Original sentence: Dylan eventually returned to the city, and on August 28, he met with The Beatles for the very first time in their New York hotel, a meeting which would bring about the radical transformation of the Beatles' writing to a more introspective style
Edited sentence: Dylan eventually returned to the city, and on August 28, he met with The Beatles for the very first time in their New York hotel (during which Dylan reportedly introduced the band on to marijuana), a meeting which would bring about the radical transformation of the Beatles' writing to a more introspective style