Original sentence: A very positive OFSTED  report in April 2001 confirmed that 'Students in the school learn well as a result of consistently good teaching' and 'The school fosters good relationships, which helps students adopt positive attitudes and behave well'.The School is very enthusiastic   about encouraging its pupils to take part in public examinations.The School's results in KS3 Tests are well above national average  }.The school has a great tradition   of athletic and sporting success
Edited sentence: A very positive OFSTED report in April 2001 confirmed that 'Students in the school learn well as a result of consistently good teaching' and 'The school fosters good relationships, which helps students adopt positive attitudes and behave well'.The School is very enthusiastic about encouraging its pupils to take part in public examinations.The School's results in KS3 Tests are well above national averages.The school has a great tradition of athletic and sporting success