Original sentence: While the performances have received praise for their artistic merits, but have also been criticized for promoting sectarian doctrines and negative views towards evolution and atheism, as well as being "filled with cult messages
Edited sentence: Dance performances have received praise for their artistic excellence, perfectly synchronized dancing, and uplifting family-friendly presentation, but have also been criticized for promoting sectarian doctrines and negative views towards evolution and atheism, as well as being "filled with cult messages