Original sentence: He was equally noted as a musical theatre star, creating roles such as El Gallo in The Fantasticks, the longest-running musical play in history; Chuck Baxter in Promises, Promises (for which he won a Tony Award); Julian Marsh in 42nd Street; and Billy Flynn in Chicago.Jerome Bernard "Jerry" Orbach (October 20, 1935 – December 28, 2004) was an American actor and singer, known for his screen roles as Jake Houseman in Dirty Dancing, his starring role as Detective Lennie Briscoe in Law & Order, his recurring role as Harry McGraw in Murder, She Wrote, and as the voice of Lumière in Disney's Beauty and the Beast
Edited sentence: He was also a noted musical theatre star, creating roles such as El Gallo in The Fantasticks; Chuck Baxter in Promises, Promises (for which he won a Tony Award); Julian Marsh in 42nd Street; and Billy Flynn in Chicago.Jerome Bernard "Jerry" Orbach (October 20, 1935 – December 28, 2004) was an American actor and singer, best known for his role as Jake Houseman in Dirty Dancing, his starring role as Detective Lennie Briscoe in Law & Order, his recurring role as Harry McGraw in Murder, She Wrote, and as the voice of Lumière in Disney's Beauty and the Beast