Original sentence: He was awarded the designation of People's Artist of the USSR in 1940.He went on to study drama, piano and singing (with the famous soprano Elena Mouravyova) at the Mykola Lysenko Institute of Music and Drama in Kiev
Edited sentence: He was awarded the prestigious designation of People's Artist of the USSR in 1940.He went on to study drama, piano and singing (with the famous soprano Elena Mouravyova) at the prestigious Mykola Lysenko Institute of Music and Drama in Kiev