Original sentence: (Potential Trouble Source)—a person who is under the influence of an S.(Suppressive Person)—the definition of which includes anyone who actively opposes Scientology.According to some sources, Scientology and Dianetics reached its peak in the mid-1980s at approximately 1,500,000 members world-wide, and has been declining ever since.In the years of developing and promoting Scientology, Hubbard developed the Technical Dictionary (ISBN 0686308034, ISBN 0884040372), an immense lexicon of literally hundreds of words, terms, and definitions that are used by Scientologists on a regular basis.The Church of Scientology has claimed anywhere from eight million to fifteen million members world-wide (a number roughly equal to the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints), and has stated that "Scientology is the fastest growing religion in the world
Edited sentence: At its peak, Scientology and Dianetics reached its peak in the mid 1980s, with an estimated 1,500,000 customers world-wide.In the years of developing and promoting Scientology, Hubbard developed an immense lexicon of literally hundreds of words, terms, and definitions that are used by Scientologists on a regular basis.Its membership has apparently been declining ever since.Scientology has claimed anywhere from eight million to fifteen million customers world-wide (a number roughly equal to the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints), and has stated that "Scientology is the fastest growing religion in the world