Original sentence: Originally, the weaver worked at home and marketed his cloth at fairs.The weavers were often children or slaves.To regulate their trade, craftsmen applied to establish a guild
Edited sentence: In the transition from home to factory the hours and conditions under which this labor was disposed was closely regulated and dictated by the male owners to cut every expense involved in production to the barest minimum.Originally, the weaver worked at home and marketed her cloth at fairs.The weavers were usually women or children, most of whom were enslaved by the men of their communities.Their labor power now under the complete control of their male employers and owners.This effectively marginalized women's role and eventually drove them from the trade, as gradually happened in many other areas of profitable crafts, which were founded and originally dominated by women.To regulate and control the women's trade, income and profits.men applied to establish a guild