Original sentence: The game world has two warring city-states that regularly erupt into full scale battles whose outcomes are decided through the actions of the playerbase.While some of these elements are still part of the campaign; the world continues to develop with new ideas
Edited sentence: The world has two warring city-states that regularly erupt into full scale battles whose outcomes are decided through the actions of the playerbase.Upon entering the game world one will experience a fight for survival in a desert world where life is cheap and glory comes to those who dare.While some of these elements are still part of the campaign; the world continues to develop with new ideas and concepts that have made it evolve into a truly unique and in-depth environment