Original sentence: In his own words he expresses:  "I struggled because I don’t think I accomplished any of those things until I realized the moral ground I was missing.S army detention facility at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba; from a wide array of perspectives that encompass the facets of his personal, political, social and religious beliefs both as an American and a Muslim.Speaking about his childhood, he recalls:  "I lived an average American boy’s life, school, video games, my bike, etc.With regards to the detrimental factors that affected his outlook on life on the road to his religious awakening; he concedes:  "I didn’t make these decisions (my conversion, public speaking, political action) to spite anyone or any organization, I didn’t convert to change my nationality or political views, I made this conversion to celebrate life, to live fuller with more responsibility, and especially to show anyone that reads my work just how much compassion can accomplish, the pacifist and real intellectual members of my generation believe it is essential to find a better understanding of the world around us and the Islamic faith that over a billion people in our world practice.YouTube videos
Edited sentence: In his own words he expresses: "I struggled because I don’t think I accomplished any of those things until I realized the moral ground I was missing.S army detention facility at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba; from a wide array of perspectives that encompass the facets of his personal, political, social and religious outlook.Speaking about his childhood, he recalls: "I lived an average American boy’s life, school, video games, my bike, etc.With regards to the detrimental factors that affected his outlook on life on the road to his religious awakening; he concedes: "I didn’t make these decisions (my conversion, public speaking, political action) to spite anyone or any organization, I didn’t convert to change my nationality or political views, I made this conversion to celebrate life, to live fuller with more responsibility, and especially to show anyone that reads my work just how much compassion can accomplish, the pacifist and real intellectual members of my generation believe it is essential to find a better understanding of the world around us and the Islamic faith that over a billion people in our world practice.com/thebrothermustafa Brother Mustafa on YouTube]