Original sentence: Born in Duluth, Minnesota, Dempster got her start in films as a protégé of legendary film director D
Edited sentence: Carol Dempster found the door of opportunity opening to her when Lillian Gish,.Carol Dempster was a curious actress, and a very promising one, earning a place in the development of motion pictures by way of her association with D.Carol was born in Duluth, Minnesota, Dempster got her start in films as a protégé of legendary film director D.Griffith’s most prominent muse, succumbed to offers with other producers and more money.In turn, each ultimately left him to follow the lure of more lucrative contracts, and as Griffith magnanimously allowed each to pursue their destiny, another pliable girl would slip into the embodiment of his ideal woman.The famous director similarly inspired Florence Lawrence, Mary Pickford, Lillian Gish, Dorothy Gish, Mae Marsh, and Constance Talmadge.When at her best, she was coached by Griffith to be intensely moving and completely convincing