Original sentence: Banksia prionotes is widespread and locally common through much of the Southwest Botanical Province, occurring in coastal areas from Shark Bay (25°30′S) in the north, to Perth (31.6 ° S).Inland populations extend further still, with populations as far south as Kojonup (33°50′S) and as far east as Jerramungup (34°24′S 118°55′E).It grows amongst tall shrubland or low woodland, and shows a very strong preference for deep white or yellow sand, virtually never being found in heavier soils, such as those of the Darling Scarp, which limits its range to the southeast
Edited sentence: Banksia prionotes is widespread and locally common through much of the Southwest Botanical Province, occurring both along the coast and inland.Further inland, however, it has a much more extensive range, with populations as far south as Kojonup (33°50′S) and as far east as Jerramungup (34°24′S 118°55′E).It grows amongst tall shrubland or low woodland, and shows a very strong preference for deep white or yellow sand, virtually never being found in heavier soils such as those of the Darling Scarp, which limits its range to the southeast.It is most common amongst the kwongan heath of the Geraldton Sandplains north of Jurien, occurring as far north as Shark Bay (25°30′S).On the Swan Coastal Plain to the south, its distribution is patchy, and largely confined to the narrow transition zone where tuart forest gives way to jarrah forest.With the exception of a population at Point Walter (32º00′S), it does not occur on the sandplain south of the Swan River