Original sentence: Warren Edward Bolster (11 June 1947,  Arlington, Virginia – 6 September 2006,  Mokuleia, Hawaii) was arguably the most influential skateboard photographer during the mid-1970s rebirth of skateboarding
Edited sentence: Warren Edward Bolster (11 June 1947,  Arlington, Virginia – 6 September 2006,  Mokuleia, Hawaii) was a skateboard photographer during the mid-1970s rebirth of skateboarding