Original sentence: " Its recent popularity has been attributed to the fact that ClickHole's content tempts audience members into reading and sharing.Critics noted that, on a deeper level, ClickHole illustrates the shallow nature of content that is shared on social media as well the desperation of media sites to share such content.They assumed this to be the case as long as ClickHole's audience understand that the website parodies clickbait, and is not clickbait in itself.Various writers predicted that the website will be a long-term success because its content has been consistently creative and targets a wide audience
Edited sentence: " Its recent popularity can also be attributed to the fact that ClickHole's content tempts audience members into reading and sharing.It is predicted that the website will be a long-term success because its content has been consistently creative and targets a wide audience.On a deeper level, ClickHole illustrates the shallow nature of content that is shared on social media as well the desperation of media sites to share such content.This will be the case as long as ClickHole's audience understand that the website parodies clickbait, and is not clickbait in itself