Original sentence: Beckman High School was opened on August 30, 2004, in Irvine, California.In 2007, the California State Board of Education awarded Beckman High School the status of a California Distinguished School.It is a 94 million dollar facility and the newest school to be built in North Irvine, California
Edited sentence: Beckman High School broke ground in 2002.Beckman High School is one of Orange County's finest public High Schools.Beckman High School was opened in August 30, 2004 in Irvine, California.In 2007, the California State Board of Education  awarded Beckman High School the status of a California Distinguished School.It contains a state of art facility with modern technology.It is a 94 million dollar state of the art facility, and is the newest school to be built in North Irvine, California