Original sentence: However, the lesser and middle strata of the nobility called a rokosz, or semi-legal rebellion by the peers, in order to force the King to abandon his reforms.In order to strengthen his power, Zygmunt initiated a set of reforms, establishing a permanent conscription army in 1527 and extending the bureaucratic apparatus necessary to govern the state and finance the army.Supported by his Italian consort, Bona Sforza, he began buying up land in order to enlarge the royal treasury.Zygmunt faced the challenge of consolidating internal power in order to face external threats to the country
Edited sentence: However, the lesser and middle strata of the nobility called a rokosz, or semi-legal rebellion by the peers, to force the King to abandon his reforms.Supported by his Italian consort, Bona Sforza, he began buying up land to enlarge the royal treasury.To strengthen his power, Zygmunt initiated a set of reforms, establishing a permanent conscription army in 1527 and extending the bureaucratic apparatus necessary to govern the state and finance the army.Zygmunt faced the challenge of consolidating internal power in order to handle external threats to the country