Original sentence: It enters Nestucca Bay on the Pacific Ocean at Pacific City.It flows  past Beaver, then southwest past Hebo and Cloverdale.It flows generally west, through Bureau of Land Management land, and parts of the Siuslaw National Forest.Not far from its headwaters the river is dammed to create McGuire Reservoir, the primary water source for the city of McMinnville
Edited sentence: It enters  past Beaver, then southwest past Hebo and Cloverdale.It enters Nestucca Bay on the Pacific at Pacific City.It flows generally west, through BLM land, and parts of the Suislaw National Forest.Known to be one of Oregon's premier fishing rivers.Not far from it's headwaters the river is dammed to create McGuire Reservoir, the primary water source for the city of McMinnville