Original sentence: Also during the qualifing sesion, Austrian driver Karl Wendlinger had a major accident in the Nouvelle Chicane corner, after hitting the wall at almost 280 km/h.Wendlinger was in a coma for several weeks and several people taught this race actually terminated his F1 career
Edited sentence: Also during the qualifing sesion, the very promising Austrian driver Karl Wendlinger had a very serious accident in the Nouvelle Chicane corner, after hitting the wall with almost 280 km/h.The impact was so hard that Wendlinger was in a coma for many weeks and many people think this race actually terminated his F1 career