Original sentence: Bill Bradley - Basketball player at Princeton University, 1964 Olympic gold medal team, and the NBA's New York Knicks.Charles Thomas McMillen - Basketball player at the University of Maryland and the NBA's Buffalo Braves, New York Knicks, Atlanta Hawks, and Washington Bullets.Jack Kemp - NFL quarterback for the Buffalo Bills from 1962 to 1969
Edited sentence: Bill Bradley - Hall of Fame small forward at Princeton University, 1964 Olympic gold medal team, and the NBA's New York Knicks.Dave Bing – Hall of Fame shooting guard at Syracuse University and three NBA teams, most notably the Detroit Pistons.Elected to complete the unexpired term of Kwame Kilpatrick as Mayor of Detroit in 2009.Jack Kemp - AFL quarterback for the Buffalo Bills from 1962 to 1969.One of only two players, along with Manu Ginóbili, to have won an Olympic gold medal, a first-tier European club championship, and an NBA title.Tom McMillen - Basketball player at the University of Maryland and the NBA's Buffalo Braves, New York Knicks, Atlanta Hawks, and Washington Bullets