Original sentence: A firearms enthusiast and game hunter, McDonald allegedly had "about 200" guns at his official district residence.He also attacked Davis for receiving thousands of dollars in political donations from out-of-state groups which he said favored mandatory federal programs that used busing to achieve school integration.McDonald co-sponsored a resolution "expressing the sense of the Congress that homosexual acts and the class of individuals who advocate such conduct shall never receive special consideration or a protected status under law".McDonald criticized Davis for being one of only two Georgia congressmen to vote in favor of school busing.McDonald won the primary election in a surprise upset and was elected in November 1974 to the 94th United States Congress, serving Georgia's 7th congressional district, which included most of Atlanta's northwestern suburbs (including Marietta), where opposition to school busing was especially high
Edited sentence: A fire-arms enthusiast and game hunter, McDonald allegedly had "about 200" guns at his official district residence.For instance, McDonald sponsored amendments to stop government aid to homosexuals.He was also effective in attacking Davis for receiving thousands of dollars in political donations from out-of-state groups, principally from New York City and Los Angeles.His staunch conservative views on social issues attracted controversy.McDonald also co-sponsored a bill "expressing the sense of the Congress that homosexual acts and the class of individuals who advocate such conduct shall never receive special consideration or a protected status under law".McDonald successfully criticized Davis for being one of only two Georgia congressmen to vote in favor of busing.McDonald won the primary in a surprise upset and was elected in November 1974 to the 94th United States Congress, serving Georgia's 7th congressional district, which included most of Atlanta's northwestern suburbs (including Marietta), where opposition to school busing was especially high.These groups favored mandatory federal programs that used busing to achieve school integration