Original sentence: Elisabeth ("Eli") Maragall Verge (born November 25, 1970 in Barcelona, Catalonia) is a former field hockey player from Spain, who was a member of the Women's National Team that won the gold medal at the 1992 Summer Olympics on home soil (Barcelona)
Edited sentence: Elisabeth ("Eli") Maragall Verge (born November 25, 1970 in Barcelona, Catalonia) is a former field hockey player from Spain, who was a member of the Women's National Team that surprisingly won the golden medal at the 1992 Summer Olympics on home soil (Barcelona)