Original sentence: A French National Police officer was the last to die after he encountered the gunmen outside, shortly after the initial shooting.Several related attacks followed in the Île-de-France region, where a further 5 were killed and 11 wounded
Edited sentence: A Muslim French National Police officer was the last to die after he encountered the gunmen outside, shortly after the initial shooting.After the Charlie Hebdo shooting, several more attacks followed in the Île-de-France region, where a further 5 were killed and 11 wounded