Original sentence: After getting away Coraline leaves him trapped in the empty cellar.Bobo – A retired circus performer living in the flat above Coraline's; he is commonly referred to as the Crazy Old Man Upstairs.In the other world they are young, pretty, and perform unendingly in front of dogs, who, in the other world, behave like humans.Jones – Coraline's father works at his house on the computer which he spends most of his time on his job.Jones – Coraline's mother works as a counterpart to her father in working
Edited sentence: After getting away Coraline leaves him trapped in the empty garden.Bobinsky – A retired circus performer living in the flat above Coraline's; he is commonly referred to as the Crazy Old Man Upstairs.In the other world they are young, pretty, and perform unendingly in front of the scottie dogs, who, in the other world, behave like humans.Jones – Coraline's father works at his house on the computer which he spends most of his time on his job creating a gardening catalogue.Jones – Coraline's mother works as a counterpart to her father in creating a gardening catalogue