Original sentence: Born in California but raised in Hudson, Quebec, Watson attended Lower Canada College.For example, he "played" a bicycle in the studio for the song “Beijing.Watson has toured with the likes of John Cale, The Cinematic Orchestra, Cold War Kids, Amon Tobin, The Dears, Feist and James Brown.While living in Hudson, Quebec, Watson worked as a pool and hot tub, water analyst at Piscines et Spas Hudson, owned by Jacques Chevrier
Edited sentence: Born in California and raised in Hudson, Quebec, Watson attended Lower Canada College.For example, he "played" a bicycle in the studio for the song "Beijing".Watson has toured with several artists, including John Cale, The Cinematic Orchestra, Cold War Kids, Amon Tobin, The Dears, Feist and James Brown.While living in Hudson, Quebec, Watson worked as a pool and hot tub water analyst at Piscines et Spas Hudson, owned by Jacques Chevrier