# Talk:Alban Lafont

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

I should have this done by Sunday JAGUAR  11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
The lead needs to be expanded to summarise all of the article. At the moment it doesn't comply per WP:LEAD
"He spent six years with Lattoise before signing with Ligue 1 side Toulouse in 2014." - this needs a citation
"when a group of armed gunmen opened fire in a Cappuccino restaurant" - I don't think this needs italicising
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

I'll leave this on hold until the lead can be expanded to summarise the article. Otherwise everything is OK. JAGUAR  18:20, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jaguar, thank you for the review! I have expanded the lede as requested. Let me know if there are any other issues that pop up. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 22:28, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing all of the issues! Most importantly the lead has been expanded to a suitable length so I think this should be good to go now.  JAGUAR  10:05, 4 June 2017 (UTC)