Original sentence: An example is as follows:.Hailing mostly from the San Diego, California area, "The Scariest Band in the World", as Deadbolt musicians describe themselves, combines surf rock, psychobilly and blues sound with unusual and offbeat lyrics.The band's online message board (see web link below) has spawned an online romance between frequent posters "Patrick" and "DBF" that has recently led to a common-law marriage with Deadbolt providing reception entertainment
Edited sentence: Hailing mostly from the San Diego, California area, "The Scariest Band in the World", as Deadbolt musicians describe themselves, combines surf rock, psychobilly and blues sound with weird, creepy and often hilariously offbeat lyrics:.How's that for loyalty.Now GFY.The band's online message board (see web link below) has even spawned an online romance between frequent posters "Patrick" and "DBF" that has recently led to a common-law marriage with Deadbolt providing reception entertainment