Original sentence: VMI is known for the financial support of its alumni — in a 1999 study by the National Association of College and University Business Officers, VMI's $290 million endowment was the largest per-student endowment of any public undergraduate college in the United States
Edited sentence: VMI is known for the financial support and loyalty of its alumni — in a 1999 study by the National Association of College and University Business Officers, VMI's $290 million endowment was the largest per-student endowment of any public undergraduate college in the United States