# Talk:Busher Jackson

I {{fact}} tagged it because James Marsh's  "Jackson, Henry", in The Canadian Encyclopedia (Edmonton: Hurtig Publishers, 1988), Volume 2, p.1102, calls him "Henry".  TREKphiler hit me ♠  05:38, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 14:48, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article later today. Wizardman 14:48, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

Not sure if playmaker should be linked, it's mostly presumed what it is.
I actually didn't find anything else, so I'll read this again tomorrow to make sure I didn't miss anything. Wizardman 03:29, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

Cool, thanks.  I linked playmaker because I've had people unfamiliar with such terms ask for links.  Though unless I create an actual article for it, it is of limited value here.  I've no issue with removing the link. Resolute 13:52, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
The last two sentences in the playing career may need restructuring. It mentions the Stanley cup, then notes that he played one more season that same year; that part should go before the Cup note to prevent confusion.
Only issue I found on a re-read, so article's now on hold. Wizardman 16:09, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

That bit is confusing because I typoed the date.  He appeared in the 1943 Finals, then played one last season in 1943-44.  I've corrected this.  Thanks, Resolute 22:24, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
Makes sense now; article now passes. Wizardman 15:34, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
Excellent!  Thanks for the review! Resolute 16:45, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

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