Original sentence: Shortly thereafter, the First Mobile Force departed Lingga and arrived on May 14 at Tawi-Tawi off Borneo where the fleet could refuel with unrefined crude oil and await execution of the planned "decisive battle" known as Operation A-GO.The torpedo's impact fractured the aviation fuel tanks and jammed the forward elevator between the flight deck and upper hangar deck.This resulted in saturation of areas previously unexposed to the gasoline vapors and increased the chances of accidental or spontaneous ignition exponentially.When American carrier strikes against the Marianas made an invasion there seem imminent, the Japanese Combined Fleet staff initiated Operation A-GO on June 11
Edited sentence: Shortly thereafter, the First Mobile Force departed Lingga and arrived on May 14 at Tawi-Tawi off Borneo where the fleet could directly refuel with unrefined Tarakan crude oil and await execution of the planned "decisive battle" known as Operation A-GO.The impact also fractured the aviation fuel tanks and jammed the forward elevator between the flight deck and upper hangar deck.This resulted in saturation of areas previously unexposed to the vapors and increased the chances of accidental or spontaneous ignition exponentially.When American carrier strikes against the Marianas indicated an invasion there was imminent, the Japanese Combined Fleet staff initiated Operation A-GO on June 11