# Talk:History of East Texas State Normal College

This review is transcluded from Talk:History of East Texas State Normal College/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:20, 9 March 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y


### Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

from its acquisition by the State of Texas in 1917 to its renaming as East Texas State Teachers College in 1923.  suggest from when it was acquired by the State of Texas in 1917, to when it was renamed to East Texas State Teachers College in 1923. 
In August 1917, the City of Commerce donated $40,000 to the state treasurer's suggest changing the link length to Commerce so that it only contains Commerce, not "City of".
@Michael Barera: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:47, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
Thanks so much, Iazyges! I have made the changes you suggested now. Thanks again for your review! Michael Barera (talk) 01:35, 5 April 2018 (UTC)