Original sentence: In the June 1967 Six-Day War, Israel captured territories totaling an additional.It is bounded to the north by Lebanon, the northeast by Syria, the east and southeast by Jordan, the southwest by Egypt with this border also being the border between Asia and Africa.These territories include the West Bank, ; East Jerusalem (annexed, according Israeli law), ; and the Golan Heights (de facto annexation),
Edited sentence: In the June 1967 Six-Day War, Israel captured and illegally occupied territories totalling an additional.It is bounded to the north by Lebanon, the northeast by Syria, the east by the Occupied Palestinian Territories and southeast by Jordan, the southwest by Egypt with this border also being the border between Asia and Africa.These territories include the West Bank, ; East Jerusalem (annexed, according to Israeli law, although not International Law, which sees it as illegal), ; and the Golan Heights (de facto annexation),