Original sentence: Among the new commitments is aid for Sudan, but this aid was attacked as an apparent attempt to win the vote of a single independent MP, David Kilgour.Danny Williams, premier of Newfoundland and Labrador, in a dispute over revenues from offshore resources, ordered that all Canadian flags be removed from provincial government buildings in December 2004.In the midst of the Parliamentary crisis, Martin's government was criticized for altering the budget radically to win the support of the NDP.It was not a "deal for a generation" as promised in the election, but it was a decade-long funding commitment that was expected to lower the heat in federal-provincial relations, which had taken a turn for the worse during the government of Jean Chrétien.Kilgour has said he is dissatisfied with the plan.Martin also introduced changes to the equalization program, under which the federal government transfers money to provinces that have less ability to raise revenues through taxation than wealthier provinces.Martin's new government has faced combined challenges from Quebec separatism, Newfoundland provincialism and general hostility arising from allegations of scandal.Relations with the United States grew worse, and Parliament passed a motion asking the government to resign
Edited sentence: Among the new commitments is aid for Sudan, but this aid was attacked as an apparent attempt to win the vote of a single independent M.Danny Williams, premier of Newfoundland and Labrador, created a scene over offshore resources and, in December 2004, ordered that all Canadian flags be removed from provincial government buildings.In the midst of the Parliamentary crisis, Martin's government was criticized for altering the budget radically to win the support of the socialist N.It was not a "deal for a generation" as promised in the election, but it was a decade long funding commitment that was expected to lower the heat in federal-provincial relations, which had taken a turn for the worse during the government of Jean Chrétien.Martin's new Parliament has proved very troubled, facing combined threats from Quebec separatism, Newfoundland provincialism and general hostility arising from scandalous allegations.Relations with the United States grew worse, and Parliament would even request that Martin resign.That M.That same fall, Martin introduced changes to the equalization program, under which the federal government transfers money to provinces that have less ability to raise revenues through taxation than wealthier provinces.has said he is dissatisfied with the plan and there is no proof that Martin's motivations were not humanitarian