Original sentence: Later in life, Schermerhorn served again under Bernstein as the assistant conductor of the New York Philharmonic
Edited sentence: " Later in life, Schermerhorn would serve again under Bernstein as the assistant conductor of the New York Philharmonic.He was quoted as saying of Bernstein, "He was my first real and certainly my most important teacher.This was a very influential time in Schermerhorn's life