Original sentence: According to Swedish speaking parents most of them did not want Finnish speaking children to be in the same school because “it would interfere with building the childrens' Finnish-Swedish identity”.Among Swedish speakers they call themselves Swedes or Finnish–Swedes.Appeals were made to the office of Finland's Chancellor of Justice, which are (as of November 2003) pending.In practice this means that the 100 Finnish speaking pupils cannot continue in the school and language immersion classes will take over.In the Pietarsaari city council there is a advantage of 6 to 5 in favor of Swedish speakers.Pietarsaari is a small town in Finland that became a focal point for language politics in Finland in 2003.The decision making in the town is in the hands of Swedish speakers.The identity of Swedish speakers is very strong and they do not always consider themselves Finns.The town is comprised of roughly equal numbers of Swedish language (of the Finland-Swedish dialect) and Finnish language speakers.They have their own political Party.called RKP, the Swedish People's Party which is translated not as Swedish speaking but ethnically Swedish or representing Sweden
Edited sentence: According to Swedish speaking parents most of them did not want Finnish speaking children to be in the same school because “it would interfere with building the childrens Finnish-Swedish identity”.Among Swedish speakers they call themselves Swedes or Finnish –Swedes.At Pietarsaari 100 Finnish-speaking children are thrown out of their own school because Swedish speaking parents do not like them.At the moment this is discussed widely and appeals have been made to the office of the Chancellor of Justice.In Finland there is a small town called Pietarsaari.In Pietarsaari city council there is a advantage of 6 to 5 in favor of Swedish speakers.In Pietarsaari there is about 50% Finnish speakers and 50% Swedish speakers.In conclusion.In practice this means that the 100 finnish speaking pupils are thrown out of their own school and language immersion classes will take over.Party called RKP, the Swedish People's Party which is translated not as Swedish speaking but ethnically Swedish or representing Sweden.Recently it has become a focus point for language politics in Finland.The decision making is at the hands of Swedish speakers.The identity of Swedish speakers is very strong and they do not always consider themselves as Finns.They have their own political