Original sentence: "Get Behind the Shield".Some members of The Salvation Army are keen to re-emphasise their role as a Christian church.The Salvation Army has always seen itself primarily as a Christian church, but this has been eroded in the public's perceptions over the years
Edited sentence: The Salvation Army has always seen itself primarily as a revolutionary movement of covenanted warriors exercising holy passion to win the world for Jesus, but this has been eroded in the public's perceptions over the years