Original sentence: He fell from the 17th floor of the Harrah's Casino and Hotel in Reno.She also notes how she felt when he insisted on traveling to Las Vegas alone when she asked to accompany him, suggesting he may have been planning a suicide attempt
Edited sentence: He apparently jumped from the 17th floor of the Harrah's Casino and Hotel in Reno.She also notes how she felt when he insisted on traveling to Las Vegas alone when she asked to accompany him, suggesting he may have been planning this suicide attempt