Original sentence: La mer is a masterpiece of suggestion and subtlety in its rich depiction of the ocean, which combines unusual orchestration with daring impressionistic harmonies
Edited sentence: It is a masterpiece of suggestion and subtlety in its rich depiction of the ocean, which combines unusual orchestration with daring impressionistic harmonies.Several authors have claimed that La mer sounds like nothing before it.Today, La mer is widely regarded as one of the greatest orchestral works of the twentieth century