Original sentence: Among the women playing Edward's many mistresses included Moira Redmond as the Alice Keppel and Carolyn Seymour as Daisy Greville.The series also featured Sir John Gielgud as Benjamin Disraeli, Michael Hordern as William Gladstone, Harry Andrews as young Edward's tutor Colonel Bruce, Jane Lapotaire as Empress Marie of Russia (sister to Alexandra and mother of Czar Nicholas II), Christopher Neame as Kaiser Wilhelm II (King Edward's own nephew) and, in one of his earliest roles, Charles Dance as Edward's eldest son Eddy, who died at the young age of 21
Edited sentence: Among the women playing Edward's many mistresses included Moira Redmond as the dutiful Alice Keppel and Carolyn Seymour as the scheming and scandalous Daisy Greville.The series also featured Sir John Gielgud as Benjamin Disraeli, Michael Hordern as William Gladstone, Harry Andrews as young Edward's tutor Colonel Bruce, Jane Lapotaire as Empress Marie of Russia (sister to Alexandra and mother of Czar Nicholas II), Christopher Neame as the infamous Kaiser Wilhelm II (King Edward's own nephew) and, in one of his earliest roles, Charles Dance as Edward's eldest son Eddy, who died at the young age of 21