Original sentence: All year desert is full of activities like hunting, dune climbing, night stay, camping, racing, biking, jeeping etc.But as the river changed its course, the area bacame dry and so abandened.City Park is a small but very beautiful park located in the heart of the city.Dune driving is also very charming.In rainy days the desert is teeming with people.In summer after the rain, people flock to the nearby desert to enjoy picnic or to play.It has many attractions like swimming pools, skating rink, the wheel, the boat, children's train and lush green grounds.Khalifa bin Zayed Al Nahyan, prince of UAE.Khalifa family park is situated in the outskirts of the city about 11 km from city center.Skating is very popular among young boys and girls.The city has many tourist and recreational spots which include children parks, family parks, desert stretches, historical sights, zoos etc.The park is blessed with children's play area, lush green grounds and exotic plants.The park was built in the honour of Sh.The remnants of the civilizations can still be seen today.The zoo is home to many species of peacocks, lions, deer, buck, neel gai, monkeys, ducks, elephant, giraffe, tiger, cougar, crocodile, ostrich, parrots, amazons, pheasants and many others.The zoo is undergoing a major multi-million expansion and upgradation to rub shoulders with modern zoos.There are many newly built family parks in every major residential area.There is a small zoo in the city at Tibi Larran, home to many species of animals and birds.There lies a well known historical site named Pattan Minara, a minaret which dates back to ancients times.There was a complete civilization settled on the bank of Hackra River
Edited sentence: Because of not having well educated staff.Bhong Masjid.But some Schools and Colleges have try to developing education like : Punjab College, Superior College etc.Due to Punjab Govt Rahim Yar Khan in Education field is not too good.Patan Minar.Rahim Yar Khan is such also a good place for tourism.Some best places of Rahim Yar Khan are:.Zam Zam Park   ETC...