# Talk:Birds-1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Mention Japan's involvement in the lead.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
"Nigeria has a background with satellites," Nigerian engineers and scientists?
More the government, since they contracted it out. Changed to that. Kees08 (Talk)
"Sometimes MongolSat-1 is referred to as Mongolia's first satellite, but it was launched by Bermuda-based company ABS and built by U.S. company Boeing. It was co-branded as MongolSat-1 after launch. Birds-1 successfully launched the first satellite for Bangladesh, Ghana, Mongolia, and Nigeria." 
Added Kees08 (Talk)
"as part of the Joint Global Multi-Nation Birds Satellite project, which is a cross-border interdisciplinary satellite project for non-spacefaring countries supported by Japan" No need to mention the project twice.
Fixed, I think. Kees08 (Talk)
"The satellites communicate with seven ground stations: one in each of the countries participating in the Birds-1 program, and one each in Thailand and Taiwan. The satellites all use the same radio frequency." Make sure no consecutive sentences start with the same words.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Link the countries in the Future work section.
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Dates are not consistent in the references.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
Jack Fischer's tweet ref should include his name, link to his article, and tweet inside the title of the text. Look at the {{Cite tweet}}'s example section.
Done Kees08 (Talk)
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:31, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

@Nova Crystallis: Done. Let me know if you have further comments. Kees08 (Talk) 04:37, 8 May 2018 (UTC)