Original sentence: It starred Andy Taylor as the nerdish wargaming blogger Andrew Glasgow who was the central character of the series.It was an Above The Title production for BBC Radio 2.It was produced, directed and edited by Dirk Maggs and recorded at the Soundhouse Studios in Shepherd's Bush, London in February/March 2007.On The Blog was a British radio comedy series that was first broadcast in May/June 2007 on BBC Radio 2.Other male characters were played by the comic actor Simon Greenall.The scripts were by Kris Dyer and Dave Marks (who also played a few minor characters) and Andy Taylor and John Langdon (writer)
Edited sentence: It starred Andy Taylor as the nerdish war-gaming blogger Andrew Glasgow who was the central character of the series.It was an Above The Title  production for BBC Radio 2.It was produced, directed and edited by Dirk Maggs and recorded at the Soundhouse Studios in Shepherds Bush, London in February/March 2007.On The Blog is a radio comedy series that was first broadcast in May/June 2007 on BBC Radio 2.Other male characters were played by the versatile comedy actor Simon Greenall.The scripts were by Kris Dyer and Dave Marks (who also played a few minor characters) and Andy Taylor and John Langdon