Original sentence: He, and others in his contingent, described the area as a beautiful place fragrent with sage and rosemary, and having rich grasslands for their horses and cattle to graze.The route taken by the expedition is believed to have followed a course from somewhere near Lake Perris, in current-day Moreno Valley, down the Box Springs grade near the 60/215 Highway interchange, and across Riverside in the direction of the Martha McLean – Anza Narrows park
Edited sentence: He, and others in his contingent, described the area as a beautiful place fragrent with rosemary and other herbs, and having rich grasslands for their horses and cattle to graze.The routes taken by the two expeditions is believed to have followed a course from somewhere near Lake Perris, in current-day Moreno Valley, down the Box Springs grade near the 60/215 Highway interchange, and across Riverside in the direction of the Martha McLean – Anza Narrows park.To commemorate De Anza's expeditions, the city of Riverside, through private donations and a federal grant, constructed a 20 foot statue of De Anza in May, 1942 at the corner of Market and 14th streets