Original sentence: A recent campaign spearheaded by the fair and balanced® Fox News' absolutely unquestionably, without a doubt politically moderate, and as fair, and balanced as the day is long contributors Bill O'Reilly and Sean Hannity has resulted in a bitter backlash from true Christians and real Americans who feel the designation "holiday tree" has just gone too far, and is part of a heinous, actually, unspeakable war on Christmas, and an unconsciousable attempt to attack the civil liberties of decent, hard working God-fearing American Christians.The term holiday tree is an insidious afront that has, since at least 1990 (and perhaps long, long before), been used by some in these USA No.and Canada as an effort to be so-called more inclusive, and to reflect the winter holiday season instead the birth of Our Lord Christ Jesus
Edited sentence: A recent campaign spearheaded by the fair and balanced Fox News' politically moserate contributors Bill O'Reilly and Sean Hannity has resulted in a backlash from some Christian groups and individuals who feel the designation "holiday tree" has just gone too far and is part of a so-called war on Christmas.The term holiday tree has, since at least 1990 (and perhaps before), been used by some in the United States and Canada as an effort to be more inclusive, and to reflect the winter holiday season instead of any specific religious holiday