Original sentence: As a reward to ones who reach the top is "a vast circle of breath-taking, colorful, geologic and historic wonders, unmatched by any view in the world.Climbers also find some old pottery atop of the Nipple.It is the place where John Kitchen built his ranch, which survives presently.Mollie's Nipple butte was well known to pioneers during frontier exploration of the area.Molly’s Nipple rocky knob at Bear River Gorge is notable because an outlaw known by multiple names including "Black Jack Nelson" used to hide his stolen treasures at that place.The butte can be climbed.The butte has an archeological significance because Indigenous peoples of the Americas used the caves below the Nipple for cooking.The climb has areas of a few classes including Class 2 and Class 3 and a short "50 foot Class 4 Pitch"
Edited sentence: Indigenous peoples of the Americas used the caves below the Nipple for cooking.It is the place, where John Kitchen built his ranch.It survived up to now.Mollie's Nipple butte is an interesting butte and was well known to pioneers during frontier exploration of the area.Molly’s Nipple rocky knob at Bear River Gorge is notable because an infamous outlaw known by multiple names including "Black Jack Nelson", used to hide his stolen treasures at that place.The butte could be climbed.The butte has an archeological significance.The climb is not an easy one, but as a reward to ones who reach the top is "a vast circle of breath-taking, colorful, geologic and historic wonders, unmatched by any view in the world.The climbers also find some old pottery atop of the Nipple.The difficult climb has areas of a few classes including Class 2 and Class 3 and a short "50 foot Class 4 Pitch"