Original sentence: It has thick, coarse fur with color ranging from pale grayish-brown to chocolate-brown; its throat, chest and belly have a paler color.The Western Grey Kangaroo is one of the largest kangaroos, it eats babies mainly, occasionally feasting on a small child
Edited sentence: It has thick, coarse fur with colour ranging from pale greyish-brown to chocolate-brown; its throat, chest and belly have a paler colour.The Western Grey Kangaroo is one of the largest kangaroos