Original sentence: It is based on the principles of equality of outcome, equitable distribution of wealth, and public responsibility for those unable to avail themselves of the minimal provisions for a good life.Opponents often argue that this disincentives future progress and hard work, furthers goverment corruption, and, in the long run, leads to economic stagnation and mass famines
Edited sentence: It is based on the principles of equality of opportunity, equitable distribution of wealth, and public responsibility for those unable to avail themselves of the minimal provisions for a good life