Original sentence: Born in Seville, Andalusia, Spain early on June 6, 1599, and baptized later on the same day, Velázquez was the son of Juan Rodríguez de Silva (born João Rodrigues da Silva), a lawyer whose parents, Diogo da Silva and wife Maria Rodrigues, had emigrated from Portugal, and Jerónima Velázquez, a member of the hidalgo class, an order of minor aristocracy (it was a Spanish custom, in order to maintain a legacy of maternal inheritance, for the eldest male to adopt the name of his mother)
Edited sentence: Born in Seville, Andalusia, Spain,Diego, the fist child of Juan Rodriguez de Silva and Jerónima Velázquez, was baptized at the church of St Peter, in Seville on sunday June 6, 1599.This christening must have followed the baby's birth by no more thaan a few weeks, or perhaps only a few days.Velázquez was the son of Juan Rodríguez de Silva (born João Rodrigues da Silva), a lawyer whose parents, Diogo da Silva and wife Maria Rodrigues, had emigrated from Portugal, and Jerónima Velázquez, a member of the hidalgo class, an order of minor aristocracy (it was a Spanish custom, in order to maintain a legacy of maternal inheritance, for the eldest male to adopt the name of his mother)