Original sentence: He was raised by his mother, father and grandmother, with numerous uncles and aunts also involved.Infinito 2017 was born in Chicago, Illinois, a "military child" (children with military connections) on Chicago's South Side.Whilst he was raised mostly in Chicago, Infinito 2017 traveled constantly as a child with his two parents, who were employed by the United States (US) military
Edited sentence: Marcellous was born in Chicago, Illinois, a military child on Chicago's South Side.Raised by his Mother, Father and Grandmother with a host of Uncles and Aunts he never lacked the proper development and positive upbringing.Raised mostly in Chicago,  Il Infinito 2017 traveled constantly as a child due to having two parents in the military