# Talk:Columbus Buggy Company

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Reviewer: Nova Chrysalia (talk · contribs) 02:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

As a fellow Columbusite, I'm gonna review this later. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 02:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

First two sentences should be merged.
The flood should be mentioned in the lead as another reason of its demise.
"It sold 237 buggies in its first year[8] The business saw immediate success thanks to a design created by the Peters brothers and a system of labor that made production efficient." Sentences should be merged.
"moved its production was moved to a new plant" Change to "moved its production to a new plant".
"The building it was housed in burnt down on May 27, 1874[9] and was rebuilt, and in 1875 they sold the business to another buggy producer, H. K. Tuller of Buckeye Buggy Company." Run-on.
"Buggy Co.[19] but" Replace period with comma.
Mostly copyedit level things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:31, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
Thanks! I've amended all of these. Tristan  (talk) 01:18, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Great entry, but, how could revenue have been $2 million annually and payroll was $300,000 per month? Payroll would have been $3.6 million annually? Jmcelwain2579 (talk) 13:37, 5 December 2023 (UTC)