# Talk:2018 Santiago ePrix

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Reviewer: Courcelles is travelling (talk · contribs) 13:45, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

I'll take on this one. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 13:45, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
What is a "lollipop sign"?
"In response to concerns over several dogs that frequent the Parque Forestal from straying onto the circuit" Does not flow well.
"The session had fewer incidents this time round"  'This time round' is too informal, and by my count, there are the same number of incidents listed?
which led to an improved in how his car would operate"  Bad grammar
" this success would strive his team "  Not sure "strive" is the word you want?
"This promoted race organisers "  Promoted is the wrong word.
That's all I see.  Courcelles is travelling (talk) 14:10, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
@Courcelles is travelling: Thanks again for another review. Everything you have raised above has been dealt with and I have made some of my own improvements. MWright96 (talk) 15:30, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
All is good here, promoting. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 19:35, 8 June 2018 (UTC)