Original sentence: Baral was born in Chuli Bojha, Deuchuli, Nawalparasi District in a military environment.Both he and his father were majors in the Second Battalion of the First Gorkha Rifle in the British Indian Army, in which Baral had commandeered in World War II.Major Bahadur Singh Baral (15 April 1892 – 16 October 1962) was a Nepali national poet and a military officer in the First Gorkha Rifle of the British Indian Army
Edited sentence: Bahadur Singh Baral had commandeered the Second Battalion of the First Gorkha Rifle in World War II.Bahadur Singh Baral was born in Chuli Bojha, Deuchuli, of Nawalparasi District.Both he and his father Sarwajeet Singh Baral were majors in the Second Battalion of the First Gorkha Rifle in the British Indian Army.He was a brave and patriotic Gurkha.He was always punctual as he was brought up in a military environment.He was well mannered and disciplined as a child.Major Bahadur Singh Baral (15 April 1892 – 16 October 1962) was a national poet of Nepal and a military officer in the First Gorkha Rifle of the British Indian Army