Original sentence: He had a love affair with Carrie, subsequently married her,she became deceased(written out of show)hit by a drunk driver a judge and then, with Mercedes,(Alison Sealy-Smith), the no-nonsense Caribbean Canadian secretary, and later joined the firm.Rob Diamond (Albert Schultz) handles the business affairs of the firm
Edited sentence: Carrie was struck and killed by a judge who was driving drunk(this wrote Carrie out of the show).Dillon had a love affair with Carrie, subsequently married her.Dillon then had a relationship with Mercedes,(Alison Sealy-Smith), the no-nonsense Caribbean Canadian secretary, and later joined the firm.Rob Diamond (Albert Schultz)joins as a partner, additionally handling the business affairs of the firm.They had one adopted child