Original sentence: Bush's remark, relayed through a spokesperson, that "the president believes that the senator is an inclusive man", to sharp criticism from sex columnist Dan Savage.Santorum did not apologize, stating that his comments were not intended to equate homosexuality with incest and adultery, but rather as a critique of a specific legal position: that the right to privacy prevents the government from regulating consensual acts among adults
Edited sentence: Bush's remark, relayed through a spokesperson, that "the president believes that the senator is an inclusive man", to sex columnist's Dan Savage's suggestion that the word "santorum" henceforth be used as a sex-related word as a satirical form of political protest.Santorum refused to apologize, stating that his comments were not intended to equate homosexuality with incest and adultery, but rather as a critique of a specific legal position: that the right to privacy prevents the government from regulating consensual acts among adults.See Dan Savage for more