# Talk:Antonin Raymond

This review is transcluded from Talk:Antonin Raymond/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: S Masters (talk) 09:36, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

Comments:

"After the war, Raymond's practice with Tuttle, Seelye and Place dissolved and he went into business with another Czech architect, Ladislav Leland Rado (1909-1993), Raymond & L. L. Rado" - The last two parts are a bit confusing. Did they set up two companies? It needs a bit more clarity.
I have helped copy edit the article, mainly for punctuation issues and MoS compliance. The only thing left is the clarification for the sentence above. I will place this On Hold in the meantime.

Thanks for your time reviewing this article. I have amended the problem sentence and I hope this helps to clarify things! Kenchikuben (talk) 19:48, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for the clarification. I am now satisfied that the article meets all the criteria for a Good Article, and I am happy to pass it. Well done! -- S Masters (talk) 04:38, 21 April 2010 (UTC)