Original sentence: In late 2014, the appeal was rejected on the grounds that the controversial concept of rational suicide was inconsistent with the medical profession's code of conduct, and that as a medical practitioner providing advice on suicide, he posed a serious risk because people
Edited sentence: In late 2014, the appeal was rejected on the grounds that although it was accepted that Brayley was not Nitschke's patient, the controversial concept of rational suicide was inconsistent with the medical profession's code of conduct, and that as a medical practitioner providing advice on suicide, he posed a serious risk because people may elect to commit suicide believing it to be a pathway sanctioned by a medical practitioner and perhaps the medical profession generally.Nitschke responded that without such information most elderly people who want to end their lives hang themselves, which is "an embarrassment and shame"