Original sentence: Arrowhead is one of Rusty’s pledge brothers, he is very paranoid and is skilled in martial arts.The silent brother, with long hair, guyliner, and the ability to drive a bus
Edited sentence: Although Jeremy loves his trademark locks he showed true KT loyalty when he was willing to sell his hair at the KT Estate Sale in hopes of raising money to save the house.He still holds the tittle of KT Historian for his second year and is Big Brother to Pledge Cue Ball.Jeremy(Kris Hatfield).Oh yeah he also has this weird  thing about watching people sleep...IDK.The silent brother, with long hair, guyliner with a sort of John Depp/Jack Sparrow-esque demeanor, and the ability to drive a bus as he proved when he went undercover to Hijack the Omega Chi's Party Bus