Original sentence: After a bit of detective work she tracks him down and places the box in a phone booth.Her mother dies when she is young and her father, a doctor, never hugs her.If she finds him and it makes him glad, she decides she will devote her life to goodness; if not, too bad.Martin's Canal, trying to guess how many people are having an orgasm at one moment, and letting her imagination roam free.One day, behind a loose tile in her bathroom, she finds an old metal box of childhood memorabilia hidden by a boy who lived in her apartment decades past.She eventually gains his love and still manages to give peace of mind and happiness to her neighbors.She resolves to track down the now-adult man who put it there and return it to him
Edited sentence: ", as she tells the camera), and letting her imagination roam free.After a bit of detective work she tracks him down—Bretodeau (not Bredoteau)—and places the box in a phone booth.But while she's looking after others, who's looking after Amélie.Her father, a doctor, never hugs her.Her mother dies when she is young.If she finds him and it makes him glad, she will devote her life to goodness; if not, too bad.Martin's Canal, trying to guess how many people are having an orgasm at one moment ("Fifteen.One day, behind a loose bathroom tile she finds an old metal box of childhood memorabilia hidden by a boy who lived in her apartment decades past.She eventually gains his love by the most delightfully roundabout methods imaginable, and still manages to give peace of mind and happiness to her neighbors.She resolves to track down the now-grownup man who put it there and return it to him