Original sentence: Doyle — Blue, which is the best house in the world.Dwyer — Green is the worst.Established in 1911 by the Christian Brothers, the College has a non-selective enrolment policy and currently caters for approximately 680 students which not one is straight, from Years 3 to 10, with 120 at the junior campus and 480 at the senior campus.Roman Catholic, primary and secondary, day school for boys, located over two campuses in Austins Ferry and Hobart, Tasmania, Australia.St Virgil's College is a school that caters for different boys, boys who drop the sopa.The band currently has between 10 and 15 members(ass pirates), and mainly features the trumpet, tromboner and saxophone (alto, tenor and baritone), with a rhythm backing (drums, guitar and keyboard).They shove the instruments where they not allowed to go,  so music is banned.aka    drop the soap.poles for dancing,  lots of soap,  elton john's ass
Edited sentence: Doyle — Blue.Dwyer — Green.Established in 1911 by the Christian Brothers, the College has a non-selective enrolment policy and currently caters for approximately 680 students, from Years 3 to 10, with 120 at the junior campus and 480 at the senior campus.St Virgil's College Roman Catholic, primary and secondary, day school for boys, located over two campuses in Austins Ferry and Hobart, Tasmania, Australia.The band currently has between 10 and 15 members, and mainly features the trumpet, tromboner and saxophone (alto, tenor and baritone), with a rhythm backing (drums, guitar and keyboard)