Original sentence: The British Osteopathic Association (BOA) is an independent organisation representing osteopaths working both within the National Health Service (NHS) and privately in the United Kingdom
Edited sentence: The BOA works with and supports its members in providing the highest standards of patient care and excellence in osteopathic practice through CPD workshops, articles and email bulletins on developments both within the osteopathic and wider medical and health environments.The British Osteopathic Association (BOA) is an independent organisation representing osteopaths working both within the NHS and privately all over the United Kingdom