Original sentence: "   The Yankees won the American League pennant, but lost a seven-game World Series to the Pittsburgh Pirates thanks to Bill Mazeroski's dramatic home run.I would say this is a very good man.Now, thats five points, and we ain't even gotten to his hitting.Then he gets a point for base running, which is very good, and another point for all around speed, and one more point for brains.When asked about his right fielder, manager Casey Stengel said, "Well, this here fella, I give him a point for his arm, which is very strong, and a point for his fielding
Edited sentence: The Yankees won the American League pennant, but lost a seven-game World Series to the Pittsburgh Pirates thanks to Bill Mazeroski's dramatic home run