# Talk:Adventure Time season 3

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

Hi, I'll review this one. FunkMonk (talk) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
"an implied past relationship between Marceline and Princess Bubblegum." It needs to be specified the relationship is lesbian in the intro. Relationship alone is ambiguous.
Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
"a dog with magical powers to change shape and grow and shrink at will" I see this formulation has been accepted in former reviews, but I think it sounds odd. It seems "the" should e added before "magical powers", or be followed by "that enable him to".
Fixed. You're right, it did seem funny.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
I see it has also been previously accepted, but why does the whole cast of writers have to be mentioned in the intro?
I just added them in there to summarize the production section.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
As an animator myself, and because this is after all an animated show, I find it puzzling that the production section hardly even touches on this aspect. But I guess it is animated in Korea or some such?
I'll add a little blurb. It's mostly explained in the parent article, though.--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
Apart from these issues, which aren't exactly grave, looks good. FunkMonk (talk) 18:33, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
How does it look now?--Gen. Quon (Talk)  22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
I think it all looks good now, so I'll pass. The only minor quibble left is that a footnote says Finn is 13, because he became so in a previous episode. That has no source, and though it might seem obvious, it should have one. FunkMonk (talk) 23:43, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

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