Original sentence: The  article includes a quote from Darsney telling another writer that although he did make the statement to Krakauer, he now believes that during the period the climbing team lost track of him, Mortenson may have ended up in that village.The story recounted in Three Cups of Tea about Mortenson getting lost on the way down from K2, ended up in Korphe, and promised to build a school did not actually take place
Edited sentence: The  article includes a quote from Darsney telling another writer that although he did make the statement to Krakauer, he now believes that during the period the climbing team lost track of him, Mortenson may have stumbled into that village.The story recounted in Three Cups of Tea about Mortenson getting lost on the way down from K2, stumbled into Korphe, and promised to build a school did not actually take place