Original sentence: Bosco offers clubs and activities for student involvement, including a debate team, a mock trial team, an award winning theater program, a mission club, an Ambassadors Club, a Model United Nations team, student government, music/band clubs, etc.Don Bosco Prep has a football program that is a competitor for the New Jersey State Interscholastic Athletic Association (NJSIAA) Parochial Group 4 championship.The Prep currently fields eight varsity athletic teams in the winter including a County Champion basketball team, a hockey team, wrestling, and bowling programs.The school also has strong soccer and cross-country teams, both of which regularly compete on the state level.The spring crew team, a recent addition in 2003, has been making a name for itself both locally and nationally, placing many boats in local regattas in Philadelphia and the Mercer Lake Sprints.There is also a fall crew team, which was started in 2006
Edited sentence: Bosco offers a plethora of clubs and activities for student involvement, including a debate team, a mock trial team, an award winning theater program, a mission club, an Ambassadors Club, a Model United Nations team, student government, music/band clubs, etc.Don Bosco Prep has a football program that is a consistent competitor for the New Jersey State Interscholastic Athletic Association (NJSIAA) Parochial Group 4 championship.The Prep currently fields wight varsity athletic teams in the winter including a County Champion basketball team, a hockey team, wrestling, and bowling programs.The crew team, a recent addition in 2003, has been making a name for itself both locally and nationally, placing many boats in local regattas in Philadelphia and the Mercer Lake Sprints.The school also has consistently strong soccer and cross-country teams, both of which regularly compete on the state level.There is also a fall crew team, which was started in 2006 and looks to do well and continue to add to the tradition of the successful spring program