# Talk:Boku no Natsuyasumi

The original version of this article incorporated text copied from the Wikipedia article Boku no Natsuyasumi 3. -- But|seriously|folks  05:20, 1 October 2007 (UTC)

This article describes release dates for the first game in the series, and gameplay/story elements from the third game released seven years later. Southsailor (talk)  —Preceding undated comment added 14:23, 4 February 2010 (UTC). 

@Onegreatjoke: Hi, QPQs have been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 16:01, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
 Approve all. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:17, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Boku no Natsuyasumi/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 00:55, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

 
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
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It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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It is broad in its coverage.
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It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Overall:
Pass/fail: 

(Criteria marked  are unassessed)

[1] Might be worthwhile to discuss the forthcoming fan translation, as well as this source: [2] as a citation for a fan translation being in-demand for this game.
Would it be possible to cite that the mobile port has yet to be released? Such as an RS with a "TBA" date?
I wonder if it's best to have the creator's feelings on this game be a part of Reception.
Be sure to archive the links when you get the chance
None of these would prevent passing, though for the former I think it'd be worthwhile to mention it. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 10:08, 23 May 2023 (UTC)