Original sentence: Lordshill - Shirley - Southampton City Centre - Woolston – Bitterne - Chartwell Green – West End - Moorgreen Hospital - Hedge End Railway Station - Botley (only 2 services a day).Southampton City Centre – Warsash – Locks Heath – Fareham
Edited sentence: Lordshill - Shirley - Southampton City Centre - Woolston – Bitterne - Chartwell Green – West End - Moorgreen Hospital - Hedge End railway station - Botley (only 2 services a day).Southampton City Centre – Warsash – Locks Heath - Fareham