Original sentence: As a result, Rotherham town centre is smaller and less busy than the centre of many other towns its size.For a large town, Rotherham has a small catchement area, lying close to Sheffield, Doncaster and Barnsley.The centre has some high street names, and a large BBC Screen in All Saints Square.The large Meadowhall shopping centre lies a couple of miles from the town centre, just over the border in Sheffield, and many leisure facilities are found near it, in the Lower Don Valley.The square features a fountain and is surrounded by bars, restaurants and shops.The town centre is undergoing a transformation known as the Rotherham Renaissance with the aim of regeneration, including apartments, major high street stores, outdoor cafes and a new [theatre]].This project has already started, with apartments being built on the waterfront
Edited sentence: , and a new theatre.Also 40 mile up the road is the White Rose Centre.Lying close to Sheffield, Doncaster and Barnsley, and the nearby Meadowhall shopping centre (one of the largest in the country), shoppers are attracted away from the town centre.Rotherham town centre does have some high street names, however, and a large BBC Screen in the town square, All Saints Square, which features a fountain, bars, restaurants and shops.The Sheffield Arena is also adjacent to Valley Centertainment.The nearest cinema is at Meadowhall or the Valley Centertainment, a large entertainment complex across the road from Meadowhall.The town centre is undergoing a transformation known as the Rotherham Renaissance which will turn Rotherham into a large modern town, with apartments, major high street stores and outdoor cafes etc.This project has already started, with apartments being built on a key site on the waterfront