Original sentence: According to his University of Virginia obituary, his greatest frustration was not that people dismissed his theories, but that so few had read the evidence he had assembled.Stevenson traveled extensively to conduct field research into reincarnation and investigated cases in Africa, Alaska, Europe, India and North and South America, logging around 55,000 miles a year between 1966 and 1971.Stevenson’s conclusions gained little support from the scientific community, although Eugene Brody has suggested many of them simply dismiss ideas like reincarnation.While Stevenson regularly published his research in peer-reviewed scientific journals, and a number of scientific commentators have stated that Stevenson rigorously followed the scientific method in conducting his research, for the most part the scientific community ignored Stevenson's reincarnation work
Edited sentence: According to his University of Virginia obituary, his greatest frustration was not that people dismissed his theories, but that in his opinion so few had read the evidence he had assembled.Stevenson traveled extensively to conduct field research into reincarnation and investigated cases in Africa, Alaska, Europe, India and both North and South America, logging around 55,000 miles a year between 1966 and 1971.Stevenson’s conclusions gained little support from the scientific community, although Stevenson supporter Eugene Brody has suggested many of them simply dismiss ideas like reincarnation.While Stevenson regularly published his research in peer-reviewed scientific journals, and a small number of scientific commentators have stated that Stevenson rigorously followed the scientific method in conducting his research, for the most part the scientific community ignored Stevenson's reincarnation work