Original sentence: Many have highlighted some “plot holes” in the story, such as the likelihood of Lord Voldemort's infertility, the speed at which Polyjuice Potion is created, the unexplained non-operation of the Fidelius Charm, and Cedric Diggory's dramatic turn to becoming a Death Eater.These criticisms have led some of the fandom to reject the play as separate from the Potter canon
Edited sentence: Many have noticed significant plot holes to be found in the story, such as the likelihood of Lord Voldemort's infertility, the speed at which Polyjuice Potion is created, the unexplained non-operation of the Fidelius Charm, and Cedric Diggory's dramatic turn to becoming a Death Eater.These criticisms have led much of the fandom to reject the play as separate from the Potter canon