Original sentence: Gerald Morse (radiocall = Ghost Rider, retired in 1979) Batallion commander, and not an actual member of the team.It did not perform well with critics or a wider audience and received various criticisms, and sales of the book have languished.Jim Gardner (awarded the Medal of Honor, posthumously) Died in service, before any controversial events mentioned above.My Lai Massacre.Rion Causey (medic).The Blade reported that the Army investigated the actions of Tiger Force for four and a half years, from 1971 to 1975, and that the Army substantiated many of the allegations of war crimes, developing probable cause, but filed no charges.Their history is notable among other contemporary military units of the time.While the Army gave credence to these reports refuting some of the more outrageous claims, invesitgative reporters from the "Toledo Blade" spent a significant amount of time and effort investigating various claims of wrongs committed.sl:Tiger Force
Edited sentence: Filled with inaccuracies, and artistic license reminiscent of the cheapest novels, and in spite of desperate personal appearences by the author, sales of the book have languished.Gerald Morse (radiocall = Ghost Rider, retired in 1979) Batalion commander, and not an actual member of the team.Jim Gardner (awarded the Medal of Honor, posthumously) Died far earlier than the alleged events.Rion Causey (medic) (now a nuclear engineer in California).The  reported that the Army investigated the actions of Tiger Force for four and a half years, from 1971 to 1975, and that the Army substantiated many of the allegations of war crimes, developing probable cause, but filed no charges.Their history is one of Honor, Courage, Diligence, and Valor.While the Army gave creedance to these reports refuting some of the more outrageous claims, invesitgative reporters from the "Toledo Blade", in an apparent effort to obtain a hitherto unreachable goal of a Pulitzer Prize, sensationalized the entire 7 months (out of many years) period.sl:Tiger Force Tiger Force Recon Web Site