Original sentence: Blink-182 (typeset "blink-182" on most official merchandise) was a pop punk band originally formed in 1992 by Tom DeLonge (vocals and guitar)  who quickly recruited Mark Hoppus (vocals and bass) and Scott Raynor (drums) in Poway, California, a northern suburb of San Diego.The band is known for its catchy, simple melodies and lyrical toilet humor
Edited sentence: Blink-182 (typeset "blink-182" on most official merchandise) is a pop punk band (They have not officially disbanded, but are on hiatus)that originally formed in 1992 by Tom DeLonge (vocals and guitar)  who quickly recruited Mark Hoppus (vocals and bass) and Scott Raynor (drums) in Poway, California, a northern suburb of San Diego.The mega-successful punk rock band is known for its catchy, simple melodies and lyrical toilet humor