Original sentence: The Tarnak Farm incident refers to the killing of four Canadian soldiers and the injury of eight others from the Third Battalion of Princess Patricia's Canadian Light Infantry (3PPCLI) on the night of April 17, 2002, by an American F-16 fighter jet.The radio logs show that Major Harry Schmidt requested permission from flight control (AWACS) to fire his 20 mm cannons at what he said to be an anti-aircraft or Multiple Launch Rocket System below.The soldiers who were killed were:
Edited sentence: The Tarnak Farm incident refers to the Murder of four Canadian soldiers and the injury of eight others from the Third Battalion of Princess Patricia's Canadian Light Infantry (3PPCLI) on the night of April 17, 2002, by an American F-16 fighter jet.The radio logs show that Major Harry Schmidt requested permission from flight control (AWACS) to fire his 20 mm cannons at what he lied to be an anti-aircraft or Multiple Launch Rocket System below.The soldiers who were murdered were: