Original sentence: His level of popular support has declined from 90 percent (the highest ever recorded by The Gallup Organization) immediately after the September 11, 2001 attacks to 26 percent (in a Newsweek poll taken in June 2007), the lowest level for any sitting President in 35 years, rivaling Richard Nixon's unpopularity at the time of the Watergate scandal and his subsequent resignation.was "under attack", Bush continued with the reading lesson with elementary school children for seven minutes
Edited sentence: His level of popular support has declined from 90 percent (the highest ever recorded by The Gallup Organization) immediately after the September 11, 2001 attacks (this statistic itself has been used as ammunition by some conspiracy theorists) to 26 percent (in a Newsweek poll taken in June 2007), the lowest level for any sitting President in 35 years, rivaling Richard Nixon's unpopularity at the time of the Watergate scandal and his subsequent resignation.was "under attack", Bush sat still for an additional seven minutes, while elementary school children in Florida read "The Pet Goat"