Original sentence: He began his career with a chart-topping album, Because and an RTE television series,  Music of The Night, and all of his recordings have received gold and platinum status over the past 15 years.In 1989 Finbar left the priesthood and began his public music career.Maura Hourihane.Wright is best known in the United States as one of the Irish Tenors, recording six albums and 5 PBS specials since 2000.Wright lives with his wife and their two children in Ireland.Wright won Ireland's "Best Male Entertainer" 2 consecutive years
Edited sentence: Finbar lives with his wife and their two children in Ireland.He began his career with a chart-topping album, Because and a RTE television series, Music of The Night, and all of his recordings have received gold and platinum status over the past 15 years.He enjoys gardening whenever home.He has recorded 6 solo albums, all of which hit gold and 4 of which hit platinum.In 1989 Finbar left the priesthood and began his public music career going on to be considered "Ireland's great romantic singer".Maura Hourihane, a local teacher whose dedication and love of music left a permanent mark on his life.Today, Mr.Won Ireland's "Best Male Entertainer" 2 consecutive years.Wright is best known in the United States as one of the world-renowned Irish Tenors, recording six albums and 5 PBS specials since 2000.Wright is known as a world-renowned artist touring throughout Europe and the United States every year