Original sentence: The consequent secrecy surrounding ordinances has generated speculation, controversy and misunderstanding of temple ceremonies in part due to use of language unfamiliar to non-Mormons.Therefore, critics claim that those who publicize what are claimed to be details of temple ceremonies are either disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have allegedly trespassed on private property and made unauthorized recordings or transcripts
Edited sentence: The consequent secrecy surrounding ordinances has generated speculation, controversy and misunderstanding of temple ceremonies in part due to use of jargon unfamiliar to non-Mormons.Therefore, critics claim that those who publicize details of temple ceremonies are either disaffected, former or excommunicated Church members or non-Mormons who have trespassed on private property and made unauthorized and illegal recordings or transcripts