Original sentence: He was often seen out at night with his secret "Life Partner" Major Blood, though they often would comport in public making their relationship one of Cobra's worst kept secrets according to writer Ron Friedman's 1996 Book Secrets of the Terrordome
Edited sentence: He was often seen out at night with his secret "Life Partner" Major Blood, though they often would comport in public making their relationship one of Cobra's worst kept secrets according to writer Ron Friedman's 1996 Book, Secrets of the Terrordome