Original sentence: After the NLCS victory, Clemens lasted only two innings in Game 1 of the 2005 World Series.Clemens concluded the 2007 season with 6 wins, 6 losses, and a 4.15 ERA.Clemens won seven Cy Young Awards, two more than any other pitcher.He started for the Yankees in two crucial late season victories against the Boston Red Sox, in which he surrendered 2 runs in 12 innings of play.However, it took him a month to surpass Carlton, as he had low run support in a string of five starts that produced one loss and four no-decisions.On May 9, he got his second win of the season against the Florida Marlins, giving him 330 for his career.The only current pitcher with a reasonable chance of passing Clemens in the near future is Maddux, who now has 343 wins to Clemens' 353 and is nearly four years younger
Edited sentence: After the NLCS victory, Clemens' 2005 season ended disappointingly, as he lasted only two innings in Game 1 of the 2005 World Series.Clemens has won seven Cy Young Awards, two more than any other pitcher.Despite being 45 years old, Clemens concluded the 2007 season with respectable numbers: 6 wins, 6 losses, and a 4.15 ERA.He started for the Yankees in two crucial late season victories against the Boston Red Sox, in which he surrendered only 2 runs in 12 innings of play.However, it took him a month to surpass Carlton, as he was victimized by horrendous run support in a string of five starts that produced one loss and four no-decisions.On May 9, he finally got his second win of the season against the Florida Marlins, giving him 330 for his career.The only current pitcher with a reasonable chance of passing Clemens is Maddux, who now has 343 wins to Clemens' 353 and is nearly four years younger