Original sentence: Bal Keshav Thackeray ()  (born 23 January 1927), popularly known as Balasaheb Thackeray, is the founder and chief of the Shiv Sena, a Hindu nationalist, Marathi ethnocentric and populist party active mainly in the western Indian state of Maharashtra
Edited sentence: Bal Keshav Thackeray ()  (born 23 January 1927), popularly known as Balasaheb Thackeray, is a   patriot and the founder and chief of the Shiv Sena, a Hindu nationalist, Marathi ethnocentric and populist party active mainly in the western Indian state of Maharashtra