Original sentence: Born into a wealthy Quaker family in Yorkshire, he went firstly to the Quaker school Leighton Park in Reading before going onto Balliol College Oxford where he took a degree in medicine.Ill health dogged him and he devoted himself to personal projects such as his first book of short stories, Midnight House
Edited sentence: Born into a wealthy Quaker family in Yorkshire, he attended the Quaker school Leighton Park in Reading before going on to Balliol College Oxford, where he took a degree in medicine.Ill health dogged him, however, and he devoted himself to personal projects such as his first book of short stories, Midnight House