Original sentence: According to the Wall Street Journal, Lousteau's brief tenure was clouded from the outset by interference from Néstor Kirchner's allies.Lousteau's policy initiatives often seemed to be eclipsed by those of a Kirchner loyalist, Guillermo Moreno, the secretary of Internal Commerce, described as "the administration's price policeman"
Edited sentence: According to the Wall Street Journal, Mr.Lousteau's brief tenure was clouded from the outset by interference from Nestor Kirchner's allies.Lousteau's policy initiatives often seemed to be eclipsed by those of a Kirchner loyalist, Guillermo Moreno, the powerful secretary of Internal Commerce, frequently referred as "the administration's price policeman"