Original sentence: A few months after he started posting videos he was discovered by Scooter Braun, a former marketing executive of  So So Def.A week later Bieber had the opportunity to sing for Usher, Usher liked what he saw and wanted to sign him on the spot.Currently Justin is on a promotion tour promoting his single One time and has made various appearances on many radio stations.He is currently in the studio working on his debut album "My World" which is set to release on September 15, 2009...In July 2009 Bieber's first single "One Time" hit the charts reaching number 12 in Canada on its first week.Though Usher was not the only star looking to sign the young talent.Who later became his manager.other stars such as Justin Timberlake also wanted to sign him, but Justin later chose Usher
Edited sentence: A few months later he started posting videos.A week later Bieber had the opportunity to sing for Usher, who liked what he heard and wanted to sign him on the spot.He is also on a promotion tour promoting his single One Time and has made various appearances on many radio stations.He is currently working on his debut album "My World" which is set to release on September 15, 2009...He was discovered by Scooter Braun, a former marketing executive of So So Def, who later became his manager.In July 2009 Bieber's first single "One Time" hit the charts reaching number 12 in Canadian Hot 100 on its first week.Though Usher was not the only star looking to sign the young talent, as other stars such as Justin Timberlake also wanted to sign him, Justin later chose Usher