Original sentence: "   Oftentimes, the impetus behind such "pedophilic behavior" is the belief (seen by some professionals as a delusion) held by the adult that their behavior is helpful and pleasurable to the child.According to one Sociological Encyclopedia, the significance of pedophilia "rests on its unconventionality, an extreme symbol of sexual decadence threatening ‘‘moral’’ communities and nation-states.In some individuals, pedophilia may remain limited to sexual fantasies or urges only; in others, those urges may be expressed as Child Sexual Abuse, which is sometimes termed "pedophilic behavior.The term "pedophile" is also used colloquially to describe those accused or convicted of child sexual abuse under sociolegal definitions of child (including adolescents younger than the local age of consent in addition to prepubescent children)
Edited sentence: "   Oftentimes, the impetus behind such "pedophilic behavior" is the delusion held by the adult that their behavior is helpful and pleasurable to the child.In some individuals, pedophilia may remain limited to sexual fantasies or urges only; in others, those urges may be expressed through the sexual abuse of a child, which is sometimes termed "pedophilic behavior.The term "pedophile" is also used to describe those accused or convicted of child sexual abuse under sociolegal definitions of child (including adolescents younger than the local age of consent in addition to prepubescent children)