Original sentence: Emma assumes the role of the Hellfire Club's Black King, including a new darker outfit, and explaining in a letter to the X-Men that she intended to fix the broken world for mutants in her own way by taking control of the Hellfire Club.Following this, Emma promises to spend the necessary time to heal Christian's broken mind, taking on the role of head of the Frost International Company.Though Shaw is still immune to her telepathy, Emma had an associate place a paralytic agent in his drink allowing her to defeat him
Edited sentence: As she stands over Shaw, she changes her outfit, trading the garments of the White Queen for the darker garb of the Black King.Emma reveals she had an associate of her placing a paralytic agent in his drink which allow her the victory.Emma then reveals that the reason she wanted Bobby's help was because he had a similar childhood as Christian except that Bobby's father was not as dominating as theirs.Now that their father is dead, Emma promises to spend the necessary time to heal Christian's broken mind which was caused by years of being forced to take pills as well as becoming the head of the Frost International Company.Of course, that's when Emma's careful planning and foresight kicks in as Sebastian sudently falls to the ground.Sebastian, for his part, is still immune to her telepathy, and returns the favor by beating her down, laughing about his plan to cut up her diamond shards and wear her corpse shards in victory.She then sends a nice letter to the X-Men, explaining that she needed to fix the broken world for mutants in her own way and letting it be known that the Hellfire Club is officially under new management and essentially tossing out apparently her membership with the X-Men.The plan goes off with nary a hitch, and Emma waltzes right into Shaw's office (after brutalizing and telepathically violating hundreds and hundreds of relative innocents) and confronts him one on one