Original sentence: Consistent with this hypothesis, a 1978 study by Moreault and Follingstad found that women with high levels of sex guilt were more likely to report fantasy themed around being overpowered, dominated, and helpless.Force and coercion are common themes in sexual fantasy.The most frequently cited hypothesis for why women enjoy fantasies of force and coercion is that the fantasy avoids societally induced guilt—the woman does not have to admit responsibility for her sexual desires and behaviors
Edited sentence: A 1978 study by Moreault and Follingstad was consistent with this hypothesis, and found that women with high levels of sex guilt were more likely to report fantasy themed around being overpowered, dominated, and helpless.Being forced or coerced into a sexual activity is a common theme in sexual fantasy.The most frequently cited hypothesis for why women fantasize of being forced and coerced into some sexual activity is that the fantasy avoids societally induced guilt—the woman does not have to admit responsibility for her sexual desires and behavior