Original sentence: " As Malcolm X and his bodyguards moved to quiet the disturbance, a man rushed forward and shot him in the chest with a sawed-off shotgun.Malcolm X was pronounced dead shortly after he arrived at Columbia Presbyterian Hospital.On February 21, 1965, in Manhattan's Audubon Ballroom, Malcolm X began to speak to a meeting of the Organization of Afro-American Unity when a disturbance broke out in the crowd of 400
Edited sentence: " A smoke bomb went off, causing the audience to scream and jump up." Before he could begin his speech, there was a scuffle in the crowd of 400."I present to you one who is willing to put himself on the line for you, a man who would give his life for you," he said., shortly after he arrived at Columbia Presbyterian Hospital.As Malcolm X and his bodyguards moved to quiet the disturbance, a man rushed forward and shot him in the chest with a sawed-off shotgun.Malcolm X greeted them, "Asalaikum, brothers and sisters.Malcolm X was pronounced dead at 3:30 p.On February 21, 1965, in Manhattan's Audubon Ballroom, Malcolm X's assistant Benjamin X introduced him to the audience