Original sentence: A favorite among critics of the LDS faith, Brody's book aroused the antipathy of LDS leaders and eventually resulted in Brodie's excommunication.The late Fawn Brodie, author of No Man Knows My History: The Life of Joseph Smith.has also been grouped with "traditional school" anti-Mormons
Edited sentence: A favorite among critics of the LDS faith, the book aroused the antipathy of LDS leaders and eventually resulted in Brodie's excommunication.Another prominent anti-Mormon critic in the traditional school, the late Fawn Brodie, authored No Man Knows My History: The Life of Joseph Smith