Original sentence: He competed seven times in the Israeli preselection for the Eurovision Song Contest.He studied music at the Conservatory of Ramat Gan and started to perform at age 15.He was one of the judges of the TV talent show, Kokhav Nolad ("A Star is Born").Henrik Zvi "Svika" Pick   (born 3 October 1949; akas: Tzvika Pik, Tsvika Pick) () is an Israeli pop singer and composer.Henrik Zvi Pick was born in Wrocław, Poland.In 2005, he was voted the 83rd-greatest Israeli of all time
Edited sentence: He studied music at the Conservatory of Ramat Gan and started to perform at the age of 15.Henrik Zvi Pick (later Svika Pick) was born in Wrocław, Poland.In 2005, Pick was voted the 83rd-greatest Israeli of all time, in a poll by the Israeli news website Ynet to determine whom the general public considered the 200 Greatest Israelis and confirming what a minor celebrity he is in the grand scheme of things.Pick himself competed seven times in the Israeli preselection for the Eurovision Song Contest.Pick was one of the judges of the TV talent show, Kokhav Nolad ("A Star is Born").Svika Pick   (born October 3, 1949) (also Tzvika Pik, Tsvika Pick) () is an Israeli pop singer and composer