Original sentence: (By contrast, his career average was 10.83 ()) In 2000 he scored 51 against Gloucestershire, the only half-century of his career.Normally a poor batsman, he managed to average a startling 35.66 that year, despite a top score of just 25, thanks to no fewer than 13 not-outs in his 16 innings
Edited sentence: A famously poor batsman, he managed to average a startling 35.66 that year, despite a top score of just 25, thanks to no less than 13 not-outs in his 16 innings.In 2000 he scored 51 against Gloucestershire, the only half-century of his career