Original sentence: Among other things, it is claimed that global warming is the result of the decline of the pirate population.Bobby Henderson (born July 18, 1980) is the founder of Pastafarianism.The dogmas of Pastafarianism are centered on references to noodles and pirates, and on parodies of creationist theories
Edited sentence: Among other things, it proves that global warming is the result of the decline of the pirate population.Bobby Henderson (born July 18, 1980) is the founder ofPastafarianism.The dogmas of Pastafarianism are centered on references to noodles and pirates