Original sentence: He also works as school-teacher in Kuz Kunar district and has serviced twice in military as conscript in 1980s.He first started singing Afghan folk songs in 1985.Rezwan Munawar (, born January 1, 1964 is a  Pashto folklore singer Afghan singer who started in 1985
Edited sentence: He also works as school-teacher in Kuz Kunar district and has serviced twice in military as conscript in 80s.He first started singing Afghan folk songs in 1985 due to his inner passion.Rezwan Munawar (, born January 1, 1964 is a famous Pashto folklore singer Afghan singer who started in 1985