Original sentence: Gregor Evans Smith, 21, died of a drug overdose on April 18 2013, in his father's home on Old Town Road.His father remains critical of New Shoreham Police Department's ineffectual investigations
Edited sentence: Gregor Evans Smith, a college dropout of the University of Rhode Island, died of a drug overdose on April 18 2013, in his father's home on Old Town Road.His father remains critical of New Shoreham Police Department's complete incompetence.Robert Smith subsequently sold his Old Town Road residence on February 20th, 2014, to ease his own financial burdens