Original sentence: Partly because the German people and students were so used to being controlled by a single authority, it was not hard for the German Nationalist Socialist party headed by Adolf Hitler to convince most students to join its student organization (the NSDStB - German Nationalist Socialist Student Union) and to abandon their right of self determination in favour of a single leader
Edited sentence: Partly because the German people and students were so used to being controlled by a single almighty authority, it was not hard for the German Nationalist Socialist party headed by Adolf Hitler to convince most students to join its student organization (the NSDStB - German Nationalist Socialist Student Union) and to abandon their right of self determination in favour of a single leader