Original sentence: " Much of the sholarship in the book has been challenged by Norman Finkelstein on a point by point basis, although Peters' supporters, such as Daniel Pipes find Finkelstein's contestations unwarrented.A history of the roots of the Israeli-arab conflict, the book is highly regarded and praised in the United States and elsewhere.Her book is held in high regard by traditional analysts of Israeli/Palestinian history, who put forward what is known as the "Zionist Narrative".However, many left-wing scholars such as Noam Chomsky and Norman Finkelstein label the book a "monumental hoax.Israel's "New Historians" on the other hand, such as Avi Shlaim and Ilan Pappe, reject her findings.Joan Peters is the name, of the author of From Time Immemorial.Peters' book general thesis is that a majority of Arabs in Mandate Palestine were recent immigrants from surrounding countries, and that as a result there was little significant Arab presence in Palestine prior to the advent of the Zionist movement
Edited sentence: A history of the roots of the Israeli-Arab conflict, the book was highly regarded and praised upon its initial publication in the United States but has now been widely discredited.Her book is held in high regard by proponents of the "Zionist Narrative" of Israeli-Palestinian history.Israel's "New Historians", on the other hand, such as Avi Shlaim and Ilan Pappe, reject her findings.Joan Peters is the author of From Time Immemorial.Much of the sholarship in the book has been challenged by Norman Finkelstein on a point by point basis, although Peters's supporters, such as Daniel Pipes, find Finkelstein's conclusions unwarranted.Peters's book general thesis is that a majority of Arabs in Mandate Palestine were recent immigrants from surrounding countries, and that as a result there was little significant Arab presence in Palestine prior to the advent of the Zionist movement