Original sentence: He also supported the foundation of the first Persian newspaper, vaghaye al etefaghiyeh, and lapsed the huge salaries that members of the royal family were receiving from the national treasury, which caused the royals, led by the Shah's mother, to invent allegations against him.His father, Karbalaee Ghorban (), was a cook for Mirza Abu'l-Qasim Farahani Qá'im Maqam, a previous prime minister, which made Mirza Taghi Khan learn many skills of the court
Edited sentence: Amir Kabir established strict customs procedures to reduce importation from Britain and made a strong and stable economy.Amir Kabir implemented patent regulation for the first time in Iran to support inventors and industries and supplied them with loans and facilities.He also supported the foundation of the first Persian newspaper, vaghaye al etefaghiyeh, He established and planned for almost all of industries in Iran including steel factory, ship making, textile, weaponry, sugar, glass, Samovar, tea, Ceramic, etc that reduced importation specially from Russia.He enforced Quarantine and mandatory vaccination to prevent frequent outbreaks.He fixed huge deficits by lapsing the huge salaries that members of the royal family were receiving from the national treasury, which caused the royals, led by the Shah's mother and Britain's spy Mirza Agha Khan Noori, to invent allegations against him.He made a very sophisticated intelligence service and fought against bribery, fraud and foreign interference.He made improvements in military, in discipline, salaries and establishing Navy, and extended Persian influence in Northern and Eastern borders and captured Herat without using force by diplomacy.He strengthened the law, discipline and order and even fixed the Shah's salary.His father, Karbalaee Ghorban (), was a cook for Mirza Abu'l-Qasim Farahani Qá'im Maqam, a previous prime minister, this situation helped Mirza Taghi Khan learn many skills of the court.Mirza Agha khan Noori became Prime minister and undid most of his reforms