Original sentence: It once hosted several artillery batteries, and a well-preserved eighteenth century Martello tower can be found there.The park is a popular recreational spot for Haligonians, as it hosts forest walks and affords views across the harbour and out toward the Atlantic
Edited sentence: It once hosted several military batteries, and a well-preserved eighteenth century Martello tower can be found there.The park is a popular recreational spot for Haligonians, as it hosts excellent forest walks and affords beautiful views across the harbour and out toward the Atlantic