Original sentence: Critics claim that the quality of materials found on Slashdot has decreased during 2005.It is an offbeat and complex subculture involving sometimes repetitive and sometimes obscene comments featuring a mixture of Slashdot celebrities and other unusual juvenilia.While Slashdot's core audiences are often said to consist of Linux enthusiasts and various other enthusiasts of the open source software movement, there is a significant Windows audience as well
Edited sentence: It is an offbeat and complex subculture involving sometimes repetitive, sometimes obscene comments featuring a mixture of Slashdot celebrities and other unusual juvenilia.The quality of materials found on Slashdot has declined during 2005.While Slashdot's core audiences are often said to consist of Linux zealots and various other enthusiasts of the open source software movement, there is a significant Windows audience as well