Original sentence: Farnell previously offered a 24-hour sales and warehouse service, and was the first company in its field to offer such a service.However, this service was discontinued as of February 2007
Edited sentence: Farnell previously offered a 24-hour sales and warehouse service which many of it's customers found invaluable and was the first company in its field to offer such a service.However, this service was discontinued as of February 2007 giving its competitors a major edge in the industry