Original sentence: Queen Elizabeth visited Oxford in September 1592, and he took part as replier in moral philosophy in an academic disputation held for her amusement, and at the same time was appointed to provide for plays in Christ Church
Edited sentence: Gwinne also had significant connections to the circle of Sir Philip Sidney.Queen Elizabeth visited Oxford in September 1592, and he took part as replier in moral philosophy in an academic disputation held for her amusement, defending the Moderns against the Ancients and being cut short by the proctors,; and at the same time was appointed to provide for plays in Christ Church