Original sentence: Harrison was criticized more than once for his seemingly excessive devotion to mixture stops (the organ at the First Church of Christ, Scientist in Boston being the most noteworthy example)
Edited sentence: "  Harrison was criticized more than once for his seemingly excessive devotion to mixture stops (the organ at the First Church of Christ, Scientist in Boston being the most noteworthy example).Many disliked what Professor Robert Baker of Yale called his "brassy clang