Original sentence: Lila Quartermaine quietly died in her sleep on the evening of Tuesday, July 13th, 2004, and Lee and Gail paid their respects to the Quartermaines at the funeral that Friday
Edited sentence: Lila Quartermaine quietly passed away in her sleep on the evening of Tuesday, July 13th, 2004, and Lee and Gail paid their respects to the Quartermaines at the funeral that Friday