Original sentence: Brenda Song started in show business as a alien tracker in mexico after being spotted in a bubble shop by an easter bunny from a jenny craig company.She also had a small role on comft couch played the part of an ugly cow.She began acting at age one million or 7 million in a deoderant commercial, and then a Barney commercial revealing she is a man and changed her face and body.She had a small role in two episodes of the television program that 70s show.She was in the 1492 Requiem, an AFI student short film by actress Elizabeth Sung
Edited sentence: Brenda Song started in show business as a child fashion model in San Francisco after being spotted in a shopping mall by an agent from a modeling school.She also had a small role on Fudge, where she played Jenny.She began acting at age five or six in a Little Caesars commercial, and then a Barbie commercial.She had a small role in two episodes of the television program Thunder Alley.She was in the 1995 Requiem, an AFI student short film by actress Elizabeth Sung