# Talk:Girl in Mirror

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead is a bit short. Can't it be expanded on further?
I tried to expand.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:47, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
Analysis --> Don't see a need to have two paragraphs, they can fit in one.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:47, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
Critical review --> Retitle to Reception and same issue as above.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  07:47, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
I see no other issues with the article. It is well referenced and written.
Y All issues addressed. Passing the article. Statυs (talk) 07:50, 21 June 2012 (UTC)