Original sentence: Incidents including the death of 47 year old Ian Tomlinson from abdominal bleeding, minutes after an alleged assault by a police officer, and a separate alleged assault on a woman by a police officer, has led to criticism of police tactics during protests
Edited sentence: Incidents including the death of 47 year old Ian Tomlinson (the cause of which is disputed), minutes after an alleged assault by a police officer, and a separate alleged assault on a woman by a police officer, has led to criticism of police tactics during protests