Original sentence: Although it can be argued that the seeds of revolution has been planted long before these events - some notable ones such as the 1997 occupation of PDIP headquarters, the Tanjung Priok incident and the Santa Cruz incident cited as alternative beginings - the most event which is most commonly thought to have begun the process of ending President Suharto's rule was the student protests and subsequent rioting which took place during this period between 1997 and 1998
Edited sentence: Although it can be argued that the seeds of revolution has been planted long before these events (some notable ones such as the 1997 occupation of PDIP headquarters, the Tanjung Priok incident, the Santa Cruz incident, etc.arguably cited as alternative begginings), the most notable event which actually took down then-ruling President Suharto was the student protests and subsequent rioting which took place during this period between 1997 and 1998