Original sentence: Feeling political and economic neglect, Bengalis revolted and gained their independence in 1971 following a civil war in which their side received aid from India.Geographically, much of the country consists of the fertile Ganges-Brahmaputra Delta; the country has annual monsoon floods, and cyclones are frequent.It is the third-largest Muslim-majority nation, although it has a smaller Muslim population than that of neighboring India.Since independence, Bangladesh's development has since been slowed by political turmoil; the country has had fourteen different heads of government and at least four military coups in its relatively short history.The population of Bangladesh ranks seventh in the world, but its area of approximately  is ranked 94th, making it one of the most densely populated countries in the world, and the most densely populated country if small island nations and city-states are not included.This pairing based on common religion (Islam) proved geographically awkward, as a distance of some  separated the two regions
Edited sentence: Bengalis suffered political and ethno-linguistic domination and economic neglect.Geographically dominated by the fertile Ganges-Brahmaputra Delta, the country has annual monsoon floods, and cyclones are frequent.In spite of its inspirational liberation narrative, Bangladesh's development has since been marred by political turmoil, with fourteen different heads of government and at least four military coups.It is the third-largest Muslim-majority nation, but has a smaller Muslim population than the Muslim minority in India.The population of Bangladesh ranks seventh in the world, but its area of approximately  is ranked ninety-fourth, making it one of the most densely populated countries in the world, or the most densely populated country if small island nations and city-states are not included.This pairing based on common religion (Islam) was geographically awkward, as a distance of some  separated the two demographic halves.This set the stage for the final partition event in 1971 after a civil war marked by Pakistani brutality and Indian support for the rebels