Original sentence: Johnstone released her first CD, Coming of Age, on the independent record label Bojak Records.Johnstone's second CD, On A Good Day, was released in February 2005.The CD featured 11 tracks written by Johnstone and guest performances by many of the artists for whom Johnstone had written songs.The CD rose to the #6 position on Amazon's Best Seller's List and was the #1 selling CD for Burnside Distribution Company (BDC) that year
Edited sentence: Johnstone successfully released her first CD, Coming of Age, on the independent record label Bojak Records.Johnstone's sophomore CD, On A Good Day, was released in February of 2005.The CD featured 11 tracks written by Johnstone and guest performances by many of the artists for whom Johnstone had written hits.The CD quickly rose to the #6 position on Amazon's Best Seller's List and was the #1 selling CD for Burnside Distribution Company (BDC) that year