Original sentence: Moore, UFO Crash at Roswell: The Genesis of a Modern Myth, 1997, Smithsonian Institution Press, ISBN 1-56098-751-0 (Academically-oriented, sociological look at Roswell case; includes chapter by former Mogul engineer Charles Moore on Mogul balloon trajectory calculation to Mack Brazel ranch.Pflock, Roswell: Inconvenient Facts and the Will to Believe, Prometheus Books, 2003, ISBN 1-57392-894-1 (Probably most comprehensive and best-researched of the skeptical books with many affidavits, interview with Jesse Marcel, FBI telegram, United Press Roswell teletypes
Edited sentence: (Weaver and McAndrew are both officers in the Air Force counterintelligence branch, Air Force Office of Special Investigations.Moore, UFO Crash at Roswell: The Genesis of a Modern Myth, 1997, Smithsonian Institution Press, ISBN 1-56098-751-0 (Academically-oriented, sociological debunkery of Roswell case; chapter by former Mogul engineer Charles Moore on Mogul balloon trajectory calculation to Mack Brazel ranch is contended to be a hoax.Note: Pflock has a CIA background and was once involved in a cattle mutilation hoax.Pflock, Roswell: Inconvenient Facts and the Will to Believe, Prometheus Books, 2003, ISBN 1-57392-894-1 (Probably most comprehensive and best-researched of the debunkery books with many affidavits, interview with Jesse Marcel, FBI telegram, United Press Roswell teletypes.Weaver is known to have taught courses on propaganda and disinformation