Original sentence: While two previous plays had been done by Charles Brookifield, the skit "Under the Clock" in 1893, and John Webb, the play "Sherlock Holmes" in 1894, Doyle wrote a new 5-act play nevertheless, with Holmes and Moriarty in their freshmen years as detectives
Edited sentence: While two previous plays had been done by Charles Brookfield, the skit "Under the Clock" in 1893, and John Webb, the play "Sherlock Holmes" in 1894, Doyle wrote a new 5-act play nevertheless, with Holmes and Moriarty in their freshmen years as detectives