Original sentence: "  Despite the fact that she did not win this contest, since appeared in Slitz several times thereafter.Her first appearance was in the Swedish men's magazine Slitz as a contender for "Annual Sexiest Girfriend.In May 2005, Elin was voted as the sexiest woman in Sweden by the readers of the Swedish magazine Slitz.The reason given apparently stems from privacy issues.While there is interest in Grindemyr from her fan base, Grindemyr had previously contacted the webmasters to some of her fan sites, asking them to shut them down.nl, an unofficial fan site.nl, another unofficial fan site
Edited sentence: "  She did not win, but has since appeared in Slitz several times, and has become an internet sensation.(A prime example is ElinGrindemyr.Grindemyr has contacted the webmasters of some of her fan sites in the past, asking them to shut down their sites.However, in May 2005, Elin was voted as the sexiest woman in Sweden by the readers of the Swedish magazine Slitz.More than 10,000 internet searches a month are made for Grindemyr.Photo Copyright Kollberg Media.She first appeared in the magazine Slitz as a contender for "annual sexiest girfriend.Three of her largest and most active fan sites have shut down at her request.nl   —   Unofficial fan site.nl — Unofficial fan site