Original sentence: "  His method for proving this includes a combination of personal stories, such as the incident of Salman Rushdie's death threats from Islamic extremists, stories of the history of various religious conflicts, and musings on questionable acts are rationalized if they are derived from religious belief.While some such as author Frank Brennan SJ, AO would argue</small> that commentators such as Hitchens and Richard Dawkins, in their contempt for religion in the secular age, miss the point of faith and spirituality, Dawkins and Hitchems would contend that their particular respective brands of atheism deserve as much respect as any other position
Edited sentence: "  His method for proving this includes a combination of personal stories, such as the incident of Salman Rushdie's death threats from Islamic extremists, stories of the history of various religious conflicts, and all with a hint of comedy.Dawkins and Hitchems would contend that their particular respective brands of atheism deserve as much respect as any other position.While some such as author Frank Brennan SJ, AO would argue</small> that commentators such as Hitchens and Richard Dawkins, in their contempt for religion in the secular age, miss the point of faith and spirituality