Original sentence: According to the Whitby Museum, dating from 10,000 BC in parts of contemporary Germany.Jet is easily polished and is used in manufacturing jewellery,also used as raw material for making tasbeeh, and jewelry in Erzurum in Turkey
Edited sentence: Jet is easily polished and is used in manufacturing jewellery, according to the Whitby Museum, dating from 10,000 BC in parts of contemporary Germany