Original sentence: The Boyztown, Sunni Plaza and Jomtien Complex areas are famous for their many gay nightclubs, cabarets and go-go clubs.While there is much nightlife that is not directly related to prostitution, the central Pattaya Beach Area is known as a destination for sex tourism in Thailand, (alongside several districts in Bangkok and Phuket)
Edited sentence: Boyztown, Sunni Plaza, and Jomtien Complex areas are famous for their many gay nightclubs, cabarets and go-go clubs.While there is much nightlife that is not directly related to the sex trade, the central Pattaya Beach Area is known as a destination for a myriad of beer bars and go-go bars with female hostesses