Original sentence: "  The two-state solution envisages an independent State of Palestine alongside the State of Israel, west of the Jordan River.The two-state solution refers to a solution of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict currently under discussion, which calls for "two states for two peoples
Edited sentence: "  The two-state solution envisages a second (in addition to Jordan) independent State of Palestine alongside the State of Israel in the territory of the former British Mandate of Palestine.Actually the "two-state solution" is a common misnomer for what is really a three state solution, Israel and Jordan already being two states carved out of the Palestinian Mandate so that a new "Palestinian" state would constitute a third state.The main point on which the two-state solution formula differs from those for an independent Palestinian state is that it calls for direct negotiations between Israel and the Palestinian Authority.The two-state solution refers to the solution to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict  currently under discussion, which calls for "two states for two peoples