Original sentence: It closed during 2006, and was condemned on January 23, 2007 because of roof damage.It was a noted way station for people travelling to the hotels of the Catskill Mountains of upstate New York.The Red Apple Rest was a cafeteria-style restaurant on New York State Route 17, in the Southfields section of Tuxedo, New York
Edited sentence: As the region's popularity declined, however, so did the quality of the food served: It went from mediocre, to barely edible, to downright nauseating.It closed during 2006, thankfully, and was condemned on January 23, 2007 because of roof damage, possibly caused by the projectile vomiting of its patrons.It was a noted way station for unsuspecting people traveling to the hotels of the Catskill Mountains of upstate New York who actually hoped to enjoy a decent meal there.It's doubtful that too many of them made the same mistake twice.The Red Apple Rest was an absolutely horrid cafeteria-style restaurant on New York State Route 17, in the Southfields section of Tuxedo, New York