Original sentence: At about 6,000 feet (1,830 m) and 6 miles (10 km) from the runway, the aircraft experienced a sudden loss of control and slammed into the ground in a nearly vertical nose down position in Hopewell Township, Beaver County  near Aliquippa, Pennsylvania, killing all 127 passengers and 5 crew members
Edited sentence: At about  and  from the runway, the aircraft experienced a sudden loss of control and slammed into the ground in a nearly vertical nose down position in Hopewell Township, Beaver County  near Aliquippa, Pennsylvania, killing all 127 passengers and 5 crew members