Original sentence: Although the Temple Lot church solicited donations for its proposed temples from individuals and even from other Latter Day Saint organizations, little money was forthcoming (and none from the other organizations), and construction never progressed beyond excavating for the structure's foundation.This unsightly hole was filled in by the city of Independence in 1946, after the Temple Lot church had abandoned all efforts on the project
Edited sentence: Although the Temple Lot church solicited donations for its proposed temple from individuals and even from other Latter Day Saint organizations, little money was forthcoming (none from the other organizations), and the project never progressed beyond excavating for the structure's foundation.This unsightly hole was filled in by the city of Independence in 1946, after the Temple Lot church had finally abandoned all efforts on the project