Original sentence: " Osama bin Laden says he had personally directed his followers to attack the World Trade Center In the video, Bin Laden states, "We had agreed with the Commander-General Muhammad Atta, Allah have mercy on him, that all the operations should be carried out within 20 minutes, before Bush and his administration notice.Some video experts have challenged the tape's authenticity,  but others argue that Bin Laden's distorted appearance on the tape can be attributed to tape transfer artifact.The detailed timeline of Bin Laden's having prior knowledge were revealed in a September 2002 interview documentary-maker Yosri Fouda conducted with Khalid Sheikh Mohammed and Ramzi Binalshibh: the decision to launch a "martyrdom operation inside America" was made by Al Qaeda's military committee in early 1999; Atta, after deciding on the date (9/11/01)for the attacks, informed Binalshibh of this date on August 29, 2001, and Bin Laden was given this information on September 6, 2001.presidential election in 2004, in a taped statement, bin Laden acknowledged al-Qaeda's involvement in the attacks on the U
Edited sentence: " Osama bin Laden says he had personally directed his followers to attack the World Trade Center In the video, he says, "We had agreed with the Commander-General Muhammad Atta, Allah have mercy on him, that all the operations should be carried out within 20 minutes, before Bush and his administration notice.Atta, after deciding on the date (9/11/01)for the attacks, informed Binalshibh of this date on August 29, 2001, and Bin Laden was given this information on September 6, 2001.His distorted appearance on the tape has been attributed to tape transfer artifact.The detailed timeline of Bin Laden's having prior knowledge were revealed in a September 2002 interview documentary-maker Yosri Fouda conducted with Khalid Sheikh Mohammed and Ramzi Binalshibh: the decision to launch a "martyrdom operation inside America" was made by Al Qaeda's military committee in early 1999;.presidential election in 2004, in a taped statement, bin Laden publicly acknowledged al-Qaeda's involvement in the attacks on the U