Original sentence: The Marching Band, known as the "Pride of Robinson", is one of the most successful marching bands in the state of North Carolina, winning over 30 awards in 2006
Edited sentence: Over the past several years they had solidified themselves as the best band in cabarrus county, winning over 30 awards in 2006.The Marching Band, known as the "Pride of Robinson", is one of the most successful marching bands in the state of North Carolina