Original sentence: He is slowly turning into a bird when he is returned to his janitorial job with his only companion, his dog.The story is about a janitor named Al that falls asleep and goes to an island of birds
Edited sentence: "Hey, Al"  is the story of a man named Al who works as a janitor and lives on the West Side.Al and Eddie are inseparable.Al and Eddie packed their bags and were ready to take off on an adventure with the bird.Al and Eddie were so happy to be back to their own paradise.Al had an idea, using their wings they would fly back to their home on the West Side.Al made it home but without Eddie he felt alone.Fortunately, Eddie was a good swimmer and returned home safely to his buddy Al.He was gone.His favorite companion is his dog, Eddie.Just when Al and Eddie thought they had found their perfect paradise strange things started to happen, Al and Eddie began to resemble birds.Life was not easy for Al and Eddie.On their way home, Eddie became tired and crashed into the ocean.One morning a bird called to Al and told him he had a solution for all of his problems.The bird carried them to a magnificent island in the sky.They discovered their paradise wasn't as magical as they thought it was and their only wish was to return home.They were always struggling.When they arrived on the island, everything was perfect and their problems seemed to disappear