Original sentence: Though the Yuan Dynasty was the only Khanate to not convert to Islam, The Mongol rulers of Yuan Dynasty elevated the status of Muslims versus the Chinese, and placed many foreign and non-Han Chinese Muslims in high-ranking posts instead of native Confucian scholars
Edited sentence: Though the Yuan Dynasty was the only Khanate to not accept Islam, The Mongol rulers of Yuan Dynasty elevated the status of Muslims versus the Chinese, and placed many foreign and non-Han Chinese Muslims in high-ranking posts instead of native Confucian scholars