Original sentence: The term was invented to describe the claims of Jacques Benveniste, who, according to Bernard Poitevin, sought to prove one of the basic foundations of homeopathy by conducting, "independently of [his] homeopathic interests", an experiment to be published in a major journal; However, while some studies, including Benveniste's, have claimed such an effect, double-blind repetitions of the experiments involved have failed to reproduce the results, and the concept is not accepted by the scientific community.Water memory is a concept used to explain homeopathy, which holds that water is capable of retaining a "memory" of particles once dissolved in it, even after being diluted so much that the chance of even one molecule remaining in the quantity being used is minuscule
Edited sentence: The term was invented to describe the claims of Benveniste, who sought to prove one of the basic foundations of homeopathy by conducting, "independently of [his] homeopathic interests", an experiment to be published in a major journal; However, while some studies, including Benveniste's, have claimed such an effect, double-blind repetitions of the experiments involved have failed to reproduce the results, and the concept is not accepted by the scientific community.Water memory is a discredited concept of Jacques Benveniste used to explain homeopathy, which holds that water is capable of retaining a "memory" of particles once dissolved in it, even after being diluted so much that the chance of even one molecule remaining in the quantity being used is minuscule