Original sentence: "   Mostly due to pressure from organizations who are not directly familiar with rodeo, tie-down calf roping is illegal in the state of Rhode Island and the city of Baltimore.Animal rights activists claim that injuries caused by calf roping include paralysis from spinal cord injuries, severed tracheas, as well as broken backs, necks, and legs.However, Keith Martin, the executive director of San Antonio Livestock Exposition, did public comment, "Do I think it hurts the calf.{[fact}}  The occasional industry insider will also criticize the event, though critics are few and far between
Edited sentence: Calf roping has attained criminal status in the state of Rhode Island and the city of Baltimore.In Defense of Animals Rodeo Facts.Injuries caused by calf roping include paralysis from spinal cord injuries, severed tracheas, as well as broken backs, necks, and legs.Keith Martin, the executive director of San Antonio Livestock Exposition, told the San Antonio Express-News, "Do I think it hurts the calf.Many cowboys agree that calf roping is inhumane.PETA Media Center Rodeo: Cruelty for a Buck