Original sentence: Evans played regularly for the Canaries for the remainder of his loan spell and by the end of the season he had notched up 10 goals from 20 starts and eight substitute appearances.However, after talks between the two clubs at the end of January 2008, the deal was extended to allow Evans to stay with the Carrow Road club until the end of the season
Edited sentence: By the end of his loan spell, he had notched up 10 goals from 20 starts and eight substitute appearances — an impressive ratio in a struggling Norwich side.However, after talks between the two clubs at the end of January 2008, it was announced that Evans would be staying with the Carrow Road club until the end of the season