Original sentence: From 2009 to 2013, LG Electronics sponsored Formula One as a Global Partner and Technology Partner.LG attracts the largest average attendance out of all KBO teams and has emerged from its slump to become regular playoff contenders in recent years.The team has won two Korean Series (1990 and 1994).The team is a founding member of the KBO, established in 1982, although LG took over ownership of the team in 1989
Edited sentence: From 2009 to 2013, LG Electronics sponsored Formula One for 5 years as a Global Partner and Technology Partner of Formula One.That said, LG continues to attract the largest average attendance out of all KBO teams and has emerged from its slump to become regular playoff contenders in recent years.The team has won two Korean Series (1990 and 1994), although their loyal and large fan base has been starved of success since relative to the budget and size of the club in the KBO.The team is one of the founding members of the KBO, established in 1982, although LG took over ownership of the team in 1989