Original sentence: In common with other bands of the time on both sides of the Atlantic Ocean, the Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy used sampling and scratching as a primary tool of music recording, and mixed rock, hip hop and jazz.Michael Franti formed Spearhead, who (to date) have released seven albums and are still a going concern, while Tse worked with the Mystik Journeymen.The Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy was an American industrial hip-hop band, active during the early 1990s
Edited sentence: "Language of Violence" tells the story of a 15 year old boy who is beaten to death for his being gay by homophobes, and the subsequent ironic treatment of the murderers once sent to prison as a form of natural justice.In common with other bands of the time on both sides of the Atlantic Ocean, the Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy used sampling and scratching as a primary tool of music recording, and mixed rock, hip hop and jazz in combinations that were groundbreaking for the time.Michael Franti formed Spearhead, who (to date) have released 7 albums and are still a going concern, while Tse worked with the Mystik Journeymen.The Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy was an American industrial hip-hop band active during the early 1990s.The chorus contains an intricate commentary on how language can be used to dehumanize an individual, transforming them into an "inanimate entity", and thus rendering them disposable and easy to discriminate against