Original sentence: In the ensuing melee, at least nine passengers died,.On one of the ships--the Turkish registered vessel MV Mavi Marmara--Israeli commandos met resistance from passengers wielding clubs, chains and knives.The six ships were boarded and seized by Israeli naval forces in international waters on May 31, 2010, and subsequently towed to the Israeli port of Ashdod, where the cargo was unloaded, inspected and ultimately taken by road to Gaza, where it was refused
Edited sentence: In the ensuing melee, at least sixteen passengers died,.On one of the ships--the Turkish registered vessel MV Mavi Marmara--Israeli commandos allegedly met resistance from passengers wielding clubs, chains and knives.The six ships were illegally boarded and seized by Israeli naval forces in international waters on May 31, 2010, and subsequently towed to the Israeli port of Ashdod, where the cargo was allegedly unloaded, inspected and allegedly taken by road to Gaza, where it was allegedly refused