Original sentence: The papers were appertaining to a case in which a mother was found to have deliberately harmed her child, After taking legal advice from a goverment lawyer in the law officers' department Harriet Harman then passed then on to the children's minister, Margaret Hodge
Edited sentence: The papers were appertaining to a case in which a mother was found to have deliberately harmed her child, After taking legal advice from a goverment lawyer in the law officers' department Harriet Harman then passed the papers on to the children's minister, Margaret Hodge