Original sentence: Harilal spent the latter part of his life as an alcoholic and a vagabond.. He appeared at his father's funeral in such derelict condition that few recognized him.He also smoked and ate meat.He became an alcoholic, and an embezzler; accounts of his arrests, public drunkenness, and visits to prostitutes became commonplace.He died from liver disease on June 18, 1948 in a municipal hospital in Bombay after spending the last few days of his life on the streets of Bombay
Edited sentence: Harilal spent the latter part of his life as an alcoholic and depressed.He appeared at his father's funeral in such derelict condition that few recognized him.He became an alcoholic, and an embezzler; accounts of his arrests, public drunkenness, and prostitution became commonplace.He died from liver disease on June 18, 1948 in a municipal hospital in Bombay