# Talk:Howard Bellamy (Doctors)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Infobox looks good.
Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
The lead should summarize the entire article, so mention info from #Casting and #Development.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
The storylines section looks good.
Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Remove the comma after Julia Parsons.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Also remove the comma after "the situation".
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:REF.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Also try reducing the amounts of quotations overall.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Be consistent on either having Digital Spy or Digital Spy.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Link Digital Spy only once in #Characterisation.
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Add a serial comma after "Hollyoaks".
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
 Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to your comments  – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)


### Progress