Original sentence: Hence, the Marxist–Leninist society of Russia in the 1930s featured austere equality based upon asceticism, egalitarianism and self-sacrifice—yet the Bolshevik Party recognised human nature and semi-officially allowed some consumerism (limited, small-scale capitalism) to stimulate the economy of Russia.In the 1920s, the Bolshevik government's economic development realised the rapid industrialisation of Russia with pragmatic programs of social engineering that transplanted peasant populations to the cities, where they became industrial workers, who then became the workforce of the new factories and industries.Likewise, the farmer populations worked the system of collective farms to grow food to feed the industrial workers in the industrialised cities
Edited sentence: In the 1920s, the Bolshevik government's economic development realised the rapid industrialisation of the Russian Soviet Federative Socialist Republic with pragmatic programs of social engineering that transplanted the peasant populations of Russia to the cities, where the peasants were educated and trained as industrial workers; as such, they became the technocratic workforce of the new factories and industries.In the 1930s, the Marxist–Leninist society of Russia featured austere social equality, based upon asceticism, egalitarianism, and self-sacrifice—yet the Bolshevik Party recognised human nature, and semi-officially allowed some limited, small-scale consumer capitalism that stimulated the nascent socialist economy of the Soviet Union.The farmer populations of Russia worked the system of collective farms to grow food to feed the industrial workers in the cities