Original sentence: Dayton Aviation Heritage National Historical Park is a United States National Historical Park in Dayton, Ohio, USA that commemorates three exceptional men—Wilbur Wright, Orville Wright, and Paul Laurence Dunbar—and their work in the Miami Valley.Paul Laurence Dunbar achieved national and international acclaim in a literary world that was almost exclusively reserved for whites.This gifted and prolific writer produced a body of work that included novels, plays, short stories, lyrics, and over 400 published poems
Edited sentence: Dayton Aviation Heritage National Historical Park is a United States National Historical Park in Dayton, Ohio, United States that commemorates three exceptional men—Wilbur Wright, Orville Wright, and Paul Laurence Dunbar—and their work in the Miami Valley.Paul Laurence Dunbar achieved national and international acclaim in a literary world that was almost exclusively reserved for whites, producing a body of work that included novels, plays, short stories, lyrics, and over 400 published poems