Original sentence: He was the great-great grandson of the cotton-spinning industrialist Sir Richard Arkwright.Sir John Stanhope Arkwright (1872 – 19 September 1954) was a British politician
Edited sentence: ''The Oxford Dictionary of National Biography] (includes photo).Born in London, he was the great-great grandson of the cotton-spinning industrialist Sir Richard Arkwright.Sir John Stanhope Arkwright (July 10, 1872 – September 19, 1954) was a British politician