Original sentence: Environmental Protection Agency has recently implemented revised emission standards for diesel trucks (reducing airborne pollutants emitted by diesel engines) which promises to improve air quality and public health.Recent developments in technology, such as computers, satellite communication, and the internet, have contributed to many improvements within the industry.The U
Edited sentence: Developments in technology, such as computers, satellite communication, and the internet, have contributed to many improvements within the industry.Environmental Protection Agency implemented revised emission standards for diesel trucks (reducing airborne pollutants emitted by diesel engines) which promises to improve air quality and public health.In 2006, the U