Original sentence: The embalmer working at the mortuary at the time, Shonna Wissmiller Smith, had become a minor celebrity.The reality TV show Family Plots, which was shown on the A&E Network often gave viewers a behind-the-scenes look into the embalming room
Edited sentence: Most funeral directors comport themselves with professionalism, not the sensationalized melodrama of "Family Plots".The embalmer, Shonna Smith (nee Wissmiller), has become a minor celebrity known for her sarcasm and chutzpah when dealing with her eccentric family.The reality TV show Family Plots, shown on the A&E Network, often gives viewers a behind-the-scenes look into the embalming room.This show portrays a group of dysfunctional people and doesn't reflect the entire industry