Original sentence: He was a good student until high school, when baseball became such a primary focus that it even resulted in a school suspension.The following year, he played in 62 games for an A's club that improved but still posted a 55–98 mark.Then, a generation-and-a-half later, Meyer managed the 1952 Pittsburgh Pirates to the third-worst record in modern National League history, the Bucs winning only 42 of 154 games
Edited sentence: He was a good student until high school when baseball became such a primary focus that it even resulted in a school suspension.The following year, he played in 62 games for an A's club that improved by 19 games, but still posted a poor 55–98 mark.Then, a generation-and-a-half later, Meyer piloted the 1952 Pittsburgh Pirates to the third-worst record in modern National League history, the Bucs winning only 42 of 154 games