Original sentence: In India the swine flu started as soon as it started in US.On August 4,2009 a girl with swine flu died
Edited sentence: In India swine flu started around the same time it started in the US.On August 4,2009 a girl infected with swine flu died in Pune.Passengers flying in from flu infected countries had to fill in a form stating that they were not suffering from flu like symptoms.The check was pretty simple and possibly not very effective