Original sentence: hasn't managed to sell more copies than the rapper's previous effort, it is still nevertheless a commercial success, selling over 1.5 million copies in the United States, and even appeared again at the bottom of the Billboard 200 during the release week of Paper Trail, T
Edited sentence: hasn't managed to sell more copies than the rapper's previous effort, it is nevertheless a commercial success, selling over 1.5 million copies in the United States, and even appeared again at the bottom of the Billboard 200 during the release week of Paper Trail, T