Original sentence: It shows Ciara and her friends driving in a Oldsmobile 442 convertible along the Atlanta, Georgia streets to the local car wash.The music video beigns with Ciara leaving her house, and her friend screams out; "What Up Dawg", with Ciara replying the same way.Then Ciara's sister, runs outside saying that Jazze Pha is on the phone
Edited sentence: It shows Ciara and her friends driving in an Oldsmobile 442 convertible along the Atlanta, Georgia streets to the local car wash.The music video begins with Ciara leaving her house, and her friend screams out, "What Up Dawg", with Ciara replying the same way.Then Ciara's sister runs outside saying that Jazze Pha is on the phone