Original sentence: With the end of hostilities the Burma Army presence has increased considerably, along with allegations of atrocities against the civilian population, including forced labor and rape
Edited sentence: Burmese military commanders treat the local population as if the state were a war zone.Consequently civilians suffer wartime brutality including forced labor and rape.The suffering of the Kachin people continue.....With the end of hostilities the Burma Army presence has—instead of falling—increased considerably