Original sentence: French culture is profoundly allied with French language, expressing a national psychology of high emotion, playfulness, and it has to be said "Joi de vivre".Parallel to these events, it is possible to discern  deeply conservative trends in French life.The French value family life, the art of cooking good food and enjoyment of theatrical and musical arts.The TGV high speed rail network, train à grande vitesse is a fast rail transport which serves several areas of the country and is self financing.The culture of France is noted for its cosmopolitan, civilised approach to life, combined with great concern for appearances and taking a great pride in the national identity and positive achievemnts of France.The stereotypical haughty French waiter is not the norm: people are courteous and respectful to outsiders, particularly when an effort is made to communicate in French
Edited sentence: Despite these events, it is possible to discern  deeply conservative trends in French life.French language is profoundly allied with French language.Some French people are courteous and respectful to outsiders, particularly when an effort is made to communicate in French.The French value family life, cooking of good food and enjoyment of theatrical and musical arts.The TGV high speed rail network, train à grande vitesse is a fast transport which serves several areas of the country and is self financing.The culture of France is noted for its cosmopolitan, civilised approach to life, combined with great concern for appearances and tending to easily assume the superiority of all that is French.The stereotypical haughty French waiter is not the norm, especially in smaller villages