Original sentence: In fact, after high school he wanted to go straight into studios but was advised by a drummer form Anthony B's band (Stephen Snagga Richards)who was his close friend at the time, to take further steps in his education first before taking on music
Edited sentence: In fact, after high school he wanted to go straight into studios but was advised by a drummer form Anthony B's band (Stephen Snagga Richards) who was his close friend at the time, to take further steps in his education first before taking on music