Original sentence: "  In 1977, Harrison would be less charitable, stating "I mean, my God, 'Maxwell's Silver Hammer' was so fruity.Although thought by many fans to be a thinly-veiled allegory on the Charles Manson murders, this is impossible, because the Tate-La Bianca murders occurred on 8-9 August 1969, after the song was recorded.George Harrison – backing vocal, guitar and bass.George Martin – Organ.Joe Orton Diaries Published 1986 - methuen.Paul McCartney – lead and backing vocal; overdubbed guitar; piano and Moog IIIp.Ringo Starr – backing vocal, drums, anvil
Edited sentence: " In 1977, Harrison would be less charitable, stating "I mean, my God, 'Maxwell's Silver Hammer' was so fruity.Although thought by many fans to be a thinly-veiled allegory on the Charles Manson murders, this is impossible, because the Tate-La Bianca murders occurred on 8–9 August 1969, after the song was recorded.George Harrison — backing vocal, guitar and bass.George Martin — Organ.Joe Orton Diaries Published 1986 - Methuen.Paul McCartney — lead and backing vocal; overdubbed guitar; piano and Moog IIIp.Ringo Starr — backing vocal, drums, anvil