Original sentence: Rohit Navelkhar also helped the team by having an undefeated record the entire season in the 4th position.The following year the boy's tennis team would win their second straight 3A state championship.With the conquest of the number 2 doubles position by Mitch Wong, the Wildcats sealed the deal
Edited sentence: Rohit Navelkhar had an undefeated record the entire season in the 4th position.The following year the boy's tennis team would win their second straight 3A state championship, sharing the title.With the conquest of the number 2 doubles position by Alex Bartholomew and Mitch(Ting Ting) Wong, the Wildcats took states