Original sentence: " (Los Angeles Times, June 6 1999).In Japan, while much of the criticism came from right-wing nationalists, Chang was also attacked by "liberals, who insist [the massacre] happened but allege that Chang's flawed scholarship damages their cause.is:Nanjing fjöldamorðin
Edited sentence: He merely sent a telegram giving a discription of massacre by a British journalist who gave 300,000 figure.In Japan, the criticism came from the both side of the debate.Koki Hirota has never given such figure.On this response, she has clearly overstreched herself.Supporters of Great Massacre felt compeled to criticised her scholarship to protect the scholastic integrity of their assertion while the denial side relished in nitpicking Chang's work.[[is:Nanjing fjöldamorðin]