Original sentence: Bill has 4 living children; Rexford, William Wayne, Jeannie Fields, and Atha Lee.Bill's response to the positive DNA test results was "Finally, I know the truth".His wife of many years, Roberta Mabry, died last summer, June 1, 2008
Edited sentence: Bill has four living children; Rexford, William Wayne, Jeannie Fields, and Atha Lee.Bill's response to the positive DNA test results was "Finally, the truth has been revealed".His beloved wife of many years, Roberta Mabry, died last summer on June 1, 2008