Original sentence: Returning to the club the next day Dalton receives an ominous call from Wesley, seeking revenge for Jimmy's death.That night Doc visits Dalton and also attempts to persuade him to leave; however, their conversation is interrupted by a massive explosion; Emmett's home has been fire bombed.The next day car dealership owner Pete Stroudenmire becomes Wesley's next victim when he too rebuffs Wesley
Edited sentence: Returning to the club the next day, Dalton receives an ominous call from Wesley, seeking revenge for Jimmy's death.That night, Doc visits Dalton and also attempts to persuade him to leave; however, their conversation is interrupted by a massive explosion; Emmett's home has been fire bombed.The next day, car dealership owner Pete Stroudenmire becomes Wesley's next victim when he too rebuffs Wesley