Original sentence: Subsequently, with donations from Canadian benefactors, the Jewish National Fund preserved this entire region of ancient, medieval and modern history by making it a recreational space, Canada Park, which contains Yalo and three other neighbouring villages, Dayr Ayyub, Imwas and Bayt Nuba, as well as ruins of a Maccabeean fort and a Crusader fort and numerous smaller antiquities
Edited sentence: Subsequently, with donations from Canadian benefactors, the Jewish National Fund built Canada Park, a recreational space, on the ruins of Yalo and three other neighbouring villages, Dayr Ayyub, Imwas and Bayt Nuba