Original sentence: Thames Clippers operates a direct cross river ferry service between Canary Wharf Pier and the Hilton Docklands Nelson Dock Pier at the Hilton Hotel in Rotherhithe.The ferry can be used both by guests of the hotel as well as by passengers not staying at the hotel
Edited sentence: Thames Clippers operates a direct ferry service between Canary Wharf Pier and the Hilton Hotel London Docklands directly across the Thames from Canary Wharf in Rotherhithe.The ferry can be used both by guests of the hotel as well as by normal passengers not staying at the hotel