Original sentence: After 1614, he came to Manila and sought reception into the Dominican Order.Arrested in July 1633, he was tortured by the gallows and the pit on August 15, 1633, and died two days later.He was ordained a priest in 1626 and returned to Japan in 1632
Edited sentence: After 1614, he came to Manila and, aspiring to greater perfection, he besought reception into the Dominican Order.Arrested in July 1633, he was put to the torture of the gallows and the pit on August 15, 1633; expiring after two days of agony.Ordained priest in 1626 he returned to his native country in 1632, risking his life for the service of God and the conversion of souls