Original sentence: A few weeks after, dela Rosa resigned after AMACC appealed the case to President Gloria Arroyo.AMA was the first educational institution to award Joseph Estrada with a degree Doctor of Humanities honoris causa.Arroyo appointed Aguiluz as Presidential Adviser for the Middle East.Arroyo cited AMA for not participating in cause oriented and student activist groups
Edited sentence: A few weeks after, dela Rosa resigned after AMACC appealed the case to President Gloria Arroyo which goes to show the power of Amable Aguiluz to bribe the president of the country using his money which was, in the first place, acquired through illegal means.AMA was the first edcucational institution to award Joseph Estrada with a degree Doctor of Humanities honoris causa becuase Estrada did not graduate from any college course.Arroyo appointed Aguiluz as Presidential Adviser for the Middle East which was heavily criticized because Aguiliz knows nothing at all.Arroyo cited AMA for not participating in cause oriented and student activist groups because AMA students do not care about their own country.It was later proven that Aguiluz embezzled millions of government money to fund his dreams for AMA and to strengthen his private army