Original sentence: He is best remembered for captaining Surrey to a string of wins in the County Championship around the time it became official in 1890, aided by the bowler George Lohmann and back up by John Sharpe and William Lockwood.However, after overcoming the crisis Surrey rapidly developed into a top-flight county side through Lohmann's bowling, which headed the list of first-class wicket-takers for seven successive years from 1885 to 1891.John Shuter (born 9 February 1855 Thornton Heath, Surrey, England; died 5 July 1920, Blackheath, Kent, England) was a cricketer who played for England and Surrey in the late 19th century.Shuter was a batsman and chiefly an off-side player
Edited sentence: He is best remembered for captaining Surrey to a string of wins in the County Championship around the time it became official in 1890, aided by the incomparable bowler George Lohmann and back up by Sharpe and Lockwood.He was chiefly an off-side player and was able to punish bowling severely, but never cared for averages - playing only to win the match for his team.However, after overcoming the crisis Surrey rapidly developed into a top-flight county side through Lohmann's incomparable bowling, which headed the list of first-class wicket-takers for seven successive years from 1885 to 1891.John Shuter (born 9 February 1855 Thornton Heath, Surrey, England; died of a 5 July 1920, Blackheath, Kent, England) was a cricketer who played for England and Surrey in the late 19th century.Shuter at his peak was, besides his skill as a captain, a fine batsman who possessed an exceptionally graceful style that he was very short at only 5 feet 6 (168cm)