Original sentence: Fall camp began on August 1st with actual practices starting on August 4th.Jaime Hill was promoted to defensive coordinator on January 10th.Spring Practice started March 17th and ended April 12th with the annual Blue/White game.The Cougars won the preceeding two games, but lost in a strong victory by Utah
Edited sentence: Fall camp began on August 1 with actual practices starting on August 4.Jaime Hill was promoted to defensive coordinator on January 10.Spring Practice started March 17 and ended April 12 with the annual Blue/White game.The Cougars won the preceding two games, but lost in a strong victory by Utah