Original sentence: This pattern, it is suggested, is consistent with composition by a professional dramatist looking for an alternative source of income during a theatre closing
Edited sentence: It has also been argued that Sonnet 145 contains a pun, ("..hate away.."), on the name of his wife Anne Hathaway.This pattern, it is suggested, is more consistent with composition by a professional dramatist looking for an alternative source of income than an anonymous nobleman composing coincidentally during a theatre closing