Original sentence: Mel Leven also did voice overs as well as songwriting - original voice of Snoopy and was in Snap, Crackle, Pop commericials.Mel also wrote the Little Ranger Nature series for Disney in the 60's - which was on The Wonderful World of Disney every Sunday night in the 1960's
Edited sentence: Mel Leven also did voice overs as well as songwriting - original voice of Snoopy and was in Snap, Crackle, Pop commercials.Mel also wrote the Little Ranger Nature series for Disney in the 60's - which was on The Wonderful World of Disney every Sunday night in the 1960s