Original sentence: The press freedom organization Reporters Without Borders was advocating a boycott of the 2008 games in Beijing, citing its abridgment of press and personal freedoms and the positive effects of earlier Olympic boycotts.While no state has indicated a willingness to boycott the 2008 games, some groups are initiating independent campaigns to do so and other notable groups have called for protests, pointing to similarities between the 2008 games and those held in the past in the USSR and Nazi Germany
Edited sentence: The organization Reporters Without Borders was advocating a boycott of the 2008 games in Beijing, citing its abridgment of press and personal freedoms and the positive effects of earlier Olympic boycotts.While no state has indicated a willingness to boycott the 2008 games, some groups are initiating independent campaigns to do so and other notable groups have called for protests, pointing to similarities between the 2008 games