Original sentence: 56, known as the "Scottish" Symphony, is large-scale  work by Felix Mendelssohn.It is especially through this symphony that Mendelssohn revealed his true genius of structure, contrapuntal skills, and maintaining an extremely high intellectual depth while at the same time audience-pleasing, with many themes well-established into popular culture.It is widely agreed that a painting on a Scotland trip made by Mendelssohn had inspired the 33-year-old composer, especially the depressing, opening theme of the opening movement.Other pecularities lies in the coda of the finale, where he introduces a complete new German majestic theme to close the work overwhelmingly.The emotional scope of the work is huge, consisting an extremely grand first movement where its height of its power reveals in its development, a joyous second movement of possibly Scottish folk music, a slow movement maintaining a constant struggle between love and fate, and a finale that is quite obviously a Scottish folk dance
Edited sentence: 56, known as the "Scottish" Symphony, is a work by Felix Mendelssohn.A pecularity lies in the coda of the finale, where he introduces a complete new German majestic theme to close the work in a completely different manner from the rest of the finale.It is thought that a painting on a Scotland trip made by Mendelssohn had inspired the 33-year-old composer, especially the opening theme of the first movement.The emotional scope of the work is wide, consisting a grand first movement, a joyous second movement of possibly Scottish folk music, a slow movement maintaining an apparent struggle between love and fate, and a finale that takes its components from Scottish folk dance