Original sentence: A number of shops cluster around The Triangle, including a CWS Co-operative Welcome store, a traditional butcher, a greengrocer, a bakery, second-hand furniture and Persian carpet shops, a chiropody clinic called footmatters, and a Barnardo's charity shop.There has been a recent boom in take-away restaurants in Bitterne Triangle, including a fish and chip shop, a kebab house, Chinese restaurants, Thai restaurants and an Indian restaurant
Edited sentence: A number of shops cluster around The Triangle, including a CWS Co-operative Welcome store, a traditional butcher, a greengrocer, a bakery, second-hand furniture and Persian carpet shops, a chiropody clinic called footmatters, and a Barnardo's charity shop managed by Claire and Ozlem.There has been a recent boom in take-away restaurants in Bitterne Triangle, including one of the best fish and chip shops in Southampton, a kebab house, Chinese restaurants, Thai restaurants and an Indian restaurant