Original sentence: Santa Monica Boulevard was closed as more than a thousand whining queers gathered outside the Los Angeles Temple in Westwood because of the prominent role that members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, commonly known as Mormons, took in supporting the proposition
Edited sentence: Santa Monica Boulevard was closed as more than a thousand protesters gathered outside the Los Angeles Temple in Westwood because of the prominent role that members of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, commonly known as Mormons, took in supporting the proposition