Original sentence: Rascalize, how they called their debut album, was released in June 23th of 2008 and sees the band play a brand of raucous British indie rock inspired by the sounds of the 1960s as well as contemporaries such as Arctic Monkeys, The Coral and The Zutons
Edited sentence: Rascalize, how they called their debut album, was released in 23th June of 2008 (first released on iTunes on June 15, 2008) and sees the band play a brand of raucous British indie rock inspired by the sounds of the 1960s as well as contemporaries such as Arctic Monkeys, The Coral and The Zutons