Original sentence: The club have recently entered a new era, with Carl Simmons and Mick Frankham taking charge.The consortium taking charge are aiming to restore the club to its former glory, with a long term plan, bringing in a host of young players with them
Edited sentence: The club have recently entered an exciting new era, with Carl Simmons and Mick Frankham taking charge.The consortium taking charge are aiming to restore the club to it's former glory, with a long term plan, bringing in a host of exciting young players with them