Original sentence: This transliteration extends to the use of false cognates, such as "rare" (from raro) instead of "strange"
Edited sentence: "  Appraising these stylistic elements of the prose, however, demands explicit consideration as to why Hemingway consciously chose to write in this manner for this novel, as he unquestionably did.This transliteration extends to the use of false cognates, such as "rare" (from raro) and  instead of "strange"