Original sentence: After taking a 2-1 series lead, they lost a pivotal game 4 when the Red Wings scored the tying goal with 33 seconds left and then went on to win that game in overtime.The Sharks finished the regular season with the best record in franchise history at 51-26-5, and defeated the Nashville Predators in a 1st round rematch of last year's playoffs with the same 4-1 result.The Sharks never recovered and lost the next two games to give the series to Detroit 4-2
Edited sentence: After taking a 2-1 series lead, the Sharks lost a pivotal game 4 when they allowed the Red Wings to score the game tying goal with 33 seconds left.The Red Wings went on to win that game in overtime.The Sharks finished the regular season with the best record in franchise history at 51-26-5, defeating the Nashville Predators in a 1st round rematch of last year's playoffs with the same 4-1 result.The Sharks never recovered, losing the next two games in a row to give the series to Detroit 4-2