# Talk:Arsenal VG 70

This review is transcluded from Talk:Arsenal VG 70/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:33, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
This has been sitting around too long, I will review. Comments to follow over next few days. Zawed (talk) 10:33, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
Comments as follows:
Development and description

The first sentence is quite long. A suggestion: "...on swept wings. The intention was to better understand how they might impact future fighter designs."
In the lead, it says the engine was a captured Jumo 004. This section omits the mention of captured.
Suggest breaking the paragraph at the point the engine is first mentioned.
Are there any specs that could be provided for the engine and incorporated into the text? Maybe mention the original German air frame it was used with if known?
See also

The VG 90 is already linked in a previous section so don't think it is necessary to have this section.
Further reading

looks like page number info is missing from the "World Aircraft Information Files"?
On a first pass, there isn't a lot of content to nitpick. Zawed (talk) 10:10, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66, just a ping as I think you may not have seen this. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:31, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:29, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
Looks fine to me, I made one clarification regarding the engine, revert if you disagree. Passing as GA, as I consider that it meets the appropriate criteria, the coverage is probably as broad as it is going to get. Zawed (talk) 09:58, 18 June 2021 (UTC)