Original sentence: In November 2004, the Serious Crime Review Team in Belfast said they were looking into the mysterious death of a Rosaleen O'Kane, 33, who was found dead in her home in September 1976.Many assert that the UVF assisted the IRA—their archenemies—in slaying Murphy, as it would have been very difficult for them to know his movements otherwise.Most of their victims had no connection to the IRA or any other republican groups.This result suited both sides, with the IRA showing it could kill an enemy of the nationalist population, and the UVF able to wash its hands of the death of a man some extreme loyalists regarded as a hero
Edited sentence: All most all of their victims had no connection to the IRA or any other republican groups.In November 2004, the Serious Crime Review Team in Belfast said they were looking into the mysterious death of one Rosaleen O'Kane, 33, who was found dead in her home in September 1976.The Local police have stated as fact, that the UVF assisted the IRA—their archenemies—in slaying Murphy, as it would have been very difficult for them to know his movements otherwise.This result suited both sides, with the IRA showing it could kill an enemy of humanity, and the UVF able to wash its hands of the death of a man very few loyalists regarded as a hero