Original sentence: My Super Sweet 16 is an MTV reality series depicting the travails of spoiled teenagers planning over-the-top parties and balls—including 16th birthday parties,  Cotillion balls, and Quinceañeras—all paid for by their parents
Edited sentence: My Super Sweet 16 is an MTV reality series depicting the travails of spoiled brat teenagers planning over-the-top parties and balls—including 16th birthday parties,  Cotillion balls, and Quinceañeras—all paid for by their parents