Original sentence: Dwight Brooks and Michael Scanlon, created a newsprint mill Powell River north of Vancouver.In 1911 Julius Bloedel, a Seattle lawyer, along with his two partners, John Stewart and Patrick Welch, began acquiring large blocks of Vancouver Island forests.MacMillan Bloedel Limited, sometimes referred to as "MacBlo", was a forestry company headquartered in Vancouver, British Columbia.MacMillan Company, which was created by Harvey, or H.MacMillan, British Columbia’s first Chief Forester
Edited sentence: Dwight Brooks and Michael Scanlon, found that the Powell River north of Vancouver was the perfect location for a newsprint mill.In 1911, Julius Bloedel, a Seattle lawyer, along with his two partners, John Stewart and Patrick Welch, began acquiring large blocks of Vancouver Island forests.MacMillan Bloedel Limited, sometimes referred to as "MacBlo", was a huge forestry company headquartered in Vancouver, British Columbia.MacMillan Company, which was created by Harvey — better known as H.— MacMillan, British Columbia’s first Chief Forester