Original sentence: Critics have protested in regards to the oppointment of pro GM lobbyists to senior positions in the FDA.Taylor is a former Monsanto lobbyist credited as being responsible for the implementation of "substantial equivalence" in place of food safety studies and for his advocacy that resulted in the Delaney clause that prohibited the inclusion of "any chemical additive found to induce cancer in man.. or animals" in processed foods being ammended in 1996 to allow the inclusion of pesticides in GMOs.Wolff is the Pennsylvania Secretary of Agriculture who successfully lobbied to ban organic farmers from labelling their products as being GM free and was a proponent of the "ACRE" initiative which gave the Pennsylvania state attorney general’s office the authority to sue municipalities that banned GMOs
Edited sentence: Critics have protested in regards to the appointment of pro GM lobbyists to senior positions in the FDA.Taylor is a former Monsanto lobbyist credited as being responsible for the implementation of "substantial equivalence" in place of food safety studies and for his advocacy that resulted in the Delaney clause that prohibited the inclusion of "any chemical additive found to induce cancer in man.. or animals" in processed foods being amended in 1996 to allow the inclusion of pesticides in GMOs.Wolff is the Pennsylvania Secretary of Agriculture who successfully lobbied to ban organic farmers from labeling their products as being GM free and was a proponent of the "ACRE" initiative which gave the Pennsylvania state attorney general’s office the authority to sue municipalities that banned GMOs