Original sentence: Khalistan had support from some of the Sikh community in North America and the UK.Khālistān (), is one possible name for a proposed theocratic  Sikh state.Supported  by many Punjabis, American lobbyists, Sikh immigrants and refugees abroad as well as the Pakistani Inter Services Intelligence agency, the movement reached its peak during mid 1980s under Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale who along with a group of supporters got ready to protect the Golden Temple compound at Amritsar.The separatist movement for Khalistan rose to its peak in 1980s in India
Edited sentence: Khalistan had support from some of the Sikh community internationally.Khālistān (), is one possible name for a proposed Sikh homeland, possibly theocratic and possibly democratic.Supported  by many Punjabis, Sikh immigrants and refugees abroad as well as the Pakistani Inter Services Intelligence agency, the movement reached its peak during mid 1980s under Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale who along with a group of supporters got ready to protect the Golden Temple compound at Amritsar.The separatist movement for Khalistan rose to its peak in the 1980s in India