Original sentence: In the fall, when most of the tourists have left, many people normally employed in the tourism industry earn money with the olive harvest.People who like to rest and sunbath on holiday can enjoy Hersonissos, for it has beautiful beaches, and excursions to other places on Crete can be made from here as well.The vicinity of Hersonissos is noted for its prehistoric archaeological finds, most natably at the Minoan palace and settlement of Knossos to the east; this site has revealed Neolithic habitation and a flourishing Bronze Age culture
Edited sentence: In the fall, when most of the tourists have left, many people normally employed in the tourism industry earn money helping with the olives harvest.People who like to rest and sunbath on their holidays can have a good time at Hersonissos, for it has beautiful beaches, but of course excursions to other places on the island can be made from here as well, or even to other islands