# Talk:Chamuel (wrestler)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"and occasional tag team partner Henry" - and with occassional
"in the vein" - style


### Professional wrestling career
"Chamuel made his professional wrestling début in 2010, as the tag team partner of regular-sized wrestler Henry. The two portrayed a masked, monster/doll duo with Chamuel initially wearing a mask that resembled a ventriloquist's dummy but would later change to an evil clown mask." - these two sentences need to be verified by a reliable source(s) since CageMatch does not mention any of this
"initially wearing a mask that resembled a" - a mask resembling a
"On February 21 he defeats" - beat
"Chamuel capped off 2012" - more formal; ended


### Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)
"in an attempt to fool the referee" - deceive
"The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two" - repetition of the same phrase in the same sentence
"The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two as part of the CMLL 86th Anniversary Show." - This sentence is duplicated and only one should exist


### Independent circuit (2017–present)
"While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - excess repetition of CMLL in the same sentence
"While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers," - repetition of working/workers
"Microman's independent circuit appearances usually see him team with and face off against other CMLL Micro-Estrellas." - think you mean Chamuel's?


### Reception
"and a Cage Side Seats review named the match the "match of the night"" - repetition of the word "match"


### References
Wikilink Agence France-Presse
The Author of Ref 21 should be formatted as |last= Has Pizzazz |first=Manolo
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

MWright96 I have addressed all comments except the source mentioned, I will search for one and get it added ASAP. MPJ-DK (talk) 10:34, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
Sourced, 100% done I believe MPJ-DK (talk) 17:25, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
@MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 19 August 2020 (UTC)