Original sentence: Dwayne Wade is considered one of the best drive-in the lane players in the NBA.He also has the speed when driving to the lane which earned him the nickname "Flash"
Edited sentence: Be careful when he goes to the lane, because even 4 players can't stop him when he's going for a dunk.But that doesn't mean he's improving each year (every year his field goal percentage increases).Despite being a little short for a shooting guard, Wade can block shots like a center.Dwayne Wade is one of the best drive-in the lane players in the NBA.He also has incredible speed when driving to the lane which earned him the nickname "Flash".If he doesn't go for the dunk, most likely he will end up in the free-throw line