Original sentence: " The team went on to win 14 out of their remaining 15 games, and shut down the Titans in the AFC Divisional round.Playing against the Colts and Co-MVP Peyton Manning (Steve McNair of the Titans was also Co-MVP) the Pats recorded 4 interceptions, and advanced to Super Bowl XXXVIII, where they defeated the Carolina Panthers 32-29 on a late Adam Vinatieri field goal
Edited sentence: " The team went on to win 14 out of their remaining 15 games (including the last twelve of the regular season), and shut down the Titans in the AFC Divisional round.Playing against the Colts and Co-MVP Peyton Manning (Steve McNair of the Titans was also Co-MVP) the Pats recorded 4 interceptions, and advanced to Super Bowl XXXVIII, where they defeated the Carolina Panthers 32-29 on a late Adam Vinatieri field goal in what many consider to be one of the finest Super Bowls ever played.They opened the season at 6-0 and, combined with the 15 straight wins to end the previous regular and post-seasons, shattered the record for most wins in a row (18) long held by the Miami Dolphins during and just after their perfect 1972 season with 21 straight wins.Though the NFL does not consider this "official," and only counts regular season games in win streaks, it is still considered an incredible accomplishment by many