Original sentence: A friendly rivalry exists between Burgmann and the neighbouring Johns College, who both participate in the inter-hall sports competition with other colleges.Although Burgmann accepts students from all disciplines at ANU, there is currently a disproportionate number of students from certain disciplines, such as law
Edited sentence: A friendly rivalry exists between Burgmann and Johns College, especially on the sporting field.A large majority of Burgman undergrad residents are Law students.Burgie kids are known for their 'party harty' nature and can often be found sculling drinks at Shooters or Mooseheads.He has already made a good impression on current residents by rising to the occasion and taking part in some fun hearted hijinks at the recent end of year Valate dinner.He officially begins his new role as headmaster in January.They are also renowned for their high academic standards.yet at the end of the day, the two colleges often come together in perfect harmony on the floor at Moose