Original sentence: Coming from the JRU Heavy Bombers, some consider him the best “thinking” power forward in the history of the PBA, hence, he was dubbed as “The Scholar”.He is the premier example of a power forward with finesse unlike the power forwards of today like Eric Menk and Danny Ildefonso, and much earlier, Alvin Patrimonio and Nelson Asaytono, who rely primarily on sheer power and brute strength
Edited sentence: Coming from the JRU Heavy Bombers, some consider him the best “thinking” power forward in the history of the PBA, hence, he was dubbed as “The Scholar.” He is the premier example of a power forward with finesse unlike the power forwards of today like Eric Menk and Danny Ildefonso, and much earlier, Alvin Patrimonio and Nelson Asaytono, who rely primarily on sheer power and brute strength