Original sentence: After compiling an uneasy 28 runs, Bradman hit a ball to the gully fieldsman, Jack Ikin.Controversy was caused as early as the first day of the series
Edited sentence: After compiling an unconfident 28 runs, Bradman hit a ball to the gully fieldsman, Jack Ikin.The pivotal moment of the Ashes contest came as early as the first day of the series