Original sentence: One soldier kept a  blog of Hurricane Katrina relief, discussing how the spiritual impetus behind the work measures up against a sense of need and immediate service to suffering humanity.Trained volunteers, employees, officers, and soliders perform the disaster relief work of the Salvation Army
Edited sentence: Disaster Relief work is accomplished with the invaluable assistance of trained volunteers, employees, officers and soldiers.One soldier's blog of Hurricane Katrina relief shows how the spiritual impetus behind the work measures up against a sense of need and immediate service to suffering humanity.This bedrock of faith drives people to devote much of their own selves and resources for the good of others.Without a sense of empowerment, many Salvationist's work would hold little meaning beyond immediate gratification