Original sentence: As an undergraduate, Quick was awarded the Times Mirror Fellowship from the Journalism Resources Institute at Rutgers.Prior to her employment at CNBC, she covered retail and e-commerce industry topics for the  The Wall Street Journal, and helped launch the paper's website in April 1996.Quick graduated from Rutgers University in 1993 with a BA in Political Science, and was editor-in-chief of The Daily Targum.Quick grew up in Indiana, Texas, and Oklahoma as her geologist father and his family followed "booms" in oil production.Quick served as the site’s International News Editor, overseeing foreign affairs coverage.Squawk Box aired a You Tube video of a tribute song made about Becky on June 3, 2009, which has prompted some questions about the network's concern for the safety of their anchors
Edited sentence: (Quick was previously married.) Squawk Box aired a You Tube video of a tribute song made about Becky on June 3, 2009, which has prompted some questions about the network's concern for the safety of their anchors.As an undergraduate, Quick was awarded a Times Mirror Fellowship from the Journalism Resources Institute at Rutgers.Prior to her employment at CNBC, Quick covered retail and e-commerce industry topics for the  The Wall Street Journal, helping to launch the paper's website in April 1996.Quick grew up in Indiana, Texas and Oklahoma as her geologist father and his family followed "booms" in oil production.Quick is a graduate of Rutgers University (a 1993 BA in political science) and was editor-in-chief there of The Daily Targum.Quick served as the site’s international news editor, overseeing foreign affairs coverage