Original sentence: As she is exiting the building, Ash has a flash of his daughter, and suddenly recollects everything, and chases after Telly.Before he can tell them anything more, the ceiling of the building is ripped away and he is sucked into the sky by an unseen force, his last words being "They're listening".Despite her husband and psychiatrist telling her that she never had a son, Telly is convinced that he did exist.He reluctanly does so, and Telly leaves discouraged.Now believing Telly, Pope confronts her and confesses that she believes Telly, and says she will help her, but is sucked into the sky in midsentence, her last words being "We will find your son-".She shoots and strikes him in the shoulder, knee, and finally torso, but the wounds heal instantly, and he walks away.Still disbelieving, Telly asks Ash to say the name Lauren aloud
Edited sentence: Before he can tell them anything more, he is sucked into the sky by an unseen force, his last words being "They're listening".Despite others, including her husband and psychiatrist, telling her that she never had a son, Telly is convinced that he did exist.Now believing Telly, Pope confronts her and confesses that she believes Telly, and says she will help her, but is sucked into the sky before she can make good on this promise, her last words being "We will find your son-".She makes good on them, but the wounds heal instantly, and he walks away with a sardonic look.When she shows Ash, he remembers