Original sentence: He was helped in the setting up of the party by other notable individuals such as Janaky Athi Nahappan.John Aloysius Thivy was a lawyer by occupation and the founding president of the Malayan Indian Congress
Edited sentence: He was helped in the setting up of the party by other notable freedom fighters such as Janaky Athi Nahappan.John Aloysius Thivy was a lawyer, Indian and Malayan Freedom Fighter, and the founding president of the Malayan Indian Congress