Original sentence: Following his failure to reconcile with his wife and children, Johnno left his family and Hollyoaks behind him.Johnno tried to make amends, but then realised that Michelle and Presley needed him more than Frankie and his other children did, and he decided to leave the village and went back home and made up with Michelle
Edited sentence: Johnno then left his family and Hollyoaks behind him.Johnno tried to make amends, but then realised that Michelle and Presley needed him more than Frankie and his other children did, and he decided to go back home and made up with Michelle