Original sentence: Lake Five also has abundent Wildlife including Black Bear, White-tailed Deer, Garter Snake, Michigan Brown Snake (Storeria), Red Fox, Beaver, Wild Turkey.Lake Five has abundent Marine wildlife including Largemouth Bass, Bluegill, Perch, Painted Turtle,
Edited sentence: Lake Five also has abundant land fauna including Black Bear, White-tailed Deer, Garter Snake, Michigan Brown Snake (Storeria), Red Fox, Beaver, Wild Turkey.Lake Five has abundant water fauna including Largemouth Bass, Bluegill, Perch, Painted Turtle,