Original sentence: Preferences from Labor led to Greens candidate Scott Ludlam winning the final seat.Preferences from the Liberal party allowed the Christian democrats to go ahead of Labor and narrowly behind the Greens.The Democratic Labor Party distributed preferences to the Christian democrats, allowing them to go ahead of the Liberal party.The Liberals won 3 seats on primary vote alone whilst Labor won 2.The end result was 3 seats to the Liberals, 2 to Labor and 1 to the Greens
Edited sentence: However, preferences from Labor led to Greens candidate Scott Ludlam winning the final seat.Preferences from the Liberal Party allowed the Christian Democrats to go ahead of Labor and narrowly behind the Greens.The Democratic Labor Party distributed preferences to the Christian Democrats, allowing them to go ahead of the Liberal party.The Liberals won three seats on primary vote alone whilst Labor won two.The end result was three seats to the Liberals, two to Labor and one to the Greens