Original sentence: Hayne is a Christian, he did become a member of the Hillsong Church in 2008, partly inspired by his Fijian teammates at the 2008 World Cup
Edited sentence: Hayne is a so called Christian, (although his off feild actions have left many to question his beliefs), he did become a member of the Hillsong Church in 2008, partly inspired by his Fijian teammates at the 2008 World Cup