Original sentence: Twenge has responded to these criticisms.Twenge, in regard to her work on smart phone usage among Millennials, has also been criticized for cherry-picking data only from studies that support her idea, presenting data that is correlative rather than causal, and for focusing on averaged and aggregate data rather than taking social contexts into account
Edited sentence: Twenge, in regard to her work on smart phone usage among Millennials, has also been criticized for cherry-picking data only from studies that support her idea, presenting data that is correlative rather than causal, and for focusing on averaged and aggregate data rather than taking social contexts into account; these criticisms have been rebutted by Twenge