Original sentence: Rabbi Kamenetsky reports that both Rabbi Zelik Epstein, a senior Rosh Yeshiva in America, and Rabbi Moshe Sternbuch, a prominent Halachic authority in Israel, have read Making of a Godol and fully approve of it
Edited sentence: Rabbi Kamenetsky reports that both Rabbi Zelik Epstein, who was a senior Rosh Yeshiva in America, and Rabbi Moshe Sternbuch, a prominent Halachic authority in Israel, read Making of a Godol and fully approve of it