Original sentence: Achilles is overwhelmed with grief for his beloved friend, and the rage he once harbored toward Agamemnon begins shifting to Hector.Thetis, his mother, rises from the sea floor and berates him for excessive grief
Edited sentence: Achilles is overwhelmed with grief for his lover, and the rage he once harbored toward Agamemnon begins shifting to Hector.Thetis, his mother, rises from the sea floor and berates him for excessive grief, reminding him it is a fine thing to sleep with women too