Original sentence: Sulfur Springs Mountain (also: Sulphur Springs Mountain) is a mountain in southwestern Solano County, California.Sulfur Springs Mountain stands 600 feet above sea level, and its peak affords expansive views of the northern San Francisco Bay as well as the Napa River
Edited sentence: Sulfur Springs Mountain (or offically Sulphur Springs Mountain) is a mountain in southwestern Solano County, California.The highest peak on Sulfur Springs Mountain stands at an elevation of , and affords expansive views of the northern San Francisco Bay as well as the Napa River