By we I mean all of us involved in trying to improve this article And again it is nice to say I think this section is wrong so Im going to fix it Thats great But I cant say if I personally think the changes that are going to be made are good or bad unless those specific changes are proposed So far I havent seen much in the way of specific proposed changes so Im not sure how any editor can make a statement one way or the other about them  Can you write your changes down as dot points Is that a viable way forward