Original sentence: McCoy's Gators extended their previous winning streaks over the Florida Southern Moccasins, The Citadel Bulldogs and the Mercer Bears, and enjoyed first-time victories against the King College Tornados and the Wofford College Terriers, but the Gators also suffered Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Association (SIAA) shutout losses to the undefeated Auburn Tigers (0–20) and the Sewanee Tigers (0–26)
Edited sentence: McCoy's Gators extended their previous winning streaks over the Florida Southern Moccasins, The Citadel Bulldogs and the Mercer Bears, and enjoyed first-time victories against the King College Tornados and the Wofford College Terriers, but the Gators also suffered stinging Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Association (SIAA) losses to the undefeated Auburn Tigers (0–20) and the Sewanee Tigers (0–26)