Original sentence: Economic trends of livestock privatization and the collapse of the [[rural economy] as a result of  the zud (hard winter)] have caused people to migrate to Ulaan Baator, the capitol urban lifestyle  The new Democratic Party grounded governmen, is working with foreign investors to exploit successfully the areas of large copper and gold deposits located at Oyuu Tolgoi, about 80 kilometers from the Chinese border into Mongolia and the feasibility of setting up a mining operation is being investigated.These deserts and the surrounding regions sustain many animals, including black-tailed gazelles, marbled polecats, bactrian camels, Mongolian wild ass and sandplovers, and are occasionally visited by snow leopards, Palace Cat, brown bears, and wolves
Edited sentence: Economic trends of livestock privatization and the collapse of the urban economy have caused people to return to rural lifestyles, a movement contrary to urbanization.These deserts and the surrounding regions sustain many animals, including black-tailed gazelles, marbled polecats, bactrian camels, Mongolian wild ass and sandplovers, and are occasionally visited by snow leopards, brown bears, and wolves.This movement has resulted in a great increase of large copper and gold deposits located at Oyuu Tolgoi, about 80 kilometers from the Chinese border into Mongolia and the feasibility of setting up a mining operation is being investigated