Original sentence: As a result of Galveston Island not being able to support the close to 6000 students.The faculty and many students leaders such as Student body president Mike Spiers and the Corps Commander worked closely with the staff and took on the enormous challenge of relocating all students
Edited sentence: As a result of Galveston Island not being able to support the close to 1800 students the enormous challenge of relocating all students, administration, and staff began