Original sentence: They are drawn from diverse groups, as varied as Jedi Knights, survivalists, martial artists, dark side marauders, mercenaries, and pirates, but they all use a lightsaber more often than the Force, with few emotions other than hate, rage, and cruelty; the dark side rewards these emotions with immense power, thusly a single Sith Marauder can often go toe-to-toe with any normal single Jedi in saber combat and win.While Marauders are not always the masterminds behind dark plots, they are usually the ones carrying out the plans of their Sith Lord masters
Edited sentence: They are drawn from diverse groups, as varied as Jedi Knights, survivalists, martial artists, dark side marauders, mercenaries, pirates, but they all use a lightsaber more often than the Force, with few  emotions other than hate, rage, and cruelty; the dark side rewards these emotions with immense power, thusly a single Sith Marauder can almost always go toe-to-toe with any single Jedi and win.While they are not always the masterminds behind dark plots, they are always the ones carrying out the plans of their Sith Lord masters