Original sentence: A large athletic complex was recently built from the funds donated by an anonymous donor who graduated some time ago.Across the street, a boathouse for the crew team sits on the Charles River.The complex contains various new equipment and courts, from indoor crew tanks to a tennis/hockey rink, basketball gym, and fitness center with the most up-to-date machines.The school's various athletic teams go by the Knights, and its mascot reflects that
Edited sentence: A large athletic center was recently built from the funds donated by a rich SOB who graduated some time ago.It's got all kinds of crazy stuff in there from indoor crew tanks to a tenis/hockey rink, basketball gym, and fitness center with the most up to date machines.It's mad loaded.The names of the schools various athletic teams are the Knights.There's a boathouse across the street for the crew team, too