Original sentence: At 18, he was sent to the University of Christiania, failed his examinations but hed the direction of the two musical society of the town.Collected many beautiful violins and violas of Amati, Gasparo da Salò, Guarneri Stradivari and others.Ha also was a clever luthier, after studies in Paris with Vuillaume.He used it for his very powerfull tone, in pair with a magnificent Guarneri del Gesù.He was eventually successful in becaming a high level virtuoso, giving hundreds of thousands concerts (274 in England in one year only), became very famous, and made a huge fortune.Was the owner of one of the finest violin of the world, the wonderful Renaissance violin carved, gilted and decorated, made by Gasparo da Salò about 1574 for Ferdinand II Archduke of Austria
Edited sentence: At 18, he was sent to the University of Christiania, failed his examinations, but hed the direction of the two musical societies of the town.He also was a clever luthier, after studies in Paris with Vuillaume.He collected many beautiful violins and violas of Amati, Gasparo da Salò, Guarneri Stradivari and others.He used it for his very powerful tone, in pair with a magnificent Guarneri del Gesù.He was eventually successful in becoming a high level virtuoso, giving hundreds of thousands concerts (274 in England in one year only), became very famous, and made a huge fortune.He was the owner of one of the finest violin of the world, the wonderful Renaissance violin carved, gilted and decorated, made by Gasparo da Salò about 1574 for Ferdinand II Archduke of Austria