Original sentence: They have performed at festivals such as The Big Day Out, The Come Together Music Festival in Sydney and The Over-Cranked Music Festival in Brisbane They have performed with a number of bands, some of these include Judas Priest, Cog, Karnivool, The Butterfly Effect, Chevelle and Helmet
Edited sentence: They have performed at festivals such as The Big Day Out, The Come Together Music Festival in Sydney and The Over-Cranked Music Festival in Brisbane.They have performed with a number of bands, some of these include Judas Priest, Cog, Karnivool, The Butterfly Effect, Chevelle and Helmet