Original sentence: He bowls occasional leg spin, and is also a wicket-keeper.He is an opening batsman, particularly in One-day cricket, and played a leading role in the Tigers victorious ING Cup campaign of 2004-05
Edited sentence: He bowls occasional leg spin, and is also a capable wicket-keeper.He is an excellent opening batsman, particularly in One-day cricket, and he played a leading role in the Tigers victorious ING Cup campaign of 2004-05.He is tall, and strong, and adept at hitting out cleverly early in the innings