Original sentence: Although technically superior to the enemy's tanks, it failed in war, but this was largely due to superior Indian tactics and crew ability.In fact there was a place in Khemkaran in India called "Patton Nagar" ("Patton Town") that held 60-odd destroyed or captured tanks before the war trophies were relocated.It was later used in limited numbers by Pakistan in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971 with unimpressive results.M47s and M48s were first used in tank warfare by Pakistan against Indian Centurion and M4 Sherman tanks in the 1965 Indo-Pakistan War with poor results.The Battle of Asal Uttar—where Pakistan's elite 1st Armoured brigade attacked Indian positions—saw about 100 Pattons being destroyed.The Pattons had a better outing in the Battle of Chawinda where it took out many Indian tanks
Edited sentence: M47s and M48s were first used in tank warfare by Pakistan against Indian Centurion and M4 Sherman tanks in the 1965 Indo-Pakistan War with poor results initially.The Battle of Asal Uttar—where Pakistan's elite 1st Armoured Division attacked Indian positions—saw about 45 Pattons destroyed or captured (as to about 29 Indian Tanks destroyed).The Patton redeemed itself at the Battle of Chawinda, where it destroyed about 120 Indian Tanks.To be fair, however, the assault had been ordered by the GOC against the better advice of his commanders, and many Pattons ran out of ammunition it must be pointed out here that many of the losses were to recoiless rifles and artillery rather than enemy tank fire