# Talk:Celtic influences on Tolkien

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

 
Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:31, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Link Celtic.
Done.
Welsh is linked at second mention.
Fixed.
"constructed Elvish language" Link Elvish.
Done.
"Tolkien's Middle-earth including" probably needs a comma.
Repunctuated sentence.
"That was a complex pleasure" I'm unsure what exactly "that" is referring to here.
Edited.
"Literary Welsh" You could link the whole term instead of just the first word.
Done.
"Common Eldarin" Any applicable links here?
Added link in sentence.
"here in a 1910 illustration" maybe better as "shown here in a 1910 illustration"?
Done.
"Melkor" A gloss that quickly explains who this is would be helpful.
Added.
"invaded Ireland...burning their...fighting a..." You start the sentence in the past tense and switch to present halfway through. It's mythology, so past would be better.
Checked; it's grammatically correct.
"Uttermost West including" Comma
Added.
"is "so far" Undying Lands is plural, so should be "are"
Fixed.
"and Balor...glass" This clause does not make sense taken together with the part before the semicolon.
Rearranged sentence.
"The Sword in the Stone is broken" This sounds out of place, looks like it's missing the parallel of Narsil breaking.
Tweaked.
"the sword remade" Comma.
"the sword remade as Andúril" is a thing.
The images are all licensed and used correctly.
Noted.
The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
Noted.
Spotchecks:
Hall, Mark R. (2012). "Gandalf and Merlin, Aragorn and Arthur: Tolkien's Transmogrification of the Arthurian Tradition and Its Use as a Palimpsest for The Lord of the Rings". Inklings Forever: Published Colloquium Proceedings 1997-2016. Verifies all claims made.
Whetter, K. S.; McDonald, R. Andrew (2006). ""In the Hilt is Fame": Resonances of Medieval Swords and Sword- lore in J.R.R. Tolkien's The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
Heritage, Stuart (5 September 2022). "The backlash to rule them all? Every controversy about The Rings of Power so far". The Guardian.  Verifies all claims made.
Noted.
That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 13:51, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
All done to date. Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:13, 26 July 2023 (UTC)
All right, no more issues I can see, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 09:26, 27 July 2023 (UTC)