Original sentence: Proponents argue that deregulation of the downstream sector will bring additional benefits in the long term.The downstream oil sector is a term commonly used to refer to the selling and distribution of products derived from crude oil.The term is getting more popular in Nigeria today as a result of its government's desire to deregulate the petroleum aspect of the economy and the refusal of the populace to accept this because of the possibility of increased prices of petroleum products
Edited sentence: However, this is just an aspect, Deregulation of the downstream sector will bring additional benefits in the long term.The "DOWNSTREAM OIL SECTOR" is a term commonly used to refer to the selling and distribution of products derived from crude oil.The term is getting more poular in nigeria today as a reult of its  governments desire to deregulate the petroluem aspect of the economy and the refusal of the populace to accept this because of the definite slippery slope of increase in prices of petroleum products