Original sentence: Using tatics of police intimidation and vote rigging , he diminished the role of the oppositions (mainly those loyal to his Croatian rival, Stjepan Radić ) to his government in parliament, creating an environment to centralization of power in the hands of the Serbs in general and Serbian politicians in particular
Edited sentence: Using tatics of police intimidation and vote rigging , he diminished the role of the oppositions (mainly those loyal to his Croatian rival, Stefan Raditch ) to his government in parliament, creating an environment to centralization of power in the hands of the Serbs in general and Serbian politicians in particular