Original sentence: Desai created the Centre for Robotic Surgery, a specialty technological initiative where a robot is used to perform nephro-urological surgeries.Desai has conducted over 160 workshops and conferences in India.Desai is also the first Indian to become a member of the American Association of Genitourinary Surgeons.He was declared the president of the Society International d'Urologie (SIU) at the 31st World Congress held in Berlin, Germany.Mahesh Desai's aim was to help the common man with adequate medical facilities concerning urological diseases.More than 2,100 renal transplants have been carried out at MPUH under his supervision.Nalini Desai (who oversees the accounts and administrative division of MPUH) and his son, urologist Mihir Desai
Edited sentence: ) Nalini Desai (who oversees the accounts and administrative division of MPUH) and his son, urologist Mihir Desai.Desai created the Centre for Robotic Surgery, a super-specialty initiative of cutting edge technology in the medical field.Desai has successfully conducted over 160 workshops and conferences in India.Desai is also the first Indian to be honored with membership in the American Association of Genitourinary Surgeons.He was declared the president of the Society International d’Urologie (SIU) at the 31st World Congress held in Berlin, Germany.Mahesh Desai’s aim was to help the common man with adequate medical facilities concerning urological diseases.More than 2,100 renal transplants have been carried out successfully at MPUH under his supervision.The Centre for Robotic Surgery has carved a niche for modern treatment, where a robot is used to perform nephro-urological surgeries