Original sentence: Because of this, she drew heavy criticism from many local Democrats for running what most observers agreed was a weak campaign; specifically, they decried a severe lack of planning, claiming that she hastily-booked last-minute campaign stops in rural areas hostile to her and produced campaign literature of poor printing quality
Edited sentence: Because of this, she drew heavy criticism from many local Democrats for running what most observers agreed was a weak campaign; specifically, they decried a severe lack of planning, claiming that she hastily-booked last-minute campaign stops in rural areas hostile to her (at a rally in Cambridge late in the campaign designed to honor farmers and watermen, none showed up) and produced campaign literature of poor printing quality