Original sentence: The Town of Wappinger is located in Dutchess County, New York in the Hudson Valley, 70 miles north of New York City, on the eastern bank of the Hudson River.The Wappinger were a confederacy of Native Americans whose territory, in the 17th century, was spread along the eastern shore of the Hudson River
Edited sentence: The Town of Wappinger is located in Dutchess County, New York 70 miles north of New York City in the heart of the Hudson River Valley, and has a Hudson River shoreline.The Wappinger were a confederacy of Native Americans whose territory in the 17th century spread along the eastern bank of the Hudson River