Original sentence: 1934, his entry was second in the Health Council Competition and, 1935, won a poster competition for the London City Council.Abram Games (London, 1914—London, 1996), British graphic designer.Born Abraham Gamse, he was the son of immigrants: a Latvian photographer and a Russo-Polish seamstress.He anglicized his name to Games at age 12 and was essentially an autodidactic designer, having attended London's St.Martins School of Art (today the Central Saint Martins College of Art and Design) for only two terms
Edited sentence: Abram Games (1914, Whitechapel, London — 1996, London), British graphic designer.Born Abraham Gamse in Whitechapel, London on the day World War I began in 1914, he was the son of Joseph Gamse, a Latvian photographer, and Sarah, a seamstress born on the border of Russia and Poland.Disillusioned by the teaching at St Martins and worried about the expense of studying there, Games left after two terms.Games left Hackney Downs School at the age of 16 and went to London's St.His father anglicized the family name to Games when Abram was 12.In 1934, his entry was second in the Health Council Competition and, in 1935, won a poster competition for the London City Council.Martins School of Art (today the Central Saint Martins College of Art and Design)