Original sentence: Most diasporic Muslims, however, appreciate religious freedom and are tolerate other faiths.On the other hand, a few distance themselves completely from their “idolatrous” surroundings and look forward to the day when their new countries will become Muslim
Edited sentence: Most diasporic Muslims, however, appreciate their religious freedoms and are willing to tolerate other faiths.Some distance themselves completely from their “idolatrous” surroundings and look forward to the day when their new countries will become Muslim.Some of these zealots are willing to engage in violence to advance the day