Original sentence: In 1928 she co-starred with two great actors, Lon Chaney and Lionel Barrymore, in West of Zanzibar directed by Tod Browning in what is arguably today her most well-known and heartbreaking silent film role as Chaney's defiled daughter
Edited sentence: In 1928 she co-starred with two great actors, Lon Chaney and Lionel Barrymore, in West of Zanzibar directed by legendary Tod Browning in what is arguably today her most well-known and heartbreaking silent film role as Chaney's defiled daughter raised in the dives of an African coastal town