Original sentence: Even though he was wounded in his legs by shrapnel, he moved towards an enemy bunker from which fire had caused many Pakistani deaths.Naik Muhammad Mahfuz (born 25 October 1944) was a Pakistani soldier, who was awarded the Nishan-i-Haider, the highest military award of Pakistan.On 17 December 1971, his company was pinned down by enemy fire and his machine-gun was destroyed by an Indian shell
Edited sentence: Company of 43 Punjab Regiment under command Major Subha Sadiq (Who also embraced Shahadat in the same action) came for support and fight hard until capture of stratigic town of Pul Kanjri.Even though Lance Naik Muhammad Mehfuz Shaheed, NH was wounded in his legs by shrapnel, he moved towards an enemy bunker from which fire had caused many Pakistani deaths.Immediately after the war was over, Indian Army recognized his bravery and said that if he was in the Indian Army, they would award him with veer chakra.Naik Muhammad Mahfuz Janjua (born 25 October 1944) was a Pakistani soldier, who was awarded the Nishan-i-Haider, the highest military award of Pakistan.On 17 December 1971, during attack on enemy Pul Kanjri post, his company was pinned down by enemy fire and his machine-gun was destroyed by an Indian shell