Original sentence: Nowruz (, ; ) is the Iranian New Year, also known as the Persian New Year, which is celebrated worldwide by various ethno-linguistic groups usually on or around March 21 on the Gregorian calendar.Nowruz has Iranian and Zoroastrian origins; however, it has been celebrated by diverse communities for over 3,000 years in Western Asia, Central Asia, the Caucasus, the Black Sea Basin, the Balkans, and South Asia
Edited sentence: Nowruz (, ; ) is the Zoroastrian New Year, also known as the Persian New Year, which is celebrated worldwide by various ethno-linguistic groups usually on or around March 21 on the Gregorian calendar.Nowruz has Zoroastrian origins; however, it has been celebrated by diverse communities for over 3,000 years in Western Asia, Central Asia, the Caucasus, the Black Sea Basin, the Balkans, and South Asia