Original sentence: On 16 September 2018, SMRT Corporation (SMRT Trains) abruptly announced that Singapore Rail Engineering(SRE) will halt refurbishment works permanently, with about 3 units already refurbished
Edited sentence: Thankfully, on 16 September 2018, SMRT Corporation (SMRT Trains) abruptly announced that Singapore Rail Engineering(SRE) will halt refurbishment works permanently, with about 3 units already refurbished