Original sentence: He ended up escaping after nine days and crossing the 35km to the nearest airfield - on crutches.He lived in Moscow, where he passed away on the 29th of August, 1996.The following day, July 8th, he engaged a formation of 9 Stukas, and again brought down the leader
Edited sentence: He ended up escaping after nine days and crossing the 35 km to the nearest airfield - on crutches.He lived in Moscow, where he died on the 29th of August, 1996.The following day, July 8, he engaged a formation of 9 Stukas, and again brought down the leader