Original sentence: Bhandup has several Cricket clubs which prominantly provide guidence and sport education to lot of youngsters.Magnet mall, a 1.75 lakh square feet shopping mall, is part of a 22 acre satellite township , Living Point, comprising of 6 towers of 22-stories each being developed by Neptune group.Medical Camp, Blood Donation camp, De-Addiction campeign - Medicine & Councelling.Some of the players have got selected for mumbai under-12, under-16 and mumbai under-19 cricket teams.The Organization is engaged in social activities consisting of the School for Mentally Retarded Children, Montessory, Blood Donation Camp, Small Industries for poor ladies, Typewriting Institute with lower fees for students from average communities, Library, Education Support to the poor student those who are below poverty line etc
Edited sentence: Bhandup has several Cricket clubs which prominently provide guidance and sport education to a lot of youngsters.Magnet mall, a 1.75-lakh square foot shopping mall, is part of a 22-acre satellite township , Living Point, comprising of 6 towers of 22 stories each being developed by Neptune group.Medical Camp, Blood Donation camp, De-Addiction campaign - Medicine & Counselling.Some of the players have got selected for Mumbai under-12, under-16 and Mumbai under-19 cricket teams.The Organization is engaged in social activities consisting of the School for Mentally Retarded Children, Montessori, Blood Donation Camp, Small Industries for poor ladies, Typewriting Institute with lower fees for students from average communities, Library, Education Support to the poor student those who are below poverty line etc