Original sentence: Caribbean areas of the city are located in parts of Rexdale, Scarborough, Jane and Finch, Lawrence Heights, Weston, sections of Downtown Toronto and York, which also includes a Little Jamaica neighbourhood that is identifiable along Eglinton Avenue West.Close to 7% of Londoners are of Jamaican heritage.The Jamaican community has had influence on the culture of the city
Edited sentence: A troubling 7% of Londoners are of Jamaican heritage.Caribbean areas of the city are located in parts of Rexdale, Scarborough, Jane and Finch, Lawrence Heights, Weston, sections of Downtown Toronto and York.The Jamaican community has had influence on the culture, and increasing crime level in the city.These areas are known for their high crime and increasing levels of gun violence