# Talk:Abdollah Mirza Dara

@Amir Ghandi: Hi, I managed to get a copy of Farmanfarmaian's 2008 book, War and Peace in Qajar Persia: Implications Past and Present. However, I when I search, I cannot find "Abdullah Mirza" or "Abdollah Mirza" or "Dara". The cited page, 195, appears to be a page with only a photo (Figure 8.1) of four people, including a baby. Would you help me to resolve this? Peaceray (talk) 21:05, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

are you sure? i have the persian version and i asked from some that have the book and they all say the exact that i wrote in article Amir Ghandi (talk) 21:24, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, I think it is likely that the spelling & pagination is different in the English version. Please see my email. Peaceray (talk) 22:21, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceray, i would like to but i don't know how to see your email.Amir Ghandi (talk) 22:23, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi,

I used Special:EmailUser/Amir_Ghandi. You also might be able to email me at Special:EmailUser/Peaceray.

Peaceray (talk) 22:28, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceray i'm sorry, I still can't see your email.Amir Ghandi (talk) 22:44, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, try emailing me using Special:EmailUser/Peaceray. Peaceray (talk) 22:56, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceray Hello, did you receive my email?Amir Ghandi (talk) 23:04, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, I did. Have you received my reply? Peaceray (talk) 23:25, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceraymy problem is, i get a notification but there is no links or any way to see the email. Amir Ghandi (talk) 23:28, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, Did you receive my direct email? Peaceray (talk) 23:53, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceray no.Amir Ghandi (talk) 23:59, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, check your spam / junk mail? Peaceray (talk) 00:00, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
Peaceray, nothing. Amir Ghandi (talk) 00:03, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
Amir Ghandi, check down the links in this search & I think you will eventually find the book. 
https://www.google.com/search?q=table+of+contents+war+and+peace+in+qajar+persia&client=firefox-b-1-d&sxsrf=ALeKk00f7qdEXM5CDiifsGYCpa6zM_kI2g%3A1617667942441&ei=ZqdrYIe1GpPf-gTKx5OABg&oq=table+of+contents+war+and+peace+in+qajar+persia&gs_lcp=Cgdnd3Mtd2l6EAxQAFgAYKFkaABwAHgAgAHYAYgB2AGSAQMyLTGYAQCqAQdnd3Mtd2l6wAEB&sclient=gws-wiz&ved=0ahUKEwiHgMvYqujvAhWTr54KHcrjBGAQ4dUDCAw
Peaceray (talk) 00:16, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

ok. thanks for your try.Amir Ghandi (talk) 00:19, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

Peaceray, I checked and realized that you were right about it, to avoid more problems, I will replace Farmanfarmaian with another source.Amir Ghandi (talk) 02:53, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi @Amir Ghandi:, you've done a great job on this article so far. I would suggest listing this article at Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests once you're done, as there are some serious grammar/prose issues that may hamper the GA review. Keep up the good work! - LouisAragon (talk) 21:36, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

thanks @Amir Ghandi:, if your not busy, would you take a look on Khosrow Mirza article? Amir Ghandi (talk) 21:53, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

This review is transcluded from Talk:Abdollah Mirza Qajar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments
Add alt text to the image in the infobox and the one in #Career.
done
Remove the comma after "the kingdom".
done
The first paragraph in #Early_life needs sources.
done
Shouldn't sayyida be sayyid?
for women it used as Sayyida
"one years old" → "one year old"
done
Add serial commas after Abhar and Damghan.
done
"for until 1819" → "until 1819"
done
"his fathers order" → "his father's order"
done
"scottish soldier and traveller" → "Scottish soldier and traveler"
done
"in Zanjan 1821" → "in Zanjan in 1821"
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User:Headbomb/unreliable finds the source from Maryam Thaqafi (sid.ir) as a predatory source which states: There is community consensus to deprecate the source. The source is considered generally unreliable, and use of the source is generally prohibited. This include a slew of predatory publishers and journals, propaganda, fake news, and other terrible sources of information. The source should only be used in exceptional circumstances, similar to blacklisted sources, but these circumstances are not as rare.
should i delete the source and the sentence "He was interested in Fortune-telling through Astrology and wrote few books on it."? Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
Yes, delete the reference, but I would try searching for a replacement before deleting that sentence. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:18, 15 July 2021 (UTC)