Original sentence: It was followed by evacuation of that city's Jewish community.One part of the riots in Palestine of 1929, which included the massacre of 67 Jews in Hebron by Arabs.The killing of 12 Israeli soliders and security forces and wounding of 16 civilians, after Palestinians opened fire with rifles and grenades on a group of Jews (accompanied by an armed escort) returning from Sabbath prayers at the Tomb of the Patriarchs, then ambushed soldiers, ambulances, and rescue workers who arrived at the scene in response to the attack on November 15, 2002
Edited sentence: It was followed by evacuation of that city's ancient Jewish community.One part of the riots in Palestine of 1929, which included the massacre of 67 Jews in Hebron by Arab terrorists.The Arab terrorists then ambushed ambulances, rescue workers, and soldiers who arrived at the scene to help the wounded.The murder of 12 Israeli security forces and wounding of 16 Jewish civilians on November 15, 2002, after Arab terrorists with rifles and grenades attempted to mass-murder a group of Jews returning from Sabbath prayers at the Tomb of the Patriarchs