Original sentence: Coraline leaves the front porch, and encounters the cat (Keith David), who it turns out can talk in this world.In a prologue-esque scene, a strange set of metallic needle hands are seen catching a doll of an African-American girl, tearing it down and changing it into a doll with blue hair, a raincoat, and freckles
Edited sentence: Coraline leaves the front porch, and encounters the cat (Keith David), who, as it turns out, can talk in the other world.In a prologue-esque scene, a strange set of metallic needle hands are seen catching a doll of a little girl with pigtails and a pink dress, tearing it down and changing it into a new doll, a little girl with blue hair, a raincoat, and freckles