Original sentence: Smyth is known for signing off when commentating as "Tommy Smyth... with a Y" and for his description of a ball flying into the net when a goal is scored as "a bulge in the old onion bag"
Edited sentence: Smyth is known for signing off when commentating as "Tommy Smyth... with a Y" and for his description of a ball flying into the net when a goal is scored as "a bulge in the old onion bag", which many fans find intensely irritating