# Talk:1 Utama

No offence to the authors of the article. Primary key (talk) 19:04, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

@Primary key: Yeah I also read the article more like a promotional article, really need to be written into proper encyclopedic style seriously. I will rewrite this whole article since I found few reliable sources and need to restyled into encyclopedic style. After re-written the whole article, I shall pass this article to any volunteer in WP:PR or WP:GOCE to check for copyediting and modify it to make this article more high quality style and potentially nominate for good article. Cheers. WPSamson (talk) 14:05, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done - now I will leave this article for Wikipedian who good in copyediting where they can assist in proper styling, grammar and formatting to improve into high quality level. Cheers. WPSamson (talk) 08:48, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:1 Utama/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Willbb234 (talk · contribs) 08:27, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Will be happy to start this review. Regards, Willbb234Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 08:27, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

I don't think it's relevant to include that the bus station has national and international services. After all, buses usually go to other countries so it isn't too different.
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 06:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
and honored by CNN in 2014 as the fourth best shopping cities in the world. you say a shopping city here, but this article is about the mall, so I think this should be removed.
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 06:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Hence during the development of this town, there was a need for a mall in this township. I think this could be rephrased because  don't think there was a 'need' for a mall.
 Done Rephrased to a proper sentence based on the cited given reference. WPSamson (talk) 06:58, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Before the opening of the mall, some customers were concerned that the ramp leading to the parking lot on the seventh floor was too steep, while others said that the incline was normal for malls in other countries, so it was not a big concern not sure this is relevant.
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 06:53, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
As the mall experienced unprecedented growth will need fixing for WP:NPOV.
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 02:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
The mall soft-opened on December 13, 2003 wikilink to soft open would help.
 Done WPSamson (talk) 07:03, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
"and costed RM160 million" I've gathered that English isn't your first language. In English, we don't say 'costed', simply 'cost' is fine for the past tense. Please fix this.
 Done WPSamson (talk) 07:04, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
and a new link to the 1 First Avenue office building what do you mean by 'link'?
 Done Replaced with "entrance". WPSamson (talk) 02:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
which was constructed and opened on January 24, 2018 this seems to imply that it was constructed and opened all in one day. This surely can't be the case.
 Removed the word "constructed". WPSamson (talk) 07:02, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
You say "baseball pitch" and link to Pitch (baseball), but this isn't what you are referring to here. The source [1] states that there was a baseball cage, which is a very different thing, so please fix this.
 Done WPSamson (talk) 02:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
The rainforest inside the mall was grown on October 25, 2003 by extracting a Tabebuia rosea tree from a nearby forest carried into the mall then planted along with 200 other species such as Alocasia, wild banana, Johanesteijsmannia, Aglaonema and Phyllagathis to make the forest look more realistic I don't understand why the Tabebuia rosea tree and its planting is more significant than that of the 200 other species?
 Done rephrased the whole sentence since the previous sentence does not match what the references exactly said. WPSamson (talk) 07:17, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Could do with a wikilink to Canny Ong (redirects to Ahmad Najib Aris)
 Done WPSamson (talk) 07:06, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 a robber stole jewellery worth RM10 million in one of the jewellery shops. The heist was planned by a Latin American gang in advance before executing the robbery, including hiding inside the mall as it closes, cutting off electricity, disabling the burglar alarm system, stole CCTV recording units and melting safe doors using an oxy acetylene torch. I'd like to draw attention to the fact that you describe a 'burglary' but you call it a 'robbery'. The two are very different things, see [2].
 Done WPSamson (talk) 07:06, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
You don't need to go into details about the car parking issues as these are not exclusive to this mall and they aren't useful for a reader.
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 06:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
I'll check the references soon. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:02, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Ref 4 is WP:PRIMARY
 Removed WPSamson (talk) 03:01, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
I wouldn't consider refs 31 and 32 from https://hype.my/ reliable.
 Done Replaced with reliable source to support the citation. WPSamson (talk) 06:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
I'll place this article  on hold for the issues to be addressed. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 10:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

@WPSamson: thanks for addressing the issues. There's still a few that you haven't marked as finished. Please let me know when you intend to complete these. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 22:39, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
@Willbb234: I had done improving the whole article based on your suggestion. Feel free to review the article again before finalize for GA. WPSamson (talk) 07:17, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
@WPSamson: thanks very much. Now passing. Kind regards, Willbb234Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 23:17, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
@Willbb234: Thanks. WPSamson (talk) 01:22, 19 March 2021 (UTC)