Original sentence: Bouton commented that Maglie rarely gave useful advice to the pitchers, and frequently second guessed their choice of pitches, often contradicting his previous second guessing.However, Hall of Fame pitcher Don Drysdale credited Maglie with teaching him to pitch inside, for which he would be noted.Jim Lonborg, AL Cy Young Award winner in 1967 also learned to brush hitters back under instruction from Maglie.Maglie was integral to the success of the New York Giant teams of the early 1950s
Edited sentence: Bouton comments that Maglie rarely gave useful advice to the pitchers, and frequently second guessed their choice of pitches, often contradicting his previous second guessing.However, Bouton was known as an incessant trouble maker at the time, as Hall of Famer Don Drysdale credits Maglie with giving him the ability to pitch inside that would later make Drysdale a legend.Jim Lonborg, AL Cy Young Award winner in 1967 also learned to brush hitters back under instruction from Maglie; before that he had been an inconsistent pitcher.Maglie was integral to the brilliant success of the New York Giant teams of the early 1950s