Original sentence: Many animals are said to suffer and die in cosmetic testing, which is not required by law, so most animal rights activists also refuse to buy cosmetics that are tested on animals, and sometimes other products from the same company.The number of animals killed for food use every year (9.8 billion) far exceeds the number of animals alleged to be suffering from all other forms of animal exploitation
Edited sentence: Many animals suffer and die in cosmetic testing, which is not required by law, so most animal rights activists also refuse to buy cosmetics that are tested on animals, and sometimes other products from the same company.The number of animals killed for food use every year (9.8 billion) far exceeds the number of animals suffering from all other forms of animal exploitation