Original sentence: However, Lane is known to have visited the nearby town of Vienna (15 miles from Palmyra) in 1819 for a large Methodist conference.Joseph and his family might have traveled to sell concessions from their "cake and beer shop" at this event, as they did other events in the Palmyra vicinity, but there is no specific record that they did so.There are no records of Lane having visited Palmyra until 1824, which would lead to a much later date for the vision.William also said the vision was influenced by a sermon by George Lane, and Lane's whereabouts during the relevant times have been tracked in order to give insights on possible dates for the First Vision
Edited sentence: However, if the preaching of Lane helped inspire the vision, it must have occurred in 1824, when Lane first visited Palmyra