Original sentence: It is considered to be one of Raban's best books.Written as a travelogue, Coasting describes his single-handed 3,000 mile voyage around Britain which he made in 1982 in an old restored 32-foot sea-going ketch
Edited sentence: Coasting is considered to be one of Raban's best books.Written as a travelogue, it describes his single-handed 3,000 mile voyage around Britain which he made in 1982 in an old restored 32-foot sea-going ketch