Original sentence: Carroll Christian Schools is a private Christian school in Westminster, Maryland that provides education from a faith-based perspective.The school began as Carroll Christian Academy in 1973 in conjunction with the Church of the Open Door.The school embodies strong academics, character building and spiritual development as referenced in their school purpose - honesty, integrity, and strength
Edited sentence: Carroll christian Schools is a cheap private Christian school in Westminster, Maryland that has a history of extremism and tend not to accept or respect people unlike them, it is a tight knit group for the most part, however they try to maintain a normal image.The group could be considered a cult, however there has never been any evidence nor invenstigation to show any foul play of any sort.just simply "brain washing" if were to be labeled  It began as Carroll christian Academy in 1973 in conjunction with the Church of the Open Door