Original sentence: Friend and fan of Rolling Stone Ronnie Wood, Mark shared guitar with him on several events such as the Hero2Hero gigs, Shepherd's Bush Empire and Fleadh Festival in 2004.In Time", and while the band wasn't totally satisfied with the release itself, Mark has remained with them ever since.Mark joined The Charlatans in 1991 after Jon Baker's departure
Edited sentence: Collins joined The Charlatans in 1991 after Jon Baker's departure.Friend and fan of Rolling Stone Ronnie Wood, Collins shared guitar with him on several events such as the Hero2Hero gigs, Shepherd's Bush Empire and Fleadh Festival in 2004.In Time", and while the band was not totally satisfied with the release itself, he has remained with them ever since