# Talk:Nick Holden

I think there is some confusion about the citation for Holden's father and the Vancouver Giants. It says his step-brother, Jack Redlick, played for them (which he did, in 2001–02), but not his father. If I'm reading the right part of the article used for the citation, it says: "...Holden, the latest in a family of rearguards after dad John, one-time Vancouver Giant step-brother Jack Redlick...". It just says his father was a defenceman, not that he played for the Giants. Kaiser matias (talk) 19:29, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Kaiser matias, Thank you, I misread it. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
All good. Glad to help. Kaiser matias (talk) 21:07, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Nick Holden/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Why not. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Ref 1 needs capitalization and publisher. Done
St. Albert should be linked in the lead.  Done
"plumper" Plumber?  Done
Don't think you need to write Canada, the country is implied with the province and city.  Done
You should add |via=Newspapers.com for those refs that use it. Done
Same for NewspaperArchive refs. Done
Ref 3 has authors.  Done
I assume there is a typo from Ref 3 regard his high school's name.  Done
You can specify that he was a hockey referee.  Done
Link minor ice hockey for bantam.  Done
"without trying out for the team" Trying out for a team.  Done
Here's a desktop site for ref 5.  Done
SJHL should be written out.  Done
"if hockey did not pan out" Maybe expand to "if his hockey career did not pan out"?  Done
Continuing tomorrow. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:49, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

"6 foot 3 and weighing 200 pounds" {{convert}} needed. Done
"2007 National Hockey League (NHL)" Don't need to write out NHL here.  Done
|via=Pressreader for ref 10.
"Although" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
Ref 18 has an author. Done
"He earned his first NHL call up during the 2010–11 season" Don't see this in source.  Done
Ref 20 has an author.  Done
Ref 24 doesn't load any text. Done
Ref 27 has an author. Done
Ref 29 too, and the title does not match the one on the site. Done
"He also led all Avalanche defenceman with three goals and four points in their Western Conference Quarter-final series defeat in the 2014 Stanley Cup playoffs against the Minnesota Wild." Also not in source (the point/assist).  Done
"teammatess" Done
"Holdan" and "Holdon" Done
"preventing him from becoming an unrestricted free agent at the end of the 2019–20 season." Not in source. Done
The section just for charity work seems unnecessary. Done
The lead can always be longer, doesn't seem to have much of his professional career.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:00, 19 May 2020 (UTC)