Original sentence: " Yet within its first year, the magazine was recording the early pains accompanying the birth of the Labour party, writing: "what have the Labour Party to offer us.It has provided analyses of, among other things, the 'Irish Problem', Scottish crofters and the Highland Clearances, the genesis of two World Wars, the creation of the United Nations and other global institutions, the formulation of the UN Universal Declaration of Human Rights, Europes’ withdrawal from empire’s colonial project, and the middle east conflict.Post, Leo Tolstoy (including first publishings of private material)
Edited sentence: " Yet within its first year, the magazine was recording a decisive shudder of the growth pains of British socialism and the birth of the Labour party, writing: "what have the Labour Party to offer us.It has provided analyses of, among other things, the 'Irish Problem', Scottish crofters and the Highland Clearances, the genesis of two World Wars, the creation of the United Nations and other global institutions, the formulation of the UN Universal Declaration of Human Rights, Europe's withdrawal from empire’s colonial project, and the middle east conflict.Post and Leo Tolstoy (including first publishings of private material)