Original sentence: Date of death: 9TH of february 1889.Grell Sutcliffe.Grell and Angelina forge a partnership and continued the murders.Grell has not appeared afterward.Grell often refers to himself as a female and verbalizes his infatuation with Sebastian, much to the latter's disgust.Grell's shinigami scythe is illegally modified to look and function like a chainsaw.He used to be an English  infantry soldier, possibly during the Crimean War, whose entire platoon was wiped out, leaving him to be the only survivor.His scythe is confiscated and Grell has to rely on small scissors able to cut through anything.MeiRin used to be a sniper who did not use a scope, due to her sharp far-sighted vision caused by her ill-fitting glasses.Sebastian almost kills Grell with the Grim Reapers' own scythe, but he is stopped by William Spears.William beats Grell and takes him back to headquarters
Edited sentence: Grelle Sutcliffe.Grelle and Angelina forge a partnership and continued the murders.Grelle has not appeared afterward.Grelle often refers to himself as a female and verbalizes his infatuation with Sebastian, much to the latter's disgust.Grelle's shinigami scythe is illegally modified to look and function like a chainsaw.He used to be an English soldier whose entire platoon was wiped out, leaving him to be the only survivor.His scythe is confiscated and Grelle has to rely on small scissors able to cut through anything.Maylene used to be a sniper who did not use a scope, due to her sharp far-sighted vision caused by her ill-fitting glasses.Sebastian almost kills Grelle with the Grim Reapers' own scythe, but he is stopped by William Spears.William beats Grelle and takes him back to headquarters