Original sentence: Famed Indian novelist Khushwant Singh stated  that [Operation Blue Star] gave the movement for Khalistan its first martyr in Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale.He tried to spread his perceived values of Sikhism and persuaded young people to follow the original rules and tenets of the religion.Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale was praised by many Sikhs as a matyr of common time, but by other Sikhs he was considered a terrorist
Edited sentence: At school he dropped out of school at an early age, unable to read, write or communicate in English so pursued farming.Famed Indian novelist Khushwant Singh stated  that Operation Blue Star gave the movement for Khalistan its first martyr in Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale.He tried to spread his perceived values of Sikhism and persuaded young people to follow the original rules and tenets of the religion alongside his own political campaign.Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale was praised by many Sikhs as a matyr of common time, but by other Sikhs and the western media he was considered a terrorist.Professor Mark Jurgensmeyer concluded in his paper on Religious violence that "The more that we can resist appearing like the evil enemy that the Bhindranwales and Bin Ladens of this world say that we are, the better off we are in diffusing the vicious.spiral of violence and dissipating images of cosmic war