Original sentence: As of 2005, Park lives in Vancouver with her husband, Korean real estate developer Phil Kim.She was named #93 in Maxim Online's 2006 Hot 100 List, marking the first time a Korean woman has made it into the Top 100
Edited sentence: As of 2005, Park lives in Vancouver with her husband, Phil Kim.She was named #93 in Maxim Online's 2006 Hot 100 List