Original sentence: In John, the gift of the Spirit is equivalent to eternal life, knowledge of God, power to obey, and communion with one another and with the Father.Johns gospel is a parallel to accounts in other Gospels, nevertheless, John reports this with the aim in view of showing that Jesus is specially in possession of the Spirit for the purpose of granting the Spirit to his followers, uniting them with Himself, and in Himself also uniting them with the Father.This "Higher" Christology, which was the most influential in the later development of Trinity doctrine, sees Jesus, the sacrificial lamb, as coming among men in order to grant the Spirit to the Children of God
Edited sentence: Johns gospel is the most beautiful anywhere in the bible (in this writers humble opinion), nevertheless he only receives it to give to his followers.This "Higher" Christology, which was the most influential in the later development of Trinity doctrine, sees Jesus, the sacrificial lamb, as existing to give the spirit to Christians, the Children of God.This new perspective of Jesus as a tool for handing over the Spirit, most notably at his death, is largely the reason for Jesus' position in the trinity, as a part of God