Original sentence: "Jackie" Dupont-Walker (student de-segregating Fla State University in 1963 & Social Action Commission Dir - AME Church).A Phillip Randolph - leader of modern day pullman car porter movement.Alsee Hastings - US House of Representatives (C-FL).ColThaddious Goodman, former Chief of Staff Walter Reed, Medical Center.Deaconness Rosa Parks (catalyst for bus boycott 1951 sparking the modern day civil right    movement).Ernest Green - one of the Little Rock Nine desegragating Central High School.Horace Dawson - Senior Ambassador, retired; head of Patrica Harris Center at Howard Univ.Peter Groff (for Colorado State Senate President & Dir of Faithbased & Community Organization Center for Dept of Education in Obama Administration).Roy Wilkins (Noted Civil Rights Leader & Exec Dir of NAACP durong 1960s).Stephanie Wilson (US Astronaut).[[Vernon Jordan](Noted Civil Rights leader & author)
Edited sentence: A Phillip Randolph.Alsee Hastings, US House of Representatives (C-FL).Ernest Green - member of the Little Rock Nine who desegragated Central High School.Horace Dawson - Senior Ambassador, retired; head of Patrica Harris Center at Howard University.Jackie Dupont-Walker, student desegregating Florida State University in 1963, and currently the Social Action Commission director of the AME Church.Peter Groff, former Colorado State Senate President, and current Director of Faithbased & Community Organizations Center for Department of Education.Roy Wilkins, Rights Leader & Executive Director of the NAACP.Thaddious Goodman, former Chief of Staff Walter Reed, Medical Center.Vernon Jordan, Noted Civil Rights leader & author