Original sentence: Also the sarong is worn commonly by men and women in some parts of the tropics.Examples of this include the kilt in Scotland (now worn only ceremonially), and skirts for men as part of 1990s fashion design and of some counter-culture's or youth style fashions (e.The cultural prohibition against the wearing of skirts and dresses by men in the Western world is one of the strongest clothing taboos and is seldom violated
Edited sentence: Examples of this include the kilt in Scotland (now worn only ceremonially) and the sarong, worn commonly by men and women in some parts of the tropics.The cultural prohibition against the wearing of skirts and dresses by men in the Western world is one of the strongest clothing taboos and is virtually never violated