Original sentence: Pashtuns are the majority, but there are also Balochs who are concentrated in the south, as well as smaller minorities of Hazara and Brahui and Tajik, who are primarily resident in Lashkar Gah
Edited sentence: Pashtuns are the majority, who are 92% of the population, and there are also Balochs who are concentrated in the south, as well as smaller minorities of Hazara, Brahui and Tajik, who live mostly in Lashkar Gah