Original sentence: Further critical comments on Windows Vista's performance have been voiced by, Adrian Kingsley-Hughes of ZDNet and Joe Wilcox of Microsoft Watch, who compared it to the short-lived Windows Millenium Edition, however Adrian Hughes also stated that Windows Vista is "fast, very reliable and actually quite nice to use"
Edited sentence: Further critical comment on Vista's performance has been voiced by comparing it to the short-lived Windows Millenium Edition