Original sentence: The panorama from the gravel road can be scenic.The tourist can hire horses to take down the mountain to the lake.Wonchi contains hotsprings, waterfalls, valleys, and other scenery.Wonchi is a trekking area
Edited sentence: Once you arrive at the Crater Lake you would be totally overtaken by the beauty of the surrounding landscape and the freshness of the air.The panorama to the right and left side of the gravel road is breathtaking.The tourist can hire horses to take you down the mountain to the lake.Wonchi contains hotsprings, waterfalls and breathtaking valleys and scenery.Wonchi is a paradise for trekkers