Original sentence: He was the grandson of the designer of the Forth Railway Bridge and used this structure as the basis of  explanations of structural design theory to his students.John Fleetwood Baker, Baron Baker OBE (19 March 1901 – 9 September 1985), was a British scientist and civil engineer
Edited sentence: 09:07, 10 August 2007 (UTC)80.4.192.69.He was the grandson of the designer of the Forth Railway Bridge and used this structure as the basis of beautifully lucid explanations of structural design theory which gave hope to many a student struggling to get to grips with the subject.…John Fleetwood Baker, Baron Baker OBE (19 March 1901 – 9 September 1985), was a British scientist and civil engineer