Original sentence: He also allegedly dressed as Captain Hook whilst pleasuring himself, shared his sexual fantasies about animals , insulted several cast members of EastEnders (including Shane Richie, Wendy Richard and Jessie Wallace) and made comments regarding the poor quality of the scripts
Edited sentence: He also allegedly dressed as Captain Hook whilst pleasuring himself, shared his sexual fantasies about animals, insulted several cast members of EastEnders (including Shane Richie, Wendy Richard and Jessie Wallace) and made comments regarding the poor quality of the scripts