Original sentence: Aaliyah Dana Haughton (January 16, 1979 – August 25, 2001), better known as Aaliyah, was an American singer, dancer, actress, model, and teen idol
Edited sentence: Aaliyah Dana Haughton (January 16, 1979 – August 25, 2001), better known as Aaliyah, was an award winning American singer, dancer, actress, model, and teen idol