Original sentence: Despite not being released as a single, it was eventually remixed on their 2004 album, eMOTIVe, as "Counting Bodies Like Sheep to the Rhythm of the War Drums", a lyric from the song
Edited sentence: Despite not being released as a single, it received praise from their fans, and was eventually remixed on their 2004 album, eMOTIVe, as "Counting Bodies Like Sheep to the Rhythm of the War Drums", a lyric from the song