Original sentence: The next morning, when the rebels arrived to dispose off the bodies, they found that three women and three children aged between four and seven yers old were still alive
Edited sentence: No one among the hundreds of local onlookers said a word or made any attempt to save them from the most horrific of deaths.No pity was shown to the helpless women and children.The next morning, when the rebels arrived to dispose of the bodies, they found that three women and three children aged between four and seven yers old were still alive