Original sentence: Burdett's passing was also noted in the national architectural press, with the Chicago-based journal The Inland Architect describing him as "a young architect of exceptional ability and great promise.He was widely eulogized in the local and the trade press at the time, with The Buffalo Courier noting that "in him Buffalo loses a brilliant member of his profession, whose keen artistic taste had already done much for the enrichment of the city and promised to do far more.On April 10, 1891, Herbert Channing Burdett died "from those joint terrors of heart disease and pneumonia" after a short illness
Edited sentence: " The local press of the time noted that Burdett "never was a robust man, he suffered much ill-health, this no doubt subtracting to an extent from his measure of happiness.Burdett's early death was widely lamented in the local and the trade press at the time.On April 10, 1891, after a short illness Herbert Channing Burdett died "from those joint terrors of heart disease and pneumonia.The Buffalo Courier noting that "In him Buffalo loses a brilliant member of his profession, whose keen artistic taste had already done much for the enrichment of the city and promised to do far more.The Chicago-based journal The Inland Architect in its lead article described the late Burdett as "a young architect of exceptional ability and great promise.The national architectural press was equally effusive