Original sentence: Folco jumps on top of White Mane (for the first time) and rides him bareback, across the marshes of Camargue and over the sparse dunes.The film also became popular with children and was marketed for them as such.The forty-seven minute short, filmed in the marshes of Camargue, France, won numerous awards when released in its day, including the Palme d'Or Grand Prize at the Cannes Film Festival.The ranchers chase the two, but White Mane is too fast and refuses to be caught.The ranchers return and try to spook White Mane by setting fire to the area he and his herd live
Edited sentence: Folco jumps on White Mane (for the first time) and rides him bareback across the marshes of Camargue,  over the sparse dunes to the sea.The film also became popular with children and was marketed for them.The forty-seven minute short, filmed on location in the marshes of Camargue, France, won numerous awards on its release, including the Palme d'Or Grand Prize at the Cannes Film Festival.The ranchers give chase and surround them, but they refuse to be caught.The ranchers return and try to spook White Mane by setting fire to the area he and his herd live in.With Folco on his back, White Mane rides into the sea