Original sentence: By modern standards of international law, the bombings ordered by Harris would be regarded as war crimes.Disappointed by the criticisms of his methods, Harris moved to South Africa, and was the manager of the South African Marine Corporation from 1946 to 1953
Edited sentence: By modern standards of international law, the bombings ordered by Harris would be regarded as war crimes, and therefore he should have been held to account.Disappointed by the critisims of his methods, Harris moved to South Africa, and was the manager of the South African Marine Corporation from 1946 to 1953