Original sentence: Although he and Mendou were childhood friends—they still call each other "Ton-chan" and "Shuu-chan"—they had a falling out concerning a long-standing baseball rivalry, even though neither is any good at baseball -- Ton can't pitch and Mendou can't swing, and so Ton returns to settle the score.Voiced by Fumi Hirano in Japanese, by Martha Ellen Senseney in the English Those Obnoxious Aliens, by Larissa Murray in BBC Choice's Lum the Invader Girl dub, by Shannon Settlemyre in movies 1, 3-6 in English), and Roxanne Beck (Movie 2 dub)
Edited sentence: Although he and Mendou were childhood friends—they still call each other "Ton-chan" and "Shuu-chan"—they had a falling out concerning a long-standing baseball rivalry, even though neither is any good at baseball—Ton can't pitch and Mendou can't swing, and so Ton returns to settle the score.Voiced by Fumi Hirano in Japanese, by Martha Ellen Senseney in the English Those Obnoxious Aliens, by Larissa Murray in BBC Choice's Lum the Invader Girl dub, by Shannon Settlemyre (in movies 1, 3-6 in English), and Roxanne Beck (Movie 2 dub)