Original sentence: This did not affect people's reaction to the album however (at the time it was not as uncommon to produce 'stand alone singles' as it is today) and it was given rave reviews not only in the music press, but in broadsheet newspapers' art columns and other highbrow publications: Robin Denselow, for instance, reviewed it for The Guardian (October 11, 1977).was released on September 30 1977, following the release of Dury's iconic single "Sex & Drugs & Rock & Roll"
Edited sentence: This did not affect people's reaction to the album however (at the time it was not as uncommon to produce 'stand alone singles' as it is today) and it was given rave reviews not only in the music press, but in broadsheet newspapers' art columns and other highbrow publications: Robin Denselow, for instance, reviewed it for The Guardian (11 October 1977).was released on 30 September 1977, following the release of Dury's iconic single "Sex & Drugs & Rock & Roll"