Original sentence: Aside from being a contraceptive and for management of irregular periods, there may be incidental benefits to the Pill.Given that the benefits are less well researched or highlighted than the risks, the question arises as to how the reduction in incidence of these cancers compares against the increased risks of developing breast cancer or deep-vein thrombosis
Edited sentence: Aside from being a contraceptive and for management of irregular periods, there may be an incidental benefit to the Pill.There is disagreement as to whether the reduced incidence of these cancers outweighs the increased risk of developing breast cancer or deep-vein thrombosis