Original sentence: The Monty Hall problem is discussed, from the perspective of a boy with Asperger's syndrome, in The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time, a 2003 novel by Mark Haddon
Edited sentence: The Monty Hall problem is elegantly discussed, from the perspective of a boy with Asperger's syndrome, in The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time, a 2003 novel by Mark Haddon