Original sentence: Paul McCartney and U2 opened the concert playing "Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band".The Who performed Won't Get Fooled Again, a song that they had played 20 years before, at Live Aid.The band performed the songs Breathe, Money, Wish you Were Here and Comfortably Numb in front of an amazed crowd
Edited sentence: During one of the most remarkable incidents of modern music history, the band performed the songs Breathe, Money, Wish you Were Here and Comfortably Numb in front of an amazed crowd.Paul McCartney and U2 opened the Hyde Park concert playing "Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band".The Who performed Won't Get Fooled Again and Who Are You, reprising their appearance from Live Aid