Original sentence: In Punjab province of Pakistan almost 35% of peoples are Balochi.Most of them speak Saraiki but in Jhang area of Punjab, the majority of Baloch population speak Punjabi also.The Baloch (بلوچ) are the majority ethnic inhabits the region of Balochistan in the southeast corner of the Iranian plateau in Southwest Asia, including parts of Iran, Afghanistan, and Pakistan.The Baloch are predominantly Muslim, with most belonging to the Hanafi school of thought of Sunni Islam, but there are also a significant number belonging to Shia school of thought in Balochistan
Edited sentence: In the Punjab province of Pakistan almost 35% of peoples are Balochi.Most of them speak Saraiki but in the Jhang area of Punjab, the majority of the Baloch population speak Punjabi also.The Baloch (بلوچ) are the majority ethnic inhabitants of the region of Balochistan in the southeast corner of the Iranian plateau in Southwest Asia, including parts of Iran, Afghanistan, and Pakistan.The Baloch are predominantly Muslim, with most belonging to the Hanafi school of Sunni Islam, but there are also a significant number of Shia in Balochistan