Original sentence: Aharon Etengoff, Webmaster and Senior Researcher (formerly of the Photography & Film and Public Relations Departments of the IDF Spokesperson’s Office).Dore Gold, Publisher (a former Israeli ambassador, currently President of the Jerusalem Center for Public Affairs and advisor to Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon).Simon Plosker, Managing Editor (formerly public affairs officer for the Board of Deputies of British Jews and British Aliyah Movement co-ordinator).Steinberg, Editor (Professor of Political Studies at Bar Ilan University, where he directs the Interdisciplinary Program on Conflict Management and Negotiation; also a Senior Research Associate at the BESA Center for Strategic Studies, a consultant to the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs and National Security Council, and a columnist)
Edited sentence: Aharon Etengoff, Webmaster and Senior Researcher (formerly of the PR Department of the IDF Spokesperson’s Office).Dore Gold, Publisher (President of the Jerusalem Center for Public Affairs and advisor to former Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon).Simon Plosker, Managing Editor (formerly PR officer for the Board of Deputies of British Jews and British Aliyah Movement co-ordinator).Steinberg, Editor (Professor of Political Studies at the Religious Zionist Bar Ilan University and consultant to the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs and National Security Council)