Original sentence: "For conspicuous conduct in battle during the Spanish–American War" One of three to receive both the Brevet Medal and the Medal of Honor."For distinguished conduct and public service in the presence of the enemy during the Boxer Rebellion"  He is the only Marine to have been awarded the Brevet Medal and the Navy Specially Meritorious Service Medal."For distinguished conduct and public service in the presence of the enemy during the Philippine Insurrection" One of three to both receive the Brevet Medal and the Medal of Honor.One of 19 to receive the Medal of Honor twice
Edited sentence: "For conspicuous conduct in battle during the Spanish–American War"."For distinguished conduct and public service in the presence of the enemy during the Boxer Rebellion"  He is the only Marine to have been awarded both the Brevet Medal and the Navy Specially Meritorious Service Medal."For distinguished conduct and public service in the presence of the enemy during the Philippine Insurrection".One of nineteen to receive the Medal of Honor twice.One of three to both receive the Brevet Medal and the Medal of Honor.One of three to receive both the Brevet Medal and the Medal of Honor