# Talk:Hurricane Ingrid

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Ingrid/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
Hello Hurricanehink, I am going to review this article and will hopefully finish sometimes today. Overall, nice job!--12george1 (talk) 20:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

" It formed on September 12 in the Gulf of Mexico from a broad disturbance that also spawned Manuel on the Pacific coast." - Since you mention the Gulf of Mexico and "Pacific coast", you could also be referring to the United States. :P
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"Subsequently, increased wind shear weakened the convection as" - Wikilink wind shear and convection
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"Ingrid made landfall just south of" - Wikilink landfall
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"Rainfall from the storm peaked at 20.11 in (511 mm) in Tuxpan, Veracruz." - If you are using metric first throughout the rest of the article, then it should be inches converted to millimeters. Ditto for the other rainfall totals.
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"convection, and NHC forecaster Daniel Brown" ---> "convection, and National Hurricane Center (NHC) forecaster Daniel Brown"
I see that you spelled out National Hurricane Center earlier in the article.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"making it the first time since 1958 that tropical cyclones struck both coasts of the country within one day.[13]" - Can you state the names of those storms? Apparently they were Tropical Storm Alma and Tropical Storm Two.
This wasn't done because sources could not verify it was these two tropical cyclones.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
There is inconsistency with the authors names in the references. For examples, reference #3 says "Aliva/Brennan", while reference #12 has " Richard J. Pasch; David A. Zelinsky".
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Remember to use (in Spanish) for all of the Spanish sources.
|language=Spanish was used instead--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
The last name of the author for reference #1 is misspelled.
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Reference #32 is a deadlink. No surprise there. :P Btw, the urls for the Storm Data publications die after only 24 hours now.
This was fixed.--12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
That should be everything. Again, nice work and good luck in the WikiCup. Regards, --12george1 (talk) 20:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
Good job, Hurricaneihink! :) I will now pass this article and list it as a Good Article. Regards, --12george1 (talk) 03:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)