Original sentence: He also unveiled a new EVH Fender Stratocaster guitar during the ceremony.Van Halen emerged from rehab and appeared publicly as an honorary official during the April 22, 2007 NASCAR event at Phoenix International Raceway
Edited sentence: Ed also unvieled a new EVH Fender Stratocaster guitar during the ceremony.Ed appeared publicly as an honorary official during the April 22, 2007 NASCAR event at Phoenix International Raceway.Ed emerged from rehab looking healthier than he had in quite some time.He appeared to look and act much more like he had in years past.Smiling and appearing happy, Ed took some hot laps with NASCAR driver Kurt Busch