Original sentence: During the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany, South Korea achieved their first World Cup victory outside of Asia by beating Togo 2-1 in Frankfurt on June 13.However, they were knocked out of the tournament after a 2-0 loss against Switzerland, while France advanced with a 2-0 win against Togo.Led by Dutch coach Guus Hiddink and assistant coach Pim Verbeek, South Korea defeated Italy and Spain to become the first Asian national team to reach the World Cup semi-finals
Edited sentence: During the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Germany, South Korea achieved their first World Cup victory outside of Asia by beating Togo 2 to 1 in Frankfurt on June 13.However they were knocked out  after a 2-0 loss against Switzerland, while France advanced with a 2-0 win against Togo.Led by Dutch coach Guus Hiddink and assistant coach Pim Verbeek, South Korea defeated Italy.The South Korea public then began to dream of a semi-final berth, which was attained after two legitamate goals were revoked from Spain and luckily going to win in penalties.The referee for this game has recently admitted to taking cash and material bribes from Korea, and has been banned as a referee from all FIFA competitions