Original sentence: Dalai Lama is the title given to an individual who is the spiritual and, sometimes, temporal leader of Tibetan Buddhists worldwide.Since 1959, the Dalai Lama has presided over the  Central Tibetan Administration from India.The Dalai Lama is often thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, and is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts more influence).Tibetans usually call the Dalai Lama by the epithets Gyalwa Rinpoche, meaning "Precious Victor", or Yeshe Norbu, meaning "Wish-fulfilling Jewel
Edited sentence: Dalai Lama is the title given to an individual who is the spiritual and temporal leader of Tibetan Buddhists worldwide, uniting religion and politics in a theocratic government.Many Tibetans call the Dalai Lama by the epithets Gyalwa Rinpoche, meaning "Precious Victor", or Yeshe Norbu, meaning "Wish-fulfilling Jewel.Since 1959, the 14th Dalai Lama has presided over the  Central Tibetan Administration from India.Some Tibetans however think of the current Dalai Lama as a "21st Century Dictator" for the autocratic power he wields over his people and his abuse of political power to his own religious ends.The Dalai Lama is often thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, and is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts more influence as can be seen for example in the 14th Dalai Lama's controversial current ban of a Gelug practice in the Tibetan exile community)