Original sentence: Bergtraum has many sponsers, especially in the corporate field, which include: Estee Lauder, Royal & Sun Alliance, Lehman Brothers, Bear Stearns, American Express, JP Morgan Chase, Time Warner Cable, Futures & Options, and the Financial Women's association.Bergtraum offers many courses to its students which include: The Virtual Enterprise Initiative, College Now Program, College Extention Program, Academy of Travel and Tourism, as well as many high school afterschool programs.It is known for not having windows in its classrooms.Murry Bergtraum  High School For Business Careers in New York is located in Lower Manhattan near the Brooklyn Bridge, it is a New York City Public High School located next to City Hall on 411 Pearl Street.The school participates in the Public Schools Athletic League, Bergtraum has a reputaion with the Bergtraum Lady Blazers, one of the best Basketball teams in the city
Edited sentence: '''Murry Bergtraum  High School For Business Careers in New York is located in Lower Manhattan near the Brooklyn Bridge, it is a New York City Public High School located next to City Hall on 411 Pearl Street.Bergtraum has many sponsers, especially in the corporate field, which include: Estee Lauder, Royal & Sun Alliance, Lehman Brothers, Bear Stearns, American Express, JP Morgan Chase, TIme Warner Cable, Futures & Options, and the Financial Women's association.Bergtraum offers many opportunities to its students which include: The Virtual Enterprise Initiative, College Now Program, College Extention Program, Academy of Travel and Tourism, as well as many high school afterschool programs.It is known for not having windows in its classrooms, due to it's triangular shape, only the outer portion of the builiding has windows, the interior side of the building, however does not have windows.Our School participates in the Public Schools Athletic League, Bergtraum has a strong reputaion with the Bergtraum Lady Blazers, one of the best Basketball teams in the city