Original sentence: S, landing a record deal with RCA Records after producer Teddy Riley, a former member of Guy, heard their demo.SWV (an acronym for Sisters with Voices) was formed by three friends: Cheryl Gamble, Tamara Johnson and Leanne Lyons, the group's founder.They got their start when they sent a five song demo to over 15 major record labels in the U
Edited sentence: SWV (an acronym for Sisters with Voices) was formed by three friends: Cheryl Gamble, Tamara Johnson and Leanne Lyons (the group's founder).SWV got its start after the three friends sent a five song demo to record labels in the United States.Soon after, they were signed to a record deal with RCA Records after producer Teddy Riley, a former member of Guy, heard the demo