Original sentence: Eton Fives is an uncommon sport, with only a few courts, most of them as part of the facilities of the Public Schools in the United Kingdom (as well as Wolverhampton Grammar School, St Olave's and St Saviour's Grammar School For Girls, the Royal Grammar School, High Wycombe, and Queen Elizabeth's School for Boys); consequently, it is primarily the preserve of their students and alumni.Including the famous fire attack and the procedure of de-skinning the losers in a vat of battery acid.Nigel Harniman (Citizen), World Champion 1996-1998, Olympic Champion 2008.Stuart Boundy (Olavian), Flangely Cup 1997-2003, Keeling Cup 2004, Chavtastic Cup 2006.There is partial evidence to suggest that Eton Fives is derived from the ancient South American war game Ae'Tarn Fiveys.This would explain the name and various brutal components of the sport
Edited sentence: Eton Fives is an uncommon sport, with only a few courts, most of them as part of the facilities of the Public Schools in the United Kingdom (as well as Wolverhampton Grammar School, St Olave's and St Saviour's Grammar School, the Royal Grammar School, High Wycombe, and Queen Elizabeth's School for Boys); consequently, it is primarily the preserve of their students and alumni