Original sentence: Full-time Hong Kong students between the ages of 12 and 25 qualify for the concessionary rate on all lines except on Airport Express and to Lo Wu Station and Lok Ma Chau Station.Legislators such as Social welfare constituency legislator Fernando Cheung Chiu-hung and those from Hong Kong Association for Democracy & People's Livelihood have for years demanded that such concessions be put in place.MTR does not provide concessionary fares for the disabled.Services to border stations (Lo Wu and Lok Ma Chau) are also more expensive than ordinary fares.Student fares are the same as child and elderly fare on the urban lines, but are the same as the Adult fares for journeys to or from Lo Wu or Lok Ma Chau Station, and range from HK$1.40 to $39.40
Edited sentence: Full-time Hong Kong students between the ages of 12 and 25 qualify for the concessionary rate on all lines except on Airport Express and to or from Hong Kong-Shenzhen checkpoint terminuses namely Lo Wu Station and Lok Ma Chau Station.Legislators such as Social welfare constituency legislator Fernando Cheung Chiu-hung and those from Hong Kong Association for Democracy & People's Livelihood had for years demanded that such concessions be put in place.MTR did not provide concessionary fares for the disabled.On May 2009, MTR eventually agreed to offer the disabled concessionary fares by HK$2 million sponsorship from Transport and Housing Bureau and under the condition that Legislative Council amends the Disability Discrimination Ordinance.Services to checkpoint terminuses are also more expensive than ordinary fares.Student fares are the same as child and elderly fare on the urban lines, but are the same as the Adult fares for journeys to or from checkpoint terminuses, and range from HK$1.40 to $39.40