Original sentence: Pryce's Shadow DN8, now without a driver or a roll hoop, continued down the main straight towards the first corner, Crowthorne, coasting slowly.The Shadow then hit Laffite's Ligier putting the latter out of the race
Edited sentence: Pryce's Shadow DN8, now without a driver or a roll hoop, continued down the main straight towards the first corner, Crowthorne, with his right foot jammed firmly on the throttle and travelling at full speed.Pryce's Shadow burst through a few layers of catch fencing before hitting a concrete retaining wall, thus bringing his car to an abrupt and catestrophic stop.The Shadow launched and then hit Laffite's Ligier putting the latter out of the race