Original sentence: The Dawes Commission registered tribal members in official rolls, and gave out individual land allotments
Edited sentence: In violation of earlier treaties the Dawes Commission registered tribal members in official rolls, and forced individual land allotments upon the Tribe's members allowing the "surplus" land to be ceded for white settlement.Many of the allotments were given "guardianship" to third parties while the owners where of the age of minority; when the oil boom started the guardianship's became very lucrative causing a cottage industry of exploitative arrangements of which the future governor of Oklahoma, Charles Haskell, among other Oklahoma elites, took advantage of as detailed in Angie Debo's controversial book "And Still the Waters Run