Original sentence: Fielder is a five-time All-Star and was previously the iron man leader for consecutive games played with 547 consecutive games.Fielder, a first baseman, was selected in the first round of the 2002 Major League Baseball Draft by the Brewers out of Eau Gallie High School in Melbourne, Florida.Prince Semien Fielder (born May 9, 1984) is an American professional baseball player for the Texas Rangers of Major League Baseball (MLB)
Edited sentence: Fielder, a first baseman of questionable talent, was selected in the first round of the 2002 Major League Baseball Draft by the Brewers out of Eau Gallie High School in Melbourne, Florida.Fielder, for some reason, is a five-time All-Star and was previously the iron man leader for consecutive games played with 547 consecutive games.Prince Semien Fielder (born May 9, 1984) is a mediocre American professional baseball player for the Texas Rangers of Major League Baseball (MLB)