Original sentence: In Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, Lavender and Ron Weasley began dating, and she referred to him by the nickname of "Won-Won".Ron did not seem to appreciate Lavender much
Edited sentence: Both Ron and Hermione seem content with the break-up in the end.In Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, Lavender and Ron Weasley began dating, and she referred to him by the tacky nickname of "Won-Won".It could be argued, however, that it was an inauthentic relationship at best, as Ron did not seem to appreciate Lavender much.It is interesting to note that Harry's actions while under the influence of Felix Felicus, his luck potion, ended two relationships within Gryffindor House, neither of which Harry really wanted to see continue