Original sentence: Sporadic violence took place throughout the rest of the year between Catholic nationalists, Protestant loyalists and the RUC, and intensified over the summer, the Orange Order's marching season.The marchers were attacked outside Derry by Unionist Protestants led by Ronald Bunting
Edited sentence: Sporadic violence took place throughout the rest of the year between Catholic nationalists, Protestant loyalists and the RUC, and intensified overthe summer, the Orange Order's marching season.The marchers were attacked outside Derry by extreme loyalist Protestants led by Ronald Bunting