Original sentence: During this time Spivak was also band leader and co-owner with Charlie Grubbs of "Ye Olde Fireplace", a restaurant-nightclub in Greenville, S.He learned to play trumpet when he was ten years old and played in his high school band, going on to work with local groups before joining Johnny Cavallaro's orchestra.He played on "Solo Hop" in 1935 by Glenn Miller and the Glenn Miller Orchestra.He played with Paul Specht's band for most of 1924 to 1930, then spent time with Ben Pollack (1931–1934), the brothers Tommy and Jimmy Dorsey(1934–1935), and Ray Noble (1935– 1936).He scouted top trumpeter Paul Fredricks (formerly of Alvino Rey's Orchestra) just as Fredricks left the service at the end of World War II in 1946.Though it failed within a year, he tried again shortly afterwards, this time taking over the existing band of Bill Downer and making a success of it
Edited sentence: Charlie Grubbs of "Ye Olde Fireplace", a restaurant-nightclub in Greenville, S.During this time Spivak was also band leader and co-owner with Mr.He played on "Solo Hop" in 1935 by Glenn Miller and His Orchestra.He played with Paul Specht's band for most of 1924 to 1930, then spent time with Ben Pollack (1931–1934), the Dorsey brothers (1934–1935), and Ray Noble (1935– 1936).He scouted top trumpeter Paul Fredricks (formerly of Alvino Rey's Orchestra) just as Fredricks left the service at the end of the War in 1946.Though it failed within a year, he tried again shortly afterwards, this time taking over an existing band (Bill Downer's) and  making a success of it.What is certain is that he learned to play trumpet when he was ten years old, and played in his high school band, going on to work with local groups before joining Johnny Cavallaro's orchestra