Original sentence: It models the mind is as a collection of 8 "circuits", also called "gears" or "mini-brains" with each circuit representing a higher stage of evolution than the one before it.Leary constructed the model based on the lateralization of brain function.The 8-Circuit Model of Consciousness is a theory of consciousness first proposed by psychologist Timothy Leary.This theory was never necessarily accepted by the mainstream scientific community
Edited sentence: Each stage is claimed to represent a higher stage of evolution than the one before it.Leary believed the mind is best viewed as a collection of 8 "circuits", also called "gears" or "mini-brains".Leary presented a model based on the lateralization of brain function but taking his conclusions further than orthodox neuropsychology warrants.The 8-Circuit Model of Consciousness is a model of consciousness proposed by psychologist Timothy Leary.This model was never necessarily accepted by the mainstream scientific community