Original sentence: A revitalization project started in 1995 in the ten square blocks along Historic Route 66.The Strategic Action Plan incorporates mixed use components; combining retail, restaurant and high density in-fill housing in a pedestrian-friendly environment
Edited sentence: A controversial revitalization project started in 1995 in the ten square blocks along Historic Route 66.The Strategic Action Plan incorporates mixed use components; combining retail, restaurant and high density in-fill housing in a pedestrian-friendly environment, but its success is in question, as many of the buildings remain unoccupied