Original sentence: For those who claimed the Soviet Republic was an Jewish dictatorship, it worth pointing out that 7.4% to 11.9% (estimates vary) of those shot during the Red Terror were Jewish6.To eliminate his opponents, Kun resorted to the Red Terror via the Secret Police, Revolutionary Tribunals and the Lenin Boys; however, the numbers of his victims were low, ranging depending on whose estimate one goes by from 370 to 587 executed5
Edited sentence: For those anti-semitics who claimed the Soviet Republic was an Jewish dictatorship, it worth pointing out that 7.4% to 11.9% (estimates vary) of those shot during the Red Terror were Jewish6.To eliminate his opponents , Kun resorted to the Red Terror via the Secret Police, Revolutionary Tribunals and the Lenin Boys; however, the numbers of his victims were low, ranging depending on whose estimate one goes by from 370 to 587 executed5