Original sentence: " A small amount of nectar is consumed prior to meditation, and the alcohol is said to carry the resonations across the blood-brain barrier where they are released in the brain.Apparently, the government will not allow Summum to make the nectars in the manner Summum believes they should be made.Perception of the nectars' effects is said to depend upon the awareness of the person using them
Edited sentence: " A small amount of nectar is consumed prior to meditation, and the alcohol carries the resonations across the blood-brain barrier where they are released in the brain.Apparently, the government will not allow Summum to make the nectars in the manner they should be made.Perception of the nectars' effects depends upon the awareness of the person using them