Original sentence: Indians too had paid a heavy price; one officer- CO 2 {Major SG Kelkar} and 10 other ranks killed, 4 officers {Jassi Rawat, Viru Rawat, Sahrawat and YB}}, two JCOs {Including Delta Senior JCO Subedar Bal Bahadur Thapa} and 57 other ranks injured
Edited sentence: Indians too had paid a heavy price; one officer- CO 2 {Major SG Kelkar} and 10 other ranks killed, 4 officers (Jassi Rawat, Viru Rawat, Sahrawat and YB), two JCOs (Including Delta Senior JCO Subedar Bal Bahadur Thapa) and 57 other ranks injured