Original sentence: It is also used in Zimbabwe, where, unlike South Africa, most people of mixed race have Bantu ancestry, being descended from the offspring of European men and Shona and Ndebele women; under white minority rule in the then Rhodesia, Coloureds had more privileges than black Africans, including full voting rights, but still faced discrimination.The term "Coloured" is also used to describe people of mixed race in Namibia, where the term Baster is also encountered, to refer to those of partial Khoisan descent; under South African rule, the policy of apartheid was extended to what was then called South West Africa, and the treatment of Coloureds was comparable to that of South Africa
Edited sentence: It is also used in Zimbabwe, where, unlike South Africa, most people of mixed race have Bantu ancestry, being descended from the offspring of European men and Shona and Ndebele women.The term "Coloured" is also used to describe people of mixed race in Namibia, where the term Baster is also encountered, to refer to those of Khoisan descent.Under South African rule, the policy of apartheid was extended to what was then called South West Africa, and the treatment of "Coloureds" was comparable to that of South Africa.Under white minority rule in the then Rhodesia, "Coloureds" had more privileges than black Africans, in a cynical attempt to divide people along "so-called" racial lines, including full voting rights, but still faced discrimination