Original sentence: On September 9, 2014, at Loyola University Chicago, members of SJP allegedly harassed students who were manning a Hillel table promoting Birthright Israel, a program that pays for Jews to visit Israel
Edited sentence: On September 9, 2014, at Loyola University Chicago, members of SJP harassed Jewish students who were manning a Hillel table promoting Birthright Israel, a program that pays for Jews to visit their ancestral homeland of Israel.The SJP hecklers verbally abused the Hillel students, then formed themselves into a wall that blocked access to the Hillel table