Original sentence: Another project in early stages is a deep ice core drilling project, also located in Greenland which is expected to shed light on the northeast Greenland ice stream and its contributions to a rise in sea level.Dorthe Dahl-Jensen (born 8 September 1958, Copenhagen Denmark) is a Danish palaeoclimatology professor and researcher at the Centre for Ice and Climate at the Niels Bohr Institute, University of Copenhagen in Denmark.EU Descartes Prize (as part of the European Project for Ice Coring in Antarctica (EPICA)) (2008)
Edited sentence: Another project in early stages is a deep ice core drilling project, also located in Greenland which will hopefully shed light on the northeast Greenland ice stream and its contributions to a rise in sea level.Dorthe Dahl-Jensen (born 8 September 1958, Copenhagen Denmark) is a Danish palaeoclimatologist professor and researcher at the Centre for Ice and Climate at the Niels Bohr Institute, University of Copenhagen in Denmark.EU Descartes Prize (as part of EPICA (European Project for Ice Coring in Antarctica)) (2008)