Original sentence: "Islamofascism" is a controversial term used by commentators to refer to Islamist movements perceived to have neofascist or totalitarian characteristics, particularly groups like Al-Qaeda, the Taliban, The Muslim Brotherhood, Hamas, and Hezbollah.Some critics of these groups note that there are important parallels between the ideologies and tactics of certain modern Islamic movements and the ideologies and tactics of conventional fascists or neo-fascists.While several modern political and militant organizations describe themselves as "Islamist", none refer to themselves as fascist too
Edited sentence: " Some critics of these groups claim that there are important parallels between the ideologies and tactics of certain modern Islamic movements and the ideologies and tactics of conventional fascists or neo-fascists."Islamofascism" is a controversial term used by some commentators to refer to Islamist movements perceived to have neofascist or totalitarian characteristics, particularly groups like Al-Qaeda, the Taliban, The Muslim Brotherhood, Hamas, and Hezbollah.Some critics view it as an oxymoron and a rhetorical device or propaganda.Some say it is  hate speech, because, they argue, it is a desecration that is profoundly insulting to Muslims.This, however, is disputed by some critics who view the term as an historically inaccurate metaphor.While several modern political and militant organizations describe themselves as "Islamist", none refer to themselves as "fascist