# Talk:2011 European Pool Championships

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:10, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 05:10, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"The events were played between 23 March, and 3 April 2011" - I don't think the comma is necessary
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"was a part of the European Pool Championships; " - were part
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"and saw events for men, women and wheelchair players across four pool disciplines:" - featured
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"Austria was the most successful nation at the event, winning three events" - try to avoid close repetition of the word "event(s)
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
" Jouni Tähti won two of the three wheelchair events, losing just one match in the final of the nine-ball event to Henrik Larsson." - same issue as above
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)


### Background
"Every event has a separate tournament for both men, and wheelchair competitors" - men, women and wheelchair competitors.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events as race–to–6 racks" - none of this is mentioned in the source attached to it. Another source containing all of this information is required
Added ref. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events as race–to–6 racks." - same issue as above
Added ref. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events" - repetition of the word "events"
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"The nine-ball event was held as race–to–9 racks for the men's and juniors events, with women's and wheelchairs as race–to–7 racks." - same issue as above
Added ref. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)


### Tournament Summary
When the player is mentioned a second time, just using their surname will suffice
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"In the semi-finals, Tomasz Kapłan defeated Petri Makkonen and Fabio Petroni defeated Roman Pruchay." - what were the scores of both matches?
Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"the eight-ball tournaments" - tournament
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
" Nick van den Berg defeated Huiji See in the first semi-final 9–7 in a match filled with mistakes," - this portion of text is not mentioned in the source attached to it. Please use another source that explictly mentions this information
added ref. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"The nine-ball event was held between 28 and 31 March," - 1 April; also this portion of text needs verifying by a reliable source
"The all Austrian final" - all-Austrian
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"where Cohan won 8–6." - Cohen
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
" to Marika Poikkijoki in the quarter-finals of the eight-ball" - eight-ball competition
done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)


### Results
The hyphens in the date(s) column need to be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
For all of the players' names in the results tables, they should be sorted in alphabetical order according to their surname with the Template:sortname template combined with the flagathlete template e.g.  Tomasz Kapłan (POL)
fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:50, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
The end dates for the women's nine-ball and wheelchair nine-ball events are 1 April not 31 March per the source of the information
"Roman Prutschai" - his surname is spelt as Pruchay in the source provided
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
"Konstantin Stepanow" - his surname is Stepanov
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
Marika Poikkijoki is Finnish not Dutch
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)


### References
The dates for several of the references are missing
Added missing dates. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:23, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
References 1 and 2 are duplicates; only one should be present
removed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:53, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
Reference 24 is dead and requires archiving
That's a kettle of worms. Removed unsourced material. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:03, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
The review will be put on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:26, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi MWright96, I've covered the above Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:44, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
@Lee Vilenski: Now promoting to GA class. I've made two edits to the article. MWright96 (talk) 13:08, 3 October 2020 (UTC)