Original sentence: It is the second largest economy in Europe after Germany's.The United Kingdom is one of the world's most globalised countries, ranking fourth in one recent survey.The capital, London (see Economy of London), is one of the three major financial centres of the world, along with New York City and Tokyo
Edited sentence: The United Kingdom is one of the world's most globalised countries.The capital, London (see Economy of London), is one of major financial centres of the world, along with New York City , Hong Kong and Tokyo.United Kingdom's GDP PPP Per Capita in 2007 is the 22th highest in the world, at USD 35,134