Original sentence: Although best known for work that he later accomplished in Tokyo, he advocated the use of the German language for Japanese medical studies, encouraged the dispatching of the first Japanese diplomatic mission to the United States and Europe (the Iwakura mission), supported the establishment of the prefectural system, and inspired the Education Order of 1872 and the Conscription Ordinance of 1873.His son Gustave emigrated to the United States and gained some fame as a cartoonist.Verbeck came to Nagasaki in the aftermath of Commodore Matthew Calbraith Perry's opening of the country in 1853 and 1854, as a Christian missionary
Edited sentence: Although best known for work that he later accomplished in Tokyo he advocated the use of the German language for Japanese medical studies, encouraged the dispatching of the first Japanese diplomatic mission to the United States and Europe (the Iwakura mission), supported the establishment of the prefectural system, and inspired the Education Order of 1872 and the Conscription Ordinance of 1873.Of all the Christian missionaries and educators who came to Nagasaki in the aftermath of Commodore Matthew Calbraith Perry's opening of the country in 1853 and 1854, the most influential was undoubtedly the Dutch-born, American-trained minister Guido Verbeck