Original sentence: As an alternative to the Microsoft Points, users pay a monthly flat fee called the Zune Pass that costs US$14.99.Initially, Zunes included a 14-day Zune Pass free trial in the package.The Zune Pass allows to download songs, with exceptions of those required to pay points for.This allows a member to download and participate in Zune Marketplace content for a flat monthly fee.Zune Pass downloads cannot be burned to Audio CD and will become unplayable when the subscription lapses, and while the subscription is up-to-date, it can not be burned or synced to anything but a Zune
Edited sentence: As an alternative to the Microsoft points, you can pay a monthly flat fee, and download most songs on the marketplace, although several still require the use of microsoft points, and for the 1 month subscription to the Zune Pass US$14.99, while the longer, more effective to buy would be the 3 month pass, which is 40.99 but has a DRM.Initially, Zunes included a 14-day Zune Pass free trial in the package, and if you are fortunate, you can still get a 30gb zune with it up until a certain point.This allows a member to download and play participating Zune Marketplace content for a flat monthly fee, while the Zune Pass allows you to download virtually any song, with exceptions of those required to pay points for, but Zune Pass doesnt allow you to download free music videos, and to this point their is no subscription that allows you to do just that or anything like it.Zune Pass downloads cannot be burned to Audio CD and will become unplayable when the subscription lapses, and while the subscription is up-to-date, it can not be burned or synced to anything but a zune