Original sentence: The geographical location is clearly one of the contributor to the hardship the country has endured since its formation, however by closely examining European history one can clearly discern that no nation was completely free of suffering and as such the Hungarian history is perhaps not immensely more tumultuous then most of its neighbors', Mongol and Turkish conquest not withstanding, for there were times when the country had the opportunity to live up to its people's potential.The national disposition maybe somewhat reserved but living through the events of the last 1000 years in the center of Europe is enough to give a nervous breakdown even to the strongest of character.These were only some of the larger unfortunate events however, through the small sample given here, it is clear that a pattern of mismanagement, negligence and selfishness in the part of the country’s leaders as well as some streak of bad luck is visible and, if one is superstitious enough, the country's misfortune throughout its history is perhaps attributable to the curse
Edited sentence: The national character maybe somewhat reserved but living through the events of the last 1000 years in the center of Europe is enough to give a nervous breakdown even to the strongest person.These were only some of the larger unfortunate events but by reading this it is clear that, if one is superstitious enough, a clear pattern of mismanagement, negligence and selfishness in the part of the country’s leaders as well as some streak of bad luck is visible