Original sentence: Bukagan Hill - has a view of the city, Panguil bay, Lanao del Norte and Zamboanga del Sur.Bukagan hill will be developed into a tourist attraction due to its historical value and view of the city.Cotta Fort and Cotta Shrine - The Cotta Fort was renovated and restored to its original design in 2006 through the effort of Ozamiz City Mayor Reynaldo Parojinog.Fireworks display's are held at Cotta during Fiesta and holidays.Moreover, the ancient bells can be seen atop Bukagan hill.Naomi's Botanical Garden and Inn.The Cotta entertainment area has free live band concerts and other musical variety shows each weekend.The feast of 'Our Lady of Triumph' at Cotta Shrine is celebrated every July 16 which is also the Charter City anniversary
Edited sentence: Bukagan Hill - it has a nice, breath taking panoramic view of the entire city, Panguil bay, Lanao del Norte and Zamboanga del Sur.Bukagan hill will be developed into a tourist attraction due to its historical value and panoramic view of the city.Colorful and magical fireworks display is always held at Cotta during Fiesta and holidays.Cotta Fort and Cotta Shrine - The cotta fort was finally renovated and restored to its original design in 2006 through the effort of Ozamiz city Mayor Reynaldo Parojinog.It has conference halls,a restaurant, suite cottages, aircontitioned dormitory rooms.It has fully airconditioned rooms for rent, function rooms for special occasions, sports facilities, pottery and a bakery inside the compound.Moreover, the huge ancient bells can be seen atop Bukagan hill.Naomi's Botanical Garden and Inn - The best place to see and buy exotic plants.One can take a pump boat to reach the Dolphin Island where you can see and feed rescued Dolphins and giant sea turtles.One can visit its wildlife sanctuary, fishponds, and hatchery.The Cotta entertainment area becomes alive every weekend for its free live band concerts and other musical variety shows.The Dolphin Island offers SCUBA Diving lessons, and has dive spots that can rival the best of the SCUBA Diving World.The feast of our Lady of Triumph at Cotta shrine is celebrated every July 16 which is also the charter city anniversary