Original sentence: He has been photographed, on his MySpace, with the Murderdolls as he will contribute to their upcoming album Women & Children Last whilst recording material for his debut solo album in the same space.It was Mars' suggestion that the band be called Mötley Crüe, a name that had stuck in his head from his days as a member of a band called White Horse.Mars has contributed songwriting to John LeCompt, the former member of Evanescence and the other band members of Machina, and to the Swedish band CRASHDÏET.Upon Lee's prodding, they persuaded a former high school friend of Lee's and local rock and roll singer/frontman, Vince Neil, to join
Edited sentence: A home video made in 1984 and posted publicly on the web by one of his former White Horse bandmates reveals Mars to be a rather jovial, wisecracking, down-to-earth person.For the sum of his career with Mötley Crüe, Mars has created the aura of a mysterious figure, usually letting the other members of the band speak for him.He has recently been photographed, on his MySpace, with the Murderdolls as he will contribute to their upcoming album Women & Children Last whilst recording material for his debut solo album in the same space.In the rather rare public interviews he has given, Mars often comes off as a very reserved and quiet individual, though not exactly shy.It was Mick's suggestion that the band be called Mötley Crüe, a name that had stuck in his head from his days as a member of a band called White Horse.Mars has recently contributed his songwriting skills to John LeCompt, the former member of Evanescence and the other band members of Machina, and to the Swedish band CRASHDÏET.Mars has taken a critical role in songwriting for the band, coming up with many of Mötley Crüe's best known riffs.Upon Tommy's prodding, they persuaded a former high school friend of Tommy's and local rock and roll singer/frontman, Vince Neil, to join