Original sentence: After the publication of the book, Sims was a Rome Prize Fellow at the American Academy in Rome in 2018-2019, where he worked on his third book, a novel.It received generally positive reviews from media outlets including The Guardian, Electric Literature, Los Angeles Review of Books, and Publishers Weekly.It received positive reviews from Publishers Weekly, Kirkus Reviews, and Bookforum.It won the 2014 Bard Fiction Prize, which included a $30,000 cash prize and a semester-long writer-in-residence appointment at Bard College
Edited sentence: " After the publication of the book, Sims was a Rome Prize Fellow at the American Academy in Rome in 2018-2019, where he worked on his third book, a novel.Carmen Maria Machado called the collection "[o]ne of the most genuinely terrifying, brilliant short story collections of the past decade" in Literary Hub and Hannah Pittard wrote that it "moves readers from one beleaguered mind to another by way of nearly hysterical examination" in The New York Times Book Review.It also received positive reviews from Publishers Weekly, Kirkus Reviews, and Bookforum, in which Tony Tulathimutte called Sims "possibly the smartest and most inventive writer of his (my) generation.It received generally positive reviews from media outlets including The Guardian, Electric Literature, Los Angeles Review of Books, Publishers Weekly, and The Millions.It was named one of the best books of 2013 by Complex Book Riot, and L Magazine.It was shortlisted for the 2013 Believer Book Award and won the 2014 Bard Fiction Prize, which included a $30,000 cash prize and a semester-long writer-in-residence appointment at Bard College