Original sentence: One reason given for this is to circumvent the confusion regarding nationality, citizenship and ethnicity, but some Finland-Swedes may object to this term, especially those considering themselves ethnically Swedish.Other translations to English are often favored, such as "Swedish-speaking Finns".Some of the Finland-Swedes may consider themselves to be ethnic Swedes, while most do not.This view is shared by most of the Finland-Swedish, too.Today, the vast majority of the Finland-Swedish do feel closer affiliated to Finland, their home country, than to Sweden - except maybe some of the inhabitants of the monolingual Åland islands
Edited sentence: One reason given for this is to circumvent the confusion regarding nationality, citizenship and ethnicity, but many Finland-Swedes object to this term, especially those considering themselves ethnically Swedish.Other translations to English are often favored by the Finnish speking majority, such as "Swedish-speaking Finns".Some of the Finland-Swedes consider themselves to be ethnic Swedes, some do not.Today, parts of the Finland-Swedish minority feel closer affiliated to Sweden than to Finland, but the vast majority does not