Original sentence: Towards the end of 2008, Lostprophets finally began recording what would become The Betrayed in Alabama, self-producing the record with bassist Stuart Richardson (who had produced the self-titled debut album for Attack
Edited sentence: Towards the end of 2008, Lostprophets finally began recording what would become The Betrayed in Alabama, with bassist Stuart Richardson (who had produced the self-titled debut album for Attack