Original sentence: Khan Dauran was not able to co-ordinate with Sa’adat Khan and Asaf Jah I, though the ablest general on the Mughal side, was inactive and gave no help to either Khan Dauran or Sa’adat Khan
Edited sentence: Khan Dauran was not able to co-ordinate with Sa’adat Khan and Asaf Jah I was inactive and gave no help to either Khan Dauran or Sa’adat Khan