Original sentence: His tally by month's end stood at 21 victories.In May, he was awarded the Knight's Cross with Swords of the Royal House Order of Hohenzollern on the 6th, his native Bavaria's Military Order of Max Joseph on the 11th, and the Pour le Merite on the 17th
Edited sentence: He scored his 21st triumph and received his native Bavaria's Military Order of Max Joseph on the 11th The Pour le Merite followed on the 17th.He was granted four weeks leave upon receipt of the Blue Max.In May, he was awarded the Knight's Cross with Swords of the Royal House Order of Hohenzollern on the 6th