Original sentence: The Grainuaile Suite (1985), a classical treatment of the life of the Irish sea-queen Grace O'Malley by Irish composer Shaun Davey, contains a lament on the Spanish landings in Ireland, sung by Rita Connolly
Edited sentence: The Grainuaile Suite (1985), a classical treatment of the life of the Irish sea-queen Grace O'Malley by Irish composer Shaun Davey, contains an exquisite lament on the Spanish landings in Ireland, sung by Rita Connolly