Original sentence: "    He is most well known for his "incomparable pictures of shells"    and illustrated a number of publications by the famous malacologist William Healey Dall.Indiana Dept of Statistics and Geology, Second Annual report of the Department of Statistics and Geology, Indianapolis, 1880.Maryland Geological Survey, Eocene, Baltimore, 1901.Maryland Geological Survey, Miocene, Baltimore, 1904 (published posthumously).McConnell & George M Wheeler, Carboniferous (invertebrate fossils of New Mexico), in Report upon United States Geographical Surveys West of the One Hundredth Meridian, GPO, Washington, 1875-1889 (the Carboniferous section published in 1881).McConnell (died July 25, 1904, Liberty, New York) was one of the world's most acclaimed scientific illustrators.White, A review of the fossil ostreidæ of North America, Washington, GPO, 1884.William Healey Dall, Contributions to the Tertiary Fauna of Florida, Philadelphia, 1903
Edited sentence: "  He is most well known for his "incomparable pictures of shells" and illustrated a number of publications by the famous malacologist William Healey Dall.1875-1889 (the Carboniferous section published in 1881) [ Carboniferous (invertebrate fossils of New Mexico)] In: Report upon United States Geographical Surveys West of the One Hundredth Meridian, GPO, Washington.A review of the fossil ostreidæ of North America.Contributions to the Tertiary Fauna of Florida.Indiana Dept of Statistics and Geology, Second Annual report of the Department of Statistics and Geology, Indianapolis.James Culbertson McConnel, often abbreviated as J.Maryland Geological Survey 1901.Maryland Geological Survey, Miocene, Baltimore, (published posthumously).McConnell & George M.McConnell (born 1844 - died July 25, 1904, Liberty, New York) was one of the world's most acclaimed scientific illustrators.Washington, GPO.White 1884.William Healey Dall 1903