Original sentence: Barton has been widely described as being a pseudohistorian, and his work has been widely criticised.David Barton (born 1954) is an author, and political activist.He is the author of several books criticizing the current interpretation of separation of church and state in the United States, and is a figure in the Christian right
Edited sentence: Barton is often described in unflattering terms by the proponents of the ideas he attacks.David Barton (born 1954) is an author, historian and political activist.He is a figure in the Christian right.He is the author of several books that argue that the Founding Fathers generally were deeply religious men and that the United States was inspired by Christian ideals.His books further argue that radical political activism over the last century has resulted in drastic changes in the laws and culture of the United States.His most vigorous opponents call him a pseudohistorian, and his work has been widely criticised