Original sentence: Not very well known was the former Broadway musical Phantom, with the same story.• Also in 1989 came The Phantom of the Mall: Erik’s Revenge.• In 1943 Universal Studios made the Phantom one of their classic Monsters in the movie Phantom of the Opera starring Claude Rains (famous for his roles in Casablanca and The Invisible Man.• In 1944, The Climax starring Boris Karloff and Susanna Foster once more was made, with the same type of story.• In 1962 Hammer Films made The Phantom of the Opera starring Herbert Lom as the Phantom.• In 1974 there was a television version made called The Phantom of Hollywood.• In 1986 the rave musical hit The Phantom of the Opera by Andrew Llyodd Webber came out, becoming an immediate hit.• In 1989 the same studio that made the Jason movies made The Phantom of the Opera one of their violent, gory movies.• In 1992 came The Phantom of the Ritz featuring Joshua Sussman
Edited sentence: Not very well known was the former Broadway musical “Phantom”, with the same story.Unfortunately, it was not very good.• Also in 1989 came “The Phantom of the Mall: Erik’s Revenge”.• In 1943 Universal Studios made the Phantom one of their classic Monsters in the movie “Phantom of the Opera” starring Claude Rains (famous for his roles in Casablanca and The Invisible Man.• In 1944, “The Climax” starring Boris Karloff and Susanna Foster once more was made, with the same type of story.• In 1962 Hammer Films made “The Phantom of the Opera” starring Herbert Lom as the Phantom.• In 1974 there was a television version made called “The Phantom of Hollywood”.• In 1986 the rave musical hit “The Phantom of the Opera” by Andrew Llyodd Webber came out, becoming an immediate hit.• In 1989 the same studio that made the Jason movies made “The Phantom of the Opera” one of their violent, gory movies.• In 1992 came “The Phantom of the Ritz” featuring Joshua Sussman