Original sentence: In Greg Bear's Dinosaur Summer, a trainer and animal capturer, Vince Shelabarger, briefly references that in the story's alternate history, Lowell Thomas made attempts to capture a huge species of terror bird, Aepyornis titan, and was killed in the process
Edited sentence: In Greg Bear's Dinosaur Summer a trainer and animal capturer, Vince Shelabarger, briefly references that in the story's alternate history, Lowell Thomas made attempts to capture a huge species of terror bird, Aepyornis titan, and was killed in the process