Original sentence: Despite the several major sidequests which see to distract from the main story, the main plotline itself has been criticised heavily.Many say this sexual content is unfit for Final Fantasy and has been added simply to increase the game sales to a male teenager audience.The garment grid system means that players can switch the outfit of any of the 3 characters mid-battle, but many of the costumes reveal a considerable amount of skin (for example, the Thief costume mainly consists of a bra and hotpants, with the midrift and legs totally exposed).This game has broken several traditions that many of the conservative and long term players find almost sacred to the Final Fantasy series
Edited sentence: Despite the several major sidequests which see to distract from the main story, the main plotline itself has been criticised heavily (Final Fantasy has many conservative fans).Fans would say this proves the lazy attitude taken with this game.Many say this sexual content is unfit for a Final Fantasy and has been added simply to increase the game sales to a male teenager audience.The garment grid system means that players can switch the outfit of any of the 3 characters mid-battle, but many of the costumes reveal a considerable amount (For example, the Thief costume is little more then a bra and hotpants, with the midrift and legs totally exposed).This game has broken several traditions that many of the long term players find almost sacred to the Final Fantasy series (such long term players are sometimes called conservative gamers)