Original sentence: All the devotees bound for the holy shrine of Shirdi Sai Baba pass from Khardi further enhancing its importance.Dahigaon is a village, near Khardi, on the Khardi to Vaitarana road, which is famous for lotus flowers and a lake with two temples of Gavdevi and Lord Shiva on its bank.Khardi is a flourishing township which has a national bank, hospital, post office, petrol pump, restaurants, a school, a police station, a Jain Temple, and a market.This village is also famous for the Tansa reserved forest.Three large fresh water bodies surrounding Khardi help keep temperatures down thus bringing much relief.distance)... Khardi offers refuge particularly in the post monsoon months up to onset of summer (May–June)
Edited sentence: All the devotees bound for holy shrine of Shirdi Sai Baba pass from Khardi further enhancing its importance.Dahigaon is a village, near Khardi, on the Khardi to Vaitarana road, which is famous for beautiful lotus flowers and a lake with two beautiful temples of Gavdevi and Lord Shiva on its bank.Khardi is a flourishing township which boasts of nationalized bank, hospital, jain temple, post office, petrol pump, restaurants,.This village is also famous for the lush green forest, the Tansa reserved forest.Three Large fresh water bodies surrounding Khardi help keep temperatures down thus bringing much relief.distance)... Khardi offers much needed respite particularly post monsoon months up to onset of summer (May–June) are breathtakingly beautiful.school, police station, a beautiful Jain Temple, lively market among others