Original sentence: Consistently successful in his business ventures, Robinson is also a notable philanthropist, having donated millions of dollars to his home state.Georgia continues to benefit from both Robinson's keen business instincts and generosity.Mack Robinson (born May 7, 1923) is a respected member of the Georgia business community.Mack Robinson has led several of Atlanta's major corporations.Over the years, Robinson's personal endeavors have also met with success
Edited sentence: He has led several of Atlanta's major corporations.Mack Robinson (born May 7, 1923) is a Georgia businessman.Robinson is also a notable philanthropist, having donated millions of dollars to his home state