Original sentence: According to those familiar with his work, his paintings reveal the sensitive geometry and visual language of singular originality that meets the geometric rigor with muted color and texture poetry that unifies the other elements: the land that blends their irregularities in the grass.Francisco de Santiago Silva (died February 2, 2008, at the age of 79) is a visual artist of Mexico.Francisco de Santiago, remained active and laborious.He is the author of works such as Cosmic Rose.This institution had teachers including Antonio Rodríguez Luna and Luis Nishisawa, those who acquired a solid background about the different painting techniques and everything related to the arts
Edited sentence: According to those familiar with his work, his paintings reveals the sensitive geometry and visual language of singular originality that meets the geometric rigor with muted color and texture poetry that unifies the other elements: the land that blends their irregularities in the grass.Francisco de Santiago Silva is considered one of the most important artists in the visual arts of Mexico in the recent years.He had the conviction that any men who has knowledge has the obligation of teaching, to share it’s science and experience without hiding anything with everyone that walks the same path.He is the author of major works, such as Cosmic Rose, he died in the early morning of the Saturday of February 2, in the year 2008 at the age of 79.The master Francisco de Santiago, remained active and laborious.The practice of this service is done every day, at all times and everywhere, in the exercise continued without respect and without discouragement.The service was his life.The talent, the will, and the kindness of the artist did not conform by its academic basis and the creation of its master pieces.There lays the greatness of a human when in its home there is no selfishness but full generosity.This prestigious and emblematic institution had teachers like Antonio Rodríguez Luna and Luis Nishisawa, those who acquired a solid background about the different painting techniques and everything related to the arts.Was a guide and an example that allowed himself to crave, polish, and shape new artists.Was this need of teaching and the desire of sharing his knowledge which led him to be a distinguished educator and wonderful speaker