Original sentence: Once she was blindfolded her then boyfriend the Polo PLayer Tarquin Southwell came out, despite the blindfold she managed to identify him by smell.She has a brother, Jack Kidd (b
Edited sentence: Once she was blindfolded her then boyfriend, the Polo player Tarquin Southwell, came out and despite the blindfold she managed to identify him by smell.She has a brother, the Polo player Jack Kidd (b.She is an expert Polo player and often plays for the Apes Hill Polo team in Barbados, where she lives