Original sentence: As a member of the LDS Church, Card believes that homosexuality is a violation of the Law of Chastity and that active homosexuals, as well as all others who violate this law, must repent.Some fans of Card feel that his views on homosexuality are irrational and bigoted.This dichotomy of "hate the sin" (homosexuality) and "love the sinner" (people he considers goodhearted but misguided who commit what he considers the sin of homosexuality) has confused some as to how a writer who sometimes portray gays positively in his fiction can be so virulently opposed to the gay-rights movement in his nonfiction writing
Edited sentence: As a member of the LDS Church, Card believes that homosexuality is a violation of the law of chastity and that active homosexuals, as well as all others who violate this law, must repent.Many fans of Card feel that his views on homosexuality and their main source, the LDS church to which he belongs, are irrational and bigoted.This dichotomy of "hate the sin" (homosexuality) and "love the sinner" (people he considers goodhearted but misguided who commit what he considers the sin of homosexuality) has confused many as to how a writer who sometimes portray gays positively in his fiction can be so virulently opposed to the gay-rights movement in his nonfiction writing