Original sentence: 5 Craig Jones - Sampler.A regular complaint about nu metal and the bands that perform it, is that many believe the genre is not related with heavy metal, mainly due to the commercialism involved.Adding to this, Slipknot have a very large legion of fans and are arguably one of the most popular "metal" bands on the planet.As with most heavy metal bands, Slipknot are not without their detractors.Heavy touring (including an Ozzfest stint in 1999) greatly enhanced the band's fanbase.Slipknot are also accused of creating positions within the band for the sole purpose of increasing the total number of members (for example, no other popular bands hold a position for a sampler, even if samples are included in the music).Slipknot is a nine-piece nu metal band from Des Moines, Iowa.Slipknot is currently one of the more popular nu metal bands of the contemporary music scene, with their extreme music and brutal stage performances.Slipknot recieve even more criticism as they have an image and sound that is often mistaken for heavy metal.The band are also frowned upon by many critics due to their masks and costumes which many attribute to shock marketing and are described as "gimmicky"
Edited sentence: 5 Craig Jones - Samples/Media.Heavy touring--including an Ozzfest stint in 1999--greatly enhanced the band's fanbase.Slipknot is a nine-piece heavy metal band from Des Moines, Iowa.Slipknot is also accused of creating positions within the band for the sole purpose of increasing the total number of members (for example, no other popular bands hold a position for a sampler, even if samples are included in the music).Slipknot is currently one of the more popular heavy metal bands of the contemporary music scene, with their extreme music and brutal stage performances.The band is frowned upon by many critics due to their masks and costumes which many attribute to shock marketing and are described as "gimmicky"