Original sentence: During his career Mark Hoffman fooled some very renowned people.Eventually Hoffman's forged documents became so popular that he couldn't keep up and when people began getting suspicious he sent out mail bombs to his customers, killing two.He sold these documents as a document dealer for profit.He was also a murderer.Hoffman created the infamous Salamander Letter and other forged documents that fooled many experts.Later he remarked that "Hoffman was one of the most skilled forgers in this century.Mark Hoffman was one of the most skilled counterfeiters of the century.The investigating police discovered Hoffman's studio.This ended when one of his bombs went off early, injuring himself
Edited sentence: During his Career Mark Hoffman fooled some very renowned people.He sold these documents as a Document Dealer for profit.He was just that good.Hoffman created the infamous Salamander Letter and other forged documents that even fooled the experts.However after a while Hoffman's forged documents became so popular that he couldn.Later he remarked, "Hoffman was one of the most skilled forgers in this century.Mark Hoffman was one of the most skilled counter fitters of the century; he was also a murderer.This ended when one of his bombs went off early injuring himself, at that point the police investigated and found Hoffman.s studio.t keep up and when people began getting suspicious he sent out mail bombs to his customers; killing two