Original sentence: Foxrock has a number of primary schools.In recent years, with the enormous growth in the housing market in Ireland, the area has seen much building development, with the large plots of land around some houses being subdivided for development.It has two secondary schools - the fee-paying Loreto Convent, Foxrock for girls, and the non-fee-paying Clonkeen College for boys.Many secondary students living in Foxrock go to fee-paying schools elsewhere on the southside of Dublin.Most houses in the immediate vicinity of Foxrock Village are large detached homes on varying amounts of land, the average being around 5,000 m², although housing in the wider Foxrock area is more typical of other well-off parts of suburban Dublin
Edited sentence: In recent years, with the enormous growth in the housing market in Ireland, the area has seen much building development as many residents have begun building new houses and even apartment blocks on part of their land, then selling them on at a usually very substantial profit.Most houses are large detached homes on varying amounts of land, the average being around 5,000 m².Nevertheless, because the majority of Foxrock children attend private schools in Dublin 4, the suburb shares something of Dublin 4's reputation.Unlike the well-heeled Dublin 4 area, Foxrock has no fee-paying schools of its own