Original sentence: Pine Grove is a conservative neighborhood.Pine Grove is a hamlet in Norfolk County, Ontario, Canada, near Delhi.Pine Grove is famous for its vicious guard dogs which deter residents from engaging themselves in daily walking exercise (which has resulted in stagnancy and obesity in most of the population), and is known as the unofficial "Dog Capital" of Norfolk
Edited sentence: , John's house instead of Jane's house or John and Jane's house).All ownership of property in this neighborhood is on patriarchal lines (meaning when people talk about marital property, they refer to it being the sole property of the husband - i.Almost everyone who lives in this neighborhood born between 1942 and 1975 has been conditioned to believe in the male chauvinist viewpoint of this Stepford-like community and they do not know any difference between the customs and norms of Pine Grove, Norfolk County, and the rest of the world (which is slowly becoming matriarchal - dominant wife/subservient husband as opposed to dominant husband/subservient wife which forms the majority of all marriages and/or domestic partnerships in Pine Grove and Norfolk County).Men in this neighborhood usually work in blue collar jobs (either in or outside of Norfolk County).Pine Grove is a conservative neighborhood where the majority of men make more money than their female partners.Pine Grove is a hamlet in Norfolk County, Ontario, near Delhi.Pine Grove is also famous for its vicious guard dogs which deter residents from engaging themselves in daily walking exercise (which has resulted in stagnancy and obesity in most of the population), and is known as the unofficial "Dog Capital" of Norfolk.This status is unlikely to change under provincial law because none of the dogs kept in the hamlet are of the pit bull family