Original sentence: Despite the fact that all of the major European powers of the time had also colonised parts of Africa, including some who maintained power by particularly brutal means such as the French and British, detractors of Mussolini commonly choose to single out Italy's actions.This is considered the onset of Mussolini's dictatorship
Edited sentence: Despite the fact that all of the major European powers of the time had also colonised parts of Africa, including some who maintained power by particularly brutal means such as the French detractors of Mussolini commonly choose to single out Italy's actions.This savage repression is considered the onset of Mussolini's dictatorship