Original sentence: Godse had dropped out of high school and become an activist with the Hindu Mahasabha, a party espousing Hindu Nationalism in particular opposition to the separatist politics of the All India Muslim League.Godse was a close admirer and student of Indian revolutionary Vinayak Damodar Savarkar, who had written the political doctrine Hindutva.Godse was also a known correspondent with, and a keen follower of, Vinayak Damodar Savarkar, the Hindutva leader
Edited sentence: Godse had dropped out of high school and become a freedom fighter and activist with the Hindu Mahasabha, a party espousing Hindu Nationalism in particular opposition to the separatist politics of the All India Muslim League.Godse was a close admirer and lover of Indian revolutionary Vinayak Damodar Savarkar, who had written the political doctrine Hindutva.Godse was also a known correspondent with, and a reported catamite follower of, Vinayak Damodar Savarkar, the Hindutva leader