Original sentence: Feminist Critics have argued the film "Monster-In-Law" can only be described as weak script with the same old sexist stereotypes built in; woman needs a man to give her directions, cannot be happy unless she is submissive and dressed like a sex object; weak script, weak women
Edited sentence: Feminist Critics have argued the obvious that the film "Monster-In-Law" can only be described as weak script with the same old sexist stereotypes built in; woman needs a man to give her directions, cannot be happy unless she is submissive and dressed like a sex object; weak script, weak women