Original sentence: Petra Strorm is the youngest of the Strorm children.Ten-year-old David Strorm, the son of Waknuk's zealous religious patriarch, has inexplicably vivid dreams of brightly lit cities and horseless carts that are at odds with his post-industrial experience.The group of telepaths discovers her ability is extraordinarily strong and difficult to resist, placing the group at greater risk of discovery
Edited sentence: Petra Strorm is the youngest of the Strorm children and the group of telepaths discovers her ability is extraordinarily strong and difficult to resist, placing the group at greater risk of discovery.Ten-year-old David Strorm, the son of Waknuk's zealous religious patriarch, has inexplicably vivid dreams of brightly lit cities and horseless carts that are at odds with his pre-industrial experience