Original sentence: Regular staff writers/contributors include: Mike Barthel (also the TV Editor), Bryan Borzykowski, August Brown, Bob Canning, Lorraine Carpenter, Matthew Christoffersen, Nate Daly, Chris Drabick (also the Alt-country/Americana Reviews Editor), Laura Ferreiro, Matt Fink, Jumana Farouky, Cory Frye (also the Reissues and Jazz Reviews Editor), Ryan Gillespie, Tim Grierson, Nick Hyman (also the DVD and Video Game Reviews Editor), Marcus Kagler, Gary Knight, Shannon McCarthy, Lily Moayeri, John Motley, Dave Obenour, Jason Pace, Joseph Ragusa, Mark Redfern, Michelle Salzman, Jim Scott (also the Hip-Hop Reviews editor), Justin Sohl, John Srebalus, Paul Sikes, Laura Studarus, Chris Tinkham (also the Online Cinema Editor), Frank Valish (also the Book Reviews Editor), Michele Yamamoto and Chris Walla
Edited sentence: Regular staff writers/contributors include: Mike Barthel (also the TV Editor), Bryan Borzykowski, August Brown, Bob Canning, Lorraine Carpenter, Matthew Christoffersen, Nate Daly, Chris Drabick (also the Alt-country/Americana Reviews Editor), Laura Ferreiro, Matt Fink, Jumana Farouky, Cory Frye (also the Reissues and Jazz Reviews Editor), Ryan Gillespie, Tim Grierson, Mike Hilleary, Nick Hyman (also the DVD and Video Game Reviews Editor), Marcus Kagler, Gary Knight, Shannon McCarthy, Lily Moayeri, John Motley, Dave Obenour, Jason Pace, Joseph Ragusa, Mark Redfern, Michelle Salzman, Jim Scott (also the Hip-Hop Reviews editor), Justin Sohl, John Srebalus, Paul Sikes, Laura Studarus, Chris Tinkham (also the Online Cinema Editor), Frank Valish (also the Book Reviews Editor), Michele Yamamoto and Chris Walla