Original sentence: As time has progressed, Punk has increasingly become an overt socio-political movement for some.Punk ideology views the world as deeply corrupt and wrong.discrimination against Punks also account for this stance on authoritarianism
Edited sentence: As time has progressed, Punk has increasingly become an overt socio-political movement.Punk ideology views the world as deeply corrupt and wrong but seeks to change this.discrimination against Punks also account for this bitter stance on authoritarianism