiyuan, Mattythewhite,  and Sir-Nobby:. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)

Comment - Given the number of games he played and goals he scored in 2014-15, it's surprising there isn't any info in the article about him for that season. I might try to improve the article at some point next week but I'm extremely busy sadly so there's no guarantee. Sorry. Spiderone 17:29, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
It's been over a year since this was opened, @Royroydeb: need to reach a conclusion. 92.2.79.212 (talk) 20:25, 18 June 2016 (UTC)


### Resuming reassessment
Although Royrobdeb has not edited on Wikipedia for four months, this individual reassessment should continue because the article clearly needs significant work to meet the GA criteria.
The most pressing need is for the "citation needed" templates to be dealt with. There are several dozen of them; no article with so much need for inline source citations satisfies the Verifiability criteria. However, based on my discoveries in the Early life section, where five of six of these templates could be safely removed, there are overcitation issues that need to be addressed with regard to these templates; it's very rare that an article needs every single sentence cited, since if an inline citations covers two or more sentences, only the last of these sentences needs an inline citation. In addition, two of the references are bare URLs, do not therefore meet verifiability standards.
I don't know whether the issues regarding broadness/completeness raised by Royroydeb have been addressed in the subsequent 14 months; there does seem to be some new material dealing with events from Fall 2015. However, the article's lead hasn't caught up with that new material; it mentions over 100 appearances with Newcastle United, something not specifically mentioned in the body's text (and there shouldn't generally be things in the lead that aren't also mentioned in the body), and doesn't mention over 200 with Manchester City, which would seem to be a significant tenure.
I plan to allow the standard seven days for the issues to be addressed, though if work is in progress I will naturally extend this time. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:30, 19 August 2016 (UTC)


### Closing reassessment
There have been no edits to address any of the issues listed here, so I am closing this reassessment as "delisted". If anyone can be found eventually to take care of the severe and serious prevalence of "citation needed" templates, plus make sure the other issues raised have been dealt with, the article can be renominated for GA status. Best of luck going forward. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:32, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi @Theroadislong: on the article about James Vaughan (footballer, born 1988) it says he was the youngest player to score in the premier league, also on this article  it says something similar. Thoughts? TeaLover1996 (talk) 11:01, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

The reference is dated 2005 for James Vaughan and 2015 for James Milner. Theroadislong (talk) 11:07, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

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Reviewer: IronManCap (talk · contribs) 21:27, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I'm interested in taking up this review. For initial comments, some ref work in adding dates and authors to refs is needed; the ProveIt gadget may be helpful here. Also look at archiving all urls using IABot, and find refs for the two  tags in the infobox. Expect further comments in the next 7 days.

 Done have addressed the 2 tags.


### Lead
Move ref #7 next to ref #174 in #Style of play per MOS:LEADCITE  Done
has been used → has played - as who used him (managers, presumably) haven't been mentioned  Done
represented his school - mention the specific school here  Done
Not sure him being a Leeds season ticket holder is notable enough for the lead, I would cut that  Done
I would also merge the sentences about him supporting Leeds and joining their academy  Done
aged only 16 - rm "only" per WP:VOICE  Done
Add "award" after PFA Young Player of the Year  Done
Link free transfer to Free transfer (association football) and link vice-captain to Vice-captain (association football)  Done


### Early life
Yorkshire Schools cricket team - Link Yorkshire  Done
other clubs in the north → other clubs in Northern England  Done
what Milner aspired to do; that is, to come through the academy and play for the first team → what Milner aspired to do, in coming through the academy and playing for the first team  Done


### Club career
One BBC source doesn't justify "widespread praise from commentators" - I would remove "widespread" at the bare minimum  Done
the chairman of the club at the time - who?  Done
Preferably remove instances of "even" per WP:VOICE  Done
extreme right of the field → far right of the field  Done
"Winger" should not be capitalised  Done
Shortly before the end of his loan period, negotiations between Villa and Newcastle began. - needs a source  Done I have removed it as, after a look I feel it is adequately covered in the paragraph below.
Move the second image (the free kick one) to the left so it faces the text per MOS:IMAGELOCATION  Done
Also link free kick and Newcastle United in the caption per WP:DUPLINK  Done
Add commas after at 16 years and 356 days and and its new manager  Done
Allardyce praised Milner highly - rm "highly" per MOS:PUFFERY / WP:VOICE  Done
it was rumoured in May 2008 that he would - replace "he" with "Milner"  Done
Link transfer request  Done
Milner continued to impress and scored his second league goal of the season against Blackburn Rovers on 7 February and scored a free kick from outside the penalty area at home against Everton as Villa came back from a 3–1 deficit to draw 3–3 on 12 April. This sentence needs c/e and some commas, potentially split it out  Done
Link free kick in #Aston Villa, delink in #Style of play.  Done
Man City section is well-written.
Vice captain → Vice-captain  Done
Link Roma.  Done
Add "season" after during the 2020-21  Done
Reword the opening sentence of the last para of the L'pool section to something like Milner was not a regular starter during the 2020–21 season, amassing just 11 starts and making 26 appearances overall.  Done
As a result he registered his first goalless season of his career. → As a result, he registered the first goalless season of his career.  Done


### International career
Add a comma after "2003 World Youth Championship"  Done
he also set up - "also" is unnecessary here  Done
had a penalty well saved - rm "well" per WP:VOICE  Done
sail over the crossbar → go over the crossbar  Done
the Netherlands → the Netherlands  Done
however he was substituted → although he was substituted  Done
Where he started but - rm "where"  Done
However Milner failed to secure a starting place. Only appearing once, in the final group game against Costa Rica after England had already been eliminated. - This needs c/e and sourcing
The paragraph beginning Milner was part of the England squad for EURO 2016. needs some serious c/e for grammar
@REDMAN 2019: Any updates on the above two points? They're the last two points to address before this passes GAN. IronManCap (talk) 14:54, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
I have addressed these two points myself, and am hence passing the article. IronManCap (talk) 20:08, 13 September 2021 (UTC)


### Style of play
I would move the image to the left and quote box to the right so the image faces the text per MOS:IMAGELOCATION and alternates with the last one  Done
Link Manuel Pellegrini  Done
who managed Milner at Manchester City, described Milner → who managed Milner at Manchester City, described him  Done
Add a comma after in the modern game  Done
Rm the colon in the last sentence  Done


### Refs
Mark The Daily Telegraph and The Times refs with |url-access=limited  Done
Please be consistent if possible with |work= vs |publisher= for BBC Sport; the former is preferable per WP:ITALICWEBCITE
Please add any missing authors using |first=, |last=, and if necessary, |author-link=


### Other comments
Career statistics and honours sections look good.
Earwig suspects a copyvio of this website, although that is a low-level website that is almost certainly a WP:Wikipedia mirror. It also has weird line breaks within  prose, almost certainly to avoid copyvio detection on its part, so no concerns here.
I asked about that website before nominating and was told that it shouldn't be a problem. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 12:44, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
This script found no WP:DUPLINKs.
Good to see MOS:NUMBER being followed.
Those are my comments. Ping me when addressed. IronManCap (talk) 13:42, 3 September 2021 (UTC)


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