Original sentence: Cassiel follows both Hanna Becker and Winter to an abandoned building in the outskirts of East Berlin, she brings food to Konrad, a man that has been serving as a father to Hanna even though he was nothing more than her chauffeur during WWII.Cassiel notices that Winter takes photographs of the old WWII cars that Konrad still keeps in mint condition.During his arrest he is also faced with something he ignored about humanity: identity, since he cannot give his name or address but refers the Police to the Casa dell'Angelo
Edited sentence: Cassiel follows both Hanna Becker and Winter to an abandoned building in the outskirts of East Berlin, she brings food to Konrad, a man that has been serving as a father to Hanna even though he was nothing more than her chauffeur during World War II.Cassiel notices that Winter takes photographs of the old World War II cars that Konrad still keeps in mint condition.During his arrest he is also faced with something he ignored about humanity: identity, since he cannot give his name or address but refers the police to the Casa dell'Angelo