Original sentence: He resigned on September 23, 2009.On May 29, 2009, the Chicago Tribune published "Clout Goes to College," an article detailing preferential consideration to applicants with connections to politicians and university trustees.On October 3, 2009, the University trustees accepted the resignation of President White (see related section) as of the end of the year.The University of Illinois admissions controversy at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign was precipitated by a series of articles in the Chicago Tribune that was first published May 29, 2009
Edited sentence: But it was not enough.He voluntarily resigned on September 23, 2009.On May 29, 2009, the Chicago Tribune published "Clout Goes to College," an article claiming that the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign, gave preferential consideration to applicants with connections to politicians and university trustees.On October 3, 2009, the University trustees accepted the voluntary resignation of President White (see related section) as of the end of the year.The University of Illinois admissions controversy at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign unfolded as a result of a series of articles in the Chicago Tribune that was first published May 29, 2009.Throughout the controversy, White had moved quickly to overhaul the admissions system, he apologized publicly, and he sought greater transparency