Original sentence: Smith, later Lord Birkenhead, and Hilaire Belloc, a naturalized British citizen from France.Sykes was very much a Yorkshire grandee, with his country seat at Sledmere House, breeding race horses, sitting on the bench, raising and commanding a militia unit, and fulfilling his social obligations
Edited sentence: Smith, later Lord Birkenhead, and Hilaire Belloc, a naturalised British citizen from France.Sykes was very much a Yorkshire grandee, with his country seat at Sledmere House, breeding racehorses, sitting on the bench, raising and commanding a militia unit and fulfilling his social obligations