Original sentence: Dickey, the lead singer, hardly ever sings; most of the lyrics are either said or rapped.Moistboyz was an attack on that audience, creating a similar sound but using self deprecating lyrics like "my shriveled dick fell on the floor while I was jerkin off.The Moistboyz music is filled with racist chuavinistic homophobic lyrics.Their music, like that of Ween, is often taken ironically by fans; some would even categorize them as comedy music.Though there had been successful rap metal bands, like Linkin Park, Mudvayne, Slipknot, they were widely known to be popular among disempowered white suburbanites
Edited sentence: Dickey, the lead singer hardly ever sings, most of the lyrics are either said or rapped.It is filled with racist schuavanistic homophobic lyrics.Moistboyz was an attack on that audience, creating a similar sound but using self depricating lyrics like "my shriveled dick fell on the floor while I was jerkin off.Some would even call this comedy music.Springing off of an insencere band like Ween, the music is usually taken with a hint of irony.Though there had been successful rap metal bands, like Linkin Park, Mudvayne, Slip-knot, they were widely known to be popular among disempowered white suburbanites