Original sentence: The independent drama Hello I Must Be Going, in which she portrayed Amy, a dispirited 30-something who finds herself having to move back in with her parents, was particularly well-received by critics
Edited sentence: Her portrayal of Amy, a dispirited 30-something who finds herself having to move back in with her parents, was well-received by critics.It was the independent drama Hello I Must Be Going, however, which gave Lynskey her most significant role of 2012