Original sentence: Angelo owns a loft apartment that Joy and Reggie looked at in "In Escrow", and is briefly Joy's love interest.He is smooth-talking, urbane, and artistically talented.He somehow knew that the Lass dog was a golden retriever without ever having been told
Edited sentence: Angelo is apparently the only male suitor for Joy of whom Reggie approves.Angelo owns a loft apartment that Joy and Reggie looked at in "In Escrow", and one of Joy's love interests.He also knew that the Lass dog was a golden retriever without ever having been told.He is smooth-talking, urbane, and artistically talented, but seems very mysterious