Original sentence: In the north, part of Himalayan range and in south, part of Thar Deset will make the geographical boundaries of Khalistan.Khalistan had some support from some sections of the Sikhs in North America.Most neutral political commentators believe the violence against non-sikhs and then attack on the Golden Temple was the main ignition behind the separatist movement.Paramjit Singh Ajrawat states that Khalistan will be a theocratic state with Sikh ethos and ecumenical principles will make some of the fundamentals of Khalistan's constitution.The Khalistan movement is now widely seen as a smaller scale movement by youth living in the UK and North America...This was as a result of the Indian and Hindu persecution of Sikhs whereby thousands of Sikh women and children were frequently murdered by Hindu mobs.This would make the proposed region a Hindu majority
Edited sentence: In the north, part of Himalayan range and in south, part of Thar Desert will make the geographical boundaries of Khalistan.Khalistan had some support from some sections of the Sikhs in North America, prior to the terrorist attack on Air India Flight 182.Khalistani Terrorist groups are monitored by European and US Governments.Most neutral political commentators believe the violence against non-Sikhs and followed by the removal of gunmen from the Golden Temple was the next catalyst  behind the separatist movement.Paramjit Singh Ajrawat states that Khalistan will be a theocratic state with a non-secular based fundamentalist constitution.The ISI ran Operation K2 in the 90's to create both Kashmir and the remainder of Punjab with the hope of accession of both states to The Islamic State of Pakistan.The Khalistan movement is now widely seen as a smaller scale terrorist movement by youth living in the UK and North America, rather than Punjabis in India themselves wanting a separate state.This would still end up making the proposed region a Hindu majority by default.nl:Khalistan