Original sentence: On 1st February, 2008, Microsoft made an unsolicited bid to purchase the fully diluted outstanding shares of Yahoo for up to $44.6 billion, though this offer was later rejected on February 10
Edited sentence: On 1st February, 2008, Microsoft made an unsolicited bid to purchase the fully diluted outstanding shares of Yahoo for up to $44.6 billion, following the company's struggle against rival search-engine company, Google, though this offer was later rejected on the 10th