Original sentence: Attempts to claim a police pension on top of his police salary  also drew media attention.Bettison has faced a number of concerns in his career.He is Chief Constable of West Yorkshire Police, and has a 32-year career in policing.He received a knighthood in the 2006 Queen’s Birthday Honours list for services to policing.He was criticized for his part in the police investigation of the Hillsborough disaster,that occurred on April 15, 1989, at Hillsborough Stadium, a football stadium in Sheffield, England where the failure of police control  resulted in the deaths of 96 innocent people (all fans of Liverpool Football Club).He was funded by the Home Office to support the police forces of England and Wales in collaborating to merge together, an initiative that was unsuccessful...Hillsborough Justice Campaign page on Bettison.In 2006 he was unsuccessful in his application to lead the body that would replace Centrex.In his time at West Yorkshire Police he lost a vote held by rank and file officers on his attempts to introduce new working arrangements
Edited sentence: Bettison was unsuccessful in selling the idea to either forces or police authorities.Given this series of controversies around Hillsborough, he somewhat controversially received a knighthood in the 2006 Queen’s Birthday Honours list for services to policing.He is Chief Constable of West Yorkshire Police.He was criticized for his part in the police investigation of the Hillsborough disaster that occurred on April 15, 1989, at Hillsborough Stadium, a football stadium in Sheffield, England where the failure of police control resulted in the deaths of 96 innocent people (all fans of Liverpool Football Club).In 2006 he was unsuccessful in his application to lead the body that would replace Centrex, and he was removed from his post and funded by the Home Office to support the police forces of England and Wales in collaborating to merge together.In his time at West Yorkshire Police he has already lost a vote held by rank and file officers.Many in the local community strongly protested his appointment and questioned his integrity.Sir Norman has had a 32-year career in policing, which has been marred by controversies linked to the Hillsborough disaster and his attempts to claim a police pension on top of his police salary.on his attempts to introduce new working arrangements