Original sentence: 495  10½  L3  31–23  21–30  48.505  9  L1  30–24  24–28  49.514  8½  L1  27–22  27–29  50.547  5  W1  34–18  24–30  53.567  3  L1  37–21  22–24  56.596  –  W4  35–17  27–25  -.Boston Red Sox  62  42.Chicago White Sox  54  52.Minnesota Twins  52  53.Seattle Mariners  54  51.Tampa Bay Rays  58  48.Texas Rangers  59  45
Edited sentence: 495  9½  L1  31–23  22–31  47.519  7  W2  32–24  24–28  49.523  6½  W2  27–22  29–29  50.556  3  W3  36–18  24–30  53.562  2½  L2  37–21  22–25  55.585  –  L2  35–17  27–27  -.Boston Red Sox  62  44.Chicago White Sox  56  52.Minnesota Twins  53  54.Seattle Mariners  56  51.Tampa Bay Rays  60  48.Texas Rangers  59  46