Original sentence: During this time the Nazi government made efforts to kill and move prisoners from outlying camps such as Auschwitz closer into Germany.Rather then attempting to move the camp inmates camp officials often attempted to murder them.The deaths increased rapidly towards the end of the war as German fronts collapsed and much of the country was bombed by Allied raids
Edited sentence: During this time the Nazi government took steps to kill and move prisioners from outlying camps such as Auschwitz closer into Germany.Rather then attempting to move the camp inmates the Germans attempted to exterminate them.The deaths increased rapidly towards the end of the war as German fronts collapsed and much of the country was burned to the ground during bombing raids