Original sentence: As the children grew up, they helped stir the kaya, run errands, charcoal-grill the bread and eventually, manage the stall, which moved to Lau Pa Sat in 1972 and back to the Telok Ayer Market in 1984.The couple, their eight children and seven other families lived in a three-storey shophouse across the road, though Ah Koon often slept on a wooden slab at his stall
Edited sentence: The couple and their eight children lived with seven other families in a crowded shophouse across the road and as the children grew up, they helped stir the kaya, run errands, charcoal-grill the bread and eventually, manage the stall, which moved to Lau Pa Sat in 1972 and back to the Telok Ayer Market in 1984