# Talk:Lari White

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Reviewer: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) 03:20, 28 May 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
I made some grammatical errors instead of having you do it. I do not like when other editors expect me to fix a period, when they could have just done it themselves. Some things to remember:
Be careful with your use of commas. You're often guilty of using too many when they are not really necessary.
Avoid references in the infobox. I recently learned that it's supposed to be a snapshot of the article (You already had referenced the fact she played guitar and piano in the article for example)
Avoid paragraphs that are too long. Some of the paragraphs I had to split.
Make sure most sections of the article include years. The "later career" section did not and it looked awkward (the early life section is OK to not include; I see that as optional)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Excellent work here! I learned some more about Lari White. It's a shame I only know her from Cast Away. Thank you for making this a GA article!