Original sentence: Downtown is served by the Port Authority's light rail subway system, an extensive bus network, and inclines.However, Downtown is hidden from view on nearly all other major roadways into the city because of the extremely hilly terrain of Western Pennsylvania.Point State Park area: At the triangle's tip is Point State Park with its giant fountain and the Fort Pitt Museum.The New York Times once called Pittsburgh "the only city with an entrance," specifically referring to the view of Downtown that explodes upon drivers immediately upon exiting the Fort Pitt Tunnel
Edited sentence: Downtown is extremely well-served by public transporation in the form of the Port Authority's light rail subway system, extensive bus network, and inclines.However, Downtown is hidden from view on nearly all major roadways into the city because of the extremely hilly terrain of Western Pennsylvania.Point State Park area: At the triagle's tip is Point State Park with its giant fountain and the Fort Pitt Museum.The New York Times once called Pittsburgh "the only city with an entrance," specifically referring to the breathtaking view of Downtown that explodes upon drivers immediately upon exiting the Fort Pitt Tunnel