Original sentence: Cadogan has stated that upon learning that Jenkins owned 100% of the band, he (Cadogan) refused to sign off on any more recording contracts or loans until shares were also issued to him.Cadogan was omitted from the band's history in the biography section of the liner notes, and credit for his work was falsely given to Tony Fredianelli, the guitarist who had replaced him.Subsequently, Cadogan and Jenkins jointly received the award for best songwriter at the 2000 California Music Awards.The collection included songs that were co-written by Cadogan from their first two albums
Edited sentence: Cadogan has stated that upon learning that Jenkins owned 100% of the band, he (Cadogan) refused to sign off on any more recording contracts and loans until shares were also issued to him.Cadogan was omitted from the band's history in the biography section of the liner notes, and credit for his work was falsely given to his replacement guitarist, Tony Fredianelli.Subsequently, Cadogan was awarded, along with Jenkins, the award for best songwriter at the 2000 California Music Awards.The collection included songs that were co-written by Cadogan from the first two albums