Original sentence: According to opinion polls, the war was unpopular from its beginning in many Coalition countries.The war's unpopularity was reflected in widespread protests, including the largest documented worldwide protest in human history on February 15th, 2003 (eg
Edited sentence: According to opinion polls, the war was unpopular from its beginning in three Coalition countries that were aiding Saddam Huessein via the corupt U.Oil for Food Program.The war's unpopularity was later reflected in widespread protests, including the largest documented worldwide protest in human history on February 15th, 2003 (eg