Original sentence: "(See History of the Church, vol.2, pp.235, 236, 348-351).An Irishman named Michael Chandler had brought a travelling exhibition of four Egyptian mummies and papyri to Kirtland, Ohio, then home of the Mormons.For each of these facsimiles, Smith offered a detailed explaination or interpretation of various elements on the papyrus and fragments including missing or destroyed portions of the fragments which were restored by Smith or under his direction in order to make the image complete and aesthetically pleasing.Smith originally published the facsimiles and the Book of Abraham as a serial in the Mormon newspaper Times and Seasons of Nauvoo, Illinois.The work is based on a set of Egyptian papyri that Joseph Smith obtained in July of 1835, which he describes as "a translation of some ancient Records, that have fallen into our hands from the catacombs of Egypt.The writings of Abraham while he was in Egypt, called the Book of Abraham, written by his own hand, upon papyrus.Three etched facsimiles of hieroglyphics found with the mummy were also published in conjunction with the Book of Abraham, and often receive more attention than the book itself
Edited sentence: " (See the book's title page." Three etched facsimiles of hieroglyphics found with the mummy were also published in conjunction with the Book of Abraham, and often receive more attention than the book itself.) An Irishman named Michael Chandler had brought a travelling exhibition of four Egyptian mummies and papyri to Kirtland, Ohio, then home of the Mormons.For each of these facsimiles, Smith offered a detailed caption, as a translation of various elements on the papyrus and fragments.He characterized his "explanation" of Facsimile 2 as an incomplete translation, and missing or destroyed portions of the fragments were sketched in by the printer and editor of the Times and Seasons to make the image complete and aesthetically pleasing.Smith originally published the facsimiles and the Book of Abraham as a serial in the Mormon newspaper Times and Seasons of Nauvoo, Illinois with the heading "A translation of some ancient records, that have fallen into our hands from the catacombs of Egypt.The work is based on a set of Egyptian papyri that Joseph Smith obtained in July of 1835, which he said were "written by Abraham's own hand