Original sentence: For other uses, see Pimlico (disambiguation).Pimlico Presents is a high quality show of local talent with over 500 performers and 100 crew involved in the performance.Pimlico State High School is a high school in Townsville, Australia known for its academic, sport and musical achievements
Edited sentence: Pimlico Presents is by far the highest quality show of Pimlico talent with over 500 performers and 100 crew involved in the performance.Pimlico State High School is a prominent high school in Townsville, Australia known for its academic, sport and musical skills.The school invests thousands of dollars towards the Performing Arts which is already exceeding the private school sector in North Queensland.The school is well known for its Performing Arts around Queensland.The show over the past 10 years has drawn full crowd attendance for each of the nights performances and has involved many unique acts all created by the students of Pimlico State High School