Original sentence: The Passage of the Red Sea is the Biblical  account of the passage of the Red Sea by Moses, leading the Hebrews (Israelites) on their journey out of Egypt and across the Red Sea as described in the Book of Exodus, chapters 13:17 to 15:21, in order to enter the Promised Land (Canaan) following the stations of the Exodus
Edited sentence: The Passage of the Red Sea is the Biblical  account of the passage of the Red Sea by Moses, leading the Israelites on their journey out of Egypt and across the Red Sea as described in the Book of Exodus, chapters 13:17 to 15:21, in order to enter the Promised Land (Canaan) following the stations of the Exodus