Original sentence: People who experience ASMR report feeling relaxed and sleepy after watching and listening to ASMR content,  While some journalists and commentators have portrayed ASMR as intimate, but even they go on to admit there is no evidence of any connection between ASMR and sexual arousal
Edited sentence: People who  experience ASMR report feeling relaxed and sleepy after watching and listening to ASMR content.Some journalists and commentators have portrayed ASMR as sexually provocative.Those in the ASMR community deny any connection between sexual arousal and the tingly sensation that characterizes ASMR