Original sentence: Odin is capable of manipulating magical energy - referred to as the Odin Power - for a number of purposes, such as endowing people or objects with powers;  transporting the entire human race to an alternate dimension;  compressing the population of an entire planet into a single being, the Mangog;  Odin is highly skilled in the use of his powers in combat situations and has held off both the Silver Surfer and Thanos simultaneously;  taken a soul away from the arch-demon Mephisto;  and is capable of destroying entire galaxies
Edited sentence: Odin is capable of manipulating vast amounts of magical energy - referred to as the Odin Power - for a number of purposes, such as endowing people or objects with powers;  transporting the entire human race to an alternate dimension;  compressing the population of an entire planet into a single being, the Mangog;  Odin is highly skilled in the use of his powers in combat situations and has held off both the Silver Surfer and Thanos simultaneously;  taken a soul away from the arch-demon Mephisto;  and is capable of destroying entire galaxies