Original sentence: Also including Universal's highly acclaimed, METALSTORM 3-D: The Destruction of Jared-Syn.This was used in a number of successful 1980s feature films including JAWS 3-D, (the most successful 3-D movie in that era)
Edited sentence: Also including Universal's highly acclaimed, "METALSTORM 3-D: The Destruction of Jared-Syn".This was used in a number of successful 1980s feature films including "JAWS 3-D", (the most successful 3-D movie in that era)