# Talk:Federalist No. 6

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Will do. AryKun (talk) 11:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

"The argument" maybe "This argument"?
"He also identifies...war-prone nations" Shouldn't the clause after the comma provide a contrast with the first clause here?
It doesn't use "but", "however", "although", etc
"Madison used a similar empiricist argument as Hamilton" maybe better as "Madison used an empiricist argument similar to Hamilton's"
Plot summary seems accurate from a reading of the original document.
Images are properly licensed and used.
References are reliable and properly formatted.
Spot-checks:
"Federalist Essays in Historic Newspapers". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
Millican, Edward (2014). One United People: The Federalist Papers and the National Idea. University Press of Kentucky. pp. 79–80. Verifies all claims made.
"Federalist Papers: Primary Documents in American History". Library of Congress. Verifies all claims made.
That's all I have.
AryKun, all changes made except the one noted above. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 17:29, 22 August 2023 (UTC)