Original sentence: After nine days in hospital, he died, an outstanding racer, and a great loss to the motorcycling world.McIntyre still competed in non-championship events, and it was at one such event at Oulton Park, Cheshire in August 1962 that he won the 250 cc race, and then started in the 500 cc race on his Manx Norton
Edited sentence: After nine days in hospital, he passed away, an outstanding racer, and a great loss to the motorcycling world.McIntyre still competed in non-championship events, and it was at one such event at Oulton Park, Cheshire in August 1962  that he won the 250 cc race, and then started in the 500 cc race on his Manx Norton