Original sentence: 1824 – January 21, 1900) was a mountain man of the American Old West.He made his escape into the woods, surviving by eating the Blackfoot's leg, until he reached the cabin of Del Que, his trapping partner, a journey of about two hundred miles.He was listed as five foot, eleven and three-quarter inches (1.5 meters) tall according to government records.One tale ascribed to Johnson (while other sources ascribe it to Boone Helm) was ambushed by a group of Blackfoot warriors in the dead of winter on a foray to visit his Flathead kin, a trip that would have been over five hundred miles (620 Kilometers).Perhaps chief among them is this one: In 1847, his Native American wife was killed by theCrow people, which prompted Johnson to embark on an almost 12-year vendetta against the tribe
Edited sentence: 1824 – January 21, 1900) was a mountain man of the American West.He made his escape into the woods, surviving by eating the Blackfoot's leg, until he reached the cabin of Del Que, his trapping partner, more dead than alive, a journey of about two hundred miles.He was listed as five foot, eleven and three-quarter inches tall according to government records.One tale ascribed to Johnson (while other sources ascribe it to Boone Helm) was ambushed by a group of Blackfoot warriors in the dead of winter on a foray to visit his Flathead kin, a trip that would have been over five hundred miles.Perhaps chief among them is this one: In 1847, his Native American wife was killed by Crow Indians, which prompted Johnson to embark on an almost 12-year war against the tribe