Original sentence: Children is one of the most popular bands in Japan.Children's songs unique is Kazutoshi's remarkable vocal ability.Jen seems to be the most extroverted member who takes his top off onstage at any opportunity.The main force behind the band is their singer and songwriter, Kazutoshi Sakurai, who composes almost all of their songs
Edited sentence: Children is one of the greatest bands in Japan.Children's songs unique is Kazutoshi's remarkable vocal prowess.He is a very talented musician.Jen seems to be the most extroverted member who always takes his top off onstage at any opportunity.The genius behind the band is their singer and songwriter, Kazutoshi Sakurai, who composes almost all of their songs