Original sentence: If the boats are based at the larger Haifa naval base, access to the Persian Gulf area either requires openly sailing on the surface through the Egyptian controlled Suez Canal as permitted in the Egypt–Israel Peace Treaty or a long voyage sailing around Africa.In 2009 the Israeli newspaper Haaretz, quoting an Israeli defence official, reported that the very small Eilat naval station is unsuited strategically to base the Dolphin-class boats, specifically noting the tight entrance of the Gulf of Aqaba at the Straits of Tiran as one held by potential adversaries including Saudi Arabia on the east and the demilitarized Egyptian Sinai to the west.The Egypt–Israel Peace Treaty allows for the free passage of Israeli vessels through the Suez Canal, and recognizes the Strait of Tiran and the Gulf of Aqaba as international waterways
Edited sentence: If the boats are based at the larger Haifa naval base, access to the Persian Gulf area either requires openly sailing on the surface through the Egyptian controlled Suez Canal as permitted in the Egypt–Israel Peace Treaty (It is a political draft based on mutual trust and is not binding one as president Mubarak said) or a long voyage sailing around Africa.In 2009 the Israeli newspaper Haaretz, quoting an Israeli defence official, reported that the very small Eilat naval station is unsuited strategically to base the Dolphin-class boats, specifically noting the tight entrance of the Gulf of Aqaba at the Straits of Tiran as one held by potential adversaries including Saudi Arabia on the east and the Egyptian Sinai to the west.The Egypt–Israel Peace Treaty (again It is a political draft based on mutual trust and is not binding one as president Mubarak said) allows for the free passage of Israeli vessels through the Suez Canal,(with paying fees like any vessel & Commitment and respect for the laws of Egyptian sovereignty over its land and waters) including the Egyptian parts Strait of Tiran and the Gulf of Aqaba as agrantee of As a guarantee not to endanger Egyptian national security, as well as the security of Saudi Arabia and Jordan.but as it said it is unsuited strategically