# Talk:Katie Hill (basketball)

Efforts are being made to add content to this article to get it improved enough to nominate for Good Article.  Efforts to improve the article are nominally being based on the article about Lauren Jackson given the sheer amount of information available about female wheelchair basketball players when compared to other sports like goalball.  Hence, the article could really use a good copy edit, maintaining as much information as possible for the short term until all the content is in to determine what belongs and does not. The goal is to nominate the article for Good Article by the end of September.  In the mean time, the article has also been nominated for Did You Know. --LauraHale (talk) 10:49, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Katie Hill's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "APC":
From Jayme Richardson: "Jayme Paris". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 14 June 2012.
From Bridie Kean: "Bridie Kean". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 21 March 2012.
From Bryce Lindores: "Bryce Lindores". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 13 June 2012.
From Carol Cooke: "Carol Cooke". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 4 November 2012.
From Kylie Gauci: "Kylie Gauci". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 14 August 2012.
From Shelley Chaplin: "Shelley Chaplin". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 20 May 2012.
From Angie Ballard: "Angie Ballard". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 4 November 2011.
From Amanda Carter: "Amanda Carter". Australian Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 19 May 2012.
From Richard Colman: "Richard Colman". International Paralympic Committee. Retrieved 1 February 2012.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 20:53, 9 September 2013 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Katie Hill/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 16:01, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
I am reviewing this article. Here are the issues I found:

"In financial year 2012/13, the Australian Sports Commission" That's worded a little oddly to me. Is there a date they gave her the funds or is that as good as we can get?
It's about as good as we can get. But I can tell you how it works. There are two funding periods per annum, July-December and January-June. Athletes are nominated by the national sporting organizations, which put in nominations in August for the July-December allocation. If all goes well, the athletes receive their money in November or early December. The exercise is then repeated for the January-June process.
What was her role in the Paralympics, or how did she do? Any stats to add even?
Written a whole article on the Australia women's national wheelchair basketball team at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. I have plenty of statistics. I could add another table if you like. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
"The was enough to advance the Gliders to the quarter-finals" who are the Gliders? If that's the nickname for the Paralympic team, make that clearer.
All Australian national sports teams have names. We don't call them the Australian women's national wheelchair basketball team; we call them the Gliders. The name comes from the sugar glider, a native animal. The boys are the Rollers, and their standing basketball equivalents are the Opals and Boomers. Added a comment and a reference. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
My main issue is the length of the article. I know these aren't going to be all that long, but even compared to her teammates this is a really short article with very little in it. Even with just the sources you already use I'm sure you can add a bit more to the article.
I've expanded the article, doubling it in size. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
Article on hold, will take another look when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 16:01, 27 September 2013 (UTC)

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
Looks good. Made a couple tweaks after another read though, and now I feel comfortable passing the article. Wizardman 20:16, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

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