Original sentence: An example of this is how it was the first channel worldwide to broadcast Babel.MBC2 has managed to negotiate long-term deals with the top Hollywood studios, securing first-run right and ensuring a steady flow of the top box-office success stories
Edited sentence: An example of this is the amazing feat of being the first channel worldwide to broadcast Babel.MBC2 has managed to negotiate amazing long-term deals with the top Hollywood studios, securing first-run right and ensuring a steady flow of the top box-office success stories