Original sentence: Egypt responded by withdrawing the United Nations Emergency Force from the Sinai Peninsula in order to deter the Israelis from attacking Syria.In June 1967, Israel launched an assault on Egypt's airforce, claiming that there was an imminent invasion by Egypt.In the months before June 1967, Israel penetrated Syrian airspace and territory, shooting down six Syrian planes and repeatedly threatened to overthrow the Syrian government.Insisting that it fell within Egypt's territorial waters, Nasser announced the closing of the the [[Straits of Tiran]--a pledge which he never carried out
Edited sentence: At the war's end, Israel had gained control of the Gaza Strip, the Sinai Peninsula, the West Bank, and the Golan Heights.In June 1967, Israel launched a pre-emptive attack on Egypt's airforce fearing an imminent invasion by Egypt.In the months before June 1967, Egypt expelled the United Nations Emergency Force from the Sinai Peninsula, increased its military activity near the border, blockaded the Straits of Tiran to Israeli ships, and called for unified Arab action against Israel.Jordan then attacked the Israeli cities of Jerusalem and Netanya.The results of the war affect the geopolitics of the region to this day