Original sentence: David Wolfe, an advocate of raw food has proposed the Sunfood Triangle comprising a diet of 33.33% fruit, 33.33% nuts and seeds and 33.33% vegetable greens in mass if the foods were dried, but eaten fresh
Edited sentence: David Wolfe, world authority on raw food nutrition has proposed the Sunfood Triangle comprising a diet of 33.33% fruit, 33.33% nuts and seeds and 33.33% vegetable greens in mass if the foods were dried, but eaten fresh