Original sentence: Everett's offense has been criticized by fans in Houston.He has the best fielding percentage in baseball since 2004.In 2007, Everett became the all-time shortstop home run leader for the Houston Astros with 34
Edited sentence: Everett is widely considered by scouts and baseball professionals to be the best defensive short stop in the game.Everett's offense has been criticized by fans in Houston, while many fail to realize that he has the best fielding pct.In 2007, Everett became the all-time shortstop home run leader for the  Houston Astros with 34.The fact that he has never won a gold glove raises questions about the validity of the award.in the MLB since 2004