Original sentence: Krabs and Squidward attempts to ask "her" out.Krabs and Squidward become embarrassed.Many citizens think Patrick is pretty and Mr.Patrick becomes convinced that he is in danger, so SpongeBob disguises him as a girl, naming her "Patricia".Patrick finds out that "the scary guy" was just trying to sell him a timeshare.The person that Patrick is afraid of arrives at the Krusty Krab.When SpongeBob says Patrick's name out loud, both Mr
Edited sentence: A strange man tells Patrick to "Get out of town.But unknown to Patrick, the man's saying was not a threat, but rather the first part of an attempt to get to get him to go on a vacation to a resort.Krabs and Squidward are among them.Krabs and Squidward attempt to ask "her" out.Krabs and Squidward, upon learning this, become disappointed and embarrassed.Many men through out the city think the disguised Patrick is pretty, and Mr.Patrick interprets this as a threat, so he runs away.Patrick is annoyed by this, so he reveals his true form.So, SpongeBob disguises him as a girl named "Patricia".Then, SpongeBob and Patrick learn the "scary guy" that the starfish met earlier was just trying to advertise the resort to him.When Patrick reports this encounter to SpongeBob, his friend believes the man has been paid to assassinate Patrick, furthering the starfish's fears