Hello Dwoods This is not a criticism but just a tip  use users talk discussion pages to contact them and sign off your message by clicking the insert signature button second from the right in editing mode That way it comes up as a message for them and they can see who made it and when Thanks  With the Advocacy Investing article I think the best thing is to assume that the reader knows nothing about it and has a short attention span like me   Separate it into sections use  headers  and  subheaders  and structure the article around these headers