Original sentence: In the midst of combat, Vader reads Luke's feelings and learns that Luke has a twin sister.When Vader toys with the notion of turning Leia to the dark side, Luke gives in to his anger and brutally overpowers his father, eventually slicing off Vader's robotic right hand
Edited sentence: ) Vader reads Luke's feelings and learns that Luke has a twin sister.In the midst of combat, Luke goes into hiding, for he does not wish to kill Vader.Luke gives in to his anger at this threat and brutally overpowers his father, eventually slicing off Vader's robotic right hand.Vader now knows how to lure his son out of hiding and toys with the notion of turning Leia to the dark side.Vader tries to bait him to the dark side with false hope and sweet promises to save his friends (which is how Anakin orginally turned to the dark side, when his wife Padme's life was threatened