Original sentence: Jayne Parsons (born 18 March, 1962 in Lower Hutt, New Zealand) is a New Zealand paralympic cyclist who won a bronze medal at the 2008 Summer Paralympics along with tandem partner Annaliisa Farrell in the Womens Time trial
Edited sentence: Jayne Parsons (born 18 March, 1962 in Lower Hutt, New Zealand) is a New Zealand paralympic cyclist who won a bronze medal at the 2008 Summer Paralympics along with tandem partner Annaliisa Farrell in the Women's Time trial