Original sentence: In April 2009 Maguire became drawn into the Damian McBride affair, when it was reported he had attended a meeting with McBride and Ray Collins to discuss the Labour Party's online political attack strategy
Edited sentence: His blog of 12 April 2009 on the Daily Mirror website, entitled "Spare Us the Hypocrisy", attracted intense criticism for the most part within its comments section.In April 2009 Maguire became drawn into the Damian McBride affair, concerning an attempt to spread unfounded rumours about leading Conservative politicians.Maguire was further drawn into the McBride scandal when it was reported he had attended a meeting with McBride and Ray Collins to discuss the Labour Party's online political attack strategy.These responses were notable for the intensity of their disapproval of Maguire's journalism and his perceived vulgarity