Original sentence: It has been accused of grade inflation, as have the other Ivy League institutions and Stanford.The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching, the New York Times, and some students have criticized the university for its reliance on teaching fellows in undergraduate education, as many of its faculty are engaged in research (assistant teaching is not taken into account by the major college and university rankings); they consider this to be detrimental to the quality of education
Edited sentence: (assistant teaching is not taken into account by the major college and university rankings); they consider this to be detrimental to the quality of education.It has been accused of grade inflation,.The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching, the New York Times, and some students have criticized the university for its reliance on teaching fellows in undergraduate education