Original sentence: Many of these were designed by the architect Ernesto Basile.Palazzo dei Normanni (the Norman Palace), a notable example of Norman architecture, this palace houses the Cappella Palatina.The general entered Palermo with his troops (the “Thousands”) on 27 May 1860
Edited sentence: It houses the famous Cappella Palatina.Many of these were designed by the famous architect Ernesto Basile.Palazzo dei Normanni (the Norman Palace), one of the most beautiful Italian palaces and a notable example of Norman architecture.The famous general entered Palermo with his troops (the “Thousands”) on 27 May 1860