Original sentence: Bernhard Cossmann, author of many original works and of diverse “Phantasien” on motifs from opera (such as Freischutz, Euryanthe, etc.However, in 1878 Cossmann helped found the Hoch Conservatory in Frankfurt, where he occupied the post of teacher of cello.In 1866 Cossmann was appointed professor of cello studies at the Moscow Conservatory.In 1890 Bernhard Cossmann adapted the Erlkönig from Schubert for solo cello for the exclusive use of his student Heinrich Kiefer.Thüringen Volkslied”,), had formerly dedicated his Fünf Neue Concert Etuden to Heinrich Kiefer
Edited sentence: Bernhard Cossmann, author of many original works and of diverse “Phantasien” on motifs from operas (such as Freischutz, Euryanthe, etc.However, in 1878, Cossmann helped found the Hoch Conservatory in Frankfurt, where he occupied the post of teacher of cello.In 1866, Cossmann was appointed professor of cello studies at the Moscow Conservatory.In 1890 Cossmann adapted the Erlkönig from Franz Schubert for solo cello for the exclusive use of his student Heinrich Kiefer.Thüringen Volkslied”), had formerly dedicated his Fünf Neue Concert Etuden to Heinrich Kiefer