Original sentence: - An overview of Dianetics; note that this link gives a very negative view of Scientology, and uses words and phrases with what Scientologists consider to be incorrect interpretations.A scientific analysis of dianetics - the only scientific study that has been undertaken of the effectiveness of Dianetics.Stories from people who have actually applied Dianetics techniques (These testimonials are published on the official site
Edited sentence: (note that this link gives a very negative view of Scientology, and uses words and phrases with what Scientologists consider to be incorrect interpretations).A scientific analysis of dianetics - the only scientific analysis that has ever been made of Dianetics.Stories from people who have actually applied Dianetics techniques