Original sentence: There is a partial cycle path from the village to the nearby town of Kettering and the village of Weekley, cycling remains an underused mode of transportation
Edited sentence: There is a partial cycle path from the village to the nearby town of Kettering but the cycle path is poorly designed and requires the cyclist to cross from one side of the road to the other on a blind bend on a very busy road in the village of Weekley, cycling remains an underused mode of transportation