Original sentence: Ryerson University is home to Canada's largest undergraduate business school, and the Faculty of Engineering, Architecture and Science as well as the Faculty of Arts, Faculty of Communication & Design, and the Faculty of Community Services.Ryerson's business school, Ted Rogers School of Management is on the southwest end of the Yonge-Dundas Square, located on Bay Street, slightly north of Toronto's Financial District.The Ted Rogers School is attached to the city's largest shopping centre, Toronto Eaton Centre
Edited sentence: Ryerson University is home to Canada's largest undergraduate business school, and the Faculty of Engineering, Architecture and Science, one of the best in the country, as well as the Faculty of Arts, Faculty of Communication & Design, and the Faculty of Community Services.Ryerson's acclaimed business school, Ted Rogers School of Management is on the southwest end of the Yonge-Dundas Square, located on Bay Street, slightly north of Toronto's Financial District.The Ted Rogers School is attached to the cities largest shopping centre, Toronto Eaton Centre.The university aims to provide a "career-focused" education mixing classwork with outside projects and work experience