Original sentence: Furthermore, the government aims to conserve the natural environment of the islands before they made into resorts by enforcing laws such as prohibition of catching turtles and reduction in the damage caused to the coral reefs.The Maldives are known for their natural environment including the blue ocean, white beaches, and clean air.The natural environment of the Maldives attracts tourists all over the world and every year
Edited sentence: Furthermore, the government aims to conserve the natural beauty of the islands before they made into resorts by enforcing laws such as prohibition of catching turtles and reduction in the damage caused to the coral reefs.The Maldives are known for their natural beauty including the blue ocean and white beaches, accompanied by clean air.The natural beauty of the Maldives attracts tourists all over the world and every year