Original sentence: King William's College, the island's best known private school took the game up early, and a number of other Manx schools also play
Edited sentence: Isherwood, British Lions player, attended Ramsey Grammar School, but was born and spent most of his life in England... for which he was strangely never selected.King William's College, the island's best known private school took the game up early and it is still one of the school's main sports, and a number of other Manx schools also play, such as Castle Rushen High School, Ramsey Grammar School.The Manx Government also funds a full time rugby development officer