Original sentence: From year 7 students learn Indonesian as a Language Other Than English (LOTE).The college facilities include several art rooms, science laboratories, computer laboratories, technology facilities, music rooms, a library and a gymnasium as well as a new performing arts centre
Edited sentence: Starting from Year 7, students learn Indonesian as Language Other Than English (LOTE).The college facilities include several art rooms, science laboratories, computer laboratories, technology facilities, music rooms, a library and a gymnasium as well as a faboulous new performing art centre - pity the English faculty is still suffering from a lack of funding, though.as well as a new state of the art performing arts center