Original sentence: In Canada, a question has been recently raised about the safety of U-haul equipment.In addition, the Ontario Ministry of Transportation found that, of 296 U-Haul vehicles inspected in the summer of 2005 (43.5% of all inspections performed), 58 (19.6%) were found to have out-of-service defects, meaning that they are not road worthy.Various news agencies have reported possible safety problems, including the Toronto Star in July 2005 (half of the vehicles rented from four randomly-chosen locations in the Greater Toronto Area failed basic road safety checks), and CTV in October 2005 (15 U-Haul trucks fail safety inspections)
Edited sentence: A Toronto Star report in July 2005 found that half of the vehicles rented from four randomly-chosen locations in the Greater Toronto Area failed basic road safety checks.All of the trucks failed.During the summer of 2005, a safety blitz conducted by the Ontario Ministry of Transportation found that, of 296 U-Haul vehicles inspected (43.5% of all inspections performed), 58 (19.6%) U-Haul vehicles were found to have out-of-service defects, meaning that they are not road worthy.In October 2005, the CTV investigative reports show W-Five had a segment about U-Haul safety issues.In the segment, reporters had 15 U-Haul trucks undergo the safety inspections of their respective provinces.Various news agencies have done various reports detailing possible safety problems with U-Haul trucks and equipment