Original sentence: The basketball team had one coach named Donnie English (Now Kell's Coach), and he won 5 state championships out of season one national out of season and 8 region champs in season and 3 out of season, 4 runner ups in season and 2 out of season and 5 sub regions in season and 3 sub region out of season
Edited sentence: The basketball team had one legendary coach named Donnie English (Now Kell's Coach), and he won 5 state championships out of season one national out of season and 8 region champs in season and 3 out of season, 4 runner ups in season and 2 out of season and 5 sub regions in season and 3 sub region out of season