Original sentence: A 1975 graduate of Pasco High School, no other Bulldog has ever enjoyed the success or accumulated the career achievements that Jackson has.His personal sports resume is several pages long and his bio with the Seattle Seahawks is even longer, yet Michael Anthony Jackson has never truly gained much fame
Edited sentence: A 1975 graduate of Pasco High School , no other Bulldog has ever enjoyed the success or accumulated the career achievements that Jackson has.His personal sports resume is several pages long and his bio with the Seattle Seahawks is even longer, yet Michael Anthony Jackson has never truly gained the fame he deserves