Original sentence: Some 38% of the province's population are members of minorities, including the.Yi (sometimes to include the Eastern Lipo), Bai, Hani, Tai, Dai, Miao (including the A-Hmao), Lisu (sometimes to include the Eastern Lipo), Hui, Lahu, Va, Nakhi, Yao, Tibetan, Jingpo, Blang, Pumi, Nu, Achang, Jinuo, Mongolian, Derung, Manchu, Shui, and Buyei
Edited sentence: Some 38% of the province's population are members of minorities, including the Yi, Bai, Hani, Tai, Dai, Miao, Lisu, Hui, Lahu, Va, Nakhi, Yao, Tibetan, Jingpo, Blang, Pumi, Nu, Achang, Jinuo, Mongolian, Derung, Manchu, Shui, and Buyei