# Talk:Oliver Bjorkstrand

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:53, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this! — GhostRiver 18:53, 23 October 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lede
Might be worth including the IPA pronunciation of his surname (pronunciation guide can be found here
Delink "Danish" per MOS:OVERLINK  Done


### Early life
Comma after "in Herning, Denmark" per MOS:GEOCOMMA  Done


### Playing career
First three paragraphs should be under a level 3 subhead called "Junior"  Done
Link the first instances of "goals", "assists", and "points"  Done
Remove "2012" in "By December 2012", as we know it should be sometime around there based on the prior sentence and the Top Prospects Game  Done
Link first instance of hat trick  Done
Period after "with Seth Jones" creates a sentence fragment after  Done
Link entry-level contract  Done
Hat trick is sometimes hyphenated, sometimes not  Done
"50-goal seasons since Dennis Holland in the 1987-88 and 1988-89." → "50-goal season since Dennis Holland from 1987-89" for close para/WP:LIMITED  Done
" a unanimous selection to the WHL's Western Conference First All-Star Team and was voted by his teammates as the Winterhawks’ Most Valuable Player." → "unanimously selected to the WHL's Western Conference First All-Star Team, while his teammates voted him the Winterhawks' Most Valuable Player." (active voice, fix close para)  Done


#### Professional
"Blue Jackets American" → "Blue Jackets' American"  Done
Link Lake Erie Monsters  Done
Link 2016 Calder Cup playoffs in the first paragraph ("first Calder Cup playoff appearance") and delink in the second ("Calder Cup Finals")  Done
Comma after "won the Calder Cup for the Monsters"  Done
"of making the Blue Jackets' 2016-17 opening night roster"  Done
Spaces around the ellipses in the Kekalainen quote, per MOS:ELLIPSIS  Done
Link AHL All-Star Classic  Done
Link trading deadline  Done
Comma after "player Roman Polak"  Done
Comma after "teammate Artemi Panarin"  Done
Hyphen to en dash for "2018-19 season" and link appropriately  Done
""a guy that you can count on in every situation."" → ""a guy that you can count on in every situation"." per MOS:LQ  Done
The sentence about his three career playoff game-winning goals needs some explanation; we jump from CBJ making the playoffs to that, and I'm not sure what team these GWGs are against
Link alternate captain  Done


### International play
The link to the Denmark junior team should be in the second sentence, not the third  Done
Mention that he also made a senior appearance in 2015  Done


### Awards and honours
Reference needed here for Calder Cup MVP  Done


### References
[2] (Rob Mixer) is missing "National Hockey League" in the publisher parameter  Done
[4] (Columbus Alive), [33] (Columbus Dispatch), and [45] (Toronto Star) should be the work param, not publisher  Done
Per MOS:ALLCAPS, [7] (Central Scouting), [15] (WHL championship series), [43] (Denmark sweeps), and [47] (Olympic dreams) should be in title case, not all caps  Done
[39] is different from the rest of the NHL press releases -- it has CBJ as the work and no publisher  Done


### General comments
Photos are properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig freaked out a little about the stats. Some WP:LIMITED areas noted above
That's what I've got! Putting on hold for now, feel free to ping me with Q's. — GhostRiver 19:26, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

GhostRiver, so sorry to add to your workload but I seem to have missed the 2020–21 season because of the confusing dates. I am currently expanding it and it will need a review. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:00, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Made a couple of small aesthetic changes on my own, and now I think it looks ready to pass! — GhostRiver 17:50, 6 November 2021 (UTC)