Original sentence: Murder ballads typically recount the details of the crime — who the victim is, why the murderer decides to kill him or her, how the victim is lured to the murder site and the act itself — followed by the escape and/or capture of the murderer
Edited sentence: Murder ballads typically recount the details of the crime — who the victim is, why the murderer decides to kill her, how she is lured to the murder site and the act itself — followed by the escape and/or capture of the murderer