Original sentence: , the event was once again attended by some of sport and entertainment's celebrities, including a post game performance by rapper Fabolous.The North Carolina A&T University marching band was featured at halftime and violinist Lee England Jr
Edited sentence: , the event was once again attended by some of sport and entertainment's biggest stars including a post game performance by rap sensation Fabolous.The North Carolina A&T University marching band was featured at halftime and violinist Lee England, Jr