Original sentence: *10th (Irish) Division - 9,363.*16th (Irish) Division - 28,398.*36th (Ulster) Division - 32,186.A bronze tablet inside the entrance of the park bears the following inscription, entitled:Peace Pledge.Menin Gate Memorial, Ypres, West Flanders, Belgium.The tower memorial is close to the site of the June 1917 battle for the Messines Ridge and was chosen because that battle witnessed one of the few where Irishmen, regardless of religion, fought side by side against a common enemy.The tower was unveiled after an 11 am service on 11 November 1998 by President Mary McAleese of Ireland, HM Queen Elizabeth II of the United Kingdom and King Albert II of Belgium.This led to some ill-feeling in the already crowded emotions of the conflict on the island, and perhaps was highlighted when Northern Ireland's community's Ulster Tower Thiepval in France was one of the first memorials erected.Ulster Tower Memorial, Thiepval, France
Edited sentence: 10th (Irish) Division     -  9,363.16th (Irish) Division   - 28,398.36th (Ulster) Division - 32,186.A bronze tablet inside the entrance of the park bears the following inscription, entitled:.Menin Gate Memorial, Ypres, Belgium.Peace Pledge.The tower memorial is close to the site of the June 1917 battle for the Messines Ridge and was chosen because that battle witnessed one of the few where Irish Catholics and Protestants, soldiers of all traditions from Ireland, fought side by side against a common enemy.The tower was unveiled after an 11am service on 11 November 1998 by President Mary McAleese of Ireland, HM Queen Elizabeth II of the United Kingdom and King Albert II of Belgium.This led to some ill-feeling in the already crowded emotions of the conflict on the island, and perhaps was highlighted when Northern Ireland's community's Ulster Tower at Thiepval on the Somme in France was one of the first memorials erected.Ulster Tower Memorial Thiepval, France