Original sentence: Some critics, such as philosopher Paul Kurtz, have described Stevenson's reincarnation research as pseudoscience, although generally the scientific community regarded Stevenson's research as being conducted with appropriate scientific rigor
Edited sentence: Some critics, such as philosopher Paul Kurtz, have described Stevenson's reincarnation research as pseudoscience, although some in the scientific community have stated that Stevenson's research was conducted with appropriate scientific rigor