Original sentence: He graduated from Colorado College with a BA in English and went on to pursue a medical fellowship at the Stanford University School of Medicine
Edited sentence: He graduated from Colorado College with a BA in English.He pursued an undergraduate medical fellowship at Stanford University, yet was rejected when applying to the University of British Columbia medical school and chose to sail around the Pacific with his wife for 18 months eventually settling in New Zealand and pursuing farm work.Until the age of 21 he planned to become a medical doctor