Original sentence: Television broadcasts by the "Yes" campaign provoked controversy for raising the spectre of war and chaos in Europe if the Constitution was rejected.The most emotive of the adverts, which featured emotive images of the Holocaust and Srebrenica Massacre, were never aired by the "Yes" campaign, but received national news coverage and were received very poorly.The perception of an aggresive and ruthless style on the part of the "Yes" campaign also put off many, and the controversial television broadcast warning of future conflict in Europe caused widespread offence
Edited sentence: Because of the arguments used, many people regarded the "for" campaign as a series of direct threats despite their intents and voted against out of disgust with the "for" campaign.Even though the worst commercial never even aired, it was given national coverage.Television broadcasts by the "Yes" campaign provoked controversy for raising the spectre of war and chaos in Europe if the Constitution was rejected, accompanied by emotive images of the continent's 20th century tragedies.The aggresiveness and the perceived ruthlessness of the Dutch goverment's "for" campaign offended and upset many people as well, as politicians didn't shun to bring up sensitive themes like a possible repeat of the Holocaust and the Srebrenica massacre and even war within in Europe if the constitution wouldn't be accepted