Original sentence: Edward Palmer Thompson (February 3, 1924 – August 28, 1993), a British historian and socialist, was known for his work on the Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament.His works on the British working class were also influential in the development of mid-twentieth century historical research
Edited sentence: Edward Thompson, a radical British historian, was more widley known for his work in the Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament.His works on the British working class were he is important in the development of mid-twentieth century historical research