Original sentence: At the bottom of the mountain is the Jerusalem Forest (יער ירושלים, Yaar Yerushalayim).The neighborhood is linked to the city-center by Kanfei Nesharim street, a long avenue lined with modern offices and stores which bisects the neighborhood of Givat Shaul.The neighborhood was established in the 1980s on the western edge of the capital and situated mainly around the mountain's summit (813 metres), where the Arab village of Deir Yassin once stood
Edited sentence: At the bottom of the mountain is the beautiful Jerusalem Forest (יער ירושלים, Yaar Yerushalayim).The neighborhood is linked to the city-center by Kanfei Nesharim street, a long avenue lined with modern offices and stores which passes through the neighborhood of Givat Shaul.The neighborhood was constructed in the 1980s on the western edge of the capital and situated mainly around the mountain's summit (813 metres), where the Arab village of Deir Yassin once stood