# Talk:Best Sex I've Ever Had

BIG, BAD MISTAKE: There is a disastrous writing or editing error in this article. It's made worse because the article couldn't be more relevant or important as I write this, since the subject matter came up in Trump's rape trial yesterday.
I was reading it when I suddenly encountered the name "Hoffman." 
Who is Hoffman? 
This is the first reference, and no description or first name is provided. 
I traced back and could find no "Hoffman" mentioned earlier. 
I did a search: no "Hoffman" before that point.
Making matters more miserable, the mistake comes at the most crucial point in the article. Everything above the mysterious Hoffman points to Trump making up the quote about himself. Then, suddenly, Hoffman haphazardly arrives to save the day for Donald, appearing to contradict everything that came before.
The egregiousness of this editing error goes beyond the obvious. It makes it look like a Trump minion planted "Hoffman" to try to cancel out the evidence provided above it. I doubt that this happened. But, as the very subject matter of the article makes clear, this is exactly what Trump does. Jeri Southern (talk) 13:38, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

The article goes on to introduce Hoffmann as Bill Hoffmann, a reporter for the New York Post. I've subsequently clarified this, many thanks. No Swan So Fine (talk) 11:43, 25 September 2023 (UTC)