Original sentence: The Critical Mass participants claimed the driver of the minivan struck a bicyclist, and continued moving forward until the bicycle was under her vehicle, however no independent evidence of this claim exists.What is known is that the cyclists banged on the sides of her car, "keyed" the paint, and threw a bicycle through the rear window of the vehicle, causing $5300 in damage
Edited sentence: According to witnesses, the driver of the minivan struck a bicyclist, and continued moving forward until the bicycle was under her vehicle.In reaction to this, the cyclists banged on the sides of her car with her children inside, and eventually someone threw their bicycle through her rear window, causing $5300 in damage