Original sentence: Furthermore, the documentary does not include interviews with Allis' grown children and focuses only on her video and audio diary.Must Read After My Death was created after Morgan Dews found a trove of video and tape belonging to his late grandmother, Allis.This story is told by the family itself, from a collection of audio recordings and home movies, illuminating a difficult and extraordinary time
Edited sentence: This is an intimate story in the family's own words, from an extraordinary collection of audio recordings and home movies, illuminating a difficult and extraordinary time