Original sentence: Famous people born in Daegu include former president Roh Tae-woo, first lady Kim ok-sook, Politician Park geun-hye, Daewoo Group founder Kim Woo Joong, actresses Son Ye-jin and Lee Jung-hyun, and a living legend actor Shin sung-il
Edited sentence: Famous people born in Daegu include former president Roh Tae-woo, first lady Kim ok-sook, Korea's most popular female politician Park geun-hye,Daewoo Group founder Kim Woo Joong, actresses Son Ye-jin and Lee Jung-hyun, and a living legend actor Shin sung-il