Original sentence: She gathered together a dozen development and regeneration professionals (and two academics in the field) and organised a structured series of site visits and discussion meetings to draft the “Guide to Development in Manchester” (published January 2007).The group was convened and led by article Lesley Chalmers, Chief Executive of Hulme Regeneration Ltd (a Manchester public/private regeneration partnership), following her facilitation of "A Guide to Development" for Hulme, published in 1994
Edited sentence: " The solution was New Cathedral Street, with Urbis, Cathedral Gardens and Exchange Square."I wanted to break that barrier."Manchester was divided between the wealthy south and poor north and Market Street was the dividing line," he says.(A scan of which can be seen here.)  She gathered together a dozen development and regeneration professionals (and two academics in the field) and organised a structured series of site visits and discussion meetings to draft the “A Guide to Development in Manchester” (published January 2007).Number One Deansgate, the city’s first high-end residential block, was built on the least commercially valuable plot.Simpson lived there for some years, before moving to the penthouse in the Beetham Tower.The group was convened and led by Lesley Chalmers, Chief Executive of Hulme Regeneration Ltd (a Manchester public/private regeneration partnership), following her facilitation of "A Guide to Development" for Hulme, published in 1994