# Talk:Kenya at the 1998 Winter Olympics

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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Taking, will post full review within an hour. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 23:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)


### Review
"Kenya first competed in the Summer Olympics in Melbourne, Australia" - mention it was in 1956
"participated on nine" → "participated in the Summer Olympics on nine"
"Both Boit and Henry Bitok were a runner" → what?
"each runner" → "both athletes"
Both the "-" should be a "—"
"welcoming as he" → "welcoming him as he"


### Overall
Nice article, putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 03:10, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

@Yellow Dingo: Thanks for reviewing. A couple of those errors were because I thought I'd finished the article and then found out that there was a second Kenyan who tried to qualify - so changing a couple of the singulars to plurals got missed. I've run the dash tool to fix those issues - I'd meant to prior to nominating but it got late and I forgot. Miyagawa (talk) 09:31, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
Ok, good job. I'm happy to pass this. Congrats! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:34, 22 October 2016 (UTC)