Original sentence: Axel Heiberg (1848–1932) was a Norwegian financier and patron.Heiberg studied abroad and, after a period as consultant in China, returned to Norway, where he financed the creation of the Ringnes brewery in 1876 together with the brothers Amund Ringnes (brewer) and Ellef Ringnes (administrator and salesman)
Edited sentence: Axel Heiberg (1848–1932) was a Norwegian diplomat, financier and patron.Heiberg studied abroad and, after a period as Norwegian consul in China, returned to Norway, where he financed the creation of the Ringnes brewery in 1876 together with the brothers Amund Ringnes (brewer) and Ellef Ringnes (administrator and salesman)