Original sentence: Paul attended Baylor University from fall 1981 to summer 1984 and was enrolled in the honors program.Paul scored approximately in the 90th percentile on the Medical College Admission Test.which allowed him to leave Baylor early, without completing either a biology or an English degree, when he was accepted into the Duke University School of Medicine
Edited sentence: He was enrolled in the honors program at Baylor, and had scored approximately in the 90th percentile on the Medical College Admission Test.Paul attended Baylor University from fall 1981 to summer 1984.Paul left Baylor early, without completing either a biology or an English degree, when he was accepted into the Duke University School of Medicine