Original sentence: Hunt left the BBC briefly for six months in 2007 to take up the role of Controller of Programmes for Five, where she poached Natasha Kaplinsky from the BBC.On 3 December 2007 it was announced that she would be returning to the BBC to take up the vacant post of Controller of BBC One in 2008
Edited sentence: Hunt briefly left the BBC briefly for six months in 2007, to Dan Chambers as Controller of Programmes for Five, from where she poached Natasha Kaplinsky from the BBC.On December 3, 2007 it was announced that she would be returning to the BBC to take up the vacant post of Controller of BBC One in early 2008, replacing the resigning Peter Fincham