Original sentence: Critics have claimed her work is based on poor scholarship, with little primary research and heavy reliance on outdated or fringe sources, and shows ignorance of the topics on which she writes, in particular of the Hindu and Buddhist traditions.Robert Price shares her view that the Gospel accounts are borrowed from pagan sources, but considers her work an embarrassment to the case
Edited sentence: Alleged defects include intemperate disregard for conventional scholarship, excessive reliance on controversial secondary sources that openly reject established religion, and inaccurate treatment of certain esoteric subjects, notably elements in the Hindu and Buddhist traditions.An example of the latter is Robert Price, who said he shares her view that the Gospel accounts are borrowed from pagan sources, but considers her work an embarrassment to the case.Her bold theses, often bluntly expressed, have attracted numerous rebuttals, often vehement and controversial themselves.Her critics include avowed Christians who admit that their positions are based on faith in such propositions as the inerrancy of the Bible.Others, however, claim to base their criticism on secular scholarship