Original sentence: At the other end of the market there are problems both with the shortage of social rented housing, and affordability.It has a higher than average level of worklessness, particularly in inner urban and isolated rural areas.The rural economies within the Leeds City Region face  challenges, as a result of poor physical connectivity.There are also significant problems of low basic skills levels, which are particularly acute within some disadvantaged communities.These impede communication with, other city regions particularly Manchester and.Whilst there is a large supply of land available the sites are not necessarily suitable in both nature and location for  key sectors and growth clusters
Edited sentence: At the other end of the market there are problems both with the shortage of social rented housing and affordability.It has a higher than average level of worklessness, especially in inner urban and isolated rural areas.The rural economies within the Leeds City Region face challenges, as a result of poor physical connectivity.There are also significant problems of low basic skills levels, which are quite acute within some disadvantaged communities.These impede communication with other city regions such as Manchester,.Whilst there is a large supply of land available the sites are not necessarily suitable in both nature and location for key sectors and growth clusters