Original sentence: Five weeks after his appearance, Ho was back for the 30th episode on July 17th, 2009, making him the first returning guest of the show.For his directorial debut with "Soundman", former members of Guns N' Roses (Slash, Matt Sorum, Duff McKagan) reunited for the first time in six years to collaborate to score a portion of the film's soundtrack , as well as play at the film's opening party at Harry O’s in Park City, Utah for the Slamdance Film Festival.Ho appeared as a guest on the eighth episode of The Tonight Show with Conan O'Brien on June 10th, 2009.Most Notably, Ho trained Brad Pitt in swordplay for six months prior to his production of Troy , and prepped Tobey Maguire for 3 months prior to his transformational role as Peter Parker in Spider-Man (2002)
Edited sentence: Five weeks after his appearance, Ho was back for the 30th episode on July 17, 2009, making him the first returning guest of the show.For his directorial debut with "Soundman", former members of Guns N' Roses (Slash, Matt Sorum, Duff McKagan) reunited for the first time in six years to collaborate to score a portion of the film's soundtrack, as well as play at the film's opening party at Harry O’s in Park City, Utah for the Slamdance Film Festival.Ho appeared as a guest on the eighth episode of The Tonight Show with Conan O'Brien on June 10, 2009.Most Notably, Ho trained Brad Pitt in swordplay for six months prior to his production of Troy, and prepped Tobey Maguire for 3 months prior to his transformational role as Peter Parker in Spider-Man (2002)