# Talk:2016 6 Hours of Nürburgring

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 03:37, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 03:37, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
I'm copyediting as I read through; please revert as needed.

There are a couple of cases in the lead where you refer to drivers as "it": Fässler maintained its advantage and won by Pedro Lamy, Mathias Lauda and Paul Dalla Lana after it led the final 48 laps.  Since this happens twice I'm just checking: these are typos, right?  Not some oddity of the sport's jargon?
Yes those were typos. Have now rectified this. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Three manufacturers were represented in LMP1, including a duo of cars entered by Porsche, Toyota and Audi Sport Team Joest: Suggest "Three manufacturers, Porsche, Toyota and Audi Sport Team Joest, were represented in LMP1 by two cars each".
 Done MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Lieb's No. 2 Porsche led the 90-minute period with 18 minutes and remaining with a fastest lap time of one minute and 41.703 seconds: looks like some editing debris?
Cleared up. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
It seems odd that in the third practice session "some light rain fell towards the session's end", but cars switched "to dry slick tyres when the track dried up"; can you just confirm that both of these are correct?
These statement are correct and I have made some copy-edits to the preceding sentence. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Is there a link for "electrical boost"?  I've no idea what it means. Similarly for "drive-through penalty".
There is no link for electrical boost but have added a link for drive-through penalty. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Hartley stated his stratification of finishing as the winner: I don't know what this means.
Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
That's everything I can see. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 10:40, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Fixes look good.  Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 03:05, 8 February 2018 (UTC)