Original sentence: Members of other traditions sometimes refer to eclectic pagans as "fluffy bunnies," suggesting that they are lightweights and not serious about the religion.Others see in eclectic paganism the clear desire to make meaning out of deep, personal, often mystical experiences, and the desire to create communities of "seekers".Rather then viewing culture and tradition as static, some eclectic pagans frame their experience in the belief that human culture is constantly evolving, with elements of some cultures merging with others in a process of hybridity (Appiah, 2006).Some more orthodox pagans critique eclectic paganism as looking at the surface rather than the deeper meaning of rituals; and of treating another culture's religious traditions without the proper amount of reverence.There are other historical syncretisms that happened in a less oppressive way, such as the Scottish traditions that are a product of centuries of combined Norse and Celtic influence
Edited sentence: Members of other traditions sometimes refer to eclectic pagans as "fluffy bunnies," suggesting that they are lightweights and not serious about their craft.Others see in eclectic paganism the clear desire to make meaning out of deep personal, often mystical experiences, and create communities of seekers.Rather then viewing culture and tradition as static, or getting stuck on a particular "snapshot" of time, eclectic pagans understand that human culture is constantly evolving, with elements of some cultures merging with others in a process of hybridity (Appiah, 2006).Some more orthodox pagans critique Eclectic paganism as looking at the surface rather than the deeper meaning of rituals; and of treating another culture's religious traditions without the proper amount of reverence