Original sentence: These included opening controversial HEAT low barrier homeless shelters in a residential neighbourhood at the North end of the Granville Street Bridge, near a daycare centre and senior housing facility, without the normal neighbourhood consultation process; creating a bicycle lane experiment on the Burrard Bridge without consulting neighbourhood businesses that would be heavily impacted by traffic pattern changes; and sneaking into the controversial HEAT shelters late at night when none of the neighbours that had complained about the street prostitution and drug trade brought in by the shelters would be around
Edited sentence: These included opening controversial HEAT low barrier homeless shelters in a residential neighbourhood near a daycare centre and senior housing facility at the North end of the Granville Street Bridge without the normal neighbourhood consultation process; creating a bicycle lane experiment on the Burrard Bridge without consulting neighbourhood businesses that would be heavily impacted by traffic pattern changes; and sneaking into the controversial HEAT shelters late at night when none of the neighbours that had complained about the street prostitution and drug trade brought in by the shelters to the previously quiet neighbourhood would be around