# Talk:Love in Motion (Anika Moa album)

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  23:16, 29 November 2010 (UTC)


### Lead
The album's underlying theme is one of love, and in writing the album, Moa drew the most inspiration from her civil partner, Azaria Universe. -> could read better.
Better?
I know your from New Zealand, but the dates are backwards.
MOS:DATE - either style is acceptable. Since this is about a NZ-origin album, I have used NZ English
Love in Motion saw Moa -> can albums see?
Lol, done
Critical reviews for the album have been mostly positive, and it debuted and peaked on the New Zealand Albums Chart at number four -> doesn't flow. Consider splitting
Done
The lead single from Love in Motion was "Running Through the Fire (Storm)", -> "RTFS" served as the album's lead single, which peaked 
Done


### Background
shouldn't it be Background and inspiration? You speak about the song's lyrical inspiration, not so much the recording process
Inspiration is part of an album's background
the album.[2][3] The album -> try to mix it up a bit
Done
"In the Air" is about Moa's fear of flying. -> sentencing is a bit awkward. Could be fixed up a bit. Many sentences don't flow and are so short, it reads choppy
Hmm, take a look now?
and the album was recorded in two more weeks -> with the entire recording process being completed in one month; or something like that
That would kind of blur what the source is saying.
and the album was produced by Moa and Andre Upston -> doesn't flow with the beginning of the sentence
Done


### Music and lyrics
should be music and composition, as this section doesn't speak much of the lyrics, as the previous section does
Renamed as 'Composition'
Love in Motion saw -> doesn't make sense
Done
pop rock environment -> environment
Eh?
The sound of -> the sound? or the song?
Rewrote sentence
". -> you have allot these issues
I don't understand. Do you mean I have too many quotes?
Katarina Filipe praised Moa's live performing nature, noting that "the radio and CD versions were nothing compared to her on-stage performance" -> is this a good thing?
Yes, the recorded versions were nothing (ie bad) compared to her live performances (ie really good)


### Singles
It has not appeared on any singles chart, however. -> it didn't; also try combining it with another sentence.


### Charts
You should create a peaking chart as well as certifications wherever applicable.
Why? It has only appeared on one chart.


### References
Would be better is dates were year-month-day format, like this 2010-11-30.
Date stylings are optional, and I have noticed that ISO dates are becoming less common on WP
That's all for now Adabow. Ping me when your done :)--CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  03:39, 1 December 2010 (UTC)
Looks fine now. I'm passing.--CallMeNathan  • Talk2Me  16:20, 1 December 2010 (UTC)