Original sentence: Britain's war effort created great demand for munitions and goods, which had to be produced by a relatively unskilled work force.Butten sought to take the somewhat mechanistic and task-orientated concepts of scientific management and add a human dimension to them.PA's first assignment was to train housewives to assemble the tail gun section for the Lancaster Bomber, as part of Britain's policy of bringing women into the factories in order to free-up male workers for the armed forces
Edited sentence: Britain's war effort created an insatiable demand for munitions and goods, which had to be produced by a relatively unskilled work force.Butten and colleagues seized the opportunity and expanded rapidly.PA's first assignment in 1943 was to train housewives in the difficult task of assembling the tail gun section for the Lancaster Bomber, as part of Britain's policy of bringing women into the factories in order to free-up male workers for the armed forces.PA's new approach was considerably less confrontational and more successful than its predecessors.The founder of PA, Ernest Butten, sought to take the somewhat mechanistic and task-orientated concepts of scientific management and add a human dimension to them.The war ended a year or so after the formation of PA, and with its end began the demand for production of civilian goods, coupled with the return of large numbers of servicemen seeking employment in industry