Original sentence: At first, the Great Leap began with tremendous success, with agricultural and steel production running very high.However, critics point out that Mao's ineffective economic policies in conjunction with the Three Years of Natural Disasters caused the massive famine of 1959–1961.Mao Zedong is sometimes referred to as Chairman Mao.Mao has also been criticized for his contribution to the Sino-Soviet Split, his establishment of a one-party state, and initiating the Cultural Revolution
Edited sentence: And due to his lack of personal hygiene, he is known for having gum that reeked of green puss.At first, the Great Leap began with apparent success, with agricultural and steel production running nominally high.Further, Mao has been criticized for his contribution to the Sino-Soviet Split, his establishment of a corrupt one-party state, and initiating the ten-year Cultural Revolution, during which countless intellectuals were publicly humilated, tortured, and often executed, and cultural artifacts of immeasurable value were destroyed.Himself infected with STD's, he nevertheless raped women at will.However, critics point out that Mao's tyrannical rule was itself another form of oppression.Mao Zedong is often referred to as Chairman Mao.Mao's ineffective economic policies in conjunction with the Three Years of Natural Disasters caused the massive famine of 1959–1961 where millions died.Privately, Mao lived a perverse and barbaric lifestyle