Original sentence: James boasts a variety of athletic teams including tennis, basketball, football, soccer, many others.They most notably were defeated by Trinity in their 2006 football matchup 17-0, finishing the season with a record of 4-6.They regularly compete against their cross town rival Trinity Presbyterian School
Edited sentence: James boasts a variety of athletic teams.They finished the season with a record of 4-6.They most notably got thrashed by Trinity in this years football matchup 17-0.They regularly get beat down by their cross town rival Trinity Presbyterian School