Original sentence: A former National Park Ranger at the Statue of Liberty and the Ellis Island Immigration Museum, and currently a columnist-reporter for Irish Music magazine of Dublin, Dan is a contributor to Britain’s foremost folk song publication, The Living Tradition
Edited sentence: A former National Park Ranger at the Statue of Liberty and theEllis Island Immigration Museum, and currently a columnist-reporter for Irish Music magazine of Dublin, Dan is a contributor to Britain’s foremost folk song publication, The Living Tradition