Original sentence: After his victory, Trump claimed on twitter that "In addition to winning the Electoral College in a landslide, I won the popular vote if you deduct the millions of people who voted illegally.Critics and civil rights groups have argued that such claims are unfounded and that the intent of the order is to enable the surpression of voting rights.During his campaign for President, Donald Trump made numerous claims of large-scale voter fraud occurring in the United States which have been criticized as lacking evidence by commentators including FactCheck.In the run-up to the election, Trump also asked his supporters to volunteer as "poll watchers" on Election Day, leading to fears from some of voter intimidation.On November 8, 2016, Donald Trump won the 2016 United States presidential election electoral college vote 304 to 227, although his opponent, Hilary Clinton, had received 2.9 million more votes.The order was subsequently revoked by Executive Order 13820 (titled "Termination of Presidential Advisory Commission on Election Integrity"), which was signed by President Trump on January 3, 2018
Edited sentence: Civil Rights groups have claimed that the Executive Order was a voter suppression tactic.During his campaign for President, Donald Trump made numerous claims of voter fraud occurring in the United States.He wanted them to guard against voter fraud and a rigged outcome of the election.Members of the Presidential Advisory Commission on Election Integrity have been selected, and begun work and meetings.On November 28, 2016, Trump stated in a tweet, "In addition to winning the Electoral College in a landslide, I won the popular vote if you deduct the millions of people who voted illegally.On November 8, 2016, Donald Trump won the 2016 United States presidential election electoral college vote 304 to 227, but 2.9 million more votes were cast for Clinton.Since its signing, responses to the executive order have included :.This Order was revoked by Executive Order 13820 (titled "Termination of Presidential Advisory Commission on Election Integrity"), which was signed by President Trump on January 3, 2018.Trump asked his supporters to volunteer as poll watchers on Election Day