Original sentence: On March 20,2009, Gordy was in Hollywood, California , paying tribute to his first group, and first million-selling act, The Miracles,on their recieving their long-overdue star on the Hollywood Walk Of Fame Speaking in tribute to the group,Gordy said "Without The Miracles, Motown would not be the Motown it is today"
Edited sentence: On March 20,2009, Gordy was in Hollywood, California , paying tribute to his first group, and first million-selling act, The Miracles,on their recieving their long-overdue star on the Hollywood Walk Of Fame.Speaking in tribute to the group,Gordy said "Without The Miracles, Motown would not be the Motown it is today"