Original sentence: Changes of this sort are common when adapting any text from British to American editions and vice versa, but in the case of the Harry Potter books, this standard practice has occasionally drawn criticism from readers who feel that the British English adds flavor to the series
Edited sentence: Changes of this sort are common when adapting any text from British to American editions and vice versa, but in the case of the Harry Potter books, this standard practice has occasionally drawn criticism from readers who feel that the British English adds flavour to the series