Original sentence: Ica is probably one of the most important states in Peru for their agriculture contribution to the world, this land has the best soil that allows the growing of grapes, cotton, asparagus, olives, etc.Natives claim their city climate helps in the cure of asthma.The climate is warm and dry
Edited sentence: Ica is probably one of the most important states in Peru for their agriculture contribution to the world, this land has the best soil that allows the growing of the best kinds of grapes,wonderful wineries, cotton, asparagus, olive trees, etc.The climate is warm and dry (natives claim their city climate helps in the cure of Asthma)