Original sentence: A large segment of jobs in the area are low-paying service industry type positions which result in many locals leaving New Smyrna Beach to find opportunity elsewhere after completing their education
Edited sentence: Though sadly, perhaps due to the history of New Smyrna Beach being a winter refuge for northern retirees, a large segment of jobs in the area are low-paying service industry type positions which result in many locals leaving New Smyrna Beach to find opportunity elsewhere after completing their education