Original sentence: Hosted by the mayor and governor, and organized by two young American expatriates, the festival drew nearly 10,000 people and top-tier musical acts from St.In addition, the city hosted the "VladiROCKstok" International Music Festival in September 1996.Vladivostok Rocks is a three-day open-air city festival and international conference for the music industry and contemporary cultural management
Edited sentence: Hosted by the Mayor and Governor, and organized by two young American expatriates, the festival drew nearly 10,000 people and top-tier musical acts from St.In addition, the city hosted the now legendary "VladiROCKstok" International Music Festival in September 1996.Vladivostok Rocks is a 3-day open-air city festival and international conference for the music industry and contemporary cultural management