Original sentence: The club won a Bronze medal at the 2004 Australian University Games in Perth, and were the crowning glory of the university's team at the 2006 Eastern University Games, held in Coffs Harbour
Edited sentence: The club won a Bronze medal at the prestigious 2004 Australian University Games in Perth, and were the crowning glory of the university's team at the 2006 Eastern University Games, held in Coffs Harbour