Original sentence: " DVD Movie Guide's Colin Jackson also praised the episode, writing "One of my Season Three faves, on the surface, “Thunder” essentially just rehashes the theme of its predecessor.However, 'Thunder' simply seems funnier than “Pony”.We find a Homer who treats his kids in a tremendously indifferent – and occasionally neglectful – manner who has to face up to his weaknesses as a father
Edited sentence: " DVD Movie Guide's Colin Jackson also praised the episode, writing "One of my Season Three faves, on the surface, 'Thunder' essentially just rehashes the theme of its predecessor.However, 'Thunder' simply seems funnier than 'Pony'