Original sentence: On the pretext of discovering any irregularities in the their life, Thomas Cromwell organised a series of visitations, the results of which led to the suppression of smaller foundations, which did not include Walsingham, in 1536.The buildings were looted and largely destroyed, the sub-prior executed but the memory of it was less easy to eradicate
Edited sentence: On the pretext of discovering any irregularities in their life, Thomas Cromwell organised a series of visitations, the results of which led to the suppression of smaller foundations, (which did not include Walsingham) in 1536.The buildings were looted and largely destroyed, the sub-prior executed, but the memory of it was less easy to eradicate