Original sentence: In 2000 Hagelin made a bid to create an independent coalition between the Natural Law and Reform political parties, that failed when Patrick Buchanan took control of the Reform Party.In 2000, an organization called Tracenet published a exposé on the party in which it accused Hagelin of being a crackpot fraud and that far from being a secular, coalition building, center-left party, the Natural Law Party was secretly being run by Hindu fundamentalists that wanted to turn America into some type of theocratic dicatatorship
Edited sentence: In 2000 Hagelin made a bid to create an independent coalition between the Natural Law and Reform political parties, that failed when the xenophobic and reactionary Patrick Buchanan led his own followers to take control of the Reform Party.In 2000, an organization called Tracenet published a exposé on the party in which it accused Hagelin of being a crackpot fraud and that far from being a secular, coalition building, center-left party, the Natural Law Party was secretly being run by Hindu fundamentalists that wanted to turn America into some type of theocratic