Original sentence: The Christian concept of Internal sin, analogous to "thoughtcrime", became common in the mid 16th century, largely as a reaction against the protestant reformation
Edited sentence: Nevertheless, the Christian concept of Internal sin, analogous to "thoughtcrime", became common in the mid 16th century, largely as a reaction against the protestant reformation.To extend the concept of thoughtcrime to the Early Christian obsession with extirpating heresy is anachronistic