Original sentence: Microsoft has announced that it will be launching an Avatar Marketplace sometime in 2009 allowing users to buy clothes via micro-transactions.They have also hinted that users will be able to buy branded clothing for example steampunk, from said store for their avatar, as well as game-related clothing.You will also be using the typical Microsoft points to get these "clothes"
Edited sentence: Microsoft has announced that it will be launching an Avatar Marketplace aon August 11th, 2009, which will allow users to buy clothes via Microsoft Points.Users will also be able to buy branded clothing, such as SteamPunk, from said store for their avatar, as well as game-related clothing