Original sentence: Both Kerry and Democratic National Committee Chairman Howard Dean have stated their opinion that voting in Ohio did not proceed fairly, and that otherwise the Democratic ticket might have won that state and therefore the election.Both Kerry and soon-to-be Democratic National Committee Chairman Howard Dean have alleged that had Ohio's voting did not proceed fairly, and that otherwise the Democratic ticket might have won Ohio
Edited sentence: Both Kerry and Democratic National Committee Chairman Howard Dean have stated their opinion that if voting in Ohio had proceeded fairly, the Democratic ticket might have won that state and therefore the election.Both Kerry and soon-to-be Democratic National Committee Chairman Howard Dean have alleged that had Ohio's voting proceeded fairly, the Democratic ticket might have won Ohio