Original sentence: Hillam is a small village in North Yorkshire, England.Lower parts of the village have been flooded recently.The Ring Tree in the centre of the village is lit at Christmas and children gather to enjoy a Christmas celebration each year, there is also a recently restored pump nearby.The village is served by a pub, the Cross Keys winner of Yorkshire in Bloom awards.The village is very closely linked to Monk Fryston, although both villages maintain separate parish councils
Edited sentence: Hillam is a small village in North Yorkshire near the A63 between the A1 and Selby, North Yorkshire.It predominately serves food to people visiting the Village, most residents chose to visit pubs in nearby Monk Fryston.Lower parts of the Village have been flooded recently.The Ring Tree in the Centre of the Village is lit at Christmas and Children gather to enjoy a Christmas Celebration each year, there is also a recently restored pump nearby.The Village is served by a Pub, the Cross Keys Winner of Yorkshire in Bloom awards.The village is very closely linked to Monk Fryston, although both Villages maintain separate Parish Councils