Original sentence: However Velasquez did show a few flaws with his stand up as he was dropped twice in the first round and near the start of the second round from Kongo's dangerous striking skills, but displayed an excellent chin, and persevered to dominate en route to a unanimous decision victory.The fight was stopped in round two with Velasquez earning the victory via TKO in a dominant performance.Velasquez dominated every round with his superior wrestling offensive, scoring numerous powerful takedowns and punishing Kongo with ground and pound for the majority of the three rounds.Velasquez next opponent will be against Shane Carwin  with the understanding that the winner (Carwin, via epic first round OK) will then go onto to be molested by Brock Lesnar for the UFC Heavyweight Championship.Velasquez won the bout in a convincing fashion
Edited sentence: However, Velasquez showed weakness in his stand up as he was dropped twice in the first round and near the start of the second round from Kongo's dangerous striking skills.The fight was stopped in round two with Velasquez earning the victory by TKO in a dominant performance.Velasquez won the bout in convincing fashion, dominating every round with his superior wrestling offensive, scoring numerous takedowns, and punishing Kongo with ground and pound for the majority of all three rounds.Velasquez's next opponent will be Shane Carwin  with the understanding that the winner (Carwin, via epic first round OK) will then have the oppotunity to challenge Brock Lesnar for the UFC Heavyweight Championship