Original sentence: Albert Henderson (1962–1979).Alec Cheyne (1949–1955).Archie Anderson (1946–1949).Bob McGlashan (–1946).Chris Anderson (1957–1960).Danny McGrain (1992–1994).George Fleming (1982–1985).George Mackie (1994–1995) with  Donald Park (1994).Harry Cairney (2004–2005).Ian Gibson (1990–1991).Ian Stewart (1979–1982).Jimmy Bone (1985–1987).John Brogan (1995–1996).John Brownlie (2000–2003).John Prentice (1960–1962).John Young (1987–1990).Mickey Lawson (1991–1992).Stevie Kirk (2003–2004).Tommy Gray (1955–1957)
Edited sentence: Albert Henderson (1962–79).Alec Cheyne (1949–55).Archie Anderson (1946–49).Bob McGlashan (1927–46).Chris Anderson (1957–60).Danny McGrain (1992–94).George Fleming (1982–85).George Mackie (1994–95) with  Donald Park (1994).Harry Cairney (2004–05).Ian Gibson (1990–91).Ian Stewart (1979–82).Jimmy Bone (1985–87).John Brogan (1995–96).John Brownlie (2000–03).John Prentice (1960–62).John Young (1987–90).Mickey Lawson (1991–92).Stevie Kirk (2003–04).Tommy Gray (1955–57)