Original sentence: Excerpt: "A multiple regression analysis reveals a complex relationship with some dimensions of religiosity encouraging homicide and other dimensions discouraging it.His conclusion, that focus only in the crime of homicide, is that there is a correlation (and perhaps a causal relationship) of higher homicide rates, not with Christianity, but with dualistic Christian beliefs, something Jensen defines as the strong belief in all of the following : God, heaven, devil and hell.In a response  to the study by Paul, he builds on and refines Paul's analysis
Edited sentence: However, he reaches similar conclusions regarding the negative correlation between religion and morality in a later issue of the same journal.Jensen sees a correlation not with religion in Western democracies in general, but with dualistic Christian beliefs, something Jensen defines as the strong belief in all of the following : God, heaven, devil and hell