# Talk:Macau at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 18:48, 6 October 2018 (UTC)

I'll take these on. Courcelles (talk) 18:48, 6 October 2018 (UTC)

He only competed in two events, so I'd just give the other result rather than saying "and he did not qualify for the finals in any of the events he was entered for."
Wrong word in "He was occupied by his"
"with another personal time "  Assume you need the word "best" in here.
Courcelles (talk) 18:35, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: All of the points raised above have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
Passing GA. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 19 October 2018 (UTC)