Original sentence: CIRA would have given a path to eventual citizenship to a majority of illegal aliens already in the country as well as dramatically increased legal immigration.The Comprehensive Immigration Reform Act of 2007, which would have given a path to eventual citizenship to a large majority of illegal entrants in the country, significantly increased legal immigration and increased enforcement.The attack exposed long-standing holes in the U.The bill failed to pass a cloture vote, essentially killing it.immigration system that included failures at visa processing, internal enforcement, and information sharing
Edited sentence: As the result of unprecedented public pressure, the bill failed to pass a cloture vote, essentially killing it.CIRA would have given amnesty to a majority of illegal aliens already in the country as well as dramatically increased legal immigration.The Comprehensive Immigration Reform Act of 2007, which would have given amnesty to a large majority of illegal entrants in the country, significantly increased legal immigration and increased enforcement.The act, which had bipartisan support in the Senate, was widely unpopular with the American public.The attack exposed long-standing holes in our immigration system that included failures at visa processing, internal enforcement, and information sharing