Original sentence: " San Francisco has a Mediterranean climate, similar to much of coastal California, characterized by mild wet winters and warm dry summers.However, surrounded on three sides by water, San Francisco has a climate strongly influenced by the cool currents of the Pacific Ocean which tends to moderate temperature swings and produce a remarkably consistent climate with little seasonal temperature variation
Edited sentence: " San Francisco benefits from California’s Mediterranean climate, characterized by mild wet winters and warm dry summers.However, surrounded on three sides by water, San Francisco has a climate strongly influenced by the cool currents of the Pacific Ocean which tends to moderate temperature swings and produce a remarkably mild climate with little seasonal temperature variation