Original sentence: Oldham town centre has a vibrant nightlife, offering some forty pubs, bars and nightclubs.The nightlife of Oldham in recent years has been criticised for its level of binge-drinking and violence, and has led to the introduction of hands-on policing and medical care for the area
Edited sentence: Oldham town centre is described as having a "vibrant" nightlife, with some forty pubs, bars and nightclubs.Unfortunately, Oldham's nightlife reflects the downward spiral of many northern towns with heavy binge-drinking and mindless violence, leaving it a place many local people avoid in the evening