Original sentence: As of 2003, they are covering 95% of Romania's population, and have over 2.5 million subscribers (55% market share).Connex GSM is the largest mobile phone network operator in Romania, operated by MobiFon SA.Connex launched in April 1997, being the first GSM network in Romania
Edited sentence: Connex GSM Romania is the largest mobile phone network operator in Romania.Connex provides excellent European-standard services, as well as roaming agreements with many networks in Europe and around the world.Connex, launched in 1997 as the first GSM network in Romania (although not the first mobile phone network), covers 95% of Romania.Even though the network is continuously growing at a very rapid rate, it is losing market share to Orange, which provides better service and coverage.In 2002, Romania's mobile phone lines overtook its number of fixed lines.In total, there are roaming agreements with 238 international operators in 103 countries, making Connex perhaps the most efficient and best mobile phone operator in Central and Eastern Europe.Overall, the Romanian mobile phone market is in very good shape, with excellent growth, very good services from Connex and Orange, and huge hope for the future.The operator is owned by the Romanian company MobiFon SA.With 2,746,100 subscribers in Romania, Connex GSM is the largest network operator, with 55.97% market share