Original sentence: Among other points, this document stated that a dictatorial monarchy of King Gyanendra is the chief impediment to progress in Nepal.Baburam Bhattarai (born 18 June 1954) is a Nepalese politician who became the 36th Prime Minister of Nepal in August 2011.Bhattarai has contributed a number of published works, including The Nature of Underdevelopment and Regional structure of Nepal: A Marxist Analysis (Adroit Publishers, Delhi, 2003) which is a cursory rewriting of his PhD thesis.He completed his PhD degree from Jawaharlal Nehru University (New Delhi)in 1986.He is married to Hisila Yami,a fellow maoist leader.He went to high school at Amrit Science College and repeated the same feat and topped the board again.His party  started a revolutionary People's War in Nepal in 1996 that ultimately led to the change of the political system in Nepal.In the School leaving Certificate (SLC) of 1970 AD, he topped the exam in Nepal.Similarly, it is widely believed that he is the principal author of the most successful Election Manifesto brought out by Communist Party of Nepal (Maoists) in March 2008 in preparation of the Constituent Assembly Election held in April 2008.The decade long civil war transformed Nepal from a monarchy into a republic
Edited sentence: Among other points, this document accused that monarchy of King Gyanendra is the chief impediment to progress in Nepal.Baburam Bhattarai (born 18 June 1954) is a Nepalese Maoist rebel who went on to become the 36th Prime Minister of Nepal in August 2011.Bhattarai has contributed a number of published works, including The Nature of Underdevelopment and Regional structure of Nepal: A Marxist Analysis (Adroit Publishers, Delhi, 2003) which is a cursory rewriting of his doctoral thesis.He completed his D.He is married to Hisila Yami,a fellow Maoist rebel.He went to high school at Amrit Science College.His party  started a revolutionary People's War in Nepal in 1996 that ultimately led to the killing of 15,000 people.His party was listed as an international terrorist organization by the Bush Administration in 2003.The decade long civil war transformed Nepal from prosperity to destruction.degree from Jawaharlal Nehru University (New Delhi)in 1986