Original sentence: At present there is a Dunnes Stores supermarket, a barber shop, a ladies hair salon, a florist, a café, a print shop, a woman's gym, a butcher shop, a bakery, a dry cleaners, a Chinese take away, a pizza outlet, an optician, a bookmaker as well as a medical centre and several commercial offices, and a video rental store.It is sometimes considered part of Clonsilla, sometimes of Clonee.The focal point of Ongar is a traditional Irish village styled main street where all of the area's commercial services are located
Edited sentence: Sometimes considered part of Clonsilla, sometimes of Clonee, it was formerly a stud farm.The focal point of Ongar is a pseudo-traditional Irish "village style main street" where all of the area's commercial services are located, including a Dunnes Stores supermarket, a barbers and a hair salon, a florist, a print shop, a women's gym, a butchers and a bakery, a dry cleaners, a cafe, Chinese take away, pizza shop, an optician, a bookmaker as well as a medical centre and several commercial offices