Original sentence: He was consecrated by William of Malines, Patriarch of Jerusalem, but travelled to go to Rome to be given the pallium by Innocent II; Patriarch William was offended and treated Fulk poorly after he returned.In Jerusalem he served as a canon of the Church of the Holy Sepulchre, and in 1134 he succeeded William I as Archbishop of Tyre (not to be confused with the historian, who was the second archbishop of Tyre named William)
Edited sentence: He was consecrated by William of Malines, who had become Patriarch of Jerusalem, but travelled to Rome to be given the pallium by Innocent II; Patriarch William was offended and treated Fulk poorly after he returned.In Jerusalem he served as a canon of the Church of the Holy Sepulchre, and in 1134 he succeeded William of Malines as Archbishop of Tyre