Original sentence: Born in Montreal, Quebec, she has a teaching diploma from the Université du Québec à Trois-Rivières in Special Education and is currently pursuing her Master's Degree in education at Université du Québec à Trois-Rivières.She has lived in her riding for most of her life, and has been active in community work.She has worked as a teacher in the Montreal area and in an Inuit school in northern Quebec.She has worked with organizations alleviating poverty, and has taken part in events such as the Marche des femmes and demonstrations against high tuitions.She was elected Member of Parliament for the riding of Pierrefonds—Dollard in the 2011 Canadian federal election as a member of the New Democratic Party, defeating longtime Liberal MP Bernard Patry
Edited sentence: Born in Montreal, Quebec, Lysane has a teaching diploma from the Université du Québec à Trois-Rivières in Special Education and is currently pursuing her Master's Degree in education at Université du Québec à Trois-Rivières.She has resided in the constituency of Pierrefonds—Dollard for most of her life, and is an active member of the community.She works in a community organization that brings together persons living in poverty with the goal of bettering their living conditions, and has taken part in events such as the Marche des femmes and demonstrations against high tuitions