Original sentence: Ashe Schow of the Washington Examiner wrote that "She finds time to go to the State of the Union address and tell her story again and again to major media outlets and MTV and promote her college art project (carrying around the mattress) but won’t do what needs to be done to get the man she accused, who is, according to her, a rapist, off the streets and away from other potential victims".Sulkowicz said in January 2015 that no one at the State of the Union seemed to have recognized her: "even when Senator Gillibrand introduced me no one seemed to know who I was"
Edited sentence: " Sulkowicz has also made some statements that reflected self-indulgence when she expressed how no one at the State of the Union seemed to have recognized her.Ashe Schow from the Washington Examiner points out that "She finds time to go to the State of the Union address and tell her story again and again to major media outlets and MTV and promote her college art project (carrying around the mattress) but won’t do what needs to be done to get the man she accused, who is, according to her, a rapist, off the streets and away from other potential victims.Her statement "even when Senator Gillibrand introduced me no one seemed to know who I was"  seems to reflect self-promotion and has not helped to facilitate an overall positive impression of Sulkowicz.Recently, more negative reception towards Sulkowicz has begun to increase