Original sentence: Congested, but worth it.One of the most desirable areas of Paris, for those who insist on old buildings with character and multi-cultural exposure.Parking is dreadful.Rue des Rosiers is the heart of the Jewish quarter.The Marais has lots of living advantages.Very central with many lovely little streets, cafés, shops, etc
Edited sentence: It is desirable for those insisting on old buildings and multi-cultural exposure.Rue des Rosiers, for example, is the heart of the Jewish quarter.The 4th arrondissement is known for its little streets, cafés, and shops but is regarded as expensive and congested