Original sentence: ARQuake was developed as part of an Honours degree by Benjamin Close, John Donaghue, John Squires & Philip DeBondi under the supervision of Bruce Thomas in the year 2000.ARQuake was the first fully working Augmented Reality game created for outdoor use.However, it has generated some interest in the Augmented Reality world.The system uses GPS, a magnetic compass, a custom made gun controller and a standard laptop
Edited sentence: Developed as part of an Honours degree by Benjamin Close, John Donaghue, John Squires & Philip DeBondi under the supervision of Bruce Thomas in the year 2000, the ARQuake phenomenon has spread throughout the world.However, it has created a large buzz in the Augmented Reality world with the following Papers being created.Imagine being able to run around, peer around the corner of building only to see a monster shooting back.This is the ability that ARQuake provides.Using GPS, a magnetic compass, a custom made gun controller and a standard laptop; ARQuake was the first fully working Augmented Reality game created for outdoors