Original sentence: As of mid-2003, LCDs are becoming directly comparable in price to CRTs, with LCDs forming 30% of the computer display market by value.It is likely that technologies such as plasma displays, liquid crystal displays, and other newer technologies will eventually make CRT based displays  mostly obsolete, because the new designs are less bulky and consume less power
Edited sentence: As of mid-2005, LCDs are becoming directly comparable in price to CRTs, with LCDs forming 30% of the computer display market by value.It is likely that technologies such as plasma displays, liquid crystal displays, and other newer technologies such as.S E D (surface-conduction-electron-emitter-display) will eventually make CRT based displays  mostly obsolete, because the new designs are less bulky and consume less power.all these characteristics of C R T'S are to.be found in the S E D display being developed by CANON and TOSHIBA.big advantage over LCD and PLASMA display's in that they use 40%.less power,.who hope to have models released for sale by 2006, S E D'S have a