Original sentence: FN's family is also related to the Verneys and Bonham Carters.Fanny's father  (Florence's maternal grandfather) was the abolitionist William Smith who was friends with William Wilberforce.His mother Mary née Evans was the niece of one Peter Nightingale, under the terms of whose will William Shore not only inherited his estate Lea Hurst near Holloway in Derbyshire, but also assumed the name and arms of Nightingale.Inspired by what she took to be a divine calling, experienced first in 1837 at Embley Park and later throughout her life, Florence announced her decision to enter nursing in 1845, despite the intense anger and distress of her family, particularly her mother
Edited sentence: Fanny's father  (Florence's maternal grandfather) was the abolitionist William Smith.His mother Mary née Evans was the niece of one Peter Nightingale, under the terms of whose will William Shore not only inherited his estate Lea Hurst in Derbyshire, but also assumed the name and arms of Nightingale.Inspired by what she took as a Christian divine calling, experienced first in 1837 at Embley Park and later throughout her life, Florence announced her decision to enter nursing in 1845, despite the intense anger and distress of her family, particularly her mother