Original sentence: All citizens are entitled to free public hospital care.It coexists with a private health system.There is a uncapped 30% subsidy on private health insurance
Edited sentence: All citizens are entitled to free public hospital care in the event of a serious injury.It coexists with a private health system which is beneficial for persons seeking rapid or choice of specialist in elective surgery.There is a uncapped 30% subsidy on private health insurance which is inequitable to rural Australians without access to private health facilities