Original sentence: ), Bill Maclagan (London Scottish), HJ Stevenson (Edinburgh Acads), DJ McFarlan (London Scottish), CE Orr (West of Scotland), AR Don Wauchope (Fettesian-Lorettonians), CW Berry (Fettesian-Lorettonians), A Malcolm (Glasgow U
Edited sentence: ), Bill Maclagan (London Scottish), HJ Stevenson (Edinburgh Acads), DJ McFarlan (London Scottish), CE Orr (West of Scotland), Andrew Ramsay Don-Wauchope (Fettesian-Lorettonians), CW Berry (Fettesian-Lorettonians), A Malcolm (Glasgow U