Original sentence: (Southwestern BC is warm enough to allow palm trees to survive all winter long.As of April 2005, this segment is under reconstruction.Canada/US Border Obelisk (at its southern terminus).McDonalds, a restaurant (at 19th Ave).South of 12th Ave, the road used to be known as Point Roberts Road.South of 1st Avenue, the far right lane southbound is the NEXUS lane, open only to citizens carrying a special pass that permits them to cross the border faster than others.Starbucks, a coffee shop (at View Crescent).Tim Hortons, a restaurant (at 12 Ave).and connect to the current segment of Boundary Bay Road in eastern Tsawwassen
Edited sentence: (Southwestern BC is warm enough to allow palm trees to survive all winter long, believe it or not).Canada/US Border Obelisk(at its southern terminus).McDonalds, a fattening instituion (at 19th Ave).South of 12th Ave, the road used to be simply known as Point Roberts Road.South of 1st Avenue, the far right lane southbound is known as the "Nexus" lane, open only to citizens carrying a special pass that permits them to cross the border faster than others.Starbucks, a Pacific Northwest institution (at View Crescent).This segment is currently under reconstruction.Tim Hortons, a Canadian institution (at 12 Ave).and hook up with the current segment of Boundary Bay Road in eastern Tsawwassen