Original sentence: All three songs were released as singles via radio edits, and all of them became hits.Some of her lesser-known singles - due to lack of recurrent airplay including, "Honey Bee" (1974), "Casanova Brown" (1975), and "Let's Make A Deal" (1976) - became hits in the clubs and reached the Top 5 on Billboards disco charts.The first side of this album consisted of three disco songs ("Honey Bee", "Never Can Say Goodbye" and "Reach Out, I'll Be There"), with no breaks in between the songs.This 19-minute dance marathon proved to be enormously popular, especially at dance clubs.This caused her the albums that followed such as 1977's Glorious and 1978's Park Avenue Sound to be regarded as merely good albums instead of excellent albums
Edited sentence: All of them became hits.All three songs were released as singles via radio edits.Some of her lesser-known hit singles, due to lack of recurrent airplay including, "Honey Bee" (1974), "Casanova Brown" (1975), and "Let's Make A Deal" (1976).The first side of this album consisted of three disco songs ("Honey Bee", "Never Can Say Goodbye" and "Reach Out, I'll Be There") with no breaks in between the songs.They became hits in the clubs and reached the Top 5 on Billboards disco charts.This 19 minute dance marathon proved to be enormously popular, especially at dance clubs.This caused her the albums that followed such as 1977's Glorious and 1978's Park Avenue Sound to be merely good albums instead of excellent albums