Original sentence: " According to Dirac's biographer Graham Farmelo, "He was her Elvis and she was his Colonel Parker"." She also writes that "[t]he problem lay with his genes.A reviewer of the 2009 biography writes: "Dirac blamed his [emotional] frailties on his father, a Swiss immigrant who bullied his wife, chivvied his children and insisted Paul spoke only French at home, even though the Diracs lived in Bristol
Edited sentence: " Another characterization of the marriage -- "He was her Elvis and she was his Colonel Parker" -- was termed an "infelicitous turn of phrase" and a "strange summing up of Dirac's marriage.She also writes that "[t]he problem lay with his genes.The reviewer of the 2009 biography goes on: "Dirac blamed his [emotional] frailties on his father, a Swiss immigrant who bullied his wife, chivvied his children and insisted Paul spoke only French at home, even though the Diracs lived in Bristol