Original sentence: Although Talat was the minister of the interior, many historians argue that Enver Pasha deserves equal blame for the extermination of the Armenians.He justified the ethnic cleansing with the following;.In eastern Anatolia, during the Caucasus Campaign some of the Ottoman Armenian population, following the Russian invaders, engaged in open warfare,.Most Armenians insisted that their people support the Ottoman government, as Armenians were placed in the Ottoman bureaucracy, but other Armenians claimed that only the Russian Tsar, by virtue of shared religion, could protect the Armenians from a repeat of the Hamidian Massacres.The Zeitun Resistance, which lasted three months from August 30, 1914 to December 1, 1914, resulted in the report that Armenians defeated all the Ottoman troops sent against them.While World War I was unfolding in the Middle East and shattering the Ottoman Empire, some members of the two primary non-Turkish groups within the state, the Armenians and the Arabs, called for armed struggle against the Ottomans.With this conditions he led to an order for the Tehcir Law of June 1 1915 to February 8 1916 (deportation) of Armenians from the region, which academics define as vehicle of the Armenian Genocide
Edited sentence: Although Talat was the minister of the interior, many historians argue that Enver Pasha deserves equal blame for the deportations of the Armenians.For more on this see Armenian Genocide.He said  The Zeitun Resistance, which lasted three months from August 30, 1914 to December 1, 1914, resulted in the report that Armenians defeated all the Ottoman troops sent against them.In eastern Anatolia, during the Caucasus Campaign some of the Ottoman Armenian population, often following the Armenian radical nationalists, engaged in open warfare,.Some Armenians insisted that their people support the Ottoman government, as Armenians were placed in the Ottoman bureaucracy, but other Armenians claimed that only the Russian Tsar, by virtue of shared religion, was the protector of all Armenians.Some academics define the deportations as the Armenian Genocide.While World War I was unfolding in the Middle East and shattering the Ottoman Empire, some members of the two primary nationalist groups within the state, the Armenians and the "Arab revolt", called for armed struggle against the Ottomans.With this conditions he led to an order for the Tehcir Law of June 1 1915 to February 8 1916 (deportation) of Armenians from the region