Original sentence: Over 100 students get an offer from top three universities including SNU, KU (Korea University) and YU (Yonsei University).Whimoon High School (Hangeul: 휘문고등학교, Hanja: 徽文高等學校), located in Seoul, is a private high school in South Korea, located in the Daechi-dong.Whimoon High School students ranked #1 many times to be offered to enter SNU (Seoul National University)
Edited sentence: Over 100 students get an offer from top 3 universities including SNU, KU(Korea University) and YU(Yonsei University).Whimoon High School (Hangeul: 휘문고등학교, Hanja: 徽文高等學校), located in Seoul, is the one of the best private high school in South Korea, just located in the Daechi-dong where the best education service is offered.Whimoon high school students ranked #1 many times to be offered to enter SNU(Seoul National University), which is the best university in South Korea