Original sentence: Hallucinatory, febrile songs by Hersh at times touched on past bouts of mental illness that she has referred to occasionally in interviews, with chilling and moving results.Originally fronted by two distinctive lead singers Kristin Hersh and Tanya Donelly, who both wrote the group's songs, Throwing Muses are known for performing music with shifting tempos, creative chord progressions, unorthodox song structures, and surreal lyrics.The group was set apart from their peers by Hersh's stark and candid writing style, which sometimes included startling insights about her life; Donelly's hypnotic pop stylings; and Narcizo's driving beats
Edited sentence: Hersh has suffered from genuine mental illness, which can lead to her insights being both more chilling and more touching than her contemporaries.Originally fronted by lead singers Kristin Hersh and Tanya Donelly, who both wrote the group's songs, Throwing Muses is known for performing music with shifting tempos, creative chord progressions, unorthodox song structures, and poetic, surreal lyrics.The Muses were set apart from their peers by Hersh's stark and startling lyrics, which veer between surrealism and often shockingly candid insights into her personal life