Original sentence: In English, "Holland" is often used as a name for the whole of The Netherlands, though some people strongly object against the use of this word instead of 'the Netherlands', for Holland is actually only a part of the Netherlands (Noord-Holland and Zuid-Holland)
Edited sentence: In English, "Holland" is often used as a name for the whole of The Netherlands, though some people prefer the use of 'the Netherlands' instead, Holland is actually only one region of the Netherlands (Noord-Holland and Zuid-Holland)