Original sentence: Following the conclusion of hostilities in Europe, the property was retained as Scarborough Hall, a hospital for the treatment of nervous disorders, until 1947, when the house was returned to the Clarks and restored to its pre-war functions.Only six years following, though, the couple had sold their home to the government of Toronto, who began to operate it as a lakeside resort in what was then still semi-rural counrty, adding in 1965 a six storey, 100 room addition, and undertook further renovations in 1968.The Clarks made additions to Ranelagh Park in 1941 and 1942, after which the Crown in Right of Canada leased the property as a base for the Women's Royal Naval Service, called HMCS Bytown II
Edited sentence: The Clarks made additions to the Guild in 1941 and 1942, after which the Crown in Right of Canada leased the property as a base for the Women's Royal Naval Service, called HMCS Bytown II, and following the conclusion of hostilities in Europe, retained it until 1947 as Scarborough Hall, a hospital for the treatment of nervous disorders.The house was returned to the Clarks and restored to its pre-war functions, but for only six years before the couple sold their home to the government of Toronto.The municipality began to operate it as the Guild Inn, a lakeside resort in what was then still semi-rural counrty, adding in 1965 a six storey, 100 room addition, and undertook further renovations in 1968