Original sentence: After the closure of Newsfield's short-lived lifestyle magazine LM, Crash inherited its video reviews for a short period.Later years would see a brief revival of The Terminal Man, as well as Mel Croucher's comic story Tamara Knight, both of which ended mid-run
Edited sentence: After the closure of Newsfield's short-lived lifestyle magazine LM, Crash also featured video reviews for a period, which had mixed opinions from readers.Later years would see a brief revival of The Terminal Man, as well as Mel Croucher's comic story Tamara Knight, both of which ended mid-run due to poor reception