Original sentence: Hurlingham Club members provides sporting activities including tennis, croquet, cricket, bowls, golf, squash and swimming (with both indoor and outdoor pools) as well as fitness facilities and a gymnasium.In 1867 Frank Heathcote obtained the leave of Richard Naylor to promote pigeon shooting matches at Hurlingham.It also has a rackets court.The Hurlingham provides social and sporting facilities for its members and their guests, including tennis, croquet, cricket, bowls, golf, squash and swimming (with both indoor and outdoor pools) as well as the fitness facilities provided in the Fitness Centre and gymnasium.The club, founded in 1869, is situated by the River Thames in Fulham, west London, and has a Georgian clubhouse set in  of grounds.The pigeon today forms part of the club's crest.There is currently an 8 year long waiting list for membership, but children of current members are given preference when vacancies do arise
Edited sentence: Hurlingham Club members enjoy sporting activities including tennis, croquet, cricket, bowls, golf, squash and swimming (with both indoor and outdoor pools) as well as fitness facilities and a gymnasium.In 1867 Frank Heathcote obtained the leave of Richard Naylor, the Victorian capitalist, to promote pigeon shooting matches at Hurlingham.It also has a notable rackets court, of which there are few in England.The Hurlingham provides social and sporting facilities for its members and their guests, including tennis, croquet, cricket, bowls, golf, squash and swimming (with both indoor and outdoor pools) as well as  the fitness facilities provided in the Fitness Centre and gymnasium.The club has recently hosted several prestigious motorshows.The club, founded in 1869, is situated by the River Thames in Fulham, west London, and has a beautiful Georgian clubhouse set in  of grounds.The pigeon is still the club's crest.There is currently a waiting list for membership, but children of current members are given preference when vacancies do arise