# Talk:Nation Alliance Party

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 05:16, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 05:16, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"None of its candidates were elected with Wei Ping Chen receiving only 7% of the vote." not sure if only is needed there
"increasing the number police in Richmond," number of police
The infobox says the party dissolved in may 2012 but nothing in the body notes that. For that matter, nothing's listed after 2009 at all. Did it just disintegrate or fizzle out, or was there a decision to end it?
The article is rather short, but aside from the last point there isn't really anything that can be added. Article is now on hold and will be passed when fixed. Wizardman 03:09, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review. I made the fixes noted above. [1] The article is short but I think I made the most of the references that exist (though being a such a minor party it only got a couple news articles). maclean (talk) 02:53, 9 December 2012 (UTC)
Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 04:52, 10 December 2012 (UTC)