Original sentence: She was transported to a Palestinian hospital.Smith also observed: "We were horribly surprised.This was the conclusion reached in June 2003 by a military investigation by the Israel Defense Forces Judge Advocate’s Office.” Other reports say the Israeli government charged that the house being demolished contained a tunnel used for smuggling weapons from Egypt
Edited sentence: " Corrie was transported to a Palestinian hospital.In June 2003, a military investigation by the Israel Defense Forces Judge Advocate’s Office concluded that her death was accidental.Other reports say the Israeli government charged that the house being demolished contained a tunnel used for smuggling weapons from Egypt.Smith recounted afterward; "We were horribly surprised