Original sentence: As one in a series of collaborations between Austin and Jensen Motors of West Bromwich, (West Midlands, west of Birmingham), the A40 Sports originated when Austin's Chairman Leonard Lord, upon seeing the  Interceptor, requested that Jensen develop a body that could use the A40 mechanicals
Edited sentence: As one in a series of collaborations between Austin and Jensen Motors of West Bromwich, the A40 Sports originated when Austin's Chairman Leonard Lord, upon seeing the  Interceptor, requested that Jensen develop a body that could use the A40 mechanicals