Original sentence: East Timor now has revenue from offshore oil and gas reserves, but little of it has gone to develop villages, which still rely on subsistence farming.East Timor's adult literacy rate in 2010 was 58.3%, up from just 37.6% in 2001.Nearly half the population lives in extreme poverty
Edited sentence: East Timor now has revenue from offshore oil and gas reserves; villages rely on subsistence farming.East Timor's adult literacy rate in 2010 was 58.3%, up from 37.6% in 2001