Original sentence: Although he added nothing to the technique of woodblock printing, he was successful and popular.Bartolommeo Coriolano (1590 or 1599-1676, sometimes Coriolano or Coriolanus, pronunciation ko-re-o-lā'no) was an Italian engraver of the Baroque period.Coriolano trained under the painter Guido Reni and, like many others, modeled many of his woodblock prints off his teacher.Coriolano was a traditional woodblock printer that followed the German style in printing.Eventually, he came to the attention of Pope Urban VII, who granted Coriolano knighthood and a pension.His father, Cristoforo Coriolano, and brother, Giovanni Battista Coriolano were also a woodblock printer.However, the actual relationship between Cristoforo and Bartolommeo Coriolano is questionable.It is know that Coriolano had a daughter, Teresa Maria Coriolano, who later became a painter and engraver
Edited sentence: Bartolommeo Coriolano (1590 or 1599-1676, pronunciation ko-re-o-lā'no and sometimes sometimes spelled Coriolano or Coriolanus) was an Italian engraver during the Baroque period.Coriolano had a daughter, Teresa Maria Coriolano, who later became a painter and engraver.Coriolano trained under the painter Guido Reni and modeled many of his woodblock prints off his teacher, as was common.Coriolano was a traditional woodblock printer who followed the German style in printing.Eventually, he came to the attention of Pope Urban VII who granted Coriolano knighthood and a pension.He he was successful and popular and was not a technical innovator on the technique of woodblock printing.His father, Cristoforo Coriolano, and brother, Giovanni Battista Coriolano were also woodblock printers, although there is some doubt over the actual relationship between Cristoforo and Bartolommeo Coriolano