Original sentence: "  During her time in office, she chaired the Committee on Education and Public Institutions and also served on the Land Committee.She choose not to run for a second term in the legislature, but was convinced to make an unsuccessful 1918 run for Secretary of State.The next year, she became the first woman elected to the Arizona Legislature (representing Yavapai County) and the second woman to be elected to any state legislature in the United States
Edited sentence: "  During her time in office, she chaired the Committee on Education and Public Institutions, and also served on the Land Committee.She chose not to run for a second term in the legislature, but in 1918 was convinced to run for Secretary of State, a run which was unsuccessful.The next year, she became the first woman elected to the Arizona Legislature (representing Yavapai County), and the second woman to be elected to any state legislature in the United States