Original sentence: Nelly Furtado will make a guest apperance on Tiesto's Single "Who Wants To Be Alone"  in his new album "Kaleidoscope" which will be released, on October 6, 2009
Edited sentence: Nelly Furtado will make a guest appearance on Tiësto's single "Who Wants To Be Alone" on his new album Kaleidoscope which will be released on October 6, 2009