Original sentence: Article with comments about Web Guidelines and WCAG 2.0.New York State Mandatory Technology Standards for Accessibility of State Agency Web-Based Intranet and Internet Information and Applications–Fourteen standards derived from U.Section 508 and WAI's WCAG 1.0 and required for NYS agency web sites.Website reviewing the WCAG 2.0
Edited sentence: Good Article with much informative comments about Web Guidelines and WCAG 2.0.Good website reviewing the WCAG 2.0.New York State Mandatory Technology Standards for Accessibility of State Agency Web-Based Intranet and Internet Information and Applications–Fourteen standards derived from both U.Section 508 and the WAI's WCAG 1.0 and required for NYS agency web sites