Original sentence: Almost anyone today can experience the feelings and excitement of a casino in the online world of gambling.In American history, early casinos were originally known as saloons.Louis, Chicago and San Francisco.Soon after, in the state of New Jersey, Atlantic City joined the Casino industry in 1978 to become America's second largest gambling city.The creation and importance of saloons was greatly influenced by four major cities; New Orleans, St
Edited sentence: Almost anyone, today ,can experience the feelings and excitement of a casino in the online world of gambling.In American history,early casinos were originally known as saloons.Louis,Chicago, San Francisco.Soon after, in the stateNew Jersey, Atlantic City joined the Casino industry in 1978 to become America's second largest gambling city.The creation and importance of saloons was greatly influenced by four major cities; New Orleans,St