Original sentence: In the novel, Mia ruins Lana's outfit with ice-cream in defence of Tina Hakim Baba (who is not mentioned in the film), not Jeramiah (who is not even in the books).Mia has many other friends than Lilly and Michael, including Perin, Boris Pelkowski, Ling Su Wong, Shameeka Taylor, John Paul Reynolds Abernathy IV (more commonly known was J.Mia is portrayed as a very awkward adolescent, and while in the film she is more comfortable with herself after the makeover, in the book she becomes more uneasy.and previously known to Mia and her friends as The Guy Who Hates It When They Put Corn in the Chili), and Tina Hakim Baba (whom she befriends during a fight with Lilly)
Edited sentence: In the book she becomes more uneasy.In the novel, Mia ruins Lana's outfit with ice-cream in defense of Tina Hakim Baba (who is not mentioned in the film), not Jeramiah (who is not even in the books).Mia has many other friends than Lilly and Michael, including Perin, Boris Pelkowski, Ling Su Wong, Shameeka Taylor, John Paul Reynolds Abernathy IV (more commonly known as J.Mia is portrayed as a very awkward adolescent, and while in the film she is more comfortable with herself after the makeover.and who was previously known to Mia and her friends as The Guy Who Hates It When They Put Corn in the Chili), and Tina Hakim Baba (whom she befriends during a fight with Lilly)