Original sentence: Joni Robbins nee Joan Eva Rothman, voice-over actress The Official Web Site of Joni Robbins.Many of its graduates go out and venture into the entertainment industry and are very succesful.The Choir Department has a winter and spring voice concert and a benifit concert in the the spring to raise money for competitions and choir trips
Edited sentence: Joni Robbins née Joan Eva Rothman, voice-over actress The Official Web Site of Joni Robbins.Many of its graduates go out and venture into the entertainment industry and are very successful.The Choir Department has a winter and spring voice concert and a benefit concert in the spring to raise money for competitions and choir trips