Original sentence: , but Snow had bowled three other short balls at Jenner eariler in the over and Bob Willis had been brought in for when he mis-hit.It took seven minutes for the groundstaff to move the debris, during which one was hit on the head with a beer-can and had to be taken to hospital, though most ofteh 40 cans proved to be of soft drinks.It was also the last Test series of two Australian greats; Garth McKenzie, their best fast-bowler of the 1960s, and Bill Lawry, their best opening batsman, who became the first Australian captain to be dropped for seventy years.When Kerry O'Keeffe was out at 178/7 Greg Chappell (65) was left alone with the tail, but Terry Jenner  retired hurt when he ducked into a short delivery from Snow on 8.When everything is absolutely ticking , so to speak, a string follow like Snow finds not only an extra yard of pace but seems able to keep an unerring eye on the target
Edited sentence: , but Snow had bowled three other short balls at Jenner earlier in the over and Bob Willis had been brought in for when he mis-hit.It took seven minutes for the groundstaff to move the debris, during which one was hit on the head with a beer-can and had to be taken to hospital, though most often 40 cans proved to be of soft drinks.It was also the last Test series of two Australian greats; Garth McKenzie, their best fast-bowler of the 1960s, and Bill Lawry, their best opening batsman, who became the first Australian captain to be dropped in the middle of a series.When Kerry O'Keeffe was out at 178/7 Greg Chappell (65) was left alone with the tail, but Terry Jenner retired hurt when he ducked into a short delivery from Snow on 8.When everything is absolutely ticking, so to speak, a strong follow like Snow finds not only an extra yard of pace but seems able to keep an unerring eye on the target