Original sentence: He studied with Canadian flutist and composer, Robert Aitken, and Cuban charanga legend, Richard Eques, and is known for his technique on the entire family of flutes (from bass flute to piccolo)
Edited sentence: He studied with Canadian flutist and composer, Robert Aitken, and Cuban charanga legend, Richard Eques, and is known for his superior technique on the entire family of flutes (from bass flute to piccolo)