Original sentence: From a DNS perspective, it prevents some parts of the Internet to reach other parts.In May 2000, the Internet Architecture Board spoke out strongly against alternative roots in RFC 2826.Jon Postel, a significant contributor to Internet standards, asserted that it would lead to chaos
Edited sentence: From a DNS perspective, it prevents some (in this case, most) parts of the Internet to reach other parts, something that should intrinsically be avoided by all possible means.Jon Postel, one of the most significant contributor to Internet standards, asserted that it would lead to chaos.Several years later, in May 2000, the Internet Architecture Board has spoken out strongly against alternative roots in RFC 2826