# Talk:Action of 22 October 1793

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Its been eight days - can you let me know what needs doing?--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:23, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
Lead and infobox;
a lone British Royal Navy ship of the line; what is the need to mention "lone" because the counterpart also had only one ship.
They had more, made it clearer.
attacked the large French Navy frigate Melpomène off the coast of Sardinia; usage of "large", declaration of frigate gives the reader an idea about ship's size, I don't think a specific mention is needed.
I've moved it so its clearer, but I've kept large (and later small) to emphasise the relative sizes of the ships.--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:34, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
In the strength section of infoxbox, insert an {{nbsp}} amid HMS Agamemnon.
Section 1;
Link Vice-Admiral
small 64-gun HMS Agamemnon; usage of "small" may not be required
young Captain Horatio Nelson
Link Commodore
small 28-gun frigate Mignonne and 14-gun brig-sloop Hazard; use of "small"
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 16:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
Section 2;
held a council of war to decided "decide" whether the action should be renewed
Everything else looks good
Section 3;
A comma after "Following the engagement"
Everything else looks good
The image used doesn't have a valid license. Please do the needful.
No plagiarism found. External links OK.
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:31, 18 November 2017 (UTC)
All done or otherwise fixed. Best--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:34, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:09, 26 November 2017 (UTC)