Original sentence: 1978: Utah gets its first victory against a LaVell Edwards-led BYU team, winning 23-22.2000: LaVell Edwards coaches in his final game, a come-from-behind victory against the Utes.2001: With an undefeated season in jeopardy, under coach Gary Crowton the Cougars mount a fourth quarter comeback, beating the Utes 24-21.2004: The Utes win over BYU 52-21, wrapping up an 11-0 season
Edited sentence: 1978: Utah gets its first victory against a LaVell Edwards led BYU team, winning 23-22.2000: LaVell Edwards coaches in his final game, an improbable come-from-behind victory against the Utes.2001: With an undefeated season in jeopardy, under coach Gary Crowton the Cougars mount a feverish fourth quarter comeback, stunning the Utes 24-21.2004: The Utes crush BYU 52-21, wrapping up an 11-0 season and becoming the first team outside the BCS to make a BCS bowl game.BYU ended the season undefeated in conference play and went on to defeat Oregon in the Las Vegas Bowl.The Utes went on to defeat nationally ranked Georgia Tech in the Emerald Bowl