Original sentence: McKitrick's own data analysis has been criticised, in particular by Tim Lambert, who has written on his web page about what he considers serious flaws in some of McKitrick's publications.This presented an "audit" of work by Michael Mann and others; it appeared in the journal Energy and Environment in 2003
Edited sentence: McKitrick's own data analysis has been strongly criticised, in particular by Tim Lambert, who has written on his web page about what he considers serious flaws in some of McKitrick's publications.This presented an "audit" of work by Michael Mann and others; it appeared in the minor journal Energy and Environment in 2003