Original sentence: As Magnet has signed deals with these property developers and homebuilders, guaranteeing that no other service providers can operate in several new developments, customers are denied a choice and many have reported being unhappy with Magnet cannot yet change to Sky or NTL.It aims to expand its nework by concluding partnerships with property developers and house builders in Dublin.Magnet Network claims its fibre-optic cable will enable it to cater to new developments in digital technology using its existing infrastructure.Magnet Network offers communications and entertainment services, by subscription through fibre-optic cable.Magnet Networks is a wholly-owned subsidiary of US-based international investment company Columbia Ventures Corporation (CVC), and a partner of Industria, a Nordic total broadband solutions provider and systems integrator.Magnet Networks, together with Industria, employs 150 staff at its headquarters in Dublin (undated).Services are accessed through a digital gateway box installed in the home.The company launched its service in Dublin on December 1, 2004
Edited sentence: Accessed through a compact Magnet Networks digital gateway box installed in each home, these services  are then fed into every room in the house.As Magnet has signed deals with these property developers and homebuilders, guaranteeing that no other service providers can operate in several new developments, customers are denied a choice and many have reported being unhappy with Magnet yet cannot change to Sky or NTL.Magnet Networks is a wholly owned subsidiary of US-based international investment company Columbia Ventures Corporation (CVC), and a partner of Industria, a Nordic total broadband solutions provider and systems integrator.Magnet Networks, together with Industria, currently employs a team of around 150 at its headquarters in Dublin.The company launched its service to Magnet Network-enabled homes in the city on December 1, 2004, and is actively engaged in concluding partnerships with property developers and house builders in the Dublin area, with a view to expanding its network.To enable users to gain the most from digital technology, Magnet Network offers a comprehensive range of high-quality communications and entertainment services, delivered to each subscriber through a single fibre-optic cable.Unlike conventional copper or wireless-based networks, the quality of the fibre-optic cable installed by Magnet Networks renders the system future-proof, meaning that rapid developments in digital technology can be readily catered for and delivered to customers using the same plug and play method as they use today