# Talk:Brian David Gilbert

It seems like whoever wrote much of the biography starts the sentences with the same word "He" over and over. Have edited it, but to what standard is this page's quality actually being held? There are awkward grammar choices made all over this thing.
This issue mostly presented between the opening paragraph and early life, boldly edited these issues, but was more curious as to how it went so long looking this badly written. MaddWiki (talk) 10:47, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

Hi, it looks like you're new here, so welcome to Wikipedia! You did a good job making the lead read better, but I wanted to point you to Wikipedia's manual of style, specifically our guideline on words to watch. You began a sentence with "His most notable previous work..." which is considered editorializing by this guideline. Also, a statement like "He is currently the fact checker..." is proscribed because it'll become a dated statement in the near future. I know some of these rules might not seem obvious, and they're not intended to be exact rules, but they aim for a certain level of consistency in style. Thanks for helping to improve this article! — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 17:00, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

I've removed the link to Jonah Scott, as the voice actor described in that article appears (based on photos and lack of any connecting information) to be a different person than the musician Jonah Scott of The Altogether, who's referenced in this article. Craftykids (talk) 00:06, 3 July 2025 (UTC)