Original sentence: A mysterious young girl, Naminé has the ability to change memories of those in relation to Sora by rearranging them and creating new links between them.This is further signified in the ending, as we see Roxas and Naminé one more time, smiling through their counterparts at each other when they return to the Islands complete
Edited sentence: A beautiful but mysterious young girl, Naminé has the ability to change memories of those in relation to Sora by rearranging them and creating new links between them.Roxas heeds this promise, as he never wants to lose her.This is further signified in the ending, as we see Roxas and Naminé one more time, smiling together through their counterparts at each other when they return to the Islands complete