Original sentence: At university, Stephen Maynard was involved in social and political activism.Stephen Maynard formally entered politics when he won the nomination for the NDP in London North Centre
Edited sentence: At university, Stephen Maynard took on many opportunities to involve himself in social and political activism.He believes passionately in the importance of youth engagement in the political process, and hopes that his success will inspire young voters to become involved.Stephen Maynard formalised his interest in politics when he won the nomination for the NDP in London North Centre