Original sentence: For most of his life, Chopin suffered from poor health; he died in Paris in 1849 at the age of 39.He is also known as "the poet of the piano".He was one of the great masters of Romantic music.The vast majority of Chopin's works are exclusively for the solo piano, the most notable exceptions being his two piano concertos
Edited sentence: For most of his life, Chopin suffered from poor health as shown from some of his melancholy compositions; he died in Paris in 1849 at the age of thirty-nine.He is also known as "the poet of the piano" by many world-famous pianists.He was one of many great masters of Romantic music.The vast majority of Chopin's works are exclusively for the solo piano, the most notable exceptions being his two piano concertos in which he composed when he was twenty years old