Original sentence: Raised in Chiswick, she was privately educated in West London, attending Bute House Preparatory School for Girls in Brook Green, Queen's Gate School in South Kensington and Latymer Upper School in Hammersmith
Edited sentence: Raised in Chiswick, she was privately educated at very expensive schools in exclusive parts of West London, attending Bute House Preparatory School for Girls in Brook Green, Queen's Gate School in South Kensington and Latymer Upper School in Hammersmith