Original sentence: After being challenged by her brother, she is determined to become a male elf swordsman in Second Life and prove her swordsman skill to her brother without using "female benefits" in game.After two hours, Feng Lan's character is finally created and named Prince, making her the first transvestite in second life.When Feng Lan first signs in she meets a GM (game moderator) who informs her that sex changes are not allowed, but since she is actually the first person to sign in Feng Lang will be allowed to become a boy
Edited sentence: After being challenged by her brother, she is determined to become a male warrior in Second Life and prove her gaming skills to her brother without using "female benefits" in game.As a reward for this, the Second Life superiors grant her wish to change her gender, an otherwise impossible request.Thus begins her adventures as an elf who is too stunning for the girl population to leave alone.While trying to get the upper hand on leveling Feng Lan logs into Second Life too early and ends up being the first player ever to log on