Original sentence: Harry Ramsay (son, via Jeremy).Jill Ramsay (deceased, daughter via Anne) married Jeremy Romy (deceased).Katie Ramsay (daughter, via Jeremy).Sophie Ramsay (daughter, via Jeremy)
Edited sentence: Harry Ramsay (son, via Patrick).Jill Ramsay (deceased, daughter via Anne) had a relationship with Patrick Mooney.Katie Ramsay (daughter, via Patrick).Sophie Ramsay (daughter, via Patrick)