# Talk:All in My Head (Flex)

LikeGaga – I'm inclined to state that this article should receive a full copyedit or peer review at the very least before being nominated as a GA. I understand that a GAN is meant to sort out problems with grammar and prose, but there are way too many instances within this article; "while Nolan Feeney of Entertainment Weekly called the song an "über-catchy" and opined that "All In My Head (Flex)" means a grow up for the quintet", "Shirtless men appear briefly throughout the video during each of the member' moments", and "According with, just hours after its debut, the video had already racked up nearly 460,000 views" are among the many examples. There also seems to be some occurrences of plagiarism, with "the stage setup was complete with hanging lights, numerous umbrellas and the Cuban flag" being copied straight from Ref #45, and also some original research as well. Reference #14 is from SputnikMusic (not very reliable) and does not mention "Lauren start to sing the pre-chorus followed by the guitar dropping off and the synths-backed bridge" at all while Reference #4 does not state that the song follows a "verse-pre-chorus-chorus pattern". And while I normally would try to handle these issues myself, I am not very interested in Fifth Harmony nor am I very knowledgeable of them. Carbrera (talk) 04:01, 28 March 2017 (UTC).
I tried to fix some grammar mistakes and removed some unnecessary texts, however, I disagree with a copy-edit. Thank you for noticed me with some suggestions. LikeGaga (talk) 16:20, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

LikeGaga – And while I appreciate your quick responses, may I ask why you disagree with that the article needs a copy-edit? In most of your edits, you completely removed the information when in some cases they just needed to be reworded. There are still problematic sentences like "however, the editor expressed a negative opinion about Fetty Wap appearance commenting the rapper "fails to come off in the song as much more than Default Guest Rapper"" and "The video begins with Dinah Jane singing the chorus accompanied of the group dancing on the beach". A copyedit will sort out these issues and the many others. I'm trying to assist in improving the article, not hurting it. Carbrera (talk) 17:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC).
I apologize for intruding on this discussion, but I also agree that this article would benefit greatly from a thorough c/e. Aoba47 (talk) 19:11, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

In this article it states that "All in My Head (Flex)" has a CD Single when i can find no proof and the reference is a digital download on Amazon. I wanted to state this because maybe I am missing something?  DatBoy101 (talk) 23:11, 12 September 2017 (UTC)