review of submission by TrevorTT     Hi Sionk  First off really appreciate you taking the time to look at our AfC submission Thank you for thatI know there are a ton of articles out there waiting to be considered  Were disappointed to learn that ours reads too much like an advertisement though were determined to make it Wikiworthy and I would love to get your thoughts on what edits are necessary to improve upon it and make it so Are there any specific sectionssentencesinclusions that jump out to you as needing to be changed Could you point to those sections that are currently Wikiworthy so that I might have a sense of what to build on and what to changeget rid of  Thanks again and thank you for your help    TrevorTT