Original sentence: After O'Rahilly's claims were reexamined it became obvious that his story about the origins of Radio Caroline were fiction and probably intended to redirect attention away from the well documented origins of the station.Financil backing for this venture came from the younger set of the British Establishment and seasoned investors within British industry and finance in the City of London
Edited sentence: After O'Rahilly's claims were re-examined it became obvious that his story about the origins of Radio Caroline were fiction and probably intended to redirect attention away from the well documented origins of the station.Financial backing for this venture came from the younger set of the British Establishment and seasoned investors within British industry and finance in the City of London