# Talk:1928 Georgia Tech Golden Tornado football team

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:57, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 05:57, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate 

use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Pre-season
"and Vanderbilt had the best chances of winning a southern crown." - title
"Halfback Warner Mizell headed a powerful backfield that also included Stumpy Thomason and Roy Lumpkin." - This needs a citation


### California
"Riegels picked up a fumble by Georgia Tech's Stumpy Thomason." - Needs a reference
Stellar is an non-NPOV word
"Its starting lineupn" - typo


### Champions
"Both USC and Georgia Tech claim national championships for 1928." - claimed
Coca Cola should be hyphenated


### References
Citation 2 has no publisher
Reference 5 has no accessdate
References 11, 16 and 24 and 29 both lack a work and accessdate
Reference 36 has a connection issue. Find an archive link.
Citations 17, 34 to 39 and 41 all have different date format to the rest of the references
That is all I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:20, 20 August 2016 (UTC)

Thank you very much MWright. One of the South's greatest old teams. With a little luck, I think I fixed all the worries. Cake (talk) 18:38, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
You have. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:50, 20 August 2016 (UTC)