Original sentence: Eddie Rayner contributed an instrumental, as he would on later albums.The album featured more mature songwriting by Neil Finn and brother Tim Finn.True Colors, the fifth album released by New Zealand band Split Enz, was their major commercial success
Edited sentence: Eddie Rayner chimed in with a fine instrumental, as he would on later albums.The fifth album released by New Zealand band Split Enz was their major commercial success.The songwriting of Neil Finn had matured rapidly, and both he and brother Tim Finn were now penning perfectly encapsulated pop songs