Original sentence: One of the oldest and largest resort areas of Greece, Faliraki is known for its sandy beach and numerous watersport offerings, as well, as numerous bars and nightclubs.They also hope to attract business people and nature lovers,such as Dave Brown and the sporting leg end Leon White
Edited sentence: One of the oldest and largest resort areas of Greece, Faliraki is known for its sandy beach and numerous watersport offerings, as well as numerous bars and nightclubs.They also hope to attract business people and nature lovers