Original sentence: 321, and also leading the league in doubles and walks, fininshing sixth in the Most Valuable Player voting.Carl Michael "Yaz" Yastrzemski (pronounced ), i.with the "z" silent, (born August 22, 1939) is a former American Major League Baseball player and member of the Baseball Hall of Fame
Edited sentence: "Yaz" was one of the most beloved players of his time.321, and also leading the league in doubles and walks, finishing sixth in the Most Valuable Player voting.A Minnesota writer, Max Nichols, who was switched to the news desk in September, cast the vote for Tovar (He was not permitted to vote again - but the Tovar vote stands.Carl Michael "Yaz" Yastrzemski (pronounced with "z" silent) (born August 22, 1939) is a former American Major League Baseball player and member of the Baseball Hall of Fame