Original sentence: It deals with a murder of a local young woman.The city is the setting of a controversial book entitled Twentynine Palms: A True Story of Murder, Marines, and the Mojave
Edited sentence: 29 Palms is the setting of a controversial book entitled Twentynine Palms: A True Story of Murder, Marines, and the Mojave.It deals with a murder of a young local woman in an attempt to shed the city and area in a negative light.The book is considered by many locals an inaccurate opinion as opposed to a non-fiction book