Original sentence: Kitty and Red clean Eric's room, but the one they call for help surprises Kitty.Kitty is furious against Donna for kissing Randy in Eric's old bedroom, and tries to ridicule her
Edited sentence: Eric is coming home from Africa.Kitty and Red clean Eric's old bedroom, with help from Randy.Kitty is still furious against Donna for kissing Randy in Eric's old bedroom, and tries to ridicule her.Things take a turn for the worse when Kitty catches Randy and Donna kissing in Eric's room