Original sentence: In 2000, OSHA issued the ergonomics standard after ten years of study and struggles with a Republican-controlled Congress that was unconvinced that additional government regularion was the right way to address the issue of ergonomic injuries to American workers.The real debate about OSHA regulations and enforcement policies revolves around the cost of regulations and enforcement, versus the actual benefit in reduced worker injury
Edited sentence: In 2000, OSHA issued the ergonomics standard after ten years of study and struggles with a Republican-controlled Congress that was unconvinced that government action was needed to address the burden of ergonomic injuries on American workers.The real debate about OSHA regulations and enforcement policies revolves around the cost of regulations and enforcement, versus the benefits of preventing the death, injury and illness of workers