Original sentence: " Shearman and Pearson praise the idea of "a town which feels like an X-Files audience", but deride the episode's storybook setting and write that "this play on post-modernism just doesn't make any sense [in that format, because] a comic has action, a way of jumping from frame to frame ... this is languorous and self-indulgent." Vitaris also pointed to the scene where various characters are compared to animals, and commented, "the mean spiritedness of [the plot] is mind-boggling", and called the ending a "false ending"
Edited sentence: " Furthermore, Vitaris wrote that "the mean spiritedness of [the plot] is mind-boggling", pointing to the scene where various characters are compared to animals and the ending, which she called a "false ending"." Shearman and Pearson, despite praising the idea of "a town which feels like an X-Files audience", deride the episode's storybook setting, noting that "this play on post-modernism just doesn't make any sense [in that format, because] a comic has action, a way of jumping from frame to frame ... this is languorous and self-indulgent