Original sentence: Historically part of Cheshire, Stalybridge is located within the Metropolitan Borough of Tameside in Greater Manchester.It is  northwest of Glossop,  east of Manchester and  north of Stockport.Stalybridge () is a town in North West England, UK with a population of 22,568
Edited sentence: Historically part of Cheshire, it is  northwest of Glossop,  east of Manchester and  north of Stockport.Stalybridge () is a town in the Metropolitan Borough of Tameside in Greater Manchester, England, with a population of 22,568