Original sentence: Factors Opposing - Pakistan rejects the plan partially as it will get lesser control over the region and wants greater.Factors Opposing - The outcome is unlikely because it requires both India and Pakistan (and potentially China) to give up territory.Factors Opposing — Though the Muslims in Kashmir might agree to such a proposal, the Hindus of Jammu and the Buddhists of Ladakh would object the outcome.Pakistan is also currently having dialogue with India regarding the Baglihar Dam being built over River Chenab in Indian-administered Kashmir.| Currently a boundary - the Line of Control (LOC)- divides the region in two, with one part administered by India and one by Pakistan.| Though New Delhi and much of the Hindu population of Kashmir would have no objections to such a plan, Factors Opposing - According to Pakistan : Muslims in Pakistan-administered Kashmir have never shown any desire to join India
Edited sentence: And also the whole people of Kashmir regard themselves as Pakistanis first and Kashmiris second.Factors Opposing - Pakistan rejects the plan partially as it will get lesser control over the region and wants greater and also the Kashmiris would not like to see their region divided by the enemy and its big brother.Factors Opposing - The outcome is unlikely because it requires both India for India it is money and tourism and also to get one over its rivarly and undo partiton and as for Pakistan for Pakistan it is dependent and Kashmir imports and exports through Pakistan and shares the longest border with it that cuts through mountains and valleys for its irrigration system and the agriculture beneficial for both (and potentially China) to give up territory.Factors Opposing — Though the Muslims in Kashmir might agree to such a proposal, the Hindus of Jammu and the Buddhists of Ladakh would object the outcome but that is irrelavant because there are some Hindus and faiths residing in the country and they are in a minority and will be protected according to Pakistani Law unlike India.Pakistan is also currently having dialogue with India regarding the Baglihar Dam being built over River Chenab in Indian-occupied Kashmir.| Currently a working boundary (WB) - the Line of Control (LOC)- divides the region in two, with one part annexed to India and one part administered by Pakistan.| Though New Delhi and much of the Hindu population of Kashmir would have no objections to such a plan, Factors Opposing - According to Pakistan : Muslims in Pakistan-administered Kashmir have never shown any desire whatsoever to join such an enemy state likeIndia