Original sentence: Adonis joined the Labour Party until 1995.Adonis' previous role in the Number 10 Policy Unit is generally accepted as having driven most of Labour's key education reforms since the 1997 general election - most notably the programme of city academies.As he was not a Member of Parliament, on appointment as a Minister he was created a life peer.He served as adviser on education, public services and constitutional reform from 1998 to 2005 and headed the Unit as a whole from 2001 until 2003.Lord Adonis is son of Nicos Adonis, a retired postman and a former Greek Cypriot waiter,  who immigrated in 1960 and Josephine Leadbeater alias Stevens (born 1943), a nurse who left Andrew Adonis as a toddler and who had no communication with him since, because - as she puts it - Nicos Adonis threatened her.Lord and Lady Adonis and their son and daughter live in Islington.On 16 May he was created Baron Adonis, of Camden Town in the London Borough of Camden
Edited sentence: Adonis did not actually join the Labour Party until 1995.As an ex-academic and non-elected political parvenu, Adonis is generally credited with being behind most of Labour's key educational policies since coming to power in the 1997 general election - most notably the programme of city academies.As he was not a Member of Parliament, on appointment as a Minister he was also nominated for a life peerage, and on 16 May he was created Baron Adonis, of Camden Town in the London Borough of Camden.From 1998 to 2005 he was a political advisor on education, public services, and constitutional reform in the Policy Unit for the Labour Government under Tony Blair having headed the Unit as a whole from 2001 until 2003.Lord Andrew Adonis is son of Nicos Adonis, a retired postman and a former Greek Cypriot waiter,  who immigrated in 1960 and Josephine Leadbeater alias Stevens (born 1943), a nurse who left Andrew Adonis as a toddler and who had no communication with him since, because - as she puts it - Nicos Adonis threatened her.Lord and Lady Adonis and their Honourable son and doughter live in Islington/London