Original sentence: Erin and Opal in 1995, Hurricane Ivan in September 2004, and Hurricane Dennis in July 2005 each had significant impacts on the community.Landfalling hurricanes cause significant damage to Navarre Beach due to its position on a low-lying barrier island.Navarre Beach experiences hurricanes, and severe damage was done by several
Edited sentence: Ivan did severe damage; Hurricane Katrina was only a glancing blow and did minor damage compared to the utter devastation done farther west.Navarre Beach has had the misfortune of being hit by 5 major hurricanes over an 11 year period, three of them within a year of each other: Hurricanes Erin and Opal in 1995, Hurricane Ivan in September 2004, Hurricane Dennis in July 2005, and Hurricane Katrina in August 2005