Original sentence: Stavsky was killed when, on orders from David Ben Gurion and with direct involvement of Yitzhak Rabin, the Hagana shot at and shelled the Altalena, a munitions ship commissioned by the Irgun, near the shore of Tel Aviv
Edited sentence: Stavsky was killed in an exchange of gunfire while aboard the Altalena, a munitions ship commissioned by the Irgun that ran aground 50 yards off the shore of Tel Aviv within a stone throw of where Arlosoroff was murdered almost 15 years to the day