Original sentence: (Hutton was one of the four underwriters.) No competition was able to raise money, and this gave Carnival a beautiful head start.), advised him to go public before an impending big correction in the stock market.Consequently, having Carnival in the stock market and the ensuing rally until 1999 catapulted Arison to one of the world's richest people.He brought professional basketball to South Florida with the forming of the Miami Heat in 1988, and established the Arison Foundation, a philanthropic institution, in Israel and the United States.In 1986, Arison's condominium neighbor, Count de S.In February 1989, Arison awarded in the strictest of confidence the exclusive sale of the company at $30 per share to Elkaim
Edited sentence: )  No competition was able to raise money, and this gave Carnival a beautiful head start.), advised him to go public before the impending big correction in the stock market.Consequently, having Carnival in the stock market and the ensuing rally until 1999 catapulted Ted Arison to one of the world's richest people and was undoubtedly the best success story of his career.He brought professional basketball to South Florida with the forming of the Miami Heat in 1988, and established the philanthropic Arison Foundation in Israel and the United States.Hutton was one of the four underwriters.In 1986, Ted Arison's condominium neighbor, Count de S.In February 1989, Ted Arison awarded in the strictest of confidence the exclusive sale of the company at $30 per share to Count de S