Original sentence: The webssite states that it tries to write accurate, impartial, balanced essays
Edited sentence: An argument could be raised, though, that the site errs on the side of caution too much in the pursuit of its goal of tolerance, though this claim is hard to corroborate or deny.The purpose of such a website, of course, is to offer facts and allow the reader to make their own conclusions.The site attempts to present the essays using a neutral point of view, and largely succeeds in so doing.This goal appears to have been met, almost every topic being covered from both supportive and antagonistical viewpoints