Original sentence: Crafter also runs a live snapchat cooking show, where his culinary skills are displayed nightly to the public, if interested, you can watch the show on his snapchat, michaelcrafter.He is the lead vocalist of Confession, and is also a former vocalist for Carpathian and Bury Your Dead
Edited sentence: Crafter also runs a live snapchat cooking show, where his beautiful and elegant culinary skills are displayed nightly to the public, if interested, you can watch the show on his snapchat, michaelcrafter.He is currently the lead vocalist of Confession, and is also a former vocalist for Carpathian and Bury Your Dead