Original sentence: Originally, the Kashmiris were Buddhist and Hindu, however, after the conquest of Kashmir and much of India by Central Asian invaders, the majority of Kashmiri people became Muslim
Edited sentence: Originally, the Kashmiris were all Hindu, however, after the invasion of Kashmir and much of India by the Persian empire which brought countless periods of brutal conversion as well as intolerance of Hindus, the majority of Kashmiri people became Muslim