Original sentence: The term men's rights refers to freedoms and rights of boys and men.This term is specifically related to focusing on rights that girls and women have but not boys and men, and fall within the broader context of human rights
Edited sentence: The term men's rights refers to freedoms and rights of boys and men, including elimination of the carryover of outdated gender protections, e.This term is specifically related to focusing on archaic rights that girls and women have but not boys and men, and fall within the broader context of human rights.the all-male military draft