Original sentence: Despite many promises from John O'Donoghue TD the road surface remains dangerous particularly in the centre of the Village by the old Graveyard
Edited sentence: Despite many promises from John O'Donoghue TD & Kilgarvan natives, Jackie Healy Rae TD and his two sons who are County Councillors Michael and Danny, with Michael Healy Rae being Mayor of Kerry, they have ignored their home village.The road surface remains dangerous despite work in the centre of the Village by the old Graveyard, and Kerry Co