Original sentence: Captain Juan Fanning (April 3, 1824 - January 16, 1881) was a naval officer in the Peruvian military who lead a memorable charge against the invading Chilean army during the Battle of Miraflores.During the War of the Pacific, the Chilean army invaded Peru and attacked the Miraflores District outside of Lima on January 15, 1881.Fanning lead a gallant charge which drove back the enemy
Edited sentence: Captain Juan Fanning (April 3, 1824 – January 16, 1881) was a naval officer in the Peruvian military who led a memorable charge against the invading Chilean army during the Battle of Miraflores.During the War of the Pacific, the Chilean army invaded Peru and attacked the Miraflores District outside Lima on January 15, 1881.Fanning led a gallant charge which drove back the enemy