Original sentence: Otto Neitzel (born 6 July 1852 in the town of Falkenhagen in East Pomerania,  died 10 March 1920 in Cologne) was a German composer, music author and lecturer
Edited sentence: Otto Neitzel (born 6 July 1852 in the town of Falkenhagen in East Pomerania; died 10 March 1920 in Cologne) was a German composer, music author and lecturer