Original sentence: He currently maintains a school in Berkeley, California with Mestre Rã, and Mestra Suelly, the United Capoeira Association.Mestre Acordeon has recorded seven capoeira CDs and is the author of various magazine articles and books about capoeira, including Agua de Beber, Camará: A bate Papo de Capoeira.Mestre Acordeon was one of the capoeira pioneers in the United States (1978), introducing it on the West Coast.The UCA has several associated schools in the United States
Edited sentence: A great capoeirista, talented speaker and a consummate musician, Acordeon has recorded seven capoeira CDs and is the author of various magazine articles and books about capoeira, including Agua de Beber, Camará: A bate Papo de Capoeira.He currently maintains a popular school in Berkeley, California with Mestre Rã, and Mestra Suelly, the United Capoeira Association.Mestre Acordeon was one of the first capoeira pioneers in the United States (1978), introducing it on the West Coast.The UCA has several associated schools in the US