Original sentence: Funding for Reason comes from corporations and other organizations including the American Petroleum Institute, Chevron, ExxonMobil, DaimlerChrysler, Ford Motors, General Motors and Shell
Edited sentence: It is significant to note that funding for Reason comes from corporations and other organizations including the American Petroleum Institute, Chevron, ExxonMobil, DaimlerChrysler, Ford Motors, General Motors and Shell.There can be little doubt that these financial backers would prefer commuters drive automobiles rather than take public transportation