# Talk:Hurricane Leslie (2012)

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 16:41, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

"The twelfth tropical cyclone and twelfth named storm" - get rid of one
Went with the former, since it equaled the latter and it would probably be best to have the link for tropical cyclone in there.--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"caused hundreds of power outages and felled tree branches" - unclear whether "felled" is an adjective or a verb. I'd use "knocked down" so it's clearer, given the rest of the sentence.
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
" caused Leslie to re-curve to the west-northwest" - recurve usually means moving to the northeast, so I don't think it works here.
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"However, intensification halted later on August 31, as wind shear increased over the storm - rm comma
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"with the circulation being displaced " - rm "being"
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"Relentless caused Leslie" - did it?
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
5 mph (8.0 km/h)" - unit?
What about it?--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"the storm's circulation expanded to a radius of more than 1,150 miles (1,850 km); the wind field also expanded" - the difference between circulation and wind field is ambiguous
Not sure how to fix that--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
"By early on September 9, the blocking pattern diminished" - how?
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
" than initially predicted, causing less than anticipated impact."
Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Impact in Nova Scotia?
Let me look into that. There was up to 6.5 inches of rain in Nova Scotia, so you would probably be right about impact there.--12george1 (talk) 16:56, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
All in all pretty good. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  16:41, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

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