Original sentence: Many international organizations have conducted studies of the events, each in turn determining that the term "genocide" aptly describes "the Ottoman massacre of Armenians in 1915-1916.states have passed formal legislative condemnations of the Armenian Genocide, often despite intense Turkish diplomatic and economic pressure
Edited sentence: Numerous international organizations have conducted studies of the events, each in turn determining that the term "genocide" aptly describes "the Ottoman massacre of Armenians in 1915-1916.This pre-requisite to fully support Armenian version of WWI events have stymied open discussion of the topic, above all by Armenian scholars themselves.states, under intense pressure for Armenian lobby groups, have passed formal legislative condemnations of the Armenian Genocide, often despite intense Turkish diplomatic and economic pressure