Original sentence: Jackson, actor and former pro-skateboarder Jason Lee, Alkaline Trio bassist Dan Andriano, Ocean Over Head guitarist Kieran Sims, Australian TV veterinarian Harry Cooper (veterinarian), Found Magazine creator Davy Rothbart, CCM artist Tobymac, Dropkick Murphys lead vocalist, Al Barr, Capital Crimes bass player Father Guido, DJ Junkie XL, and actor C
Edited sentence: Jackson, actor and former pro-skateboarder Jason Lee, Alkaline Trio bassist Dan Andriano, Ocean over head guitarist Kieran Sims, Australian TV veterinarian Harry Cooper (veterinarian), Found Magazine creator Davy Rothbart, CCM artist Tobymac, Dropkick Murphys lead vocalist, Al Barr, Capital Crimes bass player Father Guido, DJ Junkie XL, and actor C