Original sentence: Born in Leeds, United Kingdom, Stevie Wright currently lives in Narooma (rural NSW) with his wife Faye.Stevie's substance abuse problems spiralled out of control in the 1980s and '90s and he came close to death on several occasions, but was pulled back from the brink by his wife Faye and by 2002 was well enough to perform as part of the all-star "Long Way To The Top" national concert tour.Wright, however, struggled with drug and alcohol addiction, which ultimately de-stabilised his new found success.Written and produced by Vanda & Young, it became a hit — irrelevantly the only 11-minute song to chart at #1 anywhere in the world — and is now regarded as an Australian rock classic
Edited sentence: Born in Leeds, United Kingdom, Stevie Wright currently lives in Narooma on the far south coast of New South Wales with his wife Faye.Stevie's substance abuse problems spiraled out of control in the 1980s and '90s and he came close to death on several occasions, but was pulled back from the brink by his wife Faye and by 2002 was well enough to perform as part of the all-star "Long Way To The Top" national concert tour.Wright, however, struggled with drug and alcohol addiction, which ultimately destabilised his new found success.Written and produced by Vanda & Young, it became a hit — the only 11-minute song to chart at #1 anywhere in the world — and is now regarded as an Australian rock classic