Original sentence: Gutzkow grew up in a rather poor family: his father, a brick layer by trade, worked in the stables of the Berlin court.Gutzkow studied theology and philosophy under Hegel and Schleiermacher.Gutzkow was the editor of the Telegraph für Deutschland and became one of Germany's eminent critics.His comedy in 5 acts Zopf und Schwert (1844) received two adaptations; in 1926 Aafa Film AG made the movie Zopf und Schwert - Eine tolle Prinzessin, and Edmund Nick used it for his operetta Über alles siegt die Liebe (Love Conquers Everything) (1940, libretto by Bruno Hardt-Warden).His innovative novel Wally die Zweiflerin attacked both marriage and religion for which Gutzkow suffered a three-month imprisonment.Karl Ferdinand Gutzkow (born  in Berlin, died  in Sachsenhausen) was a German writer notable in the Young Germany movement of the mid-19th century.This was used as a pretext in order to ban the works of many other progressive writers, amongst them Heinrich Heine.While Gutzkow started out as a collaborator of Wolfgang Menzel, he ended up his adversary
Edited sentence: Born in Berlin, his father was an advisor of the prince.Gutzkow started out as a collaborator of Wolfgang Menzel, but ended up his adversary.Gutzkow suffered a three-month imprisonment, which was used as a pretext in order to ban the works of many other progressive writers, amongst them Heinrich Heine.Gutzkow was the editor of the Telegraph für Deutschland and was Germany's most influential critic.His innovative novel Wally die Zweiflerin attacked both marriage and religion.Karl Ferdinand Gutzkow (17 March 1811 – 16 December 1878) was a German writer notable in the Young Germany movement of the mid-19th century.Young Gutzkow studied theology and philosophy under Hegel and Schleiermacher