Original sentence: Sir Muhammad Iqbal  (; 9 November 187721 April 1938), was a South Asian Muslim writer, philosopher, and politician,  whose poetry in the Urdu language is considered among the greatest of the twentieth century, and whose vision of a cultural and political ideal for the Muslims of British-ruled India was to animate the impulse for Pakistan
Edited sentence: Sir Muhammad Iqbal  (; 9 November 187721 April 1938), was an Indian Muslim writer, philosopher, and politician,  whose poetry in the Urdu language is considered among the greatest of the twentieth century, and whose vision of a cultural and political ideal for the Muslims of British-ruled India was to animate the impulse for Pakistan