Original sentence: In the opinion of pastors, theologians, and traditional church musicians alike, Jesus music considered to be lyrically and theologically simple and even Biblically unsound.Initially, what was viewed as Jesus music's association with secular music caused many American churches to largely reject the movement as well as the artists.Jesus music pioneer Larry Norman addressed this culture clash in his 1972 song, "Why Should The Devil Have All the Good Music.This suited many Jesus music artists as they wanted to bring the message of their music to non-Christians and not just to church youth.This view was no doubt fueled by the unwillingness of most orthodox and mainstream Christian churches to allow what was seen as "the Devil's music" into their assemblies
Edited sentence: The music was quite often both lyrically and musically simple as well as theologically immature.This latter fact and its association with worldly music caused many American churches to largely reject the movement and these artists at the time.This suited many artists as they wanted to bring Jesus to non-Christians, not only to church youth