Original sentence: Such episodes include Victor, Margaret and Mrs Warboys stuck in a traffic jam; Victor and Margaret in bed suffering insomnia, and Victor being left alone in the house waiting to see if he has to take part in jury service
Edited sentence: Such episodes include: Victor, Margaret, and Mrs Warboys stuck in a traffic jam; Victor and Margaret in bed suffering insomnia; and Victor left alone in the house waiting to see if he has to take part in jury service