Original sentence: Bandler's heavy use of cocaine and alcohol continued through to 1986 when he was implicated in the murder of prostitute Corine Christensen and tried for her murder.Bandler's trial ran for three months where he was represented by M.By the end of 1980 Bandler's collaboration with Grinder -- where they lectured, trained and co-authored -- abruptly ended and his wife filed for divorce (after two years of marriage).Gerald Schwartzbach [].In 1980 Bandler's company Not Ltd had reported earnings of more than US$800,000 and he and his then wife -- Leslie Cameron-Bandler -- were living an opulent lifestyle.Leslie Cameron-Bandler was later to report that Bandler was emotionally and physically abusive.Schwartzbach secured an acquittal for Bandler.The value of Bandler's independent (and trademarked) creations is a matter of some controversy amongst NLP students and practitioners (see[] and alt.[]  In 1983, Not Ltd declared bankruptcy
Edited sentence: " This article detailed Bandlers eccentric personality and his contraversial lifestyle, including his heavy use of Cocaine.By the end of 1980 Bandler's collaboration with Grinder -- where they lectured, trained and co-authored -- abruptly ended and his wife filed for divorce.He was acquitted, but afterwards Mother Jones magazine produced an article called "The Bandler Method.In 1980 Bandler's company Not Ltd had reported earnings of more than US$800,000 and was then married to Leslie Cameron-Bandler (also author of several NLP Books and other media).In 1983, Not Ltd declared bankruptcy.In 1986 Bandler was put on trial for the murder of a Corine Christensen.The value of Bandler's independent (and trademarked) creations is a matter of some controversy amongst NLP students and practitioners (see alt