# Talk:Hard Rock (exercise)

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Nominator: Dumelow (talk · contribs) 09:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:33, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
I'll do this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 10:33, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
My comments as follows:
Lead
Link: civil defence, Conservative government (i.e. First Thatcher ministry), local authorities, Labour Party

Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Planning

During this period of the Cold War,...: what is 'this period'?
I've rewritten this a bit and added some detail as I struggled to word it right without implying that civil defence exercises hadn't included a nuclear element before the mid 1970s.  Hopefully it makes sense now? - Dumelow (talk) 09:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Link 'British government' (but not to Thatcher ministry, I think you mean this more generically), civil defence, Home Office
Done -  Dumelow (talk) 09:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
other British civil defence conducted in the 1970s: looks to be a missing word here, perhaps 'exercise' after 'defence'?
Yep, done -  Dumelow (talk) 09:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Hard Rock planner : presumably the identity is not known? Would it have been one person or a group as I am wondering whether 'planners' would be more appropriate?
Yeah, I think you're right.  I changed to planners -  Dumelow (talk) 09:22, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Not sure if your preference is to link cities or not, but consider linking Holy Loch and Faslane at least.
Yeah, my preference is not to link all the cities in that long list.  I have linked the two submarine bases and clarified that one of them was used only by the US at this point - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Also write out and link NATO on first mention
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
link Ministry of Defence
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
The issue of the Protect and Survive booklet to the public: should that be the 'latest' issue?
I meant it as the verb form, I've changed it to "issuing", does that make more sense? - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
link Open University, Stan Openshaw, Newcastle University. No link for Philip Steadman but could he be worth redlinking?
Agreed and done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Exercise

At 8 pm on 2 October...: 'At 8:00 pm' for consistency with other time mentioned
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Opposition and local authority refusals

The Labour Party National Executive Committee had, in June 1981... add the NEC abbreviation since it is used later.
Done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Legacy

Link House of Lords
done - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Other stuff

Sources look to be of good quality
Spot checks: Cite 6 should be to page 245 of Arnold, not 244; Cite 7 OK, Cite 10 OK, Cite 16 OK, Cite 22 OK. The url for cite 12 doesn't work but the archive url does
Fixed Arnold page no - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Image tags OK
No dupe links
That's it for me. I believe that this is in good order, my comments are mostly nitpicks. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

Hi Zawed thanks for your review, much appreciated.  I think I have addressed everything you raised? - Dumelow (talk) 09:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Looks good, am passing as GA as I believe that this article meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:28, 9 January 2025 (UTC)