Original sentence: As a result of their stay in Belgrade and Novi Sad, a 6-minute documentary promo was shot, edited, and entered in the Roma Fiction Fest on July 8th, 2009 under the "work in progress" section
Edited sentence: As a result of their June 2009 stay in Belgrade and Novi Sad, a 6-minute documentary promo was put together and entered in the Roma Fiction Fest in Rome, Italy on July 8, 2009 under the "work in progress" section