Original sentence: Due to its location near the warm current of El Niño and the cold Humboldt Current which collide in this area, Punta Sal benefits with year round sunshine.Punta Sal is a small beach resort located in the department of Tumbes, in northern Peru.The resort is divided into two sections, Big Punta Sal and Small Punta Sal.The water temperature averages year round from 24°C to 29°C or 75°F-82°F
Edited sentence: Due to it's location, Punta Sal benifits from sun year round, for the reason that the warm currents of El Niño and the cold Humboldt Current collide at this area.Punta Sal is a beach resort located in the department of Tumbes, in northern Peru.The quality of the sand of the beach is considered among the best in the world as it is very white.The resort is divided into to sections, Big Punta Sal and Small Punta Sal.The resort is not very large in geographical size and has a good hotel infastructure.The surface of the beach is very uneven and the tide rises at night time and subsides in the morining.The water temperature averages year round from 24°C to 24°C or 75°F-82°F