Original sentence: FIDE decided to grant 100 bonus ELO rating points to all active female players except Polgar, which knocked her from the top spot in the January, 1987 ratings list.In November, 1986, FIDE (under pressure from the Soviet federation which did not want to see a non-Soviet ranked #1) made a highly controversial ruling.When Polgar refused to play under these conditions, FIDE stripped her of her title
Edited sentence: In November, 1986, FIDE (with the pressure from the Soviet federation which did not want to see a non-Soviet to be ranked #1) made one of the most outrageous decisions in chess history.They decided to grant 100 bonus ELO rating points to all active female players except Polgar to knock her out of the top spot in the January, 1987 ratings list.When Polgar refused to play under these conditions, FIDE illegally stripped her of her title