Blocked   The section you cite is written appropriately with the claim being supported by the reference On the other hand my objections to your edits are that the studies dont match the claims you are making and the claims are just jammed in as if this were a web forum instead of a coherent article As I suggested to you you should post your ideas on the discussion pages so that others can integrate properly into the text if it is appropriate Since you have continued with your inappropriate edits Im afraid I have to temporarily block you from editing Wikipedia Please consider working with us rather than on insisting on doing things your own way