Original sentence: In the final act, Helena's cunning plot is revealed, and Bertram promises to be a faithful husband to her and "love her dearly, ever, ever dearly.Parolles, thinking himself begging for his life, readily spills all his army's secrets to his "captors," betraying Bertram ("a foolish idle boy and for all that very ruttish...") in the process
Edited sentence: In the final act, Helena's cunning plot is revealed, and Bertram promises to be a faithful husband to her and "love her dearly, ever, ever dearly".Parolles, thinking himself begging for his life, readily spills all his army's secrets to his "captors", betraying Bertram ("a foolish idle boy and for all that very ruttish...") in the process