Original sentence: "Eddys Friends" and Night Patrol are social justice programs, whereby students are encouraged to give back to the community through such things as feeding the homeless.Activities such as choir, band, theatre sports, "Eddys Friends", Debating and Night Patrol are avaliable, along with others.Christian Brothers Lewisham offers students multiple extra curriculur activities, both inside and outside of school time.The school is also a part of the Catholic Schools Debating Association (CSDA), providing students with the opportunity to debate other schools around Sydney.Through choir, band and theatre sports, students may participate in state and national competitions against other schools
Edited sentence: "Eddys Friends" and Night Patrol are social justice programs whereby students have the chance to give back to the community through feeding the homeless and bringing joy to the lives of those who need it.Christian Brothers Lewisham offers students multiple choices to participate in extra curriculum activities both inside and outside of school time.Currently, activities such as choir, band, theatre sports, "Eddys Friends", Debating and Night Patrol are avaliable, along with many others.The school is also a part of the CSDA (Catholic Schools Debating Association) and gives students the chance to compete with other schools around Sydney in debating competitions.Through choir, band and theatre sports, students gain confidence in performing and are able to participate in state and national competitions with other schools