Original sentence: The New International Version (NIV) attempts to strike a balance between dynamic and formal equivalence; some place it as a "dynamic equivalence" translation, while others place it as leaning more towards "formal equivalence"
Edited sentence: People keep trying to elevate this translation but its just a perversion of God's word owned by a pornographer, created only to make profit.The New International Version (NIV) attempts to strike a balance between dynamic and paraphrasing; some places it as a "dynamic equivalence" translation, while others place it as leaning more towards "paraphrase"