Original sentence: A maker of "irresistible" ice cream, it also specializes in baked goods.Graeter's Ice Cream originated in Cincinnati, Ohio in 1870.It has been heralded by Oprah Winfrey as her favorite ice cream
Edited sentence: Graeter's Ice Cream originated in Cincinnati in 1870.It has been heralded by Oprah Winfrey as her favorite ice cream, and it has won the hearts of Cincinnatians for years.This "Irresistible" ice Cream all specializes in baked goods