Original sentence: Bob Culbertson has played with or opened performances by many popular musicians, including Robben Ford, Steve Morse, Allan Holdsworth, and members of Santana amongst others.Culbertson is famous not only for his technique, which allows him to play three to four parts simultaneously (e.Furthermore, a DVD of Bob Culbertson live (yet recorded in studio, in front of blue screen) is available.His official discography lists seven albums, yet at least two others exist.bass line, chords and melody), but also for his compositional talent
Edited sentence: Bob Culbertson played with or opened performances by many popular musicians, including Robben Ford, Steve Morse, Allan Holdsworth, and members of Santana amongst others.Culbertson is famous not only for his spectacular techniques, which allows him to play three to four melodic, harmonic or rhythmic lines simultaneously (e.Furthermore, a DVD of Bob Culbertson live (yet recorded in studio, in front of blue screen) is available to the public.His official discography lists seven albums, yet at least two others exist, which are either out of print or maybe just widely known bootlegs.bass line, chords and melody in a time), but also due to well above average compositional talent