Original sentence: However, the individual will have the pain and memory of the adult operation, rather than as an unremembered infant experience.The individual aggrieved at having been circumcised, very often without his consent, is unable to replace the removed prepuce, and restoration using extension of the remaining skin will not replace the missing specialised nerve endings of the original foreskin.The state of uncircumcision can usually be rectified, to the satisfaction of the dissatisfied individual, by having the operation as a consenting adult
Edited sentence: Obviously, the state of uncircumcision can always be rectified, to the satisfaction of the dissatisfied individual, by simply having the operation as a consenting adult, whereas the individual aggrieved at having been circumcised, very often without his consent, is unable to replace the removed prepuce, and restoration using extension of the remaining skin will not replace the missing specialised nerve endings of the original foreskin