Original sentence: Deep Joshi was born in 1947 in village Gadtir, in a remote area of Pithoragarh district, Uttarakhand in the Himalayas and received his early education at the local primary school.Later he took his engineering degree from Motilal Nehru National Institute of Technology, Allahabad and also holds a masters engineering degree from Massachusetts Institute of Technology and another on management from Sloan School, MIT
Edited sentence: Deep Joshi was born in 1947 in village Gadtir, in a remote area of Pithoragarh district, Uttarakhand in the Himalayas to Harikrishan Joshi, a farmer and was one of the seven children.He received his early education at the local primary school, and later he took his engineering degree from Motilal Nehru National Institute of Technology, Allahabad and also holds a masters engineering degree from Massachusetts Institute of Technology and another on management from Sloan School, MIT