Original sentence: Located in the centre of the village, the mill and its surrounding meadow is the site of an annual barbecue.Otterville Park: Just north of the main corner, and through the stone gates, is  of parklands graced with tall pines, with a swimming pool, ball diamond, horseshoe pitch, tennis and basketball courts, and children's playground
Edited sentence: A beautiful setting in the centre of the village, the mill and its surrounding meadow is the site of an annual barbecue.Otterville Park: Just north of the main corner, and through the stone gates, is  of parklands graced with beautiful tall pines, with a swimming pool, ball diamond, horseshoe pitch, tennis and basketball courts, and children's playground