Original sentence: Almost an identical percent of the two groups (21% and 22%) agreed with the statement "with provisos", while 74% of those who worked in the history department, and 51% in the economics department, disagreed with the statement outright.He enacted a series of programs, including Social Security, banking reform, and suspension of the gold standard, collectively known as the New Deal.Roosevelt won the 1932 presidential election promising to promote recovery.The majority of historians and economists argue the New Deal was beneficial to recovery
Edited sentence: Almost an identical percent of the two groups (21% and 22%) agreed with the statement "with provisos" (a conditional stipulation), while 74% of those who worked in the history department, and 51% in the economic department disagreed with the statement outright.He enacted a series of programs, including Social Security, banking reform, and suspension of the gold standard.Roosevelt won the 1932 presidential election promising to promote recovery with a New Deal for the American people.The majority of historians and economists argue that the New Deal was  beneficial to recovery, however some argue that it prolonged the Great Depression