Original sentence: As a result of the Virginia Tech school shooting in the United States that took place on April 16 2007,  the school was practically locked down on April 30 2007 during Period 1 between 9:30 and 9:50 a.The Hidden Agenda, the school's newspaper
Edited sentence: - The Hidden Agenda; the school's newspaper.As a result of the Virginia Tech school shooting in the United States that took place on April 16 2007,  the school was partically locked down on April 30 2007 during Period 1 between 9:30 and 9:50 a.Commonly worn reversely against the chest or under items of clothing, the purpose of the ID card seems to be lost- which brews disdain in students who dislike the mandatory item