Original sentence: Frank: This old version of  Ken is one of the most popular characters of the game.He was truly a child detatched from the outside world.Jaan: This character is based on  Ryu, form his clothes to his techniques.Lan: Based on  Guile and  Ryufor his tchniques, Lan is one of the most important characters in the game´s storyline.Onimalu: This robotic-oldman is the perfect combination of  Vega and Dhalsim is a descendant of the Iga ninja group, and had his face disfigured in a mission.Pho Huang: Losely based on Chun-Li and M.With moves of  Ken and  Barlog, he is an american street fighter that has become very popular because of his "Aura Punch" move
Edited sentence: Frank: This old version of Ken is one of the most popular characters of the game.He was truly a child detached from the outside world.Jaan: This character is based on Ryu, form his clothes to his techniques.Lan: Based on Guile and Ryufor his tchniques, Lan is one of the most important characters in the game´s storyline.Onimalu: This robotic-oldman is the perfect combination of Vega and Dhalsim is a descendant of the Iga ninja group, and had his face disfigured in a mission.Pho Huang: Loosely based on Chun-Li and M.With moves of Ken and Barlog, he is an American street fighter that has become very popular because of his "Aura Punch" move