Original sentence: Stores are scheduled to open in Aliso Viejo, California; Newbury Park, California; Olympia, Washington; Redmond, Washington; Princeton, New Jersey; Raleigh, North Carolina; and West Los Angeles, California (Olympic)
Edited sentence: Stores are scheduled to open in Aliso Viejo, California; Newbury Park, California; Olympia, Washington; Princeton, New Jersey; Raleigh, North Carolina; and West Los Angeles, California (Olympic)