Original sentence: After being led into believing Nelson was blackmailing him, Jewett killed Nelson's pet parakeet and desecrated a picture of Nelson's mother, and eventually confronted Nelson himself outside the Castle Rock Municipal Building, which promptly exploded and killed both men.After finding his parakeet dead and his mother's picture fouled, Nelson bought a pistol from Gaunt and confronted Jewett, only for both men to die in an explosion
Edited sentence: After being led into believing Nelson was blackmailing him, Jewett killed Nelson's pet parakeet and desecrated a picture of Nelson's mother, and eventually confronted Nelson himself outside the Castle Rock Municipal Building, they faced off and both fired and missed.After finding his parakeet dead and his mother's picture fouled, Nelson bought a pistol from Gaunt and confronted Jewett, both fired at each other and missed, they moved to embrace each other only for both men to die in an explosion.the two moved to embrace when the building exploded and killed both men