Original sentence: There are indications the Bush Administration’s policy of classification and detention of persons designated as "unlawful enemy combatants" is based on a presumption that the Geneva Conventions and Constitutional safeguards are an obstacle in the pursuit of the War on Terrorism according to Terry Gill and Elies van Sliedregt in the Utrecht Law Review
Edited sentence: There are indications the Bush Administration’s policy of classification and detention of persons designated as "unlawful enemy combatants" is based on a presumption that the Geneva Conventions and Constitutional safeguards are an obstacle in the pursuit of the ‘War on Terrorism’ according to Terry Gill and Elies van Sliedregt in the Utrecht Law Review