Original sentence: " Critics, however, state evidence suggests otherwise.However, the Church has faced allegations to be a commercial enterprise that harasses its critics and exploits its members, and harsh criticism has come from the media since the 1960s.Hubbard had official control of the Church only until 1966, when this function was transferred to a group of executives
Edited sentence: " Critics, however, state evidence suggests otherwise given that scientology is a cult not a religion.However, the cult has faced allegations to be a commercial enterprise that harasses its critics and exploits its members, and harsh criticism has come from the media since the 1960s.Hubbard had official control of the cult only until 1966, when this function was transferred to a group of executives