Original sentence: " Arbor pokes fun at the notion that obesity is analogous to race, disability, and sexual orientation.As a comedian, she has been posting satirical.Critiques argue the video endorses fat shaming.In September 2015, Arbour became the subject of controversy when she posted a viral video on her YouTube channel entitled "Dear Fat People.Nicole Arbour is a Canadian musician, actress, choreographer, dancer, and comedian from Hamilton, Ontario
Edited sentence: In September 2015, Arbour became the subject of controversy when she posted a viral video online praising fat shaming.Nicole Arbour is a Canadian musician, actress, choreographer, and dancer from Hamilton, Ontario