# Talk:2017 New York City ePrix

Formula E calls the ePrix "New York City ePrix" [1]. Should we move the article accordingly? Wild8oar (talk) 06:22, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

@Wild8oar: I agree. This name for the event is also used in the wider media. MWright96 (talk) 12:26, 20 July 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback, @MWright96:! Since you are the main contributor, I will go ahead and move the articles.Wild8oar (talk) 13:08, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:2017 New York City ePrix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 20:50, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one, will post review soon. Kosack (talk) 20:50, 30 April 2018 (UTC)


### Lead
"a two-day crowd of 20,000 people", just to clarify is this referring to the combined crowd for both days?
Yes. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"There were the ninth and tenth races of the 2016–17 Formula E season", should it be they rather than there?
Corrected. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
Is there a link that can be added for electrical energy? Seems like a term that could need clarifying for the uninitiated.
Added MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"until a safety car was necessitated for the Heidfeld's stricken car", needs rewording slightly I think. Either "for Heidfeld's stricken car" , "the stricken Heidfeld's car" or another alternative.
The former has been chosen. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"Mahindra were still in third place", Mahindra remained in third place perhaps?
Reworded. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


### Preparations
"a Central Park track would have required demolishing trees", can you demolish a tree?
I've written cutting down trees instead. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


### Race One
#### Practice and qualifying
"The damage however was not severe enough and was repaired", enough is a bit out of place here. It can be removed or expanded on e.g. "severe enough to rule him out"
Have expanded on the sentence. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"Engel was affected a problem", should that be affected by a problem?
Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


#### Race
"hairpins where multiple cars made contact and emerged from the melee without bodywork damage", should that be but emerged...?
 Done MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"while Prost lost nine places over the same distance because of his car was damaged.", sentence needs tweaking, I'm guessing the of shouldn't be there?
Removed. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
"Bird took the lead from Abt by aggressively turning to the inside of Abt at the turn five hairpin", possible repetition of Abt could replace the second use with him I think.
 Done MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


### Race two
#### Practice and qualifying
Dvual > Duval.
Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


#### Race
"After starting ninth, Di Grassi", I notice di Grassi is normally used apart from this mention which uses a capital letter in the second paragraph?
Corrected. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


### External links
Is this race set to be repeated? Otherwise the bottom navbox seems a bit unnecessary if there is no other race before or after.
Yes. The 2018 double header will be held on 14 and 15 July. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
An extremely detailed and well written article. Very minor points to address. On hold for now. Kosack (talk) 18:29, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

@Kosack: All of your quibbles have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 20:11, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
No further concerns, promoting. Kosack (talk) 05:42, 2 May 2018 (UTC)