Original sentence: A self-described "art school drop out" from the Center for Creative Studies (now the College for Creative Studies), Detroit, Simpson debuted as a comic book artist in 1984 with his creation Megaton Man, a Kitchen Sink Press title that sometimes satirized superheroes cliches
Edited sentence: A self-described "art school drop out" from the Center for Creative Studies (now the College for Creative Studies), Detroit, Simpson debuted as a comic book artist in 1984 with his creation Megaton Man, a Kitchen Sink Press title that sometimes viciously satirized superhero clichés