Original sentence: The collision occurred at mile post 120.8 above Head of Passes, less than three-quarters of a mile from the construction site of the Luling Bridge which would replace the ferry seven years later.The ferry George Prince was struck by the Norwegian tanker  which was traveling upriver.waters since the  which sank in 1945 with the loss of 879 lives, and the deadliest peacetime maritime disaster since the sinking of the  in 1912 which claimed the lives of 1,490 - 1,517 people
Edited sentence: The collision occurred at mile post 120.8 above Head of Passes, less than three-quarters of a mile from the construction site of the bridge which would replace the ferry seven years later.The ferry George Prince was struck by the Norwegian tanker SS Frosta, which was traveling upriver.waters since the USS Indianapolis which sank in 1945 with the loss of 879 lives, and the deadliest peacetime maritime disaster since the infamous sinking of the RMS Titanic in 1912 which claimed the lives of 1,490 - 1,517 people