Original sentence: "The model 2+ has been formally announced at CES 2009, and is available with a 1.86GHz Intel Atom processor, 2GB RAM, Qualcomm Gobi global wireless internet, touch screen, and is the first PC to feature an active matrix OLED display.It has still not shipped as of July 03, 2009.Projected shipping date was around May 22, 2009
Edited sentence: "The model 2+ has been formally announced at CES 2009, and is available with a 1.33GHz or 1.86GHz Intel Atom processor, 2GB RAM, Qualcomm Gobi global wireless internet, touch screen, and is the first PC to feature an active matrix OLED display.OQO has ceased production due to financial difficulties, and it appears doubtul the 2+ will ever make it to market.Projected shipping date was around May 22, 2009, but still has not shipped as of August 2009