Original sentence: Incidentally, Super Mario 64 DS was criticized by some for imprecise control due to lack of an analog stick on the Nintendo DS.Unlike the D-pad, the analog stick allowed for varying levels of pressure and 360-degree control, translating into more precise movements in games such as Super Mario 64
Edited sentence: (Incidentally, when it was later ported to the Nintendo DS as Super Mario 64 DS, it was often critized for poor control due to the lack of an analog stick on the DS.Players discovered that the analog stick featured better control than the D-pad because analog control allowed for varying levels of pressure and 360-degree control, translating into more precise movements in games such as Super Mario 64