Original sentence: At the beginning of the Lebanon Civil War, Haddad, a major in the Lebanese Army commanded a battalion to engage the Palestine Liberation Organization (PLO) in south Lebanon.Saad Haddad (Arabic: سعد حداد) was the founder and head of the South Lebanon Army (SLA)
Edited sentence: At the beginning of the civil war in Lebanon, Haddad, a major in the Lebanese Army commanded a battalion to engage the Palestine Liberation Organization (PLO) in south Lebanon.Saad Haddad (Arabic: سعد حداد) was the founder and head of the patriotic South Lebanon Army (SLA)