Original sentence: Ruins have collaborated with several other artists, including prominent avant-garde figure Derek Bailey, guitarist Keiji Haino and Umezu Kazutoki.The Japanese duo of Yoshida Tatsuya and Sasaki Hisashi are Ruins, a twisted progressive rock outfit that specialize in short, sharp, numbers that resemble the improvisational convulsions of Boredoms
Edited sentence: Ruins have collaborated with several other artists, including prominent avant-garde figure Derek Bailey, frenzied guitarist Keiji Haino and Umezu Kazutoki.The Japanese duo of Yoshida Tatsuya and Sasaki Hisashi are Ruins, a twisted progressive rock outfit that specialize in short, sharp, spastic numbers that resemble the improvisational convulsions of Boredoms