Original sentence: " This bill would have included illegal immigrants as old as 35 years of age.In August, the state of Illinois authorized a privately-funded scholarship plan for children of immigrants both legal and illegal.In July 2011, the state of California enacted the California DREAM Act, giving illegal immigrant students access to private college scholarships for state schools.On the other hand, NAIDC estimates that if all illegal immigrants eligible for DREAM Act benefits successfully met the education or military service requirements and obtained legal resident status, they would earn $3.6 trillion over the same 40-year period.This bill would provide conditional permanent residency to certain illegal aliens of good moral character who graduate from U.This bill, which received 34 cosponsors, would have allowed illegal immigrant students to first apply to be protected from deportation and then apply for and receive lawful permanent residency if they met the following criteria:.more competitive in the global economy by allowing illegal immigrants "to live up to their fullest potential and contribute to the economic growth of our country
Edited sentence: " This bill would have included undocumented immigrants as old as 35 years of age.In August, the state of Illinois authorized a privately-funded scholarship plan for children of immigrants both documented and undocumented.In July 2011, the state of California enacted the California DREAM Act, giving undocumented immigrant students access to private college scholarships for state schools.On the other hand, NAIDC estimates that if all undocumented immigrants eligible for DREAM Act benefits successfully met the education or military service requirements and obtained legal resident status, they would earn $3.6 trillion over the same 40-year period.This bill would provide conditional permanent residency to certain Undocumented Immigrants of good moral character who graduate from U.This bill, which received 34 cosponsors, would have allowed undocumented students to first apply to be protected from deportation and then apply for and receive lawful permanent residency if they met the following criteria:.more competitive in the global economy by allowing undocumented immigrants "to live up to their fullest potential and contribute to the economic growth of our country