Original sentence: Real-life sportswriters Allan Malamud, Doug Krikorian, Jeff Fellenzer and boxing publicist Bill Caplan appear in the movie's opening and closing scenes as Stump's friends and fellow scribes
Edited sentence: Real-life sportswriters Allan Malamud, Doug Krikorian, Jeff Fellenzer and boxing publicist Bill Caplan appear in the movie's opening and closing scenes at a Santa Barbara bar as Stump's friends and fellow scribes