Original sentence: Rutherford High has a fully incorporated agriculture facility, sporting facilities and a fully functioning music laboratory.Rutherford Technology High School is a secondary school located in Rutherford, a suburb of the city of Maitland, New South Wales in the Hunter Region of New South Wales, Australia.The school has a Student Representative Council containing 24 members, with over 900 students enrolled
Edited sentence: Rutherford High has a fully incorporated agriculture facility, the latest and greatest in technology, excellent sporting facilities and fully functioning music laboratry; making it quite unique to offer so many subject options and facilities for students to complete studies in.Rutherford Technology High School is a secondary school located in Rutherford, a suburb of Maitland, New South Wales in Hunter Valley.The school has a Student Representitive Council contaning 24 members, with an overall student population well exceding 1000 students