Original sentence: A newly commissioned work, Concerto of Deliverance was released on compact disc in 2004.In 1994, John Mills-Cockell moved to Vancouver from Toronto  and currently resides on Vancouver Island
Edited sentence: In 1994, Mills-Cockell moved to Vancouver from Toronto  and currently resides on Vancouver Island.Mills-Cockell's work Concerto of Deliverance was released on compact disc in 2004