Original sentence: Cocopia - A range of premium boxed chocolates made in the UK and Ireland exclusively for Tesco.One plank of this strategy has been Tesco's use of its own-brand products, including the upmarket "Finest" and low-price "Value".Tesco Bakery has pastries and breads baked daily, including cookies
Edited sentence: Cocopia - A range of super-premium boxed chocolates made in the UK and Ireland exclusively for Tesco.One plank of this inclusivity has been Tesco's use of its own-brand products, including the upmarket "Finest" and low-price "Value".Tesco Bakery has fresh baked pastries and breads made daily, including freshly baked cookies at competitive prices