Original sentence: It could also be seen as a precursor to the fully orchestrated, epic sound the band would adopt after Edwards' disappearance, ironically precluded by the aggressive guitar sound of the seminal 'The Holy Bible' album.Life Becoming a Landslide was a 1994 UK single by the Welsh rock group Manic Street Preachers, and was taken from their second album 'Gold Against The Soul'.The EP is noted for its b-side 'Comfort Comes', the first Manics track to explore the raw, claustrophobic, cold yet impassioned aesthetic which would be illustrated on 'The Holy Bible'.The song reached #36 in the UK charts in February 1994
Edited sentence: It could also be seen as a precursor to the more string-drenched, epic sound the band would appropriate after Edwards' tragic disappearance, ironically precluded by the very raw, seminal 'The Holy Bible' album.Life Becoming a Landslide was a 1994 UK hit single by the cult Welsh rock group Manic Street Preachers, and was taken from their second album 'Gold Against The Soul'.The EP is noted for its b-side 'Comfort Comes', which was the first Manics track to explore the raw, claustrophobic, cold yet impassioned aesthetic they would illustrate on 'The Holy Bible'.The song reached a disappointing #36 in the UK charts in February 1994