Original sentence: While the first several of these complaints were initially dismissed by the FCC for lack of context , eventually FCC began levying fines on Emmis—largely as a result of persistent efforts thereto  from anti-obscenity commissioners Gloria Tristani and Bush appointee Michael Copps
Edited sentence: While the first several of these complaints were initially dismissed by the FCC for lack of context , eventually FCC began levying fines on Emmis—largely as a result of persistent efforts thereto  from anti-obscenity commissioners Gloria Tristani and  Michael Copps