Original sentence: Also, while the UW was a somewhat elitist party appealing mostly to educated and affluent urban voters, the PD is trying to establish itself as a popular party with a broad appeal, which caters for social liberals (Frasyniuk), pragmatic market liberals (Hausner) and centrist Christian democrats (Mazowiecki).As of 27 May, 2005, the party claims to have 13,000+ members, out of which 8,000 were members of the Freedom Union.Lech Wałęsa's son Jarosław Wałęsa also signed the manifesto.The involvement of Hausner and Belka as prominent post-communists marks a first in Polish politics: For the first time, a political party is created by members of the former communist government and former oposition members
Edited sentence: Also, while the UW was a somewhat elitist party appealing mostly to educated and affluent urban voters, the PD was trying to establish itself as a popular party with a broad appeal, which caters for social liberals (Frasyniuk), pragmatic market liberals (Hausner) and centrist Christian democrats (Mazowiecki).As a curiosity, Lech Wałęsa's son Jarosław also signed the manifesto.As of 27 May, 2005, the party claimed to have 13,000+ members, out of which 8,000 were members of the Freedom Union.In addition as the party didn't reach 3 % of electorate it won't receive refundation of campaign costs and its continued existance as serious political entity is unlikely.The involvement of Hausner and Belka as prominent post-communists marks a first in Polish politics: For the first time, a political party was created by members of the former communist government and former oposition members