Original sentence: " She also expressed her outrages at the concept that "woman" could be defined as an outward set of physical characteristics - lack of penis, fake breasts - along with an ultra-sexist "female impersonator" style of clothing and gesture.Her feminism includes strong expressions about the need to provide time and resources for maternal leave, and also excellent childcare programs.In 2005, the Canadian Women's Foundation named a new award after Landsberg, to honour young women 18 to 30 who are outstanding in media and activism.She also often devotes herself to in-depth analysis of facts that she feels have received an anti-woman spin by other media.Some feel she detracted from the power of her message by resorting too frequently to name calling and stereotyping, e.she unfailingly referred to Conservative politicians with epithets such as "jack-booted Tories" and "Harris's henchmen"
Edited sentence: " She also expressed her outrages at the concept that `woman'' could be defined as an outward set of physical characteristics - lack of penis, fake breasts - along with an ultra-sexist "female impersonator" style of clothing and gesture.Her feminism includes strong expressions about the need to provide time and resources for maternal leave, and also excellent childcare programmes.In 2005, the Canadian Women's Foundation named a new award after Michele Landsberg, to honour young women 18 to 30 who are outstanding in media and activism.She also often devotes herself to in-depth analysis of facts that have received an anti-woman spin by other media.Some feel she detracted from the power of her message by resorting too frequently to 'name calling' and stereotyping, e.she unfailingly referred to Conservative politicians as "jack-booted Tories", "Harris's henchmen, etc