Its not bad at all Subheadings make it more reader friendly  IMO I divided this talk into a new heading fors same reason The reference for cash for fatwas Times of India does indeed not mention the Deoband although they could still be linked as Deobandis are also attached more broader to general sunni Muslim associations and networks but as it doesnt mention it specifically we probably should not use it However a different reference contains more details which I will add ie Hindustan Times