Original sentence: A further 95 new cases of Influenza A(H1N1) were detected on that same day, all of them being local cases among Malaysian citizens.A third death related to A(H1N1) was confirmed as 42-year-old Malaysian man who died of pneumonia and organ failure by the Ministry of Health on July 28, 2009
Edited sentence: A further 95 new cases of Influenza A(H1N1) were detected on that 28 July, all of them being local cases among Malaysian citizens