Original sentence: Sgrena arrived Rome a day after the fatal incident.She was kidnapped by Iraqi insurgents on 4 February 2005.The US military did not disclose their whereabouts later.US Army medics also treated the injured bodyguard on the scene but he refused a medical evacuation for further assistance.spital shortly after the incident
Edited sentence: Sgrena arrived in Rome a day after the fatal incident.While working in Iraq, she was kidnapped by insurgents on 4 February 2005