Original sentence: " After Bridwell returned it with extensive editorial changes Beck attempted to draw the rewritten version but dis-satsfied with it he eventually returned the Bridwell version to DC and tore up the artwork he had drawn.At the invitation of E.Beck by then had relocated to Florida where, in his retirement, he produced a regular opinion column for The Comics Journal entitled "The Crusty Curmudgeon".Beck left after issue 10 due to "creative differences" regarding plotlines.Then in 1973 he was the initial artist for the the DC Comics revival of Captain Marvel entitled Shazam
Edited sentence: " After Bridwell returned it with extensive editorial changes Beck attempted to draw the rewritten version but dis-satsfied with it he eventually returned the Bridwell draft to DC and tore up the artwork he had drawn.Beck had by then had relocated to Florida where, in his retirement, he produced a regular opinion column for The Comics Journal entitled "The Crusty Curmudgeon".Beck left after the tenth issue due to "creative differences" regarding plotlines.Subsequently at the invitation of E.Then in 1973 he was the initial artist for the DC Comics' revival of Captain Marvel, titled Shazam.due to trademark issues