Original sentence: Although Korea is sometimes described as a Confucian society, this is an over-simplification.Bowing is a custom that is proper and expected among Koreans as a way of greeting one another, although it is typically reserved for special occasions in the modern age.Chili peppers are also commonly used in Korean cuisine, which has given it a reputation for being 'spicy'.Family ties are an important aspect of familial relations, not excluding relations involving business.It is common to see bright hues of pink, yellow, and green on objects and material that define traditional Korean motifs.Korean cuisine is marked by its traditional dish called kimchi (see also Korean cuisine) which uses a distinctive process of preserving vegetables by fermentation, developed before electric refrigeration existed.Korean values spring from a large number of influences, including Confucianism, Neo-Confucianism, ancestor worship, Buddhism, and more recently Christianity and Authoritarianism.Koreans tend to move around at a fast pace
Edited sentence: Actually, this colourful style is a rather recent developement.Basically it is the same dish as the German Sauerkraut with one difference: A striking feature of its cuisine is the prominence of hot and spicy pepper and garlic that many foreigners learn to appreciate, even acquiring a taste for this specialty.Bowing is a custom that is proper and expected among Koreans as a way of greeting one another.Family ties are an important aspect of familial relations, not excluding relations involving business as well.It is common to see bright hues of pink, yellow, and green on objects and material that is particular to the Korean style and fashion.Korean cuisine is marked by its traditional dish called kimchi (see Korean cuisine) which uses an innovative and unique process of preserving vegetables by fermentation, developed before electric refrigeration existed.Koreans tend to move around at a fast pace, their values are somewhat based on feudalistic and authoritarian ideas that are falsely claimed to be "Confucian" in nature.Some of the colour schemes have even been invented to create some kind of "tradition" that looks different from Japanese and Chinese styles.That is why many Koreans appear to be less talkative than normal.The Korean body language looks somewhat aggressive compared to Japanese or traditional Chinese behaviour.They also use gestures at most when appropriate