Original sentence: In Christian countries and cultures, cremation has historically been discouraged, but now in many denominations it is accepted.The Roman Catholic Church]] permits ordinary cremation of bodies as long as it is not done in denial of the beliefs in the sacredness of the human body or the resurrection of the dead.When alkaline hydrolysis was proposed in New York state the New York State Catholic Conference condemned the practice, stating that hydrolysis does not show sufficient respect for the teaching of the intrinsic dignity of the human body
Edited sentence: The Catholic Church permits ordinary cremation of bodies as long as it is not done in denial of the beliefs in the sacredness of the human body or the resurrection of the dead.This process is condemned by the New York State Catholic Conference, who stated that the human body has intrinsic dignity and must be treated with respect and reverence, and this process does not show sufficient respect for those beliefs