# Talk:Hiatus (30 Rock)

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: 
In the lead, this sentence ---> "Jack Donaghy's (Alec Baldwin) health threatens his marridge to Phoebe (Emily Mortimer)", does "marridge" mean "marriage"? If so, that needs to be fixed. In the Plot, "traveled", "desperately", and "monitor" need a spelling check. Same section, this ---> "Liz and Jack, who are desperatly looking for Tracy because it is nearing the season finale of TGS with Tracy Jordan, force the information of Tracy's where abouts from Kenneth and the pair send him to look for Tracy", the first part of the sentence needs to be fixed, since it reads a little odd. Same section, "Liz later reveals to Jack that her and Floyd have broken up", "her" needs to be replaced with "she".
Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:49, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: 

Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: 

B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose): 

C. It contains no original research: 

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: 

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): 

Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: 

Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: 

Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
If the above statements can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article! Also, contact me if the above statements are answered.
--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 04:15, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

I think everything has been taken care of. Corn.u.co.pia ŢĐЌ Disc.us.sion 15:27, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
Thank you to Cornucopia for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:49, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

Needmore is actually a small town in south-central Pennsylvania.  I'm removing the adjective 'fictitious' placed before it. 99.164.55.146 (talk) 20:45, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

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