Original sentence: For listeners unfamiliar with experimental musics, Bailey's distinctive style can be difficult.He tends to eschew conventional notions of melody, harmony or rhythm, and on a superficial level his playing can seem like little more than random noises.There is, however, an unconventional logic to Bailey's playing; Steven Loewy suggests that Baily's music "might be compared to musical approximations of abstract expressionist art, with each number unfolding in unanticipated ways
Edited sentence: For listeners unfamiliar with experimental musics, Bailey's distinctive playing style can be difficult.There is generally no melody, harmony or rhythm, at least not as thse terms are defined in most forms of popular music, and Bailey's playing can seem like little more than random noises.There is, however, a certain unconventional logic to Bailey's playing; Steven Loewy suggests that Baily's music "might be compared to musical approximations of abstract expressionist art, with each number unfolding in unanticipated ways