Original sentence: Daman is a village in the central part of Nepal, located in the district of Makwanpur.It has an unrestricted view of the Himalayas range stretching before it.It is halfway between Kathmandu and Hetauda at 2320m.The Everest Panorama Resort there has a helipad
Edited sentence: Daman is a village in Nepal, halfway between Kathmandu and Hetauda at 2320m.It has a wonderful unrestricted view of the Himalayas range stretching before it.The Everest Panorama Resort here has a helipad