Original sentence: As a result of the controversy and evidentiary disputes surrounding the book, Kashiwashobo had planned to publish a critical commentary in the same volume.Kirby, which presents an accessible history of the Nanjing Massacre.The Rape of Nanking is a 1997 book  by Iris Chang (張純如) and William C.The accuracy of the book has been disputed, primarily by conservative and revisionist factions in Japan.This includes claims that the book contains many fabricated photographs and cannot be trusted
Edited sentence: Having trouble with numerous factual errors on it, Kashiwashobo planned to publish a critical commentary together with it.Kirby about the Nanjing Massacre.Some, particularly Japanese scholars claim that the this book contains many fabricated photographs and cannot be trusted.The Rape of Nanking is a 1998 book  by Iris Chang (張純如) and William C.The accuracy of contents has always been disputed