# Talk:Edge of the Ocean

Although this song is quite notable, there are few readily available sources for the song on the internet. I would like the reviewer to consider this while reviewing the article; thank you! Carbrera (talk) 00:52, 15 April 2016 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Edge of the Ocean/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 18:35, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm User:MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing this article in a short time.


### Lead
Link → music critics
 Done

The single was subsequently considered Ivy's signature song, due to heavy promotion → this is not said in the article, add it and source.
 Done


### Background
later interview → When?
 Done fixed per date of interview; good catch!

...the idea of incorporating new genres into their music; → full stop after music, then capital letter.
 Done

stated that → doesn't need "that".
 Done

"the first songs [we] recorded were jangly and simple and straight-ahead. We started gravitating toward the groovier, slightly more melancholy stuff. It works well with Dominique's voice" → use your own words in some of this quote.
 Done re-worded

"Along with the exploration came "stronger" songs" → sounds terrible.
 Done re-worded


### Composition and release
Musically, "Edge of the Ocean" is an indie pop and trip hop song; → full stop and sources.
 Done

"The single was not released elsewhere until May 27, 2002, when it was released as a CD single in the United Kingdom" → in spite of being a unreliable source, the date only has 2001.
 Not done. The source is now reliable but there is no, month or day of the release. Still only year.


### Critical reception
Flawless.
 Done Hey thanks!


### Music video and promotion
The video begins with Durand casually walking around in California near the ocean; several shots of nearby boats, cliffs and landscape are interwoven as Durand mouths the song's lyrics. Chase and Schlesinger also appear in the video. → source.
 Done YT video is the only source regarding the video out there (that I can find, and trust me, I've looked)

The track was later joked about, with a reviewer noting that "chances are you've heard it and didn't even know it". → not sure if this is the best section for this piece of information.
 Done moved


### Track listings and formats
See on References section, below.
 Done


### Credits and personnel
Link mixing, mastering and such only once in this section, in other words, most of them are not linked and need to be once.
 Done


### Charts
Use → Template:Single chart
 Done


### Release history
See below
 Done


### References
Lot's to do here:
andychase.com → Andy Chase
 Done

Discogs is not reliable → replace it.
 Done I have added additional reliable sources (Amazon) for verification

Since the the information is the same in both sources, you can remove the Discogs websites. Otherwise, Ovelinking. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:55, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
15 → Despite being the official video, it's not official source (Ivy's channel), use MTV or other.
I'm not sure what you want me to change regarding this
I was saying to find a reliable source for the video, but since you can't find it with your research and I couldn't as well. Let's leave it at that.
IMDb → unreliable source, replace it.
 Done replaced


### Overall GA review
Some good and solid info, needs some work here and there. Otherwise is quite good, I'll put it on hold for a week. If you need more time, just let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:08, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I have finished making changes. Thanks as always! Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
@Carbrera: I will see the changes, once I have concluded checking them. I will let you know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:42, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
@Carbrera: I totally forgot to ping you, I have re-evaluated you fixes and it's almost a pass. 2 more fixes to do. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:31, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I think it's all caught up now. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 21:40, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@Carbrera:. No need to remove the sentence just the release date. Leave the year. Still have to remove the discogs references. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:43, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done. Carbrera (talk) 21:45, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@Carbrera: passing now. Congrats with so little information you did an outstanding job. Always a pleasure reviewing your articles. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:48, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you for the nice comments. The feeling is mutual. Carbrera (talk) 22:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)