Original sentence: After graduating from Harvard in 2001, Novak moved to Los Angeles and began working in clubs as a comedian.He soon became a fixture at Los Angeles comedy clubs such as The Improv, and was named one of Variety's "Ten Comedians To Watch" in 2003.His first live stand-up performance took place on October 10, 2001 at the Hollywood Youth Hostel
Edited sentence: Afterward, moved to Los Angeles and began working in clubs as a comedian, doing his first live stand-up performance took place on October 10, 2001 at the Hollywood Youth Hostel.He was named one of Variety's "Ten Comedians To Watch" in 2003.Novak graduated from Harvard in 2001