# Talk:Konstantin Mereschkowski

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:31, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Another! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments

"his Russian work" is Russian needed here?
Cut.
No reason for those two references in the lead, they can go into the main body if they're not already there.
Moved.
" a Privy Councillor" is there a reason this is capitalised?
l/c.
"famous scientists, publishing on anthropology" who was doing the **
publishing here, it's not clear.

Edited.
"to the paedophilia for" do you mean criminal acts of paedophilia?
Edited.
"classification of the diatoms based " overlinked.
Fixed.
"University, Tatarstan;" I would think that Tatarstan should go after the first mention of Kazan, not here.
Done.
" St. Petersburg" Saint Petersburg for consistency.
Fixed.
"strikingly" according to whom?
Glossed.
"to form chloroplasts.[14][12]" overlinked and ref order.
Fixed.
"sizeable lichen herbarium, containing" lichen overlinked.
Fixed.
"remains at Kazan University. It " overlinked.
Fixed.
"a mutualistic symbiosis between" overlinked.
Fixed.
"and indeed ridiculed" even rather than indeed.
Fixed.
JSTOR is in both italics and not italics in the refs.
Fixed.
Schimper is mentioned in the infobox but not in the article at all.
Added mention.
Likewise Wallin.
Added.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)