Original sentence: However, when Lane left the farm some years later, the Wilders moved back to their own home, and finished their lives there.Lane also took over the farmhouse her parents had built and constructed a modern stone cottage for them as a gift.Lane was faced with the prospect of selling enough of her writing in a depressed market to maintain the financial responsibilities she had assumed, and the Wilders became dependent on her as their primary source of support.The couple still owned the  farm, but they had invested most of their savings with Lane's broker
Edited sentence: However, when Lane left the farm for good a few years later, the Wilders, homesick for the house they had built with their own hands, moved back to it, and finished their lives there.Lane also took over the farmhouse her parents had built and had a beautiful, modern stone cottage constructed for them as a gift.Lane was faced with the grim prospect of selling enough of her writing in a depressed market to maintain the financial responsibilities she had assumed, and the Wilders became dependent on her as their primary source of support.The couple still owned the  farm, but they had invested most of their hard-won savings with Lane's broker