# Talk:Andre Thomas

I really wish it weren't, but everything in this article is true.  WP:CRIME states that a criminal is notable if "The motivation for the crime or the execution of the crime is unusual".  It clearly applies.
I have made the decision not to name any of the three victims, but other editors can interpret policy as they see fit.  I have also tried to avoid making this article obscene and I encourage fellow editors to show taste and restraint in their descriptions of the terrible acts this article covers.  Andrew327 08:15, 17 February 2013 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Andre Thomas/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:50, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Lead is huge for an article of this size, trim down by at least 30%.
"execution of the mentally ill." did you say that it was determined that he was mentally ill?
"Thomas committed the murders of Boren " Thomas killed Boren...
"is 60 miles from" convert.
"Despite his disadvantages" domestic disadvantages?
"became pregnant with a baby " pregnant and gave birth to a baby?
What's GED?
"kicked them out of " non-encyclopedic tone.
"U.S. dollar bill" could link, notorious document.
"to use Coricidin cold medication recreationally" what does this mean?  Is this drug well known for being more than just a cold remedy?
"walked a few " walked the few.
"was at work already, but" no need for already.
"he got home" returned home.
"faced an all-white jury" you only say a bit later that Thomas was black...
"convicted of capital murder and" link capital murder.
Date formats in the references should be consistent.
That's it for me for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for this feedback. I think I have addressed your points. Let me know if the lead is short enough. I reworded things a bit in the process of condensing the lead. Regarding the Coricidin abuse, yes, unfortunately this is an over-the-counter medicine that can be abused, often by adolescents, to induce feelings of euphoria or "disconnection". At first I didn't think to look for a WP entry specific to this issue, but it turns out we do have one on the recreational use of dextromethorphan (one of the ingredients in Coricidin), so I added a wikilink. Larry Hockett (Talk) 00:26, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

The Associated Press reported earlier today that Thomas' execution has been delayed.
Link here Comitialbulb561 (talk) 14:03, 8 March 2023 (UTC)