Original sentence: The network has rapidly grown ever since, especially when the white paper titled A World-Class Land Lransport System", published by the Land Transport Authority shortly after its formation in 1995 detailed how the authority intends to favour developing a comprehensive rail network and reduce dependency on road-based systems such as the bus network
Edited sentence: The network has rapidly grown ever since, especially when the white paper on a world-class land transport system, published by the Land Transport Authority shortly after its formation in 1995 detailed how the authority intends to favour developing a comprehensive rail network and reduce dependency on road-based systems such as the bus network