Original sentence: In 1997, Lau was hired to illustrate the cover art for the [[Anodize]] [[electronic music]] album.In 1998, he began the ''Gardener'' [[comic strip]] in ''[[East Touch]]'' [[magazine]] for which he is best known.Lau began his <math>career when he gsmall galleries in Hong Kong, Lau began work as a window display designer, before finding employment in the [[advertising]] industry.The characters featured in this comic</math> strip were the basis for his first series of [[vinyl]] [[collectible]] figures
Edited sentence: In 1997, Lau was hired to illustrate the cover art for the Anodize electronic music album.In 1998, he began the Gardener comic strip in East Touch magazine for which he is best known.Lau began his career when he small galleries in Hong Kong, Lau began work as a window display designer, before finding employment in the advertising industry.The characters featured in this comic strip were the basis for his first series of vinyl collectible figures