Original sentence: <ref> In his blog for The Times, Oliver Kamm charges Atzmon with antisemitism for his article "Truth, History and Integrity in which Atzmon writes "As it happened, it took me many years to understand that the Holocaust, the core belief of the contemporary Jewish faith, was not at all an historical narrative for historical narratives do not need the protection of the law and politicians.><ref>The first quote is contained in Martin Gibson, No choice but to speak out - Israeli musician ‘a proud self-hating Jew’, originally published in Gisborn Herald, January 23, 2009 and the second inGilad Atzmon, Anatomy of an Unresolved Conflict, published at PeacePalestine blog, May 8, 2008.In a 2009 opinion piece for The Guardian, Nick Cohen found Atzmon's writings "similar" to the "incoherent internet postings" of the white supremacist and Holocaust denier James Wenneker von Brunn.In particular, Cohen cited Atzmon's writing that "Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe" and "the Jewish tribal mindset - left, centre and right - sets Jews aside of humanity"
Edited sentence: In a 2009 opinion piece for The Guardian, Nick Cohen found Atzmon's writings "similar" to the "incoherent internet postings" of the white supremacist and Holocaust denier James von Brunn, perpetrator of the United States Holocaust Memorial Museum shooting.In his blog for The Times, Oliver Kamm charges Atzmon with antisemitism for his article "Truth, History and Integrity in which Atzmon writes "As it happened, it took me many years to understand that the Holocaust, the core belief of the contemporary Jewish faith, was not at all an historical narrative for historical narratives do not need the protection of the law and politicians.In particular, Cohen cited Atzmon's claims that "Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe" and "the Jewish tribal mindset - left, centre and right - sets Jews aside of humanity"