Original sentence: Born in [[Aiken, South Carolina|Aiken, South carolina, he learned the sport from his father, who was also a well known polo player.From 1922 to 1940, Hitchcock carried a 10-goal handicap which is the highest ranking in polo from the United states of America Polo Association.He played in his first tournament age 13.Serving in World War II, Hitchcock was killed in an airplane crash near Salisbury, Wiltshire, England when he was unable to pull out of a dive while doing tests.Tommy Hitchcock (February 11, 1900—April 19, 1944) was a polo player of all-time
Edited sentence: Born in Aiken, South Carolina, he learned the sport from his father, himself and outstanding polo player, and played in his first tournament at age 13.From 1922 to 1940, Hitchcock carried a 10-goal handicap, the highest ranking in polo from the U.He was killed near Salisbury, Wiltshire, England.Polo Association.Serving his country in World War II, Hitchcock was killed in an airplane crash when he was unable to come out of a dive when doing tests.Tommy Hitchcock (February 11, 1900—April 19, 1944) is often considered the greatest polo player of all-time