Original sentence: On October 25, 2008, Nar Bahadur Bhandari was convicted along with nine others, by a designated CBI court in Gangtok for bungling in the state water scam, leading to a loss of Rupees four lakh to the state exchequer.The court sentenced Bhandari and the then state Rural Development Secretary P K Pradhan to six-month imprisonment along with Rupees 10,000 as fine
Edited sentence: After that he studied in namchi School and then in Darjeeling College.And in 1984, he won the election with flying colors.As he saw the condition of the state at his time, where Kazi was ruling Sikkim ruthlessly, he decided to form a party by himself and he did it.Ever since, he joined the Congress Party from the Sikkim Sangram Parishad and is still playing an important role in the democracy of Sikkim.He was a talented boy by birth and never let anyone dominate him or the poor or lets say he could not tolerate anyone ruling him.He was born in Malbasey, Soreng in a poor family and with great effort and hard work he passed out class 10 in Soreng School.He was the CM of Sikkim for 15 years and did so many work for the people of Sikkim.People of Sikkim still want him to come in rule at lease once for 5 years and show what democracy means.Schools, roads, electricity and many more thing were people benefeted by then.Still the old people of Sikkim and even the Darjeeling are grateful to him for his contributions.The in 1994, Chamling, who was once a follower of Bhandari came up with a party called SDF and won the election