Original sentence: In May 1954, over three months after the storm, Neale was on the other side of the atoll in his boat when he threw his anchor overboard, putting his back out.The problem with his back occurred a couple of months after he went back to Suwarrow in 1966
Edited sentence: According to his autobiography, in May 1954, over three months after the storm, Neale was on the other side of the atoll in his boat when he threw his anchor overboard, putting his back out.The problem with his back occurred a couple of months after he went back to Suwarrow in 1956