# Talk:Jamie Proctor

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jamie Proctor/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 18:44, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 18:44, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
Images are appropriately tagged.

What makes the following reliable sources?
prostinternational.com
Seems like a reasonable enough media website. The article is a direct interview with Proctor himself so the information is from the man himself.--EchetusXe 12:30, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Actually it seems to be a work experience program for students but it looks like it has oversight so struck. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 13:03, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
sbnation.com -- seems to be a fan community
I've just removed that line.--EchetusXe 12:30, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Looks like there's still a citation using it?  FN 85, used twice. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 13:03, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Ah I've corrected that now.--EchetusXe 10:28, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
"Rotherham had cover as they had already signed strikers Freddie Ladapo and Carlton Morris earlier in the transfer window": what does "cover" mean here?
They already had players in that position. I've rephrased it.--EchetusXe 12:30, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
Those are the only issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 19:05, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks!--EchetusXe 12:30, 3 September 2022 (UTC):
Looks good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 00:06, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

EchetusXe, I realized after I completed the GA review that I should have done some spotchecks as part of the review.  I've done a few, and have found a couple of issues:

FN 16 cites "Proctor was on the fringes of the "Lilywhites" first-team squad during the 2010–11 season and had to wait until the last game of the season to score his first senior goal in a 3–1 win against Watford at Deepdale, by which stage Preston's relegation into League One had already been confirmed after a disappointing season under the management of Phil Brown."  As far as I can see there's no mention of Phil Brown in the source.
FN 17 cites "Proctor was injured with a double hernia in October 2011."  The source just says a hernia, not a double hernia.  FN 6 does say double hernia so you could just add that.
FN 25 cites "He made his "Shrews" debut the next day, playing 90 minutes in a 2–2 draw with Colchester United at the New Meadow."  The source covers the game but doesn't mention that Proctor played.
These are all pretty minor, but given there are three of them I checked about another fifteen or twenty and found no other issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 21:05, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

Okay thanks I've updated those bits.--EchetusXe 10:03, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
Fixes all look good; thanks. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 10:29, 23 September 2022 (UTC)