And Now For Something Completely Different   I know you watch at least the Manson girls articles and Ive dabbled a very little bit on them tonight More so on Tex Watson I revised some of the language as it pertains to conversion to Christianity It seems like on criminal biographies whenever this is mentioned it has been worded as claimed to be a bornagain Christian but on noncriminal articles it isnt couched in skepticism I considered this and Im thinking that the claimed wording adds a level of POVjudgment to the statement that wording of reported wrote published etc does not I tried to reword it to lend a more neutral tone Does this ring true to you