# Talk:1925 Florida tropical storm

There is no official name for this storm in HURDAT.  It is just NOT NAMED.  Unless you can find a name the media pinned on this system, that segment should be removed from the lead, and other places in this article where it might reside.  Thegreatdr (talk) 01:37, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

Removed the "Hurricane Four" bit Cyclonebiskit (talk) 01:47, 6 March 2011 (UTC)
=)  You've done what you can by mentioning it was the fourth storm of gale force.  Thegreatdr (talk) 13:57, 6 March 2011 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:1925 Florida hurricane/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: 12george1 (talk) 22:55, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Lede
"...the storm further strengthened into a hurricane before striking central Florida on December 1." - Wikilink "Florida"
Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
"On December 5, the system is believed to have dissipated offshore." - Sounds like a personally opinion, like someone said "I believe that the system dissipated on December 5". You should probably revise to something like this: "On December 5, the system was presumed to have dissipated offshore."
Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
"Property damage amounted to $3 million, $1 million of which was in Jacksonville." - Add inflation templates to $3 million and $1 million
Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Meteorological history
"The 1925 Florida hurricane was first identified on November 27, 1925 as a tropical depression situated to the southeast of the Yucatán Peninsula, nearly a month after the official end of the hurricane season." - First, erase "1925", since it would be obvious that this system formed in 1925. On the second part of this sentence, I don't think that a hurricane season in 1925 was June 1 - November 30, and BTW, November 27 is actually three days before the official end of hurricane season, and not "nearly a month" later. \
The 1925 has to be there as a formality (MOS) and at the time, hurricane season ended in October, not November :) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
In the first paragraph, delink "Cuba" and "landfall", since they are already linked in the lede.
Links go by section rather than the entire article from what I've gathered. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Impact
"...only 0.22 in (5.58 mm) of rain fell in the city." - Wikilink inches and millimetres
Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Add inflation templates to the following money values under the first paragraph of United States: $200,000, $3 million, $1 million, $600,000, and $250,000.
Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
In that same paragraph, delink "Jacksonville"
No reason to (reason in earlier response) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
"A ship named the American SS Catopazi sank between Charleston, South Carolina and the northern coast of Cuba, with all 30 crew members lost." - Do you mean sank while sailing between Charleston, South Carolina and the northern coast of Cuba, because it sounds like it could have sank over Florida.
Unless you're thinking the ship was sailing over land, it's assumed to be over water. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
In the last paragraph, delink "Cape Hatteras"
No reason to delink it Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
References
On reference #2, the date is incorrect, it reads 1993, but it should say January 21, 2010.
It was changed after a wrote the article and implemented that reference. Updated it though. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
On reference #6, the accessdate reads "January 2, 1925", do you mean January 2, 2011?  
Whoops, fixed it. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Most references that are written by Associated Press say "The Associated Press", which is not the correct name.
Good catch, thanks. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Summary
Good job, you have either addressed or fix my issues, so therefore, I am passing this article for GA. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 22:31, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

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http://news.google.com/newspapers?id=Y_kuAAAAIBAJ&sjid=UH4EAAAAIBAJ&dq=storm&pg=6060%2C3729476
In 1925 Florida hurricane on 2011-05-25 02:52:37, 404 Not Found
In 1925 Florida hurricane on 2011-06-02 03:19:56, 404 Not Found
--JeffGBot (talk) 03:20, 2 June 2011 (UTC)

A recent NHC document says the following: 
"Note that a previously analyzed hurricane landfall on December 1, 1925 near Tampa, Florida has been recently re-analyzed to be a tropical storm landfall."
Unless anyone thinks we should wait for another reanalysis, I think it should be removed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk)  16:06, 10 August 2011 (UTC)