Original sentence: William Aramony, the disgraced former head of the United Way who has been linked to the Fellowship, serves on the Advisory Council of the ICRD, as does Ron Nikkel, the President of Charles Colson's Prison Fellowship International
Edited sentence: William Aramony, the disgraced former head of the United Way, serves on the Advisory Council of the ICRD, as does Ron Nikkel, the President of Charles Colson's Prison Fellowship International