Original sentence: In addition, the victims at Orangeburg were mostly young black men protesting local segregation.It was not as newsworthy as a result.The historian Jack Bass attributed the discrepancy in media coverage in part that the incident took place following passage of federal civil rights legislation in the mid-1960s, and dramatic, large-scale urban riots.The shootings occurred at night, when media coverage, especially any television news, was less
Edited sentence: In addition, the shootings at Orangeburg happened at night, when media coverage was less.The historian Jack Bass attributed the discrepancy in media coverage to the fact that the victims at Orangeburg were mostly young black men protesting local segregation