# Talk:Jimmy Nelson (footballer)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jimmy Nelson (footballer)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 00:24, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
I'll review this Welsh Scottish article. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 00:24, 22 November 2020 (UTC)


### Lead
before becoming the first team from outside England to win the competition in 1927 <<<=== Cardiff became, not Nelson


### Early years
to complete the transfer ===>>>  to complete a transfer to Cardiff


### Cardiff
remained prominent ===>>> he remained prominent
With the match tied at 2–2, Nelson became involved in an altercation with an opposition player in his penalty area and was subsequently dismissed after the referee witnessed him kick opposition forward Tommy Johnson, with Manchester City converting the resulting penalty to win the game. <<<=== Split into two sentences.
be helped the side ===>>> he helped the side
Add that they placed 14th during the 1927 FA Cup Final year.
over local rivals Swansea City ===>>>  over Swansea City, their local rivals, (to avoid a WP:SEAOFBLUE)


### Newcastle
eight matches ===>>> eight cup matches
and conceded 14 goals ===>>> as they conceded 14 goals


### Southend
Okay.


### International
Okay.


### Personal life
Okay.


### Overall
Anything on playing style? (left-back, centre-back, or right-back?) It's fine if it's not available. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 00:44, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
There's nothing particularly descriptive I could find unfortunately. The best quotes I've already included in the main text. Kosack (talk) 13:02, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
Looks good! Not much to do, placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 00:44, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

@Sportsfan77777: Thanks for the review, I've addressed all of the issues above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 13:02, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
Passing, good work! Looking forward to seeing the good topic finished. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 17:59, 23 November 2020 (UTC)