Original sentence: Tina Turner (born Anna Mae Bullock on November 26, 1939) is an American singer, dancer, entertainer, actress, songwriter, record producer, film producer, executive producer and occasional painter.Turner is known for her energetic stage presence , powerful vocals, spectacular rock concerts as well as for her long, well-proportioned legs.Turner's successs and popularity in Rock'n'Roll earned her the title, "The Queen of Rock & Roll", and she has won eleven Grammy Awards (sharing three)
Edited sentence: Tina Turner (born Anna Mae Bullock on November 26, 1939) is an American singer, dancer, entertainer, actress, songwriter, record producer, film producer, executive producer and occasional painter who is recognized as one of the most important female entertainers of the 20th century.Tina Turner's success, dominance and popularity in Rock'n'Roll earned her the title, "The Queen of Rock & Roll", and she has won eleven Grammy Awards (sharing three).Turner is known worldwide for her overpowering and energetic stage presence , powerful vocals, spectacular Rock concerts as well as for her long, well-proportioned legs which are considered the most famous in show business