Original sentence: Following the release of the LGBT-inspired dance album Renaissance (2022), she became the first solo artist to have their first seven studio albums debut at number one in the United States.Its namesake concert run later became the highest-grossing tour of all time by a woman
Edited sentence: Following the release of the acclaimed LGBT-inspired dance album Renaissance (2022), she became the first solo artist to have their first seven studio albums debut at number one in the United States