Original sentence: In a land where the rules governing thought, magic, and even the flow of time are dependent on how far east or west one is, Taveth (who has the power to see present, past, and future all superimposed) is the housekeeper at Applekirk Manor in the Marches, just far east enough for small magic to work
Edited sentence: In a land where the rules governing thought, magic, and even the flow of time are dependent on how far east or west you are, Taveth (who has the power to see present, past, and future all superimposed) is the housekeeper at Applekirk Manor in the Marches, just far east enough for small magic to work