Original sentence: (The other territories are parts of India, Bhutan, Russia, Afghanistan, Tajikstan, Burma, Pakistan, and Japanese-administered islands.De facto the Republic consists of Taiwan, together with Penghu, Kinmen, Matsu and other minor islands.However the Republic of China additionally claims jurisdiction over not only the entirety of the People's Republic but also territories of nine neighbouring states, including all of Mongolia.The ROC has evolved from a single-party state with full global recognition and jurisdiction over China into a democratic state with limited international recognition and jurisdiction only over Taiwan and minor islands, though it enjoys de facto relations with many other states.The Republic of China (ROC), commonly known as Taiwan, is a state in East Asia
Edited sentence: The Republic of China (ROC), commonly known as Taiwan, is a state in East Asia that has evolved from a single-party state with full global recognition and jurisdiction over China into a democratic state with limited international recognition and jurisdiction only over Taiwan and minor islands, though it enjoys de facto relations with many other states