Original sentence: Although she decided to retire after the release of her 2002 album, Can You Hear, she still holds concerts and has appeared in concerts of other fellow artists, such as Joey Yung, George Lam, and Liza Wang.In 2011, Sally Yeh received the Golden Needle Award at the 33rd RTHK Top Ten Chinese Gold Song Music Award Ceremony, a lifetime achievement award for artists who have contributed enormously to the Hong Kong music industry.She is the only Hong Kong singer to have received the Most Popular Hong Kong Female Singer award four times (1990, 1991, 1992, 1993) at the Jade Solid Gold Top Ten Awards, one of Hong Kong's most prestigious awards.Yeh's mastery of written Chinese is rudimentary at best, and she often uses romanizations to help her read Cantonese and Mandarin lyrics
Edited sentence: Although she decided to retire after the release of her 2002 album, "Can You Hear," she still holds concerts and participate in concerts of other fellow artists, such as Joey Yung, George Lam, Liza Wang, and much more.Golden Needle Award is a highly respected lifetime achievement award for the most accomplished singers, performers, composers and lyricists who have contributed enormously to the Hong Kong music industry.Oddly enough, Yeh's mastery of written Chinese is rudimentary at best, and she often used romanized phonetics to help her read Cantonese and Mandarin lyrics.Sally Yeh received the Golden Needle Award at the 33rd RTHK Top Ten Chinese Gold Song Music Award Ceremony, which was held on January 7th, 2011 at Hong Kong Science Park (HKSP).She is the only Hong Kong singer to have received the Most Popular Hong Kong Female Singer award four times (1990, 1991, 1992, 1993) at the Jade Solid Gold Top Ten Awards.This awards is one of the most coveted awards in the Hong Kong Music Award Ceremonies