Original sentence: Some authors see this as effectively pricing them out of the UK marketplace.com came under criticism for changing the terms of their Global Distribution package and incurring a price rise of around 70% on all books sold in the United Kingdom
Edited sentence: It remains to be seen if any legal action will occur as a result of Lulu.They did this both without the permission of the authors, and without informing them that it had taken place.com breaking a legal contract and effectively pricing authors out of the UK marketplace.com came under heavy criticism for breaching the member agreement of their Global Distribution package and incurring a price rise of around 70% on all books sold in the United Kingdom