Original sentence: A little further along is Affleck's Palace,  a leading centre typically catering for alternative and individualised fashions.At the Piccadilly end of the Street is found the Late Lounge, an indie club.Holier Than Thou are a piercing studio and sell new age products.Magma is a retailer typically catering for the graphic designers, and for the Sci Fi fan there is Forbidden Planet.Many of the top ranking stand up acts have appeared here.Matt and Phreds is a Jazz club, futher along the street.Oldham Street is the heart of Manchester City Centre's Northern Quarter, in northwest England.The Mosh Pit selling mosh gear and the Studio who are one of the city's prominent tattoo and piercing parlours.There are a wide variety of shops on Oldham Street.Up the stairs to the second floor will lead you to Mardi Gras Trading, where you will find a wide selection of bath time treats, natural beauty products, fragrances and incense at a fraction of the price that you would pay elsewhere.Up the stairs you will find Panic posters, who have a selection of posters of leading bands
Edited sentence: A little further along is Afflecks Palace a haven for the fashion bargain hunter who likes to have something a little more fun and individual.At the Piccadilly end of the Street you will find the Late Lounge, the hang out of the indie kids.For the Jazz fan Matt and Phreds along the street provides some fabulous sounds.Holier Than Thou are a piercing studio and sell new age goodies.It is fast gaining a reputation as the fashionable place to shop, eat and drink.Magma is a haven for the graphic designer and Coffee Table Book addict, and for the Sci Fi fan there is Forbidden Planet.Many of the top stand up acts appear here.Oldham Street is the heart of Manchester's Northern Quarter.The Mosh Pit selling mosh gear and the Studio who are one of the city's best tattoo and piercing parlours.There are a wide variety of shops for you to browse.Up the stairs to the second floor and your nose will lead you to the fragrant delights of Mardi Gras Trading, where you will find a wide selection of bath time treats, natural beauty products, fragrances and incense at a fraction of the price that you would pay elsewhere, check out the website at www.Up the stairs you will find Panic posters, who have a great selection of posters of all the best bands