Original sentence: On August 9, 2014, an 18-year-old man, Michael Brown, was fatally shot by Darren Wilson, a Ferguson Police Department officer.The incident sparked protests and acts of vandalism in Ferguson as well as widespread calls for an investigation into the incident
Edited sentence: On August 9, 2014, an innocent, unarmed 18-year-old young man, Michael Brown, was fatally shot by Darren Wilson, a Ferguson Police Department officer.Wilson's supporters, including many local KKK members, rallied in Ferguson claiming that he was innocent in the murder.rall The incident sparked protests and acts of vandalism in Ferguson as well as widespread calls for an investigation into the incident