Original sentence: 1877, in that region, marked the last year that Shina men underwent cremation rites.Besides, 11.1% (1/9) samples belonged to haplogroup M54 of South Asian origin.In Gilgit, Hunza and Nagar, the Shins formerly practiced widow burning which ceased before A.Many tribes of the Shina people, such as the Gabare, Chillise etc, converted to Islam in the 19th century and this faith is now observed by the majority of the ethnic group.The Shina people originally practiced Historical Vedic Religion, as well as Buddhism.Yashkuns (before Islam breaching intermarraige rule in Gilgit, Baltistan and Indus Kohistan)
Edited sentence: 1877, in that region, marked the last year that Shina men underwent Hindu cremation rites.Besides, 11.1% (1/9) samples belonged to haplogroup M54 which is of South Asian origin.In Gilgit, Hunza and Nagar, the Hindu Shins formerly practiced sati, which ceased before A.Many tribes of the Shina people, such as the Gabare, Chillise etc, converted to Islam in the 19th century and this faith is now observed by the majority of the ethnic group; a minority of Shina speakers, chiefly the Brokpa  continue to practice Buddhism and Hinduism.The Shina people originally practiced Hinduism, as well as Buddhism.YashkuNs (before Islam breaching intermarraige rule in Gilgit, Baltistan and Indus Kohistan)