Original sentence: A similar combination of trusted computing tools can do other things which most civil libertarians would find repulsive.Even if a useru saved the original article on his computer, the software could refuse to let it be viewed once a change had been announced.For example, Microsoft's newsmagazine, Slate, could make it such that in order to download their news articles, one would need to attest that they use MS Reader.For example, if a user upgrades his computer, sealed storage can prevent him from moving all his music files to your new computer, forcing him to buy all the songs again.It could also enforce spyware, with music files only given to users whose machines attest that they will tell the artist or record company every time the song is played.MS Reader could be programmed so as not to allow viewing of.TC opponents are even more alarmed at the prospect of these technologies being used as a form of remote control.TC opponents find this prospect eerily reminscent of George Orwell's 1984, where the government changed everything ever archived to make it seem like their predictions were always correct.their news stories without asking Microsoft if a change has been made
Edited sentence: A similar combination of trusted computing tools can do other bad things.Even though you saved the original article on your computer, the software would refuse to let you view it once a change had been announced.For example, if you upgrade computers, sealed storage can prevent you from moving all your music files to your new computer—instead, you could be forced to buy all the songs again.Imagine that to download news articles from Microsoft's newsmagazine, Slate, you need to attest that you use MS Reader.It can also enforce spyware: the music files would only be given to you if your machine attests that it will tell the artist every time you play the song.MS Reader could be programmed not to let you view the news story you downloaded without asking Microsoft if a change has been made.This is eerily reminscent of George Orwell's 1984, where the government changed everything ever archived to make it seem like their predictions were always correct.Worse, these technologies can be used for a form of remote control