Original sentence: When Sayid learns of a planned attack on his home village, his head capturer, Kelvin Inman gives him a box of torturing tools, and forces Sayid to use them to gain the desired information of the missing pilot, who he learns was executed earlier
Edited sentence: When Sayid learns of a planned attack on his home village, his head captor, Kelvin Inman gives him a box of torturing tools, and forces Sayid to use them to gain the desired information of the missing pilot, who he learns was executed earlier