Original sentence: Asuka Masamune- the coolest, manliest guy in his whole school.He excels in judo, karate and he's the captain of the kendo team and he's even the best player in the country... but he has a secret: The things he really loves are sweets, cute things, cooking, shōjo manga and sewing.He hides this part of his life from everyone else but then he meets a girl named Ryo Miyakozuka....The July 2009 issue of Hana to Yume magazine, in which Otomen runs, announced that a live action drama has been green-lit, and would premier on Japanese television on August 1, 2009.is the latest work by manga artist Aya Kanno, which has been running in Bessatsu Hana to Yume since late 2006
Edited sentence: Asuka Masamune is the coolest, manliest guy in his whole school.He excels in judo and karate, and as captain of the kendo team he reached the national championship tournament.He hides this part of his life from everyone else but then he meets a girl named Ryo Miyakozuka, the daughter of a martial artist and heir to his dojo.However, he has a secret: the things he really loves are sweets, cute things, cooking, shōjo manga and sewing.Serial chapters have been collected in eight tankobon volumes by Hakusensha as of July 2009.The July 2009 issue of Hana to Yume magazine, in which Otomen runs, announced that a live-action drama has been green-lit, and would premier on Japanese television on August 1, 2009.The manga is rewritten and illustrated by Aya Kanno and has been serialized in the shōjo manga magazine Bessatsu Hana to Yume since 2006.is a romantic comedy manga by manga artist Aya Kanno, which has been running in Bessatsu Hana to Yume since late 2006