Original sentence: "We were eighteen girls who were having a function and he came to say a few words to bless the occasion.At fifteen, she had crossed into Mozambique to join the guerrillas, adopting the chimurenga (liberation war) name of Tichaona Muhondo ("we shall see/resolve this in the battle").Josiah Magama Tongogara is a fallen fighter of the Zimbabwe revolution, and streets are named after him in almost every town in the country
Edited sentence: "We were 18 girls who were having a function and he came to say a few words to bless the occasion.At 15, she had crossed into Mozambique to join the guerrillas, adopting the chimurenga (liberation war) name of Tichaona Muhondo ("we shall see/resolve this in the battle").Josiah Magama Tongogara is a fallen hero of the Zimbabwe revolutionary war, and streets are named after him in almost every town in the country