# Talk:Carl Gunnarsson

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Link minor ice hockey.  Done
He probably had some stats worth mentioning from his junior hockey years. Maybe some awards? Done
Add the Maple Leafs header?  Done
"Leafs best defenceman" Apostrophe.  Done
"teams final home game" Again.  Done
"Gunnarsson was traded to the St. Louis Blues (along with a fourth-round draft pick in the 2014 NHL Entry Draft)" Maybe "Gunnarsson and a fourth-round draft pick..."?  Done
"20 games for the Bues"  Done
"he was playing on a defensive pairing with Kevin Shattenkirk and helping the Blues maintain a 16-4-2 home record." Changing "helping" to past tense sounds better.  Done
"In the first year of his newest contract," Not the newest contract by the time we read the last paragraph of the section.  Done
"although" WP:EDITORIAL.   Done
AGF on offline sources.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, I believe I have addressed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC)