Original sentence: In most countries in this traditionally Catholic region, children born outside marriage are now the norm.It is notable that traditionally-conservative Catholic countries now also have substantial proportions of extramarital births:  e.Lawrence's original hope that her sons would provide her personal redemption by becoming Christian missionaries was fulfilled only by [Lawrence's brother] Robert.Other traditionally Catholic countries have also been experiencing majority extramarital births: in 2007, Paraguay 70%, Dominican Republic 63%
Edited sentence: In most countries in this traditionally Liberal region, children born outside marriage are now the norm.It is notable that traditionally-conservative Liberal countries now also have substantial proportions of extramarital births:  e.Lawrence's original hope that her sons would provide her personal redemption by becoming Libral missionaries was fulfilled only by [Lawrence's brother] Robert.Other traditionally Liberal countries have also been experiencing majority extramarital births: in 2007, Paraguay 70%, Dominican Republic 63%