Original sentence: The town is surrounded by the Wahiba Sands from the west and the high eastern Al Hajer mountains from the East while the town itself lies on a plain full of desert vegetation and human-grown sate palm trees in addition to other local crops
Edited sentence: The town is surrounded by the breath taking Wahiba Sands from the west and the high eastern Al Hajer mountains from the East whilest the town itself lies on a beautiful Plain full of desert vegetation and Human grown Date Palm Trees in addition to other local crops