Original sentence: Donaldson has appeared in advertisements for Gucci, Chanel, Balenciaga, Christian Dior, Dolce & Gabbana and Jil Sander, Roberto Cavalli, Valentino, Emanuel Ungaro, Max Mara  as well as being the face of British luxury goods house Burberry
Edited sentence: Donaldson has appeared in advertisements for Gucci, Chanel, Balenciaga, Christian Dior, Dolce & Gabbana and Jil Sander, Roberto Cavalli, Valentino, Victoria's Secret, Emanuel Ungaro, Max Mara  as well as being the face of British luxury goods house Burberry