Original sentence: In spite of the widely held belief that violence is antithetical to Jesus' teachings, Christian adherents have at times persecuted, tortured, and killed others for refusing to believe in their type of Christianity
Edited sentence: In a remote hindu village after the tsuami of 2004, a groups of christain aid workers refused aid unitl the villagers converted.In spite of the widely held belief that violence is antithetical to Christ's teachings, Christian adherents have at times persecuted, tortured, and killed others for refusing to believe in their type of Christianity.Many people have been persecuted, tortured, raped and killed in the Islamic world, Indian Subcontinent and the Far East because they have converted to Christianity.That is why people from that part of the world who have converted to Christianity have left to Europe, the United States, Canada and Australia, because their native third world countries have laws against Christian conversions.however, the reason why these laws came into place, was because of bribary against the people, so that it was either convert and get food or do not convert and not get food