Original sentence: Beckman's Marching Band marches in many festivals and parades, and will be going to Washington, D.Both the Festival Orchestra and Band have earned many local and regional accolades and participate in annual Southern California music festivals, constantly earning unanimous ratings of "Superior".The Orchestra had to turn down an invitation to another national invitational in New York City to make time for Carnegie
Edited sentence: Beckman High School has an exceptional Musical Arts program.Beckman's Marching Band is also highly esteemed, has outstanding trumpet players, and has won many regional accolades.Both the Festival Orchestra and Band have earned many local and regional accolades, and participate in annual Southern California music festivals, constantly earning unanimous ratings of "Superior".In its three years as a school, its music program has already become one of the most prestigious in southern California.It marches in many festivals and parades, and will be going to Washington, D.The Orchestra had to turn down an invitation to another national invitational in New York City in order to make time for Carnegie