Original sentence: Shoplifting entered the Seattle landscape in early 2003, quickly impacting a music community that (with a few exceptions) had grown stale and apolitical in the wake of the city’s gentrification, and the decreased visibility of Riot Grrrl and other similarly radical movements.Shoplifting is an American punk band, formed in 2002 in Seattle, Washington.They also toured with Erase Errata and King Cobra, self-released a cassette, actively organized against sexual violence in their community, and helped launch the Seattle chapter of Bands Against Bush, a national struggle of artists against the supposed domestic and international terrorism and imperialism of the U.in the summer of 2004, culminating in a protest show in Brooklyn on the eve of the Republican National Convention
Edited sentence: Shoplifting exploded onto the Seattle landscape in early 2003, quickly impacting a music community that (with a few exceptions) had grown stale and apolitical in the wake of the city’s gentrification, and the decreased visibility of Riot Grrrl and other similarly radical movements.Shoplifting is a punk band formed in 2002 in Seattle, Washington.They also toured with Erase Errata and King Cobra, self-released a cassette, actively organized against sexual violence in their community, and helped launch the Seattle chapter of Bands Against Bush, a national struggle of artists against the domestic and international terrorism and imperialism of the U.in the summer of 2004, culminating in an unforgettable protest show in Brooklyn the eve of the Republican National Convention