Original sentence: In 1975 at the closing of the war, rather than fleeing the country and abandoning their troops, and unable to surrender to the enemy, General Nguyen Khoa Nam and his deputy General Le Van Hung committed suicide by shooting themsleves in the head
Edited sentence: In 1975 at the closing of the war, rather than fleeing the country and abandoning their troops and unable to surrender to the enemy, General Nguyen Khoa Nam and his deputy General Le Van Hung, committed suicide with shots to the heads.They paid their final sacrifice to a country they so loved