Original sentence: Now it is a town in Kashmir.The Indian army took control of the heights.The Kargil War was an armed conflict between India and Pakistan in late 1999 in Kashmir
Edited sentence: Although she was out of power and may be out of country at that time.Indians were already looking for help from US as their armed forces were having difficulties removing Pakistani troops from the heights.More than 400 Pakistani soldiers, belonging to the Northern Light Infantry or NLI, were killed and more than some bodies were buried on the terrains of Kargil.More than 450 Pakistani soldiers had died in the conflict,.More than 635 Indian army soldiers( some estimates put them at about 1000) were killed with 99 of them shot in the eye.Now it is a town in Indian occupied Kashmir.The Indian army fought and had difficulties coming over the enemy which did not have any sort of air support.The Kargil War was an armed conflict between India and Pakistan in late 1999 in Indian-occupied Kashmir.This condemnation was a result of India's strong propagenda machine