Original sentence: David McGrath, an unemployed man, of Wilmslow, Cheshire, was later convicted of the attack.In the [[United Kingdom general election, 2005|2005 general election, Kilroy-Silk contested the seat of Erewash, but placed fourth.Kilroy-Silk's comments were inflammatory enough that on December 4, 2004, a man threw a bucket of farmyard slurry at him before he was due to make an appearance on BBC Radio 4's Any Questions.Kilroy-Silk's former colleagues in UKIP have given the new party the nick-name "Vanitas".While the article attacks the human rights record of Arab states, it also makes little distinction between this and Arabic people in general (whom Kilroy has, in a BBC Hard Talk interview erroneously associated with Afghans, demonstrating - according to critics like Emeka Onono - a general ignorance about Arabs()
Edited sentence: David McGrath, an unemployed man, of Wilmslow, Cheshire, was later convicted of the 'attack'.In the United Kingdom 2005 general election, Kilroy-Silk contested the seat of Erewash, but failed miserably despite his high profile, placing only fourth behind the Labour, Liberal Democrat and Tory candidates.Kilroy-Silk's comments were inflammatory enough that on December 4, 2004, a man threw a bucket of farmyard manure at him before he was due to make an appearance on BBC Radio 4's Any Questions.Kilroy-Silk's former colleagues in UKIP and political commentators have given the new party the nick-name "Vanitas".While the article attacks the human rights record of Arab states, it also makes little distinction between this and Arabic people in general (whom Kilroy has, in a BBC Hard Talk interview wrongly associated with Afghans, demonstrating - according to critics like Emeka Onono - a general ignorance about Arabs()