Original sentence: Contrasted with the common punk and rock guitar flashiness and speed of the time, Marr's playing was out of place in the usual pop mainstream.In fact, all of The Smiths, in their own way, represented departures from the typical music of the time, which had increasingly become less about music and more about business
Edited sentence: Contrasted with the common punk and rock guitar flashiness and speed of the time, Marr's playing was out of place in the usual pop mainstream; like Rachmaninoff performing at a fast-food restaurant.In fact, all of The Smiths, in their own way, represented tasteful departures from the typical music of the time, which had increasingly become less about music and more about business