Original sentence: Critics—including officials of several governments—have characterized the Church of Scientology as an unscrupulous commercial organization; it has often been described as a cult that harasses its critics and exploits its members.Xenu TV - Xenu TV
Edited sentence: Critics—including officials and the courts of several countries—have characterized the Church of Scientology as an unscrupulous commercial organization; it has often been described not as a religion, but a man-made cult that harasses its critics and exploits its members.Xenu TV - Xenu TV, video of Anti-Scientology protests and Scientologists counter protests