Original sentence: He is known for his high leveled dribbling technique, his shooting accuracy, and left-foot passing.In 2011, Boaz received an offer to play at the Dutch club VVV-Venlo, but rejected the offer and remains with Persipura in Jayapura
Edited sentence: He is known by his high leveled dribbling technique and his shooting accuracy or passing with his left-foot.He is one of the best footballers of all time in Indonesia and inspires many children in Papua to pursue a career as a professional footballer.In 2011, Boaz received an offer to play at Dutch club VVV-Venlo, but because of family reasons he chose to keep playing in Persipura Jayapura