Original sentence: Despite his supposed sobriety and dedication to family and Christianity, the sports blog Deadspin.It's clear the photos were taken sometime in 2009 as the MLB Network can be seen in the background of two photos and the network first aired January 2009.The photos reveal him carousing with women, licking whipping cream off womens' nipples and according to the Web site, witnesses saw Hamilton drinking, heard Hamilton asking where he could obtain Cocaine and heard him reveal his plans to go to a strip club later that evening.sometime in early 2009
Edited sentence: , along with several women, not including his wife.Despite his supposed sobriety and dedication to family and Christianity, Hamilton confirmed he suffered a relapse in early 2009.Sports blog Deadspin.The photos reveal him carousing with women, licking whipping cream off women's nipples and according to reports, witnesses saw Hamilton drinking, heard Hamilton asking where he could obtain cocaine, and heard him reveal his plans to go to a strip club later that evening