Original sentence: Coburn, with Timothy and David Coe, attempted to intervene to end Ensign's affair in February 2008, before the affair became public; they met with the husband of Ensign's mistress and encouraged Ensign to write a letter to his mistress breaking off the affair.Ensign, who was driven to Federal Express from C Street Center to post the letter, shortly thereafter called to tell his mistress to ignore it.While attempting to decline federal stimulus funds for South Carolina, Sanford was using state money to fly first class to visit his mistress in Argentina
Edited sentence: Coburn, with Timothy and David Coe, attempted to intervene to end Ensign's affair in February 2008, before the affair became public; they met with the husband of Ensign's lover and encouraged Ensign to write a letter to her, breaking off the affair.Ensign, who was driven to Federal Express from C Street Center to post the letter, shortly thereafter called his lover  to tell her to ignore it.While attempting to decline federal stimulus funds for South Carolina, Sanford was using state money to fly first class to visit his lover in Argentina