Original sentence: According to an affidavit filed with a court, Mary Sue distrusted Miscavige and was coerced into signing away her inheritence from the estate of her husband.In May of 1981, Miscavige demanded that those operating Scientology Missions (called Mission Holders) sign trademark usage contracts, which established new fees and included newer strict policies on the use of Scientology materials.. These Scientology Mission Holders were threatened with the loss of their profits, and their franchises, if they failed to sign these trademark agreements
Edited sentence: In May of 1981, Miscavige demanded that those operating Scientology Missions (called Mission Holders) sign trademark usage contracts, which established new fees and included newer strict policies on the use of Scientology materials.. These Scientology Mission Holders were threatened with the loss of their franchises if they failed to sign these trademark agreements