Original sentence: Every July, Provo hosts the Stadium of Asses of Fire at BYU.The Independence Day festivites are quite popular among local residents and have featured such lame-ass figures as David Hasselhoff, Reba McEntire, Huey Lewis and the News and Sean Hannity
Edited sentence: Every July, Provo hosts the Stadium of Fire at BYU.It lies in Utah Valley, at 4,500 feet in elevation.Photographic virtual tour of Provo.The Independence Day festivites are quite popular among local residents and have featured such notable figures as David Hasselhoff, Reba McEntire, Huey Lewis and the News and Sean Hannity