Original sentence: For a time Pace served as a professor at the BYU Jerusalem Center.In 1996, Pace came out with a revised version of the book titled, Knowing Christ.In his sermon, McConkie did not mention by name Pace's teaching.In the church, Pace served in various callings including as a Sunday School teacher in the Oak Hills 5th Ward on the east side of Provo, Utah.McConkie, an apostle in The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (LDS Church), presented a sermon that was interpeted as an attack on Pace's book, What It Means to Know Christ.Pace beame notable when Bruce R.Pace issued a formal apology in which he stated that his opinions had been misinterpreted, and he was glad that McConkie had clarified the issues.Pace was a professor of religion at Brigham Young University (BYU) in Provo, Utah, and a writer of books on religious subjects
Edited sentence: For a time Pace served as a professor at BYU's Jerusalem Center.He is widely viewed as a sincere student of the gospel.In the church Pace served in various callings including as a Sunday School teacher in the Oak Hills 5th Ward on the east side of Provo, Utah.It also should be noted that it was mainly people's reaction to Pace's book that McConkie focused on.McConkie did not mention by name Pace's teaching.McConkie have a talk that was interpeted as an attack on Pace's book What It Means to Know Christ.Pace beame quite notable when Bruce R.Pace came out with a revised version of the book titled Knowing Christ in 1996.Pace issued a formal apology in which he stated that his opinions had been misinterpreted, and he was glad that McConkie had clarified the issued.Pace was a professor of religion at Brigham Young University and a writer of books on religious subjects.The whole episode has been widely interpreted but should be seen in the context of people being too casual in speaking of the Lord