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empty "valueString" are included with an empty string as the component value. <del> If a parameter name occurs multiple times in a request, all parameter values of that name MUST be included in separate signature input lines in the order in which the parameters occur in the target URI. </del>  For example for the following request: Indicating the "baz", "qux" and "param" named query parameters in would result in the following "@query-param" value:  If used in a related-response, the "@query-params" component identifier refers to the associated component value of the request that triggered the response message being signed.

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Includes several document cleanups for signatures, to publish as -09
Also: If there is no query string should the corresponding signing text be or ie. should the query value be empty or just consist of one Should we return with this request and return on this request This is what I opted for in my implementation. See shows that http4s makes the distinction between blank queries and empty queries is simpler I think this is a corner case that is worth explicating very clearly, perhaps even with a test.
There are quite a few occurrences of the header in the draft. From an implementation point of view, Go "swallows" the header and it is not part of the standard Request structure. There's a good reason for the Go library to do it, and in fact the draft recommends to use NAME instead. Can we remove from examples, e.g. Sec. 2.1, so we don't train people to do the wrong thing?
There are only a couple instances of the "host" header in the current draft left, and one of them (section 2.1) is specifically about how to format headers. It could be removed from the other example signature input strings without affecting anything negatively. Same with the "date" header, which could be confused with the "created" parameter, see
This sentence is correct: But it's true for most reasonable uses of , and people will still be using this parameter. So why not add:
No, we explicitly did not want to conflate this with the jwa registry. We also didn't want to have a second tier choice like having "alg=jose" and then having the actual algorithm elsewhere, since a big problem with late editions of the Cavage draft were exactly that process. (See the mess around "hs2019"). The editors discussed this at length and decided the best compromise was to define a way that jwa algorithms could be used in an interoperable fashion, but not to allow runtime signaling with them. Better to have the choice of jwa be signaled within the application level. Additionally, it's preferable to not use the runtime parameter to signal the algorithm any way, which is discussed at length in the security considerations.
All good, so why aren't you using normative language?
It's not normative because this section defines the algorithms, not the parameter. We didn't want to make it seem like the parameter was the "right" way to signal algorithms here, and most certainly is not required. You'll notice that none of the other sections have "MUST use the alg parameter value of 'foo'" either. Older Cavage drafts relied on the parameter, albeit in a much less secure fashion, and implementations were susceptible to algorithm substitution in the same way that naive JOSE implementations tend to be -- the "alg: none" attack all over again, more or less. The value of the parameter already MUST be something from the registry, and the registry does not (and will not) contain JWA values. So you already aren't allowed to do it, normatively, and the note is our attempt at explaining the why. Ultimately, an implementation is allowed to use whatever algorithm they want and makes sense. What this whole section does is define a set of common usable algorithms as well as provide a pattern of applying crypto primitives that applications can follow for their own algorithms. If someone defines a new algorithm that's generally useful, like we recently did with the ed25519 here, it can be registered for use with the parameter. But if a system can base the algorithm selection off of the key material or another part of the protocol (like with GNAP), that's highly preferable and less vulnerable to substitution at runtime. I'd be happy to know how we can make this clearer in the text, but I'm not comfortable with that kind of normative construct in that section.
NAME -- would you like to chime in? I recall from our discussions you having another, more specific reason for this decision, but I can't remember the details beyond us agreeing to do it the way we have it in the spec right now.
Neither Java nor JS subtleCrypto come out of the box with PKCS1 PEM support. (for java ). It is not immediately obvious to work out that the PEM formats of the private key in in PKCS1 format (the spec could point that out). When building an implementation it helps to have the test suite clearly map to the data in the spec (e.g. ) so as to make error reporting clearer. That is even though using the following openssl command to convert the keys work, it makes it difficult to see if an error was introduced at some point. To support PKCS1 the developer has to depend on further less well tested libraries and add additional code (as I ) leading possibly to new bugs. Furthermore, I will need to go through the same process for JavaScript now, doubling the work. Since PKCS8 is as expressive as PKCS1 ( and see ), it would make life easier for devs if the keys were all in PKCS8 format. Unless there really is something that PKCS1 offers that PKCS8 does not? I will try doing this using the Web Crypto API next. But there we find that supports the PKCS format.
While I am at it. I am having trouble with verifying the signature for 3 out of 4 examples from the spec that I tried out in . Currently the only one that works is the . I am able to produce and verify a signature for , and examples, but the signatures don't correspond to what is in the spec. That may very well be a mistake in my code, which I am working on as a to bobcats scala and scala-js crypto library. But I just wanted to check how confident you were in your examples. I am going to re-implement next in JS, so that will give me another reference point.
I am working my way through this with JS. I was able to parse the and keys after translating them to pkcs8 format with openssl, but am having trouble importing in the console of Chrome, Chrome-beta, Chrome-Dev and Safari. I guess that is in pkcs8 format already. I don't have trouble parsing that key with BouncyCastle... I guess this is a little config problem, but it's difficult to work out what that could be... Perhaps someone has an idea?
NAME Since this all has to do with the examples in the text and not the spec itself, I think we'd be fine with having the keys in multiple formats if it's useful for developers. However I'll note that in many code libraries you need to add the PEM headers of and for their compliant parsers to parse an EC key in PEM format, for example. I've been able to parse these keys in both Java and Python, and in fact all the examples are generated using a python script: URL Also, note that RSA-PSS and ECDSA are non-deterministic signatures that incorporate a source of randomness into the signature calculation. This might be why you're getting valid signatures that look different from the examples -- you shouldn't expect to replicate the exact signature values. RSA 1.5 is deterministic, and will always give this same signature for the same input (as will HMAC). This is just one of the reasons why it's not recommended in many environments. I think we can add some text in the examples sections that points this out, if that would be helpful.
NAME You can also test keys and examples at URL for another implementation. I am pretty confident in the values in the examples, but if there are in fact bugs in these implementations (which is always possible!) I'd love to know and fix them.
NAME you were right. I had been verifying the keys by string comparison, so I fixed that. I also worked out what the Java names for the various algorithms were and got nearly all the tests to run on JS and Java platforms. But there is one error left that is consistent across both, so I wrote it up here. URL
Nevertheless, I have not yet been able to import the private key PEM file in JS. So I looked for a way to convert it to JWK to see how that would fare. I looked online, but none of the services worked, I looked at npm but that did not work, finally I found in Java that did the conversion in 2 lines of code. With this I could get signing to work: So there is something problematic with that PEM, at least insofar as it makes it very difficult to get the example to work in JS which should be one of the main platforms. (I have not yet verified the signature in JS as I am having trouble getting verification in JS to work with a valid PSS key, even though I can create the public key with the PEM, and am able to do that Scala-JS)
I think I found the problem to be with the private key. After going through this process: transforming the spec key to JWK as described above transforming the JWK to PEM PKCS1 using node's I get the following transforming the above using Java's Bouncy Castle to PEM I get this: And with that all the JS crypto API tests pass. See the .
I think to understand why that final private key works with the Java Web Crypto API but not the original one from which it was derived (which worked with Bouncy-Castle) we'd need the input of someone like NAME . With that public key replaced (in commit ) and a few others commits to get Continuous Integration to work, we have all the tests pass for Scala compiled to JavaScript Those running in the browser are a bit interleaved due to asynchronous execution, something that needs still to be fixed.
Looks good!

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empty "valueString" are included with an empty string as the component value.  <ins> If a query parameter is named as a covered component but it does not occur in the query parameters, this MUST cause an error in the signature input string generation. </ins> For example for the following request: Indicating the "baz", "qux" and "param" named query parameters in would result in the following "@query-param" value: <ins> If a parameter name occurs multiple times in a request, all parameter values of that name MUST be included in separate signature input lines in the order in which the parameters occur in the target URI. Note that in some implementations, the order of parsed query parameters is not stable, and this situation could lead to unexpected results.  If multiple parameters are common within an application, it is RECOMMENDED to sign the entire query string using the "@query" component identifier defined in content-request-query. </ins> If used in a related-response, the "@query-params" component identifier refers to the associated component value of the request that triggered the response message being signed.