Original sentence: It depicts Lance Boil polluting the city's water system with chemicals, Insectiva emerging from a manhole with insects crawling forth, and Fartor's Fartzilla attacking the city, until the Director calls on Ty and Abby Archer, who jump into action from their school (turning their work in on time), fully gear up in their Slime Suits and Slime Goggles (with split-screen visuals), dash into a light panel, arriving in the GRS-1 and confer with Lab Rat before going into action.The sequence ends with Abby squirting Sloppy Joe with her Goop Shooter, Ty grappling a giant worm with his robot claw device, Abby punching a robot's head off, and Lance Boil, Insectiva, and Sloppy Joe all getting doused with green goop (from Ty & Abby's Goop Shooters), forming the show's title
Edited sentence: It depicts Lance Boil polluting the city's water system with chemicals and his boil exploding (covering the screen with pus), Insectiva emerging from a manhole with insects crawling forth, sloppy joe emerging from a pile of garbage and breathing out a cloud of stink-breath, and, until the Director calls on Ty and Abby Archer, who jump into action from their school while the screen zooms into pink-eye (a kid who wants to find out about ty and abby's secret) turning their work in on time, fully gear up in their Slime Suits and Slime Goggles (with split-screen visuals), dash into a light panel.The sequence ends with Abby and ty surrounded by villans (gary gumdrop, darko crevasse and arachnidia to name a few)and then ty and abby shooting insectiva, sloppy joe and lance boil with their goop shooters, forming the show's title.it then shows them flying in the GRS-1 and confer with Lab Rat before going into action