Original sentence: DuBois visited Communist China during the Great Leap Forward and never supported famine-related criticisms of the Great Leap.Much like Strong, Shubin was a man passionately dedicated to his work and to the socialist cause.She is best known for her coverage of communist movements in Russia and China, and has been considered a controversial figure.She married Soviet official Joel Shubin and fellow supporter of socialist ideals in 1932, who died in 19xx.The two were often separated due to work commitments and would ultimately spend relatively little time together before the former's death--at which time, too, Strong was geographically far apart from her husband
Edited sentence: DuBois visited Communist China during the Great Leap Forward and never supported famine-related criticisms of the so-called Great Leap.She is best known for her propaganda on behalf of communist movements in Russia and China, and has been considered a controversial figure.She married Soviet official Joel Shubin and fellow supporter of socialism in 1932.The two were often separated due to work commitments and would ultimately spend relatively little time together