Original sentence: " This was intended to celebrate plans for building a new pedestrian/transit-friendly shopping/residential community in its place, "Silver Lake Village", which is anchored by a Wal-Mart.Apache was scheduled for demolition in April 2004, then opening to the public for the last time for a "Bulldozer Bash.Around this time, The Apache was voted as the "best place to dump someone", by the local alternative weekly City Pages.However, the larger mall would contribute to the Apache's decline, with the relocation of the Apache's anchor stores to Rosedale.However, the majority of the turnout at the event were not there to celebrate the new development, but to share Apache memories and mourn the loss of what was once the center of their community.In the early 1970s, the mall was still thriving, despite the opening of nearby Rosedale
Edited sentence: Apache was scheduled for demolition in April 2004, then opening to the public for the last time for a "Bulldozer Bash", intended to celebrate plans for building a new pedestrian/transit-friendly shopping/residential community in its place, "Silver Lake Village", anchored by a Wal-Mart, to the consternation of many residents and former Apache shoppers.By the early 1970s, the writing seemed to be on the wall for Apache, when Rosedale opened nearby.It was a sad sight, with abandoned storefronts with visible shadows of their signage remaining.The majority of the turnout at the event were not there to celebrate the new development, but to share Apache memories and mourn the loss of what was once the center of their community.The mall was voted as the "best place to dump someone", by the local alternative weekly City Pages