# Talk:James Davis (escaped convict)

The image description in the Death section reads: Davis's grave in Toowong Cemetery, 2024. The gravestone has since fallen over and cracked. If this is true, and the stone has cracked since the photo was taken in 2024, that requires a source (and maybe a mention in the article body). If the stone has cracked before 2024 then it needs to be reworded. Renerpho (talk) 12:21, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

I have corrected the caption SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 15:01, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

Not a lot of detail is given in the "death" section, even though it is available in reliable sources.[1][2] Is there a reason to leave it out? This does look like an interesting story to me. Charles Lilley presided over the case, should we link to his article?
Also, the article says that Davis was assaulted by his wife Bridget, yet was later found not guilty and consequently discharged (apparently because it couldn't be proven that she had assaulted him). This seems contradictory. Either she assaulted him, or she didn't. Renerpho (talk) 12:40, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

I think that this should be fleshed out. Could you please add this info into the article? SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 15:30, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
I added these sources to the article SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 09:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
@SkywalkerEccleston: Ah, thank you! I hadn't seen your reply. Your version looks good to me. Renerpho (talk) 03:57, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
All good 👍 SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 04:22, 7 November 2024 (UTC)