Original sentence: It was restarted when a group of volunteers, including Steven Thompson, a member of a former student radio group and now of National Public Radio, and Dean Troyer, the newly elected Student Services Finance Chair,  submited a budget and proposal to the SSFC, the Associated Students of Madison and the UW-Madison administration
Edited sentence: It was restarted when a group of volunteers, including Steven Thompson, a member of a former student radio group and now of National Public Radio, and Dean Troyer, the newly elected Student Services Finance Chair,  submitted a budget and proposal to the SSFC, the Associated Students of Madison and the UW-Madison administration