Original sentence: " When Larsen crashed his car into a lightpole in the middle of the night during spring training, after curfew, Stengel quipped, "He must have went out to mail a letter.Both TV announcers--Hall of Fame sportscasters Mel Allen, who did the first half of the game, and Vin Scully, who did the second half of the game--adhered to the baseball custom of never using the words "no-hitter" or "perfect game" on the air; instead, Scully, in the later innings, made repeated reference to the number of Dodgers retired consecutively, and, at the beginning of the ninth inning, stated that "Yankee Stadium is shivering to its concrete foundations.Donald James Larsen (born August 7, 1929 in Michigan City, Indiana) was a Major League Baseball pitcher for 14 seasons.On January 1, 2009, the MLB (Major League Baseball) Network made its debut, and on the first evening on the air it showed the kinescope of NBC-TV's original broadcast of Larsen's perfect game--the first such network showing of the game in 52 years.{Connie Mack Stadium -- September 13, 1953 (1)}
Edited sentence: " When Larsen crashed his car into a light pole in the middle of the night during spring training, after curfew, Stengel quipped, "He must have went out to mail a letter.Both TV announcers—Hall of Fame sportscasters Mel Allen, who did the first half of the game, and Vin Scully, who did the second half of the game—adhered to the baseball custom of never using the words "no-hitter" or "perfect game" on the air; instead, Scully, in the later innings, made repeated reference to the number of Dodgers retired consecutively, and, at the beginning of the ninth inning, stated that "Yankee Stadium is shivering to its concrete foundations.Donald James Larsen (born August 7, 1929 in Michigan City, Indiana) is a former Major League Baseball pitcher who played for 14 seasons.On January 1, 2009, the MLB (Major League Baseball) Network made its debut, and on the first evening on the air it showed the kinescope of NBC-TV's original broadcast of Larsen's perfect game—the first such network showing of the game in 52 years.{Connie Mack Stadium—September 13, 1953 (1)}