Original sentence: A second daughter, Ellen Hovick (better known as actress June Havoc), was born several years later.Born as Rose Louise Hovick in Seattle, Washington in either 1911 or 1914, Gypsy was initially known by her middle name, Louise.February 9 1911/1914 – April 26 1970) was an American actress and burlesque entertainer, whose 1957 memoir, which included a scathing portrait of her domineering mother, was made into the stage musical and film Gypsy.Gypsy Rose Lee (also known as Rose Louise Hovick and Louise Hovick) (b.Gypsy and June, who also became a successful performer, continued to get demands for money from their mother, who had opened a lesbian boardinghouse in a ten-room apartment on West End Avenue in New York City.June left the act and went on to give birth to April Reed around 1930.Lee died in Los Angeles, aged either 56 or 59, and was buried in Inglewood Park Cemetery in Inglewood, California.She, too, would be known by her middle name, June (although some sources indicate that Ellen Hovick's middle name was originally "Evangeline")
Edited sentence: A second daughter, Ellen Hovick (better known as actress June Havoc), was born in 1916.Born Rose Louise Hovick in Seattle, Washington, Gypsy was initially known by her middle name, Louise.Gypsy Lee  and sister June, who also became a successful performer, continued to get demands for money from their mother, who had opened a lesbian boardinghouse in a ten-room apartment on West End Avenue in New York City.Gypsy Rose Lee (also known as Rose Louise Hovick and Louise Hovick) (February 9, 1911 or 1914 – April 26, 1970) was an American actress and burlesque entertainer, whose 1957 memoir, which included a scathing portrait of her domineering mother, was made into the stage musical and film Gypsy.June left the act and went on to give birth to April Reed.Lee died in Los Angeles, at the age of fifty-six or fifty-nine and was buried in Inglewood Park Cemetery in Inglewood, California.Rose Thompson Hovick was the classic example of a smothering stage mother, though the more horrid details were reportedly whitewashed in Gypsy's memoirs.She, too, would be known by her middle name, June (some sources indicate that Ellen Hovick's middle name was "Evangeline")