Original sentence: Practically all sightings of rods are based on video evidence, due to the propensity of video cameras to produce characteristic stroboscopic artifacts when imaging rapidly flying animals, especially insects, but also including birds.Rods appear to be observational artifacts produced by rapidly flying animals.They appear to be anywhere from 5 inches to 1 meter in length, and it is proposed by that they have a thin membrane across their axis that is used for propulsion through the air, in a manner similar to the way a cuttlefish uses its fins
Edited sentence: Practically all sightings of rods are based on video evidence, and some argue it is due to the propensity of video cameras to produce characteristic stroboscopic artifacts when imaging rapidly flying animals, especially insects, but also including birds.Rods are supposedly explained by observational artifacts produced by rapidly flying animals.They appear to be anywhere from 5 inches to 15 meter in length, and it is proposed by that they have a thin membrane across their axis that is used for propulsion through the air, in a manner similar to the way a cuttlefish uses its fins