Original sentence: Not only did the telegraph office obtain fees for "sending" messages, but cash-laden victims soon found themselves losing promising areas to claim jumpers after they had wired 'good news' back home.Telegraph lines did not reach or leave Skagway until 1901
Edited sentence: " Telegraph lines did not reach or leave Skagway until 1901.Not only did the telegraph office obtain fees for "sending" messages, but cash-laden victims soon found themselves losing even more money in poker games with new found "friends