Original sentence: InfoLab21 at the University is the North West's Centre of Excellence for Information and Communication Technologies.Lancaster is also home to St Martin's College, primarily a college for teacher training, Lancaster and Morecambe College, Lancaster Royal Grammar School, Lancaster Girls' Grammar School, Ripley S.The city is home to Lancaster University at Bailrigg, one of the top universities in the United Kingdom and one of only three business schools in the country to have achieved a 6 star rating.The university remains the area's biggest employer, although despite its respected status, has produced few noteworthy alumni
Edited sentence: InfoLab21 at the University is intended by it to be the North West's Centre of Excellence for Information and Communication Technologies, although whether that intention will be realised remains to be seen.Lancaster is also home to St Martin's College, Lancaster and Morecambe College, Lancaster Royal Grammar School, Lancaster Girls' Grammar School, Ripley S.The city is home to Lancaster University at Bailrigg, said to be one of the top universities in the United Kingdom and in 2005 was one of only three business schools in the country to have been given a "6 star" rating.The university, despite its respected status, has produced few noteworthy alumni