Original sentence: The Bush Administration purportedly ordered government personnel not to associate with The Intelligence Summit or attend its conferences; the New York Sun reported, "(B)oth John Deutch and James Woolsey abruptly left their positions at Intelligence Summit, according to its president, John Loftus, who said their departure is part of a campaign by the directorate of national intelligence to punish him for releasing the recordings...."Woolsey denied that there had been any pressure to withdraw, stating that "If Loftus is saying that anyone pressured me about this issue he is quite wrong.The Summit describes itself as "non-partisan," but UPI reported of the 2007 conference that "most, if not all panelists seemed to be preaching to the choir
Edited sentence: "  Legal analyst Victoria Toensing said, "This is not a mainstream conference with recognized names in the field.I've been in the intelligence and terrorism world a long time, and I would not suggest going to this conference for intelligence or terrorism information.The Bush Administration purportedly ordered government personnel not to associate with The Intelligence Summit or attend its conferences; the New York Sun reported, "(B)oth John Deutch and James Woolsey abruptly left their positions at Intelligence Summit, according to its president, John Loftus, who said their departure is part of a campaign by the directorate of national intelligence to punish him for releasing the recordings...."  Woolsey denied that there had been any pressure to withdraw, stating that "If Loftus is saying that anyone pressured me about this issue he is quite wrong.UPI reported of the 2007 conference that "most, if not all panelists seemed to be preaching to the choir