Original sentence: Although his site was fairly obscure at the time, several media outlets took notice, and within a day of his posting the video it was featured on Special Report with Brit Hume.Evan Coyne Maloney (born October 27, 1972), is a maker of documentary films, the editor of the website Brain Terminal and a video blogger.Since then, Maloney's website has become popular, receiving more than 5 million hits by the end of 2003 and logging over 6 million hits in 2004
Edited sentence: Although his site was fairly obscure at the time, several media outlets took notice, and within a day of his posting the video, it was featured on Special Report with Brit Hume.Daily Telegraph (London).Evan Coyne Maloney (born October 27, 1972), is a maker of documentary films, the editor of the website Brain Terminal and a pioneer of video blogging.Since then, Maloney's website has become popular, receiving over 5 million hits by the end of 2003 and logging over 6 million hits in 2004.The New York Sun.The Times of London