Original sentence: Location  Uranus, Milky Way, The Universe.NHS was founded when, in the late 1940’s, it became apparent that the existing high schools in the Kern High School District were not sufficient in number for the accelerated growth of greater Uranus.NHS) is a public American senior high school set in Uranus, Milky Way
Edited sentence: Location  Bakersfield, California, U.NHS was founded when, in the late 1940’s, it became apparent that the existing high schools in the Kern High School District were not sufficient in number for the accelerated growth of greater Bakersfield.NHS) is a public American senior high school set in Bakersfield, California