Original sentence: Simmons was sent to hell,where in a desperate attempt to see his wife one last time, he made a deal with the devil Malebolgia, and unwittingly,  to become a "Hellspawn", a General in Hells Army
Edited sentence: Simmons was sent to hell, where in a desperate attempt to see his wife one last time, he made a deal with the devil Malebolgia, and unwittingly,  to become a "Hellspawn", a General in Hells Army