Original sentence: According to journalist, Tony Russell in his book The Blues - From Robert Johnson to Robert Cray, "Walton created a series of memorable blues about the unattractiveness of rural life, sardonically aimed at the black migrant workerts in sourthern California who constituted his typical audience".Mercy Dee Walton (August 3, 1915 - December 2, 1962) was an American blues pianist and singer and songwriter, whose compositions ran the gamut from lowdown blues to jumping R&B numbers
Edited sentence: According to journalist Tony Russell in his book The Blues - From Robert Johnson to Robert Cray, "Walton created a series of memorable blues about the unattractiveness of rural life, sardonically aimed at the black migrant workers in southern California who constituted his typical audience".Mercy Dee Walton (August 3, 1915 – December 2, 1962) was an American blues pianist, singer and songwriter, whose compositions ran the gamut from lowdown blues to jumping R&B numbers