Original sentence: "Soarin' Over California's" musical score was composed by Jerry Goldsmith.Guests "fly" over such California landmarks as Redwood Creek, Anza-Borrego State Park, Napa Valley, San Francisco, San Diego, Lake Tahoe, Monterey, Malibu, Yosemite National Park, Palm Springs (actually shot in nearby La Quinta), Los Angeles and finally Disneyland itself
Edited sentence: Guests "fly" over such California landmarks as Redwood Creek, Anza-Borrego State Park, Napa Valley, San Francisco, San Diego, Los Angeles, Lake Tahoe, Monterey, Malibu, Yosemite National Park, Palm Springs (actually shot in nearby La Quinta), Los Angeles and finally Disneyland itself.Its beautiful musical score was composed by the late Jerry Goldsmith