Original sentence: His novels display the common everyday life of an Ottoman Turkish family.Orga captures the fear that a man can be suddenly in charge of a large group of people who depend on him for their survival.Orga opens his autobiography with imagery of his childhood.Orga tells his stories with multiple layers of complexity.Portrait of a Turkish family received many positive reviews from critics such as (Arthur Anderson), and Peter Quenelle of the "Daily Mail", Liverpool, England
Edited sentence: His many writing devices make for a fun and enjoyable ride, in an almost forgotten time and place.His novels expertly display the common everyday life of an Ottoman Turkish family.Orga deserves his rightful place among the greatest authors of our time.Orga is an expert writer who controls the pen, like a surgeon operates a scalpel.Orga is an interesting author because he tells his stories with multiple layers of complexity.Orga opens his autobiography with exquisite imagery of his childhood.Orga truly captures one of man’s true fears, in that, he is suddenly in charge of a large group of people who depend on him for their survival.People, who have reviewed his works, have described it as "fresh, intrepid, and even a portrait of mankind" (Arthur Anderson).Peter Quenelle of the "Daily Mail", Liverpool, England describes it as: "An unusually convincing autobiographical sketch.The entire portrait is good".These reviews are quite positive