Original sentence: The sound effects of Vagrant Story are credited to Minoru Akao, the game's sound programmer; and Tomohiro Yajima, the sound editor and engineer
Edited sentence: The game's sound effects are lauded as "well done and impressive, straying from Square's synthed noise", and details such as the background audio create a believable world for the player.The sound effects of Vagrant Story are credited to Minoru Akao, the game's sound programmer and Tomohiro Yajima, the sound editor and engineer