Original sentence: As co-founder (with Steve Wozniak) of Apple in 1976, he helped popularize the desktop computer with the Apple II.Later, he was one of the first to see the commercial potential of the GUI and mouse developed at Xerox's Palo Alto Research Center, and saw that these technologies were taken over and incorporated in the Apple Macintosh.Steven Paul Jobs (born February 24, 1955) is the CEO of Apple Computer and a leading figure in the computer industry
Edited sentence: He is also regarded as a pioneer in computing for the incredibly successful Apple II computer, and also for seeing the commercial potential of the GUI and mouse in a Xerox PARC demonstration and leading Apple Computer to unleash the successful and very influential Apple Macintosh.Steven Paul Jobs (born February 24, 1955) is best known as the co-founder (with Steve Wozniak) and CEO of Apple Computer, and somewhat less so for his  leadership of Pixar