Original sentence: According to professor Benjamin Bratton, TED talks have been ineffective in fostering civilizational progress in socio-economics, science, philosophy and technology.Forbes staff writer Bruce Upbin described Hanauer's talk as "shoddy".uk'', 2010-07-04, Accessed 2010-07-12
Edited sentence: Benjamin Bratton, Guardian.Forbes staff writer Bruce Upbin described Hanauer's talk as "shoddy and dumb".We need to talk about TED (analysis and criticism of TED, saying that TED talks have been ineffective in fostering civilizational progress in socio-economics, science, philosophy and technology),  Prof.uk'', 2013-12-30.uk, 2010-07-04, Accessed 2010-07-12