Original sentence: Sunil Chhetri was born in New Delhi to parents of Nepalese origin; KB Chhetri, a retired army personnel, and Sushila Chhetri, a former member of the Nepal women's football team
Edited sentence: Sunil Chhetri was born in New Delhi to parents of Nepalese origin; KB Chhetri, a retired army officer, and Sushila Chhetri, a former member of the Nepal women's football team