Original sentence: On April 14, 2008, the Hawks clinched their first playoff berth since the 1998–1999 season, and in the first round surprised the favored Boston Celtics, the #1 seed in the Eastern Conference, by playing a strong and competitive playoff series.The Hawks won all 3 games in Philips Arena and pushed the series to seven games, before a Game 7 loss in Boston
Edited sentence: On April 14, 2008, the Hawks clinched their first playoff berth since the 1998–1999 season, in which the Hawks were annihilated by the Boston Celtics in game seven of the the first round.They lost in the TD Banknorth Garden by 34 points