Original sentence: Ireland was the first country to ban smoking in all enclosed workplaces, in March 2004.The largest whole nation in the world, by population, to have a complete indoor smoking ban including bars and private clubs is England on 1st July.The only country in the world to have banned the sale and smoking of tobacco is Bhutan
Edited sentence: Ireland was the first country to criminalize smoking in all enclosed workplaces, in March 2004.The largest whole nation in the world, by population, to have criminalized indoor smoking including bars and private clubs is England on 1st July.The only country in the world to have criminalized the sale and smoking of tobacco is Bhutan