Original sentence: John Henry Wilson, popularly known as Johnny Wilson (1871-1956), served as Mayor of Honolulu, Hawaii three times:  from 1920 to 1927, from 1929 to 1931, and from 1946 to 1954
Edited sentence: He organized the meeting on April 30, 1900 that formed the Democratic Party of Hawaii.John Henry Wilson, popularly known as Johnny Wilson (1871-1956), was a civil engineer, Insurgent, founder of the Democratic Party of Hawaii, and Mayor of Honolulu, Hawaii three times:  from 1920 to 1927, from 1929 to 1931, and from 1946 to 1954