Original sentence: "  Critics counter by saying that the illegality of same-sex marriage is irrelevant, and that because same-sex dating and coupling is a legal activity that does not always lead to marriage, there is no sound reason for preventing gay and lesbian people from participating in any internet matching service.Critics note that eHarmony does not provide options for gay and lesbian people seeking a same-sex match.Warren claims that eHarmony lacks enough data to successfully match gay and lesbian couples
Edited sentence: "  The assuredness of this statement seems to indicate that Dr.Critics note that eHarmony has a conspicuous lack of options for gay and lesbian people seeking a same-sex match.Rightly then, critics counter by saying that the illegality of same-sex marriage is irrelevant, and that because same-sex dating and coupling is a perfectly legal activity, that does not always lead to marriage, there is no sound reason for preventing gay and lesbian people from participating in any internet matching service.Warren believes his service will, definitely, lead to marriage, while it is unlikely that eHarmony has a 100% success rate.Warren claims that eHarmony lacks enough data to successfully match gay and lesbian couples; however, critics counter that such a statement implies that, aside from a desire for a same-sex partner, gay and lesbian people are somehow psychologically different from heterosexual people