Original sentence: Crestwood Estate is a suburban area in Thornlie, Western Australia.It was designed by Paul Ritter with the concept a suburban living area where streets were no longer straight, houses are divided by parkland instead of fences, and houses were no longer traditional boxes
Edited sentence: Designed by Paul Ritter this novel idea in suburban living in thornlie where streets were no longer straight, parkland instead of fences divide houses, and houses were no longer traditional boxes.External links.In the opnion of many this concept is still ahead of it's time, or is a security problem