Original sentence: 0300 UTC - Deep Depression BOB 03/2007 makes landfall in southern Pakistan.1300 UTC - The PMD upgrades the Deep Depression BOB 03/2007 to a severe cyclonic storm, naming it "Yemyin".However, the IMD does not follow suit and the system officially remains nameless
Edited sentence: 0300 UTC - Yemyin makes landfall in southern Pakistan.1300 UTC - The PMD upgrades the Deep Depression BOB 03/2007 to a severe cyclonic storm, naming it Yemyin.However, despite the storm reaching windspeed in excess of 50 Kt, reaching the category of Severe Cyclonic Storm, the IMD does not follow suit and continue to call the system "Deep Depression BOB 03/2007"