Original sentence: After a poor game Grant Holt grabbed a last minute winner something that became very common in City's season.After saving a penalty from Swansea, City would again win it late with an Ashley Williams o.Hopes were generally positive upon Norwich's return to the Championship with fans feeling that Norwich would comfortably survive.However City got off to a bad start losing 3–2 to Watford who were expected to struggle over the season.and Simeon Jackson netting his first of the season, and City would then go onto grab a credible point away at Nottingham Forest with Andrew Crofts scoring his first of many for Norwich
Edited sentence: After a poor game Grant Holt grabbed a last minute winner something that became very common in Citys season.After saving a penalty from Swansea City would agian win it late with an Ashley Williams o.Hopes were generally positive upon Norwichs return to the championship with fans feeling that Norwich would comfortably survive.However City got off to a bad start losing 3-2 to Watford who were expected to struggle over the season.g and simeon Jackson netting his first of the season, and city would then go onto grab a credible point away at Nottingham Forest with Andrew Crofts scoring his first of many for Norwich