Original sentence: There are some shops in Crossgates too including a newsagents and a Chinese takeaway.There is also a football pitch which a lot of the children have a game of football on
Edited sentence: Fife council continue to deny facilities to the village which in terms of amenities make the village the most deprived area of Fife.The village continues to grow but without inward investment the gap between the haves and have nots will continue to grow at a rate far greater than houses can be built.There are some shops in Crossgates too including a newsagents and a chinese takeaway.There is also a football pitch which alot of the children have a game of footie on