Original sentence: Consequently, weight saving measures were incorporated into the design, such as dispensing with self-sealing fuel tanks, which caused Allied fighter pilots to give it derisive nicknames such as "the one-shot lighter", "the flying Zippo" and "the flying cigar" because of their tendency to explode or catch on fire from any slight damage to the fuel tank wings after being hit by aerial or ground fire
Edited sentence: Consequently, weight saving measures were incorporated into the design, such as dispensing with self-sealing fuel tanks, which caused Allied fighter pilots to give it derisive nicknames such as "the one-shot lighter", "the flying Zippo" and "the flying cigar" because of their unfortunate tendency to explode or catch on fire from any slight damage to the fuel tank wings after being hit by aerial or ground fire