Original sentence: On the other hand, there are also some academic papers that Scientologist contend were commissioned by critics, which do not come to the conclusion that Scientology is a religion:.The Church states that the tax exemption is proof that it is a religion.The nature of Scientology is hotly debated in a few of these countries, regardless of the official position.The organization has a number of sources supporting this position, often cited by its spokespersons
Edited sentence: On the other hand, there are also some academic papers which do not come to the conclusion that Scientology is a religion:.The Church is quick to highlight the tax exemption as proof that it is a religion.The nature of Scientology is hotly debated in all of these countries, regardless of the official position.The organization has compiled a number of sources supporting this position, often cited by its spokespersons