Original sentence: Fewer than one-quarter of census respondents who identified Chinese as their ancestral language also indicated it as the language spoken in the home.In the 1990 census, roughly one-third of Sino-Mauritians stated Mauritian Creole as both their ancestral language and currently spoken language, while the other two-thirds indicated some form of Chinese as their ancestral language
Edited sentence: In the 1990 census, roughly one-third of Sino-Mauritians stated Mauritian Creole as both their ancestral language and currently spoken language.The other two-thirds indicated some form of Chinese as their ancestral language although only fewer than one-quarter of census respondents who identified Chinese as their ancestral language also indicated it as the language spoken in the home