Original sentence: Maria's father is the Mayor.Their names are Elli, who's grandma owns a bakery, Popuri, who's family runs the flower shop, Karen, who lives on an orchard with a winery, Ann, who works on another farm with her family, and Maria who is the receptionist at the library
Edited sentence: Their names are Elli, who's grandma owns a bakery; Popuri, who's family runs the flower shop; Karen, who lives on an vineyard with a winery; Ann, who works on another farm with her famil;, and Maria, the Mayor's daughter, who is the receptionist at the library