Original sentence: Them Crooked Vultures is an Anglo-American hard rock collaboration comprised of American Musicians Josh Homme (Queens of the Stone Age) on guitars and Dave Grohl (Foo Fighters) on drums and finally English musician John Paul Jones (Led Zeppelin) on bass
Edited sentence: Them Crooked Vultures is a hard rock collaboration comprised of Josh Homme (Queens of the Stone Age) on guitars, Dave Grohl (Foo Fighters) on drums and John Paul Jones (Led Zeppelin) on bass