Original sentence: Apart from the remaining residential portion of the original town of Regina, Saskatchewan between the Canadian Pacific Railway tracks and Wascana Lake, Regina's residential areas are typical of western Canadian cities, largely consisting of post-World War II single family dwellings on substantial lots
Edited sentence: Apart from the remaining residential portion of the original town of Regina, Saskatchewan between the Canadian Pacific Railway tracks and Wascana Lake, Regina's residential areas are typical of western Canadian cities, largely consisting of post-World War II single family dwellings on substantial lots, pleasant but undistinguished