Original sentence: At the time when Stacy Moxon Meyer was dying underground in the electrical vault, picketers above ground were protesting the previous death of Ashlee Shaner in a decapitation which occurred at the Gold Base when Scientology personnel were moving construction equipment on the highway at night without lights and in the wrong lane.Henson picketed the secretive and heavily-armed  Gold Base compound over the deaths of a Scientologist, Stacy Moxon Meyer, and a non-Scientologist, Ashlee Shaner.Meyer, the daughter of Scientology attorney Kendrick Moxon, adverse counsel in many lawsuits involving Henson, died in an accident in an underground electrical vault at the Gold Base
Edited sentence: Henson picketed the secretive and heavily-armed  Gold Base compound over the unusual deaths of a Scientologist, Stacy Moxon Meyer, and a non-Scientologist, Ashlee Shaner.In a horrific coincidence, when Stacy Moxon Meyer was dying underground in the electrical vault, picketers above ground were protesting the previous death of Ashlee Shaner in a ghastly decapitation which occurred at the Gold Base when Scientology personel were moving construction equipment on the highway at night without lights and in the wrong lane.Meyer, the daughter of Scientology attorney Kendrick Moxon, adverse counsel in many lawsuits involving Henson, died in a bizarre and gruesome accident in an underground electrical vault at the Gold Base