Original sentence: A German tank force led by a fictional Colonel Hessler (Shaw) leads a last-ditch attack through the Allied front.As the young crews flee the Tiger tanks in fear, Hessler desperately goes it alone, commandeering the controls of his Tiger, intending to drive it into the depot himself but a series of drums blow off his tracks, and them destroy the tank itself as Hessler screams in rage and horror.In disgust, he leaves his gun and carries only his pack as he heads for home.It starred Henry Fonda, Robert Shaw, Telly Savalas, Robert Ryan, Dana Andrews and Charles Bronson.Kiley's continued photo passes force the staff car's driver, Conrad (Hans Christian Blech), to drive into a ditch and scramble for cover.Kohler and Hessler are apparently captured by a squad of American soldiers, only for the 'Americans' to be revealed as German soldiers in disguise, led by Lieutenant Schumacher (Ty Hardin)
Edited sentence: A German tank force led by a fictional cold-hearted Colonel Hessler (Shaw) leads a last-ditch attack through the Allied front.As the young crews flee the Tiger tanks in fear, the relentless and deluded Hessler desperately goes it alone, commandeering the controls of his Tiger, intending to drive it into the depot himself but a series of drums blow off his tracks, and them destroy the tank itself as Hessler screams in rage and horror as he dies in combat.In disgust and relief and finally freed from Nazi regime, Hessler and the senseless battle, he leaves his gun and carries only his pack as he proudly heads for home as a good man.It starred Henry Fonda, Robert Shaw, Telly Savalas (in his Golden Globe-nominated performance), Robert Ryan, Dana Andrews and Charles Bronson.Kiley's continued photo passes force the staff car's mild-mannered and naïve driver, Conrad (Hans Christian Blech), to drive into a ditch and scramble for cover.Kohler and Hessler are apparently captured by a squad of American soldiers, only for the 'Americans' to be revealed as German soldiers in disguise, led by German-American Texan Lieutenant Schumacher (Ty Hardin)