Original sentence: Eighty percent of brats described their father as "authoritarian" or desiring to exercise complete control over their lives.The stereotypical military family might have had a "duty roster" on the refrigerator, parent-conducted room inspections, and children who say "yes sir/ma'am" to adults
Edited sentence: In 1989, eighty percent of brats described their father as "authoritarian" or desiring to exercise complete control over their lives.In 1989, the stereotypical military family might have had a "duty roster" on the refrigerator, parent-conducted room inspections, and children who say "yes sir/ma'am" to adults