Original sentence: "Original Sin" is a song by Taylor Dayne, released on June, 26, 1994.A couple of years after Dayne's single was released, Meat Loaf recorded his own version for his CD Welcome to the Neighborhood.However it did chart in the UK Singles Chart, peaking at number 63.The photograph displayed on the cover of the single was shot by Alberto Tolot, taken on the set of its music video.The song was produced, written and arranged by Jim Steinman, the composer responsible for most of Meat Loaf's hits, Bonnie Tyler's "Total Eclipse of the Heart" and Celine Dion's "It's All Coming Back to Me Now".as a cassette and CD single, it did not chart on the Billboard Hot 100
Edited sentence: "Original Sin" is a single by Taylor Dayne, released on June, 26, 1994.A Couple of years after Taylor's single was released Meat Loaf recorded his own version for his CD "Welcome To The Neighborhood".Charts at a low #63.Here is a link to the music video.However it did chart in the U.Produced, Written and Arranged by Jim Steinman.The beautiful photograph displayed on the cover of the single was by Alberto Tolot, Taken on the set of its music video.The composer responsible for most of Meat Loaf's hits, Bonnie Tyler's"Total Eclipse of the Heart" and Celine Dion's "It's All Coming Back To Me Now".as a Cassette and CD single, it did not chart on theBillboard Hot 100