Original text:
15. <del> CVE-2019-9513 aka "Resource Loop", is a DoS attack based on manipulation of the RFC 7540 priority tree.  Extensible priorities does not use stream dependencies, which mitigates this vulnerability. Section 5.3.4 of RFC7540 describes a scenario where closure of streams in the priority tree could cause suboptimal prioritization. To avoid this, RFC7540 states that "an endpoint SHOULD retain stream prioritization state for a period after streams become closed". Retaining state for streams no longer counted towards stream concurrency consumes server resources.  Furthermore, RFC7540 identifies that reprioritization of a closed stream could affect dependents; it recommends updating the priority tree if sufficient state is stored, which will also consume server resources.  To limit this commitment, it is stated that "The amount of prioritization state that is retained MAY be limited" and "If a limit is applied, endpoints SHOULD maintain state for at least as many streams as allowed by their setting for SETTINGS_MAX_CONCURRENT_STREAMS.". Extensible priorities does not use stream dependencies, which minimizes most of the resource concerns related to this scenario. Section 5.3.4 of RFC7540 also presents considerations about the state required to store priority information about streams in an "idle" state.  This state can be limited by adopting the guidance about concurrency limits described above.  Extensible priorities is subject to a similar consideration because PRIORITY_UPDATE frames may arrive before the request that they reference.  A server is required to store the information in order to apply the most up-to-date signal to the request.  However, HTTP/3 implementations might have practical </del>  barriers to determining reasonable stream concurrency limits depending on the information that is available to them from the QUIC transport layer.  16. This specification registers the following entry in the Permanent

Reviewer comments:
There is limited value in some of this information. I might avoid the detail and limit that text to something like "RFC 7540 priorities had several issues that this design avoids." The purpose of the section is to describe the security consequences of the mechanism that is defined in the document. There are some DoS concerns in previous sections that might be worth noting. You might also refer to RFC 8941 considerations, the size of state commitments required to buffer PRIORITY_UPDATE, and the starvation risks involved with strict application of priorities. Most of that already exists in other sections, so this section could just be a summary of the issues with pointers.

Revised text:
15.  <ins> RFC7540 stream prioritization relies on dependencies.  Considerations are presented to implementations, describing how limiting state or work commitments can avoid some types of problems.  In addition, CVE- 2019-9513 aka "Resource Loop", is an example of a DoS attack that abuses stream dependencies.  Extensible priorities does not use dependencies, which avoids these issues. frame describes considerations for server buffering of PRIORITY_UPDATE frames.  HTTP/3 implementations might have practical </ins> barriers to determining reasonable stream concurrency limits depending on the information that is available to them from the QUIC transport layer. <ins> server-scheduling presents examples where servers that prioritize responses in a certain way might be starved of the ability to transmit payload. The security considerations from STRUCTURED-FIELDS apply to processing of priority parameters defined in parameters. </ins> 16. This specification registers the following entry in the Permanent