What point am I trying to prove in your imagination I am correcting poor writing and will continue to do so The wording of the sentence Coldplays early material was seen as reminiscent is just plain bad writing because it doesnt say WHO saw it as reminiscent nor why we should give such credence to this persons opinion If you want to insert opinions into articles you have to specifically state WHOSE opinions they are and defend why theyre worth pushing so prominently within an article Take the matter to an admin if you dont believe me