# Talk:Attarintiki Daredi

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 04:34, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 speak 2 me 04:34, 12 February 2015 (UTC)


### General
Refer Pawan Kalyan by his last name, Kalyan.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 05:18, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Refer Trivikram Srinivas by his full name, Trivikram Srinivas. Let the actresses remain with their first names.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:30, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Wherever the words "rumor" or "rumors" or "rumored" are, insert "u" in-between "o" and "r". It is technically correct that way.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 12:24, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Plot
"Raghunandan is a rich yet unhappy businessman based in Milan of Italy." — Rephrase it as "Raghunandan is a rich yet unhappy businessman based in Milan." and wikilink Milan.
Wikilink "heart stroke".
Wikilink "The Government of Uganda".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 05:18, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Wikilink "NRI"
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 05:58, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Development
"Milo robotic camera" — This refers to the "Mark Roberts Motion Control" camera. Wikilink "Milo robotic camera" with "Mark Roberts Motion Control".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:14, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Casting
Can you find a better word for "casting managers".
Could not, thus removed the word. Still the sentence makes sense. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:14, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Yeah, it does. — Ssven2 speak 2 me 06:21, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
"Kalyan's grandfather" — Tweak it as "Kalyan's grandfather, Raghunandan"
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:14, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

"was cast for a supporting role who sported a realistic & rugged look for his role in the film" — Rephrase it as "played the role of Sidhappa Naidu for which he sported a realistic and rugged look."
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:14, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

"Navika Kotia signed the film in April 2013 and was cast in a supporting role as the youngest sister of Samantha and Pranitha in the film" — Rephrase it as "Navika Kotia was selected for the role of the younger sister of Samantha and Pranitha in April 2013."
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:14, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Themes and influences
"In the film, the protagonist is shown watching few classic films where the hero is in disguise trying to win over people who matter to him." — add a footnote like I have done here and rephrase the sentence as "In the film, the protagonist is shown watching few classic films, where the hero is in disguise trying to win over people who matter to him."
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:44, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: It's Mechanic Alludu right? Or is it some other film? — Ssven2 speak 2 me 08:52, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Yes, it is. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:49, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Piracy
"and spread like wildfire." — Looks unencyclopedic, Pavan. Rephrase it or remove it.
 Done Rephrased as Viral. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:49, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

"They seized hundreds of CDs and hard discs from video parlours and shops renting CDs at several places in Krishna district and took some of the shop owners known for circulation of pirated versions into custody for grilling." — Wikilink CD. hard disc, video parlour, Krishna district and grilling. Rephrase it after the wikilinks as "CDs and hard discs from video parlours and shops renting CDs in Krishna district were seized and some of the shop owners were taken into custody for grilling."
 Done Rephrased Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:49, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Wikilink "Pedana Town" and "Pedana rural circle".
 Done Linked Pedana. There is no article for Pedana rural circle though. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:28, 13 February 2015 (UTC) 

"recovered pirated copies of the film on Wednesday." — which Wednesday? mention the date.
 Done 20 September 2013 Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:28, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Home media
"accrued a TRP rating" — you have a better synonym for accrued?
 Done Rephrased as registered. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:49, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Critical reception
Some of the words look more like quotes. If they are, explain them rather than just writing the quote.
 Done I'm unsure about the final result. Suggest changes if any. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:35, 13 February 2015 (UTC)


### Box office
In the first para, it says "The film became the highest grossing Telugu film of all time surpassing Magadheera.", whereas in the 2nd para of the sub-section "India" it states "he film was declared a blockbuster and the second highest grossing Telugu film next to Magadheera overtaking Dookudu (2011) and Gabbar Singh (2012)." I feel the first one is as the second one states that it earns ₹630 million in 18 days, whereas the first one's ref states that it is set to complete 100 days. I feel the 100 days statement is more radical.
What do you want me to do exactly?  Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:28, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Wkilink "Ceded", "Guntur", "East area", Vizag, "West area" and "Nellore".
 Done East area and West area of AP do not have neither articles nor sub topics in the main article of AP. Except for those two, the rest have been linked. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 14:42, 14 February 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
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B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

Looks better now. Congratulations!  — Ssven2 speak 2 me 09:15, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Hi Pavan jandhyala,
Recently I've made an edit in the section-themes this article. but you've reverted my edit. As an enthusiast I wanted to know what's wrong with it. does it need a reference from any review or any problem with language or my writing style. You've given the references for the themes of remaining songs in this movie, and you left "deva devam bhaje". It is a blend of semi-classical and lite music, pallavi is taken from annamacharya and charanam written by the lyricist. I feel this is also a theme that has to be mentioned about. Can you clarify my doubt?--Pavan santhosh.s (talk) 12:28, 27 February 2015 (UTC)

@Pavan santhosh.s: There is nothing wrong. But it requires a reliable source confirming the same. Find the same and cite it.  Pavanjandhyala (talk) 12:38, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
@Pavanjandhyala: Sure. Thanks for clarification. --Pavan santhosh.s (talk) 06:29, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

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