Original sentence: The Zina Ordinance prompted bitter international criticism about the perceived injustices and miseries brought about by the Zina Ordinance.Women bore much of the burden of Zia's Islamization and its inconsistencies
Edited sentence: The Zina Ordinance carried grave injustices and untold miseries on women in Pakistan and prompted bitter international criticism.The women became the special victims of Zia's so called Islamization and its inconsistencies