Original sentence: The first Executive Director, Leff Moore, was one of the two men who came up with the idea of the trail system.The heart and soul of the trail system, Moore passed away in 2005, but not before seeing the fruits of his hard work make his dream a reality: At the time of his death, the trail system had become its own economic engine for the southern coalfields of West Virginia, with record number of tourists  visiting the trail system each year.The name was the trail system is derived from the names of two families, the Hatfields and McCoys, who famously feuded near the West Virginia and Kentucky border after the Civil War
Edited sentence: At the time of his death, the trail system had become its own economic engine for the southern coalfields of West Virginia, with record number of tourists visiting the trail system each year.The first Executive Director, Leff Moore, was one of the two men originated the idea of the trail system.The heart and soul of the trail system, Moore passed away in 2005, but not before seeing the fruits of his hard work make his dream a reality.The name of the trail system is derived from the names of two families, the Hatfields and McCoys, who famously feuded near the West Virginia and Kentucky border after the Civil War