Original sentence: According to the South Carolina Department of Parks, Recreation and Tourism the theatre has received the South Carolina Governor's Travel Award for Tourism and was designated as the Official Rural Drama State Theatre of South Carolina.The Abbeville Opera House, located in Abbeville, South Carolina, was built in 1908
Edited sentence: According to the South Carolina Department of Parks, Recreation and Tourism, under the direction of Michael Genevie, the theatre has twice received the South Carolina Governor's Travel Award for Tourism and was designated as the Official Rural Drama State Theatre of South Carolina.The city of Abbeville considers the restoration of the Abbeville Opera House to be the catalyst for the revitalization of the entire community.The historic Abbeville Opera House, located in Abbeville, South Carolina, was built in 1908