Original sentence: Although relatively minor, Indonesian rebellions broke out, but control was taken off the remaining independent local rulers although their wealth and splendour under the Dutch grew; southwestern Sulawesi was occupied in 1905–06, the island of Bali in 1906, and the Bird's Head Peninsula (West Papua), was brought under Dutch administration in 1920
Edited sentence: Although relatively minor, Indonesian rebellions broke out, but control was taken off the remaining independent local rulers although their wealth and splendour under the Dutch grew; southwestern Sulawesi was occupied in 1905–06, the island of Bali in 1906-08 with the Dutch intervention in Bali (1906) and finally the Dutch intervention in Bali (1908), and the Bird's Head Peninsula (West Papua), was brought under Dutch administration in 1920