Original sentence: From a very young start, Balukas dominated professional women's billiard play during the 1970s and 1980s; a dominance so complete that it has been described as "breathtaking" in its scope
Edited sentence: From a very young start, Balukas utterly dominated professional women's billiard play during the 1970s and 1980s; a dominance so complete that it has been described as "breathtaking" in its scope