Original sentence: It is constructed of a blend of polyester and spandex, and covers the entire body excluding hands, feet, and face (to preserve Sartorial Hijab modesty).Similar swimsuits, such as the burkini, are made by other manufacturers.The garment is lightweight and quick drying, touts an anti-bacterial coating and also has a 50+ sun protection factor.The veilkini brand is manufactured by Alsharifa brands in the United States and is sold wholesale and retail online worldwide.The veilkini is a brand of swimsuits marketed for Islamic women, similar in style to the burkini (also spelled burqini).Veilkini by Alsharifa in the news, Chicago Crescent, page 13
Edited sentence: It is constructed of a blend of polyester and spandex, and covers the entire body excluding hands, feet, and face (which preserves Islamic modesty see subsection Sartorial Hijab ).The authentic veilkini is manufactured by Alsharifa brands in the United States and is sold wholesale and retail online worldwide; although there are generic knockoffs available.The garment is lightweight and quick drying, touts an anti bacterial coating and also has a 50+ SPF protection.The veilkini is an Islamic swimsuit similar in style to the Burkini (also spelled burqini).This is incorrect as the Burqin is a registered trademark, and is a brand name.Those who are not familiar with the verbiage of Islamic swimwear often confuse all Islamic swim garments as a burin.Veilkini by Alsharifa in the news, Chicago Crescent page 13