Original sentence: The "Rat" experience, called the Ratline, is intended to instill pride, discipline, brotherhood, and a sense of honor in the students.The freshman student is known as a "rat", and walks a prescribed line in barracks while in an exaggerated form of attention known as straining
Edited sentence: The "Rat" experience, called the Ratline, is a life changing system that instills great pride, discipline, brotherhood, and a sense of honor.The freshman student is known as a rat, and walks a prescribed line in barracks while in an exaggerated form of attention known as straining