Original sentence: Brightman has 160 Gold and Platinum awards in 34 countries and is the only artist to hold #1 spots on the Billboard Classical and Dance charts simultaneously, her other achievements feature her ranking by the Recording Industry Association of America as the best-selling female classical artist of the twenty-first century and a Guinness World Record for “Time to Say Goodbye,” the best-selling single in German recording history.She has established herself as the world's biggest selling soprano of all time, with worldwide sales of more than 26 million albums and over two million DVDs
Edited sentence: Brightman has 160 Gold and Platinum awards in 34 countries and is the only artist to hold #1 spots on the Billboard Classical and Dance charts simultaneously, her other achievements feature her ranking by the Recording Industry Association of America as the best-selling female classical artist of the last nine years.She is the biggest selling soprano of all time, with 78 million albums, including 40 million copies of the soundtrack of The Phantom of the Opera (1986 musical),26 million albums, two million DVDs and 10 million copies of the single " Time to Say Goodbye "as a soloist.and a Guinness World Record for “Time to Say Goodbye,” the best-selling single in German recording history