Original sentence: " Musical Quarterly 27: 123–45."Sensemayá: The layer procedures of Silvestre Revueltas".Charles K.Cuba's bola de Nieve: A Creative Looking Glass for Culture and the Artistic Self.Ithaca, New York, Cornell University.Latin American Music Review.Otto Mayer-Serra.Ricardo Zohn-Muldoon.Silvestre Revueltas: A discussion of the background and influences affecting his compositional style.University of Texas at Austin
Edited sentence: " Musical Quarterly 27:123–45."Sensemayá: The Layer Procedures of Silvestre Revueltas"."Silvestre Revueltas: A Discussion of the Background and Influences Affecting His Compositional Style".1 (Spring-Summer): 18–49.Austin: University of Texas at Austin.Cuba's Bola de Nieve: A Creative Looking Glass for Culture and the Artistic Self.Hoag, Charles K.Ithaca, New York: Cornell University.Latin American Music Review / Revista de Música Latinoamericana 9, no.Mayer-Serra, Otto.Zohn-Muldoon, Ricardo