Original sentence: Many of these conservatives, and even some that remained undecided on the question of whether or not the practice of hypnosis is a sin are now examining what has happened due to RMT and are using it as the proof for their condemnation.The failures of recovered memory therapy have resonated with some of the more conservative members in the Christian community
Edited sentence: Many of these conservatives, and even some that remained undecided on the question of whether or not the practice of hypnosis is a sin are now examining what has happened due to RMT and are using it as the proof for their interpretation.The failures of recovered memory therapy have resonated with some of the more conservative members in the Christian community, mainly those that take great stock in what the bible says and are aware of what has been happening in this field of medical science since RMT first began