Original sentence: A lot of big houses and mansions, many owned by generals and commodores are found there.As of February 2008, the cementing of roads and the building houses in AFPOVAI is rising to a fever pitch.Despite proximity to the Ninoy Aquino International Airport flightpath and the hastened development of Villamore Airbase (formerly Nichols Air Base), and the consequent noise generated by aircraft traffic, the area remains one of the closest viable and affordable properties in close proximity to Makati, Roxas Boulevard, Cavite development areas, Alabang, Eastwood Libis, Ortigas Center, Global City, The Fort, and Pasay City.However, since most of the original military connected owners are in their elderly years, the houses and properties are now (2008) seeing a brisk change of ownership.It is further blessed with several major arteries surrounding the village: C-5, EDSA, SLEX.Located along Bayani Road, AFPOVAI which stands for Armed Forces of the Philippines Officers Village Association, Inc, is a cluster of subdivisions intersected by Bayani Road which leads to the Libingan ng mga Bayani.The subdivision was where most of the military top brass of the Philippines used to reside
Edited sentence: A lot of big houses and mansions, owned by generals and commodores are already built upon it.Another subdivision, or rather cluster of subdivisions, is found within Fort Bonifacio.As of February 2008, the cementing of roads and the building houses in AFPOVAI has reached a fever pitch.Despite the proximity to the Ninoy Aquino International Airport flightpath and the consequent noise generated by aircraft traffic, the area remains one of the closest viable and affordable properties in close proximity to Makati, Roxas Boulevard, Cavite development areas, Alabang, Eastwood Libis, Ortigas Center, Global City, The Fort, and Pasay City.However, since most of the original military connected owners are in their elderly years, the houses and properties are seeing a brisk change of ownership.Located along Bayani Road, AFPOVAI which stands for Armed Forces of the Philippines Officers Village Association, Inc, is a subdivision where most of the military elite of the Philippines resided