Original sentence: Conservative activists such as Randall Terry, head of the pro-life group Operation Rescue, denounced Jeb Bush for failure to take action.Keyes said, "[Bush's] oath obliges him to act to preserve, protect and defend the constitution, which includes the constitutional rights of the citizens
Edited sentence: Keyes said, "His [Bush's] oath obliges him to act to preserve, protect and defend the constitution, which includes the constitutional rights of the citizens.Rightist activists such as Randall Terry, head of the anti-abortion group Operation Rescue, denounced Jeb Bush for failure to take action