Original sentence: He was influenced by the writings of many intellectuals such as, Hari Narayan Apte, Gopal Ganesh Agarkar, John Stuart Mill, Herbert Spencer, and Max Müller
Edited sentence: He was influenced by the writings of many intellectuals such as Hari Narayan Apte, Gopal Ganesh Agarkar, John Stuart Mill, Herbert Spencer, and Max Müller.{Cleanup|date=January 2008}}