Original sentence: " They are also featured in Monica's single "Everytime tha Beat Drop.Dem Franchize Boyz is a hip hop group from Atlanta signed to So So Def Recordings.Notable songs include "White Tee", "Oh, I Think They Like Me" and "Lean Wit It, Rock Wit It".The group collaborated with Korn to produce a mash-up of "Lean Wit It, Rock Wit It" and "Coming Undone" called "Coming Undone (Wit It)
Edited sentence: " Jizzal Man and Parlae both feature on Unk's album Beat'n Down Yo Block." They have managed to get considerable press upon the release of On Top Of Our Game., Volume 21 with their hit song, "Lean Wit It, Rock Wit It.Dem Franchize Boyz are a hip hop group from Atlanta signed to So So Def Recordings.In recent months the group along with snap group D4L has come under major scrutiny because of the "Hip Hop Is Dead" movement.They are also featured in Monica's single "Everytime tha Beat Drop.They are considered by some to be pioneers in the new hip-hop subgenre of snap music.They collaborated with Korn to produce a mash-up of "Lean Wit It, Rock Wit It" and "Coming Undone" called "Coming Undone (Wit It).They debuted with the poverty-stricken urban anthem "White Tee" and have more recently appreciated radio airplay with their singles "Oh, I Think They Like Me" and "Lean Wit It, Rock Wit It", from the album On Top of Our Game.They have answered back with the diss song "We Fuckin Up Hip Hop.They were featured on the newest installment to the Now That's What I Call Music