Original sentence: He captained the youth team during the Dallas Cup in 2005 where they achieved third place, and made 22 appearances for the first team the following season, earning his first professional contract.He joined Bury on loan in 2006, where he was picked by Bury manager Chris Casper for their 3-1 FA Cup second round replay win at Chester City on 12 December, although he was ineligible to play and Bury were therefore thrown out of the tournament.He started his career as a trainee at Hartlepool.Stephen is a central midfield player
Edited sentence: Chester replaced Bury in the third round.He is a highly competitive player who has a great determination to succeed.He is comfortable on the ball with either foot and made 22 appearances for the First Team last season.He joined Bury on loan in 2006, where he was responsible for them being thrown out of this season's FA Cup (although this wasn't his fault).He started his time at Hartlepool as a trainee.He was ineligible to play in their 3-1 second round replay win at Chester City on 12 December, but was picked by Bury manager Chris Casper anyway.His impressive progression with the Club earned the youngster his first professional contract.Stephen is a central midfield player with a lot of potential and bags of energy.The youngster captained the Youth Team during the Dallas Cup in 2005 where they achieved third place