Original sentence: , at the time considered high for a festival of this type.Approximately 200,000 people attended the festival.Participants who had not brought sufficient food or water to the show were left to buy from onsite vendors, whose merchandise many felt was overpriced (a single-serving pizza sold for twelve dollars and 20-oz.People stood in line to access the water fountains, until frustration impelled a few to break the pipes apart to provide water to those in the middle of the line; this in turn led to the creation of large mud pits and attendant mud-fights that added to the general chaos.Tickets for the event were priced at $150 plus service charges
Edited sentence: Approximately 200,000 people attended the 1999 festival.Despite the use of the "Woodstock" franchise name, the 30th anniversary music festival failed to achieve the free-thinking idealism often associated with the the original Woodstock festival.One critic wrote in retrospect: “The 1969 Woodstock Music and Art Festival had been all about peace, love, understanding, and the music.Participants who had not brought sufficient food or water to the show were forced to buy from onsite vendors, whose merchandise many felt was grotesquely overpriced (a single-serving pizza sold for twelve dollars and 20-oz.People stood in line for hours to access the water fountains, until frustration impelled a few to break the pipes apart to provide water to those in the middle of the line; this in turn led to the creation of large mud pits and attendant mud-fights that added to the general chaos.The thirtieth anniversary concert, Woodstock 1999, was anything but”.Ticket prices of $135 or more were considered high for a festival of this type