Original sentence: The Young LNP aims to provide a setting for young people aged between 16 and 30 to express their political views and contribute to the shaping of Queensland’s political landscape.The Young LNP is made up of local branches, which are spread across the state from the Gold Coast in the south to Cairns in the north.There is a focus on campaigning, policy development, education and training and host a variety of social events
Edited sentence: The Young LNP is an organisation which provides a forum for young people aged between 16 and 30 to express their political views and contribute to the shaping of Queensland’s political landscape.The Young LNP is made up of local branches, which are spread across the State From The Gold Coast in the South as far as Cairns in the North.They have a focus on campaigning, policy development, education and training; and host a variety of social events