Original sentence: Aaliyah soon joined Timbaland's R&B and hip hop collective, the Superfriends Clique.She is notable for recording several hit records, including several number one R&B hits, a number one pop hit, and nine top 10 singles on the Billboard Hot 100
Edited sentence: Aaliyah during her career released 3 successful albums, and top the charts numerous times, before being tragically killed in a plane crash.Aaliyah is notable for recording several hit records, including several number one R&B hits, a number one pop hit, and nine top 10 singles on the Billboard Hot 100.Her styles and trendy persona has influence a generation of artists all whom respect the late singer highly.Many across the world became shocked from the sudden death of Aaliyah.Today she remains very well receptive towards fans around the world