Original sentence: The primary purpose of the educational program in the Heath City Schools is to develop citizens who will safeguard, strengthen, and improve the democracy obtained through representative government unless your black,gay,jewish,or a women.They also have a very talented choir led by Choir Director, Thai Sirbanditmonkel.We believe that the education program should meet the basic needs of the youth in the Heath community as expressed in terms of physical, social, emotional,and intellectual development and that the school is the center of the community and its purpose is to provide education, guidance, and direction to the lives of youth
Edited sentence: They also have a very talented choir led by Choir Director, Thai Sribanditmongkol