# Talk:Mai bună ca niciodată

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:46, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Link Oana Zăvoranu.
Could link studio album.
"on 28 June" non-breaking space between 28 and June.
Who or what is Sincron?
It's a label. Its name is very similar to the other one, Roton, which is linked. It just doesn't have "Records" in its name. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"production company Media Pro." what did they do?  Her TV?  It's not clear.
it's for television; adjusted. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"who was also part of the contributing songwriters Georgiana" do you mean "who was also a contributing songwriters along with Georgiana"?
Yes, I adjusted that too. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
" Romanian Top 100 ranking." instead of "ranking", perhaps "chart"?
"ranking" is also used all the time in music articles, but I changed it per your wish. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"Oana Zăvoranu, born 16 June 1973, is a Romanian actress" no need to tell us birthday, just link it.  Is there an ro.wiki article, use the {{ill}} template.
Linked, however, without using the template. Not very familiar with it. It could stay like this unless you want to add the template yourself. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"but ended up being scrapped due to" but was scrapped after...
"The visual has" the video?
"visual" can be used as an alternative to "video". Here, it might be useful since else, we'd have "video" three times in a row. Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"and whose budget was of €11,000" no need for of.
"Snagov, Romania on " comma after Romania.
"and old-looking police cars" do you mean "traditional" or something else?
They just look very old. Like vintage I guess. Better idea of how to write that one better? Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
"wore make-up done by Alexandru" done-> applied.
Hard work this for me, not a Romanian speaker and not heard of any of this.  However, it seems relatively comprehensive and needs a few tweaks for English.  The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:11, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Cartoon network freak any intention to deal with these comments? The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:49, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man: Hey there and thank you for the review. Sorry for the late response. Was quite busy in real life these past days. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:24, 11 September 2021 (UTC)