Original sentence: Malcolm, meanwhile, tries to fool Lois in order to attend a rock concert, only to end up making Craig miserable.Meanwhile, back home, Hal gets highly competitive about his new remote control boat, Lois thinks she's going insane, and Reese gets a job
Edited sentence: Meanwhile, Hal gets highly competitive about his new remote control boat, Lois thinks she's going insane, and Reese gets a job.Meanwhile, Malcolm tries to fool Lois in order to attend a rock concert, only to end up making Craig miserable