Original sentence: Children's book author and cultural critic Carole Boston Weatherford published an article in the Greensboro News & Record alleging that Jynx's design bore a striking resemblance to blackface actors, an image which is considered racist against black people, and further described the Pokémon as "a dead ringer for an obese drag queen
Edited sentence: Children's book author and cultural critic Carole Boston Weatherford published an article in the Greensboro News & Record alleging that Jynx's design bore a striking resemblance to blackface actors, an image which is extremely racist against black people, and further described the Pokémon as "a dead ringer for an obese drag queen