# Talk:André Laguerre

Possible great source: A History of Sports Illustrated Magazine By Michael MacCambridge.  Need to see if library has it.  --Jayron32 14:15, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
Memo to the writer of this article:  Nice job!
I notice it was begun a week after I added a capsule reference to Laguerre in the Sports Illustrated article, so I would like to think (rightly or wrongly) that that reference served as some sort of inspiration for you.  In any case, it's a very good piece.  Well done.DoctorJoeE (talk) 12:51, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:André Laguerre/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:29, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
Overall this article is good, though I have a couple concerns:

I found a couple places where commas were needed.
Make sure numbers under 10 are spelled out (i.e. "first man in history to run a competition mile in under 4 minutes")
Quotes need to be directly referenced (paragraph three of Managing editor)
I fixed the first two, though the third needs to be modified. Just do that and I'll pass the article as a GA. Not gonna bother putting it on hold since it's just a little thing to fix. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:29, 13 September 2010 (UTC)

Hey, just a quick question on the quote you need referenced.  I can't find any direct quotes not currently unambiguously referenced.  Could you tell me what text needs the cite?  If it is availible online, I can dig it out today.  If it needs the book, I'll need to wait till I get home, since I am on vacation today.  If you let me know which quote is ambiguous, I'll fix it as soon as possible.  --Jayron32 20:32, 15 September 2010 (UTC)
The one in question is 'In 1964, he asked Jule Campbell, then a fashion reporter for Sports Illustrated, to "go to some beautiful place and put a pretty girl on the cover" of that year's "Fun in the Sun" issue.' Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:27, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
Went and tweaked that myself. Everything's fixed now so I'll pass it as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:42, 20 September 2010 (UTC)
Thanks.  I assumed that the refs at the end of the paragraph covered it.  Anyhoo, thanks for your help in reviewing this!  --Jayron32 03:20, 21 September 2010 (UTC)