Original sentence: The Jazz Firm is made up of Uli Grigoleit as tenor, Sally McLean as lead, Alison Jones as baritone and Jenny Share as bass.The quartet won the Ladies Association of British Barbershop Singers (LABBS) quartet competition in 2003
Edited sentence: The Jazz Firm is made up of Uli Grigoleit (tenor), Sally McLean (lead), Alison Jones (baritone) and Jenny Share (bass).The quartet won the prestigious Ladies Association of British Barbershop Singers (LABBS) quartet competition in 2003