Original sentence: Dick Pole attended Northern Michigan University and signed with the Boston Red Sox as an amateur free agent.He once surrendered a game-winning homer, and was obviously dejected.He slept against the right field fence.He surrendered six runs in 3 2/3 innings pitched and received the loss, as the Orioles won 8-2.October 13, 1950 in Trout Creek, Michigan) is a former Major League Baseball player and the current Cincinnati Reds pitching coach.Pole recovered from his injuries in time to pitch in the 1975 World Series, walking the only two batters he faced in a 6-2 loss to the Cincinnati Reds in Game 5.Pole returned to his roots as pitching coach for the Pawtucket Red Sox in 1992, then spent 1993-1997 on the coaching staff of the San Francisco Giants, under Dusty Baker.Pole was known for some unusual antics.Pole's name is often treated in humorous fashion by sports columnists and pundits because both his first and last names are euphemisms for Penis.Richard Henry (Dick) Pole (b.The damaged eye never fully recovered, and he ultimately lost 90 percent of the vision in that eye
Edited sentence: He surrendered six runs in 3⅔ innings pitched and received the loss, as the Orioles won 8–2.Pole attended Northern Michigan University and signed with the Boston Red Sox as an amateur free agent.Pole recovered from his injuries in time to pitch in the 1975 World Series, walking the only two batters he faced in a 6–2 loss to the Cincinnati Reds in Game 5.Pole returned to his roots as pitching coach for the Pawtucket Red Sox in 1992, then spent 1993—1997 on the coaching staff of the San Francisco Giants, under Dusty Baker.Pole's name is often treated in humorous fashion by sports columnists and pundits because both his first and last names are euphemisms for penis.Richard Henry "Dick" Pole (born October 13, 1950, in ) is a retired Major League Baseball player and the current Cincinnati Reds pitching coach.The damaged eye never fully recovered, and he ultimately lost ninety percent of the vision in that eye