# Talk:2019 Marrakesh ePrix

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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 06:26, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Practice

The first sentence of the second paragraph is confusing, and a bit of a run-on; splitting it in two might clear things up.
Done MWright96 (talk) 07:54, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
It's still the same. --Usernameunique (talk) 02:05, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Changed MWright96 (talk) 05:35, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
What sentence are you changing? The first sentence of the second paragraph is this one: The second practice session was held in warmer weather and teams became cautious with their tyres as cooling for the Spark SRT05e car between the session and qualifying was prioritised due to the car's predominantly larger enclosed cockpit. --Usernameunique (talk) 05:53, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Now done; I misread it as the first paragraph MWright96 (talk) 06:06, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
I'm still confused by this, and neither the original source nor the archived version seem to be working. The second half of the sentence jumps from being cautious with tires, to cooling cars, to a larger enclosed cockpit. What's the relationship between these three things? --Usernameunique (talk) 21:26, 18 May 2020 (UTC)
Have removed this sentence MWright96 (talk) 05:49, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Overall

MWright96, comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:26, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
@Usernameunique: Have made changes to the article and have replied where appropriate MWright96 (talk) 07:54, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
MWright96, couple replies above. --Usernameunique (talk) 02:22, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 18:41, 19 May 2020 (UTC)