Original sentence: During the first week of Lent, a procession of "penitents" followed Zotov through the city, on donkeys, oxen, and sleighs pulled by goats, pigs, and bears
Edited sentence: During the first week of Lent, a procession of "penitents" followed Zotov through the city on donkeys, oxen, and sleighs.These were pulled by goats, pigs, and bears