Original sentence: He and his wife Susan have three children, Jerry (15), Jack (12), and Joe (10)
Edited sentence: He has three children, Jerry (15), Jack (12), and Joe (10) all are amazing athelets.He will cause quite a stir and has the makings of his father.His wife, Susan, if his best friend.Jerry is a querterback whiz, be on the lookout for him on the colledge level soon.Rick ssaid about his wife,"you either have good wife or an ex wife