Original sentence: In the ensuing investigation of the accident, it was determined Janklow was likely driving at least 70 miles per hour in a 55 mph zone and that he ran a stop sign at the intersection where the crash occurred.With Janklow’s speed now at 63–64 miles an hour (while failing to stop at a stop sign), Scott's motorcycle’s speed was then at 65 mph, faster than the Highway Patrols estimate of 59
Edited sentence: In the ensuing investigation of the accident, it was determined Janklow was likely driving at least 70 miles per hour in a 55 mph zone and that he ran a stop sign at the intersection where the crash occurred.With Janklow’s speed now at 63–64 miles an hour (while failing to stop at a stop sign), Scott's motorcycle’s speed was then at 65 mph, faster than the Highway Patrols estimate of 59