Original sentence: Buckley took charge of all escaping operations, and was instrumental in a number of escape attempts, including numerous tunnel projects, although he did not attmept to escape himself at this time.Lieutenant Commander James 'Jimmy' Brian Buckley DSC MiD was a Royal Navy Fleet Air Arm pilot who became a noteable POW during the Second World War and was killed during an escape attempt on 21 May 1943
Edited sentence: Buckley took charge of all escaping operations, and was instrumental in a number of escape attempts, including numerous tunnel projects, although he did not attempt to escape himself at this time.Lieutenant Commander James 'Jimmy' Brian Buckley DSC MiD was a Royal Navy Fleet Air Arm pilot who became a notable POW during the Second World War and was killed during an escape attempt on 21 May 1943