Original sentence: His efforts in bringing Boris Yeltsin back from the politically dead in Russia earned him (and his three partners) a  in Time Magazine and a major motion picture (Spinning Boris) where George, the central figure in the movie, by name, is played by Jeff Goldblum
Edited sentence: His efforts in bringing Boris Yeltsin back from the politically dead in Russia earned him (and his three partners) a 10 page cover story in Time Magazine.and a major motion picture (Spinning Boris) where George, the central figure in the movie, is played by Jeff Goldblum