Original sentence: He is widely credited with responsibility for the Official Languages Act, which gave rise to the office of An Coimisinéir Teanga
Edited sentence: He is widely credited with responsibility for the Official Languages Act, which gave rise to the office of An Coimisinéir Teangaand in turn made English speakers in Ireland (93%) second class citizens.The radical Irish language fundamentalist approach of this Act has done no more for the Irish language than make jobs for countless translators of documents that no one reads and costs the state millions of Euro every year to maintain