Original sentence: After one week of heavy rotation on MTV Russia, it went straight to #1 in MTV “Russian Top 10” (weekly chart show with Russian-only videos competing with each other) and #7 in MTV Top 20.Despite its controversial and provocative character, MTV put it on air.The girls continued to tour all over Europe.The girls, who did not speak English fluently, enlisted the aid of an English Department professor from Moscow State University, delaying the recording.The single received success on radio as well, listed on 1st National Radio "Russian Radio" and 7 other national radio stations in Russia.The video went on to win the People's Choice at the MTV Russian Music Awards
Edited sentence: After one week of heavy rotation on MTV Russia, it went straight to #1 in MTV “Russian Top 10” (weekly chart show with Russian only videos competing with each other) and #7 in MTV Top 20 (leaving behind Jennifer Lopez, Eminem and Backstreet Boys).Despite its controversial and provocative character, MTV was brave enough to put it on air.However, the girls did not speak English fluently, and studied very hard with the aid of an English Department professor from Moscow State University, so the recording was delayed.The girls continued to tour all over Europe, winning many awards for their album, and their hit single.The music video also sparked many news bits on homosexuality.The single received major success at radios as well, A listed on 1st National Radio "Russian Radio" and 7 other national radios in Russia.The video went on to win awards, such as the People's Choice at the MTV Russia Music awards