Original sentence: As with many large breeds, there is also a predisposition toward hip dysplasia.Its long, thick, uniquely and strikingly corded white coat (the heaviest amount of fur in the canine world) resembles dreadlocks.Known as the king of the Hungarian sheepdogs, the Komondor is a truly impressive animal.Komondors are independent, protective, aggresive with strangers, territorial, and very intelligent.Large (27 in/69 cm at the withers, 100 lb/45 kg), it has a thick, muscular body.They have a life span of approximately 12 years and a tendency to develop bloat and skin problems
Edited sentence: If you are ever lucky enough to see one, you'll never forget it.Independent, protective, aggresive with strangers, territorial, very intelligent very bright.Known as the king of the Hungarian sheepdogs, it is a truly impressive animal.Large (27 in/69 cm at the withers, 100 lb/45 kg), with a thick, muscular body and an enormous, long, corded white coat (the heaviest amount of fur in the canine world) that resembles dreadlocks.Life span of around twelve years.They can suffer from hip dysplasia, bloat and skin problems