Original sentence: For example, Mallory may use the above attacks to give Alice her own authenticated session -- so Alice will start using the site with all the authentication of Mallory.When Alice visits , this cookie will be sent with with the request, as the specs for cookies states, and Alice will have the session specified by Mallory's cookie
Edited sentence: For example, Mallory may use the above attacks to give Alice her own authenticated session—so Alice will start using the site with all the authentication of Mallory.When Alice visits , this cookie will be sent with the request, as the specs for cookies states, and Alice will have the session specified by Mallory's cookie