Original sentence: A quote used to criticize the applications of jizyah is by Al-Mawardi (the famous Shafi’i jurist of Baghdad), in  al-Ahkam as-Sultaniyyah (The Laws of Islamic Governance), jizyah is paid by the enemy in return for peace, and if the payment of jizyah ceases, then jihad is resumed.The Caliph Umar changed the name of the tax from jizyah to sadaqah to improve its connotation from "tribute" to "friendly charity".The imposition of jizyah is derived from the Sura 9.29 of the Qur'an:
Edited sentence: According to Al-Mawardi (the famous Shafi’i jurist of Baghdad), in  al-Ahkam as-Sultaniyyah (The Laws of Islamic Governance), jizyah is paid by the enemy in return for peace, and if the payment of jizyah ceases, then jihad is resumed.The imposition of jizyah is mandated by Sura 9.29 of the Qur'an: