Original sentence: Emerging from the DIY kit movement was a modification by a California engineer named Brian Castro which led him to design secondary and replacement pcb kits.His x0xi0 kit adds a second tuneable oscillator, a noise source, a second ADSR, an AR for accent, FM and cross-modulation,momentary switches, extended range audio and extreme envelope ranges,sophisticated routing, distortion and overdrive
Edited sentence: Emerging from the DIY kit movement was a masterpiece that far surpassed any previous TB-303 clone.His decisive timbral choices, smooth integration and engineering skill resulted in a spectacular instrument.His work which drew an unheard off award to an individual from an English electronic music magazine, certainly drew upon his time as a member in good standing in the xobox forums.The extensive input and output and internal distortion modifications by a California engineer named Brian Castro led him to design secondary and replacement pcb kits.The x0xi0 adds a second tuneable oscillator, a noise source, a second ADSR, an AR for accent, FM and cross-modulation,momentary switches, extended range audio and extreme envelope ranges,sophisticated routing, distortion and overdrive