Original sentence: DeGraw and Celli have known each other since working together on an early version of DeGraw’s 2003 major-label debut Chariot.Gavin at Vel Records about FREE (movie).To keep himself from overthinking the songs, DeGraw made Free in less than two weeks at the Brooklyn studio Vel Records of his producer Camus Celli, who has worked with such artists as Tina Turner, David Byrne, Lana Wolf and Arto Lindsay
Edited sentence: DeGraw and Celli have known each other since working together on an early version of DeGraw’s 2003 major-label debut CHARIOT.To keep himself from overthinking the songs, DeGraw made FREE in less than two weeks at the Brooklyn studio of his producer Camus Celli, who has worked with such artists as Tina Turner, David Byrne, Lana Wolf and Arto Lindsay