Original sentence: In 2005, Lynn began working for Portland Tenspeed, a design firm, alongside business partner and owner Tacee Webb.Lynn and Webb developed, designed, and helped build the first 35 stores of the American Apparel chain
Edited sentence: In 2005, Lynn began working for Portland Tenspeed, a design firm, for owner/designer Tacee Webb.Under the direction of Webb, Lynn helped to develop, design, and build the first 35 stores of the American Apparel chain