Original sentence: Generally, its scope is not limited to Japanese literature but affects the Japanese view of the world in general.In his criticism on The Tale of Genji, Motoori noted it as the crucial emotion that moves readers.Mono no aware (Japanese: 物の哀れ, traditionally written in kana as もののあはれ, IPA: ; literally, "the pathos of things") is a Japanese term used to describe the awareness of the transience of things, and a gentle sadness at their passing.See: sakura
Edited sentence: In his criticism on The Tale of Genji, Motoori thought it being seen as the crucial emotion that moves readers but Motoori claimed its scope is not limited to Japanese literature but affects the Japanese view of the world in general.Mono no aware (Japanese: 物の哀れ, traditionally written in kana as もののあはれ, IPA: ; literally, "the pathos of things") is a Japanese term used to describe the awareness of the impermanence of things, and a gentle sadness at their passing