# Talk:Anthony Moon

This should not have appeared on Did You Know because it wasn't a new article - it was split from a list article and was unlikely a 5x expansion. So in future, please be aware of this rule when considering nominating split-off characters for DYK! That means Mario! –anemoneprojectors– 13:25, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

AP, Former redirects, stubs, and other articles in which the prose portion has been expanded fivefold or more within the past five days are also acceptable as "new" articles.[1] MayhemMario 13:29, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
Redirects are ok unless the information came from existing content, which this did :-S but never mind for now! –anemoneprojectors– 13:35, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
Yeah- no one noticied -.- :) So when you get back what you going to do?! MayhemMario 13:36, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 01:00, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
I have no idea why this is still waiting for a review. Don't have much time to but I'll get a review up as soon as I can. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:00, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"which is later a focus to one of the storylines" a focus of one
"Anthony first appears when he poses as a member of the council" what council? Those that watch Eastenders I'm sure would know that but a lay reader has no clue. Done
"Eddie sells them on for £8000" sells them on what? Done
"They make up the following day and Jodie leaves and Poppy leaves " can this be re-worded? Reads odd gramatically. Done
"which leads Donnie attempting" which leads to Done
"Phil Mitchell (Steve McFadden) say it makes a change" says it Done
"Anthony first appears on 25 July 2011." appeared Done
"Lapinskas appeared as Anthony in EastEnders E20, before" no comma needed here Done
I'd actually call "Introduction, casting and characterisation" the main section, since there's only one section in creation, so that title can just be cut and moved. Done
The above section feels quote heavy to me. See if you can convert at least a bit of it to your own words. For that matter the entire article seems to veer a little bit towards that. Done
The blockquote in the Eddie and Michael section needs a cite. I assume it's the one right before but let's be safe on that. Done
"Lapinskas deemed his character "pleased that somebody likes him", " cite needed Done
There are quite a few fixes to make, but they're not too tough. I'll put the article on hold for five days so the issues can be fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:26, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:43, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Reception from All About Soap –anemoneprojectors– 12:46, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

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