Original sentence: At the start of the  season Schumacher achieved a second place at Bahrain, a sixth at Malaysia but did not finish in Australia.At the two following races, the British Grand Prix and the Canadian Grand Prix, Schumacher finished second, behind Alonso.In Spain, Schumacher finished second behind his rival and 2005 world champion Fernando Alonso.Schumacher then won two Grands Prix, at San Marino and the European Grand Prix at Nürburgring
Edited sentence: At the two following races, the British Grand Prix and the Canadian Grand Prix, Schumacher finished second, behind his rival for the season, Fernando Alonso.In , and after three races with different outcomes, a second place at Bahrain, a sixth at Malaysia and a not finished race at Australia, Schumacher finally won 2 Grands Prix, at San Marino and the European Grand Prix at Nürburgring.In Spain, Schumacher finished second behind his rival for the season and 2005 world champion Fernando Alonso