# Talk:Friend or Foe (SpongeBob SquarePants)

I've moved an old version of this to Talk:Friend or Foe (SpongeBob SquarePants)/OldVersion, which may have been indirectly copied here. Old revisions there can be used for attribution. ErikHaugen (talk | contribs) 06:44, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 02:14, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
Hello, Mediran, I will be reviewing this article.

The hatnote should be removed, per WP:NAMB.
 Done. Thanks for that. 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
"The episode was" -> "The episode is" (it didn't suddenly stop being a special)
 Done. Right. 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
"The episode became available on DVD on April 17, 2007. The episode received positive reviews upon release." Try to avoid repeating "The episode" here
 Fixed 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
In the plot, you should link "flashback" the first occurence
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
I think that you should remove citation 1, it's not needed. (Plots don't need citations)
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
I don't think four citations are needed for "The episode was later released on the DVD of the same name on April 17, 2007". See WP:OVERCITE
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
"Paul Mavis of the DVD Talk" Drop the "the" here.
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
"David Packard of the" Again, the "the" can be dropped
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
"Patrick Cossel of Blogcritics, on the DVD, said" Kind of clumsy, try "On the DVD, Patrick Cossel of Blogcritics said"
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
I'm not really seeing what citation 23 is doing (I've verified the quote comes from ref #22) so you should remove it.
 Done 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 02:14, 20 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Taylor Trescott! :) Mediran (t • c) 03:35, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
OK, one thing; you should link Patchy The Pirate in the lead. People that aren't familiar with SpongeBob might find it confusing. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:38, 21 December 2013 (UTC)
 Done and thanks! Mediran (t • c) 02:44, 22 December 2013 (UTC)

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