Original sentence: As with Tintin, the first two titles are relatively crude and simplistic in their worldview, but this is all resolved by the third title, La Marque jaune.Jacobs always drew his stories as being contemporary, and so the first few titles have a 1950s look and feel while the last installment looks decidedly 1970s.The sole exception to this rule is, again, Le Piège diabolique, which starts in the present but whose action, due to a malfunctioning time machine, largely takes place in the 51st century preceded by a short venture in medieval times and a stopover in the Jurassic period
Edited sentence: As with Tintin, the first two titles are relatively crude and simplistic in their worldview, but thankfully this is all resolved by the third title, La Marque jaune.Jacobs always drew his stories as being contemporary, and so the first few titles have a 50s look and feel while the last instalment looks decidedly 70s.The sole exception to this rule is, again, Le Piège diabolique, which starts in the present but whose action, thanks to a malfunctioning time machine, largely takes place in the 51st century preceded by a short venture in medieval times and a stopover in the Jurassic period