Original sentence: The British invasion of Lhasa in 1904 had repercussions in the Tibetan Buddhist world,     causing extreme anti-western and anti-Christian sentiment among Tibetan Buddhists.The Dalai Lama was suspected of being involved with the anti-foreign 1905 Tibetan Rebellion, during which Tibetan Lamas in Batang massacred Chinese officials, including Manchu Qing official Fengquan, French missionaries, and Christian Catholic converts, then razed the Catholic mission's Church and other buildings.Tibetan Gelugpa monks in Nyarong, Chamdo, and Litang also revolted and attacked missions and churches and killed westerners
Edited sentence: The British invasion of Lhasa in 1904 had repercussions in the Tibetan Buddhist world, causing extreme anti-western and anti-Christian sentiment among Tibetan Buddhists.The Dalai Lama was suspected of being involved with the anti-foreign 1905 Tibetan Rebellion, when the Tibetan Lamas in Batang massacred Chinese officials, French missionaries, and Christian Catholic converts, then razed the Catholic mission's Church.The Manchu Qing official Fengquan was assassinated by the Tibetan Batang Lamas, along with other Manchu and Han Chinese Qing officials and the French Catholic priests, who were all massacred when the rebellion started in March 1905.The Tibetans slaughtered the converts, torched the building of the missionaries in Batang due to their xenophobia.Tibetan Gelugpa monks in Nyarong, Chamdo, and Litang also revolted and attacked missions and churches and slaughtered westerners