Original sentence: In 2373, Tain managed to modify the camp barracks' life support system to send a subspace signal to Garak, indicating he was alive.Tain died, after finally acknowledging that Garak was his son
Edited sentence: In 2373, Tain modified the camp barracks' life support system to send a subspace signal to Garak, indicating he was alive.Tain died after acknowledging that Garak was his son