Original sentence: "  Similarly, in a speech given in Hanoi on April 13, 1970, and broadcast by Radio Hanoi the next day, Chomsky spoke of his "admiration for the people of Vietnam who have been able to defend themselves against the ferocious attack, and at the same time take great strides forward toward the socialist society." Greenfield described this need to "say things between two commericals" as the media's requirement for "concision"." He has, however, drawn an analogy between the Chinese famine and deaths resulting from malnutrition in India, claiming that "democratic capitalism" is directly responsible for the latter.Chomsky made early efforts to critically analyse globalization.Manufacturing Consent: Noam Chomsky and the Media, Michael Achbar and Peter Wintonick, Videocassette.More succinctly, Paul Berman wrote in Terror and Liberalism (2003): "In the United States, the principal newspapers and magazines have tended to ignore Chomsky's political writings for many years now, because of his reputation as a crank.Necessary Illusions Productions Inc co-produced with the National Film Board of Canada, 1992.[…] If you['ve] got a 22-minute show, and a guy takes five minutes to warm up, […] he's out
Edited sentence: "  Greenfield described this need to "say things between two commericals" as the media's requirement for "concision"."  Similarly, he observed of Vietnam: "Although there appears to be a high degree of democratic participation at the village and regional levels, […] still major planning is highly centralized in the hands of the state authorities." He has drawn an analogy between the Chinese famine and deaths resulting from malnutrition in India, claiming that "democratic capitalism" is directly responsible for the latter.Chomsky made early efforts to critically analyse corporate-sponsored globalization.More dismissively, Paul Berman wrote in Terror and Liberalism (2003): "In the United States, the principal newspapers and magazines have tended to ignore Chomsky's political writings for many years now, because of his reputation as a crank.[…]  If you['ve] got a 22-minute show, and a guy takes five minutes to warm up, […] he's out