Original sentence: The two men then examined the area and discovered — on the upper curve of the Main Street south curbstone — a "very fresh scar" impact that, to each of them, looked like a bullet had struck there and taken a chip out of the curbstone concrete
Edited sentence: The two men then examined the area and discovered — on the upper curve of the Main Street south curbstone — a "very fresh scar" impact that, to each of them, looked like a bullet had struck there and taken a chip out of the curbstone concrete and the concrete debris hit Tague