Original sentence: According to Moll, a Public Ivy is a public university or college that nonetheless provides a collegiate experience comparable to the prestigious Ivy League schools, and at a less expensive price.In particular, the idea of eight Public Ivies, mirroring that of the original Ivy League, was first coined by Richard Moll in a book titled The Public Ivies: America's Flagship Undergraduate Colleges (1985, ISBN 0670582050).Public Ivy is a term used to describe public or state universities of the United States whose prestige is analogous to that of the Ivy League universities, all but one of which are entirely private.The athletes at the Division I-A Public Ivies, which generate a large amount of television revenue for the universities they have been recruited to represent, receive athletic scholarships.Thus, regardless of other complicating factors such as geography, school size, the "Public Ivies" would still not be able to join the Ivy League (which does not provide scholarships nor generate televsion revenues)
Edited sentence: According to Moll, a Public Ivy is a public university or college that nonetheless provides a collegiate experience comparable to the prestigious Ivy League schools, and at a cheaper price.In particular, the idea of eight public ivies, mirroring that of the original Ivy League, was first coined by Richard Moll in a book titled The Public Ivies: America's Flagship Undergraduate Colleges (1985, ISBN 0670582050).Public Ivy is a term used to describe public or state universities of the United States whose prestige is analogous to that of the Ivy League universities, all of which are private.The athletes at the Division I-A Public Ivies, although they generate a large amount of television revenue for the universities they have been recruited to represent (in some cases offsetting university subsidies for football or basketball), nonetheless still occasionally receive athletic scholarships.Thus, regardless of other complicating factors such as geography, school size, the "Public Ivies" would still not be able to join the Ivy League