Original sentence: Activist Ruby Archuletta (Braga) lays out the communities choices:  Yes, jobs and development will be good for the community, land values will rise.Redford also illustrates the choices small communities face in accepting development proposals from non-resident investors.Redford portrays in this film both small town New Mexico life and the threats small and poor populations face
Edited sentence: Activist Ruby Archuletta (Braga) clearly lays out the communities choices:  Yes, jobs and development will be good for the community, land values will rise.Redford accurately portrays both small town New Mexico life and the very real threats small and poor populations everywhere face in this film.Redford also illustrates clearly the choices small communities face in accepting development proposals from non-resident investors