Original sentence: A smaller but somewhat widely publicized controversy took place in the summer of 2009 when Denise Brown, the student newspaper and yearbook adviser, was removed from her job following a series of stories and editorials alleging fiscal mismanagement by Brown's supervisor, Toya Corbett
Edited sentence: A smaller but somewhat widely publicized controversy covered by the Baltimore Sun took place in the summer of 2009 when Denise Brown, the student newspaper and yearbook adviser, was removed from her job following a series of stories and editorials alleging fiscal mismanagement by Brown's supervisor, Toya Corbett