Original sentence: This reason also highlights another objection to allowing kritiks in high school debate - more conservative debaters allege that many inexperienced debaters conform to popular arguments (such as those based on the writings of Judith Butler or Capitalism Bad, common among kritiks) for reasons more social inside the debate community than for actual educational value
Edited sentence: "  Unfortunately, their unswerving loyalty to these arguments, when translated into the real world, results in a sort of culture clash, and in some cases extreme insensitivity toward others.This problem can be attributed to, among other things, the desensitization that every debater must undergo at some point, the elitist culture of debate itself, and immaturity on the part of the debater.This reason also highlights another objection to allowing kritiks in high school debate - many inexperienced debaters wholeheartedly swallow "objectionable" arguments (such as those based on the writings of Judith Butler or Capitalism Bad, common among kritiks) in their zeal to appear more "educated