Original sentence: 66) and these events bore only a marginal resemblance to the event as initially reported in 1947 or recounted later by the primary witnesses.Skeptics did point out that, when added up, there were a total of 11 reported alien recovery sites(p.Some of these memories could have been confused accounts of the several known recoveries of injured and dead from four military plane crashes which occurred in the vicinity from 1948-50.[], others could have been recoveries of dummies
Edited sentence: 66) and these events bore little or no resemblance to the events initially reported in 1947 or recounted by the primary witnesses later.And at least some of these events could have been recoveries of dummies.Skeptics did point out that, when added up, there were an implausible 11 alien recovery sites being reported,(p.Some of these memories could have been confused accounts of the several known recoveries of injured and dead from four military plane crashes in the vicinity which occurred 1948-50