# Talk:Johnny Papalia

This review is transcluded from Talk:Johnny Papalia/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:14, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this soon, within a couple of days... ♦ jaguar 21:14, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

Extradition
" Bluestein's Lakeview Club did more than $13 million a year" - earned
"On March 11, 1963, he was found guilty, and sentenced to 10 years despite coughing up blood due to the tuberculosis he contracted as a child" - what does him coughing up blood have to do with the sentencing?
Post-release
"While he was in jail, his father died on May 14, 1964, with his mother dying on July 27, 1970" - might flow better as His father died on May 14, 1964 while was in jail, while his mother died on July 27, 1970
"mobsters Vincenzo Cotroni and Paolo Violi were over-heard" - no need for the hyphen
"After the Rizzuto crime family were not re-paid" - same here
Death
"In November 1998, Murdock pleaded guilty to three counts of second degree murder, was sentenced to life imprisonment" - missing 'and'
I couldn't find many issues with this one. It's overall well-written and structured well, so once the above are clarified this too will be good to go.  ♦ jaguar 01:06, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Done, thanks! Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 03:17, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
Thank you. Let's get this promoted.  ♦ jaguar 11:42, 28 February 2021 (UTC)