# Talk:I Don't Search I Find

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Will get started on this sometime today or tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:25, 30 June 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Cover art needs alt text
Use bullet points instead of hlist in the infobox
 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
Recording date is unsourced
"is a song recorded by American singer" → "is a song by American singer"
"for her fourteenth studio album," → "from her fourteenth studio album,"
"written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais Ahmadzaï" → "written and produced by Madonna, alongside Mirwais"
The Italy release sentence should be the following sentence instead
"as the fourth official single from Madame X" → "as the fourth single from the album" with the appropriate target
 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
Mention that the release was to contemporary hit radio with the appropriate wikilink
Also, fix the label since the source states it was through Universal
The EPs release sentence should come directly after this in the new order
"several remixes were released" → "several remixes had been released"
"It is an" → "The track is an"
"influenced track that takes inspiration" → "influenced song that takes inspiration"
 Not done Change to "It is an..." instead since you just stated "the song" shortly before, but change "the song" to "the track" for consistency --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
Target house to House music
 Not done I meant keep the prose the same but change the target --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"previous works such as" → "previous works, including"
"received positive feedback from" → "received generally positive reviews from" since not all were positive
"and deemed it one of the best tracks from the album" → "and deemed the track one of the best songs from Madame X"
"also gave Madonna her record-breaking" → "gave Madonna her record-breaking"
"on Billboard's Dance Club Songs chart" → "on the US Billboard Dance Club Songs chart"
Target UK Single Sales to UK music charts and change to UK Singles Sales
"it reached number 66" → "the track reached number 66"
"The song was performed on the singer's" → "It was performed on Madonna's"
 Done


### Background and composition
First para looks good
"was written and produced by Madonna and Mirwais" → "was written by Madonna and Mirwais, who also handled production"
"It takes its title after a quote by" → "The track takes its title after a quote by"
"and a "rumbling" bass line;" → "and "rumbling" bassline;" with the wikilink
 Not done a is not needed before "rumbling" in this context --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"it draws influence from Madonna's previous works such as" → "the track draws influence from Madonna's previous works, such as"
 Not done where is the comma? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"tone, the phrase" → "tone, she repeats the phrase"
"Also present is a" → "Also included is a"
"sample taken from" → "sample, taken from" with the target
 Not done where is the target fix? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"inside your soul" Madonna was" → "inside your soul", Madonna was"
 Done


### Release and critical reception
"On December 2019, an" → "On December 6, 2019, an"
"featuring three remixes created by" → "featuring three remixes of the song created by"
"was distributed to digital retailers" → "was released for digital download and streaming through Interscope Records"
"An additional EP − featuring remixes" → "An additional EP that includes remixes"
"DJ Kue and Offer Nissim − was" → "DJ Kue, and Offer Nissim was"
"on May 2, 2020" → "on May 2, 2020 by the aforementioned label"
"In Italy, "I Don't Search I Find" was released" → "In Italy, Universal Music Group released "I Don't Search I Find""
"the fourth official single from" → "the fourth single from" with the target
 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"Upon release, the single received positive from" → "The song was met with generally positive reviews from"
"and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
"isn’t a song so much as a mood. It’s" → "isn't a song so much as a mood. It's"
"for a quick bump or fuck"." → "for a quick bump or fuck."" since punctuation should be inside quotes for full sentences
"from NME, also compared it" → "from NME also compared the song"
"Jeremy Halliger, from" → "Jeremy Halliger, writing for"
"said it was" → "said the song was"
"’90s disco bliss, the album’s" → "'90s disco bliss, the album's"
"from the BBC, felt it" → "from the BBC felt it"
"and compared it to" → "and compared the song to"
"opined that, "once it gets going" → "opined that "once it gets going"
"'I Don’t Search I Find' is a class of its own. It’s like" → "'I Don't Search I Find' is a class of its own" and described it as "like"
"deemed the second best song on the album;" → "deemed the song the second best track on Madame X:"
"it’d be this" → "it'd be this"
"On her review of" → "In her review of"
"from The Independent, described" → "from The Independent described"
"between Nina Simone’s" → "between Nina Simone's"
Are you sure there aren't any targets for Bond in the context?
Do you suggest I wikilink it to James Bond music?--Christian (talk) 15:46, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
Yeah, that sounds right. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"of the fiercest ‘90s dance" → "of the fiercest '90s dance" with the target
"since, well, the ‘90s?"." → "since" the 1990s decade."
"from The Irish Times, stated that" → "from The Irish Times stated of Madonna's performance that"
"'I Don’t Search I Find', complete" → "'I Don't Search I Find', complete"
Target mid-tempo to Tempo
"'I Don’t Search I Find'", comparing it" → "'I Don't Search I Find'", comparing the track"
"the eight best song of 2019" → "the eighth best song of 2019"
 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"even though it’s a clear" → "even though it's a clear"
"it’s the closest thing" → "it's the closest thing"
 Done


### Commercial reception and live performance
Mention the debut position; add a source if needed
"reached the first position" → "reached the summit"
"number-one songs in a single" → "number one songs on a single"
 Not done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
"The song also peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart on the same week it topped the Dance Club Songs chart." → "That same week, the song peaked at number 30 on the Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
"entered the singles sales chart" → "entered the Singles Sales chart" with the target
"the fifth position of the" → "the fifth position on the"
[28][29] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
"was included on Madonna's" → "was featured on Madonna's"
"and featured the singer" → "and featured the singer performing"
"expressed that "[Madonna] embodied" → "expressed that Madonna "embodied"
Wikilink music video to itself
 Done


### Track listing
Retitle to Track listings
Target on Honey Dijon should only be under the actual track listing and not in the title
 Done


### Credits and personnel
Wikilink Madonna to herself
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel
Target vocals to Singing
 Done


### Charts
Good


### Release history
Target Digital download to Music download on the first mention
Ditto for streaming to Streaming media
The Italy release was to Universal; fix this
 Done


### See also
Good


### References
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Copyvio score looks good at 22.5%
Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 2
Cite The Ringer as publisher instead for ref 11 but keep the target
Citations regarding the Honey Dijon remixes of "I Don't Search I Find": → Citations regarding the release of the Honey Dijon remixes of "I Don't Search I Find": on ref 15
Remove target on Billboard for ref 25
Wikilink Official Charts Company to itself on ref 27
Citations regarding the remixes EP of "I Don't Search I Find": → Citations regarding the release of the remixes EP of "I Don't Search I Find": on ref 34
 Done


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold but noticed that on this occasion of me reviewing one of your articles, a lot of the issues from last time are no longer present; well picked up! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:27, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
Let me know @Kyle Peake: if I missed anything--Christian (talk) 19:22, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
Chrishm21 I will have a look through now. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:32, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: I have finally fixed those issues you mentioned --Christian (talk) 13:24, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 Pass, that was nice and quick! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:47, 1 July 2020 (UTC)