Original sentence: Christianity is a main religion in this city, Rev Dr G Nickelson was the father of christianity in this city, He worked for poor & needy, He died at the age of 89.Given the mixture of population, many festivals are celebrated; the most famous and popular one being the Lakshmi Venkateshwara Jaatre & Mother of Mines feast
Edited sentence: Christianity is a main religion in Kolar.Given the mixture of population, many festivals are celebrated; the most famous and popular one being the Lakshmi Venkateshwara Jaatre and Mother of Mines feast.Nickelson was the father of Christianity in this city, he worked for poor and needy, and died at the age of 89.Reverend Dr