Original sentence: In English when capitalized and without modifiers (that is simply, the Diaspora), the term refers specifically to the Jewish diaspora; when uncapitalized the word diaspora may be used to refer to refugee or immigrant populations of other origins or ethnicities living "away from an indigenous or ancestral homeland".In particular, the word diaspora is used to refer to the involuntary mass dispersion of a population from its indigenous territories, notably the Jews who were dispersed from the Land of Israel in antiquity.Some other diasporas are the African transatlantic slave trade, the southern Chinese or Indians during the coolie trade, the Irish during and after the Irish Famine, the Romani from India, the Italian diaspora, the exile and deportation of Circassians, the flight or expulsion of Arabs from Palestine, the Armenian Diaspora following the Armenian Genocide, fleeing of Greeks after the fall of Constantinople, Expulsion of the Acadians, and the emigration of Anglo-Saxon warriors and their families after the Norman Conquest of England
Edited sentence: In English when capitalized and without modifiers (that is simply, the Diaspora), the term refers specifically to the Jewish diaspora; when uncapitalized the word diaspora may be used to refer to refugee or immigrant populations of other origins or ethnicities living "away from an established or ancestral homeland".In particular, the word diaspora is used to refer to the involuntary mass dispersion of a population from its indigenous territories, most notably of the Jews who were dispersed from the Land of Israel in antiquity (known as the Jewish diaspora, or simply "the Diaspora" capitalized).Some other diasporas are the African transatlantic slave trade, the southern Chinese or Indians during the coolie trade, the Irish during and after the Irish Famine, the Romani from India, the Italian diaspora, the exile and deportation of Circassians, the controversial flight or expulsion of Arabs from Palestine, the Armenian Diaspora following the Armenian Genocide, fleeing of Greeks after the fall of Constantinople, Expulsion of the Acadians, and the emigration of Anglo-Saxon warriors and their families after the Norman Conquest of England