Original sentence: Democratic leaders of Congress criticized him for politicizing his office because of his support for Social Security privatization and tax cuts, which they felt would increase the deficit.In that testimony, Greenspan had stated that growing worker insecurity is a significant factor keeping inflation and inflation expectation low, thereby promoting long-term investment.Senate as an example of the self-serving attitudes of the so-called 1%
Edited sentence: In that testimony, Greenspan had stated that growing worker insecurity is a significant factor keeping inflation and inflation expectation low, thereby promoting long-term investment and elevating profits.Many observers from multiple corners of the political arena harshly criticized him for his regressive, indirect tax proposals and desire for Social Security privatization, which they observed would increase the deficit, a situation that he claimed to condemn.Senate as an example of the self-serving attitudes of the 1%