Original sentence: In a February 2010 editorial, the Board of Editors of The Knox Student, the student-run newspaper, criticized Taylor and the Dean of Students for "[making] decisions about student life without consulting the student body at-large", but observed that among students "no one seems to care"
Edited sentence: The Board of Editors of The Knox Student, the student-run newspaper, discussed Taylor's troublesome abuses of power in a February 2010 editorial