Original sentence: Moore was a high-profile guest at the 2004 Democratic National Convention, prominently seated in a box with former President Jimmy Carter and his wife.The tour was a popular success.This provoked public denunciations from the Michigan Republican Party and attempts to convince the government that Moore should be arrested for buying votes, but district attorneys refused to get involved with what would surely have become a circus trial
Edited sentence: Moore was a high-profile guest at the 2004 Democratic National Convention for his propaganda works, prominently seated in a box with former President Jimmy Carter and his wife.The "Underwear" tour was a popular success.The desparation of the the Democratic National Convention to fore go the truth for success was never more clear.This provoked public denunciations from the Michigan Republican Party and attempts to convince the government that Moore should be arrested for buying votes, but district attorneys refused to get involved.When referred to during the Repulican Convention, Moore showed his character by placing his right hand on his forehead in the shape of the letter "L" for "Losers"