Original sentence: The trail is in good repair, there are some cracks that have been filled with tar are slightly raised.There are also some metal plates across the trail that can give cyclists a jolt.There is some debris on the trail around areas where path-side parks are being built
Edited sentence: The Section I rode had few underpasses and was mostly level.The trail was in good repair, there are some cracks that have been filled with tar are slightly raised.there are also some metal plates across the trail that can give you a jolt