Original sentence: From the top of the tower there are views over Strangford Lough and its islands, as well as the town of Newtownards.He fought as a cavalry commander under the Duke of Wellington in the Peninsular War.Scrabo Country Park, in which the tower stands is open to the public, and has several woodland walks through Killynether Wood.The tower is a memorial to Charles Vane, 3rd Marquess of Londonderry, also known as "Fighting Charlie", who participated in the Napoleonic Wars
Edited sentence: From the top of the tower, visitors enjoy a wide view over Strangford Lough, scattered with its many islands, and the town of Newtownards.Notably he fought as a cavalry commander under the Duke of Wellington in the Peninsular War.Scrabo Country Park , in which the tower stands is open to the public, and has several woodland walks through Killynether Wood.The tower is a memorial to Charles Vane, 3rd Marquess of Londonderry, also known as "Fighting Charlie", who distinguished himself in the Napoleonic Wars