Original sentence: According to an issue in Time Magazine, some Afrocentrists assert that blacks -- who indeed have more of the skin pigment than other peoples -- possess superior and supernatural traits that can be ascribed to the magical qualities of neuromelanin, a little-studied substance in the brain.Afrocentrists commonly argue that Eurocentrism has led to the neglect or denial of the contributions of African people and focused instead on a generally European-centered model of world civilization and history.However, while these charges may be reported accurately, it is not usually incorporated into Afrocentric curriculum and is seen by many afrocentric academics as one of many trivial distractions to the central issue.Like most other mainstream scholars, she rejects James's views on the ground that his sources predate the deciphering of Egyptian hieroglyphs.Philosophically, Afrocentrism is often compared to Eurocentrism; however, the validity of this comparison is heavily debated
Edited sentence: Afrocentrism is often compared to Eurocentrism; the validity of this comparison is heavily debated.Afrocentrists commonly argue that Eurocentrism has led to the neglect or denial of the contributions of African people and focused instead on a European-centered model of world civilization and history.Levin also points out that not one of the 1500 discoveries listed in Asimov's Chronology of Science and Discovery (1989) was made by a Negroid people.Like most other mainstream scholars, she rejects James's views on the ground that his sources predate the decipherment of Egyptian hieroglyphs.Michael Levin writes:.Professor Ibrahaim Sundiata claims these willful distortions of history are not usually incorporated into Afrocentric curricula; however, according to Time magazine "these fallacies are being included in public school multicultural courses in a growing number of U.Some Afrocentrists assert that blacks, who indeed have more of the skin pigment than other peoples, possess superior and supernatural traits which can be ascribed to the magical qualities of neuromelanin, a little-studied substance in the brain.cities and espoused in black-studies departments on some college campuses"