Original sentence: Built on a hillside, RPI's 275-acre campus overlooks the historic city of Troy and the Hudson River and is a blend of historic and modern architecture.The institute operates an on-campus business incubator and a 1,250-acre technology park, and is known for its success in the transfer of technology from the laboratory to the marketplace
Edited sentence: Built into a hillside, RPI overlooks the historic city of Troy and the Hudson River.Rensselaer is recognized as one of the world's elite technological research universities.Rensselaer sits on a 275-acre campus and is a blend of modern style and classic design.The institute is known for its success in the transfer of technology from the laboratory to the marketplace