Original sentence: He eventually settled in Suresnes, a suburb of Paris.On September 13, 1910, Inayat Khan began an odyssey which would encompass three continents, and transform the lives of thousands
Edited sentence: He eventually settled in in Suresnes, a suburb of Paris.On September 13 of 1910 Inayat Khan began an odyssey which would encompass three continents, and transform the lives of thousands