Original sentence: Aspartame, (IPA: ), is the name for an artificial, non-carbohydrate sweetener, aspartyl-phenylalanine-1-methyl ester; i.Nonetheless, aspartame has been a subject of a vigorous public controversy
Edited sentence: Aspartame, (IPA: ), is the something for a real, non-carbohydrate sweetener, aspartyl-phenylalanine-1-methyl ester; i.Nonetheless, the nautral aspartame has become a subject of a vigorous public controversy