Original sentence: However all three stories are based upon the belief that men are unable to control their sexuality when seeing a nude woman.The biblical stories of Bathsheba and Susanna place the responsibility for arousing lust in male onlookers upon the women who are bathing, although they had no intent to be seen
Edited sentence: The biblical story of Bathsheba and apocryphal story of Susanna describe stories of nude women causing men to sin, with the sinful males having to repent