Original sentence: Aditi Shankardass () is a neuroscientist.Her previous work using EEG recordings of the brain to help identify the underlying neurological cause of dyslexia, was the subject of her presentation at the United Kingdom Parliament in 2001 at the Annual Reception for Britain's Top Young Scientists, Engineers and Technologists.She is the daughter of lawyer Vijay Shankardass (whose clients include the Nizam of Hyderabad, Salman Rushdie, Amnesty International India, and the British Council) and historian and Prison Reform International chairperson Rani Dhavan Shankardass
Edited sentence: Aditi Shankardass () is an award-winning neuroscientist.Her previous work using EEG recordings of the brain to help identify the underlying neurological cause of dyslexia, was the subject of her award-winning presentation at the United Kingdom Parliament in 2001 at the Annual Reception for Britain's Top Young Scientists, Engineers and Technologists.She is the daughter of celebrated lawyer Vijay Shankardass (whose clients include the Nizam of Hyderabad, Salman Rushdie, Amnesty International India, and the British Council) and historian and Prison Reform International chairperson Rani Dhavan Shankardass