Original sentence: Keen on making a difference to the film making culture in Pakistan, Shaan launched his ambitious project called Guns and Roses -- Ik Junoon (Urdu for Guns and Roses -- An obsession), a project which given the time it took for completion ironically did turn into an obsession for its makers.Shaan (Urdu: شان), real name Armaghan Shahid (Urdu: ارمغان شاہد), is a popular film star in Pakistan.Shaan made a comeback in 1996 with Syed Noor's Ghoongat where he played the scheming psychotic villain destroying the matrimonial harmony of the lead couple.The Pakistani film industry was also privileged to work with his uncle "Fiaz Shahid" who was a cameraman and producer
Edited sentence: Really keen on making a difference to the film making culture in Pakistan, Shaan launched his  ambitious project called Guns and Roses -- Ik Junoon (Urdu for Guns and Roses -- An obsession), a project which given the time it took for completion ironically did turn into an obsession for its makers.Shaan (Urdu: شان), real name Armaghan Shahid (Urdu: ارمغان شاہد), is one of the most popular film stars in Pakistan.Shaan made a sensational comeback in 1996 with Syed Noor's Ghoongat where he played the scheming psychotic villain destroying the matrimonial harmony of the lead couple.The Pakistani film industry was also privileged to work with his uncle "Fiaz Shahid" who was an excellent cameraman and producer