Original sentence: In 2003, he published The Sense of Being Stared At, including an experiment where blindfolded subjects guessed whether persons were staring at them or at another target.Sheldrake's "seven experiments" received endorsement from geneticist Giuseppe Sermonti,  who is noted for his support of pseudoscience
Edited sentence: In 2003 he published The Sense of Being Stared At, including an experiment where blindfolded subjects guessed whether persons were staring at them or at another target.Sheldrake's "seven experiments" received endorsement from retired geneticist Giuseppe Sermonti, who is noted for his support of pseudoscience