Original sentence: More famous alumnae include singer/songwriter Tish Hinojosa, local newspaper columnist Jeanne Jakle, councilwoman Mary Alice Cisneros and former local councilwoman Maria Antonietta Berriozabal and also the exwife of singer Johnny Cash Vivian Loberto
Edited sentence: More famous alumnae include singer/songwriter Tish Hinojosa, local newspaper columnist Jeanne Jakle, councilwoman Mary Alice Cisneros and former local councilwoman Maria Antonietta Berriozabal and also the exwife of singer Johnny Cash, Vivian Loberto