# Talk:Guilt Trip (song)

@Zmbro: You may want to split the lead into two paragraphs. Also, I have expanded the live performances section; take a look and see if you need to edit it anymore. --Kyle Peake (talk) 21:56, 20 June 2019 (UTC)

Kyle Peake Yeah I stated that in the edit I made here. I'll figure it out. Thanks for expanding it. – zmbro (talk) 01:22, 21 June 2019 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Guilt Trip (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 14:18, 19 July 2019 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:18, 19 July 2019 (UTC)

Why did Kid Cudi expressed negative opinions about his feature? Mention it in the lead.
Period missing from alt text.
Link S1 and Yeezus in the 'Background and development' section.
Delink Yeezus in the later section.
"The song received generally positive reviews from music critics, with the melodic sound garnering praise." Any reference to support this claim?
Why Cudi is mentioned with his full name multiple times?
Mainly because it's his stage name. With West, it's his actual name so it applies to use surname only but because Kid Cudi is Scott Mescudi's stage name I think you'd have to say it everytime. I had this discussion with Kyle Peake during the GA review of "Father Stretch My Hands"
Link Complex in the 'Release and reception' section.
Delink United States in the 'Commercial performance' section. Per WP:OLINK.
"In December 2013, West delivered a live performance." Replace 'West' with 'he'.
Archive the links.
Yeah I tried to do that last month but the bot refused to work for me. Finally did :-)
Are HotNewHipHop and Popdust RS's?
HotNewHipHop is per this 2019 discussion. Popdust isn't listed under WP:NOTRSMUSIC so I think it should be good.
That's it. Great work on the article Zmbro. Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:21, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

Yashthepunisher All done. Comments above. Thanks so much for taking this! :-) – zmbro (talk) 15:03, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
It's a pass.  Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:08, 20 July 2019 (UTC)