Original sentence: Harry "Hank" Feldman (November 10, 1919, New York, New York - March 16, 1962, Fort Smith, Arkansas) was a Major League Baseball pitcher who played for the New York Giants from 1941 to 1946.The players who had jumped to the Mexican League had trouble getting back into Organized Baseball
Edited sentence: Harry "Hank" Feldman (November 10, 1919, New York City - March 16, 1962, Fort Smith, Arkansas) was a Major League Baseball pitcher who played for the New York Giants from 1941 to 1946.The players who had jumped to the Mexican League had trouble getting back into organized baseball