Original sentence: Helen Barrett Montgomery (July 31, 1861 – October 19, 1934) was a social reformer, church leader, women’s activist, missions activist.The eldest of three children born to Amos Judson Barrett and Emily Barrows Barrett, both of whom were teachers at the time, her parents moved to Rochester, New York when she was a child so that her father could attend the Rochester Theological Seminary
Edited sentence: Helen Barrett Montgomery (July 31, 1861 – October 19, 1934).Helen Barrett was the oldest of three children born to Amos Judson Barrett and Emily Barrows Barrett, both of whom were teachers at the time.It is not surprising that Montgomery was intensely interested in Christian missions, since her Barrett grandparents had shown a strong awareness and interest by naming her father after  Adoniram Judson, a famous Baptist missionary (1788–1850).It is obvious that much of what she did flowed from her interests in more than one category, but this framework is an attempt to organize the information.When she was a child, her parents moved to Rochester, New York so that her father could attend the Rochester Theological Seminary.was a social reformer, church leader, women’s activist, missions activist