Original sentence: On Wednesday, April 16, 2008; the 73 year old Pearson, in his 1971 Wood Brothers #21 Purolator Mercury,on loan from the museum, almost beat out NASCAR's Carl Edwards on the newly repaved Darlington Speedway.Still the Greatest NASCAR Driver in South Carolina, having won at Darlington a record 10 times
Edited sentence: He has won at Darlington a record 10 times.On Wednesday, April 16, 2008; the 73 year old Pearson, in his 1971 Wood Brothers #21 Purolator Mercury, on loan from the museum, almost beat out NASCAR's Carl Edwards on the newly repaved Darlington Speedway