Original sentence: Another aspect of nu-metal guitar work is the use of electronic effects.Guitar solos are generally not part of nu-metal songwriting, though there are exceptions, such as Adema, Inner Surge, Saliva and [[System of a Down], even so these solos generally rely on blues based scales, as opposed to the more technical solos of of other metal genres.Luminaries of nu metal such as Korn, Deftones, and Limp Bizkit have all utilized this tactic in their work.Usually outboard effects peddles are manipulated to enhance simple single note riffs or add to simple to play chord riffs
Edited sentence: Guitar solos are generally not part of nu-metal songwriting, though there are exceptions, such as Adema, Inner Surge, Saliva and [[System of a Down], even so these solos generally rely on blues based scales, as opposed to the ultra-technical solos of 80s shredders]  Another aspect of nu-metal guitar work is the use of electronic effects.Luminaries of nu/rap metal such as Korn, deftones, and Limp Bizkit utilized this tactic on most of their work.Usually outboard effects peddles are manipulated to color simple single note riffs or the add to the simple chord riffs