Original sentence: Many residents  cite ethnic diversity, parks and transportation options as some of the main reasons they remain in or move to the neighborhood, and it has been called the most diverse neighborhood in the United States, although this may not be strictly true.The neighborhood is known for a roughly 1/4 split  between whites, blacks, Asians, and Hispanics and for the relative harmony  between these groups.Though it is mostly  safe at daytime, several gang-related shootings have occurred at night
Edited sentence: Many residents cite ethnic diversity, parks and transportation options as some of the main reasons they remain in or move to the neighborhood, and it has been called the most diverse neighborhood in the United States, although this may not be strictly true.The neighborhood is known for a roughly 1/4 split between whites, blacks, Asians, and Hispanics and for the relative harmony between these groups.Though it is mostly safe at daytime, several gang-related shootings have occurred at night