Original sentence: ) Behavioral Ecology and Sociobiology Springer Berlin / Heidelberg Volume 19, Number 3 213-219.2 -4 weeks to develop into adults, depending upon temperature repeating the live cycle again in very damp, putrid  excrement, liquid manure, etc.999-1004 (6) (Publisher: Entomological Society of America).The brown-grey thorax has.The eggs, which are white with a pair of dorsal longitudinal flanges or wings “lappenförmigen” have the ability to float in liquid and semi-liquid decaying organic matter, especially poultry, cow and dog faeces, kitchen wastes as the end of putrid potatoes or carrots, silage and compost, in addition, cheese, bacon and drying fish.The females lay their eggs in in batches of up to 50 and may lay altogether.The lesser house fly or little house fly, Fannia canicularis, is somewhat smaller (3.5-6 mm) than the common housefly.three black longitudinal stripes in the males.up to 2.000 eggs
Edited sentence: ) Behavioral Ecology and Sociobiology Springer Berlin / Heidelberg Volume 19, Number 3 213–219.2–4 weeks to develop into adults, depending upon temperature repeating the live cycle again in very damp, putrid  excrement, liquid manure, etc.999–1004 (6) (Publisher: Entomological Society of America).The brown-grey thorax has three black longitudinal stripes in the males.The eggs, which are white with a pair of dorsal longitudinal flanges or wings "lappenförmigen" have the ability to float in liquid and semi-liquid decaying organic matter, especially poultry, cow and dog faeces, kitchen wastes as the end of putrid potatoes or carrots, silage and compost, in addition, cheese, bacon and drying fish.The females lay their eggs in in batches of up to 50 and may lay altogether up to 2.000 eggs.The lesser house fly or little house fly, Fannia canicularis, is somewhat smaller (3.5–6 mm) than the common housefly