# Talk:2010 Crown Royal Presents the Heath Calhoun 400

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Reviewer: Derild4921☼ 01:32, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Hello, this is my first GA review so please remind me if I do anything wrong. Thanks!

Ok, looking at the page now, it passes the quick-fail criteria and I will now conduct a full review. Derild4921☼ 01:53, 18 August 2010 (UTC)


### In depth review
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):  b (MoS): 
Only saw a typo NSD fixed
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
Free of OR, still checking rest
Conditions were clear with a high of 88 °F (31 °C), making the track potentially slippery.[14] Where in ref 14 does it say the track would become potentially slippery. Minor issue, but I don't get the concept and I also couldn't find it in the reference. Besides this it's fine.
(edit conflict)  Removed since it isn't stated by the source. ~NSD (✉ • ✐) 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Also, according to this, ref 2 is dead. Any alternative?
Didn't show up now. So I guess it was fixed. --Nascar1996  Contributions / Guestbook 13:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
(edit conflict) That's because I replaced it. ~NSD (✉ • ✐) 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Ok, rest of the references look good so as soon as the lead is done I guess I can pass this. (A bit quick but I guess that's what happens with a well written article beforehand ;)) Derild4921☼ 13:31, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 
Looking at some of your other GA's this article is fine.
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 
No problem, free of POV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 
No problem, editors working together fine.
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
All are free use and there are enough in the article with captions
Overall:
Pass/Fail: 
Ok, after going through and having fixed up the minor issues I saw this article is now a GA! Derild4921☼ 13:44, 18 August 2010 (UTC)


### Miscellaneous
The lead is a bit on the short side. Maybe add in a paragraph on the background section and practice. Derild4921☼ 13:14, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Compared to the other articles, such as 2010 Toyota/Save Mart 350, I will add a small race summary to the lead.--Nascar1996  Contributions / Guestbook 13:17, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
 Done Nascar1996  Contributions / Guestbook 13:39, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

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