Original sentence: "My Name is Red" has indeed won more international awards than any of Pamuk's other works, including the IMPAC award issued for the English translation (a fourth of the prize money was awarded to the translator).Göknar, has been praised by John Updike in The New Yorker for his eloquent translation.Turkish and English are very different in word order and sentence structure, and some--such as the translator of a different work of Pamuk's--have found the word order in the English translation difficult
Edited sentence: Göknar, was praised by John Updike in The New Yorker for his eloquent translation.Turkish and English are very different in word order and sentence structure, and some have found the word order in the English translation difficult