Original sentence: Final Fantasy is a very popular series of role-playing video games produced by Square (aka Squaresoft), now Square Enix.Games in the Final Fantasy series have been featured on the NES, MSX, SNES, Playstation, Wonderswan Color, Playstation 2, PC, Game Boy Advance, and cellular phone.Many critics stated that Final Fantasy X was centered solely on graphics, complaining mainly about the storyline and gameplay.The Final Fantasy video game franchise originated in Japan in 1987 and was brought over to North America in 1990 and to Europe in 1998
Edited sentence: Final Fantasy is a very popular and highly addictive series of role-playing video games produced by Square (aka Squaresoft), now Square Enix.It has been grownly very rapidly in popularity.It has graced the NES, MSX, SNES, Playstation, Wonderswan Color, Playstation 2, PC, Game Boy Advance, and cellular phone.Many critics assumed that Final Fantasy X was centered solely on graphics, complaining mainly about the storyline and gameplay.Many fans of the Final Fantasy series have been passing their Final Fantasy fandom onto other video game players.The Final Fantasy video game franchise originated in Japan in 1987 and brought over to North America in 1990 and to Europe in 1998