Original sentence: He died shortly afterwards, in Newport Beach, California, on 14 August 2003.Tom Kellogg died from injuries sustained when he was involved in a car accident on the Long Beach freeway in Orange County, Califonia
Edited sentence: He died shortly afterwards, in Newport Beach, California, on August 14, 2003.Sad note is that Tom Kellogg would die from aggravated injuries in a car wreck in Orange County, California.While driving an Acura sports car, he was involved in a wreck on the Long Beach freeway