Original sentence: Dräco Rosa's wrecked mental situation during this period also engendered his collective persuasion of a post-apocalyptic world very similar to what David Bowie achieved during the completion of Diamond Dogs'' between 1973 and 1974
Edited sentence: Dräco Rosa's wrecked mental situation during this period also engendered his collective persuasion of a post-apocalyptic world very similar to what David Bowie achieved during the completion of Diamond Dogs'' between 1973 and 1974 while ringing on King Crimson's Red