Original sentence: In 2004, Ben Folds produced a cover version of "Common People" for William Shatner's album Has Been which featured a hard-driven, dramatic indie rock style in stark contrast to the disco/pop style of the original version, and highly emotive vocals by Joe Jackson.The song is also the inspiration for the title of brit-pop compilation box set, Common People - Brit Pop The Story
Edited sentence: In 2004, Ben Folds produced a cover version of "Common People" for William Shatner's album Has Been which featured a hard-driven, dramatic indie rock style in stark contrast to the disco/Brit-Pop style of the original version, and highly emotive vocals by Joe Jackson.The song was the inspiration for the title of brit-pop compilation box set, Common People - Brit Pop The Story