Original sentence: Women pregnant in circumstances their cultures deem to be undesirable (such as out of wedlock) have faced varying degrees of societal and/or legal pressure to place their children for adoption
Edited sentence: Even in the modern day West some birthmothers feel that the pressure placed on them by making an adoption plan with adoptive parents prior to the birth of their child eventually led them to relinquish a child unwillingly.Historically, women pregnant in culturally undesirable circumstances (such as out of wedlock) have faced various degrees of legal and societal coercion to relinquish their children for adoption