Original sentence: Taylor Dayne (born Leslie Wunderman, March 7 1962) is an American pop vocalist, dance artist, and actress.Taylor Dayne has sold anywhere between 10 and 25 million albums  and millions of singles worldwide; and she released her fifth  album in February 2008 to positive reviews -  her first recording studio album for over eight years
Edited sentence: Taylor Dayne (born Leslie Wunderman, March 7 1962) is a very sucessful American pop vocalist, dance artist, and actress who has had 17 Top Ten and 4 Number One Hits.Taylor Dayne has sold anywhere between 25 and 50 million albums  and millions of singles worldwide; and she released her fifth  album in February 2008 to positive reviews -  her first recording studio album for over eight years