Original sentence: Anatomy: Shrimp range from a small fraction of an inch to 9 inches (a few mm to 23 cm) long.Diet: Shrimp are omnivores; they eat plants and small animals.Life Cycle: Female shrimp lay over a thousand eggs, which are attached to her swimming legs.Predators: Shrimp are eaten by many animals, including many fish, many birds (including flamingos and loons), octopi, squid, cuttlefish, and people.ja:ニシキテッポウエビ
Edited sentence: Shrimp are eaten by many animals, including many fish, many birds (including flamingos and loons), octopi, squid, cuttlefish, and people.Shrimp are omnivores; they eat plants and small animals.Shrimp range from a small fraction of an inch to 9 inches (a few mm to 23 cm) long.ja:ニシキテッポウエビ Female shrimp lay over a thousand eggs, which are attached to her swimming legs