Original sentence: Firstly, because the time-period over which it conducted (August 2005 to January 2006) surrounded the Israeli withdrawl from Gaza and Ariel Sharon's stroke, he believed the Israeli side should natuarally get more positive coverage.For instance, honestreporting.He believed the report was flawed for two reasons.In April 2006, the BBC carried out a survey on its coverage of Israel/Palestine which concluded that there was no deliberate or systematic bias , but that coverage sometimes gives an incomplete picture which may mislead viewers and affect their understanding of the situation.Martin Walker of United Press International was skeptical of the independent inquiry in an opinion piece published in The Times.Previously, the BBC's news coverage has been accused of 'systematic anti-Israel bias'.Secondly the report only looked at the BBC's domestic coverage, and thus excluded output on the BBC World Service and BBC World.Similarly, Anglicans for Israel have berated the BBC for apparent anti-Israel bias.The commission's report suggested that the BBC's news reporting was not sufficiently covering the suffering of Palestinian civilians, and was too focussed on the Israeli perspective of events.The majority of such accusations came from pro-Israeli groups.uk, a leading critic of the BBC is funded by the Jerusalem Fund of Aish HaTorah
Edited sentence: In April 2006, the BBC carried out a survey on its coverage of Israel/Palestine and discovered that it was (quite strongly) biased towards the Israeli position.It found that a disparity (in favour of Israelis) existed in BBC coverage taken as a whole in the amount of talk time given to non-party political Israelis and Palestinians; - that a disparity (in favour of Israelis) existed in BBC coverage taken as a whole in terms of the appearance of Israeli and Palestinian actors; - that some important themes were relatively overlooked in the coverage of the conflict, most notably in the recent period, the annexation of land in and around East Jerusalem; - that BBC journalists generally did not provide historical context in their reporting of the conflict; - that BBC broadcast news reported Israeli and Palestinian fatalities differently in that Israeli fatalities generally receive greater coverage than Palestinian fatalities etc