Original sentence: Her cousin by marriage by marriage, a nun named Jenny Wolek fell in love with Tim Siegel, Julie Siegel’s twin brother (a then unknown Tom Berenger), and then married him on his deathbed after fall from a flight of stairs where he had an argument her cousin Vinnie Wolek over causing her to stray from her religious beliefs.Mark Toland (a then unknown Tommy Lee Jones), and Dorian’s sister Melinda befriends Meredith Lord-Wolek before her death.With the onscreen death of Nixon’s original character Dave Siegel came the arrival long time Dorian Cramer, who prescribed Dave’s widow Eileen pills for depression which lead to an out of control addiction, and stole their daughter Julie’s husband Dr
Edited sentence: Dorian then stole their daughter Julie’s husband, Dr.Her cousin by marriage, a nun named Jenny Wolek fell in love with Tim Siegel, Julie Siegel’s twin brother (a then unknown Tom Berenger), and then married him on his deathbed after fall from a flight of stairs where he had an argument her cousin Vinnie Wolek over causing her to stray from her religious beliefs.Mark Toland (a then unknown Tommy Lee Jones), and Dorian’s sister Melinda befriended Meredith Lord-Wolek before her death.With the onscreen death of Nixon’s original character Dave Siegel came the arrival of Dorian Cramer, who prescribed Dave’s widow, Eileen, pills for depression, which lead to an out-of-control addiction