# Talk:Ira Valentine

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
I changed the weight in the infobox from 210 to 212 to match PFA and PFR
"letter-of-intent" link to National Letter of Intent
Done.
"Oilers' coach" add head coach
Done.
"He survived the final roster cuts on September 7.[16] He made his NFL" Suggest merging these sentences to "roster cuts on September 7, and made his NFL debut"
Done.
Anything else on his life after football?
Added a little bit.
That first source said he lives in Longview. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:40, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Does my change work (Valentine returned to East Texas, where he grew up, after his football career ended and worked at a forging plant)? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
I added an image
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:40, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:38, 22 October 2023 (UTC)