Original sentence: Lady Sally's last name is almost certainly a tribute to the fictional character Travis McGee who appeared in a number of novels by John D.Strange and unusual events and visitors turn up with frequency in the stories.The bar is run by  Mike Callahan.The regulars are welcoming and willing to listen to any visitor's problems, no matter how strange, but do not snoop if a visitor is unwilling to share.The series has a related Usenet newsgroup, alt.The stories make heave use of puns.callahans, and IRC channel, #callahans, for fans
Edited sentence: Beware: the puns are extreme.It also has a related Usenet newsgroup, alt.It is run by Mike Callahan, and its regulars will listen to your problems but will almost never snoop into them if a visitor is not ready to share.Lady Sally's last name is almost certainly a tribute to the.callahans, and IRC channel, #callahans, for the devoted fan.fictional character Travis McGee who appeared in a number.of novels by John D