Original sentence: Michael Schumacher (pronounced / (help·info)/, born January 3, 1969, in Hürth Hermülheim, near Cologne, Germany), nicknamed "Schumi" and "Schu", is an ex-Formula One driver, and seven-time world champion.Schumacher turned in for the corner, Hill refused to back off, and the cars collided
Edited sentence: Michael Schumacher (pronounced / (help·info)/, (nicknamed "Schumi" and "Schu") born January 3, 1969, in Hürth Hermülheim, near Cologne) is an ex-Formula One driver from Germany, and seven-time world champion.Schumacher turned in normally for the corner, Hill refused to back off, and the cars collided