Original sentence: , Narcissistic Personality Disorder, with her dedication to improving her social standing, ingratiating herself (frequently in a completely shameless manner) with those she considers her social equals / betters, such as the local vicar, local notables, and aristocrats.Her most humiliating moment is when she and Richard rent out an old boat for a nautical candlelight supper for Elizabeth and Emmett, but but it concludes disastrously with both Richard and Hyacinth falling into the river and ending up drenched.Hyacinth appears to genuinely love him - although not enough to have him live with her.Hyacinth is pathological, i.If they hang up, she blames the phone disconnect on a faulty line, She never listens to her long-suffering neighbour Elizabeth, but cannot understand why so many people (excepting the Major, who has a huge crush on Hyacinth and often behaves in a manner of borderline sexual harassment whenever they're in each other's presence) fail to covet invitations to her parties
Edited sentence: , Narcissistic Personality Disorder), with her dedication to improving her social standing, ingratiating herself (frequently in a completely shameless manner) with those she considers her social equals / betters, such as the local vicar, local notables, and aristocrats.Hyacinth appears to genuinely love him (although not enough to have him live with her as he slurps his cocoa) and he would appear to be the only member of her family whom Hyacinth has any affection for possibly because she views his status as an old war-hero as somewhat illustrious.Hyacinth is pathological (i.If they hang up, she blames the phone disconnect on a faulty line.One of her most humiliating moments is when she and Richard rent out an old boat for a nautical candlelight supper for Elizabeth and Emmett, but but it concludes disastrously with both Richard and Hyacinth falling into the river and ending up drenched.She never listens to her long-suffering neighbour Elizabeth, but cannot understand why so many people (excepting the Major, who has a huge crush on Hyacinth and often behaves in a manner of borderline sexual harassment whenever they're in each other's presence) fail to covet invitations to her parties