Original sentence: Although Church has called dibs on the ship and is accompanied by Sheila, she abruptly leaves just after Sarge returns.The Reds point their weapons at Church, forcing him to leave.When Church returns to the base, Tucker is still in a coma, Caboose is still lying on the floor, and Doc has taken the Alien out for a walk
Edited sentence: Although Church has called dibs on the ship and he also has Sheila with him, she starts behaving strangely (it is theorized that this is because O'malley hacked into Sheila's systems when he left Doc).Just after Sarge returns, Sheila, who has suddenly become lazy, leaves for the Blue base and the Reds point their weapons at Church, forcing him to leave.When Church gets back to the base, Tucker is still in a coma, Caboose is still lying on the floor, and Doc has taken the Alien out for a walk