# Talk:Antoine, Duke of Lorraine

According to my notes (for which I can't locate the source), Antoine had two additional kids: Charles, who was Bishop of Metz 1550-51, and Louis, who was a Cardinal 1553-78. Anybody know about these guys? --Michael K. Smith (talk) 03:40, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Antoine, Duke of Lorraine/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:30, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
Hi! I will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:30, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

No duplink, dablink, copyvio issues. No external links
Sourcing looks decent, citations neatly formatted. But all bullets in Family don't have inline citations. I have removed those particular children, as I was not able to verify them.
Comments on prose

Fairly well-written and covers the topic well. Pleasant read :) A few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:30, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

Does 14/15 September 1515 mean the battle date is not confirmed or was it supposed to be an endash?  Have changed to proper date with endash.
Why is the last para of Duchy legal status in present tense unlike the rest of the article? fixed
There should ideally be a different section on Death and possibly Legacy. Expanded. I was not sure how far down the "rabbit hole" to go. Thoughts?
Link terms such as 'gout' at first mention. fixed
All the changes look good. I changed Legacy to Aftermath in the section heading as it's more of the events that followed his death and not like what significant influence he has had in recent times. Should be okay to promote now, cheers Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:04, 23 April 2020 (UTC)