Original sentence: Bethany Hanner, the wife of drummer Jake, saw a road sign for the town and suggested it as the band's name, although the band is from Richland Township in Pittsburgh's North Hills.The band first gained visibility in 2006, as semifinalists in the contest, "Calling All Bands", sponsored by MySpace and Verizon Wireless, and then had music  appear on the MTV reality series Engaged and Underage and Cribs, and the straight-to-video comedy Lower Learning, starring Eva Longoria and Jason Biggs
Edited sentence: Bethany Hanner, the wife of drummer Jake, saw a road sign for the town and suggested it as the band's name, although the band is from the Gibsonia section of Richland Township in Pittsburgh's North Hills.The band then had music included in the MTV reality series Engaged and Underage and Cribs, and the straight-to-video comedy Lower Learning, starring Eva Longoria and Jason Biggs.They first gained visibility in 2006 as semifinalists in the contest, "Calling All Bands", sponsored by MySpace and Verizon Wireless, for their song "She's Just a Girl"