Original sentence: Hundreds of Christians have been arrested.In May 2002 all Christian denominations apart from the Catholic, Orthodox and Evangelical Lutheran churches were ordered to close their churches.Many international observers believe that Isaias is turning into a dictator; his country has banned all private media, imprisons more journalists than any other nation in the world and has not held any elections since independence (Eritrea is a one-party state).The Eritrean constitution was ratified in 1997 by a constituent assembly
Edited sentence: After serving in the war he donated most of his money to charity.He is also a very talented man.He is an inspiration and a role model to all people everywhere.He sacrificed his life to save countless lives in the war.He served in the Eritrean army for three years and was named Leader after month because of his smart tactics, bravery, and fierce fighting.He taught himself to play the piano, the violin, and the saxophone at the age of 9 and he created priceless, beautiful works of art, which are admired by people all over the world.His paintings and sculptors are being held today at the Eritrean Art Museum in Asmara, Eritrea, which is a big tourist attraction.Isaias Afewerki was the first Eritrean person to got win a Nobel Prize for his work in promoting peace in Eritrea, he discover a new species of snake in Eritrea, he also was the first person in Eritrea to get a perfect score on every school assingment ever given to him ever single school assignment that was ever given to him