Original sentence: A summary of his voting record shows that Joyce voted for the Iraq War, against an investigation into the Iraq War, for introducing student top-up fees, and had a mixed record for and against a transparent parliament..  Being a Parliamentary Private Secretary means that Joyce must vote with the Government.In May 2009 tabloids reported Joyce was seeking advice from HM Revenue and Customs regarding £40,000 in unpaid capital gains tax on the sale of his London home, which he had designated as his second home under the Second Homes Allowance scheme.In September 2008, Joyce was criticised by local government councillors for describing the name of the new Clackmannanshire Bridge as "unimaginative" and "parochial"
Edited sentence: A summary of his voting record shows that Joyce voted very strongly for the Iraq War; very strongly against an investigation into the Iraq War; strongly for introducing student top-up fees; and a mixture for and against a transparent parliament..  Being a Parliamentary Private Secretary means that Joyce must vote with the Government.In May 2009 tabloids reported Joyce was seeking advice from HMRC regarding £40,000 in unpaid Capital Gains Tax on the sale of his London home, which he had designated as his second home under the Second Homes Allowance scheme.In September 2008, Joyce received criticism from Local Government councillors for describing the name of the new Clackmannanshire Bridge as "unimaginative" and "parochial"