Original sentence: Several historical and mythological references were altered by translators: for instance, the Norse World Tree, Yggdrasil, makes an appearance as Yugodorasil; the word "breath" is consistently rendered as "bracelet" in attack names; and Wiglaf's name, homonymous with a character from Beowulf, is rendered as Wiegraf.The translation of the North American release of Final Fantasy Tactics is somewhat rough in areas, rendering the storyline difficult to understand
Edited sentence: Several historical and mythological references are made cryptic by translators: for instance, the Norse World Tree, Yggdrasil, makes an appearance as Yugodorasil; the word "breath" is consistently rendered as "bracelet" in attack names; and Wiglaf's name, homonymous with a character from Beowulf, is rendered as Wiegraf, to name a few.The translation of the North American release of Final Fantasy Tactics is somewhat rough in areas; rendering the complex storyline difficult to understand