Original sentence: Male Privilege is a neologism used to describe what is, in the view of those using the term, both the extent to which patriachalism manifests itself through rights and privileges that are exclusive to the male gender, and the mechanisms that exist for equalising the genders.Those who use the term claim male privilege is an aspect of the more general considerations of power structures within societies and it examines
Edited sentence: Male Privilege is an aspect of the more general considerations of power structures within societies and it examines both the extent to which patriachalism manifests itself through rights and privileges that are exclusive to the male gender, and the mechanisms that exist for equalising the genders