Original sentence: Employers recruited by OCEDC using financial incentives include:.They received $2.4 million in high-wage job creation tax credits, $1.5 million in job-training subsidies, $1.5 million in capital outlay money for roads and infrastructure, a $625,000 allocation from City of Alamogordo for upgrading sewer lines in the area, and 20.8 aces of land from Heritage Group, a developer.a 1-800-Flowers call center that opened in November 2001 and received $1.25 million in city rent abatements from City of Alamogordo, a 50% reduction in property taxes from Otero County, and $940,000 in-plant training funds from the state.a Marietta Baking cookie factory, that took over the Sunbaked Biscuits factory when the latter went out of business in 2007, and received some interest-free loans, some job-training incentives, and some forgiveness of indebtedness for job creation.a Sunbaked Biscuits cookie factory that opened in 2006 and received $800,000 in job-training incentives from the state.a branch office of PreCheck Inc
Edited sentence: A 1-800-Flowers call center opened in November 2001 and received $1.25 million in city rent abatements from City of Alamogordo, a 50% reduction in property taxes from Otero County, and $940,000 in-plant training funds from the State of New Mexico.A Sunbaked Biscuits cookie factory opened in 2006 and received $800,000 in job-training incentives from the state.A branch office of PreCheck Inc.OCEDC has recruited several new employers by using financial incentives.PreCheck received $2.4 million in high-wage job creation tax credits, $1.5 million in job-training subsidies, $1.5 million in capital outlay money for roads and infrastructure, a $625,000 allocation from City of Alamogordo for upgrading sewer lines in the area, and 20.8 aces of land from Heritage Group, a developer.When Sunbaked Biscuits went of of business in 2007, Marietta Baking took over the cookie factory and received some interest-free loans, some job-training incentives, and some forgiveness of indebtedness for job creation