Original sentence: 1 try; 3 pen.2009 Air New Zealand Cup top point scorers.ManyWillie Ripia (Taranaki), 3 penalties, 1 conversion; Josh Hall(Counties Manukau), 1 try, 3 conversion; Jack Cameron (Taranaki), 3 penalties, 1 conversion
Edited sentence: 1 try; 5 pen; 4 con.1 try; 7 pen; 1 con.2009 Air New Zealand Cup top ten point scorers.Aaron Cruden