Original sentence: Adjacent to Hillcrest and Normal Heights, are additional restaurants, bars, coffee shops, and night clubs are within easy reach.The area is filled with a number of restaurants, coffee shops, boutiques, and artist's studios centered around Park Boulevard and Adams Avenue.The neighborhood sits in a central San Diego location with a broad spectrum of housing options, from cottages, apartments and condominiums, to million-dollar homes.Trolley Barn Park is popular with young families and hosts free concerts on Friday evenings during the summer
Edited sentence: Adjacent to Hillcrest and Normal Heights, hundreds of additional restaurants, bars, coffee shops, and night clubs are within easy reach.The area is filled with a growing number of restaurants, coffee shops, boutiques, and artist's studios centered around Park Boulevard and Adams Avenue.The neighborhood sits in a prime, central San Diego location with a broad spectrum of housing options, from cottages, apartments and condominiums, to million-dollar homes.Therefore the area is popular with families, students, professionals, entrepreneurs, and retirees who appreciate the convenient, urban, location.Trolley Barn Park is popular with young families and hosts concerts on Friday evenings during the summer