Original sentence: Drukman is also the author of two adaptations of plays by Aleksandr Ostrovsky, titled Flattery Will Get You (often translated as Diary of a Scoundrel) which premiered at Connecticut Repertory Theatre, and Snowmaiden, which premiered at the Bob Hope Theater in Dallas, Texas
Edited sentence: Drukman is also the author of two adaptations of plays by Aleksandr Ostrovsky, titled Flattery Will Get You, which premiered at Connecticut Repertory Theatre, and Snowmaiden, which premiered at the Bob Hope Theater in Dallas, Texas