Original sentence: It is not unusual to be greeted, at the main gate along Diego Silang Avenue, by the blast of amplified 'music' emanating from the aforementioned business.The Bayani Road area, alternately named as MRT Avenue, deteriorates into a chokepoint each morning and afternoon during rush hours due to the increasing size of schools located along it as well as the lack of parking discipline by some Bayani Road residents and businesses.The MWSS is laying new and larger pipelines to order to accommodate the projected increases in water demand within the area.There remain some problems.This follows closely at the heels of improvements by telephone companies PLDT, Smart Broadband, and Bayantel to the area
Edited sentence: It is not unusual to be greeted, at the main gate along Diego Silang Avenue, by the blasting amplified 'music' emanating from the aforementioned business.The Bayani Road area, alternately named as MRT Avenue, deteriorates into a chokepoint each morning and afternoon during rush hours due to the increasing size of schools located along it