Original sentence: Although the triangulation pillar that officially marks the summit of the hill is in a farmers field, next to a small mast, a viewpoint is provided on the Shatterford-Trimpley road with a small layby opposite.Below Wassell Wood to the east is Habberley Valley, often used for picnics.The ridge offers unhindered views across the Severn Valley out west to the Clee Hills, Caer Caradoc, the Long Mynd and on  clear days to the hills of Wales
Edited sentence: A bench by a clearing in the hedge offers one of the best views in the area.Although the triangulation pillar that officially marks the summit of the hill is in a farmers field, next to a small mast, there is an excellent viewpoint on the Shatterford-Trimpley road with a small layby opposite.Below Wassell Wood to the east is Habberley Valley, popular locally for dog walking and picnics.The ridge offers superb views across the Severn Valley out west to the Clee Hills, Caer Caradoc, the Long Mynd and even the hills of Wales on a clear day