# Talk:Ahmed Mohamed El Hassan

@Keith D sorry to tag you put I saw you have edited the article and you have enough experience that might help answering my question. The article was rated C, would do you think need to be improved to bring it to B?
thanks and again sorry for tagging you but a constructive feedback would be appreciated FuzzyMagma (talk) 00:23, 23 November 2022 (UTC)

Hello, a quick look at the article shows needs some formatting, dashes need switching to en-dashes in places and date formats are in a mixture of day first, month first and ISO format. A general copy edit would not go amiss, e.g. first sentence of "Early life and education" Sudan is mentioned twice, the second occurrence is unnecessary. The main problem is the lead which needs expanding to summarise more of the main points of the article. Another is the references, no 7 needs a language, also would be good to provide translation in to English for those in Arabic. Hope this helps. Keith D (talk) 09:49, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
Its really helpful ..thanks alot. FuzzyMagma (talk) 12:46, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
@Keith D when you said provide translation, I  don’t think I know what you mean. Do I need to actually translate the source itself and where I should I ‘deposit’ the translation FuzzyMagma (talk) 15:34, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
Hello, take a look at Template:Cite_web#Title. You move the Arabic title to the |script-title= field and add the translation of the title in the |trans-title=field. Keith D (talk) 17:19, 6 December 2022 (UTC)