Original sentence: , Ransom is the Administration Chair of the Green Party of Canada.A consultant, research analyst, and former dance instructor.Formerly a resident of Victoria, British Columbia, where she served as business outreach manager for the Victoria LETS organization.Once made a solo bicycle trip across the Eastern Sierre de Madre in Mexico.She supported Tom Manley's bid for the party leadership in 2004.Supported a smoking ban in Ottawa in 2000.Was a co-founder of the Free Wheel Blue Bike Society, and has served as president of Citizens for Safe Cycling in Ottawa
Edited sentence: , Ransom is the Chair of the Green Party of Canada.Melanie Ransom is a consultant, research analyst, and former dance instructor.Ransom subsequently moved to Ottawa, and supported a smoking ban there in 2000.She is formerly a resident of Victoria, British Columbia, where she served as business outreach manager for the Victoria LETS organization.She once made a solo bicycle trip across the Eastern Sierre de Madre in Mexico.She supported Tom Manley's bid for the party leadership in 2004, and David Chernushenko in 2006.She was a co-founder of the Free Wheel Blue Bike Society, and has served as president of Citizens for Safe Cycling in Ottawa