# Talk:Albert Freedman

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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 09:41, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi there, I'll be reviewing this article using the table below. Comments to follow soon! Unexpectedlydian (talk) 09:41, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

@Bruxton This is a really interesting topic, and I've had a lot of fun both reading the article going through the sources myself. I've made suggestions in the table below. A lot of them to help with clarity. If you have any questions, just give me a ping. I'm going to put the article on hold for now while I wait for your responses. Thank you for your work on this topic! Unexpectedlydian (talk) 12:07, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
@Bruxton Hi there, apologies for taking a bit of a break from this review. I have striked-through the changes which have been completed to make the table a bit easier to navigate. I have also boldly made some minor changes to help get this article to GA. I have noted where I have done these below. The remaining un-striked comments till need to be addressed. Please let me know if you have any questions! Unexpectedlydian (talk) 19:28, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
@Unexpectedlydian: no worries I made a few more fixes just now. I think in this article we have the most comprehensive accounting anywhere I have seen. Bruxton (talk) 03:16, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
Great job, I think we're almost there! Just a few outstanding points below. Unexpectedlydian (talk) 10:29, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
In the article I put a different page number for his recant.<--page 759-->. Also regarding the production company, our article does not say it was enright's any more. In regard to the heading  Early life: I think it fits the format of most other articles. The items there were all prior to his actual career and scandal. Thanks Bruxton (talk) 17:11, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
@Bruxton I have made a couple of minor changes, and now I'm happy for the article to be promoted. Thanks for all your work on this, and for bearing with me! Unexpectedlydian♯4talk‽ 18:13, 25 June 2022 (UTC)