Original sentence: Furthermore, some consider certain of his wartime actions (particularly during the 1982 Lebanon War, see below) to have been war crimes.However, some critics feel that his actions have often been damaging the peace process, while others criticize the recent Gaza pullout (see below) as giving up too much security in exchange for peace.Many Israelis also view him as a war hero, who helped defend the country during some of its greatest struggles.Sharon is a highly controversial figure, both in and outside Israel.Supporters see him as working to establish peace without sacrificing Israel's security
Edited sentence: However, a significant number of Israelis, as well as much of the rest of the world, consider some of his actions to have been war crimes, and feel that his recent actions have been damaging the peace process.Many Israelis view him as a war hero, who helped defend the country in some of its greatest struggles, leading to his subsequent vote into office on this merit.Most infamous were his actions during the 1982 Lebanon War (see below).Sharon is a highly controversial figure in and outside Israel