Original sentence: The "mathematical beauty project.This page should contain a list of back-links as examples, and a discussion of the aesthetic value of [[mathematics[[
Edited sentence: The "mathematical beauty project".This page should contain a list of back-links as examples, and a discussion of the aesthetic value of mathematics.This way, by directing people to this page we can communicate the beauty of mathematics to laymen, expecially those who were "damaged" by their elementary school teachers