Original sentence: By the time of the events of this series, Brandon, who was already in his early 40s, and Princess Mary were long married.She was described by contemporaries as not beautiful, but there is something about her that is exotic and very attractive.The Palace of Whitehall  as shown to be the home of Henry VIII from the beginning of the series only fell into Henry's hands in 1530, after he removed Cardinal Wolsey from power.Up until this point it was called York Place, and was taken by Henry to be his home with his fianceé Anne Boleyn, though it was not referred to as Whitehall Palace until as much as a decade after
Edited sentence: Anne Boleyn strung Henry along for seven years before finally giving into him.Anne hated Wolsey for destroying her relationship with Henry Percy (who was the first man she fell in love with, not Wyatt).By the time of the events of this series, Brandon (who was already in his early 40s) and Princess Mary were long married with three children.It was also the King's sister, that convinced Henry to forgive Brandon, so they could be welcomed back at court.Many of the women are protrayed as being scattered brained and over sexed.She was also a direct descent of John of Gaunt and, like her daughter, had the Plantagenet coloring and no dark features, as this series and several other depictions of her life have protrayed.She was also the one who brought about Cardinal Wolsey's downfall, not her father, Brandon or her uncle.She was described by contemporaries as not beautiful, but there is something about her that is exotic and very attractive; sex appeal.The Palace of Whitehall  as shown to be the home of Henry VIII from the beginning of the series but only fell into Henry's hands in 1530, after he removed Cardinal Wolsey from power.The Palace was not referred to as Whitehall Palace until as much as a decade after.The series fails to mention that, Anne's sister, Mary Boleyn was also a long time favorite mistress of Henry VIII and that she was married to Sir William Carey during her affair with the King.The series is also highly male oriented.Up until this point in time it was called York Place, and was taken by Henry to be his home with his fianceé Anne Boleyn