Original sentence: After high school, Portman enrolled at Harvard University where she graduated with a bachelor's degree in Psychology on June 5 2003.Portman held a 4.0 GPA throughout high school
Edited sentence: "  These are likely beliefs from her indoctrination in Psychology, which holds as its primary tenents that there is no human soul.After high school, Portman enrolled at Harvard University where she graduated with a bachelor's degree in Psychology on June 5 2003, which is move evidence that Portman can't think clearly.It is well known that Moby has genital herpes and Portman likely contracted the disease from him.Portman held a 4.0 GPA throughout high school, which is proof that GPA is not a direct indicator of intelligence