Original sentence: She is also very open (and rather proud) of her sexuality, evidenced by her provocative dress, jibs at the younger Skuld and her slightly comical distress when turned into a child as a result of energy drainage
Edited sentence: She is also very open (and rather proud) of her sexuality, evidenced by her provocative dress, jibes at the younger Skuld and her slightly comical distress when turned into a child as a result of energy drainage