Original sentence: Byrne has been critical of elements within the industry.His opinions and creative differences with former collaborators have become a subject a heated debate amongst some sections of comics fandom
Edited sentence: Byrne prides himself on his professionalism and and he has been critical of elements within the industry who he believes do not share that professionalism.His forthright opinions and creative differences with former collaborators have become a subject a heated debate amongst some sections of comics fandom