GA discussion  My main concern with this article continues to be the main concern I raised at the FAC  this doesnt read like an encyclopedia article  It tells an interesting story about an encyclopedic topic but too much of the article reads like a story and thats problematic  Besides that a quick copyedit would be helpful and Id do a little more citing as a lot of people would consider this article undercited at the moment  Theyre fixable issues but theyre still issues  Good luck