Original sentence: His death was not a noted event world wide and no state funeral was held
Edited sentence: His death was not a noted event world wide, but the Burmese people suffered a profound loss of a great intellect who served his people on the front lines against the Japanese, and continued his work for the people.Ne Win had built a pogoda in Rangoon, as a religious man, his passing was without the pomp and ceremony normally assocaited with national heroes.No state funeral was heald, and his passing was observed in a quiet dignified manner