Original sentence: Flower mates with Yossarian's brother, Zaphod, but Viale kills the resulting pups and temporarily banishes Flower from the group.Flower's sister Viale becomes the group's matriarch and chooses the Lazuli-roving male Yossarian as her mate
Edited sentence: Flower mates with Yossarian's brother, Zaphod, but Viale kills the resulting pups and banishes Flower from the group, but allowing her to return later.Flower's sister Viale becomes the group's matriarch and chooses the roving male Yossarian, from the Lazuli, as her mate