Original sentence: A subset of industrial agriculture, and intensive agriculture, farms producing animals this way are also known as confined animal feeding operations (CAFOs), concentrated animal feeding operations, or intensive livestock operations (ILOs).Factory farming describes the raising of farm animals indoors under conditions of extremely restricted mobility.It refers to a technique of intensive farming, describing the large scale, confined industrialized production of livestock and poultry.The animals don't mind, according to Faison:.The origin of the term factory farm is not clear, although the Oxford English Dictionary attributes the first recorded use to an American journal of economics in 1890, while it didn't enter pejorative use until the 1960s.The term is frequently used by animal welfare activists and the media
Edited sentence: According to Faison:.Factory farming, also known as intensive farming, industrial agriculture, and intensive agriculture, refers to the industrialized production of livestock, poultry, fish, and crops.Farms producing animals this way are also known as confined or concentrated animal feeding operations (CAFOs), and intensive livestock operations (ILOs).The origin of the term factory farm is not clear, although the Oxford English Dictionary attributes the first recorded use to an American journal of economics in 1890, while it did not enter pejorative use until the 1960s