Original sentence: In 1905, they purchased a Bioscope camera in London and used it to capture a variety of subjects, from their grandmother spinning wool to visits by government officials, local festivals, and the Ilinden uprising.The Manakis brothers Yannis (1878-1960) and Miltiadis (1882-1964) Manakis (Greek: Γιάννης and Μιλτιάδης Μανάκης; Macedonian: Јанаки and Милтон Манаки) were Ottoman photographers (of Greek/Vlach ethnicity) who made the first motion pictures in the Balkans in Monastir (now Bitola) in 1905.The annual Manaki Brothers International Film Camera Festival, commemorating them, is held in Bitola.They opened the first cinema in Bitola, first open-air (1921) then covered (1923)
Edited sentence: An annual Manaki Brothers International Film Camera Festival, commemorating them, is held in Bitola.In 1905, they purchased a Bioscope camera in London and used it to capture a variety of subjects, from their grandmother spinning wool to visits by government officials, local Greek festivals, and the Ilinden uprising.The Manakis brothers Yannis (1878-1960) and Miltiadis (1882-1964) Manakis (Greek: Γιάννης and Μιλτιάδης Μανάκης; were two Greek photographers who made the first motion pictures in the Balkans in Monastir (now Bitola) in 1905.They opened the first cinema in Monastir (modern Bitola), first open-air (1921) then covered (1923)