Original sentence: Im Tirtzu is mostly known for its campaign against the  New Israel Fund and against alleged bias in university curriculum.Its name is based on a phrase coined by Theodor Herzl – "אם תרצו, אין זו אגדה" or "If you will it, it is no dream.The group has been described by some as belonging to the ultra-right, but describes itself as centrist.The group's stated goal is to strengthen and promote "Zionist values" throughout Israel, especially on college campuses
Edited sentence: Im Tirtzu is mostly known for its campaign encouraging zionist education and resisting academic bias.Its name is based on a phrase coined by Theodor Herzl – "אם תרצו, אין זו אגדה" or "If you will it, it is not a dream.The group gained publicity following its campaign against the New Israel Fund   and against bias in university curriculum.The group is centrist but has been described by some of its opposers as belonging to the ultra-right,.The group's goal is to strengthen and promote "Zionist values" throughout Israel, especially on college campuses