Original sentence: On Rotten Tomatoes the film received mixed to negative reviews and as of August 2009 received a 14% approval rate based on 104 reviews, compared to the site's community score of 63% approval
Edited sentence: On Rotten Tomatoes the film received mixed to negative reviews and as of August 7, 2009 received a 16% approval rate based on 104 reviews, compared to the site's community score of 64% approval