Original sentence: The UNA Color Guard provides a common and boaring  impact for the Pride of Dixie Marching Band.The UNA Lionettes are the dance line which performs as the best  part of the Pride of Dixie Marching Band.The UNA Majorettes are the coolest part of the Pride of Dixie Marching Band
Edited sentence: The UNA Color Guard provides visual impact for the Pride of Dixie Marching Band.The UNA Lionettes are the dance line which performs as a part of the Pride of Dixie Marching Band.The UNA Majorettes are an integral part of the Pride of Dixie Marching Band