Original sentence: Opponents argue that PLA provisions like that in the rough draft of the Juneau PLA  have the practical effect of eliminating competition from merit shop contractors and their employees who compose 84.4 percent of the 2008 U
Edited sentence: Opponents argue that PLA provisions like that in the draft of the Juneau PLA that was ultimately utilized  have the practical effect of eliminating competition from merit shop contractors and their employees who compose 84.4 percent of the 2008 U