Original text:
SHA-256 MUST be used.  Diversifying EPSK by ImportedIdentity.target_kdf ensures that an IPSK is only used as input keying material to at most one KDF, thus satisfying the <del> requirements in RFC8446. Endpoints generate a compatible ipskx for each target ciphersuite they offer.  For example, importing a key for TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 and TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 would yield two PSKs, one for HKDF-SHA256 and another for HKDF-SHA384.  In contrast, if TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 and TLS_CHACHA20_POLY1305_SHA256 are supported, only one derived key is necessary. The resulting IPSK base key 'ipskx' is then used as the binder key in TLS 1.3 with identity ImportedIdentity.  With knowledge of the supported KDFs, one may import PSKs before the start of a connection. EPSKs may be imported for early data use if they are bound to protocol settings and configurations that would otherwise be required for early data with normal (ticket-based PSK) resumption.  Minimally, that means ALPN, QUIC transport settings, etc., must be provisioned alongside these EPSKs. </del>  4.2. <del> To prevent PSK Importers from being confused with standard out-of- band PSKs, imported PSKs change the PSK binder key derivation label. In particular, the standard TLS 1.3 PSK binder key computation is defined as follows: </del>  Imported PSKs replace the string "ext binder" with "imp binder" when <del> deriving "binder_key".  This means the binder key is now computed as </del>  follows: <del> This new label differentiates non-imported and imported external PSKs.  Specifically, a client and server will negotiate use of an </del>  external PSK if and only if (a) both endpoints import the PSK or (b) neither endpoint imports the PSK.  As "binder_key" is a leaf key, changing its computation does not affect any other key.

Reviewer comments:
This is mainly editorial, so there should be nothing surprising here. Please let me if that's not the case! It also includes clarifying text per NAME recommendation raised during WGLC. cc NAME NAME
From Rob Sayre: We should note the latter is a requirement from Section 4.2.11 of RFC8446. Let's also fix the typo "import external keys for TLS..."

Revised text:
SHA-256 MUST be used.  Diversifying EPSK by ImportedIdentity.target_kdf ensures that an IPSK is only used as input keying material to at most one KDF, thus satisfying the  <ins> requirements in RFC8446.  See security-considerations for more details. Endpoints SHOULD generate a compatible "ipskx" for each target ciphersuite they offer.  For example, importing a key for TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 and TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 would yield two PSKs, one for HKDF-SHA256 and another for HKDF-SHA384.  In contrast, if TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 and TLS_CHACHA20_POLY1305_SHA256 are supported, only one derived key is necessary. EPSKs may be imported before the start of a connection if the target KDFs, protocols, and context string(s) are known a priori.  EPSKs may also be imported for early data use if they are bound to protocol settings and configurations that would otherwise be required for early data with normal (ticket-based PSK) resumption.  Minimally, that means ALPN, QUIC transport parameters (if used for QUIC), etc., must be provisioned alongside these EPSKs. </ins> 4.2.  <ins> To prevent confusion between imported and non-imported PSKs, imported PSKs change the PSK binder key derivation label.  In particular, the standard TLS 1.3 PSK binder key computation is defined as follows: </ins> Imported PSKs replace the string "ext binder" with "imp binder" when  <ins> deriving "binder_key".  This means the binder key is computed as </ins> follows:  <ins> This new label ensures a client and server will negotiate use of an </ins> external PSK if and only if (a) both endpoints import the PSK or (b) neither endpoint imports the PSK.  As "binder_key" is a leaf key, changing its computation does not affect any other key.