Original sentence: He was a C student,with a grade point average of 2.35 out of 4.00
Edited sentence: He was a C student, (you dont get "c's" at harvard, but i guess it doesnt matter because his father payed his way in, and thsi just confirms the rumor that he has the lowest IQ ever for a president then again..his father had the second lowest),with a grade point average of 2.35 out of 4.00