Original sentence: His most controversial decision as President has been the fines and penalties imposed upon the Penn State football program in July 2012 as a result of the Jerry Sandusky sex abuse scandal, which included the loss of scholarships, the suspension of post-season competition, the vacancy of past wins, and a $60 million fine to be used to fund a charity combating child abuse
Edited sentence: His most controversial decision as President was his decision to ignore the bylaws of the NCAA and without due process impose fines and penalties upon the Penn State football program in July 2012 as a result of the Jerry Sandusky sex abuse scandal, which included the loss of scholarships, the suspension of post-season competition, the vacancy of past wins, and a $60 million fine to be used to fund a charity combating child abuse.Many sports fans, commentators and a Pennsylvania Senator have concluded that the NCAA, under Mark Emmert's leadership, has a culture problem.Throughout Emmert's tenure as a leader of universities, those universities have had terrible graduation rates for their student-athlete football players