Original sentence: Initially dedicated to all kinds of role-playing games, the magazine is now dedicated almost entirely to the wargames produced by Games Workshop, mainly the core systems of Warhammer Fantasy Battle, Warhammer 40,000 and Lord of the Rings.Steve Jackson and Ian Livingstone initially produced a magazine called "Owl and Weasel" which ran for approximately 25 issues before being re-vamped into "White Dwarf".This allowed people who had bought this game to order the magazine directly from Games Workshop, establishing its circulation.UK White Dwarf official website
Edited sentence: Almost all British gamers have read White Dwarf, nicknamed by some as "Waste Drain", regularly at some point in their lives and some of them develop an opinion as to when White Dwarf was "good".For its critics the current successor to White Dwarf is Valkyrie and there are hopes that this magazine will replace the hole left in the hobby by this well-remembered magazine.Initially dedicated to all kinds of role-playing games, the magazine is now dedicated just to those games produced by Games Workshop.Not manyare happy with the current incarnation, which is often little more than a house catalogue, though it still maintains a fanbase.Steve Jackson and Ian Livingstone produced a magazine called "Owl and Weasel" which ran for approximately 25 issues before being re-vamped into "White Dwarf".The magazine has featured numerous articles and photographs about miniature figure painting and conversions.These periods are usually pre-issue 100 and often cluster around the issue 40–60 mark without any consensus ever being gained.This allowed people who had bought this game order the magazine directly from Games Workshop, establishing its circulation