Original sentence: * Jimmy Page (born 1944), though more known for his use of the Gibson Les Paul, used a Telecaster in his earlier work with The Yardbirds, on Led Zeppelin's first three albums, as well as on Stairway to Heaven, one of Led Zeppelin's most famous tracks
Edited sentence: Jimmy Page (born 1944), though more known for his use of the Gibson Les Paul, used a Telecaster in his earlier work with The Yardbirds, on Led Zeppelin's first three albums, as well as on Stairway to Heaven, one of Led Zeppelin's most famous tracks