My reply posted on the Clark peer review pageI think it is a good article  Id never heard of the gentleman but I did see the Veronica Mars episode cited so it turns out I am familiar with him  While I think it is good you will have problems getting it through FAC on the grounds some people think it is too short  Never mind that a nineteen year old isnt going to have a huge article people will say it is too shorttrust me Ive heard this objection on my own articles eg Julia Stiles and John Henninger Reagan  FAC commentators will also seize upon the photographs problem which I dont see ought to be an impediment to getting FA status but people will object  Now as to the article itself    What happened to his father  Divorce  Something ought to be said because it looks odd mentioning only a mother  Second I wonder if you could find some print articles about him  You might try accessing databases such as ProQuest or Ebsco through the public library  Im hesistant about articles where all the sources are electronic  While Ive used many links on articles such as Tom Brinkman and Paul Hackett I also cited the print version so when the operators of those sites take down the electronic versions people will still be able to find the material  Third Id eliminate some of the redlinks to movies and schools  Again this will raise objections if you take it to FAC  Finally most of the article is dedicated to his roles  Is there any more you could add about his personal life  Does he have any charities or causes   1444 August 6 2005 UTC

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My reply posted on the Clark peer review pageI think it is a good article  Id never heard of the gentleman but I did see the Veronica Mars episode cited so it turns out I am familiar with him  While I think it is good you will have problems getting it through FAC on the grounds some people think it is too short  Never mind that a nineteen year old isnt going to have a huge article people will say it is too shorttrust me Ive heard this objection on my own articles eg Julia Stiles and John Henninger Reagan  FAC commentators will also seize upon the photographs problem which I dont see ought to be an impediment to getting FA status but people will object  Now as to the article itself    What happened to his father  Divorce  Something ought to be said because it looks odd mentioning only a mother  Second I wonder if you could find some print articles about him  You might try accessing databases such as ProQuest or Ebsco through the public library  Im hesistant about articles where all the sources are electronic  While Ive used many links on articles such as Tom Brinkman and Paul Hackett I also cited the print version so when the operators of those sites take down the electronic versions people will still be able to find the material  Third Id eliminate some of the redlinks to movies and schools  Again this will raise objections if you take it to FAC  Finally most of the article is dedicated to his roles  Is there any more you could add about his personal life  Does he have any charities or causes   1444 August 6 2005 UTC

