Original sentence: Hamar Alfred Bass (1842 - 8 April, 1898) was a British brewer, the great-grandson of William Bass, the founder of the brewery firm of Bass & Co in Burton upon Trent, and a Liberal Party politician
Edited sentence: Hamar Alfred Bass (1842 – 8 April 1898) was a British brewer, the great-grandson of William Bass, the founder of the brewery firm of Bass & Co in Burton upon Trent, and a Liberal Party politician