Original sentence: Harboring a desire to fight him and with Matsuo Shozan's aproval Tatsumi organizes an everything goes fight with Tanba which ends with him defeating Jyohei by Knockout out submission
Edited sentence: Harboring a desire to fight him and with Matsuo Shozan's approval Tatsumi organizes an everything goes fight with Tanba which ends with him defeating Jyohei by Knockout out submission