Original sentence: In a ground-breaking experiment, Loftus gave participants short narratives, all supposedly provided by family members, describing childhood events, and asked them to recall the events.In the study, nearly 25% of participants reported to be able to remember this event, even though it never actually occurred.It told of the person, as child of 5 or 6, being lost in a shopping mall for an extended period of time before finally being rescued by an elderly person and reunited with his or her family.Loftus interpreted this to mean that the very act of imagining the events led to the creation of false memories.Many people were able to provide embellishing details that were never supplied by the investigators.The "Lost in the Mall" technique, formerly known as the Familial Informant Narrative Procedure, is a procedure which can be used to create false memories.Unbeknownst to the participants, however, one of the narratives was entirely false
Edited sentence: In a ground-breaking experiment, Loftus gave subjects short narratives description of childhood events and asked them to try and recall the events in question.In the study, nearly 25% of subjects reported to be able to remember this event, even though it never actually occurred.Many subjects were able to provide embellishing details which were never supplied by the investigators.The "Lost in the Mall" technique, formerly known as the Familial Informant Narrative Procedure, is a procedure which can be used to create false memories in subjects.The subjects  believed that the narratives had been provided by their own family members.The very act of imagining the events led to the creation of false memories.This false narrative told the story of the subject, as child of 5 or 6, being lost in a shopping mall for an extended period of time before finally being rescued by an elderly person and reunited with their family.Unbeknownst to the subjects, however,  one of the narratives was actually a false description which was not in any way based on reality