# Talk:Bramble shark

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 10:17, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
Review to follow soon. I see prickly shark is also not in a bad state; if you work up Echinorhinus, you may have yourself a nice little good topic here. J Milburn (talk) 10:17, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

"with the first originating behind the pelvic fin origins" awkward
Rephrased.
Annoyingly, pharynx currently links to human pharynx
I know. I was astounded that a topic as important to evolutionary biology as pharynx doesn't have an article here. Of course, the human-centric slant is rather systemic across our anatomy articles.
Lifespan is a dablink
Fixed.
I think the apparent rarity could perhaps be more explicit in the lead- note that there are few records of them/they are rarely encountered? That said, I note that the Marmara paper mentions that it is actually very common in some seas, which could be made clearer. Is this claim disputed elsewhere?
Added note in lead. The statement in the Marmara paper is a slight mis-paraphrasing; the original statement in Compagno (1984) is "relatively common", meaning that most of the known records have come from the E Atlantic and W Indian Oceans.
I've added a few categories- I know you're not big on the ocean categeories, and after trying to categorise this one, I see why. I've just gone with categories for the three main oceans.
Very hard for me to fault this one- a very good article. J Milburn (talk) 10:53, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 02:43, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
The pharynx thing is annoying; I think I'll throw this out to a couple of WikiProjects. Other than that, however, this article seems ready. Nice work, as ever! J Milburn (talk) 10:41, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 15:13, 29 March 2012 (UTC)