# Talk:Juan Astorquia

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Nominator: Barr Theo (talk · contribs) 00:18, 18 April 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Lucfev (talk · contribs) 09:52, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be reviewing this one. Lucfev (talk) 09:52, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

All the issues cited below have been corrected (This is my first-ever GA nom, so I'm not sure if this is where I'm suppose to reply?). Barr Theo (talk) 12:48, 21 April 2025 (UTC)
You can just reply to my comments below the table. After a source spot-check, I will be ready to pass the article. Lucfev (talk) 13:57, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

Done! Thanks for you work. Barr Theo (talk) 20:35, 21 April 2025 (UTC)


### Initial comments
I don't speak Spanish so I will be using machine translation when checking the sources.
Article is stable.
I am unable to check source 13 as it requires me to have an account, if it is a paywall then add url-access=subscription, no problem if it isn't.


### Lead
The lead section seems alright, although I am uncertain about the amount of citations there (see this). You don't need sources 3, 4 and 5 in the lead.
In the infobox, add a citation to the full name, which should be Juan José Astorquia Landabaso instead of Juan Juan Astorquia Landabaso.
The games played and goals scored don't seem right, and it is unclear where you got the numbers from. I think it would be better to leave them blank.


### Prose
I think Balbainos in the Early career section is a typo and should be Bilbaínos.
José Maria Barquín is spelt wrong in the Foundation of Athletic section (there should be an accent on the i in Maria).
Remove the word infamous in the following paragraph, does not sound very neutral.
Use full names in the Club Bizcaya section where it says (Langford, Dyer, Butwell and Evans).
In the Death section, both is not necessary where it says both became legends of Basque football.
Add citations in the Honours section.
It refers to Alejandro de la Sota by a different name each time (first la Sota, then de la Sota and finally Sota). Apart from when you first mention him, I think replace the instances of his name with De la Sota.
The sentence Since the figure of coach as we know it today did not exist at the time is repeated, reword it the second time.


### Sources
Checking sources 3, 4, 5, 6, 10, 12, 18, 24 and 31.
Sources 4 and 31 are dead, 4 already has an archive so set its url status to dead, 31 has an archive here. The rest seem fine. Once you carry out the changes I will pass the article.