Original sentence: Leo Kottke (born September 11, 1945) is an acoustic guitarist who has developed a large following of fellow guitarists and fans over the span of a nearly 40-year career of recording and performing
Edited sentence: Leo Kottke (born September 11, 1945) is an acoustic guitar virtuoso who has developed a large following of fellow guitarists and fans over the span of a nearly 40-year career of recording and performing