Original sentence: Before the Iranian Revolution, the city of Abadan was a popular tourist destination.Mohammed Mossadegh—the Cinema Rex, a movie theatre in Abadan, Iran, was set ablaze by four Islamic Revolution sympathizers in an attempt to help the cause of Iran's Islamic Revolution.On August 19, 1978—the anniversary of the US backed pro-Shah coup d'état which overthrew the nationalists and popular Iranian prime minister, Dr.Only 9% of managers (of the oil company) were from Khuzestan.Summers are dry and hot, with temperatures above 40 degrees almost daily.The climate in Abadan is arid and similar to Baghdad's, but slightly hotter due to Abadan's lower latitude.The world's highest unconfirmed temperature was a temperature flare up during a heat burst in June 1967, with a temperature of.This incident ended up led to the Cinema Rex Fire, where over 350 people perished.Winters are mildly wet and spring-like, though subject to cold spells
Edited sentence: Before the Iranian Revolution the city of Abadan was a popular tourist destination.However, as mild as they are, they can get cold spells.Mohammed Mossadegh — the Cinema Rex, a movie theatre in Abadan, Iran, was set ablaze by four Islamic Revolution sympathizers in an attempt to help the cause of Iran's Islamic Revolution.On August 19, 1978-the anniversary of the US backed pro-Shah coup d'état which overthrew the nationalists and popular Iranian prime minister, Dr.Only a low 9% of managers (of the oil company) were from Khuzestan.Summers are dry and scorching hot with the temp exceeding 40 degrees almost everyday.The climate in Abadan is arid and it's similar to Baghdad's, except Abadan is a little hotter due to its lower latitude.The world's highest temperature ever recorded by a weather station was a temperature flare up during a heat burst in Abadan, June of 1967, with a temperature of 87 °C (188 °F).This incident ended up causing the Cinema Rex Fire, where over 350 people perished.Winters are mildly wet, spring-like and quite pleasant