Original sentence: They returned to Texas when Stidham joined the University of Texas Houston  In 2001, he answered an ad Bradley Schwartz had placed in a trade journal seeking someone to care for the pediatric patients in his Tucson ophthalmology practice
Edited sentence: They returned to Texas when Stidham joined the University of Texas Houston  In 2001, he answered an ad Bradley Schwartz had placed in a trade journal seeking someone to care for the pediatric patients in his Tucson ophthalmology practice entitled Arizona Specialty Eye Care