Original sentence: As a performer, he starred in the West End musicals Starlight Express and Cats, and played leading roles in the UK tours of 42nd Street and What A Feeling.He was born in Chingford, London and trained at the Royal Ballet School for 3 years and then at Italia Conti Academy for a further 3 years as a singer/dancer/actor.Rass acted in numerous commercials and performed modelling work.Sandy Rass (born 28 August]] 1974) is a British songwriter/producer of Fast Food Rockers and others, and a singer, dancer and actor.Writing with record breaking music legend Mike Stock of Stock/Aitken/Waterman Sandy co-wrote and co-produced "The Fast Food Song" by The Fast Food Rockers.before making his name as a songwriter
Edited sentence: As a performer, he starred in the hit West End musicals Starlight Express and Cats, and played leading roles in the UK tours of 42nd Street and What A Feeling.Blessed with good looks he did numerous commercials and modelling work.Born 28th August 1974 in Chingford, London.He also has an exceptionally high IQ, placing him very comfortably in the genius bracket.Sandy Rass trained at the world famous Royal Ballet School for 3 years and then at the prestigious Italia Conti Academy for a further 3 years as a singer/dancer/actor.Writing with record breaking music legend Mike Stock of Stock/Aitken/Waterman Sandy co-wrote and co-produced an enormous worldwide hit The Fast Food Song by The Fast Food Rockers.before making his name as a hit songwriter