Original sentence: Olympia title in 2006 after 3 straight (4 overall) years of finishing runner up to Ronnie Coleman, who had won the previous 8 years in a row (1998-2005)
Edited sentence: Olympia(which he shouldn't have) title in 2006 after 3 straight (4 overall) years of finishing runner up to Ronnie Coleman(legend), who had won the previous 8 years in a row (1998-2005)