Original sentence: Maidstone Grammar School (MGS) is a Grammar school located in Maidstone, United Kingdom.Nick Argent, as announced in February 2009.The School holds both a Language College award for outstanding effort being placed into the Language Department and now holds the Healthy School award after a successful change-over to a new company providing the meals available to both students and staff.The current Headmaster, Mr Neil Anthony Turrell is leaving MGS at the end of the 2008/9 school year.The new headmaster will be Dr.The school currently holds almost 1300 students and approximately 120 members of staff
Edited sentence: Maidstone Grammar School (MGS) is a grammar school located in Maidstone, United Kingdom.The school currently has almost 1300 students and approximately 120 members of staff.The school holds both a Language College award for outstanding effort being placed into the Language Department and now holds the Healthy School award after a successful change-over to a new company providing the meals available to both students and staff