Original sentence: Disneyland Resort Paris attracts more than 12 million visitors per year and more than 150 million since opening.Disneyland Resort Paris has plans to expand over the next few years with addition of several new rides: Buzz Lightyear Laser Blast will open at Disneyland Park in April 2006; a new land, Toon Studios, will open at the Walt Disney Studios in 2007; and The Twilight Zone Tower of Terror will open at the Walt Disney Studios in 2007
Edited sentence: Disneyland Resort Paris has plans to expand over the next few years with addition of several new rides: Buzz Lightyear Laser Blast will open at Disneyland Park in April 2006; a new land, Toon Studios, will open at the Walt Disney Studios in 2007; and the long-awaited Tower of Terror will open at the Walt Disney Studios in 2007.Disneyland Resort Paris is now the number one tourist destination in Europe with more than 12 million visitors per year and more than 150 million since opening