Original sentence: His critics say that his government became a dictatorship after the auto-coup, one that was permeated by a network of corruption organised by his associate Montesinos, who now faces dozens of charges that range from embezzlement to drug trafficking to murder (Montesinos is currently on trial in Lima)
Edited sentence: His critics say that his government became a dictatorship after the auto-coup, one that was permeated by a vast network of corruption organised by his associate Montesinos, who now faces dozens of charges that range from embezzlement to drug trafficking to murder (Montesinos is currently on trial in Lima)