Original sentence: However, Youth & Young Manhood seemed to divide music fans: while some appreciated the album's unique blend of southern rock and Strokes-influenced indie rock, others considered it dull and clichéd, and denounced Caleb Followill's distinctive vocals as being unintelligible.The Kings of Leon, when they first emerged with their Holy Roller Novocaine EP, quickly became considered one of theindie scene's stand out bands.Their debut album, anticipated eagerly amongst their following, was praised highly by critics; Rolling Stone magazine awarded it four stars
Edited sentence: The Kings of Leon, when they first emerged with their Holy Roller Novocaine EP, quickly became one of the most interesting and original bands on the indie scene.This eagerly anticipated debut album was praised highly by critics (including the prestigious 4 star rating from Rolling Stone Magazine) but seemed to divide music fans.While some appreciated the album's unique blend of southern rock and indie rock (influences included The Strokes), others saw it as dull and clichèd, with lyrics often unintelligible