Original sentence: In due course, Seymour Stein heard Mandy's voice and was, he said, "spellbound.She soon signed with Asylum Records where she released her first CD titled "Mandy Barnett.The album "I've Got A Right To Cry," would be his final contribution to the community who knew him through his work with Ernest Tubb, Brenda Lee, Loretta Lynn, Patsy Cline and Kitty Wells
Edited sentence: In due course, Seymour Stein, who introduced the world to Madonna, Seal, The Barenaked Ladies, k.She soon signed with Asylum Records where she released her first CD as herself, appropriately entitled, "Mandy Barnett.The album "I've Got A Right To Cry," would be his final contribution to the community who knew him through his work with legends Ernest Tubb, Brenda Lee, Loretta Lynn, Patsy Cline and Kitty Wells.lang, heard Mandy's voice and was, he said, "spellbound