Original sentence: Generally non-Serb former Yugoslavians, Western World mass media and scholars and pro-Atlanticist forces see the Serbian nationalism in general and the  radical Greater-Serbia idealists in particular as the main responsible for the scourge of Yugoslav Wars (mainly the massive cruelties in Bosnian and Kosovo Wars
Edited sentence: While generally non-Serb former Yugoslavians, Western World mass media and scholars and pro-Atlanticist forces see the Serbian nationalism in general and the  radical Greater-Serbia idealists in particular as the main responsible for the scourge of Yugoslav Wars (mainly the massive cruelties in Bosnian and Kosovo Wars), for many in Serbia, in Bosnian Serb Republic, in Slavic-Orthodox countries like Serbia’s traditional ally Russia and anti-American, anti-Atlanticist and pro-Eurasianist circles, the Serbian nationalism should be seen in a positive light since it was responsible for liberating the Serbs from the Atheist-Communist Yugoslav yoke and for keeping Serb people togheter and united in times of hardship and aggression from Neo-Fascists, Muslim terrorists and NATO armies