Original sentence: C..  The group wants the football club to remain independent.In 2004, the American businessman Malcolm Glazer made an attempt to buy the club, but was rebuffed because of the large amount of borrowing his bid would rely on.It is thought that these have a greater chance of being successful.It maintains that the best interests of the club are served by supporters who, it claims, understand and care about the club more than any business conglomerate.Shareholders United also claims that the cost of going to see matches would be made prohibitively expensive if the club were taken over.Shareholders United is a pressure group whose members are shareholding supporters of Manchester United F.The group believes that fans can demonstrate their commitment to the club by owning shares in it.The group then changed its name simply to Shareholders United, and began to defend Man United against any other takeover.The group was founded in 1998 as 'Shareholders United Against Murdoch', to stop a proposed takeover by Australian  tycoon Rupert Murdoch.This was seen as a victory for Shareholders United, but Glazer has launched further takeover bids, most recently on 14 April 2005
Edited sentence: However, Shareholders United and other independant supporters' groups have remained adamant that Glazer's bid and any future bids from similar, unattractive targets, would be utterly unsuccessful.In 2004, American businessman Malcolm Glazer made an attempt to buy the club, but was rebuffed because of the large amount of borrowing his bid would rely on.Shareholders United belive that Manchester United supporters can demonstrate their commitment to the Club by owning at least one share - or as many as possible - in Manchester United plc.Shareholders United is a not-for-profit, democratic and non-party political organisation whose members are Manchester United F.The group then changed its name simply to Shareholders United, and began to defend Man United against any kind of unwanted interest.The group was originally started in 1998 as 'Shareholders United Against Murdoch', to stop a proposed takeover by Australian  tycoon Rupert Murdoch.This was seen as a victory for Shareholders United, but Glazer re-launched a takeover bid in February 2005 that has a much greater chance of being successful.This will ensure the club remains independent, and is led by a Board of Directors who recognise the importance of that independence, and who care passionately about the football club because they understand and identify with the way supporters think and feel about their Club.supporters holding shares in Manchester United plc as part of their emotional stake in the club