Original sentence: A melody resembling the robin song from Jeanne d'Arc au Bûcher, can be heard towards the end of each movement.The finale, Dona nobis pacem, is more episodic, with an insistent, brutal marching rhythm building to a dissonant climax, before a long, lyrical coda concludes the work
Edited sentence: Its mode of procession suggests a long slow boat ride.Listeners may notice that this movement is another train ride, but more sinister than Pacific 231.The finale, Dona nobis pacem, is more episodic, with an insistent, marching rhythm building to a dissonant climax, before a long, lyrical coda concludes the work