# Talk:Digital HiNote

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:55, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

One-sentence lead is insufficient.
And citations can be in the main body as everything in the lead should be covered and referenced in the main prose.
I think it's reasonable to link laptop, desktop and tower in this context.
"color passive-matrix LCDs or color active-matrix LCDs" link these technologies.
"hard drive ... 120 to 340 MB. ... 3.5 inch floppy drive" link all these.
"inch floppy disk drive underneath" link first time.
" 4 lb and measured only an inch high" convert to metric.
"1998 they left" I would comma after 1998.
"wrote in CNET that" on CNET?
Don't auto-collapse the table.
It looks like you're forcing the table width to 100%, why do that?
No need for small text.
Date formats in refs should be consistently formatted.
That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:47, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

PhotographyEdits unless we start seeing progress on this in the next few days I'm afraid I'll have to fail it.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:32, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man Sorry, I completely forgot about this nomination. I'll work on it. PhotographyEdits (talk) 13:17, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
PhotographyEdits five days have passed since you left that note, but I don't believe any progress has been made.  I'll archive this nomination shortly if nothing is done.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:30, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man  Done, please let me know if there is anything missing. Sorry for the delay. PhotographyEdits (talk) 19:46, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Found a Wayback Machine page with review links, could be useful for expansion of this article: https://web.archive.org/web/19990221164736/http://www.windows.digital.com/news/archives/notebooks_kudos.asp PhotographyEdits (talk) 15:17, 9 November 2024 (UTC)