Original sentence: SFO has strong record for producing top grades year after year ( and sending on many students into College or the Welwyn Hatfield Consortium.The school has submitted a bid for specialist status to provide the school with a modern sports hall and a bowling green.The school is highly reputable for Sports and Drama and bowls
Edited sentence: The school has submitted a bid for specialist status to provide the school with a modern sports hall and a bowling green, it had been repeatedly turned down for this status several times before.The school is highly "reputable" for it's pupils behavior.There had recently been a gas leakage in the science block, the alarm now less sensitive.during may 2007, there has been as many as 7 false alam in one school say.it allows boys to share the same changing rooms with girls in dance and drama.it had also been put on special measures in the past.it is now the 5th worst school.it should be noted thate the school can have highly "liberal" views.many former and present students describes the school to being an ugly prison.one quater of the students there comes from the worst deprived areas of WGC (ofsted) sir frederic osborn school used to be the worst state secondary school in hertfordshire, no parent wanted to send their children there.subjects like psychology is taught by relief teachers.the broken glass and cans makes the school playing field is a constant health hazard.the head of year 11 Mr Mulhgan said the following: "the year 11s are coughing up feathers(over the incident)... they got the exams coming up...".the school has always suffered staff shortages.the school was especially prone to fake alarms- which means the whole school would need to be evacuated