Original sentence: Known for penning concept albums and songs inspired by literature, music fan opinions of his writing have varied to the extremes, from utter adulation to outright scorn
Edited sentence: During the band's early years, Peart's lyrics have also been labelled as juvenile and silly.Known for penning concept albums and songs inspired by literature, music fan opinions of his writing have varied greatly, running the gamut from cerebral and insightful to overly pretentious and preachy