Original sentence: This ambitious development of facilities was possibly at the expense of developments in the curriculum and elsewhere as noted by the school inspectors in 1998.Wright undertook numerous large construction projects
Edited sentence: At the start of his term, the school was barely recognisable from what it is today, with many facilities simply not existing.His continuing emphasis on pastoral matters and his belief that a successful boy is a happy boy were widely admired.This ambitious development of facilities was possibly at the expense of developments in the curriculum and elsewhere as noted by the school inspectors in 1998 but was shrewdly managed.With the new millennium fast approaching, Revd Wright pursued the policy of bring the school up to date, with the undertaking of numerous large construction projects