Original sentence: Stephanie Zacharek, writing for Salon.com said that with regard to issues of sexual orientation and homophobia, Babbit is "preaching to the converted"
Edited sentence: Although the filmmakers intended But I'm a Cheerleader to make people think about difficult issues such as sexual orientation and homophobia, Stephanie Zacharek, writing for Salon.com argued that Babbit is "preaching to the converted"