Original sentence: She claimed to be living in her car in some woods in central London, taking showers in a local hospital, receiving unemployment benefits from the British government, and pretending to members of the public that she was not homeless.The blog's author also mentioned that she had written a novel and that she harboured feelings of jealousy for another homeless blogger who had received some sort of book deal because attention was drawn to his plight
Edited sentence: In one post, the blogger wondered whether any "blog trawling" literary agents might read her blog.She claimed to be living in her car in some woods in central London, taking showers in a local hospital, receiving unemployment benefits from the British government, and going out of her way to present the appearance to members of the public that she was not homeless.Since this the blogger made only a handful of new posts, in which she mentions that she is no longer homeless and icluding a lengthy post in which she describes a visit to her father in Ireland, where she tells him about her upcoming autobiography.The BBC published another article saying that the blogger had "written herself out" of her situation.The blog reports how she had been commissioned to write a full length book but did not reveal the subject matter beyond saying that it concerned how she became homeless.The blog's author also mentioned that she had written an (unpublished) novel and that she harboured feelings of jealousy for another homeless blogger who had received some sort of book deal because attention was drawn to his plight.The blogger claimed to have been rescued from her situation when a literary agent spotted her blog after it appeared as the subject of a magazine article by the BBC online and was impressed by her writing skills.The blogger makes occasional references to an unhappy childhood.The book was subsequently advertised on Amazon UK as being titled "Abandoned" and being an autobiography of the blogger's abusive childhood.The publisher's website mentions that the book is being written with Andrew Crofts, a highly successful ghostwriter of several best-selling autobiographies that describe abusive childhoods