Original sentence: He said this vision was not well received in his community.In his last written account (1838),  he described his vision as an appearance of Jesus and God the Father sometime during the spring of 1820, when he was fourteen years old
Edited sentence: According to Smith, his depiction of this vision was poorly received in his community.In his last written account (1838), Smith interpreted one vision, which he claimed took place during the spring of 1820 when he was fourteen years old, as having signified the appearance of Jesus and God the Father before him