Original sentence: Although commonly used worldwide, the term British Isles is controversial in relation to Ireland, where many people may find the term offensive or objectionable; the Irish government also discourages its use
Edited sentence: Although commonly used worldwide, the term British Isles has been controversial in relation to Ireland, where many people over the history of the term have found it objectionable.The term is not part of the legal terminology of the Irish government, and a sokesperson for the Irish Embassy has said "we would discourage it's usage"