Original sentence: (Many Argentines believe that FIFA hinted that it would grant the request and then reversed course, but FIFA maintains that such an agreement was never reached).Days after the heart attack, a male nurse was caught taking photos of Maradona with a cellular telephone; he was fired by the hospital managers.In an unannounced move, FIFA appointed a "family of soccer" committee, which voted in favor of Pelé alongside the Argentine.Many Argentines interpreted this brash gesture as validating their belief that Maradona is the kind who "tells it like it is", while Pelé is a docile tool of FIFA bosses.Maradona cried foul; he left the awards ceremony as soon as his prize was awarded.Maradona has won many FIFA polls, including a 2002 poll in which his second goal against England was chosen as the best goal ever scored in a World Cup; he also won the most votes in a poll to determine the All-Time Ultimate World Cup Team.On April 18, 2004, doctors reported that Maradona had suffered a major heart attack following a cocaine overdose; he was admitted to intensive care in a Buenos Aires hospital
Edited sentence: (Many Argentines believe that FIFA hinted that it would grant the request and then reversed course, but FIFA's official line is that no such agreement was ever indicated).Days after the heart attack, a male nurse was caught taking photos of Maradona with a cellular telephone; he was fired by hospital directors.Diego Maradona, has won many FIFA polls, including the 2002 poll when his second goal against England was chosen as the best goal ever scored in a World Cup, and being the most strongly supported nominee in a poll to determine the All-Time Ultimate World Cup Team.Maradona cried foul; he exitted the awards ceremony as soon as his prize was awarded.On April 18, 2004, doctors reported that Maradona had suffered a major heart attack following a cocaine overdose; he was in intensive care in a Buenos Aires hospital.Right after that, FIFA appointed a "family of soccer" committee, which voted in favor of Pelé alongside the Argentine.Some Argentines' interpreted this brash gesture as a confirmation of their belief that Maradona is the kind that "tells it like it is", while Pelé is more likely to pursue more conciliatory approaches to such affairs