Original sentence: Also, unlike Lieberman, Cantwell has altered her position on the war during her campaign and criticized the Bush Administration for its conduct of the war; and her most vocal anti-war primary opponent, Mark Wilson, joined her campaign in a $8,000-a-month position
Edited sentence: Also, unlike Lieberman, Cantwell has altered her position on the war during her campaign and criticized the Bush Administration for its conduct of the war; she was also able to co-opt some of her most vocal anti-war opposition in Mark Wilson by giving him an $8,000/month paid position on her campaign