Original sentence: While it did little overall damage to the hacking community, only managing to take down a small fraction of the boards available on the the web, it has been lauded as a tactical success due to the surprise and damage it caused to the communities in comparison to the long wars waged against the Legion of Doom
Edited sentence: While it did little overall damage to the hacking community, only managing to take down a small fraction of the boards available on the web, it has been lauded as a tactical success due to the surprise and damage it caused to the communities in comparison to the long wars waged against the Legion of Doom