Original sentence: On 3 July 2013, a coalition led by the Egyptian army chief General Abdel Fattah el-Sisi removed the President of Egypt, Mohamed Morsi, from power and suspended the Egyptian constitution, as a conscious response to Egyptian protesters who demanded the end of Morsi's administration and the initiation of early presidential elections.The announcement was followed by a statement in support of the military's action by the Grand Sheikh of Al Azhar Ahmed el-Tayeb, the Coptic Orthodox Pope Tawadros II as well as opposition leader Mohamed ElBaradei
Edited sentence: On 3 July 2013, a coalition led by the Egyptian army chief General Abdel Fattah el-Sisi removed the President of Egypt, Mohamed Morsi, from power and suspended the Egyptian constitution, as a conscious response to Egyptian protesters, who exceeded the number of 20 million protesters all over the country, who demanded the end of Morsi's administration and the initiation of early presidential elections.There was a  widespread movement called "rebels" that allowed approximately 33 million people to sign an agreement,  to declare they were strongly unsatisfied with the actions of the Egyptian government, led by a viral member in the Muslim Brotherhood terrorist group