Original sentence: The movement seeks various changes in public perception as well as in law to provide the same rights to homosexuals as are provided to heterosexuals; some of these changes are controversial.They do not believe that one's sexual orientation might be affected by human volition, and oppose reparative therapy as well as religious ministries that claim to help volunteers "transition" from homesexuality to heterosexuality
Edited sentence: The movement seeks various changes in public perception as well as in law to increase homosexual rights; some of these changes are controversial.They do not believe that one's sexual orientation might be affected by human volition, and oppose reparative therapy as well as religious ministries that offer to help volunteers "transition" from homesexuality to heterosexuality