Original sentence: 1903 - Fall of the Ottoman Empire: Unsuccessful uprising of slav Bulgarian-Macedonians from the Internal Macedonian Revolutionary Organization against Ottoman Turkey, also known as the Ilinden-Preobrazhenie Uprising
Edited sentence: 1903 - Fall of the Ottoman Empire: Unsuccessful uprising of Macedonians led by the Internal Macedonian Revolutionary Organization against Ottoman Turkey, also known as the Ilinden-Preobrazhenie Uprising