# Talk:Longtail butterfly ray

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 16:01, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:01, 29 May 2013 (UTC)


### Initial comments
On first pass, this article looks strong and ripe for promotion; thanks again for all your work on it. It's well-written, appears well-researched and comprehensive, and required almost no copyediting. I only noted one small clarity point (below), but also take a look at the few tweaks I made to make sure I didn't accidentally change your meaning anywhere.  

"Another name for this species" -- is "this species" the longtail butterfly ray or the zonetail butterfly ray? I'm assuming the former, but it's slightly ambiguous.
Yes. I've clarified the text. -- Yzx (talk) 00:10, 30 May 2013 (UTC)


### Checklist
Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 03:59, 30 May 2013 (UTC)