Original sentence: In addition to vague job descriptions, Vector Marketing's compensation policies are often criticized.Some of Vector's former independent contractors have accused Vector Marketing of deceptive business practices.The firm frequently advertises in newspapers and on fliers posted on bulletin boards at college campuses, but seldom do those advertisements explain the nature of the job.They recruit sales representatives from high schools and college campuses in the United States and Canada, sometimes through misrepresentation of affiliation with the school.Vector Marketing is a multi-level marketing company that builds its sales force through advertising via newspapers, word-of-mouth, posted advertisements, letters and various media on the internet.Vector Marketing is a multi-level marketing subsidiary company and the domestic sales arm of Cutco Corporation, an Olean, New York-based cutlery manufacturer
Edited sentence: But, as independent contractors they are able to get tax breaks for their transportations expenses, foods they purchase for their one-on-one appointments, and various other things.The firm frequently advertises in newspapers and on fliers posted on bulletin boards at college campuses.They recruit sales representatives from high schools and college campuses in the United States and Canada.Vector Marketing is a direct sales subsidiary company and the domestic sales arm of Cutco Corporation, an Olean, New York-based cutlery manufacturer.Vector Marketing is a single-level marketing company that builds its sales force through advertising via newspapers, word-of-mouth, posted advertisements, letters and various media on the internet.Vector Marketing's compensation policies are often criticized