Original sentence: Israel has formed a commission of inquiry to investigate the raid, headed by retired Supreme Court judge Jacob Turkel and including two international observers.. But some nations still asked for international investigation.Israel has rejected calls from the United Nations and others for an international investigation into its raid on the Gaza aid flotilla
Edited sentence: Israel has formed a commission of inquiry to investigate the raid, headed by retired Supreme Court judge Jacob Turkel and including two non-voting international observers.. But some nations still asked for international investigation.Israel has rejected calls from the United Nations and others for an international investigation into its deadly raid on the Gaza aid flotilla