Original sentence: He later visit the dad, and discover why he was abandoned.His dad insisted him on his trip to London.Later that night Shi Jie decided to stay with Wang Li instead, who later suggested to him something greater than basketball--the Olympics
Edited sentence: He later visit the dad, and discovers he was abandoned for his safety during a difficult financial time of his father's life.His dad insisted him to go London to expand his future.Later that night Shi Jie decided to stay with Wang Li instead, who later suggested for him to show off his skills in an event greater than any basketball match - the Olympic Games