Original sentence: By 2017 over 33,000 families living in temporary accommodation were working, a proposition that had increased from 44% in 2013 to to 55% in 2017.During the period of austerity, the rate of homelessness rapidly increased.It indicated that all forms of homelessness had increased since 2010 and that the number of households living in temporary accommodation had risen to more than 79,000.Research was published in 2018 by Shelter analysing government data.Shelter attributed this to a combination of higher rents, the freeze on housing benefits and the shortage of social housing
Edited sentence: According to Shelter, since 2010 all forms of homelessness have increased.During the period of austerity, the rate of homelessness has rapidly increased.The data shows that more of those who are in temporary accommodation who hold a job is higher as it was 44% in 2013 which increased in 2017 to 55%.The government needs to build thousands more homes that are affordable to families but due to the policy of austerity this won't be possible.The number of households living in temporary accommodation has risen to more than 79000, this includes 33000 families who were holding down jobs but had nowhere stable to live.This can be directly attributed to austerity as there have been a combination of higher rents, ongoing freeze on housing benefits and a lack or social homes