Original sentence: "Origin and Development of the Political System in the Shanghai International Settlement", JHKBRAS 22 (1982):31ff.Biographical Information Members of the Shanghai Municipal Council 1850-1865.Henry Keswick - British Quarter.It was ruled as treaty port under the terms of the Treaty of Nanking 1842, and Chinese sovereignty still prevalied on the territory.Moreover, Shanghai was for a time the only place in the world that unconditionally offered refuge for Jews who were escaping from the Nazis  , although they often lived in squalid conditions in an area known as the Shanghai ghetto in Hongkew.Origin and Development of the Political System in the Shanghai International Settlement
Edited sentence: "Origin and Development of the Political System in the Shanghai International Settlement", Journal of the Hong Kong Branch of the Royal Asiatic Society 22 (1982):31–64."The Shanghai Municipal Council, 1850–1865: Some Biographical Notes, Journal of the Hong Kong Branch of the Royal Asiatic Society 24 (1984):207–229.Hann, J.Henry Keswick—British Quarter.It was ruled as treaty port under the terms of the Treaty of Nanking 1842, and Chinese sovereignty still prevailed on the territory.Moreover, Shanghai was for a time the only place in the world that unconditionally offered refuge for Jews who were escaping from the Nazis , although they often lived in squalid conditions in an area known as the Shanghai ghetto in Hongkew