Original sentence: Dolphins will also give players rides...If a player finds King Boo, he'll sell a star for 10 coins, but he also changes the board.If a player gets into a pitfall trap, they're back to the start.Then, the player must travel back to the caboose, but on top of the carts.When they reach the front of the train, the Shy-Guy Conductor will sell a star for 20 coins
Edited sentence: Dolphins will also give you rides...If you get into a pitfall trap, you're back to the start.If you're lucky enough to get to King Boo, he'll sell a star for 10 coins, but he also changes the board.Then, you must travel back to the caboose, but on top of the carts.When you reach the front of the train, the Shy-Guy Conductor will sell you a star for 20 coins