Original sentence: He made his name playing for San Lorenzo in Argentina but signed for Italian side Internazionale in the winter transfer window, January 2000, which cost the club 16 million euro.Naturally a central defender and world rated man-marker, he is athletic and relies mostly on his pace and reliable timing, being only 173 cm tall and thus vulnerable in the air
Edited sentence: Cordoba is a proven defender, making twenty matches in his first season, impressive when you consider he only joined the club in the winter break of the season.He made his name playing for San Lorenzo in Argentina but signed for Italian side Internazionale in the winter transfer window, January 2000, which cost the club 16million euro.Naturally a central defender and world rated man-marker, he is incredibly athletic and relies mostly on his pace and reliable timing, being only 173cm tall and thus vulnerable in the air