Original sentence: (See 27 Club).Many musicians and other celebrities have died young, particularly at the age of 27.On the February 12, 2007 broadcast of the Late Show with David Letterman, Drew Barrymore mentioned her Saturn return as the reason for some of the changes in her life.The Saturn Return is an astrological phenomenon that occurs in a person's life at approximately 27–30 years of age and again around the age of 58–60, with the third and usually final occurrence around 86-88
Edited sentence: On the February 12, 2007 broadcast of the Late Show with David Letterman, Drew Barrymore admitted that she referred to the Saturn return in 2006 to reevaluate her life.The Saturn Return is an astrological phenomenon that occurs in a person's life at approximately 28–30 years of age and again around the age of 58–60, with the third and usually final occurrence around 86-88