Original sentence: Brody was born in Southgate, London.He designed posters for student concerts at the college, most notably for Pere Ubu, supported by The Human League.His first-year thesis was based around  a comparison between Dadaism and pop art.His work was influenced by the emergence of punk rock in London life
Edited sentence: At one point he was almost thrown out of the college for putting the Queen's head sideways on a postage stamp design.Born in Southgate, London Neville Brody was a lover of fine art and painting.By 1977, punk rock was beginning to have a major effect upon London life and, while this had a great impact upon Brody's work and motivation, was not well received by his tutors.He commented that he does not remember a time in his life when he was planning to do anything other than art or painting.He did, however, get the chance to design posters for student concerts at the college, most notably for Pere Ubu, supported by The Human League.He had an obsession with art in the 1960s and 1970s.His first-year thesis had been based around  a comparison between Dadaism and pop art.His tutors often condemned his work as "Uncommercial", often putting a heavy emphasis on  safe and tested economic strategies, as opposed to experimentation.In spite of the postage stamp episode, Brody was not only motivated by the energies of punk