Original sentence: Bishop Brian Tamaki is a controversial leader of The Destiny Church, a Christian movement which has become well known in New Zealand.Destiny Church.Destiny New Zealand.Destiny is controversial not only for its anti-homosexual views, but also for tithing 10% of the income of all its members and for it stands against for what they belive to be a decline of Christian moral & family values in the nation.He is seen by some as being highly charismatic, while others see him as a 'spin doctor type figure.Tamaki also gave rise to a right-wing theological political party, Destiny New Zealand, which he says will be in control of the New Zealand government in the next five years (ie by 2010).Tamaki has been subject to satire by various people.Tamaki preaches a conservative biblical morality, he is widely known for his outspoken anti-gay views and his opposition to the Civil Union Act, which gives the right to both homosexual and hetrosexual couples to join in a civil union, for this he has been criticised extensively by gay activists
Edited sentence: (ie by 2010).Destiny Church also gave rise to the conservative political party, Destiny New Zealand, which Tamaki says will be in control of the New Zealand government in the next five years.Pastor Brian Tamaki is the  charismatic leader and founder of Destiny Church, a Christian movement which has become well known in New Zealand for its stand against the decline of Christian moral & family values in the nation.Tamaki preaches a conservative biblical morality, and has been harshly criticised by gay activists for his views against homosexual behaviour, and his opposition to the Civil Union Bill, which gives the right to homosexual couples to join in a civil union