Original sentence: Crouch signed with the Kansas City Chiefs in January 2005, and has since been allocated to the Hamburg Sea Devils of NFL Europe, where he is attempting a conversion to the Safety position.Following a tryout with the Green Bay Packers in which they too tried to convert him to a wideout, he retired again and became a sports reporter.Louis Rams of the NFL, but retired before playing a game because he was seen by the NFL as being too small to play quarterback
Edited sentence: Crouch signed with the Kansas City Chiefs in January 2005, and has since been allocated to the Hamburg Sea Devils of NFL Europe, where he is attempting a conversion to the Safety position and will soon quit.Following a tryout with the Green Bay Packers in which they too tried to convert him to a wideout, he quit again and became a sports reporter.Louis Rams of the NFL, but quit before playing a game because he was seen by the NFL as being too small to play quarterback