Original sentence: (Kōto, Tokyo).NEC Blue Rockets (Fuchū).On the east side of Shinjuku Station, Kabukichō is known for its many bars and nightclubs.On the men's ATP tour Tokyo also hosts a tennis event, most recently won by world-number one and tennis superstar Roger Federer.Once cherry blossoms, or sakura, bloom in spring, many residents gather in parks such as Ueno Park, Inokashira Park, and the Shinjuku Gyoen National Garden for picnics under the cherry trees.Seibu Prince Rabbits (Nishitōkyō).Suntory Sungoliath (Fuchū).The Tokyo Metropolitan Government has designated Hachiōji, Tachikawa, Machida, Ōme and Tama New Town as regional centres of the Tama area, as part of their plans to disperse urban functions away from central Tokyo.Toshiba Brave Lupus (Fuchū).With 36% of its area covered by forest, Tokyo has extensive growths of cryptomeria and Japanese cypress, especially in the mountainous western communities of Akiruno, Ōme, Okutama, Hachiōji, Hinode, and Hinohara
Edited sentence: NEC Blue Rockets (Fuchu).On the east side of Shinjuku Station, Kabukichō is notorious for its many bars and nightclubs.On the men's ATP tour Tokyo also hosts an tennis event, most recently won by world-number one and tennis superstar Roger Federer.Once cherry blossoms,or sakura(桜), bloom in spring, many residents gather in parks such as Ueno Park, Inokashira Park, and the Shinjuku Gyöen National Gardens for picnics under the beautiful cherry trees.Seibu Prince Rabbits (Nishi-Tokyo city).Suntory Sungoliath (Fuchu).The Tokyo Metropolitan Government has designated Hachioji, Tachikawa, Machida, Ome and Tama New Town as regional centres of the Tama area, as part of their plans to disperse urban functions away from central Tokyo.Toshiba Brave Lupus (Fuchu).With 36% of its area covered by forest, Tokyo has extensive growths of cryptomeria and Japanese cypress, especially in the mountainous western communities of Akiruno, Ōme, Okutama, Hachioji, Hinode, and Hinohara