Yuk, nulis puisi yang keren nih

Nih, ada puisi yang gue rasa oke buat lu: Fly Gitting 
  
 My dream have been dark 
 Just walk to the future 
 Appear an angel 
 That want to be friend in my life. 
  
 So long I haven't  remembered an angel 
 I don't know that you come in the real 
 You give me a sweet smile 
 Make my life is very fragrant. 
  
 You are in my mind and my heart 
 My days are filled by you 
 Wanna love and be loved 
 My mind is taken by you.