Original sentence: The internet and its impact on public reaction and media coverage created a major issue for the Indonesian government that were managed by the offer of a referendum which in turn finally led to constructive international support for East Timor after nearly a quarter of a century of oppression and death
Edited sentence: The internet and its impact on public reaction and media coverage created a major issue for the Indonesian government that were managed by the offer of a referendum which in turn finally led to constructive international support for East Timor after nearly a quarter of a century of rule by Indonesia