Original sentence: Following a tryout with the Green Bay Packers in which they too tried to convert him to a wideout, he retired again and became a sports reporter.Louis Rams of the NFL, but retired before playing a game because he was seen by the NFL as being too small to play quarterback
Edited sentence: Following a tryout with the Green Bay Packers in which they too tried to convert him to a wideout, he quit again and became a sports talking head.He was as stiff as a board and had the charisma of a corpse.He will soon quit this as well since that is what he does best.Louis Rams of the NFL, but quit before playing a game because he is a coward and has no balls.The local "news" channel he worked for promptly fired him as he was completely inept and incompetent in this position