Original sentence: The two brothers make their way back to their temple home in the jungle, and a third tiger answers their roar
Edited sentence: McRory and Raoul leave hoping that this third tiger will teach the brothers, the third then moves her head into the sunlight showing that she has a hole in her ear and thus revealing herself to be the mother of the brothers.The two brothers make their way back to their temple home in the jungle with McRory and Raoul, and a third tiger greets them