Original sentence: September 10 - Human Rights Watch criticized the response of President Benigno Aquino III to reports on the murders of the [murder]]s of an indigenous Lumad family and the alleged rape of an indigenous Manobo girl by soldiers and militiamen of the Philippine Army.The Philippine  Commission on Human Rights condemn the killings and linked the Bagani paramilitary group and the Army’s 36th Infantry Battalion who they believe has accused the school involved as a "NPA School"
Edited sentence: September 10 - Human Rights Watch and the Philippine  Commission on Human Rights condemn the murders of an indigenous Lumad family and the rape of an indigenous Manobo girl by soldiers and militiamen of the Philippine Army under the guise of fighting a communist rebellion