Original sentence: After a further substitute appearance he made his first start for the Blades on in mid April against Preston North End at Deepdale, and scoring his first goal for the club.His second goal for the Blades came in the following match against Bristol City in the 86th minute at Bramall Lane
Edited sentence: After a further substitute appearance he made his first start for the Blades on in mid April against Preston North End at Deepdale, and scoring his first goal for the club after tearing apart the defence.His second goal for the Blades came in the following match against Bristol City in the 86th minute after he tears them apart again.at Bramall Lane