Original sentence: A director for half a century, he was a member of the Directors Guild of America (DGA) and one of its predecessors, the Radio and Television Directors Guild, which merged with the Screen Directors Guild in 1960 to form today's DGA.Auerbach received the DGA's Robert B.Auerbach's career as a director coincided with the early years of television and the organization of the fledgling medium's directors during the first years after the Second World War.He was a former National Vice President of the DGA, as well as member of its National Board.Larry Auerbach (born 1923 in Mount Vernon, New York) is an American television director
Edited sentence: A director for half a century, he was a deeply committed member of the Directors Guild of America (DGA) and one of its predecessors, the Radio and Television Directors Guild, which merged with the Screen Directors Guild in 1960 to form today's DGA.Born in 1923 in Mount Vernon, NY,  Larry Auerbach's career as a director coincided with the early years of television and the organization of the fledgling medium's directors during the first years after the Second World War.He is a former National Vice President of the DGA, as well as member of its National Board.He received the DGA's Robert B