Original sentence: The neutrality of this article is disputed
Edited sentence: Democratic Socialism is deeper entrenched, more religious, more moderate and more electorally sucessful in Britain than it most of the rest of the world.The neutrality of parts of this article is disputed.This is a result of its unusual "bottom up" development, of what several historians(notably Norman Davies) regard as an early resistance to Marxism, and also as a result of it becoming part of the culture in several mining regions (notably in South Wales, County Durham and South Yorkshire) which has given it an unusually strong base from which to work from