Original sentence: However, instead of putting an end to the Zaibatsu, Jin has begun using the company for world conquest, just like his father did before him, and declared war on several nations until the whole world itself is at war
Edited sentence: However, instead of putting an end to the Zaibatsu, Jin has apparently gone corrupt and has begun using the company for world conquest, just like his father did before him, and declared war on several nations until the whole world itself is at war