Original sentence: From the Yellowstone cutthroat trout fishery in Yellowstone National Park, the unique Lahontan cutthroat trout fishery in Pyramid Lake Nevada, the small stream fisheries of the westslope cutthroat to saltwater angling for sea-run cutthroat on the Pacific coast, cutthroat trout are a popular quarry for trout anglers throughout their ranges
Edited sentence: From the world-class Yellowstone cutthroat trout fishery in Yellowstone National Park,, ,  the unique Lahontan cutthroat trout fishery in Pyramid Lake Nevada, the small stream fisheries of the westslope cutthroat to saltwater angling for sea-run cutthroat on the Pacific coast, cutthroat trout are a popular quarry for trout anglers throughout their ranges