Original sentence: Matthew Russian Henson (August 8, 1866March 9, 1955) was an American explorer who accompanied Robert Peary on seven voyages to the Arctic over a period of nearly 23 years
Edited sentence: Matthew Russian Henson (August 8, 1866March 9, 1955) is an amazing American explorer who accompanied Robert Peary on seven voyages to the Arctic and different places over a period of almost 23 years