Original sentence: A new studio album, Getting In Over My Head, featuring collaborations with Elton John, Paul McCartney, Eric Clapton, and his deceased brother Carl Wilson.Notably, the song "Good Vibrations" featured Tony Asher's original lyrics rather than Mike Love's revised lyrics from the 1966 single version of the song
Edited sentence: " The album is pleasant enough, if a little too sugary sweet in places.A new studio album, Gettin' In Over My Head, featuring a misguided collaboration with Elton John, as well as collaborations with Paul McCartney, Eric Clapton, and his deceased brother Carl Wilson.Notably, the song "Good Vibrations" featured Tony Asher's original lyrics rather than Mike Love's revised lyrics from the 1966 single version of the song (a controversial decision at best, not least because the "new" lyrics were inferior