Original sentence: 2degrees is a mobile phone provider which was successfully launched in New Zealand on 5 August 2009
Edited sentence: 2degrees is a mobile phone provider which was launched in New Zealand on 5 August 2009.2degrees successfully launched on New Zealand on 5 August 2009.They faced a number of issues in regards to privacy, where they had to remove the Online Shop, and Your 2degrees due to the fact that nearly 100 of the more than 100,00 users that visited the website within one hour of launch, had their details mucked up with the other users.This was a serious breach of privacy, the error caused to website to give away peoples names and addresses