# Talk:2010–11 Princeton Tigers men's basketball team

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Reviewer: YE  Tropical Cyclone 00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Here are my comments:


### Lead
"The team competes in the Ivy League athletic conference. The team is coming off of a 22–9 2009–10 season in which it achieved the most wins by a Princeton men's basketball team since the 1998–99 team, its first back-to-back finishes of at least second place in the Ivy since 2001–02 season, its first postseason appearance since the 2003–04 team went to the 2004 NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament" sentence is too long
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:29, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
"and its first postseason victory since the 1998–99 team won two games in the 1999 National Invitation Tournament." Sicne when do you start a sentence with and
the prior "." was suppose to be a ","
Remove the two red links in league
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:21, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
You say "Princeton" tto many times during the lead. YE  Tropical Cyclone
I cut it from 7 to 5 times.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:17, 5 May 2011 (UTC)


### Preview
Remove red link in section
O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:32, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
"It was the first Princeton team to be the preseason selection since the 2004–05 Princeton team." Preseason selection? wtf is that?
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:36, 5 May 2011 (UTC)


### Paying Style
No comments here


### Schedule
"The team posted a perfect 12–0 home record.[22] In early February, the team lost its adopted pediatric brain tumor patient who had previously sat on the team's bench" Two things: Did he die or just was too ill too watch anymore? and what role did he play?
Fixed up a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:07, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
Any info on the first Harvard-Princeton game.
added a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
If I recall correctly, the one of the player of Princeton hit the game wining shot in the Ivy League one game playoff.
added his name.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
"Princeton was quickly declared the winner of the imaginary payscale champion of the tournament for having the highest starting salary among its graduates as well as the champion for a host of academic related superior comparisons" wtf? what does this half to do with anything?
Removed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:09, 5 May 2011 (UTC)


### Honors
The table is broken.
Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR)  03:13, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
I'm putting the article on hold for now.YE  Tropical Cyclone 00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Passed. YE  Tropical Cyclone