Original sentence: Cole gives Phoebe Grams' engagment ring which puts her under a spell turning her into an old fashioned housewife.On the day of Phoebe and Cole's wedding Cole becomes completely consumed by The Source so tries to sabatage the wedding and put the blame on Paige, causing a strain between her and Phoebe.Piper tries to supress her grief by throwing herself into hunting demons not caring for her safety
Edited sentence: Cole gives Phoebe Grams' engagement ring which puts her under a spell turning her into an old fashioned housewife.On the day of Phoebe and Cole's wedding Cole becomes completely consumed by The Source so tries to sabotage the wedding and put the blame on Paige, causing a strain between her and Phoebe.Piper tries to suppress her grief by throwing herself into hunting demons not caring for her safety