Original sentence: His career as a free-lance trombone player took him to all of the London orchestras, playing in many West-end musicals, the National Theatre, the Philip Jones Brass Ensemble, films and touring and recording with the Bee Gees, Pink Floyd and the Beetles on the chart topping Hey Jude.Peter Bassano  is a British conductor descended from a family of Venetian musicians brought to England by King Henry VIII
Edited sentence: His career as a free-lance trombone player took him to all of the London orchestras, playing in many West-end musicals, the National Theatre, the Philip Jones Brass Ensemble, films and touring and recording with the Bee Gees, Pink Floyd and the Beatles on the chart topping Hey Jude.Peter Bassano is a British conductor descended from Anthony Bassano the oldest brother of a family of six Venetian musicians brought to England by King Henry VIII