Original sentence: A minority of Pro-Trek debaters, however, doubted the authenticity of AOTC:ICS, claiming that the information in it was invalid because it contradicted other canon sources.AOTC:ICS had a major effect on some of the debaters because, unlike most other sources, it gave extensive statistics on Firepower, Shield Dissipation and Power Generation, instead of the more usual qualitative descriptions.Net - A website by Michael Wong comparing the two franchises.Strangely, some Star Wars fans also disliked part of the book.Technologically-related debate took an important turn in 2002 due to the publication of Attack of the Clones: Incredible Cross Sections, better known by its acronyms AOTC:ICS or EP2:ICS.These took to questioning or even loudly deriding the author's objectivity, scientific competence (a quality for which he had specifically been hired by Lucasfilm) and even his personal integrity
Edited sentence: A few fanatical Pro-Trek debaters, however, doubted the authenticity of AOTC:ICS, claiming that the information in it was invalid because it contradicted other canon sources (despite the fact that the author took similar flaming from fanatical Star Wars followers for ignoring portions of the Expanded Universe in favor of canonical evidence).AOTC:ICS had a major effect on some of the debaters because, unlike most other sources, it gave extensive statistics on Firepower, Shield Dissipation and Power Generation, instead of the more usual and fuzzy qualitative descriptions.Hans Jenssen, Richard Chasemore  Incredible Cross-Sections (Star Wars, Episode I: The Phantom Menace)  Dorling Kindersley Publishing, 2002.ISBN 078943962X.Net - A website by Michael Wong comparing the two franchises in their depiction of science, technology and society.Reynolds,David West.Some of the debate by the fans took an important turn in 2002 due to the publication of Attack of the Clones: Incredible Cross Sections, better known by its acronyms AOTC:ICS or EP2:ICS.Some on the pro-Trek side took to questioning or even loudly deriding the author's objectivity, scientific competence (a quality for which he had specifically been hired by Lucasfilm) and even his personal integrity