Original sentence: 1937 New RVC buildings are officially opened by King George VI, accompanied by Queen Elizabeth, the present Queen Mother, on November 9th.The first issue of the journal, The Student, is published on November 29th; the second issue, December 11th, is renamed The Students' Record
Edited sentence: 1937 New RVC buildings are officially opened by King George VI, accompanied by Queen Elizabeth, the present Queen Mother, on November 9.The first issue of the journal, The Student, is published on November 29; the second issue, December 11, is renamed The Students' Record