Original sentence: Art Damage as an album was much heavier and darker than their debut; the band left behind the relative simplicity of the instrumental work of their debut in favor of the abrasiveness characterizing bands such as Converge and Every Time I Die.As a result, it is not as hard or fast as their previous two albums, but instead, is more experimental.In concert, the band plays few, if any, songs from their debut
Edited sentence: Art Damage as an album was much heavier and darker than their debut; the band left behind the relative simplicity and, arguably, tiredness of the instrumental work of their debut in favor of the abrasiveness characterizing bands such as Converge and Every Time I Die.As a result, it is not as hard or fast as their previous two albums, but instead, is more experimental and well-crafted.The critical consensus seems to favor their new direction, and in concert, the band plays few, if any, songs from their debut