Original sentence: Apart from picchavai paintings, the artists also produce small-scale paintings on paper.It is famous for its 'pichwani' paintings, which Shri Krishna in the centre and is recognized for profuse use of gold colour.Some of the famous artistswho have won accolades/awards in the past, are mentioned under notable citizens.The formal prayer offered with diya, insentsticks, flowers, fruit and other offerings with local instruments and devotional songs of the Lord according to the demand of the time and occasion.The intricately woven shaneels and silk cloth have original zari and shredded work done upon them along with tones of real jewelers.The view of the idol after the pardha (curtain) is removed is a spectacular sight that is simply mesmerizing leading to a melee (gully) of visitors, crowding divine lord.They are renowned for splendid Rajasthani style paintings, called “picchavai” paintings belonging to the Mewar School.the railways station from town is 10KM (approx)
Edited sentence: Apart from Pichwai Paintings, the artists also produce small-scale paintings on paper.It is famous for its 'Pichwai Paintings ' , which Shri Krishna in the centre and is recognized for profuse use of gold colour.Mentioned under notable citizens are some of the famous artistswho have won accolades/awards in the past.The formal prayer offered with diya, incense sticks, flowers, fruit and other offerings with local instruments and devotional songs of the Lord according to the demand of the time and occasion.The intricately woven shaneels and silk clothe have original zari and shredded work done upon them, along with tonnes of real jewels.The view of the idol after the pardha (curtain) is removed is a spectacular sight that is simply mesmerizing, leading to a melee (gully) of visitors crowding divine lord.They are renowned for splendid Rajasthani style paintings, called “Pichwai Paintings ” belonging to the Mewar School.the railways station is around 10KM from the town