# Talk:Alex DeBrincat

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)


### Lead
Can you WL Illinois or is that overlinking?
Per MOS:OVERLINK and MOS:SEAOFBLUE I would prefer not to link either Illinois or Massachusetts.
DeBrincat's offensive production improved during the COVID-19 pandemic-shortened 2020–21 season. DeBrincat followed this with his first NHL All-Star Game selection in 2022. Can this be expanded upon?
Expanded both.


### Junior
Erie general manager Sherwood Bassin had scouted him for Lake Forest's 8–2 rout... Scouted him for? Don't you mean "had scouted him during..."?
Fixed.
What was his NHL Central Scouting Bureau mid-term and final ranking? Can this be added? Did his stock rise throughout the season or stay the same?
Slipped my mind because the Otters website didn't include it. Added now.
Please WL Taylor Raddysh
Done.


### Professional
How was his training camp? How was his development camp/pre-season contests? It may also be important to mention the role trading Artemi Panarin had on the teams roster.
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Added, and also found a source explicitly mentioning how Panarin impacted DeBrincat's chances of making the roster.
You could also mention how the Blackhawks faired in the standings during his rookie season.
Done.


### Personal life
DeBrincat is also a DeBrinDad. [4]
Added with citation to his IG post per WP:ABOUTSELF
He played in a video game tournament for charity in 2020 [5]
Added.
Sorry for the wait, HickoryOughtShirt?4! Everything has been addressed. — GhostRiver 15:23, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

GhostRiver, I just noticed that he's placed in a category for being of Maltese descent but I do not see it mentioned at all in the article. Is there a ref for this? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 16:25, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
HickoryOughtShirt?4 Added a cited statement to "Personal life". — GhostRiver 17:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
GhostRiver, thanks. Passing now! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2022 (UTC)