Original sentence: All the recent renovations have taken place east of Maguire Avenue, and west of there remains untouched woodlands.Bloomingdale Park is a large park on the South Shore of Staten Island.Bloomingdale Park was also the name of a public park in lower Manhattan in the 1800s.In the early 2000s, the park was renovated and upgraded, with the addition of sports fields, walking and biking paths, and a playground and rest center at the corner of Ramona and Lenevar Avenues, which serves residents in the western portion of Woodrow.It was located on the south side of Turtle Bay, at 31st Street and First Avenue, on land now occupied by the New York University Medical Center (close to ).On the corner of Maguire Avenue and Drumgoole Road West, there is also a small pond habitat which is now accessible by footpath
Edited sentence: All the recent renovations took place to east of Maguire Avenue, and west of there remains untouched woodlands.Beginning in February 2003, 15 acres of park were renovated and upgraded, with the addition of sports fields, walking and biking paths, and a playground and rest center at the corner of Ramona and Lenevar Avenues, which serves residents in the western portion of Woodrow.Bloomingdale Park is a 138-acre park on the South Shore of Staten Island.Bloomingdale Park was also the name of a public park in Manhattan in the 1800s.It was located in the Kips Bay neighborhood, at 31st Street and First Avenue, on land now occupied by the New York University Medical Center (close to ).On the corner of Maguire Avenue and Drumgoole Road West, there is also a small pond habitat which was made accessible by a footpath