Original sentence: Cowles Miles Collier (1836-1908), the father of Barron Collier, was an excellent painter and a collection of his work is presented on the Wesleyan College, Macon, Georgia website.Samuel Carnes Collier, son of Juliet Gordon Carnes Collier and Barron Gift Collier, was the first racing fatality at Watkins Glen, in the 1950s
Edited sentence: Cowles Myles Collier (1836-1908), the father of Barron Collier, was an excellent painter and a collection of his work is presented on the Wesleyan College, Macon, Georgia website.Samuel Carnes Collier, son of Juliet Gordon Carnes Collier and Barron Gift Collier, was the first racing fatality at Watkins Glen--this happened about 1950