Original sentence: After a couple of semesters in agriculture, Idada quit studying agricultural economics and stayed at home for nine months after which, he got admitted to the University of Ibadan to study theater arts and graduated top of his class.After graduation, Idada worked at Guardian Express Bank, a job he got while he was still a corps member after which he moved to Arthur Andersen.After seeing a short film with friends, he resigned his job to pursue writing and film production.As an acting coach, Jude teaches a wide variety of thespians, the rudiments and technicalities of acting for stage and for film.He has also guest lectured for the African Theatre Ensemble in Canada, the Mofilm/Unilever Sunlight Foundation Film Project in Nigeria, the AIDS foundation in Guyana and also chaired several panels at International Film Festivals and writing for various magazines.He immigrated to Canada, did a postgraduate and worked in banks, telecommunication firms and along that line.Idada was a pure science student in high school without any background in art, and initially applied to study medicine in the university, but later, he changed his course of study to agricultural economics
Edited sentence: After a couple of semesters in Agriculture, he wasn't satisfied with it and approached his father that he wants to go back to art and hence after about 9 months of staying back home, he got admission to the University of Ibadan for theater arts and graduated at the top of his class.After graduation, Idada worked at Guardian Express Bank, a job he got while still a corper after which he moved to Arthur Andersen.As an acting coach, Jude teaches to a wide variety of thespians, the rudiments and technicalities of acting for stage and for film.He has also guest lectured for the AfriCan Theatre Ensemble in Canada, the Mofilm/Unilever Sunlight Foundation Film Project in Nigeria, the AIDS foundation in Guyana alongside chairing several panels at International Film Festivals and writing for various magazines.He immigrated to Canada, did a postgraduate and worked in banks, telecommunication firms and along that line until one day, he went to see a short film reflected on his passion and hence resigned his job to pursue writing and film production.Idada grew up wanting to study medicine in school and so didn't do any art subjects but later he realized he is better off being a writer, so he had to change his course of study to Agric Economics as his father didn't want him writing and because that's the only course he can do with his science background