# Talk:ARA Jujuy

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:28, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
I'll take a gander at this one. Comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 09:28, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
Lead

...assigned to the fleet upon...: no context for the fleet here.
Construction and career

reserve in 1918–1919....: I originally was going to suggest replacing 'in' with 'from' here, but have since noticed that you use the 'in' phrasing in conjunction with a date range elsewhere. Not sure if that is grammatically correct or not, couldn't find anything on it on a quick skim of the MOS
I think that you're right; during is better grammatically
January – May 1927,...: spacing either side of the dash shouldn't be there.
Other stuff

Image tags look fine.
No dupe links.
Minor nitpicks only, looks close to being ready for GA. Zawed (talk) 03:05, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Hey Sturmvogel 66, a courtesy ping here. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:15, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, all done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:26, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
OK, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:10, 1 September 2022 (UTC)