Original sentence: In 1999 Simon & Schuster Interactive gave us Deer Avenger a spoof of the Deer Hunter series, in which a gun-toting deer attacks "stereotypes of various types of men, including rednecks, a jock, a yuppie and an ambiguously gay stereotype.The game was a translation of a computer game and by this time Sega had introduced its own rating system, so no content changes were required
Edited sentence: In 1999 Simon & Schuster Interactive gave us Deer Avenger a spoof of the Deer Hunter series "where you hunt down stereotypes of various types of men, including rednecks, a jock, a yuppie and an ambiguously gay stereotype.Some defenders of the game, pointed out that it seems unlikely that the homosexuality of this character has any significance to the deer which is the protagonist of this game.The game was a translation of a computer game and by this time Sega had introduced its own rating system for tiltes and thus no changes were required