Original sentence: He played for Manchester United, Preston North End, Real Madrid, Milan, LA Galaxy, Paris Saint-Germain, and the England national team for which he holds the appearance record for an outfield player.He was the first British footballer to play 100 Champions League games.Renowned for his range of passing, crossing abililty and bending free-kicks, he has twice been runner-up for FIFA World Player of the Year and in 2004 he was named in the FIFA 100 list of the world's greatest living players.With United, he won the Premier League title six times, the FA Cup twice, and the UEFA Champions League in 1999
Edited sentence: Beckham was the first British footballer to play 100 Champions League games.He has played for Manchester United, Preston North End, Real Madrid, Milan, LA Galaxy, Paris Saint-Germain, and the England national team for which he holds the appearance record for an outfield player.Renowned for his range of accurate passing, pinpoint crossing abililty and bending free-kicks, he has twice been runner-up for FIFA World Player of the Year and in 2004 he was named in the FIFA 100 list of the world's greatest living players.With United, Beckham won the Premier League title six times, the FA Cup twice, and the UEFA Champions League in 1999