Original sentence: "Turning the Tide” is the event Audrey Joseph, and several other of San Francisco’s top promoters have come together to produce as a benefit for Rainbow World Fund....She relocated from New York to San Francisco to run a dance venue and several gay clubs at those venues including Pleasuredome, Club Universe, and others used for fundraising and events particular to the LGBT community.With San Francisco's changing real estate market the lease on Club Townsend, home to Pleasuredome, expired; the building was razed, and Joseph started dance club 444 Jessie
Edited sentence: Brown and took office in July 2003.Joseph was appointed to the Entertainment Commission by Mayor Willie L.She has served as the commission's vice president and president several times.She relocated from New York to San Francisco to open one of the most influential clubs event venues, 177 Townsend/174 King Street, and several gay clubs at those venues including Pleasuredome, Club Universe, and others used for fundraising and events particular to the LGBT community.With San Francisco's changing real estate market the lease on the venue expired and the building razed; and Joseph started 444 Jessie which has also become an industry leader