Original sentence: Referred to by Quincy Jones as the "Soulful Rain Man" he battled mental health issues and took his own life on October 25, 1998.Several of  his early work has been released posthumously but there has not to date been an album of his work entirely
Edited sentence: He battled mental health issues and committed suicide on October 25, 1998.Much of his early work has been released posthumously, but there has not to date been an album of his work