Original sentence: Hawayo Takata, a Reiki Master under the tutelage of Chujiro Hayashi (林 忠次郎, 1880–1940), construed Reiki's history of development in order to make Reiki more appealing to the West
Edited sentence: Hawayo Takata, a Reiki Master attuned by Chujiro Hayashi (林 忠次郎, 1880–1940), construed Reiki's history of development in order to make Reiki more appealing to the West