Original sentence: In 1942 the Commandos supported the norwegian heavy water sabotage operations led by Special Operations Executive (SOE) trained Norwegian commandos.The raid prompted Hitler to divert 30,000 troops to Norway, upgrade coastal and inland defences, and send the battleship Tirpitz, the battlecruiser (or light battleship) Scharnhorst, the "pocket battleship" [[German battleship Deutschland|Lutzow]] and the heavy cruisers Hipper and Prinz Eugen to Norway — a major reorientation of effort away from the North Atlantic convoy routes for the protection of Norway
Edited sentence: In 1942 the Commandos supported the Norwegian heavy water sabotage operations led by Special Operations Executive (SOE) trained Norwegian commandos.The raid prompted Hitler to divert 30,000 troops to Norway, upgrade coastal and inland defences, and send the battleship Tirpitz, the battlecruiser (or light battleship) Scharnhorst, the "pocket battleship" [[German battleship Deutschland|Lutzow]] and the heavy cruisers Hipper and Prinz Eugen to Norway—a major reorientation of effort away from the North Atlantic convoy routes for the protection of Norway