Original sentence: Areas of interest include the "Money Pit", Borehole 10-x, Smith's Cove, Site 2, "Nolan's Cross", the "Hatch", and the "Swamp".Persons featured have included Zena Halpern discussing her theory about North African gold and sharing copies of a French map of the island which she claims is dated 1347; J.The series discusses the history of the island, recent discoveries, theories, and prior attempts to investigate the site
Edited sentence: Areas of interest include the "Money Pit", Borehole 10-x, Smith's Cove, random holes in the ground, Site 2, "Nolan's Cross", the "Hatch", and the "Swamp".Persons featured have included Zena Halpern discussing her ridiculous theory about North African gold and sharing copies of a French map of the island which she claims is dated 1347; J.The series discusses the history of the island, recent discoveries, theories, Billy, and prior attempts to investigate the site