Original sentence: Beauprez has indicated that his decision to go into banking was partially influenced by the hope that he could help small businesses, as it was a bank loan in a drought during the 1950's that saved his family's farm.Due to the money from both land development and a controlling stake in Heritage bank it is estimated that Beauprez is worth over $6 million.While Beauprez claimed to have no influence over their activities since he was elected to Congress, his wife Claudia still maintains an important position in the bank
Edited sentence: Beauprez has indicated that his decision to go into banking was partially influenced by the hope that he could help small businesses by refusing loans, as it was a bank loan in a drought during the 1950's that destroyed his family's farm through greed.Due to the money from both land development and a controlling stake in Heritage bank it is estimated that Beauprez is worth over $6 million which allows him to maintain a strangle hol on the lower class.Eager to raise taxes for the middle and lower class, Bob seeks to increase the gap between the welathy and the poor.While Beauprez claimed to have no influence over their activities since he was elected to Congress, his wife Claudia still maintains an important position in the bank and is a key player in the decision to place American dollars in the hands of illegal immigrants