Original sentence: On December 7 2003, HBO aired an epic six-and-a-half hour adaptation of Tony Kushner's acclaimed Broadway play Angels in America, directed by Mike Nichols.On January 7  2004 - two months after her split from Billy Crudup - Parker gave birth to their son, William Atticus.Parker played Harper Pitt, the valium-addicted wife of a gay lawyer in the closet, and - among its many awards - Parker received the Golden Globe and Emmy awards for Best Supporting Actress in a Miniseries.The miniseries - about a group of lost souls in New York during the AIDS epidemic of the '80s - was internationally acclaimed by many critics
Edited sentence: On December 7 2003, HBO aired what would become the biggest event of the year in television: an epic six-and-a-half hour adaptation of Tony Kushner's acclaimed Broadway play Angels in America, directed by Mike Nichols.On January 7  2004 - two months after her split from Billy Crudup - Parker gave birth to a healthy baby boy, William Atticus.Parker played Harper Pitt, the valium-addicted wife of a closeted lawyer, and - among its many awards - Parker received the Golden Globe and Emmy awards for Best Supporting Actress in a Miniseries.The miniseries - about a group of lost souls in New York during the AIDS epidemic of the '80s - was internationally acclaimed