Original sentence: As a guest, Shusai had refused to abide by Chinese playing rules, embarrassing his hosts in the process.Moreover, Shusai would not apparently risk losing to young Chinese players and had left many games unfinished, supposedly to be concluded another day, a promise he never fulfilled.Segoe commented to Hashimoto that it was unacceptable for Shusai to have left the games unfinished after receiving hospitality and game fees
Edited sentence: As a guest, Shusai had contemptuously refused to abide by Chinese playing rules, embarrassing his hosts in the process.Moreover, Shusai would not risk losing to young Chinese players and had left many games unfinished, supposedly to be concluded another day, a promise he never fulfilled.Segoe found this the most galling and commented to Hashimoto many times that it was unacceptable for Shusai to have left the games unfinished after receiving such great hospitality and large sums of gaming fees