Original sentence: Amy tells Dong that she's afraid that Jim is dead, and he didn't come home after the party.At the party, Dong finds Molly, the dog, and meets a strange "Jamaican" dealing a drug called "Soy Sauce.The main characters, John and Dong, are friends from an undisclosed town in the midwest.Thinking John is having a bad trip, Dong decides to take John to the hospital but, after Dong receives an impossible phone call, they end up at the home of "Big Jim" Sullivan and his sister Amy, trying to return Molly to its owner
Edited sentence: Amy tells Dave that she's afraid that Jim is dead, and he didn't come home after the party.At the party, Dave finds Molly, the dog, and meets a strange "Jamaican" dealing a drug called "Soy Sauce.The main characters, John and Dave, are friends from an undisclosed town in the midwest.Thinking John is having a bad trip, Dave decides to take John to the hospital but, after Dave receives an impossible phone call, they end up at the home of "Big Jim" Sullivan and his sister Amy, trying to return Molly to its owner