Original sentence: She turned down many roles early on in her career, including the role of Emmeline Lestrange for The Blue Lagoon (that ultimately went to Brooke Shields) and narrowly missed out to Sissy Spacek for a role in Coal Miner's Daughter
Edited sentence: She turned down many roles early on in her career, including the role of Emmeline Lestrange for The Blue Lagoon (that ultimately went to Brooke Shields)