Original sentence: The 50th Infantry Brigade Combat Team was welcomed home by proud family and friends with a Parade through Trenton, NJ on June 12th, 2009, after a tough, year-long tour of Iraq.The Brigade was mobilized in June of 2008 and trained at Fort Bliss Tx, before being deployed to Iraq.The Brigade, lead by their Commander, Colonel Steve Ferrari, was welcomed by Govenor Jon Corzine.Their efforts reflected great credit upon themselves, the New Jersy Army National Guard, and the United States Army
Edited sentence: The 50th Infantry Brigade Combat Team was welcomed home by proud family and friends with a Parade through Trenton, NJ on June 12, 2009, after a tough, year-long tour of Iraq.The Brigade was mobilized in June of 2008 and trained at Fort Bliss, Texas, before being deployed to Iraq.The Brigade, lead by their Commander, Colonel Steve Ferrari, was welcomed by Governor Jon Corzine.Their efforts reflected great credit upon themselves, the New Jersey Army National Guard, and the United States Army