# Talk:Akil Thomas

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Maybe add a bit more about his major junior career to the lead. Done
Add publishers to references. Done
"and eventually tied his career high of single game assists with a five assist night in a win over the Kingston Frontenacs. During the team's 8–4 win, Thomas also tied the franchise record for most assists in a game" The franchise record should be mentioned earlier. Done
For the infobox: His playing career should start at 2016 (First pro year if professional, first year of top level of amateur competition if amateur.) Done
"Aside from school and hockey, Thomas also runs a clothing company called Zale Apparel with friend Ethan Low." This should be mentioned in the article. Done
Awards and honours section needs a reference. Done
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:18, 12 April 2020 (UTC)