Original sentence: As a result of this, BUGS derecognised the Evangelical Christian Union and seized their funds, claiming that they would be repaid upon certain conditions (i.However, six other Christian societies (two of them evangelical) have no problem accepting the rules which are a compulsory requirement for all societies under the constitution of BUGS.In January 2006 a row errupted as the guild took issue with the Evangelical Christian Union's long established policy of not allowing non-Christians to attain membership, and requiring leadership to be chosen through democratic elections rather than being amounted by the previous leaders - about both of which there was broad consensus among the members of the Evangelical Christian Union that they were undesirable given the religious beliefs of the society.that the money go to UCCF for use on Birmingham students, rather than directly to the derecognised society as they ruled that they were a self appointed group of friends and thus shouldn't directly receive the money)
Edited sentence: As part of this, BUGS expelled the Christian Union and seized their funds, claiming that they would be repaid upon certain conditions.In January 2006 a row errupted as the guild took issue with the Christian Unions long established policy of not allowing non-Christians to attain voting membership, and requiring leadership to be chosen through entirely democratic elections - about both of which there was broad consensus among the members of the Christian Union that they were undesirable given the religious beliefs of the society