Original sentence: Bloomberg's political and personal record came under heavy scrutiny by other candidates, including his past stances regarding stop-and-frisk policies during his tenure as mayor of New York City.Bloomberg, who made his debate stage debut after qualifying only a day prior, was widely regarded by multiple news outlets as having performed poorly
Edited sentence: His political and personal record came under heavy scrutiny by other candidates, including his past stances regarding stop-and-frisk policies during his tenure as mayor of New York City.The main highlight from the Nevada Debate were the attacks on Mike Bloomberg