Original sentence: According to one of them, Ayyappan, the deity of Sabarimala is celibate.Many legends exist about the god Ayyappa and how the temple came into being.One of the women named Rehana Fathima was later arrested on grounds of 'hurting religious sentiments' for posting a photo in facebook, in which she was seen sitting in an allegedly 'obscene pose' after dressing up as a devotee of Ayyappa.Sabarimala is a Hindu temple in Kerala, India.She had actually been cursed to live the life of a demoness until the child born out of the union of Shiva and Vishnu defeated her in a battle
Edited sentence: According to one of them, Lord Ayyappan, the deity of Sabarimala is celibate.Many legends exist about Lord Ayyappa and how the temple came into being.One of the women named Rehana Fathima was later arrested on grounds of 'hurting religious sentiments' for posting a photo in facebook, in which she was seen sitting in an allegedly 'obscene pose' after dressing up as a devotee of Lord Ayyappa.Sabarimala is a Hindu Temple in Kerala, India.She had actually been cursed to live the life of a demoness until the child born out of the union of Lord Shiva and Vishnu defeated her in a battle