Original sentence: Wollstonecraft argues that women should have all of the intellectual and moral training given to men, and they should use these skills within the domestic sphere
Edited sentence: By envisioning a masculine role for women, one designed for the public sphere but which women could not perform in the public sphere, Wollstonecraft leaves women without a specific social position.The picture Wollstonecraft draws of the role for women is ultimately confining and limiting: she offers them more in the way of education but no real way to use it.Wollstonecraft argues that women should have all of the intellectual and moral training given to men, but she fails to provide women with a place to use these new skills beyond the home.Yet, in attempting to outline a meaningful position for women in society, Wollstonecraft paradoxically confines them to the domestic sphere