Original sentence: In May of 2009, A Sports Illustrated article reviewing owners of Major League Baseball franchises rated Angelos as one of the five worst owners in the United States.The article notes that the methodology "was not scientific" and "weighing heavily in the decision was the team's success or failure on the field
Edited sentence: In May of 2009, A Sports Illustrated article reviewing owners of Major League Baseball franchises rated Angelos as the worst owner in the United States.They credit him with "stripping down one of baseball's proudest franchises