Original sentence: Barred away in Matamoras, all of the prisoners eventually escaped or were released by the Mexican government.Immediately Independence was boarded, the officers and crew of Independence, aswell as William Wharton and a half dozen other civilian passengers.They Texan fightingmen were taken prisoner
Edited sentence: Immediately Independence was boarded, the officers and crew of, aswell as William Wharton and a half dozen other civilian passengers, were taken prisoner.The Texan fightingmen were barred away in Matamoras, all of the prisoners eventually escaped or were released by the Mexican government