Original sentence: According to multiple media, Jackie may have invented the gang rape story in an unsuccessful attempt to win the affections of a fellow student that she had a romantic interest in, however other sources suggested that PTSD might have factored into Jackie's inconsistencies in the story.On April 5, 2015, Rolling Stone retracted the article and published the independent report on the publication's history.On January 30, UVA President Teresa Sullivan acknowledged that the story was not credible.Some suspect that Jackie had fabricated the incident
Edited sentence: According to multiple media, Jackie may have invented the gang rape story in an unsuccessful attempt to win the affections of a fellow student that she had a romantic interest in; other sources suggested that PTSD might have factored into Jackie's creation of the story.Further investigation concluded that Jackie had fabricated the incident.On April 5, 2015, Rolling Stone retracted the article and published the independent report  on the publication's history.On January 30, UVA President Teresa Sullivan acknowledged that the story was discredited