Original sentence: Growth proponents believe that the city can grow tremendously with the water already available and that Sierra Vista could eventually transport Colorado river water through the C.Many residents of Sierra Vista believe that the uncontrolled growth of the city will eventually dry up the San Pedro river that flows nearby, creating a dire lack of water
Edited sentence: Growth proponents point out that the city can grow tremendously with the water already available and that Sierra Vista could eventually transport Colorado river water through the C.Many residents of Sierra Vista fear that the uncontrolled growth of the city will eventually dry up the San Pedro river that flows nearby, creating a dire lack of water