Original sentence: Outside, the design reflects the juxtaposition of technology and nature, with the steel, brick, and glass facades contrasting with the grass and trees in the Oval.The outside geometry of Olin architecture around the Oval is highly structured, but focuses on curves rather than more traditional right angles
Edited sentence: Outside, the design reflects the juxtaposition of technology and nature, with the impressive steel, brick, and glass facades contrasting with the grass and trees that make the Oval a more natural seeming place.The outside geometry of Olin architecture around the Oval is highly structured, but focuses on curves rather than more traditional right angles, giving the space an ordered but informal feel