Original sentence: There is a sport shop selling British sport equipment, including Newcastle United shirts.There is also a Harry Ramsden's restaurant serving Fish and Chips
Edited sentence: The pavillion has been critised by many for being "too English" and not representing much of Britain's Celtic heritage.There is also a Harry Ramsden's restaurant serving Fish and Chips, and a sport shop selling British sport equipment, including many Premiership and SPL team shirts.This led to rumours of seperate Wales and Scotland pavillions but this so far has not come to fruition