Original sentence: The First Vision (also called the grove experience) is a religious belief held by Christians belonging to any of the various denominations within the Latter Day Saint movement (commonly called Mormonism) that God the Father and Jesus Christ appeared to the fourteen-year-old Joseph Smith, Jr
Edited sentence: The First Vision (also called the grove experience) is a religious belief held by members of the Latter Day Saint movement (commonly called Mormonism) that God the Father and Jesus Christ appeared to the fourteen-year-old Joseph Smith, Jr