Original sentence: Ashley, born in 1997, has severe developmental disabilities due to static encephalopathy of unknown etiology; she assumed to be at an infant level mentally and physically.The treatment included growth attenuation via estrogen therapy; hysterectomy, bilateral breast bud removal, and appendectomy
Edited sentence: Ashley, born in 1997, has severe developmental disabilities due to static encephalopathy of unknown etiology; she is, and will remain, at an infant level mentally and physically.The treatment included growth attenuation via estrogen therapy; hysterectomy, bilateral breast bud removal, and appendectomy; see a one slide summary of Ashley's condition, the treatment and its benefits as prepared by her parents