# Talk:2016 Tour of Flanders

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 14:20, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 14:20, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
Wasn't able to get to the prose tonight, but the images and references all check out, as does a copyvio check. Wizardman 02:17, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
Here's what I found:

"although the route passed through Kanegem and Aarsele as a tribute to Briek Schotte and Roger Decock (the oldest living winner of the Tour of Flanders) respectively.[4]" respectively doesn't seem necessary here, rm
I've changed this to "Kanegem and Aarsele in tribute to ... respectively", as Kanegem is in tribute to Schotte and Aarsele to Decock. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
Gotcha; reading it that way makes more sense, somehow my brain didn't watch Kanegem to Schotte and Aarsele to Decock the first time. Wizardman 21:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)
"An additional seven UCI Professional Continental teams were given wildcard entries. These included two Belgian teams..." the included part can probably be removed; as is it's implied some are excluded but you list every team here. Try this: "An additional seven UCI Professional Continental teams were given wildcard entries: two Belgian teams..."
Yeah, fair point. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
"Tony Martin (Etixx–Quick-Step) pulled a 25-man group clear, but they were recaptured shortly afterwards." I read this a few times and I only kind of think I got what it's trying to say; try rewording.
Done. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
"followed by Dmitriy Gruzdev (Astana) and Dimitri Claeys (Wanty–Groupe Gobert." missing a )
Done. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
" Meanwhile, Vandenbergh and Van Baarle made contact with the group of leaders" to me, 'made contact' seems like an odd word choice here.
I can see it's idiomatic to cycling. I've changed it. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)

Overall pretty good; cycling isn't my strong suit but I was mostly able to follow the race without issue. I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 21:30, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Many thanks, Wizardman. I think I've covered everything. Relentlessly (talk) 08:20, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
Everything looks good now, so I'll go ahead and pass the article. Wizardman 21:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)