Original sentence: In the 1990s, a plan for a housing development was proposed in the Laurelwood valley.It is located southwest of the Portland metropolitan area near Oregon Route 47 and the city of Gaston.Laurelwood Seventh-Day Adventist Elementary School still exists, and now has enrollment of about 20, in grades 1-8.Laurelwood is a farming community, with a population partially composed of retirees and former students and teachers of Laurelwood Acadameny.Laurelwood is an unincorporated community in Washington County, Oregon, United States.Laurelwood is still mostly composed of homes situated on one to ten acres.Neighbors in the community defeated the proposal.Twenty years ago Laurelwood hosted Laurelwood Seventh-Day Adventist Academy where an average of 300 students attended per year
Edited sentence: 20 years ago Laurelwood hosted Laurelwood Seventh-Day Adventist Academy where 300 students attended, on average, per year.In the 1990's, a plan for a housing development from a powerful local family was proposed in the Laurelwood valley.It is now a farming community, home to mostly retirees and a small population of former students, faculty, and those not affiliated with the school.Laurelwood Seventh-Day Adventist Elementary School still exists, and now has enrollment of about 20 per year, in grades 1-8.Laurelwood is still mostly composed of homes on 1-10 acres of farmland, forest, and barren fields.Laurelwood, Oregon is located southwest of Portland, Oregon about 10 minutes from Highway 8 and Gaston, Oregon.Neighbors in the town banded together, fought, and defeated the proposal