Original sentence: Adam Makowicz is a Polish pianist living in New York City, who plays mostly jazz.Besides playing solo, he has worked with such musicians as Michał Urbaniak and Leszek Możdżer.His technical mastery has been compared to that of Art Tatum and Errol Garner, among others
Edited sentence: Adam Makowicz is a Polish pianist, who plays mostly jazz.For the last 25 years or so, he has lived in New York City.He has played with such musicians as Michał Urbaniak and Leszek Możdżer.His technical mastery has been compared to the virtuosity of Art Tatum and Errol Garner among others.However, he also has established himself as an extremely inventive musician, as well as composer