Original sentence: Proponents of animal rights philosophies tend to advocate a rejection of animal husbandry and instead promote veganism.Some techniques of animal husbandry such as factory farming have been attacked by animal welfare groups such as Compassion In World Farming and farmers who use more traditional or organic practices.The animal rights movement has been most vocal in its criticism of systems of animal agriculture.The controversial ethical philosopher Peter Singer regards animal husbandry as unethical in its current form (especially in the western context of factory farming and the high avaliablity of nutrious plant foods), as it fails to take into account the interests of animals on an equal footing with human interests (speciesism), while causing immense suffering for trivial gains.They would argue the term 'animal husbandry' is a pejorative term which helps create a misleading, benevolent paradigm of human-animal interaction
Edited sentence: Animal husbandry, far from being mutually beneficial, is an exploitative system, comparable to Slavery, or in some cases the Holocaust (PETA's 'Holocaust On Your Plate' Campaign), involving immense suffering and loss of life.Animal liberationists would argue Animal husbandry relies on the concept of Speciesism for legitimacy.In the United Kingdom the Soil Association, is an organisation committed to the promotion of organic farming, including organic more 'welfare-friendly' forms of animal husbandry.Modern techniques of Animal husbandry, particually factory farming  have undergone immense criticism; from Animal welfare groups such as Compassion In World Farming and some farmers, especially small-scale noncorporate famers, who base their animal husbandry on 'traditional' often organic model's of farming.Proponents of Animal Rights' philosophies tend to advocate a rejection of Animal husbandry involving the adoption of Veganism.The Animal rights movement has been most vocal in its criticism of systems of animal agriculture.The Ethical philosopher Peter Singer regards animal husbandry as unethical in its current form (especially in the western context of factory farming and the high avaliablity of nutrious plant foods), as it fails to take into account the interests of animals on an equal footing with human interests, while causing immense suffering for trivial gains.They would argue the term 'Animal husbandry' is a pejorative term, which helps creates a misleading, benevolent Paradigm of human-animal interaction