Original sentence: The nationalists were offended by the artist’s depiction of the Russian soul as a cartoonish creature with clichéd attributes of Russian everyday life — a bottle of vodka, a model of Sputnik — and by the crudely painted text in Welcome that indicts the Russian character as simultaneously overaggressive and alarmingly God-fearing
Edited sentence: Painting called "Welcome to Russia" shows a real unadorned Russian character, as both too aggressive and very god-fearing.Russian nationalists were offended by the fact that the artist depicted the Russian soul as a horrible monster with a bottle of vodka in the hand, an accordion, a book by Dostoyevsky and with a satellite.The nationalists decided that this truth was offensive.The nationalists decided that this was a parody to the state emblem of Russia and the offence of the very country and its people