Original sentence: Loreto Mandeville Hall offers a range of Victorian Certificate of Education (VCE) subjects.Recent additions to the buildings include the Barry Centre 2002 which includes two pools, gymnasium, sports hall and other sporting facilities
Edited sentence: An extensive and challenging academic program is integral to the education of mind and heart that is cherished at Loreto.Kate is hot and she goes to this school.Loreto Mandeville Hall offers a wide range of Victorian Certificate of Education (VCE) subjects.Loreto Mandeville Hall strives for excellence in all that it does.Recent additions to the buildings include the Barry Centre [2002] which includes two pools, gymnasium, sports hall and other sporting facilities