Original sentence: According to the New York Times, the first official on the scene, Guyanese Coroner was Dr.Although he made no final determination, and examined only a portion of the bodies, based upon factors such that many people in Jonestown were children incapable of consent to suicide and that many bodies had injection marks, Mootoo speculated that a majority of those dead in Jonestown may have been murdered.For a number of reasons, some legal and logistical, the bodies were not flown out of the remote jungle location of Jonestown for up to a week, allowing significant decomposition to occur, before being flown to New Jersey.However, rather than being in Jonestown, Richard Dwyer was actually miles away at the Port Kaituma airstrip in front of numerous witnesses, including reporters for the Washington Post and San Franscisco Chronicle
Edited sentence: According to the New York Times, the first official on the scene, Guyanese Coroner Dr.However, rather than being in Jonestown, Richard Dwyer was actually miles away at the Port Kaituma airstrip.Mootoo, determined that all but three of the people in Jonestown had been murdered.The bodies were left to rot in the Guyanese jungle for up to a week before being flown to New Jersey