Original sentence: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows – Part 2 received mostly positive reviews;  on the review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, the film had an overall approval rating of 96% based on 277 reviews and an average score of 8.4/10
Edited sentence: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows – Part 2 has recieved overwhelmingly positive reviews;  on the review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes, the film had an overall approval rating of 96% based on 277 reviews and an average score of 8.4/10