Original sentence: After coaching Romanian national team, and a long career in Italy.He had a brilliant start with Galatasaray, winning the European Super Cup against Real Madrid.Next year,  Galatasaray qualified to second phase in the UEFA Champions League and won Turkish League title under his managership
Edited sentence: After coaching the Romanian national team, and a long career in Italy, he had a brilliant start with Galatasaray, winning the European Super Cup against Real Madrid.Next year,  Galatasaray qualified to the second phase of the UEFA Champions League and won the Turkish League title under his managership