Original sentence: " Her Elmer costar Walter Huston had been impressed by Francis' performance and recommended and encouraged her to take a screen test for his new studio Paramount Pictures and the film Gentlemen of the Press (1929).Francis made Press and the Marx Brothers film The Cocoanuts (1929) at Paramount's Astoria Studios in Astoria, Queens, New York before moving to Hollywood.The play flopped and Francis, though flat broke at the time, was unwilling to ask friends for a loan and instead was "vowing to crawl out of this mess herself
Edited sentence: " That's when Huston, who was impressed by Francis' performance in Elmer, recommended and encouraged her to take a screen test for his new studio Paramount Pictures and the film Gentlemen of the Press (1929).Francis made this and the Marx Brothers film The Cocoanuts (1929) at Paramount's Astoria Studios in Astoria, Queens, New York and then moved to Hollywood.It flopped and unfortunately for Francis, she was flat broke at the time, but she was not willing to ask friends for a loan, instead "vowing to crawl out of this mess herself