Original sentence: Gore also suggests the average citizen must be proactive in "restoring democracy".He expresses hopes that the medium of the Internet will supersede television and what he argues is its inherent bias, creating a "marketplace of ideas" that has not been present since the replacement of the printed word with mass media.In the book, Gore argues that there is a trend in U
Edited sentence: Gore also establishes that the average citizen must be proactive in "restoring democracy".He expresses hopes that the medium of the Internet will supersede Television and its inherent bias, creating a "marketplace of ideas" that has not been present since the replacement of the printed word with mass media.In the book, Gore writes that there is a trend in U