Original sentence: According to Manufacturing Dissent, Moore's producer for the segment told them that in reality about 40 percent of the homes had unlocked doors.Another one of their assertions is that in Moore's Academy Award winning film Bowling for Columbine, Moore misleads the audience in describing the safety Canadians feel in their homes because guns are more regulated in their country than in the United States.The filmmakers found this shocking, as it appeared to contradict one of the central premises of Moore's film that corporate CEOs refuse to answer questions or acknowledge any wrongdoing
Edited sentence: Another one of their assertions is that in Moore's Academy Award winning film Bowling for Columbine, Moore misleads the audience in describing the safety Canadians feel in their homes.Caine and Melnyk report states that Moore's producer for the segment told them that in reality about 40 percent of the homes had unlocked doors, possibly somewhat discrediting Moore's thesis that Canadians feel safer because guns are more regulated in their country than in the United States.The filmmakers found this shocking as it appeared to negate Moore's central premise of the film that corporate CEOs exploit lower class workers and refuse to answer questions or acknowledge any wrongdoing