Original sentence: Nawal El Moutawakel of Morocco will head the Evaluation Commission, having also chaired the evaluation commission for the 2012 Summer Olympics bids.They will issue a comprehensive technical appraisal for IOC members one month before elections; the final selection will be made by the full IOC membership on 2 October 2009, in Copenhagen, Denmark
Edited sentence: Cities can't invite any IOC members to visit them and they cant send them anything that can be construed as a gift.HHowever, bidding cities invest large sums in their communications programmes in an attempt to indirectly influence the IOC members by garnering domestic support, support from specialist sports media and general international media.It is not just about getting ads out there but it is about a targeted and very carefully planned campaign.Jon Tibbs, a consultant to the Tokyo bid, was recently quoted as saying “Ultimately, you are communicating with just 115 people and each one has influencers and pressure groups but you are still speaking to no more than about 1,500 people, perhaps 5,000 in the broadest sense.Nawal El Moutawakel of Morocco will head the 10 member Evaluation Commission, having also chaired the evaluation commission for the 2012 Summer Olympics bids.There are many restrictions barring the bidding cities communicate or influencing directly the 115 voting members.They will issue a comprehensive technical appraisal for IOC members one month before elections; the final selection will be made by the 115 voting members of the IOC membership on 2 October 2009, in Copenhagen, Denmark..