Original sentence: Orbital, Apollo 440, Philip Glass, The Grid, Future Sound of London, Lux Voltaire, Astral Projection, The Shamen, Mouse on Mars, Tangerine Dream and Cirrus  Allan Holdsworth, The Orb, Gravity Kills, Technotronic, Jens Johansson, Van Halen, and Depeche Mode  Apollo 440, Juno Reactor, Moby, Cirrus, Fatboy Slim, Laurent Garnier, ATB, Depeche Mode, Future Sound of London, Pet Shop Boys, Faithless, The Process Void, and Rhythm Method
Edited sentence: Orbital, Apollo 440, Philip Glass, The Grid, Future Sound of London, Lux Voltaire, Winter Palace, Astral Projection, The Shamen, Mouse on Mars, Tangerine Dream and Cirrus  Allan Holdsworth, The Orb, Gravity Kills, Technotronic, Jens Johansson, Van Halen, and Depeche Mode  Apollo 440, Juno Reactor, Moby, Cirrus, Fatboy Slim, Laurent Garnier, ATB, Depeche Mode, Future Sound of London, Pet Shop Boys, Faithless, The Process Void, and Rhythm Method