Original sentence: For the courage, valour, dedication to the cause of his motherland and supreme sacrifice, he was conferred Bir Sreshtho by the nation.He joined East Bengal Regiment on 2 February 1971 and participated in the 1971 Bangladesh Liberation War.Though the independence fighters came very close to the Border Outpost, it became very difficult to capture owing to the enemy Machine Gun which was continuously firing from the south-western corner of the Border Outpost
Edited sentence: For the courage, valour, dedication to the cause of his motherland and supreme.He joined East Bengal Regiment on 2 February 1971 and participated in the war of liberation in 1971.Though the liberation forces came very close to the Border Outpost, it became very difficult to capture owing to the enemy Machine Gun which was continuously firing from the south-western corner of the Border Outpost.sacrifice, this illustrious son was conferred Bir Sreshtho by the nation