Original sentence: Katarina "Kata" Dalström (18 December 1858 – 11 December 1923), born Anna Maria Katarina Carlberg in a wealthy upper-class family, became one of Sweden’s leading socialist agitators and leftist writers of her time
Edited sentence: Katarina "Kata" Dalström (18 December 1858, Emtöholm, Västervik Municipality, Kalmar County – 11 December 1923), born Anna Maria Katarina Carlberg in a wealthy upper-class family, became one of Sweden’s leading socialist agitators and leftist writers of her time