Original sentence: He also founded and managed the The Haçienda (FAC51) nightclub and Dry (FAC201) bar, together forming a central part of the music and cultural scene of Manchester.He later founded the record label Factory Records and the Hacienda nightclub in the UK's third city of Manchester
Edited sentence: He also founded and managed the The Haçienda (FAC51) nightclub and Dry (FAC201) bar, together forming a central part of the music and cultural scene of Manchester which was recognised internationally as a hotbed of exciting music.He later founded the record label Factory Records and the Hacienda nightclub in Manchester