Original sentence: On June 18th edition of RAW, Stephanie McMahon made her first public appearance and she addressed the fans about her father, Vince McMahon’s (kayfabe) death.She brought her "daughter" with her to wish him good luck.She was also announced that next week’s RAW will presents a special 3 hours broadcast for celebrate of Mr.Stephanie looked to the sky and she said “I love you, dad” before she walked out of the ring and she made her way to backstage in tears
Edited sentence: , and that she doesn't belong on screen, but just as many people say that, say that she not only belongs on screen, but that a lot of things would be different without her.Almost everyone you ask will tell you Stephanie McMahon shouldn't be on T.He said that the McMahon's wanted their privacy respected, and that just as McMahon had wanted, the show and the company would go on.He then talked to a camera in "Aurora's crib", and told her about how Umaga going to win the match that night.McMahon death news, they showed a press conference in which the Executive Vice President and General Counsel for WWE Ed Kaufman spoke on the McMahon's behalf.On June 11thedition of RAW, WWE began running a storyline on Vince McMahon's (presumed) death, showing him being blown up in a freak limo accident.On June 13th on WWE.On June 18th edition of RAW, Stephanie McMahon made her first public appearance and shockingly addressed the fans about her father's death.On June 19th, WWE released a short video of Stephanie having an emotional breakdown on WWE.She brought her "daughter" with her to wish him good luck where she showed signs of insanity by first grunting at her and yelling at her, to telling her to stay so he could talk to Aurora Rose Levesque, Stephanie's daughter.She thanked them for their shocking support and announced that next week’s RAW will presents a special 3 hours broadcast for celebrate of Mr.Stephanie also promised that "Vengance will be true" as soon as her famliny finds out who did this to her father.Stephanie then looked to the sky and she said “I love you, dad” before she walked out of the ring and she made her way to backstage in tears.The angle was thrown out, and pretty poorly written.com and being brought into a secure room.com, as they continued to break Mr