Original sentence: As Batman overjoys of his new powers and uses them to bring complete fear and order to Gotham's criminal underworld and eventually sets his sight to the world while Superman trying to lead a normal life as a husband and journalist, their allies realised that the power switch has a psychological side effect to both men as Batman's behavior became increasingly aggressive, and the Man of Steel himself becomes emotionally depressed despite of living in the life he always have wanted
Edited sentence: As Batman overjoys of his new powers and uses them to bring complete fear and order to Gotham's criminal underworld and eventually sets his sight to the world while Superman trying to lead a normal life as a husband and journalist, their allies realised that the power switch has a psychological side effect to both men as Batman's behavior became increasingly aggressive, and the Man of Steel himself becomes emotionally depressed despite of living the life he has always wanted