Original sentence: Some religious groups as well as individuals, especially within revealed religions that are justified in terms of an authenticated scripture, take offense when historical aspects their faith, or what they consider to be the Word of God, are characterized by outsiders as an expression of myth
Edited sentence: Some churches as well as individuals, especially within revealed religions that are justified in terms of an authenticated scripture, take offense when historical aspects their faith, or what they consider to be the Word of God, are characterized by outsiders as an expression of myth