Original sentence: During the ensuing Civil War (or War of Liberty, as it was known among the 'Whites') in March 1918, Mannerheim was promoted to general of cavalry (ratsuväenkenraali)
Edited sentence: During the ensuing Civil War (which is known mistakenly as "The War Of Liberty" among White fascists, though Finland was already independent at the beginning of war) in March 1918, Mannerheim was promoted to general of cavalry (ratsuväenkenraali)