Original sentence: MaRS Discovery District - Official website.MaRS Discovery District is a collection of interconnected buildings in downtown Toronto dedicated to medical and biological research.The centre has been criticized by peace groups for its involvement with US military research.The centre is significant because it marks the Canadian continuation of a trend established in the US after introduction of the Bayh-Dole act, whose goal was to develop more university research into commercial products but appears to have had the opposite effect.The goals of MaRS are to commercialize publicly funded medical research with the help of local private enterprises and as such is a public-private partnership
Edited sentence: Creating powerful networks that will meaningfully connect the leadership of Canada’s scientific, business, investment and cultural communities to their international peers.Developing and maturing Canadian business talent.Directly intervening and assisting a number of emerging companies, with risk capital, management resources, strategic business tools and access to global markets.Ensure that Canadians receive the full economic benefits of their investment in science and technology research and development.Help made-in-Canada discoveries make a positive difference to the health and quality of life of Canadians and others around the world.MaRS Discovery District is a collection of interconnected buildings in downtown Toronto dedicated to cutting-edge medical and biological research.MaRS Official Website.MaRS is focused on building Canada’s next generation of technology companies to become global market leaders.Strengthen Canada's ability to commercialize its substantial investment in academic research to benefit the health and economic future of Canadians.Systematically building a robust, sustainable entrepreneurial ecosystem that supports the development of young companies