Original sentence: In June 2009, Palin responded to a blogger for altering a photo in which her son Trig's face was altered, calling the change "malicious".In June of 2009 David Letterman told a joke that Sarah Palin's daughter was "knocked up" by a baseball player after the game.Palin then issued a public statement condemning Letterman, saying he was implying that her 14 year old daughter, who had been with her at the baseball game, was referenced in the joke.. A campaign then began to have David Letterman fired or to force him to apologize for his actions, with several Republicans organizating a boycot of Letterman sponsors
Edited sentence: In June of 2009 David Letterman told a joke that Sarah Palin's daughter could be "knocked up" by a baseball player.In June of 2009, Palin attacked a blogger for altering Palin in a photo in which she was holding the Down Syndrom baby of her eighteen year old daughter Trig.Palin then issued a public statement condemning Letterman, saying he was implying that her 14 year old daughter, who had been with her at the baseball game, was the one referenced in the joke.. A national campaign then began to have David Letterman fired or to force him to apologize for his actions, with several Republicans organizating a boycot of Letterman sponsors