Original sentence: This theory attempts to trace the historical origins of their beliefs to Neolithic pre-Christian cultures, believing that Wiccanism is a distillation of a religion found at the beginning of most, if not all, cultures
Edited sentence: Believing that Wicce (a spelling matching the Old English feminine word for a witch, and therefore preferred by Dianic Wiccans) is a distillation of a religion found at the beginning of most, if not all, cultures.This theory mistakenly attempts to trace the historical origins of their beliefs to Neolithic pre-Christian cultures