Original sentence: Ayers Hall, incorporating , administrative offices, a black box theatre, kitchens and the school refectory, and the school library, which houses music, archived newspapers and magazines for much of the 20th century and 17,000 volumes, including a rare books conservation section
Edited sentence: Ayers Hall, incorporating , administrative offices, a black box theatre, kitchens and refectory, as well as the school library, which houses music, archived newspapers and magazines for much of the 20th century and 17,000 volumes, including a rare books conservation section