Original sentence: Staff for the 2009 Marching Band includes Arthur Ebert (Director), Andrew Ebert (Assistant Director/Show and Visual design), Andrew Markworth (Assistant Director/Wind and Percussion arrangements), Phil Rumley (color guard design and caption head), and Lee Falvey (visual caption head)
Edited sentence: Staff for the 2009 Marching Band includes Arthur Ebert (Director), Andrew Ebert (Assistant Director/Show and Visual design), Andrew Markworth (Assistant Director/Wind and Percussion arrangements), and Phil Rumley (color guard design and caption head)