Original sentence: However, it is suggested that he neglected to pay attention to the larger issue of financial regulation, and excessively simplified the relationships between institutions in the financial market.Michael Lewis responded that those who said he "got it wrong" have a financial stake in the existing system.Other critics have praised Lewis's explanations of trading concepts and concurred in his criticisms of HFT.Some industry executives have dismissed the book as "closer to fiction".The book has drawn criticism from some academics and industry experts, particularly on Lewis's views on HFT and other claimed factual inaccuracies in its description of trading strategies
Edited sentence: A few executives in the industry have also responded by dismissing the book's content as "closer to fiction".Michael Lewis responded that everyone who said he "got it wrong" has a stake in the existing system.Other critics have praised Lewis's explanations of trading concepts and concurred with his criticism of HFT; however, it is suggested that he neglects to pay attention to the larger issue of financial regulation, and had excessively simplified the relationship between various institutions in the financial market.The book has drawn criticism from some academics and industry experts, particularly on Lewis's grasp of HFT and other factual inaccuracies in its depiction of trading