Original sentence: December 4 - James 'Tuan' Jones, Wales and British Lion rugby player, 81.February 1 - Wales defeat Scotland 11-3 in Cardiff.February 14 - Sir Guildhaume Myrddin-Evans, civil servant, 69.January 4 - Arthur Wade-Evans, historian, 88.January 7 - Cyril Davies, harmonica player, 31.March 7 - Wales defeat Ireland 15-6 in Dublin.May 5 - P.November 30 - Sir John Cecil-Williams, lawyer and secretary of the Cymmrodorion, 72.November 4 - Harry Randall, lawyer and historian, 86.October 9 - Thomas Jones Pierce, historian, 59.September 14 - Fitzroy Richard Somerset, 4th Baron Raglan, anthropologist, 79.Sion a Sian (later seen in English as Mr.and Mrs
Edited sentence: 1 February - Wales defeat Scotland 11-3 in Cardiff.14 February - Sir Guildhaume Myrddin-Evans, civil servant, 69.14 September - Fitzroy Richard Somerset, 4th Baron Raglan, anthropologist, 79.30 November - Sir John Cecil-Williams, lawyer and secretary of the Cymmrodorion, 72.4 December - James 'Tuan' Jones, Wales and British Lion rugby player, 81.4 January - Arthur Wade-Evans, historian, 88.4 November - Harry Randall, lawyer and historian, 86.5 May - P.7 January - Cyril Davies, harmonica player, 31.7 March - Wales defeat Ireland 15-6 in Dublin.9 October - Thomas Jones Pierce, historian, 59.Sion a Sian (later also produced in English as Mr and Mrs)