Original sentence: Many of her constituents were upset and expressed a sense of betrayal.She is the former President and Chief Executive Officer of Magna International, a major automotive supplier based in Aurora, Ontario.Stronach's party switch mere days before the scheduled confidence vote has made her the target of considerable criticism within the Conservative Party.The Honourable Belinda Stronach, PC, MP, (born May 2, 1966 in Newmarket, Ontario) is a Canadian businessperson, politician and a Liberal Member of Parliament (MP) in the Canadian House of Commons.The day after Stronach crossed the floor, the reaction in Newmarket—Aurora was mixed
Edited sentence: Many of her constituents, in what has been a Conservative stronghold for many years, were upset and expressed a sense of betrayal.She is the former President and CEO of Magna International, a major automotive supplier based in Aurora, Ontario.Stronach's party switch mere days before the scheduled confidence vote has made her the target of considerable criticism within the Conservative Party she abandoned.The Honourable Belinda Stronach, PC, MP, (born May 2, 1966 in Newmarket, Ontario) is a Canadian businessperson, politician and a Liberal Member of Parliament in the Canadian House of Commons.The day following Stronach's defection to the Liberal Party, the reaction in Newmarket—Aurora was mixed