Original sentence: Both the Lancet commentary and the tech report by the Agency for Healthcare Research and Quality (AHRQ) concluded that the hypothesis of both treatments being equally effective should be retained.The evidence showed both groups of children treated with two very different hyperbaric treatment dosages improved significantly
Edited sentence: Both the Lancet commentary and the tech report by the Agency for Healthcare Research and Quality (AHRQ) concluded that the hypothesis of both treatments being equally effective should be retained, possibly as the main hypothesis.The evidence showed that both groups of children treated with two very different hyperbaric treatment dosages improved significantly.The latest article by Marois et al.which has been published in december of 2007 in the AAPS Journal clearly highlights the efficacy of HBOT for CP over conventional therapies