# Talk:Erwin Arnada

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Reviewer: Gilderien (talk · contribs) 22:29, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for offering to review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:44, 9 June 2013 (UTC)


### Initial thoughts
Not a quick-fail 
"Arnada applied to be a photographer for the daily newspaper Kompas." is not in the citation given.
Coulda sworn I had added it. Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
 for filmography.
Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
The way you have set up the references is somewhat bizarre. Why?
--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 15:24, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

Not bizarre, standard for articles I've written (short footnote style); it makes the article text a heck of a lot easier to read in edit mode. Compare FAs Andjar Asmara, Gagak Item, Sair Tjerita Siti Akbari, Chrisye, etc. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
Right ok. I have re-read it and I think it meets all the criteria. Although having images is not part of the GA criteria, I would recommend adding them if they are freely available, although my somewhat cursory search failed to turn up any.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: Yes. - 
B. MoS compliance: 
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: Yes, with short style listing multiple online sources - 
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 
B. Focused: 
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: Since there are no images, this does not apply.
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: doesn't seem to be possible so technically 
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 12:17, 23 June 2013 (UTC)


### Erwin Arnada