Original sentence: Adherents claim that the practice of chiropractic can be effective in treating back and neck pain, headaches, and other symptoms of spine-related conditions; however, most medical doctors and scientists assert that chiropractic treatment is pseudoscience.The National Association for Chiropractic Medicine.The major risks of spinal manipulation include vertebrobasilar accidents, disc herniations, vertebral fracture, spinal cord compression, and cauda equina syndrome, according to Harrison's
Edited sentence: Adherents claim that the practice of chiropractic can be effective in treating back and neck pain, headaches, and other symptoms of spine-related conditions; however, some medical doctors and scientists assert that chiropractic treatment is pseudoscience.American Chiropractic Association.The major risks of spinal manipulation although rare include vertebrobasilar accidents, disc herniations, vertebral fracture, spinal cord compression, and cauda equina syndrome, according to Harrison's