Original sentence: Famem arrived after he made his Bollywood debut in Nagesh Kukunoor's Iqbal which was written by Vipul K Rawal in which he played the role of a deaf youngster aspiring to be a cricketer
Edited sentence: Famem arrived after he made his Bollywood debut in Nagesh Kukunoor's Iqbal which was brilliantly written by Vipul K Rawal in which he played the role of a deaf youngster aspiring to be a cricketer