Original sentence: A compassionate or just society will put resources into trying to cure disabilities medically or to improve functioning.Disability is the result of a physical condition.It may reduce the individual's quality of life and causes clear disadvantages.The medical model of disability is often cited by disabled people's civil rights groups when evaluating the costs and benefits of invasive or traumatic medical procedures, prosthetics, "cures", and medical tests such as genetic screening or preimplantation genetic diagnosis.The medical profession has a major responsibility and potential for helping disabled people
Edited sentence: A compassionate or just society will put resources into trying to 'cure' disabilities medically.A disabled person is different from 'normal' people, and should desire to become normal, or be 'cured' of their disability.Disability is a physical condition.It reduces the individual’s quality of life and causes clear disadvantages.The medical model of disability is often cited by disabled people's civil rights groups when evaluating the costs and benefits of invasive or traumatic medical procedures, prosthetics, "cures", and medical tests such as genetic screening or pre-implantation genetic diagnosis.The medical profession has the greatest responsibility and potential for helping disabled people