Original sentence: In the early 1890s Hoople experienced entire sanctification in the John Street Methodist Church in Manhattan
Edited sentence: " According to Nazarene historian Timothy L.As a child Hoople had attended the Sunday School of a Congregational Church, and later became a member of that church.In the early 1890s Hoople began attending the noonday prayer meeting at the John Street Methodist Church in Manhattan.Instead, Hoople wound up finding the blessing himself.Smith, "Hoople thought BeVier's "fanaticism" a pity, and set out to argue his new friend into rejecting sanctification.There he met Charles BeVier, "a zealous witness to holiness and choir leader at the largest Methodist church in Brooklyn