Original sentence: Humane organizations criticize the trap for causing protracted death, however research conducted by the National Trapping Association claims to have shown that the traps can be humane when properly operated.The body gripping traps are traps designed to kill the trapped animal quickly.The prey animal must be lured with a bait or guided into the correct position before the trap is triggered.The trap is designed to strike at the back of the neck or behind the shoulders of the targeted animal and dislocate the spine.They are frequently called "Conibear" traps after Canadian Frank Conibear who first constructed this type of trap, which is similar to a simple mousetrap
Edited sentence: Humane organizations criticize the trap for causing prolonged death, however research has shown that when properly operated, they are considered one of the more humane methods of trapping.The animal must be lured with a bait or guided into the correct position before the trap is triggered.The body gripping traps are traps made to kill the animal caught in minutes or less.The trap is usually built to strike at the back of the neck or behind the shoulders of the targeted animal and dislocate the spine.They are frequently called "Conibear" traps after Frank Conibear from Canada who first came up with this type of trap, but even a simple mousetrap is one