Original sentence: Jimmy was the grandson of Andrew Allan (1822-1901) of Montreal, President of the Allan Steamship Line after the death of his brother, Sir Hugh Allan.Known as 'Jimmy', he was the son of Captain (James) Bryce Allan (b.Montagu Allan), another survivor of the Lusitania, introduced Rita to the immensely popular son of her husband's first cousin, James Bryce Allan (d
Edited sentence: He was the son of Captain (James) Bryce Allan (b.Montagu Allan), another survivor of the Lusitania, introduced Rita to 'Jimmy' her husband's immensely popular Scottish cousin, James Bryce Allan (d