# Talk:John Neild

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Reviewer: – Quadell (talk) 20:21, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
Nominator: User:Frickeg
I will carefully examine the article and begin my review shortly. 

This article is well written and well sourced. The only major concern is that the article seems to have been closely paraphrased from the source. The entire "Early life" section is based very closely on the Rutledge source, for instance: each sentence in the source is rewritten and placed in the article in sequential fashion. Although no sentence is word-for-word identical, this section at least is sentence-for-sentence identical, and that is still a copyright concern. More worrying is that I don't have access to the other main source you used, Wilcox, so I can't compare how closely you paraphrased the text from this source. I discussed this all with one of our resident copyright experts (and employee of the Wikimedia Foundation) at User talk:Moonriddengirl#John Neild, so you might want to see that discussion for more info.
I'm sure you had no intention of violating copyright, and I'm absolutely not accusing you of bad faith. Copyright is tricky, and it isn't always obvious what's a violation and what's not. To bring this article up to GA status, you'll have to rewrite all sections of prose so that it doesn't follow the source text so closely, perhaps combining or rearranging sentences, and removing characteristic wording that isn't found outside the source (such as calling the firm "(J. L.) Montefiore, Joseph & Co" instead of "Montefiore, Joseph & Co"). This is true for the parts that use Rutledge, but also for the parts that use Wilcox, if there is close paraphrasing going on from this source as well. If you can do so in the next seven days, I'll reevaluate, and there's a good chance it will pass GA status at that point.
There are more minor concerns: phrases like "as a backbencher" may not be understandable to non-Australians; terms like free trade and Motion of no confidence should be linked; a catalog reference link to Songs 'neath the Southern Cross might be useful; etc. But the above issue should be dealt with first. All the best, – Quadell (talk) 16:08, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Update: I've received access to (part of) the Wilcox, and I'm satisfied that "close paraphrasing" is not an issue regarding this source. Only the Rutledge source material needs revision. – Quadell (talk) 11:45, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
All concerns have now been resolved. – Quadell (talk) 12:05, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

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