Original sentence: Gender expectations are highly incorporated into the character's gender in video games, where the male gaze is dominant.The most popular video games reflect a territorial, aggressive state, which men tend to gravitate towards more than women
Edited sentence: Gender expectations are highly incorporated into the character's gender in video games whereas female characters are greatly under-represented and androgynous characters are even less so.In pornography, the point of view typically displays the straight man's desire, where ironically, similar attributes fall into video games by highlighting the portrayal of women and other men just as they do in the porn industry.The most popular video games reflect a territorial and aggressive state in which men tend to gravitate towards more than women.The portrayal of genders forces the atmosphere of a heteronormative culture in such games, further educating young children inaccurate social norms