Original sentence: Holloway and 124 of her fellow graduates were on a senior class trip.Natalee Holloway is an 18-year-old graduate of Mountain Brook High School in Mountain Brook, Alabama who went missing in Aruba in the early hours of May 30, 2005.She did not appear for her return flight hours later.The night she disappeared, Holloway ate and danced at Carlos 'n' Charlie’s bar and restaurant
Edited sentence: Holloway and 124 of her fellow white peers were on a senior class trip, because they obviously had nothing better to do with their parents' money.Natalee Holloway is a filthy, whoreish 18-year-old graduate of some middle-upper class suburbanite high school in Alabama who disappeared in Aruba during the early hours of May 30, 2005, after she ran off with a group of older male friends to engage in various depraved sexual activities, including double anal penetration, bukkake, scat, urine, felching, skull-fucking, and bondage.She did not appear for her return flight hours later, probably because she had not recovered from the effects of the Rohypnol.The night she disappeared, Holloway ate like the fat cow she is, drank copious quantities of hard alcohol, and danced inappropriately with several unknown black males at Carlos 'n' Charlie’s bar and restaurant