Original sentence: A biography of Billy Cotton was written by Scottish author John Maxwell, published by Jupiter Books Ltd, London in 1976.A few snippets not previously mentioned on this page may interest his fans.He was then not yet 19 years old.It gives a detailed account of Bill's life and career
Edited sentence: A few snippets not previously mentioned on this page may interest fans of the great man.An excellent biography of Billy Cotton was written by Scottish author John Maxwell, published by Jupiter Books Ltd, London in 1976.He was still not yet 19 years of age.This gives a detailed account of Bill's life and career