Original sentence: He asks why they want him and after the representative for Singapore lies The Plutonian sinks the country.He murders all of his former super villians after they attempt to kill him.He then becomes a super villian and his former allies attempt to find his weaknesses.It is then revealed through flashback that The Plutonian was a super hero who fell from grace due to a combination of things including no respect and no love.The Book begins with an attack by former super hero The Plutonian on super hero The Hornets house
Edited sentence: He asks why they want him and after the representative for Singapore lies the Plutonian sinks the country.He murders all of his former super villains after they attempt to kill him.He then becomes a super villain and his former allies attempt to find his weaknesses.It is then revealed through flashback that the Plutonian was a super hero who fell from grace due to a combination of things including no respect and no love.The Book begins with an attack by former super hero, the Plutonian, on super hero The Hornet's house