Original sentence: After being trounced by their former Southwest Conference rivals, 70-35, in Lubbock two years prior, the Horned Frog defense kept quarterback Graham Harrell and the Red Raider offense out of the endzone for the entire game to earn their fourth consecutive victory over the Big 12
Edited sentence: After being trounced by their former Southwest Conference rivals, 70-35, in Lubbock two years prior, the Horned Frog defense kept quarterback Graham Harrell and the vaunted Red Raider offense out of the endzone for the entire game to earn their fourth consecutive victory over the Big 12