Original sentence: Her mother, Rose, declined to attend supposedly because of Kathleen's intention to marry outside the Catholic church.Roosevelt appointed Joseph Kennedy ambassador to the Court of St James's, his daughter Kathleen spent a year and a half living in London
Edited sentence: Her mother, Rose, declined to attend, supposedly because of Kathleen's intention to marry outside the Catholic church.Roosevelt appointed Joseph Kennedy ambassador to the Court of St James, his daughter Kathleen spent a year and a half living in London