Original sentence: Edoardo Bosio a merchant worker in the British textile industry had visited England and experienced the game.He returned to Turin in 1887 and was motivated to help spread football in his homeland; he founded Torino Football and Cricket Club that year while Nobili Torino ("Turin Nobles") soon followed
Edited sentence: Edoardo Bosio, a merchant worker in the British textile industry had visited England and experienced the game.He founded Torino Football and Cricket Club that year while Nobili Torino ("Turin Nobles") soon followed.He returned to Turin in 1887 and was motivated to help spread football in his homeland