Original sentence: In 1998, after riding Flight Deck, a 24 year old Spanish-speaking man, who could not read the English-language warning signs, entered a locked, gated area underneath the ride to retrieve a hat
Edited sentence: In 1998, after riding Flight Deck (Top Gun at the time), a 24 year old Spanish-speaking man, who could not read the English-language warning signs, entered a locked, gated area underneath the ride to retrieve a hat