Original sentence: During his life he had only a few exibitions, two in Tromsø, and one in Paris.During the spring of 1938 he got very ill with tubercolosis again and he died at Ullevål sykehus on April 13 1938, at the age of 36.He found that much of the money had been lost, but he still recived some money.He was sent to school in Vardø, where he recived tutoring in drawing by Isak Saba.His parents died when he was 3 years old, first his mother from tubercolosis, then his father from drowning on the Varangerfjord while he was sailing to Vadsø to buy a coffin for his wife.In Oslo he also took courses at Statens Håndverks- og Kunstindustriskole that year, but he became ill with tuberclosis and had to quit school.The next years he travelled around in Finnmark, makeing prints, drawings and paintings
Edited sentence: During his life he had only a few exhibitions, two in Tromsø, and one in Paris.During the spring of 1938 he got very ill with tuberculosis again and he died at Ullevål sykehus on April 13 1938, at the age of 36.He found that much of the money had been lost, but he still received some money.He was sent to school in Vardø, where he received tutoring in drawing by Isak Saba.His parents died when he was 3 years old, first his mother from tuberculosis, then his father from drowning on the Varangerfjord while he was sailing to Vadsø to buy a coffin for his wife.In Oslo he also took courses at Statens Håndverks- og Kunstindustriskole that year, but he became ill with tuberculosis and had to quit school.The next years he travelled around in Finnmark, making prints, drawings and paintings