Original sentence: Meanwhile many OIC member states, as well as Russia, China, India, and Brazil, have congratulated Ahmadinejad on his victory.The European Union and several western countries expressed concern over alleged irregularities during the vote, and some analysts and journalists from United States and Europe based media voiced doubts about the authenticity of the results
Edited sentence: Meanwhile many Arab League member states, as well as Russia, China, India and Brazil, have congratulated Ahmadinejad on his victory.Much of the international media, the United Nations, European Union (mainly the United Kingdom, France, Germany and Italy), United States, Japan, and other western countries, have expressed concern and condemnation over alleged electoral fraud, censorship and police brutality against demonstrations across Iran