Original sentence: "The Boiler" had a promo video, which was made on 16mm film by Coventry Art student Lizzie Soden from Lanchester Polytechnic (now Coventry University).As Soden was a student, she got together a union crew from Nottingham film workshop so the film could be broadcast.However the concept was about wanting to depict the rape as being synonymous with gaining or assuming power (in this case because of the money the male had spent on the victim, and he assuming he then could do as he wished).It was broadcast twice; but the second time, the footage from the TV collage was taken out because of copyright problems, and substituted by a simulated silhouetted rape in a dark alley
Edited sentence: "The Boiler" had a promo video, which was made on 16mm film by Coventry Art student Lizzie Soden from Lanchester ( Coventry) university.) it was broadcast twice but the 2nd time they cut off the footage from TV collage due to copyright, and they 'put together' a terrible silhouetted rape in a dark alley depiction which took away the power of the end section.As Lizzie was a student she got together a union crew from Nottingham film workshop so the film could be broadcast.However the concept was about wanting to depict the rape as being synonymous with gaining or assuming power ( in this case because of the money the male had spent on the victim, and he assuming he then could do as he wished