Original sentence: Because he grew up in the British League of Nations Mandate of Palestine (known as Mandatory Palestine) and held a passport from Mandatory Palestine before emigrating to the United States, Krebs is considered by The Jewish Press to have been the first Palestinian American to serve in Congress.However, other sources, including Haaretz, consider John E.Krebs served as a member of the Fresno County Planning Commission from 1965 to 1969 and on the Fresno County Board of Supervisors from 1970 to 1974.Sununu to have been the first Palestinian American to have served in Congress
Edited sentence: He served as member of the Fresno County Planning Commission from 1965 to 1969.He served on Fresno County Board of Supervisors from 1970 to 1974.Krebs was the first Palestinian-American to serve in Congress