Original sentence: Fleur Fenton Cowles (born January 20, 1910) is an American writer, editor and artist best known as the creative force behind the short-lived Flair magazine.Her pictures feature surrealistic images; big cats idling in small boats and moonlit gardens amid butterflies, birds and over-sized flowers.This magazine is now sought after by collectors and sells for significant amounts on Ebay
Edited sentence: Fleur Fenton Cowles (born January 20, 1910) is an American writer, editor and artist best known as the creative force behind the short-lived but fabled Flair magazine.It is a world of magical realism entirely without menace.Produced on her lap wherever she happens to be, her pictures flow in a dreamlike stream of almost surrealistic images; big cats idling in small boats and moonlit gardens amid butterflies, birds and over-sized flowers.This magazine is now much sought after by collectors and makes impressive sums on Ebay