Original sentence: A recent controversy surrounds Michael Moore's public comments about the Iraq insurgency.Accusations have been made that some scenes in Moore's documentaries were staged or scripted without being clearly labeled so, and that some scenes were edited to alter the original intent of the speaker in the video.Detractors claim this is a show of affinity, while supporters say Moore was simply providing perspective on the Iraq situation.He has been praised as someone who has passionately fought for the working class all his life and has proved himself time and time again.His website presents some of his sources and his counterarguments to the points most commonly made against him.In a memo released on his personal website, Moore described the insurgents as "Minutemen".Moore has set up a "war room"  to respond to some of the criticisms of his most recent film, Fahrenheit 9/11.Some consider his criticism of the Bush Administration to be unfair and even "unpatriotic", or challenge the factual accuracy of his books and movies, as well as criticizing the use of carefully turned visual and textual suggestions in his works.The radical right-wing Christian group Focus on the Family published Moore's home address  in a July 2004 newsletter
Edited sentence: " Many point out the factual inaccuracies in his books and movies, and criticize the use of carefully turned visual and textual suggestions in his works.A recent controversy surrounds Michael Moore's public support of the Iraq insurgency.Accusations have been made that some scenes in Moore's documentaries were staged or scripted without being clearly labeled so, and some scenes were edited to alter the original intent of the speaker in the video.He has passionately fought for the working class all his life and has proved himself time and time again.In a memo released on his personal website, Moore describes the insurgents, who are fighting democracy in Iraq, as "Minutemen".Moore has set up a "war room"  to respond to some of the criticisms of his most recent film, Fahrenheit 9/11; his website contains counterarguments to several points made against him.Some consider his criticism of the Bush Administration to be unfair and even "unpatriotic.The radical right wing Christian group Focus on the Family published Moore's home address  in a July 2004 newsletter