Re If theres a rocket   S I took a preliminary albeit belated look at the Snow Patrol song If Theres a Rocket Tie Me to It I think it needs tweaking in the writing after having seen the video for it and have begun making minor wording changes If you disagree tell me They focus around the description of what takes place in the video use of words like the band members admiring the origami etc doesnt feel right I think examined would be a better word Sure Im picky but I think its more accurate and there are a few other words like that which made the wording sound just a little silly so I made a few changes Also they are on a beach Wouldnt a beach have a bungalow on it rather than a cottage right on the sand by the waterline There isnt a mention of the Japanese lanterns hanging from above though that may not have any importance Last shouldnt the synopsis of the video mention Lightbody singing throughout their wandering and mention that the second half of the video shows the band performing the song there on the beach Oh a couple more things about references Your comment that The Irish Times Hated it  Where is the reference for this  Hate is a really really strong word Id assume that their critique would be in English too and yet by using Google the only times I was able to find that comment was from every other site it seems who are quoting from YOU perhaps not a good thing I also think there were too many references where the reader would have to know foreign languages or subscribe to whatever paper or periodical to see what they had to say  Personally I would have said that the Irish Times panned the song or some such word  I think this all sounds harsh but I think you know that I want the best results for your projects and for myself it truly is an outsiders view but an insider who has read a lot of song pages here