Original sentence: Charles Laurie McCawley (born August 24, 1865) was an American officer who served in the United States Marine Corps during the Spanish-American War and World War I.McCawley was born August 24,1865 in Massachusetts
Edited sentence: After accepting his appointment he went on to serve in Cuba, the Spanish-American War and World War I.Charles Laurie McCawley (August 24, 1865–April 29, 1935) was an American officer who served in the United States Marine Corps during the Spanish-American War and World War I.His father Colonel McCawley assumed the duties as the Commandant in 1895 and the younger McCawley remained on as the Chief Clerk for two years while his father was Commandant.McCawley was appinted a direct commission in the Marine Corps as a Captain.McCawley was born August 24, 1865 in Massachusetts to Charles G.McCawley who became the 8th Commandant of the Marine Corps.McCawley worked in the Commandant of the Marine Corps office as Chief Clerk from 1881 to 1897.On the day his father retired from Marine Corps service Charles L