Original sentence: The song involves Lavigne proclaiming a crush on a man currently with his girlfriend and features a stronger pop influence and more pop-ish lyrics than her earlier songs
Edited sentence: Some people find the sentiment of the song utterly deplorable and would consider Lavigne to be promoting a truly hateful example of bullying.The song involves Lavigne trying to tempt a man currently with his girlfriend into dating her instead and features a stronger pop influence and more pop-ish lyrics than her earlier songs