Original sentence: During this time he wrote the music and words of the standard "Detour Ahead",  which has been recorded by Billie Holiday, Sarah Vaughn, Ella Fitzgerald, Bill Evans, and Carola among others.He entered the United States Coast Guard  during World War II only to find himself playing in a band on Ellis Island with Al Haig and Kai Winding.Hoagy On My Mind
Edited sentence: During this time he wrote the music and words of the standard "Detour Ahead", which has been recorded by Billie Holiday, Sarah Vaughn, Ella Fitzgerald, Bill Evans, and Carola among others.He entered the United States Coast Guard during World War II only to find himself playing in a band on Ellis Island with Al Haig and Kai Winding.Hoagy on My Mind