Original sentence: These actions included suspension of his security clearance, confiscation of his Diplomatic Passport, being placed on administrative leave without cause cited, being physically banned from the State Department building, being placed on a security watch list, losing access to his State Department computer, and being reassigned to a makeshift telework position
Edited sentence: Described as a good story, with a conscience, this one asks: Where did the 99 percent come from.It’s a story about change, and it’s important to know how that happened.The book isn’t a story about nostalgia.These actions included suspension of his security clearance, confiscation of his Diplomatic Passport, being placed on administrative leave without cause cited, being physically banned from the State Department building, being placed on a security watch list, losing access to his State Department computer, and being reassigned to a makeshift telework position better suited for a high schooler