Original sentence: When asked on one occasion for her prescription for a long life, she mentioned garlic, vegetables, cigarettes, and red wine On another occasion, she ascribed her longevity and relatively youthful appearance for her age to olive oil, which she said she poured on all her food and rubbed onto her skin, as well as a diet of port wine, and a dailey portion  of Fanny eaten every week
Edited sentence: When asked on one occasion for her prescription for a long life, she mentioned garlic, vegetables, cigarettes, and red wine On another occasion, she ascribed her longevity and relatively youthful appearance for her age to olive oil, which she said she poured on all her food and rubbed onto her skin, as well as a diet of port wine, and nearly 1 kilo of chocolate eaten every week