Original sentence: After three years on loan to Brazilian clubs he was bought in 2004 by Coruripe and after three years with the club he made a move to Portugal for UEFA Cup contenders F.Edson has played for São Paulo, Udinese Calcio, Juventus, União São João, Santa Cruz and Coruripe.He did not have a successful time with Udinese and moved to Juventus on loan and also the next year had successful time with Brazilian team União São João and after with Santa Cruz on loan.He started his career with Brazilian club São Paulo and quickly moved to Italian Top Level team Udinese
Edited sentence: After three years on loan to Brazilian clubs he was bought in 2004 by Coruripe and after a great three years and great performances with the club he made a big move to Portugal for UEFA Cup contenders F.Edson has played for São Paulo, Udinese Calcio, Juventus, Uniao Sao Joao, Santa Cruz and Coruripe.He did not have a successful time with Udinese and moved to Juventus on loan and also the next year had successful time with B razilian team Uniao Sao Joao and after with Santa Cruz on loan.He started his career with Brazilian giants São Paulo and quickly moved to Serie A team Udinese