# Talk:Nå skruva Fiolen

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

I will undertake this review tomorrow. --K. Peake 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Super, thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:22, 18 June 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Thanks.
"and mimics the rhythm" → "and mimicking the rhythm"
Done.
"and certainly pretended to play it" → "certainly pretending to play it"
Done.
Use double speech marks instead for "screw"
Done.
Add a sentence mentioning Fred Åkerström's recording at the end of the lead, as this is notable
Done.


### Background
Good
Noted.


### Epistle
#### Music and verse form
Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify its usage
Done.
Wikilink cello
Done.
Pipe 24 time to Duple and quadruple metre
Done.
Wikilink timbre
Not done, the article is about the quality of a tone, not the meaning here.
"on the 3rd and 4th lines," → "on the third and fourth lines," per MOS:NUM
Done.


#### Lyrics
Img looks good!
Noted.
"It is subtitled" → "The composition is subtitled" to avoid overusage of it
Done.
Remove commas around Paul Britten Austin
Done.
Versions of the start of Epistle No. 2 → Starting lines of Epistle No. 2
Done.


### Reception and legacy
Imgs look good!!
Thanks.
Remove wikilink on cello in prose
Done.
Remove wikilink on cittern
Done.
Pipe tuning pegs to Tuning mechanisms for stringed instruments
Done.
Wikilink folk music
Done.
"recorded it also on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was" → "also recorded the song on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was included as"
Reworded.
Wikilink flute
Done.
Pipe classical to Classical music
Done.


### Notes
Shouldn't there be sources for the info of the notes since they are not mentioning anything corresponding with refs next to them?
Added.


### References
Copyvio score is undetectable at 0%!!!!
Noted.
Shouldn't ref 10 be cited in place of ref 6 since that also invokes p. 63?
Noted, but ref 6 is more specific, which is better for its task.
Cite Bellman.net as publisher instead on ref 9
Done.
WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 15
Done.
Pipe WEA Records to Warner Music Group and fix WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 16
Done.
Pipe Sterling to Sterling Records (Sweden) on ref 17
Done.


### Sources
Good
Thanks.


### External links
Shouldn't you write on YouTube after the links to the videos?
Done.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 07:40, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
Kyle Peake - all done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:59, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, quick response once again! --K. Peake 07:06, 20 June 2022 (UTC)