Original sentence: It requires that the families send their children to school and keep their mandatory personal vaccination-booklets duly updated.While this idea may seem commendable, a large number of cases has been showing heavy inneficiency on the choosing and updating of the family situations, delivering sometimes larger resourcer for the ones who needed not
Edited sentence: A large number of cases has been showing heavy inneficiency on the choosing and updating of the family situations, delivering sometimes larger resourcer for the ones who needed not.Lula's social program funds were increased in July, 2006 (three months before the election) and it has been used as a way to coerce people to vote lula for reelection.The previous government schemes used to require that the families must send their children to school and keep their mandatory personal vaccination-booklets duly updated, that criteria was removed by Lula's government