Original sentence: At Stanfield's suggestion he also sent three pictures to the 1822 Exhibition of Works by Living Artists, held in Edinburgh.In 1816, he was taken on as a stage designer's assistant at the Pantheon Theatre in Edinburgh, the beginning of his career as a painter and designer of stage scenery.In 1821, the Fine Arts Institution of Edinburgh accepted three of his paintings (views of Melrose and Dryburgh abbeys), of which two sold.There, Roberts met the Scottish actress Margaret McLachlan, who was rumoured to be the illegitimate daughter of a Highland gypsy girl and a clan chief.. They married in 1820, "for pure love"
Edited sentence: At Stanfield's suggestion, Roberts also sent three pictures to the 1822 Exhibition of Works by Living Artists, held in Edinburgh.In 1816, the Pantheon Theatre in Edinburgh took him on as a stage designer's assistant; this was the beginning of his career as a painter and designer of stage scenery.In 1821, the Fine Arts Institution of Edinburgh accepted three of Roberts's paintings — views of Melrose and Dryburgh abbeys) — two of which sold.There Roberts met the Scottish actress Margaret McLachlan, said to be the illegitimate daughter of a Highland gypsy girl and a clan chief.. They married in 1820, "for pure love"