Original sentence: Artie Shaw (May 23, 1910, New York, New York – December 30, 2004, Thousand Oaks, California) is considered to be one of the best jazz musicians of his time  jazz clarinetist, composer, bandleader; he is also the author of both fiction and non-fiction writings
Edited sentence: Artie Shaw (May 23, 1910, New York, New York – December 30, 2004, Thousand Oaks, California)was the best jazz musucition of his time  jazz clarinetist, composer, bandleader and author of both fiction and non-fiction