Original sentence: - Kris Granade.Doug Hall is a teacher at cedarcrest high school.He is my favorite teacher, he teaches my 5th period Digi comm class.I LOVE HALL
Edited sentence: After earning a chemical engineering degree from the University of Maine he joined Procter & Gamble where he rose to the rank of Master Marketing Inventor - inventing and shipping a record 9 innovations in 12 months.American Inventor.Doug Hall is an inventor most known for his appearance on the ABC television series American Inventor.Doug Hall's home page.Doug began his inventing career at age 12, inventing and selling a line of magic and juggling kits.Doug is the founder and CEO of the Eureka.Increase your rate of success at USA Today.Jump Start Your BUSINESS Brain (Emmis Books, 2001).Jump Start Your Brain with David Wecker (Time Warner, 1995).Jump Start Your MARKETING Brain (Emmis Books, 2005).Maverick Mindset with David Wecker (Simon & Schuster, 1997).Ranch located in Cincinnati with offices in London, UK and Monterrey, Mexico.The R&D team of Eureka Ranch have developed an AI system called Merwyn Technology.The Ranch is an “invention & research think tank” that specializes in creating new products and services for corporate clients such as American Express, Ford, Nike and Walt Disney.This system is used to evaluate abstract ideas before additional effort is used to substantiate it