Original sentence: There is some speculation that the unplesantly-described marriage in the manuscript may be an attempt by Phil to sort out his own faltering second marriage to Kleo Apostolides, 1950-1958
Edited sentence: As with the previous novel, Gather Yourselves Together, this book too was a disorganized ramble and over-long.This is another early book before the author had really nailed down his style and focus.Though all of his books tended to have rather intriguingly mundane "slice of life" qualities to them, this one is more mundane than most, and there is some speculation that the unplesantly-described marriage in the manuscript may be an attempt by Phil to sort out his own faltering second marriage to Kleo Apostolides, 1950-1958