Original sentence: Headnoise was one of the main pioneers of old-school Christian punk rock, appearing in mid 1990's, and lasting well over a decade.Headnoise was prominent for being on the forefront of the Southern California-based "JCHC" underground movement, along with Officer Negative, No Innocent Victim, and The Crucified.Official site.Originally based in Orange County, California, they moved in 2000 to Illinois to join with Jesus People USA (aka JPUSA), an intentional Christian community and urban ministry serving inner-city Chicago with national and international branches of ministry.They were characterized as being non-compromising in their faith, with guitar-driven, powerfully fast, sophisticated hardcore punk music and provocative Christian lyrics
Edited sentence: Headnoise was one of the main pioneers of old-school christian punkrock, apeearing in mid 1990's, and lasting well over a decade.Known for being on the forefront of the southern California based "JCHC" underground movement, along with Officer Negative, NIV, and The Crucified.Originally based in Orange County, California, they moved in 2000 to Illinois to join with Jesus People USA (aka JPUSA), an intentional christian community and urban ministry serving inner-city Chicago with national and international branches of ministry.See http//www.They were characterized as being non-compromising in their faith, with guitar-driven, powerfully fast, sophisticated hardcore punk music and non-cheesey christian lyrics