Original sentence: In particular, Magyar leaders demanded and received the Emperor's coronation as King of Hungary as a re-affirmation of Hungary's historic privileges, and the establishment of a separate parliament at Budapest with the powers to enact laws for the historic lands of the Hungarian crown (the lands of St.Stephen), though on a basis which would preserve the political dominance of the Magyar minority (more specifically of the country's nobility and educated élite) and the exclusion from effective power of the country's large Romanian and Slavic populations.Within Cisleithania and Hungary certain regions, such as Galicia and Croatia enjoyed special status with their own unique governmental structures
Edited sentence: In particular, Magyar leaders demanded and received the Emperor's coronation as King of Hungary as a re-affirmation of Hungary's historic privileges, and the establishment of a separate parliament at Budapest with the powers to enact laws for the lands of the Hungarian crown (the lands of St.Stephen), though on a basis which would preserve the political dominance of the Magyar population (more specifically of the country's nobility and educated élite) and the exclusion from effective power of the country's large Romanian and Slavic populations.Within Cisleithania and Hungary certain regions, such as Galicia and Croatia-Slavonia enjoyed special status with their own unique governmental structures