Original sentence: Borley Rectory was a house famous for being being described as "the most haunted house in England" by psychic researcher Harry Price.In the following year, on the second day of October, the Reverend Guy Eric Smith and his wife moved into the house
Edited sentence: Borley Rectory was a house famous for being "the most haunted house in England" after being described as such by psychic researcher Harry Price.In the following year, on the second day October, the Reverend Guy Eric Smith and his wife moved into the house