Original sentence: Everett has worked with: Screaming Lord Sutch in Screaming Lord Sutch and the Savages, (replacing well-known guitarists, Jeff Beck and Jimmy Page), Alan Lancaster (Status Quo), David Knopfler (Dire Straits), Bob Henrit (The Kinks/Argent), Sam Kelly (Gary Moore), Jim Russell (Stretch/Scotty Moore), Carl Palmer (ELP and Atomic Rooster), Gerry McAvoy and Brendan O'Neill (Rory Gallagher/Nine Below Zero), Jim Leverton (Steve Marriott/Savoy Brown), Kim Beacon (String Driven Thing), Ian Paice (Deep Purple), Gordon Huntley (Matthew's Southern Comfort) and Bobby Miller (Supertramp).Everett has written songs for Nine Below Zero, including "Satellite Blues" from the 1992 album, Off The Hook, and wrote several compositions on The Other Side, by The Herbs—a rare album release featuring John Keeble from Spandau Ballet and Dean Howard from T'Pau (band)
Edited sentence: Everett has worked with: Screaming Lord Sutch in Screaming Lord Sutch and the Savages, (replacing such notables as Jeff Beck and Jimmy Page) Alan Lancaster (Status Quo), David Knopfler (Dire Straits), Bob Henrit (The Kinks/Argent), Sam Kelly (Gary Moore),  Jim Russell (Stretch/Scotty Moore), Carl Palmer (ELP and Atomic Rooster), Gerry McAvoy and Brendan O'Neill (Rory Gallagher/Nine Below Zero), Jim Leverton (Steve Marriott/Savoy Brown), Kim Beacon (String Driven Thing), Ian Paice (Deep Purple), Gordon Huntley (Matthew's Southern Comfort) and Bobby Miller (Supertramp).He has written songs for Nine Below Zero such as 'Satellite Blues' from the 1992 Album 'Off The Hook', and wrote some numbers on "The Other Side" by The Herbs - a rare sought after album featuring John Keeble from Spandau Ballet and Dean Howard from T'Pau (band)