Original sentence: As a Christian Aid consultant Barnaby Miln devised and set up the first Fairtrade fortnight.It was launched in Edinburgh by Lady Marion Fraser LT on 12 February 1997 and held from 1 to 14  March 1997 throughout Scotland where  supporters of development charities like Christian Aid and Oxfam demanded their local supermarket stock fairtrade products
Edited sentence: As a Christian Aid consultant Barnaby Miln set up the first Fairtrade fortnight in Scotland.It was launched in Edinburgh by Lady Marion Fraser LT on 12 February 1997 and held from 1 to 14  March 1997 throughout Scotland where supporters of development charities like Christian Aid and Oxfam demanded their local supermarket stock fairtrade products