Original sentence: After his rookie season, expectations were high for Schenn heading into the 2009–10 NHL season.His contract included bonus clauses that could raise the value as high as $1.25 million per season After training camp, Schenn was chosen for the team roster for the start of the 2008–09 season
Edited sentence: After his strong rookie season, expectations were high for Schenn heading into the 2009–10 NHL season.His contract included bonus clauses that could raise the value as high as $1.25 million per season After an impressive training camp, Schenn was chosen for the team roster for the start of the 2008–09 season