Original sentence: As of 2002, 40,000 people reside in the settlement, making it one of the largest in the city.Gilo () is a Jewish settlement and neighbourhood in East Jerusalem which was established on land annexed to the municipality after the 1967 Six-Day War.In 2001, CNN issued a memorandum to its staff stating that "We refer to Gilo as a 'Jewish Neighborhood on the outskirts of Jerusalem'... We don't refer to it as a settlement.North of Gilo are the Jerusalem neighborhoods of Beit Safafa and Manahat.Some of Gilo's land was owned by Jewish institutions prior to the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, though because the settlement is located in territory captured by Israel during the Six-Day War in 1967, it is often considered an Israeli settlement.The Israeli Government ultimately bulletproofed the outer row of homes
Edited sentence: As of 2002, 40,000 people reside in the neighbourhood, making it one of the largest in the city.Eventually the Israeli Government bulletproofed the outer row of homes.Gilo () is a neighbourhood in southern Jerusalem which was established on land annexed to the municipality after the 1967 Six-Day War.In 2001, CNN issued a memorandum to its staff stating that "We refer to Gilo as a 'Jewish neighborhood on the outskirts of Jerusalem'... We don't refer to it as a settlement.North of Gilo are the Jerusalem neighbourhoods of Beit Safafa and Manahat.Positions on Jerusalem.Some of Gilo's land was owned by Jewish institutions prior to the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, though because the neighborhood is located in territory captured by Israel during the Six-Day War in 1967, it is often considered an Israeli settlement