Original sentence: The process of awarding the Victoria Cross may take place in two ways: One is recommendation by the Military Valour Decoration Advisory Committee, which is a part of the Chancellery of Honours at Rideau Hall, and is comprised of six members, one appointed by the Governor General and the rest by the Chief of the Defence Staff
Edited sentence: The process of awarding the Victoria Cross may take place in two ways: One is recommendation by the Decorations and Commendations Advisory Committee, which is a part of the Department of National Defence, and is comprised of six members, one appointed by the Governor General and the rest by the Chief of the Defence Staff