Original sentence: The LeeStock Music Festival (originally known as LeeFest) is an annual music festival, held in Sudbury, Suffolk since 2006 in memory of a local man, Lee Dunford, who died the same year
Edited sentence: The LeeStock Music Festival (originally known as LeeFest) is an annual music festival, held in Sudbury, Suffolk since 2006 in memory of a popular local, Lee Dunford, who died the same year