Original sentence: Mary Lou York was murdered in York’s Grocery Store, of which she was the owner.Prior to her death, en route to the hospital, York also identified Singleton as the murderer, by telling Police Officer Strother, first to arrive at the scene, and her personal physician, Dr.She died from loss of blood as a result of two stab wounds in her neck
Edited sentence: He was 19 years old.Mary Lou York was attacked in York’s Grocery Store, of which she was the owner.Prior to her death, en route to the hospital, York also identified Singleton as the murderer.She died in the hospital from loss of blood as a result of two stab wounds in her neck.She told both Police Officer Strother, first to arrive at the scene, and her personal physician, Dr