Original sentence: It is about three miles west of junction 27 of the M6 motorway, on the A5209; the Leeds-Liverpool Canal passes very close to the village centre.Parbold is at the bottom of Parbold Hill, in the valley of the River Douglas
Edited sentence: Close to the village centre the Leeds-Liverpool Canal passes over the River Douglas.Parbold lies in the valley of the River Douglas, at the bottom of Parbold Hill, about three miles west of junction 27 of the M6 motorway on the A5209