Original sentence: However, a significant number of Israelis, and many in the rest of the world, feel that his recent actions have been damaging the peace process.Sharon's actions during the 1982 Lebanon War have also led to persistent charges that he was responsible for war crimes
Edited sentence: However, a significant number of Israelis, as well as much of the rest of the world, consider some of his actions to have been war crimes, and feel that his recent actions have been damaging the peace process.Most infamous were his actions during the 1982 Lebanon War (see below)