Original sentence: " While in prison, Dorie Olds Hofmann filed for divorce.Hofmann was revived, but not before spending twelve hours lying on top of his right arm; the blockage of circulation caused his muscles to atrophy, rendering his forging hand permanently disabled.Thereafter Hofmann attempted suicide in his cell by an overdose of antidepressants
Edited sentence: After Hofmann was imprisoned, his wife filed for divorce.He was revived but not before spending twelve hours lying on his right arm, blocking its circulation and causing muscle atrophy.His forging hand was thereby permanently disabled.Hofmann attempted suicide in his cell by taking an overdose of antidepressants