Original sentence: After their proclaimed victory in the Battle of Karameh, Fatah and other Palestinian militias began taking control of civil life in Jordan.In the late 1960s, tensions between Palestinians and the Jordanian government increased greatly; heavily armed Palestinian elements had created a virtual "state within a state" in Jordan, eventually controlling several strategic positions in that country
Edited sentence: After their propaganda victory in the Battle of Karameh, Fatah and other Palestinian militias began taking control of civil life in Jordan.In the late 1960s, tensions between Palestinians and the Jordanian government increased greatly; heavily armed Arab militants elements had created a virtual "state within a state" in Jordan, eventually controlling several strategic positions in that country