# Talk:Akodon caenosus

This article really needs a photograph of the subject, preferably at least two.  I wouldn't call it a GA without at least one pic.--Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 11:38, 5 April 2010 (UTC)

There are none available. GA criterion 6 says that articles should be illustrated, if possible, by images; in this case, it is not possible. Ucucha 11:44, 5 April 2010 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 16:04, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Just a few nit pick copy editing issues. Otherwise, a fine article if somewhat technical. It is too bad that there is no picture. I assume none is available.

"It mostly occurs in Yungas vegetation and breeds mainly during the winter. It occurs with many other sigmodontine rodents, including three other species of Akodon." Repetition of "occurs". I change another one in the first sentence to "found".
Changed one.
" Oldfield Thomas described the animal as the holotype of a new subspecies of Akodon puer, a Bolivian species. He described the new subspecies Akodon puer cænosus as darker and duller in color than the Bolivian form, but otherwise identical"  - repetition of "described".
Changed one.
"They classified A. caenosus as a species separate from A. lutescens because the two forms did not form a single clade, with A. caenosus instead being recovered closer to A. subfuscus".  - is "recovered" the right word here?
It is an established technical term here, but the sentence does fine without it, so I struck the word.
"in view of the relatively high sequence divergence" - Is there a anything you could link "sequence divergence" to, to clarify for the general reader?
No, but I rephrased the sentence to clarify the meaning.
Xtzou (Talk) 16:04, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Some pictures have been published (though only of the skull, I think), but none are free to use. Ucucha 16:12, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: none available
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Pass! 

Good work!  Xtzou (Talk) 17:16, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

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