Original sentence: Sher Shah Suri was succeeded by his son, Jalal Khan who took the title of Islam Shah Suri.Sher was the last Delhi Sultan to offer serious resistance to the Mughals on their advance to the south, and his death in battle cleared the path to the return of Mughal emperor Humayun
Edited sentence: Sher Shah Suri was succeeded by his son, Jalal Khan who took the title of Islam Shah Suri, and his mausoleum stands in middle of lake at Sasaram, a town that stand on the Grand Trunk Road that remains his lasting legacy.Sher was the last Delhi Sultan to offer serious resistance to the Mughals on their advance to the south, and his death in during the seige of Kalingar in 1554, cleared the path to the return of Mughal emperor Humayun