Original sentence: In 1993, the international criminologist, Nils Christie, who was one of the first to warn of the perceived dangers of the alarming growth and danger of the crime control industry in the United States, comparing the size and scope of the industry to Western style gulags.Until the carceral turn, scholars propose how what they describe as the American mass incarcerations and prison-industrial complex were almost invisible
Edited sentence: In 1993, the international criminologist, Nils Christie, who was one of the first to warn of the dangers of the alarming growth and danger of the crime control industry in the United States—compared the size and scope of the industry to Western style gulags.Until the carceral turn, the American mass incarcerations and prison-industrial complex were almost invisible