Original sentence: For others, his ideas led towards assimilation, loss of identity for Jews and the dilution of traditional Judaism.For some he was the third Moses (the other two being the Biblical lawgiver and Moses Maimonides) heralding a new era in the history of the Jewish people.to whose ideas the renaissance of European Jews, Haskalah, (the Jewish enlightenment) is indebted
Edited sentence: He was an important Jewish figure of the 18th century to whom the renaissance of European Jews, Haskalah, the Jewish enlightenment is attributable.To others, he was a step into the beginning of assimilation and loss of identity for Jews and the dilution of traditional Judaism.To some he was the third Moses (the other two being the Biblical lawgiver and Moses Maimonides) with whom a new era opens in the history of the Jewish people