Original sentence: The final force was Lieutenant Perriman's infantry platoon, who were tasked with securing a bridge in the centre of An Nasariyah, along the route the convoy would take.The first was the recovery convoy, which consisted of a cavalry ASLAV troop, under command Lieutenant Nicholas Whitehead, recovery assetsm including a heavy recovery vehicle, and Lietenant Beilken's infantry platoon
Edited sentence: After moving into an assembaly area, the QRF and securing force waited for the recovery convoy to complete their task and begin their move South.Just after 2100h, the recovery element reported they were ready.Just before 1800h, 24 April 2007, the recovery convoy moved out, followed by the QRF and securing force shortly after.The final force was a securing force, which consisted of Lieutenant Perriman's infantry platoon.The first was the recovery convoy, which consisted of a cavalry ASLAV troop, under command Lieutenant Nicholas Whitehead, recovery assets including a heavy recovery vehicle, and Lietenant Beilken's infantry platoon.The recovery convoy.The securing force and QRF moved into the city just after 2100h, and by 2200h, Lietenant Perriman's platoon was in location securing the key bridge.They were tasked with securing a bridge in the centre of An Nasariyah, along the route the convoy would take