Original sentence: The Bridgewater Canal from Worsley to Manchester a success and the Duke sought powers to extend the canal from Worsley to Leigh in 1795.The Liverpool and Manchester Railway of 1830 crossed Astley Moss
Edited sentence: The Bridgewater Canal from Worsley to Manchester was a success and in 1795 the Duke sought powers to extend the canal from Worsley to Leigh.The Liverpool and Manchester Railway of 1830 crosses Astley Moss