Original sentence: After spending time in India teaching English, Allsopp returned to the UK and began a series of positions, working for Country Living, Food & Homes Magazines and her mother's business, Hindlip & Prentice Interiors, and studying at Christie's.Allsopp founded Kirmir Property Search, and in 1996 founded (and joined) Garrington Homefinders, but does not have any formal training or belong to professional property associations, such as the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors.She has a brother Henry, and two sisters, Sofie and Natasha
Edited sentence: After a period at her mother's business, Hindlip & Prentice Interiors, she studied History of Art at Christie's.After spending time in India teaching English Language, Allsopp returned to the UK and began a series of positions, working for Country Living and Food & Homes Magazines, which helped her secure limited experience within the interior design field.Chartered Membership of an appropriate authorative body remains a highly desirable acquisition by any professional, and confers an indication of the standard of Professional Competence and Achievement professed to be offered by the Bearer.Despite Allsopp's lack of Professional Training, she founded Kirmir Property Search, and in 1996 founded (and joined) Garrington Homefinders.However, Allsopp has yet to undergo any formal Professional Training addressing Property leading to membership of the Royal Instituion of Chartered Surveyors, an independent representative professional body which regulates property professionals and surveyors in the UK and other sovereign nations [].She has a brother Henry, and two sisters Sofie and Natasha