Original sentence: The books were made into two films and a BBC television program.The books, which told of many comic incidents in his career working for farmers and townsfolk in the Yorkshire Dales of the North of England, were enormously popular, and by the time of his death he was one of the foremost best-selling authors in both Britain and the United States.The television program, called All Creatures Great and Small, ran for seven series and a total of 90 episodes, with Christopher Timothy as Herriot.Wight was born in Roker, Sunderland, England where his parents came from, but brought up in Glasgow, Scotland where at the age of twenty-three he qualified as a veterinarian
Edited sentence: The books were made into two films and a major BBC television series.The books, which told of many comic incidents in his career working for farmers and townsfolk in the fabulously beautiful Yorkshire Dales of the North of England, were enormously popular, and by the time of his death he was one of the foremost best-selling authors in both Britain and the United States.Wight was born in Roker, Sunderland where his parents came from, but brought up in Glasgow where at the age of twenty-three he qualified as a veterinarian