Original sentence: According to the Western standards of religion much of East Asia could be characterized as irreligious.Eastern religious traditions often freely combine elements from Buddhism with local Animism, Chinese folk religion, Confucianism, Shamanism, Shinto, and Taoism, and individuals who identify as Buddhists often have beliefs composed of a mix of religious ideas.Some Buddhists do not regard Buddhism as a religion at all
Edited sentence: Adherents of Eastern religions such as Buddhism with local Animism, Chinese folk religion, Confucianism, Shamanism, Shinto, and Taoism often have beliefs composed of a mix of religious ideas, although according to the Western standards of religion much of East Asia could be characterized as irreligious including Buddhists