Original sentence: - Singer and guitarist - (He did, "Through The Eyes Of Little Children " and "I Betcha Heaven's On A Dirt Road").After a stroke ( Country ) Born 10-7-1940 in Swainsboro, Emmanuel County, GA, U.Born in Swainsboro, Georgia, Wilson picked up the guitar and taught himself how to play.In 1975, he released his debut album New Beginnings.Larry Jon Wilson (October 7, 1940 – June 21, 2010) was an American country singer, guitarist and musician.Three more albums on the Monument record label imprint of CBS Records followed, Let Me Sing My Song to You (1976), Loose Change (1977), and The Sojourner (1979)
Edited sentence: At the age of thirty, Larry Jon Wilson picked up the guitar and taught himself how to play.Five years later, in 1975, he released his debut album New Beginnings which received high praise from music critics.Three more albums on the Monument label of CBS Records followed, including Let Me Sing My Song to You (1976), Loose Change (1977), and The Sojourner (1979)