Original sentence: God (Yahweh) parts the sea for the safe passage of the Chosen People, the pursuing Egyptians are killed when the waters return, and the Israelites sing a song of victory.The Passage of the Red Sea is the Biblical  account of the passage of the Red Sea by Moses andthe Israelites on their journey out of Egypt (Book of Exodus, chapters 13:17 to 15:21)
Edited sentence: God (Yahweh) parts the sea for the safe passage of the Israelites, the pursuing Egyptians are killed when the waters return, and the Israelites sing a song of victory.The Passage of the Red Sea is the Biblical  account of the passage of a body of water by Moses and the Israelites on their journey out of Egypt narrated in the Book of Exodus (chapters 13:17 to 15:21)