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compound annual growth rate continuing at 34% (from Appendix D of CVNI).  In many contexts, video traffic can be handled transparently as generic application-level traffic.  However, as the volume of video traffic continues to grow, it's becoming increasingly important to

Reviewer comments:
Ali, this PR looks nice. Two meta-issues (which we can talk about whenever). I changed my references in the draft to a more complete format (using ins: can result in odd formatting in the References section). We don't have to do that for all the references in -04, but that would be a good thing to do in an editorial pass. I see that you're making some terminology changes (from "delivery" to "streaming", stuff like that). I agree with the changes you made in this PR, but we may want to make sure that they are made globally, for consistency.
I was not sure about the reference format, normally I just use the casual format: Authors, "Title," Journal/Conference, Date. I saw the missing author names and realized "ins" would do the trick. By no means, I am tied to that format - don't know even know what "ins" stands for here :)
From URL : "as in the author list, ins is an abbreviation for "initials/surname";" I tend to think an editorial pass on references would be better as a separate commit, where they need cleaning. Anything that somehow made it in and breaks the "make" needs fixing, but others maybe later?
I suggest a definition along these lines: Streaming is transmission of a continuous content from a server to a client and its simultaneous consumption by the client. ("simultaneous" is the key here) This has two implications: 1) Server transmission rate (loosely or tightly) matches to client consumption rate. That is, no buffer overrun or underrun is desirable/acceptable. 2) Client consumption rate is also limited by real-time constraints as opposed to just bandwidth availability. That is, client cannot fetch the content not available yet.
+1, this sgtm. But this probably implies a refactor of the intro section and the abstract, to better focus on the relevant use case.
I can take a crack at this.
Ali has text for this, will create a PR for the issue.

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compound annual growth rate continuing at 34% (from Appendix D of CVNI). <ins> A substantial part of this growth is due to increased use of streaming video, although the amount of video traffic in real-time communications (for example, online videoconferencing) has also grown significantly.  While both streaming video and videoconferencing have real-time delivery and latency requirements, these requirements vary from one application to another.  For example, videoconferencing demands an end-to-end (one-way) latency of a few hundreds of milliseconds whereas live streaming can tolerate latencies of several seconds. This document specifically focuses on the streaming applications and defines streaming as follows: Streaming is transmission of a continuous media from a server to a client and its simultaneous consumption by the client.  Here, continous media refers to media and associated streams such as video, audio, metadata, etc.  In this definition, the critical term is "simultaneous", as it is not considered streaming if one downloads a video file and plays it after the download is completed, which would be called download-and-play. This has two implications.  First, server's transmission rate must (loosely or tightly) match to client's consumption rate for an uninterrupted playback.  That is, the client must not run out of data (buffer underrun) or take more than it can keep (buffer overrun) as any excess media is simply discarded.  Second, client's consumption rate is limited by not only bandwidth availability but also the real- time constraints.  That is, the client cannot fetch media that is not available yet. </ins> In many contexts, video traffic can be handled transparently as generic application-level traffic.  However, as the volume of video traffic continues to grow, it's becoming increasingly important to