Original text:
The Path Maximum Transmission Unit (PMTU) is the maximum size of the entire IP packet including the IP header, UDP header, and UDP <del> payload.  The UDP payload includes the QUIC packet header, protected payload, and any authentication fields.  The PMTU can depend on path characteristics, and can therefore change over time.  The largest UDP payload an endpoint sends at any given time is referred to as the endpoint's maximum packet size. </del>  An endpoint SHOULD use DPLPMTUD (dplpmtud) or PMTUD (pmtud) to determine whether the path to a destination will support a desired <del> maximum packet size without fragmentation.  In the absence of these mechanisms, QUIC endpoints SHOULD NOT send IP packets larger than the smallest allowed maximum packet size. </del>  <del> Both DPLPMTUD and PMTUD send IP packets that are larger than the current maximum packet size, referred to as PMTU probes.  All QUIC </del>  packets that are not sent in a PMTU probe SHOULD be sized to fit <del> within the maximum packet size to avoid the packet being fragmented or dropped (RFC8085). </del>  If a QUIC endpoint determines that the PMTU between any pair of local and remote IP addresses has fallen below the smallest allowed maximum <del> packet size of 1200 bytes, it MUST immediately cease sending QUIC </del>  packets, except for those in PMTU probes or those containing CONNECTION_CLOSE frames, on the affected path.  An endpoint MAY terminate the connection if an alternative path cannot be found. Each pair of local and remote addresses could have a different PMTU. QUIC implementations that implement any kind of PMTU discovery <del> therefore SHOULD maintain a maximum packet size for each combination of local and remote IP addresses. </del>  A QUIC implementation MAY be more conservative in computing the <del> maximum packet size to allow for unknown tunnel overheads or IP </del>  header options/extensions. 14.2.1. Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery (PMTUD; RFC1191, RFC8201) relies on reception of ICMP messages (e.g., IPv6 Packet Too Big <del> messages) that indicate when a packet is dropped because it is larger than the local router MTU.  DPLPMTUD can also optionally use these messages.  This use of ICMP messages is potentially vulnerable to off-path attacks that successfully guess the addresses used on the </del>  path and reduce the PMTU to a bandwidth-inefficient value. An endpoint MUST ignore an ICMP message that claims the PMTU has <del> decreased below the minimum QUIC packet size. </del>  The requirements for generating ICMP (RFC1812, RFC4443) state that the quoted packet should contain as much of the original packet as

Reviewer comments:
Addresses . NAME points out in that we use in the transport draft and in the recovery draft. In reading carefully, I realized that in the transport draft was actually historical, and is the more appropriate term. This is an entirely editorial PR, and it's largely simple changes, despite the fact that it looks a bit big. It is a bit subtle though. Sorry about that.
This issue will list a number of minor editorial things that should be checked and likely addressed with some editorial fixes: Section 5.3: "These delays are computed using the ACK Delay field of the ACK frame as described in Section 19.3 of [QUIC-TRANSPORT]." This text implies that the computation of the delay is described in Section 19.3 of QUIC-TRANSPORT. However, I don't think it is described the calculation, only the definition of the field. Please reformulate to imply only field definition not calculation. Section 5.3: "On the first RTT sample for the network path, that sample is used as rttsample. This ensures that the first measurement erases the history of any persisted or default values." I think this intended to cover cases where path changes are detected. But it is not well expressed. Does this need a reformulation and a reference into QUIC-TRANSPORT where it states when such a reset should occur? Section 6.1: "Either its packet number is kPacketThreshold smaller than an acknowledged packet" Nitpicking, assuming no PN gaps in transmission. Does that need a note? Section 6.2.4: "An endpoint MAY send up to two full-sized datagrams containing ack-eliciting packets, to avoid an expensive consecutive PTO expiration due to a single lost datagram or transmit data from multiple packet number spaces." This last part, I assume intended to generate additional datagrams to prevent single loss to impact. However, due to coalescing this is unclear in this context. Section 7: "Endpoints can unilaterally choose a different algorithm to use, such as Cubic ([RFC8312])." I think this sentence should be explicit that in needs to be sender-based algorithms. I think we need to have the requirement on performing congestion control on the sender unless there has been explicit agreement with the receiver that they will do it. Section 7.2: "Endpoints SHOULD use an initial congestion window of 10 times the maximum datagram size (maxdatagramsize), limited to the larger of 14720 bytes or twice the maximum datagram size." "maximum datagram size" is not used in Transport there need to be alignment here of what name to use. Transport has Maximum Packet Size, which appears to match the definition in the appendix of maxdatagram_size.
Thanks for your careful review, NAME -- these are good finds! I've addressed your comments below and in . I'll address point 6 in a separate PR. Section 19.3 has the following text, which does tell how to compute acknowledgement delay from the ACK Delay field: I've replaced "computed" with "decoded" in the recovery document to make it clearer. Coalescing applies to packets, not to datagrams. We've explicitly stated that a sender could send 2 datagrams to avoid any effects of coalescing. I think the text is pretty clear on this: "An endpoint MAY send up to two full-sized datagrams containing ack-eliciting packets". I've added "sender-side" to make the controller more explicit. To your point about making this a sender requirement, that is covered in the transport doc (end of ):
Based on and , labeling this as "editorial"
I think these issues are resolved once the two PRs are completely ready.
Except for the one erronous exchange of packet this looks good.

Revised text:
The Path Maximum Transmission Unit (PMTU) is the maximum size of the entire IP packet including the IP header, UDP header, and UDP  <ins> payload.  The UDP payload includes one or more QUIC packet headers and protected payloads.  The PMTU can depend on path characteristics, and can therefore change over time.  The largest UDP payload an endpoint sends at any given time is referred to as the endpoint's maximum datagram size. </ins> An endpoint SHOULD use DPLPMTUD (dplpmtud) or PMTUD (pmtud) to determine whether the path to a destination will support a desired  <ins> maximum datagram size without fragmentation.  In the absence of these mechanisms, QUIC endpoints SHOULD NOT send datagrams larger than the smallest allowed maximum datagram size. </ins>  <ins> Both DPLPMTUD and PMTUD send datagrams that are larger than the current maximum datagram size, referred to as PMTU probes.  All QUIC </ins> packets that are not sent in a PMTU probe SHOULD be sized to fit  <ins> within the maximum datagram size to avoid the datagram being fragmented or dropped (RFC8085). </ins> If a QUIC endpoint determines that the PMTU between any pair of local and remote IP addresses has fallen below the smallest allowed maximum  <ins> datagram size of 1200 bytes, it MUST immediately cease sending QUIC </ins> packets, except for those in PMTU probes or those containing CONNECTION_CLOSE frames, on the affected path.  An endpoint MAY terminate the connection if an alternative path cannot be found. Each pair of local and remote addresses could have a different PMTU. QUIC implementations that implement any kind of PMTU discovery  <ins> therefore SHOULD maintain a maximum datagram size for each combination of local and remote IP addresses. </ins> A QUIC implementation MAY be more conservative in computing the  <ins> maximum datagram size to allow for unknown tunnel overheads or IP </ins> header options/extensions. 14.2.1. Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery (PMTUD; RFC1191, RFC8201) relies on reception of ICMP messages (e.g., IPv6 Packet Too Big  <ins> messages) that indicate when an IP packet is dropped because it is larger than the local router MTU.  DPLPMTUD can also optionally use these messages.  This use of ICMP messages is potentially vulnerable to off-path attacks that successfully guess the addresses used on the </ins> path and reduce the PMTU to a bandwidth-inefficient value. An endpoint MUST ignore an ICMP message that claims the PMTU has  <ins> decreased below QUIC's smallest allowed maximum datagram size. </ins> The requirements for generating ICMP (RFC1812, RFC4443) state that the quoted packet should contain as much of the original packet as