Original sentence: Ronald Dowl Moore (born 5 July 1964 in Chowchilla, California) is an American screenwriter and television producer best known for his work on Star Trek and the re-imagined Battlestar Galactica miniseries and television series, for which he served as developer, writer and executive producer, and received a Peabody Award for creative excellence in 2005
Edited sentence: Ronald Dowl Moore (born 5 July 1964) is an American screenwriter and television producer best known for his work on Star Trek and the re-imagined Battlestar Galactica miniseries and television series, for which he served as developer, writer and executive producer, and received a Peabody Award for creative excellence in 2005