Original sentence: In March 1995, the much anticipated event which was becoming well known to their fans Claudio Sanchez and Travis Stever's band Toxic Parents split and, together with Nate Kelley, formed the band Beautiful Loser
Edited sentence: In March 1995, Claudio Sanchez and Travis Stever's band Toxic Parents split and, together with Nate Kelley, formed the band Beautiful Loser