Original sentence: However, all faculty at the University of Phoenix have experience in the field they teach, to help provide students with a background in the field.This is in part due to the part-time nature of the majority of UOP's Faculty
Edited sentence: However, all faculty at the University of Phoenix have experience in the field they teach to help provide students with a well-renowed background of the field and act as a mentor for the student.This is in part due to the part time nature of the majority of UOP's Faculty