Original sentence: Factors Opposing - Both Pakistan and Kashmiri militants reject the plan as they aim to get greater control over the region.Kashmir becomes a part of India - Though New Delhi would have no objections to such a plan, the muslims in Pakistan-administered Kashmir have never shown any desire to join India
Edited sentence: Factors Opposing - Both Pakistan and Kashmiri militants reject the plan as India gets greater control over the region.Kashmir becomes a part of India - Though New Delhi would have no objections to such a plan, the majority of Kashmiris have never shown any desire to join India