Original sentence: A series of police bungles and other circumstances meant that Whittle's brother Ronald was unable to deliver the ransom money to the place and time demanded by the kidnapper, who pushed Whittle off the ledge where he had tethered her in a secluded Staffordshire park, strangling her
Edited sentence: A series of police bungles and other circumstances meant that Whittle's brother Ronald was unable to deliver the ransom money to the place and time demanded by the kidnapper.She was hanging from a wire at the bottom of a drain shaft in Bathpool Park, Staffordshire.Whittle was pushed off the ledge where he had tethered her, strangling her