Original sentence: It seems Cook's initial choice had actually been Point Keppel (named after Augustus Keppel, 1st Viscount Keppel, a Lords Commissioner of the Admiralty), but instead he used Keppel later when he named Keppel Bay
Edited sentence: It seems Cook's initial choice had actually been Point Keppel (named after Augustus Keppel, a Lords Commissioner of the Admiralty), but instead he used Keppel later when he named Keppel Bay