Original sentence: A YouGov poll of Conservative Party members for the Daily Telegraph published on [[11 November] 2005 found that 68% of party members who had returned their ballot papers had opted for Cameron, as opposed 32% for Davis.Cameron announced that he would be a candidate for the vacancy for the leadership of the Conservative Party on 29 September 2005.Davis gave a poor speech and he never recovered while Cameron never looked back.He gained support from many colleagues including Boris Johnson, Alan Duncan, Bernard Jenkin, Shadow Secretary of State for the Family and for Culture, Media & Sport Theresa May, Shadow Chancellor George Osborne, Shadow Defence Secretary and deputy Conservative leader Michael Ancram, Oliver Letwin and former Conservative leader William Hague.He won the hearts of the Conservative "blue rinse brigade" but the front runner David Davis helped Cameron a lot.His victory in the leadership election was announced on 6 December 2005 at which point he became Leader of the Conservative Party and HM Leader of the Opposition.The next stage was for the 300,000 Conservative party members to be polled on which of Cameron or Davis should be Conservative leader
Edited sentence: A YouGov poll of Conservative Party members for the Daily Telegraph published on the 11th November 2005 found that 68% of party members who had returned their ballot papers had opted for Cameron, as opposed 32% for Davis.Cameron announced that he would be a candidate for the vacancy for the leadership of the Conservative Party on the 29th September 2005.Davis gave an appaling speech and he never recovered while Cameron never looked back.He has gained support from many colleagues including Boris Johnson, Alan Duncan, Bernard Jenkin, Shadow Secretary of State for the Family and for Culture, Media & Sport Theresa May, Shadow Chancellor George Osborne, Shadow Defence Secretary and deputy Conservative leader Michael Ancram, Oliver Letwin and former Conservative leader William Hague.He won the hearts of the Conservative blue rinse brigade but the front runner David Davis helped Cameron a lot.His victory in the leadership election was announced on December 6, 2005 at which point he became Leader of the Conservative Party and HM Leader of the Opposition.The next stage is for the 300,000 Conservative party members to be polled on which of Cameron or Davis should be Conservative leader