Original sentence: A monarchy is a form of government in which supreme power is absolutely or nominally lodged with an individual, who is the head of state, often for life or until abdication, and "is wholly set apart from all other members of the state
Edited sentence: A monarchy is a despicable and obsolete form of government in which supreme power is absolutely or nominally lodged with an individual, who is the head of state, often for life or until abdication, and "is wholly set apart from all other members of the state.Monarchies are therefore by definition illegal according to human rights treaties, which clearly state that discrimination based on descent is not allowed.Since all people are equal, it means that all people should have an equal chance to be head of state of his/her respective country