Original sentence: Based at Abbottabad since December 1957, the Balochis have fought with distinction in every operation/engagement of the Pakistan Army since independence, winning numerous awards for gallantry.During the Indo-Pakistani Wars of 1948, 1965 and 1971, the regiment was awarded seven Hilal-i-Jurat and 64 Sitara-i-Jurat, while more than 1500 officers and men sacrificed their lives in defence of Pakistan.Since then, the regiment has continued to uphold its reputation and rendered valuable services in the country's defense; in aid to civil authorities during natural disasters and insurgencies; and as United Nations Peacekeepers.They also fought  in the Rann of Kutch, at Chhamb-Jaurian, Sialkot, Chawinda, Kasur and Sulemanki
Edited sentence: Based at Abbottabad since December 1957, the Balochis have fought with great distinction in every operation/engagement of Pakistan Army since independence, winning numerous awards for gallantry.During the Indo-Pakistani Wars of 1948, 1965 and 1971, the regiment was awarded seven Hilal-i-Jurat and 64 Sitara-i-Jurat, while more than 1500 officers and men sacrificed their lives in defence of their Motherland.Since then, the regiment has continued to uphold its formidable reputation and rendered invaluable services in the country's defence, in aid to civil authorities during natural disasters and insurgencies, and as United Nations Peacekeepers.They also fought gallantly in the Rann of Kutch, at Chhamb-Jaurian, Sialkot, Chawinda, Kasur and Sulemanki