Original sentence: " Her older sister, Rose Louise Hovick, best known as Gypsy Rose Lee, was known as Louise to her family.June Havoc was a child vaudeville performer under the tutelage of her mother.June wrote two memoirs, Early Havoc and More Havoc.She also wrote a play, Marathon '33 based on her memoirs, Early Havoc; the play starred Julie Harris and had a brief run on Broadway.She last appeared on television in 1990, on General Hospital.She later acted on Broadway and in Hollywood, and stage directed (both on and off-Broadway.She resides in Wilton, Connecticut.She was actually born in 1913, rather than 1916, , which is usually cited as her year of birth.She was born Ellen Evangeline Hovick in Vancouver, British Columbia.Some sources indicate that her birth name was Ellen June Hovick.The play also sparked such famous songs as "Small World", "Together Wherever We Go", and "Everything's Coming Up Roses.Their mother was Rose Thompson Hovick and their father was John Olaf Hovick, a newspaper advertising man
Edited sentence: "  Her older sister, Rose Louise Hovick, best known as Gypsy Rose Lee, was known as Louise to her family.It also sparked such famous songs as "Small World," "Together Wherever We Go" and "Everything's Coming Up Roses.June was a child vaudeville performer under the tutelage of her mother.Now, the play is considered to be one of the most perfect Broadway musicals in the history of musical theatre.She also wrote a play, Marathon '33 based on her memoirs, Early Havoc.She appeared on television as recently as 1990, in the daytime drama General Hospital.She later acted on Broadway and in Hollywood, and directed on- and off-Broadway.She now lives in Wilton, Connecticut.She was born Ellen Evangeline Hovick in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada.Some sources indicate that her birth name was Ellen June Hovick, and that she was actually born on November 8, 1913 , rather than November 8, 1916, which is usually cited as her year of birth.Their mother, Rose Thompson Hovick, had married John Hovick, a newspaper ad man, at the age of fifteen, and was the classic example of a smothering stage mother, though more horrid details were reportedly whitewashed in Gypsy's memoirs.To set the record straight, June wrote two memoirs, Early Havoc and More Havoc