# Talk:Baclayon Church

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 00:15, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Comments
I see one {{clarification needed}} tag in the lead.
Clarified. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
The Manual of Style suggests the lead should be two paragraphs. The last sentence by itself can probably be merged into the preceding paragraph.
Done. Merged. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
The two one-sentence paragraphs in the history section should probably be merged into the preceding paragraphs, if logical.
Done. Merged. I think it is logical --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
Regarding the headings, is "Retablo" supposed to be capitalized? It's set in lowercase in the body and captions.
Noted, changes done. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
Some redundant in-line citations can probably be eliminated (i.e., remove references from the end of consecutive sentences if they're the same reference number).
Noted, changes done. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
Toolbox tools turned up nothin' major, so that's good.
Nice work for a beautiful church; sad about the earthquake. ;( On hold for two weeks. 23W 00:40, 21 December 2014 (UTC)

@23W:, Please see my reply after each comments. Thanks. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 15:07, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
Hi @23W:, you might want to review the nomination. Thanks. --Carlojoseph14 (talk) 14:25, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
@Carlojoseph14: Sorry for the wait! I've been tremendously busy, but I'll have a follow-up soon. 23W 23:26, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
@Carlojoseph14:  Changes look good. I've made the following revisions here; they mostly involve grammar and minor MOS things. (Finally) passing this now; thank you for being patient with me over this month! 23W 22:14, 17 January 2015 (UTC)

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