# Talk:HMS Anson (1886)

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll do this within a couple of hours. JAGUAR  11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)


### Initial comments
I feel that the lead could be expanded slightly, to summarise the article according to WP:LEADLENGTH. A sentence or two on its career should do it
"Howe recommissioned for the Home Fleet in early 1901" - how is this part relevant to the lead section or HMS Anson? Did Howe's recommissioning have some consequence for this ship?
"The ship was paid off in three years later" - just three years later
"their draught increased by another 6 inches" - convert to metric
All measurements are converted on first use only.
"by armoured tubes with walls 12 inches thick" - convert to metric
"She returned home and paid off at Devonport" - link Ship decommissioning
Linked in the lede.
No dead links
No dab links
Another short one. Just minor stuff this time, but once all are addressed then this should be good to go.  JAGUAR  11:53, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for catching these nits.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:10, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing them. Promoted.  JAGUAR  19:38, 11 April 2016 (UTC)