Original sentence: During Caneva's ten-year reign at Hersey, his bands brought home over 100 first-place awards.Hersey Bands were founded by band director Don Caneva.JHHS built a new fine arts and fitness section in June 2009.John Hersey High School was opened in the fall of 1968 in Arlington Heights, Illinois, to support the growing population in the regional towns within what was then known as High School District 214.The hard-of-hearing population at JHHS is one of the largest in the area and well noted
Edited sentence: During Caneva's 10 year reign at Hersey his bands brought home an unprecedented over 100 first place awards.Hersey Bands were founded by the internationally renowned band director Don Caneva.JHHS recently built a new fine arts and fitness section in June 2009.John Hersey High School was opened in the fall of 1968 in Arlington Heights, Illinois to support the growing population in the regional towns within what was then known as High School District 214.The hard of hearing population at JHHS is one of the largest in the area and well noted