Original sentence: After a working as a farm labourer, Trace joined the British Army then had a relatively undistinguished acting career – his greatest screen role being Charlton Heston's body double in Ben-Hur.By 1967, the Blue Peter production team were beginning to find Trace hard to deal with and were looking to replace him on the show, but utlimately Trace was forced to resign from the children's TV show by a then strait-laced BBC when his wife divorced him for having an affair with a 19-year-old hotel receptionist during a Blue Peter 'culture-embracing' summer expedition to Norway
Edited sentence: After a working as a farm labourer, Trace joined the British Army where he studied at Sandhurst and received a commission in the Royal Regiment of Artillery in 1953.By 1967, the Blue Peter production team were beginning to find Trace hard to deal with and were looking to replace him on the show, but ultimately Trace was forced to resign from the children's TV show by a then strait-laced BBC when his wife divorced him for having an affair with a 19-year-old hotel receptionist during a Blue Peter 'culture-embracing' summer expedition to Norway.He was promoted to Lieutenant in February 1955, but resigned his commission in September 1956.Trace then had a relatively undistinguished acting career – his greatest screen role being Charlton Heston's body double in Ben-Hur