Original sentence: The supplier has been widely criticised for failing to adequately plan for and construct sufficient electrical generating capacity.. Part of the reason is also due the lack of skill shortages experienced in the country
Edited sentence: Affirmative action underpinned by the current goverments in-ability to deal with crime has lead to a mass exodus of skilled South Africans.The supplier has been widely criticised for failing to adequately plan for and construct sufficient electrical generating capacity.. The main reason for this is the lack of skill indivduals and the goverments unwillingness to invest in South Africa's ailing infrastructure.Whilst the short sightedness of the goverment in investing in armaments rather than the countries infrastructure has now really started to have an effect on South africa.com/news/809800.htm</ref>.p://business