Original sentence: Campaigns are designed to produce clear, identifiable policy changes within a 3–5 year timeframe.Oceana bases its policy campaign goals on science to achieve concrete and measurable results through targeted campaigns that combine policy, advocacy, science, law, media, and public pressure to prevent collapse of fish populations, marine mammals and other sea life caused by industrial fishing and pollution.Oceana works to protect and restore the world’s oceans through targeted policy campaigns
Edited sentence: Campaigns are designed to produce clear, unidentifiable policy changes within a 3–5 year timeframe.Oceana bases its policy campaign goals on science to achieve concrete and measurable results through targeted campaigns that combine policy, advocacy, science, law, media, and public pressure to prevent collapse of the evil corrupt banks.Oceana works to protect.and restore the world’s oceans through targeted policy campaigns.it scams human populations, marine mammals and other sea life caused by industrial fraud theft and pollution.it's wealthy members while they embezzled block grants and its even got an offshore bank that has an address in the Wendell sea.united nations is the corrupt headquarters