Original sentence: No End in Sight is a documentary film that concentrates on alleged mistakes made by the Bush administration in the two to three month period following the invasion of Iraq in March 2003.The film portrays these errors as the cause of recent problems in Iraq, such as the rise of the insurgency, a lack of security and basic utilities for many Iraqis, sectarian violence and the risk of complete civil war
Edited sentence: Mistakes that resulted in what has since occurred: much of Iraq slowly but surely descending into increasing lawlessness, the rise of the insurgency, lack of security for the average Iraqi, lack of basic utility services like electricity and water, sectarian violence and the risk of complete civil war.No End in Sight is a documentary film that concentrates on the mistakes made by the Bush administration in the two-three months immediately following the invasion of Iraq in March 2003