Original sentence: Haydock Park Racecourse is nearby, located in Haydock, next to Golborne.The park is edged by a tall wall which forms the boundary between Haydock, Ashton in Makerfield, Golborne and Newton le Willows
Edited sentence: Famous Haydock Park Race Course is also nearby, and is located in Haydock, next to Golborne.Haydock Park Racecourse is, of course, part of the village of Haydock, which nowadays is taken in by the Borough of St.Helens Borough's crown.Helens, however, neighbouring Wigan Borough are constantly on the offensive, trying to take over what is a Jewel in the St.The Park is edged by a tall wall which forms the Boundary between Haydock, Ashton in Makerfield, Golborne and Newton le Willows