Original sentence: After a 1 August 2009 attack on a gay youth center that left 2 people dead and 15 people wounded in Tel Aviv, Livni, who is in contact with the gay and lesbian community, said "This event should shake up society, and all the circles inherent in it, including the political establishment and the education system, and on this day deliver an unequivocal message against intolerance, incitement and violence, and to act against any manifestation of these," the opposition leader went on to say.She attended a rally near the location of the murder along with hundreds of Israelis and some other politicians and urged Israel's gay and lesbian community to continue living their lives, despite the "hate crime
Edited sentence: " She attended a rally near the location of the attack along with hundreds of Israelis and some other politicians and urged Israel's gay and lesbian community to continue living their lives, despite the "hate crime.After a 1 August 2009 attack on a gay youth center that left 2 people dead and 15 people wounded in Tel Aviv, Livni, who is in contact with the gay and lesbian community, said "This event should shake up society, and all the circles inherent in it, including the political establishment and the education system, and on this day deliver an unequivocal message against intolerance, incitement and violence, and to act against any manifestation of these