# Talk:Hurricane Dennis (1999)

Just a little more on impact.  Jdorje 04:24, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Added more infomation Storm05 13:23, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
It's very close, but you need a few more things. You need to convert all US readings (mph, feet) to metric readings (km/h, meters). You need to condense a lot of your sentences, as sometimes you have two short ones in a row. The content is B-class, but a little bit more organization is needed. Hurricanehink 13:53, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
Alright, it's B class. More everything is needed, especially preparations and aftermath. Hurricanehink 16:28, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Dennis (1999)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 17:02, 29 June 2019 (UTC)
Going to review this because why not. YE Pacific Hurricane 17:02, 29 June 2019 (UTC)

@Yellow Evan: Any update? It's been over a month. If you don't anticipate having the time to post a full review within the next couple days, I think it would be appropriate to withdraw your claim to it. – Juliancolton | Talk 19:01, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
Anything about how the storm moved in the lead during its formative stages? YE Pacific Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
Better?--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"Heavy rainfall fell in eastern North Carolina. Although the precipitation was generally beneficial due to drought conditions, it also damaged crops." Mind combining these two sentences? YE Pacific Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"Over the course of the next two days, the development of a low-level circulation was noted, though a reconnaissance aircraft failed to locate the presence of a surface low on August 23. " link to low pressure area somewhere. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"The system turned towards the northwest and simultaneously slowed in motion by August 27 as a second mid-latitude trough passed to its north. Though wind shear remained unfavorable initially, it began to lessen on August 28 as an anticyclone developed aloft. " link to anticyclone. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"At 12:00 UTC, Dennis was upgraded to a Category 2 hurricane " on what scale? YE Pacific Hurricane
The Bristol stool scale. Duh! :P --12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
Done through MH. Will finish after dinner and the debate. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:52, 30 July 2019 (UTC)

"The erratic motion of Dennis resulted in several tropical storm watches and warnings, as well as hurricane watches and warning to be issued. A" I don't think you've linked to TC watches and warnings yet. YE Pacific Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"Storm surge left three towns on Hatteras Island isolated from the rest of the state as an 8 ft (2.4 m) deep channel was created on North Carolina Highway 12." link to storm surge. YE Pacific Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
"Overall, damage in North Carolina and Virginia totaled about $157 million (1999 USD).[nb 1]" considering the note isn't the 1999 USD altogether unnecessary? YE Pacific Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
Done--12george1 (talk) 04:44, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
Somehow, that's it. YE Pacific Hurricane 14:30, 31 July 2019 (UTC)

I have done everything, @Yellow Evan:. Thanks for finally finishing the review!--12george1 (talk) 19:12, 3 August 2019 (UTC)