Original sentence: Hence, right-wingers often advocate what they interpret to be defenses of individual liberty, backed with a credible commitment to military action against a certain states that violate human rights and, in the right-wing view, threaten the world's (or their own state's) security (such as those totalitarian states which were branded by G.The Bush Administration's official policy is to call for democratic reforms in all undemocratic governments; Secretary Powell has publicly called for democratic reforms in meetings with Arab and Islamic states
Edited sentence: Hence, right-wingers often advocate what they interpret to be defenses of individual liberty, backed with a credible commitment to military action against a carefully selective and small list of states that violate human rights and, in the right-wing view, threaten the world's (or their own state's) security (such as those totalitarian states which were controversially branded by G.The Bush Administration's official policy is to call for democratic reforms in all undemocratic governments, while continuing to be allied with dictatorships, particularly in the Middle East; Secretary Powell has publicly called for democratic reforms in meetings with Arab and Islamic states