# Talk:Architecture of Winchester College

Saw this was up for GA and thought I'd drop a quick suggestion: the first sentence doesn't need to repeat the article title, per MOS:BOLDAVOID, and it runs a bit long. However, the first paragraph should explain what Winchester College is (an English independent day and boarding school for students aged 13 to 18). — Bilorv (talk) 18:56, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

Tweaked. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:10, 21 November 2022 (UTC)