Original sentence: " In this sense nation-building describes deliberate efforts by a foreign power to construct or install the institutions of a national government, according to a model that may be more familiar to the foreign power but is often considered foreign and even destabilising.For nation-building in the sense of deliberate efforts by a foreign power to construct institutions of national government, see State building.Nation-building can involve the use of propaganda or major infrastructure development to foster social harmony and economic growth.Nation-building refers to the process of constructing or structuring a nation using the power of the state.This process aims at the unification of the people or peoples within the state so that it remains politically stable and viable in the long run
Edited sentence: " In this sense, critics argue that the duration wars are intentionally lengthened to cause additional damage than what is necessary to the adversary's infrastructure.By doing so, critics contend, opportunities emerge that disaster capital firms can exploit financially.Examples of such occurrences put forward by proponents of such a theory include the rebuilding of Germany in the aftermath of World War II via the Marshall Plan, the rebuilding of Japan following the United States' fire-bombing campaign, and more recently, the slew of private corporations (such as Halliburton, Bechtel, and Blackwater) who have profited in the aftermath of the Iraq War.Nation-building is a term used to describe deliberate efforts by a foreign power to construct or install the institutions of a national government, according to a model that may be more familiar to the foreign power but is often considered foreign and even destabilising.The idea is controversial because it has overtones of imperialism and colonialism, whereby local populations view the foreign power as an oppressor attempting to impose a foreign system and culture.The term "nation-building" usually carries a connotation of futility and failure —efforts which may appear to be noble but are destined to bring disaster