Original sentence: 2003 was the year when Industrial Water Jetting Systems Ltd was brought, with bases in Bury St.Adler and Allan started out principally as a coal and coke distributor but with the decline in the use of coal and coke, they decided to enter into the fuel distribution business.Edmunds, Lincoln, Grimsby and Maidstone; acquisition includes Branchand Tank Services and Aquaducks (domestic drainage).In 1967 Company diversifies into Oil tank cleaning and a few years later Oil distribution begins.In 2006 Adler and Allan appointed principle contractor for the clean up of the Buncefield oil terminal following the catastrophic fire that destroyed 20 tanks 1926
Edited sentence: 2003 was the year when Industrial Water Jetting Systems Ltd was brought, with bases in Bury St Edmunds, Lincoln, Grimsby and Maidstone; acquisition includes Branchand Tank Services and Aquaducks (domestic drainage).Adler and Allan started out principally as a coal and coke distributor.In 1967 Company diversifies into oil tank cleaning and a few years later Oil distribution begins.In 2006 Adler and Allan appointed principle contractor for the clean up of the Buncefield oil terminal following the catastrophic fire that destroyed 20 tanks.With the decline in the use of coal and coke, they decided to enter into the fuel distribution business