Original sentence: Aitken donated his papers to the University of Hawai’i at Mānoa Library Archives.In 1995, zen teacher Robert Aitken, who first sponsored Shimano in the United States, wrote a letter the Zen Studies Society (signed by 7 other zen teachers) suggesting that in light of numbers of reliable accusations of sexual abuse of female students, Shimano should resign
Edited sentence: Aitken, founder of the Diamond Sangha and a respected Zen elder, donated his papers to the University of Hawai’i at Mānoa Library Archives.In 1995, Robert Aitken-roshi, who first sponsored Shimano in the United States, wrote a letter the Zen Studies Society (signed by 7 other zen teachers) suggesting that in light of numbers of reliable accusations of sexual abuse of female students, Shimano should resign