Original sentence: Currently pitches for the Twins Farm club the Rochester Red Wings.Drafted by the New York Mets organization and then part of the trade for Ace Johan Santana.Fern, Class of '72 - (Track and Field) - Summer Olympic Trials Qualifier, 1976, 1980, 5 Time Atlantic Coast Conference High Jump Champion (Clemson University), Author - Ed.Jon Bon Jovi, musician, actor and lead singer of the band Bon Jovi, attended for two years and then moved school.Kevin Mulvey(Baseball)- Attended for two years then transferred
Edited sentence: Currently pitches for the Twins Farm club the Rochester Red Wings, attended for two years then transferred.Fern - Class of '72 - (Track and Field) - Summer Olympic Trials Qualifier (1976, 1980), 5 Time Atlantic Coast Conference High Jump Champion (Clemson University), Author - Ed.Jon Bon Jovi - Musician, actor and lead singer of the band Bon Jovi, attended for two years and then transfered.Kevin Mulvey(Baseball)- Drafted by the New York Mets organization and then part of the trade for Ace Johan Santana