Yuk, nulis puisi yang keren nih

Nih, ada puisi yang gue rasa oke buat lu: Maybe, I look like a girl with spirit 
 Rise before the sun 
 Back after the night 
 Shining more than the light 
  
 But the truth is, I'm not 
 I'm not rising 
 I'm not shining 
  
 There is always a day when I'll giving up 
 On everything or anything 
 Some times i could survive 
 But some times i couldn't even try 
  
 I'm tired and no one knows 
 I'm crying but everyone goes 
  
 Be professional, they said 
 Act Mature, they said 
 You have to do everything 
 They said 
 You have to stop doing it 
 They said 
  
 STOP! 
 I screamed 
 You have no idea 
 I said 
 You'll never know the struggle 
 I said 
  
 I'm confuse 
 They were expecting 
 When I can't even handling 
  
 I wanna give up 
 I wanna stop 
 I hate this 
 I can't take anymore 
  
 I quit 
 I'm done 
 God please listen to me 
 I'm done