Original sentence: Autumn is depicted by Huangshan stone, and winter by Xuan stone.Every year, millions of visitors from all over the world come to Ge Yuan Garden to enjoy the four seasons (illustrated by vivid rock gardens).Ge Yuan Garden ()is  located in Yangzhou, a city renowned for traditional private gardens.Spring is demonstrated with a picture of bamboo and rock.Summer is represented by the steel-grey Taihu stone, a popular tourist attraction
Edited sentence: Every year, millions of visitors from all over the world come to Ge Yuan Garden to enjoy the four seasons demonstrated by vivid rockeries.Ge Yuan Garden (), located in Yangzhou, a city renowned for traditional private gardens.Spring is shown by the picture of ”bamboo and rock".Summer is represented by the steel grey Taihu stone, which makes the visitors linger on without any thought of leaving.The scene of autumn is depicted by Huangshan Stone.Xuan Stone represents the winter stone in the garden