Original sentence: REAL Women is similar in political and social outlook to Phyllis Schlafly's Eagle Forum and to Concerned Women for America in the United States.REAL formed as an anti-feminist counterweight to the National Action Committee on the Status of Women.REAL's view is that equal pay for women would reduce the income disparity between genders, draw women into the paid labour force, and improve the economic position of female headed households.There has been a great discrepancy regarding the group’s claims of membership.They believed this would demean women while breaking down the traditional family.This represents a major threat to the family values they hold in such high esteem
Edited sentence: According to a 1981 survey, adherents to the "pro-family" movement were predominantly from fundamentalist Catholic or Protestant backgrounds, often coming from blue collared, male-breadwinning homes.Concerned Women for America.REAL Women is similar in political and social outlook to Phyllis Schlafly's Eagle Forum in the United States.REAL formed as a pro-family movement, with the intent to be an anti-feminist counterweight to the National Action Committee on the Status of Women.REALs view is that equal pay for women would reduce the income disparity between genders draws women into the paid labour force and improve the economic position of female headed households.This represents a major threat to the family values they hold in such high esteem They believed this would demean women while breaking down the traditional family.Though this is description covers a vast number of the population, there has been a great discrepancy regarding the group’s claims of membership