Original sentence: Best Track: Franz Ferdinand - "Take Me Out".Best Video: Green Day - "American Idiot".It suffered during the late 1990s and early 2000s as British music was leaning heavily towards manufactured pop.Recent years have seen a return to form of the paper driven by bands including Muse, The Libertines, Franz Ferdinand and Scissor Sisters, although the recent focus on gossip concerning ex-Libertines member Pete Doherty has led to some criticism
Edited sentence: Best Track: Franz Ferdinand - Take Me Out.Best Video: Green Day - American Idiot.It suffered during the late 1990s and early 2000s as British music became dull and uninventive.Recent years have seen a return to form of the paper driven by bands including Muse, The Libertines, Franz Ferdinand and Scissor Sisters, indeed major media observers claim that it is currently in the first full rush of a new golden age