# Talk:Arbogast & Bastian

This review is transcluded from Talk:Arbogast & Bastian/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.


### Opening comments
Well written article; doesn't look like it'll need very much alteration before it can declared a good one. - Jarry1250 (t, c) 12:41, 18 April 2009 (UTC)


### Review
GA review (see here for criteria)
A nice piece of work, just a couple of things to tick off.
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
The lead section could do with a little expansion to cover all of the main points of the article.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
The last sentence of the article needs a cite; consider merging refs 10 and 11.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Maybe we could have a short summary of what happened 1905-1939 and 1945-1970 (just a sentence, or half of one), but only if it can be cited, of course.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
I do like the images; you might consider touching them up (or not, for that authentic look).
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Just a couple of things to fix All good
- Jarry1250 (t, c) 13:08, 18 April 2009 (UTC)


### Comments
Hello, Jarry1250, and thank you for taking the time to perform the GA review on this article.  I believe that I have addressed all of the suggestions made in your review, with the exception of "short summary of what happened 1905-1939 and 1945-1970."  Although I recognize the omission of this information is an inherent weakness in the article, I could find no information about these periods in any of the reference material available to me.  I hope that these modifications meet with your approval.  Alphageekpa (talk) 12:05, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Fair enough, we're only human. Duly passed, with the traditional suggestion that you go review someone else's potentially good article. - Jarry1250 (t, c) 12:44, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen; Our home (1942~1964) was within four city blocks of A&B Allentown; and my older brother was an accountant for A&B. I may require help adding to the LEHIGH VALLEY portion of the Pennsylvania Portal project. This is my first 'edit' attempt.70.15.231.113 (talk) 07:11, 27 February 2011 (UTC)