Original sentence: For Christmas 1953, Wilmot was sent by the BBC to Australia to participate in a round-the-world broadcast on Christmas day, where he narrated "The Queen's Journey", telling the story of recent royal visits
Edited sentence: For Christmas 1953, Wilmot was sent by the BBC to Australia to participate in a round-the-world broadcast on Christmas Day, where he narrated "The Queen's Journey", telling the story of recent royal visits