Original sentence: " IP addresses are not collected (as they are on Wikipedia) due to security concerns, nor are articles required to adhere to Wikipedia standards of neutrality.Faith Freedom International hosts WikiIslam.In September 2006, Faith Freedom International launched WikiIslam, a website utilizing the Mediawiki interface, in which contibutors "...can safely state opinions critical of Islam without fear of censorship.WikiIslam is the subject of an article in the 7/2007 issue of the journal Contemporary Islam
Edited sentence: In September 2006, Faith Freedom International launched WikiIslam, a community-edited wiki collecting negative opinions about Islam.The website has been subject to vandalism, due to which increased security measures have been employed.WikiIslam articles are not required to adhere to Wikipedia standards of neutrality.WikiIslam is the subject of an article in the 7/2007 issue of the journal Contemporary Islam, which describes much of the material on WikiIslam as an expression of Islamophobia, and states that Islam is presented on the website from a biased perspective - where only critical or negative viewpoints are tolerated