Original sentence: Flynn wrote that "every initiative" recommended by Father Martin, such as "Lavender graduation" or "L.Flynn, editor-in-chief of Catholic News Agency, contended that Martin presented in his address a "vision of the human person at odds with Catholic teaching".Martin addressed the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities (ACCU), with over three-fourths of the Associations' school presidents in attendance, urging them to take steps to promote inclusion
Edited sentence: Flynn contended that "every initiative" recommended by Father Martin, such as "Lavender graduation" or "L.Flynn, editor-in-chief of Catholic News Agency, pointed out that Martin presented in his address a "vision of the human person at odds with Catholic teaching".Martin addressed the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities (ACCU), with over three-fourths of the Associations school presidents in attendance, urging them to take steps to promote inclusion