Original sentence: " The two married early in the summer of 2005 and in March 2006 McGuire gave birth to a son, Grayson.In March of that year, an argument over bowling scores escalated into a shoving match, and eventually to McGuire locking herself in a bedroom of their shared Juneau apartment to call 911
Edited sentence: "  Despite the questionable situation, the two married early in the summer of 2005 and in March 2006 McGuire gave birth to a son, Grayson.In March of that year, an argument over bowling scores escalated into a domestic violence dispute, and eventually to McGuire locking herself in a bedroom of their shared Juneau apartment to call 911