I do not disagree that it is difficult to read If you have ideas for trimming it down or rewriting per the original request of the anonymous IP I encourage you to be be bold and edit away I am however against its complete removal With regards to reception impact or significance in the real world perspective I am of the opinion that it is speaking about the article as a whole It is indeed missing a Reception section that several other visual novel articles possess If you ask me what is the encyclopedic merit of that section I will respond that the merit is in that it describes the story of the game although it may be potentially confusing Like how articles about fictional films includes a synopsis of the films plot an article about a game with a fictional plot should be no different and subsequently handled in the same way