Original sentence: Cardenio is retrieved and the Dream Topping is stopped, but Aornis escapes and now Goliath, the ChronoGuard, and SpecOps all seek to apprehend Thursday on Goliath's contrived charge of stealing corporate secrets.Guided through her dreams and memories by Landen, Thursday found the event that caused the Dream Topping accident -- or rather, the person: Aornis Hades, Acheron Hades' sister who wants revenge on Thursday for Acheron's death in The Eyre Affair.Miss Havisham uses one of Thursday's clothing labels to read the pair back to the Great Library.One day, Thursday meets her father, a renegade ChronoGuard, who informs her that the world's going to end in a flood of Dream Topping, a whipped cream-like confection, when one of her uncle Mycroft's inventions goes out of control
Edited sentence: Cardenio is retrieved and but Aornis escapes and now Goliath, the ChronoGuard, and SpecOps all seek to apprehend Thursday on Goliath's contrived charge of stealing corporate secrets.Guided through her dreams and memories by Landen, Thursday found the event that caused the world ending accident -- or rather, the person: Aornis Hades, Acheron Hades' sister who wants revenge on Thursday for Acheron's death in The Eyre Affair.Miss Havisham uses one of Thursday's clothing labels to read the pair (eventually and with great effort) back to the Great Library.One day, Thursday meets her father, a renegade ChronoGuard, who informs her that the world's going to end in a flood of an unknown pink chemical.She establishes a home in a moored airship, having traded places with the plucky sidekick seargeant of a police procedural mystery.This is a result of one of her uncle Mycroft's inventions goes out of control