Original sentence: Susie, however, complicates this by also being a character in the story, albeit one who is dead.The Lovely Bones was notable when it was published for its use of an omniscient narrator, a device thought by some to be dead in most contemporary American fiction
Edited sentence: Consequently giving her insight as to the lives of her loved ones and even her murderer George Harvey.The Lovely Bones was notable when it was published for its intiriguing and original use of having Susie Salmon narrate from heaven in a first person point of view