Original sentence: He gradually bought more land, and formed the Howard Estates Development Company in 1909.He laid out several streets, water mains and gas mains, and built 35 houses that were priced in the $2,500-$5,000 range.Howard Beach was established in the 1890's by William J.Howard, a Brooklyn glove manufacturer who operated a 150 acre (0.61 km²) goat farm on meadow land near Aqueduct Racetrack, as a source of skins for kid gloves.In 1897, he bought more land and filled it in, and  the following year he built 18 cottages and opened a hotel near the water, which he operated until it was destroyed by fire in October of 1907.PS 207 K-6.The Long Island Rail Road established a station that was first named Ramblersville in 1913, and a Post Office by the same name opened soon thereafter
Edited sentence: He gradually bought more land, and - in 1909 - formed the Howard Estates Development Company.He laid out several streets, water mains and gas mains, and built 35 houses that were priced in the $2,500-$5,000 Range.Howard, a Brooklyn glove manufacturer who operated a 150 Acre (0.61 km²) goat farm on meadow land near [[Aqueduct, as a source of skins for kid gloves.In 1897, he bought more land and filled it in, and - during the following year - he built 18 cottages and opened a hotel near the water, which he operated until it was destroyed by fire in October of 1907.It was established in the 1890's by William J.PS 207K-6.The Long Island Railroad established a station that was first named Ramblersville in 1913, and a Post Office by the same name opened soon thereafter