Original sentence: Inside this book, you will find everything from the funniest joke in the world and an accompanying explanation of humour, to the frightening similarities between scientists and Science Fiction writers (and how a roomfull of Ph.Though not penned by Douglas Adams himself, the works are of interest to fans of the Guide.You will also find an explanation of British Humour, and proof that Marvin is, in fact, God and that the Sirius Cybernetics Corporation is trying to destroy the Universe
Edited sentence: Inside this book, you'll find everything from the funniest joke in the world and an accompanying explanation of humor, to the frightening similarities between scientists and Science Fiction writers (and how a roomfull of Ph.Though not penned by Douglas Adams himself, the works are insightful, engrossing, and a must-read for any fan of the Guide.You will also find a wonderful explanation of British Humor, and proof that Marvin is, in fact God and the the Sirius Cybernetics Corporation is trying to destroy the Universe