Original sentence: However, the future of the tree cannot yet be forecast.However, this volume computation did not take into consideration a 115 ft (35 m) tall, 10 ft (3 m) diameter cavity, accessible only by a hole situated 190 ft (58 m) above the ground.In September 2003, a lightning-caused fire damaged the crown of the tree.In effect, the Washington tree is no longer one of the top ten largest Giant Sequoias, though the National Park Service maintains that it, still is due to current documentation policy (trees are calculated as if they did not suffer damage).It could die soon or it might easily live several more decades or centuries.Many Sequoias have survived with less foliage.See also: List of famous trees.The Washington Tree is a Giant Sequoia tree in the Giant Forest grove (), Tulare County, California,  within Sequoia National Park.The Washington tree is not necessarily dying.The Washington tree was previously considered the second largest tree in the world with a volume of 47,850 cubic feet (1355 m³), being 254.7 ft (77.63 m) high and 101.1 ft (30.82 m) in circumference.The tree still has half a dozen significant branches.Whether this perception will be maintained is uncertain at this point
Edited sentence: However, this volume computation was flawed, in that there was a 115 ft (35 m) tall, 10 ft (3 m) diameter cavity, accessible only by a hole situated 190 ft (58 m) above the ground.In effect, the Washington tree is no longer one of the top ten largest giant sequioas, though the Park Service maintains that it still is due to a bureaucratic loophole (the trees are calculated as if they did not suffer damage).In the September 2003, a lightning-caused fire damaged the crown of the tree.See also List of famous trees.The Washington tree is a Giant sequoia tree in Sequoia National Park.The Washington tree was previously considered the second largest tree in the world by volume, being 254.7 ft (77.63 m) high and 101.1 ft (30.82 m) in circumference.Whether this fiction will be maintained is uncertain at this point