Original sentence: Many people support slaughter of horses, arguing that abuse would multiply if the horses were not slaughtered
Edited sentence: Although they are taking away a living creature, people think that if the horses were not slaughtered, abuse of these horses would multiply in America.It would be a terrible sight to see them suffer, but it is also a terrible sight to 100,000 horses die every year of slaughter.Many people believe that the slaughter of the horse is in fact a good thing