Original sentence: " The Allon plan evolved over a period of time to include more territory.Immediately after the 1967 war the Pentagon commissioned a study of Israel's minimum defensible borders.Israel had no overall approach for integrating the West Bank: its military strategy in the war there had been piecemeal and unplanned,.Moshe Dayan proposed a plan which Gershom Gorenberg likens to a "photo negative of Allon's.The Pentagon Plan dated June 29, 1967 would have annexed four-fifths of the West Bank, excluding the area near the Jordan River.The final draft dating from 1970 would have annexed about half of the West Bank.The plan claimed to be based purely on military considerations ignoring political ones.Yigal Allon quickly produced a Plan, which would have annex a strip along the Jordan River valley and excluded areas closer to the pre-1967 border, which had a high density of Palestinians
Edited sentence: Israel had no overall approach for integrating the West Bank: its military strategy in the war there had been piecemeal and unplanned, though Yigal Allon quickly produced a Plan to annex most of it, save for enclaves with a high density of Palestinians