Original sentence: (It should be noted that Grey uses common slang profanities with regularity.Concert attendees/fans of the band range in age, but primarily fall into a 25-45 year old age group.It is not uncommon to see 50--70 year olds, and--depending upon the venue--children.Others still reflect on his sense of loss at seeing the rural areas of Florida known to him and generations of his family now being suburbanized and affected by development.While the style of their music was a shared evolutionary effort by Grey and Hance, Grey is the songwriter/lyricist for all of the band's songs
Edited sentence: Grey usually enjoys a banter with the audience, often delving further into the meanings of his songs delivered with a pronounced southern "twang.Others still reflect on his sense of loss at seeing the rural areas of Florida known to him and generations of his family but now being suburbanized and affected by development.While the style of their music was a shared evolutionary effort by Grey and Hance, Grey is the songwriter/lyricist for all of the band's songs, as well as the composer