Original sentence: Because of changes to HP's culture, and requests for voluntary pay cuts to prevent layoffs (subsequently followed by the largest layoffs in HP's history), employee satisfaction surveys at HP—previously among the highest in America—revealed "widespread unhappiness" and distrust, and Fiorina was sometimes booed at company meetings and attacked on HP's electronic bulletin board.Less than a month later, the board brought back Tom Perkins and forced Fiorina to resign as chair and chief executive officer of the company.The company's stock jumped on news of her departure, adding almost three billion dollars to the value of HP in a single day
Edited sentence: Because of changes to HP's culture, and requests for voluntary pay cuts to prevent layoffs (subsequently followed by the largest layoffs in HP's history), employee satisfaction surveys at HP—previously among the highest in America—revealed "widespread unhappiness," depair and distrust, and Fiorina was sometimes booed at company meetings and attacked on HP's electronic bulletin board.Despite her more than generous payout of approximately $21 million, including stock options, the company's stock jumped on news of her departure, adding almost three billion dollars to the value of HP in a single day - the record for value increase in a single day.Less than a month later, the board brought back Tom Perkins and managed to force Fiorina to resign as chair and chief executive officer of the company