Original sentence: Bloem de Ligny is a Dutch musician and artist, who has released music under her own name, as well as as a member of the bands Fono & Serafina and Polichinelle.In 2002, de Ligny made a guest appearence on the album We Should Have Been Stars by the band Mist, a project by ex-Miss Universe band member Rick Treffers, and a second track in 2008 for their album Period..
Edited sentence: Bloem de Ligny is a Dutch musician and artist, who has released music under her own name, as well as a member of the bands Fono & Serafina and Polichinelle.In 2002, de Ligny made a guest appearance on the album We Should Have Been Stars by the band Mist, a project by ex-Miss Universe band member Rick Treffers, and a second track in 2008 for their album Period..