# Talk:45th Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Last three sentences of the lead all begin with "The station". Maybe change it to some other phrase?
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"The station was also renovated in 1970." Renovated in which way?
Not really much to say: the tiles were changed and the platforms were extended. The first part was common for renovations of that time, but the second part is quite unique. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Ref 8 doesn't say that the approval was from Appellate Division of the Supreme Court of New York, unless I missed something.
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Ref 9 needs page numbers.
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Ref 10 needs |via=Newspapers.com.
Preferably clipped if possible.
Same for Ref 3.
And Refs 34 and 35.
 Done all. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
"490 feet (150 m) to 530 feet (160 m)" Ref 12 says 495.
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Ref 13 needs |subscription=yes.
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Ref 15 needs date format fixed.
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"in preparation of the construction of platform extensions" This should belong at the end of the sentence.
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"8-by-16-inch (200 by 410 mm)" Would centimeters be a better choice?
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Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
It was the same as the 1968-1970 renovation which already is in the history section. I will fix that shortly. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
 Done epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Ref 29 needs date format fixed.
 Done
Mostly just references. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
FYI, I am aware of that epicgenius will be fixing parts of the article while you're still observing Passover, Kew Gardens 613. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:53, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

@Nova Crystallis: I am available again so I can address any other outstanding issues. Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:35, 17 April 2020 (UTC)