Original sentence: As a file-sharing site with copyrighted material, usage of YggTorrent may be illegal in some jurisdictions.The site allows the sharing of content that is copyrighted, which may be illegal without proper rights acquisition.YggTorrent (sometimes abbreviated as Ygg) is a French semi-private torrent directory and BitTorrent tracker created in 2017
Edited sentence: As a file-sharing site with copyrighted material, YggTorrent operates illegally.The site allows the sharing of content that is mostly copyrighted, making their downloads illegal without proper rights acquisition.YggTorrent (sometimes abbreviated as Ygg) is a French illegal semi-private torrent directory and BitTorrent tracker created in 2017