Original sentence: Alston's brother human rights academic Philip Alston.Born in Perth, Western Australia, he was educated at Xavier College (Kew), the University of Melbourne and Monash University, graduating with Bachelor degrees in law, arts and commerce from Melbourne University and Masters degrees in Law and Business Administration from Monash University
Edited sentence: Alston's brother is the renowned human rights academic Philip Alston.Born in Perth, Western Australia, he was educated at the Jesuit Xavier College, the University of Melbourne and Monash University, graduating with Bachelor degrees in law, arts and commerce from Melbourne University and Masters degrees in Law and Business Administration from Monash University