Original sentence: At the 2005 General Election the majority of England's MPs had been Labour candidates, with 284 MPs elected, with 35.4% of the popular vote in the 529 English constituencies.One candidate for Respect and one Kidderminster Hospital campaigner were the other English MPs elected.The Conservative Party won more votes than any other single party—with 35.7% of the vote in England—achieving 194 Conservative MPs.The Liberal Democrats were the third largest party, winning 47 MPs with 22.5% of the vote
Edited sentence: At the 2005 General Election, the Conservative Party won more votes than any other single party, with 35.7% of the vote in England.Labour won a majority of England's MPs, having 284 MPs elected, on the basis of 35.4% of the popular vote with the Conservative Party winning just 194 MPs.The Liberal Democrats were the third party winning 47 MPs with 22.5% of the vote, and the only other MPs elected were one for Respect and a Kidderminster Hospital campaigner