Original sentence: Bolivia was not the only country to be conquered by the Inca.Bolivia, Ecuador, Peru, northern Chile, and a big Argentina made up an empire that stretched 2,000 miles in South America.The Inca Road was a marvel of ingenuity and engineering skill.The Inca in forced rules on Bolivia, but ruled Bolivia as a welfare state; food, clothing, and shelter was provided for the needy and elderly.The Incas made an exception to the Bolivians living near Lake Titicaca; they were allowed to continue speaking Aymara
Edited sentence: Andean Ecuador, Peru, northern Chile, and northwestern Argentina made up an empire that stretched 2,000 miles in South America.The Inca in forced rules on the peoples living on the Bolivian Altiplano, but ruled as a welfare state; food, clothing, and shelter was provided for the needy and elderly.The Incas made an exception to the peoples living near Lake Titicaca; they were allowed to continue speaking Aymara.Western Bolivia was not the only territory to be conquered by the Inca