Original sentence: Greater Kailash is an area of South Delhi, consisting of several residential colonies and multiple markets with modern retail outlets and designer wear stores.There are also several night clubs, bars, pubs and restaurants serving many varieties of food
Edited sentence: Greater Kailash is an area of South Delhi, consisting of several residential colonies.If you are looking for designer wears then you find one in every market place here.Many show rooms and retail outlets form markets here.There are several night clubs, bars, pubs and restaurants serving many varieties of food