Original sentence: He or she is careful to hide her identity, but her or his weblog entries claim that she is young unmarried woman, from a Sunni family.He or she is thought to live with her parents and brother in a middle class Baghdad neighbourhood.His or her English is thought to be elegant and near-perfect.Riverbend is the pseudonymous author of the "Baghdad Burning" weblog, launched August 17, 2003.That indicates that he or she received at least some of his or her education in an English-speaking country, or maybe he or she is not from Iraq at all and English is his or her native language
Edited sentence: Her elegant, near-perfect, English indicates that she received at least some of her education in an English-speaking country.Riverbend (born 1979.She is careful to hide her identity, but her weblog entries indicate that she is young unmarried woman, from a Sunni family.She lives with her parents and brother in a middle class Baghdad neighbourhood.in Iraq) is the pseudonymous author of the "Baghdad Burning" weblog, launched August 17, 2003