Original sentence: Whitney Houston arrived at the 17 th annual Carousel Ball of Hope on October 28o, escorted by Clive Davis
Edited sentence: She recieved warm hearted welcomes and love from stars such as Halle Berry, Usher, Kenneth Babyface Edmonds, Quincy Jones, Rita Wilson and much other.The event generated buzz to Hollywood insiders and fans that Whitney is officially on track for a huge comeback.Whitney Houston arrived at the 17 th annual Carousel Ball of Hope on October 28, 2006 looking stunning and beautiful, she was once again escorted by Clive Davis