Original sentence: Fairfax County is the second richest county in the nation with an outstanding public school system, including Thomas Jefferson High School for Science and Technology, an award-winning magnet school.People seem to get along well
Edited sentence: Fairfax County is the second richest county in the nation with an outstanding schooling system, including Thomas Jefferson High School for Science and Technology, a magnet school revered to be the best high school in the nation.It is a lot more secular compared to the rest of the state.Northern Virginia is not very religious.People get along well and racism is almost non-existent.Religion plays minimal role in the lives of most people.The culture is also very liberal compared to rest of the state