Original sentence: According to the World Bank, Georgia is considered as the number one economic reformer in the world and Georgia ranks as 37 in term of ease of doing business, when most of the country's neighbours' are in the 100s of the World Bank's rank.He succeeded, on January 25, 2004, Nino Burjanadze, who acted as a president after President Eduard Shevardnadze stepped down in Georgia's 2003 de jure, bloodless Rose Revolution.Mikeil Saakashvili is conidered a big economic reformer in the country, while destroying the corrupt environment.The Rose Revolution was led by Saakashvili and his major political allies, Burjanadze and Zurab Zhvania
Edited sentence: According to the World Bank accounts, Georgia is named as the number one economic reformer in the world and the country ranks as 37 in term of ease of doing business, when most of the country's neighbours' are in the 100s of the World Bank's rank.Although the reforms initiated by President Saakashvili is considered to have mixed success, still the rate of corruption in the country has drastically reduced.He succeeded, on January 25, 2004, Nino Burjanadze, who acted as a president after President Eduard Shevardnadze stepped down in Georgia's 2003 bloodless Rose Revolution, led by Saakashvili and his major political allies, Burjanadze and Zurab Zhvania.In his foreign policy, Saakashvili maintains close ties with the U.Saakashvili-led Rose Revolution has been described by the White House as one of the most powerful movements in the modern history that has inspired others to seek freedom.leadership, as well as other NATO countries, and remains one of the leaders of the GUAM organization