Original sentence: After being dropped from Sony/Columbia, Starr worked odd jobs to support herself and her family for several years, including one at a shopping mall in New Jersey
Edited sentence: After being dropped from the label, Starr worked odd jobs to support herself and her family for several years, including one at a shopping mall in New Jersey.While Carey went on to become the greatest singer ever and Billboard's Artist of the Decade 1990-2000, Starr was dropped from Sony/Columbia's label