# Talk:Ashe (Overwatch)

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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 09:59, 1 July 2023 (UTC)

 
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
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b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
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It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
Lead

Should clarify details about the Deadlock gang in the body of the article - particularly mentioning that it was formed as an arms-dealing gang and that it's based out of Arizona.
Fixed. Removed the Arizona bit too, it didn't add anything.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 21:40, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
Concept and development

Is Blizzplanet an appropriate source?
It's had direct dealing with Blizzard Entertainment in the past, and I also linked to a recording of the panel itself on Web Archive for each citation.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 04:23, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
Design

"Two notable skins include "Mobster" and "Safari"" Is this a pair of skins, or just skins for Ashe that have an accompanying B.O.B. costume?
Fixed I think?--Kung Fu Man (talk) 00:26, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
Aight, all done. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 19:27, 19 July 2023 (UTC)