Original sentence: The graveyard is situated in St Edmund's Pleasance on the summit of East Hill (the place Richard Trevithick is burried), which gave rise to a traditional and derogatory rhyme of Dartford's people 'Dirty Dartford, Dirty People, bury their dead above the steeple'
Edited sentence: The graveyard is situated in St Edmund's Pleasance on the summit of East Hill (the place Richard Trevithick is buried), which gave rise to a traditional and derogatory rhyme of Dartford's people 'Dirty Dartford, Dirty People, bury their dead above the steeple'