Original sentence: The term has also been used more narrowly, however, to refer only to religions outside the very large group of so-called Axial Age faiths that encompass both the Abrahamic religions and the chief Dharmic religions such as Hinduism and Buddhism, this however is not representative of how pagansism has historically been viewed from a Christian perspective
Edited sentence: The term can also be defined more narrowly, however, to refer only to religions outside the very large group of so-called Axial Age faiths that encompass both the Abrahamic religions and the chief Dharmic religions such as Hinduism and Buddhism.Under this definition, contemporary paganism is a much smaller phenomeon