Original sentence: In addition, there was a flyering campaign during the band's performance at Regent Street festival, and also an old Routemaster bus was recommissioned and redecorated to match the vehicle on the album cover.Union Square put significant effort into the album's promotion
Edited sentence: As well as this, there was a flyering campaign during the band's performance at Regent Street festival, and also an old Routemaster bus was recommissioned and redecorated to match the vehicle on the album cover.Union Square put admirable effort into the album's promotion