Original sentence: Achenbach, describing himself as Prime Minister of Sealand at the time, disagreed with Roy  Bates over plans to turn Sealand into a luxury hotel and casino with fellow German and Dutch businessmen.Concerned about the state of Sealand, the Bates attempted to contact their son Michael, who was still on Sealand, but they were unable to do so.In 197 Roy Bates and his wife Joan were summoned to Austria by a group of businessmen, who claimed to be interested in a proposed investment scheme involving Sealand.Michael Bates, who was on the island during the invasion, was subsequently thrown in a cell without food or water for three days by the invaders before being sent on a Dutch ship to the Netherlands without a passport or money.The proposed meeting in Austria was in fact a scam meant to lure the Bates away from Sealand while a German businessman named Alexander G
Edited sentence: Achenbach, who was the Prime Minister of Sealand at the time, disagreed with Prince Roy over plans to turn Sealand into a luxury hotel and casino with fellow German and Dutch businessmen.Concerned about the state of Sealand, the Bates attempted to contact their son, Prince Michael, who was still on Sealand, but they were unable to do so.In 1978, approximately 10 years after the independence of Sealand, Prince Roy and his wife, Princess Joan, were summoned to Austria by a group of businessmen, who claimed to be interested in a proposed investment scheme involving Sealand.Prince Michael, who was on the island during the invasion, was subsequently thrown in a cell without food or water for three days by the invaders, before being sent on a Dutch ship to the Netherlands without a passport or money.The proposed meeting in Austria was in fact a scam, meant to lure the Bates away from Sealand while a German businessman named Alexander G