Original sentence: As reported by The New Yorker:.Dalai Lama is the title, literally meaning "Ocean Lama", given to an individual who is the political leader of the Tibetans in exile.His Holiness the 14th Dalai Lama is both the head of state and the spiritual leader of Tibet, a position that is not without controversy when he uses his political power for spiritual ends.His simple-Buddhist-monk persona invites skepticism, even scorn.Ordinary Tibetans call the Dalai Lama by the epithets Gyalwa Rinpoche, meaning "Precious Victor", or Yeshe Norbu, meaning "Wish-fulfilling Jewel.The Dalai Lama is often thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, which is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts political influence over him and all other Lamas, monastics and Abbots in his Tibetan community).The Dark Side of Dalai Lama, from SwissTV.This can be seen, for example, in his current ban of the religious practice of relying upon Dorje Shugden.“I have heard cynics who say he’s a very political old monk shuffling around in Gucci shoes,” Rupert Murdoch has said
Edited sentence: Dalai Lama is the title given to an individual who is the spiritual leader of the Gelug sect of Tibetan Buddhism.His Holiness the 14th Dalai Lama is both the head of state and the spiritual leader of Tibet.The Dalai Lama is often thought to be the head of the Gelug School, but this position officially belongs to the Ganden Tripa, which is a temporary position appointed by the Dalai Lama (who in practice exerts more influence).Tibetans usually call the Dalai Lama by the epithets Gyalwa Rinpoche, meaning "Precious Victor", or Yeshe Norbu, meaning "Wish-fulfilling Jewel