Original sentence: Despite this the shop that used to be the Post Office is still in use as a general store.However they are now threatened by the construction of a Tesco Express on the nearby Rectory Road.It retains a village atmosphere despite its being now a suburb of Worthing.Tarring is home to ale and specialist beer pub "The Vine", noted for several years in CAMRA's "Good Beer Guide".The closure of rural Post Offices is a controversial issue in the UK.There are three other shops in Tarring; Tarring Food & Wine, The Local and Duke's, a small bakery.There remains an unspoken gentleman's agreement between the four establishments that none of them will encroach on the other's trade.Though once extremely popular with local families, "The Vine" seems recently to have lost some custom to Tarring's other pub "The George and Dragon".West Tarring's sub-Post Office was closed down in 2004
Edited sentence: There are three other shops in Tarring, including a small bakery.West Tarring's sub-post office was closed down in 2004 becoming a general store