Original sentence: "  Once the Maharaja signed the Instrument of Accession, which included a clause added by Mountbatten asking that the wishes of the Kashmiri people be taken into account, "Indian soldiers entered Kashmir and drove the Pakistani-sponsored irregulars from all but a small section of the state.Alan Campbell-Johnson, the press attache to the Viceroy of India states that "The legality of the accession is beyond doubt.However, India has produced the instrument of accession with an original copy image on its website.However, the rise of Islamic fundamentalism in Muslim-dominated Kashmir, Hindu-dominated Jammu and Buddhist-dominated Ladakh poses a grave danger to the security of the region where mixed populations live in regions such as Doda and Kargil.When he hesitated to do this, Pakistan launched a guerilla onslaught meant to frighten its ruler into submission
Edited sentence: "  Once the Maharaja signed the Instrument of Accession, which included a clause added by Mountbatten asking that the wishes of the Kashmiri people be taken into account, "Indian soldiers entered Kashmir and drove the Pakistani-sponsored irregulars from 66% of the state.After hesistating in his decision to join either country, Pashtun tribesmen from Pakistan invaded Kashmir in support of a rebellion occuring in Punch district against the Maharaja's taxation policies.However, Alan Campbell-Johnson, the press attache to the Viceroy of India stated that "The legality of the accession is beyond doubt.India claims that it has produced the instrument of accession with an original copy image on its website, though Victoria Schoffield again contends that Indian accounts of when the Instrument of Accession was signed vary.Victoria Schoffield, an expert on the Kashmiri conflict, commented for the BBC that "To date no authentic original document has been made available "