Original sentence: Shapps was born in Watford in Hertfordshire and educated at Watford Grammar School for Boys where he obtained 5 'O'Levels (including an 'A' in Computers), followed by Cassio College where he completed a Business Studies course and Manchester Metropolitan University (then Manchester Polytechnic), where he received a Higher National Diploma
Edited sentence: Shapps was born in Watford in Hertfordshire and educated at Watford Grammar School for Boys where he obtained 5 'O'Levels (including an 'A' in CDT), followed by Cassio College where he completed a Business Studies course and Manchester Metropolitan University (then Manchester Polytechnic), where he received a Higher National Diploma