Original sentence: Despite winning all their qualifying matches and the Confederations Cup the previous year, Germany started their 2018 World Cup campaign with a defeat to Mexico.Germany defeated Sweden 2–1 in their second game via an injury time winner from Toni Kroos, but was subsequently eliminated following a 2–0 loss to South Korea, their first round exit since 1938 and first ever in group stage.This was their first loss in an opening match since the 1982 World Cup
Edited sentence: Despite winning all their qualifying matches and the Confederations Cup the previous year, Germany started their 2018 World Cup campaign on a sour note when they lost to Mexico for the first time in World Cup history.Germany defeated Sweden 2–1 in their second game via an injury time winner from Toni Kroos, but was subsequently eliminated by South Korea following a 2–0 loss, their first round exit since 1938 and first ever in group stage.Germany had 28 shots with 6 on target, but the South Korean defense, led by keeper Cho Hyun-woo, did not concede once.This was their first loss in a group stage match since the 2010 World Cup and their first loss in an opener since the 1982 World Cup