Original sentence: Although the precise origin of the name remains uncertain, the Hebrew Yerushalayim may be understood as "Heritage of Peace" — a portmanteau of yerusha (heritage) and shalom (peace), and is cognate with the name "Solomon", the king who supposedly built its first temple
Edited sentence: Although the precise origin of the name remains uncertain, the Hebrew Yerushalayim may be understood as "Heritage of Peace" — a portmanteau of yerusha (heritage) and shalom (peace), and is cognate with the name "Solomon", the king who built its first temple