Original sentence: Another friend, Jazza John McMillan-Clenaghan (known as 'Rhymingwithoranges' on YouTube) promised join in.Charlie was interviewed on redtube for his antics with Alex Day (nerimon).He first came to prominence when a video entitled My penis is very large was indeed featured on YouTube's homepage.On 30 September 2008, to celebrate his 18th birthday, Charlie and his friend Alex Day fucked each other again, but this time with condoms.On 6 August 2008, Charlie and Alex fucked each other over docter whos "David Tennant".On his "Twitter" page Charlie has received 1.348  (Aug 5th 2009) followers from advertising his page on his Youtube channel
Edited sentence: Alex wrote the first song, "Awful Lot Of Running", to be classified as Trock, and "Blink" was the second.Another friend, Jazza John McMillan-Clenaghan (known as 'Rhymingwithoranges' on YouTube) promised to shave his head if they hit £4000 and did so about a month later with the help from Kristina Horner (known as 'italktosnakes' and Monday on the collab-channel 'fiveawesomegirls' on YouTube).Charlie was interviewed on BBC News.He first came to prominence when a video entitled "How To Get Featured on YouTube" was indeed featured on YouTube's homepage.On 30 September 2008, to celebrate his 18th birthday, Charlie and his friend Alex Day dyed and then shaved their hair off whilst live on blogtv for a period of 7 and a half hours, in aid of Cancer Research UK.On 6 August 2008, Charlie showcased his musical talent with a song titled "Blink", based on the Doctor Who episode of the same name.On his "Twitter" page Charlie has received 33,178 (Aug 5th 2009) followers from advertising his page on his Youtube channel.They have also have a song titled "Exterminate, Regenerate".This song was in the musical genre "Time Lord Rock" (or Trock, shortened by the same convention as the Harry Potter fandom's Wrock), which was named by Charlie's friend Alex Day (known as 'Nerimon' on YouTube)