Original sentence: The journalists were temporarily detained by Israel and then expelled.Two Sydney Morning Herald journalists, Paul McGeough and photographer Kate Geraghty were caught up in the Gaza flotilla raid in May 2010; their communications were cut off for 8 hours by Israeli military censorship
Edited sentence: The journalists have been jailed by Israel.Two Sydney Morning Journalists were involved in the Gaza flotilla clash in 2010; their communications were cut off for 8 hours by Israel military censorship