Original sentence: Affectionately called "Old Cui" (), he is considered to be a pioneer in Chinese rock music and one of the first Chinese artists to write rock songs.For this distinction Cui Jian is often labeled "The Father of Chinese Rock"
Edited sentence: Affectionately called "Old Cui" (), he is considered to be a pioneer in Chinese rock music and the first Chinese artist to break away from conventional Chinese popular forms and incorporate a Western rock style into his songs.For this distinction Cui Jian is labeled "The Father of Chinese Rock".In his later works, he has also begun to experiment with rap music, adding a drummer/MC to his band for The Power of the Powerless (1998)