Original sentence: King Robert I of Scotland retired to Rathlin Castle in 1306 after being defeated by King Edward I of England at the Battle of Methven and Battle of Strathfillan with a small following of his most faithful men, including James Douglas, Lord of Douglas, Bruce's brothers Thomas, Alexander and Edward, as well as Sir Neil Campbell and the Earl of Lennox
Edited sentence: King Robert I of Scotland retired to Rathlin Castle in 1306 after being defeated by King Edward I of England at the Battle of Methven and Battle of Strathfillan with a small following of his most faithful men, including James Douglas, Lord of Douglas, Bruce's brothers Thomas, Alexander and Edward, as well as Sir Neil Campbell and Maol Choluim II the Earl of Lennox