translate English to French: It will be particularly interesting to see if they can progress to more specific wording on, for example, the legal definition of mercenary, the rules that should govern private companies that offer security services on the international market or amendments to the provisions of the International Convention against the Recruitment, Use, Financing and Training of Mercenaries.
Il faudrait, en particulier, mettre au point des formulations plus concrètes, par exemple en ce qui concerne la notion juridique de mercenaire, les critères normatifs internationaux régissant les sociétés de sécurité privées, ou certaines dispositions de la Convention internationale prohibant les activités mercenaires qu'il convient d'améliorer.