Original sentence: In August 2007 the Wikipedia Scanner utility revealed that Wikipedia articles relating to Fox News had been anonymously edited from IP addresses owned by Fox News.The new tool showed that such edits from corporate or government computers were not uncommon, but the Fox edits drew attention for removing or changing content to articles, including Al Franken, Keith Olbermann, Chris Wallace, Shepard Smith, and Brit Hume
Edited sentence: In August 2007 the Wikipedia Scanner utility identifed thousands of anonymous edits via IP addresses, including some from computers on FOX's network.These edits recieved attention on several liberal blogs, but little attention from mainstream news sources