Original sentence: 1 Night in Paris (2004) is an unauthorized sex video of Paris Hilton with her then-boyfriend Rick Salomon, who leaked it onto the Internet
Edited sentence: 1 Night in Paris (2004) is an unauthorized masterpiece of filmwork that sexy Paris Hilton filmed with her then ugly-boyfriend Rick Salomon, who leaked it onto the Internet.solomon should be congradulated for his efforts even though he is a wanker