Original sentence: He adapted, from a short story by Chekhov, the Academy Award winning short film Swan Song, starring Sir John Gielgud.He was heavily involved in the activities of Renaissance Theatre Company and Renaissance Films; companies established by David Parfitt and Kenneth Branagh.While working at Theatre Royal, he first met his future wife, actress Geraldine McKeown (who later took the stage name Geraldine McEwan)
Edited sentence: Cruttwell was heavily involved in the activities of Renaissance Theatre Company and Renaissance Films; companies established by David Parfitt and Kenneth Branagh.During his nineteen-year tenure he trained many of this generation's finest actors, including Kenneth Branagh, Ralph Fiennes, Jane Horrocks, Alan Rickman, Mark Rylance, John Sessions and Imogen Stubbs.He adapted, from a short story by Chekhov, the Academy Award winning short film Swan Song, starring John Gielgud.While working at Theatre Royal, he first met his future wife Geraldine McKeown (who later took the stage name Geraldine McEwan)