Original sentence: In addition, as a result of the world exposure of the wedding ceremony, their two other children, Pippa and James, especially Pippa, have often been discussed in the press.The Duchess's parents, Michael and Carole Middleton, whose wealth derives from their party supplies business, have featured in the world media in the run up to their first daughter's wedding to Prince William of Wales and its aftermath
Edited sentence: In addition, as a result of the world exposure of the wedding ceremony, their two other children, Pippa and James, especially Pippa, have become prominent personalities with much discussion in the press.The Duchess's parents, Michael and Carole Middleton, whose fortune derives from their party supplies business, have featured heavily in the world media in the run up to their first daughter's wedding to Prince William of Wales and its aftermath