Original sentence: There were two main camps — the Minimoog players and the ARP Odyssey/ARP 2600  players — with most proponents dedicated to their choice, although some players chose to pick and chose between the two for specific effect, as well as many who dabbled with products produced by other manufacturers (in a similar manner to the ongoing Windows versus Mac OS debate)
Edited sentence: There were two main camps — the Minimoog players and the ARP Odyssey/ARP 2600  players — with most proponents dedicated to their choice, although some players chose to pick and chose between the two for specific effect, as well as many who dabbled with products produced by other manufacturers