Original sentence: After growing up in the southern US, he spent his high school years in Toledo, Ohio.James Moffett (1929–1996) was an English teacher, author, and theorist of the the teaching and learning of language arts and especially writing.Moffett later wrote write an award-winning book about the events, Storm in the Mountains: a Case Study of Censorship).Shortly after their publication and ensuing success, Houghton-Mifflin approached him about writing a textbook, and the result was a influential language-learning collection entitled Interaction, published in 1972; the most expensive education collection in history.The controversy received national coverage at the time and subsequently
Edited sentence: After growing up in the deep south, he spent his high school years in Toledo, Ohio.James Moffett (1929–1996) was an English teacher, author, and theoretician of the the teaching and learning of language arts and especially writing.Moffett later wrote write an award winning book about the events, Storm in the Mountains: a Case Study of Censorship).Shortly after their publication and ensuing success, Houghton-Mifflin approached him about writing a textbook, and the result was a ground-breaking language learning collection entitled Interaction, published in 1972; the most expensive education collection in history.The controversy was nationally covered at the time,  and subsequently