Original sentence: Bonita is a five-and-a-half year old female who tends to be independent and something of a loner.Bonita's mother was killed by poachers wanting to sell Bonita as a pet, but she was rescued and taken to the Nyaru where she entered baby school.In his first appearance on the show, he kdinaps kidnapping Jasmine.When Donald started bonding with Chen Chen, Daisy became something of a tom boy, and can hold her own in an altercation.When the Bandit Boys bully her she quickly loses her confidence and will run away crying
Edited sentence: Bonita the youngest and smallest female, tends to be independent and somewhat shy.Bonita's mother was killed by poachers wanting to sell Bonita as a pet, but she was rescued after a year in captivity and taken to the Nyaru where she entered baby school.Daisy is something of a tomboy, and can hold her own in an altercation, even against males (noticeably Hamlet and Mac - an orangutan from Palis island).Daisy seems to have been made an honorary member of this group due to her tomboyish quirks.In his first appearance on the show, he kidnapped Jasmine but was chased off by the Bandit Boys and Daisy.When the Milo bullied her she quickly lost her confidence and ran away crying