Original sentence: Fang has an online blog by the name of Fang's Blog; this may or may not correspond with the blog of that name linked prominently from the Maximum Ride website, which appears as if written primarily by Fang, with occasional entries from Max, Nudge and Iggy.The actual author or authors of this blog have not been identified
Edited sentence: Fang has an online blog, which he updates whenever possible.Iggy has a soft spot, and seems to harbor a crush on fellow flock memeber, Nudge who frequently is with.Max, Nudge and Iggy all put in occasional entries on the blog as well, complete with pictures and everything.Nudge might a have a crush on fellow flock member Iggy as she is nearly always with him, and was distraught after he went to live with his parents