Original sentence: He is the founder, songwriter and lyricist of the underground band Tiger Lillies.He spent many years in order to train his characteristic falsetto voice while living above a brothel in Soho for seven years.In his Tiger Lillies appearances, Jacques sings about pimps, prostitutes, drug addicts, losers and other eccentric characters, describing them in great detail
Edited sentence: He is the founder, song-writer and lyricist of the cult underground band Tiger Lillies.He spent a lot of years in order to train his characteristic falsetto-style voice, while living above a brothel in Soho for seven years.In his Tiger Lillies appearances, Jacques sings about pimps, prostitutes, drug addicts, losers and other eccentric characters, picturing them in impressive detail