Original sentence: Akanishi also stars in a series of commercials for DoCoMo mobile  phones.Kamenashi and Akanishi also starred in the Nintendo commercial for "Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix," a game based loosely on the hit arcade series, created for the Nintendo GameCube game console, as well as an Oronamin C commercial with Ueto Aya and various DoCoMo cellphone ads
Edited sentence: As well as an Oronamin C commercial with Ueto Aya and DoCoMo cellphone ads.But now, Crunky is more likely to be endorsed only mostly by Kamenashi.He also had endorsed KFC particularly the new "Black Pepper Chicken" that was made last 2007.KAT-TUN in group, also had their DoCoMo commercials.Kamenashi and Akanishi also starred in the Nintendo commercial for "Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix," a game based loosely on the hit arcade series, created for the Nintendo GameCube game console.Kamenashi had starred in solo in a contact solutions made by Rohto