Original sentence: Shane Douglas Heal (born 6 September 1970 in Melbourne, Victoria) is an Australian former professional basketball player who last played with the Gold Coast Blaze of the National Basketball League, retiring at the end of the 2008/09 season
Edited sentence: Shane Douglas Heal (born 6 September 1970 in Melbourne, Victoria) is a Australian retired professional basketball player who last played with the Gold Coast Blaze of the National Basketball League, retiring at the end of the 2008/09 season