Original sentence: The mission of the Youth Orchestras of San Antonio is to cultivate musical talent, help our students build foundations for life through learning the discipline, cooperation and leadership required of orchestral music making, and enrich the cultural life of our community through performances
Edited sentence: The mission of the Youth Orchestras of San Antonio is to cultivate musical talent, help our students build foundations for life through learning the discipline, cooperation and leadership required of orchestral music making and enrich the cultural life of our community through performances