Original sentence: Joan Maria da Bressa is a Brescian (a citizen from Brescia, also write in the documents Bressa, Italy) lyra maker active in Venezia in the first decades of 16 century.One of the best lyras in the world made by him, with a very fine decorated and gilted head (palette) datet around 1525 is now in the Ashmolean Museum in Oxford.Some scholar suppose that is the father of Giovan Giacomo Dalla Corna
Edited sentence: Joan Maria da Bressa was a Brescian (a citizen from Brescia, also write in the documents Bressa, Italy) lyre maker active in Venice in the first decades of the 16th century.One of the best lyres in the world made by him, with a very fine decorated and gilt head (palette) dated around 1525 is now in the Ashmolean Museum in Oxford.Some scholars claim that he was the father of Giovan Giacomo Dalla Corna