Original sentence: Harlow was only on the screen from 1928 to 1937, before her death at the age of 26, but she became one of the biggest movie stars in the world, whose image in the public eye has endured
Edited sentence: Harlow was only on the screen from 1928 to 1937 before her death at the age of 26, but nonetheless became one of the biggest movie stars in the world, and her image in the public eye has endured