Original sentence: He is the father of five children, and his family tree includes numerous grand children, great-grandchildren, and great-great-grandchildren, including a grand-daughter with autism.In 2007, while assembling materials for the producers of a documentary film about him, "A Colored Life," Herb ran across his birth certificate, which reminded him that he actually had been born in 1913--not 1911--but that he had fibbed about his age after he left home as a youngster looking for a job
Edited sentence: He is the father of five children, and his family tree includes numerous grand children, great-grandchildren, and great-great-grandchildren, including a granddaughter with autism.In 2007, while assembling materials for the producers of a documentary film about him, "A Colored Life," Herb ran across his birth certificate, which reminded him that he actually had been born in 1913—not 1911—but that he had fibbed about his age after he left home as a youngster looking for a job