Severed vs cut in two   Editor  made the change from severed to cut in two  Cut in two is actually more accurate and his explanation was also correct  Severed isnt quite correct  I realize that there was a book on Short published under the title Severed its in my library in fact  But if you look closely at the definition of sever Shorts body wasnt really severed it was cut in two  Definition of sever from Websters to put or keep apart  divide especially  to remove as a part by or as if by cutting  To put or keep apart is accurate when referring to people who have severed relationships  Divide especially  to remove as a part doesnt fit what happened to Shorts body because her body wasnt divided into parts but actually bisected  With all of this in mind I think that if severed is insisted on and kept the words in two need to be added  I will be making that addition after I am finished with this talk page entry  More discussion here would be a good thing  Thanks