Original sentence: Almost 2 years later, all security officers in the nation say that the nation is as defenseless in the event of a similar plot.Bush's administration has resisted any attempt at full investigation.The event instead led to rounds of promotions, awards and increased subsidies in defence.While the events of September 11 are considered to be the most serious catastrophe in the history of the United States, no public investigation has yet been approved and George W.While the events show mishandlings in some part of the United States government, in terms of both the way the attacks may have been prevented with better use and gathering of intelligence and in the way that defence forces reacted to the attacks, not a single public official was removed from office
Edited sentence: Bush's administration has feriously refused any attempt at full investigation.Sadly, almost 2 years later, all security officers in the nation cry that the nation is as defenseless in the event of a similar plot.Surprisingly, while the events of September 11 are considered to be the most horrible catstrophe in the history of the United States, no public investigation has yet been approved and Georges W.While the events show obvious wrondoings in some part of the United States' government, mainly the fact that standard operating procedures demanding the dispatch of fighter jets in the event of a hijack were observed but in an estimated 70-80 minutes instead of 10, a serious security failure, not a single public official was removed from office or blamed and the event instead led to rounds of promotions, awards and increased subsidies in defense