Original sentence: It is renouned as a prime residential and affluent area of Glasgow.Jordanhill is a mostly upper-middle class area of the fashionable West End of the city of Glasgow, Scotland.The area consists largely of semi-detached housing dating from the early to mid 20th century, with some detached homes and some modern appartments.The area was previously part of the Jordanhill Estate centreed around Jordanhill House
Edited sentence: Jordanhill is a mostly upper-middle class area of the West End of the city of Glasgow, Scotland.The area consists largely of semi-detached housing dating from the early to mid 20th century, with some detached homes and some modern apartments.The area was previously part of the Jordanhill Estate centred around Jordanhill House