Original sentence: Mind mapping has many applications in personal, family, educational, and business situations.Mind maps can also be created collaboratively in colour pen creativity sessions.Possibilities include note-taking, a modified variant of brainstorming (ideas are judged and put into an organized structure as opposed to the classical brainstorming where judgement is reserved for later stages), summarizing, revising and general clarifying of thoughts.The uniform graphic formulation of the semantic structure of knowledge may help reconsolidation of memories.This can make memories more stable and long lasting and may increase motivation to work on a task
Edited sentence: Mind maps are also promoted as a way to collaborate in colour pen creativity sessions.The uniform graphic formulation of the semantic structure of knowledge may help reconsolidation of memories and it is sometimes advertised as a way of increasing motivation to work on a task.Tony Buzan claims that mind mapping has many applications in personal, family, educational, and business situations, including note-taking, a modified variant of brainstorming (ideas are judged and put into an organized structure as opposed to the classical brainstorming where judgement is reserved for later stages), summarizing, revising and general clarifying of thoughts