Original sentence: In 2009, two South Park residents were the victims of a murder by a man who stabbed them to death.South Park is also home to a number of homeless men and women, many who are involved in the trafficking of narcotics.South Park is known as one of Seattle's worst crime neighborhoods, as it is the territory of several Latino gangs.The City of Seattle doesn't seem to care about Seattle's South End enough, because it appears to be focusing its resources and money on the rich North side where most of the city councilmen live
Edited sentence: In 2009, two south park residents were the victims of a murder by a man who stabbed them to death.South Park is also home to a number of homeless men and women, many who are involved in the trafficking if narcotics.South Park is known as one of Seattle's Worst crime neighborhoods as it is the territory of several Latino gangs.The City of Seattle really doesn't care about Seattle's South End enough because it is too busy focusing its resources and money on the rich North side where most of the city councilmen live