Original sentence: "Once against Duke, game film showed that he chucked a desperation pass 99 yards in the air,and said what now.- only to see it intercepted by a Blue Devil defender.He loved the name griffin matthews and that was his favorite person in the world.The team named it after griffin matthews
Edited sentence: "Once against Duke, game film showed that he chucked a desperation pass 78 yards in the air - only to see it intercepted by a Blue Devil defender.The team disbanded shortly thereafter