# Talk:Man Down (Holby City)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to all your comments below. Soaper1234 - talk 22:02, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.
"who he" → "with who he"
Quotations need sources per WP:REF.
"The episodes serves" → "The episode serves"
Since its a type of camera, uses of Steadicam should be capitalized.
Is "benefitied" a typo or a British variant of the word?
"had walk" → "had walked"
All  Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Plot
Without the parenthetical names, the plot is at 491 words. Try getting it to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
"A flashbacks" → "A flashback" or "Flashbacks"
There appears to be a word missing in between "into hospital".
All  Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Production
Remove the comma after "had been dropped".
"would featured" → "would be featured"
"portrayl" appears to be a typo.
"Holby City have" → "Holby City has"
"rather using the traditional steadicam" → "rather than using the traditional Steadicam"
All  Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Promotion and broadcast
"insits" → "insist"
Promotional material should list reactions to the content not just "[content] aired [date]" per WP:TRAILER.
All  Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:58, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Reception
This section looks good.


### References and notes
In the notes, change "see [...]" to "As depicted in [...]" per consistency with other GA-articles (similar example).
 Done Soaper1234 - talk 22:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
Done prior to the review. Soaper1234 - talk 22:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Progress