Original sentence: A club only needs four members to become official and recieve funding.Because of this hectic pace, Olin is often stressful.In addition, many students participate in athletics.Olin Players), FILM (For Intelligent Lovers of Movies), and the Olin Conductorless Orchestra.Olin also has a variety of clubs and organizations that support the arts, including the Olin Vocal Ensemble, FWOP (Franklin W.Olin students are also encouraged to combine their creative and technical skills in competitions.Students are easily able to create new clubs and organizations
Edited sentence: , and the Olin Conductorless Orchestra, or as part of the classwork for interdisciplinary art classes such as "Seeing and Hearing" and "Wired Ensemble".A great deal of creative work is produced by Olin students, either working independently, in groups such as the Olin Vocal Ensemble]], FWOP (Franklin W.Because of this hectic pace, the stress level at Olin is occasionally very high.In addition, many students also participate in athletics.Olin Players), F.Olin students are encouraged to combine their creative and technical skills in competition that might bring notoriety to the school.One fledgling Olin tradition is an unofficial monthly Mechanical Design Challenge, where an unusual challenge is posed and teams are given two days to complete it.Students are also highly encouraged to create new activities and organizations