Original sentence: Coghlan himself was killed in a car crash in April 2001.He gained a place at Brasenose College, Oxford to study for a one-year diploma in education, though he eventually stayed there for three years, gaining an academic qualification in Teaching awarded by Oxford University.Strangely, Brunei has never had a Viceroy, nor did Singapore have a British consul at the time (having been a British colony)
Edited sentence: Archer however did later lie about the incident.He gained a place at Brasenose College, Oxford to study for a one-year diploma in education, though he eventually stayed there for three years.His academic record is also a matter of controversy.However, he would not normally be classed an "Oxford graduate", despite his claims to the contrary in later interviews, although he does hold a valid academic qualification in Teaching awarded by Oxford University.If so, when and where did he get the extra O-levels and the A-levels.Like Coghlan, who was killed in a car crash in April 2001, he would never have the satisfaction of seeing Archer's eventual downfall and conviction.Not only is this untrue, but Brunei has never had a Viceroy, nor did Singapore have a British consul at the time (having been a British colony).What is most peculiar is that a man with some talent and certainly proven marketing skills felt the need to fabricate, or at very least "embroider", certain facts of his life, to the point that he became a Walter Mitty-like character.Whilst there is no doubt he did obtain three O-levels, Archer later said he had six O-levels and three A-levels