Original sentence: After defeating Prithvirāj Chauhān, Muḥammad Ghorī marched onwards unchallenged towards Ajmer.As the battle continued the Ghorid army was exhausted, short of water, and unfamiliar with the scale of its opponent it retreated in apparent disarray towards the Afghan highlands.At dusk, Ghorī led a force of heavily-armored horsemen to the center of the Rajput line which collapsed into confusion, and Prithvirāj was killed.The two wings of the Turkic army were turned and fled while Muḥammad Ghorī held out in the centre with the body of the soldiers; here he met Govindā-Rāj in personal combat, and he lost his front teeth to Sultan Muḥammad Ghorī's lance
Edited sentence: After begging for his life and swearing loyalty he was surprisingly released by Prithviraj.After defeating Prithvirāj Chauhān, Muḥammad Ghorī armies led by his "slave" Abyak marched onwards unchallenged towards Ajmer.As the battle continued the Ghorid army was exhausted, short of water, and unfamiliar with the scale of its opponent.At dusk, Ghorī led a force of heavily-armored horsemen to the center of the Rajput line which collapsed into confusion, and Prithvirāj was Captured and taken back to Ghazvi where he was blinded.But the "Slave" Appointed by Muhammad Ghori had established control over Delhi Sultanate by that time.GovindaRaj wounded ghori during the battle.Later on although he was blinded he shot an arrow in Ghori's chest (apparently using his "shashtra vidya" learned during his childhood in gurukul).Muḥammad Ghorī was later captured by Prithviraj and taken to Rajput base.The two wings of the Turkic army were turned and fled while Muḥammad Ghorī held out in the centre with the body of the soldiers; here he met Govindā-Rāj in personal combat, Ghori lost his front teeth to GovindaRaj's Lance and Muhammad Ghori was taken off the battlefield