Original sentence: Although Ray is frequently accused of being a crank, some people apparently believe that he is really communicating the "Ineffable Cubic Truth of the Universe".Due to the general attitude that Time Cube is eccentric nonsense, Ray currently poses no threat to academia and the government, entities which he considers evil.Gene Ray (born 1927) is the author of several websites, on which he presents writings related to his discovery of the so-called Time Cube principle, which is claimed to represent the ineffable Truth of the Universe.Ray also proclaimed himself a "Doctor of Cubicism" in December 2002, explaining that universities are too evil to bestow upon him such a prestigious honour of wisdom.Ray has stated that his main reason for publicising his discovery on the Internet is to induce a research group to evaluate the Time Cube, and control its release upon the public.Ray worked as an electrician and claims to have studied this principle for several decades prior to creating his "Time Cube" website in August, 1997
Edited sentence: Although Dr Ray is frequently accused of being a crank, some people apparently believe that he is really communicating the "Ineffable Cubic Truth of the Universe".Dr Gene Ray (born 1927) is the author of several websites, on which he presents writings related to his discovery of the Time Cube principle, which is claimed to represent the ineffable Truth of the Universe.Dr Ray has stated that his main reason for publicising his discovery on the Internet is to induce a research group to evaluate the Time Cube, and control its release upon the public.Dr Ray worked as an electrician and claims to have studied this principle for several decades prior to creating his Time Cube website in August, 1997.Due to the general attitude that Time Cube is eccentric nonsense, Dr Ray currently poses no threat to academia and the government, entities which he considers evil.Ray also proclaimed himself a Doctor of Cubicism in December 2002, explaining that universities are too evil to bestow upon him such a prestigious honour of Wisdom