Original sentence: She allowed herself to be carried by the currents down river to the mill where the wheel "whirled her round in a manner frightful to behold" yet she had no dislocations or broken bones
Edited sentence: " She allowed herself to be carried by the currents down river to the mill where the wheel "whirled her round in a manner frightful to behold" yet she had no dislocations or broken bones.She would hop around on one leg exclaiming "Look upon me o Lord, for I am like unto a flamingo