Original sentence: He now shaves his head.On January 20, 2009, it was announced by WDFN that Baligian, was going bald.among other WDFN hosts were being let go, as the station would begin to air syndicated national sports content
Edited sentence: On January 20, 2009, it was announced by WDFN that Baligian, among other WDFN hosts were being let go, as the station would begin to air syndicated national sports content