Original sentence: However, it is hoped that if this can not be done for whatever reason, that teen boys and girls will realize the importance of the mother and father being in a committed relationship, and will thus marry.In some countries, new programs are being implemented in an attempt to change the attitudes among children/adolescents on the topic of teen pregnancy by promoting marriage as the only viable solution to the problem of teen pregnancy.The ultimate goal for these programs is for adolescents to realize that the best decision is to postpone childbirth until they are older and more mature.These programs generally target teens between ages 15 to 19 and try to encourage them to reach adulthood before childbearing, in the best interests of both the parents and the children as well
Edited sentence: A new program is being implemented to change the attitudes among children/adolescents on the topic of teen pregnancy.Because research has found that children do best when they are raised by two parents in a healthy marriage, CFOC is promoting the efforts to encourage teens to reach adulthood before childbearing.But it is hoped that if this can not be done for whatever reason, that teen boys and girls will realize the need for their child to have both parents present throughout childhood and life.It is further hoped that this dual presence of both the mother and father will be accomplished in a permanent commitment, that is, in marriage.Statements can be in the effect of: Married people are more financially stable or Kids of married parents are healthier.The Marriage Works website (www.The best outcome of this is improving the well-being of their to-be children.The campaign is thus aiming to spread simple messages on the benefits of marriage that teens can grasp and live by.The ultimate goal is for adolescents to realize that the best decision is to postpone childbirth until they are older and more mature.This new and bold program is titled "Marriage Works" and is headed by Campaign For Our Children (CFOC), which has been working to lower teen pregnancy rates since 1987.This new programs is aimed at targeting the attitudes of teens from ages 15 to 19 by making known the blessings of one of the world's most cherished institutions: marriage.com) provides many more examples of concise messages to be shared with adolescents are provided