Original sentence: Looking around at her family, including Tony, released from the institution for the occasion, and a masked Eve, Kate still believes that she acted properly, even though everyone in her family has been negatively affected by her actions.She survives, but Tony is committed to an institution.The incident drives Tony mad and he tries to assassinate his mother
Edited sentence: Looking around at her family, including Tony, who was released from the institution for the occasion, and a masked Eve, Kate still believes that she acted properly, even though everyone in her family has been negatively affected by her actions.She survives the murder attempt, but Tony is committed to an institution.The incident drives Tony mad and he tries to kill his mother in revenge.While he clearly has the potential to become a world-famous artist, Kate secretly destroys Tony's career by bribing a notable French critic to give negative comments on Tony's work