Original sentence: In 1920, some 18,000 Muslim peasants, mostly from Sind and the North Western Provinces, voluntarily emigrated to Afghanistan.In August 1921, a violent Muslim mob in Malabar erupted in the Moplah rebellion.Rebels intially entered a pitched battle with British troops, which they lost with thousands killed and wounded.Thousands of hindus died and many more were forcibly converted to Islam.Without any provocation, The rebels started killing Hindus
Edited sentence: After a pitched battle with British troops, which they lost with 4000 killed and thousands wounded, the rebels started killing their Hindu landlords and then all Hindus they could find.In 1920, some 18,000 Muslim peasants, mostly from Sind and the North Western Provinces, emigrated to Afghanistan.In August 1921, poor Muslim peasants in South India erupted in the Moplah rebellion.Many died.The British attempted to shut down the Khilafat Movement and in September 1921, arrested the Ali brothers