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5.4. <del> Entangled Connections can be created using the Clone Action: Calling Clone on a Connection yields a group of Connections: the parent Connection on which Clone was called, and a resulting cloned Connection.  The new Connection is actively openend, and it will send a Ready Event or an EstablishmentError Event.  The Connections within a group are "entangled" with each other, and become part of a Connection Group.  Calling Clone on any of these Connections adds another Connection to the Connection Group, and so on.  "Entangled" Connections share all Connection Properties except "Connection Priority" (see conn-priority) .  Like all other Properties, Connection Priority is copied to the new Connection when calling Clone(), but it is not entangled: Changing Connection Priority on one Connection does not change it on the other Connections in the same Connection Group. The stack of Message Framers associated with a Connection are also copied to the cloned Connection when calling Clone.  In other words, a cloned Connection has the same stack of Message Framers as the Connection from which they are Cloned, but these Framers may internally maintain per-Connection state. </del>  It is also possible to check which Connections belong to the same Connection Group.  Calling GroupedConnections() on a specific

Reviewer comments:
This changes the use of the term "entanglement" as discussed in , and moves some text around in this section for better clarity and less repetition. Also, addressing , it introduces a framer as an optional parameter to the Clone call.
NAME I incorporated all of your suggestions, thanks!
This is not fully clear from section 5.4., however, if connections in a group are each QUIC streams, I think it should be possible to use different framers on each stream. So it might be okay that a framers is copied when clone is called but changing a framer on one connection should not change the framer on the other connection in a group...?
Also an related editorial comment (that could be addressed in the same PR eventually): this section on groups only at the very end has a paragraph starting with "Note that calling Clone() can result in on-the-wire signaling..." which kind of explains that groups are supposed to be used for multistream protocol but can also be mapped to separate connection if the protocol doesn't not support multiplexing of stream on one connection. I think this information should be added at the very beginning of this section.
Actually, now looking at the framer section, I guess you would rather like to already set the new framer before you clone a connection...?
I agree with everything you say here; about your last suggestion, maybe a framer should be an optional argument of the clone call?
I don’t actually understand the difference between a connection in a Connection Group and an “entangled connection” ? Both terms are used in API, but in different ways (possibly by different authors) - do we really really need the word “entangled”?? if we do we need, can we define and explain this.
I think that having the word is good as it indicates a deeper relationship than mere "grouping". Just based on terms, I'd (correctly) imagine that I can define priorities between members of a group, and that they somehow belong together... as in: Close with a common call, etc. ... but I don't think that I would expect, just from this term, that changing a property on one of them affects all the others. Hence the phrasing: "The connections within a group are 'entangled' with each other". However, I agree that in most other places, we should talk about "groups" instead. I can try to fix this.
Sounds good - we should add that explanation upfront in the definitions then also?
[Yes, I think so.] EDIT: no, now I don't think so anymore. (see )
I have addressed this in PR . Note that the text interchangeably talked about both Connections and Connection Properties as being "entangled". I have now written this such that the term "entanglement" applies to Connection Properties only, whereas Connections in a group are, well, members of the same Connection Group.
Looks good to me.

Revised text:
5.4.  <ins> Connection Groups can be created using the Clone Action: Calling Clone on a Connection yields a Connection Group containing two Connections: the parent Connection on which Clone was called, and a resulting cloned Connection.  The new Connection is actively openend, and it will send a Ready Event or an EstablishmentError Event.  Calling Clone on any of these Connections adds another Connection to the Connection Group.  Connections in a Connection Group share all Connection Properties except "Connection Priority" (see conn-priority), and these Connection Properties are entangled: Changing one of the Connection Properties on one Connection in the Connection Group automatically changes the Connection Property for all others.  For example, changing "Timeout for aborting Connection" (see conn-timeout) on one Connection in a Connection Group will automatically make the same change to this Connection Property for all other Connections in the Connection Group.  Like all other Properties, "Connection Priority" is copied to the new Connection when calling Clone(), but in this case, a later change to the "Connection Priority" on one Connection does not change it on the other Connections in the same Connection Group. Message Properties are also not entangled.  For example, changing "Lifetime" (see msg-lifetime) of a Message will only affect a single Message on a single Connection. A new Connection created by Clone can have a Message Framer assigned via the optional "framer" parameter of the Clone Action.  If this parameter is not supplied, the stack of Message Framers associated with a Connection is copied to the cloned Connection when calling Clone.  Then, a cloned Connection has the same stack of Message Framers as the Connection from which they are Cloned, but these Framers may internally maintain per-Connection state. </ins> It is also possible to check which Connections belong to the same Connection Group.  Calling GroupedConnections() on a specific