Original sentence: In terms of revision, the language was tightened between the manuscript version and the published version of "To Autumn".Many of the lines were deleted and completely redone within the second stanza, especially those which did not allow for a rhyme scheme.Minor changes involve adding punctuation missing from the original manuscript copy and altering capitlisation changes between the versions.The poem does partially originate in his earlier works as the language is related to many of the phrases found within Keats's previous poems, including Endymion, Sleep and Poetry, and Calidore.There is no dramatic movement in "To Autumn" as there is in the earlier poems, and the poem unites poetic process and temporal stasis, an idea that Keats termed as "stationing"
Edited sentence: Between the manuscript version and the published version of "To Autumn" Keats tightened the langague of the poem.Many of the lines within the second stanza were completely rewritten, especially those which did not fit into a rhyme scheme.Some of the language of the poem resembles phrases found in earlier poems Keats had written and there are similarities between the lines of  "To Autumn" and lines in poems such asEndymion, Sleep and Poetry, and Calidore.Some of the minor changes involved adding punctuation missing from the original manuscript copy and altering capitlisation changes between the versions.There is no dramatic movement in "To Autumn" as there is in the earlier poems, and the poem attempts to discuss the poetic process without a progression of the temporal scene, an idea that Keats termed as "stationing"