Original sentence: Although his season was not superb, some said he was given the trip to the All-Star game as a tribute to his career.By that point in his career, he was an accomplished hitter, but had never made an All-Star team since the game's creation in 1933; he would earn an All-Star spot in 1937, with the Chicago White Sox.Even for the era, his low strikeout numbers were remarkable.His next year, however, was a breakout one.Louis—in 1944, although they lost to the St.Sewell never struck out more than 27 times in a season, and his career best was just 16 strikeouts in 451 at bats in 1936.The catcher questioned Babe Ruth's integrity in a game on June 11, 1927
Edited sentence: Although his season was not superb, some said he was given the trip to the All-Star game out of a tribute to his career.By that point in his career, he was a truly accomplished hitter, but had never made an All-Star team since the game's creation in 1933; he would earn an All-Star spot in 1937, with the Chicago White Sox.Even for the era, his low strikeout numbers were excellent.His next year, however, would be a breakout one.Louis – in 1944, although they lost to the St.Sewell never struck out more than 27 times in a season, and his amazing career best was a miniscule 16 strikeouts in 451 at bats in 1936.The bold young catcher questioned Babe Ruth's integrity in a game on June 11, 1927