Original sentence: (See her 1978 text) Often drawing on autobiographical narratives and the use of personal testimony.According to Ms.Bonnie Zimmerman is a lesbian feminist literary critic who talks quite a bit about the language used by writers from within the movement.For a useful summary of these arguments see Sheila Jeffreys' (2003) book, "Unpacking Queer Politics.Judy Rebick, one of Canada's leading feminists, she states that lesbians were and always have been at the heart of the women's movement, while being invisible in the women's movement.Samois was a San Francisco Based feminist organization focused on BDSM
Edited sentence: According to Judy Rebick, one of Canada's leading feminists, she states that lesbians were and always have been at the heart of the women's movement, while being invisible in the women's movement.Bonnie Zimmerman is a lesbian feminist literary critic who frequently about the language used by writers from within the movement (see her 1978 text), often drawing on autobiographical narratives and the use of personal testimony.Sheila Jeffreys summarized the arguments on this topic in "Unpacking Queer Politics" (2003).This view was challenged in the late 1970s, most notably by the Samois group  Samois was a San Francisco based feminist organization focused on BDSM