Original sentence: In the movie, James McCullen's family background is redone as his ancestor James McCullen I was only punished by the French goverment as they welded a redhot iron mask onto his face to serve as an example to others
Edited sentence: In the movie, James McCullen's family background is redone as his ancestor James McCullen I was only punished by the French monarchy while was caught selling weapons to both them and England, comdemned to have a redhot iron mask welded onto his face and serve as an example to others who attempt to overthrow the crown