Original sentence: He grew up in Nagpur.He retired from Maharashtra state government service as the deputy chief conservator of forests.He was instrumental in the development of Karnala Bird Sanctuary, Navegaon National Park, Nagzira Sanctuary, and Melghat Tiger Project, also constructing orphanages for displaced wildlife at the last two institutions
Edited sentence: After completing his training, he joined the services with Maharashtra State government.During his professional life, he moved at various forests and national parks, having live experiences with various entities.He grew up in Solapur and then went to enroll himself in State Forest Service College in Coimbatore.He retired from Maharashtra state government service as the Deputy Chief Conservator of Forests.He was instrumental in the development of Karnala Bird Sanctuary, Navegaon National Park, Nagzira Sanctuary and Melghat Tiger Project; also constructing orphanages for displaced wildlife at the last two institutions.This laid the foundation of his interest in writing his literary works, mostly in Marathi