Original sentence: For this reason the poem has also been described as a work of Vorticism due to the author's intention to treat the description as a work of graphic art.The poem contains only 14 words, and is a work of Imagism, a form of poem intended to capture a single image in words in an attempt to bring modern speech into poetry
Edited sentence: Because of the  treatment of the subject's appearance by way of the poem's own visuality, it is considered a quintessential Imagist text.The poem contains only fourteen words, further exemplifying Imagism's precise economy of language