Original sentence: In the week beginning 3rd August negotiations broke down with Monaco, allowing Hull City to nip in with a £2 million pound bid which was accepted by Stoke City
Edited sentence: In the 2009 transfere season of the premier league he signed for Hull City.In the week beginning 3rd August negotiations broke down with Monaco, allowing Hull City to nip in with a £2 million pound bid which was accepted by Stoke City<ref>