Original sentence: Food Network executives, Bob Tuschman and Susie Fogelson, are joined by Bobby Flay as the selection committee for this season.Food Network executives, Bob Tuschman and Susie Fogelson, were joined by Bobby Flay as the Selection Committee for this season, which was filmed early this year in Miami, Florida and New York, New York
Edited sentence: Food Network executives Bob Tuschman and Susie Fogelson are joined by Bobby Flay as the selection committee for this season.Food Network executives Bob Tuschman and Susie Fogelson were joined by Bobby Flay as the Selection Committee for this season, which was filmed early this year in Miami, Florida and New York, New York