Original sentence: " After having an affair with another girlfriend Christine, Blackmore met Amy Rothman in 1978, and moved to Connecticut.1964), played guitar in touring tribute band Over the Rainbow.Blackmore is a heavy drinker, plays football once a week, always watches German language television on the satellite dish when he stays at his home.Blackmore later stated, "I didn't give a damn about song construction.During this period, Blackmore wrote a lot of Dio's vocal melodies, particularly in their debut album.Otherwise he travels in the German small villages on vacation every year for several weeks.Richard Hugh "Ritchie" Blackmore (born 14 April 1945) is an English guitarist and songwriter, who began his professional career as a session musician as a member of the instrumental band The Outlaws and as a backing musician of pop singers Glenda Collins, Heinz, Screaming Lord Sutch, Neil Christian, etc.. Blackmore was also one of the original members of Deep Purple, playing jam-style rock music which mixed simple guitar riffs and organ sounds.Through numerous personnel changes, the backing musicians have totaled about 29 persons
Edited sentence: " After having an affair with another girlfriend Christine, Blackmore met Amy Rothman in 1978, and moved to her native Connecticut.1964), played guitar in minor bands.Blackmore disliked jam-style rock, and stated, "I didn't give a damn about song construction.Blackmore is no smoker, heavy drinker, plays football once a week, always watches German language television on the satellite dish when he stays at his home.During this period, Blackmore wrote most of Dio's vocal melodies, particularly in their debut album.During this periods he mainly preferred progressive rock.He has a lot of German friends.Otherwise he travels in the German villages on vacation every year for several weeks.Richard Hugh "Ritchie" Blackmore (born 14 April 1945) is a British guitarist and songwriter, who began his professional career as a session musician as a member of the instrumental band The Outlaws and as a backing musician of pop singers Glenda Collins, Heinz, Screaming Lord Sutch, Neil Christian, etc.. Blackmore was also one of the original members of Deep Purple, playing jam-style rock music which mixed simple guitar riffs and organ sounds.Through numerous personnel changes, the backing musicians have totaled about 28 persons