Original sentence: Bob's sister, Jinx Falkenburg, an American film star/model and radio and television talk show host, was also an amateur tennis player and his brother Tom had a successful tennis career as well.It took 71 years before Falkenburg’s feat was repeated
Edited sentence: Bob's sister, Jinx Falkenburg, a famous American film star/model and pioneering radio and television talk show host, was also an amateur tennis player and his brother Tom had a successful tennis career as well.Falkenburg's accomplishment has been described as one of the greatest comebacks in Wimbledon history.It took 71 years before Falkenburg’s rare feat was repeated