Original sentence: An investigation into her suicide was covered in the podcast series The Last Days of August by Jon Ronson after Kevin Moore encouraged them to do a story about the cyberbullying.The podcast reviewed Moore's prior relationships and Ames's history of mental illness and concluded that everyone around her contributed bits and pieces to her suicide, comparing it to the play An Inspector Calls
Edited sentence: An amateur investigation into her suicide was covered in the podcast series The Last Days of August by Jon Ronson after Kevin Moore encouraged them to do a story about the cyberbullying.The podcast reviewed Moore's prior relationships and Ames's history of mental illness and concluded that, in their opinions, everyone around her contributed bits and pieces to her suicide, comparing it to the play An Inspector Calls