Original sentence: However, francophones now make up approximately 20 percent of the student body, a goal set by the administration in the wake of the movement
Edited sentence: ) in French or English - whichever of the two they prefer and without having to ask permission from anyone.Also, francophones now make up approximately 20 percent of the student body, a goal set by the administration in the wake of the movement.Finally, since many francophones are obliged by law to attend French school until CEGEP, many jump at the opportunity to develop their English skills by attending a world class institution in an English environment that is right in the center of their own city and thus not having to move to another province or country to benefit from such an enormous advantage.Furthermore, although a majority of Montrealers are francophone, the vast majority of these also speaks English and thus McGill, even as an English-language school, is accessible to the vast majority of Montrealers.However, students at McGill can hand in all of their work (homework, exams, papers, theses, etc