Original sentence: The 1-114th Infantry (Sentinals) of the NJ Army National Guard assumed duties of the USBATT MFO 47 under the command of LTC Tommie O.The New Jersey Guardmembers competed against soldiers from Columbia, Fiji, Australia, Britain, France, Hungary, Italy and New Zealand in events including an obstacle course, five-kilometer run, land navigation and first aid knowledge.The competition is a military skills event.While on deployment, the battalion was the first Army National Guard unit to win the Multinational Forces and Observer's Force Skills Competition
Edited sentence: Bellamy, While on deployment, the Battalion was the first Army National Guard unit to win the Multinational Forces and Observer's Force Skills Competition.The 1-114th Infantry (Sentinals) of the NJ Amry National Guard assumed duties of the USBATT MFO 47 under the command of LTC Tommie O.The New Jersey Guardmembers competed against soldiers from Columbia, Fiji Islands, Australia, Britain, France, Hungary, Italy and New Zealand in events including a grueling obstacle course, five-kilometer run, land navigation and first aid knowledge.The competition is similar to the Olympics but focuses on soldier's skills