Original sentence: Brian Harold May CBE (born 19 July 1947 in Hampton, London) became famous in the 1970s and 1980s as the guitarist of the rock group Queen and composed many of Queen's hits, including "We Will Rock You", "Hammer to Fall", "Tie Your Mother Down", "Who Wants to Live Forever", "I Want it All", and "The Show Must Go On"
Edited sentence: Brian Harold May CBE (born 19 July 1947 in Hampton, London) became famous in the 1970s and 1980s as the virtuoso guitarist of the rock group Queen and composed many of Queen's hits, including "We Will Rock You", "Hammer to Fall", "Tie Your Mother Down", "Who Wants to Live Forever", "I Want it All", and "The Show Must Go On"