Original sentence: Belgrave was the first school to gain such status under the current criteria and is currently the only school within tamworth to be judged as "good".The Governmental department Ofsted, gave Belgrave a grade 4 "good" rating in their last inspection in 2009.students are offered a wide range of subjects throughout KS3 and KS4 including varied vocational courses taught at the Torc vocational centre
Edited sentence: Belgrave was the first school to gain such status under the current criteria and is currently the only school within Tamworth to be judged as "good".Students are offered a wide range of subjects throughout KS3 and KS4 including varied vocational courses taught at the Torc vocational centre.The Governmental department Ofsted gave Belgrave a grade 4 "good" rating in their last inspection in 2009