Original sentence: However, Seeley ended the relationship for the second time after an intense case nearly cost Camille her life, with Seeley asserting that on-the-job romantic relationships endanger the team in high-pressure situations.Saroyan for some length of time (she mentions that she has known Booth and his brother Jared for 15 years in the fourth season), with both of them possessing extensive familiarity with the other's family members
Edited sentence: However, Seeley ended the relationship for the second time after an intense case nearly cost Camille her life, with Seeley asserting on-the-job romantic relationships endanger the team in high-pressure situations.Saroyan for some length of time (she mentions she has known Booth and his brother Jared for 15 years in the fourth season), with both of them possessing extensive familiarity with the other's family members