Original sentence: Although the college has been very conservative in most matters, they have been quick to adopt innovative educational trends.Bill, briefly swelling college admissions.In 1952, when Eisenhower was running for president, McCann's biography of Eisenhower thrust McCann's name as author into the spotlight.In the field of service learning Defiance has been recognized by such organizations as The Princeton Review, Templeton Foundation, and U.In the years following World War II, veterans attended Defiance College on the G.It has a per-student endowment of only $1,112, compared to an average $32,668 in the bottom quartile of all U.McCann, who joined the Army in 1942 and joined Eisenhower's staff in 1946, became president of Defiance College in 1951
Edited sentence: Although the college has been very conservative in most matters, they have been quick to adopt innovative educational trends that promise to do a better job of education.Because Defiance has been a courageous leader in education, it has earned the respect of other institutions, and to a certain degree, that has helped Defiance survive.DC is now recognized nationally as a model for service learning, by such organizations as The Princeton Review, Templeton Foundation, and U.His courses were not "snap courses" but neither did he grade particularly harshly.In 1952, when Eisenhower was running for president, McCann's biography of Eisenhower did reluctant candidate Ike no harm, and thrust McCann's name as author into the spotlight.In the years following World War II, veterans attended Defiance College on the GI Bill of Rights, swelling college admissions, but once that bulge was over, the wolf was once again at the door.It has a per-student endowment of only $1,112, compared to an average $32,668 in the bottom quartile of all US colleges.Mature students grasped the opportunity to learn in ways no traditional college education could offer; other students viewed Winter Term as a month-long vacation.McCann, who joined the army in 1942 and joined Eisenhower's staff in 1946, became president of Defiance College in 1951.Still, the college is conservative in financial affairs, and with an excellent relationships with both the United Church of Christ and the local community, can reasonably expect benefactors to appear in times of need.The college is a study in paradoxes.The latest thing in education is service learning, and once again, Defiance has boldly grasped the concept and run with it