Original sentence: A former member of the Painters and Dockers, Kinniburgh was considered Melbourne's "Mr Big" and one of the most influential gangsters in Australia.Graham 'The Munster' Allen Kinniburgh (1943 - 13 December 2003) was an Australian criminal from Kew, a suburb of Melbourne, Australia.In the drama series Underbelly he was portrayed by actor Gerard Kennedy.Kinniburgh garnered notoriety for his role in the Melbourne gangland killings.Kinniburgh met with members of the Moran family while working on Melbourne's waterside.Kinniburgh was a long-term associate of Alphonse Gangitano.On 13 December 2003, Kinniburgh himself was murdered outside his home in Kew on Belmont Avenue
Edited sentence: A former member of the Painters and Dockers, Kinniburgh was considered Melbourne's 'Mr Big'; and one of the most influential gangsters in Australia.Graham 'The Munster' Allen Kinniburgh (1943 - 13 December, 2003) was an Australian criminal from Kew, a suburb of Melbourne, Victoria, Australia.He met members of the Moran family whilst working on Melbourne's waterside.He was respected by all major Underworld figures.In the drama series Underbelly Graham Kinniburgh is played by actor Gerard Kennedy.It is believed that Kinniburgh had either been involved in, received proceeds from or knew about every major heist in Victoria for the last few decades.Kinniburgh led a discreet lifestyle and was a highly successful career criminal.Kinniburgh was a long-term associate of career criminal, Alphonse Gangitano.Kinniburgh was notable for his involvement in the Melbourne gangland killings.On 13 December 2003, he was murdered outside his home in Belmont Avenue, Kew