Original sentence: trials there were outbreaks of mutiny in the Royal Indian Navy, including the Bombay Mutiny; some officers and men began calling themselves the Indian National Navy and gave left handed salutes to British officers
Edited sentence: Independence became inevitable.It was clear that the British position in India was not tenable, as the Raj could no longer rely on its sepoy army.trials there were outbreaks of mutiny in the Royal Indian Navy, including the famed Bombay Mutiny; some officers and men began calling themselves the Indian National Navy and gave left handed salutes to British officers