Original sentence: The term emo was derived from the fact that, on occasion, members of a band would become spontaneously and strongly emotional during performances.at the Disco, Senses Fail, Something Corporate, The Starting Line, Story of the Year, Taking Back Sunday, Thrice, Thursday, The Used, and Underoath
Edited sentence: The term emomeans emotional, and was derived from the fact that, on occasion, members of a band would become spontaneously and strongly emotional during performances.The thick-rimmed glasses that became a standard of "emo fashion" were most likely inspired by Rivers.Weezer's lead singer, Rivers Cuomo, is often credited as the "godfather of emo", and although this is a very inaccurate statement, his shy, insecure, self-doubting lyrics on Pinkerton definetly laid a lot of groundwork for many emo bands that were inspried by Weezer.at the Disco, Senses Fail, Something Corporate, The Starting Line, Taking Back Sunday, Thrice, Thursday, The Used, and Underoath