Original sentence: Bernard Manning (13 August 1930 – 18 June 2007) was an stand-up comedian from Manchester, in North West England, rated as one of the 100 greatest comedians of all time (29th) in a poll conducted by the television station Channel 4
Edited sentence: Bernard Manning (13 August 1930 – 18 June 2007) was an English stand-up comedian from Manchester, in North West England, rated as one of the 100 greatest comedians of all time (29th) in a poll conducted by the television station Channel 4