Original sentence: However in western societies, most people regard such beliefs and actions to be in sharp conflict with the western view of human rights, which generally considers the Japanese military's treatment of subject peoples as inhumane.However, the Japanese have also issued many apologies for the acts they allegedly perputrated but most countries that were occupied by Japan view them as inadequate.This is furthered by inconsistencies in Japanese policy such as yearly visits by the prime minister to the Yasukuni Shrine and the failure of Japanese school history books to mention such incidents, and ongoing campaigns to further expunge all mention of them
Edited sentence: However in western societies most people regards such beliefs and actions to be in sharp conflict with the western view of human rights, which generally considers the Japanese military's treatment of subject peoples as inhumane.Victims and critics of Japanese imperialism have been further antagonised by the failure of Japanese school history books to mention such incidents, and ongoing campaigns to further expunge all mention of them