Original sentence: Bell briefly dated actress Evan Rachel Wood, with whom he appeared in the Green Day music video "Wake Me Up When September Ends", from 2005 through to late 2006.Wood left Bell when she started dating shock-rocker Marilyn Manson in early 2007
Edited sentence: Bell (21) dated actress Evan Rachel Wood (19), with whom he appeared in the Green Day music video "Wake Me Up When September Ends", from 2005 through to late 2006.Wood left Bell when she started dating shock-rocker Marilyn Manson, who is twenty years her senior, in early 2007