Original sentence: ' It was to prove the end, as Yootha Joyce died, from chronic alcoholism, on 24th August, 1980, before the film was even released.Her funeral took place on the very day the cast were due to begin rehearsals for the new series
Edited sentence: ' Sadly, it was to prove the end, as Yootha Joyce died, from chronic alcoholism, on 24th August, 1980, before the film was even released.Sadly, her funeral took place on the very day the cast were due to begin rehearsals for the new series