Original sentence: Clay arrives just in time to witness the men Wesley has persecuted over the years, Red, Emmet, Stroudenmire, and even Tighlman, come to Dalton's defense and shoot Wesley dead
Edited sentence: Clay arrives just in time to witness the men Wesley has persecuted over the years, Red, Emmet, Stroudenmire and Tighlman, come to Dalton's defense and shoot Wesley dead