Original sentence: She graduated from high school in the spring of 2007 and enrolled as a freshman at Southern Methodist University in January 2008, but is currently taking a leave from classes to concentrate on preparations for the 2008 Olympic Games
Edited sentence: At this point, barring injury and illness, she is all but guaranteed a spot on the team.She graduated from high school in the spring of 2007, and was accepted to Southern Methodist University.She took a few courses at SMU in the fall of 2007 and decided that the best course of action would be to take the year off from academics to focus on training for the 2008 Olympics