# Talk:Aero-Cross

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"and the third game released under the Namco Generations series of video game remakes." - think the first mention of "game" can be deleted from this sentence
"The game was announced in October 2010 and was announced as being cancelled in December 2012 following a lack of updates on its production." - try to change this sentence to avoid repeating the word "announced"
Wikilink power-ups and level to the relevant article to help non-experts


### Gameplay
Wiklink timer to Time limit (video games), level to Level (video games), power-ups to power-up and stage to Stage (video games) to help non-Gamers
Link slipstream to Drafting (aerodynamics)
"Running behind other runners creates" - try to change the structure of the sentence to avoid repetition of a similar word


### Development and promotion
"Aero-Cross was intended as the third game under the Namco Generations label, a brand created by Namco Bandai Games for use on modernized remakes of their older video games." - older titles.


### Cancellation
"Fletcher commented on the game's new features and for building upon the original Metro-Cross gameplay in an interesting manner. He commented:" - the text in bold isn't needed
"believed that the game likely never would have had" - would likely never have
"that big of an audience" - large


### References
The author of Reference 13 should be formatted as Fletcher, JC for consistency
References 14 shouldn't include staff as the author
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:56, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

@MWright96: - Issues addressed. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 00:06, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
@Namcokid47: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:18, 9 May 2020 (UTC)