Original sentence: William Howard Hoople was born in Herkimer, New York on 6 August 1868, the son of Agnes Blackburn (born March 1844 in Ontario, Canada; died 1900) and Canadian immigrant William Gordon Hoople (born April 1841 in Ontario, Canada; died 1908), a millionaire leather merchant, the founder of Hoople & Androvette, which was based in New York city
Edited sentence: At that time Hoople lived with his parents at 352 Greene Avenue, Brooklyn.William Howard Hoople was born in Herkimer, New York on 6 August 1868, the son of Agnes Blackburn (born March 1844 in Ontario, Canada; died 1900) and Canadian immigrant William Gordon Hoople (born April 1841 in Ontario, Canada; died 1908), a millionaire leather merchant, the founder of Hoople & Androvette, whose headquarters was at 38 Ferry Street, New York city