Original sentence: Other men have cited a desire to appear "natural," to regain a sense of control over their own bodies, or because of their personal views against circumcision.Some attempts to restore the foreskin, usually through tissue expansion techniques, are predicated by the expectation of greater sexual sensitivity
Edited sentence: Other men have cited a desire to appear natural, or to regain a sense of control over their sexual organs.Some attempts to restore the foreskin, usually through tissue expansion techniques, are aimed at improving sexual sensation