# Talk:Baker family

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Nominator: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) 12:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Will get to this soon 
Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)


### Six GA Criteria
1. Article is well-written. 
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Broad in coverage. Covers multiple aspects of the subject.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. No notable instances of vandalism I can see.
6. Only one fair use image. Rationale appears good. 


### Lead
-Looks good.


### Concept and creation
-Looks good.


### The Baker Family
-Who is Ethan? The reporting crew seems set up as the protagonists in the description, but it seems like Ethan is the actual protagonist.
-Ethan is hyperlinked in Jack's description but not in his first mention earlier.
-Is the "various footage" claim in Marguerite's section cited? 
-" It is later revealed that Eveline had taken control of the Baker family after they took in her and Mia from a shipwreck, and before their infection, the Bakers were just an ordinary family." this seems like a repeat of already known information at the end of Marguerite's section.
-The description states Eveline is a child, but Eveline's section only refers to her as an old lady. Is the child an illusion? I'd elaborate.
-What is the Mutamycete?


### Reception
-Looks good.


### Overall
Very well done article overall. Will be happy to pass once the above is addressed. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 Done. About eveline being old, I added more info about her [1]. Greenish Pickle!  (🔔) 02:32, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Looks good. Happy to pass this article.  Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:45, 15 April 2024 (UTC)