Original sentence: Although Buckingham and Nicks deserve credit for contributing to much of Fleetwood Mac's later commercial success, Mick Fleetwood's determination to keep the band together was essential to Fleetwood Mac's longevity as a band and their lasting international success.Besides his work as a drummer, he also helped form the different incarnations of his band Fleetwood Mac.In 1974, he met and invited Lindsey Buckingham and Stevie Nicks to join Fleetwood Mac
Edited sentence: Although some credit Buckingham and Nicks for much of Fleetwood Mac's success, without Mick Fleetwood gathering them all together on a major record label along with the songwriting and singing talents of Christine McVie, their success was unsure.Besides being an accomplished drummer, he is also known as one of the best organizers of musicians helping to organize MANY incarnations of his band Fleetwood Mac.But as a band, this incarnation of Fleetwood Mac would go on to be a legendery group and became one of the best selling bands of all time.In 1974, he met and introduced Lindsey Buckingham and Stevie Nicks to join himself and his current bandmates Christie McVie and John Mcvie.They were also the only mixture of British and American musicians in a major group