Original sentence: Crackers, Rik D'Tripp, Jools, Andy Oldfield, Dunc & The Doog, Bernie Simmons, Paul Anthony, Neil Castledine, Shane Mousley, Don Jackson, Knight Rider, DJ Dean, Alan Matsell, Mitch, Jennie Mousley, Harrison Mousley, Ben Atkinson, Emily Hyde, Treaders and Laura Coleman the 2008 Miss England winner
Edited sentence: Crackers, Rik D'Tripp, Jools, Andy Oldfield, Dunc & The Doog, Bernie Simmons, Paul Anthony, Neil Castledine, Shane Mousley, Don Jackson, Knight Rider, DJ Dean, Alan Matsell, Mitch, Jennie Mousley, Harrison Mousley, Ben Atkinson, Emily Hyde, Treaders, Pete James and Laura Coleman the 2008 Miss England winner