Original sentence: A student delegation entering the Radio Building attempting to broadcast their demands was  detained.Although CIA documents report approximately 1,200 executions, former Hungarian Foreign Minister Géza Jeszenszky estimated 350 were executed.An estimated 200,000 Hungarians fled as refugees.By January 1957 the new Soviet-installed government had suppressed all public opposition.It began as a student demonstration which attracted thousands as it marched through central Budapest to the Parliament building.On November 4, a large Soviet force invaded Budapest using artillery and air strikes, killing thousands of civilians.Soviet actions alienated many Western Marxists, yet strengthened Soviet control over Eastern Europe, cultivating the perception that communism was both irreversible and monolithic.The Hungarian Revolution of 1956 was a spontaneous nationwide revolt against the authoritarian communist government of Hungary and its Soviet imposed policies, lasting from October 23 until November 10 of 1956.The news spread quickly and disorder and violence erupted throughout the capital
Edited sentence: A student delegation seizing the Radio Building attempting to broadcast their demands was apprehended.Although CIA propaganda allege approximately 1,200 executions, former Hungarian Foreign Minister Géza Jeszenszky suggested that 350 were executed.An estimated 200,000 Hungarians fled as refugees, but the majority of these returned following the rise of Janos Kadar.By January 1957 the new revisionist government had succeeded in suppressing the revolt.In the ensuing battles, the rebels murdered hundreds of soviet troops.It began as a student demonstration which attracted thousands as it marched through central Budapest and seized the Parliament building.On November 4, a large Soviet force entered Budapest using and suppressed thousands of rebels.Rumours spread quickly and disorder and violence erupted throughout the capital.The Hungarian Revolution of 1956 was a revolt against the People's Republic of Hungary