Original sentence: Kent Nagano and Jean-Pierre Brossman adds, "[Dion is] a musician who has an true ear as well as refinement and a grade of perfection who makes the envy.Praised for her vocal restraint at the beginning of her career, Dion's vocal performances came to resemble more closely those of her contemporaries, especially Whitney Houston and Mariah Carey,.She is criticized for oversinging and for sing passionless
Edited sentence: " Critic Stephen Thomas Erlewine of AllMusic writes that Dion sings with "natural vocal charm" and "effortless elegance".According to maestro, Kent Nagano and Jean-Pierre Brossman, Dion is "a musician who has an accurate ear as well as refinement and a grade of perfection who makes the envy.Charles Alexander of Time writes, "The power behind the song [...] is her bring-the-house-down voice, which turns an old, schmaltzy ballad into a soaring pop aria.One critic noted that the emotion "seems to have been trained right out of her lovely voice", leaving her with "more voice than heart".Praised for her vocal restraint at the beginning of her career, Dion's vocal performances came to resemble more closely those of her contemporaries, especially Whitney Houston and Mariah Carey, and she was criticized for oversinging and for lacking the emotional intensity that once was a part of her earlier work.That voice glides effortlessly from deep whispers to dead-on high notes, a sweet siren that combines force with grace".Upon her debut, many critics had welcomed her restrained vocal inflections, and she was praised for her technical virtuosity and intensity