Original sentence: IRA sympathizers in Hartford, Connecticut dedicated a monument to Bobby Sands and the other hunger strikers in 1997.In Milan, 5,000 students burned the Union Jack and shouted 'Freedom for Ulster during a march
Edited sentence: In Milan, 5,000 students burnt the Union Jack and shouted 'Freedom for Ulster during a march.The people of Hartford, Connecticut, dedicated a monument to Bobby Sands and the other hunger strikers in 1997