Original sentence: Dempsey was a schoolboy footballer and during his time in Terenure College he helped the school to a Senior Cup trophy.Girvan started his rugby career at Terenure College and played full back for Terenure College RFC.Most recently he helped Ireland to a 2006 Triple Crown victory in Ireland's 28-24 victory over England
Edited sentence: After the final (a match in which he sprinted home to score a try that will live long in the memory) Girvan was quoted as saying, "It was a privilege to attend a school of the quality of Terenure, God bless".Although not renowned for his attacking abilities, Dempsey has improved this facet of his game immeasurably under the coaching of Micahel Cheika and David Knox.Dempsey was an outstanding schoolboy footballer and during his time in Terenure College he helped the school to a Senior Cup trophy.Girvan is also known as 'Girve the Swerve', 'The Givanator', 'The Swirve' or simply 'The Swerve' and is a favourite of Leinster supporters at their home ground in Donnybrook.He is admired for his composure under the high ball and bravery in defence.He is often confused with a Lamont because of his bountiful head of hair, scintillating pace and great recycling skills.However, since John's career overlapped somewhat with Dempsey's birth, historians consider this unlikely.It is rumoured that Girvan Dempsey was named after another rugby great- legendary Welsh fly half Girvan John, also know as "the King".Most believe that his prescient parents, anticpating the rugby colossus their son would become, picked a name that would rhyme with the verb for changing direction at high velocity.Most recently he helped Ireland to a 2006 Triple Crown victory with a valuable impact off the bench in Ireland's 28-24 victory over England.The Swerve started his rugby career at Terenure College and played full back for Terenure College RFC.The man has often said that his proudest day was being asked to open the Rathgar Tennis Club Recycling Centre; it stands for everything that's right about Terenure and post-Haughey Ireland in general