Original sentence: Optional "multitap" connector allows additional controllers to be connected to the system.Playing networked multiplayer games via LAN often eliminates problems common in Internet play, such as lag and anonymity of players.Starting withSega Dreamcast in 2000, game consoles have also begun to support network gaming, over both the internet and LANs.the two combating cities) and CAVE
Edited sentence: Networked multiplayer games tend to be most enjoyable when played on a LAN because it essentially eliminates problems common in Internet play, such as lag and rude, anonymous players.Optional "multitap" add-on allows additional controllers to be connected to the system.Recently, (Dreamcast in 2000) game consoles have also begun to support network gaming, over both the internet and LANs.This is because it is played over a workspace, house, or other small area and only people directly connected to it can play.the two combatting cities) and CAVE