Original sentence: A considerable number of wind turbines have been built in the Parish of Kilgarvan, all concentrated in the Incheese/top of Coom area close to the County bounds with Cork.Some claim that the turbines have caused disruption to television reception in Kilgarvan.When these turbines are fully completed Kilgarvan will be home to the largest Onshore Wind turbines in Ireland
Edited sentence: A considerable number of wind turbines have been built in the Parish of Kilgarvan all concentrated in the Incheese/top of Coom area close to the County bounds with Cork.The turbines have caused havoc with the Television reception in Kilgarvan and even effects residents of Kenmare.When these Turbines are fully completed Kilgarvan will be home to the largest Onshore Wind turbines in Ireland