Original sentence: Academically, Biden was an above-average student, was considered a natural leader among the students, and was elected class president during his junior and senior years.Biden earned his BA degree in 1965 from the University of Delaware in Newark, with a double major in history and political science, where his classmates were impressed by his cramming abilities, and he played halfback with the Blue Hens freshman football team.By his own description, he found law school to be "the biggest bore in the world" and pulled many all-nighters to get by.He received his Juris Doctor in 1968, and was admitted to the Delaware Bar in 1969.He then entered Syracuse University College of Law, receiving a half scholarship based on financial need with some additional assistance based on academics
Edited sentence: Academically, Biden received mostly 'B' grades, but he was a natural leader among the students, and was elected class president during his junior and senior years.Biden attended the University of Delaware in Newark, where he was more interested in sports and socializing than in studying, although his classmates were impressed by his cramming abilities.By his own description he found law school to be "the biggest bore in the world" and pulled many all-nighters to get by.He double majored in history and political science and graduated with a Bachelor of Arts in 1965, ranking 506th of 688 in his class.He played halfback with the Blue Hens freshman football team, received "A" grades in physical education, got an "F" in the Reserve Officers' Training Corps (ROTC), and otherwise earned unexceptional grades.He received his Juris Doctor in 1968, graduating 76th of 85 in his class.He then entered Syracuse University College of Law (where he would be near her), receiving a half scholarship based on financial need with some additional assistance based in part upon academics.He was admitted to the Delaware Bar in 1969