Original sentence: The City of Newberry Springs municipal website.The Official Newberry Springs Website Learn More about a desert oasis town
Edited sentence: The City of Newberry Springs municipal website Learn more about this towm from a governmental perspective.The Official City of Barstow Government Website Learn more about the other desert town of which Lake Dolores/Rock-A-Hoola was/is a vital part.The Official Newberry Springs Website Learn more about a desert oasis town