Original sentence: Shuswap Lake, an H-shaped lake, is popular for house boating.The Columbia-Shuswap Regional District is located in the heart of the scenic southern interior of British Columbia on the Trans Canada Highway between Vancouver and Calgary.The district seat is in Salmon Arm.The rivers that empty into it include the Salmon River, Shuswap River, and the Eagle River.The surrounding mountains are also popular for snowmobiling, and skiing
Edited sentence: As you can tell by the population Salmon Arm is the power house town of the area.Golden is the last community until the Alberta border, and it is also an excellent place to stop for fun to.It has all of the coviences you need in a community.It has wonderful recreation facilities, and an excellent education system.It is the Hub of the Shuswap.It may take up to 20 years to be fully complete though.Revelstoke is and old town that is starting to come back, it was recently approved that Mount Mackenzie will be come a world class ski resort for British Columbia.Shuswap Lake, a H-shaped lake that is most popular for house boating.The Columbia-Shuswap is located in the heart of the scenic southern interior of British Columbia on the Trans Canada Highway between Vancouver and Calgary.The mountains are also famous for snowmobiling, and skiing.The people are not that bad either.There are also a few rivers that empty into in, Salmon River,Shuswap River, and the Eagal River