# Talk:Amee Kamani

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 10:46, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful. 
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy. 
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 
Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.


### Links
### Prose
#### Lede
Lede is a little short. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
No need to link Indian Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
ACBS isn't used again in lede Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Infobox only has two parameters, could we fill it a bit? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Things like the score at the world snooker championship and stuff would be nice. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
English Billiards -> English billiards Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 30 August 2021 (UTC)


#### General
En-dash required for scores Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
However, she lost interest in table tennis - probably don't need to say table tennis again. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
links for cue sports and snooker would be suitable in body. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
It's six-red, not 6-red. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
What is DNA? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Need to expand abbreviations on first use. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Nine-ball pool matches - a few times this happens, but no need for the capital letter. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
IBSF 6 reds - it's six-reds. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
A couple of the career finals don't have any info. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:06, 30 August 2021 (UTC)


### Review meta comments
I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:46, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for picking up the review and for the constructive comments, Lee Vilenski. Hopefully I've addressed everything, but let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:36, 30 August 2021 (UTC)