Original sentence: Longing for his new studio and creative outlets, the tour was a commitment that Hendrix was not eager to perform.Several acts played after he left the stage, later part of the stage was burnt during the first stage appearance of Ton Steine Scherben
Edited sentence: Longing for his new studio and creative outlets, the tour was a commitment that the already restless Hendrix was not eager to perform.Several acts played after he left the stage, part of the stage was burnt during the first stage appearance of Ton Steine Scherben