Original sentence: It is believed to be the burial place of the biblical matriarch Rachel, the wife of Jacob, who died here giving birth to Benjamin.It is considered the third holiest site in Judaism after the Temple Mount and the Cave of the Machpelah.Jewish tradition teaches that Rachel weeps for her children and that when the Jews were taken into exile, she wept as they passed by her grave on the way to Babylonia.Rachel's Tomb is a holy site of high significance to Judaism and is located in the central West Bank (biblical Judea) at the northern entrance to Bethlehem along what was once the biblical Bethlehem-Ephrath road
Edited sentence: It is the burial place of Rachel, the wife of Jacob, who died here giving birth to Benjamin and is considered the third holiest site in Judaism after the Temple Mount and the Cave of the Machpelah.Jewish tradition teaches that Rachel weeps for her children and that when the Jews were taken into exile, she wept as they past by her grave on the way to Babylonia.Rachel's Tomb is located in Judea just outside of the Jerusalem neighborhood of Gilo on the road to Bethlehem along the Biblical Bethlehem-Efrat Road.Some sources claim that rachel tomb is actually in Northern Jerusalem in a holi site called by local arabs "the place of the sons of Israel"  which is near present day A-Ram which in biblical time was called Ram-A.The place is mentioned in the Bible as a place where Rachel's sons (who were sons of her Husband jacob also called Yisrael (israel) in the Bible) were burried