Original sentence: The Hooples had one daughter and five sons: Ruth A Hoople (born 14 January 1892 in New York; died July 1972 in New York); William Clifford Hoople (born October 1893 in New York; died 1936 in New York); Gordon D Hoople (born 19 February 1895 in New York; died June 1973 in New York); Howard Cranford "Tot" Hoople (born 12 October 1897 in New York; died August 1977 in Maine); Ross E Hoople (born 1900 in New York); and Robert B Hoople (born 1903 in New York; died 1921)
Edited sentence: The Hooples had one daughter and five sons: Ruth A Hoople (born 14 January 1892 in New York; died July 1972 in New York); William Clifford Hoople (born October 1893 in New York; died 1936 in New York); Gordon D Hoople (born 19 February 1895 in New York; died June 1973 in New York); Howard Cranford "Tot" Hoople (born 12 October 1897 in New York; died August 1977 in Maine); Ross E Hoople (born 1900 in New York); and Robert B Hoople (born 1903 in New York)