Original sentence: "Within months", Hindley said, "he [Brady] had convinced me that there was no God at all"; Hindley claimed that Brady began talking about "committing the perfect murder" in July 1963, and 18  months after the pair become lovers she had become Brady's accomplice in the first of a series of child murders
Edited sentence: "Within months", Hindley said, "he [Brady] had convinced me that there was no God at all"; Hindley claimed that Brady began talking about "committing the perfect murder" in July 1963; 18  months after the pair become lovers she had become Brady's accomplice in the first of a series of child murders