Original sentence: He later joined the inspection staff at Ammunition Factory, Footscray on 2 January 1942.On 30 April the following year, he married Heather Vivienne Broughton in a ceremony at St Paul's Anglican Church, Bendigo; the couple later had a daughter
Edited sentence: He joined the inspection staff at Ammunition Factory, Footscray on 2 January 1942.On 30 April the following year, he married Heather Vivienne Broughton in a ceremony at St Paul's Anglican Church, Bendigo; the couple would later have a daughter