# Talk:Konomi Suzuki

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 02:15, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

The article looks in perfect shape to be GA but there are some minor issues that can easily be fixed:

For the lead, make a mention of her tracks' popularity.
Paraphrase quotes or add the reference there.
"first album 17 in 2014" Shouldn't it be "first album, 17, in 2014?
Other than that the article looks in perfect shape to become GA. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 02:15, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

@Tintor2: Could you please clarify what you mean by "Paraphrase quotes or add the reference there."? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:28, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
@Tintor2: In any case, I've addressed the concerns you've raised. I also added missing references to the discography table. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:39, 13 October 2017 (UTC)
What I meant by that is that there are times in Wikipedia we have avoid using quotes like "thank you" and instead replace them with our words like grattitude. Believe it or not, some reviews don't become GA due to overuse of quotes to the point it might contain copyright issues. Anyway, I've seen your work and I think it's in good state to pass the article to GA. Congratulations.Tintor2 (talk) 15:38, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

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