Original sentence: " However, with poorly planned diets there are risks for being deficient in nutrients such as vitamin B, vitamin D, calcium, iodine and omega-3 fatty acids.These deficiencies can have potential consequences, including anemia, rickets and cretinism in children, and osteomalacia and hyperthyroidism in adults
Edited sentence: " However, vegans with poorly planned diets are at a risk for being deficient in nutrients such as vitamin B, vitamin D, calcium, iodine and omega-3 fatty acids.These deficiencies can have potentially serious consequences, including anemia, rickets and cretinism in children, and osteomalacia and hyperthyroidism in adults