Original sentence: French National syndicalism was an adaptation of Georges Sorel's version of revolutionary syndicalism to the monarchist ideology of integral nationalism, as practised by Action Française.National syndicalism is an adaptation of syndicalism to suit the social agenda of integral nationalism
Edited sentence: French National syndicalism was an adaptation of Georges Sorel's revolutionary syndicalism to the more monarchist integral nationalism of Action Française.National syndicalism is an adaptation of syndicalism to suit the social ideologies of integral nationalism