Original sentence: (citation needed).MacKinnon works actively with the Coalition Against Trafficking in Women (CATW) and Apne Aap in India.Some organisations and individuals, such as the Global Network of Sex Worker Projects, Amnesty International, and the Global Alliance Against Traffic in Women say that this legal model makes it harder for sex workers to find housing, make money to survive, screen clients to avoid violence, prevent their boyfriends from being arrested as "pimps," and avoid the interactions with police which account for the plurality of sexual violence against sex workers.The fundamental concept is that the requirement to exchange sexual services for survival is a product of sex inequality and a form of violence against women.This model has been accepted in Norway, Iceland, Canada, Ireland, Northern Ireland, and France, but was rejected in New Zealand after opposition raised by the New Zealand Prostitute's Collective, the Māori Women's Welfare League, and the National Council of Women of New Zealand, in favour of decriminalisation, which those organisations believed better provided labour rights and civil rights to people who sell sexual services.What became termed the Swedish Model, also known as the Nordic Model or the Restrictive Model, penalizes buyers of sexual services as well as sellers, characterised as pimps or sex traffickers, while putatively decriminalizing all those who are bought and sold in prostitution
Edited sentence: (citation needed) MacKinnon works actively with the Coalition Against Trafficking in Women (CATW) and Apne Aap in India.The fundamental concept is that the requirement to exchange sexual use for survival is a product of sex inequality and a form of violence against women.This model, shown to have reduced prostitution and sex trafficking dramatically, has been accepted in Norway, Iceland, Canada, Ireland, Northern Ireland, and France.What became termed the Swedish Model, also known as the Nordic Model or the Equality Model, penalizes buyers of persons for sexual use as well as sellers, namely pimps or sex traffickers, while decriminalizing all those who are bought and sold in prostitution