Original sentence: He died in Santa Barbara in March 2010.Ky Fan (樊, September 19, 1914 – March 22, 2010) was an American mathematician and Emeritus Professor of Mathematics at the University of California, Santa Barbara (UCSB)
Edited sentence: Ky Fan (樊, Hangzhou September 19, 1914 – Santa Barbara, March 22, 2010) was a renowned American mathematician and Emeritus Professor of Mathematics at the University of California, Santa Barbara (UCSB)