Original sentence: Akkermans, in a bid to cover his tracks, murders Franken and also tries to kill Rachel with a large dose of insulin, but as it begins to send her body into shock, she manages to survive by finding and eating a bar of chocolate as an antidote, and then escapes
Edited sentence: Akkermans, in a bid to cover his tracks, murders Franken and also tries to kill Rachel with a large dose of insulin, but as it begins to send her body into shock, she manages to survive by implausibly finding and eating a bar of chocolate as an antidote, and then escapes.One wonders why there are air vents in a coffin but then the whole film plot has more holes in it than a leaking dyke