Original sentence: Due to these criticisms, some people view The Epoch Times as an opinion journal rather than a serious newspaper following established journalistic standards.It is also criticized for not making a clear distinction between news and commentary.It is notable for using exaggerated or aggressive headlines more akin to those found in tabloid papers.It should be noted that although a concentration of these negative articles may be published in The Epoch Times, they are not exclusive and many of these reports can also be found in neutral overseas Chinese newspapers.Observers have noted the large amount of space it devotes to negative views on the Communist Party of China and content relating to banned groups such as Falun Gong.One of the biggest criticisms of The Epoch Times is its penchant towards airing only news stories that cast mainland China in a negative light and for commentaries that select and interpret facts in questionable ways.Others criticize the paper, accusing it of having lax journalistic standards, an exaggerated tone, and of pro-Falun Gong bias
Edited sentence: It should be noted that although some of the negtive stories may be found in some other neutral overseas Chinese newspapers, but it is often appeared in a much more negtive way on Epoch Times' articles It is also criticized for not making a clear distinction between news and commentary, for example putting opinion articles on the front page (accompanied by a note that it is an editorial).Its editorial series "Nine Commentaries on the Communist Party" recently won a top award from the Asian American Journalists Association.Observers have noted the large amount of space it devotes to negative views on the Communist Party of China and content relating to persecuted groups Falun Gong.One of the biggest criticisms of The Epoch Times is its articles on Chinese politics usually cast the government in negative light.Others criticize the paper, accusing it of an exaggerated tone and a pro-Falun Gong bias