Original sentence: As noted above, the party is a centrist party in terms of economic and social policy, arguing that 'greater' involvement from more sectors of Singaporean society in politics would further 'democratise' the government's decision-making paradigm.The NSP focuses around introducing 'competition' into politics, with the intrinsic perspective that due to the  total dominance of the Singapore People's Action Party that there is not a high level of accountability and not enough checks and balances.The party has been noted by observers as being as a continuation of the highly meritocratic culture that has become popular in Singaporean culture during the last century into politics
Edited sentence: The NSP believes that power tends to corrupt, and absolute power tends to corrupts absolutely.The NSP believes that there must be competition in politics.The nature of corruption can be financial, complacency, cronyism, intolerance, or simply taking the public's support for granted.There is too much domination held in the hands of a few key persons in the PAP Government.There must be greater accountability of Government policies, decisions and expenses at the national level.This competition for the people's support will bring about a better and more progressive society.This is unhealthy for the longer term growth and progress of a knowledge based society.We must not allow the PAP Government to rule Singapore without a proper balance being established.We must not give them too much power without checks inside Parliament