Original sentence: In Pokemon Diamond and Pearl, two new Eevee evolutions will become available: A grass form and an ice form.The Grass-type evolves by leveling it up in front of the Moss rock, and the Ice-type evolves by leveling up in front of the Ice Rock, to the south east of the city containing Shinou 7th gym
Edited sentence: In Pokemon Diamond and Pearl, two new Eevee evolutions will become available: The long awaited grass form, and an ice form as well.The grass type evolves by leveling it up in front of the Moss rock, and the ice type evolves by leveling up in front of the Ice Rock, to the south east of the city containing Shinou 7th gym