Original sentence: A perfect example is The Pan Maestros Ensemble, a band where pans are mingled with vocalists, woodwinds, and electric instruments.Currently there are massive ensembles of up to ten people performing new types of music in the world of pan.Steelpan (also known as Pan or Steel drum, and sometimes collectively with the musicians as a Steelband) is a musical instrument and a form of music originating in Trinidad in the West Indies.The advocats of pan hope that it shall soon see world recognition.The pan culture is encouraged in Trinidad and Tobago, being included in parades on Carnival days, Empancipation day.The world of steelpan is still thriving
Edited sentence: A band to match the level of any brass band or any such entertaining group.A perfect example is The Pan Maestros Ensemble.Although still encouraging the pan culture as they parade the streets on Carnivals days, Empancipation day and welcome hundreds of guests into our beloved country of Trinidad and Tobago.As of currently the steelpan world has indeed seen much improvement.Currently we have massive ensembles of ten and less people entertaining people with new types of music in the world of pan.Steelpan (also known as Pan or Steel drum, and sometimes collectively with the musicians as a Steelband) is a musical instrument and a form of music originating in Trinidad West Indies.The future of pan is in good hands and shall soon see world recognition.This is a band where we see the instrument of pan inter-meshed with woodwind, electric and voice instruments