Ive added Lynn to the biography and will use in the Nobel Prize section His description of the accident was readable and is almost word for word the same as Bakers but Baker mentions the leaking CSF and the ruptured liver  spleen Ive reworded to show that Mary reported the injuries by using a direct quotation If Lynn is critical of Hemingways writing it would be helpful to add to the Reception section In his Prelude Lynn ends by admitting that the writing was some of the best in the th century or words to that effect The article does not another point of view if it exists Btw heres the markup for LynnHarvnbLynnp