Original sentence: Adapted for the screen by Beulah Marie Dix, The Woman Thou Gavest Me (1919) was made by Famous Players-Lasky.Immediately after completing The Woman Thou Gavest Me she set up her own production company.Katherine MacDonald, stars in the film as Mary MacNeil
Edited sentence: Adapted for the screen by Beulah Marie Dix, The Woman Thou Gavest Me (1919) was made by Famous Players-Lasky drawing good audiences and reviews; Katherine MacDonald starring as Mary McNeil immediately afterwards set up her own production company