Original sentence: The aquarium has successfully hosted juvenile white sharks on several occasions, and the staff has developed a method for careful capture, housing and transportation, and release.The unique design of the Outer Bay exhibit plays the central role in keeping the juvenile white sharks healthy for extended periods of time.The white sharks are always tagged and released back into the ocean, either when they begin actively hunting the other animals in the exhibit, or when it becomes necessary to remove them to ensure a successful release
Edited sentence: It becomes stressed and stops eating.Once placed in its new tank in the MBA, a great white shark is essentially a fish out of water.Once the great white finally starts eating again, the MBA is hailed as having saved this poor creature that they set out to detain in the first place.The aquarium has successfully hosted juvenile white sharks on several occasions, however, there have been a number of unpublicized occasions during in which a great white shark dies at the hands of the Monterey Bay Aquarium.This link shows the damage that occurs as these sharks "nose" the side of their tank, trying to find a way out: