Original sentence: After a promising start in rookie league, Bush tore a ligament in his pitching elbow and did not pitch again until the  season.Bush's professional career began with his suspension before he ever took the field, for his role in a fight outside an Arizona bar.He was selected first overall by the San Diego Padres in the 2004 Major League Baseball Draft, out of Mission Bay High School as a shortstop.His fastball reached a speed of 98 mph, and he has prior knowledge of pitching from his days as a high school ace.When he signed with the Padres, he received a signing bonus of $3,150,000, the second largest signing bonus ever given to a Padres draft pick
Edited sentence: After a promising start in rookie league, Bush tore a ligament in his pitching elbow and didn't pitch again until the  season.Bush's professional career began poorly when he was suspended before he ever took the field for his role in a fight outside an Arizona bar.He was selected first overall by the San Diego Padres in the 2004 Major League Baseball Draft out of Mission Bay High School as a shortstop.His fastball reaches a speed of 98 mph, and he has prior knowledge of pitching from his days as a high school ace.Instead, they decided to take Bush, who was a talented high school senior from the San Diego area, but in no way near the prospect as the other candidates.When he signed with the Padres, he received a signing bonus of $3,150,000, which is the second largest signing bonus ever given to a Padres draft pick