Original sentence: The organization developed out of work by Advertising Age magazine business journalist Michael Wilke, who was invited in 1996 by New York City's gay & lesbian film festival, New Festival, to present a worldwide history of LGBT representations in commercials.Wilke's video program, called "The Commercial Closet," was widely presented at film festivals internationally, and in 2001 Wilke was funded by Michael Collins of Connecticut to start a full nonprofit organization by the same name
Edited sentence: The organization developed out of work by Advertising Age magazine business journalist Michael Wilke, who was invited in 1996 by New York City Gay & Lesbian Film Festival, to present a worldwide history of LGBT representations in commercials.Wilke's video program, called "The Commercial Closet" appeared in 1997, then was widely presented at film festivals internationally, and in 2001 Wilke was funded by Michael Collins of Connecticut to start a full nonprofit organization by the same name