Original sentence: , began to insult her frequently.After a weight loss from 87 kg to 47 kg in three months, seventeen-year-old Lee Eun Ji was granted the honor to appear on an episode of SBS's Star King, a Korean variety show.After it was revealed that the "S group member" was Kang-In of Super Junior, members from the official Super Junior fanclub, E.After the program aired, the audience of Star King and netizens began to criticize Lee's unhealthy way of dieting.Her classmates also begun to spread rumors of her at school and she received many negative remarks over the internet, criticizing on her looks and weight loss
Edited sentence: , began to bash her frequently.After an amazing weight loss from 87 kg to 47 kg in merely three months, seventeen-year-old Lee Eun Ji granted the honor to appear on an episode of SBS's Star King, a popular Korean variety show.After it was proven that the certain S group member was actually Kang-In of Super Junior, members from the official Super Junior fanclub, E.After the program aired, television-goers of Star King, along with netizens, began to criticize Lee's unhealthy way of dieting.Die-hard fans found her cellphone number and bombarded her with many horrifying messages.Her classmates also begun to spread hateful rumors of her at school and she received many negative remarks over the internet, criticizing on her looks and weight loss