# Talk:Don Eddy (baseball)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Just to avoid short sentences, perhaps "He batted right-handed but threw left-handed. Eddy was a native of Swaledale, Iowa." > "A native of Swaledale, Iowa, he batted right-handed but threw left-handed."?
"the depth chart" what's one of those?
" as a pitcher in 1966" overlinked.
"Duluth–Superior Dukes " en-dash.
"a 7-5 loss" likewise.
"pitcher in short relief" what does that mean?
People wondering that can click on the relief pitcher article. It's a quote, so I can't change what was said. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:27, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
"on developing a curveball.[3]" overlinked.
"holes in one" hyphenate?
"in Rockwell, Iowa, from" overlinked.
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:43, 27 September 2021 (UTC)