Original sentence: Of all the shielded sites only one—arguably a legitimate target under the Geneva Conventions—was eventually bombed—the Al Mamun Telecommunications Facility, one day after the human shields pulled out of it.On February 26, 2003, Senior CNN Pentagon Correspondent, Jamie McIntyre commented that the "Pentagon says they will try to work around human shields" as long as they were not deployed to military sites.There is no conclusive evidence as to whether the human shield action to Iraq had any effect on U.government actions
Edited sentence: Also, of all the shielded sites only one was eventually bombed—the Al Mamun Telecommunications Facility—a day after the human shields pulled out of it, though it was arguably a legitimate target under the Geneva Conventions.However on February 26, 2003, Senior CNN Pentagon Correspondent, Jamie McIntyre commented that the "Pentagon says they will try to work around human shields" as long as they were not deployed to military sites.There is no conclusive evidence either way as to whether the human shield action to Iraq stopped the U.government from bombing civilian infrastructure as they did in 1991