Original sentence: Dante had decided to recruit an australian girl as an assistant after, in his words, "he saw in Melbourne more beautiful women per square block than he had seen in any other part of the World".Miller came originally from Geelong, in the australian state of Victoria.Moi-Yo Miller was the stage name of Loretta Miller (born 1914), an australian who became famous as principal assistant to the stage magician Dante.She very quickly became his main assistant and an intergral part of his show Sim Sala Bim
Edited sentence: Dante had decided to recruit an Australian girl as an assistant after, in his words, "he saw in Melbourne more beautiful women per square block than he had seen in any other part of the World".Miller came originally from Geelong, in the Australian state of Victoria.Moi-Yo Miller was the stage name of Loretta Miller (born 1914), an Australian who became famous as principal assistant to the stage magician Dante.She very quickly became his main assistant and an integral part of his show Sim Sala Bim