Original sentence: A battery explosion is caused by the misuse or malfunction of a battery, such as the recharging of a non-rechargable battery.A short circuit malfunction in a battery placed in parallel with other batteries can cause its neighbour to discharge its maximum current into the faulty cell, leading to overheating and possible explosion.Battery explosions are most likely to occur with car batteries where a short circuit can generate currents of high magnitude
Edited sentence: A battery explosion is a disastrous event caused by the misuse or malfunction of a battery, such as the recharging of a non-rechargable battery.A short circuit malfunction in a battery placed in parallel with other batteries will cause its neighbour to discharge its maximum current into the faulty cell, leading to overheating and possible explosion.Battery explosions are most likely to occur with car batteries where a short circuit of which can generate currents of high magnitude