Original sentence: Daniel Nissan (born 1966) is an Israeli-American entrepreneur who has worked in VoIP, online advertising, affiliate marketing, eCommerce, online software distribution, CRM and marketing automation.During his time at VocalTec he helped develop and launch a line of IP based software communication software for live voice, video, screen collaboration and online music distribution.Nissan joined VocalTec in 1993 and worked on the development of its product, Internet Phone.Nissan was also the first to establish a paid banner advertising agreement with Yahoo.While at VocalTec he developed the first eCommerce site for online software download and purchasing.the New York Times, as well as the first affiliate marketing program with web sites, working alongside Jeff Pulver
Edited sentence: By recognizing early on the commercialization of the Internet and the huge growth potential in the coming years he led VocalTec to develop and launch a successful line of IP based software communication solutions for live voice, video, screen collaboration and online music distribution.Daniel Nissan (Born 1966) is an Israeli-American entrepreneur known for his innovation related to several internet categories including VoIP, online advertising, affiliate marketing, eCommerce, online software distribution, CRM and marketing automation.Daniel Nissan joined VocalTec in 1993 and led the development of its revolutionary product, Internet Phone (or iPhone as many users called it back then).To drive awareness to the newly created product Nissan developed breakthrough advertising models and was the first to establish a paid banner advertising agreement with Yahoo.While at VocalTec Nissan also pioneered new strategies to market, distribute and sell software online and is credited for developing  the first ever eCommerce site for online software download and purchasing.the New York Times as well as the first affiliate marketing program with leading web sites including Jeff Pulver