Original sentence: Alonso remained with Renault for the 2004 season, and although he did not win any race, Alonso did confirm his status as one of the leading drivers in Formula One.For the 2005 championship season, he is joined by Italian Giancarlo Fisichella.However, he did not won at his home grand prix in front of his fans, finishing second after Kimi Raikkonen.In the second race of the season in Malaysia he got pole position and easily won the race.Two weeks later, the tide of the championship began to turn as Raikkonen won again at Monaco while Alonso finished in the fourth place
Edited sentence: ) For the 2005 championship season, he is joined by Italian Giancarlo Fisichella.Alonso remained with Renault for the 2004 season, and although he failed to win a race, he did confirm his status as one of the leading drivers in Formula One.However, he failed to win at his home grand prix in front of his fanatical fans, finishing second after being comprehensively beaten by Finnish Mclaren driver Kimi Raikkonen.In the second race of the season in  Malaysia he got pole position and easily won the race.Two weeks later, the tide of the championship began to turn as Raikkonen won a resounding victory at Monaco while Alonso struggled towards a fourth place finish