Original sentence: One shot hit Pte Edward Webster of the Australian 2/2nd Anti-Tank Regiment in the chest.Several other Australian servicemen and civilians, and at least one MP, also suffered serious injuries at the PX.Webster died soon afterwards
Edited sentence: An American soldier, Private Joseph Hoffman received a fractured skull.In the confusion, Private Grant managed to run back towards the PX.Ledson was later discharged due to his injuries.On his way he hit an Australian over the head with his shotgun, breaking the butt.The first shot hit Gunner Edward S.Webster of the Australian 2/2nd Anti-Tank Regiment in the chest killing him instantly, Private Kenneth Henkel was hit in the cheek and forearm, Private Ian Tieman was hit in the chest, Private Frank Corrie was hit in the thigh, Sapper De Vosso was hit in the thigh, Lance Corporal Richard Ledson had a compound fracture of the left ankle and was wounded in the left thigh and left hand, civilian Joseph Hanlon was wounded in the leg and 18-year-old civilian Walter Maidment was also wounded