Original sentence: 3  "Skipper Dan"  4:01  July 14, 2009  Style parody of Weezer as reported by Bermuda  Lyrics describe a man that despite having a fine arts degree and dreams of pursuing a career in drama, is forced on a mundane job as a tour guide on the Jungle Cruise ride at Disneyland
Edited sentence: 3  "Skipper Dan"  4:01  July 14, 2009  Original song in style of alternative rock  Lyrics describe a man that despite having a fine arts degree and dreams of pursuing a career in drama, is forced on a mundane job as a tour guide on the Jungle Cruise ride at Disneyland