Original sentence: The AAH is thought by some anthropologists to be accepted readily by popular audiences, students and non-specialist scholars because of its simplicity and ease of communication.The hypothesis has antecedents in Ancient Greece but was first published with an evolutionary explanation by Max Westenhöfer in 1942.The hypothesis was proposed again in 1960 by a marine biologist, Sir Alister Hardy, and popularized and promoted by the writer Elaine Morgan.Though the theory has great popular appeal, it has been criticised by the scientific community for a variety of reasons, including susceptibility to parasites found in water, a lack of innate swimming reflex or adaptations, the characteristics of human subcutaneous fat, the failure of the fossil record to support the idea and human's inability to cope with water-dwelling predators
Edited sentence: The AAH is thought by some anthropologists to be accepted readily by popular audiences, students and non-specialist scholars because of its simplicity.The hypothesis was first published with an evolutionary explanation by Max Westenhöfer in 1942.The hypothesis was proposed again in 1960 by a marine biologist, Sir Alister Hardy, and subsequently promoted by the writer Elaine Morgan.Though the theory has become widely known, it has been criticised by the scientific community for a variety of reasons, including susceptibility to parasites found in water, a lack of innate swimming reflex or adaptations, the characteristics of human subcutaneous fat, the failure of the fossil record to support the idea and human's inability to cope with water-dwelling predators