Original sentence: VS boys choosing to enter Victoria Junior College can get two bonus points off their 'O' level L1R5 academic aggregate, although Victoria Junior College also has a small portion of its total student intake enrolled through VJC's own Integrated Programme (IP) - in which VS boys have an equal opportunity of enrolling.Victoria School is affiliated to Victoria Junior College, established in 1984 to provide VS boys with a choice whereby they may have a 2-year Junior College education within the Victorian family
Edited sentence: Entry to VJC is open to all secondary school students in Singapore.VJC has a small portion of its total student intake enrolled through its own Integrated Programme (IP), in which VS boys have an equal opportunity of enrolling.VJC provide VS students a choice to continue a two-year junior college education within the Victorian family, after their secondary education.VS boys choosing to enter VJC get two bonus points off their 'O' level L1R5 academic aggregate.Victoria School is affiliated to Victoria Junior College (VJC), which was established in 1984 to replace the Pre-University classes in VS