Original sentence: According to a map from 700AD, this area was encompassed by an ancient region known as Breifne (Breghne, Brefine, Breifne, Breffny, Breffni, Brefney or Brenny), an area which at that time was within the kingdom of Connaught.It could be hypothesized that the inscriptions on the Reyfad stones constitute the first primitive markings in relation to the Boho area, however it was another few thousand years before mention of the wider geographical region was committed to paper by Ptolomy in 150 AD.The Barony of Clanawley at this time reached into north County Cavan.The earliest references to this area (Tuath-Ratha) go back to 1103 in the Annals of the Loch where it mentions a fierce conflict between the men of Lurg and the Tuath-Ratha, in which fell a multitude on both sides
Edited sentence: It could be hypothesized that the inscriptions on the Reyfad stones constitute the first primitive markings or writings concerning the Boho area, however the significance of the markings is thought only to be symbolic.It was another few thousand years before mention of the wider geographical region was committed to paper by Ptolomy in 150 AD.Later according to a map from 700AD, this area was encompassed by an ancient region known as Breifne (Breghne, Brefine, Breifne, Breffny, Breffni, Brefney or Brenny), an area which at that time was within the kingdom of Connaught.The Barony of Clanawley at this time reached into north of County Cavan.The earliest references to this area (Tuath-Ratha) goes back to 1103 in the Annals of the Loch where it mentions a fierce conflict between the men of Lurg and the Tuath-Ratha, in which fell a multitude on both sides