Original sentence: A passionate fan of the Adelaide Crows AFL team, Graeme was a club Ambassador in 1991, and for the teams dual premierships in 1997/1998 broadcast Seven News Live from Melbourne.After sick leave in 2004, Graeme swapped with  John Riddell and now presents the weekend editions of Seven News.Graeme was joined at the news desk by Jane Doyle in 1989 and together they took Seven Nightly News to the top of the ratings.He later worked for 7LA in Launceston and 5DN in Adelaide before leaving the media to operate a health food business in Tasmania.However he returned to Television as a reporter for TNT-9 (now Southern Cross Television} in northern Tasmania.In 1981, Graeme joined SAS-10 Adelaide, now SAS-7 as a sports reporter and presenter for Eyewitness News
Edited sentence: A passioante fan of the Adelaide Crows AFL team, Graeme was a club Ambassador in 1991, and for the teams dual premierships in 1997/1998 broadcast Seven News Live from Melbourne.After sick leave in 2004, graeme swapped with  John Riddell and now presents the weekend editions of Seven News.Graeme was joined at the news desk by Jane Doyle in 1989 and togther they took Seven Nightly News to the top of the ratings.He later worked for 7LA in Launceston and 5DN in Adelaide before leaving the media to operate a health food business in Tasmaina.His impreesive on air talent instantly lead to a permanent position.However he returned to Television as a reporter for TNT-9 (now Southern Cross Television} in norther Tasmania.In 1981, graeme joined SAS-10 Adelaide, now SAS-7 as a sports reporter and presnter for Eyewitness News