Original sentence: However, as of December 2005, Bush's approval ratings have rebounded to 47% according to the latest ABC News/Washington Post poll.The dip of President Bush's job approval ratings below 40% according to most respected national polls.The numbers show a major hike from the week prior, and are higher than the other polls taken during the similar time period, and are attributed to the successful round of elections in Iraq on December 15, 2005, as well as an improved economic outlook
Edited sentence: However The ABC/Washington Post poll on Bush's job approval that is significantly out of line with nearly every other polling organization.However, as of December 2005, Bush's approval ratings have rebounded to 47% according to ABC news and the Washington Post.The dip of President Bush's current job approval below 40% according to most respected national polls