Original sentence: Admiral of the Fleet Alfred Ernle Montacute Chatfield, 1st Baron Chatfield, GCB, OM, KCMG, CVO, PC (27 September 1873 - 15 November 1967) was a Royal Navy officer and held the position of First Sea Lord from 1933 to 1938
Edited sentence: Admiral of the Fleet Alfred Ernle Montacute Chatfield, 1st Baron Chatfield, GCB, OM, KCMG, CVO, PC (27 September 1873 – 15 November 1967) was a Royal Navy officer and held the position of First Sea Lord from 1933 to 1938