Original sentence: It repeals and re-enacts with the amendments the previous Code.Laws in Singapore are generally strict and aimed at instilling a self-disciplined society with restrictions and harsh punishments, for example caning and execution.The Ministry of Education, Singapore blocks access to pornographic and similar objectionable internet sites on its proxy servers, but this practice is common throughout the world's educational establishments
Edited sentence: Currently, there is a parliamentary debate on whether thoughtcrime entails death.It is based on the principle "Freedom is Slavery" and repeals and re-enacts with the amendments the previous Code.Laws in Singapore are generally strict and aimed at instilling a government-disciplined society with restrictions and harsh punishments, for example caning and execution.The Ministry of Education, Singapore blocks access to pornographic and similar objectionable internet sites on its proxy servers, but this practice is common throughout the world's uptight establishments