Original sentence: McKenna attended St Ignatius Secondary School in London and East Hertfordshire College and holds two doctorates; the first from LaSalle University (Louisiana) and the second from the International Management Centres Association (IMCA)
Edited sentence: McKenna attended St Ignatius Secondary School in London and East Hertfordshire College and holds two doctorates; the first from LaSalle University (Louisiana) and the second from the business school International Management Centres Association (IMCA)