Original sentence: Bring the Jubilee, by Ward Moore, is a 1953 novel of alternate history, in which the point of divergence occurs when the Confederate States of America are victorious at the Battle of Gettysburg, and eventually win the "War of Southern Independence" by July 4, 1864
Edited sentence: Bring the Jubilee, by Ward Moore, is a 1953 novel of alternate history, in which the point of divergence occurs when the Confederate States of America are victorious at the Battle of Gettysburg, and eventually win the "War of Southron Independence" by July 4, 1864