Original sentence: Defenders describe this conduct as an attempt to concentrate on real moral issues.Many emerging church participants do not ascribe to all the cultural norms of evangelicalism.Some participate in activities that some Evangelicals disapprove of, such as drinking alcohol and using profanity.This is a continuing area of dispute
Edited sentence: Brian McLaren, for example, says “Frankly many of us don’t know what we should think about homosexuality.Emergents believe the emphasis conservative Christians place on morality is a form of legalism, regarding exhortations to individual behavior other than social causes as legalistic.Homosexuality is held as an open question by some emergents.Many emergents participate in activities that some Evangelicals disapprove of, such as drinking alcohol and using profanity.” Spencer Burke agrees, saying, "Given a less than stellar track record, is it really so heretical to think that the evangelical church may be wrong about homosexuality as well