Original sentence: Knowing the land in Sichuan was much fertile than where they lived and in order to escape the hardship and miserable lives thousands upon thousands of Hakkas living in the regions between the provinces of Guangdong and Fujian responded and accepted the offer by Emperor Kangxi
Edited sentence: Knowing the land in Sichuan was much more fertile than where they lived and in order to escape the hardship and miserable lives thousands upon thousands of Hakkas living in the regions between the provinces of Guangdong and Fujian responded and accepted the offer by Emperor Kangxi