Original sentence: Boarding School Profile: Phillips Academy Andover.Exeter was established only three years after Andover in 1781 by Samuel Phillips' brother, John.Phillips Academy faces stiff competition from its sister school and traditional rival, Phillips Exeter Academy found in Exeter, New Hampshire.Phillips Academy, commonly known as Andover, is arguably one of the best private high schools in the United States, being that it is the oldest and considered by some to be the most prestigious.The school's endowment as of April 30, 2005 is approximately $620 million, making the per-student endowment almost $600,000.While this traditional relationship has declined, Phillips Academy now prepares its graduates for a wide range of universities, including Harvard University (which now tops the list with 74 students matriculating in the last five years), Brown University, Columbia University, Cornell University, Johns Hopkins University, New York University, Northwestern University, the University of Pennsylvania, Georgetown University, MIT, and Princeton University
Edited sentence: Exeter was established only three years after Andover in 1781 by Samuel Phillips' brother.For a detailed profile on PA today, also see: Boarding School Profile: Phillips Academy Andover.Phillips Academy faces stiff competition from its sister school and rival, Phillips Exeter Academy found in Exeter, New Hampshire.Phillips Academy, commonly known as Andover, is arguably the best private high schoolin the United States, being that it is the oldest and said to be the most prestigious.The school's endowment as of April 30, 2005 is approximately $620 million, making the per-student endowment at almost $600,000.While this traditional relationship has declined, Phillips Academy now prepares its graduates for a wide range of universities, including Harvard University, which now tops the list with 74 students matriculating in the last five years, Brown University, Columbia University, Cornell University, Johns Hopkins University, New York University, Northwestern University, the University of Pennsylvania, Georgetown University, MIT, and Princeton University