Original sentence: , as aggression or active discrimination, especially where they formed the majority of the population.As is often the case with policies intended to forge or bolster national identity in a state, Magyarization was perceived by other ethnic groups such as the Romanians, Slovaks, Ukrainians, Serbs, Croats, etc.Magyarization (also Magyarisation, Hungarization, Hungarisation, Hungarianization, Hungarianisation) is a kind of assimilation or acculturation, a process by which non-Hungarian elements came to adopt Hungarian (also called "Magyar") culture and language due to social pressure (often, though not exclusively, in the form of a coercive policy).While anyone who resisted Magyarization was, indeed, subject to political and cultural handicaps, he was not subject to the kinds of civic and fiscal chicaneries (prejudical court proceedings, overtaxation, biased application of social and economic legislation) that some of Hungary's neighbors often inflicted on their ethnic minorities
Edited sentence: , especially in areas where they formed the majority of the population.Anyone who resisted Magyarization was subject to political and cultural handicaps as well as civic and fiscal chicaneries (prejudical court proceedings, overtaxation, biased application of social and economic legislation).As is often the case with discriminatory policies intended to suppress minorities in order forge or bolster national identity in a state, Magyarization was a form of aggression and active discrimination to the other ethnic groups such as the Romanians, Slovaks, Ukrainians, Serbs, Croats, etc.Magyarization (also Magyarisation, Hungarization, Hungarisation, Hungarianization, Hungarianisation) is a forcible state-assisted process of assimilation or acculturation, a process by which non-Hungarian minorities adopt Hungarian (also called "Magyar") culture and language due to coercive policy by the Hungarian government