Original sentence: Her use of a private email server during her time as Secretary of State was later investigated for possible disclosure of classified information; in 2016, the FBI criticized Clinton regarding her e-mails, but recommended that no charges be filed.She also took responsibility for security lapses related to the 2012 Benghazi attack which resulted in the deaths of American consulate personnel, but defended her personal actions in regard to the matter
Edited sentence: Her use of a private email server during her time as Secretary of State, for which no charges were filed, was the subject of intense scrutiny; it was the single most covered topic during the 2016 presidential election.She was harshly criticized by Republicans for the 2012 Benghazi attack who conducted multiple congressional investigations of her in the lead-up to her expected 2016 presidential campaign.The emails controversy received more media coverage than any other topic during the 2016 presidential election