Original sentence: Bolton is a large town in Greater Manchester, in North West England.Historically part of Lancashire, Bolton rose to prominence during the 19th century as a mill town centred on textile manufacture and cotton spinning
Edited sentence: Bolton is a large town in the historic County Palatine of Lancashire, administered as part of Greater Manchester, in North West England.The Lancashire town rose to prominence during the 19th century as a mill town centred on textile manufacture and cotton spinning