Original sentence: Famous Hanna residents have included Shirley McClellan, Deputy Premier and Minister of Finance, Marjorie Willison, author and radio personality, a Rhodes Scholar, an engineer who worked on both the Avro Arrow and for NASA, a rock band (Nickelback), and an assortment of hockey players including one Hall of Famer, Lanny McDonald
Edited sentence: Hanna, as small and unassuming as it is, has produced Shirley McClellan, Deputy Premier and Minister of Finance, Marjorie Willison, author and radio personality, a Rhodes Scholar, an engineer who worked on both the Avro Arrow and for NASA, a rock band (Nickelback), and an assortment of hockey players including one Hall of Famer, Lanny McDonald