Original sentence: It is mentioned that this was a concern by the programmers; Priscilla is designed from the brain engrams of Priscilla Balman (the daughter of Professor Balman), and as such, she has all of memories, thoughts, feelings and desires of the real Priscilla Balman.The plan to colonize Demeter has already begun; ships are already being built to transport the population (but will take forty years to complete construction of all the necessary vessels, and the trip to Demeter, with 'plasma-thrust' engines and the Balman Drive (named for Professor Balman, the creator) will take 26 years
Edited sentence: It is mentioned that this was a concern by the programmers; Priscilla is designed from the brain engrams of Priscilla Bauman (the daughter of Professor Bauman), and as such, she has all of memories, thoughts, feelings and desires of the real Priscilla Bauman.The plan to colonize Demeter has already begun; ships are already being built to transport the population (but will take forty years to complete construction of all the necessary vessels, and the trip to Demeter, with 'plasma-thrust' engines and the Bauman Drive (named for Professor Bauman, the creator) will take 26 years