Original sentence: Bao Xiruo is forced to marry Wanyan Honglie and gives birth to Yang Kang.Duan Zhixing feels remorseful about refusing to save the wounded child and abdicates to become a monk called Reverend Yi Deng.Liu Ying pleads with Duan to save her son but Duan refuses and the child dies.Yang Guo and Xiaolongnü start practising the Jade Maiden Heart Sutra
Edited sentence: Bao Xiruo is forced to marry Wanyan Honglie and gives birth to Yang Kang, then known as Wanyan Kang.Duan Zhixing feels remorseful for refusing to save the wounded child and abdicates to become a monk known as Reverend Yi Deng.Huang Yaoshi imprisons Zhou Botong on Peach Blossom Island in grief and anger.Li Mochou and her elder disciple, Hong Lingbo, arrive in the Ancient Tomb to extort whereabouts of the Jade Maiden Heart Sutra.Liu Ying pleads with Duan Zhixing to save her son, but Duan refuses and the child dies.Lu Wushuang escapes with Li Mochou's Five Poison Manual.Ouyang Feng finds Yang Guo on Mount Zhongnan and proceeds to test his martial arts.Xiaolongnü is severly injured when her meditation was interrupted.Xiaolongnü, believing that it was Yang Guo who raped her, left Mount Zhongnan in sadness when Yang Guo denied it.Yang Guo and Xiaolongnü start practising the Jade Maiden Heart Sutra (玉女心经).Yang Guo and Xiaolongnü start practising the Nine Yin Manual in a valley outside the Ancient Tomb.Yang Guo finds an alternative route out of the Ancient Tomb unexpectedly.Yang Guo helps Lu Wushuang escape capture from Li Mochou and Hong Lingbo through a variety of tactics.Yang Guo leaves Mount Zhongnan and met Lu Wushuang by chance.Yang Guo traps himself, Xiaolongnü, Li Mochou and Hong Lingbo all inside the Ancient Tomb by letting lose the rocks at the entrance.Zhao Zhijing and Zhen Zhibing witness Yang Guo and Xiaolongnü practising the Sutra in the flower beds naked.Zhen Zhibing takes the opportunity to rape Xiaolongnü