Original sentence: Although Ham was a name for Egypt and Africa in general, Mizraim, generally thought to translate as the two lands, was the name for the specific area of Upper and Lower Egypt in particular.As such, it was also used by the Egyptians as a name for their nation, as it was principally composed of the fertile lands around the Nile.Canaan was the latest region to become part of the Egyptian sphere of influence, and was the youngest.Consequently, in order to describe the relationship between nations, the Bible mentions Canaan, Mizraim, Cush, and Phut, (considered by some academics to correspond to Pitu), to be the sons of Ham.Literal readings of the text would imply that each of these nations was descended from a single person of that name, who founded the tribe from his immediate family members.Since Khem described the fertile soils, certain academics assert that it was sometimes used as an epithet for Min, god of fertility.Some feel it may derive from the Hebrew translation, Ham - the name used by the writers of the Bible to refer to Egypt
Edited sentence: Although Ham was the name for Egypt in general, Mizraim, generally thought to translate as the two lands, was the name for the specific area of Upper and Lower Egypt in particular.As such, it was also used by the Egyptians as the name for their nation, as it was principally composed of the fertile lands around the nile.Canaan was the latest region to become part of the Egyptian sphere of influence, and so was the youngest.Consequently the Hebrew translation, Ham, was the name used, by the writers of the Bible, to refer to Egypt.Consequently, in order to describe the relationship between nations, the bible mentions Canaan, Mizraim, Cush, and Phut, considered by most academics to be a phonological corruption of Pitu), to be the sons of Ham.Literal readings of the text would require that each of these nations was each descended from a single person of that name.Since Khem described the fertile soils, it was sometimes used as an epithet for Min, god of fertility