Original sentence: At the same time, Liverpool awarded McWatt the first PhD specifically concerned with the subject
Edited sentence: At the same time, Liverpool awarded McWatt the first PhD specifically concerned with the subject, although the awared was made upon threat of legal action, as it was considered to be an inadiquate piece of work due to its uncritical position.McWatt co-edited and praised as 'High Quality' a fake and meaningless paper delivered by David Boyce on behalf of the author, and subsequently airbrushed the fact from on-line accounts, including his own website.This site contains deliberate omissions regarding the 2005 conference