Original sentence: It is the location for the headquarters of Seagate Technology (the world's largest producer of computer drives), e-mu systems, and Borland (provider of software development tools between 1984 and 2004)
Edited sentence: It is the location for the headquarters of Seagate Technology, the world's largest producer of computer drives and the headquarters for e-mu systems, and Borland, the company that provided world-best software development tools between 1984 and 2004