Original sentence: " He attempts to explains his crimes mainly focusing on being rejected by women, loneliness and a lack of a sex life.At one point he notes that someone he met had asked if he was picked on in school.In the blog, he indicates that his brother was the bully.Sodini is reported to have left a note along inside the gym bag stating his hatred for women
Edited sentence: " Sodini is reported to have left a note along inside the gym bag stating his hatred for women