# Talk:Katia Bellillo

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:00, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"former Minister" why capital M?
Fixed.
"the PRC, she joined the PDCI in the" you ought to explain these initialisms before using them, many people won't know what they are without having to click on them.
Added.
"she was attacked by" physically?  Verbally?  Make it clear.
Added.
"Replacing Laura Balbo.." and yet she worked with Balbo?
Clarified.
Is there a link for "XIV European Affairs Commission"?
Unfortunately not.
"only receiving 1.77% " no need for "only".
Removed.
"was physically attacked..." there you go.  Okay was there any fall-out from this?
Expanded.
"referendum on assisted fertilisation" any article for this, even at it.wiki?
There is. I have added a link.
Fabbrini source has a spared </ref> at the end.
Removed.
Non-English language citations could use the trans-title parameter for English titles.
Added.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:51, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your thorough review. I have made the amendments and added additional references for the new data. Please tell me if there is anything else you would like done.  simongraham (talk) 16:53, 13 October 2021 (UTC)