Original sentence: Bloomberg underwrote the expansion of the tournament and all expenses, thus allowing all monies raised by PFP to go directly to breast cancer research.Due to the organization's success, the Foundation secured Bloomberg as Title Sponsor of Play for P.In the first year PFP held golf tournaments at six clubs in New Jersey and raised $77,000 for breast cancer research.One of the founders suggested a golf tournament, with all money raised going to breast cancer research.Participation has grown to more than 140 clubs in 23 states across the country, with an estimated 15,000 participants annually.expanded its concept to include tournaments for tennis, men, swimming and cards
Edited sentence: Bloomberg has generously underwritten the expansion of the tournament and all expenses, thus allowing ALL monies raised by PFP to go directly to breast cancer research.Due to the organization’s outstanding success, the Foundation secured Bloomberg as Title Sponsor of Play for P.Each year PFP’s donation to The Breast Cancer Research Foundation surpasses the previous – a sure sign that the hard work and dedication of the Board, and Chairs and the continued support and generosity of the sponsors, committees and participants, are making a difference.Each year, an estimated 15,000 participants – women, men and children - have enjoyed the benefits of this fundraiser.In the first year PFP held golf tournaments at six clubs in New Jersey and raised an impressive $77,000 for breast cancer research.One of the founders suggested a golf tournament.Over the past ten years, participation has grown to more than 140 clubs in 23 states across the country.The decision was made that all money raised would go to breast cancer research.The frightening news galvanized them to do something for her, for themselves and for women.has expanded its concept to include tournaments for tennis, men, swimming and cards