Original sentence: First Things.He is a prominent orthodox Catholic figure, well known in Catholic circles both in the United States and Canada as well as in the Vatican.He is noted for his work to promote dialogue between Catholics and other Christians, especially evangelicals.Neuhaus converted to Catholicism in 1990 and was ordained a priest.Neuhaus discusses his conversion to Catholicism in a June 1991 interview for 2000ADFather Richard John Neuhaus is a prominent American Catholic intellectual, and founder and editor of the journal First Things published by the Institute on Religion and Public Life.Ordained a Lutheran minister, Neuhaus worked in New York City.Originally from the Ottawa Valley of Ontario, Canada, Neuhaus had a Lutheran background
Edited sentence: Father Richard John Neuhaus is a prominent American Catholic intellectual, founder and editor of the prestigous journal, First Things.He is a prominent orthodox Catholic figure, well known in Catholic circles both in the United Stated and Canada as well as in The Vatican.He is especially noted for the work he has done to promote a dialogue between Catholics and other Christians, especially evangelicals.Neuhaus converted to Catholicism and was ordained a priest.Ordained a Lutheran minister, Neuhaus ministered to the poor in New York City.Originally from the Ottawa Valley of Ontario, Canada, Newhaus was brought up Lutheran.The journal is published by the "Institute on Religion and Public Life"