# Talk:Hog Island (San Joaquin County)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:51, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Lead at one sentence is not an adequate summary of the article, even if it is a short article.
Y Fixed.
"USGS aerial imagery of Hog Island." fragment, no full stop.
Y Fixed.
"district.[2][3]. " remove second full stop.
Y Fixed.
"are often discussed simultaneously" what does that mean?
Y Fixed.
"100 miles" convert.
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"60 miles northwest" likewise.
Y Fixed.
"a 1910 USGS map" spell it out first time.
Y Fixed.
"in 1914.[14] A 1923 " repetitive.
Y Fixed.
"In 2007, the owners" ... and fourteen years later...?
Yg Added some information from 2011 (and at least something about the island from 2016), but information about the camping venue was surprisingly hard to track down; even county planning documents and parcel information didn't really say much.
Highest elevation appears in infobox but not in text, could add a sentence for that.
Y Fixed.
Still marked as a stub which it patently is not.
Y Fixed.
Be consistent, some of your online sources have access dates, others don't.
Y Fixed.
That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:52, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Taking a crack at this now. I will deposit whatever random links I find on the talk page, in the hopes of turning up something later than 2007. jp×g 08:30, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Okay, I have found a couple of links, but nothing especially promising (the last word anyone had on those development plans seems to have been in 2011). I will try to incorporate those; the rest of the stuff is copyediting, which I can do quickly. jp×g 09:40, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man: I've gotten around to it, what do you think? jp×g 07:13, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

https://www.google.com/search?q=site%3Ahttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.sjgov.org+%22hog+island%22 

[1], map of flood insurance rate zones (not very interesting but does show the island)
[2] This one is actually good (lists a ton of islands, including weird ones like walter, morrison, tinsley, fern, and acker)
[3] Agenda from 2002, mentions "Grant Application for Funding Hog Island Delta Center Project Coordination"
[4] No idea what this is, but it mentions a repair on 2 bunk houses, a kitchen, and a restroom on S/S Rindge Tract N/Hog Island.
[5] Same, mentions "Al Vetters Strg Bldg" on Hog Island. Not sure what this means.
[6] Interactive map of active planning applications in San Joaquin County. Nothing at Hog Island. Sad!
[7] 2014, mentions Hog Island (as well as Spud and Acker Islands) on page 28, detail on ecology
jp×g 08:31, 6 September 2021 (UTC)