Original sentence: In particular, it seems the over-eating was due, at least in part, to diruption of axons between the arcuate nucleus and other hypothalamic and brainstem nuclei, rather than directly mediated by the VMN
Edited sentence: In particular, it seems the over-eating was due, at least in part, to disruption of axons between the arcuate nucleus and other hypothalamic and brainstem nuclei, rather than directly mediated by the VMN