Original sentence: Ice cave, which is made up of several sections created by several sinkholes, has an ice section that is  long and  in diameter and noted for its ice formations.In the Mount Adams Recreation Area, many of the trails are geared toward leisurely walks and are located in the Bird Creek Meadows area.Subalpine and alpine meadows and parklands, while not as prolific as the meadows and wetlands of lower elevations, have a display as well with partrigefoot, Cascade rockcress, subalpine buttercup, Sitka valerian, alpine false candytuft, elegant Jacob's ladder, and various buckwheats as prominent players
Edited sentence: Ice cave, which is made up of several sections created by several sinkholes, has an ice section that is  long and  in diameter and noted for its beautiful ice formations.In the Mount Adams Recreation Area, many of the trails are geared toward leisurely walks through beautiful scenery and are located in the Bird Creek Meadows area.Subalpine and alpine meadows and parklands, while not as prolific as the meadows and wetlands of lower elevations, have a beautiful display as well with partrigefoot, Cascade rockcress, subalpine buttercup, Sitka valerian, alpine false candytuft, elegant Jacob's ladder, and various buckwheats as prominent players