Original sentence: It was around this time that Sunday World journalists Martin O'Hagan and Jim Campbell coined the term "rat pack" for the UVF's mid-Ulster unit and, unable to identify Wright by name for legal reasons, they christened him "King Rat.Wright is believed to have started dealing drugs in 1991.as a lucrative sideline to paramilitary murder
Edited sentence: Billy Wright, the commander of the UVF Mid-Ulster Brigade, is believed to have started dealing drugs in 1991  as a lucrative sideline to paramilitary murder.It was around this time that Sunday World journalists Martin O'Hagan and Jim Campbell coined the term "rat pack" for the UVF's murderous mid-Ulster unit and, unable to identify Wright by name for legal reasons, they christened him "King Rat