Original sentence: Due to Finland having two national languages, the Swedish language is mandatory in the Finnish-speaking schools, and the Finnish language is mandatory in Swedish language schools.For Mandatory Swedish, some Finn students use the derogatory name pakkoruotsi, literally "compulsory Swedish", or even "forced Swedish", revealing a loaded bitterness.The Finnish name for both Mandatory Swedish and Mandatory Finnish is "toinen kotimainen kieli", literally "the second domestic language".The Finnish speaking population is however much larger
Edited sentence: Among some Finns the derogatory term pakkoruotsi, literally "compulsory Swedish", or even "forced Swedish", is often used in reference to this imposed tuition, revealing the loaded bitterness in what is by many perceived as a Swedish yoke.Due to Finland having two national languages, the Swedish language is mandatory in the Finnish-speaking schools, and likewise Finnish is a mandatory subject in the Swedish language schools.On the view of Finnish-speakers, the term in Finnish  is toinen kotimainen kieli, which would translate to "the second domestic language".Respectively, Finnish is then the second domestic language for the Swedish-speakers