Original sentence: Pope Benedict XVI (born Joseph Alois Ratzinger  on April 16, 1927 in Marktl am Inn, Bavaria, Germany; officially styled in Latin as Benedictus PP
Edited sentence: His Holiness Pope Benedict XVI (born Joseph Alois Ratzinger  on April 16, 1927 in Marktl am Inn, Bavaria, Germany; officially styled in Latin as Benedictus PP