Original sentence: Axelay is a video game 2D shooter developed by Konami of Japan for the Super Nintendo Entertainment System (SNES).Such visual effects combined with then what was seen as an advanced selection of weapons available made Axelay into a popular shooter for the SNES console and for its time.The game earned significant popularity for use of the SNES mode 7 and parallax effects in comparison to other games at the time.The game story begins with a scene where alien ships are invading Earth, and then destroyed it entirely, such that it falls to the Axelay ship to fight with the alien invaders
Edited sentence: Axelay is a shooter style video game developed by Konami of Japan for the Super Nintendo Entertainment System (SNES).The game made good use of the SNES mode 7 and parallax effects.The game story starts with a scene where alien ships invade Earth and then destroy it entirely, now it's up to the Axelay ship to fight with the Alien invaders.The good visual effects combined with the good selection of weapons available made Axelay into one of the best shooters for the SNES console and for its time