Original sentence: From an environmental perspective, fertilizing, overproduction, and the use of pesticides in conventional farming may negatively affect ecosystems, biodiversity, groundwater, and drinking water supplies.However, the outcome of farming organically may not produce such benefits because organic agriculture has higher production costs and lower yields, higher labor costs, and higher consumer prices
Edited sentence: From an environmental perspective, fertilizing, overproduction, and the use of pesticides in conventional farming is often affecting ecosystems, biodiversity, groundwater, and drinking water supplies negatively.However, the outcome of farming organically may have uncertain benefits.Organic agriculture has higher potential costs from an economic perspective due to lower yields, higher labor costs, and higher consumer prices