Original sentence: According to an account in Toronto's Now Magazine "the final advertised event is a march through the financial district.According to some Palestinian rights activists, including supporters of Solidarity with Palestinian Human Rights (SPHR) at York University, the Toronto branch of SPHR does not have public meetings, and recruits only individuals who are friendly with the IS or do not challenge its dominance
Edited sentence: According to an account in Toronto's Now Magazine, written by someone who is allegedly unsympathetic to the IS, "the final advertised event is a march through the financial district.According to some Palestinian rights activists, including supporters of Solidarity with Palistinian Human Rights (SPHR) at York University, the Toronto branch of SPHR does not have public meetings, and recruits only individuals who are friendly with the IS or do not challenge its dominance