Original sentence: Her report stated that RUC officers had ignored the previous warnings about a bomb and had failed to act on crucial intelligence.RUC officers had moved people towards the bomb, which they said that they did because the warnings had mentioned the Courthouse
Edited sentence: Her report stated that RUC officers had ignored previous warnings about a bomb and had failed to act on crucial intelligence.RUC officers had been seen moving people towards the bomb, which they claimed was because the warnings had been for the Courthouse