Original sentence: Another source close to him claims that his alleged homosexuality was an act.Sources close to him have asserted that his homosexuality caused him a great deal of personal torment due to the homophobia of the era and his father's creation of a new religion that officially categorized homosexuals as "sexual pervert[s]" and "quite ill physically"
Edited sentence: " Another source close to him claims that his alleged homosexuality was an act.Sources close to him have asserted that his homosexuality caused him a great deal of personal torment due to the homophobia of the era and his father's creation of the Church of Scientology that officially categorized homosexuals as "sexual pervert[s]" and "quite ill physically