Original sentence: Many look at the launch of YGA as a sign that the queer youth movement is beginning to take shape.The magazine has also attracted recognition and  respectability and received awards, including the National Role Model Award from Equality Forum, a major gay organization.The magazine is respected as a resource by high school and public libraries, youth groups, counsellors and parents.YGA is a bimonthly magazine for LGBT youth launched in December 2004
Edited sentence: Many looked at the launch of YGA as a sign that the queer youth movement was beginning to take shape.The magazine attracted notability and received awards, including the National Role Model Award from Equality Forum, a major gay organization.The magazine became respected as a resource by high school and public libraries, youth groups, counsellors and parents.YGA was a bimonthly magazine for LGBT youth launched in December 2004