Original sentence: The term pedophile is commonly used to describe all child sexual offenders, including those who do not meet the clinical diagnosis standards.This use is seen as problematic by some people, Some researchers, such as Howard E
Edited sentence: The term pedophile is commonly used to describe all child sexual offenders, even those who do not meet the clinical diagnosis standards.This use is seen as problematic by some people,  Nevertheless, some researchers, such as Howard E