# Talk:Elizabeth Parish

This review is transcluded from Talk:Elizabeth Parish/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 20:26, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Hi @Kusma, I'll be reviewing this article using the table below. Comments to follow soon! Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 20:26, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Hi again @Kusma, I have completed the initial review. If you have any questions about my questions do let me know :) Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 22:48, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for the quick and thorough review! I have made some responses and will try to find out more about the Ordnance business. —Kusma (talk) 11:39, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
Hi @Kusma, thanks for addressing everything so promptly. As mentioned in the table below, I think the link to Board of Ordnance is sufficient for the GA review, but I appreciate you finding out more info, which I think will improve the article even more. As for the Legacy section, see my suggestion in the table and let me know what you think :) Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 12:24, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
@User:Unexpectedlydian, thanks again for the prompt service :) See the most recent diff and my comments below; I am happy to tweak further if you have an idea for improvement. —Kusma (talk) 16:32, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
@Kusma I like your solutions. Happy to pass the article now! Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽