Original sentence: The 2009 Pygmalion Music Festival will run from September 16–19 at Bentley's Pub, Blues BBQ, Canopy Club, Channing-Murray Foundation, Cowboy Monkey, The Highdive, Illini Union Courtyard Cafe, Krannert Art Museum, Krannert Center, Mike & Molly's, Red Herring, and Sandella's
Edited sentence: The 2009 Pygmalion Music Festival will run from September 16–19 at Bentley's Pub, Blues BBQ, Canopy Club, Channing-Murray Foundation, Cowboy Monkey, The Highdive, Illini Union Courtyard Cafe, Krannert Art Museum, Krannert Center, Mike & Molly's, Parasol Records Store, Red Herring, and Sandella's