Original sentence: Hilmy Mohd.Hilmy Mohd Noor.In the book, he also mentioned incidences of lobbying by some Muslims in his place of employment; a multinational oil company; to get his job terminated.Noor, in his book "Circumcised Heart", describes his experiences during his detention under the Internal Security Act of Malaysia in what he described as resulting from religious persecution by Malaysian authorities.Nur'aishah Bokhari.Nur'aishah Bokhari made a writ of habeas corpus by statutory declaration claiming that she was detained involuntarily by her own family members for wanting to convert out of Islam before marrying her Roman Catholic boyfriend.She subsequently escaped and has since left the country.Some notable cases include:.There has been a few high profile incidences and accounts of persecution of people from Muslim backgrounds attempting to convert from the Islamic faith
Edited sentence: Concurrently, there was lobbying by some Muslims in his company to get his job terminated.Hilmi Mohd.Noor, in his book "Circumcised Heart", describes his experiences during his detention resulting from religious persecution by the Malaysian authorities.Nur Aishah Bokhari was captured and imprisoned by her own family members for wanting to convert before marrying her boyfriend.She escaped and has since left the country