Original sentence: Even though the origins of stock trading go back to the 13th century, the market as we know it today did not catch on strongly until the late 1800s.The stock market has grown so that some argue that it represents a country's economy.These advances in technology have made day trading possible
Edited sentence: Despite the first shares being offered by Stora Kopparberg, in the 13th century, the market as we know it today did not catch on strongly until the late 1800s.The stock market has grown so that it represents a country's economy