Original sentence: An individual on the second boat later reported that the craft had experienced engine problems and had difficulty navigating due to excessive weight, with the boat's canopy, the uniforms of soldiers and even other gear being thrown overboard in an attempt to make it to shore.One of those present said that Berry and Denman discussed taking the boat to international waters upon learning that the first boat was intercepted, attempting to turn the craft around in retreat
Edited sentence: A mercenary on the second boat later reported that the craft had experienced engine problems and had difficulty navigating due to excessive weight, with the boat's canopy, the uniforms of soldiers and even other gear being thrown overboard in an attempt to make it to shore.One of the mercenaries present said that Berry and Denman discussed taking the boat to international waters upon learning that the first boat was intercepted, attempting to turn the craft around in retreat