Original sentence: Apart from being the composers fourth collaboration with Ray Harryhausen (The Seventh Voyage of Sinbad, The Three Worlds of Gulliver and Mysterious Island, 1958, 1960 and 1961 respectively, all preceded Jason), Herrmann has also written the music to Journey to the Center of the Earth
Edited sentence: Apart from being the composers fourth collaboration with Ray Harryhausen (The Seventh Voyage of Sinbad, The Three Worlds of Gulliver and Mysterious Island, made in 1958, 1960 and 1961 respectively, all preceded Jason), Herrmann has also written the music to Journey to the Center of the Earth