Original sentence: Joseph Brazier was originally a gun-locksmith firm, based in Wolverhampton, England, having begun as a family business around 1700 in London.More historical information on Joseph Brazier and the English gunmaking tradition can be found at the Joseph Brazier website.The company maintains offices in Arundel, UK and Colorado Springs, Colorado, USA.The firm prides itself on continuing to pioneer new technologies and engineering skills in the gunmaking trade.Today Joseph Brazier manufactures precision interchangeable parts, components, and one solid piece over/under shotgun barrels as well as side-by-side and double rifle barrels
Edited sentence: It began as a family business around 1700 in London.Joseph Brazier was originally a gun-locksmith firm, based in Wolverhampton, England.More historical information on Joseph Brazier and the English Gunmaking Tradition can be found at the firm's website:.Pioneering new technologies and engineering skills in the gunmaking Trade, today Brazier continues its tradition of providing the finest firearms parts available - moving the Trade into the 21st.The company maintains offices in Arundel, UK and Colorado Springs, Colorado USA.Today Joseph Brazier manufactures precision interchangeable parts, components, and one solid piece Over/Under shotgun barrels as well as Side by Side and Double rifle barrels