Original sentence: The 50 Cent Party, or 50 Cent Army (), is the colloquial term for Internet commentators (), who are hired by Chinese authorities in an attempt to manipulate public opinion to the benefit of the Chinese Communist Party
Edited sentence: The 50 Cent Party, or 50 Cent Army (), is the colloquial term for Internet commentators (), who are hired by Chinese authorities in an attempt to manipulate public opinion to the benefit of the Chinese Communist Party, to masquerade Chinese government as a sweet, kind-hearted father