Original sentence: A similar situation exists with the Bible Club.CNS also sponsors FBLA, FCCLA, and Science Olympiad clubs, and DECA.In 2004 the high school was host to a sudden rash of bomb threats, totaling seventeen in a three-month span.The GSA (Gay-Straight Alliance) is often a conflict between the school and some taxpayers who are against its presence in the school.The school had faced a previous series of threats around 1996
Edited sentence: A similar premise is with the Bible Club located within the school.In 2004 the high school was host to a sudden rash of bomb threats, totalling seventeen in a three-month span.Not to mention state known FBLA, FCCLA, and Science Olympiad clubs, and also internationally known DECA Club.The GSA (Gay-Straight Alliance) is often a conflict between the school and taxpayers who are against its location in the school