# Talk:HMS Trump (P333)

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
prose:   (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Comments
1. (pennant number P333). Suggest - A wiki-link for pennant number
2.  She sold off and broken up for scrap in August 1971. Suggest - She was sold off and broken up for scrap in August 1971 
3. Trump underwent refits at Cockatoo Dockyard between January 1962 and April 1963. Suggest - A comma after dockyard. 
4. She had been temporarily transferred to. Suggest - She was temporarily transferred to
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 16:33, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

I've made the changes you've suggested. Thanks for reviewing. :) Miyagawa (talk) 23:24, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
Nice Work. Passed Thurgate (talk) 23:35, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

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