Original sentence: " In contrast to the 1960s current that believed in radical actions against the political system, she sought to work for change within it., Rodham organized a two-day student strike and worked with Wellesley's African American students to recruit more minority students and faculty.A number of her fellow students thought she might some day become the first woman President of the United States.However, she was upset by how Richard Nixon's campaign portrayed Rockefeller and what by she perceived as the convention's "veiled" racist messages, and left the Republican Party for good.In 1965, Rodham enrolled at Wellesley College, where she majored in political science.In a letter to her youth minister at this time, she described herself as "a mind conservative and a heart liberal.In early 1968, she was elected president of the Wellesley College Government Association and served through early 1969; she was instrumental in keeping Wellesley from being embroiled in the student disruptions common to other colleges.She later stepped down from this position, as her views changed regarding the American Civil Rights Movement and the Vietnam War.So she could better understand her changing political views, Professor Alan Schechter assigned Rodham to intern at the House Republican Conference, and she attended the "Wellesley in Washington" summer program
Edited sentence: " Rather than take then-trendy radical actions against the political system, she sought to work for change within it., Rodham organized a two-day student strike and worked with Wellesley's black students to recruit more black students and faculty.A number of her fellow students thought she might someday become the first woman President of the United States.However, due to her evolving views regarding the American Civil Rights Movement and the Vietnam War, she stepped down.However, she was upset by how Richard Nixon's campaign portrayed Rockefeller and what she perceived as the "veiled" racist messages of the convention, causing her to leave the Republican Party for good.In a letter to her youth minister, she described herself as "a mind conservative and a heart liberal.In early 1968, she was elected president of the Wellesley College Government Association and served through early 1969; she was instrumental in keeping Wellesley from being embroiled by the student disruptions common to other colleges.Rodham enrolled in Wellesley College in 1965, where she majored in political science.So she could better understand her changing political views, Professor Alan Schechter assigned Rodham to intern at the House Republican Conference and she attended the "Wellesley in Washington" summer program