Original sentence: Backwell produced improved varieties of horses, cattle and sheep.Robert Backwell, an English farmer of late 1700's.Robert Bakewell's work with these sheep changed livestock farming forever and influenced the work of people such as Charles Darwin and Gregor Mendel.showed how livestock could be improved by intensively breeding animals with desirable traits
Edited sentence: An English farmer of late 1700's showed how livestock could be improved by intensively breeding animals with desirable traits.Backwell produced improved varieties of horses,cattle and sheep.Robert Backwell.Robert Bakewell deserves recognition for his work with these sheep because it changed livestock farming forever and because it influenced the work of people such as Charles Darwin and Gregor Mendel