Original sentence: Bargain hunters soon flocked to the place.Now, the Pottery has mushroomed into 200 acres with 32 buildings, and an inventory of 120,000 items gathered from all over the world.Sales grew expodentialy, and the size of the facility grew to meet the demand of the crushing crowd.The story of the Williamsburg Pottery mirrors the American enterprise system
Edited sentence: Bargain hunters soon flocked to the place and an amazing expansion was underway.Now, the Pottery has mushroomed into 200 acres with 32 buildings an inventory of 120,000 items gathered from all over the world.The saga of the Williamsburg Pottery is rooted in the American enterprise system.They keep coming back and find the unique character of the site