Original sentence: Cooper moved to Manhattan in the early 1960s and worked as a magazine editor.He was close friends with Dorothy Parker and Alan Campbell; he wrote a lengthy profile of Parker in Esquire magazine following her death in 1967.The couple frequently made the national "best-dressed" list
Edited sentence: A close friendship developed, and a year after Mrs.Meanwhile, had Cooper moved to Manhattan in the early 1960s and worked there as a magazine editor.Parker's 1967 death Cooper published an incisive and widely-read profile of her in Esquire magazine.The couple frequently appeared on the national "best-dressed" list.While residing in West Hollywood, then an unincorporated area within the Los Angeles city limits, Cooper lived near Dorothy Parker and her husband Alan Campbell