Original sentence: Established in the year 1969, Sher-E-Bangla Nagar Govt Boys High School is one of the older schools in the city of Dhaka.In co-curricular activities, the school does not have regular clubs that other schools have.It is situated in Agargaon, just beside BCS computer city.Sher-E-Bangla Nagar Government Boys High School is a Public secondary school located in Dhaka, Bangladesh.The school campus campus includes a small playground and a pond.The school is ranked in group B as an average government school
Edited sentence: Established in the year 1969,Sher-E-Bangla Nagar Govt Boys High School is one of the older schools in the city of Dhaka.It is situated in Agargaon,just beside BCS computer city.It may be ranked as an average govt school,but it did and still do produce few talented graduates every year.The school has a nice campus,a not-so-big yet effective playground, and one   pond.This is one of the better schools situated in Dhaka,Bangladesh and it deserves a little recognition.When it comes to co-curricular activities,the students are not that smart as it lacks regular clubs that the better schools have