# Talk:Midwestern University

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Reviewer: InterestGather (talk · contribs) 21:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
Passed after some simple corrections, issues generally related to unnecessary commas and unnecessary spaces added after periods.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 
Occasional original research, I have cleaned it up.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Numerous occasions of unnecessary topics in unrelated sections, one example includes the mention of "no criminal arrests" on the Glendale campus in an unrelated campus. I have corrected this.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
Previous edit wars, however due to the decent time passed since their occurrence (over 2 years) I do not believe it is unreasonable to say the conflict has concluded.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
After some necessary corrections, the article fits all six good article criteria, does not meet the immediate fail criteria and therefor will be pushed forward.

This passage is largely unsourced; the references are only to other lists and don't convey information of encyclopedic value. The Greek lists are also not exhaustive; the criteria for inclusion here are unclear. The clubs are simply listed but again, this is not the place for lists. I propose deletion. -- Melchior2006 (talk) 06:34, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

Since no one has chimed in on this one, I will go ahead and streamline. --Melchior2006 (talk) 18:52, 16 May 2023 (UTC)