Original sentence: It has also been noted that characters do unrealistic, clichéd things, like shedding a single tear or reflecting, "When he would return, he knew not.The book's most frequent criticism is that it uses far too many clichés.There has been much criticism of Eragon, regarding everything from word usage to the marketing techniques (critics deride the labelling of the author as a "prodigy" or "wunderkind")
Edited sentence: As far as technical writing goes, it is a fairly smooth novel.It is also noted that characters do unrealistic, cliché things; always crying a single tear or reflecting, "When he would return, he knew not.It is said that the most frequent criticism of the book is that it uses far too many clichés.There has been much criticism of Eragon, regarding everything from word usage to the marketing techniques