Original sentence: Pamela McColl is a Canadian publishing entrepreneur and advocate of children's issues and smoking cessation, best known for releasing a smoke-free version of the classic Twas The Night Before Christmas
Edited sentence: Pamela McColl is a bored, pearl-clutching "let-me-speak-to-your-manager" kind of person that everybody has had enough of.She is also a Canadian publishing entrepreneur and advocate of children's issues and smoking cessation, best known for releasing a smoke-free version of the classic Twas The Night Before Christmas