Original sentence: According to reports, he was not taking part in the Vietnam War protests that preceded the shootings, but simply walking between classes.Five days after the shootings, 100,000 people demonstrated in Washington DC against the war.Official reports stated that Schroeder was actually 382 feet from the National Guard at the time he was shot.Three other students were killed in the shootings: Allison Krause, Jeffrey Miller and Sandra Scheuer.William Knox Schroeder (July 20, 1950 - May 4, 1970) was a student at Kent State University, Ohio, when he was killed by Ohio National Guardsmen in the Kent State shootings
Edited sentence: "  (Note: Schroeder was actually 382 feet from the National Guard at the time he was shot.) Three other students were killed in the shootings: Allison Krause, Jeffrey Miller and Sandra Scheuer.According to reports, he was not taking part in the Vietnam War protests that preceded the shootings, but simply going from one class to the next.Just five days after the shootings, 100,000 people demonstrated in Washington DC against the war.William Knox Schroeder (July 20, 1950 - May 4, 1970) was a student at Kent State University, Ohio, when he was killed by Ohio National Guardsmen in the Kent State shootings on May 4, 1970