Original sentence: On the 16th of June 2006 Homles Chapel comprehensive school had a breif but very brutal war with lebenon, the conflict started due to a number of SCUD missiles launched from various air bases in Holmes Chapel comprehensive, the conflict ended due to Lebenon dropping several nuclear warheads on Holmes Chapel comprehensive
Edited sentence: Military to intervene and then Secretary of State Condaleeza Rice to commence peace talks, though the then Head of English, Benazir Bhutto was assassinated the conflict ended with only 150'000 casualties.On the 16th of June 2006 Homles Chapel comprehensive school had a breif but very brutal war with Lebenon, the conflict started due to a number of SCUD missiles launched from various air bases in Holmes Chapel comprehensive, the conflict ended due to Lebenon dropping several bio-nuclear warheads on Holmes Chapel comprehensive, leading to the ,U