Original sentence: During the First Lebanon War (1982), the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) landed north of Sidon and the city was subjected to a heavy aerial bombing, causing heavy casualties among the civilian population.In the 2006 Israel-Lebanon conflict, Sidon was less heavily damaged in bombings than other locations in Lebanon, and remained untouched by the Israeli ground invasion.In the following years there was considerable guerrila activity in Sidon by the Sunni militias, as well as by Shi'a militias like Amal and Hizbullah, then in its early stages.There was prolonged fighting in the Palestinian refugee camp Ein el-Hilweh which is a de-facto neighborhood of Sidon, culminating with the Palestinians making a last stand at a mosque which was thereupon blown up by the IDF
Edited sentence: During the First Lebanon War (1982), Israeli forces landed north of Sidon and the city was subjected to a heavy bombing from the air, causing heavy casualties among the civilian population.In the Second Lebanon War Sidon was less heavily damaged in bombings than other locations in Lebanon, and remained untouched by the Israeli ground invasion.In the following years, there was considerable guerrila activity in Sidon, by the Sunni militias as well as Hizbullah, then in its early stages.There was prolonged fighting in the Palestinian refugee camp Ein El Hilwe which is a de-facto neighborhood of Sidon, culminating with the last Palestinian defendeders making a stand at a mosque which was thereupon blown up by the IDF forces