Original sentence: ALL the presenters were taken on as UNPAID presenters and asked to work for free for the first six months (quite embarrassing for such a large organisation like Sunrise Radio Ltd to do that).The management had a policy of playing only asian music.The original presenters of 'Yaar Radio' can were: Maya, Ranj Rekhi, Sonia Paneser, Danny Deol, Dee Singh, Kim Boss, Vinny Virdee(aka: Jas 'The Man'), Ellia Khan(aka: Noreen).The station was rightfully crowned 'LONDON'S FIRST YOUNG ASIAN HIT MUSIC STATION'.Yarr Radio is a broadcasts on Digital Radio in various regions of the UK
Edited sentence: ALL the presenters were taken on as UNPAID presenters and asked to work for free for the first six months (quite embaressing for such a large organisation like Sunrise Radio Ltd to do that).REMEMBER: YAAR RADIO WAS THE FIRST ASIAN RADIO STATION IN LONDON AIMED AT SECOND GENERATION ASIANS...---... CLUB ASIA IS THE SECOND - HOWEVER BECAUSE CA GAINED AN am LICENCE THEY WERE HEARD EVERYWHERE UNLIKE YAAR WHICH WAS ONLY ON DAB FOR THE FIRST 18MONTHS OR SO.The likes of Maya, Ranj Rekhi, Sonia Paneser, Danny Deol, Dee Singh, Kim Boss, Vinny Virdee(aka: Jas 'The Man' ex CLUB ASIA, now at the BBC ASIAN NETWORK), Ellia Khan(aka: Noreen ex-CLUB ASIA  now BBC ASIAN NETWORK).The original presenters of 'Yaar Radio' can never be beaten.The presenters at the time pleaded with management to allow them to play NON-ASIAN music too, they were told 'NO.The station was rightfuly crowned 'LONDONS FIRST YOUNG ASIAN HIT MUSIC STATION'.Yarr Radio is a broadcasts on Digital Radio in verious regions of the UK