Original sentence: Blue Faction, Duffield, at Bicton Primary School was dedicated to him.Much of the area of Bicton is taken up by Point Walter Reserve at Point Walter, jutting out into the Swan River.On 16th May 2005, Bicton, along with other Western Australian towns, was hit by a mini tornado.The storm unroofed houses, extensively damaged the 100 year old Bicton Primary School, brought down electricity poles, and left some families without a home.The track of the tornado was declared a natural disaster area
Edited sentence: Blue Faction, Duffeild, at Bicton Primary School was dedicated to him.In May 2005, Bicton, along with other Western Australian towns, was hit by a mini tornado.Much of the area of Bicton is taken up by Point Walter Reserve at Point Walter, jutting out into the river.The damage is still being fixed as fences, electrical polls, roofs and gardens were terribly damaged.The storm destroyed houses, flattered half of Bicton Primary School and left some families without a home