Original sentence: He anf the German navy suffered a misfortune on the 16th of February, 1894.While Captain of the SMS Brandenburg taking a trial.trip with forced drought the main boiler-tube burst, the explosion causing the death of over forty men
Edited sentence: He and the German navy suffered a misfortune on the 16th of February, 1894.While Captain of the SMS Brandenburg taking a trial trip with forced drought the main boiler-tube burst, the explosion causing the death of over forty men