Original sentence: He played in the National Hockey League with the Detroit Red Wings, Minnesota North Stars, and Buffalo Sabres; additionally, he played in the World Hockey Association with the Philadelphia Blazers, Vancouver Blazers, Calgary Cowboys, and Winnipeg Jets
Edited sentence: He played in the National Hockey League with the Detroit Red Wings, Minnesota North Stars, and Buffalo Sabres and in the World Hockey Association with the Philadelphia Blazers, Vancouver Blazers, Calgary Cowboys, and Winnipeg Jets