Original sentence: In 2005, Valley's strongest season, centerfielder Jordan Burrows led the team in hitting, home runs, and RBIs while earning first-team all state honors.Their school mascot is the tiger and the school colors are black and orange
Edited sentence: In 2005, Valley's best season, centerfielder Jordan Burrows led the team in hitting, home runs, and RBIs while earning first-team all state honors.Their school mascot is the Tiger, and the school colors are black and orange