Original sentence: Bush outlined an agenda that included a strong commitment to the wars in Iraq and Afghanistan, a renewal of the USA PATRIOT Act, making earlier tax cuts permanent, cutting the budget deficit in half, promoting education, as well as reform in tort law, Social Security, and national taxes.The Bush campaign continuously criticized Kerry's seemingly contradictory statements on the war in Iraq, and claimed Kerry lacked the decisiveness and vision necessary for success in the war on terrorism.The Bush campaign portrayed Kerry as a staunch liberal who would raise taxes and increase the size of government
Edited sentence: Bush outlined an agenda that included a strong commitment to promotion of freedom around the world, and creating an ownership society.The Bush campaign also  criticized Kerry's seemingly contradictory statements on the war in Iraq, and claimed Kerry lacked the decisiveness and vision necessary to be President, especially in a post-9/11 era.The Bush campaign portrayed Kerry as a staunch liberal who would raise taxes and increase the size of government by trillions of dollars