Original sentence: A famous play ground is available which is the center of all these educational institutions.One can find a Middle school,a High school,Sanskrit College and Degree college with a Saraswati temple in the same campus.Poonam Bal Vidya Mandir is a famous school, most students of this school got the higher rank in IIT,JNU,DU,BHU,VIT,& also got the place in foreign universities....There are a dozen of private educational institutes running in this small town.There is a Govt Girls Middle and High School also available.These Academic institutions have played a key role in our society by contributing a number of professionals like Doctors, Engineers and Administrators.This is ested in Ashok nagar near to our great Ashoka Pillor
Edited sentence: A famous playground is available which is the centre of all these educational institutions.Most students of this school got the higher rank in IIT,JNU,DU,BHU,VIT, and also got the place in foreign universities.One can find a Middle school, High school, Sanskrit College and Degree college with a Saraswati temple in the same campus.Poonam Bal Vidya Mandir is a famous school.There are a dozen private educational institutes running in this small town.There is a Government Girls Middle and High School also available.These Academic institutions have played a key role in the society by contributing a number of professionals like doctors, engineers and administrators.This is located in Ashok Nagar near to the great Ashoka Pillor