Original sentence: Shleifer with his other colleagues (Rafael La Porta, Robert W.Vishny, Simeon Djankov and Florencio Lopez de Silanes) had written extensively on corporate governance but had neglected their own governance.With their extensive study of corporate governance of countries and corporations making them some of the most cited academicians in the field, Shleifer and Lopez de Silanes failed at the personal level
Edited sentence: Ironically, Shleifer with his other colleagues (Rafael La Porta, Robert W.Vishny, Simeon Djankov and Florencio Lopez de Silanes) wrote extensively on corporate governance, forgetting their own governance in the process.With their extensive study of corporate governance of countries and corporations making them some of the most cited academicians in the field, Shleifer and Lopez de Silanes failed at the personal hurdle