Original sentence: A final forlorn attack on Elsenborn ridge was make on the 26th of December by the 246th Volksgrenadier Division (Germany), against units of the US 99th Infantry Division, was mowed down by artillery fire virtually at the moment of its start
Edited sentence: A final forlorn attack on Elsenborn ridge was make on the 26th of December by the 246th Volksgrenadier Division (Germany), against units of the US 99th Infantry Division.This attack by more infantry conscripts was mowed down by artillery fire virtually at the moment of its start