Original sentence: In March 2006, Klass publicly criticized the proposed closure of the London Planetarium and explaining on television how to view Venus in the early morning.Klass has been an amateur astronomer for most of her life, having been taught the basics by her father
Edited sentence: A little known fact is Myleene's passion for astronomy and space - she has been an amateur astronomer for most of her life having been taught the basics by her father.In March 2006, Myleene revealed herself to be an amateur astronomer, deploring publicly the proposed closure of the London Planetarium and explaining on television how to view Venus in the early morning