Original sentence: Among men with an exclusive or near-exclusive homosexual orientation, aversion therapy was far less successful.However, Seligman notes that the findings were later demonstrated to be flawed: most of the men treated with aversion therapy who did in fact stop homosexual behavior were actually bisexual.In 1966, Martin E.Seligman reported that, while using aversion therapy to try to change gay men's sexual orientation to heterosexual was controversial, in some instances, the process "worked surprisingly well", with up to 50% of men subjected to such therapy not acting on their homosexual urges.These results produced what Seligman described as "a great burst of enthusiasm about changing homosexuality that swept over the therapeutic community" after the results were reported in 1966
Edited sentence: At most, he argues, certain therapies may suppress acting on those behaviors, but the person still will fantasize about homosexual behavior even in sex acts with a person of the opposite sex.In particular, he criticizes the notion that homosexual orientation can be changed through any therapy or program.Martin Seligman is a strong proponent of the view that homosexuality is a fundamental part of identity, likely determined even before birth, and among the most resistant of all personality aspects to any form of change