Original sentence: In 2010 Castro created SA2020, a community-wide visioning effort.It generated a list of goals created by the people of San Antonio based on their collective vision for San Antonio in the year 2020.SA2020 then became a nonprofit organization tasked with turning that vision into a reality
Edited sentence: Castro created SA2020, a community-wide visioning effort turned nonprofit that has galvanized thousands of San Antonians around a simple, but powerful vision for San Antonio ­– to create a brainpower community that is the liveliest city in the nation