Original sentence: Pankaj Udhas is a pre-eminent Ghazal singer from India.Pankaj Udhas was born on 17 May, 1951 in Jetpur in the Gujarat State of India, and is the youngest of three brothers.Pankaj is most prominantly known for singing in the film Naam (1986 film), in which his song Chitthi Aayee Hai became an instant hit and ensured the film was successful, despite a medicore plot and roppy acting
Edited sentence: Pankaj Udhas (born 17 May 1951) is a preeminent Ghazal singer from India.Pankaj Udhas was born in Jetpur in the Gujarat State of India, and is the youngest of three brothers.Pankaj is most prominently known for singing in the film Naam (1986 film), in which his song Chitthi Aayee Hai became an instant hit and ensured the film was successful, despite a mediocre plot and roppy acting