Original sentence: Nonchristians, such as Jews, Muslims, pagans, and secular humanists, see blue laws as discriminatory, as do many moderate Christians and regular folks who primarily see them as being overly antiquated, old fashioned, and restrictive of business and individual freedom, a view echoed by libertarianism and sex-positivism, who also see them as a prime example of arbitrary government coercion based on religion, which unduly restricts individual and commercial rights
Edited sentence: Nonchristians, such as Jews, Muslims, pagans, and secular humanists, see blue laws as discriminatory, as do many regular "back-slidden" and moderate Christians and regular folks who primarily see them as being overly antiquated, old fashioned, and restrictive of business and individual freedom, a view echoed by libertarianism and sex-positivism, who also see them as a prime example of arbitrary government coercion based on religion, which unduly restricts individual and commercial rights