Original sentence: In 1924, the Tajik Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic was created as a part of Uzbekistan, but in 1929 the Tajik  Soviet Socialist Republic was made a separate constituent republic.In terms of living conditions, education and industry Tajikistan was somewhat behind the other Soviet Republics.The Tajik-speaking cities of Samarkand and Bukhara remained in the Uzbek SSR
Edited sentence: In 1924, the Tajik Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic was created as a part of Uzbekistan, but in 1929 the Tajik  Soviet Socialist Republic was made a separate constituent republic and the true Tajik cities were taken by Uzbeks, they declared that Samarkand from now on their capital and after the Russians gave them Tajik lands they announced that Tashkent is their capital city.Moscow did little to develop Tajikistan and it remained relatively behind other Soviet Republics in living conditions, education and industry