June  UTC   You need to explain why We Belong Together is a universal love anthem if you want to use that phrase   Once the studio session was complete confident that the album was complete sounds repetitious   Also The composers experienced a lengthy discussion is an odd phrasing Maybe it would be better to say Carey and Dupri discussed the melody at length or words to that effect I dont think thats quite the sense that the original phrase is trying to convey though    You might be right Im going to certainly correct the third and fourth examples but I dont understand why the second example requires elaboration