Original sentence: A personal finance statement filed for his presidential campaign put the couple's net worth between US$2.2 and $5 million.Additional attempts to capitalize on this trend was the introduction of "Democracy bonds", a program under which small donors would give a set amount every month.All told, Dean's campaign raised around $50 million.Although it only reached over $20,000 by August 2005, far from the stated goal of $1 million by 2008, it has, nonetheless, contributed considerably to the funding of the DNC.As governor, Dean was endorsed by the National Rifle Association several times, furthering his moderate image; though he never returned the endorsement, nor was he ever a member of the NRA.Many people, including Democratic Senator Joe Lieberman accused Dean of hypocrisy.This was especially apparent when the Federal Election Commission reported that the DNC had raised roughly $86.3 million in the first six months of 2005, an increase of over 50% on the amount raised during the same period of 2003
Edited sentence: A personal finance statement filed for his presidential campaign put the couple's net worth between $2.2 and $5 million dollars.Additional attempts to capitalize on this trend was the introduction of "Democracy bonds", a program under which small donors would give a set amount each and every month.All told, Dean's campaign raised around $50 million dollars.Although it only reached over 20,000 by August 2005, far from the stated goal of 1 million by 2008, it has, nonetheless, contributed considerably to the funding of the DNC.As governor, Dean was endorsed by the National Rifle Association several times (though he never returned the endorsement, nor was he ever a member of the NRA), furthering his moderate image.Many people, including arch-conservative Democratic Senator Joe Lieberman accused Dean of hypocrisy.This was especially apparent when the Federal Election Commission reported that the DNC had raised roughly $86.3 million dollars in the first six months of 2005, an increase of over 50% on the amount raised during the same period of 2003