Original sentence: "  Jewish academic historian of the period David Cesarani criticised the series for not bringing out underlying geo-stragetic motives behind British policy, saying that Kosminsky had, "turned the British, who were the chief architects of the Palestine tragedy, into its prime victims... Ultimately, Kosminsky turns a three-sided conflict into a one-sided rant".On the other hand, Liel Leibovitz, writing for American online Jewish magazine Tablet, took the view that, "contrary to these howls of discontent, the show is a rare and riveting example of telling Israel’s story on screen with accuracy, sensitivity, and courage".Writing in The Independent, novelist Howard Jacobson said that in The Promise, "Just about every Palestinian was sympathetic to look at, just about every Jew was not
Edited sentence: "  Jewish academic historian of the period David Cesarani criticised the series for not bringing out underlying selfish geopolitical motives behind British policy, saying that Kosminsky had "turned the British, who were the chief architects of the Palestine tragedy, into its prime victims...Ultimately, Kosminsky turns a three-sided conflict into a one-sided rant".On the other hand Liel Leibovitz, writing for American online Jewish magazine Tablet, took the view that "contrary to these howls of discontent, the show is a rare and riveting example of telling Israel’s story on screen with accuracy, sensitivity, and courage".Writing in The Independent, novelist Howard Jacobson said that in The Promise "Just about every Palestinian was sympathetic to look at, just about every Jew was not