Original sentence: Farooqui has been a vocal advocate of net neutrality in India.Farooqui, along with nine other entrepreneurs in India, wrote a letter to India's TRAI requesting TRAI to issue clear regulations preventing telecom providers or content providers from acting as gate-keepers offering restricted Internet services instead of the open Internet.He also petitioned the chief ministers of twelve Indian states imploring them to prohibit the issuance of orders that make Internet services entirely inaccessible for a particular area
Edited sentence: Farooqui has been a vocal advocate of Net neutrality in India.Farooqui, along with nine other prominent entrepreneurs in India, wrote a letter to India's TRAI requesting TRAI to issue clear Regulations preventing telecom providers or content providers from acting as gate-keepers offering restricted Internet services instead of the Open Internet.He also petitioned the Chief Ministers of twelve Indian states imploring them to take requisite action that would prohibit the issuance of orders that make Internet services entirely inaccessible for a particular area