Original sentence: Facing a perceived economic crisis, a group called Zaibatsu decides to seize Japan and take military action to safeguard the Japanese economy.Fearful of an impending nuclear war between China and Russia, Ryan convinces President Roger Durling that the U.Simultaneously, the Japanese cabal engineers the collapse of the American stock market (through the use of witting and unwitting personnel who electronically wipe out the computerized records of all transactions on Wall Street), leaving America at a huge economic disadvantage.The Zaibatsu, actually its leader Raizo Yamata, believe that these two elements, combined with the acquisition of Russian SS-19 ICBMs and nuclear warheads under the cover of the Japanese space program, will be enough to force the United States to negotiate a truce.The earlier part of the novel implies that the Zaibatsu was planning to seize Japan anyway, and used the economic crisis as an excuse.and Japanese delegates negotiate to avoid further bloodshed in what is now called the "Pacific Crisis," newly appointed National Security Advisor Jack Ryan and Russia's SVR determines Japan's covert actions and in the process discovers the overall plan by Japan, India and China to eliminate U.must take immediate action to stop the Japanese occupation, which Ryan hopes will derail the efforts of India and China
Edited sentence: Facing a perceived economic crisis, the corporate oligarchs presented as the true rulers of Japan decide to take military action to safeguard the Japanese economy.Simultaneously, the Japanese cabal engineers the collapse of the American stock market by exploiting flaws in the program trading systems at major brokerages, and then deletes all trade records, leaving the American economy in panic and chaos.The oligarchs, lead by Raizo Yamata, believe that these two elements, combined with the acquisition a nuclear ballistic missile system, will be enough to force the United States to negotiate a settlement.To defend US national interest and avert the potential for a nuclear war between China and Russia over Siberia, Ryan convinces President Roger Durling that the U.and Japanese delegates negotiate to avoid further bloodshed in what is now called the "Pacific Crisis," newly appointed National Security Advisor Jack Ryan and Russia's SVR discover Japan's covert actions and in the process deciphers the overall plan by Japan, India and China to eliminate U.must take immediate action to stop the Japanese occupation