Original sentence: Most notably, the relations deteriorated after the 2008–09 Gaza War and the 2010 Gaza flotilla raid.Relations between Israel and Turkey took a downturn during the term of Recep Tayyip Erdoğan as Turkish Prime Minister.Though Erdoğan had paid an official visit to Israel in 2005 and initially had maintained business-as-usual relations, his strong anti-Israeli rhetoric is considered to have symbolized an intentional shift of Turkish interests in the Middle East and realignment from secular Israeli-oriented to Islamist pro-Arab stance of Turkish Republic
Edited sentence: Erdoğan had paid an official visit to Israel in 2005 and initially had maintained business-as-usual relations, and awarded with Courage to Care Award by Jews.However the relations deteriorated after the 2008–09 Gaza War and the 2010 Gaza flotilla raid.Relations between Israel and Turkey took a downturn with the Gaza War and the 2009 World Economic Forum in Davos in which Turkish Prime Minister Erdogan harshly criticized children murders committed by Israel and left the session