Original sentence: In 2000, Herndon released Quiet Cave and had her song "The Drum" featured on NPR's All Songs Considered.Susan Herndon is an American singer-songwriter from Oklahoma, labelled by Tulsa World as being among a group of the "region's most talented musicians"
Edited sentence: In 2000 Herndon released Quiet Cave and had her song "The Drum" featured on NPR's All Songs Considered.Susan Herndon is an American singer-songwriter from Oklahoma