Original sentence: Hinds favours Gibson Flying V's, typically in silverburst finishes, but also owns a wide varitety of guitars including a Goltop Les Paul, a Gibson SG, Gibson Explorers and a Dan Armstrong Plexi guitar
Edited sentence: Hinds favours Gibson Flying V's, typically in silverburst finishes, but also owns a wide varitety of guitars including a Goldtop Les Paul, a Gibson SG, Gibson Explorers and a Dan Armstrong Plexi guitar