Original sentence: Kamma is a 'upper' caste (community) mainly from the state Andhra Pradesh (AP) in southern India.Kammas are an enterprising and hardworking community, considered as one of the prosperous communities in Andhra Pradesh.The fertile rural lands fell under the ownership of adept farmers from this caste, gave them control over the villages.These Kammas served the kings with loyalty and later evolved into chieftains in their armies
Edited sentence: Kamma is a dominant 'upper' caste (community) mainly from the state Andhra Pradesh (AP) in southern India.Kammas are an enterprising and hardworking community, considered the most prosperous community in Andhra Pradesh.Renuka Chowdhary a Post-Graduate in Industrial Psychology took up Politics and Social Work as her profession.She has held a number of significant positions like: Member, Rajya Sabha (two terms) Chief Whip, Telugu Desam Parliamentary Party, Rajya Sabha (1986-98); Union Minister of State, Health and Family Welfare (1997-98); Elected to 13th Lok Sabha (1999); Union Minister of State, Health and Family Welfare (1997-98); Member, Committee on Finance (1999-2000) and Member, Committee on the Empowerment of Women (2000-2001).The fertile rural lands were under the ownership of adept farmers from this caste, which gave them control over the villages.These Kammas served as kings with and also chieftains in the armies.Tourism minister(2004---)