Original sentence: " Speaking with anger against the image of women in advertising, Ceballos said, “She gets an orgasm when she gets the shiny floor.Ceballos cofounded the Women’s Forum in 1974 and was the organization's first Executive Director.During the break-up of her marriage, Ceballos read Betty Friedan’s The Feminine Mystique which she later said inspired her toward activism in the feminist movement.During the debate, Ceballos made a case that women had the right and duty “to have a voice in changing the world that is changing them
Edited sentence: " Speaking with anger against the image of women in advertising, Ceballos said, "She gets an orgasm when she gets the shiny floor.Ceballos cofounded the Women's Forum in 1974 and was the organization's first Executive Director.During the break-up of her marriage, Ceballos read Betty Friedan's The Feminine Mystique which she later said inspired her toward activism in the feminist movement.During the debate, Ceballos made a case that women had the right and duty "to have a voice in changing the world that is changing them