Original sentence: The model is, however, both common and intentional as it is on comparable channels such as the Irish channel TG4 or EITB
Edited sentence: The model is, however, both common and intentional as it is on comparable channels such as the Irish channel TG4 or EITB, neither of which receive anywhere near as much criticism as the scottish channel despite costing more money, receiving fewer viewers whilst being available to a much larger number of people (BBC Alba is only availiable on SKY which only one-third of the scottish population has)