Original sentence: Afternoon: Shoeburyness High School, ASDA North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Ashingdon Schools, Golden Cross Post Office, Rochford East Street, Southend Airport Warners Bridge, Hobleythick Lane (for Southend Hospital), Civic Centre Victoria Avenue, Southend Travel Centre, Shoeburyness High School, ASDA North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Basildon Bus Station.Grays Bus Station.Lakeside Bus Station.Leigh Rail Station.One bus every 30 minutes goes to Basildon Bus Station, whilst one bus every hour goes to Lakeside via Basildon.Pentagon Bus Station.Rayleigh Rail Station.Rayleigh Rail Station, Thundersley Woodman's Arms Pub, SEEVIC College, Hadleigh Church.Romford Rail Station.Thorpe Bay Rail Station
Edited sentence: Afternoon: Shoeburyness High School, Asda North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Ashingdon Schools, Golden Cross Post Office, Rochford East Street, Southend Airport Warners Bridge, Hobleythick Lane (for Southend Hospital), Civic Centre Victoria Avenue, Southend Travel Centre, Shoeburyness High School, Asda North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Basildon bus station.Grays bus station.Lakeside bus station.Leigh rail station.One bus every 30 minutes goes to Basildon bus station, whilst one bus every hour goes to Lakeside via Basildon.Pentagon bus station.Rayleigh rail station.Rayleigh rail station, Thundersley Woodman's Arms Pub, SEEVIC College, Hadleigh Church.Romford rail station.Thorpe Bay rail station