Original sentence: As Thomas Szasz points out, one of implications of the argument that mental illness does not exist is the insanity defense would thus be abolished.However, the lower rates of diagnosis for the forms of schizophrenia accepted in Western Europe than in the United States have led some to question the criteria for diagnosis, and even speculate that in some cases schizophrenia is deliberately misdiagnosed in the United States as a means of political or philosophical repression or as the result of increasing pharmaceutical industry marketing influence upon mental health professionals.Psychiatrists have said that Scientology only opposes psychiatry because new age methods for treating mental illness, such as Dianetics, are ineffective.The form of treatment also may vary according to criteria that some find suspect; young African American males in the United States are disproportionately prescribed high doses of 'anti-psychotic' medication, and African Americans are disproportionately subjected to involuntary commitment
Edited sentence: As Thomas Szasz points out, one of implications of the argument mental illness does not exist is the insanity defense would thus be abolished.However, the lower rates of diagnosis for the forms of schizophrenia accepted in Western Europe than in the United States, has led some to question the criteria for diagnosis, and even that in some cases schizophrenia is deliberately misdiagnosed in the United States as a means of political or philosophical repression or as the result of increasing pharmaceutical industry marketing influence upon mental health professionals.Psychiatrists have said that Scientology only opposes psychiatry because  new age methods for treating mental illness, such as Dianetics, are ineffective.The form of treatment also may vary according to suspect criteria; young African American males in the United States are disproportionately prescribed high doses of 'anti-psychotic' medication, and African Americans are disproportionately subjected to involuntary commitment