Original sentence: Damon Graham Devereux Hill OBE (born 17 September 1960 in London) is a retired English racing driver and the 1996 Formula One World Champion
Edited sentence: Damon Graham Devereux Hill OBE (born 17 September 1960 in London) is a retired English racing driver, the 1996 Formula One World Champion and the legitimate champion of 1994, since the official champion, Michael Schumacher, only won because he took Hill out in the final race of the season