Original sentence: One of the primary shortfalls of most Li-S cells is a intermediary reactions with the electroyltes.The disolving of LiSn into electroyltes causes irreversible loss of active sulfur material
Edited sentence: One of the primary shortfalls of most Li-S cells is a intermediary reactions with the electrolytes.The disolving of LiSn into electrolytes causes irreversible loss of active sulfur material