Original sentence: He joined the Victoria College Department of English (in Victoria, British Columbia} in 1961.He studied law at the University of South Africa, and English literature at Cambridge, later obtaining his Ph.John Desmond Peter (1921-1983), English literature scholar, essayist, and novelist, was born in South Africa.Peter came to Canada in 1950 and for 11 years taught English at the University of Manitoba
Edited sentence: He joined the Victoria College Department of English in 1961.He studied law at the University of South Africa, and English literature at Cambridge University, later obtaining his Ph.John Desmond Peter (1921-1983) was an English literature scholar, essayist, and novelist, was born in South Africa.Peter came to Canada in 1950 and taught English at the University of Manitoba for eleven years