Original sentence: Later after Song Jiang conquered Qingfeng Fort with the Qingfeng bandits, Song Qing wrote a letter to him, telling him that their father had died, then he asked Shi Yong to send the letter for him
Edited sentence: Later after Song Jiang conquered Qingfeng Fort with the Qingfeng bandits, Song Qing wrote a letter to him, telling him that their father had passed away, then he asked Shi Yong to send the letter for him