# Talk:Help Wanted (SpongeBob SquarePants)

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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article. I look forward to it and feel free to leave me a message about anything. Best, Sportsguy17 (talk • contribs • sign)  02:44, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

Going over some basics: here is the Checklinks Report, and the Reflinks report. I will be posting a section-by-section analysis shortly. Sportsguy17 (talk • contribs • sign)  00:24, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
As I begin the section-by-section, I am going to advise you that a snowstorm (known as Nor'easters) is hitting Boston tonight throughout tomorrow and if I lose power, I will be unable to respond for a while. For time purposes, I am only going to mention sections that need improvement, especially regarding sources. If free will beats fate, then I'll check for mechanics (spelling & grammar) later once reference improvements are made.

That's just OK. I hope you'll be OK too. :) Mediran (t • c) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
Excellent job. I spent most of my morning shoveling snow off my driveway and walkway, albeit I still have power and so does everyone, so this is good . Anyway, good job. I verified the Plot summary references and no others need to be added. I will be checking all references and checking for spelling and grammar. This looks good so far. Sportsguy17 (talk • contribs • sign)  21:16, 15 December 2013 (UTC)


### Section-by-section Analysis
Lead
The lead is looking pretty good overall. The first few sentences of the third paragraph need to be copy edited: For example, change it to The episode was written by Hillenburg, Derek Drymon, and Tim Hill and the animation director was Alan Smart. Otherwise, it seems to follow MOS:LEAD quite well.

Done. Mediran (t • c) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
Plot summary
Although this section is about the plot, it could add sources in more details. If the given sources already support the details, use <ref name="..."/> for the duplicates and the original should be <ref name="...">(content of source)</ref> (without the  tags of course ) 

Well, there is currently a source from the DVD. Is that OK or should I have to add more source/s? But I don't think there are other sources more reliable than what is presently written there. Mediran (t • c) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
Read-through
This section is well-sourced, but is very short. Either combine it or expand it, since while its not necessarily a requirement per WP:WIAGA, it can be somewhat awkward to read a short section.

I have merged it to the "Release" section. Mediran (t • c) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
This is what I have for now. Lets start here. The article is looking well so far. Sportsguy17 (talk • contribs • sign)  01:39, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

Thank you! I'm looking forward to what this is going to be. Thanks again. :) Mediran (t • c) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)


### Final review
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality, no copyvios, spelling and grammar: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
Pass! Sportsguy17 (talk • contribs • sign)  00:27, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
Thank you very much Sportsguy17! :) Mediran (t • c) 04:11, 18 December 2013 (UTC)

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Why was the Help Wanted title card picture deleted? That's all I need to know. 107.146.244.150 (talk) 04:05, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Two reasons: 1) it was a copyright violation, which we cannot host on Wikipedia for legal reasons, and 2) the deletion discussion for the image was uncontested. SkyWarrior 04:10, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
Yeah that is true and I originally had it on my Draft:Schooled! article, until it was deleted on April 30, 2021. And the picture stayed in Wikipedia for many many years. 107.146.244.150 (talk) 04:12, 1 June 2021 (UTC)