Original sentence: Atatürk was born in 1881, in the Ottoman city of Selânik (now Thessaloniki, Greece), the son of a minor official who became a timber merchant.When Atatürk was 12 years old, he went to military schools in Selânik and Manastır (now Bitola, Republic of Macedonia), centres of Greek discontent towards the Ottoman administration
Edited sentence: Atatürk was born in 1881, in the Ottoman city of Thessaloniki, Greece, the son of a minor official who became a timber merchant.When Atatürk was 12 years old, he went to military schools in Thessaloniki and Manastır (now Bitola, Republic of Macedonia), centres of Greek discontent towards the Ottoman administration