Original sentence: Along a distance of , eastward from West 37th Street to Corbin Place, at the end of Brighton Beach, there are 1.3 million boards and 15.6 million screws and nails (about 12 to a board).At the turn of the century, amusement parks — Sea Lion Park, Steeplechase Park, Luna Park, and Dreamland — offered rides, concessions and entertainment on a spectacular scale.Between 1938-41, Parks shifted and straightened out much of the boardwalk and extended it east to Brighton Beach.In 1993 "The First Symphony of the Sea", a  sculpture wall by artist Toshio Sasaki, was installed on the boardwalk outside the Aquarium for Wildlife Conservation.The beach was greatly expanded and entirely resurfaced with a  layer of fine white sand
Edited sentence: 37th Street to Corbin Place, there are 1.3 million boards and 15.6 million screws and nails (about 12 to a board).Along a distance of , from W.Also, the beach was greatly expanded and entirely resurfaced with a  layer of fine white sand.At the turn of the century, amusement parks—Sea Lion Park, Steeplechase Park, Luna Park, and Dreamland—offered rides, concessions and entertainment on a spectacular scale.Between 1938 and 1941, Parks shifted and straightened out much of the boardwalk and extended it east to Brighton Beach.His descendants still are around today.In 1993 "The First Symphony of the Sea," a  sculpture wall by artist Toshio Sasaki, was installed on the boardwalk outside the Aquarium for Wildlife Conservation.It is an enduring symbol of New York City and its most famous playground, Coney Island.The boardwalk links the excitement of Coney's colorful amusements and the sweeping calm of beach and ocean