Original sentence: First, the actions of Chamberlain and the  20th Maine Infantry on  Little Round Top have achieved enormous public awareness: visitors touring the Gettysburg Battlefield rank the 20th Maine monument as their most important stop.Second, since Shaara used the memoirs of General James Longstreet as a prime source for his history, the book has renewed the modern re-evaluation of Longstreet's reputation, damaged since the 1870s by the Lost Cause writers, such as Jubal A
Edited sentence: First, the actions of Chamberlain and the  20th Maine Infantry on  Little Round Top have achieved enormous public awareness, inflated far beyond their military significance.Second, since Shaara used the memoirs of General James Longstreet as a prime source for his history, the book has started a positive re-evaluation of Longstreet's reputation, damaged since the 1870s by the Lost Cause writers, such as Jubal A.Visitors touring the Gettysburg Battlefield rank the 20th Maine monument as their most important stop