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Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: I did what I could in the time remaining . Please check and I think there are only two comments left unaddressed .
exposes a rolling hash the security measurements held internally
within the TPM.
exposes a rolling hash of the security measurements held internally
within the TPM.
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991 with prefix 'yang',
RFC8348 with prefix 'hw', I-D.ietf-netconf-keystore with prefix 'ks',
and 'ietf-tcg-algs.yang' ref-ietf-tcg-algs with prefix 'taa'.
Additionally, references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, bios-log, ima-log, BIOS-Log-Event-Type, as well as
ima and netequip-boot-log.
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991 with prefix 'yang',
RFC8348 with prefix 'hw', I-D.ietf-netconf-keystore with prefix 'ks',
and 'ietf-tcg-algs.yang' ref-ietf-tcg-algs with prefix 'taa'.
Additionally, references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, bios-log, BIOS-Log-Event-Type, as well as ima and
netequip-boot-log.
'ima': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval of event
logs from the Linux Integrity Measurement Architecture (IMA ima-
log).  Also see ima.
'ima': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval of event
logs from the Linux Integrity Measurement Architecture (IMA, see
ima).
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC2104,
RFC8017, ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-
10118-3, ISO-IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-
1363-2000, IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C,
NIST-SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, bios-
log, ima-log, as well as ima and netequip-boot-log exist within the
YANG Model.
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC2104,
RFC8017, ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-
10118-3, ISO-IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-
1363-2000, IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C,
NIST-SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, bios-
log, as well as ima and netequip-boot-log exist within the YANG
Model.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: Self - approved 
 Thanks , this does a good job bridging the gap between what we say in the body of the document and what is available in external references .
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991 with prefix 'yang',
RFC8348 with prefix 'hw', I-D.ietf-netconf-keystore with prefix 'ks',
and 'ietf-tcg-algs.yang' ref-ietf-tcg-algs with prefix 'taa'.
Additionally, references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, bios-log, ima-log, BIOS-Log-Event-Type and
netequip-boot-log.
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991 with prefix 'yang',
RFC8348 with prefix 'hw', I-D.ietf-netconf-keystore with prefix 'ks',
and 'ietf-tcg-algs.yang' ref-ietf-tcg-algs with prefix 'taa'.
Additionally, references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, bios-log, ima-log, BIOS-Log-Event-Type, as well as
ima and netequip-boot-log.
'ima': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval of event
logs from the Linux Integrity Measurement Architecture (IMA).
'netequip_boot': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval
of netequip boot event logs.
'ima': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval of event
logs from the Linux Integrity Measurement Architecture (IMA ima-
log).  Also see ima.
'netequip_boot': Indicates that the device supports the retrieval
of netequip boot event logs.  See ima and netequip-boot-log.
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC2104,
RFC8017, ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-
10118-3, ISO-IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-
1363-2000, IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C,
NIST-SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, bios-
log, ima-log, and netequip-boot-log exist within the YANG Model.
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC2104,
RFC8017, ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-
10118-3, ISO-IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-
1363-2000, IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C,
NIST-SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, bios-
log, ima-log, as well as ima and netequip-boot-log exist within the
YANG Model.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: add a description of equivalent hardware implementations
This document defines YANG RPCs and a small number of configuration
nodes required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity
measurements from a device, following the operational context defined
in TPM-based Network Device Remote Integrity Verification.
Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPCs,
originating from one or more roots of trust for measurement (RTMs).
The module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 as well
as a corresponding TPM Software Stack (TSS), included in the device
components of the composite device the YANG server is running on.
This document defines YANG RPCs and a small number of configuration
nodes required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity
measurements from a device, following the operational context defined
in TPM-based Network Device Remote Integrity Verification.
Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPCs,
originating from one or more roots of trust for measurement (RTMs).
The module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 as well
as a corresponding TPM Software Stack (TSS), or equivalent hardware
implementations that include the protected capabilities as provided
by TPMs as well as a corresponding software stack, included in the
device components of the composite device the YANG server is running
on.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: makes sense
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991, RFC8348, I-D.ietf-
netconf-keystore, and "ietf-tcg-algs.yang" ref-ietf-tcg-algs.
Additionally references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, PC-Client-EFI-TPM-1.2, ima-log, BIOS Log Event
Type and netequip-boot-log.
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991, RFC8348, I-D.ietf-
netconf-keystore, and "ietf-tcg-algs.yang" ref-ietf-tcg-algs.
Additionally references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, bios-log, ima-log, BIOS Log Event Type and
netequip-boot-log.
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC7748,
ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-10118-3, ISO-
IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-1363-2000,
IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C, NIST-
SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, PC-Client-
EFI-TPM-1.2, ima-log, and netequip-boot-log exist within the YANG
Model.
This document has encoded the TCG Algorithm definitions of TCG-Algos,
revision 1.32.  By including this full table as a separate YANG file
within this document, it is possible for other YANG models to
leverage the contents of this model.  Specific references to RFC7748,
ISO-IEC-9797-1, ISO-IEC-9797-2, ISO-IEC-10116, ISO-IEC-10118-3, ISO-
IEC-14888-3, ISO-IEC-15946-1, ISO-IEC-18033-3, IEEE-Std-1363-2000,
IEEE-Std-1363a-2004, NIST-PUB-FIPS-202, NIST-SP800-38C, NIST-
SP800-38D, NIST-SP800-38F, NIST-SP800-56A, NIST-SP800-108, bios-log,
ima-log, and netequip-boot-log exist within the YANG Model.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: if spaces are allowed in kramdown references , then this should work . AFAIK , this is ready to post to IETF .
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991, RFC8348, I-D.ietf-
netconf-keystore, and "ietf-tcg-algs.yang" ref-ietf-tcg-algs.
Additionally references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, PC-Client-EFI-TPM-1.2, ima-log, and netequip-boot-
log.
This YANG module imports modules from RFC6991, RFC8348, I-D.ietf-
netconf-keystore, and "ietf-tcg-algs.yang" ref-ietf-tcg-algs.
Additionally references are made to RFC8032, RFC8017, RFC6933,
TPM1.2-Commands, TPM2.0-Arch, TPM2.0-Structures, TPM2.0-Key,
TPM1.2-Structures, PC-Client-EFI-TPM-1.2, ima-log, BIOS Log Event
Type and netequip-boot-log.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: Final changes are approved by Roman . This merge will produce the first release candidate .
It must be verified that the certificate is for an active AK,
i.e., the certificate provided is able to support Attestation on
the targeted TPM 2.0.
It must be verified that the certificate is for an active AK,
i.e., the quote signature associated with RPC response has been
generated by an entity legitimately able to perform Attestation on
the targeted TPM 2.0.
Draft: draft-ietf-rats-yang-tpm-charra

Commentary: Per  's comment that we are not building a new datastore ( type )
This document defines a YANG RPC and a minimal datastore required to
retrieve attestation evidence about integrity measurements from a
device following the operational context defined in TPM-based Network
Device Remote Integrity Verification.  Complementary measurement logs
are also provided by the YANG RPC originating from one or more roots
of trust of measurement.  The module defined requires at least one
TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 and corresponding Trusted Software Stack included
in the device components of the composite device the YANG server is
running on.
This document defines a YANG RPC and a small number of configuration
node required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity
measurements from a device following the operational context defined
in TPM-based Network Device Remote Integrity Verification.
Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPC
originating from one or more roots of trust of measurement.  The
module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 and
corresponding Trusted Software Stack included in the device
components of the composite device the YANG server is running on.