Original sentence: " was released and van Dyk and Cosmic went their separate musical ways., since at the time there were no record stores to buy music, he kept in touch with the world beyond the Berlin Wall by secretly listening to the popular but forbidden Western radio stations RIAS (Radio in the American Sector) and SFB and mixtapes occasionally smuggled into the country and copied among school friends.His mixing style drew the attention of Cosmic Baby and the two collaborated as The Visions of Shiva, on "Perfect Day" on the renowned Berlin independent label MFS (Masterminded For Success) Records, run by English ex-patriat producer Mark Reeder and manager Torsten Jurk.Van Dyk grew up in East Berlin in a single parent household, his father left him and his mother when he was only four-years old.While living there, he worked as broadcast technician.and began training to become a carpenter
Edited sentence: " was released, and van Dyk and Cosmic went their separate musical ways.Because where he grew up there were no record stores at which to buy music, he kept in touch with the world beyond the Berlin Wall by secretly listening to the popular but forbidden Western radio stations RIAS (Radio in the American Sector) and SFB and mixtapes occasionally smuggled into the country and copied among school friends.His mixing style drew the attention of Cosmic Baby and the two collaborated as The Visions of Shiva.Their single "Perfect Day" was released by the renowned Berlin independent label MFS (Masterminded For Success) Records, run by English ex-patriat producer Mark Reeder and manager Torsten Jurk.Van Dyk grew up in East Berlin in a single parent household, his father left him and his mother when he was only four years old.While living there, he worked as broadcast technician and began training to become a carpenter