Original sentence: Dawson was also heavily criticised in the media after broadcasting disparaging remarks on AFL footballer's partners as a part of her role as a fashion expert for television coverage of the AFL's Brownlow Medal.However some in the media suggested that Dawson was guilty of double standards, citing her aggressive television persona and her history of  discouraging contestants on Australia's Next Top Model
Edited sentence: Dawson was heavily criticised in the media after broadcasting disparaging remarks on AFL footballer's partners as a part of her role as a fashion expert for television coverage of the AFL's Brownlow Medal.On 30 January 2014 Dawson encouraged New Zealand singer Lorde to leave New Zealand, telling radio presenter Mike Hosking that "Unless you're very mediocre you need to get out of there – you just have to if you want to keep succeeding otherwise it'll just crush your spirit.Some in the media suggested that Dawson was guilty of double standards, citing her aggressive television persona and her history of  discouraging contestants on Australia's Next Top Model