Original sentence: The Rhodesian Army comprised regiments such as the Rhodesian African Rifles and conscription was eventually introduced to supplement the professional soldiers and the many volunteers from overseas.The Rhodesian Army fought bitterly against the black nationalist guerillas.The elections of 1980, under widespread intimidation by ZIPRA terrorists, produced a victory for Mugabe, who assumed the post of prime minister after his ZANU party received approximately 63 percent of the vote.The two major black nationalist factions led by Nkomo and Mugabe denounced the new government as a puppet of the white Rhodesians and the fighting continued.Under the agreement of March 1978, the country's name became Zimbabwe-Rhodesia, and in the general election of 24 April Bishop Abel Muzorewa became the country's first black prime minister
Edited sentence: However, the two major black nationalist factions led by Nkomo and Mugabe denounced the new government as a puppet of the white Rhodesians and the fighting continued.It is estimated that many more people have died by violent means at the hands of the Mugabe regime since independence, than in the entire history of Rhodesia.The Rhodesian Army comprised regiments such as the Rhodesian African Rifles and conscription was eventually introduced to suppliment the professional soldiers and the many volunteers from overseas.The Rhodesian Army was thought by many as being one of the worlds greatest counter-insurgency forces and fought bitterly against the black nationailst gurrilas.The country's name was changed to Zimbabwe-Rhodesia, and in the general election of 24 April Bishop Abel Muzorewa became the country's first black prime minister.The elections of 1980, under massive intimidation by ZIPRA terrorists, produced a victory for Mugabe, who assumed the post of prime minister after his ZANU party received approximately 63 percent of the vote.This is actually an excuse for blatant racism