# Talk:After This

I understand this article is rather short, but I have seen several other articles of shorter and similar lengths passed for GA status recently (I can list a few, should this be necessary.) So please take this into account when reviewing, as length is not included in the good article criteria. Cheers, Qst (talk) 22:15, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Length is fine. I'm putting it on hold because it's really close. It just needs a few more little things:
Be sure to specify the source of the image you use on the image's fair use rationale.
This sentence is confusing: Claire, the youngest, returns from a break and goes to her Catholic high school, showing a changed personality and increased self-confidence. Exactly what is this break? What was she like before?
-- Wrad (talk) 21:55, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

I'll do these now. Qst (talk) 22:03, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Both done. Qst (talk) 22:11, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Does the book say why she's different? What happened that summer? Wrad (talk) 22:15, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Nothing happened that summer. I searched numerous website, and it was just a break away from her home. Qst (talk) 22:19, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Looks good now. Wrad (talk) 22:24, 1 March 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. This is my first GA which I've created from scratch. Qst (talk) 22:25, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

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