Original sentence: A section of the university community has criticised this decision.The University of New England is well known for their investment in a college system, which is a draw for prospective students
Edited sentence: A large section of the university community has criticised this decision, with many feeling that it showed a lack of regard for the wellbeing of the students.The University of New England is quite well known for their investment in a college system, which is a major draw for prospective students