Original sentence: Over time, this was reversed, creating the colorful Ryas that caught the eye of the mid-twentieth century designers who did so much to popularize them.The complicated lists of knot-types and weaving techniques long employed by the master weavers of Persia and China are indicative of the importance of rug-making to those cultures
Edited sentence: Over time, this was reversed, creating the colorful and exciting Ryas that caught the eye of the mid-twentieth century designers who did so much to popularize them.The complicated lists of knot-types and weaving techniques long employed by the master weavers of Persia and China are fascinating as well as indicative of the importance of rug-making to those cultures