Original sentence: Emirates Golf Club located in Dubai, United Arab Emirates is a 36-hole golf course.Sheikh Rashid fell ill and was never able to give his legal support for the specific use of the land.The grand opening was one of the last personal appearances President Zia made, as he was assassinated that same year when his plane exploded on takeoff in Pakistan.The idea of a totally grassed championship golf course in Dubai was brought about by American businessman Larry Trenary and British businessman George Atkinson, both living in Dubai on a full-time basis.With Sheikh Rashid's passing, the idea for a championship golf course in the Middle East was still just a dream
Edited sentence: Emirates Golf Club located in Dubai, UAE is a 36-hole golf course in Dubai.The idea of a totally grassed championship golf course in Dubai was brought about by American businessman, Larry Trenary and British businessman George Atkinson, both living in Dubai on a full-time basis.Unfortunately that was one of the last personal appearances President Zia made, as he was assassinated that same year when his plane exploded on takeoff in Pakistan.Unfortunately, Sheikh Rashid fell ill and was never able to give his legal support for the specific use of the land.With Sheikh Rashid's passing, the idea for a championship golf course in the middle east was still just a dream