Original sentence: Those who accept the view that climate is changing, but contend that human activity is in no way responsible for the change—in other words, the climate would have changed if there were no humans on the planet.Those who accept the view that the climate is changing and that human/industrial activity bears the major responsibility for the change.Those who accept the view that the climate is changing, but view this change as only partially caused by human/industrial activity with the balance of the change caused by circumstances beyond human control.Those who accept the view, but want less uncertainty before decisions are made.Those who view the view for reported changes as flawed or due to incorrect analysis
Edited sentence: Those who accept the evidence that climate is changing, but contend that human activity is in no way responsible for the change—in other words, the climate would have changed if there were no humans on the planet.Those who accept the evidence that the climate is changing and that human/industrial activity bears the major responsibility for the change.Those who accept the evidence that the climate is changing, but view this change as only partially caused by human/industrial activity with the balance of the change caused by circumstances beyond human control.Those who accept the evidence, but want less uncertainty before decisions are made.Those who view the evidence for reported changes as flawed or due to incorrect analysis