Original sentence: Some adopt a portraiture style, trying to depict fictional lives or people, some engage in mock diaries, such as Fake Steve Jobs and Noni Jones in Harlem  in an anonymous author writes from the perspective of three fictional characters
Edited sentence: Some adopt a portraiture style, trying to depict fictional lives or people, some engage in mock diaries, such as Fake Steve Jobs and Noni Jones in Harlem  in which an anonymous author writes from the perspective of three fictional characters