Original sentence: After the Pakistani infiltrators were discovered, India counter-attacked.Emboldened, the Pakistan Army leaders carried out Operation Gibraltar, an attempt to take Kashmir, that was launched later in the year, resulting in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1965.Moreover, Indian Army was not successful in striking devastating blows to the Pakistani Armoured Divisions.On the other hand Indian suffered more casualties then the Pakistan military.Overall, the war was won by the Pakistan forces.Pakistan had captured many Indian territories, as well as prisoners.Tensions with India continued in the 1960s and a brief border skirmish was fought near the Rann of Kutch area during April 1965, in which the Indian Army was repulsed with moderate casualties
Edited sentence: After the Pakistani infiltrators were discovered, India counter-attacked and brought Lahore under artillery fire with ease.Emboldened, the Pakistan Army leaders carried out Operation Gibraltar, an illegal takeover attempt in Kashmir, that was launched later in the year, resulting in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1965.Moreover, Indian Army was not successful in striking devastating blows to the vastly superior Pakistani Armoured Divisions.On the other hand indian has just lost more casualties then the pakistan military.Overall, the war was won by the Pakistan forces;pakistan had captured many indian territories,as well as prisoner.Tensions with India continued in the 1960s and a brief border skirmish was fought near the Rann of Kutch area during April 1965, which the Indian Army replulsed with moderate casualties