Original sentence: He had an embarrassing start to his campaign as Celtic manager, immediately signing plodding midfielder Paul Telfer and losing 5-0 to Slovakian champions Artmedia Bratislava on 27 July 2005 and 3 days later only managing to draw 4-4 with Motherwell in his first SPL match in charge of the Glasgow club.He immediately secured the services of plodding midfielder Paul Telfer from Coventry City.He was sacked shortly after the start of the 2001–02 Division One campaign, where even his continued faith in plodding midfielder Paul Telfer, couldn't save the Sky Blues
Edited sentence: He had an embarrassing start to his campaign as Celtic manager, however, losing 5-0 to Slovakian champions Artmedia Bratislava on 27 July 2005 and 3 days later only managing to draw 4-4 with Motherwell in his first SPL match in charge of the Glasgow club.He was sacked shortly after the start of the 2001–02 Division One campaign