Original sentence: School began thereafter, and Summer grew jealous of Seth's friend Anna Stern, whom he shared many interests with, including comics and dress sense Summer finally admitted she liked Seth, but after Seth dated Anna quickly thereafter.Summer Roberts (Rachel Bilson) and Seth had barely spoken, seeing as Summer was popular and Seth was certainly not
Edited sentence: At the start of the series, Summer Roberts (Rachel Bilson) and Seth had barely spoken, seeing as Summer was popular and Seth was certainly not.School began soon thereafter, and Summer, after finally admitting she liked Seth, grew jealous of Seth's friend Anna Stern, whom he shared many interests with, including comics and dress.Seth and Anna began dating soon thereafter