Original sentence: Despite the extensive service, CityRail is frequently criticised as not being up to standard with other systems
Edited sentence: Despite the extensive service, CityRail is frequently criticised as not being up to standard with other systems(especially those in Europe and the wealthier countries of Asia), and CityRail is often perceived as having outdated infrastructure, old trains, poor customer service, unreliable timetables, pervasive crime and low levels of cleanliness