# Talk:Appu Chesi Pappu Koodu

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Plot
"he sends goons to attack him." - Goons is informal
How about a "mobster"?
Yes I think that is more appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
"Usha, is strained and attempts to marry her off are thwarted." - Who made the attempts for marriage?
Ramalingam made the attempts and Govindam thwarted them. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.
What exactly is meant that Ramadasu learns his lesson?
He comes to terms with the reality and apologises for his misdeeds. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.


### Production
"N. T. Rama Rao and Savitri were chosen for the leads," - leading parts
Done


### Music
"Cheyi Cheyi Kaluparave" was parodied by the Indian National Congress as a part of their election campaign during the 1989 general elections." - remove "a"
Done


### Release, reception and legacy
"considered the Laurel and Hardy of Telugu cinema at the time." - considered by whom?
It was a film historian's opinion. I have tweaked it accordingly.


### References
no dead links
Thanks to Internet Archive.
That is what I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 12:41, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thanks for taking up the review. I've addressed the concerns you have listed above, and i hope that i have succeeded. Yours truly, Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:38, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
Thanks. Can now promote to GA review. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)