Original sentence: Drigo's simple yet melodious and well orchestrated music for this work was hailed as a masterpiece, even prompting praise from such artists as Tchaikovsky and Alexander Benois.Finally, Vsevolozhsky commissioned the composer Pyotr Illyich Tchaikovsky to score music for Petipa's The Sleeping Beauty, and following his "symphonic" example would be Johann Armshiemer for Petipa's The Calvary Halt in 1896, Pytor Schenk for Petipa's Bluebeard in 1896, and Alexander Glazunov with his scores for Petipa's Raymonda in 1898, and Les Ruses d'amour (AKA The Trial of Damis or Lady Soubrette) and The Seasons in 1900
Edited sentence: Drigo's simple yet wonderfully melodious and well orchestrated music for this work was hailed as a masterpiece, even prompting praise from such artists as Tchaikovsky and Alexander Benois.Finally, Vsevolozhsky commissioned the great composer Pyotr Illyich Tchaikovsky to score music for Petipa's The Sleeping Beauty, and following his "symphonic" example would be Johann Armshiemer for Petipa's The Calvary Halt in 1896, Pytor Schenk for Petipa's Bluebeard in 1896, and Alexander Glazunov with his scores for Petipa's Raymonda in 1898, and Les Ruses d'amour (AKA The Trial of Damis or Lady Soubrette) and The Seasons in 1900