Original sentence: According to the Torah, Etham was on the edge of the wilderness (i.Etham (Hebrew: אֵתָם) was the second place at which the Israelites stopped during the Exodus.It  has been suggested that Etham is another name for Khetam, or fortress, on the Shur or great wall of Egypt, which extended from the Mediterranean Sea to the Gulf of Suez.It may be close to the modern town of Ismaïlia.the edge of civilization)
Edited sentence: According to the story the Israelites stopped at the edge of the wilderness before proceeding on to Pi hiharoth with the bones of Joseph from Succoth (the place of entering the darkness).Etham (Hebrew: אֵתָם) is the third station of the the Exodus