Original sentence: Paper Heart currently has a 72% "Fresh" rating on Rotten Tomatoes, based on the consensus that "Paper Heart wallows in that irritating hipster preciousness known as "twee" for nearly its entire running time
Edited sentence: Paper Heart currently has a 90% "Fresh" rating on Rotten Tomatoes, based on the consensus that the film "worms its way under our skin from the start, keeping us laughing as it explores love and relationships from a strikingly original angle