Original sentence: He is a vocal critic of The Great Global Warming Swindle, a documentary highly critical of the U.Monbiot asserts in this exchange with Hamish Mykura, the Head of Religion, Science and History at Channel 4, that his documentaries inclusion in a 'season' was not what was claimed at the time of its commissioning, an argument Mykura uses in his self-defence.Monbiot derided Channel 4's claim that the broadcast of this documentary was 'balanced' by Monbiot's own Dispatches documentary as part of a season on climate change, claiming that his documentary was subject to "a rigorous process of fact-checking", while The Great Global Warming Swindle was not.Monbiot was educated at Stowe School, a boys' independent school in Buckinghamshire, and then Brasenose College, Oxford, where he read Zoology
Edited sentence: He was critical of The Great Global Warming Swindle, a documentary highly critical of the U.Monbiot asserts in this exchange with Hamish Mykura, the Head of Religion, Science and History at Channel 4, that his documentaries inclusion in a 'season' was not what was claimed at the time of its commissioning.Monbiot derided Channel 4's claim that the broadcast of this documentary was 'balanced' by Monbiot's own Dispatches documentary as part of a season on climate change, asserting that his documentary was subject to "a rigorous process of fact-checking", while The Great Global Warming Swindle was not.Monbiot is critical of those who question the environmentalist consensus that climate change equals global warming, labelling any such dissenters as 'deniers' and points out their connections to corporate interests when applicable.Monbiot was educated at Stowe School, a boys' public school in Buckinghamshire, and then Brasenose College, Oxford, where he read Zoology.Mykura refutes these accusations