Original sentence: He scored a particularly bizarre goal during that season, when Kilmarnock goalkeeper Alan Combe, in an attempt to throw the ball to one of his teammates after an Aberdeen shot, instead hit the back of Mackie's head with his throw.Mackie, a former pupil of Kemnay Academy, is a product of the Aberdeen youth system.The ball rebounded off the striker's head, looping over the helpless keeper into the back of the net, making it 3-0 to Aberdeen
Edited sentence: Darren Mackie went to Kemnay Academy and got lots of sport records.He recently scored one of the comical goals of the 2006-07 SPL season, when Kilmarnock goalkeeper Alan Combe, in an attempt to throw the ball to one of his teammates after an Aberdeen shot, instead hit the back of Mackie's head with his throw.Mackie is a product of the Aberdeen youth system.The ball rebounded from the striker's head, looping over the helpless keeper into the back of the net, making it 3-0 to Aberdeen.he is mince