Original sentence: As the recipient was of Sufi origin, Bahá'u'lláh used historical and religious subtleties which sometimes used only one or a few words to refer to Qur'anic verses, traditions, and well-known poems.Bahá'u'lláh writes that the heart of the seeker is touched, and the seeker has fallen in love with God.Here the mystic is rendered Majnun (literally: insane) by the awareness of God.In English, frequent footnotes are used to convey certain background information.It is explained that ardour, and patience are required to traverse this valley.Nearly every line of the text contains rhymes, and plays on words, which can be lost in translation.The next valley is the Valley of Love and in this valley the seeker is compared to a moth who has found a flame.The valley of search is describes as the first step that a seeker must take in his path
Edited sentence: Bahá'u'lláh writes that the heart of the seeker is touched by the glory of the Manifestation of God, whom he had found through the first valley, and the seeker has fallen in love with the Manifestation of God.Here the mystic is rendered majnun, or insane, by the awareness of God: this relates to the state of bewilderment and amazement experienced by many mystics, what Chögyam Trungpa has termed "crazy wisdom.In addition to these subtleties there are also historical and religious connotations that are equally difficult to translate.In it explained that ardour, and patience are required to traverse this valley.It was a common practice for Sufis to communicate by using only one or a few words to refer to Qur'anic verses, traditions, and well-known poems.Nearly every line of the text contains rhymes, and plays on words, which are mostly lost in translation.The first valley is the Valley of Search and it describes the the first step that a seeker must take in his path, which is the recognition of the Manifestation of God.The next valley is the Valley of Love and in this valley the seeker is compared to a moth who has found a flame, the Manifestation of God.The original word in Arabic was Ma'rifat, which is difficult to translate to English, and means a combination of understanding, recognition and knowledege.The third stage of the journey of the seeker is the Valley of Knowledge