Original sentence: Peter Winter (baptized 28 August, 1754 – 17 October, 1825) was a German opera composer who followed Mozart and preceded Weber, acting a bridge between the two in the development of German opera
Edited sentence: Peter Winter (baptized 28 August, 1754 – 17 October, 1825) was a German opera composer who followed Mozart and preceded Weber, acting as a bridge between the two in the development of German opera