Original sentence: , John Cage, Pierre Boulez, Henri Pousseur) deliberately sought to abdicate control, exploring indeterminacy or aleatoric processes in smaller and larger degrees., Pierre Boulez, Milton Babbitt) sought to achieve greater levels of control within their composition process (e., through the use of the twelve tone technique and later of total serialism), others (e.After World War II, while some modernist composers (e.Experimentation with tape loops and repetitive textures contributed to the advent of minimalism (Terry Riley, Lamonte Young, Steve Reich).Still other composers started exploring the theatrical potential of the musical performance (performance art, mixed media, fluxus).Technological advances led to the birth of electronic music (Pierre Schaeffer, Herbert Eimert, Werner Meyer-Eppler, Karlheinz Stockhausen)
Edited sentence: After World War II, while modernist composers (e.Composers started exploring the theatrical potential of the musical performance (performance art, mixed media, fluxus).Experimentation with tape loops and repetitive textures contributed to the advent of minimalism (Steve Reich).John Cage) deliberately sought to abdicate control, exploring indeterminacy or aleatoric processes.Pierre Boulez, Milton Babbitt) sought to achieve greater levels of control within their composition process (e.Technological advances led to the birth of electronic music (Pierre Schaeffer, Karlheinz Stockhausen).through the use of the twelve tone technique and later of total serialism), others (e