Original sentence: He succeeded, on January 25, 2004, Nino Burjanadze, who acted as a president after President Eduard Shevardnadze stepped down in Georgia's 2003 "Rose Revolution," led by Saakashvili and his major political allies, Burjanadze and Zurab Zhvania.In 2004 a new Media Law sparked controversy, with fourteen Georgian civil Society leaders and Georgian experts writing an open letter to the President, published in several national newspapers, claiming "Intolerance towards people with different opinions is being planted in Georgian politics and in other spheres of social life"
Edited sentence: He succeeded, on January 25, 2004, Nino Burjanadze, who acted as a president after President Eduard Shevardnadze stepped down in Georgia's 2003 peaceful Rose Revolution, led by Saakashvili and his major political allies, Burjanadze and Zurab Zhvania.However the government's human rights record has shown a dramatic improvement compared to that of the Shevardnadze era.In 2004 a new Media Law sparked controversy, with fourteen Georgian civil society leaders and Georgian experts writing an open letter to the President, published in several national newspapers, claiming "Intolerance towards people with different opinions is being planted in Georgian politics and in other spheres of social life".In addition the U.In spite of these criticisms many European and U.S State Department noted that during 2005 'the government amended several laws and increased the amount of investigations and prosecutions reducing the amount of abuse and ill-treatment in pre-trial detention facilities'.S commentators have lauded the new government for taking bold measures in the fight against corruption.The status of religious freedom also improved due to increased investigation and prosecution of those harassing followers of non-traditional faiths