Original sentence: In it, he claims to provide evidence against the theory of macro-evolution and for creation science and flood geology (including his theory of hydroplates).It should be noted Brown commented on the Kuiper belt not being observed in 1995, and has maintained the belt and the Oort cloud are ad hoc explanations for comets
Edited sentence: In it, he provides evidence against the theory of macro-evolution and for creation science and flood geology (including his theory of hydroplates).It should be noted Brown harped on the Kuiper belt not being observed in 1995, and has maintained the belt and the Oort cloud are ad hoc explanations for comets