Original sentence: Kawachi Ondo (河内音頭) is a kind of Japanese folk song that originates from Yao City (Yao-shi) in the old Kawachi region of Japan, now part of modern-day Osaka Prefecture).Kawachi Ondo accompanies the Bon dance (also known as Bon Odori) in the Osaka/Kawachi region of Japan, however, this song has recently grown in popularity, that it is often played at other major bon dances, even in Tokyo
Edited sentence: Kawachi Ondo (河内音頭) is a kind of Japanese folk song that originates from Yao City in the old Kawachi region of Japan, now part of modern-day Osaka Prefecture).Kawachi Ondo accompanies the Bon dance (also known as Bon Odori) in the Osaka/Kawachi region of Japan, however, this song has recently grown in popularity and is often played at other major Bon dances, even in Tokyo