Original sentence: Juggalos are extremely loyal to ICP, and sometimes demonstrate this extreme loyalty in public.Juggalos often claim to carry around hatchets and reference them in conversation.Situations like these only make ICP fans that more rabid; they relish the attention garnered and enjoy a sense of martyrdom at the hands of critics.Some people have referred to juggalos as "ghetto goth".They frequently attempt to annoy normal people with such things as clowns, viewing anyone with a genuine fear or dislike of clowns as irrational
Edited sentence: Juggalos consider themselves extremely loyal to ICP and have acted in irrational ways on certain occasions.Unfortunately, situations like these only make ICP fans that more rabid; they relish the attention garnered and enjoy a sense of martyrdom at the hands of critics