Original sentence: Many offences considered minor by other standards will make the pupil receive a pink slip and his/her parents will be notified.Nanyang is currently focusing on preventing the use of vulgarities and profanities, as well as bullying
Edited sentence: Even the most minor of crimes will make the pupil receive a pink slip and his/her parents will be notified.Nanyang is currently focusing on the preventing the use of vulgarities and profanities, as well as bullying