Original sentence: During the 2006–07 season, Sleath was loaned out to Unibond League side Gresley Rovers, and later Conference North side Alfreton Town, to get first-team experience.Sleath is a graduate of the Mansfield Town youth academy, and signed his first professional contract in the summer of 2006
Edited sentence: Danny Sleath was lucky to make the grade unlike his fellow players like Alton Rennalls, Max Jenkins and Micheal Langford who were a key figure in the the youth system During the 2006–07 season, Sleath was loaned out to Unibond League side Gresley Rovers, and later Conference North side Alfreton Town, to get first-team experience.Sleath is a graduate of the Mansfield Town youth academy then signed his first professional contract in the summer of 2006