Original sentence: As a result of continuous warfare in the region of central China, the first large-scale emmigration in the history of China took place.During the Qin Dynasty (221 BC), a large number of troops were sent to southern China in order to conquer the Baiyue (百越) territories in Fujian and Guangdong, as a result, numerous Han Chinese emmigrated to Jiangxi in the years following.Like other Chinese languages, tones in Gan makes phonemic distintions
Edited sentence: As a result of continuous warfare in the region of central China, the first large-scale emigration in the history of China took place.During the Qin Dynasty (221 BC), a large number of troops were sent to southern China in order to conquer the Baiyue (百越) territories in Fujian and Guangdong, as a result, numerous Han Chinese emigrated to Jiangxi in the years following.Like other Chinese languages, tones in Gan makes phonemic distantions