Original sentence: The A3400 passes through a number of market towns in Warwickshire including Henley-in-Arden, Stratford-upon-Avon,  and Shipston-on-Stour
Edited sentence: The A3400 passes through a number of attractive market towns in Warwickshire including Henley-in-Arden, Stratford-upon-Avon,  and Shipston-on-Stour