Original sentence: Fielder was called up to the Majors on June 13, 2005
Edited sentence: 227 with no home runs and only one RBI.As of June 23, Fielder was batting an abysmal.Fielder was called up to the Majors on June 13, 2005, and has not lived up to expectations thus far.Likely, a bit more time in AAA will do him some good