Original sentence: Malachowski attended pilot training at Columbus AFB, Mississippi.Prior to her assignment as a Thunderbird pilot, she served two tours at RAF Lakenheath, England, with the 48th Fighter Wing; assignment to the 4th Fighter Wing at Seymour Johnson Air Force Base, North Carolina; and as an Air Liaison Officer supporting the 2nd Infantry Division at Camp Red Cloud, South Korea.She finished first in her training class and selected the solitary F-15E Strike Eagle slot alloted, training at Seymour Johnson AFB, North Carolina
Edited sentence: Malachowski attended undergraduate pilot training at Columbus AFB, Mississippi.Prior to her assignment as a Thunderbird pilot, she completed transition training to the F-16 Fighting Falcon with the 56th Wing at Luke Air Force Base, Arizona.She finished first among her classmates and selected the only F-15E Strike Eagle slot alloted to her class, training at Seymour Johnson AFB, North Carolina, with the 4th Fighter Wing.She served two operational tours at RAF Lakenheath, England, with the 48th Fighter Wing; assignment to the 4th Fighter Wing at Seymour Johnson AFB; and as an Air Liaison Officer supporting the 2nd Infantry Division at Camp Red Cloud, South Korea