Original sentence: Professor Hall was also the model for Ethel Spurgeon, the hard-drinking feminist, revolutionary and sleuth who is the heroine of Stephen Prasher's novel The Cellar at the Top of the Stairs, even down to the details that she had studied Classics at Oxford and was the daughter of an Anglican priest and a professional flower arranger.She has made many TV and radio appearances as well as acting as consultant for professional theatre productions, and is an advocate of ‘Classical Reception’ – studying the ancient world through the way that its culture has been received by later epochs, whether in fiction, drama, cinema, or philosophy
Edited sentence: Professor Hall was also the model for Ethel Spurgeon, the hard-drinking feminist, revolutionary and sleuth who is the  heroine of Stephen Prasher's novel The Cellar at the Top of the Stairs, even down to the details that she had studied Classics at Oxford and was the daughter of an Anglican priest and a professional flower arranger.She has made many TV and radio appearances as well as acting as consultant for professional theatre productions, and is an advocate of ‘Classical Reception’ -- studying the ancient world through the way that its culture has been received by later epochs, whether in fiction, drama, cinema, or philosophy