Original sentence: However, Elnaugh blamed Red Letter Days' bankers who placed £3 million in a bond which they refused to release for use by the firm despite the fact that it related to vouchers that had expired and were not recoverable against the business
Edited sentence: However this failure may well be laid at the door of Red Letter Days' bankers who placed £3 million in a bond which they refused to release for use by the firm despite the fact that it related to vouchers that had expired and were not recoverable against the business