Original sentence: The ACJC Band has achieved Gold awards and was judged the top band for several Singapore Youth Festival Competitions.The so-called "ACS spirit" is particularly strong because of close ties with alumni, who frequently donate funds to the school and send their children to be educated there, similar to the public school tradition in England
Edited sentence: The ACJC Band has consistently achieved Gold awards and was judged the top band for several Singapore Youth Festival Competitions.The so-called "ACS spirit" is particularly strong because of close ties with alumni, who frequently donate funds to the school and send their children to be educated there, similar to the private school tradition in England