# Talk:Babel Proclamation

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Reviewer: Tkbrett (talk · contribs) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

After writing a couple of articles about anti-German sentiment, I'm excited to give this one a go. I'll do a review by Monday at the latest. Tkbrett (✉) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


### Lead
The proclamation was controversial: expand on this; the body mentions that the proclamation was popular among English speakers and unpopular among everyone else.
Image is definitely PD.


### Rise in anti-German sentiment
Good.


### Description
Theodore Roosevelt needs to be introduced as "Former US President", or something along those lines.
After World War I ended, the proclamation was repealed...: who repealed it? Harding?


### Legacy
An op-ed published in The Des Moines Register...: when?
A hearing in the United States House of Representatives...: when?


### References
Checking against all of the sources, the article is well sourced.
Copyvio score of 9.9% (violation unlikely).


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold: Eddie891, a nice little article which only needs a few tweaks. I made some copy edits and slight rewordings as well. Tkbrett (✉) 00:54, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, Tkbrett, I've attempted to institute your comments essentially directly. Let me know what you think. Eddie891  Talk Work  01:24, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
 Pass: all looks and reads good to me. Congrats on another! Tkbrett (✉) 01:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)