Original sentence: During his youth, David lived on the Lower East Side and his familystruggled to survive when the Amalgated Clothing Worker’s Union went on strike.He aspired to become a medical doctor, but opted to join the work force instead to continue supporting his family.Rappaport would accompany his father on strikes and help sell produce from a horse and wagon
Edited sentence: Although the ACWUA made significant gains on the behalf of worker's rights, weeks without income proved challenging for David's family.David accompanied Joseph on a horse and wagon while his father sold goods to their neighbors during strikes.David aspired to become a medical doctor, but opted to join the work force instead to continue helping to support his younger siblings.During his youth, David lived on the Lower East Side and his family struggled to survive.Joseph often tried to supplement the family's earnings by selling produce from block-to-block.Times were especially difficult when the Amalgated Clothing Worker’s Union of America went on strike under the guidance of president Sidney Hillman