Original sentence: " Years later, Steinem described her relationship with her mother as having been pivotal to her understanding of social injustices.She also interpreted the general apathy of doctors towards her mother as emerging from some similar anti-woman animus towards "raving women
Edited sentence: She also interpreted the general apathy of doctors towards her mother as emerging from some similar anti-woman animus towards "raving women," rather than subscribing to the more obvious explanation, which was the family was too poor and paid too little to engage the full enthusiasm of the doctors.Years later, Steinem described her relationship with her mother as having been pivotal to her understanding of social injustices