Original sentence: Dixon wrote the character's first appearance (Vengeance of Bane), with art by Graham Nolan.In the pages of Azrael, O'Neil introduced Bane's perception of Venom as both an addiction and the weakness responsible for his earlier defeats.It is also unclear how much input was provided by Denny O'Neil (veteran writer of the Batman books, then Group Editor for the Batman family of books, and author of the novel adaptation of Knightfall).O'Neil had previously created Bane's hellish birthplace of Santa Prisca in The Question and the fictional drug Venom in the storyline of the same name (published in the pages of Legends of the Dark Knight #16-20, and later reprinted as a trade paperback).Originally intended as a "dark mirror" of the highly disciplined and multi-skilled pulp hero Doc Savage, Chuck Dixon, Doug Moench and Graham Nolan created the character for the Knightfall storyline, although it is unclear what elements were introduced by each of the two writers (Dixon and Moench).The link between Bane and King Snake was introduced by writer Scott Beatty, although creator Chuck Dixon has stated that it was always his intention for King Snake to be revealed as Bane's father
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