Original sentence: " He at first attempted to persuade her but being refused threated her: "By this awful threat, his lust triumphed over her inflexible chastity...." Lucretia chose to submit for now
Edited sentence: " He at first attempted to persuade her but being refused threatened her: "By this awful threat, his lust triumphed over her inflexible chastity...." Lucretia chose to submit for now