Original sentence: A native of Garze Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture in Sichuan,Tibet.Alan Dawa Dolma (; ; born in July 25, 1987), professionally known as Alan (stylized as alan) (Japanese: アラン, Chinese: 阿兰 or 阿蘭), is a female Tibetan-Chinese singer active in the Japanese music industry.In 2009, her ninth Japanese single "Kuon no Kawa" debuted at #3 on the Oricon weekly charts, the highest ever by a singer from China
Edited sentence: A native of Garze in Sichuan, Tibet.Alan Dawa Dolma (; ; born in July 25, 1987), professionally known as Alan (stylized as alan) (Japanese: アラン, Chinese: 阿兰 or 阿蘭), is a female Tibetan singer active in the Japanese music industry.In 2009, her ninth Japanese single "Kuon no Kawa" debuted at #3 on the Oricon weekly charts, the highest ever by a singer from Tibet and China