Original sentence: As per official press release, Jani's only contact with any form of fluid was during gargling and bathing beginning from 5th day of study.. The doctors measured the fluid that was spit out.Edamaruku felt that the regular gargling and bathing activities were not sufficiently monitored, and accuses Jani of having had some "influential protectors" who denied Edamaruku permission to inspect the project during its operation.. Other sources say that round-the-clock observation was insured by multiple CCTV cameras and subject of tests was taken out for MRI, USG, and X-ray examination and exposure to sun under continuous video recording.Sanal Edamaruku, president of the Indian Rationalist Association, criticized the experiment for allowing Jani to move out of the CCTV camera's field of view, meet devotees and leave the sealed test room to sunbathe
Edited sentence: Edamaruku felt that the regular gargling and bathing activities were not sufficiently monitored, and accuses Jani of having had some "influential protectors" who denied Edamaruku permission to inspect the project during its operation.Sanal Edamaruku, president of the Indian Rationalist Association, criticized the experiment for allowing Jani to move out of the CCTV camera's field of view, and to leave the sealed test room in order to meet devotees and to sunbathe