Original sentence: All three of these previously popular singers ended up in the "bottom three" the night Hudson was eliminated — the three having the lowest individual vote counts.Hudson, London and Barrino (who would eventually go on to win the competition) were female, African-American, highly praised singers — all appealing to the same demographic bloc of voters
Edited sentence: All three of these previously popular singers ended up in the "bottom three" the night Hudson was eliminated—the three having the lowest individual vote counts.Hudson, London and Barrino (who would eventually go on to win the competition) were female, African-American, highly praised singers—all appealing to the same demographic bloc of voters