Original sentence: " He sank two more ships for  during the first patrol.From October 1940 Schultze took up duties as Second in Command of the 7th U-boat Flotilla, now based at St.He was awarded the Oak Leaves to his Knight's Cross on 12 June 1941.Nazaire, in occupied France.Schultze left for four more successful patrols
Edited sentence: " This message, addressed to the First Lord of the Admiralty Winston Churchill directly, made Schultze famous, both in Germany and Great Britain.From October 1940 Schultze took up duties as Second in Command of the 7th U-boat Flotilla, now based at St Nazaire, in occupied France.He sank two more ships for  during the first patrol.Now something of a media celebrity, Schultze left for four more successful patrols.Schultze was thus awarded the Oak Leaves to his Knight's Cross on 12 June 1941