Original sentence: Flashman's first and middle names appear to be an ironic allusion to Henry Paget, the 1st Marquess of Anglesey and one of the heroes of Waterloo, who cuckolded the Duke of Wellington's brother Henry Wellesley and later married Wellesley's by-then-ex-wife, in one of the period's more celebrated scandals.He was not above forcing himself on a partner, though he only committed an actual rape once in his life (on Narreeman, in Flashman).However, he was a skilled and attentive lover, and at least some of the women in the last class became quite fond of him - though by his own admission, others tried to kill him afterward
Edited sentence: Flashman's first and middle names appear to be an ironic allusion to Henry Paget, 1st Marquess of Anglesey, and one of the heroes of Waterloo, who cuckolded the Duke of Wellington's brother Henry Wellesley and later married Wellesley's by-then-ex-wife, in one of the period's more celebrated scandals.He was not above forcing himself on a partner , though he only committed an actual rape once in his life (on Narreeman, in Flashman).However, he was a skilled and attentive lover, and at least some of the women in the last class became quite fond of him - though by his own admission, others tried to kill him afterwards