# Talk:Charles de Tricornot de Rose

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Nominator: Dumelow (talk · contribs) 09:23, 25 September 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:48, 1 October 2025 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:48, 1 October 2025 (UTC)

Images properly licensed
Looking at the tombstone, it seems that he had a couple of noble titles. They need to be mentioned with some background info if available
Thanks, I hadn't spotted this but did wonder about the unusual surname.  Have added some detail - Dumelow (talk) 10:07, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Biographies should not start with the subject's rank, only their name
Removed - Dumelow (talk) 10:07, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Link ranks on first mention
Done - Dumelow (talk) 10:14, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Do you know which type of Morane-Saulnier aircraft equipped the 12 Aircraft Squadron?
Model L apparently, linked and reffed - Dumelow (talk) 10:22, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
found himself suffering due to losses of reconnaissance aircraft Awkward, rephrase
I've switched to "Pétain found his operations hampered due to losses of reconnaissance aircraft", but happy to take any suggestions - Dumelow (talk) 10:14, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Link Le Prieur rockets
Done - Dumelow (talk) 10:07, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Is Le Révérend notable?
He only rose to colonel but became a director at Dassault Aviation, so has a reasonable claim to notability.  Have redlinked - Dumelow (talk) 09:41, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Not a requirement, but there's a series of books that might help you expand this article: The WWI French Aces Encyclopedia
If only time and money were infinite!  If I get chance and want to take this further I may see if I can get the right volume via the Wikipedia:Resource support pilot - Dumelow (talk) 10:07, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Good idea!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:08, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
More later--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:29, 5 October 2025 (UTC)
Earwig says copyvio of 2.9%--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:20, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
Do you know when he was promoted to capitaine?
Not got a date (I usually rely on Base de données Léonore for French officers but that only covers up until their last award of the Legion of Honour) but I know he was a captain by early WWI.  Added a bit here including a mention of his work with Roland Garros on deflector wedges.
I would suggest adding the French name of the units in parentheses after the English name
Done throughout (if I got them all!) - Dumelow (talk) 19:49, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
In early 1906 Tricornot de Rose's unit was ordered to secure some French villages during a period of political conflict between the government and the Roman Catholic church as a result of the 1905 French law on the Separation of the Churches and the State which brought all churches into public ownership. Can you split this long and confusing sentence into 2?
Agreed and split - Dumelow (talk) 19:50, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
hyphens for air to ground
Done - Dumelow (talk) 19:39, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
Link corps
Done - Dumelow (talk) 19:39, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
Fix the link for Le Révérend
Oops, delinked "captain" as now done earlier in article- Dumelow (talk) 19:39, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
Spot checked cites 1-3, 15, 20--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:39, 6 October 2025 (UTC)