Original sentence: As there is no information about fin whales in areas outside of Iceland they still hold the status of being endangered.IUCN has recorded studies showing that more than 40,000 individuals are present in the North Atlantic Ocean around Greenland, Iceland, and Norway.Some North Atlantic states has argued that fin whales should not be listed as endangered anymore and criticize the list for being inaccurate
Edited sentence: As there is no information about fin whales in other areas outside of Iceland they still hold the status of being endangered.At the same time are species like Bowhead whale listed as not being endangared but only 10.000 animals are remaining in all areas.IUCN itself admits that there have been reliable studies showing that more then 40.000 animals are in the Northern Atlantics around Greenland, Iceland and Norway.Whaling nations in the North Atlantic argue that Fin whales should not be listed as endangered anymore and critize the list for being discrepant