Original sentence: The Sir Stanley Baker Lounge features many pictures and memorabilia from his successful career, including a wall plaque commemorating the official opening in both English and Welsh, and is a fitting tribute to Ferndale's most famous son
Edited sentence: The Sir Stanley Baker Lounge features many pictures and memorabilia from his successful career, including a beautifully made wall plaque commemorating the official opening in both English and Welsh, and is a fitting tribute to Ferndale's most famous son