Original sentence: The novel Trainspotting, and its film adaptation are not directly related to the hobby, although it may be inferred from the opening scene from the movie, that the title is a comment on the what the author sees as the supposed pointlessness of the hobby
Edited sentence: The novel Trainspotting, and its film adaptation are not directly related to the hobby, although it may be inferred from the opening "I choose life" scene from the movie, that the title is a comment on the supposed pointlessness of the hobby