Original sentence: Collective leave is also a common habbit in many businesses and government offices during Chol HaMoed.Many businesses and government offices allow workers to chose additional one or two days of leave out of list of non-official holidays.Of these, Independence Day is supposed to be observed by all citizens, while others are Jewish religious holidays which non-Jews or non-Jewish communities may disregard, if they chose to observe their own religious holidays.School year has several optional formats approved by the Ministy of Education, one of which is chosen by the school principal considering the local community's religion and tradition
Edited sentence: Collective leave is also a common habit in many businesses and government offices during Chol HaMoed.Many businesses and government offices allow workers to choose additional one or two days of leave out of list of non-official holidays.Of these, Independence Day is supposed to be observed by all citizens, while others are Jewish religious holidays which non-Jews or non-Jewish communities may disregard, if they choose to observe their own religious holidays.School year has several optional formats approved by the Ministry of Education, one of which is chosen by the school principal considering the local community's religion and tradition