# Talk:Flower, Sun, and Rain

This page needs to be fixed up.It's in very poor condition,
That is all,  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.29.32.32 (talk) 15:52, 15 August 2008 (UTC) 

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BetacommandBot (talk) 05:22, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

The game's name is "Flower, Sun and Rain", rather than "Flower, Sun, and Rain". So I edited all the references in the article itself, though the page itself needs to be moved I guess. 148.197.81.135 (talk) 00:14, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Where's this section gone? Does anyone have any idea of where to find the information for this section?  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.162.138.172 (talk) 11:09, 11 July 2009 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Flower, Sun, and Rain/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 21:15, 10 February 2017 (UTC)

I've been enjoying the Twilight Syndrome games recently, and this seems to have an odd relation to the series . Will review today or later this weekend. TarkusAB 21:15, 10 February 2017 (UTC)

Lead

Footnote JP title and include the game's full english title in the footnote
Link Micronesian, had to look that one up myself
Synopsis

Link Micronesian again
Development

he had full immersed --> he had fully immersed
"Another contributor to the scenario was Masashi Ooka, who had previously worked with Suda on The Silver Case. The character designs were handled by Takashi Miyamoto, who previously worked on The Silver Case." - These sentenced should be combined to prevent repitition
"challenging change for him" - If you change the above, make sure to change "him" to Miyamoto for clarification
Classical music does not need to be capitalized (3 occurrences in whole article)
Release

"Xseed Games spent a long time deliberating" - Does the source say how long
Reception

"oldschool" --> "old school"
External links

All dead links have already been archived
Looks like an interesting game. I will put this on hold until issues are addressed. TarkusAB 03:57, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: I've addressed all the issues above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:26, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
@ProtoDrake: OK this one is good to go, great job! TarkusAB 11:44, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

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