Original sentence: "  On the small screen, he appeared in CBC's Northern Town and Doctor*ology with Leslie Nielsen.Both were co-written and co-produced by Paul Spence and Michael Dowse.He directed his first feature film, Western Confidential, in 2009.He trained at the Loose Moose Theatre from 1993 to 2001.His big-screen credits include It's All Gone Pete Tong, Who is KK Downey.His portrayal of the everyman 'Terry' struck a chord with both critics and film-goers, elevating him to near cult status in his native Alberta.Lawrence is best known for his headbanger character 'Terry' from the mockumentary FUBAR: The Movie and its follow-up, FUBAR II
Edited sentence: "   On the small screen, he appeared in CBC's Northern Town and Doctor*ology with Leslie Nielsen.Both were co written, and co produced by Paul Spence and Michael Dowse.Dave Lawrence is best known for his headbanger character 'Terry' from the mockumentary hit FUBAR: The Movie and it's follow up, FUBAR II.He directed his first feature film, "Western Confidential" in 2009.He trained at the world renowned Loose Moose Theatre from 1993 to 2001.His big screen credits include It's All Gone Pete Tong, Who is KK Downey.His portrayal of the everyman 'Terry' struck a chord with both critics and film goers, elevating him to near cult status in his native Alberta