Original sentence: All articles are published by students.All articles are written by students.It is a good quality paper, but has occasionally been criticized for having superfluous articles and often has formatting errors.It is professionally printed at The King County Journal and has undergone some formatting changes in the 2006-2007 school year.The paper contains advertisements for local businesses and coupons that often benefit the students and help facilitate the printing of the paper
Edited sentence: No, seriously, its like the tightest paper anyone has ever seen.The paper just plain owns