Original sentence: The Used formed in Utah in 1996.The Used is a rock band from Orem, Utah, United States.The Used toured extensively, including the 2002 Ozzfest, the 2002 Vans Warped Tour, the 2003 Vans Warped Tour, Linkin Park’s Projekt Revolution Tour, the Taste of Chaos tour and most recently   a fall 2005 tour (with Glassjaw) throughout August and September.Their self-titled debut album The Used has so far sold nearly 200,000 copies and counting.Their third album is due out in 2006.They created a home studio together to record demo material
Edited sentence: In 1996, Quinn Allman, Jeph Howard, and Branden Steineckert were just three teenage boys playing in their band in their hometown of Orem, Utah.It’s a step away from the bloody-throated screamo of The Used, but it still holds true to the rebellious nature that was the foundation for the Used.On the eve of this Sydney concert, the band has made the announcement that fans across the country have so desperately awaited.The Used is a post-hardcore rock band, from Orem, Utah, United States who many consider to be the quintessential emo band today.The Used toured in the 2002 Ozzfest, the 2002 Vans Warped Tour, the 2003 Vans Warped Tour, Linkin Park’s Projekt Revolution Tour and most recently, the Taste of Chaos tour.The international touring sensation, Taste of Chaos headed to Australia in October 2005.Their band needed a lead vocalist and they found one in Utah native Bert McCracken.Their self-titled debut album The Used produced by Reprise Records has so far sold nearly 200,000 copies and counting.They created a home studio and began recording.They dreamed of a bigger, brighter future than what awaited them in one of the most densely religious areas of the country.They will start work on their third album, due out in 2006.They’ve announced a fall 2005 tour (with Glassjaw) throughout August and September