Original sentence: Although most of the valley is rural, it does contain urban cities and suburbs such as Stockton, Fresno, Visalia, Tulare, Turlock, Hanford, Modesto, Bakersfield, Madera, and Merced
Edited sentence: Although most of the valley is rural, it does contain urban cities and suburbs such as Fresno, Bakersfield, Visalia, Stockton, Tulare, Turlock, Hanford, Modesto, Madera, and Merced