Original sentence: Also, low tuition and rigorous academics make Grove City College a generally attractive local alternative to state schools in Pennsylvania and the surrounding region.While loosely associated with the Presbyterian Church (USA), the college is non-denominational and does not require students to sign a statement of faith, though they are required to attend sixteen chapel services per semester
Edited sentence: While loosely associated with the Presbyterian Church (USA), the college is non-denominational and does not require students to sign a statement of faith, though they are required to attend chapel services a certain number of times per semester.Yet, low tuition and solid academics make Grove City College a generally attractive local alternative to state schools in Pennsylvania and the surrounding region