# Talk:2003 Macau Grand Prix

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)

I'll give this one a read-through now. Courcelles (talk) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)

"The overall winner was the driver who completed all 25 laps in the shortest amount of time possible."  We can likely lose the word "possible" here.
What is a  scholarship champion?
"avoided using new tyres in the closing seconds"  How do you avoid using tires in a matter of seconds?
"In the second half an hour session"  Needs the word 'practice'
"in the shortest amount of time possible"  Again, the word possible is not needed.
" one of Piquet's shredded"  One of his what shredded?
"front wing braking and launching into the"  Do you mean breaking here?

Otherwise a solid read. Courcelles (talk) 17:00, 20 July 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: All of the points raised above have been addressed. With your query about the scholarship champion. it was a title awarded to the best placed driver in machinery that was more than a year old in the British Formula 3 International Series. MWright96 (talk) 18:01, 20 July 2018 (UTC)
Interesting. Anyhow, Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 18:25, 20 July 2018 (UTC)