Original sentence: Ebaum's World was just the starting point for the Video Game Pianist.The Video Game Pianist is a piano player whose video and audio performances have spread all across the internet.Various articles were written in such publications as "Night Life Montreal," articles on internet sites such as slashdot, and live radio interviews
Edited sentence: Ebaum's World was indeed just the starting point for the Video Game Pianist.The Video Game Pianist has generously made all the content on his site free to the public so everyone can benefit from his talents on the piano and have fun.The Video Game Pianist is a talented piano player whose video and audio performances have spread all across the internet.There are features such as an interactive forum, the sheet music to the songs in his videos (as well as other songs that have been contributed by visitors to his site), and helpful hints on how to play piano.To learn more about the Video Game Pianist, visit his site and feel free to have a look around.Various articles were written in such publications as "Night Life Montreal," articles on internet sites such as www.org, and live radio interviews