Original sentence: He also did some work for Ira Gershwin on original orchestrations for several Gershwin projects and worked with orchestrator Hans Spialek on the 1983 Broadway revival of On Your Toes
Edited sentence: He also did some work for Ira Gershwin on original orchestrations for several Gershwin projects and worked with veteran orchestrator Hans Spialek on the 1983 Broadway revival of On Your Toes