Original sentence: Each September, some 1,000 young women (and a few young men) between the ages of 17 and 25 interview to serve as a member of the Tournament of Roses Royal Court[1]
Edited sentence: Each September, some 1,000 young women (and a few young men) between the ages of 17 and 25, interview for the honor of serving as a member of the Tournament of Roses Royal Court[1]