Original sentence: Street-Porter's approach did not endear her to critics who argued that her diction was below standard, questioning her values and the suitability of someone thrice-married-before-40 as an influence on youth programming
Edited sentence: Street-Porter's approach did not endear her to the more conservative critics who argued that her diction was below standard, questioning her values and the suitability of someone thrice-married-before-40 as an influence on youth programming