Original sentence: In recent years many have come to regard it as England's second city, a claim traditionally made by Birmingham.It is also backed by statements by both the Prime Minister and Deputy Prime Minister, who both stated in public that they regard Manchester as the UK's second city.This is backed by a MORI poll of the British people which identified Manchester as "England's Second City"
Edited sentence: How ever birmingham is the undisputed second city and not suprising  manchester would have to go a long way to catch up if ever.jpg|thumbnail|right|290px|Manchester Town Hall is an example of the Victorian architecture found in Manchester and is the home of Manchester City Council ]]