Original sentence: Supporters claim that the media has been known to withold information and to misrepresent the news in many instances, and that this is one of them.That fact that students of Aesthetic Realism said firmly that this philosophy had been treated unjustly has interpreted by critics as an instance of cultlike attitudes of self-centeredness, a belief in Aesthetic Realism's or Eli Siegel's infallibility, or a lack of humility
Edited sentence: Meanwhile, the media has been known to withold information and to misrepresent the news in many instances.That fact that students of Aesthetic Realism said firmly that this philosophy had been treated unjustly was interpreted (by the above-mentioned individuals) as an instance of the typical cultlike attitudes of self-centeredness, a belief in Aesthetic Realism's or Eli Siegel's infallibility, or a lack of humility.This is one