Original sentence: Alvin Karpis did not ask Dillinger to join the Barker-Karpis gang on any jobs.Nelson died in a shootout with Agents Hollis and Cowley who both died from Nelson's bullets
Edited sentence: Alvin Karpis never met Dillinger (although Doc Barker & Volney Davis helped bury Hamilton) and did not ask him to join the Barker-Karpis gang on any jobs.Nelson died in a shootout at Barrington, Illinois with Agents Hollis and Cowley whom both died from Nelson's bullets