Original sentence: He became a land speculator and became very wealthy owning what is now most of upper Greenville and Pickens Counties and  acquiring Cherokee lands after President Jackson forced the Cherokee to Oklahoma on the Trail of Tears.Today, the Hyatt-Regency Hotel sits on land that was once occupied by Rowland's
Edited sentence: He became a land speculator and became very wealthy owning what is now most of upper Greenville and Pickens Counties and  acquiring Cherokee lands after President Jackson forced the Cherokee to Oaklahoma on the Trail of Tears,a shameful period of American History.Today, the Hiott-Regency Hotel sits on land that was once occupied by Rowland's