Original sentence: Big Wolf on Campus is a TV series created by Christopher Briggs and Peter Knight.Dawkins, who was bitten by a werewolf during a camping trip in the woods; after becoming a werewolf he fights against vampires, cat women, ghosts, zombies etc to keep his hometown of Pleasantville safe - though almost everyone in Pleasantville belives that "The Pleasantville Werewolf" is dangerous.Dingle (Goth) and Lori Baxter (knows martial arts  and wrestling moves).In the lighthearted horror/teen drama tradition of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, it is about a teenaged kid named Thomas "Tommy" P
Edited sentence: Big Wolf on Campus (best described as a low budget version of Buffy the Vampire Slayer); is a TV series created by Christopher Briggs and Peter Knight, about a teenaged kid named Thomas "Tommy" P.Dawkins, who was bitten by a Werewolf during a camping trip in the woods; after becoming a Werewolf he fights against vampires, cat women, ghosts, zombies etc to keep his hometown of Pleasantville safe - though almost everyone in Pleasantville belives that "The Pleasantville Werewolf" is dangerous.Dingle (Goth) and Lori Baxter (knows martial arts  and wrestling moves) as fights against vampires, cat women, ghosts, zombies etc