Original sentence: A few weeks later, after furious protests from Microsoft employees and advocacy by GLEAM, Microsoft’s gay, lesbian, bisexual and transgender employee resource group, the company reversed itself and pledged to support future anti-discrimination legislation.Market experts stated that the “buy-and-dump” plan had no realistic chance of affecting Microsoft stock while legal scholars warned that the plan could be considered illegal market manipulation.The National Day of Silence brings attention to anti-LGBT (Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Transgender) name-calling, bullying and harassment in schools
Edited sentence: A few weeks later, after protests from gay-sympathetic Microsoft employees and advocacy by GLEAM, Microsoft’s gay, lesbian, bisexual and transgender employee resource group, the company reversed itself and pledged to support future anti-discrimination legislation.According to it's sponsors, The National Day of Silence brings attention to anti-LGBT (Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Transgender) name-calling, bullying and harassment in schools.However, in the over 4 years since the boycott, Microsoft stock is   mired at almost the exact same price while the.JP Morgan is currently under federal investigation for miscreant investment behavior.Many critics disagree citing it's pervasive influence in helping to shape an anti-Christian philosophy in the public schools as it pertains to the topic of homosexuality.One single so called "market expert" -Hans Olsen, who is the chief investment officer of JP Morgan - warned the “buy-and-dump” plan had no realistic chance of affecting Microsoft stock.Some legal scholars warned that the plan could be considered illegal market manipulation.stock of it's closet competitor, not subject to Hutcherson's boycott, has skyrocketed