Original sentence: His death, which took place on October 19, 1994, was reported in the regional and national media.In the wake of his passing, Judge Battisti's legacy was praised by Daniel McMullen, former director of the Office on School Monitoring and Community Relations, the federal court's watchdog of the Cleveland schools' desegregation effort
Edited sentence: His death, which occurred on October 19, 1994, was reported in the regional and national media.Judge Battisti's legacy was praised by Daniel McMullen, former director of the Office on School Monitoring and Community Relations, the federal court's watchdog of the Cleveland schools' desegregation effort