Original sentence: Sepia Mutiny discusses issues facing first and second generation immigrants from the Indian subcontinent.Sepia Mutiny's emergence is part of the increase in mainstream diasporic Desi writing and creative arts outside the traditional genres — an expansion that is occurring not only in America, Canada, and the United Kingdom, but also on the Indian subcontinent itself.The goal of the site is to in effect capture the position of the South Asian American diaspora as it emigrates to foreign nations andprimarily North America.. Sepia Mutiny's has become a focal point of discussion for Desis on the Internet in the United States and, to some extent, other parts of the South Asian diaspora.This rapidly evolving trend can also be seen with sites like Badmash, an online comic that gained notice for its Amitabh for President campaign, South Asian magazines such as Nirali, as well as the greater prominence of Bollywood films in the United States, as can be seen by crossovers such as Bride and Prejudice, Bollywood/Hollywood and Monsoon Wedding
Edited sentence: Sepia Mutiny employs irony and wit to deal with controversial issues facing first and second generation immigrants from the Indian subcontinent as they integrate into foreign culture.Sepia Mutiny's candid approach has propelled the site into a focal point of discussion for Desis around the world.Sepia Mutiny's emergence is part of the blossoming of diasporic Desi writing and creative arts outside the traditional genres — an expansion that is occurring not only in America, Canada, and the United Kingdom, but also on the Indian subcontinent itself.The goal of the site is to in effect capture the unique position of the South Asian American diaspora as it emigrates to foreign nations.The site combines a sardonic and wry tone in its discussion of controversial political issues with a sharp awareness about what is at times an awkward dialogue between Western culture and the Indian subcontinent.This rapidly evolving trend can also be seen with sites like Badmash, an online comic that gained renown for its Amitabh for President campaign, South Asian magazines such as Nirali, as well as the greater prominence of Bollywood films in the United States, as can be seen by crossovers such as Bride and Prejudice, Bollywood/Hollywood and Monsoon Wedding