Original sentence: Although originally focused primarily on family members, in more recent years NAMI has moved toward trying to include people diagnosed with mental illness as well (although activists have criticized these efforts,.In addition, NAMI has a strong focus on discriminatory attitudes and behaviors about mental illness (what they term stigma); another identified goal is to "to increase public and professional understanding", and "to improve the mental health system".NAMI identifies its mission as to promote recovery by preserving and strengthening family relationships "affected by mental illness".NAMI's programs and services include education, support groups, informational publications, and presentations
Edited sentence: In addition, NAMI has a strong focus on what they term stigma around mental illness; another identified goal is to "eliminate stigma" and "to increase public and professional understanding", and "to improve the mental health system".NAMI identifies its mission as aims to promote recovery by preserving and strengthening family relationships challenged by severe and persistent mental illness.Through peer-directed education classes, support group offerings and community outreach programs, NAMI's programs and services draw on the experiences of mental health consumers and their family members, teaching them to manage mental illness more successfully and to help others do the same