Original sentence: For example, a creation of a market for "trading" carbon dioxide emissions within the Kyoto Protocol, it is possible that London financial markets would be the centre for this potentially highly lucrative business, and the New York and Chicago stock markets would like a share (which is unlikely as long as the US rejects Kyoto).However, the threat posed by global warming can also be exploited by corporations.Many corporations and industries are increasingly accepting the possibility of global warming, and the consequences that could result from this, in the form of risks and opportunities.On 9 May 2005 Jeff Immelt, the chief executive of General Electric (GE), announced plans to reduce GE's own emissions tied to global warming by one percent by 2012.Other parts of the industry have more acceptive stances of a possible threat by global warming, such as BP (whose chairman John Browne declared a need for action in 2002)
Edited sentence: Big business is increasingly accepting the reality of global warming, and the consequences that flow from this, in the form of risks and opportunities.On 9 May 2005 Jeff Immelt, the chief executive of General Electric (the largest company in America), announced plans to reduce GE's own emissions tied to global warming by one percent by 2012.On the opportunities side, one case is the trading of carbon emissions - it looks likely that London financial markets will be the centre for this potentially highly lucrative business, and the New York and Chicago stock markets would like a share (which is unlikely as long as the US rejects Kyoto).Other parts of the industry are coming round, led by BP (whose chairman John Browne declared a need for action in 2002)