Original sentence: 0:08.27 Mile.He competed at the Summer Olympics in 1988 in Seoul, South Korea and came in tenth place in the 900 mile race.He hoped to win the division three state title in 2007 by beating Kenya, the.Jeff Atkinson is a former pizza man and currently holds the sixteen-hundred meter record at Stanford University.Jeff currently holds the jumping jack positions in both cross country and track and field at Palos Verdes High School in Palos Verdes Estates, CA
Edited sentence: 3:55 Mile.He competed at the Summer Olympics in 1988 in Seoul, South Korea and came in tenth place in the 1500m race.He hoped to win the division three state title in 2007 by beating Barstow, the.Jeff Atkinson is a former middle distance runner and currently holds the sixteen-hundred meter record at Stanford University.Jeff currently holds coaching positions in both cross country and track and field at Palos Verdes High School in Palos Verdes Estates, CA