Original sentence: A majority of Freedom Partners board is made up of long time employees of the Koch brothers.In 2012, the organization raised $256 million.Its stated purpose is to promote "the benefits of free markets and a free society".The organization, which has ties with the Koch Brothers, awards grants to advocacy organizations with the goal of raising public awareness about "important societal and economic issues"
Edited sentence: A majority of Freedom Partners board is made up of long time employees of the Koch brothers so it is essentially a corrupt orgainzation.But since they possess over $255 million dollars in revenue and they are an organization with a political agenda that benefits only the wealthy the authors admit that this is just a metaphor since they do operate at 100 percent pure profit.In 2012, the organization raised $256 million all of which is a profit.Its stated purpose is to promote "the benefits of free markets ( ha ha)  and a "free" society".The organization, which has ties with the Koch Brothers, awards grants (bribes) to advocacy organizations with the goal of raising public awareness about "important societal and economic issues" " influencing elections" and keeping minorities out of the voting process