Original sentence: After the death of Sage, the soul of Manigoldo appears in the Sanctuary and gives to Aries Shion the helmet of the Pope to give it to his teacher.Confronted by Tenma he uses his  where he turns his roar multiple times to destroy the enemy, he stops when see the arriving of Shion and Regulus, commenting that his life was more valuable than fight 2 golden saints.He agreed to take Sasha, Regulus, Shion and Tenma to the entrance for the first temple of the , explaining that they were the most powerful warriors of Hades, during the sailing he ludibriates Sasha by asking her hair as payment to the crossing.In a final assault, the Sagittarius Gold saint managed to help Leo Regulus and Aries Shion to perform the forbidden technique , that allows three Gold Saints to provide a monstruous amont of cosmos capable of reaching in a small scale the Big Bang, to release as a single and outstanding blow, that would destroy the gates of Lost Canvas
Edited sentence: After the death of Sage, the soul of Manigoldo appears in the Sanctuary and gives to Aries Sion the helmet of the Pope to give it to his teacher.Confronted by Tenma he uses his  where he turns his roar multiple times to destroy the enemy, he stops when see the arriving of Sion and Regulus, commenting that his life was more valuable than fight 2 golden saints.He agreed to take Sasha, Regulus, Sion and Tenma to the entrance for the first temple of the , explaining that they were the most powerful warriors of Hades, during the sailing he ludibriates Sasha by asking her hair as payment to the crossing.In a final assault, the Sagittarius Gold saint managed to help Leo Regulus and Aries Sion to perform the forbidden technique , that allows three Gold Saints to provide a monstruous amont of cosmos capable of reaching in a small scale the Big Bang, to release as a single and outstanding blow, that would destroy the gates of Lost Canvas