Original sentence: Hole next embarked on a tour opening for Nine Inch Nails.Love met Kurt Cobain at the Satyricon club in Portland in 1991, where the two reportedly became more intimately acquainted.Love then spent her childhood with her mother in Oregon, and attended various schools including a boarding school in Nelson, New Zealand.She interrupted the note frequently to express her anger and sorrow
Edited sentence: Hole next embarked on a tour opening for Nine Inch Nails, where Love received a death threat before the first show began.Love met Kurt Cobain at the Satyricon club in Portland in 1991, where the two reportedly became more intimately acquainted when they got in a verbal argument and eventually wrestled each other to the ground beside a jukebox.Love then spent her childhood with her mother as she wandered through three husbands and as many hippie communes in Oregon, and various schools including a boarding school in Nelson, New Zealand.On February 4, 2004, People magazine speculated Love had "one week to live.She interrupted the note frequently to express her anger and sorrow ("Kurt, the worst crime I can think of is for you to just continue being a rock star when you fucking hate it, just fucking stop"), even inciting the crowd to call him an "asshole".When advised against playing, Love responded "it's from a girl, it's bullshit...besides, if someone were to shoot me onstage, what a nice footnote to rock'n'roll history