Original sentence: But two of the windows are noteworthy - the Pre-Raphaelite styled "St Cecilia" in a  green gown, with  roses in the cusps, and the "Millennium" window with its inscription..
Edited sentence: But two of the windows are noteworthy - the Pre-Raphaelite styled "St Cecilia" in a wonderful green gown, with delicate roses in the cusps, and the "Millennium" window with its inscription..