Original sentence: Little Nellie Kelly offers Judy Garland the opportunity to sing a swing version of "Singin' in the Rain", as well as several newer songs, including the traditional "A Pretty Girl Milking Her Cow" sung partly in Irish-Gaelic
Edited sentence: Little Nellie Kelly offers Judy Garland the opportunity to sing a swing version of "Singin' in the Rain",more than 10 years before Gene Kelly more famously sang it in "Singin' in the Rain" (1952), as well as several newer songs, including the traditional "A Pretty Girl Milking Her Cow" sung partly in Irish-Gaelic