Original sentence: And with the advent of the VPN and other dedicated broadband services such as cable, dsl, and satellite, the end may be in sight for frame relay protocol and encapsulation.At 2005 Frame relay is slowly being displaced by ATM and native IP-based protocols
Edited sentence: And with the advent of the VPN and other dedicated broadband services such as cable, dsl, and satellite, the end may be in sight for our beloved protocol and encapsulation we call frame relay.Frame relay is slowly being displaced by ATM and native IP-based protocols.Legacy systems, however, may still be able to smile