Original sentence: Griffon is themed as a mythological creature who is half lion and half eagle, ravaging a small French Village.The lines for Griffon on opening day hit a wait time of approximately five hours.The ribbon was cut by a kid that shares his name with the coaster.The trains is held on a holding brake for several seconds, before dropping 205 feet at 90° hitting 71 mph
Edited sentence: Griffon is themed as a mythological creature who is half lion and half eagle and he is ravaging a small French Village.The lines for Griffon on opening day hit a wait time of FIVE hours.The ribbon was cut by none other than a kid that shares his name with the incredible coaster.The trains is held at a holding brake for several seconds, before dropping 205 feet at 90° hitting 71 mph