Original sentence: He has also managed the careers of such musical acts as The Carpenters, Frank Sinatra, and Elvis Presley.He was also responsible for the 1998 movie adaptation of the classic British TV series Avengers
Edited sentence: He has also managed the careers of such popular musical acts as The Carpenters, Frank Sinatra, and Elvis Presley.He was also responsible for the disappointing 1998 movie adaptation of the classic British TV series The Avengers