Original sentence: Many claims in the article have come under attack from bloggers and other critics who have accused Kennedy of quote mining, confusing correlation and causation, double standards in looking at "conflicts of interest" (in reference to the Gries) and the "hidden hordes" fallacy.Rolling Stone has since admitted that some parts of the article were in error
Edited sentence: Many claims in the article have come under attack from pro-thimerosal bloggers who have accused that article of quote mining, confusing correlation and causation, double standards in looking at "conflicts of interest (in reference to the Gries) and the "hidden hordes" fallacy.Rollingstone has since admitted that some parts of the article were in error