Original sentence: Even through Ellen Terry's first marriage and subsequent running off with bohemian artist Godwin to conceive her two technically illegitimate children, all of which had happened before she joined the Lyceum company, Ellen's charm seemed invulnerable
Edited sentence: Even throughout Ellen Terry's first marriage and subsequent running off with bohemian artist Godwin to conceive her two technically illegitimate children, all of which had happened before she joined the Lyceum company, Ellen's charm seemed invulnerable.Undeniable charm was her special gift, as well, perhaps, as her legacy to her son