Original sentence: He was an early member of the Magical Pact of the Illuminates of Thanateros.This eventually lead to contact being made between Carroll and Tegtmeier, and to Tegtmeier's involvment with the [[Illuminates of Thanateros]
Edited sentence: Along with Peter J.Carroll he founded the Magical Pact of the Illuminates of Thanateros.This eventually lead to contact being made between Carroll and Tegtmeier and the decision to transform the Illuminates of Thanateros from an imaginal association into a formal magical order as outlined in Liber Pactionis