Original sentence: The road traverses through ghats till Sakleshpura from Mangalooru and then it is Bayaluseemae region up to Bengaluru, where the road is much straighter.This national highway 48 offers scenic view of western ghats (Sahayadri) of India during the monsoon season
Edited sentence: The road traverses through ghats till Sakleshpura from Mangalooru and then it is Bayaluseemae region up to Bengaluru, where road is much straight.This national highway 48 offers breathtaking view of western ghats (Sahayadri) of India during the monsoon season