Original sentence: We Feel Responsible, a major chapter of Students for Bhopal, lead a rally in Chennai as part of a larger movement by Bhopal survivors to demanded the blacklisting of Dow by the Government and protested the Indian Oil Corporation’s plans to do business with a corporation that had outstanding liabilities in Bhopal
Edited sentence: As a result of these efforts, the Indian Oil Corporation (IOC) cancelled its decision to purchase $2 million worth of technology from Dow in 2005.Bhopal campaigners discovered and presented evidence to the Government and Indian Oil Corporation that Dow Chemical misrepresented proprietary Union Carbide technology as its own in order to consummate the sale.Dow Chemical’s plans for business expansion in South Asia have been hindered by their resistance to take responsibility and clean-up the mess left behind in Bhopal.Survivors in Bhopal have protested the expansion or entrance of any facilities or business operated by Dow.This included a nationwide boycott of the Indian Oil Corporation’s Petrol Pumps, letters written the Prime Minister in the blood of Bhopali survivors, and a rally in Chennai, led by We Feel Responsible, a major chapter of Students for Bhopal.When Bhopal survivors learned of the secretive deal, they demanded the blacklisting of Dow by the Government and protested the Indian Oil Corporation’s plans to do business with a corporation that had outstanding liabilities in Bhopal