Original sentence: A regular interstate representative, Sparrow played 17 games for Western Australia, most notably at the 1953 Adelaide Carnival where he achieved All-Australian selection.Frank Sparrow was an Australian rules footballer who played for East Perth, Swan Districts and West Perth in the WANFL during the 1940s and 1950s.He started his career at his father's club, East Perth, and won the F.In 1957 he retired as a player but remained West Perth's coach, leading them to the final, before leaving football for good at the end of the year.Until 1995 Sparrow was a well known television and radio commentator on West Australian football
Edited sentence: A regular interstate representative, Sparrow played 17 games for Western Australia, most notably in 1951 when he was appointed captain and at the 1953 Adelaide Carnival where he achieved All-Australian selection.Frank Sparrow (1926 – 31 December, 2000) was an Australian rules footballer who played for East Perth, Swan Districts and West Perth in the WANFL during the 1940s and 1950s.He started his career at his father's club, East Perth in 1943 during the underage period (due to the war, and won the F.In 1957 he retired as a player but remained West Perth's coach, leading them to the final, before joining the media and becoming one of West Australia's best known football commentator on both television and radio