Original sentence: Although the auto has many admirable traits, a Google search will uncover thousands of on-going, expensive (often.The V70 XC received a major upgrade on its suspension and equipped with 8.2" min.electronic) problems experienced by unhappy owners worldwide
Edited sentence: The V70 XC received a major upgrade on its suspension and equipped with a soaring 8.2" min.While the auto has many admirable traits, a Google search will uncover thousands of on-going, expensive (often.electronical) problems experienced by unhappy owners worldwide