Original sentence: Guzmán’s prowess as a singing actress has made her a favorite of many well-known directors such as John Schlesinger, William Friedkin, Francesca Zambello, Franco Zeffirelli, Sir Peter Hall, and Robert Wilson; these same talents have made her popular with contemporary composers as well: Tobias Picker (Fantastic Mr.Her award-winning one-woman show, Don’t Be Afraid:  It’s Just Opera, has been performed for more than 200,000 students nationwide.She garnered international acclaim for her portrayal of the title role in Carmen for Houston Grand Opera's critically acclaimed multimedia production (known as the “MTV Carmen”), a role she has repeated more than one hundred times in major houses across the globe.She is an advocate of arts in education, serving on the [USC Thorntan School of Music Board of Advisors],Board of UCLA’s Design for Sharing, the Education Committee of Los Angeles Opera, and the [Pasadena Arts Coun]cil,
Edited sentence: Guzmán's prowess as a singing actress has made her a favorite of many well-known directors such as John Schlesinger, William Friedkin, Francesca Zambello, Franco Zeffirelli, Sir Peter Hall, and Robert Wilson; these same talents have made her popular with contemporary composers as well: Tobias Picker (Fantastic Mr.Her award-winning one-woman show, Don't Be Afraid:  It's Just Opera, has been performed for more than 200,000 students nationwide.She garnered international acclaim for her portrayal of the title role in Carmen for Houston Grand Opera's critically acclaimed multimedia production (known as the "MTV Carmen"), a role she has repeated more than one hundred times in major houses across the globe.She is an advocate of arts in education, serving on the [USC Thorntan School of Music Board of Advisors],Board of UCLA's Design for Sharing, the Education Committee of Los Angeles Opera, and the [Pasadena Arts Coun]cil,