Original sentence: At age 11, he worked at a fishery and ate lots of raw fish.Felton is the youngest of ten brothers.Felton lives in Sydney, Australia with his parents, his nine older brothers and his goldfish named trevor.Felton was educated at West Horse head's Cranmore School, until the age of thirteen and then at the Howard of Effingham, a secondary school in Surrey.He was in four choirs throughout his childhood but was banished after his voice broke during a live performance
Edited sentence: At age 11, he worked at a fishery.Felton is the youngest of four brothers.Felton lives in Surrey with his parents and three older brothers.Felton was educated at West Horsley's Cranmore School, until the age of thirteen and then at the Howard of Effingham, a secondary school in Surrey.He was in four choirs throughout his childhood, starting with his church choir at age seven