Original sentence: She is an actress who is dating Dewey Riley and is playing the part of Gale Weathers in 'Stab', 'Stab 2' and'Stab 3' After realising that she may be the next victim, she sticks by Gale constantly - even though both of them hate each other - she sneaks away from the others when the killer attacks them, but he kills her behind the mirrors
Edited sentence: She is an actress who is dating Dewey Riley and is playing the part of Gale Weathers in 'Stab', 'Stab 2' and 'Stab 3' After realising that she may be the next victim, she sticks by Gale constantly - even though both of them hate each other - she sneaks away from the others when the killer attacks them, but he kills her behind the mirrors