Original sentence: Critics argue that his economic policies caused huge budget deficits, quadrupling the United States national debt, and that the Iran-Contra affair lowered American credibility
Edited sentence: Critics argue that his economic policies caused huge budget deficits and hastened the increase in corporate greed, quadrupling the United States national debt, enhancing a policy of neo-colonial proxy wars in Central America & other countries, and that the Iran-Contra affair lowered American credibility