Original sentence: Also, given circumcision's religious and cultural importance, the impartiality of information about circumcision may be drawn into question.In particular, what limits if any should be placed on the caregiver's ability to make a decision for their child about a procedure with disputed immediate medical value which causes pain and, some argue, mutilation, that may be unwanted later in life.It is questionable whether or not most parents in some societies have the understanding to grant informed consent on behalf of their child for circumcision since circumcision is a taboo subject in these cultures.One of the most hotly disputed issues about circumcision today is the issue of consent.Some suggest that circumcision may cause emotional scaring later on.This is an issue of particular relevance to circumcision since its often done to infants, the segment of the population most unable to understand or communicate wishes about the procedure
Edited sentence: Also, given circumcision's religious and cultural importance, the impartiality of information about circumcision is drawn largely into question.Circumcision may also cause emotional scaring later on.In particular, what limits if any should be placed on the caregiver's ability to make a decision for their child about a procedure with no immediate medical value which causes pain and mutalation that may be unwanted later in life.It is questionable whether or not most parents in this society have the understanding to grant informed consent on behalf of their child for circumcision since circumcision is a taboo subject in many cultures.One of the most troubling issues about circumcision today is the issue of consent.This is an issue of particulair relevance to circumcision since its often done to infants, the segment of the population most unable to understand or communicate wishes about the procedure