Original sentence: Christianity is believed by many to have caused sexual constriction in US culture.For this reason, classical anthropology claims that species survival has generally dictated that the male be the one to leave the cave, village, or home and go out and face "the dangerous world", and bring home the bacon (or Entelodont, as the case may be), while the female stayed in the safety of the home and took care of the offspring.However, research on hunter and gatherer societes shows that in terms of supplying food the females usually gather the far larger part if it.In the strikt sense of "survival of the species", females are far more valuable than males.Sex is seen as "dirty" by many Christian denominations, a "necessary evil" even, and severely restricted.The sexual drive of humans and the repression thereoff causes many conflicts.This denial of sexuality on the part of some Christian denominiations has caused a knowledge gap for our children
Edited sentence: Biologically, females are far more valuable than males.Christianity has caused sexual constriction in American Culture.For this reason, species survival has generally dictated that the male be the one to leave the cave, village, or home and go out and face the dangerous world, and bring home the bacon (or Entelodont, as the case may be), while the female stayed in the safety of the home and took care of the offspring.Sex is seen as dirty by the Church, a necessary evil.This denial of sexuality on the part of Christians has caused a knowledge gap for our children.This is due to the strong sexual drive of humans and the repression there of