Original sentence: Kennedy, but also because of his reluctance to support the civil rights movement to the degree that more liberal individuals would have preferred or to stop McCarthyism, even though he opposed McCarthy's tactics and claims.Liberal critics complained Eisenhower was never enthusiastic about civil rights, but he did propose to Congress the Civil Rights Acts of 1957 and 1960 and signed those acts into law
Edited sentence: Kennedy, but also because of his reluctance to support the civil rights movement to the degree that more liberal individuals would have preferred or to stop McCarthyism, even though he opposed McCarthy's excessive tactics and claims.Liberal critics complained Eisenhower was never enthusiastic about civil rights, but he did propose to Congress the Civil Righst Acts of 1957 and 1960 and signed those acts into law