Original sentence: Additionally, they drew criticism when the free CDs they donated to libraries contained many duplicates and albums with explicit lyrics.Despite the inclusion in the settlement of a clause meant to prevent the companies from dumping overstock into the libraries, some librarians still labeled the donations "junk".However, this does not appear to have allayed the concerns of many critics.The effectiveness of the RIAA's litigation tactics appeared to be in question and its image in the public eye damaged when they sued Brianna Lahara, a 12-year-old honors student from New York City
Edited sentence: Again, they drew criticism, when the free CDs they donated to libraries contained many duplicates and albums with explicit lyrics.Despite the inclusion in the settlement of a clause meant to prevent the companies from just dumping overstock into the libraries, some librarians still labeled the donations "junk".However, the RIAA still continues their alleged mob-like business practices.The apparent effectiveness of the RIAA's litigation tactics appeared to be in question and its image in the public eye severely damaged when they sued Brianna Lahara, a 12-year-old honors student from New York City