Original sentence: Freed from the constraints of being published as part of the Primary School Bulletin series, Westra as the copyright holder had the book republished by the Caxton Press of Christchurch.In both editions, the family used aliases and were said to live near Taihape, but in truth lived near Ruatoria.It was withdrawn after concerns voiced by the Māori Women's Welfare League that it [1] would have a 'detrimental effect' on Māori people, and [2] for any Māori, the living conditions were atypical.Notably, however, the photograph of the house present in the Government Printer edition was omitted.This second edition uses more colloquial language and shows taboo subjects such as children pretending to smoke
Edited sentence: It was withdrawn after concerns voiced by the Māori Women's Welfare League that it [1] would have a 'detrimental effect' on Māori people, and [2] for any Māori, the living conditions displayed within the book were atypical.Westra as the copyright holder later had the book republished by the Caxton Press of Christchurch