Original sentence: About 1,600 strikers headed for Vancouver.Communists organized the men into the Relief Camp Workers' Union and a walkout was called on April 4, 1935.The poor working and living conditions led to general unrest in the camps
Edited sentence: A walkout was called on April 4, 1935 and about 1600 strikers headed for Vancouver.The poor working and living conditions led to general unrest in the camps and facilitated the work of communist agitators, who organized the men into the Relief Camp Workers' Union