Original sentence: He was also responsible for the hiring of head coaches Marty Mornhinweg, whom Millen fired after going 5-27 in two seasons, head coach Steve Mariucci, fired after two and a half seasons on November 30, 2005, and current head coach Rod Marinelli in 2006.With the Lions, Millen has made a number of player-personnel moves, including the drafting of quarterback Joey Harrington in 2002 (traded in 2006 to the Miami Dolphins); wide receiver Charles Rogers in 2003 (released in 2006), wide receiver Roy Williams and running back Kevin Jones in 2004, wide receiver Mike Williams and defensive lineman Shaun Cody in 2005, and defensive back Ernie Simms in 2006
Edited sentence: He was also responsible for the ill-advised hiring of head coaches Marty Mornhinweg (whom Millen fired after going 5-27 in two seasons), head coach Steve Mariucci (fired after two and a half seasons on November 30, 2005), and current head coach Rod Marinelli (in spring 2006).The failures including the drafting of quarterback Joey Harrington in 2002 (traded in summer 2006 to the Miami Dolphins); wide receiver Charles Rogers in 2003 (released from the team in summer 2006); and Mike Williams in 2005.The modest successes include drafting USC defensive lineman Shaun Cody in 2005, and both wide receiver Roy Williams and running back Kevin Jones in 2004.With the Lions, Millen has made player-personnel moves, some of which have been modest successes, some of which have been spectacular failures