Original sentence: In 1500, Pedro Álvares Cabral, a Portuguese explorer, arrived at Anjediva in Goa with eight Franciscan missionaries.These missionaries under the leadership of Henrique Soares de Coimbra converted 22 or 23 persons to Christianity in South Canara
Edited sentence: In 1500, Pedro Álvares Cabral, a Portuguese explorer, arrived at Anjediva in North Canara with eight Franciscan missionaries.These missionaries under the leadership of Henrique Soares de Coimbra converted 22 or 23 natives to Christianity in the Mangalore region