Original sentence: On the right Valerius broke the Veientan line and chased them through their camp.The infuriated Brutus galloped down upon him, there was an intense but short assault and both men fell from their hordes mortally wounded
Edited sentence: On the right Valerius broke the Veientan line and chased them to their camp.The infuriated Brutus galloped down upon him, there was an intense but short assault and both men fell from their horses mortally wounded