Original sentence: In August 2007, Dorian made the startling (and vague) claim that she had actually killed Victor after all.The two have feuded about almost everything, stemming largely from Viki's contention that Dorian had something to do with her father's death
Edited sentence: Although her motives may be questionable sometimes, Dorian, like most people, really does mean well.However, in August 2007, Dorian made the startling (and vague) claim that she had actually killed Victor after all.The two had been fussing and feuding about almost everything, stemming largely from Viki's contention that Dorian had something to do with her father's death