Original sentence: Whilst having a fight about what was better, Italo Disco, Punk Funk or soundtracks written for John Hughes Films or the midnight Express soundtrack, they decided that there energy would be better put to use in a more sound proofed and creative enviroment, like a studio
Edited sentence: Whilst having a fight about what was better, Italo Disco, Punk Funk or soundtracks written for John Hughes Films or the midnight Express soundtrack, they decided that there energy would be better put to use in a more sound proofed and creative environment, like a studio