Original sentence: All these items of jewelry bear the same markings as the ring: the West Point crest, the class crest, the class motto, and the year the Cadet graduated (ie: "Never falter, never quit.Some Cadets opt to "inherit" pieces of rings from other family members or mentors who have also graduated the Long Grey Line.While at West Point, the ring is worn so that the class crest is worn to the inside and closet to one's heart
Edited sentence: , "Never falter, never quit.All these items of jewelry bear the same markings as the ring: the West Point crest, the class crest, the class motto, and the year the Cadet graduated (e.Some cadets opt to "inherit" pieces of rings from other family members or mentors who have also graduated from West Point.While at West Point, the ring is worn so that the class crest is worn to the inside and closest to one's heart