Original sentence: Critics have also charged that the belief in PMS and its effects is mainly a Western creation.Feminist scholars have argued that identifying natural female experiences as diseases in need of treatment could have devastating implications for all women.Some feminists assert that the emergence of PMS as a disorder occurred during a time when women's roles in society were changing.Such feminists have suggested that viewing PMS as a disease is born out of our patriarchal society.The use of multiple SSRI's have been used to treat PMS has caused some controversy.They argue that this may not be mere coincidence, asserting a belief that PMS is used as a method of social control.They assert that the diagnosis and definition of PMS and PMDD are not universal across the world.This coincided with their loss of patent on Prozac, which has led to suggestions that their motivations are not completely benign.and in need of treatment has allowed unwarranted involvement and regulation of women’s lives by the medical establishment.cite Some feminist scholars have argued that the Western or American view of the symptoms of these two disorders as negative in the U
Edited sentence: Feminist scholars suggest that viewing PMS as a disease is born out of our patriarchal society.Identifying natural female experiences as a disease in need of treatment is highly controversial especially because the implications for all women could be devastating.It is notable that the emergence of PMS as a disorder was created during a time when women's roles in society were changing.Many of the symptoms of these two disorders are seen as negative in the U.Multiple SSRI's have been used to treat PMS which is not without controversy.The belief in PMS and its effects is mainly a Western creation.The diagnosis and definition of PMS and PMDD are not universal across the world.This allows the medical system to become involved and regulate this part of women’s lives.This coincided with their loss of patent on Prozac which has led to suggestions that their motivations are not completely benign.This coincidence has not been ignored especially among those who believe that PMS is used as a method of social control.and in need of treatment