Original sentence: As she stood over the officer ready to attack him with the knife, or bludgeon him with the now-empty jar, Officer Stephen Sullivan fired two shots from his 12-gauge single-barreled shotgun;the first hit Bumpurs' hand causing her to drop the jar and shattering the glass, the second fatally struck her in the chest.From that point, the nearly 300-pound Bumpurs attacked them swinging wildly with a butcher knife, and throwing honey-roasted peanuts everywhere.It happened so quickly they had no chance to subdue her, or save the honey-roasted peanuts for later consumption - no chance.It was after she spilled her peanuts and as she was striking again that the shots were fired.Many of the peanuts she was holding fell to the floor where they remained until a clean-up crew could arrive at the scene, thus negating the five-second rule.Prior to the eviction, Eleanor had related to her daughter Mary that someone in the building was harassing her, and eating all her honey-roasted peanuts.The case brought a lot of notice, as the victim was black, a senior citizen, mentally ill and a connoisseur of honey-roasted peanuts.They drilled out the lock, and through the hole it created they could see the 66-year old in her living room, holding a kitchen knife in one hand and a half-empty jar of honey-roasted peanuts in the other
Edited sentence: As she stood over the officer ready to attack him with the knife, Officer Stephen Sullivan fired two shots from his 12-gauge single-barreled shotgun; the first hit Bumpurs' hand, the second fatally struck her in the chest.From that point, the nearly 300-pound Bumpurs attacked them swinging wildly with a butcher knife.Prior to the eviction, Eleanor had related to her daughter Mary that someone in the building was harassing her.The case brought a lot of notice, as the victim was black, a senior citizen, and mentally ill.They drilled out the lock, and through the hole it created they could see the 66-year old in her living room, holding a kitchen knife