Original sentence: When it is considerably disturbed, as shown in the photograph on the right, the sea hare is capable of releasing reddish-purple ink (much like an octopus does) from a gland in its mantle cavity
Edited sentence: When it is considerably disturbed, as shown in the photograph at the top right, the sea hare is capable of releasing reddish-purple ink (much like an octopus does) from a gland in its mantle cavity