Original sentence: Kate Sheppard was born Catherine Wilson Malcolm in Liverpool, England to Scottish parents.She married Walter Allen Sheppard three years later, and their only child Douglas Sheppard was born on December 8 1880.Sheppard's involvement arose primarily from her religious beliefs, which she had derived from her/my mother
Edited sentence: She married Walter Allen Sheppard three years later, and their only child Douglas was born on 8 December 1880.Sheppard was born Catherine Wilson Malcolm in Liverpool, England to Scottish parents.Sheppard's involvement arose primarily from her religious beliefs, which she had derived from her mother