Original sentence: She forgave Godzilla but not at first, the real reason she hesitated was cause she looked into his eyes, and believed that she had fallen in love with the King of the Monsters
Edited sentence: She forgave Godzilla but not at first, the real reason she hesitated was cause she looked into his eyes, and believed that she had fallen in love with the King of the Monsters (making it an altogether rather typical fanfic)