Original sentence: At the urging of evangelical leaders worldwide, The Lausanne Movement held The Third Congress on World Evangelisation in Cape Town, South Africa, October 16–25, 2010.Robert Stearns, executive director of Eagles' Wings, described the article in Lausanne's journal as a "narrow and dangerously one-sided presentation", yet offered no proof to counter Haas's claims.Steve Haas gave a sermon on social justice discussing problems with the way evangelicals approached the Rwanda crisis, the AIDS epidemic and its close support of Zionism
Edited sentence: At the urging of evangelical leaders worldwide, The Lausanne Movement held The Third Congress on World Evangelisation in Cape Town, South Africa, October 16-25, 2010.Robert Stearns, executive director of Eagles’ Wings, described the article in Lausanne's journal as a 'narrow and dangerously one-sided presentation'.The Lausanne movement has been criticised for its statement, that 'For over 60 years, many evangelicals have clung to a very narrow theological narrative that weds Christian theology with a political ideology known as Zionism'