Original sentence: Deadbolt's Official WebsiteHailing mostly from the San Diego, California area, "The Scariest Band In The World", as Deadbolt musicians describes themselves, combines surf rock, psychobilly and blues sound with weird, creepy and often hilarously offbeat lyrics.The band has acquired a cult following of fiercely loyal fans from around the world, including several european countries and the Florida Panhandle in the USA, an area the band apparently avoids due to their reputed fear of alligators
Edited sentence: An outstanding resource for all things Deadbolt is their official website,.Hailing mostly from the San Diego, California area, "The Scariest Band In The World", as Deadbolt musicians describes themselves, combines surf rock, psychobilly and blues sound with weird, creepy and often hilarously offbeat lyrics.The band has acquired a cult following of fiercely loyal fans from around the world, including several european countries and (interestingly) the Florida panhandle in the USA, an area the band apparently avoids due to their reputed fear of alligators