Original sentence: Briarwood High School has won 34 AHSAA.Minor cases of student misconduct are punished with detention.Serious misconduct leads to suspension.Spankings are not administered in the presence of other students.Staff are instructed to use the paddle whenever necessary.The Briarwood football team has won 4 state titles and is currently coached by Fred Yancey.The school believes the Bible teaches the use of corporal punishment in the discipline of young people.Where this proves ineffective, and for any significant offenses, a spanking will be administered
Edited sentence: Briarwood high school has an excellent athletic tradition and has won 34 AHSAA.The Briarwood football team has won 4 state titles and are currently coached by Fred Yancey