Original sentence: " Israel returned the Sinai to Egypt in 1982, after the Camp David Accords.It recognized "every state in the area['s]" - thus particularly Israel's - right to live "free from threats or acts of force" within "secure and recognized boundaries.The 1967 War also laid the foundation for future discord in the region - as on 22 November 1967, the UN Security Council adopted Resolution 242, the "land for peace" formula, which called for Israeli withdrawal "from  territories occupied" in 1967 in return for "the termination of all claims or states of belligerency.The framers of Resolution 242 recognized that some territorial adjustments were likely and deliberately did not include words all or the in the English language version of the text when referring to "territories occupied" during the war, although it is present in other, notably French, Spanish and Russian versions
Edited sentence: " Israel relinquished the Sinai to Egypt in 1982, after the Camp David Accords.It recognized Israel's right to live "free from threats or acts of force" within "secure and recognized boundaries.The 1967 War also laid the foundation for future discord in the region - as on 22 November 1967, the UN Security Council adopted Resolution 242, the "land for peace" formula, which called for Israeli withdrawal from  territories conquered in 1967 in return for the end of all states of belligerency.The framers of the Resolution 242 recognized that some territorial adjustments were likely and deliberately did not include words all or the in the English language version of the text when referred to territories conquered during the war, although it is present in other, notably French, Spanish and Russian versions