Original sentence: Others also argue that their refusal to allow missionaries to discuss condoms in Africa has caused the AIDS epidemic there.Roman Catholic opposition to birth control has been criticized as adding to poverty and destitution and overpopulation
Edited sentence: Others also argue (without objective proof) that their refusal to allow missionaries to discuss condoms in Africa has caused the AIDS epidemic there.Roman Catholic opposition to birth control has been criticized (without objective proof) as adding to poverty and destitution and so-called overpopulation