Original sentence: All six of the "loser loft" contestants (except Larissa Tobacco) came back during episode 9 to surprise the final three contestants.Much attention has been given to the fact one of his competitors was the first openly-gay VJ hopeful, but little was made of the fact that Deegan is the first openly learning disabled contestant.The next week the show was aired live from the Chum-City Building in Toronto, where it was announced that Tim Deegan was the "wildcard" contestant.Timothy Justin "Tim" Deegan (born December 10, 1982) is a video jockey on MuchMusic, a music television station in Canada.Unofficial Tim Deegan website
Edited sentence: All 6 of the "loser loft" contestants (except Larissa Tobacco) came back during episode 9 to surprise the final three contestants.It was also in that mall that he did the "skin to win" (removing his shirt), which some have claimed as what won him a spot on the show.Much attention has been given to the fact one of his competitors was the first openly-gay VJ hopeful, but little was made of the fact that Tim is the first openly learning disabled contestant.The next week the show was aired live from the Chum City Building in Toronto, where it was announced that Tim Deegan was the "wildcard" contestant.Tim's humble, down to earth personality, combined with his innocent charm and questionable good looks wooed the audience and those judging the VJ Search auditions.Timothy Justin "Tim" Deegan (born December 10, 1982) is a MuchMusic VJ.Unofficial Tim Deegan Website