Original sentence: Despite this school of thought, Blaze failed to capture most fans' ears.His voice also possessed an admirable aggression which fitted well to faster tracks like Man on the Edge and Futureal (his best known numbers).It can be argued however Bayley's voice however had melody and power which was ideal for the darker tone of his debut Maiden album The X-Factor.On his albums with Blaze, Bayley's voice was noted for it's improvement, probably in part due of the absence of Bayley's former respiratory allergy that caused him trouble during live performances
Edited sentence: Bayley's voice however had melody and power which was ideal for the darker tone of his debut Maiden album The X-Factor.His voice also possessed an admirable aggression which fitted well to faster tracks like Man on the Edge and Futureal (two of his best known numbers).On his solo albums released under the band name Blaze, Bayley's voice sounds even more sophisticated and rich, which are certainly the result of many factors, mostly the fitting melodies of the new songs, but also of the absence of Bayley's former respiratory allergy that previously made his singing even worse on stage with Maiden.The new Blaze songs were also recorded using higher sound quality studio techniques than that is typical for Iron Maiden albums