Original sentence: Collins Park is a public park, that is located in Clongriffin in Dublin, that was officially opened by the Lord Mayor of Dublin in May 2009 and is owned by Dublin City Council.The park also feactures a skate-park, two playgrounds, six playing pitches, picnic areas with chess/draughts boards, natural woodlands and a peripheral running/cycle track.The park is also the Republic of Ireland's first "sustainible park" with five 50KW wind turbines protruding from the central linear water feature and providing power for public lighting, maintenance depots and football club changing rooms
Edited sentence: Collins Park is a public park located in Donaghmede in Dublin, adjacent to the new development of Clongriffin.Collins park has an area of 52 acres.It was officially opened by the Lord Mayor of Dublin in May 2009 and is owned and maintained by Dublin City Council.The park also has two playgrounds, six playing pitches, picnic areas with chess/draughts boards, a skate-park area, natural woodlands, an amphitheatre for outdoor events, and a 1.5 km running and cycle track.The park was originally opened in north Donaghmede in memory of popular Roman Catholic Parish Priest Father Joe Collins, and had both green spaces for walking and playing, and playing fields for various sports.The redeveloped park is Ireland's first "sustainable park" with five 50KW wind turbines projecting from a central linear water feature, providing power for public lighting, maintenance depots and changing rooms.The redeveloped park was opened by the Lord Mayor of Dublin, Eibhlin Byrne, and the Roman Catholic Archbishop of Dublin, Diarmuid Martin, on the 27 May 2009.Work on a long-planned redevlopment began in September 2007, to a design by Argentinian architectural practice Abelleyro and Romero, and the work, with a budget of 20 million euro, was completed in early 2009, on schedule and within budget