Original sentence: The shock of the 1973 energy crisis helped create an audience for his ideas, and he appealed to this new audience with the publication of  his 10,000-word essay "Energy Strategy: The Road Not Taken
Edited sentence: Subsequently, Lovins got the attention of a much wider audience with the publication of  his 10,000-word essay "Energy Strategy: The Road Not Taken.The shock of the 1973 energy crisis was unprecedented in the industrial West