Original sentence: The building of Portobello High School is 8 floors high (not including the ground) with numerous extensions and additional annex buildings, including gymnasium, music department and school houses.There were three plans for developing the a new school building
Edited sentence: As well as 4 separate houserooms and a new annexe containing maths class rooms.For many years now, this building has been critcised and has lacked proper maintenance.It is hoped locally that it will soon be replaced.The building of Portobello High School, is very tall at 8 floors (not including the ground) with an extension that continues the first 2 floors, round 90 degrees.The controversial case for the new school is an interesting case which has absorbed Edinburgh following the promise of the Scottish National Party's promises for an Edinburgh tram system which has left the city without much money.There are several locations proposed for the new school, and the issue has caused much controversy.There were three plans for developing the new school, plans A, B and C