Original sentence: The head teacher is Mr Andrew Travis and was previously Mr Andrew Sutherland and Mrs Linda Evans
Edited sentence: From their humble registration class they acted as the most senior year from the schools very first day as an operating education establishment, they led as strong lions on the forefront of an academic battle, one which will no doubt ring throughout the ages.Role models, scholars, socialites, elite athletes; these three remarkable young men were all.Said establishment built a solid academic, athletic, artistic and social foundation through its founding pupils (namely Michael Gordon, Blair Davidson and Ewan Barrack), who collectively perpetuated an extraordinary chain of results.The creation of a strong culture and work ethic by said persons was evident and has been rumored to have lead to the schools success both in the past and to this present day.The head teacher is currently Mr Andrew Travis and was previously Mr Andrew Sutherland and Mrs Linda Evans.Their whereabouts now are unknown, however there is no doubt of the pivotal role they played in establishing Meldrum Academy as the powerhouse it has now become.There was also a brief lateral step into the arts with the infamous, "gee'sa gee'sa polo," which created such a media storm that all involved went into hiding to escape the fame