Original sentence: Players and bands who use or endorse EMG pickups include: Alexi Laiho, Atreyu, Shadows Fall, Cannibal Corpse, Dethklok, Opeth, Dimmu Borgir, Shinedown, Lacuna Coil, Black Stone Cherry, Steve Lukather, Reb Beach, Prince, Metallica, Slayer, Machine Head, Les Claypool, Zakk Wylde, Judas Priest, Deftones, Rammstein, Killswitch Engage, Trivium, Vince Gill, Slipknot, Nevermore, Nickelback, Tom Morello, David Gilmour, Jean-Claude Demetri, Roche , Eye For An Eye and many others
Edited sentence: Players and bands who use or endorse EMG pickups include: Alexi Laiho, Atreyu, Shadows Fall, Cannibal Corpse, Dethklok, Opeth, Dimmu Borgir, Shinedown, Lacuna Coil, Parkway Drive, Black Stone Cherry, Steve Lukather, Reb Beach, Prince, Metallica, Slayer, Machine Head, Les Claypool, Zakk Wylde, Judas Priest, Deftones, Rammstein, Killswitch Engage, Trivium, Vince Gill, Slipknot, Nevermore, Nickelback, Tom Morello, David Gilmour, Jean-Claude Demetri, Roche , Eye For An Eye and many others