Original sentence: Considering this,.This poll has been criticized by some commentators, who question its accuracy on the grounds that it omitted that Schiavo was in a Persistent Vegetative State, confused the fact that she was on life support, and asked the question "Michael Schiavo has had a girlfriend for 10 years and has two children with her.do you agree or disagree that Michael Schiavo should turn guardianship of Terri over to her parents
Edited sentence: This poll has been criticized by some commentators, who question its accuracy on the grounds that it omitted that Schiavo was in a Persistent Vegetative State, confused the fact that she was on life support, and attacked Michael Schiavo's competence as her guardian on the grounds that he has two children by another woman