Original sentence: Melissa Anelli, webmaster of the fan site The Leaky Cauldron, told The Associated Press, “Jo Rowling calling any Harry Potter character gay would make wonderful strides in tolerance toward homosexuality.... By dubbing someone so respected, so talented and so kind, as someone who just happens to be also homosexual, she’s destroying the character
Edited sentence: Melissa Anelli, webmaster of the fan site The Leaky Cauldron, told The Associated Press, “Jo Rowling calling any Harry Potter character gay would make wonderful strides in tolerance toward homosexuality.... By dubbing someone so respected, so talented and so kind, as someone who just happens to be also homosexual, she’s reinforcing the idea that a person’s gayness is not something of which they should be ashamed