Original sentence: In her 1998 book Stagestruck: Theater, AIDS, and the Marketing of Gay America, author Sarah Schulman contends that significant plot elements Rent were lifted from her book People In Trouble
Edited sentence: In her 1998 book Stagestruck: Theater, AIDS, and the Marketing of Gay America, critically panned author Sarah Schulman erroneously contends that significant plot elements Rent were lifted from her book People In Trouble.Since she has provided no specific elaboration on these claims, and the two works really aren't that similar, the claims have been universally dismissed as a desperate (and largely unsuccessful) bid for publicity