Original sentence: Many of the forms and practices are maintained, however, the aim is redirected - rather than practicing in the hope (or vow) of rebirth in Amitabha Buddha's Pure Land, the practictioner seeks to better themself and society, to create a Pure Land here on earth.One of Taixu's disicples, Yin Shun, used the term "Humanistic Buddhism" to indicate a criticism against the "deification" of Buddhism, which was another common feature of much of Chinese Buddhism, in his articles and books.Rather than a purely rational approach, and rejection of religious scripture, both Taixu and Yinshun, as well as modern interpretors thereof, all uphold what they consider to be "orthodox (Chinese) Mahayana Buddhism".certain misguided forms of Pure Land or tantric practice), as opposed to Buddhism focussing on the needs and lives of living individuals and their active role in society
Edited sentence: Many of the forms and practices are maintained, however, the aim is redirected - rather than practicing in the hope (or vow) of rebirth in Amitabha Buddha's Pure Land, the practitioner seeks to better themselves and society, to create a Pure Land here on earth.One of Taixu's disciples, Yin Shun, used the term "Humanistic Buddhism" to indicate a criticism against the "deification" of Buddhism, which was another common feature of much of Chinese Buddhism, in his articles and books.Rather than a purely rational approach, and rejection of religious scripture, both Taixu and Yinshun, as well as modern interpreters thereof, all uphold what they consider to be "orthodox (Chinese) Mahayana Buddhism".certain forms of Pure Land or tantric practice), as opposed to Buddhism focusing on the needs and lives of living individuals and their active role in society