Original sentence: Although diversity is often viewed as an asset, friction often arises.Different cultures lead to different ideologies, further causing regionalism.India is the second most populous country in the world, containing diverse types of cultures, languages, traditions and customs.Whether it is Kashmir, the northeast region of the country, Southern states or the Northwest, each corner of India has seen and experienced the consequences of regionalism, which a contributing factor to increasing terrorist activities and militancy in India
Edited sentence: Different cultures lead to different ideologies furthur causing regionalism.India , the seventh largest country , is also the second most populous country in the world with more types of cultures , languages , traditions and customs than any other country.Whether it be Kashmir , North East region of the country , Southern states or North Western region ,each corner of India has seen and experienced the consequences of regionalism , which is the main cause for increasing terrorist activities and militancy in India.While this is the strength of India , its also the cause of the country's greatest misery : non-unity