Original sentence: Hugh Cratford, for example, was the monastic Magister Scholarum, before he was transferred to the city school in 1504 by order of the bishop.On December 7 1541, Henry VIII personally appointed the school's first headmaster, John Pether, by statute.Saint Oswald bound the monastery under the Benedictine rule in the ninth century, with novices being kept according to the Benedictine Rule; a century later Saint Wulstan, recorded as Magister et Custos Infantium (Master and Keeper of the Children) according to Florence of Worcester, and Puerorum Custos (Keeper of the Boys) according to William of Malmesbury, was also instrumental in instituting reform.Simarly, the cathedral foundation included provision for a choir school for cathedral choristers and tuition for forty King's Scholars
Edited sentence: Hugh Cratford, for example, was the monastic Magister Scholarum, before he was transferred to the city school in 1504 by order of Bishop Silvestro de' Gigli.On December 7 1541, Henry VIII personally appointed the school's first headmaster, John Pether, by means of a letter to Richard Rich.Saint Oswald bound the monastery under the Benedictine Rule in the tenth century, with novices being kept according to the Rule; a century later Saint Wulstan, the Bishop responsible for the building of the Norman cathedral, was recorded as Magister et Custos Infantium (Master and Keeper of the Children) according to Florence of Worcester, and Puerorum Custos (Keeper of the Boys) according to William of Malmesbury.Simarly, the cathedral foundation included provision for a choir school for ten cathedral choristers and tuition for forty King's Scholars