Original sentence: Shalom Auslander (1970 Monsey, New York) is an American, Jewish author and essayist, who grew up in the heavily Orthodox Jewish neighborhood of Monsey, New York, where he describes himself as having been "raised like a veal"
Edited sentence: He grew up in the heavily Orthodox Jewish neighborhood of Monsey, New York, where he describes himself as having been "raised like a veal".Shalom Auslander (1970 Monsey, New York) is an American author and essayist