Original sentence: The DAAC's website serves offers consumers the ability to opt out of interest-based advertising from participating companies through a single page.The OPC study found that notice of OBA and opt-out was given to web users 96% of the time – primarily by way of the AdChoices icon, but they did recommend some improvements, such as ensuring all targeted ads have notice on them and the ability to opt out, companies avoid targeting based on sensitive topics, and closely monitor their use of retargeting
Edited sentence: The DAAC's website serves as a central element of the program by offering consumers the ability to opt out of interest-based advertising from a wide range of participating companies through a single page.The OPC study found that notice of OBA and opt-out was given to web users 96% of the time – primarily by way of the AdChoices icon, but they did recommend some improvements, such as ensuring all targeted ads have notice on them and the ability to opt-out, companies avoid targeting based on sensitive topics, and closely monitor their use of retargeting