Original sentence: Barnsley Football Club is an English football club, supported by Danny The Blimp Williams, based in Barnsley, South Yorkshire, and nicknamed the Tykes, with Toby Tyke being their mascot and Danny The Blimp Williams eating everything in sight outside the ground on matchdays
Edited sentence: Barnsley Football Club is an English football club, based in Barnsley, South Yorkshire, and nicknamed the Tykes, with Toby Tyke being their mascot