# Talk:2018 Mexico City ePrix

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:19, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing shortly. Courcelles (talk) 00:19, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
"and held on to it "  "and he held onto it"?
"over Rosenqvist who later ended his race prematurely because he did not have enough electrical energy to complete all 47 laps. "  Don't think we need this "later"?
"both got out of shape."  What does this mean in this context?
"of the Turvey's car."  Lose the 'the'

Good work. Courcelles (talk) 00:44, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles: The four points raised above have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 05:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:59, 24 July 2018 (UTC)