Original sentence: Beharry drove through the ambush, taking his own crew and leading five other Warriors to safety.Despite his very serious injuries, Beharry then took control of his vehicle and driving it out of the ambush area before losing consciousness.He then extracted his wounded colleagues from the vehicle, all the time exposed to further enemy fire
Edited sentence: Beharry showed initiative and great courage driving through the ambush, taking his own crew and leading five other Warriors to safety.Despite his very serious injuries, Beharry showed great strength of character, taking control of his vehicle and driving it out of the ambush area before losing consciousness.He then demonstrated outstanding bravery by extracting his wounded colleagues from the vehicle, all the time exposed to further enemy fire