# Talk:Island No. 2

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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 12:12, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article. My goal is to knock it out today. --Cerebellum (talk) 12:12, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

This was a fun article to review :) I'm amazed how gossipy the Napa Weekly Journal was! Pass, two minor suggestions for improvement below. --Cerebellum (talk) 16:26, 13 January 2022 (UTC)


### Criteria
Prose: Article is well written and complies with the MOS.
References: Article is thoroughly referenced to high-quality sources.  Great use of old newspapers to tell a fun story! I was concerned about the citations to maps in the last paragraph, I thought it might be OR.  But after reading WP:MAPCITE I am convinced by the argument that describing what a map shows is not OR. I recommend removing ref #2 from the lead, it's not necessary and doesn't really support the first sentence since it doesn't say the island is submerged, and on the map it's labeled "NRU Pond 2".
Coverage: Good, I recommend mentioning in the Geography section the size of the island.
Neutral: Yes.
Stable: Yes.
Illustrated: Yes, images are correctly licensed and captioned. --Cerebellum (talk) 16:26, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

jp×g🗯️ 06:19, 20 January 2024 (UTC)

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