Original sentence: According to legend, Pat Boone suggested the title and lyrics be altered to "Isn't It A Shame" to make it more appealing to a broader audience but was dissuaded by his producers.. Despite his suggestion being rejected, Boone had his first Billboard number-one single in 1955.As of April 2007 the song can be heard in commercials for Dr Pepper.Domino's definitive version soon became more popular, bringing Domino's music to the mass market a half dozen years after his first major recording, "The Fat Man".The original recording ("Ain't It a Shame") was a regional hit for Domino, eventually selling a million copies
Edited sentence: According to legend, Pat Boone suggested the title and lyrics be altered to "Isn't It A Shame" to make it more appealing to a broader audience but was disuaded by his producers.As of April 2007 the song can be heard in commercials for Dr.Domino's definitive version soon became more popular, bringing Domino's music to the mass market.Most of the covers, however, were little more than commercial novelties.The Fats Domino recordings remain the most well-received and notable.The original recording was a regional hit