Original sentence: Accordingly, numerous names that were submitted were celebrities and politicians.Mystery has surrounded exactly who submitted their name to the moon.NASA has not released a complete list of names that were placed on the microchip.Phone calls have been placed to NASA requesting they release all of the names  placed of the Space Ship Microschip, so the public can give their input 1 Million Names and Counting.The deadline for this opportunity was July 31, 2008
Edited sentence: " The Army has set up a Web site for the public to question Army astronaut Colonel Timothy L.Army, who is offering people a chance to "find out what it's like to be an astronaut.Kopra and others about their space experiences.Kopra is the Expedition 20 flight engineer on the International Space Station.One of the names sent on the chip is Lord Venkateswara, the presiding deity of the 2,000-year-old hill shrine at Tirumala.The deadline for this opportunity was 31 July 2008.The prospect of space publicity has also attracted the interest of the U