Original sentence: Rahim Shah attracted the attention of an Indian audience with his song "Pehli Tu Kabhi Kabhi Gham tha".This was later copied without his permission by Indian singer Altaf Raja
Edited sentence: Rahim Shah attracted the attention of an Indian audience with his song "Pehli Tu Kabhi Kabhi Gham tha", a tune which was sung in Pashto by reknowned Pashto singer Haroon Bacha.This was later re-copied by Indian singer Altaf Raja