Original sentence: On 24 June 2005, Christian Voice's bankers, the Co-Operative Bank, told the organisation to take its account elsewhere as Christian Voice's anti-homosexual policy was in conflict with the ethical bank's own policy of support for diversity
Edited sentence: On 24 June 2005, Christian Voice's bankers, the Co-Operative Bank, invited the organisation to take its account elsewhere as Christian Voice's anti-homosexual policy was in conflict with the ethical bank's own policy of support for diversity