Original sentence: Before leaving the seven held a farewell tour to spread the message across the country - it was during this tour that someone dubbed them "The Cambridge Seven.Charles Studd, one of the famous Studd brothers, who was before his missionary work well known as an England cricketer - having played in the famous Ashes series against Australia, was probably the best known of "The Cambridge Seven,".He then returned to Western China - he lived here until his death in 1925.In 1885, when the Seven first arrived in China, the CIM had 163 missionaries; this had doubled by 1890 and reached some 800 by 1900 - which represented one-third of the entire Protestant missionary force.The Polhill Family History - Compiled by Rob Gaskell.The conversion and example of the seven, was one of the grand gestures of 19th century missions - making them religious celebrities; as a result their story was published as "The Evangelisation of the World" and was distributed to every YMCA and YWCA throughout the British Empire and the USA.The family of James Hudson Taylor - by Brian York
Edited sentence: Before leaving the seven held a farewell tour to spread the message across the country — it was during this tour that someone dubbed them "The Cambridge Seven.Charles Studd, one of the famous Studd brothers, who was before his missionary work well known as an England cricketer — having played in the famous Ashes series against Australia, was probably the best known of "The Cambridge Seven,".He then returned to Western China — he lived here until his death in 1925.In 1885, when the Seven first arrived in China, the CIM had 163 missionaries; this had doubled by 1890 and reached some 800 by 1900 — which represented one-third of the entire Protestant missionary force.The Polhill Family History — compiled by Rob Gaskell.The conversion and example of the seven, was one of the grand gestures of 19th century missions — making them religious celebrities; as a result their story was published as "The Evangelisation of the World" and was distributed to every YMCA and YWCA throughout the British Empire and the USA.The family of James Hudson Taylor — by Brian York