Original sentence: The president has also overseen a reduction of Kenya's dependence on aid (which still remains significant though) by western donors,seen to be unreliable and meddlesome (usually,and laudably, tying aid to demands for reforms and democratization, with significant positive results, but unfortunately prone to changing goalposts and too many a time never actually disbursing pledged aid),with the country being funded mainly by internally generated resources,tax revenue collection having grown tremendously during his term,  and increasing investment,grants and loans by Asian countries, mainly Japan, People's Republic of China and the Middle East, and to a lessor extent investment by South African,Libyan and Nigerian corporations, and even Iran
Edited sentence: The president has also overseen a reduction of Kenya's dependence on aid (which still remains significant though) by western donors,seen to be unreliable and meddlesome (usually,and laudably, tying aid to demands for reforms and democratization, with significant positive results, but unfortunately prone to changing goalposts and too many a time never actually disbursing pledged aid),with the country being funded mainly by internally generated resources,tax revenue collection having grown tremendously during his term,  and increasing investment,grants and loans by Asian countries, mainly Japan, new world power China and the Middle East, and to a lessor extent investment by South African,Libyan and Nigerian corporations, and even Iran