Original sentence: After the end of Nolan's career and being gone for two years due to a concussion, he attended Durham College and graduated with an advanced diploma in Business Administration and Marketing.Nolan is also the Vice president of the Ted Nolan Foundation, which has helped change the lives of many Aboriginal youths by sending them to leadership camps.This hockey camp was intended to inspire the lives of First Nation adolescence across Canada and to make a hockey skills camp available for the youth.Upon completing his studies, he created and ran a business alongside his father and brother, 3NOLANS First Nation Hockey School
Edited sentence: After the end of Brandon's career and being gone for two years due to a concussion, he attended Durham College and graduated with an advanced diploma in Business Administration and Marketing.Brandon is also the Vice president of the Ted Nolan Foundation, which has helped change the lives of many Aboriginal youths by sending them to leadership camps.They created 3NOLANS First Nation Hockey School.This hockey camp was a great way to inspire the lives of First Nation adolescence across Canada and to make a hockey skills camp available for the youth.Upon completing his studies, he began running a successful business alongside his father and brother