Original sentence: In another, several Transport Canada senior executives, including Assistant Deputy Minister, Safety and Security, Marc Grégoire, were sued for reprisals against another whistleblower, Ian Bron, who reported that the Marine Security framework was riddled with gaps.Whistleblower Hugh Danford, an inspector at Transport Canada, went on record criticizing this approach, indicating that it would increase risk to the flying public as currently envisioned, and was ultimately forced to resign
Edited sentence: Although, Safety management systems will become an international requirement in 2010 by the United Nations agency for civil aviation the International Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO).Canada leads the world in having these systems already in place.Credit for this success goes to Transport Canada inspectors, who have worked hard to promote the importance of safety management systems.The truth being that Transport Canada inspects aviation operations to make sure they meet safety regulations and enforces the law when they don’t.Transport Canada’s role now goes even further, as it also measures how well industry safety management systems are working.Whistleblower Hugh Danford, a former inspector at Transport Canada, went on record criticizing this approach, indicating that it would increase risk to the flying public as currently envisioned