Original sentence: In Scandinavia, however, there have also been articles which link the Law of Jante to high suicide rates.It has also been suggested that contentedness with a humdrum lifestyle is a part of happiness in the Scandinavian countries.While the original intention was as satire, Kim Orlin Kantardjiev, a Norwegian politician and educational advisor, claims that the Law of Jante is taught in schools as more of a social code to encourage group behaviour, and wants to credit it with making Nordic countries have high happiness scores
Edited sentence: " Though the law, as defined by Sandemose, is meant to control and shame achievers of all kinds, regardless of wealth, Kantardjiev makes the association that in countries such as America, being rich allows people to behave differently, and Jante Laws tend to level out society, as the people as a whole get to set the rules, not the rich alone.He also asserts that the laws may be one of the reasons Nordic countries have high happiness scores.In Scandinavia there are some articles which try to link the Law of Jante to high suicide rates.There are others however, who suggest that contedness with a humdrum lifestyle is a part of happiness in the Scandinavian countries.While the original intention was as satire, Kim Orlin Kantardjiev, a Norwegian politician and educational advisor, claims that the Law of Jante is taught in schools, is treated more as a social code to encourage group behaviour, and has been credited with making Nordic countries more harmonious and equal by pointing out the intrinsic conflicts between individuality and social conformity.and feels the law might be summarised as "You shouldn't think you're better than everyone else