Original sentence: " Human rights organizations Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch have accused Hezbollah of committing war crimes against Israeli civilians, in which in the same article, they also accused Israel of war crimes but against Lebanese civilians."According to frequent accounts in the western press, the group also receives considerable support from Iran and Syria".Although some Arab states (Egypt, Jordan, and Saudi Arabia) have condemned Hezbollah's actions, saying that "the Arabs and Muslims can't afford to allow an irresponsible and adventurous organization like Hezbollah to drag the region to war" and calling it "dangerous adventurism," Hezbollah is regarded as a legitimate resistance movement throughout much of Lebanese society and the Arab and Muslim world, with an emphasis on "calls for the destruction of Israel.Hezbollah enjoys popular support as a legitimate resistance movement in most of the Arab and Muslim worlds.Hezbollah's violent acts are characterized by some countries as terrorist attacks, while others regard them as a resistance movement engaged in defensive Jihad.Six countries officially list Hezbollah or its security arm as a terrorist organization: the United States, the United Kingdom, Israel, Canada, the Netherlands, and Australia, though its designation as such is not unanimous among world powers (perhaps most notably, the European Union)
Edited sentence: " Human rights organizations Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch have shown that Hezbollah has committed war crimes against Israeli civilians,.Although some Arab states (Egypt, Jordan, and Saudi Arabia) have condemned Hezbollah's actions, saying that "the Arabs and Muslims can't afford to allow an irresponsible and adventurous organization like Hezbollah to drag the region to war" and calling it "dangerous adventurism," Hezbollah is regarded as a legitimate resistance movement throughout different sectors of Lebanese society and the Arab and Muslim world, with an emphasis on "calls for the destruction of Israel.Hezbollah's violent acts are known as terrorist attacks, though some, primary anti-westerners regard them as a resistance movement engaged in defensive Jihad much like Osama Bin Laden's Al Queda.However, the group  also receives considerable support from Iran and Syria, two countries known to support terror".Six countries officially list Hezbollah or its security arm as a terrorist organization: the United States, the United Kingdom, Israel, Canada, the Netherlands, and Australia, though its designation is not unanimous espeically among pro-Islamic countries and organiztions.. Hezbollah enjoys support as a resistance movement in parts of the Arab and Muslim worlds