Original sentence: All of her other musical awards came with the band Spice Girls.So far, Geri Halliwell has only managed to garner one major musical award in her solo career
Edited sentence: Geri Halliwell has managed several minor and insignificant awards and accolades in her somewhat successfull solo career.Her major awards came with the band "spice girls".her only award in solo achievment came at the rather obscure