Original sentence: Accompanying the the badge of the Order was a certificate explaining the award as recognition of the extent to which Tierney has "contributed to introducing Japanese fine arts.Douglas MacArthur for Japan's actions during World War II -- including an apology for the December 7, 1941 attack on Pearl Harbor.The University of Utah's Marriott Library today holds close to 75,000 photographs taken by Tierney -- all  related to the art and architecture of the Far East, Southeast Asia, and especially Japan
Edited sentence: Accompanying the badge of the Order was a certificate explaining the award as recognition of the extent to which Tierney has "contributed to introducing Japanese fine arts.Douglas MacArthur for Japan's actions during World War II—including an apology for the December 7, 1941 attack on Pearl Harbor.The University of Utah's Marriott Library today holds close to 75,000 photographs taken by Tierney—all  related to the art and architecture of the Far East, Southeast Asia, and especially Japan