Original sentence: A pedestrian walkway known as Rowley Way runs between these two blocks.Play areas and a public park seperate these blocks, from the third, the Ainsworth Way block.The desire to control the sound and vibration from the trains was a major consideration in the layout of the estate.The higher, 8 story block directly adjacent to the railway line is organised in the form a ziggurat, and acts as a noise barrier that blocks the noise of the trains from reaching the interior portion of the site
Edited sentence: A lower, 4-story block runs along the other side of a continuous pedestrian walkway, known as Rowley Way, serving both terraced rows of buildings.The desire to control the sound and vibration from passing trains was a major consideration in the layout of the estate.The higher, 8-story block directly adjacent to the railway line is organised in the form a ziggurat, and acts as a noise barrier that blocks the noise of the trains from reaching the interior portion of the site.The third row of buildings, along the southern edge of the site, parallels another public walkway, Langtry Walk, between this row and the existing earlier buildings of the Ainsworth Estate and defines an open public park with play areas between the second and third row of dwellings