Original sentence: He has many entries describing hatred for women after dealing with many rejections.On August 4th 2005, a lone gunman walked into a LA Fitness gym in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania and opened fire on gym members participating in an aerobics class.On entry states that he himself believed he had Auschwitz Syndrome:.While the gunman did not say a word during his attack, his gym bag contained a note providing possible clues on his motives
Edited sentence: He has many entries describing hatred for women.On August 4th 2005, 48 year old George Sodini walked into a LA Fitness gym in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania and opened fire on gym members participating in an aerobics class.On entry states that he himself believed he had Auschwitz Syndrome after dealing with rejections for nearly 20 years:.While the Sodini did not say a word during his attack, his gym bag contained a note providing possible clues on his motives