Original sentence: Ranmoor, like other Sheffield University owned halls of residence, will be knocked down as part of the "Student Residences Strategy"; modern student accommodation will replace the buildings on the same site and will be complete by 2008/9
Edited sentence: Ranmoor, like other Sheffield University owned halls of residence, will thankfully be knocked down as part of the "Student Residences Strategy"; modern student accommodation will replace the buildings on the same site and will be complete by 2008/9