Original sentence: " Pershing was named the best album of 2008 by the blogs It's Hard to Find A Friend, The Stark Online, and The Power Pop Show.It was seen as an indie success, and received favorable press in Spin Magazine and internet buzz from blogs like You Ain't No Picasso and Bars and Guitars.Pitchfork gave the album an average rating, 6.9/10.0.The band has given several different explanations for the origin of their name.The band was named the "best new band in Missouri" by the Boston Phoenix despite the "cutesy, irritating quality of its six-word name
Edited sentence: Honestly, I can’t remember what I was thinking.I saw an NBC news story about his wife.I thought of it in high school right after Boris Yeltsin resigned.It was seen as an indie success, and received favorable press in Spin Magazine and internet buzz  from blogs like You Ain't No Picasso and Bars and Guitars as well as a favorable review in Pitchfork.Pitchfork Review: Broom.The band has given several different explanations for the origin of their name:.The band was named the best new band in Missouri by the Boston Phoenix and Pershing was named the best album of 2008 by the blogs It's Hard to Find A Friend, The Stark Online, and The Power Pop Show.We just thought it would be a good idea to have a really long band name.Will's brother had to write a paper about Russian history and the name of the paper was Someone Still Loves You Boris Yeltsin