Original sentence: Each aquarium will be constructed using a durable fiberglass structure; while crystal-clear acrylic panels  thick will be used for the viewing windows that run the entire length of the aquariums.The aquarium to the right of home plate (when looking from the pitcher's mound) will measure  long,  high and holds over  of seawater, while the aquarium to the left, will be  in length, holding  of water.The piece uses the letters from the original "Miami Orange Bowl" sign as the basis for the  orange concrete letters rearranged across the east plaza so that they form new words as visitors move around them
Edited sentence: Each aquarium will be constructed using a durable fiberglass structure; while crystal-clear acrylic panels  thick will be used for the impressive viewing windows that run the entire length of the aquariums.The aquarium to the right of home plate (when looking from the pitcher's mound) measures an impressive  long,  high and holds over  of seawater, while the aquarium to the left, will be  in length, holding  of water.The piece uses the letters from the original MIAMI ORANGE BOWL sign as the basis for the  orange concrete letters rearranged across the east plaza so that they form new words as visitors move around them