Original sentence: On July 24, 2009, a video on Youtube  surfaced showing a worker collecting signatures for the ballot initiative in a fraudulent way by telling prospective voters who support same-sex marriage that he was collecting signatures for a petition for legalizing same-sex marriage in the state while telling those that oppose same-sex marriage that the petition is for opposing homosexual marriage in the state in order to collect
Edited sentence: He was telling prospective voters who support same-sex marriage that he was collecting signatures for a petition for legalizing same-sex marriage in the state while telling those that oppose same-sex marriage that the petition is for opposing homosexual marriage in the state.On July 24, 2009, a video on Youtube  surfaced showing a worker collecting signatures for the ballot initiative in a fraudulent way