Original sentence: A coalition of groups, is calling on people to protest Caterpillar's sales of D9, D10, and D11 bulldozers to Israel.Caterpillar tractors have been bought and used by the Israel Defense Forces (the Israeli military) for use in its occupied territories.the death of American International Solidarity Movement volunteer Rachel Corrie, who was killed by a Caterpillar D9 while trying to obstruct what she believed was the demolition of a home in Rafah;
Edited sentence: A coalition of groups, made up mostly of groups strongly supportive of the Palestinian side of the conflict, is calling on people to protest Caterpillar's sales of D9, D10, and D11 bulldozers to Israel.Caterpillar tractors have been bought and used by the Israel Defense Forces (the Israeli military) for, among other things, tearing down homes suspected of being used by terrorists in the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.the death of American International Solidarity Movement volunteer Rachel Corrie, who was killed while trying to obstruct what she believed was the demolition of a home in "no man's land" zone in Rafah by a Caterpillar D9;