Original sentence: Herbert's initiative was further complicated by his failure to timely fill top administrative posts.His ongoing obligation as director of two out-of-state companies has required some time away from IU responsibilities.These problems prompted controversy among faculty members
Edited sentence: Although he is often away visiting alumni chapters and major donors, many are dismayed by Herbert's frequent absence from Bloomington.Faculty also complain that he is slow in answering email and returning calls.Herbert's lack of visibility has been a continuing source of conflict.Herbert's risky plan was further complicated by his failure to timely fill top administrative posts.In spite of his perceived missteps, Herbert's supporters point to a number of improvements.Moreover, his ongoing obligation as director of two out-of-state companies has required some time away from IU responsibilities.The compounding problems prompted an uproar among faculty members