Original sentence: After having made the Statue of Liberty in New York in 1886, the mayor of Bordeaux contacted him, but his new project was canceled after much hesitation.La Fontaine Bartholdi is a fountain made by Frédéric-Auguste Bartholdi in 1891 and located at the Place des Terreaux, in the 1st arrondissement of Lyon.On 20 April 1857, the Bordeaux city council decides to hold a competition to create a fountain of Place Quinconces.The fountain weighs 21 tons and is made of lead supported by a frame of iron and was presented as the Exposition Universelle of 1889
Edited sentence: After Bartholdi had made the Statue of Liberty in New York in 1886, the mayor of Bordeaux contacted him, but his new project was canceled after much hesitation.La Fontaine Bartholdi is a fountain sculpted by Frédéric-Auguste Bartholdi in 1891 and erected at the Place des Terreaux, in the 1st arrondissement of Lyon.On 20 April 1857, the Bordeaux city council decided to hold a competition to create a fountain for Place Quinconces.The fountain depicts France as a female seated on a chariot controlling the four great rivers of France, represented by wildly rearing and plunging horses, highly individualized but symmetrically arranged, with bridles and reins of water weeds.weighs 21 tons and is made of lead supported by a frame of iron and was presented as the Exposition Universelle of 1889