Original sentence: A Tim Colebatch article from the Australian Newspaper later revealed that up until 2000, there had only been one mention of Tony Mokbel in the media; which was a positive article in the Herald Sun about the contributions Mokbel's local businesses in Moreland were for local jobs and the local economy — an indication of how nobody at the time knew what he was actually up to
Edited sentence: A Tim Colebatch article from the Australian Newspaper later revealed that up until 2000, there had only been one mention of Tony Mokbel in the media; which was a positive article in the Herald Sun about the contributions Mokbels local businesses in Moreland were for local jobs and the local economy- an indication of how nobody at the time knew what he was actually up to.Thomson will continue to be an active local member who is always ready and willing to assist in improving conditions within the electorate of Wills