Original sentence: He travelled to Sunderland to sign for the club after they agreed a fee with Tottenham, and after passing a medical, Bent signed for Sunderland on 5 August 2009 for an initial fee of £10 million plus potential additional payments, which could possibly rise to £16.5 million
Edited sentence: He travelled to Sunderland to sign for the club after they agreed a fee with Tottenham, and after passing a medical, Bent signed for Sunderland on 5 August for an initial fee of £10 million plus potential additional payments, which could possibly rise to £16.5 million