Original sentence: Edwin Muir (15 May 1887 - 3 January, 1959) was a Scottish poet, novelist, and noted translator born on a farm in Deerness on the Orkney Islands
Edited sentence: Edwin Muir (15 May 1887 - 3 January, 1959) was an Orcadian poet, novelist and noted translator born on a farm in Deerness on the Orkney Islands