Original sentence: Finally, in many places, the social status and pay of police can lead to major problems with recruitment and morale.However, truly independent organizations are generally not called in except for the most openly severe cases.In the comparatively rare event that an officer breaks this code on a significant scale, they may receive death threats or even be left for dead, as in the case of Frank Serpico.One way to fight such corruption is by having an independent or semi-independent organization investigate, such as (in the United States) the FBI, internal affairs, or the Justice Department.Police forces also find themselves under criticism for their use of force, particularly deadly force, when a police officer of one race kills a suspect of another race.Police organizations must sometimes deal with the issue of police corruption, which is often abetted by a code of silence that encourages unquestioning loyalty to one's comrades over the cause of justice.Some police organizations, especially in multi-racial or multi-ethnic areas, are faced with routine accusations of racial profiling
Edited sentence: Critics, especially those mindful of the potential for state tyranny (see "police state"), argue that police organizations are a means by which the state implements its monopoly on the use of force.Finally, in many places, the social status and pay of police is now leading to major problems with recruitment and morale.In the US, this is accomplished by having an independent or semi-independent organization investigate such as the FBI, internal affairs, or the Justice Department.Police forces also find themselves under criticism for their use of force, particularly deadly force when a police officer of one race kills a suspect of another race.Police organizations also must sometimes deal with the issue of police corruption which is often abetted by a code of silence that encourages unquestioning loyalty to one's comrades over the cause of justice and treating those who disagree with that stance with contempt like Frank Serpico.Since police are usually the most visible of all law enforcement organisations, they are often accused of not being effective enough in cases where the real blame may lie with the courts or the prosecution authorities.Some police organizations, especially in multi-racial or multi-ethnic areas,  are faced with the perception that racial profiling is occurring