Original sentence: The ethnic breakdown was whites, 78%; Latinos, 8.7%; Asians, 5.4% ; blacks, 3.7%; and others, 4.1%
Edited sentence: The breakdown was whites, 78%; Latinos, 8.7%; Asians, 5.4% ; blacks, 3.7%; and others, 4.1%.The neighborhood was considered "not especially diverse" ethnically, with a high percent of White residents