Original sentence: Grasmere is a village and tourist destination in the centre of the English Lake District.Grasmere is now home to the winner of the 'Get Started Award 2014' awarded by the Institute of Enterprise and Entrepreneurs, the Handmade Chocolate Shop.In 1961 the civil parish had a population of 1029.The village is on the river Rothay which flows into Grasmere (the body of water), which lies about 0.5 km to the south.The village is overlooked from the north-west by the rocky hill of Helm Crag, popularly known as The Lion and the Lamb or the Old Lady at the Piano.Until September 2013, Grasmere's three main church parishes (Catholic, Church of England and Methodist) gathered three times a year to celebrate mass in the Catholic Church of Our Lady of the Wayside
Edited sentence: Grasmere is a village and popular tourist destination in the heart of the English Lake District.The river Rothay winds it way through the village in a meandering course until it flows into Grasmere (the body of water), which lies about 0.5 km to the south.The village is overlooked from the north-west by the small, but prominent, rocky hill of Helm Crag, popularly known as The Lion and the Lamb or the Old Lady at the Piano