# Talk:Jagdgeschwader III

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y


### Prose Suggestions
#### Lede
and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of three attacking Armees. suggest you change this to and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of the three Armees involved in the attack.
Excellent suggestion. Slight rewrite.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
not to mention frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals, suggest along with frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals,
Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)


#### Operational history
Flying was kept to a bare minimum. JG III husbanded its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive. suggest Flying was kept to a bare minimum, as JG III was husbanding its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive.** Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
@Georgejdorner: That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 15:51, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
Many thanks for a speedy review.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)