# Talk:1990 ARCO explosion

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

There are only a few copy changes needed for this article to make GA. JJonahJackalope, this will go on a 7-day hold; ping me when the copy changes are done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:28, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


### Copy changes
#### Background
First paragraph: move the period after the quotation marks. We use logical quotation, which does differ from usual American English.
Done.


#### Aftermath
First sentence in the first section and the fourth and fifth sentences in the second section need the same logical quotation fix as above. The other quotes are fine with their punctuation since it applies to the quoted material.
Done.
"Beaumont, Texas" needs a MOS:GEOCOMMA following it.
Done.
"July 23, 1990" needs a MOS:DATECOMMA following it.
Done.
Consider linking Process hazard analysis, which would help with the few links in that section.
Done.
"largescale" should be written "large-scale"
Done.


### Other items
The lone image is PD and alt-tagged.
References are archived.
Earwig throws some high-ish copyvio numbers due to quotes and organizational names (esp. OSHA), but there are in actuality no issues.
Sammi Brie, just wanted to ping you to let you know that edits have been made to the article to address the comments and requests in this review. Thank you again for starting this review, and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please reach out. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 15:58, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Looks good; I see all the changes made. Passing for GA. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:45, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

I suggest the article name be changed to "Arco Chemical Channelview, Texas explosion".  It will then show up in searches for ARCO, Arco Chemical and Channelview.  The date is not needed in the title as there are no other Channelview, Texas explosion articles.  The Channelview site was owned and operated by Arco Chemical, an 80% owned subsidiary of ARCO, at the time of the explosion.  Sandcherry (talk) 22:39, 27 January 2022 (UTC)