Original sentence: (Popular vegan author, Joanne Stepaniak, has expressed the view that there is no such thing as a "dietary vegan" because veganism should by definition be about helping animals, and a term such as "strict vegetarian" should be used for people who avoid eating animal products for health reasons but, for example, buy leather shoes
Edited sentence: (Popular vegan author, Joanne Stepaniak, says that there is no such thing as a "dietary vegan" because veganism is by definition about helping animals, and a term such as "strict vegetarian" should be used for people who avoid eating animal products for health reasons but buy leather shoes