Original sentence: Many Jews and some Christians object to this term, which they perceive as a rejection of what is in their view legitimate Jewish land.The designation refers to the West Bank, Gaza Strip and East Jerusalem, but does not include the Golan Heights or the Sinai Peninsula, which were also captured by Israel in 1967, though the Sinai Peninsula was later returned to Egypt, the West Bank remains a a highly disputed area
Edited sentence: Some Jews and Christians object to this term, which they perceive as a rejection of what is in their view legitimate Jewish land.The designation refers to the West Bank, Gaza Strip and East Jerusalem, but does not include the Golan Heights or the Sinai Peninsula, which were also captured by Israel in 1967, though the latter was returned to Egypt,  the former is still occupied by Israel and remains a highly disputed area