Original sentence: Jimmy Neutron: Boy Genius is a 2001 Academy Award nominated computer-animated film, based on a few five-minute animated shorts shown on Nickelodeon in 2000-2001, (one about Jimmy wanting a cookie, Cindy and Jimmy's dogs competing, Carl messing with the cloning machine)
Edited sentence: Jimmy Neutron: Boy Genius is a 2001 Academy Award nominated computer-animated film, based on a few five-minute animated shorts shown on Nickelodeon in 2000-2001, which showed much promise (one about Jimmy wanting a cookie, Cindy and Jimmy's dogs competing, Carl messing with the cloning machine)