Original sentence: Contemporary pop punk fans often wear items such as band T-shirts with a necklace, tie or scarf; blazers; Dickies pants, baggy pants, jeans or shorts; studded belts; Converse All-Stars or skateboarder shoes; and Trilbies or similar hats.Hair is usually long and up for women, and short and spiky for men — and is often dyed black, platinum blonde, or natural hair colors with unnatural streaks.Pop punk fashion sometimes overlaps with skater punk fashion and emo fashion.The fauxhawk is quite common.This fashion is influenced by bands such as blink-182, Green Day and Good Charlotte
Edited sentence: Hair is usually long and up for women and short and spiky for men — and is often dyed black, platinum blonde, or natural hair colors with unnatural streaks.Pop-punk fashion often tends to overlap with skater punk fashion and emo fashion with studded belts, band T-shirts and Converse All-Stars.The fauxhawk is quite common in this scene too.This fashion is influenced by artists such as blink-182, Green Day and Good Charlotte.This fashion is most of the time taken on because the individual's parents disapprove of other punk fashion, and are willing to allow their offspring to dress in this way, as it is not as extreme as the other styles.This style is most popular with adolescents in middle and high school.Today's pop punk fans often wear items such as band T-shirts with a necklace, tie or scarf; blazers; Dickies pants, ripped pants or jeans; studded belts; stretchy gloves with the fingers cut off; Converse All-Stars or skateboarder shoes; and Trilbies or similar hats