Original sentence: "  Further, Jackson wrote in his 1988 autobiography Moon Walk that he only had two rhinoplastic surgeries and the surgical creation of a cleft in his chin, while attributing puberty and diet to the noticeable change in the structure of his face.However, on The Oprah Winfrey Show in 1993, Jackson revealed that the change in his skin color was due to the disease vitiligo.Jackson's skin color was a medium-brown color for the entire duration of his youth; his skin had been becoming paler gradually since 1982.The structure of his face has changed as well, and a number of surgeons claim that Jackson had undergone multiple nasal surgeries as well as a forehead lift, thinned lips and cheekbone surgery.This change became so noticeable that it gained widespread media coverage, with some tabloids claiming that he was bleaching his skin
Edited sentence: Another significant reason for the change in appearance was the use of plastic surgery.Despite a number of surgeons' claims that Jackson had undergone multiple nasal surgeries as well as a forehead lift, thinned lips and cheekbone surgery, Jackson wrote in his 1988 autobiography Moon Walk that he only had two rhinoplastic surgeries and the surgical creation of a cleft in his chin, while attributing puberty and diet to the noticeable change in the structure of his face.Jackson's skin color was a medium-brown color for the entire duration of his youth; his skin had been becoming paler gradually since 1982, and had become a light brown color.On The Oprah Winfrey Show in 1993, Jackson revealed that the change in his skin color was due to the disease vitiligo.This change became so noticeable that it gained widespread media coverage, with Jackson attributing the change to the disease vitiligo and some tabloids claiming that he was bleaching his skin