# Talk:Narrative structure of The Lord of the Rings

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

 
Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:31, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

I have done a minor copyedit; feel free to discuss any changes you might disagree with.
Thank you.
"balanced pair...threads of story" I think semicolons would be better than commas here. Also for the body.
Done.
"the "Nation's best-loved book." You should mention where the survey was conducted.
Added.
"and the two supported each other" would be better as "and that the two support each other"
Done.
"inevitability of loss...fade" this is confusing, it needs a colon somewhere in there
Edited ("like" to "as").
The images are all licensed and used correctly.
Noted.
The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
Noted.
Spotchecks:
Seiler, Andy (16 December 2003). "'Rings' comes full circle". USA Today. Verifies all claims made.
Diver, Krysia (5 October 2004). "A lord for Germany". The Sydney Morning Herald. Verifies all claims made.
Nepveu, Kate (16 December 2008). "LotR re-read: Fellowship I.2, 'The Shadow of the Past'". Tor.com. Verifies all claims made.
Drout, Michael D. C. (2004). "Tolkien's Prose Style and its Literary and Rhetorical Effects". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
Noted.
That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 10:30, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
All done to date. Many thanks for the review! Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:34, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 14:54, 28 July 2023 (UTC)