Original sentence: During World War I,  Ginger was examined and considered temporarily unfit for military duty because he was suffering from miner's Black Lung and bad teeth.Hunted by the police for evading the draft, Goodwin camped in the hills surrounding Cumberland, British Columbia.On July 27, 1918, he was shot and killed by Dominion Police Deputy Dan Campbell
Edited sentence: Deputy Dan Campbell killed Goodwin in the hills surrounding Cumberland, British Columbia on July 27, 1918 for evading the World War I draft.Hunted by the police, Goodwin was located near his camp in the Vancouver Island mountains  by the Dominion Police.In the First World War,  Ginger was examined and considered temporarily unfit for military duty because he was suffering from miner's Black Lung and bad teeth