# Talk:My Boy (Billie Eilish song)

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

Because of your work on "Hotter than Hell", I will be taking this on. I'll try to get to it soon. LOVI33 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
"a song recorded by American" → "a song by American"
"debut studio EP" → "debut extended play (EP)"
The SWMRS cover doesn't seem notable for the lead, remove it
"It has been certified by several" → ""My Boy" has been awarded several"
"most notably" → "including a"


### Background and composition
Target single to Single (music)
Target EP to extended play
"According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by Universal Music Publishing Group at Musicnotes.com", with target
"F#3 to B4" ← "F♯3 to B4", using Template:music


### Reception
Remove "Upon its release,"
"and felt its chorus" → "and felt it's chorus"
Remove "most notably"


### Live performances and other usages
Change title to "Promotion and other usages"


### Track listing
Looks good!


### Credits and personnel
Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is usually used if recording locations are also involved
target liner notes to itself


### Charts
MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Chart position for "My Boy"
Which year did it peak in? Change to Chart (Year peaked)


### Certifications
MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Certifications and sales for "My Boy"
Fix bottom so sales+streaming figures are shown


### Release history
MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Release dates and formats for "My Boy"
"Country" → "Region"
"Format" → "Format(s)"


### References
Make sure all these are archived using the tool
copyvio score looks good at 18.0%
A better source is needed for ref 1, a source to an EP that is unarchived doesn't confirm it's release
Target Don't Smile at Me to itself in ref 2
Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) in ref 7


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold for now. Once issues are fixed I will pass it. LOVI33 18:38, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
LOVI33 I have addressed all the issues. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:45, 27 July 2020 (UTC)

Great!, thats a  Pass. LOVI33 01:57, 28 July 2020 (UTC)