Original sentence: In 2000/01 they were promoted to the Premier Division, where they remain to this day, with a best finish of third place in 2004/05.Shawbury United are one of the newer clubs in the West Midlands region, having been formed in 1992.They started out playing in the Shrewsbury and Shropshire Alliance Division Two.They swiftly progressed up the divisions, winning a number of local cups along the way, and in 1999/2000 the club were rewarded with admission to the West Midlands Regional League, initially in Division One North
Edited sentence: After  finishing as  runners up in the County League Division One we decided to step  up  a level to the Shropshire County Premier Division.CLUB HISTORY.Considering 15 years earlier we were playing the  lowest level of Saturday football,  our rise has been meteoric  and we deserve to  be playing at the level where we are now.Following  the 2001/02 season we found ourselves  promoted to the Premier  Division of the WMRL.In 2004/05 Shawbury finished an  impressive  third place.In fact we won the Shropshire FA Challenge Cup in  the 2002/03  season.In our short but  illustrious  history we have won an impressive 20 trophies as well as reaching  many finals.Our progress continued as we  won the Division One North title by seven Points.SHAWBURY UNITED FC.Shawbury  United can be considered one of the most  Successful clubs in Shropshire  in recent times.The West Midlands Premier  Division club are no  strangers to collecting silverware.We  started members of the West Shropshire  Alliance in 1992 winning  the league title in our first two seasons.We  then followed a well trodden path to the next  step and joined  the West Midland Regional League.We adapted   to life in the new league quickly and were League Champions in  two successive seasons (1997/98 & 1998/99).We also reached  the Final of  the Shropshire FA Challenge Cup Final losing closely  4-3 to fellow West Midlands  League outfit Bandon Fc.We are still trying to progress further up the pyramid  ladder and hopefully we will get to the next step soon