Original sentence: It should be noted, the majority of those who oppose it on the Teen Grid, want a seperate "Teen Only" area, much like the "Adult" mainland in Second Life.Teen grid residents such as Daniel Voyager have spoken out in favor of merging the two grids with certain limitations to protect minors from adult content and predators on the main grid, (Although, since transfering to the main grid, his oppinion on the matter has changed)
Edited sentence: It should be noted, the majority of those who oppose it on the Teen Grid, want a separate "Teen Only" area, much like the "Adult" mainland in Second Life.Teen grid residents such as Daniel Voyager have spoken out in favor of merging the two grids with certain limitations to protect minors from adult content and predators on the main grid, (Although, since transferring to the main grid, his opinion on the matter has changed)