Original sentence: Also in England, KYNOCH (the Imperial Metal Industries [Kynoch] Limited, Birmingham 6, England), the well-known cartridge manufacturer, produced ammunition, referring to the 9.3x62mm as the '9.3 mm Mauser'.The 9.3x74R is a rimmed 9.3 mm cartridge that evolved from the 9.3x72 black powder cartridge.with the base marked simply KYNOCH 9.3 mm
Edited sentence: Also in England, KYNOCH (the Imperial Metal Industries [Kynoch] Limited, Birmingham 6, England), the well-known cartridge manufacturer, produced ammunition, referring to the 9.3x62mm as the '9.3 mm Mauser'.The 9.3x74R is a rimmed 9.3 mm cartridge that evolved from the 9.3x72 black powder cartridge.with the base marked simply KYNOCH 9.3 mm