Original sentence: Gary Wills, criticized Brodie' work in the New York Review of Books: "Two vast things, each wondrous in itself, combine to make this book a prodigy--the author's industry, and her ignorance
Edited sentence: Extremely harsh was Gary Wills, who savaged Brodie in the New York Review of Books: "Two vast things, each wondrous in itself, combine to make this book a prodigy--the author's industry, and her ignorance