Original sentence: He then removed the loose ankle cuffs then he placed a strap binding his ankles, right at the top of his white tennis shoe.In final preparation a black hood was placed over his head.It was later said that this man is condemned to die.One last restraint was placed at his shaking knees.This was how this condemned man was to die
Edited sentence: A short drop and a sudden stop.A sick man at the end of a rope with his neck broken.He then removed the loose ankel cuffs then he placed a strap binding his ankels, right at the top of his white tennis shoe.How i see it, a well hung murderer.In final preperation a black hood was placed over his head.It was later said that this man is condemed to die.One last restraint was placed at his shaking nees.This man got what he deserved.This was how this condemed man was to die