Original sentence: Lieutenant-Commander (Korvettenkapitän ) Bendemann  commanded the SMS ‘’Olga’’ in 1884 as part of the newly formed West African-cruiser squadron (Westafrikanische Geschwader), again under  Rear Admiral Eduard von Knorr, to carry out “gunboat diplomacy” in Germany’s Western African area of interest, Cameroons, against a local revolt
Edited sentence: Lieutenant-Commander (Korvettenkapitän ) Bendemann  commanded the SMS ‘’Olga’’ in 1884 as part of the newly formed West African-cruiser squadron (Westafrikanische Geschwader), again under  Rear Admiral Eduard von Knorr, to carry out “gunboat diplomacy” in Germany’s Western African area of interest, Cameroon, against a local revolt