# Talk:1904 Tour de France

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Reviewer: Gary King (talk) 17:59, 22 April 2010 (UTC)

Reorganize the lead better. First paragraph is one sentence, second paragraph is huge, then third paragraph is one sentence again.
Y Tried to improve the lead, hope it is satisfactory... =) Feel free to make a copyedit, as I'm not a native speaker. lil2mas (talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
Per WP:EGG, improve the links to 1903 Tour de France, etc.; link "1903 Tour de France" or something to make it more clear that it's linking to the Tour de France article and not 1903.
 Done lil2mas (talk) 18:38, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
"References" section goes before "Further reading" per WP:LAYOUT
 Done lil2mas (talk) 18:38, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
That's all for now. Gary King (talk) 17:59, 22 April 2010 (UTC)

Any updates to the article's lead? I will be unavailable after Thursday, so if you need more time than that, then I can remove myself from this article and just let another reviewer pick it up. It shouldn't take long since there's the backlog drive running right now. Gary King (talk) 18:15, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
All comments should now be addressed... =) lil2mas (talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
Okay looks better, passing Gary King (talk) 00:21, 27 April 2010 (UTC)

During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

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During several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!

http://tour-de-france.velonews.com/article/85550
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--JeffGBot (talk) 14:59, 4 June 2011 (UTC)