Original sentence: After the high school visit with invited guests, Bush's motorcade bypassed a decked-out Main Street welcome and took the back roads to the next scheduled stop, Ferris Hills, a senior living community for upper-income residents.Bush spoke at Canandaigua Academy, a public high school.Bush to Canandaigua, in Kuhl's district.Kuhl's Democratic opponent in the 2006 elections is former Navy officer Eric Massa of Corning, a former Republican.President Bush took questions from seniors living there about Medicare Part B
Edited sentence: After the High School visit with invited guests, Bush's motorcade also by-passed the decked-out Main Street welcome and took the back roads to the next scheduled stop: Ferris Hills.Billed as a "nursing home", Mr.Bush spoke at Canandaigua Academy, the public High School located one block from Canandaigua's 60+ year-old Veterans Hospital.Bush to Canandaigua, NY (in his own 29th Congressional District).Bush was to take questions from seniors living there about Medicare Part B.Ferris Hills is actually a Senior Living Community for upper-income residents who do not currently need Medicare of any kind.However, President Bush did not visit the VA or even pass by the VA during this trip.Kuhl's Democratic opponent in the 2006 elections is former Navy officer and Eric Massa of Corning.The visit was to showcase and discuss the President's new Medicare Part B Drug Plan.This VA has been on a closure list