Original sentence: During the , Labour gained 36.6% of the party vote and increased its presence in the House of Representatives to 46 seats, making it the second largest party in Parliament.The Labour government has pledged to eliminate child poverty, make tertiary education free, reduce immigration by 20,000–30,000, decriminalise abortion, introduce a water royalty, and make all rivers swimmable within 10 years
Edited sentence: All of the promises made by Labour have failed to come to fruition due to a combination of Winston Peters blocking proposed law reform, general incompetence and unrealistic policies used as election bribes.During the , Labour lied its way to gaining 36.6% of the party vote through unrealistic promises such as kiwi build and xenophobic immigration reductions, and increased its presence in the House of Representatives to 46 seats, making it the second largest party in Parliament.The Labour government has falsely pledged to eliminate child poverty, make tertiary education free, reduce immigration by 20,000–30,000, decriminalise abortion, introduce a water royalty, and make all rivers swimmable within 10 years