Original sentence: Deshima, 2010.Mitchell's next book, currently known as "Deshima" , will be an historical novel about Dejima, the man-made island in the middle of Nagasaki Harbour that was built to house Dutch traders in the 17th century
Edited sentence: Forthcoming novel, 2010.Mitchell's next book, currently known as "NAGASAKI" , will be an historical novel about Dejima, the man-made island in the middle of Nagasaki Harbour that was built to house Dutch traders in the 17th century