Original sentence: Daerek Hart, professional gamer, particularly League of Legends.Eden Prairie is an affluent suburb, yet with a mixed income city model and home to 7,213 firms, municipal and regional parks, conservation areas, trails, and recreational facilities.Francesca Curran, TV and film actress; born & raised in Eden Prairie.It contains the Eden Prairie Center and is the hub for SouthWest Transit, providing public transportation to three adjacent suburbs
Edited sentence: Daerek Hart, professional gamer, known for his support role in League of Legends.Eden Prairie is an affluent suburb, yet with a mixed income city model, known for acclaimed schools, home to 7,213 firms and related jobs, and “renowned municipal and regional parks, conservation areas, trails, and recreational facilities that attract people of all ages and abilities.Francesca Curran, TV and film actress known for “Orange Is The New Black”; born & raised in Eden Prairie.Regionally known for Eden Prairie Center, it is also the hub for SouthWest Transit, providing public transportation to three adjacent suburbs