Original sentence: Mujib Bahini, generally categorized as Gono Bahini, was part of the Bangladesh Mukti Bahini, a guerrilla force fighting against Pakistan in the Bangladesh War of Independence in 1971.Mukti Bahini was organized in India with the active assistance of Major General Oban of the Indian Army.Student League leaders Sheikh Fazlul Haque Mani, Tofael Ahmed, Abdur Razzak and Sirajul Alam Khan were the organisers of this Bahini
Edited sentence: According to General Oban freedom was these young leaders do-or-die promise which appeared to be rooted in the heart.Mujib Bahini was part of the Bangladesh Mukti Bahini and generally categorized as Gono Bahini.Mukti Bahini was organized in India with the active assistance of Major General Oban of the Indian Army and Student League leaders Sheikh Fazlul Haque Mani, Tofael Ahmed, Abdur Razzak and Sirajul Alam Khan were organisers of this Bahini.These four young leaders availed themselves of the full opportunity of the circumstances and tried to turn the events to their advantage