Original sentence: BRR was established by the President of Indonesia, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono on 16 April 2005.Badan Rehabilitasi dan Rekonstruksi (BRR) NAD-Nias, or Agency for the Rehabilitation and Reconstruction of Aceh and Nias, is an Indonesian government agency which coordinated and jointly implemented the recovery programme following the Indian Ocean tsunami that mostly affected Aceh in December 2004, and the Nias earthquake in March 2005.Ex Indonesia Ministry, a Stanford alumnus  Kuntoro Mangkusubroto was appointed to lead BRR, in coordination with recovery community.Its principal activities include the collection, cataloguing and classification of documents and other media formats and to enable this information to be accessed for research and reference purposes.The agency operated for a four-year period, based in Banda Aceh, with a regional office in Nias and a representative office in Jakarta.The agency’s mission is to restore livelihoods and strengthen communities in Aceh and Nias by designing and overseeing a coordinated, community-driven reconstruction and development program implemented according to the highest professional standards
Edited sentence: A remarkable outcome for what was an unimaginable disaster.BRR was established by President of Indonesia, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono on 16 April 2005.Badan Rehabilitasi dan Rekonstruksi (BRR) NAD-Nias, or Agency for the Rehabilitation and Reconstruction of Aceh and Nias is an Indonesian Government Agency which coordinated and jointly implemented the recovery programme following the Indian Ocean tsunami that mostly affected Aceh in December 2004, and the Nias earthquake in March 2005.Ex Indonesia Ministry, a Stanford Alumni  Kuntoro Mangkusubroto was appointed to lead BRR, in coordination with recovery community.Its principle activities include the collection, cataloguing and classification of documents and other media formats and to enable this information to be accessed for research and reference purposes.The Agency operated for four-years period, based in Banda Aceh, with a regional office in Nias and a representative office in Jakarta.The Agency’s mission is to restore livelihoods and strengthen communities in Aceh and Nias by designing and overseeing a coordinated, community-driven reconstruction and development program implemented according to the highest professional standards