Original sentence: Bruce Jay Friedman (born April 26, 1930) is an American novelist, screenwriter, and playwright.Friedman ended up as an executive editor in charge of the magazines Men (not the present magazine of the same title), Male, and Man's World.Friedman is the father of the writer and musician Josh Alan Friedman, the cartoonist Drew Friedman, Kipp Friedman, and Molly Friedman.In 1954, he married the model Ginger Howard, who is now an acting coach and writer.In 1962, Friedman published Stern, the first of his eight novels.Raised in the Bronx by Irving and Molly (Liebowitz) Friedman, Bruce attended the University of Missouri as a journalism major then served as a First Lieutenant in the United States Air Force from 1951 to 1953
Edited sentence: After attending the University of Missouri as a journalism major, Friedman served as a first lieutenant in the United States Air Force (1951–53).Bruce Jay Friedman (born April 26, 1930) is an American novelist, screenwriter and playwright.Bruce Jay Friedman is the father of the writer and musician Josh Alan Friedman, the cartoonist Drew Friedman, Kipp Friedman and Molly Friedman.Friedman ended up as an executive editor in charge of the magazines Men (not the present magazine of the same title), Male and Man's World.Ginger Howard Friedman is now an established acting coach and writer.In 1954 he married the model Ginger Howard.In 1962, Friedman published his first of eight novels, Stern, with Simon and Schuster.Raised in the Bronx by Irving and Molly (Liebowitz) Friedman, Bruce became a force to be reckoned with in the literary world