Original sentence: They reached 2 more national cup finals - the Scottish Cup in 1978 under Billy McNeill and the League Cup in the following season under the new manager, the relatively unknown Alex Ferguson
Edited sentence: Success maybe didn't come in the 1970s, but Alex Ferguson owes much of his success to Ally MacLeod, for raising morale at Pittodrie and introducing new training regimes to improve the players, and Billy McNeill, who continued much of what MacLeod did, as well as improving Aberdeen's relations with teams all over the North-East corner of Scotland.They reached 2 more national cup finals - the Scottish Cup in 1978 under Billy McNeill and the manager, the relatively unknown Alex Ferguson