Original sentence: His position has always been that the Harry Potter series may simply be problematic for "some young children" because: 1) the books present certain real-world occult practices, viewpoints, and lore in an appealing way (e
Edited sentence: His position has always been that the Harry Potter series may simply be problematic for some young children because: 1) the books present certain real-world occult practices, viewpoints, and lore in an appealing way (e