Original sentence: From its prominent location at Bloor and Bathurst streets, its glitzy exterior (the neon light displays are spectacular after dark) belies its very humble interior, with uneven, creaky floors and simple displays of low-priced merchandise, ranging from vacuum cleaners to winter coats to soup
Edited sentence: A very cheap store, you can find almost anything there, ranging from vacuum cleaners to winter coats to soup.From its prominent location at Bloor and Bathurst streets, its glitzy exterior (the neon light displays are spectacular after dark) belies its very humble interior, with uneven, creaky floors and simple displays of low-priced merchandise.Not a very aesthetic store though