Original sentence: Nancy does not have a job or go to school, and spends her time solving mysteries, some of which she stumbles upon and some of which begin as cases of her father's
Edited sentence: Nancy does not have a job or go to school ,it is often wondered why at 19 ,she does not have a real job and seams to have no intention of getting one and appears to live off her father's money, and spends her time solving mysteries, some of which she stumbles upon and some of which begin as cases of her father's.So it although she asserts she was never spoiled it would appear otherwise