Original sentence: Claire starts driving, but Norman manages to grab onto the edge of the truck.Norman grabs Claire's leg so that she cannot escape, but the paranormal figure grabs Norman, dragging him to the bottom of the lake, and making him let go of her leg so she can float to the top and be safe
Edited sentence: Claire starts driving, but the demented and bloodied Norman manages to grab onto the edge of the truck.Norman grabs Claire's leg so that she cannot escape, but the paranormal figure grabs Norman, dragging him to the bottom of the lake to his doom, and making him let go of her leg so she can float to the top and be safe.The sadistic Norman then taunts Claire by telling her how Madison really died: Norman intentionally murdered her by drowning