Original sentence: Colleluori a junior at Hofstra University and was a member of the Hofstra lacrosse team, died from non-Hodgkin's lymphoma in November 2006, wore number 27
Edited sentence: Colleluori a junior at Hofstra University and was a member of the Hofstra lacrosse team, passed away from non-Hodgkin's lymphoma in November 2006, wore number 27