Original sentence: When the Silvermans first opened an American Eagle Outfitters store in 1977, in Michigan 1977 they had opened their fist store in Grand Rapids in woodland mall and was opened by Jim Ketchum,they were looking to diversify their menswear business
Edited sentence: When the Silvermans first opened an American Eagle Outfitters store in 1977, i,they were looking to diversify their menswear business