# Talk:HMS York (90)

Proposal: merge the HMS York (1928) article into HMS York (90)
Rationale: Both articles cover the same ship, with the HMS York (1928) article using the less-correct name (the ship's year of launch, rather than the more-correct pennant number).
Comments?  Questions?  Objections?  --Kralizec! (talk) 17:36, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

this makes sense :D 17:37, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
seems this has been forgotten about, iv'e gone ahead and done a redir Emoscopes Talk 09:09, 26 August 2006 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS York (90)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
prose:   (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Comments
1.  those of York were raked. Is their a wiki-link for raked, as its not very clear as to what you mean by raked. 

Changed.
2.   was deleted during construction. Suggest - removed instead of deleted 

Hard to remove something that was never installed in the first place, but I've reworded it.
3. She became flagship of the 2nd. Suggest - She became the flagship of the 2nd 

Good catch.
4. That month the ship. Suggest - In September the ship.

Reworded.
5.  more thorough one in December. Suggest - more thorough refit in December 

Agreed. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:26, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 19:04, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
Nice work Strum. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 21:39, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

Laid down on 16 May or 18 May 1927? DancesWithGrues (talk) 20:39, 3 May 2023 (UTC)