Original sentence: Dry tooling has recently attracted wider attention following its emphasis in an issue of The Scottish Mountaineer, produced by The Mountaineering Council of Scotland.Dry-tooling is rock climbing on non-icy rock but using ice climbing equipment such as crampons and ice axes.Drytooling is practiced in areas such as Vail Colorado which is also the birthplace of modern mixed ice climbing.This invited both strong praise and criticism from readers
Edited sentence: Dry-tooling is rock climbing on non-icy rock but using ice climbing equipment such as crampons and ice axes and is commonly preformed during mixed climbing.Drytooling is practiced in areas such as Vail, Colorado which is also the birthplace of modern mixed ice climbing