Original sentence: Finally noticed by Asia Pacific Music in the Pioneer karaoke contest, he then joined forces with a college mate, Victor Wong, and together the duo produced a demo album for Rock Records, which in turn, signed them up almost immediately
Edited sentence: After his graduation, Michael produced his first album with two other college mates, Chan and Tan.Finally noticed by Asia Pacific Music in the Pioneer karaoke contest, he started to learn Audio Engineering at Ocean Institute Of Audio Engineering during his contract with Asia Pacific Music as a recording artist.With the joining of Victor Wong as a singer during that period, they submitted the album to Rock Records, which in turn, signed them up almost immediately