Original sentence: Inspired by the music of Nocturnal Emissions, Portion Control, Bauhaus, Killing Joke , and The Legendary Pink Dots, and also drawing on the work of Throbbing Gristle, Cabaret Voltaire, and Suicide, music which had been accessible to the band primarily via tape exchange, Skinny Puppy experimented with analog and digital recording techniques, composing multi-layered music with synthesizers, drum machines, acoustic percussion, tape-splices, found sounds, distortion, samplers, and conventional rock music instruments.Skinny Puppy is a prominent Post-industrial/Industrial rock/Electronica band, formed in Vancouver, BC, Canada in 1982
Edited sentence: Inspired by the music of Nocturnal Emissions, Portion Control, and The Legendary Pink Dots, and also drawing on the work of Throbbing Gristle, Cabaret Voltaire, and Suicide, music which had been accessible to the band primarily via tape exchange, Skinny Puppy experimented with analog and digital recording techniques, composing multi-layered music with synthesizers, drum machines, acoustic percussion, tape-splices, found sounds, distortion, samplers, and conventional rock music instruments.Skinny Puppy is a prominent industrial band, formed in Vancouver, BC, Canada in 1982