Original sentence: Long May You Run is an album credited to "The Stills-Young Band" but is a de facto collaboration between Stephen Stills and Neil Young, released in September 1976.The Stills-Young Band recorded the album and began a tour in 1976 prior to the album's release, but Young dropped out of the tour when he grew bored with the project, forcing Stills to complete the concert tour solo
Edited sentence: Long May You Run is an album credited to "The Stills–Young Band" but is a de facto collaboration between Stephen Stills and Neil Young, released in September 1976.The Stills–Young Band recorded the album and began a tour in 1976 prior to the album's release, but Young dropped out of the tour when he grew bored with the project, forcing Stills to complete the concert tour solo