Original sentence: " But years before he became anything close to a father figure, Wayne had become a symbolic male figure, a man of impregnable virility and the embodiment of simplistic, laconic virtues, packaged in a well-built 6-foot-4-inch, 225- pound frame.And when he shambled into view, audiences sensed the arrival of coiled vigor awaiting only provocation to be sprung.He had a handsome and hearty face, with crinkles around eyes that gave the impression of a man of action, an outdoor man who chafed at a settled life.In later years, Wayne was recognized as some sort of American natural resource, and his various critics, political and film, looked on him with more respect.Reviewing The Cowboys, made in 1972, Vincent Canby, film critic of the New York Times, who did not particularly care for the film, wrote, "Wayne is, of course, marvelously indestructible, and he has become an almost perfect father figure.This screen presence emerged particularly under the ministrations of directors John Ford and Howard Hawks
Edited sentence: " But years before he became anything close to a father figure, Mr.And when he shambled into view, one could sense the arrival of coiled vigor awaiting only provocation to be sprung.As the years passed, Mr.Biography resources dedicated to John Wayne.He had a handsome and hearty face, with crinkles around eyes that were too lidded to express much emotion but gave the impression of a man of action, an outdoor man who chafed at a settled life.Reviewing "The Cowboys," made in 1972, Vincent Canby, film critic of The New York Times, who did not particularly care for it, wrote, "Wayne is, of course, marvelously indestructible, and he has become an almost perfect father figure.This screen presence emerged particularly under the ministrations of John Ford and Howard Hawks, the directors.Wayne had become a symbolic male figure, a man of impregnable virility and the embodiment of simplistic, laconic virtues, packaged in a well-built 6-foot-4-inch, 225- pound frame.Wayne was recognized as some sort of American natural resource, and his various critics, political and film, looked on him with more respect