Original sentence: Hilsea is home to one of Portsmouth's main sports and lesiure facilities - the Mountbattern centre.Located at the northern end of Portsea Island, for most of its history, Hilsea was a small hamlet on the Portsmouth to London road
Edited sentence: Hilsea is home to one of Portsmouth's main sports and lesiure facilities - the Mountbatten centre.Located at the northern end of Portsea Island, for most of its history Hilsea was a small hamlet on the Portsmouth to London road