Original sentence: Also, jizyah does not exist anymore today.It should be noted, however, that the Universal Declaration of Human Rights was not around during the time jizyah was levied.The concept of Jizyah has been criticized by some critics of Islam, who characterize it as a form of humiliation and oppression of non-Muslim minorities.They claim it has a direct basis in the Qu'ran:.They say that the concept of  taxation imposed on the basis of religion runs counter to the ideals of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights (Articles 1,2, and 7) and many other International human rights instruments
Edited sentence: The concept of  taxation imposed on the basis of religion runs counter to the ideals of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights (Articles 1,2, and 7) and many other International human rights instruments.The concept of Jizyah has been condemned by some critics of Islam, who characterize it as a form of humiliation and oppression of non-Muslim minorities.The imposition of Jizyah upon non-muslims is established by Sura 9.29 of the Koran.These critics note that the imposition of Jizyah has a direct basis in the Qu'ran