Original sentence: Bushell's 1216 votes (a 3.4% share for that constituency) represented the party's best showing for the election, beating the UKIP candidate Stan Gain who secured 2.0% of the Greenwich and Woolwich vote.English Democrats were able to field 23 Candidates (all over England) in the May 2005 General Election, with a further 3 English Nationalist 'affiliated' candidates, taking the total to 26 English Nationalist Candiates (zero stood in the previous 2001 General Election).Garry Bushell (former Sun journalist and Sunday People TV critic) became the most high profile candidate for the English Democrats for the 5th May 2005 United Kingdom General Election, standing in the Greenwich and Woolwich constituency in London.The Election Slogan for May 2005 changed to 'English Democrats - Putting England First.Their 2004 election canvassing leaflet featured the slogan 'Not left, not right, just English'
Edited sentence: Bushell's 1216 votes (a 3.4% share for that constituency) represented the party's best showing for the election, comforably beating the UKIP candidate.English Democrats were able to field 23 Candidates (all over England) in the May 2005 General Election, with a further 3 English Nationalist 'affiliated' candidates, taking the total to 26 English Nationalist Candiates (Zero stood in the previous 2001 General Election).Garry Bushell (former Sun journalist and Sunday People TV critic) became the most high profile candidate for the English Democrats for the 5th May 2005 United Kingdom General Election, standing in the Greenwich & Woolwich - London Constituency.Respect (the Socialist Anit-War Party) put up the same number 26 Candidates yet the BBC gave 'Respect and George Galloway far more TV coverage, confirming the Bias of the BBC towards the left in British Politics.The Election Slogan for May 2005 changed to English Democrats - Putting England First.Their 2004 election canvassing leaflet featured the slogan "Not left, not right, just English"