Original sentence: The city's reliance on a tourism-based economy deepened, and was marked by several high-profile wins, including bringing the Republican National Convention to the city in 1988 and the NCAA Final Four tournament in 1993
Edited sentence: Several high-profile wins occurred, including attracting the Republican National Convention to the city in 1988 and the NCAA Final Four tournament in 1993.Tourism was the only sector of the city's economy to exhibit meaningful growth under Barthelemy