# Talk:May Declaration

"Of course, this declaration was rejected. That only added more displeasure to Slovenian people."
Definitely not WP:NPOV. Chris the Paleontologist (talk • contribs) 22:43, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

yup, tis gone. ϢereSpielChequers 23:26, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:May Declaration/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:48, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"Austria–Hungary" en-dash or not?  I see both variants here.
Should be hyphen, changed (T)
The map (on my screen) is to the left of the bottom of the infobox so practically halves the width of the screen for text.
Reformatted, hopefully appears better now (it does on my screen) (T)
Surprised that the author's name is not mentioned in the lead?
Added now (T)
"the United States, whose " not sure we need to link this.
You're right, that's overlinking (T)
"Anton Korošec, led the..." image caption is a complete sentence so needs a full stop.
Added for this and the one noted below (T)
"the Roman Catholic Zagreb Archbishop Antun Bauer" sea of blue.
Rephrased to move links apart (T)
"Ante Trumbić led the..." also needs a full stop.
Ref 3 should be pp.
Changed as suggested (T)
Pavlowitch's year range needs an en-dash.
Replaced with endash (T)
That's all I can find. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
The Rambling Man thank you for the review. I think I have addressed all the concerns set out above. I have reformatted the map to display as a standard image with a caption, so I expect it displays better now. Could you please have another look? Cheers--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:12, 12 September 2021 (UTC)