Original sentence: McInnes says victim mentality of women and other historically oppressed groups is unhealthy: "There is an incentive to be a victim.The Proud Boys is a far-right organization that admits only men as members and promotes political violence.The group sees men, especially white men, and Western culture as under siege; their views have elements of white genocide conspiracy theory.The organization has been described as a hate group by the Southern Poverty Law Center and NPR's The Takeaway, and Spencer, McInnes, and the Proud Boys have been described as hipster racists by Vox and Media Matters for America
Edited sentence: The Proud Boys is a far-right men's group that promotes political violence.The group sees men, especially white men, and Western culture as under attack from the left; their views have elements of white genocide conspiracy theory.The organization has been described as a hate group by the Southern Poverty Law Center and NPR's The Takeaway, and Spencer, McInnes, and the Proud Boys have been described as hipster racists by Vox  McInnes says victim mentality of women and other historically oppressed groups is unhealthy: "There is an incentive to be a victim