Original sentence: Jasmine sees Pat, but is troubled by the attention he pays to Jonna.The cast is expected to do their best during Peak Week, and are assigned to manage the band LMFAO, but Joey reverts to his prior truency, and is fired and sent home
Edited sentence: As the cast's romantic and sexual explorations in Cancun continue, Jasmine sees Pat, but is frustrated by his seeming disinterest in her, and the attention he pays to Jonna.During Peak Week, the cast's responsibilities intensifies as 70% of U.universities are on Spring Break, and they are assigned to manage the band LMFAO, but Joey misses another shift, and is fired and sent home