Original sentence: Bryce Barnes played varsity basketball under his dad, Chris Barnes, who is the head coach there.Bryce broke several varsity scoring records in his freshman year including scoring 40 Points in one game.CCHS usually has a ROTC program.The class of 2009 had a notable season for Central Crossing basketball.The freshmen team went 18-0
Edited sentence: Bryce Barnes was one of the two, who played varsity basketball under his dad, Chris Barnes, who is the head coach there.Bryce broke several varsity scoring records in only his freshman year, scoring 40 Points in one game.CCHS usually has very good ROTC program, which wins lots of tournaments and competitions.School Website.The class of 2009 has proved to be a future for Central Crossing basketball.The marching band has been repeatedly rated 1 in their class and contains the most upstanding young musicians of Ohio.With a freshmen team that went 18-0, and two freshmen not even playing for that team, they proved that the future is bright