Original sentence: There are six main residence halls on campus: Mehling Hall, Corrado Hall, Villa Maria Hall, Shipstad Hall, Kenna Hall and Christie Hall.Villa Maria is one of two all male dormitories on campus and hold the Army ROTC offices
Edited sentence: There are six main residence halls on campus: Mehling Hall, Corrado Hall, Villa Maria, Shipstad Hall, Kenna Hall and Christie Hall.Villa Maria is the better of the two all male dormitories on campus and holds the Army ROTC offices