Original sentence: Jacksonville is home to Jacksonville University, the University of North Florida, Keiser University,Florida State College at Jacksonville, Edward Waters College, The Art Institute of Jacksonville, Florida Coastal School of Law, Brewer Christian College, Trinity Baptist College, Jones College (Jacksonville), and Florida Technical College.The Jacksonville Axemen are currently undefeated in the AMNRL and also they are believed to have been the first team to have ever played a cross code game between American Football and Rugby league, the Jacksonville Axemen defeated the Jacksonville Knights 38 to 27
Edited sentence: Jacksonville is home to Jacksonville University, the University of North Florida, Florida State College at Jacksonville, Edward Waters College, The Art Institute of Jacksonville, Florida Coastal School of Law, Trinity Baptist College, Jones College, and Florida Technical College