Original sentence: Chief Minister of Penang, Lim Guan Eng has ordered Ooi to retract his statements and apologise publicly but Ooi finally managed to do the former as an adherance to his superior's order but not the latter.In addition, he went on to continue criticising Razali and has again failed to apologise to the Muslim community or even JIM
Edited sentence: Chief Minister of Penang, Lim Guan Eng has ordered Ooi to retract his statements and apologise publicly.Furthermore, he continued on criticising Razali and has again failed to apologise to the Muslim community or even JIM.However, he did not offer any apology.Ooi finally withdrew his statements after denying previous calls by certain parties, as an adherance to his superior's order