Original sentence: Fans of Cornell's hockey teams are called the Lynah Faithful; they consider themselves to be among the loudest and most dedicated fans in the country making Lynah Rink, some believe, one of college hockey's most hostile arenas
Edited sentence: Fans of Cornell's hockey teams are called the Lynah Faithful; they are known for being among the loudest and most dedicated fans in the country making Lynah Rink one of college hockey's most hostile arenas