Original sentence: As a gesture of appreciation and support for her efforts, Stacy Davies of California began, via email, the "Barbara Boxer Rose Campaign", wherein people collaborated to buy Senator Boxer roses.Attorney General Alberto Gonzalez, who had drawn fire for his involvement in U.During the confirmation hearing for Condoleezza Rice, Boxer challenged the Secretary of State nominee to admit to mistakes allegedly made by the Bush administration in leading the U.The campaign drew an impressive response, and 4,500 roses were sent en masse to Senator Boxer's office on Valentine's Day, 2005.into the 2003 invasion of Iraq.policies condoning torture
Edited sentence: As a gesture of appreciation and support for her efforts, Stacy Davies of California began, via email,  the "Barbara Boxer Rose Campaign", wherein people collaborated to buy Senator Boxer roses.Attorney General Alberto Gonzalez, who in written orders, condoned torture during his time as the White House Counsel.During the  Secretary of State hearing, she challenged  Condoleezza Rice to admit to mistakes allegedly made by the Bush administration in leading the U.The campaign drew an impressive response, and 4,500 roses were sent en masse to Senator Boxer's office on Valentine's day, 2005.into the Iraq War