Original sentence: Aer Lingus plans to end its service to San Francisco from Dublin on 25 October 2009.In May 2008, Jet Airways began service from San Francisco to Mumbai with a stop at Shanghai's Pudong International Airport, but it was later discontinued in January 2009
Edited sentence: Aer Lingus plans to end its service to San Francisco from Dublin on 23 October 2009.In May 2008, Jet Airways began service from San Francisco to Mumbai with a stop at Shanghai's Pudong International Airport, but it was later discontinued in January 2009, citing poor load factors