Original sentence: A Shirley Temple (also known as a Grenadine Lemonade) is a non-alcoholic mixed drink made with ginger ale or Sprite or 7 Up, grenadine syrup, garnished with maraschino cherries.It is often served to children dining with elders to let them share the experience of drinking a cocktail, which is why it is sometimes called a kiddie cocktail.One notes a bartender at Chasen's restaurant in Beverly Hills, California is the inventor.The Royal Hawaiian Hotel at Waikīkī in Honolulu, Hawaii claims to be the inventor of the Shirley Temple cocktail, from the 1930s
Edited sentence: A Shirley Temple (also known as a Grenadine Lemonade) is a non-alcoholic mixed drink made with ginger ale or Sprite or 7 Up and grenadine syrup garnished with maraschino cherries.It is often served to children dining with adults  to let them share the experience of drinking a cocktail, which is why it is sometimes called a kiddie cocktail.One source notes a bartender at Chasen's restaurant in Beverly Hills, California as the inventor.The Royal Hawaiian Hotel at Waikīkī in Honolulu, Hawaii claims to have invented the Shirley Temple cocktail in the 1930s