# Talk:Audrey Pauley

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:53, 20 July 2012 (UTC)


### Issues
#### General
No dab links. Great work!
No dead links. Great work!
Non-free images have good rationales.


#### Infobox
Infobox Television episode should be "Infobox television episode" (extremely picky)
I'll change it, but does that legitimately change anything?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Per MOS:PUNCT, "Consistent use of the straight (or typewriter) apostrophe ( ' ) is recommended, as opposed to the curly (or typographic) apostrophe ( ’ )." That being said, I see that Barreiro’s and Barreiro’s Daughter use that when they should use '
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Lede
Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add comma after "Maeda"
I'm not so sure. Commas should be used to separate potential sentences and natural pauses. If it was "It was written by Steven Maeda and it was directed by Kim Manners", a comma would be needed, but right now, I don't think its warranted.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
Done. Can I ask why this is objectionable, though?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8 and was viewed by 5.1 million households" should be "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, being watched by 5.1 million households in its initial broadcast"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"It received mostly positive reviews from television critics." should be "It has generally received positive reviews from television critics."
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
""Audrey Pauley" guest starred Tracey Ellis as the titular Audrey Pauley". Too many "Audrey Pauley's", consider re-write that
Good catch.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Plot
Add actor for Steven Murdoch
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Steven Murdoch → Stephen Murdoch
Another good catch.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add actor for Mr. Barreiro
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"some sort of Hell". Hell shouldn't be in capitals
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"some sort of Hell". isn't encyclopedic. Re-write
Why isn't it encyclopedic? They believe they are trapped in a form of hell, as in some for of eternal punishment.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add actor for various more
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Production
Consider adding an image. Perhaps: File:Kimmannersxfiles.jpg
I'll look for one, but that one is non-free and not ideal for illustrating this article.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Add comma after "Steven Maeda"
Again, I'm not sure.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
The Little Prince should not be in quotes. It should be italics
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Broadcast and reception
"Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network in the United States on March 17, 2002 and in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] During its initial broadcast, the entry was viewed by 5.1 million households[nb 1] and ranked as the 68th most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending March 17.[8] It received a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that it was seen by 4.8% of the nation's estimated households" re-write to: ""Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network on March 17, 2002, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] The episode's initial broadcast was viewed by approximately 5.1 million households[nb 1], making it the the sixty-eighth most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending on March 17.[8] "Audrey Pauley" earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that roughly 4.8 percent of all television-equipped households, were tuned in to the episode.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Anyway you can add Nielsen share
It's not available anywhere.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
"The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics" should be "The episode has generally received positive reviews from television critics."
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### Notes
Nothing


#### References
Ref. 7: Unlink The X-Files: The Complete Ninth Season, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it is already linked above
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)


#### External links
Nothing
On hold. Great work! TBrandley 07:13, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

I believe I've got them all.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Yep, I'll pass. Congrats! TBrandley 17:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)