Original sentence: Mostly bathing is safe within the patrolled area and there are rock pools.Poppit Sands is a sandy beach at the estuary of the River Teifi near Cardigan in Wales.The area is a gathering spot for surfers and boogie-boarders.The beach has a view of Cardigan Island.The beach is sloping so the sea is shallow a long way out
Edited sentence: A local photographer has spent three years working on Poppit Sands - creating a collection of work that earned him a finalist position in the prestigious Hasselblad Masters Award for 2008 and 2009.Here beach-goers can purchase beach toys and wet suits.Mostly bathing is safe within the patrolled area and there are great rock pools for the children.Poppit Sands is a very large, sandy beach at the estuary of the River Teifi near Cardigan in Wales.The beach has an outstanding view of Cardigan Island.The beach is very gently sloping so the sea is shallow a long way out.The shop serves ice cream and mid-day meals.There is a shop across the road from the beach entrance.This spot is a significant gathering spot for surfers and boogie-boarders alike