Original sentence: During the final news conference at the Charity fashion show, where Maria had said that all the designs worn were Maria Gianni originals, a brave Michelle walked up to the podium, interrupting the news conference, and stunned the crowd, by declaring that Maria Gianni is a liar -- calling her out for her brazen thefts of her designs, and setting the stage for a battle between the two -- and also allowing Michelle to finally take the credit long overdue her for her designs.Even though she feels she is in way over her head, this could well be the business that could help spell the end of the House of Gianni.Michelle Randall met handsome Lance Miller, a CPA, who owns his own firm, and the two were happily married for some time.She bravely quit Gianni, and has now begun to set up her own design business
Edited sentence: During the final news conference at the Charity fashion show, where Maria had said that all the designs worn were Maria Gianni originals, a brave Michelle walked up to the podium, interrupting the news conference, and stunned the crowd, by declaring that Maria Gianni is a liar; calling her out for her brazen thefts of her designs, and setting the stage for a battle between the two; and also Michelle being able to finally take the credit; long overdue her for her designs.Michelle Randall met handsome Lance Miller, a CPA, who owns his own firm; and were happily married for some time.She bravely quit Gianni, and has now begun to set up her own design business, even though she feels she is in way over her head; this could well be the business that could help spell the well deserved end of Maria, John, Tania and the House of Gianni itself