Original sentence: The music of SaGa 1 was composed by Nobuo Uematsu, that of SaGa 2 by Uematsu and Kenji Itō, while the music of SaGa 3 was composed by Ryūji Sasai, and Chihiro Fujioka
Edited sentence: The music of SaGa 1 was composed by Nobuo Uematsu, and that of SaGa 2 by Uematsu and Kenji Itō, while the music of SaGa 3 was composed by Ryūji Sasai and Chihiro Fujioka