Original sentence: Peter's second wife, and mother of four of his five children, Tina Angela Coe (nee Lall), died in Hammersmith and Fulham, London, in 2005, aged 75
Edited sentence: Peter's second wife, and mother of four of his five children, Tina Angela Coe (née Lall), died in Hammersmith and Fulham, London, in 2005, aged 75