Original sentence: " The first piece of news that the inhabitants get to hear on the newly set television is so devastating (where the Mayor's son,currently serving in the Army was killed during the Turkish intervention in Cyprus in 1974) that a burial of the TV set is in order; an iconic replacement of the burial of the beloved son
Edited sentence: " The first piece of news that the inhabitants get to hear on the newly set television is so devastating (where the Mayor's son,currently serving in the Army was killed during the Turkish invasion of Cyprus in 1974) that a burial of the TV set is in order; an iconic replacement of the burial of the beloved son