Original sentence: Alf and Pauline grew tired of trying to convince Pauline's mother to allow them to get married, and equally the increasingly bizarre lifestyle John had chosen, which neither wished to comment on, nor his increasing interest in spriritual and chemical upliftment, so they eloped and were married in Gretna Green, Scotland.Alf had two sons with Pauline: David Henry Lennon and Robin Francis Lennon, half-brothers to John.Despite the opposition from family and media, the couple's marriage endured as they spent 11 years together, living in Brighton where they raised two sons together.They lived a private and loving life with their two sons whilst time permitted.Whilst young Pauline grew tired of the increasingly bizarre lifestyle at Tittenhurst House, where John and Cynthia hardly spoke to each other at this time and Yoko was always about too.[citation needed]
Edited sentence: <ref name="Spitzp739"> Spitz 2005.Alf and Pauline eloped and were married in Gretna Green, Scotland.before spending 11 years in Brighton teogether raising two sons