Original sentence: 100 people were injured and three died.George's, a Coptic church, to protest a play they felt offended Islam.The 2005 Alexandria riot was an anti-Christian riot in the Egyptian port city of Alexandria
Edited sentence: George's, a Coptic church, to protest a play that has offended Islam.One hundred people were injured and three of the muslim protestors died.The 2005 Alexandria riot was a demonstration against a play, that offended Islam, in the Egyptian port city of Alexandria