Original sentence: Finding work immediately after that appearance for his theatric and modeling talents, he moved to Los Angeles and secured an agent.Originally from San Diego, California, Jazzmun made her first national television appearance on the talent variety show Puttin' on the Hits in 1984 in which he split her body half in male drag and half in female drag, lip synching as a "duet".Since then Jazzmun has performed all over the world performing as either his stage character Jazzmun, her trademark Whitney Houston of which he performed as in the female stage review La Cage, Grace Jones or any number of other characters
Edited sentence: Finding work immediately after that appearance for her theatric and modeling talents, she moved to Los Angeles and secured an agent.Originally from San Diego, California, Jazzmun made her first national television appearance on the talent variety show Puttin' on the Hits in 1984 in which she split her body half in male drag and half in female drag, lip synching as a "duet".Since then Jazzmun has performed all over the world performing as either her stage character Jazzmun, her trademark Whitney Houston which she performed as in the female stage review La Cage, Grace Jones or any number of other characters