Original sentence: "  It was this alliance, according to Jones which developed the Texas project, specifically to promote the use of newer, more expensive antipsychotics and antidepressants.He further claimed this alliance was "poised to consolidate the TMAP effort into a comprehensive national policy to treat mental illness with expensive, patented medications of questionable benefit and deadly side effects, and to force private insurers to pick up more of the tab.Jones wrote a lengthy report in which he stated that, behind the recommendations of the New Freedom Commission, was the "political/pharmaceutical alliance.The commission reported that "despite their prevalence, mental disorders often go undiagnosed," so it recommended comprehensive mental health screening for "consumers of all ages," including preschool children, because "each year, young children are expelled from preschools and childcare facilities for severely disruptive behaviors and emotional disorders.The person primarily responsible for bringing these issues to the public's attention is Allen Jones, a former Investigator in the Commonwealth of Pennsylvania Office of Inspector General (OIG), Bureau of Special Investigations
Edited sentence: He further claimed this unholy alliance was “poised to consolidate the TMAP effort into a comprehensive national policy to treat mental illness with expensive, patented medications of questionable benefit and deadly side effects, and to force private insurers to pick up more of the tab.It was this alliance, according to Jones which developed the Texas project, specifically to promote the use of newer, more expensive antipsychotics and antidepressants.Jones wrote a lengthy report in which he stated that, behind the recommendations of the New Freedom Commission, was the “political/pharmaceutical alliance”.The commission reported that “despite their prevalence, mental disorders often go undiagnosed,” so it recommended comprehensive mental health screening for “consumers of all ages,” including preschool children, because “each year, young children are expelled from preschools and childcare facilities for severely disruptive behaviors and emotional disorders.The person primarily responsible for bringing these issues to the public's attention is “whistleblower” Allen Jones, a former Investigator in the Commonwealth of Pennsylvania Office of Inspector General (OIG), Bureau of Special Investigations