# Talk:Breathing (Jason Derulo song)

Los Aldeanos sample?
It's blatantly obvious.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.67.206.248 (talk) 04:48, 16 March 2012 (UTC) 

Album booklet does not mention anything about that sample. Oz talk 06:57, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

I'm sure the chor is overtaken from somewhere. But from where? 78.53.194.89 (talk) 05:18, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 16 June 2012 (UTC)


### Infobox
Provide an ALT text for the cover.  Done


### Lead
was well received → garnered positive reviews  Done


### Background and release
You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose.  Done
Link synth  Done
and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing"  Done


### Composition
According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove.  Done
and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample.  Done
As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics".  Done


### Critical reception
This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol.  Done


### Chart performance
eventually certified → Remove "eventually"  Done


### Music video
No issues.


### Live performances and cover versions
No issues.


### Track listing
I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available.  Done


### Credits and personnel
No issues


### Charts and certifications
The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table.  Done


### Release history
I did a slight c/e of the tables.
Could you add a Label column too.  Done


### References
Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46)  Done


### Summary
Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold

Passing, well done :) Aaron • You Da One 13:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

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Yikes—this is more information about one song than I've ever seen. Is it really necessary? If pages like this one were written for every song, WP would need an extra server farm. I'm just saying. – AndyFielding (talk) 08:18, 6 April 2019 (UTC)