Original sentence: Magoo grossed $21.4 million domestically, against a $30 million budget.The film received mostly negative reviews with a 4% on Rotten Tomatoes
Edited sentence: Magoo was a failure at the box office, grossing only $21.4 million domestically, unable to recoup its $30 million budget.The film gained overwhelmingly negative reviews with a 4% on Rotten Tomatoes