Original sentence: At one moment in The Simpsons, Frink is commanded by a hypnotist to become desirable to women, whereupon Frink loses the glasses and scrumpy appearance, and quickly becomes engaged with a nubile young waitress at the bar they are at.He has a trademark mannerism of using gibberish when excited.He holds an advanced degree in hyperbolic topology, mentioned in "Treehouse of Horror VI" when Homer gets trapped in the 3rd dimension.He is said to have an IQ of 197; 199 before he sustained a concussion during the collapse of Springfield's brief intellectual junta (see "They Saved Lisa's Brain").However, Homer Simpson also thought up this idea while attempting (in vain) to come up with an invention of his own.Professor John Frink is generally depicted Springfield's local stereotypical mad scientist, voiced by Hank Azaria
Edited sentence: At one moment in The Simpsons, Frink is commanded by a hypnotist to become a ladies' man, whereupon Frink loses the glasses and scrumpy appearance, and quickly becomes engaged with a nubile young waitress at the bar they are at.He has a trademark mannerism of using gibberish when excited, and he's often excited.He holds an advanced degree in hyperbolic topology.He is said to have an IQ of 197, but it was 199 before he sustained a concussion during the collapse of Springfield's brief intellectual junta (see "They Saved Lisa's Brain").However, Homer Simpson also thought up this "brilliant" idea while attempting (in vain) to come up with an invention of his own.Professor John Frink is Springfield's local mad scientist voiced by Hank Azaria.This is a painful but humorous transition for Frink.This was found out in "Treehouse of Horror VI" when Homer gets trapped in the 3rd dimension