Original sentence: After posting a very respectable 2-0 record and 3.60 ERA in 15 appearances (including 3 starts) in  for the Devil Rays, he went 1-2 with a 4.85 ERA in 26 appearances (4 starts) in  while splitting time with Triple-A Durham
Edited sentence: After posting a very respectable 2-0 record and 3.60 ERA in 15 appearances (including 3 starts) in  for the Devil Rays, he went 1-2 with a 4.85 ERA in 26 appearances (4 starts) in  while splitting time with the Triple-A Durham Bulls