Original sentence: He criticised the American Government, claiming that its foreign policies had helped to foster an environment in which terrorism could flourish.In 2001, Mundine commented on the September 11, 2001 attacks.Mundine's stance attracted some vocal critics at the time
Edited sentence: In 2001, Mundine criticized the American Government for allegedly creating an atmosphere that led to terrorism through it's past foreign policy.This created a wave of Anti Mundine protest by some at the time, which has largely abated at present