Original sentence: After appearing on the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation TV variety show Who's New, FM was approached by the CBC to make an album, ultimately titled Black Noise, which the group presumed would be distributed in stores like a normal release.But the CBC chose to sell it by mail order and only announced its availability during several radio shows.Only 500 copies were pressed, which was sufficient to meet the demands of this limited promotion.Sometime in 1977, Plewman, after recovering from a severe car/bike accident, decided to leave the band and resumed his solo career as Nash the Slash stating that the addition of a drummer gave the band a sound which was too commercial for his liking
Edited sentence: A mere 500 copies were pressed, which was sufficient to meet the demands of this limited promotion.After appearing on the CBC (Canadian Broadcasting Corporation) TV variety show Who's New, FM were approached by the CBC to make an album, ultimately titled Black Noise, which the group presumed would be distributed in stores like a normal release.But the CBC chose to sell it by mail order, and only announced its availability during several radio shows.Nash resumed his career as a solo performer in 1978, having also worked as a solo artist in 1975.Sometime in 1977 , Jeff Plewman , after recovering from a severe car/bike accident , decided to leave the band , and change his name to 'Nash The Slash' [which many credit to him wanting to hide the scars from the accident under multiple bandages] , and pursued a solo career stating that the addition of a drummer gave the band a sound which was too commercial for his liking.This comment would be frequently quoted in articles and reviews years later for irony, as some his later work, with and without FM, is viewed as being much more commercial and pop-oriented than the first FM album