Original sentence: A late converted try by Ben Hannant after a bomb kick was misread by the New South Wales backline saw Queensland lead 6–4 at half-time.Brent Tate almost scored a try in the 70th minute, but Michael Jennings knocked the ball out of his grasp in the in-goal area to save the try.From there, Queensland began to have the better of possession, and won several repeat sets from goal-line dropouts.Greg Inglis scored a try in the 62nd minute, the conversion bringing the score back to 16–12.New South Wales dominated possession, and Brett Stewart scored the first try of the game in the corner after around 25 minutes, giving New South Wales a 4–0 lead.New South Wales scored two quick tries during Cronk's period in the sin bin, with both Stewart and Josh Morris scoring from line-breaks; this gave New South Wales a 16–6 lead.There were no further points in the game, and New South Wales won the game 16–12, to level the series.Two minutes into the second half, Cooper Cronk was sin-binned for a professional foul which denied Todd Carney the opportunity to score under the posts from a grubber kick; Carney converted a penalty goal to level the scores at 6–6
Edited sentence: A late converted try by Ben Hannant saw the Queenslanders lead 6-4 at half-time.Brent Tate then flew into the air and just as it looked certain he was going to score, Michael Jennings knocked the ball out of his grasp and saved the series for New South Wales.Greg Inglis replied in the 62nd minute with a classic try in the corner stretching his all-time Origin try-scoring streak to 14.New South Wales dominated the play with the first try of the game scored by Brett Stewart off a well structured play.New South Wales then scored two quick tries after Cronk's dismissal through Stewart and Josh Morris.On the back of this penalty, Carney then converted the penalty goal to level the scores at 6–6.The series now goes to a decider in Brisbane on July 4.There were no further points in the game with New South Wales ahead 16–12 at the final siren.Two minutes into the second half, Cooper Cronk was sin-binned for a professional foul which prevented Todd Carney from scoring under the posts