Original sentence: loud, foul-mouthed, uncultured and unpleasant young women, who like to drink and smoke and who are often sexually promiscuous), who are given an old-fashioned five-week course in learning how to behave like a real lady
Edited sentence: loud, foul-mouthed and uncultured young women, who like to drink and smoke and who are often sexually promiscuous), who are given an old-fashioned five-week course in learning how to behave like a traditional "lady"