Original sentence: BMW will seek to sell the company if the problems continue.Unforunately, the managing director of BMW announced on 8 May, 2005 that the sales of Rolls-Royce cars had fallen by 26% in only 6 months
Edited sentence: The company couldm be sold again for the second time in under 10 years.The company is seeking to sell the company if the problems continue.This was mainly due to peoples opinions on the bodywork image as it was "Bulky" and "Clumbsy".Unforunately, to the British peoples horror, the managing director of BMW announced on 8th May 2005 that the sales of Rolls-Royce's had fallen by 26% in only 6 months