Original sentence: One of the bands more unique accomplishments is The Zulu Death Mask album which is a rock opera, a rare thing in the world of surf music.The band has acquired a cult following of fiercely loyal fans from around the world, including several european countries and the Florida Panhandle in the USA, an area the band apparently avoids due to their reputed fear of alligators.[[ Deadbolt's Official Homepage
Edited sentence: An outstanding resource for all things Deadbolt is their official website,.One of the best accomplishment of Deadbolt is The Zulu Death Mask album which is a rock opera, a rare thing in the world of surf music.The band has acquired a cult following of fiercely loyal fans from around the world, including several european countries and (interestingly) the Florida Panhandle in the USA, an area the band apparently avoids due to their reputed fear of alligators