Original sentence: There are many questions brought up by this including the question of whether or not someone should be forced to submit to a brain scan if his or her brain can be stimulated in such a way that it can be determined what, if any, crimes that person is guilty of
Edited sentence: There are many questions brought up by this including the question of whether or not we should force someone to submit to a brain scan if we can stimulate his or her brain in such a way that we will be able to tell what, if any, crimes that person is guilty of