Original sentence: Dahr El Maghara (also spelled Dahr El Mghara, Dahr Al Magharah; ) is a small Lebanese Christian village which is located  about 20 km south of Beirut in the Chouf region of Mount Lebanon.The village felt the rant of the Lebanese Civil War (1975–1990) which directed half the population to migrate to Australia, Canada and other areas of Lebanon (Although strong ties between the Dagher family in Australia and Canada to the small village remain)
Edited sentence: Dahr El Maghara (also spelled Dahr El Mghara, Dahr Al Magharah; ) is a small Lebanese Christian village that is located , about 20 km south of Beirut in the Chouf region of Mount Lebanon.The village felt the wrath of the Lebanese Civil War (1975–1990) which led half the population to migrate to Australia, Canada and other areas of Lebanon (Although strong ties between the Dagher family in Australia and Canada to the small village remain)