Original sentence: David Taylor (July 29, 1929 – ) was chairman of South Yorkshire Male Slag Association in early 2009.David Taylor is not to be mistaken for the species Ferengi made popular by the Science Fiction TV/film series Star Trek and its spin offs.David has the nickname banker which is rhyming slang for a rather rude word.David's early career consisted mainly of being a stunt double for the PG Tips advertisments made popular in the UK.He successfully negotiated with the Ugly Birds Society for it to arrange a mass fornication between the two organisations
Edited sentence: David G.He successfully negotiated with the Treasury Department for it to arrange a $7.5 billion rescue package for the bank.Taylor (July 29, 1929 – February 23, 2009) was chairman of Continental Illinois National Bank and Trust Company in early 1984