Original sentence: Remy, with his strong Boston-area accent and smoker's laugh, has found success in broadcasting, working for the New England Sports Network (NESN), and is the color commentator for all NESN Red Sox broadcasts along with play-by-play announcer Don Orsillo
Edited sentence: Obviously considering his Red Sox roots, he is a big-time homer when he announces.Remy, with his strong Boston-area accent  has found success in broadcasting, working for the New England Sports Network (NESN), and is the color commentator for all NESN Red Sox broadcasts along with play-by-play announcer Don Orsillo