Original sentence: Before making his claim as monarch, Hermios was Iroijlaplap Murjel Hermios, who then was Paramount Chief of the Northern Ratak atolls.HM Remios Hermios claims to be the ruler of Kingdom of EnenKio whick lays claim to Wake Island in the south Pacific.He has made this claim since his brother's Murjel Hermios's death in 1998.Hermios was an educator from the Marshall Islands and his son HRH Crown Prince Lobadreo Hermios claims to be his successor.To date, no internationally recognized body or state has recognized Hermios' claims
Edited sentence: Before becoming monarch, he was Iroijlaplap Murjel Hermios, who then was Paramount Chief of the Northern Ratak atolls.HM Remios Hermios is the ruler of Kingdom of EnenKio in the south Pacific.He has been ruler since his brother's Murjel Hermios's death in 1998.Remios was an educator from the Marshall Islands and his son HRH Crown Prince Lobadreo Hermios is his successor