Original sentence: In 1998, together with Carol Stuart at COYOTE, BAYSWAN participated in laying the foundation for the world's first occupational health and safety clinic run by sex workers with support from the San Francisco Department of Public Health (SFDPH)
Edited sentence: In 1998, together with Carol Stuart at COYOTE, BAYSWAN helped orchestrate a bold move that would lay the foundation for the world's first occupational health and safety clinic run by sex workers with support from the San Francisco Department of Public Health (SFDPH)