Original sentence: However, recent reports suggest that the Canadian government's plan of renewal and healing has ultimately been a failure.The community is still plagued with alcohol and drug abuse.The government has been accused of creating a system overburdened with bureaucracy, and not adequately addressing the issue.The local tribal band also has been accused of corruption, as was shown in a 2005 CBC report in which it was shown that the leadership was trafficking drugs and other illicit substances to maintain power
Edited sentence: However, recent reports show that the Canadian Governments plan of renewal and healing has ultimately been a failure.The community is still plagued with alchohol, and drug abuse.The government has been accused of creating a sytem overburdened with bureacracy, and not addressing the issue.The local tribal band also has been accused of corruption, as was shown in a 2005 CBC report in which is was shown that the leadership was trafficking drugs and other illicit substances to maintain power.These factors have combined to create a cycle of dependance which ultimately is one of the greatest tragedies in the Canadian diaspora