Original sentence: He studied for a Bachelor's degree in civil engineering at the University of Melbourne, concurrently serving approximately two years in the militia with various units including 39th Battalion, the Artillery Survey Unit of 3rd Division, and the Melbourne University Regiment.Of the invasion of France on 6 June 1944, he wrote: "There has been no rejoicing
Edited sentence: He studied part time for a Bachelor's degree in civil engineering at the University of Melbourne, concurrently serving approximately two years in the militia with various units including 39th Battalion, the Artillery Survey Unit of 3rd Division, and the Melbourne University Regiment.Of the invasion of France on 6 June 1944, he wrote: "There has been no rejoicing