Original sentence: Caesar got her start when the group The Caravans came through Wilson, North Carolina in 1958.During the 1940s and 50s, North Carolina was a favorite place to visit of Gospel singers for many reasons, among which was North Carolina's less rigorous Jim Crow laws.North Carolina is also famous for its abundance of family Gospel groups which thrive all throughout the state
Edited sentence: Caesar got her start when the legendary group, The Caravans came through Wilson, North Carolina in 1958.During the 1940s and 50's, North Carolina was a favorite place to visit of Gospel singers for many reasons, among which was North Carolina's less rigorous Jim Crow laws.North Carolina is also famous for it's abundance of family Gospel groups which thrive all throughout the state