Original sentence: Charles Gwathmey (1938 – 3 August 2009) was an American architect.Gwathmey received his Master of Architecture degree in 1962 from Yale School of Architecture, where he won both The William Wirt Winchester Fellowship as the outstanding graduate and a Fulbright Grant
Edited sentence: Born in Charlotte, North Carolina, Gwathmey received his Master of Architecture degree in 1962 from Yale School of Architecture, where he won both The William Wirt Winchester Fellowship as the outstanding graduate and a Fulbright Grant.Charles Gwathmey (June 19, 1938 – August 3, 2009) was an American architect.The Los Angeles Times