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message are included by hashing the MLSPlaintext in which they were sent. <del> The "confirmed_transcript_hash" is updated with an MLSMessageContent and MLSMessageAuth containing a Commit in two steps: Thus the "confirmed_transcript_hash" field in a GroupContext object represents a transcript over the whole history of MLSMessage Commit messages, up to the confirmation_tag field of the most recent Commit. The confirmation tag is then included in the transcript for the next epoch.  The interim transcript hash is computed by new members using the confirmation_tag of the GroupInfo struct, while existing members can compute it directly. As shown above, when a new group is created, the "interim_transcript_hash" field is set to the zero-length octet string. </del>  9.3.

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The collection of structs could be less chatty. Suggest PreSharedKeys is only used once, can be inlined in GroupSecrets Use GroupContext for the internals of GroupInfo
Note: was fixed in In , we did: So only the following remain: Use GroupContext for the internals of GroupInfo
TODO at some point: Narrative text to briefly explain MLSMessageCommitContent would be useful. At the moment this appears as a struct only twice in the spec - its contents in MLSMessageContent are defined and used frequently, but MLSMessageCommitContent is not ever mentioned in discussion text. Something as simple as a narrative comment that MLSMessageCommitContent is used as a combiner for transcript hashes and will not be referred to elsewhere would be useful, giving some scoping for the introduced term.
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message are included by hashing the MLSPlaintext in which they were sent.  <ins> The transcript hash comprises two individual hashes: A "confirmed_transcript_hash" that represents a transcript over the whole history of Commit messages, up to and including the signature of the most recent Commit. An "interim_transcript_hash" that covers the confirmed transcript hash plus the "confirmation_tag" of the most recent Commit. New members compute the interim transcript hash using the "confirmation_tag" field of the GroupInfo struct, while existing members can compute it directly. Each Commit message updates these hashes by way of its enclosing MLSMessageContentAuth.  The MLSMessageContentAuth struct is split into ConfirmedTranscriptHashInput and InterimTranscriptHashInput. The former is used to update the confirmed transcript hash and the latter to update the interim transcript hash. </ins> 9.3.