# Talk:1812 Louisiana hurricane

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 22:38, 21 December 2012 (UTC)


### Review
Lead
Lead is too short. It should be expanded.
Done. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
History
"the storm's track track" repeat? or this is deliberate?
Well fuck me :( --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
I didn't meant to be rude :(... — ΛΧΣ21 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"becoming the closest major hurricane to New Orleans" This is covered by reference #2?
In the opening line of ref 2 - "Historical data, consisting of diaries, ship logbooks, ship protests, and newspapers, reconstruct the path, intensity, and societal impacts of a major hurricane in 1812 that is the closest known storm to pass New Orleans". --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Oh yes it is lol. The issue is that I had my pdf plugin damaged and couldn't see the document :( — ΛΧΣ21 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Impact
The first line of impact is too short to be separated, I guess. Can't it be merged?
It's a very distinct area though from the rest of the article. I think it should be separate. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Fair enough :) — ΛΧΣ21 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Everything else looks fine. — ΛΧΣ21 22:38, 21 December 2012 (UTC)