Original sentence: Following the approval of the plan and the intensive militant attacks on Erez crossing and the Erez industrial zone, it was decided to close the Erez Industrial Zone and move its factories to development towns such as Ashkelon, Dimona, Yeruham and Sderot.Many factories were shut down earlier, because of increased attacks
Edited sentence: Following the approval of the plan and the intensive terrorist attacks on Erez crossing and the Erez industrial zone, it was decided to close the Erez Industrial Zone and move its factories to development towns such as Ashkelon, Dimona, Yeruham and Sderot.Many factories were shut down earlier, because of increased Palestinian terrorism and attempts by Palestinian employees to murder their Jewish employers