Original sentence: As of October 2006, the Guardian has reported that many British citizens are unhappy with the Labour government's policies regarding Iraq, Afghanistan, the pensions crisis, treatment of public-sector workers, and government spending on education and health] to such little effect.It is thought that the Israeli incursions into the Lebanon in[August 2006 were carried out with the tacit support of Tony Blair, as the government did not call for an immediate ceasefire
Edited sentence: As of October 2006, the Guardian has reported that many British citizens are unhappy with the labour government's policies regarding Iraq, Afghanistan, the pensions crisis, the pampering of public-sector workers, and the large sums of government money lavished on education and health to such little effect.It is thought that the Israeli incursions into the Lebanon in August 2006 were carried out with the tacit support of Tony Blair, as the government did not call for an immediate ceasefire