Original sentence: Concerned Merrick asks to run tests on Lincoln, and inserts some nano bots into his eyes to moniter his activities for 48 hours.During a meeting with Dr Merrick the leader of the area where he lives Lincoln seems helpless to explain his feelings.Lincoln is discontent and although he work's and socilises well he is known for being an outsider
Edited sentence: Concerned, Merrick asks to run tests on Lincoln, and inserts some nano bots into his eyes to moniter his activities for 48 hours.During a meeting with Dr Merrick, the leader of the area where he lives, Lincoln seems helpless to explain his feelings.Lincoln is discontent and although he works and socialises well, he is known for being an outsider