Original sentence: After strong sales in 1997, sales have declined significantly, due to the economic recession of the early 2000s, increased competition from Airbus, and the recent emergence of a direct replacement program, the Boeing 787.Boeing sees the advanced 767-200F and 767-300F as complementing the 777F, and allowing Boeing to compete more effectively against the A330-200F, which is larger than the proposed 767-200F and 767-300F, but smaller than the 777F
Edited sentence: After strong sales in 1997, sales have declined significantly, due to the economic recession of the early 2000s, increased competition from Airbus, the A330, and the recent emergence of a direct replacement program, the Boeing 787.Boeing sees the advanced 767-200F and 767-300F as complementing the 777F, and allowing Boeing to compete more effectively against the newly launched and succesful Airbus A330-200F, which is larger than the proposed 767-200F and currently 767-300F, but smaller than the 777F