# Talk:2022 Liberty Bowl

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Reviewer: Red-tailed hawk (talk · contribs) 04:01, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

I'll take a read-through and update the table as I go along. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 04:01, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

I've read through for the first time, and I'm placing on hold. There are a few smaller issues that need fixing. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 05:48, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
@Red-tailed hawk Thank you for the review! I fixed the caps on "draft" and replaced the tweet with an ESPN article. The language you pointed out has been removed (I decided removing altogether was probably more simple than trying to find a ton of references to allow them to be left in, and the information is just as valuable without the commentary-style analysis). If there's anything else that needs correcting let me know. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:40, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
@PCN02WPS: I've added a few more comments above after another read through. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 04:59, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
@Red-tailed hawk Cleaned up the points in 1a (including all instances of "yard-line") and tried to fix all of the "analysts noted" and the analysis-y stuff with attribution or removal of the content. I also cleaned up the passive voice especially as it related to the pre-game sections; there is still a little bit but only in places where I feel it is appropriate; attribution and active voice have replaced all of the inappropriate uses that I found. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 17:37, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
GA it is. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 18:19, 18 February 2024 (UTC)