Original sentence: Following the on-field ceremony (which was emceed by Hall of Fame broadcaster Vin Scully), an aggressive interview by NBC Sports' Jim Gray resulted in further public sympathy for the disgraced Rose
Edited sentence: Following the on-field ceremony (which was emceed by Hall of Fame broadcaster Vin Scully), an aggressive negative interview by NBC Sports' Jim Gray resulted in further public sympathy for the disgraced Rose.It was an interview for which Gray was heavily criticized