Original sentence: Harry Elfont - Screenwriter and director of Can't Hardly Wait and Josie and the Pussycats.The area is home to a signigicant and fast-growing foreign-born population, with large concentrations of Russian, Indian, and Korean immigrants.Valerie Plame - CIA agent and wife of Joseph Wilson "outed" in 2005.Was inducted into Lower Moreland High School's Hall of Fame in 1998.Was inducted into Lower Moreland High School's Hall of Fame in 2008
Edited sentence: Harry Elfont - Screenwriter and director of Can't Hardly Wait and Josie and the Pussycats, was inducted into Lower Moreland High School's Hall of Fame in 1998.The area is home to a significant and fast-growing foreign-born population, with large concentrations of Russian, Indian, and Korean immigrants.Valerie Plame - CIA agent and wife of Joseph Wilson "outed" in 2005, was inducted into Lower Moreland High School's Hall of Fame in 2008