Original sentence: On June 15, 2009, UK newspaper, The Sun, exclusively announced that the show would be broadcast on Sky1 in August.The Sun also announced that the show will air on SkyOne on the 8th August at 8pm
Edited sentence: On June 15, 2009, UK newspaper, The Sun, exclusively announced that the show would be broadcast on Sky1 in August, which was later announced bu The Sun, that the show will air on Sky1 on the 8th August at 8pm