# Talk:All That Is Within Me

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:43, 23 June 2016 (UTC)


### Infobox
The official album cover image requires an alt, so please add one
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Just a suggestion: Instead of using commas to separate the "Genre" parameter, I would use a "flattest"
Good idea; Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Rest is great


### Lead
#### Paragraph 2
"All That Is Within Me received mostly positive reviews from critics, some of whom considered it MercyMe's best record to that point." --> "All That Is Within Me received mostly positive reviews from critics, some of whom considered it MercyMe's best record at that point."
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
"Some critics felt the album was too similar to the band's previous works." --> "However, some critics felt the album was too similar to the band's previous works."
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


### Background and recording
#### Paragraph 1
"Following the release of their 2006 album Coming Up to Breathe, MercyMe went on tour with Audio Adrenaline." --> No source
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
"By May, when the deadline was nearing for the band to begin studio recording.[5]" --> "By May, the deadline was nearing for the band to begin studio recording.[5]"
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Rest is great!


### Composition
#### Paragraph 1
"The album presents a "[return] to to a church-focused theme" in comparison to the band's previous albums, which had crossover appeal to mainstream radio.[11]" --> "The album presents a "[return] to a church-focused theme" in comparison to the band's previous albums, which had crossover appeal to mainstream radio.[11]"
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


#### Paragraph 2
""Goodbye Ordinary" was noted as being similar to the work of the Beatles,[13][14] incorporating "guitars, distorted B-3 organ, strings, and horns"[14] and "driving guitar licks".[9]" --> ""Goodbye Ordinary" was noted as being similar to the work of the Beatles,[13][14] incorporating "guitars, a distorted B-3 organ, strings, and horns"[14] and "driving guitar licks".[9]"
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


### Release and promotion
#### Paragraph 2
All of this section in its entirety is great, but there seems to be an italicizing error within the second paragraph, around "'Billboard Christian Songs chart[24]"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


### Critical reception and accolades
In the "Professional ratings" infobox, please change "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


#### Paragraph 1
"Jared Johnson of Allmusic gave the album 4.5 out of 5 stars, saying "regardless of whether the credit goes to the change of scenery or the backs-against-the-wall pressure, it is impossible to deny that this is the group's best effort to date" and praised Millard's vocals as well as the album's "sparkling array of musical styles".[11]" --> "Jared Johnson of AllMusic gave the album 4.5 out of 5 stars, saying "regardless of whether the credit goes to the change of scenery or the backs-against-the-wall pressure, it is impossible to deny that this is the group's best effort to date" and praised Millard's vocals as well as the album's "sparkling array of musical styles".[11]"
Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Rest is fantastic
Thanks! Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


### Track listing
Great!


### Charts and certifications
The "Weekly single charts" box isn't necessary; you can remove this
Ok, removed. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)


### End of GA Review:
Another good one! I have never listened to MercyMe but after all these reviews I probably should! Thanks and good luck! On hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:37, 29 June 2016 (UTC).

Sorry about the wait, and another GAN to work on. I'll get started on this shortly. Toa Nidhiki05 18:34, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
All GA fixes should be completed. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)