# Talk:Alberto Henschel

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 20:24, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found
Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:26, 19 January 2011 (UTC)


### Checking against GA criteria
GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
Reasonably well written.
The lead includes material not mentioned in the article and also omits material in the article.  The lead should be a concise summary of the article.  Please read WP:LEAD and recast accordingly.
I erased the part about Jorge Henrique Papf and I added in the article about the increased recognition and price of his photogrpahs because of the title, but I didn't really understand what material is omitted and what needs to be added to the lead. Best regards, Idontknow610TM 02:33, 21 January 2011 (UTC) NOTE: I am travelling today and will only return on January 25.
Have you not read WP:LEAD yet? "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article in such a way that it can stand on its own as a concise version of the article." One way of looking at it is to consider the lead as an executive summary of the article.  If a salient fact or statement is mentioned in the lead it should be in the article somewhere and vice-versa. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:21, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
Done. All the material in the lead is mentioned in the article now. Idontknow610TM 15:57, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Good sources, all appear reliable, those that are on-line check out.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Although brief this covers the subject in as much detail as possible.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
All captioned, tagged and licensed.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Just the lead needs sorting out. On hold for seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:37, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
Ok, sorry about the delay, this is now good to go.  I am happy to list this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:37, 30 January 2011 (UTC)
Second Opinion - I am requesting second opinion because it seems that Jezhotwells abandoned this review. Idontknow610TM 20:44, 29 January 2011 (UTC)

No need, just had a few pressing real life concerns. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:37, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

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