Original sentence: Nonetheless, every player is generally encouraged to invest points in Tactics, as Shattered Galaxy is a game that values quantity over quality: a player with 120 Tactics may have fewer hit points per unit than a player with 120 Clout, or do less damage per unit than a player with 120 Education, but his squad is undoubtedly stronger on both counts
Edited sentence: Nonetheless, every player is generally encouraged to invest points in Tactics, as Shattered Galaxy is a game that values quantity over quality: the individual units owned by a 120-Tactics player may have fewer hit points than a player with 120 Clout, or do less damage per second than a player with 120 Education, but his squad is undoubtedly stronger on both counts