Original sentence: Determined to expand his own prestige and reclaim the terroritory of China, Huan Wen led several campaigns against the barbarian states of Former Yan and Former Qin.Due to the lack of support from the Jin court, the expeditions were not successful.Huan Wen was a general who took control of Jin forces in the 350's.Huan Wen's expeditions were a series of expeditions launched by the Jin Dynasty general Huan Wen and aimed at attempting to reclaim China's terroritory north of the Huai.The Jin army was widely applauded by the Chinese civillians, who offered food and provisions for the soldiers
Edited sentence: Determined to expand his own prestige and reclaim the territory of China, Huan Wen led several campaigns against the barbarian states of Former Yan and Former Qin.Due to the lack of support from the Jin court, the expeditions were unsuccessful.Huan Wen was a general who took control of Jin forces in the 350s.Huan Wen's expeditions were a series of expeditions launched by the Jin Dynasty general Huan Wen and aimed at attempting to reclaim China's territory north of the Huai.The Jin army was widely applauded by the Chinese civilians, who offered food and provisions for the soldiers