Original sentence: Nancy Anne Hayton (previously Dean) is a fictional character from the long-running Channel 4 British soap opera Hollyoaks, played by Jessica Fox.On August 6th Nancy recieves a letter from Jake which read Nancy, Sorry Ive changed Jake on the same day Jacquie gets a postcard from Russ.Rather than split up, they decided to try having an open threeway relationship
Edited sentence: Nancy Anne Hayton (previously Dean) is a fictional character from the long-running Channel 4 soap opera Hollyoaks, played by Jessica Fox.On 6 August, Nancy received a letter from Jake saying he was sorry and had changed.Rather than split up, they decided to try having an open three-way relationship