Original sentence: She was born Princetta Kay Adams  in Knox City, Texas, the fourth of five children born to Charley Alva Adams (1908-1969) and Ola May Henson (1914-1993).When she was age 10, her family moved to Vernon, Texas
Edited sentence: Born Princetta Kay Adams  in Knox City, Texas, the fourth of five children to Charley Alva Adams (1908-1969) and Ola May Henson (1914-1993), Adams moved at the age of 10, along with her family, to Vernon, Texas