Original sentence: A funeral was held in Fidrych's honor and thousands of people came to pay their respects
Edited sentence: A beautiful funeral was held in Mark's honor and thousands of people arrived in order to say his or her goodbye.A lot of his family did not even know some of the people; in fact, this just solidified the impact that Mark had on the community around him.In spite of it being a funeral, people were celebrating Mark’s life which is what he would have wanted.The amount of people who supported him was overwhelming for his family.The funeral held for Mark was astounding.There were life long friends who showed up and even people that Mark had only met a few times