Original sentence: Acintya, also Atintya (Sanskrit: "the unthinkable", "the inconceivable", "he who cannot be imagined"), also Tunggal (Balinese: "Unity") is the supreme god of Hinduism as practiced in Indonesia and especially in the island of Bali
Edited sentence: Acintya, also Atintya (Sanskrit: "the unthinkable", "the inconceivable", "he who cannot be imagined"), also Tunggal (Balinese: "Unity") is the supreme god of Hinduism as practiced in Indonesia (formally known as Agama Hindu Dharma), and most of all in the island of Bali