Original sentence: Colin Thiele (born 1920 in Eudunda, South Australia) is a writer known for his poem "dissection", which is about a boy and a dissection of mice and how he perceives it.Colin Thiele has been known to write self consciously, which means that he did not fully express himself due to the intensive use of I in his poems
Edited sentence: Colin Thiele has been known to write self consciously, which means that he did not fully express himself due to the intensive use of I in his poems and he never got the audience he deserved.Colin Thiele is a writer known for his poem "dissection", which is about a boy and a dissection of mice and how he perceives it