Original sentence: Despite the loss, Kosar set a school record for a completions in a game with 25.Following its big win over Auburn, Miami defeated Florida, 32-20, in heartstopping fashion in Tampa.For all of Miami's remarkable success on the field, the program has been plagued in recent years by tragedy away from the gridiron.The Gators took advantage of the inexperienced Hurricanes en route to a 28-3 win
Edited sentence: Following their big win over Auburn, Miami defeated Florida, 32-20, in heartstopping fashion in Tampa.The Gators took advantage of the inexperienced Hurricanes en route to a convincing 28-3 win.The program has been plagued in recent years by tragedy away from the gridiron