Original sentence: After retiring from playing Harris went on to be assistant manager to Venables at Crystal Palace, QPR (helping the team get to the FA Cup Final in 1982 and promotion to the First Division in 1982-83) and FC Barcelona.Allan Harris (born December 28, 1942 in Hackney, London) was a footballer with Chelsea, Coventry City and QPR.He also led Egyptian giants El Ahly to the African Cup as Champions From 1993 to 1995.He was the national coach of Malaysia national football team from December 2000-2004.His brother Ron was also a footballer for Chelsea
Edited sentence: After retiring from playing Harris went on to be assistant manager to Venables at Crystal Palace, QPR (helping the team reach the FA Cup Final in 1982 and win promotion to the First Division in 1982-83) and FC Barcelona (winning La Liga in 1984-85 and reaching the 1986 European Cup Final).Allan Harris (born December 28, 1942 in Hackney, London) was a footballer who played for Chelsea, Coventry City and QPR.He also led Egyptian giants Al-Ahly to the African Cup as Champions from 1993 to 1995.He was the coach of the Malaysian national team from December 2000 to 2004.His brother Ron was also a professional footballer