Original sentence: On 26 November 2008 McEvilly returned to the Football League to rejoin Rochdale, initially on loan, with the possibility of a permanent transfer in January
Edited sentence: At the start of the 2009–10 season, McEvilly signed for Grays Athletic along with eight other players.On 26 November 2008, McEvilly returned to the Football League to rejoin Rochdale, initially on loan, with the possibility of a permanent transfer in January