Original sentence: According to Dr.Erwin Van der Meer, a researcher with the University of South Africa, it is likely that increased global awareness of the problem of child witchcraft accusations in Africa will eventually lead to more initiatives to assist its victims.This can be done by means of grass-roots awareness and prevention campaigns, conferences and theological education with the support of religious leaders.Van der Meer suggests that, in the meantime, the general population in countries where child witchcraft beliefs are prevalent need to be made aware that the torture and killing of children is unacceptable
Edited sentence: In the meantime the general population in countries where child witchcraft beliefs are prevalent need to be made aware that the torture and killing of children is unacceptable.It is likely that increased global awareness of the problem of child witchcraft accusations in Africa will eventually lead to more initiatives to assist its victims.This can be done by means of grass-roots awareness and prevention campaigns, conferences and theological education with the support of religious leaders, who need to be engaged and become part of the solution and not part of the problem