Original sentence: Although the odds of completing one such pass, let alone several, were very low, many Virginia Tech fans remained worried, as Boston College had previously beaten the Hokies in similar circumstances earlier in the season.With little time remaining, Boston College would have to complete one or more Hail Mary passes
Edited sentence: Although the odds of completing one such pass, let alone several, were very low, many Virginia Tech fans remained worried, as Boston College had previously beaten them by scoring a touchdown with 11 seconds remaining.To score a touchdown, the team would almost certainly have to complete one or more Hail Mary passes