Original sentence: The girls who go there form strong bonds with their sisters and are able to reach out and help other people in their communities
Edited sentence: (SVA may be an all girls school but it is the best school in New Jersey.All we have to do is mention the school we go to and we are looked up to because of our prestigous reputation.GO SVA.Our graduation rate is 99% to 100% and I take pride in that.Our teachers are dedicated and make sure we are on top of our obligations.Saint Vincent Academy has come a long way and will continue to grow and make even more progress.The girls attend this school form strong bonds with their sisters and are able to reach out and help other people in their communities.These women have been here for a very long time and they strive to see their students do thier best.~Deborah Jones c/o 2008