Original sentence: On the 26th of July, all teams competed in their respective leagues at Christian College (Drysdale Campus).The results were:.﻿They qualified to go to the Melbourne States Competition held on the 23rd of August at Scienceworks Museum (Melbourne) in Spotswood, Victoria
Edited sentence: On the 26th of July, all teams competed in their respective leagues at Christian College (Drysdale Campus), they did extremely well and managed to get the following results:.﻿They've qualified to go to the Melbourne States Competition held on the 23rd of August at Scienceworks Museum (Melbourne) in Spotswood, Victoria