Original sentence: In July 2004, the Union released a addendum to the report in which they allege further abuses of science by the Bush administration including altering reports on West Virginia strip mining and choosing industry-friendly scientists over well-qualified nominees such as Nobel laureate Torsten Wiesel.The Union of Concerned Scientists or UCS is a non-profit advocacy group of scientists and citizens based in Cambridge, Massachusetts, United States
Edited sentence: In July 2004, the Union released a addendum to the report in which they allege further abuses of science by the Bush administration including altering reports on West Virginia strip mining and choosing industry-friendly scientists over other nominees such as Nobel laureate Torsten Wiesel.The Union of Concerned Scientists or UCS is a non-profit, leftist advocacy group of scientists and citizens based in Cambridge, Massachusetts, United States.Though, only a few of the Nobel Laureates in question have expertise in environmental science