Original sentence: Barnard alumnae mounted a campaign to deny tenure to Abu El Haj that centered around the book's anti-Israel bias, prompting a counter-campaign in support of the book and Abu El Haj
Edited sentence: Barnard alumnae mounted a campaign to deny tenure to Abu El Haj that centered around the book's alleged anti-Israel bias, prompting a counter-campaign in support of the book and Abu El Haj