Original sentence: Between Collinswood and the tracks stands the Strawberry Train, which is a steam engine and single car which is roped off in such a way that children can safely climb into the engine and car.In the early 1900's, Ponchatoula was one of only two ways to get to New Orleans by land, giving it the title of "Gateway to New Orleans".Next door is the Art Car:  a train car which has been turned into an art gallery for local painters.Ponchatoula is a name signifying "falling hair", "hanging hair", or "flowing hair" from the Choctaw Pashi "hair" and itula or itola "to fall, "to hang" or "flowing".Ponchatoula is a small town, but it has several tourist attractions.The Chamber of Commerce's office is located on Highway 22 at the railroad tracks and has information of these and other local sights both in Ponchatoula and in the surrounding area
Edited sentence: Back in the early 1900's Ponchatoula was one of only two ways to get to New Orleans by land, giving it the title of "Gateway to New Orleans".Between Collinswood and the tracks stands the Strawberry Train - a steam engine and single car which is roped off in such a way that children, and those young at heart, can safely climb into the engine and car.If in doubt of what to do in Ponchatoula, The Chamber of Commerce's office, in the heart of town on Highway 22 at the railroad tracks, has information of these and other local sights both in Ponchatoula and in the surrounding area.Next door is the Art Car - a train car which has been turned into an art gallery for local painters.Ponchatoula is a puzzling name signifying "falling hair", "hanging hair", or "flowing hair" from the Choctaw Pashi "hair" and itula or itola "to fall, "to hang" or "flowing".Ponchatoula is a small town, but it has several things to see