Original sentence: Okinawans started to demonstrate in mass to demand reunification with Japan and the growing antibase movement spurred Japan and the U.Some American soldiers committed crimes or drove recklessly, which occasionally killed locals when they did, but were not punished in civilian courts.Whenever American military personnel committed a crime against an Okinawan, the perpetrator could claim SOFA status, which automatically put him beyond the reach of Japanese law enforcement.military and a local man in Koza (Okinawa City) led to an unprecedented riot, which is known as the Koza Riot
Edited sentence: They started to demonstrate in mass to demand reunification with Japan and the growing antibase movement spurred Japan and the U.Though not all American soldiers committed crimes or drove recklessly, which occasionally killed locals when they did, they were never punished.Whenever American military personnel committed a crime against an Okinawan, the person could claim SOFA status, which automatically put him beyond Japanese law enforcement reach.military and a local man in Koza (Okinawa City) led to an unprecedented riot, which is known as Koza Riot