Original sentence: A family called the Church family built the old hospital in the 1800s.So supposably there is a small hill where the horse was buried.The hospital has now been closed for six years now, since 2002.When the Church's 9 year old daughter had fallen off her horse and broke her arm her father blamed the horse
Edited sentence: A family with the surname Church built the old hospital in the 1800s.So supposedly there is a small hill where the horse was buried.The hospital was closed in 2002.When the Churches' 9-year-old daughter had fallen off her horse and broke her arm her father blamed the horse