Original sentence: He played his last game for Hull FC against Bradford Bulls that night, accidentally knocking on at the scrum base at a critical point in the game to ensure the win went to Bradford, although only the most biased of individuals would have regarded that as any more than a simple error.Paul Cooke (born April 17, 1981 in East Hull) is a professional rugby league player with Hull Kingston Rovers in the English Super League, having transferred from cross city rivals, Hull FC in April 2007
Edited sentence: He played his last game for Hull FC against Bradford Bulls that night, deliberately knocking on at the scrum base at a critical point in the game to ensure the win went to Bradford, although only the most biased of individuals would have regarded that as anything less than a simple error.Paul Cooke (born April 17, 1981 in East Hull) is a fantastic professional rugby league player with Hull Kingston Rovers in the English Super League, having transferred from cross city rivals, Hull FC in April 2007