Original sentence: After graduating from high school, he enlisted in the United States Army, and worked as a recording engineer for the Army Band and Chorus.His voice cracked at the age of 13 and gave him the bass tones that would later bring him much fame and success<ref>{{cite web |url= |title=Don LaFontaine: The Voice |accessdate=2009-01-14 }}</ref>
Edited sentence: <ref>{{cite web |url= |title=Don LaFontaine: The Voice |accessdate=2009-01-14 }}</ref> After graduating from high school, he enlisted in the United States Army, and worked as a recording engineer for the Army Band and Chorus.His voice cracked at the age of 13 and gave him the bass tones that would later bring him much fame and success