Original sentence: Her first album was Isn't it always love, and it was well received when it came out in 1975.It took 3 years to record her second album Voyager.Voyager showed a much more matured singer
Edited sentence: "Voyager" showed a much more matured singer.Her first album was "Isn't it always love", and it was well received when it came out in 1975.It took 3 years to record her second album "Voyager".The tempo of most songs was slower, but the songs on "Voyager" missed the cheerfull atmosphere that characterized her first album