# Talk:D'Assas-class cruiser

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 17:30, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

I'm wondering if for the displacement in the infobox, you should provide the range, since it was not consistent between all three ships
Good idea
Add range to the infobox, unless you deem it problematic since two different ranges are given (yes, I'm a very big fan of infoboxen)
Done
"The ships were armed with a main battery of six 164 mm (6.5 in) Modèle 1893 45-caliber guns. They were placed in individual pivot mounts; one was on the forecastle, two were in sponsons abreast the conning tower, and the last was on the stern" - Maybe I'm under/overthinking this, but 1x forecastle + 2x conning tower + 1x stern = 4, not 6.  Also indicate which conning tower: the primary or the secondary.
Good catch, I forgot to mention the other pair
", and explosive armor-piercing" - Gloss the AP abbreviation here, because you use it later
Done
Do sources indicate how many torpedos the ships carried?
No, unfortunately
"At the start of World War I in August 1914, she initially operated out of Morocco, patrolling for German U-boats" - Weird phrasing here.  The last ship mentioned was sold for scrap, so it's unclear which exact one she is (I'm assuming Cassard)
Clarified
I think that's it.  A tidy little article. Hog Farm  Bacon 21:52, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 15:49, 18 September 2020 (UTC)