Original sentence: Sir Peter is at number 8 for 2006.While his fortune has been rising over the last few years through the rigorous aquisition of European IT companies, his position on the rich list ladder has gradually slipped from a peak of 61st in 2003
Edited sentence: Nepatist Sir Peter is at number 8 for 2006.While his fortune has been rising over the last few years through the rigorous aquisition of poorly performing European IT companies, his position on the rich list ladder has gradually slipped from a peak of 61st in 2003