Original sentence: The company, credited for putting modern Whitehaven on the map, are planning two events in August 2009.The first is the Whitehaven Festival (less "maritime" factor) which will offer free family fun at locations across the town
Edited sentence: ) which offers free family fun at locations across the town on 8-9 August.The company, credited for putting modern Whitehaven on the map, are staging two events in August 2009.The first is the redesigned Festival (known for this year as the Whitehaven Food Festival, although it does still feature tall ships, a fly-past, etc