Original sentence: The Mark Foley scandal concerns Republican congressman Mark Foley's instant messages and e-mails to former congressional pages, and the handling of information about the allegations against Foley by the media, FBI, House officials, and congressional leadership of the Republican Party
Edited sentence: The Mark Foley scandal concerns Republican congressman Mark Foley's alleged sexually explicit instant messages and suggestive e-mails to former congressional pages, and the handling of information about the allegations against Foley by the media, FBI, House officials, and congressional leadership of the Republican Party