Original sentence: In late May 2010, the Toronto Star published a series of articles based on interviews of at least 10 past and present Ombudsman employees who alleged that Marin instituted a “culture of fear” in the workplace upon taking over as Ontario Ombudsman.Marin was named in at least one complaint by his former human resources manager, which was dismissed in August 2010
Edited sentence: In late May 2010, the Toronto Star published a series of articles based on interviews with several unnamed sources identified as past and present Ombudsman employees - as well as three who gave their names - who alleged that Marin instituted a “culture of fear” in the workplace upon taking over as Ontario Ombudsman.Marin was named in one complaint, which was dismissed in August 2010