Dari language     Here are some concerns I had about Dari language which I posted on another editors talk page but to which I received no reply Ive copied my comments here  I was just looking at some edits to Dari language and I found some errors in syntax and usage and was just fixing those I removed can be considerable because of what followed can be likened to the differences between American and British English which to me are not considerable If the phrase can be considerable or are considerable is desirable then I think can be likened to the differences between American and British English needs to go  But then I was looking at the list of differences in Dari languagePhonology just after that There were some punctuation errors which I fixed I added one short note to editors visible only in Edit Mode but overall I thought the list was not especially clear The words realized and realization are used repeatedly but  maybe because Im not an expert in linguistics so I dont know all the lingo  those words are not clear The actual differences  this is the case in one language while that is the case in the other language  are not uniformly clear Some are clearer than others I wonder if you have time whether you could look at this list and fix it up a bit Since there have been quite a few edits made recently to this article I wouldnt be surprised if you found other things to fix also CorinneSD talk   PS In Item  in that list it says Dari on the other hand is more archaic I wonder why Dari is used instead of Afghan Persian which was used elsewhere I think thats confusing to go back and forth between Dari and Afghan Persian Also I wonder about the use of archaic here Wouldnt more conservative be more accurate CorinneSD talk   Here is a new comment on the same article  Ive just noticed a few edits to the article which to me are questionable particularly changing a percentage of native speakers from  to  I have not been able to find an expert on this subject  has not been active lately Is there any chance you could review these issues Thanks