Original sentence: Many of the the mine workers who hailed from the north east stayed in Cotgrave and built homes and families.The local economy has improved considerably as Cotgrave is surrounded by an affluent area with low unemployment.There are two pubs; The Manvers, named for the  Manvers Family that owned much land in the area, and the Rose and Crown towards the north of the village
Edited sentence: Fortunately the local economy has improved considerably as Cotgrave is surrounded by an affluent area with low unemployment.Many of the the mine worker who hailed from the north east stayed in Cotgrave and built homes and families.There are two pubs; The Manvers, named for the  Manvers Family that owned much land in the area, and the Rose and Crown towards the north of the village, locally renowned for its excellent cuisine.Today the welfare can prove an interesting place to be when a live Newcastle v Sunderland football match is televised there