Original sentence: To help students, the school also has a peer support and peer mentoring system
Edited sentence: The school also has a brilliant peer support and peer mentoring syteam who help all the students and teacher of the school, although to become more effective need to be given more powers such as, the power to give dententions, maybe mr sarahan should speak to the peer suppoters to see away fro this work.and is better than the two before him, collin eves and tony fucker, sorry i mean tucker who was acting head and went for the job as perement head but was rejected several times, maybe he didnt get the message the first time