Original sentence: Noordin Mohammed Top, aka Noordin Muh Top, Noordin Mat Top, and Noordin Din Moch Top (August 11, 1968 – August 8, 2009 (unconfirmed)) was one of the most criminally wanted men in Asia
Edited sentence: Noordin Mohammed Top, aka Noordin Muh Top, Noordin Mat Top, and Noordin Din Moch Top (August 11, 1968) is one of the most criminally wanted men in Asia