Original sentence: " They discover erotic freedom in Mick's affair with a local waitress and Wallace's homosexual romance with Bobby Philips, a junior boy, who he takes to bed.Mick Travis, the main protagonist, arrives back at school in a black hat, a black scarf across his face to hide his beard, with a suitcase on his shoulder, in a scene lifted from Alfred Hitchcock's The Lodgerfact.The film is a study of rebellion against an autocracy that denies individual freedomfact, a rebellion symbolized by Travis asking "When do we live.The film makes reference upon the tradtion of "fagging"  in English public schools during the 1960s and before.The prefects are entitled to the services of "Scum", who are first-year boys assigned to run errands, make tea, and generally act as unpaid servants.These early scenes show the school's customs and traditions
Edited sentence: " They discover erotic freedom in Mick's affair with a local waitress and Wallace's romance with Bobby Philips, a junior boy, who he takes to bed.English public schools do appoint seniors as Prefects, and there was a tradition of "fagging" in the 1960s.Mick Travis, the main protagonist, arrives back at school in a black hat, a black scarf across his face to hide his beard, with a suitcase on his shoulder, in a scene lifted from Alfred Hitchcock's The Lodger.Prefects are also entitled to the services  of "Scum", who are first-year boys assigned to run errands, make tea, and generally act as unpaid servants.The film is a study of rebellion against an autocracy that denies individual freedom, a rebellion symbolized by Travis asking "When do we live.These early scenes show the school's arcane customs and traditions