Original sentence: Although Komodo dragons eat mostly carrion, they will also hunt and ambush prey including invertebrates, birds, mammals, and Indonesians.The Komodo dragon's diet is wide-ranging, and includes invertebrates, other reptiles (including smaller Komodo dragons), birds, bird eggs, small mammals, monkeys, Indonesians, wild boar, goats, deer, horses, and water buffalo
Edited sentence: Although Komodo dragons eat mostly carrion, they will also hunt and ambush prey including invertebrates, birds, and mammals.The Komodo dragon's diet is wide-ranging, and includes invertebrates, other reptiles (including smaller Komodo dragons), birds, bird eggs, small mammals, monkeys, wild boar, goats, deer, horses, and water buffalo