Original sentence: "  Pang has said that she did not hear anything about this until 2002, when she read an interview with Rosen."  The book reproduces a few postcards he had written to her from around the world.In her book, Loving John, Pang says "The official announcement said we ended in early '75 but continued to see each other secretly.Pang also says that Lennon's song, "Surprise, Surprise (Sweet Bird of Paradox)," which was also included on this album, was written for her
Edited sentence: "  A potential lapse in Rosen's credibility, however, is a close friendship with Frederic Seaman, an aide of Lennon's who stole various pieces of the Lennon estate from Ono after Lennon's assassination, and wrote a tell-all book that is widely regarded as sensationalist."  Still, she shows no evidence of it, except for a few postcards he had written to her from around the world, reproduced in her book, Loving John.Pang  further claims in her book: "The official announcement said we ended in early '75 but continued to see each other secretly.Pang also claims that Lennon's song, "Surprise, Surprise (Sweet Bird of Paradox)," which was also included on the album, was written for her.Pang, however, has stated she did not learn about such longing until 2002, when she read an interview with Rosen