Original sentence: Since at least 1450, the pejorative word slut has been used to describe a sexually promiscuous woman and also historically refers to an unhygienic woman who is personally dirty and unkempt
Edited sentence: In great contrast to the glamour of rake for men, slut is generally regarded as unglamourous and also historically refers to an unhygienic woman who is personally dirty and unkempt.Since at least 1450, the pejorative word slut describes a sexually promiscuous woman