Original sentence: The army commanders not only had to manage the new armies, but also a new type of soldier in formations that had been created for special service, which included the Special Air Service, Army Commandos and the Parachute Regiment.The army was called upon to fight around the world, starting with campaigns in Belgium and France in 1940, and after the Dunkirk evacuation fought on in Africa the Mediterranean and the Far East.Then in the last years of the war, the army returned to France driving the German Army back into Germany and in the Far East forced the Japanese back from the Indian border into Burma.They then forced Italy to surrender after the invasions of Sicily and mainland Italy itself.This started with victory over the Italian and German forces in Africa
Edited sentence: In the last years of the war, the army returned to France driving the German Army back into Germany and in the Far East forced the Japanese back from the Indian border into Burma.The army commanders not only had to manage the new armies, but also a new type of soldier in formations like the Special Air Service, Army Commandos and the Parachute Regiment.The army was called upon to fight around the world, starting with campaigns in Europe] in 1940, and after the Dunkirk evacuation fought on in Africa the Mediterranean and the Far East.This started with victory in Africa and then Italy was forced to surrender after the invasions of Sicily and mainland Italy itself