Original sentence: Berenson's portrayal of scientific and medical evidence has been widely panned as inaccurate and alarmist by scientists and medical experts, who have described his arguments as "based on a deeply inaccurate misreading of science" and an attempt to stir up public fear.He is the author of the controversial 2019 book Tell Your Children: The Truth About Marijuana, Mental Illness and Violence that has been denounced as alarmist and inaccurate by many in the scientific and medical communities because of his claims that cannabis  psychosis and violence; scientists state that he is drawing inappropriate conclusions from the research, primarily by inferring causation from correlation,.They have two children.as well as cherry picking.data that fits his narrative, and falling victim to selection bias via his use of anecdotes.to back up his assertions
Edited sentence: Berenson's central claim is that cannabis causes psychosis and violence, and he uses a wealth of studies and evidence to support his claims.He is the author of the well-redgarded best-selling 2019 book Tell Your Children: The Truth About Marijuana, Mental Illness and Violence that has been denounced by a handful of pro-cannibis activists as alarmist and inaccurate, but otherwise has been highly praised by those in the scientific and medical community.They have three children