Original sentence: "Zero to Zenith" - Start-Up story published by Penguin Random House 2017.All applicants for medical assistance from the Melam foundation are met and interviewed before disbursement of any assistance.He entered into business in order to generate funds for carrying out charitable activities.He personally meets each patient/relative, however large the turnout is.He was honoured by the Government of India, in 2010, for his services to the social cause, with the fourth highest civilian award, the Padma Shri.Kurian John Melamparambil's work has resulted in establishing a network of more than 1025 hospitals across the state for providing specialized treatment to the sponsored patients within a 30 days credit period for reimbursement from him.With his own generated funds, he has provided free medical treatment to over 158,000 poor patients through 1050 hospitals
Edited sentence: "Zero to Zenith" - an inspiring Start-Up story published by Penguin Random House 2017.All applicants for medical assistance from the Melam foundation are personally met and interviewed before disbursement of any assistance.He  personally meets each patient/relative, however large the turnout is.He may be the only personality in India who ventured into business to raise funds to provide free medical treatment to poor and needy patients.He ventured into the business scenario for generating funds for carrying out charitable activities.The continuous efforts and perseverance of Kurian John Melamparambil has resulted in establishing a network of more than 1025 renowned hospitals across the state for providing specialized treatment to the sponsored patients within a 30 days credit period for reimbursement from him.With his own generated funds, he has already provided free medical treatment to over 1,58,000 poor patients through 1050 hospitals He was honoured by the Government of India, in 2010, for his services to the social cause, with the fourth highest civilian award, the Padma Shri