Original sentence: At first, he took his position as team leader very lightly, but has since proven he is a capable leader, albeit one who often clashes with the chain of command.He formed an uneasy but respect-based relationship with Sky, taking tactical suggestions from him in the field and helping him deal with his issues regarding Mirloc & his father.He wields twin laser blasts and is a sharpshooter.His uniform sports the number 1, his assigned S.Jack Landors (played by Brandon Jay McLaren) is the S.Jack has no knowledge of when he was born
Edited sentence: At first, he took his position as team leader very lightly, but has since proven he is a very capable leader, albeit one who often clashes with the chain of command.He formed a slightly uneasy but respect-based relationship with Sky, taking tactical suggestions from him in the field and helping him deal with his issues regarding Mirloc & his father.He wields twin laser blasts and is an impressive sharpshooter.His assigned S.His uniform sports the number 1.Jack Landors (played by Brandon Jay McLaren) is the main character and the S.Jack doesn't know when he was born.number is 1