Original sentence: The violence committed by state combatants is also considered more acceptable than that of the 'terrorist,' who by definition refuses to follow the laws of war, and hence cannot share in the acceptance given to establishment violence
Edited sentence: , terrorism, committed by state combatants is also considered more acceptable than that of the 'terrorist,' who by definition refuses to follow the self-serving laws of war, and hence cannot share in the acceptance given to establishment violence.The violence, i