Original sentence: Emily Osment has never been a stranger to the world of entertainment and acting.Emily made her acting debut in the 1999 film The Secret Life of Girls.Her father, Eugene Osment, is an actor of some renown, and her older brother is famous child-star Haley Joel Osment.In 2007 she was again asked to participate and has been put on the yellow team, the new team in this years' games.She is currently working on the newest Disney Channel series, Hannah Montana.Since then, she has gone on to do a number of roles,  including Gerti Giggles in the Spy Kids trilogy
Edited sentence: Her father, Eugene Osment, is an actor of some renown, and her older brother Haley Joel Osment stole the spotlight as one of the best child actors ever.In 2007 she was again asked to participate and has been put in the yellow team, the new team in this years' games.Now, she is working on the newest Disney Channel series, Hannah Montana, making the show most successful.She has never been a stranger to the world of entertainment and acting.She hopes to continue the show.Since then, she has gone on to do a number of roles which includes Gerti Giggles in the Spy Kids trilogy.The new season of Hannah Montana indicates that her tomboyish personality is starting to change as she enters high school with Miley.Wanting to follow in their footsteps, Emily decided to start a career in acting, and made her debut in the 1999 film The Secret Life of Girls