Original sentence: Many famous faces have appeared at the Fairfield Halls, including The Beatles, Traffic (who recorded a live album in the halls), Family (who recorded the first side of their album, Anyway in the halls), The Nice (who recorded their album Five Bridges in the halls), Robert Cray, Status Quo, Chuck Berry, Kenny Rogers, Elkie Brooks, Daniel O'Donnell, Shakin' Stevens, The Sinceros, International superstar Petula Clark,Hall & Oates, Free, James Last, Bucks Fizz, Judith Durham and Coolio
Edited sentence: Many famous faces have appeared at the Fairfield Halls, including The Beatles, Traffic (who recorded a live album in the halls), Family (who recorded the first side of their album, Anyway in the halls), The Nice (who recorded their album Five Bridges in the halls), Robert Cray, Status Quo, Chuck Berry, Kenny Rogers, Elkie Brooks, Daniel O'Donnell, Shakin' Stevens, The Sinceros, International superstar Petula Clark, Hall & Oates, Free, James Last, Bucks Fizz, Judith Durham and Coolio