Original sentence: According to the CIA factbook estimates Kurds compromising the second largest ethnic group at 20% however since a consensus based on race is unheard of in the country, as everyone is considered to be the majority, the acuracy is disputed.During same period Turkey is accused of an Armenian Genocide.However the minorities in question do not have special rights as the race-blind system is based on equality.Other minorities include Abkhaz, Albanians, Arabs, Armenians, Bosniaks, [[Chaldeans], Circassians, Greeks, Georgians, Hamshenis, Jews, Laz, Levantines, Pomaks, Syriacs, and Zazas.Rising nationalism in the 19th century and World War I caused the embattled empire to crumble in the aftermath of the war.Soon after the war, Treaty of Sèvres was proposed by the allies and was revoked by the newly formed unofficial successor of the Ottoman Empire,  Republic of Turkey.The issue is currently a diplomatic dispute between Turkey and Armenia.The majority of the Turkish population (around 80-100%) is of Turkic ethnicity, who speak the official language of the country, Turkish.e-Commerce in Turkey
Edited sentence: However the minorities in question do not have special rights.In 1915 to 1917 Turkey was allegedly involved in the Armenian Genocide.Other minorities include,Abkhaz, Albanians, Arabs, Armenians, Bosniaks, Chaldeans, Circassians, Greeks, Georgians, Hamshenis, Jews, Laz, Levantines, Pomaks, Syriacs, and Zazas.Rising nationalism in the 19th century and World War I caused the embattled Turkish Empire to crumble in the aftermath of the war.Soon after the war, Treaty of Sèvres was proposed by the allies and was revoked by the newly formed unofficial successor of the Ottoman Empire, Republic of Turkey.The Kurds compromise the second largest ethnic group (around 10-20%).The issue is currently a cause of diplomatic dispute between Turkey and parts of the international community.The majority of the Turkish population (around 80-90%) is of Turkic ethnicity, who speak the official language of the country, Turkish