Original sentence: Inspired by Japanese ramen, Chinese mein, and Filipino pancit, saimin was developed during Hawaii's plantation era.Saimin is a noodle soup dish developed in China and developed by different immigrant groups in Hawaii
Edited sentence: Inspired by Japanese ramen, Chinese mein, and Filipino pancit, saimin was improved during Hawaii's plantation era.Saimin is a noodle soup dish developed in China and improved by different immigrant groups in Hawaii