Original sentence: He went to Vitória along with the stars Bebeto and Túlio Costa, the three signed by the sponsorship of Banco Excel.In the rubro-negro baiano he started his well-succeeded Brazilian career, winning two Bahia State Championships and a Copa do Nordeste
Edited sentence: He went to Vitória along with the stars Bebeto and Túlio Costa, the three signed for the club thanks to the sponsorship of Banco Excel.In the rubro-negro baiano he started his successful Brazilian career, winning two Bahia State Championships and a Copa do Nordeste