Original sentence: Such was the level of concern that the Temperance movement flourished, and a number of miners from Armadale began to consider the possibility of setting up a public-house under the provisions of the Industrial and Provident Societies Act, 1893, which would provide good quality goods for customers, where members would have a say in the management , but above all, where some of the profits would, in some form, be applied for the benefit of the community
Edited sentence: Such was the level of concern that the [Temperance] movement flourished, and a number of miners from Armadale began to consider the possibility of setting up a public-house under the provisions of the Industrial and Provident Societies Act, 1893, which would provide good quality goods for customers, where members would have a say in the management , but above all, where some of the profits would, in some form, be applied for the benefit of the community