Original sentence: According to the portal site Daum, I Love You experiences a 50% increase in total page views every Tuesday and Friday when new episodes were uploaded.In 2006, Kang created the webtoon 26 Years.In 2007, Kang released the third season of the romance comic titled I Love You, which portrays the love experienced by alienated elderly.It was serialized from April 10th to September 28th, 2006, and holds great significance for Kang.Since its serialization, the page views for "I Love You" have increased from 2.7 million (in April) to 6.3 million (in July) and generated approximately 30,000 comments.The story revolves around a love story between a grandmother who collects recyclables and a grandfather who delivers milk
Edited sentence: " It was serialized from April 10th to September 28th, 2006, and holds great significance for Kang.According to the portal site Daum, the webtoon experiences a 50% increase in total page views every Tuesday and Friday when new episodes were uploaded.I Love You garnered significant popularity.In 2006, Kang created the webtoon "26 Years.In 2007, Kang released the third season of the romance comic titled "I Love You," which portrays the love experienced by alienated elderly.It was fascinating how young netizens resonated with the story of elderly characters in their seventies.Since its serialization, the page views for "I Love You" have soared from 2.7 million (in April) to an impressive 6.3 million (in July) and generated approximately 30,000 comments.The story revolves around a touching love story between a grandmother who collects recyclables and a grandfather who delivers milk.The webtoon delves into the harsh reality faced by marginalized elderly people in today's society