Original sentence: Two freshmen, Larry Kroger (Thomas Hulce) and Kent Dorfman (Stephen Furst), described respectively as "a wimp and a blimp", are trying to pledge a good fraternity
Edited sentence: Two freshmen, wimpy but relatively normal Larry Kroger (Thomas Hulce) and fat loser Kent Dorfman (Stephen Furst) (described collectively as "a wimp and a blimp"), are trying to pledge a good fraternity