Original sentence: As well as creating jobs during the construction phase, the SnOasis project will create many different type of jobs requiring a wide range of different skills - from hotel/ resort management through sport training and administration.It is also close to good transport links.Many of the jobs should be able to be filled by people living within the region.Some concern has been expressed by some members of the public in the local area over traffic congestion, crime, and damage to the environment and local surroundings.The developers are a company called Onslow Suffolk Ltd.The project is expected to create around 2,000 new jobs.The proposal will enhance the environment by utilising an unused, ugly brown field site, giving access to the public and will include a nature reserve as habitat for a number of species.There is also protected wildlife on the site
Edited sentence: A nature reserve is proposed, but this is on land not owned by the developers and has been heavily criticised by Natural England and Suffolk Wildlife Trust (both of whom oppose the development).As well as creating jobs during the construction phase, the SnOasis project will create many different type of jobs requiring a wide range of different skills - from hotel/ resort management through sport training and administration, ie low-skilled.It is also close to good transport links, though these are at full capacity.It is quite a shallow quarry and Suffolk is flat, so it will only stick up 242 feet - no problem for the helicopters from nearby RAF Whattisham.Many of the jobs should be able to be filled by people living within the region, thouhg local unemployment is low.Some concern has been expressed by most members of the public in the local area over traffic congestion, crime, and damage to the environment and local surroundings.The developers are a company called Onslow Suffolk Ltd linked to three bankrupted companies.The project is expected to create around 1,000 new jobs.There is also protected wildlife on the site, including newts, badgers and bats.Though the site is classified as a brown field site, it is very attractive with wetland, chalk cliffs and chalk grassland (rare in Suffolk).low paid