Original sentence: After all that, he left the orchestra for good, and toured and recorded in England in 1974.Before the Berlin Concert in 1965 or in the Copenhagen Concert that took place on the same year, he returned to Duke's orchestra for a final hurrah
Edited sentence: Cootie, who was never good company due to health problems, asked what was wrong with him in a rude kind of way.Duke Ellington had said that he was in the middle of rehabilitation from drugs.He asked Duke to take him home and he left the band.He still came in as a guest of the orchestra from time to time and then after a while, he toured and recorded in England in 1974.He was crossing his legs and to make matters even worse, he had no idea it was one of the rudest gestures a man could ever do according to Arab culture.In fact, during a concert, he just didn't feel like playing.One word led to another and then Cootie slapped him and told him to stop being a pansy and act more like a man.The audience started to boo and hiss at the band.The next day, Cootie seemed to have forgotten about the incident, but Ray didn't.This shocked Ray due to the fact that he was disrespected to such a degree by his idol and, secondly, he was thinking that he should of stood up for himself instead of being a pansy.To Ray, it just broke him down; to have people boo him when he was so used to the audience cheering for him.While the orchestra was touring the Middle East, Nance was trying to get enough energy to play on stage