Original sentence: Author and professor Dr.Avery planned to make a movie about a group of friends who discover the September 11, 2001 attacks were an "inside job".Critics also point out the documentary quote mines sources, uses unreliable or out of date sources and cherry picks interview footage.David Ray Griffin has released "Debunking 911 Debunkers: An Answer to Popular Mechanics and Other Defenders of the Official Conspiracy Theory," which provides a detailed rebuttal to the positions taken by Popular Mechanics and NIST.Similar criticisms have been directed at the official 911 Commission.So far, the National Institute of Standards (NIST) has not explained the collapse of either tower or buiding 7 to the satisfaction of many in the scientific community, and the claims made by "Loose Change" have not been repudiated comprehensively by any government entity
Edited sentence: " Critics also point out the documentary quote mines sources, uses unreliable or out of date sources and cherry picks interview footage.After being denied admission twice by Purchase College's film school, Avery planned to make a movie about a group of friends who discover the September 11, 2001 attacks were an "inside job".I have no doubt that every time one of those Loose Change dickwads opens his mouth, a Republican somewhere picks up five votes.Matt Taibbi of Rolling Stone has written that the 9/11 truth movement: "gives supporters of Bush an excuse to dismiss critics of this administration.The claims of Loose Change have been widely refuted by scientific and engineering experts