Original sentence: Balin, in search of a drummer for the band he was organizing (which becamed Jefferson Airplane) convinced Spence to switch instruments and groups.To make up for his poaching of Spence, Balin suggested that they contact drummer Greg Elmore and guitarist-singer Gary Duncan, who had played together in a group called The Brogues.“Jim Murray and David Freiberg came up with the name
Edited sentence: "Jim Murray and David Freiberg came up with the name.Balin, in search of a drummer for the band he was organizing (which became Jefferson Airplane) convinced Spence to switch instruments and groups.To make up for his poaching of Spence, Balin suggested that they contact drummer Greg Elmore and guitarist–singer Gary Duncan, who had played together in a group called The Brogues