# Talk:Mall (song)

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox
Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


### Lead
Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
and fans → remove
occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid →  occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.
 Done


### Background and composition
song length → songs length
together with → and
With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
Add the release dates here
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


### Critical reception
President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


### Music video and promotion
intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
frantic → not very encyclopedic
Add the music video source at the end of the description. Not done
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


#### Festivali i Këngës
Fine


#### Lisbon
small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


### Personnel
Fine


### Track listing
Fine


### Release history
Fine


### References
Rate Your Music → non-reliable
Reference 21 → publisher, not work
Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
The voice source is not working properly → archive it
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)


### Overall
You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:13, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
@Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)