Original sentence: Some media outlets observed that the inclusion of a male villain who dresses as a woman in order to kill women can be seen as transphobic, given the author's past comments on transgender people that were considered trans-exclusionary radically feminist
Edited sentence: Some media outlets observed that the inclusion of a male villain who dresses as a woman in order to kill women was bound to be ill-received by part of the public, given the author's past comments on transgender people that were considered transphobic by some