Original sentence: (updated through July 29th games).Alex Rodriguez: 34.Carlos Lee: 3.Garrett Anderson: 49.Ichiro Suzuki of the Seattle Mariners needs 50 hits for a ninth consecutive 200-hit season that would break the over 100-year-old record of eight consecutive seasons set by Willie Keeler from 1894–1901.Ichiro Suzuki: 45.Jim Thome of the Chicago White Sox needs 15 home runs to reach 10th on the all time list.Magglio Ordonez: 94.Manny Ramirez: 55.Mike Hampton: 3
Edited sentence: (updated through August 5th games).Alex Rodriguez: 25.Carlos Lee: 1.Garrett Anderson: 44.Ichiro Suzuki of the Seattle Mariners needs 41 hits for a ninth consecutive 200-hit season that would break the over 100-year-old record of eight consecutive seasons set by Willie Keeler from 1894–1901.Ichiro Suzuki: 36.Jim Thome of the Chicago White Sox needs 12 home runs to reach 10th on the all time list.Magglio Ordonez: 88.Manny Ramirez: 50.Mike Hampton: 2