Original sentence: (Labor camps).Ever since comunism was born in North korea, things went wrong, first, people were no longer able to work in companies and wages were very low or none at all.If people were caught in wrong doing, they would be sent to a labor or concentration camp for their punishment.People in north korea suffer from the lack of food and the brutal treatment of being locked in concentration camps where people are punished for complaining about their treatment.The most unjust thing about this punishment was that if you were caught, the person's family would be sent to camp 22
Edited sentence: "A survivor: Soon Ok Lee 7 years of torture in N."Child prisoner: Kang Chol Hwan North Korean imprisoned at age 10 for grandparents’ dissent."Death, terror in N."Former guard: Ahn Myong Chol North Korean prison guard remembers atrocities."Revealed: the gas chamber horror of North Korea's gulag" - Guardian Unlimited (UK).Accounts of Labor Camps - Human Rights Watch.Alleged North Korean human experimentation.Annotated Satellite Maps of Camp 22.Daily NK.Google Earth Tour of Camp 22 with witness accounts of how prisoners are treated there.Human rights in North Korea.Korea gulag NBC News investigation uncovers horrific, extensive atrocities.Korean prison camp.North Korean prison guard remembers atrocities - Ahn Myong Chol in MSNBC, 2003.Yodok concentration camp.nl:Concentratiekamp Hoeryong.no:Hoeryong konsentrasjonsleir.sv:Hoeryongfånglägret.zh:會寧集中營