Original sentence: After the September 11 attacks, with assistance from the Central Intelligence Agency, Bloomberg's administration implemented a controversial "suspicionless domestic surveillance" program that surveilled Muslim communities on the basis of their religion, ethnicity, and language
Edited sentence: After the September 11 attacks, with assistance from the Central Intelligence Agency, Bloomberg's administration implemented a controversial "suspicionless domestic surveillance" program that targeted Muslim communities on the basis of their religion, ethnicity, and language