Original sentence: Gene Watts, founder of the Canadian Brass.In addition to the band, the school is home to a  JROTC program and the New Score and Cabaret singers
Edited sentence: In addition to the band, the school is home to a nationally recognized JROTC program and the New Score and Cabaret singers.Smith-Cotton has many famous Alumni.The Canadian Brass has played for Queen Elizabeth II of the United Kingdom on multiple occasions.They include Gene Watts, the founder of the Canadian Brass