Original sentence: Notable former students include former surgeon and businessman Kneeland Youngblood,
Edited sentence: Audrey Nelson, attorney Polly McNeil, former surgeon and businessman Kneeland Youngblood, and international trade policy analyst P.Notable former students include adventurer/creationist/cryptozoologist/author William Gibbons known for investigating the Mokele-mbembe, book author Becky Garrison, eye surgeon Dr.Raymond Gailitis, consultant Dr.Welles Orr