Original sentence: A fire caused extensive damage in part of the school in late December, 2008, while students were out for their holiday break.Allot of them were broken, self closing devices were broken, some doors were bent and didn't close, and some didn't have fire alarm magnets.But later investigation showed that Shelton High School does met all fire code requirements.Despite this major renovation, there were growing concerns about the states fire codes in the school.Instead it went through a “alteration”, it does not require putting sprinklers in the building automatically.The buildings fire doors were also brought up
Edited sentence: A fire caused extensive damage in part of the school in late December 2008, while students were out for their holiday break.But later investigation showed that Shelton High School does meet all fire code requirements.Despite this major renovation, there were growing concerns about the state's fire codes in the school.Instead it went through an “alteration”; it does not require putting sprinklers in the building automatically.Many of them were broken, self-closing devices were broken, some doors were bent and didn't close, and some didn't have fire alarm magnets.The building's fire doors were also brought up