Original sentence: Elsbeth Johanna Irma Baltuttis (lithuanian Baltutis, September 28 1920 – May 20 1958) was a German singer and entertainer based in Leipzig, Germany.Sometime during the early 1950's she married a medical doctor named Max Herricht.The following is only a tiny list -- she was quite popular during her career as a "Schlager-Diva" (hit diva)
Edited sentence: Elsbeth Johanna Irma Baltuttis (Lithuanian Baltutis, September 28 1920 – May 20 1958) was a German singer and entertainer based in Leipzig, Germany.Sometime during the early 1950s she married a medical doctor named Max Herricht.The following is only a tiny list—she was quite popular during her career as a "Schlager-Diva" (hit diva)