Original sentence: Although the plan was met with a largely tepid reception the budget eventually passed with a few minor changes after the November elections.More than 1500 U.Taped recordings (, with old friend and author, Doug Wead, however, suggest he did use the illegal drug marijuana at some time in his past.troops have been killed and over 10,000 have been wounded in action
Edited sentence: Although the plan was met with a largely tepid reception (), the budget eventually passed with a few minor changes after the November elections.Bush's foreign policy is influenced by the neo-conservative think tank Project for the New American Century, many of whose members have prominent positions in the Bush administration.Critics described Bush's 2005 address as "unabashedly aggressive.In his 2005 inaugural address, he outlined his vision for a Pax Americana, alluding to new foreign policy set forth in the National Security Strategy of the United States of America (pdf).Many argue that the administration is far more inspired by the Heritage Foundation, and to a lesser degree the Cato Institute, although these organizations lack representation in the administration.More than 1400 U.Supporters of Bush see this policy as a necessary rejection of "balance of power" politics and a redefinition of America's role in the international forum, while critics of this policy consider it arrogant and dangerous on a global and historical scale.Taped recordings (, ) with old friend and author, Doug Wead, however, suggest he did use the illegal drug marijuana at some time in his past.troops have been killed and over 9000 have been wounded in action