Original sentence: A few minutes later, the phone next to him rang.Draper picked up a public phone, then proceeded to "phreak" his call around the world.Draper spoke into the first phone, and, after quite a few seconds, he heard his own voice very faintly on the other phone.Once he had set the call to go through nths of countries, he dialed the number of the public phone next to him.There is an interesting story about Captain Crunch
Edited sentence: An interesting story about Captain Crunch involves what is possibly the most insane phone-call ever.Draper picked up a public phone, then proceeded to literally "phreak" his call around the world.John spoke into the first phone, and, after quite a few seconds, he heard his own voice very faintly on the other phone.Once he had set the call to go through nths of countries, he dialed the number of the public phone right next to him.Sure enough, a few minutes later, the phone next to him rang