Original sentence: Instead, players from the NHL will participate in the 2010 Winter Olympics in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada.The NHL will not hold an All-Star Game for this season.The Olympic ice hockey tournament is played from February 16 to February 28, 2010
Edited sentence: Instead, a majority of the league's players will participate in the 2010 Winter Olympics in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada.The NHL will not hold an All-Star Game this season.The Olympic ice hockey tournament is scheduled to be played from February 16 to February 28, 2010