# Talk:Finn the Human and Jake the Dog

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 01:56, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Gen. Quon (Talk)
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:56, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
1: Well-written

a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: .
b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

2: Verifiable with no original research

a. Has an appropriate reference section:  Yes
b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

c. No original research:   Done

3: Broad in its coverage

4: Neutral

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc:  Yes
6: Images  Done (Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license)

As per the above checklist, the issues identified are:

The lead does not provide an accessible overview. Major Points like the Plot and the Reception are not the concise summaries of their respective sections.
The lead does not give relative emphasis to the Reception as is given in the body.
Short paragraphs generally do not warrant their own subheading. Merge Background and Events sections into the Plot.
Paragraphs should be long enough to develop an idea. Fix other short paragraphs.
No inline citations for the direct quotations: "never even ever existed." and "mutagenic bomb".
No end quote "loosely inspired by the Japanese manga series. It should be after inspired as per source 6.
This article is a very promising GA nominee. I'm delighted to see your work here. I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 05:32, 10 January 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for performing a very thorough review of this article. How do these changes look?--Gen. Quon (Talk)  02:13, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
Good. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:19, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 02:19, 12 January 2014 (UTC)