Original sentence: 1984 - Represented Singapore at the Seoul Song Festival held in Korea with composition ‘I Live In The past’;.2002 - Partnered Tsui Hark, Hong Kong’s top film director, and produced the world’s first cyber recording artistes, AM FM and won the Siggraph awards in New Orleans.This invitation was both Singapore’s and Asia’s first cultural presence at the United Nations);
Edited sentence: 1984 - Represented Singapore at the prestigious Seoul Song Festival held in Korea with composition ‘I Live In The past’;.2002 - Partnered Tsui Hark, Hong Kong’s top film director, and produced the world’s first cyber recording artistes, AM FM and won the prestigious Siggraph awards in New Orleans.This prestigious invitation was both Singapore’s and Asia’s first cultural presence at the United Nations);