Original sentence: A peace treaty was signed at the Potala between Britain, the Manchu Amban, Nepalese and Bhutanese representatives and the Tibetan government on 7th Sept.After the Dalai Lama fled, the Manchus immediately proclaimed him deposed again and began claiming sovereignty in Tibet and made claims over Nepal and Bhutan as well.In 1911 the Manchu Qing dynasty was overthrown in the Xinhai Revolution and by the end of 1912 the last Manchu troops were escorted out of Tibet.The new Chinese government apologised for the actions of the Qing dynasty and offered to restore the Dalai Lama to his former position.When he returned to Tibet in December, 1908, he began reorganising the government, but the Manchus invaded Tibet in 1910 and he had to flee to India
Edited sentence: A peace treaty was signed at the Potala between Britain, the Qing Amban, Nepalese and Bhutanese representatives and the Tibetan government on 7th Sept.After the Dalai Lama fled, the Qing dynasty immediately proclaimed him deposed again and began claiming sovereignty in Tibet and made claims over Nepal and Bhutan as well.In 1911 the Qing dynasty was overthrown in the Xinhai Revolution and by the end of 1912 the last Manchu troops were escorted out of Tibet.The new Chinese government apologised for the actions of the previous Qing dynasty and offered to restore the Dalai Lama to his former position.When he returned to Tibet in December, 1908, he began reorganising the government, but Qing troops invaded Tibet in 1910 and he had to flee to India