Original sentence: In 17 August 2007, Korek Telecom has been awarded one of the three Iraqi Mobile Lisenses for providing mobile telephony services all over Iraq.It is a shared limited company registered in Iraq to operate and provide GSM  service in the capital  of Kurdistan, Erbil and province of Duhok.Korek Telecom is a Kurdish mobile phone operator company in Pirmam, Erbil, in the north of Iraq.On November 2000, the ministry of telecommunications in Kurdistan Region has granted KOREK telecom 5 years exclusive GSM mobile license for operating a mobile network in the region covered by the capital of Iraqi Kurdistan (Erbil) and the province Duhok.Telephone numbers in Iraq.The network doesn't really have high speed Internet over gprs as they claim, but other services work just fine.The region has about 2.5 million inhabitants.Zain Iraq
Edited sentence: In 17 August 2007, Korek Telecom has been awarded one of the three Kurdish Mobile Lisenses for providing mobile telephony services all over Kurdistan and Iraq.It is a Kurdish company registered in Kurdistan to operate and provide GSM  service in Southern Kurdistan.Korek Telecom is a Kurdish mobile phone operator company in Erbil, Kurdistan.Massoud Barzani.On November 2000, the ministry of telecommunications in Kurdistan has granted Korek Telecom 5 years exclusive GSM mobile license for operating a mobile network in the region covered by the capital of Kurdistan (Erbil).The region has about 8 million inhabitants