# Talk:El Costo de la Vida

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

I can get this done in one day! --K. Peake 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Shouldn't "Burbujas de Amor" be listed as another B-side in the infobox per the track listing?
Areíto Studios → 4:40 since that is the correct name and you don't use the term studios in infobox
"his sixth studio album" → "his sixth studio album,"
"The track is a" → "It is a"
Remove the introduction to Loketo since this is only needed in the body
Wikilink soukous to itself
"and Guerra performs it as" → "and is performed by Guerra as"
"It was released as" → "The song was released as" and make this the second sentence of this paragraph instead
In the second para, move the music video info to being after critical and commercial reception
"The accompanying music video for the song" → "The music video for the song"
"but it still received" → "despite still receiving"
Reword the award sentence to mentioning that it won the Tropical Song of the Year award at the 1993 Lo Nuestro Awards with the pipe
"in the US." → "in the United States." per MOS:US on the first being the first mention in the new order, also add that it was his first chart topper


### Background and composition
Pipe merengue to Merengue music on the audio sample text
Wikilink Juan Luis Guerra
Remove commas around Bachata Rosa
"as for music for" → "as music for" to avoid duplicate usage of for
"than the last one"." → "than the last one."" per MOS:QUOTE
Remove the comma after cha-cha-cha
"and song's composer" → "and song composer"
"in Guerra sings about" → "in which Guerra sings about"
"not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet"." → "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet."" with the pipe
"a measure of coffee"" → "a measure of coffee"."
"He also makes references" → "Guerra also makes references"


### Music video
"The news monitors behind the singer depicts" either change to the news monitor if it is only one or to depict if you mean multiple monitors
Remove the comma after Chilean military dictatorship
"The video also intersperses with scenes" → "This content is interspersed with scenes"
"in the category" →  "in the category of"
Pipe 5th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1993
"It was nominated" → "It was nominated for"
Fix the misspelling of international on the award's name


### Promotion and reception
"was released as album's" → "was released as the album's"
Wikilink greatest hits album
Allmusic → AllMusic with the wikilink
"boundaries of salsa" citing" → "boundaries of salsa", citing"
"The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" → "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" with the wikilink
"Despite the latter's concern," → "Despite the editor's concern,"
Add a full-stop after Tropical Song of the Year
"It was recognized as" → "The track was recognized as"


### Track listing
Shouldn't the titles be surrounded by speech marks?


### Charts
#### Weekly charts
Wikilink Hot Latin Songs


#### Year-end charts
Good


### See also
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks really good at 29.1%!!!
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 4
Wikilink Temple University Press on ref 5
Any publisher to link MacFarland to on ref 6?
WP:OVERLINK of ProQuest and pipe La Prensa de San Antonio to La Prensa (San Antonio) on ref 8
Wikilink University of Chicago Press on ref 12
Pipe Univision Communications to TelivisaUnivision on ref 16
El Siglo de Torreón → El Siglo de Torreon with the wikilink on ref 19
Boston Globe → The Boston Globe with the wikilink on ref 26
Austin American Statesman → Austin American-Statesman with the wikilink on ref 28
WP:OVERLINK of Los Angeles Times on ref 31


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went smoothly like I planned! --K. Peake 09:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake Hope I got all of them in one go this time (fingers crossed) Erick (talk) 03:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 Pass now, I did some slight copy editing but this is good to go! --K. Peake 07:07, 10 February 2023 (UTC)