Original sentence: Carmit Bachar(Formally Known as Carl Bachar) (born September 4, 1974) is an American dancer, singer and actress.Later When she turned 21 Bachar had a sex change and became Carmit.She was born a boy with a cleft lip and cleft palate
Edited sentence: Carmit Bachar (born September 4, 1974) is an American dancer, singer and actress.She was born with a cleft lip and cleft palate