Original sentence: " Tempo himself wrote  that, “The slogan about a united Macedonia first appeared in the Manifesto of the HQ of the National Liberation Army of Macedonia, at the beginning of October 1943.A similar term was used in 1944 to describe a unit fighting in the Second World War called the "First Aegean Macedonian Brigade" , although there is no evidence that this is the first usage of the term "Aegean Macedonia".Aegean Macedonia is a Macedonian Slav nationalist term used to refer to the region of Macedonia in Greece, in the context of a United Macedonia.Hitherto, the Yugolsav party leadership only had designs on Vardar Macedonia.In 1946, the Belgrade newspaper Borba, (August 26, 1946) published an article under the title "Aegean Macedonia", it was also published in Skopje’s Nova Makedonija with a map of Yugoslav territorial claims against Greece.Indeed, Tsola Dragoiocheva, in her Memoirs, 'Pobadata', Sofia 1979, writes that, "Under pressure from Tempo, the Macedonian HQ issued a Manifesto in October 1943, for the slogan about a 'united Macedonia', which began to crop up in CPY documents.Tempo also attacked the Greek Communist Party (KKE) because it, "only recognises the Macedonian people of Aegean Macedonia a right to equality in the framework of the Greek State".The ideological context was always 'anti bourgeois-democratic parties' and in line with communist ideology.The origin of the geographical terminology is arguable.The origins of the term seem to be rooted in the 1940s but its modern usage is widely considered ambiguous and irredentist.There had been no mention of it earlier in any document either in Yugoslavia or in Macedonia”.Tito's war time representative to Macedonia, General Tempo (Svetozar Vukmanovic), is credited with promoting the usage of the new regional names of the Macedonian region for irredentist purposes
Edited sentence: Aegean Macedonia is a term used to refer to the region of Macedonia in Greece, occasionally in the context of a United Macedonia.In 1946, the Belgrade newspaper Borba, (August 26, 1946) published an article under the title "Aegean Macedonia", it was also published in Macedonias Nova Makedonija with a map of Yugoslav territorial claims against Greece.The origins of the term seem to be rooted from the word "Egejska" which has been used by the inhabitants of the area