Original sentence: A designated bikeway extends for miles north of town along the Mississippi River and Hwy 101; it's relatively flat grade makes it an easy ride for families.During the migration seasons, Alton is a destination for birdwatchers along the Mississippi Flyway, as well as winter visitors hoping to see the many bald eagles that roost on the Illinois limestone bluffs.It is the area of the Meeting of the Great Rivers National Scenic Byway, and Père Marquette Forest is some miles to the north.Olin the only Arnold Palmer-designed and -managed course in Illinois or the St.Restructuring in the industry forced Alton to find new sources of work
Edited sentence: A designated bikeway extends for miles north of town along the Mississippi River; its relatively flat grade makes it an easy ride for families.During the migration seasons, Alton is a destination for birdwatchers along the Mississippi Flyway; winter visitors come to see the many bald eagles that roost on the Illinois limestone bluffs.It is the area of the Meeting of the Great Rivers National Scenic Byway, and Père Marquette National Forest has its attractions a few miles to the north.Olin, the only Arnold Palmer-designed and -managed course in Illinois or the St.Restructuring in the industry forced Alton to create a new future