Original sentence: 10% of the inhabitants of Kvinesdal are American citizens, and Kvinesdal does enjoy a special relationship with United States.The river Kvina is known for its salmon, and salmon fishing is a popular activity
Edited sentence: 10% of the inhabitants of Kvinesdal are American citizens, and Kvinesdal does enjoy a special relationship with USA.If you're interested in salmon fishing, Kvinesdal is the place to go.The river Kvina is well known for its special salmon