# Talk:Battle of Sullivan's Island

The "The battle's pain" section on this page appears to be an unrelated narrative; it has little or no relation to the facts of the battle.

The section is essentially an personal essay, and, in my view, quite unencyclopedicἲὶῌ. I recommend it be deleted from the article - I'd do it myself right now, but wouldn't want to pre-empt the result of the RfC. Anaxial (talk) 18:18, 30 January 2009 (UTC)
I'm not so hesitant; it's gone.  --Richard (talk) 05:29, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

This action is conventionally known by "Battle of Sullivan's Island" -- this name is what is used in history books.  Can the move of this article to "Action of June 28, 1776" please be supported here by citations to relevant and reliable sources? Magic♪piano 02:44, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Battle of Sullivan's Island/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:43, 18 December 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality: 

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists: 
Is there a place of publication for Stokely's book?
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources: 

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: 

C. No original research: 

Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects: 
Link the British regiments.
B. Focused: 

Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias: 

Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc: 

Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales: 

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions: 

Overall:
Pass or Fail: 

I took care of these things; thanks for taking time to do the review! Magic♪piano 21:15, 18 December 2010 (UTC)