Original sentence: It has a cast including Jared Leto as Prefontaine, Ed O'Neil as Bill Dellinger and R.While the two films both focus on the same events, the Disney Film tells the story from the point of view of the assistant coach who was with him day-to-day, Bill Dellinger, and Prefontaine's girlfriend at the time of his death, Nancy Alleman
Edited sentence: It has a good cast with Jared Leto as Prefontaine, Ed O'Neil as Bill Dellinger and R.While the two films both focus on the same events, the Disney Film tells the story from the point of view of the assistant coach who was with him day-to-day, Bill Dellinger and Prefontaine's girlfriend at the time of his death, Nancy Alleman