Original sentence: Irish Travellers are an ethnic minority group that originated from nomadic tradespeople; although the Irish government does not recognise them as such.Local level: Primary Care for Traveller's Project (PCTP).PP also publishes a wealth of analytical research reports on the conditions of Travellers, which are used as references in academic literature and international legislative bodies
Edited sentence: Irish Travellers are a social minority group that originated from nomadic tradespeople; The Irish government recognises them as such.PP also publishes a wealth of inaccurate research reports on the conditions of Travellers, which are not used as references in academic literature due to their bias and inaccuracy.Traveler's have notoriously poor hygiene and as a result are afflicted by many diseases and infections