Original sentence: AKO was established in the late 1990s as an experimental outgrowth of a project headed by then-LTC Nick Justice in GOMO.Each was charged to develop, research and expand the portal to benefit Army Users Worldwide and to grow the system from its less than auspicious roots.Major Bailey also is sometimes credited with bringing the baselines for both projects together and with fashioning a "leader's dashboard" concept that to date has only been partially realized.Major Wells worked on establishing the NIPRNet (unclassified) version and Major Bailey joined the project later to establish and experiment with SIPRNet or Classified versions.The project has run through various incarnations and later project leaders, but still the fundamentals of this system apply...Centralized name spacing of email (with webmail access), white pages, unification of data conduits, central capability of authentication and repudiation of credentials and the ability to remotely access content.Two very early major Project Officers for AKO were MAJ Charlie Wells and MAJ David Bailey
Edited sentence: AKO was established in the late 1990s as an experimental outgrowth of a project of the General Office Management Office.Early Project Officers for AKO were charged to develop, research and expand the portal to benefit Army Users Worldwide and to grow the system from its less than auspicious roots.The project has run through various incarnations and later project leaders, but still the fundamentals of this system apply: centralized name spacing of email (with webmail access), white pages, unification of data conduits, central capability of authentication and repudiation of credentials and the ability to remotely access content