Original sentence: As a Rangoon University student then, Zun helped organize the national wide student movement in 1988, and joined 1990 presidential election.His fellowship allowed him to complete a book documenting his history, called The Struggle for Democracy in Burma.Moethee Zun (born 1962), also known as Moe Thee Zun (MYname|MY=မိုးသီးဇြန္), is a leader in the Burmese democratic movement.Moethee Zun is also the president and the founder of Democratic Federation of Burma, a democratic organization for the liberation and freedom movement in Burma.Zun is the founder of Burma's Democratic Party for a New Society
Edited sentence: As a Rangoon University student then, Zun organized the national wide student movement in 1988, and joined 1990 presidential election.He serves as the deputy chairman of the All Burma Students' Democratic Front (ABSDF) as well.His fellowship allowed him to complete a book documenting his personal, called The Struggle for Democracy in Burma.Link to Moethee Zun's blog.Moethee Zun (born 1962), also known as Moe Thee Zun (MYname|MY=မိုးသီးဇြန္), has been one of the most prominent leaders for Burmese democratic movement.Moethee Zun decides to go back to the jungle in the near future, to reorganize the country wide movement, as the situation in Burma deteriorates.Moethee Zun is also the president and the founder of Democratic Federation of Burma, a leading democratic organization for the liberation and freedom movement in Burma.Since 1990, he has been fighting in the jungle along Thai-Burma border with his colleagues.Under his leadership, the Burmese democratic movement activists have established wide network from Burma to Thailand, from India to Norway, from Japan to Canada, and all around the world.Zun has played a central role in Burma's struggle for democracy, both as a theoretical framework constructor and as a real practitioner.Zun holds his Master of International Affairs from Columbia University.Zun is the initiator of the 1988.8.8 movement, which later ignited the June 4th Chinese student movement.Zun is the leading character for the movement, first as organizer of the Burmese underground student movement and later as founder of Burma's second-largest political party, the Democratic Party for a New Society