Original sentence: Margaret Louise Coit was born May 30, 1919 in Norwich, Connecticut, to Archa Willoughby Coit, a stockbroker, and Grace Coit (nee Trow), the principal of a private day school
Edited sentence: Margaret Louise Coit was born May 30, 1919 in Norwich, Connecticut, to Archa Willoughby Coit, a stockbroker, and Grace Coit (née Trow), the principal of a private day school