Original sentence: Buckley had organised elbatorate diversions, allowing the escapes to cut throught to freedom.Day appointed Buckley as his adjudant and in October 1940 appointed him as head of the escape committee.Unfortuneatly both men were recaptured within a few days
Edited sentence: Buckley had organised elaborate diversions, allowing the escapes to cut through to freedom.Day appointed Buckley as his adjutant and in October 1940 appointed him as head of the escape committee.Unfortunately both men were recaptured within a few days