Original sentence: Drusilla soon kills Kendra by hypnotising her and slicing into her throat.On the day she was to take her holy vows, Angelus made her watch as he killed every person in the convent, engaged in sexual relations with Darla
Edited sentence: Drusilla soon kills Kendra the Vampire Slayer by hypnotising her and slicing into her throat.On the day she was to take her holy vows, Angelus made her watch as he killed every person in the convent, engaged in sexual relations with Darla, and presumably raped her