Original sentence: However IGN didn't find excitement from the game's one-on-one mech battles, and were disappointed that, despite claims in the manual, the game did not feature virtual spectators who cheered on the player.They also noted that much of the story in the Japanese version was excised in the North American release
Edited sentence: However IGN didn't find much excitement from the game's one-on-one mech battles, and noted that much of the story in the Japanese version was excised in the North American release.They were also disappointed that, despite claims in the manual, the game did not feature virtual spectators who cheered on the player