Original sentence: O2 customers receive 48 hour pre-sales access to approximately 4,500 events each year as well as perks at the venues themselves and access to a consistent flow of content.O2 is partnered with Live Nation and the Academy Music Group, allowing O2 to rename the music venues.The partnership allows O2 to offer customers priority access to all events at O2 Academy venues as well as Live Nation promoted events across the United Kingdom
Edited sentence: O2 customers receive 48 hour pre-sales to approximately 4,500 events each year as well as perks at the venues themselves and access to a consistent flow of content.O2 is partnered with Live Nation and the Academy Music Group, allowing O2 to rename some of the United Kingdom’s most iconic music venues.The partnership allows O2 to offer customer’s great experiences and priority access to all events at O2 Academy venues as well as Live Nation promoted events across the United Kingdom