Original sentence: " Senators Cornyn, Merkley, Cardin, and Rubio signed a letter to request Mike Pompeo—the Secretary of State—to issue a determination of genocide.The National Review reports that "U.US Senators Menendez and Cornyn are leading a bipartisan group that is pushing to recognize the CCP's actions in Xinjiang as a genocide by way of a Senate resolution
Edited sentence: " Senators Cornyn, Merkley, Cardin, and Rubio signed a letter to request Mike Pompeo-the Secretary of State- issuing a genocide determination.National Review reports that "U.US Senators Menendez and Cornyn lead a bipartisan group that is pushing to appoint the CCP's crimeful actions occurring in Xinjiang through a way of a Senate resolution