Original sentence: Fell races are organized on the premise that contenders possess mountain navigational skills and carry adequate survival equipment as prescribed by the organizer.Fell runners almost universally enjoy the thrill, simplicity and freedom of an unrestrained downhill race to wards a finish.For any runner it is an exhilaration that should be sampled.However unlike other endurance running sports there is an additional  very small but very real risk of death on longer races where exhaustion and poor weather in remote areas infrequently leads to death from exposure
Edited sentence: Fell runners almost universally enjoy the thrill, simplicity and freedom of an unrestrained downhill race towards a finish.For any runner it is an exhiliration that should be sampled.However unlike other endurance running sports there is an additional  very small but very real risk of death on longer races where exhastion and poor weather in remote areas infrequently leads to death from exposure.This writer feels very fortunate to have competed in a number of events that are still close to this original idea of a village or community sports