Original sentence: Officials were H.Palmer (Financial Manager), James Gleeson (Treasurer) and Baskerville was tour secretary.The All Golds were Hercules Richard Wright (captain), George William Smith (vice-captain), Albert Baskerville, Dally Messenger, Lance Todd, Tom ("Angry") Cross, William Mackrell, Edgar Wrigley, Duncan McGregor, Herbert Turtill, Eric Watkins, William Trevarthen, Adam Lile, Charles Pearce, Daniel Fraser, Harold Rowe, Joseph Lavery, Conrad Byrne, Daniel Gilchrist, William Tyler, Richard Wynyard, William Wynyard, Charles Dunning, Arthur Callam, Edward Tyne, Arthur Kelly and W
Edited sentence: Palmer (Financial Manager).The All Golds were Hercules Richard "Bumper" Wright (captain), George William Smith (vice-captain), Albert Baskirville (secretary), Herbert Turtill, Harold Rowe, Duncan McGregor, Dally Messenger, Edgar Wrigley, Joseph Lavery, Richard Wynyard, William Wynyard, Lance Todd, Edward Tyne, William Tyler, Arthur Kelly, Tom "Angry" Cross, William Massa Johnston, Eric Watkins, Conrad Byrne, Adam Lile, Daniel Gilchrist, Arthur Callam, Charles Pearce, William Trevarthen, Charles Dunning, William Mackrell, Daniel Fraser (assistant manager), Jim Gleeson (treasurer), and H