# Talk:15th Anti-Aircraft Brigade (United Kingdom)

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:03, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"1941—7 March" needs to be spaced en-dash.
"January 1947–31 December" likewise.
"Anti-Aircraft command" why capital A in Aircraft?
"those AA units based" I would say "those anti-aircraft (AA) units based...."
Is there a link for "batteries".
"Bofors 40 mm guns" link?
"train the AA Section" why capital S for Section?
Phoney War seems to capitalise War.
What's HAA?
"slopes of the Rock, causing" link Rock?
"coming North African Campaign, the" campaign not capitalised.
" on the rock" capital R?  Consistency, at least.
"20mm Oerlikon" link?
"20 HAA gus" typo?
"at 240 mph" convert.
"wrote to the War Office asking" overlinked.
"and Bofors 40 mm guns together" overlinked.
"was War Office policy" overlinked.
"Decrease in Hostilities" hostilities.
Link Medway.
"rise of Surface-to-air missiles and 'blind fire' radar control" no need to capitalise Surface.  What is "blind fire radar control"?
"placed in suspended animation" why not just "suspended" rather than this verbose detail?
Ref 18 should be spaced en-dash.
And ref 20.
Ref 22 should be pp.
"forces 1660-1978 : biographical" en-dash.
That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Changes added and fixed J-Man11 (talk) 18:52, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

"1941—7 March" needs to be spaced en-dash.
"January 1947–31 December" likewise.
"Anti-Aircraft command" why capital A in Aircraft?
"those AA units based" I would say "those anti-aircraft (AA) units based...."
Is there a link for "batteries".
"Bofors 40 mm guns" link?
"train the AA Section" why capital S for Section?
Phoney War seems to capitalise War.
What's HAA?
"slopes of the Rock, causing" link Rock?
"coming North African Campaign, the" campaign not capitalised.
" on the rock" capital R? Consistency, at least.
"20mm Oerlikon" link?
"20 HAA gus" typo?
"at 240 mph" convert.
"wrote to the War Office asking" overlinked.
"and Bofors 40 mm guns together" overlinked.
"was War Office policy" overlinked.
"Decrease in Hostilities" hostilities.
Link Medway.
"rise of Surface-to-air missiles and 'blind fire' radar control" no need to capitalise Surface. What is "blind fire radar control"?
"placed in suspended animation" why not just "suspended" rather than this verbose detail?
Ref 18 should be spaced en-dash.
And ref 20.
Ref 22 should be pp.
"forces 1660-1978 : biographical" en-dash.
All completed J-Man11 (talk) 12:55, 27 September 2021 (UTC)