# Talk:212 (song)

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Nominator: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 09:56, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 15:30, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Best, Heartfox (talk) 16:10, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

@Heartfox: thoughts now? 750h+ 07:12, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
Thanks for the edits. Further comments:

"The song's lyrics describes Banks' having lesbian sex" - which source says the lyrics are about Banks personally doing so?
"fuses" - this is synthesis. different opinions cannot be combined to say they form one
I would split the critical reception paragraph as 12+ sentences makes it harder to understand. Could start with 2019.
16 and 17 are the same ref
not seeing "electro-house" in source
Dance-rap link seems incorrect
rap could be added to infobox
AllAccess url-status=dead
Best, Heartfox (talk) 19:05, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

@Heartfox: thanks for the review. Thoughts now? 750h+ 23:23, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
@Heartfox: 750h+ 11:28, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
@750h+: Looks good, promoted. If you are interested, I do have an open FAC and GAN. Best, Heartfox (talk) 19:04, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
I’ll see what I can do. Thanks for the review. 750h+ 23:23, 29 October 2024 (UTC)