Original sentence: The Ilocanos have the following percentage of the population inside the bracket in each province: Pangasinan (43%), La Union (92%), Ilocos Norte (97%), and Ilocos Sur (93%).The Ilocos provinces of the Ilocos Region is the historical homeland of the Ilocanos including Former Philippine President Ferdinand Marcos, the Filipino Martial Law dictator.The small mercantile Chinese and Indian communities are primarily Buddhists, Taoists, and Hindus respectively
Edited sentence: The Ilocos provinces of the Ilocos Region is the historical homeland of the Ilocanos including Former Philippine President Ferdinand Marcos.The small mercantile Chinese and Indian communities are primarily Buddhists, Taoists, and Hindus