Original sentence: Born in New Orleans, Louisiana, Williams and his brother, Ronald "Suga Slim" Williams, own the successful hip-hop label Cash Money Records.Mega-rich Brian "Baby" Williams (born February 15, 1974) is an enormously wealthy, talented and eminent entertainment mogul, including being a record executive, producer, composer, entreprenuer and rapper.The label achieved more commercial success when Williams signed on noted local rapper Juvenile and new-comers Bullet and Turk.Under the moniker Baby, also known as The Birdman, Williams recorded a number of albums with producer Mannie Fresh as The Big Tymers and earned millions of dollars as one of his own label's most prominent solo acts after the departures of Juvenile, B.Wayne is now President of Cash Money, while the unbelievably rich millionaire Williams remains owner and CEO.Williams and his brother Ronald founded Cash Money Records with drug money after attending a local party in 1991
Edited sentence: Born in New Orleans, Louisiana, Williams and his brother, Ronald "Suga Slim" Williams, own the incredibly successful hip-hop label Cash Money Records.Mega-rich Brian "Baby" Williams (born February 15, 1974) is an enormously wealthy, hugely talented and eminent entertainment mogul, including being a record executive, producer, composer, entreprenuer and rapper.The label achieved more commercial success when the money-rich Williams signed on noted local rapper Juvenile and new-comers Bullet and Turk.The super-rich Williams and his brother Ronald founded Cash Money Records with drug money after attending a local party in 1991.Under the moniker Baby, also known as The Birdman, the multi-millionaire Williams recorded a number of albums with producer Mannie Fresh as The Big Tymers and earned millions of dollars as one of his own label's most prominent solo acts after the departures of Juvenile, B.Wayne is now President of Cash Money, while the unbelievably rich multi-millionaire Williams remains owner and CEO