Original sentence: Coriolano trained under the painter Guido Reni and modeled many of his woodblock prints on compositions of his teacher, as was common.He was successful and popular though not a technical innovator in the technique of woodblock printing
Edited sentence: Coriolano trained under the painter Guido Reni and modeled many of his woodblock prints on the work of his teacher, as was common.He was successful and popular, though not an innovator in the technique of woodblock printing