Original sentence: Dodge Hall - The dance hall near the north end of the island, where many social events have been held.Dodge Hall -- Community Center on Northshore Road.Grindstone Island is 44 degrees, 17 minutes north latitude and 76 degrees, 27 minutes west longitude.Grindstone United Methodist Church -- founded in 1890.Grindstone — The hamlet of Grindstone is on the north shore.Rusho Bay - Another bay on the south shore of the island.The cheese factory - a once active factory from when dairy farmers were abundant on the island, it was shut down when the farmers ceased producing milk.Thurso - a small community reaching from Thurso bay, to the crossroads at the church
Edited sentence: "The cheese factory" — A once-active factory from when dairy farmers were abundant on the island.Canoe–Picnic Point State Park.Dodge Hall — A community center on Northshore Road.Grindstone United Methodist Church — A church founded in 1890.Grindstone — A hamlet on the north shore.It was shut down when the farmers ceased producing milk.Rusho Bay — A bay on the south shore of the island.Thurso — A small community reaching from Thurso Bay to the crossroads at the church