Original sentence: As Queen, she was largely responsible for the interiors of the Ajuda Royal Palace in Lisbon, still used to this for banquets during state visits by foreign heads of state.She was deeply saddened after the military coup that deposed her remaining grandson, King Manuel II of Portugal by the 5 October 1910 Revolution.The Queen Dowager was devastated after the assassination of her son King Carlos I of Portugal and grandson Crown Prince Luís Filipe, Duke of Braganza, on 1 February  1908 on the Praça do Comércio in Lisbon.When the Portuguese parliament discussed her expenses, she replied saying "if you want a Queen, you have to pay for her"
Edited sentence: As Queen, Maria Pia was largely responsible for the interiors of the Ajuda Royal Palace in Lisbon, still used to this for banquets during state visits by foreign heads of state.As Queen, she necessarily was involved in court balls, fashion and masquerades.Maria Pia was deeply upset by the military coup that deposed her remaining grandson King Manuel II of Portugal by the 5 October 1910 Revolution and the forced establishment of the Portuguese First Republic without the will of the people.She is said to have mourned the loss of Portugal.The Queen Dowager was devastated after the assassination of her son King Carlos I of Portugal and grandson Crown Prince Luís Filipe, Duke of Braganza, on 1 February 1908 on the Praça do Comércio in Lisbon.When the Portuguese parliament discussed her expenses, Maria Pia replied saying "if you want a Queen, you have to pay for her"