Original sentence: Military Operations is a concept and application of military science that involves planning the operations for the projected maneuvering forces's provisions, services, training, and administrative functions—to allow them to commence, agress, then egress from combat.The Operations staff have distinct cyclic process features that are detrimental for military operations to progress:
Edited sentence: Military Operations is a concept and application of military science that involves planning the operations for the projected maneuvering forces's provisions, services, training, and administrative functions — to allow them to commence, insert, then egress from combat.The Operations staff have distinct cyclic process features that are essential for military operations to progress: