Original sentence: Some businesses close on Friday when the holiday falls on Saturday, although that is not as common (some close on Monday, but that is even less common), during these years many people only receive two day weekend
Edited sentence: Some businesses close on Friday when the holiday falls on Saturday, although that is not as common (some close on Monday, but that is even less common), so many people are cheated out of their day off, and it degenerates into a regular weekend