Original sentence: In a tweet, she accused the ADL of "attack[ing] black and brown people" and wrote "“ ADL sends US police to Israel to learn their military practices.On April 17, 2018, Mallory criticized Starbucks for engaging the Anti-Defamation League for a company-wide racial bias training after the arrest of two black men at a Starbucks in Philadelphia.” Starbucks subsequently dropped the ADL from its anti-bias training, a decision that Liel Leibovitz of Tablet said was "giving in to bigotry
Edited sentence: In a tweet, she accused the ADL of "attack[ing] black and brown people" and wrote "“The ADL sends US police to Israel to learn their military practices.On April 17, 2018, Mallory criticized Starbucks for allowing the ADL, an organization dedicated to fighting anti-Semitism, to participate in a company-wide racial bias training after the arrest of two black men at a Starbucks in Philadelphia.” Starbucks reportedly relented to the criticism by Mallory and others and subsequently dropped the ADL from its anti-bias training, a decision that Liel Leibovitz of Tablet said was "giving in to bigotry