Original sentence: A progression from pederasty to egalitarian homosexuality has been hypothesised, but is not fully accepted (see external links).The expulsion of this organization from the International Lesbian and Gay Association in 1994 seemed to create a definitive break between the pederast and adult-homosexual camps
Edited sentence: A progression from pederasty to egalitarian homosexuality has been hypothesised, but is not fully accepted (see first external link).Homosexuals today, while distancing themselves from the practice of modern-day pederasty, often discuss the history of pederasty interchangeably with the history of homosexuality.If they did not do so, they would have to disavow any link between homosexuality and most of the historical figures who practiced – and the artistic works which were inspired by – same-sex love.That is not the case, however: modern-day androphilic gays have consistently cited as their forebears Western artists with pederastic leanings.The expulsion of this organization from the International Lesbian and Gay Association in 1994 seemed to create a definitive break between the egalitarian and age-structured homosexualities camps