Original sentence: Arthur Wellesley Bigsworth was born on 27 March 1885, the son of Arthur Wellesley Bigsworth Sr and Kate Box.Bigsworth received training as a Merchantile Marine officer, later joining the the Royal Naval Reserve as a Sub-Lieutenant, being promoted to Lieutenant on 19 January 1913.D (27 March 1885 - 24 February 1961) was a pioneer aviator who had a distinguished military career in the service of the British armed forces
Edited sentence: Arthur Wellesley Bigsworth was born on 27 March 1885, the son of Arthur Wellesley Bigsworth Snr.Arthur Wellesley Bigsworthreceived training as a Merchantile Marine officer, later joining the the Royal Naval Reserve as a Sub-Lieutenant, being promoted to Lieutenant on 19 January 1913.D (27 March 1885 - 24 February 1961) was a brave pioneer aviator who had a distinguished military career in the service of the British armed forces.and Kate Box