Original sentence: A responsible Bean Scout, he follows codes and rules of the Bean Scouts and owns a copy of the Bean Scout Handbook, much to Lumpus' annoyance..  With all the rules, routine and structure of Camp Kidney, Lazlo has a hard time fitting in with some of the other residents of Camp Kidney; notably making several conflicts with the camp bully Edward, who is often scheming to put an end on Lazlo's fun, but Edward's plots invariably fail to affect Lazlo in the intended manner.He also seems to have some talent for directing as he is chosen as the director for a play named "7 Deadly Sandwiches" although his cheerful personality shows once again, making him unaware of the chaos created by his several play changes and the arguing of several scouts
Edited sentence: A responsible Bean Scout, he follows codes and rules of the Bean Scouts and owns a copy of the Bean Scout Handbook, much to Lumpus' annoyance..  With all the rules, routine and structure of Camp Kidney, Lazlo has a hard time fitting in with some of the other residents of Camp Kidney; notably making several conflicts with the mean camp bully Edward, who is often scheming to put an end on Lazlo's fun, but Edward's plots invariably fail to affect Lazlo in the intended manner.He also seems to have some talent for directing as he is chosen as the director for a play named "7 Deadly Sandwiches" although his cheerful personality shows once again, making him blissfully unaware of the chaos created by his several play changes and the arguing of several scouts