Original sentence: Douglas "Doug" Band is an aide and counselor to former President Bill Clinton.He began working in the White House in 1995 and has been with President Clinton since then.President Clinton has credited Band with being the originator of CGI and has noted that "I couldn't have done half of what I have done in my post-presidency without him"  Doug and his wife Lily live in New York City
Edited sentence: A native of Sarasota, Florida, Band earned a bachelor's degree from the University of Florida with a major in English and a minor in Ethics.Band has been with President Clinton since then.Band's brother, Roger, a physician, serves as Clinton's personal physician on overseas trips.Doug and his wife Lily live in New York City.Douglas "Doug" Band (born October 1972) is an aide and counselor to former President Bill Clinton.He began working in the White House in 1995 working with Cheryl Mills as an unpaid intern in the White House Counsel's office.He later attended Georgetown University's graduate school at night to earn a master's degree in liberal arts and then he earned a law degree at night from Georgetown University Law Center.He once dated model Naomi Campbell.President Clinton has credited Band with being the originator of CGI and has noted that "I couldn't have done half of what I have done in my post-presidency without him"