Original sentence: On the heels of McDougal's engagement, on July 20th, a French landing force of two warships, the Tancrède and the Dupleix, and 250 men under Captain Benjamin Jaurès swept into Shimonoseki and destroyed a small town, together with at least one artillery emplacement
Edited sentence: On the heels of McDougal's engagement, on July 20th, a French landing force and two warships, the Tancrède and the Dupleix, with 250 men under Captain Benjamin Jaurès swept into Shimonoseki and destroyed a small town, together with at least one artillery emplacement