Original sentence: The Cinematic Orchestra from the UK or Julien Lourau from France have also gained praise in this area.Toward the more pop or pure dance music end of the spectrum of nu jazz are such proponents as St Germain and Jazzanova, who incorporate some live jazz playing with more metronomic house beats
Edited sentence: From the UK Amon Tobin, The Cinematic Orchestra and Bonobo on the Ninja Tune label broke ground mixing jazz with harder beats usually reserved for hip-hop.Julien Lourau from France have also gained praise in this area.The work of  Toward the more pop or pure dance music end of the spectrum of nu jazz are such proponents as St Germain and Jazzanova, who incorporate some live jazz playing with more metronomic house beats