Original sentence: In developing Carnivale Lune Bleue, Van De Graaff recruited an international team of circus and carnival advisors including Johnny Meah (known as “The Czar of Bizarre” and famous for his work as a carnival advisor and historical consultant for the HBO show Carnivàle)”, Montreal's Claude Le Belle (who created the vintage look of the tents and the signage), Jan-Rok Achard of the National Circus School, and Conklin Show's Jim Conklin, to create the most lifelike and authentic old-fashioned carnival experience
Edited sentence: In developing Carnivale Lune Bleue, Van De Graaff recruited an international team of circus and carnival advisors including Johnny Meah (known as “The Czar of Bizarre” and famous for his work as a carnival advisor and historical consultant for the HBO show Carnivàle)”, Montreal's Claude Le Belle, Jan-Rok Achard of the National Circus School, and Conklin Show's Jim Conklin, to create the most lifelike and authentic old-fashioned carnival experience