Original sentence: All of the other senior students of Yip Man, including the directors of the Ving Tsun Athletic Association (VTAA) and Yip Man's two sons, have disputed Cheung’s claims.In taped footage of this fight, it appears the Boztepe was the winner of this conflict, though Cheung claims that the footage was edited.The incident has turned into something of an Internet phenomenon.Wong said his own start date with Yip Man was early 1954, making the 1951 date impossible
Edited sentence: In taped footage of this scuffle, that appears to be edited due to it's abrupt beginning, while some people see no clear indication of what transpires, other's contend that Boztepe was the winner of this conflict.Some of the other senior students of Yip Man, particularly members of an offshoot "Wing Tsun" , who were at one time directors of the Ving Tsun Athletic Association (VTAA) have disputed Cheung’s claims.The incident has turned into something of an hoax; some would describe it an Internet phenomenon.Wong claims said his own start date with Yip Man was early 1954, making the 1951 date impossible unless the two cohabitated under Yip Man