Original sentence: He earned the title Jayamkonda Cholan (The Victorious Cholan)after numerous victories.His life is a testimony to a king who fought his own wars standing shoulder to shoulder with his men on front lines.Kōpparakēsarivarman Rājādhiraja Chōla I was an 11th-century emperor of the Indian Chola empire and the successor of his father, Rajendra Chola I.Rajadhiraja Chola’s record shows that he was a born fighter who was very capable of maintaining a vast and expansive empire with territories even outside the shores of India.Towards the end of his reign he sacked the Western Chalukyan capital Kalyanapuram and assumed the title Kalyanapuramgonda Chola and performed a virabhisheka (anointment of heroes) under the name Vijaya Rajendra Cholan (the victorious Rajendra Cholan)
Edited sentence: He earned the title Jayamkonda Cholan (The Victorious Cholan) after numerous victories.His life is a testimony to a great king who fought his own wars standing shoulder to shoulder with his men on front lines.Kōpparakēsarivarman Rājādhiraja Chōla I was a historic 11th-century emperor of the Indian Chola empire and the successor of his father, Rajendra Chola I.Rajadhiraja Chola’s record shows that he was a great fighter who was very capable of maintaining a vast and expansive empire with territories even outside the shores of India.Towards the end of his glorious reign he sacked the Western Chalukyan capital Kalyanapuram and assumed the title Kalyanapuramgonda Chola and performed a virabhisheka (anointment of heroes) under the name Vijaya Rajendra Cholan (the victorious Rajendra Cholan)