Original sentence: Sumerian dominated the cultural sphere, while signs of the spread of Akkadian could be seen elsewhere.Virtually all of the names of members of the royal family are Akkadian, and new towns that arose in this period were virtually all given Akkadian names
Edited sentence: New towns that arose in this period were virtually all given Akkadian names.Sumerian dominated the cultural sphere and was the language of legal, administrative, and economic documents, while signs of the spread of Akkadian could be seen elsewhere