Original sentence: In protest against what some residents consider unjust treatment from the state of Vermont in tax and tourism development matters, Killington voted in March 2004 (and again in March 2005) to pursue secession from Vermont and admission into New Hampshire, which lies 25 miles to the east
Edited sentence: In protest against what many residents consider unjust treatment from the state of Vermont in tax and tourism development matters, Killington voted in March 2004 (and again in March 2005) to pursue secession from Vermont and admission into New Hampshire, which lies 25 miles to the east