Original sentence: Georg von Rauch  (12 May, 1947 -- 4 December, 1971) was a member of the left-radical Blues-Scene in West-Berlin at the end of the 1960s during the German student movement.The heated climate of the German student movement following the shooting of Benno Ohnesorg on 2 June, 1967 made von Rauch move to Berlin in order to participate in the politcal protests originating from Freie Universität
Edited sentence: Georg von Rauch  (12 May, 1947—4 December, 1971) was a member of the left-radical Blues-Scene in West-Berlin at the end of the 1960s during the German student movement.The heated climate of the German student movement following the shooting of Benno Ohnesorg on 2 June, 1967 made von Rauch move to Berlin in order to participate in the political protests originating from Freie Universität