Original sentence: Coincidentally, later that afternoon in Melbourne, another AFL game between Essendon and Hawthorn finished in near identical circumstances, with Hawthorn winning by one point.Following the centre bounce, St Kilda moved the ball into their forward line, where a pack formed about 45 metres from the St Kilda goal and a ball-up was called by the umpire with eight seconds remaining.Fremantle's Daniel Gilmore chased down Baker and managed to bump him just after the kick.With 37 seconds remaining in the game, St Kilda's Leigh Montagna scored a goal to bring the Saints within one point of Fremantle
Edited sentence: Coincidentally, later that afternoon in Melbourne, another AFL game between Essendon and Hawthorn finished in near identical circumstances, with Hawthorn winning by 1 point.Following the centre bounce, St Kilda moved the ball into their forward line, where a pack formed about 45 metres from the St Kilda goal and a ball-up was called by the umpire with 8 seconds remaining.In desperation, he managed to bump Baker just after the kick.Of the few Dockers who were paying attention at the final stoppage, Fremantle's Daniel Gilmore, chased down St Kilda defender Steven Baker.With 37 seconds remaining in the game, St Kilda's Leigh Montagna scored a goal to bring the Saints within 1 point of Fremantle