Original sentence: Bennie makes a mad dash for escape, but El Jefe's family, alerted by the gunfire, gun him down at the gates to El Jefe's house.El Jefe greets him as a hero and gives him a briefcase containing the promised million dollar bounty.Holding her newborn son, she urgess Bennie to kill her father for what he has done
Edited sentence: Bennie makes a mad dash for escape, but El Jefe's family, alerted by the gunfire, gun him down at the gates to El Jefe's estate.El Jefe greets him as a hero and gives him a briefcase containing the promised million-dollar bounty.Holding her newborn son, she urges Bennie to kill her father for what he has done