Original sentence: A large number of children who attended a preschool in Manhattan Beach, California in 1983 were interrogated using techniques designed trick adults into confessing (such as the Reid technique).Rivera's programs were very important in expanding popular belief in SRA
Edited sentence: A large number of children who attended a preschool in Manhattan Beach, California in 1983 were interrogated using techniques designed to trick adults into confessing (such as the Reid technique).Not to mention probable credit to why the events of 9/11 took place.Rivera's programs were not only highly influential in expanding popular belief in SRA, but examples of why he has since then come to be seen as one of the most over-exhagerating and mind-blowingly ridiculous excuses for a reporter in the history of journalism.The ultimate fault of this horrible outcome rests in major part on the actions of Geraldo Rivera in his attempt to instill fear and terror in the minds of Americans through unfounded and completely fabricated tales of cannibalism and other mediocre nonoccurances