Original sentence: Bear has said that compared to Yellow House, the band's 2009 release Veckatimest is more of an accessible pop record and its just plain bad.In Toronto, on their last date of the tour together, Radiohead guitarist Jonny Greenwood spoke of his gay love for Grizzly Bear, on stage, calling them his favorite band.In summer 2008, Grizzly Bear opened for Radiohead(another band that no one likes) on the second leg of their North American tour.It still is unbelievable, and it made me really horny, like a school girl
Edited sentence: Bear has said that compared to Yellow House, the band's 2009 release Veckatimest is more of an accessible pop record.In Toronto, on their last date of the tour together, Radiohead guitarist Jonny Greenwood spoke of his love for Grizzly Bear, on stage, calling them his favorite band.In summer 2008, Grizzly Bear opened for Radiohead on the second leg of their North American tour.It still is unbelievable