# Talk:2004 Macau Grand Prix

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:15, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

" second identically timed session, took place"  I think this comma is unnecessary
"In the first practice session, Fábio Carbone set the fastest lap for ThreeBond Racing at two minutes and 15.216 seconds. "  Makes it sound like he was the fastest on ThreeBond's team, not fastest overall.
" it put him the lead on the approach to Mandarin Bend corner and held onto it at Lisboa turn."  This sentence needs work.
Not much wrong with this one, good work. Courcelles (talk) 00:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: Have made the necessary edits. Thanks once again for another review. MWright96 (talk) 06:20, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Anytime!  Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 13:12, 23 July 2018 (UTC)