Original sentence: Barry McConnell (born January 1 1977, Exeter, England, UK) is a footballer, currently playing for Southern Football League Division One South & West side Truro City.Exeter lost the game 4-1 and McConnell didn't start but he came onto convert a penalty.He began the 2006–2007 season with Tiverton Town and had a short spell with Weston-super-Mare before signing a 18 month contract with Dorchester in February 2007, but Dorchester later released McConnell.In the 2007–2008 season Barry has again linked up with Weston after being signed by new manager Tony Ricketts.This marks his third stint at the club and he has been featuring regularly in the first team
Edited sentence: Barry McConnell (born 1 January 1977 in Exeter) is an English footballer, currently playing for Southern Football League Division One South & West side Truro City.Exeter lost the game 4-1 and McConnell didn't start but he came on to convert a penalty.He began the 2006–2007 season with Tiverton Town and had a short spell with Weston-super-Mare before signing an 18 month contract with Dorchester in February 2007, but Dorchester later released him.In the 2007–2008 season McConnell again linked up with Weston after being signed by new manager Tony Ricketts.This marked his third stint at the club and he featured regularly in the first team