Original sentence: Candace was killed , during a "rebirthing" or Attachment Therapy session, by unlicensed therapists Connell Watkins and Julie Ponder at the former's home in Evergreen, Colorado, with the assistance of her ad hoc "therapeutic foster parents", and with Jeanne Newmaker in attendance
Edited sentence: Candace was killed, during a "rebirthing" or Attachment Therapy session, by therapists Connell Watkins and Julie Ponder at the former's home in Evergreen, Colorado, with the assistance of her "therapeutic foster parents", and with Jeanne Newmaker in attendance