Original sentence: Hanson (September 18, 1930 - June 7, 1951) was a soldier in the U.He was posthumously awarded the Medal of Honor for his actions on June 7, 1951.Many members of F Company owe Jack Hanson their lives
Edited sentence: Hanson was a soldier in the U.He was awarded the Medal of Honor for his actions on June 7, 1951.Many members of F Company owe Jack Hanson their lives, he lives on in their memory and in the memory of his grateful and proud regiment