Original sentence: After their marriage in 1939, they bought and lived in a  ranch in San Fernando Valley.In the middle 1930s Carole Lombard started an affair with  Clark Gable.They nick named each other Ma and Pa and were role modeled  as the ideal marriage
Edited sentence: After their marriage in 1939, they bought and lived in a beautiful ranch in San Fernando Valley.Carole Lombard is one of the greatest actresses ever existed.In the middle 1930s Carole Lombard started a wonderful love affair with the crowned "King of Hollywood" Clark Gable.She was a real lady, attractive and elegant, vivacious and ironic, with a great charisma.They nick named each other Ma and Pa and were role modeled as the ideal marriage