Original sentence: The eight-bar alto saxophone solo apparently led to a resurgence described as "the 'Baker Street' phenomenon".There followed a jump in saxophone sales, and a noticeable increase in the use of the instrument in mainstream pop music and TV advertising
Edited sentence: " There followed a jump in saxophone sales, and a noticeable increase in the use of the instrument in mainstream pop music and TV advertising.The eight-bar alto saxophone solo led to a resurgence described as "the 'Baker Street' phenomenon