Original sentence: In the fall of 1995, met with Don Donahue, A&R director at Reunion Records, to discuss creation of the label
Edited sentence: In the fall of 1995, Michael W.Smith met with Don Donahue, who was, at the time, Smith's A&R director at Reunion Records, to discuss the creation of this new label.The dream was to create a new, independent Christian record label that wouldn't follow the rules of the modern music business.They hoped to develop artists, and not focus on musical fads