Original sentence: After intense hardship, first blown down the Irish Sea then to the East along the English Channel, they were wrecked on Portland Bill on 4th June 1949, where Frank died and Ann managed to scramble ashore.Florida Junket (Peter Davies, 1964) describes a holiday circumnavigating around part of the the Florida coast in an outboard driven speedboat with her second husband Bert
Edited sentence: After intense hardship, first blown down the Irish Sea then to the East along the English Channel, they were wrecked on Portland Bill on 4 June 1949, where Frank died and Ann managed to scramble ashore.Florida Junket (Peter Davies, 1964) describes a holiday circumnavigating around part of the Florida coast in an outboard driven speedboat with her second husband Bert