Original sentence: After the boy is hospitalized following a severe car accident, she runs into George (appearing as Millie) multiple times.During this time, George and Reggie begin to bond and be the sisters they were not when George was alive.In the Dead Like Me film, Reggie is now a 16-year-old and has a better relationship with her mother.Joy suggests they go on a vacation.Later, she wants to move in with the dead George, who demurs, calling it ill-advised.Reggie is last seen staring out the window of the car as she and her mother leave for vacation.She is socially awkward and insecure, but secretly dates a popular high-school athlete who appears to be more in love with Reggie than his public girlfriend, but they only see each other in secret
Edited sentence: After her secret boyfriend ends up hospitalized following a severe car accident, she runs into George (appearing as Millie) multiple times.During this time, George and Reggie begin to bond and be the sisters they weren't when George was alive.In the Dead Like Me film, Reggie is now a teenager and seems to have a somewhat better relationship with her mother.Joy suggests that they go on a vacation.Later, she wants to move in with George, even though she's dead.Reggie is last seen staring out of the window of the car as they leave on vacation.She is rather socially awkward and insecure, but secretly dates a popular school athlete who appears to be even more in love with Reggie than his "real" girlfriend; but, due to boundaries in high school social cliques, they only see each other in secret.This appears to cause friction between Reggie and Joy, as the latter believes George is dead and gone, which is only half right