Original sentence: In and around Stockton are numerous waterways that comprise the Sacramento-San Joaquin Delta.Its most famous such appearance is probably [[Steven Spielberg]'s Raiders of the Lost Ark.Stockton State Hospital was closed in 1996 and has since been converted into a campus for California State University, Stanislaus.Stockton is home to a High-A California League (minor league) baseball team, the Stockton Ports, affiliated with MLB's Oakland Athletics.Stockton is home to several institutions of higher education.Stockton is surrounded by the rich agricultural areas of the California Central Valley, and has a large inland port.Stockton used to be the site of a California State Hospital, the oldest in the state system, founded only a few years after statehood.Stockton was also the site of a schoolyard shooting by the mentally-ill Patrick Edward Purdy in 1989.These include San Joaquin Delta Community College, California State University Stanislaus-Stockton, Humphrey's College and School of Law, and the University of the Pacific (UOP)
Edited sentence: Stockton is a historic and booming city located in California's San Joaquin Valley.Stockton is home to a High-A California League baseball team, the Stockton Ports.Stockton is home to several well known institutions of higher education.The Ports are affiliated with MLB's Oakland Athletics.These include San Joaquin Delta Community College, California State University Stanislaus-Stockton (formerly California State Hospital), Humphrey's College and School of Law, and the accredited University of the Pacific (UOP)