Original sentence: The marriage took place on a day chosen by the Emperor, an avid astrologer himself, employing his astrolabe, at mid-day on a Monday in September, 1541 (Jumada al-awwal 948 AH) at Patr.Though initially she refused to meet him, eventually after forty days and at the insistence of Dildar Begum, she agreed to marry the Emperor
Edited sentence: The marriage took place on a day chosen by the Emperor, an avid astrologer, himself employing his astrolabe, at mid-day on a Monday in September, 1541 (Jumada al-awwal 948 AH) at Patr.Though initially she refused to meet him, eventually after forty days of perusing and eventually at the insistence of Dildar Begum, she agreed to marry the Emperor