# Talk:Look for the Light

In Reception, please change "demonstrating terror, fragility, and terror" to "demonstrating terror and fragility" or something else to get rid of the echo. Neftalirr (talk) 19:21, 13 March 2023 (UTC)

 Done Mz7 (talk) 19:55, 13 March 2023 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Look for the Light/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Rhain (talk · contribs) 06:46, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 02:48, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this review Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 02:48, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

@Rhain: I'll be awaiting your responses. Shouldn't take too much work. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 22:00, 28 April 2024 (UTC)


#### Spot checks
Numbers from this revision [1].Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:52, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

16 Good
25 Good
28 Good
32 Good
33 Good
39 Good
46 Good


#### Drive by comment
@OlifanofmrTennant: It has been three weeks since your last edit on this page. Do you plan to continue the review or should it be closed so the article can wait for a different reviewer? -- ZooBlazer 19:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

Oh sorry I completely forgot, I'll get on with it. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:28, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
@OlifanofmrTennant: Thanks for the review. To clarify your concerns: Den of Geek's Boo is a little repetitious but I believe it would be inconsistent and potentially confusing to rephrase, and the two uses are far apart anyway; EverythingGP is a local Grande Prairie publication, used here to verify uncontroversial production information; and there are several negative/critical comments in the Reception section, especially the last paragraph. Please let me know if you have any other questions or concerns. – Rhain ☔ (he/him) 23:44, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

I see the scattered negative thoughts. Upon looking through the sources it seems that you've taken as much as you can from the reviews. I specificlly called out Den of Geek at random, regardless I see your point. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 23:49, 28 April 2024 (UTC)