Original sentence: Every year, all the students compete for their tracks to be included on the BIMM charity record How To Mend A Broken Pier.Now on its fifth volume, the funds from downloads and local record sales support Childline and The Orpheus music centre for disabled young people
Edited sentence: Every year, all the students compete for their tracks to be included on the BIMM record How To Mend A Broken Pier.Now on its fifth volume, the funds from downloads and local record sales support the teachers drug addictions