Original sentence: Dharamdev Pishorimal Anand (26 September 1923 – 3 December 2011), better known as Dev Anand, was an Indian film actor, writer, director and producer known for his work in Hindi cinema, through a career that spanned over six decades
Edited sentence: Dharamdev Pishorimal Anand (26 September 1923 – 3 December 2011), better known as Dev Anand, was a noted Indian film actor, writer, director and producer known for his work in Hindi cinema, through a career that spanned over six decades