Original sentence: The tweet received criticism from the Korean press citing ROKG authorities’ comments that it was an inappropriate disclosure, despite the purchase and delivery of the Global Hawk program having been part of the public record in both the United States  and Republic of Korea  since originally approved in 2012, and the fact that his tweet was previewed with the ROK Ministry of Defense
Edited sentence: The tweet received unwarranted criticism from the Korean press citing ROKG authorities’ comments that it was an inappropriate disclosure, despite the purchase and delivery of the Global Hawk program having been part of the public record in both the United States  and Republic of Korea  since originally approved in 2012, and the fact that his tweet was previewed with the ROK Ministry of Defense