Original sentence: However, he raises the point that Fanagalo is sometimes used between white South Africans, particularly expatriates, as a signal of South African origin and a way of conveying solidarity in an informal manner.Mining aside, Adendorff suggests that Fanagalo has unfavourable and negative connotations for many South Africans
Edited sentence: However, Adendorff raises the point that Fanagalo is sometimes used between white South Africans, particularly expatriates, as a signal of South African origin and a way of conveying solidarity in an informal manner.Mining aside, Fanagalo has unfavourable and negative connotations for many South Africans