Original sentence: The more popular identification among modern scholars, of Sinai as al-Madhbah at Petra, would imply that the wilderness of Sin was roughly equatable with the central Arabah.The wilderness of Sin is mentioned by the bible as being one of the places that the Israelites wandered during their Exodus; the similarly named wilderness of Zin is also mentioned by the bible as having been a location through which the Israelites travelled
Edited sentence: The more popular identification among modern scholars, of Sinai as Mount Horab at Elat and the territory north through the Arabah to al-Madhbah at Petra, would imply that the wilderness of Sin was roughly equatable with the central Arabah.The wilderness of Sin is mentioned by the Bible as being one of the places that the Israelites wandered during their Exodus; the similarly named wilderness of Zin is also mentioned by the Bible as having been a location through which the Israelites travelled