Original sentence: Linda has 6 children plus one daughter-in-law as of July 2005.Linda is an active board member of Arthur Ashe Youth Tennis and Education, an organization that mentors over 10,000 “at risk” children in the Philadelphia Region and Mommy’s Light Lives On serving children whose mothers are deceased or have a life threatening illness
Edited sentence: Linda is a board member of Arthur Ashe Youth Tennis and Education and Mommy’s Light Lives On.Swain has 6 children plus one daughter-in-law as of July 2005