Original sentence: " They also doubt that a magazine for children would have been the method used to disclose their sexuality.After Joseph's death in 1907, Louie and May continued to live together, sleeping in the same bedroom for 40 years until Louie's death.Historian D.In The Children's Friend, a church magazine for children, a biography decribed May and Louie's friendship to have "ripened into love".Michael Quinn believes that when May moved in, Joseph moved out, though some researchers oppose this view, pointing to a description of Joseph as "a tender, thoughtful, loving and devoted husband".Some schoolars the magazine article was written by May, who was the editor-in-chief of The Children's Friend, while others claim it was written by Marion Belnap Kerr.The actual living arrangements of Joseph Felt are difficult to verify because after the 1890 Manifesto polygamous families often sought to obscure their living arrangements.Though Louie did not live with her husband for the last 40 years of her life, she raised his children after the death of one of his junior wives, and at her funeral she was described as being "devoted to her husband and to his children
Edited sentence: "  They also doubt that a magazine for children would have been the method used to disclose their sexuality.Actual living arrangements of Joseph Felt are difficult to verify because after the 1890 Manifesto polygamous families often sought to obscure their living arrangements.After Joseph death in 1907, Louie and May continued to live together, sleeping in the same bedroom, for 40 years until Louie's death.Hardy as "a tender, thoughtful, loving and devoted husband".In a lesson material for The Children's Friend, a biography decribed May and Louie's friendship to have "ripened into love".Michael Quinn believes that when May moved in, Joseph moved out, though LDS schoolars oppose this view, pointing to a description of Joseph by Adelaide U.Some schoolars say it was an autobiography, while some it was written by Marion Belnap Kerr.Though Louie did not live with her husband for the last 40 years of her life, she raised his children after the death of one of the junior wives, and at her funeral she was described as being "devoted to her husband and to his children