Original sentence: Chapter about Cheryl Laine the wife to be of William, who has now married and separated from him after he left her for a Linda.Having made it as a newscaster, she is recognised in public places.Her boyfriend Danny often fails to record her newscasts which she feels are the only opportunity for him to look at her nowadays, and similarly she is disinterested in the story of his friend Biff's boyfriend's murder
Edited sentence: Chapter about Cheryl Laine, a news anchor with a complicated love life.Danny informs her of her friend Biff's boyfriend's murder, but he is disinterested.Due to her high profile career, Cheryl is recognised in public places.It is clear that Cheryl vows William as an ex, however.She must remind her boyfriend Danny to record her newscasts, as she feels they are the only opportunity for him to look at her nowadays.She was married to William, but they separated after he left her for a woman named "Linda".The chronology of all this is unclear, as are Cheryl's age and Linda's current significance (or lack thereof) in William's life