Original sentence: The leaders of ancient Israel condemned the adoption of Egyptian and Canaanite practices, especially cutting the hair short or shaving the beard.While the leadership of nearly all Native American tribes object to their depictions as sports mascots, the current leadership of the Seminole Tribe of Florida, in an unusual move, has approved of the Florida State Seminoles use of their historical leader, Osceola, and his Appaloosa horse as the mascots Osceola and Renegade
Edited sentence: The leaders of ancient Israel strongly condemned the adoption of Egyptian and Canaanite practices, especially cutting the hair short or shaving the beard.While the leadership of nearly all Native American tribes strongly object to their depictions as sports mascots, the current leadership of the Seminole Tribe of Florida, in an unusual move, has approved of the Florida State Seminoles use of their historical leader, Osceola, and his Appaloosa horse as the mascots Osceola and Renegade