GA Review  This review is transcluded from TalkSeekers novel seriesGA The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review   Reviewer Hello dear Derild You might remember me from MOTD This is a nice article simply written informative and readable  Ive done a quick seethrough though and found a few okay nitpicky merciless person that I am a bunch of concerns Here they are     Seekers follows four young bear cubs Kallik a polar bear Lusa a black bear Ujurak a small grizzly bear who can change into any animal and Toklo a grizzly bear I think follows the adventures of might sound better  Dogs were considered but rejected because they were too close to cats in their hierarchal social organization their pack and hunting lifestyles and their territoriality their is unnecessary in its second and third usage  The company wanted her to write another series on animals just not about cats This sounds slightly awkward maybe a comma or two will make it flow more smoothly  HarperCollins suggested dogs but Holmes was reluctantthey guard their territories Direct quotes need direct references The statement about HarperCollins suggesting dogs especially needs a reference because its referred to in the introduction  the allaction excitement that the Erins love so much Same here  the company then thought about horses knowing how Holmes also like them This sentence sounds a bit awkward too theres something grammatically incorrect in that sentence methinks but unfortunately Im too dumb to lay my finger on it myself  the main inspiration for the series is Inuit beliefs and the Native American languages The great grammar mysteryagain  Lusa means black in Choctaw while Kallik means lightning or storm in Inuit Shouldnt Choctaw be linked to Choctaw language  However even there Ujurak who leads the journey feels that they need to go further into the Arctic I think a comma after journey might make the prose smoother  Seekers follows four young bear cubs Kallik a polar bear Lusa a black bear Ujurak a small grizzly bear who can change into any animal and Toklo a grizzly bear Here a serial comma is used while in other examples such as Lusa Kallik and Toklo and The Last Wilderness Fire in the Sky and Spirits in the Stars the extra comma is omitted Either can be used but it has to be consistent throughout the article  The First Series section could be expanded quite a lot I think especially since the books dont get articles of their own yet  Childrens Literature picked up the environmental theme it also commented themes such as commented on is probably better  approach  three bears mdash mdash otherwise you crash  She also cleverly deals with the theme of racism through a unique and honest approach  three bears of different color different backgrounds and different beliefs turn to each other for survival and friendship  Kirkus Review  thought Hunter creates a richly sensuous world filled with cruelty beauty tenderness savagery and just enough underlying legendary background to add mystery they also wrote that too much detail went into developing the characters and setting and there was very little plot At first theyre complimenting the book and then theyre also criticizing it Maybe something along the lines of mystery however they criticized the weakness of the plot and the excessive detail in character development and setting  Other media could simply be External links no  All in all this article has a solid base and good references but it needs much improvement to get there Im sure thattyping like crazy waay after midnight and getting up in the morning with bleary bloodshot eyes some good effort will benefit it greatly though Keep up the good work Love  User talkClementina