Original sentence: A paper on the Picture language, shown at the 2015 Computer Vision and Pattern Recognition conference, was awarded "Best Paper Honorable Mention".Church  Scheme  Various: JavaScript, Scheme.Lea  Python  Python.The approach used inverse graphics as the basis of its inferencing.The language, made at MIT and used for this, made possible "in 50 lines of code what used to take thousands [whereas their experiments used their] probabilistic programming language they call Picture, which is an extension of Julia language, another language developed at MIT"
Edited sentence: Church  Scheme  Various: Javascript, Scheme.Lea   Python  Python.The approach used inverse graphics as the basis of its inferencing, The language done at MIT, made possible "in 50 lines of code what used to take thousands [whereas their experiments used their] probabilistic programming language they call Picture, which is an extension of Julia language, another language developed at MIT"