Original sentence: The movie premiered at the Cannes Film Festival that year, and won an award, but did not gain a proper distribution deal, and its showings were limited, leading some writers to mistakenly state that the movie "was so poor, it was never seen by anyone"
Edited sentence: The movie premiered at the Cannes Film Festival on May 17, 1968, with George Harrison, his wife Patti, Ringo Starr, his wife Maureen, and the cast members of the movie.The movie premiered in London on January 12, 1969.The movie won an award, but did not gain a proper distribution deal, and its showings were limited, leading some writers to mistakenly state that the movie "was so poor, it was never seen by anyone"