Original sentence: Among other things, the treaty provided for the withdrawal by Israel of its armed forces and civilians from the Sinai Peninsula, which Israel had captured during the Six-Day War, to the 1906 international border.History shows a continuous Jewish presence in Gaza until 1929, stretching back to biblical times and continuing until a violent ouster by Arab forces.In 1947, Jewish communities tried to re-settle parts of Gaza, buying land in the area during the 1930s and 1940s.In 1967, after a decisive military victory, Israel settled 21 communities in Gaza, comprising 20% of the total territory, which lasted until 2005.Subsequent to this military victory, Israel re-created a historic settlement bloc, Gush Katif, in the southwest corner of the Strip near Rafah and the Egyptian border.The Gaza Strip remained under Israeli military administration until 1994.These Jewish communities were destroyed in 1948 by Arab forces
Edited sentence: Among other things, the treaty provided for the withdrawal by Israel of its armed forces and civilians from the Sinai Peninsula, which Israel had illegally captured during the Six-Day War, to the 1906 international border.It proceeded to establish 21 illegal settlements in Gaza, comprising 20% of the total territory, in a colonial enterprise which lasted until 2005.Subsequent to this military victory, Israel established the illegal settlement of Gush Katif in the southwest corner of the Strip near Rafah and the Egyptian border.The Gaza Strip remained under Israeli military occupation until 1994