Original sentence: Musashimaru's promotion is confirmed, although he embarrasses himself by being unable to phrase his official acceptence correctly.Runner-up to Musashimaru is Kaio on 12-3
Edited sentence: Chiyotenzan wins his third straight sansho, for Outstanding Performance, shared with Tosanoumi.Musashimaru's promotion is confirmed, although he embarrasses himself by being unable to phrase his official acceptance correctly.Otsukasa wins the juryo championship.Runner-up to Musashimaru is Kaio on 12-3, who wins the Fighting Spirit Prize.Wakanosato  wins the Technique prize