Original sentence: POS is an acronym for Point of Sale.POS software enables an efficient and automated recording of the data that comprises a business transaction when the sale of goods or services to the customer occurs
Edited sentence: POS is an ancronym for Point of Sale.POS software enables an efficient recording of the data that comprises a business transaction when the sale of goods or services to the customer occurs.This has been done manually since the dawn of civilization, of course, but POS software automates the process