Original sentence: The OEDs readers contribute quotations: the department currently receives about 200,000 a year.The production of the new edition exploits computer technology, particularly since the June 2005 inauguration of the "Perfect All-Singing All-Dancing Editorial and Notation Application", or "Pasadena".This system has also simplified the use of the quotations database, and enabled staff in New York to work directly on the dictionary in the same way as their Oxford-based counterparts.With this XML-based system, lexicographers can spend less effort on presentation issues such as the numbering of definitions
Edited sentence: The OEDs small army of devoted readers continue to contribute quotations: the department currently receives about 200,000 a year.The new system has also simplified the use of the quotations database, and enabled staff in New York to work directly on the dictionary in the same way as their Oxford-based counterparts.The production of the new edition takes full advantage of computer technology, particularly since the June 2005 inauguration of the whimsically named "Perfect All-Singing All-Dancing Editorial and Notation Application", or "Pasadena".With this XML-based system, the attention of lexicographers can be directed more to matters of content than to presentation issues such as the numbering of definitions