Original sentence: Bush-appointed chair of the Corporation for Public Broadcasting.In 2005, NOW came under further attack from Kenneth Tomlinson, the George W.Many, including the CPB-funded NPR, criticized the resulting "study" as being full of errors and a waste of money.Without the CPB's permission, Tomlinson paid an outside consultant $14,000 to watch NOW with Bill Moyers and analyze the politics of the guests
Edited sentence: In 2005, NOW came under further attack from Kenneth Tomlinson, the president-appointed chair of the Corporation for Public Broadcasting.Left wing nuts, including the CPB-funded NPR, criticized the resulting "study" as being full of errors and a waste of money.Many viewers agree the program is blatantly biased.Tomlinson furtively paid a consultant $14,000 to watch NOW with Bill Moyers and analyze the politics of the guests