Original sentence: Although Stony Brook is a state institution, private philanthropy plays an ever-increasing role in the development of the university.During the Civil Rights Movement and the Vietnam War, Stony Brook was a hotbed of activism—so much so that it was given the nickname.The school is also notable for its numerous conflicts with the government of New York State, often over budgetary considerations
Edited sentence: " The school is also notable for its numerous conflicts with the government of New York State, often over budgetary considerations.Although Stony Brook is a state institution, private philanthropy plays an ever-increasing role in the development of the.During the Civil Rights Movement and the Vietnam War, Stony Brook was a hotbed of activism—so much so that it was given the nickname "Berkeley of the East