Original sentence: Dunst got her start as a child fashion model at the age of three in television commercials.Dunst was also offered the role of Angela in the 1999 Academy Award-winning film American Beauty, but turned it down because she did not want to appear in the film's suggestive sexual scenes or kiss co-star Kevin Spacey.I think if it's not used properly, it can hamper your creativity and close you up inside
Edited sentence: Dunst got her start as a child fashion model at the age of three in television commercials, which began to her claim to fame as a mediocre actress, with little to no visable talent.Dunst was also offered the role of Angela in the 1999 Academy Award-winning film American Beauty, but turned it down because she did not want to appear in the film's suggestive sexual scenes or kiss her wrinkly and overated co-star Kevin Spacey.I think if it's not used properly, it can hamper your creativity and close you up inside, like it has done to my acting, and well ... anybody who considers my acting good"