Original sentence: Für eine neue Weiblichkeit, Pendo Verlag, Starnberg 2006, ISBN 3-86612-105-9.Her employer, the North-German Broadcasting Station NDR, laid her off afterwards; the programming director of the NDR, Volker Herres, commented: "Mrs Hermann is free to continue her Mutterkreuzzug (neologism from Kreuzzug, crusade, and Mutterkreuz, a Nazi medal for women with four children or more), but this is no longer conformable with the role of a NDR TV anchorwoman.Hänssler Verlag, Holzgerlingen 2008, ISBN 3-7751-4884-9.In the public debate that followed, Eva Hermann gave a public comment in a press conference where she stated that the esteem for motherhood had been abolished by the 68 movement along many values after they were abused by the Nazis.Pendo Verlag, Zürich, Munich 2007, ISBN 3-86612-125-3.Pendo Verlag, Zürich, Munich 2007, ISBN 3-86612-133-4
Edited sentence: Für eine neue Weiblichkeit, Pendo, Starnberg 2006, ISBN 3-86612-105-9.Her employer, the North-German Broadcasting Station NDR, laid her off afterwards; the programming director of the NDR, Volker Herres, commented: "Mrs Herman is free to continue her Mutterkreuzzug (neologism from Kreuzzug, crusade, and Mutterkreuz, a Nazi medal for women with four children or more), but this is no longer conformable with the role of a NDR TV anchorwoman.Hänssler, Holzgerlingen 2008, ISBN 3-7751-4884-9.In the public debate that followed, Eva Herman gave a public comment in a press conference where she stated that the esteem for motherhood had been abolished by the 68 movement along many values after they were abused by the Nazis.Pendo, Zürich, Munich 2007, ISBN 3-86612-125-3.Pendo, Zürich, Munich 2007, ISBN 3-86612-133-4