Original sentence: His book about his ongoing presidential run, The Revolution: A Manifesto, became a bestseller immediately upon release.While Paul was a leading 2008 presidential candidate in some Republican straw polls, he saw substantially less support in landline opinion polls and in the actual primaries
Edited sentence: His book about his ongoing presidential run, The Revolution: A Manifesto, became a New York Times and Amazon.While Paul was a leading 2008 presidential candidate in Republican straw polls, he saw substantially less support in landline opinion polls and in various primaries.com bestseller immediately upon release