Original sentence: Because of that the chinese dance is able to potray many various characters and invidual human adjectives and express various legends from different times and nations.Most of the members of Shen Yung practise a form of self-cultivation called Falun Gong.The artists are trained with the technical mastery of the traditional chinese dances.The chinese dance is an extensive system with strict training units of basic skills, body rhythimic and body techniques which includes jumps, turns and salti.The musicians are former members of famous symphonie orchestra of Chinese-Americans and also artists from mainland China and Taiwan.The orchestra of Shen Yun is western in which traditional chinese instruments are included.The source of inspiration for the ensemble is the traditional chinese culture and the artists try to perform these classical and folk chinese dances.This dance is an overdelivery  and continuation of the 5000 years old, divinley inspired chinese culture.Through developement and practise by various artists at various times the dance developed to that what it is: the classical chinese dance.Through these dance technics the chinese culture with its ideals like respect of heaven, moral, goodness, beauty and harmony experience a rivival on the stage
Edited sentence: Because of that the Chinese dance is able to portray many various characters and individual human adjectives and express various legends from different times and nations.Most of the members of Shen Yung practice a form of self-cultivation called Falun Gong.The Chinese dance is an extensive system with strict training units of basic skills, body rhythimic and body techniques which includes jumps, turns and salti.The artists are trained with the technical mastery of the traditional Chinese dances.The musicians are former members of famous symphony orchestra of Chinese-Americans and also artists from mainland China and Taiwan.The orchestra of Shen Yun is western in which traditional Chinese instruments are included.The source of inspiration for the ensemble is the traditional chinese culture and the artists try to perform these classical and folk Chinese dances.This dance is an overdelivery  and continuation of the 5000 years old, divinely inspired Chinese culture.Through development and practice by various artists at various times the dance developed to that what it is: the classical Chinese dance.Through these dance technics the Chinese culture with its ideals like respect of heaven, moral, goodness, beauty and harmony experience a revival on the stage