Original sentence: Domininc Monaghan - Merry the hobbit from Lord of the Rings was born in Heaton Moor.It has some of the best facilities in the region due to a unique sporting set up featuring Rugby, Cricket, Lacrosse and Tennis facilities in a multi million pound development.The Heaton Moor Rugby club has been representing the area in the Rugby fraternity for over 100 years
Edited sentence: Domininc Monaghan - Merry the Hobbit from Lord of Rings was born in Heaton Moor.For over 100 years Heaton Moor Rugby club has been representing the area in the Rugby fraternity.Lucky enough to boast some of the best facilities in the region due to a unique sporting set up featuring Rugby, Cricket, Lacrosse and Tennis facilities in a multi million pound development, the future looks secure for this promising club