Original sentence: ACS (Independent) has been affiliated with the international Odyssey of the Mind competitions since 1998, when its teams represented Singapore at the World Finals in Disneyworld, Florida.ACS(I) won its first under-20 World Champions title.In 1999, 2000 and 2001, ACS(I) sent teams to the Finals at the University of Tennessee and University of Maryland respectively.The World Champions team was composed of year 5 students, the first batch of ACS(I) students taking the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme.The other two teams clinched 4th place in another Under-15 division and 5th place in another Under-20 division
Edited sentence: ACS (Independent) boasts a long affiliation with the international Odyssey of the Mind competitions, with its school teams representing Singapore as early as 1998 at the World Finals in Disneyworld, Florida.All 3 teams did well, with ACS (Independent) winning its first-ever under-20 World Champions title.OM's early years in Singapore in 1999, 2000 and 2001 also saw ACS(I) dominating the nation's scene, consistently sending teams to the Finals at the University of Tennessee and University of Maryland respectively.The World Champions team was composed of year 5 students, the first batch of ACS (Independent) students taking the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme.The other two teams did well too clinching the 4th place in another Under-15 division as well as 5th place in another Under-20 division