Original sentence: Rodgers was appointed Reading manager on June 4, 2009,  after a compensation package had been agreed of an initial £500,000, which could rise to £1,000,000
Edited sentence: A number of informed commentators have applauded Rodgers for his coaching skills, but doubt the quality of his management expertise and decision making as Rodgers was appointed Reading manager on June 4, 2009,  after a compensation package had been agreed of an initial £500,000, which could rise to £1,000,000