Original sentence: It reprints a 1985 essay by Alan Moore on how to write comics successfully that originally appeared in the British magazine Fantasy Advertiser (four chapters from issue 92, August 1985, to issue 95, February 1986).On Writing.Review at Silver Bullet Comic Books
Edited sentence: It reprints a 1985 essay by Alan Moore on how to write comics successfully that originally appeared in the British magazine Fantasy Advertiser (four chapters from issue #92, August 1985, to issue #95, February 1986).Review at Comics Bulletin