Original sentence: Blame for inept disaster response was partially attributed to state and local authorities, but public outcry in the disaster's early hours was largely directed at the Bush administration, mainly FEMA and the Department of Homeland Security alleging weak crisis management and coordination.Reasons the levee was funded less than was requested by the Army Corps of Engineers preceed the Bush administration
Edited sentence: Although blame was partially attributed to state and local authorities, public outcry in the disaster's early hours was largely directed at the Bush administration, mainly FEMA and the Department of Homeland Security alleging weak crisis management and coordination.The Bush Administration failed to address this concern, and consistently funded less than was requested by the Army Corps of Engineers to maintain the levees, although this did not affect the part of the levees that failed