Original sentence: The game became the number one selling app in China early during the epidemic phase of the 2019–20 coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan, China; the company received so many inquiries that via its Twitter account it referred its users to the CDC website for information.The game itself got updated with more realistic situations following the CDC meeting as Vaughn got scientific tips regarding pathogens and transmission
Edited sentence: Ironically enough the game became the number one selling app in China early during the epidemic phase of the 2019–20 coronavirus outbreak in Wuhan, China; the company received so many inquiries that via its Twitter account it referred its users to the CDC website for information.The game itself got updated with more realistic situtations following the CDC meeting as Vaughn got scientific tips regarding pathogens and transmission