Original sentence: Several Muslim observers and bloggers claim that Muslims are in the majority and disagree with the above census numbers, without providing factual data supporting their claims.Some critics asserted that the Haile Selassie regime had been fabricating the census to present Ethiopia as a Christian country to the outside world, stating that Islam made up 50% of the total population in 1991, based on the 1984 census commissioned by the Derg regime.There is also a substantial Muslims demographic, representing around a third of the population
Edited sentence: Analysts believe the Muslim population are the majority and disagree with the Ethiopian governments claims.Haile Selassie regime had fabricating the census to present Ethiopia as a Christian country to the outside world.The writers of Ethiopia: a country study revealed that Islam made up 50% of the total population in 1991 based on the 1984 census commissioned by the Derg regime.There is also a substantial Muslims demographic