Original sentence: Berne Union's marching band (BUGRMB) competes in class A in OMEA and AA and AAA in MSBA
Edited sentence: Actually, the band sucks really bad.Berne Union Band should be renamed the Chuck Norris Band.Berne Union is NOT most famous for their marching band.Berne Union is most famous for their marching band BUGRMB.It's really the football team that is the greatest.The band needs to get over themselves and lose their egos.They are most famous for the big Elm Tree across the street.They compete in class A in OMEA and AA and AAA in MSBA.They win best music and don't even bring their instruments.They're the only band that can win a competition without ever actually performing in it