# Talk:A Simple Lie

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT. Done
Lead summarizes the entire article and is in great shape. 


### Plot
Add a comma after "death threats".
"talks sense Frieda" → "talks sense to Frieda" Done
"check the hospital security" → "check the hospital for security" Done
"person taking" → "person from taking" Done
Get each part of the summary to 400 words each (first is at 411 and second at 417). Done


### Production
"Steele told a Victoria" → "Steele told Victoria" Done
"appear the show" → "appear on the show" Done


### Promotion and broadcast
Add commas after "However" and "the following days". Done
"described as the move" → "described the move" Done


### Reception
This section looks good.


### References
References are archived. 


### Progress