Original sentence: Therefore, critics claim that those who publicize details of temple ceremonies are either disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have trespassed on private property and made unauthorized and illegal recordings or transcripts
Edited sentence: Therefore, critics of those who make claims regarding temple ceremonies allege that those publicizing details are disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have entered temples in breach of temple rules and made unathorized recordings or transcripts