Original sentence: Barbara Ruth Dickson OBE (born Dunfermline, Fife, 27 September 1944) is a Scottish singer whose hits include "I Know Him So Well" and "January February"
Edited sentence: Barbara Ruth Dickson OBE (born Dunfermline, Fife, 27 September 1948) is a Scottish singer whose hits include "I Know Him So Well" and "January February"