Original sentence: According to counterterrorism experts, as a result of the occupation, foreign Islamists seem to be increasingly tolerated and even welcomed by Iraqis.Information from American military commanders battles in and around Ramadi has yielded similar conclusions on the part of American military commanders; out of 1300 suspected insurgents arrested in five months of 2005, none were non-Iraqi.Nevertheless, the presence of at least some foreign fighters has been confirmed, such as the arrest on September 7, 2005 of 150 non-Iraqi Arabs in Tal Afar.This estimate is bolstered by the Pentagon's own figures; in an analysis of over 1,000 insurgents captured in Fallujah (as stated by U.Usage of the term "foreign fighters" has received criticism as being Western-centric because taken literally, the term would encompass all non-Iraqi forces, including coalition forces.Zarqawi is considered the head of an insurgent group called Al-Tawhid Wal-Jihad ("Monotheism and Holy War"), which according to U.occupation in Iraq are from outside the country, it is generally agreed that foreign fighters make up a small percentage of the insurgency
Edited sentence: According to some, as a result of the occupation, foreign Islamists seem to be increasingly tolerated and even welcomed by Iraqis.An estimate by the Pentagon figures, in an analysis of over 1,000 insurgents captured in Fallujah (as stated by U.Information from American military commanders battles in and around Ramadi has also had similar estimate; out of 1300 suspected insurgents arrested in five months of 2005, none were non-Iraqi.Though, such as on September 7, 2005, American and Iraqi forces in operations around Tal Afar found 150 non-Iraqi Arabs (in addition to 50 Iraqis with fake documents).Usage of the term "foreign fighters" has received criticism as being Western-centric because taken literally, the term would encompass all non-Iraqi forces (which would include the multinational coalition).Zarqawi is believed to be the head of an insurgent group called Al-Tawhid Wal-Jihad ("Monotheism and Holy War"), which according to U.occupation in Iraq are from outside the country, it has been proposed that foreign fighters make up a small percentage of the insurgency