Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/H.V. Dalling (2nd nomination)
Separating the significant events from the life events in the Wikipedia article gives the impression of the article being a genealogical exercise. It also doesn't help that the article is written in a trivia format (disconnected sentences). His homemade telephone, investment by Bell Telephone, impact on other's lives (switchboard)  would seem to be enough to generate reliable source coverage of Dalling around the 1880s and there after. Give the age of the topic, it seems likely that some of those reliable sources are not online but in some library. The article includes some of those reliable sources and, with his life events, I think there is enough reliable source material out there to maintain a stand alone article to meet . The article needs to be written in a chronological order, with language that connects one sentence to the next, and be more in line with how other Wikipedia biography articles are presented. But that is not a reason to delete the topic
— User:Uzma, 15:23, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Stance: keep
Cited policy: WP:GNG (Wikipedia:Notability)