Original sentence: After piloting the Jacksonville Suns to the 1964 International League pennant, Walker was hired by the Pittsburgh Pirates as manager, replacing Danny Murtaugh, who stepped down for health reasons.Featuring players like Joe Morgan, Jimmy Wynn, and Don Wilson, the Astros finished last in , but their record under Walker was 49-52
Edited sentence: Featuring players like Joe Morgan, Jimmy Wynn, and Don Wilson, the Astros finished last in , but their record under Walker was an encouraging 49-52.Finally, after piloting the Jacksonville Suns to the 1964 International League pennant, Walker was hired by the Pittsburgh Pirates as manager, replacing Danny Murtaugh, who stepped down for health reasons