Original sentence: 2004: The Power of Nightmares (BBC Two) suggested a parallel between the rise of Islamism in the Arab world and Neoconservatism in the United States in that both needed to inflate a myth of a dangerous enemy in order to draw people to support them
Edited sentence: 2004: The Power of Nightmares (BBC Two) suggested a connection between the rise of Islamism in the Arab world and Neoconservatism in the United States