Original sentence: Smarting from two defeats at the hands of the Confederate States of America, which was allied with the United Kingdom and France, the United States of America has turned to an alliance with the strengthening German Empire as well as Austria Hungary, and the Ottoman Empire.The US military has been reformed along German lines, and gets a great deal of technical assistance from Germany, especially with regard to fighter aircraft.Wilson's speech, given in a tightly-packed public square of Richmond, Virginia decorated with statues of southern war heroes George Washington and Gen
Edited sentence: Smarting from two defeats at the hands of the Confederate States of America, which was allied with the United Kingdom and France, the United States of America has turned to an alliance with the strengthening German Empire (helped by the fact America is home to the largest German population outside Germany and its ever-growing anti-British Irish population) as well as Austro-Hungary, and the Ottoman Empire.The U.Wilson's speech, given in a tightly-packed public square of Richmond, Virginia decorated with statues of southern war heroes George Washington from the Revolutionary War and Gen.military has been reformed along German lines, and gets a great deal of technical assistance from Germany, especially with regard to fighter aircraft