Original sentence: During this aggression Hull would make half-hearted attempts to pull the badly-behaved bird away from its victim but would often become embroiled in the fracas, rolling around on the floor to create a scene of mayhem.This seemingly independent movement allowed the bird to have its own personality: one which entailed sudden, unprovoked and aggressive attacks on anyone and anything that came too close
Edited sentence: During these attacks Hull would make half-hearted attempts to pull the badly-behaved bird away from it's victim but would often bcome embroiled in the fracas, rolling around on the floor with the bird and the victim creating a scene of hilarious mayhem, particularly where the situation was a serious one such as a chat-show interview.This seemingly independent movement allowed the bird to appear to have it's own personality; one which entailed sudden, unprovoked and aggressive attacks on anyone and anything that came too close