Original sentence: Congressman Ron Paul, a Republican candidate, is the only Presidential hopeful for the 2008 election in the major parties that has called for the abolition of the IRS.Paul asserts that only a third of federal revenue comes from the income tax, and that the federal government could be scaled back to the size it was seven years ago when it was a third smaller
Edited sentence: Congressman Ron Paul, a Republican candidate, is the only Presidential hopeful in the major parties that has called for the abolition of the IRS.He points out that only a third of federal revenue comes from the income tax, and the federal government could be scaled back to the size it was 7 years ago when it was a third smaller