# Talk:Mass Effect 2: Arrival

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:30, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
"$6.99 USD " - repetition; how about "US$ 6.99"
"and elite human soldier " - do you mean "an"?
"and the fact that the pack mostly consists of linear combat sequences, " - perhaps "and too many linera combat sequences" or similar. The main issue is "the fact that the"; does not flow well
"still praiseworthy" - I would remove "still" as you only mentioned story and sequences
" in order to progress" - could be just "to progress"
"Unlike most of the missions, Arrival introduces a new mission " - repetition of "mission". It is a bit confusing, so suggest replacing one of the words
"a deep cover agent" - what does "deep" mean here?
Can you explain that Shephard "has" two genders?

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall: A few minor suggestions and issues.--Kürbis (✔) 10:32, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Pass/Fail: 

Thank you for your review -- much appreciated. I've addressed the issues you brought up. Let me know if there's anything else. --Niwi3 (talk) 10:59, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. Pass the article. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 17:25, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

 You're invited to join the discussion at Talk:Illusive Man#Request for comment. czar · · 03:07, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

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