# Talk:44 Union Square

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:58, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments

"also known as Tammany Hall. It is known as Tammany Hall's" a shade repetitive.
Fixed.
" or "wigwam".[1]" I don't think this is essential for the lead and without explanation feels a little odd there.
Removed.
"44 Union Square replaced a former Tammany headquarters on nearby 14th Street. " I'm mildly confused, do you mean the HQ of Tammany moved? The building surely didn't replace one on a nearby street...
Yes, that is what I meant. epicgenius (talk)
"a city landmark.[1] " no need for the ref in the lead assuming it's mentioned and referenced in the main prose.
Fixed.
"Starting in 2016, the former Tammany Hall Building was renovated..." not keen on "Starting from..."
Fixed.
"1910-1911" en-dash.
Fixed.
"Consolidated Gas (later Con Edison) Building" I wouldn't put the "later Con Edison" into the pipe.
Fixed.
"the chief of the Lenape that originally" wouldn't "who" work better than "that"?
Done.
"D&D sold " who's D&D?
Fixed, I mentioned D & D Company in the previous sentence. epicgenius (talk) 19:33, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
Consider inflation for some of this historic values.
Done.
"while the new headquarters' construction represented its future" this is mildly whimsical and probably needs attribution if someone said this.
Done, I think it was in the source.
"access to graft" I'm sorry I don't know what that means. Do you mean "cheap labor"?
Removed.
Link Times Square first time.
Done.
"Square Theatre.[56][53]" ref order if poss.
Done.
American colonial is overlinked.
Fixed.
" is located in the center of the facade and is located" needlessly repetitive.
Fixed.
The decimal places for area conversion are probably unnecessary.
Fixed.
"in 2016[64] to make" move ref to end.
Fixed.
That's all I have, it's a very nice, comprehensive article, the above are just some suggestions.  On hold while we discuss.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:06, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the comments. I have done these now. epicgenius (talk) 19:33, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
Happy with this now.   Thanks for your quick response.   At  this rate we might get through your backlog before the end of April!!  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:01, 1 April 2020 (UTC)