Original sentence: In South Africa, 4.7 million infections took place for 2002
Edited sentence: On the other hand Uganda, Zambia, and Senegal have began executing programming intervention measures to decelerate HIV spreading and have received positive feedback.The situation in South Africa, where President Thabo Mbeki shares the beliefs of "AIDS denialists," is a negative influence and neglection of the fact that 4.7 million infections took place for 2002