Original sentence: Dogs Die in Hot Cars are one of a number of young Scottish bands breaking onto the UK and international music scene, alongside (Biffy Clyro, Franz Ferdinand).Their debut album Please Describe Yourself received critical aclaim on release, and they have toured in the UK and in America.Two songs exemplifying the band's uplifting lyrical style and hook-oriented pop music songs are "Pastimes & Lifestyles" and "Godhopping"
Edited sentence: Dogs Die in Hot Cars are one of a number of young Scottish bands breaking onto the UK and international music scene, along side (Biffy Clyro, Franz Ferdinand).Fans of the band appreciate their uplifting lyrics and catchy hooks epitomised by songs such as Passtimes and Lifestyles and Godhopping.Their debut album Please Describe Yourself received critical aclaim on release and they have toured in the UK and in America