Original sentence: In March 2000, the actor Liam Neeson, a native of Ballymena, was offered the freedom of the borough by the council, which approved the action by a 12–9 vote
Edited sentence: In March 2000, the Hollywood superstar Liam Neeson, a native of Ballymena, was offered the freedom of the borough by the council, which approved the action by a 12–9 vote.Matthew Banks, former publican, now retired as a specialist in the field of bo often frequenting the countryman