Original sentence: Colonel I Gusti Ngurah Rai, by then 29 years old, finally rallied his forces in east Bali at Marga Rana, where they made a suicide attack on the heavily armed Dutch.Gusti Ngurah Rai, formed a Balinese 'freedom army'.On 20 November 1946, the Battle of Marga was fought in Tabanan in central Bali.The Balinese battalion was entirely wiped out, breaking the last thread of Balinese military resistance
Edited sentence: Colonel I Gusti Ngurah Rai, by then 29 years old, rallied his forces in east Bali at Marga Rana, where they were trapped by heavily armed Dutch troops.On 20 November 1946, in the Battle of Marga, the Balinese battalion was entirely wiped out, breaking the last thread of Balinese military resistance.One Balinese, Colonel Gusti Ngurah Rai, formed a Balinese 'freedom army'