Hey Gerry  What I find to be disconcerning is not so much the language but the quotation marks  MOS guidelines highly discourage this for good reason it is not encyclopedic language  Id like to work with you in constructing a nice first sentence  The an v the argument is pushing around semantics and doesnt really help what I was trying to fix with the presentation of the article  I agree with you in theory and disagree in methodology and language  I saw through the history before I edited the article that you contributed greatly to the subject so if you can provide something more constructive than unacceptable Id be more than happy to listenread  If not sokay as I have no vested interest in the subject other than maintenance of the project  Happy editing to you