Original sentence: Many pickup artists work on their "game" by improving their understanding of psychology, their confidence and self-esteem (termed "inner game"), and their social skills and physical appearance (physical fitness, fashion sense, grooming) ("outer game")
Edited sentence: For example, they reject the notion that men should attempt to woo women by spending money on them (e.Many members of the seduction community work on their "game" (seduction skills) by improving their understanding of psychology, their confidence and self-esteem (termed "inner game"), and their social skills and physical appearance (physical fitness, fashion sense, grooming) ("outer game").Supporters of this community typically believe that the conventional dating advice for men is flawed.buying drinks, presents, jewelry), calling it supplication