Original sentence: " (on the original site of the Indio Polo Club)When John Nobles died in the 1940s the land was given to his Granddaughter Eva Strickland, but sold a few years later and his home was demolished in 1994 to make way for a shopping center; however in 2004 a Statue was build in his honor
Edited sentence: " (on the original site of the Indio Polo Club) When John Nobles died in the 1940s the land was given to his Granddaughter Eva Strickland, but sold a few years later and his home was demolished in 1994 to make way for a shopping center; however in 2004 a Statue was build in his honor