Original sentence: As Prime Minister, Sharon orchestrated the construction of the Israeli West Bank barrier in 2002–03 and Israel's unilateral disengagement from the Gaza Strip in 2005.From the 1970s through to the 1990s, Sharon championed construction of Israeli settlements in the West Bank and Gaza Strip.He became an instrumental figure in the creation of Unit 101 and the reprisal operations, as well as in the 1956 Suez Crisis, the Six-Day War of 1967, the War of Attrition, and the Yom-Kippur War of 1973
Edited sentence: As Israel's Prime Minister (2001-2006), Sharon orchestrated the construction of the Israeli West Bank barrier in 2002 and Israel's unilateral disengagement from the Gaza Strip in 2004–05.From the 1970s through to the 1990s, Sharon championed construction of Israeli settlements in the occupied West Bank and Gaza Strip.He became an instrumental figure in the creation of Unit 101 and the reprisal operations, including the 1953 Qibya massacre of Palestinian villagers, as well as in the 1956 Suez Crisis, the Six-Day War of 1967, the War of Attrition, and the Yom-Kippur War of 1973