Original sentence: At the Meteor Music Awards on February 16th 2008, two months after his sudden passing, the music industry paid the first of many tributes to him.Peter Doherty, The Aftermath and Dire Straits founding member John Illsley were among those in attendance at the UK launch.Westmeath on October 16th 1939
Edited sentence: At the Meteor Music Awards on February 16 2008, two months after his sudden passing, the music industry paid the first of many tributes to him.Pete Doherty, The Aftermath and Dire Straits founding member John Illsley were among those in attendance at the UK launch.Westmeath on October 16 1939