Original sentence: Alongside this, Yazidi mythology also includes descriptions of heaven and hell, and other traditions incorporating these ideas into a belief-system that includes reincarnation.In this process, their devotion to Malak Ta’us is essential, since it was he who was given the same choice between good and evil by God, and chose the good.They believe that God first created Malak Ta’us from his own illumination (Ronahî in the Kurdish) and the other seven archangels were created later on.Yazidi accounts of creation differ from that of Christianity and Islam
Edited sentence: Alongside this, Yazidi mythology also includes descriptions of heaven and hell, and other traditions attempting to reconcile these ideas with the belief-system of reincarnation.In this process, their devotion to Malak Ta’us is essential, since it was he, who was given the same choice between good and evil by God, and chose the good.They believe that God first created Malak Ta’us from his own illumination (Ronahî in Kurdish) and the other seven archangels were created later on.Yazidi accounts of Creation, differs from that of Christianity and Islam