Original sentence: He scored his 21st triumph, over five victory ace Didier Lecour-Grandmaison, and received his native Bavaria's Military Order of Max Joseph, all on the 11th The Pour le Merite followed on the 17th
Edited sentence: He scored his 21st triumph, over five victory ace Didier Lecour-Grandmaison, and received his native Bavaria's Military Order of Max Joseph, all on the 11th; the Max Joseph made him a lifetime knight with a pension.The Pour le Merite followed on the 17th