Original sentence: In the dining room, several guests are dissatisfied with the quality of the food and the service.Meanwhile, Sybil blithely continues to talk to one of the guests, who himself appears not to be enjoying her continued ramblings, leaving Basil to tend to the others
Edited sentence: During a busy dinner time, several guests are dissatisfied with the quality of the food and the service.Meanwhile, Sybil blithely and lazily continues to talk to one of the guests, who himself appears not to be enjoying her continued ramblings, leaving Basil, Manuel and Polly to tend to the others