Original sentence: Corrie was part of a group of seven ISM activists (three British and four US) attempting to disrupt the actions of Israeli bulldozers.Corrie, who had positioned herself in the path of a Caterpillar D9R armored bulldozer, was fatally injured.On March 16, 2003, an IDF operation in the land between the Rafah refugee camp and the border with Egypt was engaged in clearing brush, which the IDF says is necessary to destroy guerrilla hideouts and smuggling tunnels
Edited sentence: Corrie was part of a group of seven ISM activists (three British and four US) attempting to stop the Israeli terrorists.Corrie, was barbarically ran over by the bulldozer from the Zionist extremists.On March 16, 2003, an IDF operation in the land between the Rafah refugee camp and the border with Egypt was engaged in destroying the homes of innocent palestinian in Rafah, Gaza Strip|smuggling tunnels]]