Original sentence: He also had a direct influence on young Charlie Parker, and thus the entire be-bop movement.He soon left to play with the Andy Kirk band (for six months) and he later returned to star with Basie.He was born in Woodville, Mississippi and grew up in a musical family.In 1933 he settled in Kansas City after brief membership of several bands.Since Jazz already had a "King of Swing" with Benny Goodman, a "Duke" Ellington, and a "Count" Basie, Lester Young was known as Prez (short for president as in "The President of the Tenor Saxophone"), a name given to him by Billie Holiday (though some sources assert that he had been called "Prez" long before even meeting her).Young's father was a respected teacher, his  brother Lee Young was a drummer, and several other relatives played music professionally
Edited sentence: By the early 1930s he had settled in Kansas City.He also had a direct influence on young Charlie Parker (the two were contemporaries in Kansas City in the 30's), and thus the entire be-bop movement.He soon left to play with the Andy Kirk band and he later returned to star with Basie.His father was a respected teacher, a brother Lee Young was a noted drummer, and several other relatives played music professionally.Since Jazz already had a "King of Swing" with Benny Goodman, a "Duke" Ellington, and a "Count" Basie, Lester Young was known as Prez (short for president as in "The President of the Tenor Saxophone"), a name given to him by Billie Holiday (though some legends allege he had been called "Prez" long before even meeting her).The music is sublime.Young was born in Woodville, Mississippi and grew up in a musical family