Original sentence: Banville is known for his precise—some would say cold—prose style, Nabokovian in inventiveness, and for the dark humour of his generally arch narrators
Edited sentence: Banville is regarded as one of Ireland's finest writers of the late 20th and early 21st centuries.He is known for his precise—some would say cold—prose style, Nabokovian in inventiveness, and for the dark humour of his generally arch narrators