Original sentence: Allegedly twenty-seven members of al-Qaeda attempted to enter the United States to take part in the September 11 attacks.In the end, only nineteen allegedly participated.Other al-Qaeda members who allegedly may have attempted, but were unable, to take part in the attacks include Saeed al-Ghamdi (not to be confused with the successful hijacker of the same name), Mushabib al-Hamlan, Zakariyah Essabar, Ali Abdul Aziz Ali, and Tawfiq bin Attash.Ramzi Binalshibh allegedly meant to take part in the attacks, but he was repeatedly denied a visa for entry into the U
Edited sentence: In the end, only nineteen participated.Other al-Qaeda members who may have attempted, but were unable, to take part in the attacks include Saeed al-Ghamdi (not to be confused with the successful hijacker of the same name), Mushabib al-Hamlan, Zakariyah Essabar, Ali Abdul Aziz Ali, and Tawfiq bin Attash.Ramzi Binalshibh meant to take part in the attacks, but he was repeatedly denied a visa for entry into the U.Twenty-seven members of al-Qaeda attempted to enter the United States to take part in the September 11 attacks