Original sentence: The impact of the medium of television, labeled by Marshall McLuhan as the timid giant, is such that even the small minority that don't watch it at all, are indirectly influenced by their relationship with those who do
Edited sentence: The impact of the medium of television, labeled by Marshall McLuhan as the timid giant, is such that even the small minority of people that don't watch it at all, are indirectly influenced by their relationship with those who do