Original sentence: According to Liddell Pickingill was a hereditary witch a descendant of Julia – The Witch of Brandon, who had lived in a village north of Thetford in Norfolk.According to the story he even conspired with Satanic Cults to expedite his would be intentions.Aleister Crowley is claimed to have been a member of one of his covens sometime around 1899.Born in 1816, the oldest of nine children by Charles and Susannah Pickingill, from a small Essex village called Hockley in East Anglia.George Pickingill (1816-1909) was an Essex cunning man, claimed by a faction of modern Wicca centring around Bill Liddell to have been an important  hereditary witch and a founder of the New Forest coven  which Gerald Gardner, founder of modern Wicca, supposedly joined.Over the course of his lifetime, George supposedly re-established a total of nine hereditary covens.Ronald Hutton in his histroy of Wicca Triumph of the Moon has concluded that Liddell's claims are unlikely to be true but cannot be conclusively disproven
Edited sentence: Aleister Crowley is reported to have been a member of one of his covens sometime around 1899.Born in 1816, the oldest of nine children by Charles and Susannah Pickingill.George Pickingill was a hereditary witch.George campaigned against Christian Religion and in doing so created much publicity around the Nine covens To protect against this, the Elders of the Hereditary covens conspired to discredit any claims made by George and others concerning the survival of Hereditary Witches.He even conspired with Satanic Cults to expedite his would be intentions.Living from 1816 to 1909.Over the course of his lifetime, George re-established a total of nine hereditary covens.The Old Religion was being practiced well before Christianity came along.The nine covens re-establishing the council of craft elders and the Craft Elders had good cause for objecting to what “Old George” kept advocating, preferring secrecy and discretion to the unwanted attention he was arousing.This in part involved the eradication of many traces of “Old George” and his “Nine Covens” as was possible.from a small Essex village called Hockley in East Anglia.“Old George” as he became known was a hereditary witch a descendant of Julia – The Witch of Brandon, who had lived in a village north of Thetford in Norfolk