Original sentence: From the beginning, Selwood showed an ability to influence games, in just his fourth appearance he led his older and more experienced teammates with a game of 25 disposals and nine tackles.Geelong coaching staff had a highlights package made of this performance, to screen to the rest of the team during the match review later that week.Selwood's transition to the AFL drew positive comments throughout the footballing community, with former Brisbane coach Leigh Matthews noting how "from [his] first game ... he looked like he had played 200 of them"
Edited sentence: From the beginning, Selwood showed an ability to influence games; in just his fourth appearance he led his older and more experienced teammates with a game of 25 disposals and nine tackles.Selwood's transition to the AFL drew positive comments throughout the footballing community; former Brisbane coach Leigh Matthews noted how "from [his] first game ... he looked like he had played 200 of them".The Geelong coaching staff had a highlights package made of this performance, to screen to the rest of the team during the match review later that week