Original sentence: However, the Louisiana World's Fair, held in 1984, was widely regarded as a financial failure
Edited sentence: However, the 1984 World's Fair, which transpired during his second term, was an embarrassing failure that was negatively remarked upon nationally.More generally, the financial failure of the World's Fair severely undermined the community's morale and unfortunately presaged the 1986 "oil bust", which fostered far worse times.The World's Fair declared bankruptcy while still operating and failed to pay many contractors, mortally wounding numerous New Orleans-based design and construction companies