Original sentence: In 2003 Sylvie was nominated at the Western Canadian Music Awards (WCMA).Sylvie has played with such notables as Death From Above 1979, The Smugglers, Hot Hot Heat, and The Constantines.Their album I Wish I Was Driving, released through Does Everyone Stare Records, was nominated for Outstanding Independent album of the year.This category included other artists such as Corb Lund, the Be Good Tanya's, and Swollen Members
Edited sentence: In 2003 Sylvie's drive and hard work paid off with a nomination at the Western Canadian Music Awards (WCMA).Since then it has been nothing short of a whirlwind of activity for Sylvie.Sonically, the album proves that Sylvie is a band that has chemistry between members and a drive to stay creative and fresh.Sylvie has played with such notables as Death From Above 1979, the Smugglers, Hot Hot Heat, and the Constantines.The pairing of Joel’s intense, raspy vocals with Riva’s melodic charm creates a sound that captures audiences wherever they play.Their album I Wish I Was Driving, released through Does Everyone Stare Records, was nominated for outstanding independent album of the year.This category included other artists such as Corb Lund, the Be Good Tanya's, and the Swollen Members