Original sentence: Kylie Minogue, Iggy and the Stooges, In Flames, Iron Maiden, The Jacksons, The Jam, Elton John, Jonas Brothers, Tom Jones, Journey, Judas Priest, Lil' Wayne, Nik Kershaw, Avril Lavigne, Magnum, Marillion, Bob Marley & The Wailers, Metallica, Megadeth, Mika, Gary Moore, Morrissey, Motörhead, Motley Crue, Mott the Hoople, Jason Mraz, Nas, New Kids on the Block, Nightwish, Nuclear Assault, Ted Nugent, Gary Numan, Oasis, Alexander O'Neal, Orchestral Manoeuvres in the Dark, Ozzy Osbourne
Edited sentence: Kylie Minogue, Iggy and the Stooges, In Flames, Iron Maiden, The Jacksons, The Jam, Jason Mraz],Elton John, Jonas Brothers, Tom Jones, Journey, Judas Priest, Lil' Wayne, Nik Kershaw, Avril Lavigne, Magnum, Marillion, Bob Marley & The Wailers,Mark Ronson Metallica, Megadeth, Mika, Gary Moore, Morrissey, Motörhead, Motley Crue, Mott the Hoople, Jason Mraz, Nas, New Kids on the Block, Nightwish, Nuclear Assault, Ted Nugent, Gary Numan, Oasis, Alexander O'Neal, Orchestral Manoeuvres in the Dark, Ozzy Osbourne