Original sentence: The Mid-Hudson Children's Museum (MHCM) is a children's museum in the Hudson River Valley between the larger New York City and Albany markets.The Mid-Hudson Children's Museum is an independent 501(c)(3) not-for-profit educational organization that is supported by admission and membership sales, program fees, donations, and grants.The building is a mid-19th century industrial brick building that formerly housed Innis Dye Works
Edited sentence: The Mid-Hudson Children's Museum is a children's museum in the Hudson River Valley between the larger New York City and Albany markets.The Mid-Hudson Children's Museum is an independent 501(c)3 not-for-profit educational organization that is supported by admission and membership sales, program fees, donations, and grants.The building is an historic mid-19th century industrial brick building that formerly housed Innis Dye Works