Original sentence: Alleged inconsistencies in the reported medical records and other testimony, including evidence suggesting that fatal injuries may have been sustained after the initial incident, have lead to conspiracy theories concerning his death.However, strong inconsistencies in the evidence have been alleged, both in the medical records, and in inquiry testimony
Edited sentence: However, strong inconsistencies in the evidence were visible both within the medical records, and emerged as testimony during the inquiry.Inconsistencies in the reported medical records and other testimony, including evidence suggesting that fatal injuries may have been sustained after the initial incident, have lead to conspiracy theories concerning his death