Original sentence: The Annenberg School for Communication holds its own among the best in the nation, being one of the two communication programs in the country endowed by Walter Annenberg (the other is at the University of Pennsylvania.The School of Cinema-Television, the oldest in the country and perhaps USC's most famous wing, confers degrees in critical studies, screenwriting, and production.The University of Southern California is well known for its outstanding professional schools in law, film, medicine, business, engineering, journalism and architecture, as well as for its world-renowned School of Cinema-Television.The school is supported by its famous alumni, whose ranks include such well-known graduates as George Lucas, Ron Howard, Robert Zemeckis, John Milius, Ben Burtt, and David Wolper.The school of journalism features a rigorous core curriculum that requires students to devote themselves equally to print, broadcast and online media for the first year of study.This approach promises a breadth of knowledge across various journalistic media, though many students resent being compelled to devote so much time and energy to disciplines they aren't interested in pursuing.USC's Annenberg School for Communication enjoys a massive endowment, and the school is generous with promising students
Edited sentence: Annenberg, the journalism school, holds its own among the best in the nation, but it has adopted a fairly grueling convergence core curriculum that requires students to devote themselves equally to print, broadcast and online media for the first year of study.On the other hand, USC's Annenberg School of Journalism has a massive endowment, and the school is generous with promising students.The School of Cinema-Television, perhaps USC's most famous wing, confers degrees in critical studies, screenwriting, and production.The school, well supported by its famous alumni, is known for such well-known graduates as George Lucas, Ron Howard, Robert Zemeckis, John Milius, Ben Burtt, and David Wolper.While the school is best known for its outstanding professional schools in law, film, medicine, business, engineering, journalism and architecture, USC is most well-known by many for its glamorous and famous School of Cinema-Television.While this approach promises a breadth of knowledge across various journalistic media, many students resent being compelled to devote so much time and energy to disciplines they aren't interested in pursuing