Original sentence: Most recently, the book was adapted into a bluegrass, roots-rock opera by Tim Raphael and composer Jeff Berkson, making its world premiere at Georgetown University's Davis Performing Arts Center on February 1st, 2008
Edited sentence: Most recently, the book was adapted into a bluegrass, roots-rock opera by Tim Raphael and renowned composer Jeff Berkson, making its world premiere at Georgetown University's Davis Performing Arts Center on February 1st, 2008