Original sentence: During the night the Romans seeing the high casualty rate including one the consuls were stricken with panic and were going to retreat when a voice, subsequently judged divine, was heard coming from the direction of the sacred grove nearby, telling the to be courageous, as the Etruscan had lost one more man than they
Edited sentence: During the night the Romans seeing the high casualty rate including one the consuls were stricken with panic and were going to retreat when a voice, subsequently judged divine, was heard coming from the direction of the sacred grove nearby, telling them to be courageous, as the Etruscan had lost one more man than they