Original sentence: In 1952, after going to the doctor complaining of feeling "dawncey" ,a word her grandmother made up, (Lucy's definition of "dawncey" is when you're not really sick but just feel lousy) and gaining weight
Edited sentence: In 1952, after going to the doctor complaining of feeling "dawncey," a word her grandmother made up, (Lucy's definition of "dawncey" is when you're not really sick but just feel lousy) and gaining weight