Original sentence: Each of these Indonesian ethnic groups has its own culture and tradition and may speak their own mother language.In some remote areas, tribal animism still survives.Indonesia also has considerably significant numbers of Christian Protestant and Catholics population, also Hindu that mostly inhabit the island of Bali, and Buddhist that mostly Chinese Indonesians.Indonesia is a vast tropical country of sprawling archipelago with extremely diverse culture and demographic make-up with over 300 ethnic groups, and speaking more than 700 living languages.Most Indonesians uphold harmony, so direct confrontation is best avoided.Nevertheless, there is some similarity and common traits that can be used to identify and used as guide to interact with Indonesians.Some ethnic groups such as Javanese have a complex set of etiquette and rather constrained to express their true feeling, while other such as Batak and Betawi people are more open and straightforward.Yet today in the relatively new atmosphere of democracy, expressing disagreement, performing demonstration, and openly arguing in debate are getting more acceptable in public
Edited sentence: Each of these Indonesian ethnic groups have their own culture, tradition and may speak their own mother language.In some remote area tribal animism still survive.Indonesia also have considerably significant numbers of Christian Protestant and Catholics population, also Hindu that mostly inhabit the island of Bali, and Buddhist that mostly Chinese Indonesians.It is important to understand that Indonesia is a vast tropical country of sprawling archipelago with extremely diverse culture and demographic make up with over 300 ethnic groups, and speaking more than 700 living languages.It is worthy to note that some ethnic groups such as Javanese have complex set of etiquette and rather constrained to express their true feeling, while other such as Batak and Betawi people are more open and straight forward.Most of Indonesian uphold harmony, so direct confrontation is best avoided.Nevertheless there is some similarity and common traits that can be used to identify and used as guide to interact with Indonesians.Yet today in the relatively new athmosphere of democracy, expressing disagreement, performing demonstration, and openly arguing in debate are getting more acceptable in public