Original sentence: " During his tenure as Chief of the Los Angeles Police, he alowed his name and office to be used in the Jack Webb created detective drama Dragnet, his name was also used as technical advisor during the first season of the police drama Adam-12
Edited sentence: " During his tenure as Chief of the Los Angeles Police, he allowed his name and office to be used in the Jack Webb created detective drama Dragnet, his name was also used as technical advisor during the first season of the police drama Adam-12