Original sentence: Willunga has a variety of local business (approx 80) including the popular Willunga Bakery, a takeaway, Slate Hill Cafe, Christina's on High Street Cafe, a fuel station, Off the Slate Art Gallery, Minko Wines Cellar Door Providore, a library, quality tourist shops (The Green Room, The Spock Sisters, I am Tall Poppy, Willunga Antiques), a post office, two butchers (Hamlets & Willunga Quality Meats), Singing Cricket food co-op, Russel's rustic pizza restaurant, two banks (ANZ & Bank SA), doctors, dentist, chiropractor, physiotherapist and masseurs
Edited sentence: Willunga has a variety of local business (approx 80) including the popular Willunga Bakery, a takeaway, Slate Hill Cafe, Christina's on High Street Cafe, a fuel station, Off the Slate Art Gallery, Minko Wines Cellar Door Providore, a library, quality tourist shops (The Green Room, The Spock Sisters, I am Tall Poppy, Willunga Antiques), Academy of rock music tuition, a post office, two butchers (Hamlets & Willunga Quality Meats), Singing Cricket food co-op, Russel's rustic pizza restaurant, two banks (ANZ & Bank SA), doctors, dentist, chiropractor, physiotherapist and masseurs