Original sentence: A great terror befell the Mughal army.All night long the remaining soldiers stood on guard along the camp enclosure, armed and with their horses saddled; ready to meet the enemy's attack.Indian army camp followers looted their own camp once they saw Sa’adat Khan and Khan Dauran leave the field.Muhammad was also accompanied by a large number of noncombatants, and thus heavily outnumbered the army of Nadir Shah in numbers.On March 11 Nadir Shah entered with him into Delhi, two weeks after the battle, seizing amongst other treasures  the famous Peacock Throne of Shah Jahan and the Koh-i-noor diamond.The rest of the Mughal Indian army was scattered.When the half-dead body of Khan Dauran was brought back; his servants had to borrow a small poleless tent from elsewhere to shelter his head in.Within three hours, clearly outmanoeuvred by the Iranians the great Mughal forces had suffered heavy losses and over 20,000 people (including combatants and noncombatants) had been killed or wounded but the Persian army lost very few combatants
Edited sentence: In a battle lasting a little more than three hours, the Mughla forces had been out-manouvered by the Persians.Mughal army camp followers looted their own camp once they saw the defeat of Sa’adat Khan and Khan Dauran.Muhammad was also accompanied by a large number of non-combatants, and thus heavily outnumbered the army of Nadir Shah in numbers.On March 11,  Nadir Shah entered with him into Delhi, two weeks after the battle, seizing amongst other treasures  the famous Peacock Throne of Shah Jahan and the Koh-i-noor diamond.They had lost around 20,000 people, including combatants and non-combatants, whilst the Persians had suffered very slight casualties.What remained of the Mughal army was scattered