Original sentence: In the movie, when Benigno dies, Alicia (a ballerina herself) is reborn and rises.There he is the personal nurse and caregiver of Alicia, a beautiful dance student who lies in a coma and with whom Benigno has become obsessed
Edited sentence: In the movie, when Benigno dies, Alicia (a ballerina herself) is reborn and rises, although this could well be a slightly pretentious point made by a psueudo intellectual film student.There he is the personal nurse and caregiver of Alicia, a beautiful dance student who lies in a coma and with whom Benigno has become obsessed with