Original sentence: Her skill is so great that critics and media alike have drawn comparisons to abstract artists Wassily Kandinsky and Jackson Pollock.To many critics, what is most impressive about her work is her ability to paint in layers and to fill the canvas, instead of painting in one layer and leaving most of the canvas blank, like other four-year olds
Edited sentence: His skill in manipulating his daughter and the public is so great that critics and media alike have drawn comparisons to abstract artists Wassily Kandinsky and Jackson Pollock.To many critics, what is most impressive about her work is that her dad either instructed her or directly painted over her childish scribbles