translate English to French: Further, it was thought that the closing sentence of draft article 1 (o) could not be shortened without losing its necessary content.  Draft article 6 (1)(a) was deleted in favour of the following phrase, “(a) the method to effect the issuance and the transfer of that record to an intended holder”, and the word “consignee” in draft article 6 (1)(d) was deleted in favour of “holder”.
À l'article 6, on a remplacé l'alinéa a) du paragraphe 1 par le texte “a) la méthode pour effectuer l'émission et le transfert de cet enregistrement au porteur visé”, et l'on a remplacé, à l'alinéa d), le mot “destinataire” par le mot “porteur”.