Original sentence: Both have largely been replaced by modern nightclubs.Supper Clubs in the UK takes the Cabaret concept of the American 1930s and 40s and aimed to bring the ambience of the underground New York jazz club to the UK entertainment scene, where people could enjoy a dinner without the formality of a ball, whilst enjoying live music.There was also a form of Supper Club which acted as an informal dating platform.These clubs were often the centre of social networks in both rural communities and bustling urban environments
Edited sentence: It is a well-established fact that supper clubs were often the centre of social networks in rural communities, and they became the centre of social networks in bustling urban environments.Londons 'Fabric nightclub' and Liverpools 'Mood' are two leading examples.Perhaps unfortunetly the cabaret scene has died out in modern Britain to be replaced by modern nightclubs.Supper Clubs in the UK takes the Cabaret concept of the American 1930s and 40s and aimed to bring the ambience of the underground New York jazz club to the UK entertainment scene.There was also a form of Supper Club which acts as an informal dating platform.With some really great singers and bands, people could enjoy a dinner without the formality of a ball