Original sentence: Sonisphere FestivalAirbourne, Alice in Chains, Alien Ant Farm, Anthrax, Avenged Sevenfold, Bullet for My Valentine, Killing Joke, Lamb of God, Linkin Park, Mastodon, Metallica, Nine Inch Nails, The Sword, Thin Lizzy
Edited sentence: Sonisphere FestivalAirbourne, Alice in Chains, Alien Ant Farm, Anthrax, Avenged Sevenfold, Bullet for My Valentine, Killing Joke, Lamb of God, Limp Bizkit, Mastodon, Metallica, Nine Inch Nails, The Sword, Thin Lizzy