# Talk:Beach Games

Sorry Jim and Pam aren't getting together in this episode, but I will tell you that they will come forth with there love sone. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 75.46.139.182 (talk) 20:59, 26 April 2007 (UTC).

this wouldn't happen to be a reference to the B Movie Eegah would it?  They made fun of it (and particularly the phrase "watch out for snakes!") in MST3K.  Maybe add this to the Notes section--74.88.164.181 (talk) 06:41, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 14:42, 6 July 2012 (UTC)

Lede: I would link names and add actors to the various characters  Done
Lede: "Episode scenes involved various cast members wearing sumo outfits" This seems just a tad bit out of place, maybe reword the sentence to make it seem more important  Done
Lede: "and many gave the sumo suit scenes as particular highlights" -> "and many cited the sumo suit scenes as particular highlights"  Done
Synopsis: I would add actors after the characters  Done
Synopsis: "won't" watch conteractions  Done
Synopsis: "citing as one example that almost no one attended her art show" -> "citing the fact that almost no one attended her art show"  Done
Production: Maybe explain the cold opening, I can't remember off the top of my head what it is, so that would help the readers
I'll have to rewatch it again tomorrow to make sure I get all the details right. Ruby 2010/2013 04:27, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
Production: "…the dour office, "the bleakest…" the comma after office should be a colon  Done
Production: Move the refs [1][3] after Hansen Dam to the end of the sentence  Done
Production: "And at night, they had heaters everywhere…" -> "At night, the production crew set up heaters everywhere…"  Done
Production: "Actress Kate Flannery also found the days of filming to be in "hot" temperatures…" -> "Actress Kate Flannery later said that the days of filming were extremely "hot"…"  Done
Production: The section about spitting out after ingesting. Did they really do it after ingesting? As in barfing? Or did they spit them out after putting them in their mouths?  Done
Production: in this section the pronoun 'they' is used quite frequently. Who are 'they'?  Done
Production: I would place a cite after every quotation  Done
Cultural References: "sang" -> "sings". Also, do they sing the Friends theme song? I don't remember that…
I believe their rendition of the song didn't make it into the episode. I have removed it for clarity's sake. Ruby 2010/2013
Reception: Again, I'd add cites for every quotation  Done
That's all. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 02:00, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

I have addressed or replied to all of your comments. Thanks very much for the review! Ruby 2010/2013 04:27, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
Looks good! Passing.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:47, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

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