Original sentence: After public disappointment with the official shortlist, a campaign was launched for Aaron Dustin's "Red Peak" flag, a design well-liked by supporters of changing the New Zealand flag who disapprove of the silver fern flag and other similar proposed designs.Despite not being selected by the official Flag Consideration Panel, the Red Peak design is considered a favourable alternative and is supported by a grassroots social media campaign for its inclusion in any public referendum for a new national flag design
Edited sentence: After widespread public disappointment with the official shortlist a campaign was launched for Aaron Dustin's "Red Peak" flag, a design well-liked by supporters of changing the New Zealand flag who disapprove of the silver fern flag and other similar proposed designs.Despite not being selected by the official Flag Consideration Panel, the Red Peak design is widely considered a favoured alternative and is supported by a grassroots social media campaign for its inclusion in any public referendum for a new national flag design