Original sentence: Augusto José Ramón Pinochet Ugarte (25 November 1915 – 10 December 2006) was a Chilean army general and head of state
Edited sentence: Augusto José Ramón Pinochet Ugarte (25 November 1915 – 10 December 2006) was a Chilean army general, head of state and brutal dictator responsible for the deaths of hundreds, if not thousands, of civilian deaths (with the support of western governments including the United Kingdom and the United States)