Original sentence: At the age of 13, Almagor was sent to Hadassim youth village.Gila Almagor was born four months after the death of her father, a policeman in the British army who was killed by an Arab sniper.Her mother later remarried
Edited sentence: Almagor grew up caring for her mother, who was slowly losing her sanity.Gila Almagor was born four months after the death of her father, Max Alexandrowitz, a Jewish immigrant from Germany who was killed by an Arab sniper while working as a policeman in Haifa.When the mother was institutionalized in 1954, Almagor was sent to Hadassim youth village