Original sentence: After the game is completed, the game returns to the main page.Also, many believe that a lack of the ability to save the high score to the cartridge hinders the title even more.However few have reached this far, due to the amount of time to reach the level select and the lack of any battery backed up-saves.However, the mushroom cursor next to "start" changes to an image of Mario's head, meaning that the player now can play in "Hard Mode".If the game runs out of power in the middle of the game, the player must restart from the beginning.If the hard mode is completed, players are able to then select the level that you play next.One of the most serious flaws in many people's eyes is that there is no way to save the game during gameplay.This is a harder version of the game which has a number of changes examples of which are, more monsters in certain levels (Some even in levels that they weren't previously in) and more falling ceilings and stalactites in the indoor levels.Though a popular seller, the game is now generally regarded by many as being inferior to most other side-scrolling Mario games
Edited sentence: After you have finshed the game, the game returns to the main page.Also, if you beat the game the high score will be recorded, but as soon as you shut off the game the high score will be lost.However few players reach this far, due to the amount of time to reach the level select and the lack of any battery backed up saves.However, the mushroom cursor next to "start" changes to an image of Mario's head, meaning that you can now play "Hard Mode".If the game runs out of power in the middle of the game you'll have to start all over.If the hard mode is completed, You are able to then select the level that you play next.One of the game's biggest problems is that there is no way to save the game during gameplay.This is a harder version of the game which has a number of changes examples of which are, more monsters in certain levels(Some even in levels that they weren't previously in) and more falling ceilings and stalactites in the indoor levels.Though a popular seller, the game is now generally regarded as being inferior to most other side-scrolling Mario games