Original sentence: August 6, 2009 - Bannister signs with Ottawa.December 10, 1998 - Anaheim trades Bannister to Anaheim for a 5th round draft pick.January 9, 1998 - Edmonton trades Bannister to Anaheim for Bobby Dollas.March 18, 1997 - Tampa Bay trades Bannister and a 6th round draft pick (Peter Sarno) to Edmonton for Jeff Norton.September 8, 2000 - Bannister signs with the Rangers
Edited sentence: August 6, 2009 - Bannister signs with Ottawa Senators.December 10, 1998 - Anaheim trades Bannister to Tampa Bay for a fifth-round draft pick.January 9, 1998 - Edmonton trades Bannister to Mighty Ducks of Anaheim for Bobby Dollas.March 18, 1997 - Tampa Bay Lightning trades Bannister and a sixth-round draft pick (Peter Sarno) to Edmonton Oilers for Jeff Norton.September 8, 2000 - Bannister signs with the New York Rangers