Original sentence: A sentence written using plain English may be aesthetically pleasing, even if its style is not complicated and it does not incorporate irrelevance.Everything in the sentence should work towards communicating to the reader what the writer intended.In the late 19th century, several writers (e.Mark Twain) demonstrated that plain English could be elegant when executed properly.Plain English (sometimes known as plain language) is a communication style that focuses on putting across content in short and clear sentences and words.Plain English finally penetrated the fields of law and government during the 1970s, as shown by the passage of the Paperwork Reduction Act of 1976, and the popularity of books like Plain English for Lawyers (1979).Supporters of plain English say it allows the audience to concentrate on content instead of complicated language, and that it increases understanding and makes the message more accessible to a wider audience
Edited sentence: , Abraham Lincoln and Mark Twain) demonstrated that plain English could be elegant when executed properly (e., the Gettysburg Address); but they were ahead of their time.A sentence written using plain English can be beautiful, but it must not be full of extra, irrelevant things.Everything in the sentence should work toward communicating to the reader what the writer intended.George Orwell wrote an important essay on the subject in 1946, entitled "Politics and the English Language".In the late 19th century, several gifted writers (e.It should not be confusing or pompous.Plain English (sometimes known as plain language) is a communication style that focuses on putting across the content in short and clear sentences and words.Supporters of plain English say it lets the audience concentrate on the message instead of complicated language, and that it increases understanding and makes the message more accessible to a wider audience.The plain English revolution finally penetrated the fields of law and government during the 1970s, as shown by the passage of the Paperwork Reduction Act of 1976, and the popularity of books like Plain English for Lawyers (1979).The resulting refinement makes the words on the page transparent, so the reader can see straight through them to the meaning the writer intended