Original sentence: Prior to her assignment as a Thunderbird pilot, she served two tours at RAF Lakenheath, England, with the 492d and 494th Fighter Squadrons of the 48th Fighter Wing; with the 4th Fighter Wing at Seymour Johnson Air Force Base, North Carolina; and as an Air Liaison Officer with the 2nd Infantry Division at Camp Red Cloud, South Korea
Edited sentence: Prior to her assignment as a Thunderbird pilot, she served two tours at RAF Lakenheath, England, with the 48th Fighter Wing; with the 4th Fighter Wing at Seymour Johnson Air Force Base, North Carolina; and as an Air Liaison Officer with the 2nd Infantry Division at Camp Red Cloud, South Korea