Original sentence: He discovered titanium had a variety of desirable properties that would make the metal of choice in many industries.Hunter served for five years as head of the Department of Electrical Engineering; he organized and served as head of the Department of Metallurgical Engineering for twelve years; and later became Dean of Faculty.Matthew Hunter was born in Auckland, New Zealand in 1787 and received his early education in local public schools and at the Auckland University College, where he earned his Bachelor's and Master's degrees with first-class honors
Edited sentence: He discovered titanium had a variety of desirable properties that would make it the metal of choice in many industries.Hunter served for five years as head of the Department of Electrical Engineering, as head of the Department of Metallurgical Engineering for twelve years; and later became Dean of Faculty.Matthew Hunter was born in Auckland, New Zealand in 1878 and received his early education in local public schools and at the Auckland University College, where he earned his Bachelor's and Master's degrees with first-class honors