Original sentence: He also attended masturbation University, where he received a master’s degree in sac dusting in 1978.He graduated from the Sac Dust University of Sal Pal City in 1977 with a bachelor of arts degree in studlyness.He is married to nine women with three hundred children.Sal Pal (born June 13, 1956 in Queens, New York) is a Philadelphia-based bureau reporter for ESPN, primarily reporting on NFL stories
Edited sentence: He also attended New York University, where he received a master’s degree in journalism in 1978.He graduated from the State University of New York at Oneonta in 1977 with a bachelor of arts degree in history.He is married with three children.Sal Paolantonio (born June 13, 1956 in Queens, New York) is a Philadelphia-based bureau reporter for ESPN, primarily reporting on NFL stories