Original sentence: After completing his Bachelor of Arts, he started writing short stories, humor and satire under various names such as “Sanki Soldier” and “Tughral Farghan.After the partition of Indian and Pakistan in 1947, he migrated to Pakistan, and penned his later novels there.Ibn-e-Safi was born in the district of Allahabad, India, and received a Bachelor of Arts from Agra University.In 1956, Ibn-e-Safi started the Imran Series, which gained as much fame and success as Jasoosi Dunya.In the aforementioned essay, he claimed that all the characters and stories of the Imran Series were original and not borrowed.Since Jasoosi Duniya was created before the partition of the subcontinent, the names of the characters and their locales suggest that the novel takes place in India.The advent of the Imran Series came post-partition, and the reader is set up to assume that the narrative is situated in Pakistan
Edited sentence: After completing his Bachelor of Arts, he began writing satirical essays with the pen name of "Tughral Farghan" in the monthly Nikhat.After the partition in 1947, he migrated to Pakistan, and penned his later novels there.He used the double-edged sword of his beautiful language to cut through the ailing body of pre-partition India’s slave society.Ibn-e-Safi was born in district of Allahabad, India, and received a Bachelor of Arts from Agra University.Ibne Safi initially started writing short stories, humor and satire under various names such as “Sanki Soldier” and “Tughral Farghan.In 1956, Ibn-e-Safi started Imran Series, which gained as much fame and success as Jasoosi Dunya.In the aforementioned essay, he claimed that all characters and stories of Imran Series were original and not borrowed.Since Jasoosi Duniya was created before the Partition of the Subcontinent, the names of the characters and their locales suggest that the novel takes place in India.Some of his short stories were published under the pen name of "Asrar Narvi".The advent of Imran Series came post-Partition, and the reader is set up to assume that the narrative is situated in Pakistan