Original sentence: Africa has about 200 million head of cattle, many of which are herded in traditional ways and serve partly as tokens of their owner's wealth.Cattle hides, used for leather to make shoes and clothing, are another widespread product.Cattle remain broadly used as draft animals in many developing countries, such as India.Cattle today are the basis of a multi-billion dollar industry worldwide
Edited sentence: Africa has about 200 million head of cattle, many of which are herded in traditional ways and serve largely as tokens of their owners' wealth.Cattle hides, used for leather to make shoes and clothing, are another important product.Cattle remain important as draft animals in many developing countries, such as India.Cattle today are the basis of a many billion dollar industry worldwide