Original sentence: In the 2012 Star Trek: Voyager novel The Eternal Tide by Kirsten Beyer, Janeway returns to life with the help of young Q, who needs her assistance, and by the book's end resumes her admiralship in Starfleet.Writer Peter David explained the book was conceived by Pocket Books editorial as one in which Janeway would die, and that he was brought in to write it in order to give her a heroic send-off
Edited sentence: In the 2012 Star Trek: Voyager novel The Eternal Tide by Kirsten Beyer, Janeway returns to human life with the help of young Q, who needs her assistance, and by the book's end resumes her admiralship in Starfleet.Writer Peter David tried to explain that the book was conceived by Pocket Books editorial as one in which Janeway would die, and that he was brought in to write it in order to give her a heroic send-off