Original sentence: According to Dubai Roads and transport authoruty the tram service would run  along Al Sufouh Road from Dubai Marina to the Burj Al Arab and the Mall of the Emirates.It is expected to be connected with three stations of Dubai Metro's Red line.On the completion of Phase 2, it will add 14 more trains and six more stations the additional.The Tramway will run 20 hours each day, and it will take only 30 minutes to ride the entire lenght of the syatem.The construction of Al Sufouh tramway has been divided into thwo phases, Phase 1, is ecpected to be open in April 2011, it will have 11 Trains with 13 stations running.The whole tramway will be  long, and will have the capasity of 300 passengers and will travel at a maximum speed of  and an average commercial speed of.This recently-invented method, referred to also as "Aesthetic Power Supply" (APS), is currently only used in Bordeaux, France
Edited sentence: According to Dubai Roads and Transport Authority the tram service would run  along Al Sufouh Road from Dubai Marina to the Burj Al Arab and the Mall of the Emirates.It is expected to be connected with three stations of Dubai Metro's Red Line.The construction of Al Sufouh tramway has been divided into two phases: Phase 1, is expected to be open in April 2011, and will have 11 trains with 13 stations running ; on the completion of Phase 2, it will add 14 more trains and six more stations with an additional.The tramway will run 20 hours each day, and it will take 30 minutes to ride the entire length of the syatem.The whole tramway will be  long, and will have a capacity of 300 passengers and will travel at a maximum speed of  and an average commercial speed of.This method, referred to also as "Aesthetic Power Supply" (APS), is currently only used in Bordeaux, France