Original sentence: Kashimashi ~Girl Meets Girl~ The First Summer Story received a total review score of 26/40 (out of the four individual review scores of 7, 6, 7, and 6) the Japanese gaming magazine Famitsu
Edited sentence: Kashimashi ~Girl Meets Girl~ The First Summer Story received a total review score of 26/40 (out of the four individual review scores of 7, 6, 7, and 6) the notoriously tough Japanese gaming magazine Famitsu