Original sentence: In the violent clashes that followed, at least nine activists were killed and up to sixty activists and ten IDF soldiers injured.It joined a flotilla of ships operated by activist groups from 32 different countries with the stated intention of directly confronting Egypt-Israel’s blockade of the Gaza Strip and bringing in humanitarian aid.On 31 May 2010, while en route to Gaza, the MV Mavi Marmara was intercepted by Israeli Defense Forces in international waters after warnings that a naval blockade was in force as part of the Gaza flotilla raid
Edited sentence: In the violent clashes that followed, nine passengers were killed and up to sixty passengers injured.It joined a flotilla of ships operated by activist groups from 32 different countries with the stated intention of bringing in humanitarian aid to the Israeli-impoverished Gaza Strip.On 31 May 2010, while en route to Gaza, the MV Mavi Marmara was borded by Israeli Defense Forces in International waters.Some of the MV Mavi Marmara passengers resisted violently , and the IDF soldiers opened fire