Original sentence: On October 15, 2005  he found his wife dead at the mobile home where the couple had lived since they were married although.Vitale and Horowitz had been married nearly 11 years had been building their dream home that was near completion when Vitale was murdered Lafayette in Contra Costa County, California
Edited sentence: The couple had lived in the mobile home since they were married although the dream home they had been building on the same acreage was near completion when Vitale was murdered.Vitale and Horowitz had been married nearly 11 years when, on October 15, 2005, he found his wife dead at the mobile home in Lafayette in Contra Costa County, California