Original sentence: During this close encounter, tidal forces drew out the spiral galaxy's stars, gas, and dust, forming the conspicuous tail.It is hypothesized that a more compact intruder galaxy crossed in front of the Tadpole Galaxy—from left to right from the perspective of Earth—and was slung around behind the Tadpole by their mutual gravitational attraction.Its most dramatic features are a trail of stars about 280 thousand light-years long, and massive, bright blue star clusters.The Tadpole Galaxy is a disrupted barred spiral galaxy recorded with the Hubble Space Telescope's Advanced Camera for Surveys.The cosmic tadpole is 420 million light-years distant toward the northern constellation Draco
Edited sentence: During the close encounter, tidal forces drew out the spiral galaxy's stars, gas, and dust, forming the spectacular tail.In this stunning vista recorded with the Hubble Space Telescope's Advanced Camera for Surveys, distant galaxies form a dramatic backdrop.Its eye-catching tail is about 280 thousand light-years long, and features massive, bright blue star clusters.One story goes that a more compact intruder galaxy crossed in front of Arp 188—from left to right in this view—and was slung around behind the Tadpole by their gravitational attraction.The Tadpole Galaxy is a disrupted barred spiral galaxy.The cosmic tadpole is a mere 420 million light-years distant toward the northern constellation Draco