Original sentence: 1.5G individuals are often bilingual and find it easier to be assimilated into the local culture and society than people who immigrated as adults.However, their identification will be affected by their experiences growing up in the new country.Many 1.5 generation individuals are bi-cultural, combining both cultures - culture from the country of origin with the culture of the new country
Edited sentence: 1.5G individuals are often bilingual and better assimilated into the local culture and society than people who immigrated as adults.However their identification will be affected by their experiences growing up in the new country.Many 1.5 generation individuals are bi-cultural, combining the best of both cultures - culture from the country of origin with the culture of the new country