Original sentence: Alexa Vega as Shilo Wallace: Shilo is a 17-year-old girl confined to her room due to the blood disorder she inherited from her mother.He is the one who poisoned Marni, in rage.Sarah Brightman as Magdalene "Blind Mag" Defoe: Mag, born blind, but given the ability to see by GeneCo at the price of having to sing for the GeneCo Genetic Opera.Terrance Zdunich as GraveRobber: GraveRobber is a Zydrate peddler, getting a cheap knock-off from dead bodies, with connections to Amber, sexually and as a dealer
Edited sentence: Alexa Vega as Shilo Wallace: Shilo is a 17-year-old girl confined to her room due to the belief of a blood disorder she inherited from her mother, which is only a poison from her sociopathic father who is too afraid of her leaving him.He is the one who poisoned Marni, in a jealous rage.Sarah Brightman as Magdalene "Blind Mag" Defoe: Mag, born blind, but given the ability to see by signing her life away in a contract to sing for GeneCo Genetic Opera.Terrance Zdunich as GraveRobber: GraveRobber is a Zydrate peddler, getting a cheap knock-off from dead bodies, with connections to Amber Sweet, sexually and as a dealer