Original sentence: Especially important was that in it the author attempted a reconciliation of many early schools with the Zohar's teachings, in order to demonstrate an essential unity and self-consistent philosophical basis of Kabbalah.In 1542, at the age of twenty, the Ramak heard a heavenly voice urging him to study Kabbalah with his brother-in-law, Rabbi Shlomo Alkabetz, composer of the mystical song Lecha Dodi.It was reported that the prophet Elijah revealed himself to him.The first was Ohr Yakar (The Precious Light), a 16 volume commentary on the Zohar.The second, Pardes Rimonim (Orchard of Pomegranates), completed in 1548, secured his reputation.Three other books for which the Ramak is known are Tomer Devorah (The Palm Tree of Deborah), in which he utilizes the Kabbalistic concepts of the Sephirot (Divine attributes) to illuminate a system of morals and ethics, [Ohr Neerav]], a justification of and insistence upon the importance of Kabbalah study, and an introduction to its methods, and Elimah Rabbati, a treatise on kabbalistic problems
Edited sentence: Especially important was that in it the author reconciled many early schools with the Zohars teachings, demonstrating the essential unity and self-consistent philosophical basis of Kabbalah.In 1542, at the age of twenty, the Ramak heard a heavenly voice urging him to study Kabbalah with his brother-in-law, Rabbi Shlomo Alkabetz, composer of the mystical song "Lecha Dodi".It is reported that the prophet Elijah revealed himself to him.The first was Ohr Yakar ("The Precious Light"), a voluminous 16 volume commentary on the Zohar.The second, Pardes Rimonim ("Orchard of Pomegranates"), completed in 1548, secured his immortal reputation.Three other books for which the Ramak is known are Tomer Devorah ("The Palm Tree of Deborah"), in which he utilizes the Kabbalistic concepts of the Sephirot (Divine attributes) to illuminate a system of morals and ethics, Ohr Neerav, a justification of and insistence upon the importance of Kabbalah study, and an introduction to its methods, and Elimah Rabbati is a treatise on kabbalistic problems