Original sentence: Hollis Byrne is a vocalist and lyricist who first hit the public eye with the band Marxman, signed to Polygram Records/ Talkin' Loud in the UK and released through A&M Records in the states.Later projects included 'Offside' with DJ Bungee
Edited sentence: Hollis Byrne is a versatile vocalist and tremendously gifted lyricist who first hit the public eye with the band Marxman, signed to Polygram Records/ Talkin' Loud in the UK and released through A&M Records in the states.Later projects included the excellent 'Offside' with DJ Bungee