Original sentence: Likewise, Byrne - in collaboration with Eno - released My Life in the Bush of Ghosts, (the album would comprise some of the soundtrack for the late 80's Michael Douglas film Wall Street), which incorporated world music, 'found' sounds, and included a number of other prominent international and post-punk musicians
Edited sentence: Likewise, Byrne - in collaboration with Eno - released My Life in the Bush of Ghosts, which incorporated world music, 'found' sounds, and included a number of other prominent international and post-punk musicians