Original sentence: "[Espuelas]...will set a goal at one meeting, and by the time the next one rolls around, we've made tremendous progress....Each meeting has a clear goal -- to deliver quarterly results, to announce a major initiative or partnership, to clarify our strategic vision.But that was part of the encouragement -- to think that something so important could be managed, and all the mistakes that were made and the chaos of the moment.I bring that up as a metaphor -- not having information, not having clarity, the stakes being very high
Edited sentence: "[Espuelas]...will set a goal at one meeting, and by the time the next one rolls around, we've made tremendous progress....Each meeting has a clear goal—to deliver quarterly results, to announce a major initiative or partnership, to clarify our strategic vision.But that was part of the encouragement—to think that something so important could be managed, and all the mistakes that were made and the chaos of the moment.I bring that up as a metaphor—not having information, not having clarity, the stakes being very high