Original sentence: '  He was an outspoken and influential advocate of increased military spending and a hard line against the Soviet Union, while supporting social welfare programs, civil rights, and the labor movement.In the 1970s Wolfowitz served as an aide to Democratic Senator Henry M.Jackson, whose political philosophies and positions have been cited as an influence on a number of key figures associated with neoconservatism, including Wolfowitz and Richard Perle; Jackson "was the quintessential 'Cold War liberal.Most notably, Wolfowitz served in the U.President Richard Nixon, under pressure from Senator Jackson, who was unhappy with the SALT I strategic arms limitations talks and the policy of détente, dismissed the head of the U
Edited sentence: A former aide to conservative Democratic Senator Henry M.Jackson in the 1970s, Wolfowitz also served in the U.Jackson, who was unhappy with the SALT I strategic arms limitations talks and the policy of détente, dismissed the head of the U.President Richard Nixon under pressure from U.Senator Henry M