# Talk:Hamilton Fish Park

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)


### Comments
Short description goes at the top.
Add alt text to every image being used.
"restored again" → "restored"
"facades made" → "facades are made"
Remove the comma after "pool entrances".
"mayor Robert" → "Mayor Robert"
"bee reopened" - typo?
"a NYC Parks" → "an NYC Parks"
"wading pool; and" → "wading pool, and"
"at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
"New York City, it was" → "New York City, was"
Wikilink Edith Evans Asbury and Amy Sohn.


### Progress
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 04:56, 10 July 2021 (UTC)