Original sentence: Tim Field claims that the targets of workplace bullying are usually bright, creative individuals, and often excel at their jobs.Tim Field suggests these aspects of the target's personality often contrast sharply with the bully's aggression and incompetence{fact}
Edited sentence: The targets of workplace bullying are usually bright, creative individuals, and often excel at their jobs.These aspects of the target's personality often contrast sharply with the bully's aggression and incompetence