Original sentence: Gibson, meanwhile, has stated his dislike of the inclusion of elements of high fantasy within setting elements that he helped pioneered.Shadowrun's cyberpunk facets were modeled in large part on William Gibson's writings, and the game's original publishers, FASA, have been accused by some as having directly ripped off Gibson's work without even a statement of influence
Edited sentence: Gibson, meanwhile, has been reported to be less than impressed with the inclusion of elements of high fantasy within clearly derivative setting elements and storytelling techniques that he had pioneered.Shadowrun's cyberpunk facets were modeled in large part on William Gibson's writings, and the game's publishers, FASA, have been accused by many as having directly ripped off Gibson's work without even a statement of influence