Original sentence: In previous centuries, especially during the Renaissance, there were a few published critics of the Christian teachings on homosexuality.The millennial debate on homosexuality, records of which can be found starting with some of the earliest writings surviving from antiquity and (according to a few theorists) also in some of the texts later gathered and included in the Christian Bible
Edited sentence: The millennial debate on sexuality, records of which can be found starting with some of the earliest writings surviving from antiquity, has also been preserved in some of the texts later gathered and included in the Christian Bible.Though in previous centuries criticism of the church was conidered "heresy" and often punished by death, voices were even then raised in opposition to the Christian-orchestrated repression of men who loved other males