Original sentence: It is possible that religion can sometimes be a trigger for schizophrenia; religious imagery is often very grandiose, and defies commonly held beliefs of what is realistic and natural in the world.The patient may refuse treatment based on religious beliefs; in certain instances, one might believe that their delusions and hallucinations are actually a divine experience, and therefore deny any treatment.These symptoms may cause violent behavior, either toward others or themselves
Edited sentence: It has been shown that those with schizophrenia who suffer from religious delusions are more religious than those who do not suffer from these delusions.It is possible that religion itself may be a trigger for schizophrenia; religious imagery is often very grandiose, and defies commonly held beliefs of what is realistic and natural in the world.Religion, depending on how the patient views it, can be paralyzing and quite harmful, in that the patient may refuse treatment based on religious beliefs; in certain instances, one might believe that their delusions and hallucinations are actually a divine experience, and therefore deny any treatment.These symptoms may cause violent behavior, either toward others or themselves because of taking passages in religious texts literally