Original text:
Abstract <del> This document defines a YANG RPC and a minimal datastore tree required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity measurements from a composite device with one or more roots of trust for reporting.  Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPC originating from one or more roots of trust of measurement.  The module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 and corresponding Trusted Software Stack included in the device components of the composite device the YANG server is running on. </del>  1. This document is based on the terminology defined in the I-D.ietf- <del> rats-architecture and uses the interaction model and information elements defined in the I-D.birkholz-rats-reference-interaction-model document.  The currently supported hardware security modules (HWM) - sometimes also referred to as an embedded secure element (eSE) - is the Trusted Platform Module (TPM) version 1.2 and 2.0 specified by the Trusted Computing Group (TCG).  One ore more TPMs embedded in the components of a composite device - sometimes also referred to as an aggregate device - are required in order to use the YANG module defined in this document.  A TPM is used as a root of trust for reporting (RTR) in order to retrieve attestation evidence from a composite device (quote primitive operation).  Additionally, it is used as a root of trust for storage (RTS) in order to retain shielded secrets and store system measurements using a folding hash function (extend primitive operation). </del>  1.1.

Reviewer comments:
Provides more context around the various elements of the model
Thanks a lot for your stab at Security Considerations! Also the I-D was in dire need for some expositional english text. Reads straight forward and comprehensive.

Revised text:
Abstract  <ins> This document defines a YANG RPC and a minimal datastore required to retrieve attestation evidence about integrity measurements from a device following the operational context defined in I-D.ietf-rats- tpm-based-network-device-attest.  Complementary measurement logs are also provided by the YANG RPC originating from one or more roots of trust of measurement.  The module defined requires at least one TPM 1.2 or TPM 2.0 and corresponding Trusted Software Stack included in the device components of the composite device the YANG server is running on. </ins> 1. This document is based on the terminology defined in the I-D.ietf-  <ins> rats-architecture and uses the operational context defined in I- D.ietf-rats-tpm-based-network-device-attest as well as the interaction model and information elements defined in I-D.birkholz- rats-reference-interaction-model.  The currently supported hardware security modules (HWM) are the Trusted Platform Module (TPM) TPM1.2 and TPM2.0 specified by the Trusted Computing Group (TCG).  One ore more TPMs embedded in the components of a composite device - sometimes also referred to as an aggregate device - are required in order to use the YANG module defined in this document.  A TPM is used as a root of trust for reporting (RTR) in order to retrieve attestation evidence from a composite device (quote primitive operation).  Additionally, it is used as a root of trust for storage (RTS) in order to retain shielded secrets and store system measurements using a folding hash function (extend primitive operation). </ins> 1.1.