Original sentence: Many families like the Murkuṭes,the Paṭaṇkaras,the Śeṭs of Kārvāra,Bhaṭkala,still kept their tradition alive and excelled in trade and played a major role in socio-cultural development of the major metropolis of India ie Mumbai
Edited sentence: Many families like the Murkuṭes,the Paṭaṇkaras,the Śeṭs of Kārvāra,Bhaṭkala,still kept their tradition alive and excelled in trade and played a major role in socio-cultural development of the major metropolis of India like Mumbai