Original sentence: 'Veronica' calls on D-I-Y workmates Fiona and Pete to locate Danny but they are perplexed by her motives and a visit to a Missing Persons office leads to a run-in with the cops.Danny's visit to Jay to explain matters is just as useless but Fiona and Pete hit on a random clue, which could help.Danny, still inhabiting Veronica's body, does not impress editor Bill with the new socialist offerings and the real Veronica is ejected from the office and rejected by best friend Siobhan because she looks like Danny.It gets worse when the false Veronica, drunk on champagne, denounces a fashion show and reveals Siobhan's boyfriend's infidelity.Jay's desire for sex with his supposed beloved is not reciprocated
Edited sentence: 'Danny' fails to convince Siobhan that she is really Veronica and starts watching 'Veronica'.Back at the flat, a drunk, confused and miserable Danny allows Jay to seduce him.Danny is struggling at pulling off being 'Veronica' and her work at the paper and discovers Veronica may not have been as happy as she seemed.Danny misses Veronica at the police station so he registers himself on a missing persons website.Fiona and 'Veronica' seem to be getting on well but he can't tell her that she is really Danny.He goes to see Jay but he is freaked out by all the personal details 'Danny' knows and has her arrested.He is given one last chance at a fashion show where he gets drunk and causes a scene by attacking fashion and women.He tells Veronica's friend Siobhan she is weak for staying with her unfaithful boyfriend Ali, (whom he knows Veronica was having an affair with).Pete and Fiona go to see the criminal Barry, whose van Danny used for the theft, and discover another link to the accident with the powerlines.Pete makes a pass at Fiona but she rebuffs him.Pete still suspicious of 'Veronica' confronts her and then goes to the police.The police question 'Veronica' at work over Danny's disappearance and she tells the police that they had him this morning but let him go