Original sentence: These ads Issue advocacy and do not express direct advocacy for a candidate.These ads gave corporations, unions, donors and PAC’s a perfectly legal way to spend money to support a candidate without attracting negative tension from FECA
Edited sentence: As a result to the success of these ads, voices and ideas of campaigns have started to be drowned out due to the growing number of ads speaking for them or speaking against them.In modern history, issue advocacy advertisements have become more distasteful.It has been a political tool dating back to the invention of TV and radio.It is protected by the 1st amendment right of freedom to expression.These ads Issue advocacy and do not express advocacy.These ads gave corporations, unions, donors and PAC’s a perfectly legal way to spend money to support a candidate with out attracting negative tension from FECA.These typically depict how a political leader voted.This worked and the message got across the nation as Bush was elected for a second term