Original sentence: Some portions of the eschatology of Judaism, and hence Christianity, have analogues originating in Zoroastrianism.These are presumed to have been transferred to Judaism during the Babylonian captivity
Edited sentence: It transferred to Judaism during the Babylonian captivity.Monotheism was also likely a primarily Zoroastrian influence, as it is during the reign of the Persian Kings, that Isaiah first makes the monotheistic declaration (Isaiah 45:5-7), corresponding to his declaration that Jews were to obey Cyrus, Kouroush in Persian (Isaiah 44 and Isaiah 45).The entire eschatology of Judaism, and hence Christianity, originated in Zoroastrianism