Original sentence: After wandering in the woods, Rabbit returns to Ruth and learns of her pregnancy.During this time, Janice moves back into her parents' house.He soon returns home, however, where he visits his old basketball coach, Marty Tothero.Rabbit attends church one morning, and fueled by the flirtatious overtones, Lucy Eccles, the minister's wife, makes an ambiguous invitation to Rabbit to come into the Eccles' home.Rabbit leaves Ruth and rushes to the hospital.Rabbit, jealous of a past fling between Ruth and a local man, compels Ruth to perform fellatio, and on the same night Janice goes into labor.Tothero introduces Rabbit to Ruth Leonard, who is a part-time prostitute, and they begin a two month affair.When he refuses, she slams the door on him.When she refuses Rabbit leaves and turns back to Ruth
Edited sentence: After wandering in the woods, Rabbit returns to Ruth and learns that she is pregnant by him.Almost immediately afterwards, Rabbit hears from Eccles about the birth and leaves a distraught Ruth behind as he rushes to the hospital.During this time, Janice moves back into her parents' house and a local minister, Jack Eccles, befriends Harry in a futile attempt to get him to reconcile with his wife.However, after getting hopelessly lost he returns to his home town and, not wanting to go home, visits his old basketball coach, Marty Tothero.However, on the night that Janice gives birth, Rabbit, jealous of a past fling between Ruth and a local man, compels Ruth to perform fellatio.Rabbit attends church one morning and, after walking the minister's wife Lucy home, interprets an invitation from her to come in for a coffee as a sexual advance.That night Harry has dinner with Tothero and two girls one of whom, Ruth Leonard, is a part-time prostitute.They begin a two-month affair and Harry moves into her apartment.When he refuses, she slams the door on him in apparent disgust.When she refuses Rabbit leaves and attempts to return to Ruth