Original sentence: In the United States, there are numerous fountain squares, many of which are actually called "Fountain Square," while there are fountain squares in  others places such as Indianapolis, Indiana (Fountain Square, Indianapolis); Evanston, Illinois; Bloomington, Indiana; and Bowling Green, Kentucky.One notable Fountain Square is located in Cincinnati, Ohio (Fountain Square, Cincinnati), it has been around for over 100 years and continues to be a popular tourist attraction as it includes the famous Tyler Davidson Fountain and was shown in the opening credits of WKRP in Cincinnati
Edited sentence: In the United States, there are numerous fountain squares, many of which are actually called "Fountain Square," while there are fountain squares in  others places such as Indianapolis, Indiana; Evanston, Illinois; Bloomington, Indiana; and Bowling Green, Kentucky,The most famous is the one in Cincinnati, Ohio (see Fountain Square, Cincinnati), it has been around for over 100 years and continues to be a popular tourist attraction as it includes the famous Tyler Davidson Fountain and was shown in the opening credits of WKRP in Cincinnati