Original sentence: Byrne was born near West Bromwich, England, but emigrated with his family to Canada in 1958.From early on Byrne distinguished himself as a talented, rapid artist who never missed deadlines and who has, on occasion, worked on several different monthly comics at a time.He attended the Alberta College of Art in Calgary for a few years, where he produced some of his earliest work when he created the superhero Gay Guy for the college newspaper, The Emery Weal.He made his first professional sale in 1971 to The Monster Times.However Byrne and the school eventually realized that his interests lay elsewhere, and he left before graduating
Edited sentence: Byrne was born near West Bromwich, England.Feeling that art school had nothing relevant to offer towards that end, he left before graduating.From early on Byrne distinguished himself as a talented, rapid artist who never missed deadlines.He and his family emigrated to Canada in 1958.This article will attempt to cover only his more notable achievements, as a complete recounting of such a vast body of work is not feasable.Throughout his decades-spanning career he worked on several different monthly comics at a time.While attending the Alberta College of Art in Calgary he decided to pursue a career in comic books