Original sentence: The free internet streaming has also changed.The service cuts out at the 9:01 minute mark.The time allotted to free streaming has been cut to ten minutes with two minutes of advertising
Edited sentence: The free internet streaming has also changed, to much dismay from fans as the time allotted to free streaming has been cut to 10 minutes, in which 2 of those minutes are taken up by 3 Mobile advertising and the service cuts out at the 9:01 minute mark