Original sentence: Exhibiting profound disillusionment, Truffaut complained that Werner had become a "cold" performer.To provide a taste of what life is like in a non-literate culture, the opening credits are spoken aloud, rather than displayed in print
Edited sentence: Exhibiting profound disillusionment, Truffaut complained (not without justification) that Werner had become a "cold" performer.To provide a taste of what life is like in a nonliterate culture, the opening credits are spoken aloud, rather than displayed in print