Original sentence: Fashion Parade - This is an event organised by the senior textiles students whereby students from all grades present garments.The event happens every two years
Edited sentence: Fashion Parade - An event organised by the senior textiles students; whereby students from all grades present their major garments happens every two years.Festivalé - Organised by school prefects, since 2004.Lipsync - Prepared by the Yr 12  students to raise money for the school.The school motto, "Faith With Fortitude", was chosen in the foundation year of Hornsby Girls' High School, 1931.Writing in "The Torch" the first headmistress, Miss Brewster, pointed out that although on the surface the motto might appear to suggest "sorrow and martyrdom", it has a much deeper meaning