Original sentence: Rajoelina personal fortune derives from his the wealth of his wife's family.The son of a colonel and a high school drop-out, by age 20 Rajoelina was working as a disc jockey in various clubs and bars of Antananarivo
Edited sentence: Rajoelina personal fortune derives from the wealth of his wife's family.The son of a colonel and a high school drop-out, by age 20 Rajoelina was working as a disc jockey in various clubs and bars around Antananarivo