Original sentence: Lily Cole (born May 19, 1988) is an English model and actress.She gained a place to read Social and Political Sciences at King's College, Cambridge, but deferred entry until 2007 and then 2008
Edited sentence: Lily Cole (born May 19, 1988) is an English supermodel and actress.She gained a place to read Social and Political Sciences at King's College, Cambridge, but deferred entry until 2007  and then 2008