Original sentence: The Bat & Ball Inn in Clanfield, Hampshire is an historic eighteenth century pub situated opposite the Broadhalfpenny Down cricket ground, the original home of the Hambledon Club, and traditionally regarded as the "cradle of cricket"
Edited sentence: It is traditionally, though erroneously, called "the cradle of cricket".The Bat & Ball Inn in Clanfield, Hampshire is an historic eighteenth century pub situated opposite the Broadhalfpenny Down cricket ground, the original home of the Hambledon Club