Original sentence: As a profession, they are entertainers and conversationalists, much like professional ballet dancers, classical musicians, or party MCs.Their clientele are most often businessmen, those with an appreciation for the classical arts and with money enough to pay for the expensive fees.They do give public concerts, but the majority of their business is in private engagements
Edited sentence: As a profession, they are entertainers and conversationalists.Their clientele are most often businessmen, but they do not sell their bodies.They sell their company and their wonderful insight and views into the world around them