Original sentence: Low-quality curriculum — Another concern of The Central Committee for Conscientious Objectors is that the content of the JROTC textbooks is substandard learning material, with factual distortions and outdated methods of teaching.Military recruiting — Some organizations campaigning against the JROTC have alleged that it is essentially a dressed-up military recruitment program.Promotion of violence — Promotion of violence is one of the biggest objections many groups have to the JROTC
Edited sentence: Low-quality curriculum — Another major concern of The Central Committee for Conscientious Objectors is that the content of the JROTC textbooks is substandard learning material, with factual distortions and outdated methods of teaching.Military recruiting — Some organizations campaigning against the JROTC have alleged that it is essentially a school sponsored military recruitment program.Promotion of violence — Promotion of violence is one of the largest and most valid reasons that groups object to having JROTC