Original sentence: Like members of other farming castes, members of Saini generally avoid priestly duties, shopkeeping, or anything but farming.Saini is the name of a caste name of the Indo-Aryan (Vedic Kshatriya) tribe, a farming community spread across Punjab, Haryana, Rajasthan, Uttaranchal and Uttar Pradesh in modern India.They claim descent from Rajan Saini (called 'Sini in texts) and his grandson Satyak (of Mahabharata fame, who founded Saini Vamsh of the Sura-Sena, which is one of the eleven Vamshas of Krishna and one of the tribes of the Yadavas)
Edited sentence: A caste name of Indo-Aryan (Vedic Kshatriya) tribe is now a farming community spreaded over Punjab, Haryana, Rajasthan, Uttaranchal and Uttar Pradesh in modern India.Like other farming castes, generally avoid priestly duties or run shops or do anything but farming, the noblest and first profession of mankind.they claim descent from Rajan Saini (called 'Sini in texts) and his grandson Satyaki of the Mahabharata fame and founded Saini Vamsh of the Sura-Sena which is one of the eleven Vamshas of Krishna and one of the tribes of the Yadavas