Original sentence: He holds several major CFL records including receiving touchdowns, career receiving yards, and the mother of all CFL awards: most touchdowns scored (Which is unheard of for a receiver).He is considered by many to be the greatest receiver in CFL history, despite catching passes from numerous mediocre quarterbacks throughout his career
Edited sentence: He is considered by many to be the greatest receiver in CFL history and holds several major CFL records including receiving touchdowns, career receiving yards, and most touchdowns scored