Original sentence: BlackCAP has several components including a safe space for students of color in magnet programs and mentoring programs at Parkland Middle School and Silver Spring International Middle School.BlackCAP was spearheaded by Alix Swann, Jaya Hinton, and Marley Majette (Class of 2018) and is sponsored by Mr.Established in 2016, BlackCAP is a student-run movement dedicated to helping students of color be accepted to and achieve in Montgomery County Public School application programs.Kenneth Smith.Qualified students who are not in the program can and do enroll in its elective courses.The Magnet is largely composed of hard working, high achieving students.The Magnet was threatened with proposed budget cuts in 2008, but after student protests, it was spared from the most severe cuts
Edited sentence: Established in 2016, BlackCAP is a student-run organization dedicated to helping students of color gain acceptance to application-only programs in Montgomery County such as CAP and the Magnet program.In 2008, the Magnet program was threatened with proposed budget cuts, but after student protests, it was spared from the most severe cuts.Qualified students who are not in the program enroll in its elective courses.Similar to the Magnet, students in the CAP program are overwhelmingly affluent and white, which led to the formation of BlackCAP.The Magnet is largely composed of affluent white and Asian-American students, which has led to criticism and calls for reform in the application process.The group provides support systems for students of color in magnet programs and mentors middle school students through the application process