Original sentence: Critics point out that these traits are not unique, and are observable in most children (see below).Self-esteem is not a big issue; they often tell the parents "who they are.The changes generally discussed involve bringing peace, toppling corrupt institutions, and a shift from conventional medicine to a greater understanding of alternative treatment.They come into the world with a feeling of entitlement, which is often reflected by their behavior.They have difficulty with authority and no explanation or choice.They often see better ways of doing things, and tend to be non-conforming.Waiting in line is difficult for them
Edited sentence: Chapman ("enlightenment teacher" at, and Director of, Metagifted Education Resource Organization) lists similar points to those of Carroll and Tober.Critics point out that these traits are not unique, and are observable in most children (see Critical interpretations below).If there are no others of like consciousness around them, they often turn inward, feeling like no other human understands them.Indigo children are sometimes said to possess an extreme longevity, but the given birth dates do not corroborate this claim.School is often extremely difficult for them socially.Self-worth is not a big issue; they often tell the parents "who they are.The changes generally discussed involve bringing peace, toppling corrupt institutions, and a shift from allopathic medicine to a greater understanding of more natural alternatives.They come into the world with a feeling of royalty, which is often reflected by their behavior.They have a feeling of "deserving to be here," and are surprised when others do not share that.They have difficulty with absolute authority (authority without explanation or choice).They often see better ways of doing things, both at home and in school, which makes them seem like "system busters" (non-conforming to any system).They simply will not do certain things; for example, waiting in line is difficult for them.Wendy H