Original sentence: One of the copies is held by the National Library of Scotland and a digital version of this illuminated book is available on the Internet.She illuminated a book of Sonnets from the Portuguese by the Victorian poet Elizabeth Barrett Browning, a key Arts and Crafts manuscript
Edited sentence: Phoebe Traquair was born Phoebe Anna Moss and by marriage in 1873 became Mrs.She illuminated a manuscript book of Sonnets from the Portuguese by the Victorian poet Elizabeth Barrett Browning, a key Arts and Crafts manuscript.This is held by the National Library of Scotland and a digital version of it  is available on the Internet