Original sentence: ICER AIR features BMX, skate, and wakeboard competitions, as well as featuring headliner bands such as Jurassic 5, Ladytron, Mos Def, and Talib Kweli.On September 29, 2005, over 15,000 people showed up on a sunny Thursday afternoon to watch the event.The steep, mansion lined, historic Fillmore Street hill had previously been famous for its views of the San Francisco bay, and for the notorious car chase scenes in the movie Bullitt.With the momentum of press and notoriety, the event was moved across town in 2006 to AT&T Park, home of the San Francisco Giants, creating the first stadium big-air ski and snowboard contest to be held in the United States
Edited sentence: ICER AIR has evolved into an action sports, music, and lifestyle experience featuring BMX, skate, and wakeboard competitions as well as featuring headliner bands such as Jurassic 5, Ladytron, Mos Def, and Talib Kweli.On September 29, 2005, over 15,000 people showed up on a sunny Thursday afternoon to watch the once in a lifetime event on one of the city's most famous streets.The steep, mansion lined, historic Fillmore Street hill had previously been famous for its spectacular views of the San Francisco bay, and for the notorious car chase scenes in the movie Bullitt.With the momentum of so much worldwide press and notoriety, the event was moved across town in 2006 to AT&T Park, home of the San Francisco Giants, creating the first stadium big-air ski and snowboard contest to be held in the United States