Original sentence: If this project is succesful then a 6th form will be started up
Edited sentence: Although this is a minor problem, the school is still ranked very highly in the league tables, thanks to some superb teaching from most of the departments.If this project is succesful then a 6th form will be started up and the standards should increase even more.Mr Lancolm needs to be warned about this because many pupils have already started to take it to seriously.One minor problem is that one of the most important members of staff, Mr Lancolm, seems to consider the school as a game as he frequently tells the Y10s and Y11's that it is a race.Since the departure of ex-head teacher Mr Newton (when the school got its reputation of one of the best high schools around) the school has gone from strength to strength.Some pupils have been known to stay up through the night studying to get ahead in the 'race' only to fall asleep in lessons and fall behind.This needs to change because if too many students start to think that school is a race then they will be enticed to cheat to get ahead.This should be looked into by the headmaster who's right it is to make the decisions about his staff.This should improve the range of trips and activities available to the students.This studying has led to some very serious issues, with some students now loosing the ability to comunicate socialy.This would be most unfortunate because the schools standards will begin to slip again