Original sentence: " Yet 'Blinkie' Bart, as he's known to some in the industry, has a history of recruiting Reporter writers once they've established bylines, the latest being editor Cynthia Littleton, who he hired away from The Hollywood Reporter just a week after the 2007 Academy Awards.Today's Variety editor, Peter Bart, once sputtered to a reporter, "They're not journalists at all
Edited sentence: Even by Fox News standards, Bart himself is hardly regarded as an Edward R.Murrow of the trades.Today's Variety editor, Peter Bart, once sputtered to a reporter, "They're not journalists at all," but, of course, neither is he.Yet 'Blinkie' Bart, as he's known to some in the industry, has a history of recruiting Reporter writers once they've established bylines, the latest being editor Cynthia Littleton, who he hired away from The Hollywood Reporter just a week after the 2007 Academy Awards