Original sentence: According to the head of the Federation of Trade Unions of Palestine, Shaher Saad, in 2011 the number of Palestinians employed in Israeli settlements increased significantly to around 31,000 due to the high rate of unemployment and poverty, and that about 70,000 worked in Israel proper.On the other hand, 85% of Palestinian residents in the West Bank are interested in cooperation with Israel, according to a survey by Geocartography Knowledge.Sari Nusseibeh, president of Al-Quds University, opposed a boycott of Israeli universities in 2014; other Palestinian academics also told the New York Times they oppose cutting ties to Israeli universities but weren't willing to risk stating it publicly, however opinions of academics were split, with at least some of those who favour BDS noting they were unsure if BDS will have any effects.The PLO, its branches, Palestinian businesses and universities cooperate with Israel daily
Edited sentence: 85% of Palestinian residents in the West Bank are interested in cooperation with Israel, according to a survey by Geocartography Knowledge.According to the head of the Federation of Trade Unions of Palestine, Shaher Saad, in 2011 the number of Palestinians employed in Israeli settlements increased significantly to around 31,000 due to the high rate of unemployment and poverty and that about 70,000 worked in Israel proper.On the other hand, the PLO, its branches, Palestinian businesses and universities cooperate with Israel daily