Original sentence: "To Godwin" is similar to the poems "To Bowles" and "To Robert Southey" in that they talk about Coleridge's personal life.However, Coleridge and Godwin differed on their views of religion.However, his view of Godwin changed over time and Coleridge grew dissatisfied with the poem.The Sonnets on Eminent Characters was contained many poems dedicated to those Coleridge considered his hero
Edited sentence: However, Coleridge and Godwin differed on their views of religion, which became a source of dispute between the two.However, Coleridge's view of Godwin changed over time and he grew dissatisfied with the poem as a result.Of the poems, "To Godwin" is similar to the poems "To Bowles" and "To Robert Southey" in that they talk about Coleridge's personal life and Godwin's influence over it.The Sonnets on Eminent Characters contained many poems dedicated to those Coleridge considered his hero from many fields