Original sentence: San Luis de la Paz is surrounded by many mountains and rock formations, like the Bernalejo hill and the Bridge of God.The Manzanares and San Juan Rivers are inside the canyon
Edited sentence: (Sounds more like an advertisement than a description).(descubre14) In the municipality of San José Iturbide, on the highway to Tierra Blanca, the El Salto Hacia la Libertad (Leap Toward Freedom) adventure park is located, in a small valley with a lake in an arid area with desert vegetation.Here, the Manzanares and San Juan Rivers cross the landscape having not only carved the canyon giving it its characteristic steep walls, but they are also subsidiaries to a number of waterfalls along the canyon.It is amazing to see the deserted and rundown remains of ancestral constructions everywhere, like the Jesuits’ Mining Ovens and the Modelo Schools.It is surrounded by many mountains and rock formations, like the Bernalejo hill and the Bridge of God.Mineral de Pozos, the most important mining town in the state of Guanajuato, dating back to between the end of the 19th century to the beginning of the 20th, is just like a film set.San Luis de la Paz, with its colonial elegance and narrow streets, preserves to date unique places and buildings that speak of its fascinating past.There is also a forest with many varieties of trees such as pine and fir, home to wildlife such as deer and eagle.They range from native rock paintings in nearby hills, the remains of antique cobblestone Spanish roads, to forgotten chapel ruins and old structures.Vergel de Bernalejo is an Eden:  it’s a place with wonderful natural scenery and caves that house marvellous stalactites and stalagmites.Visitors can rappel, hike, parasail and more