Original sentence: A company of French soldiers, led by Lieutenant Robert, crosses the Alps to join the army of the first consul who commands the Italian troops.Act III - The hotel trade of the Gold Lion in Milan; A street in Milan.However Napoleon's victory changes everything.However, Lieutenant Robert receives the news that Stella is the daughter, not of the duke, but of a French drum-major.The French invade the convent - the nuns have fled, and the only remaining occupant is a young student at the convent school who was in penitence, Stella, daughter of the Duke della Volta.The French troops arrive, and Milan greets the liberators and Stella can marry Lieutenant Robert.The patriotic plot, set during the Austrian occupation of Italy as Napoleon invades Lombardy in 1806, is similar to that in Donizetti's Daughter of the Regiment.The war is not over, but Stella searches for Lieutenant Robert
Edited sentence: A company of French soldiers, led by Lieutenant Robert, crosses the Alps to join the army of the first Consul who commands the Italian troops.Act III - The hotel trade of the gold Lion in Milan; A street in Milan.But Bonapartes victory changes everything.However, Lieutenant Robert receives news: Stella turns out to be a daughter, not of the duke, but of a French drum-major.Now Stella can marry Lieutenant Robert.The French invade the convent - the nuns had fled, and the only remaining occupant is a young student at the convent school who was in penitence, Stella, daughter of the Duke della Volta.The French troops arrive, and Milan greets the liberators.The battles are not concluded, but Stella searches for Lieutenant Robert.The patriotic plot, set during the Austrian occupation of Italy, as Napoleon invades Lombardy in 1806, is similar to that in Donizetti's Daughter of the Regiment but is generally criticised as weak