Original sentence: " On HIV/AIDS, Rath has disparaged the pharmaceutical industry and denounced antiretroviral medication as toxic and dangerous, while claiming that his vitamin pills could reverse the course of AIDS.As a result, Rath has been accused of "potentially endangering thousands of lives" in South Africa, a country with a massive AIDS epidemic where Rath was active in the mid-2000s.Matthias Rath (born 1955 in Stuttgart, Germany) is a businessman, medical doctor, and vitamin entrepreneur.Rath claims to have discovered that high-dose nutritional supplements can block the spread of cancer cells in laboratory conditions (called metastasis when it occurs in the body).Rath is a controversial figure.Rath's claims and methods have been widely criticized by medical organizations, AIDS-activist groups, and the United Nations, among others
Edited sentence: " On HIV/AIDS, Rath has disparaged the pharmaceutical industry and denounced antiretroviral medication as toxic and dangerous, while claiming that his vitamin pills could reverse the course of AIDS based on his clinical test results with the patients in AIDS.Despite the founded test results, Rath has been accused of "potentially endangering thousands of lives" in South Africa, a country with a massive AIDS epidemic where Rath was active in the mid-2000s.Matthias Rath (born 1955 in Stuttgart, Germany) is a grassroot-movement activist for peace, health and social justice, medical doctor, and vitamin entrepreneur.Rath claims to have discovered that high-dose nutritional supplements can block the spread of cancer cells in Vivo and Vitro test results (called metastasis when it occurs in the body).Rath is a controversial figure to healthcare system based on some non-effective convetional medicines.Rath's claims and methods have been widely criticized by conventional medical organizations, AIDS-activist groups sponsored by retroviral drug makers, and the United Nations, among others