Original sentence: Amazingly, vampires' minds are 'silent' to Sookie.Bill saves Sookie's life by killing Long Shadow when he attacks her.But the local police arrest Jason Stackhouse because he has been sexually linked to two of the victims.Eric soon discovers that Sookie's ability is very useful and orders Bill to have Sookie use her mind reading ability to determine the identity of the person who has been stealing a large sum of money.He asks Bubba, a vampire and friend of Bill to protect Sookie while he is gone.They are "mainstreaming" since the Japanese developed a synthetic blood that makes it possible for vampires to live in the open without the need to hunt humans for sustenance
Edited sentence: Amazingly, vampires' minds are 'silent' to Sookie, which is heaven for her as human minds are difficult to shut out and bombard her constantly with their thoughts.But the local police suspect Jason Stackhouse and later arrest him, because he has been sexually linked to two of the victims.Eric saves Sookie's life by staking Long Shadow when he attacks her.Eric soon discovers that Sookie's ability is very useful and orders Bill to have Sookie use her mind reading ability to determine the identity of the person who has been stealing a large sum of money from his bar.He asks Bubba, a dim witted vampire, to protect Sookie while he is gone.Many vampires are "mainstreaming" (coexisting with humans) since the Japanese developed a synthetic blood that makes it possible for vampires to live in the open without the need to hunt humans for sustenance