Original sentence: At its lowest recorded levels, it approaches 7.7 times the salinity of ocean water, but when its levels are high, its salinity drops to only slightly higher than the ocean.Because of this, its degree of salinity also fluctates greatly.The Dead Sea, dividing Israel and Jordan, has 8.6 times the salinity of ocean water, and is also the world's deepest hypersaline lake.The most well-known examples of hypersaline lakes are the Dead Sea and the Great Salt Lake.While it has nearly three times the surface area of the Dead Sea, the Great Salt Lake, located in Utah, is shallower and experiences much greater fluctuations in level than the Dead Sea
Edited sentence: The most well-known example of a hypersaline lake is the Dead Sea, dividing Israel and Jordan, at 8.6 times the salinity of ocean water, which is also the world's deepest hypersaline lake