Original sentence: Criticism of Opus Dei has centered on allegations of secretiveness, controversial methods of apostolate, strict rules governing members, elitism and misogyny, and support of or participation in authoritarian or right-wing governments, especially the Francoist Government of Spain until 1978.. The mortification of the flesh practiced by some of its members is also criticized
Edited sentence: Criticism of Opus Dei has centered on allegations of secretiveness, controversial recruiting methods, strict rules governing members, the practice by celibate members of mortification of the flesh, elitism and misogyny, and the support of or participation in authoritarian or right-wing governments, especially the Francoist Government of Spain until 1978