Original sentence: Apart from his work for the SPAB, Major was also an advisor for other national heritage organisations, such as English Heritage.Ken Major was born on 21 October 1928 to Katharine May Major (neé Ridge) and John William Major.This lead to the formation of The International Molinological Society in 1973.Times Obituary 8 August 2009
Edited sentence: Apart from his work for the SPAB, Major was also an advisor for other national heritage organisations, such as English Heritage, The Heritage Lottery Fund and other bodies concerned with mill preservation.He was also a founding trustee of the Mills Archive Trust.His parents were Katharine May Major (neé Ridge) and John William Major.In 1956, Major joined London Transport where his work involved the design of bus garages.Ken Major was born in Reading, Berkshire on 21 October 1928.This lead to the formation of The International Molinological Society in 1973, of which Major was a founder member