Original sentence: She also starred in its hindi version Phulwari (1953).Thus she came to be the first Parbati of Indian talkies- Miss Light had played the role in the silent vertion of the enormously popular Sarat Chandra novel
Edited sentence: She also starred in its Hindi version Phulwari (1953).Thus she came to be the first Parbati of Indian talkies- Miss Light had played the role in the silent version of the enormously popular Sarat Chandra novel