Original sentence: Babette March was the first Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue cover model
Edited sentence: Babette March (pronounced Marx, born Barbara Marchlowitz 1942) was the first Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue cover model.In 1976, she retired to a  farm outside Montreal.In her prime she was the "highest-paid model of her day" while working for Ford Models.She was born in Berlin and raised in Brazil, Germany and Canada