Original sentence: Luckily USC's Trepagnier, one of college’s most prolific high flyers, missed his last dunk attempt, and the 6’1” Jenkins had one up his sleeve, and attempted a dunk only few can make, a foul line two-foot leaner
Edited sentence: Jenkins would have attempted a dunk only few can make, a foul line two foot leaner that would have shocked the world.Luckily USC's Trepagnier, one of college’s most prolific high flyers, missed his last dunk attempt, because the 6’1” Jenkins had one up his sleeve