Original sentence: On the night her father died, the Chief Justice of Kenya Sir Horace Hearne, who would later accompany the Royal Party back to the UK, escorted the Princess Elizabeth, as she then was, to a dinner at the Treetops Hotel, which is now a very popular tourist retreat in Kenya.The royal party returned immediately to England
Edited sentence: On the night her father died, Sir Horace Hearne, Chief Justice of Kenya, escorted the Princess Elizabeth, as she then was, to a dinner at the Treetops Hotel, which is now a very popular tourist retreat in Kenya.The royal party, including Hearne, amongst others, returned immediately to England