Original sentence: com spoke negatively on characters Will and Sa5m's interest in David Bowie and Evil Dead 2, respectively, as "they’re not so much modern teenagers as avatars for filmmakers long past their own adolescence," therefore, reviewer Ellen Jones only gave them two stars
Edited sentence: Andrew Urban praised director Todd Graff, saying, "Todd Graff orchestrates the plot elements with skill and brings the emotional and musical climax together in synch with the story climax, so the payoff comes as a multiple hit.com spoke negatively on characters Will and Sa5m'''s interest in David Bowie and Evil Dead 2'', respectively, as "they’re not so much modern teenagers as avatars for filmmakers long past their own adolescence," therefore, reviewer Ellen Jones only gave them two stars