# Talk:Ava–Hanthawaddy War (1401–1403)

Hello Hybernator, even though this amazing article has been reviewed as GA, I would like to suggest a small change in the lead. The following sentence seems misleading: "It was the second of the decades-long wars between the two kingdoms, both located in present-day Myanmar." - In fact, it is not the historical kingdoms, but their territory that is located in present-day Myanmar. - So changing this sentence would be clearer: "It was the second of the decades-long wars between the two kingdoms, whose historical territory is located in present-day Myanmar." - What do you think? Munfarid1 (talk) 11:40, 20 October 2024 (UTC)