Original sentence: Abdul Ali Mazari (1946 - March 1995) was a prominent commander during the Soviet war in Afghanistan and the Afghan Civil War
Edited sentence: Abdul Ali Mazari (1946-March 1995) was a millitia commander and a criminal gangster during the Soviet invasion of Afghanistan who rarely fought with russians but looted the caravans of other mujahideen and tortured their men.During the Afghan Civil War he turned to a barbaric and ruthless criminal gangster.He was financed and supported by the Iranian regime and was receiving signifcant amount of weaponary from them.Most important of all crimes he committed against other ethnic groups were the breast cutting of women, nailing people on the head, dead's dance or Raqs e Morda( They used to behead a person and then when that person was in agony these mindless creatures enjoyed that as dead's dance), throwing the prisoners of war to the lion in Kabul zoo, massacare, genocide and many more crimes which are horrible to mentiong.The attrocities committed under his command is horrifying