Original sentence: This book opens with Sookie Stackhouse finding the dead body of her friend Lafayette, in the backseat of Andy Bellefleur's car, who had left his car at Merlotte's the night before
Edited sentence: This book opens with Sookie Stackhouse finding the dead body of Miss Jeanette, in the backseat of Andy Bellefleur's car, who had left his car at Merlotte's the night before