Original sentence: Consisting of a Skylab-style structure, it was built on stilts above the existing design technology ("D") block.Notable Holcombians include David Harvey, an eminent geographer and social theorist, Len Hynds - now a senior policeman who helped set up and lead the National Hi-Tech Crime Unit and is currently assistant director of its replacement, the Serious Organised Crime Agency (SOCA), and author and screenwriter Stel Pavlou
Edited sentence: Consisting of a unsightly Skylab-style structure, it was built on stilts above the existing design technology ("D") block, with the "C" block being assigned to the Physiology department.Notable Holcombians include David Harvey, an eminent geographer and social theorist, Len Hynds - now a senior policeman who helped set up and lead the National Hi-Tech Crime Unit and is currently assistant director of its replacement, the Serious Organised Crime Agency (SOCA), and bestselling author and screenwriter Stel Pavlou