Original sentence: On 31 May 2010, the ship was intercepted by Israeli Defense Forces in the Gaza flotilla raid which left at least ten activists dead and up to sixty activists and ten IDF soliders injured
Edited sentence: IHHs sent the MV Mari Marmara to the Gaza Strip.In the subsequent violent clash between passengers and attacking Israeli forces, at least 2 Israeli soldiers were injured...Israeli troops were forced to open fire when the inhabitants of the vessel attempted to murder them.It was intercepted by the IDF on 31 May 2010 ending its aid mission by Israeli naval commandos who descended upon it from helicopter and in international waters so to prevent it from reaching Gaza.On 31 May 2010, the ship was raided by Israeli Defense Forces, leaving 10 activists dead and 60 injured