Original sentence: Microsoft, calling the company an "abusive monopoly" and forcing the company to split into two separate units.XP introduced a new graphical user interface, the first such change since Windows 95
Edited sentence: It is Microsofts fault why now innocent people are breaking the laws to crack activation then to just go through the activcation process.Microsoft has also been criticised for having a monopoly over computers which CNN News said in 1998.Microsoft is not only controlling their customers by not giving them a choice, but also introduced a controversial program in 2001 named Windows Product Activation.Microsoft seems to still have a monopoly even though it is illegal and unethical to have a corporate monopoly.Microsoft, calling the company an "Abusive Monopoly" and forcing the company to split into two separate units.Now more innocent people are acting like Mafias and mobsters cause Microsoft knows the legitimate users hate being treated like criminals.The government was suppose to fine Microsoft for having a illegal monopoly but has got away with a monopoly for over 9 years.XP introduced a new graphical user interface, and Windows Product Activation, the first such change since Windows 95