Original sentence: During his seven year tenure with the Peterborough Lakers and the Six Nations Arrows, Evans scored 199 goals and 462 points.He also finished his playoff career with 71 goals and 194 points.Shawn Evans (born April 28, 1986 in Peterborough, Ontario) is a Canadian lacrosse player who plays for the Rochester Knighthawks in the National Lacrosse League
Edited sentence: April 28, 1986 in Peterborough, Ontario) is a Canadian lacrosse player who plays for the Rochester Knighthawks in the National Lacrosse League.During his 7 year tenure with the Peterborough Lakers and the Six Nations Arrows, Evans would score 199 goals and 462 points.Evans had an outstanding junior career.He would also finish his playoff career with 71 goals and 194 points.Shawn Evans (b