Original sentence: In 1930 Oscar Benson and Colonel 'Bertie' Dickson purchased a confectionery business at 164 Church street in Kensington, London, with the chocolates made in a tiny basement below the shop
Edited sentence: In 1930 Oscar Benson and Colonel 'Bertie' Dickson purchased a small confectionery business at 164 Church street in Kensington, London, with the chocolates made in a tiny basement below the shop.The confectionery products were expensive but were all made with the finest quality ingredients