Original sentence: Although there is some controversy on whether it was actually a dunk, there is no rule saying one must touch the rim.For his effort, he garnered a 50.He was actually so high that he threw the ball into the basket without touching the rim.Howard performed numerous, amazing "unhumanlike" (as described by TNT announcer Kenny "The Jet" Smith) dunks
Edited sentence: Although there is some controversy on whether it was a dunk, there is no rule saying you must touch the rim.For his effort, he copped a 50.He was actually so high, he threw the ball into the basket without touching the rim.Howard, a favorite coming into the event performed numerous amazing, "unhumanlike" (as described by TNT announcer Kenny "The Jet" Smith) dunks