Original sentence: Burke (born June 30, 1955) is an American-born Canadian hockey manager acting as the President of Hockey Operations and General Manager for the Calgary Flames and is a member of Rugby Canada’s board of directors
Edited sentence: Burke (born June 30, 1955) is a not very good American-born Canadian hockey manager acting as the President of Hockey Operations and General Manager for the Calgary Flames and is a member of Rugby Canada’s board of directors