Original sentence: It is considered by many in the theatre community to be the most beautiful musical (the musical orchestrations alone could make it such), and Richard Rodgers himself said it was his favorite musical.McDonald, in her first Broadway role, won the Tony for Best Supporting Actress in a Musical.The musical has enjoyed award-winning revivals (particularly the 1994 revival at the Vivian Beaumont Theatre) and was adapted as a musical film in 1956 and as a made-for-television special on videotape in 1967
Edited sentence: It is widely considered by many in the theatre community to be the most beautiful musical (the musical orchestrations alone could make it such) and Richard Rodgers himself said it was his favorite musical.Modern-day Broadway diva Audra McDonald, in her first Broadway debut role, out of Juilliard, won the Best Supporting Actress in a Musical Tony.The musical did not win a Tony when it first came out on Broadway in 1945 (The Tony Awards were not yet invented), but its famous 1994 revival at the Vivian Beaumont Theatre in Lincoln Center won its first Tony Award for Best Musical Revival.The musical has enjoyed award-winning revivals and was adapted as a musical film in 1956 and as a made-for-television special on videotape in 1967