Original sentence: During the 2004-05 NHL lockout, Shanahan was the brainchild of what was dubbed "The Shanahan Summit," a two-day conference in Toronto that he organized.He also has eight All-Star Game appearances and three All-Star Team nominations, as well as his three Stanley Cups.In addition to his goal-scoring, Shanahan has stood as one of the premier power forwards in the league for most of his career.It gathered players, coaches, and other influential voices to discuss improvements to the flow and tempo of the game.Should Shanahan decide to retire, he will leave a legacy of 627 goals (ranked 12th all-time) and 1,294 points during 19 NHL seasons
Edited sentence: Despite the decline of his later years, he is still a standout player in the NHL.He has also always played a solid defensive game and worked hard for his teams.In addition to his goal-scoring, Shanahan has an impressive physical presence, and he stood as one of the premier power forwards in the league for most of his career.Shanahan is respected off the ice as well, a loquacious and witty interview subject who has become an elder statesman of hockey.Should Shanahan decide to retire, he will leave a legacy of 627 goals (#12 all-time) and 1,294 points during 19 NHL seasons.The "Shanahan Summit," a two-day conference organized by the player in Toronto during the NHL lockout season (2004-2005), gathered players, coaches, and other influential voices to discuss improvements to the flow and tempo of the game.These totals, alongside his 8 All-Star Games and 3 All-Star Team nominations, as well as his 3 Stanley Cups, indicate that he will likely be elected to the Hall of Fame