Original sentence: Eba Odan The first of the three cities founded before Ibadan.Eba Odan was founded by Lagelu - leader from the ethnic Yoruba people from Ile Ife.Later destroyed by a war with its neighbours
Edited sentence: Eba Odan The first of the three successive cities founded before Ibadan as we know it today.Eba Odan was founded by Lagelu -- a military and Yoruba's generalisimo from Ile Ife.This city would later be destroyed by a war of attrition waged against her by her jealous neighbours