Original sentence: After a show trial, the English authorities had him executed on August 23, 1305, at Smithfield, London in the traditional manner for a traitor.The English government displayed his limbs, separately, in Newcastle, Berwick, Edinburgh, and Perth
Edited sentence: After a show trial, the English authorities had him horribly executed on August 23, 1305, at Smithfield, London in the traditional manner for a traitor.The English government displayed his limbs in a grisly fashion, separately, in Newcastle, Berwick, Edinburgh, and Perth