Original sentence: He also served as the Chairman of the 53rd  Presidential Inaugural Committeeand as Chairman of the 1998 White House Millennium Celebration.In 2000, McAuliffe chaired a tribute to outgoing President Bill Clinton which set fundraising records.McAuliffe built a new headquarters and created a computer database of more than 170 million potential voters known as "Demzilla".The same year, he chaired the Democratic National Convention in Los Angeles;
Edited sentence: He also served as the Chairman of the 53rd  Presidential Inaugural Committeeand as Chairman of the White House Millennium Celebration.In 2000, McAuliffe chaired a tribute to President Bill Clinton, and shattered more fundraising records.McAuliffe built a new headquarters; created a computer database of more than 2.7 million grassroots donors; increased email addresses from 70,000 to more than 4 million; and built a database known as "Demzilla" of more than 170 million potential voters.That same year, he chaired the Democratic National Convention in Los Angeles; following the convention, the Democratic ticket received a 20-point bounce in the polls, on the way to winning the popular vote but losing the electoral college.This success enabled the party to fund an unprecedented political campaign recruiting 25,000 trained field precinct captains, conducting 530 organizing conventions across the country, mobilizing 233,000 volunteers, knocking on 11 million doors and making 38 million volunteer phone calls and 56 million paid calls