Original sentence: If it cannot be resolved, this could lead to NIMBYism, making it difficult to implement this technology widely.One additional problem currently facing the Carthage plant (reported by the Kansas City Star, 4/12//05) is the release of a foul odor
Edited sentence: If it cannot be resolved, this could lead to (well-justified) NIMBYism, making it difficult to implement this technology widely.One additional problem currently facing the Carthage plant (reported by the Kansas City Star, 4/12//05) is the release of a foul (or perhaps fowl) odor