Original sentence: Global pollution and over-consumption of marine lives have resulted in drastically dwindling population of the majority of species.Sign the Petition to get UN endorsement for this day.The Ocean Project.The oceans also provide sea-lanes for international trade.World Ocean Day began on 8 June, 1992 at the Earth Summit in Rio de Janeiro , Brazil.World Ocean Day is an opportunity every year to honor the oceans and products they provide, such as seafood, as well as marine lives themselves for aquariums and pets
Edited sentence: Also, don't forget its the ocean going shipping lanes that provide the most economic cartage of goods for multinational commerce.Among them are seafood, seaweed, shells, along with the very living animals themselves for the aquariums, pets, and zoos.And to give thanks for its majestic bounty of products she provides.Globally pollution and over-harvesting of the oceans creatures has resulted in drastically dwindling population numbers of the majority of species.It is truly a shame for this  modern age, for all that the oceans provides, that we don't treat them more respectfully.World Ocean Day began on 8 June , 1992 at the Earth Summit in Rio de Janeiro , Brazil.World Ocean Day is an opportunity every year to honor the Earth's oceans and seas.[Sign the Petition] to get UN endorsement for this day.[The Ocean Project]