Original sentence: He currently works on multiple business endeavors including activities with the U.In his position as the Director of Naval intelligence, Sheafer commanded an organization of 2,500 people, with a budget of more than $2 billion.Today, Admiral Sheafer is recognized as an accomplished advisor and is well known at senior levels in the Defense and Intelligence Communities
Edited sentence: As the Director of Naval intelligence, Sheafer commanded an organization of 2,500 people, with a budget of more than $2 billion.Currently he is working on multiple business endeavors including activities with the U.Today, Admiral Sheafer is recognized as an accomplished adviser and is well known at senior levels in the Defense and Intelligence Communities