Original sentence: Shore has a comprehensive performing arts program.Sydney Church of England Grammar School (also known as the Shore School and SCEGS) is an independent, Anglican, day and boarding school for boys' in North Sydney, New South Wales, Australia.The school has its own weekly publication, The Shore Weekly Record, which, along with informing boys and parents of upcoming happenings in the school and sporting fixtures and results, gives a certain group of boys the opportunity to express their writing and artistic talents in their own section, usually the inner part of the publication
Edited sentence: Shore has a comprehensive performing arts program, led by well-respected theatre technician Dave Cervetto.Sydney Church of England Grammar School (also known as the Shore School and SCEGS) is an Anglican school for boys in North Sydney, New South Wales, Australia.The current inside section is temporarily called the Epicentre.The school also boasts its own weekly publication, The Shore Weekly Record, which, along with informing boys and parents of upcoming happenings in the school and sporting fixtures and results, gives a certain group of boys the opportunity to express their writing and artistic talents in their own section, usually the inner part of the publication