Original sentence: Al Caldwell meets Ritchie Starkey at the "6.5 Special" talent contest and invites him to audition for his band, The Raving Texans.All of the band members adopt western-sounding stage names, and Starkey becomes Ringo Starr
Edited sentence: At the "6.5 Special" talent show, Al Caldwell asks Ritchie Starkey to audition for his band, The Raving Texans.Band members adopt western-sounding stage names, and Starkey becomes Ringo Starr