Original sentence: Extreme Programming's initial buzz and controversial tenets, such as pair programming and continuous design, have attracted particular criticism.Other criticism may be found in McBreen [9] and Boehm and Turner [1].Some of the more visible attacks came from Stephens and Rosenburg [6] and "Mr
Edited sentence: Extreme Programming's initial buzz and controversial tenants, such as pair programming and continuous design, launched several critiques about the viability of the process.More balanced criticism may be found in McBreen [9] and Boehm and Turner [1].The most visible attacks came from Stephens and Rosenburg [6] and "Mr.These criticisms are notable in their visible disgust for agile development and/or Extreme Programming