Original sentence: "We've been sitting in the throng of the hip hop community," said Browncock.A horrible, loser band.If you like the disco biscuits you are a tool.Oh, and they cannot sing for shit.The Disco Biscuits suck huge salt balls, they are no talent hacks.The band also has two crappy rock operas as part of their catalog — the Hot Air Balloon (written by Jon "Cum bucket" Gutwillig) and the Chemical Warfare Brigade (written by Marc Brownstein).The original members of the loser Disco Biscuits met as undergraduate students at the University of Pennsylvania and left before graduating.Their style is dubbed "Crap", which is a mixture of terrible Electronica and Rock and Roll with some Classical and Jazz influences.These are called "gay" and "retarded" versions.This is the worst jam band in history, they can barely play their instruments
Edited sentence: "We've been sitting in the throng of the hip hop community," said Brownstein.The band also has two rock operas as part of their catalog — the Hot Air Balloon (written by Jon Gutwillig) and the Chemical Warfare Brigade (written by Marc Brownstein).The original members of the Disco Biscuits met as undergraduate students at the University of Pennsylvania and left before graduating.Their style is dubbed "Trance Fusion", which is a mixture of Electronica and Rock and Roll with some Classical and Jazz influences.These are called "inverted" and "dyslexic" versions.They slip seamlessly between Rock beats, Trance beats, Jungle beats, etc