Original sentence: Critics complain that it is baby talk or a simplified form of English.It works to avoid obscurity, inflated vocabulary and convoluted sentences.Plain English focuses on being a flexible and efficient writing style that readers can understand in one reading.Proponents say that Plain English lets readers concentrate on the message instead of complicated language
Edited sentence: It avoids obscurity, inflated vocabulary and convoluted sentences.It is not baby talk, nor is it a simplified form of English.Plain English is a flexible and efficient writing style that readers can understand in one reading.Plain English lets readers concentrate on the message instead of complicated language