Original sentence: It is a weekend full of tradition that all lake members are invited to enjoy.Righter, and stands at the corner of Southwynde Drive and Indian Road.Roads were laid out and the land divided into plots for year round homes.The resulting lake, Lenape Lake, was named after the earliest inhabitants of the area, the Leni Lenape Indians of the Delaware tribe
Edited sentence: As the water rose, the dreams and years of planning culminated in success.It is fun filled weekend, full of tradition, that all lake members are invited to enjoy.Lenape Lake was born, named after the earliest inhabitants of the area, the Leni Lenape Indians of the Delaware tribe.Roads were laid out and the land divided for a beautiful area of year round homes.righter, and stands at the corner of Southwynde Drive and Indian Road