Original sentence: The battle of the Herrings also appears as a vingette in Robert Nye's novel, Falstaff: Being the Acta Domini Johannis Fastolfe, or Life and Valiant Deeds of Sir John Faustoff, or t Barclay Franks, retold through the eyes of the English commander himself
Edited sentence: A peculiar but overall worthwhile novel if you can find it.The battle is retold through the eyes of the English commander himself and has lovely details explaining why the french cavalry advance was slow and in disarray (the grass between the english and french had been liberally seeded with slippery salted herring), why the Scottish charged early (Falstaff sent infiltrators that could speak scottish into the enemy ranks and yelled immitations of the seargent's call to advance).The battle of the Herrings also appears as a vingette in Robert Nye's novel, Falstaff: Being the Acta Domini Johannis Fastolfe, or Life and Valiant Deeds of Sir John Faustoff, or t Barclay Franks (yes, that is all one title)