Original sentence: Acts such as Ten Stories Fallen, Papa Roach, Korn, Buckcherry, Tommy Krash, Adelitas Way, Linkin Park, Marilyn Manson, Nine Inch Nails, Moby, Murderdolls, Backyard Babies, Private Line, Slipknot, The Living End, Belladonna, Mana, Escape The Fate, and Hardcore Superstar, have all cited Mötley Crüe as an influence in recent years, most notably for Too Fast for Love and Shout at the Devil
Edited sentence: Acts such as the amazingly awesome Black Veil Brides,Ten Stories Fallen, Papa Roach, Korn, Buckcherry, Tommy Krash, Adelitas Way, Linkin Park, Marilyn Manson, Nine Inch Nails, Moby, Murderdolls, Backyard Babies, Private Line, Slipknot, The Living End, Belladonna, Mana, Escape The Fate, and Hardcore Superstar, have all cited Mötley Crüe as an influence in recent years, most notably for Too Fast for Love and Shout at the Devil