Original sentence: Her latest album, Fatherfucker is a comment on feminine sexuality in pop culture.Some say her songs are meant to shock and confuse the listener.Songs like Shake Yer Dix and Stuff Me Up may appear on the surface to be meaningless, explicit pop songs are said by others to be a commentary on sex and gender roles today
Edited sentence: Her latest album, Fatherfucker, is an astounding comment on feminine sexuality in pop culture.Her songs continually shock and confuse the listener, but are loaded with catchy beats and interesting loops.Songs like Shake Yer Dix and Stuff Me Up are not just a call to get laid.They are accurate and poignant commentary on sex and gender roles today