Original sentence: Winston made his debut in the Costa Rican Primera Divisiónin 1999 with only in 17 year-old, playing with his hometown team ASODELI and scored his first goal back on November 28th of the same year, he played this season mostly as a substitute, because he was competing at that moment against some players that succeeded during the next few years, like Kurt Bernard, Andy Herron, Rayner Robinson and Ricardo Douglas for a place in the starting line-up
Edited sentence: Winston made his debut in the Costa Rican Primera División in 1999 with only in 17 year-old, playing with his hometown team ASODELI and scored his first goal back on November 28th of the same year, he played this season mostly as a substitute, because he was competing at that moment against some players that succeeded during the next few years, like Kurt Bernard, Andy Herron, Rayner Robinson and Ricardo Douglas for a place in the starting line-up