Original sentence: Sirhan Sirhan is also the name of a Palestinian militant that was responsible for the attack in the Israeli Kibbutz Metzer (a settlement on disputed territory) on November 10, 2002
Edited sentence: Sirhan Sirhan is also the name of a Palestinian freedom fighter that was responsible for the action in the Israeli Kibbutz Metzer (an illegal settlement in the occupied west bank) on November 10, 2002