Original sentence: She died in Irvine near the end of her eighty-second year, one day short of her wedding anniversary, survived by six children, fifteen grandchildren
Edited sentence: She died in Irvine near the end of her eighty-second year, one day short of her wedding anniversary, survived by six children, fifteen grandchildren, thousands of students whom she had influenced, many people in the dance world and their students, and the yet unborn who will draw understanding and inspiration from her writings