Original sentence: Some students are opposed to this, believing that the Union should be using its resources to provide services for students, rather than using them on campaigns with which not all students agree with.The student union is also currently focused on fighting the implementation of the recently proposed Voluntary Student Unionism bill, that would abolish the compulsory collection of the University's Amenity and Services Fee (most of which is passed onto the Student Union), thus reducing its income
Edited sentence: Against the wishes of average students, not involved with the political shenadigans of the student politicians, the student union is currently focused on fighting the implementation of the recently proposed Voluntary Student Unionism bill, that would abolish the compulsory collection of the University's Amenity and Services Fee (most of which is passed onto the Student Union), as opposed to actually doing something for students