Original sentence: Rodeo associations have very strict rules on the way animals are treated; animal rights groups contend that the rules are poorly enforced.Their activities have included throwing a tofu pie in the face of the newly crowned Miss Rodeo America Brandy Dejongh in December of 1999
Edited sentence: A good rodeo contestant expected to bring home around $12,000 a year.At that time, there were around 250 known contestants.Despite all of the negative attention rodeo started to receive, rodeo attendance tripled between 1928 and 1934.Rodeo associations have very strict rules on the way animals are treated.Tad Lucas, one of the most famous rodeo performers in history made $12,000 a year, of which about $5 a day went to costume cleaning expenses.Their antics have included throwing a tofu pie in the face of the newly crowned Miss Rodeo America Brandy Dejongh in December of 1999