# Talk:Best Friend's Brother

Has anyone else noticed similarities?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.78.108.238 (talk) 22:09, 10 August 2011 (UTC) 

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Best Friend's Brother's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Standard":
From Victorious: Music from the Hit TV Show: Victorious (2011). "Victorious Cast feat. Victoria Justice - Victorious: Music from the Hit TV Show - Amazon.com Music". amazon.com. Archived from the original on July 6, 2011.
From Victorious 3.0: Even More Music from the Hit TV Show: "Victorious 3.0: Even More Music from the Hit TV Show by Victoria Justice and Victorious cast". iTunes.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 17:52, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Best Friend's Brother/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:25, 16 February 2025 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar): 

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section): 

b. (citations to reliable sources): 

c. (OR): 

d. (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects): 

b. (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): 

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)
I will run through this article today! --K. Peake 10:25, 16 February 2025 (UTC)

Kyle Peake thanks a lot! I appreciate it! Shoot for the Stars (talk) 11:12, 16 February 2025 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Remove the word studios from the names of each studio in the infobox and the brackets for Los Angeles should only be at the end to signify this is all three
 Done
Pipe Techno-pop to Synth-pop
 Done
Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
 Done
WP:OVERLINK of Victoria Justice under songwriters
 Done
The lead should be changed, so the opening sentence mentions this is "from the show's debut soundtrack album, Victorious: Music from the Hit TV Show (2011)." In the following sentence, change to saying it was released as the third single from the album
 Done
In between the opening sentence and release one, add a sentence listing the songwriting and production credits out in prose since this is notable
 Done
Add a full-stop at the end of the prom sentence
 Done
Pipe techno-pop to Synth-pop
 Done
"praising its melody. "Best Friend's Brother" peaked" → "praising the melody. It peaked"
 Done
Wikilink music video
 Done
"in 2011 and portrays" → "in 2011, and portrays"
 Done


### Background
None of the second sentence is sourced to [4]
Changed it to match what the source says about it being in the episode.
Although I am aware of MOS:TVPLOT, shouldn't there be a source for the role of frenemy at least?
 Done


### Writing and music
"along with Allan Grigg, Savan Kotecha." → "along with Allan Grigg and Savan Kotecha."
 Done
Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 Done
"She stated they would" → "She stated the group would"
 Done
"each other but never" → "each other, but never"
 Done
What exactly does [10] source in the second para?
It mentioned that she wrote the song. I have moved it up to the beginning of the section because I think it is a good source.


### Reception
"be on "heavy rotation on many tweens' playlists"." → "be heavily rotated on many teenagers' playlists." to avoid overquoting, although you should invoke the ref here
 Done
"she opined the song is" → "the song is" to avoid overusage of she
 Done
"Jason Lipshutz, writing for" → "Jason Lipshutz, for" to avoid repetitive introductions
 Done
Please add a mention of The Buffalo News emphasis on Justice crushing on her best friend's brother
 Done
"was a "smash" → "is a "smash"
 Done
The TV Guide source says nothing about this song
Removed
"saying the track is" → "saying it is"
 Done
Commercial para looks good!


### Promotion
Wikilink music video
 Done
Prose is all good!


### Credits and personnel
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel
 Done


### Charts
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks strong at 15.2%!!!
Since I have found none of the info in this article to be sourced from ref 4, are you sure this is not the incorrect TV Guide article for the song and you had meant to use another one instead?
I apologize for that. I put the wrong link on the reference. I have changed it.
WP:BUZZFEED urges caution for the publication, although ref 14 is only for lyrics so this checks out as safe!
The access date from ref 25 should be September 20, 2012 or later since that was when it was uploaded as I checked on the video even
Changed
Remove Billboard from the title and include the archive url on ref 27
 Partly done I have removed Billboard from the title, but can't include an archive url since the Internet Archive link is the only link the works. The original link is dead.


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed and as always, it is a pleasure to work with you once again! --K. Peake 16:52, 16 February 2025 (UTC)
Kyle Peake Thanks you as always for an amazing review! I have addressed your comments above. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 23:24, 16 February 2025 (UTC)
Shoot for the Stars I am satisfied with your response apart from regarding the Billboard ref that is dead; you can add the original url and insert the parameter of url-status=dead to signify this. --K. Peake 08:33, 17 February 2025 (UTC)
Kyle Peake I am confused by what you mean. The original URL is already in the reference. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 08:40, 17 February 2025 (UTC)
Nevermind. I think I figured it out. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 08:41, 17 February 2025 (UTC)
 Pass now, this article looks very good after your work now well done! --K. Peake 09:30, 17 February 2025 (UTC)