Original sentence: Gu saw the notice, visited the apartment, and instead of purchasing it, he persuaded Julia to stay.She was working in the architectural practice of IM Pei when Prince Gu, fresh out of MIT with architecture degree, joined the New York firm.Tired of the work, she made a decision to move to Spain, and taped a sales ad on the firm's notice board for her apartment
Edited sentence: Gu saw the notice but paid no attention to the apartment when he visited.Instead he persuaded her to stay.She and her former husband, Prince Gu's first meeting is reminiscent of a movie itself.She taped a notice on the firm's notice board to sell her apartment, being so tired of her work that she planned to move to Spain.She was working in the architectural practice of IM Pei when Gu, fresh out of MIT with architecture degree, joined the New York firm