Original sentence: Moberg (1962–1964), the journal had a heavy emphasis on the creation–evolution controversy‎, with the subject being mentioned in the majority of issues, and the September 1963 issue being almost entirely devoted to it
Edited sentence: Moberg (1962–1964), the ASA journal had a heavy emphasis on the creation–evolution controversy‎, with the subject being mentioned in the majority of issues, and the September 1963 issue being almost entirely devoted to it