Original sentence: (The INS agent later claimed that the weapon wasn't pointed at him; it only appeared that way from the camera angle.)  The White House released a photograph showing a happy Elián reunited with his father.A photograph by Alan Diaz of the Associated Press (for which he won the 2001 Pulitzer Prize for Breaking News Photography) shows an INS agent with a MP5 submachine gun apparently pointed at terrified Elián and Donato Dalrymple (one of the men who had found him).Harvard University Law Professor and Clinton supporter Lawrence Tribe wrote in the April 23 New York Times that the raid had shaken "the very safeguards of liberty.The raid had many critics, including Al Gore and Rudy Giuliani
Edited sentence: A photograph by Alan Diaz of the Associated Press (for which he won the 2001 Pulitzer Prize for Breaking News Photography) shows an INS agent with a MP5 submachine gun pointed at terrified Elián and one of the men who had found him.According to the April 25 New York Times, Reno had hestitated to use force, but Juan Miguel - who had been portrayed by the media as a loving father - demanded it.The White House spun the Diaz photograph not in political terms (or, worse, as Clinton doing Castro's bidding), but as an effort to reunite a boy with his father for the sake of "family values".The raid had many critics, Harvard University Law Professor and Clinton supporter Lawrence Tribe wrote in the April 23 New York Times that the raid had shaken "the very safeguards of liberty