# Talk:Art Rooney Jr.

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
added marine and stage actor cats
hmm, those sources dont actually say he was PR Director from 1961 to 1964
That's all I think. Nice work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: This source from 1962 mentions him as public relations director - I could find mentions of him in that role from '61, '63 or '64, though - what would you suggest? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:04, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
Adding all those sources. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:30, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Sorry, I meant to say that I couldn't find mentions of him in that role in those years. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:38, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
"and as the team's public relations director" change to "and also spending time as the team's public relations director"? Change infobox to say "Various roles"? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:03, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
@WikiOriginal-9: Changed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:21, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:24, 21 October 2023 (UTC)