Original sentence: " The same boy had already been suspended for "bringing his favorite book to school: 'The Big Book of Knowledge.In January 2015 a nine year old boy was suspended because "in a playful act of make-believe, told a classmate he could make him disappear with a ring forged in fictional Middle Earth’s Mount Doom
Edited sentence: " The same boy had already been suspended for "bringing his favorite book to school: "The Big Book of Knowledge.Recently the school has adopted a ridiculous conservative policy regarding suspensions: a 9 year old boy has been suspended because " in a playful act of make-believe, told a classmate he could make him disappear with a ring forged in fictional Middle Earth’s Mount Doom