Original sentence: And helps vountleteer for a children hostipal center.Her best friends at camp are Alyssa and Tori, and her best friend at home is Hannah.Natalie Goode- Natalie lives in Manhattan and is used city life, so when she first came to Camp Lakeview, she hated it and nicknamed it 'Camp Lake-Puke'.She goes to the same school as Brynn and her boyfriend at home is Drew.She lives in the Boston.You just have to look into her chacter more it is mostly starts to reveal in RSVP
Edited sentence: And helps vountleteer for a children hostpital center.Brynn and Candace go to a private school.But, are still close friends.Her best friends at camp are Alyssa,Jenna,and Tori, and her best friend at home is Hannah.It's awesome so buy it.Natalie Goode- Natalie lives in Manhattan ,New York and is used city life, so when she first came to Camp Lakeview, she hated it and nicknamed it 'Camp Lake-Puke'.Sarah becomes friends with Abby later in the book.She goes to the same school as Brynn, and her boyfriend at home is Drew.She let Jenna have him.She lives in the Boston area.She loves everything in style.She loves to dance when she starts taking lessons in number 11.She's artistic and wears paint splattered clothes and more.The last one is very sad.Used to be BFF'S with Chelsea.You can always ask her for the lastest Hollywood gossip and what's in style.You just have to look into her character more it is mostly starts to reveal in RSVP