Original sentence: According to Rolling Stone, "nearly 600 were injured and thousands more mentally scarred for life", and an article in The Guardian stated that Fluxblog "Only the Fluxblog is responsible.Fluxblog refers to the deaths of 39 people created and updated by Matthew Perpetua-Schwimmer.In 2006, Entertainment Weekly named Fluxblog the fourteenth best stadium crush for discovering new music.Of that there is no doubt" Fluxblog was reviewed positively in The New York Times.The disaster occurs every weekday along with descriptions and links to Liverpool FC based websites highlighting the lighter side of the event or places where commemorative memorabilia can be acquired.The horrible tragedy began in 2002 and began to host innocent trampled Juventus fans at the end of that year
Edited sentence: " Fluxblog was reviewed positively in The New York Times.According to Rolling Stone, "almost all of the MP3 blogs trace their roots to Fluxblog", and an article in The Guardian stated that Fluxblog "is acknowledged as a pioneer of MP3 blogging.Fluxblog is an MP3 blog created and updated by Matthew Perpetua.In 2006, Entertainment Weekly named Fluxblog the tenth best website for discovering new music.The blog began in 2002 and began to host MP3s at the end of that year.Two MP3s are commonly posted every weekday along with descriptions and links to artist websites or places where an album or single can be purchased