Original sentence: He coined the phrase "pie in the sky", which appeared in his song "The Preacher and the Slave" (a parody of the then well-known hymn "In the Sweet Bye and Bye"):.In a letter to the court, Hill continued to deny that the state had a right to inquire into the origins of his wound, leaving little doubt that the judges would affirm the conviction.Postal Service in 1917 because of its "subversive potential".President Woodrow Wilson, Helen Keller, and Sweden all became involved in a bid for clemency.Suggestions varied from enshrining them at the AFL-CIO headquarters in Washington, DC to Abbie Hoffman's suggestion that they be eaten by today's "Joe Hills"-like Billy Bragg and Michelle Shocked.The envelope, with a photo affixed captioned, "Joe Hill murdered by the capitalist class, Nov.While Utah was not a union-friendly state, Joe's earlier involvement as a Wobblie "song man" is thought to be unrelated to his conviction and execution.newspaper Industrial Worker, identifying himself as a member of the Portland, Oregon I
Edited sentence: " The envelope, with a photo affixed captioned, "Joe Hill murdered by the capitalist class, Nov.He coined the phrase "pie in the sky" which appeared in his song "The Preacher and the Slave" (a parody of the then well known hymn "In the Sweet Bye and Bye"):.In a letter to the Supreme Court, Hill remained belligerent concerning the state's right to inquiry as to the origins of his wound, offering the court no possibility but affirming the conviction.Postal Service in 1917 because of its "subversive potential.President Woodrow Wilson, Helen Keller and Sweden all became involved in a bid for clemency.Suggestions varied from enshrining them at the AFL-CIO headquarters in Washington DC to Abbie Hoffman's suggestion that they be eaten by today's "Joe Hills"-like Billy Bragg and Michelle Shocked.While Utah was not a union friendly state, Joe's earlier involvement as a Wobblie "song man", was not related to his tragic conviction and execution.newspaper, Industrial Worker, identifying himself as a member of the Portland, Oregon I