Original sentence: Accusations of misconduct on the part of Bailey were leveled.Eventually, Bailey resigned from his position as head of psychology at Northwestern University.The book contains his casual observations as well as quotations from casual conversations.The book does not cite sources, figures, or statistics to support the assertions made; instead Bailey uses anecdotal evidence to illustrate the hypothesis.The hypothesis received wider attention with the 2003 publication of Bailey's popular psychology book The Man Who Would Be Queen.Then Conway started an investigation into the publication of Bailey's book by the United States National Academy of Sciences
Edited sentence: Accusations of misconduct on the part of Bailey were leveled, but no group ever found Bailey guilty of any wrong-goind.The book was written for lay-audiences, excluding formal citations and instead following the lives of individual people to illustrate the concepts.The controversy became the subject of detailed analysis by Alic Dreger, a historian and intersex activist.The hypothesis received wider attention with the 2003 publication of Bailey's book The Man Who Would Be Queen.Then Conway instigated an investigation into the publication of Bailey's book by the United States National Academy of Sciences