Original sentence: Although many other translations into English have been made, some of which are widely considered more accurate, many aesthetically prefer the King James Bible, whose meter is made to mimic the original Hebrew verse.He becomes a knight-errant wearing, appropriately, a burning pestle on his shield.In the story, a couple of grocers wrangle with professional actors to have their illiterate son play a leading role in a drama.It became the standard Bible of the Church of England, and some consider it one of the greatest literary works of all time.Seeking to win a princess's heart, the young man is ridiculed much in the way Don Quixote was, although Don Quixote had not yet been written
Edited sentence: Although a more faithful translation was made in 1970, and many after that, none has ever equalled the poetry of King James's, whose meter is made to mimic the original Hebrew verse.He becomes a knight errant wearing, most appropriately, a burning pestle on his shield.In the story, a couple of grocers wrangle with professional actors to have their illitterate son play a leading role in a drama.It became the standard Bible of the Church of England, and one of the greatest literary works of all times.Seeking to win a princess's heart, the young man is ridiculed much in the way Don Quixote will be in this future novel