Original sentence: In 1790 Nicolas de Condorcet and Etta Palm d’Aelders unsuccessfully called on the National Assembly to extend civil and political rights to women.Olympe de Gouges dedicated the text to Marie Antoinette, which de Gourges described as “the most detested” of women.The Declaration of the Rights of Man and Citizen became a key human rights document and a classic formulation of the rights of individuals vis-a-vis the state.The Declaration of the Rights of Man and Citizen was adopted in 1789 by the National Constituent Assembly (Assemblée nationale constituante), during the height of the French Revolution.The Declaration of the Rights of Woman and the Female Citizen, also known as the Declaration of the Rights of Woman was written in 1791 by Olympe de Gouges.The Declaration of the Rights of Woman and the Female Citizen, or Déclaration des Droits de la Femme et de la Citoyenne, was published in 1791 and is modelled on the Declaration of the Rights of Man and of the Citizen of 1789
Edited sentence: In 1790 Nicolas de Condorcet and Etta Palm d'Aelders unsuccessfully called on the National Assembly to extend civil and political rights to women.Olympe de Gouges dedicated the text to Marie Antoinette, whom de Gourges described as “the most detested” of women.The Declaration of the Rights of Man and of the Citizen became a key human rights document and a classic formulation of the rights of individuals vis-a-vis the state.The Declaration of the Rights of Man and of the Citizen was adopted in 1789 by the National Constituent Assembly (Assemblée nationale constituante), during the height of the French Revolution.The Declaration of the Rights of Woman and the Female Citizen (French: Déclaration des droits de la femme et de la citoyenne), also known as the Declaration of the Rights of Woman, was written in 1791 by French activist and playwright Olympe de Gouges.The Declaration of the Rights of Woman and the Female Citizen was published in 1791 and is modelled on the Declaration of the Rights of Man and of the Citizen of 1789