Original sentence: Police in a few communities such as Salt Lake City, Utah and Reno, Nevada have sometimes classified Straight Edge as a gang, due to violence associated with some Straight Edgers, and due to links some Straight Edgers had with the Animal Liberation Front
Edited sentence: Police in a few communities (such as Salt Lake City, Utah) have sometimes wrongly seen Straight Edge as a gang, due to violence associated with some Straight Edgers, and due to links some Straight Edgers had with the Animal Liberation Front