Original sentence: Gainsborough College focuses on vocational education.Gainsborough is also famed as being Britain’s most inland port — and so has a long history with river trade — the town’s Trent bridge prevents most barges from go beyond it and so many will have to offload their goods at the town.The town also has a school (The Castle Hills Community Arts College) which has recently achieved the status of performing arts college for the second time.The town has good links with the John Leggott Sixth Form College in Scunthorpe, which features many international students.There is currently one wharf in the town — mainly a source of wood.They produced seaside Rock making machines along with packaging machines — including those that where used to make Roses Chocolates — where the company got its name.This includes one of the top state schools in the country — Queen Elizabeth High School
Edited sentence: Gainsborough is also famed as being Britain’s most inland port - and so has a long history with river trade - the town’s Trent bridge prevents most barges from go beyond it and so many will have to offload their goods at the town.The town also has a school (The Castle Hills Community Arts College) which has recently achieved the status of performing arts college for the second time around, and has amazing facilities including one of the best dance floors in the East Midlands.The town has good links with the John Leggott Sixth form college in Scunthorpe, one if not the best in the UK which features many international students.The town's other secondary school is noted for its technology department but not much else.There is also Gainsborough College which focuses on vocational education.There is currently one wharf in the town - mainly a source of wood.They produced seaside Rock making machines along with packaging machines - including those that where used to make Roses Chocolates - where the company got its name.This includes one of the top state schools in the country - Queen Elizabeth High School however; this school is thought to be a rather pompous place to attend