Read the following excerpt from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her narrative voice?
During our last game, our pitcher Wyatt suddenly grabbed his wrist after throwing a fastball. Coach Carey asked him if he was OK, and Wyatt said that it hurt. None of us knew what was wrong with him and he was whisked off to the doctor, who ultimately diagnosed a forearm strain and wrist tendinitis. After three weeks of rehabilitation, Wyatt finally returned. Coach Carey said he was glad Wyatt was back, and Wyatt said he was happy and relieved.
A. by adding dialogue
B. by using active voice
C. by removing biased language
From the given choices, choose the correct answer and respond with the letter of that choice.
Answer: A