Original sentence: His father is a brilliant radical inventor who actually manages to invent a self-powered electric light bulb , and his mother is her husband's bodyguard.Nemesis' mother later dies in childbirth , as she is already in a weakened condition from the trauma of losing her spouse.The X-Club are ultimately unable to obtain the couple's genetic samples as it appears that they are being deliberately blocked by the Dreaming Celestial ( because they would not have survived the time-jump back to the present , they were buried in a cryogenic capsule in Golden Gate Park ) as part of some grand cosmic plan.The X-team later time-travel back to turn-of-the-century San Francisco in order to to obtain genetic samples for study, from the biological parents of one of the first of the modern ( 20th Century ) wave of mutants.The mutant in question is actually Doctor Nemesis himself , who reveals to the rest of the team his powers of extended longevity as well as "self-evolved intellect".They later locate Madison Jeffries.Tragically , Nemesis' father is killed when he helps the X-Club stop the Hellfire Club's first-ever sentinel from ravaging across San Francisco
Edited sentence: His father is a brilliant radical inventor who actually manages to invent a self-powered electric light bulb, and his mother is her husband's bodyguard.Nemesis' mother later dies in childbirth, as she is already in a weakened condition from the trauma of losing her spouse.The X-Club are ultimately unable to obtain the couple's genetic samples as it appears that they are being deliberately blocked by the Dreaming Celestial (because they would not have survived the time-jump back to the present, they were buried in a cryogenic capsule in Golden Gate Park ) as part of some grand cosmic plan.The mutant in question is actually Doctor Nemesis himself, who reveals to the rest of the team his powers of extended longevity as well as "self-evolved intellect".They later locate Madison Jeffries.. The X-team later time-travel back to turn-of-the-century San Francisco in order to to obtain genetic samples for study, from the biological parents of one of the first of the modern ( 20th Century ) wave of mutants.Tragically, Nemesis' father is killed when he helps the X-Club stop the Hellfire Club's first-ever sentinel from ravaging across San Francisco