Original sentence: He was brought up in the legendary Bat and Ball Inn, where his father was the landlord, immediately opposite Broadhalfpenny Down.John Goulstone, Hambledon: The Men and the Myths, Roger Heavens, 2001.John Nyren (15 December 1764 at Catherington, Hampshire – 30 June, 1837 in Bromley-by-Bow, London) was an English cricketer turned author
Edited sentence: He was brought up in the legendary Bat and Ball Inn, where his father was the landlord, immediately opposite Broadhalfpenny Down, just outside Hambledon.John Nyren (born 15 December 1764 at Hambledon, Hampshire; died 30 June, 1837 at Bromley-by-Bow, London) was an English cricketer and author