Original sentence: As a result, the 2-28th BCT was soon reinforced further, with the 2-69th Armor, a battle-hardened 3rd Infantry Division unit, being sent to it from Baqubah.At the other end of the stretch of Highway 10 that runs through Ramadi is another Saddam-era palace used as a Combat Outpost by a unit from the (Florida National Guard).When 2/4 left in September, they handed their sector of Ramadi over to the 2nd Battalion 5th Marines (2/5)2nd Battalion 11th marines were also deployed during this time to Ar Ramadi, who completed their tour in April 2005, then 1st Battalion 5th Marines (1/5) took over
Edited sentence: 2/5 received over 80 causalities in one week in September 2004 and was reinforced with the 1-503rd Infantry.As a result, the 2-28th BCT was soon relived due to poor performance and cowardice, with the 2-69th Armor, a battle-hardened (because they were active duty and not national guard troops) 3rd Infantry Division unit, being sent to it from Baqubah.At the other end of the stretch of Highway 10 that runs through Ramadi is another Saddam-era palace used as a Combat Outpost by a unit from the ([Manned by various Marine and Army Infantry units 2/4,2/5,1/5, 1-503rd Infantry 2nd Infantry division]).Both Marine and Army Infantry units had drastically higher causualities than any other units to date in the GWOT.The city was then split in half, the Marines (2/5) took the west side of the city and the Army (1-503rd Infantry) took the East side and manned Combat out post.The dividing of the city by Marine and Army Infantry units was continued until the city was handed over fully to Iraqi troops in 2007.Then [1st Battalion 5th Marines]] (1/5) took over.When 2/4 left in September, they handed their sector of Ramadi over to the 2nd Battalion 5th Marines (2/5)2nd Battalion 11th marines were also deployed during this time to Ar Ramadi, who completed their tour in April 2005