Original sentence: Alfred Ludlam (1810 – 8 November 1877) was a New Zealand politician, horticulturalist and farmer of the City of Wellington and the Hutt Valley district.Little is known about Ludlam's activities in Ireland or the West Indies but a preserved specimen of the common iguana, collected by him on Tobago, is listed in an 1845 British Museum catalogue of lizards
Edited sentence: (Little is known about Ludlam's activities in Ireland or the West Indies but a preserved specimen of the common iguana, collected by him on Tobago, is listed in an 1845 British Museum catalogue of lizards.Alfred Ludlam (1810 – 8 November 1877) was a leading New Zealand politician, horticulturalist and farmer who owned land in Wellington and the Hutt Valley