# Talk:HSwMS John Ericsson

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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 06:56, 11 October 2010 (UTC)

Apart from the usual copyediting, I re-arranged that sentence about the personal union between Sweden and Norway, just like in the other article.
You switch between the designation of "monitor" and "ironclad".  From the article on French ironclads, it seems to me that there began to be a distinguishing difference.  Ironclads seemed to become nearer to the modern idea of the battleship, while monitors were less modern.  Is this correct?
Everything checks out, as usual.
JonCatalán(Talk) 07:02, 11 October 2010 (UTC)