Original sentence: However, critics of Mao's regime, which consists of the majority of foreign analysts and observers as well as some Chinese people, claim that Mao's administration imposed strict controls over everyday life, and believe that campaigns such as the Great Leap Forward and Cultural Revolution contributed to or caused millions of deaths, incurred severe economic costs, and damaged China's cultural heritage.Most population of China and some foreign observers claim that under Mao, China's unity and sovereignty was assured for the first time in decades, and there was development of infrastructure, industry, healthcare, and education, which they believe has helped in raising living standards.Some of them also believe that the Cultural Revolution contributed to purifying China culture in some aspects.They also believe that campaigns such as the Great Leap Forward was essential in jumpstarting China's development
Edited sentence: However, critics of Mao's regime, which consists of the majority of foreign analysts and observers as well as some Chinese people, especially the emergent middle class and more liberal-minded city dwellers, claim that Mao's administration imposed strict controls over everyday life, and believe that campaigns such as the Great Leap Forward and Cultural Revolution contributed to or caused millions of deaths, incurred severe economic costs, and damaged China's cultural heritage.Supporters of the Maoist Era, consisting mostly of poorer Chinese and foreign observers who believe in communism, claim that under Mao, China's unity and sovereignty was assured for the first time in decades, and there was development of infrastructure, industry, healthcare, and education, which they believe has helped in raising living standards.They also believe that campaigns such as the Great Leap Forward and the Cultural Revolution were essential in jumpstarting China's development and purifying her culture