# Talk:Bad for Me (Meghan Trainor song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:17, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

I will execute this review now --K. Peake 09:17, 15 December 2022 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
Mention in the first sentence that it was from the former's fifth major-label studio album
Swap the release and writing/production sentences
"as the lead single from" → "as the lead single from the album" with the wikilink
"and Vindver produced it." → "and Vindver handled the production." but these credits need to be fully written out in prose
""Bad for Me" has lyrics about" → "it has lyrics about"
Add a sentence about critical reception at the start of the second para
"performed it on television shows including" → "performed it on television shows in 2022, including"


### Background
"studio albums in 2020," → "studio albums in 2020:"
"as an attempt to "adapt" → "since she was "adapting" per the source
"fifth one, in May the following year," → "fifth one in May 2022,"
"the lead single from it." → "the lead single from the album."
"along with its lyrics" → "along with the lyrics"
Mention that it was released as a single and where is the guest vocals part sourced?


### Composition
Retitle to Composition and lyrics
Mention the songwriters here since you have mentioned the producer
Pipe keyboards to Keyboard instrument
"it at Sterling Sound in" → "the song at Sterling Sound in" with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT
""Bad for Me" is a" → "Musically, "Bad for Me" is a"
"incorporates the piano" → "incorporates a piano"
Pipe acoustic to Acoustic guitar
Remove or replace Forbes per WP:FORBES
Remove or replace The Breeze per WP:RSSM
"to name the subject but dispelled the idea that it" → "to name the subject, but dispelled the idea it"


### Reception
""[The song] is a" → ""[The song] ... is a" per the source's full quote
"a pop masterpiece", and complimented" → "a pop masterpiece." He also complimented" per MOS:QUOTE
Mention that the Adult Contemporary chart is a Billboard one
Merge the Adult Top 40 and Canadian Digital Song Sales chart sentences per the overly short length


### Music video
Merge with the below section and retitle to Promotion per the overly short sizes
"In it, Trainor and Swims" → "In the video, Trainor and Swims"


### Live performances
Make this the second para of the above section
"On August 24, 2022 they" → "On August 24, 2022, they"


### Charts
Good


### Release history
None of these should be sortable
Format → Format(s)


### References
Copyvio score looks fab at 18.0%!!!
Why is Meghan Trainor linked on ref 14 but not ref 9? Also, shouldn't it cite Epic Records as publisher and her as author?
I was advised against putting the label as the publisher at an FAC, apparently it causes an internal ref error that is visible when the page is edited.
Remove or replace ref 18 per WP:FORBES
Remove or replace ref 19 per WP:RSSM
Cite Today as work/website instead on ref 32


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:44, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
Thanks for completing this review so quickly, K. Peake! Everything should be addressed.--NØ 12:43, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
MaranoFan Your welcome, however where are the guest vocals sourced on the mention in the body and why is Meghan Trainor not linked to on the Twitter ref? --K. Peake 08:54, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
The sentence "features American singer-songwriter Teddy Swims" is included in the Background section and sourced to this. Her recording it as a duet with Swims is also reliably sourced and included in the Composition and lyrics section, and a comment about them sharing vocal chemistry on it from a reliable critic is also present in the Reception section. Introducing a wikilink in the user field of the cite tweet template produces errors so I won't be able to do that one. Regards.--NØ 09:35, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
 Pass now, this looks fine! --K. Peake 10:05, 16 December 2022 (UTC)