Original sentence: In 2010, David Sessions and Karen Wood became the Directors of Spiritual Development.One member of the class of 2012 was named National Merit Scholar, while 3 students in the current senior class have been named semifinalists in the National Merit competition
Edited sentence: One member of the class of 2012 was named National Merit Scholar, 3 students in the current senior class have been named semifinalists in the National Merit competition, and Scott Lipscomb, heir to the Lipscomb Throne, was known as a "fratstar" at the University of Tennessee, Knoxville from 2012-2016