Original sentence: As of December 2008 she lived in the Camberwell  neighbourhood in south London where she was brought up.Dog Days Are Over was inspired by an art installation , Kiss With A Fist  is about "giving as good as you get.In her teens Welch became a fan of  Nirvana and Green Day.She attended concerts  by art college bands
Edited sentence: As of December 2008 she lived in the Camberwell neighbourhood in south London where she was brought up.Dog Days Are Over was inspired by an art installation, Kiss With A Fist is about "giving as good as you get.In her teens Welch became a fan of Nirvana and Green Day.She attended concerts by art college bands