Original sentence: In 2007, the Knights won the 'A' OFSAA Girls Soccer championship.In the final, the Knights defeated the L'Essor Aigles by a score of 2-0.The team was undefeated in the tournament, scoring 25 goals and allowing only one
Edited sentence: In 2007, the Knights were crowned 'A' OFSAA Girls Soccer champions.In the final, the Knights defeated the home side, the L'Essor Aigles, by a score of 2-0.Scoring the goals for Villanova were Joanna Lunetta and Amanda Gaeta.The girls went undefeated in the tournament, scoring 25 goals while only letting in 1