Original sentence: Dimick B.Huntington in his journal claims that Tutsegabit was in Salt Lake City on September 10.It is known that Tutsegabit was in Salt Lake City, Utah on September 1, 1857 and that he was ordained an elder by Brigham Young.. To have been present at Mountain Meadows when the massacre occurred, he would have had to have returned to southern Utah by September 11.Some have accused Tutsegabit of being one of the people behind the Mountain Meadows massacre.Tutsegabit was a 19th century leader of the Piedes bands of the Piute tribe.Wilford Woodruff records Yuysegabit's ordination as an elder in his September 16 journal entry, but Woodruff  does not indicate what day the actual ordination occurred on
Edited sentence: Huntington in his journal claims that Tutsegabit was in Salt Lake City on September 10th.In fact Dimick B.It is known that Tutsegabit was in Salt Lake City on September 1st, 1857 and that he was ordained an elder by Brigham Young.It seems hard to believe that he was back in Southern Utah by the 11th of September.Some have accused Tutsegabit of being one of the people behind the Mountain Meadows Massacre.Tutsegabit was a 19th Century leader of the Piedes bands of the Piute tribe.Wilford Woodruff records this ordination as an elder of Tutsegabit as occurring on September 16th, but even at that it is not entirely clear that he means that it happened that day