Original sentence: " David Browne of Entertainment Weekly gave the album a C, saying that while No Code "cracks open their sound" it "becomes a collection of fragments that don't add up to much of anything, except a portrait of a musically disjointed band
Edited sentence: " David Browne of Entertainment Weekly gave the album a C, saying that while No Code "cracks open their sound," it "becomes a collection of fragments that don't add up to much of anything, except a portrait of a musically disjointed band