# Talk:Fermat's Last Tango

[2] - Osserman
[3] Liner notes
[4] "Best plays of 2000-01"
[5] Simon Singh

This review is transcluded from Talk:Fermat's Last Tango/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:06, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 11:06, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

The FUR for the CD cover has a couple of entries not filled in.
Added.
What makes curtainup.com a reliable source?
Difficult to argue by Wikipedia's rules that it is. It seems to have been a notable review website in the late 1990s/early 2000s (and the many uses both at Wikipedia and in Gbooks hits seem to confirm this) but I have dropped it as a reference for facts. It is now only used as a source for its review, and I think this is defensible.
'criticised that Daniel Keane does not "become a real character"': "criticized" requires a direct object.
Rewritten.
'audiences of screenings of the film version reacting "mildly amused to enthusiastic."' Needs rewriting; "reacting" can't take a direct object like this.
Rewritten.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 11:52, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing! I will get to this soon. —Kusma (talk) 23:19, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
@Mike Christie, would you like to take another look? —Kusma (talk) 15:42, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
Pass. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 22:13, 23 August 2022 (UTC)

Kusma, I realized after I completed the GA review that I should have done some spotchecks against the sources.  I just did a couple of checks; the only issue I found was:

FN 14 cites "The musical was translated into Portuguese by César Viana as O Último Tango de Fermat and was played in Portuguese university towns in 2003 and at the Teatro da Trindade in 2004."  As far as I can see the source only gives this as a planned schedule; I think the article should reflect that.
-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 13:09, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

@Mike Christie, thank you for being vigilant! Back when I did my research, I convinced myself that this did indeed happen, and I have added a few sources (including in Portuguese) that confirm it. Unfortunately I haven't found an actual review of the Lisbon performance (and some of the Portuguese sources have invented an Emmy for the musical that I chose to omit, as it is verifiable but wrong). Happy to reformulate if you think more changes are needed. —Kusma (talk) 16:40, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
No, that looks fine the way you have it. Thanks! Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 18:17, 19 September 2022 (UTC)