# Talk:Daddy's Double

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 4 February 2015 (UTC)
Not too many issues here.
Lead section

"The father overhears and becomes furious before whisking his daughter away to a boarding school." I would change the to her.
Plot

"The father refuses him and Hal is knocked down" I would remove the word him from this sentence.
Release and reception

"The film would also be released in Great Britain on October 16, 1910." Change Great Britain to the United Kingdom.
Link The Morning Telegraph.
References

Link the publishers of these sources if possible.
Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 12:38, 6 February 2015 (UTC)

@Good888: - All set. ChrisGualtieri (talk)
Good job as usual. Promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:33, 7 February 2015 (UTC)