Original sentence: Seven Palestinian civilians were killed by the Israelis in the attack; one man, two women and three children.The Beit Jala Raid was an Israeli attack on Beit Jala, a Palestinian Christian town on the border between Jordan and Israel (today part of the Palestinian territories) on January 6, 1952
Edited sentence: Seven Palestinian civilians were killed in the attack.The Beit Jala Raid was an Israeli attack on Beit Jala, a Palestinian town on the border between Jordan and Israel (today part of the Palestinian territories) on January 6, 1952