Original sentence: He slowly uncovers their plan and soon discovers the real identity of Tyler Durden; he is a split-personality construct that exists only in the narrator's head and the actions that Tyler undertakes are actions that the narrator himself is really performing; the narrator's perpetual state of insomina is truly caused by the "Tyler" personality taking over during the night when the narrator thinks he's asleep, then leading a double life until the narrator "wakes up" in the morning.Members of Project Mayhem arrive, with Marla forcibly in tow, and narrator calls for bandages.The audience sees the narrator slump in the chair, and Tyler fall, with a bullet hole in the back of his head.The film climaxes with the narrator arguing with Tyler over control of his body.The films ends with the narrator and Marla watching buildings explode.The narrator, in a violent act of desperation, shoots himself in the mouth
Edited sentence: (Narrator wanted to die to end Project Mayhem, and stop the explosions.He slowly uncovers their plan and soon discovers the real identity of Tyler Durden; he is a split-personality construct that exists only in the narrator's head and the actions that Tyler undertakes are actions that the narrator himself is really performing; the Narrator's perpetual state of insomina is truly caused by the "Tyler" personality taking over during the night when the Narrator thinks he's asleep, then leading a double life until the Narrator "wakes up" in the morning.Members of Project Mayhem arrive, with Marla forcibly in tow, and Narrator calls for bandages.The Narrator, in a violent act of desperation, shoots himself in the mouth.The audience sees the Narrator slump in the chair, and Tyler fall, with a bullet hole in the back of his head.The film climaxes with the narrator arguing with Tyler over control of 'his' body.There is some argument over which personality took over, but the evidence points strongly to Tyler having finally taken full and unopposed control.Yet after the shooting, he calls for bandages, and calmly takes Marla's hand as the buildings around them begin to explode