Original sentence: Maharishi University of Management offers an all-vegetarian, organic menu made from fresh ingredients rather than frozen or pre-prepared foods.The dining room setup is buffet-style with out-door dining when weather permits.The kitchen bakes whole-grain breads and pastries using organic flour and other organic ingredients.The range of dishes includes home-style American pizza, lasagna, Chinese stir-fry, Mexican, Greek, and Indian
Edited sentence: Maharishi University of Management is the first college in the USA to offer an all-vegetarian, organic menu that is cooked fresh every day, whereas most food service operations at other schools depend upon frozen or pre-prepared foods.The dining hall serves a wide range of dishes, including home-style American pizza, lasagna, Chinese stir-fry, Mexican, Greek, and Indian.The dining room set-up is buffet-style with out-door dining when weather permits.The kitchen bakes assorted whole-grain breads and pastries using organic flour and other organic ingredients