Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Integrated urban water management (IUWM)
I think it has better information in it now than it did when I nominated it, but it's still difficult to tell because it reads overall more like a commentary relating to it than as an encyclopedia article about it. Originally it resembled an article that someone might write with the title "Pigeons" that, instead of beginning by explaining what a pigeon is and providing general information about pigeons, began, "Many cities are troubled by the large number of pigeons that live in them." For example, you don't tell us what the topic ''is'' until the third paragraph#8212;and even there, you worded it to make it look like the topic is "a paper published by the United Nations Environmental Project (UNEP)" rather than IUWM. Take a look at ead section and consider moving the third paragraph, with the accompanying bullet points, and rewording the first sentence
— User:Largoplazo, 03:04, 15 September 2009 (UTC)
Stance: comment
Cited policy: WP:L (Wikipedia:Lists)