Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her ideas and development?
In the second half of the story, the man finally recognizes the power of nature. He tries to build a fire because of the extremely cold temperature. He is able to start a fire, so he thinks he will survive. However, melting ice from the branches above extinguishes the fire. His half-frozen fingers are too stiff to move, so he clutches desperately to relight the fire. Despite having plenty of matches, he realizes that he won't be able to make it.
A. by including more examples from the text
B. by removing the second main idea
C. by including more analysis
From the given choices, select the correct answer and reply with the letter of the chosen option.

C