Original sentence: In the course of cleaning up the violent nightclub Dalton dismisses several unruly and corrupt employees, including Pat McGurn (John Doe), the bartender and Wesley's nephew, and Morgan (Terry Funk), a surly bouncer whose demeanor causes more trouble than it solves
Edited sentence: In the course of cleaning up the violent nightclub Dalton dismisses several unruly and corrupt employees, including Pat McGurn (John Doe), the bartender and Wesley's nephew, and Morgan (Terry Funk), a bouncer whose belligerent demeanor causes more trouble than it solves