Original sentence: Official web site.Ring of Fire (anthology) — Key short story: "Here Comes Santa Claus"  which aides in establishing the major canonical Eastern European thread in her story in this popular anthology as well as inspiring in part the Flint sequel "The Wallenstein Gambit" in the same collection — Editor Eric Flint, 2004
Edited sentence: Ring of Fire (anthology) — Key short story: "Here Comes Santa Claus" which aides in establishing the major canonical Eastern European thread in her story in this popular anthology as well as inspiring in part the Flint sequel "The Wallenstein Gambit" in the same collection — Editor Eric Flint, 2004