Original sentence: It was originally built as a military academy in 1811, then rennovated in 1936.The band list of this school includes: symphonic, marching, jazz, pep, and orchestra.The new high school has recently been completed, and will be in use starting August 24, 2009.The older part of the high school was turned into a junior high, after the replacement in the 1970's, which was added on.There are also a few choirs, which would include: symphonic, concert, and madrigals.There is a full variety of sports and programs at Gallia Academy, inluding FFA (Future Farmers of America), Key Club, many choirs, and many Bands.These groups are also praised
Edited sentence: It was originally built as a military academy in 1811, then renovated in 1936.The new high school has recently been completed and will be in use starting August 24 2009.The older part of the high school was turned into a junior high, after the replacement in the 1970s, which was added on.There is a full variety of sports and programs at Gallia Academy, including FFA (Future Farmers of America), Key Club, and many choirs and bands such as the symphonic choir, marching band, jazz band, pep club, and an orchestra