Original sentence: Followers of the philosophy of Thelema may make use of the methods and practices derived from other traditions, including Alchemy, Astrology, Qabalah, Tantra, Tarot, and Yoga.For example, Nu and Had are thought to correspond with the Tao and Teh of Taoism, Shakti and Shiva of the Hindu Tantras, Shunyata and Bodhicitta of Buddhism, Ain Soph and Kether in the Qabalah.Many adherents of Thelema are syncretic and recognize correlations between Thelemic and other systems of spiritual thought, some borrow freely from other traditions
Edited sentence: Followers of the philosophy of Thelema allegedly may make use of the methods and practices derived from other traditions, including Alchemy, Astrology, Qabalah, Tantra, Tarot, and Yoga.However, such claims remain arguable at best, and are perhaps due more to Crowley's despise of other beliefs than to any true syncretic qualities.Nu and Had supposedly correspond with the Tao and Teh of Taoism, Shakti and Shiva of the Hindu Tantras, Shunyata and Bodhicitta of Buddhism, Ain Soph and Kether in the Qabalah.Thelema claims to be unique yet also syncretic