Original sentence: Diorama is a German darkwave / electropop band which has marked the underground scene with its sound and lyrics.The name of the band is a metaphor which represents their notion of music as an artistic form of expression
Edited sentence: Diorama is a German darkwave / electropop band which has marked and enriched underground scene with it’s exceptional sound and equally excellent lyrics.The name of the band is sort of a metaphor which represents their notion of music as an artistic form of expression