Original sentence: Castlerock Golf Club has the 18 hole Championship Mussenden course and the 9 hole Bann course set within the links bounded by the beach, the River Bann and the Belfast to Derry railway line.It is situated between Coleraine and Derry and is very popular with summer tourists, having numerous apartment blocks and three caravan sites.The Mussenden Temple, with its precarious perch on the basalt cliff edge is one of the most photographed scenes in Ireland
Edited sentence: Castlerock Golf Club has the 18 hole Championship Mussenden course and the 9 hole Bann course set within the links bounded by the beach, the River Bann and the Belfast to Londonderry railway line.It is situated between Coleraine and the City Of Londonderry and is very popular with summer tourists, having numerous apartment blocks and three caravan sites.Peden is 9 feet 7 inches tall, four feet taller than the average British male.The Mussenden Temple, with its precarious perch on the basalt cliff edge is one of the most photographed scenes in the island of Ireland.The village is also famous for being home to the tallest known living man in Northern Ireland, Lee Peden, who lived in Freehall Park before moving to nearby village Articlave, in 2006