Original sentence: However, it has now been discovered that Guckert attended a February 28, 2003 press conference and there asked a question of McClellan's predecessor, Ari Fleischer, before he had ever written an article, attended the two-day journalism seminar, been associated with any kind of news organization at all (Talon News had not yet been created), and while he was still actively advertising his services as a gay prostitute on several Web sites.In Gannon's case, the timing has led to charges that Talon News was created specifically to give Gannon a news organization that he could ostensibly represent, to justify his continuing to work at the White House.Indeed, the Augusta Free Press reported to that its acquisition of a single one-day pass was a two-week process
Edited sentence: However, it has now been discovered that Guckert attended a February 28, 2003 press conference and there asked a question of McClellan's predescessor Ari Fleischer before he had ever written an article, attended the two day journalism seminar, been associated with any kind of news organization at all (Talon News had not yet been created), and while he was still actively advertising his services as a gay prostitute on several Web sites.Indeed, the Augusta Free Press reported to Daily Kos  that acquiring a one-day pass was a two week process for them.The timing might suggest that Talon News was created specifically to give Jeff Gannon a news organization to ostensibly represent while continuing to work at the White House