diff --git "a/scripts/1408.txt" "b/scripts/1408.txt" new file mode 100644--- /dev/null +++ "b/scripts/1408.txt" @@ -0,0 +1,6722 @@ + 1. + + + + FADE IN : + + +1 EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY 1 + + A dull highway. A crappy sedan roars by. + + +2 INT. CRAPPY CAR - DAY 2 + + At the wheel, driving this piece of shit, is MIKE ENSLIN, + 35, a grizzled, weary soul. He stares glassily at the road, + a cigarette behind his ear, a styrofoam cup of Exxon coffee + at his mouth. + + A sign drifts by: "Woodfin, Rte 251 N - Asheville, + Interstate 240 E, Hwy 40, Next Right, Thru Traffic Merge” + + Heh? Mike frowns. + + +3 EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - DUSK 3 + + RAIN pours down on an unpaved country intersection. + + Mike stands outside his car, soaked, checking a wet map. + He’s confused and annoyed. There are no road markings at + all. He checks his watch. + + +4 EXT. COUNTRY INN - NIGHT 4 + + A quaint rural inn, dark of night. The ambiance is + picturesque, but off-putting. Porch lanterns glow. Shadows + are deep. An ancient elm tree frames the banging weathered- + sign: "The Camden Inn" + + Then, finally — headlights. Mike’s car pulls up in the mud. + + +5 INT. INN - NIGHT 5 + + Mike trudges into the homey, worn lobby. + + MIKE + Hi. Mike Enslin, checking in — + + The gregarious INNKEEPERS jump up, excited. They're country + folk, beaming. + + MR. INNKEEPER + 2. + + + Oh, Mr. Enslin! We were so worried + you weren’t gonna show! + + MRS. INNKEEPER + It's such an honor to have you + here. + + MIKE + (disinterested) + Yeah. Great. Uh, if I could just + get my key — + +They ignore his exhaustion. + + MR. INNKEEPER + You probably want to hear all about + our haunted history! Well, that + rear staircase is where the maid + reputedly hung herself in 1870. + + MRS. INNKEEPER + There’s a picture — + + MIKE + Can we do this in the morning? + + MRS. INNKEEPER + (rummaging through + drawers) + Wait! It's printed in our brochure! + +INSERT - BROCHURE + +She thrusts out a brochure that says "HAUNTED!" There’s a +PHOTO of the lobby, and a faint white shape in a window. + + MRS. INNKEEPER + Do you SEE her? + + MIKE + Uh — + + MRS. INNKEEPER + A guest took that photo in 1986. + You can sort of see Sylvia's + "ethereal apparition" reflected in + the window. + +Mike stares, unimpressed. + + MR. INNKEEPER + At least, Sylvia is what we call + her. + 3. + + + MIKE + Terrifying. + (pause) + I’m ready to hit the sack. in your + letter, you mentioned the scariest + rooms were in the old attic? + + MRS. INNKEEPER + That's right. The third floor is + the former servant's quarters. + People say all Sylvia's children + died up there of tuberculosis. + (spooky) + Right up there. Right above where + you and I are standing, right + now... + + MR. INNKEEPER + Guests have reported strange + sounds. At the stroke of midnight, + there’s been weird noises. Creaks. + Moans. + (mysterious) + Our best advice... is to lock your + door from the inside. + + CUT TO: + + +6 INT. INN - MIKE'S ROOM - LATE NIGHT 6 + + Mike lies on the antique bed, on a quilt, drinking mini-bar + BOOZE. He has an army of tiny Scotches, Gins, Vodkas. He's + bored out of his mind. + + DISSOLVE TO: + + LATER + + The boozes are empty. Somewhere, a grandfather clock CHIMES + midnight. DONG, DONG, DONG! Mike groggily glances at a + bedside clock, Waiting. Listening. Alert to anything... + + Suddenly a loud CRASH! Mike jerks, startled. + + He jumps up, concerned... then realizes it's only THUNDER. + Oh. + + DISSOLVE TO: + + LATER + + Mike is snoring, drooling, passed out. + 4. + + + CUT TO: + + +7 INT. CRAPPY CAR - DRIVING - DAY 7 + + Mike is back in the car, driving another endless + interstate. + + He speaks flatly into a pocket MINI-RECORDER. + + MIKE + People spoke of the spectral + presence of Sylvia... though I + personally never encountered her. + (beat) + But in any case, the Eggs Benedict + were delicious, and Mrs. Clark says + if you have a party of four, she'll + make her famous flourless chocolate + cake. + (beat) + On a Shiver Scale of 1 to 10, I + award the Camden Inn seven skulls. + + Mike clicks the recorder OFF. He puts it down — then has a + thought and turns it back ON, + + MIKE + Fuck ’em. Six skulls. + + CUT TO: + + +8 EXT. BARNES & NOBLE - NIGHT 8 + + A mall bookstore. The marquee shouts "GHOST SURVIVAL GUIDE + Author M. Enslin Tonight! 7 P.M." + + +9 INT. BARNES & NOBLE - NIGHT 9 + + Mike enters, disheveled. The store is sad and generic —- an + air of listlessness hanging over the shelves. Mike tiredly + approaches the busy CASHIER. + + MIKE + Excuse me. I’m Mike Enslin. + + CASHIER + Sorry? + + MIKE + 5. + + + I’m, uh... the "star” of your + booksigning tonight. + + CASHIER + (a dawning awareness) + Oh, right. Right! Okay then! + + The Cashier finishes his order, then flicks on a small P.A. + + SYSTEM. He grabs a MICROPHONE and reads off a xeroxed + FLYER: + + ASSISTANT MANAGER + Attention, book lovers! In the + Author’s Corner tonight, we have + noted occult writer Mike Enslin! + He’s the author of the bestselling + Ghost Survival Guides, with such + titles as "Ten Haunted Hotels," + "Ten Haunted Graveyards,” and "Ten + Haunted Lighthouses"! + + Around the store, people look up. Mike leans into the guy. + + MIKE + You got a bathroom I can clean up + in, first? + + CUT TO: + + +10 INT. BARNES & NOBLE - LATER 10 + + The event. It’s depressing — the sad reality of + booksignings. The back of the store has 30 or 40 folding + chairs, but there’s only FIVE SPECTATORS. Mike sits + alongside a pile of his paperbacks? discoursing. + + MIKE + Sure f these pieces have colorful + histories. That’s the hook: The + wedding night murder. The caretaker + who leaped to his death. The + runaway horse that trampled the old + lady. The war widow who went crazy + and threw the baby down the well... + + The people go wide-eyed. Mike lets this hang... then + deflates it. + + MIKE + 6. + + + But there’s never any + documentation! If you do one iota + of research, the tragic event never + happened1 It's just a marketing + hook invented by desperate hotels + when the interstate gets built too + far away. + +The crowd doesn’t get it. One EMPHATIC MAN raises his hand. + + EMPHATIC MAN + Have you ever seen a poltergeist? + + MIKE + (he reacts) + See? That's exactly what I’m + talking about. You didn’t hear one + word I just said. I can type myself + sick debunking these places, + shooting arrows in the legends f + and it only makes people want to + stay there more. + + LADY + (she raises her hand) + Well, my family's planning a trip + this summer. Would you say there's + a higher concentration of ghosts in + New England or in the South? + +Mike wipes his face. + + MIKE + I would say nowhere but no one’s + listening. You'll probably want to + pick-up my "Ten Haunted Antebellum + Mansions." + + CUT TO: + +LATER + +Mike is signing paperbackst rote, the same autograph over +and over: "Stay Scared! Mike Enslin” "Stay Scared! Mike +Enslin" + + MIKE + Of course, I try to be scientific. + I travel with an EMF meter, an + infrared camera... a full-range + spectrometer. But I’ve never had to + use them, because there's nothing + to record! + 7. + + + Then — a HARDBACK enters frame. He looks up, surprised. + + A NERVOUS WOMAN holds the book. It’s a dusty, faded copy of + Mike's early novel, "The Road Back Nowhere.” The artwork is + heartfelt: A watercolor of a boy holding a surfboard. + + MIKE + Jesus. What rock did you find that + under? + + NERVOUS WOMAN + Ebay. + + MIKE + Wow. Haven’t seen one of these in + years. + (awkward) + How much did it... go for? + + The woman bites her lip, preferring not to say. + + NERVOUS WOMAN + Well, there weren't many bidders. + (she smiles) + But it's a lovely book. Are you + going to write another one like + this? + + He glances at the back cover: A decade-old PHOTO of himself + ■— young and optimistic. + + Mike’s face falls. + + MIKE + Nope. That was a different guy. + + CUT TO: + + +11 EXT. FLORIDA BEACH - DAWN 11 + + The sun is peeking over the horizon. The pink sky is + lovely, breaking over a rocky inlet. + + Mike drives into a beach parking lot. He glances over — + spotting a cluster of parked cars. Across the sand, a GROUP + of dedicated SURFERS in wetsuits ride the early morning + waves. + + Mike stares — then keeps driving. A surfboard sticks out of + his car. He goes to the far end of the parking lot, off by + himself, then pulls over. + 8. + + +12 EXT. OCEAN - LATER 12 + + Mike rides a wave. It's exquisite. For him, this experience + isn't about adrenaline, but tranquility. The weariness that + usually hangs over him is gone. He’s alone and perfectly + serene. Happy. + + Mike enjoys the spray in his face. Until — he hears a + strange BUZZING. He looks around, then UP. + + ABOVE + + A small AIRPLANE flies over, towing a BANNER. + + Mike squints, trying to read it. + + The sky is too bright. The banner is silhouetted... + + Mike focuses harder... distracted... when — + + BAM! + + A monstrous WAVE suddenly POUNDS him! + + Crash! Mike gets slammed underwater. + + UNDERNEATH + + Mike gets pulled down. + + He screams out, but only bubbles emerge. + + The water BATTERS him. Everything swirls. He spins, losing + track of which way is up. + + Mike struggles, desperate.,, trying to reach for sky... + getting sucked deeper toward the darkness... + + When -- + + ANGLE -HIS SURFBOARD + + suddenly appears from above. Like a godsend. + + Startled, Mike grabs for it — when — it unexpectedly + pitches and HAMMERS him in the head. + + CUT TO: + + +13 EXT. BEACH - LATER 13 + 9. + + + ECU - MIKE’S FACE + + Mike lies mutely on his back, on the sand. + Hyperventilating. + + Winded. Eyes glassy. + + But alive. + + CUT TO: + + +14 EXT. MAILBOXES, ETC. - DAY 14 + + An overlit, bleached-white fluorescent hellhole. An + anonymous storefront of mailboxes, packing supplies, and + key-cutting. + + Mike enters and goes over to his mailbox. He unlocks it, + removing a STARTLING AMOUNT of MAIL. + + The friendly MAILBOX GUY nods. + + MAILBOX,GUY + You've been gone awhile. + + MIKE + (disinterested) + Yeah. + + +15 INT. PALM COFFEE SHOP - DAY 15 + + Mike sits in a corner booth, alone. His breakfast sits + abandoned, runny egg yolks congealed. He sips his eighth + cup of coffee. + + The table is spread with months of opened mail. Dozens of + BROCHURES for HOTELS, INNS, B & Brs. Mike flips through + them. Some have macabre marketing - "Spirits! Strange?” A + few have even Photoshopped transparent phantoms into their + antique­laden lobbies. Mike glances at a Post-it: "Dear Mr. + Enslin, please consider our Motel for your next Ghost + Guide." + + He stares — then tosses it. He rummages through more mail: + A bill from a nursing home. Skeptical Enquirer magazine. + The Weekly World News. He slashes an envelope with his + fancy LETTER OPENER. Inside is a childish greeting card -- + a cartoon tiger says "You’re Terrrrrrr-rfic! Happy + Birthday!” + 10. + + +Mike frowns, then throws it in the trash pile. He reaches +for a POSTCARD. + +INSERT - POSTCARD + +The back has but three scribbled words: "DON’T ENTER 1408" + +ON MIKE + +Hm. He gazes, then flips over the card. It’s a generic +giveaway HOTEL POSTCARD'. A montage of photos: Elegant +1920s exterior. Classy rooms. An overstuffed, lounge filled +with smiling, attractive rich people. A scrolling font +says: "When in New York City, visit the Dolphin Hotel!" + +Mike fixates on the word "New York." His face darkens, and +he tosses the card in the junk pile. + +He starts to move on — when something catches his eye. He +peers back at the card... + +TIGHT - POSTCARD + +Again, "DON'T ENTER 1408." We PUSH IN on the numbers, until +they fill the screen. 1408... 1408... + +Mike thinks. He clicks a pen, then scribbles the digits as +a math column: 2 + 4 + 0 + 8 ......... 13. + +A smile flickers across his face. + + MIKE + Cute. + +Mike is amused. He considers the card, then suddenly OPENS +HIS LAPTOP COMPUTER. + +ANGLE - COMPUTER + +Mike spins the mouse, clicking "Internet." He waits +patiently, while the green WI-FI icon scrolls. Searching... +searching... until — "NO SIGNAL AVAILABLE" + +Mike groans. + + MIKE + Goddamn corner booth. + +WIDE + 11. + + + Irked, Mike grabs the computer. He JUMPS from his booth and + starts meandering around the coffee shop, eyeballing the + computer screen like a hungry hawk. + + A few steps — Ah! A glimmer of green, then red. + + He marches toward the door — eyes glued to the screen. The + DINERS shoot him looks, but he is indifferent to other + people. + + He lifts the laptop over his head, trying different + positions. + + +16 EXT. COFFEE SHOP - SAME TIME 16 + + Mike exits the building. Suddenly, he finds -a signal. + + Ah-HA! The Internet opens, The WEB PAGE speaks: + + INTERNET LADY VOICE + Good morning, Mike, + + MIKE + (he smiles) + Good morning, Fake Voice Lady! + + He quickly sits on a cinderblock wall and starts EXPERTLY + TYPING. + + INSERT - COMPUTER + + Mike goes to "GOOGLE." He types in "DOLPHIN HOTEL NEW YORK" + + Beat. A page of text appears. Mike clicks on a link to the + Dolphin. A millisecond pause — then the DOLPHIN HOTEL’S + stylish HOMEPAGE APPEARS. It is exactly what one would + expect: Chandeliers. Clinking champagne flutes. Links to + "SPA" "DINING" "BANQUET FACILITIES" "RESERVATIONS"... + + Mike knows this is a dead end. He clicks back to "GOOGLE," + then tries "DOLPHIN HOTEL GHOSTS" + + The computer responds, "NO RESULTS" + + Mike backspaces and tries again: "DOLPHIN HOTEL + SUPERNATURAL" + + The computer responds, "NO RESULTS" + + Mike backspaces and tries yet again: "DOLPHIN HOTEL + HAUNTING" + 12. + + + The computer responds, "NO RESULTS" + + Mike stares. Unbowed, his face darkens. He tries a + different approach: "DOLPHIN HOTEL DEATH" + + THE COMPUTER + + pauses — then the SCREEN FILLS WITH ENTRIES. + + MIKE + + suddenly gasps, horrified. + + MIKE + Jesus Christ... + + CUT TO: + + +17 INI. RESEARCH LIBRARY - DAY 17 + + Mike sits in a musty library basement scrolling through + MICROFICHE rolls. On the amber screen is an ancient New + York Herald-Tribune: The headline screams "FACTORY OWNER + LEAPS FROM HOTEL.” There is a portrait of a stuffy-looking + rich man, then underneath a gory WEEGEE-LIKE PHOTO of a + bloody mess on a New York, sidewalk, the cops dourly + cleaning up. + + For the first time, Mike seems affected. Truly bothered. + + Shaken, he scribbles notes on a LEGAL PAD. Under the word + "DOLPHIN," we see the pad is filled with items... + + A spooky pause... when suddenly — RING!! It’s his + CELLPHONE. + + Mike jumps, startled. Embarrassed by the noise, he quickly + answers it. + + MIKE + Hello? + + But, nothing. Mike frowns. + + MIKE + Hello! This is Mike Enslin. Is + anybody there? + + No response. Just — a faint crackling STATIC. + + Mike struggles to hear — when CLICK. The line goes dead. + 13. + + + Weird. Mike looks back at his list of deaths... + + CUT TO: + + +18 INT. MIKE'S OFFICE - NIGHT 18 + + CU on a jumble of old NEWSPAPER ARTICLES. A blizzard of + words and headlines: "SUICIDE”... "DROWNING"... + "ELECTROCUTION"... "HEART ATTACK." We slowly PULL OUT, + revealing dozens of Dolphin articles, tacked on a + corkboard. A blur of photos, nasty death images and old- + fashioned formal portraits. The victims look like solid + early 20th-century citizens: A walrus-moustached man in a + bowler. A prim woman in round spectacles. + + We CONTINUE PULLING OUT, finding Mike on a ratty couch. + + Surrounded by these horrors. He holds the Dolphin POSTCARD, + staring. Agitated. Suddenly he downs a shot of bourbon, + then dials the phone number. He waits. RING. RING — + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + Good evening, Dolphin Hotel. How + may I direct your call? + + MIKE + Hi, I’m calling about Room 1408. + + A strange pause. + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + I don’t believe we have such a + room. + + MIKE + (long beat) + Don't you...? + + Another pause. + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + Er, one moment, please. + + Mike gets out on HOLD. Sprightly MUSIC kicks in, and a + RECORDED ANNOUNCEMENT. + + SMOOTH RECORDING + "When staying at the Dolphin, be + certain to enjoy New York’s finest + dining, at the fabled Blue Marlin + Restaurant on our Mezzanine lev—" + 14. + + + HOTEL VOICE + (cutting in) + May I help you? + + MIKE + Yes, I'd like to stay in Room 1408. + + HOTEL VOICE + That room is unavailable. + + Mike raises an eyebrow. + + MIKE + I didn't tell you which date. + + No response. + + MIKE + How 'bout Saturday? + + HOTEL VOICE + It’s unavailable. + + MIKE + Tuesday? + + HOTEL VOICE + Unavailable. + + MIKE + (ticked off) + Next month? + + HOTEL VOICE + Unavailable. + + MIKE + Next summer! + + HOTEL VOICE + (beat) + (Thank you for calling.) + + CLICK. The man HANGS UP. + + Mike is stupefied. + + CUT TO: + + +19 INT. MANHATTAN LITERARY AGENCY - DAY 19 + 15. + + + A busy New York agency with million-dollar views. SAM + FARRELL, a gregarious old-school gentleman agent, yells + out. + + SAM + Hey! Where's good Chinese, near + 48th? I gotta have lunch with that + idiot from Random House. + + SECRETARY + (on the phone, gesturing) + It's Mike Enslin, calling from + Florida again. + + Sam winces. He looks around, then hails a bookish LAWYER. + + SAM + Clay! You got a sec' for Mike + Enslin? + + LAWYER + Uh — sure — + + SAM + Great. + + Sam PULLS him into his leather-bound office. + + +20 INT. SAM'S OFFICE 20 + + Sam slams the door and lowers his voice. + + SAM + Now look, this guy tends to get a + little morose, so try to keep the + energy up. Otherwise, he stews in + his own funk. + + Sam PUNCHES his speakerphone, + + SAM + Mike!!! + + MIKE (V.O.) + Sam — + + SAM + Read the first five chapters last + night. Spooky shit. Couldn’t sleep + a wink. It's gonna make a bundle — + + MIKE (V.O.) + 16. + + + So did you -— + + SAM + You better believe I did! And I got + our top lawyer here right now! + (he winks) + Mike, Clay. Clay, Mike. Mike, talk + fast. This guy's $400 an hour. + + MIKE (V.O.) + So, about the Dolphin — + + SAM + Yes, the Dolphin! That stick-up- + its-ass relic on 61st. Too posh for + a free plug! Well, you're gonna + LOVE what Clay cooked up: He dug + around and found you a Federal + Civil Rights law! Ain’t that a + hoot? + (he chuckles) + Like somebody would discriminate + against you: A well-to-do white + man! + (amused) + But the law’s the law: If the + room's not occupied, they have to + give it to you. + + MIKE (V.O.) + Good. + + CLAY + So we'll book it, and if they + refuse, we'll rattle our saber and + file suit. + +A pause. Sam turns quiet, leaning into the speakerphone. + + SAM + But Mike... on a more personal + note: Are you really sure you want + to come here? + + MIKE (V.CA) + (tentative) + S-sure. It'll make a solid closing + chapter for the — + + SAM + Yeah yeah. I know the routine. + (sincere) + 17. + + + But seriously... buddy. It's New + York. All that happened... + (pause) + Do you really want to put yourself + through that...? + + INTERCUT: + + CLOSEUP - MIKE + + His face clouds. He considers his past, then whispers. + + MIKE + I'll be quick. And it's a different + part of town... + + SAM + Are you gonna call Lily? + + MIKE + N-no. It's a job. + (his voice cracks) + I’ll be in, and out. + + We hold on Mike, brimming with uncertainty... + + Then — a loud SHRIEEEEEKI + + CUT TO: + + +21 EXT. SKY - DAY 21 + + An A.IRPLANE descends into New York. + + +22 INT. AIRPLANE - DAY 22 + + Mike looks out the window. The grid of New York is below, + neatly geometric. Until — the plane suddenly banks, + swooping in. The whole view spins. + + Mike recoils, nauseated. + + +23 EXT. NEW YORK - DAY 23 + + Blackness. Then — a TAXI emerges into the light, We’ve been + looking into the Holland Tunnel. + + +24 INT. CAB - DRIVING 24 + 18. + + + A carved crucifix swings from the mirror. + + Mike rides in back. Face wan. New York's a jumble. He peers + about — everything seems discordant. Canal Street is a + collection of unsettling images: + + Smoke curls from a grate. It clears, revealing a MAN lying + motionless on the sidewalk. + + Sparks arc inside an open factory door. + + A snarling DOG barks behind bars. + + Seafood decomposes in a fish market. + + The CABBIE HONKS furiously at the congestion. + + CABBIE + This traffic's a fuckin’ nightmare. + I'm gonna cut up Eighth. + + MIKE + (woozy) + N-no. Please. Don’t go that way... + Canal's fine... + + CABBIE + Just lemme drive. + + The Cabbie hooks left. + + Mike blanches in back. The cab drives uptown, and the sense + of DREAD grows. Crumbling buildings block out the sun. Mike + grimaces, anxious. Knowing something is approaching... + + OUT THE WINDOW + + An old brick school comes into view. On the PLAYGROUND, + CHILDREN RUN AROUND. + + Mike shudders. Distraught, he averts his eyes. + + CUT TO: + + +25 EXT. DOLPHIN HOTEL - NIGHT 25 + + A sumptuous refugee from the Jazz Age, A STATUE OF A + SMILING DOLPHIN dominates the portal. It leers a happy + greeting. + + Mike's cab arrives. He gets out, carrying a duffel. + 19. + + +26 INT. DOLPHIN LOBBY - NIGHT 26 + + Swanky and archaic, but beautifully maintained. The last + time it was hip, Dorothy Parker got drunk in the coatroom. + + The DOORMAN opens the door for Mike. Mike's sweating, his + usual insouciance rattled. He glances around the small + lobby: On the mezzanine, a PIANIST plays Gershwin. Chic + GUESTS in evening wear cavort. A RICH"OLD COUPLE walks a + poodle. A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN in a gown casually breastfeeds a + baby. + + Mike goes up to Reception. The DESK CLERK smiles formally. + + DESK CLERK + Welcome to the Dolphin, sir. Are + you checking in? + + MIKE + Yes. Mike Enslin, staying for one + night. + + Hmphh? The Desk Clerk suddenly tightens up, awkward. + + DESK CLERK + Uh... could you excuse me one + moment? + + She hurries off. Mike raises an eyebrow. + + We follow the Clerk as she scurries down the counter. She + reaches a rigid ASSISTANT MANAGER and whispers. He listens, + giving Mike a discreet glance. The Assistant Manager + whispers something back, then rushes out a rear door. + + Beat + + Mike waits. Biding his time... + + Pause — then the rear door opens, and out glides the + Manager, MR. OLIN. Olin, 60, is a precise man of European + air, his" tailored suit, carefully-parted hair and + manicured nails only made bearable by his clipped dry wit. + + TIGHT - OLIN + + He nods professionally and extends his hand. + + OLIN + 20. + + + Mr. Enslin, I’m Gerald Olin, the + manager of the Dolphin. If there’s + any way I can be of assistance + while you’re here — dinner + reservations, theater, anything at + all — please know that I’m + delighted to be at your service. + + MIKE + Uh, that's great. + (chirpy) + If I can just get my key to 1408, + I'll stay out of your hair. + + Beat. Olin’s eyes narrow. + + OLIN + You wouldn't prefer an upgrade? An + executive suite with complimentary + breakfast? + + MIKE + (hostile) + 1408, please. + + OLIN + So insistent. + (his voice lowers) + Mr. Enslin, could you humor me with + a more... private conversation? + + +27 INT. OLIN'S OFFICE - NIGHT 27 + + An impeccable Edwardian study. Oak paneling. Fine books. An + antique desk with a lozenge-shaped green lamp. + + Olin opens a humidor. + + OLIN + Cigar? + + MIKE + No, thank you. I don’t smoke. + + Olin's eyes shift to the cigarette behind Mike's ear. Mike + sees this. + + MIKE + I quit years ago. + (he starts to explain) + 21. + + + The cigarette behind the ear is... + I dunno. Habit. Part affectation, + part superstition. A writer thing. + + OLIN + Well, then, do you drink? + + MIKE + Of course! I just said I'm a + writer. + +Olin smiles thinly. He opens a liquor cabinet and removes a +fine BOTTLE OF COGNAC. + + OLIN + Remy 1939. Exquisite, Runs about + $800 a bottle, when you can find it + — + + MIKE + (he raises his hand) + I appreciate the bribe, but I + intend to stay in that room. + + OLIN + (put off) + How long? + + MIKE + How long? Er, my usual is + overnight. + + OLIN + Oh. I see. + (he purses his lips) + Nobody has ever lasted more than an + hour. + +Mike takes this in, then cracks up, PARODYING Olin with a +silly Transylvania accent. + + MIKE + Oooo! Bleh! "Nobody has ever lasted + more than an hour. When the clouds + pass over the moon, the spirits + rise from the family graveyard to + haunt the ballroom. " + +Olin stares, unamused. + + OLIN + 22. + + + I don’t know why you’re mocking me. + I am genuinely, to the best of my + ability, trying to help you. + + MIKE + No, you're just playing a little + game, which frankly I find + tiresome, You're "selling the + mystique." But eventually, we both + know you’ll give me the key, I’ll + write my story, and your bookings + will go up 50%. + +Olin is repelled. Mike smirks and pulls out his mini- +recorder. + + MIKE + Do you mind if I record our + conversation ? + (he waits; beat) + Good. I'll take that as a yes. + +Mike hits "RECORD.” The LED glows red, like an eye, and the +little wheels start spinning... + +Olin glares, his politeness fading. + + OLIN + Sir, you completely misunderstand + the situation. The Dolphin may not + have the cachet of the Plaza or the + Carlyle... but we run 90% + occupancy. + (emphatic) + This isn't about my concern for the + hotel, OR about my concern for you. + Frankly -- selfishly --- I don’t + want you to enter 1408, because I + don’t want to have to clean up the + mess. + +Olin lets this chilling thought hang. + +Mike’s eyes widen. + + OLIN + Hotels are all about presentation + and creature comforts.., though + behind the scenes, we witness quite + the bit of nastiness. + (heavy) + 23. + + + But my training is as a manager, + not a coroner! Under my watch there + have been four deaths. Four! After + the last one, I said enough. I + forbade any guests from ever + entering again. + + MIKE + And that last suicide was... + Randolph Hyde? 1996? An + orthodontist who slit his wrists + and cut off his genitals? + + OLIN + Yes. You've done your homework. + Grievously, since the hotel opened + 95 years ago, there have been seven + jumpers, four overdoses, five + hangings, three m -- + + MIKE + Three mutilations. Two stranglings + (into the MINIRECORDER) + "Manager Gerald Olin is well-versed + in the hotel's tragic history, + dryly reciting the docket of + carnage like a bookkeeper + discussing his ledger.” + + OLIN + (he frowns) + You think you're clever?! Well in + your investigation, did you + discover the twenty-two natural + deaths? + +Mike leans forward, interest piqued. + + MIKE + "Natural"? Uh, no. What — + + OLIN + You didn’t find them, because + they're not reported in newspapers. + But all told, 56 people have, died + up there. + +Mike is momentarily speechless. + +Olin pulls out a small key and opens his desk bottom +drawer. + 24. + + +He removes a BULGING FILE and brings it around to Mike. +Olin stares a moment —- then sits next to him. + + OLIN + You know nothing. 1408's guests + have died of heart attacks, + strokes, drownings — + + MIKE + "Drownings"? + + OLIN + Yes. Mr. Grady Miller died drowning + in a bowl of chicken soup. + + MIKE + (taken aback) + H-how? + + OLIN + How indeed? Isn't that interesting? + Well, it's all in the file: + (he PATS the folder) + And you're welcome to read all of + it. Every word! I'll even give you + my office! You can peruse the + materials to your heart's content. + You can take notes. Put it all in + your book! + (pause; he turns somber) + In return, my only condition... is + that you don't stay in the room. + +Mike eyeballs the file. + +Considering. Then — + + MIKE + I never got that drink. + +Olin smiles a flicker, then gets up for the Cognac. He +takes out a crystal snifter, wipes it clean, carefully +pours... + +Mike notices a silver DESK FRAME. He furtively cranes +around... to check out who's in it. And — it’s a calendar. + +Olin hands Mika the drink. Mike gratefully snorts it, +enjoying the flavor, the spreading warmth. Then, he looks +up. + + MIKE + No. + 25. + + + OLIN + Dammit to HELL! + +Olin BLOWS UP and angrily THROWS the file at Mike. + + OLIN + Fine! READ the blasted file! Read + it anyway! + (livid) + Once you see it, you won't WANT to + go in the room! + +Mike is stunned at this outburst. Hesitant, he opens the +TOP FOLDER. Inside is a pile of wrinkled yellow newsprint. +Olin testily narrates from memory. + + OLIN + The first victim! Kevin O'Malley. A + sewing machine salesman who checked + into the hotel opening week, + October 1912! + + MIKE + (he winces at the photo) + He... cut his own throat? + + OLIN + Yes. But that's not the horrific + part. Afterward, in a fit of + insanity, he tried to stitch + himself back up with a sewing + needle before he bled to death. + +Mike makes a face. + + MIKE + Jesus... + + OLIN + Mr. Enslin! No one needs to know + you didn't go in. I’ll give you a + fake receipt1 You can take + photographs in 1404: The layouts + are identical, nobody will know the + difference. + + MIKE + Hey, my readers expect the truth — + + OLIN + No, your readers don’t expect much + of anything — except grotesquerie + and cheap thrills: + 26. + + + (snide, from memory) + "The headless ghost of Eugene + Rilsby, forever walking his + deserted farmhouse. The Barking + Phantom of Mount Hope Cemetery " + + MIKE + (surprised) + How do you know that?! + + OLIN + I've done my own research! Your + books are easy to find — in the + cheap paperback section. + (beat) + And they are completely cynical. + The work of a talented, intelligent + man who doesn't believe in anything + but himself. + +Mike reacts, pissed. + + MIKE + Where the fuck do you get off + (hurt) + This meeting's over — + + OLIN + Oh please. Quit acting like a sore + schoolgirl. + (calming) + I said you were talented. There was + that first book... I -— I rather + enjoyed that. It was popular. + Hardback. Er... what was it called? + "The Road To Nowhere" --? + + MIKE + (uneasy) + "The Road Back Nowhere." + + OLIN + That was sort of... a gilded + memoir? Travels of a young man -— + + MIKE + (defensive) + Only parts of it were true -— + + OLIN + The father seemed like a real + s.o.b. — + 27. + + + Mike seethes. He hits "STOP” on the recorder. He jumps up. + + MIKE + Give me my key. + + OLIN + Mr. Enslin -- + + MIKE + Give me my key! Do you know why I + can walk into any spooky old room? + Because I know that ghoulies and + ghosties don’t exist. + (dark) + And that’s good, because I also + know there's no God to protect us + from them, if they did. + + CUT TO: + + +28 INT. DOLPHIN LOBBY - NIGHT 28 + + Behind Reception, a wall of old-fashioned mail slots. Olin + carries over a little stool. He steps up to 1408's mailbox, + reaching his hand far... far back into the shadowy recess, + + He fiddles around, then pulls out a TARNISHED KEY on a long + brass paddle. Embossed are the numbers 1408. + + Mike reacts, surprised. + + MIKE + You still use actual keys? That's a + nice touch. Antiquey. + (beat) + Most hotels use magnetic cards. + + OLIN + So do we. 1408 is the exception. + (beat) + Electronic devices don't work + properly in there. Computers... + cellphones... wristwatches ... + (pause) + You don't happen to have a + pacemaker, do you, Mr. Enslin? + + Mike shoots him a look. He speaks into his mini-recorder. + + MIKE + "Manager claims phantom in room + interferes with + 28. + + + OLIN + I didn't say "phantom," + + MIKE + Uh, "spirit." "Specter." + + OLIN + You misunderstand. What’s in 1408 + isn't that kind of presence. + + MIKE + Then what is it? + + WIDE + + Olin pads away. He crosses the rococo lobby, guiding Mike + to the ELEVATOR. He presses "UP,” then turns and whispers. + + OLIN + It's an evil fucking room. + + Mike's eyebrows raise. + + DING! The elevator arrives. The shimmery doors open. + + Olin gestures: After you. Mike enters. Olin starts to + follow — when a MAITRE'D in a tux comes running over. He + interrupts Olin and quickly MUTTERS something in French. + Olin nods and MUTTERS back. He scribbles his signature on a + form. The Maitre'd bows and runs off. + + +29 INT. ELEVATOR - SAME TIME 29 + + Olin enters. It's an old-fashioned cage. Olin hits "14," + and the doors rattle closed. They stand in silence. + + OLIN + Do you enjoy traveling alone? + + Mike ignores this. He stares at the panel: Rows of BUTTONS, + with the customary lie: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12... 14 15 + 16 + + MIKE + Why do hotels think they can just + make the number 13 disappear? + + Olin chuckles. They lurch upward, lights ticking: + 5...6...7... + + MIKE + 29. + + + How filthy's the room? The sheets + haven't been changed in a decade. + + OLIN + No, no, no. This is a professional + establishment. Our maids give 1408 + a light turn once a month. + (beat) + But I supervise, and they work in + pairs. We treat the room as a + chamber filled with poison gas. We + stay only ten minutes, and I insist + the door be kept open. + + Olin's face tightens, regretful. + + OLIN + Even then... last year, a young + maid from El Salvador found herself + locked in the bathroom. Just for a + moment. When we pulled her out, she + was — + + MIKE + Dead? + + Olin stares. + + OLIN + No. Blind. She had taken a pair of + scissors and carved out her eyes. + + DING’ The elevator hits 14. The doors open. + + +30 INT. 14TH FLOOR - SAME TIME 30 + + Mike peers out. It's a perfectly uneventful corridor — red- + and-gold carpet, drab end tables, old-tyme light fixtures. + + OLIN + Your floor. + + Mike waits for Olin to take a step — but the man is + immobile. + + OLIN + I'm afraid this is as far as I go. + The room is at the end of the hall + to the right. + + Mike nods, a tad apprehensive. He exits — on legs that seem + heavier. Mike takes a few steps, then turns. + 30. + + +AT THE END + +Olin stands framed in the elevator, an ordinary man in a +plain suit. Hands clasped, face withdrawn, he sighs. + + OLIN + Good luck. + +Olin pulls out the bottle of Cognac and tosses it. +Startled, Mike catches it. He starts to respond — but the +doors SHUT. + +Olin is gone. + +is now alone. He hoists his duffel, then walks slowly down +the hushed hallway. Past 1401... 1402... + +Mike examines Olin's file. + +INSERT - FILE + +A grisly PHOTOGRAPH marked "KEVIN O'MALLEY." He lies dead +in the bathtub. His eyes are wide, his throat gashed open, +a sewing needle protruding from raw flesh. + +MIKE + +grimaces. He walks past 1404... past a moldering room +service tray. On the plate are remains of a beef burger +soaked in red ketchup. A fly buzzes... + +INSERT - FILE + +Back to the photos. Mike flips to a nasty half-covered BODY +in bed. The sheets are soaked. + +IN THE HALL + +Mike is getting rattled. He makes a turn. 1406 goes by... +1407... wood-paneled doors and elegant wallpaper... + +Mike finds a scratched NOTE on hotel stationery. + +INSERT - FILE + +Frantic writing: "My brother was eaten by wolves on the +Connecticut Turnpike” + +IN THE HALL + +Mike stops, considering this oddity. + 31. + + +He looks up — and realizes he's in front of 1401. + +Huh? + +Mike looks around, confused. Somehow, he's back at the +elevator. + + MIKE + What the fuck? + +Mike slowly shakes his head. Then, he packs up the file and +marches away. Pay attention! + +WIDE + +Mike watches the numbers go by. Get to that room! 2, 3, 4, +5, 6, 7. He swings around a corner. And there, unassuming +and anonymous, is 1408. + +Finally. + +Mike pulls out his brass KEY. He starts to insert it — +when, he's startled by WHIMPERING. + +AT THE NEXT ROOM + +is a YOUNG MOTHER turned away from us. She holds a sobbing +BABY* She fumbles with her mag card, then disappears +inside. + +BACK ON MIKE AT THE DOOR + +Okay. He takes a breath, then inserts the key in the lock. + +MICRO-CLOSEUP - INSIDE THE LOCK + +The vintage mechanism looks like a GIGANTIC DARK CHAMBER, +filled with crazy angles of cold steel. + +The key enters like a medieval battering ram. It slowly +turns. The tumblers RUMBLE with echoing CLINKS and CRICKS. + +The sound rises ominously LOUD... + +BACK TO MIKE - NORMAL PERSPECTIVE + +And, the sound becomes a teeny CLICK. + +The door unlocks. + +Inside the next room, the Young Mother's VOICE leaks out: + 32. + + + YOUNG MOTHER (O.S.) + (singing softly) + "Mama loves her baby, baby, + baby..." + + The knot in Mike's stomach grows. + + He grips the doorknob. He lifts up his recorder. + + MIKE + "It's 7:52 p.m., and I'm about to + enter Room 1408 of the Dolphin + Hotel. If something happens to me, + I, Michael Enslin, being of sound + mind, do hereby leave all my + earthly belongings, and whatnot to + my ex-wife Lily." + + He hits STOP. + + Then, he slowly turns the knob — + + The tension builds — + + The wooden door opens — + + And... + + +31 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 31 + + It's — just a hotel room. + + A two-room suite, pleasant and banal. Pastel sitting area, + beige carpet, forgettable furniture. + + Mike sees this — and gasps, relieved. He starts LAUGHING. + + MIKE + That1s it? + (he LAUGHS harder) + That's friggin' IT? + + Astonished, he enters and throws his stuff down. He + defiantly SLAMS the door shut and SHOUTS. + + MIKE + All right, Olin!! You win Round + One! + (annoyed with himself) + 33. + + + You had me goin'! Where's the + spiderwebs, the lightning, the + river of blood?! This is just... a + room! + + Mike gives himself a tour. + + There's a couch. A coffee table. A desk with various items: + A fax machine. A glass ashtray. An old-fashioned rotary + telephone. A book of matches, with a Norman Rockwellish + sketch of a smiling Doorman at the hotel. + + On the wall are three framed paintings. In the carpet below + is a water stain. + + The wall THERMOSTAT says 80. Mike clicks the "down" arrow. + + +32 INT. BEDROOM 32 + + There's a queen-size bed with fluffy pillows. A TV. A + nightstand Bible. Mike picks it up... then tosses it aside. + + +33 INT. BATHROOM 33 + + Mike flicks on the bathroom lights. It’s bright and + sparkling — a pleasing glow of luxury. + + There's a tub. A bidet. Baskets of soap. + + The toilet paper roll is folded in a fancy little triangle. + + Mike tears off a sheet and wipes his nose. + + +34 INT. LIVING ROOM 34 + + Mike opens an armoire and finds the MINI-BAR. , He peruses + the sodas, booze and chips. He glances at the price sheet. + + MIKE + Eight dollars for Corn-Nuts? This + is an evil fucking room. + + CUT TO: + + +35 INT. BEDROOM - LATER 35 + + Mike lies on the made bed, eating Corn-Nuts and swigging + Olin’s Cognac. He narrates into his recorder, from memory: + 34. + + + MIKE + "The living room has two chairs, a + sofa, a writing desk, and a faux- + antique armoire. The carpet is + beige and unremarkable, except for + a stain beneath a thrift-store + painting of a sailing ship." + +TIGHT - THE PAINTING + +We FOCUS ON the painting, as Mike describes it from memory. + + MIKE (O.S.) + "The work is executed in the always + dull Currier & Ives fashion — + sailors on a white schooner." + +We MOVE TO the SECOND PAINTING — an old lady in a rocking +chair. + + MIKE (O.S.) + "The second painting is an old + woman, a la Whistler's mother, + smiling down as small children play + at her feet." + +We MOVE TO the THIRD PAINTING — a British hunting scene. + + MIKE (O.S.) + "The third and final, painfully- + dull painting is the ever popular + "The Hunt" — horses, hounds, and + constipated British lords. + (beat) + "These paintings have been here a + long time. If I lifted them, I'm + sure I'd see light patches. Or + squirming bugs like when you turn + over a rock." + +BACK ON MIKE + + MIKE + "The bedroom has a queen-size bed, + two nightstands, and butterfly + wallpaper. + (beat) + "Some smartass spoke of the + banality of evil. If that’s so, + then we've entered the seventh ring + of Hell." + +Mike gets up and walks to the window. He opens the drapes. + 35. + + + OUTSIDE, another building completely fills the view. Below + are cars and a huge lit-up BANK CLOCK. Mike opens the paned + window. TRAFFIC NOISE rises in. + + MIKE + "The panorama is a typical cramped + New York view of nothing: A gray + building, and honking traffic + below," + + The clock outside clicks from 7:59 to 8:00 PM. + + Suddenly, LOUD MUSIC. + + Mike jumps, startled. + + +36 BEHIND HIM 36 + + The clock RADIO has gone off. The CARPENTERS sing: + + THE CARPENTERS (O.S.) + (singing) + We’ve only just begun" + + Mike laughs. He turns it OFF, flicking the alarm switch. + + MIKE + Silly,.. + + Mike turns — then suddenly freezes. + + THE BED + + is turned down. The sheet is folded, and there are little + mint chocolates on the pillows. + + MIKE + + gapes, stupefied. + + MIKE + Holy shiiit! + + Mike blinks, as if this will make the mints disappear. + + But they don't. + + He strolls over and picks up a mint. He peers... + + MIKE + 36. + + + Bravo, Olin. That is VERY + unsettling. + +Mike opens the candy, then EATS it. He thinks, his wheels +spinning. Until he suddenly stops, mid-chew. + + MIKE + That means someone’s in the room..! + +Mike whirls. + +WIDE + +Emboldened, Mike RUNS to the CLOSET. He slams open the door +and — it's empty. + +Hm. Mike looks around. Ah! Suddenly he drops to his knees +and peers under the BED. Buz... there’s nothing. + +Hm! Mike thinks. He bolts into the bathroom. He grabs the +shower curtain, takes a breath, then YANKS it aside. + +And — nobody. Huh?! + +Mike wracks his mind. Tantalized. + + MIKE + Come out, come out... + +Detective-like, he starts RAPPING on the drywall. + +RAP! RAP RAP! + +He RAPS his way toward the door... when... something +catches his eye. + +TIGHT - TOILET PAPER + +The toilet paper roll has returned to its original state. + +Once again, it has a folded triangle. + +ANGLE - MIKE + +His eyes bulge. + + MIKE + Whoa. Bizarre. + (beat) + A ghost that offers turndown + service. + 37. + + + He gawks at it. Then, he pulls out his recorder, CLICK! + + MIKE + "Okay, let’s Encyclopedia Brown + this fucker. I was facing the + window. Then I saw the mints, ran + to the closet which would leave + time for Houdini to get in the + bathroom, do the paper trick — + (he stops) + "No, I would've seen him — + (beat) + "No. Unless he started in the + bathroom, so when I turned my back, + he did the mints and escaped + into... the living room!" + + Mike barrels into the + + +37 INT. LIVING ROOM 37 + + He lopes around — searching... searching. Until, he spots - + the AIR VENT up in the ceiling. + + Ah! Mike runs up — and thinks he sees movement inside. + + Or, does he? + + He stands on his tiptoes and SHOUTS up into it. + + MIKE + Hellooo! -Hello, asshole! You're + gonna have to try harder! + (he smirks) + Nice and HOT up there?? + + Mike wipes his brow. He realizes he's sweating. + + Mike runs to the THERMOSTAT and checks it. It’s now 84. + + MIKE + Oh, for God's sake. + + Mike pushes the "down" arrow again. Nothing. He BANGS it. + + Irked, he grabs the clunky telephone, peers at the archaic + dial, then sticks his finger in the hole and dials "O." + + It spins. Click-click-click-click-click. Then — + + MIKE + 38. + + + Hello! This is Mr. Enslin in Room + 1408. + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + Good evening. Are you ready to + check out? + + MIKE + "Check out"?! + (he chuckles mordantly) + Why would I do that, when there a + such wonderful maid service? + (beat) + And so discreet! + (beat) + No, I just need someone to fix my + thermostat. This room's on fire. + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + Of course, sir. We'll send an + engineer right up. + + MIKE + Thanks. + +Mike hangs up. + +Beat. Through the wall, the baby CRIES. Waaah! Waaah...! + +Mike considers it all. He sits on the sofa, then starts his +recorder. + + MIKE + "Hotel rooms are naturally creepy. + I mean, how many people have slept + in that bed before you? How many + were sick? How many lost their + minds? + (beat) + "How many died?" + +Mike thinks. He unzips his duffel, slides over his LAPTOP, +and carefully removes a small EQUIPMENT CASE. Inside is +assorted gear: An EMF meter, microphones, a UV black light. + +ACROSS THE ROOM + +Mike dims the room. Then, he turns on the UV light. It +HUMS, emitting a weird blue glow. He holds the tube over +the carpet stain, and it GLOWS, vivid and brackish. + 39. + + +Hm. Mike waves the UV light around the room. Things are +revealed, the past becoming otherworldly and +phosphorescent: + +Spatters on the drapes. + +Multicolored blotches on the couch. + +Drips across the walls. + +Soiled puddles in the bed. + +MIKE + +is repelled. Ugh. He feels sick. + +Unable to bear any more, he FLICKS ON the lights. + +Normalcy is restored. Mike rubs his eyes, then returns to +the living room. He glances at + +THE THREE PAINTINGS + +Which are... askew. Just slightly... tilted. + +The ship’s crooked horizon is unpleasantly vivid... + +CU - MIKE + +A strange, sealike sensation. He staggers, a bit nauseous. + +A SOUND of pounding waves. The painted water seems real... + +Mike is losing his equilibrium. + + MIKE + God, I feel like I smoked some + cheap dope! + +He straightens the three paintings, then turns away. + +Mike takes a step — then — suddenly gets a look. + +He spins! + +The paintings are still straight. + +Hm. Mike queasily sits, putting his head between his legs. + +Overheated, he fumbles for his recorder, + + MIKE + 40. + + + What did Olin say? + (dizzy) + Something about poison gas...? + +A woozy, unclear contemplation.... when — BZZZZ! + +WIDE + +Mike jerks. BZZZZZ! It’s the door, He pops from his trance. + + MIKE + W-who is it?? + + GRUFF VOICE + Engineering. You got a problem with + your heat? + +Mike scurries to the door. He peers through the EYEHOLD. + +DISTORTED POV + +Through the glass, a hairy New York ENGINEER in overalls. + +BACK ON MIKE + +Good enough. He goes to open the door. He pulls — and it’s +stuck. It won't budge. + +Mike struggles with the handle. + + MIKE + The door’s stuck! Can you give it a + shove? + + GRUFF VOICE + (beat) + I ain’t touching it. + +Mike reacts, irritated. He tugs harder, wrenching with all +his might — when, it suddenly releases and SLAMS open. BAM! + +Mike tumbles, off-balance. + +THE DOOR + +opens wide. Revealed is the ENGINEER, a huge, heavyset man. + +He carries a steel toolbox. + + ENGINEER + Is it too hot or too cold? + 41. + + + MIKE + Oh, it’s definitely too hot. C’mon + in. The box is right here — + +Mike strides over to the thermostat. He starts to gesture +to the panel — when he realizes — he's... alone. + +Confused, Mike turns. + +The guy is still standing in the doorway. + +Mike gestures again, for emphasis. + + MIKE + I said... the box is here. + + ENGINEER + know where the fuck it is. But I + ain’t going in that room. + +What! Mike glowers, put-out. + + MIKE + You just have to walk seven or + eight feet — + + ENGINEER + I said I’m not goin’ in! You know + what happened in there? + + MIKE + Yes, I'm quite aware -— + + ENGINEER + Look, I'll talk you through it. Any + jackass can fix that thing. + (beat) + Just remove the panel. + +The Engineer waits, feet planted. + +Mike stares in disbelief. Then, beaten, he pulls off the +thermostat PANEL. Inside are springs and levers. + + ENGINEER + Okay. Now -- inside, you see a + coil? + + MIKE + Yes. + + ENGINEER + 42. + + + Good. Now above that coil is a + little tube filled with mercury. + That's supposed to activate the + contact switch, but this hotel's so + old, half the shit don't work. + (beat) + Just give the tube a little tap. + + Mike glares, unsure. + + ENGINEER + Just tap the thing! + + Mike relents. He FLICKS the tube. The mercury suddenly + emits a blue SPARK, then rolls downward. + + The system CHURNS, then the air-conditioning BLOWS on. Mike + smiles t relieved. + + MIKE + You're a genius. Let me get you a + tip — + + Mike turns to thank the man — and he’s GONE. + + Huh? Bewildered, Mike runs to the door. He peers out. + + HIS POV - DOWN THE CORRIDOR + + The hall is empty. The elevator doors glide closed. + + MIKE + + frowns. Odd... + + A discombobulated beat, then he pulls his head back in. + + Haltingly, he shuts the door. + + +38 INT. ROOM 38 + + Mike's alone. He paces about , convincing himself he’s + okay... + + When — sudden jarring MUSIC. + + THE CARPENTERS (0.S.) + "We’ve only just begun..." + + Mike whirls! The CLOCK RADIO has turned back on. + 43. + + + THE CARPENTERS (0.S.) + “To live..." + + MIKE + Christ, you again!? + +AT THE RADIO + +Mike marches over. He once again CLICKS OFF the radio. + +The digital clock flickers, then switches to "60:00." + +Suddenly, it starts counting backward: "59:59... 59:58..." + +Mike leans closer, mesmerized. "59:55... 59:54..." + +CLOSEUP - MIKE + +A dawning awareness. Slowly, he gulps. + +In his mind, he remembers Olin's warning from before... + + OLIN'S VOICE + "Nobody has ever lasted longer than + an hour..." + +Hm. Mike glances worriedly at the clock ticking down. + +Silence. + +He realizes something odd. The SILENCE is ABSOLUTE. The +traffic noise is gone. + +Perplexed, Mike walks to the window. He sticks his head +out. + +OUTSIDE + +It looks exactly as before, The New York street is filled +with a crush of traffic, buses, people, Except, +disconcertingly, there is literally no sound, + +Mike can't hear anything. It's as if we're watching a TV +show with the volume turned off. + +A fire engine races by, lights flashing. Dead silent. + +MIKE + +is confounded. The lack of noise is highly disturbing. He +stares, then pulls his head in... + 44. + + + When CRASH! The WINDOW VIOLENTLY SLAMS DOWN on MIKE'S HAND! + + MIKE + AAAGGHHHHH! + + Mike SCREAMS, agonized. An animal caught in a trap. + + MIKE + GODDAMN!! FUCKI!!! + + Mike struggles, fighting to use his good hand to crack the + window open. Finally he tears his broken hand out. + + TIGHT - HAND + + It's a mess. The skin is ripped, bleeding. + + Panicked, Mike runs into + + +39 INT. BATHROOM 39 + + He turns on the sink. Water streams out, as he puts his + wounded hand under the flow. + + But then — the faucet SPUTTERS and dies. + + Mike angrily turns the handles. Nothing. Livid, he punches + the sink. + + MIKE + You son-of-a... + + FWOOOOOOSH! Suddenly SCALDING HOT WATER spews out! + + Yeow!!!! It BURNS Mike’s hand. + + Mike CRIES OUT. He yanks away his hand, now bloody AND + burnt. + + The radio goes off. + + THE CARPENTERS + "We‘ve only just begun..." + + Mike SHRIEKS. + + MIKE + Fuck YOU, radio!! + + +40 INT. BEDROOM 40 + 45. + + + Incensed, Mike lunges in, grabs the electrical cord, and + PULLS it from the wall! + + And — nothing changes. The song keeps playing. The timer + keeps clicking down: ”56:24... 56:23..." + + Mike gasps in disbelief. Flummoxed, he staggers back to + + +41 INT. BATHROOM 41 + + He grabs a towel and wraps it around his bleeding hand. + + +42 INT. BEDROOM 42 + + A gust of wind blows in, ruffling the curtains. We follow + the breeze across the room... to the BIBLE on the + nightstand. + + The wind flutters the pages. They flip by... then stop. + + CLOSEUP - BIBLE + + The page is covered with SCRAWLED, MANIC WORDS: + + "DON'T LET ME DIE HERE" + + WIDE + + Suddenly, RINGGGGG!!! + + Mike jumps. Surprised, he runs to the phone. He grabs it. + + MIKE + YES??!! + + HOTEL VOICE + Sir, I'm sorry, but there was a + miscommunication in the kitchen. + There’s going to be a ten-minute + delay on your sandwich. + + Mike's eyes bug out. + + MIKE + What sandwich?! I didn't order a + sandwich!! + + MIKE + (crazed) + 46. + + + But as long as we're on the phone + let's talk about the window that + just broke my hand, and the water + that burned me alive!! + +A long pause. Then — + + HOTEL VOICE + I'm sorry. You're welcome to + substitute a side dish for your + french fries. We have cottage + cheese, macaroni salad — + + MIKE + Are you croddam LISTENING to me?! + My hand needs STITCHES — + + HOTEL VOICE + I understand. If you leave your dry + cleaning out by 10 a.m., we'll have + it pressed and returned by 5 the + same day. + +Mike gapes. + + MIKE + FUCK! Fuck YOU! I want you to call + me a cab to the nearest hospital! + +The Hotel Voice turns sour, ruffled. + + HOTEL VOICE + Sir, I will not tolerate you + speaking to me in that tone of + voice — + + MIKE + You’re a fuckin' IDIOT! + + HOTEL VOICE + If you wish, I can connect you to + our manager, Mr. Olin. + + MIKE + GOOD! Olin it is! Put him on!! + +Pause —- then the line goes on HOLD. Sprightly MUSIC kicks +in. The RECORDED ANNOUNCEMENT we heard before repeats: + + SMOOTH RECORDING + 47. + + + "When staying at the Dolphin, be + certain to enjoy New York's finest + dining, at the fabled Blue Marlin + Restaurant on our Mezzanine level." + + Mike waits, stewing. + + He watches his blood dripping out of his hand. The red + droplets hitting the carpet... + + SMOOTH RECORDING + "Muscles tense? Then make an + appointment to visit our deluxe + spa, on the Coral level. With full + massage, facial, and aromatherapy + facilities, it'll leave you feeling + relaxed and revitalized." + + Mike’s hand keeps bleeding. + + His temper is growing. + + SMOOTH RECORDING + "Your call is important to us. + Please stay on the line—” + + CLICK — BEEEEEEEP! + + It’s a DIALTONE. + + Mike has been disconnected. + + He stares in amazement. + + MIKE + You are kidding. + + Furious, Mike throws the phone. + + He grips his wounded hand and stomps into the + + +43 INT. LIVING ROOM 43 + + Mike's fed up. He rushes to the door, going to open it -— + + And... the deadbolt's locked. + + Huh? Uncertain, Mike fumbles in his pocket for the big ROOM + KEY. He angrily jams it into the lock, thrusting it through + the oversize hole. + 48. + + +And — PLIP! The key slips from Mike’s fingers — plunging +into the door! It disappears, gone. + + MIKE + Wha—?! + +Mike fiddles with the keyhole, trying to find the key. + +Frustrated, he slams his EYE up against the hole. + +HIS POV + +Blackness. Hollow. A gentle whisper inside... + +MIKe'S EYEBALL + +bulges, peering up... down... + +WIDE - MIKE + +He scowls. He spins and looks around... thinking. Mike runs +to his bag, unzips a pocket, and pulls out his LETTER +OPENER. + +Mika jams the metal blade into the keyhole. He wiggles +it... trying... desperately... to engage the mechanics... + + MIKE + C’mon... + +He struggles to nick the lock. Forcing it around... when — +CLUNK! The DEADBOLT UNLOCKS! + + MIKE + Yeah! + +Mike smiles victoriously. He triumphantly turns the handle +-- + +AND — + +CRACK! The DOOR HANDLE BREAKS OFF IN HIS HAND. + +CLOSEUP - MIKE + +His face goes ashen. This is unconceivable. + +The door is now unopenable from the inside. + +WIDE + 49. + + +Mike goes rabid, furiously KICKING the door! He PUNCHES it +with his bruised hand. He claws crazily at the handle +stump. + +He's TRAPPED. + +Losing it, Mike whirls and careens across the room. Passing + + THE THERMOSTAT + which now reads 75 degrees. 74... + +AT THE WINDOW + +Mike runs to the pane and throws it open. He SCREAMS. + + MIKE + HELLO?!! + +OUTSIDE + +It's utterly silent, like before. Not a sound from the busy +traffic. + +Mike screams louder. + + MIKE + Up here! HELP!!! + +Mike's VOICE ECHOES, the only noise in the world, + + ECHO + HELP... HELP... HELP...! + +This is very disturbing. + +Mike peers around — then spots a lit window across the +street. There is a SILHOUETTED MAN. + +Mike gasps, a ray of hope. + + MIKE + Hey! Sir!! + +No reaction. He SCREAMS louder. + + MIKE + CAN YOU SEE ME?! OVER HERE, IN THE + DOLPHIN?? + +Mike waves his right arm. + +ACROSS THE STREET + 50. + + +The Man waves his right arm. + +MIKE + + MIKE + YES, HERE! I NEED YOU TO CALL THE + POLICE!! + +Mike jumps, excited. + +ACROSS THE STREET + +The Man jumps, too. An exact rhyming movement. + +MIKE + +suddenly halts, horrified. + +THE MAN + +freezes. + +MIKE + +slowly... worriedly... shifts from side to side. + +THE MAN + +mirror-like, shifts from side to side. + +MIKE + +trembles. Fearful, shaking, he leans toward the lamp. + +THE MAN + +leans toward a lamp. Revealing... he... is... Mike. + +MIKE + +freezes, stunned. He is watching himself. + +CLOSER VIEW - THE MAN + +is Mike, standing in a parallel version of the hotel room, + +h Staring blank-eyed at us. + +A chilling beat — and then an INSANE MANIAC with a +clawhammer comes rushing into view. He swings the hammer +straight at the doppelganger's head. + 51. + + +ANGLE - MIKE + +He SCREAMS and spins in fear. + +WIDE + +And — the Maniac isn't there. Mike is alone. + +Mike's chest heaves, overcome. Panicked, whirling about. +Off-balance, he spins back to the view outside. + +ACROSS THE WAY + +The man is gone. The lit window is gone, It's just +darkness. + +Mike is befuddled. + + MIKE + What the f-—? + +He stares, shaking and impotent. Then, he notices the +PEOPLE below on the street. Silent, but — real. + +Desperate, Mike suddenly goes deranged. + +He picks up a LAMP - + + MIKE + HELP ME!!! + +WIDE - THE WINDOW + +Mike unplugs the lamp and THROWS it! It flies out the +window and soars outward! + +Mike lurches out, to watch what happens-- + +The LAMP drops. Down... down... + +MIKE + +waits eagerly, wild-eyed. + +THE LAMP + +drops closer to the street... then... + +Dissipates. + +Like mist, it just... disappears. The lamp is gone. + 52. + + + MIKE’S EYES + + bug out. + + MIKE + Jesus, I'm losing my mind. I'm + hallucinating. + + +44 INT. LIVING ROOM 44 + + Unsteady, Mike collapses. He feels helpless, like the walls + are closing in... + + Then — an ethereal LITTLE GIRL'S VOICE. + + Wispy, faint... + + GIRL’S VOICE + Daddy... Daddy....... + + We suddenly PUSH IN TO MIKE. He CLUTCHES for breath. + + ALLI color bleeds from his face. He holds his head, + gasping. + + MIKE + Stop it. Get ahold of yourself. + You're letting your mind run to + places that aren’t real. + (he works to calm + himself) + It’s just a classic haunted house + power of suggestion: Gaslit + fixtures. Faded rugs. Like that + motel in Kansas. There’s a reason + for everything... + + The radio continues its ominous countdown: 46:25.,. 46:24. + + Mike peers around, scoping — then sees something. Maddened, + he hobbles up to the AIRVENT. + + ANGLE - VENT + + There is... something inside the vent. A tiny black TUBE? + + MIKE + Is that a camera? A spycam? + (accusatory) + Hello?! Who are you, the perverted + owner of the hotel? Some rich + sadist, enjoying my terror? + 53. + + + (beat) + Or perhaps it's just punctilious + Mr. Olin, whacking-off in his + leather chair. + +ANGLE - MIKE + +He is cracking. Paranoid. + + MIKE + Wait a second..! He gave me booze, + (trying to focus) + Was it laced? Did Olin take a + sip...? Can't remember... + +Mike eyes are glazed. He spots the Cognac bottle. He runs +over and uncorks it, taking a sniff... + +Hm. Something else catches his eye. + +ON THE NIGHTSTAND + +are the mint wrappers. Mike gasps, remorseful. + + MIKE + Agh! The mystery chocolate. Shit! + Never take candy from a stranger. + +Mike's mind ratchets into overdrive, freaking. Until — + + GIRL'S VOICE + Daddy, pay attention! + +Mike whirls. + +ANGLE - TV + +The TV is ON. Onscreen is a flickering old HOME VIDEO; +Mike's daughter GRACIE, 5, sits on the carpet playing +dolls. She laughs and motions urgently. + + GRACIE (ON VIDEO) + Daddy, sit down! + +BACK TO - MIKE + +He gapes in disbelief. + + MIKE + Grade...? + +IN THE HOME VIDEO + 54. + + +A YOUNGER MIKE enters frame. Cheerful and buoyant. He sits +on the floor with Grade. She hands him a rotund little +doll. + + GRACIE (ON VIDEO) + Okay, you be the daddy, and I'm + going to be the mommy. + + YOUNG MIKE (ON VIDEO) + But I don’t want to be the daddy. I + want to be — the dog. + + GRACIE (ON VIDEO) + (outraged) + That's silly! You can't be the dog! + You have to be a person! + +BACK TO - MIKE + +He shudders, disturbed. + + MIKE + W-where1d this come from...? + +IN THE HOME VIDEO + +Mike's former wife LILY, 30, enters. She's pretty, aloof. + + LILY (ON VIDEO) + Hey, what are you scoundrels up to? + + GRACIE (ON VIDEO) + We're busy. Daddy and I got + married. + + LILY (ON VIDEO) + (feigning shock) + What?! + They all giuole. + + YOUNG MIKE (ON VIDEO) + Ism very popular around here! + +ANGLE - MIKE + +His face falls. Sad and traumatized. + +Wanting to hang onto this memory, he slowly reaches out to +the screen'... wishing... in some way... he could touch it +— + +ZAPPP!! It violently SHOCKS him. + 55. + + +OW! Mike tumbles back. The screen blazes, then goes to +STATIC. Grade is gone. + +WIDE - THE ROOM + +Mike is alone, hurt. Not understanding. He senses +something, then turns... + +ANGLE - NIGHTSTAND + +Sitting there are the two little DOLLS from the video. + +MIKE’S + +eyes widen with fear. + +The figures are a tiny man and woman. Here in the room. + +Mike gulps, then picks them up. Yes, they are real. Mike is +overcome with feelings. He tenderly cradles the dolls. + +Staring into their painted faces... + +Until — he glimpses movement in the room. He turns. + +AT THE WINDOW + +A quick FLASH of the rich FACTORY OWNER who killed himself: +He steps to the ledge and jumps. + +MIKE + +is stunned. + +AT THE WINDOW + +Another apparition. A PORTLY LADY in a 1950's flowered +dress. + +She sobs, then pulls a chair to the window. She lashes out +at the air, then leaps. + +MIKE + +cries out, shocked. + +Mike cradles the dolls closer. Wanting to cling to +something good... + +When — a FAINT SOUND. Soft and muffled. + +Mike freezes. + 56. + + +From the next room over is the SOUND again. A BABY CRYING, +Then, the gentle murmur of the Mother. + +What?! + +WIDE + +Mike JUMPS to attention. He drops the dolls and frantically +runs to the wall. He KNOCKS on It. + + MIKE + Ma’am? Ma'am! Can you hear me?? + +The baby CRIES louder. Drowning him out. + + MIKE + Quiet, kid. + (he BANGS harder) + Ma’am?! Please! I need your help!! + +The baby CRIES harder. Mike realizes she can’t possibly +hear him. + +Frenzied, he grabs a nearby CHAIR. + +Mike swings the chair, then SMASHES it into the wall! + +Bam! BAM!! + +The baby SCREAMS louder. + +Mike swings harder, brutally. + +CRASH! The chair splits apart. + + MIKE + HELLO?! + +suddenly — SHRRRRRIIIIEEEEEKK! The baby SCREAMS like it's +being BURNED ALIVE. + +Agh! Mike pulls back, holding his ears. + +The SCREAM GETS MAGNIFIED, LOUDER, like the volume on a +stereo being cranked. + +Mike winces, shutting his eyes, trying to block it out — + +When, it. suddenly STOPS. + +TIGHT - MIKE + 57. + + + opens his eyes quizzically. It's all quiet, + + He sits there. Forlorn. + + MIKE + ...Isn't there anyone? + + Slowly, a SHADOW crosses his face. + + ABOVE + + A quick FLASH: A natty MAN in Jazz Age suspenders hangs + himself from a noose on the chandelier. + + MIKE + + grimaces. He yelps and backs away. Frightened, he makes his + way to the bathroom. + + +45 INT. BATHROOM 45 + + Mike enters — then shudders. + + The bathroom is TRANSFORMED. It's no longer the lush, + comforting boudoir of luxury — but a STERILE, FLUORESCENT- + LIT NURSING HOME BATHROOM. + + Sitting in a wheelchair is a decrepit OLD MAN. He peers up, + eyes rheumy and lost, then shouts: + + OLD MAN + I wish I was dead! + + Mike freezes. An endless pause. + + Then, he whispers. + + MIKE + Dad? + + FATHER + Where's mv garden? + (foggy') + I can't smell anything! + + Mike is shaking. + + MIKE + Dad, it's me — Michael. + + FATHER + 58. + + + Who? + + MIKE + (trembling) + Your... son. + + FATHER + (suddenly LOUD) + I HATE this place! + (enraged, confused) + How'd I get here? + +Mike starts crying. + + MIKE + I'm sorry...! + +Mike drops to his knees and hugs him. Holding the old man +tight, his face against his Father's scratchy, unshaven +cheek. + +WIDE OVERHEAD + +We look down on weeping Mike. + + MIKE + I'm so sorry... + +We slowly PULL OUT... revealing that Mike is back in the +hotel bathroom. He’s on his knees, hugging the toilet. + +There's no Father. + +Mike moans, shaken. He looks around in bewilderment. + + MIKE + He was so real. + (upset) + As real as me. + +Wobbly, Mike stands. He looks in the mirror, examining his +haggard face. + +Then — he peeks back at the imagined camera in the vent. +Hm. + + MIKE + This is more than special effects. + +Mike takes out his MINI-RECORDER. He speaks into it: + + MIKE + 59. + + + "Maybe I’m not real. Maybe I'm... + just having a dream. An incredibly + vivid, lucid dream." + +He paces around, thinking. + + MIKE + "When's the last time I remember + going to bed?” + +Beat. + + MIKE + "Today I flew in. Or... was that + yesterday? + (unsure) + "God, what happened yesterday? + Can’t remember anything. Was I on a + train? + (wracking his brain) + "I must've woken up and had + breakfast. Somewhere. But... where + was I? Where did I eat...?" + +Mike is getting nervous. + +He glances at the wall he bashed, then does a take. + +THE WALL'S CRACK + +has grown. The crack has spiderwebbed larger. Clear, +viscous FLUID seeps out... + +Mike grimaces, afraid. He shivers and backs away. + + MIKE + "People say you can't die in your + sleep. Is that true??" + +THE THERMOSTAT + +now reads 60 DEGREES. 58. 55. + +MIKE + +rubs himself. Panic grows across his face. + + MIKE + "They say the shock wakes you up. + If your mind thinks you're about to + die + 60. + + +Freaking, Mike makes his way to the WINDOW. He clicks off +the recorder, then starts to climb out -- + +OUTSIDE + +The wind BLOWS. Mike shudders and prepares to jump. He +looks down — + +MIKE’S POV + +A dizzying, spinning view of the STREET. + +MIKE + +Suddenly, a SLAP of reality. He GASPS and tumbles inside. + + MIKE + What the fuck am I doing? + (dawning) + This is what the room wants! + +Mike's eyes shift about, wary. + +A shadow. He spins. + +Behind a chair, a MAN peeks over the pillow. + +Mike GASPS and crawls away. + + MIKE + There’s gotta be a way out!!! + +WIDE + +Mike looks for options — then notices the FLOOR MAP on the +inside of the door. + +Ah! He darts over and scrutinizes it. + +TIGHT - MAP + +It indicates the building layout. Rooms, halls, exits... + + MIKE + Okay, okay! Look at our options..! + Guest rooms on both sides... + emergency exits... stairwell... + +Mike's eyes gleam manically. Suddenly — + + MIKE + The next window! + 61. + + + He looks back fearfully, then heedlessly calculates. + + MIKE + This room's fifteen feet across, so + the next window... is just... five + feet past that wall! + + Mike dashes across the room. He paces toe-to-heel, + measuring. + + Yes! Hope returns to his face. + + He runs back to his window, then climbs back up. + Invigorated, he CLICKS ON the recorder . + + MIKE + "If I slip and fall, and this tape + gets found among my splattered + remains on 61st Street, let it be + known that it was an accident. + (beat) + "The room did, not win. It did not + possess me to leap! I was just an + arrogant self-hating bastard who + + Suddenly, he STOPS. Puzzled by these words. + + MIKE + Why did just say that? + + A strange dislocation. Then, he pockets the recorder. + + MIKE + This fuckin' room. It's polluted my + mind! + + Defiant, he STEPS OUT. + + MIKE + But I can do this! + + +46 EXT. BUILDING LEDGE - SAME TIME 46 + + Mike gingerly climbs outside, the wind blowing his clothes. + + He peeks downward, then — stifling his fear, tentatively + lowers one foot onto the ledge. + + His fingers claw the brick, then find a decorative cornice + to grab onto. + 62. + + +He takes a breath... then gingerly swings out his other +leg. + +Both feet are out. He gulps, then glances down. + +HIS POV + +Busy traffic, thirteen stories down. + +MIKE + +tries to stay calm. + + MIKE + Just ignore it.. Don’t worry... + +He presses his face to the wall, then... carefully, starts +to inch along the ledge. + +He slides his left toot. Beat. He slides his right... + +He doesn't dare lean back. He blindly reaches out, gripping +the next section of cornice. + +Okay. He slides his left foot. Then his right. + +His face is sweating. He reaches... fingers slipping... +then, his hand finds the next cornice. + +Good. He slides again. He reaches — and still no window. + +CU - MIKE + +Cheek pressed to the dusty brick, he is confused, + + MIKE + Where the hell is it? + +Mike slides his left leg over. His right leg over. + +Starting to jitter, he reaches again. And — no window. + + MIKE + (getting worried) + Where is it?! + +He reaches further... straining... then slides again. + +Nothing. + + MIKE + WHERE IS IT??! + 63. + + +Daring gravity, he leans back, to get a look -- + +SUPERWIDE - THE BUILDING + +And, THERE ARE NO OTHER WINDOWS. THE ENTIRE BUILDING IS ONE +CONTINUOUS SURFACE OF BRICK, EXCEPT FOR MIKE AND 1408. + +Mike SCREAMS, horrified. + + MIKE + NOOOOO!!! + +He flounders, stunned. Mike slips. + + MIKE + AGGHH! + +Mike falls, BANGING his face on the wall. + +He DROPS, about to plummet, desperately clambering, +scratching his fingers into the old brick/when — + +BAM! One hand snags the ledge as it passes by. + +Chest heaving, hysterical, Mike catches his breath. + +The wind pelts him. + +Mike whimpers. + +Then, he resignedly starts shimmying back to 1408. Slowly, +then, faster... his expression despondent... + +TIGHT - MIKE'S HANDS + +pull him along, Struggling to return to the hell he was +escaping. + +AT THE WINDOW + +Mike finally reaches his room. Quivering, sucking in all +his strength, he LIFTS HIMSELF UP onto the ledge. A shaky +beat — then, he looks back inside. + +FAST ZOOM + +across the room, RIGHT UP TO THE MAP on the door. + +ZOOMING TIGHTER, until the MAP FILLS THE FRAME. And — it's +alive, the black lines slithering around like worms. The +map rearranges itself, doors and walls moving about. + 64. + + + MIKE + + goes pale. + + Suddenly -- the Portly Lady steps out into the window. She + is sobbing. + + PORTLY LADY + May Jesus forgive me... + (beat; she scowls + hatefully) + And FUCK YOU, HENRY SMITH! + + She starts to jump -- when she suddenly sees Mike. A + bizarre discombobulation, then she lashes out at him, + punching at him like the movements we saw earlier. + + Freaked out, she leaps. + + PORTLY LADY + Ahhhhh! + + She hurtles past. + + Mike gasps and jerks away. Scared, he tumbles back inside. + + +47 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 47 + + Mike lands on the room floor, covered in sweat, terrified. + + Shaking, huddled in a fetal position. + + He rocks back and forth... then hears a strange CLINKING + sound. Click-clack click-clack click-clack... + + The room darkens... + + Wearied, he looks up — and FREEZES. + + THE WINDOW + + has been BRICKED-UP. Completely solid. + + MIKE + + moans, unnerved. He peers in disbelief, then runs and + pounds on the brick. + + It's old. Like it's been there forever. + + Despairing, Mike tears into the + 65. + + +48 INT. BEDROOM 48 + + And — the BEDROOM WINDOW IS GONE. The WALL IS SOLID + DRYWALL. + + No trace there ever was a window. + + Mike starts hyperventilating. + + MIKE + No — that's impossible — + + He starts feeling the wall. Searching for anything... + + MIKE + It can't... I know... + + Mike is losing it. On the edge of sanity* He grapples for + his minirecorder and hits REWIND. + + We HEAR Mike's voice speed by, chipmunk-like. He hits PLAY: + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + "What did Olin say something about + poison gas —" + + No* Mike speeds further. PLAY. + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + "Hotel rooms are naturally creepy—" + + No. He speeds further. Then: + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + "The bedroom has a queen-size bed? + two nightstands and butterfly + wallpaper. + (beat) + "The room has no window." + + HUH? + + A chilling beat. + + MIKE + No... + + Shaking, he hits rewind. Play. + + MIKE’S RECORDED VOICE + "The room has no window." + 66. + + + Mike CRIES out, scared. He hits rewind. Play. + + WOMAN’S RECORDED VOICE + (whisper) + "Your daughter was eaten by wolves + on the Connecticut turnpike." + + MIKE + AHH! + + Mike DROPS the recorder, like he's been electrocuted. + + He trembles, pained. + + CLOSEUP - CLOCK + + The unplugged clock continues ticking down: 32:14... 32:13. + + MIKE + + shuts his eyes. Until — a TORMENTED SOBBING. + + What now? He opens his eyes. The SOBBING is in the next + room. It sounds like two people... + + Afraid of what he’ll find — he peeks into the next room. + + +49 INT. LIVING ROOM 49 + + There is a VISION. A FLASHBACK FROM THE PAST: + + A MAN and WOMAN are locked in a tight embrace, in a doctor' + office. We can't see their faces. They both cry, the man + hugging and comforting the woman. + + MIKE + + stares anguished. All color drains from his face. + + FLASHBACK VISION: + + The couple looks up — and they’re Young Mike and Lily. Both + have tear-streaked faces. + + LILY + I can’t accept it... + + YOUNG MIKE + (bereaved) + But he said — + 67. + + + LILY + Maybe he's wrong! Doctors don't + know everything! + (beat) + There are experimental + treatments... + +Young Mike shakes his head. + + YOUNG MIKE + She's doomed. + + LILY + Don’t say that! + +We REVEAL Grade in a hospital bed, listening behind a +curtain. She's nine, pallid and thin. + + LILY (O.S.) + She'll only get through this if she + believes. We need to give her hope! + + YOUNG MIKE (O.S.) + Why? So she can spend the end of + her life being LIED to?! + +Grade’s eyes widen. + +ANGLE - MIKE + +He recoils, shocked she heard this. He's crushed. + + MIKE + Gracie... + +Mike feebly extends his arm — + +When — + +BLACKNESS! + +The room goes COMPLETELY DARK. + +Mike gasps, confused. + + MIKE (V.O.) + H-hey — + +He stumbles. CRASH! A lamp FALLS and breaks. + + MIKE FV.O.) + Ow! + 68. + + + We hear Mike's breathing accelerate, getting heavy. + + Suddenly, a TERRIFYING VOICE. The VOICE OF THE ROOM, + rasping, non-human, coming from everywhere: + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + ARE YOU A MEAT EATER, MR. ENSLIN??! + + MIKE (V.O.) + (furious) + W-what? Who are you?!! How the fuck + do you know about my daughter?? + + We HEAR Mike trip around. He reaches for the LIGHT SWITCH. + + He frantically FLICKS it — up down, up down -— + + +50 INT. LIVING ROOM - NORMAL 50 + + BLINK! The lights go on. + + The room is back to normal. Mike is gasping, heaving. + + Looking about. Okay. Okay. Everything seems alright... + + He turns — and, AGHH! + + HIS POV + + A terrifying SKINNY LADY lunges at him! Grabbing his + throat! + + MIKE + + screams, startled. Fighting her off. + + THE SKINNY LADY + + grips harder, snarling. + + MIKE + + staggers back, trying to push her bony hands away — + + When he glances sideways into a MIRROR. In the reflection, + he is alone. Staggering back, choking himself. + + What?! + + Mike yelps and releases his own grip. He coughs, struggling + for breath. He peers around. He is alone. + 69. + + + MIKE + JESUS... + +He shivers, stupefied, Suddenly — + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + READY TO LEAVE?!!! + + MIKE + (he jumps, startled) + NOT YOUR WAY!! + +Dazed, Mike rubs himself for warmth. + +THE THERMOSTAT + +clicks to 50. + +MIKE + +runs to his duffel. He rummages for a COAT and quickly puts +it on. Underneath is his CELLPHONE. + +Desperate, he flips it open — but it flashes: "BATTERY LOW” + +What?! Mike growls, livid. Suddenly he glimpses something +else — his LAPTOP. + +Hmm..! His eyes light up. He nervously glances back, then +quickly covers the, computer. Mike grabs a shirt. + +AT THE VENT + +Mike runs to the vent, cool air blowing down. + +Suddenly, he pushes the desk over, WHUMP! Everything on it +CRASHES down. Mike drags the desk to the wall, then climbs +up. He glances suspiciously at the little black tube inside +the vent... then hooks the shirt over the grate, blocking +it. + +Mike jumps down. He runs to his + +COMPUTER + +Mike grabs it and snaps it open. The SCREEN lights up. + + MIKE + Good, good... + +Mike spins the mouse, clicking "Internet." + 70. + + + MIKE + C'mon, this crappy old hotel + must've popped for wireless — + +He waits patiently. The WI-FI icon scrolls, Searching... +searching. .. then — + +"NO SIGNAL AVAILABLE" + +Mike groans. + +WIDE + +Irked, he grabs the laptop and starts stalking around the +room. Holding it over his head. Hunting for a sweet spot. + +The icon flashes red... green... red. Mike glances at the +bricked-over window. + + MIKE + Maybe there's a signal outside... + +Mike stands on a chair, holding the laptop up against the +brick. And... with a little jiggling — the icon turns +GREEN. + + MIKE + AHH!!! + +The screen flashes. An INTERNET WINDOW OPENS. + + INTERNET LADY VOICE + Good evening, Mike. + + MIKE + YEAH! Good evening, Fake Voice + Lady!!! + +Mike gleefully dances about. He FLIPS the Bird. + + MIKE + And FUCK YOU, Mr. Scary Room Voice + Guy! I’m connected!! + +INSERT - COMPUTER + +Mike goes to his contacts. He quickly clicks on "BUDDY +LIST." + +And — one name is there: "LILY_ENSLIN" + + MIKE + 71. + + + Ah, shit. + +Mike winces — he has no choice. He steels himself, then +types into the Instant Message Box: "LILY, I NEED HELP" + +Na response. + +Mike types again: "EMERGENCY!” + +Long beat. Then, a WINDOW OPENS UP as a REAL-TIME WEBCAM +LINK. A woman's face stares back at us: Mike’s ex. + +WEBCAM CU - LILY + +She's more weary than pretty these days. Just hanging on. + +She looks dryly at Mike. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Look what the internet dragged in. + + MIKE + Lily! Thank God — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + How about "hello." + + MIKE + I don't have time — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Yeah, well neither do I. + +She goes to sign off. + + MIKE + Wait! Wait! Please --! + +She stops. + + MIKE + 1 need you call the cops, send 'em + to West 61st and — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + You’re in the City? + + MIKE + Er... yeah. 61st and — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + 72. + + + You're in the City, and you didn't + tell me?! + + MIKE + I... uh, I was only supposed to be + here a few hours — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Jesus I Since the divorce, you've + been like a phantom! Now suddenly + you show up, you need a favor — + + MIKE + Lily, shut up!! I'm in danger. + +Lily freezes, shocked. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + What?! + + MIKE + I'm locked in a hotel room! There’s + someone... something... trying to + kill me. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Mike, back up! Who?! + + MIKE + I can’t explain. Just call the + cops! Tell ’em Dolphin Hotel... + +Suddenly, an unexpected HISSING. Mike looks up. + +ABOVE + +The EMERGENCY SPRINKLERS go off! Water RAINS DOWN upon Mike +and the computer! + + MIKE + No — NO! + +Mike tries to cover the laptop, but it’s too late. Water +falls through the keys and into the electronics. + +Lily’s IMAGE over the screen begins to BREAK UP. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Mike... I... can’t hear... + + MIKE + Oh Christ! Lily, Dolphin Hotel! + 1408! Bust down the door! + 73. + + +PSSSTTTT! The computer screen goes BLACK. + + MIKE + FUCK! FUCK FUCK FUCK!!! + +Raining droplets are everywhere, falling into the electric +LAMPS. + +The LIGHTS begin to flicker, creating a slow strobe effect. + +FLASHES OF LIGHT + +illuminate the painting of grandma in the rocking chair. + +Darkness. Then FLASH! + +The painting changes; Grandma is now standing, staring out. + +FLASH! + +The old lady turns into THE BEAUTIFUL WOMAN from the lobby. + +Her breast is bare, BLOOD drips from her nipple, down, into +her baby’s open mouth. The baby’s face is blue, dead. + +FLASHI THE PAINTING OF THE SAILORS + +turns into a ROTTING GHOST SHIP. They sail into a roiling +sea, covered in black clouds. The seamen's faces are pale, +starving, staring hopelessly. + +Mike turns, shaky. FLASH! + +THE PAINTING OF THE HUNT + +The British men in red coats and hats get pulled off their +horses by the dogs. The dogs RIP the men apart, tearing +their flesh. + +MIKE + +whimpers. Around him, rain pours harder. WHOOOSH1 A +TORNADO­LIKE SOUND roars. A liquid churning, growing +louder... + +Mike covers his ears and careens through the sopping mess, +shivering, looking for a way out. His feet smoosh in the +soaking carpet. + +Mike passes the Thermostat. It's dropped to 48 DEGREES. + +He pounds on the closed-up windows. + 74. + + +He tugs on the door. + +Wind BLOWS fiercer. A BLAST OF COLD gushes from the AIR +VENT, blowing the shirt down. + +Mike’s eyes narrow, thinking. Intrigued, he takes a step +closer to the VENT... + + MIKE + Ho ho. That goes somewhere. Maybe I + can just pull a Bruce Willis. + +Mike CLAMBERS UP onto the desk. He's right beneath the +grate. He takes out his PENLIGHT and shines it up through +the opening. + +INSIDE THE VENT + +It's dark, foreboding. In the shadows is the: black tube. + +Mike puts his face up to it. + +ANGLE - MIKE + + MIKE + Hello, perv. I'm coming to get you. + +He tugs the grate -— it's fastened with four bolts. Fine. +He hurriedly pulls out his trusty LETTER OPENER and starts +to use it as a screwdriver... + + MIKE + Okay. Here goes nothin'. + +Mike unscrews the first bolt. It falls to the ground. + +An anxious pause — then he quickly unscrews the second +bolt. + +The third. + +The fourth. + +Wary, Mike reaches and slowly pulls the grate off the +ceiling. + +He drops it, watching it hit the floor with a CLANG. + +Beat — then he slowly turns back to the now-open vent. + +Suddenly, he LUNGES at the tiny black tube and GRABS it. + 75. + + + MIKE + HA!!! + + Mike squeezes it in his fist -- then reacts, surprised. + + CLOSEUP - MIKE'S HAND + + He's holding a roll of DUCT TAPE. That’s all. + + ANGLE - MIKE + + A bewildered silence. + + MIKE + There's... nobody watching me??! + (long pause; confused) + Why am I disappointed? + + A halting moment. He gathers his wits, then stares into the + open VENT. + + INSIDE THE VENT + + It's metal DARKNESS. Air WHOOSHES sinisterly. + + Mike gulps, then waves his pathetic letter opener. He + SHOUTS. + + MIKE + I've got a knife! + + No response. + + Mike steels himself, then painfully lifts his body up + into... + + +51 INT. AIR-CONDITIONING VENT - SAME TIME 51 + + Mike clangs onto the hard cold surface. He pulls his legs + up. + + Inside, it's black. We can’t see a foot ahead. + + Mike aims his penlight, but it’s just a dull glow. Shadows + and rat droppings. + + Mike takes a breath, then squirms forward. + + It's murky and unsettling. The air BLASTS. Mike slithers + along... unsure, creeped-out. Until, his penlight reveals + 76. + + +A JUNCTION AHEAD + +A "T" split. Shafts go left and right. + +Mike stops — not sure where to go. He shines the tiny light +both ways... but the beam disappears into dimness. + +Then — faint VOICES. + +Mike's eyes bulge. + +The VOICES are from the right. + +Mike gets excited. Other people! He scrambles down the +vent. + + MIKE + Hey! Hey!! + +Not far, he sees LIGHT. It's coming from a GRATE in the +floor of the shaft! + +Mike hustles faster. He reaches the grate — then looks +down. + +BELOW - HOTEL ROOM + +It's the next Hotel Room. From above, we see the Young +Mother holding her CRYING baby. + + YOUNG MOTHER + Shh, shh. Mama loves her baby... + +The Baby WAILS harder. + +The Mother turns — REVEALING SHE'S LILY. Young Lily, from +the PAST. + + LILY + C’mon, Grade. Stop crying. + (frazzled) + No, I don’t know where your daddy + is. Probably boozing it up... + +MIKE + +goes ashen. + + MIKE + N-n-no...! Honey, I’m here... + +YOUNG LILY + 77. + + +can't hear him. She carries Baby Grade into the next room. + +MIKE + +is tormented. He scurries to follow her. He rushes along +the vent. Banging himself on the sharp metal — + + MIKE + Ow! Wait — + +He spots the next GRATE. Braced, he rushes over to it -- +then GASPS. + +BELOW + +is a PARK. Trees, a path. + +Then two men walk by. Young Mike from the PAST, arguing +with his Father. Father is younger, healthy. + + FATHER + Mike, don’t do this! She needs you. + (reticent) + She lost a child, too. + + YOUNG MIKE + (enraged) + Why do you always lecture me? + + FATHER + I'm not -- + + YOUNG MIKE + I’m an adult! I can make my own + decisions! + +Mike storms away. + +MIKE IN THE VENT + +His face collapses* Pained by the memory. + +He stares mutely, then feels something strange. Icky. He +turns the penlight on his hand... + +And crawling across his fingers is a COCKROACH. + + MIKE + Ugh...! + +Mike brushes away the bug. The penlight’s beam swings — +revealing HUNDREDS OF ROACHES. The VENT IS FESTERING. + 78. + + + MIKE + YEOGGH! + +Grossed-out, Mike hurriedly BACKS UP. Rushing backwards +through the vent. + +Hurry! + +The beam rolls, grazing across skittering bugs. + +Mike rushes faster. His breathing echoes through the +claustrophic metal. + +Suddenly, he reaches a junction — and DROPS. + +Aggh!! He's plunged down a + +VERTICAL SHAFT + +Mike plummets into blackness, falling backwards! + +He flails, then SLAMS his hand, just catching the edge. + +Hanging on for dear life. + +Mike glances down. It’s ABSOLUTELY BLACK below. + +With a rush of adrenaline, Mike struggles to pull himself +out Straining, muscles clenching... he lifts himself up. + +Okay. Mike sucks in air. Resolved, he whirls about to race +forward — + +And — BANG!!! + +CLOSEUP + +Pasty KEVIN O’MALLEY is face-to-face with him! Kevin's eyes +are wild, his skin bloated and blue. + +Mike SCREAMS, startled. + +Kevin gazes crazily, his mouth a pinched grimace. + + MIKE + Kevin... ? + (trembling) + Kevin O'Malley?? + +Kevin stares, unspeaking. His breathing a HORRIBLE WHEEZE. + 79. + + +Then... he slowly lifts his head. Revealing his THROAT IS +SLICED OPEN, ear to ear. + +His bloody windpipe is visible, raspy. Kevin’s mouth opens +and shuts, puppetlike, but only a moist gurgle comes out. + +Mike recoils, terrified. + +ON THE MEN + +Kevin O’Malley raises a 6-INCH NEEDLE AND THREAD. He points +and gurgles a barely intelligible phrase. + +Then, again: "Fix it." + +Hikes J Mike pulls back in disgust and fear. + +Kevin O'Malley suddenly lunges forward. + +HELP! Mike spins away. Kevin CHASES. Freakily gurgling, +"Fix it! Fix it!" + +MIKE + +barrels through the tiny space. Rushing for his life. + +Kevin O'Malley SKITTERS after him. Mike races, reaching + +THE T-JUNCTION + +He squirms down the RIGHT VENT. + +He makes it a few feet, when -- + +CRUNCH! THE.VENT COLLAPSES. RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM!! As if a +giant hand has squeezed it like a Coke can. + +Mike yelps and jolts back. + +The Vent continues CRUSHING IN, moving closer! He turns — + +DOWN THE LEFT VENT + +comes Kevin, his face a horrible rictus, waving the needle. + +MIKE + +crawls like hell! Faster, towards the + +MAIN VENT + 80. + + + Where in the distance he can see the OPENING to 1408! A + slim square of light — + + THE OTHER VENT + + keeps CRUSHING! Metal SMASHING closer — + + MIKE'S FEET + + scurry as fast as they can. + + SLAM! Kevin O'Malley STABS his needle into Mike's leg. + + Mike SCREAMS, pained. + + He KICKS backward. His foot SHUSHES through Kevin's head, + like a sponge. Kevin O'Malley collapses, the CRUSHING VENT + SQUEEZING him out of view. + + Mike speeds faster. Room 1408 visible — + + The CRUSHING, TWISTING METAL is now inches away — + + As Mike HURLS himself forward... + + +52 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 52 + + ...and falls through the vent into the room. + + SLAM!!! He bounces off the desk, hitting the ground — + + as the sheet metal Vent BUCKLES CLOSED. BAM!!! + + TIGHT - MIKE + + He lies there, overwhelmed. Breathing in fits, face + drenched in sweat, absolutely dumbstruck. + + He looks up at the ceiling... then around the room. Beat. + + MIKE + I need a drink. + + Mike staggers over to the Mini-Bar. He whips open the + little refrigerator door - then gasps. + + INSIDE THE MINI-BAR + + is a MINIATURE SET of OLIN'S OFFICE. A TINE LITTLE OPEN + SIDE IN HIS WING-CHAIR, sipping Cognac. + 81. + + +Mike grimaces, flabbergasted. + + MIKE + What are yon doing in there?? + (vexed) + Where’s my BOOZE?! + +Olin stiles? unruffled. + + OLIN + I was just checking, sir. Are your + accommodations exceeding your + expectations? + + MIKE + You know GODDAMN WELL they are: + What do you want from me?! + + OLIN + No no no. What do you want? What do + YOU want, Mr. Enslin? You sought + this room. + + MIKE + I was doing my job! + + OLIN + (like he misheard) + Sorry? + + MIKE + My job! I'm a writer! I tell people + the truth! + +Hm. Olin swirls his Cognac. + + OLIN + That's right, you don't believe in + anything. You like shattering + people's hopes. + + MIKE + That's bullshit! + + OLIN + Why do people believe in ghosts? + For fun? No. They want the promise + of something after death... + +A COLLAGE of tearful VOICES... + + SORROWFUL VOICE #1 + She’s in a better place, Mike... + 82. + + + SORROWFUL VOICE #2 + She was in so much pain ,.. + + SORROWFUL VOICE #3 + I'm sure she's smiling down at us + right now... + +Mike winces, agonized. + + OLIN + How many spirits have you broken? + + MIKE + AAAAAAH! + +Enraged, Mike SLAMS shut the Mini-Bar. + + MIKE + I WANT MY DRINK!! + +WIDE + +Mike spins. He looks around, then spots the Cognac in the +bedroom. Ah! He beelines for the bottle, then snatches it +up. He uncorks it and thirstily chugs the drink. + +Pause — then he calms. He glances down at the hotel Bible. + +Curious, Mike picks it up, then flips through. + +INSERT - BIBLE + +The PAGES are all now blank. + +Weird. + +MIKE + +frowns. Then, a faraway voice... + + GRACIE (V.O.) + Why is our bible purple? + +Mike looks up. + +There is a spectral + +FLASHBACK VISION: + +The Enslin family’s old apartment, set-up as a grim +hospice. + 83. + + +Gracie lies in bed, in a pink butterfly nightgown, in the +final, terrible stages of cancer. She’s skeletal. Waxen. + +Lily sits by her, gripping a purple BIBLE. She laughs +awkwardly. + + LILY + I — I dunno. It was a wedding + present. + (she caresses it) + But it's nice. The cover is real + leather... + + GRACIE + Are there people where I'm going? + + LILY + You're not going anywhere. + + GRACIE + That isn’t what Daddy said. + +We reveal Young Mike sitting in the window, smoking a +cigarette. He stubs out the smoke. + + YOUNG MIKE + Daddy says a lot of stupid things. + (he comes over to the + bed) + You're too young to understand, but + when you grow up and become an + adult... + (he forces a smile) + you'll realize I'm crazy. + +Grade giggles. Mike gently brushes her cheek. + + GRACIE + Daddy, everyone dies. + +A tense pause. + +Lily glances at Mike. He struggles to be consoling. + + YOUNG MIKE + Y-you're right. Everyone dies... + + LILY + (she jumps in) + And then you'll go to a better + place. And lots of people will be + there... + (her voice cracks) + 84. + + + All your friends.... And you’11 be + able to run around again... play... + +Grade looks up at Mike. + + GRACIE + Do you believe that, Daddy...? + +A profound silence. He stammers, stuck. + + YOUNG MIKE + I... I... + +Grade stares pleadingly. + +Waiting. Then — + + YOUNG MIKE + Yes. I do. + + GRACIE + (she breaks into a smile) + Good. Then I do too. + +We hold on her heartfelt face. + + CUT TO: + +ANOTHER VISION + +Flames RAGE. It1s a cremation. + +A tiny coffin enters the burning fire. + +PRESENT - MIKE + +He sobs, pained. Wincing at this memory. + +FLASHBACK VISION + +The crematorium glows white, then blazes piercingly hot. + +The casket disappears into the heat. + + CUT TO: + +ANOTHER FLASHBACK + +Young Mike sits on Grade's bed, weeping. He's unshaven, +distraught, clinging to her old pink nightgown. + +Grade is gone. + 85. + + + Lily can't even look at him. + + YOUNG MIKE + She could have hung on. But we had + to fill her head! With all those + fucking stories about the glorious + afterlife... + + LILY + (crying) + Why do you have to blame anyone?! + + Mike throws down the nightie. + + YOUNG MIKE + I gotta get out. + + He jumps up and charges out of the apartment. SIAM! + + CUT TO: + + +53 INT. 1408 - PRESENT 53 + + Mike breaks down, devastated. + + He slumps back against the wall, whispering to himself. + + MIKE + Grade... Grade... + + He holds his gut, a terrible ache that will never leave. + + A sorrowful silence... an emptiness... until — + + CLICK. + + Mike turns, startled. His MINI-RECORDER has clicked into + PLAY. Its wheels spin... + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + "Heyz there's nothing to feel + guilty about. When a couple loses a + child, 80% of the time, they end up + divorced --" + + MIKE + No... I should’ve stayed — + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + 86. + + + "And those bad doctors weren’t your + fault. You worked freelance. You + couldn’t help If you were stuck + with a crappy HMO... + + MIKE + Stop — + + MIKE'S RECORDED VOICE + "And that b.s. about second-hand + smoke? Chon! It’s not like puffing + a couple cigarettes gives your + daughter cancer...” + + MIKE + Jesus! Shut up! + +Mike grabs the recorder and hits STOP. + +INSERT - RECORDEr + +A pause — then the wheels suddenly lurch into motion, by +themselves. + +The grating? scary voice of the Room SCREECHES out. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + (over tape recorder) + SHUT up YOURSELF, ASSHOLE! YOU + WALKED OUT, LIKE A SNIVELING LITTLE + PUSSY! WALKED OUT ON YOUR WIFE, + YOUR FATHER, YOUR FRIENDS... + + MIKE + (bitter) + I was sparing them —- + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + YOU’RE A MISERABLE LIAR! + +Mike stares desolately. + + MIKE + I — I was searching... + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + SEARCHING FOR WHAT? FOR SOMETHING + THAT COULD PROVE YOU WRONG? + +MIKE + +Mike sighs. Beaten. + 87. + + + MIKE + Yes. + + Suddenly — RIIIIIINNGG! + + He spins. + + THE FAX MACHINE + + starts whirring. It's LCD screen says, "Receiving”. + + PAPER begins feeding. + + Mike peers, confused. + + TIGHT - FAX MACHINE + + Something begins coining into the output tray. + + Not a piece of paper. + + But his daughter's PINK BUTTERFLY NIGHTGOWN. Stained with + mucus, blood, all the liquids of her dying. + + SHOOMI It's ejected from the machine, into Mike's hands. + + MIKE + AHHHHH!!! + + Mike tries to push it off, freaked, but the mucus on the + nightgown clings to his hands. + + Mike shakes it, revulsed. He desperately races away — + + +54 INT. BATHROOM 54 + + Into the. bathroom. Mike throws the nightie in the sink, + violently turning on the water. + + FWOOSH! Water pours out, everywhere. + + Mike shudders to tear the nightgown away. It comes loose, + discolored fluids floating in the sink... + + Frightened, Mike backs out, SLAMMING the door. + + +55 INT. LIVING ROOM 55 + + Mike bolts back in, shivering. He can SEE HIS BREATH. + 88. + + +The Thermostat has dropped to 32 degrees. + +Water droplets are FROZEN AROUND THE ROOM. A weird, almost +Christmas-like atmosphere. + +Mike blinks. He stares up. + +THE WALL'S CRACK + +has grown. The fissures cover the walls, ceiling and floor. + +Like a spiderweb. + +THE CLOCK + +keeps ticking down. 16:41... 16:40... 16:39... + +MIKE + +seems lost. Eyes blank. Surrendered, he lies on the floor, +spreading his arms in the frost like a child making an ice +angel... + +Then, a distant voice, like a dream... + + LILY (O.S.) + Can you hear me...? + +Mike bolts up, dazed. He wheels around. + +ANGLE - HIS COMPUTER + +is working again! Lily’s glitchy IMAGE is on the SCREEN! + + MIKE + Lily?! + +Mike rushes over, astonished. She smiles to see him. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Mike! Jesus! I've been trying you + to get through... + + MIKE + Did you call the police? + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + They're at the hotel. + + MIKE + They're... w-why aren't they here? + 89. + + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Didn't you say the Dolphin — + + MIKE + Right! Yes — + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + You're sure? + + MIKE + Of course I’m sure! Please! Send + them to 1408! + +Lily bites her lip, scared. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Mike, they're in 1408. The room's + empty. + +We PUSH IN TO MIKE. His blood freezes, terrified. + + MIKE + Th — that’s impossible. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Mike, where the hell are you?! + +Mike looks all around. + +Suddenly everything in the room looks more menacing. +Jagged. + +Mike’s face collapses to a whisper. + + MIKE + I... don't know, + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Don’t panic! We can figure this + out. + +Mike blanches. Hands shaking, he picks up the room FILE. + +Vintage PHOTOS of grisly 1408 DEATH SCENES; A MILITARY MAN. +A YOUNG EXECUTIVE IN A DERBY. A CUTE WOMAN. + +All bloodied and gone. + + MIKE + No, we can't. + (morose) + I'm going to die. + 90. + + +ON THE COMPUTER + +Lily goes frantic. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + You 1 re freaking! Look, don 11 + move! I can get there in fifteen + minutes -— + +Mike glances at the CLOCK. 14:51... 14:50... + +He shudders. + + MIKE + That’11 be too late. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + No it WON'T! I'll check every room! + M-maybe you got the numbers mixed- + up. You're in 1480, or 1804... + + MIKE + (emphatic) + Lily, please stay away! I don't + want anything to happen to you — + +This admission catches them both by surprise. + +Beat — then she flashes a tender smile. + + LILY (OVER VIDEOLINK) + Well... I feel the same way. See + you soon - + +CLICK! She signs off. + + MIKE + Lily? Lily!!! + +He shakes the computer... + +When suddenly — WHUMPIJ The ENTIRE ROOM SHAKES, as if by a +huge EARTHQUAKE. + +WIDE + +PLASTER falls from the ceiling. Furniture and lamps CRASH. + +The entire FLOOR begins to buckle and crack. + +Mike loses his footing and stumbles to the ground. His head +strikes the floor with a sickening CRACK! + 91. + + +CLOSEUP - MIKE + +THUD. + +His eyes shut —- then reopen, dazed. He looks up, +disoriented and childlike. + +ABOVE + +A light frost is falling. ICE CRYSTALS form on his hair. + +Then, the ARMOIRE swivels into view... and comes DOWN. + +Yikes!! Mike LURCHES out of the way, as — SMASH! — the +massive cabinet crashes to the floor, splintering. + +Mike groggily leaps to his feet. He gazes around. + +THE SUITE + +is a complete wreck. Broken furniture, collapsed ceiling +and walls. + +The floor has BOWED around the bed, which lies at a slant. + +Mike's feet are in liquid. A sludgy half-frozen muck. His +eyes follow the source of the water. Puddled in the +corner... then up... trickling down the wall... leading to + +THE PAINTING OF THE GHOST SHIP + +Which is now PHOTO-REALISTIC and ALIVE. Tossing in the +waves! + +The jaundiced, starved faces of the sailors are MOVING. +They SCREAM, frenzied. They're all now the VICTIMS FROM +1408: The Natty Man in suspenders. The Factory Owner. And +most prominently, Kevin O’Malley, hands on the tiller, his +eves boring straight at us. + +Chilled, Mike turns — + +THE PAINTING OF THE HUNT + +The dogs are ravenous, BARKING! Tearing their masters to +pieces. The men moan. The horses run off. + +THE PAINTING OF MOTHER AND CHILD + +The blue baby’s mouth is twisted, teeth filed to RAZOR +SHARP POINTS. The mother weeps with despair as the baby +HISSES and attacks her. + 92. + + + Mike covers his eyes, unable to take it. + + ON THE PAINTINGS + + The CRIES grow louder, more insistent. The ship rocks + harder. + + The ocean pounds. + + The SHRIEKING grows. + + MIKE + Stop! STOP!! + + Unhinged, Mike SLAMS his fist at the painting, trying to + stop it. His knuckles BREAK the glass, ripping the canvas. + + Suddenly — FLOOOOOOSH! SEA WATER BLASTS FROM THE PAINTING! + + LIKE THE FORCE OF A HUNDRED FIRE HOSES. + + MIKE + + gets SLAMMED against the wall. + + The ROOM FILLS with water, at an incredible speed. Higher, + higher — + + WIDE + + Mike struggles to float above. Furniture bangs around — + + Mike fights the current. Debris swallows him up. Fatigued, + delirious, he starts muttering the Act of Contrition: + + MIKE + "0 my God, I am heartily sorry for + having offended Thee, and I detest + all my sins... + + Mike's will gives out. He gets pulled under. + + +56 INT. 1408 - UNDERWATER 56 + + All is grim, like slow-motion. Murky and green. + + Underwater, Mike turns, and sees the back wall has + vanished. + + In its place is the GHOST SHIP. Sinking downward toward a + black abyss. + 93. + + + Mike gapes, his eyes bulging from lack of air. + + Everything swirls. He spins, getting sucked deeper... + + His arms tire. Bubbles pap from his mouth, as he begins to + breathe in water. Mike's body goes limp. He’s pulled into + the ocean's darkness... + + All seems lost... the end imminent, when — + + A strange object unexpectedly appears. + + Foggy, Mike looks up. + + Then — he gasps. + + IT’S MIKE'S SURFBOARD + + Hovering above him, like a godsend. + + Mike is startled, confused — but grateful. He lurches and + grabs it — hanging on — his last chance for life. When, it + unexpectedly pitches and HAMMERS him in the head. + + CUT TO: + + +57 EXT. BEACH - DAY 57 + + ECU - MIKE'S FACE + + Mike lies mutely on his back, on the sand. + Hyperventilating. + + Winded. Eyes glassy. + + But, alive. + + He's back in the beach scene from., the beginning. + + Then... a faint BUZZING. Mike looks up. + + IN THE SKY + + The small AIRPLANE flies overhead, towing the BANNER. It + passes through the brightness, in sharp silhouette. + + Mike squints, trying to read it. + + The plane crosses a cloud, and the banner becomes readable: + + "CHEAP AUTO INSURANCE CALL 1-800-222-1408" + 94. + + + MIKE'S + + eyes widen. + + TIGHT THE BANNER + + The four numbers: ”1408" + + MIKE + + trembles, everything spinning, his memories collapsing. + + Nothing making any sense... + + His chest tightens. His brain feels like it's going to + explode. Then — + + A wet LIFEGUARD thrusts his head into view. + + LIFEGUARD + Sir! Can you breathe? Is there any + water in your lungs? + (beat) + Can you focus?? + + Mike’s jaw quivers, but forms no words. Utterly drained, he + passes out. + + DISSOLVE TO: + + ECU - MIKE + + His head is bandaged and his face drawn, but his breathing + is even. + + Slowly, he opens his eyes. + + +58 INT. HOSPITAL ROOM ~ DAY 58 + + Mike is lying in a hospital bed, hooked up to an IV. A tree + is outside the window. + + LILY (0.S.) + He's alive...! + + Mike turns. Sitting in a chair, watching him, is Lily. she + stands, relieved. Smiling anxiously. + + MIKE + W-w-where am I? + 95. + + + LILY + You're in a hospital. + +Mike wipes his eyes, confused. + + MIKE + In New York? + + LILY + New York?? + (puzzled) + No — Miami. You got hit in the head + with your board. You've been out + for a day. + +Mike tries to takes this in, uncomprehending. She comes +over. + + LILY + They called me, so I flew down, + (awkward shrug) + Guess I'm still listed as your next + of kin... + + MIKE + So I’m not in New York? + + LILY + No! Why do you keep saying that?! + + MIKE + Because I thought... God, it was so + vivid. I must've gotten banged in + the brains so hard, all my circuits + fried. + (trying to focus) + I was trapped... I was dying... in + this weird hotel. The Dolphin — + + LILY + The what? + + MIKE + The Dolphin. The one on the + southeast corner of 61st and 8th. + + LILY + (beat) + Mike, that's a Banana-Republic. + +His expression falls. + +She trembles, then starts weeping. + 96. + + + MIKE + Hey. Why are you crying? + + LILY + Because — I haven't seen you for so + long. And then -- we’re here, like + this: + (soft) + In another hospital. + +His eyes get watery. She gets emotional, then suddenly +hurries into the bathroom. + +IN THE BATHROOM + +Lily grabs a tissue and wipes her face. She stares in the +mirror. A final sniffle, then she tentatively returns, + +BACK AT THE BED + + LILY + Do you know it's been three years? + + MIKE + Since — + + LILY + Since... + +They both trail off. She peers at him, still terribly hurt. + +Her voice drops to a hush. + + LILY + Mike, why’d you leave? + + MIKE + (somber, he whispers) + Because... every time I looked at + you, I saw her face. + +Lily shudders, silent. + +Mike reaches out... straining... and takes her hand. + + MIKE + I'm sorry. Sorry I blew it... sorry + for everything... + + LILY + Everything? + 97. + + + MIKE + For — Grade... + + LILY + You had nothing to do with Grade. + + He looks in her eyes, seeing the truth of his life. + + MIKE + Then — I'm sorry for running away. + For making mistakes. For abandoning + everyone... + + CLOSEUP - LILT + + She nods, acceptingly. + + LILY + You should get some rest. + + CUT TO: + + +59 INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR - LATER 59 + + Lily huddles by herself, talking on a CELLPHONE. + + LILY + (on cellphone) + I think I'm gonna stay a couple + extra days. + (beat; embarrassed) + No, nothing's going on. But Mike + had a concussion and he's talking + kind of strange. Almost + hallucinatory... + (beat) + He might need a little help. + + CUT TO: + + +60 INT. RENTAL CAR - DRIVING - DAY 60 + + Lily drives a white rental car. Mike sits in the passenger + seat staring, a large bandage across his temple. + + The boulevard is quite uninspiring: Overgrown palm trees, + graffitied Cuban markets, faded pink motels. + + LILY + Remind me again. Why do you live + here ? + 98. + + + MIKE + I can be anonymous. + + She laughs. + + +61 EXT. BEACH PARKING LOT - DAY 61 + + Lily drops Mike off at his car. It has two parking tickets. + + He peers out at the turquoise water. In the distance, a + dolphin jumps in the waves. + + CUT TO: + + +62 EXT. MAILBOXES, ETC. - DAY 62 + + The same fluorescent craphole we saw before. The scene + plays just like last time? Mike enters and goes to his- + mailbox. He unlocks it, removing a startling amount of + MAIL. + + The MAILBOX GUY nods. + + MAILBOX GUY + You've been gone awhile. + + MIKE + Yeah. + + A disinterested beat — then Mike reacts, offput. + + +63 INT. PALM COFFEE SHOP - DAY 63 + + Mike sits in his corner booth, alone. He's going through + months of OPENED MAIL. The table is spread with brochures + from haunted hotels and inns... a bill from Saint Joseph's + Nursing Home... the Weekly World News... + + Mike slashes an envelope with his letter opener, removing a + childish GREETING CARD. It has a cartoon monkey saying "No + Monkeying Around! Happy Birthday!" + + Mike reacts, strangely. The oddest sensation... + + He frowns — then suddenly wades through all the hotel mail. + + Frantically digging through photos, flyers... searching... + searching... + 99. + + +64 INT. MAILBOXES, ETC. - DAY 64 + + The door SLAMS open. Mike barges back in, a bit frenzied. + + MIKE + Did I drop a postcard?? + + The Mailbox Guy stares. + + MAILBOX GUY + Uh... nope. + + Perturbed, Mike scans the floor. Then his eyes drift... up, + up... to the CEILING. Up there is an AIR VENT. + + Mike is bothered. + + +65 EXT. MAILBOXES, ETC. - SECONDS LATER 65 + + Mike runs out, punching "411" into his CELLPHONE. He paces + the sidewalk, bristling with nervous energy. + + MIKE + Yes! In New York City, can I have + the number for the Dolphin Hotel?? + + Long beat. Then; + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + I have no such listing. + + Mike can't accept this. + + MIKE + Are you sure? + + OPERATOR (V.O.) + Sir ? X have no such listing. + + CUT TO: + + +66 INT. RESEARCH LIBRARY - DAY 66 + + Mike RUNS up to the research desk. He flags down a + LIBRARIAN. + + +67 INT. LIBRARY MICROFICHE ROOM 67 + 100. + + + Mike frantically scrolls through MICROFICHE, pages blurring + by. Suddenly, he finds the ancient New York Herald-Tribune + front page. He leans in — but the headline has changed. + + Now it says "FACTORY OWNER LEAPS OFF BRIDGE." Underneath is + a PHOTO of some cops at a riverbank. + + Mike gasps, disturbed, + + MIKE + No way — + + A moment of dislocation... when he remembers something. + Mike whips out his LEGAL PAD. But — now the pages are all + EMPTY. + + A spooky pause... when suddenly -— RING!! It’s his + CELLPHONE. + + Mike jumps, startled. Quickly, he answers. The screen says + "LILY." + + MIKE + H-Hey. + + LILY (V.O.) + I'm just checking up. How are you? + + MIKE + Uh... tell you the truth, I’m + questionable... + + LILY (V.O.) + (concerned) + Let's grab a bite. + + CUT TO: + + +68 INT. BEACH RESTAURANT - NIGHT 68 + + Mike and Lily have dinner at a nice beachfront cafe. Waves + crash in the b.g. + + MIKE + It's fuckin' weird. This hotel + thing feels so real... + + LILY + Maybe I should drive you back to + the hospital -— + + MIKE + 101. + + + No, no — I'm not ill. It’s just... + this powerful sense of deja vu. The + feeling of something so immediate — + yet you know it didn't happen. + +He stares, entranced. + + MIKE + I can’t believe I'm sitting here + with you. + +She slowly smiles. + +A WOMAN in a flowered dress passes by. Mike glances — and +for a FLASH she’s the Portly Lady from 1408. + +Huh? + +Mike turns — and now she's a CUBAN LADY. + +He wipes his eyes, on edge. Questioning himself. He leans +in to Lily, his voice tremulous. We MOVE IN on the couple. + + MIKE + Did I tell you that Grade was + there? + + LILY + (off-guard) + No... + + MIKE + Yeah. Can you imagine how strange + that is... the sensation that I saw + her just a few hours ago? + +Lily blinks back tears. She grabs for her wine, + + LILY + S-sounds like one of your books. + + MIKE + I know. Except usually I have to + pretend the haunted house is scary. + (beat) + This time, my trip was imaginary... + and it's the most terrifying place + I've ever been. + +AT THE NEXT TABLE + +Two GUYS get up and leave. Left on a plate are the remains +of a beef burger soaked in red ketchup. A fly buzzes... + 102. + + + Mike doesn’t notice. + + LILY + You should write about it. + + MIKE + What? The dream? + + LILY + (she slowly nods) + If it means something to you. + Maybe, you've been given a second + chance. + + Mike thinks. + + CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! + + +69 INT. MIKE’S OFFICE - DAY 69 + + TIGHT on Mike, rapidly TYPING AWAY at his computer. + + CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! + + The computer screen FILLS WITH WORDS. Mike is on fire, + ideas pouring out. His face ablaze... + + MIKE’S VOICE + "I grabbed my overnight case. Mr. + Olin. I've never seen a ghost and I + don’t believe I ever will." + (beat) + "Olin smirked. I'm afraid you don't + believe in anything. But in 1408 f + your unbelief will only render you + more vulnerable.” + + DISSOLVE TO: + + LATER + + It's dark outside. The desk is littered with potato chip + bags. + + MIKE’S VOICE + "The man wore a 1920's brown wool + suit. Suspenders, He pulled the + noose round his neck — then + jumped...” + + Mike types faster. + 103. + + + MIKE’S VOICE + "The window vanished. All evidence + of its existence erased..." + + CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! + + MIKE’S VOICE + "Kevin O'Malley's throat gushed a + sickly rich red..." + + Mike slurps a coffee. + + MIKE’S VOICE + "My narration on the tape recorder + became fragmentary, a loop of + unease. No longer the voice of a + man at work... but of a perplexed + individual losing his hold on + reality." + + +70 INT. SAM’S OFFICE - DAY 70 + + Sam grins at his speakerphone. He shouts. + + SAM + Mikey! You sound happy. + + MIKE (V.O.) + (giddy? on phone) + I can't believe it! The work's just + pouring out of me! I think I’ve + invented some new literary form: + The fiction memoir. Autobiography + of a nightmare. It's sort of like + Capote meets Whitley Strieber. + + SAM + I love it! "In Cold Blood" with + aliens! + (gleeful) + I wanna put it out to auction — + start a bidding war! When can I + read it? + + MIKE (V.O.) + Any day. I’ll send it to you the + second it’s done. + + CUT TO: + + +71 EXT. MIAMI AIRPORT - DAY 71 + 104. + + + Mike is dropping off Lily. She has her bags. A tender smile + between them. + + MIKE + I'll see you soon. + + An awkward pause — and then they kiss. + + +72 INT. MIKE’S OFFICE - DAY 72 + + The laser printer is WHIRRING. Pages come speeding out, + crisp and clean. + + Mike reads them proudly. + + LATER + + Mike neatly stacks the sheets. He slides them into a fat + manila ENVELOPE. + + +73 INT. CRAPPY CAR - DAY 73 + + Mike jauntily climbs in his car, clutching the package. He + sweeps a pile of junk off the seat, onto the floor. A shred + of paper catches his eye — the nursing home bill. + + Hmm. He thinks... + + +74 INT. SAINT JOSEPH'S NURSING HOME - DAY 74 + + An airless lobby. VERY OLD PEOPLE sit unmoving, some in + wheelchairs. ORDERLIES silently clean. A TV plays + unwatched. + + Mike bursts through the doors. He looks around, lost. All + the WOMEN look alike — wrinkled emaciated figures with big + glasses and white hair. All the MEN are huddled in + bathrobes, faces unshaven, eyes vacant. + + Mike studies the men, trying to decide if one is his + father. + + Butithen... he notices his dad in a wheelchair, rolled over + by a window. A shell of a man, gazing out... + + Mike’s face falls. Then, he girds himself and hurries over. + + MIKE + Dad? + 105. + + + FATHER + + doesn't react. Mike gently approaches. + + MIKE + I haven't... seen you in awhile... + + No response. + + Mike pulls up a chair. He takes his father's veined hand. + + MIKE + Are you doing okay? + + Nothing. No reaction at all. Mike whispers. + + MIKE + Well... I’m actually pretty good. + I'm speaking to Lily again... + + The old guy keeps staring out the glass. + + MIKE + And... I've written a new book. + (a careful beat) + I think you'd like it. + + A beat. Then —- a brief flicker crosses Father's face. His + eyes widen. + + FATHER + Michael...?? + + CU - MIKE + + He trembles, touched. A pang of emotion, this briefest of + connections meaning so much to him. + + CUT TO: + + +75 INT. MAILBOXES, ETC. - DAY 75 + + Mike strides back into the mailbox store. The place is + cluttered, WORKMEN busy on ladders. The clock says 4:55. + + Mike slams the big envelope down on the counter. + + MIKE + Hi! 1've got a package I need to + overnight. + 106. + + +The Mailbox Guy is turned away from us. He doesn't move. + +Mike glances nervously at the clock. + + MIKE + Um — where are the forms I've got + to fill out? I really need this in + New York tomorrow. + + MAILBOX GUY’S VOICE + I'm sorry, we're closed. + + MIKE + Huh? No! That's wrong. + (he points at the clock) + It's only five of. I — still have + five more minutes! + +The Mailbox Guy turns... revealing HE IS ACTUALLY MR. OLIN. + +OLIN SMIRKS, OMNISCIENT and ALL-POWERFUL. He takes the +package. + + OLIN + I’m sorry, Mr. Enslin. Your time is + up. + +Mike GASPS, stupefied. + + MIKE + Wha...?!! + +A WORKMAN + +scrapes away some drywall, revealing BUTTERFLY PAPER +UNDERNEATH. + +MIKE + +spins, bewildered. + + MIKE + Noooo...! + + OLIN + Oh come, Mr. Enslin. You didn't + really think it was just a dream?! + +WIDE + 107. + + + Another WORKMAN turns, revealing he's the ENGINEER from the + hotel. He slams the floor, unveiling BEIGE CARPET + underneath. + + ON MIKE'S FACE + + All color drains. + + His expression goes from fear... to realization ... to + madness. + + The room starts SPINNING. + + AROUND HIM, the SOUND of CONSTRUCTION BUILDS. Louder, + LOUDER, a CRUSH of activity, + + THE ROOM + + spins faster. Every revolution transforms us back to 1408. + + The WALLS all become wallpapered. + + A WORKMAN leers, in a blur becoming Kevin O'Malley. + + Mike staggers, terrified. + + The room spins faster. The Mailbox Store is vanishing. + + The CEILING tile crashes down, revealing 1408's VENT. + + The FURNITURE appears around us. + + The WHIR builds to a high-pitched, painful SHRIEK — + + And THEN — + + +76 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 76 + + The howl suddenly STOPS. + + And Mike is left, collapsed onto the carpet of 1408. Curled + in a fetal position, whimpering, confused. + + He slowly lifts his head... and a horrible guttural MOAN + passes from his lips. + + He's back. + + THE ROOM IS JUST AS HE LEFT IT. RAVAGED. DRENCHED. LIKE A + HURRICANE BLEW THROUGH. + 108. + + +The unplugged clock keeps ticking down: 4:55... 4:54... + +Mike unsteadily rises. He shouts plaintively. + + MIKE + No. NO! I was OUT — + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + WRONG! YOU NEVER LEFT! + +Mike jerks, startled. + +The voice is behind him. Unnerved, Mike slowly turns. And +back there... is... + +A DOOR + +Standing all by itself in the middle of the room. + +MIKE + +gulps. + +Tentative, shaky, he crosses closer... + +The door waits. Mike forces himself. Sweating. Heart +pounding crazy. + +Valiantly, hands trembling... he reaches to the handle. + +Grimacing with dread, he starts to turn it — + +When — his courage lets out. He lets go. + +The VOICE snickers. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + MICHAEL..! YOU’VE BEEN LOOKING FOR + SOMETHING TO BELIEVE IN. FOR A LIFE + AFTER DEATH! WELL, HERE I AM. + +THE DOOR HANDLE + +starts turning by itself. + +Mike shudders. + +THE DOOR + +slowly opens. Through the crack, we SEE a DEEP, BLACK SPACE +of a place that exists somewhere other than 1408. + 109. + + +MIKE + +seizes up, aghast. + +A DARK SHADOW falls over him... + +We DON’T SEE what is revealed behind the door. But Mike +does. + +His FACE beholds a horror no sane person can endure. + +His eyes widen. His mouth opens in a silent scream. + +His legs buckle under him. + + MIKE + GODDDDDDDDDDDD!!! + +Beat. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + YOU SAID GOD DOESN’T EXIST! + +Mike crumples in on himself, finished. + +He's cowering, beaten. + +He covers his head, preparing for a fatal blow. We MOVE +CLOSER... CLOSER... until his FACE IS IN TIGHT CLOSE-UP. + +Readying himself for an unimaginable fate. + +The tension of the moment builds to a climax. The end +imminent. And then — + +A melancholy MUSIC. + + KAREN CARPENTER'S VOICE + (singing) + "We've only just begun... " + +Huh? Mike looks up. + +IN FRONT OF HIM + +The door has DISAPPEARED. + +In its place is + +GRACIE + 110. + + +Dressed in her dirty pink nightgown. She's pale, skeletally +thin, her hair falling out. + +She looks at Mike and smiles. A smile that makes her face +look even more skull-like. + + GRACIE + Daddy...? + + MIKE + (anguished) + You’re not real!! + +He backs away. Hurt, she weakly reaches to touch him... + + GRACIE + I need help. + + MIKE + You're not Grade!! + + GRACIE + (soft) + I wet myself. + +Tears spring to Mike's eyes. + +Fighting this, he steps back. + + 100, + + GRACIE + Please. I'm cold. + +Mike can’t stand this. + +She shivers, her little body wispy... + + GRACIE + So cold... + +Mike’s face caves. Suddenly overpowered by feelings, he +RUSHES FORWARD and GRABS her tightly. + + MIKE + Oh Grade, Grade, Grade... + +TIGHT - MIKE AND GRACIE + +His eyes are shut, clinging to her tiny body. The most +electric thing he’s ever felt. + 111. + + +She speaks, barely a whisper. + + GRACIE + It won’t let me stay. + +He looks up, as she convulses violently. Her face damp with +sweat. He touches her forehead — it's burning up. + + MIKE + No! Honey, no one’s gonna take you. + +Her eyes brim with tears of pain. + + GRACIE + Do you love me, Daddy? + + MIKE + You know I do! + + GRACIE + I wish we could stay together. You, + me, Mommy — + + MIKE + We can! I promise we CAN! + +Happy, she brushes her hand to his cheek. + +CLOSE ON - MIKE'S CHEEK + +As she withdraws her hand, it leaves a TRAIL OF ASH. + +GRACIE + +unexpectedly collapses like a balloon that's lost all air. + + MIKE + Grade? + +She falls back, eyes frozen. She's stopped breathing. + + MIKE + GRACIE?! + +Mike shakes her, but she is still. + + MIKE + NO!!! + +Mike immediately begins CPR. He puts his mouth over hers, +breathing air into her lost lungs. + 112. + + + MIKE + Not again! Goddammit, NOT AGAIN! + +He furiously begins CPR. He begs, between breaths. + + MIKE + Stay... stay... + +MIKE + +keeps pressing on her chest. Through his face, we see vain +hope. Despair. And finally... loss. + +Shaken, he pulls his hands away. They are COVERED IN ASH. + +ABOVE + +Grade's body has TURNED TO DUST. She is gone. + +Mike is immobile. Hands gray with the remains of his child. + +His heart is empty. Absolute sorrow. Grieving, eyes sunken, +he looks up. Just wanting it to end. + +THE CLOCK + +ticks down. 00:10... 00:09... 00:08... + +MIKE + +slowly reacts, sobbing. + +THE CLOCK + +reaches the finish: 00:03... 00:02... 00:01... 00:00. + +And — + +MIKE’S EYES + +go wide. And?? + +THE CLOCK + +starts FLICKERING. The LED numbers flash randomly... + +MIKE + +waits despondently. Around him, the ash disappears. The +gray dust dissipates, like a dream, into nothingness. + 113. + + +Mike stares, uncomprehending. Until he peers up — and +GASPS. + +WIDE VIEW OF THE ROOM + +1408 has RETURNED TO ITS OPENING STATE. No water damage. + +Windows back. Everything restored to when we first entered. + +The cloak radio RESETS TO 60:00. It begins counting down +again: 59:59... 59:58... 59:57... + +MIKE + +goes into shock. Dumbstruck. His voice cracking. + + MIKE + Why don't... you just kill me? + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + BECAUSE ALL THINGS COME DOW TO + CHOICE. + +Mike trembles, utterly desolate. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + YOU GET TO RELIVE THE SAME HOUR. + AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN. + +The THERMOSTAT starts rising: 85... 90... 95... + +Mike’s skin gets clammy. He staggers, lightheaded. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + UNLESS, YOU CHOOSE TO END IT. + +Something FALLS right behind him. Mike turns — + +A ROPE NOOSE + +hangs, attached to the ceiling. Below it is a chair. + +IKE + +nods, acquiescing. + +The TEMPERATURE is getting hellish: 115... 120... 125... + +Mike is weeping. Confused. Unable to think clearly, he +steps onto the chair. He slowly draws the rope around, his +neck. + 114. + + +Mike stands there, eyes glassy. Pondering his fate. + +But — not jumping. Emotions and regrets pound through his +body. + +He grips the rope tight... then suddenly pulls it off, +crying. + + MIKE + I... can’t. + (distraught) + I'm sorry! I just... can't do it. + +The VOICE booms, furious. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + THEN YOU LEAVE ME NO OPTION! + +The TV suddenly turns on. + +ON THE TV SCREEN + +We see Lily, guilelessly entering the Dolphin lobby. + +MIKE'S FACE + +face falls, horrified. + + MIKE + Lily...? + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + (mocking) + YES, "LILY"! I'LL TAKE HER IN + TRADE. + + MIKE + N-NO! + +ON THE TV + +Lily's cellphone sharply RINGS. She answers. + + LILY + Hello? + +We hear MIKE'S SIMULATED VOICE. + + MIKE’S VOICE + (over cellphone) + Lily, it’s me. + 115. + + + LILY + Mike? + + MIKE’S VOICE + Hurry! Come up to my room. + + THE REAL MIKE + + gapes in horror. + + MIKE + Leave her out of this!!! + + ON THE TV + + Lily enters the elevator. The doors shutting... + + MIKE + + starts freaking out. He spins, then notices his CELLPHONE + on the floor. Its screen flickers. + + Ah! Mike looks around, paranoid, then grabs the phone. Its + power blinks. Frantic, he hurriedly DIALS Lily. He bites + his nails. KING! RING...! + + ON LILY + + She rides up the elevator, oblivious. + + ON MIKE + + MIKE + C' mon, c’mon... + + More RINGING. Then — a MAN answers, through garbled STATIC. + + MAN (V.O.). + Hello? + + A discombobulated beat. It’s a wrong number, but... + strangely familiar. + + MIKE + Hello?! Who -- who is this??? + + INTERCUT: + + +77 INT. RESEARCH LIBRARY - THE PAST 77 + 116. + + + It's Mike back in the microfiche room, in the past, + receiving the call. All he hears is STATIC. + + MIKE + Hello! This is Mike Enslin. Is + anybody there? + + CUT BACK TO: + + +78 INT. 1408 - PRESENT 78 + + Mike blanches, realizing. He shouts deliriously. + + MIKE + My God! Don't come to the Dolphin! + Stay out of 140— + + His phone suddenly SPARKS, shorting. It FLAMES, burning + him. + + He cries out and drops it. Mike turns worriedly to + + THE TV + + Lily is still in the elevator, rising. Floors go by: 8... + 9... + + MIKE + + gets a galvanized look. + + MIKE + I won't let you have her. + + Incensed, he runs toward the door. + + CRAZY ANGLE + + Suddenly — the ROOM PIVOTS, slanting to 45 DEGREES! + + Mike trips, falling. SLAM! + + The floor is crazy. Mike tries to get up, attempting to + climb. His naked hands fall on hot carpet, singeing him. + + Mike SCREAMS in pain. But he keeps going. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + YOU CAN'T SAVE HER. SHE'S DOOMED! + + ON THE TV + 117. + + +The elevator opens on the 14th floor. Lily steps out... + +WIDE - THE ROOM + +Mike crawls upward, his equilibrium reeling. + +The SLANT is now INSANE. The floor is practically vertical. + +Mike hangs onto the furniture, like a rock climber. + +Using all his might, he hoists himself. + +The thermostat keeps rising. 140. 145... + +Mike struggles to move. He can barely breathe through the +sweltering heat. He looks up — and the living room has +LENGTHENED. The DOOR now seems a football field away. Just +a speck. + +MIKE + +moans. His feet STICK to the hot melting carpet. He wants +to move, but collapses. The fabric burns into his hands. + +The door is hopelessly far away. + +In anguish, unable to crawl, he weakly glances at the TV. + +ON THE TV + +Lily walks down the hall. Approaching... + +CLOSEUP - MIKE + +In a final gasp at salvation, Mike whispers. + + MIKE + Lily. Go... + +ON THE TV + +Lily takes a step, then suddenly stops. + +Like she heard him. + +She contemplates this sensation, her face a mix of strange +emotions. Then — she suddenly turns and LEAVES. + +MIKE + +sobs, relieved. + 118. + + +LILY + +runs. Fast, faster. + +THE ROOM + +THUNDERS, furious. + +Mike is overwrought. Volatile, rapturous. He slowly looks +up... and then his expression darkens. + + MIKE + I know I’ve lived the life of a + selfish man... + (pause) + But I don’t have to die that way. + +Mike reaches for the fallen BOOK OF MATCHES. + +He stares — then rips out a match and STRIKES it against +the covert with its funny little doorman. + +An instant, TINY FLAME. + + MIKE + Maybe this room isn’t real. Maybe + I'm not even real. + (wheezing, desperate) + But this fire... is real. + +Mike crawls across the floor. Holding the match out, +straining to touch it to a CURTAIN... + +When — WHOOSH! A HUSH OF WIND from the air conditioning +vent blows it out. + + VOICE OF THE ROOM + YOU’D JUST BE KILLING YOURSELF. + +Mike considers this... then nods. + + MIKE + As long as I kill you too, I can + rest in peace. + +Suddenly, Mike grabs Olin’s. + +COGNAC BOTTLE + +Mike pops the cork, then lights the ENTIRE BOOK OF MATCHES. + 119. + + + The FLAME BLAZES bright, a crazy glow under his face. Mike + shoves it in the bottle, lighting the flammable liquid. + Mike spins and HURLS the MOLOTOV COCKTAIL. + + BLAMMMM!!! The entire ROOM explodes in flames. + + WIDE + + The FIRE instantly spreads, igniting the carpet and + furniture. + + FSSST! The SPRINKLERS COME ON — the room's desperate + attempt to save itself. Mike laughs manically. + + MIKE + Too LATE! You’ll never hurt anyone + again. + + The CURTAILS flare up, blindingly orange. The blaze SEARS, + the walls erupt. + + Mike stands inside the inferno, seething. In a final act, + he clicks on his recorder: + + MIKE + "The decor is tattered and the + staff surly... but on a Shiver + Scale, I award the Dolphin Hotel + ten skulls." + + The flames congeal, then DETONATE. + + +79 EXT. HOTEL WINDOW - SAME TIME 79 + + KABOOM! A thundering FIREBALL blasts out the window. + + +80 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 80 + + Mike is obliterated from view. + + The raging flames scorch the ceiling, then get sucked into + the AIR VENT. + + +81 INT. VENT 81 + + Pulsing FIRE courses through the vents. Splitting in all + directions. + 120. + + +82 INT. HOTEL CORRIDOR - SAME TIME 82 + + Fire ALARMS go off. + + Hotel doors start SLAMMING open. Frantic GUESTS rush toward + the exits, SCREAMING, pushing each other. + + +83 EXT. DOLPHIN HOTEL - UPPER STORIES - SAME TIME 83 + + Flames POUR OUT of the top stories. Smoke fills the sky. + + +84 EXT. DOLPHIN HOTEL - AT THE STREET - SAME TIME 84 + + Sirens WAIL. GUESTS come flying out the doors, many in + pajamas, furiously racing for the street. + + +85 INT. 1408 - SAME TIME 85 + + Flames ripple. In the broiling heat, the room begins to + MELT. + + The walls sag, sinking into strange, unpleasant curves. + + The paintings begin to bend. Moans cry out. + + The chandelier droops like a glob of spit. + + The clock radio melts into the floor. + + The yellow-orange LIGHT brightens almost painfully hot — + and then, for a final second — we glimpse Mike. + + GRACIE5S VOICE + Daddy, everyone dies. + + Mike's eyes glisten. A brief, satisfied smile... and then + he’s swallowed by the fire. + + +86 INT. DOLPHIN LOBBY - . SAME TIME 86 + + The ceiling COLLAPSES, burning. -SHOUTS and SCREAMS, as the + last GUESTS shove- their way out. We MOVE THROUGH the + blazing debris. Past the ash, through the charred + furniture, toward the Reception counter... + + +87 INT. OLIN’S OFFICE - SAME TIME 87 + 121. + + + The beautiful oak paneling is ablaze. Shelves fall, rare + books crumbling into dust. + + Sitting amid the devastation, perfectly calm at his desk, + is Olin* Like the captain of the Titanic, he is unruffled. + He leans back in his chair, at peace, enjoying a cigar. Am + amber brandy in his hand. + + OLIN + Well done, Mr. Enslin. Well done! + + He swirls the brandy in its snifter, then takes a slow sip. + + Ahh... + + Until, oddly RING! It’s an interrupting PHONECALL. Olin + stares quizzically, then begrudgingly puts down his brandy. + + INSERT - THE SNIFTER + + It gets placed on the desk upon a PILE OF POSTCARDS. The + same Dolphin Hotel postcard that Mike received. + + ANGLE - OLIN + + He answers his phone, crisp and professional. + + OLIN + Good evening. Dolphin Hotel. + + Olin listens, then shrugs. + + OLIN + No, I'm so sorry. We're not + accepting reservations at this + time. + + Olin gently hangs up the phone. Then he takes a puff of his + cigar. + + Behind him, the walls CAVE IN. + + CUT TO: + + +88 EXT. DOLPHIN HOTEL - LATER 88 + + The FIRE DEPARTMENT is in front, spraying the building + down. + + Hook-and-ladders fill the street. + 122. + + + POLICEMEN hold back the shivering guests. We TRACK PAST + their bewildered faces — cold, frightened, tired —- until + we land on one woman, off to herself. + + Lily. She gazes up at the Hotel. Then, she sadly speaks. + + LILY + Goodbye, Mike. + + DISSOLVE TO: + + +89 EXT. CEMETERY - DAY 89 + + A small funeral, under gray skies. + + A DOZEN people are huddled around a fresh grave, watching + the coffin get lowered into the ground. + + Lily’s face is withdrawn. Not overwrought... but utterly + drained. She stares, then drops a flower on the casket. + + S’am gives her a supportive hug. + + CUT TO: + + +90 INT. MIKE’S OFFICE - DAY 90 + + The grubby office is filled with boxes. Sam and Lily are + silently packing up Mike's belongings. + + There are hundreds of books. Cameras. A sound meter. A + chipped Edgar Allen Poe award. Lily sighs. + + LILY + You live a life, and all that's + left behind are boxes of junk. + + Sam closes a box. + + SAM + At least he went out in a blaze, + + LILY + That's not funny. + + SAM + No, I'm sorry. I — I wasn’t trying + to be funny. + (genuine) + 123. + + + What I meant was — he went out like + one of his characters. + (he sighs) + It’s just a shame he won’t be + around to write about it. + + On the desk is a cute framed PHOTO of Lily, Mike and Grade + in happier times. Lily stares, then takes it for herself. + + CUT TO: + + +91 EXT. MIDTOWN MANHATTAN - DAY 91 + + A bustling New York street. Sam shuffles up, looking a bit + weathered. He enters a gleaming office building. + + +92 INT. LITERARY AGENCY - SAME TIME 92 + + Sam enters his office, in a haze. His Secretary looks up. + + SECRETARY + How was the trip? + + SAM + (he shoots her a look) + It was a funeral. + + Sam goes to an overflowing INBOX on her desk, piled with + mail. + + He grabs the mail and drifts aimlessly away. + + He flips through the papers. Publishers Weekly... + catalogs... New York Review of Books. Sam goes into his + office — + + +93 INT. SAM’S OFFICE 93 + + and wades to the end of the mail. Suddenly he reaches a big + manila envelope — and freezes. + + INSERT - ENVELOPE + + The return address is "ENSLIN" + + ANGLE - SAM + 124. + + +He gapes in disbelief. A moment of dislocation... +struggling to process what this means... then he kicks the +door shut. + +Shaking, Sam sits at his desk. He stares at the package, +then slowly, with utmost care, unseals the flap. He +tremblingly reaches inside... and pulls out Mike's +completed pages. + +Sam gasps, overcome, and drops them. We SLOWLY PUSH IN TO +the pile of laser-printed pages, crisp and elegant. The +cover page is simple: + +"14:08" + +by Mike Enslin + + FADE OUT. + +THE END + \ No newline at end of file