Original sentence: Interestingly, one eel story claims that both eel families once upon a time lived on the peaceful shores of Atlantis, and even as seafloor spreading pushed the Americas westwards, the eels gathered each year in Atlantis for some joint fun
Edited sentence: One nice eel story claims that both eel families once upon a time lived on the peaceful shores of Atlantis, and even as seafloor spreading pushed the Americas westwards, the eels gathered each year in Atlantis for some joint fun