Original sentence: He was the chairman of the Commonweath Parliamentary Association; addressed English parliamentarians, including Prime Minister Harold MacMillan, at the Giuldhall, London.The final & definitive motion for Nigerian Independence on 1st October 1960 was moved by Prime Minister Alhaji Tafawa Balewa and endorsed by his cabinet colleague Raymond Njoku, minister of Trade & Industry
Edited sentence: He was the chairman of the Commonwealth Parliamentary Association; addressed English parliamentarians, including Prime Minister Harold MacMillan, at the Giuldhall, London.The final & definitive motion for Nigerian Independence on 1 October 1960 was moved by Prime Minister Alhaji Tafawa Balewa and endorsed by his cabinet colleague Raymond Njoku, minister of Trade & Industry