Original sentence: Defend Your Castle is a Macromedia Flash-based browser game developed by XGen Studios.It costs 500 Wii Points.The game was well received and prompted XGen to release a prequel titled Pillage the Village, with similar game play.They were not impressed with the graphics, noting in their review, however, that they were designed to be "intentionally bad".WiiWare World believed the game offered more than just a "glorified Flash game", though they believed it featured a "relatively dull" single-player mode and repetitive gameplay that may result in tired or sore arms after extended periods of play.com found appeal in the "piecemeal aesthetic" as well as the simple gameplay, but felt that the game starts off very slow paced
Edited sentence: Defend Your Castle is a Macromedia Flash-based browser game created by indie game developer XGen Studios.However, they were not impressed with the graphics, despite the fact they were designed to be "intentionally bad", though 1UP.The game was well received and also prompted XGen to release a prequel of sorts titled Pillage the Village, with similar game play.WiiWare World believed the game offered more than just a "glorified Flash game", though they thought it featured a "relatively dull" single-player mode and repetitive gameplay that may result in tired or sore arms after extended periods of play.com found appeal in the "piecemeal aesthetic" as well as the simple gameplay, but felt the game starts off very slow paced