Original sentence: Amidst the high-pitched screams and shrills of the vocals, it is impossible to discern what is being said.Costumed in skin-tight, full-body, white (or green) suits with large, black mesh, bug-like eye and mouth coverings, these suits help create atmosphere during their shows.The Locust have a unique stage presence.They are known to produce tasteless merchandise such as their puddle-shaped (and bodily fluid-coloured) 7" split with Arab on Radar, compacts which some say look suspiciously like cocaine mirrors, and small comic books that look like a Chick tract, coinciding with their debut record on ANTI Records
Edited sentence: Amidst the high-pitched screams and shrills of the vocals, and the farts, it is impossible to discern what is being said....Costumed in skin-tight, full-body, white (or green) suits with large, black mesh, bug-like eye and mouth coverings, these suits help create a lame and cheap atmosphere during their shows.The Locust have a disgusting stage presence.To make things worse and sadly, purposefully, they produce tasteless merchandise such as their puddle-shaped (and bodily fluid-coloured) 7" split with Arab on Radar compacts which look suspiciously like cocaine mirrors, and small comic books that look like a Chick tract coinciding with their debut record on ANTI Records