Original sentence: It is reputed by some to host the world's largest collection of text files.Totse became available on the World Wide Web in 1997, and the dial-up BBS system was discontinued in  spring 1998
Edited sentence: After posting a particularly whiny message visible to anyone who attempted to log in as a new user, the system quickly vanished, only to be reincarnated on the WWW, suffering the same problems as the original system, all directly attributable to the sysop's ineptitude.Totse became available on the World Wide Web in 1997, and the dial-up BBS system was discontinued in  spring 1998 after a particularly vicious flame war between two then-prominent users was allowed to rage out of control for weeks while the sysop was absent (as the sysop, both then and now, prefers to ignore his own system to its detriment)