Original sentence: The borough's main two towns are Chesterfield and Staveley.With its geographical position, the borough offers convenient commuter links to the cities of Sheffield, Nottingham, Derby, Leeds and Lincoln, and via its mainline railway station at Chesterfield and the connections to the M1 motorway
Edited sentence: The boroughs main two towns are Chesterfield and Staveley.With its geographical position, the borough offers great commuter links to the cities of Sheffield, Nottingham, Derby, Leeds and Lincoln with its mainline railway station at Chesterfield and the connections to the main M1 motorway