Original sentence: He started off at Kaizer Chiefs' development team (2004-2008), and then played for United FC, Thanda Royal Zulu, Kaizer Chiefs, Zulu Royals, Tembisa Classic, Hellenic and Moroka Swallows during his career.he was groomed by sobz early 2000 in his career
Edited sentence: He joined Thembisa Classic and later relocated to Durban where he played for AmaZulu.He later on moved to National First Divison team United Fc where he met his demise.Ngobese started his professional soccer career at Moroka Swallows where he became an instant hit.The dribbling wizard then returned to Johannesburg after being recruited by Kaizer Chiefs where he helped the team to a championship in 2004/05