Original sentence: However, unlike in traditional heraldry where the same blazon may be rendered into various graphical designs, the Coat of Arms Act allows only one official rendering of the national coat of arms.Using English heraldic terminology, the arms may blazoned as Gules an Eagle Argent crowned, beaked and armed Or
Edited sentence: In English heraldic terminology, the arms are blazoned as Gules an Eagle Argent crowned, beaked and armed Or.In contrast to traditional heraldry, where the same blazon may be rendered into varying designs, the Coat of Arms Act allows only one official rendering of the national coat of arms