Original sentence: 2009 continued to be a successful year for the young man considered to be one of the hottest young properties in inter-county hurling as he made his championship debut against Tipperary in the Munster final on July 12 making his impact on the game by almost scoring a fantastic goal although squandering the opportunity at a crucial time
Edited sentence: 2009 continued to be a successful year for the young man considered to be one of the hottest young properties in inter-county hurling as he made his championship debut coming off the bench against Tipperary in the Munster final on July 12 making his immediate impact on the game by almost scoring a fantastic goal although squandering the opportunity at a crucial time