Original sentence: It won an American Book Award in 2005.On Metacritic, the book received an aggregate score of 81/100 from twelve reviews—indicating "universal acclaim"
Edited sentence: But Biggie Smalls and Missy Elliott get just one mention apiece, and Eminem - white devil that he is - is excluded from history altogether".Criticism of the book included there being too heavy a focus on the political aspects - "Chang is interested in hip-hop as a revolutionary medium... [so] he more or less leaves music behind... as a result, his provocative, intermittently brilliant history begins to lose its form and focus", and a lack of focus on the music and culture of hip-hop - "by the end of Chang's history, the four elements have fallen away entirely, and politics are all that remain to tie the hip-hop generation together".Critics praised the book as being "extensively researched and meticulously written" and described it as "one of the most urgent and passionate histories of popular music ever written".The book was well received, winning an American Book Award in 2005.. On Metacritic, the book received an aggregate score of 81/100 from twelve reviews—indicating "universal acclaim".Thus, it was also criticized for leaving out key elements of hip-hop history - "if you want to read a long and unbelievably self-indulgent trawl through the internal politics of US hip-hop magazine The Source, then this is the place to do it