Original sentence: Ali has worked with many music artists for television dramas and films and currently works with his brother.He has produced many albums and singles, including songs from dramas and films for the Pakistan film industry.Waqar Ali (Urdu: وقار علی) is a Pakistani musician and the brother of pop singer Sajjad Ali.Waqar has been creating music for the last 11 years
Edited sentence: He has worked with many music artists for television dramas and films and currently works with his brother.Waqar Ali (Urdu: وقار علی) is a Pakistani musician, and the brother of pop singer Sajjad Ali.Waqar has been creating music for the last 11 years, he is an absolutely amazing keyboardist.Waqar has produced many albums and singles, including songs from dramas and films for the Pakistan film industry