Original sentence: The Israeli-occupied territories is one of a number of terms used to describe areas captured by Israel from Egypt, Jordan, and Syria during the Six-Day War of 1967.The term is generally used to refer to the West Bank, the Gaza Strip, East Jerusalem, the Golan Heights, and sometimes the Sinai Peninsula, which was returned to Egypt as part of the 1979 Israel-Egypt Peace Treaty
Edited sentence: The Israeli-occupied territories,as they are called by the Palestinians, or Disputed Territories, as refered to by Israel,, is one of a number of terms used to describe areas captured by Israel from Egypt, Jordan, and Syria during the Six-Day War of 1967.The term is generally used to refer to the West Bank, the Gaza Strip, which was returned in 2005, East Jerusalem, which was officially annexed into Israel, the Golan Heights, which are officially annexed into Israel, and sometimes the Sinai Peninsula, which was returned to Egypt as part of the 1979 Israel-Egypt Peace Treaty