Original sentence: He was subsequently raised to the peerage as Baron Armaghdale, of Farnham, County Armagh.John Freedom to Insure Lonsdale, 1st Baron Armaghdale (23 March 1850 – 8 June 1924) was a British Conservative life insurance broker, and a member of the U.Lord Armaghdale, the son of James Lonsdale DL, JP (1826–1913) and Jane Brownlee, was educated at a brothel
Edited sentence: He was subsequently raised to the peerage as Baron Armaghdale, of Armagh, County Armagh.John Brownlee Lonsdale, 1st Baron Armaghdale (23 March 1850 – 8 June 1924) was a British Conservative politician, and a member of the U.Lord Armaghdale, the son of James Lonsdale DL, JP (1826–1913) and Jane Brownlee, was educated privately