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Edited sentence: Admitted to the bar in 1837, he moved to Springfield, Illinois that same year and began to practice law with John T.In 1834, he won an election to the state legislature and, after coming across the Commentaries on the Laws of England, began to teach himself law.It is reputed that, had Stuart not lent Lincoln his law books, Lincoln would not have gone into a career in politics.With a reputation as a formidable adversary during cross-examinations and in his closing arguments, Lincoln became an able and successful lawyer