Original sentence: For example, in comparison to QUT, UQ offers only a small number of theoretical subjects in the fields of visual and fine arts.Its TV ads feature past students and their current employment.QUT's operations include teaching and research.Queensland University of Technology (or QUT) is an Australia university, with its central campus located in the CBD of Brisbane.Rivalry exist's between QUT and the Queensland's oldest university, the University of Queensland (UQ).UQ is percieved as offering courses of a more theoretical nature.While UQ is a member of the Group of Eight, QUT belongs to the Australian Technology Network
Edited sentence: For example, UQ offers only a small number of theoretical subjects in the fields of visual and fine arts, compared with QUT's large number of programs in those fields, which include practical study.In addition to being a large teaching university, QUT also has many research programs.It should also be noted on this point that QUT is not a member of the Group of Eight - instead, it belongs to the Australian Technology Network.Its TV spots feature past students and their current employment.QUT's largest competitor in Queensland is the University of Queensland (UQ).Queensland University of Technology (or QUT) is a university, with its central campus located in the heart of Brisbane, Australia.UQ is generally known for offering courses of a more theoretical nature than QUT: supporters of QUT maintain that its courses equip graduates with more practical job skills