Original sentence: Some have criticized the National Trust’s objections to various proposed developments near to Cape Cornwall to provide some form of tourist infrastructure.The cape was once thought to be the most south-westerly point in mainland England, however following accurate surveying; Lands End was found to be the most westerly point.The only tourist infrastructure at present is a car park (owned by the National Trust) and a public toilet and fast food van which close over the winter
Edited sentence: During the winter months there are few visitors and many take advantage of the steep, gravel covered car park to practice handbrake turns.Many have criticised the National Trusts objections to various proposed developments near to Cape Cornwall to provide some form of tourist infrastructure.The cape was once thought to be the most westerly point in mainland Britain, however following accurate surveying, Lands End was found to be the most westerly point.The only tourist infrastructure at present is a car park (owned by the National Trust incidentally) and a public toilet and fast food van which close over the winter