Original sentence: Before the Alabama can launch, a second message begins to come through, but it is interrupted by the attack of a Russian Akula-class attack submarine friendly to Radchenko.Hunter refuses to concur as is procedurally required to launch, and instead tries to confirm the second message, which he believes is possibly a retraction of the previous launch order.Ramsey nearly succeeds in launching the missiles, prevented only when Hunter persuades the weapons officer to stall for time while he re-takes the bridge with enlisted personnel by his side.The United States nuclear strategic missile submarine USS Alabama is given the mission to go on patrol and be available to launch its missiles in a pre-emptive strike if the Russian despot, Radchenko, attempts to fuel the missiles he has captured.The movie culminates in a review at the Pacific Fleet headquarters in Hawaii where several admirals express grave concern about the breakdown of command aboard the Alabama and nuclear launch operations in wartime
Edited sentence: Before the Alabama can launch its missiles, a second message begins to come through, but it is interrupted by the attack of a Russian Akula-class attack submarine friendly to the ultranationalist cause.Ramsey nearly succeeds in launching the missiles, prevented only when Hunter persuades the weapons officer to stall for time while he re-takes the bridge with enlisted personnel by his side, furthering to contrast the differences between himself and Ramsey, who was released by only Officers loyal to him and at one point said "We'll lead from the top down" while Hunter has more support at the opposite end of the rank structure, likely due to his been more friendly and concerned about them than the Captain in several scenes.The United States nuclear strategic missile submarine USS Alabama is given the mission to go on patrol and be available to launch its missiles in a pre-emptive strike if the Russian nuclear installation attempts to fuel its missiles.The movie culminates in a review at the Pacific Fleet headquarters in Hawaii where several admirals express grave concern about the breakdown of nuclear launch operations in wartime.XO Hunter refuses to concur as is procedurally required to launch, and instead tries to confirm the second message, which he believes is possibly a retraction of the previous launch order