Original sentence: Ares was a formidable opponent, but Kratos' resolve, along with the gifts of the gods, allowed him to win the first round.As he spoke six spider-like limbs emerged from his back as he readied his massive sword.Kratos charged into the array of doubles, and defended his family at all turns
Edited sentence: For a coward, Ares was a formidable opponent, but Kratos' resolve, along with the gifts of the gods, allowed him to win the first round.In a show of unfair sportsmanship, six spider-like limbs emerged from his back as he readied his massive sword.Kratos charged into the array of clones, and defended his family at all turns