Original sentence: After being defeated in the battles of Venta y Media (October 21) and [[Battle of Sipe-Sipe|Sipe-Sipe (November 28), the northern territories were lost and eventually turned into present-day Bolivia.This unsuccessful outcome would spread rumors in Europe that the May Revolution was over
Edited sentence: After being defeated in the battles of Venta y Media (October 21) and Sipe - Sipe (November 28), the northern territories were lost and eventually turned into present-day Bolivia.This tragic result would spread rumors in Europe that the May Revolution was over