Original sentence: Jimmy, pitted his damaged car before the green fell, and Harry never returned to action.Suddenly, Jimmy furiously veered right into Steven Reed's (Harry's son) mount sending him airborne, and sliding across the speedway
Edited sentence: Jimmy, pitted his damaged car before the green fell, and Reed never returned to action.Suddenly, Jimmy furiously veered right into Steven Reed (Harry's son)sending him airborne, and sliding across the speedway