Original sentence: After her parents' divorce, seventeen-year-old New York City dweller Veronica "Ronnie" Miller (Miley Cyrus) becomes rebellious and alienates herself from her parents, especially her father, Steve Miller (Greg Kinnear).Three years later, Steve is given the chance to reconnect with his now seventeen-year-old daughter when her mother (Kelly Preston) sends Ronnie to spend the summer with him
Edited sentence: At seventeen, Veronica "Ronnie" Miller (Miley Cyrus) remains as rebellious and distant as she was the day after her parents' divorce and father's relocation to Georgia three years ago.Now, Steve Miller (Greg Kinnear), is given the chance to reconnect with his estranged daughter when her mother (Kelly Preston) sends Ronnie to spend the summer with him