Original sentence: His ultimate fate is when he holds off a very large portion of Sosa's men and, but is gunned down just outside of Tony's office when Tony fails to open the door as he is grieving over Gina's death
Edited sentence: His ultimate fate is when he holds off a very large portion of Sosa's men, but is gunned down just outside of Tony's office when Tony fails to open the door as he is grieving over Gina's death