Original sentence: Boa Kwon (born November 5 1986 in Guri, Gyeonggi-do, South Korea) is a South Korean singer, commonly known by her stage name BoA, and  the letters of her first name have been given the acronym of Beat of Angel
Edited sentence: Boa Kwon (born November 5 1986 in Guri, Gyeonggi-do, South Korea) is a South Korean singer, commonly known by her stage name BoA, and  the letters of her first name have been given the acronym of Beat of Angel and Best of Asia