Original sentence: He is one of the most popular rappers of all time.Shaped in the genre of Gangsta Rap, most of Tupac's songs are concerned about growing up around violence and hardships in ghettos, racial inequality and sometimes his feuds with fellow rappers in the United States.Tupac Amaru Shakur (June 16, 1971 – September 13, 1996) was a  American hip hop artist and actor.Tupac is mostly known in the United States for his strong political, economic and racial equality messages, and his sometimes violent tendencies, factors that made him a mainstream act both in life and death
Edited sentence: Most of Tupac's songs concerned growing up around violence and hardships in ghettos, racial inequality and sometimes his feuds with fellow rappers in the United States.Tupac Amaru Shakur (June 16, 1971 – September 13, 1996) was a highly influential, best-selling American hip hop artist and actor, considered by many to be one of the most revolutionary, highly respected, popular and legendary rappers of all time.Tupac is mostly known in the United States for his strong political, economic and racial equality messages, and his sometimes violent tendencies