Original sentence: "That Apple would blame Microsoft demonstrates a lack of understanding of remedial security and manufacturing processes.Apple Inc received criticism from multiple sources for blaming Microsoft for some video iPods released with a virus.Apple did not respond to phone and e-mail requests for comment before this story filed.Apple didn't know what they were shipping," Abrams said.He said the Month of Apple Bugs (MOAB) project had succeeded in its original aim of raising the level of awareness around Mac security.In May 2007, PC World magazine featured an article on its website entitled “10 Things We Hate About Apple”, which, as the title suggests, listed the 10 things its authors found objectionable about the company.Other publications, the UK magazine PC Pro for instance, have had similar features.PC World:.Roberts, Security Expert and Microsoft Employee:.That statement drew criticism from security experts, including Jonathan Poon, the man in charge of scanning Microsoft products for viruses before they ship.Virus was only a symptom of the problem
Edited sentence: " He said the Month of Apple Bugs (MOAB) project had succeeded in its original aim of raising the level of awareness around Mac security.Roberts quoted Jonathan Poon (a current Microsoft employee)and James "Randy" Abrams (a former Microsoft employee), both responsible for shipping products at Microsoft without virus infections, both of them critical of Apple's statement.Roberts, writing for InfoWorld, criticized Apple for allegedly blaming Microsoft after some video iPods were released with a virus