# Talk:1920 Georgia Tech Golden Tornado football team

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
Doing this review. MWright96 (talk) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Before the season
"Halfback Red Barron and fullback Judy Harlan were also renowned." - Please clarify what the two players were renowned for.


### Schedule
Needs the   in the attendance row in the September 25 column


### Week 4: at Vanderbuilt
"meat of its schedule" - unencyclopedic
"Many Commodores left with injuries." - commodore players


### Week 5: at Pitt
"and Pitt was considered lucky to have won." - considered by whom?
"Pitt fullback Orville Hewitt injured Tech quarterback Jack McDonough's ankle, and Frank Ferst had to take his place for the rest of the season." - needs a citation


### Week 7: Clemson
"during the World War I." - World War I


### Week 8: Georgetown
"Ed Hamilton was umpire." - nneeds a citation


### Week 9: Auburn
"Sportswriter Morgan Blake had this to say of Flowers' play against Auburn:" - Sportswriter Morgan Blaken said about the Flowers' play against Auburn:
Wikilink Atlanta Journal


### References
Several references are missing accessdates
Reference 20 is a bare url
Reference 36 is dead.
Refs 9 & 49 needs an work/publisher and accessdate
These are the points I discovered during my read. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 14:11, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

I think that is the lot. Curses that I cannot find another link for reference 36, but I did add something to show Fincher knocked McMillin out. Also, I put "during the First World War", but have changed it anyway. Cake (talk) 15:56, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
Great! Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:15, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

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