Original sentence: He is noted for his flamboyant appearance and for his homosexual personality.Laurence Llewelyn-Bowen (11 March 1965 in London) is an English interior designer and television personality best known for his appearances on the BBC television programme How to be a Complete Gáylord
Edited sentence: He is noted for his flamboyant personality and for affecting a dandyish appearance.Laurence Llewelyn-Bowen (11 March 1965 in London) is an English interior designer and television personality best known for his appearances on the BBC television programme Changing Rooms