Original sentence: A number of US citizens of Tongan descent have been successful in American football.He happened to arrive at the time of the inasi festival, the yearly donation of the first fruits to the Tu'i Tonga, the islands' paramount chief, and was invited to the festivities.Maake Kemoeatu is a defensive tackle for the Carolina Panthers, also was born in Tonga.The Kingdom of Tonga (; ) is an archipelago in the South Pacific Ocean comprising 169 islands, 36 of them inhabited, stretching over a distance of about 800 kilometres (500 miles) in a north-south line.The name Tonga was derived from the word Tongahahake,  which translates to "Southeast", originally meaning "The wind that blows from the Southeast"
Edited sentence: A number of US citizens of Tongan descent have made successful careers in American football.He happened to arrive at the time of the inasi festival, the yearly donation of the first fruits to the Tu'i Tonga, the islands' paramount chief, and received an invitation to the festivities.Maake Kemoeatu, also born in Tonga, plays as a defensive tackle for the Carolina Panthers.The Kingdom of Tonga (; ), an archipelago in the South Pacific Ocean, comprises 169 islands, 36 of them inhabited, and stretches over a distance of about 800 kilometres (500 miles) in a north-south line.The name of Tonga derives from the word Tongahahake,  which translates to "Southeast", originally meaning "the wind that blows from the Southeast"