Original sentence: However, ReganBooks sent preview copies to a number of comics bloggers to a less enthusiastic reception.Kevin Church called it "the most revulsive book I've read this year" and Karen Healey noted multiple scenes of rape being played for laughs.Reviews of the book vary
Edited sentence: These same bloggers continue to vandalize this site, despite repeated requests to stop.Two comics bloggers, sent a copy for review by the publisher, were offended that rape scenes were being treated like comedy scenes, criticizing it for extreme misogyny