Original sentence: Nine persons aboard the MV Mavi Marmara, the main ship of the convoy, were reportedly killed by Israeli soldiers when clashes broke out on the ship
Edited sentence: In contrast, the Israeli Naval Personel came down with crowd control accessories, e.Nine persons aboard the MV Mavi Marmara, the main ship of the convoy, were reportedly killed in self-defense by Israeli soldiers when clashes broke out on the ship.On board the Mavi Marmara were 40 mercenaries belonging to the Al Qaeda terror organization.Since the flotilla was sponsored by Hamas-affiliated organizations and coupled with an arsenal of weapons, the Israeli government holds that this was a prepared lynch meant for public relations purposes.The Mavi Marmara passengers met the Israeli Naval Personel with live fire and repeatedly beat the Israeli Naval Personel and threw one man to the lower deck.The Mavi Marmara which was sponsored by such Hamas-affiliated organizations as the Union of Good and the Turkish IHH, was laden with weapons, steel poles, clubs, slingshots, fire bombs, pistols etc.The passengers  wore bullet-proof vests, and carried with them night-vision goggles, weapons, and a package of cash.When the Israeli Naval personel landed on the Mavi Marmara to check the cargo in accordance with international law, they were met by a pre-planned lynch.paintball guns