Original sentence: In October 2006, A Trip to Tynemouth by the Japanese animator Hayao Miyazaki was published in Japan.It is based on "Blackham's Wimpy", a story first published in Westall's collection Break of Dark
Edited sentence: In October 2006, A Trip to Tynemouth by legendary Japanese animator Hayao Miyazaki was published in Japan.It is based on "Blackham's Wimpy", a story first published in Westall's collection Break of Dark, which had seized Miyazaki's imagination