# Talk:Cutbacks (30 Rock)

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Reviewer: BelovedFreak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)

No dab links or dead external links. Images and references look fine.
I did a little bit of a copyedit on the plot, please cheek it's ok, specifically, I put that Jenna and Tracy "run out of his apartment" - not sure if that's the case, so please revert that if necessary!
The plot looks good, thanks for the copy-edit. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:56, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
Could you add something on cultural references to the lead?
IDK, this is the only thing I'm coming up with ---> "This episode of 30 Rock featured a number of cultural references to the legal crime thriller film The Pelican Brief (1993), and Liz Lemon parodying Steve Jobs's clothing attire while giving a presentation."
That would be fine. Although, "clothing" probably redundant to "attire". :) --BelovedFreak 16:01, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
Oops, forgot to remove "clothing", and has been added to the lead. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:10, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
The only other request I have, is, could you add something about Steve jobs in the cultural refs section, so that the image caption isn't the only mention of that?
Done.
Granted it would be virtually impossible to cite a source, but it's pretty clear she's not just parodying his attire but also his overall presentation style. I can't come up with a wording that doesn't come across as viciously mocking Steve Jobs, but it would be nice if the article reflected it. Aoystreck (talk) 02:18, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
Very little to do, putting it on hold. --BelovedFreak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:56, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

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