Original sentence: Gardenstown is a small village near Banff in Aberdeenshire, North East Scotland.The village's main business is fishing; however, there is a tourist market too, partially due to the local golf courses
Edited sentence: Gardenstown is a small picturesque village near Banff in Aberdeenshire, North East Scotland.The village's main business is fishing; however, there is a healthy tourist market too, partially due to the quality of the local golf courses