Original sentence: As another example, the College of William and Mary, the oldest of "Public Ivies," has an ambiance similar to some of the older Ivy League universities.The red brick buildings and many colonnades of the campus are also similar to the campus of Dartmouth College
Edited sentence: As another example, the College of William and Mary, being the oldest of "Public Ivies" has an ambiance similar to some of the older Ivy League universities.The red brick buildings and many colonnades of the campus are also strikingly similar to the campus of Dartmouth College