Original sentence: ,, second in the lightweight four, and third in the freshman four.Despite all of these accomplishments, still, everyone at McQuaid cares about the crew team, and actually quite likes all of the people involved in crew.For the first time, they received medals at the Canadian Nationals with a second in both the junior four and senior 66kg four.In the 2008 New York State Championships, the crew team took first in the novice four, but, what they fail to mention is that the creary's actually dont have any friends and enjoy a life of insestual homosexuality, them being twins, so this is where mcquaid gets the nickname McQueer, the gay creary twins.Jeff Van Gundy, former head coach of the Houston Rockets and New York Knicks of the National Basketball Association, began his coaching career at McQuaid, coaching the McQuaid men's basketball team for one season (1985–1986).McQuaid has many other sports, including crew (a real atheltic sport and hard to do) and rugby.The lightweight four also finished 5th, 1.3 seconds behind the bronze, at the Scholastic Nationals.The meet takes place in Genessee Valley Park in Rochester, New York and hosts thousands of runners every year in twenty-four different races.The sailing team competes in both the fall and winter seasons.The team ranked in the top 10 in the nation with its 7th place finish in the USRowing Youth Nationals in the Mens Lightweight 4
Edited sentence: Jeff Van Gundy, former head coach of the Houston Rockets and New York Knicks of the National Basketball Association, began his coaching career at McQuaid, coaching the McQuaid basketball team for one season (1985–1986).McQuaid has many other sports, including rowing who raced in the top ten in that nation this past year.The meet takes place in Genessee Valley Park in Rochester, New York, right across the Genessee River from McQuaid's boathouse, and hosts thousands of runners every year in twenty-four different races.The sailing team competes in both the fall and spring seasons