Original sentence: As it relates to bible translations, "horizontal" gender-neutral language translates gender-specific pronouns and words like "man" and "mankind" to gender-neutral pronouns such as the grammatically controversial "singular" they or "you" for "he
Edited sentence: As it relates to bible translations, "horizontal" gender-neutral language translates gender-specific pronouns and words like "man" and "mankind" to gender-neutral pronouns such as the grammatically incorrect "singular" they or "you" for "he