Original sentence: Tahari was born in 1952 in Jerusalem as elder son of a Persian Jewish couple, who immigrated to Israel from  Iran and lived then in the transition camp of Al-Qastal,now Mevasseret Tzion
Edited sentence: Tahari was born in 1952 in Jerusalem as elder son of a Persian Jewish couple, who immigrated to Israel from  Iran and lived then in the transition camp of Al-Qastal,now Mevasseret Zion