Original sentence: Followers of the philosophy of Thelema allegedly may make use of the methods and practices derived from other traditions, including Alchemy, Astrology, Qabalah, Tantra, Tarot, and Yoga.However, such claims remain arguable at best, and are perhaps due more to Crowley's despise of other beliefs than to any true syncretic qualities.Nu and Had supposedly correspond with the Tao and Teh of Taoism, Shakti and Shiva of the Hindu Tantras, Shunyata and Bodhicitta of Buddhism, Ain Soph and Kether in the Qabalah.Thelema claims to be unique yet also syncretic
Edited sentence: Followers of the philosophy of Thelema may make use of the methods and practices derived from other traditions, including Alchemy, Astrology, Qabalah, Tantra, Tarot, and Yoga.Nu and Had correspond with the Tao and Teh of Taoism, Shakti and Shiva of the Hindu Tantras, Shunyata and Bodhicitta of Buddhism, Ain Soph and Kether in the Qabalah.Thelema is unique but also syncretic