Original sentence: Rudolf (Jean-Baptiste Attila) Laban (aka Rudolf Von Laban) (December 15, 1879, Pressburg, Austria-Hungary (today Bratislava, Slovakia) - July 1, 1958, Weybridge, England) was a notable, central European dance artist and theorist, whose work laid the foundations for Laban Movement Analysis, and specific developments
Edited sentence: Rudolf (Jean-Baptiste Attila) Laban (aka Rudolf Von Laban) (December 15, 1879, Pressburg, Austria-Hungary (today Bratislava, Slovakia) - July 1, 1958, Weybridge, England) was a notable central European dance artist and theorist, whose work laid the foundations for Laban Movement Analysis, and many more exciting more specific developments