Original sentence: " the South students notoriously yell out, "Masterbaters.", to which North has yet to come up with a comeback.It has a bitter rivalry with crosstown school, Sheboygan South High.North High School is located on the north side of Sheboygan, Wisconsin.North recently had an expansion added to its building, including a new commons area and indoor athletic facility.South basketball games, when the North students yell out the cheer, "Raiders
Edited sentence: " the South students notoriously yell out,"Masterbaters.", to which North has yet to come up with a comeback to.It has a bitter rivalry with crosstown school, Sheboygan South High, which has clearly dominated North High in every sporting and extracurricular activity's competition since 1996.It's a miniscule addition compared to the massively amazing addition put onto Sheboygan South, though.North High School is located on dirtier side of Sheboygan, Wisconsin, which is the North side.North High is notoriously known for it's rude students and unclean facilities.North recently had an expansion put on including a new commons area and indoor athletic facility.South basketball games, when the North student's yell out the cheer,"Raiders