Original sentence: A homeless bum, known only as Mister, enters the offices of the law firm Drake & Sweeney and takes many of the lawyers hostage.Although he is quickly killed and the hostages freed, one of the hostages, Michael Brock, an antitrust lawyer, is moved by what he learns from "Mister" to investigate the circumstances further.As Michael digs, he finds that his own employers were complicit in an illegal eviction, which eventually resulted in the death of a young homeless family.At the 14th Street Legal Clinic, he meets Mordecai Green, an advocate for the homeless, who asks him to help one night at the homeless shelter, introducing Michael to the world of the homeless.Drake & Sweeney's elderly head partner, deeply troubled by the events, offers to make pro bono staff available to assist the work of the Clinic in fighting for the rights of homeless people.Shocked by what he has found, Brock leaves the Drake & Sweeney firm to take a poorly-paid position with the 14th Street Legal Clinic to protect the rights of the homeless.This eventually leads to his wife divorcing him
Edited sentence: A man known only as 'Mister', enters the offices of the Washington DC law firm Drake & Sweeney and takes many of the lawyers hostage.Although he is eventually shot by a police sniper and the hostages freed, one of the hostages, Michael Brock, an antitrust lawyer, is concerned by what he has learnt from "Mister" and feels impelled to investigate the circumstances further.As Michael digs deeper, he finds that his own employers were complicit in an illegal eviction, which eventually resulted in the death of a young homeless family.Drake & Sweeney's head partner, deeply troubled by the events, offers to make pro bono staff available to assist the work of the Clinic in fighting for the rights of homeless people.He find his way to the 14th Street Legal Clinic, where he meets Mordecai Green, a fearless advocate for the homeless, who asks him to help one night at a homeless shelter.Shocked by what he has found, Brock leaves his firm to take a poorly-paid position with the 14th Street Legal Clinic, which works to protect the rights of the homeless.So Michael is introdcued to the world of the homeless and helpless.This leads to his wife divorcing him