Original sentence: A possible factor for such the large swing away from the Democrats could have been the fact that Hillary Rodham Clinton, who once served as First Lady of Arkansas, did not receive the  Democratic presidential nomination in 2008.During the same election, however, Democratic U.House of Representatives were also reelected in landslides over little-to-no opposition as well.Not surprisingly, the polls showed Hillary Clinton defeating McCain in Arkansas, the state where she served as First Lady when her husband served as Governor.Senator Mark Pryor faced no Republican opposition and was reelected in a landslide victory over Rebekah Kennedy of the Green Party.The state's three Democratic members of the U
Edited sentence: A possible factor for such the large swing away from the Democrats could have been the fact that Hillary Rodham Clinton, who once served as First Lady of Arkansas while her husband was Governor, did not receive the Democratic presidential nomination in 2008.During the same election, however, freshman Democratic U.House of Representatives (three Democrats and one Republican) were also reelected with no major-party opposition.Not surprisingly, the polls showed Hillary Clinton defeating McCain in Arkansas.Senator Mark Pryor faced no Republican opposition, and was reelected in a landslide victory over Rebekah Kennedy of the Green Party.The four members of the state's delegation  to the U