Original sentence: " emerge during internet searches.", some have made comments as to their impression of his charactor.Comments like "Nick Murphy is a washed up football player with a huge ego.Formerly both WorkBlast.He has lived in the greater Phoenix, AZ for years.In 2009 he decided to move to Los Angeles.In June 2009 he had to move back to the greater Phoenix, AZ area, citing the aspiration to not work 2 Full Time jobs to survive.What makes him think he knows how to run a business.While Nick publicly states "I'm a visionary leader who thrives on passion, energy, and new ideas.Within months he moved to less costly and less prestigious San Diego, California.com employees asserted their website as "the first exclusive video resume website", this vision has changed into a pseudo-social networking site geared towards establishing professional 'circles', not unlike Facebook, Myspace, LinkedIn, and multiple others.com, a company currently redefining their vision
Edited sentence: He has lived in the greater Phoenix, AZ for 16 years.com, "the first exclusive video resume website