Original sentence: Active as a concert soloist since age 12, Han collaborated with music orchestras such as Seoul Metropolitan Korean Music Orchestra, National Orchestra of Korea, Jeonju Korean Music Orchestra, Daejeon Korean Music Orchestra with conductors such as Jaewon Lim, Pyeonryong Lim, and Sangil Han.C Provine accompanied her performance with segments of lectures on each piece.During her stay in New York City in 2012, she performed the "Sonnet of an Innocent Flower" at the Korea Society.During the performance, musicologist Robert.Han has been performing solo recitals in venues such as Sejong Center, National Korean Music Center, Suginami Public Hall and Carnegie Hall in New York.The event encompassed kayageum music, song and dance which replicated the Chosun Kisaeng tradition
Edited sentence: Active as a concert soloist since age 12, Han collaborated with music Orchestras such as Seoul Metropolitan Korean Music Orchestra, National Orchestra of Korea, Jeonju Korean Music Orchestra, Daejeon Korean Music Orchestra with representative conductors of Korea's such as Jaewon Lim, Pyeonryong Lim, Sangil Han.After the event which encompassed kayageum music, song and dance which faithfully replicated the fabled Chosun Kisaeng tradition, people who attended the event hailed her as a "Moving Work of Art".C Provine accompanied her performance with a segments of lectures on each piece.During her stay in New York City in 2012, titled "Sonnet of an Innocent Flower" at the Korea Society.During the performance, the prominent authority on the Korean music, Dr.Han has been solo recitals at the prestigious venues on the globe such as Sejong Center, National Korean Music Center, Suginami Public Hall and Carnegie Hall in New York.Pyeongryong Lim hailed her as one of the most talented Kayageum players.The Epoch Times, New York described her as 'work of art' of ancient times that had come to life