Original sentence: Tony also endorses The Ultimate Chopper with 750 watts of mega power that on tv has the power to powderize concrete
Edited sentence: His cheesy on screen persona has come under much critism from bored teenagers that watch his infomercials on a regular basis.Tony also endorses The Ultimate Chopper with 750 watts of mega power that on tv has the power to powderize concrete but in real life has proven to damage said product beyond repair