Original sentence: Ingves scored his first league goal in his first ever league appearance on May 4, 2008 against MyPa.On November 17, 2008 Ingves joined Heerenveen from Holland for a one-week-trial together with Mika Ojala from FC Inter Turku
Edited sentence: Ingves scored his first league goal in his first ever league appearance on 4 May 2008 against MyPa.On 17 November 2008 Ingves joined Heerenveen from Holland for a one-week-trial together with Mika Ojala from FC Inter Turku