# Talk:2020–21 SC East Bengal season

I am not aware about Durand Cup being organized this year. Please let me know if I am wrong. This article mentions it quite a lot of time. M Kariyappa (talk) 15:21, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2020–21 SC East Bengal season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Poppified (talk · contribs) 06:40, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: 

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: 

Is it verifiable with no original research?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: 

B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines: 

C. It contains no original research: 

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: 

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): 

Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: 

Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: 

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Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
There are many problems to be addressed and also  article lacks information on the current season as the season is incomplete. Fail


### Comments
1). As the season not completed the Info in the article is not complete. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
2). Lede section is incomplete needed more info. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
3). Didn't mentioned it's the first season of East Bengal in Indian Super league. Best WishesPoppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
4). The image in the Infobox should be removed as it is tagged for deletion in commons. Best WishesPoppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
5). There are spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes in the article. Needed to be addressed. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
6). There are many duplicate links in article.Need to fix it. Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
7) The article suffers from a few single sentenced paragraphs. Could easily combine them.Best Wishes Poppified (talk) 12:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:2020–21 SC East Bengal season/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 02:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

The short name for East Bengal should be included in the lead with parentheses.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"its first 100 years" Centennial?
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Kolkata Derby should be linked in the lead.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"Then they were undefeated for the next seven matches." Not the best to start a sentence with "then".
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"four goals from 17 matches" Four goals in 17 matches?
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"East Bengal officially announced that Balwant had signed a two-year contract with the team on 12 April 2020." Balwant need a link, and was this the first action for the team's pre-season?
 Done. Yes, first action.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"The next day the club signed former fullback Lalramchullova back" No need to mention former when he's still playing as a fullback.
Here, former is intended as former player. He played for EB in 2018-19, then went to rival club in 2019-20. Again came back in 2020-21.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
No need to say upcoming when the article is in past tense, the season's over.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:21, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"goalkeeper Sankar Roy from Mohun Bagan, defenders Mohammed Irshad from Gokulam Kerala and Keegan Pereira from Jamshedpur and Girik Khosla from Punjab FC." Would replace the last two "and"s with commas.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Can't seem to open the reference, or maybe it's just me.
Didn't run the bot for a long time, and the link died. Marked as dead.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"Defenders Anil Chawan from ATK and Vikas Saini" Lowercase d for defenders.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"autumn 2019" Capitalize Autumn.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"the de facto]" Extra bracket.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"before the official exit, i.e. 1 May 2020" Better to say "before the official exit on 1 May 2020."
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"This was the first time this had happened in Indian Football." Could be merged to say, "the first time the clause was activated in Indian football".
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"the club and Chief Minister Mamata Banerjee, announced at the state secretariat Nabanna, that Kolkata-based firm Shree Cement was the club's new investor." Would sound better without commas.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"The club announced former India captain Renedy Singh would be the team's new assistant coach[54] and Liverpool legend Robbie Fowler was signed as the team's new head coach on 9 October." IN most cases the hierarchy has the head coach mentioned first, then the assistant coach.
Here it was opposite. Like a surprise, big things announced later.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"He would be assisted" He as in Fowler?
Yes.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Background section seems to be missing significant departures.
Or loans either, but I can see them interspersed in the ISL overview section.
Because of the force majeure clause most of the contracts terminated at once. Also, after being released from club, not enough coverage regarding them. But, added few of them.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"reached Goa on 16 October for" Arrived at Goa.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
No need to mention that East Bengal beat Kerala Blasters 3-1 twice in a paragraph.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Ref 120 died (Hindustan Times talking about Goa bubble).
 Done Corrected.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Highlanders should be capitalized in this case when talking about NorthEast United.
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
"on 10 December" Capitalize "On".
 Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  08:40, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Try to avoid words that might be editorializing.
Tried to rectify this.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  10:30, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Assuming good faith on the Bengali sources.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:50, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

@Nova Crystallis: Done.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  10:46, 28 April 2021 (UTC)