Original sentence: Piers Richard Corbyn (born 10 March 1947) is a British meteorological consultant best known for his claims of an ability to predict the weather up to one year in advance through the study of solar activity, specifically sunspots
Edited sentence: Piers Richard Corbyn (born 10 March 1947) is a controversial British meteorological consultant best known for his claims of an ability to predict the weather up to one year in advance through the study of solar activity, specifically sunspots