Original sentence: A fictious account of their relationship is at the center of the in the 2007 historical romance film Becoming Jane.In 1796, Lefroy begun a flirtation with English novilst Jane Austen, who was a friend of an older female relative of his—though there is no clear evidence of such a deep love as depicted in the film.In this film, Lefroy is played by James McAvoy
Edited sentence: It is known that in 1796, Lefroy did have a flirtation with Austen, who was a friend of an older female relative of his—though there is no clear evidence of such a deep love as depicted in the film.The upcoming film "Becoming Jane" has drawn much attention to Lefroy, from many people who had not heard of him before—such attention naturally focusing on his relations with the English novelist Jane Austen, about which the film went a considerable distance beyond known facts