Original sentence: Anthropologist Peter Schmidt discovered through the communication of oral tradition that the Haya have been forging steel for nearly 2000 years.Kente used silk from the Anaphe moth and was produced by the Akan people(Ashante, Fante, Enzema)in the countries of Ghana and Ivory Coast
Edited sentence: Anthropologist  discovered through the communication of oral tradition that the Haya have been forging steel for nearly 2000 years.Kente used silk from the Anaphe moth and was produced by the Akan people (Ashante, Fante, Enzema) in the countries of Ghana and Ivory Coast