Original sentence: Freedom fighters such as  Brajkishore Prasad, Dr.Sahay, Mulana Mazharul Haque,, Jayaprakash Narayan, Thakur Jugal Kishore Sinha, Satyendra Narayan Sinha, Jagannath Sarkar, Basawon Singh, Rameshwar Prasad Sinha, Yogendra Shukla, Baikuntha Shukla, Sheel Bhadra Yajee, and Pandit Yamuna Karjee were associated with Bihar
Edited sentence: Bihar made an immense contribution to the Freedom Struggle, with outstanding leaders like Brajkishore Prasad, Dr.Sahay, Mulana Mazharul Haque,, Jayaprakash Narayan, Thakur Jugal Kishore Sinha, Satyendra Narayan Sinha, Jagannath Sarkar, Basawon Singh, Rameshwar Prasad Sinha, Yogendra Shukla, Baikuntha Shukla, Sheel Bhadra Yajee, Pandit Yamuna Karjee and many others who worked for India's freedom relentlessly and helped in the upliftment of the underprivileged masses