Original sentence: In 1723, some 33 Palatine families, dissatisfied under Governor Hunter’s rule, migrated from Schoharie, NY, to Tulpehocken, Berks County, PA, where other Palatines had settled.In New York, under the new Governor, Robert Hunter, Palatines worked for British authorities and produced tar and pitch for the Royal Navy in return for their safe passage.They also served as a buffer between the French and Natives on the frontier and the English colonies
Edited sentence: In 1723, some 33 Palatine families, dissatisfied under Governor Hunter’s rule, migrated from Schoharie, NY, along the Susquehanna River to Tulpehocken, Berks County, PA, where other Palatines had settled.In New York, under the new Governor, Robert Hunter, Palatines lived in camps and worked for British authorities to produce tar and pitch for the Royal Navy in return for their safe passage.They also served as a buffer on the frontier separating the French and Native Americans from the English colonies