Original sentence: He is the editor-in-chief of the Journal of Advanced Nursing and the editor of Nursing Open and is a member of the Editorial Board of the WikiJournal of Medicine.He served as a member of the sub-panel for Nursing and Midwifery in the UK Research Assessment Exercise in 2008, and in 2014 on the sub-panel for Dentistry, Allied Health Professions, Nursing and Pharmacy in the UK Research Excellence Framework.In 2018 he was selected as one of the European Top 100 most creative haiku authors.That year, Watson also delivered the annual Elsie Stephenson Memorial Lecture at The University of Edinburgh.Watson has visiting positions in Slovenia, Australia, Hong Kong, Ireland and Italy.Watson was the Founding Chair of the Lancet Commission on Nursing, and a founding member of the Global Advisory Group for the Future of Nursing
Edited sentence: He has visiting positions in Slovenia,  Australia,  Hong Kong,  Ireland and Italy.He is the editor-in-chief of the Journal of Advanced Nursing  and the editor of Nursing Open and is a member of the Editorial Board of the WikiJournal of Medicine.He served as a member of the sub-panel for Nursing and Midwifery in the UK Research Assessment Exercise  in 2008 and in 2014 on sub-panel for Dentistry, Allied Health Professions, Nursing and Pharmacy in the UK Research Excellence Framework.He was the Founding Chair of the Lancet Commission on Nursing, and a founding member of the Global Advisory Group for the Future of Nursing.In 2017 Watson delivered the annual Elsie Stephenson Memorial Lecture at The University of Edinburgh.In 2018 he was selected in the European Top 100 most creative haiku authors