Original sentence: Evangelical Christians may be concerned about the focus on Contemporary Christian Music.It should be remembered that there is a difference in theology with some schools of thought, teaching that we are not living "in a day of miracles"; whilst others teach of God being 'the same yesterday, today and forever' i.Revelation TV has also been accused of promoting a 'right-wing agenda', with a somewhat conservative view of homosexuality, and 'fierce criticism' of Islam and other religions.Some people are concerned that Revelation TV is 'unhealthily biased' towards the State of Israel, by seeming to 'accept uncritically' everything that Israel does.Some worry that the channel's promotion of Zionism may isolate other groups (such as Arabs).The channel's promotion of ministries such as those of Bishop Michael Reid and Benny Hinn, has also caused a 'stir' in some circles.miracles can occur nowadays
Edited sentence: Evangelical Christians might be concerned at the focus on Contemporary Christian Music as well as the selling out of advertising to secular networks but this is due to OFCOM restrictions.Revelation TV has also been accused of promoting a right-wing agenda in general with a strongly conservative view of homosexuality and fierce criticism of Islam and other religions.Some people are concerned that Revelation TV is unhealthily biased towards the state of Israel by seeming to accept uncritically everything that Israel does.Some worry that the channels Zionism will isolate other groups (such as Arabs).The channel's promotion of ministries such as those of Bishop Michael Reid and Benny Hinn has also caused a stir in some circles but it should be remembered that there is a difference in theology with some schools of thought teaching that we are not living "in a day of miracles" whilst others teach of God being the same yesterday today and forever ie miracles can occur nowadays