Original sentence: In the 1940s before the World War II, Rosa Eskenazi travelled as a singer in the Balkan region, Turkey and the Middle East.In the 1970's Rosa Eskenazi became famous once again as a result of the rebetiko's "rediscovery".Rosa Eskenazi is considered a model for other singers because of her personal style, technique and passion.Roza Eskenazi ()was a singer of rebetiko and other types of music.She died in Athens the 2nd December 1980, 90 years old
Edited sentence: In the 1940's before the World war 2, Rosa Eskenazi travelled as a singer in the Balkan region, Turkey and the Middle East.In the 1970's she became famous once again as a result of the rebetiko's "rediscovery".Rosa Eskenazi died in Athens the 2nd December 1980, 90 years old.Rosa Eskenazi, a perfect singer with personal style, technique and passion, is considered a model for other singers.Roza Eskenazi was a singer of rebetiko and other types of music