Original sentence: Primarily based on the Forever Diamondz collection, the Bratz and Your Thing compete with each other on the show, America Rocks Fashion to win a pair of diamond encrusted go-go boots.The Bratz first chose a cheating girl, Mandy Pickett, but during the search, they meet a young wannabe fashion designer, Sharidan, who after some thinking (and a makeover) decides to be in the show, much to the chagrin of her conservative parents.The film also features references to "Americana"
Edited sentence: Based on mostly the Forever Diamondz collection, the Bratz and Your Thing compete with other for the show, America Rocks Fashion to win the diamond encrusted go-go boots.The Bratz first chose a cheating girl, Mandy Pickett, but during the search, they meet a young wannabe fashion designer, Sharidan, who after some thinking she decided to be in the show