address  If he vandalizes from IPs we block them for short periods to minimize the risk of affecting innocent people  If you spot other obvious sockpuppets though let me know and Ill block them for you  Best      Joseph Szigeti   Hi there Would you mind taking a look at the Szigeti article and giving me some feedback I put it up for peer review a few days ago and all it got was a review generated by a bot The only comment that I found useful was that I can sometimes be too wordy there are apparently still redundancies and peacock termsbut I cant see any of that stuff in my own writing right now I need someone with fresh eyes to look at it Im hoping to put it up on WPFAC as soon as possible but I also dont want to nominate it before its ready Thanks    Looks good its thorough and reads well  As is my nature rather than listing a lot of nitpicks like they do at the Featured Article Pillory Good Article Gauntlet and AClass Inquisition I uncapped my nitpicker and picked the few nits I found  Optionally you could expand the reception section theres lots of commentary on  Szigetis playing and contrasts with his contemporaries  oh you know everyone from Kreisler to Heifetz to Nathan Milstein might be interesting  none of that is necessary though its just something I might do if I were writing it  I wondered about separating out the family life section from the main biography since you cover the bureaucratic entanglements part twice but in different levels of detail but if you stitch that into the main part of the biography it could overwhelm it so  maybe fine as is  Good article      Oh one other minor thing  I eradicated a lot of ghost hard returns such as   I hope I didnt inadvertently bork your paragraphing since the paragraph is together in the visible text but appears to be split in the edit window  I assumed the lines were meant to be together     Thanks for the nitpicking it was exactly what I wanted you to do  Ive had the same thoughts about the Reception section just not really the time to go paw through the stacks to find interesting little tidbits Any ideas on what books would be most useful in that regard I meant to take out the nowredundant part about bureaucratic entanglements must have just slipped my mind Completely mortified that I got the poor mans date of death wrong this whole time btw     Hard times Hard spaces   Hi Antandrus Sometimes tells me you could use a little distraction from Beethoven and your other recent concerns I invite you to shift your gaze briefly to this transcluded text     Noetica    I like it Nice work fine idea I commented on the talk page and added my name to what I thought was the appropriate place  Thank you for the nicely timed distraction      Thanks We will need wide support from admins and master editors as we move this forward Good to know that you see the value of what were up to there I have taken the liberty of including you on the list of participants Feel free to remove that of course But your presence is highly prized  Noetica     Re Speedy deletion   Sorry  didnt know Yes an indeed very bad thing they did     Good to run into you again and again beating me to noticing  Hope you are well also  and thanks for the assistance Cheers