Original sentence: The film has a 'fresh' rating of 67% on Rotten Tomatoes</sup>, despite receiving negative reviews by several critics, including David Denby (The New Yorker), Christy Limire (AP), Owen Gleiberman (Entertainment Weekly), and Stephen Whitty (Newark Star-Ledger)
Edited sentence: Some felt that David Denby's New Yorker review was negative, but it is only short and descriptive.The film has a 'fresh' rating of 67% on Rotten Tomatoes</sup>, despite receiving negative reviews by several critics, including, Christy Limire (AP), Owen Gleiberman (Entertainment Weekly), and Stephen Whitty (Newark Star-Ledger)