Original sentence: Kaepernick was initially moved to protest by the deaths of African Americans at the hands of police or while in police custody.Many players beyond the 2017 season have knelt or raised fists in protest against the policies of President Donald Trump
Edited sentence: Kaepernick was initially moved to protest by the brutal deaths of African Americans at the hands of police or while in police custody.Many players nationwide beyond the 2017 season have knelt or raised fists in protest against the policies of President Donald Trump