Original sentence: Ephraim Carlebach (March 12, 1879 in Lübeck - 1936 in Ramat Gan, British Mandate of Palestine), was a German-born  Orthodox rabbi
Edited sentence: Ephraim Carlebach (March 12, 1879 in Lübeck - 1936 in Ramat Gan, Eretz Israel), was a German-born  Orthodox rabbi