Original sentence: He was also a fan of The Ed Sullivan Show, which he eventually appeared on during his heyday.Perkins was a fan of the board game Scrabble, and when entertaining his first alleged boyfriend, he often engaged him in a round.This interest in games and television programs lent itself to the many victories Perkins achieved in game shows like Password, where he got his partner to guess the secret word.and fooled the panelists
Edited sentence: He was also an avid fan of The Ed Sullivan Show, which he eventually appeared on during his heyday.Perkins was an avid fan of the board game Scrabble, and when entertaining his first alleged boyfriend, he often engaged him in a round.This keen interest in games and television programs lent itself to the many victories Perkins achieved in game shows like Password, where he easily got his partner to guess the secret word.and easily fooled the panelists