Original sentence: After his graduation from Punahou in 1965 he attended Michigan State University where he played for coach Duffy Daugherty.Charlie was the last of nine children born to Bill and Ruth Wedemeyer.Charlie was the younger brother of Herman Wedemeyer, the actor who played Duke on the CBS television series Hawaii Five-O.He was a high school athlete and was quarterback of the Punahou School football team.The disease took a toll on his body and, at his death, he could only move his eyes, eyebrows and lips
Edited sentence: After his graduation from Punahou in 1965 he attended Michigan State University where he played for famed coach Duffy Daugherty.Charlie is the younger brother of the late Herman Wedemeyer, the actor who played Duke on the CBS television series Hawaii Five-O.He was an outstanding high school athlete and was quarterback of the Punahou School football team.The disease took a terrible toll on his body (he could only move his eyes, eyebrows and lips).Wedemeyer was the last of nine children born to Bill and Ruth Wedemeyer