Original sentence: However, the republic's actions produced worldwide condemnation, the establishment of the International Criminal Tribunal for the Former Yugoslavia in 1993 and the eventual indictment of the Republika Srpska military and civilian leadership for war crimes (see: the Srebrenica massacre, ethnic cleansing of the non-Serb population, killing, torturing and raping at detention camps, and the siege of Sarajevo).In addition, the Federal Republic of Yugoslavia provided extensive humanitarian, logistical and financial support for the Republika Srpska and its military with the ultimate goal of annexing the territory controlled by the VRS and making it a part of Serbia
Edited sentence: After illegal referendum about independence of Bosnia and Hercegovina(Serbs were constituible people),Muslims started killing of Serbs in Sarajevo ,murdering Nikola Gardović, a groom's father who was killed at a Serb wedding procession on the second day of the referendum, on March 1, 1992 in Sarajevo's old town Baščaršija, to be the first victim of the war in Bosnia.In addition, the Federal Republic of Yugoslavia provided extensive humanitarian, logistical and financial support for the Republika Srpska and its military with the ultimate goal to protect Serbian people from islamisation and possible genocide like in WWII.Muslims provoke Serbian reaction and conflict