Original sentence: Complaints have been raised regarding the accuracy of her reporting, including a 5 September 2005 article on Hurricane Katrina, and a 18 July 2009 retrospective on the career of Walter Cronkite
Edited sentence: Complaints have been raised regarding the accuracy of her reporting on September 5, 2005 in an article on Hurricane Katrina.Her tribute to Walter Cronkite on July 18, 2009 also had many errors