Original sentence: He is widely known for his outspoken, critical views of big business, gun violence, and his critique of the George W.Michael Moore was born in Davison, Michigan, near the city of Flint
Edited sentence: Athough GM provided the means for the Moore family to be financially secure (allowing Michael's father to retire at age 53) throughout Michael's life, he viciously citicized this company in his his first major "documentary".He is widely known for his overstated, critical views of capitalism, gun ownership, and his outlandish critique of the George W.Michael Moore was born in Davison, Michigan, instead of his commonly claimed home of Flint