Original sentence: Balwant Singh Sagwal was born in  village Kaulsituated on the Karnal-Pehowa road.He was part of the Indian Volleyball team that won the silver medal in the 1962 Asian Games at Jakarta, Indonesia
Edited sentence: BSF Jullundhur had quite a tradition in producing quality Volleyball players those days.Ballu proved to be a wonderful student and within months started to shape into a fine player.Ballu was a tall, ungainly youth from the beginning.Balwant Singh Sagwal, more popularly known as Ballu, was born in the Ror community.Being from the Ror community, Ballu had an enormous aggressive streak and became a great attacker.Dhanpat Singh Sagwal and he was a farmer by occupation.He is supposed to be the best attacking player Indian Volleyball has produced till date.He joined BSF and was posted in Jullundhur.He was absolutely world-class and feared in the whole of Asia.He was also instrumental in making the Indian Volleyball team win the silver medal in the 1962 Asian Games at Jakarta, Indonesia.He was from a modest background and he went to look for a job with the Border Security Force (BSF).His father's name is Ch.His height was 6'8" and his hands and feet were enormous in size.His smashes were awesome and he had the reputation of being a destroyer of the opposition's confidence single-handedly.It boasts of being a very good educational center with several colleges and schools situated in the village.Kaul is famous for being quite a well-developed village with a sprawling market and the number of Mohallas in the village is more than a person can possibly remember.Looking at Ballu's uncommon height, the BSF coach started calling him to the practice sessions.The name of his village is Kaul and it is situated on the Karnal-Pehowa road