Original sentence: Another blogger in support of Wikimedia contested the financial impact of the uploads on his own blog, stating that the NPG makes more money selling food at its café than it does yearly licensing images from its collection for use on other websites, an average of £10,000-£15,000 a year.However, a reporter for the BBC reported that the NPG made a larger amount of money licensing images for use in traditional publications alone in 2008, a total of £339,000
Edited sentence: A reporter for the BBC reported that the NPG made a larger amount of money licensing images for use in traditional publications alone in 2008, a total of £339,000