Original sentence: After studies, he worked for some years as Lower Division Clerk in the Department of Health, Govt.College, Trivandrum and his Degree from Devaswom Board College, Sasthamcotta.of Kerala and as Upper Division Clerk in the Kerala University
Edited sentence: After studies, he worked for some years as Lower Division Clerk in the Department of Health, Government of Keralaand as Upper Division Clerk in the Kerala University.College, Thiruvananthapuram and his Degree from Devaswom Board College, Sasthamkotta