Original sentence: In April 2006, DebkaFile reported Palestinian militants were manufacturing the Quds-3 along with a multiple-rocket launcher system.The Quds-3, developed in the Gaza Strip, allegedly with the aid of PA funding and Iranian operatives, is based on the Russian Grad and BM21 Katyusha
Edited sentence: In April 2006, DebkaFile reported Palestinian terrorists were manufacturing the Quds-3 along with a multiple-rocket launcher system.The Quds-3, developed in the Gaza Strip with the aid of PA funding and Iranian operatives, is based on the Russian Grad and BM21 Katyusha