Original sentence: He is also a patron of the male cancer awareness campaign, Everyman.O'Leary currently presents the UK version of the game show 1 vs 100—which is also combined with the National Lottery draws every Saturday (as of September 2006).O'Leary has campaigned on behalf of Make Poverty History, and has visited Sierra Leone with CAFOD accompanied by his own father, Sean O'Leary.On 29 March 2007, it was announced that O'Leary would replace Kate Thornton as the new host of ITV1's The X Factor for at least two series
Edited sentence: Dermot is also a patron of the male cancer awareness campaign, 'Everyman'.He is a dedicated campaigner for Make Poverty History, and visited Sierra Leone with CAFOD accompanied by his own father, Sean O'Leary.O'Leary currently presents the UK version of the game show 1 vs 100 - which is also combined with the National Lottery draws every Saturday (as of September 2006).On the 29th of March 2007, it was announced that O'Leary would replace Kate Thornton as the new host of ITV1's The X Factor for at least two series