Original sentence: In 1320 a remonstrance to the Pope from the nobles of Scotland (the Declaration of Arbroath) finally convinced Pope John XXII to overturn the earlier excommunication and nullify the various acts of submission by Scottish kings to English ones so that Scotland's sovereignty could be recognised by the major European dynasties.Other nearby parts of Great Britain remained independent from Scotland, such as the Kingdom of Strathclyde ruled by the Britons
Edited sentence: In 1320 a remonstrance to the Pope from the nobles of Scotland (the Declaration of Arbroath) finally convinced Pope John XXII to overturn the earlier excommunication and nullify the various acts of submission by Scottish kings to English ones so that Scotland's sovereignty should again be recognised by the major European dynasties.Other nearby parts remained independent from Scotland, such as the Kingdom of Strathclyde ruled by the Brython