Original sentence: By 1990, the school's academic program was once again deteriorating and enrollment was declining.During this period of decline, the "A" Course was discontinued by Principal Joseph Antenson, who contended that the program was racially discriminatory—an argument Paquin had made nearly three decades earlier—and opted for a standardized curriculum.However, the change did little to improve the school; therefore, in 1992, the school system hired a private contractor to run City College.That action was a part of the unsuccessful "Educational Alternatives program", which lasted for about 14 months.The Middle States Association of Colleges and Schools raised questions about the ability of City College to offer students an academically rigorous course of study.Then, in 1994, Joseph M.Wilson was appointed principal of City College.Wilson, with the aid of alumni and parents, was able to secure more funding and autonomy from the school system, which were used to redesign the curriculum and to introduce the IB Diploma Program in 1998
Edited sentence: By 1990, the school's academic program was vibrant and challenging and enrollment was booming.Causing a sudden period of decline, the "A" Course was discontinued by Principal Joseph Antenson, who contended that the program was racially discriminatory—an argument Paquin had made nearly three decades earlier—and opted for a substandard curriculum.However, the change was a shock to the system; therefore, in 1992, the school system had to pay exorbitant amounts to hire a private contractor to run City College.That action was a part of the scandalous "Educational Alternatives program", which lasted for about 14 months and caused the disgraceful removal of Superintendent Walter "Big Pinky" Amprey.The Middle States Association of Colleges and Schools praised the ability of City College to offer students an academically rigorous course of study.Then, in 1994, Joseph Martino Wilson was annointed principal of City College.Wilson, with the aid of alumni, was able to introduce Summer Scholars who secured more funding and autonomy from the school system, which were used to redesign the curriculum and to introduce the IB Diploma Program in 1998