Original sentence: FHS was named after the famous Benjamn Franklin.The students attending consists mainly of minorities
Edited sentence: Although, it is important to note the sea of horrendous teachers that surround the school.If it were not for them, perhaps Franklin would be recognized for its achievements by the dedicated students.It is a real shame considering that there are a few educators on campus who truly love and excel in their profession.Obviously, FHS was named after the famous Benjamn Franklin, who was a Enlightened and wise fellow.Perhaps thier lack of enthusiasum is in part due to the common slackers that can also be easily found in Franklin.The students attending, consists mainly of minorities.Trust me, Franklin would have much better test scores were it not for the slackers overwhelmingly bringing the scores down despite the few high ones.many of them, from personal experience, plain out suck at teaching thier students