Original sentence: Sicko (or SiCKO) is a 2007 documentary film by American filmmaker Michael Moore that investigates the American health care system, focusing on its for-profit health insurance and pharmaceutical industry.Sicko opened to positive reviews, but also generated criticism and controversy
Edited sentence: According to Deloitte Health Care Analyst Paul Keckley, 15-20% of French nationals seek care outside the government sponsored system.Sicko (or SiCKO) is a 2007 film by American filmmaker Michael Moore that investigates the American health care system, focusing on its for-profit health insurance and pharmaceutical industry.Sicko opened to mostly positive reviews, but also generated criticism and controversy as critics noted that the film gave a utopian view of foreign health care systems