Original sentence: Boiler Room are an Alternative/Nu-Metal act whom formed in 1996.The band, featuring vocalist Chris Lino, guitarist Rob Caggiano, bassist James Meselsohn, and drummer Mike Meselsohn toured through their local club scene for several years, building up their material and performance skills.The next year Boiler Room signed to Roadrunner Records, which was slated to release their debut album, "Can't Breathe", for the summer of 2000.The record, however, failed to come out after several delays, and soon Boiler Room signed to the Tommy Boy label
Edited sentence: Each song on the record follows a familiar routine and with it's clichéd musicianship, certainly by 2000, it didn't lend much weight to the theory that America was climbing out of its well-packaged Korn, Orgy and Linkin Park transitional years with any visible progress.The album shows a competent, however slightly flaccid interpretation of Trent Reznor-esque vocalization and a Rage Against The Machine style alternative metal assault.The band, featuring vocalist Chris Lino, guitarist Rob Caggiano, bassist James Meselsohn, and drummer Mike Meselsohn toured rigorously through their local club scene for several years, building up their material and performance skills.The next year Boiler Room would sign to Roadrunner Records, which was slated to release their debut album, "Can't Breathe", for the summer of 2000.The record, however, failed to come out after several delays, and soon Boiler Room found themselves on the Tommy Boy label.Their track "Do It Again" made an appearance on the MTV based "Return Of The Rock" compilation in the summer of 2000.This article is in regards to Alternative/Nu-Metal act Boiler Room, whom formed in 1996