Original sentence: It also has a lifeguard-patrolled area.Stradey Park is the famous rugby ground, home first to Llanelli RFC and from 2003 to the Llanelli Scarlets regional rugby team.The Millennium Coastal Park, which spans 21 km (13 miles) of coastline from Loughor to Pembrey, offers views of the Gower Peninsula and the opportunity for traffic-free cycling
Edited sentence: But perhaps it's most famous attraction is that of Stradey Park.It also has a lifeguard patrolled area.Llanelli RFC Welsh premier league rugby team.Llanelli Scarlets regional rugby team.The Millennium Coastal Park, which spans 21 km (13 miles) of coastline from Loughor to Pembrey, offers views of the Gower Peninsula (overated somewhat)and the opportunity for traffic-free cycling.This is now home to the Scarlets region who continue to fly the rugby flag for Wales through UK and Europe.While clubs in the past and lately the regions have failed to step up to the plate in major competitions Llanelli/Scarlets have been the major bright star in an otherwise dark club/region constellation