Original sentence: From 1996 to 2002, she hosted the daytime talk show, The Rosie O'Donnell Show.Her performance, as a mentally retarded woman named Beth Smith, was critically acclaimed (although was derided by some).In September 2006, O'Donnell made her first guest appearance on TV show, Nip/Tuck, as character Dawn Budge.On February 26, 2004, O'Donnell entered legal union with her partner Kelli Carpenter, a former Nickelodeon marketing executive, in San Francisco, some two weeks after mayor Gavin Newsom authorized the granting of marriage licenses to same-sex couples.On October 16, 2006, O'Donnell indicated that negotiations had concluded and that she had accepted the job.Rosie received both applause and disapproval by some for saying on The View that Radical Christianity is just as much of a threat to America as is Radical Islam.The license was later voided by the California Supreme Court
Edited sentence: From 1996 to 2002, she hosted the daytime talk show, The Rosie O'Donnell Show, coming out of the closet about being a lesbian the same year she left her show.Her performance, as a mentally retarded woman named Beth Smith, was both panned and praised.In September 2006, O'Donnell made her first guest appearance on TV show, Nip/tuck, as character Dawn Budge.On February 26, 2004, O'Donnell entered what was thought to be a legal union with her partner Kelli Carpenter, a former Nickelodeon marketing executive, in San Francisco, some two weeks after mayor Gavin Newsom unlawfully authorized the granting of marriage licenses to same-sex couples.Rosie received both applause and disapproval by some for saying on The View that Radical Christianity is just as much of a threat to America as is Radical Islam, demonstrating jsut how stupid some people can be when they refuse to realize that islamofascists actually want to kill us - and would ban shows like "The View" if they had their way.The attempted marriage was later determined to be null and void by the California Supreme Court