Original sentence: Kenosha's largest private employer is Abbott Laboratories in Abbott Park, Illinois, which recently purchased  land within Kenosha County at Highways C at Interstate 94.Others are employed at three hospitals and their satellite campuses.The city's largest employer is the educational system, including the Kenosha public schools, UW-Parkside, and several colleges
Edited sentence: Many more are employed at three large hospitals and their satellite campuses.The city's largest employer is the multi-level educational system including the Kenosha public schools, UW-Parkside and several colleges, and Kenosha's largest private employer is Abbott Laboratories in Abbott Park, Illinois which recently purchased  land within Kenosha County at Highways C at Interstate 94.Today, Kenosha's employment demographics are mainly white-collar