Original sentence: A cover girl is a female model or entertainer whose photograph appears on the front cover of a magazine to attract attention on the shelf, usually a magazine devoted to women's interests (such as Redbook or Seventeen) or men's interests (such as GQ or Esquire).Almost always, a special photo session is done and the woman is given a makeover so her appearance conforms to the type exalted by the magazine.In recent years, digital post-processing has been used in the place of airbrushing and other traditional photographic techniques.The images thus obtained will then be retouched; the eyes and teeth of the woman will be brightened towards peak white, all skin blemishes and skin texture airbrushed out, and her figure may be artificially slimmed and elongated.The term first appeared in English in 1915
Edited sentence: A cover girl is a female model or entertainer whose picture appears on the front cover of a magazine to attract attention on the shelf.In recent years, digital post-processing of cover images has reached the point where the eyes and teeth of the woman will be brightened towards peak white, all skin blemishes and skin texture airbrushed out, and their figure may be artificially slimmed and elongated.Often a special photo session is done and the woman is given a makeover so her appearance  conforms to the type exalted by the magazine.The images thus obtained will then be retouched.Typically, it's a magazine devoted to women's interests, such as Redbook or Seventeen or men's interest as GQ or Esquire, all in the United States