Original sentence: " There are ten dormitories, in which about 290 boarding students reside during the school year.A boarding school, Reserve is largely a residential campus, though 30% of the students live off-campus as "day-students.Approximately 90% of the faculty members reside on campus in either faculty homes or dormitory apartments.Each year several students matriculate into well-known NCAA lacrosse programs at schools such as Syracuse University.In 2005, the school finished 16th in the US according to LaxPower.In recent years, Reserve has gained a reputation as one of the top high school lacrosse teams in the United States.More than half of the faculty have advanced degrees.The 300-acre campus is located less than a mile from downtown Hudson, OH, and less than thirty miles from two major cities, Cleveland, OH and Akron, OH
Edited sentence: A boarding school, Reserve is largely a residential campus.Approximately 90% of the faculty members reside on campus in either faculty homes or dormitory apartments, and they gladly welcome students for extra help in their studies.Each year the school graduates several talented lacrosse players to traditional NCAA lacrosse powers.In 2005, the school finished 16th in the nation in LaxPower.In recent years, Reserve has become famous as a lacrosse powerhouse.More than half of the faculty have advanced degrees,  and they possess a true love of teaching.The 300-acre campus is located less than a mile from historic downtown Hudson, OH, and less than thirty miles from two major cities, Cleveland and Akron.There are ten dormitories, in which about 290 boarding students reside during the school year.Western Reserve Academy is home to a strong, rigorous college preparatory curriculum, and it provides a supportive academic community