Original sentence: Damageplan was an American heavy metal band from Dallas, Texas that formed in 2003 by the Abbott Brothers.Following the demise of their previous group Pantera, brothers Dimebag Darrell and Vinnie Paul wanted to start a new band.Guitarist Dimebag Darrell and drummer Vinnie Paul were not pleased with the difficulties heavy metal band Pantera was experiencing.Vinnie Paul – drums
Edited sentence: Damageplan was an American heavy metal band from Dallas, Texas that formed in 2003.Following the demise of their previous group Pantera, brothers Dimebag Darrell and Vinnie Paul Abbott wanted to start a new band.Guitarist Dimebag Darrell and drummer Vinnie Paul Abbott were not pleased with the difficulties heavy metal band Pantera was experiencing.Vinnie Paul Abbott – drums