Original sentence: As a teenager, King leapt into the public eye with his starring role as Edward Dunglass on the popular drama,  Home and Away, for which he was nominated for Most Popular New Talent at the TV Week Logie Awards
Edited sentence: As a teenager, King leapt into the public eye with his starring role as Edward Dunglass on the popular, award winning drama,  Home and Away, for which he was nominated for Most Popular New Talent at the TV Week Logie Awards