Original sentence: KiA 3 August 1941 in a low level attack on gun positions at Calais with No 611 Squadron in a Spitfire V(W3257).KiA 8 October 1940 crashed in Ewell, Surrey during a landing approach after a patrol.KiA over Adisham, Kent.KiA over Kent, when piece of Dornier Do 17 he had destroyed hit his aircraft.Scotland's top ace
Edited sentence: KIA 3 August 1941 in a low level attack on gun positions at Calais with No 611 Squadron in a Spitfire V(W3257).KIA 8 October 1940 crashed in Ewell, Surrey during a landing approach after a patrol.KIA over Adisham, Kent.KIA over Kent, when piece of Dornier Do 17 he had destroyed hit his aircraft