# Talk:Ali Abu Nuwar

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
No copyvio/dablink/external link issues. Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead
Mind adding the name of the memoirs?
Maybe wikilink blood cancer?
Military career
Wikilink "Emir"
As ADC, Abu Nuwar was a major influence over then-20 year old Hussein Anything more on this?
The prose is excellent, I can not find any flaws that need to be corrected.
Later career
What is the Eisenhower Doctrine?
Hey Sainsf, appreciate the review. I think I've addressed your concerns now. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:43, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)