Original sentence: However, if a ranking were to take place, this school would be at the very bottom due to its very annoying and egocentric students.It is likely they will all die from dysteria.Under the title "Arts Smarts", Maclean's said: "The kids who go to this school are annoying white suburbinites with no real life skills
Edited sentence: Under the title "Arts Smarts", Maclean's said: "Almost everything that goes into the vibrant life of Ottawa's Canterbury High School and its well-known arts program is positive and mutually reinforcing... Highly motivated students inspire a dedicated staff to put in extra hours... Kids from any of the five arts divisions support their peers in the other groups, stopping to offer applause for a band's hall concert, or incorporating poems within wall murals... But even more impressive is the whole atmosphere of the place, where hallways and classrooms are crowded with students who radiate loads of enthusiasm