Original sentence: Former team members include Irish Senior International player such as Mark Raphael.In hockey, Sullivan won the 1992 Burney cup, beating Banbridge after sudden death penalty strokes.One notable previous member is Rory McIlroy, a young professional golfer on the European Tour.Previous members of the rugby squad include David Erskine, a former senior Ireland international and Darren Cave, a current member of the Ulster Rugby Squad.Sullivan Upper participates in various sports, including rugby, hockey and golf.Sullivan have a golf team competing in various competitions.The school won the rugby 2003 Medallion Shield
Edited sentence: He retained the West of Ireland Championship in 2006 and followed that up with back to back wins at the Irish Close Championship.In 1992 they won the Burney cup, beating Banbridge after sudden death penalty strokes.In 2005 he became the youngest ever winner of both the West of Ireland Championship and the Irish Close Championship.In August 2006 he won the European Amateur Championship at Biella Golf Club, near Milan, Italy.Mr Rodgers is head of physical education (for boys) and also the 1st XV coach.One notable previous member is Rory McIlroy who was a member of Europe's winning 2004 Junior Ryder Cup team.Sullivan have a strong golf team often doing well in various competitions.Sullivan have a strong record in hockey, producing Irish Senior International players such as Mark Raphael, as well as many Ulster and Ireland schoolboy representatives.Sullivan have also employed Willie Anderson, the former Ireland player and assistant coach of Scotland Rugby Team.The school has a strong rugby union tradition, producing players such as David Erskine, a former senior Ireland international and Darren Cave, a current member of the Ulster Rugby Squad who has also represented Ireland at Schools, U19, U20, U21 and A levels.The school won the Medallion Shield in 2003.Their current team hope to build on these past players skills and create a team that can't be broken