Original sentence: The video begins with two boys playing by a stream, having a good time, but when one of the boys rounds up a small point, he looks up, and sees an angel lying on a few rocks, unconscious and bleeding from her eyes
Edited sentence: The video begins with two boys playing by a stream, having a good time, but when one of the boys rounds up a small boat, he looks up, and sees an angel lying next to a riverbed, unconscious and bleeding from her eyes