Original sentence: Kimble obtains tissue samples from the Provasic drug study and convinces a former colleague to review the Provasic trial results and discovers that the results have been altered by Nichols to show no ill effects, and that Nichols is presenting the drug at a reception that evening on the eve of its approval
Edited sentence: Kimble obtains liver function tests from the Provasic drug study and convinces a former colleague to review the Provasic trial results and discovers that the results have been altered by Nichols to show no ill effects, and that Nichols is presenting the drug at a reception that evening on the eve of its approval