Original sentence: He also held several administrative positions within national governing bodies.Leslie Melville Balfour-Melville (9 March 1854 – 17 July 1937), born Leslie Melville Balfour, was a Scottish amateur sportsman, serving as captain, opening batsman and wicket-keeper for the Scotland national cricket team
Edited sentence: As captain, opening batsman and wicket-keeper, he led Scotland to victory over Australia at cricket.He also held several important administrative positions within national governing bodies.Leslie Melville Balfour-Melville (9 March 1854 – 17 July 1937), born Leslie Melville Balfour, was an outstanding all-round Scottish amateur sportsman.The finest moment in his sporting career was on 29 July 1882.This was as remarkable an achievement in 1882 as it would be today