Original sentence: As both composer and lyricist, in 1945 he adapted Gilbert and Sullivan's H.In 1945 he collaborated with Clay Warnick on Memphis Bound, a swing version of H.Pinafore featuring legendary tap dancer Bill Robinson.Pinafore into the Broadway musical Memphis Bound.starring Bill Robinson and an all-black cast
Edited sentence: , a swing version of Gilbert and Sullivan's H.In 1945 he collaborated with Clay Warnick on Memphis Bound.Pinafore featuring legendary tap dancer Bill Robinson and an all-black cast