Original sentence: However, the Army of Pakistan can be brutal against their own citizens.In 1971, according to some estimates, they executed over 3 million Bangladeshis.In East Pakistan in 1971 they had committed many human rights violations, and are prone to coup d'etats.In March 2005, US government confirmed that it intends to sell two dozen F16 to Pakistan despite India's resistance to the idea.Recently the army has been engaging in similar human rights violations in Balochistan.The Army of Pakistan's Operation 2005, as reported by the BBC is one of the most brutal in recent years by any country.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup and is currently the military dictator of Pakistan
Edited sentence: After three years of assuming power he held elctions at grass root level first and later on for national assemble and provencial assemblies.Again foreign hands are suspected of supporting these terrorist activities.At the moment he is elected President of the Islamic Republic Of Pakistan.However, the Army of Pakistan was also used to supress terrorist activities and political unrest stirred and sponsered by foriegn powers.In East Pakistan in 1971 they had committed many operations to curb violence and law lessness, and are prone to coup d'etats.In March 2005, US government confirmed that it intends to sell unlimited number F16 to Pakistan despite India's resistance to the idea.Pakistan has asked for 86 F 16s.Recently the army has been engaged in anti terrorist operations in Wana and Balochistan.The Army of Pakistan's Operation 2005,in Wana and other tribal areas have seen success and many Al Qaeda members have been apprehended and their training facillities and shelters destroyed.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup