Original sentence: Admiral of the Fleet Sir John Edmund Commerell VC, GCB (13 January, 1829 - May 21, 1901), was an English recipient of the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces
Edited sentence: Admiral of the Fleet Sir John Edmund Commerell VC GCB (January 13, 1829 – May 21, 1901) was an English recipient of the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces