Original sentence: In 1990, while Chair of Philosophy at the University of Hawaii, Laudan was critical of fellow professor Haunani-Kay Trask, over a debate in the local newspapers regarding her claims about white supremacy and the colonisation of Hawaii.In September 2021, following Dr.Laudan "demanded" to a Vice President of the University that Trask be reprimanded for her published comments.Trask but also the “wider community of Kānaka ʻŌiwi faculty and students” because Laudan’s accusations against Dr.Trask “left lasting wounds among Native Hawaiian faculty and students.Trask] suffered from philosophers at Mānoa in the past.Trask’s death, the University of Mānoa philosophy department recognized that the accusations of racism that Laudan (among others) made against Haunani-Kay Trask were entirely baseless, and “apologize[d] sincerely for the attacks [Dr.” The University of Mānoa philosophy department addressed its apology not only to Dr.” The philosophy department recognized that its members “had a moral obligation to reach out” and apologize for the actions of its past members, such as Laudan
Edited sentence: In 1990, while Chair of Philosophy at the University of Hawaii, Laudan was critical of fellow professor Haunani-Kay Trask, over a debate in the local newspapers regarding her inflammatory claims about white supremacy and the colonisation of Hawaii.Laudan "demanded" to a Vice President of the University that Trask be reprimanded for her unprofessional and bigoted comments