Original sentence: As a result of campaigns by advocates of gender-neutral language modification, many job adverts are now formulated so as to explicitly address both sexes (Informatiker oder Informatikerin).But G.Its use of pronouns is considered acceptable by advocats of G.One obsticle to the gender-neutral modification of German is, that you cannot hear these gender-neutral phrases (sound: InformatikerIn == Informatikerin), they sound like the female form, which is unusual for neutral expressions.Opponents of such modification consider the capitalized I to be a corruption of the language.The Swiss weekly newspaper WOZ - Die Wochenzeitung edits all published articles to  gender-neutral language.They object to certain fixed phrases where the male form comes first, such as man and woman (Mann und Frau), and to the use of phrases like Fräulein, now somewhat antiquated, which is used to address young women, but lacks a male counterpart.language modification advocates feel that the traditional phraseology of the language reflects a domination of the male over the female, as they feel it does in many other languages.language modification, since it distinguishes both sexes in a consistent manner rather than marking only the feminine as is done with job titles
Edited sentence: By some people the capitalized I is considered as a corruption of the language.Job descriptions in job adverts are usually formulated addressing both sexes (Informatiker oder Informatikerin).One problem is, that you cannot hear this non-sexist phrases (sound: InformatikerIn == Informatikerin), it sounds like the female form, which is unusual for neutral expressions.The Swiss weekly newspaper WOZ - Die Wochenzeitung edits all published articles to  non-sexist language.The traditional phraseology of the language reflects a domination of the male over the female, as in many other languages.The use of Fräulein to address young women is very uncommon these days, but it lacks a male counterpart.The use of pronouns is non-discriminatory since it distinguishes both sexes in a consistent manner rather than marking only the feminine as is done with job titles.There are fixed phrases where the male form comes first, such as man and woman (Mann und Frau)