Original sentence: Finally, Millar was also involved in many church plants around London.Millar also promoted faith healing and singing in tongues.Millar was responsible for many changes in habits at Holy Trinity Brompton, including removal of the pews, with a view to making the church more open and accessible
Edited sentence: Finally, Rev.Millar was also involved in many church plants around London.Millar was open to faith healing and singing in tongues, which made Holy Trinity Brompton open on an ecumenical basis.Millar was responsible for many changes in habits at Holy Trinity Brompton, including removal of the pews, which led to the church becoming more open and accessible