Original sentence: Currently living in Los Angeles, Karamo is an African-American from Houston whose parents are from Jamaica.He is a recent grad from Vanderbilt University, where he majored in Human and Organizational Development, and was a star football player.His religious parents don't accept his lifestyle, which caused Willie to leave home when he was 15.Karamo attended Florida A&M University, where he majored in Business Administration.Landon is a sports fanatic.MJ is a blond Southern young man.Shavonda is an African American young woman who likes to party and to socialize with men.She is most attracted to boys who are witty, independent, athletic and a challenge
Edited sentence: Currently living in Los Angeles, Karamo is an African American from Houston whose parents are from Jamaica.He is a recent grad from Vanderbilt University where he majored in Human and Organizational Development and played the role of the star football player.His religious parents don't accept his lifestyle which caused Willie to leave home when he was only 15.Karamo attended Florida A&M University where he majored in Business Administration.MJ is a good-looking, blond, hard-bodied Southern boy with a warm heart.Shavonda is a beautiful African American young woman who is the life of the party and loves attention from guys.She is most attracted to bad boys who are witty, independent, athletic and a challenge.When you think sports fanatic, think Landon