Original sentence: The original language of the Mughals had been Turkic, but after their arrival in South Asia, they came to adopt Persian and later overpowered by Hindi, they eventually gave it their own name of Urdu with minor vocabulary differences retained from Persian and Turkic
Edited sentence: Overtime, the need to communicate with local inhabitants led to extensive grammer being employed from local sanskrit languages, it was eventually gaven it's own name of Urdu with heavy vocabulary retained from Persian, Arabic and to a lesser extent Turkic.The original language of the Mughals had been Turkic, but after their arrival in South Asia, they came to adopt Persian