Original sentence: Gartner clients include some large corporations and government agencies as well as technology companies and the investment community like BT, HP, Wall street Journal etc.their December 2006 prediction that blogging activity would reach a peak during 2007, and that Windows Vista would be the last major release of the operating system.their October 2006 statement that they believed Apple Computer should abandon its hardware business, instead licensing it to alternative PC manufacturers, such as Dell,
Edited sentence: BT, HP, Wall Street Journal).Gartner clients include large corporations, government agencies, technology companies and the investment community (e.Their December 2006 prediction that blogging activity would reach a peak during 2007, and that Windows Vista would be the last major release of the operating system.Their October 2006 statement that they believed Apple Computer should abandon its hardware business, instead licensing it to alternative PC manufacturers such as Dell