Original sentence: Christopher Shea reviewed Manliness for the Boston Globe.Shea called Mansfield's definition of manliness "maddeningly imprecise," considering it to rely on "common stereotypes" long since exposed as erroneous by contemporary scholarship
Edited sentence: On the whole, however, Mansfield's book was intensely criticized.Writing for the Boston Globe, Christopher Shea called Mansfield's definition of manliness "maddeningly imprecise," relying on "common stereotypes" long since exposed as erroneous by contemporary scholarship