Original sentence: Georgia was officially welcomed home on March 28th in a ceremony attended by Governor Sonny Perdue.When they returned, they began to hoist the missile, pulling against the ladder and cutting a nine-inch (229 mm) hole in its nose cone
Edited sentence: Georgia was officially welcomed home on March 28 in a ceremony attended by Governor Sonny Perdue.When they returned, they began to hoist the missile, pulling against the ladder and cutting a nine-inch (229 mm) hole in its nose cone