Original sentence: Events which have brought the idea of heteronormativity more into the foreground of social discourse, such as the Jada Pinkett Smith speech, do not necessarily represent such treatment.However, this criticism represents a view that those who describe current social structures as heteronormative wish to undermine the fundamental assumption that sex and gender are naturally dichotomous.Ms Pinkett Smith's comments were not homophobic in that they did not represent active criticism of LGBTI people.The possible responses from those who subscribe to heteronormativity to individuals and groups who depart from heteronormative experience range from tolerance, pity, and shunning to attempts to help members of these groups gain normalcy through compassionate, forceful, or ultimately even violent means.These beliefs include the belief that human beings fall into two distinct and complementary categories, male and female; that sexual and marital relations are normal only when between people of different sexes; and that each sex has certain natural roles in life
Edited sentence: Her comments were not homophobic in that they did not represent active criticism of LGBTI people.However, this criticism presumes those who use the word "heteronormative" wish to undermine the presumption that sex and gender are naturally dichotomous.Jada Pinkett Smith's speech, does not necessarily represent such treatment.Pro-heteronormative people may use tolerance, pity, and shunning in attempts to make non-heteronormative people conform through compassionate, forceful, or violent means.These beliefs include the belief that human beings fall into two distinct and complemeary categories, male and female; that sexual and marital relations are normal only when between people of different sexes; and that each sex has certain natural roles in life