Original sentence: The introduction of the Unity desktop (from Ubuntu 11.04) was almost universally criticised for being counter-intuitive and clumsy, however, with the release of Ubuntu 12.04, reviews are more positive toward a more stable and polished Unity
Edited sentence: The introduction of the Unity desktop (from Ubuntu 11.04), almost universally criticised for being counter-intuitive and clumsy, has met with fierce resistance and drop in Ubuntu growth, however, with the release of Ubuntu 12.04, reviews are more positive toward a more stable and polished Unity