Original sentence: Another contributing factor is the use of handmade, high tech equipment, such as the Rockman, used by artists such as Journey guitarist Neal Schon, the band ZZ Top and Ted Nugent.Guitarist and primary song writer Tom Scholz' blend of musical styles, ranging from classical to 1960s English pop, has resulted in a unique sound, most consistently realized on the first two albums (Boston and Don't Look Back).The original track, "Higher Power," on the Greatest Hits album exhibits a near Germanic, almost Techno influence with its sequencer-sounding keyboards, a sound most fully realized on Corporate America's title track
Edited sentence: Another contributing factor is the use of handmade high tech equipment, such as the Rockman, used by artists such as Journey guitarist Neal Schon, the band ZZ Top and Ted Nugent.Guitarist and primary song writer Tom Scholz is regarded as a musical genius by some.His blend of musical styles, ranging from classical to 1960s English pop, has resulted in a unique sound, most consistently realized on the first two albums (Boston and Don't Look Back).The original track Higher Power on the Greatest Hits album exhibits a near Germanic, almost Techno influence with its sequencer-sounding keyboards, a sound most fully realized on Corporate America's title track