Original sentence: Dobb's Journal, a computer magazine, and a monthly column for two years in A+, a magazine for Apple Computer users.He contributed for many years to the original Gambling Times magazine, writing about keno and poker.He has contributed articles to PC Publishing, MicroTimes, Gambling Times, InfoWorld, Gaming & Wagering Business, Casino & Sports, and was an occasional contributor of articles to inCider, The San Jose Mercury, The San Francisco Chronicle, Science '84, and Desktop Publishing.His puzzles appeared monthly for five years in LA Direct, and seven years online at Poker Pages and Puzzle Planet, and has had puzzles in the New York Times.Michael Wiesenberg is a technical writer, author, and former poker player.Wiesenberg played poker professionally for 10 years before becoming a technical writer
Edited sentence: Dobb's Journal, a legendary computer magazine, and a monthly column for two years in A+, a magazine for Apple Computer users.He also coauthored a pioneering book on desktop publishing, and has been a Card Player Magazine columnist since the inception of the magazine (1988).He has contributed hundreds of articles (and photographs) to PC Publishing, MicroTimes, Gambling Times, InfoWorld, Gaming & Wagering Business, Casino & Sports, and was an occasional contributor of articles to inCider, The San Jose Mercury, The San Francisco Chronicle, Science '84, and Desktop Publishing.He is the author of Poker Talk: The Language of Poker (Card Player, 1996) and The Official Dictionary of Poker (Mike Caro University, 2000).His books reflect those two careers: Free Money: How to Win in the Cardrooms of California (published by Gambling Times Press and distributed by Lyle Stuart, 1984), and Puzzled Programmers (Microsoft Press, 1987), a collection of short stories, each of which introduces a mathematical puzzle best solved by computer, with solutions presented in three programming languages.His latest book is The Ultimate Casino Guide (SourceBooks, 2005).His puzzles appeared monthly for five years in LA Direct, and seven years online at Poker Pages and Puzzle Planet.Michael Wiesenberg made his living playing poker for 10 years before turning to a career as technical writer in the computer field.Wiesenberg contributed for many years to the original Gambling Times magazine, writing about keno and poker.Wiesenberg was one of the writers of The InfoWorld Essential Guide to the Commodore 64