Original sentence: Lila's original biography states that she was born into the Villanueva circus family in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana in 1890.When Lila finally learns of the circumstances surrounding Lodz's death, she suborns the carnival crew to a mutiny that almost prevents the troupe from meeting with Brother Justin in California
Edited sentence: Lila's original biography states she was born into the Villanueva circus family in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana in 1890.When Lila finally learns of the circumstances surrounding Lodz's death, she suborns the carnival crew to a mutiny that almost preventing the troupe from meeting with Brother Justin in California