Original sentence: Joseph Judson is believed to have arrived in Stratford at the age of thirteen with his father William and two brothers in 1634.Judson established a farm on Mischa Hill sometime around 1658 when he was made a freeman by the Connecticut Colony legislature
Edited sentence: Joseph Judson is believed to have arrived in Stratford with his father William and two brothers in 1638.Judson established a farm on Mischa Hill sometime before 1658 when he was elected a freeman by the Connecticut Colony legislature