# Talk:Alex Stuart-Menteth

This review is transcluded from Talk:Henry Alexander Stuart-Menteth/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 15:17, 8 July 2014 (UTC)'
This should be another quick review, just like the last review.


### Review
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors: 
Some prose issues, will be addressed in the section labeled "Comments"
B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
Lead's length is great, and the rest of the article does follow MOS.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section: 

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: 
Fantastic images, tagged with copyyright status.
B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail:
See Comments below. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC)


### Comments
Redlinks are not required to be fixed, but if you don't mind fixing them that would be great! 

I think they are all notable (i.e. ships), so a redlink is a useful reminder of that. Thanks, Matty.007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Also, could the following quote be put into a quote box, like the one in Ernest Radcliffe Bond?
I vaguely remember being hauled out of the water, but must have passed out, and when I came to, I was lying on the deck in the German destroyer's wardroom. I remember seeing a picture of Hitler on the wall facing me." 
(You forgot to put a period at the end of the quote, which I did for you.)

Thank you, moved to box. Thanks, Matty.007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
That's all I got to say ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

MrWooHoo: replied to both. Thanks again for the review, Matty.007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
Haha, another quick-pass :D! You work really hard on your articles for GA ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:37, 8 July 2014 (UTC)