Original sentence: " The Holy Science includes his astronomical explanation for a shorter Yuga Cycle, in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200x2, one descending Kali Yuga cycle, followed by an ascending cycle).He also noted that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity
Edited sentence: " The Holy Science offers an astronomical explanation for a shorter Yuga Cycle in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200x2 = one descending Kali Yuga cycle followed by an ascending cycle).It also suggests that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity