Original sentence: " They claimed that many of Main's assertions (which had influenced Rice's lyrics) were false, such as the suggestion that Eva had first gone to Buenos Aires as the mistress of a married musician, Augustin Magaldí.(Instead, they wrote, Eva's mother Doña Juana had taken her there whenever she aspired to become a radio actress.) It is also disputed that Eva was a chronically bad actress or that she slept her way to the top.Shortly after the musical appeared, Nicholas Fraser and Maryso Navarro published a more positive acount of Eva Perón's life called, "Evita: The Real Lives of Eva Perón.The lyrics and storyline were based on Mary Main's biography Evita: The Woman with the Whip, which drew in part on hostile accounts by Evita's enemies
Edited sentence: " They proved that many of Main's assertions (which influenced Rice's lyrics) were false.Instead, Eva's mother, Doña Juana, had taken her there whenever she aspired to become a radio actress.Nor was it completely true that Eva was a chronically bad actress or that she slept her way to the top.Shortly after the musical appeared, Nicholas Fraser and Maryso Navarro published a much more impartial study of Eva Perón's life called, "Evita: The Real Lives of Eva Perón.The lyrics and storyline were based on Mary Main's biography Evita: The Woman with the Whip, which was based on hostile accounts by Evita's enemies.The suggestion that Eva had first gone to Buenos Aires as the mistress of a married musician – Augustin Magaldí – was false