Original sentence: He was involved in numerous land transactions and acquired, in particular, the manors of Sock Dennisand South Petherton in Somerset, and Brook House and Lodgwood Farm, near Westbury, Wiltshire
Edited sentence: He was involved in numerous land transactions and acquired, in particular, the manors of Sock Dennis and South Petherton in Somerset, and Brook House and Lodgwood Farm, near Westbury, Wiltshire