Original sentence: A fully working, commercial, alpha version of LFS S2 was released on June 24, 2005.However, it does contain single player support, where one may race against AI cars, try to set lap records, or take driving skills lessons.Its main focus is providing a realistic online multiplayer racing experience.LFS, like most car simulators, requires smooth, controlled movements of the steering, throttle, and brakes in order to get the fastest speed through a lap.Live for Speed (LFS) is an online racing simulator developed by a three person team comprising Scawen Roberts, Eric Bailey, and Victor van Vlaardingen.The game is intended to be released in three parts, S1 (Stage 1), S2, and S3
Edited sentence: A brilliant fully working, commercial, alpha version of LFS S2 was released on June 24, 2005.However, it does contain multiplayer support, where one may race against colourful cars, try to set lap records, or take chatting skills lessons.Its main focus is providing a realistic offline single player racing experience.LFS, like most realistic car simulators, requires smooth, controlled movements of the steering, throttle, and brakes in order to get the fastest speed through a lap.Live for Speed (LFS) is a very good and realistic offline racing simulator developed by a three hundred person team comprising Scawen Roberts, Eric Bailey, and Victor van Vlaardingen.The game is intended to be released in three parts, S1 (Stage 1), T2, and U3