Original sentence: Israel has a powerful conventional army, while the Palestinians do not have a regular army; instead, organizations (such as Hamas and Islamic Jihad) utilize asymmetric tactics to combat the larger, more well equipped Israeli forces; for example, the Palestineans deploy their forces inside civilian areas in an attempt to prevent Israel from responding with conventional forces and tactics
Edited sentence: Although Palestinians do not have a regular army, political organizations (such as Hamas and Islamic Jihad) with small arms (such as Qassam rockets) attack Israeli targets, mainly military.Neverhteless, Israel still executes bombing campaigns over the civilian areas indiscriminately, and conducts state terrorism against civilian palestinians and lebanese.On the other side of the conflict, Israel has a strong conventional army, but attacks mainly civilian targets, whereas the Palestinian forces use asymmetric tactics, in particular putting their forces in inhabited areas, to prevent Israel from responding with conventional forces and tactics