Original sentence: " (By revitalizing the downtown area and firmly fixing the middle-class in place in the city limits, Daley probably did save Chicago from declining to the extant of the average Rust Belt city.) Robert Remini pointed out that while other cities were in fiscal crisis in the 1960s and 1970s "Chicago always had a double-A bond rating
Edited sentence: "  Robert Remini pointed out that while other cities were in fiscal crisis in the 1960s and 1970s "Chicago always had a double-A bond rating