Original sentence: " Tibetan fraternal polyandry continues in recent times., "Study of the Family structure in Tibet", Natural History, March 1987, 109-112 ( on the Web Archive).Goldstein, Melvyn C.The 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica reported that "among the customs of the Tibetans, perhaps the most peculiar is polyandry, the brothers in a family having one wife in common, mainly for the reason of avoiding the dividing of property.[Goldstein, 1987] Intermarriage with Han Chinese exists but is uncommon, as many ethnic Tibetans have negative sentiments towards the Han
Edited sentence: " An article by Melvyn C.Among the customs of the Tibetans, perhaps the most peculiar is polyandry, as the brothers within a family having one wife in common, mainly for the reason of avoiding the dividing of the family property.Goldstein in the March, 1987 issue of Natural History (the magazine of the American Museum of Natural History) discusses Tibetan fraternal polyandry and confirms the continuation of this practice into recent times.Intermarriage with the Han Chinese do exist but proved to be uncommon, as many of the Ethnic Tibetans do have sentimental feelings towards the Han Chinese.Study of the Family structure in Tibet