Original sentence: Guevara became a leader among the rebels, a Comandante (English translation: Major), respected for his courage, and feared for his ruthlessness: he was responsible for the execution of many men he accused of being informers, deserters or spies
Edited sentence: Guevara became a leader among the rebels, a Comandante (English translation: Major), feared for his ruthlessness, and also responsible for the execution of many men he accused of being informers, deserters or spies