Original sentence: Akiyoshi (Shokei) Matsui (1963–), also known by his Korean name Moon Jang Gyu, is a prominent Kyokushinkai karate instructor and President of the International Karate Organization
Edited sentence: Akiyoshi (Shokei) Matsui (born in 1963), also known by his Korean name Moon Jang Gyu, is a prominent Kyokushinkai karate instructor and President of the International Karate Organization