# Talk:Bobby Pulido

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 06:06, 25 June 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
The black–and–white photo of Bobby Pulido requires an alt description, so please add one
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Just for stylistic purposes, I'd add the appropriate amount of spaces into the "embed" parameter as the rest of parameters
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### Lead
#### Paragraph 2
"Pulido debuted on the music scene in 1995 as the lead vocalist of his eponymous band, and the same year he signed a recording contract with EMI Latin and released his debut album, Desvelado." --> Use of "and" twice in the same sentence
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#### Paragraph 3
Why does Enséñame redirect to the album article for Rebelde? Wrong link
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Slight suggestion: "By 2000, the popularity of Tejano music was declining; Pulido's subsequent albums failed to chart anywhere." --> "By 2000, the popularity of Tejano music was declining, resulting in Pulido's subsequent albums to not chart anywhere."
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### Life and career
#### 1971–94: Early life and career beginnings
Nada! Great job!! :)
Thank you =)


#### 1995–99: Debut album and commercial success
Again, please unlink Enséñame as it redirects to the album article for Rebelde?
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Slight suggestion: "Enséñame peaked at number ten on the U.S. Billboard Top Latin Albums and number two on the U.S. Billboard Regional Mexican Albums chart.[17]" --> Perhaps you could add a statement before this stating that the album was commercially successful in the US?
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#### 2000–09: Professional struggles, acting debut, and hiatus
Slight suggestion: "2000–09: Professional struggles, acting debut, and hiatus" --> "2000–09: Decline in popularity, acting debut, and hiatus"
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"In March 2000, he released Zona de Peligro, which was less successful than his previous albums; it peaked at number 48 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[33]" --> "In March 2000, he released Zona de Peligro, which was less successful than his previous albums, peaking at number 48 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[33]"
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"Pulido released his sixth studio album Siempre Pensando En Ti in March 2001, it fared less well commercially, peaking at number 50 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[36]" --> "Pulido released his sixth studio album Siempre Pensando En Ti in March 2001; it fared less well commercially, peaking at number 50 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[36]"
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Why does Bobby link to the album article for Bobby Brown?
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#### 2010–present: Return to music and acting
Great work! Nothing to add here!
Thank you =)


### Personal life
#### Paragraph 1
"Pulido asked Anzaldua for a divorce in September 2013, after 17 years of being married and four months of separation.[49]" --> I think this reads awkwardly; could it be something along the lines of "However, Pulido filed for divorce in September 2013, after 17 years of being married and four months of separation.[49]" ? What do you think?
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### Discography
I think you're missing Desvelado here; and then remember to link Desvelado in addition
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### Filmography
Fantastic job!


### End of GA Review:
On hold for seven days. Great work and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:29, 26 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: I have fixed all issues. Thanks again for your review, – jona ✉ 12:33, 26 June 2016 (UTC)