Original sentence: At the end of the game, Madame Fate meets with the player and asks them to complete a final puzzle, claiming that her death is the player's fault rather than the fault of any of the carnival workers.Each suspect has a motive; the player tries to discover the secrets hidden within Madame Fate's crystal ball.She has asked the player for help in investigating each quirky carnival worker to determine their whereabouts when the clock strikes twelve.The Queen informs the player that something evil was released along with Emma, and the detective states "I know.The player then sees the detective (see Ravenhearst) talking to The Queen in a phone booth.The player's investigation includes a multitude of people, from Art the Carny to Lucy the Bearded Beauty, while exploring Fate's Carnival
Edited sentence: At the end of the game, Madame Fate meets with you and asks you to complete a final puzzle, claiming that her death is the player's fault rather than the fault of any of the carnival workers.Each suspect has a motive, but only you can discover the secrets hidden within Madame Fate's crystal ball.She has asked for your help in investigating each quirky carnival worker to determine their whereabouts when the clock strikes twelve.The Queen informs the detective that something evil was released along with Emma, and the detective states "I know.We then see the detective (see Ravenhearst) talking to The Queen in a phone booth.Your investigation will include a multitude of fascinating personalities, from Art the Carny to Lucy the Bearded Beauty, while exploring the magical world of Fate's Carnival