Original sentence: Michelangelo Antonioni (September 29 1912 – July 30 2007) was an Italian modernist film director whose films are widely considered as some of the most influential in film aesthetics
Edited sentence: Michelangelo Antonioni (September 29 1912 – July 30 2007) was an Italian modernist film director whose films are widely considered as some of the most influential in film, principally because of superior visual aesthetics