Original sentence: The city's downtown area is popular throughout the Metro Detroit community sporting several coffee shops, a Cold Stone Creamery, several upscale apparel and home furnishing shops and the consistently best-rated cinemas in Detroit,Peabody's family restaurant, the Birmingham 8 Theatre and the Birmingham Palladium Theatre
Edited sentence: Downtown Birmingham is often considered the place to be seen.The city's downtown area is popular throughout the Metro Detroit community sporting several coffee shops, a Cold Stone Creamery, several upscale apparel and home furnishing shops and the consistently best-rated cinemas in Detroit, the Birmingham 8 Theatre and the Birmingham Palladium Theatre