Original sentence: Around 1.3 million Palestinians live in the Gaza strip, the majority of whom are refugees or their direct descendants, who fled Israel during the 1948 Arab-Israeli War (see Palestinian exodus); as a result it has a high population density.Most people in the strip are Muslim, with small Christian (0.7%) and Jewish (0.6%) minorities.Since 1967, around 25 Israeli settlements have been constructed in the Gaza Strip, though as of 2005 the Israeli government plans to remove all Israelis from these settlements.The population is growing by around 4% a year, with both Palestinians and Jewish settlers having large families.These Israeli residents are allocated several orders of magnitude more land per capita than the Palestinian population
Edited sentence: Around 1.3 million Palestinians live in the Gaza strip, some of which are refugees or their direct descendants who fled Israel during the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, others migrated after the 1948 war due to economic prospects.As a result it has a high population density.Since 1967, around 25 new Israeli settlements have been constructed in the Gaza Strip, although a number of settlements existed before the war