Original sentence: Inspired by friends in the film business, he began to focus on writing feature films in 1998.Silber, who is married to a New Yorker, moved to the United States in 2007, where he works with producer and writer-director Stefan Schaefer at New York-based Cicala Filmworks
Edited sentence: Inspired by friends in the film business, he began to focus on writing feature films in the late 90's.Silber, who is married to a New Yorker, moved to the United States in 2007, where he works with producer and writer-director Stefan Schaefer at heir New York-based company Silver Shepherd