Original sentence: Air Chief Marshal Hakimullah, NI(M), SJ, SBt, (born 15 October, 1935) was the Chief of Air Staff of Pakistan Air Force from 9 March, 1988 to 8 March, 1991.Hakimullah was commissioned as a fighter pilot on 11 January, 1957 in 23rd GD(P) Course.He was awarded Sitara-e-Jurat for his valor and leadership in the 1971 war
Edited sentence: Air Chief Marshal Hakimullah, NI(M), SJ, SBt, (born 15 October, 1935) was the Chief of Air Staff of Pakistan Air Force from 9 March 1988 to 8 March 1991.Hakimullah was commissioned as a fighter pilot on 11 January 1957 in 23rd GD(P) Course.He was awarded Sitara-e-Jurat for his valor and leadership in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971