Original sentence: Calculating these times into a 24 hour period, then gaining an average of distance traveled daily equates to Gordon O’Connell taking 20 days in total time to complete, covering 168 km every 24 hours as the average.In the four hour documentary the comparison to the armies support machine and Gordon O’Connell’s one man backup (Lenny McKay an 80 year old) was cleverly highlighted.Leg 1: Ayers Rock to Alice Springs (Northern Territory 410 km).The armies theme song was being built up with hundreds of trumpets as the armies trucks and men are being filmed, then the same tune breaks into a weak whistle as Gordon’s figure cuts through the haze of the desert alone and out in front, with the curator stating "Then came along a skinny man, Ram Rod Straight and as Tough as iron bark
Edited sentence: Calculating these times into a 24 hour period, then gaining an average of distance traveled daily equates to Gordon O'Connell taking 20 days in total time to complete, covering 168 km every 24 hours as the average.In the four hour documentary the comparison to the armies support machine and Gordon O'Connell's one man backup (Lenny McKay an 80 year old) was cleverly highlighted.Leg 1: Ayers Rock to Alice Spring  (Northern Territory 410 km).The armies theme song was being built up with hundreds of trumpets as the armies trucks and men are being filmed, then the same tune breaks into a weak whistle as Gordon's figure cuts through the haze of the desert alone and out in front, with the curator stating "Then came along a skinny man, Ram Rod Straight and as Tough as iron bark