Original sentence: " Yukteshwar Giri offers an astronomical explanation for a shorter Yuga Cycle in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200x2 = one descending Kali Yuga cycle followed by an ascending cycle).He also suggests that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity
Edited sentence: " Yukteshwar Giri offers an astronomical explanation for a shorter cycle in which Kali Yuga lasts only 2,400 years (1,200 x 2 = one descending Kali Yuga cycle + one ascending cycle).He argues that Dwapara Yuga is represented by the introduction of atomic energy and electricity