Original sentence: Hooking up with talented producers, Richard Perry and Vini Poncia, Bones cut two albums: ”Bones” on the Signpost label, and “Waitin’ Here” on MCA and had a hit with “Roberta”
Edited sentence: Hooking up with producers, Richard Perry and Vini Poncia, Bones cut two albums: ”Bones” on the Signpost label, and “Waitin’ Here” on MCA and had a hit with “Roberta”