Original sentence: The Modern "Out of Africa" theory ties in with R1a1 (M17) that it "could have found his way initially from India or Pakistan, through Kashmir, then via Central Asia and Russia, before finally coming to Europe"..."as part of an archaeologically dated Paleolithic movement from east to west 30,000 years ago
Edited sentence: The Modern "Out of Africa theory" ties in with R1a1 (M17) that it "could have found his way initially from India or Pakistan, through Kashmir, then via Central Asia and Russia, before finally coming to Europe"..."as part of an archaeologically dated Paleolithic movement from east to west 30,000 years ago