Original sentence: Rehman,  Knut Reiersrud, Adrian Sherwood, Shiv Kumar Sharma, Bonecrusher, Guy Sigsworth, Martyn Ware,Zakir Hussain, Nick Sillitoe, Audun Erlien, Reidar Skår, Inder Matharu Goldfinger, Ustad Nazim Ali Khan, throughout her career, she is considered a pioneering influence on Pakistani pop music
Edited sentence: Rehman,  Knut Reiersrud, Adrian Sherwood, Shiv Kumar Sharma, Bonecrusher, Guy Sigsworth, Martyn Ware,Zakir Hussain, Nick Sillitoe, Audun Erlien, Reidar Skår, Inder Matharu Goldfinger, Ustad Nazim Ali Khan, throughout her career,