Original sentence: " In 2007, Rain was first in Time Magazine's online user poll as the most influential person in 2007, but magazine did not include his name in the actual list.He also made it into People's 2007 list of the Most Beautiful People
Edited sentence: " In 2007, Rain was voted by Time Magazine's online user poll as the most influential person in 2007 although many of the people on the time blog felt he was voted in by overzeaolous fans that admitted to voting others down.He also made it into People's 2007 list of the Most Beautiful People in the world.The magazine did not include his name in the actual list