# Talk:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa

It does not seem possible, that she was laid down in January 1898 and launched on 6 July the same year. One Russian book says she was laid down on 6 January 1897 ((А.С. Александров, С.А. Балакин: „Асама” и другие. Японские броненосные крейсера программы 1895-1896г.), series Morskaya Kampania 1/2006  Pibwl ←« 00:31, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

You are correct - there was a typo on the date, which is now fixed. --MChew (talk) 06:54, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
Interesting, that 1898 appears in very many publications... Pibwl ←« 00:23, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:12, 5 May 2015 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
One dupe link in the lead
Watch ENGVAR, I see armor and armour
I'd probably pipe the link to Steregushchiy so it matches the other ships mentioned in the article.
"Tokiwa was third of six when..." - I know you're talking about Togo's line, but most will not.
Added "in line", but I'm not sure if I should clarify that it's of the 2nd Division. What do you think?
You could also pipe line of battle in - though I saw another reference to this earlier in the article, so the link should probably go there.
Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Probably ought to give some context on the arrival of the 2nd Pacific Squadron - otherwise, readers will assume it's the ships from Port Arthur and Vladivostok
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
File:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa.jpg - need a source for this
Could find a source on Google image, but I'm not to concerned about this since it's obviously a postcard.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Thanks for looking this over; now I've got to go and make changes to all the other articles from which I copy-pasted major sections! I think that I've dealt with all your comments, let me know if there's anything that I missed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:03, 5 May 2015 (UTC)

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