Original sentence: " Ling's husband, Iain Clayton, confirmed that sending Clinton to negotiate the release was the idea of Korean captors.They landed at an airport near Burbank, California on August 5, shortly before 6:00 a.Visits by high level American officials to North Korea are very rare
Edited sentence: " Visits by high level American officials to North Korea are very rare.Ling's husband, Iain Clayton, confirmed that sending Clinton to Pyongyang was the idea of the North Koreans.They landed at Bob Hope Airport on August 5, shortly before 6:00 a