Original sentence: His two best seasons were 1983 and 1984 as he led the Sycamores to consecutive playoff appearances, in 1983, Indiana State finished at 8-2 and advanced to the quarterfinals of the Div 1-AA playoffs before losing to conference foe, Southern Illinois
Edited sentence: His two best seasons were 1983 and 1984 as he led the Sycamores to consecutive playoff appearances, in 1983, Indiana State finished at 8-2 and advanced to the quarterfinals of the Div 1-AA playoffs before dropping a heartbreaker to conference foe, Southern Illinois