Original sentence: " BYU also stated that the academic freedom judgement process lacked transparency and objectivity." In 1970, the AAUP had adopted a statement of Interpretive Comments in which the AAUP had stated, "Most church-related institutions no longer need or desire the departure from the principle of academic freedom implied in the 1940 Statement, and we do not endorse such a departure".BYU also does not allow off-campus groups to use the campus for protests or demonstrations.In 1965, the AAUP had stated that "satisfactory conditions of academic freedom and tenure now prevail at Gonzaga.In 1998, the AAUP voted to enter BYU on its list of censured organizations, on which it remains to the present, together with 42 other institutions.The AAUP's decision remained, however
Edited sentence: " In 1965, however, the AAUP had stated that "satisfactory conditions of academic freedom and tenure now prevail at Gonzaga".BYU does not allow off-campus groups to use the campus for protests or demonstrations.BYU's arguments, however, failed to persuade the AAUP, which had changed its views since 1940.In 1970, the AAUP had adopted a statement of Interpretive Comments in which the AAUP had stated, "Most church-related institutions no longer need or desire the departure from the principle of academic freedom implied in the 1940 Statement, and we do not endorse such a departure".Nor was the AAUP persuaded by BYU's response to criticisms that the academic freedom process lacked transparency and objectivity.Thus, in 1998, the AAUP voted to enter BYU on its list of censured organizations, on which it remains to the present, together with 42 other institutions