Original sentence: New York State has the second largest population of Haitian Americans in the United States after Florida.The largest Haitian community in New York is in Flatbush, Brooklyn
Edited sentence: According to the 2000 census, there are about 200,000 Haitians/Haitian Americans in Brooklyn, showing that it is home to the largest number of Haitian immigrants in New York City.On Flatbush Avenue, Nostrand Avenue and Church Avenue you can find Haitian businesses, cuisine’s, music and etc.The neighborhood that has the largest Haitian community in New York is Flatbush, Brooklyn