Original sentence: At the unveiling of the Bach Monument in Leipzig on April 23 1843, WFE met Robert Schumann.He said "Heredity can tend to run out of ideas.One of WFE's most remarkable compositions was "Dreyblatt", a concerto for piano involving six hands.WFE retired from his position after prince Heinrich, the brother of the Prussian King Friedrich Wilhelm III.Wilhelm Friedrich Ernst Bach (May 24 1759 – December 25 1845) was the son of Johann Christoph Friedrich Bach and the only grandson of Johann Sebastian Bach to gain fame as a composer.granted him a pension
Edited sentence: At the unveiling of the Bach Monument in Leipzig on 23 April 1843, WFE met Robert Schumann.He said, "Heredity can tend to run out of ideas.One of WFE's most remarkable compositions was Dreyblatt, a concerto for piano involving six hands.WFE retired from his position after prince Heinrich, the brother of the Prussian King Friedrich Wilhelm III granted him a pension.Wilhelm Friedrich Ernst Bach (24 May 1759 – 25 December 1845) was the son of Johann Christoph Friedrich Bach and the only grandson of Johann Sebastian Bach to gain fame as a composer