Original sentence: Tarusa has two cemeteries: the Old Cemetery and the New Cemetery.The Old Cemetery has the graves of writer Konstantin Paustovsky, sculptor Vasili Vatagin, Marina Tsvetaeva’s daughter Ariadna Efron, builder Sergey Krutilin, writer Nadezhda Krandievskaya, local entrepreneur and founder of the Yakor Hotel () Alexander Shuklin
Edited sentence: Tarusa has two cemetries - the Old Cemetry and the New Cemetry.The Old Cemetry has the graves of writer Konstantin Paustovsky, sculptor Vasili Vatagin, Marina Tsvetaeva’s daughter Ariadna Efron, builder Sergey Krutilin, writer Nadezhda Krandievskaya, legendary local entrepreneur and founder of the Yakor Hotel () Alexander Shuklin