# Talk:Obviously 5 Believers

So, what is it? – Hattrem (talk) 10:27, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

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"Marqusee, Mike (2005). Wicked Messenger: Bob Dylan and the 1960s. Mew York: The New Press. ISBN 978-1-58322-686-5."
Shouldn't the publishing info be: New York: Seven Stories Press? Nurg (talk) 08:04, 25 December 2022 (UTC)

Now corrected. Thanks, Nurg. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 01:05, 26 December 2022 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Obviously 5 Believers/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:45, 6 March 2023 (UTC)

 
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
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b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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b. (citations to reliable sources): 

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d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
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b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)


### Lead and infobox
"9–10 March 1966 session" switch to MDY for consistency with American English
"It has been interpreted as a blues song about loneliness" any reason why blues was left out of |genre= in the infobox?
"as one of the minor songs" "minor songs" might mean "unmemorable", "insignificant"...?
"In 2010 the song was included" comma after year


### Background and recording
"early morning hours of the 9–10 March 1966 Nashville session" ditto. Also add a comma after the date per MOS:COMMA
"Sean Wilentz feels that the song is driven by..." who is Sean Wilentz?
"and that he didn't want to spend much time on it" → "did not" for a more encyclopedic tone
"In 2010 it was included" ditto


### Composition
"Philippe Margotin and Jean-Michel Guesdon" who are they? Critics? Biographers of Dylan? etc.
"The song is similar in melody and structure to Memphis Minnie's "Chauffeur Blues" " might need some attribution
The caption of the audio file could be moved to the prose. Keep the caption succinct.


### Critical reception
Some quotes can be paraphrased to avoid a quote farm. I.e. "one of Dylan's most assured, commanding vocals", "the best R&B song on the album"


### Other
Refs are reliable and properly formatted
Images and files are properly licensed


### Verdict
 On hold for seven days. Mostly nitpick-y prose issues but overall a solid article. Ippantekina (talk) 04:11, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
Many thanks, [[User:Ippantekina]|Ippantekina]]]. I've amended the article to address all of your comments. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:06, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
All should be good now BennyOnTheLoose except one last thing. I prefer the lead not having any inline citations (MOS:LEADCITE), so could you paraphrase the "filler" and "makeweight" comments in the lead and remove the citations? Ippantekina (talk) 02:49, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
Does "insubstantial" work, Ippantekina? Thanks, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:10, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
That should work! Passing, well done :) Ippantekina (talk) 02:47, 15 March 2023 (UTC)