Original sentence: However, despite only having a 6 percent chance in the for one of the first three draft picks NBA Draft Lottery, the Bucks won the first pick for the 2005 NBA Draft.In the 2004-2005 season, plagued with injury problems and a poor defense, the Bucks missed the postseason with a 30-52 record
Edited sentence: However, in the NBA Draft Lottery, the Bucks with only 60 balls out of a possible 1000 to win the first overall pick managed to luck out despite the overwhelming odds against them.In the 2004-2005 season, with injury problems and a porous defense, the Bucks failed to qualify for the postseason finishing with a dismal 30-52 record.Thus, the Bucks select first in the 2005 NBA Draft