Original sentence: The Deise has a rich history from megalithic tombs and ogham stones, to Vikings, to remnants of English occupancy, including the Gaulstown Dolmen, Reginalds Tower and The Ballysaggartmore Towers respectively.The Deise region has two mountain ranges, rivers and lakes and over 30 beaches along a volcanic coast line.The people that live in the Deise today are known to thrive on Irish traditions such as hurling and eating blaas (a type of floury bread roll, unique to the region)
Edited sentence: " to support the players putting their bodies on the line for County Waterford.During hurling matches the people of the region proudly chant the phrase "Up the Deise.The Deise has a rich history from megalithic tombs and ogham stones, to Vikings, to remnants of English occupancy, some of the most interesting are the Gaulstown Dolmen, Reginalds Tower and The Ballysaggartmore Towers respectively.The Deise region is a beautiful region with two mountain ranges, beautiful rivers and lakes and over 30 beaches along its unique volcanic coast line.The people that live in the Deise today are a proud people that thrive on Irish traditions such as hurling and eating blaas (a type of floury bread roll, unique to the region) and pig's feet