Original sentence: He has also taken courses at the International Institute of Journalism in Berlin and was a one-time Chevening Scholar.He proceeded to the University of Ghana's School of Communications.He was sponsored by the Thompson Foundation to study at the University of Wales in Cardiff.Kwaku received his secondary education at Achimota School.Paul, Minnesota, US
Edited sentence: Founded by a past colonial Governor, Achimota is renowned for having trained exceedingly more national leaders than even its closest rivals Mfantsipim, Prempeh, Presec, and Yaa Asantewaa.He proceeded to the University of Ghana's School of Communications, also the premium school of journalism in Ghana.He was sponsored by the Thmopson Foundation to study at the University of Wales in Cardiff, has taken courses at the International Institute of Journalism in Berlin, and was a one-time Chevening Scholar.Kwaku received his secondary education from one of Ghana's foremost boarding schools, Achimota College.Paul, Minnesota