Original sentence: In 1922, Pellatt was presented with the Silver Fish.Lady Mary Pellatt (née Dodgson) (1858 - 1924) was the first Chief Commissioner of the Girl Guides of Canada.Pellatt also planned trips for the Guides to her country home, Lake Marie Farm, in King, Ontario.Pellatt died suddenly of heart failure on 1924-04-24.Pellatt was born in 1858 in Toronto, Canada.She resigned her position in 1921 due to ill health
Edited sentence: In 1922, Lady Pellatt was presented with the Silver Fish.Lady Pellatt also planned trips for the Guides to her country home, Lake Marie Farm, in King, Ontario.Lady Pellatt was born in 1858 in Toronto, Canada.Mary, Lady Pellatt (née Dodgson) (1858 - 1924) was the first Chief Commissioner of the Girl Guides of Canada.She died suddenly of heart failure on 1924-04-24.She resigned her position in 1921 in ill health