Original sentence: The 2009 Tel Aviv gay centre shooting resulted in the deaths of two people and injuries to at least fifteen others at the Tel Aviv branch of the Israeli GLBT Association, a place called "Bar-Noar" (), on Nahmani Street in Tel Aviv, Israel, on 1 August 2009
Edited sentence: The 2009 Tel Aviv gay centre shooting resulted in the deaths of two people and injuries to at least fifteen others at the Tel Aviv branch of the Israeli GLBT Association, at the "Bar-Noar" (, "Youth Bar"), on Nahmani Street in Tel Aviv, Israel, on 1 August 2009