Original sentence: Beer in the Evening.It is now managed by a northern fellow called Steven Keegan, who once worked alongside Preston from The Ordinary Boys selling fake five pound notes from the back of an ice-cream van in East Dulwich.It was bought out in the 90's by the Firkin chain, who decided to change management claiming they wanted a younger, cooler look.The Jericho Tavern, a pub in the Jericho area of Oxford, was a main point in the late 80's/early 90's music scene which spawned Radiohead.The Oxford Guide
Edited sentence: It is now managed by a northern fellow called Steven Keegan, who once worked along side Preston from The Ordinary Boys selling fake five pound notes from the back of an ice-cream van in East Dulwich.Sadly it was bought out in the 90's by the Firkin chain, who decided to change management claiming they wanted a younger, cooler look.The Jericho Tavern, a pub in Oxford, was a main point in the late 80's/early 90's music scene which spawned Radiohead