Original sentence: Following his retirement from the VFL at the end of 1985, in 1986 he moved to become the playing coach of Warrnambool in the Hampden Football League.He attended St Bede's College in Mentone.He played 72 games for the Saints between 1978 and 1983 before briefly moving to North Melbourne in 1984, and finishing his career at Fitzroy in 1985.In just his second game of VFL football, Thomas took a magnificent mark where he climbed the behind post before clutching the ball with one hand.This led to him being nicknamed 'The Fireman' for the remainder of his career.This new style of coaching was characterised by Thomas's occasional use of jargon such as "processes" and "outcomes" – although they are now terms almost universally used by all coaches
Edited sentence: Coach Robert Walls piled the players into a bus to Fairfield to train.Collingwood refused Fitzroy permission to train at their usual venue of Victoria Park because the ground was saturated.Following his sacking from the VFL at the end of 1985, in 1986 he moved to become the playing coach of Warrnambool in the Hampden Football League.He "attended" St Bede's College in Mentone however struggled to comprehend the ridiculous teaching methods and curriculum content.He played 72 very ordinary games for the Saints between 1978 and 1983 before briefly moving to North Melbourne in 1984 where his love affair with Andrew Demetriou began, and finishing his career at Fitzroy in 1985 - training on a bog heap in Fairfield with car lights the only assistance.This new style of coaching was characterised by Thomas's occasional use of jargon such as "processes" and "causes" – although they are now terms almost universally used by all coaches.Thomas injured his knee that night and never played VFL again