Original sentence: Another explanation of the name is by the bird "Lom", which used to live in the area.Lommedalen is a popular area for skiing and slalom in winter time and horseback riding in summer time.Lommedalen is a rural community in a small valley in Bærum municipality, in the county of Akershus, Norway.The pilgrim road to Nidaros Cathedral in Trondheim passed through Lommedalen in medieval times and was resurrected in celebration of the 1000th anniversary of Trondheim in 1997
Edited sentence: Another explanation of the name, is by the bird "Lom", which used to live in the area.Lommedalen is a picturesque, rural community in a small valley in Bærum municipality, in the county of Akershus, Norway.Lommedalen is a popular area for skiing and slalom in winter time and horse back riding in summer time.The pilgrim road to Nidaros Cathedral in Trondheim passed through Lommedalen in medieval times and was recently resurrected in celebration of the 1000-year anniversary of Trondheim in 1997