Original sentence: The wandering albatross has the longest wingspan of any living bird, typically ranging from , with a mean span of  in the Bird Island, South Georgia colony and an average of exactly  in 123 birds measured off the coast of Malabar, New South Wales
Edited sentence: The wandering albatross is one of the most beautiful and elegant species of bird, as well as having the longest wingspan of any living bird, typically ranging from , with a mean span of  in the Bird Island, South Georgia colony and an average of exactly  in 123 birds measured off the coast of Malabar, New South Wales