Original sentence: The planned city of Adelaide, South Australia has perhaps the most terrace houses of any other capital city, Marine Apartments in the suburb of Grange, is particularly notable, as it is a large three storey filigree terrace
Edited sentence: Marine Apartments, in the suburb of Grange, is particularly notable, as it is a large three storey filigree terrace.The planned city of Adelaide, South Australia has perhaps the most terrace houses of any other capital city