# Talk:Food House

@Onel5969: thanks for reviewing. May I ask specifically how the sources or lead could be improved? Averageuntitleduser (talk) 11:06, 28 March 2025 (UTC)

Sure. As far as the lead, it should be a brief summary of the article.  Yours reads like it should be a paragraph in the history section.  YouTube, Twitter, and commercial sites (e.g. Redbull) are not truly reliable sources.  They can be used, but only in certain circumstances. Onel5969 TT me 11:42, 28 March 2025 (UTC)
Thanks. I've tried to remove less important details from the lead. I am not the best at leads though, so if you think you could improve it, I would appreciate that.
I think the sourcing is okay. Twitter and Instagram are used only as primary sources to verify Fraxiom and Gupi's pronouns. Apple Music is used only twice to verify release dates. This all seems to follow WP:PRIMARY. Red Bull is highlighted green per WP:VG/RS and Eli Enis has written for tons of music publications. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 16:43, 28 March 2025 (UTC)