Original sentence: High Raise is a fell in the English Lake District, not to be confused with another High Raise situated in the Far Eastern part of the Lake District.High Raise is regarded as the most central mountain in the district and this position allows for fine views of the surrounding mountains and beyond.The Stonethwaite approach gives the walker a chance to climb the neighbouring fell of Ullscarf, while the route from Great Langdale allows visits to the Langdale Pikes either before or after climbing High Raise.With a height of 762 metres (2,500 feet), it is the highest point in the central fells of Lakeland
Edited sentence: High Raise is a fell in the English Lake District not to be confused with another High Raise situated in the Far Eastern part of the Lake District.High Raise is in fact commonly regarded as the most central mountain in the district and this position gives a fine viewpoint to admire the surrounding mountains and beyond.High Raise is not one of the most spectacular mountains in the district; however, with a height of 762 metres (2,500 feet) it is the highest point in the central fells of Lakeland.The Stonethwaite approach gives the walker a chance to climb the neighbouring fell of Ullscarf, while the route from Great Langdale allows visits to the splendid Langdale Pikes either before or after climbing High Raise