Original sentence: " However, the eyes do not actually "get tired", the central nervous system does." It appears that any relaxing visual memory will work, to some extent, which could be seen as weakening his argument that 'black' is important.A schoolboy's ability to stay up all night reading a novel rather than a textbook is due to the arousal caused by exciting reading matter, not any fatigue of the eyes specifically.Bates claimed that "black is... the best color to remember" however, he also acknowledged that "a familiar object, or one with pleasant associations, is often easier to remember than one which has no particular interest.Bates reasoned that if a given object could be visualized without strain, it could likewise be seen without strain, and vice versa
Edited sentence: " However, this is a facetious argument , as the eyes do not "get tired," the central nervous system does." It appears that remembering anything relaxing will work, to some extent, which weakens his argument that 'black' is important.A schoolboy's ability to stay up all night reading a novel rather than a textbook is simply due to the arousal caused by exciting reading matter, not any fatigue of the eyes, specifically.Bates claimed that "black is... the best color to remember" however, he also ackowledged that "a familiar object, or one with pleasant associations, is often easier to remember than one which has no particular interest.Bates reasoned, without evidence, that if a given object could be visualized without strain, it could likewise be seen without strain, and vice versa