Original sentence: Draught Guinness is considered at its best flavor when served cool, although not necessarily cold; many consider the ideal serving temperature of Guinness to be as high as 55° F (13 °C), although this is disputed.Others consider the desired temperature for serving Guinness is between 6°C and 8°C, which is much warmer than many other beers (usually between 3°C and 5°C)
Edited sentence: Draught Guinness is considered at its best flavor when served cool, although not necessarily cold; many consider the ideal serving temperature of Guinness to be as high as 55° F (13 °C),this is actually incorrect.The desired temperature for serving Guinness is between 6°C and 8°C, which is much warmer than many other beers (usually between 3°C and 5°C)