Original sentence: Born in Shimla, after earning a degree in criminal psychology, Zinta's began her career as a model, television anchor, and commercial actress before breaking into cinema in 1998 with her role in Dil Se, for which she won a Filmfare award (Best Female Debut)
Edited sentence: A very preety girl Born in Shimla, after earning a degree in criminal psychology, Zinta's began her career as a model, television anchor, and commercial actress before breaking into cinema in 1998 with her role in Dil Se, for which she won a Filmfare award (Best Female Debut)