Original sentence: After being passed in the House, it was voted down in a Senate committee without reaching the floor for debate.Kern authored a bill, which passed the Oklahoma House of Representatives in March of 2008, mandating that students who believe in Young Earth creationism still receive passing grades in Earth science classes
Edited sentence: After being passed in the House, it died in a Senate committee without reaching the floor for debate.Kern authored a bill, which passed the Oklahoma House of Representatives in March 2008, mandating that students who espouse Young Earth creationism still receive passing grades in Earth science classes.Kern is well-known for her religiously conservative views and for being a stalwart supporter of right-wing values