Original sentence: As much as we regret his planned departute, we join in celebrating achievements that will sustain the Metropolitan--its collections, and its magnificent galleries--for generations to come.Current renovation programs underway at the Met will enhance its Medieval art galleries and expand and reinstall the American Wing--projects that will add space without breaking the outside footprint of the building in Central Park.They have three children: Count Marc André Marie (born in New York, October 11, 1964), married civily at Choiseul and religiously at Marnes La Coquette, November 28, 1986 and divorced Laure Marie Dauphine de Sabran-Pontèves (born at Neuilly, February 26, 1966), by whom he had a son Alexandre (born in New York, May 9, 1987); Laure (born in New York City, May 5, 1968) married to Robert Bernstein, MD, with two children, Claire and Maximilian (Max); and Charles (born in Houston, Texas, January 16, 1971), married to Raasa Leela Shields (born in Richmond, Virginia, April 18, 1973) with one child, Kivlighan Finch (born December 25, 2004)
Edited sentence: , with two children, Claire and Maximilian (Max); and Charles (born in Houston, Texas, January 16, 1971), married to Raasa Leela Shields (born in Richmond, Virginia, April 18, 1973) with one child, Kivlighan Finch (born December 25, 2004).As much as we regret his planned departute, we join in celebrating achievements that will sustain the Metropolitan—its collections, and its magnificent galleries—for generations to come.Current renovation programs underway at the Met will enhance its Medieval art galleries and expand and reinstall the American Wing—projects that will add space without breaking the outside footprint of the building in Central Park.They have three children: Count Marc André Marie (born in New York, October 11, 1964), married civily at Choiseul and religiously at Marnes La Coquette, November 28, 1986 and divorced Laure Marie Dauphine de Sabran-Pontèves (born at Neuilly, February 26, 1966), by whom he had a son Alexandre (born in New York, May 9, 1987); Laure (born in New York City, May 5, 1968) married to Robert Bernstein, M