Original sentence: HareAugustus John Cuthbert Hare (March 13, 1834 – January 22, 1903) was an English writer and raconteur.The Augustus Hare Society.To the first belong Memorials of a Quiet Life (his adoptive mother's), Story of Two Noble Lives (Lady Canning and Lady Waterford), The Gurneys of Earlham, and an autobiography
Edited sentence: Augustus John Cuthbert Hare (March 13, 1834 – January 22, 1903) was an English writer and raconteur.His writings are all interesting and informative, but in general suffer from his tendency to diffuseness.There is further information available from The Augustus Hare Society.To the first belong Memorials of a Quiet Life (his adoptive mother's), Story of Two Noble Lives (Lady Canning and Lady Waterford), The Gurneys of Earlham, and an inordinately extended autobiography