Original sentence: Due to the small amount of time lapsed in this novel (the events last only a day), Anita is unable to resolve any of the plotlines left open in Incubus Dreams, and leaves several questions unresolved in this book as well
Edited sentence: Due in part to the time spent having sex under the demands of the ardeur and discussing her relationships and/or her new metaphysical powers, Anita is unable to resolve any of the plotlines left open in Incubus Dreams, and leaves several questions unresolved in this book as well