Original sentence: The episode has been criticised by some who felt the basic premise bore too close a similarity to the Star Trek: Deep Space Nine episode "Children of Time", although there are also substantial differences between the two episodes
Edited sentence: The episode has been widely criticised, because during a time when there was already widespread accusation that show runners Rick Berman and Brannon Braga were recycling old plot lines to use on Enterprise, the entire episode's plot is basically copied from DS9 "Children of Time"