Original sentence: The Assyrian people at the time were emerging from one of the darkest periods of their history the Assyrian genocide at the end of the World War I, an estimated two-thirds of their population was massacred by Ottoman Turks and Kurds.The term 'genocide' was coined by direct influence of this massacre
Edited sentence: During the Assyrian genocide at the end of the World War I, an estimated two-thirds of their population was massacred by Ottoman Turks and Kurds.The Assyrian people at the time were emerging from one of the darkest periods of their history.The term 'genocide' was coined by Raphael Lemkin, who was directly influenced by the story of this massacre