Original sentence: A victory lap (also lap of honor) is a term used in motorsports to describe an extra lap of the race track after the conclusion of a race.A victory lap is a term used in American academics to describe one or more extra years of study needed beyond the traditional four years of undergraduate studies.In certain cases such as engineering and teaching degrees, the victory lap is instead attributed to increased course load and stress.Other slang terms used to represent this same idea include "jewel degree", "5th year senior", "super senior", and "Van Wilder" (in reference to the 2002 film National Lampoon's Van Wilder).The term may also be used to refer to additional years in high school, particularly in Ontario after the elimination of Ontario Academic Credit (Grade 13).These added years are generally associated with poor academic focus, immaturity, or addiction to the party life
Edited sentence: A Victory lap (also lap of honor) is a term used in motorsports to describe an extra lap of the race track after the conclusion of a race.A Victory lap is a term also used in American Academics to describe one or more extra years of study needed beyond the traditional four of ones Undergraduate studies.However, in certain cases such as Engineering and Teaching degrees, the Victory Lap is generally attributed to increased studies, stresses and course loads due to curriculum rather than the lack of discipline exhibited by other students.Other slang terms used to represent this same idea are: "Jewel Degree", "5th year Senior", "Super Senior", & "Van Wilder" (in reference to the movie with the same title).These added years are usually the result of, plagued with, or associated with copious amounts of alcohol conumption/drunkenness, poor academic focus, immaturity, or personal lust to never grow up.This is also used to refer to additional years in high school, see Grade 12+