Original sentence: Across the galaxy, the same fantasy races are found to inhabiting countless worlds, sometimes living in great technical civilisations or magically advanced medieval cultures.Dragonstar is a futuristic magic-meets-machine campaign setting created by Fantasy Flight Games for Wizards of the Coast's D20 role-playing game system.It is similar to the classic Spelljammer setting by TSR, although Spelljammer was essentially "fantasy in space", with all space travel explained through magic rather than technology, Dragonstar is more science fantasy; fighters use lasers and grenades and characters fly in starships through solar systems.The Dragon Empire is a huge bureaucracy, ruled over by the ten houses of dragons, five chromatic, five metallic, led by Mezzenbone, a red dragon of immense might and evil disposition, who sometimes travels on board The Maleficant, one of the few remaining Dreadnought class ships.The Dragonstar setting can easily combine preexisting D20 material and settings.The setting describes a galaxy under the dominion of the Dragon Empire
Edited sentence: ) are found inhabiting them, sometimes living in great technical civilisations or magically advanced medieval cultures.Across the galaxy, on countless worlds, the same races (Humans, elves, drow, dwarves, orcs etc.Dragonstar is a futuristic magic-meets-machine game world created by Fantasy Flight Games for Wizards of the Coast's D20 role-playing game system.It is highly detailed, describing a galaxy under the dominion of the Dragon Empire.It is similar to the classic Spelljammer setting by TSR, although Spelljammer was essentially "space fantasy" (all space travel was explained through magic rather than technology), while Dragonstar is more "science-fiction" (fighters use lasers and grenades and characters fly in starships through solar systems).Ruled over by the ten houses of dragons, five chromatic, five metallic, the Dragon Empire is a huge bureaucracy, ruled by the iron claw of Mezzenbone, a red dragon of immense might and evil disposition, who sometimes travels on board The Maleficant, one of the few remaining Dreadnought class ships.The most unique thing about the Dragonstar setting is that it can easily combine preexisting D20 material and settings