Original sentence: CraveOnline has built its audience and brand around affinity content that appeals to men without having to rely on babe or hot girl content like most other sites.It owns 12 web sites and has partnered with many more, producing content for each site that goes deep into the area of interest.com covers an array of topics, with the ability for users to go even deeper around any specific point of interest by clicking out to an owned or partner site that has subject matter expertise.com, the anchor site, editorializes the Most Craved topics from across this network, providing additional and deeper coverage against the most popular topics
Edited sentence: CraveOnline has built its audience and brand around great affinity content that appeals to men without having to rely on babe or hot girl content like most other sites.It owns 12 web sites and has partnered with many many more, producing content for each site that goes deep into the area of interest.com covers a vast array of topics, with the ability for users to go even deeper around any specific point of interest by clicking out to an owned or partner site that has subject matter expertise.com, the anchor site, editorializes the Most Craved topics from across this broad network, providing additional and deeper coverage against the most popular topics