Original sentence: "The Charity Commission has criticized the right wing religious pressure group behind the Tory peer's campaign against the repeal of clause 28 for breaching the terms of its charitable status.The Christian Institute (CI) is a British, evangelical Christian group
Edited sentence: "The Charity Commission has criticised the right wing religious pressure group behind the Tory peer's campaign against the repeal of clause 28 for breaching the terms of its charitable status.The Christian Institute (CI) is a British, right wing, evangelical Christian pressure group