Original sentence: Along with the Canton McKinley High School Bulldogs, the Tigers represent one half of what many consider to be the greatest high school football rivalry in the nation.Distinguished Massillon alumni include Paul Brown and former Ohio State Buckeyes graduate and NFL veteran linebacker Chris Spielman.In Ohio and elseswhere, the name Massillon is probably most associated with the Massillon Washington High School football team, the Tigers -- as well as the fanatical sense of pride the town has for it.The Tigers are historically one of the winningest high school football teams in the United States, second only to the Valdosta High School Wildcats, in Valdosta Georgia
Edited sentence: An honor roll of distinguished Massillon alumni includes the legendary Paul Brown; and former Ohio State Buckeyes great (as well as NFL veteran), Linebacker, Chris Spielman.In Ohio, and elseswhere, the name Massillon is probably most associated with the Massillon Washington High School football team, the Tigers -- as well as the fanatical sense of pride the town has for it.The Tigers are historically one of the most winning high school football teams in the United States, second only to the Valdosta High School Wildcats, in Valdosta Georgia.The Tigers represent one half of what many consider to be the greatest high school football rivalry in the nation;  their arch enemy, the Canton McKinley High School  Bulldogs, comprise the other half