Original sentence: In another flashback, the young Ben and his best friend Sean share Sean's discovery of his parents' adult magazines, and Sean pays a neighbourhood girl called Natalie fifty pence to show him her vulva.Janine-May Tinsley as Adult Natalie (as Janine May Tinsley).Nelly Lyster-Smith as Young Natalie.Originally exhibited as a short film in 2004, it was expanded to feature length in 2006.Other neighbourhood boys repeat this trade.The feature film includes nearly all of the content of the short.While there, Ben encounters Natalie, who is now a stripper, as well as his ex-girlfriend Suzy, who implores him to try their relationship again
Edited sentence: In another flashback, the young Ben and his best friend Sean share Sean's discovery of his parents' adult magazines, and Sean pays a neighbourhood girl fifty pence to show him, and all the neighbourhood boys, her vulva.It includes nearly all of the content of the short.The feature film was produced more than a year after the short was completed.While there, Ben encounters his ex-girlfriend Suzy, who implores him to try their relationship again