Original sentence: Jarrolds, established in 1810, was a well-known printer and publisher.The market has recently been downsized and undergone redevelopment, and the new market stalls have proved controversial: with 20% less floorspace than the original stalls, higher rental and other charges, and inadequate rainwater handling, they have been unpopular with many stallholders and customers alike
Edited sentence: About 850 staff working for Norwich Union in Norwich are in the process of being made redundant.Jarrolds Printing, based in Norwich, that started in 1810 was one of the largest operations of its kind in the UK.The market has recently been downsized and undergone redevelopment, and the tiny new market stalls have proved controversial: with 20% less floorspace than the original stalls, higher rental and other charges, and inadequate rainwater handling, they have been unpopular with many stallholders and customers alike