Original sentence: However, Aristotle gave equal weight to women's happiness as he did to men's, and commented in his Rhetoric that a society cannot be happy unless women are happy too.On this ground, feminists have accused Aristotle of misogyny and sexism
Edited sentence: Aristotle gave equal weight to women's happiness as he did to men's, and commented in his Rhetoric that a society cannot be happy unless women are happy too.He has been overly-criticised as being a significant historical ideologue of patriarchy, sexism and inequality.On these grounds, Aristotle is considered by some feminist critics to have been a misogynist