Original sentence: Dake became a Christian at age 17.Dake claimed that upon his conversion he received a 'special anointing' which allowed him to quote major portions of Scripture from memory.Dake's writings have been the source of some controversy within Christian circles.He preached his first sermon in 1925 and was ordained by the Assemblies of God denomination two years later.In 1937, he was convicted of violating the Mann Act by willfully transporting 16-year-old Emma Barelli across the Wisconsin state line “for the purpose of debauchery and other immoral practices.Though he maintained his innocence of intent, his ordination with the Assemblies of God was revoked.While amongst some theologians and ministers his viewpoints on the gap theory and adoptionism are considered to be possibilities, His interpretation of the Trinity is considered unorthodox amongst Trinitarians and non-Trinitarians alike.” Dake pleaded guilty and was sentenced to six months in a Milwaukee, Wisconsin jail
Edited sentence: Besides the Dake Study Bible, he is known for the two-year Bible course, "God's Plan for Man.Dake claimed that he also received a 'special anointing' that allowed him to quote major portions of Scripture from memory.Dake preached his first sermon in 1925 and was ordained by the Assemblies of God denomination two years later.Dake received Jesus Christ as his personal Savior at the age of 17.His writings have been the source of some controversy within certain Christian circles: He has been accused of advocating a nonstandard interpretation of the Trinity, as well as other controversial viewpoints and beliefs such as the gap theory and adoptionism.In 1937, he was convicted of violating the Mann Act by willfully transporting 16-year-old hitchhiker Emma Barelli across the Wisconsin state line “for the purpose of debauchery and other immoral practices.In many modern Christian circles both concepts have been considered to be real possibilities.Though he maintained his innocence of intent, Dake subsequently lost ordination with the Assemblies of God.” Dake pleaded guilty and was sentenced to six months in a Milwaukee jail