Original sentence: Additional customer announcements have included Accelrys, Chevron Corporation, LLNL, NBC Sports, Turner Studios, WebTrends, and Zhone Technologies.BlueArc's current products include the Titan 2100 and Titan 2200, the company's fourth-generation systems.Major industry competitors include Network Appliance and EMC Corporation.The company's first announced customers, in July 2001, were Altera, Extreme Networks and Juniper Networks.The company's offerings have been most widely adopted by customers in the entertainment, Internet services and life sciences markets, with additional sales in energy and gas, electronic discovery, technology, manufacturing and government.The company, through five rounds of funding, has raised in excess of $200 million from venture capital firms, the most recent of which included a $29 million round in June, 2006
Edited sentence: Additional customer announcements have included Accelrys Pharmaceuticals, Chevron Corporation, LLNL, NBC Sports, Turner Studios, WebTrends, and Zhone Technologies.Additional industry competitors include Network Appliance and EMC Corporation.Headquartered in San Jose, California, BlueArc's systems include the Titan 2100 and Titan 2200, the company's fourth-generation systems.The company's first announced customers, in July 2001, were Altera Corporation, Extreme Networks and Juniper Networks.The company's offerings have been most widely adopted by customers in the entertainment, Internet services and life sciences markets, with additional sales in energy and gas, electronic discovery, technology and manufacturing and the federal government.The company, through five rounds of funding, has raised in excess of $200 million from venture capital firms, the most recent of which included a $29 million round in June of 2006