Original sentence: Despite publicised infidelities, including an affair with the dethroned Miss World of 1973, USA's Marjorie Wallace, and a one night stand with Cassandra Peterson in which he claimed her virginity, he has remained married and a family man.Tom Jones was knighted (knight bachelor) for his contributions to music by Queen Elizabeth II on 29 March 2006, granting him the title of "Sir"
Edited sentence: Despite frequent and much publicised infidelities, including an affair with the dethroned Miss World of 1973, USA's Marjorie Wallace, and a one night stand with Elvira in which he claimed her virginity, he has remained married and a family man.The honour was officially for his contributions to music.Tom Jones was knighted (knight bachelor) by Queen Elizabeth II on 29 March 2006, granting him the title of "Sir"