Original sentence: 31.4.As of 9 May 2009.Foyle was born on 2 May 1963 in Salisbury, Wiltshire, where he made his name in local football, before Football League referee Tony Glasson recommended him to Lawrie McMenemy, manager of Southampton
Edited sentence: 30.6.As of 8 August 2009.Foyle was born in Salisbury, Wiltshire, where he made his name in local football, before Football League referee Tony Glasson recommended him to Lawrie McMenemy, manager of Southampton