Original sentence: Bagri/Choolistani (0.9% population speaks a Punjabi Rajasthani mix specially in desert area).Haryanvi (1.1% population speaks a mixture of Punjabi and Urdu.Majhi & Malwi (standard Punjabi dialect spoken by 45% specially in majority in Sadiqabad and Khanpur Tehsils and sizeable population in cities).Other languages include Urdu, the national language, and English language, the official language.Riasti (local dialect spoken by 51% population which is a mix of Rajasthani, Punjabi and Saraiki.The inhabitants of the district speak several dialects that are variously described as belonging to Saraiki or Punjabi
Edited sentence: Bagri/Choolistani (0.9% Population speaks a Punjabi Rajhastani mix specially in Desert area).Haryanvi (1.1% population speaks A mixture of Punjabi and Urdu.Majhi & Malwi (Standard Punjabi dialect spoken by 45% specially in majority in Sadiqabad and Khanpur Tehsils and sizeable population in cities).Other Languages include Urdu being national language,English language is understood and spoken by the educated elite.Riasti (Local state dialect spoken by 51% population which is a mix of Rajhastani, Punjabi and Multani(Saraiki).The inhabitants of the district speak a great variety of Punjabi dialects, although few of these dialects are called as separate language “Saraiki”, but because of good  and loving nature of people there is no distinction or hate among different dialects and have a mix culture of Great Bahawalpur State, Punjab and Choolistan