Original sentence: The book follows the rise and fall of humans, the struggle against the occupying Qax forces, humanity's first contact with the Xeelee, delves into [[time travel.The second book in the Xeelee sequence, Timelike Infinity introduces a universe of powerful alien species and technologies which manages to maintain a realistic edge due to Baxter's physics background
Edited sentence: The book follows the rise and fall of humans, the struggle against the occupying Qax forces, humanity's first contact with the Xeelee, delves into time travel, and makes a fascinating read.The second book in the Xeelee sequence, Timelike Infinity introduces a stunning universe of powerful alien species and technologies which manages to maintain a realistic edge due to Baxter's physics background