Original sentence: Fred Hembeck (born January 30, 1953<ref name=CBG1650>) is an American cartoonist best known for his parodies of characters from major American comic book publishers.Hembeck was born January 30, 1953) in Yaphank, New York Fresh out of college, and failing to get work as a traditional comic book artist, Hembeck hit upon a "bigfoot" style based on the version of himself he used to write illustrated letters to his college friends
Edited sentence: Fred Hembeck (b.Fresh out of college, and failing to get work as a traditional comic book artist, Hembeck hit upon a "bigfoot" style based on the version of himself he used to write illustrated letters to his college friends.Hembeck and his wife Lynn (married over 25 years) live in Upstate New York.Hembeck's individualistic cartooning style relies on a simple yet sophisticated economy of lines, resulting in an immediately recognizable "signature" to his characters.January 30, 1953 in Yaphank, New York) is an American cartoonist best known for his parodies of characters from major American comic book publishers.They have a daughter, Julie, born in 1990