Original sentence: Mike Adams, author of Grocery Warning  is known for following this nutritional approach.Proponents of the natural foods diet argue that unnatural ingredients promote obesity, diabetes, cancer, heart disease, and mood problems
Edited sentence: Many of these unnatural ingredients are known for promoting obesity, diabetes, cancer, heart disease, mood problems, and so forth.Mike Adams, author of Grocery Warning  is best known for following this nutritional approach.The Natural Foods Diet is probably one of the healthiest diet plans to follow given it is what human beings have evolved from for some millions of years