Original sentence: Plantsbrook School, formerly Riland Bedford, is a secondary school and sixth form college in Sutton Coldfield, on Upper Holland Rd, North Birmingham, England.The school is a technology college and a music college.The school receives its name from Plants Brook, a stream that flows through Sutton Coldfield and passes the school
Edited sentence: Plantsbrook School, formerly Riland Bedford, is found in the humble town of Sutton Coldfield, on Upper Holland Rd, North Birmingham.The school is a technology college and a music college; it is a rare achievement that a school is granted two titles of this nature.The school receives its name from Plants Brook, a lovely mink-full stream that flows through Sutton Coldfield and passes the school