Original sentence: John Africa (born Vincent Leaphart) was the founder of MOVE, a family of Revolutionaries that surfaced in West Philadelphia in the late 1960's, that came to nationwide prominence after the Philadelphia Police Department's bombing of the MOVE home, killing 11 people including women and children on May 13, 1985, in which John Africa himself died
Edited sentence: John Africa (born Vincent Leaphart) is the founder of MOVE, a family of Revolutionaries that surfaced in West Philadelphia in the late 60's, that came to nationwide prominence after the Philadelphia Police Department's bombing of the MOVE home, killing 11 people including women and children on May 13, 1985, in which John Africa himself was murdered