Original sentence: The Minnillo recently made the tabloids by being linked romantically with British actor Orlando Bloom.Vanessa Minnillo, television hostess and Miss Teen USA 1998, was born November 9, 1980 in the Philippines to an American father of Irish/Italian extraction and a Filipina mother
Edited sentence: The lovely Miss Minnillo recently made the tabloids by being linked romantically with British actor Orlando Bloom.Vanessa Minnillo, television hostess and Miss Teen USA 1998, was born 9 November 1980 in the Philippines to an American father of Irish/Italian extraction and a Filipina mother