Original sentence: Eighteen women gathered on Thursday, March 17, 1842 in the second-story meeting room over the Smith's Red Brick Store in Nauvoo.Kimball and her seamstress, Miss Cook, discussed combining their efforts to assist the efforts of workers on the Latter Day Saints' Nauvoo Temple
Edited sentence: Cook, discussed combining their efforts to assist the efforts of workers on the Latter Day Saints' Nauvoo Temple.Kimball and her seamstress, Margaret A.Twenty women gathered on Thursday, March 17, 1842 in the second-story meeting room over the Smith's Red Brick Store in Nauvoo