Original sentence: Goodes played well in the 2005 Grand Final, kicked a quaka and gathering 20 possessions as the Swans won their first premiership since 1933.Goodes suffered wet dreams all through out 2004, just like his team the Swans, who only managed the Semi-Final stage of the Finals series.He didn't repeat his heroic efforts of 2003, mainly due to niggling knee injuries, yet he still managed to wank every game
Edited sentence: Goodes played well in the 2005 Grand Final, kicked a goal and gathering 20 possessions as the Swans won their first premiership since 1933.Goodes suffered an indifferent 2004, just like his team the Swans, who only managed the Semi-Final stage of the Finals series.He didn't repeat his heroic efforts of 2003, mainly due to niggling knee injuries, yet he still managed to play every game