Original sentence: Construction was funded by a gift of $150,000 from his widow, Isabella McLanahan Brown, an amount equivalent to more than $3 million  today.During the restoration survey in 2000, various stained glass experts praised the extent and craftsmanship of the church's collection of Tiffany windows.More than half of that amount was raised from the wealthy congregation in the first day, the New York Times reported.Postmaster General James Albert Gary, a member of Brown Memorial, that he chaired a committee to raise $50,000 (equivalent to $1.3 million in 2008) for building Babcock Memorial Presbyterian Church on the site of the church's North Avenue property.The Brown Memorial Presbyterian Church building was dedicated on December 4, 1870, in memory of George Brown, son of investment firm founder Alexander Brown and one of the founders of the Baltimore and Ohio Railroad in 1827
Edited sentence: Baltimore City Paper called the church and its collection of a dozen Tiffany windows, "the most magnificent interior space in Baltimore City".Brown & Sons, and one of the founders of the pioneering Baltimore and Ohio Railroad in 1827.Construction was funded by a gift of $150,000 from his widow, Isabella McLanahan Brown, an amount equivalent to more than $4 million in 2009.During the restoration survey in 2000, various stained glass experts praised the extent and craftsmanship of the windows.More than half of that amount was raised the first day from the wealthy congregation, the New York Times reported, and the new Babcock Memorial Presbyterian Church was soon constructed on Brown Memorial Church's North Avenue property.Postmaster General James Albert Gary, a member of Brown Memorial, that he chaired a committee to raise $50,000 (the equivalent of $1.4 million in 2009) for construction of a new church in memory of the beloved former pastor.The Brown Memorial Presbyterian Church building was dedicated on December 4, 1870, in memory of George Brown, chairman of the Baltimore-based investment firm, Alex