Original sentence: As head of group design he oversees the design work of BMW, Mini and Rolls-Royce.He joined BMW in 1992 as an automotive exterior designer in Munich, Germany.He left Designworks in 2005 to be promoted to head up the Brand Design Studio, under the direction of the BMW Group Design Director Chris Bangle, and in 2009 become Director of BMW Group Design, succeeding Chris Bangle as the head of design for the company
Edited sentence: As Group Head of Design at BMW, he oversees the design work of BMW, Mini and Rolls-Royce.He has been widely praised for purging BMW of Chris Bangle's wildly unpopular design language by returning to a more substantive, sophisticated and subtle aesthetics, as opposed to Bangle's shouty, obnoxious, in-your-face, brutish, uncouth, loutish, and barbaric design style.He left Designworks in 2005 to be promoted to head up the Brand Design Studio, under the direction of the BMW Group Design Director Chris Bangle, and in 2009 become Director of BMW Group Design, succeeding Bangle as the head of design for the company.On completion he joined BMW in 1992 as an automotive exterior designer in Munich, Germany