Original sentence: One of the most renowned Swedish troubadour of the 20th century was Evert Taube (1890–1976).Other well-known singer-songwriters in the Swedish ballad tradition after Evert Taube were Olle Adolphson (1934–2004) and Cornelis Vreeswijk (1937–1987).Vreeswijk's songs were initially leftist protest songs where he took upon himself to speak for the weaker men of society
Edited sentence: Some of the most highly regarded singer-songwriters in the Swedish ballad tradition after Evert Taube were Olle Adolphson (1934–2004) and Cornelis Vreeswijk (1937–1987).The arguably most renowned Swedish troubadour of the 20th century was however Evert Taube (1890–1976).Vreeswijk's songs were initially leftist protest songs where he took upon him to speak for the weaker men of society