Original sentence: His funeral mass was celebrated at St Mary's Church, Abercromby Street (the church in whose hall was held the inaugural meeting of what was to become Celtic FC) in his native Calton on 20 May 2008 followed by interment at St Peter's Cemetery Dalbeth
Edited sentence: His funeral mass was celebrated at St Mary's, Abercromby Street (the church in whose hall was held the inaugural meeting of what was to become Celtic FC) in his native Calton on 20 May 2008 followed by interment at St Peter's Cemetery Dalbeth