Original sentence: Bonnie Fuller, former editor in chief of YM (magazine), has questioned whether the net effect of Bristol's presentations has been to glamorize or discourage teen pregnancy based on the visual imagery.However, Fuller has stated that comments from Palin like, "If girls realized the consequences of sex, nobody would be having sex, Trust me.Nobody" are discouraging to teen pregnancy
Edited sentence: Bonnie Fuller, former editor in chief of YM (magazine), has questioned whether the net effect of Bristol's presentations has been to glamorize or discourage teen pregnancy based on the visusal imagery.However even Fuller has agreed that comments from Palin like, "If girls realized the consequences of sex, nobody would be having sex, Trust me.Nobody" are clearly discouraging to teen pregnancy