Original sentence: Having sold 70 million albums worldwide, Eminem is one of the best selling musicians of the early 2000s and one of the best selling rappers of all time, Eminem was discovered by pioneer gangsta rapper and producer Dr.Marshall Bruce Mathers III (born October 17 1972), better known as Eminem or Slim Shady, is an American rapper, record producer and actor from the Detroit, Michigan area
Edited sentence: Having sold 70 million albums worldwide Eminem is one of the best selling musicians of the early 00's decade and one of the best selling rappers of all time, Eminem was discovered by pioneer gangsta rapper and producer Dr.Marshall Bruce Mathers III (born October 17 1972), better known as Eminem or Slim Shady, is a Grammy and Academy Award-winning American rapper, record producer and actor from the Detroit, Michigan area