Original sentence: " Conversely, Deaf individuals who are not a part of the Deaf community may not have the same support in the hearing world, resulting in lower self-esteem.This could lead to a lower education and economic status for deaf people
Edited sentence: " Conversely, Deaf individuals who are not a part of the Deaf community are forced to conform to the hearing world, resulting in lower self-esteem.This often leads to a lower education and economic status for deaf people