Original sentence: The wave of recent mortgage foreclosures in the United States has resulted in many people walking away from their homes without emptying their swimming pools.This results in the pools turning green with algae and becoming mosquito breeding grounds in less than a week
Edited sentence: The wave of recent mortgage foreclosures has resulted in many people walking away from their homes without emptying their swimming pools.This irresponsible behaviour results in the pools turning green with algae and becoming mosquito breeding grounds in less than a week