Original sentence: Cranford (born 24 May 1867 in Brooklyn, New York; died 1920) After their marriage, the Hooples were living at 102 Decatur Street, Brooklyn by 1896.Hoople opened his own leather business, which manufactured Goodyear welting at 50 Terry Street, New York City
Edited sentence: By 1888 Hoople was living at 1475 Pacific, Brooklyn.Cranford (born 24 May 1867 in Brooklyn, New York; died 1920) By 1896 the Hooples were living at 102 Decatur Street, Brooklyn.Hoople opened his own leather business, which manufactured Goodyear welting at 50 Ferry Street, New York City