# Talk:Alexei Cherepanov

Shouldn't Cherepanov's pro career start be listed as 2006, when he began playing for Avangard Omsk or should it be whenever he begins his NHL career? David7581 18:16, 24 June, 2007 (UTC)

I've checked a few other Russian player articles and they do have pro start dated as rookie RSL. IrisKawling 22:33, 24 June 2007 (UTC)
Career start should always be first pro season, for example first season in the SEL, RSL, or the NHL (mostly for North American players). --Krm500 22:46, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

Should it be mentioned that Cherepanov has said that he would play the next season for Avangard Omsk?  --David7581 21:15, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

He does have a 2 years on his contract with Omsk remaining. At the draft he said he would only play 1 more year, and give 2 weeks notice and play in the nhl for 08-09. However recently translations of an interview with russianprospects.com came out in which he said he intends on honoring the 2 year contract. Conflicting reports might not be best for the article.. IrisKawling 01:48, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
How about mentioning that he has a 2-year contract, but whether he'll play the 2nd year is disputed? That might work alright. --David7581 02:47, 13 July 2007 (UTC)

On here it says he collapsed after a collision with Jagr. However, what I've read is that he collapsed on the bench and it doesn't say anything about a collision.
Canuck85 (talk) 23:42, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

I removed it - virtually every source specifically says there was no collision. --Smashvilletalk 23:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
Videos show he just collapse on the bench, Jagr is standing over him and it looks like he is trying to talk to him. —Krm500 (Communicate!) 23:48, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
I also removed reference to death from "commotio cordis", which has appeared on fansites but not in reliable sources. WWGB (talk) 23:50, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
The collision caused him to collapse on the bench.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 169.232.88.108 (talk) 01:21, 14 October 2008 (UTC) 
Sorry, turns out there was no collision. Poor kid. Poor jagr too, must be in shock.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 169.232.88.108 (talk) 01:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC) 
I have not changed anything in the article, but this "He played a shift with teammate Jaromír Jágr" is wrong. They both played right wing and they were never on the ice at the same time. Cherepanov did not play a shift with Jagr. /Mattias  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.243.191.215 (talk) 04:20, 16 October 2008 (UTC) 
He did play a shift with Jagr, you can watch the video on youtube, it shows him skating over to the bench with jagr at the end of the shift.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.221.228.172 (talk) 05:58, 18 August 2009 (UTC) 

I have done several google searches for this and have gotten no results [1]. What is your source for this? -- Scorpion0422 23:09, 18 October 2008 (UTC)

I have made some searches myself, and it seems, that there has been a proposal by KHL officials a few days ago to name the league's rookie of the year award after Cherepanov [2]. I have found no updates which would state that there has been an official decision about this, so we should probably wait updating the article until it is officially confirmed. -- Gruen (talk) 09:39, 19 October 2008 (UTC)

To combat the misinformation on the web about his place of birth, Ozerki (rather than Barnaul), I'm trying to find a source. The only proof I've seen so far is this image, http://www.hawk.ru/pic/pg/orig_2501.jpg , wherein is a jersey for the Ozerki and a display that says "моя родина-озерки" (my native land: Ozerki). If someone has a link, please post --Lvivske (talk) 06:14, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Alexei Cherepanov/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Leech44 (talk · contribs) 16:59, 18 January 2014 (UTC)

Good article review (see Wikipedia:What is a good article? for criteria)
The page is in good shape and already there were just a few things that I came across while reading this, which I will point out below.--Mo Rock...Monstrous  (leech44) 18:10, 18 January 2014 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
In the playing career section.
a. For his play the previous season, Cherepanov was named RSL Newcomer of the Year for the '06-'07 Season.

This seems odd, the previous season notation doesn't seem to fit. the year is mentioned and the sentence follows discussion of said season. I think that it can just be dropped.
Done.  I think this was a previously written sentence that I left intact after checking the content of the reference.
Why is the year notation for the award different from all of the other years?
Fixed.
b. NHL is first spelled out as part of the Draft so the first stand alone use of NHL should be linked similar to what you've done with the KHL.

Found it and fixed.
c. Like wise the first mention of KHL should be fully written out as part of the season listing.

This one took longer to track down, but I found it and fixed it.
In the International play section
a.  He was particularly effective in the 3rd place game against the United States, recording 3 points during a 4–2 victory over the United States

No need to say United States twice.
Yep, that sounded weird, and it now fixed.
For the link, United States Country is liked, would a link to United States men's national junior ice hockey team be better like how Russia is linked?
Fixed.
In the Playing style section
a. In the first sentence you reference him as a "forward, who had a special talent for scoring goals" then three sentence later it is stated again as part of a quote. The first mention should be changed to something along the lines of noted goal scorer, goal scoring offensive forward, offensive forward with a knack for scoring goals or similar. A change should be made to keep the repetition out. 

Reorganized.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
a. A spot check of the References shows not copyright violations.
b. For reference # 22  The New York Times should be italicized like in the other mentions of the paper. 

Fixed.
c. Linking should consistent. #9  The New York Times is linked # 8 New York Rangers are link, while #15 The Globe and Mail and #31 Colorado Avalanche are not. All with pages should be linke or none of them should be linked.

Removed it from all.
d. Use of TSN should be consistent as well - TSN.ca (#19) and TSN (#25)

Fixed this.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
No images included on the page. Maybe consider adding a fair use image for a deceased individual, something like Bobby Bauer.

I am chasing down a few avenues to get some existing images released under an appropriate license.  I am going to hold off going through the fair use route until I know for sure those won't pan out.
It's not a big deal if you can't find one. I feel it adds to a page if you can put a face to the name and with such limited access to North America and such a short playing career there would seem to be less chance of a free licensed image. That coupled with his death would seem to make it a candidate for Fair Use.

Overall:
Only a few things that need to be taken care of.
Everything that needed to be address to meet GA has been fixed. I am happy to pass this. Good work.
I think this is everything.  Thanks for the review, and let me know if I missed anything that needed to be addressed!  Canada Hky (talk) 19:14, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
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