Original sentence: He is described in some press reports and the official House roll as "R-Pittsburgh," even though his district does not include any portion of Pittsburgh itself.Murphy was a member of the committee that redrew Pennsylvania's congressional map, and rumors abounded that he'd reconfigured the district for himself.The district is drawn in such a way that in several locations, one side of the street is in Murphy's district while the other is in the neighboring 14th District (represented by Democrat Mike Doyle).The reason for this is likely that many areas of his district have Pittsburgh addresses despite not actually being within the city limits
Edited sentence: He is described in some press reports and the official House roll as "R-Pittsburgh," even though his district does not include any portion of that city.Most experts conclude there no way he would have been elected if the district had not been gerrymandered in such a manner.The district is so badly gerrymandered, some areas include one side of the street belonging to Murphy, the other to Doyle.The reason for this is likely that many of the towns in his district have Pittsburgh addresses despite not actually being within the city limits.Tim Murphy re-drew the district for himself and then was elected into it