Original sentence: Beginning in the summer of 2005, the school's Global Service Learning Program aims at helping students gain a broader view of the world while helping poor people around the globe.In 2005 students visited India, Peru, and China; in the summer of 2006 students will travel to Peru, China, Morocco, and the Dominican Republic.In addition, many of the school's teachers are alumni.Percentage of students receiving some financial aid: 15-25%
Edited sentence: In 2005 students visited India, Peru, and China.In addition, many of the school's teachers are alumni who returned to give back to the school.In the summer of 2006 students will be able to help out in Peru, China, Morocco, and the Dominican Republic.It has helped students gain a broader view of the world while helping out less fortunate people around the globe.Percentage with Financial Aid: between 15 and 25%.The school's Global Service Learning Program debuted to widespread acclaim in the summer of 2005