Original sentence: They released a demo single, 'This Is', in the Spring of 1986, which was a huge hit and became the longest ever play-listed single on Ireland's pop radio station, 2FM
Edited sentence: Aslan, an underappreciated bunch that history will record as rock-by-numbers bunch of also-rans.They released a demo single, 'This Is', in the Spring of 1986, which was a huge hit and became the longest ever play-listed single on Ireland's pop radio station, 2 FM