Original sentence: Born Mary Emma Hayward in Indianapolis, Indiana, she was working as a secretary for the National Steel Corporation in 1938 when she met and later married her boss, Chairman and CEO Ernest T.Mary Hayward Weir (1915 - 1968) was an American steel heiress and socialite
Edited sentence: Born in Indianapolis, Indiana, she was working as a secretary for the National Steel Corporation in 1938 when she met and later married her boss, Chairman and CEO Ernest T.Mary Hayward Weir, born Mary Emma Hayward (1915–1968), was an American steel heiress and socialite