Original sentence: It was there that their father met his untimely end and was became the ingredient of a pie.She puts him to bed with a dose of camomile tea while his sisters (who have been good little bunnies) sup on milk and blackberries.When he loses his jacket and his shoes in a gooseberry net, Mr
Edited sentence: It was there that their father met his untimely end and became the ingredient of a pie.Peter's mother is the only member of the family to speak with a human vocabulary.Peter, his sisters, and his mother are anthropomorphic characters dressed in human clothing and generally walking upright on their hind legs.She puts him to bed with a dose of camomile tea while his sisters (who have been good little bunnies) sup on bread and milk and blackberries.When he loses his jacket and his shoes, Mr