Original sentence: In addition to acting, she also directed several plays at the Harlem Experimental Theatre.Rose was born circa in 1885 in South Carolina and as a child relocated to [[New York City]].She also helped found the Negro People's Theatre in Harlem in 1935.She started acting in church plays as a child, but did not become a professional actress until won a scholarship to the American Academy of Dramatic Art, when she was in her thirties
Edited sentence: As an important and impressive African American contributor to movie and stage during the Harlem Renaissance she was a source of inspiration which helped with the Negro literary movement.In addition to her acting abilities, she showed her talent for directing several plays at the Harlem Experimental Theatre, she also helped found the Negro People's Theatre in Harlem in 1935.Rose was born circa in 1885 in South Carolina she later moved to New York City as a child.She started acting in church plays as a young child, but did not become a professional actress until her thirties, after winning a scholarship to the American Academy of Dramatic Art.That organization increased opportunities for black actors and playwrights