Original sentence: After World War II, Palmer advertised for a military officer to organize and develop a larger sales force for the expected post-war sales boom.Eventually these salesmen became independent businessmen and authorized dealers using larger walk-in vans to carry a growing product line.To sell the products, Johnson and Seidemann worked with Stanton Palmer to sell Snap-on Tools through a network of company salesman
Edited sentence: After World War II, Palmer advertised for a military officer to organize and develop a larger sales force for the expected post war sales boom.Eventually these salesmen became independant businessmen and authorized dealers using larger walk in vans to carry a growing product line of the highest quality tools available anywhere.To sell the products, Johnson and Seidemann worked with Stanton Palmer, to sell Snap-on Tools through a network of company salesman