Original sentence: Bern came to United States from Germany when he was a young man.He married film star Jean Harlow two months before his death.He worked as a director and scriptwriter for MGM.On September 5, 1932, Bern was found nude, in his wife's bedroom, shot in the head, and drenched in his wife's perfume.Paul Bern (December 3, 1889, Hamburg, Germany - September 5, 1932, Beverly Hills, California) was a German-American film director and writer.Years later, it was suggested by screenwriter Ben Hecht that Bern was murdered by an unbalanced former lover, Dorothy Millette, who did actually commit suicide the next day by jumping from a boat
Edited sentence: He was found nude, in his wife's bedroom, shot in the head, and drenched in his wife's perfume.On September 5, 1932.Others attribute the possible murder to Eddie Mannix, the Vice President of MGM.Paul Bern (born December 3, 1889 in Hamburg, Died September 5, 1932 in Beverly Hills, California).Paul Bern was born in Germany and came to USA when he was a young man.Paul called his wife with affection "Deary" After his death, Jean wanted to commit suicide by jumping from balcony.Paul was a director for MGM, he was married to Jean Harlow.The 2 gardeners give conflicting reports as what happened that night, a car was heard chasing away in the early morning.The George Reeves Project strives to solve the circumstances surrounding Bern's death.Years later, it was suggested by screenwriter Ben Hecht that Bern was murdered by an unbalanced former lover, Dorothy Millette, who did actually commit suicide the next day by jumping from a boat with her shoes were found neatly stacked on the boat, raising suspicion about her death as well