Original sentence: In a case report in 2009, a woman with late onset lipoid CAH due to StAR deficiency underwent  hormone replacement therapy in combination with an assisted fertility technique called, "intracytoplasmic sperm injection"
Edited sentence: In a case report in 2009, a woman with late onset lipoid CAH due to StAR deficiency underwent  hormone replacement therapy in combination with an assisted fertility technique, intracytoplasmic sperm injection