Original sentence: Lisa Elena Jane Mason (born 26 February 1982 in Aylesbury, England) is a British gymnast, at both domestic and international level since starting at the age of five.On the domestic scene, she has been a British Gymnastic Champion on three occasions.She has represented her country at both the Commonwealth Games and Olympic Games where at the 1998 Commonwealth Games she won two gold medals
Edited sentence: Lisa Elena Jane Mason (born 26 February 1982 in Aylesbury, England) is a British gymnast who trained at Huntingdon Gym Club, starting at the age of five, and competed at both domestic and international level.On the domestic scene, she has been a British Gymnastic Champion on three occasions, her first title being won at the age of 14.She has represented her country at both the Commonwealth Games and Olympic Games where at the 1998 Commonwealth Games she won two Gold medals