Original sentence: His first one man show in 1964 sold out.Ken Danby (March 6, 1940, Sault Ste.Ken Danby enrolled at the Ontario College of Art in 1958.Marie, Ontario – September 23, 2007) was a Canadian artist
Edited sentence: Danby enrolled at the Ontario College of Art in 1958.Danby's work has been the subject of several books ranging from reference publications to biographies.He knew from an early age that he wanted to be an artist.His first one man show in 1964 sold out, setting an example that was often repeated.Ken Danby (March 6, 1940 – September 23, 2007)  was a Canadian artist born in Sault Ste.Marie, Ontario.Private, corporate and museum collectors responded enthusiastically to Danby's work and Danby was recognized as one of the world's foremost realist painters.With the support of his parents, Gertrude and Edison Danby, Danby pursued that dream