Original sentence: As the raiding party approached the target they spotted an Argentine sentry, however they were not compromised, allowing them to enter the target and lay charges onto seven of the aircraft.Following this cue Glamorgan then began shelling the Argentine positions on the airfield using high explosive rounds, hitting the ammunition dump and fuel stores.Once all the aircraft had been prepared the raiding team opened fire with small arms and L1A1 rockets strafing the aircraft.The Argentine version states that their marines remained in shelters during the Glamorgan shelling, so they were completely unable to face the SAS in combat.The delivery point was some 6km (3.7 miles) from the airstrip on Pebble Island
Edited sentence: As the raiding party approached the target they spotted an Argentine sentry but were not seen, allowing them to enter the target and lay charges on seven of the aircraft.Following this cue Glamorgan began shelling the Argentine positions on the airfield using high-explosive rounds, hitting the ammunition dump and fuel stores.Once all the aircraft had been prepared the raiding team opened fire on the aircraft with small arms and L1A1 rockets.The Argentine version states that their marines remained in shelters during the Glamorgan shelling, so they were unable to face the SAS in combat.The delivery point was 6km (3.7 miles) from the airstrip on Pebble Island