Original sentence: It then converges with the Middle Fork.Just before where it meets with the Middle Fork to make the Snoqualmie River proper, the river flows through a canyon near Ernie's Grove.Other tributaries include the Taylor River and the Pratt River, both of which enter the Middle Fork; the Tolt River enters at Carnation, and the Raging River at Fall City.The Middle Fork originates from Williams Lake and flows in an easternly direction until it meets with the North Fork near North Bend.The North Fork originates at the outlet of small, rarely visited Kanim Lake.The Snoqualmie River is a 45 mile (72 km) long river in the central portion of King County, Washington.The South Fork begins at the outlet of tiny Source Lake and flows southeast before soon turning southwest and continuing to flow in that direction until after Denny Creek joins.The three main tributaries are the North, Middle, and South Forks, which drain the west side of the Cascade Mountains near the town of North Bend and join near the town of Snoqualmie just above the Snoqualmie Falls
Edited sentence: Just before its confluence with the Middle Fork the river flows through a canyon near Ernie's Grove.Other tributaries of the Snoqualmie River include the Taylor River and the Pratt River, both of which enter the Middle Fork, the Tolt River, which joins at Carnation, and the Raging River at Fall City.The Middle Fork originates from Chains Lakes,, and flows south to Williams Lake, then in an easterly direction until it meets with the North Fork near North Bend.The North Fork originates at the outlet of small, rarely visited Lake Kanim ,.The Snohomish River empties into Puget Sound at Everett.The Snoqualmie River is a  long river in King County and Snohomish County in the U.The South Fork begins at the outlet of tiny Source Lake, , and flows southeast before soon turning southwest and continuing to flow in that direction until after Denny Creek joins.The river's three main tributaries are the North, Middle, and South Forks, which drain the west side of the Cascade Mountains near the town of North Bend and join near the town of Snoqualmie just above the Snoqualmie Falls.state of Washington