Original sentence: He played a rendition of "Who Knows" before snapping a vulgar response at a woman who shouted a request for "Foxy Lady".He played a second song, Earth Blues, then simply stopped playing, telling the audience: "That's what happens when earth fucks with space—never forget that".The band also released a single "Stepping Stone" which failed to sell, and recorded several studio songs slated for Hendrix's future LP
Edited sentence: He lasted halfway through a second song, then simply stopped playing, telling the audience: "That's what happens when earth fucks with space—never forget that".He played a dismal rendition of "Who Knows" before snapping a vulgar response at a woman who shouted a request for "Foxy Lady".The band also released a single "Stepping Stone" which was quickly withdrawn, and recorded several studio songs slated for Hendrix's future LP