Original sentence: 2006: The Green Light  (EP).Honor Society had the honor of performing at the Miss Teen USA pageant, which had a worldwide live online broadcast from Atlantis Paradise Island, in the Bahamas.Honor Society has recently been making television appearances in New York City, Milwaukee, Washington DC, and Chicago
Edited sentence: 2005: The Green Light  (EP).During the summer of 2009, Honor Society made several television appearances on local news stations in New York City, Milwaukee, Washington DC and Chicago.In July 2009, Honor Society had the honor of performing at the Miss Teen USA pageant, which had a worldwide live online broadcast from Atlantis Paradise Island, in the Bahamas