Original sentence: The event has generated considerable controversy due to a high number of animal deaths, particularly those linked to the traditional "chuck wagon" races.The traditional "chuck wagon" race has a very high rate of injury
Edited sentence: However, as true in all rodeos, animals are driven to perform by devices such as bucking straps, electric prods, and spurs.The event has generated considerable controversy due to the egregious number of animal deaths involved.Which animal advocates argue cause fear and pain to the animals