Original sentence: Calamari Union tells the story of sixteen men, all called Frank (inspired by Frank Armoton) apart from one man called Pekka.Collectively the Franks and Pekka are unhappy with life in Kallio, a working-class district of  Helsinki, and decide to move to Eira, an upper-class district, imagining it to be unspoiled.In fact the two districts are not very far apart, but the journey across the city takes on epic proportions, as each of the men falls by the wayside through marriage, work or death
Edited sentence: Calamari Union is an allegorical movie that tells the story of sixteen men all of whom are called Frank (inspired by Frank Armoton) apart from a single confrere, Pekka.Collectively the Franks and Pekka are unhappy with the perceived oppression they face in their district of Helsinki, Kallio (a working-class district), and decide to move to another, Eira (an upper-class district), imagining it to be an unspoiled place where people can live lives of dignity.In its entirety the film is a wry discussion of humanity within a system that regards humans as subservient components.In this spirit, their journey across the city takes on epic proportions with each of the travellers gradually falling by the wayside due to such travails as marriage, work, and death.The journey is an ironic one given that both districts are not so far apart