Original sentence: His emphasis on Holy Communion, and its expansion to children, although controversial to Protestants, remain a cherished achievement of his papacy.Pius X is an organization that has largely split away the Roman Catholic Church, because the Church, in its opinion, has gone astray from its essential values; its name refers to Pius X's traditionalism.Pius X’s anti-Modernist stance has forever tarnished his papacy for secularists.This group still celebrates the mass in Ecclesiastical Latin, including the Tridentine Mass largely banned by the Second Vatican Council
Edited sentence: His emphasis on Holy Communion, and its expansion to children, although controversial to the Protestant heretics, remain a cherished achievement of his papacy.Pius X is an organization that has largely split away from the Holy See, because today's ecclesiastical hierarchy, in its opinion, has gone astray from its essential values; its name refers to Pius X's traditionalism.Pius X’s anti-Modernist stance has forever tarnished his papacy for secularists, liberals, and heretics whose only desire is the destruction of the Church and the eternal damnation of souls.This group still celebrates the Mass in Ecclesiastical Latin, including the Tridentine Mass, largely ignored by most priests around the world since the reforms of the ill-reputed Second Vatican Council