Original sentence: He takes flying lessons, receives oral sex from his elderly neighbor (albeit reluctantly) after an incident that occurs when he says no to it, attends Korean language classes, learns to play the guitar, and even joins a Persian dating website after he receives a pop-up on one of his computer
Edited sentence: He takes flying lessons, receives oral sex from his elderly neighbor (albeit reluctantly) after an incident that occurs when he says no to it, attends Korean language classes, learns to play the guitar, and even joins a Persian dating website after he receives a pop-up on one of his computers