Original sentence: In 1949 the Chinese Revolution established a Communist state.In the 1970s, despite the radicalism of some socialist currents in the Third World, Western European Communist parties effectively abandoned their revolutionary goals and fully embraced electoral politics.With the rapid collapse of Communist party rule in Eastern Europe between 1989 and 1991, the Soviet vision of socialism has effectively disappeared as a worldwide political force.and Margaret Thatcher in Britain, the Western welfare state found itself under increasing political pressure
Edited sentence: 1940's Germany.1940's Italy.In 1949 the Chinese Revolution established a Communist state, which lead to the deaths of countless millions of Chinese citizens under Mao, much more than Stalin and Hilter murdered put together.In the 1970s, despite the radicalism of some socialist currents in the Third World, some Western European Communist parties effectively abandoned their revolutionary goals and fully embraced electoral politics.Some of the worst off countries are.The Soviet Union.There are many governments where have become socialistic states and have failed, as they do not all the free-market system to work, thus not accounting for humans decisions and free will.With the rapid collapse of Communist party rule in Eastern Europe between 1989 and 1991, the Soviet vision of socialism has effectively disappeared as a worldwide political force, due to its inability to exist in the real world, as it does not allow for individual freedoms, and also does not allow for free choice.and Margaret Thatcher in Britain, the Western welfare state found itself under increasing political pressure, and also from its flawed logic, and not allowing the free-market to fix itself