Original sentence: An estimated 1.2 to 1.7 million Polish nationals (entire families with children, women, men, and elderly) were loaded onto freight trains and deported to the eastern parts of the USSR, the Urals, and Siberia.In Pietraszki elderly people and children were fired at from an army tank, while in the villages of Wyliny-Ruś, Drogoszewo and Rutki all civilians were summarily executed, including the elderly.In the Józefów Massacre, 1500 Jewish men, women, children and elderly, were killed
Edited sentence: An estimated 1.2 to 1.7 million Polish nationals (entire families with children, women and elderly) were loaded onto freight trains and deported to the eastern parts of the USSR, the Urals, and Siberia.In Pietraszki women and children were fired at from an army tank, while in the villages of Wyliny-Ruś, Drogoszewo and Rutki all civilians were summarily executed, including the elderly.In the Józefów Massacre, 1500 Jewish women with children and elderly only, were killed