Original sentence: Adrian Sutil, who had started second to last, was in 4th place when he was hit in the rear by Kimi Räikkönen at the chicane.Sutil had to retire in the pits, thus he and his team were denied points while the World Champion had the nose of his car repaired and went on to clock the fastest lap
Edited sentence: Adrian Sutil, who had started second to last, was placed an outstanding 4th when he was hit in the rear by Kimi Räikkönen at the chicane.Sutil had to retire in the pits, thus he and his team were denied valuable points while the World Champion had the nose of his car repaired and went on to clock the fastest lap