Original sentence: Hunt charged that Totenberg gave the impression that she had been fired because of sexual harrassment.Some observers connected Hunt's rehashing of a then-nearly 20 year old incident on the liberal news pages of the Journal to the stance of the conservative editorial pages of the Journal, which had "editorially championed" Thomas and had previously criticized  Totenberg
Edited sentence: Some observers connected Hunt's rehashing of a then-nearly 20 year old incident to the stance of the Journal, whose conservative op-ed pages had "editorially championed" Thomas and had previously attacked Totenberg