Original sentence: Nasser Amin is a 24 year old Muslim postgraduate Politics student at the School of Oriental and African Studies (SOAS), University of London who came to attention in March 2005 following the publication of his article in the student magazine defending the Palestinian right to resist against Israel
Edited sentence: A 24 year old Muslim post-graduate Politics student at the School of Oriental and African Studies (SOAS), University of London who came to attention in March 2005 following the publication of his article in the student magazine defending the Palestinian right to resist against Israel