Original sentence: Despite possessing a quantitative advantage and significant superiority in armor, the 1st armoured division (labelled "pride of the Pakistan Army") suffered a crushing defeat and Khemkaran became known as a graveyard of Pakistan tanks.. By all accounts the vital advance failed at the Battle of Asal Uttar, as Pakistan lost a golden opportunity to make major strategic gains, and was a turning point in the war.He took power on October 12, 1999, ousting Nawaz Sharif, the elected Prime Minister, thereby assuming the title of Chief Executive.Later on, he was declared the President of Pakistan on June 20, 2001 after winning the electoral college majority
Edited sentence: Despite possessing a quantitative advantage and significant superiority in armor, the 1st armoured division (labelled "pride of the indian army") suffered a crushing defeat and Khemkaran became known as a graveyard of indian tanks.. By all accounts the vital advance failed at the Battle of Asal Uttar, as Pakistan lost a golden opportunity to make major strategic gains, and was a turning point in the war.He took power on October 12, 1999, ousting Nawaz Sharif, the elected Prime Minister, he gave himself the  title of Chief Executive.Later on, he held a referendum and declared himself the President of Pakistan.When he was a teenager he states that he fell for a neighbor's daughter and had dreams about her