Original sentence: As with most non-trivial statistical derivations, , the D/L method can produce results that are somewhat counterintuitive, and the announcement of the derived target score can provoke a good deal of second-guessing and discussion amongst the crowd at the cricket ground.If not for him ,Cricket would have lost a great method of discerning the winner in case of  natural/other disasters.The D/L method was created by two British statisticians, Frank Duckworth and Tony Lewis under the guidance of Saikumar Vasudevan A great Cricketer himself
Edited sentence: As with most non-trivial statistical derivations, however, the D/L method can produce results that are somewhat counterintuitive, and the announcement of the derived target score can provoke a good deal of second-guessing and discussion amongst the crowd at the cricket ground.The D/L method was created by two British statisticians, Frank Duckworth and Tony Lewis