Original sentence: General Vang Pao lead the Region II (MR2) defense against NVA incursion from his headquarters in Long Cheng, also known as Lima Site 20 Alternate (LS 20A).While some Hmong people retuned to their villages and attempted to resume life under the new regime, thousands more made the trek to and across the Mekong River into Thailand, often under attack
Edited sentence: General Vang Pao was the best military commander in Laos, leading the Region II (MR2) defense against NVA incursion.General Vang Pao's headquarters was in Long Cheng, also known as Lima Site 20 Alternate (LS 20A).While some Hmong people retuned to their villages and attempted to resume life under the new regime, thousands more made the harrowing trek to and across the Mekong River into Thailand.Without the Hmong, thousands of American soldiers and pilots would not be home with their families today