Original sentence: Including Bramley park which holds a fireworks display most years and has an underground reservior at the highest point of the park.The Bramley Baths are an example of Edwardian swimming baths built in 1904 (recently restored), which benefit from a 25m pool, a gym and a Russian steam room
Edited sentence: Including Bramley park which holds a fantastic fireworks display most years and has an underground reservior at the highest point of the park.The Bramley Baths are a fantastic example of Edwardian swimming baths built in 1904 (recently restored), which benefit from a 25m pool, a gym and a Russian steam room