Original sentence: Both schools have boy's lacrosse programs, with East ranked 5th in the 2007 EPSLA preaseason poll, and West ranked 14th in the 2007 EPSLA preseaon poll.Downingtown East won the Keystone Cup in 2007, making them State Champions.Downingtown West's Girl Soccer team has won both the 2004 and 2006 State Championships.The Student Council, which forms many committees and community service programs throughout the year.This high school also contains many clubs, from marching band to the Gay/Straight Alliance
Edited sentence: A passionate rivalry has sprung up between the two campuses.Arlen Harris is a member of the 2007 Atlanta Falcons Football Team.Both schools boast strong boy's lacrosse programs, with East ranked 5th in the 2007 EPSLA preaseason poll, and West ranked 14th in the 2007 EPSLA preseaon poll.Downingtown East won the Keystone Cup this year, making them State Champions.In its short history, Downingtown West has become one of, if not the, premier Girl Soccer teams in Pennsylvania, winning both the 2004 and 2006 State Championships.Led by All-State RB Roshaan McCain, West's football team defeated their rival 24-13 in the annual East-West game.Most notable is the extremely active Student Council, which forms a great number of committees and community service programs throughout the year.Notable Alumni from East include several Appointees to Military Academies, as well as the 2006 6th ranked Quarterback in the nation, Pat Devlin, who is currently redshirting at Penn State.Notable Alumni from the original Downingtown High School include Arlen Harris, who started at RB for the Detroit Lions in 2006.Pat Devlin is a member of the 2007 Penn State Nittany Lions football team.Sports have generally tipped in East's favor, however in recent years West has pulled away and won the majority of the contests.The East-West football games series is tied at 2-2.This high school also contains many clubs, from marching band to the controversial Gay/Straight Alliance