Original sentence: Also in the battalion is (Dewey Martin) that Kate had adopted and raised in New York when his parents and sister were burned to death in a tenement fire.Another member of the battalion is the Navy Chaplain whom Kate notices is a changed, silent, and saddened man since she last knew him
Edited sentence: After dinner with a former neighbour now a naval officer aboard an American ship an angry Lt.Also in the battalion is Eddie Wodcik (Dewey Martin) that Kate had adopted and raised in New York when his parents and sister were burned to death in a tenement fire.Another member of the battalion is the Navy Chaplain, Lieutenant Junior Grade Holmes (William Redfield) whom Kate notices is a changed, silent, and saddened man since she last knew him.Colonel Black relates to Lee his life of childhood poverty as a half Indian in Montana.Eddie feels that Lee looks exactly like his sister would have if she hadn't died and becomes her protector, demonstrating his ability by giving a disrespectful sailor (Ross Bagdasarian) a jiu jitsu throw to the floor.When the Raiders are shipped out for a couple months, Lee discovers she is pregnant, the Colonel has a wife in Washington, and things about her husband that she never knew