Original sentence: After shakedown in Cuban and Haitian waters from 25 November-25 December, the carrier departed Mayport, Florida for Korea on 26 April 1953 via the Red Sea, Indian Ocean, and China Sea, becoming the largest ship to transit the Suez Canal.Lake Champlain was mothballed at Norfolk on 17 February 1947
Edited sentence: A shakedown cruise in Cuban and Haitian waters lasted from 25 November-25 December.Lake Champlain became the largest ship to date to transit the Suez Canal.Lake Champlain was laid up in the reserve fleet at Norfolk on 17 February 1947.The carrier departed Mayport, Florida for Korea on 26 April 1953 via the Red Sea, Indian Ocean, and China Sea