Original sentence: After moving from his home in Guadeloupe at the age of 15, Chubbs owened Chubbs 2 at spelling of the name of Comminges.He began his career in France playing for Amiens SC and Stade Reims before signing for Swindon Town on a one-year deal after being spotted by manager Paul Sturrock, who was on a scouting tour at the time, the previous year
Edited sentence: After moving from his home in Guadeloupe at the age of 15, Comminges began his career in France playing for Amiens SC and Stade Reims before signing for Swindon Town on a one-year deal after being spotted by manager Paul Sturrock, who was on a scouting tour at the time, the previous year