Much as I applaud the changes an improved flow I have some quibbles  The politicking between the generals still needs more space Monty nearly lost his job at one point and it also shines a light on the mans character I suggest there should at least be links to those articles that you mention that add substance to this aspect  st Army Groups failure to open up the Scheldt immediately Antwerp was captured is referred to widely as is the escape across the Scheldt of the German th Army This is legitimate criticism of Montys performance OK Im guilty of armchair generalship thank God not the real thing but Ike was not pleased at the time and the supply situation was a huge factor for the Allies The Battle of the Scheldt article good as it is about the course of that battle could give the impression that German troops were dug in when Antwerp was taken which is not what Ive read elsewhere