Original sentence: Huascar was known for his cruelty and came close to murdering his sister and mother.Huayna Capac, the Inca in power when Europeans arrived to South America, was respected throughout the empire.It was at this critical moment that the Spanish conquistadors under Francisco Pizarro arrived
Edited sentence: Huayna Capac, the Inca in power when Europeans began to arrive in South America, was respected and admired throughout the empire.It was at this critical moment in the empire's history that the Spanish conquistadors under Francisco Pizarro arrived.Regarded as ugly, bad-mannered and half-mad, Huascar was known for his cruelty and came close to murdering his sister and mother