Original sentence: A few years later she had the distinction of being the first person ever to answer Mickey Mouse's e-mail.Due to her co-authorship in "The Baby Gizmo Buying Guide", Maclean was an on-air parenting contributor to many news programs, including Good Morning America, the CBS Early Show, ABC News, Fox Business Network and ParentsTV.Heather Maclean is an American author and the co-founder of Little Laureate, a children’s educational media production company.In 2001, Maclean co-founded Little Laureate with business partner Monica Gibson, a children’s educational media production company.Maclean began her career at The Walt Disney Company where she was a tour guide at the Disneyland Park.Maclean co-authored her first book, The Baby Gizmo Buying Guide: From Pacifiers to Potties.Maclean was a contestant on the Richard Branson reality television show The Rebel Billionaire, an Apprentice-meets-Amazing Race reality program broadcast on the Fox network in 2005, and shown in 19 countries around the world.Why, When, and What to Buy for Pregnancy Through Preschool, a non-fiction resource for new parents, that was published by Thomas Nelson in 2008.com and later transitioned to their subsidiary Aquaduct, where she was released from her job duties in 2001
Edited sentence: Heather Maclean is an American author and the founder of Little Laureate, a children’s educational media production company.In 2001, Maclean founded Little Laureate, a children’s educational media production company.Maclean began her career at The Walt Disney Company where she co-created the Disneyland Resort's first Website, www.Maclean is an on-air parenting contributor to many news programs, including Good Morning America, the CBS Early Show, ABC News, Fox Business Network and ParentsTV.Maclean starred with Richard Branson on the television show The Rebel Billionaire, an Apprentice-meets-Amazing Race reality program broadcast on the Fox network in 2005, and shown in 19 countries around the world.Maclean’s first book, The Baby Gizmo Buying Guide: From Pacifiers to Potties.Why, When, and What to Buy for Pregnancy Through Preschool, a non-fiction resource for new parents, was published by Thomas Nelson in 2008.com, produced the company's first international intranet Team Disney, and had the distinction of being the first person ever to answer Mickey Mouse's e-mail