Original sentence: A pacifist, Shelton was jailed in 1917 for making an anti-draft statement in public.In 1922, Shelton self-published his first book, Fundamentals of Nature Cure.In 1928, Shelton published Human Life: Its Philosophy & Laws.In 1931, Shelton's ninth book was published: The Hygienic Care of Children.In 1932, Shelton was jailed repeatedly for practicing medicine without a license.Mahatma Gandhi is said to have relied on Shelton's writing on fasting and before the outbreak of World War II had invited Dr.Seeing importance in the Hygienic Movement (launched in 1832 by Dr.Shelton attended Bernarr Macfadden's College of Physcultopathy in Chicago and interned at Crane's Sanitarium in Elmhurst, Illinois
Edited sentence: A pacifist, Herbert Shelton was jailed in 1917 for making an anti-draft statement in public.After recognizing the importance of the Hygienic Movement (launched in 1832 by Dr.Herbert Shelton attended Bernarr Macfadden's College of Physcultopathy in Chicago and interned at Crane's Sanitarium in Elmhurst, Illinois.In 1922, Dr.In 1928, Dr.In 1931, Dr.In 1932, Dr.Mahatma Gandhi is said to have relied on Dr.Shelton published Human Life: Its Philosophy & Laws.Shelton self-published his first book, Fundamentals of Nature Cure.Shelton was jailed repeatedly for practicing medicine without a license.Shelton's ninth book was published: The Hygienic Care of Children.Shelton's writing on fasting and before the outbreak of World War II had invited Dr