Original sentence: " Released in late 1984, the first single off the LP, "Out of Touch," became the groups sixth #1 hit on December 8 1984.H2O reached #3 on the album charts and spawned three top-10 singles.However, this practice was put on hold with the release of Daryl Hall and John Oates Live at the Apollo.Next came H2O, a polished, synth-heavy album that became the duo's most successful album to date
Edited sentence: " Released in late 1984, the first single off the LP, "Out of Touch," became the groups sixth #1 hit on December 8, 1984.However, this practice was put on hold with the release of Daryl Hall and John Oates Live At The Apollo.Next came H20, a polished, synth-heavy album that became the duo's most successful album to date.Not considered one of their best albums today, H2O hit #3 on the album charts and spawned three top-10 singles