Original sentence: Ali Akbar Khan () (April 14, 1922 – June 19, 2009) was an Indian sarod player.Khan was nominated for five Grammy Awards and was awarded India's second highest civilian honor, the Padma Vibhushan, in 1989.Khan was the first Indian musician to record an LP album of Indian classical music in the United States and to play sarod on American television
Edited sentence: Ali Akbar Khan () (April 14, 1922 – June 19, 2009) was an  is considered among the finest musicians of our times, a master of the Hindustani music tradition in Indian Classical Music.He was awarded one of India's highest civilian honours, the Padma Vibhushan.His mastery of the Sarod was incomparable.In the 1950s, he established his music school in San Rafael, California, and lived there the rest of his life training and teaching students, in addition to performing all over the world