Original sentence: Born in Bangor, County Down, he attended Trinity Primary School and Bangor Grammar School.Brian Wilson MLA (born 1943) is a politician in Northern Ireland.During this period, he unsuccessfully contested North Down in the 1982 Assembly Election.He was a member of the Environment Committee and Privileges Committee in the Northern Ireland Assembly.He was elected to North Down Borough Council at the 1981 local elections and was elected Mayor in 1993/1994.He was the first member of the Green Party to be elected as member of the Northern Ireland Assembly.In the 1970s he became a member of the Northern Ireland Labour Party campaigning for social reform from where he joined the Alliance Party in 1975
Edited sentence: Born in Bangor, County Down, Wilson has campaigned for more than 30-years against discrimination and bigotry, promoting tolerance and an environmentally friendly Northern Ireland.Brian Wilson MLA (born 1943) was a Green Party politician in Northern Ireland.He attended Trinity Primary School and Bangor Grammar School.He has been involved in Northern Ireland politics throughout his adult life.He is a member of the Environment Committee and Privileges Committee in the Northern Ireland Assembly.He was elected mayor of North Down Borough Council in 1993/1994.He was the first member of his party to be elected as member of the Northern Ireland Assembly.His journey to the Green Party first began when he became a member of the Northern Ireland Labour Party campaigning for social reform from where he joined the Alliance Party in 1975