Original sentence: Shortly after that this record was surpassed by Corporal Rob Furlong with a shot of 2,430 meters (2,657 yd / 1.509 mi) from a McMillan TAC-50 Long-Range Sniper Weapon on a Taliban fighter.The distance was 2,286 meters (2,500 yd / 1.420 mi).The first to break Hathcock's record was Master Corporal Arron Perry with a 2,310 meters (2,526 yd / 1.435 mi) shot
Edited sentence: Shortly after that this record was surpassed by Corporal Rob Furlong with a shot of 2,430 meters (2,657 yd / 1.509 mi) from a McMillan TAC-50 Long-Range Sniper Weapon on a Taliban fighter.The distance was 2,286 meters (2,500 yd / 1.420 mi).The first to break Hathcock's record was Master Corporal Arron Perry with a 2,310 meters (2,526 yd / 1.435 mi) shot