Original sentence: "  The entire campus is by and large homogenous in design and appearance with only one building, the Miami University Art Museum, utilizing modern architecture.Miami is home to the McGuffey School of Education, named for Professor William Holmes McGuffey, who taught there and wrote the McGuffey Readers while at the school.Miami is ranked 21st among public national universities, 60th among all national universities according to the 2007 U.The Miami campus features modified neo-Georgian red brick buildings on an open, tree-shaded campus void of high rise skyscraper dormitories
Edited sentence: "  Miami is also striking in that the entire campus is by and large homogenous in design and appearance with only one building, the Miami University Art Museum, utilizing modern architecture.Miami is also famous for its School of Education, the McGuffey School, named for Professor William Holmes McGuffey, who taught there and wrote America's most widely used pioneer text books - the McGuffey Readers - while at the school.Miami is ranked in the top tier at 21st among all public national universities, 60th among all American universities according to the 2007 U.The Miami campus is frequently cited as one of the most beautiful in America, featuring modified neo-Georgian red brick buildings on an open, tree-shaded campus void of high rise skyscraper dormitories