Original sentence: Managed to secure job with the Montreal Herald when he was just twelve years of age to help his mother raise family that included 3 siblings after his father died suddenly from serving military time for the British 24th Foot Regiment stationed in Canada
Edited sentence: Managed to secure job with the Montreal Herald when he was just twelve years of age to help his mother raise family that included 3 siblings after his father passed away suddenly from serving military time for the British 24th Foot Regiment stationed in Canada