Original sentence: During this festival the village hosts a number of bluegrass groups over the weekend during which almost every bar becomes a music venue from 3pm until late in the evening.The most popular event in Dunmore East is the annual bluegrass festival which takes place at the end of August
Edited sentence: During this festival the village hosts a number of bluegrass groups over the weekend during which almost every bar becomes a music venue from 3pm in the afternoon until late in the evening.The most popular event in Dunmore East is the annaul bluegrass festival which takes place at the end of August.The village is situated upon two beautiful beaches and through the local park there is access to many other small, secluded beaches