Original sentence: Academic research has discredited these claims.Though role-playing has been accepted by many, others continue to object..
Edited sentence: Academic research seems to have provide some evidence towards discrediting some of these claims.However, the point is often in the theosophical or occult lore used in many role-playing games (for example, in the Elder Scrolls Series) has led many Christians to have a negative opinion<ref name="roca">quotes a negative opinion of D&D from a periodical of the Russian Orthodox Church Abroad.Though role-playing has been accepted by some, others continue to object