Original sentence: Equilibrium is a 2002 action/science fiction film written and directed by Kurt Wimmer.However, it has scored 7.7 out of 10 on the Internet Movie Database, voted for by viewers
Edited sentence: Equilibrium, the greatest movie of all time (FACT), is a 2002 action/science fiction film written and directed by Kurt Wimmer.However, it has scored 7.7 out of 10 on the Internet Movie Database, voted for by viewers, whose opinions are a piece of crap because it deserves 10 out of 10 (FACT)