Original sentence: A review from Zzap was less positive only achieving 80%.Issue #84 of the British magazine Computer + Video Games rated the game highly, stating that "Pools is a game which no role player or adventurer should be without and people new to role playing should seriously consider buying as an introductory guide
Edited sentence: " A review from Zzap was less positive only achieving 80%." Issue #84 of the British magazine Computer + Video Games rated the game highly, stating that "Pools is a game which no role player or adventurer should be without and people new to role playing should seriously consider buying as an introductory guide