# Talk:Music of the Chocobo series

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You might want to consider using the {{Nihongo}} or {{Nihongo2}}, or maybe even the {{Nihongo3}} template for the Japanese titles. Also the romaji for katakana is not meant to be in all caps. Also you will want to include macrons over letters for the romaji which can be found under latin at the bottom of the edit box. The guidelines for romanizing Japanese are here. Also for consistency, you might want to include romanizations for all Japanese titles throughout the article, though you might not. I'll probably fix the romanizations if someone else doesn't do it for a while. AngelFire3423 (talk) 16:03, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Be my guest, no one else is going to change them- I can't read a word of Japanese, so I'm not sure what you're talking about. --PresN 18:17, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for fixing/adding the romanizations! --PresN 22:10, 16 May 2009 (UTC)
If those are the names of the titles, then the Japanese for the title is off. In "チョコボの不思議なダンジョン2　オリジナル・サウンドトラック", no matter how you read it, オリジナル・サウンドトラック means "original soundtrack". AngelFire3423 (talk) 17:23, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
Good point.  I think I've fixed it? --PresN 21:00, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
Yeah, it looks fine. AngelFire3423 (talk) 22:15, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Discography of the Chocobo series/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
The prose looks good and is informative.
Right off the bat, the Chocobo's Mysterious Dungeon paragraph. Not too critical but does bother me a little
In the first paragraph of Concept and creation, ref #3 is used consecutively for the last two sentences. Should only need to use for the end of the full citation in this case.
Sources look alright.
Really my only holdups, I'll mark it as on-hold until you respond.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 20:47, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

What about the Chocobo's Mysterious Dungeon paragraph? Fixed the other one. --PresN 21:16, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
Ack, teaches me to get distracted mid sentence...actually meant to say that it lacked references at all from the looks of it.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 21:34, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
References added. --PresN 01:50, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
The second paragraph in concept and creation is unsourced.  It also seems to repetitively mention Hamauzu's lack of involvement after the first game (I would at least remove of which he was not a member).  Overall, the article is well-written and organized.  I rephrased a few portions for clarity, but this should meet GAC.

Played with that paragraph a bit. --PresN 04:05, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

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