Original sentence: " In June 2007, a letter was published criticising that study, which concluded "despite a poorly-representative sample and a methodology prone to exaggerating the sensitivity of the prepuce, NOCIRC's claims remain unproven.In April 2007 medical journal BJU International published a study conducted by NOCIRC and Doctors Opposing Circumcision, which stated that it "conclusively shows that circumcised males have a significant penile sensory deficit as compared with non-circumcised intact men.Thus the claim that circumcision adversely affects penile sensitivity is poorly supported, and this study provides no evidence for the belief that circumcision adversely affects sexual pleasure.When the authors' data are analysed properly, no significant differences exist
Edited sentence: In April 2007 medical journal BJU International published a study conducted by NOCIRC and Doctors Opposing Circumcision, Fine-touch pressure thresholds in the adult penis which stated that it "conclusively shows that circumcised males have a significant penile sensory deficit as compared with non-circumcised intact men