Original sentence: " Despite the fact that Chris Reilly is a lifelong friend, a nauseous looking Damien shoots both hostages with a revolver.A young British soldier of Irish descent later helps all but three to escape.After the involvement of the landowner and his servant are revealed to the IRA, both are taken hostage and marched up to a cottage in the mountains.Damien refuses, saying that he killed Chris Reilly for being an informer.Later, a wealthy Anglo-Irish landowner coerces one of his servants, IRA member Chris Reilly (John Crean), into informing.Later, he tells his sweetheart, IRA message runner Sinéad Sullivan (Orla Fitzgerald), about the shame of facing Chris Reilly's mother, concluding, "I can't feel anything.Teddy expresses fear that the British will return if he fails to act decisively.Teddy pleads with Damien to reveal where the IRA is hiding the stolen arms, offering him full amnesty.Teddy, the squad's nauseous looking commander, tells him, "It's still not too late, Damien.When Teddy delivers his brother's final letter to Sinéad, she angrily orders him to leave and screams and sobs as she reads Damien's letter
Edited sentence: " Despite the fact that Chris Reilly, is a lifelong friend, a rattled Damien shoots both hostages with a revolver.After the involvement of the landowner and his servant are revealed to the IRA, both are taken hostage and taken up to a cottage in the mountains.Later, a wealthy Anglo-Irish landowner coerces one of his servants, Chris Reilly (John Crean), a young IRA member, into informing.Later, he tells his sweetheart, IRA message runner Sinéad Sullivan (Orla Fitzgerald), of the shame of facing Chris Reilly's mother, concluding, "I can't feel anything.Soon, a young British soldier of Irish descent helps all but three to escape.Teddy pleads with Damien to reveal where the IRA is hiding the stolen arms, offering him full amnesty, but Damien refuses to snitch, saying that he killed Chris Reilly for doing just that.Teddy, the squad's commander, tells him, "It's still not too late, Damien.When Teddy delivers his brother's final letter to Sinéad, she angrily orders him to leave, then screams and sobs as she reads the letter