# Talk:Mark Soyer

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 23:03, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 23:03, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"and was trying to secure a spot for the 2014 Winter Paralympics." 2014 WP can be linked, I presume an article will be made soon if not already.
Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
"Soyer was diagnosed leukemia and doctors" diagnosed with
Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
"Soyer trains at Mt Hotham" Is there a period after Mt? I'd think so but in Aus. English there might not be, so checking.
Not in Australian English, no. The rule is that there is no dot if it ends with the last letter. Changed to "Mount Hotham" and linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
"and in Colorado in the United States." Not sure if US is needed. Might be helpful but feels just tacked on.
It balances the "in Australia". Colorado is linked in the previous paragraph, but many Australians will think of it as a sportswear chain. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
Any updates on the 2014 paralympics training besides that he's trying to earn a spot?
Not yet. Saw him in December. La Molina in Spain in a few weeks time is make-or-break. I'll update the article then. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
"That year, Liberty Skis signed" the Liberty.
Uh, no. Changed to "Liberty Skis Corporation". Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 00:06, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:52, 30 January 2013 (UTC)
Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 03:03, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

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