Original sentence: She had also been criticized for accepting her chancellorship with the understanding that her life partner would be given a position as well, although such arrangements are not uncommon when universities recruit faculty and administrators.She had however been widely lauded at UCSC for her response to Harvard President Larry Summers's remarks at an academic symposium regarding the reasons behind gender disparity in careers in science and mathematics.She was also criticized in the ongoing fight for control of the campus between the UC Office of the President and the local faculty
Edited sentence: She had also been criticized for accepting her chancellorship with the understanding that her life partner would be given a position as well (this arrangement is not uncommon when universities recruit faculty and administrators), and for various other reasons often involving the ongoing fight for control of the campus between the UC Office of the President and the local faculty.She had however been widely lauded at UCSC for her response to Harvard President Larry Summers's remarks at an academic symposium regarding the genetic suitability of different genders to careers in science and mathematics