# Talk:Djibouti at the 2008 Summer Olympics

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
Well I have had a read of this article and I can see very few issues in this article:

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

Well either this is a good article or I am rubbish at reviewing articles. And comparing this to other "at the 2008 Summer Olympics" articles, I think it's the former. Nonetheless, I did find a couple of issues:
Lead section

"Djibouti's only Olympic medalist, was selected as the flag bearer for both the opening and closing ceremonies despite not competing in 2008." - Link flag bearer to List of flag bearers for Djibouti at the Olympics. That way, we don't need the See also section.
Athletics

Merge both the Men's and Women's competition sections together. No need to have them separate in my opinion.
"Competing at her first olympics" - cap Olympics.
"Feraez was 3.16 seconds behind the fastest athlete and 0.48 seconds behind the slowest athlete who progressed to the semi-finals, Thi Huong Vu." - after this sentence, perhaps you can add "Therefore, she did not advance to later rounds." Either that or something similar.
See also

See above. No need for this section.
Going to promote once these issues are sorted. Nice job. good888 (talk) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

@Good888:, thanks for the review, I've done all your changes - NickGibson3900 Talk 02:38, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
@NickGibson3900:, as promised, I am going to promote this to GA class. good888 (talk) 08:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)