Original sentence: Starting at age 16, and for two other years, she was invited to participate in ABC-TV's Superstars, which pitted championship athletes from one sport competing in sports other than their own specialties
Edited sentence: So good in fact that, starting at age 16, and for two other years, she was invited to participate in ABC-TV's Superstars, which pitted championship athletes from one sport competing in sports other than their own specialties