Original sentence: | 1845 - Lucy Mack Smith, History, 1844–1845, draft copy'.| The fair copy prepared under Lucy's direction by her scribe includes in the narrative a copy of the 1838 version of the first vision as found in the Times and Seasons''
Edited sentence: 1, pp.46, Church Archives; Early Mormon Documents, Vol.Lucy Mack Smith, History 1844-1845 book 3, p.The link has photos of the original handwritten manuscript, along with a typed representation.This “official” account omitted the important information that Lucy dated the vision to 1823, said the vision appeared to Joseph in his bedroom, and that it was an angel, not Jesus or the Father, that appeared to him.| 1845 - Lucy Mack Smith Family Memoir, rough draft'First draft of Lucy Smith’s family history, p.| Publications of Lucy Mack Smith's family history include the canonical 1838 narrative from the Times and Seasons''