Original sentence: Edward Douglas John Hay, 13th Marquess of Tweeddale (6 August 1947 – 1 February 2005), was a Scottish aristocrat best known for his speech in the House of Lords debate (1996) on the Bosnian War
Edited sentence: Edward Douglas John Hay, 13th Marquess of Tweeddale (6 August 1947 – 1 February 2005), was a Scottish aristocrat best known for his speech in the House of Lords debate (1996) on the Bosnian civil war