Original sentence: 100 lashes are given to apply to unmarried women who engage in homosexual acts.For homosexual men, lashes are made for the first offence.For lesbian women, stoning and thousands of lashes for the first offence.However, today Homosexuality is illegal in Sudan.In 2006, Abraham Mayom Athiaan a bishop in South Sudan led a split from the Episcopal Church of Sudan for what he regarded as a failure by the church mleadership to strongly condemn homosexuality.With the death penalty following the third offence
Edited sentence: 100 lashes are given to unmarried women who engage in homosexual acts.For homosexual men, lashes are given for the first offence, with the death penalty following the third offence.For lesbian women, stoning and thousands of lashes is the penalty for the first offence.However, today homosexual behaviour is illegal in Sudan.In 2006, Abraham Mayom Athiaan, a bishop in South Sudan, led a split from the Episcopal Church of Sudan for what he regarded as a failure by the church leadership to condemn homosexuality sufficiently strongly..