Original sentence: Bennett, Class of 1859, (1824-1898), lawyer, mayor, judge, and Dean of Boston University Law School, graduated (1843) and recipient of honorary LLD (1872).Brian Dubie; Vermont's 85th Lieutenant Governor, 2002-current.Eric Perrin, an NHL forward for the Tampa Bay Lightning when they won the Stanley Cup in 2004.John Dewey, Class of 1879, Pragmatist philosopher and educator.Pedro Albizu Campos (1912-1913), Puerto Rican political leader, orator, lawyer and humanist; was either President or Honorary President of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party from 1930 until his death in 1965.Ray Collins, Class of 1908, Boston Red Sox pitcher (1909-15) and later coached for UVM
Edited sentence: Bennett, (1824-1898), lawyer, mayor, judge, and Dean of Boston University Law School, graduated (1843) and recipient of honorary LLD (1872).Brian Dubie; Vermont's 85th Lieutenant Governor, with two terms in office.Eric Perrin, an NHL forward for the Tampa Bay Lightning.Frances M.Grady, leader in Biotech industry in Boston/Cambridge.John Dewey, Pragmatist philosopher and educator.Pedro Albizu Campos (1912-1913), one of the most prominent Puerto Rican political leaders in the history of Puerto Rico, renowned orator, lawyer and humanist; was either President or Honorary President of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party from 1930 until his death in 1965.Perrin also won the Stanley Cup as a member of the Lightning in 2004.Ray Collins, Boston Red Sox pitcher (1909-15) and later coached for UVM