Original sentence: He has all the attributes to be a world class midfield player.He has great talent in reading the game and intercepts many passes from the opposition.He has wonderful ability in crossing the ball and has tremoundes talent in dribbling other people.He once scored 7 goals in a match against one of the best teams in the whole country.Many people also call him junior Cristiano Ronaldo the future talent that will cause the whole world to be interested in him as he is only 13 years old.Mohamed Anis Kechker (Momo), he is a young, quick and skillfull footballer.Monther Zeroug(Tank) a feirce, strong, black defender who is amazing in the air and always scores when he goes up for headers.Yasser Zeroug (Monther Zeroug brother) is the top scorrer of the league
Edited sentence: He amazed me when i seen him score 7 goals in a match against one of the best team in the whole country.He has amazing talent in reading the game and intercepts every pass from the opposition.He has wonderfull ability in crossing the ball and has tremoundes talent in dribbling other people.He is also 14 years old.He is an inspiration to me and world class clubs should look at him.He's got all the attributes to be a world class midfield player.I think these 3 lads are the future of football.Many people also call him junior Cristiano Ronaldo the futere talent that will cause the whole world to be intrested in him as he is only 13 years old.Mohamed Anis Kechker(Momo),he's a young,quick and skillfull footballer.Monther Zeroug(Tank) a feirce,strong,black defender who is amazing in the air and always scores when he goes up for headers.Yasser Zeroug(Monther Zeroug brother) the top scorrer of the the league