Original sentence: " These comments received immediate backlash from many in the modeling community, including transgender model Carmen Carrera, Kendall Jenner, then Angel Lily Aldridge, and former Angel Karlie Kloss
Edited sentence: " These comments received immediate backlash from many in the modeling community, including transgender model Carmen Carrera, supermodel Kendall Jenner, then Angel Lily Aldridge, and former Angel Karlie Kloss