Original sentence: Among his students, Hrishikesh Ranade, Prajakta Ranade and Yogita Godbole-Pathak have made their mark in the field of popular light music, while Pushkar Lele, Mandar Gadgil and Mandar Phatak are emerging young artistes in the field of classical music
Edited sentence: Among his students, Hrishikesh Ranade, Prajakta Ranade and Yogita Godbole-Pathak have made their mark in the field of popular light music, while Pushkar Lele, Mandar Phatak and Mandar Gadgil are emerging young artistes in the field of classical music