Original sentence: During his tenure as health minister, he tried to promote a national insurance program that would provide medical treatment without requiring a down payment.Patrick Sebo Koshoni (April 17, 1943- 25 January, 2020) was a retired Nigerian Navy Vice Admiral, former Chief of Naval Staff who had served as minister for Health during administration of General Buhari
Edited sentence: During his tenure as health minister, he tried to kick start a national insurance scheme, the scheme involved medical treatment without down payment.Patrick Sebo Koshoni (April 17, 1943- 25 January, 2020) is a retired Nigerian Navy Vice Admiral, former Chief of Naval Staff and a former minister for Health during administration of General Buhari