Original sentence: Critics of those who have made claims regarding temple ceremonies allege that those making the claims are disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have entered temples in breach of temple rules and made secret recordings
Edited sentence: As the Church does not make public the details of the ceremonies, any publication of temple material is done illegally.Critics of those who make public by publishing transcripts or detailed accounts of temple ceremonies allege that the publishing is done by disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have entered temples in breach of temple rules and made unauthorized or illegal recordings or transcripts