Original sentence: Christie runs away from him the next day when he tries to apologise, and as he is about to kiss her (he was very close to her lips), Christie turns away and tells him that it isn't right.They part without a good-bye, and Matt decides to stay with Emily, who is frustrated with only a promise that he will try to get over Christie
Edited sentence: Christie runs away from him the next day when he try's to apologise, and as he is about to kiss her (he was very close to her lips), Christie turns away and tells him that it isn't right.They part without a good-bye, and Matt decides to stay with Emily, who is frustrated with only a promise that he will TRY to get over Christie