Original sentence: In the midst of battle, Dart's pendent changes him into the Red-Eyed Dragoon.The group then run through a forest where they find the dragons nest and are attacked by Greham, the man who kiled Lavitz's father.The party defeats Melbu, but it is Zieg and Rose who truly destroy him.When the party reaches the moon, they are individually battled by their past, and finally, they reach Shana at its core, but before battling and defeating the Super Virage.When they are attacked, a Giganto, (named Kongol), is aiding the forces and they must take care of it
Edited sentence: In the midst of battle, Dart's pendent changes him into the Dragoon of Fire.The group then run through a forest where they find the dragons nest and are attacked by the man who kiled lavitz's father Greham.The party defeats Melbu, but it is Zieg and Rose who truly destroy him, and they both go to Hell to keep Melbu in check.This IS the best game ever.When the party reaches the moon, they are individually battled by their past, and finally, they reach Shana at it's core, but before battling and defeating the Super Virage.When they are attacked, a giganto, (named Kongol), is aiding the forces and they must take care of it