Original sentence: (This is strange because Tilapia is a freshwater species).It encountered Blue Whales near Santa Rosa Island.It saw a missle fired from Vandenburg Air Force Base as well as cruise missiles being tested near Point Mugu.There were the times when amazing animals were collected; Hyperiid amphipods in the midwater trawl, Tilapia caught miles offshore several days after a storm
Edited sentence: It encountered blue whales near Santa Rosa Island.Missile tracks were viewed from its deck, including a missile fired from Vandenberg Air Force Base as well as cruise missiles being tested near Point Mugu.There were the times when amazing animals were collected; hyperiid amphipods in the midwater trawl and  Tilapia, a freshwater fish, caught miles offshore several days after a storm