Original sentence: Peter Fawthrop of Allmusic gave four-half stars and said about the album that "the only song here which would turn up on a greatest-hits collection", and "but there are plenty of other melodic, hippie-era tunes which are tailor-made for nights around the campfire
Edited sentence: Peter Fawthrop of Allmusic gave three-half stars and said about the album that "the only song here which would turn up on a greatest-hits collection", and "but there are plenty of other melodic, hippie-era tunes which are tailor-made for nights around the campfire