Original sentence: Alex MacMillan, who believes an absolute measure of poverty is more valid than the relative one Dion's plan is based upon, has criticized his plan in an editorial in the National Post...Dion mentioned that his party will tackle poverty in Canada in order to create a "greener", "richer" and "fairer" Canada
Edited sentence: (see Poverty in Canada#Measures of poverty in Canada).Alex MacMillan, who believes an absolute measure of poverty is more valid than the relative one Dion's plan is based upon, has criticized his plan in an editorial in the National Post.Dion mentionned that his party will tackle poverty in Canada in order to create a "greener", "richer" and "fairer" Canada