Original sentence: 30% of FATA is inaccessible both politically and administratively.Further there is only one doctor for every 8,189 people.Its literacy rate is 17%, well below the 45% in Pakistan as a whole.Its total irrigated land is roughly 1,000 square kilometres.Only 43% of its people have access to clean drinking water.Only three percent of females receive any education.There is one hospital bed for every 2,327 people in the FATA, compared to one in 1,450 in Pakistan as a whole
Edited sentence: Its literacy rate is 17% against 45% in Pakistan’s settled areas.Its total irrigated land is 1,000 square kilometres.Moreover, for a population of 8,189 there is one doctor.Only 30% of FATA is still inaccessible both politically and administratively.Only 43% people have access to clean drinking water.Only three percent females receive some form of education.There is one bed in hospitals for 2,327 people whereas in Pakistan there are 1,450 people for one bed