Original sentence: In the first round of the playoffs, the Lakers built a 3-1 series lead, but ultimately fell to the Suns in seven games
Edited sentence: Despite Bryant's remarkable game winning shot in Game 4, the Lakers broke down, and ultimately fell to the Suns in seven games.In the first round of the playoffs, the Lakers played well enough (3-1 series lead) to come within six seconds of eliminating the second-seeded Phoenix Suns