Original sentence: After redshirting the 2004 season, he appeared in six games at weak-side outside linebacker in 2005, finishing  with 13 tackles (10 solos).He led the Patriots with 24 tackles for the month, including 11 versus the Denver Broncos in his first Monday Night Football appearance.He was drafted by the New England Patriots with the tenth overall pick.Mayo has two younger brothers who are both linebackers in college: Derek Mayo, who plays at Richmond, and Deron Mayo, who plays at Hofstra.Mayo was signed on July 24, 2008, to a five-year contract (rather than the six-year maximum allowed by the NFL's collective bargaining agreement) worth $18.9 million, including $13.8 million in bonuses and guarantees.The man voting for Keith Rivers later stated it was a mistake saying that he was writing a story on Philip Rivers at the time and had that name stuck in his mind when voting in email.UTS Volunteers bio
Edited sentence: After redshirting the 2004 season, he appeared in six games at weak-side outside linebacker in 2005, finishing with 13 tackles (10 solo).He led the Patriots with 24 tackles for the month, including 11 against the Denver Broncos in his first Monday Night Football appearance.He was signed on July 24, 2008, to a five-year contract (rather than the six-year maximum allowed by the NFL's collective bargaining agreement) worth $18.9 million, including $13.8 million in bonuses and guarantees.Mayo was drafted by the New England Patriots with the tenth overall pick in the 2008 NFL Draft.Tennessee Volunteers bio