Original sentence: He achieved his greatest success as  Monsieur LeClerc in BBC's 'Allo 'Allo.His earlier TV work included a regular spot as a comic on The One O'clock Show and Happy Go Lucky a childrens' TV show during the 1960s
Edited sentence: He achieved his greatest success as Monsieur LeClerc in BBC's 'Allo 'Allo.His earlier TV work included a regular spot as a comic on The One O'clock Show and Happy Go Lucky a children's TV show during the 1960s