Original sentence: Derry is near the border with the Republic of Ireland and also serves the west of County Londonderry.Derry is one of the longest continuously inhabited places in Ireland.Derry or Londonderry ( or ), often called the Maiden City, is a city in Northern Ireland.Main article: History of Derry.The Derry Urban Area (including Culmore, New Buildings and Strathfoyle) had a population of 90,663, and is the second-largest city in Northern Ireland, the fourth on the island of Ireland
Edited sentence: Londonderry ( or ), often called the Maiden City, is a city in Northern Ireland.Londonderry is one of the longest continuously inhabited places in Ireland.Londonderry/Derry is near the border with the Republic of Ireland and also serves the west of County Londonderry.Main article: History of Londonderry.The Londonderry Urban Area (including Culmore, New Buildings and Strathfoyle) had a population of 90,663, and is the second-largest city in Northern Ireland, the fourth on the island of Ireland