Original sentence: Bessacarr  is a large village situated at the south-east edge of Doncaster, South Yorkshire, England.Bessacarr has expanded since the Second World War, and is now one of the largest villages in the country
Edited sentence: Bessacarr  is a large village situated at the south-east edge of Doncaster, South Yorkshire,England.Due, in part, to its respected reputation, Bessacarr has expanded hugely since the Second World War, and is now one of the largest villages in the country.It is one of the most affluent areas in the region