Original sentence: He moved onto Tottenham Hotspur in 1979 for £300,000, and then briefly to Vancouver Whitecaps in 1981, where he made 59 appearances, scoring four goals in his two seasons with the club
Edited sentence: He moved onto Tottenham Hotspur in 1979 for £300,000,where he became a favourite of the rank and file Spurs fans and added grit to the team, and then briefly to Vancouver Whitecaps in 1981, where he made 59 appearances, scoring four goals in his two seasons with the club