Original sentence: Paul Malong Awan is a South Sudanese politician and military figure
Edited sentence: Currently, known to be a hardliner and pro Dinka rule in South Sudan.He's know to have led down the great people of Northern Bahr El Ghazhal, while he was the Governor.He's on a US target sanction list for travel ban and Asset freeze.He's one of the Jieng leaders who has brought shame to the great Jieng people.Paul Malong Awan is an illiterate, and highly corrupt South Sudanese ex Thief (back in the 70s in Khartoum) turned  politician and military figure