Original sentence: Muhammad Ghawth Gwaliyari a Sufi master of the Shattari order, the author of Jawahir-i Khams (Arabic al-Jawahir al-Khams: The Five Jewels)
Edited sentence: Muhammad Ghawth Gwaliyari a a 16th century Sufi master of the Shattari order, a musician, and the author of Jawahir-i Khams (Arabic al-Jawahir al-Khams: The Five Jewels)