Original sentence: Apartheid legislation was increasingly enforced, and the walls between the races were built even higher, culminating in the creation of separate Homelands for blacks.With the ANC banned, and Mandela and most of the rest of its leadership in jail or exile, South Africa entered some of its most troubled times
Edited sentence: Apartheid legislation was enforced with increasing gusto, and the walls between the races were built even higher.Most odious was the creation of separate Homelands for blacks.With the ANC banned, and Mandela and most of the rest of its leadership in jail or exile, South Africa entered some of its darkest times