Original sentence: Her continuing aim has been to preserve and strengthen the U.However, her strong leadership style may not sit well with all members of the Rensselaer community; on April 26, 2006, the faculty of RPI, (including a number of retirees) voted 155 to 149 against a vote of no-confidence in Jackson.She is an active voice in numerous committees of the National Academy of Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Science (AAAS), and the National Science Foundation.national capacity for innovation by increasing support for basic research in science and engineering, and by  continuing to attract talent from abroad, while expanding the domestic talent pool by attracting women and members of under-represented groups into careers in science
Edited sentence: Has the necessary human captital (especially in science and engineering) by  continuing to attract talent from abroad, and by tapping the complete domestic talent pool by attracting women and members of under-represented groups to careers in science.However, her strong leadership style may not sit well with all members of the Rensselaer community; on April 26, 2006, the faculty of RPI,(including a number of retirees) voted 155 to 149 against a vote of no-confidence in Jackson.She is an active voice in numerous committees of the National Academy of Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Science (AAAS), and the National Science Foundation, where her aim has been to preserve and strengthen the U.national capacity for innovation by increasing support for basic research in science and engineering, by ensuring that the U