Original sentence: A native of Flint, Michigan, McLogan earned a bachelor of arts degree in English and theater from the [[University of Michigan], where she lettered in basketball, and a master of fine arts degree from Brandeis University, where she moonlighted as a traffic reporter for a local radio station
Edited sentence: A native of Flint, Michigan, McLogan earned a bachelor of arts degree in English and theater from the University of Michigan, where she lettered in basketball, and a master of fine arts degree from Brandeis University, where she moonlighted as a traffic reporter for a local radio station