Original sentence: The self-conscious Renaissance style, appropriates items from Roman triumphal arches, but lacks sobriety, and is encrusted in a profusion of ornamentation with garlands, harpies, festoons, and putti among the elements
Edited sentence: The self-conscious Renaissance style, appropriates items from Roman triumphal arches, with elegant touches of nobility, and is encrusted in a profusion of ornamentation with garlands, harpies, festoons, and putti among the elements