Original sentence: Although the ACWUA made significant gains on the behalf of worker's rights, weeks without income proved challenging for David's family.When Rappaport was 17, his father spoke to a friend, Lou Mansfield about giving his son employment in the factory
Edited sentence: Although the ACWA made significant gains on the behalf of worker's rights, weeks without income proved challenging for David's family.When Rappaport was 17, his father spoke to a family friend, Lou Mansfield, about giving his son employment in the factory