Original sentence: Promoted to Adjudant (Warrant Officer) in July 1948, he joined the 5e BCCP under Major Grall, then Major Romain-Desfossés, and takes part in the operations of Commando Group 1 under Captain Picherit, who he services as second-in-command, in central and northen Vietnam
Edited sentence: Promoted to Adjudant (Warrant Officer) in July 1948, he joined the 5e BCCP under Major Grall, then Major Romain-Desfossés, and takes part in the operations of Commando Group 1 under Captain Picherit, who he services as second-in-command, in central and northern Vietnam