Original sentence: Hanukkah begins at sundown on the evening before the date shown.In recent years, an amalgam of Christmas and Hanukkah has emerged — dubbed "Chrismukkah" — celebrated by some inter-faith families, particularly in the United States.Khanike (YIVO standard transliteration from the Yiddish and/or Ashkenazic pronunciation of the Hebrew)
Edited sentence: In recent years, particulalrly in the United States, an amalgam of Christmas and Hanukkah, dubbed Chrismukkah, has emerged, celebrated by some inter-faith families.Khanike (YIVO standard transliteration from the Yiddish and/or Ashkenazic pronuciation of the Hebrew)