Original sentence: Comments made by Ofsted in the latest inspection report indicate that that this work has had a significant impact on the College and support the view that City College will achieve 'outstanding' (Ofsted grade 1) by September 2012.Employer provision includes over 1,000 students on apprenticeships and ‘train-to-gain’ programmes
Edited sentence: Comments made by Ofsted in the latest inspection report refer to the College Principal and the senior leadership team providing excellent vision and strategic direction and indicate that that this work has had a significant impact on the College; supporting the view that City College will achieve 'outstanding' (Ofsted grade 1) by September 2012.With employer based provision including over 1,000 students on apprenticeships and ‘train-to-gain’ programmes, City College is one of the largest and most experienced providers of apprenticeships in the region