Original sentence: After the first general elections in 1952, Nehru entrusted Kidwai with the portfolio of food and agriculture at a time when there was food rationing all over the country.He was given the revenue and prisons portfolios.Kidwai became a minister in Govind Ballabh Pant's cabinet in Uttar Pradesh under the Provincial Autonomy Scheme in 1937.Kidwai developed cardiac asthma, and died on 24 October 1954.On India becoming independent on 15 August 1947, Kidwai became India's first Minister for Communications, and one of two Muslims in Nehru's cabinet (the other was Abul Kalam Azad).Rafi Ahmed Kidwai (1894-24 October 1954) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician, sometimes described as an Islamic socialist.Under his stewardship, UP was the first province to curtail the zamindari system
Edited sentence: After the first general elections in 1952, Nehru inducted Rafi in his cabinet and entrusted him with the portfolio of food and agriculture at a juncture where there was food rationing all over the country and supplies were limited.Boldness, an imaginative approach and a human touch were his strong points.Ceaseless strenuous work shattered his health and he developed cardiac asthma.He died on 24 October 1954.He introduced many reforms in jails, which aimed at making prisoners better citizens.He was a man of action and lent excellent support to Nehru in the Party and the Government.He was given charge of the Revenue and Jail portfolios.Kidwai became a Minister in Pandit G.Men, not books interested him.On India becoming independent on 15 August 1947, Kidwai became India's first Minister for Communications, and one of two Muslims in Nehru's cabinet (the other was Maulana Abul Kalam Azad).Pant Cabinet in UP when Congress governments were set up in many provinces under the Provincial Autonomy Scheme in 1937.Rafi Ahmed Kidwai (1894-1954) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician, sometimes described as an Islamic socialist.Rafi was a man of considerable learning, though not confined to mere academic knowledge.Soon man-made scarcity changed into man-released abundance.Undaunted Kidwai set out to apply his administrative skills to the problem.Under his stewardship, UP was the first province to do away with some of the defects of the Zamindari system