Original sentence: Abigail believed strongly and shared in Kennedy's political views.The campaign soon came to an end when Kennedy was assassinated in Los Angeles in early June.The defeat of Bradley by Sam Yorty in late May was due to a racial smear campaign,{fact|date=August 2007}} and it left Abigail feeling both bitter and disillusioned
Edited sentence: Abigail believed strongly and shared in Kennedy's political views, so she naturally supported him.Sadly, the dream soon came to an end when Kennedy was assassinated in Los Angeles in early June.The defeat of Bradley by Sam Yorty in late May was due to a racial smear campaign, and it left Abigail feeling both bitter and disillusioned