Original sentence: After leaving Washington, DC, the Edwards family sold their Raleigh house and moved to a home in Orange County, North Carolina.After that debate, Edwards was criticized for mentioning that Cheney's daughter Mary is a lesbian.Recent polling of the early primary states (see Opinion polling for the Democratic Party (United States) presidential primaries, 2008) shows Edwards leading in Iowa and in either 2nd or 3rd place in Nevada and New Hampshire
Edited sentence: After leaving Washington, DC, the Edwards family sold their Raleigh house and moved to a mansion in Orange County, North Carolina.In the same debate, Edwards went to some length to publicize the fact that Cheney's daughter Mary is a lesbian.The most recent polling of the early primary states (see Opinion polling for the Democratic Party (United States) presidential primaries, 2008) shows Edwards leading in Iowa and in either 2nd or 3rd place in Nevada and New Hampshire