Original sentence: On February 16 2008, Japanese broadcaster NHK announced in a news report that Toshiba would cease production of products for the rival HD DVD format, heralding Blu-ray as the victor in the HD format war
Edited sentence: On February 16 2008, Japanese broadcaster NHK announced in a news report that Toshiba would cease production of products for the rival HD DVD format, heralding the inferior Blu-ray as the victor in the HD format war