Original sentence: After Brigadier General Edwin A.At that time every California high school was required to have a California Cadet Corps unit if there were at least thirty-two students interested in the program.At that time there was criticism of the military and CACC's funding was cut by the state of California.Cadets are taught to always be positive and respectful.Forbes saw that the Germans already had such programs before World War I.However the program has since shifted its goal, not only do they prepare young men and women for the service, but also the business world where communication and leadership skills are essential.Oversight of the Corps on the state level is provided by the "M-Day Staff" led by the Executive Officer of the California Cadet Corps, which is currently Colonel (CACC) David B.Since 1999 The Cadet Corps has begun a slow rise back up and as of 2007 there were 8,000 cadets in the state.The CACC regained its funding in 1999.The CACC's primary goal was originally to prepare young men to be officers in the United States Military.The California Cadet Corps (CACC) is a paramilitary youth organization in California open for students in the college, high school, middle school and elementary school grades
Edited sentence: At that time every California High school was required to have a California Cadet Corps unit if there were at least thirty-two students interested in the program.At that time the citizens of the United States began to look down upon the military and related organizations therefore the CACC's funding was cut by the state of California.Forbes saw that the Germans already had such programs before WW1.However the program has since shifted its goal, not only do we prepare young men and women for the Service, but also the business world where communication and leadership skills are essential.Our Cadets are taught to always be positive and respectful.Oversight of the Corps on the state level is provided by the "M-Day Staff" led by the Executive Officer of the California Cadet Corps, which is currently Colonel  (CACC) David B.Since 1999 The Cadet Corps has begun a slow rise back up and as of 2007 there were 8,000 Cadets in the State.The CACC just regained its funding in 1999.The CACC's primary goal was originally to prepare young men to be officers in the United States Military, After Brigadier General Edwin A.The California Cadet Corps (CACC) is a paramilitary youth organization in California open for students in the College, High school, Middle school and Elementary school grades