Original sentence: Dorian, whose parents are physicians, Eliot Reid, who works as a stripper to pay her way through school, and the innocent Eliot Reid who loses her inhibitions when intoxicated.The students include J.discovers that his girlfriend, Eliot, became sexualy active with another intern
Edited sentence: Mike discovers that his girlfriend, Eliot, became sexualy active with another intern.The students include Mike Bonnert, whose parents are physicians, Eliot Reid, who works as a stripper to pay her way through school, and the innocent Eliot Reid who loses her inhibitions when intoxicated