Original sentence: The Catholic Bible includes seven deuterocanonical books: Tobit, Judith, 1 Maccabees, 2 Maccabees, Wisdom of Solomon, Sirach (Ecclesiasticus), and Baruch, as well as six additional chapters of Esther and three additional chapters of the Daniel.The majority of Christians (including members of the Catholic, Eastern Orthodox, and Oriental Orthodox churches) include deuterocanonical books in the Old Testament.The various Orthodox churches include a few others, typically 3 Maccabees, Psalm 151, 1 Esdras, Odes, Psalms of Solomon, and occasionally even 4 Maccabees.This is a collection of books, which were included in various version of the Greek Septuagint
Edited sentence: Additionally, the Roman Catholic bible has 3 additional chapters of Daniel and 6 additional chapters of Esther.Some Christian denominations (including the Roman Catholic Church) hold deuterocanonical books [the apocrypha] in the Old Testament.The apocrypha has 7 books: Tobias, Judith, Wisdom, Ecclesiasticus/Sirach, Baruch, I Maccabees, and II Maccabees).This is a collection of books, which were included in the Greek Septuagint used by the Apostles