Original sentence: Another controversial claim suggests that watching extensive amounts of television may cause autism
Edited sentence: Another controversial claim suggested that watching extensive amounts of television might cause autism.Autistic author Temple Grandin suggests: "don't make excuses, make allowances", for the behaviour of autistic people that doesn't fit in with societal norms.Proponents of the hypothesis failed to understand that autistic children are usually uncomfortable being touched, which leads parents to not only touch them less, but have difficult feelings about being rejected.Researchers failed to imagine that the parallel increases could be coincidental