Original sentence: She grew up in the middle-class section of Hoylake, on the Wirral UK, and gained a place at the Liverpool College of Art.She met Lennon in a lettering class and started a relationship with him, marrying him in 1962, after the two discovered her pregnancy
Edited sentence: She grew up in the middle-class section of Hoylake, on the Wirral Peninsula, and gained a place at the Liverpool College of Art.She met Lennon in a calligraphy class and started a relationship with him, marrying him in 1962, after the two discovered her pregnancy