Original sentence: However, dialogue in the film and the World's End DVD pamphlet insert states that Will is forever bound to the Dutchman (as it is not mentioned in the film what would happen to a captain if his lover was faithful to him, and the pamphlet insert was not written by the films' writers, it is better to believe that Will was allowed to return to Elizabeth and his son)
Edited sentence: However, dialogue in the film and the World's End DVD pamphlet insert states that Will is forever bound to the Dutchman (but as it is not mentioned in the film what would happen to a captain if his lover was faithful to him, and the pamphlet insert was not written by the films' writers, it is better to believe that Will was allowed to return to Elizabeth and his son)