Original sentence: Hearing the story, the reporter becomes sadden and hugss Virgil only for him to cop a feel of her breast.The reporter desparately begs Virgil not to comit suiside, sugesting that he, himself could become the first living cartoon star, as he already has a legion of fans.Virgil ponder the idea and imagines what his life would be like, which resembles an elaberate hip hop video, and agrees to this
Edited sentence: Hearing the story, the reporter becomes sadden and hugs Virgil only for him to cop a feel of her breast.The reporter desperately begs Virgil not to commit suicide, suggesting that he, himself could become the first living cartoon star, as he already has a legion of fans.Virgil ponder the idea and imagines what his life would be like, which resembles an elaborate hip hop video, and agrees to this