Original sentence: Ali Quli Khan Shaibani who had been sent ahead with 10,000-strong cavalry force chanced upon Hemu's artillery which was being transported under a weak guard.Hemu (; also known as Hemu Vikramaditya and Hemchandra Vikramaditya) (died 5 November 1556) was a Hindu general and Chief Minister of Adil Shah Suri of the Suri Dynasty during a period in Indian history when the Mughals and Afghans were vying for power across North India.What is generally accepted is that he was born in a Hindu family of limited means, and that he spent his childhood in the town of Rewari, in the Mewat region, south-west of Delhi
Edited sentence: Ali Quli Khan Shaibani with Sayyed Mahmud Khan Barha who had recently joined Bairam Khan's army were sent ahead with 10,000-strong cavalry force chanced upon Hemu's artillery which was being transported under a weak guard.Earlier he was general and Chief Minister of Adil Shah Suri of the Suri Dynasty during a period in Indian history when the Mughals and Afghans were vying for power across North India.Hemu (; also known as Hemu Vikramaditya and Hem Chandra Vikramaditya) (died 5 November 1556) was a last Hindu king of Delhi in 1556.What is generally accepted is that he was born in a Hindu Rauniyar Kshatriya family who belongs to Gupta Dynasty.of limited means, and that he spent his childhood in the town of Rewari, in the Mewat region, south-west of Delhi