Original sentence: "  However, if the criticism very harsh, perhaps a plausible but unpopular theory cannot get a fair hearing, or scientists may decide that certain ideas are too controversial to investigate, resulting in a potential loss of academic freedom.Criticism, even pointed criticism, is a normal part of the scientific process.Describing this effect, New York Times reporter Benedict Carey wrote, "To many of Dr.Dreger's conclusions were criticized in many of the twenty-three peer commentaries published in the same issue of Archives of Sexual Behavior.Exactly this issue has come up in the case of Dr.Examples include the controversy over Lawrence Summers remarks that there might be intrinsic differences between men and women in terms of talent for science and math, which got considerable public backlash.His detractors believe the criticism was appropriate.His supporters believe the criticism was stronger than necessary, and potentially results in a loss of academic freedom.Karl Popper, speaking of the scientific process in general, wrote "Those among us who are unwilling to expose their ideas to the hazard of refutation do not take part in the scientific game.Similarly, William Shockley expressed beliefs that reproductive rates among lower-IQ blacks was cause for concern, and was strongly criticized for this stand.The origins of transsexuality are still not known and the concept of Autogynephilia is still controversial
Edited sentence: "  Bailey called the two years following the publication of his book "the hardest of my life.Dreger's conclusions were criticized in some of the twenty-three peer commentaries published in the same issue of Archives of Sexual Behavior.Lawrence Summers, while president of Harvard, commented that there might be intrinsic differences between men and women in terms of talent for science and math, and got considerable public backlash.New York Times reporter Benedict Carey wrote, "To many of Dr.The origins of transsexuality are still not known and the concept of Autogynephilia is still controversial".There have been other similar controversies over academic figures expressing unpopular views.William Shockley expressed beliefs that reproductive rates among lower-IQ blacks was cause for concern, and was strongly criticized for this stand