Original sentence: Warren said that Native American ancestry was a part of her family folklore, a statement echoed by her three siblings and several of her cousins (although other cousins did not concur), and that she had listed her Native American heritage in the law directory in hopes of meeting people of a similar background.Warren said that she was unaware that Harvard had been promoting her listed Native American heritage until she read about it in a newspaper
Edited sentence: Warren said that her proclaimed Native American ancestry was a part of her family folklore, a statement echoed by her three siblings and several of her cousins (although other cousins did not concur), and that she had listed her Native American heritage in the law directory in hopes of meeting people of a similar background.Warren said that she was unaware that Harvard had been promoting her self-proclaimed Native American heritage until she read about it in a newspaper