# Talk:Lena Anthem

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 16:42, 10 April 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox
Add the radio edit lenght and state the difference between both
 Done


### Lead
through Columbia and Sony Music → through Columbia and Sony Music via digital download and CD single
Removed the digital download thing altogheter, as they were not a thing back then. The digital version is just the CD single converted to digital outlets, I realized. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
Mention Tim Norell
The sample is mentioned, I don't think he is that important. He is not credited on the CD single, just in the album credits. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
The song also attained top-ten positions on the Svensktoppen and Trackslistan charts → remove (see below)
You can mention a live performance or two
Added one. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done


### Background
Seem fine.


### Composition and lyrics
Fine


### Critical reception
AllMusic → wikilink
Already linked in the section above. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
I missed it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:55, 12 April 2020 (UTC)


### Chart performance
noted as "surprising" → why surprasing?
Removed. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
The song charted in the top-ten for nine weeks → The song spent nine weeks in the top-ten
Done.
"Lena Anthem" debuted at number five on the Svensktoppen chart on 28 November 2004, after being a contender the week before." → I wonder if this is relevant as a chart, it doesn't seem like. Secondly a conter for what?
A contender to enter the chart, it "bubbled under" in a way. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
"The song also charted on Trackslistan, where it debuted and peaked at number seven" → same as previous, these are just radio charts for diferent stations, not relevant.
Both Svensktoppen and Trackslistan were considered by record labels to be highly important for Swedish-language singers back in the day. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
You should state that, along with the link. It's quite importat so there is a context and the reason why is not on the table below. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:57, 12 April 2020 (UTC)


### Live performances
Don't wikilink red links
Template:Interlanguage link multi creates a red link. Krogshow doesn't have an English equivalent. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
There are some instances of Sweedenthat make hard to understand the meaning of the sentences. "f her 2011 krogshow [sv] Min drömshow – 25 år som artist" and  "performed the song on her 2016 krogshow Jag är ingen älskling."
 Done


### Track listing
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the tracks and their lenght
 Done


### Credits and personnel
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel
Done.
Tim Norell → he received a songwriter credit
Revised in "Composition and lyrics", he received a music credit only. Swedish credits are usually split into music and lyrics, which are different components of songwriting. Pancake (talk) 17:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done


### Charts
Fine.


### Release history
Don't link the labels
 Done


### References
As per nominator below


### External links
Fine


### Overall
Don't address any comments until I say so.
Please note that Retriever Research appears to be having some technical difficulties atm. I don't know, the articles work fine when I'm logged in but the URLs seem to be off. I will try to fix it. Pancake (talk) 18:40, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
Yeah they work when logged in only due to copyright stuff. Added (subscription required) tags. Pancake (talk) 19:17, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
@PancakeMistake: I left you something on the Chart performance. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:02, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Added info about the charts. Pancake (talk) 18:25, 12 April 2020 (UTC)