Original sentence: Peter’s College—Oxford University and attended New York University’s prestigious Summer Publishing Institute, as well as the University of California’s Los Angeles Professional Program in Screenwriting.She was a student at St.Wasfie received her bachelor’s degree from the University of Michigan, Ann Arbor and her master’s in International Journalism from CITY University in London
Edited sentence: She was a student at St Peter's College, Oxford and attended New York University’s prestigious "Summer Publishing Institute", as well as the University of California, Los Angeles "Professional Program in Screenwriting".Wasfie received her bachelor’s degree from the University of Michigan, Ann Arbor and her master’s in International Journalism from City University, London