Original sentence: In November, 2004 Death Cab for Cutie signed a "long-term worldwide deal" with Atlantic Records, leaving their long-time label Barsuk Records and the rank of indie record labels.In addition, tracks from the album appeared in the soundtrack of television show The O.Transatlanticism received critical praise and also became the band's top-selling album, with 225,000 copies sold during its first year out
Edited sentence: In November, 2004 Death Cab for Cutie signed a "long-term worldwide deal" with Atlantic Records, leaving their long-time label Barsuk Records and the rank of indie band.In addition, tracks from the album appeared in the soundtrack of hit television show The O.Their most famous release was 2003's Transatlanticism.Transatlanticism received near-unanimous critical praise; it also became the band's top-selling album, with 225,000 copies sold during its first year out, a major hit by indie standards