# Talk:Cyclone Magda

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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 21:19, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

Well-written:  (Only found one misspelled word and fixed it)
(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
Verifiable with no original research: 
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose); and
(c) it contains no original research.
Broad in its coverage:  (I would work on expanding the "Preparations and Impacts" section...A little short there.)
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. 
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: 
(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content; and
(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.

Overall:  
Notes: This is a very good and well-written article. There was only one misspelled word "Madga" instead of ""Magda", which I fixed, and you might want to consider retaining from using the word "centre" so much. There could be more references to help the article, but if you cannot find anymore, that is okay. All images are tagged and licensed correctly, and the article is clear and concise. The "Preparations and Impacts" section could be expanded a little more, but overall, this article is definitely Good Article quality! TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 21:31, 18 December 2010 (UTC)

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