Original sentence: Prior to the 2003 cease fire, on average, one Pakistani soldier died every fourth day, while one Indian soldier died every second day.The Siachen Glacier is located in the eastern Karakoram range in the Himalaya Mountains along the disputed India-Pakistan border at approximately.Within a few days, the Indians were in control over most of the area, as Pakistan was beaten to most of the Saltoro Ridge high ground by about a week
Edited sentence: Prior to the 2003 cease fire, on average, one Pakistani soldier died every day.The Siachen Glacier is located in the eastern Karakoram range in the Himalaya Mountains along India approximately.Within a few days, the Indians were in control over all of the area, as Pakistan was beaten to most of the Saltoro Ridge high ground by about a week