Original sentence: A disadvantage of this model is the much lower using frequency, around three uses per day as compared to between 10 to 15 uses per day in a bike sharing.Advantages of long term use, or the Library Bike model, include a familiarity the rider gets with their bicycle, a mode of travel that is ready for the borrower at any time during the months of use.These bicycles may be given free of charge, for a refundable deposit, or sold at a reduced price
Edited sentence: A disadvantage of this model is the much lower using frequency, around three uses per day as compared to between 10 to 15 uses per day with other bike sharing models.Advantages of long term use, include a familiarity the rider gets with their bicycle, a mode of travel that is ready for the borrower at any time during the months of use.Sometimes known as Bike Library models, these bicycles may be given free of charge, for a refundable deposit, or sold at a reduced price