Original sentence: Personal development practices traditionally include music, song, dance, poetry, sport, martial arts, and writing.Philosophy and religion address the theoretical goals of personal development: the meaning of life, what constitutes a good life, and how best to develop oneself
Edited sentence: Philosophy and religion address the larger goals of personal development: the meaning of life, what constitutes a good life, and how best to develop oneself.These goals are often linked to traditional development practices and arts such as music and dance, singing or chanting, poetry and writing, sport and martial arts