Original sentence: In August 3 2009, Afshin Ghotbi was present in the presidential endorsement ceremony of Mahmood Ahmadinejad while many eminent Iranians did not attend as a protest to the recent Iran's controversial presidency election
Edited sentence: Consequently after Afshin Ghotbi received hundreds of negative comments from his fans on his facebook fan page, He decided to shut down the page.In August 3 2009, Afshin Ghotbi was present in the presidential endorsement ceremony of Mahmood Ahmadinejad while many eminent Iranians did not attend as a protest to the recent Iran's controversial presidency election..