Original sentence: It is currently up with just internal work needed to be finished before fully opening.It stands next to the newly built old market (see above) dominating the skyline in the All Saints Quarter of the town centre.The Imperial Buildings is one of the town centre's oldest and most historic buildings and has now been restored to include 19 apartments and cafes, bars and shops below on the ground floor and it reopened late 2008.The Old Market on Domine Lane, which is one of the project's key sites, was completed late 2008 and is part of the All Saints Quarter in the town centre.The club has just finished a successful season.The future of this steel industry in Rotherham lies in doubt in light of the financial crisis of 2007-2009.With the exception of West Bromwich, Rotherham is the largest town in the United Kingdom without its own Royal Mail postcode
Edited sentence: It is currently up with just internal work needed to be finnished before fully opening.It stands next to the newly built old market (see Above) dominating the skyline in the All Saints Quarter of the town centre.The Imperial buildings is one of the town centres oldest and most historic buildings and has now been restored to include 19 apartments and cafes, bars and shops below on the ground floor and it reopned late 2008.The Old Market on Domine lane which is one of the projects key sites was completed late 2008 and is part of the All Saints Quarter in the town centre.The club has just finnished a successful season.Unfortunately, the future of this steel industry in Rotherham lies in doubt in light of the financial crisis of 2007-2009.With the exception of West Bromwich, Rotherham is the largest town in the United Kingdom without its own Royal Mail Postcode