Original sentence: Sarah [Whipple] Bruce's son Joseph Bruce, married Harriet [Fay]; whose parents Heman and Martha (Patty) Fay  both descend from John Fay, the early Puritan who arrived on the Speedwell (1656) in Boston, Massachusetts.Through the Chapin    family-line, Otis Norcross is the first cousin fourth removed of the second U
Edited sentence: Sarah [Whipple] Bruce's son Joseph Bruce, married Harriet [Fay]; whose parents Heman and Martha (Patty) Fay both descend from John Fay, the early Puritan who arrived on the Speedwell (1656) in Boston, Massachusetts.Through the Chapin family-line, Otis Norcross is the first cousin fourth removed of the second U