Original sentence: As well, the apolitical and unbiased Sovereign can well represent the diverse peoples of Australia equally, regardless of their religion, race, or language.For Australians of Italian or Chinese origin, the idea of a Monarch of Australia who is also the Monarch of Britain was an anomaly, while even for some of those of British origin, it was an anachronism.From European settlement to the present day, the Queen or King has been the personification or embodiment of the state.The Commonwealth as a federated unit is a constitutional monarchy with a non-resident monarch, currently Queen Elizabeth II, the Queen of Australia.The main argument made by supporters of an Australian republic is that it is inappropriate for someone in a distant country to be their head of state.They argued that a "foreigner" whose main job is as the head of state of the United Kingdom, and spends his or her life there, cannot represent Australia, not to itself, nor to the rest of the world.This move made Australia a completely sovereign and independent constitutional monarchy (and thus a kingdom)
Edited sentence: For Australians of Italian or Chinese origin, the idea of a British monarch as head of state was an anomaly, while even for some of those of British origin, it was an anachronism.From European settlement to the present day, the Queen or King has been the personification or embodiment of government.The commonwealth as a federated unit is a constitutional monarchy with a non-resident monarch, currently Queen Elizabeth II, the Queen of Australia.The main argument made by supporters of an Australian republic is that it is inappropriate for the citizen of a distant country to be their head of state.They argued that a foreigner whose main job is as the head of state of the United Kingdom, and spends his or her life there, cannot represent Australia, not to itself, nor to the rest of the world