Original sentence: Hamza Dirani حمزة ديراني (born in Amman, Aug 16, 1982) is a Jordanian race car and kart racing driver.In 2001, in addition to successfully competing in several races, he was honored with an “Achievement Award for Best Novice Rally Driver” at the Jordan International Rally and Syrian International Rally on Volvo 244.In 2002, he entered several international competitions in England and Lebanon before attending the “Race of Champions” in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia by invitation of Abdullah Bakhashab
Edited sentence: Hamza Dirani حمزة ديراني (born in Amman, August 16, 1982) is a Jordanian race car and kart racing driver.In 2001, in addition to successfully competing in several races, he was honored with an "Achievement Award for Best Novice Rally Driver" at the Jordan International Rally and Syrian International Rally on Volvo 244.In 2002, he entered several international competitions in England and Lebanon before attending the "Race of Champions" in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia by invitation of Abdullah Bakhashab