Original sentence: Other universities of the day gave three choices of specialization: Medicine, Law, and Religion.The University of Virginia would become the first American university to allow students to specialize in such fields as Astronomy, Architecture, Botany, Philosophy, and Political Science
Edited sentence: A primary flaw that Jefferson disliked about other American universities was that each of them allowed only three choices of specialization: medicine, law, or religion.Under his guidance, the University of Virginia blazed a different path and was the first in the United States to allow specializations in such diverse fields as astronomy, architecture, botany, philosophy, and political science