Original sentence: His wife, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was also very much involved in social issues, including temperance, the abolition of slavery and, most especially, women's rights and female suffrage.Stanton was well known as a orator and writer, and used these skills as a journalist, attorney, and politician
Edited sentence: His wife, Elizabeth Cady Stanton was also heavily involved in social issues, including abolition of slavery and women's rights.Stanton was well known as a dynamic orator and capable writer, and used these skills as a journalist, attorney, and politician