Original sentence: Her breakthrough single, Feel what you want, marked the start of a string of consecutive number ones on the Billboard's Hot Dance Music/Club Play.Kristine W is a former Miss Washington and placed first in the talent competition at the 1982 Miss America pageant earning her a college scolarship.Kristine's second album Stronger, long awaited by fans, had more influences of pop and spawned two singles.She performed in Las Vegas at the Hilton hotel and later at Studio 54 at the MGM.The collaboration with Rollo and Rob D expanded to include Kristine's first official album Land of the Living
Edited sentence: Kristine W is a former Miss Washington and placed first in the talent competition at the 1982 Miss America pageant.Many mistaken her for a Black female singer much like Teena Marie was mistaken for a Black singer when she started her career.She performed in Las Vegas at the Hilton hotel, and, later, at Studio 54 at the MGM.The ignorance of radio programmers and big business is the initial reason why this extremely talented singer/songwriter is not a well known household name like Celine Dion or Christina Aguilera