Original sentence: began his business career at age ten, when he and his friends borrowed a [lawnmower]] and started Best Friends Lawn Service in the projects of Dallas.. He attended high school in the Dallas Independent School District and after graduation, he continued his studies at the University of Texas at Dallas graduating with a Bachelor's Degree of General Studies, with a focus on business and political science
Edited sentence: began his business career at age ten, when he and his friends borrowed a lawnmower and started Best Friends Lawn Service in the projects of Dallas.. He attended high school in the Dallas Independent School District and after graduation, he continued his studies at the University of Texas at Dallas graduating with a Bachelor's Degree of General Studies, with a focus on business and political science