Original sentence: She is shown to be a beautiful girl with aspirations for a career in modeling though has trouble getting opportunity as she is considered not tall enough to be a good model.Though she has feelings for Vroom too, she considers him as a person who cannot be serious with a relationship and so she rejects his proposal fearing that he would ditch her.Though this gets too demanding,she never complaints for the love of her husband
Edited sentence: (a town Priyanka believes to be backward) She is shown to be a beautiful girl with aspirations for a career in modeling though has trouble getting opportunity as she is considered not tall enough to be a good model.59.94.133.187 05:37, 25 October 2006 (UTC)amit.A gorgeous looking girl from Chandigarh.Here Vroom explains everybody ,how everyone of them is doing the same for the hack of money and there ambitions.In the latter part of the story she starts hating herself for something which her conscious would not have allowed otherwise.Though she has feelings for Vroom too, she considers him as a person who cannot be serious with a relationship and she cannot bear anything between her and her ambitions.Though this gets too demanding,she never complaints for the love of her husband,until eventually she finds out that her husband has an extra marital affair