# Talk:Doctor (Loïc Nottet song)

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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 06:03, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Grabbing this for a review. --Paparazzzi (talk) 06:03, 19 October 2018 (UTC)


### Lead and infobox
released on 30 ctober 2017...
Add alt description to the artwork
 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:36, 20 October 2018 (UTC)


### Composition
I believe there are too many quoted sentences in this section, try to re-write some of them.
I tried to rewrite some of the quotes (I realized some of them didn't even need to be quoted), but the lyric lines should remain. Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:37, 20 October 2018 (UTC)


### Reception
"Doctor" was received with positive reviews from music critics." I believe there is no enough reviews yet, have you tried to find some reviews in French or  Dutch? If you can't find any other review, change the sentence to ""Doctor" was received with positive reviews from  some music critics." (and do the same with the lead section as well)
 Done Used the word "selected" instead. Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:37, 20 October 2018 (UTC)


### Music video
I believe there are too many quoted sentences regarding the music video's plot, why don't you try to rewrite that part?
Add alt text to the picture
 Done I tried to remove some quotes. Is that alright now? Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:45, 20 October 2018 (UTC)
@Cartoon network freak: Those are my comments. I will pass the article once the comments are addressed. Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 21:02, 20 October 2018 (UTC)
@Paparazzzi: Hi and thank you for reviewing!  I have answered to all your comments. Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:45, 20 October 2018 (UTC)
Since all my comments have been addressed, I'm going to pass this nomination. Congratulations! Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 22:35, 20 October 2018 (UTC)