Original sentence: In 1936, the Arab leadership in the British Mandate of Palestine, led by Haj Amin al-Husayni, declared a general strike to protest the impact of, and put an end to Jewish immigration to Palestine.Many of the practices later adopted by Israel, including "administrative detention" (imprisonment without charges or trial), house demolitions, and so on, derive from British practice during this period.The revolt was driven primarily by Arab hostility to Britain's tolerance of restricted Jewish immigration and land purchases which Arabs argued was leading them to becoming a minority in what they considered their territory and future nation-state
Edited sentence: In 1936, the Arab leadership in the British Mandate of Palestine, led by Haj Amin al-Husayni, declared a general strike to put an end to Jewish immigration to Palestine.Many tactics widespread in Arab countries and adopted by Israel in the West Bank and Gaza, including administrative detention (imprisonment without charges or trial), house demolitions, and so on, derive from British practice during this period.The revolt was driven primarily by Arab hostility to Britain's tolerance of restrictedd Jewish immigration and land purchases which Arabs argued was leading them to becoming a minority in what they considered their territory and future nation-state