Original sentence: Because SSX on Tour is more geared towards newcomers to the series, some longer running fans of the series feel that they have been short-changed with the exclusion of what made SSX games stand out from other snowboarding titles, such as being able to play the campaign mode ("The Tour" in this game) with returning characters.This is mainly attributed to the fact that SSX on Tour has a create-a-character-type mode, while the previous games had a lineup of characters with unique personalities
Edited sentence: Because SSX on Tour is more geared towards newcomers to the series, longer running fans of the series feel that they have been short-changed with the exclusion of what made SSX games stand out from other snowboarding titles, such as being able to play the campaign mode ("The Tour" in this game) with returning characters.This is mainly attributed to the fact that SSX on Tour has a "create-a-character"-type mode, which "lacked the personality" of the main characters.This, coupled with more shallow structuring of the events, as well as the overall flatter presentation of the game, have caused many fans of the series to notice a lack of distinct style and charm in SSX on Tour