Original sentence: He talked about the story completely ignoring continuity (including its own, by critically misquoting Hipolita's speech between issues), having poorly-executed political overtones, and talked about it having sexist and racist themes throughout the story
Edited sentence: He talked about the story completely ignoring continuity (including its own, by critically misquoting Hippolyta's speech between issues), having poorly-executed political overtones, and talked about it having sexist and racist themes throughout the story