Original sentence: " Tulsa only charges $1 per animal for euthanasia and accepts about 4000 animals per year from surrounding communities for euthanasia.They contend that this results in owners abandoning or harming unwanted animals, or simply shifts the burden to nearby traditional shelters..  No-Kill advocates counter that open admission shelters may actually lead to a great deal of abandonment because a lot of people turn their animals loose rather than give them up to a shelter where they may be killed..
Edited sentence: " Tulsa only charges $1 per animal for euthanasia and accepts about 4000 animals per year from surrounding communities for euthanisia.They contend that this results in owners abandoning or harming unwanted animals, or simply shifts the burden to nearby traditional shelters..  No-Kill advocates counter that in fact open admission shelters actually lead to a great deal of abandonment because a lot of people turn their animals loose rather than give them up to a shelter where they may be killed..