Original sentence: Gott was born in Calverley, Pudsey to John Gott who was a civil engineer and county surveyor.His factory at Armley Mills was once the largest factory in the world and is now home to the Armley Mills Industrial Museum
Edited sentence: Gott was born in Calverley, Pudsey in West Yorkshire, England, to John Gott who was a civil engineer and county surveyor.His factory at Armley Mills, Armley, Leeds, was once the largest factory in the world and is now home to the Armley Mills Industrial Museum