Original sentence: PAF suffered heavy losses during wars with India and lost several aircraft.Though the war ended in a stalemate, the casualities for Pakistan were higher than for India and lost more land then won
Edited sentence: Alam set a world record by shooting down five Indian planes in just one battle.By the time war ended, he had downed 9 Indian planes and damaged another 2.During this war, Sq.PAF downed a total of about 96 Indian planes while losing only 13 planes.PAF pilots proved their performance and excellent flying and fighting skills by bombing Pathankot and Kalaikunda Air Bases, two of the most important and heavily guarded complexes of the Indian Air Force.The 23 day conflict in September 1965 represented the zenith for the Pakistan Air Force and could justify claims to be its country's crowning glory.Though the war ended in a stalemate, the casualities for India were higher than for Pakistan and it also lost more land