Original sentence: From there he rose rapidly being successively Rural Dean  of Bradford, Archdeacon of Sheffield and finally from 1927 a long serving Suffragan Bishop
Edited sentence: From 1927 until 1945, he served as Bishop of Warrington.From there he rose rapidly being successively Rural Dean  of Bradford and then Archdeacon of Sheffield.In 1920, he was appointed as the first Suffragan Bishop of Kampala, but he returned to England in 1923 as Vicar of Pershore