Original sentence: He won the Yuva Puraskar (2011) instituted by the Sahithya Akademi, New Delhi.His first novel D won the Novel Carnival Prize instituted by the  DC Books
Edited sentence: He won the first award for the most promising young writer under 35 years of age ‘Yuva Puraskar’ instituted by the Sahithya Academy, Government of India.His first novel ‘D’ won the Novel Carnival Prize instituted by the  DC Books