Original sentence: After the band split in 1977, Oberle went on to help launch the   Heavy Rock Magazine Kerrang.Dave Oberle born 9th January 1953 in Farnborough,  Kent.He now spends his time in the production of Heavy Rock bands via his label Communique Records and also runs Small Blue,  a computer software company.Played percussion and was lead vocalist with the 1970's band Gryphon
Edited sentence: After the band split in 1977 Oberle went on to help launch the legendary Heavy Rock Magazine "Kerrang.Dave Oberle' born 9th January 1953 in Farnborough Kent England.He now spends his time in the production of Heavy Rock bands via his label Communique Records and also runs Small Blue a computer software company.Played Percussion and was lead vocalist with 70's band Gryphon