# Talk:1976 World Professional Match-play Championship

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 21:46, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
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### Links
### Prose
#### Lede
third para could probably do with being merged with the first one. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
That should probably cover a bit more about the events from 1952-57. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
non-ranking snooker - I don't really like the links together like this, can't we just say "invitational snooker competition"? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Can move ref from infobox to prize fund. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Reworked lead to address the points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:45, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Nunawading Basketball Centre is this notable? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Looking at the Google News and Google books results, I think not. Delinked. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:45, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


#### General
BACC - expand on first usage. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Expanded. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
as an alternative to the World Snooker Championship[3] now recognised as world championships - as an alternative to the World Professional Championship. Although at first not deemed a world championship, it was later recognised as having the same lineage of the event."  Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Reworded, but avoided "lineage" as I don't think that's quite appropriate. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Should probably mention that the World Snooker Championship was reinstated. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Excellent point. Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
The tournament was staged from 28 November to 11 December 1976, at the Nunawading Basketball Centre in Burwood East, Melbourne, Australia, with 16 invited players participating - in here it's worth mentioning that this event didn't similarly have the lineage of the world snooker championship. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
editor of Snooker Scene,  - needs "magazine" in there somewhere. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Added. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
And the later World Matchplay events as distinct despite - distinct what? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Added a few words, which hopefully clarifies it. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
As we haven't mentioned it earlier, could we put the format into the summary (IE, when the matches were played, number of frames etc,) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Took a while to get round dates. Overseas reports about "yesterday" and a syndicated article appearing on different days in different sources saying that a round was over "the next three" both confused me. There isn't enough in sources for individual match dates for all. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
As there isn't that much info in the semi and quarter-finals, maybe we could merge the individual paragraphs for those sections Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Done. (Even Snooker Scene only had a single page reporting on all the tournament results.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk)
We could take out the subsections too, it would look a little less bare. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
pot the black - needs some cuegloss. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:46, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
Sorry it took so long to get to Benny! I've added some comments above. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:18, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Many thanks, Lee Vilenski. I've addressed all of your points - please check to see if I've introduced any new issues by incorporating more history. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:53, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

There's about a minute of footage relating to the tournament at this site. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:37, 28 March 2022 (UTC)