Original sentence: He is Severus Snape's favourite student.The rivalry of the two may well turn uglier and perhaps more violent in the future.appearance= Harry Potter and the Philospher's Stone.bgcolor=#4a4|.blood=Pure-blood|.eyes=Grey|.fgcolor=#000|.gender=Male|.hair=White-blond|.house=Slytherin|.loyalty=Himself|.name=Draco Malfoy|.portrayer= Tom Felton|.{{HP Character|
Edited sentence: Malfoy is the favorite student of Severus Snape.The rivalry of the two may well turn uglier and perhaps violent in the future.he is normally found calling Hermione Granger a Mudblood(meaning dirty blood)he despises Harry Potter, Albus Dumbledore and basically everyone in the houses Gryffindor,Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw.to sum up those last 3 sentances, Malfoy is a bully, a racist, a spoiled ignorant jerk, and he makes fun of everyone.when not harrassing Harry, he is making fun of Ron's family.when not making fun of the Weasleys, he is making fun of muggle-borns