Original sentence: Jackson, a former member of the group Badfinger, to whom he pays homage onstage, with a version of the Badfinger penned song, "Without You", made famous by Harry Nilsson, and more recently by Mariah Carey
Edited sentence: Jackson, a former member of the group Badfinger, to whom he pays homage onstage, with a version of the Badfinger penned song "Without You", made famous by Harry Nilsson, and more recently by Mariah Carey