Original sentence: Big Sur has attracted and inspired a number of writers and artists, most notably Henry Miller, Robinson Jeffers, Edward Weston, Trent Reznor, Mickey Muennig, Richard Brautigan and Jack Kerouac, who actually wrote a book called Big Sur.It is also home to the Esalen Institute, a workshop and retreat center devoted to the exploration of what Aldous Huxley called the "human potential"
Edited sentence: Big Sur has attracted and inspired a number of writers and artists, most notably Henry Miller, Robinson Jeffers, Edward Weston, Trent Reznor, Mickey Muennig, and Jack Kerouac, who actually wrote a book called Big Sur.It is also home to the legendary Esalen Institute, a workshop and retreat center devoted to the exploration of what Aldous Huxley called the "human potential"