Original sentence: During the next few hours under strengthing shear, Judy stuggled to maintain itself.Early on December 5, a weak tropical disturbance formed within a moderatly sheared enviorment to the northwest of Fiji.In the Southern Pacific tropical cyclones are assigned names by the RSMC in Nadi, or the TCWC in Wellington   As soon as a tropical depression becomes a tropical cyclone it is named by the warning centre having responsibility for it at that time.RSMC Nadi then released their final advisory on Cyclone Judy early the next day as they passed primary warning responsibilty of the cyclone to TCWC Wellington.Remaining weak the depression lasted untill December 10 when Nadi issued their final advisory on it as it had dissipated.The 2004-05 South Pacific cyclone season was an event in the annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation.The 2004-05 South Pacific cyclone season, got off to an early start with the first tropical depression of the season forming on October 28 about 420 km, (260 miles) to the northeast of Honiara in the Solomon Islands.The Depression gradually moved towards the west and moved into TCWC Brisbane's area of responsbility late on October 30.This came about four days before the offical start to the season
Edited sentence: During the next few hours under strengthing shear, Judy struggled to maintain itself.Early on December 5, a weak tropical disturbance formed within a moderatly sheared environment to the northwest of Fiji.In the Southern Pacific tropical cyclones are assigned names by the RSMC in Nadi, or the TCWC in Wellington  As soon as a tropical depression becomes a tropical cyclone it is named by the warning centre having responsibility for it at that time.RSMC Nadi then released their final advisory on Cyclone Judy early the next day as they passed primary warning responsibility of the cyclone to TCWC Wellington.Remaining weak the depression lasted until December 10 when Nadi issued their final advisory on it as it had dissipated.The 2004–05 South Pacific cyclone season was an event in the annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation.The 2004–05 South Pacific cyclone season, got off to an early start with the first tropical depression of the season forming on October 28 about 420 km, (260 miles) to the northeast of Honiara in the Solomon Islands.The Depression gradually moved towards the west and moved into TCWC Brisbane's area of responsibility late on October 30.This came about four days before the official start to the season