Original sentence: Barenboim has expressed his disagreement with the Israeli occupation of the West Bank and Gaza Strip, saying his adopted homeland is "losing its moral capital [for] fighting against the identity of a people.He has given performances in these areas, in particular on the West Bank
Edited sentence: Barenboim has expressed his disagreement with the Israeli occupation of Palestine, saying his adopted homeland is "losing its moral capital [for] fighting against the identity of a people.He has given performances on the West Bank, and in occupied Palestine