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Layer-2. <del> Layer-3. </del> Label-switched path. Multiprotocol Label Switching. <del> Provider Edge. </del> Packet Elimination Function. Packet Replication Function. Packet Ordering Function. <del> Packet Switched Network. </del> Pseudowire. DetNet "service" label.  Terminating Provider Edge. Traffic Engineering. Note that such configuration MAY include support from PREOF on the incoming DetNet MPLS flow.  5.2. The traffic treatment required for a particular DetNet IP flow is processing according to I-D.ietf-detnet-mpls. It is the responsibility of the DetNet controller plane to properly <del> provision both flow identification information and the flow specific resources needed to provided the traffic treatment needed to meet each flow's service requirements.  This applies for aggregated and individual flows. </del>  7.

Reviewer comments:
Note added to 5.1, that L4 multipath is out-of-scope. Please, check note and its placement that it is appropriate. URL URL Internet-Draft draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-URL is now available. It is a work item of the Deterministic Networking (DETNET) WG of the IETF. Title: Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) for Deterministic Networks (DetNet) with IP Data Plane Authors: Greg Mirsky Mach(Guoyi) Chen David Black Name: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-URL Pages: 9 Dates: 2024-02-05 Abstract: This document discusses the use of existing IP Operations, Administration, and Maintenance protocols and mechanisms in Deterministic Networking networks that use the IP data plane. The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: URL There is also an HTML version available at: URL A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-URL Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at: URL
Hi Bernard, thank you for your thoughtful comments and helpful suggestions. The authors discussed them and updated the draft to address your concerns. I uploaded the new version: A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam-URL has been successfully submitted by Greg Mirsky and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-oam Revision: 11 Title: Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) for Deterministic Networks (DetNet) with IP Data Plane Date: 2024-02-05 Group: detnet Pages: 9 URL: URL Status: URL HTML: URL HTMLized: URL Diff: https://author-URL Abstract: This document discusses the use of existing IP Operations, Administration, and Maintenance protocols and mechanisms in Deterministic Networking networks that use the IP data plane. Please let us know whether these updates adequately address your comments. Our sincere thanks for your help in improving this document. Regards, Greg (on behalf of the authors)

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Layer-2.  Label-switched path. Multiprotocol Label Switching.  Packet Elimination Function. Packet Replication Function. Packet Ordering Function.  Pseudowire. DetNet "service" label. <ins> Switching Provider Edge. </ins> Terminating Provider Edge. Traffic Engineering. Note that such configuration MAY include support from PREOF on the incoming DetNet MPLS flow. <ins> Note: using Layer-4 (L4) transport protocols e.g., for multipath are out of scope of this document both for a single flow and aggregate flows. </ins> 5.2. The traffic treatment required for a particular DetNet IP flow is processing according to I-D.ietf-detnet-mpls. It is the responsibility of the DetNet controller plane to properly  <ins> provision both flow identification information and the flow-specific resources needed to provide the traffic treatment to meet each flow's service requirements.  This applies for aggregated and individual flows. </ins> 7.