Original sentence: Four of the members of the American rock group Of A Revolution: Richard On, Benj Gershman, Marc Roberge, and Chris Culos graduated from Wootton before attending Ohio State University
Edited sentence: Richard On, Benj Gershman, Marc Roberge, and Chris Culos graduated from Wootton before attending Ohio State University.Some of Wootton's most notable alumni are four of the members of the American rock group Of A Revolution