Original sentence: Abelson began her carrer in theater, including appearances in Death of a Salesman for York Theatre Royal, the David Freeman production of As you like it, the Braham Murray production of She Stoops to Conquer for Royal Exchange Manchester, the Paul Hunter revival production of Cleo, Camping, Emmanuelle and Dick, and the Carole Rodd tour of Girls Night Out.Abelson was born in May 1986 in Merseyside, Ever since she was a child she wanted to be an Actress.Cherry Malone.In 2000 she did a lot of Theatre work and did not appear on TV until 2002 in a Holby City, one-off episode.In a July 2007 episode of the BBC Birmingham's daytime soap opera, Doctors, she played the role of Tilly Ruffell.She currently plays Cherry Malone in the BBC Birmingham's daytime soap opera, Doctors.She now lives with her boyfriend (since 2004), Adam Neville.She received positive accolades for her performance as Barbara Windsor in the Paul Hunter production of 2006 revival of the Olivier Award-winning comedy Cleo, Camping, Emmanuelle and Dick at the Octagon Bolton.They both live in Upper Bentley, near Redditch and Bromsgrove in Worcestershire.Upper Bentley
Edited sentence: Abelson received positive accolades for her performance as actress Barbara Windsor in the Paul Hunter production of 2006 revival of the Olivier Award-winning comedy Cleo, Camping, Emmanuelle and Dick at the Octagon Bolton.Abelson was born in May 1986 in Southport,  Merseyside, Ever since she was a child she wanted to be an actress and  began her career in theater, including appearances in Death of a Salesman for York Theatre Royal, the David Freeman production of As you like it, the Braham Murray production of She Stoops to Conquer for Royal Exchange Manchester, the Paul Hunter revival production of Cleo, Camping, Emmanuelle and Dick, and the Carole Rodd tour of Girls Night Out.In 2000 she took  many  parts in  theatrical  productions and first  appeared on  television in 2002 in a one-off Holby City episode.In a July 2007 episode of the BBC Birmingham's daytime TV soap opera, Doctors, she played the role of Tilly Ruffell.She currently (2009) plays Cherry Malone in the BBC Birmingham's daytime soap opera, Doctors.She currently lives (2009) in Upper Bentley, near Redditch and Bromsgrove in Worcestershire