Original sentence: The month of Paremhat is also the third month of the Season of 'Peret' (Growth and Emergence) in Ancient Egypt, where the Nile floods recede and the crops start to grow throughout the land of Egypt
Edited sentence: The month of Paremhat is also the third month of the Season of 'Proyet' (Growth and Emergence) in Ancient Egypt, where the Nile floods recede and the crops start to grow throughout the land of Egypt