Original sentence: After invasions from Manchuria, Joseon experienced a nearly 200-year period of peace.During its reign, Joseon consolidated its absolute rule over Korea, encouraged the entrenchment of Confucian ideals and doctrines in Korean society, imported and adapted Chinese culture, and saw the height of classical Korean culture, trade, science, literature, and technology.Especially, King Yeongjo and King Jeongjo led a new renaissance of the Joseon dynasty.Finally, the class system of Joseon was completely banned in 1894.However, the dynasty was severely weakened during the late 16th and early 17th centuries, when successive invasions by the neighboring Japan and Qing virtually overran the peninsula, leading to an increasingly harsh isolationist policy for which the country became known as the Hermit Kingdom.It was founded in the aftermath of the overthrow of the Goryeo Kingdom at what is today the city of Kaesong.Joseon (July 1392 – August 1910) (also Chosŏn, Choson, Chosun), was a Korean sovereign state founded by Taejo Yi Seong-gye that lasted for approximately five centuries.The Joseon government ordered to set the official slaves in 1801
Edited sentence: During its reign, Joseon consolidated its absolute rule over Korea, encouraged the entrenchment of Confucian ideals and doctrines in Korean society, imported and adopted Chinese culture, and saw the height of classical Korean culture, trade, science, literature, and technology.Finally, the class system of Joseon was completely banned in 1894 (사노비 해방).However, the dynasty was severely weakened during the late 16th and early 17th centuries, when successive invasions by the neighboring Japan and Qing China virtually overran the peninsula, leading to the kingdom becoming a Qing vassal state (屬國 shuguo) in 1636 and to an increasingly harsh isolationist policy for which the country became known as the Hermit Kingdom.It was founded in the aftermath of the overthrow of the Goryeo Empire at what is today the city of Kaesong.Joseon (July 1392 – August 1910) (also Chosŏn, Choson, Chosun), was a Korean state founded by Taejo Yi Seong-gye that lasted for approximately five centuries.The Joseon government ordered to set the official slaves in 1801 (공노비 해방)