Original sentence: In 2012, Cyrus Frisch voted for "A Short Film About Killing".Sight & Sound magazine conducts a poll of film directors every ten years to find out what they consider the ten greatest films of all time
Edited sentence: In 2012  Cyrus Frisch voted for "A Short Film About Killing".Sight & Sound magazine conducts a poll every ten years of the world's finest film directors to find out the Ten Greatest Films of All Time.This poll has been going since 1992, and has become the most recognised poll of its kind in the world