Original sentence: South Chadderton School has a wide range of Wednesday afternoon activities including: karate and a poetry club; students are allowed to leave the campus from 1.30pm on a Wednesday or they may stay behind for "CHILL", although many decide to go home.South Chadderton is the only Full Service Extended School in the borough and works in close collaboration with the City Learning Centre and Whitegate End, with which the school shares the campus.The school has access to a considerable range of resources for working parents and families to support learning beyond the school day.There are 850 students, with 54 members of teaching staff along with a large team of support staff
Edited sentence: As a school we have access to a considerable range of resources for working parents and of families to support learning beyond the school day.South Chadderton School has a wide range of Wednesday afternoon activities including: Karate and Poetry Club, Students are allowed to leave the campus from 1.30pm on a Wednesday or they may stay behind for "CHILL", although many decide to go home.South Chadderton are the only Full Service Extended School in the borough and work in close collaboration with the City Learning Centre and Whitegate End, which we share the campus with.There are 850 students with 54 members of teaching staff and a large team of support staff.They demonstrate the high expectations we have of all South Chadderton's students and the high standards which they are achieving at both key stages