Original sentence: Martynov's composition "The Beatitudes", as performed by Kronos Quartet, featured in La Grande Bellezza (The Great Beauty), the winner of the 2014 Academy Award for Best Foreign Language Film
Edited sentence: Martynov's composition "The Beatitudes," as performed by Kronos Quartet was featured heavily in La Grande Bellezza (The Great Beauty), the winner of the 2014 Academy Award for Best Foreign Language Film