Original sentence: Bolton has come under much scrutiny from Bombers fans for his on-field exploits, however Mark has made a name for himself as a tagger, performing masterful roles in shutting down Adam Goodes and Anthony Koutoufides.Despite narrowly avoiding being traded to Carlton, Bolton will provide Essendon with back-up support in 2006, and as he has now played 100 games his offspring will be eligible to represent Essendon under the father/son rule.He went on to make his debut in 1998 and has since played 98 games (as of end 2005 season)
Edited sentence: After narrowly avoiding being traded to Carlton, Bolton again dissapointed Essendon fans, averaging a paltry four marks and eleven disposals per game in 2006.Bolton has come under much scrutiny from Bombers fans for his on-field exploits and has made a name for himself as one of the worst players on the Essendon list, second only to Aaron Henneman.Having now played 100 games, this milestone is now forever cheapened for any player who has or will reach this mark.He went on to make his debut in 1998 and has since played 117 games