Original sentence: Prime Ministers and high ranking officials have repeatedly visited Yasukuni_Shrine, a burial place for Japan's war dead, including many infamous war criminals such as Hideki Tojo.These visits have been considered troubling and provocative by many Asians, and some Japanese, who are concerned that the visits might indicated rising Japanese nationalism
Edited sentence: Repetitive provocations caused by visits of Prime Ministers and high ranking officials to Yasukuni_Shrine, a burial place for many infamous war criminals including Hideki Tojo