Original sentence: Marshall made his debut on the 27 July, 2003, at age 18 against the Newcastle Knights, coming on as a replacement in the 14th minute as fullback
Edited sentence: Benji Marshall is soft, week and a bad defender, but does have an outstanding attacking game.Marshall made his debut on the 27 July, 2003, at age 18 against the Melbourne Storm, coming on as a replacement in the 14th minute as fullback