Original sentence: Agriculture is the major occupation of many of the people in and around this town.There are also many engineering industries.There are many textile mills located in and around this town.These textile mills comprise spinning and weaving mills that work closing with various apparel manufacturing companies in Coimbatore and Tirupur
Edited sentence: After 2 decades of continued growth and progress in the indigenous areas of cotton (textile) value chain, today Annur has emerged as a regional hub for cotton ginning and spinning industries and a major contributor to the state's GDP.Along with tirupur and coimbatore (where the other links of textile value chains are concentrated), this part of India has became a prominant player in national and international markets.Other engineering industries like high precision, steel works are also adding positive value to the industrialisation of Annur.With this growth also comes opportunities for further development in various growth areas like, infrastructure, education, health care and culture