Original sentence: He was one of four private military contractors who were killed, burned and dragged through the streets and hung from a bridge in Fallujah, Iraq.Scott Helvenston (1965-March 31 2004) was a former United States Navy SEAL and was working as a civilian contractor when he was killed while working for Blackwater Security in Iraq.Their deaths and the mutilation of their corpses sparked outrage in the United States and resulted in Operation Vigilant Resolve to try and capture the city
Edited sentence: Each of the men suspected as responsible for the killing of the contractors were tracked down and killed by the Marines of 1st MEF (see also United States occupation of Fallujah & Operation Vigilant Resolve.He was one of four private military contractors who were killed, burned and dragged through the streets and hanged from a bridge in Fallujah, Iraq.Scott Helvenston (1965-March 31 2004) was a former United States Navy SEAL and civilian contractor who was killed in action while working for Blackwater Security in Iraq.Their deaths and the disrespect accorded to their corpses sparked public outrage in the United States and resulted in subsequent raids in Fallujah