Original sentence: Her first official book entitled My World will be published on 30 September 2010.In April 2009, it was reported that Cole had signed a £5million deal with HarperCollins to author five romantic novels for the company
Edited sentence: In April 2009, it was reported that Cole signed a £5million deal with HarperCollins to author five romantic novels for the company.In March 2010, it was revealed Cole would release her first official book entitled My World which would be published on 30 September