Original sentence: Emoto's claims are not taken seriously by most mainstream scientists since Emoto has not attempted to publish any of his disputed findings through peer review in academic journals (other than a photo essay) and he has acknowledged that he does not follow double blind procedures.However, Dean Radin just completed and published a double-blind study in Explore Journal.Some would consider the result of the experiment confirms Emoto's claims (p.Some would consider this study gives support to Emoto's claims
Edited sentence: Emoto's claims are not taken seriously by some scientists since Emoto has not attempted to publish any of his disputed findings through peer review in academic journals (other than a photo essay) and he has acknowledged that he does not follow double blind procedures.However, Dean Radin just completed and published a double-blind study in Explore Journal which gives strongly-significant support to Emoto's claims.It will be interesting to see if James Randi coughs up the $1,000,000 or not.The result of the experiment was highly significant confirmation of Emoto's claims (p