Original sentence: Severe shunning occurs today only in Old Order Amish, Mennonite, and Hutterite churches.Shunning is often particularly painful for the shunnee in these denominations since they are generally very close-knit, and since the shunned person usually has no significant social links with anyone other than those in their denomination
Edited sentence: Severe shunning occurs today only in few old fashioned or Old Order Amish, Mennonite, and Hutterite churches.Shunning is often particularly painful, for the shunnee, in these denominations since they are generally very close-knit, and since the shunned person usually has no significant social links with anyone other than those in their denomination