Original sentence: Developing their sound while listening to performances at The Mill, they formed the Ting Tings.In 1998, multi-instrumentalist Katie White started her music career in a girl group punk trio TKO - short for Total Knock Out - with two friends from Lowton school, Joanne Leeton and Emma Lally.In March 2001, Katie attended Leeds University and met Jules De Martino
Edited sentence: Developing their sound while listening to performances at The Mill, they formed The Ting Tings.In 1998, singer Katie White started her music career in a girl group punk trio TKO - short for Total Knock Out - with two friends from Lowton school, Joanne Leeton and Emma Lally.In March 2001, David White brought in songwriter Jules De Martino who wrote four songs for TKO