Original sentence: He became known among his enemies as The Hangman of the Serbs, even though the bishop was never convicted of any crime.He expressed goodwill and enthusiasm towards the new Ustasha leadership of Ante Pavelić in the early months of 1941.He was a benefactor to the Bosnian Croats who became a controversial figure because of his activities in World War II
Edited sentence: A great clergyman and benefactor to the Bosnian Croats, because of his activities in World War II he became notorious among the Bosnian Serbs.He became known among his enemies as The Hangman of the Serbs, even though the bishop was not guilty of any murder or war crime whatsoever.He expressed good will and enthusiasm towards the new Ustasha leadership of Ante Pavelić in the early months of 1941