Original sentence: Many beheadings and other gruesome acts of violence have earned this terrorist group extreme notoriety.Sipah Sahaba represent a long history of savage extremism in Sunni Islam.Sipah-e-Sahaba Pakistan was previously known as Anjuman Sipah-e-Sahaba (ASS); this dubious acronym made them change their name.Sipah-e-Sahaba are funded heavily through the debauche seikhdoms of Arabs and are armed to assasinate kafirs of all sects.Sipah-e-Sahaba in their preachings and actions are remarkably like Khariji, a violent movement in early Islam, funded by the despotic dynasty of Umayyads and their founder Muawiyah
Edited sentence: Many beheadings and other gruesome acts of violence have earned this bloodthirsy terrorist group extreme notoriety.Sipah Sahaba represent a long history of savage extremism in Sunni Islam (A sect of nominal muslims created 100 to 200 years after the death of the Holy Prophet Mohammad (PBUH) Sipah-e-Sahaba in their preachings and actions are remarkably like Khariji, a violent movement in early Islam, funded by the despotic dynasty of Ummayads and their evil founder Muawiah.Sipah-e-Sahaba Pakistan was previously known as Anjuman Sipah-e-Sahaba (ASS), this dubious acronym made them change their name.Sipah-e-Sahaba are funded heavily through the debauche seikhdoms of Arabs and are armed to assasinate kafirs of all sects (Brailvis & Shiites are not Muslims thats why they are killed)