# Talk:2006 Brickyard 400

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 13:13, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
@Kpgjhpjm: Three weeks have now passed since the review has opened without any comments. Has any progress been made on the review outside of this site? MWright96 (talk) 15:14, 25 January 2019 (UTC)


### Lead
before 280,000 spectators. --> before a crowd of 280,000 spectators
retook the lead from Kahne on the next lap. Burton led the most laps out of any one else (87) --> retook the lead from Kahne on the next lap and led the most laps out of any one else (87)


### Background
No issues


### Practice and qualifying
two on Friday and Saturday - Needs to be reworded .
damaged; he was transported - Replace the semicolon with and
 The crash meant Sorenson went into a back-up car - Needs to reworded


### Race
when he hit wall avoiding Sadler --> when he hit the wall trying to avoid Sadler .
he rested --> he came to rest .
Kenny Wallace staggered his stop --> What is meant by that .
It means that the pit stop was arranged so that it did not occur at the same time as the others. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)


### Post-race
No issues


### Comments
@MWright96: I made some Copyedits and the review is complete . Kpgjhpjm  08:24, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

@Kpgjhpjm: Thank you yet again for another review. All of the points raised above have been addressed and have made some other unrelated edits to improve the prose. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)