Original sentence: Romano's writing has appeared in The Nation, The New Yorker, Harper's, The Times Literary Supplement, Tikkun, Book Forum, Salon, Slate, International Herald Tribune, Lingua Franca, Columbia Journalism Review, and Die Welt
Edited sentence: For example, "in punchy conversational style" (his characterization of Wittgenstein's later work).Romano's writing has appeared in The Nation, Harper's, International Herald Tribune, Tikkun, Book Forum, Salon, Slate, Lingua Franca, Columbia Journalism Review, and Die Welt