Original sentence: Room to Ride Wanting more freedom to ride, Binky Barnes and his friends take to the streets in an effort to convince Elwood City to vote for new bike lanes.When all seems lost, he gets a helping hand from Lance Armstrong, who is in town for a local race
Edited sentence: A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Tibble The Tibble Twins set out on new business venture – selling their pre-school art masterpieces to earn enough money to buy the coveted Krummy Kreepy Kastle.As their business takes off, so does their own appreciation for their art.Is the Krummy Kreepy Kastle really worth giving up their masterpieces