Original sentence: He played college football at Auburn University, and was selected 30th overall in the 2002 NFL Draft by the Steelers.Henry Alexander Simmons (born March 11, 1979 in Ripley, Mississippi), known as Kendall Simmons, is an offensive lineman for the Pittsburgh Steelers in the NFL.In his spare time, Simmons is a talented artist and is noted for his volunteer work on behalf of underprivileged children
Edited sentence: In his spare time, Simmons is also an amazingly talented artist that can be noted for his interest in volunteer work on behalf of underprivileged children.Kendall Simmons, born on March 11, 1979 is an offensive lineman for the Pittsburgh Steelers in the NFL