Original sentence: Formerly part of the British Mandate of Palestine, it was controlled by Jordan from 1949 to 1967.Israel gained control of the territory in the 1967 Six-Day War and has held it (critics say "occupied" it) to the present (see occupied Palestinian territories).It is currently controlled by Israel and mostly inhabited by Palestinians and Israelis (see Israeli settlements).The West Bank is a region between Israel and the Jordan River.When Jordan annexed it in 1949, they gave it its present name
Edited sentence: Formerly part of the British Mandate of Palestine, it was controlled by Jordan from 1949 to 1967 and by Israel from 1967 to the present.Israel occupied the territory in the 1967 Six-Day War.It is currently occupied by Israel and mostly inhabited by Palestinians and Israeli settlers.The West Bank is a region between Israel and Jordan