Original sentence: Although a method of extraction of oil from "some kind of bituminous shale" was already described in 10th century by the Arabian physician Masawaih al-Mardini (Mesue the Younger) and the first shale oil extraction patent was granted by the British Crown in 1694 to three persons who had "found a way to extract and make great quantities of pitch, tarr, and oyle out of a sort of stone, the modern industrial extraction of shale oil started in 1838 in France by using Selligue process, invented by Alexander Selligue
Edited sentence: Although a method of extraction of oil from "some kind of bituminous shale" was already described in 10th century by the Arabian physician Masawaih al-Mardini (Mesue the Younger) and the first shale oil extraction patent was granted by the British Crown in 1694 to three persons who had "found a way to extract and make great quantities of pitch, tarr, and oyle out of a sort of stone", the history of modern industrial extraction of shale oil started in 1838 in France by implementation of the process invented by Alexander Selligue