Original sentence: And a recent Provo Daily Herald newspaper article characterized McLean as a man that had "hunted down" Pratt in retribution for "ruining his marriage".But many Mormons viewed Pratt's death as a martyrdom, a view first expressed in Pratt's own dying words.In the present day, Pratt's defenders still characterize the circumstances of Pratt's death as a religious martyrdom.Some historians view Pratt's death as simply the act of an  jealous husband who was deeply angered by a man that had "run off" with his wife
Edited sentence: In the present day, Pratt's defenders have also characterized the circumstances of Pratt's death as a religious martyrdom.Mormons viewed Pratt's death as a martyrdom, a view first expressed in Pratt's own dying words