Original sentence: Polish historians such as Konrad Piasecki, the president of the Institute of National Remembrance noted that due to what he alleged were its serious methodological errors and omissions, including emotive use of political epithets, the book does not stand a chance of being accepted (even conditionally) in the historical community
Edited sentence: Polish historians such as Konrad Piasecki, the president of the Institute of National Remembrance noted that due to its serious methodological errors and omissions, including emotive use of political epithets the book does not stand a chance of being accepted (even conditionally) in the historical community