Original sentence: After the interview they began a correspondence, became friends and later lovers.Although handfasting, like other religious ceremonies, is not legal unless the appropriate State paperwork is filed, she later changed her legal name to include Morrison's name, and Morrison addressed letters and poems to her as "Patricia Morrison" and "my wife, Patricia".Before witnesses, one of them a Presbyterian minister, the couple signed a document declaring themselves wedded.She is a Dame of the ordo Supremus Militaris Templi Hierosolmitani, a High Priestess in a Celtic pagan tradtion and a member of Mensa.She was one of the first female rock music critics, and was editor-in-chief of Jazz and Pop magazine when she first interviewed Jim Morrison in January 1969
Edited sentence: Although handfasting, like other religious ceremonies, is not legal unless the appropriate State paperwork is filed, she later changed her legal name to include Morrison's name.Before witnesses, one of them a Presbyterian minister, the couple signed a document declaring themselves wedded; the veracity of these claims, made only by Patricia herself, has been widely and aggressively disputed for years.She was a rock music critics, and was editor-in-chief of Jazz and Pop magazine when she first interviewed Jim Morrison in January 1969