Original sentence: However, other ideas have more substance, one of which is globally applied until today as we will see in the following.Some of its ideas are outdated.The Weltgeschichte offers insight on the state of science at that time
Edited sentence: However, other ideas are fascinating, one of which is globally applied until today as we will see in the following.Its ideas are sometime superseded or plain wrong.The Weltgeschichte is a fascinating work that offers insight in the state of science at that time