Original sentence: 's popular computer role-playing game game, Final Fantasy VII.Don Corneo is a character that appeared in Square Co.He is an obese, blonde man who resides in Sector 7's Wall Market in Midgar, an area that is filled with shops, restaurents and a brothel known as "Honeybee Manor", where Don Corneo frequents
Edited sentence: Don Corneo is a character that appeared in Squaresoft's immensely popular Playstation RPG game, Final Fantasy VII.Don Cornero played a rather large role in Final Fantasy VII.He is an obese, blonde man who resides in Sector 7's Wall Market, an area that is filled with shops, restaurents and a brothel known as "Honeybee Manor", where Don Corneo frequents