Original sentence: Murder In The First alleges that Young was tortured after his escape attempt, that he killed McCain in the cafeteria immediately after his return to the general population, and that he committed suicide in 1942 after his trial in order to avoid returning to Alcatraz after writing the word “victory” on the wall
Edited sentence: Murder in the First alleges that Young was tortured after his escape attempt, that he killed McCain in the cafeteria immediately after his return to the general population, and that he committed suicide in 1942 after his trial in order to avoid returning to Alcatraz after writing the word “victory” on the wall