Original sentence: During her tenure at the UN, she had a rocky relationship with the United Nations Secretary-General, Boutros Boutros-Ghali, whom she claimed was "disengaged" and "neglect[ful]" of genocide in Rwanda.In Shake Hands with the Devil, Roméo Dallaire claims that in 1994, in Albright's role as the United States' UN permanent representative, she led efforts to deny declaring the massacres in Rwanda genocide, even though she used the term in her memoirs.She also led resistance to a new mandate to a new UN mission towards "ensuring" stability and security in the provinces of Rwanda
Edited sentence: During her tenure at the UN, she had a rocky relationship with the United Nations Secretary-General, Boutros Boutros-Ghali, whom she criticized as "disengaged" and "neglect[ful]" of genocide in Rwanda.In Shake Hands with the Devil, Roméo Dallaire claims that in 1994, in Albright's role as the United States' UN permanent representative, she led efforts to deny declaring the massacres in Rwanda "genocide", even though this is how she describes these killings in her memoirs.She was instructed to support a reduction or withdrawl of the United Nations Assistance Mission for Rwanda (which never happened) but was later given more flexibility