Original sentence: Among his complaints: tuna sandwiches were served too warm in a tiny jail in Dooly County, Georgia; meals at a Mitchell County, Georgia, jail were served too cold in styrofoam or plastic containers not designed to maintain proper food temperatures; only 1 operative basketball hoop at another prison; under inflated basketballs at another.His tenure was not without controversy: Patrick has been accused of being a "zealot" for writing letters to prisons regarding the treatment of incarcerated criminals
Edited sentence: His tenure was not without controversy: Patrick has been accused of being a "zealot" for writing letters to prisons regarding the treatment of incarcerated criminals, which included provisions some would consider trivial or frivilous, such as: tuna sandwiches were served too warm in a tiny jail in Dooly County, Georgia; meals at a Mitchell County, Georgia, jail were served too cold in styrofoam or plastic containers not designed to maintain proper food temperatures; only 1 operative basketball hoop at another prison; under inflated basketballs at another