Original sentence: Applethwaite is a village in the foot hills of Skiddaw near Keswick in the English Lake District.Applethwaite is mentioned in Alfred Wainwright's The Northern Fells guide book.The name derives from it originally being the opening in a forest with apples in it (also referred to as "The Big Apple" by the photographer 'Sir Graham' of Grasmere).Wordsworth described the land as …lies beautifully upon the banks of a rill that gurgles down the side of Skiddaw, and the orchard and other parts of the grounds command a magnificent prospect of Derwent Water, and of the mountains of Borrowdale and Newlands
Edited sentence: Applethwaite, named as it was originally the opening in a forest with apples in it(also Referred to as The Big Apple by famous photographer 'Sir Graham' of Grasmere) is a beautiful village set in the heart of the English lake district.At only 1 mile north of Keswick, it is near the picturesque lake of Derwent Water and the glacial mountain scenery of the northern fells.Below is an arial image of the village.In his heyday, Applethwaite was walked upon by the well known guide writer, Alfred Wainwright as he wrote his book 'The Northern Fells'.In the foot hills of Skiddaw Applethwaite stands proud looking down on the town of Keswick.Sadly Alfred passed away in 1991 after an illness.Streams run from the skiddaw mountainside, down through the farmland and into the River Derwent.The hamlet of Applethwaite, with its several dozen houses, sits at the foot of Skiddaw with views of the northern fells and Borrowdale.Wordsworth described the land thus:.lies beautifully upon the banks of a rill that gurgles down the side of Skiddaw, and the orchard and other parts of the grounds command a magnificent prospect of Derwent Water, and of the mountains of Borrowdale and Newlands