Original sentence: Both soliloquies also have paralleling concepts.By having Doctor Faustus deliver these soliloquies at the beginning and end of the play, the focus is drawn to himself and his inner thoughts and feelings towards succumbing to the devil.Frey also explains the difference in Faustus’s character at the beginning and ending soliloquies, saying: “To be committed, as Faustus is, and yet at the same time to survey impossible possibilities, intensifies the difference between his opening and closing states of mind”.Frey also explains the differences in the opening and closing soliloquies, while still maintaining relative to each other, saying: “The whole pattern of this final soliloquy is thus a grim parody of the opening one, where decision is reached after, not prior to, the survey”.He ends his soliloquy with the solution and decision to give his soul to the devil, in turn becoming a black magician.However, in the closing soliloquy, Faustus thinks about his eternal fate and fears eternal damnation, and finally comes to terms with the fate he created for himself.In the introductory soliloquy, Faustus begins by pondering the fate for his life and what he wants his career to be.Similarly in the closing soliloquy, Faustus begins pondering, and finally comes to a certain conclusion
Edited sentence: By having Doctor Faustus deliver these soliloquies at the beginning and end of the play, the focus is drawn to his inner thoughts and feelings about succumbing to the devil.Frey also explains: “The whole pattern of this final soliloquy is thus a grim parody of the opening one, where decision is reached after, not prior to, the survey”.He ends his soliloquy with the solution and decision to give his soul to the devil.In the introductory soliloquy, Faustus begins by pondering the fate of his life and what he wants his career to be.Similarly in the closing soliloquy, Faustus begins pondering, and finally comes to terms with the fate he created for himself.The soliloquies have parallel concepts