Original sentence: Armitage completed several international coordination projects with the European Community, Japan and other donor countries.Armitage occupied diplomatic positions as Presidential Special Negotiator for the Philippines Military Bases Agreement and Special Mediator for Water in the Middle East.Armitage was senior advisor to the Interim Foreign Policy Advisory board.Armitage's has also served on several Boards and committees.Bush Administration's appointment him as Coordinator for Emergency Humanitarian Assistance.During his time in these positions Mr.Following two years in the private sector, he became Administrative Assistant to Senator Bob Dole of Kansas in 1978.He helped develop politico-military relationships and initiatives throughout the world, headed U.He played a significant role in Middle East Security Policies
Edited sentence: Armitage completed extensive international coordination projects with the European Community, Japan and other donor countries.Armitage filled key diplomatic positions as Presidential Special Negotiator for the Philippines Military Bases Agreement and Special Mediator for Water in the Middle East.Armitage was senior advisor to the Interim Foreign Policy Advisory board, which prepared the President-Elect for major international policy issues confronting the new administration.Armitage’s endeavors include past service on several Boards and committees.Bush Administration's desire to jump-start international assistance to the NIS resulted in his appointment as Coordinator for Emergency Humanitarian Assistance.During his tenure in these positions Mr.Following two years in the private sector, he took the position as Administrative Assistant to Senator Bob Dole of Kansas in 1978.He played a leading role in Middle East Security Policies.He represented the Department of Defense in developing politico-military relationships and initiatives throughout the world, spearheaded U