Original sentence: Also born at Arbigland was the novelist and poet Helen Craik in 1751.Among Kirkbean's famous sons was John Paul Jones, founder of the United States Navy, who was born in Arbigland, Kirkbean on July 6, 1747.There is a memorial font to him in the church, by sculptor George Henry Paulin, which depicts USS Bonhomme Richard
Edited sentence: Also born at Arbigland was novelist and poet Helen Craik in 1751.Among Kirkbean's famous sons was John Paul Jones, founder of the United States Navy , who was born in [Arbigland]Kirkbean on July 6, 1747 and who did participate actively in the most repulsive occupation of his time, transporting slaves in ships totally unfit for animals let alone humans.There is a "splendid" local memorial font proudly dedicated to him in the church, by sculptor George Henry Paulin, which depicts USS Bonhomme Richard (However the splendid memorial font forgets to mention the slaves he transported in order to enrich himself)