Original sentence: In 2007, The New York Times reported that a Wall Street sequel, then known as and tentatively titled Money Never Sleeps, had entered pre-production
Edited sentence: In early 2007, The New York Times was the first to report that a Wall Street sequel, then known as and tentatively titled Money Never Sleeps (later titled-currently titled "Wall Street 2: Money Never Sleeps"), had entered pre-production and was in the early stages of development