Original sentence: In the Old Testament book Ecclesiastes, thought to have been written by King Solomon (970–928 BC), time (as the Hebrew word עת ’êth is often translated, as well as "season") was traditionally regarded as a medium for the passage of predestined events
Edited sentence: In the Old Testament book Ecclesiastes, traditionally thought to have been written by King Solomon (970–928 BC), time (as the Hebrew word עת ’êth is often translated, as well as "season") was regarded as a medium for the passage of predestined events