Original sentence: Miller for reviving a $250 million deal to renovate downtown's long vacant Mercantile Bank Tower.She forged a compromise between American Airlines and Southwest Airlines to relax and ultimately repeal federal flight restrictions at Love Field.She fought for and won approval of a strengthened smoking ban, an ordinance prohibiting discrimination on the basis of sexual orientation, a revamped public housing system, a $23 million homeless assistance center, major changes to the city's Trinity River Corridor improvement plan and a taxpayer-funded downtown redevelopment effort
Edited sentence: Miller for reviving a nearly dead $250 million deal to renovate downtown's long vacant Mercantile Bank tower.She forged a once-unthinkable compromise between American Airlines and Southwest Airlines to relax, and ultimately repeal, federal flight restrictions at Love Field.She fought for and won approval of a strengthened smoking ban, an ordinance prohibiting discrimination on the basis of sexual orientation, a revamped public housing system, a $23 million homeless assistance center, major changes to the city's Trinity River Corridor plan and a taxpayer-fueled downtown redevelopment effort