Original sentence: People who criticise the term "transsexual" state that gender reassignment surgery makes people infertile and does not change their chromosomes, rendering the transition cosmetic, not fundamental.Transgender is the state of one's "gender identity" (self-identification as male, female, both or neither) not matching one's "assigned gender" (identification by others as male or female based on physical/genetic sex)
Edited sentence: Some people who criticise the term "transsexual" state that gender reassignment surgery makes people infertile and does not change their chromosomes, rendering the transition cosmetic, not fundamental.Transgender is the state of believing that one's "gender identity" (self-identification as male, female, both or neither) doesn't match one's "assigned gender" (identification by others as male or female based on physical/genetic sex)