Original sentence: Many students also take classes offered at the Apollo Career Center.The schools have received a rating of "Excellent School" by the Ohio Department of Education during school years '01-'02, '02-'03, '03-'04, '04-'04, '05-'06, and '06-'07.With the availability of surrounding colleges such as OSU Lima and Rhodes State College, Bath students have an opportunity to participate in the post-secondary options program which is sponsored by the Ford Motor Company
Edited sentence: Many students also take advantage of the educational opportunities offered at the Apollo Career Center.The schools have received a rating of 'Excellent School' by the Ohio Department of Education during school years '01-'02, '02-'03, '03-'04, '04-'04, '05-'06, and '06-'07.With the availability of surrounding colleges such as OSU Lima and Rhodes State College, Bath students have an excellent opportunity to participate in the post-secondary options program