# Talk:Agneta Matthes

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 08:34, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! TheSpecialUser TSU 08:34, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks! If you are passing this, could you please do so? Thanks again! Thine Antique Pen (public) 21:41, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
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That is the half part. Activities and services and Social welfare are left out which I'll finish by mid-night. Thanks! TheSpecialUser TSU 02:56, 12 August 2012 (UTC)

I can't find anything wrong! Passing this. TheSpecialUser TSU 14:58, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks! That's 8 now. :) Thine Antique Pen (public) 15:07, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

Here are some pointers to improve the article:

expand lead to better summarize the article (MOS:INTRO)
include the pronunciation of her name (WP:PRON)
mention her death in article text
fix dead links in three references one reference
change the link of reference "KB ontvangt complete editie oudste bedrijfsblad ter wereld" to the actual article
– Editør (talk) 11:21, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
I've updated the list. – Editør (talk) 17:18, 30 January 2014 (UTC)