Original sentence: In 2002,  The Telegraph reported that in the map that was shown to them, the Point 5353 was on the LoC.In his later works, however, Swami noted that the LoC passed through the summit of Point 5353.In this region, both the 1949 CFL and the 1972 LoC pass through high peaks, starting from Point 17561 (5353m), thence through Point 17352 (5289m) and finally through Point 18400 (5608m).Praveen Swami, based on Army's one-inch maps, had estimated that the summit and southern side of Point 5353 were "unmistakenly on the Indian side of the LoC".While several other newspapers and commentators state that the point lies on the LoC
Edited sentence: In this region, both the 1949 CFL and the 1972 LoC pass through high peaks, starting from Point 17561, thence through Point 17352 and finally through Point 18400.Praveen Swami, based on Army's one-inch maps, estimated that the summit and southern side of Point 5353 wer "unmistakenly on the Indian side of the LoC"