Original sentence: Cassandre and Rudolf Koch, whose work inspired the young Zapf can also be seen in Optima.Further influnce of A.In the tradition of hand lettering and lapidary inscription, the titling face share some similarities with the work of Zapf's friend Herb Lubalin especially the ligatures in ITC Lubalin Graph and ITC Avant Garde.This new type family has a more traditional, less formal italic, condensed weights and a  titling capitals variation
Edited sentence: Cassandre and Rudolf Koch, whose work greatly inspired the young Zapf.In the tradition of hand lettering and lapidary inscription, the Titling face pays homage to Zapf's friend Herb Lubalin in its playful ligatures (Lubalin Graph and Avant Garde), and takes a delicate calligraphic bow towards lettering masters such as A.This new type family has a more traditional, less formal italic, condensed weights and a beautiful Titling capitals variation