Original sentence: Harvey and Cartoone were given a standing ovation in Chicago when they supported the US band Spirit in 1969.Harvey was a co-founder of Stone the Crows in late 1969.He also accompanied Cartoone on their live tour of the United States supporting Led Zeppelin.In 1969 Harvey joined Scottish band Cartoone to record some tracks for their second album.In the 1960s he was asked to join The Animals by Alan Price, but chose to stay with his brother in the Alex Harvey Soul Band.It was while on stage with Stone the Crows at Swansea Top Rank in 1972 that he was killed, electrocuted by touching an unearthed microphone with wet hands.John Lee Hooker, whose songs both Harvey and Cartoone used to cover on their tour of the UK, was their opening act.Leslie (Les) Harvey (13 September 1945 - 3 May 1972) (brother of Alex Harvey) was a guitarist in several Scottish bands of the late 1960s and early 1970s, most notably Stone the Crows.The Blues Council made one record, Baby Don't Look Down then, in March 1965, their tour van crashed, killing vocalist Fraser Calder and bassist James Giffen, and the rest of the band went their separate ways
Edited sentence: Harvey demonstrated such virtuoso guitar playing on the tour that Led Zeppelin's Jimmy Page reportedly was very impressed with him.He also accompanied Cartoone on their live tour of USA supporting Led Zeppelin.In 1969 Leslie Harvey joined Scottish band Cartoone to record some tracks for their 2nd album.In the 1960s he was asked to join The Animals by Alan Price, but chose to stay with his brother Alex in the Alex Harvey Soul Band.It was while on stage with Stone the Crows at Swansea Top Rank in 1972 that he was killed, electrocuted by touching an ungrounded microphone with wet hands.John Lee Hooker, whose songs both Les and Cartoone used to cover on their tour of the UK, was actually their opening act this time.Les and Cartoone were given a standing ovation in Chicago when they supported the US band Spirit in 1969.Leslie (Les) Harvey (13 September 1945 - 3 May 1972) (brother of Alex Harvey) was a guitarist in several Scottish bands of the late 1960s and early 1970s, most notably Stone the Crows - previously known as 'Power'.The Blues Council made one record, Baby Don't Look Down then in March 1965 their tour van crashed killing vocalist Fraser Calder and bassist James Giffen and the rest of the band went their separate ways