Original sentence: After the war Hudis decided to become a playwright, but only one of his plays Here Is The News met with critical success.Born in Stepney, England, Hudis began his writing career on a local newspaper, the Hampstead & Highgate Express.He obliged and the screenplay became the first of the Carry On... film series as Carry On Sergeant.His American television writing credits include, The Wild Wild West,  The F.Hudis continues to write for film, TV and theatre.In 1966 Hudis decided to move permanently to the United States as he had received offers of work following the commercial success of Carry On Nurse over there.In 2008 Norman wrote his autobiography No Laughing Matter: How I Carried On, published by Apex Publishing Ltd.Norman Hudis (born July 27, 1922) is a British writer for film, theatre and television and is most closely associated with the first six of the Carry On... film series, for which he wrote the screenplays.This was enough to get him noticed by Pinewood Studios, who offered him a job as trainee screenwriter
Edited sentence: After the war Hudis decided to become a playwright, unfortunately only one of his plays Here Is The News met with critical success.He obliged and the screenplay became the first of the enormously successful Carry On... film series as Carry On Sergeant.He started his writing career on a local newspaper, the Hampstead & Highgate Express.His US TV writing credits include, The Wild Wild West,  The F.In 1966 Hudis decided to move permanently to the U.In 2008, Hudis wrote his autobiography No Laughing Matter: How I Carried On, published by Apex Publishing Ltd.Norman Hudis (born July 27, 1922 in Stepney, England) is a British writer for film, theatre and TV and is most closely associated with the first six of the Carry On... film series, for which he wrote the screenplays.Norman Hudis continues to write for film, TV and theatre.This small success was enough to get him noticed by Pinewood Studios, who offered him a job as trainee screenwriter.as he had received offers of work following the commercial success of Carry On Nurse over there