Original sentence: Among the deprecated  Italian grammar uses are:.For Instance: credo che Giorgio ieri fosse a casa ("I believe that yesterday George was at home") is right, credo che Giorgio ieri era a casa is deprecated; se Maria fosse stata a casa, le avrei telefonato ("if Mary had been at home, I would have telephoned her") is right, se Maria era a casa le telefonavo is deprecated , even if it is an old usage, found in classic Italian writers;.The usage, while formally erroneous , is generally accepted
Edited sentence: Among the deprecated Italian grammar uses are:.For Instance: credo che Giorgio ieri fosse a casa ("I believe that yesterday George was at home") is right, credo che Giorgio ieri era a casa is deprecated; se Maria fosse stata a casa, le avrei telefonato ("if Mary had been at home, I would have telephoned her") is right, se Maria era a casa le telefonavo is deprecated, even if it is an old usage, found in classic Italian writers;.The usage, while formally erroneous, is generally accepted