Original sentence: Birstall's residents and traders take part in many community groups, such as the current "Birstall in Bloom" project started in 2010, hoping to make Birstall a competitor on all sides.The local chamber of trade actively seeks to improve the local knowledge on the independent traders operating their businesses in and around Birstall, to keep the village thriving, with a florist, bakers, butchers, travel agent, pet shop, hair dressers, nail bar, fish shop, garment alterations, nail bar, bistro, hot sandwich bar, to name just a few of the services available
Edited sentence: Birstall's residents and traders, take part in many community groups, such as the current "Birstall in Bloom" project started in 2010, hoping to make Birstall an awe inspiring competor on all sides.The local chamber of trade actively seeks to improve the local knowledge on the independent traders operating their businesses in and around birstall, to keep the beatufiul village thriving, with a florist, bakers, butchers, travel agent, pet shop, hair dressers, nail bar, fish shop, garment alterations, nail bar, bistro, hot sandwich bar, to name just a few of the services available