Original sentence: The principal guiding point is that a Jewish woman should not dress in a way that causes other men to stare at her.This does not mean dressing poorly; in fact, she is required to dress nicely, but not more then that.mixed sex swimming (Conservative or Masorti Jews do not see it as forbidden, while Orthodox authorities on the whole disapprove of mixed swimming)
Edited sentence: The principal guiding point is that a Jewish woman should not dress in a way that causes other men to look at her.This does not mean dressing poorly, in fact she must dress nicely, but not more then that.This is in contrast to the common behaviour of dressing up when going out, but wearing whatever at home.mixed sex swimming (Conservative Jews (also known as Masorti Jews) do not see it as forbidden, while Orthodox authorities on the whole disapprove of mixed swimming)