Original sentence: The building was delayed due to a season of constant rain, but on the appointed day, 12th May, the building still in an uncompleted state was solemnly blessed and officially opened by Cardinal Gilroy.This building was opened by Cardinal Norman Gilroy on Sunday 29th January, 1961.marist college pagewood has been though alot of highs in th sporting feld very much in 2009 with a number of winning premierships and a couple of swimmng goals
Edited sentence: Marist College Pagewood has been though a lot of highs in the sporting field in 2009 with a number of winning premierships and a couple of swimming goals.The building was delayed due to a season of constant rain, but on the appointed day, 12 May, the building still in an uncompleted state was solemnly blessed and officially opened by Cardinal Gilroy.This building was opened by Cardinal Norman Gilroy on Sunday 29 January, 1961