Original sentence: After his well earned success on the Carpathia, Cricket turned his attention to childrens television with his saturday morning show the "Sgrowta Boat" on which Cricket told tales of his naval days, interviewed inappropriate guests and showed re-runs of Captain Pugwash.Cricket earned his fame in the early 1960's as the first captain of the Merchant Navy vessel Carpathia, notably coining the phrase "all aboard, she's sailing soon" - much to the annoyance of the boys in the engine room
Edited sentence: After his well earned success on the Carpathia, Cricket turned his attention to children's television with his Saturday morning show the "Sgrowta Boat" on which Cricket told tales of his naval days, interviewed inappropriate guests and showed re-runs of Captain Pugwash.Cricket earned his fame in the early 1960s as the first captain of the Merchant Navy vessel Carpathia, notably coining the phrase "all aboard, she's sailing soon" - much to the annoyance of the boys in the engine room