Original sentence: Slater has had on several famous athletes during the past year, including Dwyane Wade, Chad Ochocinco, Olli Jokinen, Don King, Andre Dawson, Frank Robinson, Jonathan Papelbon, Carlos Delgado, Adam Dunn, Frank Francisco, Yovani Gallardo, O
Edited sentence: Slater has had on several famous athletes during the past year, including Dwyane Wade, Chad Ochocinco, Olli Jokinen, Don King, Andre Dawson, Frank Robinson, Jonathan Papelbon, Carlos Delgado, Adam Dunn, Jair Jurrjens, Frank Francisco, Yovani Gallardo, O