Original sentence: In recent years, the Pennsylvania side has been closed to climbing during the nesting season for peregrine falcons; this has resulted in overgrowth of trails and climbing routes, providing an experience closer to the natural state than is found at more popular climbing destinations.The Gap is a popular place to rock-climb in New Jersey.The climbs are one hundred fifty feet (50 meters) to three hundred feet (100 meters), climbing on Silurian Shawagunk conglomerate, which is quartzite, with bands of shale from a half inch to four inches thick
Edited sentence: In recent years, the PA side has been closed to climbing during the nesting season for peregrine falcons, this has resulted in overgrowth of trails and climbing routes, providing an experience closer to the natural state than is found at more popular climbing destinations.The Gap is the premier place to rock climb in New Jersey.The climbs are one hundred fifty feet (50 meters) to three hundred feet (100 meters), climbing on Silurian Shawagunk Conglomerate, which is quartzite, with bands of shale from a half inch to four inches thick