Original sentence: The head teacher george harris is a student at the school aswell as he is only 13 he is dating a girl called channelle bohla who is in hes year that is me he is very good looking and is a very good head teacher he is strict when h needs to be and is always happy and never has a day off this is the school you want to go to
Edited sentence: As a result of this, a club called "The YEC", standing for "Young Earth Citizen" was formed to link Adeyfield with other schools around the world.One project that they work on is to write articles for an online magazine.Staff development and wellbeing is also coordinated at consortium level.The consortium consists of Adeyfield School, Astley Cooper School and Longdean School.The school also has many awards including an International Schools Status.The school works in consortium with two neighboring schools to enhance post-16 provision