Original sentence: Although no scientific studies give credibility to the existence of indigo children or their traits, the phenomenon appeals to some parents whose children have been diagnosed with learning disabilities and to parents seeking to believe that their children are special.Indigo children, according to a pseudoscientific New Age concept, are children who are believed to possess special, unusual and sometimes supernatural traits or abilities.The concept of indigo children gained popular interest with the publication of a series of books in the late 1990s and the release of several films in the following decade.The idea is based on concepts developed in the 1970s by Nancy Ann Tappe and further developed by Jan Tober and Lee Carroll
Edited sentence: Indigos, according to a pseudoscientific New Age concept, are people, that possess certain genetic traits, who are chosen to blend with an inter-demensional being.It should also be noted that the minds of indigos functuon as 1 super mind.The phenomenon appeals to some parents whose children have been expressing learning disability-like symptoms with and to parents seeking to believe that their children are special.These individuals are said to be empathic and are said to possess a strong extra sensory perception.[this allows for individuals to share memories,abilities and communication on  a telepathic network