Original sentence: Although DIPG is currently regarded as one of the most devastating pediatric cancers, with a survival rate of <1% over five years, the clinic states that their treatment, WHCIH CAN COST HUNDREDS OF THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS, has resulted in some patients no longer having any evidence of disease.Oncologists and others have criticized the clinic's lead doctors, Alberto Siller and Alberto Garcia, for their lack of transparency, for not publishing their treatment protocol or survival rates, for the high costs of treatment, and for discouraging their patients from using radiation therapy
Edited sentence: Although DIPG is currently regarded as one of the most devastating pediatric cancers, with a survival rate of <1% over five years, the clinic states that their treatment has resulted in some patients no longer having any evidence of disease.Oncologists have criticized the clinic's lead doctors, Alberto Siller and Alberto Garcia, for their lack of transparency, for not publishing their treatment protocol or survival rates, and for discouraging their patients from using radiation therapy