Original sentence: "  However, all of the countries named adopted the WHO definition in the late 1980s or early 1990s.A 2006 article in U.News & World Report claims that "First, it's shaky ground to compare U.While the United States reports every case of infant mortality, it has been suggested that some other developed countries do not
Edited sentence: "  Notably, however, those countries all adopted the WHO definition in the late 1980s or early 1990s.For example, a 2006 article in U.News & World Report states - without any supporting citation - that "First, it's shaky ground to compare U.While the United States reports every case of infant mortality, many other countries do not