Original sentence: The railway line starts at East Tsim Sha Tsui Station in Kowloon and branches in the north to end at Sheung Shui to terminate at Lo Wu or Lok Ma Chau stations
Edited sentence: The railway line starts at East Tsim Sha Tsui Station in Kowloon and branches in the north at Sheung Shui to terminate at Lo Wu or Lok Ma Chau stations