Original sentence: (25.7 in Achkhoi Martan, 19.8 in Groznyy, 17.5 in Kurchaloi,28.3 in Urus Martan and 11.1 in Vedeno).Other groups include Russians (Mostly soldiers, though some are descendants of Terek Cossacks) (40,645, or 3.7%), Kumyks (8,883, or 0.8%), Ingush (2,914 or 0.3%) and a host of smaller groups, each accounting for less than 0.5% of the total population
Edited sentence: (25.7 in Achkhoi Martan, 19.8 in Grozny, 17.5 in Kurchaloi,28.3 in Urus Martan and 11.1 in Vedeno).Other groups include Russians  (40,645, or 3.7% - Mostly soldiers, though some are descendants of Terek Cossacks), Kumyks (8,883, or 0.8%), Ingushs (2,914 or 0.3%) and a host of smaller groups, each accounting for less than 0.5% of the total population