Original sentence: , reported having a vision in which he saw God the Father and Jesus Christ, and event known as the First Vision.Nearby is the grove of trees known as the Sacred Grove in which the founder and first prophet of the Church, Joseph Smith, Jr.The Palmyra New York Temple is the 77th operating temple of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints.The Palmyra New York Temple was dedicated on 6 April 2000, the 170th anniversary of the organization of the Church.The site for the Palmyra New York Temple, atop a wooded hill in pastoral western New York, is in an area prominent in the early history of the  the Latter Day Saint Movement.The temple grounds, on the border between the towns of Manchester and Palmyra, are also on the grounds of the original Smith family farm
Edited sentence: Nearby is the grove of trees in which the founder and first prophet of the Church, Joseph Smith, had a vision in which he saw God the Father and Jesus Christ.The Palmyra New York Temple is the 77th operating temple of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints.The Palmyra New York Temple was dedicated on 6 April 2000, the 170th anniversary of the organization of Christ's Church.The site for the Palmyra New York Temple, atop a wooded hill in pastoral western New York, is in an area prominent in the early history of the LDS Church.The temple grounds, on the border between the towns of Manchester and Palmyra, are also on the grounds where Smith's family had an old log cabin