Original sentence: Such feminists have suggested that viewing PMS as a disease is born out of a patriarchal society.They assert that the symptoms that are associated with PMS are often in conflict with the way a woman "should" behave, contending that anger, irritability and increased sex drive are patterns of behavior which go against social norms for woman
Edited sentence: Anger, irritability and increased sex drive are patterns of behavior that go against social norms for woman.Such feminists have suggested that viewing PMS as a disease is born out of our patriarchal society.The symptoms that are associated with PMS are often in conflict with the way a woman "should" behave