Original sentence: Bible Society New Zealand is a Christian organisation dedicated to supplying bibles within New Zealand, and supporting Bible Societies around the world to do the same within their respective countries.Chaplain Class One Lance Lukin perceived a need for this project and contacted Bible Society New Zealand to make it happen.It is a member of the United Bible Societies, a fellowship of 146 Bible Societies throughout the world which co-operate to make the the Bible available to people everywhere in a language they can understand and at a price they can afford
Edited sentence: Bible Society New Zealand is a Christian organisation dedicated to delivering God's Word within New Zealand, and supporting Bible Societies around the world to do the same within their respective countries.Chaplain Class One Lance Lukin recognised the need for this project and contacted Bible Society New Zealand to make it happen.It is a member of the United Bible Societies, a fellowship of 146 Bible Societies throughout the world which co-operate to make the Word of God available to people everywhere in a language they can understand and at a price they can afford