Original sentence: Box Office MojoBox Office Mojo is a website which chronicles the box office returns and trends of movies.This site also provides lists and charts such as highest grossing films of all time, greatest opening days, and offers frequent polls for their membership
Edited sentence: An excellent internet website which chronicles the box office returns and trends of movies.Box Office Mojo.This site also provides countless lists and charts such as highest grossing films of all time, greatest opening days, and offers frequent polls for their vast membership