Original sentence: It also includes Montessori pre-school through 3rd grade, which is located in Buffalo, New York.The Academy includes a college preparatory high school for young women and a co-educational elementary school located in Buffalo, New York
Edited sentence: Emphasis is placed on educating the whole person.It also includes Montessori pre-school through 3rd grade, which is located at 700 West Ferry Street in Buffalo, New York.The Academy includes a college preparatory high school for young women and a co-educational elementary school located at 135 Cleveland Avenue in Buffalo, New York