Original sentence: Jean took refuge in a ruined cottage on the moors near Auchenmade.She was forced to leave her home with her young children as it was required for another working man and his family.The winter of 1895 was very severe and come spring she was found dead with her children, the remains of her last meal in the hearth, cooked using the very clothes off her back
Edited sentence: Jean took refuge in a ruinous cottage on the moors near Auchenmade.Jean's baby was found alive in the bread oven, for this determined mother was found naked, having fed all her clothes to the fire to keep her baby warm until the last possible moment.She had previously burned all the furniture and the family had so little food that they had even drunk the oil from the lamp.She was forced to leave her Broadstone home, with her two young children and her baby, as it was required for another working man and his family.The winter of 1895 was exceptionally severe and come spring David Muir and Tom Service found dead with two of her children