Original sentence: In 1999 ODU agreed to work with American Maglev on a project to build its a Maglev system on its campus.In 2004 ODU opened the brand new Engineering & Computational Sciences building, which is the first LEED (Leadership in Energy and Environmental Design) certified higher education building in Virginia.Old Dominion is a tier 4 public university and primarily serves as a community and commuter college
Edited sentence: As of 2004, it had approximately 14,200 undergraduate students and 6,600 graduate students.In 1999 ODU began a project to build its own Maglev system.Old Dominion is known in the state as a tier 4 university with low academic standards, and is regarded primarily as a community and commuter college.in 2004 ODU opened the brand new Engineering & Computational Sciences building, which is the first LEED (Leadership in Energy and Environmental Design) certified higher education building in Virginia