Original sentence: Ravi moves in with Russ and Nancy however there realtionship is short lived when its realised they both had been sleeping with Kris Fisher.Things are fine between them until Russ suggest they run away together with Max and Nancys nephew Charlie Nancy convinces him its a bad idea but she later overhears him tell Tony she is the consolation prize and he wishes he'd took the oppertunity to run away with Max
Edited sentence: Ravi moves in with Russ and Nancy however there relationship is short lived when its realized they both had been sleeping with Kris Fisher.Things are fine between them until Russ suggest they run away together with Max and Nancys nephew Charlie Nancy convinces him its a bad idea but she later overhears him tell Tony she is the consolation prize and he wishes he'd took the opportunity to run away with Max