Original sentence: In addition to Trinity School, there are two other primary private schools in Montgomery: The Montgomery Academy and Saint James.The 10th grade studies world religions, Islam, Mormonism, Buddhism, Hinduism, and Catholicism.The 9th grade studies comparative denominations, looking at church history and the development of the church in the Book of Acts, the Roman Catholic Church, and the Protestant denominations
Edited sentence: However it is important to note that there are several Catholics who attend Trinity School and thus "critiquing" their "world religion" some might find offensive.Overall, of the three primary private schools in Montgomery: The Montgomery Academy, Saint James, and Trinity School; Trinity is in the end a good place to send your children to learn well in a Christian atmosphere.The 10th grade studies world religions, Islam, Mormonism, Buddhism, Hinduism, and Catholicism are critiqued.The 9th grade studies comparative denominations, looking at church history and the development of the church in the Book of Acts, the Catholic Church, and the Protestant denominations