Original sentence: Furthermore, an Israeli citizen, who wants to renounce his/her citizenship, can adress the Israeli Interior Minister in writing and ask for it to be done.If the person commited an act which is considered a breach of loyalty to the country.Regarding entrance to Israel, staying in Israel and working in Israel, an Israeli citizen which also posseses a foreign citizenship is considered an Israeli citizen for all purposes
Edited sentence: Furthermore, an Israeli citizen, who wants to renounce his/her citizenship, can address the Israeli Interior Minister in writing and ask for it to be done.If the person committed an act which is considered a breach of loyalty to the country.Regarding entrance to Israel, staying in Israel and working in Israel, an Israeli citizen which also possesses a foreign citizenship is considered an Israeli citizen for all purposes