Original sentence: Fosdick's book A Guide to Understanding the Bible traces the beliefs of the people who wrote the Bible, from the ancient beliefs of the Hebrews, which he regarded as practically pagan, to the faith and hopes of the New Testament writers
Edited sentence: Fosdick's book A Guide to Understanding the Bible traces the beliefs of the people who wrote the Bible, from the ancient, practically pagan tribal beliefs of the Hebrews to the faith and hopes of the New Testament writers