Original sentence: He attended Lebanon High School and then Cedar Crest High.He earned an M.in the Hebrew Bible and Semitic Languages from the University of Wisconsin-Madison (with a minor in Classical studies
Edited sentence: He attended Lebanon High School and then Cedar Crest High, where he was presumably a very good student.He began pursuing his interest with theology, particularly the language, context, and overall message of the Bible.This ultimately led him into earning an M.in the Hebrew Bible and Semitic Languages from the University of Wisconsin-Madison (with a minor in Classical studies), all the while supporting himself working at various odd jobs and teaching on the college level as an adjunct