Original sentence: An integral part of three Los Angeles NBA championship teams in 2000, 2001, and 2002, Bryant is considered by many a future Hall-of-Famer and one of the greatest NBA players of his time.At 27 years of age and already in his 10th season, he was one of the first basketball players to make the leap from high school directly to the professional game.Kobe Bean Bryant (born August 23, 1978 in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania) is an All-Star shooting guard in the National Basketball Association.Then, midway through the season, Rudy Tomjanovich suddenly resigned as Lakers coach, citing the recurrence of health problems and exhaustion (although many speculated that Tomjanovich, a two-time NBA champion coach, had despaired of getting his offense to work with the Lakers' depleted and bickering personnel)
Edited sentence: " Then, midway through the season, Rudy Tomjanovich suddenly resigned as Lakers coach, citing the recurrence of health problems and exhaustion (although many speculated that Tomjanovich, a two-time NBA champion coach, had despaired of getting his offense to work with the Lakers' depleted and bickering personnel).At 27 years of age and already in his 10th season in the league, Bryant is considered by many a future Hall-of-Famer and one of the greatest NBA players of his time.Kobe Bean Bryant (born August 23, 1978 in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania) is an All Star shooting guard in the National Basketball Association