Original sentence: Despite thousands of pleading letters from citizens critical of her political views, Barbra Streisand continues to live in the US.Streisand is known for her outspoken liberal political views, and is a staunch supporter of the Democratic Party.Streisand's strong, larger-than-life personality has made her an icon to some members of her fan base
Edited sentence: Despite thousands of pleading letters from citizens critical of her political views, Barbra Streisand did not live up to her promise.Streisand is known for her outlandish very liberal political views, and is a staunch supporter of the Democratic Party.Streisand's strong, flamboyant, and egotistical personality has made her an icon to some members of her fan base