Original sentence: At twenty, Rappaport went founded Staple Neckwear Co.David and Mannie decided to change the name again to Damon Creations, Inc.He decided to rename it David Creations at around the time Rappaport’s brother Mannie joined the staff in the early 1930s.Ralph Ladue of the former John David chain who resented the similarity of the nomenclature.Rappaport soon thought that the company’s current name was too stifling for their high-end clientele.Rappaport started the business with only $700, but went on to ship $17,000 worth of neckwear that year alone.The company started with simple, "solid color and classic [red] striped" ties.The two brothers were subsequently sued by Col.since that was a loose conjunction of their first names
Edited sentence: At 20, Rappaport founded Staple Neckwear Co.David Rappaport and Mannie Rappaport soon thought that the company’s current name was too stifling for their high-end clientèle.Ladue charged that David Creations was too similiar to John David.Ralph Ladue of the former John David chain.Rappaport started the business with only $700 in 1934, but went on to ship $17,000 worth of neckwear that year.Rather than contest the litigation, David and Mannie decided to change the name to Damon Creations, Inc..  Damon is a loose conjunction of their first names.The company began with modest designs and "solid color and classic [red] striped" ties.The two Rappaport brothers were subsequently threatened with a lawsuit by Col