# Talk:Battalia pie

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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 13:34, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review a bit later today. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 13:34, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on. I'll get to it as soon as I can. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:14, 4 January 2022 (UTC)


### Comments
#### General
Would prefer the beginning of the first sentence to be rewritten to "Battalia pie (obsolete spelling battaglia pye) is an English large game pie, or occasionally a fish pie...", in order to match with other English cuisine articles.
Done.
Link gravy, spices, and lemon.
Done.
Mention the fact that Disraeli was PM → Former prime minister of the United Kingdom, politician, and author Benjamin Disraeli...
Done.
Besides these minor things, it meets the manual of style and the prose is clear too.
Thank you.


#### Images
A picture of it isn't in the article, and I also wasn't able to find any on the internet that we can use. This is optional, so it's okay.
I live in hope.


#### Sources
Connaught Telegraph URL is dead.
Added archive URL.
Rest of the sources are reliable and verifiable.
Noted.
@Chiswick Chap: A short article, but sweet. It meets the criteria, although I would like these four things to get fixed. Ping me when you're done. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 19:25, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Vacant0 — all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:16, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Good job. Promoting it. Vacant0 (talk) 23:16, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

"Cocks-combs, Goose-gibbets, Ghizzards, Livers, and other Appurtenances of Fowls". This is the best thing ever. :D —valereee (talk) 00:08, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
Yes, marvellous. Maybe I'll find a way to cook one, one day... Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:56, 5 January 2022 (UTC)