Original sentence: Another bourgening scene was the Chicago/Milwaukee area, with labels such as Addict, Chocolate Industries, Hefty, and Zod supporting artists like Doormouse and Emotional Joystick.In particular, during this period, IDM production greatly increased in the United States.One of the more notable hubs of activity was Miami, Florida, with labels like Schematic, Merck Records, and The Beta Bodega Coalition sprouting up and releasing material by artists such as Phoenecia, Dino Felipe, Machinedrum, and Proem.The majority of IDM's early pioneers were based in Great Britain, but a few artists, such as Sun Electric from Berlin, hailed from other countries.While mainly British based during the early-to-middle 1990s, IDM spread somewhat in the late 1990s and early 2000s, with a diverse array of styles being combined in new ways by a growing stable of artists across the globe
Edited sentence: A second would be the Chicago/Milwaukee area with labels such as Addict, Chocolate Industries, Hefty, and Zod releasing artists like Doormouse and Emotional Joystick.In the late 1990s and early 2000s IDM greatly increased in the United States.One of the more notable areas was Miami, Florida with labels like Schematic, Merck Records, and The Beta Bodega Coalition sprouting up and releasing artists such as Phoenecia, Dino Felipe, Machinedrum, and Proem.The influence of Chicago's adventurous and experimental Wax Trax.While mainly British based during the early-to-middle 1990s, IDM spread somewhat in the late 1990s and early 2000s, with a diverse array of styles being combined in new ways by a growing stable of artists across the globe, such as Sun Electric from Berlin, who were early pioneers in IDM and related genres.label and the use of rhythms drawn from Detroit electro are also obvious in earlier, more linear IDM such as Autechre's "Bass Cadet" (released stateside on Wax Trax) or more recently in their Gescom releases