Original sentence: During university attendance, she debuted in A Midsummer Night's Dream in the Samita Hall.In 1994, she went with the Japanese Performance Association to a French music competition and won first prize.In addition, she has performed a multitude of operettas for many concerts
Edited sentence: Because of her excellent execution of every performance, she has received high appraisal for her beauty, charm and amazing vocal technique.During her studies, she debuted in A Midsummer Night's Dream in the Samita Hall.During university attendance, Kasahara went full-throttle on her major, and continued her studies post-graduate.In 1994, she went with the Japanese Performance Association to a French music competition, and won first prize.In addition, she has performed a multitude of operettas for countless concerts.Many concerts featured incredibly difficult melodies