Original sentence: 9 sticks for 9 catches by Bruce Tiemann in 1996 (JISCON) (video), Scott Sorensen in 1997 (JISCON) (video, Chris Fowler in 2003 (JISCON) (video) and Daniel Eaker in 2009 (video)
Edited sentence: 9 sticks for 9 catches by Bruce Tiemann in 1996 (JISCON) (video), Scott Sorensen in 1997 (JISCON) (video), Chris Fowler in 2003 (JISCON) (video) and Daniel Eaker in 2009 (video)