Original sentence: More than 500 other people were imprisoned, and some 350 deported or exiled.On 8 July 1799, King Ferdinand arrived from Palermo, and the subsequent trials were conducted in the most arbitrary fashion; 99 persons were executed, such as the philosopher Mario Pagano; the scientist Domenico Cirillo; Manthonè, the minister of war under the republic; Massa, the defender of Castel dell’Ovo; Ettore Caraffa, the defender of Pescara, who had been captured by treachery; and Eleonora Fonseca Pimentel, court-poet turned revolutionary and editor of il Monitore Napoletano, the newspaper of the republican government
Edited sentence: More than 500 other people were immured in horrible dungeons, and other some 350 deported or exiled.On 8 July 1799, King Ferdinand arrived from Palermo, and the state trials, conducted in the most arbitrary fashion, resulted in wholesale butchery; 99 persons were executed, including some of the best men in the country, such as the philosopher Mario Pagano; the.scientist Domenico Cirillo; Manthonè, the minister of war under the republic; Massa, the defender of Castel dell’Ovo; Ettore Caraffa, the defender of Pescara, who had been captured by treachery; and Eleonora Fonseca Pimentel, court-poet turned revolutionary and editor of il Monitore Napoletano, the newspaper of the republican government