Original sentence: Kennedy, prominent lawyer and university president Ernest L.McKay, communications expert Mark Evans Austad, inventor of the industrial diamond H.Notable alumni and faculty include business magnate J.Secretary of the Treasury David M.Tracy Hall, U.Wilkinson, president of Black and Decker Nolan Archibald, professional basketball coaches Dick Motta and Phil Johnson, and band and orchestra composer Clair W.Willard Marriott, author-historian Fawn Brodie, past LDS Church president David O
Edited sentence: Among this list are business magnate J.Johnson - just a few of the illustrious people associated with Weber State University.Kennedy; prominent lawyer and university president, Ernest L.Secretary of the Treasury, David M.The university claims several prominent graduates and faculty from its ranks.Tracy Hall; U.Wilkinson; president of Black and Decker, Nolan Archibald; professional basketball coaches, Dick Motta and Phil Johnson; and band and orchestra composer, Clair W.Willard Marriott; author-historian, Fawn Brodie; communications expert, Mark Evans Austad; inventor of the industrial diamond, H