I will happy to try When creating entries one thing to remember is that Wikipedia is an online encyclopedia so it should be written from a neutral point of view So called peacock terms should also be avoided As a specific example using the terms premier unparalleled etc makes the entry read more like an advertisement than an encyclopedic entry If there are multiple reliable thirdparty sources to backup these adjectives you could write something such as According to X Intervision Network Corporation is the greatest thing since sliced bread Remember that the source cant be something such as the corporations website a blog opinion page etc If you would like further information please see the section of entries written like advertisements I hope this information was helpful   wperdue