Original sentence: The school has a diverse community of foreign students and has recently in its intercollegiate debate competitions defeated such instutions as Ball State University.To most people, this is probably what the school is most known for
Edited sentence: However, far from this stereotype, the school has a diverse community of foreign students and has recently in its intercollegiate debate competitions defeated such outstanding instutions as Ball State University.To those who know little of the school as a university, of its academics and so on, this is probably what the school is most known for