Original sentence: A comprehensive set of links on interactive storytelling.A linear story 'runs on rails' from start to finish in the most powerful and expeditious manner possible.Chris Crawford writes, "The experience of interactive storytelling differs substantially from that of a conventional linear story.Erasmatazz - Chris Crawford's website, containing more information, particularly his Erasmatron prototype.Grand Text Auto - a blog on interactive storytelling issues
Edited sentence: A linear story "runs on rails" from start to finish in the most powerful and expeditious manner possible.Erasmatazz - More information, by Chris Crawford.Excellent blog on interactive storytelling issues.The best overall set of links on interactive storytelling.The experience of interactive storytelling differs substantially from that of a conventional linear story