Original sentence: In Ireland, Damien combined forces with his brother Paul to form a rock band
Edited sentence: Audiences are regularly enthralled with Damien's song writing abilities, his soaring vocals and his outstanding stage presence.Damien Leith’s spirited Irish clan are used to grabbing opportunities and making the most of them.His fans refer to themself as the "Damienites".His outgoing nature has been described as charming, charismatic and humourous.In Ireland, Damien combined forces with his talented brother Paul to form a rock band