Original sentence: Before becoming president, he was a businessman, involved in the oil industry and then in professional sports.He was re-elected in 2004, defeating U.He won the nomination of the Republican Party in the 2000 presidential election.In 1994 he was elected the 46th Governor of Texas, and was re-elected in 1998.Most Democrats and some Republicans are critical of such ideas, partly because of the large federal borrowing the plan would require ($1 trillion or more) to finance the transition, and partly because of the problems encountered by the United Kingdom's privatized pension plan.While Bush was governor of Texas, he undertook signifcant legislative changes in the areas of criminal justice, tort law, and school financing
Edited sentence: Before becoming president, he was a businessman, involved in professional sports and the oil industry.He was later elected the 46th Governor of Texas, and won the nomination of the Republican Party in the 2000 presidential election.He was re-elected in 2004 after defeating U.Most Democrats and some Republicans are critical of such ideas, partly because of the large federal borrowing the plan would require ($1 trillion or more) to make good on failed promises of the current system, and partly because of the problems encountered by the United Kingdom's privatized pension plan.While Bush was governor of Texas, he undertook signifcant legislative reform in the areas of criminal and tort law, and school financing