Original sentence: Since its inception in 1992, Big Day Out has attracted a large range of artists, with headlining acts including Nirvana, Violent Femmes, Iggy Pop and the Stooges, The Smashing Pumpkins, Soundgarden, The Offspring, Rage Against the Machine, The Prodigy, Marilyn Manson, Foo Fighters, Blink-182, Metallica, Tool, Coldplay, The Killers, Nine Inch Nails, Björk, System of a Down and Red Hot Chili Peppers
Edited sentence: Since its inception in 1992, Big Day Out has attracted a large range of artists, with headlining acts including Nirvana, Violent Femmes, Iggy Pop and the Stooges, The Smashing Pumpkins, Soundgarden, The Offspring, Rage Against the Machine, The Prodigy, Marilyn Manson, Foo Fighters, Blink-182, Metallica, Tool, Coldplay, The Killers, Nine Inch Nails, System of a Down and Red Hot Chili Peppers