Original sentence: Davison was awarded the National Book Council's Banjo Award for Fiction in 1993 and has been shortlisted for several literary prizes such as The Age Book of the Year Award and the Victorian Premier's Literary Award
Edited sentence: Davison was awarded the National Book Council's Banjo Award for Fiction in 1993 and has been shortlisted for several prestigious literary prizes such as The Age Book of the Year Award and the Victorian Premier's Literary Award