Original sentence: ) was the main founder of kabuki theater.Eventually, due to public outcry of morals, the shogun Tokugawa Ieyasu forbade women from performing in kabuki, a standing practice in the official theatres even today.Eventually, her fame and that of her kabuki troupe spread throughout Japan.Okuni retired around 1610, and after that time she disappeared.There are several theories of her year of death, some say in 1613, others in 1658.There were many imitators of kabuki theatre
Edited sentence: -1613) was the main founder of kabuki theater.Eventually, due to public outcry of morals, after her death three years later, the shogun Tokugawa Ieyasu forbade women from performing in kabuki, a standing practice in the official theatres even today.Eventually, her fame and that of her kabuki troupe spread throughout Japan, possibly making her one of the earliest examples of a Japanese idol.Okuni retired around 1610, and by that time, there were many imitators of kabuki theatre