Original sentence: The Crystal Method is a Grammy nominated electronic music duo that formed in Los Angeles, California in the early 1990s.The duo is known for their live sets and for having many of their songs feature in films, television shows, and video games.With the platinum-status album Vegas, The Crystal Method has become one of the best-selling electronica bands in the United States
Edited sentence: Pioneers of the electronic dance genre which achieved mainstream popularity in the 1990s, the duo are known for their live sets and for having many of their songs feature in films, television shows, and video games.The Crystal Method is a Grammy nominated electronic music duo which formed in Los Angeles, California in the early 1990s.With the platinum-status album Vegas, The Crystal Method has become one of the best selling and well known electronica bands in the United States