Original sentence: Manor College offers coursework for students interesting in transferring to a 4-year institution or become employed through vocationally oriented programs such as paralegal, dental hygiene, veterinary technology, and early child care
Edited sentence: Manor College prepares its students, through the first two years of college, with the choice to transfer to a 4-year institution or become gainfully employed through its many vocationally oriented programs such as paralegal, dental hygiene, veterinary technology, and early child care