Original sentence: In preceeding years, the Towakoni and Waco tribes, allied with various Comanche bands, had regularly raided Texas settlements.Some historians consider the rebellion to be the beginning of the Texas Revolution;  although "premature ...[the Fredonian Rebellion]] sparked the powder for later success".Unahppy with Benjamin's tone and the increasing tension, Mexican authorities revoked the land grant in October and instructed both Edwards brothers to leave the country
Edited sentence: In preceding years, the Towakoni and Waco tribes, allied with various Comanche bands, had regularly raided Texas settlements.Some historians consider the rebellion to be the beginning of the Texas Revolution;  although "premature ...the Fredonian Rebellion sparked the powder for later success".Unhappy with Benjamin's tone and the increasing tension, Mexican authorities revoked the land grant in October and instructed both Edwards brothers to leave the country