Original sentence: After his first season in the country's top league, leading clubs Hajduk Split and Dinamo Zagreb became interested in him.He played with the club's senior squad from the age of 16, playing his first game against NK Kamen Ingrad, put in by manager Stanko Mršić.His contract expired in 2007, so in the 2006-07 winter transfer season he signed for Dinamo, on January 2, 2007.Rukavina ended up moving to archrival Hajduk.Schildenfeld began learning his football locally with HNK Šibenik.Schildenfeld quickly moved again, joining, Besiktas on February 1, 2008.The Turkish outfit had previously set their sights on teammate Dino Drpic, but the deal eventually collapsed (see Drpic's article).The team achieved promotion at the end of the season.Šibenik and Schildenfeld spent the 2005-06 season in the Second League, where future teammate Ante Rukavina was also playing
Edited sentence: After his first season in the country's top league, the leading clubs Hajduk Split and Dinamo Zagreb became interested in him.HNK Šibenik spent the 2005/2006 season in the Second League, where Schildenfeld and his friend Ante Rukavina were placed into the first squad.He moved to Besiktas JK on February 1, 2008.He played his first game against NK Kamen Ingrad, put in by manager Stanko Mršić.He played with the club's senior squad from the age of 16.His friend Rukavina ended up moving to archrival Hajduk.However, at this point he still did not merit much playing time.On January 2, 2007 he signed for Dinamo.Schildenfeld's contract expired in 2007, so in the 2006/2007 winter transfer season he could sign for whoever he wished.The native of Šibenik learned his football locally with HNK Šibenik.The two young stars led the club to the First League where they were able to better showcase their talents