# Talk:French destroyer Kersaint (1931)

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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 22:41, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

On my list. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:41, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

Is the range or the shell weight of the main armament known?
Sure, but I save those sorts of details for the class article which gets all the technical details.
"although these were older models than the one previously installed" Either "older models" → 'an older model'; or "one" → 'ones'.
"lest the ships be turned over" "lest"? You've been reading my articles. Optional, suggest 'to prevent the ships being ... '
Is that a terribly old-fashioned term? I like it because it's economical, and, you know, every additional keystroke is something to be avoided if I'm to maintain my current level of output. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:31, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
Well up to your usual standards. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:51, 1 September 2019 (UTC)