# Talk:Air Combat

It appears to me that the "story" section is hardly objective, it looks more like a sales pitch than an actual description of the game's plot, It should be rewritten by someone who (unlike me) has actually played the game. (Arachon (talk) 21:22, 3 February 2010 (UTC))

I am going to remove the "Other Aircraft" section since I feel that it isn't necessary. - RaptorR3d 03:02, 21 February 2007

We should mention the multiplayer, that was awesome. Ryan4314 12:31, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

Now, I haven't played either the PSOne or arcade games, but if they are two different games, I feel each should have their own article.  CardinalFangZERO 06:36, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
The PlayStation game is the sequel to the arcade game of the same name, so I think there should probably be a seperate article for the arcade game which is the actual first game in the series. YourPTR! (talk) 05:37, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

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Hey. I decided to take a picture of the manual for the game, and made a source for the Story section for this article. I couldn't find any scans of the manual anywhere. Not kidding. So, if anyone could find a good quality scan of the manual, or can scan it themselves, and replace my picture, that would be pretty good. KawaiiChurchill (talk) 07:07, 21 June 2017 (UTC)

Just used a screenshot from the game  — Preceding unsigned comment added by KawaiiChurchill (talk • contribs) 07:21, 21 June 2017 (UTC) 

This review is transcluded from Talk:Air Combat/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

"Air Combat[a] is..." never keen on such an intrusive footnote, could you say "Air Combat (also known as Ace Combat in Japan)[A]..."?
Per WP:VG/JP, the Japanese name should be kept as a footnote, unless it's written in kanji and therefore requires explanation (which this one doesn't).
"in the country of Usea" -> "in the fictional country of Usea"
Corrected
"fightercraft"' say what?  Do you mean an "aircraft" or a "fighter aircraft"" or a "fighter"?
I've seen "fightercraft" be used before, but I changed it to "aircraft".
"arcade hardware" no need for "arcade".
Removed
"shipped 2.23 million copies" worldwide I presume.
Yeah, worldwide sales. Noted.
Shouldn't the release date for mobile phone (2005) be reflected in the infobox?
I've never really been a fan of listing multiple release dates for a game in a single infobox, since more often than not it gets cluttered. I chose to just keep the PlayStation version's release date since that is the original version of the game.
No reason for "n.a." in fields in the fair use image licensing, that needs to be remedied.
"the country of Usea" again, add "fictional".
Done
"and stealth aircraft" why not say which one?
Removed pipelink
"powered System 21 arcade" link System 21.
Done
Link "port".
Done
"allow ...  allow" repetitive.
Removed second instance
"in Japan on June 30, 1995.[9] It was released " -> in Japan on June 30, 1995, and on September 9 in the United States as...
I actually disagree with this idea. I've chosen to specify it was titled Ace Combat in Japan in the first sentence, and I think the second sentence leading into the American and European dates is fine.
"on August 25, 2005 for" comma after 2005.
Done
"did Allgame's " AllGame.
Done
"console.[19][16]"  order.
Done
"cutscenes,[19][16] realistic sound effects,[14][17][13][19] and amount" similar, twice.
Done
Ref 14 should have spaced en-dash, not spaced hyphen in the tite.
Added
That's all I have.  On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:03, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

The Rambling Man: That should be it. Thanks for reviewing. Namcokid47 00:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
Namcokid47 the fair use rationale is still complete for the screenshot. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
The Rambling Man: Done. Namcokid47 15:11, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
Good stuff, promoting now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)