Original sentence: During the middle 1970's, Malik served as a substitute instructor in Brooklyn, New York, Junior High School 281, teaching strings under the supervision of Andrew Liotta, acclaimed composer of seven operas, choral, and numerous chamber works.He served as bassist for Art Blakey, Randy Weston, and Thelonious Monk among others
Edited sentence: He was the bassist for Art Blakey, Randy Weston, and Thelonious Monk among others.In the mid-1970s, Malik was a substitute instructor in Brooklyn, New York, Junior High School 281, teaching strings under the supervision of Andrew Liotta, acclaimed composer of seven operas, choral, and numerous chamber works