Original sentence: After severe editing and cutting, done at the request of the producers, the film was neither a commercial nor a critical success.Following a string of less successful feature movies and ventures into television, she finally got the chance to work with her father, director Vincente Minnelli, in the 1976 fantasy-musical A Matter of Time, co-starring Ingrid Bergman.Her performance won her her first Academy Award nomination.In 1969 she appeared in Alan J.Minnelli won the Best Actress Academy Award for her performance, along with a Golden Globe Award, and was featured on both covers of Time and Newsweek Magazines.She played another eccentric character the following year in Tell Me That You Love Me, Junie Moon, directed by Otto Preminger
Edited sentence: After several editing and cutting, done at the request of the producers, the film was neither a commercial nor a critical success.Following a string of less successful feature movies and ventures into television, she finally got the chance to work with her father, legendary director Vincente Minnelli, in the 1976 fantasy-musical A Matter of Time, co-starring Ingrid Bergman.Her highly praised performance won her her first Academy Award nomination.Minnelli won one of several Oscars won by the movie, a Best Actress Academy Award for her performance, along with a Golden Globe Award, and many other honors.She played another eccentric character the following year in Tell Me That You Love Me, Junie Moon, directed by another famed Hollywood director, Otto Preminger.She then appeared in future acclaimed director’s Alan J