Original sentence: The world's first DOMED stadium was conceived by Hofheinz as early as 1952 when he and his only daughter, Dene, were rained out once too often at Buffalo Stadium, home of Houston's minor league baseball team, the Houston Buffs
Edited sentence: The world's first domed stadium was conceived by Hofheinz as early as 1952 when he and his only daughter, Dene, were rained out once too often at Buffalo Stadium, home of Houston's minor league baseball team, the Houston Buffs