Original sentence: According to tradition, the rosary was given to Saint Dominic in an apparition by the Blessed Virgin Mary in the year 1214 in the church of Prouille.However, most scholarly research suggests a more gradual and organic development of the rosary.There are differing views on the history of the rosary
Edited sentence: According to legend, the rosary was given to Saint Dominic in an apparition by the Blessed Virgin Mary in the year 1214 in the church of Prouille.Other sources and most scholarly research dispute this and suggest a more gradual and organic development of the rosary.There are differing views on the exact history of the rosary