Original sentence: Around 30 students were critically injured in police action.During the 3rd Convocation of Shahjalal University of Science and Technology in January 2020, the gown and gift materials of graduates were supplied from the garments factory of Ahmed, bearing questionable quality.Farid Uddin Ahmed10th Vice Chancellor of Shahjalal University of Science and TechnologyIncumbentAssumed office 17 August 2017Preceded byMd Aminul Haque BhuyanPersonal detailsNationalityBangladeshiAlma materMonash University University of DhakaOccupationUniversity Administrator, Teacher, Professor.On January 16th, 2022,  Bangladesh Chhatra League, student wing of Awami League, attacked the students of Shahjalal University of Science and Technology.The students demanded Ahmed resignation for this brutal attack
Edited sentence: Around 30 students were critically injured in the brutal attack.During the 3rd Convocation of Shahjalal University of Science and Technology in January 2020, the gown and gift materials of graduates were supplied from the garments factory of Mr Farid, bearing questionable quality.Farid and his associates.Farid and his associates spread false information to defame the students.Farid ordered some mercenaries to attack unarmed students of Shahjalal University of Science and Technology (SUST).Farid's resignation for this brutal attack.Major Contribution.On January 16th, 2022, Mr.The mercenaries open fired at the students along with sound grenades.The students demanded Mr.The students held a press conference on January 20, 2022 to clear the misinformation spread by Mr