Original sentence: The prevalence of circumcision is the percentage of males in a given population who have been circumcised, with the procedure most commonly being performed as a part of prophylactic healthcare, a religious obligation, or cultural practice
Edited sentence: The prevalence of circumcision is the percentage of males in a given population who have undergone a form of infant genital mutilation known as circumcision, with the procedure most commonly being performed as a part of prophylactic healthcare, a religious obligation, or cultural practice