Original sentence: Herb died in 1972 - aged 84.In 1916 Gilbert joined the Eastern Suburbs, he was a member of that club'sCity Cup winning side before joining the Western Suburbs Magpies in 1917 he played with them until 1920, helping to tranfer them from a struggling side to a competitive outfit
Edited sentence: Herb passed away in 1972 - aged 84.In 1916 Gilbert joined the Eastern Suburbs, he was a member of that club's City Cup winning side before joining the Western Suburbs Magpies in 1917 he played with them until 1920, helping to tranfer them from a struggling side to a competitive outfit