Original sentence: " Although Geddy Lee's use of sequencers and synthesizers remained the band's cornerstone, his focus on new technology was complemented by Neil Peart's adaptation of electronic drums and percussion.It was Peart who named this album, as he borrowed the words of Ernest Hemingway to describe what the band had to do to make the album, as all three members have said it was by far the most difficult one to record, up to that point
Edited sentence: " Despite these difficulties, the band truly showed "Grace Under Pressure" and made what many consider to be one of their best works.Although Geddy Lee's use of sequencers and synthesizers remained the band's cornerstone, his focus on new technology was complemented by Neil Peart's adaptation of electronic drums and percussion.It was Neil Peart who named this album, as he borrowed the words of Ernest Hemingway to describe what the band had to do to make the album, as all three members have said it was by far the most difficult one to record, up to that point