Original sentence: In addition to the full-tuition scholarship, students can obtain additional grants from Olin.The latter sum is supposed to be obtained through part-time and summer work.These grants are paid when it is determined that the student in need of over $2500
Edited sentence: As a result, in addition to the full-tuition scholarship, students determined to have additional financial need (beyond the scholarship and $2500 that the student can obtain through part-time and summer work) have the remaining need paid in the form of additional grants.Olin College attempts to ensure that no accepted student is prevented from attending due to financial obstacles