Original sentence: The band soon revised this time frame, hoping to release a single in Autumn 2007 and the album as soon as possible afterwards.With the band's second attempt at recording underway in late 2008, the band planned to release a single in April and the album in June 2009
Edited sentence: The band soon revised this timeframe, hoping to release a single in Autumn 2007 and the album as soon as possible afterwards.With the second attempt at recording underway in late 2008, the band planned to release a single in April and the album in June 2009