Original sentence: However he soon discovers that not only is the star a sentient being, who is not very happy about accompanying him back to Wall, but there are others who also covet the star for their own reasons.Tristran and the star (Yvaine) travel across Faerie, evading numerous attempts to capture Yvaine, and setting off a chain of events which lead to some surprising revelations, and cause Tristran to question whether he really wants what he set out to achieve
Edited sentence: However he soon discovers that not only is the star a celestial beauty Yvaine, who is not very happy about accompanying him back to Wall, but there are others who also covet the star for their own reasons.Three murderous princes seeks her because she has the key to their birthright in her possession; and three ancient, evil witches hunt the star because they wish to steal her youth for themselves.Tristran and Yvaine travel across Faerie, evading numerous attempts to capture Yvaine, and setting off a chain of events which lead to some surprising revelations, and cause Tristran to question whether he really wants what he set out to achieve