Original sentence: He feels a scrupoulous dedication to his responsiblty to not reveal private the private information that he translates and delivers, resisting both Dority's attempts to intimdate him and Farnum's attempts to bribe him into revealing private information
Edited sentence: He feels a scrupoulous dedication to his responsiblty to not reveal the private information that he translates and delivers, resisting both Dority's attempts to intimdate him and Farnum's attempts to bribe him into revealing private information