Theres also a lot of use of weaselwords etc to produce effect usually negative here  Many people severely criticized AMLO  for instance  for xyz  Ive toned down the phrasing  but its still vague  It would be better to be specific and clear  however  The Cardenas section is clearly meant to delegitimize  however  its not very careful  It was reported that Cardenas wanted the Presidency for his son  for instance  and rumours were that backroom deals were in play