Original sentence: Some female reporters include Adeline Daley (whom some consider the "Jackie Robinson of female sportswriters"), Anita Martini, Tracy Dodds, Mary Garber, Lesley Visser and Sally Jenkins
Edited sentence: Many traditionalists believe that the sporting industry should be predominately for men, and female journalists have endured a lot of criticism for breaking the mold.Some breakthrough female reporters include Adeline Daley (whom some consider the "Jackie Robinson of female sportswriters"), Anita Martini, Tracy Dodds, Mary Garber, Lesley Visser and Sally Jenkins.The number of women in the sports journalism industry is rapidly growing, and this has caused a lot of controversy in recent years