# Talk:Francis Gleeson (priest)

....on an interesting DYK! 
Expression.   The following sentences use the word "returned" repeatedly and could be better expressed. 

At the end of his year's service in 1915 Gleeson returned to Dublin and became a curate but returned to the army in 1917 and remained for a further two years. After the war he returned to Ireland, becoming a priest at churches near to Dublin and being elected canon of the Metropolitan Chapter of the Archdiocese of Dublin before his death on 26 June 1959.
Amandajm (talk) 22:03, 15 December 2011 (UTC)

Cheers!  Just noticed this and made a couple of changes to (hopefully) make it read better - Dumelow (talk) 11:01, 17 February 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Francis Gleeson (priest)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Canadian Paul (talk · contribs) 20:57, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article in the near future, most on Monday, but I will be mindful of the nominator's comment that they are only able to address concerns on weekends. Canadian Paul 20:57, 19 February 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Definitely meets the Good Article criteria, as there were only one or two minor issues that I fixed up myself. This is the first GA I've ever passed without putting on hold first, so congratulations and thank you for your hard work! Canadian Paul 16:28, 21 February 2012 (UTC)

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