Original sentence: As a result of the threat of legal action by Irving under British libel laws, when the British edition was finally published, the passages containing the criticism of Irving's historical methods were expunged by the publisher
Edited sentence: As a result of the threat of legal action by Irving under British libel laws, which according to some damage freedom of speech by being too plaintiff-friendly, when the British edition was finally published, the passages containing the criticism of Irving's historical methods were expunged by the publisher