Original sentence: Although England forgot the issue, there was much bitterness in Scotland about the result - reflected in the poor election results Margaret Thatcher experienced in Scotland.They claimed that the 40% rule was undemocratic and that the referendum results justified the establishment of the assembly
Edited sentence: Although England forgot the issue, there was much bitterness in Scotland about being cheated out of their parliament by the voting conditions - something reflected in the poor election results Margaret Thatcher experienced in Scotland.They argued that the 40% rule was undemocratic and that the referendum results justified the establishment of the assembly