Original sentence: Called "the King of Kings of Qawwali" and popular in Pakistan, India and Southern Asia, Khan fascinated Lane  with his wide vocal range and the intertwining of his voice and the instrument.His favorite painter was Johannes Vermeer.Lane was also a lover of great paintings and often spent ree time on the road visiting museums.Lane was influenced by many other artists but an important one was Pakistani musician Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan
Edited sentence: Called “the King of Kings of Qawwali” and very popular in Pakistan, India and Southern Asia, Khan fascinated Lane deeply with his wide vocal range and the intertwining of his voice with the notes from his instrument.His personal favorite painter was 17th century, Dutch great Johannes Vermeer, who coincidentally like Lane, was widely accepted as a gifted artist yet never obtained any real personal wealth from his tremendous talent.Lane had a particular love of off-beat horror movies, a passion he shared with fellow guitar great, Buckethead, who also cited Lane as one of his biggest musical inspirations.Lane had a passion for the cinema, both in the USA and abroad, including the ability to recall and recite dialogue from movies that interested him.Lane once said, "Music is kind of like painting because both have color, tone, texture and a story.Lane was also a genuine lover of great paintings and often spent some of his free time on the road visiting museums, occasionally attracting small crowds as he educated visitors about the history of a particular work of art, or its creator.Musically, Lane was influenced by many other artists but an important one was Pakistani musician Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan.Vermeer was noted for his attention to the fine details of his work, also a characteristic of Lane