Original sentence: A Ukrainian soldier on patrol over the park was beaten by self-defense soldiers with a pair of iron rods during the capture.A second Ukrainian servicemen was shot in the neck and evacuated by several ambulances arriving at the scene who were granted entrance by self-defense troops who sealed of the base to journalists.Shooting continued until the sub-sequential capture of the Ukrainian military units commander Colonel Andriy Andryushyn who was taken hostage along with several other soldiers in order to gain entry into the bases nautical building where the remaining Ukrainian personnel barricaded themselves on the 2nd floor refusing to surrender.The Ukrainian commander allegedly, reported by several sources, was interrogated by Russian troops and supposedly stated his defection to the "People of Crimea".The condition of the soldier was reported serious by military accounts
Edited sentence: A Ukrainian soldier on patrol over the park was however beaten by self-defense soldiers with a pair of iron rods during the capture.A second Ukrainian servicemen was shot in the neck and evacuated.Its unclear if their were any motives as the condition of the soldier was reported serious by military accounts.Most of the Ukrainian soldiers present at the turn of the shoot-out fled to the main nautical building at the base barricading themselves on the 2nd floor.Shooting continued until the sub-sequential capture of the Ukrainian military units commander Colonel Andriy Andryushyn who was taken hostage along with several other soldiers in order to gain entry into the nautical building.The Ukrainian commander allegedly, reported by several pro-Crimean sources, was interrogated by Russian troops and supposedly stated his defection to the "People of Crimea"