Original sentence: Conferences comparable to the CAA, such as the Southern Conference the West Coast Conference, had 12 and 24 players drafted, respectively.In the 2006 MLB Draft, 28 CAA players were selected, including 3 from VCU - Harold Mozingo (RHP, KC, overall pick #167), Scott Sizemore (2B, DET, overall pick #142), and Michael Gibbs (RHP, COL, overall pick #498)
Edited sentence: In 2006, the CAA was responsible for 28 total draftees, and VCU itself offered 3 - Harold Mozingo (RHP, KC, overall pick #167), Scott Sizemore (2B, DET, overall pick #142), & Michael Gibbs (RHP, COL, overall pick #498).These numbers can be compared with the total draftees presented by both the Southern Conference (12), and the West Coast Conference (24) to see that VCU Baseball has become a respectable contributor to the sport and to Major League Baseball's pool of young talent