Original sentence: Major William Boyd Kennedy Shaw OBE (1901–April 1979) was a British desert explorer, botanist, archaeologist and founding member of the Long Range Desert Group (LRDG) during World War II
Edited sentence: Major William Boyd Kennedy Shaw OBE (October 26, 1901–April 23, 1979) was a British desert explorer, botanist, archaeologist and founding member of the Long Range Desert Group (LRDG) during World War II