Original sentence: During his tenure as Prime Minister, he has repercussions of the credit crunch, the 10p tax rate row, a costly political battle over 42 day detention and by-election defeats, notably Glasgow East
Edited sentence: His time as Prime Minister has been of mixed fortune, facing repercussions of the credit crunch, the 10p tax rate row, a costly political battle over 42 day detention and by-election defeats, notably Glasgow East