# Talk:Mickey Rocco

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this. MWright96 (talk) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

no dab links


### Early life and career
Who is Helen Harwell?


### Major league career
"On September 9, 1945 Rocco" - missing a comma here
"After the season the Boston Red Sox" - ditto
The Yankee Stadium wikilink should be to Yankee Stadium (1923)
"In a team-leading 143 games, he had a .264 batting average, 10 home runs, and 56 RBIs." - This needs to be referenced


### Later life
"He died in his hometown of St. Paul, Minnesota on June 1, 1997 at the age of 81." - This statement doesn't have a reference.


### References
no dead links
Good work so far. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 19:36, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Issues mostly fixed. Harwell was his wife, didn't really find any other information on her other than the name; not sure what else I could add to that sentence. Wizardman 12:59, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for clearing up the point on his wife. Happy to promote this to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Great, thanks for the review! Looks like I'll have to start writing articles again, all got reviewed now :) Wizardman 13:40, 20 August 2016 (UTC)