Original sentence: Shakur and the crew at Death Row generally depended on members of the Bloods gang for security, while Biggie and the Bad Boy Crew depended on Crips members for security when visiting California.The two drove together in Suge's BMW sedan, part of a larger convoy of cars including some of Shakur's friends, the Outlawz, and bodyguards.Tupac was not wearing a bulletproof vest on that fateful night, even though he was accustomed to do so since his last shooting
Edited sentence: For some reason, Tupac was not wearing a bulletproof vest on that fateful night, even though he was accustomed to do so since his last shooting.It is appropriate to note that Shakur and the crew at Death Row generally depended on members of the Bloods gang for security, while Biggie and the Bad Boy Crew depended on Crips members for security when visiting California.The two drove together in Suge's BWM sedan, part of a larger entourage of cars including some of Shakur's friends, the Outlawz, and bodyguards