Original sentence: For her performance, Kok was nominated for the Best Actress Award again in the Star Awards 2010, but failed to win the award.For the first time in the 13-year long career, Kok was nominated for the Best Actress Award in the Star Awards 2006 for her performance as Jiang Ruqing in Love Concierge, but did not win the award.In 2009, she played the lead role of Alice Zeng, a materialistic and show-off housewife, in Housewives' Holiday, which won her praise and positive reviews from audiences
Edited sentence: For her performance, Kok was nominated for the Best Actress Award again in the Star Awards 2010, but unexpectedly failed to win the award (She was the hot favourite once again).For the first time in the 13-year long career, Kok was nominated for the Best Actress Award in the Star Awards 2006 for her oustanding performance as Jiang Ruqing in Love Concierge.In 2009, she played the lead role of Alice Zeng, a materialistic and show-off housewife, in Housewives' Holiday, which won her much praise and positive reviews from audiences.She was the hot favourite to win but went home empty handed eventually