Original sentence: 1500 in Carcassonne, France - 1560 in Paris) was the first lieutenant general of French Canada and a pirate.Jean-François de la Roque de Roberval ( c.On January 15 1541, King Francis I of France gave de Roberval a commission to settle the province of Canada and provide for the spread of the “Holy Catholic faith”.The King provided some funds for the expedition of 1541 and provided de Roberval with three ships, the Valentine, the Anne and the Lechefraye
Edited sentence: " The King provided some funds for the expedition of 1541 and provided de Roberval with three ships, the Valentine, the Anne and the Lechefraye.1500 in Carcassonne, France; † 1560 in Paris) was the first lieutenant general of French Canada and a pirate.Jean-François de la Roque de Roberval (* c.On January 15 1541, King Francis I of France, in the words of his commission, sent "Jean-François de La Roque, knight errant, our faithful central core, for the good and entire trust that we have in his common sense by long experience, his loyalty and other praiseworthy virtues" to Canada where he assigned him the responsibility to "laws by us, to construct and erect towns, forts, temples and churches to communicate our holy catholic faith… and growth of our holy Mother the Catholic Church from whom we are the first and chosen son," a reference to France's claim to preeminence in Christendom as "Eldest Daughter of the Church