Original sentence: Stylistically his work has moved from post-punk to power pop.The jazz trumpet player Miles Davis was interested in some of Scritti Politti's material and covered one of their songs.The name is close to the Italian for 'political writings'
Edited sentence: His work moved from avant-garde post-punk to smooth, highly polished, pure pop, but remained intelligent and melodic, if somewhat lightweight.The great jazz trumpet player Miles Davis was interested in some of Scritti Politti's material and covered one of their songs.The name translates as the Italian for 'political writings'