Original sentence: In the summer months visitors come to the area to undertake activities including swimming, biking, fishing, hiking, and boating.Kenora has two travel information centers.Kenora's tourist industry is also active during the winter months as visitors come not only to observe its natural environment but also to partake in ice fishing, snowboarding, skiing (both downhill and cross country) and snowmachining
Edited sentence: In the summer months visitors flock to the area to experience many different activities including swimming, biking, fishing, hiking, and boating.Kenora currently has two travel information centers.Kenora's tourist industry is also active during the winter months as visitors come not only to observe its natural beauty but also to partake in ice fishing, snowboarding, skiing (both downhill and cross country) and snowmachining