Original sentence: Rodeo ( or ) is a sport which arose out of the working practices of cattle herding in Spain, Mexico, and later the United States, Canada, Brazil and Australia.Rodeos not subject to the rules of the PRCA or other organizations, and rodeos outside of the United States and Canada, where animal cruelty laws are weaker, are more likely to be the sites of abusive practices
Edited sentence: Its a bunch of BULL SHIT.Rodeo ( or ) is a, in contrary to popular belief, an un-abusive sport which arose out of the working practices of cattle herding in Spain, Mexico, and later the United States, Canada, Brazil and Australia.Rodeos not subject to the rules of the PRCA or other organizations, and rodeos outside of the United States and Canada, where animal cruelty laws are weaker, are more likely to be the sites of severely abusive practices