Original sentence: Although attendance dropped after the 2001 opening season to a low of 20,993 per game in 2003, numbers have rebounded and ESPN Page 2 writer Bill Simmons described Brewers fans as being like "over-protective Little League parents" in a 2006 visit to Miller Park
Edited sentence: ESPN Page 2 writer Bill Simmons described Brewers fans as being like "over-protective Little League parents" in a 2006 visit to Miller Park