Original sentence: For many Indigenous peoples in Canada, the recognition of traditional title to land is of vital importance.The Unistʼotʼen Camp is a resistance camp built on the unceded territory of the Unist'otʼen clan of the Wetʼsuwetʼen First Nation peoples in northern British Columbia, Canada.The Wetʼsuwetʼen system of governance pre-dates the formation of the country of Canada, and members of the Wetʼsuwetʼen people have never signed a treaty with the Canadian government
Edited sentence: For many Indigenous peoples in Canada, the proper recognition and respect of traditional title to land is of vital importance, especially when that land is used for traditional and spiritual purposes.The Unistʼotʼen Camp is a camp built on the unceded territory of the Unist'otʼen clan of the Wetʼsuwetʼen First Nation peoples in northern British Columbia, Canada.The Wetʼsuwetʼen system of governance pre-dates the formation of the country of Canada, the Unist'otʼen terrritory is unceded; members of the Wetʼsuwetʼen people have never signed a treaty with the Canadian government