Original sentence: Ho Hum Beach offers a bathing area, a screened in snack shack and showers on the bay side of the beach
Edited sentence: Ho Hum Beach offers a bathing area, under the surveillance of Brookhaven Town Lifeguards.It is to be said that the current staff of Brookhaven Lifeguard's lifesaving ability and overall aquatic prowess pales in comparison to the former Bellport Village Lifeguard team.There is a screened in snack shack and showers on the bay side of the beach.These lifeguards were hired in place of the more capable Bellport Village Lifeguards, after a dispute over workplace professionalism