Original sentence: Not suprisingly the trip is a disaster full of misadventures, as Oglas and Ogo are not adept hunters.The clan are sat around on the plateau as granfather Gogas chases after the mole.There was also a thirty-minute long special, Gogwana
Edited sentence: Not surprisingly, the trip is a disaster full of misadventures, as Oglas and Ogo are not adept hunters.The clan are sat around on the plateau as grandfather Gogas chases after the mole.There was also a 30-minute long special, Gogwana