Original sentence: The choice of single had been a subject of heated debate, with Sony wanting to release New Generation as the first single, which would have have made more commercial sense, however, Anderson disagreed as didn't feel it had the drama and the power that represented Dog Man Star
Edited sentence: The choice of single had been a subject of heated debate, with Sony wanting to release New Generation as the first single, which would have made more commercial sense, however, Anderson disagreed as didn't feel it had the drama and the power that represented Dog Man Star