# Talk:Merv Harvey

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Reference named "az":
From Bill O'Reilly (cricketer): Cashman, p. 231.
From Bill Brown (cricketer): Cashman, p. 67.
From Sid Barnes: Cashman, pp. 14–15.
From Harvey family: Cashman, Franks, Maxwell, Sainsbury, Stoddart, Weaver, Webster (1997). The A-Z of Australian cricketers. pp. 117–119.{{cite book}}:  CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
From Neil Harvey: Cashman, Franks, Maxwell, Sainsbury, Stoddart, Weaver, Webster (1997). The A-Z of Australian cricketers. Melbourne: Oxford University Press. pp. 117–119. ISBN 0-19-550604-9.{{cite book}}:  CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)

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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Merv Harvey's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "o":
From Bill O'Reilly (cricketer): "Player Oracle WJ O'Reilly". CricketArchive. Retrieved 2009-05-14.
From Lindsay Hassett: "Player Oracle AL Hassett 1948". CricketArchive. Retrieved 2008-12-18.
From Neil Harvey: "Player Oracle RN Harvey". CricketArchive. Retrieved 2009-05-14.
From Don Tallon: "Player Oracle D Tallon". CricketArchive. Retrieved 2009-05-14.
From Bill Brown (cricketer): "Player Oracle WA Brown". CricketArchive. Retrieved 2009-05-14.

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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Merv Harvey's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Coleman":
From Keith Miller: Coleman, pp. 473–478.
From Lindsay Hassett: Coleman, pp. 522–529.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Merv Harvey/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sarastro1 (talk) 10:03, 25 July 2010 (UTC)
Nice article, just a few very minor points. I'll put it on hold but no problems passing it once everything's done.
Early years
I realise much of this is the same as The Harvey family, but a couple of things I missed before.

"The Harveys played another form of cricket in their concreted backyard (using a marble instead of a ball) that sharpened their reflexes,[2] and a miniature bat." A bit muddled here, I think. Either the brackets should go, or the info about the bat should go inside.
"The club had a program whereby they gave a medal to local schools to award to their best cricketer in their ranks, who would then be given access to all of the club’s facilities.": Did every school get a medal, or just the best cricketers from several schools? Also, a bit too much going on in the sentence, a few too many "to"s. Perhaps: "The club awarded medals to the best local school cricketers who were then given access to all of the club's facilities."
First-class beginnings

"first innings points": possibly need to explain that this is for a first innings lead.
"Harvey enlisted at Fitzroy...": (presumably in the RAAF) possibly needs to go at the start of the paragraph.
Post-war resumption and only Test

Was Brown out for the whole season or just for the match Harvey played? If the latter, this paragraph is a bit out of place here. Either way, I think it needs specifying.
whole season for Brown YellowMonkey (bananabucket!) 03:59, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
Who regarded the 136 as his best innings?
er, both books YellowMonkey (bananabucket!) 03:59, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
"Merv made 30 and 44, failing to capitalise on his starts to make a big score with a Test vacancy beckoning after incumbent opener Sid Barnes was injured" Slightly run on sentence.
"the part-time medium pace..." Maybe a bit vague for the non-specialist. Medium pace of occasional bowler Yardley?
Final seasons

Does Christmas need linking?
General

Needs PERSONDATA.
Image is fine, but lacks a source. I think it may be an issue if the article goes any further.
actually, post 1946, so not fine YellowMonkey (bananabucket!) 03:59, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
Sources fine.
Done the rest YellowMonkey (bananabucket!) 03:59, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

Happy to pass now. --Sarastro1 (talk) 19:33, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

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