Original sentence: Less controversially, Hanford, the other High School in town has a Falcon mascot.The school district's 2006 budget was about $70 million and there are approximately 10,150 students and 1,100 employees in the school district
Edited sentence: Less provacatively, Hanford, the other High School in town has a Falcon mascot.The school district's 2006 budget was about $70 million and there are approximately 10,150 students and 1,100 employees in the school districy