Original sentence: tra cain is the best looking man ever Some of Microsoft's plans proved effective
Edited sentence: Concentrating on making a big splash in Japan, Microsoft delayed its European launch, though Europe later proved to be the more receptive market.Some of Microsoft's plans proved effective.The other founding members, Otto Berkes and Ted Hase, are still with Microsoft, but no longer working on the Xbox project.Two of the original members of the Xbox team, Seamus Blackley and Kevin Bachus, left the company early on