Original sentence: He settled in the Repentigny suburb of Montreal, became the owner of a jewelery store, and married and had two children.The event, unfolding for hours in the centre of the the nation's capital, became a major media story covered live by the country's networks
Edited sentence: He settled in the Repentigny suburb of Montreal, became the owner of a jewellery store, and married and had two children.The event, unfolding for hours in the centre of the nation's capital, became a major media story covered live by the country's networks