Original sentence: Reisman's term "erototoxin," is an extension of the social concerns expressed by the renowned media ecology scholar, educator, and writer Marshall McLuhan; McLuhan taught and wrote extensively of the potentially dangerous effect of certain media images especially upon immature minds
Edited sentence: Reisman's term "erototoxin," is a logical extension of the social concerns expressed by the renowned media ecology scholar, educator, and writer Marshall McLuhan; McLuhan taught and wrote extensively of the potentially dangerous effect of certain media images especially upon immature minds