Original sentence: Frege's logical ideas nevertheless spread through the writings of his student Rudolph Carnap and other admirers, particularly Bertrand Russell and Ludwig Wittgenstein.It has been argued, most energetically in Fredric W.Katz's doctoral dissertation, "Sets and Their Sizes," that Frege is the father of the relational database
Edited sentence: Frege's logical ideas nevertheless spread through the writings of his student Rudolph Carnap and other admirers, particularly Russell and Wittgenstein.It has been argued with reasonable success, most energetically in Fredric W.Katz's landmark Ph.dissertation, "Sets and Their Sizes," that Frege is the father of the relational database