Original sentence: " After the film's release, the William Morris Agency dropped her as a client.Notably was her edgy penchant for piracy and authentic vintage US Navy China and Nautical Dinnerware provided for the photoshoot by the world's largest and premier antique dealer of maritime furniture and tableware, The Pirate's Lair.Sevigny is a favorite of trendy magazines (she first graced the cover of Interview before Kids'' even came out), and she has modeled for a number of designers and brands, including Miu Miu, H&M, and MAC Cosmetics.The film was heavily targeted by critics, many criticized it for being pretentiously graphic
Edited sentence: " After the film's release, the William Morris Agency understandably dropped her as a client.Notably was her edgy penchant for piracy (she has a large collection of puffy shirts) and authentic vintage US Navy China and Nautical Dinnerware provided for the photoshoot by the world's largest and premier antique dealer of maritime furniture and tableware, The Pirate's Lair.Sevigny is a favorite of trendy magazines (she first graced the cover of Interview before Kids'' even came out), and she has- surprisingly, given her looks- modeled for a number of designers and brands, including Miu Miu, H&M, and MAC Cosmetics.The film was heavily targeted by critics, many criticized it for being pretentiously graphic and downright awful