Original sentence: Although an objective viewpoint might see the C64 as the most successful 8-bit machine, the CPC arguably managed a more respectable showing for non-games software.However, C64 floppy drives were by default notoriously slow, due to bad OS coding on Commodore's behalf.It also suffered from a relatively primitive built-in BASIC dialect
Edited sentence: Although an objective viewpoint might see the C64 as the most successful 8-bit games machine, the CPC managed a much more respectable showing for non-games software.However, C64 floppy drives were notoriously slow.It also suffered from a poor built-in BASIC and was not ideal for users who wanted to learn to program in comparison to the other two machines