Original sentence: Between 6/2010 - 9/2014 Glen has claimed £88579.80 from IPSA for accommodation costs.Glen's accommodation costs were reported in the Daily Mail on an article regarding rising MP expenses.He has claimed for a hotel in London on two occasions immediately following his election (10/5/2010 & 17/5/2010).The Telegraph named John Glen in its article MPs who own London homes still claim rent''
Edited sentence: Between 6/2010 - 9/2014 Glen has claimed £88579.80 from the tax payer for accommodation costs, while also earning from his own flat (from IPSS data).Glen's accommodation costs were noteworthy enough to be reported in the Daily Mail on an article regarding rising MP expenses.He even claimed for a hotel in London on two occasions (10/5/2010 & 17/5/2010).The Telegraph was among the first to point out that Glen was involved in rent swapping in their article MPs who own London homes still claim rent''