Original sentence: Futhermore, Konop has received criticism for campaigning in houses of worship.Konop's tenure as commissioner was also shrouded in controversy as he was caught driving without auto insurance, and was forced to settle out of pocket after causing an accident.Similarly, many have stated Konop has consistently violated a Clean Campaign Pledge by lashing out at rival campaigns
Edited sentence: During his tenure as commissioner, he was caught driving without auto insurance and was forced to settle out of pocket after causing an accident