Original sentence: Family nostalgia, humour, sadness and tensions are all present as memories are shared and ceremonies performed for the missing member.The Yokoyama family are briefly reunited to commemorate the death of the eldest son, Junpei, who drowned accidentally some years ago
Edited sentence: The Yokoyama family are briefly reunited to commemorate the death of the eldest son, Junpei, who drowned accidentally 12 years ago.The family share nostalgia, humour, sadness and tension as memories are shared and ceremonies performed