Original sentence: For his lobbying efforts on behalf of Kosovo Albanians before, during and after the Kosovo War, in May 2017, Albanian President Bujar Nishani awarded Dole Albania’s highest civilian honor, the National Flag Order medal, at a ceremony in Washington, D
Edited sentence: For his contributions to assisting Kosovo Albanians gaining their freedom, on May 27, 2017 Dole was awarded Albania’s highest civilian honor, the National Flag Order medal in a ceremony at Washington DC by Albanian President Bujar Nishani