Original sentence: Brian Tamaki is the leader of the Destiny Church, a Charismatic Christian movement that preaches a conservative biblical morality in New Zealand.He has received criticism from the media and GLBT community in New Zealand for his views.It is well known for its controversial position on Homosexuality, its "patriarchal" views, and for their belief in a decline of Christian morals and family values in the nation.The party ran candidates in most electorates in the 2005 general election gaining 0.6% of the party vote in the elections
Edited sentence: Also in 2003, Tamaki announced that Destiny Church would rule New Zealand by 2008.Brian Tamaki is the controversial leader of the Destiny Church, a Charismatic Christian movement that has become well known in New Zealand.Destiny Church is controversial for its stance against homosexual activity, its "patriarchal" views, and for speaking out on what they perceive as a decline of Christian morals and family values in the nation.He has been criticised extensively by the media and GLBT community in New Zealand for his views.He is seen by his followers as being highly charismatic, while others see him as manipulative and a "spin doctor"-type figure.However, the party only gained 0.6% of the vote in the elections.Polls had consistently pegged the party well short of the 5% threshold required to enter Parliament without winning an electorate seat.Tamaki preaches a conservative biblical morality.The party ran candidates in most electorates in the 2005 general election