Original sentence: From this mission a congregation developed, which constructed a building nearby on Utica Avenue, which was opened later in 1894.In 1895 two additional congregations were started, with Hoople and BeVier, and John Norberry pastoring these congregations.In January 1894 Hoople and BeVier, who led a Methodist mission in Brooklyn, opened another mission in a saloon next to a brothel at 123 Schenectady Avenue in Brooklyn with Hoople as pastor.Reynolds, a Methodist minister who had joined Hoople's group in October 1895, organised as a new holiness denomination, the Association of Pentecostal Churches of America (APCA)
Edited sentence: From this mission a congregation developed, which constructed a building nearby on Utica Avenue, which was opened on 15 June 1894 with 37 members and Hoople as pastor.In early 1895 Hoople planted the Bedford Avenue Pentecostal Church in east Brooklyn, and soon invited John Norberry to be its pastor.Late in 1894 Hoople was ordained.On 4 January 1894 Hoople and BeVier, who led a Methodist mission in Brooklyn, opened another mission in a saloon next to a brothel at 123 Schenectady Avenue in Brooklyn.Reynolds, a Methodist minister who had joined Hoople's group in October 1895, organised their churches into a new holiness denomination, the Association of Pentecostal Churches of America (APCA).TRhe third church planted was the Emmanuel Pentecostal Tabernacle, which was was organised on Labor Day, 1895