Original sentence: President Abraham Lincoln would go on to emancipate slaves in southern states, including Virginia, in the The Emancipation Proclamation.President Lincoln gave the Emanicapation on September 22, 1862.The Emancipation was effective January 1st, 1863
Edited sentence: On November 6, 1860, Abraham Lincoln is elected the 16th President of the United States.President Lincoln gave the Emanicapation Proclamation on September 22, 1862 and was effective January 1st, 1863.Three years later, President Abraham Lincoln would go on to emancipate slaves in many of the southern states, including Virginia, in the The Emancipation Proclamation