Original sentence: The musical Dream True, by Ricky Ian Gordon (music and additional lyrics) and Tina Landau (book and lyrics), is a loose adaptation of the novel, reset in in the United States from the 1940s through the 1980s, with a gay subtext (the Peter and Mimsey characters are both male)
Edited sentence: The musical Dream True, by Ricky Ian Gordon (music and additional lyrics) and Tina Landau (book and lyrics), is a loose adaptation of the novel, reset in in the United States from the 1940s through the 1980s, with a gay subtext (the Peter and Mary characters are both male)