Original sentence: During that time, the PlayStation 2 was plagued by production shortages, with people often paying in excess of $1000 on eBay for Sony's next-generation console.However, the Dreamcast's online capabilities through SegaNet (the PlayStation 2 would not go online until late 2002, well after the Dreamcast's demise), and a price cut around Fall 2000 (which made it half the price of the PS2) did little to help sales once the Playstation 2 was launched
Edited sentence: During that time, the PlayStation 2 was plagued by production shortages and a lack of quality games outside of EA Sports, with people often paying in excess of $1000 on eBay for Sony's next-generation console.However, the Dreamcast's superior games, online capabilities through SegaNet (the PlayStation 2 would not go online until late 2002, well after the Dreamcast's demise), and a price cut around Fall 2000 (which made it half the price of the PS2) did little to help sales once the Playstation 2 was launched