Original sentence: Witches may also be depicted as essentially good, as in Terry Pratchett's Discworld novels, Hayao Miyazaki's 1989 film Kiki's Delivery Service, or the television series Charmed (1998-2006)
Edited sentence: Witches may also be depicted as essentially good, as in Terry Pratchett's Discworld novels, in Hayao Miyazaki's 1989 film Kiki's Delivery Service, or the television series Charmed (1998-2006)