Original sentence: On May 1, 2007 during a segment of The View, Rosie, prompted by Ricki Lake explained that some members of the armed forces joined because they were fleeing poverty, adding that there are a high number of convicted felons who currently serve in the US military.On May 17, 2007, Rosie rhetorically asked, "655,000 Iraqi civilians dead
Edited sentence: On May 17th, 2007, during a segment of The View, Rosie equated American troops to terrorists.On May 1st, 2007 during a segment of The View, Rosie, prompted by Ricki Lake explained that some members of the armed forces joined because they were fleeing poverty, adding that there are a high number of convicted felons who currently serve in the US military.She repeatedly and rhetorically asked, "655,000 Iraqi civilians dead