Original sentence: A slice of the Big Apple, it will showcase some of New York's famous sights and sounds, as well as the debut location for the world's first Transformers Ride, which will open to the public in 2011.Egypt Jeep Ride - A kiddie ride found at Egypt Street, the ride is incorporated into the Revenge of the Mummy coaster building.It will be the home for Revenge of the Mummy and the scenic Egypt Jeep Ride.Quite similar to Universal Studio Orlando's Dueling Dragons attraction.The resort is estimated to open in the first quarter of 2010.Transformers (ride) to be ready in 2011.Universal Studios Singapore is expected to be completed by the first quarter of 2010
Edited sentence: A slice of the Big Apple, it will showcase some of New York's famous sights and sounds, as well as the debut location for the world's first Transformers Ride.Dueling Dragons attraction.Egypt Jeep Ride - A kiddie scenic ride found at Egypt Street, the ride is incorporated into the Revenge of the Mummy coaster building.Quite similar to Universal Studio Orlando's.The parks will be zoned by six main themes, each section will showncased their unique attractions, character appearances, dinings and shopping areas.Transformers (ride) will open to the public in 2011.Universal Studios Singapore (USS) is estimated to open in the first quarter of 2010