Original sentence: In August 1982 the Tautog was in Alameda, California as part of a predeployment workup.In November 1982 the USS Tautog, along with the USS Aspro, made the first winter rendevous of two submarines at the North Pole.In the summer of 1993, the Tautog returned to the North Pole, becoming only the third submarine in history to surface at the North Pole twice.Tautog completed a Western Pacific Deployment in November 1984 having made a port visit in Japan
Edited sentence: Tautog completed a Western Pacific Deployment in November 1984 upon her return to Pearl Harbor