Original sentence: After completing the initial financing that raised approximately $7 million dollars, Garfield purchased 12 unique stainless steel doomed Budd cars from John S.However, in the subsequent years, high crew costs, several spectacular and costly accidents, and an unprofitable expansion into service between Lousiville, Kentucky and Sanford combined to put Garfield's company into bankruptcy.Several years later, federally-funded Amtrak purchased some of the rolling stock and terminals and instituted a very similar service, which it calls Auto Train, and is still operating as of May 2007.The company placed a full page advertisement in the New York Times, which created a near frenzy of ticket sales almost immediately.The initially successful venture was launched in 1971
Edited sentence: After completing the initial financing that raised approximately $7 million dollars, Mr.Amtrak subsequently instituted a very similar service, which it calls Auto Train, and is still operating as of May 2007.Garfield purchased 12 unique stainless steel doomed Budd cars in a deal he struck with John S.However, high crew costs, several spectacular accidents, and an unprofitable expansion put Garfield's company into bankruptcy.The successful venture was launched in 1971.With Garfield's vision and creativity, the company placed a full page advertisement in the New York Times, which created a near frenzy of ticket sales almost immediately