Original sentence: Much of this is attributed to UVM’s location in Burlington, Vermont, a liberal city in a liberal state (after all, the state colors are green and gold).UVM is notorious for its relaxed atmosphere, liberal student body, and high drug usage among undergrads..  It is true that marijuana and alcohol are a large part of student social life,.University police, who are now Vermont state troopers,.and hallucinogens, although nowhere nearly as prevalent, are easily accessible.have increased their vigilance in perusing drug use violations
Edited sentence: It is true that marijuana and alcohol are a large part of student social life, and hallucinogens, although nowhere nearly as prevalent, are easily accessible.Much of this is attributed to UVM’s location in Burlington, Vermont, a notoriously liberal city in a notoriously liberal state (after all, the state color is green).UVM is notorious for its relaxed atmosphere, liberal student body, and high drug usage among undergrads.University police, who are now Vermont state troopers, have increased their vigilance in perusing drug use violations