Original sentence: During this period, Hyman met industry veteran, Wayne Garfield, who became her first road manager after filling-in for the sound man in the middle of her performance at Mikell's, a Manhattan jazz club,.Her first album for Arista, Somewhere in My Lifetime was released in 1979; the title track was produced by then-labelmate Barry Manilow.Her follow up album You Know How to Love Me made the R&B Top 20 and also performed well on the club/dance charts.When Arista Records bought Buddah, she was transferred to that label
Edited sentence: During this period, Hyman met industry veteran, Wayne Garfield, who became her first road manager after thoughtfully filling-in as a sound mixer in the middle of her performance at the Manhattan (NYC) jazz club, Mikell's.Her first album under the new label, Somewhere in My Lifetime, was highly successful.Her follow up album You Know How To Love Me made the R&B Top 20 and also performed well on the club/dance charts.Its title track was produced by then label mate Barry Manilow.She made a major impression when her label was acquired by Arista Records the next year