Copyedit July    Hi  During the opyedit a few things came to light that may need attention  Conception he didnt know when asked by Collinson on the commentary para   what is the commentary that is being referred to  Filming I have linked some regions which may or not be necessary feel free to revert if necessary  Broadcast and preairing media blackout I have added an explanation of what the Fear Factor is as well as that the Fear Factor website does not have a fear rating as per the beginning of the sentence which describes them not being allowed to see it  I hope this was satisfactory but if there are any contentious edits feel free to remove them