Original sentence: The LP was more varied than its predecessor, and has been widely praised for tracks such as Crosby's sinister ballad "Everybody's Been Burned", a cover of Dylan's My Back Pages" (later released as a single) and a quartet of Chris Hillman numbers which showed the bassist emerging fully-formed as a county-oriented songwriter ("Have You Seen Her Face", "Time Between", "Thoughts And Words", "The Girl With No Name")
Edited sentence: The LP was more varied than its predecessor, and has been widely praised for tracks such as Crosby's sinister ballad "Everybody's Been Burned", a tremendous cover of Dylan's My Back Pages" (later released as a single) and a quartet of Chris Hillman numbers which showed the bassist emerging fully-formed as a county-oriented songwriter ("Have You Seen Her Face", "Time Between", "Thoughts And Words", "The Girl With No Name")