Original sentence: Hilton went on to become the world's foremost hotel operator, but this building was his first highrise hotel in Texas and the first to bear the Hilton name.The Hilton Hotel was built in 1925 for Conrad Hilton who operated one of the two earliest hotel chains in the state
Edited sentence: Conrad Hilton operated one of the two earliest hotel chains in the state, and went on to become a world leading hotel operator, with an international chain of full-service hotels and resorts.The Hilton Hotel, built in 1925 for Conrad Hilton, was his first highrise hotel in Texas and the first to bear the "Hilton" name