Original sentence: com's Ivan Maisel, Mike Lupica of the New York Daily News, The Wrestling Observer's Dave Meltzer, the Chicago Tribune's Steve Rosenbloom, Dave Kindred, San Francisco Chronicle's Scott Ostler, PTI's Tony Kornheiser, and Around the Horn panelist and ESPN contributor Jay Mariotti
Edited sentence: com's Ivan Maisel, Mike Lupica of the New York Daily News, The Wrestling Observer's Dave Meltzer, the Chicago Tribune's Steve Rosenbloom, Dave Kindred, San Francisco Chronicle's Scott Ostler, Cleveland Plain Dealer's Bud Shaw, PTI's Tony Kornheiser, and Around the Horn panelist and ESPN contributor Jay Mariotti