Original sentence: During the dissolution of the Ottoman Empire, Muslims (including Albanians, Bosniaks, Serbs, Greek Muslims, Pomaks, Circassians, Ottoman Turks and others) and non-Muslims were involved in mutual cycles of persecution, including expropriation, massacres, genocide or ethnic cleansing
Edited sentence: During the dissolution of the Ottoman Empire,  Muslims (including Albanians, Bosniaks, Serbs, Greeks, Pomaks, Circassians, Ottoman Turks and others) were subjected to systematic persecution, including expropriation, massacres, genocide or ethnic cleansing by non-Muslims