Original sentence: 7  A Storm of Angels (a sequel to Auld Mortality)  Marc Platt  Geoffrey Bayldon  Susan Foreman   January 2005.8  Masters of War (a sequel to Sympathy for the Devil)  Eddie Robson   David Warner   Brigadier, Davros, Daleks, Thals  December 2008
Edited sentence: 7  A Storm of Angels(a sequel to Auld Mortality)  Marc Platt  Geoffrey Bayldon  Susan Foreman   January 2005.8  Masters of War(a sequel to Sympathy for the Devil)  Eddie Robson   David Warner   Brigadier, Davros, Daleks, Thals  December 2008