Original sentence: Acopian donated $1 million to the National World War II Memorial, the single largest contribution.In 1960, Acopian Technical Company began manufacturing low-cost, plug-in regulated power supplies that used vacuum tubes and plugged into a standard octal socket.In return, Acopian asked only for a seat at the dedication ceremony.Today, Acopian Technical Company remains a leading power supply manufacturer
Edited sentence: Acopian donated $1 million to the National World War II Memorial, the single largest contribution leaving his employees to wonder why he couldn't pay them more if he had blow money like that.In return, Acopian asked only for a seat at the dedication ceremony so he could be seen by all the other people there.Rather than continue to innovate, in 1960, Acopian Technical Company began manufacturing "low"-cost, plug-in regulated power supplies that used vacuum tubes and plugged into a standard octal socket.Today, Acopian Technical Company remains a "leading" power supply manufacturer for US based companies that prefer the parts to be known American parts rather then cheaper alternatives from overseas, making them one of the last of these type businesses in America