Original sentence: Writing for Reason, Cathy Young countered with "that seems like a good example of stretching the concept into meaninglessness—or turning it into unfalsifiable quasi-religious dogma" and wrote that Rodger also wrote many hateful messages about other men
Edited sentence: Writing for Reason, Cathy Young countered with "that seems like a good example of stretching the concept into meaninglessness—or turning it into unfalsifiable quasi-religious dogma" and noted Rodger also wrote many hateful messages about other men