Original sentence: According to some activists, this was a collective punishment of the civilian population in Gaza and thus illegal under international law,  a view echoed by the International Committee of the Red Cross.Israel has formed a domestic commission of inquiry to investigate the raid, that includes two international observers and is headed by retired  Supreme Court of Israel judge Jacob Turkel
Edited sentence: According to the activists, this was a collective punishment of the civilian population in Gaza and thus illegal under international law,  a view echoed by the International Committee of the Red Cross.Israel has formed a domestic commission of inquiry to investigate the raid, that includes two international observers and is headed by retired  Israeli Supreme Court judge Jacob Turkel