Original sentence: The 2003 invasion of Iraq, termed "Operation Iraqi Freedom" by the US administration, began on March 20.This was claimed by some to be a violation of international law, breaking the UN Charter (see Legitimacy of the 2003 invasion of Iraq)
Edited sentence: After the September 11 attacks the United States was not willing to wait until it was attacked, paving the way for a preemtive invasion of Iraq.Howver, the terms agreed by Iraq after it was driven out of Kuwait included agreements to reveal its programs to create biological, chemical, and nuclear weapons.Individuals withing the United Nations were also found to have profited from oil dealings with Iraq, included the son of the Secretary General.Sadam Hussain refused to do this for over ten years.Some thought that oil deals made by Saddam Hussain influenced the oposition by France, Germany , and Russia.The 2003 liberation of Iraq, termed "Operation Iraqi Freedom" by the US administration, began on March 20.url= | title=Timeline: the road to war in Iraq| author=Oliver King and Paul Hamilos| date=February 2, 2006| publisher=Guardian Unlimited| accessdate=2006-05-25}}</ref>