Original sentence: Camber Castle is  located on the other side of the river.Camber came into being with the game of golf: it was originally a collection of fishermen's dwellings.The Rye and Camber Tramway, a tourist railway originally opened for the members of the golf links to carry their gear, was opened in 1895; it closed at the outbreak of World War II and never reopened
Edited sentence: Camber Castle otherwise known as Winchelsea Castle was bulit by Henry VIII to guard the western entrance to "the Camber" in the 16th Century and is  located half way between Rye and Winchelsea on the other side of the river.Camber came into its own with the game of golf: it was originally a collection of fishermen's dwellings.The Rye and Camber Tramway, a tourist railway originally opened for the members of the golf links to carry their gear, was opened in 1895; it closed to the public at the outbreak of World War II and never reopened.The village of Camber takes its name from "the Camber" (la Chambre) the huge embayment of the English Channel located between Rye, old Winchelsea and Old RomneyRyebonfire (talk) 11:51, 7 August 2009 (UTC) that was gradually lost to "innings" and silting-up following changes to the coastline and the changed course of the Eastern Rother since the middle ages