Original sentence: A troubled young lady, Taryn had a history of abusing drugs and was harassed by one of the male orderlies at Westin Hills Psychiatric Home because no one would believe a "crazy junkie chick" as the man put it.Taryn White is a character from A Nightmare on Elm Street 3: The Dream Warriors, played by Jennifer Rubin
Edited sentence: A troubled young lady, Taryn is the beautifulest person alive in her class she was bullied in grade 5 by some girels that abslutly hated her guts one of the girls used to be her best friend they were friends for 7 years then marih and ashley came arround and crushed her little beautiful soul.Taryn young is a character from A Nightmare on Elm Street 3: The Dream Warriors, played by Jennifer Rubin.had a history of abusing drugs and was harassed by one of the male orderlies at Westin Hills Psychiatric Home because no one would believe a "crazy junkie chick" as the man put it.now taryn dis likes mariah an ashley because of what she did to her