Original sentence: Existing laws were extended to include marital rape (usually, in practice, of wives by husbands) and sex when a person is too physically or mentally incapacitated to consent.Feminists worked to create domestic violence shelters and rape crisis hotlines, which had been extremely scarce prior to 1965.Sexual assault and domestic violence became central targets of women's activism.Some feminists, notably Andrea Dworkin, argued that the dominant metaphor describing the heterosexual relationship of men to women is itself rape; men raped women physically, economically and spiritually.Susan Brownmiller's Against Her Will examined the history of rape.The crime of rape began to assume its contemporary form, sex without consent, both legally and socially
Edited sentence: As the reality of women's status increased, the feminist rhetoric against men became more vitriolic.Radical feminists argued that rape was the defining characteristic of men, and introduced a new phase of hostility to maleness.The dominant metaphor describing the relationship of men to women became rape; men raped women physically, economically and spiritually