Original sentence: Marcella Byrd, exceptional competitor, won numerous tournaments dominating the women heavyweight divisions, 1st woman to win the Heavyweight title in the men division at the All American Open Championship, won silver at the National Taekwondo Championships in Ohio in 1979 and was inducted into the Taekwondo Hall of Fame, in 1995 she came out of retirement & won the woman's Heavyweight title at the All American Open Championships one last time
Edited sentence: Marcella Byrd, exceptional competitor, won numerous tournaments dominating the women heavyweight divisions, 1st woman to win the Heavyweight title in the men division at the All American Open Championship, won silver at the National Taekwondo Championships in Ohio in 1979, in 1995 she came out of retirement & won the woman's Heavyweight title at the All American Open Championships one last time