Original sentence: October 27, 1942Second Battle of El AlameinA/Cdre Lachlan MacLean.^Summer, 1942Egyptian DefensiveA/Cdre Lachlan MacLean
Edited sentence: October 27, 1942Second Battle of El AlameinA/Cdre A.^Summer, 1942Egyptian DefensiveA/Cdre MacLean or Ritchie