# Talk:Jared Norris

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:43, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

Going to review this. Promise that this will be the last of your articles to be reviewed by me for a while! MWright96 (talk) 07:43, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"He played in 42 games, starting 32, during his college career, " - reword to During his college career, Wiliams played in 42 games and started 32 of them.  Done
"recorded 269 total tackles, 7.0 sacks, eight pass breakups, four forced fumbles and two fumble recoveries." - wikilink or explain the jargon that is in this piece of text. Also this should start with HE recorded 269 total tackles,  Done


### Early years
Valley fever, inside linebacker and middleline backer are redirect links that need attention to.  Done
"His junior year," - In his junior year,  Done
"He garnered Second Team MaxPreps Division I All-State" - Norris earned  Done
Spell out MVP and wikilink it  Done
"He won the Hometown All-Stars Linebacker Award for the second year in a row." - better Norris won the Hometown All-Stars Linebacker Award for the second consecutive year.  Done
"Norris committed to Utah in May 2010." - write out a little more so it reads as follows Norris committed to playing college football for Utah in May 2010.   Done


### College career
The following are redirect links: mac linebacker, rover linebacker, Pac-12, the Bednarik Award and the Lott IMPACT Trophy.  Done
Added a wikilink to the first mention of fumble and bachelor's degree  Done
"He played in ten games, starting seven, in 2013." - He played in ten games, and started seven of them in 2013.  Done
"He missed two games due to injury." - is there anything to explain what type of injury Norris sustained?
All I found was "The Utes were without corner Davion Orphey and linebacker Jared Norris, who remained in Salt Lake City due to injuries. Norris also sat out the Oregon game." WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
"In July 2015," - change to Three months later  Done
"He played in 42 games, starting 32, during his college career." - Throughout his colleg career, Norris played in 42 games and started 32 of them.  Done


### Professional career
"recording 3 solo tackles and 3 tackle assists" - spell out three per MOS:NUMERAL  Done


### Personal life
Please don't use Norris' first name.  Done
That is all the issues I could find during my reading of this article. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 09:14, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: Thanks for addressing the issues I've raised. I'll accept the view you cannot a source that states the specific type of injury Norris sustained. This article can now be given the GA symbol. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:59, 23 November 2017 (UTC)