Original sentence: Jake comforted her, and Frankie Osborne [Newt's foster mother and Jake's mother] told Jake to keep Nancy away from her family, although Newt protested her innocence.Nancy accidentally lost her engagement ring outside the Dog (near the Pond).While Nancy started tutoring Jakes foster brother Newt, Jake would go round to where they were to make sure they weren't cheating
Edited sentence: Jake comforted her, and Frankie Osborne told Jake to keep Nancy away from her family, although Newt protested her innocence.Nancy accidentally lost her engagement ring outside The Dog.While Nancy started tutoring Jake's foster brother Newt, Jake would go round to where they were to make sure they weren't cheating