Original sentence: Willis and Arnold's parents had died, their mother, used to be a Housekeeper, for a White family named The Drummonds, and her deathbed wish was that Philip Drummond (her employer) had taken care of her two kids, and Philip Drummond officially adopted them in Late 1979
Edited sentence: Willis and Arnold's parents had passed away, their mother, used to be a Housekeeper, for a White family named The Drummonds, and her deathbed wish was that Philip Drummond (her employer) had taken care of her two kids, and Philip Drummond officially adopted them in Late 1979