Original sentence: In its two years of existence, the Foundation has grown.Its projects have become bigger and touched many lives in East Africa, including over 200,000 people living in Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania.The EABL Foundation is the CSR arm of an East Africa’s company, East African Breweries Limited
Edited sentence: In its two years of existence, the Foundation has grown in leaps and bounds.It has already touched the lives of over 200,000 people living in Kenya, Uganda and Tanzania.Its projects have become bigger and touched more lives in East Africa.The EABL Foundation is the CSR arm of one of East Africa’s most respected companies, East African Breweries Limited