Original sentence: Focus on the Family (FOTF or FotF), founded in 1977, is a evangelical Christian non-profit organization dedicated to nurturing and defending families worldwide.Focus on the Family has offices worldwide with a total audience of over 200 million.In response to perceived threats to the family from changing world views in society, Dobson and his associates have become more politically active, and are regarded as a major voice in the Christian right, generally promoting conservative policies.James Dobson and is based in Colorado Springs, Focus on the Family is one of a number of evangelical para-church organizations that have arisen in the last decade.Recently it added a new political magazine called Citizen which addresses political concerns, especially on issues where current public policies are seen as destructive to families.The "Focus on the Family" broadcast has over 1.5 million listeners daily in the United States alone.Their stated aim is to not start a new church or denomination, but to work interdenominationally to protect and promote the traditional family and family values
Edited sentence: Focus on the Family (FOTF or FotF) is an American evangelical political group, promoting the socially conservative policies of the Christian right.Focus on the Family is one of a number of evangelical para-church organizations that have arisen in the last decade.James Dobson and is based in Colorado Springs, Colorado.Their stated aim is to not start a new church or denomination, but to work interdenominationally to promote public policy