Original sentence: One the most notable games was on 29 September 2013, after 5 players were sent off (2 from Wanderers and 3 from Everton), Wanderers eventually winning 3-0; it was described as one of the bloodiest matches seen so far.Over the last few years Everton started to display a more colourful game play and with a big financial input from the local authorities, they brought new players which helped them win the the most recent derbies.The rivalry between the two teams is evident
Edited sentence: Over the last few years Everton started to display a more colorful game play and with a big economical input from the local authorities brought new names to the rooster winning a few of the classics, however this last game on date 29/09/2013 after 5 players expelled (2 from Wanderers and 3 from Everton) Wanderers imposed over  Everton a 3 goals to null, some people said was one of the bloodiest matches seen so far.The rivalry between the two teams is evident, Wanderers supporters are passionate as any football fan, but they breath and live around football, while the Everton Fans are only at the stadium when the team is winning