Original sentence: In Unaccustomed Earth there is a departure from the original ethos; Lahiri's characters embark on a new stage of development.In her recent Unaccustomed Earth, she moves on to a scrutiny of the fate of the second and third generations.Jhumpa Lahiri (Bengali: ঝুম্পা লাহিড়ী; born on July 11, 1967) is an Indian-American author.Lahiri places struggles, anxieties, and biases under her microscope so as to better chronicle the nuances and details of immigrant psychology and behavior.No gesture, no sorrow is spared in her examinations.She wrote about first-generation immigrant parents' struggles to keep their children acquainted with Indian culture and traditions.She wrote about how the parents struggle to keep their children close to them even after they have grown up in order to hang on to the Indian tradition of a joint family, where the parents, their children and the children's family live under the same roof.The parents, who are usually portrayed as the original immigrants, are especially devoted to community and their responsibility to other immigrants.The readers sees more clearly the departure of the second and following generations from the constraints of their parents.Until Unaccustomed Earth, her concerns were confined, for the most part, to Indian immigrants to America and their struggle to raise a family in a country very different from theirs
Edited sentence: Her stories describe their efforts to keep their children acquainted with Indian culture and traditions and to keep them close even after they have grown up in order to hang on to the Indian tradition of a joint family, in which the parents, their children and the children's families live under the same roof.Jhumpa Lahiri (Bengali: ঝুম্পা লাহিড়ী; born on July 11, 1967) is an Indian American author.Lahiri examines her characters' struggles, anxieties, and biases to chronicle the nuances and details of immigrant psychology and behavior.She shows how later generations depart from the constraints of their immigrant parents, who are often devoted to their community and their responsibility to other immigrants.These stories scrutinize the fate of the second and third generations.Unaccustomed Earth departs from this earlier original ethos as Lahiri's characters embark on new stages of development.Until Unaccustomed Earth, she focused mostly on first-generation Indian American immigrants and their struggle to raise a family in a country very different from theirs