Original sentence: Over the following five days, the hurricane tracked through the Greater Antilles, causing over 600 fatalities, mainly in the Dominican Republic and Haiti.The storm made landfall three days later near Biloxi, Mississippi with winds of 105 mph (165 km/h)
Edited sentence: Over the following five days, the hurricane tracked through the Greater Antilles, causing over 600 fatalities, primarily in the Dominican Republic and Haiti.The storm made landfall three days later near Biloxi, Mississippi, with winds of 105 mph (165 km/h)