# Talk:1962 FA Charity Shield

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The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:55, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:1962 FA Charity Shield/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:27, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 08:27, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Infobox
The title of the article should be included at the top of the infobox
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)


### Lead
"and played between" - and was played
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
"and late goals from John White and Terry Medwin sandwiched a Roy Stephenson consolation goal for Ipswich." - try not to use the word "sandwiched"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)


### Pre-match
Add a wikilink to the Second Division to the relevant article
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
"Ipswich were managed by former Tottenham played" - player
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
"and had beaten the London club" - how about defeated for variety?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
"Tottenham Hotspur had beaten Burnley 3–1 at Wembley" - {{xt|[[Wembley Stadium (1923)|Wembley Stadium}}
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
"where they defeated a Football Association representative XI 3–2." - think you want to clarify that the XI was a team for the uninformed
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)


### Summary
"and Smith struck to double Tottenham's lead," - struck the ball
Done. Not as suggested, but tightened. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
What was Carberry's injury?
It was apparently an ankle injury but I have no contemporaneous sources for that. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)


### References
Reference 3 is dead and will need to be archived
IABot smashed it.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:54, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

MWright96 addressed your concerns I hope.  Responses all inline above.  Thanks for the great review.  Let me know if there's anything else I can do.  Cheers.  The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
@The Rambling Man: I have nothing more to raise in this review. I will promoting the article to GA class. MWright96 (talk)