Original sentence: August von Thomsen, (1846–1920), was an Admiral of the German Imperial Navy
Edited sentence: August von Thomsen (born 06 August 1846 in Oldenswort, Schleswig-Holstein, Germany, married	06 May 1888 in Naples, Italy, and died 26 September 1920 in Kiel,Schleswig-Holstein) was an Admiral of the German Imperial Navy