Original sentence: Gary Cao (born July 9, 1979 in Malaysia), also known as Cao Ge is a Malaysian singer.His big break occurred with the release of his Mandarin version of "Superwoman", a song initially recorded by Karyn White.In 2006 he won Hong Kong TVB's Newcomer Singer award and has since released 2 albums
Edited sentence: Born on 9th July 1979, Malaysia, Gary Chaw (Cao Ge) got a promising start when he won Hong Kong TVB's new comer singer award in 2006 and since then has released 2 albums, the latest titled "Superman".He worked hard to get his music recognized and even got rejected along the way because music producers and companies thought his music quality was not good enough and some even commented on the way he looks and said that his looks wouldn't make him successful.His music of sincerity touched many hearts and won him countless fans and awards.His powerful vocal range has awed many people, and is one of the extremely few current Chinese POP singers who actually fits the title of a "Real Singer" who don't rely on good looks but real skill and talent.His success today in the music industry has proven a lot of people wrong and has become an encouragement to those who wish to pursue their dreams.It is learnt that he struggled a lot like many other famous singers before becoming popular with his mandarin version of "Superwoman" by.Karyn White.Like he says "spread music, spread love"