Original sentence: As a musician, he is the front man for the heavy metal band Thor, billing himself as "The Legendary Rock Warrior".He has also made a few forays into acting, appearing in such films as Zombie Nightmare and Rock 'n' Roll Nightmare (the former was featured on Mystery Science Theatre 3000).His concerts are known for his displays of strength, such as blowing up hot water bottles until they burst, bending steel bars with his teeth, and breaking bricks on his bare chest.His most recent album, Devastation of Musculation, was released in March, 2006.Jon Mikl Thor (born in Vancouver, Canada), is a Canadian bodybuilder and heavy metal musician
Edited sentence: As a musician, he is the front man for the band Thor, known as "The Legendary Rock Warrior".Classic Rock magazine named him one of the greatest frontmen in the history of music.During his current shows Thor does many costume changes and theatrics.He has starred in numerous movies, appearing in such films as Zombie Nightmare and Rock 'n' Roll Nightmare (the former was featured on Mystery Science Theatre 3000).He is highly entertaining as well as being a top notch vocalist.His concerts are known for his displays of strength, such as blowing up hot water bottles until they burst, bending steel bars with his teeth, and breaking bricks on his bare chest as well as thunderous and powerful music.His latest album is called "Into The Noise" released in 2008 and Jon has been touring throughout North America driving fans wild with his spectacular concerts.Jon Mikl Thor (born in Vancouver, Canada), is a champion bodybuilder, rock superstar, songwriter and movie star.Jon Mikl Thor, Arnold Schwarzenegger and Steve Reeves.Jon has recorded over 20 albums in his incredible career.One of his recent lead roles was in 2007  "A Family Lost" for Lifetime Network.Only a few bodybuilders in history have gone on to achieve greatness in the entertainment world