Original sentence: Kendra had fresh ideas and even had a lot of foresight.Kendra's weakness was that she "stepped up to the plate" too late and flew "under the radar" too much.Kendra's work ethics are ostensibly a lot stronger than Tana's and Kendra's personality was better suited for The Trump Organization.People liked Kendra and even some executives would even considering Kendra for a temporary contract during the Best Buy Video Game Event.The Donald didn't like Kendra's crying in the boardroom but that did not stop Kendra from receiving favorable responses.The viewers learned that Tana was being disrespectful to her subordinates and called her subordinates names but she was a star up until the final stretch
Edited sentence: Kendra had fresh ideas, and even had a lot of foresight.Kendra's weakness was that she stepped up to the plate too late and flew "under the radar" too much.Kendra's work ethics are a lot stronger than Tana's, as Kendra's personality was better suited for The Trump Organization.People liked Kendra, and even some executives would even considering Kendra for a temporary contract during the Best Buy Video Game Event.The Donald didn't like Kendra's crying in the boardroom, but that didn't stop Kendra from receiving favorable responses.The viewers learned that Tana was being disrespectful to her subordinates, called her subordinates names, but she was a star up until the final stretch