Original sentence: Although lacking a formal Western education himself, he had success in attracting educated people - including doctors and engineers - to renounce their worldly lives and join the monkhood.As a result, he chose to become an ascetic and received initiation into monkhood with the name Gnanjivandas Swami.As a sadhu (monk), Gnãnjivan Swami was said to be well respected for his 'humble nature and desire to perform service for others'.Born Jinabhai Vasanji to Devchandbhai and Puribai Vasanji of Dhari village, Yogiji Maharaj was the 4th spiritual successor of Bhagwan Swaminarayan and leader of BAPS Swaminarayan Sanstha.From a young age, he was said to have had an inclination towards Hindu spirituality.Yogiji Maharaj (Sadhu Gnãnjivandas) - born May 23, 1892 - January 23, 1971 in the village of Dhari in Gujarat, India
Edited sentence: (Sadhu Gnãnjivandas) - born May 23, 1892 - January 23, 1971 in the village of Dhari in Gujurat, India.Although lacking a formal Western education himself, he attracted even the most educated people - including doctors and engineers - to renounce their worldly lives and join the monkhood.As a result, he chose to become an ascetic and received initiation into monkhood with the name Jnanjivandas Swami.Born Jinabhai Vasanji to Devchandbhai and Puribai Vasanji of Dhari village, From a young age, he had an inclination towards Hindu spirituality.Gnãnjivan Swami, was well respected for his humble nature and desire to perform service for others