Original sentence: According to several scholars, approximately 100,000 of an estimated Kashmiri Pandit population of 140,000 left in the span of a few weeks in February–March 1950.During the rise of Kashmir insurgency in early 1990, the vast majority of the remaining Kashmiri Hindus fled the valley
Edited sentence: According to several scholars, approximately 100,000 of the total Kashmiri Pandit population of 140,000 fled the valley, primarily to the Jammu region.The Kashmiri Hindus migrated in much greater numbers in early 1990, during a rising insurgency in Kashmir