Original sentence: Already well-known at age eleven, Williams turned professional on October 31, 1994, coached by parents Richard Williams and Oracene Price.Williams began to play regularly on the tour in 1997
Edited sentence: Already well-known at age eleven, she turned professional on October 31, 1994, coached by parents Richard Williams and Oracene Price.The "Williams Sisters," as Venus and Serena became known, took the sports world by storm with their infamous confrontations with other players -- especially fellow teen Martina Hingis -- and their father's testy exchanges with the media and tour officials.Williams began to play regularly on the tour in 1997, quickly establishing herself as the most famous and controversial tennis player in the world, noted for her outspokenness, brash confidence, and the hundreds of beads she wore in her hair.Williams was a tennis prodigy and straight-A student growing up