Original sentence: It is estimated that Chinese authorities may have detained hundreds of thousands of Uyghurs, Kazakhs and other ethnic Muslims, Christians and also foreign, such as Kazakhstani, citizens to be kept in these shrouded internment camps throughout the region.On 14 May 2018, RFA reported that there has at least 8 camps in Kargilik County, Kashgar Prefecture alone.Re-education camp (; ) is a title given to the internment camps operated by the Xinjiang local government since 2014 and unprecedentedly intensified since a hardline party secretary, Chen Quanguo, took charge of the region in August 2016
Edited sentence: Concentration Camp.It is estimated that Chinese authorities may have detained hundreds of thousands of Uyghurs, Kazakhs and other ethnic Muslims, Christians and also foreign, such as Kazakhstani, citizens to be kept in these shrouded concentration camps throughout the region.On 14 May 2018, RFA reported that there has at least 8 internment camps in Kargilik County, Kashgar Prefecture alone.Persecution of Christians.Re-education camp (Uyghur: قايتا تەربىيەلەش لاگېرى; ) is a title given to the concentration camps operated by the Chinese Xinjiang autonomous government since 2014 and unprecedentedly intensified since a hardline party secretary, Chen Quanguo, took charge of the region in August 2016.The Holocaust