Original sentence: John Patrick Crichton-Stuart, 3rd Marquess of Bute KT (12 September, 1847 – 9 October, 1900, landed aristocrat, industrial magnate, antiquarian, scholar, philanthropist and architectural patron
Edited sentence: John Patrick Crichton-Stuart, 3rd Marquess of Bute KT (12 September, 1847 – 9 October, 1900) was a landed aristocrat, industrial magnate, antiquarian, scholar, philanthropist and architectural patron