Original sentence: 2009: The 2009 hip-hop song "The High Line" by Kinetics & One Love is a pro-green song which uses the High Line as an example of the reclamation of man-made structures
Edited sentence: 2009: The 2009 hip-hop song "The High Line" by Kinetics & One Love is a pro-green, anti-deforestation song uses the High Line railway as an example of nature’s potential for reclamation of manmade structures