Original sentence: Sutton Hoo is felt by many to be a magical place.The circumstances of its discovery and excavation add to this atmosphere of mystery.The find, so evocative and illuminating of the origins of the English nation, was made on the very eve of the Second World War
Edited sentence: Sutton Hoo is felt by many to be a magical place, and the legend surrounding its discovery and excavation adds to its allure and mysterious atmosphere.The find which was so evocative and illuminating of the origins of the English nation was made on the very eve of the Second World War