Original sentence: He greatly contributed in Livorno's return to Serie A in 2004, scoring 29 goals in 38 matches and turning down an half-million euro contract with Torino Calcio to get back to his beloved team.He is an effective, charismatic player and a natural leader
Edited sentence: He greatly contributed in Livorno's return to Serie A in 2004, scoring 29 goals in 38 matches and resigning an half-million euro contract with Torino Calcio to get back to his beloved team.He is a physical and very effective player, with a great charisma and a natural leadership attitude