Original sentence: The road can be found again along the west edge of Haccott's Copse, from where it passes east of Fitzhall to Fitzhall Heath where it passes between tumuli as a prominant agger.The road is then in modern use through Milland to at least the northern end of the sraight section, from where the line is uncertain until it can be found as a cutting, then a substantial causeway, at Chapel Common
Edited sentence: The road can be found again along the west edge of Haccott's Copse, from where it passes east of Fitzhall to Fitzhall Heath where it passes between tumuli as a prominent agger.The road is then in modern use through Milland to at least the northern end of the straight section, from where the line is uncertain until it can be found as a cutting, then a substantial causeway, at Chapel Common