Change:
In §6.3 we have: This doesn't work, because takes only a single . The action on a should rather be on a or .

Discussion:
Simultaneous peer-to-peer Connection establishment is supported by the Rendezvous() Action: <del> The Preconnection Object must be specified with both a Local Endpoint and a Remote Endpoint, and also the transport properties and security parameters needed for Protocol Stack selection. </del> <ins> A Preconnection Object used in a Rendezvous() MUST have both the Local Endpoint candidates and the Remote Endpoint candidates specified, along with the transport properties and security parameters needed for Protocol Stack selection, before the Rendezvous() Action is initiated. </ins> <del> The Rendezvous() Action causes the Preconnection to listen on the Local Endpoint for an incoming Connection from the Remote Endpoint, while also simultaneously trying to establish a Connection from the Local Endpoint to the Remote Endpoint. </del> <ins> The Rendezvous() Action listens on the Local Endpoint candidates for an incoming Connection from the Remote Endpoint candidates, while also simultaneously trying to establish a Connection from the Local Endpoint candidates to the Remote Endpoint candidates. </ins> If there are multiple Local Endpoints or Remote Endpoints configured, <del> then initiating a rendezvous action will systematically probe the reachability of those endpoints following an approach such as that used in Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) RFC5245. </del> <ins> then initiating a Rendezvous() action will systematically probe the reachability of those endpoint candidates following an approach such as that used in Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) RFC5245. </ins> If the endpoints are suspected to be behind a NAT, Rendezvous() can <del> be initiated using Local and Remote Endpoints that support a method of discovering NAT bindings such as Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN) RFC8489 or Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN) RFC5766.  In this case, the Local Endpoint will resolve to a mixture of local and server reflexive addresses.  The Resolve() action on the </del> <ins> be initiated using Local Endpoints that support a method of discovering NAT bindings such as Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN) RFC8489 or Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN) RFC5766. In this case, the Local Endpoint will resolve to a mixture of local and server reflexive addresses.  The Resolve() action on the </ins> Preconnection can be used to discover these bindings: <del> The Resolve() call returns a list of Preconnection Objects, that represent the concrete addresses, local and server reflexive, on which a Rendezvous() for the Preconnection will listen for incoming Connections.  These resolved Preconnections will share all other Properties with the Preconnection from which they are derived, though some Properties may be made more-specific by the resolution process. </del> <ins> The Resolve() call returns lists of Local Endpoints and Remote Endpoints, that represent the concrete addresses, local and server reflexive, on which a Rendezvous() for the Preconnection will listen for incoming Connections, and to which it will attempt to establish connections. </ins> An application that uses Rendezvous() to establish a peer-to-peer connection in the presence of NATs will configure the Preconnection <del> object with a Local Endpoint that supports NAT binding discovery.  It will then Resolve() on that endpoint, and pass the resulting list of candidate local addresses to the peer via a signalling protocol, for example as part of an ICE RFC5245 exchange within SIP RFC3261 or WebRTC RFC7478.  The peer will, via the same signalling channel, return the remote endpoint candidates.  These remote endpoint candidates are then configured on the Preconnection, allowing the Rendezvous() Action to be initiated. The Rendezvous() Action returns a Connection object.  Once Rendezvous() has been called, any changes to the Preconnection MUST NOT have any effect on the Connection.  However, the Preconnection can be reused, e.g., for Rendezvous of another Connection. </del> <ins> object with at least one a Local Endpoint that supports NAT binding discovery.  It will then Resolve() the Preconnection, and pass the resulting list of Local Endpoint candidates to the peer via a signalling protocol, for example as part of an ICE RFC5245 exchange within SIP RFC3261 or WebRTC RFC7478.  The peer will then, via the same signalling channel, return the Remote Endpoint candidates.  The set of Remote Endpoint candidates are then configured onto the Preconnection: The Rendezvous() Action can be initiated once both the Local Endpoint candidates and the Remote Endpoint candidates retrieved from the peer via the signalling channel have been added to the Preconnection. If successful, the Rendezvous() Action returns a Connection object via a RendezvousDone<> Event: </ins> The RendezvousDone<> Event occurs when a Connection is established with the Remote Endpoint.  For Connection-oriented transports, this

Connectionless transports, it occurs when the first Message is received from the Remote Endpoint.  The resulting Connection is contained within the RendezvousDone<> Event, and is ready to use as <del> soon as it is passed to the application via the Event. </del> <ins> soon as it is passed to the application via the Event.  Changes made to a Preconnection after Rendezvous() has been called do not have any effect on existing Connections. </ins> An EstablishmentError occurs either when the Properties and Security Parameters of the Preconnection cannot be fulfilled for rendezvous or cannot be reconciled with the Local and/or Remote Endpoints, when the Local Endpoint or Remote Endpoint cannot be resolved, when no transport-layer connection can be established to the Remote Endpoint, <del> or when the application is prohibited from rendezvous by policy. When using some NAT traversal protocols, e.g., Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) RFC5245, it is expected that the Local Endpoint will be configured with some method of discovering NAT bindings, e.g., a Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN) server. In this case, the Local Endpoint may resolve to a mixture of local and server reflexive addresses.  The Resolve() action on the Preconnection can be used to discover these bindings: The Resolve() call returns a list of Preconnection Objects, that represent the concrete addresses, local and server reflexive, on which a Rendezvous() for the Preconnection will listen for incoming Connections.  These resolved Preconnections will share all other Properties with the Preconnection from which they are derived, though some Properties may be made more-specific by the resolution process. This list can be passed to a peer via a signalling protocol, such as SIP RFC3261 or WebRTC RFC7478, to configure the remote endpoint. </del> <ins> or when the application is prohibited from rendezvous by policy: </ins> 6.4.