Original sentence: Although their collaborations remained intermittent through their teenage years, they would later find themselves both studying experimental music composition at The Evergreen State College in Olympia, Washington.As alumni of Evergreen State College, Robertson and Senna were profiled in the Spring 2009 Evergreen magazine.Both signed with major labels.In addition to interest by the alternative press in Seattle, the label also enjoys regular listings in regional news outlets, such as the Tacoma News Tribune.Mostly regarded as an outlet for digital releases of experimental and ambient musicm, Aphonia also has released more pop oriented artists such as Desolation Wilderness and Slim Twig.Official site.Robertson and Senna both grew up in Spokane, Washington, and met in high school and soon after began playing music together.Senna and Robertson used a business model capitalizing on the low overhead associated with digital only releases.Their artists releases have been reviewed by Foxy Digitalis, Heathen Harvest, The Wire UK, Textura, and Cyclic Defrost.They received school credit for organizing and promoting a showcase of experimental works at Evergreen, citing this experience as one that led them to produce shows and promote artists in the future
Edited sentence: Although their collaborations remained intermittent through their teenage years they would later find themselves both studying experimental music composition at The Evergreen State College in Olympia, Washington.As alumni of The Evergreen State College, Robertson and Senna were also profiled in the Spring 2009 Evergreen Magazine.In addition to initial interest by the alternative press in Seattle, the label also enjoys regular listings in regional news outlets, such as the Tacoma News Tribune.Mostly regarded as an outlet for digital releases of experimental and ambient music it also has released more pop oriented artists such as Desolation Wilderness and Slim Twig, both of which have gone on to sign with major labels.Robertson and Senna both grew up in Spokane, Washington met in high school and soon thereafter began playing music together.Senna and Robertson forged a unique business model capitalizing on the low overhead associated with digital only releases.Their artists releases have been reviewed by Foxy Digitalis, Heathen Harvest, The Wire UK, Textura and Cyclic Defrost  among others.They continue to be one of the few active experimental labels in the Pacific Northwest.They received school credit for organizing and promoting a showcase of experimental works at The Evergreen State College, citing this experience as one that led them to produce shows and promote artists in the future.official Aphonia Recordings Myspace profile.official Aphonia Recordings site