Original sentence: Some of his work in this area has elicited a very strong reaction from members of the gay and transgender communities, ranging from revilement to nomination for a Lambda Literary Foundation (an organization that promotes LGBT literature) award
Edited sentence: One critic went so far as to post photographs of his children to the Internet with sexually explicit captions, while in contrast the Lambda Literary Foundation (an organization that promotes gay, bisexual and transgender literature) nominated his work for an award.Some of his work in this area has elicited a very strong reaction from members of the gay and lesbian community