Original sentence: A blackhat hacker has 0-day exploits (private software that exploits security vulnerabilities; 0day exploits have not been distributed to the public).A blackhat promotes freedom rather than security.Blackhats poke holes in systems and do not increase control of information; there are no attempts made to disclose or patch software.To whitehats, the darker the hat, the more the ethics of the activity can be considered dubious
Edited sentence: A blackhat hacker has 0day exploits, which is private software that exploits security vulnerabilities; 0day exploits have not been distributed to the public.And so, the "ethics" of the whitehat hacker actually tightens control and surveillance, benefits corporations, and provides useable exploits for script kiddies.The act of full-disclosure offers script kiddies the tools and exploits they need to hack without any actual expertise.The darker the hat, the more the ethics of the activity can be considered dubious.This person pokes holes in systems and does not increase control of information; there is no attempts made to disclose or patch software.This person promotes freedom and not security.To blackhats, the whitehat hackers are seen as puppets for the security industry.Whitehats disclose security information either because they serve the corporate machine or because they wish to obtain a job in the security industry