Original sentence: In the evening, eight protesters were throwing rocks and bottles at officers and the officers responded quickly by attempting to remove all of the protesters and news media from the park.Sanjukta Paul, a National Lawyer's Guild observer was beaten repeatedly by an LAPD officer, including a blow to the kidneys, as she attempted to separate police from the crowd
Edited sentence: In the evening, eight protesters began throwing rocks and bottles at officers, leading police commanders to declare the gathering an unlawful assembly and give the order to disperse.Sanjukta Paul, a National Lawyer's Guild observer was beaten repeatedly by an LAPD officer, including a blow to the kidneys, as she attempted to impede the police's progress.The police then cleared the park, using force against those who defied the order