Original sentence: He became attracted to this Bolshevik woman and the Russian revolution which encouraged him to study Marxism.The next year Benjamin began to write for the Frankurter Zeitung and Die Literarische Welt so he could afford living several months in Paris
Edited sentence: Even a quick read of Benjamin makes clear his antagonism toward the idea that writing should have a denotative relation to its overt subject.He got attracted to this Bolshevik woman and the Russian revolution which encouraged him to study Marxism.Next year Benjamin began to write for the Frankurter Zeitung and Die Literarische Welt so he could afford living several months in Paris.This journey portrayed in Moscow Diary was deceiving and manifest his failed romance with communism