Original sentence: Born in Winnipeg, Canada, Cornish received a bachelors degree from the University of British  Columbia and a Master's from the University of Massachusetts, both in agronomy.Cornish was admitted to the Canadian Golf Hall of Famein 1996.He is a honorary member of the European Institute of Golf Course Architects
Edited sentence: Born in Winnipeg, Canada, Cornish received a bachelors degree from the University of British Columbia and a Master's from the University of Massachusetts, both in agronomy.Cornish was admitted to the Canadian Golf Hall of Fame in 1996.He is an honorary member of the European Institute of Golf Course Architects