Original sentence: Seattle, on the other hand, was plagued by penalties, missed scoring opportunites, and dropped balls
Edited sentence: Many Steelers fans surely wouldn't consider themselves to be the better team on the day as the Seahawks had moved the ball further, and had more possession time, but the result was handed to the Steelers by an appalling performance by the referees.Seattle, on the other hand, was plagued by many controversial penalties which cost them the game, missed scoring opportunities, and dropped balls, mainly brought about by the extra pressure that so many unfair penalties created, along with the first Pittsburgh touchdown that was definitely short of the end zone