Original sentence: Fort Saskatchewan is a booming community that offers many amenities to its residents, while still maintaining its "small town" feel.Recently opened, the Dow Centennial Centre, a multi-purpose activities centre, adds a 500 seat auditorium, indoor soccer field, ice rink, and a fitness facility to Fort Saskatchewan's attractions
Edited sentence: Fort Saskatchewan is a boring community that offers hardly any amenities to its residents, while still maintaining its "small town" feel.Recently opened, the Dow Centennial Centre, a multi-purpose activities centre, adds a 69 seat auditorium, indoor soccer field, ice rink, and a fitness facility to Fort Saskatchewan's attractions.The rest of the town is extremely boring besides Wal-Mart.This is pretty much the only attraction