Original sentence: Cryptograms were less common in England but Edward Elgar, who was also interested in general cryptography and puzzles, wrote an early Allegretto for his pupils the Gedge sisters using G-E-D-G-E.Gabriel Fauré by Maurice Ravel, Florent Schmitt, Charles Koechlin and others in 1922 (added to later by Arnold Bax, 1949).and it has been suggested that part of the enigma in the Enigma Variations might involve cryptograms, possibly even the BACH motif itself.and to Albert Roussel by Francis Poulenc, Arthur Honegger, Darius Milhaud and others  (using various ciphering schemes) in 1929
Edited sentence: Cryptograms were less common in England, but Edward Elgar, who was also interested in general cryptography and puzzles, wrote an early Allegretto for his pupils the Gedge sisters using G-E-D-G-E.Gabriel Fauré by Maurice Ravel, Florent Schmitt, Charles Koechlin and others in 1922 (added to later by Arnold Bax, 1949) and to Albert Roussel by Francis Poulenc, Arthur Honegger, Darius Milhaud and others  (using various ciphering schemes) in 1929.Honegger's system involved placing the letters after 'H' under sharpened and flattened notes, an example of how chromatic cryptograms could be more easily accommodated in 20th-century music.and it has been suggested that part of the 'enigma' in the Enigma Variations might involve cryptograms, possibly even the BACH motif itself