Original sentence: Critics point to graphics, colors and the hiring of Gary Thorne as examples of bias..  Fisher alleges that the Orioles are using MASN to discourage the growth of the Nationals fanbase and to maintain Orioles dominance of the greater Baltimore-Washington area
Edited sentence: Critics point to graphics, colors and the hiring of Gary Thorne for Orioles broadcasts as examples of bias.Fisher alleges that the Orioles are using MASN to discourage the growth of the Nationals fanbase and to maintain Orioles dominance of the greater Baltimore-Washington area