Original sentence: He amuses himself by shooting two more of Logan's partners from a distance and then by wearing a "granny" dress while brutally killing Logan's best friend with a handmade weapon.Lee Clayton, a notorious "regulator" who, for a steep price, will take care of rustlers all by himself.Logan packs up to leave the area, leaving open the possibility that he and Jane can renew their relationship another time.Logan vows to kill Clayton as well as Braxton for having hired him in the first place, despite his feelings for Jane.One night after a campfire goes dark with Clayton singing himself to sleep, Logan does away with him.They decide to seek vengeance against Braxton by buying a small property near his huge ranch, then rustling his stock of horses
Edited sentence: He also wants vengeance against Braxton for having hired the regulator in the first place, despite his feelings for Jane.He amuses himself by shooting two more of Logan's partners from a distance and then by wearing a "granny" dress while brutally killing Logan's closest friend, Cal, with a handmade weapon.Lee Clayton, a notorious "regulator" who, for a price, will take care of rustlers personally.Logan abandons his farm and packs up to leave the area, although he acknowledges the possibility that he and Jane can renew their relationship another time, another place.Logan knows it's kill or be killed by Clayton.One night after a campfire goes dark with Clayton serenading his horse, Logan gets his revenge.They decide to seek vengeance against Braxton by killing his foreman Pete Marker and by buying a small property close to Braxton's ranch, then rustling his stock