Original sentence: As Ark Royal turned into the wind to launch aircraft in foggy conditions, another destroyer,  appeared, cutting across the bows of Electra.Her bow was severely damaged, and it took Electra four days to get back to Scotland at slow speed.With no time to stop, Electra hit Antelope aft, in the wardroom pantry
Edited sentence: " to turn was given on a low-power short range radio.Apparently, the telegraphist of Antelope missed the signal; as a result, Antelope continued on course while Electra executed the turn.Her bow was severely damaged, and it took Electra and Antelope four days to get back to Scotland at slow speed.In heavy fog, the admiral ordered the formation to turn into the wind so Ark Royal could launch aircraft.Suddenly, Antelope appeared, cutting across the bows of Electra.The destroyer screen was in arrowhead formation ahead of the capital ships; Electra in the port wing,  in the starboard wing.The message "Blue nine repeat Blue nine - Executive signal.With no time to stop, Electra hit Antelope aft, in the wardroom pantry, just aft of the engine room