Original sentence: Early in his career, Galloway was considered by many to be one of the most gifted players in the NFL, going over the 1,000 yard mark in three of his first four seasons, while also being a star return man
Edited sentence: Early in his career, Galloway was one of the most gifted players in the NFL, going over the 1,000 yard mark in three of his first four seasons, while also being a star return man.What makes Galloway so remarkable is his amazing speed and acceleration, allowing him to "burn" defenders deep and run slant routes knowing that heavy linebackers and lower-speed safeties won't be able to keep up with him