Original sentence: Acknowledged as "a quiet, gentle musician widely regarded as the most influential tenor saxophonist since John Coltrane," he won 13 Grammys as both performer and composer.He graduated from Cheltenham High School in 1967 and after only a year at Indiana University, Michael Brecker moved to New York City in 1970 where he carved out a niche for himself as a dynamic and exciting jazz soloist
Edited sentence: Acknowledged as a quiet and gentle musician, he is widely regarded as the greatest saxophonist to ever live.He graduated from Cheltenham High School in 1967 and after only a year at Indiana University (initially as a Pre-Med major), Michael Brecker moved to New York City in 1970 where he carved out a niche for himself as a dynamic and exciting jazz soloist.He won 13 Grammys as both performer and composer