Original sentence: Inka Wajbort, a young member of Hashomer Hatzair described reading the book in the summer of 1941: When 15-years old Inka read Musa Dagh she did not yet known that her own "Musa Dagh" was imminent
Edited sentence: Inka Wajbort , a young member of Hashomer Hatzair described reading the book in the summer of 1941: When 15-years old Inka read Musa Dagh she did not yet known that her own "Musa Dagh" was imminent