Original sentence: For most of the above, the editorship of Newsnight was a stepping stone to a distinguished career as a senior executive in the BBC or elsewhere in the media
Edited sentence: All white and (with one exception, Sian Kevill) all male.For most, the editorship of Newsnight was a stepping stone to a distinguished career as a senior executive in the BBC or elsewhere in the media.They almost all attended elite universities (usually Oxford or Cambridge) and they all became editor of Newsnight in their mid to late 30s.This is a very homogeneous group