# Talk:Bermuda at the 2002 Winter Olympics

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Bermuda at the 2002 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:50, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:50, 14 July 2018 (UTC)

Quite a few links to Singleton's article for a page that doesn't have a TOC.
"first appeared" First participated sounds better.
"; and" Comma instead of semicolon.
A link to the 2006 Winter Olympics would be neat.
"His first day saw run times of 47 seconds and 48.7 seconds. After the first day, he was in 44th place." Change to "His first day saw run times of 47 seconds and 48.7 seconds, finishing at 44th place at the end of the day."
"gaining 7 places" Write out seven.
That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:12, 15 July 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Nova Crystallis.  All points addressed. Courcelles (talk) 16:00, 15 July 2018 (UTC)
One more thing, a {{subscription required}} is needed for the NYT link. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:54, 16 July 2018 (UTC)
Done, though the relevant content can be viewed without subscription. Courcelles (talk) 05:02, 16 July 2018 (UTC)