Original sentence: A survivor of the Ramel alleges that there was a German sailor on board who had helped to guide the Atlantis to the Ramel; the German may have used torches and lights to signal to the German vessel during the night.Before the begining of the attack, he was said to have begun unfindable on board the Ramel, with suspicion being that he somehow fled the ship.He said get off now, get off, this ship will not reach England, I’m telling you now it will never reach London, take off now, obviously I didn’t take his advice...”.It is not know whether the man playing piano was the suspected German sailor.It was allied with Free France.Loaded with cargo, including much wool, it left Fremantle, Western Australia between 1 and 3 September 1939.Logan gives the follow account of coming on board the Ramel:.Survivors of the attack boarded the ship Durmitor, and some died in difficult, overly hot conditions.The Commissaire Ramel was a French passenger ship sunk during the Second World War.Three men onboard died in the resulting fires
Edited sentence: Anyway, the survivors were loaded onto Durmitor, and some died in hard, hot conditions.Bruce Logan, a survivor of the Ramel, noted there was a german sailor on board the Free-French ship Ramel who had helped to guide the atlantis to the Ramel.Commissaire Ramel was a French passenger ship.He said get off now, get off, this ship will not reach England, I’m telling you now it will never reach London, take off now, obviously I didn’t take his advise...”.He was gone well before the first shells hit the Ramel.I'm not sure if the man on the piano was the German or someone else.Loaded with general cargo and wool, it left Fremantle, Western Australia between 1 and 3 September 1939.The German had torches and lights to signal to the atlantis in the night.This is what Bruce Logan said about when he boarded the Commissaire Ramel:.Three men died in fires