Original sentence: Nowadays, the village contains a village shop run by volunteers (which itself contains a post office - one of many recently threatened with closure), which achieved second prize in the Best Rural Retailer 2007 competition
Edited sentence: "The Eagle" is well known locally for its Sunday Evening quiz, and for regularly hosting the renowned rock band "The DB's", and hurdy-gurdy legend Graham White.Nowadays, the village contains a village shop run by volunteers (which itself contains a post office - one of many recently threatened with closure), which achieved first prize in the Best Rural Retailer 2009 competition