Original sentence: Gene Barge, a founding member of  the 1960's band The Church Street Five, was born in Norfolk, Virginia (USA) circa 1929, is an accomplished tenor and alto saxophonist and composer in several bands
Edited sentence: Gene Barge, a founding member of  the 1960s band The Church Street Five, was born in Norfolk, Virginia (USA) circa 1929, is an accomplished tenor and alto saxophonist and composer in several bands