Original sentence: Eric Jones is a former part-time NASCAR driver.He ran in the Busch Series and had some of his best success in the Craftsman Truck Series
Edited sentence: Eric Jones is a current part-time NASCAR driver.He runs mainly in the Busch Series, but has had some of his best success in the Craftsman Truck Series.Jones, thought by many to be an incredible talent, was never recognized and given an opportunity to compete on the same level as others in the stock car series.Many who have seen Eric drive proper equipment (such as in karting or in the Skip Barber series) still hold out hope that he would one day be recognized and given an opportunity to showcase his talent.Speculation is that while Jones was known well in open wheel circles, not enough time was spent exposing him to the few individuals that could have placed him in one of the few rides available that would have shown his talent