Original sentence: Battle of Al-Heffa is a battle between the Free Syrian Army and the Syrian Army in Latakia province, but primarily in the area of the town of Al-Heffa.On the first day of the battle 33 people were killed: 22 soldiers, nine rebels and two civilians.On the second day six people were killed in the shelling of the two towns.The clashes started on 5 June 2012, with a government attack on al-Heffa, where FSA rebels were reportedly concentrating.The fighting continued into the next day with government forces shelling the town of Shirqaq and continuing to assault Al-Heffa where tanks and helicopters joined the fray
Edited sentence: Battle of Al-luja is a Battle between the Free Syrian Army and the Syrian Regime's Army in Al-luja area,where the Free Syrian Army successfully driven out the Syrian Regime's Army from Al-luja area between Daraa Governorate and As-Suwayda Governorate,which is considered as a tactical gain to the FSA, Where Al-luja is thirty k.m from Damascus, and the beginning of the shift of the victory to the FSA,a lot of  people and activist in Damascus reported that the government withdrawn some force from Rif Dimashq to inside the capital as it looks like that the government is going on the defensive in Southern Syria