Original sentence: In truth, much of what became the "emo" style of the mid-2000s bore a significant resemblance to the Goth style of the late 80s and 90s as initially popularized by performers including Robert Smith of The Cure.The style of bands like My Chemical Romance, including their use of makeup (particularly black eyeliner) and longish hair covering the face, began to be associated with "emo"
Edited sentence: Much of what became the "emo" style of the mid-2000s bore a significant resemblance to the Goth style of the late 80s and 90s as initially popularized by performers including Robert Smith of The Cure.The style of bands like My Chemical Romance, including their use of makeup (particularly black eyeliner) and longish hair covering the face, began to be associated with "emo", because of this, many people don't actually know what emo is, as it is has been bastardized beyond recognition