Original sentence: As a composer, Hanson was not a follower of prevailing trends, and consequently his music was unfashionable and ignored by many of his contempories.Hanson was born in Burwood, Sydney on November 23, 1913, the youngest of five children to Australian-born railroad engineer William Hanson, and his English-born wife Lilian, nee Bennett.Young passed away in 1975, and after being appointed a Member of the Order of Australia (AM) in January 1976, Hanson himself died of myocardial infarction later that year, on 6 December
Edited sentence: As a composer, Hanson was not a follower of prevailing trends, and consequently his music was unfashionable and ignored by many of his contemporaries.Hanson was born in Burwood, Sydney on November 23, 1913, the youngest of five children to Australian-born railroad engineer William Hanson, and his English-born wife Lilian, née Bennett.Young died in 1975, and after being appointed a Member of the Order of Australia (AM) in January 1976, Hanson himself died of myocardial infarction later that year, on 6 December