Original sentence: The PHS is a polemical compilation of Marxist oppressor/oppressed hypothesis-as-fact and anti-American/European premise, exploiting in particular racial and class envy.This idea later was translated into "community control" and led to school decentralization in New York, Detroit, San Diego, Parma, China, the Soviet Union, Cuba and other places, with mixed results
Edited sentence: The Port Huron Statement is a polemical compilation of Marxist oppressor/oppressed hypothesis-as-fact and anti-American/European premise, exploiting in particular racial and class envy.This idea later was translated into "community control" and led to school decentralization in New York, Detroit, San Diego, Parma, and other places, with mixed results.[[ The Port Huron Statement at 40, published in The Nation, August 5, 2002