Original sentence: They got their start when they sent a 5 song demo to over 15 major record labels in the U.They scored a record deal with RCA Records after producer Teddy Riley, a former member of Guy, heard their demo.With Riley's help, the group's 1992 debut album, It's About Time, went double platinum and produced several Top Ten hits.. Initially the girls had named themselves TLC (Taj, Lelee & Coko), but were beaten to the name by r&b girl group TLC just 2 weeks earlier
Edited sentence: Initially the girls had named themselves TLC (Taj, Lelee & Coko), but were beaten to the name by r&b girl group TLC just 2 weeks earlier.S, landing a record deal with RCA Records after producer Teddy Riley, a former member of Guy, heard their demo.They got their start when they sent a five song demo to over 15 major record labels in the U.With Riley's help, the group's 1992 debut album, It's About Time, went double platinum and produced several Top Ten hits