Original sentence: " The women's magazines to which she contributed include: Some of the magazines include: Cosmopolitan, Good Housekeeping ,the Ladies Home Journal, Todays's Housewife,  and the Household Magazine,  She was noted for her talent for depicting women and children in a wide variety of roles and responsibilites with great sensitivity, illustrating articles topic dealing with education, child psychology, and the expectant mother'
Edited sentence: " The women's magazines to which she contributed include: Cosmopolitan, Good Housekeeping ,the Ladies Home Journal, Todays's Housewife,  and the Household Magazine,  She was noted for her talent for depicting women and children in a wide variety of roles and responsibilites with great sensitivity, illustrating articles topic dealing with education, child psychology, and the expectant mother'