Original sentence: In 1978, the band recorded Some Girls (UK #2; US #1) including the disco-influenced "Miss You" (a hit single and a live staple) and the country ballad "Far Away Eyes", the songs in this album were fast, basic guitar-driven rock 'n' roll.That year's resulting album, Tattoo You (UK #2; US #1) featured "Start Me Up"
Edited sentence: In 1978, the band recorded Some Girls (UK #2; US #1), their most focused and successful album in years, despite the perceived misogyny of the title track.Jagger and Richards seemed to channel much of the personal turmoil surrounding them into renewed creative vitality.That year's resulting album, Tattoo You (UK #2; US #1) featured the hugely popular single "Start Me Up".Upon its release Tattoo You was praised by critics as a solid effort and a true return to form for the group.With the notable exception of the disco-influenced "Miss You" (a hit single and a live staple) and the country ballad "Far Away Eyes", the songs in this album were fast, basic guitar-driven rock 'n' roll (motivated by the punk rock music scene)