Original sentence: On 28 March 1942, nearly 100,000 Rohingya Muslems, which is almost half of Rohingya population of that time, were masaccred by Rakhine Magh
Edited sentence: It was 28 March 1942, a day Rohingya Muslims can never forget, that nearly 100,000 Rohingyas which is almost half of Rohingya population of that time, were masaccred brutally by Rakhine Magh