Original sentence: After Black September in 1970, the PLO or its offshoots waged a massive campaign of international terror against Israelis.Following the 1982 Israeli Invasion of Lebanon, termed "Operation Peace for Galilee" by the IDF,  (1982) and the exile of the PLO to Tunis, Israel had a relatively quiet decade.Many Israelis and their supporters claim the Palestinian Authority (PA) does almost nothing in order to prevent terror attacks or reduce Palestinian public support for acts of violence against Israeli civilians.Palestinians complain that it is not fair or realistic to expect the kind of control Israel demands from the PA to curtail terrorism, as the PA has no where near the resources of the Israeli state, and has been severely damaged and hobbled by vastly superior IDF forces in various confrontations during the Al Aqsa Intifada.Some accuse the Palestinian Authority of doing the exact opposite - sponsoring terrorism (such as the Fatah section Al-Aqsa Martyrs' Brigades) and using the official PA television, radio, press and education system in order to encourage acts of "Shuada" (the Islamic term for martyrdom) and hatred toward Israel.The Article 24 of the organization's original charter, the Palestinian National Covenant states in part: "This Organization does not exercise any territorial sovereignty over the West Bank in the Hashemite Kingdom of Jordan, [or] on the Gaza Strip..." The charter has since been amended to claim sole legitimate representation of the Palestinian people including the West Bank, and also to remove references calling for the abolition of the State of Israel
Edited sentence: After Black September in 1970, the PLO waged a massive campaign of international terror against Israelis.Following Operation Peace for Galilee (1982) and the deportation of the PLO to Tunis, Israel had a relatively quiet decade.Some accuse the Palestinian Authority of doing the exact opposite - sponsoring terrorism (such as the Fatah section Al-Aqsa Martyrs' Brigades) and using the official PA television, radio, press and education system in order to encourage acts of "Shuada" (the Islamic term for suicide bombing) and hatred toward Israel.The Article 24 of the organization's original charter, the Palestinian National Covenant states in part: "This Organization does not exercise any territorial sovereignty over the West Bank in the Hashemite Kingdom of Jordan, [or] on the Gaza Strip...".The Palestinian Authority does almost nothing in order to prevent terror attacks or reduce Palestinian public support for acts of violence against Israeli civilians