Original sentence: Altman continued to work outside the studios in the late 1970s and throughout the 1980s, often doing small budget projects or filmed plays to keep his career alive.At the end of their conversation Mill receives a fax from his stalker.Bonnie objects to the film's new ending and is fired by Levy.It is the story of Hollywood studio executive Griffin Mill (Tim Robbins) who murders an aspiring screenwriter he believes is sending him death threats.It ushered in a new period of filmmaking for Altman, who continued on to an adaptation of Raymond Carver's short stories, Short Cuts (1993).Mill has also been receiving death threat postcards, assumed to be from a screenwriter whose pitch he rejected.Mill rebuffs her when she appeals her termination to him.The opening sequence shot lasts 7 minutes and 47 seconds without an edit
Edited sentence: Altman continued to work outside the studios in the late 1970s and throughout the 1980s, often doing small-budget projects or filmed plays to keep his career alive.At the end of their conversation, Mill receives a fax from his stalker.Bonnie objects to the films new ending and is fired by Levy; Mill rebuffs her when she appeals her termination to him.It is the story of Hollywood studio executive Griffin Mill (Tim Robbins) who murders an aspiring screenwriter he believed was sending him death threats.It ushered in a new period of filmmaking for Altman, who continued on to an epic adaptation of Raymond Carver's short stories, Short Cuts (1993).Mill has also been receiving death-threatening postcards, assumed to be from a screenwriter whose pitch he rejected.The opening sequence shot lasts 7 minutes and 47 seconds without a single camera break