Original sentence: Conservative MPP Julia Munro represents Newmarket-Aurora at the Ontario Provincial Legislature in Toronto.Stronach crossed the floor from the Conservatives to the Liberals, it greatly angered a number of constituents in the town.The town is currently one of the fastest growing and most densely populated in York Region and is expected to top 100,000 residents over the next eight-ten years.Tom Taylor is currently the mayor of Newmarket and has served in that capacity for well over a decade
Edited sentence: Conservative MPP Julia Munro represents Newmarket-Aurora at the Ontario Provincial Legislature in Toronto and is also considered by many constituents to have done a good job at representing the interests of the two towns.In Canadian politics, Newmarket has almost always voted "Conservative Blue," both in provincial and federal elections, and is considered one of the party's few major strongholds in Ontario.Stronach crossed the floor from the Conservatives to the Liberals, it greatly angered a large number of constituents in the town who felt that their vote and trust had been betrayed by a cadidate without honest intentions.Tom Taylor is currently the Mayor of Newmarket and has served in that capacity for well over a decade