Original sentence: Keniry - Headmaster from 1912-1915 and 1920-1924, who not only ran the College throughout the first part of the war, but was a driving force behind establishing the Old Collegians Association.Ryan - Headmaster from 1893-1895, who set the foundations of the College and led the College during its formative years.The Patron of the College, the Reverend Peter Connors, Bishop of Ballarat, presides over the major college masses along with other priests (including former students of St Patrick's)
Edited sentence: Keniry - Headmaster from 1912-1915 and 1920-1924, who not only nurtured the College throughout the first part of the war, but was a driving force behind establishing the Old Collegians Association.Ryan - Headmaster from 1893-1895, who set the foundations of the great College and led the College with great zest during its formative years.The Patron of the College, the Reverend Peter Connors, Bishop of Ballarat, presides over the major college masses along with other priests (including former students of St Patrick's