Original sentence: Eamonn McCann (born 10 March 1943) is an Irish politician, journalist and political activist from Derry, Northern Ireland.He wrote in the local Derry papers, in the Belfast Telegraph, the Irish Times, the Sunday Tribune, in the London Independent, the Guardian, the Observer – anywhere he could place a story.McCann was born and has lived most of his life in Derry.The publication of Bloody Sunday in Derry: What Really Happened was crucial in helping to bring together all the Bloody Sunday families for the first time into a single campaign
Edited sentence: Eamonn McCann (born 10 March 1943) is an Irish politician, journalist and political activist from Londonderry, Northern Ireland.He wrote in the local Londonderry papers, in the Belfast Telegraph, the Irish Times, the Sunday Tribune, in the London Independent, the Guardian, the Observer – anywhere he could place a story.McCann was born and has lived most of his life in Londonderry.The publication of Bloody Sunday in Londonderry: What Really Happened was crucial in helping to bring together all the Bloody Sunday families for the first time into a single campaign