Original sentence: 13 is a black cat, with green eyes and a pink mouth.13 is anthropomorphic as he can do a lot of stuff a human can do, like rock on a guitar or give someone something with his paws.And if you make him run with 6 clips he gets invaded.He likes spagetti and meatballs, his favorite color is red, and doesn't like being 15 minutes younger than Eva.He was born 15 minutes after Eva.Her favorite color is lime green, she likes pistachio ice cream with mini chocolate chip sprinkles, and doesn't like people who think she's a witch.Make him ride a wagon 6 times, he smiles and crashes.She is 12 years old, she is born on December 13 1993(age 16 now)at 1:00 pm.She is the least popular character.When he sits for 4 seconds, he burps.When you make him strut with 3 clips, he falls over
Edited sentence: 13 is a black cat, with yellow eyes and a pink mouth.13 is anthropomorphic as he can do a lot of stuff a human can do, like play guitar or give someone something with his paws.Edgar enjoys spaghetti and meatballs.Eva is probably the least popular character.He was born fifteen minutes after Eva.Her favorite color is lime green, she likes pistachio ice cream with mini chocolate chip sprinkles, but doesn't like people who think she's a witch.His favorite color is red, and doesn't like being fifteen minutes younger than Eva.She was born on December 13 1993 at 1:00 pm