Original sentence: However, she eventually obtained a residency position in orthopedic surgery at the Los Angeles County University of Southern California Medical Center.Richardson has Master’s degree from Adelphi University (Garden City, NY)  She entered the medical school in 1988 and received an M.She initially failed her boards after trying to make the USA World Championship team and had to repeat a year of medical school.degree five years later from the University of Louisville School of Medicine
Edited sentence: Richardson has Master’s degree from Adelphi University (Garden City, NY) as a grad assistant for softball     She attended the University of Louisville School of Medicine and received an M.She then entered her five year orthopedic residency program at the University of Southern California.She took a one year leave of absence to participate in the 1996 Olympic Games, where her and her teammates captured the first ever Olympic Gold Medal in the sport of Softball.degree in 1993