Original sentence: Monteiro started her modeling career at the age of seventeen.She hails from Espirito Santo in Brazil She began her acting career in Bollywood, portraying the role of the old-fashioned Punjabi girl, Harleen Kaur, in Imtiaz Ali's Love Aaj Kal (2009)
Edited sentence: Giselli Monteiro started her modeling career at the age of seventeen and has travelled to Italy, Germany, France, Greece, Hong Kong, Singapore, Thailand and Philippines.She began her acting career in Bollywood, portraying the role of the old-fashioned Punjabi girl, Harleen Kaur, in Imtiaz Ali's Love Aaj Kal (2009).She was born in Espirito Santo, Brazil and came to Mumbai, India in 2008