Original sentence: Davis's first success was as Charmaine "Schultzy" Schultz in the sitcom The Bob Cummings Shows on NBC, twice winning the Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Comedy Series out of four nominations for this role
Edited sentence: Davis's first success was as Charmaine "Schultzy" Schultz in the sitcom The Bob Cummings Show on NBC, twice winning the Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Comedy Series out of four nominations for this role