Original sentence: It states inter alia: "His Majesty's Government view with favour the establishment in the Palestine Mandate of a national home for the Jewish people and will use their best endeavours to facilitate the achievement of this object.The secular argument that the Balfour Declaration of November 2, 1917, proposed a Jewish right of return, the first modern diplomatic document to do so
Edited sentence: Based on this, they say that this nullifies Jewish self-determination since the concept of self-determination only applies to land that a person is a native in.Charter should therefore give way to post-national states which allow their citizens to mobilize marketplace or voluntary mechanisms for cultural preservation, not state institutions.It states inter alia: "His Majesty's Government view with favour the establishment in Palestine of a national home for the Jewish people and will use their best endeavours to facilitate the achievement of this object.It was on the basis of the latter, secular argument that the Balfour Declaration of November 2, 1917, proposed a Jewish right of return, the first modern diplomatic document to do so.Other critics argue that nation-states are outmoded and unjust in any case, and that the Westphalian notion of a right to self-determination as embodied in the U.Some critics argue that Jews comprise a religion whose members hail from many nations and do not constitute a people or a nation, and that they can therefore have no right of self-determination to exercise.Within this group, some argue that Jews are citizens of their own states and belong to the nations they come from, and are therefore foreign to Palestine