Original sentence: 1963-1973 Greek Cypriots view the constitution as unworkable and propose changes abolishing all veto rights and many ethnic clauses; these proposals are rejected by Turkish Cypriots and the Turkish government.Overall, a very complex constitution is drafted, including a lot of decisions to be taken by majority of votes overall as well as within each community.Thousands of Turkish Cypriots are 'ethnically cleansed' by the Greeks; Turkish villages are blocked, sometimes staying isolated for months.Turkish Cypriots are used as auxiliaries of British Security Forces, and become one of the major targets of the EOKA.Turkish Cypriots, who form 18% of the population, are guaranteed vice-presidency, three out of ten ministerial posts and 30% of jobs in the public service, 40% in the army and separate municipal services in the five major towns
Edited sentence: 1963-1973 Greek Cypriots view the constitution as unworkable and propose changes which are rejected by Turkish Cypriots and the Turkish government.Thousands of Turkish Cypriots are 'ethnically cleansed' by the Greeks; Turkish villages are blocaked, sometimes staying isolated for months.Turkish Cypriots are used as auxiliaries of British Security Forces, allegedly torturing EOKA captives during British cross-examinations.Turkish Cypriots, who form 18% of the population, are given 30% of jobs in government and administration, 40% in the army and separate municipal services in the five major towns