Original sentence: In 1969, their first album, Guava Jam was released.The album was a breath of fresh air and sparked the beginning of the Hawaiian Renaissance which in a sense brought back a sense of pride to the Hawaiian people of that time
Edited sentence: In 1969, their first and finest album, Guava Jam was released.The album was a breath of fresh air and sparked the beginning of the Hawaiian Renaisance which in a sense brought back a sense of pride to the Hawaiian people of that time