Original sentence: Bailey, James Richard A  6½  RAF: 85 Sqn, 125 Sqn, 264 Sqn & 600 Sqn  DFC.Barber, Maurice C H  5  RAF: 250 and 450  DFC.Botha, Adrian Jacobus  5  SAAF: 1 Sqn.Boyle, Brian John L  5½  SAAF: 1 Sqn  DFC
Edited sentence: Bailey, James Richard Abe  6½  RAF: 85 Sqn, 125 Sqn, 264 Sqn & 600 Sqn  DFC.Barber, Maurice Clinton Hinton  5  RAF: 250 and 450  DFC.Botha, Adriaan Jacobus "Attie"  5  SAAF: 1 Sqn   KIA 14 June 1941.Botha, Louis Cecil "Cookie"  5  SAAF: 5 Sqn   KIA 17 June 1942.Boyle, Brian John Lister "Piggy"  5½  SAAF: 1 Sqn  DFC