Original sentence: The article was criticized for casting gamers in an "unfavorable light"
Edited sentence: As for his stereo types of gamers, Lev would later defend himself, saying that the article was written for "non-gamers".The article itself was also poorly researched (for example stating that Halo 2 was an exclusive Xbox 360 game, when it was in fact an original Xbox game).The article was roundly criticized for casting gamers in an "unfavorable light"