Original sentence: "Department of  Child Services dispatched its special investigations unit to the facility, and after conducting a full investigation, determined that the child abuse allegations were unfounded," Rob Johnson, an agency spokesman, told The Associated Press.A Tennessee investigation against the camp began shortly after "Zach"'s story appeared online.All clients must maintain appropriate hygiene, including daily showering, use of deodorant, and brushing teeth twice daily.As of June 28, 2005, the investigation has been dropped, with Tennessee officials citing a lack of evidence of child abuse at the facilities.Attention also has also focused on the rules of Love In Action which like most Christian camps includes dress codes, bans on several forms of communication with the outside world, and a ban on television.In June 2005, a 16-year-old Tennessee male, online known only as Zach, posted a blog entry on his myspace site, part of which includes:.In a May 30 entry on Zach's blog he posted the rules of the Refuge Program.In addition to the nature fo the rules themselves, opposition to the course focussed on Zach being sent to the camp without against his wishes, against a background of existing concerns over ex-gay minstries such as Love In Action.Under a heading called Hygiene, it says, "1
Edited sentence: Attention also focussed on the rules of Love In Action, perceived by many as excessively draconian, which included bans on the following:.Certain brands and styles of clothing, specifically Calvin Klein and Abercrombie & Fitch.Communication or other contact with individuals not in the client's immediate family or involved in the course.Communications technologies (phones, computers/internet, etc).In June 2005, a 16-year-old gay Tennessee male, online known only as Zach, posted a blog entry on his myspace site, part of which includes:.In addition to the nature fo the rules themselves, opposition to the course focussed on Zach's being sent to the camp without against his wishes, against an existing background of existing concerns over ex-gay minstries such as Love In Action.Journaling (which includes Blogs).Media not expressly Christian, including a blanket ban on Television and Cinema, and extending virtually all classical music.The rules were also seen as encouraging sexist behaviour by singling out women for preferential treatment, and included highly prescriptive instruction for contact and communication between those on the course