Original sentence: It was inspired by the The Adventures of Tintin comic book story Le Trésor de Rackham le Rouge (published in English as Red Rackham's Treasure), where Tintin and his dog are pictured in a metal shark-shaped submarine
Edited sentence: It was inspired by the The Adventures of Tintin comic book story Le Trésor de Rackham le Rouge (published in English as Red Rackham's Treasure), where Tintin and his dog are pictured in a metal squaliform submarine