Original sentence: Most people below the age of Medicare entitlement obtain their insurance from an employer based insurance scheme
Edited sentence: Consequently many millions are condemned to the likelyhood of an early death by a combination of the effects of corporate greed and political inaction induced by the lobbying by the health insurance industry.However such insurance is not offered by many employers, especially those who have resisted representation of their emplyees by trade unions.Insurance is not available for pre-existing conditions (which has the effect of reducing mobility of labor).Losing a job usually means losing health insurance.Many people below the age of Medicare entitlement obtain their insurance from an employer based insurance scheme