Original sentence: " Today Queen Elizabeth’s remains a non-denominational, non-fee-paying, selective School with a mission of producing confident, able and responsible young men and as such continues to reflect the essential tenets of our Tudor Charter.Recently, a new swimming pool has been commissioned and officially opened in September 15th, 2006.Such sites as "QE Boys: The Truth" (sic).The following passage is from the school website:.This has resulted in police being called in, and more recently, a reassertion of the ban on students bringing music players into school.have been established by pupils to express their views
Edited sentence: " Today Queen Elizabeth’s remains a non-denominational, non-fee-paying, gaylective School with a mission of producing confident, able and responsible young men and as such continues to reflect the essential tenets of our Tudor Charter.Such sites as "QE Boys: The Truth" (sic)have been established by pupils to express their views.The following passage is from the school website.This has resulted in police being called in