Original sentence: A memorial to them is on the common.Bowls of fresh strawberries, whipped cream and piles of shortcakes are prepared and served by volunteer members.Memorial Day has been traditionally celebrated in Topsfield with a parade through the center of town tohonor Topsfield's living veterans and those who have died in service of the county
Edited sentence: A memorial to Topsfield's veterans is on the common.Bowls of fresh strawberries, whipped cream and piles of shortcakes are served by volunteer members.Topsfield residents have traditionally celebrated Memorial Day with a parade through the center of town to honor Topsfield's living veterans and those who have died in service of the county