Original sentence: He also attempted to underscore the American nature and long tradition of deer hunting in the face of animal rights activists.He is noted for his carefully arrange fabricated photographs (called "fictions"), various candid series, a satirical edge, dark humor, and long-standing criticism of leftism
Edited sentence: Craft later became the web master for  Andrea Dworkin, who died in June this year.Dworkin was famous sayings such as, "The only good man is a dead one,".He also attempted to underscore the American nature and long tradition of deer hunting in the face of anti-Vietnam leftists who characterized all hunters as "murderers" (an early [man]ifestation of the ad hominem attacks of PETA, and the radical left's use of smear and slander to ruin the reputations of those with whom they disagreed).He is noted for his carefully arrange fabricated photographs (called "fictions"), various candid series, a satirical edge, dark humor, and long-standing  criticism of leftist art-world twaddle.In an extended article in a June, 2005 issue of "New York Magazine," "anti-porn" feminism was declared to be "a spectacular failure