Original sentence: Mention of the show can still begin flame wars and heated discussions of its portrayal of furries and the fandom.One episode of the popular TV show CSI: Crime Scene Investigation ("Fur And Loathing") featured the murder of a "fursuiter" fetishist which has been accused of being ill-researched
Edited sentence: Mention of the show can still begin flame wars and heated discussions of it's portrayal of furries and the fandom.One episode of the popular TV show CSI: Crime Scene Investigation ("Fur And Loathing") featured the murder of a "fursuiter" fetishist.Which was not researched very well by the writers