# Talk:Ken Hunt (pitcher)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ken Hunt (pitcher)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:08, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:08, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Hunt's nationality is missing from the first sentence as is convention in any biographical article
"However, his control problems resurfaced in the minors" - minor leagues


### Early life
"He grew up in that town," - should that be changed to city?
"but only went to the school" - try to use an alternative other than school since Brigham is a university


### Career
Briefly explain Gabe Paul's role in the Redlegs on the first mention of his name
Wikilink the term scout to Scout (sport)
"Seventy-five walks in 54 innings pitched " - I believe the text in bold should be worded as 75 for consistency with MOS:NUMERAL
"contributed to a 2-5 record" - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash
"and an earned run average (ERA) of 9.00 exactly." - the word "exactly" is not needed
"and his record was 4-14." - en dash please
"However, his ERA came down a little to 6.66," - better; lowered to 6.66
"Hunt shoved his walk total down to 134" - lowered his walk total to 134
"in eight innings in a 4-2 victory" - the hyphen will need to be replaced with an en dash
"May 23, despite allowing five hits and six walks in ​7 2⁄3 innings," - The sentence should start as On May 23,
"beating Don Drysdale in a 2-0 victory." - another hyphen that needs to be replaced with an en dash
Wikilink Sports Illustrated the first time it is mentioned
"Hunt did throw in the minors," - minor leagues
"He had a 2-8 record between those teams" - again another hyphen that should be substituted with an en dash
"Ironically, he gave up fewer earned runs per game" - the word "Ironically" is informal and should be removed or changed to a more formal word
"he gave up fewer earned runs per game" - how about the word relinquished instead for variety?
"he had a 7-9 record" & " he had a 7-6 record" are two more instances of the hyphen being better off replaced by an en dash in both instances
"He also got picked up by the Baltimore Orioles' organization" - was also chosen


### Later life
Wikilink the term bachelor's degree and the Utah Sports Hall of Fame


### References
Reference 1 is missing the date it was published
Reference 5 should have the work as Baseball-Reference not baseball-reference for consistency
Am going to the review on hold to allow the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:57, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: Now promoting to GA class. I have made some changes to the article. You used the longer em dash (—) not the shorter en dash (–) that is standard on Wikipedia. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 5 April 2020 (UTC)