Original sentence: A series of suicide attacks by Palestinian militants on Israeli civilians, which culminated in the March 27, 2002 Passover massacre in which 30 Israelis were killed, followed by six other suicide bombings in a span of two weeks, had prompted the Israel Defence Forces (IDF) to conduct what it termed a large-scale counter-terrorist offensive in the West Bank
Edited sentence: A series of suicide attacks by Palestinian militants on Israeli civilians, which culminated in the March 27, 2002 Passover massacre in which 30 Israelis were killed, followed by six other suicide bombings in a span of two weeks, prompted the Israel Defence Forces (IDF) to conduct what it termed a large-scale counter-terrorist offensive in the West Bank