Original sentence: As Malkin explained in an interview:.FrontPage Magazine wrote, regarding that book, that "Malkin deserves praise for calling attention to problems that even many conservatives would prefer to ignore," and also noted praise that Malkin received from Sean Hannity and Rush Limbaugh...In most cases, I attribute the silence not to willful neglect or ignorance but to lack of interest.Most editors and pundits, including conservative opinion leaders, simply do not care about illegal immigration, even after 9/11.The book was not widely reviewed.There have been no reviews in major newspapers ... Conservative advocates of illegal alien-friendly policies ... presumably are aware of the book but may not want to call attention to it ... Left-leaning advocates of illegal alien-friendly policies seem not to be aware of the book.VDARE founder Peter Brimelow wrote of Malkin's book: "It may not advance her career.com gave it postive coverage
Edited sentence: Far right wing persons and groups such as the American Conservative's Peter Brimelow said of Malkin's book "[i]t may not advance her career.FrontPage Magazine wrote, regarding that book, that "Malkin deserves praise for calling attention to problems that even many conservatives would prefer to ignore," and also noted praise that Malkin received from Sean Hannity and Rush Limbaugh.com also reviewed the book, and endorsed its prescriptions for reducing immigration