Original sentence: "  Writing in the British journal Standpoint, philosopher John Haldane describes him as "a leader of American intellectual conservatism, the heir to William F.According to the New York Times Magazine, he is America’s "most influential Christian conservative intellectual.As a young man he was a Democratic Party activist, twice serving as Governor of the West Virginia Democratic Youth Conference, and attending the 1976 Democratic National Convention as an alternate delegate.George attributes his alienation from the Democratic Party to its leftward shift in the late 1970s and early 1980s, especially on moral and cultural issues such as abortion.In the early 1990s he became close to Pennsylvania Governor Robert P
Edited sentence: According to the New York Times Magazine, he is America’s “most influential Christian conservative intellectual.As a young man, however, he was a Democratic Party activist, twice serving as Governor of the West Virginia Democratic Youth Conference, and attending the 1976 Democratic National Convention as an alternate delegate.George attributes his alienation from the Democratic Party to its shift leftward shift in the late 1970s and early 1980s, especially on moral and cultural issues such as abortion.In the early 1990s, he became close to Pennsylvania Governor Robert P.”  Writing in the British journal Standpoint, philosopher John Haldane describes him as “a leader of American intellectual conservatism, the heir to William F