Original sentence: The Church of Scientology has been accused of being responsible for the death of several of its members, the best known case of which is that of Lisa McPherson.The Church of Scientology is frequently accused by critics of employing brainwashing and intimidation tactics to influence members to donate large amounts of money in standard cult practices, and to submit completely to the organization
Edited sentence: Critics say that the organization called the Church of Scientology uses brainwashing and intimidation tactics to influence members to donate large amounts of money in standard cult practices and to submit completely to the organization.The Church of Scientology has been linked to a number of deaths, the most known of which is the death of Lisa McPherson