Original sentence: After that he completed his diploma in Journalism in Eenadu Journalism School, Hyderabad, also completed Diploma in Screenplay writing in Doordarshan Kendra, Ramanathapur, Hyderabad
Edited sentence: After that he completed his diploma in Journalism in Eenadu Journalism School, Hyderabad, also completed Diploma in Screenplay writing in Doordarshan Kendra, Ramanthapur, Hyderabad