Original sentence: Magdalene is both famous and notorious for its 'traditional' style, boasting both a well-regarded formal hall (held every evening) and the unfortunate distinction of having been the last previously all-male College in Oxford or Cambridge to admit women in 1988 (Oriel College was the last in Oxford, opening its doors to equality in 1984)
Edited sentence: Magdalene is both famous and notorious for its 'traditional' style, boasting both the best formal hall in Cambridge (held every evening) and the unfortunate distinction of having been the last previously all-male College in Oxford or Cambridge to admit women in 1988 (Oriel College was the last in Oxford, opening its doors to equality in 1984)