Original sentence: This short story tells of an Tibetan lamasery whose monks have long sought to list all of the numerous names for God evident in human cultures, as they believe the Universe was created in order to note all the names of God and once this naming is completed, God will bring the Universe to an end
Edited sentence: This short story tells of a Tibetan lamasery whose monks have long sought to list all of the numerous names for God evident in human cultures, as they believe the Universe was created in order to note all the names of God and once this naming is completed, God will bring the Universe to an end