Original sentence: In 2010, a new model of the Phantom Lapboard was released, which is designed to work with Internet TV, gaming and media centers.It was first released on June 23, 2008 two years after its originally planned release date.On June 6, 2010 ZiggyTek named the Phantom Lapboard Gadget of The Week.On May 23, 2010 Phantom Entertainment launched a new website selling a new model of the lapboard, designed to be a peripheral for new Internet TV technology.The new lapboard received Hardware Heaven's highest review award, the Gold Seal.com put the Phantom Lapboard in their Father's Day gift guide
Edited sentence: It was released on June 23, 2008 two years after its originally planned release date.On June 6, 2010 ZiggyTek awards the Phantom Lapboard with Gadget of The Week.Phantom Entertainment May 23, 2010 launches new website and receives newest upgraded production shipment designed to be a peripheral for new Internet TV technology.The Phantom Lapboard is designed to work with Internet TV, Gaming and Media Centers.The Phantom Lapboard is for sale on thier website.The Phantom Lapboard receives Hardware Heaven's highest review award the Gold Seal.Updates to Phantom Lapboard include overall quality and more stable signal strength from their contract manufacturer's new advanced factory in China.com puts the Phantom Lapboard in their Father's Day Gift Guide