Original sentence: She moved to ITV, and went on to present numerous other television programmes including On Your Marks with Quizmania's Greg Scott, "What Will They Think of Next", "Tested to Destruction", "How 2" on CITV, the popular "Better Homes" which began in 1999 and spawned a spin-off "Better Gardens".She was also the newspaper reviewer alongside Nigella Lawson and Gyles Brandreth on Breakfast with Frost.She was awarded an MBE in June 2000
Edited sentence: Being known as one of the finest science and education broadcasters in Britain she moved over to entertainment programming.She caused a stir wearing a short blue dress to the BAFTA awards in 2000, creating a furore in the newspapers and on television about whether or not a woman of 39 should wear such an outfit.She has hosted hundreds of different series on all channels on British television since then and has become known as one of the hardest working and highest paid entertainers in British television.She is regularly asked to guest on the main political programmes and was an occasional newspaper reviewer on Breakfast with Frost.She was awarded an MBE in June 2000 for her services to broadcasting.Such is her bargaining power, she managed to acquire two exclusive contracts with separate channels being exclusive for the afternoons on Channel 4, with ITV owning her services for the rest of the time.Vorderman appeared in controversial photos in men's magazine GQ in 2005 causing an increase in sales of the magazine of 25% according to its editor Dylan Jones.Vorderman remained unrepentant and went on to publish her books 'Detox for Life' and 'Detox Recipes', selling over a million copies in Britain.Vorderman won the TRIC TV Personality of the Year award in 2000 and is often successful in many surveys regarding attractive and popular women in the media.Vorderman's credits are numerous and varied.While at ITV she hosted some of their biggeest shows, regularly achieving 10 million viewers for "Better Homes", "Star Lives", "Tested to Destruction", "How 2" on CITV,  "Better Gardens", "Find a Fortune", "Britain's Brainiest" and the ever popular "Pride of Britain Awards"