Original sentence: In a move of desperation, Grovyle pushes Dusknoir towards the Dimensional Hole, hoping that in his own sacrifice, Grovyle will erase Dusknoir from existence.Just as Dusknoir tries to finish off the player, Grovyle intervenes.Meanwhile, the team hears word that Grovyle has taken all the Time Gears, but warns that Dusknoir may also return from the future to hunt them down
Edited sentence: Dusknoir angrily decides to slay Grovyle first, but in a move of desperation, Grovyle pushes Dusknoir towards the Dimensional Hole, hoping that in his own defense of the player, Grovyle will ensure the success of the mission.Just as Dusknoir tries to finish off the player, Grovyle intervenes, taking the blow.Meanwhile, the team hears word that Grovyle has collected three Time Gears thanks to the compliance of Uxie and his companions, but warns that Dusknoir may also return from the future to hunt them down, suggesting that they meet either at the bluff or at the beach