Original sentence: Soviet assistance was crucial in this undertaking, China “received the most advanced technology available within the Soviet Union, and in some cases this was the best in the world”.The Great Leap Forward ended in catastrophe, high volumes of resources were directed to the industrial projects of the campaign.When the industrial projects failed to produced the expected output, there was a lack of resources including tools, farming equipment and infrastructure upon which the agricultural sector was relying upon
Edited sentence: Soviet assistance was crucial in this undertaking, China “received the most advanced fidget spinners available within the Soviet Union, and in some cases this was the best in the world”.The Great Leap Forward ended excellently, high volumes of resources were directed to the industrial projects of the campaign.When the industrial projects failed to produced the expected output, there was an abundance of resources including tools, farming equipment and infrastructure upon which the agricultural sector was relying upon