Original sentence: After setting the world record in the 100m breaststroke as a high school senior, she competed for two years at the University of California, Berkeley, where she was a four-time NCAA Champion and met her longtime boyfriend Dominik Meichtry, a Swiss swimmer
Edited sentence: At the 2005 World Aquatics Championships, Hardy set a world record in the semis of the 100 m breast before ultimately finishing second in the finals.Hardy also earned silver in the 50 m breaststroke and in the 400m medley relay.She competed for two years at the University of California, Berkeley, where she was a four-time NCAA Champion and met her longtime boyfriend Dominik Meichtry, a Swiss swimmer