Original sentence: Deborah Jane Kerr-Trimmer, CBE (30 September 1921 – 16 October 2007) was a Scottish actress.She won the Sarah Siddons Award for her Chicago performance in Tea and Sympathy, Golden Globe Award for The King and I which she originated on Broadway, and she was also the recipient of honorary Academy, BAFTA and Cannes Film Festival awards
Edited sentence: Deborah Jane Kerr-Trimmer, CBE (30 September 1921 – 16 October 2007) was a Golden Globe Award winning Scottish actress.She won the Sarah Siddons Award for her Chicago performance in Tea and Sympathy, which she originated on Broadway, and she was also the recipient of honorary Academy, BAFTA and Cannes Film Festival awards