Original sentence: Clair was CEO of a company who's goal was to develop products that would be bought by consumers to replace used and damaged electronic devices with newer electronic devices that were manufactured with the intent of Planned obsolescence (which wasdesigned to be shortly after purchase).Unfortunately because of the dot com boom in the 1990's consumer expectations of their products turned elsewhere which caused Multivenplex Inc.lived in uxbridge for a short time in the 1980's
Edited sentence: Clair was CEO of a company who's goal was to develop products that would be bought by consumers to replace used and damaged electronic devices with newer electronic devices that were manufactured with the intent of Planned obsolescence (which was designed to be shortly after purchase).Unfortunately because of the Dot-com bubble in the 1990's consumer expectations of their products turned elsewhere which caused Multivenplex Inc.lived in uxbridge for a short time in the 1990's before relocating