Original sentence: " This was in direct contrast to the work of Michael Mann and others whose work gave rise to the “Hockey Stick” graph that showed a sudden rise in modern times.Subsequently the research that was the basis for the Hockey Stick the subject of three separate enquiries: the U.Von Storch and several other editors subsequently resigned
Edited sentence: " This was in direct contrast to the work of Michael Mann and other whose controversial work gave rise to the “Hockey Stick” graph that showed 1000 years of steady global temperature followed by a sudden rise in modern times."[2] The paper was peer reviewed, returned to authors for corrections, and approved by de Freitas for publication.As managing editor, de Freitas gave it to five others for peer-review.De Freitas has asserted, "None were from what some might [term] 'the other side' or are individuals who might be known for their opposition to the notion that humans are significantly altering global climate.Subsequently the research that was the basis for the Hockey Stick was discredited by three separate enquiries: the U.Von Storch subsequently resigned,