Original sentence: In 2005, The Reason replaced Sean Palmer with Ronson Armstrong on bass and started work on their next release.The album combined aggressive pop with punk that triggered comparisons to Grade and early Get Up Kids.The band replaced Mikalauskas with Jeremy Widerman on guitar shortly afterwards, and went on tour.They attracted the attention of Juno winning producer Gavin Brown (Billy Talent, Three Days Grace, Thornley), who agreed to work with The Reason “as a labour of love” after hearing the demo.They released their first full-length album, Ravenna, on Smallman Records in 2004, which helped them join tours with Alexisonfire, Murphy’s Law, No Use for a Name and Strung Out, and shows at CMW, Wakefest, Edgefest, and Wakestock.They soon signed to Smallman Records after the label witnessed the band performing a concert.With Brown's help, The Reason’s album, "Things Couldn't Be Better" was released Tuesday, March 6th 2007
Edited sentence: In 2005, The Reason replaced Sean Palmer with Ronson Armstrong on bass and prepared themselves for their next release.It's poppy, upbeat, yet still absolutely the same The Reason we know and love.The band replaced Mikalauskas with Jeremy Widerman on guitar and the band took their jet propelled stage show on the road.The new album combined aggressive pop with unbridled punk that triggered comparisons to Grade and early Get Up Kids.They released their first full-length album, Ravenna, on Smallman Records in 2004, an album strong enough to land them tours with Alexisonfire, Murphy’s Law, No Use for a Name and Strung Out, and shows at CMW, Wakefest, Edgefest, and Wakestock.They soon signed to Smallman Records after the label witnessed a stage show so full of energy that it ended with a post show hospital trip for White.This work paid off when they attracted the attention of Juno winning producer Gavin Brown (Billy Talent, Three Days Grace, Thornley), who agreed to work with The Reason “as a labour of love” after hearing the demo.With Brown at the helm, The Reason’s new album, "Things Couldn't Be Better" is scheduled for release Tuesday, March 6th 2007.With the release of "Things Couldn't Be Better" , a new sound, quite like the song "The Joke And The Gentleman" off of their previous full length CD "Ravenna"