Original sentence: From its summit each of the ring of fells known as the Eskdale Horseshoe can be clearly seen: Sca Fell, Scafell Pike, Broad Crag, Great End, Esk Pike, Bow Fell and Crinkle Crags
Edited sentence: All three provide pleasant scrambling.From its summit there is an excellent view of the ring of fells known as the Eskdale Horseshoe: Sca Fell, Scafell Pike, Broad Crag, Great End, Esk Pike, Bow Fell and Crinkle Crags