Original sentence: Although the discussion of global warming often focuses on temperature, global warming or any climate change causes changes in other things as well: overall precipitation and its patterns, cloud cover, weather, and all the other elements of our atmospheric system will be impacted by the increase in radiative forcing due to human changes in greenhouse gas concentrations in the atmosphere
Edited sentence: Although the discussion of global warming often focuses on temperature, global warming or any climate change may cause changes in other things as well.Overall precipitation and its patterns, cloud cover, weather, and all the other elements of our atmospheric system may be be impacted by an increase in radiative forcing due to human changes in greenhouse gas concentrations in the atmosphere