Original sentence: (The others are New Creation Church & Faith Community Baptist Church).According to its critics, they pointed out the extravagant spending in various ways such as Titanium cross in the building.Although City Harvest claims to be a Christian denomination of its own, its doctrines show uncanny resembalance to that of the Charismatic movement.Currently, City Harvest Church is one of the three "Mega-Churches" in Singapore.Fourteen branch churches in Malaysia, India, Indonesia and the Philippines affliate directly with the Singapore church, which now holds a Titanium-clad building, fully paid over a 7-year funding campaign among its own members.Other churches (Such as New Creation Church & Faith Community Baptist Church) have been instituted emulating the City Harvest concept and its doctrine.The organizer of this trip, Ulf Ekman, advocates Christian Zionism.They also claimed, in 2003, a scandal involving the church soliciting the church members (including non-chinese members) to buy Ho Yeow Sun’s secular chinese Pop music albums, who recently became popular singer among the world’s chinese communities.They also pointed out the political nature of the Israel Study Trip, which include conference with Israeli politicians & Messianic Jewish scholars
Edited sentence: Although City Harvest claims to be a Christian denomination of its own.Fourteen branch churches in Malaysia, India, Indonesia and the Philippines affliate directly with the Singapore church, which now holds a Titanium-clad building, paid in full over a 7-year funding campaign among its own members