Original sentence: Barry magnanimously fires into the ground, but Bullingdon refuses to let the duel end.He fires again, this time hitting Barry in the leg, which has to be amputated
Edited sentence: Barry finally proves he is a man when he magnanimously fires into the ground rather than shoot him.Bullingdon, however, sees his mercy for contempt and fires again, hitting him in the leg, which has to be amputated.He is obviously terrified, and thinking that Redmond is about  to kill him, vomits