Original sentence: After giving Monty a speech on how to survive in prison, Nikolai offers to "help" by employing Monty's father James while Monty's in prison.At the club, Jacob runs into one of his students, Mary (Paquin) to whom we've been introduced before complaining to Jacob about the grade he'd given one of her English papers.Monty goes to the bathroom and sees "Fuck you" written on a mirror; this prompts a hateful rant against everyone in the city that ends with Monty realizing that the one he's really the most angry with is himself.Realizing he's received nothing but losses by doing business with Nikolai, and seeing Nikolai's offer as yet further exploitative, Monty declines, asserting that he'll never come back, and leaving Kostya at the hands of the gangsters.Tony Siragusa as Kostya.While all this is happening, Jacob and Mary kiss, but then Jacob decides it is a bad idea and leaves
Edited sentence: At the club, Jacob runs into one of his students, Mary (Paquin) who we see before complaining to Jacob about the grade of one of her English papers.Monty decides to leave, asserting that he'll never come back and leaving Kostya at the hands of the gangsters.Monty goes to the bathroom and sees profanity written on a mirror; this prompts a hateful rant against everyone in the city that ends with Monty realizing that the one he's really the most angry with is himself.Nikolai gives Monty some tips on how to survive in prison.While all this is happening, Jacob and Mary kiss, but then Jacob decides it is a bad idea and then he leaves