Original sentence: 569 line with 17 home runs at the All-Star break, leading the DH position in nearly every category.His numbers led him to beat out incumbent Nelson Cruz for the starting DH spot in the All-Star Game, being the first Ray to start the game since 2010 (Carl Crawford, Evan Longoria, David Price).His turnaround led him to a.In 2016, Dickerson's first season away from Coors Field, his batting line dropped to.In 2017, Dickerson's play was completely transformed, and he hit in the leadoff spot
Edited sentence: 569 line with 17 home runs at the All Star break, leading the DH position in nearly every category.His outstanding numbers led him to beat out incumbent Nelson Cruz for the starting DH spot in the All-Star Game, being the first Ray to start the game since 2010 (Carl Crawford, Evan Longoria, David Price).His turnaround led him to a crisp.In 2016, Dickerson's first season away from Coors Field, he saw nearly his batting line drop to.In 2017, Dickerson's play was completely transformed, surprisingly finding a home in the leadoff spot