Original sentence: " Sam explains that the deadly Suvolte Demon multiplies quickly and can destroy towns full of people in no time and has come to Sunnydale to lay a nest full of its offspring.Buffy is unable to believe that Spike could be involved, but as she and Riley go to the bottom level of the crypt and find the eggs everywhere, Spike's cover is blown.Buffy tells Spike that although she has feelings for him, she can never love him; it would be wrong to keep using him the way she is, so it is over.Riley pretends not to care although he clearly does; he identifies Spike as "The Doctor" and demands to know where the eggs are.Riley though tells her that struggling with life like a human being doesn't make her any less of a woman.Sam and Riley begin to describe the gory details of the demon and the mission and although Riley's concerned about Dawn hearing about it, Sam sticks up for the teen and she gets to stay with the "grownup's.The next day, Buffy finds Spike at his crypt and although she doesn't care about his being "The Doctor," she brings with her news he does not want to hear
Edited sentence: Buffy is unable to believe that Spike could be involved, but then she and Riley go to the bottom level of the crypt and find that the eggs are indeed there.Instead she has come to tell him that although she wants him, she can never love him so it would be wrong to keep using him the way she has been, so it is over.Riley pretends not to care although he clearly does.Riley tells her that struggling with life like a human being doesn't make her any less of a woman.Riley then identifies Spike as "The Doctor" and demands to know where the eggs are.SHe tells Spike that she is not going to go into the wrongness of dealing with the Suvolte eggs, because he was right, that's just who he is.Sam and Riley begin to describe the gory details of the demon and the mission and although Riley's concerned about Dawn hearing about it, Sam sticks up for the teen and she gets to stay with the "grownups".Sam explains that the deadly Suvolte Demon multiplies quickly and can destroy towns full of people in no time and has come to Sunnydale to lay a nest full of its offspring.The next day, Buffy finds Spike at his crypt