Wikipedia has rules about presenting a neutral point of view  Details can be found at WikipediaNeutral point of view  The additions you made are not consistent with that policy because they present opinion and speculation as fact  Apart from that your additions phrases such as lets just say use you to address the reader and have weasel words such as everybody says  This creates a tone that is completely inappropriate for an encyclopedia article  Also there are numerous spelling and grammar errors as well  Because of this I have restored the older better version of the article