Original sentence: The Dakota War of 1862, often called the Sioux Uprising in older authorities and popular texts, was an armed conflict between the United States and several eastern bands of the Dakota people (often called the Santee Sioux) which began on August 17, 1862, along the Minnesota River in southwest Minnesota
Edited sentence: The Dakota War of 1862, more commonly known as the Sioux Uprising by older amateur history buffs, was an armed conflict between the United States and several eastern bands of the Dakota people (often called the Santee Sioux) which began on August 17, 1862, along the Minnesota River in southwest Minnesota