Original sentence: The Commission stated that a minimum of 4.5  million victims perished with an additional 3 million outside of the Ukrainian SSR.The Commission was partially funded by donations from the Ukrainian Diaspora
Edited sentence: ==Documentary evidence exhibits entered into Commission.Commission is unable to affirm the existence of preconceived plan to organize a famine in Ukraine, in order to ensure the success of Moscow’s  policy.Commission majority does not believe that the 1932-33 famine was systematically organized to crush the Ukrainian nation once and for all.Documentary evidence exhibits entered into Commission presented predominantly by  World Congress of Free Ukrainians, including “Harvest of Sorrow” by Robert Conquest and many other documents by same author, James Mace as also books  Ukrainian Diaspora like “Ukrainian Holocaust of 1933” by Wasyl Hryshko, “Black Deeds of Kremlin” 2 Vol by Dobrus and Pidhaynyy, V.Final report consist a lot of controversy facts and figures:.In addition to Russophobes sentences like “Soldiers usually Russian or at least not Ukrainians”, “those sent to Ukraine were Russians or at least non-Ukrainians” etc.In same time Commission noted what ”only 3.7 tons were collected by authorities as compared with 7.7 million tons in 1930 and 7.0 million tons in 1931.Kubiyovych work etc.Members of Commission selected and invited by World Congress of Free Ukrainians.None of them represent own country or country authority/institution and act as individual.The  Commission majority deems it plausible that the constituent elements of genocide were in existence at the time of the famine.The Commission stated that a minimum of 4.5  million victims (while erroneously assumed Ukrainians as sole nation at Ukrainian SSR)   perished with an additional 3 million outside of the Ukrainian SSR.The Commission was funded by donations from the worldwide Ukrainian Diaspora.The grain supplies imposed on Ukraine in July 1932 constitute the immediate case of famine which broke out two months later.This invitation resulted in Commission splitting into a number of separate opinions.World Congress of Free Ukrainians as petitioner invited a Commission to find what the famine was an act of genocide.“Very little or nothing was done to provide some relief to starving masses.” and “by end of April Ukraine received 34.3 million poods of grain”