Original sentence: " The Holy Science offers an astronomical explanation for a shorter Yuga Cycle in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200x2 = one descending Kali Yuga cycle followed by an ascending cycle).In his book The Holy Science Sri Yukteswar Giri also argues that we are currently in Dwapara Yuga.It also suggests that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity
Edited sentence: " He offers an astronomical explanation for a shorter Yuga Cycle in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200x2 = one descending Kali Yuga cycle followed by an ascending cycle).He also suggests that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity.Sri Yukteswar Giri agrees that we are currently in Dwapara Yuga