Original sentence: By the beginning of the 20th century—with the rise of new technologies such as the sewing machine, the rise of global capitalism and the development of the factory system of production, and the proliferation of retail outlets such as department stores—clothing had increasingly come to be mass-produced in standard sizes and sold at fixed prices
Edited sentence: By the beginning of the 20th century—with the rise of new technologies such as the sewing machine, the rise of global capitalism and the development of the factory system of production, and the proliferation of retail outlets such as department stores—clothing had mincreasingly come to be mass-produced in standard sizes and sold at fixed prices.For example, today i saw a picture of sienna miller in the april edition of VOGUE, she was wearing a elegant large floral china print maxi dress, along with embellished gladiator sandals with another touch of chiffon pin floral to add a girly tough to the outfit, BUT she paired it with honestly the most stunning, interesting, intriguing studded leather jacket i gad ever seen it gave the beautiful floral outfit some edge, the jacket red defined her shoulders and added a sense of biker-chic, rocl&roll and toughness.I really loved the way the whole outfit was worn together, and i know because that stylist was me.after years of working in the money and economis business i have finally worked my way up the social star way of fashion, to my dream, of styling for VOGUE.but true fashionistas there in the public just use this as inspiration, wether it be for their wedding, their childs outfit for the day, or how they wear their makeup.fashion is art, it is the way thousands of people from all over the world can connect and unite no matter what language through something they love and have great passion for, its beautiful.people define fashion by material goods, and judge the people in the business as bitchy and material minded but as someone from inside the business this is a complete mis judgement.yes, the fashion and media works can be cruel, showing only the most beautiful of models displaying only the finest of designers