Original sentence: The enraged boyfriend tosses her over the balcony, leaving her in a crumpled heap on the ground below as the paparazzis take pictures of her bloody body and tabloid headlines proclaim that her career is over
Edited sentence: The enraged boyfriend tosses her over the balcony, leaving her in a crumpled heap on the ground below as the paparazzi take pictures of her bloody body and tabloid headlines proclaim that her career is over