Original sentence: During his tenure with the Phiharmonic, Stransky received praise for his interpretations of Franz Liszt and [[Richard Strauss].However, Daniel Gregory Mason expressed his dissatisfaction with what he referred to as "the Wagnerian, Lisztian and Tschaikowskian pap ladled out to us by ... Stransky of the Phihamonic Society", and even went as far as to call the conductor "a total musical incompetent"
Edited sentence: During Stransky's tenure with the Phiharmonic, Daniel Gregory Mason expressed his dissatisfaction with what he referred to as "the Wagnerian, Lisztian and Tschaikowskian pap ladled out to us by ... Stransky of the Phihamonic Society", and even went as far as to call the conductor "a total musical incompetent"