Original sentence: At the end of the tour, Wonka assures Charlie and Grandpa Joe that the other children will be fine before he hastily retreats to his office without awarding them the promised lifetime supply of chocolate.Similarly, when Wilder rehearsed the Wonka office scene, with Peter Ostrum as Charlie and Jack Albertson as Grandpa Joe, it was in a much calmer tone.Stunned and infuriated, Grandpa Joe vows to give Slugworth the Everlasting Gobstopper in retaliation, but Charlie decides to return it to Wonka instead
Edited sentence: At the end of the tour, Wonka assures Charlie and Grandpa Joe that the other four children will be fine (but maybe, hopefully, a bit wiser for the wear); then he hastily, but politely, bids them goodbye and retreats to his office without awarding them the promised lifetime supply of chocolate.Similarly, when Wilder rehearsed the Wonka office scene, with Peter Ostrum as Charlie and Jack Albertson as Grandpa Joe, it was in a much calmer, albeit still angry and stern tone.Stunned and livid, Grandpa Joe harshly denounces Wonka as a two faced charlatan and vows to give Slugworth the Everlasting Gobstopper in retaliation, but Charlie decides to return it to Wonka instead