Original sentence: Joggers' Park is a seaside jogging track where joggers of Bandra, Mumbai congregate.The little park is right next to the Otter's Club, another recreation place for Bandra denizens, was where Mumbai's first laughing club was launched
Edited sentence: Joggers' Park is a little seaside jogging track where joggers of Bandra, Mumbai congregate.The pretty little park is right next to the Otter's Club, another recreation place for Bandra denizens, was where Mumbai's first laughing club was launched