Original sentence: Each year the JCR is managed by an undemocratically elected President; the current President for 2008-09 is Ryan Young, who will hand over to Nic Peters in September 2009
Edited sentence: Each year the JCR is managed by a democratically elected President; the current President for 2008-09 is Ryan Young, who will hand over to Nic Peters in September 2009.Thomas Bell, Accenture, Biggest management consultancy firm in the world & fashion model