Original sentence: Finally, Wes and Rui arrive at Realgam Tower.Meanwhile, as Wes enters Phenac City, he sees two suspicious-looking men attempting to haul a bag to the mayor.Shortly after the explosion, the news network reports that the large Team Snagem "Snag Machine" was destroyed on the explosion and that the smaller, miniature version has been stolen
Edited sentence: After an easy battle, Wes makes his way to Phenac City.Apparently this person is identical to Wes.As Wes enters Phenac City, he sees two suspicious-looking men attempting to haul a bag to the mayor.Finally, after a long journey through Orre, Wes and Rui arrive at Realgam Tower.Later, Wes gets a few emails from different people telling him to stop attacking them.Shortly after the explosion, when Wes enters a lonely outskirt stand, the news network reports that the large Team Snagem "Snag Machine" was destroyed on the explosion and that the smaller, miniature version has been stolen.They get involved in countless battles, many of which include the mysterious creatures