Original sentence: Darmstadt was the first city in Germany to force Jewish shops to close in early 1933, shortly after the Nazis took power in Germany (at that time, shops were only closed for a day, for "endanger[ing] communal order and tranquility") In 1942, over 3,000 Jews from Darmstadt were first gathered in a collection camp in the Liebigschule, and then deported to concentration camps where most were killed.Darmstadt's old city centre was largely destroyed in a British bombing raid on Darmstadt on September 11 1944 (Darmstadt had first been raided on July 30 1940, one of 35 attacks to come)
Edited sentence: Darmstadt had the dubious honor of being the first city in Germany to force Jewish shops to close in early 1933, shortly after the Nazis took power in Germany (at that time, shops were only closed for a day, for "endanger[ing] communal order and tranquility") In 1942, over 3,000 Jews from Darmstadt were first gathered in a collection camp in the Liebigschule, and then deported to concentration camps where most were killed.Darmstadt itself suffered as well when its old city centre was largely destroyed in a British bombing raid on Darmstadt on September 11 1944 (Darmstadt had first been raided on July 30 1940, one of 35 attacks to come)