Original sentence: A coroner found that Jason Moran and Kinniburgh were present during Gangitano's murder in January 1998.He met his future wife, Trisha Kane,  at 15 years of age  She is the daughter of Les Kane, a Melbourne Painter and Docker and reputed criminal.Jason Moran attended.Moran was suspected in the killing of Alphonse Gangitano.the funeral of Victor Peirce
Edited sentence: All three were feared for their ruthless violence across the west.He met his future wife, Trisha Kane at the age of 15.His early working life consisted of time spent at the Melbourne wharfs.Kane is the daughter of Les Kane, a notable Melbourne Painter and Docker and career criminal.Moran was also know to be the leading force of a young up and coming crew from the western suburbs that included some of the west's most vicious thugs.Moran was among mourners at the funeral of Victor Peirce.Moran was suspected of the killing of Alphonse Gangitano and with Graham Kinniburgh.Most of this crew are now dead or incarcerated.The crew included Toffie Abdul, Lenny Anns and Bluey Watkins who Moran looked to as some form of protégé.Watkins and Abdul were one time associates of the late Andrew Veniamin