Original sentence: Inside one of the cases were nine pornographic photographs of Lesley Ann Downey, naked and with a scarf tied around her mouth.The suitcase also contained two spools of tape, on one of which was a 13-minute recording of Downey screaming and pleading for someone to help her
Edited sentence: Inside one of the cases were the nine photographs taken of Lesley Ann Downey, naked and with a scarf tied around her mouth, and the 13-minute tape recording of Downey screaming and pleading for someone to help her