Original sentence: Although Collins claimed the novel brimmed with homoeroticism, incest, and descriptions of many different bodily fluids, however, barely two pages of the tightly-plotted novel contain sexual passages or references.One phrase in particular combined bestiality, pedophilia, prostitution, and biastophilia in just three sentences:
Edited sentence: It brimmed with homoeroticism, included scenes of incest, and featured descriptions of many different bodily fluids.One in particular combined bestiality, pedophilia, prostitution, and biastophilia in just three sentences:.While the response to the novel included much amusement, some readers found a few passages particularly disturbing