Original sentence: The Pleasure Beach has marketed it as the tallest and fastest ride of its kind, however Kumali at Flamingo Land Theme Park and Zoo and Jubilee Odyssey at Fantasy Island both claim to be taller and faster.The ride also made a comic appearance on TV's GMTV.The ride is constructed by Vekoma and runs two trains, each with eight cars and a capacity of up to 16 passengers.The ride now boasts numerous special effects including cascading walls of water and sprinklers, and allowing riders a view of the nearby beach.This ride contains all the usual elements of traditional suspended looping coasters built by Vekoma: the opening butterfly inversion, the Immelmann loop (loop into corkscrew), and a double in line twist.com) and reports from BBC Newsround, the Daily Star and Daily Express newspapers
Edited sentence: The ride also made a comic appearnce on Tv's GMTV, where the reporters couldn't hold back the screams.The ride is constructed by Vekoma a leading manufacturer, and according to the Pleasure Beach it is the tallest & fastest ride of its kind in the UK.The ride now boasts numerous special effects including cascading walls of water and sprinklers, not to mention an amazing view of the nearby beach.The ride runs 2 trains, each with eight cars and a capacity of up to 16 passangers.The track styles vary, with a lighter blue structure and darker supports.This ride contains all the usual elements of traditional suspended looping coasters built by Vekoma the opening butterfly inversion, the Immelmann loop (loop into corkscrew), and a double in line twist.com) and reports from both BBC Newsround and the Daily Star and Daily Express newspapers