Original sentence: Also, just like an average SUV it is not taken off the paved roads by an average consumer to justify its off-road capabilities.For instance, the H2 in one engine configuration averages about 15 mpg (US) (16 L/100 km) on highways, (10 mpg or 24 L/100 km on the street), has a curb weight of over 6000 pounds (2722 kg), and has relatively high maintenance costs.This promotional effort, seen to combine unhealthy fast food with excess oil consumption, was featured at several prominent blogs like Daily Kos , AdFreak , and others   following development of at least one parody site by the Environmental Working Group
Edited sentence: Also, just like an average SUV it is not taken off the paved roads by an average consumer to justify it’s off-road capabilities.Environmental Working Group.For instance, the H2 in one engine configuration averages about 15 MPG on highways, (10 mpg on the street), has a curb weight of over 6000 pounds, and has relatively high maintenance costs.The intense animosity that Hummer inspires in many people is a psychological consequence of it's success in projecting this sense of dominance, because most people do not like being bullied and react negatively to the car and it's driver.This promotional effort, seen to combine unhealthy fast food with excess oil consumption, was featured at several prominent blogs like Daily Kos , AdFreak , and others   following development of at least one parody site by the