Original sentence: " He is one of the twelve original masters of taekwondo selected from the South Korean military to develop taekwondo under Hong Hi Choi in the Korea Taekwon-Do Association (KTA).Chong Chul Rhee, 8th dan, is the founder and head of Rhee Taekwon-Do
Edited sentence: " He is one of the twelve original masters of taekwondo.Chong Chul Rhee, 8th dan, is the so called founder and head of Rhee Taekwon-Do.He likes to appear at regional gradings to be almost worshiped as some sort of demi-god.He preaches respect but gives none and generally treats even his ardent admirers like insects.It it is quite likely that he has been reading his own propaganda as his management style is quite despotic.Little is understood of his method of grading his students.To those that attend such grading events his decisions appear almost random, certainly arbitrary and  capricious.selected from the South Korean military to develop taekwondo under Hong Hi Choi in the Korea Taekwon-Do Association (KTA)