Original sentence: ITS VERY COLD.Once Alex arrives in New York City, and finds out that his grandmother had no intentions of collecting him at the airport, he meets a runaway girl named Morgana, who steals his backpack while he went to the restroom
Edited sentence: Once Alex arrives in New York City, and finds out that his grandmother had no intentions of collecting him at the airport, he meets a runaway girl named Morgana, who steals his backpack