Original sentence: In October 2011, the university's policy on sexuality and alcohol consumption attracted attention when the university introduced a requirement that its employees must sign a "Personal Lifestyle Statement" in which they agree to adhere to the following principles as a condition of their employment:
Edited sentence: In October 2011, the university's policy against homosexuality attracted attention in newspapers around the world when the university introduced a requirement that its employees must sign a "Personal Lifestyle Statement" in which they agree to adhere to the following principles as a condition of their employment: