Original sentence: Salem attended the Maharaja's College of Ernakulam for eleventh and twelfth grades and then moved to Chennai to earn his Bachelor of Arts, becoming the first college graduate of the mesucharim.Salem was born in 1882 to a family of meshuchrarim (freed Jews) in Cochin, Kerala.The mesucharim lacked prayer rights and were forced to be silent in the synagogue.The mesucharim were some of the first Jews to arrive in Kerala, and were discriminated against by the "White Jews" who considered themselves racially superior to the already residing Jews, terming them mesucharim meaning "freed slave" in Hebrew.While in Chennai he also earned his law degree, before returning to Cochin
Edited sentence: Jews, who, considered themselves racially superior to the already residing Jews, terming them Mesucharim meaning "freed slave" in Hebrew.Salem attended the Maharaja's College of Ernakulam for eleventh and twelfth grades and then moved to Chennai to earn his degree asBachelor of Arts, becoming the first college graduate of the Mesucharim.Salem was born in 1882 to a family of Meshuchrarim (freed Jews) in Cochin, Kerala.The Mesucharim lacked prayer rights and were forced to be silent in the synagogue.The Mesucharim were some of the first Jews to arrive in Kerala, and were discriminated against by the White.Whilst in Chennai he also earned his law degree, before returning to Cochin