I dont think the paragraph should be deleted I adjusted some parts of it to afrress your concerns As for two points I didnt agree with It is written like an essay trying to prove direct correlation between the exodus and the rioting which is disputed  I dont think its disputed that there is indeed a direct correlation This is not to say there is  direct correlation but indeed some of the massive waves of the exodus were reactions to the antiJewish riotings violance and killings and this is partialy what the paragraph describes As for the use of the term fled  its a good middlepoint between emmigrated end expelled that shows the element of fear was an important factor in the decision to leave which is true and cant be ignored The term is used twice once for the  Jews who fled Llibya in the years  and second for Jews fleeing Egypt post In both cases I think the use of the term is appropriate