Original sentence: An early version of the modern Self-help book, the 18th-century British conduct book drew on many literary traditions, such as advice manuals and religious narratives.So, in outlining a meaningful position for women in society, Wollstonecraft confines them to the domestic sphere
Edited sentence: An early version of the modern Self-help book, the 18th-century British conduct book drew on several literary traditions, such as advice manuals and religious narratives.Yet, in attempting to outline a meaningful position for women in society, Wollstonecraft paradoxically confines them to the domestic sphere