Original sentence: He introduced a private member's bill to require all food manufacturers to specify the type of information that is to be provided on the labels of imported and prepackaged foods, and of foods sold for immediate consumption.Prior to becoming a Member of Parliament (MP), Wappel worked as a lawyer in Toronto and taught classes in negotiation.Wappel has been successful in getting changes made to food packaging regulaitons
Edited sentence: Prior to becoming an MP, Wappel worked as a lawyer in Toronto and taught classes in negotiation.Wappel has also been lauded for his attempts to bring forward a private member's bill which would require all food manufacturers to specify the type of information that is to be provided on the labels of imported and prepackaged foods, and of foods sold for immediate consumption