Original sentence: Carroll now works as a lawyer in Brandon.Soon after, he announced his decision to leave the NDP (on August 19, 1982) and subsequently opposed the Pawley government's intentions to re-entrench French language services in provincial law
Edited sentence: Carroll still works as a lawyer in Brandon.He announced his decision to leave the NDP on August 19, 1982, and subsequently opposed the Pawley government's intentions to re-entrench French language services in provincial law.He did not remain in this position long