Original sentence: It is the first coastal town of the Wild Atlantic Way when starting on the northern end.The town has a scenic location on the western shore of Lough Foyle, approximately  from Derry, which lies across the border in Northern Ireland
Edited sentence: It is the first coastal town of the Wild Atlantic Way when starting on the northern end of the journey.The town has a beautiful scenic location on the western shore of Lough Foyle, approximately  from Derry, which lies across the border in Northern Ireland