Original sentence: " He said the switch arose from his belief that he was now head of the biblical House of David (Koresh is a Hebrew transliteration of Cyrus, the name of the Persian king who allowed the Jews held captive in Babylon to return to Israel).This was based on a vision claimed to have received from God in 1985 during his trip to Israel
Edited sentence: " He said the switch arose from his belief that he was now head of the biblical House of David.(Koresh is a Hebrew transliteration of Cyrus, the name of the Persian king who allowed the Jews held captive in Babylon to return to Israel.)  This was based on a vision he recieved from God in 1985 during his trip to Isreal