Original sentence: Also seen were her personal secretary and assistant Iris Chapman (Joyce Van Patten), her producer Harry Sinclair (Michael Lombard), her page Kenneth Christy (Michael Keaton), her maid Ruby (Dody Goodman), and her head writer Mort Zimmick (Bobby Ramsen).In The Mary Tyler Moore Hour, Moore attempted a blending of the two formats.McKinnon was an established star of comedy who could also sing and dance
Edited sentence: Also seen were her personal secretary and assistant, Iris Chapman (Joyce Van Patten), her producer, Harry Sinclair (Michael Lombard), her page, Kenneth Christy (Michael Keaton), her maid Ruby (Dody Goodman), and her head writer Mort Zimmick (Bobby Ramsen).In The Mary Tyler Moore Hour, Moore attempted a blending of the two formats, the sitcoms at which she had triumphed and the variety hour at which she had totally failed.McKinnon was an established star of comedy who could also sing and dance as needed (any resemblance to Moore herself was, of course, purely intentional)