Original sentence: Approximately 100,000 military personnel and material and another 100,000 North Korean civilians were loaded onto a variety of merchant and military transport ships.The destruction of Task Force Faith was considered by Chinese to be their biggest success of the entire Korean War
Edited sentence: Approximately 100,000 military personnel and material and another 100,000 North Korean civilians were loaded onto a variety of merchant and military transport ships, not always voluntarily as the South Korean military and police often conscripted military-age males, and were moved to ports in UN-held territory on the southern tip of Korea.This was considered to be one of the largest defeats of American military in history