Original sentence: After a six-year hiatus, Sridevi briefly returned to the small screen in the Sahara sitcom Malini Iyer(2004–2005).At the time Sridevi was appearing as a child artist in many southern films,she made her debut in hindi films as a child artist with film Julie in 1975 where she played the role of younger sister to actress Lakshmi but it was 1979 release Solva Sawan which marked her debut as an actress the film was the remake of her own film 16 Vayathinile (1977) although the film failed commerically her second hindi film Himmatwala (1983) became a blockbuster and established Sridevi as a star in Hindi films
Edited sentence: After establishing herself as one of the most successful actress of Hindi and Southern Cinema ,she left the industry in 1997 and after  a six-year hiatus, Sridevi briefly returned to the small screen in the Sahara sitcom Malini Iyer(2004–2005).At the time Sridevi was appearing as a child artist in many southern films,she made her debut in hindi films as a child artist with film Julie in 1975 where she played the role of younger sister to actress Lakshmi but it was 1979 release Solva Sawan which marked her debut as an actress the film was the remake of her own film 16 Vayathinile(1977) although the film failed commerically her second hindi film Himmatwala(1983) became a blockbuster and established Sridevi as a star in hindi films.She appeared in a number of successful films with Jeetander like Tohfa,Mawaali,Justice Chaudhry.The era of 1980s became a golden era for her as every year she was giving a super hit film