Original sentence: One program developed to help people gain access to safe drinking water is the Water Aid program.The lack of water and the lack of hygiene is one of the biggest problems that many poor countries have encountered in progressing their way of life.The problem has reached such endemic proportions that 2.2 million deaths have occurred  from unsanitary water - ninety percent of these children under the age of five.Working in in 17 countries to help provide water, Water Aid is useful in helping the sanitation and hygiene education to some of the world's poorest people
Edited sentence: A Program to help people that don't have access to safe drinking water is the Water Aid program it helps get safe drinking water to communities that need it.But some families still do make an effort to get safe drinking water for their families, these people would have to walk up to six miles a day just to get water.For example in Kitayita village this program is helping these people that live in this village they are bringing fresh drinking water to the people that really need it and could not survive without it.The lack of water and the lack of hygene is one of the biggest problems that these poor countries are having in progressing their way of life.The problem is so bad that of the 2.2 million deaths that happened from unsanitary water ninety percent of the deaths that happened were to children under the age of five that is way too many deaths for little kids that haven't even had a chance really to live.Water Aid works in 17 countries providing water, sanitation and hygiene education to some of the world's poorest people.Water aid also provides other uses as well as giving them sanitary drinking water