Original sentence: In Season 4, they open a second location in Long Beach, California, but in the premiere of Season 5, it's revealed that the second "Now and Then" store hadn't made a single profit since opening day, putting them in financial jeopardy
Edited sentence: In Season 4, they open a second location in Long Beach, California, but in the premiere of Season 5, it's revealed that the second "Now and Then" dynasty made a single profit since opening day, putting them in financial jeopardy