Original sentence: The 1969 NBA World Championship Series to determine the champion of the 1968-69 NBA season was played between the Los Angeles Lakers and Boston Celtics, the Lakers being heavily favoured due to the presence of three formidable stars: Elgin Baylor, Wilt Chamberlain, and Jerry West
Edited sentence: It was played between the Los Angeles Lakers and Boston Celtics, the Lakers being heavily favoured due to the presence of three formidable stars: Elgin Baylor, Wilt Chamberlain, and Jerry West.The 1969 NBA World Championship Series was one of the most spectacular Finals series ever