Original sentence: In computing, dedicated lines are copper wires which are connected between two stations which carry the information from the sender to the receiver.These kinds of lines are still maintained by industries but none are created at present due to the advent of more profitable technologies.This is one of the earliest forms of computer network
Edited sentence: In Dedicated Lines, Copper wires are connected between two stations which carry the information from the Sender to the receiver.Only if the capitalists know the great source of copper are Industry lines,there would a coppper rush to purchase those industries.These kinds of Lines are still maintained by Industries but none are drawn at present due to the advent of more profitable technologies.This is one of the earliest form of Computer Networks