Original sentence: A substantial amount of land is now used as a park and ride for cars, lorries and other vehicles park overnight, and mature trees on its western side have been cut down to make way for a Nottingham Express Transit tram line.The Forest has been part of Nottingham's history and heritage for many years but it is currently under great pressure
Edited sentence: A substantial amount of land is now used as a park and ride for cars, lorries and other vehicles park overnight and mature trees, on its western side, have been cut down to make way for Nottingham Express Transit.The Forest has been part of Nottingham's history and heritage for many years but its trees, flowers, paths and fresh air could become just a memory