Original sentence: Established in 1987, the Orange County High School of the Arts (a.OCHSA was one of 250 schools nationwide, and was one of only five public schools in Orange County, and one of only 35 schools in the State of California, to receive this award.The Instrumental Music department holds many concerts throughout the year, and performed at Carnegie Hall in New York City in spring of 2006
Edited sentence: Established in 1987, the prestigious Orange County High School of the Arts (a.OCHSA was one of 250 schools nationwide, and was one of only five public schools in Orange County, and one of only 35 schools in the State of California, to receive this prestigious award.The Instrumental Music department holds many concerts throughout the year, and performed at the very prestigious Carnegie Hall in New York City in spring of 2006