Original sentence: According to Human Rights Watch, Azerbaijani OMON and Soviet military forces jointly started "a campaign of violence to disperse Armenian villagers from areas north and south of Nagorno-Karabakh, a territorial enclave in Azerbaijan where Armenian communities have lived for centuries"
Edited sentence: Armenian move against Kelbajar, civilians had little or no advance warning of the.Armenians engaged in the violence towards the Azeris in their national place.Even though most expected a Karabakh.For instance, the swift and short nature of the Kelbajar offensive, the mountainous.actual attack and even less time to make their escape after the limited routes still.available were closed by advancing Karabakh Armenian forces.hostage or killed by indiscriminate fire.terrain with few good roads over which it was fought, and the late winter timing of.the attack left the civilian population extremely vulnerable; many were taken