Original sentence: Employers who suspected workers of trying to organize could "blacklist" said workers, practically destroying any chance of future employment.However, his tactics were highly controversial and as a result Larkin was transferred to Dublin, where it was thought he could do less damage to the Union.The Belfast strike was a moderately successful and boosted Larkin's standing amongst Irish workers.This trend did not go unnoticed by employers, who soon became alarmed by the rise in popularity of the trade union.Unskilled workers in Dublin were very much at the mercy of the employers
Edited sentence: Employers who suspected workers of trying to organize could "blacklist" them, practically destroying any chance of future employment.However, his tactics were highly controversial and as a result Larkin was transferred to Dublin.The Belfast strike was moderately successful and boosted Larkin's standing amongst Irish workers.This trend did not go unnoticed by employers, who soon became alarmed by the rise in popularity of the new trade union.Unskilled workers in Dublin were very much at the mercy of their employers