Original sentence: As in the film industry, many groups promote restriction on games children should be allowed to play, but do not believe that games themselves should be censored.Many of them (especially those that review games based on their view of the game's appropriatness) recieve criticism for being overly harsh.Some of these websites have stopped reviewing "M" rated games due to criticism from fans of the game upset it's a low rating.These websites are directed at parents who want to avoid video games they consider too explicit and graphic for their children
Edited sentence: As in the film industry, many groups promote caution when choosing games to play, but do not believe that games themselves are bad or that they should be censored.However, despite their cautious viewpoint, many of them (especially those that review games from a standpoint of moral values) recieve criticism for being anti-video game.However, though many religious groups protest video games, there are also a lot of religious web sites that have recieved unfounded criticism for this.Some of these websites have even had to stop reviewing "M" rated games due to hate mail from fans of the game that are upset that their game got a low moral rating.These websites are a valued service to many parents who are ignorant about the gaming world, but want to avoid explicit and graphic video games for their children.These websites are often confused for anti-game sites, but, according to their goals, only wish to promote good values and caution in the games people play