Original sentence: However is it largely viewed as an outdated custom and symptomatic of the parasitic socio-economic culture that continues to ravage much of Africa.However, Lobola has numerous unintended negative side-effects.The tradition of lobola is as adhered to today as it ever was
Edited sentence: Lobola has numerous unintended negative side-effects.The tradition of lobola is as adhered to today as it ever was, although is it largely viewed as an outdated custom and symptomatic of the parasitic socio-economic culture that continues to ravage Africa.Unfortunately logic is not taken into account where Lobola is concerned, as with much of traditional African culture