Original sentence: Various members of the Bush administration, such as former Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, former Press Secretary Tony Snow, current Press Secretary Dana Perino, Vice President Dick Cheney, Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, and President George W
Edited sentence: Various members of the Bush administration, such as former Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, cancer-ridden former Press Secretary Tony Snow, current Press Secretary Dana Perino, Vice President Dick Cheney, Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, and President George W