Original sentence: Elton's fame is not known worldwide.Refelcting opinion of the time within certain quarters the writer Ben Elton denounced him as a "dirty old man, tearing the clothes off nubile girls".The Independent newspaper opined the vendetta was "like watching an elderly uncle being kicked to death by young thugs"
Edited sentence: Refelcting opinion of the time within certain quarters the 1980's alternative comedian Ben Elton denounced him as a "dirty old man, tearing the clothes off nubile girls".The Independent newspaper opined the vendetta was "like watching an elderly uncle being kicked to death by young thugs"..