Original sentence: A number of media reports have made reference to the influx of young professionals, artists and 'hipsters' to the region, drawn by the region's natural environment, proximity to the city and access to city-style cafes and restaurants.The region's iconic landscapes and its proximity to Melbourne have made it a destination for film and television production
Edited sentence: A plethora of media reports has made reference to the influx of young professionals, artists and 'hipsters' to the region, drawn by the region's natural beauty, proximity to the city and access to city-style cafes and restaurants.The region's iconic landscapes and its proximity to Melbourne have made it a popular destination for film and television production