Original sentence: "Natural Vision Improvement" markets itself as a lifestyle method of improving eyesight by holistic means."Natural vision teachers" often claim that the "correct vision habits" must be "relearned", although Bates spoke of learning to control thoughts which relate to seeing.It uses aspects of the Bates method "merged" with modern theories of brain function, character, and responsibility for one’s self and state of being.Many "self-help" books and "programs" exist claiming to improve eyesight "naturally" by various means, most having some basis in the Bates method.Nutrition is also often mentioned as a factor in eyesight
Edited sentence: "Natural Vision Improvement" markets itself as a lifestyle method of improving eyesight by holistic means and scientific facts.Like Myopia is not hereditary It uses aspects of the Bates method "merged" with modern theories of brain function, character, and responsibility for one’s self and state of being.Many "self-help" books and "programs" exist claiming to improve eyesight "naturally" by various means, most having some basis or bases in the Bates method.Nutrition is also mentioned in modern Bates method as a factor in visionhabits.Teachers educating Modern Bates method teachers" claim that the "correct vision habits" must be "relearned", although Bates spoke of learning to control thoughts which relate to seeing.The reason the company could not substantiate claims that the "See Clearly Method" improved people's vision so much that they would no longer need glasses or contact lenses