Original sentence: Kellogg's used WGC railway station for the shooting of the "Train Buffet Car" corn flakes commercial (before the Howard Centre was built).Panshanger Aerodrome was used in many films, the French airfield that was evacuated by the RAF near the beggining of "The Battle of Britain" was Panshanger and Danny LaRue starred in a film called "Our Girl Fred" that was fillmed at Panhanger amongst others.The former gravel pit at the junction of Cole Green Lane and Black Fann Road/Birchall Lane was used by local residents Gerry & Sylvia Anderson on many occasions and often during filming of the TV series "UFO" as the gravel pit "looked like" the terrain of a differnt planet.The town's QE2 hospital was also used for the initial series of Holby City by the BBC for the external shots of Holby City Hospital
Edited sentence: Kellogg's used WGC railway station for the shooting of the "Train Buffet Car" cornflakes commercial (before the Howard Centre was built).Panshanger Aerodrome was used in many films; the French airfield that was evacuated by the RAF near the beginning of "The Battle of Britain" was Panshanger and Danny LaRue starred in a film called "Our Girl Fred" that was filmed at Panhanger amongst others.The former gravel pit at the junction of Cole Green Lane and Black Fann Road/Birchall Lane was used by local residents Gerry & Sylvia Anderson on many occasions and often during filming of the TV series "UFO" as the gravel pit "looked like" the terrain of another planet.The town's QE2 hospital was also used by the BBC for the external shots of Holby City Hospital in the initial series of Holby City