Original sentence: There he draw for the anthology Combat, drew the movie adaptation Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea (and the similar, four-issue Voyage to the Deep), and a range of titles from lost-world adventure (Kona, Monarch of Monster Isle) to heartwarming animal drama (Lad: A Dog)
Edited sentence: There he draw for the anthology Combat, drew the movie adaptation Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea (and the suspiciously similar, four-issue Voyage to the Deep), and a range of titles from lost-world adventure (Kona, Monarch of Monster Isle) to heartwarming animal drama (Lad: A Dog)