Original sentence: Notable clubs include BSU (Black Student Union) and VISA (Vietnamese International Student Association) for the school's two largest ethnic populations
Edited sentence: Notable clubs include BSU (Black Student Union) and VISA (Vietnamese International Student Association) for the school's two largest ethnic populations By popular demand, MSA (Muslim Society of America) has been considered the best club by many, and, though unorganized, does various futile activites in the hope that it will be considered an actual, successful, club