Original sentence: About 7% of New Yorkers are Jewish.The New York City metropolitan area is home to the largest Jewish community outside Israel; Tel Aviv proper (non-metro/within municipal limits) has a smaller population than the Jewish population of New York City proper, making New York the largest Jewish community in the world.The city's two current Major League Baseball teams are the New York Yankees and the New York Mets, who enjoy a fierce rivalry
Edited sentence: About 7% of New Yorkers are Jewish, but their impact runs far deeper then those numbers indicate.The New York City metropolitan area is home to the largest Jewish community outside Israel; Tel Aviv proper (non-metro/within municipal limits) has smaller population than the Jewish population of New York City proper, making New York the largest Jewish community in the world.The city's two current Major League Baseball teams are the New York Yankees(south Bronx) and the New York Mets(Flushing Queens), who enjoy a fierce rivalry