Original sentence: Most "Western" horses are expected to eventually perform in a curb bit with a single pair of reins that has somewhat longer and looser shanks than the curb of an English Weymouth bridle or a pelham bit.Unlike the English traditions where clothing and tack is quiet and unobtrusive, Western show equipment is intended to draw attention
Edited sentence: However, dressage horses are expected to respond to the intricate, minimal movement of their rider, make it look effortless, and display almost flawless equitation skills.Many English style riders frown upon western style riding due to its lack of discipline, its ruggedness, and its distorting of classical tack, while western riders frown upon english style riding for its strict, unnatural, superficial, and even exclusive nature.Most "Western" horses are expected to eventually perform in a curb bit with a single pair of reins that has somewhat longer and looser shanks than the curb of an English Weymouth bridle or a pelham bit, although most dressage horses can perform with a single pair of reigns aswell.This helps differenciate western style riding from the fine, expesive, and somewhat "stuffy" nature of english riding.Unlike the English traditions where clothing and tack is quiet, classical, and unobtrusive, Western show equipment is intended to draw attention