Original sentence: As an IT Service Management (ITSM) framework, ITIL addresses the structural and skill requirements for an organization by presenting a comprehensive set of management procedures for managing its IT capability, from the inception of an IT service through its lifecycle
Edited sentence: As the pre-eminent example of an IT Service Management framework, ITIL addresses the structural and skill requirements for an organization by presenting a comprehensive set of management procedures for managing its IT capability, from the inception of an IT service through its lifecycle