Original sentence: An academic study of Andhra's economic activity using offical data collected by the state government of Andhra Pradesh [] at the university of Santiago demonstrate the following economic facts:.An academic study of Andhra's economic activity using offical data collected by the state government of Andhra Pradesh, Govt Of India and World Bank reveal the following highlights.In 2004–2005, Andhra Pradesh was at the Seventh position behind Maharastra,New Delhi, Karnataka, Tamilnadu, and West Bengal,Gujarat in the list of top IT exporting states of India
Edited sentence: An academic study of Andhra's economic activity using official data collected by the state government of Andhra Pradesh  at the university of Santiago demonstrate the following economic facts:.An academic study of Andhra's economic activity using official data collected by the state government of Andhra Pradesh, Govt Of India and World Bank reveal the following highlights.In 2004–2005, Andhra Pradesh was at the Seventh position behind Maharastra,New Delhi, Karnataka, Tamil Nadu, and West Bengal,Gujarat in the list of top IT exporting states of India