Original sentence: Tonybee, viewed Greek atrocities as on a par with Turkish atrocities.Toynbee, who was criticized for errors in his observations wrote that there were organized atrocities since the Greek occupation of Smyrna on the 15th May 1919.Unlike the contemporary Western press, and most contemporary observers, the British journalists and historian, Arnold J
Edited sentence: Toynbee wrote that there were organized atrocities since the Greek occupation of Smyrna on the 15th May 1919