# Talk:A New Start (Degrassi High)

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:44, 7 June 2021 (UTC)


### Infobox and lead
Improve the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
Don't link countries (Canada/United States) per WP:OVERLINK.
Remove the comma after "summer romance" (; serves as the pause after).
Same for the comma after "as early as Degrassi Junior High".
The last sentence in the lead needs a source.
All fixed, last line removed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:23, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
The sentence is still in #External_links. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
There is no external links section. Do you mean the "see also" section? ToQ100gou (talk) 01:48, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Seems that I mixed them up. Yes, that sentence needs a source. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:48, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Eh, I didn't know that sentences like that would need a source. I can just remove that line until I can find a source for the comparison. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:51, 13 June 2021 (UTC)


### Plot
"first day of Degrassi High School" → "first day at Degrassi High School"
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
"day care nearby the high school" → "daycare nearby the high school"
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
"then blames he, Snake and Wheels" → "then blames him, Snake and Wheels"
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
I would suggest changing uses of "..." to "[...]" (more visually pleasant).
That's usually to indicate that a quoted sentence was interrupted. In the show, that's how the dialogue actually goes. I can still change it. ToQ100gou (talk) 00:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
Looks good now. Don't think we should include pauses through text. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:04, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
Other than that, this section passes WP:TVPLOT.


### References in later episodes
This section should be removed (it's a TV series so the next episode would obviously reference it).
Removed, but the references were pretty significant and were actual plotlines so I felt that it was relevant to the article. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:01, 9 June 2021 (UTC)


### Production
do it.", → typo?
Yes, fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
"counselling session" can be reduced to simply "session" after its first use.
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)


### Reception
"well received" → "well-received"
"abortion plot line" → "abortion plotline"
Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:03, 9 June 2021 (UTC)


### References
Be consistent (here and in the rest of the article) with dmy or mdy dates.
After picking one, add either the "dmy" or "mdy" dates template to fix references.
Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 01:13, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
This was not done. A template wasn't added and every reference should be consistent. The infobox uses dmy, the lead/body uses mdy, and the references are all over the place. Add a template and then fix the infobox or lead. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:15, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
The Date template was in the references. The only issue was that the formatting was inconsistent which I have now fixed along with adding the "Start date" template to the infobox. Everything is now MDY. ToQ100gou (talk) 05:23, 10 June 2021 (UTC)


### Progress