# Talk:Auf der Maur (album)

The following sentence is inappropriate for an album entry, and thus I am removing it.
"Melissa Auf der Maur is currently in the studio writing and recording her second album." CessationLeakingThrough (talk) 01:43, 3 February 2010 (UTC)

Since the person who put the origonal tag on here gave no direction for clean up, I removed some of the POV sentences, and will leave the tag up. Hopefully will receive further commenting as to whether further changes are necessary.

All I can think of that it needs is an info box. Beyond that, it seems fine. I'm removing the tag. -- Underwater 18:33, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Auf der Maur (album)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:51, 8 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
I made some minor changes.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall: Pass, nice
Pass/Fail: 

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