Original sentence: Hereford also has successful rugby and cricket teams.Hereford has a thriving nine pin skittle league, formed on 24 October 1902 and today consisting of five divisions.The Hereford Rowing Club uses the River Wye; it is a popular club with a strong junior group.The stretch of river is also used by universities and for other water sports.They were again promoted, this time automatically, during the 2007-08 season
Edited sentence: Also on the banks of the Wye is the Hereford Rowing Club.Hereford also has successful rugby and cricket teams, but these are less famous.Hereford has a thriving and very competitive nine pin skittle league.It is a well used club with a strong junior group.It was formed on 24 October 1902, and today consists of five divisions.The stretch of river is used by universities and is also used by people involved in other water sports.They were again promoted, this time automatically, during the 2007-2008 season after a 3-0 victory at Brentford doubled with Stockport's defeat at Barnet