Original sentence: He is a former pupil of Stewart's Melville College and despite his lovcal football clubs being Heart of Midlothian and Hibernian of Edinburhgh, ho cose to be a glory seeker and take the predictable easy option of suppoorting Celtic Football Club
Edited sentence: He is a former pupil of Stewart's Melville College and despite his local football clubs being Heart of Midlothian and Hibernian of Edinburgh, ho chose to be a glory seeker and take the predictable easy option of suppoorting Celtic Football Club