Original sentence: Braid of Fire - This is the first card that adds mana to the player's mana pool as the cost of the cumulative upkeep, allowing other cumulative upkeeps to be maintained indefinitely.Lightning Storm - This is the first instant with an activated ability.Ohran Viper - Ohran Viper resembles old favorites, Tangle Asp and Ophidian.Vanish Into Memory - This is the winner of You Make the Card 3
Edited sentence: Also the first instant with an activated ability.Braid of Fire - The first card that adds mana to the player's mana pool as the cost of the cumulative upkeep, allowing other cumulative upkeeps to be maintained indefinitely.Lightning Storm - Potentially one of the most abusive (and confusing) direct damage spells ever created.Ohran Viper - Ohran Viper resembles old favorites, Tangle Asp and Ophidian, it is currently the highest priced card in Coldsnap, and is a prominent addition to the popular 'Snakes on a Plane' deck.Vanish Into Memory - Winner of You Make the Card 3