Original sentence: Adams Carter, Tilman and Noel Odell succeeded in making the first ascent of the mountain, which remained the highest summit climbed by man until 1950.In 1947 he attempted Rakaposhi, then made his way to Kashgar to join up with Eric Shipton in a lightweight attempt on Muztagh Ata, 7546 metres, which nearly succeeded.With the support of a team which included Peter Lloyd and H
Edited sentence: In 1947 he attempted Rakaposhi, then made his way to Kashgar to join up with Eric Shipton in a lightweight attempt on Muztagh Ata,7546 metres, which nearly succeeded.Tilman and Noel Odell succeeded in making the first ascent of the mountain, which remained the highest mountain climbed by man until 1950.With the support of a team which included Peter Lloyd