Original sentence: Adamsdale won the Perrier Award for comedy.In 2004 he starred in a self-penned one man show called Jackson's Way at the Edinburgh Fringe.Lee was so impressed by Adamsdale's work that he reportedly threw his full support behind Jackson's Way, lobbying for an extension of the run and using his clout within the industry to garner notice from critics and award committees
Edited sentence: In 2004 he starred in a self-penned one man show called 'Jackson's Way' at the Edinburgh Fringe.Lee was so impressed by Adamsdale's work that he reportedly threw his full support behind 'Jackson's Way', lobbying for an extension of the run and using his not insubstantial clout within the industry to garner notice from critics and award committees.Low and behold, Adamsdale secured the coveted Perrier Award for comedy, thus providing the Fringe with another (possibly apocryphal) zero-to-hero tale