Original sentence: Creek enlisted in the U.Creek's squad was escorting a convoy of trucks bringing supplies to Vandergrift Command Base.He completed recruit training with the 1st Recruit Training Battalion, Recruit Training Regiment, Marine Corps Recruit Depot San Diego, California, in March 1968.He first saw duty as a rifleman with Company E, 2nd Battalion, 27th Marines, Regimental Landing Team 27, 1st Marine Division.He is buried in the Llano City Cemetery, Amarillo, Texas.In September 1968, he was assigned duty as fire team leader with Company I, 3rd Battalion, 9th Marines, 3rd Marine Division and was promoted to lance corporal on November 1, 1968.LCpl Creek's name is inscribed on the Vietnam Veterans' Memorial ("The Wall") on Panel 32W Line 025.Lance Corporal Creek's medals include:.Marine Corps on January 16, 1968.The convoy was ambushed
Edited sentence: Creek enlisted in the United States Marine Corps on January 16, 1968.Creek's medals include:.Creek's name is inscribed on the Vietnam Veterans' Memorial on Panel 32W, Line 025.Creek's squad was escorting a convoy of trucks bringing supplies to Vandergrift Command Base when it was ambushed.He completed recruit training with the 1st Recruit Training Battalion, Marine Corps Recruit Depot San Diego, California, in March 1968.He first saw duty as a rifleman with Company E, 2nd Battalion, 27th Marines, 1st Marine Division.He is buried in the Llano City Cemetery in Amarillo.In September 1968, he was assigned duty as fire team leader with Company I, 3rd Battalion 9th Marines, 3rd Marine Division and was promoted to lance corporal on November 1, 1968