Original sentence: Although blame was partially attributed to state and local authorities, public outcry in the disaster's early hours was largely directed at the Bush administration, mainly FEMA and the Department of Homeland Security alleging weak crisis management and coordination.The Bush Administration failed to address this concern, and consistently funded less than was requested by the Army Corps of Engineers to maintain the levees, although this did not affect the part of the levees that failed.The criticism led to the resignation of FEMA director Michael Brown, and eventually, Bush himself was forced to accept responsibility for what he deemed, "serious problems in the federal government's response" in a September 15, 2005 press conference
Edited sentence: Although blame is attributable to state and local authorities, the mainstream media and much public outcry in the disaster's early hours was largely directed at the Bush administration, mainly FEMA and the Department of Homeland Security alleging weak crisis management and coordination.Although the greatest amount of negligence and therefore blame must be shouldered by local, Democratic leadership, the Bush Administration has claimed aggresively their portion of responsibility.The administration consistently funded less than was requested by the Army Corps of Engineers to maintain the levees, however, this did not affect the part of the levees that failed.While liberal media attention continuing to concentrate on criticism of the federal government's role, FEMA director Michael Brown changed to other responsibilities, and Bush himself accepted freely the responsibility for what he deemed, "serious problems in the federal government's response" in a September 15, 2005 press conference