# Talk:Club Harlem

The coordinates and map location for Club Harlem in infobox are several blocks from Kentucky Avenue.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bunkyray5 (talk • contribs) 01:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC) 

Originally, I had to clip the news story from the Altoona Mirror in 2 segments due to display issues at newspaperarchive.com.  When I went back to look for something else, I found that the last half of the news story was displaying here as a ref link as "Image not found".  A complete copy of the story is now hosted elsewhere as the article's ref. We hope (talk) 20:54, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Club Harlem/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### History
"Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania  Done
"It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?
I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
"and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees?  Done
Adelaide, Australia is a dab link  Done
Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability  Done


### Shows
"The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency  Done
"Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto  Done
"in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6  Done
"and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in  Done
"to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang  Done


### Final years and demolition
I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead  Done


### References
no dead links
Nice work by everyone who worked on this article. On hold until my points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Thanks again We hope for taking action quickly. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 14:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

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