Original sentence: The main religions in this alternate Wales are both Christianity and the druids, who are power mad gangsters, who use murder, extortion, prostitution, and even the sweet ladies of the sweet justice league to maintain their influence
Edited sentence: The main religions in this alternate Wales are both Christianity and far more importantly the druids who in Pryce's wonderfully distorted version of the world and Wales,  now are no longer the dress wearing weirdos that any respectable Welshman remembers from their childhood eisteddfodau but power mad gangsters, who use murder, extortion, prostitution, and even the sweet ladies of the sweet justice league to maintain their influence