Original sentence: In the summer amateur softball leagues abound and crowds line the beaches at Professor's Lake.There are many sporting venues and activities including the outdoor ice path for skating through Gage Park and the ski lift at Ching Park
Edited sentence: All in all, just a lovely well run year 'round family city.There are many sporting venues and activities including the outdoor ice path for skating through Gage Park and the ski lift at Ching Park..  In the summer amateur softball leagues abound and crowds line the beaches at Professor's Lake