Original sentence: Brother Michael retired as principal at the age of 65, and later renounced his clerical vows.Cricket is also popular in the college; Oscar Durity, Trinidad and Tobago opening batsman of the early 1970's, attended the school.Denis Singh; General Manager of Trinidad and Tobago Electricity Commission.Patrick Manning; Prime Minister of Trinidad and Tobago
Edited sentence: Although the cricketing tradition at Presentation College is not as strong as it should be, the College has produced at least one famous cricketer in Oscar Durity, Trinidad & Tobago opening batsman of the early 1970's, and something of a legend in his day.Brother Michael retired as principal at the age of 65, and later unfortunately renounced his clerical vows.Denis Singh; General Manager of the Trinidad and Tobago Electricity Commission.Patrick Manning; current Prime Minister of Trinidad and Tobago