Original sentence: Kirkcaldy Town Centre lost Rose, Thistle, Market and Cowie Streets in the development of a brand new shopping centre for the town.Work began on The Mercat for two years initially with 29 units, a major department store and one multi-storey car park until it opened its doors for business in 1973
Edited sentence: Kirkcaldy Town Centre lost Rose, Thistle, Market and Cowie Streets in the much needed development of a brand new shopping centre for the town.Work began on The Mercat for two years initially with 29 units, a major department store and one multi-storey car park until it opened it's doors for business in 1973