Original sentence: Born in New Glasgow, Nova Scotia, Colin was drafted 49th overall in the 1996 NHL Entry Draft and has been a familiar face on the blue line of the New Jersey Devils since he came up from Albany late in the 1999-00 season to help the Devils win the 2000 Stanley Cup, he also helped the Devils win another cup in 2003
Edited sentence: The pride of New Glasgow, Nova Scotia, Colin was drafted 49th overall in the 1996 NHL Entry Draft and has been a familiar face on the blue line of the New Jersey Devils since he came up from Albany late in the 1999-00 season to help the Devils win the 2000 Stanley Cup, he also helped the Devils win another cup in 2003