Original sentence: Melodic metal band Still Remains and ska band Mustard Plug hail from Grand Rapids, as does Anthony Kiedis of Red Hot Chili Peppers and Matt Granfield of The Black Market Rhythm Co.. The Grand Rapids Compilation CDs feature different local acts on their annual albums
Edited sentence: Melodic metal band Still Remains and ska band Mustard Plug hail from Grand Rapids, as does Anthony Kiedis of Red Hot Chili Peppers and Matt Granfield of The Black Market Rhythm Co.The Grand Rapids Compilation CDs feature different local acts on their annual albums.Vocalist of [Tool] [Maynard James Keenan] attended Kendall Collage and played in a local band while living in Grand Rapids