# Talk:102nd Division (Philippines)

Thanks for everyone's patience.  I added these pages because there was no reference for these WWII units at all.  I fixed one up and then essentially carbon copied it for the other missing Division pages.  Then I became ill before I could go any further with them.  I will continue to try to fill in more data and sources and proper citations and references as this year (2017) closes out.
Please feel free to amend or correct.  I will add more also as I am able.  I also intend to add pages for each commanding general of the early WWII Philippine Divisions as I am able.  Thanks for your reviews and concerns; they are appreciated.  Mluklu7 (talk) 19:16, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:102nd Division (Philippines)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 17:59, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be reviewing this article in the next day or two.  auntieruth (talk) 17:59, 8 May 2018 (UTC)


### Criteria
### Review
Well-written:

Verifiable with no original research:

Broad in its coverage:

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:


#### Result
#### Discussion
I mentioned Morse in the 'Organization' section. Could you kindly point out some of the sentences that you find problematic? Kges1901 (talk) 20:54, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
I see it now.  first sentence of Japanese invasion is confusing.  Maybe break into two?  auntieruth (talk) 16:23, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
I have reduced the size of the sentence, I don't think that the report itself matters. Kges1901 (talk) 17:00, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
The Japanese perspective has been covered since the US official history I used as a source incorporated material gained from Japanese documents after the end of the war. Kges1901 (talk) 21:27, 12 May 2018 (UTC)


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