Original sentence: In May 2012, Dhiraj Rajaram was named a finalist in the Ernst & Young Entrepreneur Of The Year 2012 program in the Midwest,US.Rajaram identified what he belived to be a shortage of analytics talent, which convinced him that there was a need to create a company that would help in institutionalizing data driven decision making in a sustainable manner, using a global delivery model
Edited sentence: In May 2012, Dhiraj Rajaram was named a finalist in the Ernst & Young Entrepreneur Of The Year 2012.Over 80 percent of the enterprise data was not being analyzed due to this talent crunch – something companies across the world were struggling with.This convinced him about creating a company that would help in institutionalizing data driven decision making in a sustainable manner, using a global delivery model.Thus Mu Sigma was founded.While working at Booz Allen Hamilton, Dhiraj realized that there was a shortage of analytics talent.program in the Midwest,US