Original sentence: But after some soul searching on both their parts Manhattan's compation for humanity is renewed, and Manhattan returns to Earth with Silk Spectre.He takes her to Mars and after she asks him to save the earth, to which Manhattan responds he is no longer feels contected to humanity
Edited sentence: He takes her to Mars and after she asks him to save the earth, explains he is no longer interested in humanity.His interest in humanity renewed, Manhattan returns to Earth with Silk Spectre.Probing her memories, he discovers the Comedian was her father