# Talk:Millennium season 3

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:05, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

Infobox: Picture, maybe? Not needed, but it would look nice. :)
Added. Does look good. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Infobox: DVD release?
Added region one, it's mentioned in the DVD Talk source if you want it cited. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Intro: "...concluding" -> "and concluded"
Done. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Intro: "organisation" -> "organization" just to Americanize it
Good catch. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Intro: "but after the Group unleashes a virus that resulted in the death of Black's wife, he leaves." Should this be in past or present tense? Didn't the virus get released at the end of season two?
Reworded. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Intro: emdash after "Johannessen"
Left as is; that last bit about writing is intended to be part of the same aside, and wouldn't work if it's not kept with the names. It's "two new producers (X and Y, who wrote too)" rather than "two new producers who also wrote (X and Y)", which a second dash would essentially make it. I'm confusing myself here. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Intro: "generally positive reviews from critics" I thought this season was pretty trashed by people, or is that just the fan opinion?
Fan opinion definitely holds it as the weakest season but that's usually hinged on how poorly Hollis was received; the sources indicate a higher opinion of it but if more reviews turn up I can always change this bit. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Production: "they wanted" Maybe "the writers wanted"
Added. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Production: I think "with" should be added to the end of the last sentence of the first paragraphs
Having a brain fart here, not sure where you want it added. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Production: I would add a citation after every direct quote.
Think I've got this, let me know if I've missed any. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Out of curiosity, are there any ratings numbers?
Could probably turn some up (they're patchy for season 2 though but I can have a look). What would you want done with them? I'm unlikely to be able to find a complete record though so an average would be inaccurate. GRAPPLE X 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
Not a big deal. Maybe just premiere and finale ratings. That kind of stuff. Maybe how it finished in the Nielsen ratings.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:39, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
That's all I have. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  23:50, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for having a look at this one for me. 23:50, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
All the concerns were fixed or addressed, so I will pass this! Good job!--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:40, 5 November 2012 (UTC)

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