Original sentence: After just one visit they chose this area as their Winter Home... Clara's dream house was built on the site of Richmond Plantation, which was burned by General Sherman just as he ended his March to the Sea at nearby Fort McAllister.Ford's holdings eventually totaled 85,000 acres (340 km²) of old Southern Plantations.Mayor Richard Davis has recently announced his intention of not running again for mayor next year.The city is governed by a mayor and a four member city council
Edited sentence: " Ford's holdings eventually totaled 85,000 acres (340 km²) of old Southern Plantations.After just one visit they chose this area as their Winter Home... Clara's dream house was built on the site of Richmond Plantation, which was burned by elements of General William T.Mayor  The city is governed by a mayor and a four member city council.Sherman's army just as he ended the "March to the Sea