Original sentence: A collection of articles from 27bslash6.David Thorne is also a published author, both writing and distributing the book titled The Internet is a Playground (2009) which is the complete collection of articles and emails from the 27bslash6 website including some articles too litigious to be on the website.David Thorne works in the design and branding industry as design director for a small Adelaide agency.David Thorne, who hails from the major city of Adelaide, Southern Australia, says that he has been a long time fan of other online satirist's like Ross Amorelli, Mil Millington and internet god George Ouzounian (Maddox).Much of David Thorne's humor is autobiographical and self-deprecating, and often concerns his immediate family and work associates along with more divergent offerings.The Internet is a Playground By David Thorne
Edited sentence: Much of Thorne's humor is autobiographical and self-deprecating, and often concerns his immediate family and work associates along with more divergent offerings.The Internet is a Playground A collection of articles from 27bslash6.Thorne is also a published author, both writing and distributing the book titled The Internet is a Playground (2009) which is the complete collection of articles and emails from the 27bslash6 website including some articles too litigious to be on the website.Thorne works in the design and branding industry as design director for a small Adelaide agency.Thorne, who hails from the major city of Adelaide, Southern Australia, says that he has been a long time fan of other online satirist's like Ross Amorelli, Mil Millington and internet god George Ouzounian (Maddox)