Original sentence: It is located in the northern part of the city, overlooking the valley with the view of Bandung city, this art-deco style building was built in 1932 by the Dutch architect C.It is now buzzing with classrooms, students, and residential areas.The building has a garden, plants and waterfall.Thus Vila Isola lies in the middle of the hillside where the background is the active volcanic mount of Tangkuban Perahu.Villa Isola - UPI is a building in Bandung, West Java, Indonesia.Villa Isola is located at the busiest road hub connecting Bandung with Lembang, a small city that is popular as a resort villas.W Schoemaker for the Dutch millionaire D
Edited sentence: It is hard to judge the overall architectural beauty at the moment, since this residential villa has been transformed into a rectorat for the University of Education Indonesia (UPI) Bandung, formerly known as IKIP (Institute for Teaching and Educational Science).It is now buzzing with classrooms, students, residential areas and road fulls of cars.Located in the northern part of the city, overlooking the valley with the view of Bandung city, this art-deco style building was built in 1932 by the famous Dutch architect C.The building has an amazing complex of garden, plants and waterfall that was built with high precision.Thus Vila Isola lies perfectly in the middle of the hillside where the background is the active volcanic mount of Tangkuban Perahu.Villa Isola - UPI is one of architectural jewels in Bandung, West Java, Indonesia.Villa Isola is located at the busiest road hub connecting Bandung with Lembang, a small city that is popular as a resort villas and hotels.W Schoemaker for the dutch millionaire D