Original sentence: The majority of the planet Tiamat survived the impact((POV-statement}}, and was thrown into a more stable orbit as the third planet in the solar system, Earth, forming the moon.The planet is named for the Babylonian monster Tiamat
Edited sentence: A more detailed explanation of Tiamat as a planet.Moore, JD, STB   Page 8 and Canto I  page 10.Synthesis Remembered / Awakening Original Innocence  by Charles L.The majority of the planet Tiamat survived the impact, and was thrown into a more stable orbit as the third planet in the solar system, Earth, forming the moon.The planet is named for the Babylonian mother goddess Tiamat