Original sentence: Toney Douglas is an American professional basketball player, who was drafted by the Los Angeles Lakers in the 2009 NBA Draft, and was traded to the New York Knicks for their 2011 second-round pick
Edited sentence: Toney Douglas (born March 16, 1986) is an American professional basketball player, who was drafted by the Los Angeles Lakers in the 2009 NBA Draft, and was traded to the New York Knicks for their 2011 second-round pick