Original sentence: Kathy Ireland (born Kathleen Marie Ireland on March 8th 1963 in Santa Barbara, California) was dubbed by Forbes and Newsweek magazine “supermodel-turned-super mogul who has built a business that generates $1.4 billion in retail sales.Kathy Ireland (born March 20, 1963) is an American model, actress, author, and entrepreneur
Edited sentence: Kathy Ireland (born Kathleen Marie Ireland on March 8th 1963 in Santa Barbara, California) was dubbed by Forbes  and Newsweek  magazine “supermodel-turned-super mogul who has built a business that generates $1.4 billion in retail sales.Kathy Ireland (born March 20, 1963) is an American supermodel, actress, author, and entrepreneur