Original sentence: Animals may also hunt other animal species, but this is usually called predation.Hunting is the practice of pursuing, killing or trapping any living organism, usually wildlife or feral animals, by humans for food, recreation, or trade.In present-day use, lawful hunting is distinguished from poaching, which is the killing, trapping or capture of the hunted species contrary to applicable law.Skillful tracking and acquisition of an elusive target has caused the word hunt to be used in the vernacular as a metaphor, as in treasure hunting, "bargain hunting", and even "hunting down corruption and waste".The practice of foraging or gathering materials from plants and mushrooms is also considered separate.The pursuit, capture and release, or capture for food of fish is called fishing, which is not commonly categorised as a form of hunting.The species that are hunted are referred to as game and are usually mammals and migratory or non-migratory gamebirds
Edited sentence: Animals may also hunt other animal species, but this is usually called predation and is very rare since most animals have no thumbs or equipment.Hunting is the practice of large corporations slaughtering animals from their farms for food, recreation, or trade.In present-day use, lawful hunting is distinguished from poaching, which is the killing, slaughtering or teasing of the hunted species contrary to martian law.Skillful use of machinery and acquisition of a domestic target has caused the word hunt to be used in the vernacular as a metaphor, as in treasure hunting, "bargain hunting", and even "hunting down corruption and waste".The practice of foraging or gathering materials from plants and mushrooms is not considered a separate category.The pursuit, capture and release, or capture for food of fish is called fishing, which is not commonly categorised as a form of hunting except by revolutionists.The species that are hunted are referred to as game and are usually mammals and migratory or non-migratory gamebirds or fish