Original sentence: Gross makes additional claims about the Kielce pogrom, in which 40 returning Jewish Holocaust survivors were murdered in the Polish town of Kielce,) arguing that the pogrom was initiated not by a mob, but by the police, and involved people from every walk of life except the highest level of government officials in the city (Fear, pp.He discusses the alienation, hostile atmosphere and violence experienced by some Jews and the inability of Polish elites to prevent it.In the English version of the book, Gross begins with a Chapter illustrating  the horrors suffered by Poland during World War II including the physical destruction of Poland's Jews, the initial partition of the country between Stalin and Hitler, the subsequent Nazi crimes and the Katyn massacre of Polish army officers by the Soviets; the Warsaw uprising of 1944, as well as the Soviet decision to postpone their advance until the German army had defeated the Polish Armia Krajowa, which resulted in the destruction of Warsaw "reduced to a pile of rubble
Edited sentence: Gross makes additional claims about Kielce pogrom (see article for a more balanced analysis) arguing that the pogrom was initiated not by a mob, but by the police, and involved people from every walk of life except the highest level of government officials in the city (Fear, pp.He discusses the alienation, hostile atmosphere and even violence experienced by some Jews and the inability of Polish elites to prevent it.In the English version of the book, Gross begins with a Chapter illustrating  the horrors suffered by Poland during World War II including the initial partition of the country between Stalin and Hitler, the subsequent Nazi crimes and the Katyn massacre of Polish army officers by the Soviets; the Warsaw uprising of 1944, as well as the Soviet decision to postpone their advance until the German army had defeated the Polish Armia Krajowa, which resulted in the destruction of Warsaw "reduced to a pile of rubble