Original sentence: A similar situation later plays out when all five male protagonists seem to find themselves falling in love with Mina.Almost superhuman acts and attitudes of loyalty and friendship bond the protagonists together through situations that would utterly rend atwain analogous relationships in modern novels, television, and film.The novel is highly praised by virtually all its fans for Stoker's highly complex, albeit naively idealistic, characterization and character development.This is illustrated perhaps nowhere else more clearly than in Quincey, John, and Arthur's love for Lucy; rather than the feelings of jealousy that would doubtless come into play at the hands of another author, their shared love for dead/undead/re-dead Lucy instead sparks in them deep feelings of comaraderie and respect when each of the men realizes that either of the other two would have given without hesitation his life to keep her from harm.While some, by contrast, find the novel somewhat crude and sensational, the novel nevertheless retains its psychological power, and the sexual longings underlying the vampire attacks are manifest
Edited sentence: Although somewhat crude and certainly sensational, the novel does have psychological power, and the sexual longings underlying the vampire attacks are manifest