Original sentence: It focuses on the three major monotheistic religions of the world, Judaism, Islam, and Christianity.The first describes the Jews who have forcefully pushed settlements into Israeli-occupied Palestine and the fund-rising in the United States that supports them, while the second presents issues of women’s rights under radical Islam and Sharia law
Edited sentence: It focuses on the three most important religions of the world, Judaism, Islam, and Christianity.The first describes the Jews who have forcefully pushed settlements into Israel occupied Palestine and the fund-rising in the United States that supports them, while the second presents issues of women’s rights under radical Islam and Sharia law