Original sentence: Based on this information, the State of Tennessee announced on March 24, 2010 that Dunbar Cave was closed to all visitors and tours were discontinued.In March, 2010, a bat was discovered with White Nose Syndrome (WNS) in Dunbar Cave
Edited sentence: Based on this information, the State of Tennessee announced on March 24, 2010 that Dunbar Cave ws closed to all visitors and tours were discontinued.Hopefully, the State will reconsider its position and reopen the cave to the public.In March, 2010, a single solitary bat was discovered with White Nose Syndrome (WNS) in Dunbar Cave.This reaction is hard to understand, since no other commercial cave in the entire United States has been closed to the public for the presence of WNS