Original sentence: Józef Kazimierz Hofmann (born January 20, 1876 in Kraków, Poland; died February 16, 1957 in Los Angeles), was a Polish-American pianist and composer.Sergei Rachmaninoff considered Hofmann his superior as a pianist and dedicated his Piano Concerto No
Edited sentence: Józef Kazimierz Hofmann (born January 20, 1876 in Kraków, Poland; died February 16, 1957 in Los Angeles), was a great Polish-American pianist and composer.Rachmaninoff considered Hofmann his superior as a pianist and dedicated his Piano Concerto No