Original sentence: Al-Jazeera was well-known for their graphic footage of civilian deaths, which American news media branded as overly sensationalistic.He also went on to tell Iraqi State TV that he had told "Americans about the determination of the Iraqi forces, the determination of the government, and the willingness to fight for their country", and that reports from Baghdad about civilian deaths had helped antiwar protesters undermine the Bush administration's strategy.The European coverage was critical of the invasion, putting a greater emphasis on coalition setbacks and losses and civilian deaths than the US media.to attack the heart of the Iraqi command structure and destroy it in a short time, and that this would minimize civilian deaths and damage to infrastructure
Edited sentence: Al-Jazeera was well-known for their graphic footage of civilian casualties, which American news media branded as overly sensationalistic.He also went on to tell Iraqi State TV that he had told "Americans about the determination of the Iraqi forces, the determination of the government, and the willingness to fight for their country", and that reports from Baghdad about civilian casualties had helped antiwar protesters undermine the Bush administration's strategy.The European coverage was critical of the invasion, putting a greater emphasis on coalition setbacks and losses and civilian casualties than the US media.to attack the heart of the Iraqi command structure and destroy it in a short time, and that this would minimize civilian casualties and damage to infrastructure