Original sentence: After testing, doctors diagnosed him with spinal stenosis (a narrowing of the spinal canal), which effectively put an end to his football career.Cooper Manning, Archie's oldest son, was born in 1974.He is currently the highest paid player in the NFL(based on salary alone).Standing at 6'1",He was once an all-state high school receiver, catching touchdown passes from his little brother Peyton, and he was a hot commodity headed for the University of Mississippi
Edited sentence: After testing,doctors diagnosed him with spinal stenosis(a narrowing of the spinal canal),which effectively put an end to his football career.Cooper Manning,Archie's oldest son,was born in 1974.Standing at 6'1",He was once an all-state high school receiver,catching touchdown passes from his little brother Peyton , and he was a hot commodity headed for the University of Mississippi