Original sentence: He used wooden planks and a block and tackle system to move the stones and to set them in place.In 1914, when they first saw the unspoiled beauty of the Carmel-Big Sur coast south of California's Monterey Peninsula, poet Robinson Jeffers (1887-1962), and his wife, Una (1884-1950), knew they had found their "inevitable place.In 1920, the poet-builder began his work on Hawk Tower - a retreat for his wife and sons
Edited sentence: He utilized wooden planks and a block and tackle system to move the stones and to set them in place.In 1914, when they first saw the unspoiled beauty of the Carmel-Big Sur coast south of California's Monterey Peninsula, Robinson Jeffers, a giant among American poets(1887-1962), and his wife, Una (1884-1950), knew they had found their "inevitable place.In 1920, the poet-builder began his work on Hawk Tower - a retreat for his wife and a magic place for his sons