Original sentence: In the 2008 school year, at the last game of the season at Chavez, Bear Creek badminton fought hard against the Chavez players and proved victorious
Edited sentence: ALL UP IN THEIR FACE.Chavez had the upper hand and got cocky, believing they would win that day with a 4-1 ratio.However Bear Creek proved victorious and wiped the cocky smiles off all of their faces.In the 2008 school year, at the last game of the season at Chavez, Bear Creek badminton fought hard against the rude and disruptive Chavez players