# Talk:Anthology of the Killer

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Nominator: PrimalMustelid (talk · contribs) 05:29, 1 July 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 18 July 2025 (UTC)

Taking on this review as part of my GA pledge; will get to this soon. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 16:33, 18 July 2025 (UTC)


### Six GA Criteria
1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the game.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses no fair use images.


### Lead
-Looks good


### Gameplay
-Looks good


### Plot
-The plot seems to be exceptionally long, and while I know it's covering multiple games, it is taking up the majority of the article. Would it be possible to trim this down, particularly in the later paragraphs? 

Reduced it as much as I could, but do let me know if I should do it more. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
-" her to a swimming centre known as Tammy" Is Tammy a person or the centre? I'm a bit confused here. 

Tammy is a person and the namesake of the swimming centre, which I've edited to make clearer. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
-Are there any possible links for night college or moral art?

There is a link for "night school" which is close enough. "Moral art" seems like a made-up genre, so I put quotations around it. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
-" zine distro" what is a zine distro?

Changed to zine distribution. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
-"who styles himself "Concerned Citizen"" Is there a missing as here?

Name, and made clearer. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
-"but the bird in her throat reasserts control." This bird was not established earlier unless I missed something. 

It was, but I rephrased it to make it clearer that it was the bird shoved in as mentioned in the previous paragraph. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)


### Development and release
-Looks good


### Reception
-Looks good


### Spotcheck
-Reviewed references 1, 4, 11, and 14. All look good.


### Overall
@PrimalMustelid: well done, this is really good! Once the plot quibbles are addressed this should be good to go. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 16:07, 22 July 2025 (UTC)

Thank you! I've implemented all suggestions, so do let me know if anything else needs to be further corrected. PrimalMustelid (talk) 19:01, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
@PrimalMustelid should be good to go. Happy to pass! Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 04:01, 23 July 2025 (UTC)