Original sentence: According to the 2001 census it had a population of 8089.It was the site of the David Brown tractor factory until this closed in the 1980s, and now.Meltham Town Council.Meltham is on the edge of the Peak District.Meltham on the Web.The town is about three miles to the southwest of Huddersfield.no:MelthamMeltham is a town and civil parish in the county of West Yorkshire, England, south of Slaithwaite
Edited sentence: In the 1970s most people worked at the local David Brown tractor factory.Meltham borders the Peak District and holds a stunning vista for all those who come to see it.Meltham is a Town in the county of West Yorkshire, England, south of Slaithwaite.Meltham is a Town of about 10,000 people three miles to the southwest of Huddersfield.Since this shut in the mid 1980s most people now work in Huddersfield.no:Meltham