Original sentence: On August 7, 2009, Numerous media outlets reported Eunice Kennedy Shriver has been admitted t a Cape Cod hospital with an unknown ailment, her family has flown in to be by her side
Edited sentence: On August 7, 2009, numerous media outlets reported Eunice Kennedy Shriver has been admitted t a Cape Cod hospital with an unknown ailment, her family has flown in to be by her side