# Talk:Benjamin Schulte

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Benjamin Schulte/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### General
All mentions of events such as 50 m and 100 m, 400 m would be better off spelt out as 50 meters for example
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Lead
"He competed at the 2012 Summer Olympics in the Men's 10 kilometre Open Water event," - link Men's 10 kilometre Open Water to Swimming at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's marathon 10 kilometre and do the same for when it is mentioned in the main body
"where he placed 25th out of 25." - where he placed last of all participants.
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Early life and education
"Benjamin Schulte was born December 22, 1995, in Tamuning, Guam." - reword to Benjamin Schulte was born in the Guam city of Tamuning on December 22, 1995.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"He attended Miami State High School, located in Gold Coast, Australia." - He attended Miami State High School in Queensland's Gold Coast.
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### Olympic career
"Schulte decided to refocus and switch from long distance swimming to short distance. " - link long distance swimming
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"Schulte broke his own national record during the" - wikilink national record to List of Guamanian records in swimming
Done Kees08 (Talk)
The wikilink for the 2016 Summer Olympics should be at the start of the first sentence of the third paragraph and not at the end of it
Done Kees08 (Talk)


### International career
"with a time of 29.26 to win the gold medal." - 29.26 seconds
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Overall a neater piece of work than the other two articles I've reviewed. Just the quibbles above will need addressing. MWright96 (talk) 12:04, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: Done with the comments, let me know if you have more. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 06:52, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Very well then. There's nothing more that is needed to be changed here. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:58, 19 April 2018 (UTC)