Original sentence: Shortly afterwards, drummer Philip "Toby" Tomanov and bassist Willie Trotter joined to complete the band.Sterling, who in the arts and music scene was credited as Linder, was an artist who designed the cover of Magazine's debut album Real Life
Edited sentence: Shortly after the formation, ex-Nosebleeds drummer Philip "Toby" Tomanov and bassist Willie Trotter joined to complete the band.Sterling, who in the arts and music scene was credited as Linder, was an artist who designed the cover of Buzzcocks' single Orgasm Addict and Magazine's debut album Real Life; and Kadmon was formerly in Manicured Noise