Original sentence: Educated at Buxton College secondary school, Derbyshire, and Oxford University: BA History (congratulatory first class, 1977), Balliol_College,_Oxford; Senior Scholar, Merton_College,_Oxford; MA and D Phil History 1981
Edited sentence: Educated at Buxton College secondary school, Derbyshire, and Oxford University: BA History (congratulatory first class, 1977), Balliol College, Oxford; Senior Scholar, Merton_College,_Oxford; MA and D Phil History 1981