Original sentence: A young girl by the name of Xin Xin finds him and Dao Ming Si is temporarily taken in by Ah Yuan, who appears to be Xin Xin's father.Dao Ming Si (known as Tsukasa in the Japanese version) is charged with a crime and flees from police.Dao Ming Si's Chapter: There are two parts to this chapter.However problems arise in the second part of this chapter, when Ah Yuan learns that Dao Ming Si is wanted by the police and Dao Ming Si learns the truth about Ah Yuan & Xin Xin's past
Edited sentence: A young girl by the name of Xin Xin finds him and Dao Ming Ssu is temporarily taken in by Ah Yuan, who appears to be Xin Xin's father.Dao Ming Ssu (known as Tsukasa in the Japanese version) is charged with a crime and flees from police.Dao Ming Ssu's Chapter: There are two parts to this chapter.However problems arise in the second part of this chapter, when Ah Yuan learns that Dao Ming Ssu is wanted by the police and Dao Ming Ssu learns the truth about Ah Yuan & Xin Xin's past