# Talk:HMS Fury (H76)

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:05, 30 January 2016 (UTC)

Will do this soon. JAGUAR  16:05, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
"HMS Fury was an F-class destroyer built for the Royal Navy in the 1930s" - could be more specific, was it not 1933?
"By July 1942, a Type 286 short-range surface-search radar" - de-link this if not notable
"Photos taken of the ship in July 1944 show her with a Type 271 radar mounted on her searchlight platform that was probably installed during her last refit" - this sentence needs a citation
"The ship cost 248,538 pounds" - why not £248,538?
"before beginning a brief refit on the Humber." - link the Humber
"On the night of 15/16 November she bombarded Leros with the destroyers Exmoor and ORP Krakowiak[42] On" - missing full stop
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Another well researched article that has nothing to major enough to constitute it being put on hold. I noticed a few minor prose issues, but they can be addressed any time.  JAGUAR  21:08, 30 January 2016 (UTC)