Original sentence: At the age of eight, he started playing piano and soon thereafter started playing the guiar.Crossfade's Official Website.Drummer Brian Geiger and DJ Tony Byroads later joined and the group was renamed Sugardaddy Superstar.Edward Michael Sloan, (born March 13, 1973 in Columbia, South Carolina), better known as Ed Sloan, is an American musician.He plays a Seven-string guitar.Soon after, Sugarddaddy Superstar began to record their own music in a studio (which the band called Sugarstar Studios) built in Sloan's home.The group was signed by Columbia Records and changed their name to Crossfade.They released Crossfade in 2004, and two years later, released another album called Falling Away
Edited sentence: At the age of eight, he started playing piano.Ed Sloan uses a 7 string guitar (rarely used in music today) with talented solo skills and a trained performing voice Ed Sloan has grown an excellent name in the music scene.Edward Michael Sloan, (born March 13, 1973 in Columbia, South Carolina) better known as Ed Sloan, is an American musician.Soon after picked up the guitar.Soon after, Sugarddaddy Superstar began to record their own music in a studio (called Sugarstar Studios by the band) built in Ed's home.The band was signed by Columbia Records and renamed itself Crossfade.They added drummer Brian Geiger and DJ Tony Byroads and renamed the band Sugardaddy Superstar