# Talk:Basic Lupine Urology

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:43, 18 December 2020 (UTC)


### Basic stuff and comments
Two references for the production code seems like WP:OVERKILL. I suggest removing one.
Done.
Didn't find any problems with the article's lead.
In the plot summary, change "have a motive" to "have had a motive" since the yam is already dead.
Done.
I advise archiving the article's sources in case they're deleted.
Done. (Though the archive for source 2 seems to be acting up for me – it says it's archived, but it won't load. I'll try looking into it more over the next few days if needed.)
No problems with images, production, or information on reception, however, remove the IMDb reference per WP:IMDB/BLP.
I assume this refers to the comments in the Reception section, not the IMDb link in External links, in which case – done.


### Notes
@RunningTiger123: I have added nearly all my suggestions for this article. Great job on expanding and improving it so far. Well, take a look at my suggestions, add comments, and please ping me when you have done so. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 17:43, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
@Some Dude From North Carolina: All suggested edits have been made. RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:52, 19 December 2020 (UTC)