Original sentence: All students from kindergarten through 8th grade take music as a core part of their curriculum.The school offers band, choir and orchestra classes as well as IB music and a band program
Edited sentence: Additionally the Seoul Foreign School Band Program is recognized as one of the leading band programs in the world.All students from Kindergarten through 8th grade take music as a core part of the curriculum.Seoul Foreign High School offers band, choir and orchestra classes as well as IB Music.Seoul Foreign School is well know for having an outstanding music program