Original sentence: " No basis was found for Insight's question and allegation, and throughout the ensuing controversy Insight steadfastly refused to present evidence or qualify it's sources...The first sentence of the report asked the loaded question of whether the "American people were ready" for a candidate who was "educated in a Madrassa as a young boy and has not been forthcoming about his Muslim heritage
Edited sentence: " No basis was found for Insight's question and allegation, and throughout the ensuing controversy Insight steadfastly refused to present evidence or qualify it's sources.Journalistic analysis of the Insight story began by examining the first sentence of the report, which asked the loaded question of whether the "American people were ready" for a candidate who was "educated in a Madrassa as a young boy and has not been forthcoming about his Muslim heritage.The Insight article used two instances of the logical fallacy of "begging the question", first in presenting a loaded question about Senator Barak Obama's childhood education, and then employing the fallacy of many questions by attributing Insight's "Obama question" to the campaign team of fellow Democratic party candidate Senator Hillary Clinton..