Original sentence: All were uniformly concerned with the loss of their personal powers and privileges, and at most, with regional issues.As she was cornered, she knew there was only one option to take was to jump off which she did.For a considerable length of time after the start of the Mutiny, she was in correspondence with the British and professed to be on the British side, stating in her letters that she hoped in return that the East India Company would eventually restore all privileges to her son.In actual fact, most sources have the Rani being shot or run through with a saber and there is no mention of a cliff.Indeed Laksmi Bai's main objective throughout the Mutiny seems to have been to secure the throne of Jhansi for her adopted son.It is also unlikely that the many princes who led the Mutiny were in any way more than peripherally concerned with the concept of a united India.It is probable that soldiers in her pay took part in the massacre.The folklore surrounding her during the war is that during the battle the Rani was trying to escape and two British officers followed her.There are also allegations that Lakshmi Bai did not do enough to prevent the massacre of the British garrison at Jhansi
Edited sentence: (In actual fact, most sources have the Rani being shot or run through with a sabre.As she was cornered, she knew there was only one option to take: jump off.But what would become of her son.During the battle the Rani was trying to escape and two British officers followed her.No mention of a cliff.She swiftly jumped off