Original sentence: During the last segment of the third hour of the October 9th, 2006 broadcast of the Dave Ramsey show, Ramsey was involved in a heated on-air debate over the morality of running pay-day loan businesses which, Ramsey alleges, take advantage of the poor
Edited sentence: During the last segment of the third hour of the October 9th, 2006 broadcast of the Dave Ramsey show, Ramsey was involved in a heated on-air debate over the morality of running pay-day loan businesses that take advantage of the poor, particularly young American servicemen