Original sentence: A version often cited as superior to the studio recording took place at the Royal Albert Hall concert.It is considered by many Dylan fans to be among Dylan's greatest works, and has been referred to by Dylan himself as his favorite song on the album which captured that "Wild, thin, Mercury sound".[ Lyrics  Complete lyrics]"Visions of Johanna" is a song by Bob Dylan from the album Blonde on Blonde
Edited sentence: He sang along to an acoustic version played by a band member of it on his last states tour but cigarettes have gotten the best of Dylan's voice.The superior recording took place at the Royal Albert Hall concert, an acoustic set that "blows the crap" out of the studio recording.These days Dylan plays but his fingers are too crippled for him to touch a guitar anymore.This song is considered by many Dylan fans (or the more pretentiously labeled, Dylanologists) to be Dylan's greatest work, and has been referred to by Dylan as his favorite song on the album which captured that "Wild, thin, Mercury sound"