Original sentence: Because of Shirebrook's mining village roots, many residents have a deep hatred and distrust of the police force and this has caused a lot of trouble for the police, who often comment that assaults, abuse and violent incidents routinely go unreported because people from Shirebrook have a culture of 'sorting out their own problems'.The town has also regrettably developed a reputation for being 'rough' and this reputation is something that is often confirmed by the town's residents quite proudly.Unfortunately, due to the lack of job prospects in the town after the closure of the colliery, there is a high rate of unemployment and drug use in Shirebrook
Edited sentence: As well as Sports World there is the main Warehouse behind the building which distrubutes stock for Sports Wolrd throughout England.Because remember word heard is not always true.Many people have a ready made veiw of what Shirebrook is like before even stepping into the Market town, which shouldn’t be the case as every Wednesday and Friday there is a well known market which brings people to the town.Shirebrook has a reputation of being rough but over recent years the crimes rates are lowering and unemployment is decreasing.Shirebrook is a village were they all look after one another, its not that they do not respect the police but some of the problems arise from the police interfering.The main reason for the unemployment decreasing is the redevolopment of the old pit site in Shirebrook where Sports World has been built offering many part times jobs to people aswel as full-time jobs for them seeking a career in further retail business.What I will say is DON’T JUDGE SHIREBROOK UNTIL YOU’VE BEEN HERE FOR YOURSELF