Original sentence: Examples include: First Priority, National Honor Society, Future Teachers of America, Key Club, Earth Club, BCIS, Computer Science, Communication Graphics, Art, Debate, Home economics, Apparel, Interior Design, Spanish and French, Welding and Air Conditioning, Criminal Justice, HOSA, Cosmotology, Choir and Indian Singers, the Purple Pride Indian Band and Twirlers, Theatre/Tech Theatre, Indian Players, Thespian Troupe #5243, Cheerleaders, and Indianettes.In April 2009, the PN-G UIL Academic Team won its 9th consecutive District Title.PN-G has had outstanding academic performance for years, being one of the best performing in the Golden Triangle area.The school generally does well at academic competitions such as UIL(district 20 4A) and TMSCA math and science
Edited sentence: Examples include: First Priority, National Honor Society, Future Teachers of America, Key Club, Earth Club, BCIS, Computer Science, Communication Graphics, Art, Debate, Home Economics, Apparel, Interior Design, Spanish, French, Welding & Air Conditioning, Criminal Justice, HOSA, Cosmotology, Choir & Indian Singers, the Purple Pride Indian Band and Twirlers, Theatre/Tech Theatre, Indian Players, Thespian Troupe #5243, Cheerleaders, and Indianettes (Drill Team).In April 2009, the PN-G UIL Academics Team won its 9th consecutive District Title.PN-G has had outstanding academic performance for years, being one of the best performing schools in the Golden Triangle area.The school generally does well at academic competitions such as UIL (District 20-4A) and TMSCA math and science