Original sentence: Jessica was trying to process the hard truth that her husband was going to die.One critic relayed Williamson as having taken "things to a superhuman level".The character plunged through a skylight and was killed, the action and plot described as "moving", while Williamson's performance as Jessica as Nash lay dying in the hospital is detailed as "amazing".When Jessica went into the church and prayed for Nash's recovery, viewers were able to see that she was holding on by a thread, "the hope of divine intervention the only thing tethering her to the ground"
Edited sentence: " Williamson was praised for having taken "things to a superhuman level"."Jessica was trying to process the hard truth that her husband was going to die.When Jessica goes into the church and prays for Nash's recovery, this allowed viewers to see that she was holding on by a thread, "the hope of divine intervention the only thing tethering her to the ground".Within the story, the character plunges through a skylight and is killed, the action and plot described as "moving", while Williamson's performance as Jessica as Nash lay dying in the hospital was described as "amazing"