Original sentence: Electric PWCs were commercialized in the early 2020s.Electric watercraft are increasing in popularity as gasoline engines produce greenhouse gases and can eject motor oil and gasoline directly into waterways
Edited sentence: Electric Personal Watercraft was commercialized in the early 2020s.Electric watercraft are increasing in popularity as gasoline engines produce harmful greenhouse gases and eject motor oil and gasoline directly into sensitive shallow waterways.The first successful United States Electric Personal Watercraft was produced by ELAQUA