Original sentence: For his services to conservation he was given the World Conservation Union International Parks Merit Award and made a life member of the Wilderness Society.For his work in improving Australia–US relations he was awarded a Fulbright Distinguished Fellow Award Scholarship
Edited sentence: His services to conservation have been recognised with a World Conservation Union International Parks Merit Award and Life Membership in the Wilderness Society.His work on Australia–US relations has been recognised with the Fulbright Distinguished Fellow Award Scholarship