Original sentence: The "dowry" from BMW was made up of a £427million interest-free loan and stocks of cars.The Transport and General Workers Union (T&G), the UK Department of Trade and Industry (DTI), and the British public in general all threw their support behind Towers and the Phoenix Consortium; as Phoenix were the only potential bidders proposing to retain high-volume car production and full employment at the Rover plant in Longbridge, Birmingham
Edited sentence: However, the consortium continued to enjoy strong UK press support for several years following the Phoenix coup.The Transport and General Workers Union (T&G), the UK Department of Trade and Industry (DTI), and the British public in general all threw their support behind Towers and the Phoenix Consortium, as Phoenix were the only potential bidders proposing to retain high-volume car production and full employment at the Rover plant in Longbridge, Birmingham.The agreed "dowry" from BMW was made up of a £427million interest-free loan and stocks of cars