Original sentence: At the Battle of the Hydaspes (now the Beas river), fought between Alexander the Great's army and the Indian king Purushotthama (better known as Porus), the Macedonian army refused to go any further.It is said that Alexander's army's was at risk of being trapped, or was faced by an enemy army too big to defeat, and had to retreat southwards through the Makran Desert
Edited sentence: At the Battle of the Hydaspes (now the Beas river), fought between the Alexandarian army and the Indian king Purushotthama (better known as Porus), the Macedonian army denied to go any further.It is said that while Alexander was busy conquering the far east, the army of his was being thrashed to pieces from the north by the barbarian tribes.The army was forced southwards