# Talk:Nahikari García

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

I should have this done by Sunday JAGUAR  11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
The lead needs expanding quite a bit to summarise the article's body
" The programme wasn't solely football based" - was not
"She ended the campaign with 10 goals to her name for the season" - can this have a citation?
"García has worn the number 7 jersey for both club and country" - missing word?
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

The lead definitely needs expanding before I can promote this. I also picked out a couple of minor issues but other than that the article is solid.  JAGUAR  18:25, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jaguar, thanks a lot for the review of this article, and for the others you assisted with. It is greatly appreciated. I have extended the lede a bit. Let me know if that is enough. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 22:20, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
Thank you for expanding the lead! There's nothing else outstanding, so I'll promote this now. It's generally well written and comprehensive for the subject.  JAGUAR  10:05, 4 June 2017 (UTC)