Original sentence: The Pittsburgh Steelers are a professional American football team based in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania.The Steelers are the oldest and most championed franchise in the AFC.They are the only team in NFL playoff history to win a Super Bowl after being seeded sixth in the playoffs, winning three consecutive games on the road followed by a Super Bowl XL victory in Detroit on February 5 2006 against the Seattle Seahawks
Edited sentence: The Pittsburgh Steelers are a very bad professional American football team based in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania.The Steelers are the oldest and most championed franchise in the AFC but, sadly are not comparable to the magnificent Bengals.They are the only team in NFL playoff history to win a Super Bowl after being seeded sixth in the playoffs, but th only to have to cheat to do it, winning three consecutive games on the road followed by a Super Bowl XL victory in Detroit on February 5 2006 against the Seattle Seahawks