Original sentence: Also located in Blackrock are several secondary schools, such as Rosemount College (run by Opus Dei), Sion Hill Dominican College, St.Andrew's College, Blackrock College and Newpark School, as well as Newpark Music School, incorporating the acclaimed Newpark Jazz School, a private clinic, Blackrock Clinic (in the Williamstown locality), and.Augustine's and All Saints.Blackrock ('An Charraig Dhubh' in Irish) is a suburban town and district south of the city of Dublin, in County Dublin, Ireland, and  north-west of Dún Laoghaire, and which has a range of industries, notably in the IT and service areas.Linden Convalescent Home, where de Valera died, is also in Blackrock.S, Guardian Angels N.S, Willow Park (at Blackrock College), St.The Blackrock baths have fallen into dilapidation since their closure  and have been sold to developers Treasury Holdings, who have raised the possibility of building high-rise apartments on the site.The primary schools in the area include Carysfort N
Edited sentence: Also located in Blackrock are: a college of education; several secondary schools, such as Rosemount College (run by Opus Dei), Sion Hill Dominican College, St.Andrew's College, Newpark School and Blackrock College; a private clinic, Blackrock Clinic, (in Williamstown); and Newpark Music School, incorporating the acclaimed Newpark Jazz School.Blackrock ('An Charraig Dhubh' in Irish) is a suburb of the city of Dublin, in County Dublin, Ireland, situated  north-west of Dún Laoghaire, and which  has service and computer-programming industries.Linden Convalescent Home where de Valera died is also in Blackrock.S, Guardain Angels N.S, Willow Park(blackrock college),S.T Agustians and All Saints.The Blackrock baths have fallen into dilapidation since their closure.The local council sold the public amenity that was the Blackrock Baths to the developers Treasury Holdings, who want to build high-rise apartments on the site.The primary schools in the area include Carysfot N