Original sentence: Breaking Dawn is the fourth novel in the worst series ever, the Twilight series, by the worst author ever, Stephenie Meyer.It is the last novel of the Twilight series to be told from Bella Swan's perspective, and hopefully the last novel that Meyer ever writes
Edited sentence: Breaking Dawn is the fourth novel in the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer.It is the last novel of the Twilight series to be told from Bella Swan's perspective