Original sentence: Warren said that Native American ancestry was a part of her family folklore, a statement echoed by her three siblings and several of her cousins (although other cousins did not concur), and that she had listed Native American heritage in the law directory in hopes of meeting people of a similar background
Edited sentence: Warren said that Native American ancestry was a part of her family folklore, a statement echoed by her three siblings and several of her cousins (although other cousins did not concur), and that she had listed her Native American heritage in the law directory in hopes of meeting people of a similar background