Original sentence: Also, workers in Krakow organized a massive demonstration of support.It is estimated that several million peasants took part in the demonstrations.It was the largest political protest in the Second Polish Republic.It was the largest political protest in the Second Polish Republic, and it was supported not only by Polish peasants, but also by the Ukrainian and Belarusian farmers, who made a majority in eastern part of the Second Polish Republic.Various protests occurred throughout 12 voivodeships of the Second Polish Republic
Edited sentence: It is estimated that several million peasants took part in the demonstrations, and the strike was supported not only by Polish peasants, but also by the Ukrainian and Belarusian farmers, who made a majority in eastern part of the Second Polish Republic.It was the largest political protest in the Second Polish Republic, taking place in 12 voivodeships of the Second Polish Republic