Original sentence: The work of anti-cult psychologist Margaret Singer included large group awareness trainings as one example of what she called "coercive persuasion" and mentioned them in a report, commissioned and subsequently rejected by the APA, known as "The DIMPAC Report
Edited sentence: The work of psychologist Margaret Singer included large group awareness trainings as one example of what she called "coercive persuasion" and mentioned them in a report, commissioned and subsequently rejected by the APA, known as "The DIMPAC Report