Original sentence: His son, Fred, turns out to be a similar character.In Act I, for example, Fred describes Mrs.The "fallen" woman is introduced as follows:.Van Brugh with evidence of her impropriety with Captain Van Brugh, which he presumes to be bigamy, although it turns out they never married in the first place
Edited sentence: Gilbert handled the most controversial element of his play, "fallen" women.His son, Fred turns out to be a similar character.In Act I, Fred describes Mrs.Van Brugh with evidence of her impropriety with Captain Van Brugh, which he presumes to be bigamy, though it turns out they never married in the first place.as follows: