Original sentence: Hempology 101 is a club that meets Wednesday at 4:20 by the Petch Fountain to protest cannabis laws by violating them openly.The UVic Outdoors Club is one of the larger clubs on campus
Edited sentence: Hempology 101, is a club that meets Wednesday at 4:20 by the Petch Fountain to protest cannabis laws by violating them openly.The UVic Outdoors Club is one of the larger, and by far the most interesting clubs on campus