Original sentence: In addition, the Confederate Constitution incorporated into its text the various intervening amendments to the United States Constitution, in particular the Bill of Rights.On the other hand, the drafters made no effort to deal explicitly with developments in the constitutional culture of the United States, including the rise of political parties and the institution of judicial review
Edited sentence: Conversely, a number of the deficiencies of the US Constitution were continued in its Confederate counterpart:.For instance, the Bill of Rights was incorporated directly into the text itself, and various clauses in the US Constitution that had been amended were excised and their replacements included in the appropriate locations in the text, rather than simply being tacked on the end.In addition, there was an overall streamlining of the document as compared to the United States constitution.The intended role of the Supreme Court and subordinate courts is underdefined.There are no provisions for, nor limitations upon political parties