Original sentence: In addition, the authors state that breast cancer is only a problem in cultures where women wear bras; in bra-free cultures, breast cancer is a rare event.In addition, they state carcinogenic substances that we take into our bodies through petrochemically polluted food, air and water course throughout the body, including the breast tissue, need to be flushed from the tissues by the lymphatic system.Singer and Grismaijer state that they noticed that the Māori of New Zealand, who are integrated into white culture and therefore wear bras, have the same rate of breast cancer, while the aboriginals of Australia, who are bra-free, have practically no breast cancer.The authors add that they hope that the medical community will follow-up with further research to evaluate their claims scientifically.The authors conclude: "The bra industry is a multi-billion dollar enterprise.They argue that women who wear a bra 24 hours a day are 125 times more likely to have breast cancer than women who are bra-free
Edited sentence: Although they did not adhere to any scientific protocols for a medical study, the authors hoped that the medical community would follow-up with further research to evaluate their claims scientifically.At the same time, the authors wrote: "The bra industry is a multi-billion dollar enterprise.In Dressed To Kill, they argue that women who wear a bra 24 hours a day are 125 times more likely to have breast cancer than women who are bra-free.In addition, the authors claim that breast cancer is only a problem in cultures where women wear bras; in bra-free cultures, breast cancer is a rare event.In addition, they state carcinogenic substances that we take into our bodies through petrochemically polluted food, air and water course throughout the body, including the breast tissue, and need to be flushed from the tissues by the lymphatic system.Singer and Grismaijer claim to have noticed that the Māori of New Zealand, who are integrated into white culture and therefore wear bras, have the same rate of breast cancer, while the aboriginals of Australia, who are bra-free, have practically no breast cancer