Original sentence: He organised the Sikh militants in the fortification of the Golden Temple during Operation Bluestar.Major General Shabeg Singh AVSM PVSM (1925 – 1984), was an Indian Army officer who, post dismissal, joined the  joined the militant leader of Damdami Taksal, Jarnail Singh Bhindranwala, as a military adviser
Edited sentence: He organised the Sikh warriors fighting for their statehood in the fortification and defense of the Golden Temple.Major General Shabeg Singh AVSM PVSM (1925 – 1984), was an Indian Army officer who, post dismissal, joined the Khalistan movement leader, Jarnail Singh Bhindranwala, as a military adviser