Original sentence: Alltogether the land occupies 30 acres.Descending the hill towards Chester, 1km away, Calday has playing fields, with 3 functional rugby pitches, a cricket stadium, and a artificial hockey field.Surrounded by suburban housing development, and forests of Thursaston and Caldy.The School is situated in a residential area of Wirral close to the Dee Estuary
Edited sentence: All togather the land occupies 30 acres.Descending the hill towards chester, 1km away, Calday has playing fields, with 3 functional rugby pitches, a cricket stadium, and a artifical hockey field.Sorrounded by suburban housing development, and forests of Thursaston and caldy, the school is picturesque.The School is situated in a pleasant residential area of Wirral close to the Dee Estuary