Original sentence: Aqsa "Axa" Parvez  (1991 – December 10, 2007) was the victim of either an alleged honour killing or case of domestic violence  in Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Edited sentence: Aqsa "Axa" Parvez  (1991 – December 10, 2007) was the victim of an apparent honour killing in Mississauga, Ontario, Canada