Original sentence: <ref> HitsDailyDouble.According to these sources, Clarkson reportedly refused to change any of the material, and ended up getting her way, causing tense feelings between her and Davis.Sources have reported that Clive Davis, the head of Sony-BMG, was apparently dissatisfied with the album.These reports were later denied by reps for both RCA and Clive Davis, with Davis specifically stating that Kelly is "one of the top four artists at Sony BMG" and wanted to ensure that she is treated as such
Edited sentence: Clarkson however reportedly refused to change any of the material, and ended up getting her way, causing tense feelings between her and Davis.Many sources have reported that Clive Davis, the head of Sony-BMG, was extremely dissatisfied with the album, allegedly "tearing the album to pieces"