# Talk:Final Fantasy concerts

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Overall, this was a pleasure to read. Only real qualm I have is that the last sentence in the "20020220 Music from Final Fantasy" section isn't referenced, but isn't a breaker by any means. The Square Enix Music online editor commentaries bug me a little too because we don't have the full names of those reviewers, but looking at the contributor history for them I'm inclined to let that slide too...though with the recommendation that they could be phased out to avoid possible GAR issues as standards increase.
All in all, it's a good centerpiece and testament to your other articles, and informative. GA approved.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 09:14, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Thank you!  The 20020220 thing has been taken care of, the ref before the sentence covered that info as well. --PresN 22:55, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

Hello,
I'm afraid there is a mistake in the article. 20020220 Music from Final Fantasy is said to be the first official concert devoted to music from Final Fantasy. Still, I come across [1], which dates back to 1989 ! Zandra[Moa ?] 15:10, 24 October 2009 (UTC)  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.16.161.237 (talk)  

Ugh, what a pain. Good catch, I really should have noticed that. --PresN 18:52, 24 October 2009 (UTC)

"Tour de Japon" had its own, dedicated page, it is now gone. This page contained much more information than the condensed paragraph in this page.
This is a pity.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.152.6.147 (talk) 00:57, 7 November 2009 (UTC) 
[2]It actually had less information, thanks for checking. --PresN 02:31, 7 November 2009 (UTC)

Was checking the page to see if the Orchestra playing the NYC concert in April 2011 was listed, and noticed that the NYC concert isn't even on the page!
Reference: http://www.ffdistantworlds.com/index.php?option=com_eventlist&view=details&id=34:new-york-april-1-a-2-2011&Itemid=62
108.41.83.225 (talk) 07:36, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, added that and some others that were missing. --PresN 08:06, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

Is there any way to prevent line breaks occuring in "J-E-N-O-V-A"? Is there a non-breaking dash, like there is a non-breaking space? --212.201.70.192 (talk) 07:41, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

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