Original sentence: Rafael Eitan (January 11, 1929 – November 23, 2004) was an Israeli  general, former chief of staff of the Israeli Defence Forces and later a politician and a Knesset member
Edited sentence: Rafael Eitan (January 11, 1929 – November 23, 2004) was an Israeli war hero, a general, former chief of staff of the Israeli Defence Forces and later a politician and a Knesset member