Original sentence: Like the main UP party, the UJP was severely persecuted by the agents of narcotraffickers, paramilitaries and rogue elements inside the Colombian military.Many left-wing groups in Colombia have denounced the extermination of the UP as a government strategy, but there never has been any proven links between murders of UP members and high-ranking Colombian officials
Edited sentence: Like the main UP party, the UJP was severely persecuted by the agents of druglords, paramilitaries and rogue elements inside the Colombian military.Many left-wing groups in Colombia have denounced the extermination of the UP as a government strategy but there have never been any proven links between murders of UP members and high-ranking Colombian officials, and those cases of lower officials that have been proved have been adequately judicialised (as has generally been the case with Colombian Army generals cohorting with paramilitary groups and illegal death squads)