Original sentence: In the manuscript, it is written as such that Ken Arok was saved many times by divine interceptions.Ken Arok became indulges in gambling, plunder and rapine.There is a scene in Mount Kryar Lejar that gods descends in conference and Batara Guru (Shiva) declares Ken Arok as his son
Edited sentence: In the manuscript, it is written as such that Ken Arok was saved many times by divine intervention.Ken Arok indulged in gambling, plunder and rapine.There is a scene in Mount Kryar Lejar wherein gods descend in conference and Batara Guru (Shiva) declares Ken Arok as his son