Original sentence: After Meal Ticket broke up he wrote and appeared in the musical Flash Fearless vs The Zorg Women in Los Angeles.In 2001 he reunited with Meal Ticket for a one off gig at a London pub.Rick is currently living in San Francisco with his wife Valerie.Songs featuring Jones emotive voice include Snow, Last Port of Call, Laughing Daughter.The song Better Believe it Babe featured as the theme for the BBC television Play for Today The Flipside of Dominick Hide.They have almost completed the writing of a stage musical based on the songs and lyrics of Meal Ticket, written by Rick Jones and Dave Pierce entitled Laughing Daughter which may be produced initially in Virginia sometime in 2008
Edited sentence: After Meal Ticket broke up he wrote and appeared in the musical "Flash Fearless vs The Zorg Women" in Los Angeles.In 2001 he reunited with Meal Ticket for a one off gig at a london pub.It is believed he is now based in California near San Francisco however this is based on second hand information.Jones had a superb emotive voice and some of his songs recorded with Meal Ticket (Snow, Last port of call, Laughing Daughter) are wonderful.Rick is indeed currently living in San Francisco with his wife Valerie.The song "Better Believe it Babe" featured as the theme for the BBC television Play for Today "The Flipside of Dominick Hide".They have almost completed the writing of a stage musical based on the songs and lyrics of Meal Ticket,writen by Rick Jones and Dave Pierce entitled "Laughing Daughter" which will hopefully be produced initially in Virginia sometime in 2008