Original sentence: For example, there was much criticism from audiences when Eun Jae comes back as So Hee, drawing a mold on her right cheek and everyone fails to recognize her as Eun Jae  Other controversies have dealt with the speediness of the drama and overly set up plot
Edited sentence: For example, there was much criticism from audiences when Eun Jae comes back as So Hee, drawing a mole on her right cheek and everyone fails to recognize her as Eun Jae.Other controversies have dealt with the speediness of the drama and overly set up plot.They also just believe that she is a totally different person because she has a different personality, she used to be a kind person, but now she is mean/ruthless, causing everyone to believe that she is a different person