Original sentence: At the end of his first Oxford year, Hall also won the university's Newdigate Prize, awarded for his long poem, 'Exile'.During his senior year, he won the Glascock Prize that Koch had won 3 years earlier
Edited sentence: At the end of his first Oxford year, Hall also won the university's prestigious Newdigate Prize, awarded for his long poem, 'Exile'.During his senior year, he won the prestigious Glascock Prize that Koch had won 3 years earlier