Original sentence: During his time with the Atlanta Falcons Jagodzinski learned offensive zone blocking schemes from Alex Gibbs, the architect of successful NFL offensive lines such as the 1997-98 Denver Broncos World Champions
Edited sentence: During his time with the Atlanta Falcons Jagodzinski learned offensive zone blocking schemes from Alex Gibbs, the architect of some of the best offensive lines in NFL history, including the 1997-98 Denver Broncos World Champions