Original sentence: Between September 12 and September 29, Luke was credited with shooting down 14 German balloons and four airplanes.Luke was simultaneously admired and disliked for his aggressive tendency to fly alone
Edited sentence: Between September 12 and September 29, Luke was credited with shooting down 14 German balloons and four airplanes: 18 victories in ten sorties flown on eight separate days, a feat unsurpassed by any pilot in World War I.Luke was disliked for his aggressive tendency to fly alone