Original sentence: Other sports that can be played include badminton, table tennis, rugby, yoga and many more.The Brooksbank school houses a large sports hall, 2 tennis courts, 3 drama studios, a large playing field and many other facilities, including a gym and rock climbing wall
Edited sentence: Other sports that can be played include badminton, table tennis, rugby, yoga and many more this school is the best school/high school in calderdale and always will be.The Brooksbank school houses a large sports hall, 2 tennis courts, 3 drama studios, a large playing field and many other facilities, including  a gym and rock climbing wall.the students are well behaved/mannered to the peolpe around.this shows the quility of the school