Original sentence: At the same time the Syrian Observatory for Human Rights reported that residents of Mayssar, Marjeh and Enzarrat districts were fleeing their homes for "neighbourhoods controlled by government forces because of the fighting".It was also reported that about five government soldiers were killed and wounded when rebels detonated their building in Al-Shekh Sa'eed neighborhood.On 28 January, according to the pro-government al-Watan newspaper, the Army made advances and seized the districts of Ballura and Kasr al-Tarrab
Edited sentence: At the same time the Syrian Observatory for Human Rights reported that residents of Mayssar, Marjeh and Enzarrat districts were fleeing their homes for "neighbourhoods controlled by regime forces because of the fighting".It was also reported that about five regime soldiers were killed and wounded when rebels detonated their building in Al-Shekh Sa'eed neighborhood.On 28 January, according to the pro-regime al-Watan newspaper, the Army made advances and seized the districts of Ballura and Kasr al-Tarrab