Original sentence: For his efforts, Shehzad was awarded the "Tamgha-i-Imtiaz", the youngest person and only pop singer to ever be honoured by this Presidential recognition of efforts to help the impoverished of Pakistani society.Shehzad's work is found to be commendable by all, even the Pakistani Prime Minister
Edited sentence: For his efforts, Shehzad was awarded the prestigious "Tamgha-i-Imtiaz", the youngest person and only pop singer to ever be honoured by this prestigious Presidential recognition of efforts to help the impoverished of Pakistani society.Shehzad's work  is found to be commendable by all, even the Pakistani Prime Minister