Original sentence: She grew up with elder sister Sally, younger brother Adam and younger sister Amy in the suburb of Allerton.. Walsh's eldest sister, Sally, appeared on the soap opera, Emmerdale, between 1997 and 2000, playing the role of Lyn Hutchinson
Edited sentence: She grew up with elder sister Sally, younger brother Adam and younger sister Amy in the suburb of Allerton.Walsh's eldest sister, Sally, appeared on the soap opera, Emmerdale, between 1997 and 2000, playing the role of Lyn Hutchinson