Original sentence: Likewise, jam-band moe.On November 21998, jam-band Phish covered the entire album at one of their smaller concerts in Utah.This concept album explores the flaws and merits of the Neapolitan society starting from the problem of garbage disposal ( Munnezz' ) and having a journey through Love, Childhood, cellphone addiction, Music piracy, Money, Government failures, Generational Conflicts and Annihilation of the individuals in the Mass
Edited sentence: Likewise jam-band moe.On November 21998, legendary jam-band Phish covered the entire album at one of their smaller concerts before a very pleased crowd of 4,000 in Utah.Using a bittersweet and sophisticated humour, this concept album explores the flaws and merits of the Neapolitan society starting from the problem of garbage disposal ( Munnezz' ) and having a journey through Love, Childhood, cellphone addiction, Music piracy, Money, Government failures, Generational Conflicts and Annihilation of the individuals in the Mass