Original sentence: After a handful of points finishes, his involvement in an 11-car pile-up at Brands Hatch left him in hospital and with the car written off.After competing in the British GT Championship in 2008, he has returned to the BTCC in 2009, driving for Team Dynamics.Unfortunately, he survived the crash
Edited sentence: After a handful of points finishes, his involvement in an 11-car pile-up at Brands Hatch left him in hospital and the car severely damaged.After competing in the British GT Championship in 2008, he has returned to the BTCC in 2009, driving for Team Dynamicsalongside multiple champion James Thomson