Original sentence: Academics critique the rhetorical framing of custody decisions, stating that men's rights advocates appeal for "equal rights" without specifying the constitutional rights that they believe have been violated.Men's rights activists have rejected feminist principles and focused on areas in which they believe men are disadvantaged or oppressed.Men's rights activists have said that they believe that feminism has overshot its objective and harmed men.The movement focuses on men's rights issues in numerous areas of society (including family law, parenting, reproduction, domestic violence) and government services (including education, compulsory military service, social safety nets, and health policies) that they believe discriminate against men.They believe that men do not have the same contact rights or equitable shared parenting rights as their ex-spouse and use statistics on custody awards as evidence of judicial bias against men
Edited sentence: Academics critique the rhetorical framing of custody decisions, stating that men's rights advocates appeal for "equal rights" without specifying the constitutional rights that have been violated.Arguably, men do not have the same contact rights or equitable shared parenting rights as their ex-spouse and use statistics on custody awards as evidence of judicial bias against men.Men's rights activists have rejected feminist principles and focused on areas in which men are disadvantaged or oppressed.Men's rights activists have said that that feminism has overshot its objective and harmed men.The movement focuses on men's rights issues in numerous areas of society (including family law, parenting, reproduction, domestic violence) and government services (including education, compulsory military service, social safety nets, and health policies) that discriminate against men