Original sentence: Students graduating from FBA in 2009 were accepted to 25 colleges and universities in the state of Texas and 41 outside the state of Texas.." Acceptances included Auburn University, Belmont University, Biola University, Clemson University, Dallas Baptist University, DePaul University, John Brown University, Oklahoma Baptist University, Pepperdine University, Samford University, Savannah College of Art and Design, Texas A&M University, Texas Tech University, University of Alabama, University of Colorado, University of Florida, University of Georgia, University of Oklahoma, University of Southern California, and the University of Texas at Austin
Edited sentence: Students graduating from FBA in 2009 were accepted to 25 colleges and universities in the state of Texas and 41 outside the state of Texas.." Acceptances included Auburn University, Belmont University, Biola University, Clemson University, Dallas Baptist University, DePaul University, John Brown University, Oklahoma Baptist University, Pepperdine University, Samford University, Savannah College of Art and Design, Texas A&M University, Texas Tech University, University of Alabama, University of Colorado at Boulder, University of Florida, University of Georgia, University of Oklahoma, University of Southern California, and the University of Texas at Austin