Original sentence: Champagne - bass ("Of Course").Charlie Bisharat - violin ("Of Course"), electric violin ("Then She Did...").Dave Navarro - guitar.Eric Avery - bass.Geoff Stradling - piano ("Obvious").John Philip Shenale - strings ("Then She Did...").Perry Farrell - vocals.Stephen Perkins - drums.Tracks 1-5 consist of unrelated hard rock style songs.Tracks 6-9, as a whole are in memoriam of singer Perry Farrell's deceased friend known as Xiola Blue, who died of a heroin-overdose in 1987 at the age of 19 ("Then She Did" also chronicles Farrell's mother's suicide when he was 4 years old)
Edited sentence: Champagne – bass ("Of Course").Charlie Bisharat – violin ("Of Course"), electric violin ("Then She Did...").Dave Navarro – guitar.Eric Avery – bass.Geoff Stradling – piano ("Obvious").John Philip Shenale – strings ("Then She Did...").Perry Farrell – vocals.Stephen Perkins – drums.Tracks 1–5 consist of unrelated hard rock style songs.Tracks 6–9, as a whole are in memoriam of singer Perry Farrell's deceased friend known as Xiola Blue, who died of a heroin-overdose in 1987 at the age of 19 ("Then She Did" also chronicles Farrell's mother's suicide when he was 4 years old)