Original sentence: In contrast to Jerusalem, where a sizable part of the Orthodox Jewish community consists of Americans and other foreign-born Jews, the vast majority of Orthodox Jews in Bnei Brak are Israelis who speak only Hebrew, since in their schools, no secular subjects (such as English) are not taught.Of the city's 160,000 inhabitants, at least three-quarters are Haredi Jews.The non-religious population is located mainly in the northern part of the city.The religious part of the city is completely closed off to vehicular traffic during the Shabbat (from Friday night until Saturday night), all stores in the city are under rabbinical supervision, and not a single store is open during the Shabbat
Edited sentence: According to many, Bnei Brak is the greatest center of Jewish learning in the world, greater even than Jerusalem.In contrast to Jerusalem, where a sizable part of the Orthodox Jewish community consists of Americans and other foreign-born Jews, the vast majority of Orthodox Jews in Bnei Brak are Israelis who speak only Hebrew, since in their schools, secular subjects including English are not taught.Of the city's 160,000 inhabitants, at least three-quarters are strictly Orthodox Jews.The non-religious population is located in the northern part of the city.The religious part of the city is completely closed off to vehicular traffic during the Shabbat (from friday night until saturday night), all stores in the city are under rabbinical supervision, and not a single store is open during the Shabbat