Original sentence: Also Assiut has Nile, mountains, a desert, Natural Parks, a site for an international hospital, rural scenery, gardens, high-level shops, luxury restaurants, and an excellent transport net making it a tourism destination in Egypt.In one area, Mohammad Mahmoud St, Al Qessaria previously-Assiut city, full of the Islamic monuments and Masjids, such as Galal Al-Deen Al-Siuty and Al-Mojahideen Masjid, the Ottoman agencies stand still to be an evidence of the great role of Assiut in the Egyptian commerce.Just enjoy the views through one of the many luxury floating hotels and restaurants which serve on the Nile.The Magic River adds its value in Assiut also; with a length of 160 Km the Nile flows from Dierout north to Sedfa south forming a natural vista with the various tiresome and mundane scenes on every side
Edited sentence: Also Assiut has Nile, mountains, a desert, a Natural Parks, a seed for an international hospital, fascinating rural lives, gardens, high-level shops, luxury restaurants, and an excellent transport net to be a perfect tourism destination in Egypt.In a fascinating area, in Mohammad Mahmoud St, Al Qessaria previously-Assiut city, full of the Islamic monuments and Masjids, such as Galal Al-Deen Al-Siuty and Al-Mojahideen Masjid, the Ottoman agencies stand still to be an evidence of the great role of Assiut in the Egyptian commerce.Just enjoy the fascinating views through one of the many luxury floating hotels and restaurants which serve on the Nile.The Magic River adds its value in Assiut also; with a length of 160 Km the Nile flows from Dierout north to Sedfa south forming a marvelous natural scene with the various lives on its sides