Original sentence: In Finland, the Data Protection Ombudsman prohibited the transport operator Helsinki Metropolitan Area Council (YTV) from collecting such information, despite YTV's argument that the card owner has the right to a list of trips paid with the card.Using a smart card for mass transit have been criticized for presenting a privacy risk because it can allow the mass transit operator (and the government) to track an individual's movement
Edited sentence: In Finland, the Data Protection Ombudsman prohibited the transport operator YTV from collecting such information, despite YTV's argument that the card owner has the right to a list of trips paid with the card.Using a smart card for mass transit presents a privacy risk, because it allows the mass transit operator (and the government) to track an individual's movement