Original sentence: He attained the position during an impromptu meeting with InGen's board of directors after an accident involving the Bowmans and a pack of compies prompted them to unanimously oust Hammond with Ludlow as his replacement.He exploited the incident on Isla Nublar to take control of InGen, and used the abandoned amphitheater idea to bolster his reputation as an innovative entrepeneur,much like his uncle.Ludlow was killed in a similar fashion to Dogson.Malcom seemed to have an immediate dislike of Ludlow,and became irritated at his attempts to emulate Hammond.When the Tyrannosaurus escaped the ship and began to wreak havoc on San Diego, Malcom told him sarcastically, "Now you're John Hammond
Edited sentence: He attained the position during an impromptu meeting with InGen's board of directors after an accident involving the Bowman's and a pack of compies prompted them to unanimously oust Hammond with Ludlow as his replacement.He exploited the incident on Isla Nublar to take control of InGen, and used the abandoned amphitheater idea to bolster his reputation as an innovative entrepreneur,much like his uncle.Ludlow was killed in a similar fashion to Dodgson.Malcolm seemed to have an immediate dislike of Ludlow,and became irritated at his attempts to emulate Hammond.When the Tyrannosaurus escaped the ship and began to wreak havoc on San Diego, Malcolm told him sarcastically, "Now you're John Hammond