Original sentence: He is currently pursuing Bachelors of Engineering in Computer Science in Bangalore, India.He was awarded 'The Student Of The Year' by The Times Of India for his all round excellence.He went on to perform the opening act at The Legend Ghulam Ali - Live in Concert in April, 2012.His music earned him a 5 star rating on Apple iTunes and went viral on YouTube.His music has won him critical acclaim inside and outside India and has made him a household name
Edited sentence: Adithya Srinivasan was awarded 'The Student Of The Year' by The Times Of India and is currently pursuing Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Science at MSRIT, Bangalore, India.After this concert, there was no looking back.He went on to perform the opening act at The Legend Ghulam Ali - Live in Concert.His music became a rage on the cyber globe and won him critical acclaim inside and outside India.His music has been very popular among commoners as well as connoisseurs and has earned him a 5 star rating on Apple iTunes