Original sentence: Paul officially entered the race on August 5th, 2009 through a series of nationally broadcast TV, radio, and internet programs, followed by his first official fundraiser with Peter Schiff and other nationally known Republican leaders
Edited sentence: Paul officially entered the race on August 5, 2009 through a series of nationally broadcast TV, radio, and internet programs, followed by his first official fundraiser with Peter Schiff and other nationally known Republican leaders