Original sentence: , now a division of Tyco International's Electronics unit.As the world's largest shipper, FedEx was a key opportunity, and major market players presented their existing product offerings over some time.In the mid 1990s Federal Express invited proposals for a data and voice network to the vehicular level.OpenSky is a wireless communication system, invented in Massachusetts by a team led by Dr.OpenSky received the direct attention of Tyco when they acquired it along with Amp Corporation.OpenSky technology applies voice-over-IP transport to radio communications applications in a unique architecture.The OpenSky system has since been sold into a number of important footprints, including the entire State of Pennsylvania.They delivered a standards-based infrastructure that attempted to leverage open systems to the largest degree possible, while adapting specific input/output to meet the customer's exact requirements
Edited sentence: , now a division of Tyco_International's Electronics unit.As the world's largest shipper, FedEx was key opportunity, and major market players presented their existing product offerings over some time.In the mid 1990's Federal Express invited proposals for a data and voice network to the vehicular level.It was a brilliant win, and has attained legendary status among radio systems designers around the world.OpenSky received the direct attention of Tyco when they acquired it along with Amp  Corporation.OpenSky technology applies voice-over-IP transport to radio communications applications in a unique architecture that serves as a testament to the power of open systems.OpenSky: Wireless Communications System.The OpenSky system has been sold into a number of important footprints, including the entire State of Pennsylvania.The OpenSky wireless system was invented in Massachusetts by a team led by Dr.They delivered a sharp notice to the market base by proposing, and delivering a standards-based infrastructure that leveraged open systems to the largest degree possible, while adapting specific input/output to meet the customer's exact requirements