Original sentence: Develop a blood test for earlier detection of breast cancer.Every year, on the first Friday in October, breast cancer awareness month, people nationwide are asked to wear their jeans and donate $5 in support of breast cancer research.Fund Lee Laboratories nationwide to find more effective, less toxic breast cancer treatments.Help NBCC create online and print resources about breast cancer and train additional advocates to educate patients and their families about new clinical trials.Lee Jeans.Net proceeds raised from Lee National Denim Day benefit the Women’s Cancer Programs of the Entertainment Industry Foundation  and will help to:
Edited sentence: Every year, on the first Friday in October, breast cancer awareness month, people in the United States are asked to wear their jeans and donate $5 in support of breast cancer research.Net proceeds raised from Lee National Denim Day benefit the Women’s Cancer Programs of the Entertainment Industry Foundation