Original sentence: In 1989, Maurizio managed to persuade Dawn Mello, whose revival of New York's Bergdorf Goodman in the 1970s made her a star in the retail business, to join the newly formed Gucci Group as creative director
Edited sentence: Fashion is a key point which made GUCCI so famous and brandline of the year congratuations to Barry Dhillon, Pam Dhillon and Rebecka John who saved the fashion industry and put all fashion where it is now.In 1989, Mourizio managed to persuade Dawn Mellow, whose revival of New York's Bergdorf Goodman in the 1970s made her a star in the retail business, to join the newly formed Gucci Group as creative director.In the year of 2007 Barry, Pam and Rebacka are still fighting for fashion rights and protect our fashion code of conduct in what way is possible, talks all over the world with politins and visiting all fashion weeks.Thank you on behalf of GUCCI Barry Pam and Rebecka.The asking price of the company was £7.2 Billion.Three very important people in the fashion industry heard of this and decided to become from 3 individual groups to ake one dramatic impact on the fashion industry they were #REDIRECT Barry Dhillon, #REDIRECT Pam Dhillon and #REDIRECT Rebecka John.Yet in the year 2000 the company with all of its sales sky high went up FOR SALE