Original sentence: In the summer, resort towns like Stowe, Manchester, and Woodstock host visitors.In winter, the ski resorts Stowe, Killington Ski Resort, Mad River Glen, Sugarbush, Stratton, Jay Peak, Okemo, Mount Snow and Bromley host skiers from around the globe, although their largest markets are the Boston, Montreal and New York metropolitan areas.It contributes $4.1 billion to the state's economy or 27% of the gross state product.Resorts, hotels, restaurants, and shops, designed to attract tourists, employ people year-round.Several horse shows are annual events.Summer camps contribute to Vermont's tourist economy.Trout fishing, lake fishing, and ice fishing draw outdoor enthusiasts to the state, as does the hiking on the Long Trail.Vermont's state parks, historic sites, museums, golf courses, and new boutique hotels with spas were designed to attract tourists
Edited sentence: In the summer, resort towns like Stowe, Manchester, and Woodstock draw visitors looking for a mountain vacation.In winter, the ski resorts Stowe, Killington Ski Resort, Mad River Glen, Sugarbush, Stratton, Jay Peak, Okemo, Mount Snow and Bromley draw skiers from around the globe, although their largest markets are Boston, Montreal and the New York metropolitan area.Numerous summer camps contribute to Vermont's economy.Resorts, hotels, restaurants, shops and attractions employ many people year-round.Several noteworthy horse shows are annual events.Tourism contributes $4.1 billion to the state's economy or 27% of the gross state product.Trout fishing, lake fishing, and ice fishing draw outdoor enthusiasts to the state, as does the excellent hiking on the Long Trail.Vermont's state parks, historic sites, museums, golf courses, and new boutique hotels with spas also attract tourists