Original sentence: Cities or regions with significant Laotian Americans include the Bay Area (numbering at about 11,545), the Sacramento metropolitan area (9,814),Seattle-Tacoma (8,560)  Minneapolis – Saint Paul (7,576), Dallas-Fort Worth (7,500), , San Diego (7,002), Fresno (6,381), Providence (6,291) Smaller Laotian communities can be found around Anchorage, Alaska, Lafayette, Louisiana and southeastern Washington
Edited sentence: Cities or regions with significant Laotian Americans include the Bay Area (numbering at about 11,545), the Sacramento Metropolitan Area (9,814),Seattle Metropolitan Area (9,190)  Minneapolis – Saint Paul (7,576), Dallas-Fort Worth (7,500) , San Diego (7,002), Fresno (6,381), Providence (6,291) Smaller Laotian communities can be found around Anchorage, Alaska, Lafayette, Louisiana and southeastern Washington