Original sentence: Green later softened his approach, and this transition is evident in his music beginning with So You Wanna Go Back To Egypt in 1980.Originally printed on a few pages of loose paper, the newsletter grew in content to eventually become a "small, colorful magazine," and was renamed in mid-1985 as Last Days Magazine.When his music was carried by Christian bookstores, a second cassette was included free of charge for every cassette purchased to give away to a friend to help spread the Gospel
Edited sentence: Green later softened his approach, and this transition is evident in his music beginning with So You Wanna Go Back To Egypt in 1980, an album more focused on the love, mercy and grace of God than the wrath of His displeasure.Originally printed on a few pages of loose paper, it grew in content to eventually become a "small, colorful magazine," and was renamed in mid-1985 as Last Days Magazine.When his music was carried by Christian bookstores, a second cassette was included free of charge for every cassette purchased to give away to a friend to help spread his message