# Talk:Doctor Ox's Experiment (opera)

I contacted Gavin Bryars after I wrote most of this article because I could not find information on when Doctor Ox was broadcast and thought it must have been given it was a BBC co-commission. He has kindly provided some information which I have included in the article. I have also removed mention of the Russian performances that were mistakenly listed on the Schott site. I reproduce his email below in case there is ever a question on the accuracy of these points.

Dear Peter
The opera was broadcast on BBC Radio 3 - it was the third performance, I think, on June 24. I was away in Holland on that day so I couldn't be there.
My ensemble didn't perform it in Moscow and st petersbourg. I don't know where that can from. There was a performance of the original Epilogue version (1989) in Tallinn in october 2003 sung by Anna Maria Friman, with the NYYD E ensemble conducted by Olari Elts (I played the bass part). In November 1999 there was a performance of the duets for soprano and counter tenor from the opera, sung by Valdine Anderson and David James, in a special arrangement I made for my ensemble, at La Botanique in Brussels.
Thank you for taking the trouble - considerable trouble I would say - to create one of the very few accurate pieces of writing anywhere about my work!
With all good wishes
Gavin

--Peter cohen (talk) 00:52, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

This looks like an interesting article but it badly needs copy editing. I suggest the WP:GOCE (Guild of copy editors). Perhaps you can get some help there for the obvious issues. There are problems in formating the references. Also, every quote needs a citation immediately after it. Plus common words, like the musical instruments, shouldn't be linked.  Good luck,  MathewTownsend (talk) 21:30, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 12:38, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
Starting first read-through. More soonest. Tim riley (talk) 12:38, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
This article is in fine shape. I can't think why it's been waiting since December for consideration. A few drafting points before I go further with the review:

Lead
You mention in the lead that the piece is dedicated to the composer's mother, but you don't mention it in the main text. There should be nothing in the lead that isn't in the main text (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section). And is the dedication of a piece of enough importance to be singled out for mention in the lead?
Done.
"becomes sped up" – I can't find a modern example of "sped" for the expected "speeded" as a part participle in The Oxford English Dictionary. There are plenty of 17th century examples quoted in the OED, and I have an idea it might still pass muster in American usage, but not in modern English.
done
reference format – see ref 2: we are enjoined to put refs after, not before, punctuation marks.
Okay I've changed it but personally I regard the footnote aspart of the parenthesis.
Composition history
"Morrison" – at his first mention in the main text, Morrison needs both given name and surname and a blue link,
Done
ENO and Coliseum – blue link at first mention in main text
Done
Music
"Obligato" – I think I have seen this spelling before, but "obbligato" is usual, and I believe correct.
Done.
"slow-motion Mahler" – not a comment on your prose, but I must pause here to recover from the thought of Mahler being protracted any further than his interminable self.
I rather like Mahler, but yes, his slow movements can be slow.--Peter cohen (talk) 16:06, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
Synopsis
"to fix on creating…" – not entirely clear what this means – is it "to decide to create"?
done
There's another unexpected "sped" here, which needs to be "speeded" if I correctly read the OED.
done
References
WP's practice (Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters#All caps is to reduce newpaper headlines from all capitals – as in your Murray quote – to upper and lower case.
done
Links to disambiguation pages
You need to disambiguate "Offenbach" and "doubling"
done
The criteria for GA are not so strict that any of the above would disqualify the article, but you may, nonetheless, wish to consider them before we proceed further. – Tim riley (talk) 13:38, 17 February 2012 (UTC)


### Overall summary
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

 A most interesting and enjoyable article. Concise yet comprehensive
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
Well referenced.
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
Well referenced.
C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
Well illustrated.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Well illustrated.
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

Well, that was easy. Clearly meets all the GA criteria. Knocks spots off Grove, which doesn't even have an article on the subject, and which manages to misspell Verne's name in the article on the composer. And how many words does the Oxford Companion to Music spare for this opera? A grand total of 19. Your article is another example of Wikipedia leading the field. – Tim riley (talk) 17:29, 17 February 2012 (UTC)

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