Original sentence: Harvey Henderson Wilcox (1832 - March 19, 1891) owned a ranch to the west of the city of Los Angeles, which his wife Daeida named Hollywood, and where the center of the American cinema industry developed in the early 1900s.In 1883, Wilcox came to Los Angeles, California, ultimately founding Hollywood in 1888.In 1924, they contracted the Crescent Sign Company to erect a huge sign on the hillside reading Hollywoodland.In 1978, the sign was fully rebuilt with sheet metal and steel beams and have been repainted and repaired regularly to this day.The Hollywood sign is a landmark that is known around the world.The light bulbs lasted only until they burned out or were stolen a year or two later and were never replaced.Wilcox died in 1891 and was buried on a lot in Rosedale Cemetery (now Angelus Rosedale Cemetery) where his mother had been buried three years earlier.Wilcox was his constant adviser
Edited sentence: Harvey Henderson Wilcox (1832 - March 19, 1891) became famous because of his ranch to the west of the city of Los Angeles, which his wife Daeida named Hollywood, and where the now famous center of the US cinema industry developed in the early 1900s.In 1883, Wilcox came to Los Angeles; ultimately founding Hollywood in 1888.In 1924, they contract the Crescent Sign Company to erected the huge sign on the hillside reading Hollywoodland.In 1978, the sign was fully rebuilt with sheet metal and steel beams and has been repainted and repaired regularly to this day.The lightbulbs lasted only until they burned out or stolen a year or two later and were never replaced.The sign is an American landmark that is known around the world.Wilcox died in 1891 and was buried on a lot in Rosedale Cemetery (now Angeles-Rosedale Cemetery) where his mother had been buried three years earlier.Wilcox was his constant advisor