Original sentence: One commentator in the Guardian seemed to sum up most of the comments in saying that.” A number of players, former players, officials, media commentators and fans all joined McEnroe in commenting on the way that both players conducted themselves
Edited sentence: However, people will be telling their great grand children, who will tell their great grand children, about the day that sport regained its soul.” One commentator in The Guardian wrote "In ten years, few will likely remember who won this year's Championships