Original sentence: In November 2005, and again in October 2006, the University was confirmed as one of Australia’s leading research universities, having received significantly more funding than any other Australian university from the Australian Research Council.Located on Sydney's southwest rural fringe, the Camden campus houses research farms for agriculture and veterinary science.The University library is the largest in the southern hemisphere, with a collection of more than 5.1 million items
Edited sentence: In November 2005, the University of Sydney was confirmed as one of Australia’s leading research universities, when it was again the recipient of the most grants of any Australian university from the Australian Research Council.Located on Sydney's south-west rural fringe, the Camden campus houses research farms for agriculture and veterinary science.Numerous museums and galleries are part of the university.The University library is the largest in the southern hemisphere, with a collection of over 5.1 million items.The reputation of one of Australia’s most reputable tertiary institutions was damaged as a result