Original sentence: The bill proposes for auto insurance rates to be more based solely on factors related to "skills and responsibility behind the wheel", excluding of factors such as debt or poor credit elsewhere.Thompson is a supporter, and one of the proposers of, a recent proposed bill to prevent auto insurance companies from using credit scores to set auto insurance rates, which he claims will lower auto insurance rates for Americans in financial struggle
Edited sentence: Auto insurance rates would be more based solely on factors directly related to auto mobility instead of arbitrary factors such as debt or poor credit elsewhere.The result of this bill if passed would be drastically lowered auto insurance rates to help Americans already in financial struggle.Thompson is a supporter, and one of the proposers of, a recent proposed bill to prevent auto insurance companies from using credit scores to set auto insurance rates