Original sentence: Five neighbourhoods are of any considerable note: (1) the Cathedral Area; (2) Germantown (see main article: Regina's historic buildings and precincts), originally an impoverished and ill-serviced ghetto of continental Europeans; (3) the historic and affluent Crescents area, immediately to the north of Wascana Creek west of the Albert Street bridge and dam which creates Wascana Lake); (4) South Albert Street, adjacent to the provincial Legislative Building and office buildings, a neighbourhood of imposing mansions dating from the 1920s; and (5) the latterly notorious North-Central district (see below), an area of low-rent housing characterised by serious problems of crime, drug use and prostitution
Edited sentence: Five neighbourhoods are of any considerable note, whether for good or ill: (1) the Cathedral Area; (2) Germantown (see main article: Regina's historic buildings and precincts), originally an impoverished and ill-serviced ghetto of continental Europeans; (3) the historic and affluent Crescents area, immediately to the north of Wascana Creek west of the Albert Street bridge and dam which creates Wascana Lake); (4) South Albert Street, adjacent to the provincial Legislative Building and office buildings, a neighbourhood of imposing mansions dating from the 1920s; and (5) the latterly notorious North-Central district (see below), an area of low-rent housing characterised by serious problems of crime, drug use and prostitution