Original sentence: After World War II, the number of students tripled, and today MSU has 45,166 students and a 5,200 acre (21 km²) campus, making it one of the nations's largest universities
Edited sentence: After World War II, the number of students tripled as school became a nationally-renowned university.Today, MSU has 45,166 students and a 5,200 acre (21 km²) campus, making it one of the nations's largest universities