Original sentence: Radar data detected a reflected signal.Radar-visual encounter with what United States Navy pilots reported as multiple flying objects.The observations were however convincingly correlated with the burn-off flares of oil platforms.The radar controller at USS Princeton also reported an observed reflection.Videos of the event have been released and publicly confirmed as being made by Navy equipment
Edited sentence: Radar data detected some objects.Radar-visual encounter with multiple flying objects by United States Navy pilots.The objects were however convincingly correlated with the burn-off flares of oil platforms.The radar controller at USS Princeton also detected an object.Videos of the event have been released and publicly confirmed as legitimate and still unexplained by the Navy