# Talk:Bo McMillin

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Second archived link brings up a 404. Lizard (talk) 00:22, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bo McMillin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
The infobox image needs a caption  Done
""Bo" as a child was known as one to pick fights" - try As a child, Bo was known to pick fights (not sure if "Bo" needs quotation marks)  Done
"In McMillin's day of iron man football, he was also a safety man on defense and a kick returner on special teams." - this needs a citation  Done
"During his freshman year, McMillin was also on the track team; on April 27, 1917, he won the 220-yard dash at a Centre interscholastic track meet." - this too needs a citation .  Hard to find one - the citation seems to be the medal
" the five man backfield and the cockeyed T" - I have no idea what this means!  Done That's why they are called negligible. I added an explanatory note. Not sure what was "cockeyed" about it myself.
The second paragraph in the Kansas State section needs a citation  Done
Ref 1, 64 and 65 are missing access dates  Done
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

This was an interesting read. The article is well written and comprehensive, so once all of those minor issues are clarified then this should be good to go.  JAGUAR  13:14, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

Thanks again. Any better?
Thanks for addressing them! I've just checked through it again and it meets the criteria, so I'll promote this now  JAGUAR  21:18, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

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