Original sentence: In 2003, the team won 1st place and competed in the National Tournament in Washington, DC.The Forensics Team, a member of the National Forensics League, has the 2001 National Champion in Expository to its record, two state champions, and has had numerous individuals qualify to the National Tournament and PHSSL State Tournament every year.The Model United Nations and Model European Union programs have achieved recognition and awards at the University of Virginia, University of Pittsburgh, Duquesne University, and Westminster College over the years
Edited sentence: In 2003, the team won 1st place and competed in the National Tournament in Washington, D.The Forensics Team, a member of the National Forensic League, has the 2001 National Champion in Expository to its record, two state champions, and has had numerous individuals qualify to the National Tournament and PHSSL State Tournament every year.The Model United Nations and Model European Union programs have achieved recognition and awards at the University of Virginia, University of Pittsburgh, Duquesne University, and  over the years