Original sentence: Glen Parva is a suburb of southern Leicester.In the surrounding area there is also a beauticians and another off licence.Recently the memorial hall has been extended and modernised along with the park facilities.The 62nd Scouts are renowned in the area as one of the best scout troops and this is thanks to great leadership over the years.The park has an astroturf pitch with a Football goal and basketball hoop located at opposite ends
Edited sentence: Glen Parva () is a suburb of southern Leicester.In the surrounding area there is also a beauticians and another off license.Recently the memorial hall has been extended and modernized along with the park facilities.The 62nd Scouts are apparently renowned in the area as one of the supposedly best scout troops and this is thanks to dubious great leadership over the years.The park has an Astroturf pitch with a Football goal and basketball hoop located at opposite ends