Original sentence: Applying a forceful paddling to a female student might cause abnormal vaginal bleeding.Depending on how much force is used to swing a paddle, a paddling may cause no visible injury to a student's buttocks, or it might result in extensive bruises that gradually fade but are still visible "even a month later".However, there is no evidence that paddling causes any harm when it is done properly in the normal manner.If applied wrongly, the impact of a paddle could knock a student off of his feet and onto the floor.In the past, paddlings of up to seven licks were not unknown.It is usually a requirement that a professional witness be present.One study has alleged that students with disabilities are "subjected to corporal punishment at disproportionately high rates, approximately twice the rate of the general student population in some States".Partly in order to preclude accusations of this kind, in the majority of U.There have been cases in the past when paddling was administered incorrectly or excessively.schools, paddling is more strictly regulated than in the past, many schools publishing detailed rules in their student handbooks
Edited sentence: Applying a forceful paddling to a female student can cause abnormal vaginal bleeding.Depending on how much force is used to swing a paddle, a paddling may cause no visible injury to a student's buttocks or extensive bruises that gradually fade but are still visible "even a month later".For these reasons, in the majority of U.Students with disabilities are "subjected to corporal punishment at disproportionately high rates, approximately twice the rate of the general student population in some States".The impact of a paddle may knock a student off of his feet and onto the floor.Until fairly recently, paddlings of up to seven licks were not unknown.schools, paddling is more strictly regulated than in the past, some schools publishing detailed rules in their student handbooks