Original sentence: (1999:176)  While this kind of opinion is not uncommon, some veterans of the Goa scene will tell you that the music is catered to serve as jumping off point for driving human consciousness, as mentioned in the film Liquid Crystal Vision
Edited sentence: (1999:176)  While this kind of opinion is not uncommon among clubbers and partygoers that have never attended a Goa Trance festival, veterans of the Goa scene will tell you that the music is catered to serve as jumping off point for driving human consciousness, as mentioned in the film Liquid Crystal Vision