Original sentence: "A ride of about five leagues first across the same high tableland, then through the lovely valley of La Sierra, brought us to Patzun, a town of some importance, well placed and rather picturesque."Whilst we were watching the groups in the Plaza our attention was attracted by the sound of music, and three shabby-looking fat ladinos came in sight, playing violin, trombone, and drum, and heralding a procession of gaily-dressed Indians.Anne Maudslay continues:.Maudslay's wife described the town from a Victorian Era perspective in their book A glimpse at Guatemala:.The huipils (English: blouse) of the women are woven in stripes and brightly colored with native dyes, and the home-made "enagua" (English: skirt) of blue and white striped cotton is fastened round the waist over the huipil by a embroidered belt with hanging ends
Edited sentence: Anne Maudslay continues: "Whilst we were watching the groups in the Plaza our attention was attracted by the sound of music, and three shabby-looking fat ladinos came in sight, playing violin, trombone, and drum, and heralding a procession of gaily-dressed Indians.Maudslay's wife described the town from a Victorian Era perspective in their book A glimpse at Guatemala:  "A ride of about five leagues first across the same high tableland, then through the lovely valley of La Sierra, brought us to Patzun, a town of some importance, well placed and rather picturesque.The huipils (English: blouse) of the women are woven in stripes and brightly colored with native dyes, and the home-made "enagua" (English: skirt) of blue and white striped cotton is fastened round the waist over the huipil by a beautifully embroidered belt with hanging ends