Original sentence: The very uproar against the harshness of the 1906 and 1908 military interventions thus paradoxically contributed to preserve Bali's culture and make it one of the most popular touristic destinations today
Edited sentence: The very harshness of the 1906 and 1908 military interventions thus paradoxically contributed to an international uproar which favoured the preservation of Bali's culture to make the island one of the most popular touristic destinations today