Original sentence: Alan Fisher; 2005, Chief Correspondent, now reporter on Al Jazeera International.Amanda Sergeant; 2007-2008, News Correspondent, current employment unknown.Anna Thomas; 2005-2008, News Correspondent, current employment unknown.Cordelia Kretzchmar, current employment unknown.Debra Stephenson; 2007, Correspondent, current employment unknown.Helen Fospero; 1997-2002, US Correspondent, now presenter on Five News and Sky News.Jackie Brambles; 1999-2006, Showbiz Correspondent, presents Loose Women, ITV, but will leave in summer 2009.Jackie Kabler; 1998-2008, Midlands Correspondent, now freelance presenter and reporter.Julian Druker, continues as freelance journalist, returns to GMTV occasionally.Michael Underwood; 2005-2008, Entertainment Correspondent, now freelance TV presenter.Michael Wilson; 1993-1995, Business Correspondent, now Business Editor for Sky News.Richard Mackney, continues as freelance journalist, returns to GMTV occasionally.Spencer Hawken; 2005-2007, Consumer Correspondent, now actor and Freelance Journalist.Sue Saville; 1993-1998, Chief Correspondent, now Medical Correspondent on ITV News.Tiffany Royce, current employment unknown
Edited sentence: Alan Fisher.Amanda Sergeant.Anna Thomas.Business Correspondent.Business Editor for Sky News.Chief Correspondent.Consumer Correspondent.Continues as freelance journalist , returns to GMTV occasionally.Cordelia Kretzchmar.Current Postion.Debra Stephenson.Entertainment Correspondent/ Entertainment Today.Entertainment Today/ Entertainment Correspondent.Freelance TV presenter.Freelance journalist , returns to GMTV occasionally.Freelance presenter and reporter.Helen Fospero.Jackie Brambles.Jackie Kabler.Julian Druker.Medical Correspondent on ITV News.Michael Underwood.Michael Wilson.Midlands Correspondent.News Correspondent.News Correspondent & Occasionall Newsreader.Presented Loose Women, ITV, but since left.Presenter on Five News and Sky News.Reporter on Al Jazeera International.Richard Mackney.Showbiz Correspondent.Spencer Hawken.Sue Saville.Tiffany Royce.US Correspondent.Years at GMTV.actor and Freelance Journalist