Original sentence: Szczecin-Sławociesze is a municipal neighborhood of the Szczecin (German: Stettin) City, Poland situated on the right bank of Odra river, east of the Szczecin Old Town, and Szczecin-Dąbie
Edited sentence: Szczecin-Sławociesze is a municipal neighborhood of the Szczecin City, Poland situated on the right bank of Odra river, east of the Szczecin Old Town, and Szczecin-Dąbie