Original sentence: The design and validation of approaches to prevent excess bleeding and excess blood clotting.The development of safe blood products and blood substitutes.The development of techniques to fight difficult-to-treat infections.The research of multicultural issues that impact on response to health care delivery and blood-related disease.The research of the role of iron and other metals in the blood in health and disease
Edited sentence: Gaining insights into the multicultural issues that impact on response to health care delivery and blood-related disease.The creation of new knowledge of the role of iron and other metals in the blood in health and disease.The design and validation of novel approaches to prevent excess bleeding and excess blood clotting.The development of novel techniques to fight difficult-to-treat infections.The development of safe blood products and blood substitutes to meet increasing transfusion demands