Paragraphs about major airlines retiring the  After doing some brief cleanup it occured to me that placing the planes retirement at the beginning of the History section seems disjointed It makes more sense for the entire section to read in chronological order I suggest placing Paragraph  At the turn of the st century and  Faced with higher fuel costs near the end between Paragraphs  Major airlines that have flown the jet and  In August  a total of  In my humble opinion the list of major airlines is a great prelude to the paragraphs about why they retired the plane What does everyone else think