# Talk:Adam Murray

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:39, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

"17-year" should be hyphenated.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
I would expand U20 on the first mention.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Link promotion.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"and Football Conference." vs "Conference National"?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"play-offs in 2005" probably ought to have the whole lot in the pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Could link captain.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"much of his 97" many, not much.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Could link "loan".
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Is there a link for caretaker?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Link substitute.
It already was?--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"1998–99 season" etc etc, put the "season" inside the pipe.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Could link "manager".
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"Derby would be relegated" avoid the "would be" and stick with "were".
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"Murray would feature only" ditto, -> "Murray featured irregularly"
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"for the "Stags", " avoid these unexplained nicknames.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Link "sending off".
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"after a tough spell battling alcohol addiction" bit tabloidy.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"overcame this battle" ditto.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"transfer-listed" is there a link?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"helping the "Cumbrians" to qualify" again, no unsourced/unexplained nicknames.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"of the 2006–07 League One season" this is confusing linking.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"; "Gulls" manager" see above.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"for the "Silkmen"" etc.  Not mentioning it again.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"a virtual ever-present" what is that??  "nearly ever-present"??
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"A back operation caused Murray" maybe "Following an operation on his back, Murray..."?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"but he now saw Wilder as one of the best manager in " -> "but now saw him as one of the best managers in "
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"Hatters", but departed" probably "and" rather than "but".
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"20 miles from" convert.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Link extra time.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"to qualify for the play-offs" is there a link?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"red carded" hyphen.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Link player-manager.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"with energy and tenacity whose natural talent" according to whom??
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"later at Field Mill, was" overlinked.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Any link for "free transfer"?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"After a successful month" more like two weeks??!
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"in 21st-place" no hyphen required.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"in 15th-place and" again.  Not mentioning this again.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"at Burton Albion.[103]" Burton is overlinked.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"to assist Valérien Ismaël" no need to repeat his first name.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"is known as a manager with an eye for detail" according to whom??
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
"Karl Hawley was" who he?
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Fix all the spaced hyphens (should be en-dashes)
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Consistent BBC Sport or just BBC Sport.
Done.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
That's enough to be getting on with. On hold. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:08, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Okay thank you, I've done all that.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Should it be clarified that he was the youngest manager at the time of his appointment and younger managers had been appointed before? Dja1979 (talk) 08:41, 5 June 2022 (UTC)