Original sentence: He later started his own movie production with the hit title Lagaan-Once upon a time in India which was nominated for best foreign film award at the Oscars.He started his career with Qayamat se Qayamat tak, became a hit actor, and instantly saw stardom.IMDb informationAamir Khan, born in India, is one of the most prominent actors on the Bollywood Scene
Edited sentence: Aamir Khan, born in India, is one of the very best actors on the Bollywood Scene.He later started his own movie production with the hit title "Lagaan-Once upon a time in India" which was nominated for best foreign film award at the Oscars.He started his career with "Qayamat se Qayamat tak", became a hit actor, and instantly saw stardom.Internet Movie Database Entry: