Original sentence: Dickinson soon became riduculed for being too fat , and left the club 3 months later to start a job "working from home".During an interview with Sky Sports Dickinson admitted that the only reason that he signed for City was down to the fact that they were going to pay him solely in pies.Hes never been seen since.In 1996, Malkin moved back north, joining Gary Megson's Blackpool for £275,000, becoming the Seasiders' record signing (which he remained until 2008) when Blackpool spent an amazing £1.5million on unknown Defender Jon " Bod" Dickinson.In 2009 Jon "bod" Dickinson came out of retirement and signed for Manchester City where he linked up with Mark Hughes.In a pound to pie ratio , Dickinson is now said to be the worlds highest paid player earning a staggering 250,000 Greggs steak bakes per week
Edited sentence: In 1996, Malkin moved back north, joining Gary Megson's Blackpool for £275,000, becoming the Seasiders' record signing (which he remained until 2008)