Original sentence: According to Axon website (Axon) Jone o Grinfilt was written by Joseph Lees of Glodwick, near Oldham in the 1790s.Four Loom Weaver (Roud 1460), probably derived from  "The Poor Cotton Weaver" is a rarely performed 19th-century English lament on starvation.In the folk revival it reappeared.It is found on broadsides in Manchester up to the 1880s, it did not survive into the twentieth century.One source also names it Jone o Grinfilt though this title usually refers to different lyrics and score, which is about the niaivity of country folk.The earlier version was probably written before 1800, after the Napoleonic wars it was revived or re-written, due to economic hard times, when weavers were reduced to eating nettles, though this could refer to the war itself any of the periodic economic downturns or more likely the Lancashire Cotton Famine of 1862.The version by Ewan MacColl was probably influenced the version by Silly Sisters and by Unto Ashes
Edited sentence: According to Axon website (Axon) it was written by Joseph Lees of Glodwick, near Oldham in the 1790s.After the Napoleonic wars it was revived or re-written, due to economic hard times, when weavers were reduced to eating nettles.Four Loom Weaver (Roud 1460), also known as  "The Poor Cotton Weaver" is a rarely performed 19th-century English lament on starvation.It is found on Broadsides in Manchester up to the 1880s, but since hand-weaving became defunct, it did not survive into the twentieth century.One source also names it "Jone O'Grinfilt" though this title usually refers to different lyrics and score.The title "Four Loom Weaver" is possibly a mis-hearing of "Poor Loom Weaver" since most hand-weavers had one, or at most two machines in their cottages.The version by Ewan MacColl probably influenced the version by Silly Sisters and by Unto Ashes