Original sentence: The BRAC commission is alledged by some to be overstepping its charter and showing a complete disreguard for budgetary sensibility by proposing moving the fighters to Cecil Field near Jacksonville, Florida, if NAS Oceana does not meet that and several other conditions
Edited sentence: The BRAC commission, overstepping its charter and showing a complete disreguard for budgetary sensibility, has proposed moving the fighters to Cecil Field near Jacksonville, Florida, if NAS Oceana does not meet that and several other conditions