Original sentence: Chopin's friend and traveling companion, Tytus Woyciechowski, returned to Poland to enlist.Later that month, in Warsaw, the November Uprising erupted.These outcries of a "tormented heart" found musical expression in his Scherzo in B Minor, Op.When, in September of 1831, Chopin himself, traveling from Vienna to Paris, learned that the uprising had been crushed, he poured "profanities and blasphemies" into the pages of a little journal that he would keep hidden to the end of his life
Edited sentence: Alone in Vienna, Chopin, afflicted by nostalgia, disappointed in his hopes of giving concerts and publishing, matured and acquired spiritual depth.From a romantic poet he grew into an inspired bard who intuited the past, present and future of his country.Later that month the November 1830 Uprising broke out, and his traveling companion Tytus Woyciechowski returned to Poland to enlist.Only now, at this distance, did he see all of Poland from the proper perspective, and understand what was great and truly beautiful in her, the tragedy and heroism of her vicissitudes.These outcries of a tormented heart found musical expression in his Scherzo in B Minor, Op.When, on the way from Vienna to Paris, in September 1831 he learned in Stuttgart that the November Uprising had been crushed, he poured profanities and blasphemies into the pages of a little journal that he would keep hidden to the end of his life