Original sentence: According to , Lynn de Silva's professional activities, positions and responsibilites were the following.In 1962, de Silva was appointed to serve the National Christian Council at the Study Centre for Religion and Society in Wellawatte, which later became the Ecumenical Institute for Study and Dialogue -- an important center for Buddhist studies.In the early 1980's, this book was considered unparalleled as an introduction to Buddhism in Sri Lanka, and also considered the most complete, thorough and sensitive book on Buddhism in Sri Lanka, resulting in it generally being recommended as a standard book on Buddhist practices in Sri Lanka, by professors and monks
Edited sentence: According to , Lynn de Silva's professional activities, positions and responsibilities were the following.In 1962, de Silva was appointed to serve the National Christian Council at the Study Centre for Religion and Society in Wellawatte, which later became the Ecumenical Institute for Study and Dialogue—an important center for Buddhist studies.In the early 1980s, this book was considered unparalleled as an introduction to Buddhism in Sri Lanka, and also considered the most complete, thorough and sensitive book on Buddhism in Sri Lanka, resulting in it generally being recommended as a standard book on Buddhist practices in Sri Lanka, by professors and monks