Original sentence: He has been described by Frank Rich in the The New York Times as "the greatest and perhaps best-known artist in the American musical theater,"  His most famous scores include (as composer/lyricist) A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Forum, Company, A Little Night Music, Follies, Sweeney Todd, Into the Woods,  Sunday in the Park with George, and Assassins, as well as the lyrics for West Side Story and Gypsy.March 22 1930) is an American stage musical and film composer and lyricist, one of the few people to win an Academy Award, multiple Tony Awards (seven, more than any other composer), multiple Grammy Awards, and a Pulitzer Prize
Edited sentence: Described by Frank Rich in the The New York Times as "the greatest and perhaps best-known artist in the American musical theater," he is one of the few people to win an Academy Award, multiple Tony Awards (seven, more than any other composer), multiple Grammy Awards, and a Pulitzer Prize.His most famous scores include (as composer/lyricist) A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Forum, Company, A Little Night Music, Follies, Sweeney Todd, Into the Woods,  Sunday in the Park with George, and Assassins, as well as the lyrics for West Side Story and Gypsy.March 22 1930) is widely seen as his generation's leading writer of the stage musical