Original sentence: Florida, California, Hawaii, and a few other resort regions (most notably Old Orchard Beach, Maine and Cape May, New Jersey) popular are visited in large numbers by French-speaking Quebecers during winter and summer vacations
Edited sentence: Florida, California, Hawaii, and a few other popular resort regions (most notably Old Orchard Beach, Maine and Cape May, New Jersey) are visited in large numbers by French-speaking Quebecers during winter and summer vacations