Original sentence: Imperato was also a 2004 NRCC (National Republican Congressional Committee) Honorary Chairman of the Business Advisory Council (an award which is purchased through a donation to NRCC and in no way signifies achievement, see NRCC "award winners"), a Ronald Reagan Gold Medal Winner (purchased title through donation), 2004 NRCC Businessman of the Year (purchased Title through a donation), and a 2007 recipient of the Order of Merit from the NRCC (purchased title through donation)
Edited sentence: Imperato was also the 2004 NRCC (National Republican Congressional Committee) Honorary Chairman of the Business Advisory Council, a Ronald Reagan Gold Medal Winner, 2004 NRCC Businessman of the Year, and a 2007 recipient of the Order of Merit from the NRCC