Original sentence: While some maintain that he acquired a blemish image to his name by his treatment towards Draupadi at Dhriturashtra's court, others maintain that he was justified by his act, since it was Draupadi who first dishonored and humiliated him by unjustly denying him the opportunity to compete in her Swayamvara by insulting him with the sooth-putra epithet (referring to him as being of a lower class background) in order to disqualify him; However, his role in the killing of an unarmed and outnumbered Abhimanyu can be interpreted as an act that more directly damaged him as an honorable warrior and doomed him to a similar fate
Edited sentence: While some maintain that he acquired a blemished image to his name by his treatment towards Draupadi at Dhritrashtra's court, others maintain that he was justified in this act, since it was Draupadi who first dishonored and humiliated him by unjustly denying him the opportunity to compete in her Swayamvara by insulting him with the sooth-putra epithet (referring to him as being of a lower class background) in order to disqualify him; however, his role in the killing of an unarmed and outnumbered Abhimanyu can be interpreted as an act that more directly damaged him as an honorable warrior and doomed him to a similar fate