Original sentence: 2010: Falling Up, Newworldson, Leeland, Haste The Day and Family Force 5 have been announced so far.The Canadian Rapper Manafest has announced that he is coming although Parachute has not confirmed this yet
Edited sentence: 2010: Falling Up, Newworldson, Leeland, Hillsong United and Family Force 5 have so far been confirmed by Parachute Music.Haste the Day and Canadian Rapper Manafest have announced that they are coming although but are as yet unconfirmed