Original sentence: Besides dealing with his OCD, Monk's assistants also appear to have a hands-on role in organizing his consultancy work, in particular ensuring that he (and, by extension, they) gets paid, a thankless task given Monk's complete indifference to financial matters.He isn't affected, as are many, by the sight of blood
Edited sentence: Besides dealing with his OCD, Monk's assistants also appear to have a hands-on role in organising his consultancy work, in particular ensuring that he (and, by extension, they) gets paid, a thankless task given Monk's complete indifference to financial matters.Oddly enough, he isn't affected by the sight of blood