# Talk:Bambara (band)

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Reviewer: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 06:19, 9 May 2019 (UTC)
Seems like a short and promising article. I'll be happy to review it soon. 100cellsman (talk) 06:19, 9 May 2019 (UTC)

Hi 100cellsman! I didn't know if you were still interested in reviewing this for NicHT495. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:41, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
I am! I just haven't gotten around to it yet. 100cellsman (talk) 17:52, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
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So NicHT495, I'm pretty satisfied with the article, though I will fix some minor issues that wouldn't be worth putting into words.
I just have a few pointers:

It's usually advised not to place inline citations in the lead unless controversial claims are being made in it.
I recommend incorporating the origin of their band name in the history section. Just after it states that the group was formed in 2009.
"The band claimed" change "Claimed" to "Stated"
"In the meantime," is unnecessary.
"showcased the band's trademark atmosphere" I'm not certain of whether or not "trademark" is neutral.
Joe Talbot saying that Bambara is his favorite band and Alexis S.F. Marshall saying that Shadow on Everything is his favorite 2018 album are both unneeded and unneutral.
I would indicate that Colin Joyce is a writer for Noisey.
Hi 100cellsman - the student hasn't returned since the 10th, so I've gone ahead and made these tweaks for you. Let me know if I missed anything. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:34, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
Thanks! I'll go ahead and pass the article while fixing a couple things I forgot to mention. 100cellsman (talk) 19:39, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

 This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 January 2019 and 15 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): NicHT495. Peer reviewers: Renegadeknight3, Ethan495.
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