Original sentence: His results have not been successfully replicated in other laboratories.The idea is dismissed by mainstream science as pseudoscience.The most prominent advocate of this idea was the French immunologist Jacques Benveniste, who attempted to construct a mechanistic explanation for homeopathy.Water memory is a concept, basic to homeopathy, which holds that water is capable of containing "memory" of particles dissolved in it
Edited sentence: Many of his results have not been successfully replicated in other laboratories.The most prominent research in this field was performed by the late French immunologist Jacques Benveniste, who attempted to construct a mechanistic explanation for homeopathy.The theory is dismissed by mainstream science.Water memory is a theory, basic to homeopathy, which holds that water is capable of containing "memory" of particles dissolved in it