Original sentence: But in his writings are found some of the grandest examples of a fervid and richly elaborated eloquence.He often rose too far above the heads of his audience, which the continued splendour of his declamation, his inordinate copiousness, and his excessive vehemence, often passing into fury, at length wearied, and even disgusted.His writings, like his speeches, are characterised by the welding together of knowledge, thought, and feeling.Though he was never admitted to the Cabinet, he guided and influenced largely the policy of his party, while by his efforts in the direction of economy and order in administration at home, and on behalf of a more just government in India and Ireland, as well as by his contributions to political philosophy, he laid his country and indeed the world under lasting obligations.Though still controversial, Burke is today widely regarded as one of the greatest political thinkers of the English-speaking world.Unlike most orators, he is more successful as a writer than he was as a speaker
Edited sentence: Burke was one of the greatest political thinkers whom England has produced, and all his writings, like his speeches, are characterised by the welding together of knowledge, thought, and feeling.He rose too far above the heads of his audience, which the continued splendour of his declamation, his inordinate copiousness, and his excessive vehemence, often passing into fury, at length wearied, and even disgusted: but in his writings are found some of the grandest examples of a fervid and richly elaborated eloquence.Though he was never admitted to the Cabinet, he guided and influenced largely the policy of his party, while by his efforts in the direction of economy and order in administration at home, and on behalf of kindly and just government in India, as well as by his contributions to political philosophy, he laid his country and indeed the world under lasting obligations.Unlike most orators he is more successful as a writer than as a speaker