# Talk:1957 World Professional Match-play Championship

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
Am going to be reviewing this article for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"in the 73-frame final." - hyphen should be an en dash per MOS:DASH
"The world snooker championship was not contested again until 1964." - why was this the case?


### Background
The citation needed tag needs sorting out at the end of the second paragraph needs addressing


### Summary
"The 1957 World Professional Match-play Championship was held at Saint Helier, Jersey," - maybe include the dates of the tournament?
"During the dead frames, which had an audience of around 80 people, Rea compiled the highest break of the match, a 92." - in which dead frame was the 92 break made?
The term break should be wikilinked only on the first mention to the appropriate article
"making an 85 break during the session." - in which frame was this break made during that session?
"With the six evening frames shared between the paid," - spelling error
"Williams then won the following frame, and added another which he won on a re-spotted black." - repetition of "won"
"The final was over 73 frames." - maybe added the dates the final took place on
"The highest break of the first day was 67, made by Rea." - in which frame was this 67 break made?
The Jersey Evening Post, which has a fuller report than other sources, mentions an 88 break in frame 4 so I've added that in. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:14, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
"In the evening, Williams won the first frame with a 65 break that received that the Jersey Evening Post reported" - think the text in bold is unneeded
For the same sentence, the Jersey Evening Post should be italised since it is a printed publication
"with the highest break in the afternoon session just 34, by Kennerley." - some words missing from this sentence


### Schedule
The table can have a header included and the refs in the table moved to the header and in numerical order


### References=
All the references obtained from Google Newspapers should be mentioned as such in the via= field
Shall put the review on hold to allow the editor to address or query each of the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 13:05, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Many thanks, MWright96. I've amended the article in response to all of the points above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:24, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
@BennyOnTheLoose: Shall now be promoting this article to GA class MWright96 (talk) 13:52, 29 July 2021 (UTC)