Original sentence: Following the 82nd Syrian Paratroop Battalion's complete takeover of the Israeli Hermon outpost on October 7, the 82nd Syrian Paratroop Battalion, under the command of Lieutenant Ahmad Rifai al-Joju, spent the morning clearing the site.NC considered it imperative to recapture the Hermon, for both moral and strategic reasons.On Yom Kippur, October 6, 1973, Egypt and Syria launched a war against Israel.The Hermon remained in Syrian hands until it was recaptured by Israel in Operation Dessert on October 22.The Israeli objective, recapturing the outpost and rescuing the soldiers trapped in it, was not achieved
Edited sentence: Following the 82nd Syrian Paratroop Battalion's complete takeover of the Israeli occupied Hermon outpost on October 7, the 82nd Syrian Paratroop Battalion, under the command of Lieutenant Ahmad Rifai al-Joju, spent the morning clearing the site.NC considered it imperative to re-occupy the Hermon, for both moral and strategic reasons.On Yom Kippur, October 6, 1973, Egypt and Syria launched a war against Israel to drive out the Israeli military from the Sinai Peninsula and the Golan Heights that Israel had occupied since the six-day war.The Hermon remained in Syrian hands until it was re-occupied by Israel in Operation Dessert on October 22.The Israeli objective, re-occupying the outpost and rescuing the soldiers trapped in it, was not achieved