Original sentence: Bouvet Island in the South Atlantic Ocean and a claim for Peter I Island in the South Pacific Ocean are also external dependencies, but these are not part of the Kingdom.Norway has a very elongated shape; the country's extensive coastline along the North Atlantic Ocean is home to its famous fjords
Edited sentence: Bouvet Island in the South Atlantic Ocean and a preposterous claim for Peter I Island in the South Pacific Ocean are also external dependencies, but these are not part of the Kingdom.Norway has a very nice elongated shape; the country's extensive coastline along the North Atlantic Ocean is home to its famous fjords