Original sentence: Arash Borhani, Soccer player.Houshang Moradi Kermani, author.Javad Nurbakhsh,former Master of the  Nimatullahi Sufi Order.Khwaju Kermani, poet from the 14th century.Mahnaz Afkhami, former Minister of Women's Affairs of Iran (1975) & Founder and President of Women's Learning Partnership (WLP).Mirza Aqa Khan Kermani, constitutionalist, an Iranian literary critic and founder of new Iranian nationalism.Roohollah Khaleghi, Iranian musician, composer, conductor and author
Edited sentence: Arash Borhani,Soccer player.Houshang Moradi Kermani,writer.Javad Nurbakhsh, The previous Master of the  Nimatullahi Sufi Order.Khwaju Kermani,Great poet from the 14th century.Mahnaz Afkhami, Former Minister of Women's Affairs of Iran (1975) & Founder and President of Women's Learning Partnership (WLP).Mirza Aqa Khan Kermani - Great constitutionalist, an Iranian literary critic and founder of new Iranian nationalism.Roohollah Khaleghi, A prominent Iranian musician, composer, conductor and author