Original sentence: Also a small flock of tourists and local visitors flock to his dilapitated home in Dayamir, Sylhet to have a decent picnic on the huge lawn, a swim in the vast pond dug by himself, or just to admire the dilapitated house
Edited sentence: Also a small flock of tourists and local visitors flock to his dilapitated home in Dayamir, Sylhet to have a decent picnic on the huge lawn, a swim in the vast pond dug by himself, or just to admire the dilapitated house thet gave rise to one of the country's greatest sons