Original sentence: Barlow has a recording studio, The Doghouse, on his property in Shiplake, Oxfordshire, England.Barlow was a school friend, and former bandmate of Tull frontman, Ian Anderson.Barlow went on to do various session projects, including work with Robert Plant, John Miles, and Jimmy Page, and he also started his own band for a spell called Storm.Barriemore Barlow (born 10 September 1949, Birmingham) is best known as the drummer and percussionist for the rock band, Jethro Tull, from May 1971 to June 1980.His drumming on the live album, Bursting Out, is testimony to his creative talents as a drummer
Edited sentence: Barrie has a recording studio, The Doghouse, on his property in Shiplake, UK.Barrie was a school friend and former bandmate of Tull leader Ian Anderson.Barrie went on to do various session projects, including work with Robert Plant, John Miles, and Jimmy Page, and he also started his own band for a spell called Storm.Barriemore Barlow (born 10 September, 1949, in Birmingham) is best known as the drummer and percussionist for rock band Jethro Tull from May 1971 to June 1980.His drumming on the live album, "Bursting Out", is testimony to his great and creative talents as a drummer