Original sentence: Many former railways are converted into long-distance cycleways, such as large setions of the National Cycle Network in the United Kingdom.Often, in order to be retained as commerically viable structures within an urban envionrment, or as part of an urban regeneration project, they may be repurposed for alternative activities.Prominient examples include the ornate Gare d'Orsay in Paris, France, which was converted into the Musée d'Orsay art gallery; and Manchester Central railway station which was put to new use first as a car park, and later refurbished as the Manchester Central Conference Centre
Edited sentence: Many former railways are converted into long-distance cycleways, such as large sections of the National Cycle Network in the United Kingdom.Often, in order to be retained as commercially viable structures within an urban environment, or as part of an urban regeneration project, they may be repurposed for alternative activities.Prominent examples include the ornate Gare d'Orsay in Paris, France, which was converted into the Musée d'Orsay art gallery; and Manchester Central railway station which was put to new use first as a car park, and later refurbished as the Manchester Central Conference Centre