Original sentence: Eight members of the Chicago franchise conspired with gamblers to throw (intentionally lose) games.The conspiracy is often referred to as the Black Sox Scandal.This betting conspiracy between a group of players and gamblers led to the lifetime banning of eight White Sox players from organized baseball and the installation of Kenesaw Mountain Landis as the sport's first commissioner
Edited sentence: Instead of a climactic ending to one of the best years in baseball, the 1919 World Series was stained by eight members of the Chicago franchise conspiring with gamblers to throw (intentionally lose) games in a conspiracy referred to as the Black Sox Scandal.This betting conspiracy between a group of players and gamblers led to the lifetime banning of the accused players from organized baseball and the installation of Kenesaw Mountain Landis as the sport's first commissioner