Original sentence: En route to the island, the gang also meet Jacques, who runs the ferry from the island to the mainland, Beau, Simone's hunky gardener and Snakebite Scruggs, a grungy fisherman
Edited sentence: En route to the island, the gang also meet Jacques, who runs the ferry from the island to the mainland, Beau, Simone's muscular gardener and Snakebite Scruggs, a grungy fisherman