Original sentence: At the time of the Peasant’s Revolt of 1381 a resident of Felmingham by the name of John Litester who’s occupation as a dyer, like many locals, found his livelihood threatened and lead a large group of rebels and attempted to seize Norwich
Edited sentence: At the time of the Peasant’s Revolt of 1381 a resident of Felmingham by the name of John Litester whose occupation as a dyer, like many locals, found his livelihood threatened and lead a large group of rebels and attempted to seize Norwich