# Talk:Morral affair

There are a few more photos of the wedding, procession, and the aftermath in The Illustrated London News, 128 (3503), 1906-06-09. I imported the ones most relevant to the article. czar 21:10, 6 February 2021 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Morral affair/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:21, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Add a short description and then WP:ALT text for every image.
Alt text is not part of the GA criteria but noted
"afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
Both are AmEng
That link sends you to "afterward". See [1] Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:53, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
"bouquet of flowers" → "flower bouquet" (simply "bouquet" would also work because "bouquet" means an "arranged bunch of flowers" so "bouquet of flowers" is repetitive).
Add a serial comma after "antigovernmental curriculum".
"its antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental curriculum and other subversive activities" antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental describes the curriculum here so it's not a list of items
"antianarchist journalist" → "anti-anarchist journalist"
"regarded himself an outspoken enemy" → "regarded himself as an outspoken enemy"
"told the investigation" - reword
"a bombs expert" → "a bomb expert"
Remove the comma after "June 1907".
"kangaroo court, – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
"judgement" → "judgment" (American English)
Both are AmEng
...but judgment is more common for American English. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:54, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:06, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina, done! Thanks for the review czar 18:36, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina, re: the American English notes, Merriam Webster (and for that matter, NOAD, my preferred-yet-unlinkable AmEng dictionary) allow both terms interchangeably—see the "variant" section. I'd rather go with the official dictionary than thewordcounter.com, which has no hallmarks of source reliability. czar 01:30, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi @Some Dude From North Carolina, checking back czar 01:19, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

I think I have some photographs of this bombing in stereoscope. 90.255.192.140 (talk) 20:18, 6 December 2022 (UTC)

If so, they be in the public domain (per commons:Template:PD-Spain-photo) so feel free to upload them! czar 00:29, 7 December 2022 (UTC)