Original sentence: According to Macleans, one story on the PRESS TV's website claims that the Lebanese government is trying to convert the Nahr al-Bared Palestinian refugee camp into an American military base, but provides no evidence to back up this allegation.Mohammad Sarafraz, head of the new channel, said most of Press TV's 30 journalists were non-Iranians, and included many Britons as well as Americans.Mr Sarafraz said training had been provided by a BBC employee.New to Press TV, the Baghdad correspndent is Canadian journalist Amanda Lindhout.Others contend that such practices are not unknown among western news outlets.Press TV has drawn criticism for its endorsement of Holocaust deniers like Dr Nicholas Kollerstrom, formerly of University College, London.Some allege that Press TV sometimes publishes so-called "intentional errors".The channel will have correspondents in London, New York, Washington, Beirut, Damascus, Moscow and several other European capitals, as well as five correspondents covering the Israel-Palestine conflict from Gaza, Ramallah and Jerusalem.The channel's website features a lengthy essay by Dr Kollerstrom, recapitulating the arguments of Fred Leuchter that no Jews were ever gassed at Auschwitz.UCL's withdrawal of an honorary research fellowship from Dr Kollerstrom is cited by Press TV as an example of how "the West punishes people for their scientific research on Holocaust" []
Edited sentence: Mohammad Sarafraz, CEO and head of the new channel, says most of Press TV's 30 initial foreign-based correspondents were non-Iranians, and included many Britons as well as Americans.New to Press TV, is the Baghdad correspondent, Canadian Amanda Lindhout.Sarafraz confirms training had been provided partly by BBC educators.She's rapidly gaining a lot of credit for being among the few journalists, actively present in the dangerous Red Zone.The channel has correspondents in London, New York, Washington, Beirut, Damascus, Moscow and several other European capitals, as well as five correspondents covering the Israel-Palestine conflict from Gaza, Ramallah and Jerusalem Al-Quds