Original sentence: Blog fiction has even been taken a step further as Asher Marr is now micro-blogging in-character on Twitter.Some adopt a portraiture style, trying to depict fictional lives or people, some engage in mock diaries, such as Fake Steve Jobs and some attempt to tell serialized stories like a syndicated magazine (called a serialblog)
Edited sentence: Asher Marr is now micro-blogging in-character on Twitter.Noni Aminah Jones, the main character of [Noni  Jones in Harlem], has established a virtual identity by means of the blog itself, twitter, and participation in other blog communities using the 'Noni' alias.Some adopt a portraiture style, trying to depict fictional lives or people, some engage in mock diaries, such as Fake Steve Jobs and [  [Noni Jones In Harlem]] in an anonymous author writes from the perspective of three fictional characters.Some attempt to tell serialized stories like a syndicated magazine (called a serialblog).The ability for blog fiction authors to create a believable virtual-identity is expanding.The story lines are interwoven