Original sentence: Alternatively, the other point of view advocated by other egyptologists is that Ancient Egypt was a multicultural society of Middle Eastern and African influences that included blacks and non-blacks.Many black academics have been critical of their perception of Eurocentric bias in the portrayal of ancient Egyptians as not being blacks in popular media.One point of view is argued by scholars such as Cheikh Anta Diop who claim that ancient Egypt was primarily a "black civilization"
Edited sentence: Afrocentrist scholars such as Cheikh Anta Diop argue that ancient Egypt was primarily a "black civilization".Based on archaeological evidence black or Africoid people were present in Ancient Egypt.Egyptologists contend that Ancient Egypt was a multicultural society of Middle Eastern and African influences.Many blacks, Afrocentrists in particular, have been critical of Eurocentric bias, in the portrayal of  Ancient Egyptians  as Caucasians in popular media