Original sentence: Shell shock, a term coined to describe the reaction of some soldiers in World War I, or any war, to the trauma of battle
Edited sentence: Crime rate from playing shell shockers has gone up from 34.7% to 48.5% in the past two years.I have experienced it myself and it is scientifically proven that it makes you a more violent person.Shell shock,Shell Shockers is a unsafe and unhealthy game for your child or student to play.a term coined to describe the reaction of some soldiers in World War I, or any war, to the trauma of battle