Original sentence: In addition to wrestling and rowing in college, he was also active in dancing in styles including jazz, ballet, Afro-Caribbean, and Latin Ballroom
Edited sentence: (Note: His M.(Note: His poor academic showing at the University of Texas at Austin was the reason why he was not allowed to continue there.) In addition to wrestling and rowing in college, he was also active in dancing in styles including jazz, ballet, Afro-Caribbean, and Latin Ballroom.His criticism is highly unusual given the fact that his technical understanding of the field is close to that of the general public and he has not been sufficiently well-versed in any areas of theoretical physics or mathematics.It is rather unusual for a typical theoretical astrophysicist to finish her/his PhD in 11 years.degree at the University of Texas at Austin was a terminal degree that was given to him as he was not allowed into the PhD program due to the poor academic showing in the first two years there