Original sentence: Critics of both Dreger and Bailey  like Joan Roughgarden and Lynn Conway counter that Bailey's misrepresentation of his book as any kind of science was the cause of the outrage as well as  the cause of his own academic fall
Edited sentence: Critics of both Dreger and Bailey counter that Bailey's misrepresentation of his book as any kind of science was the cause of the outrage as well as  the cause of his own academic fall