Original sentence: BDSM activities are practiced by people of all sexualities: gay, straight, bisexual, or other, as well as people of all genders: male, female, and/or transsexual, transgender or genderqueer people
Edited sentence: BDSM activities are practiced by people of all sexualities: gay, straight, bisexual, transsexual, or other, as well as people of either gender.Transsexual, transgender or genderqueer people also practice them