Original sentence: In 2002 Stephen Baba-Tunde Amos was shot dead outside a nightclub.In an experiment also involving five other Post Offices, the main Post Office, which is situated in a Grade II listed building on Warrington Street, is to close and WH Smith are to take over the franchise at their retail store in the Arcades
Edited sentence: In 2002 Stephen Baba-Tunde Amos was shot dead outside a nightclub, and far to many underage youths are being allowed in the town centre pubs and clubs.In an experiment also involving five other Post Offices, the main Post Office, which is situated in a Grade II listed building on Warrington Street, has now closed and WH Smith have took over the franchise at their retail store in the Arcades.This decision was taken without consultation, a move which angered may local residents