Original sentence: Crey Kingston is also known as King is an African American gentle giant with superhuman strength who is skilled in pro-wrestling.Hawk is English American.He has a very large chest, washboard abs, and bulging triceps  He's not much of a hand-to-hand fighter.He is adorn by most girls at the beach because of his buff body.He is of European descent.He is very muscular and is considered a hunk.He loves the waves and win many surfing contests.His chiseled abs are a noticable feature when he is shirtless.Rachel Logan.Shark is Austrian American.Shark is muscular like the rest of the boys
Edited sentence: Crey Kingston is also known as King is a gentle giant with superhuman strength who is skilled in pro-wrestling.He's not much of a hand-to-hand fighter.Rachel Logan, while working as a lifeguard on a beach