Original sentence: Bacoor is currently experiencing a rapid shift from an agriculture based economy to a residential/commercial urban center.Commercial activity lies mainly along the General Emilio Aguinaldo and Tirona Highways ranging from wholesale to retail establishments, restaurants and eateries, hardware and construction supplies and other service-related industries.These industries are also threatened by the construction of the Manila-Cavite Coastal Road Extension which will directly affect the Bacoor shoreline
Edited sentence: Commercial activity lies mainly along the General Emilio Aguinaldo and Tirona Highways ranging from wholesale to retail establishments, restaurants and eateries, hardware and construction supplies and other service-related industries spearheaded by SM City Bacoor.The sudden shift of Bacoor from an agri-based economy to a residential/commercial urban center with all its attendant problems poses a challenge to public administrators.Worse, this industry is threatened by the construction of the Manila-Cavite Coastal Road Extension which will directly affect the Bacoor shoreline