Original sentence: On May 15th, groups of Palestinians and Arabs from the West Bank, Gaza Strip, Syria, and Lebanon marched toward their respective borders with Israel, where at least 12 were killed and hundreds wounded by Israeli Army gunfire in various incidents.The 2011 Nakba Day demonstrations were given impetus by the revolutions and uprisings taking place in the Arab world.The American and Israeli governments claim the marches were coordinated by the Iranian and the Syrian governments to shift public attention from domestic unrest.[[File:Protestors in Houston for Palestinian Independence 2011.jpg|thumb|Protestors in Houston, Texas for Palestinian Independence 2011]
Edited sentence: 12 rioters were killed as a result of the Israeli Army response.On May 15th, groups of Palestinians and Arabs from the West Bank, Gaza Strip, Syria, and Lebanon marched toward their respective borders with Israel breaching the border in several locations and starting a riot.Several days before the border incidents, in an interview with the New York Times, Syrian official threatened that if the pro-democratic protests in Syria continue, Israel will have to share the consequences of such an instability.The American and Israeli governments have claimed that the marchings were coordinated by the Iranian and the Syrian governments in order to shift public attention from the revolutions and uprisings taking place in Syria and Iran