Original sentence: As a junior she won all three platform events at the British junior nationals, and then won silver at the junior European championships platform final in 2008 following with a 4th place finish at the junior world championships later that year.Her brother James also dives
Edited sentence: As a junior she showed great skills by winning all three platform events at the British junior nationals.In her family there is not just one brilliant diver but two, Megan and her brother James.She has progressed very quickly and won silver at the junior European championships platform final in 2008 following with a 4th place finish at the junior world championships later that year