Original sentence: During the winter there is very little water and the sight is not at all as spectacular as those seen in most photos.Getting there:  Angel Falls is located in the wilderness of Venezuela, and a trip to the falls is not easy or cheap.The entire trip usually takes 24 hours.The falls cannot be seen on clouded days, and there is no guarantee a visitor will see them.The next day a DC 3 plane takes visitors to see the falls.The package includes a jet flight from Caracas to a wilderness retreat where meals and boarding for the night is provided
Edited sentence: After the plane trip to the falls, you will take a plane back to Caracas having stayed there exactly 24 hours.During the winter time, there is very little water, and the sight is not at all as spectacular as those you see in photos.Getting there:  Angel Falls is located in the lovely “lost world” wilderness of Venezuela, and a trip to the falls is not easy or cheap.The falls cannot be seen on clouded days, and there is no guarantee you will see them.The next day you will be taken on  a DC 3 plane to see the falls.The package includes a jet flight from Caracas to a comfortable wilderness retreat where you will be provided fine meals and spend the night