Original sentence: 3: (The Subliminal Verses) touring cycle, his mask took on a more facial shape and contained small metal bars inside a larger mouth area.Gray currently has 2 masks that he uses for All Hope Is Gone.He also has one with the same shape as that with the iron bars, only it has Black and white on it, like his second one.His mask is also made of leather and was stitched.The first is a gray mask that has iron bars, like his third mask, but the bars are lined up and the bullet hole and crack decorations were removed
Edited sentence: 3 era, except the bars are now verticallly lined, and it is indented with small cracks.3: (The Subliminal Verses) touring cycle, his mask took on a more facial shape and contained small angled metal bars inside a larger mouth area.Gray currently has two masks that he uses for the All Hope Is Gone era.His second mask is almost identical to his previous one, except that white paint has been smudged down the mask in a line from the eyeholes, and it is adorned with more visible stiches on the face.The first one is a gray leather mask, almost identical to the one used during the Vol