Original sentence: He was employed as such until August 1910, when he re-enlisted in the permanent army and was posted to the Australian Instructional Corps; he was to serve with this unit until the outbreak of the First World War.In 1899, he enlisted in the Commonwealth Military Forces and was allocated to the 4th Battalion, Australian Commonwealth Horse, as a private.Moving to Tasmania, Newland gained employment as a police officer in the Tasmanian Police Force during 1909
Edited sentence: He was posted to the Australian Instructional Corps; he served with this unit until the outbreak of the First World War.In 1899, he enlisted in the Commonwealth Military Forces and was assigned to the 4th Battalion, Australian Commonwealth Horse, as a private.In 1909, he became a police officer in the Tasmanian Police Force, where he remained until August 1910, when he re-enlisted in the permanent army