Original sentence: The Clydesdale Cricket Club is situated at Titwood on the periphery of Pollokshields.The Darnley Street Family centre is another notable building as it serves as a community centre; it also focuses on creating local youth clubs of which there are currently two, one meeting on Wednesdays for boys aged 8–14 years and a similar group for girls aged 8–14 years which meets on Thursdays
Edited sentence: Clydesdale Cricket Club is situated at Titwood on the periphery of Pollokshields.Darnley Street Family centre serves as a community centre; it also focuses on creating local youth clubs of which there are currently two, one meeting on Wednesdays for boys aged 8–14 years and a similar group for girls aged 8–14 years which meets on Thursdays