Original sentence: Attack of the Clones: Incredible Cross Sections, an official publication also written by Dr.SWTC attempts to physically rationalize the depiction of technology and science in the Star Wars franchise, an effort that has provoked mixed reactions from online fans and particularly amongst participants in the ongoing Star Trek versus Star Wars debate.Saxton, draws on material and insight available at SWTC.Star Trek versus Star Wars
Edited sentence: AOTC:ICS was the first technical material relating to Star Wars to fix real-world values to Star Wars technologies.His methodical and empirical methodology is reportedly disfavored by some at Lucasfilm who would prefer a less scientific view of the Star Wars franchise.His work is solely interested in establishing the limits and characteristics of Star Wars technology.Ironically, many members of his host's message board (that of Theforce.Saxton wrote some publications relating to Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones, including Attack of the Clones: Incredible Cross Sections; a "reference" book.The values he chose or derived were sufficiently high to be controversial in the world of science-fiction debating, especially to fans of the rival Star Trek franchise, and at the time there was a rather considerable outcry because of them.net's) dislike SWTC in general