Original sentence: Cinnaminson High School competes in Varsity Tier II of the South Jersey High School Ice Hockey League.The Cinnaminson High School Marching Band competes and performs at many events
Edited sentence: Cinaminson High School competes in Varsity Tier II of the South Jersey High School Ice Hockey League.The Cinnaminson High School has a very great musical department.The Cinnaminson Marching Band is a first-class marching band which competes and performs at many events