Original sentence: In 1879, with a portrait Tout passé, Louise was the only student from the Académie Julian women’s atelier to debut at the Paris Salon.She eventually became the third woman, and the first foreign woman to be bestowed France’s Legion of Honor award
Edited sentence: In 1879, with a portrait Tout passé, Louise was the only student from the Académie Julian women’s atelier to debut at the prestigious Paris Salon.She eventually became the third woman, and the first foreign woman to be bestowed France’s prestigious Legion of Honor award