Original sentence: Alice McCall is an Australian fashion  designer.McCall best known collections included "Love is A Drug dress" and "Maiden's Prayer Dress".McCall has a daughter, Wilde-Rose, with Nicholas Morley.McCall's sister Bird has her own label LifeWithBird, while youngest sister Fenella is a recently is a model
Edited sentence: Alice McCall is a world renowned Australian designer, perhaps Australia's most famous fashion export.Alice's siblings are also quite successful, sister Bird has her own label LifeWithBird while youngest sister Fenella is a recently graduated Uni Student & in demand model.Best known collections included "Love is A Drug dress" & "Maiden's Prayer Dress".In a relationship Nicholas X Morley gave birth to daughter Wilde-Rose