Original sentence: Danny Lawson played junior for the Hamilton Red Wings of the Ontario Hockey Association, at the time sponsored by the NHL Detroit Red Wings, with improving offensive totals in each of his four years with the club.In his last year, 1967-68, he scored 52 goals and led the team in points.Lawson's best team performance was in 1966-67 when Hamilton finished 4th but had a strong playoff run making it to the OHA finals before being swept 4-0 by the Toronto Marlboros
Edited sentence: Danny Lawson played junior for the Hamilton Red Wings of the Ontario Hockey Association, at the time sponsored by the NHL Detroit Red Wings.His individual offensive totals improved each year until in 1967-68, his last year, he scored 52 goals and led the team in points.Lawson's best team experience was in 1966-67 when Hamilton finished 4th but had a strong playoff run making it to the OHA finals before being swept 4-0 by the Toronto Marlboros