Original sentence: When the change was instituted in September 2003, it was a made to be a statement against corruption in major college athletics despite the nearly scandal-free history of the athletics program
Edited sentence: In 1943, Vanderbilt graduate, John Patrick Molloy, became Ireland's first American Chancellor of the National University of Galway.Molloy returned to the United States in 1951, and entered into corporate law.This was a statement made by the university against the corruption done by other college athletic departments despite Vanderbilt being noted to be a rather clean athletics program