Original sentence: Although unsuccessful, Malet's attempted coup d'etat revealed a fatal weakness of the new dynasty.During his detention Malet conceived of and planned Napolean's overthrow in a daring coup d'etat.He then convinced Lahorie and Guidal that immediate action was necessary and showed the forged documents leading them to believe the Senate had already reacted to the death of the Emporer.Malet decided to profit from the Emporer's absence, to proclaim his death via the use of forged documentation, hoping the plausible declaration would be believable.Retrieved june 15 2009.The plan was simple: on October 23, 1812  during the Emporer's absence on the Russian front, Malet planned to announce the death of Napoleon, and to establish a provisional government
Edited sentence: Although unsuccessful, Malet's attempted coup d'état revealed a fatal weakness of the new dynasty.During his detention Malet conceived of and planned Napolean's overthrow in a daring coup d'état.He then convinced Lahorie and Guidal that immediate action was necessary and showed the forged documents leading them to believe the Senate had already reacted to the death of the Emperor.Malet decided to profit from the Emperor's absence, to proclaim his death via the use of forged documentation, hoping the plausible declaration would be believable.Retrieved June 15 2009.The plan was simple: on October 23, 1812  during the Emperor's absence on the Russian front, Malet planned to announce the death of Napoleon, and to establish a provisional government