Original sentence: Admission Fee: RS 35000.Admission fee and security deposit at FPS is much higher as compare to the other private schools in the city which is the main reason that many middle class families are diffident to send their children to the school; same is for the tuition fee which is collected in advance for three months.FPS Alumni Website.Following is the break up.Foundation Institute of Management Sciences (FIMS) Website.Monthly Fees: RS 7400.SIUT Pakistan Website.Security Deposit: RS 20000.The Citizens' Foundation Website.The Official FPS Website.The houses, named after the important personalities in Pakistan's history, are: Jinnah(Blue), Liaquat(Red) and Iqbal(Yellow).There are three houses and students are randomly divided into these houses with an option of changing their house if they are not satisfied.With a student body of 6000 supported by over 500 members of the teaching staff and operating 9 campuses in Karachi and Hyderabad, FPS provides education to children from ages 3.5 years to 18 years, leading to ‘O’ and ‘A’ Level examinations held by Cambridge International Examinations, conducted by the Cambridge University, United Kingdom
Edited sentence: FPS alumni website.Foundation Institute of Management Sciences website.Official website.SIUT Pakistan website.The Citizens' Foundation website.The admission fee and security deposit at FPS is higher than other private schools in the city which is the main reason that many middle class families are unable to send their children to the school; same is for the tuition fee which is collected in advance for three months.The houses, named after the important personalities in Pakistan's history, are: Jinnah (blue), Liaquat (red) and Iqbal (yellow).There are three houses and students are randomly divided among them with an option of changing house if they are not satisfied.With a student body of 6000 supported by over 500 members of the teaching staff and operating nine campuses in Karachi and Hyderabad, FPS provides education to children from ages 3.5 years to 18 years, leading to ‘O’ and ‘A’ Level examinations held by Cambridge International Examinations, conducted by the Cambridge University, United Kingdom