# Talk:Carry On (Supernatural)

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Reviewer: Soaper1234 (talk · contribs) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I'm going to review this article. My comments are below. Soaper1234 - talk 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
The plot mentions a song being played, so should this be mentioned in the infobox?
 Done
Sam → Sam Winchester
Wouldn't that sound repetitive? "Sam and Dean Winchester" sounds better than "Sam Winchester and Dean Winchester".
Yeah, happy to let that go.
Add a comma after together
Expanded sentence so no longer necessary.
The new clause in the sentence is not mentioned - or sourced - anywhere in the article.
 Done Removed.
Add "to the show" after conclusion
 Done
Merge final sentence into the second paragraph.
 Done


### Plot
Characters need wikilinking and full names on first mention.
 Done
All characters need actors in parenthesis.
 Done
Missed Bobby's surname.
 Fixed
Context for characters and things such as "Roadhouse" and "the Impala" is needed in the plot.
 Done
Need context for who Castiel, Jack Kline, Rufus Turner, John Winchester, and Mary Winchester are.
 Fixed
Perhaps only link the "14 years prior" bit.
 Done
Remove "in Heaven" from final line.
 Done


### Production
Add "cast members" before Jared Padalecki
 Done
The longest-running show fact needs a source.
 Done
Add "Showrunner and executive producer" before Andrew Dabb.
 Done
Change "the March 23 episode" to "episode 13 of the season, broadcast on March 23".
 Done
Change "shutdown due to the virus outbreak" to "shutdown in production".
 Done


### Reception
It is very quote-heavy, so can you paraphrase some bits?
 Done


### References
All looks good.


### Progress
### Notes
@Soaper1234: All of your suggestions have been addressed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:46, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
@Soaper1234: All of your new suggestions have been addressed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:23, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Happy with everything. Could you change the link to the Impala to Impala (Supernatural) to make use of the redirect? Once that is done, I'll pass this. Soaper1234 - talk 14:28, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
@Soaper1234:  Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:38, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
Passed! Well done  Soaper1234 - talk 15:56, 23 March 2021 (UTC)