Original sentence: On 12th June 2009 the Hopkins Building  was officially opened by his son Kelvin Hopkins, the Labour MP for Luton North.The new building has brought together under one roof, the multi-disciplinary activities involved in  the areas of biomedical and pharmaceutical research for which the University has  a world-wide reputation.With the appropriate curvature and coatings to the rod ends and optimal choices of glass-types, all calculated and specified by Hopkins, the image quality was transformed – light levels were increased by as much as eightyfold with no heat; resolution of fine detail was finally acheived; colours were  now true; and  diameters as small as a  few millimeters were possible
Edited sentence: On 12 June 2009 the Hopkins Building  was officially opened by his son Kelvin Hopkins, the Labour MP for Luton North.The new building has brought together under one roof, the multi-disciplinary activities involved in  the areas of biomedical and pharmaceutical research for which the University has  a worldwide reputation.With the appropriate curvature and coatings to the rod ends and optimal choices of glass-types, all calculated and specified by Hopkins, the image quality was transformed – light levels were increased by as much as eightyfold with no heat; resolution of fine detail was finally achieved; colours were  now true; and  diameters as small as a  few millimeters were possible