Original sentence: Men in the Haredi community may choose to be exempt while enrolled in Yeshivas (see Tal Law), a practice that is a source of tension.Most Haredim do not serve in the IDF and therefore cause a social inequality among the citizens of Israel who are obligated to serve by law
Edited sentence: Men in the Haredi community may choose to be exempt while enrolled in Yeshivas (see Tal Law), a practice that is a source of much social tension in Israel.Most Haredim take this exemption and do not serve in the IDF