Original sentence: In its early days rugby was very much the preserve of the officers; it was not until the early 1870s that the game became inclusive of all ranks.Since their strong performances in the 2007 World Cup a number of commentators believe they should join the Tri-Nations with New Zealand, Australia and World Cup champions South Africa.The Royal Navy and in particular the British Army did much to spread rugby worldwide as it did for two other sports of English origin; cricket and football
Edited sentence: In its early days rugby was very much the preserve of the officers, it was not until the early 1870s that the game became inclusive of all ranks.Since their incredible performances in the 2007 World Cup many pundits believe they should join the Tri-Nations with New Zealand, Australia and World Cup champions South Africa.The Royal Navy and in particular the British Army did much to spread rugby worldwide as it did for the other two sports of English origin; cricket and football