Original sentence: Occhilupo was born on 16 June 1966 in Kurnell, New South Wales, where he began surfing at the age of nine
Edited sentence: Marco began surfing at the age of nine.Marco's remarkable capturing of the 1999 World title is regarded as truly one the greatest sporting comebacks of all times.Occhilupo was born on 16 June 1966 in Kurnell, New South Wales, Marco's father Luciano was Italian from the northern port city of Trieste whilst his mother Pam was from New Zealand