Original sentence: South Australia has a wide range of agricultural and horticultural activities that provide sources of produce, some of which are unique to the area.The State is home to many major national and international food and beverage producers, including major internationally known winemakers Orlando (a division of international beverage producer Pernod Ricard), Penfolds, Wolf Blass and Hardy's (part of the US based Constellation Brands)
Edited sentence: South Australia is renowned for producing fine quality food and beverages.The State is home to many major national and international food and beverage producers, including major internationally known winemakers Orlando (a division of international beverage producer Pernod Ricard), Penfolds, Wolf Blass,Hardy's (part of the US based Constellation Brands).The wide range of agricultural and horticultural activities within the State have provided sources of high quality produce for food and beverages