# Talk:Harry Toulmin (Unitarian minister)

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 16:40, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
I will start this review soon.  MathewTownsend (talk) 16:40, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for  criteria (and here for what they are not)

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:

B. Complies with  MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Provides references to all sources: 

B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Main aspects are addressed: 

B. Remains focused: 

Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

I have made a few copy edits, grammar fixes and slight rewording.[1] If you disagree, you are free to revert.
Congratulations on a good article!
MathewTownsend (talk) 22:26, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

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