Original sentence: " Similar comments were left on Sarkeesian's Youtube account and her Wikipedia article was repeatedly vandalised, including the uploading of pornographic images.On May 17, 2012 Sarkeesian began a Kickstarter campaign to fund a series of short videos examining the use of gender tropes in video games.Though the Kickstarter was funded within 24 hours, with $113,099 out of its $6,000 goal pledged as of June 14, it receieved a large number of negative comments, including threats of death, rape, racial abuse and an extended attempt to have the campaign suspended; The Escapist referred to the commenters as a "misogynist horde", and Slate characterised the response as "absolute avalanche of misogynist abuse
Edited sentence: Her plans and fundraising on Kickstarter for a project consisting of a series of short videos examining the use of tropes in video games generated a rash of obscene retaliation from what the Escapist called a "misogynist horde,"  flooding her with sexist and racist messages on YouTube, and vandalizing a Wikipedia article about her with similar content.The reaction also included rape threats, death threats, and an extended attempt to suspend the Kickstarter campaign