Original sentence: It is referred to as a long haired Manx and is shown in the short hair division with other short haired cats even though its hair is longer.Pedigreed Manx of today are much healthier and have fewer health issues related to their genetic mutation than Manx of years ago.TICA judges the Cymric with other long haired cats in the long hair division.TICA recognizes the long haired Manx as a Cymric, it is the same in all respects as the Manx, except the Cymric has a longer coat.The Isle of Man has adopted the Manx as a symbol of its native origins.The Manx breed, in spite of the absence of tail, has no problems with balance.The Manx was developed before the 1700s, and since the breed is of medium size, the weight is on average 5.5kg/12lb.The short haired Manx has a double coat with a thick, short under layer and a longer, course outer layer with guard hairs
Edited sentence: It is referred to as being a long hair Manx and is shown in the short hair division with other short hair cats even though its hair is longer.Manx has become in its native island adopted as a symbol.Manx was developed before the 1700s, and since the breed is of medium size, the weight is on a mean of 5.5kg/12lb.Pedigreed Manx of today are much healthier and have less health issues related to their genetic mutation than Manx of years ago.TICA judges the Cymric with other long hair cats in the long hair division.TICA recognizes the long hair Manx as a Cymric, it is the same in all respects as the Manx, except the Cymric has a longer coat.The Manx breed, in spite of the absence of tail, has no problems with balance at all.The short hair Manx has a double coat with a thick, short under layer and a longer, course outer layer with guard hairs.There are other tailless cats, but only the Manx gene is inheritable; only Manx cats can have tailless kittens with subsequent breeding