Original sentence: Clayton Parks a human resources manager, 24;.Josh Pinkard, a plant manager, 37;.Russell Beyer, a mold operator and union chairman, 46;.Trevor Wehner, a student at Northern Illinois University, 21, who was on his first day as a human resources intern.Vicente Juarez, a stock room attendant and forklift operator, 55;
Edited sentence: a human resources manager, 24;.a mold operator, 46;.a plant manager, 37;.a stock room attendant and forklift operator, 55;.a student at Northern Illinois University, 21, on his first day as a human resources intern