Original sentence: After graduating from the College of William and Mary in 1988 with a degree in Theatre, Holman moved to New York and worked in various positions in the publishing industry, eventually becoming the assistant to a literary agent.Orange Prize for Fiction, Best Novel nominee (2005) : The Mammoth Cheese
Edited sentence: After graduating from The College of William & Mary in 1988 with a degree in Theatre, Holman moved to New York and worked in various positions in the publishing industry, eventually becoming the assistant to a literary agent.Orange Prize for Fiction, Best Novel nominee (2005): The Mammoth Cheese