Original sentence: After their arrival in China, Chun introduced Lee and Ling to guide Kim Seong-cheol (김성철), an ethnic Korean of China who would escort the two reporters during their work.The two reporters were accompanied by an American cameraman and a South Korean guide, both men
Edited sentence: After their arrival in China, Chun introduced Lee and Ling to guide Kim Seong-cheol (김성철), an ethnic Korean of China, who would escort the two reporters during their work.The two reporters were accompanied by two men, an American cameraman and a South Korean guide