Original sentence: " Sorley cites Douglas Pike with a figure of 900,000 PAVN/VC dead by 1973 and alleges that during a 1974 visit by Admiral Elmo Zumwalt to North Vietnam, PAVN General Võ Nguyên Giáp advised Zumwalt that the North had 330,000 missing and also that Jim Webb alleges Vietnamese losses of over 1.1m soldiers.Author Mark Woodruff states that when the Vietnamese Government released its actual losses in April 1995 as being 1.1 million dead, US body count figures he claimed they had actually underestimated communist losses.The Vietnamese government reported 849,000 military deaths during the war from the periods between 1955 and 1975, of which 1/3 were non-combat deaths, while 58,220 Americans and about 313,000 South Vietnamese combatants died  in the conflict
Edited sentence: " Sorley cites Douglas Pike with a figure of 900,000 PAVN/VC dead by 1973 and cites that during a 1974 visit by Admiral Elmo Zumwalt to North Vietnam, PAVN General Võ Nguyên Giáp advised Zumwalt that the North had 330,000 missing and also that Jim Webb confirmed Vietnamese losses of over 1.1m soldiers.Author Mark Woodruff noted that when the Vietnamese Government released its actual losses in April 1995 as being 1.1 million dead, US body count figures had actually underestimated communist losses.In their book "The Vietnam War" Geoffrey Ward and Ken Burns confirmed over 1m PAVN/VC killed.The Vietnamese government reported 849,000 military deaths during the war from the periods between 1955 and 1975, of which 1/3 were non-combat deaths, (it is unclear whether or not this figure includes the 300-330,000 PAVN/VC missing in action) while 58,220 Americans and about 313,000 South Vietnamese combatants died  in the conflict