Original sentence: The term "repetitive strain injury" is an umbrella term incorporating other discrete diagnoses that have been associated with activity-related arm pain such as carpal tunnel syndrome, cubital tunnel syndrome, thoracic outlet syndrome, DeQuervain's syndrome, stenosing tenosynovitis/trigger finger/thumb, intersection syndrome, golfer's elbow (medial epicondylosis), tennis elbow (lateral epicondylosis), and focal dystonia
Edited sentence: The term "repetitive strain injury" is an umbrella term incorporating other discrete diagnoses that have (intuitively but often without proof) been associated with activity-related arm pain such as carpal tunnel syndrome, cubital tunnel syndrome, thoracic outlet syndrome, DeQuervain's syndrome, stenosing tenosynovitis/trigger finger/thumb, intersection syndrome, golfer's elbow (medial epicondylosis), tennis elbow (lateral epicondylosis), and focal dystonia