Original sentence: The Michael Teachings elaborated in detailed fashion on the function, strengths, and weaknesses of each overleaf, and on the larger processes of evolution of the soul (called "essence" in this system) from Infant Soul to Baby Soul and beyond
Edited sentence: The Michael Teachings provide detailed information on the function, strengths, and weaknesses of each overleaf, and on the larger processes of evolution of the soul (called "essence" in this system) from Infant Soul to Baby Soul and beyond