Original sentence: David Stronach is a renowned Scottish archeologist of ancient Iran and Eraq.He is also the recipient of the 2004 Archaeological Institute of America's Gold Medal for "Distinguished Archaeological Achievement".He is currently a professor at the University of California, Berkeley.His daughter Tami Stronach played the role of "the Childlike Empress" in the 1984 movie The NeverEnding Story.His scholarship have earned him many honors and awards, including the invitation to deliver endowed lectures at Harvard and Columbia.Stronach is leadeing western expert on the city of Pasargadae
Edited sentence: A recipient of the 2004 Archaeological Institute of America's Gold Medal for "Distinguished Archaeological Achievement," he is currently a professor at the University of California, Berkeley.David Stronach is a renowned Scottish archeologist of ancient Iran and Eraq(Iraq).His daughter, Tami Stronach, is remembered from Wolfgang Petersen's 1984 blockbuster The NeverEnding Story as "the Childlike Empress.Stronach is undoubtedly one of the world's top western experts on the city of Pasargadae.Tami Stronach's website.The breadth and distinction of his scholarship have earned him many honors and awards, including the invitation to deliver endowed lectures at Harvard and Columbia among many other distinguished academic institutes