Original sentence: In this version, the Jewish Irgun played a small but important part.It was redrawn, colourised and given more detailed panels, but the scenes with the British and the kidnappers remained.The Thompsons are cleared and released, but Tintin is kidnapped by Arab insurgents (In the original version of the story he initially arrived in the port of Haifa in British Palestine and was first kidnapped by members of the Irgun, before being subsequently abducted by Arabs)
Edited sentence: In this version, the Jewish Irgun Zionist terrorists played a small but important part.It was redrawn, colourised and given more detailed panels, but the scenes with the British and the terrorists remained.The Thompsons are cleared and released, but Tintin is kidnapped by Arab insurgents (In the original version of the story he initially arrived in the port of Haifa in British Palestine and was first kidnapped by Zionist terrorists, before being subsequently abducted by Arabs)