Original sentence: He then kills Carla Jean offscreen.Llewelyn Moss (Josh Brolin), hunting pronghorn, comes across the aftermath of a drug deal gone awry: a collection of corpses, a wounded Mexican begging for water (whom he ignores due to not having water with him), and two million dollars in a satchel that he stashes under his trailer home
Edited sentence: Llewelyn Moss (Josh Brolin), hunting pronghorn, comes across the aftermath of a drug deal gone awry: a collection of corpses, a wounded Mexican begging for water, and two million dollars in a satchel that he stashes under his trailer home