Original sentence: About 50 km, from Quetta is the valley of Pishin, which is surrounded by thousands of acres of vineyards and orchards, made by boring holes into rocks to water to the surface.Crops include  apples, grapes, plums, peaches and apricots
Edited sentence: About 50 km, from Quetta is the valley of Pishin, which is surrounded by thousands of acres of vineyards and orchards, made by boring holes into rocks to bring to the surface the deep water.The most popular areas of Pishin is Bostan,Kanozai,Yaru and Alizai.The rich harvest of apples, grapes, plums, peaches and apricots is loaded at Yaru railway station, seven miles from Pishin