Original sentence: Antimilitarism, a staple of social democratic propaganda and always cherished by the Federacion, became now a priority for many, socialists and others.Atrocities against defenceless populations became common currency all over Balkans, preparing vicious wars that separated ethnic amalgams with rivers of blood, strengthened their economic, political and cultural dependence, gave to the military prime role in the state and to the state unprecedented power upon society, and finally cemented the translation of social conflicts into national terms.Balkan military adventures started long before and finished long after the World War I.In September 1912 the conflagration between the Ottomans and the Christian Balkan Powers broke out
Edited sentence: Antimilitarism, a staple of socialdemocratic propaganda and always cherished by the Federacion, became now a priority for many, socialists and others.Atrocities against defenceless populations became common currency all over Balkans,  preparing vicious wars that separated ethnic amalgams with rivers of blood, strengthened their economic, political and cultural dependence, gave to the military prime role in the state and to the state unprecedented power upon society, and finally cemented the translation of social conflicts into national terms.Balkan military adventures started long before and finished long after the Great War.In September 1912 the conflagration between the Ottomans and the so called Christian Balkan Powers broke out