Original sentence: Josh Ramsay is a Canadian singer, songwriter, recording engineer, record producer, and the lead vocalist of the multi platinum selling band Marianas Trench.Some his more successful works of late include "Call Me Maybe," by Carly Rae Jepsen, "Hit Me Up" by Danny Fernandes, "Fallout," and "Haven't Had Enough" the latter two by Ramsay's own Marianas Trench
Edited sentence: Josh Ramsay (born June 11th, 1985) is a Canadian singer, songwriter, recording engineer, record producer, and the lead vocalist of the multi platinum selling band Marianas Trench.Ramsay recently became one of a few Canadians to ever have direct involvement with four different hit songs at one time.Some his more successful works of late include the international smash, "Call Me Maybe," by Carly Rae Jepsen, "Hit Me Up" by Danny Fernandes, "Fallout," and "Haven't Had Enough" the latter two by Ramsay's own Marianas Trench