Original sentence: In the book, Manji says that Arabs have made a mistake by denying that Jews have a historical bond with Palestine.Manji writes that the Jews' historical roots stretch back to the land of Israel, and  that they have a right to a Jewish state.She also writes that Israel has a free Arab press, that road signs bear Arabic translations, and that Arabs live and study alongside Jews.She further argues that the allegation of apartheid in Israel is deeply misleading, noting that there are in Israel several Arab political parties, that Arab-Muslim legislators have veto powers, and that Arab parties have overturned disqualifications
Edited sentence: In the book, Manji says that the Arab's failure to accept the Jews' historical bond with Palestine is a mistake.Manji accepts that the Jews' historical roots stretch back to the land of Israel, and  recognizes their right to a Jewish state.She also observes that Israel has a free Arab press; that road signs bear Arabic translations; and that Arabs live and study alongside Jews.She further argues that the allegation of apartheid in Israel is deeply misleading, noting that there are in Israel several Arab political parties; that Arab-Muslim legislators have veto powers; and that Arab parties have overturned disqualifications