Original sentence: The White Hall community offers scenic views of Green Spring and Frog Hollow in the foothills of the North Mountain to the west, as well as views of the greater Shenandoah Valley to the east
Edited sentence: The White Hall community offers breathtaking views of Green Spring and Frog Hollow in the foothills of the North Mountain to the west, as well as views of the greater Shenandoah Valley to the east