# Talk:HMS Intrepid (1747)

Looks B class to me. Let me know if you would like it assessing. Gog the Mild (talk) 23:53, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Intrepid (1747)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 21:25, 8 August 2020 (UTC)

I will review this article. Djmaschek (talk) 21:25, 8 August 2020 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Other comments
Please fix these issues. Djmaschek (talk) 04:21, 9 August 2020 (UTC)

In the infobox, Captured & Acquired give a date of 3 May 1747, but the text gives the correct date of 14 May 1747. Use the correct date.
Corrected, but added a note to explain the discrepancy. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Tonnage is listed as 1,019 bm in the cited text, but it is 1,286 bm in the infobox.
Corrected to 1,286. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Ordered (6 February 1738) is listed in the infobox, but not in the text. It should be listed and cited in the text or cited in the infobox.
Added into the text. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Draught (6.50 / 6.74 m) is listed in the infobox, but not in the text. It should be listed and cited in the text or cited in the infobox.
Added into the text. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Design and description, paragraph 2, sentence 4: "twenty-six 24-pounders on the lower gun deck, twenty-eight 12-pounders on the upper gun deck". Add links to 24-pounder long gun and 12-pounder long gun. Sadly, there is no link for the 6-pounder naval gun of the 1700s.
Added links. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Royal Navy, paragraph 3, sentence 2: "and sailed with Hawke's fleet". I believe it needs a link for Hawke.
Added a link. Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Royal Navy, paragraph 3, sentence 8: "Towards the end of the battle". I believe it should be "Toward".
ENGVAR thing; US English prefers "Toward", BrEng prefers "Towards". Harrias talk 08:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Got me on that one. Djmaschek (talk) 19:37, 16 August 2020 (UTC)


### Pictures
The infobox picture needs a PD-US or PD-US-expired tag. See https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Commons:Copyright_rules_by_territory/United_States#Copyright_tags. Djmaschek (talk) 00:07, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
I hate Commons licensing. Should be sorted now. Harrias talk 09:44, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
I also find it murky. Djmaschek (talk) 19:37, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
@Djmaschek: Cheers for the review, I have responded to each of your comments above. Harrias talk 09:44, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Pass. Djmaschek (talk) 19:37, 16 August 2020 (UTC)