Original sentence: Steve Stevens (born as Steve Schneider on May 5, 1959, in Brooklyn, New York) is an American guitarist and songwriter best known for playing for other artists (most notably Billy Idol, Vince Neil) and lesser known for his solo effort Atomic Playboys, which featured an MTV hit single video of the same name
Edited sentence: Steve Stevens (born as Steve Schneider on May 5, 1959, in Brooklyn, New York) is an American virtuoso guitarist and songwriter best known for playing for other artists (most notably Billy Idol, Vince Neil) and lesser known for his solo effort Atomic Playboys, which featured an MTV hit single video of the same name