Original sentence: " Fry explained that he had shed a total of six stone.Appearing on Top Gear in 2009, Fry had lost a significant amount of weight, prompting host Jeremy Clarkson to ask jokingly, "Where has the rest of you gone
Edited sentence: " Fry explained that he had lost a total of 6 stone, and was looking decidedly healthy.Appearing on Top Gear in 2009, he turned up to the show having lost a significant amount of weight, prompting host Jeremy Clarkson to ask jokingly "where has the rest of you gone