Original sentence: Membership in Greek organizations is low; only nine to eleven percent of the student body is a member of either a fraternity or a sorority.Nevertheless, NYU's varied clubs, organizations, and activities are available to those who seek them out.On the other hand, New York City itself has so many active communities that some students feel there is no need to participate in campus life.While the university is trying to shed its image as a commuter school, NYU currently has few support systems in place for the large proportion of its student body (approximately 60 percent) that does commute
Edited sentence: Despite being a historical commuter school, NYU currently has few support systems in place for the fraction of its student body that commutes.Fraternity and Sorority membership are astronomically low, ranging from 9-11% of the student body.Martha Rogers - nurse theorist, created the Science of Unitary Human Beings.On the other hand, New York City itself has so many active communities, many students shun the student body in favor of participating in local flavor rather than university community.This has led to NYU being called "The Ivy of the Neuvo Riche" since it hires established talent and lacks the historical background and multi-generational legacy families that Ivy League schools have.This somewhat derogatory nickname also reflects NYU's high tuition costs