Original sentence: Betty Ong (February 5, 1956 – September 11, 2001), born in San Francisco of Harry Snr and Yee-gum Oy, was a Chinese-American flight attendant on board American Airlines Flight 11 when it was flown into the North Tower of the World Trade Center as part of the September 11, 2001 Terrorist Attack
Edited sentence: Betty Ong (February 5, 1956 - September 11, 2001), born 5th of February in San Francisco of Harry Snr and Yee-gum Oy, was a Chinese-American flight attendant on board American Airlines Flight 11 when it was flown into the North Tower of the World Trade Center as part of the September 11, 2001 Terrorist Attack.ID=8.Later, the American public honoured her as a true American hero for her calmness on the flight and the fact that her phone call saved many lives as other planes were planned to be hijacked.The tribute to Betty Ong as a true heroine of the tragic day remains and continues at the website:.com/september11victims/VictimInfo