Original sentence: Frank Tyson saw 'a spare, stooped old man, dressed immmaculately in a pin-stripe suit' telling the young Colin Cowdrey "..when you reach Australia, just remember one thing - Hate the Bastards.Soon after the voyage began Colin Cowdrey, Peter Loader, Jim McConnon, Keith Andrew and Frank Tyson were warned by Len Hutton that they were secondary players who were expected to play little part in the Test matches
Edited sentence: Frank Tyson saw "a spare, stooped old man, dressed immmaculately in a pin-stripe suit" telling the young Colin Cowdrey "..when you reach Australia, just remember one thing - Hate the Bastards.Soon after the voyage began Vic Wilson, Colin Cowdrey, Peter Loader, Jim McConnon, Keith Andrew and Frank Tyson were warned by Len Hutton that they were secondary players who were expected to play little part in the Test matches