Original sentence: "  On 29 May, Aljazeera broadcast footage of some activists on the MV Mavi Marmara participating in a chant invoking battle against Jews." Ali Akhbar Iritilmis  "was devoted to this activity, and always dreamt about becoming a shahid," according to a close friend." His wife also said that he  "constantly prayed to become a martyr.Prior to the flotilla's launch, some of the activists who would later die during the MV Mavi Marmara clash spoke of dreams of martyrdom
Edited sentence: " Fellow activist Ali Akhbar Iritilmis  "was devoted to this activity, and always dreamt about becoming a shahid," according to a close friend.On 29 May, Aljazeera broadcast footage of some activists on the MV Mavi Marmara participating in a chant invoking battle against Jews.Prior to the flotilla's launch, some of the activists who would later die during the MV Mavi Marmara clash declared that they dreamt of martyrdom, according to Israeli media accounts