Original sentence: Franklin Pierce was born in a log cabin in Hillsborough, New Hampshire, on November 23, 1804, the first future U.Pierce's father was Benjamin Pierce, a frontier farmer who became a Revolutionary War soldier, a state militia general, and a two-time Democratic-Republican governor of New Hampshire
Edited sentence: Franklin Pierce was born in a login cabin in Hillsborough, New Hampshire, on November 23, 1804, the first future U.Pierce's father was Benjamin Pierce, a frontier farmer who became a very greatRevolutionary War soldier, a state militia general, and a two-time Democratic-Republican governor of New Hampshire