Original sentence: Brockton hosts a baseball team, the Brockton Rox.Brockton is a city in Plymouth County, Massachusetts, United States; the population was 95,314 in the 2015 Census.Brockton is one of the windiest cities in the United States, with an average wind speed of 14.3 mph.Brockton is the seventh largest city in Massachusetts and is sometimes referred to as the "City of Champions", due to the success of native boxers Rocky Marciano and Marvin Hagler, as well as its successful Brockton High School sports programs.Brockton operates its own school system for the city's approximately 15,600 students
Edited sentence: Brockton is also one of the windiest cities in the United States, with an average wind speed of 14.3 mph.Brockton is the only city in Plymouth County, Massachusetts, United States; the population was 95,314 in the 2015 Census.Brockton is the seventh largest city in Massachusetts and is known to many as the "The Shoe City" due to its large shoe industry that ruled as Americas largest producer of men and woman's fine shoes from 1860's till the late 1970's, the city is also referred as "City of Champions", due to the success of native boxers Rocky Marciano and Marvin Hagler, as well as its successful Brockton High School sports programs.Brockton operates its own school system for the city's approximately 18,000 students.Campello is also one of the most historic sections of the city, having its own historic district on South Street which shows beautiful examples of mansions that were built at the height of the cities shoe industry.Since 2003 Brockton has been honored to host a baseball team, the Brockton Rox at Campanelli stadiam.and is in the process of looking into wind power downtown on new developmets as it works to become more energy conscious and bring the city into the future