Original sentence: Private schools include Stoneybrook Academy (where Karen Brewer, et al attended) and Stoneybrook Day School (where Karen's neighbor Amanda Delaney and associate member Shannon Kilbourne attended school)
Edited sentence: Private schools include Stoneybrook Academy (where Karen Brewer, et al attended) and Stoneybrook Day School (where Karen's prissy neighbor Amanda Delaney and associate member Shannon Kilbourne attended school)