Original sentence: Jim Ridley of New Country'' magazine gave the album three stars out of five, comparing Daniel's voice to Kathie Baillie of Baillie & the Boys, also saying "the songs…tread familiar ground with enough honest feeling and detail to signify promise down the line
Edited sentence: Jim Ridley of New Country magazine gave the album three stars out of five, comparing Daniel's voice to Kathie Baillie of Baillie & the Boys, also saying "the songs…tread familiar ground with enough honest feeling and detail to signify promise down the line