Original sentence: However, on a per capita basis, perpetrators of mass shootings are not disproportionately Caucasian.The majority of perpetrators are white males who act alone
Edited sentence: Another misnomer, on a per capita basis, perpetrators of mass shootings are disproportionately Caucasian.The majority of perpetrators are not white males who act alone, although, this is usually the talking point used by hate groups.This is also proven to be false, according to the data