Original sentence: Eventually,  as the cord continues to unwind, the surface of the water assumes a concave shape as it assumes  the spinning motion of bucket relative to the experimenter.Isaac Newton's rotating bucket argument demonstrates that true rotational motion cannot be defined as the relative rotation of the body with respect to the immediately surrounding bodies.This shows that the parts of the water have acquired a centrifugal endeavor despite the fact that they are at rest relative to their immediate surroundings, contrary to Descartes theory
Edited sentence: Eventually,  as the cord continues to unwind, the surface of the water assumes a concave shape as it acquires the motion of the bucket spinning relative to the experimenter.Isaac Newton's rotating bucket argument attempts to demonstrate that true rotational motion cannot be defined as the relative rotation of the body with respect to the immediately surrounding bodies.This concave shape shows that the water has acquired a centrifugal form despite the fact that the water is at rest relative to the pail, contrary to Descartes' theory