Original sentence: The Calanques, a mountainous coastal area, is home to Calanques National Park which became France's tenth national park in 2012.The Corniche, a waterfront road between the Old Port and the Bay of Marseille.The terrace offers views of Marseille and its surroundings
Edited sentence: Calanques National Park became France's tenth national park in 2012.The Calanques, a wild mountainous coastal area of outstanding natural beauty accessible from Callelongue,  Sormiou, Morgiou, Luminy, and Cassis.The Corniche, a picturesque waterfront road between the Old Port and the Bay of Marseille.The terrace offers spectacular panoramic views of Marseille and its surroundings