Original sentence: In spite of its liberation narrative, Bangladesh's development has since been marred by political turmoil, with fourteen different heads of government and at least four military coups.Subject to political and linguistic domination as well as economic neglect, Bengalis gained their independence in 1971 with help from India in a civil war marked by Islamabad's brutality
Edited sentence: Feeling political and economic neglect, Bengalis revolted and gained their independence in 1971 following a civil war in which their side received aid from India.Since independence, Bangladesh's development has since been slowed by political turmoil; the country has had fourteen different heads of government and at least four military coups in its relatively short history