Original sentence: Many organized events can be set up on a spontaneous basis due to efficient communication among students.Organized "Study Breaks" with fun activities, run by the R2s and the Olin Student Activities Committee (SAC), are designated to help deal with high stress levels that often occur due to the multitude of activities.Student happiness at Olin is surprisingly high, especially for an engineering school.This is in part due to the small size of the Olin community but also because of email lists and Olin's policy requiring all students to purchase identical laptops at the beginning of freshmen year
Edited sentence: Although Olin students care about academics, they try to keep a sense of perspective and not to allow academics to prevent them from enjoying college and participating in other activities.Another major aspect of Olin culture is the emphasis on spontaneity.Because of this hectic pace, Olin is often stressful.Despite this, student happiness at Olin is surprisingly high, especially for an engineering school.Organized "Study Breaks" with fun activities, run by the R2s and the Olin Student Activities Committee (SAC), are designated to help deal with high stress levels.The small size of the Olin community and quick communication (facilitated by email lists and Olin's policy requiring all students to purchase identical laptops at the beginning of freshmen year), allow many organized events to be set up on a spontaneous basis