Original sentence: Almond later admitted in an interview with journalist Simon Tebbutt that the album's sound, and indeed, the sound of the band, was influence by a short stint working at the Leeds Warehouse, a popular nightclub
Edited sentence: Almond later admitted in an interview with journalist Simon Tebbutt that the album's sound, and indeed, the sound of the band, was influenced by a short stint working at the Leeds Warehouse, a popular nightclub