Original sentence: It presents a significantly redesigned graphical user interface, a change Microsoft promoted as more user-friendly than previous versions of Windows.Windows XP is known for its improved stability and efficiency over previous versions of Microsoft Windows
Edited sentence: Windows XP is known for its improved stability and efficiency over previous versions of Microsoft Windows as well as over Linux and Mac operating systems.. It presents a significantly redesigned graphical user interface, a change Microsoft promoted as more user-friendly than previous versions of Windows