Original sentence: A former head coach of the Springfield Falcons of the American Hockey League (2002–04), aside from his hockey career, McSorley has  worked as an actor, appearing in several film and television roles.Appeared in one episode of CSI: Miami in 2005 as rink manager Andrew Greven.He spent two injury-plagued seasons with the Sharks before returning to Edmonton as a free agent in October 1998.Martin James "Marty" McSorley (born May 18, 1963) is a retired Canadian professional hockey player, who played in the National Hockey League from 1983 until 2000.McSorley remained with the Kings until an August 1993 trade sent him to Pittsburgh in exchange for offensive forward Shawn McEachern; however, his stay in Pittsburgh would be brief (only 47 games).McSorley was born in Hamilton, Ontario, but grew up near Cayuga, Haldimand County, Ontario.The Kings re-acquired him on February 16, 1994.The trial was the first for an on-ice attack by an NHL player since Dino Ciccarelli's 1988 trial.They have three children
Edited sentence: Appeared in one episode of CSI: Miami in 2005 as the infamous rink manager Andrew Greven.He is also a former head coach of the Springfield Falcons of the American Hockey League (2002–2004).He would spend two injury-plagued seasons with the Sharks before returning to Edmonton as a free agent in October 1998.In addition to his hockey career, he has also worked as an actor, appearing in several film and television roles.Martin James McSorley (born May 18, 1963) is a retired Canadian professional hockey player, who played in the National Hockey League from 1983 until 2000.McSorley was born in Hamilton, Ontario, but grew up near Cayuga, a small town in Haldimand County.McSorley would remain with the Kings until an August 1993 trade sent him to Pittsburgh in exchange for offensive forward Shawn McEachern; however, his stay in Pittsburgh would be brief (only 47 games).The Kings, realizing that trading McSorley had been a mistake, re-acquired him on February 16, 1994.The trial was the first for an on-ice attack by an NHL player since Dino Ciccarelli's in 1988.Their daughter Emma was born in 2007, followed by two other children including a son