Original sentence: He is married to Svetlana Stone Wachtell and has five children from previous marriages, Diane Wachtell, Jennifer Wachtell, Cynthia Wachtell, Daniel Wachtell and Melanie Wachtell.Wachtell is discussed in Malcolm Gladwell's book Outliers, however he is considered to be an extremely private person
Edited sentence: He is married to Svetlana Stone Wachtell and has five children from previous marriages, Diane Wachtell, Jennifer Wachtell, Cynthia Wachtell, Daniel Wachtell, and Melanie Wachtell.Wachtell is discussed in Malcolm Gladwell's book Outliers; however, he is considered to be an extremely private person