Original sentence: Billing itself as "New England's rising star", Hartford has generated renewed interest with both local and national developers who are investing heavily in the city through a variety of projects, all of which are in different stages.By the beginning of the twenty-first century, many workers in Hartford lived in towns located more than a twenty-minute daily commute from the city
Edited sentence: By the beginning of the twenty-first century, many workers in Hartford lived in towns (including Canton, Simsbury, Avon, Hebron, Marlborough, Farmington and Cromwell) located more than a twenty-minute daily commute from the city.In the last few years, some of Hartford has generated renewed interest with both local and national developers who are investing heavily in the city through a variety of projects, all of which are in different stages.Its slogan is New England's rising star.While it claims it is going under a renaissance, it obviously is slow