Original sentence: However both these sources forget to talk about Franjo Tudman's promise to not attack civillians, which was never fullfilled as serbian civilians that stayed behind, mostly the elderly and weak, were killed by croatian forces
Edited sentence: According to American General Robert Brown during the attack the Croats did NOT extensively shell civillian areas.However both these sources forget to talk about Franjo Tudman's promise to not attack civillians, which was not heeded as some of the Serbs were forced to leave or left of their own accord.War crimes were carried out by Croats but this was done by Croat vandals outside of duty and had no support from any Croatian officials