Original sentence: Eliteism is prevalent in the goth scene.Goth, Goth music, Gothic rock, Death rock, Death rock fashion, Black metal, Black metal fashion.Gothic fashion is a style of dress affected by young people who identify themselves as goths.Hair is most often dyed a flat, matte black.It is allied to Goth music, but not all musicians who dress in this fashion produce Goth music.This may present a problem, since goths tend to not like black metal, and metalheads tend to not associate with goths.Those who dress goth, but are not goth, are considered posers, and are often heckled.Typical goth dress includes black clothing accessorized with silver; often, punkish accents such as studded collars are included.Various piercings are not uncommon, and both males and females often wear dark makeup
Edited sentence: Creativity is paramount, shop at vintage clothing stores, salvation armys, and ultra-expensive shops, for a mix & match wardrobe, if you don't want to be heckled in a goth club.Essentially, people who dress goth, but are not goth, are considered to be Posers.Goth is also a fashion.Goth, Goth music, Gothic rock, Death rock, Death rock fashion, Black metal, Black metal fashion, Gothic lolita.Gothic fashion is a style of dress affected by individuals who identify themselves as goths.It doesn't hurt to be fabulously thin & beautiful either.Most goths would agree that shopping at 'Hot Topic' for all of your clothing needs is a dead give away that you are a poser.This brings about confusion because practically any style of music can have musicians that are into Goth fashion, but it does not mean that their music is gothic music.This brings us to the topic of eliteism, which is very prevalent in the goth scene.This can be a problem, since goths tend to not like black metal, and metalheads tend to not associate with goths