Original sentence: In Simon's acceptance speech for the Album of the Year award he jokingly thanked Stevie Wonder, who had won the award the two previous years for Innervisions and Fulfillingness' First Finale, for not releasing an album that year
Edited sentence: Simon's acceptance speech for the Album of the Year award was memorable in that he jokingly thanked Stevie Wonder, who had won the award the two previous years for Innervisions and Fulfillingness' First Finale, for not releasing an album that year