Original sentence: Founded, published and edited the prestigious literary journal Funoon, served as Secretary of the Progressive Writers Movement and was a recipient of the President’s Pride of Performance, the Pakistan Academy of Letters Lifetime Achievement award, as well as one of the country’s highest civilian honours, the Sitara-i-Imtiaz for Literature), Wasif Ali Wasif (eminent Sufi author and poet), Shoaib Malik (international cricketer, former captain of the Pakistani cricket team), Saleem Malik (former international cricketer, and former captain of the Pakistani cricket team), Mohammad Akram (former international cricketer) and Akhtar Ayub (Pakistani first-class cricketer, who was also a member of the Pakistan U-19 cricket team that won the 2006 U/19 Cricket World Cup, Nasir Awan Youngest Global Strategic Management Professional )
Edited sentence: Founded, published and edited the prestigious literary journal Funoon, served as Secretary of the Progressive Writers Movement and was a recipient of the President’s Pride of Performance, the Pakistan Academy of Letters Lifetime Achievement award, as well as one of the country’s highest civilian honours, the Sitara-i-Imtiaz for Literature), Wasif Ali Wasif (eminent Sufi author and poet), Shoaib Malik (international cricketer, former captain of the Pakistani cricket team), Saleem Malik (former international cricketer, and former captain of the Pakistani cricket team), Mohammad Akram (former international cricketer) and Akhtar Ayub (Pakistani first-class cricketer, who was also a member of the Pakistan U-19 cricket team that won the 2006 U/19 Cricket World Cup)