# Talk:2013 Paris–Nice

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Will review. MWright96 (talk) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Teams
"Among the 184-rider start list was only one previous winner of the race, with 2000 race winner" - reptition of winner


### Prologue
Wikilink roleurs


### Stage 1
The last part of the first paragraph is not cited
"made the early breakaway from the field, and managed to e* xtend their advantage to the main field" - reptition of the word field
"an increase of pace in the peloton caused it to split apart," - I know what it split apart means but separate would be better


### Stage 2
"and the rest." would be better as and the rest of the field


### Stage 3
"The climb itself was seen as the pivotal point of the day's action, whether the sprinters could stay with the main field before the descent back into Brioude." - needs a reference


### Stage 5
"mainly second-category and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb" - better mainly second and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb
"some nine minutes in arrears of the overnight leader Garmin–Sharp's Andrew Talansky." - some nine minutes behind the overnight leader Garmin-Sharp's Andrew Talansky


### Stage 6
The last part of this section's first paragragh needs a citation
"With 64 points, Tschopp held a 40-point lead over Argos–Shimano's Thierry Hupond, with only ten points left to be taken at the finish of the following day's individual time trial at Col d'Èze." - ditto


### Stage 7
"Evaldas Šiškevičius of the Sojasun team was next to hold top spot," - first place
"Indeed, Quintana's time" - remove Indeed


### References
no dead links
On hold until all the issues I have raised are checked. MWright96 (talk) 14:54, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Should hopefully be resolved. Craig(talk) 16:14, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Yes all points have been resolved. Happy to promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:06, 29 August 2016 (UTC)