Original sentence: It has also provided crucial relief to victims of natural disasters and humanitarian aid to those in need.It has been a full partner with the military services in helping to bring about the end of the Cold War
Edited sentence: We have also provided crucial relief to victims of natural disasters and humanitarian aid to those in need.We have been a full partner with the military services in helping to bring about the end of the Cold War.We have been in a unique position to serve our country and have distinguished ourselves at every opportunity.We have seen starving people fed, the homeless sheltered, and the oppressed freed