Original sentence: Since the first year, the group has continued to perform live around the region, including commencements, weddings, private parties, and even the NH State House.The original group decided to perform a new twist on classic Barbershop style music – something that could distinguish them from the other a cappella groups on campus at the time - and the a cappella group known as Not Too Sharp was born.University of New Hampshire students Jamie Saucier '03, Jason Reed '05 and Kevin Cleary '05 conceived the group during a trip with the UNH Chorus to perform background vocals at a Barry Manilow concert in Manchester, NH
Edited sentence: Since the first year, the group has continued to perform live around the region, including commencements, weddings, private parties, and even the New Hampshire State House.The original group decided to perform a new twist on classic barbershop music style music – something that could distinguish them from the other a cappella groups on campus at the time - and the a cappella group known as Not Too Sharp was born.University of New Hampshire students Jamie Saucier '03, Jason Reed '05 and Kevin Cleary '05 conceived the group during a trip with the UNH Chorus to perform background vocals at a Barry Manilow concert in Manchester, New Hampshire