Original sentence: " Similarly, the notion of the good bloke was attacked in the press when Australian rules footballer Bachar Houli, was given a reduced suspension for striking another player in the Australian Football League on the grounds that he was a good bloke.Similarly, Brigid Delaney has said that being a good bloke really "means drinking a lot.Writer Clementine Ford, for instance, has written that "men who beat women keep being given a free pass by the same people who swear up and down that they don't tolerate violence because they're a 'good bloke'"
Edited sentence: " Similarly, the notion of the good bloke was attacked in the press when Australian rules footballer Bachar Houli, notably a non-white player, was given a reduced suspension for striking another player in the Australian Football League on the grounds that he was a good bloke.Extreme feminist Clementine Ford, for instance, has written that "men who beat women keep being given a free pass by the same people who swear up and down that they don't tolerate violence because they're a 'good bloke'"  and Brigid Delaney has said that being a good bloke really "means drinking a lot