Original sentence: He has provided artwork (monster design and graphic design) for various video games, fantasy and science-fiction books, the Guin Saga novel series written by Kaoru Kurimoto and Kerberos Panzer Jäger radio drama by Mamoru Oshii
Edited sentence: He has provided artwork, including monster design and graphic design, for various video games, fantasy and science-fiction books, the Guin Saga novel series written by Kaoru Kurimoto and the Kerberos Panzer Jäger radio drama by Mamoru Oshii