Original sentence: The Rage and The Pride (La Rabbia e l’Orgoglio in Italian) is a book written in the wake of 9/11 by Italian journalist and author Oriana Fallaci, which condemns political Islam as a totalitarian force bent on destroying Western civilisation and attacks those in Italy and other Western countries who she believes have turned a blind eye to the threat of Islamic fundamentalism in their own countries.The book has been a bestseller in Italy and Europe where it has sold over 1.5 million copies
Edited sentence: The Rage and The Pride,(La Rabbia e l’Orgoglio) in Italian ,a compelling and brutally honest expose on Islam written in the wake of 9/11 by world renowned journalist /author Oriana Fallaci.The book has been a bestseller in Italy and Europe where it has sold over 1.5  million copies