Original sentence: Cowans has a daughter named Kimberley Lucy, is currently a regular commentator on Sky News and BBC 24 and has his own Sports Promotions company
Edited sentence: A brilliant and legendary cricketer, not just for his playing, but also for being extraordinarily handsome and a true gentlman.He has a daughter named Kimberley Lucy, is currently a regular commentator on Sky News and BBC 24 and has his own Sports Promotions company