Original sentence: Although by then their main product was cookies the brothers coninued to bake pumpernickel and honeycake, mainly for southern Ontario's growing Dutch immigrant population.It would be five years of long days baking and delivering their products before the brothers got their first real break into the retail trade when,in 1956, a major grocery chain agreed to give the Voortman Cookies shelf space
Edited sentence: Although by then their main product was cookies the brothers continued to bake pumpernickel and honeycake, mainly for southern Ontario's growing Dutch immigrant population.It would be five years of long days baking and delivering their products before the brothers got their first real break into the retail trade when,in 1956, an unspecified Canadian grocery chain agreed to give the Voortman Cookies shelf space