Original sentence: However, the defensive unit finished 110th in total defense.The 2010 Wolverines finished the season ranked eighth nationally in total offense with quarteback Denard Robinson setting several individual records
Edited sentence: In stark contrast, however, the Wolverines had an awful year defensively and finished 110th in total defense.The Wolverines had an excellent season offensively, with QB Denard Robinson setting several individual records, and finished the season ranked 8th nationally in total offense