Original sentence: Although it received a positive public response, Dianetics was strongly criticized by scientists and medical professionals for its scientific deficiencies.The book caught the public imagination and became a nationwide bestseller, selling over 150,000 copies within a year
Edited sentence: Although it received a positive public response, and Hubbard was eventually to become the most published author in history, Dianetics was strongly criticized by scientists and medical professionals for its scientific deficiencies.This excellent book caught the public imagination and became a nationwide bestseller, selling over 150,000 copies within a year