Original sentence: Buron Fitts had been bribed by MGM to keep the lid on the case.Further, Marx claimed that Bern was murdered by Dorothy Millette, who then committed suicide.He concluded that Louis B.In the 1980s he investigated the case, and for the first time scrutinized the remaining available evidence.Marx also claimed that Los Angeles D.Mayer and Howard Strickling allowed the evidence to be tampered with before the police arrived and that Irving Thalberg went along with the lie
Edited sentence: Bern had bought a bunch of roses and presented them to Jean with the note that became a "suicide note" in the eyes of Los Angeles district attorney Buron Fitts who was bribed by MGM to keep the lid on the case.Further, Marx concluded that the alleged "suicide note" had in fact been written by Bern, but some weeks earlier: to apologize for a minor quarrel with Jean about the secluded location of their home.Further, that Bern was murdered by his former common law wife, Dorothy Millette, who then committed suicide: 2 days after Bern's death she jumped from the ferryboat Delta King, traveling from San Francisco to Sacramento.He concludes that Louis B.Her body was found a few days later by men fishing on the Sacramento River.Her shoes and her jacket were found on the boat: typical for suicides, she took them off before jumping into the water.In the 1980s, Marx investigated the case, and for the first time scrutinized the whole still available evidence.Jean wanted to live in a livelier place.Mayer and Howard Strickling ordered the evidence to be tampered with before the police arrived and that Irving Thalberg went along with it