Original sentence: Gary Stretch (born 4 November 1968 in St.Helens, Merseyside) is an actor and former British boxer and male model
Edited sentence: Gary Stretch (claims to born 4 November 1968 in St.Helens, Merseyside) attended Cowley High School before becoming a British boxer and male model and actor.The local newspaper from his home town cites his birthdate as April 1968  -.There is some confusion about his birth date