# Talk:A Room with No View

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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:48, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


### Checklist
### Discussion
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""A Room With No View" featured an appearance by recurring guest star Sarah-Jane Redmond." - You discuss a returning villain in the second paragraph. Anything to do with Redmond?
Same person, clarified now. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Why nothing about the production in the lede?
The mention of Redmond's recurring role was meant to fulfil that, guess it could do with more. Let me know what it looks like now. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Who plays Gordon?
Added. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
tells him she loves him. - Tells Bryce or the unnamed man?
Bryce was the intended subject here but it is both at different times. I've clarified it. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
comforted - Is this right? Or does she confront him?
Yep, comforted. It's a bit creepy. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
The episode was the first to have been written by producer Ken Horton, and his only solo writing credit.  - Which episode?
Redmond, admittedly a fan of Carter and recurring series director David Nutter, had initially auditioned for another episode of the first season - You didn't mention Chris Carter yet, so Carter comes out of nowhere. Don't forget his role in the episode.
Good catch. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
I copyedited, be sure to check.
Looks good, thanks. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
3
Nothing whatsoever about themes?
Nothing as yet. There's a new book on the horizon which might help, not sure what's actually in it or not. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Spotchecks turn up no issues. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for taking a look at this one for me. GRAPPLE X 19:42, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


### Further discussion
On hold to fix issues indicated above. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:06, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
Alright, looks peachy. Passing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:58, 3 November 2012 (UTC)