Original sentence: Because land cannot be hidden, removed to a tax haven or concealed in an electronic data system, proponents suggest that the tax can not be evaded.Proponents claim that levying a Land Value Tax is straightforward, requiring only a valuation of the land and the identity of the landholder
Edited sentence: Land cannot be hidden, removed to a tax haven or concealed in an electronic data system and so the tax can not be evaded.Levying a Land Value Tax is straightforward, requiring only a valuation of the land and the identity of the landholder