Original sentence: Harold Cazneaux (30 March 1878 – 19 June 1953) was and Australian pictorialist photographer; a pioneer whose style had an indelible impact on the development of Australian photographic history
Edited sentence: Harold Cazneaux (30 March 1878 – 19 June 1953) was Australia’s greatest pictorialist photographer; a pioneer whose style had an indelible impact on the development of Australian photographic history