Original sentence: The NHL's planned 1992 expansion had several strong contenders, but starting in 1989, original owner Bruce Firestone put together a bid to revive NHL hockey in Ottawa, employing the last surviving original Senator to win a Stanley Cup, Frank Finnigan, as its public face
Edited sentence: The NHL's planned 1992 expansion had several strong contenders, but starting in 1989, original owner Bruce Firestone put together an energetic bid to revive NHL hockey in Ottawa, employing the last surviving original Senator to win a Stanley Cup, Frank Finnigan, as its public face