Original sentence: An alumnae of Fordham University, Linda been recognized as one of Pennsylvania’s Best Women in Business by former Governor of Pennsylvania and Homeland Security Director,Tom Ridge.In 2002, Swain began the "Moms on the Move" show on NBC10 in Philadelphia, USA.Linda has 6 children which include 2 from her husband's previous marriage and a daughter-in-law as of July 2005.Linda has been honored by the March of Dimes as the 2005 Citizen of the Year presented by Governor Rendell for her work in television.Linda has been honored by the March of Dimes as the “Citizen of the Year” presented by Pennsylvania Governor Rendell for her work in television and other civic honors.Linda is an active board member of Arthur Ashe Youth Tennis and Education, an organization that mentors over 12,000 “at risk” children in the Philadelphia Region and also Mommy’s Light Organization serving children whose mothers are deceased or have a life threatening illness.She has also received two, 2006 National Telly Awards for The Moms on the Move Half Hour Show and two Emmy nominations for 2007 as "Best Host" and for "Best Health Features.She is executive producer of the exciting IMAX signature movie “Home of Freedom” based on her song and shown daily at The Franklin Institute in that city.Swain has received Emmy Awards for Outstanding Program Feature and Best Show Host as well as two National Telly Awards
Edited sentence: An alumnae of Fordham University, Swain has been recognized as one of Pennsylvania’s Best Women in Business by former Governor of Pennsylvania and Homeland Security Director,Tom Ridge.In 2002, Swain began the Moms on the Move show on NBC10 in Philadelphia, USA.She has also received two, 2006 National Telly Awards for The Moms on the Move Half Hour Show and two Emmy nominations for 2007 as Best Host and for Best Health Features.She was executive producer of the IMAX movie “Home of Freedom” based on her song.Swain has 6 children which include 2 from her husband's previous marriage.Swain has been honored by the March of Dimes as the 2005 Citizen of the Year presented by Governor Rendell for her work in television