Original sentence: The school uniform consists of a burgundy fitted jacked (compulsory) with the SHS logo embroidered on the left hand side, a grey skirt in a choice of 3 styles: a pleated skirt, a one-pleat skirt and a pencil skirt, or grey trousers, with a pink, striped blouse, there is also an optional burgundy sweater for colder weather
Edited sentence: The school uniform consists of a burgundy fitted jacket (compulsory) with the SHS logo embroidered on the left hand side, a grey skirt in a choice of 3 styles: a pleated skirt, a one-pleat skirt and a pencil skirt, or grey trousers, with a pink, striped blouse, there is also an optional burgundy sweater for colder weather