# Talk:Battle of Goodrich's Landing

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Nominator: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 05:53, 6 November 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 05:47, 19 November 2025 (UTC)


### Initial review
I intend to review this article. BTW: I own a copy of The Civil War in Louisiana by John D. Winters. Djmaschek (talk) 05:47, 19 November 2025 (UTC)


### Review 1
@Hog Farm: Here is a list of possible issues with this article. Either fix them or argue your case for not fixing them. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 20:28, 21 November 2025 (UTC)

Infobox. 15th La. Cavalry Bn. became the 3rd Louisiana Cavalry Regiment in Nov. 1863. (Please add link.)
Linked Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Introduction, paragraph 1. "along the Mississippi River." > "along the west bank of the Mississippi River."
Done Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Introduction, paragraph 1. "commander of" > "command of".
Corrected Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Background, paragraph 1. "Milliken's Bend and other points remained as lesser supply points" > Change the first "points" to "locations". (It just sounds better.)
Done Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Fight at the mound, paragraph 1. Add wiki link to Lieutenant colonel.
Done Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Fight at the mound, paragraph 1. Add wiki link to 3rd Louisiana Cavalry Regiment (aka 15th La. Cavalry Bn.) and change one of the converts.  Done fixed by reviewer
Fight at the mound, paragraph 2. "This surrendered occurred agaisnt" > "This surrender occurred against".  Pass
Oops; fixed Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
Fight at the mound, paragraph 2. 'Winters describes the surrender as "suspecting that their Negroes under their arms' > 'Winters describes the surrender as, "Suspecting that their Negroes under arms.' (I have a copy of Winters. "Suspecting" starts a sentence. Delete the 2nd "their".)
Fixed - I thought I had double-checked to get the quote correct but apparently I missed that. Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Move towards Lake Providence and June 30th fighting, paragraph 1, next to last sentence. "destroying as they want." > "destroying as they went."
Corrected Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
Aftermath. "Parsons's troops remained in area" > "in the area".
Corrected Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)  Pass
That's all. Nice infobox map. I would add a picture of Walker, but that's not required.
@Djmaschek: - Thank you for the review! I've made the corrections noted above and have added an image of Walker. Hog Farm  Talk 18:17, 22 November 2025 (UTC)
@Hog Farm: GA class. Nice work. I especially liked your inclusion of Barnickel's thoughtful discussion of the surrender. All fixes were done. I made one or two more fixes that I missed earlier. Djmaschek (talk) 01:53, 23 November 2025 (UTC)