Original sentence: He has also paid his wife, two daughters and son-in-law tens of thousands of dollars for campaign work such as fundraising and canvassing.He has been a member of Committee of Agriculture and several of its subcommittees since being elected to the House.He received a bachelor's degree in finance from Florida A&M University, and a masters degree in business from the Wharton School of Finance at the University of Pennsylvania.House of Representatives in November 2002; he was re-elected in 2004 and 2006.In May 2007 it was reported that the business owes more than $150,000 in back taxes and penalties.Scott is a Blue Dog Democrat and a member of the New Democrat Coalition.Scott served in the Georgia state house from 1974 to 1982 and in the state senate from 1982 to 2002.Scott was born in Aynor, South Carolina and attended high school in Daytona Beach, Florida.Scott was first elected to the U.Scott's campaigns have paid the company more than $500,000 since 2002 for office rent, printing, T-shirts and other services.Scott's wife, Alfredia, now heads the business.Since 1978, Scott has owned an Atlanta-based advertising firm, Dayn-Mark Advertising
Edited sentence: Due to his experiences as a small business owner, he believes in fighting for the rights of the American worker.He earned his masters at the University of Pennsylvania.He is a Blue Dog Democrat as well as a member of the New Democrat Coalition.He served in the state house from 1972-84 and in the state senate from 1983-2002.He was born in Aynor, South Carolina and attended high school in Daytona Beach, Florida.Scott has been greatly involved with the Committee of Agriculture and several of its subcommittees since being elected to the House.Scott was a long time Georgia state politician.Scott was educated at Florida A&M University, from which he received a finance degree.Since 1978, he has owned an Atlanta-based advertising firm