# Talk:Lesotho at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:43, 10 November 2018 (UTC)

I'll do these five over the next 24-48 hours. Courcelles (talk) 12:43, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
"This was the fifth time of the country competing "This just reads awkwardly.
"being tested positive "  Couldn't we just say "testing positive"?
I think you've got at least one misspelling of Rio de Janeiro in the background section?
The lead makes it sound like he was the original bronze medallist in both events before being disqualified, when it clearly wasn't the case
Tell us how many runners overall for both track events.
"athat he was tested "  Lose the excess a, and change was to had.
Did the CAS "quash" his appeal, or did they merely deny it?
That;s it from me for here. On hold. Courcelles (talk) 13:29, 10 November 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: All of the necessary adjustments to the prose and clarifications have been made. MWright96 (talk) 14:23, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96:, before I promote, can you check the caption of the image?  Is "The Mosotho" a typo or intentional? `Courcelles (talk) 14:27, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: It was an intentional but I have rewritten the caption slightly. MWright96 (talk) 14:31, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
All good now, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:35, 10 November 2018 (UTC)