Original sentence: An 8-track recording of one of the band's songs, "Trampoline", was submitted to national Australian music station Triple J in 2004.The Grates are a three-piece band from Brisbane, Australia.The Touch, in Australia on 14 February 2005.The idea to form a band allegedly struck Patience Hodgson (vocals), John Patterson (guitar) and Alana Skyring (drums) while watching the music video program [[Rage (TV_program)|Rage]] in 2002.They put down an array of limited edition recordings before releasing what is referred to as their debut EP, The Ouch
Edited sentence: An 8-track recording of one of the band's quintessential ditties, "Trampoline", was submitted to national Australian music station Triple J in 2004.The Grates are a near-unclassifiable three-piece band from Brisbane, Australia.The Touch, in Australia on February 14 2005.The idea to form a band allegedly struck Patience Hodgson (singing), John Patterson (guitar) and Alana Skyring (drums) while watching Rage in 2002.The trio are lauded for their infectious, high-energy live shows.They put down an array of limited edition recordings before releasing what is reffered to as their debut EP, The Ouch