Original sentence: , Oliver Lieb and Paul Oakenfold.Buildups and breakdowns became longer and more exaggerated, and the sound became more direct and less subtle, with a more identifiable tune.Immensely popular, trance found itself filling a niche as 'edgier' than house, more soothing than drum and bass, and more melodic than techno, something that made it accessible to a wider audience.Some of the artists that had helped create the trance sound in the early and mid-1990s had, by the end of the decade, abandoned trance completely in favour of more underground sounds - artists of particular note here include Pascal F
Edited sentence: Buildups and breakdowns became longer, more exaggerated and more contrived.Even Paul Oakenfold , widely regarded as the DJ responsible for the explosion of trance in the UK, has sinced moved on.Immensely popular, trance found itself filling a niche as 'edgier' than house, more soothing than drum and bass, and more melodic than techno, something that makes it accessible for mass consumption.Some of the artists that had helped create the trance sound in the early and mid-1990s had, by the end of the decade, abandoned trance completely (artists of particular note here are Pascal F.The sound became more and more excessive and overblown.and Oliver Lieb) in favour of more underground sounds