Original sentence: Lieutenant James Cook failed to notice the entrance to the Richmond Riveron the 15th of May, 1770, but noted the presence of about 20 Bundjalung Nation Aboriginal people on what is now Seven Mile Beach, just to the south of Broken Head
Edited sentence: Lieutenant James Cook failed to notice the entrance to the Richmond River on the 15th of May, 1770, but noted the presence of about 20 Bundjalung Nation Aboriginal people on what is now Seven Mile Beach, just to the south of Broken Head