Original sentence: For more than fifty years he has been a disciple of Muhammad_Nazim_Adil_al-Qubrusi_al-Haqqani.Kabbani works closely with the governments and people of Muslim nations around the world to restore traditional Islamic practices and prevent the increase of religious radicalism.Muhammad Hisham Kabbani (born in Lebanon) is a prominent American Sufi Muslim.On the order of Nazim, Shaykh Hisham relocated to the United States in 1991, where he has opened thirteen Sufi outreach centers, focused on spreading Sufism
Edited sentence: For more than fifty years he has been a disciple of the very controversial charlatan Nazim al-Qubrusi, whose fake claims of leadership of the Naqshbandi Order were refuted by the most outstanding Naqshbandi Shaykhs of our time.HIs association with a notorius charlatan like Mr.His connection to Nazim however prevent most of moderate Muslims to cooperate with him.Hisham Kabbani's reputation is negatively affected by his connection to a person who is known to most of Muslims as a liar and an impostor.Kabbani claims to works closely with the governments and people of Muslim nations around the world to restore traditional Islamic practices and prevent the increase of religious radicalism.Muhammad Hisham Kabbani (born in Lebanon) is a prominent but controversial American Sufi Muslim.Nazim al-Qubrusi however prevents him from being taken seriously by the overwhelming majority of Muslims.On the order of Nazim, Shaykh Hisham relocated to the United States in 1991, where he has opened thirteen so-called Sufi outreach centers, focused on spreading a New-Age-oriented, fake version fo Sufism in order to attact hippies, pop stars, etc.That is really a pity since - differently from Nazim - Hisham Kabbani is learnt in Islam