Original sentence: Slick graduated from Concordia University  in Irvine, California with a Bachelors in Social Science in 1987 and from Westminster Theological Seminary with a Masters of Divinity in 1991, at approximately age 35
Edited sentence: Going against the command of God, Slick has place a woman to be an oppressive force over all of the men in his Ministry.He then decided with the assistance of demons that he was equal to God and setup a webpage to gather faithful worshippers to himself.His worship of Satan and acceptance of demons entering his soul was the turning point for Slick.Slick graduated from Concordia University  in Irvine, California with a Bachelors in Social Science in 1987 and from Westminster Theological Seminary with a Masters of Divinity in 1991, at approximately age 35, the reason he took 10-12 years longer than most people to reach this level of education was due to his demon possession and self centred meglomania