Original sentence: Tim Henman (born September 6, 1974) in Oxford, England, is a tennis player who has come considerably close on several occasions to becoming  the first Englishman to win the Wimbledon championships since the 1930s
Edited sentence: Tim Henman (born September 6, 1974) in Oxford, England, is a tennis player who has come tantalisingly close on several occasions to becoming  the first Englishman to win the Wimbledon championships since the 1930s