Original sentence: A diet rich in junk food is the antithesis of a "balanced diet", as suggested in the highly publicized Food Pyramid.Due to the inherent attractiveness of its ingredients to humans, providing junk food to consumers has had no problem becoming a large, world-wide industry.French Fries.Hamburgers, with a high percentage of fat and additional sauces, etc.It is heavily advertised to young people, who have a naturally high desire for food high in energy content.Its nutritional value is typically very high in calories.Junk food is a derogatory term for food containing a large proportion of ingredients dense in calories and sodium.Junk food is accused by some to have led to an epidemic of deadly noncommunicable diseases in susceptible populations called New World Syndrome.Junk food is relatively cheap to manufacture, is convenient to consume, and has a lot of flavor because of its typically high fat, salt, or sugar content.Potato chips.Soft drinks.Standard industrial manufacturing and marketing techniques have been successful in increasing consumption of "unbalanced" junk food diets to the extent that many consider it to be a serious health health problem in some countries
Edited sentence: A typical junk food beverage ("soft drink") is carbonated water with copious amounts of corn syrup sweetener, caffeine, and caramel coloring.Junk food and other rich food is accused by some to have led to an epidemic of deadly noncommunicable diseases in susceptible populations called New World Syndrome.Junk food is a derogatory term for processed food such as potato chips and other carbohydrate- and fat-rich food.Junk food is relatively cheap to manufacture, is convenient to consume, and has a lot of flavor because of its high salt or sugar content.Junk food usually has little or no nutritional value.Junk foods are heavily advertised on television by pop culture icons such as Britney Spears and targetted especially at young people.Typically, junk food is highly seasoned with salt and/or sugar, and may be artificially colored