Original sentence: Sir James Paul McCartney, MBE (born 18 June 1942) is an English rock singer-songwriter, composer, multi-instrumentalist, poet, entrepreneur, painter, record producer, film producer and animal-rights activist
Edited sentence: Sir James Paul McCartney, MBE (born 18 June 1942) is an Academy Award-winning English rock singer-songwriter, composer, multi-instrumentalist, poet, entrepreneur, painter, record producer, film producer and animal-rights activist