Original sentence: Sodastream has been criticized for operating their manufacturing plant in the West Bank.Sodastream's principal manufacturing facility is located in Mishor Adumim - the industrial area of the West Bank settlement of Ma'ale Adumim.The EU's highest court ruled in 2010 that Sodastream was not entitled to claim a "Made in Israel" exemption from EU customs payments for products manufactured in the West Bank because Israeli settlements in occupied Palestinian territory are outside of the territorial scope of the EC-Israel Agreement.The United Church of Canada launched a campaign to boycott Sodastream's products manufactured in the West Bank on land occupied by Israel since the 1967 Six-Day War.This factory employs some 900 Palestinians in the West Bank.Three are located in Israel and the West Bank and employ 1,100 people as of 2012
Edited sentence: Sodastream has been criticized for operating their manufacturing plant in the illegally occupied West Bank.Sodastream's principal manufacturing facility is located in Mishor Adumim - the illegally occupied industrial area of the West Bank settlement of Ma'ale Adumim.The EU's highest court ruled in 2010 that Sodastream was not entitled to claim a "Made in Israel" exemption from EU customs payments for products manufactured in the illegally occupied West Bank because Israeli settlements in occupied Palestinian territory are outside of the territorial scope of the EC-Israel Agreement.The United Church of Canada launched a campaign to boycott Sodastream's products manufactured in the illegally occupied West Bank on land occupied by Israel since the 1967 Six-Day War.This factory employs some 900 under payed Palestinians in the West Bank.Three are located in Israel and the illegally occupied West Bank and employ 1,100 people as of 2012