Original sentence: An overwhelmingly popular mayor, Shirley Franklin has nontheless received criticism over her sweeping pro-business policies, which have resulted in increased property values and higher real estate taxes.Franklin has been criticized for the cost and results of a new brand and marketing campaign, budgeted at $4.5 million dollars, made to coincide with the opening of the new Georgia Aquarium.Franklin may well be a viable contender for a future Georgia governor's race.Her popularity has led to increased speculation that Ms.In response, emphasis has been placed on affordable workforce housing as a key component of new development activities within the city including the Franklin-supported Belt Line project.The campaign includes a new logo, banners, TV ads, and a hip-hop style song called "The ATL", written by producer Dallas Austin that was met with mixed reviews.With solid popular support and strong backing from the business sector, Shirley Franklin was easily reelected Atlanta Mayor on November 8, 2005, garnering more than 90% of the vote
Edited sentence: An overwhelmingly popular mayor, despite the failure to rebuild one of the most decrepit water and sewer systems of any large U.But with solid popular support and strong backing from the business sector, Shirley Franklin was easily reelected Atlanta Mayor on November 8, 2005, garnering more than 90% of the vote.Franklin may well be a viable contender for a future Georgia governor's race, although her popularity outside of Atlanta is questionable.Her incredible popularity has led to increased speculation that Ms.She recently backed a new ad campaign for the city, called "The Atl", with a song penned by Atlanta hip-hop producer Dallas Austin.The over $200 million dollar campaign, made to coincide with the opening of the new Georgia Aquarium, had garnered much critisism for the cost, which includes a new logo, banners, and TV ads, and the hip-hop style song that has not been well recieved, even by local fans of the music.city, Shirley Franklin has nontheless received criticism over her sweeping pro-business policies, which have resulted in increased property values and higher real estate taxes