Original sentence: After having only a combined 8 top 10 finished in his first 3 seasons  between 2004 and 2006, Jones almost matched that in 1 season.He had 6 top 10s in 2007, finishing second 4 times, losing in 2 playoffs.He joined the Nationwide Tour in 2004, but did not have a breakout year until 2007.He later moved to the United States to attend the Arizona State University where he was a first team all-american.His best finish of the season was a tie for 4th at The Honda Classic.Jones is alos a member of the PGA Tour of Australasia.Jones was born in Sydney, Australia in 1980.Matthew Jones (born April 19, 1980) is a Professional golfer from Australia currently playing on the PGA Tour.Thus far through 2009, Jones has had 2 top 10s, both 5th place finishes at the Buick Invitational and at the John Deere Classic
Edited sentence: After having only a combined 8 top-10 finishes in his first three seasons  between 2004 and 2006, he almost matched that in one season.He had 6 top-10s in 2007, finishing second four times, losing in two playoffs.He later moved to the United States to attend the Arizona State University where he was a first team All-American.His best finish of the season was a tie for 4th at the Honda Classic.Jones is also a member of the PGA Tour of Australasia.Jones joined the Nationwide Tour in 2004, but did not have a breakout year until 2007.Jones was born in Sydney, Australia.Matthew Jones (born 19 April 1980) is a professional golfer from Australia currently playing on the PGA Tour.Thus far through 2009, Jones has had two top-10s, both 5th place finishes at the Buick Invitational and at the John Deere Classic