Original sentence: Fight Like Apes formed on 2 November 2006 when Mary-Kate Geraghty (known as "MayKay"), a former choir singer, and her friends, Jamie Fox (known as "Pockets"), Adrian Mullan and Tom Ryan, all of whom had experience in other bands, came together
Edited sentence: Fight Like Apes formed late 2006 when Mary-Kate Geraghty (known as "MayKay"), a former choir singer, and her friends, Jamie Fox (known as "Pockets"), Adrian Mullan and Tom Ryan, all of whom had experience in other bands, came together