Original sentence: Conversely, almost all transsexuals will attempt to live and work as their preferred gender and be fully accepted as that gender rather than their natal sex.It is attributed, generally, to being able to be accepted as a member of the opposite gender, a different race, or to appear as not having a certain disability.Passing describes a transgender person's ability to be accepted as their preferred gender.Personal views on passing and the desire or need to pass are independent of whether an individual has had medical treatment or changed their name or legal gender.They should be referred to with whatever gender-specific pronouns they wish, but they do not consider themselves the opposite sex or expect others to.Typically, passing involves a mix of physical gender cues, like hair style and clothing, as well as behavioral attributes, comportment and mode and style of interpersonal communication
Edited sentence: Conversely, almost all transsexuals will attempt to live and work as their preferred sex and be fully accepted as that sex rather than their natal sex.It is attributed, generally, to being able to be accepted as a member of the opposite sex, a different race, or to appear as not having a certain disability.Passing describes a transgender person's ability to be accepted as their preferred sex.Personal views on passing and the desire or need to pass are independent of whether an individual has had medical treatment or changed their name or legal sex.They should be referred to with whatever sex-specific pronouns they wish, but they do not consider themselves the opposite sex or expect others to.Typically, passing involves a mix of physical sex cues, like hair style and clothing, as well as behavioral attributes, comportment and mode and style of interpersonal communication