Original sentence: He became a political poet at this time; his works expressing the need to resist the Turks.He joined the military service in 1535 in 1539 was wounded in a battle, which renderd him ineligible for further military service.He then began to put his poems to music and performed them to the accompaniment of a lute.He travelled to Translyvania for a while and returned in 1555, but died shortly thereafter.His songs became recognized as an important chroniclization of the events of the day by Nádasdy Tamás in 1545, who recommended to Parliament that this become a public post for Sebestyén
Edited sentence: He became a political poet at this time, his works expressing the need to resist the Turks.He joined the military service in 1535 and in 1539 was wounded in a battle, which rendered him ineligible for further military service.He then began to put his poems to music and performed them to the accompaniment of a lute, which lead to his nickname, "Lantos" - the lute-player.He traveled to Transylvania for a while and returned in 1555, but died shortly thereafter.His songs became recognized as an important chronicalization of the events of the day by Nádasdy Tamás in 1545, who recommended to Parliament that this become a public post for Sebestyén