Original sentence: In 1908, their mother died from cancer and as their father mourned her, C.In 1909, Warren transferred to Malvern College in Worcestershire (Mid-West England) and was followed there by his brother a few years later
Edited sentence: In 1908, their mother sadly died from cancer and as their father mourned her, C.In 1909, Warren transferred to Malvern College in Worcestershire (Mid-West England) and was accompanied by his brother a few years later