Original sentence: Danylovskyi started his career at Karpaty in western Ukrainian city of Lviv, not finding much success there, mostly playing for the second team, he moved to Chornomorets Odessa in 2004
Edited sentence: Serhiy Danylovskyi started his professional football career at Karpaty in the western Ukrainian city of Lviv but, not finding much success there while mostly playing for the second team, he moved to Chornomorets Odessa in 2004