Original sentence: Amongst pastors, theologians, traditional church musicians and church-goers alike, Jesus music was considered to be lyrically and theologically simple and even Biblically unsound.Initially, what was viewed as Jesus music's association with secular music caused many American churches in the beginning to largely reject the movement as well as the artists.This view was no doubt fueled by the unwillingness of most churches to allow what was seen as "the Devil's music" into their assemblies
Edited sentence: The music was quite often both lyrically and musically simple as well as theologically immature.This latter fact and its association with worldly music caused many American churches to largely reject the movement and these artists at the time.This suited many artists as they wanted to bring Jesus to non-Christians, not only to church youth