Original sentence: Peter Beinart of The Atlantic noted Walker's success with conservative audience at the Iowa Freedom Summit.Unlike most other candidates, Walker he has not made any "ideological or even stylistic innovation[s]", such as including significant numbers of non-whites in campaign videos or talking about "reaching out to African Americans", or policy proposals such as new anti-poverty tax credits or a higher minimum wage.Walker has distinguished himself from potential candidate Jeb Bush by appealing to conservatives by declining to answer the question of whether he believes President Obama loves America or was a true Christian, and stating that he did not know if President Obama's patriotism was in doubt
Edited sentence: He has distinguished himself from potential candidate Jeb Bush by appealing to conservatives by declining to answer the question of whether he believes President Obama loves America or was a true Christian, and stating that he did not know if President Obama's patriotism was in doubt.Peter Beinart of The Atlantic noted his success with conservative audience at the Iowa Freedom Summit.Unlike many other candidates he has not made any "ideological or even stylistic innovation[s]" to conservative doctrine, such as including significant numbers of non-whites in campaign videos, talking about "reaching out to African Americans", or policy proposals such as new anti-poverty tax credits or a higher minimum wage to address growing inequality and declining upward mobility