Original sentence: Lyrically, Marty Wilde included love songs and also a song ("Water on Glass") about tinnitus (a medical condition that causes ringing in the ears), a song about the deterioration of inner cities ("Our Town") and a song about a theory that sound is alive ("Tuning In Tuning On").Musically, the album was mainly new wave and rock-oriented, but it also featured a reggae track ("Everything We Know") and a brass section appeared on "2 6 5 8 0"
Edited sentence: Kim Wilde's debut album was released when she was 20 years old and turned her into Europe's most popular female pop star.Lyrically, Marty Wilde provided a few surprises: besides the obligatory love songs there was also a song ("Water on Glass") about tinnitus (a medical condition that causes ringing in the ears), a song about the deterioration of inner cities ("Our Town") and a song about a theory that sound is alive ("Tuning In Tuning On").Musically, the album was mainly new wave and rock-oriented, which wasn't surprising given the appearance of The Enid, but it also featured a reggae track ("Everything We Know") and a brass section appeared on "2 6 5 8 0".The singles "Kids in America" and "Chequered Love" were big hits all over Europe, becoming classic pop songs