Original sentence: Patricia Wentworth (byname of Dora Amy Elles; November 10, 1878 - January 28, 1961) was a British crime fiction writer.She was born in Mussoorie, Uttarakhand, India, what was then the British Raj
Edited sentence: Patricia Wentworth (born Dora Amy Elles; November 10, 1878 - January 28, 1961) was a British crime fiction writer.She was born in Mussoorie, Uttarakhand, India (then the British Raj)