Original sentence: Bragg was extremely unpopular with both the men and the officers of his command, who criticized him for numerous perceived faults, including poor battlefield strategy, a quick temper and overzealous discipline
Edited sentence: Bragg was unpopular with some of his men and the officers of his command, who criticized him for numerous perceived faults, including poor battlefield strategy, a quick temper and overzealous discipline.Despite his poor historical reputation in warfare, Bragg was a gifted organizer, whose recruitment work in Florida during the early days of the Confederacy created a strong fighting force that would later become a key component of the Army of Tennessee