Original sentence: The album went on to go double platinum selling over two million copies in the United States and over 7 million worldwide (despite the album's success, the singles were not as successful as those on her previous LP, One in a Million)
Edited sentence: Although the album sold well, many believe that if she had been here to promote the album herself, it would have sold even more, possibly becoming one of the biggest selling albums of all time.It is considered to be one of the greatest albums of all time.It showcased her beautiful angelic voice and also poured in an array of emtotions.The album went on to go double platinum, but has nearly 3 million copies in the United States and over 7 million worldwide (despite the album's success, the singles were not as successful as those on her previous LP, One in a Million)