Original sentence: He led a number of missions in the operations Rah-e-Haq and Rah-e-Rast, remained successful at Kanju,Kabbal,Matta,Shamozai,Shangla etc.He post-Graduated from the Command and Staff College, Quetta in war studies
Edited sentence: During these operations he also received a bullet injury in a combat with terrorists.He always led his troops from the front and demonstrated exemplary courage and valour.He led a number of odd missions in the operations Rah-e-Haq and Rah-e-Rast, remained successful at Kanju,Kabbal,Matta,Shamozai,Shangla etc.He post-Graduated from the Command and Staff College,Quetta in war studies.SOLGER AZIZ AHMED JARRAL SHAHEED.The courageous man who was serving in British Navy in 1947 soon joined Jehadi movement and got Shahada against Doggra.and always performed a wonderfully excellent leading role dully acknowledged by his senior Commanders