Original sentence: )  is a high mountain pass connecting Lahaul district in Himachal Pradesh to Ladakh in Jammu and Kashmir./16,040 ft.4890 m.Bara-lacha-la (also known as Bara-lacha Pass, el.Chandra being active and smart easily found her way & reached Tandi after covering the distance of.In Rudyard Kipling's novel Kim, there is a reference to Bara-lacha-la pass the source of the Suraj Tal having been used by Kim's Lama to enter India from Tibet.It is on National Highway connecting Manali and Leh.Soon Bhaga was found coming with great struggle through the narrow gorges to Tandi where consequently both met and the celestial marriage was performed.The Bhaga River (a tributary of the Chandrabhaga or Chenab) originates from Surya taal (the lake of the Sun god), which is situated a couple of kilometers away from the pass towards Manali.There is a trekking route from Bara Laacha La to Chandra Taal (the lake of the Moon god) which is situated by the bank of Chandra River in the Spiti District
Edited sentence: )  is a high mountain pass in Zanskar range,  connecting Lahaul district in Himachal Pradesh to Ladakh in Jammu and Kashmir, situated along the Leh-Manali highway.A trekking route leads from Bara-lacha la to Chandra Taal, situated by the bank of Chandra River in the Spiti District.Bara-lacha la (also known as Bara-lacha Pass, or Bārā Lācha La , (el.Chandra being active and smart easily, found her way and reached Tandi after covering the distance of.In Rudyard Kipling's novel Kim, there is a reference to Bara-lacha la pass the source of the Suraj Tal having been used by Kim's Lama to enter India from Tibet.Soon Bhaga was found coming with great struggle through the narrow gorges to Tandi, where consequently both met and the celestial marriage was performed.The Bhaga river, a tributary of the Chandrabhaga or Chenab river, originates from Surya taal lake, which is situated a few of kilometers from the pass towards Manali.The pass also acts as a water-divide between the Bhaga river and the Yunam river