Original sentence: Grosvenor Gardens in the centre of one of the town’s roundabouts, hidden away below road level.In 2005 it was the national winner  in the ‘small city/large town’ category (35K-100K).The Queen Elizabeth Garden is located on the outside of the town.The town features several parks including the Queen’s Gardens, at the bottom of Ironmarket, was awarded the Britain in Bloom Judges’ Award for Horticultural Excellence in 2003 and is the only park within the ring road
Edited sentence: A perfect location to ‘get away from it all’.Grosvenor Gardens, a ‘sunken treasure’, is an oasis in the centre of one of the town’s roundabouts, hidden away below road level.In 2005 it was the national winner in the ‘small city/large town’ category (35K-100K).The Queen Elizabeth Garden, on the outskirts of the town is a peaceful garden with a beautifully maintained bowling green.The Queen’s Gardens, at the bottom of Ironmarket, was awarded the Britain in Bloom Judges’ Award for Horticultural Excellence in 2003 and is a magnet for shoppers as an ideal place to sit and relax.There are several beautiful parks in and around the town centre