Original sentence: The iPod touch is a portable media player and Wi-Fi mobile platform designed and marketed by Apple Inc.The product was launched on September 5, 2007 through an event called The Beat Goes On
Edited sentence: The iPod touch is a portable media player and Wi-Fi mobile platform designed and marketed by [[Apple Inc.] made to their best of ability The product was launched on September 5, 2007 through an event called The Beat Goes On