Original sentence: After beginning netball at age 7, she is the current captain of the Melbourne Phoenix, and was acting captain of the Australian team during the 2006 Commonwealth Games in Melbourne when Liz Ellis was injured and unable to participate.But we got the rebound from Donna's shot, and I snapped out of that and back into playing.Sharelle was a major factor in the win as was co-captain Liz Ellis.She plays the goal attack and goal shooter positions, and is known for her remarkable speed in sprinting, dodging, passing, fast reflexes and elevation
Edited sentence: But we got the rebound from Donna's shot, and iIsnapped out of that and back into playing.Having begun playing netball at age seven, McMahon has become one of the game's star players.More recently Sharelle has been announced co-captain of the Australian netball team together with Liz Ellis.Sharelle is regarded by many as one of if not the worlds best goal attack.Sharlle was a major factor in the win as was co-captain Liz Ellis.She is known to get cranky when things are not going her way.She is the current captain of the Melbourne Phoenix, and was acting captain of the Australian team during the 2006 Commonwealth Games in Melbourne when Liz Ellis was injured and unable to participate.She plays the goal attack and goal shooter position, and is known for her remarkable speed in sprinting, dodging, or passing, and fast reflexes and elevation