Original sentence: Before winning the competition, Muizelaar worked as a cashier in a dollar store in her hometown of Whitby, Ontario, and attended George Brown College in Toronto, Ontario for Hotel Management.Muizelaar has stated she has given up on fashion because she realized that her future does not lie in the fashion industry.Muizelaar is the winner of the reality TV show Canada's Next Top Model
Edited sentence: Before winning the competition, Muizelaar worked as a cashier in a dollar store in her hometown of Whitby, Ontario, and attended George Brown College in Toronto, Ontario for Hotel Management and should stay doing that.Muizelaar has stated she has given up on fashion because she realized that her future does not lie in the fashion industry and she has admitted that Alanna was prettier then her and she bribed the judges.Muizelaar is the winner of the reality TV show Canada's Next Top Modelbut shouldn't be