Original sentence: Other notable fans include Heather Mills McCartney, former model, campaigner and activist for animal rights and amputees,; the Controller of BBC Radio 2 Lesley Douglas; former executive producer of 'Top of the Pops' and judge on reality series 'Soapstar Superstar' Chris Cowey; 'Sky Sports News' presenter David Jones; and Glenn Hugill, actor-cum-television producer who played Alan McKenna in 'Coronation Street' and is responsible for producing the British versions of 'The Mole' and 'Deal or No Deal'
Edited sentence: More obscure fans include Heather Mills McCartney, former model, campaigner and activist for animal rights and amputees, and soon-to-be ex-wife of Sir Paul McCartney; the Controller of BBC Radio 2 Lesley Douglas; former executive producer of 'Top of the Pops' and judge on reality series 'Soapstar Superstar' Chris Cowey; 'Sky Sports News' presenter David Jones; and Glenn Hugill, actor-cum-television producer who played Alan McKenna in 'Coronation Street' and is responsible for producing the British versions of 'The Mole' and 'Deal or No Deal'