Original sentence: A "Shake n' Bake Sergeant" was a Vietnam war-era term for a young, non-commissioned officer of the United States Army who gained his stripes quickly through attending an NCO school with little actual time in the military
Edited sentence: A "Shake n' Bake Sergeant" was a Vietnam War-era term for a young, non-commissioned officer of the United States Army who gained his stripes quickly through attending an NCO school with little actual time in the military