Original sentence: Scientists consider Ross's arguments against evolution to be pseudoscientific.Some of Ross' work – particularly his criticism of evolution – is faulted by some in the mainstream scientific community as being little different from YEC, but Ross states his work provides a better fit for the data than either the YEC or the conventional models.The idea that the universe has finely tuned parameters which cannot be significantly altered without destroying the possibility of life is referred to by mainstream cosmology as the anthropic principle
Edited sentence: Most scientists consider Ross's arguments against evolution to be pseudoscientific.Some of Ross' work – particularly his criticism of evolution – is faulted by some in the scientific community as being little different from YEC , but Ross states his work provides a better fit for the data than either the YEC or the conventional models.The idea that the universe has finely tuned parameters which cannot be significantly altered without destroying the possibility of life is referred to by current cosmology as the anthropic principle