Original sentence: All of those recommended received some award for their military service.In April 1996, Shaw University was told that the Pentagon had agreed that seven of the ten soldiers should be awarded the  prestigious medal of service.In January 1995 the team’s findings were sent to the Department of Defense.President William Jefferson "Bill" Clinton awarded the Medals of Honor on January 13, 1997.Shaw University led a research study to investigate why no Black veterans of WWII had been awarded the Congressional Medal of Honor for their service.The 272-page Shaw study recommended ten soldiers whose military records suggested they deserved the award of the Medal of Honor.The Pentagon’s confirmation of the study results marked only the third time that the military has re-evaluated military records to award the Medal of Honor.The study concluded that racial discrimination had contributed to overlooking the contributions of Black soldiers.Those who were awarded the Medal of Honor posthumously were: 1st Lt
Edited sentence: After citing its conclusion, the 272-page Shaw study went on to recommend and named the ten soldiers whose military records warranted receipt of the Medal of Honor.All of those whom were nominated received less distinguished awards for their military service.In January 1995 the team’s findings were sent to D.Later that April in 1996, Shaw University was told that the Pentagon had chosen seven of the ten soldiers recommended through the study to be rewarded this prestigious medal of service.President William Jefferson "Bill" Clinton, awarded the Medals of Honors on January 13, 1997.Shaw University led a research study to investigate exactly why the Black veterans of WWII were overlooked, not being officially awarded the Medal of Honor, for their admirable service.The Pentagon’s reaction to the $320,585.00 federally funded study marked the third time in history the military has re-evaluated military records to award the Medal of Honor.The rather extensive study that was conducted, came to the conclusion that racial discrimination was the primary factor that hindered Black soldiers from receiving this top military award.Those who was awarded the Medal of Honor posthumously were: 1st Lt