Original sentence: Pats), Barnes Murphy (1974 - Castleconnor) and Eamon O Hara (2002 - Tourlestrane) while arguably their most revered player of the last half century  due to his natural talent and scoring ability, Paul Taylor (Eastern Harps) was nominated once in the late 1990s
Edited sentence: Pats), Barnes Murphy (1974 - Castleconnor) and Eamon O Hara (2002 - Tourlestrane) while arguably their most revered player of the last half century due to his natural talent and scoring ability, Paul Taylor (Eastern Harps) was nominated once in the late 1990s