Original sentence: However, when Whittlesey died in 1867, it was the beginning of the end for the school; when it burned down again shortly thereafter, it was never rebuilt.Today, all that remains of the Seminary is a barn and state historical marker
Edited sentence: However, when Whittlesey died in 1867, it was the beginning of the end for the prestigious school; when it burned down again shortly thereafter, it was never rebuilt.Today, all that remains of the once-prestigious Seminary is a barn and state historical marker