Original sentence: Cadet parades of the several-hundred-strong Cadet Corps were reviewed from this vantage point.Sometimes the cadets wore "Full Dress" uniforms with brass buttons and breastplates, sashes, gold brocade, and medals.The Esplanade provided a scenic view of the vast Parade Field and the Great South Bay beyond
Edited sentence: Cadet parades were viewed from this vantage point and the several-hundred-strong Cadet Corps "passing in review" was indeed an impressive site.It was truly a breathtaking view that LSMA students, who saw it every day, sometimes took for granted.The Esplanade provided a magnificent view of the vast Parade Field and the Great South Bay beyond.Watching the cadets was especially impressive when they were in "Full Dress" uniforms with their brass buttons and breastplates, their sashes, gold brocade and their medals