Original sentence: Along with Terence Donovan, he captured, and in many ways helped create the 'Swinging London' of the 1960s: a culture of high fashion and celebrity chic.David Bailey CBE (born 2 January 1938 in Leytonstone, London) is a celebrated English photographer.In 1966, the film Blowup was made, directed by Michelangelo Antonioni.The film concerned itself with the work and sexual habits of a London fashion photographer played by David Hemmings and largely based on Bailey
Edited sentence: Along with Terence Donovan, he captured and helped create the 'Swinging London' of the 1960s: a culture of high fashion and celebrity chic.David Bailey CBE (born 2 January 1938,  Leytonstone, London) is a celebrated English photographer.The film Blowup (1966), directed by Michelangelo Antonioni, concerns the work and sexual habits of a London fashion photographer played by David Hemmings and is largely based on Bailey