Original sentence: (born August 11 1952 in Akron, Ohio), or "Bob 1", is the lead guitar player and occasional vocalist for Devo and younger brother of lead vocalist Mark Mothersbaugh.Following Devo's breakup in 1991, Bob started his own band called The Bob I Band, recording an unreleased album with drummer David Kendrick.Robert Leroy Mothersbaugh, Jr
Edited sentence: (born Robert Leroy Mothersbaugh, Jr., August 11, 1952, Akron, Ohio), or "Bob 1", is the lead guitar player and occasional vocalist for Devo and younger brother of lead vocalist Mark Mothersbaugh.Bob Mothersbaugh, Jr.Following Devo's breakup in 1991, Mothersbaugh started his own band called The Bob I Band, recording an unreleased album  with the drummer, David Kendrick