Original sentence: But every time he tries to strangle him, SpongeBob is either talking to him, or he is with another person.He asks everyone but they are all too scared of the tattle-tale strangler.Then just when he was going to leave town someone offers to help
Edited sentence: But every time he tries to strangle him, SpongeBob is either talking to him, doing something, or he is with another person.He asks everyone but they are all too scared of the Tattle-tale Strangler.He is glad he is away from the "yellow idiot" (SpongeBob), but is then suprised to see Patrick (who turned himself in because of a lie that the Tattle-tale Strangler told to the extremely gullible starfish, making him think he is the Tattle-tale Strangler) as a cell-mate.Patrick says, "Hey Mac.Then just when he was going to leave town, someone offers to help.What are you in here for