Original sentence: As with many creative interests there are usually those who enjoy a sexual representation, as in manga or anime.Criticisms of the furry community often focus on the raw quantity and easy accessibility of sexual content, and the less-informed may view the fandom as a fetish.For example, an episode of the popular TV show CSI: Crime Scene Investigation ("Fur And Loathing") which featured the murder of a "fursuiter" fetishist is generally regarded as being ill-researched.However, there is ever-increasing evidence that this sort of "humor" has worn thin.Some people occasionally view the furry community with contempt, a prejudice highlighted in Lore Sjöberg's Geek Hierarchy.The media tends to focus on and sensationalize the sexual aspect of the fandom, sometimes to the point of outright fabrication.The nail in the coffin was when Richard Kyanka, owner of Something Awful, admitted: "Dumb people cannot make jokes, so dumb people latch on to others people's jokes and think that if their joke is funny one time, then repeating it 1000 times makes it 1000 times as funny
Edited sentence: As with some related interests there are usually those who enjoy a sexual representation, as in manga or anime.Criticisms of the furry community often focus on the raw quantity and easy accessibility of sexual content, and many view the fandom as a fetish, possibly due to the high frequency and relative visibility of the hobby's more sexualized content.For example, an episode of the popular TV show CSI: Crime Scene Investigation ("Fur And Loathing") which featured the murder of a "fursuiter" fetishist is generally regarded by those within the furry community as being ill-researched.Most netizens view the furry community with contempt, a fact highlighted in Lore Sjöberg's Geek Hierarchy.The media tends to focus on and sensationalize the sexual aspect of the fandom