Original sentence: Ayaan Hirsi Ali.Daniel Pipes.She is best known for attempting to popularize the use of the term Dhimmitude, the collective experience of dhimmis, or "protected peoples", religious minorities living among an Islamic majority.Some historians regard her work as politically opinionated rather than factual, although many others have accepted it as good faith scholarship
Edited sentence: Her work is regarded as politically opinionated rather than factual by some historians, although others have accepted and built on it.She is best known for attempting to popularize the use of the  neologism dhimmitude, the collective experience of dhimmis, or "protected peoples", religious minorities living among an Islamic majority