Original sentence: " (Chapter 1, Page 12.) Later, he hears a scream and realizes it is her.Ares and Mikael proceed to Temple Mercenaries.He hesitates to fight with a practice sword, but Temple will not allow him to use his preferred weapon of twin chained daggers.He lasts the three minute minimum by easily evading attack, and Mikael and the tester both realize he never intended to attack in the first place.Inside the gate, they find the testing grounds and join the queue.Mikael threatens the guards and beats one of them.She warns him against the dangerous choice of joining Temple mercenaries, telling him how men from her village didn't return alive.The next entrant up is Baroona.There are 26 volumes for Ares (manhwa).They also mock Ares because he did not know there was a entrance exam - a test of skill against a B-Rank soldier.Two guards at the gate belittle them for their youth.When Mikael's turn comes up, he asks to use a real sword and is also denied.When the bandits arrive in the morning, the villagers put their "payment" of mercenaries under a tarp
Edited sentence: "  Later, he hears a scream and realizes it is her.She warns him against the dangerous choice of joining Temple Mercenaries, telling him how men from her village didn't return alive.There are 26 volumes for the manhwa, Vagrant Solder Ares.When the bandits arrive in the morning, the villagers have a tarp over their "payment" - Ares, Mikael, and Baroona