Original sentence: " Among the naysayers is presidential hopeful Senator John McCain(R-AZ) who has even introduced a similar, but much weaker bill.Senator Webb responded, "Recent studies show that 70% of all enlisted members get out at or before their initial enlistment
Edited sentence: After soldiers intitial enlistment is up the retention office can use the GI Bill against them saying the benefits would only cover a fraction of the cost for a higher education.Among the naysayers is presidential hopeful Senator John McCain(R-AZ) who has even introduced a similar, but much weaker bill.Most soldiers agree that the military has been stretched thin and soldiers are not re-enlisting because they are tired of getting shot at and their families are tired of not seeing them.Most soldiers join the military to earn payment for an education and the GI Bill is used as an incentive for recruitment