Original sentence: A newly installed plastic playground for children.Cedarvale Park is a municipal park located a short walk from downtown Georgetown, Ontario.Cedarvale is always free to use, and always open.This one day event showcases the classic cars from the surrounding area
Edited sentence: A newly installed plastic playground for children is a safe and fun way to keep them entertained.Cedarvale Park is located a short walk from beautiful downtown Georgetown, Ontario.Children's Playground.Classics Against Cancer.Hiking Trail.It is a public park, so Cedarvale is always free to use, and always open.This one day event showcases the best in classic cars from the surrounding area.Toboggan Hill