# Talk:Bellyache (Billie Eilish song)

I've restored the link to Billie Eilish per WP:REDLINK; if she has written a notable song, she is a notable artist (coverage of her song is coverage of her as a musician), and the news coverage (e.g., Vice, Vogue, Billboard) puts her over the top of WP:MUSIC bullet 1 and WP:GNG. Chubbles (talk) 22:00, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
Per WP:REDLINK, "In general, a red link should be allowed to remain in an article if it links to a term that could plausibly sustain an article, but for which there is no existing candidate article, or article section, under any name. Do not remove red links unless you are certain that Wikipedia should not have an article on the subject". Writing articles about the songs is actually backwards; the artist needs an article first. Chubbles (talk) 23:06, 14 April 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bellyache (Billie Eilish song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:19, 13 October 2020 (UTC)

I know you are not that active anymore but try to respond to changes once I suggest them in this review --K. Peake 08:19, 13 October 2020 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Cover arts need alt text
Target R&B to Contemporary R&B
WP:OVERLINK of Billie Eilish under songwriters
Finneas O'Connell → Finneas under producers
Note that the song's title is stylised in lower case also
"by American singer Billie Eilish." → "by American singer Billie Eilish from her debut EP, Don't Smile At Me (2017)." with the wikilink
"was released on" → "was released as the EP's second single on" with the target
"and Finneas O'Connell, with production handled" → "and Finneas O'Connell, with production being handled" with the wikilink
""Bellyache" is a midtempo electropop" → "A midtempo electropop" with the target
"R&B song, with hip hop," → "R&B song, it has hip hop," with the target
Why is there no sentence about critical reception as the last sentence of this para?
"The track was accompanied by a music video released" → "The song was accompanied by a music video, which was released" with the wikilink
"it depicts Eilish in" → "Eilish is depicted in"
"It entered the top 100 in" → "The song entered the top 100 of charts in"
"It was given double platinum certification by" → "It was certified double platinum in Australia, the United States, and Mexico by"
"and Mexican Association of Producers of Phonograms and Videograms, A.C. (AMPROFON)." → "and Mexican Association of Producers of Phonograms and Videograms, A.C. (AMPROFON), respectively."
"included the track on" → "included the song on"
"and 2020" → "and her 2020"


### Background and release
"on Eilish's debut EP Don't Smile at Me through" → "from Eilish's debut EP Don't Smile at Me, through"
"Finneas O'Connell, the latter of which solely produced" → "Finneas O'Connell, known under his stage name of Finneas, with him solely producing"
"was handled by the studio personnel" → "were handled by studio personnel"
"stated that "Garbage", by" → "stated that "Garbage" (2013) by American rapper"
"for the song. "Garbage was" → "for the song: "'Garbage' was"
"It’s more graphic" → "It's more graphic"
"he’s been my" → "he's been my"
"A remix was" → "A remix of the song was"
"And that the" → "He continued, writing that the"


### Composition and lyrics
Target midtempo to Tempo
Target R&B to Contemporary R&B
"It has influences" → "It has influences of"
"deep house and Latin macabre" → "deep house, and Latin macabre"
Target key to Key (music)
"at a moderate tempo" → "with a moderate tempo"
Remove wikilink on beats per minute
Wikilink acoustic guitar
Target chorus to Refrain
Target synth to Synthesizer
Where is the mention of synths?
"mentions that" → "mentioned that"
Wikilink pre-chorus per MOS:LINK2SECT
"by her childhood guilt she felt" → "by the childhood guilt Eilish felt"
"said that is about" → "said that the song is about"
"about a psychopath who kills those close to her," → "of a psychopath who kills those she is close to,"
"who's killed her friends" → "who has killed her friends"
""Sittin' all alone..." the lyrics are not backed up by the citation
""Maybe it's in the gutter..." same issue as above
"lyrics also reference the film" → "lyrics reference action film"
Add release year of the film in brackets
""My V is for Vendetta..." the lyrics are not backed up by the citation


### Critical reception
"received mostly positive reviews" → "was met with mostly positive reviews"
Target pop to Pop music
"mentions that whiile" → "noted that while Eilish's 2016 singles"
Remove target on pop in this sentence
"and mentions that it would be become" → "and admitted it would become"
"Mark Savage, lauded the song" → "Mark Savage lauded the song"
Target trap to Trap music
"And further mentions that" → "He elaborated, mentioning that"
"She concludes that it is" → "Almedia concluded by calling the song"
"remarked it as" → "described it as"
"The song placed" → "The song was placed"
"on Inisder's Every Billie Eilish song, ranked," → "on Inisder's Every Billie Eilish song, ranked list," per MOS:LINK2SECT
"and "dark" and that they" → "and "dark", commenting that they"
"and cites Eilish and Finneas" → "and prove Eilish and Finneas"


### Commercial performance
"it peaked at number three" → "though it peaked at number three"
"of two million units based on sales and streams." → "of 2,000,000 certified units in the United States."
"number 66 on the ARIA Charts." → "number 66 on the ARIA Singles Chart."
"certification from the" → "certification by the"
"gold certification from the" → "gold certification by the"
"in the country." → "in the UK."
"platinum certification from" → "platinum certification by"


### Music video
Img needs alt text and wikilink music video on the main text
"An accompanying music video for "Bellyache" was" → "An accompanying music video was" with the wikilink
"to Eilish's official YouTube channel" → "to Eilish's YouTube channel" with the wikilink
"it shows Eilish being stranded" → "Eilish is shown stranded"
"is dressed head to toe" → "is dressed from head to toe"
"It begins with Eilish walking" → "The video begins with Eilish walking"
Where is this sentence backed up?
"Eilish begins to recount" → "Eilish starts to recount"
"she has done." → "she has done,"
"forgetting about it." → "forgetting about it:"
"she throws dollar bills" → "Eilish throws dollar bills"
Where is this sentence backed up?
user:Kyle Peake, in the V source. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 04:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

"police officer eating a donut" → "police officer who is eating a donut"
Target Baton to Baton (law enforcement)
Where is this sentence backed up?
"Ian David Monroe writing for V magazine described" → "Ian David Monroe, writing for V magazine, described"
"compared Eilish's looks in the" → "compared Eilish's look in the"
"from the 2003 American film" → "in the 2003 American film"
"the choreography, saying" → "the choreography, saying that"
Target Complex to Complex (magazine) per MOS:LINK2SECT
"auctioned the yellow rain suit and jacket in February 2020 for 12,000 dollars."→ "auctioned an yellow rain suit and jacket nearly identical to the outfit worn by Eilish in the music video for 12,000 dollars in February 2020."
"Eilish's name is signed" → "Eilish's full name is signed"
Target Grammy award to Grammy Award


### Live performances and other usage
"Eilish has performed..." remove since a section makes this obvious
Target acoustic to Acoustic music
"in the June of that year." → "in June of that year."
"on her live album" → "as part of her live album"
"In December 2019, Eilish performed "Ilomilo"..." remove this sentence as it is totally off-topic
"was also included on the setlist" → "was later included on the setlists"
"and Where Do We Go? World Tour (2020)." → "and her Where Do We Go? World Tour (2020)."
"Norwegian singer Sigrid, covered" → "Norwegian singer Sigrid covered"
"for the P3 session." → "for Sveriges Radio's P3 session." with the wikilink and target
"and features Sigrid" → "and noted that it features Sigrid"


### Track listing
Retitle to Track listings


### Personnel
Credits adapted from the album's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the EP's liner notes.
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel


### Charts
#### Weekly charts
The chart positions on the left should be under this sub-section, as you have the year-end charts one on the right


#### Year-end charts
Good


### Certifications
Good


### References
Copyvio score looks fine at 36.7%
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Worldwide digital release of "Bellyache": → Citations regarding the digital release of "Bellyache": on ref 1
iTunes Store → iTunes Store (CR) on ref 4
Authors should have the last name followed by first on ref 15 and target Insider to Insider (website) per MOS:LINK2SECT
Target Complex to Complex (magazine) on ref 33 per MOS:LINK2SECT
WP:OVERLINK of Variety on ref 43
MOS:QWQ issues with refs 44 and 45
Cite Gaon Chart as publisher instead for ref 52 and target to Gaon Music Chart
WP:OVERLINK of Associação Fonográfica Portuguesa on ref 58


### External links
Good


### Final comments and verdict
 On hold but I have noticed your writing skills have improved a good amount over time, congratulations on this Wiki progress! --K. Peake 14:09, 13 October 2020 (UTC)
Kyle Peake, thank you so much for the review! Lmk if anything else needs to be done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 04:50, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss Sorry about replying later; I went offline after responding to your review of "Wash Us in the Blood".  Pass for this article now though! --K. Peake 07:47, 15 October 2020 (UTC)