Original sentence: It is possible that instead a small amount of jam was inserted under the crimp at one end of the pasty while it was still hot.There is a theory that Cornish pasties may have originally contained two courses, similar to the Bedfordshire clanger: meat and vegetables at one end, and fruit (such as apples, plums or cherries) at the other
Edited sentence: An alternative method is that a small amount of jam was inserted under the crimp at one end of the pasty while it was still hot.There is evidence that some Cornish pasties recipes produced a pasty with two courses, similar to the Bedfordshire clanger: meat and vegetables at one end, and fruit (such as apples, plums or cherries) at the other