Original sentence: It is also believed that bachelorette parties started sometime during the sexual revolution in the 1960's.Often times the first dance of a wedding reception is a waltz or foxtrot of the bride and groom.The wedding industry caters to these different traditions by by the sheer availability of locations and options it provides.Weddings are one of the few occassions that social classes almost mesh or at least become less important
Edited sentence: It is also believed that bachelorette parties started sometime during the sexual revolution in the 1960s.Oftentimes the first dance of a wedding reception is a waltz or foxtrot of the bride and groom.The wedding industry caters to these different traditions by the sheer availability of locations and options it provides.Weddings are one of the few occasions that social classes almost mesh or at least become less important