# Talk:2019 Scottish Open (snooker)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:38, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
Shall be reviewing this article for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 11:38, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
"The 2019 Scottish Open (known as the 19.com Scottish Open due to sponsorship) was a professional snooker tournament. It took place from 9 to 15 December 2019 at the Emirates Arena in Glasgow, Scotland." - these sentences can be merged together
"It was the eighth ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season and the third event of the Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
"but lost 5–6 to Jack Lisowski in the semi-finals." - but he lost
"Selby became the first player to win two Home Nations events in a single season after a 9–6 win over Lisowski in the final," - repetition of "win"
"and was Selby's 17th ranking title" - needs to be mentioned in the prose with a reilable source verifying it
"in his quarter-final win over Thepchaiya Un-Nooh." - in which frame was the highest break made?
All changed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:32, 26 July 2021 (UTC)


### Format
"The Scottish Open was first played in 1981 as the 1981 International Open, and was won by Steve Davis." - first played as the 1981 International Open, which was won by Steve Davis.
"The 2019 edition was the third of four Home Nations Series events, and the eighth world ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season." - repetition of "event(s)
You can include the UK & ROI and Canadian broadcasters of the event
Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:34, 26 July 2021 (UTC)


### Summary
All the dashes in the first paragraph should be replaced by en dashes per MOS:DASH
"who completed victories over Eden Sharav, Chang Bingyu, Xiao Guodong and Shaun Murphy - and second seed Judd Trump, who completed 4-0 victories over Amine Amiri and Yuan Sijun before 4-1 victories over James Wattana and Graeme Dott." - repetition of "victories"
The term century break can be wikilinked only on the first mention
"The semi-finals were played on 14 December" - how about held for variety?
"The final was played between Selby and Lisowski on 15 December" - maybe change the text in bold to contested for variety?
"and led at 5–3 winning the next two frames." - a word appears to be missing from this text sample
"Lisowski won two of the next three frames before Selby won frame 12 after a prolonged safety battle." - repetition of "won"
"Selby, however, won the match in frame 15 after a break of 79." - how about adding the final score of the match?
All done. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:38, 26 July 2021 (UTC)


### Century breaks
"The highest was a 143 made by Lisowski in his quarter-final win." - in which frame was the 143 century scored in?
fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 26 July 2021 (UTC)


### References
References 1 and 6 are duplicates of each other
Reference 3 (Eric Layton) is missing the publisher, year and isbn
Reference 6 needs archiving and the title a little adjusting to eliminate the "_"
The url of Reference 16 needs replacing
Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:31, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query each of the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 13:23, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

thanks for the review - sorry for the wait, I've covered the above MWright96 Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:38, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
@Lee Vilenski: Now promoting this article to GA class MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 27 July 2021 (UTC)