Original sentence: Released as a single, in both a version that included a mid-song rap spoken part (aimed toward the R&B market) and one that omitted it (aimed toward the pop market), over a year later, the song became a world-wide hit for the group spending two weeks at number one on the U.The song was written by  Manhattans member Winfred "Blue" Lovett
Edited sentence: Released as a single, in both a version that included a mid-song rap spoken part (aimed toward the R&B market) and one that omitted it (aimed toward the pop market), over a year later, the song became a world-wide hit for the group, spending two weeks at number one on the U.The song was written by Manhattans member Winfred "Blue" Lovett