Original sentence: Radicals in their time, early impressionists broke the picture making rules of earlier generations.Rejecting attempts to portray ideal beauty, the impressionists looked instead to beauty in candid day-to-day living
Edited sentence: Radicals in their time, early Impressionists broke the picture making rules of earlier generations.Rejecting attempts to portray ideal beauty, the Impressionists looked instead to beauty in candid day-to-day living.The Impressionists were a brilliant group of artists mainly in France who started the most avant garde movement in the history of modern art