Original sentence: Between January 1 and 5, the city witnessed a series of riots in which 1,788 (official figures) people lost their lives, mainly Muslims.In December 1992 and January 1993 there was widespread rioting in Mumbai following the destruction of the Babri Mosque in Ayodhya by militant Hindu groups led by the RSS.Police were very incative during the riots and sometimes even supported or participated in the violence, leading to accusations that the riots were a form of state-sponsored terrorism.The riots were well organized and spearheaded by the Hindu fundamentalist groups Shiv Sena and VHP
Edited sentence: Bomaby riots are often considered as a classic example of state sponsored terrorism.In December 1992 and January 1993 there was widespread rioting in Mumbai following the demolition of the Babri Masjid by militant Hindu groups headed by RSS in Ayodhya.Muslims of Bombay, a vibrant community once formed the backbone of Bombay economy felt aliented and insecure.Police were very incative during the riots  and sometimes even supported / participated in the violence and killings.The last week of December 1992 and first week of January 1993, particularly between the 1st and 5th, the city witnessed a series of riots in which 1788 ( official figures) people lost their lives, mainly Muslims.The riots were very organized and spearheaded by the Hindu fundamentalists groups Shiv Sena and VHP