Original sentence: Bastian's Father – Bastian's unnamed father who is described to have grown distant from his son after the death of his wife, although this changes when he and Bastian are reunited at the end of the book
Edited sentence: Bastian's Father – Bastian's unnamed father, who is a dentist by profession, is described to have grown distant from his son after the death of his wife, although this changes when he and Bastian are reunited at the end of the book