Original sentence: An architect is a person who is involved in the planning, designing and oversight of a building's construction
Edited sentence: An architect, flatly described, is a person who is involved in the planning, designing and oversight of a building's construction.Architecture (like literature, painting, sculpture, and music) is one of the highest art forms known to mankind.The Wikipedia entry that follows, however, mainly focusses on the ofen banal practicalities of an average architect's professional life