Original sentence: Donehue, choreographed by Matt Mattox and with costumes by Irene Sharaff, the cast included George D.Howard Taubman, in The New york Times wrote: "Not that Miss Martin has lost her luster...she continues to be a game and resourceful trouper, willing to do an impossible backbend while being carried aloft and game enough to let herself be whirled head over heels on a torture rack and come up smiling and belting out a top note.Jennie is a musical with a book by Arnold Schulman, music by Arthur Schwartz, and lyrics by Howard Dietz.The musical opened on Broadway at the Majestic Theatre on October 17, 1963 and closed on December 28, 1963, after 82 performances and 4 previews.The plot focuses on acting team and married couple Jennie Malone and James O'Connor, who tour the country in popular melodramas, and playwright Christopher Lawrence Cromwell, who offers Jennie work when she leaves her husband.This was Martin's first flop
Edited sentence: "This was Martin's first flop.Donehue, choreographed by Matt Mattox (official IBDB credits) and with costumes by Irene Sharaff, the cast included George D.Howard Taubman, in The New York Times wrote: "Not that Miss Martin has lost her luster...she continues to be a game and resourceful trouper, willing to do an impossible backbend while being carried aloft and game enough to let herself be whirled head over heels on a torture rack and come up smiling and belting out a top note.Jennie is a musical with a book by Arnold Schulman, music by Arthur Schwartz, and lyrics by Howard Dietz, and starred Mary Martin.The musical opened on Broadway at the Majestic Theatre on October 17, 1963 and closed on December 28, 1963, after 82 performances and four previews.The plot focuses on actors and married couple Jennie Malone and James O'Connor, who tour the country in popular melodramas