Original sentence: Christine Anne Perfect was born in the small village of Bouth in the Lake District and grew up in the Bearwood area of Birmingham, where her father, Cyril, was a university lecturer and concert violinist
Edited sentence: Christine Anne Perfect was born in the small village of Bouth in the Lake District and grew up in the Bearwood area of Smethwick, where her father, Cyril, was a university lecturer and concert violinist