Original sentence: Another part of the controversy stems from the methods of slaughter, one of which includes beating to death by clubs, (a criminal offense in many countries), due to the traditional belief that "beaten dogs taste better.The controversy surfaced again in 2001 when the 2002 FIFA World Cup soccer games were held jointly in  South Korea and Japan
Edited sentence: Another part of the controversy stems from the methods of slaughter, one of which includes beating to death by clubs, (a criminal offense in many countries), regarding a misbelief that "beaten dogs taste better.The controversy surfaced again in 2001 when the 2002 FIFA World Cup soccer games were held jointly in Korea and Japan