Original sentence: Currently, Boeing is in talks with several international carriers about purchasing the 'Dreamliner', namely Singapore Airlines and Emirates Airlines.Follow-on orders are expected from Air New Zealand, Continental Airlines and Northwest Airlines all of whom have placed relatively small orders for the 787 to replace large fleets of aging A330s and 767s.Other prospective customers for the 787 include Air Pacific, Turkish Airlines, Saudi Arabian Airlines, GECAS, RBS Aviation, LAN, Gulf Air, Bangkok Airways, Aeromexico, Etihad Airways, Aerolineas Argentinas, Avianca, American Airlines, and Delta Air Lines
Edited sentence: Currently, Boeing is in talks with many premiere international carriers about purchasing the 'Dreamliner', namely Singapore Airlines and Emirates Airlines.Follow-on orders are also expected from Air New Zealand, Continental Airlines and Northwest Airlines all of whom have placed relatively small orders for the 787 to replace very large fleets of aging A330s and 767s.Other serious prospective customers for the 787 include Air Pacific, Turkish Airlines, Saudi Arabian Airlines, GECAS, RBS Aviation, LAN, Gulf Air, Bangkok Airways, Aeromexico, Etihad Airways, Aerolineas Argentinas, Avianca, American Airlines, and Delta Air Lines.The Qantas order confirms the strength of the new Boeing sales team and the 're-emergence' of a fresh Boeing product line