Original sentence: Davis of Bangor, who had recently built the original Bangor Auditorium in only 22 days, set up a portable sawmill at the standpipe's site.Its purpose is the same today as when it was built, to help regulate Bangor's water pressure in the downtown area and to provide water storage for emergencies.Thomas Hill Standpipe, which holds 1,750,000 gallons of water, is a riveted wrought iron tank with a wood frame jacket located on Thomas Hill in Bangor, Maine, United States.Tower of Holyoke, Massachusetts, designed the structure and in 1897 the New Jersey Steel and Iron Co.When constructed, the contractor employed 22 men and erected a portable saw mill and blacksmith shop on the site
Edited sentence: Davis of Bangor, who had recently built the original Bangor Auditorium in only 22 days, set up a portable saw mill and blacksmith shop on the site and employed 22 men.Its purpose is the same today as when it was built; to help regulate Bangor's water pressure in the downtown area and to provide water storage for emergencies.Thomas Hill Standpipe, which holds 1,750,000 gallons of water, is a riveted wrought iron tank with a wood frame jacket located on Thomas Hill in , United States.Tower of , designed the structure and in 1897 the New Jersey Steel and Iron Co