# Talk:Bob Vaughn

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section):  b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):  d (copyvio and plagiarism): 

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):  b (focused): 

It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias: 

It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.: 

It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):  b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 

Overall:
Pass/Fail: 


### Notes
Added the offensive guards, high school baseball and football coaches cats
Change guard in lead and infobox to offensive guard
Changed.
I assume you couldn't find any college stats for this lineman?
Wasn't able to.
"He signed his rookie contract on June 13" Article said it was the day before
Fixed.
Is source 18 locked? I was trying to verify the date he was waived.
Its from the paywalled NewspaperArchive.com - its available through the Wikipedia Library here but I didn't include that link as only Wikipedians can access it.
That's all I think  WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 04:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:09, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2023 (UTC)