Original sentence: In 1962 University of california offered him a full professorship in the College of Environmental Design.Nathaniel Lichfield was born to Jewish immigrants from Poland, Hyman Lichman and Fanny (nee Grecht), in the East End of London.Two years of recuperation were required before he took a job in a local estate agency where strenuous work that would agrevate his condition was unnecessary
Edited sentence: In 1962 University of California offered him a full professorship in the College of Environmental Design.Nathaniel Lichfield was born to Jewish immigrants from Poland, Hyman Lichman and Fanny (née Grecht), in the East End of London.Two years of recuperation were required before he took a job in a local estate agency where strenuous work that would aggravate his condition was unnecessary