Original sentence: Fear of the unknown stemming from this environmental factor is notable in Charles Brockden Brown's Edgar Huntly.Futhermore, "The Yellow Wallpaper" reads like a social commentary on the oppressive conditions women suffered in the home lives at the turn of the century.The vast darkness of the American landscape conjured a fear linked to the unknown territory that surrounded and engulfed early settlers
Edited sentence: Early settlers were stricken by a fear linked the unexplored territory that surrounded, and in some cases, engulfed them.Fear of the unknown stemming from environmental factors like darkness and vastness is notable in Charles Brockden Brown's Edgar Huntly.Futhermore, "The Yellow Wallpaper" reads like a social commentary on the oppressive conditions women suffered in their home lives at the turn of the century