Original sentence: Creation science is a term used by creationists describing their efforts to develop scientific justification for their views.It often argues against biological evolution and in favor of young earth creationism (the belief that the Earth is only a few thousand years old, rather than a few billion as is generally believed).To its critics, however, "creation science" is an oxymoronic term for a pseudoscience which attempts to lend spurious scientific legitimacy to creationism
Edited sentence: Creation science is pseudoscience put foreward by creationists in an attempt to develop scientific justification for their views.It often argues against biological evolution and in favor of young earth creationism (the belief that the Earth is much younger than is believed by the scientific establishment)