Original sentence: A grade separation is proposed, but no money has been found for it at present.It is located on the River Trent, with the River Devon also running through the town.Newark's position as one of the few bridges on the River Trent in the area, its location along the Great North Road, (the A1), and later with the advance of rail transport being at the junction between the East Coast Main Line, and the route from Nottingham to Lincoln, and situated on a man-made navigable section of the River Trent have all enhanced its growth and development.Situated at the intersection of the Great North Road and the Fosse Way, Newark originally grew around Newark Castle - now ruined - and a large market place - now lined with historic buildings
Edited sentence: A grade separation is proposed, but no funding has been found for it at present.It stands athwart the River Trent, the Great North Road and the East Coast Main Line railway.Newark lies on the River Trent, with the River Devon also running through the town.Newark's position as one of the few bridges on the River Trent in the area, its location along the Great North Road, (the A1), and later with the advance of rail transport being at the junction between the East Coast Main Line and the route from Nottingham to Lincoln, and situated on a man-made navigable section of the River Trent, have all enhanced its growth and development.Standing at the intersection of the Great North Road and the Fosse Way, Newark originally grew around Newark Castle - now ruined - and a large market place - now lined with historic buildings