Original sentence: She also made a number of television appearances in the 1950s, including one with memorable encounter with comedian Jimmy Durante on NBC's All Star Review on December 1, 1951 (preserved on a kinescope)
Edited sentence: She also made a number of television appearances in the 1950s, including one with memorable encounter with comedian Jimmy Durante on NBC's All Star Revue on December 1, 1951 (preserved on a kinescope)