Original sentence: Aunty Nola, as she is often called, is well known within the choral circle of Hawaii as well as the nation.However, she is often unable to participate in choral events outside of Hawaii.She also participates in the annual Pacific Rim Children's Chorus Festival every summer as the host choir; she also frequently assists with the Hawaiian pieces which have become a staple of the festival
Edited sentence: Aunty Nola, as she is often called, is respected within the choral circle of Hawaii as well as the nation.However, she is very busy at home, often unable to participate in choral events elsewhere.She also participates in the annual Pacific Rim Children's Chorus Festival every summer as the host choir; she also frequently jumps in to help with the Hawaiian pieces which have become a staple of the festival