Original sentence: The United States embassy in Singapore pointed out that the graffiti damage that Fay made on the cars was not permanent, but caning would leave Fay with physical as well as long-term emotional scars
Edited sentence: (Due process being distinctly different in the United States than in Singapore.)The United States embassy in Singapore pointed out that the graffiti damage that Fay made on the cars was not permanent, but caning would leave Fay with physical as well as long-term emotional scars.At the time, news organizations such as Reuters reported that Fay was interrogated in a "cold room", deprived of both sleep and consultation with an attorney.Such techniques when used to secure a confession, especially when used with a 19 year old diagnosed with Attention Deficit Disorder might raise concerns in the fair-minded about the validity of Singaporean "due process"