Original sentence: Notable people who were born or have lived in Derry include the poet Seamus Heaney, Social Democratic and Labour Party founder and Nobel Peace Prize winner John Hume, Deputy First Minister of Northern Ireland Martin McGuinness, Aston Villa manager Martin O'Neill, actress Amanda Burton, girl band member Nadine Coyle, and musician Feargal Sharkey
Edited sentence: Notable people who were born or have lived in Derry include the poet Seamus Heaney, Social Democratic and Labour Party founder and Nobel Peace Prize winner John Hume, Deputy First Minister of Northern Ireland Martin McGuinness, Aston Villa manager Martin O'Neill, actress Amanda Burton, pop sensation Nadine Coyle, and musician Feargal Sharkey