Original sentence: Daniel is a footballer and Sophie is a singer and dancer.Julia has 2 pet cats called Daisy and Poppy
Edited sentence: At the current age of 20 he is growing in strength and confidence and is bound to be a huge success in the future.Daniel is a budding footballer and is well known for his loving and caring nature and funny personality constantly entertaining everyone he meets.Her favourite team is Crystal Palace F.Julia has 2 pet cats called daisy and Poppy.Sophie is a promising and beautiful singer and dancer (takes after her mum) and in no time at all her name will be splashed across the charts with number one singles.These star qualities in both children evidently stem from the fantastic childhood background Julia offered them.They also have a resident lodger who is also a huge QVC fan named Tash