Original sentence: Detroit Rock City recieved mixed reviews from critics having a "rotten" rating of 50% at Rotten Tomatoes and a 33% at Metacritic.When the pastor comes back to the booth Jam starts telling him a lie story the pastor than starts saying underwear items Jam and Bess escapes from the chruch
Edited sentence: Detroit Rock City received mixed reviews from critics having a "rotten" rating of 50% at Rotten Tomatoes and a 33% at Metacritic.When the pastor comes back to the booth Jam starts telling him a lie story the pastor than starts saying underwear items Jam and Bess escapes from the church