Original sentence: 1992 Wanda Rutkiewicz, one of the world's best female climbers ever and the first women ever to successfully ascend and descend from K2 right before Lilliane Barrard reached the summit, the first french woman to successfully ascend K2 (died on descend), is a respected Polish climber, whose body was found years after her inevitable death following her refusal to descend in an approaching storm.2005 Alan Hinkes, a British climber, was the only person able to summit Kangchenjunga in its 50th anniversary of first ascent.She never arrived to base-camp.Until then Kangchenjunga had been the only eight-thousander that had not seen a female ascent
Edited sentence: 1992 Wanda Rutkiewicz, the first women to ascend and descend K2 and a respected Polish climber, died after she declined to descend in the face of an incoming storm.2005 Alan Hinkes, a British climber, was the only person able to summit Kangchenjunga in its 50th anniversary of first ascent year.Until then Kangchenjunga was the only eight-thousander that had not seen a female ascent