Original sentence: Music, columnist Dan Leroy wrote of the content of Chocolate Factory:
Edited sentence: " On Kelly's performance, Leroy concluded by writing:.And in fact, on the long-awaited Chocolate Factory, Kelly’s best when he shows no shame in his game—defiantly dirty double entendres like 'Ignition' and 'Showdown' make you think less about his troubles than the self-pitying 'Heaven I Need a Hug' (one of a half-dozen numbers salvaged from Loveland, the bootlegged first crack at this album).Music, columnist Dan Leroy wrote of the content of Chocolate Factory, stating "Kelly’s hot-blooded horniness is an integral part of his persona; he can hardly back away from the risque R&B that’s made him what he is, despite the underage sex scandal that dogs him