Original sentence: When Chloe shoots to instant fame as a spokesmodel for a national ad campaign, her long-lost birth father appears out of nowhere, her best friend betrays her and she must struggle to keep it all together -- her sobriety, her friendships, and her integrity despite the betrayals of those around her
Edited sentence: When Chloe shoots to instant fame as a spokesmodel for a national ad campaign, her long-lost birth father appears out of nowhere, her best friend betrays her and she must struggle to keep it all together—her sobriety, her friendships, and her integrity despite the betrayals of those around her