Original sentence: Another physical incarnation of the road to Xibalba as viewed by the K'iche' peoples is the dark rift which is visible in the Milky Way.The Orion Nebula is the physical location of Xibalba in some Mayan folk stories.To some of the K'iche' descendants of the Maya people living in the vicinity, the area is still associated with death
Edited sentence: According to  some of the K'iche' Maya presently living in the vicinity, the area is still associated with death.Another physical incarnation of the road to Xibalba as viewed by the K'iche' is the dark rift which is visible in the Milky Way.In some Mayan folk stories, the Orion Nebula is the physical location of Xibalba