Original sentence: He speculated in the book about this: "I only noticed the resemblance as the photos were being assembled for the book [Hefner had purchased both images from Baumgarth calendar company] and that Margaret Scott's name doesn't appear in lists of pinup models active in the period.Waltz received more fan mail — ironically, for her Margaret Scott appearance — than any other Playmate in 1954
Edited sentence: He speculated in the book about this: "I only noticed the resemblance as the photos were being assembled for the book [Hefner had purchased both images.This could be a reason why Waltz received more fan mail — ironically, for her Margaret Scott appearance — than any other Playmate in 1954, and therefore might be seen as the first unofficial Playmate of the Year, though the title was not officially created until 1960.from Baumgarth calendar company] and that Margaret Scott's name doesn't appear in lists of pinup models active in the period