Original sentence: Lighthouse performed twice at the prestigious Isle of Wight Festival, the only performer other than Jimi Hendrix to be invited to return.Lighthouse sold out Carnegie Hall in 1972.Lighthouse was the main act of Boston Globe, Monterey, and Newport Jazz Festivals for many years.The band won 4 Junos as Best Rock Band of The Year and one for Outstanding Group Performance.They represented Canada in the 1970 Expo in Japan
Edited sentence: The band gained peer approval by winning 4 Junos as Best Rock Band of The Year and also one for Outstanding Group Performance.The only other performer ever asked to return was Jimi Hendrix.They also performed not once but twice at the prestigious Isle of Wight Festival in the UK.They also represented Canada in the 1970 Expo in Japan.They sold out Carnegie Hall in 1972.They were also the main act of Boston Globe, Monterey, and Newport Jazz Festivals for many years