# Talk:2020 European Masters (2020–21 season)

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 17:02, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Overall:
Pass or Fail:  Didn't find any other issues. Good to go.


#### Comments
There are some parts in present tense. Change them to past (" The event is being played between 21 and 27 September 2020")
Doing Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Think I've got them all. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
An image in infobox will be better.
I'll see what I can do.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
I don't think there is an official event poster for the event (there's no fans after all), so I've used the image from the background section
I will suggest making a different section for broadcast details.
It's not really long enough for its own section. I'd agree if there was more to add, such as at the 2019 World Snooker Championship. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
I checked the 2020 Masters (snooker) article. It also has a small broadcast section, so I suggested. Personally, I will prefer a different one. ❯❯❯   S A H A
Moved regardless. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"There was 98 century breaks made during the tournament" --> "There were".
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"Matches at the event was played as the best-of-9 frames until the semi-finals" --> Matches were
DOne Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"...145 made by Mark Allen. Allen also equalled..." - I will suggest using "He" in place of Allen in the 2nd sentence.
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"Cue manufacturer John Parris also offered an new cue to be made as a reward for its return."  --> "a new cue".
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"was referreed by Ben Williams." --> "refereed" (spelling mistake).
done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"During the first round the World Snooker Tour announced" --> add comma after "round".
done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
"The 2020 European Masters (2) was a professional snooker tournament, and" --> comma not required after "tournament".
done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
❯❯❯   S A H A 16:58, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

ArnabSaha - covered the above. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Lee Vilenski Congrats, the article is now a GA. ❯❯❯   S A H A 08:22, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

The current title, with a number in parenthesis at the end, is very odd - I don't think I've seen that on Wikipedia anywhere. I get that it's the second European Masters of the year, but wouldn't it be better at September 2020 European Masters or 2020–21 European Masters? This has been raised at WP:ERRORS. P-K3 (talk) 21:24, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

As there has been no input, I've been bold and moved it to my first suggestion.-- P-K3 (talk) 17:46, 20 October 2020 (UTC)