Original sentence: Notable artists include: Throbbing Gristle, Paul McCartney, Prince, Radiohead, Dr.The Coachella Music Festival takes place within a desert setting (the city of Indio is a part of the California Desert), with daytime temperatures frequently rising to over.The event has several stages-tents that have been constructed throughout the grounds, with each playing live music continuously for the duration of the festival.The festival is renowned for showcasing many of the popular and emerging acts in music, as well as legendary artists and reunion performances
Edited sentence: Notable performers include Throbbing Gristle, Paul McCartney, Prince, Radiohead, Dr.On May 31, 2011, Goldenvoice announced that the festival will be held over two separate weekends starting in 2012.The Coachella Music Festival has a desert setting (the city of Indio is a part of the California Desert), with daytime temperatures frequently rising to over.The event has several stages/tents set-up throughout the grounds, each playing live music continuously.The festival is renowned for its cutting edge lineup - showcasing many of the top and up & coming acts in music as well as legendary artists and reunions