Original sentence: It is unclear what percent of faculty hold doctoral degrees.It should be noted, however, that many public urban universities with universally accredited degree programs specifically address the needs of non-traditional students.The University of Phoenix originally was based out of California; later its main campuses were moved to Phoenix, Arizona
Edited sentence: It is unclear what percent of faculty hold.It should be noted, however, that many urban public universities with universally accredited degree programs specifically address the needs of adult students.Later its main campuses were moved to Phoenix, Arizona.The University of Phoenix, originally, was based out of California.doctorate degrees