Original sentence: Barnaby Miln is a descendant of Robert Fortune.Miln has researched the more than two hundred garden plants Fortune introduced to the United Kingdom from China.Miln researched the almost two hundred varieties of new crop plants bred and introduced to United Kingdom agriculture by his family’s business, Gartons Agricultural Plant Breeders plc
Edited sentence: Barnaby Miln is a descendant of Robert Fortune and, as a plant variety historian, he has researched the more than two hundred garden plants he introduced to the United Kingdom from China.Barnaby Miln was the chief mourner at his funeral in Westminster Abbey, where his ashes are now buried.He has also researched the almost two hundred varieties of new crop plants bred and introduced to United Kingdom agriculture by his family’s business, Gartons Agricultural Plant Breeders plc.His partner, the Reverend Sir Derek Pattinson, had died