Original sentence: It ended in a United Nations (UN) mandated ceasefire and the subsequent issuance of the Tashkent Declaration.The five-week war caused thousands of casualties on both sides.The war began following Pakistan's Operation Gibraltar, which was designed to infiltrate forces into Jammu and Kashmir to precipitate an insurgency against rule by India
Edited sentence: Indian Army without the Permission of UN (United Nation) and without telling to Pakistan they go to Pakistan and start Destroying every Things, Pakistan at that time have not so Big Army even not the such Big army Weapons.It ended in a United Nations (UN) mandated ceasefire and the subsequent issuance of the Tashkent Declaration...Pakistani Common peoples and Army fought on their lives they Blast themselves to destroy Indian Army Tankers.This is Why Pakistani's Celebrate this Day as Defence Day because With the help of Pakistan Army and Simple Pakistani's they Defend their Country From Cruel India.When Indian Army saw that common people were blasting themselves to save their own Country, India were returning Back but the anger of Pakistanis become so high that they wanted to just Finish them all but Indians Government Scared and Wrote a Letter to UN and then Finally, The five-week war caused thousands of casualties on both sides