# Talk:Daniel E. Barbey

What exactly was Barbey's role at Balikpapan and the other operations in the Borneo campaign of 1945? I'd always been led to believe they were primarily Australian ops, with some US support in the form of LCs.Grant65 (Talk) 16:32, May 12, 2005 (UTC)

He commanded VII Phib. While the majority of land forces were Australian, most of the naval forces participating were American. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:21, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Daniel E. Barbey/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:35, 25 July 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance: 
Disambiguate APD and put parentheses around it or something.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 
It's not clear why Beach Parties are a big deal. Is there a link or something you can reference? He was obviously married, do you have any more details about when or any children?
B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

The Beach parties represented a conflict between doctrine in FTP167 and reality. It illustrates the changes made to doctrine.
I've redlinked Beach Party as I think some more context is needed to explain the doctrine.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:34, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
My sources have no more details on his family.
Unlinked the APD link.