# Talk:Jonas Mouton

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jonas Mouton/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: CrowzRSA 17:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

Comments
What verifies Mouton played as a defensive back at Venice High School.?
done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
What verifies The major high school rating reports evaluated him as a safety?
That is supported by the remainder of the fully reffed paragraph.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Shouldn't "Early life" be titles "High School" instead?
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:03, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Per WP:ORDINAL, single digit numbers should be spelt out.
Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:05, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
You have consistency issues with spelling out numbers and numerals (i.e. he started eleven of the twelve games, a new career high with 11 tackles)
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:34, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Using "v." is preferred over "vs." (i.e. "Bears v. Packers" is preferred over "Bears vs. Packers"
fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:07, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:Lead
Expanded to 2 paragraphs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:14, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Please fix dab links
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  19:09, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Result
GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: