Original sentence: He was often seen at major cultural events such as the launch party for the International Times and at The Roundhouse.McCartney continued to live in the city - first in Jane Asher's parents' house in the centre of town, and then at a larger property in St John's Wood, a short distance from Abbey Road Studios.The Beatles retired from touring in mid-1966 (after their last concert in Candlestick Park, San Francisco), and Lennon, Harrison and Starr retreated to secure country estates in the so-called 'stockbroker belt', which is well outside of London
Edited sentence: After the band retired from touring in mid-1966 (after their last concert in Candlestick Park, San Francisco), Lennon, Harrison and Starr retreated to secure country estates in the so-called 'stockbroker belt', well outside of London.He was often seen at major cultural events such as the launch party for the International Times at The Roundhouse (which he attended in disguise).However, McCartney continued to live in the city, first in a house in the centre of town, and then at a larger property in St John's Wood, a short distance from Abbey Road Studios.In the later part of The Beatles' career, McCartney wrote such enduring favourites as "Hey Jude", "Let It Be", and "The Long and Winding Road".It has been argued that McCartney was the motivator for much of The Beatles' later work