Original sentence: " She travelled outside of her native England only twice in her lifetime.According to Todd Pruzan "For the better part of the 19th century, Mrs.According to Todd Puzan, she is one of the most outspoken, scornful, condescending and anti-Catholic writers of geographic books of the 19th century.Also according to Puzan, Mortimer was a melancholic with her personal life plagued by misery and misfortune, and she spared no wrath in her geographic descriptions of various peoples in her writings, even though she had gleaned all of her information from other books.Born Favell Lee Bevan at Russell Square, London,England, she was one of five daughters of Barclays bank co-founder David Bevan.Favell Lee Mortimer (1802 – 1878) was an English author of geography books for children.Her descriptions of people and places were filled with vile and insulting prose.In 1849 she wrote The Countries of Europe; Far Off; Asia and Australia Described.In 1852 she wrote Far Off, Part II, and in 1854 she wrote Africa and America Described
Edited sentence: Born Favell Lee Bevan at Russell Square, London was one of five daughters of Barclays bank co-founder David Bevan.Favell Lee Mortimer (1802 – 1878) born London, England is considered one of the most outspoken, scornful, condescending and anti-Catholic writers of geographic books of the 19th century.Her descriptions of people and places were filled with vile and insulting prose, yet according to Todd Pruzan "For the better part of the 19th century, Mrs.In 1849 she wrote books such as The Countries of Europe; Far Off; Asia and Australia Described and in 1852 she wrote Far Off, Part II and finally Africa and America Described in 1854.Mortimer, a melancholic with her personal life plagued by misery and misfortune spared no wrath in her geographic descriptions of various peoples in her writings of whom she had only gleaned from reading of other books.These books she wrote while only traveling outside of her native England only twice in her lifetime