Original sentence: Sarkozy won in a tight contest, but one year later, polls showed voters regreted not sending Royal to the Elysse Palace, and she would win a 2008 match up with Sarkozy easily.She is the front-runner in their leadership election, which takes place 20 November
Edited sentence: Sarkozy won in a tight contest, but one year later, polls showed voters regretted not sending Royal to the Élysée Palace, and she would win a 2008 match up with Sarkozy easily.She was a front-runner in their leadership election, which took place 20 November 2008, she was narrowly defeated in the second round by rival Martine Aubry