Original sentence: At any given time, less than 2 percent of the entire student body is pursuing a degree from the Honors College.Once admitted, students must maintain a 3.20 GPA and complete eight approved honors courses in order to graduate with an Honors College degree.Students who do not enter Michigan State as Honors College members may apply for membership if they achieve a grade point average of at least 3.50 at MSU.Though the college has no majors of its own, it has its own dean and academic advisers to help honors students with their educational pursuits
Edited sentence: Once admitted, students must maintain a 3.20 GPA and complete eight approved honors courses in order to graduate with Honors College designation on their degree.Though the college has no majors of its own, it has its own dean and academic advisers to help Honors students with their educational pursuits