Original sentence: A party representative issued a public apology and said there would be disciplinary action, warning that members had been thrown out for similar incidents.The following month, another Young Liberal National member posted derogatory comments on Facebook about the ill health of former Prime Minister Gough Whitlam
Edited sentence: Further controversy arose in June, 2010, when a member of the Young Liberal National Party organised an event via Face Book to celebrate the ill health of former Australian Prime Minister, Gough Whitlam.The event, which 17 members of the Young Liberal National Party are reported to have subsequently attended, aimed to celebrate that...”the old man is old and nearly dead [former PM, Gough Whitlam], he got sacked, and he is shit....So lets (sic) celebrate and be happy”