Original sentence: A Moghul emperor, Akbar, was one who was relatively liberal and established a new religion, Din E Elahi, which included beliefs from different religions.A few controversial historical records state that under his rule some of the populace was put to death while others do not state   this.After the violence, he attempted to establish law and order in the newly-conquered territory through the imposition of Islamic Shariah laws.He abolished the jizya for some time.He also sought control through systematic persecution of Hindus.He reimposed the jizya, which his great grandfather Akbar had removed.In contrast, Aurangazeb was more zealous and, generally, during his term non-muslims suffered.It took several centuries to finally spread Islam in all portions of India.Most Indian muslims who converted to Islam belonged to the Hindu fold and many of their ancestors embraced Islam under duress, although some did so willingly.Qasim demolished many temples, shattered "idolatorous" artwork and killed many people in his battles.The rulers of India also brought businessmen, traders, merchants and slaves from different parts of the world.While some rulers were zealous in their spread of Islam, while others were relatively liberal
Edited sentence: After the violence, he attempted to establish law and order in the newly-conquered territory through the imposition of Islamic Shariah laws and systematic persecution of Hindus.He abolished the jizya.He reimposed the unpopular jizya, which his great grandfather Akbar had removed.In contrast, Aurangazeb was a fanatic Muslim and during his term the non-muslims suffered.It is a matter of historic record that many innocents, including women and children were put to death by him.It took several centuries to finally islamize portions of India.Many of the rulers were zealous in their spread of Islam.Most Indian muslims who converted to Islam belonged to the Hindu fold and many of their ancestors embraced Islam under duress, although some did so willingly under the influence of sufism, and laws favoring muslims.One of the Moghul emperors, Akbar, was thus relatively liberal and he even established a new religion, Din E Elahi, which included beliefs from different religions.Qasim demolished temples, shattered "idolatorous" artwork and killed many people in his battles.The rulers of India also brought businessmen, traders and slaves from different parts of the world