Original sentence: However, when his report characterized the event as proof the facility's security was in shambles - a sensational sell during the post-9/11 months - Phil Boyer, President of the Aircraft Owners and Pilots Association, publicly castigated Roger Ailes for Kennedy's stunt [http://www.In April 2002, Fox News presented a three-part series called "Nuclear Neglect.org/whatsnew/newsitems/2002/020424letter1
Edited sentence: "  In April 2002, Fox News presented a three-part series called "Nuclear Neglect.Capitalizing on viewers' fears by manufacturing "scoops.However, when his report characterized the event as proof the facility's security was in shambles - a sensational sell during the post-9/11 months - Phil Boyer, President of the Aircraft Owners and Pilots Association, publicly castigated Roger Ailes for Kennedy's stunt