# Talk:League of Nations (professional wrestling)

Which source supports this role of his? Ranze (talk) 02:35, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of The League of Nations (professional wrestling)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "OWOW":
From The Dudley Boyz: "LAX profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved 2009-04-03.
From Jack Swagger: "Jack Swagger Profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved January 28, 2008.
From Stone Cold Steve Austin: ""Stone Cold" Steve Austin at Online World of Wrestling".
From Mick Foley: "Mick Foley's profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved April 14, 2008.
From Bray Wyatt: "Bray Wyatt profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved June 17, 2013.
From John Cena: "John Cena profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved July 3, 2007.
From Brock Lesnar: "Brock Lesnar profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved April 22, 2007.
From Xavier Woods: "Austin Creed profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved August 19, 2008.
From Alberto Del Rio: "Alberto Del Rio". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved 2010-08-30.
From Ryback: "Ryback profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved September 18, 2015.
From The Usos: "The Uso Brothers – Online World of Wrestling". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved July 9, 2011.
From Sami Zayn: "El Generico Profile". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved 2009-10-11.
From Seth Rollins: "Seth Rollins". Online World of Wrestling. Retrieved August 9, 2010.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 03:05, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:League of Nations (professional wrestling)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
Shall be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Irishman, Mexican, Bulgarian, Englishman and United States should generally not be linked per MOS:OVERLINK
"and come together to proudly represent their respective nations" - banded
"The faction primarily feuded with Roman Reigns and was poorly received by critics." - perhaps it would help to briefly state why critics disliked the group
Thanks for taking this on! I've just started these fixes but will be on and off here throughout the day.LM2000 (talk) 17:08, 11 April 2020 (UTC)


### History
Delink United States per MOS:OVERLINK
"individual members of The League of Nations also feuded individually with other wrestlers during this period," - try to avoid close repetition of similarly spelled wording such as the one highlighted in bold
"Both of these rivalries culminated in matches at TLC: Tables, Ladders & Chairs, where all of the League members successful in their separate singles matches" - repetition of the word "matches"
"Sheamus' WWE World Heavyweight Championship run ended the following night on Raw when he lost the championship back to Reigns," - how about changing the word in bold to "title" to avoid repetition of the same word in the same sentence
"Del Rio and Rusev were defeated by Big E and Woods in another title match, prompting all four members of The League to attack The New Day after the match." - same issue as above
"Their feud with The Wyatt Family was cut short because Bray Wyatt suffered a legitimate injury." - maybe add the event on which Bray Wyatt sustained his injury
"Del Rio also confirmed in an interview that the group was finished," - was disbanded,
Done. For the record, the source I used for Wyatt's injury did not credit an author.LM2000 (talk) 21:55, 11 April 2020 (UTC)


### Reception
"Pro Wrestling Dot Net writer Haydn Gleed criticized how WWE wasted the four men's combined potential" - more formal; squandered
"In an interview shortly after his departure from the company," - you mean he left WWE?
"caused Alberto Del Rio's stock to drop" - avoid using idioms per MOS:IDIOM and rewrite it so that it is more formal


### References
 References 3 and 23 are missing the authors and publication dates of the respective articles
Reference 9 have the forename and surname in the wrong order
The link of Reference 18 directs to another article. Please fix this issue
Reference 16 is missing the author and the access date
Reference 24 is missing the author who wrote the article
International Business Times has been deemed a "generally unreliable source" per WP:RSP. Please replace it where possible with another source that states the information the IBT already verifies
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:33, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for your time, I have completed your suggestions.LM2000 (talk) 21:31, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
@LM2000: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:46, 13 April 2020 (UTC)