Original sentence: Graduates of Nuclear Power School go on to Nuclear Prototype Units for hands-on experience and training at operating Nuclear propulsion plants.Many colleges and universities award several hours of college credit to graduates of Naval Nuclear Power School.The actual coursework and examination consists of brute memorization with no emphasis on conceptual learning
Edited sentence: For some reason many colleges and universities actually award several hours of college credit to graduates of Naval Nuclear Power School.Graduates of Nuclear Power School go on to Nuclear Prototype Units for actual hands on experience and training at operating Nuclear propulsion plants.The actual coursework and examination consists of brute memorization with no emphasis on actual conceptual learning