Original sentence: Bullshit is commonly employed in sales, advertising, journalism and the broadcast media, and in some areas of religion or politics where truth and accuracy are far less important than the ability to achieve a suitable response in the audience.Talking bullshit is thus a lesser form of lying, and is likely to elicit a correspondingly weaker emotional response: whereas a liar may be greeted with outrage and hatred, an exponent of bullshit tends to be dismissed with a indifferent sneer
Edited sentence: Bullshit is commonly employed in sales, advertising, journalism and the broadcast media, and in some areas of religion, politics and "borderline" sciences such as sociology, where truth and accuracy are far less important than the ability to achieve a suitable response in the audience.Talking bullshit is thus a lesser form of lying, and is likely to ellicit a correspondingly weaker emotional response: whereas a liar may be greeted with outrage and hatred, an exponent of bullshit tends to be dismissed with a disinterested sneer