# Talk:Adrian Moss (basketball, born 1988)

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:48, 13 October 2016 (UTC)

This shouldn't take me long. JAGUAR  11:48, 13 October 2016 (UTC)

Bearing in mind that this article is short, the lead seems to be an appropriate length
" He was released by the Express shortly before the end of the season" - which season? What year?
Fixed to "He was released by the Express in 2016, shortly..."
"After his sophomore season at IUPUI Moss transferred to the University of Indianapolis" - comma needed in between IUPUI and Moss
Comma has been added.
"In February 2015 he was signed by the Windsor Express.[26] He was released by the Express on March 26, 2015" - should be merged into one sentence to improve flow: In February 2015 he was signed by the Windsor Express, and was released by the Express on March 26, 2015
Fixed with your suggested sentence.
No dead links
Very short review, very short article. Will leave this on hold until the minor issues are dealt with, then this should pass.  JAGUAR  12:14, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thank you for reviewing. All issues brought up have been addressed. TempleM (talk) 19:21, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
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