Original sentence: Her relatives would not even hear the proposal of young Sune Folkason, son of an earl who had been among Sverker's opponents in that battle (and alsi himself fell).Sune Folkason abducted Helena and took her, according to folklore, to castele of Ymseborg.They married, and two daughters survived from the marriage
Edited sentence: Her relatives would not even hear the proposal of young Sune Folkason, son of an earl who had been among Sverker's opponents in that battle (and also himself fell).Sune Folkason abducted Helena and took her, according to folklore, to the castle of Ymseborg.They married, and two daughters resulted from the marriage