Original sentence: Daikatana: This massively delayed video game from John Romero is belived by many to have failed to live up to its hype.When it finally shipped, it was considered almost unplayable due to multiple bugs.for the Atari 2600 Rushed to the market for the 1982 holiday season, many consider this game to have suffered from severe gameplay problems
Edited sentence: Daikatana: This massively delayed video game from John Romero failed to live up to its hype.When it finally shipped, it was almost unplayable due to multiple bugs.for the Atari 2600 Rushed to the market for the 1982 holiday season, this game suffered from severe gameplay problems