Original sentence: MHSN has recently began reinventing its diminished sports program by displaying past awards, trophies, pictures, and plaques in the halls.This resulted in the usage of both the upper and lower gymnasiums partitioned off into several classes, without ceilings
Edited sentence: MHSN has recently began reinventing it's diminished sports program by displaying past awards, trophies, pictures, and plaques in the halls.This has lead to the demise of the Hip Hop Drill Team and other clubs that may have promoted cultural awareness in the cloudy conservative atmosphere filling the school.This resulted in the usage of both the upper and lower gymnasiums partitioned off into several classes---without ceilings.This would eventually cause many students to have allergic reactions to the renovations and make it difficult for teachers to orate and teach due to the poor acoustics of the set-up.While this promotion is moderately effective, the school has recently been subject to the conservative views of the Board of Education and focuses mainly on sports, leaving little attention to the humanities departments