Original sentence: "Town of the Four," is a Jewish settlement in the Judean Mountains region of the West Bank on the edge of Hebron.Its settlers consist of a mix of Russian immigrants, American immigrants, and Israelis numbering close to 10,000
Edited sentence: "Town of the Four," is a city in Israel with  local council status in the Judean Mountains region of the West Bank on the edge of and an integral part of Hebron.Its settlers consist of a mix of Russian immigrants, American immigrants, and Israelis who enjoy sense of a close-knit community, reasonably inexpensive housing, and proximity to the Cave of the Patriarchs in adjacent Hebron, number close to 10,000