Original sentence: " She further described criticism of the family separation policy as "faux liberal outrage".In March 2018, Ingraham's show was boycotted by 27 sponsors for calling David Hogg, a 17-year old student survivor of the Stoneman Douglas High School shooting, whiny.Ingraham's comments followed an MSNBC report by Jacob Soboroff which was broadcast on June 14, 2018.On the June 18, 2018 broadcast of The Ingraham Angle, Ingraham likened detention facilities where children separated from their illegal immigrant parents by the Trump administration are kept to "summer camps" that "resemble boarding schools.The day after Ingraham's comments aired, activist David Hogg renewed calls for boycotts of businesses that advertise on The Ingraham Angle.The report described a Texas detainment facility setup to be like a  "dormitory structure" with a cafeteria and rooms that contained four beds in each
Edited sentence: David Hogg from the Stoneman Douglas High School shooting renewed calls for boycotts of businesses that advertise on The Ingraham Angle.In June 2018, Ingraham likened the facilities where migrant children who had been separated by their parents by the Trump administration to "summer camps".In March 2018, Ingraham's show was boycotted by 27 sponsors after she ridiculed David Hogg, a 17-year old student survivor of the Stoneman Douglas High School shooting.Ingraham also used air quotes when referring to "separated children".She described criticism of the family separation policy as "faux liberal outrage"