Original sentence: AIDS (Acquired Immunodeficiency Syndrome or Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome) is a severe human disorder characterized by the destruction of the immune system and subsequent opportunistic infections that have a fatal prognosis in most cases.It is generally believed that the immune system’s T4 cells are compromised gradually by the Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV)
Edited sentence: AIDS (Acquired Immunodeficiency Syndrome or Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome) is a human disease characterized by the destruction of the immune system and subsequent opportunistic infections that have a fatal prognosis.Generally the immune system’s T4 cells are compromised gradually by the Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV)