Original sentence: Production on the album is now complete, and is expected to be released in the fall of 2009
Edited sentence: Finally, on Tuesday, November 3, 2009, it will be on sale in stores everywhere.Production on the album is now complete, and will begin its rollout over the next few months.Selected tracks from the album will be sent for free to fans of Lynn who are signed up to his website's mailing list.Then, on September 4, 2009, the entire album will be available for download on numerous sites