Original sentence: Also the TAJ group of Hotels  has started the construction of its Five Star Hotel in Raipur which is taking place just behind the site of Magneto-The Mall.City Center - The Mega Mall is developed by Gupta Infrastructure with retail giants Pantaloons and Show-biz-giant INOX along with Raipur Development Authority and Tata consulting Engineers are the Projects Management Consultants.In Raipur City, one of the most famous temple is known as the Banjari Mata Mandir which was established by Shree Harish Joshi [needs citation].Raipur is getting ready for 6 more such global malls by end of 2008 namely Magneto The Mall, R.SPONGYTECH''' is the leading engineering & consultancy services of Raipur.Since then the place has been converted into a famous temple [needs citation]
Edited sentence: In Raipur City, one of the most famous temple is known as the Banjari Mata Mandir which was established by Shree Harish Joshi.People therefore see their pockets first before visiting to Shopping Malls.Raipur is getting ready for 6 more such global malls by end of 2009 namely Magneto The Mall, R.Recently SPONGYTECH''' is the leading engineering & consultancy services of Raipur.Since then the place has been converted into a famous temple.The Middle people usually refers the HAAT BAZAR of Raipur.The malls in Raipur are not successfull in Terms of Shopping because most of the people in Raipur belongs to Middle and Lower class