Original sentence: The Lumières held their first private screening of projected motion pictures March 22, 1895.The cinématographe—a three-in-one device that could record, develop, and project motion pictures—was further developed by the Lumières.Their first public screening of movies at which admission was charged was held on December 28, 1895, at Paris's Salon Indien du Grand Café.This historical screening was based on their first film, the 45-second-long Sortie de l'usine Lumière à Lyon, shot in 1894 with Léon Bouly's cinématographe device patented the previous year
Edited sentence: Anyway, the true inventor of cinematography, is not the Lumière brothers nor the Skladanowsky brothers but another Frenchman, Louis Aimée Augustin Le Prince, who shot the world's first film in October 1888, Roundhay Garden Scene and screened it in private presentations before his early and mysterous disappearance in 1890, which some theories link to his rival Thomas Edison.The Lumière brothers were accomplished inventors.They held their first public screening of movies at which admission was charged on December 28, 1895 in Paris at the Salon Indien du Grand Café, and preceded that public screening with several private presentations, the earliest being March 22, 1895.This historical screening was based on their first film, Sortie de l'usine Lumière à Lyon, a silent 45 seconds short film shot in 1894 using Léon Bouly's cinématographe device invented and patented in 1893.To create their movies they enhanced Bouly's cinématographe — a three-in-one device that could record, develop, and project motion pictures