# Talk:Bidni

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Bidni/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 08:52, 26 March 2019 (UTC)

Starting first read-through. More soonest. Tim riley talk 08:52, 26 March 2019 (UTC)


### Initial comments
There are some points that need working on:

Use of bold type for "Bitni" and "Bidni" in the main text: fine in the first line of the lead but you need to lose the bolding throughout the rest of the article. (Manual of Style).
"oil which is thought to be low in acidity" – thought to be? Hasn't it been checked scientifically?
"This dispels several online sources" – dispels? Contradicts, possibly.
Block quote: we do not use quotation marks to introduce and conclude block quotes (MOS:BQ).
"Olive Oil Times" – needs italicising.
"Malta's ancient Bidni olive trees, which have been confirmed through carbon dating" – it is not the trees but their antiquity that has been confirmed.
"still bear fruit, however their olives" – stronger stop than a comma needed.
"this statistic comes as no surprise" – you should remove the WP:EDITORIAL
"predominant, testimony" – stronger stop than a comma needed.
"eat these ... serve these" – "them" would be clearer than "these" here
"On a different note" – more editorialising.
I'll put the review on hold to give you time to deal with these points. Tim riley talk 09:14, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
Following the nominator's recent changes I think the article now meets the GA criteria, so ...


### Overall summary
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
In my judgment this article could be a worthy candidate for WP:FAC.

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance: 

Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
Well referenced
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
Well referenced
C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 

B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
Well illustrated
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Well illustrated
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

I found this a pleasing, and indeed instructive, article to review. It gives me great pleasure to promote it to GA status. - Tim riley talk 16:05, 3 April 2019 (UTC)


### Bidni