# Talk:Alan Pastrana

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:46, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:46, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:

"is an American former football quarterback." modify to 'former American football quarterback' with qb and af linked
Y Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
I'd throw a bit of his coaching career in the lead as well, since it's a bit short as is.
Y Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
"on the defense" on defense
Y Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
"cartilage and his medial collateral ligament" do you mean 'cartilage in his' or did he tear that elsewhere?
I believe these are separate pieces of tissue, the MCL being a ligament. Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
"he saw action in two games, and did" that comma's not needed.
Y Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
"where he was still teaching as of 2006" any update if he still is? that's a 4 year gap now.
Unfortunately, not that I could ascertain during my research. Strikehold (talk) 01:34, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
I'll put the article on hold for a week and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:36, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:52, 25 November 2010 (UTC)

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