Original sentence: Her love for Hare has become very agressive.It gets to the point where Toposte is no longer safe anywhere so he fakes an ilness to keep her away.It has been revealed that Ashio is a superhero, much like superman but with lazers and healing powers.On the island they meet a muscle man named QP who ends up becoming a rival to Robert and a bodygaurd for Weda.When they get off the island they return to Weda's family's mansion where everone makes plans to go to school
Edited sentence: Her love for Hare has become very aggressive.It gets to the point where Toposte is no longer safe anywhere so he fakes an illness to keep her away.It has been revealed that Ashio is a superhero, much like superman but with lasers and healing powers.On the island they meet a muscle man named QP who ends up becoming a rival to Robert and a bodyguard for Weda.When they get off the island they return to Weda's family's mansion where everyone makes plans to go to school