Original sentence: The Anne Valley Walk is a  greenway nature trail alongside the river Anne, leading approximately 2.2 km along a smooth gravel path from Dunhill Anne valley to Dunhill Castle, and then a further 2.6 km to Annestown Beach.The surface of this local community initiative is buggy and wheelchair accessible (20 m total ascent).Wildlife such as mute swans, pheasants and ducks can be seen along the trail, as well as smaller local birds species
Edited sentence: Kingfisher, deer, heron, mink and otter can also be spotted, alongside a wide variety of flora.The Anne Valley Walk is a , modern greenway nature trail meandering the river Anne, leading 2.2 km along a smooth gravel path from Dunhill Anne valley to Dunhill Castle, and weaving a further 2.6 km on to Annestown Beach (4.8 km in total).The packed walking surface of this local community initiative is buggy and wheelchair accessible (20 m total ascent), with free car parking available at both ends of the trail, and at the halfway point.Wildlife such as mute swans, pheasants and ducks can often be seen along the trail, as well as smaller local birds species