Original sentence: Despite a United Nations resolution calling for a return of this territory religious Jews regarded the West Bank (ancient Judaea and Samaria) as an integral part of Eretz Israel, and within Israel voices of the political Right soon began to argue that these territories should be permanently retained.Israeli forces captured the eastern half of Jerusalem from Jordan, including the holiest of Jewish religious sites, the Western Wall of the ancient Temple
Edited sentence: Religious Jews regarded the West Bank (ancient Judaea and Samaria) as an integral part of Eretz Israel, and within Israel voices of the political Right soon began to argue that these territories should be permanently retained.Under imminant threat of attack, Israeli forces captured the eastern half of Jerusalem from Jordan, including the holiest of Jewish religious sites, the Western Wall of the ancient Temple