Original sentence: According to the Oil Pollution Act of 1990, British Petroleum was to be given full responsibility for the situation and have a plan in place to prevent spills that may occur.The resulting ecological damage to coastline states prompted various public criticism, with some demands that Obama take more significant action in containing the oil spill
Edited sentence: According to the Oil Pollution Act of 1990, British Petroleum was to be given full priority of the situation.Public outrage came as the President did not muster a significant force to handle the issue for several weeks, leading to accusations of neglect.The resulting ecological damage to coastline states prompted the public to demand that Obama make significant action in containing the oil spill