Original sentence: Pullen Park is a 72 acre park public park in Raleigh, North Carolina.The park has playgrounds, rides, concessions, free parking, souvenir sales, picnic and organized sports areas.There is a small fee (as of 2006 tickets are $1) for the carousel, train and boat rides, as well as an admission fee for the adjacent Aquatic Center and rental fees to reserve picnic shelters and rent paddle boats
Edited sentence: Admission to the park is free but there is a small fee (currently tickets are $1) for the carousel, train and kiddie boat rides, as well as an admission fee for the adjacent Aquatic Center and rental fees to reserve Picnic Shelters and rent paddle boats.Pullen Park is a scenic 72 acre park public park in Raleigh, North Carolina.The park offers playgrounds, rides and attractions, concessions, free parking, souvenir sales, picnic and organized sports areas