Original sentence: He pondered education, marriage, religion, government, health care, and class privilege and found them all defective, but his ire was most aroused by the heartless exploitation of the working class whose awareness pervaded the Victorian era; eradicating that abuse was his prime objective
Edited sentence: He pondered education, marriage, religion, government, health care, and class privilege and found them all defective, but his ire was most aroused by the heartless exploitation of the working class which pervaded the Victorian era; eradicating that abuse was his prime objective