Original sentence: In addition to her gun safety efforts, McCarthy is especially active in issues relating to education and public health.McCarthy responded to the crime by launching a campaign for additional gun safety measures that eventually propelled her to Congress in 1996 on the Democratic ticket.She is also one of the most vocal advocates in the nation for gun safety, including reinstating the federal ban on semi-automatic assault weapons
Edited sentence: In addition to her gun control and ban efforts, McCarthy is especially active in issues relating to education and public health.McCarthy responded to the crime by launching a campaign for additional gun control measures that eventually propelled her to Congress in 1996 on the Democratic ticket.She is also one of the most vocal advocates in the nation for gun control, including reinstating the federal ban on semi-automatic assault weapons