Original sentence: Alema taught Agricultural Science and held practical lessons on   his farm.Ellen Buckle let her large two storied house for use as a classroom block to accommodate the newly founded Accra Academy.It was to satisfy the urgent need for a secondary school which would provide good tuition at a reasonable cost to children from less fortunate homes, who had the aptitude but whose parents or guardians could not send them to schools like Achimota College, Adisadel College and Mfantsipim that the late Dr.Over seventy years ago in the slums of James Town, Mrs.Sackey worked the dual capacity of teacher and school Bursar for twenty years.The impressive examination results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of Education and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government  assisted schools and from 1 January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school.The school started with a student population of 19 distributed into forms one to three
Edited sentence: Alema taught Agricultural Science and held practical lessons on his farm.Ellen Buckle let her large two storied house out for use as a classroom block to accommodate the newly founded Accra Academy.It was to satisfy the urgent need for a secondary school which would provide good tuition at a reasonable cost to children from less fortunate homes, who had the aptitude but whose parents or guardians could not send them to schools like Achimota College, Adisadel College and Mfantsipim.It was was this reason that the late Dr.Over seventy years ago in the slums of James Town (or Jamestown), Mrs.Sackey worked in the dual capacity of teacher and school Bursar for twenty years.The impressive examination results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of Education and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1 January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school.The school started with a student population of 19 students distributed into forms one to three