# Talk:Burhanuddin Harahap

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:27, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 15:27, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
Sources all look reliable and images are appropriately licensed; I have not reviewed the images in the navbox at the end.

Oh yeah, about that, I just remembered that the navbox tends to break in low res screens, so I reverted it to not contain any images.
"would involve him being nonactivated from vice-presidency": I don't know what this means.
Reworded. Better now?
"they both had South Tapanuli": I don't know what this means.
Missed a few words there. Fixed
Suggest linking Aceh.
Done
I think it would be worth making clear that the Second Ali Sastroamidjojo cabinet did not include Harahap -- currently we only say that most members of Harahap's cabinet were excluded.
Fair enough, done
"due to his cabinet's economic policy which was perceived to benefit": the policy is over a year in the past, so this would make more sense as "which was perceived to have benefited".
Done
Those are the only issues.  The article is in excellent shape. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 17:40, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

@Mike Christie: Aforementioned issues addressed. Juxlos (talk) 20:01, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
Changes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 20:31, 14 August 2022 (UTC)