Original sentence: The album spent its first months on the shelves, but then radio picked up the first single, "Tus Ojos," by the summer of 2003, became a huge hit, reaching number one on the México Top 100 Singles Chart, the album finally entered album charts reaching its peak position of number-five and number-three on the Mexican Latin Albums Chart
Edited sentence: " By the summer of 2003, the album finally entered album charts reaching its peak position of number-five and number-three on the Mexican Latin Albums Chart.The album spent its first months on the shelves, but then radio picked up the first single, "Tus Ojos