Original sentence: In the preceeding months, he had become increasingly disillusioned with the BNP’s national and local leadership, this resulted in him being expelled from the BNP.On 1 May 2009, a former British National Party councillor, John Gamble, confirmed that he has defected to the EFP, after critising the BNP
Edited sentence: In the preceding months, he had become increasingly disillusioned with the BNP’s national and local leadership, this resulted in him being expelled from the BNP.On 1 May 2009, a former British National Party councillor, John Gamble, confirmed that he has defected to the EFP, after criticising the BNP