Original sentence: Added to this were Peter's noticeable facial tics, and, judging by descriptions handed down, he almost certainly suffered from petit mal, a light form of epilepsy.Both Peter's hands and feet were small, and his shoulders narrow for his height; likewise, his head was also small for his tall body.However Peter lacked the overall proportional heft and bulk generally found in a man that size
Edited sentence: Added to this were Peter's noticeable facial tics, and, judging by descriptions handed down, he almost certainly suffered from petit mal epilepsy.Both Peter's hands and feet were very small, and his shoulders surprisingly narrow for his height; likewise, his head was also small for his body.However, his height was almost certainly a genetic defect, as Peter lacked the overall proportional heft and bulk generally found in a man that size