Original sentence: Producing 13 deaths, the Rye Cove tornado is the deadliest in Virginia history.The 1929 Rye Cove, Virginia tornado outbreaks were the deadliest among a potent tornado outbreak that swept from southwest to northeast along the Appalachian mountains from Alabama to Maryland
Edited sentence: 13 people were killed and many others were injured when the tornado struck and destroyed the community school at midday, including 11 students and two teachers.All of the fatalities and most of the damage from the tornado occurred at the school.One of these tornadoes (near Culpeper) also destroyed a school, but the storm struck during the evening after classes had been dismissed for the day.The Rye Cove tornado is the deadliest in Virginia history.The tornado at Rye Cove, Virginia was the deadliest among a potent tornado outbreak that swept from southwest to northeast along the Appalachian mountains from Alabama to Maryland in May 1929