Original sentence: ( see International Movie Database).(see International Move Database).(see www.He also made the music to Revolution Software's adventure games In Cold Blood and the first two Broken Swords (see International Movie Database).He composed the incidental music for the first series of Boon.His film work includes Hillary and Jackie for which he was nominated for an Academy Award, "Touching Wild Horses"  and Shopgirl (see International Movie Database Pheloung entry & Wikipedia Phelong entry).Pheloung's other work includes music for the Sydney Opera House's Twentieth Birthday Celebrations and he contributed to the music for the film, Truly, Madly, Deeply in which he also appeared.uk  He has a particular passion for the Australian team
Edited sentence: He also made the music to Revolution Software's adventure games In Cold Blood and the first two Broken Swords.He has a particular passion for the Australian team.His film work includes Hillary and Jackie for which he was nominated for an Academy Award, "Touching Wild Horses"  and Shopping.Pheloung's other work includes music for the Sydney Opera House's Twentieth Birthday Celebrations and he contributed to the music for the film, Truly, Madly, Deeply in which he also appeared.. He composed the incidental music for the first series of Boon..