Original sentence: Beach participated in the Battle of Manila Bay during the Spanish-American War, where he served on board the cruiser Baltimore (C-3).Beach's last command was the Mare Island Navy Yard on San Francisco Bay, where he oversaw the construction of the battleship California (BB-44).He served in three of the United States' wars, ranging from the Spanish American War up through World War I.His father was a lieutenant in the Confederate Army during the Civil War.McAdoo and a party of dignitaries on a tour of several South American nations.While commanding Tennessee, Beach took United States Secretary of the Treasury William G
Edited sentence: Beach participated in the Battle of Manila Bay during the Spanish–American War, where he served on board the cruiser Baltimore (C-3).Beach's last command was the Mare Island Naval Shipyard on San Francisco Bay, where he oversaw the construction of the battleship California (BB-44).He served in three of the United States' wars, ranging from the Spanish–American War up through World War I.His father was a lieutenant in the Confederate States Army during the Civil War.While commanding Tennessee, Beach took United States Secretary of the Treasury William Gibbs McAdoo and a party of dignitaries on a tour of several South American nations