Original sentence: About 1 mile down stream, the stream marks the southern boundry of the Kiahs Brook Reserve.Another 0.5 miles downriver, it joins with Kiahs Brook, and then runs fairly close to  Route 116.Once past the New York border, the Titicus River still runs close to New York 116, until emptying into the Titicus Resevoir.The Titicus River is an 8.5 mile river in southwestern Connecticut and souththat drains in to the Titicus Resevoir, and eventually into the Hudson River
Edited sentence: About 1 mile down stream, the stream marks the southern boundary of the Kiahs Brook Reserve.Another 0.5 miles downriver, it joins with Kiahs Brook, and then runs fairly close to Route 116.Once past the New York border, the Titicus River still runs close to New York 116, until emptying into the Titicus Reservoir.The Titicus River is an 8.5 mile river in southwestern Connecticut and souththat drains in to the Titicus Reservoir, and eventually into the Hudson River