Original sentence: Also it is said that people from LHS are rich.David Beckham- major soccer player.Longmeadow High School is also known for its Grammy award-winning music program, which includes an orchestra, a student-run chamber orchestra, two bands, a jazz band, a pep band, two women's choirs, a men's choir, an honors choir, an la cappella women's choir, and an honors la cappella choir.There is a steriotype that the LHS students are stuck-up and snooty, but this is not true.They are just like you.Yes, there are plenty of rich people there but there are plenty of people who are working hard to get by and just wanted a better education for their kids
Edited sentence: Longmeadow High School is also known for its Grammy award-winning music program, which includes an orchestra, a student-run chamber orchestra, two bands, a jazz band, a pep band, two women's choirs, a men's choir, an honors choir, an a cappella women's choir, and an honors a cappella choir