Original sentence: It is now rumoured that Barnes is due to become the new Tranmere Rovers manager with Jason McAteer as his assistant
Edited sentence: It is now rumoured that Barnes is due to become the new Tranmere Rovers manager with Jason "The Owl" McAteer (famous for 'giving it his all' in shampoo adverts in the late 1990s and really nothing much else at all) his assistant which has apparently not pleased the majority of the Tranmere faithful, according to many of the Fans Forums on the Internet