Original sentence: But there is far greater tolerance for homosexuality in major Latin American countries such as Mexico, Argentina, Bolivia and Brazil.Majorities in every Western European nation surveyed say homosexuality should be accepted by society, while most Russians, Poles and Ukrainians disagree.Opinion in Europe is split between West and East.The Pew Research Center's 2003 Global Attitudes Survey found that "[p]eople in Africa and the Middle East strongly object to societal acceptance of homosexuality
Edited sentence: In contrast,  majorities in all Western European nations (which also report more than 50% athiesm rates) surveyed say homosexuality should be accepted by society, while most Russians, Poles and Ukrainians, who remain committed to their national and religious traditions, disagree.In particular, while Western civilization has continued to lead the world in terms of wealth, economic and military might, scientific ingenuity, and in many other areas of endeavour, Western society has, during the late twentieth century and onwards, declined in terms of its traditions and moral standards, leading to the most crime, preventable sexual disease, and miseducation in the modern world.On the other hand, the Pew Research Center's 2003 Global Attitudes Survey found that "[p]eople in Africa and the Middle East strongly object to societal acceptance of homosexuality (based on moral grounds)