Original sentence: On October 15, 2005  he found his wife dead at the mobile home where the couple had lived since they were married although they were building a house on the same acreage that was near completion when Vitale was murdered.Vitale and Horowitz had been married nearly 11 years and were building their dream home for the past two years in Lafayette in Contra Costa County, California
Edited sentence: On October 15, 2005  he found his wife dead at the mobile home where the couple had lived since they were married although.Vitale and Horowitz had been married nearly 11 years had been building their dream home that was near completion when Vitale was murderedLafayette in Contra Costa County, California