Original sentence: During the battle, Nassau collided with HMS Spitfire.Following the end of World War I, the ships were surrendered to the victorious powers as war booty.Later, Nassau and her sisterships took part in the  Battle of Jutland on 31 May–1 June 1916, as part of the I Battle Squadron.Nassau fired 106 main battery shells, and was hit twice by 4 inch shells.Nassau saw service in the Baltic sea in the beginning of World War I, and in August 1915 participated in the Battle of the Gulf of Riga.SMS Nassau was surrendered in April 1920 to Japan.With no use for the ship, Japan sold her to a British wrecking firm which then scrapped her in Dordrecht (Netherlands)
Edited sentence: After the German fleet was scuttled, Nassau and her three sisters were surrendered to the victorious powers as replacements for the sunken ships.As they were the oldest German dreadnoughts, the Nassau class ships, were for the time permitted to remain in German ports.During the battle, Nassau collided with the British destroyer.Following her return to the North Sea, Nassau and her sister ships took part in the  Battle of Jutland on 31 May–1 June 1916.Following the end of World War I, the majority of the High Seas Fleet was interned in Scapa Flow.In August 1915 she participated in the Battle of the Gulf of Riga; during this operation she engaged the Russian battleship Slava.Nassau saw service in the North Sea in the beginning of World War I, in the II Division of the I Battle Squadron of the German High Seas Fleet.Nassau was ceded to Japan in April 1920.With no use for the ship, Japan sold her to a British wrecking firm which then scrapped her in Dordrecht, Netherlands