Original sentence: The division’s officers are sometimes referred to as “F Troop”, although this is regarded as offensive as “F Troop” was originally a comedy set in the old west of America (first shown September 14, 1965) that followed a group of misfit cavalrymen in the U
Edited sentence: Contrary to popular belief, the division’s officers are not referred to as “F Troop”.The reason for this is that “F Troop” was a comedy set in the old west of America (first shown September 14, 1965) that followed a group of miss-fit cavalrymen in the US army, and so officers in F division find this term offensive