Original sentence: Connie White, his wife, is now the mayor of Beach City.He was a prominent citizen of Beach City.died on January 19, 2007
Edited sentence: Connie White, his wife, is now the mayor of the biggest little city in Ohio, Beach City, OH.He was the greatest man that ever lived within the walls of Beach City.If there was a Mt.Rushmore of Beach City icons, he would be George Washington.died on January 19th, 2007