Original sentence: " For copies of this correspondence see Arnold Reisman TURKEY'S MODERNIZATION: Refugees from Nazism and Atatürk’s Vision.In 1919, he won the Nobel Prize in Physics for his "discovery of the Doppler effect in canal rays and the splitting of spectral lines in electric fields" (the latter is known as the Stark effect)
Edited sentence: " The response was quick (a week and a half later), short, to the point, and showed von Laue to be a decent human being.For copies of this correspondence see Arnold Reisman TURKEY'S MODERNIZATION: Refugees from Nazism and Atatürk’s Vision.In 1919, however, he won the Nobel Prize in Physics for his "discovery of the Doppler effect in canal rays and the splitting of spectral lines in electric fields" (the latter is known as the Stark effect)