Original sentence: The Mark Foley scandal occurred in late September and early October of 2006 when ABC News reported that Republican congressman Mark Foley had sent e-mails and engaged in instant message conversations that some have called sexually explicit with to male congressional pages
Edited sentence: The Mark Foley scandal occurred in late September and early October of 2006 when ABC News reported that Republican congressman Mark Foley had repeatedly engaged in sexually explicit instant message conversations with and sent suggestive e-mails to male congressional pages