Original sentence: A lagger is someone who, in today's age of Broadband Internet, uses a 56k Modem to connect to the internet, then joins a multiplayer online game (usually a First Person Shooter) and who has a very high ping time.This causes the game to lag
Edited sentence: A lagger is someone who, in todays age of Broadband Internet, uses a 56k Modem to connect to the internet, then joins a multiplayer online game (usually a First Person Shooter) and who has a very high ping time.This causes the game to lag and irritate those with Broadband Internet connections