Original sentence: Although, if one were to view the hate mail entries as parody, they would note a distinctly different brand of humor than that which is present throughout the rest of the site.Real Ultimate Power, The Official Ninja Book (ISBN 080652569X) was published on July 1, 2004.The Official Ninja Web page: Real Ultimate Power
Edited sentence: Although, if one were to view the hate mail entries as parody, they would note a distinctly different brand of humor than that which is present throughout the rest of the site, making the responses unlikely to be the creation of the site's author.REAL Ultimate Power, The Official Ninja Book (ISBN 080652569X) was published on July 1, 2004.The Official Ninja Web page: REAL Ultimate Power