Original sentence: After the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, the city was divided between Israeli and Jordanian control; Jordan controlled the Old City and the eastern side of Jerusalem, and forced any Jews in those areas to leave.On June 7, 1967 (28 Iyar 5727), East Jerusalem, location of the Temple Mount,  was liberated by Israel during the Six-Day War and for the first time in nearly 2,000 years, Jews were free to worship again at the remnant of their holiest site and epicenter of their religion.Under Jordanian rule, Jews were barred from visiting their holy sites in the Old City, and most Jewish cemeteries and synagogues throughout the West Bank were either desecrated or suffered deterioration from absolute negligence
Edited sentence: After the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, the city was divided between Israeli and Jordanian control; Jordan controlled the Old City and the eastern side of Jerusalem.Most Jewish cemeteries and synagogues throughout the West Bank were either suffered deterioration from absolute negligence.On June 7, 1967 (28 Iyar 5727), East Jerusalem, location of the Temple Mount,  was liberated by Israel during the Six-Day War.Under Jordanian rule, Jews were barred from visiting their holy sites in the Old City, as were arabs barred from entering western part of the city