Original sentence: Gore stated that the National Performance Review later helped guide President Clinton when he down-sized the federal government.One of Gore's major works as Vice President was the National Performance Review, which pointed out waste, fraud, and other abuse in the federal government and stressed the need for cutting the size of the bureaucracy and the number of regulations.economy expanded for all eight years of the Clinton/Gore administration.government, the U
Edited sentence: His book later helped guide President Clinton when he down-sized the federal government.One of Gore's major accomplishments as Vice President was the National Performance Review, which pointed out waste, fraud, and other abuse in the federal government and stressed the need for cutting the size of the bureaucracy and the number of regulations.government, the American economy expanded for all eight years of the Clinton/Gore administration