Original sentence: A noise musician may incorporate, for example, tape hiss, manipulated recordings (e.It is very likely that Reed was aware of the electronic drone music produced in the mid-60s by his Velvet Underground cohort John Cale with artists such as Tony Conrad and LaMonte Young  (see the CD release of Inside the Dream Syndicate Volume 1: Day of Niagara).Modern noise music is loosely related to industrial music, sharing its DIY ethos, independence and ethic of using "non-musical" sources.Noise music is music composed of non-traditional musical elements, and lacks musical structure like harmony and rhythm.Often described as "punishing and abrasive" by those with a flair for the dramatic, noise music can be very loud and dissonant, ranging from the free-form extreme electronic music of Merzbow and Masonna to the more sculptured sounds of Boyd Rice and Black Leather Jesus, to the cold haiku sound-scapes of Ryoji Ikeda and Sachiko M.Practitioners themselves do not generally refer to it as "Noise Music"; they just call it "Noise", tacking the term "music" on the end is an explanatory device only necessary among those unfamiliar with the genre.intentionally scratched or skipping vinyl recordings), machine noise, feedback of various sorts, non-musical vocal elements, etc
Edited sentence: Noise music is music composed of elements lacking traditional musical structure such as harmony and rhythm.The intent of many noise artists is to draw attention to the marginal details which surround traditional music.The source material of noise music may consist of elements such as tape hiss, the sound of CDs or vinyl skipping, electrical noise from electronic musical instruments or recording machinery, or background noise recorded with a microphone in a live environment.These elements are organized according to principles which imbue noise work with aesthetic qualities typically found in more traditional forms of music