Original sentence: Meanwhile Jenny Berggren is ready to release her first book "Vinna hela världen" which means "Gains the whole world" which is set to be in store September 2009.She is also currently working on her christian solo CD.The band was on world tour and are set to performed at several summer music festivals in 2008 and beginning of 2009.The tour reaches Scandinavia, some eastern european Countries and some places far away like Singapore or Dominican Republic
Edited sentence: Meanwhile Jenny Berggren is ready to release her first book "Vinna hela världen" which means "Gains the whole world" which is set to be in stores September 2009.She is also currently working on her Christian solo CD.The band was on world tour and performed at several summer music festivals in 2008 and most of of 2009.The tour reached Scandinavia, some eastern european Countries and some places far away like Singapore and the Dominican Republic