Original sentence: Kate and Mark get back together, but Paul does not approve of the relationship and Kate moves out.Kate continues to push Mark away, but when she is confronted by his ex-girlfriend, Kate starts thinking about her past relationships.Shortly after telling their friends, Kate is shot and she dies
Edited sentence: Kate and Mark get back together but Paul does not approve of the relationship and Kate moves out.Kate continues to push Mark away but when she is confronted by his ex-girlfriend, Kate starts thinking about her past relationships.Shortly after telling their friends, Kate is shot and she dies in the most poorly written & pathetic episode Neighbours have ever done