Original sentence: The shock drives the pacifistic Aron to get drunk and then board a troop train to enlist in the army.When Sam (Burl Ives), the sheriff, brings the news, Adam rushes to the train station in a futile attempt to dissuade him
Edited sentence: The shock drives the pacifistic Aron to get drunk and lose his mind and then board a troop train to enlist in the army.When Sam (Burl Ives), the sheriff, brings the news, Adam rushes to the train station in a futile attempt to dissuade him, he fails andcan only watch helplessly as his son steams away from him covered in bloodand laughing manically