Original sentence: A number of students at the University of Toronto, many of them at Trinity College feel that UTSU collects an excessive student levy, approximately thirty dollars per student, in order to pursue a political agenda,that often does not reflect the diverse range of opinions to be found on campus.After listening to the Minister speak, they inquired via chants and jeers about the Minister's policy to increase tuition fees by 36% over four years.Following the Minister's public embarrassment and the expulsion of the UTSU representatives from the press conference, staff of the Minister approached student media outlets across the country in an attempt to discredit the student unions.Student media outlets such as the Varsity at U of T defended the students' actions as necessary to defend students' interests.The student representatives falsely signed in as campus media to gain entrance while avoiding charges of trespassing.Upon arriving, they were informed that only accredited media would be permitted access, which meant they would be unable to give direct feedback regarding the announcement on changes to the student loan system
Edited sentence: A number of students at the University of Toronto, many of them at Trinity College feel that UTSU collects an excessive student levy, approximately thirty dollars per student, in order to pursue a political agenda.After listening to the Minister speak, they inquired about the Minister's policy to increase tuition fees by 36% over four years.Following the Minister's public embarrassment at the press conference, staff of the Minister approached student media outlets across the country in an attempt to discredit the student unions.In a surprising turnaround, student media outlets such as the Varsity at U of T defended the students' actions as necessary to defend students' interests.The student representatives signed in as campus media to avoid threatened charges of trespassing and to gain entrance.Upon arriving, they were informed that only accredited media would be permitted access, which meant they would be unable to hear the announcement regarding changes to the student loan system