Original sentence: Along with the Soft Machine, Caravan were a leading exponent of what became known as "the Canterbury sound" - a concoction of styles including jazz, classical and traditional English influences
Edited sentence: "In the Land of Grey and Pink" was a harmonious blend of simple English pop and progressive rock complexities.Along with the Soft Machine, Caravan were a leading exponent of what became known as "the Canterbury sound" - a very original concoction of styles including jazz, classical and traditional English influences