Original sentence: Macy Gray (born Natalie Renee McIntyre on September 6 1967) is an American R&B, soul, and neo soul singer, songwriter, record producer, and actress, famed for her raspy voice and a singing style heavily influenced by Miles Davis' ex-wife Betty Davis
Edited sentence: Macy Gray (born Natalie Renee McIntyre on September 6 1967) is a Grammy Award-winning American R&B, soul, and neo soul singer, songwriter, record producer, and actress, famed for her raspy voice and a singing style heavily influenced by Miles Davis' ex-wife Betty Davis