Original sentence: ....."In  Oxford Group I wanted to drag people to church by the scruff of their necks, and now ... I felt like marching through Claridge's with a banner.Beverley Nichols reflection after leaving the Oxford group was  He was not impressed with Frank Buchman whom he described as "slick and starched and glossy"  but said t"hat he had fallen for the groupers tactics of confessing their sins to one another.The Book he had written  while in the Group called  A Fool Hath Said was an  influenced Bill Wilson's Bill W.. Nichols having tried smart fiction, pacifism and horticulture had eventually turned to the Oxford Group and the purpose of his book at that time was " to get as many people as possible to share with me the excitement of living Christianity.Tom Driberg a Daily Express columnist (pen name: William Hickey) and MInister Of Parliament , another member who had left,  made his personal views known in the House of Commons by stating Buchman  was nothing but a "soapy racketeer who never repudiated his admiration for Hitler and Himmler
Edited sentence: Beverley Nichols left the Oxford group.He was not impressed with Frank Buchman whom he described as "slick and starched and glossy" but said that he had fallen for the groupers tactics of confessing their sins to one another.His Book A Fool Hath Said was written as a result of his involvement with the Oxford group which became staple reading for Bill Wilson's Bill W.. Nichols having tried smart fiction, pacifism and horticulture had eventually turned to the Oxford Group and the purpose of his book at that time was " to get as many people as possible to share with me the excitement of living Christianity.Nicols in a reflection on his earlier years said "In the old pacifist days I wanted to blow up the War Office.P made comments in the House of Commons that Buchman " was nothing but a "soapy racketeer who never repudiated his admiration for Hitler and Himmler.Tom Driberg an ex member and Daily Express columnist (pen name: William Hickey) and M.Under the ... Oxford Group I wanted to drag people to church by the scruff of their necks, and now ... I felt like marching through Claridge's with a banner