Original sentence: " And Martin Williamson, writing on Cricinfo, labelled this book as one of the two worst books of the year, saying it ‘polluted 2006.But David Frith, writing in The Cricketer, said: "Unfortunately, Roland Perry’s work here is anything but confidence-inspiring.Cricket historian J Neville Turner said: ‘Miller’s Luck is up there with the great cricket biographies.He is an opportunistic author, Don Bradman, Shane Warne and Steve Waugh being among his previous subjects, together with a book on Australia's captains which gave the world nothing that the painstaking Ray Robinson had not already dealt with, apart from the update...the book is strewn with errors that undermine confidence in the work as a whole
Edited sentence: ' And Martin Williamson, writing on Cricinfo, labelled this book as one of the two worst books of the year, saying it ‘polluted 2006.But David Frith, writing in The Cricketer, said: 'Unfortunately, Roland Perry’s work here is anything but confidence-inspiring.Esteemed cricket historian J Neville Turner said: ‘Miller’s Luck is up there with the great cricket biographies.He is an opportunistic author, Don Bradman, Shane Warne and Steve Waugh being among his previous subjects, together with a book on Australia's captains which gave the world nothing that the painstaking Ray Robinson had not already dealt with, apart from the update