Original sentence: Several members of the Health Policy and Administration Department faculty have won awards.• In both 2000 and 2001, AcademyHealth awarded their Dissertation Award to one of our students.• Three members of the faculty won the John D
Edited sentence: Several members of the Health Policy and Administration Department faculty have won prestigious awards.• In both 2000 and 2001, AcademyHealth awarded their prestigious Dissertation Award to one of our students.• Three members of the faculty won the prestigious John D