Original sentence: Bertuzzi is one of the league's largest and most feared players, renowned for his thunderous checks.Bertuzzi then used his momentum to drive Moore into the ice.Moore became a target of ire at a following game (a blowout win for Colorado); however, Tony Granato, the Colorado coach, kept Moore on the ice
Edited sentence: '' This incident should become history because it has done huge emotional to Todd Bertuzzi and that fans from all arena should stop their disrepectul woes towards Bertuzzi.Bertuzzi is one of the league's largest and most feared players, renowned for his thunderous checks, fiery temper and occasional dirty play.Bertuzzi then used his momentum to drive Moore's head into the ice.I have, it happens in hockey".Moore became a target of ire at a following game (a blowout win for Colorado).Steve should get over this