Original sentence: According to George Ryley Scott, the spanking paddle was invented by a Caucasian man who lived in the State of Virginia: "With the slave-owners it was directed to the finding of a method of punishing the negroes without affecting adversely their market value.It was to an enterprising Virginian 'white' that came the big idea whereby it was possible to 'whip' or beat a negro into insensibility without leaving any traces of the owner's handiwork
Edited sentence: According to George Ryley Scott, the spanking paddle was invented by a Caucasian man who lived in the State of Virginia.It is just as often directed to cruel, disgraceful, revolting and disgusting purposes.It was to an enterprising Virginian 'white' that came the big idea whereby it was possible to 'whip' or beat a negro into insensibility without leaving any traces of the owner’s handiwork.Scott wrote, "And human ingenuity is not necessarily devoted to just or humane ends.With the slave-owners it was directed to the finding of a method of punishing the negroes without affecting adversely their market value