Original sentence: Commanded by General Le Minh Dao, the 18th made a final stand against Communist forces.Saigon fell nine days later.The 18th Division was overwhelmed by superior forces on April 21, 1975.The fierce fighting raged for two weeks
Edited sentence: Commanded by General Le Minh Dao, the 18th made a final stand against the enemy and battled for two weeks before going under on April 21, 1975; nine days later Saigon fell