Original sentence: Another quality that territorial states required was a form of unification under a common executive.Scholars state that it is important to analyze the power dynamics of the separate units that fall under a common executive to decide whether or not they form part of the territorial state
Edited sentence: Another important quality that territorial states required was a form of unification under a common executive.It is important to analyze the power dynamics of the separate units that fall under a common executive to decide whether or not they form part of the territorial state