# Talk:Bop Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)

In the plot summary, it says "A devastated Leo finally agrees to Felton that Vaughn was indeed the shooter." Should this be Howard instead of Leo? Leo is the actor, and Howard the character, or was there actually a character called Leo? Matthewedwards :  Chat   21:53, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Yup, you're correct. I fixed it. — Hunter Kahn (c) 00:04, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bop Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing the article. Its an interesting article that conveys the flavor of the episode well. (I made a few copy edits which you are free to change.)

My one complaint is that per WP:LEAD, I think the lead could be beefed up more to reflect the contents of the article, including some indication of its ratings. (What were the high ratings attibuted to?)
I took a shot at this. Let me know if it's better. Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 14:30, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Xtzou (Talk) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it is fine.  Xtzou (Talk) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
I made a few minor wording and punctuation changes.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Article is well sourced, with no original research.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
The article remains focused on the subject while covering the relevant areas.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
NPOV
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.: 

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
Overall: A wonderful, concise article
Pass/Fail: 

Congratulations! A fine article.  Xtzou (Talk) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)