Original sentence: "" In sixth standard, Sathyam left Puttaparthi to live with his elder brother, Seshama and his wife in Kamalapuram.About a year later, "holidays came, and Seshama Raju took Sathyam to Hampi
Edited sentence: "" In sixth standard, Sathyam left Puttaparthi to live with his elder brother, Seshama and his wife, in Kamalapuram.About a year later, "holidays came and Seshama Raju took Sathyam to Hampi