Original sentence: Concerning East Timor, Paul Keating received some criticism from Human Rights groups and Nobel Peace Prize winner José Ramos Horta over his friendship with Suharto, and the Keating government's policy of aiding the Indonesian Military in their occupation of East Timor.East Timor had gained a higher profile in the media after the Santa Cruz massacre.Keating was criticised for prioritising close ties with President Suharto and the signing of the Timor Gap Treaty over human rights issues
Edited sentence: Concerning East Timor, Paul Keating received some criticism from Human Rights groups and Nobel Peace Prize winner José Ramos Horta over his friendship with Suharto, and the Keating governments policy of aiding the Indonesian Military when they were responsible for the deaths of thousands of East Timorese, including 400 at the Santa Cruz massacre.Keating was criticised for maintaining close ties with President Suharto and supported Indonesia's claims on East Timor, while prioritising oil exploration in the area and the signing of the Timor Gap Treaty