Review comments   I took a brief look at the article after the recent peer review was closed Here are a few comments for improvement  these are things that woulkd be a problem if this were up for WPFAC or even WPGAN The lead is five paragraphs but WPLEAD says the limit is four paragraphs The lead does not summarize the article well  my rule of thumb is to include every section in the lead somehow but the Munic Crisis his marriage and children his children with other women and his death are not in the lead WPMOSQUOTE says that all direct quotations need to have a reference even if they are in the lead To be free most historic images need to have been published before  or their source must be given so clearly that it can be determined that the image was published without a copyright notice or its copyright has expired Images like FileCAL CAM DH Nov  jpg were clearly taken after  and lack the information as to sources that allow any sort of determination of copyright status Or how is this image not still under copyright  published in  at the earliest FileCharlesLindberghRaymondOrteigjpg The relevant policy for WPFAIRUSE images is WPNFCC every point of which has to be met for an image to be used under fair use guidelines I often ask myself three questions about fair use images  Does the image increase the readers understanding of the articles subject  Is the image discussed in the article itself  Is the image used merely for decorative purposes NFCC requires minimal use  all of which leads to me to ask How do two separate Fair Use covers of WE increase the readers understanding  meet minimal use MOS says not to sandwich text between images  this does so in several places I read Moselys biography of Lindbergh years ago it is cited here and read WE as a kid This seems to me to under play Lindberghs isolationism and at least the perception of him as an appeaser  possible Nazi sympathizer  The language in the lead at least seems needlessly convoluted  look at what the page Lindbergh says Charles Lindbergh  first pilot to fly solo nonstop across the Atlantic then look at how it described here As a yearold US Air Mail pilot Lindbergh emerged suddenly from virtual obscurity to instantaneous world fame as the result of his Orteig Prizewinning solo nonstop flight on May   made from Roosevelt FieldN  located in Garden City on New Yorks Long Island to Le Bourget Field in Paris France a distance of nearly  statute miles  km in the singleseat singleengine purpose built Ryan monoplane Spirit of St Louis The facts are all there but it is so comvoluted that if you dont already know what Lindy did you might miss it What makes Charleslindbergcom a reliable source See WPRS In short before you worry too much about the language there is a lot of other stuff to fix here Hope this helps