Original sentence: Wayne Messmer, the Chicago Cubs public address announcer, occasionally presents his rendition at Wrigley Field, wherein he ends on two rising notes, rather than dropping down the scale as the song is normally done
Edited sentence: And unlike many of the artists who turn it into a "performance", with pauses at their own discretion that make it impossible for the audience to sing along, Messmer does it "straight".Wayne Messmer, the Chicago Cubs public address announcer, occasionally presents his stirring rendition at Wrigley Field, wherein he ends on two rising notes, rather than dropping down the scale as the song is normally done