Original sentence: A magazine App for iOS devices is available in Apple's App Store.It is published once every term before each major school holiday plus a "back to school" issue in the autumn, and contains competitions, games and listings of local events.It's published as 61 separate magazines in the UK and Ireland, with a combined distribution of 2.7 million copies per issue.Primary Times is a free family magazine which is distributed to schools in the United Kingdom and Ireland.The magazine was started in 1989 and aims to inform parents and carers of primary school age children about current forthcoming events, courses and attractions, and community activities
Edited sentence: A magazine App is available in the App store.It also offers ample opportunity to participate in the magazine by adding to its contents and or joining in the events, fundraising and competitions.It has been commended not only by the BBC, the Daily Mail, The Scotsman and the Irish Times but also by Directors of Education across the country for its community work.It is published once every term before each major school holiday plus a 'back to school' issue in the autumn, and contains competitions, games and listings of events in your local area.Primary Times is a free family magazine which is distributed to schools across the UK and Ireland.Primary Times publishes 61 separate magazines across the UK and Ireland with a combined distribution of 2.7 million copies per issue.The magazine was started in 1989 and aims to inform parents and carers of primary school age children about current forthcoming events, courses and attractions and days out, encouraging community involvement at all times