# Talk:Andriantsimitoviaminiandriana Andriandrazaka

This review is transcluded from Talk:Andriantsimitoviaminiandriana Andriandrazaka/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 20:12, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Lead
He became an independent king upon his father's death . Date?
Added.
"the easternmost and largest piece. " Piece seems strange to describe land, territory?
Changed to territory.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
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B. MoS compliance: 
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 
B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 
C. No original research: 
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 
Overall:
Pass or Fail: 
I'll assume good faith that you'll respond to the two very minor points. For Madagascar in the 1700s it seems a very decent entry.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:22, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick review and your comments. I've made the changes you've requested. Cheers, Lemurbaby (talk) 21:11, 20 August 2013 (UTC)

ها ؟! 91.98.223.249 (talk) 18:32, 21 November 2022 (UTC)