Original sentence: Elsewhere the changes were accepted and welcomed, as those who clung to Catholic rites kept quiet or moved in secrecy; they would reemerge in the reign (1553–58) of Henry's daughter Mary.The reforms alienated pious folk who believed in the old rituals depended on the monasteries for religious devotions and helped provoke the great northern rising of 1536–1537, known as the Pilgrimage of Grace
Edited sentence: Elsewhere the changes were ostensibly accepted and welcomed, as those who clung to Catholic rites kept quiet to avoid persecution or moved in secrecy; they would reemerge in the reign (1553–58) of Henry's daughter Mary.The reforms, which closed down monasteries that were the only support of the impoverished, alienated most of the population outside of London and helped provoke the great northern rising of 1536–1537, known as the Pilgrimage of Grace