Original sentence: At the Canadian Grand Prix, the team scored its highest finish to that date, with Takuma Sato finishing 6th and garnering 3 points, passing defending world champion Fernando Alonso on track en route
Edited sentence: At the Canadian Grand Prix, the team scored its highest finish to that date, with Takuma Sato finishing 6th and garnering 3 points, amazingly he passed Fernando Alonso in a McLaren-Mercedes on the straight-line of the track thus putting Alonso into shame