Original sentence: As Kambei walks towards town the young man, Katsushirō, asks to become his acolyte.Just as all seems lost, they happen to witness an aging samurai (Kambei) execute a cunning and dramatic rescue of a young boy taken hostage by a thief
Edited sentence: As Kambei walks towards town a young samurai, Katsushirō, asks to become his acolyte.Just as all seems lost, they happen to witness an aging samurai, Kambei, execute a cunning and dramatic rescue of a young boy taken hostage by a thief