Original sentence: A number of Syrian-controlled industries, including in the airline, telecommunications and energy sectors, would also be targeted.If passed by the Senate and signed into law by the President, the legislation would impose fresh sanctions on entities conducting business with the Syrian government and its military and intelligence agencies.This is a new bipartisan legislation that would impose new sanctions upon the Syrian government
Edited sentence: A number of regime-controlled industries, including in the airline, telecommunications and energy sectors, would also be targeted.If passed by the Senate and signed into law by the President, the legislation would impose fresh sanctions on entities conducting business with the Assad regime and its military and intelligence agencies.This is a new bipartisan legislation that would impose new sanctions upon the Damascus regime