Original sentence: " Klein, Andy Renowned film critic Roger Ebert has said that a more traditional take on the film would have been "more exciting" and "less gimmicky"." The film currently retains a 72% "fresh" rating on Rotten Tomatoes.Critic Andy Klein remarked "If only its script were as amusing as its visuals.Critic Kim Hollis praises the film, saying that "the spectacular visuals alone make Treasure Planet a worthwhile watch.Film reviewer Kim Hollis boasts that "there’s plenty to recommend the film - the spectacular visuals alone make Treasure Planet a worthwhile watch
Edited sentence: Renowned film critic Roger Ebert has said that a more traditional take on the film would have been "more exciting" and "less gimmicky".The film currently retains a 72% "fresh" rating on Rotten Tomatoes.Though the film did not perform well in the box office, it has been praised for its visual effects