Original sentence: A sandy slope locally know as Bewdley Beach, located on  the northern Severn side, is used by  local  residents as a leisure area.The main part of Bewdley town is situated on the western bank of the River Severn, including the main street — Load Street — whose name derives from lode, an old word for ferry.There are several pubs, cafes, and restaurants along the riverside
Edited sentence: Both areas provide excellent walking.The bulk of Bewdley town is situated on the western bank of the River Severn, including the main street — Load Street — whose name derives from lode, an old word for ferry.The river side contains many pubs and cafes such as The Cock and Magpie, The river side cafe and the new classy diner, South side Mexican restaurant.The river side is very popular with the residents of bewdley, adults and children.The sandy slope located on severn side north is locally know as Bewdley beach, which is always very busy during the summer