Original sentence: Cloud Atlas is the third novel by British author David Mitchell.Published in 2004, the fantastical speculative fiction book consists of six interconnected nested stories that take the reader from the remote South Pacific in the nineteenth century to a distant post-apocalyptic future
Edited sentence: Cloud Atlas is the innovative third novel by British author David Mitchell.Published in 2004, the fantastical speculative fiction book consists of six interconnected nested stories across time and space that take the reader from the remote South Pacific in the nineteenth century past to a distant post-apocalyptic future Hawaii, and one story influences the others