Original sentence: In their November 1, 2000 edition, the Wall Street Journal, which tracked down former boyfriends and a Joyce Cherry in the course of its inquiries, published an article in which claims were made about Deng's personal history.The Murdochs have denounced these claims as "malicious nonsense.which was long enough, for Miss Deng to get a "green card", Deng then went on to apply to and was accepted by Yale University, where she received an MBA
Edited sentence: Deng went on to apply to and was accepted by Yale University, where she received an MBA.In their November 1, 2000 edition, the Wall Street Journal published an article in which claims were made about Deng's personal history.The Murdochs have denounced these rumours as "malicious nonsense.Wendi would subsequently split Jake Cherry from his then wife, marrying him before dumping him for a younger man