Original sentence: In 1995, however, FIP entered into a five year publishing and distribution agreement with Penguin.Several editions are now available from various publishers.Several of these editions, including the edition from the Foundation for Inner Peace, have copyrights based on the addition of material from the shorthand notes inadvertently left out of earlier publications and on minor stylistic adaptations such as the addition or deletion of commas.Some of the various editions available include:.These editions are based on those of Schucman's writings that are copyright free, and also based on an earlier manuscript taken from the ARE library (which has also been rendered "copyright free")
Edited sentence: In 1995, however, FIP entered into a 5 year publishing and distribution agreement with Penguin.Several "Study editions" are now available from various publishers.Several of the Study editions, including the edition from the Foundation for Inner Peace, have copyrights based on the addition of material from the shorthand notes inadvertently left out of earlier publications and on minor stylistic adaptations such as the addition or deletion of commas.Some of the various Study editions available include:.These Study editions are based on those of Schucman's writings that are copyright free, and also based on an earlier manuscript taken from the ARE library (which has also been rendered "copyright free")