Original sentence: "; Although the book Hamlet's Mill by Georgio de Santillana and Hertha von Dechend (1969), which utilizes this theory, was received with unusually negative reviews, more recent assessments of the work by popular writers and a professor at Occidental College have been favorable
Edited sentence: "; Although the book Hamlet's Mill by Georgio de Santillana and Hertha von Dechend (1969), which utilizes this theory, initally met with some unusually negative reviews, more recent assessments of the work are favorable