Original sentence: Obviously, with the opening of west in 2005 and the number of pupils going from 200 - 750, they went back on their word and their intentions as greed took over and they became all about money, money money
Edited sentence: Obviously, with the opening of BIMM West in 2005 and the number of pupils going from 200 - 750, they went back on their word and their intentions as greed took over and they became all about money, money, money