Original sentence: The town has recently received a cinema after a gap of around ten years but the attractions of a bowling alley and ice rink are still to materialise after the government quashed a plan to open a massive entertainment complex on the town's outskirts.This plan known as 'THE EXPERIENCE' contained a Cinema, Snow Dome, restaurants, bowling alleys, hotels, etc
Edited sentence: The town has recently received a cinema after a gap of around ten years but unfortunately the attractions of a bowling alley and ice rink is still to materialise after the government quashed a plan to open a massive entertainment complex on the towns out skirts.This plan known as 'THE EXPERIENCE'  was stopped as it contained a Cinema, Snow Dome, restaurants, bowling alleys, hotels etc