# Talk:1993 Football League Second Division play-off final

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:26, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments (and suggest these are implemented, in principle, in the other GAN)

"while the teams placed from" -> "while those placed from"
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"table partook in play-off semi-finals; the winners of these semi-finals " -> "took part in play-offs; the winners of the play-off semi-finals..."
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"West Brom had" stick with formal names or introduce nicknames.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Same for Vale.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Link referee in lead.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"The pivotal point of the match" a bit OR.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Link sent off.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"goals difference" -> "goal  difference" and link.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
I  would use the sports table module for the league, as seen in 1991 Football League Fourth Division play-off Final for example.  Seems more accessible etc.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"the first leg was" -> "first match of the two-legged tie.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"Giant striker..." avoid such commentary.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Play-off semifinal reports seem to be unreferenced.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"1992–93 season" I know it's red linked anyway, but put the "season" into the pipe.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"tally of namesake" not really requied.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"42,300 Baggies" don't use nicknames unless you explain them.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"Vale showing patience and possession" according to?
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"a scissors kick" link.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"by Ian Taylor tipped" overlink.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"used his acrobatic skills" bit too commentatorish.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Link foul.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"dismissal" link.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"third Englishman"  what  about non-Englishmen?
The source didn't mention them.--EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"for the "Baggies" final goal" nickname
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"from six yards" convert.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
Could crop  the Ardilles image so it doesn't leak down  into the refs.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"£2 million" non-breaking space.
Done.--EchetusXe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"afterwards... my" non-breaking space before the ellpsis.
Done.--EchetusXe 15:56, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"after barely surviving" can we be factual  and  explain what that really meant?
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
"Red carded Peter Swan" not necessary, not  even sure this sentence  is required.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
I don't think  www and .com are needed for websites.
Done.EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
THat's a first pass,  I'll put it on  hold while we deal with these and then do another run-through.  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:22, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

Okay thanks, I've taken a crack at that.--EchetusXe 15:55, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
I think this is good enough now for GA, I made a few cosmetic tweaks, so I'm happy to promote.  I'll take a look at the other one of yours as well, perhaps you could pre-empt my review by considering some of the general points above on that article too? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 06:58, 26 May 2021 (UTC)