Original sentence: There was Fort Miller in the foothills of the Sierra Nevada in Fresno County; Los Angeles had Camp Fitzgerald then Camp Latham  ; San Diego County had Camp Wright established to cover the southern overland approach to California across the Colorado Desert from Fort Yuma; Fort Yuma was on the west bank of the Colorado River, Fort Bragg was on the Mendocino County coast and Camp Babbitt outside the town of Visalia, in Tulare County
Edited sentence: San Diego County had Camp Wright established to cover the southern overland approach to California across the Colorado Desert from Fort Yuma; Fort Yuma was on the west bank of the Colorado River, Fort Bragg was on the Mendocino County coast and Camp Babbitt outside the town of Visalia, in Tulare County.There was Fort Miller in the foothills of the Sierra Nevada in Fresno County; Los Angeles had Camp Fitzgerald then Camp Latham  ; San Bernardino County had Camp Carleton