Original sentence: Allegations of Israeli apartheid draw an analogy between South Africa's treatment of non-whites during the apartheid era and Israel's treatment of Arab citizens of Israel and Palestinians in the West Bank and Gaza Strip.Others point at instances of discrimination but that these do not constitute a policy of apartheid
Edited sentence: Allegations of Israeli apartheid draw an analogy between South Africa's treatment of non-whites during the apartheid era and Israel's treatment of Arab citizens of Israel or Arabs living in the West Bank and Gaza Strip