Original sentence: As Schyman was looking for a vocalist to perform "Praan," whose lyrics are written in Bengali and based on poetry by Rabindranath Tagore, Harding's co-producer Melissa Nixon found Siddique's videos.While a 17-year-old student at the city's Southwest High School, she posted to YouTube a few video clips of her singing for KFAI-FM, a Minneapolis station
Edited sentence: Harding's co-producer Melissa Nixon found the videos as Schyman was looking for a vocalist to perform "Praan," whose lyrics are written in Bengali and based on poetry by Rabindranath Tagore.While a 17-year-old student at the city's Southwest High School, Siddique posted to YouTube a few video clips of her singing for KFAI, a Minneapolis radio station