Original sentence: His efforts in ending party patronage marked a change in politics in Nova Scotia that his successors, Dr.In 1993, the government of Donald Cameron was defeated by the Nova Scotia Liberal Party under Dr.John Savage, and John Hamm were able to follow and make appointments a transparent process.John Savage, ending 15 years of Tory rule
Edited sentence: His efforts in ending party patronage marked a change in politics in Nova Scotia that his successors, John Savage, and John Hamm were able to follow and make appointments a transparent process.In 1993, the government of Donald Cameron was defeated by the Nova Scotia Liberal Party under John Savage, ending 15 years of Tory rule