Original sentence: The Tipton Three is the collective name given to three men from Tipton, England, United Kingdom, who were held in extrajudicial detention for two years in Guantanamo Bay detainment camp, in Cuba
Edited sentence: The Tipton Three is the collective name given to three innocent young men from Tipton, England, United Kingdom, who were held in extrajudicial detention for two years in Guantanamo Bay detainment camp, in Cuba