Original sentence: Another track, "Time on my hands", appeared on the 2003 release, Disco 3.In the UK it charted at number 7, in Germany at number 3.One year after the release of Release, Pet Shop Boys released Disco 3 which included remixes of some of the songs from Release along with new material that they were working on at the time of writing/producing material for Release.The artwork was designed by Greg Foley of the New York design group and magazine publishers, Visionaire, and was nominated for a Grammy Award for Best Recording Package
Edited sentence: Another track, "Time on my hands", appeared on the 2003 release, "Disco 3".In the UK it charted at number 8, in Germany at number 3.It is now Pet Shop Boys' most infamous video clip.One year after the release of Release, Pet Shop Boys released "Disco 3" which included remixes of some of the songs from Release along with new material that they were working on at the time of writing/producing material for Release.The artwork was designed by the New York design group and magazine publishers, Visionaire, and was nominated for a Grammy award