Youre doing good work Well done However I think youre rushing For example as an illustration of Oliviers early rise you say what he was doing over a decade after he started which is after the Shakespearean breakthrough described in the following paragraph  Theres no rush If somebody me posts a dozen  questions or objections on the talk page theres no obligation to respond to them the next day Take your time get it right  Incidentally heres another question for you Were all familiar with the stern paper who thwarts his sons dramatic ambitions A ghastly example of this stereotype is in the wellacted but dreadful film Dead Poets Society In this article though you first say that paper was a stern sort of person and then without explanation say it was he who decided that his son would be an actor This seems remarkable  And how about the unusual surname Is it Huguenot