Original sentence: The American Paint Horse is a breed of horse that combines both the conformational characteristics of a western stock horse with a pinto spotting pattern of white and dark coat colors
Edited sentence: The American Paint Horse is a breed of horse that combines both the conformational characteristics of a western and is a great hunter jumper.the paint horse is perfect horse for young children(if horse is trained well) (ages 6 - 12) and teens ( ages 13- 19)  stock horse with a pinto spotting pattern of white and dark coat colors