Original sentence: A new downtown is being developed which its promoters hope will bring back the "old Florida" feel to the city.In recent years, Oldsmar has experienced explosive growth including the construction of many retail establishments as well as new hotels and industry
Edited sentence: A new downtown is being developed which will bring back the "old Florida" feel to the city.In recent years, Oldsmar has experienced explosive growth including the construction of many retail establishments as well as new hotels and industry which seem to mushroom up almost overnight