Original sentence: She started playing country fiddle at a young age, borrowing a violin from her brother, Charles Raymond, and she practiced for long hours
Edited sentence: Her first stage performance took place when she was just four years old.Her passion for music began early, fueled by her family's musical talents and interests.This, remember, was during a time when women were not held in the same regard as men in the fiddle playing community.When she was younger, she used her older brother Raymond's fiddle, and by the time she reached high-school she was determined to be a great fiddle player