Original sentence: After minor success in the USA with the single "Marjorine", he entered the big time with a groundbreaking rearrangement of "With a Little Help from My Friends," another Beatles cover, this time from the Sgt
Edited sentence: After minor success in the USA with the single "Marjorine", he entered the big time with a groundbreaking rearrangement & intense rendering of "With a Little Help from My Friends," this time from the Sgt.This was the only widely-acknowledged instance of a Beatles remake being better than the original