Original sentence: Realizing this he started talks with the then Prime Minister Indira Gandhi for normalizing the situation in the region and came to an accord called 1974 Indira-Sheikh accord with Indira Gandhi, then India’s Prime Minister, by giving up the demand for a plebiscite in lieu of the people being given the right to self rule by a democratically elected Government (as envisaged under article 370 of the Constitution of India) rather than the puppet government which till then ruled the State.Sheikh Mohammed Abdullah was born in Soura, a village on the outskirts of Srinagar just eleven days after the death of his father Sheikh Mohammed Ibrahim, a middle class manufacturer and trader of Kashmir Shawls.Tens of thousands of Bengalis were killed by the Pakistan army and subsequently war broke out between India and Pakistan which ended in the creation of Bangladesh.This was allegedly done to prevent him and the Plebiscite Front which was supported by him from taking part in elections in Kashmir
Edited sentence: Realizing this he started talks with the then Prime Minister Indira Gandhi for normalizing the situation in the region and came to an accord called 1974 Indira-Sheikh accord with Indira Gandhi, then India’s Prime Minister, by giving up the demand for a plebiscite in lieu of the people being given the right to self rule by a democratically elected Government the people of kashmir were therefore not given any voice to make decisions on there future this deal was criticised heavily by kashmiri people in Indian-administered Kashmir and led to a heavy uprising against Sheik Abdullah who was now regarded as a Indian puppet (as envisaged under article 370 of the Constitution of India) rather than the puppet government which till then ruled the State.Sheikh Mohammed Abdullah was born in Soura a village on the outskirts of Srinagar just eleven days after the death of his father Sheikh Mohammed Ibrahim, a middle class manufacturer and trader of Kashmir Shawls.Tens of thousands of Bengalis were killed by the Pakistan army and subsequently India planned to take advantage and went to war with Pakistan which ended in the creation of Bangladesh.This was allegedly done to prevent him and the Plebiscite Front which was supported by him from taking part in Elections in Kashmir