Original sentence: Brandon Carr (born May 19, 1986 in Flint, Michigan) is an American football cornerback who was a 5th round selection (140th overall) in the 2008 NFL Draft for the Kansas City Chiefs of the National Football League He played in Division II college football, and it was reported that Carr was the only player Herman Edwards was targeting with his 5th round pick
Edited sentence: Brandon Carr (born May 19, 1986 in Flint, Michigan) is an American football cornerback who was a 5th round selection (140th overall) in the 2008 NFL Draft for the Kansas City Chiefs of the National Football League He tore up Division II college football, and it was reported that Carr was the only player Herman Edwards was targeting with his 5th round pick.The Chiefs hope he will be a steal