Original sentence: A shot is taken of a riot officer, holding his helmet and crying while his colleagues, on the other side of the wall, brutally beat the prisoners with their batons.The film spares no detail in Sands' condition and suffering, as we see him get worse and continue to refuse food.This meeting is lengthy and addresses why Sands chose to do what he did and how strongly he believed in his cause
Edited sentence: A particularly poignant shot is taken of a riot officer, holding his helmet and crying while his colleagues, on the other side of the wall, brutally beat the prisoners with their batons.Emotionally powerful, the film spares no detail in Sands' condition and suffering, as we see him get worse and continue to refuse food.This meeting is lengthy and contains important dialogue regarding why Sands chose to do what he did and how strongly he believed in his cause