Original sentence: Also, there are Pomeranian and Talian-speaking communities in the South of the country.In 2003, the notable health problems were infant mortality, child mortality, maternal mortality, mortality by non-transmissible illness and mortality caused by external causes (transportation, violence and suicide).There is non-capital metropolitan areas in São Paulo state (Campinas, Santos and Paraíba Valley), Minas Gerais (Steel Valley), Rio Grande do Sul (Sinos Valley), and Santa Catarina (Itajaí Valley)
Edited sentence: According to Brazilian Government, the most serious health problems are Childhood mortality, Motherhood mortality, Mortality by non-transmissible illness and Mortality caused by external causes (transportation, violence and suicide).Also non-capital metropolitan areas in São Paulo state (Campinas, Santos and Paraíba Valley), Minas Gerais (Steel Valley), Rio Grande do Sul (Sinos Valley), and Santa Catarina (Itajaí Valley).There are important German and Italian-speaking communities in the South of the country