Original sentence: Journalist and author Gary Weiss, in his critical 2006 book Wall Street Versus America, contends that Grasso earned his pay by preserving the NYSE's floor-trading model despite its obsolescence
Edited sentence: Journalist and author Gary Weiss, in his noxious 2006 book Wall Street Versus America, contends that Grasso earned his pay by preserving the NYSE's floor-trading model despite its obsolescence