Original sentence: Additionally within the past few years the Council of Europe has been applying increasing pressure on the UK government to recognise the Cornish for protection under the Council's Framework Convention for the Protection of National Minorities.However Cornwall is one of the poorest counties in England and it has been granted Objective One status by the EU.Since the decline of tin mining, farming and fishing, the area's economy has become increasingly dependent on tourism — some of Britain's most spectacular coastal scenery can be found here
Edited sentence: Additionally within the past few years the Council of Europe has been applying increasing pressure on the UK government to recognise the Cornish for protection under the councils Framework Convention for the Protection of National Minorities.However, behind the facade lies an economically depressed and neglected region.Since the decline of tin mining, farming and fishing, the area's economy has become increasingly dependent on tourism — some of the world's most spectacular coastal scenery can be found here.This  has been recognised by the EU and Cornwall has been granted Objective One status