Original sentence: Formerly a marketing gimmick of Electronic Arts, in which they tried to imitate real-life sports networks by calling themselves the "EA Sports Network" (EASN) with pictures or endorsements with real commentators such as John Madden, it soon grew up to become a sub-label on its own, releasing game series such as FIFA, NHL, NBA Live and Madden NFL
Edited sentence: If the company can make their servers reliable the game fifa would be much more enjoyable.They have the worst server connections known to man they also script their games to make opponents lose, and finally charge way to much money to open packs and yet pack nothing but useless players