Original sentence: Frankston Marina is a proposed project to provide a safe boat harbour at the bottom of Olivers Hill.Frankston Waterfront is a redevelopment of a portion of the foreshore area, featuring extensive landscaping, car parking, a new restaurant with bay views and a footbridge over Kananook Creek.The Frankston Arts Centre overlooks the Frankston CBD, and houses a theatre suitable for live performances and also an art gallery.The currently unoccupied Peninsula Centre is a 12-storey 1970s office building which, pending town planning approval, may be developed into a luxury apartment, retail and restaurant complex
Edited sentence: A vacant eyesore, it is also a common target for vandals.Featuring extensive landscaping, car parking, a new restaurant with bay views and a footbridge over Kananook Creek, it has proven to be a popular attraction with locals.Frankston High School is located on foot street and is one of the best schools in the area.Frankston Marina is a long talked about project to provide a safe boat harbour at the bottom of Olivers Hill.Frankston Waterfront is a redevelopment of a portion of the foreshore area.Frankston is also known for its music and arts.It remains to be seen whether the development will ever be built.Jamie Durie, a popular television presenter of Backyard Blitz, is involved in the redevelopment of the 10-storey building which will see the building converted to apartments.Many local bands are hardcore punk and metal.Some bands include "Loners With Boners", "Everhappens", "Kolstomy Bag", "one dead dream", "Red-Ink", Filmore, Point of You, Famous by Assocsiation and almost a local Supergroup "Starwagon".The Frankston Arts Centre is an imposing building overlooking the Frankston CBD, and houses a theatre suitable for live performances and also an art gallery.The currently unoccupied Peninsula Centre is an ugly 1970s office building which towers above the rest of the Frankston CBD.The most famous bands it has produced are "28 days" and "Something for Kate"