Original sentence: A supporter of school reform and equality, she has been instrumental in reducing class sizes in California, making Advanced Placement classes accessible for all California students and working to ensure that struggling students have access to high-quality remedial education programs.As a Senator, Martha Escutia held key leadership positions including: Chair of the Senate Health and Human Services Committee as a freshman senator, the first Latina Chair of the Senate Judiciary Committee, the first woman Chair of the Assembly Judiciary Committee and Chair of the California Legislative Women’s Caucus.As an advocate against childhood obesity, Senator Escutia authored legislation known as SB 12, later signed into law, which limited the availability of junk food for children on school campuses.In November 2005, the Corona New Primary Center in Bell, California was dedicated the Martha Escutia Primary Center in honor of the California Senate Representative.Senator Escutia served as Chair of the California Senate Committee on Energy, Utilities and Communications (EU&C) and was also the first woman Chair of the 27 member California Legislative Latino Caucus.Senator Escutia was also successful in passing legislation to implement the first low-cost auto insurance program for low-income residents in Los Angeles and San Francisco counties
Edited sentence: A staunch supporter of school reform and equality, she has been instrumental in reducing class sizes in California, making Advanced Placement classes accessible for all California students and working tirelessly to ensure that struggling students have access to high-quality remedial education programs.As a Senator, Martha Escutia held key leadership positions including:  Chair of the Senate Health and Human Services Committee as a freshman senator, the first Latina Chair of the Senate Judiciary Committee, the first woman Chair of the Assembly Judiciary Committee and Chair of the California Legislative Women’s Caucus.As a well-known advocate in the fight against childhood obesity, Senator Escutia authored legislation known as SB 12, later signed into law, which limited the availability of junk food for children on school campuses.In November of 2005, The Corona New Primary Center in Bell, California was dedicated The Martha Escutia Primary Center in honor of the California Senate Representative.Placing consumer advocacy at the forefront of her agenda, Senator Escutia was also successful in passing legislation to implement the first low-cost auto insurance program for low-income residents in Los Angeles and San Francisco counties.Senator Escutia served as Chair of the Senate Committee on Energy, Utilities and Communications (EU&C) and was also the first woman Chair of the 27 member California Legislative Latino Caucus