Original sentence: General Sir Charles Falkland Loewen GCB, KBE, DSO (17 September 1900 - 1986) was a British Army commanding officer during the Second World War.Loewen was born in Vancouver, Canada and joined the Royal Field Artillery in 1918, during the close of the First World War, as he was too young for active service with the Canadian Army
Edited sentence: 4237 Dr.Adrian Preston & Peter Dennis (Edited) "Swords and Covenants" Rowman And Littlefield, London.Club of Canada.Croom Helm.Ex-Cadets Remember".General Sir Charles Loewen GCB,  KBE, DSO was a Canadian born and educated soldier who served with the British Army.Guy C.H16511 Dr.H1877 R.He enrolled at the Royal Military College of Canada in Kingston, Ontario from 1916-18, student #1246.He joined the Royal Field Artillery in 1918, during the close of the First World War, as he was too young for active service with the Canadian Army.He was a British Army commanding officer during the Second World War.He was awarded GCB,  KBE and DSO.He was knighted.In 2 Volumes.Loewen was born in Vancouver, Canada.Richard Arthur Preston "Canada's RMC - A History of Royal Military College" Second Edition 1982.Richard Arthur Preston "To Serve Canada: A History of the Royal Military College of Canada" 1997 Toronto, University of Toronto Press, 1969.Royal Military College.Smith (editor) "As You Were.The R.Volume I: 1876-1918.Volume II: 1919-1984