Original sentence: It was the subject of a 60 Minutes segment, in which Jacobson told Mike Wallace, after pausing for several seconds and looking downward, that he broke down and ordered Boys Who Love Boys because he wanted to see just what it was that he was being so heavily solicited to buy
Edited sentence: It was the subject of a 60 Minutes segment, in which Jacobson, somewhat sheepishly, told Mike Wallace that he broke down and ordered Boys Who Love Boys because he wanted to see just what it was that he was being so heavily solicited to buy