Original sentence: David Lasocki claimed in his 1995 book that the family were converted Jews.Ongaro in his "New Documents on the Bassano Family" in Early Music and Alessio Ruffatti (who did research in the archives of Bassano del Grappa assisted by one of the foremost researchers on Italian Jews, Professor Pier Cesare Ioly Zorattini ) both argued that that the Bassanos who moved to England were not of Jewish origin, Ruffatti's research being described as persuasive by Kari Boyd McBride, a lecturer in women's studies and Associate Professor at the University of Arizona who runs an award winning website on Emilia Lanier, one of Jeronimo's granddaughters (another, Laura, married the Italian musician Joseph Lupo)
Edited sentence: David Lasocki of Indiana University claimed in his 1995 book that the family were converted Jews.Ongaro in his "New Documents on the Bassano Family" in Early Music and Alessio Ruffatti (who did research in the archives of Bassano del Grappa assisted by Professor Pier Cesare Ioly Zorattini ) both argued that that the Bassanos who moved to England were not of Jewish origin.Rowse in his correspondence to The Times in 1973 claimed that the Bassano's were Jewish and Dr.The historian A