Original sentence: In recent years, many believe all of these social changes have resulted in reductions in circumcision rates, along with drops in other interventions, such as episiotomy.The oldest American woman known to give birth was Arceli Keh, aged 63
Edited sentence: In recent years, many believe all of these social changes have allowed reductions in circumcision rates, along with drops in other often unnecessary and harmful interventions, such as episiotomy.The eldest American woman known to give birth was Arceli Keh, aged 63