# Talk:John Dacey

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I am reviewing this article to possibly be a Good Article.
Reviewer: Shearonink (talk · contribs) 18:45, 21 December 2016 (UTC)
Passes the threshold "immediate failure" criteria: No cleanup banners, no obvious copyright infringements, etc.  Shearonink (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: 

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: 
excessive amount of redlinks, please fix blacksmith
 Done Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 10:39, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
Is it verifiable with no original research?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: 

B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines: 

C. It contains no original research: 
The claim that Dacey died of nephritis is unsourced.
 Done Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 10:39, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
Ref#8 does not support statement (Dacey anti-tillite, against Federation), Ref#9 does clearly state Dacey was an anti-billite.  (Also, it's not a plural is it?)
Fixed the plural. It's in ref#9, the newspaper refers to him as "Mr. Dacey, anti-billite, from Sydney". Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 10:39, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
Thanks.  Yes, they all work well together taken as a whole.
Please check all refs.
I had a look, but what are you referring to specifically? Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 10:39, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
My concerns have been dealt with, all is well.  I hadn't had a chance to check every reference so wanted someone to take another go at them.
D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: 

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): 

Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: 

Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: 

Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
@Shearonink: See comments above. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 10:39, 22 December 2016 (UTC)
Congrats! John Dacey is now a Good Article.

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