Original sentence: Blood and Iron, the first book in the fantasy series entitled The Promethean Age, debuted June 27th 2006.Campbell Award for Best New Writer, and winner of the 2008 Hugo Award for Best Short Story for "Tideline.Elizabeth Bear (Sarah Bear Elizabeth Wishnevsky) (born 22 September, 1971 in Hartford, Connecticut) is an American author, primarily of speculative fiction, winner of the 2005 John W.Her curriculum vitae includes working as a "media industry professional," a stablehand, a fluff-page reporter, a maintainer of Microbiology procedure manuals for a 1,000-bed inner-city hospital, a typesetter and layout editor, a traffic manager for an import-export business, Emmanuel Labour, and "the girl who makes the donuts at The Whole Donut at three A.Her first novel Hammered was published in January 2005 and followed by Scardown in July and Worldwired in November of the same year.Until recently, she lived in Las Vegas, Nevada, which served as the setting for the short stories One-Eyed Jack and the Suicide King, Follow Me Light, and This Tragic Glass, but she returned to Connecticut in January 2006
Edited sentence: A native of Hartford, Connecticut, her curriculum vitae includes working as a "media industry professional," a stablehand, a fluff-page reporter, a maintainer of Microbiology procedure manuals for a 1,000-bed inner-city hospital, a typesetter and layout editor, a traffic manager for an import-export business, Emmanuel Labour, and "the girl who makes the donuts at The Whole Donut at three A.Blood and Iron, the first book in the fantasy series entitled "The Promethean Age", debuted June 27th 2006.Campbell Award for Best New Writer and the 2008 Hugo Award for Best Short Story for "Tideline.Her first novel Hammered was published in January 2005 and was followed by Scardown in July and Worldwired in November of the same year.Sarah Bear Elizabeth Wishnevsky (born September 22, 197]) is an American author.Until recently, she lived in Las Vegas, Nevada which served as the setting for the short stories One-Eyed Jack and the Suicide King, Follow Me Light, and This Tragic Glass, but she returned to Connecticut in January 2006.Writing under the name Elizabeth Bear, she works primarily in the genre speculative fiction, and was a winner of the 2005 John W