# Talk:Loves of a Blonde

In a personal project to get all core films out of stub class, I'll be trying to upgrade this article.  I'll be shooting for GA status, but, failing that, it would be much appreciated if someone could take a look in a week or so and give it at least a start- or c- or b- class.  Thanks. --Jburlinson (talk) 19:57, 1 November 2014 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 04:46, 21 January 2015 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 04:46, 21 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing this nomination.  Please let me know if you have any questions, comments, suggestions, etc.  Best wishes.--Jburlinson (talk) 22:04, 21 January 2015 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"A famous line is uttered as they are lying in bed afterward." This feels odd thrown into the plot section; I'd just remove it.
 Done
" "Maybe," replied Passer, "but it still needs one more thing -- a billiards table"" quotes need citations right after, though I'm assuming it's the same ref that's used in the next sentence.
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"approved proceeding with the film, in part" rm comma
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" and personally to verbalize the dialogue from the script, " this part reads a bit oddly; reword.
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The first editing sentence feels a bit like a run-on; i'd either split the sentence or fine-tune the repetitive parts, such as "..like the big dance situation and the situation.."
 Done
Overall a very well-written article, didn't find much to fix. Article is now on hold and will be pass when the above is addressed. Wizardman 15:45, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for your detailed review.  All your recommendations were very good and I've made all the changes.  Please let me know if you have any further suggestions.   --Jburlinson (talk) 22:37, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Everything looks good to me, so I'm happy to pass the article. Wizardman 23:22, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

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