Original sentence: Han Bong-Soo, known as Bong Soo Han in the United States, was born August 25, 1933 in Incheon, South Korea and died on January 8, 2007 in Santa Monica, California
Edited sentence: Han Bong-Soo, known as Bong Soo Han in the United States, was born August 25, 1933 in Incheon, South Korea and passed away on January 8, 2007 in Santa Monica, California