# Talk:MIND MGMT

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 00:33, 30 May 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Sorry you've had to wait so long for a review, and thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:33, 30 May 2013 (UTC)


### Initial comments
Looking at the lead, it looks like this article may be in need of at least minor updating ("and will receive a second printing in April 2013.") to meet GA. Before continuing, I'll ping your page to see if you're still active here. Thanks again for your work on this. -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:37, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

I've addressed three that jumped out at me, and have some additional sources and updates I hope to add this weekend. Argento Surfer (talk) 21:55, 30 May 2013 (UTC)
Thanks! My editing time may be limited till Monday or Tuesday. My daughter's having a minor surgery tomorrow; nothing serious, but I'm planning to pamper the heck out of her. I'll pick it up and give it a top-to-bottom read and commenting then, though. -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:36, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
Okay, snatching a little time here. Here's a few issues to get you started:

"Although originally assisted by Diana Schutz, Brendan Wright was named the series editor" -- was Wright originally assisted by Schutz? Or Kindt was originally assisted by her? If the latter, this should be rewritten.
"The series will return to a monthly schedule in January 2013" -- update -- did this happen?
"Writing for iFanboy, Paul Montgomery said "“Kindt’s aesthetic won’t win over every reader, [but] his watercolors lend perfectly to the story’s themes and tone”." -- this appears to need an inline citaiton
The film section should be rewritten so that the statements won't go out of date in the next few months or year (per WP:REALTIME). Consider phrasing like "As of (date), it was in preproduction" or "On [date], it was announced that Ridley Scott would produce".
"has shared the complete outline for the story with them" -- who is the "them" here--Richardson and Goldberg or Scott, Richardson, and Goldberg? Or the company generally?
Thanks again for all your work! -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:03, 31 May 2013 (UTC)

All have been addressed. Still need to update the plot, but everything else is updated. Hope the surgery goes well! Argento Surfer (talk) 21:54, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
Thanks! Already on the other side of it, and all is well. =) -- Khazar2 (talk) 22:13, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
Oh, and just let me know when your update is finished and I'll take a last look. This is probably close to promotion, but I have a few last checks to do when you're ready. -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:35, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
All ready to go. Argento Surfer (talk) 11:09, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
Wouldn't Lyme, Meru, Perrier, Dusty, and Duncan be a "quintet" rather than "quartet"? Or does one of them stay behind?
Doh. Yes, they would be. I've fixed that and included more reception and the film into the lead. Argento Surfer (talk) 19:07, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


### Checklist
Two small notes above--otherwise, this looks ready to pass. Thanks again for your work. -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:07, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

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Not sure what the protocol is when the reference is incorrect, but I have both issues of Dark Horse Presents, and the multiversity archive link saying there was a Mind MGMT story in DHP #5 is flat out wrong. It is issue #7 (the pub date is still Feb 2015). 
I’ve made a change in the article, updating it from 5 to 7. 64.180.190.69 (talk) 04:52, 14 March 2023 (UTC)