Original sentence: ) It shows a minimum estimate of 14,880 and a high of 17,076 as of December 23, 2004.A western group, the Iraq Body Count project, compiles reported Iraqi civilian deaths that were caused directly by coalition military action, as well as deaths caused directly by the [insurgency] (the Iraqi Body Count project claims that the Occupying Authority is responsible to prevent these deaths under international law.The website doesn't specify which deaths were by caused by coalition military action and which deaths were caused by the insurgency.This estimate only includes incidents that were reported by at least two sources in the press
Edited sentence: A western group, the Iraq Body Count project, compiles reported Iraqi civilian deaths that were caused directly by coalition military action or that the Occupying Authority was responsible to prevent under international law.However, this estimate only includes incidents that were reported by at least two sources in the press.It shows a minimum estimate of 14,880 and a high of 17,076 as of December 23, 2004