Original sentence: All ye Ewes, Gas and Fantes,All Nzemas and Ashantis,Make our School resound with songs,With a ringing farewell song.Grey city of the outlaws hill,Quick with the hope which makes sublimeStill in Thy youth, thou dare'st to lookFar on the centuries of time.In the middle of the race,Looking back just spoilt the pace;Busy we in games and school,Hobbies, gardening, days are full.She is the glory of the coast, ACHIMOTA
Edited sentence: All ye Ewes, Gas and Fantes,All Nzemas and Ashantis,Make our School resound with song,With a ringing farewell strong.Grey city of the outlaws' hill,Quick with the hope which makes sublimeStill in Thy youth, thou dare'st to lookFar unto centuries of time.In the middle of the race,Looking back just spoils the pace;Busy we in games and school,Hobbies, gardening, days are full.She's the glory of the coast, ACHIMOTA