# Talk:Abe Mickal

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Abe Mickal/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead
For an article of this length the lead should be two good paras long, covering all the major points of the article.
 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Will give a careful read once this is done.
Early life
It is good to begin thee article (part after lead) with the full name of the person.
 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
"The elder Mickal" sounds a bit too informal, you can stick to "father"
 Done Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
College
For years it was known as the "longest scoring pass in the South." Who do you quote here?
I just went ahead and removed it. It was dubious anyway. Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 He later said that if he had accepted the senatorship When did he say this?
 Done Specified. It was worded oddly in source. Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Later life
Any clear reason behind his death?
The only thing I could find was that he "passed away peacefully." Should I assume natural causes? Lizard (talk) 18:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
Better remain silent here. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
No dablinks, no copyvio detected, external links are in order, images are proper. That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:27, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)