Original sentence: In an article about the Berkeley Earth Surface Temperature study (Chair Richard A.Koch Foundation is (along with the Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory and Bill Gates climate fund) a major funder of the Berkeley Earth Surface Temperature project, an effort to resolve criticism of records of the Earth's surface temperatures.Muller), Los Angeles Times reporter Margot Roosevelt described the Koch Brothers as "the nation's most prominent funders of efforts to prevent curbs on fossil-fuel burning"
Edited sentence: In 2011, Los Angeles Times reporter Margot Roosevelt described the Koch Brothers as "the nation's most prominent funders of efforts to prevent curbs on fossil-fuel burning".Koch Foundation is (along with the Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory and Bill Gates climate fund) a major funder of the Berkeley Earth Surface Temperature project (Chair Richard A.Muller), an effort to resolve criticism of records of the Earth's surface temperatures