Original sentence: Ebonyi State University main campus(permanent site) is located in the outskirts of the city; precisely in Izzi local government area with other temporary campuses in Presco, Ishieke, and CAS (College of Agric Sciences).In Abakaliki, there are numerous shopping facilities including the main market at the intersections of the Gunning Road and the New Market Road.In Ebonyi state, there are many traditional religions having assorted deities with various modes of worship.Many Christian Denominations have sprung up from all corners of Ebonyi state and it is for everyone to individually decide whether to worship the God of the Bible or the gods of the forefathers
Edited sentence: Ebonyi State University main campus(permanent site) is located in the outskirt of the city; precisely in Izzi local government area with other temporary campuses in Presco, Ishieke, and CAS (College of Agric Sciences).In Abakaliki, there are numerous shopping facilities including the main market at the interscetions of the Gunning Road and the New Market Road.In Ebonyi state, there are various traditional religions having various deities with various modes of worship.It is not for anyone to decide which denomination is the right or the wrong denomination, but it is for everyone to individually decide what to worship.These days, a lot of Christian Denominations has sprang up from all corners of Ebonyi state.These has in turn made the state vulnerable to different kinds of mishaps because they are all false worships.These religions were bought in by ancestors that really know or understood the gods they were establishing its worship.whether to worship the God of the Bible in spirit and in truth or to worship the gods of the forefathers