Original sentence: In The Texas Chain Saw Massacre, the one-hundred and twenty-four year old Grandpa (John Dugan) appears as a somewhat minor character, initially thought to be already dead; after heroine Sally Hardesty (Marilyn Burns) is captured by his grandchildren, Drayton (Jim Siedow), Leatherface (Gunnar Hansen) and the Hitchhiker (Edwin Neal), Grandpa is taken from the second floor of the house and brought to her by them
Edited sentence: In The Texas Chain Saw Massacre, the one-hundred and twenty-four year old Grandpa (John Dugan) appears as a somewhat minor character, initially thought to be already dead; he is first seen brifely durring leatherfaces chase scene, sally approaches him seeking help but assumes he is dead when she sees how old he is.Later after heroine Sally Hardesty (Marilyn Burns) is captured by his grandchildren, Drayton (Jim Siedow), Leatherface (Gunnar Hansen) and the Hitchhiker (Edwin Neal), Grandpa is taken from the second floor of the house and brought to her by them