Original sentence: George's Academy when he was in Jerusalem, but his extended family became refugees in 1948 during the 1948 Arab-Israeli War when their neighborhood of Talbiya was captured by Jewish militia groups, along with the western part of Jerusalem, which became part of the State of Israel:
Edited sentence: George's Academy when he was in Jerusalem, but his extended family became refugees in 1948 during the 1948 Arab-Israeli War when his family home in Talbiya was stolen by Jewish militia groups, along with the western part of Jerusalem, which became part of the State of Israel: