Original sentence: " App Advice gave the comic four and a half stars.Review websites such as App Advice praise the comic for its engagement, interface and overall capability, but criticised it for its short storyline, quoting "Minus the title page, instructions, and credits this is a 20 page comic... it goes by so quickly, and there’s nothing left to do with it
Edited sentence: Review websites such as App Advice praise the comic for its engagement, interface and overall capability, but criticised it for its short storyline, quoting "Minus the title page, instructions, and credits this is a 20 page comic... it goes by so quickly, and there’s nothing left to do with it", although this small criticism, App Advice gave the comic four and a half stars