Original sentence: Another major temple is the Eravipuram Sri Krishna Swami temple.Goretti's school.John's school and St.Main Central (MC) Road runs through the town.Nalanchira is a suburb of Thiruvananthapuram, the capital of Kerala State in India.Nalanchira is approximately 9 km from the Thiruvananthapuram railway station.The ownership of the place has turned hands several times and is now with the management of the Mar Ivanios College
Edited sentence: Another major temple is the Eravipuram Sri Krishna Swami temple, which is coming up in a big way.Goretti's school, etc.John's school, St.Main Central(M C)Road runs through the town.Nalanchira is a suburb of Thiruvananthapuram the capital of Kerala State.Nalanchira is around 9 km from Thiruvananthapuram (railway station.The ownership of the place turned hands several times and now is with the management of the Mar Ivanios College