Original sentence: Former residents of Marlborough include rocket scientist William Pickering and Nobel Prize-winning physicist Ernest Rutherford.Marlborough is known for its dry climate, the Marlborough Sounds, and Sauvignon blanc wine
Edited sentence: Marlborough is known for its dry climate, the picturesque Marlborough Sounds, and Sauvignon blanc wine.Marlborough's world-famous former residents include rocket scientist William Pickering and Nobel Prize-winning physicist Ernest Rutherford