# Talk:Appears

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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:56, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Appears/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:56, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Hey CaliforniaDreamsFan! Sorry for my long departure in the reviewing process, but I'll likely be doing a few more here and there. Since I'm not longer in the GA Cup, my reviews will just be coming in a bulleted list versus my previous section-by-section style. Here it goes:

Remove "units" after "physical sales"
"Musically, "Appears" is an dance song. It is written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship." --> "Musically, "Appears" is an dance song written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship."
"300,000 unit" --> "300,000 units"
I think you could connect the bottom two paragraphs in the lead
"long-time" --> "longtime"
"She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship. "It's about lovers..." --> "She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship: "It's about lovers..."
""Appears" was released by Avex Trax on November 10, 1999 as the sixth single from the album, which was also released on the same day. " --> Source?
"2005–2006" --> "2005-06"
"criticised" --> "criticized"
"It lasted three weeks on the top 200, one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart." --> "It lasted three weeks on the top 200, becoming one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart."
Add "2000" in parentheses after Super Eurobeat Presents Ayu-ro Mix
Don't have to include "in 1999" for the "Recording" process
Use two columns for the "Personnel" section please
Too many countries in the "Digital download" section on the table; do you think this is necessary if at all?


### GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
A PD image and/or quote box may help break up the text.

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

On hold to allow for changes. Good luck as always. Carbrera (talk) 03:05, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

@Carbrera: Hi Cabrera! No its all goods, no need to explain  All finished with the adjustments and editing, good luck and regards! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:24, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

of 300,000?! Gosh. Limited is limited I guess, but that's a big number and they weren't all sold. Would this artist expect to sell millions of physical copies ordinarily? (For context, The KLF's last release - after a string of top 10 international hits - was limited to 1000 copies). 
Also, please note that the info about being a limited edition is only in the lead. It should be in both the body and lead or neither (as this is a GA). --kingboyk (talk) 03:27, 25 March 2020 (UTC)