Original sentence: Most biographers, however, state that Graham has always been careful to receive reasonable compensation far below what other television evangelists would later receive.Some people have said that Graham has received excessive financial compensation from his ministry.Though Graham claims to be a Southern Baptist, his children were all baptized as infants, a major violation of Southern Baptist doctrine
Edited sentence: Most biographers state that Graham has always been careful to receive reasonable compensation far below what other television evangelists would later receive.Though Graham is a Southern Baptist, his children were all baptized as infants, a major violation of Southern Baptist doctrine