# Talk:Bob Turley

WikiProject Biography Summer 2007 Assessment Drive
The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Yamara 20:19, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

After his baseball career, Bob Turley was one of the original 85 RVPs with the AL Williams Agency Inc (see Arthur L. Williams, Jr.), which later grew to become Primerica Financial Services. Turley eventually went on to hold the title of Senior National Sales Director with ALW/PFS. 216.153.214.89 (talk) 18:11, 13 December 2008 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bob Turley/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:17, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  13:17, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
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### Checking against the GA criteria
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
The lead summarises the article, so no issues there
Too many paragraphs starting with "Turley" in Personal life
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR): 
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 

This meets the criteria, so I'll be passing. Everything is in check. Nice work  JAGUAR  21:45, 19 April 2016 (UTC)

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