Original sentence: He would lead the Eagles and their new found confidence to a 6 game winning streak which led the \agles first playoff berth.Not only did they win the Region 6-5A Brentwood High School for the first time in school history.Prior to the Dickson County game on October 6, Cordell was suspended for stealing a freakin hamburger from the school cafeteria,that we all know he could have paid for, leading many to refer to him as the "hamburglar.Something might of happened in the 2007 season, but frankly nobody can recall... Did they play that year, or was that the hold-out year
Edited sentence: He would lead the Eagles and their new found confidence to a 6 game winning streak which led the Eagles first playoff berth.Not only did they win the Region 6-5A title but the beat both Ravenwood High School and Brentwood High School for the first time in school history.Prior to the Dickson County game on October 6, Cordell was suspended for stealing a hamburger from the school cafeteria, leading many to refer to him as the "hamburglar