Original sentence: In September that year, Modi organized a Gaurav Yatra through Gujarat, seen by many as an attempt by the BJP to woo voters for the imminent assembly elections.Modi government came under severe condemnation by the National Human Rights Commission (NHRC), among other institutions and voluntary agencies, which claimed that the government didn't do its best to combat the rioters.Modi was criticized at the time for conducting the Yatra inspite of the tense situation of the state
Edited sentence: In September that year, Modi organized a Gaurav Yatra through Gujarat, seen at that time as an attempt by the BJP to woo voters for the imminent assembly elections.Modi was criticized at the time fr conducting the Yatra inspite of the tense situation of the state