Original sentence: Detective Moochwala was a detective who appeared in a youth magazine called Target in India during the 80's and the 90's.He is depicted as a pot-bellied, stubby legged man with little hair, and a trademark inverted 'V' moustache.The crime fighting duo were sometimes called Mooch and Pooch and managed to crack even the most difficult cases.They were a staple for a number of years, all a creation of an artist named Ajit Ninan who also had a page in the magazine called Funny World which consisted of illustrations
Edited sentence: Detective Moochwala was a fun detective who appeared in a youth magazine called Target in India during the 80's and the 90's.He is depicted as a pot-bellied, stubby legged bald guy (with just a few hair) and a trademark inverted 'V' moustache.The crime fighting duo were sometimes called Mooch and Pooch and managed to crack even the toughest of cases.They were a staple for a number of years, all a creation of a talented artist called Ajit Ninan who also had a page in the magazine called Funny World which consisted of humorous illustrations