Original sentence: , a youth-focused political party, is dedicated to the freedom, good governance and dignity of all Kenyans.Eighty percent of youth ages 18-35 are underemployed or unemployed.Its objective is socio-economic transformation and sustainable prosperity for Kenya.The youth of Kenya are widely held to be neglected by the state, which is seen as controlled by tribalistic, corrupt, old men who steal from the state.Through their own party, they hope to field young progressive candidates in the 2007 general elections
Edited sentence: , a youth focused political party, is dedicated to freedom, good governance and dignity of all Kenyans.Eighty percent of youth ages 18-35 are unemplyed or unemployed.Our objective is socio-economic transformation and sustainable prosperity for Kenya.The youth of Kenya are neglected by the state, which is controlled by tribalistic, corrupt, old men who steal from the state.Through their own party they ae going to able to field young progressive candiadtes in the 2007 general elections