Original sentence: ==Vocal Style.ZP sometimes utilizes high-pitched melodic shrieks as a kickoff beginning to songs (as heard in Fury Of The Storm), or as a conclusion to end a song with as much power as it started with (as heard in Operation Ground and Pound).ZP's vocal style is very much like that of Bruce Dickinson or Michael Kiske, employing a powerful operatic vocal style to soar over Dragonforce's speed and volume and using his extremely high vocal range to complement the extremely epic feel of Dragonforce's songs
Edited sentence: (as heard in Operation Ground And Pound).ZP sometimes utilizes high-pitched melodic shrieks as a kickoff beginning to songs, (as heard in Fury Of The Storm) Or as a conclusion to end a song with as much power as it started with.ZP's vocal style is very much like that of Bruce Dickinson or Michael Kiske, employing his powerfull operatic vocal style to soar over Dragonforce's speed and volume and using his extremely high vocal range to complement the extremely epic feel of Dragonforce's songs