Original sentence: Another loss was the home of Mary Reiby in Station Street, which was acquired by the NSW Department of Housing in the late 1960s, demolished in 1967, and replaced with public housing
Edited sentence: Another tragic loss was the  the home of Mary Reiby in Station Street, which was acquired by the NSW Department of Housing in the late 1960s, demolished, and replaced with an ugly multi-storey block of Housing Commission flats