Original sentence: In the late 1970s following a concert performed in Vienna, jazz pianist Oscar Peterson turned to his impresario, Norman Granz, with the words: "Dammit, Norman, where does this box go.More recent examples of notable artists who have played the Bösendorfer include Russian pianist Sviatoslav Richter; American pianists Cecil Taylor and Tori Amos; German pianist Wolfgang Rübsam; Austrian pianist Walter Klien; and Irish pianist John O'Conor
Edited sentence: In the late 1970s, following a concert performed in Viennea, the great jazz pianist Oscar Peterson turned to his impresario, Norman Granz, with the words: "Dammit, Norman, where does this box go.More recent examples of notable artists who have played the Bösendorfer include Russian pianist Sviatoslav Richter, American pianists Cecil Taylor and Tori Amos, German pianist Wolfgang Rübsam, Austrian pianist Walter Klien, and Irish pianist John O'Conor.Oscar Peterson