Original sentence: Having lost in the first round eight times in his previous 15 appearances at the Crucible, Stephen Maguire played debutant Tian Pengfei.He added pink and black to steal the frame, and then took the next two frames to win 10-9.He won a snooker on the blue, then missed a risky pot to a baulk corner; which missed, but the blue hit the cue ball again and went into another baulk pocket, a shot later called "an outrageous fluke" by Maguire.In frame 17 Maguire was 7–9 down and needed a snooker on the colours to stay in the match
Edited sentence: Having lost in the first round eight times in his previous 15 appearances at the Crucible, Stephen Maguire narrowly avoided another early exit with a 10–9 win over debutant Tian Pengfei.He added pink and black to steal the frame, and then took the next two frames for a dramatic victory.In the 17th frame Maguire was 7–9 down and needed a snooker on the colours to stay in the match; he got the snooker on the blue, then missed a risky pot to a baulk corner, but the blue hit the cue ball again and went into another baulk pocket, a shot later called "an outrageous fluke" by Maguire