Original sentence: Following the Israeli withdrawal from Southern Lebanon in May 2000, the SLA collapsed in the face of Hezbollah's rapid advance.Many of its leading members were killed or imprisoned, while others managed to seek refuge in Israel.SLA members captured by Lebananon and Hezbollah were treated as war criminals rather than being treated as Prisoners of War
Edited sentence: Following the Israeli withdrawal from Southern Lebanon in 25 May 2000, the SLA collapsed in the face of Hezbollah's rapid advance, actually all it took was a couple of hours after Israel left.Many of its leading members managed to seek refuge in Israel.SLA members captured by Lebananon were tried for their actions during the Israeli occupation.The transition took place in a peaceful enviroment and the SLA memebers surrendered to the security people.some were imprizoned for one year more or less depending on their crimes