Original sentence: After Portuguese police used extreme violence to suppress an unarmed and peaceful attempt by demonstrators to be reunited with India, the Indian government decided to invade
Edited sentence: After Portuguese police used extreme violence to suppress an unarmed and peaceful attempt by demonstrators to be reunited with India, the Indian government decided to invade (NOTE: This is patently incorrect.The only people repelled by the Portuguese were in the attempted invasion by apparently unarmed "satyagrahis" from across Goa's borders, in August 1954.There were no insurrections in Goa