Original sentence: A hard sought after 3rd place in the 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix from 14th (due to problems with traction control during qualifying) tied up the year for Jenson with 56 points in 6th place.In the last 4 races of the season, Jenson had the largest total of points of all the drivers
Edited sentence: An excellent 3rd place in the 2006 Brazilian Grand Prix from 14th (due to problems with traction control during qualifying) tied up a brilliant year for Jenson with 56 points in 6th place.In the past 4 races Jenson has had the largest total of points of all the drivers