Original sentence: He created A.Humphry Francis Ellis (July 17, 1907 – December 8, 2000)  was an English comic writer.Punch magazine continued to publish Ellis's work, but from 1954 he found a more lucrative market in The New Yorker, where the Wentworth stories proved very popular
Edited sentence: Humphry Francis Ellis MBE (17 July 1907 – 8 December 2000)  was an English comic writer, best known for his creation of A.Punch magazine continued to publish Ellis's work, but from 1954 he found a more lucrative market in The New Yorker, where the Wentworth stories (see below) proved very popular