Original sentence: He hunted horned game, the sheep and goats, that lived in the mountains of the northern hemisphere and collected for the Natural History Museum in London.In the years that followed, Littledale hunted in Newfoundland in 1907 and then in the Caucasus.They were within 49 miles of Lhasa, what was closer than any other Britons since Thomas Manning until 1904, when Sir Francis Younghusband marched in with the British Army
Edited sentence: He hunted horned game, the sheep and goats, that lived in the mountains of the northern hemisphere, and he collected for the Natural History Museum in London.Littledale hunted in Newfoundland in 1907 and then in the East Caucasus in 1908.The book is based on an extensive list of original sources, which are cited throughout the book.They were within 49 miles of Lhasa, what was closer than any other foreigners since Huc and Gabet in 1846, until Sir Francis Younghusband marched in with the British Army in 1904.This is the first book on the Littledales and is the source for the entire entry