Original sentence: He also owned soccer teams, such as the Edmonton Drillers in the North American Soccer League, Edmonton Brickmen of the Canadian Soccer League, and a later reincarnation of the Drillers in the National Professional Soccer League II.None of these teams remained in Edmonton long after his departure from ownership
Edited sentence: He also owned soccer teams such as the Edmonton Drillers in the North American Soccer League, Edmonton Brickmen of the Canadian Soccer League, and a later reincarnation of the Drillers in the National Professional Soccer League II.In a sense which might be a credit to him, none of these teams remained in Edmonton long-term after his departure from ownership