Original sentence: Furthermore, regular reporting on WSIS Stocktaking is the outcome of the Tunis phase of the Summit, which was launched in order to serve as a tool for assisting with the WSIS follow-up.The WSIS Stocktaking Platform is the new initiative that was launched by Mr Zao, ITU Deputy Secretary-General and chair of ITU’s WSIS Task Force, in February 2010 to improve existing functionalities and transform the former static database into a portal to highlight ICT- related projects and initiatives in line with WSIS implementation.The WSIS Stocktaking Process is a follow-up to WSIS.The platform offers stakeholders interactive networking opportunities via Web 2.0 applications
Edited sentence: Furthermore, regular reporting on WSIS Stocktaking is the outcome of the Tunis phase of the Summit, which was launched in order to serve as a valuable tool for assisting with the WSIS follow-up.The WSIS Stocktaking Platform is the new initiative that was launched by Mr Zao, ITU Deputy Secretary-General and chair of ITU’s WSIS Task Force, in February 2010 to improve existing functionalities and transform the former static database into a unique portal to highlight ICT- related projects and initiatives in line with WSIS implementation.The WSIS Stocktaking Process is a follow-up to WSIS (World Summit on the Information Society)that was initiated in 2004.The platform offers stakeholders exciting and interactive networking opportunities via Web 2.0 applications