Original sentence: Catwoman, aka Selina Kyle, retires her catsuit and is now a madame who runs an escort service.He dies of a stroke at the end of the book.He is a strong, savage brute who puts a hit on Gordon, beats Batman in their first encounter, goes to jail, kills the mayor (while still in jail), escapes, and is beaten by Batman.It is strongly hinted that she protects him from prosecution at the end of the book.Lana Lang, an old friend of Superman.Mutants, a gang of teens called thewho terrorizes Gotham.She is now a TV broadcaster and fierce defender of Batman's vigilantism.She starts off as Batman's fiercest opponent, but doubts herself after the Joker debacle (part 3, see plot above) and comes to terms with his involvement.The Mutant Leader, head of the "Mutants".They splinter off into many different groups: Neo-Nazis, The Nixons, The Jokers, and The Sons Of Batman
Edited sentence: Catwoman, aka Selina Kyle, retires her catsuit and is now a madame that runs an escort service.Lana Lang from Kent's home town, now a TV broadcaster and fierce defender of Batman's vigilantism.She starts off as Batman's fiercest opponent, but doubts herself after the Joker debacle (part 3) and finally comes to understand and come to terms with his necessary involvement.The Mutant Leader, head of a gang of teens called the "Mutants" who terrorizes Gotham.The ideal parent.The leader is a strong, savage brute who puts a hit on Gordon, beats Batman in their first encounter, goes to jail, kills the mayor (while still in jail), escapes, and is beaten by Batman.They splinter off into many different groups: Neo-Nazis, The Nixons, The Jokers, and the most noted of all, The Sons Of Batman