Original sentence: However, she ran out of gas and posted a 38.99 final 50m, the slowest final lap among the 8 finalists, and dropped to 6th at 2:26.35 (incidentially, she had also swum the slowest final lap in the 200 breast final in the 2000 Olympics)
Edited sentence: However, she ran out of gas and posted a 38.99 final 50m, the slowest final lap among the 8 finalists, and dropped to 6th at 2:26.35 (incidentally, she had also swum the slowest final lap in the 200 breast final in the 2000 Olympics)