Original sentence: A slab of black granite, the memorial has on its top a brass medallion that bears a close-up of Ganesan uttering his popular opening line "Success".The memorial stands at the same place where Ganesan first faced the camera
Edited sentence: An elegantly fashioned slab of black granite, the memorial has on its top a brass medallion that bears a close-up of Ganesan uttering his popular opening line "Success".The memorial stands at the very place where Ganesan first faced the camera