Original sentence: Another issue is her supposed "loose" lifestyle before she was converted to Christianity.In an article in The New Paper in 2004, she proclaimed that she has had more than 50 boyfriends in her early age and that led to a huge furore in Singapore
Edited sentence: Another big issue is her supposed "loose" lifestyle.In an article in The New Paper in 2004, she proudly proclaimed that she has had more than 50 boyfriends in her lifetime and that led to a huge furore in Singapore