Original sentence: Many believed there was a poor selection of games available at launch, and very few software developers wanted to invest time and money in such a new, unproven gaming system.Many people believed that the Virtual Boy was a flop in the marketplace, for several reasons:
Edited sentence: Of the games that were available, gamers did not feel that the games were particularly fun to play.The Virtual Boy was a flop in the marketplace, for several reasons:.There was a poor selection of games available at launch, and very few software developers wanted to invest time and money in such a new, unproven gaming system