Original sentence: As of November 15, 2008, the film holds a score of 84% from reviews collected by review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, who gave it a golden tomato for best romance film of 2008, and a normalized rating of 72 out of 100 on Metacritic
Edited sentence: As of November 15, 2008, the film holds a score of 85% from reviews collected by review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, who gave it a golden tomato for best romance film of 2008, and a normalized rating of 72 out of 100 on Metacritic