Original sentence: The Bondelswarts Rebellion (aka the Bondelswarts Uprising or Bondelswarts Affair) was a controversial violent incident in South Africa's League of Nations Mandate of South West Africa
Edited sentence: The Bondelswarts Rebellion (aka the Bondelswarts Uprising, or more disparagingly the Bondelswarts Affair) was a controversial violent incident in South Africa's League of Nations Mandate of South West Africa