Original sentence: Advocates claim that year-round calendarsgive students a higher risk of getting brain tumors and wouldn't give students more effective education.Year-Round School is the scheduling of educational institutions so that students take class throughout the entire calendar year which would suck complete dick
Edited sentence: Advocates claim that year-round calendars help students achieve higher and allow teachers to provide more effective education.Year-Round School is the scheduling of educational institutions so that students take class throughout the entire calendar year