Original sentence: Considered a strong competitor and a benchmark by Japan, Silicon Valley, Taiwan, and domestically, Samsung Electronics (SEC) expanded production dramatically to become the world's largest manufacturer of DRAM, refrigerators, flash memory, dvd-combo players, and a number of others and is now one of the world's leading manufacturers in plasma displays and next generation mobile phones.Due to their involvement in many fields, Samsung is involved in seemingly never-ending legal controversies, such as the one over patent infringements with companies such as Fujitsu who claim to have created plasma display technology first.Samsung has even managed to gain prominence in Japan, the home of Sony and Panasonic
Edited sentence: A seemingly unstoppable SEC had brought about mass hysteria to competitors, as Samsung is involved in seemingly never ending legal controversies, such as the one over patent infringements with companies such as Fujitsu who claim to have created plasma display technology first.Feared and revered by Japan, Silicon Valley, Taiwan, and even domestically, Samsung Electronics (SEC) with its cutthroat expansion had managed to smash market share of each and every company to become the world's largest manufacturer of DRAM, refrigerators, flash memory, dvd-combo players, and a number of others and is now one of the world's leading manufacturers in plasma displays and next generation mobile phones.Samsung has even managed to become a dominant player in notoriously picky and high tech Japan