Original sentence: Atlanta became the second American city to host the Olympics, after Los Angeles, which hosted the 1932 games and the 1984 games.The games themselves were notable in the realm of sporting events, but they were marred by numerous organizational inefficiencies as well as the Centennial Olympic Park bombing, which resulted in the death of one person and injured several others
Edited sentence: Atlanta became the second American city to host the Olympics, after Los Angeles, who hosted the games 1932 and 1984.The games themselves were a wonderful achievement in sports, but they were marred by numerous organizational inefficiencies as well as the Centennial Olympic Park bombing, which resulted in the death of one person and injured several others