Original sentence: Fujimori's Fujishock brought macroeconomic stability and the many privatisations executed during his term raised USD $9 billion.He is credited by many Peruvians for bringing stability to the country after the violence and hyperinflation of the disastrous García years.However, some of the opposition media argue that the long-term effects of his policies were negative, stating that it pushed Peru's economy into a deep recession and it had high social costs.Many Peruvians believe that his government became a dictatorship after the auto-coup, one that was permeated by a network of corruption organized by his associate Montesinos, who now faces dozens of charges that range from embezzlement to drug trafficking to murder (Montesinos is currently on trial in Lima).The opposition also contends that only a small part of the privatizations ever benefitted the Peruvian people, stating that much of the money raised disappeared into Fujimori's patronage machine
Edited sentence: But while Fujishock brought short-term macroeconomic stability, its long-term effects were negative; it pushed Peru's economy into a deep recession from which it has yet to recover.He is credited by many Peruvians for bringing stability to the country after the violence and hyperinflation of the tumultuous García years.In addition, Fujimori's many privatisations were poorly organized and done hastily.Many Peruvians believe that his government became a dictatorship after the auto-coup, one that was permeated by a vast network of corruption organized by his associate Montesinos, who now faces dozens of charges that range from embezzlement to drug trafficking to murder (Montesinos is currently on trial in Lima).Of the estimated USD $9 billion raised in the process, only a small part ever benefitted the Peruvian people; much of the money raised disappeared into Fujimori's patronage machine.The social costs were high, as it generated massive poverty