Original sentence: The NACM offers consumer assistance in finding member practitioners.The National Association for Chiropractic Medicine (NACM) is a consumer advocacy association of chiropractors who confine their scope of practice to scientific parameters and seek to make legitimate the utilization of professional manipulative procedures in mainstream health care delivery.While the stated ideals of the NACM seem valid, and are well-regarded by many reform-minded chiropractors, the organization itself has come under scrutiny
Edited sentence: The NACM offers consumer assistance in finding member practitioners that share their myopic vision and agenda.The National Association for Chiropractic Medicine (NACM) is a self-procalaimed consumer advocacy association of chiropractors who confine their scope of practice to scientific parameters and seek to make legitimate the utilization of professional manipulative procedures in mainstream health care delivery.While the stated ideals of the NACM may at first glance seem valid, and are poorly-regarded by many  leading chiropractors, the organization itself has come under scrutiny