Original sentence: The Eastern Syria Insurgency is an armed insurgency being waged by remnants of ISIL and Arab Nationalists both Pro and Anti Government against the self-declared Democratic Federation of Northern Syria also known as "Rojava" and their allies in the CJTF-OIR coalition due to Kurdish dominance in the Syrian Democratic Forces (SDF) and fears of displacement and marginalization on behalf of the coalition and SDF due to Kurdish-centric policies supported by the PKK linked PYD and its armed branch the People's Protection Units also known as "YPG" which forms a major component in SDF
Edited sentence: The Eastern Syria Insurgency is an armed insurgency being waged by remnants of ISIL and Arab Nationalists both Pro and Anti Government against the self-declared Democratic Federation of Northern Syria also known as "Rojava" and their allies in the CJTF-OIR coalition due to Kurdish dominance in the Syrian Democratic Forces (SDF) and fears of displacement, genocide and marginalization on behalf of the coalition and SDF due to Kurdish-centric policies supported by the PKK linked PYD and its armed branch the People's Protection Units also known as "YPG" which forms a major component in SDF