Original sentence: In 1925, she became the first woman to enroll at the University of Florida, in the College of Agriculture.Lassie Moore Goodbread was born in Lake City, Florida on August 24, 1904
Edited sentence: Goodbread was born in Lake City, Florida on August 24, 1904.Lassie Moore Goodbread was an American farmer and educator who, in 1925, became the first woman to enroll at the University of Florida, in the College of Agriculture.. In 2000, Goodbread was named a Great Floridian by the State of Florida