Original sentence: Around 1994 the scene fragmented, and forked off into the more sophisticated sounds of Jungle (with its heavy Black influences) and Drum and Bass (which, it could be argued, takes its cues from 1970s synth-based progressive rock - though it would be unlikely that practioners of this style would admit this).Breakbeat hardcore (or rave) is a style of electronic music.It was an early 1990s offshoot of the Acid House scene of late [1980s]] Britain.The music itself very much reflected the scenes drugs of choice, Ecstasy, LSD and amphetamines, with its bombastic beats, manic synths, ear-piercing vocal shots and rumbling bass-lines
Edited sentence: Around 94 the scene fragmented, and forked off into the more sophisticated sounds of Jungle (with its heavy Black influences) and Drum and Bass (which, it could be argued, takes its cues from 70s synth-based progressive rock - though nobody would ever admit this).Breakbeat hardcore (or rave) was an early 1990s offshoot of the Acid House scene of late 80s Britain.The music itself very much reflected the scenes drugs of choice, Ecstasy, LSD and Amphetamines, with its bombastic beats, manic synths, ear-piercing vocal shots and rumbling bass-lines