Original sentence: In 2005, Sofitel continued its expansion with Sofitel Asia Pacific.In 2007, Sofitel created a strategy to compete on the international luxury hotel market with its French Touch and the slogan "Life is magnifique".In 2009, the new brands Sofitel Legends and SO by Sofitel were introduced.In the following year Sofitel became its own unit in the Accor group with 161 Hotels worldwide
Edited sentence: In 2005 Sofitel continued its remarkable expansion with Sofitel Asia Pacific.In 2007 Sofitel creates a strategy to compete on the international luxury hotel market with its French Touch and the slogan “Life is magnifique”.In 2009 the new brands Sofitel Legends and SO by Sofitel were introduced.In the following year Sofitel becomes its own unit in the Accor group with 161 Hotels worldwide