Original sentence: Deneuve was born Catherine Fabienne Dorléac, in Paris on October 22, 1943 as one of four daughters.She made her screen debut at the age of 13, with a role in the 1956 film Les Collégiennes, and went on to make a string of films with directors such as Roger Vadim before getting her breakthrough role in Jacques Demy's musical, Les Parapluies de Cherbourg (1964).The daughter of French stage and film actor Maurice Dorléac and actress Renée Deneuve
Edited sentence: Deneuve made her screen debut at the age of 13, with a role in the 1956 film Les Collégiennes, and went on to make a string of films with directors such as Roger Vadim before getting her breakthrough role in Jacques Demy's musical, Les Parapluies de Cherbourg (1964).She was born Catherine Fabienne Dorléac, as the third of four daughters from French actors Maurice Dorléac and Renée Deneuve (the French voice of Esther Williams), whose surname she uses