I made a few edits like adding wikilinks and a References section The citations were not really formatted so I formatted the first one in a template as an example and then started templates for the other sources so that the accessdate fields that need to be completed are identified If you have more than one use of the same source you can name the first use  with the full citation information with a name like   and each subsequent use just needs a tag like   Generally I wouldnt use a gallery as a source of information because they have a biased stance but it may be that this was considered ok for this course   It would be nice to see the segue between her being born in England and being considered a Canadian  Im guessing that her family moved to Canada when she was young perhaps with the end of World War II Perhaps one of her parents was Canadian  I totally agree about the exhibitions information it overwhelms the article I think it would make sense to roll the information into  sentences such naming the countries where shes had her works exhibited and notable andor oftused venues