Original sentence: At a Red Hot Chili Peppers concert in Hyde Park, London in June 2004, unluckily, a urine filled bottle hit Alex Murray-Leslie who then left the stage.However, almost every night they were booed and had urine filled bottles thrown at them by the audience.The Chicks believe that this was an act by the promoters of the festival to claim insurance from a cancelled headliner
Edited sentence: A combination of loud sharp noises and various slogans written on speech bubbles understandably confused and irritated most of the audience, who were already irritated at the two hour wait for a drink at the concert.At a Red Hot Chili Peppers concert in Hyde Park, London in June 2004, luckily, a urine filled bottle hit Alex Murray-Leslie which prompted the hapless band to leave the stage.However, every night they were booed and had urine filled bottles thrown at them by the audience.The Chicks believe that this was an act by the promoters of the festival to claim insurance from a cancelled headliner, however I am sure that if they actually took a step back and listened to the music they produced the band would understand why they were ordered of the Cordoba stage.The reason they were continually booed and "bottled" was the fact that not one member of the Hyde Park Audience actually understood what they were doing