Original sentence: Generally Neelum valley starts just after Muzaffarabad but in political division the area from Muzaffarabad to Chelhana is named Kotla valley in election division.It enters Azad Kashmir in the Gurez sector of the Line of Control, and then runs west until it meets the Jhelum River in Muzaffarabad.Shardadesh is a name for the drainage basin of the Neelum River.The Neelum River (, ), or Kishanganga (, ), is a river in the Kashmir region of India and Pakistan; it starts in the Indian city of Gurais and then merges with the Jhelum River near the Pakistani city of Muzaffarabad.The Neelum Valley is a Himalayan gorge in the Kashmir region, along which the Neelum River flows.The most famous among the different variety of fish found in Neelum River are:.There are different kinds of fish found in abundance in the Neelum River.There are two entrances for Neelum valley, one Neelum Road by Muzaffarabad and the other by Kaghan the Jalkhad Road
Edited sentence: Generally Kishanganga valley starts just after Muzaffarabad but in political division the area from Muzaffarabad to Chelhana is named Kotla valley in election division.It enters Pakistan Administered Kashmir in the Gurez sector of the Line of Control, and then runs west until it meets the Jhelum River in Muzaffarabad.Shardadesh is a name for the drainage basin of the Kishanganga River.The Kishanganga River (,a river in the Kashmir region of India; it starts in the Indian city of Gurais and then merges with the Jhelum River near the city of Muzaffarabad forcefully occupied by Pakistan.The Neelum Valley is a Himalayan gorge in the Kashmir region, along which the Kishanganga River flows.The most famous among the different variety of fish found in Kishanganga  River are:.There are different kinds of fish found in abundance in the Kishanganga  River.There are two entrances for Kishanganga valley, one Kishanganga Road by Muzaffarabad and the other by Kaghan the Jalkhad Road