Original sentence: The Village Voice said, "I've seen a lot of terrible movies in the line of duty, but What Goes Up might be the only genuinely unreleasable one," while Variety described it as "a pointless and pretentious drama that -- given its title and direct linkage to the 1986 Challenger shuttle disaster -- nearly adds tasteless to its unflattering hat trick.com called it "a darkly funny and wonderfully twisted story that marches to its own surprising beat
Edited sentence: It’s a darkly funny and wonderfully twisted story that marches to its own surprising beat.Other positive reviews came from: Jeffery Lyons of NBC, UGO.Variety described it as "a pointless and pretentious drama that -- given its title and direct linkage to the 1986 Challenger shuttle disaster -- nearly adds tasteless to its unflattering hat trick.com called it " A complete original and definitely not your typical teen comedy.com,Film Fiend,and GordonandtheWhale