Original sentence: Born in Marlborough, Vermont, Knight was the son of Joseph Knight, Sr.He continued to preside over this branch through its relocation to Ohio and then to Jackson County, Missouri.He married Sally Colburn on the June 7, 1825.In both Missouri and later at Nauvoo, Illinois, Knight constucted mills.Knight died at what is today Knox County, Nebraska.Knight was baptized into the Latter Day Saint church in May 1830.Newel Knight (September 13, 1800–January 11, 1847) was a close friend of Joseph Smith, Jr.On the November 24, 1834 Knight married Lydia Goldthwaite Bailey at Kirtland, Ohio.Prior to this, Joseph Smith cast an evil spirit out from Knight, which is considered by some to be the first miracle performed in the history of the Latter Day Saint movement.When Newel was about eight years old his family moved to Colesville, New York.With the baptism of Knights' parents, siblings and aunts and uncles in July 1830, the Colesville Branch of the church was organized with Knight as its presiding authority.and Polly Peck.and one of the first branch presidents in Smith's Church of Christ
Edited sentence: Born on the 13th of September, 1800 in Marlborough, Vermont, Knight was the son of Joseph Knight, Sr.He continued to preside over this branch through its relocation to Ohio and then Jackson County, Missouri.He died on the 11th of January, 1847.He married Sally Colburn on the 7th of June, 1825.In both Missouri and latter at Nauvoo Knight constucted mills.Knight was baptized in May of 1830.Newel Knigh was a close friend of Joseph Smith and one of the first branch presidents in the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints.On the 24th of November 1834 Knight married Lydia Goldthwaite Bailey at Kirtland, Ohio.Prior to this the first miracle during the Dispensation of the Fullness of Times had occured when Joseph Smith had cast an evil spirit out from Newel Knight.This occured in what is today Knox County, Nebraska.When Knight was about eight years old his family moved to Colesville, New York.With the baptism of Knights parents, siblings and even aunts and uncles in July of 1830, the Colesville Branch was organized with Knight as President.and his wife, the former Polly Peck