Original sentence: Following his observation of Lafontaine, in November 1841, Braid immediately  began experimenting with his own method, and wrote a report entitled "Practical Essay on the Curative Agency of Neuro-Hypnotism"  which he applied to have read before the British Association
Edited sentence: Following his observation of Lafontaine, in November 1841, Braid immediately began experimenting with his own method, and wrote a report entitled "Practical Essay on the Curative Agency of Neuro-Hypnotism"  which he applied to have read before the British Association