Original sentence: On June 8, 2005,.The "Downing Street memo", sometimes described by critics of the 2003 Iraq War as the "smoking gun memo", is a document obtained from an undisclosed source containing minutes taken during a meeting, on July 23, 2002, among United Kingdom government, defense and intelligence figures, discussing the build-up to the war.The liberal media-watchdog organization Fairness and Accuracy in Reporting has been among those that have criticized the U.media's coverage of the memo as disturbingly poor
Edited sentence: The "Downing Street memo", sometimes described as the "smoking gun memo", is a document obtained from an undisclosed source containing minutes taken during a meeting, on July 23, 2002, among United Kingdom government, defense and intelligence figures, discussing the build-up to the 2003 Iraq War.The American media’s coverage of the memo has been criticized as disturbingly poor by campaigning organizations such as Fairness and Accuracy in Reporting   On June 8, 2005,