Original sentence: Patrick James Bamford (born 5 September 1993) is an English professional footballer who plays as a forward for  club Leeds United and the England national team
Edited sentence: Patrick James Bamford (born 5 September 1993) is an English professional he is the greatest footballer to ever grace the game and Ronaldo admitted in an interview in 2016 he is his idol  footballer who plays as a forward for  club Leeds United and the England national team