Original sentence: The song, written by Bill Garvey who passed away 8/3/09 from a stroke, is notably featured in the film The Silence of the Lambs during the scene in which serial killer "Buffalo Bill" applies make-up and dances in front of a  video camera with his  penis tucked between his legs as to give the appearance of a female mons
Edited sentence: The song, written by Bill Garvey who passed away August 3rd, 2009 from a stroke, is notably featured in the film The Silence of the Lambs during the scene in which serial killer "Buffalo Bill" applies make-up and dances in front of a  video camera with his  penis tucked between his legs as to give the appearance of a female mons