Original sentence: Beyond Payutto, other critics have included a number of other Thai scholars, academics, monks and social critics.Payutto has been criticized in return by a number of Thai academics and news commentators for being "narrow-minded", "attached to scriptures", "dogmatist" and performing sloppy research
Edited sentence: Payutto has been criticized in return, however, by Thai academics and news commentators for being "dogmatist" and performing sloppy research