Original sentence: Maniac Magee, like many of his other books, writes his story to entertain young readers while at the same time helping them to understand many important life lessons
Edited sentence: Maniac Magee, like many of his other books, has the ability to entertain young readers while at the same time helping them to understand many important life lessons.What is so fantastic about Jerry Spinelli's writing is that he covers these issues in such a way which is not offensive or shocking, but truly drives the points home