Original sentence: For example, Buzz Miller, a real-life chorus dancer with a prolific Broadway career, played a chorus dancer named "Buzz Miller" in this musical.Me and Juliet is a musical comedy written by Richard Rodgers (music) and Oscar Hammerstein II (lyrics and book).Me and Juliet relies on the "show-within-a-show" concept.Mielzner's sets and lighting involved eighty-five tons of scenery and the most extensive light cues to date.Rodgers and Hammerstein Theatricals site.The main characters include the chorus singer Jeanie and Larry, the assistant stage manager.The melody of this hit did not originate with this musical, but had been a theme for an episode of Rodgers' soundtrack to the television series Victory at Sea.To date, no major commercial revival of the show has ever been attempted and the original cast album is out of print in the United States (The cast album was briefly available in the United States in 1993 and the British-based Flare label reissued the cast recording in 2007
Edited sentence: (Mielzner's sets and lighting involved eighty-five tons of scenery and the most extensive light cues to date.For example, Buzz Miller, a real-life chorus dancer with a prolific Broadway career, played a chorus dancer named Buzz Miller in this musical.Ironically, the melody of this hit did not originate with this musical, but had been a theme for an episode of Rodgers' soundtrack to the television series Victory at Sea.Me and Juliet is a 1953 musical comedy written by Rodgers and Hammerstein.Rodgers and Hammerstein Theatricals.The main characters include the chorus singer Jeanie (played in the original Broadway cast by Isabel Bigley) and Larry, the assistant stage manager (Bill Hayes).The story of Me and Juliet relies on the "show-within-a-show" premise.To date, no major commercial revival of the show has ever been attempted and the original cast album is out of print in the United States