Original sentence: Along with its singles "The Thin Wall" and "The Voice", the album featured a long track in three parts on the second side, leading some critics to decry the band as "the new Genesis", something which was well wide of the mark.Ure knew of Ultravox's past, being a fan of "Systems" to the point where the new four-piece outfit (Ultravox mark three, often called "the classic line-up") played songs from "Systems" with Ure singing Foxx's lyrics
Edited sentence: Along with its excellent singles "The Thin Wall" and "The Voice", the album featured a long track in three parts on the second side, leading some critics to decry the band as "the new Genesis", something which was well wide of the mark.Ironically Ure knew of Ultravox's past, being a fan of "Systems" to the point where the new four-piece outfit (Ultravox mark three, often called "the classic line-up") played songs from "Systems" with Ure singing Foxx's lyrics