Original sentence: In 1983 when The Sun ran a front page featuring an unflattering photograph of Michael Foot, then aged almost 70, claiming he was unfit to be Prime Minister on grounds of his age, appearance and policies, alongside the headline "Do You Really Want This Old Fool To Run Britain.The Sun's sales grew during the 1980s and the paper was under the editorship of Kelvin MacKenzie.The print workers at The Sun refused to print it
Edited sentence: The Sun's sales grew during the 1980s and the paper became increasingly brash under the editorship of Kelvin MacKenzie.The newspaper made frequent scathing attacks on what the paper called the "loony left" element within the Labour Party and on institutions supposedly controlled by it, such as the left-wing Greater London Council and Liverpool City Council.The print workers at The Sun, regarding it as an attempt at a cheap smear, refused to print it.There were many vitriolic personal attacks on Labour leaders by The Sun during election campaigns, such as in 1983 when The Sun ran a front page featuring an unflattering photograph of Michael Foot, then aged almost 70, claiming he was unfit to be Prime Minister on grounds of his age, appearance and policies, alongside the headline "Do You Really Want This Old Fool To Run Britain