The article you asked me to look at   Hey I just added some commas apostrophes and generally fixed some minor stuff in the article you asked me to look at One part I thought was funky which may have been brought up in the peer review I dont know because I havent read it is the line that reads fending off one invader or other and quelling rebellions I think maybe it could be changed to fending off multiple invasion attempts or something One invader or other sounds a bit awkward  Also the phrase that says came to fruition in his promulgation of the Constitutions of Melfi sounds like it may have been plagiarized Im not saying you did it but that whoever did should probably be careful I read through the whole thing mostly looking for punctuation and grammar stuff I found a few things I also split the See also section into two columns Feel free to remove that if you dont think it is a good idea The article is looking good