Original sentence: Among its notable features, "Train Kept A'Rollin'" displayed a ground-breaking fuzzed guitar; Poore note that this was an accidental achievement guitarist Burlison would later repeat, stumbled upon when a tube in his amplifier came loose
Edited sentence: Among its notable features, "Train Kept A'Rollin'" displayed a ground-breaking fuzzed guitar.The distorted sound that resulted proved so popular that Burlison intentionally repeated it in future performance.This resulted from an accident, when a valve in the amplifier of guitarist Burlison came loose during the drive to the studio