Original sentence: Dedan Kimathi Waciuri, self-proclaimed Field Marshal, (October 31, 1920 – February 18, 1957) was a Kenyan rebel leader who fought against British colonization in Kenya in the 1950s.However many other Kenyans, particularly of the Kikuyu tribe, viewed him as a freedom fighter.The British colonial government that ruled Kenya at the time considered him a brutal terrorist, as did many Kenyans who supported the suppression of the Mau Mau Uprising.Under his leadership the Mau Mau killed at least two thousand Kenyan civilians
Edited sentence: Dedan Kimathi Waciuri, self-proclaimed Field Marshal, (October 31, 1920 – February 18, 1957) was a Kenyan rebel leader who fought against the British colonial rule  in Kenya in the 1950s.However many Kenyans, particularly of the Kikuyu tribe, viewed him as a freedom fighter.The British colonial government that ruled Kenya at the time considered him a brutal terrorist