Original sentence: " One contractor in 2005 dealt with "250,000 tickets, 28,000 clamps and 7,000 tow-aways.Camden Liberal Democrat and Camden Conservative Councillors now face fierce criticism from Camden residents and the Camden New Journal, arising from their a perceived failure to reform the lucrative Parking and Traffic schemes as promised in manifesto, while voting for increased allowances for Politicians and Officers employed at the Council.In recent years Camden has been one of the worst boroughs involved in car-parking related incidents.Some local residents, press and the Parking Tribunal note unfair car-related fines and persistent inconsistencies which the local authority declines to remedy.Unreasonable and improper parking enforcement is quoted as a factor in the Labour Party's loss of control of the Council in 2006
Edited sentence: " One contractor alone in 2005 dealt with "250,000 tickets, 28,000 clamps and 7,000 tow-aways.Camden Liberal Democrat and Camden Conservative Councillors now face fierce criticism from Camden residents and local press, arising from their a perceived failure to reform the lucrative Parking and Traffic schemes as promised in manifesto, while voting for increased allowances for Politicians and Officers employed at the Council.In recent years Camden has been one of the worst boroughs involved in car-parking related scams.Local residents, press and the Parking Tribunal for instance note unfair car-related fines and persistent inconsistencies which the local authority declines to remedy.Unreasonable and improper parking enforcement is often quoted as a factor in the Labour Party's loss of control of the Council in 2006