Original sentence: Essentialism of gender in feminist theory presents a problem regarding transfeminism.Gayle Salamon writes about trans studies are to be "the breaking apart of this category, particularly if that breaking requires a new articulation of the relation between sex and gender, male and female"
Edited sentence: Furthermore, the essentialism of gender in feminist theory presents a problem when understanding transfeminism.Instead of understanding trans studies as another subsection or subjectivity to be subsumed under the category of "woman", we understand the task of trans studies to be "the breaking apart of this category, particularly if that breaking requires a new articulation of the relation between sex and gender, male and female"