Original sentence: Pokeweed has caused deaths in children.Records from the Bio-Medical Center claim that the success rate of treatment is around 80%, though independent audits have failed to confirm this number.Very little or no peer-reviewed research has been published on any claims of benefit from the Hoxsey Therapy
Edited sentence: Many peer-reviewed research has been published on the benefits of the Hoxsey Therapy.Pokeweed has caused deaths in children, but then again so has the many fda approved drugs and addatives like flouride which states this toothpaste is posion on the back.Records from the Bio-Medical Center claim that the success rate of treatment is around 80%, many independent audits have confirmed this number