Original sentence: A common adage in the discourse surrounding suicide prevention sums up this view: Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.Ken Baldwin, a depressed 28 year-old who attempted suicide by jumping off the Golden Gate Bridge, recalls his first thoughts after he jumped: "I instantly realized that everything in my life that I’d thought was unfixable was totally fixable—except for having just jumped.Many of the reasons for committing suicide, such as depression, emotional pain or economic hardship, are transitory and treatable through therapy and lifestyle changes.The writer Dorothy Parker, who attempted suicide several times, wrote a famous  blackly comic poem contemplating and ultimately rejecting suicide, entitled "Résumé"
Edited sentence: Almost all religions decry suicide as a sin.As such, if these religions are correct, you may end up in a far worse place than you started out in.Financial woes may seem inescapable, but with a little aid, life can be turned around.Many of the reasons for committing suicide are transitory, such as depression or economic hardship.Merely getting away from it all for a short time may solve the problem.Often suicide is based on false information.Suicide can profoundly affect those left behind if they care about you.Terminal illness, a frequent trigger for suicide, is sometimes found not to be terminal.The permanent nature of it makes correction impossible.Then there are the religions reasons.While you may believe that a specific person is the only 'girl/boy' for you, there are many more people out there waiting to replace them.While your life may not appear to be important to you, others may depend upon you and care more about you then you think