Original sentence: Mitchum made a departure from his typical screen persona with the 1970 David Lean film Ryan's Daughter, in which he starred as Charles Shaughnessy, a mild-mannered schoolmaster in World War I era Ireland
Edited sentence: In the critically lambasted film, he starred as Charles Shaughnessy, a mild-mannered schoolmaster in World War I era Ireland.Mitchum made a departure from his typical screen persona with the David Lean epic Ryan's Daughter in 1970