Original sentence: "Storm" (a.Thunder)  9530  50px|BlackBerry 9530  360x480 pixels @ 262K  CDMA EV-DO 800/1900, GSM/GPRS/EDGE 850/900/1800/1900, UMTS HSPA 2100  Clickable Touchscreen interface, 3.2 MP camera, Bluetooth, 1 GB Internal Flash, 3.5 mm stereo audio jack, external microSDHC (to 16 GB)  Verizon, Vodafone, Telus (Canada), Bell (Canada)
Edited sentence: "Storm" 9500   360x480 pixels @ 262K  GSM/GPRS/EDGE 850/900/1800/1900, UMTS HSPA 2100  Clickable Touchscreen interface, 3.2 MP camera, Bluetooth, 1 GB Internal Flash, 3.5 mm stereo audio jack, external microSDHC (to 16 GB)  Vodafone.9530  50px|BlackBerry 9530  CDMA EV-DO 800/1900, GSM/GPRS/EDGE 850/900/1800/1900, UMTS HSPA 2100  Verizon, Telus (Canada), Bell (Canada)