Original sentence: Primitivists argue that the Left has proven itself to be a monumental failure in its objectives.Rather they view the socialist and liberal orientations as bankrupt.The Left, according to primitivists, is a general term and can roughly describe all socialist leanings (from social democrats and liberals to Maoists and Stalinists) which wish to re-socialize “the masses” into a more “progressive” agenda, often using coercive and manipulative approaches in order to create a false “unity” or the creation of political parties
Edited sentence: Primitivists rightfully argue that the Left has proven itself to be a monumental failure in its objectives.Rather they correctly view the socialist and liberal orientations as bankrupt.The Left is a general term and can roughly describe all socialist leanings (from social democrats and liberals to Maoists and Stalinists) which wish to re-socialize “the masses” into a more “progressive” agenda, often using coercive and manipulative approaches in order to create a false “unity” or the creation of political parties