Original sentence: A "Shore Lunch" is a tradition in the Northern USA & Canada, where outdoor enthusiasts cook their catch on the shores of a lake.These fish frys are generally informal, casual events
Edited sentence: A "Shore Lunch" is a tradition in the Northern USA & Canada.For decades outdoor enthusiasts have been cooking their catch on the shores of their favorite lake.From the far reaches of remote wilderness points, fishing guides would prepare for their guest, the freshly caught fish on open flames, along the sandy shorelines.The experience of being in the wilderness and freshly caught fish sizzling in the frying pan is a memory they will cherish forever.These fish frys are generally informal, casual events that wouldn't be mistaken for a church service