Original sentence: Complex transactions can take up to half an hour, or more, to complete.Fry's advertising slogan is "Home of Fast, Friendly, Courteous Service," which is perceived by some customers as somewhere between humorously ironic and insulting.Many, but not all, customers have reported frustrating customer service experiences at Fry's stores.Some of these customers have established web sites to discuss their experiences.This fortuitous co-location helped distinguish Fry's from the many other stores within Silicon valley selling computer components
Edited sentence: Complex orders have been said to take up to half an hour to complete.Fry's advertising slogan is "Home of Fast, Friendly, Courteous Service," which is perceived by some customers as humorously ironic.Many (but by no means all) customers have reported frustrating customer service experiences at Fry's stores, with some having established websites to discuss their experiences.This fortutious co-location helped distinguish Fry's from the many other stores within Silicon valley selling computer components