Original sentence: Knives exclaims that it's her dad, and realizes that Scott breaking her heart caused his brain to break in half, only to "be replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge.Roxie and Mr.Scott discovers that Roxie has been staying with Ramona and runs off, but then returns to fight both Roxie and Mr
Edited sentence: After collapsing in the middle of a busy road he becomes aware of a person standing over him.Chau into Ramona's home where Roxie and Mr.He destroys the double and then returns to Ramona.His head begins to glow and he stumbles off.Knives exclaims that it's her dad and realizes that because she was dating a white boy his brain  broke in half, only to "be replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge.On arriving at her house he is confronted by Mr.On looking up we see that the person is a doppelganger of Scott but with a sinister sneer on his face.Scott discovers that Roxie has been staying with Ramona.Scott lures Mr.Scott recognises the double and is spurred by the sight of him