Original sentence: In recent times the Ibex has come under scrutiny by people who are worried about harrassment; numerous people, however, have been instrumental in ensuring that this popular aspect of college life still exisits.It was entitled Trapdoor until 2005 when it was changed to a 'Battle of the Bands' format.The Open Show is an event where all other SAAUCC Colleges are invited to attend.These include annual winery tours to surrounding wine regions such as the Barossa Valley and Clare Valley, weekly pub nights and the annual 'Hen's and Buck's' pub crawl
Edited sentence: In recent times the Ibex has come under scrutiny by people who are worried about harrassment; numerous people, however, have been instrumental in ensuring that the popular aspect of college life still exisits.It was entitled Trapdoor until 2005 when it was changed to a 'Battle of the Bands' format, with much success.The Open Show is an event where all other North Adelaide Colleges are invited to attend.The full tradition requires female students to accordingly remove their tops, however this is rarely ever adhered to.These include annual winery tours to surrounding wine regions such as the Barossa Valley and Clare Valley, weekly pub nights and the annual 'Hen's and Buck's' pub crawl, a favoured event for many