Original sentence: Bangalore houses a number of engineering colleges including the Indian Institute of Management, Bangalore (IIMB), a top management Institute in India, the Indian Statistical Institute (ISI), the Indian Institute of Science (IISc), the Indian Institute of Astrophysics, the National Law School (NLSIU), The Indian Institute of Theoretical Sciences, National Institute of Design (NID), and National Institute of Fashion Technology (NIFT)..
Edited sentence: Bangalore has traditionally housed several international technology firms, earlier ones being Texas Instruments, India.Bangalore houses a number of reputed engineering colleges producing high quality computer scientists, the Indian Institute of Management, Bangalore (IIMB), a top management Institute in India, the Indian Statistical Institute (ISI), the Indian Institute of Science (IISc), the Indian Institute of Astrophysics, the National Law School (NLSIU), The Indian Institute of Theoretical Sciences, National Institute of Design (NID), National Institute of Fashion Technology (NIFT) and hence produces the most diverse young talent in one city, incomparable to any other city in the world