Original sentence: In her own biography Sophia describes in detail her 2-day grueling ordeal where she and her husband survived numerous shrapnel injuries inflicted by 105 mm.She remained a Founding Trustee for life and made her last contribution in person just 5 days before she passed away
Edited sentence: In her own biography Sophia describes in detail her 2-day grueling ordeal where she and her husband survived numerous shrapnel injuries inflicted by 105 mm.She remained a Founding Trustee for life and made her last contribution in person just 5 days before she died