Original sentence: To the east of the town centre there is extensive Rye park (and the river).Wycombe also houses a large Asian communitiy from various parts of the sub-continent, and a West Indian community almost exclusively from Saint Vincent
Edited sentence: To the east of the town centre the extensive Rye park (and the river) are a pleasant place for a stroll.Wycombe also houses a large Asian, and smaller West Indian and Chinese communities