Original sentence: On April 15, 2006, Grammy-winning singer-producer Kenneth "Babyface" Edmonds had filed a breach of contract lawsuit against Baker, claiming she owed him more than $250,000
Edited sentence: On April 15, 2006, the colder, greedier side of the music industry reared it's head when Grammy-winning singer-producer Kenneth "Babyface" Edmonds had filed a breach of contract lawsuit against Baker, claiming she owed him more than $250,000