Original sentence: For instance, the network made false allegations that the Indian Army stormed a sacred Muslim shrine, the tomb of Hazrat Sheikh Noor-u-din Noorani in Charari Sharief, and only retracted the claim after strong criticism.The BBC is also criticised for covering conflicts in South Asia with an anti-India bias
Edited sentence: BBC is also criticised for covering conflicts in South Asia with an anti-India bias.For instance, The network made false allegations that the Indian Army stormed a sacred Muslim shrine, the tomb of Hazrat Sheikh Noor-u-din Noorani in Charari Sharief, and only retracted the claim after strong criticism