Original sentence: By 1995 he and his Yuan moved to New York.The worked day jobs, and then quit them when theatre work came along.the kept working in the fringe theatre until he started work on Urinetown
Edited sentence: In 1995 he and his wife, actress and writer Ayun Halliday, moved to New York.They kept working in the fringe theatre until he started work on Urinetown.They worked day jobs, and then quit them when theatre work came along