Given that the current wording says that Paul VI rejected and contradicted I dont see how you can say it implies equal ground  Providing a richer context would be better but you seem intent on arguing for the article to adopt a particular conservative position  Uses of phrases like Western World for example ignore the influence of Aggiornamento on and by Latin America where change was more all encompassing in its vision before the suppression of the Mendellin Conference there were also movements in African and the Philippines  Your proposed wording makes some very absolutist statements its whole tenor is justification