Original sentence: At first it was a neighborhood boys club devoted to boating and tennis, based on the shores of Wedge Pond in Winchester, MA.But fox hunting proved impossible in Brookline, so those most interested in this activity founded the Myopia Hunt Club in Hamilton, MA.Several Myopia Club members were interested in moving the club closer to Boston, and this led to the founding of the The Country Club in Brookline, MA in 1882
Edited sentence: At first it was a neighborhood boys club devoted to boating and tennis, based on the shores of Wedge Pond in Winchester, Massachusetts.But fox hunting proved impossible in Brookline, so those most interested in this activity founded the Myopia Hunt Club in Hamilton, Massachusetts.Several Myopia Club members were interested in moving the club closer to Boston, and this led to the founding of the The Country Club in Brookline, Massachusetts in 1882