Original sentence: (Note: Links are to articles on the actual historical personages, who may not entirely correspond to Shakespeare's portrayal of them — particularly with respect to the title character, Richard III.334-8)…Machiavelli, as Shakespeare may want us to realize, is not a safe guide to practical politics…”.Richard III concludes Shakespeare's first tetralogy (also containing Henry VI parts 1-3)
Edited sentence: (Note: Links are to articles on the actual historical personages, who may not entirely correspond to Shakespeare's portrayal of them—particularly with respect to the title character, Richard III.334–8)…Machiavelli, as Shakespeare may want us to realize, is not a safe guide to practical politics…”.Richard III concludes Shakespeare's first tetralogy (also containing Henry VI parts 1–3)