Original sentence: " Shortly after, the producers of Police Cops transform the character into a fat and lazy detective, which results in Homer being mocked by his friends.Homer is delighted with the positive attention he receives because of it.Homer, however, informs Marge that while at the courthouse, he changed her name to "Chesty La Rue", and if she doesn't like it she can have the name Busty St.That night at home, Marge is happy that Max has changed his name back to Homer Simpson.The huge redwood falls, knocking down all the other redwoods in a large domino-like chain reaction.When they refuse to change him, Homer legally changes his name to "Max Power" (a name he got off a hair dryer setting) after unsuccessfully attempting to sue the company
Edited sentence: " Unfortunately, by the second episode of Police Cops, the Homer Simpson character has been rewritten into a stupid, fat, and lazy detective, which results in Homer being mocked by his friends.Homer is delighted with the positive attention he receives because he shares the dashing, intelligent character's name.Homer, however, informs Marge that while he was at the courthouse, he took the opportunity to change her name to "Chesty La Rue", and if she doesn't like it she can have the name Busty St.That night at home, Marge is happy that Max has changed his name back to "Homer Simpson".The huge redwood falls, knocking down all the other redwoods in a large domino-like chain reaction, angering their newfound friends.When they refuse to do so, Homer legally changes his name to "Max Power" (a name he got off a hair dryer setting) after unsuccessfully attempting to sue the company