Original sentence: Although there were many nearby onlookers , the attack was only interrupted when bottled water deliveryman, Jeff Fenn, who heard her cries, rushed from the second floor of an apartment building and subdued Jackson.The experience also inspired Saldana to play herself in the TV-film "Victims for Victims: The Theresa Saldana Story" (1984), recreating that traumatic day, and she authored the book "Beyond Survival," a memoir of her experiences after being attacked
Edited sentence: Although there were many nearby onlookers, the attack was only interrupted when bottled water deliveryman, Jeff Fenn, who heard her cries, rushed from the second floor of an apartment building and subdued Jackson.The experience also inspired Saldana to play herself in the TV-film Victims for Victims: The Theresa Saldana Story (1984), recreating that traumatic day, and she authored the book Beyond Survival, a memoir of her experiences after being attacked