Original sentence: Gargamel has also worked with other enemies of the Smurfs, although in many cases these other villains, such as Count Balthazar, prove to be much more efficient and focused enemies of the Smurfs, and even so much as smash their alliance with Gargamel and enslave him.Not much is said of Gargamel's relationships with women, although in one episode an ugly witch named Hagatha turns herself into an attractive woman in order to seduce Gargamel into giving her his secrets
Edited sentence: Gargamel has also worked with other enemies of the Smurfs, although in many cases these other villains, such as Lord Balthazar, prove to be much more efficient and focused enemies of the Smurfs, and even so much as smash their alliance with Gargamel and enslave him.Not much is said of Gargamel's relationships with women, although in one episode an ugly witch named Hogatha turns herself into an attractive woman in order to seduce Gargamel into giving her his secrets