Original sentence: According to the viewpoint informing the title of this book, Moss became Gacys' "last victim" after meeting face to face with the killer clown and was overpowered by the mind of the serial killer where Moss came to understand how not only a killer's mind works into controlling the vulnerable but also how to break them
Edited sentence: He later became Gacy's last "victim" after meeting face to face with the killer clown and was overpowered by the mind of the serial killer were moss was able to understand how not only a killer's mind works into controlling the vulnerable but also how it breaks them