Original sentence: 2 to 4 weeks after the initial onset of the disease, a patient with Sidancre starts exhibiting fever, muscle spasms, coughing and eventually hair loss.Following its initial onset, a person may not notice any symptoms, or may experience a brief period of influenza-like illness.If Sidancre is aggressively treated during its first phase, 80% of patients survive, but once the disease progresses to the second phase, it almost always becomes incurable, having a mortality rate of almost 100%.Once the patient starts experiencing hair loss, the disease has entered a advanced stage, which is characterized by a particularly poor prognosis and a high mortality rate.The following is a list of cancer types
Edited sentence: Eighty percent of the infected people overcome the Sidancre on its first phase, but when it gets to the second phase it is cureless having an almost one hundred percent mortality rate.Following initial infection a person may not notice any symptoms, or may experience a brief period of influenza-like illness.Onset of other symptoms is typically two to four weeks following the infection, they can be fever, muscle spasms, coughing and hair loss.This is a list of cancer types.When you start having hair loss, it means the disease is starting its fatal phase