Original sentence: As of July 29, 2009, this video has over 122 million views on Youtube, roughly 1 million views less than "Evolution of Dance".The music video is notable for being the  2nd most watched and also the most discussed YouTube video of all time
Edited sentence: As of July 29, 2009, this video has over 122.5 million views on Youtube, roughly 1 million views less than "Evolution of Dance".The music video is notable for being the  2nd most watched YouTube video of all time, with over 122 million views as of August 2009 and also the most discussed music video