Original sentence: " Members regard Reverend Moon as the Second Coming of Christ, whose main mission, together with his wife, is to become "True Parents," establish a "True Family," and engraft everyone in the world (physical world and spiritual world) into that family to restore their satanic lineage." Their children are known as the "True Children.Gordon Neufeld - author.Graham Lester - blogger and limericist.Michael Jenkins - president of US church.Moon are known as "True Father" and "True Mother.Steve Hassan - author and "exit consultant.The family of Sun Myung Moon and his wife Hakja Han Moon are known as the "True Family" within the church.This list consists mainly of those people who have publicly and continuously identified themselves as ex-members; that often means harsh critics, who are not necessarily representative of ex-members generally.Tyler Hendricks - former president of US church, now president of UTS
Edited sentence: Gordon Neufeld - author, church opponent.Graham Lester - mailing list maintainer, blogger and limericist.James Baughman - former president of US church.Michael Jenkins - president of US church since 1995.Moon's family is known within the Unification Church as the "True Family".Steve Hassan - former deprogrammer, major church opponent, author.Their children as the "True Children".They are known as the "True Parents".This list consists mainly of those people who have publicly and continuously identified themselves as ex-members; and that often means harsh critics, who are not necessarily representative of ex-members generally.Tyler Hendricks - president of US church (1988-1995), now president of UTS