Original sentence: Besides Adamson, Tattoo included good friend William Simpson, who would also play bass guitar for his next band, The Skids.Originally the band played covers of Status Quo, but it split up when Adamson got more interested in Roxy Music and Mott the Hoople
Edited sentence: Besides Adamson, Tattoo included his friend William Simpson, who would also play bass guitar for his next band, The Skids