Original sentence: North along the river the River Road stretches north to Grafton, a dramatic contrast between the high cliffs of the Illinois side to the broad, flat, green countryside of Portage des Sioux, Missouri.The Great River Road is a popular bicycle tour destination
Edited sentence: It provides views of the dramatic contrast between the high cliffs of the Illinois side to the broad, flat, green agricultural countryside of Portage des Sioux, Missouri.North along the river, the River Road stretches to Grafton.The Great River Road is a popular bicycle touring destination