Original sentence: The book Pitman Painters by William Feaver, recording the development of the Ashington Group, 1934 to 1984, has been made into a play by Lee Hall, well known for Billy Elliot
Edited sentence: The book Pitman Painters by William Feaver, recording the development of the Ashington Group, 1934 to 1984, has been made into a  stage play by Lee Hall, well known for Billy Elliot