Original sentence: She has long black hair, which, at its end, is parted like a dolphin's tail, and brown eyes.Throughout the game, the players realize that Tifa does have a past, intelligence, feelings and emotions, rather than being the giddy and brainless bimbo with a large chest
Edited sentence: She has long black hair, which, at its end, is parted beautifly like a dolphin's tail, and brown eyes.Throughout the game, the players realize that Tifa does have a past, intelligence, feelings and emotions, rather than being the ditzy and brainless bimbo with a large chest