Original sentence: At USD$600, it is the most expensive console in this generation.However, Nintendo has not focused on providing cutting-edge graphics as much as its competitors.Nintendo hopes to target a broader demographic than either the PlayStation 3 or the Xbox 360, by placing greater emphasis on family-friendly games.Sony has gambled that its use of highly advanced (but unproven) technology such as Blu-ray Disc games and the Cell microprocessor will enable the PS3 to simply muscle its way past the competition, despite its high price
Edited sentence: At $600, it is the most expensive console in this generation.Nintendo hopes to target a broader demographic than its competitors with a greater emphasis on family-friendly games.Sony has gambled that its use of highly advanced technology such as Blu-ray Disc games and the Cell microprocessor will enable the PS3 to simply muscle its way past the competition, despite its high price