Original sentence: As the race continued, a controlled drive saw Lewis Hamilton beat team mate Nico Rosberg by 2 seconds, finishing the race with a 1–2.Hamilton claim his second career ‘grand slam’ – pole position, fastest lap, led every lap & win, at the.He also set the fastest lap times in all three practice sessions and all three segments of qualifying.He was forced to retire in the closing stages of the race due to a failure of the engine.Nico Rosberg had a failure of a component which contaminated his new engine before the start of the qualifying, forcing him to run a power unit which had already competed in five race weekends from  to
Edited sentence: As the race continued, a superbly controlled drive saw Lewis Hamilton beat team mate Nico Rosberg by 2 seconds, finishing the race with a 1–2.Hamilton claim his second career ‘grand slam’ – pole position, fastest lap, led every lap & win, at the , not only that did he set the fastest lap times in all three practice sessions and all three segments of qualifying.Hamilton team-mate, Nico Rosberg, had a failure of a component which contaminated his new engine before the start of the qualifying, forcing him to run a power unit which had already competed in five race weekends from  to.Unfortunately, he had to suffer retirement in the closing stages of the race, due to overuse of mileage in the engine