Original sentence: The 1886 memorial was particularly notable for it's mourning theme, with the Salt Lake Tabernacle draped in black instead of the usually colorful bunting, and the eulogizing of Latter-day Saints who were in hiding or prison for polygamy offenses
Edited sentence: The 1886 memorial was particularly notable for it's mourning theme, with the Salt Lake Tabernacle decorated in black instead of the usually colorful bunting, and the eulogizing of Latter-day Saints who were in hiding or prison for polygamy offenses