Original sentence: Kashmir was invaded in mid 12th century by the Muslim Turkish army but it was completely occupied by Turkish Zulkadur Khan in 1322.Later in 1394, another Turkish occupation took place by Sikandar who made Islam the state religion allegedly resulting in forced mass conversions.Turkish rule ended when the Mughal Emperor Akbar invaded Kashmir in 1586, led by Hindu King Bhagawant Das and his aide Ramchandra I.Udayan Dev was the last free Kashmiri ruler but after his death in 1338, Kashmir was completely occupied by the Muslims Turks
Edited sentence: Emperor Akbar invaded Kashmir in 1586, led by Hindu King Bhagawant Das and his aide Ramchandra I.He came along with about 1000 disciples known as Sa’daat and won large scale conversions including the guru of Kali Mandir and thousands of his followers.He converted after having discussions with Hindu, Buddhist and Muslim religious personages of the period.He was followed by the continuous arrivals of saints and Sufis from Persian lands.His conversion was followed by a large number of people including the Prime Minister, Rawanchandra.Islam had arrived in Kashmir through peaceful travellers and preachers however, the conversion of Buddhist ruler Rinchana Sadr-ud-Din (AD 1320-1323) to Islam marked a turning point.It is pertinent to mention that the Muslim preachers were secular in approach as they did not ask the converts to change their names or Hindu surnames.Mir Mohammad Hamadani, Shams-ud-Din Iraqi and others as well as thousands of local Rishis under the guidance of Sheikh Noor-ud-Din Rishi spread throughout the region to reform and re-shape the whole society.Shah-e-Hamdan laid a solid intellectual and institutional foundation for a Kashmiri Muslim society.The year 1384 is the land mark event in the history of Kashmir due to the arrival of Mir Sayyid Ali Hamadani popularly known as Shah-e-Hamadan.They believed in the policy of accommodation and adjustment, which therefore allowed growth of unique Islam in Kashmir - one with the local flavour and tradition