Original sentence: <ref>Radio Times 5-11 June, 2004 - Comments by Alison Graham: "There are lots of contributions from former big TV players and plenty of clips that will bring the memories [of 1960s television] tumbling back.Although the pilot was never screened and never progressed to a series, some television critics have subsequently and erroneously assumed that it was broadcast in the 1960s.And the truly wretched Mainly for Men.Big Breadwinner Hog, anyone.Christopher Mayhew taking LSD on a 1955 edition of Panorama.Churchill's People a 26 part dramatized history of Britain shot in a studio on video and screened on BBC 1 in primetime in the 1970s.TV Hell feature sequences with Deayton and Merton used to link talking heads by a collection of media personalities, an A-Z of TV Hell moments, a more serious commissioned documentary, and then screening of some of the original programmes.The early days of UK Breakfast Television and the downfall of TV-am.The first episode of the BBC soap Triangle was shown preceded by a documentary on the production with cast and crew.The night included 'Disastermind' a review of the worst performances on Mastermind'', and there were also humorous contributions from Victor Lewis-Smith.The original programme was never broadcast and this was the first time an excerpt had been screened.The resulting catastrophe described either curtailed a promising career or lead to a review of the commissioning process
Edited sentence: Although this was never screened and never progressed to a series, some television critics have subsequently and erroneously assumed that it was broadcast in the 1960s.Christopher Mayhew taking LSD on an unbroadcast 1955 edition of Panorama, the first time an excerpt had been screened.Churchill's People a 26 part dramatised history of Britain shot in a studio on video and screened on BBC 1 in primetime in the 1970s.Disastermind - a review of the worst performances on Mastermind.Storm in an Egg-Cupp - the early days of UK Breakfast Television and the downfall of TV-am.TV Hell featured sequences with Deayton and Merton used to link talking heads by a collection of media personalities, an A-Z of TV Hell moments, a more serious commissioned documentary, and then screening of some of the original programmes.The first episode of the BBC soap Triangle was shown preceded by a short documentary about the production, with interviews with cast and crew.The resulting catastrophe described either curtailed a promising career or led to a review of the commissioning process.There were also humorous contributions from Victor Lewis-Smith