Who are you going to get to further review I cant imagine that he would be independent from you My guess is that he will be your friend It would be like me supporting my brothers material  As for the significance of Veracity youre probably right that the summary was not appropriate The magazine is significant though and I will repost using your suggestions when I get a chance Those suggestions by the way are good ones and I would suggest that you should offer those initially before deleting It would save time and help avoid fruitless titfortat