Original sentence: Professor Gary Witherspoon, an anthropologist and linguist, faults what he believes to be the inaccurate journalism and biased quality of the investigation that have marked the affair..  Similarly, Professor Tom Mayer criticized what he believes to be the politically motivated tenor of the investigation of Churchill:.Two professors written in defense of Churchill and questioned the politics motivating his accusers
Edited sentence: Professor Gary Witherspoon, a preeminent anthropologist and linguist, faults the inaccurate journalism and biased quality of the investigation that have marked the affair..  Similarly, Professor Tom Mayer excoriates the politically motivated tenor of the investigation of Churchill:.Two prominent professors unconnected to Professor Churchill have written in defense of Churchill and questioned the politics motivating his accusers