Original sentence: , the former presidents of Afghanistan, were from Kabul province, in particular the Melan Valley area.Najibullah is known as one of the beloved Afghan leaders whoe pictures can be seen in every corner of the country including Kabul
Edited sentence: Najibullah Ahmadzai, the former president of Afghanistan, was from Paktia province, in particular the Melan Valley area.Najibullah is known as one of the beloved Afghan leaders whose pictures can be seen in every corner of the country, including Kabul