Original sentence: The protests led by Burzhanadze began on May 21, 2011 when over 10,000 Georgians attended a demonstration in Tbilisi demanding Georgian President Mikheil Saakashvili's resignation
Edited sentence: In May 2011, peaceful protests dubbed the 'Silver Revolution' took place, people were protesting against pensions, human rights abuses, food prices but these were met with Georgian Security Forces led by by President Mikheil Saakashvili attacking innocent people.The protests began on May 21, 2011 when over 10,000 Georgians attended a demonstration in Tbilisi demanding Georgian President Mikheil Saakashvili's resignation