Original sentence: About 200,000 people took to the streets of the Gaza Strip for Yassin's funeral as Israeli forces declared a national alert.However, they were unable to deilver serious attacks because of Israel Security Forces foiled many of their attempts.However, this was a minority stand and most of the Israelis saw Yassin's killing as a legitimate and right move in Israel's war against terror.Israel said the "targeted killing" was punishment for dozens of suicide bombings by Hamas against Israeli civilians and a mean to thwart further attacks by Yassin's orders
Edited sentence: About 200,000 people took to the streets of the occupied Gaza Strip for Yassin's funeral as Israeli forces declared a national alert.Israel said the "targeted killing" was punishment for dozens of suicide bombings by Hamas against Israeli civilians