Original sentence: A fieldhouse was erected in 1924.The Olmsted Brothers, a noted firm of urban landscape architects, drew up initial plans for lanscaping the proposed new park; however, as a result of the swelling population of the East Side and a consensus that the original plans were inadequate, further land acquisitions were made and facilities were built
Edited sentence: In October 2006, the fieldhouse became a Chicago Landmark.The Olmsted Brothers, a noted firm of urban landscape architects, drew up initial plans for landscaping the proposed new park; however, as a result of the swelling population of the East Side and a consensus that the original plans were inadequate, further land acquisitions were made and facilities were built.The park opened in 1905 A fieldhouse was erected in 1924