Original sentence: It has two campuses, one in Dazhi, Zhongshan District, Taipei, and the other in Neimen Shiang, Kaohsiung County.Shih Chien University () is a private university in Taiwan
Edited sentence: It has two campuses, one in Dazhi, Zhongshan District, Taipei and  the other in Neimen Shiang, Kaohsiung County, Taiwan Province.Shih Chien University () is a private university in the Republic of China (Taiwan)