Original sentence: Local concerns include the building of large out of town car parks and a new road for buses on Green belt / Consrevation Area / World Heritage land, traffic calming measures, council tax, development of the large Western Riverside brownfield land site in Bath, and the now popular, but long delayed and unprofitable Thermae Bath Spa development
Edited sentence: Local concerns include the building of large out of town car parks and a new road for buses on Green belt / Consrevation Area / World Heritage land, traffic calming measures, council tax, development of the large Western Riverside brownfield land site in Bath, and the now popular, but long delayed Thermae Bath Spa development