Original sentence: Allen soon became the leading figure of the convention, and its proposal, which called for an assessment of 25% of appraised value on residential and agricultural property and 40% on commercial property and even higher on utilties, was essentially Allen's plan, and was subsequently approved by Tennessee voters and remains the law except that the U.The idea apparently was well-received by a majority of Nashville-area voters, however; Allen was elected to a full term in November of 1976
Edited sentence: Allen soon became the leading figure of the convention, and its proposal, which called for an assessment of 25% of appraised value on residential and agricultural property and 40% on commercial property and even higher on utilities, was essentially Allen's plan, and was subsequently approved by Tennessee voters and remains the law except that the U.The idea apparently was well-received by a majority of Nashville-area voters, however; Allen was elected to a full term in November 1976