Original sentence: In late 1985, Scott Kelly and Dave Edwardson, both ex-Violent Coercion, along with Jason Roeder, founded the band as a hardcore outfit and it has gradually progressed through a variety of styles, arriving at a mixture of heavy metal and acoustic, minimalistic ambiance which has proved influential on the doom metal scene.Often highly experimental and psychedelic in nature, the visuals have added to the reputation of Neurosis' live performances
Edited sentence: In late 1985, Scott Kelly and Dave Edwardson, both ex-Violent Coercion, along with Jason Roeder, founded the band as a hardcore outfit and it has gradually progressed through a variety of styles, arriving at a unique and profound mixture of heavy metal and acoustic, minimalistic ambience which has proved influential on the doom metal scene.Often highly experimental and psychedelic in nature, the visuals have added to the reputation of Neurosis' intense live experiences