Your parents must be proud youre a wannbe Nazi   Heres what I think should happen I think you should reread the current version if actually makes sense to you then feel free to go back to school   In some sections there a clear contradictions example How can Samoa have been given troops and regiments if Samoan Orders werent allied to German British and American forces Obviously in your mind the lives of soldiers with families are given out free for anyone to use  Copra was a main crop in Samoa before German trade its stated so in your own version Yet then later saying that it was monopolized by Germans There werent enough Germans to work a plantation at most were soldiers Samoa trade was involved yet your version paints a white on brown invasion of interests   The only partly decent section is the sports section which really could be larger but of course the focus has to be on european arrival as if that was the most amazing thing to happen to anyone Considering that every body and their mamas was sailing  years before europeans copied the technology from the spanish Spanish  Islam come on really   FIND A REAL JOB