Original sentence: Born  to a French Canadian mother and a Dominican father in The Bronx, New York, Glover and his brother Melvin (aka Melle Mel) joined up with Cowboy (Keith Wiggins) in 1978 to form the Three MC's, with production handled by Grandmaster Flash (Joseph Saddler)
Edited sentence: Born in The Bronx, New York, Glover and his brother Melvin (aka Melle Mel) joined up with Cowboy (Keith Wiggins) in 1978 to form the Three MC's, with production handled by Grandmaster Flash (Joseph Saddler)