Original sentence: " Trump then dropped the subject, even though it was possible that he would have, in fact, hired both Randal and Rebecca at the conclusion of the fourth season.Because of the lack of money raised, Yahoo, the corporate sponsor for Rebecca's event, donated $50,000 to both finalist's charity) during the finale.In the final task, Randal raised nearly $11,000 for charity while Rebecca raised no money at her event, opting instead to provide mailers for event attendees to donate through the mail.In this sense, it could be argued that she "lost" the task
Edited sentence: " Thus, Trump dropped the subject, even though it was very clear to the audience that he would have, in fact, hired both Randal and Rebecca at the conclusion of the fourth season.In the final task, Randal raised nearly $11,000 for charity while Rebecca raised no money at her even.In this sense, it could be argued that she "lost" the task (however, Yahoo,belatedly the corporate sponsor for Rebecca's event, made up for this by donating $50,000 to both finalist's charity)