Original sentence: The BBC were unhappy with the adverts and in February 2002, dropped ideas for a future series called Olivers Army, where he would train 16 unemployed young people to learn how to cook
Edited sentence: In February 2002, the BBC choked on their licence-fee-paid cornflakes when they saw the adverts and rapidly dropped ideas for future series called Olivers Army, where he would train 16 unemployed young people