Original sentence: History provides evidence that civilization in Kohistan matured quite early as compared to adjacent areas were people were worshipping fire, plants and other objects.It was also the only passage between China and South East Asia the area remained under constant attacks by Tibetans, Sikhs, Hindus.Kohistan is a sparsely populated district of the North-West Frontier Province of Pakistan and is also a region that stretches from the border with Azad Kashmir in the east to Afghanistan's Nuristan province in the west.The word Kohistan literally means land of mountains (koh’i mountain, ‘stan’ land)’ and is one of the most isolated and the most deprived district not only in Hazara Division but in the entire North West Frontier Province (NWFP)
Edited sentence: History provides evidence that civilization in Kohistan matured quite early to Hinduism  compared to adjacent areas were people were worshipping fire, plants and other objects.It was also the only passage between China and India and so the area remained under constant attacks by Tibetans, Sikhs, Hindus.Kohistan is a sparsely populated district of the North-West Frontier Province of Pakistan and is also a region that stretches from the border with Azad Kashmir or POK in the east to Afghanistan's Nuristan province in the west.The word Kohistan literally means land of mountains (koh’i mountain, ‘stan’ land from the sanskrit word sthana)’ and is one of the most isolated and the most deprived district not only in Hazara Division but in the entire North West Frontier Province (NWFP)