Original sentence: Described by George as a Virgo and a career legal secretary who enjoys ice skating and John Grisham novels,   Joy is organized, neurotic, and a bit foul-mouthed.George observed that her mother’s name is an ironic misnomer, noting, "Who had the nerve to name you 'Joy'.Joy also confided to George (as Millie) that she does not think she was a very good mother.The aftermath of George's death was made worse for Joy by her husband's infidelity and her difficulty communicating with her remaining daughter.Unable to afford the childhood home of Georgia and Reggie, Joy began scouting with Reggie for other accommodations—as a result of which she met and began dating Angelo
Edited sentence: Described by George as a Virgo and a career legal secretary who enjoys ice skating and John Grisham novels.George's death threw her into a deep depression, made worse by her husband's infidelity and her inability to communicate with her remaining daughter.Her name is an ironic misnomer, as her life is "joyless".Indeed, Joy's profound general dissatisfaction and frustration is summed in George's observation, "Who had the nerve to name you 'Joy'.Joy also confided to George (as Millie) that she doesn't think she was a very good mother.She does not handle this very well and in many instances acts emotionally abusive.She is organized, neurotic, and a bit foul-mouthed.Unable to afford the childhood home of Georgia and Reggie, Joy began scouting with Reggie for other accommodations—as a result of which she met and began dating Angelo, but the timing was off as it can be after a recent divorce