Original sentence: A few days later another circle was also fround now far from the first one.Also this year one was proved to be made by humans due the geomatric shape that doesn't matches with the general rules to prove a circle made by 'unknown' powers.Because all the ground of the seminar was still property of the Dutch goverment, the seminar bought the complete amount of ground in 1892 for 14000 Guilder.Both were investigated but no evidance was found there circles were surely made by humans.Due the low ammount of notifications for the Paster study the great seminar Bovendonk was abandoned in 1967 and left like this for the next 11 years.From 5 may 1996 official number are registrated though there are also crop cicles known from years before.In 1998 5 circles were discoverd and investigated.In 2007 the 100th birthday of the great senimar was celebrated.In the year 1996 the DCCA (Dutch Crop Circle Archive) registrated 8 circles in field in Hoeven.In the year of 200 3 circles where discoverd.The next year (1999) only 2 circles were discoverd.This means there is a parade through the village with a lot of orange colored verhicles
Edited sentence: A few days later another circle was also found now far from the first one.Also this year one was proved to be made by humans due the geometric shape that doesn't matches with the general rules to prove a circle made by 'unknown' powers.Because all the ground of the seminar was still property of the Dutch government, the seminar bought the complete amount of ground in 1892 for 14000 Guilder.Both were investigated but no evidence was found there circles were surely made by humans.Due the low amount of notifications for the Paster study the great seminar Bovendonk was abandoned in 1967 and left like this for the next 11 years.From 5 may 1996 official number are registered though there are also crop circles known from years before.In 1998 5 circles were discovered and investigated.In 2007 the 100th birthday of the great seminar was celebrated.In the year 1996 the DCCA (Dutch Crop Circle Archive) registered 8 circles in field in Hoeven.In the year of 200 3 circles where discovered.The next year (1999) only 2 circles were discovered.This means there is a parade through the village with a lot of orange colored vehicles