Original sentence: The idea that there is systemic, or institutional, audism within society was originally proposed in Harlan Lane's Mask of Benevolence, as an extension of David T
Edited sentence: However, Jean-Marc Itard's medical practice, such as electrical shock and leech therapy, to "cure the deaf," cochlear implant surgery, the oralism approach to Deaf education, and the current mainstreaming trend suggest that there is systemic, or institutional, audism within society.This idea was originally proposed in Harlan Lane's Mask of Benevolence, as an extension of David T