Original sentence: Dart Wars is a sport played with Nerf guns primarily by high school teenagers at a suburban Cincinnati high school wherein players shoot each other in order to eliminate opponents.Once the game has begun, one can be shot anywhere, anytime and games can last weeks, even months
Edited sentence: Dart Wars is a sport played with Nerf guns primarily by high school teenagers wherein players shoot each other in order to eliminate opponents.Perhaps the most exciting element of Dart Wars is that once the game has begun, one can be shot anywhere, anytime and games can last weeks, even months