Original sentence: Betar members played vital roles in  the fight with the British Mandate and the creation of Israel.Jabotinsky also wanted to connect the name of the first jewish fighter after 2000 years to the name of the last fort of jewish uprising against the Roman Empire in the Bar Kokhba's revolt, showing betar intent to create a new generation of jewish warriors.Joseph Trumpeldor was an Jewish fighter who fell over the battle of Tel Hai coining the phrase: "Never mind, it is good to die for our country".The Betar offices were bombed by the leftist FLNC , a Corsican militant organization.Today, the Betar Movement is primarily involved in Jewish and Zionist activism and has chapters worldwide
Edited sentence: Betar members played vital roles in  the struggle against the British Mandate and the establishment of the State of Israel.Jabotinsky also wanted to connect the name of the first jewish hero after 2000 years to the name of the last fort of jewish uprising against the Roman Empire in the Bar Kokhba's revolt, showing betar intent to create a new generation of jewish warriors.Joseph Trumpeldor was an Jewish war hero who fell over the defence of Tel Hai coining the phrase: "Never mind, it is good to die for our country".The Betar offices were bombed by the leftist FLNC , a Corsican terrorist organization.Today, the Betar Movement is primarily involved in Jewish and Zionist education and activism and has chapters worldwide