Original sentence: Planning is also underway by many local groups in the Altoona area for a museum to be dedicated in honor of this historic event for the 150th anniversary in 2012.Planning is underway for an event such as this to be coordinated for the 150th anniversary as well
Edited sentence: It is also in the works by many local groups of the Altoona area that a museum will be dedicated in honor of this historic event for the 150th anniversary in 2012.It is hoped that an event such as this can be coordinated for the 150th anniversary as well