Original sentence: After Twitty notified the Federal Bureau of Investigation, they arranged for her to proceed with the transaction.Around March 29, 2010, Van der Sloot allegedly contacted a representative of Beth Twitty with an offer to reveal the location of Holloway's body and the circumstances surrounding her death for an advance of US$25,000 against a total of $250,000.Authorities state that the information that he provided in return was false because the house in which he said Holloway's body was located had not yet been built at the time of her disappearance.On May 10, Van der Sloot allegedly had $15,000 by wire transfer to his account in the Netherlands, following the receipt of $10,000 in cash that was videotaped by undercover investigators in Aruba
Edited sentence: After Twitty notified the Federal Bureau of Investigation, they arranged for her to proceed with the extortion plot.Around March 29, 2010, Van der Sloot contacted a representative of Beth Twitty with an offer to reveal the location of Holloway's body and the circumstances surrounding her death for an advance of US$25,000 against a total of $250,000.Authorities determined that the information that he provided in return was false because the house in which he claimed Holloway's body was located had not yet been built at the time of her disappearance.On May 10, Van der Sloot allegedly accepted the amount of $15,000 by wire transfer to his account in the Netherlands, following the receipt of $10,000 in cash that was videotaped by undercover investigators in Aruba