# Talk:2016 Long Beach ePrix

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)

Will also review this article. Kpgjhpjm  16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)


### Lead
held before a crowd of 17,000 spectators on April 2, 2016 --> {{xt|held on April 2, 2016 before a crowd of 17,000 spectators.
 fastest driver of qualifying --> fastest driver in qualifying .
Make the words consistent - either write di Grassi or Di Grassi.


### Background
No issues


### Practice and qualifying
winner of the Long Beach Grand Prix - Link Long Beach Grand Prix.
in the 2011 event and the 2014 race - in 2011 and in 2014 .
that Virgin's Jean-Éric Vergne bettered - that was bettered by Virgin's Jean -Éric Vergne.
As with the first session, practice --> As with the first session, the second session of free practice .
accelerator pedal as lost a large amount of grip entering the first turn Did you mean and lost ?


### Race
from earlier in the event --> from the incident earlier in the event .
cosmetic damage to his car - What is cosmetic damage ?


### Post-race
No issues


### Classification
Why the names of some drivers are in bold ?


### Comments
@MWright96: The review is now done . Kpgjhpjm  12:52, 16 December 2018 (UTC)
@Kpgjhpjm: All of the above points have been taken action upon and some supplementary changes have been made to the article. To answer the question about the drivers' names in bold, it indincates which ones scored points because of their finishing positions or earned points for scoring the pole position or setting the fastest lap of the race. MWright96 (talk) 13:22, 16 December 2018 (UTC)