Original sentence: Goal Based Investing or Goal Driven Investing is an investment methodology which focuses on investing for a household based on their risk capacity and not on their risk tolerance.Goal Based investing is a different approach from the conventional investing methodologies, where financial performance is defined as a return against an investment benchmark
Edited sentence: Goal Based Investing focuses on investing for a household based on their risk capacity and not on their risk tolerance.Goal Based Investing or Goal Driven Investing is an investment methodology which is a different approach from the conventional investing methodologies, where financial performance is defined as a return against an investment benchmark