Original sentence: Also, pilgrims to Mecca,  killed by an accident on the way there, in Mecca or on the way back, so during all of the Hadj, receive the title "shahid".In Arab culture, the term is used to mean "war dead.It is possible that the term is a translation of the Greek word "martyr", which also literally means "witness", and "martyr" is used as parallel term in Christianity to the religious meaning of "shahid".These organizations use the title after the death of a suicide bomber and sometimes bestow remuneration on family left behind in this life.Today, the word "shahid" is primarily associated by non-Muslims with attacks by Muslims, Muslim militias and Muslim paramilitary organizations
Edited sentence: " The experience and the aftermath of two mainly European world wars have eradicated that easy assumption.'  When we use the term in that Arabic sense, it will be very clear that there is a clash of sensibilities here.Also, pilgrims to Makkah,  killed by an accident on the way there, in Makkah or on the way back, so during all of the Hadj, receive the title "shahid".In Arab culture, not to be confused with Islamic cultures, the term is used meaning "war dead.It is also practically tabu now to mix religious terms with political or ideological upheaval, violence and war.It is one thing to have a few hundred martyrs, but when the figures go into the many millions, as they do now do, the term is experienced as senseless — or even insulting, especially by those the dead left behind.It is possible that the term is a translation of the Greek word "martyr", although this needs more study.Nowadays,  the word "shahid" is primarily associated by non-Muslims (Kafirs) with attacks by Muslims, Muslim militias and Muslim paramilitary organizations.Speaking in general terms, few in Europe ot the USA dare to call all those fallen in war "martyrs.That would make the Cenotaph, the Vietnam Memorial and many others, monuments for 'martyrs.The kafir association is not correct, i.These organizations use the title after the death of a suicide bomber and bestow remuneration on family left behind in this life.e not wide enough