Original sentence: Although her mother married her stepfather left soon afterwards.Born in 1985 in New Jersey, Melody Gardot was brought up by her mother and never knew who her father was.For several years after the accident Melody also needed to carry a TENS machine strapped to her waist which released pain reducing impulses
Edited sentence: Although her mother eventulally married, her stepfather left soon afterwards.Born in 1985 in New Jersey, Melody Gardot was brought up by her Grandmother who came from Vienna.For several years after the accident Melody also needed to travel with a physiotherapist and carry a TENS machine strapped to her waist which released pain reducing impulses.Her mother travelled widely and she never knew who her father was