Comments from Cryptic C   Here are some comments regarding the articles prose  It named after the American physician George Huntington who accurately described it in  A few things things First suggest adding was before named Second in my experience the names and professions of people are not usually preceded by articles Instead of the American physician George Huntington just use American physician George Huntington Third the use of accurately described seems a bit odd here I think first described would make a more logical sentence HD prevalence is up to  people in  in populations of Western European inheritance but can be much higher in localized regions Suggest changing HD prevalence to The prevalence of HD The use of up to is somewhat misleading and confusing here because it is immediately followed by but can be much higher Suggest swapping up to with approximately Also what is meant by localized regions Im not sure if it refers to regions with European inheritance or other regions around the world  Just a small sample More to come