Original sentence: 4, The Bund), housed the Mercantile Bank of India, London and China, built between 1916-1918.At the northern end of The Bund, along the riverfront, is Huangpu Park, in which is situated the Monument to the People's Heroes - a tall, abstract concrete tower which is a memorial for the those who died during the revolutionary struggle of Shanghai dating back to the Opium Wars
Edited sentence: 4, The Bund), housed the Mercantile Bank of India, London and China, built between 1916–1918.At the northern end of The Bund, along the riverfront, is Huangpu Park, in which is situated the Monument to the People's Heroes—a tall, abstract concrete tower which is a memorial for the those who died during the revolutionary struggle of Shanghai dating back to the Opium Wars