Original text:
header parameter MUST be used for the mode described in sec- timestamp-then-cose. <del> The "3161-ttc" protected header is defined as follows: Name: 3161-ttc Label: TBD Value Type: bstr Value Registry: Description: RFC 3161 timestamp token Reference: sec-tst-hdr-ttc of RFCthis The content of the byte string are the bytes of the DER-encoded RFC 3161 TimeStampToken structure. </del>  3.2.

Reviewer comments:
and have pointed out that the current registration requests are rather informal and could be improved using the templates in . All, I have performed a read through of the doc. A few minor language preferences for clarity have been suggested here: URL Otherwise, I was able to implement and test both modes of operation and get the desired results (with stand in labels). That indicates to me that the draft is well formed, concise, and references the other specifications appropriately that I needed to reference. I find this document useful, and we would implement and utilize in production, and support moving this forward. Two minor additional nits below: One question for the group / authors - is there a preferred set of values for the TBDs in the COSE labels section, or should that just be left as is for now? An additional style question, is it better to restate the COSE headers requested in the IANA requested format, or is it fine to reference as is done in the draft currently? e.g. current draft reads: "IANA is requested to add the two COSE header parameters described in Section 3 to the "COSE Header Parameters" subregistry of the [URL] registry." This could obviously be detailed out. Mike Prorock On Tue, Aug 13, 2024 at 11:43 AM Michael Prorock wrote:
Answering Mike P.’s question about IANA registrations, it is strongly preferred to have the IANA Considerations section follow the registration template and contain the exact values to be placed in the registry (with the Label of course, being TBD). An example of such IANA Considerations text is URL Please update the draft to add this content. Thanks, -- Mike From: Michael Prorock Sent: Friday, August 23, 2024 5:40 AM To: Michael Prorock Cc: Michael Jones ; cose Subject: Re: [COSE] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter All, I have performed a read through of the doc. A few minor language preferences for clarity have been suggested here: URL Otherwise, I was able to implement and test both modes of operation and get the desired results (with stand in labels). That indicates to me that the draft is well formed, concise, and references the other specifications appropriately that I needed to reference. I find this document useful, and we would implement and utilize in production, and support moving this forward. Two minor additional nits below: One question for the group / authors - is there a preferred set of values for the TBDs in the COSE labels section, or should that just be left as is for now? An additional style question, is it better to restate the COSE headers requested in the IANA requested format, or is it fine to reference as is done in the draft currently? e.g. current draft reads: "IANA is requested to add the two COSE header parameters described in Section 3 to the "COSE Header Parameters" subregistry of the [URL] registry." This could obviously be detailed out. Mike Prorock On Tue, Aug 13, 2024 at 11:43 AM Michael Prorock > wrote: Thanks for the additional time Mike and Ivo. I support moving this along, but I would like to perform a detailed read through. I have some time set aside for this and will have comments back next week. Mike Prorock founder - URL Ivo and I reviewed the results of the WGLC and there have been no responses whatsoever – even from the authors. We are therefore extending the WGLC for another two weeks until Tuesday, August 27th. Unless multiple people support progressing the draft, we will not request publication. Please send your reviews and feedback on the draft. Thank you, -- Mike and Ivo From: Michael Jones > Sent: Tuesday, July 30, 2024 10:53 AM To: EMAIL Subject: [COSE] WGLC for draft-ietf-cose-tsa-tst-header-parameter Hi all, This message starts the Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for URL The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on Tuesday, August 13, 2024. Please review and send any comments or feedback to the working group. Even if your feedback is “this is ready for publication”, please let us know. Thank you, -- Mike and Ivaylo, COSE Chairs COSE mailing list -- EMAIL To unsubscribe send an email to EMAIL

Revised text:
header parameter MUST be used for the mode described in sec- timestamp-then-cose.  <ins> The "3161-ttc" protected header parameter contains a DER-encoded RFC3161 TimeStampToken wrapped in a CBOR byte string (Major type 2). </ins> 3.2.