Original sentence: The family moved around often, spending time in a desert town called Indio, best known as the site of the Coachella Festival of Music, which is held every year at the Empire Polo Grounds in Indio
Edited sentence: The family moved around often, spending time in a desert town called Indio, best known as the site of the Coachella Valley Music and Arts Festival, which is held every year at the Empire Polo Grounds in Indio