Original sentence: The drive containd images of bestiality, which the customer claimed "popped up" on screen whilst his 11 year old son was playing a game
Edited sentence: Although may people in the company consider them to be lazy, over paid and commission based rather than giving a good service.In reality most PC World business advisors usually lie their way through a sale and are more focused in getting their strike rate high and their Smart points up so they can use them for that television the so badly have been wanting to buy on clearance.The drive contained images of bestiality, which the customer claimed "popped up" on screen whilst his 11 year old son was playing a game