Original sentence: This anger erupted despite the fact that nearly all of these fifteen black men either had shot a police officer, were shooting at police, had an exposed gun, or were threatening to harm police with a a deadly object
Edited sentence: It should be noted that nearly all of the black men that were killed by police either shot a police officer, were shooting at police, had an exposed gun, or were threatening to harm police with a a deadly object when it happened.Unfortunately, these problems are what keep people away from downtown Cincinnati, further fueling racial tensions