Original sentence: Jafaria Disaster Management Cell (JDC) a Welfare and Non-Governmental Organization (NGO) commonly known as JDC Welfare Org  was established in 2009 by Shanshah Naqvi and some like minded youths of Karachi
Edited sentence: Jafaria Disaster Management Cell (JDC) a Welfare and Non-Governmental Organization (NGO) commonly known as JDC Welfare Org  was established in 2009 by renowned scholar Syed Shanshah Naqvi and some like minded youths of Karachi