Original sentence: Athletic Union Officer - Emma Davis.Campaigns Officer - Jade Allison.Commercial Services Officer - David Cummins.Communications Officer - Mario Creatura.Democracy Officer - Indy Suarez.Equality and Diversity Officer - Sahar Mirhardi.Ethics and Environmental Officer - Charlotte Bassam-Bowles.Faculty of Arts Officer - Zoe Gomez.Faculty of History and Social Sciences - Yewei Hua.Faculty of Sciences Officer - Matt Wilkinson.International Students' Officer - Wan Yung Lee.Participation Officer - Amal Mohamed.Societies Federation Officer - Daniel Griffiths.Student Development and Volunteering Officer - Maddy Rees
Edited sentence: Academic Affairs Officer - Hardeep Singh Lalli.Athletic Union Officer - Claire Nineham.Campaigns Officer - Shivani Singh.Communications Officer - Paul Wrench.Democracy Officer - Benjamin Sibthorpe.Ethics and Environmental Officer - Alice Redfern.International Students' Officer - Sarah Rahman.Societies Federation Officer - Rachel Pearson.Student Development and Volunteering Officer - Emily Cookson