Original sentence: After the race, Force India Technical Director Mark Gascoyne announced they were filing official protests with the stewards over the incident, demanding a ban for Kimi.In the Monaco Kimi qualified in second with Massa on pole, the first Ferrari pole at Monaco since 2000.Kimi finished the Grand Prix ninth while Massa took third.Kimi was able to continue, however Sutil was forced to retire from the race, thus denying the Force India team their first points of the season.With wet conditions on the track, Kimi was involved in an incident where Kimi, who lost control of the car in the braking zone after the Monaco tunnel, shunted the rear of Adrian Sutil, who was in fourth
Edited sentence: However, Kimi after coming out of the tunnel, failed to control the car and hit the rear of  Sutil's car at the harbour chicane of Monaco.If Sutil finsihed in 4th it wud give the team its first points and would have been his highest finish.In the Monaco Kimi qualified 2nd with Massa on pole.It was the first time Ferrari was on pole since 2000.Kimi was in 5th place behind Sutil who was driving a force india car.Sutil had to retire in the pits, thus he and his backmarker team Force India were denied valuable points while the World Champion had the nose of his car repaired and went on to clock the fastest lap, finishing 9th.The race was affected by rain and Kimi was involved in an unfortunate incident.Unfortunately, in the race, Kimi finished 9th and Massa 3rd