Original sentence: And for some time, he was the most popular player in the PBA after Robert Jaworski.He had heart.He was not only popular...he was also respected and well loved and even appeared for BATIBOT, a popular kiddie show during the 80's.In 1990, Samboy scored a record setting 42 points on his way to winning the most valuable player award in the PBA All-Star Game.In his professional career, Samboy Lim was a star player for San Miguel Beer's Grand Slam title in 1989 under coach Norman Black though he usually came off the bench to spark the team's offensive attack.It was even believed that the sportmanship award was given because they knew that he can't complete full season to qualify for that MVP.J" Erving even though Lim stood barely six-feet.The national team is composed of an all-star pro players such as 1990 PBA Most Valuable Player Allan Caidic, Alvin Patrimonio, Ramon Fernandez, Hector Calma,  and Samboy Lim.The team did a great job winning all games with a large margin but lost in the final against China and settled for the silver medal
Edited sentence: He had heart, and for some time, he was the most popular player in the PBA after Robert Jaworski.He was not only popular but he was also respected and well loved and even appeared for BATIBOT, a popular kiddie show during the 80's.In 1990, Samboy scored a record setting 42 points on his way to winning the Most Valuable Player award in the PBA All-Star Game.In his professional career, Samboy Lim was a star player for San Miguel Beer's Grand Slam title in 1989 under coach Norman Black, though he usually came off the bench to spark the team's offensive attack.It was even believed that the sportsmanship award was given because they knew that he can't complete full season to qualify for that MVP.J" Erving even though Lim stood six-feet-one.The national team was headed by 1990 PBA Most Valuable Player Allan Caidic, Alvin Patrimonio, Ramon Fernandez, Hector Calma, and Samboy Lim.The team did a great job winning all games with a large margin but lost in the finals against China and settled for the silver medal