Original sentence: New Games Journalism is a postmodern movement in video game journalism where personal anecdotes, references to other media, and creative analysis are used to explore game design, play, and culture
Edited sentence: New Games Journalism is a postmodern movement in video game journalism where personal anecdotes, obscure references, and strange tangents support, and sometimes completely overwhelm, the subject of the article.The majority of gamers have no time for this kind of fluff.This is seen by many as a fake movement lead by pretentious games writers