Original sentence: Presently, the State Bank of Patiala has a network of 830 service outlets, including 750 branches, in all major cities of India, but most of the branches are located in the Indian states of Punjab, Haryana, Himachal Pradesh, Rajasthan, Jammu & Kashmir, Delhi and Chandigarh
Edited sentence: Presently, the State Bank of Patiala has a network of 830 service outlets, including 750 branches, in all major cities of India, but most of the branches are located in the Indian states of Punjab, Haryana, Himachal Pradesh, Rajasthan, Madhya Pradesh, Jammu & Kashmir, Delhi and Haryana