Original sentence: After assessing interational marketing trends, Kukle presented this strategy to the council of the Natal Rugby Union.After many meetings a decision was finally made to go ahead with the new branding.The Sharks branding was the brain child of Terry Kukle, the owner of Tag International.The local press at first were very hesitant to accept the new name and branding, but after a very successful season and great products and promotions the Sharks were embraced by all
Edited sentence: After assessing Interational Marketing Trends, Terry presented this strategy to The Council of the Natal Rugby Union.After many meetings a decision was fianlly made to ahead with the new branding.The Local press at first were very hesitant to accept the new Name and Branding, but after a very successful season and great products and propmotions the Sharks were embraced by all.The Sharks Banding was the brain child of Terry Kukle, the owner of Tag International