Original sentence: As they arrive, they met and befriend Sophia, a human girl who has a dream on being the best pastry chief in all of Europe.But then their cover was blown and whole town found out they were real.One day, 14 bunnies were transported to the Human world from their home world named Bunny Fields to do a really important task given to them by the Two Queens.Since then, they make delicious foods and the Sugar Bunnies each make their own special treats.They later befriend her and Sophia keep them a secret to everyone in town, even to her parents
Edited sentence: As they arrive, they met and befriend Sophia, a human girl who dreams of being the best pastry chief in all of Europe.But their cover is blown and whole town found out they were real.One day, 14 bunnies were transported to the human world from their home world named Bunny Fields to do a really important task given to them by the Two Queens.They later befriend her and Sophia keeps them hidden from everyone in town, even her parents.Together they make delicious food and the Sugar Bunnies each make their own special treats