Original sentence: Five days after the shootings, 100,000 people demonstrated in Washington, D.Just after Scheuer's death, the English songwriter Harvey Andrews composed a song entitled "Hey Sandy", whose lyrics are addressed to her:.She was shot through the throat with an M-1 rifle from a distance of 130 yards (119 meters) while walking between classes
Edited sentence: Just after Scheuer's death in 1970, the English songwriter Harvey Andrews composed a song entitled "Hey Sandy", whose lyrics are addressed to her:.Just five days after the shootings, 100,000 people demonstrated in Washington, D.She was shot through the throat with an M-1 rifle from a distance of 130 yards (119 meters) while walking from one class to the next