Original sentence: Jerusalem's message was primarily aimed at youth, with their lyrics describing the band's relationship to the Christian god in an ordinary, but radical way.With the fourth album: "Can't stop us now", Jerusalem's style changed and turned more melodic, but the lyrics didn't speak radically about the Christian god anymore, this lost the band support amongst many Christian fans
Edited sentence: Jerusalem's message was primarily aimed at youth, with their lyrics describing the band's relationship to God in an ordinary, but radical way.With the fourth album: "Can't stop us now", Jerusalem's style changed and turned more melodic, but the lyrics didn't speak radically about God anymore, this lost the band support amongst many Christian fans