Original sentence: " She actually was wearing an orange dress at the Biograph Theatre (where Dillinger was killed in the alley next door).He pulled an automatic weapon and attempted to flee, but was shot four times with a bullet at point blank range through the back of his neck killing him instantly.He was discovered there by police, who were informed of his whereabouts by a prostitute who was letting him stay in one of her rooms, Anna Sage "the woman in red.On July 22, they closed in on the Biograph Theatre where he was watching a gangster movie.The FBI team, led by Agent Melvin Purvis, moved to arrest him as he left the building.The fatal bullet hit the top of his spinal cord and exited under his right eye
Edited sentence: He pulled a weapon and attempted to flee, but was shot three times, with a bullet through his face killing him.He was discovered there by police, who were informed of his whereabouts by a prostitute.On July 22, they closed in on a theater where he was watching a movie, and moved to arrest him as he left the building