Original sentence: After a afternoon's rowing, filmed at the club, the couple retire to the Club's Pennsylvania Suite with its four poster bed and marble bathroom.As we can all recall, after a hilarious afternoon's rowing, filmed on the Club’s glistening lake, the couple retire to the Club's Pennsylvania Suite with its oak timbered four poster bed, marble bathroom, under floor heating and views overlooking the estate.In the summer of 2000, Stoke Park’s Grade I listed building and 350 acre grounds took to the scenes with a starring role in Bridget Jones Diary
Edited sentence: "Stoke Park is a beautiful estate, and there is very good golf to be played there.After a hilarious afternoon's rowing, filmed at the club, the couple retire to the Club's Pennsylvania Suite with its gloriously comfortable four poster bed and exquisite marble bathroom.As we can all recall, after a hilarious afternoon's rowing, filmed on the Club’s glistening lake, the couple retire to the Club's grand Pennsylvania Suite with its gloriously comfortable oak timbered four poster bed, exquisite marble bathroom, under floor heating and magnificent views overlooking the estate.In his 1910 book, 'The Golf Course of the British Isles', Bernard Darwin wrote:-.In the summer of 2000, Stoke Park’s Grade I listed building and breath-taking 350 acre grounds took to the scenes with a starring role in Bridget Jones Diary.The mansion is a gorgeous palace, a dazzling vision of white stone, of steps and terraces and cupolas, with a lake in front and imposing trees in every direction.There are plenty of things to do at Stoke besides playing golf.We may get very hot at lawn tennis or keep comparatively cool at bowls or croquet, or, coolest of all, we may sit on the terrace or in the garden and give ourselves wholly and solely to loafing