Original sentence: Between the 17th century and 1959, the Dalai Lama, appointed by the Khans of Mongolia and China, was the head of the Tibetan Government, administering a large portion of the country from the capital Lhasa.Dalai Lama is the title given to an individual who is the religious and temporal leader of Tibetan Buddhists worldwide, uniting religion and politics in a theocratic system of government.The Dalai Lama is often erronesously thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, and is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts political influence over the Ganden Tripa as can be seen for example in the 14th Dalai Lama's controversial current ban of a Gelug practice in the Tibetan exile community)
Edited sentence: Between the 17th century and 1959, the Dalai Lama, appointed by the Khans of China, was the head of the Tibetan Government, administering a large portion of the country from the capital Lhasa.Dalai Lama is the title given to an individual who is the religious and temporal leader of Tibetan Buddhists worldwide, uniting religion and politics in a theocratic government.The Dalai Lama is often thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, and is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts more influence as can be seen for example in the 14th Dalai Lama's controversial current ban of a Gelug practice in the Tibetan exile community)