Original sentence: Advocates of the Bates Method claim that it is not based on doing eye exercises, but rather relearning and improving the right vision habits which they assert are inseperably connected to normal vision
Edited sentence: In reality the Bates Method is relearning the right vision habits.It appears that the batesmethod is doing exercises but this is not the case.The goal of the exercises is to improve the vision habits.The right vision habits are inseparable connected to normal vision