Original sentence: After an extended stay in Pottenger's Sanitorium, she died on February 23, 1930 from tuberculosis in Monrovia, California, at the age of 37.However, Normand's health was in decline due to tuberculosis
Edited sentence: After an extended stay in Pottenger's Sanitorium, she died in 1930 from tuberculosis in Monrovia, California, at the age of 37.However, Normand's health was in decline