Original sentence: Dunk Island 4km from the northeast shore.Surrounded by World Heritage rainforest on one side and the World Heritage listed Great Barrier Reef on the other, Mission Beach is home to many wildlife species, most notable is the Cassowary.The beachfront, flanked by green mountains rising just a little way inland coupled with the many tropical islands visible offshore
Edited sentence: Dunk Island 4km from the northeast shore is a favourite holiday destination.Surrounded by World Heritage rainforest on one side and the World Heritage listed Great Barrier Reef on the other, Mission Beach is home to many amazing wildlife species, most notable is the Cassowary.The beautiful beachfront,  flanked by green mountains rising just a little way inland coupled with the many tropical islands visible offshore make it the perfect relaxing holiday destination or a seachange for those wishing to leave the city behind