Original sentence: Clifford has since represented various clients, including: David Copperfield; Mohamed Al-Fayed; brain-damaged boxer Michael Watson; Liverpool left-wing politician Derek Hatton whom Clifford created an affair for to change his image; former MI6 officer Richard Tomlinson; Norfolk farmer Tony Martin who was imprisoned for fatally shooting a burglar; Rebecca Loos when she negotaited with the press about her alleged affair with England soccer captain David Beckham; and Celebrity Big Brother 2007 winner Shilpa Shetty
Edited sentence: Clifford has since represented various clients, including: David Copperfield; Mohamed Al-Fayed; brain-damaged boxer Michael Watson; Liverpool left-wing politician Derek Hatton whom Clifford created an affair for to change his image; former MI6 officer Richard Tomlinson; Norfolk farmer Tony Martin who was imprisoned for fatally shooting a burglar; Rebecca Loos when she negotaited with the press about her alleged affair with England soccer captain David Beckham; and Bollywood/superstar and Supermodel  Shilpa Shetty