Original sentence: In April 2002, Jenin's refugee camp was the theatre of one of the most intense battles to occur during the al-Aqsa Intifada.On contrast, the death of 23 Israeli soldiers during the battle, raised criticism in Israel on the soft method the IDF used in order not to harm civilians, on the expense of its own troops safety.The events were intially refered to as the Jenin massacre, due to an allegation raised by Palestinians that the IDF killed hundreds of civilians in the camp.This allegation was later refuted, and the death toll was lowered to 52 people, at least 30 of whome were militants
Edited sentence: In April 2002, Jenin's refugee camp was the theatre of one of the most deadly battles to occur during the Intifada.It is referred to by some as the Jenin massacre, due to the large number of civilan deaths