Original sentence: In 2007, the team clinched the region title with a 10-0 regular season and reached the playoff semifinals, where they were defeated by Cairo High School in the Georgia Dome, 42-21
Edited sentence: In 2007, the team clinched the region title with a 10-0 regular season and reached the playoff semifinals, where they beat the crap out of Cairo High School in the Georgia Dome, 42-21