Original sentence: The Church of Christ, Scientist, often known as The Christian Science Church or simply Christian Science, is a Christian denomination with about 2,000 branches (local churches) in over 70 countries
Edited sentence: The Church of Christ, Scientist, often known as The Christian Science Church or simply Christian Science, is a religious body, held by its members to be a Christian denomination, with about 2,000 branches (local churches) in over 70 countries