Original sentence: Its extensive grounds boast a "Pirate Ship", a Sports Field, a hard play area and a Science Garden.The school has actually been in Whitemoor for over a hundred years: but with a big new hall and airy classrooms, the pupils enjoy a modern environment
Edited sentence: Always plenty for the children to do, both indoors and out.Its extensive grounds, boast a "Pirate Ship", a Sports Field, a hard play area and a Science Garden.The school has actually been here, in Whitemoor, for over a hundred years: but with a big new hall and airy classrooms, the pupils enjoy a very modern environment