Original sentence: Complaints regarding Caparas' proclamation centered on the complaints that he did not illustrate the comic books he wrote and was therefore not qualifed for the honor under visual arts, and the assertion of protesting artists that his work in the category of Film is supposedly "sub-par", being comprised largely of  "pito-pito"("seven-seven") films rush-finished in seven days, and "massacre films" that whose focus was sensational crimes
Edited sentence: Complaints regarding Caparas' proclamation centered on the complaints that he did not illustrate the comic books he wrote and therefore did not meet the qualifications for being honored under the visual arts category, and the assertion of protesting artists that his work in the category of Film is supposedly "sub-par", being comprised largely of "pito-pito"("seven-seven") films rush-finished in seven days, and "massacre films" whose focus was sensational crimes