Original sentence: In the Camp David Accords from 1978, the establishment of a Palestinian autonomy is suggested; at this time however, Jordan was regarded as the official representative of the Palestinians.Land for peace is a general principle proposed to resolve the Arab-Israeli conflict by which Israel would relinquish control of part of the territories it conquered in 1967 in return for recognition by the Arab world.The principle of Land for Peace was first used as the basis for Israel's peace treaty with Egypt in 1978, which included an Israeli retreat from the Sinai in exchange for economic assistance from the United States and a peace treaty from Egypt
Edited sentence: In the Camp David Accords from 1978, the establishment of a Palestinian state is suggested; at this time however, Jordan was still officially claiming the West Bank, although informally it had already accepted the PLO's claim to sovereignty.Land for peace is a general principle proposed to resolve the Arab-Israeli conflict by which Israel would relinquish control of part or all of the territories it occupied in 1967 in return for recognition by the Arab world.The principle of Land for Peace was successfully used as the basis for Israel's peace treaty with Egypt in 1978, which included an Israeli retreat from the Sinai.This has however according to many been complicated by Israel's demand to keep occupied East Jerusalem and the errection of numerous settlements throughout the occupied territories