Original sentence: In a film that is arguably challenging Christian fundamentalism this may be offensive to some Christians.Some of the characters, most notably Hilary Faye (Mandy Moore), are stereotypes of Christian fundamentalism and are created especially for the audience to deride.The main character's name is Mary who is undergoing an unusual pregnancy could be interpreted as a reference to Mary, the mother of Jesus.This lends weight to the claim that the film has an anti-fundamentalism bias
Edited sentence: In one deleted scene, some of the main characters begin a serious philosophical discussion about the Christian faith - namely the spiritual status of those who have not heard the Gospel.It takes her at least two months to become aware of her pregnancy.Some of the characters, most notably Hilary Faye (Mandy Moore), are stereotypes and are created especially for the audience to deride.The fact that the main character's name is Mary who is undergoing an unusual pregnancy is too obvious a reference to Mary, the mother of Jesus.The main character, Mary (Jena Malone), despite being in her final year of high school, seems unaware of the consequences of unprotected sexual intercourse.This lends weight to the claim that the film has an anti-Christian bias.This may be offensive to some Christians.This may give the impression that evangelical Christians do not spend time thinking about their faith.Very quickly this discussion is quashed by Hilary Faye.Young Christian Women, generally, are not this ignorant