Original sentence: Elected as president of the college's Student Government Association in 2004, Lyndsi was also the only SGA president at a Florida college who was a high school student.NWFSC also has a charter high school called the Collegiate High School at Northwest Florida State College, which opened in 2000.The Collegiate High School at Northwest Florida State College (CHS) is a charter school in Niceville, Florida, established in 2000, that enables 10th, 11th and 12th grade students to simultaneously earn both a standard high school diploma and a transferable two-year college degree or transferable college credits
Edited sentence: Elected as president of the college's Student Government Association in 2004, Lyndsi was also the only SGA president at a Florida college who is a high school student.OWC also has a charter high school called the Okaloosa-Walton Collegiate High School, which opened in 2000.The Collegiate High School (CHS) at Northwest Florida State College is an innovative charter school that enables 10th, 11th and 12th grade students to simultaneously earn both a standard high school diploma and a transferable two-year college degree or transferable college credits.The Collegiate High School at Northwest Florida State College is a charter school in Niceville, Florida that was established in 2000