# Talk:Admiral Lazarev-class monitor

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:08, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Will be happy to offer a review. I suspect this review will be somewhat short given how well written the article appears to be JAGUAR  22:08, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps, but be sure to ask for clarifications if there are bit that need further/better explanations.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:22, 30 October 2015 (UTC)


### Initial comments
"Four ships were ordered, but the last two were significantly modified and became the separate Admiral Spiridov class" - were they modified during construction? If so might be worth mentioning in the lead
"The Admiral Lazarevs were stricken from the Navy List in 1907 and 1909" - needs a "respectively" on the end
I didn't actually name each ship, so respectively isn't needed.
"In November the committee decided" - November 1863?
"the two designs, whileAdmiral Chicagov and Admiral Spiridov" - space needed
"The monitors were ultimately designed to be armed with six 20-caliberObukhov 9-inch rifled guns" - another space needed here?
"The deck armor was in two layers with a total thickness of 1 inch" - I think "1 inch" could do with a conversion
Converted on first use in the first section of the armor paragraph
There's no mention on their scraping in the Construction and service (feel free to ignore this)
Covered, with a cite, in the table.
Thanks for looking at this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:22, 3 November 2015 (UTC)


### On hold
A very solid article. I could only find a handful of minor prose issues but once they're all addressed then this should be good to go. I hope I haven't made any "newbie" misunderstandings!  JAGUAR  13:11, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing them! This is good to go now.  JAGUAR  22:09, 3 November 2015 (UTC)