Original sentence: Panoramic views of the coastline, Juan de Fuca Strait and the Olympic Mountains can be seen from many points along this rainforest trail.Whales, sea lions, bald eagles, herons, and other wildlife can be seen
Edited sentence: Breathtaking views of the coastline, Juan de Fuca Strait and the Olympic Mountains can be seen from many points along this rainforest trail.Lucky are those who spot a pod of whales, but it is not uncommon to view sea lions, bald eagles, herons and other wildlife