Original sentence: Now Dondre Jackson Being the top dog on the powerlifting team.Team Captain is now cadet Kelly Haskins.The weight lifting team controlled by MAJ Williams just started this year 2008-2009 with already broken records including Jerell Dickerson breaking the weight record numerous amount of times
Edited sentence: Dondre Jackson is currently the top weightlifter on the powerlifting team.The team has already broken numerous records.The weight lifting team coached by MAJ Williams began during the 2008-2009 school year