Original sentence: Although there is also a convincing argument to be made that since 'nuance' and 'expression' were affected using many other devices as well as vibrato Strauss and Saint-Saëns could easily have been referring to any number of expressive devices that formed part of the late romantic palette
Edited sentence: Although there is also a convincing argument to be made that since 'nuance' and 'expression' were affected using many other devices as well as vibrato, Strauss and Saint-Saëns could easily have been referring to any number of expressive devices that formed part of the late romantic palette