Original sentence: CoverGirl is a brand of makeup by Procter and Gamble.In recent years, digital post-processing of cover images has reached the point where the eyes and teeth of the woman will be moved towards peak white, all skin blemishes and skin texture airbrushed out, and their figure artificially slimmed and elongated.Official CoverGirl web siteA cover girl is a model or entertainer whose picture appears on a magazine.Often a special photo session is done and the woman is given a makeover so her appearance  conforms to the type exalted by the magazine.Some people allege that cover girl images are resposible for encouraging girls and women to develop anorexia.Sometimes, the head of one model will be used on the body of another.Typically, it's a magazine devoted to women's interests, such as Redbook or Cosmopolitan in the United States
Edited sentence: (As in, "Huh.A cover girl is a model or entertainer whose picture appears on a magazine.Does Renee Zellweger really look like that.In recent years, digital post-processing of cover images has reached the point where the eyes and teeth of the cover girl will be moved towards peak white, all skin blemishes and skin texture airbrushed out, and their figure artificially slimmed and elongated.Often a special photo session is done, and the woman is given a makeover to conform her appearance to the type exalted by the magazine, occasionally to the point of near-unrecognizability.Some people allege that cover girl images are resposible for encouraging girls and women to pursue anorexia.Sometimes, the head of one picture will be used on the body of another.Typically, it's a magazine devoted to women's interests, such as Redbook or Cosmopolitan, in the United States