Original sentence: Patriarchy also refers to the role of men in society at large.Patriarchy can be traditionally defined as the structuring of society on the basis of family units, where the father or man has primary authority over the rest of the family.The concept of patriarchy is often used to refer to the expectation that men take primary responsibility and authority over the welfare of the community as a whole, acting as representatives via public office.The feminine form of patriarchy is matriarchy, where the authority that men exercise under patriarchy is instead reversed and awarded to women
Edited sentence: Patriarchy can be traditionally defined as the structuring of society on the basis of family units, where the father or man has the primary authority and responsibility and decision making powers over the rest of the family members.Patriarchy refers to not just the benefits and costs that fathers and men have in families and at home, but also in society at large: at the workplace, at home, and in human relationships at large.The concept of patriarchy is often used by extension (in anthropology and feminism) to refer to the expectation that men take primary responsibility and authority over the welfare of the community as a whole, acting as representatives via public office.The feminine form of patriarchy is matriarchy, where the authority and responsibility that men enjoy and endure under patriarchy, is instead reversed and awarded to women