Original sentence: A 2004 article for the union magazine, The Orbital, comparing the union with those of other universities and colleges was removed before publication.On campus criticism of the union has been said to be suppressed by those in the union.Students frequently critise high ticket prices (£60+) and the long queues.The Royal Holloway Students' Union (SURHUL) has come under increased critism in recent years, often being said not to be run in the interests of students
Edited sentence: For the privilege of attending the ball, students are made to wait in queueing systems for several hours and pay high ticket prices before union has even announced the acts that will be attending.Indeed, criticism of the union has quite often been suppressed by those in command.Many remember 2004's 'State of the Union Article', comparing the union with those of other universities and colleges, which was removed from the union magazine, The Orbital.The Royal Holloway Students' Union (SURHUL) is, unlike other union organisations, run entirely for the benefit of those who run it