Original sentence: (Reference:official website of Government of Punjab(www.Among the leading personalities of Soon valley were Pir Nowbahar Shah,Kalu Pir,Dr.Pir Walayat Shah(Dr.Pirzada,Syed Majid Hussain Shah and Syed Zahid Hussain Shah.Syed Wajid H.Wali Pir) and lately his sons Syed Sajid Hussain Shah, Dr
Edited sentence: Among the leading personalities of Soon valley were Pir Nowbahar Shah,Kalu Pir,Brig(R)Zafar Iqbal Shah