Original sentence: Because the kanrei was the son of the shogun, ruled Kantō and controlled the military there, the area was usually called Kamakura Bakufu or Kamakura Shogunate, and Motouji  or Kamakura/Kantō Gosho, an equivalent title.The first time the title appears in writing is in a 1382 entry of the.The kanrei title was passed on to the Uesugi hereditary shitsuji.When later the habit of calling kubō the shogun spread from Kyoto to the Kantō, the ruler of Kamakura came to be called Kamakura kubō
Edited sentence: At first the territory under his rule included just the eight Kantō provinces (the ), plus Kai and Izu.Because the kanrei was the son of the shogun, ruled the Kantō and controlled the military there, the area was usually called Kamakura Bakufu or Kamakura Shogunate, and Motouji  or Kamakura/Kantō Gosho, an equivalent title.Later, Kantō Kubō Ashikaga Ujimitsu was given by the shogunate as a reward for his military support the two huge provinces of Mutsu and Dewa.The Kanrei title was passed on to the Uesugi hereditary shitsuji.The first time the title appears in writing is in a 1382 entry of the , under second Kubō Ujimitsu.When later the habit of calling kubō the shogun spread from Kyoto to the Kantō, the ruler of Kamakura came to be called Kamakura Kubō