# Talk:HMS Unrivalled

There is a double period after Paola A.

Fixed. Thanks for catching that.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:41, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

Where did this sub operate from during the last two years of World War II? Even if she didn't sink any ships in this period, where she was located should be mentioned. Nick-D (talk) 09:14, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately I can't answer that. She was probably in the Med, but sources mention that a number of the class became training subs late in the war, without mentioning which ones.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:43, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Unrivalled (P45)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
prose:   (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Comments
1. HMS Unrivalled (P45) was a U-class submarine built for the Royal Navy during World War II. Suggest - A comma after submarine. 

No comma needed, IMO.
Oops, my bad.
2. but was too slow for requirements and not retained after the war. Suggest - but was too slow for requirements and was not retained after the war.

Good catch. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 16:23, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
Passed Thurgate (talk) 17:58, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

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