Original sentence: After the war ended and men returned home to find jobs in the workplace, male chauvinism was on the rise according to Cynthia B.Chauvinism is seen by some as an influential factor in the TAT, a psychological personality test.Lloyd and Michael Korda have argued that as they integrated back into the workforce, men returned to predominantly holding positions of power, and women worked as their secretaries, usually typing dictations and answering telephone calls.Previously, men had been the main source of labour, and they expected to come back to their previous employment, but women had stepped into many of their positions to fill the void says Lloyd.This division of labor was understood and expected, and women typically felt unable to challenge their position or male superiors, argue Korda and Lloyd.This is closely associated with sexism and misogyny
Edited sentence: After the war ended and men returned home to find jobs in the workplace, male chauvinism was on the rise.As they integrated back into the workforce, men returned to predominantly holding positions of power, and women worked as their secretaries, usually typing dictations and answering telephone calls.Chauvinism is seen as an influential factor in some psychological personality tests, such as the TAT.In some cases, this results from centuries of historical or religious conditioning into the subservient role.Previously, men had been the main source of labour, and they expected to come back to their previous employment, but women had stepped into many of their positions to fill the void.Some women are comfortable with being subjugated and/or relieved from positions of responsibility by men, and do not feel comfortable when they or other women are in power or authority.Such attitudes may be passed on to children, including female children, and lead to self-perpetuation.This division of labor was understood and expected, and women typically felt unable to challenge their position or male superiors.This is closely associated with sexism and misogyny, and other forms of believing that women are inferior to men, especially intellectually