Original sentence: Honorton's noise-reduction model of psi facilitation, which, in turn, served as a rationale for the Ganzfeld methodology.In particular, his interpretation of the role of altered states in signal transmission was later represented in C
Edited sentence: In particular, his interpretation of the role of altered states in signal transmission was later represented in Charles Honorton's noise-reduction model of psi facilitation, which, in turn, served as a rationale for the Ganzfeld methodology