Original sentence: Mclaughlin also held Snurfer Competitions at Pando (Rockford, MI) in the 70's which attracted Snurfers from all over America.Mclaughlin then ran inside his shop and bound two skis together.Mclaughlin used a string and tied it to the nose of the board so the rider could have control of the board.Mclaughlin was outside his house one day sledding with his daughters, when his 11 year old was going down the hill, standing on her old sled.Mclaughlin's wife called it the Snurfer, and soon after creating the first one, Mclaughlin's daughters' friends all wanted one.The Snurfer was created in 1965 by Jace Mclaughlin in Muskegon, Michigan
Edited sentence: Poppen also held Snurfer Competitions at Pando (Rockford, MI) in the 70's which attracted Snurfers from all over America.Poppen then ran inside his shop and bound two skis together.Poppen used a string and tied it to the nose of the board so the rider could have control of the board.Poppen was outside his house one day sledding with his daughters, when his 11 year old was going down the hill, standing on her old sled.Poppen's wife called it the Snurfer, and soon after creating the first one, Poppen's daughters' friends all wanted one.The Snurfer was created in 1965 by Sherman Poppen in Muskegon, Michigan