Original sentence: Campbell took an active share in the foundation of University College London (originally known as London University), visiting Berlin to inquire into the German system of education, and making recommendations which were adopted by Lord Brougham.It contains a selection with short lives of the poets, and prefixed to it a critical essay on poetry.Thomas Campbell (27 July 1777 – 15 June 1844) was a Scottish poet
Edited sentence: He took an active share in the foundation of University College London (originally known as London University), visiting Berlin to inquire into the German system of education, and making recommendations which were adopted by Lord Brougham.It contains on the whole an admirable selection with short lives of the poets, and prefixed to it an essay on poetry containing much valuable criticism.The small production of Campbell may be partly explained by his domestic calamities.Thomas Campbell (27 July 1777 – 15 June 1844) was a Scottish poet chiefly remembered for his sentimental poetry dealing especially with human affairs