Original sentence: Another point of agreement for many is that conscription serves to intermingle the rich and the poor, the educated and the less fortunate, the brawler and the meek, the criminal and the upright.It is common opinion that having completed military service carries a symbolic value to the majority of Turks.On the other hand, it is held to be one of the main reasons behind the brain drain prevalent among the well-educated young professionals
Edited sentence: Another point of agreement for many is that conscription serves better cause than intended.Being drafted is commonly celebrated by the friends of the draftee.Friends and relatives of draftees place stickers on their cars with the expression O şimdi asker (He is a soldier now).However, it is common opinion that military service carries a symbolic value to Turks.In rural areas military service is taught to be a rite of passage.It is agreed that this process has a valuable share in education of young men, equipping them with a conscience, a sense of pride and responsibility especially for those from rural areas.Such that, wherever he may be from, a draftee undergoes a period of service that leads to experiences and friendships that might otherwise have never been forged.The army is common grounds for all men to meet, no matter how educated or not, every man has a chance to learn from others, many of whom he would have never met.The attitude towards conscription differs slightly in urban areas, as many young professionals agree, this efficient period of time may be served elsewhere rather than the army