# Talk:Active-class cruiser

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

I will finish this within two hours. JAGUAR  18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)


### Initial comments
I'd mention in the infobox image caption that the Active is in dazzle camouflage. Looked too snazzy for Royal Navy standards...
"The Active-class cruiser was a trio of scout cruisers" - needs plural
"As scout cruisers, the ships were only lightly protected to maximize their speed" - maximise
"thick on the slope and .5 inches (13 mm)" - is the full stop meant to be there?
"(the 3rd and and 1st Destroyer Flotillas (DF)" - duplication
No dead links
No dab links
Founds some minor prose errors, but once they're all done this should be good to go.  JAGUAR  21:19, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

All done with these ships, but others to come if you've gotten bored!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, this is good to go now. Looking forward to it! Keep them coming in, and I'll keep reviewing them.  JAGUAR  12:45, 15 April 2016 (UTC)