Original sentence: Energy Accounting Information Brief Article from 1955.Energy Accounting is the hypothetical system of distribution, proposed by the Technocracy movement, which would record the energy used to produce and distribute goods and services consumed by citizens in a Technocracy, or Technate as the movement calls it.Energy credits would probably not have to be physically handled by the citizens themselves, as the system would likely be computerised.Technological Continental Design (PDF).The amount of energy each citizen would have would be equal to what they expend, thus they never have to worry about running out or budgeting, the only constraining factor being the Technate’s resource base and technological level.The reason for the use of energy accounting, according to Technocrats, is that it would ensure the highest possible standard of living, as well as equality, among the Technate’s citizenry, and Sustainability of resources.The units of this accounting system would be known as Energy Credits, Energy Certificates, or simply Energy Units
Edited sentence: Energy Accounting is the hypothetical system of distribution, proposed by Technocracy Incorporated, which would record the energy used to produce and distribute goods and services consumed by citizens in a Technocracy, or Technate as the movement calls it.Energy units would probably not have to be physically handled by the citizens themselves, as the system would likely be computerised.The amount of energy units each citizen would have would be equal to what they consume, thus they never have to worry about running out or budgeting, the only constraining factor being the Technates resource base and technological level.The reason for the use of energy accounting according to Technocrats is that it would ensure the highest possible standard of living as well as equality among the Technate's citizenry, within the context of sustainable abundance.The units of this accounting system would be known as Energy Certificates, or simply Energy Units.Willard Gibbs