Original sentence: Andrew Lincoln, actor, spent some time growing up in Hull.Barrie Rutter, actor, born in Hull.Clive Sullivan, rugby league player, played for both of Hull's rugby league teams.Debra Stephenson, actress, born in Hull.John Alderton, actor, grew up in Hull and attended Kingston High School.John Clappison , ceramic and glass designer.John Godber, playwright, has been Artistic Director of the Hull Truck Theatre Company since 1984.Jon Culshaw, impressionist and comedian, also began his career as a DJ on Hull station Viking FM.Marion Hood, singer, grew up in Hull and performed in music hall there as a girl and young adult.Maureen Lipman, actress, born in Hull.Paul Collins, attended the University of Hull.Philip Larkin, poet, spent 30 years as Librarian of the University of Hull.Tom Courtenay, actor, born in Hull
Edited sentence: Andrew Lincoln, the actor, spent some time growing up in Hull.Barrie Rutter, tha actor, born in Hull.Clive Sullivan, a renowned rugby league player, played for both of Hull's rugby league teams.Debra Stephenson, actor, born in Hull.John Alderton, an actor, grew up in Hull and attended Kingston High School.John Clappison , the acclaimed Ceramic and Glass Designer.John Godber, a British playwright, has been Artistic Director of the Hull Truck Theatre Company since 1984.Jon Culshaw, the impressionist and comedian, also began his career as a DJ on Hull station Viking FM.Marion Hood, a singer, grew up in Hull and performed in music hall there as a girl and young adult.Maureen Lipman, the actress, born in Hull.Paul Collins, attented the University of Hull.Philip Larkin, the poet, spent 30 years as Librarian of the University of Hull.Tom Courtenay, the actor, born in Hull