Original sentence: Dayle Haddon (born 26 May 1949 in Montréal, Québec) is a former model and actress, a 1970s and 1980s face who sold Max Factor, Revlon, Estee Lauder, and L'Oreal
Edited sentence: Dayle Haddon (born 26 May 1949 in Montréal, Québec) is a former supermodel and actress, a 1970s and 1980s face who sold Max Factor, Revlon, Estee Lauder, and L'Oreal