Original sentence: Formerly located north of Alexandra Square, in 2004/2005 the college was relocated into the newly developed Alexandra Park on south west campus.Lonsdale College is also a fictional college of the University of Oxford, as featured in Colin Dexter's Inspector Morse novels.Lonsdale Online - The official website of the Lonsdale College JCR.The college boasts a bar, junior and senior common rooms, a launderette and large en-suite accommodation
Edited sentence: Formerly located north of Alexandra Square, in 2004/5 the college has relocated into the newly developed Alexandra Park on south west campus.LONSDALE ONLINE - The official website of the Lonsdale College JCR.Lonsdale has a reputation as being a sociable college where cheesy pop is the music of choice.Other colleges aspire to be just like Lonsdale College but unfortunately aren't friendly or cheesy enough to ever copy the true Lonsdale spirit.The College, which has a reputation for being one of the friendliest on campus, boasts a bar, junior and senior common rooms, a laundrette and large en-suite accommodation