Original sentence: Comus issued an identical proclamation in 1917 (for World War I) and another in 1941 (for World War II), and persuaded the Captains of other Carnival organizations to refrain from organized revelry during hostilities
Edited sentence: Comus issued an identical proclamation in 1917 (for World War I) and another during World War II, and persuaded the Captains of other Carnival organizations to refrain from organized revelry during hostilities