Original sentence: Nakba Day (Arabic: يوم النكبة Yawm an-Nakbah, meaning "day of the catastrophe") is an annual day of commemoration of the Palestinian people of the displacement that accompanied the creation of Israel in 1948.This day coincides with the Israeli independence day (Yom Ha'atzmaut)
Edited sentence: Nakba Day (Arabic: يوم النكبة Yawm an-Nakbah, meaning "day of the catastrophe") is an annual day of commemoration of the Palestinian people of the displacement that accompanied the creation of Israel in 1948, a day that is celebrated in Israel as Yom Ha'atzmaut