Original sentence: However, in the 2000s, due to gentrification and housing shortages the Fuzhou influx shifted to Brooklyn's Chinatown in much greater numbers, supplanting the Cantonese at a significantly higher rate than in Manhattan.In the 1980s and 1990s, an influx of Fuzhou immigrants, who largely speak Mandarin within their Fuzhou dialect, arrived and settled in lower Manhattan, around East Broadway and Eldridge Street
Edited sentence: Due to many of them having no legal status and being forced into very low paying jobs, Manhattan's Chinatown was the only place where they can receive affordable housing and be around other Chinese people despite the Cantonese dominance that lasted until the 1990s.However, in the 1980s and 1990s when an influx of Fuzhou immigrants, also largely speak Mandarin with their Fuzhou dialect arrived into New York City, they were the only exceptional Non-Cantonese Chinese group to largely settle in and fully developed the newer portion of Manhattan's Chinatown on East Broadway and Eldridge Street.In the 2000s, due to gentrification and housing shortages the Fuzhou influx shifted to Brooklyn's Chinatown in much greater numbers, supplanting the Cantonese at a significantly higher rate than in Manhattan