Original sentence: " Responding to DeLay's position on Schiavo, the Los Angeles Times reported that DeLay consented to removing his father Charles DeLay from life support following a tram accident that left him debilitated.Unlike Schaivo though, Charles DeLay was in a coma and required an artificial ventilator to sustain him
Edited sentence: " Critics note there was no fiery rhetoric, however, when he let his brain-damaged father be disconnected from life support after a tram accident recently uncovered by the Los Angeles Times.The full story can be viewed   here