Original sentence: A girl named Alonna walks down the street, followed by a group of vampires.When the vampires turn around, Alonna's brother Gunn and many others are there, armed and ready for a fight
Edited sentence: A girl named Alonna Gunnwalks down the street, followed by a group of vampires.When the vampires turn around, Alonna's brother Charles Gunn and many others are there, armed and ready for a fight