Original sentence: Starting in the summer of 2007, MCSO SAR began optional training, with hopes that it will keep members skills fresh and improve the team as a whole.This training consists of review as well as specialized training like high rope rescue, advanced First Aid, advanced survival skills, and helicopter training
Edited sentence: MCSO SAR members will now be some of the best trained SAR members in the state of Oregon.Starting this year (2007) MCSO SAR will begin optional training in the summer, with hopes that it will keep members skills fresh and improve the team as a whole.This training will consist of review as well as specialized training like high rope rescue, advanced First Aid, advanced survival skills, and helicopter training