Original sentence: Hidden behind the washing machines in a office, Grace pays an attendant for some concoction.The video then follows a longboarder who skates along a road to get this medicine which is being made for her by Jack and Luke Patterson
Edited sentence: Hidden behind the washing machines in a office, Grace pays an attendant for some strange concoction.The video then follows a longboarder who shows off some pretty impressive moves as she skates along a road to get this strange medicine which is being made for her by Jack and Luke Patterson