Original sentence: In 2011 Jerwa raised $19,000 in a crowd-funding Kickstarter campaign for a comic book-themed documentary title  UNTOLD TALES OF THE COMIC INDUSTRY As of 2014, the film has not materialized, nor have contributors received rewards for the donated monies
Edited sentence: Based on his Facebook and Twitter feed, Jerwa certainly enjoyed the money.In 2011 Jerwa raised 19 thousand dollars in a crowd-funding Kickstarter campaign for a comic book-themed documentary UNTOLD TALES OF THE COMIC INDUSTRY As of 2014, several years after the film was to be delivered, it as not materialized, nor have contributors received rewards for the donated monies