Original sentence: Cox is described in interviews as a former Jehovah's Witness and porn star, and his writing style has drawn comparisons to American authors Dennis Cooper and Chuck Palahniuk... In the 2009 Montreal Mirror readers poll, he was voted one of the top 10 best local authors
Edited sentence: Cox is described in interviews as a former Jehovah's Witness and porn star, and his writing style has drawn comparisons to American authors Dennis Cooper and Chuck Palahniuk.. In the 2009 Montreal Mirror readers poll, he was voted one of the top 10 best local authors