Original sentence: The 2003 invasion of Iraq, alternatively the Iraq War, Second Gulf War or Third Gulf War, and by proponents of the invasion as the Liberation Of Iraq, was a war that began 20 March 2003 fought between a coalition consisting primarily of American and British, but also Polish, Australian and many other nations' forces, and Iraq.The invasion began without the explicit backing of the United Nations Security Council, although it was prompted by Iraq's repeated breaches of Security Council resolutions regarding Iraqi disarmament inter alia
Edited sentence: The 2003 invasion of Iraq, alternatively by some proponents of the invasion and by some who were not initially supportive of the invasion but came to appreciate the toppling of Saddam Hussein as the Liberation Of Iraq,  and also known as the Iraq War, Second Gulf War or Third Gulf War was a war that began 20 March 2003 fought between a Coalition of the willing consisting primarily of American and British, but also Polish, Australian and many other nations' forces, and Iraq.The invasion was prompted by the repeated and flagrant violations of the resolutions of the  United Nations Security Council and although it was prompted by Iraq's repeated breaches of Security Council resolutions regarding Iraqi disarmament inter alia it the UN controversially failed to take any action against Iraq