Original sentence: , but other common foods include barley, millet, corn, sorghum and sweet potatoes.Asian culture was predominately influenced by the great civilizations of India and China and the influence of Islam, (Welty, pp.Asians frequently live in the "big family system" often incorporating three generations under one roof, (Welty, pp.Asians have long valued education and literacy and have lived in societies led by a scholar class, (Welty, pp.Due to their location between the Middle East, Europe and other parts of Asia, they have come into contact with various other cultues, making their culture an amalgam of different cultures, (Welty, pp.Due to their many islands and coastal territory, Southeast Asians have been influenced by Indian, Japanese, Chinese and recently US cultural influences, (Welty, pp.East Asians are also mostly farmers except for modernized Japan, (Welty, pp.East Asians are connected by the commonality of Chinese cultural influence as well Indian philosophy, (Welty, pp.East Asians share some characteristics in common, (Welty, pp.Paul Thomas Welty in his book The Asians Their Evolving Heritage claims that Asians refer exclusively to people of the "South Asian Subcontinent", "Southeast Asia" and "East Asia", (Welty, pp.South Asians are a very religious people who share the commonality of having been under British rule, (Welty, pp.South Asians share a lot in common, (Welty, pp.Southeast Asians are influenced by Hinduism, Buddhism, Islam and Confucism, (Welty, pp.Southeast Asians share characteristics in common, (Welty, pp.Southeast Asians share the family system, poverty, and respect for teachers and learning, (Welty, pp.The staple food of Asians is rice or wheat (Welty, pp
Edited sentence: Paul Thomas Welty in his book The Asians Their Evolving Heritage refers to a specific region from "Pakistan on the west to Japan on the east and from the northern borders of China to the southernmost boundaries of Indonesia"