Original sentence: Some French people collaborated with the German invader throughout the occupation (although many French also became members of the French Resistance and the Free French Forces under Charles de Gaulle).The Vichy government also aided the deportation of -mainly foreign- Jews at the request of the German occupiers, as part of a -not entirely successful- trade-off to protect Jews of french nationality
Edited sentence: Many French people collaborated with the German invader throughout the occupation (although some French also became members of the French Resistance  (about 1 percent of the population, about the same number as in Germany) and the Free French Forces under Charles de Gaulle).The Vichy government also aided the deportation of -mainly foreign- Jews not even at the request of the German occupiers, as part of a -not entirely successful- trade-off to protect Jews of french nationality