Original sentence: Some writers who have been published by Palladium have previously stated that Kevin Siembieda's method of management was too centralized, and not adapted to the size the company had reached (no delegation, lack of dialogue with co-workers, bad human relationships); this was cited as a reason they were no longer writing for the company (though one of the writers has since apologized for the manner in which he made his statements)
Edited sentence: Some writers who have been published by Palladium have previously stated on RPGNet Forums (which is a forum that is clearly hostile to Palladium Books in general and to Kevin Siembieda personally) that Kevin Siembieda's method of management was too centralized, and not adapted to the size the company had reached (no delegation, lack of dialogue with co-workers, bad human relationships); this was cited as a reason they were no longer writing for the company (though one of the writers has since apologized for the manner in which he made his statements)