Original sentence: After earning his degree Bush went to work in an entry level position in the international division of Texas Commerce Bank, which was run by Ben Love.In November 1977 he was sent to the Venezuelan capital of Caracas, in South America, to open a new operation for the bank.Love hired the new college graduate for his office, where Bush assisted in drafting much of Love's communications
Edited sentence: After earning his degree Bush went to work in an entry level position in the international division of Texas Commerce Bank, which was run by Ben Love, its chairman.Because Bush was not a business major, he was not accepted into the bank's executive training program.Love quickly snapped up the new college graduate for his office, where Bush assisted in drafting much of Love's communications, as Bush was a capable writer.Nevertheless, due to Jeb Bush's strong performance and Spanish language skills, in November 1977 he was sent to the Venezuelan capital of Caracas, in South America, to open a new operation for the bank