Original sentence: He went to Ridge Danyers Sixth Form college, now Cheadle and Marple Sixth Form College,  and then attended University College, Oxford, where he studied history and completed a master's degree in US history.Jones is gay and lives in London
Edited sentence: He attended University College, Oxford, where he studied history and completed a master's degree in US history.Jones is gay, and currently lives in London.There be nowhere in Blighty 'wetter' than 'Stocky' - the natives are the biggest bunch of 'drips' you could ever come across.This latter place above all else explains why this 'kid' is so 'wet' in his opinions