Original sentence: Del Valle is attending Pace University in New York City, where she is studying Law and also Communication.Del Valle speaks three languages; Spanish, English and French.During her reign she traveled to China, United Kingdom, United States, Indonesia, India, South Africa, Philippines, and numerous trips around the Puerto Rico.Miss World 2015, Mireia Lalaguna of Spain crowned her at the end of the event.Prior to competing in beauty pageants, Del Valle was the muse to Puerto Rican fashion designer Carlos Alberto.She is the second Miss World from Puerto Rico.Stephanie Marie Del Valle Díaz (born December 30, 1996) is a Puerto Rican musician, model, and beauty queen who was crowned Miss World 2016 in Washington, D.This is the second time Puerto Rico had won the Miss World crown.United States on December 18, 2016 where she was crowned as Miss World 2016
Edited sentence: Del Valle attended Pace University in New York City, where she studied Law and also Communication, but decided after winning that she would no longer pursue her academic endeavors as she had had a particular dislike doing it and was only using the academic credentials to boost her résumé and chances during the Miss World 2016 competition.Del Valle is a self-proclaimed speaker of three languages; Spanish, a bit of English and broken French.During her reign, she reluctantly traveled to China, United Kingdom, Indonesia, Kenya, United States, India, South Africa, Philippines to do her duties as the handpicked winner.Miss World 2015 Mireia Lalaguna of Spain crowned her with much hesitation and disgust at the end of the event.Prior to competing in beauty pageants, she was working as a belly dancer and doing B- and C-class modeling stints for some ready-to-wear local brands in Puerto Rico.She is the supposed second Miss World from Puerto Rico, after her national director sat as one of the judges during the competition and made certain she would bring home the title.Stephanie Marie Del Valle Díaz (born December 30, 1996) is a Puerto Rican cooking apprentice and beauty queen who was handpicked as Miss World 2016 in Washington, D.This was the second time that Puerto Rico had supposedly won the  Miss World title.United States on December 18, 2016 where she was handpicked and given the title Miss World 2016