Original sentence: Douglas McCullough is known to band participants as "Dougie Fresh" which is slight variation on his legal name.The Beavercreek Band & Color Guard is under the direction of the bald Douglas McCullough, the band director of Beavercreek High School Band for 22 years
Edited sentence: The Beavercreek Band & Color Guard is under the direction of the Douglas McCullough, the band director of Beavercreek High School Band for 22 years