Original sentence: Darren and Hannah eventually slept together at his place,the next day Hannah was overjoyed however this was shortlived when Darren told her he did not want a realtionship.Still feeling down after her split with Justin, Hannah got drunk and met band member Stav who took both her and Darren on a weekend to Denmark upon returning back Darren revealed that the pair had got married over the weekend they later agreed to get their marriage annulled until Cindy pointed out he can win back The Dog
Edited sentence: Darren and Hannah eventually slept together, however Hannah regretted it.Still feeling down after her split with Justin, Hannah got drunk and met band member Stav who took both her and Darren on a weekend to Denmark.They later agreed to get their marriage annulled until Cindy pointed out that Darren would win back The Dog.Upon returning, Darren revealed that the pair had got married over the weekend