Original sentence: Bose researchers and engineers develop and manufacture audio equipment including speakers, amplifiers, automotive sound systems, and, recently, acoustic balancing headphones and digital technology speaker systems
Edited sentence: Bose researches and engineers develop and manufacture audio equipment including speakers, amplifiers, automotive sound systems, and, recently, acoustic balancing headphones and digital technology speaker systems.Further, those familiar with the design of Bose products often find that objective parts of these criticisms are factually wrong (for example, the construction materials or processes used in the manufacturing of Bose products