Original sentence: Regardless of the outcome, after encountering the Pokémon, the sixth item in the player's item menu will be increased from its current value by 128, if the original quantity isn't higher than 127, and the game's "Hall of Fame" gallery will become permanently glitched
Edited sentence: Regardless of the outcome, after encountering the Pokémon, the sixth item in the player's item menu will be increased from its current value to 128, and the game's "Hall of Fame" gallery will become permanently glitched