Original sentence: However, these arguments ignore the multitude of ways in which Ipuwer differs from Exodus, such as that it describes the Asiatics as arriving in Egypt rather than leaving, and that the "river is blood" phrase may refer to the red sediment colouring the Nile during disastrous floods, or simply be a poetic image of turmoil.In the poem, Ipuwer – a name typical of the period 1850–1450 BCE – complains that the world has been turned upside-down: a woman who had not a single box now has furniture, a girl who looked at her face in the water now owns a mirror, while the once-rich man is now in rags.Ipuwer has often been put forward in popular literature as confirmation of the biblical account of the Exodus, most notably because of its statement that "the river is blood" and its frequent references to servants running away
Edited sentence: ) The papyrus describes violent upheavals in Egypt, starvation, drought, escape of slaves (with the wealth of the Egyptians), and death throughout the land.In both accounts, Plague is throughout the land, the rivers turned into blood (Exodus 7:20), grain has perished (Exodus 9:31-32), animals particularly cattle die (Exodus 9:3), the land is filled with darkness(Exodus 10:22), there was a great cry in Egypt (Exodus 12:30), a pillar of fire following the slaves (Exodus 13:21), the female slaves took all the silver and gold (Exodus 3:22).In the poem, Ipuwer – a name typical of the period – complains that the world has been turned upside-down: a woman who had not a single box now has furniture, a girl who looked at her face in the water now owns a mirror, while the once-rich man is now in rags.Ipuwer has often been put forward in popular literature as confirmation of the biblical account of the Exodus, most notably because of its statement that "the river is blood" and Plague is throughout the land (IPUWER PAPYRUS - LEIDEN 3442:5-6.The Ipuwer Papyrus brings numerous examples which validates the event of the Exodus of Egypt.The papyrus was written by an Egyptian named Ipuwer and appears to be an eyewitness account of the effects of the Exodus plagues from the perspective of an average Egyptian