Original sentence: Dagenham was until very recently a homogenous white working class area.Some local residents are angered at what they see as the indigenous white working class being pushed aside.The British National Party has enjoyed relative electoral success due to widespread concerns over mass immigration, achieving nearly 10% of the vote in the 2005 general election and in the 2006 local elections returned 12 councillors to Barking and Dagenham London Borough Council.The nationalist British National Party is very active in this area and its support has been steadily rising
Edited sentence: The British National Party received nearly 10% of the vote in the 2005 general election and in the 2006 local elections returned 12 councillors to Barking and Dagenham London Borough Council.The far-right British National Party is very active in this area and its support has been steadily rising