Original sentence: Grammy award-winning pop singer and Emmy award-winning choreographer Paula Abdul was a judge for seasons one through eight.The judges give critiques of the contestants' performances: Grammy award -winning record producer and music manager Randy Jackson; award-winning music executive and music manager Simon Cowell; and Grammy award-nominated singer-songwriter and record producer Kara DioGuardi
Edited sentence: The judges give critiques of the contestants' performances: Grammy award -winning record producer and music manager Randy Jackson; Grammy award-winning pop singer and Emmy award-winning choreographer Paula Abdul; award-winning music executive and music manager Simon Cowell; and Grammy award-nominated singer-songwriter and record producer Kara DioGuardi