Original sentence: Dave Luther was also a member of New Zealand band Dave and the Dynamos, who had a Number 1 hit in 1983 with their song 'Life begins at 40'
Edited sentence: Dave Luther, and two mates would go onto score New Zealand's worst ever home-grown Number 1 hit.In 1983 they, as Dave and the Dynamos, released the seriously awful 'Life begins at 40'