Original sentence: " Griffo merged the parks and recreation departments and handed over the city's weights and measures and emergency management departments to the county, resulting in savings.To prevent closures and service cuts, he privatized Rome Hospital, the Erie Canal Village, and city trash collection services
Edited sentence: Griffo managed to streamline the city government by consolidating departments and making services more efficient.He successfully merged the parks and recreation departments and handed over the city's weights and measures and emergency management departments to the county, resulting in massive savings in the budget.In order to prevent closures and service cuts, he privatized Rome Hospital, the Erie Canal Village and the city trash collection, which all went on to become successful business enterprises