Original sentence: Following the death of Richard Huw Morris, a search was conducted for a successor, eventually leading to the selection of Annette Bryn Parri, who has a separate career as an accompanist to other artists and as part of the duo Pantel.Hogia’r Wyddfa is a five-piece band with a career in Welsh-language entertainment that has lasted for over fifty years.The band was formed in 1963.They were among the first SAIN artists to receive a Gold Disc for record sales
Edited sentence: Following the untimely death of Richard Huw Morris, replacing him was a major problem, but eventually the group was joined by one of Wales's best accompanists, Annette Bryn Parri.Hogia’r Wyddfa is a five piece band which have been at the forefront of Welsh language entertainment, and have performed at hundreds of venues across Wales and beyond, for over fifty years.They were among the first SAIN artists to receive a Gold Disc for record sales, and their CDs are still very much in demand