Original sentence: Some archaeologists have identified present-day Tilaurakot, Nepal, while some others have identified present-day Piprahwa, India as the location for the historical site of Kapilavastu, the seat of governance of the Shakya state that would have covered the region
Edited sentence: Some archaeologists have identified present-day Tilaurakot, Nepal as the location for the historical site of Kapilavastu, the seat of governance of the Shakya state that would have covered the region