Original sentence: Before leaving Coventry City for Newcastle, he attended Mosaic Church in Hillfields, Coventry and helped coach the church football team, Athletico Mosaic, who were promoted from the Coventry and District Church Division 2 to the Premier Division
Edited sentence: Before leaving Coventry City for Newcastle, he attended Mosaic Church in Hillfields, Coventry.Whilst at Mosaic Church, Bigirimana regularly helped coach the church football team and as a result Athletico Mosaic were promoted from the Coventry and District Church Division 2 to the Premier Division