Original sentence: But with the musical background, and placed among the other tunes on the album, expressions such as "we met upon a hill" and "my dormant will" take on a deeper, mystical meaning, and other lines, such as "I'll give my love in vain, to reach that peak again" can be suspected of having other meanings, than just the sexual.On one hand, they manage to be ironically chauvinistic and, if read aloud without the musical backing, they seem rather simple and talentless.The lyrics are some of Bowie's most erotic yet, though, unlike The Width of a Circle, they this time concern a heterosexual encounter
Edited sentence: The lyrics are some of Bowie's most erotic yet