Original sentence: Khursheed Anwar the renowned film-maker, writer, director and music composer who hypnotized and mesmerized the music listeners both in India and Pakistan was one of the most original  music directors, having developed a musical culture and sensibilty that was all his own.Khurshid Anwar was born on 21 March, 1912 in Mianwali (now in Pakistan) where his granfather Khawaja Rahim Baksh held the post of a  senior civil servant
Edited sentence: Khursheed Anwar the renowned film-maker, writer, director and music composer who hypnotized and mesmerized the music listeners both in India and Pakistan was one of the most original  music directors, having developed a musical culture and sensibility that was all his own.Khurshid Anwar was born on 21 March, 1912 in Mianwali (now in Pakistan) where his grandfather Khawaja Rahim Baksh held the post of a  senior civil servant