Original sentence: A collector's website with photos of B&O products throughout the decades.B&O products' "retro-contemporary" design style has influenced the way many people feel about electronic goods and their space in our homes.B&O speakers have built-in amplifiers, claimed to help eliminate the signal degradation which occurs by having an external amplifier.Bang & Olufsen (B&O) is a Danish company that designs high end audio products, television sets, and telephones.One of their most successful products is their in-ear headphones.uk (Unofficial site)
Edited sentence: A collector's website, with photos of various B&O products throughout the decades.Another unoffical site, mostly trying to sell used products.B&O products are well made and are intended to fit into a modern lifestyle.Bang & Olufsen is a Danish company that designs high end audio products, television sets, and telephones.One of their most successful products are their headphones.The products are very popular in Europe, although they have had only moderate marketing success in the United States.The products' 'retro-contemporary' style has influenced the way many people feel about electronic goods and their space in our homes.Their speakers have built-in amplifiers, claimed to help eliminate the normal signal degradation which occurs by having an external amplifier.These in-ear devices lend the clarity of their more expensive speakers to a mobile audience.Unofficial site, with additional product and company information