Original sentence: In recent years senior Canadian Cabinet ministers such as John Manley and Brian Tobin have expressed their republican views while serving in the government of Jean Chrétien, and the influential Globe and Mail newspaper adopting a pro-republican editorial position in the 1990s.Public opinion polls in Canada show that sentiments concerning the monarchy tend to be apathy and indifference.Some polls have shown a slight majority of Canadians to favour the creation of a republic, while others show favouritism towards the Monarchy, but most polls suggest that the issue is a low priority among Canadians
Edited sentence: Public opinion polls in Canada show that the overwhelming sentiment concerning the monarchy to be apathy and indifference.Some polls have shown a slight majority of Canadians to favour the creation of a republic but most polls suggest that the issue is a low priority among Canadians.Support for a republic has grown in Canada in recent years with senior Canadian Cabinet ministers such as John Manley and Brian Tobin expressing their republican views while serving in the government of Jean Chrétien and the influential Globe and Mail newspaper adopting a pro-republican editorial position in the 1990s