Original sentence: "  Since 2004, McCain has gained the unique distinction of receiving an F- rating from Gun Owners of America; and further unlike any other 2008 Republican Presidential Candidate has a dedicated section/compendium within the GOA web site which contains numerous pages relating to John McCain's very own "anti-Second Amendment" initiatives while in the Senate
Edited sentence: "  Since 2004, McCain has gained the unique distinction of receiving an F- rating from Gun Owners of America; and further unlike any other 2008 Republican Presidential Candidate has a dedicated section/compendium within the GOA web site which contains numerous pages relating to John McCain's very own and even extreme anti-Second Amendment initiatives while in the Senate