Original sentence: The Pitcairners also converted to Christianity, however they would later convert from their existing form of Christianity to Adventism after a successful Adventist mission in the 1890s.When the American sailing ship Topaz found Pitcairn again, John Adams was granted amnesty for his mutiny.Young eventually died of an asthmatic infection
Edited sentence: (The Pitcairners would later convert to Adventism after a successful Adventist mission in the 1890s.) When the British visited Pitcairn again in 1814, they were impressed with the emerging society and the example of leadership given by Adams.Because of this, it was decided not to arrest him for mutiny.The Pitcairners converted to Christianity