Original sentence: 1969–  11,000 troops Re-deployed in large numbers from 14 August 1969 after loyalist attacks upon nationalist civil rights marchers.They were initially welcomed by the nationalist community as protectors but most eventually came to oppose their continued presence especially as a result of Operation Demetrius (internment) (that was used almost entirely on nationalists) and the events of Bloody Sunday, when members of the Parachute Regiment shot dead 14 civilians
Edited sentence: 1969–  11,000 troops Re-deployed in large numbers from 14 August 1969 after civil disorder in the province