Original sentence: It is also a center of trade, commerce, education, and industry, as it is home to large international companies, high-rise hotels, and condominiums.Naga City is Camarines Sur's most populous city.Naga City is also recognized as Bicol's "Tiger Economy" because of its rapid economic growth.Naga City is cited as one of the Most Business-Friendly Cities in Asia and is considered the 9th Most Competitive City in the Philippines.Naga City is known as Pilgrim City because Naga City is also home to the largest Marian pilgrimage in Asia, the Our Lady of Peñafrancia
Edited sentence: It is also Camarines Sur's most populous city.It is also the regional center of trade, commerce, and industry, as it is home to large international companies, high-rise hotels, and condominiums.Naga City boasts its Youth force that could dominate the population in the next 5 years.Naga City is Bicol Region's economic, commercial, trade, tourism, medical, technological, religious, cultural, industrial,  educational, financial, and social center.Naga City is also recognized as Bicol's "Tiger Economy" because of its dynamic performance in the economic aspect, considering Naga City as a booming city.Naga City is cited as one of the Most Business-Friendly Cities in Asia and is considered to be one of the Philippines Top 10 cities, being the 9th Most Competitive City in the Philippines, and most competitive city in Bicol, that major in export, commerce, trade, electronics, manufacturing, education and high-employment.Naga City is known as the "City of Bicol", and as the "Heart of Bicol" due to its central location in the Bicol Peninsula; and as the Pilgrim City because Naga City is also home to the largest Marian pilgrimage in Asia, the Our Lady of Peñafrancia.Strategically located at the heart of Bicol, Naga City is also the trade city in Bicol that is the embarkation point and resting point of goods from Visayas and Manila