Original sentence: Camenker formed the Parents' Right Coalition on May 8, 1995.Camenker was accused by state Board of Education chairman, Martin Kaplan, of having ties with Christian right organizations.Camenker's vocal opposition to "the homosexual agenda" began in 1992, when his neighbor showed him a teaching guide that contained what he characterized as "disgusting descriptions of gay sex".That same year, Camenker, heading the Massachusetts Interfaith Coalition, sponsored a bill in Massachusetts requiring school officials to notify parents about sex-education courses.The pamphlet listed graphic tips on subjects including safe sex for lesbians
Edited sentence: Camenker helped form the Parents' Right Coalition on May 8, 1995.Camenker was outrageously accused by state Board of Education chairman, Martin Kaplan, of having ties with Christian right organizations.Camenker's concerns to the homosexual agenda targeting children in the schools began in 1992, when his neighbor showed him a teaching guide that contained what he characterized as "disgusting descriptions of gay sex".That same year, Camenker, heading the Massachusetts Interfaith Coalition, wrote a bill in Massachusetts requiring school officials to notify parents about sex-education courses.The pamphlet listed graphic tips on subjects including "safe sex" for lesbians