Original sentence: Al Qunaytirah is also the name of a governorate of southwestern Syria that includes the Israeli administered Golan Heights.Also, a new highway is being built from Damascus to al Qunaytirah.It has started construction projects which include a multi-million dollar hospital.Since (insert year of pledge) Syria has pledged to reconstruct the city.Syria chose not to resettle the city and leave it as a testament to "Israeli brutality.The Israelis withdrew from the city in 1974.The city was a commercial and cultural hub for southwestern Syria until the Six-Day War.The city was placed back under Syria's control for a short while in the Yom Kippur War, but Israel recaptured it
Edited sentence: A new highway is also being built from Damascus to al Qunaytirah.Al Qunaytirah is also the name of a governorate of southwestern Syria that includes the Israeli-occupied Golan Heights.However, Syria has recently pledged to start rebuilding the city and has begun to build a multi-million dollar hospital in it.Syria chose not to resettle the city and leave it as a testament to Israeli brutality.The Israelis finally withdrew from the city in 1974.The city was a commercial and cultural hub for southwestern Syria until the Israeli invasion of 1967 in the Six-Day War.The city was reclaimed for a short while in the Yom Kippur War, but the Israelis managed to recapture it