Original sentence: During a boat trip with family and friends while on a visit to his native Australia in January 2007, actor Heath Ledger outlined a music video idea for Modest Mouse's as-of-then unreleased track "King Rat" to frontman Isaac Brock and other band members
Edited sentence: During a boat trip with family and friends while on a visit to his native Australia in January 2007, actor Heath Ledger outlined a music video idea for the song to frontman Isaac Brock and other band members