Original sentence: Duncan Lawrie also recently opened a representative office in Kolkata, offering banking and investment management services to private clients resident in India.Duncan Lawrie predominantly holds accounts for high net worth individuals.In 2005 the bank purchased Douglas Deakin Young, and in 2007 it  acquired Hill Martin and Hill Martin Asset Management.The bank has several offices across the United Kingdom, including a branch in Bristol, a country estate in Kent,  and international banking, investment and fiduciary business in the Isle of Man as well as its head office in Belgravia, London.The bank is now 100% owned by Camellia Plc, but it can trace its origins back to two Scottish businessmen, Alexander Lawrie and Walter Duncan, who travelled to Calcutta in the mid-19th century to make their fortunes as general merchants.While the bank placesemphasis on confidentiality and never reveals its clientele, it is widely believed that numerous aristocrats, politicians, entrepreneurs and media figures hold accounts with the bank
Edited sentence: Duncan Lawrie have also recently opened a representative office in Kolkata offering banking and investment management services to private clients resident in India.Duncan Lawrie predominantly holds accounts for high net worth individuals with their services reflecting this.In 2005 the bank purchased Douglas Deakin Young, and in 2007 they also acquired Hill Martin and Hill Martin Asset Management.The bank has several offices across the United Kingdom including a branch in Bristol, a country estate in Kent,  and international banking, investment and fiduciary business in the Isle of Man as well as their head office in London's Belgravia district.The bank is 100% owned by Camellia Plc which can trace its origins back to two Scottish businessmen, Alexander Lawrie and Walter Duncan, who travelled to Calcutta in the mid nineteenth century to make their fortunes as general merchants.To this day, Duncan Lawrie remains one of the most prestigious banks in London.While the bank places much emphasis on confidentiality and never reveals clientele, it is widely believed that numerous aristocrats, politicians, entrepreneurs and media figures hold accounts with the bank