Original sentence: Martha Boswell Lloyd (June 9, 1905, Kansas City, Missouri, USA - Jul 2 1958, Peekskill, New York, USA) was a member of legendary Boswell Sisters  and older sister to Connie and Vet
Edited sentence: Martha Boswell Lloyd (June 9, 1905, Kansas City, Missouri, USA - Jul 2 1958, Peekskill, New York, USA) was a member of legendary Boswell Sisters and older sister to Connie and Vet