Original sentence: "  Scholars reivewing the controversy have concluded that Conway's campaign generated false allegations against Bailey and that the attack on him, "was not only devoid of intellectual weaponry—it was anti-intellectual." When The New York Times covered the story, Conway did not reply to a request for an interview.Conway "found the tone of the book abusive, and the theory of motivation it presented to be a recipe for further discrimination.It consisted of primitive tactics that bespoke a massive narcissistic.Lynn Conway (born 1938) is an American computer scientist, inventor, and a controversial transsexual activist.Northwestern University investigated Bailey as a result of complaints filed by Conway and others, but did not reveal the findings of that investigation and did not comment on whether or not Bailey had been punished or entirely exonerated.injury with shockingly little emotional regulation and not a stitch of constructive discourse
Edited sentence: After losing her IBM job and access to her children, she restarted her career from the ground up as a female, working as a contract programmer.Conway and other transgender women "found the tone of the book abusive, and the theory of motivation it presented to be a recipe for further discrimination.Lynn Conway (born 1938) is an American computer scientist, inventor, and transsexual activist.Northwestern University investigated Bailey as a result of complaints filed by Conway and others, but did not reveal the findings of that investigation and did not comment on whether or not Bailey had been punished.While living as a man, Conway had been married to a woman and had two children