# Talk:Grace Macurdy

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y


### Prose Suggestions
Suggest you expand lede.


#### Academic
Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, the daughter of Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. suggest you change this to either Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, to Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. or Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, and was the daughter of Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. Y
Originally, it is clear that she patterned her work on Murray's suggest It is clear that she originally patterned her work on Murray's Y


#### Reception
rather than attempting to follow the imitate the paths laid out by male scholars and suppress her own gender, established her own approach to academic work. suggest rather than attempting to follow the paths laid out by male scholars and suppress her own gender, established her own approach to academic work.Y
@KateCook: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:37, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Brilliant, thank you for the review! I have adjusted the text accordingly. KateCook (talk) 21:43, 17 March 2018 (UTC)