Original sentence: On 18 November, video emerged of what appeared to be at least ten Russian soldiers surrendering to Ukrainian soldiers in the town of Makiivka, then being killed by the Ukrainians after another Russian suddenly emerges from cover opens fire on the Ukrainians.Ukraine claims that the Russian soldiers had committed an act of intentional perfidy firing at them while surrendering, but the Russians deny this, and claim that "the execution of at least 11 unarmed Russian servicemen" had occurred
Edited sentence: On 18 November, 12 surrendering Russian soldiers were killed by Ukrainian forces in the town of Makiivka.The Ukrainians claimed that the Russians had committed an act of perfidy firing at them while surrendering, but the Russians deny this