Original sentence: Since its inception, many nationally known poets have been regulars and team members at APS, these include Ernie Cline (writer of Fanboys (2008 film), Ragan Fox host of Fox in the City, Big Poppa E, Karyna McGlynn, Andy Buck, Genevieve Van Cleve, Da'shade Moonbeam, Christopher Michael, Shannon Leigh, Tony Jackson, Christopher Lee, Danny Strack, Krissi Reeves, Emily Shafer, Phil West, Sonya Feher, Faylita Hicks, Love Robinson, Peter Nevland, Danny Solis, David Hendler, Zell Miller III, Hilary Thomas, Matthew John Conely, Ruff Draft, The Minister Sin, Erin Livingston,Jacob "Ohio Jake" Rakovan, Jeff & Tonie Knight, and far too many others to list
Edited sentence: Since its inception, many nationally known poets have been regulars and team members at APS, these include Ernie Cline (writer of Fanboys, Ragan Fox host of Fox in the City, Big Poppa E, Karyna McGlynn, Andy Buck, Genevieve Van Cleve, Da'shade Moonbeam, Christopher Michael, Shannon Leigh, Tony Jackson, Christopher Lee, Danny Strack, Krissi Reeves, Emily Shafer, Phil West, Sonya Feher, Faylita Hicks, Love Robinson, Peter Nevland, Danny Solis, David Hendler, Zell Miller III, Hilary Thomas, Matthew John Conely, Ruff Draft, The Minister Sin, Erin Livingston,Jacob "Ohio Jake" Rakovan, Jeff & Tonie Knight, and far too many others to list