Original sentence: A few mineworkers' houses still stand, now modernised.Lingdale was built in the 1870s as a village for the mine workers and was located next to a mine.The residents of Lingdale, and East Cleveland in general, are referred to as "Woolly Backs" by Teesside's population
Edited sentence: A few mineworkers' houses still stand although now somewhat modernised.Lingdale was only built in the 1870s as a village for the mine workers and was located next to a mine.The residents of Lingdale and East Cleveland in general are referred to as "Woolly Backs" by Teesside's urban, "townie" population