Original sentence: Christians and Christian groups that disagree with homosexual activity have been targets of gay activism or have been officially reprimanded for acting in accordance with those views.Not all forms of Christianity take a negative view of homosexuality, and indeed many gays and lesbians are themselves Christian while in a homosexual relationship
Edited sentence: Although not all forms of Christianity take a negative view of homosexuality, and indeed many gays and lesbians are themselves Christian, there are some who feel that refusing to serve gays and lesbians or making derogatory comments about their sexual identity is a vital part of their religious freedom.Such Christians and Christian groups have been targets of gay activism or have been officially reprimanded for holding views that homosexual activity is immoral or for acting in accordance with those views