# Talk:French cruiser Davout

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:49, 11 May 2020 (UTC)


### Criteria
1. Prose  Pass
2. Verifiability  Pass
3. Depth of Coverage  Pass
4. Neutral  Pass
5. Stable  Pass
6. Illustrations  Pass
7. Miscellaneous  Pass


### Comments
1. 

"Four of the guns were mounted in sponsoned on the upper deck," - Maybe it's a technical term I'm not aware of, but sponsoned is a very odd word form. Is this a typo?
Good catch - that started out along the lines of "four of the guns were sponsoned on the upper deck" and then got rewritten but not entirely, apparently!
"but these were delayed after problems her propulsion system" - Should this be "after problems with her propulstion system"
Hmm - I had two spaces between "problems" and "her" - must have thought I typed a word when I hadn't - I must be losing my mind
Link torpedo boats
It's linked on first use in the first para of the body
2.

AGF on book sourcing
3.

Do any of the sources indicate the ship's namesake?
Nothing I've seen, unfortunately; obviously, it's Davout, but I haven't seen anything explicitly state as much
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Images are all public domain, and the tagging seems to be accurate.
7.
That's it.  Very good work.  Placing on hold, should be a very quick fix. Hog Farm (talk) 18:15, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks very much! Parsecboy (talk) 20:21, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 21:16, 11 May 2020 (UTC)