Original sentence: A graduate of the University of Ottawa and currently the General Manager of Cornwall Square, Savard was born and raised in Cornwall,  where he continues to live with his wife Shawna and their three children Taylor, Cameron and Cassidy.Chris Savard is the acclaimed candidate for the Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario (Canada) for the riding of Stormont—Dundas—South Glengarry.He is a member of the Kinsmen Club of Cornwall, Vice Chair of Team Cornwall and has participated in, and chaired, municipal government committees including Cornwall Waterfront Development of which he is the current Chair.He was first elected to Cornwall City Council in 1994 at the age of 26.Savard has over the years initiated and supported numerous events and service organizations
Edited sentence: A graduate of the University of Ottawa and currently the General Manager of Cornwall Square, Savard was born and raised in Cornwall, Ontario where he continues to live with his wife Shawna and their three children Taylor, Cameron and Cassidy.A tireless community worker, Savard has over the years initiated and supported numerous events and service organizations.Chris Savard is the acclaimed Candidate for the Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario for the riding of Stormont—Dundas—South Glengarry.Chris is a member of the Kinsmen Club of Cornwall, Vice Chair of Team Cornwall and has participated in, and chaired, dozens of municipal government committees including Cornwall Waterfront Development of which he is the current Chair.His experience in business, community volunteerism, and public service will ensure that this riding has an important voice in a John Tory Government…a government that will provide a much-needed new vision for all Ontarians.Since being first elected to Cornwall City Council in 1994 at the age of 26, Chris has demonstrated strong leadership on a vast number of issues from elected official accountability, fiscal responsibility and budget priorities, to tourism and community infrastructure projects