Original sentence: Mark Griskey, born in 1963, is an American composer who has worked for LucasArts Entertainment in games such as Star Wars: Jedi Starfighter and Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II The Sith Lords, and scoring for many other popular video games
Edited sentence: Mark Griskey, born in 1963, is an American composer who is probably best known for his work for LucasArts Entertainment in games such as Star Wars: Jedi Starfighter and Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II The Sith Lords, and scoring for many other popular video games