Original sentence: They were supported in their efforts by a number of Gilded Age personalities and Morristown residents including Theodore Roosevelt, Governor of New York at the time and later President of the United States; publisher Charles Scribner of Scribner's; John Jacob Astor; Charles Francis Adams, Jr
Edited sentence: They were supported in their efforts by a number of Gilded Age luminaires and Morristown residents including Theodore Roosevelt, Governor of New York at the time and later President of the United States; publisher Charles Scribner of Scribner's; John Jacob Astor; Charles Francis Adams, Jr