Original sentence: ) When the NAC learned that one of the conditions of this donation was for them to pay Yashin's parents $425,000 in consulting fees for "loosely defined" services, they balked and Yashin promptly cancelled the deal
Edited sentence: ) When the NAC learned that one of the conditions of this donation was for them to pay Yashin's parents $425,000 in "consulting fees" for nonexistent services, they balked and Yashin promptly cancelled the deal