# Talk:1994 Progress Party national convention

This had been sitting on my hard drive as a Word document since April 2008 (!). In the meantime someone has got around to nominating Progress Party (Norway) as a GA candidate. Good, and this article hopefully broadens the coverage. I will nominate this for GA as well, though it could use desperately needs a copyedit from a native speaker. I looked for an infobox, but the one I found automatically included markup for a US prez election. Geschichte (talk) 22:12, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk) 10:45, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
I must say I wasn't expecting to ever see national conventions of Norwegian parties at GAN, but it is always nice to be positively surprised. I did a copyedit, but it wasn't as bad as Geschichte may have feared.

Comments

"On 7 February, Hagen confirmed his leadership candidacy for the electoral committee." isn't referenced.
I've changed "central committee" to "central board", as it translate from styre and actually models that of any other board, given that it has authority.
Days of the week are not included unless essential to the understanding.
I think arbeidsutvalg should translate executive board, but I'm not 100% sure. I think it is more understanable than "working committee".
Some of the refs lack accessdate (particularly the Stortinget bios).
Placing on hold. Arsenikk (talk) 10:45, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

I added one reference and four accessdates. I don't use it on non-websites, because those aren't "retrieved" in the same sense. Geschichte (talk) 14:44, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
There is of course not supposed to be accessdates on offline sources; sorry if that wasn't clear. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
Quick comment

We aren't meant to use curly quotes. Aaroncrick  TALK 10:53, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
What's that? Geschichte (talk) 14:37, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
If you look carefully, there is a difference between “ ” and " ". Only the latter are supposed to be used, according to the MOS (those being the ones actually available on a normal keyboard). But nothing one can really say anything about at a GA review. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
I guess some are present because I started writing the text in Word. Geschichte (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC) Thanks! Geschichte (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

The template says to "moving some material from it into the body of the article". I hope we all agree that this is not a solution. Of course, everything in the lead is also in the article already. Geschichte (talk) 09:15, 25 September 2010 (UTC)

In the County conventions and national board meeting section it says "a motion which gained support from 24 of the 11 board members", which seems impossible! Don't know what it should be, but it does need changing. Davewild (talk) 16:09, 6 May 2013 (UTC)

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