Original sentence: Besides their ads for hip clothing stores, restaurants and nightclubs are ones for cosmetic surgery, erotica and escort services.It can be picked up in many coffee shops, bookstores, convenience stores, etc.Its political coverage is generally liberal or libertarian.OC Weekly, a sister publication of both the LA Weekly and The Village Voice, is a free weekly paper disctributed in Orange County, California and Long Beach.Other busineses, however, do not carry the paper because of its somewhat racy nature and political views (Orange County is a generally conservative county).Since the OC Weekly is a free paper, it must rely upon its advertising revenue.The OC Weekly takes pride in its art and entertainment listings for both Orange and Los Angeles counties, rivaling the much larger Orange County Register and Los Angeles Times.The paper has strong coverage of the follies and foibles of local politicians from both political parties, but especially local Republicans
Edited sentence: As a result, most of the paper's space is taken up by advertisements for cosmetic surgery, erotica and escort services, with salacious pictures abounding.It can be picked up in many coffee shops and other such local establishments.Its political coverage is generally liberal.Many places, however, do not carry the paper because of its somewhat racy nature and political views (Orange County is a conservative county).OC Weekly, a sister publication of The Village Voice, is a free weekly paper circulated in Orange County, California.Since the OC Weekly is a free paper, it relies on advertisements to turn a profit or simply stay afloat.The OC Weekly takes pride in its art listings for both Orange and Los Angeles counties, rivaling the better-funded Orange County Register and Los Angeles Times