Original sentence: Gangaur is the colourful and the one of the most important festivals of people of Rajasthan and is observed throughout the state with great fervour and devotion by womenfolk who worship Gauri, the consort of Lord Shiv during July-Aug
Edited sentence: Gangaur is the colourful and the one of the most important festivals of Rajputs of Rajasthan and is observed throughout the state with great fervour and devotion by womenfolk who worship Gauri, the consort of Lord Shiv during July-Aug