Original sentence: According to the Hebrew Bible, Moses led the Israelites out of Egypt, and received the Torah Of Judaism from God on Mount Sinai.Moses's greatest legacy was probably expounding the doctrine of monotheism, which was not widely accepted at the time, codifying it in Jewish religion with the 1st Commandment, and punishing polytheists.The birth of Moses occurred at a time when the Egyptian Pharaoh had commanded that all male children born to Hebrew captives should be killed.The daughter of Pharaoh discovered the baby and adopted him as her son, and named him "Moses"
Edited sentence: According to the Hebrew Bible, Moses led the Israelites out of Egypt.He received the Torah Of Judaism from God on Mount Sinai.Moses's greatest legacy was probably expounding the doctrine of monotheism, which was not widely accepted at the time, codifying it in Jewish religion with the 1st (and most important) Commandment, and punishing polytheists.The birth of Moses occurred at a time when Pharaoh had commanded that all male children born to Hebrew captives should be killed.The daughter of Pharaoh discovered the baby and adopted him as her son, and named him “Moses