Original sentence: Alan Langlands lives between England and Scotland and has an official residence, University House, in Dundee.Four months after resigning from the NHS, Langlands became a director of Patientline.He progressed from NHS graduate trainee through various administrative posts where he drew attention by  adherence to the principles of "new managerialism".Robert Alan Langlands (born May 29 1952 in Glasgow) attended Allan Glen's School and graduated with an ordinary degree (ie, a pass without honours) in biological science from the University of Glasgow in 1974
Edited sentence: Bad choices and bad management is the general staff consensus.Despite  having a large grace and favour house in Dundee and being a Jock by birth he prefers to live in England trating his job in Dundee as  effectivly  part time.He progressed from NHS graduate trainee through various administrative posts where he did drew attention only because of his adherence to the "new managerialism".Just four months after resigning from the NHS, Langlands became a director of Patientline.Robert Alan Langlands (born May 29 1952 in Glasgow) attended Allan Glen's School and graduated with an ordinary degree  in biological science (the lowest of the posible options - below a third class degree) from the University of Glasgow in 1974.The result is that Dundee is broke and needs to lose valuable staff memnbers  to make even on  the budget.This was an odd decision since he was headhunted to be a director of a company likely to benefit fom such a change.Under his stewardship Dundee University has spent millions on new buildings and almost nothing on staff except in the Biological Sciences where his "eminences grise" hold sway