Original sentence: Dhillon is the Brampton—Springdale riding association president for the Liberal Party of Canada (Ontario).One of the longest sitting incumbents, Paul Palleschi has five people attempting to take him out of office, including Chuck Jeffrey, husband of local MPP Linda Jeffrey.The race for regional councillor for Wards 7 and 8 fought between long time incumbent Gael Miles and John Villella a long time defender of citizens and public issues with considerable experince fighting City Hall and other government organizations to advance rights of citizens
Edited sentence: Appointment of Chair of Peel Region.Control of Peel Region Council decisions.Dhillon is the Brampton--Springdale riding association president for the Liberal Party of Canada (Ontario).High tax reserves and surplus from municipal taxes and downloaded provincial services and public funds.Lack of ethnic presence on Brampton Council.Mississauga separating from Peel Region and Susan Fennell disbanding regional structure.Nepotism with public jobs.One of the longest sitting incumbents, Paul Palleschi has five people attempting to take him out of office.Poor city planning.Public spending and contracting practices.The most notable of which is Chuck Jeffrey, husband of MPP Linda Jeffrey the local Member of Provincial Parliment.The tightest race for election will be fought between long time incumbent Gael Miles and John Villella a long time deffender of citizens and public issues with considerable experince fighting City Hall and other government organizations to advance rights of citizens.Traffic gridlock