# Talk:Nostos: The Return

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
The poster has various performers that should be included in the infobox per its billing block. These actors that are not included and are missing from the article, in order, are Paola Agosti, Giuseppe Marcoli, Alex Carozzo, and Mariella Fabbris.
I added the actors to the production section and Branca De Camargo to the infobox, because her name is written above the rest on the poster. I'm reluctant to put other actors in the starring field, because they all have tiny roles.
Per the rules of the infobox template, use "{{Plainlist|" instead of "<br/>" when adding multiple entries.
Done
The running time needs a reference per consistency with other GA-articles.
Done
Add a comma after "preparing, filming".
Done
"lyrical version Homer's" → "lyrical version of Homer's"
Done


### Plot
Per the rules presented at WP:FILMPLOT, I suggest doing either two things: (1) Remove "(Luigi Mezzanotte [it])" and "(Branca De Camargo)" from this section and add a cast section with all the actors in the billing block and those with important roles, or (2) add the names of each actor in this section, including the ship's crew and the various woman mentioned in the summary. Overall, I would prefer if you did the first option to have consistency with other articles.
This could be difficult. The movie lists six actor names and a theatre group in the opening credits, but no character is named and there are only really two roles that sources comment on (as mentioned above, the rest are tiny). I might be able to figure out who play the crew etc but it would be original research. I've removed the lead actors from the plot and added their roles to the production section instead. Does that solve the problem?
With that in mind, the word count is in great condition at 424 words, passing WP:MOVIEPLOTS.
It would. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:36, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
"his crew are missing" → "his crew is missing" or "his crew missing"
Done
Remove the comma after "fauna of the location".
Done
In the note after "seduce her", add a comma after Circe.
Done


### Themes and analysis
Add commas after "knowledge", "birthright", "homeland, childhood", "whereas", "Sanskrit", "wide shots", "animals", and "Darwinism".
Done
Remove the commas after "war and violence", "approach to language", and "human communication".
Done
"had a both" → "had both a" or "having both a"
Done
"embryotic" → "embryonic"
Done
"According the" → "According to the"
Done


### Production
Add commas after "painting", "Brescia", "editor", and "Rudolf Maros".
Done
Remove the comma after "control over the production".
Done


### Release
This section looks good.


### Reception
Remove the commas after "poetic cinema" and "boring".
Done
"wrote the film contains" → "wrote that the film contains"
Done


### References
Citations are in excellent shape.


### Progress
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thank you very much for the review! I've addressed your concerns, with a couple of comments above. Ffranc (talk) 09:37, 7 March 2021 (UTC)