Original sentence: Early traders from Egypt, Rome, Arabia, Africa, Turkey, Persia, and India used to reach the Malaysian state of Kedah before arriving at Guangzhou
Edited sentence: Early traders from Egypt, Rome, Arabia, Africa, Turkey, Persia, and South Indian kingdoms used to reach the Malaysian state of Kedah before arriving at Guangzhou.They traded glassware,camphor,cotton goods,brocades,ivory,sandalwood,perfumes and precious stones