Original sentence: In 1960, under the Zero label, Lynn recorded "I'm A Honky Tonk Girl".The Lynns toured the country to promote the release to country stations, while Grashey and Del Roy took the music to KFOX in Long Beach, California
Edited sentence: " The Lynns toured the country to promote the release to country stations, while Grashey and Del Roy took the music to KFOX in Long Beach, California.In 1960, under the Zero label, Lynn recorded "I'm A Honky Tonk Girl.With Zero's initial support, Lynn went on to become one of country music’s greats