Original sentence: Easily the most prominent pathologist of Thailand, she gets regular media coverage with her allegations of abuse, and (by her own admission) her unorthodox appearance: punk-rock hair dyed purplish red, eccentric clothing & makeup, and platform shoes
Edited sentence: Easily the most prominent pathologist of Thailand, she gets regular media coverage with her allegations of abuse and her somewhat unorthodox appearance: red and orange hair, eccentric clothing and makeup, platform shoes.Thai Doctor Fashions a Life Working Among the Dead.The New York Times, January 16, 2005