Original sentence: An "atheist and a puritan", fervent anticlericalist and anti-Catholic, he supported President Plutarco Elias Calles's war against the Cristeros, a popular rebellion opposed to the enforcement of anticlerical laws
Edited sentence: An "atheist and a puritan", rabid anticlericalist and anti-Catholic, he supported President Plutarco Elias Calles's war against the Cristeros, a popular rebellion opposed to the enforcement of anticlerical laws