Original sentence: ), Dierdre's daughter by her ex-husband Ray Langton.Ken and Valerie agreed to go but while Ken was waiting for her at the party Valerie electrocuted herself with a faulty hairdryer  and was killed instantly.Ken's adventurous nature eventually lead him astray however and he had an affair with newspaper reporter Jackie Marsh.Valerie immediately walked out on Ken when she found out but eventually relented and returned
Edited sentence: ), Deirdre's daughter by her ex-husband Ray Langton.Ken and Valerie agreed to go but while Ken was waiting for her at the party Valerie electrocuted herself with a faulty hairdrier and was killed instantly.Ken's adventerous nature eventually lead him astray however and he had an affair with newspaper reporter Jackie Marsh.Valerie immedietely walked out on Ken when she found out but eventually relented and returned