Original sentence: Aesthetic Realism is the philosophy founded in 1941 byAmerican poet and critic Eli Siegel, about whose poetry William Carlos Williams wrote: "I can't tell you how important Siegel's work is in the light of my present understanding of the modern poem.The beginning of the idea of the aesthetic oneness of opposites is in Siegel’s Nation Prize poem of 1925, "Hot Afternoons Have Been in Montana," portions of which were quoted in the preface to the first Aesthetic Realism publication, The Aesthetic Method in Self-Conflict of 1946
Edited sentence: "  in 1941.Aesthetic Realism is the philosophy founded by American poet and critic Eli Siegel, about whose poetry William Carlos Williams wrote: "I can't tell you how important Siegel's work is in the light of my present understanding of the modern poem.The beginning of the idea of the aesthetic oneness of opposites is in Siegel’s Nation Prize poem of 1925, “Hot Afternoons Have Been in Montana,&#8221, portions of which were quoted in the preface to the first Aesthetic Realism publication, The Aesthetic Method in Self-Conflict of 1946