Original sentence: Other branches of tourism are provided by the bird reserve on the Lac du Der Chantecoq and the fishing lakes nearby.The Parc Régional de la Montagne de Reims is a major area of country recreation
Edited sentence: Other branches of tourism are provided by the bird reserve on the Lake Der-Chantecoq and the fishing lakes nearby.The Parc Naturel Régional de la Montagne de Reims is a major area of country recreation