Original sentence: Teej, Gangaur, Holi, Dussehra, Janmashtmi, Navratri and Diwali are celebrated in the village.The women dance the Ghoomar, every night for five nights
Edited sentence: Teej, Gangaur, Holi, Dussehra, Janmashtmi, Navratri and Diwali are celebrated with full enthusiasm in the village.The women dance the breathtakingly graceful Ghoomar, every night for five nights