Original sentence: Dursley has a number of licensed premises and the Old Spot pub is regularly voted Gloucestershire Pub of the Year.Many people class Dursley as the "supermarket and charity shop" district of Gloucestershire
Edited sentence: Dursley has a number of licensed premises but avoid Dursley on Saturday nights as drunks spill onto the streets, screaming and swearing at passers-by and the police.Many people class Dursley as the "supermarket and charity shop" run-down, commuter district of Gloucestershire.The Old Spot pub is regularly voted Gloucestershire Pub of the Year