Original sentence: Bo was the first mainland Chinese citizen to attend the Harrow School in England, and he later attended the Oxford University and Harvard University.On May 9, 2009, British Chinese Youth Federation (BCYF) awarded him the first annual "EF∙Royal Cornell 2009 Big Ben Award and Ten Outstanding Chinese Young Persons Selection in the UK Charity Ceremony (TOCYP-UK)".The reason for his award was "Bringing Chinese voices and culture into the world's top University.at Le Meridien Hotel Piccadilly in London
Edited sentence: Bo was the first Chinese mainland citizen to attend the Harrow School, an expensive private school, in England.Both of his parents are in jail.He himself is currently unemployed, living in Massachusetts of USA.He later attended the Oxford University and Harvard University