Original sentence: Others games such as cricket, gulli danda, kabadi,volley ball are also played here.The Northern Areas (Urdu: , ), now known officially as the Federally Administered Northern Areas (FANA), is the northernmost area of Pakistani-administered Kashmir.The end of the war saw India gaining most of Kashmir, including the fertile parts of it, with Pakistan securing the northern and western parts of Kashmir.The part of Kashmir to the north and west of the cease-fire line or the Line of Control, known as the Northern Areas (72,496 km²) in the north and Azad Jammu and Kashmir (13,297 km²) in the south, is controlled by Pakistan.The region's lack of representation in the Pakistani parliament has placed it outside the mainstream politics of the country, and is a major cause of frustration among the local population
Edited sentence: However arrival of anti-aircraft artillary from Pakistan forced the Indians to cease their operation.Others games such as cricket,gulli danda, kabadi,volley ball are also played here.The Indian government retaliated by bombing the Gilgit city with it's airforce.The Northern Areas (Urdu: , ), now known officially as the Federally Administered Northern Areas (FANA), is the northernmost area of Pakistan.The Northern Areas however remained under the control of Indian forces till 1st January 1949 when an indeginous liberation war spearheaded by rebel Army officers belonging to the Northern Areas forced the Indian forces comprising of Sikhs and Dogras to move out.The end of the war saw India gaining most of Kashmir, including the fertile parts of it, with Pakistan securing the part of Kashmir to the south of the cease-fire line or the Line of Control, Azad Jammu and Kashmir.The region's lack of representation in the Pakistani parliament has placed it outside the mainstream politics of the country,and is a major cause of frustration among the local population.They then declared the Northern Areas to be part of Pakistan