Original sentence: The man at the right appears as a caucasian man in his mid-thirties, who sports an unbuttoned, dark green, light-weight dress-jacket over an almost cyan, casual buttoned-up shirt (tucked in)
Edited sentence: Opportunity” appears as a caucasian man in his mid-thirties, who sports an unbuttoned, dark green, light-weight dress-jacket over an almost cyan, casual buttoned-up shirt (tucked in)