Original sentence: His short story Annadata { trans: The Giver of Grain - an obseqeuious appellation used by Indian peasants for their feudal land-owners }, was made into the film Dharti Ke Lal, by Chetan Anand in 1946 - which led to his being offerred work regularly as a screen-writer by Bollywood, including such populist hits as SHARAFAT, 1970
Edited sentence: His short story Annadata { trans: The Giver of Grain - an obseqeuious appellation used by Indian peasants for their feudal land-owners }, was made into the film Dharti Ke Lal, by Chetan Anand in 1946 - which led to his being offered work regularly as a screen-writer by Bollywood, including such populist hits as SHARAFAT, 1970