Original sentence: In 1972 Young was at the height of his career and BBC Northern Ireland offered him the chance to appear in this own television series.Young soon began to receive lucrative offers to make appearances that were the equivalent of several months work at the Group
Edited sentence: In 1972 Young was at the height of his fame and BBC Northern Ireland offered him the chance to appear in this own television series.The show premiered when The Troubles were at their worst and were a breath of fresh air for audiences in Northern Ireland.Young soon started to receive lucrative offers to make appearances that were the equivalent of several months work at the Group