Original sentence: The John Inverarity Music and Drama Centre comprises a large auditorium/theatre, backstage holding rooms, two main rehearsal studios, percussion and string studios, two large music teaching rooms and 19 music practice rooms.The auditorium can be tuned for different instruments and various music/drama performances to achieve desired acoustic qualities.The auditorium design has been dictated by the requirements to have natural acoustics for music.The ceiling loft is mechanised with 27 variable speed automatic winch lines which give a great degree of flexibility for a range of shows.The centrepiece of the complex is the timber-lined recital auditorium which accommodates 353 patrons on stepped tiers with a flat performance area 17m wide and 12m deep.This is accomplished by a system of moveable full-height wall reflectors, suspended ceiling reflectors and rotating wall panels with differing degrees of absorptive linings
Edited sentence: It comprises of a large auditorium/theatre, backstage holding rooms, two main rehearsal studios, percussion and string studios, two large music teaching rooms and 19 music practice rooms.The John Inverarity Music and Drama Centre is one of the best music venues in Western Australia.The auditorium accommodates 353 patrons on stepped tiers with a flat performance area 17m wide and 12m deep.The auditorium can be professionally tuned for different instruments and various music/drama performances to achieve the desired acoustic qualities.The auditorium stands as one of Western Australia’s most acoustically variable venues.The ceiling loft is heavily mechanised with 27 variable speed automatic winch lines which give a great degree of flexibility for a range of shows.The centrepiece of the complex is the timber-lined recital auditorium.The design of the main auditorium has been dictated by the requirements to have natural acoustics for music.This is accomplished by a purposely designed system of moveable full-height wall reflectors, suspended ceiling reflectors and rotating wall panels with differing degrees of absorptive linings