Original sentence: After auditioning for another role, actress Delle Bolton was spotted by the casting director, followed up by her participation in the UCLA School of Theatre Arts “Hugh O’Brian Awards competition.Casting for the role of Swan, Jeremiah's wife, took three months
Edited sentence: After auditioning for another role, actress Delle Bolton was spotted by the casting director, followed up by her participation in the UCLA School of Theatre Arts “Hugh O’Brian Awards” competition.Casting for the role of Swan, Jeremiah's chattel spouse, took three months