Original sentence: The $300 million dollar advertising campaign was designed to challenge Apple's Get a Mac campaign by showing everyday people to be PC users, and defend Microsoft from PC stereotypes without criticizing Apple.The choice of spokespeople used in the campaign has also been criticized to a certain extent as some of the celebrities endorsing the product are known as owners of the iPhone, which is manufactured by Apple, (Williams); supportive of the iPod (Chopra); or in the case of Longoria Parker photographed carrying a Mac at an airport check-in counter.The intent is to demonstrate how PC users are ordinary people, and creatively tease Apple
Edited sentence: The $300 million dollar advertising campaign was designed to challenge Apple's Get a Mac campaign by showing everyday people to be PC users.The choice of spokespeople used in the campaign has also been criticized as some of the celebrities endorsing the product are known as owners of Apple's iPhone (Williams); supportive of the iPod (Chopra); or in the case of Longoria Parker photographed carrying a Mac at an airport check-in counter.The intent is to demonstrate how PC users are ordinary people