Original sentence: It is a narrative story of a young boy who is born in the ghetto of Chicago, grows up, steals and fights, and purchases a gun, and steals a car, and attempts to run, however, he eventually is shot and killed as another child is born, with the strong implication that his fate will be the same.It was Presley's first creative recording session since the '68 Comeback
Edited sentence: It is a narrative story of a young boy who is born in the ghetto of Chicago, grows up, steals and fights, and purchases a gun, and steals a car, and attempts to run, however, he eventually is shot and killed as another child is born, with the strong implication that his fate will be the same, Especially with the final words "And his mother cries".It was Presley's first creative recording session since the '68 Comeback, and the songs recorded here probably owed some of their financial success to that.The song's video stirred up controversy for its stark depiction of guns in the crib with toddlers.There were initial fears that the song would damage Presley's reputation for being politically unbiased, but he loved the song and recorded it anyway