Original sentence: He has come under harsh criticism from Bush administration opponents, primarily because of his support of anti-Communist movements and governments in Central America.John Dimitri Negroponte (born July 21, 1939) (IPA ) is a career diplomat currently serving as Director of National Intelligence for the United States.Negroponte served in the United States Foreign Service from 1960 to 1997 and was the US ambassador to the United Nations from September of 2001 until June 2004 and as US ambassador to Iraq from June 2004 to April 2005.See "controversy", below
Edited sentence: A career diplomat who served in the United States Foreign Service from 1960 to 1997, Negroponte served as the US ambassador to the United Nations from September of 2001 until June 2004 and as US ambassador to Iraq from June 2004 to April 2005.John Dimitri Negroponte (born July 21, 1939) (IPA ) is Director of National Intelligence for the United States