Original sentence: However, Udai Singh II, the Rana of Mewar, continued to remain at large until his death four years later.In 1615 Amar Singh I, the son of Pratap Singh accepted Mughal suzerainty and one year later Jahangir, as a goodwill gesture, returned him Chittor Fort under the condition that it will never be repaired, as the Mughals feared that it might be used a bastion for future rebellions.Local rulers such as Raja Bhara Mal of Amber had already submitted to Akbar in 1562.Maharana Udai Singh II had already retreated from the fortress of Chittorgarh and went to Gogunda, leaving behind 8,000 soldiers and 1,000 musketeers under the command of Jaimal and Patta.This was continued by his son Pratap Singh , who despite being defeated at the Battle of Haldighati, through guerilla warfare, managed to retain western Mewar during the lifetime of Akbar.Though both of these areas were raided, Udai Singh II was not found
Edited sentence: However, Udai Singh II, the Rana of Mewar, continued to remain at Udaipur until his death four years later.In 1615 Amar Singh I, the son of Pratap Singh accepted Mughal suzerainty and one year later Jahangir, as a goodwill gesture, allowed him to live in Chittor Fort under the condition that it will never be repaired, as it might be used a bastion for future rebellions.Local rulers such as Raja Bhar Mal of Amber had already submitted to Akbar in 1562.Maharana Udai Singh II and his son Kunwar Pratap had already retreated in fear from the fortress of Chittorgarh and went to Gogunda, leaving behind 8,000 soldiers and 1,000 musketeers under the command of Jaimal and Patta.This was continued by his son Pratap Singh , who was decisively defeated at the Battle of Haldighati and lost all of Mewar to the Mughals in 1576, however after 1579, Akbar engaged in a war with Iran and seeing it as a chance he came out of the mountain hides and through guerilla warfare, managed to retain Udaipur back which is only one-fifth of whole Mewar.Though both of these areas were raided, Udai Singh II was not found as he alongside with his family hidden in the wild mountains of Mewar