Original sentence: Certain statements by the new Presiding Bishop, Katherine Jefferts-Schori, have been the focus of controversy, especially regarding the central Christian teachings on salvation through Jesus alone.In contrast, the 1928 BCP said According to the use of the Protestant Episcopal Church in the United States of America.The 2006 election of The Most Reverend Katherine Jefferts Schori is, however, primarily controversial in the wider Anglican Communion because she is a woman While TEC ordains women as priests and bishops, the full Anglican Communion does not universally accept the Ordination of women.The Most Reverend Katherine Jefferts Schori has become a lightning rod as she voted to confirm The Right Reverend Robinson and has allowed blessing of same-sex unions in her diocese of Nevada
Edited sentence: Certain statements by the new leader, Katherine Jefferts-Schori, have been the focus of controversy, especially regarding the central Christian teachings on salvation through Jesus alone.In contrast, the 1928 BCP, the last legitimate prayer book which followerd the Cranmer model, said According to the use of the Protestant Episcopal Church in the United States of America.Katherine Jefferts Schori has become a lightning rod as she voted to confirm The Right Reverend Robinson and has allowed blessing of same-sex unions in her diocese of Nevada.Katherine Jefferts Schori is, however, primarily controversial in the wider Anglican Communion because she is a woman While TEC ordains women as priests and bishops, the full Anglican Communion does not universally accept the Ordination of women.The 2006 election of Mrs