Original sentence: However the British Navy intercepted a Dutch fleet and defeated them at the Battle of Camperdown in October 1797.The Society of the United Scotsmen was an organisation formed in Scotland in the late eighteenth century and sought widespread political reform throughout the [[United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland|United Kingdom].The United Scotsmen still organised a rebellion against the Government in 1797, but despite initial successes for the insurrectionists, Government troops quickly drafted in from England soon quelled the rebellion.The United Scotsmen were (along with the United Irishmen) pronounced an illegal organisation and legal measures tightened up control of the press as well to halt radical activity.The United Scotsmens aims in the rebellion were to establish a new Provisional Government with Thomas Muir as President.The society was further boosted when the Parliament passed the Militia Act which allowed for the conscription of young men into the army
Edited sentence: However the British Navy intercepted a Dutch fleet and defeated them at the battle of Camperdown in October 1797.Saor Alba.The Society of the United Scotsmen was formed in the late eighteenth century and sought widespread political reform in Scotland.The United Scotsmen still organised a rebellion against the British government in 1797, but despite initial successes for the insurrectionists, the government quickly responded by sending English troops to Scotland to quell the rebellion.The United Scotsmen were (along with the United Irishmen) pronounced an illegal organisation and the British government tightened up control of the press as well to halt radical activity.The United Scotsmens aims in the rebellion were to establish a Provisional Scottish Government with Thomas Muir as President.The society was further boosted when the British Parliament passed the Militia Act which allowed for the conscription of young men into the army