Original sentence: He was a benefactor of Corpus Christi College, Cambridge, and founder of the Manchester Grammar School, (originally the Manchester Free Grammar School for Lancashire Boys) in 1515.Hugh Oldham was born around 1450 - most likely in the town of Oldham in Lancashire, England, although some accounts claim he was born in nearby Manchester
Edited sentence: He was a benefactor of Corpus Christi College, Cambridge, and founder of the Manchester Grammar School, (originally the Manchester Free Grammar School for Lancashire Boys) in 1515 based in the UK's third city.Hugh Oldham was born around 1450 - most likely in the town of Oldham in Lancashire, England, although some accounts claim he was born in nearby Manchester the UK's third city