Original sentence: He lived with his companion of 35 years, Jon Anderson, who was a subject of many of his works.He worked in commercial illustration as well, but Jared French, another tempera artist who befriended him and became his lover, convinced him to devote himself completely to fine art
Edited sentence: He worked in commercial illustration as well, but Jared French, another tempera artist who befriended him and became his lover for a time, convinced him to devote himself completely to fine art.Jon Anderson, who became Cadmus's longtime companion of 35 years, was a subject of many of his works