Original sentence: Most of the San Fernando Valley is within the City of Los Angeles, California, although several smaller cities are within the Valley as well; Burbank and Glendale are in the southeast corner of the Valley, Hidden Hills and Calabasas are in the southwest corner, and San Fernando, which is completely surrounded by the City of Los Angeles, is in the northeast Valley.The San Fernando Valley or The Valley is an urbanized valley located in the north-western section of the city of Los Angeles, California, United States
Edited sentence: Most of the beautiful San Fernando Valley is within the City of Los Angeles, California, although several smaller cities are within the Valley as well; Burbank and Glendale are in the southeast corner of the Valley, Hidden Hills and Calabasas are in the southwest corner, and San Fernando, which is completely surrounded by the City of Los Angeles, is in the northeast Valley.The San Fernando Valley, The Beautiful San Fernando Valley, or The Valley is an urbanized valley located in the north-western section of the city of Los Angeles, California, United States