Original sentence: Dominionism is a trend in Protestant Christian evangelicalism and fundamentalism that encourages political participation in civic society by Christians explicitly in terms of their religious beliefs.It ranges from engagement in the political process to attempts to dominate or take over the political system.The term is primarily used by sritics, and seldom used as a self-description
Edited sentence: Dominionism is a trend in Protestant Christian evangelicalism and fundamentalism that encourages political participation in civic society, including the political process, explicitly in terms of their religious beliefs.The term is a convenient generalization, not usually a preferred term of self-description