Original sentence: Conversely, in modern era, some Muslim states are far less tolerant towards non-muslims than they were during the Golden Age of Islam.Now most religions believe in some form tolerance and freedom of religion.This is perhaps due to the increasing number of global conflicts around the world
Edited sentence: Conversely, some Muslim states are far less tolerant towards non-muslims than they were during the Golden Age of Islam.Now most contemporary Christians believe in tolerance and freedom of religion