# Talk:AK vs AK

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:53, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk?

Thanks for stepping up! I hope I haven't caused any grief or bad blood, so to speak, because of our previous interaction. MSG17 (talk) 23:04, 5 February 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
A reference is needed to verify that the film is 108 minutes.
Done and fixed the runtime
You can't cite Netflix. You need a reliable source.
Rechecked the sources in the article... found one that mentioned the runtime (now stated at the old amount, strange), changed to that
In the first paragraph, add a comma after Sonam Kapoor Ahuja.
Done
Link film-within-a-film.
Done
The claim that "Filming took place in December that year" seems misleading considering the note in #Production. I would reword it.
Reworded


### Plot and cast
Since it's just trivial, remove the note after "documentary" in the first sentence.
Yeah, I don't think its ideal either. Done
Currently, the plot section is 754 words. Per WP:FILMPLOT, try to get it down to 700.
Managed to get it down to exactly 700
Remove the comma after "uninterested".'
Done
Remove the comma after "CCTV footage".
Done
The sentence "then would take a gun out from his bag and force Kapoor to kill either of themselves" is kinda confusing. Try rewording it.
Reworded
Add the cast listing template to #Cast.
Never knew about this template... done


### Production
Are three references really needed after "his spokesperson"?
Eliminated one frivolous reference, now it's just the initial report and a later refutation
Is the quote after "early 2020, with Kapoor stating" necessary? Can it be changed to prose?
I would think that, for something like this, it would be best to hear it from the horse's mouth. (It helps that this quote was featured on DYK, so I am rather partial to keeping it.)
Thanks for the reason. Sounds good.
"under-the-radar" → "under the radar"
Done
Link Twitter.
Done
In the note after "IAF officer", change "To be more specific" to "In the film".
Done


### Soundtrack
"Weiting" → "Writing"
Done
NDTV and Bollywood Hungama should not be in italics.
Done


### Reception and analysis
Link Bollywood Hungama.
Its linked in the soundtrack section, so its not relinked to avoid repetition (same thing done with NDTV now).
NDTV and Bollywood Hungama should not be in italics.
Done
Move the first reference after "messaging" to after "Indian cinema',"
Done
"..." → "[...]"
Done
Can "inside information on" be changed to just "inside information" or is it supposed to be part of the rest of the sentence it's in?
Its supposed to be part of the rest of the sentence (inside information on the main actors and Bollywood in general).
So can "information on and the reputations" be changed to "information on the reputations"?
I don't see why not. Done
Link the first use of Film Companion, not the second.
According to MOS:DUPLINK, "Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article".
The first paragraph in this section has two uses of Film Companion. I was just saying to link the first one rather than the second one.
Oh...; sorry, I misread that. Fixed
"intentionally[...]the" → "intentionally [...] the"
Fixed
"intentionally[...]" → "intentionally [...]"
Done


### References
Archive all archivable sources (I recommend using this).
I already ran through it with the bot beforehand... looks like it missed a few (and I added one), so I reran it. I'll manually added an archive for one that it missed later, as it is taking a while to generate in the Internet Archive.
Try linking each website used in each reference.
Done
In the only reference citing it (currently #10), link Khaleej Times.
Change the multiple links to Free Press Journal to The Free Press Journal.
"Mashable India" → "Mashable India" ([[Mashable|Mashable India]])
"Bollywood Hungama]." → "Bollywood Hungama"
All done


### Overview