Original sentence: Following a crossover with the Teen Titans, in issue 16 of the current volume of that team's current series and the Teen Titans/Legion Special, a new series has been launched, written by Mark Waid (giving him the distinction of becoming the first person to reboot the same title twice) and pencilled by Barry Kitson
Edited sentence: Following a crossover with the Teen Titans, in issue 16 of the current volume of that team's current series and the Teen Titans/Legion Special, a new series has been launched, written by Mark Waid (giving him the perhaps-dubious distinction of becoming the first person to reboot the same title twice) and pencilled by Barry Kitson