# Talk:Gunther E. Rothenberg

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
I'm assuming that the Villa de Madrid is a passenger ship of some sort, but can you clarify please?
"Rothenberg completed with a bachelor's degree from" doesn't sound right to me. Maybe graduated or something similar instead of completed (or, this could just be a phrase I don't run into writing my Kaiserliche Marine articles ;) 
fixed.
You should specify what his muzzle-loaders were. Many people would probably know what you're talking about, but many would not.
I believe keynote is one word (the last paragraph in the Education & Career section).
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
This edit by another editor needs to be either sourced or removed (more than likely just reverted, given the peacock-ery going on there).
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
See the diff linked above.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Are there no pictures available? Since he passed away in 2004, a copyrighted photo of him would qualify for Fair Use. If you can't find a photo, that's no big deal though.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Excellent work on this article, Ruth. There are just a few things that need to be ironed out before I'll pass the article for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)