Original sentence: Carey College is a private Christian school in Panmure a suburb of Auckland, New Zealand.The current number of students of the school is at about 40, from year 1 to year 13, and the enrolments for this year was smaller than it has been in other years.The principal, Michael Drake, made a stance opposing the Child Discipline Act.The reasoning for this is "to keep girls as girls and boys as boys".The school has no uniform and yet they have a very rigid dress code.There has been confrontations between parents and teachers as to the dress code requirements and yet the teachers of the school have stuck to their beliefs and that the school represents, not allowing any leeway and making all people the same.They do this by quoting the Bible "all are the same in the eyes of God".This school has a family friendly environment which is based on solid Christian theology.This school has rejected the National Certificate of Educational Achievement ("NCEA") exams since it regards them as hollow
Edited sentence: Carey College is a Christian school in Panmure a suburb of Auckland, New Zealand.It is a rather small school but it does have a respected teaching system.The principal, Michael Drake, is a man with a relatively high media profile who was seen in 2006 as one of the main members of the public that where opposing the anti-smaking bill that was sitting before parliament at that time.This school has rejected the National Certificate of Educational Achievement ("NCEA") exams because it regards them as hollow.the current role count of the school is sitting at about 40, from year 1 to year 13, and although the role for this year was smaller than it has been in other years the schools level of work has remained at the high standard that it has always been.the school has no uniform and yet they have a very rigid dress code, the reasoning for this is as they state "to keep girls as girls and boys as boys".there has been in the past a bit of confruntation between parents and teachers as to the dress code requirements and yet the teachers of the school have stuck to their beliefs and that the school represents, not allowing any leway and making all people the same.they do this by quoting the bible "all are the same in the eyes of God".this school has a family friendly environment which is based on solid Christian theology