Original sentence: One way that Hobby Lobby maintains continuity among stores is by delivering the music via satellite from headquarters.This music blends light jazz, classical, bluegrass, and contemporary music styles (a large percentage of the chosen tunes are instrumental adaptations of traditional Christian hymns) into one single playlist which loops continuously
Edited sentence: One way that Hobby Lobby maintains continuity among stores is by controlling the music, which is delivered via satellite from headquarters with carefully chosen music.This music blends light jazz, classical, bluegrass, and Contemporary music styles (a large percentage of the chosen tunes are instrumental adaptations of traditional Christian hymns) into one single playlist which loops continuously