Original sentence: Wallace is arguably most responsible for establishing the Collins family and its mysterious relationship to the orphan Victoria Winters.When Vicki becomes the family governess at Collinwood, she becomes embroiled in a web of conspiracy, murder, and secrets -- highly reminiscent of several Alfred Hitchcock pictures
Edited sentence: However, Art Wallace deserves the credit for establishing the Collins family and its mysterious relationship to the orphan Victoria Winters.When Vicki becomes the family governess at Collinwood, she becomes embroiled in a web of conspiracy, murder, and secrets -- highly reminiscent of the best Alfred Hitchcock pictures