Original sentence: Across the chapel is a second Caravaggio work depicting the The Conversion of Saint Paul on the Road to Damascus (1601).Peter (Italian: Crocifissione di san Pietro; 1600) is a work by Michelangelo Merisi da Caravaggio, painted for the Cerasi Chapel of Santa Maria del Popolo in Rome
Edited sentence: Across the chapel is a second Caravaggio depicting the The Conversion of Saint Paul on the Road to Damascus (1601).It is a zig-zag of diagonals, tipping towards the inevitable martyrdom.Peter (Crocefissione di san Pietro) (1600) is a work by Michelangelo Merisi da Caravaggio, painted for the Cerasi Chapel of Santa Maria del Popolo in Rome.This crucifixion is bloodless but not painless