Original sentence: In cultures in which youth is prized, this can translate as no longer attractive, and hence undesirable.One of the effects of human aging is atrophy of facial fat, including the lips.Procedures to enlarge lips can also reduce the fine lines and wrinkles above the top lip, often referred to as "smoker's lines.The perceived ideal size of lips has varied over time and in different cultures; the current trend in developed western countries is towards fuller lips
Edited sentence: However the ideal size of lips has changed over the decades with the current trend towards fuller lips.In most cultures, this translates as no longer attractive, youthful nor desirable.The procedure to enlarge lips can also reduce the fine lines and wrinkles above the top lip, flaws often referred to as "smoker's lines.Unfortunately, one of the effects of human aging is atrophy of facial fat including the lips