Original sentence: She has been dubbed "Pool's Hottest Referee" because of her looks, but it was her professionalism as much as her glamorous edge that attracted the attention of the World Professional Billiards and Snooker Association, who first signed her on as a referee
Edited sentence: She has been dubbed "Pool's Hottest Referee" because of her strikingly good looks, but it was her professionalism and glamorous edge that attracted the attention of the World Snooker Association who asked her to join their program as a referee