Original sentence: Another prime attraction along the road to Padum is the Pensi-La, 4,200 metres (13,800 feet) high, and separating Zanskar from the Suru Valley and Ladakh.Not only do the campsites along the trekking routes look more and more like junkyards at the end of the tourist season
Edited sentence: Another prime attraction along the road to Padum is the Pensi-La, 4,200 metres high, and separating Zanskar from the Suru Valley and Ladakh.Not only do the campsites along the trekking routes look more and more like junkyards at the end of the tourist season, but the local population has sometimes developed a questionable attitude towards visitors, involving begging, and very occasionally stealing