# Talk:HMS Manners (1915)

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:13, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 20:06, 23 June 2025 (UTC)

I would mention the ship was British somewhere in the lead - most people will probably know what country the Royal Navy belonged to, but not everyone will.
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Link sea trial
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"the first of the name to serve with the Royal Navy with the name." - I think you might have rewritten that in your head halfway though ;)
Absolutely. Fixed.
Link Action of 19 August 1916
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Jellicoe is not cited, and could be removed (or moved to a further reading section)
Added the referenced sentence.
Image copyright checks out - no action needed
Thank you.
Not much, just a few nitpicks. Great work! Parsecboy (talk) 10:28, 24 June 2025 (UTC)

@Parsecboy: Thank you for a diligent review. I believe the changes have been done. simongraham (talk) 07:19, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
Excellent work, I'm happy to pass the article now. Parsecboy (talk) 13:49, 30 June 2025 (UTC)