Original sentence: (Toronto Star, March 10, 1998).In 1998, the disciplinary practices of the Academy came under scrutiny when two students ran away and were killed by an oncoming train sometime afterward
Edited sentence: Further, many have said that once one is able to look past the façade the Academy presents to the outside world, the institiution tends to look quite pathetic.If they are unable to keep up, they are often physically harassed and sent out, sometimes in -10 degrees C (17 degrees F) weather, to perform such disciplinary acts as digging six foot holes in the ground.In effect, some have openly stated that the young children attending the Academy are expected by the staff to perform at the standards of young adults, both physically and mentally almost from the point they pass through the gates and begin Recruit Training.RLA has come under fire on a number of occasions for abusing children.Witnesses have seen 300-pound men crush 90-pound thirteen-year-old boys for simply not being able to keep up with the heavy schedule the Academy sets out for them