# Talk:Blitz-class aviso

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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Review:

"ships of any time": ships of any kind? - Dank (push to talk) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Yup. Wonder what I was thinking of when I wrote that. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
"While serving as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": I'd prefer "When serving as torpedo boat flotilla leaders" or "When leading torpedo boat flotillas"
Fixed.
"speed this": this speed
Apparently I'm dyslexic periodically.
"The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts. They also carried one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.": The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts and one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.
Done.
"In 1891–1892": I'm fighting a losing battle here, but I think some readers are going to wonder what this means, if not "In 1891 and 1892". - Dank (push to talk) 20:23, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Sounds fine to me.
Otherwise:
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
- Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)