Original sentence: Calligraphy was the art by which a scholar could compose his thoughts to be immortalized.Chinese calligraphy differs from western calligraphic script in the sense that it was done with a brush instead of metal implements or a quill.Shū 書 refers to Chinese calligraphy, which dates to the origins of recorded Chinese history, in essence ever since written characters have existed
Edited sentence: Calligraphy dates to the origins of recorded history, in essence ever since written characters have existed.Calligraphy was the art in which a scholar could compose his thoughts to be immortalized.Chinese calligraphy differs from western calligraphic script in the sense that it was done with a brush instead of metal implements or quill.Shū 書 refers to Chinese calligraphy, and art of nearly unequaled beauty and an infamous requirement of finesse