Original sentence: As of the census of 2000, there were 2,205,523 people, 11,850 households, and 8,559 families residing in the town.The population density was 1,318.4 people per square mile (123.0/km²)
Edited sentence: As of the census of 2000, there were 2,205 people, 850 households, and 559 families residing in the town.The population density was 318.4 people per square mile (123.0/km²)