Original sentence: Acording to The Japan Times, "to many the Happies smell suspiciously like a cult".The current party leader is Kyoko Okawa, and they have entered 345 candidates to represent The Happiness Realization Party nationwide – the largest of all parties
Edited sentence: Acording to The Japan Times, "for many, the Happies smell suspiciously like a cult".The current party leader is Kyoko Okawa, and they have entered candidates in every electoral district in the country — the largest of all parties