Original sentence: Out of all his relationships he has only married twice, once to Carol Mills in 1975 (then divorced her shortly after) and married again, to Lorraine in 1997, but they divorced shortly after their daughter Lily's birth in 1998
Edited sentence: Out of all his relationships he has married twice, once to Carol Mills in 1975 (then divorced her shortly after) and married again, to Lorraine in 1997, but they divorced shortly after their daughter Lily's birth in 1998