Original sentence: Harish Kapadia.That expedition climbed Rimo III (Dave Wilkinson and Jim Fotheringham were the summit party) but did not succeed on Rimo I.The ascent involved 1500m of significant technical climbing.The first attempts on the Rimo massif were in 1978, by a Japanese expedition which had little success, in 1984 (first ascent of Rimo IV, by an Indian army expedition) and in 1985, by a well-organized Indian/British expedition led by famed Himalayan expert Harish Kapadia.The first, and so far only, ascent of Rimo I was made in 1988 by an Indian/Japanese team led by Hukam Singh and Yoshio Ogata.They climbed the south face to the southwest ridge, starting from a significant pass called Ibex Col on the south side of the mountain.This means that India rigidly controls access to the massif
Edited sentence: This means that Pakistan rigidly controls access to the massif