# Talk:2020 Treviso Open

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 18:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lede
Comma after "The event had a total prize pool of €38,000"
Comma after "The men's event was won by Jayson Shaw"
Switch the first two sentences of the second paragraph for better flow (e.g. defending champion eliminated → new winner)
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


### Tournament format
Why is the name of the hotel italicized here?
Specify in this section that it's nine-ball pool, which is mentioned in the lede but not in the body
Not a fan of the semi-colon after "double-elimination tournament", as the second half is not actually an independent clause.
Move "7–5" to after "Marharyta Fefilava" rather than at the end of the sentence, for better clarity
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


#### Prize fund
"both of the winners of the event" → "the winner of each event"; otherwise it could be read that there were two winners per event
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


### Tournament summary
Is it "losers round" or "loser's round"? Both are used at different points
Comma after "Oliwia Zalewska"
Remove comma after "completed two 7–6 victories"
"defeated" used twice in the sentence beginning "Having defeated Bojana Sarac" and is used again in the next sentence. Should use a synonym to break up flow
Per MOS:CAPTION, since it's a complete sentence, the caption should end with a period
No comma needed after "Ouschan won the final"
Hyphen to en dash in the last sentence
all done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


### Results
Why is one a "competition" and the other is an "event"?
fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


### References
Work needed in reference [2]
Sometimes a publisher is given for epbf.com, sometimes not
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:27, 24 September 2021 (UTC)


### General comments
No stability concerns within the revision history
One photo, relevant and properly licensed
Per MOS:IMAGELOCATION, the photo used should probably be on the right side
I was working on It is often preferable to place images of people so that they "look" toward the text, but do not achieve this by reversing the image, which creates a false presentation, which is why it's on the left, but I can't say I care either way. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:26, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Earwig score looks great at 2.9%
That's all I have! Ping me if you have any questions. — GhostRiver 19:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

All done GhostRiver. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:31, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Looks good to me, thanks! — GhostRiver 13:42, 24 September 2021 (UTC)