Original sentence: In the 1972 movie The Mechanic, starring Charles Bronson as a professional assasin, Bronson's character listens to the Grosse Fugue as he plans his next hit job.The planned victim is an old family friend, and the choice of music symbolises the assasin's detachment from the world
Edited sentence: In the 1972 movie The Mechanic, starring Charles Bronson as a professional assassin, Bronson's character listens to the Grosse Fugue as he plans his next hit job.The planned victim is an old family friend, and the choice of music symbolises the assassin's detachment from the world