Original sentence: A consumer organisation forum web site known as OrangeProblems monitors the customer service provided by Orange Broadband in the U.uk, the site focuses on Orange Local Loop Unbundling but also covers a wider range of Orange operations
Edited sentence: A consumer organisation forum web site known as OrangeProblems focuses on the poor level of service provided by Orange Broadband in the U.uk, the site focuses on the infamous Orange Local Loop Unbundling and poor Customer service but covers a wider range of Orange operations