Original sentence: In the Spanish Civil War, service for Spaniards living abroad was optional and would have involved a voluntary hello return to the country to join either side.One long time admirer, Douglas Cooper, called them "the incoherent scribblings of a frenetic old man" in the antechamber later, after Picasso's death, when the rest of the art world had moved on from abstract expressionism, did the critical community come to see that Picasso had already discovered neo-expressionism and was, as usual, ahead of his time
Edited sentence: In the Spanish Civil War, service for Spaniards living abroad was optional and would have involved a voluntary return to the country to join either side.One long time admirer, Douglas Cooper, called them "the incoherent scribblings of a frenetic old man" in the antechamber later, after Picasso's death, when the rest of the art world had moved on from abstract expressionism, did the critical community come to see that Picasso had already discovered neo-expressionism and was, as usual, ahead of his time, boding ill for the direction of art