Original sentence: Despite accusations of culpability in the Bleiburg massacre, Josip Broz Tito repeatedly issued calls for surrender to the retreating column, offering amnesty and attempting to avoid a disorderly surrender.During World War II, the German minority in occupied Yugoslavia enjoyed a status of superiority over the Yugoslav population.Italian authors and scholars Raoul Pupo, Gianni Oliva, and Arrigo Petacco consider Tito responsible for the Foibe killings.The Germans had been given control over the Yugoslav region of Banat in which they ruled over the local Slav majority, forming Waffen SS volunteer formations.The Volksdeutsche (as they were called) were under heavy Nazi influence and served as the fifth column during the invasion of Yugoslavia.With rare exceptions, the Yugoslav Volksdeutsche collaborated wholeheartedly with the occupation, supplying more than 60,000 troops for German military formations, and actively participating in the brutal repression of the Yugoslav populace
Edited sentence: Among them there are Bernard Meares and.During World War II, the German minority enjoyed a status of superiority over the Yugoslav population.Many Volksdeutsche (as they were called) were under Nazi influence and served as the fifth column during the invasion of Yugoslavia.Many Yugoslav Volksdeutsche collaborated with the occupation, supplying more than 60,000 troops for German military formations, and actively participating in the brutal repression of the Yugoslav populace.Nazists had been given control over the Yugoslav region of Banat in which they ruled over the local Slav majority, forming Waffen SS volunteer formations.Pamela Ballinger.Some authors and scholars such as Raoul Pupo, Gianni Oliva and Arrigo Petacco consider Tito responsible for the Foibe killings.Some authors has considered Tito responsible fot the Bleiburg massacre, while others states that Josip Broz Tito repeatedly issued calls for surrender to the retreating column, offering amnesty and attempting to avoid a disorderly surrender.Tito has been accused of the persecution of the German minority in Yugoslavia: 523000 Germans fled or were expelled, 123000 died during flight or expulsion.Tito's involvement with the Foibe issue has attracted media coverage