Original sentence: Latuff's entry was described as "Holocaust inversion", a form of holocaust denial, by the scholarManfred Gerstenfeld.Latuff's entry was described as "Holocaust inversion", a variety of Holocaust denial, by scholar Dr.Manfred Gerstenfeld.The competition itself was controversial - it was criticised by Kofi Annan, Israel's Minister of Culture, Reporters Without Borders, the Anti-Defamation League and others
Edited sentence: Latuff's entry was described as "Holocaust inversion" by the business strategist Manfred Gerstenfeld