Original sentence: He recovers and locates the tribe in which Rachel Lane is, but she refuses the legacy.His reason is revulsion to years of fighting with & embarrassment from his family, as well as their greed — much of which was due to his neglect of his children and multiple affairs (both personal and business).In the end of the book, the relatives of Troy Phelan finally get fifty million dollars each (minus lawyers' fees) to stop turning the will into a legal quagmire.Nate O'Riley, a recovering alcoholic, is sent to Brazil, where Rachel is living as a missionary.The journey into the Pantanal of South America by way of Corumbá, Brazil nearly kills Nate, for he drinks nearly two bottles of vodka.They also brought Nichollette, Troy's latest secretary, to testify that Troy had sex with her, suggesting that he was a philandrous person.They even paid Malcolm Snead, Troy Phelan's assistant, to testify during the deposition that Troy was crazy on the day he signed the will.Troy Phelan, an eccentric & elderly billionaire, commits suicide minutes after leaving his vast fortune to an illegitimate daughter, Rachel Lane, instead of his six children by three marriages
Edited sentence: His reason is revulsion to years of fighting with, and embarrassment from, his family, as well as their greed — much of which was due to his neglect of his children and multiple affairs (both personal and business).Nate O'Riley, a high-powered litigation lawyer and now recovering alcoholic, is sent to Brazil, where Rachel is believed to be living as a missionary.She refuses the legacy or anything connected with it.The journey into the Pantanal of South America by way of Corumbá, Brazil nearly kills Nate, but finally he and his guide locate the tribe with which Rachel Lane is living.To settle the matter, Nate agrees that the relatives of Troy Phelan will be paid fifty million dollars each (minus lawyers' fees) to stop turning the will contest into a legal quagmire.Troy Phelan, an eccentric and elderly billionaire, commits suicide minutes after leaving his vast fortune to an illegitimate daughter, Rachel Lane, instead of his six children by three marriages