Original sentence: Loyalists began to blockade the nearby Holy Cross Primary School when children left for the day accompanied by their parents, some of whom were known former members or sympathisers of the Irish Republican Army.Many of the picketers were equally well-known members or supporters of the Ulster Volunteer Force and Ulster Defence Association.Tension built after the murder that led in the days before the protests to youths from both communities raising more and more flags along Ardoyne Road...The dispute is remembered for its scenes of civil disorder and verbal taunting shown on television news articles across the world, particularly exchanges of abuse that occurred in the presence of visibly frightened young schoolgirls
Edited sentence: , although it is clear that the vast majority of provocation came from the Loyalist side.Loyalists began to blockade the nearby Holy Cross Primary School when children left for the day accompanied by their parents.Many of the picketers were well-known members or supporters of the terrorist Ulster Volunteer Force and Ulster Defence Association.Tension built after the murder that led in the days before the protests to youths from both communities raising more and more flags along Ardoyne Road.The dispute is remembered for its scenes of civil disorder and Unionist verbal taunting of Catholics shown on television news articles across the world, particularly exchanges of Unionist abuse of Catholics that occurred in the presence of visibly frightened young Catholic schoolgirls