Original sentence: Bob Carlisle (born September 29 1956, Los Angeles, California) is an Grammy Award and Dove Award-winning American Christian singer.Carlisle is best known for his hit song "Butterfly Kisses", which appeared on his third solo album
Edited sentence: Bob Carlisle (born September 29, 1956 in Los Angeles, California) is an Grammy Award and Dove Award-winning American Christian singer.Bob is best known for his hit song "Butterfly Kisses", a favorite for father-daughter dances at weddings, which appeared on his third solo album