Original sentence: " However, many earlier writers, schools of philosophy, and religious movements expressed pantheistic ideas.Although not based in linguistics but in folk etymology, the prefix "pan-" is identified by some with the Greek God Pan, the god of Nature that has the hindquarters, legs and horns of a goat.As such Pantheism can be described as promotes the idea that "God" is better understood as a way of relating to Nature and the Universe.The term "pantheist" — from which the word "Pantheism" is derived — was purportedly first used in English by Irish writer John Toland in his 1705 work, Socinianism Truly Stated, by a pantheist.The word derives from the  (pan) meaning "all" and θεός (theos) meaning "belief that God is all"
Edited sentence: As such Pantheism promotes the idea that "God" is better understood as a way of relating to Nature and the Universe.However, many earlier writers, schools of philosophy, and religious movements expressed pantheistic ideas.The root "Pan" is by some identified with the Greek God Pan, the God of Nature that has the hindquarters, legs and horns of a goat.The term "pantheist"—from which the word "Pantheism" is derived—was purportedly first used in English by Irish writer John Toland in his 1705 work, Socinianism Truly Stated, by a pantheist.The word derives from the  (pan) meaning "All" and θεός (theos) meaning "God" - literally "All is God".Thus no one used the term Pantheism or Pantheist before the early 18th century, because these words did not exist