Original sentence: According to The New York Times, there was an inquiry concerning possible misuse of federal money by Tomlinson.During his time as chairman, he pursued aggressive policies of adding conservative viewpoint to CPB's programming.He was a correspondent in Vietnam, and co-authored the book P.His efforts sparked complaints of political pressure.Some of the Reagan Administration's innovations for the Voice, such as the advent of editorials extolling Administration policy, stirred opposition and fears that the broadcasts could be seen as propaganda
Edited sentence: According to an article by two The New York Times employees, there was an inquiry into accusations of possible misuse of federal money by Tomlinson.During his time as chairman, he actively sought to balance perceived liberal bias in CPB programming by encouraging a fairer presentation of onservative viewpoints on issues.He was a war correspondent in Vietnam, and co-authored the book P.His efforts sparked complaints from liberals of political pressure.Some of the Reagan Administration's innovations for the Voice, such as the advent of editorials extolling Administration policy, stirred opposition and fears that the broadcasts could be seen by liberals as propaganda