Original sentence: The concept of "fetishism" has been criticised for allowing historians of religion to shift attention from the relationship between people and God to the relationship between people and material objects; moreover, it has been criticised for establishing false models of causal explanations of natural events as a central problem for historians and social theorists
Edited sentence: The concept of “fetishism” allowed historians of religion to shift attention from the relationship between people and God to the relationship between people and material objects; moreover, it established false models of causal explanations of natural events as a central problem for historians and social theorists