Original sentence: The vast majority of Christians subscribe to the creed that Jesus was God Incarnate (a man who was the earthly aspect of God, as part of the Holy Trinity), who came to earth to save mankind from sin and death through the shedding of his own blood in sacrifice (salvation), and who rose from the dead and later ascended into Heaven
Edited sentence: The vast majority of Christians subscribe to the creed that Jesus was God Incarnate (a man who was the earthly aspect of God, as part of the Holy Trinity), who was conceived immaculately and came to earth to save mankind from sin and death through the shedding of his own blood in sacrifice (salvation), and who rose from the dead and later ascended into Heaven