Original sentence: In 1992 he appeared in approxiamietly 5 episodes of Heartbeat as Alan Maskell.In January 2007 he took part in The Afternoon Play, a daytime BBC drama series consisting of short stories
Edited sentence: In 1992, he appeared in approxiamietly 5 episodes of Heartbeat as Alan Maskell.In January 2007, he took part in The Afternoon Play, a daytime BBC drama series consisting of short stories