Original sentence: After Independence he became Chairman of Crime Prevention Society of Mathura in 1947.Indira Gandhi, he was sent to Mexico as Ambassador to represent the country in international conference on developing countries and poverty alleviation in 1976.Later handeled important portfolios like Law, PWD, Jail, Revenue, etc.One of the most prominent lawyers of his time he also handled important political cases during times of Emergency of likes of Sanjay Gandhi, Smt.Was later made Chairman of All India Khadi & Village Industries Commission, a position equivalent to the rank of union cabinet minister in 1982 by then Prime Minister Smt.Won 1951 Assembly election from Maant Consituency in mathura and represented it severeal times.was made deputy minister in first ever cabinet of uttar pradesh in 1954 by then chief minister Shri Gobind Bhallabh Pant
Edited sentence: After independence he became Chairman of Crime Prevention Society of Mathura in 1947.He won 1951 Assembly election from Maant Consituency in mathura and represented it several times.Indira Gandhi, he was sent to Mexico as ambassador to represent the country in international conference on developing countries and poverty alleviation in 1976.Later handled important portfolios like Law, PWD, Jail, Revenue, etc.One of the most prominent lawyers of his time, he also handled important political cases during times of emergency of likes of Sanjay Gandhi, Smt.Was later made Chairman of All India Khadi and Village Industries Commission, a position equivalent to the rank of union cabinet minister in 1982 by then Prime Minister Smt.was made deputy minister in first ever cabinet of Uttar pradesh in 1954 by then chief minister Shri Gobind Bhallabh Pant