Original sentence: Carly credited the album's failure to gain traction on 9/11 <ref> low record sales, she won a Meteor Award in 2003 for Best Irish Female Singer.Its commercial failure was documented in an article in The Wall Street Journal.. ]</ref>
Edited sentence: Its commercial failure was documented in an article in The Wall Street Journal.. Despite low record sales, she won a Meteor Award in 2003 for Best Irish Female Singer