# Talk:Maria of Serbia, Queen of Bosnia

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:19, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:19, 20 February 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
Images appropriately licensed Y
No sourcing issues: N
The reference "Regan 2010" does not have any corresponding source in Bibliography
The reference "Tošić 2014" does not match the source in Bibliography, which gives the date as 2002.


### Prose Suggestions
#### Lede
The country was lost to the Ottomans within a few months, and the couple fled to Bosnia. suggest you change this to Serbia was conquered by the Ottomans within a few months, and the couple was forced to flee to Bosnia.
Maria's husband ascended the Bosnian throne in 1461, but two years later the kingdom too fell to the Ottomans and he was executed.  suggest Stephen ascended the Bosnian throne in 1461, however the Ottomans invaded Bosnia two years later, and executed him.
Having spent a few years in Venetian Dalmatia and possibly Hungary, Maria settled in Ottoman Greece at the court of her aunts Mara and Kantakouzene. suggest She spent a few years in Venetian Dalmatia, and possibly Hungary, before settling in Ottoman Greece at the court of her aunts Mara and Kantakouzene.


#### Marriage
Ottomans, who started preparing an attack which ended the independent Kingdom of Bosnia. suggest Ottomans, which led them to begin preparing to attack the Kingdom of Bosnia.
That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:37, 23 February 2018 (UTC)