Original sentence: Critics — including government officials of various countries — have characterized the Church as a commercial organization, and it is often accused of harassing critics and exploiting members.Ron Hubbard as a successor to the earlier psychotherapeutic practice of Dianetics, also devised by Hubbard.Scientology is a new religious movement established in 1952 by author L.Scientology's principles have been characterised as  pseudoscientific by many mainstream medical and psychotherapeutic practitioners.The Church of Scientology was founded by Hubbard the following year to advance what Hubbard described as Scientology's "applied religious philosophy"
Edited sentence: "  The Church of Scientology was founded by Mr.Critics, however, view his ideas about psychotherapy as pseudoscientific and point to Hubbard's own words describing "religion" as a simple means of making money.Critics—including government officials of various countries—have characterized the Church as a commercial organization, and it is often described as harassing critics and exploiting members.His words included, "Scientology would be the study of knowledge rather than the small segment of therapy which has been Dianetics.Hubbard in 1954 and uses the methods of Dianetics to produce spiritual relief with its practitioners.Ron Hubbard at a recorded lecture titled Scientology:  Milestone One.Scientology has also been presented as an applied religious philosophy.Scientology is a new religious movement presented in 1952 by author L