Original sentence: Gray, whose real name was John Baker Gray, was born in Chicago and became a performer in vaudeville at the age of 16.He died in Sarasota, Florida, aged 80.Timothy Gray (5 September 1926 - 17 March 2007) was an American songwriter, author, singer and director, remembered for his partnership with Hugh Martin which produced High Spirits, a musical based on Noel Coward's play Blithe Spirit
Edited sentence: Gray, whose birth name was John Baker Gray, was born in Chicago and became a performer in vaudeville at the age of 16.He died in Sarasota, Florida, at age 80.Timothy Gray (September 5, 1926 - March 17, 2007) was an American songwriter, author, singer and director, remembered for his partnership with Hugh Martin which produced High Spirits, a musical based on Noel Coward's play Blithe Spirit.com article, March 26, 2007