Original sentence: Many of those organizations which want more of a balance, therefore, do not allow unaccompanied men, and might even encourage unaccompanied women.Social nudity usually attracts more men than women.Some organizations say that they do not discriminate based on gender, but merely require a balance in the numbers of men and women.The increasing acceptance of homosexuality in western society, up to and including same-sex marriage in some places, adds an additional factor in discussing the appropriateness of gender restrictions in social nudity
Edited sentence: In order to approach to a balanced situation, many of the involved organizations in these activities do not allow unaccompanied men, and might even encourage unaccompanied women.Some organizations argue that they do not discriminate based on gender, but merely require a balance in the numbers of men and women; notwithstanding many of them would considerate discriminatory such requirements based on race, origin or any other personal characteristic.Statistics show that more men than women participate in social nudity activities.The increasing acceptance of homosexuality in western society, up to and including recognition as marriage of an union of two people with the same sex (so-called same-sex marriage) in some places, adds an additional factor in discussing the appropriateness of gender restrictions in social nudity