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DEATH UNDER THE SUNSET SK

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Yby Reny K Fukai 
  
 This breeze.. blowing so warmly and serenethis breeze.. is just an ordinary breeze I knewhowever.. this moment it felt like never beforesuddenly every breathe I could take is a blesseverything seem beautiful and peacefully quiet. 
 So quiet along the warm breeze blowing softly wiping my winsome face second after secondI wish it stay that way much longer for me to feelas now I began to hear my own heart beating slowly pumping my blood out from my wounds. This seductive body is no longer able to moveand this lustrous eyes would no longer reflectingslowly.. I gaze up to the sky for the last time the colors never been this beautiful all my life but the warm shine couldn't ease the chill inside. 
 The light is gradually leaving.. followed by my lifeslowly leaving my dying body as my warmth fadesI never wanted to leave alone but I have no regretthere's no love or vengeance left for me to live onmy eyelids are closing.. never thought I find peace.