Original sentence: By 1992, Marikina had become an industrialized urban municipality under the leadership of Bayani Fernando.Marikina River was transformed into a  waterway, with  parks along the riverbanks
Edited sentence: By 1992, Marikina had become a beautiful and industrialized urban municipality under the leadership of Bayani Fernando.Marikina River was transformed into a beautiful waterway, with beautiful parks along the riverbanks