Original sentence: While the positions in the previous two paragraphs appear in tension with one another, the relevant distinction may be between cases where the mother's life may be "in jeopardy," and cases where the mother would almost certainly die without the procedure that would incidentally destroy the fetus
Edited sentence: While the positions in the previous two paragraphs appear in tension with one another, the relevant distinction may be between cases where the mother's life may be "in jeopardy," and cases where the mother would almost certainly die without the procedure that would--incidentally--destroy the fetus