# Talk:Cyclone Hary

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)


### Review
Lead
Seems fine
History
Good. Sadly, the prose here would benefit from the merge of some sentences, but due to the type of the article, this could only cause confusion.
Impact
Good. The prose here flows better :)
references
Ref #3 - "(French) ﻿Track for Intense Tropical Cyclone Hary﻿ (Report)." You should use |language=french inside the {{cite web}} template.
No, the ref is in {{cite report}} because it is a report. See Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Hurricane Gert (1993)/archive1. YE  Pacific Hurricane 21:04, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll just change it. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
Ref #4 - "Retrieved 2012-10-23." The date format is different frm the rest of the article
Fixed! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

Final comments
As usual, I'd harly have to leave comments from your nominations. I only have those two comments from the references. Awaiting response. — ΛΧΣ21 20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
Thanks! Hope you enjoyed it :) --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
Yeah :) passed. — ΛΧΣ21 01:35, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

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