Original sentence: Questioned in an April 28 live chat, sponsored by GazetteOnline.She did not reply to follow-up questions.com, about disagreements with the Democratic party platform, Conlin answered she could not know the party platform because it would not be adopted until June 2010
Edited sentence: She also displayed an unfamiliarity with the Iowa Democratic Party's platform, repeatedly claiming there is no platform for her to support until the June 12, 2010 convention..