Original sentence: Electrocuting an Elephant does not seem to have been as popular as other Edison films from that period.When the film camera restarts, Topsy is seen with the bridge over the lagoon and the original execution spot, the parks "Electric Tower" with a sign advertising "OPENING MAY 2ND 1903 LUNA PARK $1,000,000 EXPOSITION, THE HEART OF CONEY ISLAND", in the background
Edited sentence: Electrocuting an Elephant does not seem to have been as popular as other Edison films from that period as it had gained morre than a million views.When the film camera restarts, Topsy is seen with the bridge over the lagoon and the original execution spot, the parks "Electric Tower" with a sign advertising "OPENING MAY 2ND 1903 LUNA PARK $1,000,000 EXPOSITION, THE HEART OF CONEY ISLAND SEE AN ELEPHANT KILLED", in the background