Original sentence: He is a disciple of Allauddin Khan (founder of the Maihar gharana of Indian classical music).He is also among the Indian classical musicians to have acheived fame in Europe and America.He is considered one of the greatest sitar players of modern times.Pandit Ravi Shankar ( Robi Shôngkor, (born April 7, 1920, in Benares, United Provinces, British India) is an Indian composer and sitar player.This was in some part due to his association with The Beatles (particularly George Harrison, who described Shankar as the "Godfather of world music") as well as with his own personal charisma
Edited sentence: A disciple of Allauddin Khan (founder of the Maihar gharana of Indian classical music), Pandit Ravi Shankar is, perhaps, the best-known Indian instrumentalist in the world.He is well known for his pioneering work in bringing the power and appeal of Indian classical music tradition, as well as Indian music and its performers in general, to the West.Pandit Ravi Shankar ( Robi Shôngkor, (born April 7, 1920, in Benares, United Provinces, British India) is an Indian composer best known for his virtuosity on the sitar.This was done through his association with The Beatles (particularly George Harrison, who described Shankar as the "Godfather of world music") as well as with his own personal charisma