Original sentence: It has approximately 24,000 students, including nearly 3,000 international students.It is spread across four campuses: there are two campuses in Bedfordshire in Bedford, and Luton; and two campuses in Buckinghamshire, in Aylesbury for students studying Nursing and Midwifery, and in Milton Keynes, where business studies, electronic engineering, and telecommunications are taught.The University of Bedfordshire is a public university in the south of England with campuses in Bedfordshire and Buckinghamshire, England.The university was created in August 2006 following approval by the Privy Council by merging the University of Luton and the Bedford campus of De Montfort University
Edited sentence: A campus in Aylesbury, Buckinghamshire is for students studying Nursing and Midwifery.A further campus in Milton Keynes, Buckinghamshire, teaches business studies, electronic engineering, and telecommunications.It has approximately 24,000 students.Nearly 3,000 international students study with the university.The University of Bedfordshire is a rapidly expanding university in the south of England with four campuses across Bedfordshire and Buckinghamshire.The university was created by the merger of the University of Luton and the Bedford campus of De Montfort University in August 2006 following approval by the Privy Council.There are campuses in Bedford and Luton, the two largest towns in Bedfordshire, England