Yuk, nulis puisi yang keren nih

Nih, ada puisi yang gue rasa oke buat lu: There were days on end 
 And nights that lasted years 
 The moment you appeared 
 My love was in a place.. 
  
 Time stand still... 
 I live a lifetime in a day 
 When I'm dreaming about you... 
 I love this way to keep you in my mind 
  
 Time stand still... 
 An hour is an eternity 
 And you're everything I need.. 
 Because only you I wanna be with