Original sentence: The Qu'Appelle Residential School, one of the notorious Indian Residential Schools, on the scenic south shore of Mission Lake, burned to the ground soon after its closing in the 1970s;
Edited sentence: The Qu'Appelle Residential School, one of the notorious Indian Residential Schools, on the south shore of Mission Lake, historically a strikingly beautiful site but burned to the ground soon after its closing in the 1970s;