# Talk:2016 Monaco Grand Prix

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this one as part of backlog drive. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate 

use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Lead
Remove the second link to Formula One
 Done


### Background
FIA should be spelt out in full since its mentioned once
Link Drivers' Championship to List of Formula One World Drivers' Champions
It would be appropriate to link Constructors' standings to List of Formula One World Constructors' Champions
Daniel Ricciardo is linked twice, remove the second link
All  Done


### Free practice
"two ninety-minute practice and one sixty-minute session were held before qualifying on Saturday." - change to 90-minute and 60-minute
The way it is now is well within the regulations of WP:NUMNOTES.
"in order to minimize road-closure disruptions to local residents." - change to Minimise
 Done
Remove the Sebastian Vettel and Lewis Hamilton wikilinks
 Done Removed all duplinks in the article


### Qualifying
"all drivers except for the Force Indias went out on the ultrasoft tyres to set their first lap times." - can be either Force India cars or drivers
 Done
" it were the two Manors of Rio Haryanto and Pascal Wehrlein," - ditto
 Done
Delink Max Verstappen, Joylon Palmer, Jenson Button and Rio Haryanto as all four men are linked in the earlier Free Practice sub-section
Same for Felipe Massa, Valtteri Bottas, Kimi Räikkönen, Fernando Alonso, Romain Grosjean, and Williams


### Race
All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport slang
 Done
"for intermediates over the following laps." - intermediate tyres
 Done
"Another VSC period was called while both Saubers pitted to repair damages," - change to either Sauber cars or drivers
 Done
Remove the link to the 2008 race since its linked in the background sub-section


### Post-race
Delink Toto Wolff as he is linked in the background sub-section
"since his slower pace was due to low temperatures in his tyres." - I believe rewording it low tyre temperatures would be better
 Done
That's what I found. On hold MWright96 (talk) 14:38, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thank you for your review! I believe it is all taken care of. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:24, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
@Zwerg Nase: Yes it has. Promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:45, 5 August 2016 (UTC)