Original sentence: He pursued an undergraduate medical fellowship at Stanford University, yet was rejected when applying to the University of British Columbia medical school and chose to sail around the Pacific with his wife for 18 months eventually settling in New Zealand and pursuing farm work
Edited sentence: He pursued an undergraduate fellowship at Stanford University, yet was rejected when applying to the University of British Columbia medical school and chose to sail around the Pacific with his wife for 18 months eventually settling in New Zealand and pursuing farm work