Original sentence: According to diagnosis criteria put forth by a few mental health professionals, the belief that one is an animal or can be turned into an animal can coincide with clinical lycanthropy.Common creatures to which Otherkin claim some connection include Elves, Fairies, Lycanthropes, and even extra-terrestrials
Edited sentence: According to diagnosis criteria put forth by mental health professionals, the belief that one is an animal or can be turned into an animal is termed clinical lycanthropy, a delusion of varying severity and significance.Common creatures to which Otherkin claim some connection include Angels, Demons, Elves, Fairies, Lycanthropes, and even extra-terrestrials