# Talk:Making the Bed

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Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 11:01, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: FishLoveHam (talk · contribs) 19:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this soon! FishLoveHam (talk) 19:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)


### Prose
Incredibly strong prose, I only have a few comments.


#### Lead
"personal flaws" → "flaws".


#### Background and release
"&" → "and" (WP:&)
"over a period of" → "over".
Remove the comma after "album" (para 3).


#### Critical reception
"about it" feels a little clunky, try rewording or remove.


### References
Why are some sources archived, yet others aren't?
The use of singlechart templates is usually encouraged, and I haven't seen anybody adding archives to those. The others are all archived.--NØ 12:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Personally I would, but it isn't a requirement, so I'll leave it up to you. FishLoveHam (talk) 14:07, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Spot check
[1] Y
[6] Y
[10] Y
[15] a. Y b. Y
[19] Y
[24] Y
[28] Y
[33] a. Y b. Y
[37] a. Y b. Y
[42] Y
[46] Y
[51] Y
[55] Y
[60] Y
[64] Y
Earwig's copyvio reported 32.4% in similarity

Seems like a fine score since it's not catching authored content but rather attributed song lyrics.--NØ 12:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Yeah it's a good score, just something I felt was necessary to point out. FishLoveHam (talk) 14:07, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Overall, this should be a quick, easy pass, ping when you've addressed my comments!  FishLoveHam (talk) 18:38, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, FishLoveHam. All should be addressed now. I am glad you found the prose strong. I do love this song and worked quite hard on this!--NØ 12:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
You've done a great job. Passing :) FishLoveHam (talk) 14:08, 2 October 2024 (UTC)


### Progress