Original sentence: Robert Cutler, author of "The Mysterious Death of Jane Stanford," recounted what took place upon the arrival of Dr.The New York Times published, on November 27, 1890, a report from The Critic, that Jane Stanford had "become a convert to the doctrines of the Roman Catholic Church"
Edited sentence: On November 27, 1890, The New York Times published a report from The Critic, that Jane Stanford had "become a convert to the doctrines of the Roman Catholic Church.Robert Cutler, author of "The Mysterious Death of Jane Stanford", recounted what took place upon the arrival of Dr