Original sentence: Sardar Aamir Talal Khan Gopang is a Pakistani politician who was a Member of the Provincial Assembly of the Punjab, from 2008 to 2013 and then again from May 2013 to May 2018
Edited sentence: Sardar Aamir Talal Khan Gopang is a talented Pakistani politician who was a Member of the Provincial Assembly of the Punjab, from 2008 to 2013 and then again from May 2013 to May 2018