Original sentence: Many citizens of South Omaha responded with disappointment and frustration to the lack of public participation in the project planning and a lack of a public vote on a multimillion dollar project.Other concerns focus on the financing and certainty of the construction costs of the new stadium.The new stadium would be expected to be ready by the 2011 College World Series
Edited sentence: Many citizens of South Omaha responded with disappointment and frustration over the lack of public participation in the project planning and a lack of a public vote on a multimillion dollar project.Other concerns focused on the financing and certainty of the construction costs of the new stadium.The agreement requires the new stadium to be ready by the 2011 College World Series