Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Rand Kannenberg
The new version of the article is now more focussed and readable, but would still need major work - in its near frantic attempt to assert notability it is full of |peacock terms and is not written from a |neutral point of view - indeed neutrality is further brought into question by the removal of the criticism section which existed before. But this is irrelevant because ultimately the subject is simply not notable per Dori and others, and no amount of work on the article is going to fix that
— User:I42, 05:45, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
Stance: delete
Cited policy: WP:PEACOCK||WP:NPOV (Wikipedia:Manual of Style)