Original sentence: She is married Jamie Urman, a cinematographer, with whom she has two children.Urman graduated from Princeton University in 1999 with a BA in English and a Certificate from the Program in Theater.Urman has been involved in the production of numerous well known and successful television programs including: Hope & Faith, Gilmore Girls, Men in Trees, Lipstick Jungle, 90210, Emily Owens, M.Urman has said she is often questioned about her "work-life balance…[which] strikes me as sort of funny, because it's not something that often gets asked of men in this business
Edited sentence: According to Urman, she is questioned often about her "work-life balance…[which] strikes me as sort of funny, because it's not something that often gets asked of men in this business.Emily Owens, M.Jennie Snyder Urman has established an important work-life balance despite the constant demands of her work.She is married to husband, Jamie Urman, a cinematographer; they have two children, a son named Theo, and a daughter named Poppy.Urman completed her post-secondary education at Princeton University, graduating in 1999 with a Bachelor of Arts in English and a Certificate from the Program in Theater.Urman has been involved in the production of numerous well known and successful television programs including: Hope & Faith, Gilmore Girls, Men in Trees, Lipstick Jungle, 90210,