Original sentence: : 22 years old, Shun is a loner who aspired to become a computer-graphics artist and refused to become a Megaranger.: 23 years old, Kouichirou is the leader of the team.: 24 years old, Kenta is a slacker and a knucklehead who likes Korean barbecue, but he is friendly, playful, and good hearted
Edited sentence: : 18 years old, Kenta is a slacker and a knucklehead who likes Korean barbecue, but he is friendly, playful, and good hearted.: 18 years old, Kouichirou is the leader of the team.: 18 years old, Shun is a loner who aspired to become a computer-graphics artist and refused to become a Megaranger