Original sentence: Examples here include the little pyramid that Buffy only now notices after years of patrolling and the secret female society nobody has heard of before.Given that the mystical woman waited thousands of years in a closed pyramid, her English is spectacular.Like previous episodes, the main thrust of the plot is advanced through deus ex machina devices.Some fans argue that this is a symptom of lower quality writing in later parts of the seventh season.There are parallels between her role and that of the knight in Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade
Edited sentence: " Unfortunately, this is not true: In the next episode, "Chosen", Angel will show up with an amulet that Lilah just happened to give him back home in Los Angeles in the episode "Home" — a deus ex machina in the true sense of the word this time.After six-and-a-half years of patrolling Sunnydale's graveyard, Buffy suddenly realizes that there is this very conspicuous little pyramid just outside one of its gates; inside, a member of a secret female society that nobody has ever even heard rumors of suddenly appears up to give Buffy advice.Also, why can't Angel, Caleb or Buffy sense Spike anymore.Buffy has to kick down the door to the small pyramid to get in.Given the fact that the mystical woman waited thousands of years in a closed pyramid, her English is spectacular.The series of deus ex machina devices the writers have been using to manhandle the plot towards the final battle reaches a climax.The writers seem to acknowledge that the plotting has not been up to the series' high standard when they have the mystical woman tell Buffy: "We're the last surprise.This begs the question of how Caleb got in before she did, and why the mystical woman didn't notice him.Unfortunately, the information she gives Buffy is terrible; the knight in Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade did far better in a comparable situation