Original sentence: Rabbi Aryeh Kaplan, known for his rationalist synthesis of modern scientific thinking and Kabbalah, and creator of a modern translation of Derekh Hashem, echoes the viewpoint of its author (Moshe Chaim Luzzatto) on astrology
Edited sentence: A proponent of this school of thought is the late Rabbi Aryeh Kaplan, known for his rationalist synthesis of modern scientific thinking and Kabbalah.Many Orthodox Jews who accept Kabbalah believe in the existence of astrology as a reality and as a legitimate Jewish belief.Many Orthodox Jews who accept Kabbalah reject astrology as it has been traditionaly understood, but believe that some Jewish texts discussing this subject explain the relationship between God and the world