Original sentence: Local sites include Wabamun Lake, the village marina and pier, several restaurants, a general store, a public library, mini-golf, a golf-course and several RV parks
Edited sentence: Local sites include Wabamun Lake, the village marina and pier, several restaurants including Smoky's Grill [http:www.ca], Derby's General Store, a public library, Trickle Creek MiniGolf , Pineridge Golf Resort  and several RV parks including Kokanee Springs RV Park