Original sentence: The Talon version of the engine improved compared to its predecessor,but it still was far to be able to rival its competitors of that time, id Tech 3 and the Unreal Tournament version of the Unreal engine
Edited sentence: The Talon version of the engine improved compared to its predecessor, but it still was far to be able to rival its competitors of that time, id Tech 3 and the Unreal Tournament version of the Unreal engine