# Talk:2017 Hong Kong ePrix

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

Giving this one a read. Courcelles (talk) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
"He held through the mandatory pit stop" Held what through?
"Mortara then battled Heidfeld in what he thought was for position but was told over the radio that this was not the case"  Was Heidfeld already a lap down or something?
Both infoboxes say attendance 27,000.  Are figures available for each race?  If not, those figures should be removed.
"Off the podium, Engel originally finished fourth but was penalised with a time penalty for overusing energy and dropped to 14th.[36] Thus Piquet finished fourth, Abt came fifth, Félix da Costa took sixth and Mortara was the highest-placed rookie in seventh.[31] Rosenqvist lost his eighth-place result after being adjudged to have overused power and dropped to 14th."  How can they both be dropped into 14th?
Through race 1. Courcelles (talk) 00:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
"14th to ninth by the start of the fifth lap."  Don't mix number formats in a sentence like this.
"Jani said that had been quite" it had?
Quality work, nothing but nitpicks here. Courcelles (talk) 05:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: My thanks for another review. Everything that has been raised has been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 07:41, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
Promoted to GA. Courcelles (talk) 07:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)