Original sentence: Long ago, Pandora attempted a galactic takeover, but her evil plot was squashed by the Galactic Guardians after they were tipped off by Paloma, later, at the end of Season 2, Pandora kidnapped Degill, Spindly Tam Kanushu, and Paloma to help free their demon father from his prison, using Paloma's life force combined with the box's key, which was hidden in a ceramic duck Maximus had bought that Pandora stole from him, she was however, beaten by Betty, Juanita, Sparky, X5, Degill, Spindly Tam, and Paloma and sealed up in the box along with her father, never to hurt anyone ever again.She was Paloma's evil twin sister and is one of the twin daughters of Golgotha and the demon, Pandora looks exactly like Paloma, but with purple hair, yellow eyes, and lighter skin, she wears a green cloak and body armor
Edited sentence: Long ago, Pandora attempted a galactic takeover, but her evil plot was squashed by the Galactic Guardians after they were tipped off by Paloma.Pandora (Nahid Islam) was Paloma's evil twin sister and is one of the twin daughters of Golgotha and the demon, Pandora looks exactly like Paloma, but with purple hair, yellow eyes, and lighter skin, she wears a green cloak and body armor.She and had kidnapped Admiral DeGill, Spindly Tam Kanushu, and Paloma to this end, using Paloma's life force and the box's key, hidden in a ceramic duck that Maximus had recently acquired, to revive him.She is ultimately beaten by Betty, Juanita, Sparky, X5, Degill, Spindly Tam, and Paloma, and sealed up in the box along with her father, never to hurt anyone ever again.Since then, Pandora has sought to revive her father, imprisoned in a box under the guard of Spindly Tam Kanushu