Original sentence: He also wrote under the pseudonym, "Mernos," and had the poem, "The Eagle," published in The Galleon, July/August 1935.He had already written 1,500 poems.Vazakas’ first published poem, a 5-line piece entitled “Grief,” appeared in the first issue in November 1934
Edited sentence: By this time Vazakas had written 1,500 poems.In 1935 two other poems were published in a small literary magazine called The Bard.Vazakas’ first published poem, a 5-line piece entitled “Grief,” appeared in the first issue in November 1934 and five other poems, one anonymous and two under the pseudonym Mernos, and and had the poem, "The Eagle," published in The Galleon, July/August 1935.When discussing his career years later, Vazakas never mentioned either publication or the large body of early work