Original sentence: With an average annual acceptance rate of around 5% (In comparison, Harvard University acceptance rate is at around 7%), admissions at UCL Laws is one of the most selective in the UK, having admitted 195 students in 2008, a small increase from 161 in 2007
Edited sentence: With an average annual acceptance rate of around 5% (In comparison, Harvard University Undergraduate Admissions acceptance rate is at around 7%), admissions at UCL Laws is one of the most selective in the UK, having admitted 195 students in 2008, a small increase from 161 in 2007