Original sentence: " Since the "public story" is still that Rosemary was retarded, the "lack of support for mental illness is part of a total lifelong family denial of what was really so.At age 16 she wrote to her father "I would do anything to make you so happy.Brown called the suppression of the truth "the biggest mental health cover-up in history.… According to a review in the American Journal of Psychiatry, of all reports of lobotomies ever done, the procedure was only used for psychiatric illness".… None of the papers listed any of the patient as being mentally retarded.… Some of us knew the secret and kept it secret …"
Edited sentence: At age 16 she wrote to her father, "I would do anything to make you so happy.Brown called the suppression of the truth "the biggest mental health cover-up in history".Since the "public story" is still that Rosemary was retarded, the "lack of support for mental illness is part of a total lifelong family denial of what was really so.… According to a review in the American Journal of Psychiatry, of all reports of lobotomies ever done, the procedure was only used for psychiatric illness.… None of the papers listed any of the patients as being mentally retarded.… Some of us knew the secret and kept it secret