Original sentence: " Many Christian conservatives suggest such claims are overblown and hyperbolic.Bush, critics of the Dominionist idea have sometimes claimed the trend is representative of all Christians of a Republican or politically conservative orientation.These dominionists generally insist that "America is a Christian Nation," and that therefore Christians need to re-assert control over political and cultural institutions.Yet many stop short of articulating a position that could be called theocratic
Edited sentence: Bush, American secularists primarily within the Democratic party have siezed on the Dominionist idea as representative of all Christians of a Republican or politically conservative orientation.These dominionists generally insist that because the American populus is over 80% Christian that therefore Christians should have representation in America's political and cultural institutions