Original sentence: However, the band's web site claims that Jal is of Persian origin.It is part of both Urdu and Hindi languages, however, it is not used in Urdu (جل) as frequently as in Hindi (जल)
Edited sentence: It aims to cater to people from all spheres of life and of all ages.It is part of both Urdu and Hindi languages, however, it is not used in Urdu (جل) as frequently as in Hindi (जल) However, the band's web site claims that Jal is of Persian origin.The inspiration behind the band's name affirms the intimate connection of water to the rhythms of our lives-and how it is something to be celebrated, revered, and preserved for all times to come.The name 'Jal' is the product of the band's vision to recognize music as the artistic extension of this natural unity.The oft-quoted statement that "Music is the universal language of mankind" holds particularly true when it comes to Jal's music.The result was Jal-the band; which is a collaboration between three exceedingly gifted individuals; Gohar Mumtaz, Farhan Saeed and Shazi.Their Music like water itself knows no exceptions, and boundaries.Water is truly one of the most sacred parts of our existence and the band's music celebrates that concept by orchestrating a symphony of lyrics and music that is as limitless and timeless as itself