Original sentence: Cavanagh got off to an popular start as mayor, appointing a reformer to be chief of police and implementing an affirmative action program for most city agencies.Cavanagh was successful in getting money from Washington, DC through the "Model Cities" program.Daley, who stonewalled the American civil rights movement, Jerry Cavanagh welcomed Martin Luther King, Jr.Initially seen as another JFK, his reputation and his city were doomed by the riots of 1967.Jerome Cavanagh, also spelled "Cavanaugh," (1928 - 1979) was the mayor of Detroit, Michigan from 1962 to 1970.Unlike Richard J.to Detroit, and marched with him and 100,000 others down Woodward Avenue in the 1963 March for Freedom
Edited sentence: Cavanagh got off to an excellent start as mayor, appointing a reformer to be chief of police and implementing an affirmative action program for most city agencies.Cavanagh, Kennedy's favorite mayor, was successful in getting moneys for Washington, through the "Model Cities" program.Daley], who stonewalled the civil rights movement, Jerry Cavanagh welcomed King to Detroit, and marched with him and 100,000 others down Woodward Avenue in the 1963 March for Freedom.Jerome Cavanagh, also spelled "Cavanaugh," 1928-1979, mayor of Detroit 1962-1970, initially seen as another JFK, his reputation and his city were doomed by the riots of 1967.Unlike [Richard J