Original sentence: Chapter House: Dune ends on a cliffhanger.In "Butlerian Jihad" an evermind overseeing Giedi Prime sends 5000 deep-space probes, equipped with copies of the evermind, as seeds for new Syncronized Worlds.Some readers speculate that Frank Herbert would end the series on a cliffhanger, expousing the philosophy that there is no stopping point to life and that all endings are new beginnings.The lives of our heroes don't end because a book ends, they go on in our imagination
Edited sentence: In "Butlerian Jihad" an evermind overseeing Geidi Prime sends 5000 deep-space probes, equipped with copies of the evermind, as seeds for new Syncronized Worlds.So Chapter House: Dune ends on a cliffhanger.Some readers speculate that Frank Herbert would end the series on a cliffhanger.The lives of our heroes don't end because a book ends, they go on in our imagination and that is a wonderful gift.There is no stopping point to life, all endings are new beginnings