Original sentence: Carpenter served in sixteen major and minor campaigns and their related battles during the Civil War including; the 1862 Peninsula Campaign, battle of Antietam part of the Maryland Campaign, Campaign at Fredericksburg, the 1863 Second Battle of Winchester, Battle of Fairfield which were part of the Gettysburg Campaign, Chancellorsville (in Stoneman’s raid to the rear of Lee’s army), the 1864 The Wilderness (as aide-de-camp to Major General Phillip H.Sheridan), Siege of Petersburg, The Shenandoah Valley, Richmond Raid—also known as Sheridan’s raid, Trevilian Station, the Battle of Spotsylvania Court House & the Battle of Cold Harbor part of the Overland Campaign and the final 1865 Appomattox Campaign
Edited sentence: Carpenter served in sixteen campaigns and their related battles during the Civil War including; the 1862 Peninsula Campaign, Maryland Campaign, Campaign at Fredericksburg, the 1863 Gettysburg Campaign, Chancellorsville (in Stoneman’s raid to the rear of Lee’s army), the 1864 The Wilderness (as aide-de-camp to Major General Phillip H.Sheridan), Richmond Raid—also known as Sheridan’s raid, Overland Campaign and the final 1865 Appomattox Campaign