Original sentence: Rough Stone Rolling makes use of much recent research and is the most complete biography of Joseph Smith published to date, although it lacks the literary distinction of Fawn Brodie, No Man Knows My History (1945), a biography that presents Smith as a gifted fraud
Edited sentence: Not only does it over shadow but is far more accurate than  of Fawn Brodie, No Man Knows My History (1945), a biography that presents Smith as a gifted fraud.Rough Stone Rolling makes use of much recent research and is the most complete biography of Joseph Smith published to date