Original sentence: The Anglican realignment is a movement in which some theologically conservative parishes and dioceses are seeking the oversight of bishops from other Anglican Communion churches: that is, to both secede from their local dioceses or provinces or both and yet remain within the Anglican Communion.The current realignment movement differs from previous ones in that some Anglicans are seeking to establish different ecclesiastical arrangements within the Anglican Communion rather than separating themselves from it.The term Anglican realignment refers to a movements among some Anglicans to align themselves under new or alternative oversight within or outside the Anglican Communion.Two major events which contributed to the movement were the 2002 decision of the Diocese of New Westminster in Canada to authorise a rite of blessing for same-sex unions and the ratification by the General Convention of the Episcopal Church of the election of Gene Robinson, an openly gay non-celibate man, as Bishop of New Hampshire the following year
Edited sentence: The Anglican realignment is a movement by which some theologically conservative parishes and dioceses are seeking the oversight of bishops from Anglican Communion churches other than the ones they had previouisly belonged to.The current realignment movement differs from previous ones (see the "Continuing Anglican" movement) in that these Anglicans are seeking to establish different ecclesiastical arrangements within the Anglican Communion rather than separating themselves from it.The term Anglican realignment refers to a movement among some Anglicans to align themselves under new or alternative oversight which would retain membership in the Anglican Communion while no longer belonging to certain churches that already are provinces of the Communion.Two major events which contributed to the movement were the 2002 decision of the Diocese of New Westminster in Canada to authorise a rite of blessing for same-sex unions and the ratification by the General Convention of the Episcopal Church of the election of Gene Robinson, an openly gay non-celibate man, to be the Bishop of New Hampshire the following year