Original sentence: Belgrave was the first school to gain such status under the current criteria and is currently the only school within tamworth to be judged as 'good'(it means it the best out of worst bunch).Gabriels, Lakeside, The Dales, Stonydelph, Two-Gates, Hanbury's Farm and Birds-Bush(by letting them use the swimming pool, which has hair gel floating on top).Parents and teachers have welcomed the changes he has brought to the school(no they haven't), including a purpose-built examination building(i freezing cold in there), security fencing and high-tech CCTV(they patch up the hole by the field).The Governmental department Ofsted, gave Belgrave a grade 4 "Good" rating in their last inspection, in 2009.The school's current headteacher is Simon Turney (muppet).students are offered a wide range of subjects throughout KS3 and KS4 including varied vocational courses taught at the Torc vocational centre(yes we can learn how to do our make-up)
Edited sentence: Belgrave was the first school to gain such status under the current criteria and is currently the only school within tamworth to be judged as "good".Gabriels, Lakeside, The Dales, Stonydelph, Two Gates, Hanbury's Farm and Birds Bush.Parents and teachers have welcomed the changes he has brought to the school, including a purpose-built examination building, security fencing and high-tech CCTV.The Governmental department Ofsted, gave Belgrave a grade 4 "good" rating in their last inspection in 2009.The school's current headteacher is Simon Turney.students are offered a wide range of subjects throughout KS3 and KS4 including varied vocational courses taught at the Torc vocational centre