Original sentence: He is currently living in Ontario, where he is pursuing a doctorate at the University of Toronto.He subsequently worked with the NDP in the 2001 provincial election and with the federal New Democratic Party in the 2004 federal election.Parker's departure from the party came as the Greens were perceived to be moving to the political right.Those people played a significant role in the efforts that eventually led to Parker's defeat at the party's March 2000 convention - after previous unsuccessful attempts in 1998 and 1999.Ultimately, his focus on building a broadly left-wing green party in BC brought criticism from some members of the environmental movement in the province
Edited sentence: He has moved from BC to Ontario to pursue a doctorate at the University of Toronto.He worked with the NDP in the 2001 provincial election and with the federal New Democratic Party in the 2004 federal election.Parker left the party as it moved to the right.These people worked to remove him as leader, succeeding finally at the party's March 2000 convention after previous unsuccessful attempts in 1998 and 1999.Ultimately, his focus on building a broadly left-wing green party in BC brought criticism from the some in the environmental movement in the province