Original sentence: A closer look, however, reveals this would not work for everyone.Also, most of the established companies have already patented most of the generally available knowledge.Economy of scale - It is almost impossible today to successfully start a business.Ethics difference - As in other countries, actions considered ethical vary between Americans.For example, a CEO who sees stock options as theft would find it harder to reach his or her American dream than a pragmatist CEO.For example, the recent repeal of inheritance tax and capital gains tax may work to further solidify the class system.In particular some of the reasons the whole concept seems to be a myth to some are:.In the US it is difficult for children of poor families to afford college; not attending college sets upper limits on their career success, and it is very difficult to earn a bachelors' degree — necessary for many fields — in one's free time once one begins working full-time.Limited economic mobility - The affluent have sometimes managed to bribe the government to their advantage.Some research has suggested, convincingly in a few cases, that features like height and race give some people advantages over others.These elements make it much more difficult to survive in the new economy.This is because the economy of scale is necessary to survive in a commodity market
Edited sentence: A closer looks however reveal this would not work for everyone.And most of the established companies have already patented most of the general available knowledge making it virtually impossible to survive in the new economy.Economy of scale - Its almost impossible today to successfully start a business.Ethics difference - As in any other countries, actions considered ethical vary between Americans.For example, a CEO who see stock options as theft would find it hard reaching his or her American dream than a pragmatist CEO.For example, the recent repeal of inheritance tax and capital gain tax is only going to solidify further the class system.In particular some of the reasons that have lead the whole concept to be a myth are:.Limited economic mobility - Over time, the affluent have managed to bribe the government to their advantage.Research have confirmed that some features like height and colour give some people advantage over the others.This is because economy of scale is necessary to survive in commodity market.in the US it is difficult for children of poor families to afford college; not attending college sets upper limits on their career success, and it is essentially impossible to earn a bachelors' degree — necessary for many fields — in one's free time once one begins working full-time