Original sentence: Rabbi Kviat is also one of the few surviving Mir Alumnus who studied in Mirrer Poland and made their way to Kobe Japan, then Shanghai China through the efforts of Sugihara
Edited sentence: Rabbi Kviat is also one of the few surviving Mirrer alumni who studied in Mirrer Yeshiva in Poland and made their way to Kobe, Japan, and then Shanghai, China through the efforts of Chiune Sugihara