Original sentence: Soldiers from Vardar Macedonia, mobilized in the Yugoslav army in large numbers, refused to fight, and the Serbian administration withdrew from where it was stationed.The invasion of Yugoslavia by the Axis powers was met with joy in Vardar Macedonia by the local population, who saw this as the end of Serbian rule
Edited sentence: It saw this as the end of Serbian rule and it was not surprising that the soldiers from Vardar Macedonia, mobilized in the Yugoslav army in large numbers, refused to fight.The Serbian administration had withdrawn from where it was stationed.The local population in Macedonia met, with joy, the defeat of the Kingdom of Yugoslavia by Nazi Germany and the Kingdom of Italy.The outbreak of the Second World War on 1 September, 1939, inspired the whole Macedonian community, foremost the refugees from the occupied parts, to seek ways for the liberation of Macedonia