Original sentence: Confirmed in a recently leaked interview,Rebecca will sensationally leave home and abandon Charlie later this year after Charlie reveals she is in fact Rubys mother,not her sister as she previously thought.The two do however,finally sort out there differences
Edited sentence: During this period, she performed with various ensembles and toured around America as part of the school choir.Rebecca has taken music and drama classes since she was a little girl, and completed years 11 and 12 on a music scholarship.Rebecca was also drama captain in year 12 and studied music at university for six months