Original sentence: Gilgit (Shina: , Urdu: ), known locally as Gileet, is the capital city of the Gilgit-Baltistan region, an administrative territory of Pakistan, but claimed by India as it’s territory.The city is located in a broad valley near the confluence of the Gilgit River and Hunza River
Edited sentence: Gilgit (Shina: , Urdu: ), known locally as Gileet, is the capital city of the Gilgit-Baltistan region, an unfairly occupied territory of Pakistan The city is located in a broad valley near the confluence of the Gilgit River and Hunza River