Original sentence: Many nationalists, the bulk of the United Nations Organization, and many others regard these territories as under occupation by Israel, the territories are referred to as "the occupied Palestinian territories," or, simply, "Occupied Palestine," which has been a term for the area since the earliest days of Partition.Some dislike the term Palestinians, because they consider that it connotes the view that Jewish, Christian, Druze, Bedouin and other residents of Palestine aren't "real Palestinians".Some nationalists seek to found a new nation-state in these currently non-sovereign areas in what is known as a "two-state solution"
Edited sentence: Because nearly all of these nationalists and their sympathizers, as well as the bulk of the United Nations Organization, consider these territories to be under occupation by Israel, they frequently refer to them as "the occupied Palestinian territories," or, simply, "Occupied Palestine," which has been a term for the area since the earliest days of Partition.Some dislike the term Palestinians for them, because they think it connotes the view that Jewish, Christian, Druze, Bedouin and other residents of Palestine aren't "real Palestinians".Some nationalists seek to found a new nation-state in these non-sovereign areas