Original sentence: He immediately landed in German-held territory in a field just west of the small village of Murvaux, near the Ruisseau de Bradon, a stream leading to the Meuse River.Luke ran toward the stream but collapsed little more than 200 meters from his airplane.Luke's final flight took place during the Meuse-Argonne Offensive.That evening Luke flew to the front to attack three balloons in the vicinity of Dun-sur-Meuse.balloon company to observe for his attacks, then shot down the balloons, but was wounded by machinegun fire afterwards, fired by gunners on a hilltop above him, a mile east of the last balloon site he had attacked
Edited sentence: He immediately landed in a field just west of the small village of Murvaux, near the Ruisseau de Bradon, a stream leading to the Meuse River.Luke ran toward the stream but collapsed some 200 meters from his airplane.Luke's final flight took place during the first phase of Meuse-Argonne Offensive.That evening Luke flew to the front to attack three balloons in the vicinity of Dun-sur-Meuse, six miles behind the German lines.balloon company to observe for his attacks, then shot down the balloons, but was mortally wounded by machinegun fire afterwards, fired by gunners on a hilltop above him, a mile east of the last balloon site he had attacked