Original sentence: Few attractions merit visiting Itaewon other than English speakers.Itaewon is a neighborhood and subway stop in [[Seoul].Many bars and prostitutes service military personnel from Yungson garrison and the UN base as well as visitors from around Asia and the world.Often called the "American Ghetto" of Seoul, it is thick with military personnel, English teachers, back packers and Koreans trying to earn money off of, or marry them
Edited sentence: A neighborhood and subway stop in Seoul, often called the "American Ghetto" of Seoul, it is thick with Military Personal, English Teachers, Back Packers and Koreans trying to earn money off of, or marry them.Few attractions merit visiting Itaewon other than english speakers.Many bars and prostitutes service military personal from Yungson garrison and the UN base as well as visitors from around Asia and the world