Original sentence: Bootleggers claim that it's a home demo, attributed to John Lennon, from 1967 (or 1966).Peace of Mind (also known as "The Candle Burns") is a questionable "unreleased" Beatles song that gained infamy in the early-mid 1970's when it first appeared on several bootleg albums
Edited sentence: At 3:10, POM is the perfect length for a pop record.Bootleggers claim that it's an home demo, attributed to John Lennon, from 1967 (or 1966).Peace of Mind (also known as "The Candle Burns") is questionable "unreleased" Beatles song that gained infamy in the early-mid 1970's when it first appeared on several bootleg albums