Original sentence: Michael Joseph Jackson (born August 29 1958  in Gary, Indiana), is an American singer-songwriter, record producer, dancer, choreographer, actor, and philanthropist, who is known by his peers and fans as the "King of Pop"
Edited sentence: Michael Joseph Jackson (born August 29 1958  in Gary, Indiana), is an American singer-songwriter, record producer, dancer, choreographer, actor, and philanthropist, who is known by his peers and fans as the self-proclaimed "King of Pop"