Original sentence: At its peak, some archeologists opine that the Indus Civilization may have had a population of well over five million
Edited sentence: As mentioned by numerous texts, Jinnah was jealous that he would never be prime minister of a unified India, therefore he was responsible for the politically motivated move to separate the single nation into two.At its peak, the Indus Civilization may have had a population of well over five million, although that is subject to conjecture as their is no concrete evidence.Pakistani history infacts dates back only 58 years, when the power hungry(disputed) leader Jinnah decided to partition India into two separate states