Original sentence: The Thamin’s life cycle studies on radio–collared 11 male and eight female deer, supported by field studies by the scientists, revealed that a) its life cycle was well tuned to the seasonal rhythm of its environment, b) an average group size of 2.5  per  deer (mother with young) appeared to be the basic social unit, c) males were in velvet when they were in bachelor groups, d) after new grass sprouts in the ashes of February and March fires they gathered to graze on tender shoots, e) males moved through the herds seeking receptive females, f)March and April were the  months  of rut, g) males with their newly hardened antlers were in a state of anorexia and sexual obsession during this period, h) they operated in a specific home range of about  and and i) when food was short some animals migrated into farmland for a few months before returning to the park and during day they hid in small patches of degraded forest and at night they  forayed into the croplands
Edited sentence: After new grass sprouts in the ashes of February and March fires they gathered to graze on tender shoots.An average group size of 2.5  per  deer (mother with young) appeared to be the basic social unit.Its life cycle was well tuned to the seasonal rhythm of its environment.Males moved through the herds seeking receptive females.Males were in velvet when they were in bachelor groups,.Males with their newly hardened antlers were in a state of anorexia and sexual obsession during this period.March and April were the  months  of rut.The Thamin’s life cycle studies on radio–collared 11 male and eight female deer, supported by field studies by the scientists, revealed that.They operated in a specific home range of about  and.When food was short some animals migrated into farmland for a few months before returning to the park and during day they hid in small patches of degraded forest and at night they  forayed into the croplands