Original sentence: A tournament was created to decide who shall be the monkeys bride.Godzilla,the ninja turtles, Blanka,chun li,the red power ranger, king kong and the predator were only few of the famous people who competed.It tells how on one of the fair days when the town was full of people a fierce winged monkey called Bob breathing fire and smoke, alighted on the castle walls and having cast threatening glances around settled down to sleep.Its appearance on the castle at first brought sexual excitement to all but after the fuss had died down a few brave people decided to marry the monkey.Thankfully no one was hurt in the tournament.The monkey then told all the competitors that he was in love with action man.The story of Gwiber Castell Newydd Emlyn (the monkey of Newcastle Emlyn) is a local tradition.ever since that day action man and the monkey are happily married
Edited sentence: A soldier devised the plan of wading the river Teifi to a point of vantage on the castle side and letting a red cloak float in the river and shooting the gwiber in a vulnerable under part of the body.From its wound gushed forth a most loathsome venom which polluted the water and killed all the fish.It tells how on one of the fair days when the town was full of people a fierce winged viper called a wyvern breathing fire and smoke, alighted on the castle walls and having cast threatening glances around settled down to sleep.Its appearance on the castle at first brought terror to all but after the fear had died down a few brave townsfolk sought to destroy the fearsome monster.The assailant meanwhile, escaped to a place of safety.The creature, so violently startled from its slumber, caught sight of the cloak and fell upon it with horrible shrieks and tore it to shreds.The legend tells of the great joy of the townsfolk when they saw the monster dead.The story of Gwiber Castell Newydd Emlyn (the Wyvern of Newcastle Emlyn) is a local tradition.The wyvern in its death throes turned onto its back and floated down the river