Original sentence: Also, one of the most famous  beach events occurs in the first week of January when the temperature is around 0°C, the "Polar Bear Club", held annually in the spirit of strengthening and praying for good health by Choseon Beach Hotel since 1988.Dongbaekseom (Dongbaek Island), located at the south end of the beach, offers a magnificent view of the sea by car and its coastline is famous for fishing
Edited sentence: Also, one of the most famous beach events occurs in the first week of January when the temperature is around 0°C, the "Polar Bear Club", held annually in the spirit of strengthening and praying for good health by Choseon Beach Hotel since 1988.Dongbaekseom (Dongbaek Island) located at the south end of the beach offers a magnificent view of the sea by car and its coastline is famous for fishing