Original sentence: Giuliani also directed the NYPD to aggressively go after enterprises linked to organized crime, such as the Fulton Fish Market and the Javits Center on the West Side, in the breaking up of mob control of solid waste removal, the city was able to save city businesses over $600 million--an amount larger than any tax decrease in the city's history
Edited sentence: Giuliani also aggressively went after enterprises linked to organized crime, such as the Fulton Fish Market and the Javits Center on the West Side, in the breaking up of mob control of solid waste removal, the city was able to save city businesses over $600 million--an amount larger than any tax break in the city's history