Original sentence: She nevertheless was given the nickname "4711" ("Siebenundvierzig-elf") by other detainees, a reference to a version Eau de Cologne which was at the time one of Germany's best known brands
Edited sentence: She nevertheless, perhaps inevitably, was given the nickname "4711" ("Siebenundvierzig-elf") by other detainees, a reference to a version Eau de Cologne which was at the time one of Germany's best known brands