Original sentence: In Nanaimo an  trail was built in the 90s.It stretches from Townsite Road in the south to Mostar in the north where it connects to the  Parkway trail.The E & N Trail is a multi-purpose paved trail for cycling, walking, roller blading and wheelchairs.The first sections of trail will total approximately  and will connect the City of Parksville with Coombs and with French Creek
Edited sentence: In Nanaimo an 8 kilometer trail was built in the 90s.It stretches from Townsite Road in the south to Mostar in the north where it connects to the 20 kilometre Parkway trail.The E & N Trail is multi-purpose paved trail perfect for cycling, walking, roller blading and wheelchairs.The first sections of trail will total approximately 10 km and will connect the City of Parksville with Coombs and with French Creek