Original sentence: This is not the case in the fashion conscious fashion capitals London, New York City or even Paris where the crowds are in designer outfits
Edited sentence: It is simply not the case in Germany, where fashion isnt as generally seen as important, compared to fashion conscious countries like the UK, Italy, France and the east coast on the US.This is not the case in the fashion conscious fashion capitals London, New York City or Paris where the crowds tend to make a real effort and are usually top to toe in designer clad outfits, This trend has unfortunately meant that a number of clubs in these three cities have simply become venues, for the pretentious 'show off' crowd, and this also means only those in the most up to dat this season designeroutfits get in