# Talk:Herb Plews

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:18, 16 May 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  Pass
2. Verifiability  Pass
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
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"as a result of the war just ending" - Go ahead and specify the war
Link stolen base at first appearance
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"Plews hit his first (and only) home run of the season against Bob Keegan as the Senators won 6–2" - I'm not explicitly seeing in the source that it was his only home run of the season, although I'm sure it's true.  Is there a way you can add another source for certain verification?
" at "1953 Piedmont League Batting Leaders". Baseball-Reference. Retrieved May 8, 2020." - Is there a specific reason the word "at" is in there?
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"At his death, he was the only athlete from the Helena area to play Major League Baseball.[2][1]" - This implies that there has been another person from the Helena area to make it to the majors.  If so, it's probably worth briefly mentioning the player's name.
There aren't any others that I know of, but the source is from when Plews died five years ago, so it's not current for the last few years. That's why I worded it that way. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 13:24, 18 May 2020 (UTC)
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The article's in very good shape, just a few loose ends to take care of. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 21:20, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:01, 18 May 2020 (UTC)