Original sentence: St Joseph’s Catholic College, Bradford has been educating girls for a century and is proud of the significant contribution the College has made over the decades to the city of Bradford and to many parts of the world
Edited sentence: St Joseph’s Catholic College, Bradford has been educating girls for a century and is rightly proud of the significant contribution the College has made over the decades to the city of Bradford and to many parts of the world.We owe an immense debt of gratitude to the nuns who founded the College and whose ideals and mission we still strive to maintain.We preserve the precious heritage given to us while at the same time we accept the challenges and opportunities of today’s fast moving world