Original sentence: Following a mediocre 10-game homestand that saw them go 3-4 against the Phillies and Mets, the Giants began a road trip against Houston, losing two one-run games before pulling out a 12th-inning win, before taking the short trip across the Bay, losing the opener to Oakland 15-3
Edited sentence: Following a mediocre 10-game homestand that saw them go 3-4 against the Phillies and Mets, the Giants began a road trip against Houston, losing two one-run games before pulling out a 12th-inning win, then were utterly humiliated in Oakland, losing to the A's 15-3