Original sentence: It is however a suburb in its own right, with its own post office.Perrystown is a small south Dublin suburb located between Terenure, Templeogue and Walkinstown.Sometimes known as "The Secret Suburb" by its residents, it is not a widely known area, and is often mistakenly referred to as a housing estate or just an area of Crumlin.The Laurels and The Pines are the local public houses, and there is a newly opened Bistro named Negi's.The local community centre plays host to the PME Variety Group, Robert Emmet's GAA Club, and Manortown Utd.The village's best-known sons are Niall Quinn (former Ireland soccer international), Coz Noleon (drummer with Republic of Loose) and Simon Rogers (F
Edited sentence: (The main criterion for being considered a village or suburb is the existence of a post office.Approximately 50% of taxi drivers know of its existence (with only 80% of those knowing its location).Often mistakenly referred to as a housing estate or just an area of Crumlin, it is, in fact, a suburb in its own right, evidenced by the location of a post office there.Perrystown, sometimes known as "The Secret Suburb" by its residents,  is a small-ish south Dublin suburb located roughly between Terenure, Templeogue and Walkinstown.Residents can dine at the newly opened Negi's Bistro, or can practically walk into Terenure, the site of several terrific eateries.The Laurels and the Pines are the local watering holes, which are, in fact, owned by brothers.The residents of Perrystown display a strong community spirit, examples of which can be found in the local community centre, which plays host to the PME Variety Group, Robert Emmet's GAA Club, and Manortown Utd.The village's best-known sons are Niall Quinn, the former Ireland international Bon Vivant ,Coz Noleon, drummer with Republic of Loose and Simon Rogers, F