Original sentence: Sanchez has stated that he is influenced by bands such as Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, Thin Lizzy, Black Sabbath, Iron Maiden.Some people draw comparisons between the high pitched vocals of Claudio Sanchez and Rush frontman Geddy Lee
Edited sentence: Sanchez has stated that he is influenced by bands such as Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, Thin Lizzy, Black Sabbath, Iron Maiden, and many people draw comparisons between the high pitched vocals of Claudio Sanchez and Rush frontman Geddy Lee