Original sentence: However this was yet another decision to be met with both criticism and skepticism by many pupils, with threats of protests breaking out in the central quad, pupils refusing to bring their own pencils and bombarding the senior staff office with a sit in - these were just a few ideas by the pupils to use their democratic rights to protest the over controlling, 'bureaucratic nightmare' school system being imposed - however no notable action has been taken and so far these have only been empty threats but shall happen if there is no change as the sixth years need a break sometimes and are being forced into class rooms instead of sitting in the refectory and collaborating with their peers a
Edited sentence: However this was yet another decision to be met with both criticism and skepticism by many pupils, with threats of protests breaking out in the central quad, pupils refusing to bring their own pencils and bombarding the senior staff office with a sit in - these were just a few ideas by the pupils to use their democratic rights to protest the over controlling, 'bureaucratic nightmare' school system being imposed - however no notable action has been taken and so far these have only been empty threats but shall happen if there is no change as the sixth years need a brake sometimes and are being forced into class rooms instead of sitting in the refectory and collaborating with there peers a