Original sentence: A number of major music acts, including Joe Cocker, Def Leppard, Arctic Monkeys, Bring Me the Horizon, Rolo Tomassi, While She Sleeps, Pulp and Moloko, hail from the city
Edited sentence: A number of major music acts, including Joe Cocker, Def Leppard, Arctic Monkeys, Rolo Tomassi, While She Sleeps, Pulp and Moloko, hail from the city