Original sentence: An overall premise behind much of this criticism, apart from several specific issues noted below, is the accusation that Microsoft is attempting to achieve ISO standardization of a proprietary format in order to prevent the widespread adoption of the OpenDocument format, which could threaten the dominance of Microsoft's own Office suite
Edited sentence: An overall premise behind much of this criticism, apart from several specific issues noted below, is that Microsoft is attempting to achieve ISO standardization of a proprietary format in order to prevent the widespread adoption of the OpenDocument format, which could threaten the dominance of Microsoft's own Office suite