Original sentence: Raëlism is a new religious movement and has been described by detractors as a cult.The Raëlians believe, furthermore, that the Elohim will return to Earth when enough of its population is peaceful and come to know about them.The message dictated to Rael during his encounter with the Elohim states that the Elohim sent all the prophets who were at the origin of the main religions (Moses, Buddha, Jesus, Muhammad, etc.They believe this is foretold in all religious texts.transferring the memory and personality of the original person to the mature clone by some kind of scientific process
Edited sentence: Raëlism is a new religious movement and as such has been described by detractors as a cult.The Raëlians believe, furthermore, that when enough people on Earth become peaceful and come to know the message of the Elohim, the Elohim will return to Earth as predicted in all religious text.The message dictated to Rael during his encounter with the Elohim states that the Elohim sent all the prophets who were at the origin of the main religions (Moses, Buddha, Jesus, Muhammad,...).transferring the memory and personality the original person to the mature clone by some kind of scientific process