Original sentence: In the Contest, Isis Gee advance to the final by securing the tenth and last qualifying place among participants of the first semifinal, becoming the first Polish entrant since the introduction of semifinals to achieve that.In the Final, Isis Gee placed 24th out of 25 participants, garnering 14 points, same as entries from Germany and UK (who were 23rd and 25th> respectively, according to the Eurovision ranking system)
Edited sentence: In the Contest, Isis Gee managed to advance to the final by securing tenth (the last qualifying) place among participants of the first semifinal, becoming the first Polish entrant since the introducion of semifinals to achieve that.In the Final, Isis Gee placed 24th out of 25 participants, garnering only 14 points, same as entries from Germany and UK (who were 23rd and 25th respectively, according to the Eurovision ranking system)