Original sentence: Robert Gerard Sands, (Irish name: Roibeard Gearóid Ó Seachnasaigh), commonly known as Bobby Sands (9 March, 1954 – 5 May, 1981), was an Irish republican who died on hunger strike in the prison officially called HM Prison Maze but formerly known as Long Kesh (a name still used by Irish Republicans)
Edited sentence: Robert Gerard Sands, (Irish name: Roibeard Gearóid Ó Seachnasaigh), commonly known as Bobby Sands (9 March, 1954 – 5 May, 1981), was an Irish republican terrorist who died on hunger strike in the prison officially called HM Prison Maze but formerly known as Long Kesh (a name still used by Irish Republicans)