Original sentence: On July 29 where Opa-Locka rapper, "Brisco", was getting his hair cut four armed men storming into a barber shop and attacking a local entertainer before robbing him they were four black males between the ages of 18 and 25 years
Edited sentence: On July 29 where Opa-Locka rapper, "Brisco", was getting his hair cut when four armed men between the ages of 18 and 25 years storm into a barber shop and attacking a local entertainer before robbing him