Original sentence: 115 patients in intensive care: 51 in New South Wales, 10 in Victoria, 25 in Queensland, 12 in South Australia, 9 in Western Australia, 5 in the Northern Territory, 1 in Tasmania and 2 in the ACT.12 deaths have been recorded in Queensland.23,692.23,692 individuals infected.419 individuals currently hospitalised (2,705 since beginning of epidemic).70 deaths: 24 in New South Wales, 17 in Victoria, 4 in the Northern Territory, 7 in South Australia, 12 in Queensland, 2 in Western Australia, 4 in Tasmania and 1 in the ACT.As of 4 August 2009, Australia has 23,692 confirmed cases of H1N1 Influenza 09 (Human Swine Influenza) and 70 confirmed deaths due to the disease.In Australia, 23,692 swine flu tests have given positive results and there have been 70 deaths of people infected with swine flu as of 4 August 2009.Information accurate as of 1200 EST on 4 August 2009.There has beeen two confirmed deaths in Western Australia
Edited sentence: 121 patients in intensive care: 51 in New South Wales, 10 in Victoria, 28 in Queensland, 11 in South Australia, 12 in Western Australia, 5 in the Northern Territory, 2 in Tasmania and 2 in the ACT.13 deaths have been recorded in Queensland.24,114.24,114 individuals infected.409 individuals currently hospitalised (2,789 since beginning of epidemic).74 deaths: 24 in New South Wales, 17 in Victoria, 4 in the Northern Territory, 7 in South Australia, 13 in Queensland, 5 in Western Australia, 4 in Tasmania and 1 in the ACT.As of 5 August 2009, Australia has 24,114 confirmed cases of H1N1 Influenza 09 (Human Swine Influenza) and 70 confirmed deaths due to the disease.In Australia, 24,114 swine flu tests have given positive results and there have been 74 deaths of people infected with swine flu as of 5 August 2009.Information accurate as of 1200 EST on 5 August 2009.There has beeen five confirmed deaths in Western Australia