Original sentence: He attempted to intervene by approaching the officers and telling them to stop.On July 7, 2000 Imam Musa, while in the company of his wife and daughter, witnessed the Metropolitan Police (Washington, DC) beating a citizen
Edited sentence: " On September 9, 2001 UCLA’s Al-Talib magazine co-sponsored a benefit dinner titled Justice for Imam Jamil Al-Amin at UC Irvine.He attempted to save the man by approaching the officers and telling them to stop.Imam Jamil Al-Amin was convicted of murdering an Atlanta police officer while being arrested.Imam Musa voiced some remarks about America, such as:.On July 7, 2000 Imam Musa, while in the company of his wife and daughter, witnessed the Metropolitan Police (Washington, DC) beating a citizen unnecessarily