Original sentence: 594 Taliban militants and 80 Pakistani soldiers were killed during the ground offensive.In clashes in Makeen on July 10, 2010, 25 Taliban 3 Pakistani soldiers were killed.The Pakistan Army started the campaign with 28,000 infantry and Airborne troops entering South Waziristan against the Taliban on October 17.The army reported that, since the operation began on October 17, 264 Taliban militants had been killed and 33 Pakistani soldiers had been killed in action.The invasion was timed before winter weather caused snow to block roads, but so that when winter arrived, the cold weather would force Taliban from their hideouts
Edited sentence: 594 Taliban militants were killed and 80 soldiers of the Pak army were martyred during the ground offensive.In clashes in Makeen on July 10, 2010, 25 taliban were killed and 3 Pakistani soldiers were martyred.Major Qaiser,Captain Bilal and Lieutenant Faraz were amongst the martyred officers.The Pakistan Army started the campaign with 28,000 both infantry and Airborne troops entering South Waziristan against the Taliban on October 17.The army reported that, since the operation began on October 17, 264 Taliban militants had been killed and 33 Pakistani soldiers had been martyred.The invasion was timed before winter weather causes snow to block roads, but so that when winter arrives the cold weather would force Taliban forces from their hideouts