Original sentence: Monbiot is also on record expressing his hope that members of the “LM network” are no longer accorded scientific credibility, given their alleged lack of scientifc credentials and acceptance of money from organisations that have allegedly tried to prevent sicentific truth from being propogated and explained
Edited sentence: Monbiot is also on record expressing his hope that members of the “LM network” are no longer accorded scientific credibility, given their acceptance of money from organisations that have deliberately tried to prevent sicentific truth from being propogated and explained.This usually boils down to a claim that Spiked voice the opinions of corporate paymasters such as oil and pharmaceutical companies