Original sentence: Although a few emigrants left for Haiti during the 1810s, it was not until 1824 that with the support of the Haitian President Jean Pierre Boyer that the emigration began in earnest.In an attempt to breakout from the United States’ society, antebellum free Blacks emigrated to Haiti.Several thousand Blacks departed toward Haiti the summer of 1824 and the flow continued until 1826 when the Haitian government stopped paying and defraying the transportation costs
Edited sentence: Although a few emigrants left for Haiti during the 1810s, it was not until 1824 that with the generous support of the Haitian President Jean Pierre Boyer that the emigration began in earnest.In an attempt to breakout from the increasingly oppressive United States’ racist society, antebellum free Blacks emigrated to Haiti searching for better lives.Several thousand Blacks departed happily toward Haiti the summer of 1824 and the flow continued until 1826 when the Haitian government stopped paying and defraying the transportation costs