Original sentence: During in early 1540, the native population later began a fierce rebellion against the Spanish and their native allies from the south.Even though Guzmán was arrested by the colonial authorities, his reign of terror had long-lasting repercussions in the land of the Chichimeca.In 1529, with a force of 10,500 men, Nuño Beltrán de Guzmán set forth on a march through Nayarit, Jalisco, Durango, Sinaloa and Zacatecas.In 1550, the Chichimeca War; the first frontier war and the hardest battle ever fought by the Spanish against the natives, began.The Spanish eventually regained their advantage aided by infectious disease and suppressed the revolt by December 1541
Edited sentence: Despite his arrest, his reign of terror had long-lasting repercussions in the land of the Chichimeca.Guzmán was arrested by the colonial authorities.In 1529, Nuño Beltrán de Guzmán set forth with a force of 10,500 men on a march through Nayarit, Jalisco, Durango, Sinaloa and Zacatecas.In 1550, the Chichimeca War, the first frontier war and the hardest battle ever fought by the Spanish against the natives, began.In early 1540, the native population began a fierce rebellion against the Spanish and their native allies from the south.The Spanish eventually regained their advantage, aided by infectious disease, suppressing the revolt by December 1541