Original sentence: Havenswoods A working class, mostly African-American neighborhood on Milwaukee's north side, centered near Silver Spring Drive and 60th Street.The area near the river, especially along Commerce Street, has been significantly revitalized in the past few years with upscale residential and commercial development, the most notable being the Beerline Development.The neighborhood is bordered by the Riverwest neighborhood on the north, the East Side on the east, the Milwaukee River on the south and I-43 on the west.Within the neighborhood's boundaries lie Havenwoods State Forest and the US Army Reserve Center
Edited sentence: Havenswoods A working class, mostly black neighborhood on Milwaukee's north side.Increasing crime is a problem in this area.It is centered near Silver Spring and 60th street.The area near the river, especially along Commerce Street, has been significantly revitilized in the past few years with upscale condo and commercial development, the most notable being the Beerline Development.The neighborhood is bounded by Riverwest on the north, the East Side on the east, The Milwaukee River on the south and I-43 on the west.The north and west sides of the neighborhood are povert-stricken and mostly black.Within the neighborhoods boundaries lie Havenwoods State Forest and the US Army Reserve Center