Original sentence: During Senior Weekend at the annual Ring Dance, the student's ring is turned around.It was designed by E.Jonas in 1894 and the design has been used since with only the class year changed.On one side of the ring is a large star, borrowed from the seal of the state of Texas.On the other side of the ring are a cannon, a saber, and a rifle, symbolizing Aggies' preparedness and valor in defending their land.The Aggie Ring is worn by students and graduates of the University, and each aspect of the ring is used to promote school spirit.The crossed flags of the United States and Texas symbolize allegiance to both nation and state.The eagle denotes agility, power, and ability.The five stars in the shield refer to the facets of student's development: mind, body, spirit, emotion, and integrity.The oak leaves symbolize strength.The shield at the top of the ring symbolizes protection of the reputation of the alma mater.The thirteen stripes in the shield represent the thirteen original states and symbolize patriotism.The top of the ring depicts an eagle and shield.Traditionally, students wear their ring with the class year facing them to signify the fact that their time at A&M is not yet complete
Edited sentence: The Aggie Ring one of the most recognizable symbols of the Aggie Spirit.The shield at the top of the ring illustrates protection of the good reputation of the alma mater, the 13 Stripes in shield symbolizes the 13 original states and the intense patriotism of graduates and undergraduates of Texas A&M, the eagle connotes agility and power and ability to reach great heights and ambitions, and the 5 stars in shield refer to the phases of development of the student: mind, body, spirit, emotion, and integrity