Original sentence: As the two disappear, it is revealed that Kaname was just a memory of when Kay and Kaname were together.Kay is then seen leaving the room and begins to walk down the streets, whilst Kaname continues to do the same.Kay then walks away smiling and the video comes to an end
Edited sentence: As the two disappear, it is revealed that Kaname was just a memory of when her and Kaname were together.She is then seen leaving the room and begins to walk down the streets, whilst Kaname continues to do the same.She then walks away smiling and the video comes to an end