Original sentence: However, in that same year, noted acting coach Elaine Hall founded The Miracle Project, a nonprofit, Sherman Oaks, California based theater group for children with autism and other disabilities.In late 2005, Tricia Regan began filming the six-month rehearsal process at Vista Del Mar Child and Family Services recreation room in Los Angeles
Edited sentence: Elaine Hall is a leading children's acting coach for film and television.However, in that same year, noted acting coach Elaine Hall founded The Miracle Project,  www.In late 2005, Tricia Regan began filming the six-month rehearsal process in a recreation room in Los Angeles.org, a nonprofit, Sherman Oaks, California based theater group for children with autism and other disabilities