Original sentence: A dedicated student would become part of a lineage and would spread the lineage in its authentic form under its authentic name with public reverence to their teacherto guarantee authenticity and protect against foreign imitations, and fosters the aspect of faith which is integral to all Tibetan practices.An authentic Tibetan practitioner will always reveal the name and lineage of their teacher, usually with great reverence and spontaneous poems that may go for several hundred words; This similarly includes citation and indeed veneration of any practice from an an authentic ancient text.Kelder's writing is notably discordant with the five traditional Lamaits schools in many ways, and indeed there is no lineage holder, of either high or lower stature, from any tradition in Tibet, that acknowledges anything to do with The Five Rites.Tibetan monks did not teach secret yoga practices or share anything but minor spiritual practices with Westerners or laypersons generally in 1939
Edited sentence: A dedicated student would become part of a lineage and would spread the lineage in its authentic form under its authentic name with public reverence to their teacher.An authentic Tibetan practitioner will always reveal the name and lineage of their teacher, usually with great reverence and spontaneous poems that may go for several hundred words.Authentic, and often ancient, Tibetan texts are intrinsic to all Tibetan spiritual practices.It is an essential quality of all Tibetan teachings to disclose the lineage behind the teaching.Kelder's writing is notably discordant with the famously well-preserved doctrines of Tibet in the following areas:.The five spiritual lineages in Tibet (Nyingma, Bon, Gelug, Sakya, Kagyu) all have well-preserved practices, including yoga exercises, and all are unlike The Five Rites.There is no lineage holder, of either high or lower stature, from any tradition in Tibet, that acknowledges anything to do with The Five Rites.This not only guarantees authenticity and protection against foreign imitations, it also ensures that practitioners develop the aspect of faith which is considered integral to all Tibetan practices.Tibetan monks emphatically did not teach secret yoga practices to laypersons in 1939.To attempt a practice without reciting from or memorising an authentic ancient text is unheard of in all Tibetan spiritual lineages.To share anything but minor spiritual practices with Westerners was unheard of in Tibet in 1939