Original sentence: Both campuses are reasonably close to London Underground stations and the Richmond campus is served by the London Buses 371 route, currently operated by London United.The university is split between two campuses, both in the Greater London area: the Richmond campus, located near the crest of Richmond Hill and approximately  from Richmond tube station, and the Kensington campus, located at a point equidistant between Kensington High Street and Cromwell Road
Edited sentence: Both are well-positioned for access to natural parks; the Richmond campus is within short walking distance of Richmond Park, while the Kensington campus is within moderate walking distance of Kensington Gardens and Holland Park.Both campuses enjoy reasonable connectivity with the London Underground, as mentioned above; the Richmond campus is additionally served by the London Buses 371 route, currently operated by London United.The Kensington campus is located in an upper-class inner-city region of the borough, and is also somewhat genteel, though less quiet than the Richmond campus.The Richmond campus is located in a genteel suburban region of Richmond; the area is well-known for the number of celebrities and other notables residing nearby.The university is split between two campuses, both in the Greater London area: the Richmond campus, located near the crest of Richmond Hill and approximately 1.5 miles from Richmond tube station, and the Kensington campus, located at a point equidistant between Kensington High Street and Cromwell Road, and easily reachable from either High Street Kensington tube station or Gloucester Road tube station