Original sentence: John Candy portrays the innocent and well-meaning, but accident-prone and somewhat feckless, Del Griffith (Director of sales, American Light and Fixture, shower curtain ring division), a shower curtain ring salesman who seems to live in a world governed by a different set of rules from those governing Neal Page's marketing life.Neal frequently blows up at Del, blaming him for much of their misfortunes, though Neal's mere presence is at fault.The film is rated R by the MPAA for a scene including a substantial amount of strong language
Edited sentence: John Candy portrays the innocent and well-meaning, but accident-prone and somewhat feckless, Del Griffith (Director of Sales, American Light and Fixture, Shower Curtain Ring Division), a shower curtain ring salesman who seems to live in a world governed by a different set of rules from those governing Neal Page's marketing life.Neal frequently blows up at Del, blaming him for much of their misfortunes, as though Neal's mere presence is at fault.The film is rated R by the MPAA for a scene including a substantial amount of obscene language