# Talk:Billionaire Ted

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:35, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
See WP:WAS for opening sentence.
Expand the lead to summarize the entire article.
"A following" doesn't sound right. reword
Archive sources (you can use this).
Do NOT use the "publisher" parameter for websites.
Add the "use mdy dates" template to fix references.
#3 is missing a date and an author name.
#5 and #9 appear to be dead links.


### Progress
@Some Dude From North Carolina: I have made the adjustments you requested, except the one about "publisher". The reason is because I would just like to ask a question because if I use "Website" or "work" it puts the title in italics and my understanding was that non-print sources (like ESPN) should be in regular text. What should I used instead?  The C of E   God Save the Queen! (talk) 09:52, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
@The C of E: I would suggest putting PW Torch, Den of Geek, and Goliath.com in italics. Also, #3 is still missing an author/date. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:54, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done those.  The C of E   God Save the Queen! (talk) 14:50, 21 May 2021 (UTC)