Original sentence: Before her work became well known, Dewdney provided for her family of four and their dogs by working as a waitress, a rural postal carrier, and a remedial-language, art, and history teacher at a junior boarding school for dyslexic boys with her partner, Reed Duncan.Dewdney lived in the home until her death on September 3, 2016.She and Duncan had two children and lived in Chester, Vermont, near her sister, parents and nephews until her death at age 50 from brain cancer in later 2016.They bought an 18th-century farm house, which they had remodeled by Dewdney's brother in-law
Edited sentence: Anna lived in the home right up until her death on September 3rd, 2016.Before her work became well known, Dewdney provided for her family of 4 and their dogs by working hard as a waitress, a rural postal carrier, and as a remedial-language, art, and history teacher at a junior boarding school for dyslexic boys with her partner, Reed Duncan.She and her partner Reed Duncan had two children and lived in Chester, Vermont, near her sister, parents and nephews until her death at age 50 from brain cancer in later 2016.They bought a 18th century farm house, which they had remodled by Anna's brother in-law