Original sentence: "  Noting that people like a Member of Parliament and a Liberal Democrat peer had made allegations about the power of such a lobby in Britain, he asserted: "So the might of Jewish organizations is inflated, conspiracies imagined, to fill the gap between the reality of a Jewish community trying to do its best for Israel, and the fantasy of politicians and prime ministers bowing their knee to the power of the almighty Lobby." He concluded  "If there is a Jewish conspiracy, it is remarkably ineffective.Foreign Policy in Haaretz, Dave Rich, Deputy Director of Communications at Community Security Trust, a U.In an opinion piece about the publication of Steven Walt and John Mearsheimer's book The Israel Lobby and U.organization for the defense of British Jewry, contended: "The problem on this side of the Atlantic is that British politics lacks anything approaching the American system of openly declared political lobbies; a similar, AIPAC-style operation in Westminster would not just influence policy, it would also subvert fundamental democratic mechanisms
Edited sentence: " and concludes that "If there is a Jewish conspiracy, it is remarkably ineffective.In an opinion piece in Israel's oldest daily newspaper, Haaretz, Dave Rich, Deputy Director of Communications at Community Security Trust, a U.The problem on this side of the Atlantic is that British politics lacks anything approaching the American system of openly declared political lobbies; a similar, AIPAC-style operation in Westminster would not just influence policy, it would also subvert fundamental democratic mechanisms", and that "So the might of Jewish organizations is inflated, conspiracies imagined, to fill the gap between the reality of a Jewish community trying to do its best for Israel, and the fantasy of politicians and prime ministers bowing their knee to the power of the almighty Lobby.organization for the defense of British Jewry, contended: