Original sentence: After losing in the Lok Sabha elections in April 2000, he was chosen to join the Rajya Sabha.He currently holds the title of Minister of State for Civil Aviation.He was finally inducted into the Union Cabinet in May 2004 as Minister of State for Civil Aviation with Independent Charge.He was then elected three times consecutively to the 10th, 11th, and 12th Lok Sabhas.Patel graduated in commerce prior to joining the family business.Patel inherited his interest in politics from his father, who was a leader of the Congress in Maharashtra, and is a member of the Young Presidents' Organization.Patel was elected as a member of the Lok Sabha in 1991 at the age of 34.Praful Patel (born February 17, 1957, Kolkata) is a member of the Rajya Sabha of India
Edited sentence: ,and runs the biggest education business in the area.After losing in the LokSabha elections,he was chosen in April 2000,  Praful Patel to the Rajya Sabha.He currently holds the title of Minister of State for [[civil aviation|Civil Aviation.He is currently a partner in the "Ceejay Group".He was elected three times consecutively to the 10th, 11th, and 12th Lok Sabhas.Patel graduated in Commerce prior to joining the family business with diverse interests in bidis, tobacco, pharmaceuticals, finance, real estate, and packaging.Patel inherited his passion for politics  from his father, who was a  leader of the Congress in Maharashtra.Patel was elected as a member of the Lok Sabha at the  age of 34 years in 1991.Patel was inducted into the Union Cabinet in May 2004 as Minister of State for Civil Aviation with Independent Charge.Praful Patel (born February 17, 1957, Kolkata) is an Indian Member of Parliament.The Patel family runs the "Gondia Education Society" in the Gondia district of Maharashtra.The Society imparts education to 80,000 students in all disciplines ranging from Arts, Commerce, Engineering, Law, Pharmacy, Information Technology, Computer Sciences, etc.Widely travelled, Patel is an active member of Young Presidents Organisation (YPO)