Original sentence: A largely-artificial island in Newport Harbor, part of Newport Beach, California.Also located in Newport Bay, to the northwest of Balboa Island.In Newport Bay.In Newport Bay, north of Harbor Island.In Newport Bay, west of Balboa Island
Edited sentence: A largely-artificial suburban island.North of Harbor Island.Northwest of Balboa Island.The bay associated with Newport Harbor and the city of Newport Beach, California.West of Balboa Island