# Talk:Heuglin's gazelle

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Comments

You could create Eritrean gazelle as a viable redirect to here.
Done
" nearly 67 cm" sounds oddly precise.  All examples are "nearly 67cm" tall?  Is that 66cm?
Only one source gives the shoulder height and the number is indeed 67, presumably an average but it doesn't mention the sample size.
"measure 15 to 35 cm (5.9 to 13.8 in)." in length.
Done
Second lead para is a bit lumpy, several very short sentences, not flowing nicely.
I have combined and rephrased a few lines, let me know how it looks.
"an altitude of 1,400 m"  do you  really mean elevation?
Yes, fixed
"with less than 2,500" fewer
Done
"They are spaced 119–173 cm (47–68 in) apart at the base" the  horns are spaced more than  a metre apart at their base???
My bad, put cm instead of mm. Fixed
"(16–37 in) .[6][4] " no space after parenthesis and ref order in numerical order.
Fixed
" close to the fence" what fence?
Of the enclosure, added.
"(nearly six months)" not necessary.
Removed
" calf is born. Calves are born" repetitive.
Fixed
Explain/link IUCN.
Linked
'(Heuglin, 1868)' in the infobox but 1863  in prose.
Corrected to 1863
That's all I have, so I'm putting it on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:55, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

All comments addressed. Cheers, Sainsf (t · c) 16:17, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
Cool beans, I'm happy with the amendments and promoting to GA.  Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:01, 22 May 2020 (UTC)