Original sentence: Although he aspires to higher social standing, he requests that he be treated as a middle class working man.As the investigation into who is killing young women progresses, Thomas falls in love with the unconventional Charlotte.His education and manners let him wander in upper-class circles, while his dress and impolite tactics keep the upper-class from becoming comfortable with him.None of this endears Thomas to Caroline Ellison, the lady of the house where the maid was killed and mother of Emily and Charlotte Ellison.Thomas Pitt is the educated son of a property manager.~*year, country, publisher ISBN 1234567890, Pub date DD Month Year, binding~
Edited sentence: A young police inspector, Thomas Pitt, is sent to investigate the crimes.Although Pitt aspires to higher social standing, he requests that he be treated as a middle class working man.Anne Perry wrote The Cater Street Hangman as a single, stand alone, novel.As the investigation into who is killing the young women progresses, Thomas falls in love with the unconventional Charlotte.Emily Ellison -.Five young women are killed on the streets of London, including a housemaid who worked for the Ellison family, a model of staid Victorian society.His education and manners let him wander in upper-class circles, while his dress and impolite tactics keep the them from becoming entirely comfortable with him.Lord Ashworth -.Martha Prebble -.None of this endears the inspector to Caroline Ellison, the lady of the house where the maid was killed and mother of Sarah, Emily and Charlotte Ellison.Pitt is the educated son of a property manager.Sarah Ellison -.She had not intended for it to become a series and so there are elements in this books which do not blend smoothly into the series.This is the first in a series which features the husband and wife team of Thomas and Charlotte Pitt.Turner Classic Movies (Film) 1998