Original sentence: "  The viewer needs to make the connection that Draper's response may be linked to Freddy wetting his pants and ruining his advertising career, and when Draper (really Dick Whitman) wet his pants during the Korean War and accidentially killed the real Don Draper.Another example would be during the episode "Six Month Leave" where he lambasts several of his coworkers for mocking Freddy Rumsen's episode of urinary incontinence which was the result of an absence seizure and drinking.Draper responds sardonically saying "Sure.The coworkers defend themselves by saying that they are simply having some harmless fun.We are also shown other facets of his loyal and honorable side, most obviously when he is forced to tell the head of Mohawk Airlines they're being dropped in favor of trying to land American Airlines.We see the difficulty he faces in telling a loyal client they're being cast-off in favor of someone newer, not unlike his step-mother treating him as a poor second after his half-brother is born
Edited sentence: Draper responds by saying "Sure.During the episode "Six Month Leave" where he admonishes several of his subordinates for mocking Freddy Rumsen's episode of urinary incontinence which was the result of an absence seizure and drinking.The employees defend themselves by stating that they are simply having some harmless fun