Original sentence: Another airpower scholar, James Corum argues the rules of warfare in 1937 permitted the attack on Guernica  and that the town was a legitimate target in supporting ground forces.Benda-Backamann is critical of Boog.Benda-Backmann alao claimed Boog asserted that it was Germany that was "victim" during Second World War air war and not everything done in Nazi Germany was "wrong" or "evil".In his later writings starting from mid-90s, Benda-Backmann claimed Boog engaged in criticism of German guilt for Second World War, which he accused of "hypersensitivity" and claimed that just because Hitler was presented as "villain" not everything done in his name was presented as "wrong".Overy notes that airmen were ordered to avoid civilians leaving the Polish capital.Professor Richard Overy argues the same case with respect to the German side, and the attacks on Warsaw, Rotterdam and Guernica.This writer criticises Boog for stating the bombings of Guernica, Rotterdam and Warsaw were "tactical" attacks compared to the "terror bombings" by the RAF
Edited sentence: Boog asserted that it was Germany that was "victim" during Second World War air war and not everything done in Nazi Germany was "wrong" or "evil".In his later writings starting from mid-90s, Boog engaged in criticism of German guilt for Second World War, which he accused of "hypersensitivity" and claimed that just because Hitler was presented as "villain" not everything done in his name was presented as "wrong".In his works Boog defended terror bombings of Guernica, Rotterdam and Warsaw and claimed Luftwaffe was engaging in "tactical" attacks compared to "terror bombings" by the RAF