# Talk:Jennifer Brunner

I had brought up the issue of neutrality a few weeks ago, and had failed to elaborate. A few points:

The article tends to read like it's trying to tell the story of Brunner, rather than just give the facts. The article tends to read somewhat like campaign literature or a magazine feature.
"Secretary of State accomplishments" isn't really appropriate as a section heading.
Tying back to the first point, quite a few bits of the article seem like they're written to garner sympathy for Brunner and her positions. There's probably more text in the article aimed to providing a sympathetic context for Brunner's actions than there actually is text describing the actions themselves.
--NeuronExMachina (talk) 20:50, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jennifer Brunner/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.


### Failed "good article" nomination
This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of December 27, 2008, compares against the  six good article criteria:

1. Well written?: pass
2. Factually accurate?: pass
3. Broad in coverage?: fail - majority of article about political accomplishments. Should add mre about personal life
4. Neutral point of view?: fail - review above this section was somewhat accepted, but some neglection spotted. Sections where NPOV not met:
Intro, second paragraph
1.1, last paragraph
Section 1, 2-4th paragraphs
5. Article stability? pass
6. Images?: pass
The review on Neutrality above this section is really to the point. Use it!
When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated.  If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it have it reassessed.  Thank you for your work so far.— Leujohn (talk) 05:00, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jennifer Brunner/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Hi Tony! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to the article - things have been a bit hectic in RL... Anyways, I'll try to get to at least everything but the prose tonight, and hopefully through the rest of the review by tomorrow afternoon. Dana boomer (talk) 03:54, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
In the Private practice section, the information on her work with the Ohio Pesticide Applicators for Responsible Regulation is repeated in the first paragraph and the third paragraph, with the exact same wording used in both instances.
I must have copied and pasted instead of cut and pasted.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM)  18:44, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
Private practice, third paragraph, "but that was allegedly disproportionately by the Ohio Democratic Party." does not make sense.
Got this one too.  I forgot to update here.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM)  01:21, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
Private practice, next to last paragraph "whose published election-related literature challenged" doesn't make sense.
was challenged.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM)  19:01, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Ref 158 (Majors, Stephen) is dead.
Swapped ref.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM)  23:13, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
Ref 162 (Smyh, Julie Carr) is dead.
Removed.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM)  22:17, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
I've completed reviews for references, images and stability. I'll complete my review tomorrow, as it's getting a bit late in my part of the world. Dana boomer (talk) 05:24, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
I've completed my entire review, finding just a few prose issues in addition to the two dead linking references I pointed out last night. I find no evidence of the POV issues addressed in the prior review and the GAR. I am placing the review on hold to allow time to deal with the few issues detailed above. Dana boomer (talk) 19:25, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
Allright, everything looks good, so I'm passing the article to GA status. Nice work. Dana boomer (talk) 15:44, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

A blog, Aude Sapere, written by Stephen Hopkins, has raised concerns about the neutrality of the article. Some of his concerns are valid, despite his asserting that the article is being deliberately written with bias by Brunner's campaign.  I've tried to allay his concerns about the authorship of the article, and to educate him about the Wiki process, but I've had little success.  I think the article's coverage of its subject could be improved by the inclusion of more significant criticisms and other negative information in order to balance out the perceived pro-Brunner tone of the article. I reiterate that there's no reason to believe that anything deliberate has been done to favor Brunner. It's simply that I could see where further improvement could be made. --SSBohio 07:53, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

It's been a long time since I've contributed to Wikipedia. I added a small blurb in the introduction about Jennifer's 2014 run for the Ohio Tenth District Court of Appeals. If the sources I've cited aren't good sources, or if I did anything incorrectly, please let me know! --Dylan Henrich (talk) 14:14, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

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The lead paragraphs of this article are much too long, inconsistent with WP:LEAD guidelines. The lead should briefly summarize the article, but here it is more like a complete reiteration of the article itself. Interested editors are encouraged to review the lead and narrow its focus to be more consistent with Wikipedia formatting. Go4thProsper (talk) 02:51, 18 January 2022 (UTC)