Original sentence: The town's secondary schools include Mount St Joseph Canon Slade School, Withins School, Sharples School, Ladybridge High School, Thornleigh Salesian College, Turton High School Media Arts College and Smithills School, which boasts a world champion brass band
Edited sentence: The town's secondary schools include Canon Slade School, Withins School, Sharples School, Ladybridge High School, Thornleigh Salesian College, Turton High School Media Arts College and Smithills School, which boasts a world champion brass band