Original sentence: After the defeat of Japan in WWII, both Koreas have used "Jian Dao/Gaodo" issue to prop up Korean.On October 14 2004, South Korean foreign affairs minister Ban Ki-moon partially retracted the statement about the voiding of the Gando Convention
Edited sentence: After the defeat of Japan in WWII, however, both Koreas (especially South Korea) have used "Jian Dao/Gaodo" issue to prop up Korean nationalism.Ban Ki-moon partially retracted the statement about the voiding of the Gando Convention.On October 14 2004, South Korean foreign affairs minister.The People's Republic of China, which currently controls and administers that territory, in particular reacted very negatively