Original sentence: In the radioshow This American Life, episode Classifieds (2002), a group of amateur musicians, found through their classified were brought together for one day to rehearse and record "Rocket Man" in a studio
Edited sentence: On the radio show This American Life, episode Classifieds (2002), a group of amateur musicians, found through their classified ads were brought together for one day to rehearse and record "Rocket Man" in a studio.The Nixons performed the song regularly at concerts and included a studio-recorded version on their 1999 EP Scrapbook