Original sentence: Appearing as a serial in the Japanese magazine LaLa, the nine chapters of Millennium Snow were collected into two bound volume by Hakusensha and published from November 2001 to August 5, 2002
Edited sentence: Appearing as a serial in the Japanese magazine LaLa, the nine chapters of Millennium Snow were collected into two bound volumes by Hakusensha and published from November 2001 to August 5, 2002