Original sentence: Gilgit is 228 miles  from Srinagar by road over the Burzil pass above the northern banks of Wular Lake and Gurez.The Burzil Pass situated at a height of 13,500ft above sea level is an ancient pass and caravan route between Srinagar in Kashmir and Gilgit.The crest of the Pass is wide and covered in summer with alpine grass vegetation.The pass lies close to the Indo-Pak line of control that has since closed the Burzil
Edited sentence: ) is an ancient pass and caravan route between Srinagar in Kashmir and Gilgit.Gilgit is some   from Srinagar by road over the Burzil pass above the northern banks of Wular Lake and Gurez.The Burzil Pass (el.The crest of the pass is wide and covered in summer with alpine grass vegetation.The pass lies close to the  Line of Control demarcating India and Pakistan, which has since closed the Burzil