Original sentence: Defense dominated the second half until Gator QB Rex Grossman threw a a TD pass and then ran for a 2-point conversion, staking Florida to a 20-13 advantage.The Bulldogs moved the ball in the 2nd quarter but could not punch the ball into the endzone.There would be no more scoring on the day, as the Georgia offense failed to convert a 3rd down in 13 attempts on the day and Florida held on for the upset victory.They settled for two field goals from the foot of kicker Billy Bennett, the last one seconds before halftime, to take a 13-12 lead.Unsuprisingly, Goergia entered the game as heavy favorites
Edited sentence: Defense dominated the second half until early in the 4th quarter, when Gator QB Rex Grossman threw a TD pass and then ran for the 2-point conversion, giving Florida a 20-13 advantage.The Bulldogs moved the ball in the 2nd quarter but could not punch it into the endzone, settling for two field goals and taking a 13-12 lead into intermission.There would be no more scoring on the day, as the Georgia offense finished 0-13 in 3rd down conversions and Florida held on for the upset victory.Unsuprisingly, Georgia entered the game as heavy favorites