Original sentence: This medallion is worn on the left chest, for men, suspended from a light crimson ribbon,  wide, though a miniature cross may be worn on the ribbon in undress, and for women, on a ribbon bow pinned to the left chest
Edited sentence: This medallion is worn on the left chest, for men, suspended from a light crimson ribbon,  wide, hung from a medal bar, and for women, on a ribbon bow pinned to the left chest; a miniature cross may be worn on the ribbon bar in undress