Original sentence: Ivanhoe "Rhyging" Martin was a Jamaican outlaw who died at age 24 of gunshot wounds sustained during a shootout with police officers on September 9, 1948, in Lime Cay, Jamaica.Often alluded to historically as the "Jamaican Dillinger", the seemingly invincible gunman managed to escape from prison, elude a massive dragnet, and live a life of crime for years with the help of the Jamaican public before his last stand at Lime Cay.Rhyging could never be caught, and because of this he was seen as sort of a hero to the people suffering in the ghetto of 1940's Jamaica
Edited sentence: An avenging angel of hope to the people brutalized by the police and ignored by their government.Established as a 3 piece in the late summer of 2003.Famed Jamaican outlaw Ivanhoe 'Rhyging' Martin, was a 24 year old man who died of gunshot wounds sustained during a shootout with police officers on September 9, 1948, in Lime Cay, Jamaica.Often alluded to historically as the "Jamaican Dillinger", the seemingly invincible gunman managed to escape from prison, elude a massive dragnet, and live a life of crime for years with the help of the jamaican public before his last stand at Lime Cay.Rhyging could never be caught, and because of this he was seen as sort of a hero to the sufferers living in the ghetto of 1940's Jamaica.The legend gave inspiration to Boston dub reggae band Rhyging.Though the name inherited by the infamous criminal/anti-hero is spelled Rhyging [as seen in print torn from the headlines of the news paper The Jamaica Gleaner]  The legendary name Rhyging is often pronounced in Jamaican dialect or patois as Rhygin' [pronounced as though the letter 'g' at the end were silent]  The name is acceptably pronounced as though you were saying the word rhyming only with a hard 'Guh' sound in place of the letter m