Original sentence: Adopted at the age of fifteen by his great uncle and aunt the surname "Rux"was added to his name ("Rux" is of German derivation, also the name of a city near Wroclaw in Poland situated on the Oder river in Lower Silesia, formerly of Bohemia, Austria and Prussia).Carl Hancock Rux is among several poets and spoken word artists to emerge from the Nuyorican Poet's Cafe on New York's Lower East Side including (Paul Beatty, Tracie Morris, Dael Orlandersmith, Willie Perdomo, Kevin Powell, Maggie Estep, Reg E.Gaines, Edwin Torres, Saul Williams, Tish Benson), all of whom are published in the anthology Aloud.Rux was selected by the New York Times Magazine as One of Thirty Artists Under The Age Of Thirty Most Likely to Influence Culture Over The Next Thirty Years.Voices from the Nuyorican Poet's Cafe
Edited sentence: Adopted at the age of fifteen by his great uncle and aunt the surname "Rux"was added to his name (the name Rux is of German derivation.Carl Hancock Rux is among several poets and writers including (Paul Beatty, Tracie Morris, Dael Orlandersmith, Willie Perdomo, Kevin Powell, Maggie Estep, Reg E.For several years Rux was the host and artistic programming director of the WBAI radio show, Live from The Nuyorican Poets Cafe, as well as contributing correspondent for XM radio's The Bob Edwards Show and frequent guest host on WNYC's Soundcheck.Gaines, Edwin Torres and Saul Williams to emerge from the Nuyorican Poets Cafe, founded by poets Miguel Algarin and poet/playwright Miguel Pinero as a home for Puerto Rican poets and other poets of various nationalities and ethnic groups, most of whom were included in the poetry anthology Aloud, Voices From the Nuyorican Poets Cafe, winner of the 1994 American Book Award.It is also a city near Wroclaw, Poland situated on the Oder river in Lower Silesia, formerly a jurisdiction of Bohemia, Austria and Prussia).Selected by the New York Times Magazine as One of Thirty Artists Under The Age Of Thirty Most Likely to Influence Culture Over The Next Thirty Years