Original sentence: An idyllic village with a population of about 700 (2001), it is a notable destination for residents of nearby cottages and travellers in the summer time, due to specialty shops and being the sole sizable town in the area.Two local merchants, Aaron Chambers and Lewis Cameron, named the village Westport in 1841, the name reflecting its location at the west end of Upper Rideau Lake.the Annual  Dandelions Studio Tour, held on the long weekend in May.the Annual  Westport Antique Show and Sale, held on the first weekend in June.the Fall Colours Studio Tour, held annually on Thanksgiving weekend in October
Edited sentence: An idyllic village with a population of about 700 (2001), it is a notable destination for residents of nearby cottages and passing travellers in the summer time, due to specialty shops and being the sole sizable town in the area.It was two local merchants, Aaron Chambers and Lewis Cameron, who in 1841, named the village Westport, the name reflecting its location at the west end of Upper Rideau Lake.the Annual Dandelions Studio Tour, held on the long weekend in May.the Annual Westport Antique Show and Sale, held on the first weekend in June.the very popular Fall Colours Studio Tour, held annually on Thanksgiving weekend in October