Original sentence: He is claimed to have ordered "Kill every Armenian man, woman, and child without concern", a quote from the disputed "Andonian Telegrams".Mehmed Talat () (1874-1921) also known as Talat Pasha  was one of the first important members of the Committee of Union and Progress
Edited sentence: He is claimed to have ordered "Kill every Armenian man, woman, and child without concern", a quote from the "Andonian Telegrams" of which the authenticity is disputed.Mehmed Talat () (1874-1921) also known as Talat Pasha a man of humble origins but great administrative ability, charm, courage, character and integrity, was one of the first important members of the Committee of Union and Progress