Original sentence: In Montana, TRAILS (Treasure State Academic Information & Library Services) is a statewide consortium of academic libraries which includes all 24 of Montana's public, private and tribal community colleges and universities.TRAILS maximizes the return on resource investment, enhances teaching and research, improves the user experience, and encourages shared expertise among members of institutions across the state.TRAILS serves over 49,500 students, faculty, researchers and community members, providing access to over 4,000,000 library items.The consortium is expected to save seven million dollars over a five-year period
Edited sentence: TRAILS maximizes returns on resource investment, enhances teaching and research, improves user experience, and encourages shared expertise among members from institutions from across the state.TRAILS services over 49,500 students, faculty, researchers, and community members and provides access to over 4,000,000 library items.The Treasure State Academic Information & Library Services (TRAILS) is a statewide consortium of academic libraries including all 24 of Montana's public, private, tribal, community college, and university institutions.The consortium is expected to provide a cost avoidance of seven million dollars over the next five years