Original sentence: Bui Tuong Phong (, December 14, 1942–1975) was a Vietnamese-born computer graphics researcher and pioneer.He died not long after finishing his dissertation.In 1975, after his tenure at the University of Utah, Phong joined Stanford as a professor.Phong knew that he was terminally ill with leukemia while he was a student.Phong was born in Hanoi, Vietnam.Phong was married to Bui Thi Ngoc Bich from Nha Trang, Vietnam, in 1969 in Paris, France
Edited sentence: Bui Thi Ngoc Bich from Nha Trang, Vietnam, in 1969 in Paris, France.Bui Tuong Phong (, 1942–1975) was a Vietnamese-born computer graphics researcher and pioneer.Bui Tuong Phong was married to Ms.He was born December 14, 1942 in Hanoi, Vietnam.In 1975, after his tenure at the University of Utah, Phong joined Stanford as a professor; he died of Leukemia not long after finishing his dissertation.Tragically, Phong knew that he was terminally ill while he was a student