Original sentence: As of 2001 India census, Dharchula had a population of 6424.Dharchula has an average literacy rate of 75%, higher than the national average of 59.5%: male literacy is 80% and, female literacy is 69%.Dharchula is a town and a nagar panchayat in Pithoragarh district  in the state of Uttaranchal, India.Dharchula is on the route to the Kailash-Mansarovar pilgrimage tour.In Dharchula, 12% of the population is under 6 years of age.It is situated in the border of Tibet (China).Males constitute 54% of the population and females 46%
Edited sentence: Dharchula is on the route to the Kailash Mansarover pilgrimage tour.It is situated in the border of Tibet (China), and is a sub-division of the Pithoragarh district of Uttaranchal state of India