Original sentence: On the basis of being commissioned to design several ski cabins, Henrik Bull opened his own architectural office in 1956.Sunset Magazine played an important role in Henrik Bull’s career, publishing many articles on his houses, twice putting his projects on the cover of the magazine, giving him numerous design awards, and using him as a judge twice.The early practice was mostly single family houses, but soon expanded to include condominiums and later hotels and institutional buildings
Edited sentence: Bull's early practice included homes, condominiums and later hotels and institutional buildings.On the basis of being commissioned to design several ski cabins, Bull opened his own architectural office in 1956.Sunset Magazine played an important role in Bull’s career, publishing many articles on his houses, twice putting his projects on the cover of the magazine, giving him numerous design awards, and using him as a judge twice