Original sentence: After handling fallout with regards her support of Jonathon Ross after the Sachsgate incident; she underlined her objections to use of the word Golliwog by Carole Thatcher, while still condoning the consumption of alcohol in the BBC workplace
Edited sentence: After handling fallout with regards her support of Jonathon Ross after the Sachsgate incident; she underlined her objections to use of the word golliwog by Carol Thatcher, while still condoning the consumption of alcohol in the BBC workplace