Original sentence: He is the life member of International Film And Television Club Of Asian Academy Of Film & Television.He took a break of four years after the success of Raja Hindustani.His first film Mela starring again Aamir Khan with brother Faisal Khan was a dismal flop at the box office.However, his second release Dhadkan with Akshay Kumar and Shilpa Shetty did relatively well at the box office and was an average earner.It performed below average at the box office and received poor reviews,.It was a disaster at the box office and with critics.The movie was the biggest hit of that year as well as one of the biggest blockbusters of the 90s and is also the 4th biggest box office hit of 100 years of Indian cinema as of 2012.and a major key note speaker at various podiums of media, related to all aspects of cinema and marketing
Edited sentence: He abruptly took a sabbatical from filmmaking after the passing away of his parents.He is considered amongst the league of top writer directors as Sooraj Barjatya , Aditya Chopra, Karan Johar and Sanjay leela bhansali.He took a break of four years after the historic success of Raja Hindustani.His first film Mela starring again Aamir Khan with brother Faisal Khan was a dissapointment but emerged a success in the heartland of India and is one of the most watched films on sattelite   However, his second release Dhadkan with Akshay Kumar and Shilpa Shetty did extremely  well at the box office and was the 4th biggest hit of the year.It performed aboveaverage at the Indianbox office but was hugely successful in the overseas markets breaking the jinx of it's producer Boney Kapoor.It was average at the box office and with critics but a good earner for it's producers due to it's tight budget.The movie was the biggest hit of that year as well as one of the biggest blockbusters of the 90s and is also the 4th biggest box office hit of 100 years of Indian cinema as of 2018