Original sentence: City Campus is divided into a close network of precincts and is located between La Trobe Street, Elizabeth Street, Queensberry Street and Russell Street, occupying a culturally vibrant section of the city
Edited sentence: City Campus is divided into a close network of precincts and is located between La Trobe Street, Elizabeth Street, Queensberry Street and Russell Street, occupying a friendly, relaxed, culturally vibrant section of the city