Original sentence: The changes noted by the Tanners have been discussed in official Church publications including the Ensign, Improvement Era, and  Millennial Star, and are consistent with early pre- and post-publication edits made by Joseph Smith
Edited sentence: The vast majority of the changes noted by the Tanners have been discussed in official Church publications including the Ensign, Improvement Era, Millennial Star and Times and Seasons, and are consistent with early pre- and post-publication edits made by Joseph Smith