Original sentence: Guclu was also a portrait artist.Mustafa Haluk Guclu, who was interested in art from childhood and was 13 years old when he made his first oil painting
Edited sentence: Guclu was also an excellent portrait artist.He made paintings that attracted great attention.Mustafa Haluk Guclu, who was interested in art from childhood and was only 13 years old when he made his first oil painting