Original sentence: Northwest Airlines Tokyo-Narita [ends 1 October] http://airlineroute.The nonstop service made Tokyo the first city in Asia to receive nonstop service from Salt Lake City.This service will end by 1 October 2009.com/2009/08/delta-ends-salt-lake-city-tokyo
Edited sentence: Northwest Airlines Tokyo-Narita.The nonstop service makes Tokyo the first city in Asia to receive nonstop service from Salt Lake City