Original sentence: Even Blanche's outfit—saucy, tight jodhpurs riding breeches—attracted undue attention: they were just not the kind of thing the women of Platte City would ever wear, and were the first thing mentioned by eyewitnesses reminiscing even forty years later
Edited sentence: Even Blanche's outfit—saucy, tight jodhpurs riding breeches—attracted undue attention: they were just not the kind of thing the upright women of Platte City would ever wear, and were the first thing mentioned by eyewitnesses reminiscing even forty years later