Original sentence: , Minister of the Enviroment., Minister of the Enviroment & Minister of Health.A cenotaph was raised on Long Branch Avenue south of Lake Shore in 1933 to comemorate the village's contribution during the First (and later, Second) World War
Edited sentence: , Minister of the Environment., Minister of the Environment & Minister of Health.A cenotaph was raised on Long Branch Avenue south of Lake Shore in 1933 to commemorate the village's contribution during the First (and later, Second) World War