Original sentence: Other stores in QueensPlaza include a Coles Supermarket (which replaces the old Coles that used to be in the former building, Australian Geographic , Giordano, French Connection, Saba, Espirit, G-Star Raw, and an Aesop Store.QueensPlaza is an upmarket shopping centre with three main shopping levels, plus an extra two levels exclusively for David Jones.Stage 1 of QueensPlaza was completed in 2005, with stage 2 being completed in late 2007 or early 2008.Stage 2 included an expansion of David Jones, giving the building more footage on the Adelaide Street side for more stores as well as allowing David Jones to double it's size, and with the old children's section being replaced by a brand new shoes section for women.The shopping centre also has many brands exclusive to Brisbane, as well as a number of high fashion stores including Louis Vuitton and Tiffany & Co
Edited sentence: David Jones was built on the site of its former building, and uses both the new building and its brand new site.It is Brisbane's most known  upmarket shopping centre with   Queensland's Flagship David Jones department store, the Shopping Center has many brands that are exclusive to Brisbane   as well as a number of high fashion stores including Louis Vuitton and Tiffany & Co.Other stores in QueensPlaza include a Coles Supermarket (which replaces the old Coles that used to be in the former building, Australian Geographic , Giordano, French Connection, Saba, Espirit and G-Star Raw.Queens Plaza is an up-market shopping centre with three main shopping levels, with two more levels exclusively for David Jones.Stage 1 of QueensPlaza was completed in 2005,.Stage 2 of QueensPlaza was finished Late 2007 or in Early 2008 it included the expansion of David Jones and an Aesop Store.Stage two developed more footage on Adelaide Street for more stores as well as allowing David Jones to double it's size.The old children's section has been replaced by a brand new shoes section for women