# Talk:Bangai-O

I used the Google Translate camera tool and my own Japanese skills to transcribe these articles from Dreamcast Magazine (JP). Please understand that the tool does not work perfectly, and I had to replace and move many characters myself to get an accurate transcription. That said, I did not fix every character. Some of the writing here is transcribed incorrectly. This is here only for convenience if someone wishes to do further research or re-transcribe. TarkusABtalk 18:33, 20 May 2018 (UTC)


### "爆裂無敵バンガイオー SPECIAL INTERVIEW" (PDF). Dreamcast Magazine (JP) (in Japanese). 31: 43–47. October 8, 1999.
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 02:26, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

I wouldn't abbreviate the publisher ESP in the lead as it hasn't been introduced yet.
Done
Perhaps wikilink 'boss' again in the Gameplay section
Done
"Also, the shop is removed" - the shop hasn't been introduced yet so saying it has been removed is somewhat confusing. I'd introduce it and how it works into the above paragraph
Done
"renamed it Bangai-O from Bakuretsu Muteki Bangaioh" - so just confirming, the original title is Bakuretsu Muteki Bangaioh. If so, shouldn't that be mentioned in the lead? Or possibly even be the article's title?
It is simply the Japanese title, and since it doesn't make much literal sense to an English reader, it's footnoted in the first sentence. I just now copied the footnote and placed at the end of this sentence too and modified the wording. It is not the title used in western releases and not the common name so it shouldn't be the article title.
"By February, publishers" - I'd clarify February 2000, as you later use 'in May that year' though the year hasn't been explicitly stated
Done
"Critics enjoyed the manic and unique gameplay that is characteristic of Treasure video games" - this seems slightly POV. Perhaps reword slightly.
Changed to "Critics enjoyed the manic and unique gameplay that they believed was characteristic of Treasure's video games."
I feel like ref 8 (Danylenko) should have a 'work' or 'publisher' parameter in its reference. University of Barcelona?
Yea it should. Added.
Really great work. Looking forward to passing once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 02:26, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

@Freikorp: Thanks for reviewing. Done. TarkusABtalk 07:30, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
Passing. :) Freikorp (talk) 10:07, 28 June 2018 (UTC)