# Talk:All Mixed Up (Cougar Town)

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 23:54, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
I will just list the issues here:

Intro: Link the first season
 Done
Plot: Who is "The crew"?
 Done
Plot: "Laurie bets twenty dollars that she could stay up longer than he could, to which he agrees." Should be "Laurie bets twenty dollars that she can stay up longer than he can, to which he agrees."
 Done
Plot: Link Courtney Cox and Jennifer Anniston in the plot section
 Done
Plot: "expresses similar sentiments" This sentence does not have a subject (I think you forgot to add it)
 Done How did I forget this one?
Plot: "Jules thinks that Ellie is jealous, to which she denies." Change to "Jules thinks that Ellie is jealous, which she denies."
 Done
Production: Is "Shit" censored in the actually quote? If not, uncensor it
Shit is censored in the quote.
Production: "Lawrence confirmed her appearance in July 2010, and revealed" remove comma after 2010
 Done
Production: "Bill Lawrence expressed that he hoped that Aniston's guest appearance marked a turning point in viewership opinions" There should be a 'would' after 'appearance'
 Done
That's it! Fix these issues within 7 days and you're good to go!--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:06, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

All done. :) —DAP388 (talk) 00:41, 29 February 2012  (UTC)
OK, the changes look good. I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:22, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

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