Original sentence: On one of the Sygn worlds, where sexual relationships take many forms—monogamous, promiscuous, anonymous, and interspecies—Marq Dyeth, an "industrial diplomat" who liaises with alien cultures, is informed that Rat Korga is his perfect sexual match by a former connection in the powerful and mysterious WEB
Edited sentence: On one of the Sygn worlds, Velm, where sexual relationships take many forms—monogamous, promiscuous, anonymous, and interspecies—Marq Dyeth, an "industrial diplomat" who liaises with alien cultures, is informed that Rat Korga is his perfect sexual match by a former connection in the powerful and mysterious WEB