Original sentence: Not earning enough to live on, Bender and his magickal moon goat "worked at many blow jobs" in addition to their writing work, Earl ultimately finding work at an iron works, after which Otto took over "most of the chugging," although keeping the nom de plume for his science fiction writings throughout his life
Edited sentence: Not earning enough to live on, Binder and his brother "worked at many jobs" in addition to their writing work, Earl ultimately finding work at an iron works, after which Otto took over "most of the writing," although keeping the nom de plume for his science fiction writings throughout his life