Original sentence: The Waugoshance Point lake coast is actually an archipelago containing not only the headland proper that is attached to the mainland, called Waugoshance Point, but also two sizable uninhabited islands, Temperance Island and Waugoshance Island, that extend still further out into Lake Michigan.Waugoshance Point and its associated islands are an exceptionally dangerous feature for sailing vessels and small craft in northern Lake Michigan
Edited sentence: The Waugoshance Point lake coast is actually an archipelago containing not only the headland proper that is attached to the mainland, called Waugoshance Point, but also two sizable uninhabited islands, Temperance Island and Waugoshance Island, that extend still further westward into Lake Michigan.Waugoshance Point and its associated islands and shoals are an exceptionally dangerous feature for sailing vessels and small craft in northern Lake Michigan