Original sentence: If there is any truth in the stories of the illegitimacy of Edward IV, the claim of the present Queen rests totally upon the claim of Henry VII Tudor from whom she lineally descends.It should be noted that both the attainder of Clarence (by Edward IV) and that of Charles Stuart, (by George II) would be invalid if neither presiding Monarch was rightful and therefore the attainders would have no proper valid Royal Assent.The present heir of Richard III, of the House of York, and of England according to the strict application of the Laws of Inheritance (assuming the illegitimacy of Edward IV), is Michael Hastings (Michael Edward Abney-Hastings, 14th Earl of Loudoun, (b
Edited sentence: Again given the probable illegitimacy of Edward IV, the claim of the present Queen rests totally upon the claim of Henry VII Tudor from whom she lineally descends.It should be noted that both the attainder of Clarence (by Edward IV) and that of Charles Stuart, (by George II) are invalid as neither presiding Monarch was rightful and therefore the attainders have no proper valid Royal Assent.The present heir of Richard III, of the House of York, and of England according to the strict application of the Laws of Inheritance (given the probable illegitimacy of Edward IV ), is Michael Hastings (Michael Edward Abney-Hastings, 14th Earl of Loudoun, (b