Original sentence: Angry Somali men rallied at the radio station shouting, "Tom Barnard, this is for you.Barnard also has been critical of community activists, who critize police action in predominantly ethnic neighborhoods.Barnard apologized for the comments in early 1999.Barnard has been criticized by the for remarks that the local community has regarded as racist.Barnard still regularly comments on high profile Hmong crimes such as Chai Vang, who shot 5 hunters in 2004 in western Wisconsin and the Hmong husband who murdered his wife.Despite this and other controversies, Barnard holds his ground, and refuses to apologize to his critics.However, Barnard remains the voice of reason for many Minnesotans which is why the show enjoys the number one market position and has been a force in changing Minnesota into a battleground state for Democrats and Republicans.Many of these activists are quick to blame police for their actions.Minnesota has one of the highest Hmong populations in the United States and they have had great difficulty assimilating into American society.Most notable was in 2003 when an African-American man falsely accused police of abusing him with a toliet plunger
Edited sentence: Angry Somali men rallied at the radio station shouting, "Tom Brunard, this is for you.Barnard also has been critical of so-called "community activists" that critize police action in predominantly ethnic neighborhoods.Barnard has been criticized by the left-wing, liberal community, for remarks that local they cite as racist.Barnard still regularly comments on high profile Hmong crimes such as the Hmong hunter who executed 5 hunters in 2004 in western Wisconsin and the Hmong husband who murdered his wife leaving his children motherless and now fatherless.Despite this and other controversies, Barnard holds his ground, and refuses to apologize to his liberal, left-wing critics.For the record, Minnesota has one of the highest Hmong populations in the United States and they have had great difficulty assimilating into American society.However Barnard remains the voice of reason for many Minnesotans which is why the show enjoys the number one market position and has been a force in changing Minnesota into a battleground state for Democrats and Republicans.Many of these "activists" are quick to blame police for their actions before many facts have appeared.The most noted was in 2003 when an African-American man falsely accused police of abusing him with a toliet plunger.]  Barnard apologized for the comments in early 1999