Original sentence: Following the Soviet occupation of Eastern Poland in September 1939 and the Winter War in November, President Franklin Roosevelt publicly condemned the Soviet Union as a dictatorship and to impose a "moral embargo" on the export of certain products to the Soviet Union.In December 1939, Americans sympathetic to Finnish claims led by former President Herbert Hoover (who had previously formed the Commission for Polish Relief and, in World War I, headed the Commission for Relief in Belgium) formed the Finnish Relief Fund to donate money to aid Finnish civilians and refugees.The Soviet attack was condemned by some Americans, with some businesses refusing to sell supplies to the Soviet Union
Edited sentence: In December 1939, sympathetic Americans led by former President Herbert Hoover (who had previously formed the Commission for Polish Relief and, in World War I, headed the Commission for Relief in Belgium) formed the Finnish Relief Fund to donate money to aid Finnish civilians and refugees.The Soviet attack outraged Americans, with some businesses refusing to sell supplies to the Soviet Union.The Soviet occupation of Eastern Poland in September 1939 and the Winter War in November had forced President Franklin Roosevelt to condemn the Soviet Union publicly as a dictatorship and to impose a "moral embargo" on the export of certain products to the Soviet Union