Original sentence: Apart from the Grand Trunk Road then known as Sadak-e-Azam ("great road"), which stretches across the breadth of Indian subcontinent, he built monuments which are extant today, including, Rohtas Fort, now a UNESCO World Heritage Site in Pakistan, many structures in the Rohtasgarh Fort in Bihar, Sher Shah Suri Masjid, in Patna, built in 1540-1545 to commemorate his reign
Edited sentence: Apart from the Grand Trunk Road then known as Sadak-e-Azam ("great road"), which stretches across the breadth of Indian subcontinent, he built monuments many of which are extant today, including, Rohtas Fort, now a UNESCO World Heritage Site in Pakistan, many structures in the Rohtasgarh Fort in Bihar, Sher Shah Suri Masjid, in Patna, built in 1540-1545 to commemorate his reign