Original sentence: the boys team was also good enough to make it into this final again in 2009 and again playing on the MCG.the crew was James Warke, Matthew Jeffery, Lachlan Meerbach and Daniel Hobbs
Edited sentence: The boys team was also good enough to make it into this final again in 2009 and again playing on the MCG.The crew was James Warke, Matthew Jeffery, Lachlan Meerbach and Daniel Hobbs