Original sentence: James Philip Owens (born January 16 1934 in Gifford, Pennsylvania), nicknamed "Bear," is a former right-handed pitcher in Major League Baseball who played from  to  with the Philadelphia Phillies, Cincinnati Reds and Houston Astros
Edited sentence: James Philip Owens (born January 16, 1934 in Gifford, Pennsylvania), nicknamed "Bear," is a former right-handed pitcher in Major League Baseball who played from  to  with the Philadelphia Phillies, Cincinnati Reds and Houston Astros