Original sentence: Michael Perbeck and Danny Mapes became the most successful team in Kansas history earning 3 bids  to the Tournament of Champions at the quarterfinals of the Greenhill, Glenbrook's, and semifinals of the Dowling Catholic Tournaments in the 2007-08 Season
Edited sentence: Patrick Kennedy and Danielle Lipsman placed second in the State Tournament that year.Seniors Michael Perbeck and Danny Mapes became the most successful team in Kansas history earning 3 bids  to the Tournament of Champions at the quarterfinals of the Greenhill, Glenbrook's, and semifinals of the Dowling Catholic Tournaments in the 2007-08 Season