Original sentence: Peter Rippon, the Editor of Newsnight, later apologised in an open letter to Thorpe, accepting that someone could have got the false impression she was unemployed, though that would not have been defamatory of Thorpe anyway.She interviewed a woman whom The Independent reported to have been "fuming" because "the piece was edited to make her seem like a 'jobless ponce'" whereas she did in fact have a job.Stratton was criticised for an interview broadcast on Newsnight on 23 May 2012
Edited sentence: Peter Rippon, the Editor of Newsnight, later apologised in an open letter to Thorpe, accepting that someone could have got the false impression she was unemployed, although failed to acknowledge the coded political message which its critics perceived the interview to contain...Stratton was widely criticised for an interview broadcast on Newsnight on 23 May 2012 which was edited in such a way to imply that the interviewee, Shanene Thorpe, a Black British single mother who was in full-time employment,  was an irresponsible unemployed exploiter of the state benefits system  Critics argued that Stratton and the BBC had structured the broadcast in a way which appeared to support the welfare reform policy of the Conservative-Lib Dem government