Original sentence: On the 24 May, 2009, he notched up his 150th appearance for the club in the ultimate game of the 2008/09 season against Aston Villa in what proved to be the final nail in what proved to be a disastrous season for Newcastle which saw them relegated on the last day
Edited sentence: On 24 May, 2009, he notched up his 150th appearance for the club in the ultimate game of the 2008/09 season against Aston Villa in what proved to be the final nail in what proved to be a disastrous season for Newcastle which saw them relegated on the last day