Original sentence: According to the SS material, 33,462 died in Buchenwald.Among others, people executed before 1944 were posted as ”transferred to Gestapo”.As a prisoner in Buchenwald, he was instructed to connect and take care of a radio installation in the facilities, where people got shot in the back of the head.Furthermore, from 1941 there were mass killings of Soviet prisoners of war.He counted the numbers, which came on telex and hid this information.He says that 8,483 Soviet prisoners of war were shot.One of the prisoners in Buchenwald, Armin Walter, has made a calculation of the number of executions by shooting in the back of the head.The SS left behind accounts of the number of prisoners and people coming to the camp and leaving the camp, split into releases, transfers and deaths.The prisoners arriving and determined for execution were not enlisted in the register of the camp, and are not included in the 33,462 dead according to the SS material.There are defects in the material left behind by the SS though.This material is one of the sources to the estimation of the number of deaths in Buchenwald
Edited sentence: According to this material, 33,462 died in Buchenwald.For example, people executed before 1944 were listed as ”transferred to Gestapo”.From 1941 mass killings of Soviet prisoners of war went unrecorded.He counted the numbers, which came via telex, and hid this information.He says that 8,483 Soviet prisoners of war were shot in this manner.However, there are defects in these accounts.Newly arrived prisoners who were sent for immediate execution were not listed in the camp register.One former prisoner of Buchenwald, Armin Walter, made a calculation of the number of executions by shooting in the back of the head.One source for the estimate of the number of deaths in Buchenwald are the SS accounts of prisoners coming to and leaving the camp.These numbers were divided into three categories: releases, transfers and deaths.While incarcerated he was instructed to set up and maintain a radio installation in the facility where the executions took place