Original sentence: Doane also has two non-residential campuses in Lincoln and Omaha, Nebraska.Doane's Crete campus is over 300 acers with two ponds, one featuring a fountain and bridge, and a memorial bell tower
Edited sentence: Doane has two non-residential campuses in Lincoln and Omaha, Nebraska.Doane's Crete campus is noted as one of the most beautiful in the midwest.Located on a hill overlooking the Blue River Valley, the campus is over 300 acers with two ponds, one featuring a fountain and bridge.Numerous sidewalks provide access across the campus.There is a memorial bell tower on campus that provides 360 degree views of the surrounding landscape