Original sentence: Martin Price was the owner of a popular record store called Eastern Bloc, and was also the founder of independent label Creed.Patrolmanno9 05:44, 7 June 2007 (UTC).This album marked a change for the band who wanted to shake off their rave moniker and with 'Don Solaris' they aimed to create a more beautiful, cinemascopic sound
Edited sentence: Martin Price was the owner of a popular and legendary record store called Eastern Bloc, and was also the founder of independent label Creed.This album marked a change for the band who wanted to shake off their rave moniker and with 'Don Solaris' they created a beautiful cinemascopic sound