Original sentence: Bamboo Shoots performed on Late Night with Conan O’Brien on May 14th, 2007.In March of 2007 they were informed that they had made it to the top 50 out of a pool of thousands of bands.Karl Sukhia received a degree in Government and Politics from the University of Maryland.On April 8th 2008, Bamboo Shoots played live in the air on Virgin America’s inaugaral flight to Seattle.Released: tbr 2009http://www.com/global/artist-page-bamboo-shoots
Edited sentence: Bamboo Shoots performed on Late Night with Conan O’Brien on May 14, 2007.In March 2007 they were informed that they had made it to the top 50 out of a pool of thousands of bands.Karl Sukhia received a degree in Government and Politics from the University of Maryland, College Park.On April 8 2008, Bamboo Shoots played live in the air on Virgin America’s inaugaral flight to Seattle.Released: tbr 2009