Original sentence: After only a year, she understood St.Proctor Powell Florence’s contributions to librarianship were acknowledged decades after she became the first Black woman in the United States to earn a degree in library science.The Pittsburgh school system had integrated but they were not yet ready for Black teachers to impress knowledge upon white students and therefore would not accept Powell Florence as a teacher.Virginia Proctor Powell Florence died at the age of 93 in 1991 in Richmond
Edited sentence: After only a year, Powell Florence understood St.Powell Florence’s contributions to librarianship were acknowledged decades after she became the first Black woman in the United States to earn a degree in library science.The Pittsburgh school system had integrated but they were not yet ready for black teachers to impress knowledge upon white students and therefore would not accept Powell Florence as a teacher.Virginia Proctor Powell Florence died in 1991 at the age of 93 in Richmond