# Talk:Guillermo Eleazar

Hi TheNuggeteer, good to see you back at GAN. I've chosen not to review this article as I would quickfail it, and have instead given it a copyedit. I have found a few issues where text fails verification, so you should double check everything. I also wanted to flag a few sentences I don't understand/that need to be changed:

"His main position during his term was to cleanse the PNP ranks." In what way? This is very promo.
"as well as strict border monitoring." This doesn't make sense given the start of the sentence. As well as to enforce strict border monitoring?
"Eleazar ordered police to check areas where kids can go." Clarify what this means
"Other than COVID-19 campaigns, he ordered a massive body-camera information campaign for fellow policemen." What was the content of this campaign?
"Improving peace and order" what do you mean by "improving peace"?
"He supported securing Overseas Filipino Workers and their jobs." What does it mean to secure Overseas Filipino Workers? Do you mean give them security?
You need to explain what Commander of COVID means.
Change the 600,000 police claim to match what I did in the lead, as it fails verification
Give citations where requested.
Best, Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 20:11, 9 June 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for fixing the article! I fixed most of the points because some of them are already okay (at least for me).
I changed it to "Eleazar supported the cleansing of PNP ranks". Is the sentence okay?
I made it into another sentence.
Removed, I don't think it is notable enough to be put in the article.
Added more, is it already good enough?
Removed, not stated in the source.
It actually says "Commander of COVID protection".
What do you mean by that? It is already stated in the source next to the sentence.
Unsourced sentence was added by another user; fixed.
Anyway, what parts of the article made you think it should be quickfailed? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  00:39, 10 June 2025 (UTC)
The issues were BLP violations that I have now removed (you shouldn't list the names of people who have been accused of crimes, publicly humiliated, but not tried in an article about someone else), several sentences that simply didn't make sense that I have listed above, and WP:GAFAIL 3: the presence of multiple valid cleanup tags. There were two such tags requesting citations (now resolved). There is also text that failed verification. These are the main issues, but there is generally some promo language, such as "cleansing" and the 600,000 police officer material. I'll respond to the individual bullet points:
I don't know what it means to "cleanse" the PNP ranks. If it's eradicating corruption, say that.
I understand this better now, I've reworded the sentence accordingly.
Great.
Thanks, I've reworded based on this new info.
Thanks.
But what does "Commander of COVID protection" mean? What is the role?
You can see in the lead I've changed the content to "He received endorsements from a professional association of security guards and private investigators". This is as the source is only saying the group endorsed him, not that he got the votes of all the people. The article also doesn't say the group is comprised of police offices, but rather it is "composed of security guards, private detectives, and investigators".
Thanks
Beyond the above, can you put the #Public shaming acts back into the career section? I'll come back to identify more things to be addressed but leave it here for now. Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 01:55, 10 June 2025 (UTC)
Fixed everything. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  05:41, 10 June 2025 (UTC)
Thanks for making these changes. Still outstanding:
I still don't know what "the leader of protection from COVID-19" means. Perhaps before you make a change to the article, you can describe in two sentences what his role entailed here so I can understand.
during the onslaught of COVID this emotive language is inappropriate and unnecessary. It can be ommitted.
"a police group of detectives endorsed" I'm not sure what a "police group of detectives" is, and it doesn't match the source. The group was a professional association. A professional association is just a group of people who work the same job (e.g. doctor, cleaner, security guard) who want to come together so they can work together to advocate for the profession. For example, a professional association of cleaners may advocate for better chemical protection legislation etc. This professional association is made up of security guards and private investigators. Police are not involved and the article does not mention police being involved. Can you reword to match the text?
Hopefully my comments here are helpful. I would like to help you get this article to GA, and my comments are to such an end. Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 05:58, 10 June 2025 (UTC)
I don't really know. The best I can give is "Commander of the COVID-19 task force for the PNP." The source only lists the position, and does not give any more information about the position.
Fixed.
Thank you for your comments. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  00:03, 11 June 2025 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Guillermo Eleazar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 09:06, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 August 2025 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:33, 4 August 2025 (UTC)

Images appropriately licensed
Okay.
Put the PNP abbreviation after the first use of the spelled out name
Done.
Link Quezon,
Done.
Capitalize and link Corporal
Done.
There nothing supporting the info about groups condemning his actions with Quibete
Added.
He served as Deputy Chief for Administration of the PNP just before his appointment as PNP Chief.[17] This is redundant
Fixed.
Commander of protection from the COVID-19 Awkward, use the actual title
Used most of the title but removed "shield".
The list of key positions needs cites unless already cited in the article
Cited.
The link in citation 46 is bad.
Both the Rappler links (outside editing mode) and Politiko website links (in editing mode) have working links. There's nothing wrong.
--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:39, 10 August 2025 (UTC)

Replied to all. @Sturmvogel 66: ping. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  03:43, 11 August 2025 (UTC)
((ping|Sturmvogel 66}} ping again. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  12:05, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
@Sturmvogel 66: ping. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter")  04:02, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
 Huh, the links work now. Promoting