Original sentence: After taking  all three captive, Archy and Lenny's men go to apprehend One Two, who they find in the hands of Yuri's vengeful mercenaries.Lenny then shoots Johnny in the stomach before he can  finish what he says.One Two uncomfortably tries to explain that something happened between him and Bob the previous night, when Mumbles scoffs  that everyone knows that Bob is gay
Edited sentence: After taking all three captive, Archy and Lenny's men go to apprehend One Two, who they find in the hands of Yuri's vengeful mercenaries.Lenny then shoots Johnny in the stomach before he can finish what he says.One Two uncomfortably tries to explain that something happened between him and Bob the previous night, when Mumbles scoffs that everyone knows that Bob is gay