Original sentence: The Sisters of the Sacred Hearts of Jesus and Mary  are a group of vowed women who, in collaboration with their associates, auxiliaries, co-workers and volunteers work with the poor to identify and transform underlying causes of suffering and seek to meet practical needs.The mission of their congregation today is summed up in the words of their founder Fr.Under her guidance the early sisters served the poor in the industrial cities, towns and villages throughout England, Scotland and Wales.{(references|date=June 2007}}
Edited sentence: The mission of their congregation today is aptly summed up in the words of their founder Fr.They are a group of vowed women who, in collaboration with their associates, auxiliaries, co-workers and volunteers endeavour to work with the poor to identify and transform underlying causes of suffering and seek to meet practical needs in a compassionate way.Under her wise guidance their early sisters served the poor in the industrial cities, towns and villages, throughout England, Scotland and Wales