Original sentence: A major concern of Richmond residents was a perceived danger to their water supply, as most of Richmond uses well water.At the time of the anticipated merger, Goulbourn had significant cash reserves from development charges, part of which was for a future sports complex.Controversy arose when she worked to empty those cash reserves by building the sports complex when the merger became inevitable.Munster has sewage lagoons and spray field treatment that arguably fails to meet provincial standards.Others felt it would be better to build a small local facility.She opposed the amalgamation of Goulbourn into the new city of Ottawa.Stavinga supported building an expensive pipeline to Ottawa's central treatment plant.The pipeline debate was a central issue in the Goulbourn ward in the 2003 Ottawa election with Michael O'Rourke opposing the pipeline.The residents of Richmond in her ward, strongly opposed the pipeline, which would run under their area
Edited sentence: Other felt it would be better to build a small local facility.She opposed the amalgamation of Goulbourn into the new city of Ottawa, and arose controversy when she worked to empty Goulbourn's cash reserves by building an expensive sports complex when the merge became inevitable.Stavinga supported building an expensive pipeline to a treatment plant.The pipeline debate was a central issue in the 2003 Ottawa election with Michael O'Rourke opposing the pipeline.The residents of Richmond, in her ward, strongly opposed the pipeline, which would run under their area