Original sentence: Long download times, updates and internet checks that are sometimes unnecessary characterize some negative views of the Steam client.Some users have had numerous problems with Steam, enough so that the delivery and multiplayer client is a well-marked part of the game, in some cases enough to prevent a reviewer to recommend the game, and in almost every case enough to lower the review score
Edited sentence: Aside from the long download times, updates and internet checks that aren't necessary, and flat-out not working, it just doesn't feel right to have to go through ANY extra trouble for something you've paid for.Users have had numerous problems with Steam, enough so that it is a well-marked part of the game, in some cases enough to prevent a reviewer to recommend the game, in almost every case enough to lower the review score