Original sentence: Jeffrey Maier (born September 24, 1984) is an intern scout for the Milwaukee Brewers baseball team, but is best known for an incident involving him as a young fan: for deflecting a ball in play during Game 1 of the 1996 American League Championship Series between the New York Yankees and the Baltimore Orioles
Edited sentence: Jeffrey Maier (born September 24, 1984) is an intern scout for the Milwaukee Brewers baseball team, but is best known for an incident involving him as a young fan: for reaching into the playing field and catching a live ball during Game 1 of the 1996 American League Championship Series between the New York Yankees and the Baltimore Orioles