Original sentence: According to Alvaro Gil-Robles, former Commissioner for Human Rights of Council of Europe, "Russia has experienced sweeping changes since the collapse of the Soviet Union and their consequences are still difficult to measure.According to Sergey Kovalev, former Ombudsman and a member of Moscow Helsinki Group, there were fundamental problems with human rights in Russia in 2006.. He says that many basic norms of the Constitution of Russia do not work.Considering situation with Human rights in Russia in 2005 in his annual report Vladimir Lukin, current Ombudsman of Russia, focused on troubles in socially-economic sphere, corruption and cases of inhumane treatment by police, problems of inefficiency in the judiciary system and state of vulnerable social groups (children, pensioners, military, prisoners and patients of psychiatric clinics) and potentially dangerous situation in Chechnya.One can only dream about free and open elections.The fledgling Russian democracy is still, of course, far from perfect, but its existence and its successes cannot be denied.They need to be critcally reviewed and assessed as a whole.Violations of human rights in Russia  include torture of persons in custody by police  , dedovshchina in Russian Army, neglect and cruelty in Russian orphanages , violations of children's rights
Edited sentence: According to Sergey Kovalev, former Ombudsman and a member of Moscow Helsinki Group, there are fundamental problems with human rights in Russia.. He says that many basic norms of the Constitution of Russia do not work.Federal subjects of Russia have no independent powers in practice, and one can only dream about free and open elections, he said.He only noted some troubles in socially-economic sphere, corruption and cases of inhumane treatment by police, problems of inefficiency in the judiciary system and state of vulnerable social groups (children, pensioners, military, prisoners and patients of psychiatric clinics) and potentially dangerous situation in Chechnya.It occupies 122nd place of 157 countries in the Index of Economic Freedom.Violations of human rights in Russia  include widespread and systematic torture of persons in custody by police  , dedovshchina in Russian Army, neglect and cruelty in Russian orphanages , violations of children's rights.Vladimir Lukin, current Ombudsman of Russia  was more positive