Original sentence: Solent's student yachting team are the current world champions.These include cricketers Shane Warne (Doctorate), David Gower and Robin Smith (Masters of Arts) and Southampton footballers Matt Le Tissier and Lawrie McMenemy (Masters of Business Administration)
Edited sentence: Solent is firmly established as Britain's top  university for sailing and yachting and the team are the current world champions.These include cricketers Shane Warne (Doctorate), David Gower and Robin Smith (Masters of Arts) and Southampton footballing greats Matt Le Tissier and Lawrie McMenemy (Masters of Business Administration)