Original sentence: However, some fans responded positively to the play and its characters, with Scorpius Malfoy being particularly popular.These criticisms have led some of the fandom to reject the play as separate from the Potter canon
Edited sentence: These criticisms have led most of the fandom to reject the play as separate from the Potter canon.Very few fans responded positively to the play and its characters, with Scorpius Malfoy being particularly popular