Original sentence: A national poll recently ranked IWU's campus #1 in the U.Indiana Wesleyan University has a 300 acre main campus in Marion, Indiana (population 31,320).Indiana Wesleyan administrators believe superior facilities make a big difference in students' college experience and demonstrate that students are the university's number one priority
Edited sentence: A national poll recently ranked IWU's Marion campus #1 in the U.Indiana Wesleyan University has a stunning 300 acre main campus in Marion, Indiana.Indiana Wesleyan administrators believe superior facilities make a massive difference in students' college experience and demonstrate that students are the university's number one priority