Original sentence: Every 20 minutes, Team1200 gives a brief live update on sports, known as a 20/20 update.Known around Ottawa as the "Best radio show ever in the history of mankind," they broadcast a wide variety of shows from Sports, FOX sports, the news, and weather.On weekday mornings, the first show broadcast is Three Guys in the Morning.The Team1200 broadcasts sports twenty-four hours a day, streaming FOX sports at night.They are Steve, Jungle Jim, and Buzz
Edited sentence: (Of course, this article is just displaying the thoughts of around 99.99% of everyone living in Ottawa.After the "Beginning" of their show, where most people are too tired or asleep to listen to them, the three "Guys," start talking about sports.All the Guys hate the Leafs, like anyone who isn't mentally retarded or has married a goat.Every 20 minutes or so, the Team1200 has a 20/20 update, an update on all sports worth watching namely: Hockey.Known around Ottawa as the "Best radio show ever in the history of mankind," they broadcast a wide variety of shows from Sports, FOX sports, the news, weather, and even occasionally insult the worst hockey team in the League (Toronto Maple Leafs).No way does the author of this article have anything to do with the NHL or the Toronto Maple Leafs except as the Number One Ottawa Senators Fan.On every show, they girls, cars, beer, cigarettes, and insulting famous people around the world is always included.On weekday mornings, the first show that is broadcasted is Three Guys in the Morning.Probably large amounts of coffee, cigarettes, and granola bars.The Team1200 broadcasts sports 24/7, streaming FOX sports at night.The Three Guys in the Radio are probably the best show on the station besides the live broadcasts of Sens Games.These brave men wake up everyday early in the morning and get to the studio by 5:30 am.They are Steve, Jungle Jim, and Some other guy who cannot be remember at this instant.Unfortunately, they also broadcast baseball, football, and Tennis.Usually, they begin the day by complaining and groaning about how much they hate waking up in the morning and/or start insulting Steve.Whoever is sound technician for them has way too many Family Guy, Simpsons, and other TV or Movie quotes and sound effects