Original sentence: (These early traditions are sometimes referred to collectively by the name Hinayana, a term considered offensive by many practitioners.East Asian Buddhism or Mahayana, also known as Sino-Japanese Buddhism or eastern Buddhism — practiced predominantly in China, Vietnam, Korea, Japan, Singapore, Russia;.Tibetan Buddhism or Vajrayana, also known as northern Buddhism — practiced mainly in Tibet, Mongolia, Bhutan and parts of Nepal, India, Maldives, China and Russia
Edited sentence: (These early traditions are sometimes referred to collectively by the name hinayana, a Mahayana term considered offensive by many Theravadins.East Asian Buddhism or Mahayana originated from within the Early Buddhist Schools, and actively campaigned against it through introducing newly written Mahayana scriptures considered heretical by Theravada and other Early Buddhist schools.It is also known as Sino-Japanese Buddhism or eastern Buddhism — practiced predominantly in China, Vietnam, Korea, Japan, Singapore, Russia.It is also known as northern Buddhism — practiced mainly in Tibet, Mongolia, Bhutan and parts of Nepal, India, Maldives, China and Russia.Tibetan Buddhism or Vajrayana originated from within Mahayana, and split off through further incorporation of Hindu concepts into their teachings