Original sentence: Elder John Parker (September 6, 1758 – May 19, 1836) was a Predestinarian Baptist minister, veteran of the American War of Independence, scout and minor diplomat for the American government, famous frontier Ranger.He was among the first settlers of Texas before the Texas Revolution and was killed during the Fort Parker massacre in 1836, along with several members of his extended family
Edited sentence: Elder John Parker (September 6, 1758 – May 19, 1836) was an American patriot, veteran of the American War of Independence, scout and minor diplomat for the American government, famous frontier Ranger, noted Indian fighter, Texan settler, and Predestinarian Baptist minister.He helped settle Texas before the Texas Revolution, and was immortalized in death when he was killed during the Fort Parker massacre in 1836, along with several members of his family, and others of the "Parker clan"