Original sentence: " (This joke also works for the Chicago Cubs.) A local amusement park named Cedar Point, located in Sandusky, Ohio, featured a paddlewheel boat that went around an 18th century setting that included robotic and apparently hostile Indians.In 1997, during the team's most recent World Series, three American Indian protesters were arrested, but later acquitted.The club nickname and its cartoon logo have been criticized for perpetuating Native American stereotypes, and protests have arisen from time to time
Edited sentence: " (This joke also works for the Chicago Cubs, or, for any sport, it can be used against a rival, especially a rival that hasnt done well) A local amusement park named Cedar Point, located in Sandusky, Ohio, featured a paddlewheel boat that went around an 18th century setting that included robotic and apparently hostile Indians.In 1997, during the team's most recent World Series, three American Indian radicals were arrested, but later acquitted.The club nickname and its cartoon logo have been ignorantly criticized for perpetuating Native American stereotypes, and unfortunately protests have arisen from time to time