Original sentence: Among the officers slain were Muzaffar Khan (a younger brother of Khan Dauran), three sons of Khan Dauran (Ali Hamid, Muhataram and another), Aslih Khan (the commander of the Emperor's bodyguard), Ali Ahmad Khan, Shahdad Afghan, Yadgar Hasan Khan (Koka), Ashraf Khan, Itibar Khan, Aqil Beg Kambalposh ("Blanket-wearer), Mir Kalu (son of Mir Mushrif) and Ratan Chand (son of the historian Khushhal Chand, who was office-assistant to the imperial Paymaster).Jan Nisar Khan (Son in Law of Nizam) was also killed in Battle of Karnal.Nader Shah’s Court historian gives the exaggerated figures of 100 chiefs and 30,000 common soldiers slain and a vast number taken prisoner.Rustam Ali says that Khan Dauran alone lost 5,000 men, to which we must add at least 3000 for Sa’adat Khan's division, making a total of 8000 slain.Sa’adat Khan and his nephew Nisar Muhammad Khan Sher Jung, as well as Khwaja Ashura (a son of Khan Dauran) were captured alive.The loss on the Iranian side was 2500 slain and twice as many wounded, according to Hanway, who estimates the Mughal casualties in slain as seven times the number of the Persians killed.This relative proportion is probably closer to the truth, though the figures for both sides are exaggerated
Edited sentence: Nader Shah’s court historian gives the exaggerated figures of 100 chiefs and 30,000 common soldiers slain and a vast number taken prisoner.Rustam Ali says that Khan Dauran alone lost 5,000 men with at least 3000 for Sa’adat Khan's division, making a total of 8000 slain.Sa’adat Khan and his nephew, Nisar Muhammad Khan as well as Khwaja Ashura, a son of Khan Dauran, were all captured alive.The loss on the Persian side was around 2,500 slain and twice as many wounded, according to Hanway, who estimates the Mughal casualties in slain as seven times the number of the Persians killed