Original sentence: Edgewood borders the Town of Eastchester and is similar in appearance; area residents who regularly pass through this part of the border between Eastchester and Scarsdale are largely unable to tell the difference.Edgewood: Not to be confused with the hamlet of Edgemont in the Town of Greenburgh, which also has a Scarsdale zip code, Edgewood is considered to be the least wealthy by some locals in spite of a per capita income level that, were it in one of the outer boroughs of New York City, would be considered on par with neighborhoods such as Fieldston, Manhattan Beach, or Jamaica Estates
Edited sentence: Edgewood borders the Town of Eastchester and is similar in appearance; even area residents who regularly pass through this part of the border between Eastchester and Scarsdale are largely unable to tell the difference.Edgewood: Not to be confused with the hamlet of Edgemont in the Town of Greenburgh, which also has a Scarsdale zip code, Edgewood is considered to be the "poor" part of Scarsdale by Heathcote Road snobs in spite of a per capita income level that, were it in one of the outer boroughs of New York City, would be considered on par with neighborhoods such as Fieldston, Manhattan Beach, or Jamaica Estates