Original sentence: Animals on fur-farms are fed excess products from production of beef, fish and poultry.Fur farming is therefore considered a good conservation practice.Opponents of fur farming state that, as with other large scale animal farms, the methods used on fur factory farms are designed to maximize profits.Other methods include poisons (particularly strychnine and plant killers), and neck breaking.Others disagree with this latter notion, stating that natural fur is superior to synthetic furs, which produce significant petro-chemical waste and pollution.Proponenets of real fur also point out that fur is a renewable resource, unlike synthentic fur.Starting in the latter half of the 20th century, producers and wearers of fur have been criticized by some because of the belief that animal trapping and fur farms are cruel and made unnecessary by modern natural and synthetic fibers.This growing demand has led to the development of extensive fur farming operations in countries such as China, where activist groups such as People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals have raised concerns about what they allege to be inhumane treatment of animals and the nature of slaughterhouse practices.This practice reduces the effects of environmentally damaging waste produced in this food industries.Today, eighty-five percent of the fur industry’s skins come from animals living captive on fur farms.[1,2]
Edited sentence: 'Fur Commission'.Opponents of fur farming state that, as with other intensive-confinement animal farms, the methods used on fur factory farms are designed to maximize profits.Others disagree with this latter notion, stating that synthetic materials are not comparable to natural fur, which still remains a popular item.Some inhumane methods include poisons (particularly strychnine and plant killers), and neck breaking.Starting in the latter half of the 20th century, producers and wearers of fur have been criticized by some because of the belief that animal trapping and fur farms are cruel, and that the killing of animals for clothing (or fur trimmed accessories) is made unnecessary by modern natural and synthetic fibers.This growing demand has led to the development of extensive fur farming operations in countries such as China, where activist groups such as People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals have raised concerns about the inhumane treatment of animals and the nature of slaughterhouse practices.Today, eighty-five percent of the fur industry’s skins come from animals living captive on fur factory farms.Various commentators, including scientists, animal rights activists, and philosophers oppose what they consider to be the cruel nature in which fur-bearing animals are farmed and killed