Original sentence: In response to the perceived problems at Indian Point, repeated failures of the warning siren tests, and the withholding of information from the public for three months, a new type of independent monitoring service called IPRadMon began offering the public radiation alerts by e-mail for the first time.Incidents which would be too small to get press attention at other types of generation facilities frequently become front page news if they occur at a nuclear plant.News items about radiation leaks frequently fail to put the severity of radiation leaks in perspective.Press Attention to incidents at Indian Point include:.The history of incidents at Indian Point is quite lengthy, ranging from the siren failures and replacement of the siren systems to radiation leaks too small to be detected over natural background radiation in the area.There has never been a report of a leak of radioactive material at Indian Point significant enough to be detected outside of the plants grounds.and this article about a leak of water containing weak radioactive isotopes which did not contaminate groundwater outside of the plant's grounds or reach the Hudson River
Edited sentence: Examples include:.In response to the problems at Indian Point, repeated failures of the warning siren tests, and the withholding of information from the public for three months, a new type of independent monitoring service called IPRadMon began offering the public radiation alerts by e-mail for the first time.The history of problems related to Indian Point is quite lengthy, ranging from the siren failures and replacement of the siren systems to radiation leaks which did not.and this article, which talks about a leak of water containing radioactive isotopes under Indian Point on the scale of a "Central Park Reservoir"