Original sentence: Before it can murder her, she places a phone call to her boyfriend, Chris (Dennis Dugan), who has been let in on the werewolf angle and sets off for the colony armed with silver bullets.While investigating, Terri is attacked by werewolves, and one corners her in Waggner's office
Edited sentence: She places a phone call to her boyfriend, Chris (Dennis Dugan), who has been let in on the werewolf angle, while on the phone with chris she is attacked and killed by Eddie Quist, chris hears this and sets off for the colony armed with silver bullets.While investigating, Terri is attacked by a werewolf in a cabin, she escapes after cutting the monsters hand off, and one corners her in Waggner's office