Original sentence: After the breakdown of his parents' marriage when he was five, Lennon lived in the area with his Uncle George and Aunt Mimi.It is an active church today, but is also known for its connections with The Beatles.It is one of the larger parish churches in Liverpool.McCartney was introduced to Lennon and the other members of The Quarrymen skiffle group while they were waiting to play at the church dance.The church has a set of stained-glass windows, all except two of which are designed by the artist Charles Kempe.The church records indicate that the building was something of an eyesore and built "in the worst style of British church architecture".The first meeting of John Lennon and Paul McCartney took place at St.The foundation stone of a new church was laid in 1886, and it opened for worship the following year.The new church was built from local sandstone in the Perpendicular style developed in the late 15th century.The old church was taken down stone by stone and reassembled in the Toxteth district of Liverpool.The two smaller windows, which were removed from the original church, were designed by William Morris
Edited sentence: (The old church was taken down stone by stone and reassembled in the Toxteth district of Liverpool.After the breakdown of his parents' marriage when he was five, Lennon lived in the area with Uncle George and Aunt Mimi.It is a magnificent building and one of the larger parish churches in Liverpool.It is an active church today, but is probably best known for its connections with The Beatles.McCartney was introduced to Lennon and the other members of the Quarrymen skiffle group while they were waiting to play at the church dance.The church has a fine set of stained glass windows, all except two of which are designed by the famous artist Charles Kempe.The church records indicate that the building was somewhat of an eyesore and built “in the worst style of British church architecture”.The first meeting of John Lennon and Paul McCartney famously took place at St.The foundation stone of the new church was laid in 1886, and it opened for worship the following year.The new church was built from local sandstone in the  perpendicular style developed in the late 15th century.The two smaller windows were removed from the original church and are designed by William Morris