Original sentence: During his spell with Falkirk, he had an unsuccessful trial with Everton in the English Premier League.He moved to Scotland in August 2002 when he was acquired by Falkirk.He scored 16 goals in 42 appearances in his first season for the then-Scottish First Division side
Edited sentence: During his spell with Falkirk, he had an unsuccessful trial with Everton FC in the English Premier League.He moved to Scotland in August 2002 when he was acquired by Falkirk and had an impressive season in which he scored 16 goals in 42 appearances for the then Scottish First Division side