Original sentence: 2009 - Park is opening for the 2009 season on memorial day weekend with its entire kiddie land and nine adult rides, these include: the Paratrooper, Flying Scooters, Tilt-A-Whirl, Tumblebug, the carousel,  the new Skydiver (a ride the Lisko brothers are bringing in) The devils den, the bumper cars,whiches stew and trabant.Also,the water park is set to open on July, 4.The miniature train ride will be opened throughout the season
Edited sentence: 2009 - Park is opening for the 2009 season on memorial day weekend with its entire kiddie land and nine adult rides, these include: the Paratrooper, Flying Scooters, Tilt-A-Whirl, Tumblebug, the Carousel,  the new Skydiver (a ride the Lisko brothers brought in), the Devils Den, the Bumper Cars, Witches Stew and Trabant.The Miniature Train ride will be opened throughout the season.The Music Express and the water park also opened later in the summer