Original sentence: Although dark in places, the album has a stronger pop sensibility than "Fireworks".Hamfatter's Myspace pageHamfatter is a quirky pop/rock band from Cambridge (UK), formed in 2001.Official website
Edited sentence: Although dark in places, the album has a stronger pop sensibility than "Fireworks", whilst displaying the ingenuity, unpredictability and sense of fun which characterised the band's debut album.Hamfatter is quirky pop/rock band from Cambridge (UK), formed in 2001.The album is characterised by catchy melodies, clever lyrics and inflections of many different musical genres.Thedampness 14:53, 10 May 2007 (UTC)