Original sentence: Begun 1994 by a 14 year old girl in the United States, Horseland, has grown to now have over 2 million users who play from all over the world.Horseland is a online virtual pet game where players create and raise horses and dogs.Produced by DIC Entertainment, the series premiered on September 16, 2006 as part of CBSs new Saturday morning cartoon block, KOL's Saturday Morning Secret Slumber Party on CBS
Edited sentence: " Although the Junior Version of the game is simpler for younger children, the original game is more complex and probably overall more entertaining.Horseland is a web site where players create virtual horses and dogs.It has grown to now have over 2 million users who play from all over the world.It was started in 1994 by a 14 year old girl in the United States.Produced by DIC Entertainment, the series premiered on September 16, 2006 as part of CBS new  saturday morning block, KOL's Saturday Morning Secret Slumber Party on CBS