Draft: draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Commentary: Nitpicking . 
 Thanks for the comments , merged .
component, however in some systems data management may be considered
to be similar to a network management function.
component, however, in some systems, data management may be
considered to be similar to a network management function.
A core function of IoT edge computing is to enable local computation
on a node at the network edge, e.g. processing input data from
sensors, making local decisions, preprocessing data, offloading
computation on behalf of a device, service, or user.  Related
functions include orchestrating computation (in a centralized or
distributed manner) and managing applications lifecycle.  Support for
in-network computation may vary in term of capability, e.g.,
computing nodes can host virtual machines, software containers,
software actors or unikernels able to run stateful or stateless code,
or a rules engine providing an API to register actions in response to
conditions such as IoT device ID, sensor values to check, thresholds,
etc.
A core function of IoT edge computing is to enable local computation
on a node at the network edge, e.g. processing input data from
sensors, making local decisions, preprocessing data, offloading
computation on behalf of a device, service, or user.  Related
functions include orchestrating computation (in a centralized or
distributed manner) and managing applications lifecycle.  Support for
in-network computation may vary in terms of capability, e.g.,
computing nodes can host virtual machines, software containers,
software actors or unikernels able to run stateful or stateless code,
or a rules engine providing an API to register actions in response to
conditions such as IoT device ID, sensor values to check, thresholds,
etc.
IoT end device management includes managing information about the IoT
devices, including their sensors, how to communicate with them, etc.
Edge computing addresses the scalability challenges from the massive
number of IoT end devices by separating the scalability domain into
edge/local networks and remote networks.  For example, in the context
of the oneM2M standard, the software campaign feature enables
installing, deleting, activating, and deactivating software
functions/services on a potentially large number of edge nodes
oneM2M-TR0052.  Using a dash board or a management software, a
service provider issues those requests through an IoT cloud platform
supporting the software campaign functionality.
IoT end device management includes managing information about the IoT
devices, including their sensors, how to communicate with them, etc.
Edge computing addresses the scalability challenges from the massive
number of IoT end devices by separating the scalability domain into
edge/local networks and remote networks.  For example, in the context
of the oneM2M standard, the software campaign feature enables
installing, deleting, activating, and deactivating software
functions/services on a potentially large number of edge nodes
oneM2M-TR0052.  Using a dashboard or a management software, a service
provider issues those requests through an IoT cloud platform
supporting the software campaign functionality.