Original sentence: Durham21 is entirely run by students.” Donald Macintyre, chief political commentator from The Independent remarked that d21 “explored the unique possibilities of the web, rather than simply ‘hosting’ their union’s newspaper or magazine.” When d21’s Laura Swinton won the best Student Critic Award in 2006, the judge commented that she “displayed a fluent, confident and witty style that made her work really stand out
Edited sentence: Durham Students' Union.Durham21 is entirely run by students and is always on the look out for new contributors as it aims to once again retain the NUS Student Website of the Year Award.The University of Durham.” Donald Macintyre, chief political commentator from The Independent went as far as to say d21 “explored the unique possibilities of the web, rather than simply ‘hosting’ their union’s newspaper or magazine.” When d21’s Laura Swinton won the best Student Critic Award in 2006, the judge’s comments on her reflected the unique style of d21, saying she “displayed a fluent, confident and witty style that made her work really stand out