Original sentence: He attended a private school managed by the Catholic Church before aw at the University of León.His father was a prominent, lawyer and his grandfather, Juan Rodriguez Lozano , was a Freemason and a Republican captain executed by the Nationalists during the Spanish Civil War.José Luis Rodríguez Zapatero (born August 4, 1960) is the fifth President of Spain since the restoration of democracy in 1978, following his party's victory in the March 14 Spanish general election.On February 23, 1979, Zapatero joined the Spanish Socialists' Workers Party (PSOE), after attending his first political rally in Gijón, after being inspired by hearing their leader Felipe González.Zapatero was born in Valladolid but he grew up in León, where his affluent family, with a long tradition of left-wing politics, comes from
Edited sentence: He came from an affluent family with a long tradition of left-wing politics.He studied Law at the University of León.His father was a prominent, successful lawyer and his grandfather, Juan Rodriguez Lozano , was a Freemason and a Republican captain executed by the Nationalists during the Spanish Civil War.His performance as a student was above average before his pre-University year.In 1977, the PSOE had not yet renounced Marxism as its ideological base (which happened in 1979).José Luis Rodríguez Zapatero (born August 4, 1960) is the fifth prime minister of Spain since the restoration of democracy in 1978, following his party's victory in the March 14 Spanish general election.On February 23, 1979, Zapatero joined the Partido Socialista Obrero Español (PSOE, Spanish Socialists' Workers Party) after attending his first political rally in Gijón, where he heard the PSOE leader and future Prime Minister of Spain, Felipe González.Previously, he had attended a private school managed by the Catholic Church (something typical among Spanish affluent families even today).Rodríguez Zapatero was born in Valladolid to Juan Rodríguez Lozano and Purificación Zapatero, but he grew up in León whence his family originated.The impression Felipe González caused upon him played a fundamental role in his decision of joining the party.Then it worsened, and his grades in that year and in the University were essentialy mediocre