# Talk:Johnny Dickshot

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:39, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
I appreciate it. I'm sure clipping the sources helped give you a sense of the subject. No rush. – Muboshgu (talk) 16:53, 17 March 2021 (UTC)


### Review
He won the nickname "Ugly" won? Maybe he carried the nickname?
How about "received"? – Muboshgu (talk) 23:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
That's fine
Can you expand a little on Martha? Maybe He had a sister, Martha, who managed and played for the Waukegan girls baseball team
I can, but that's all I can add. That and she was a high school freshman in Nov 1928. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
That's fine
The next year, Dickshot named the missing some words here
This better? – Muboshgu (talk) 01:43, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
Dickshot referred to himself as the "ugliest man in baseball" Awkward placement. Do we know why? This should likely be the first sentence of the section
The best I can tell from my research on Mr. Dickshot, he was self-deprecating in regards to his looks. There are other anecdotes that I did not include, but I will collect and add them today or tomorrow. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:09, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
Okay, HickoryOughtShirt?4. Check out the expansion to the ugly section and lmk what you think. – Muboshgu (talk) 02:21, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
Muboshgu, fantastic! This reads so much better, much appreciated . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:09, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
This should be good otherwise . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
I am passing this now, well done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:09, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
HickoryOughtShirt?4, thank you! – Muboshgu (talk) 03:22, 28 March 2021 (UTC)