Original sentence: Game 2 of the 2007 American League Division Series, in Jacobs Field on October 5, 2007, brought back memories of the old stadium, as swarms of midges (mischaracterized by the television announcers as Canadian Soldiers) infested the field.He sang a version of his signature song "Thanks for the Memory" with special lyrics for the occasion.In November, 1928, Cleveland voters passed (by 112,448 to 76,975, a 59% passage rate with 55% needed to pass) "a $2.5 million levy for a fireproof stadium on the Lakefront".On its last day as home of the Indians on October 3, 1993, the team's fans, led by comedian Bob Hope, who grew up an Indians fan and was once a part-owner
Edited sentence: Game 2 of the 2007 American League Division Series, in Jacobs Field on October 5, 2007, brought back some memories of the old stadium, as swarms of insects mischaracterized by the TV announcers as Canadian Soldiers, but which were actually midges, infested the field.In November, 1928, Cleveland voters passed by "112,448 to 76,975," a 59% passage rate with 55% needed to pass, "a $2.5 million levy for a fireproof stadium on the Lakefront".On its last day as home of the Indians on October 3, 1993, the team's fans, led by comedian Bob Hope (who grew up an Indians fan and was once a part-owner), who sang a version of his signature song, "Thanks for the Memory", with special lyrics for the occasion (as he would do on many of his television shows), bade farewell to the old stadium.The facility had its glorious moments