Original sentence: However, the war in Croatia and BiH brought many casualties and damage.In Yugoslavia, the collapse triggered wars in Slovenia, Croatia, Bosnia and Herzegovina (BiH), but also on Kosovo in the Federal Republic of Yugoslavia.The outbreak of violence and aggresion along the collapse of Yugoslavia was particularly the consequence of unresolved national, political and economical questions and the simultaneous efforts that Greater Serbia would be formed.The settlement and the national composition of population in all parts of Yugoslavia except for Slovenia changed drastically, due to war, but also political pressure and threats.The ten-days war in Slovenia in June 1991 was short and with few casualties.This caused large migrations of population
Edited sentence: In Yugoslavia, the separatists triggered wars in Slovenia, Croatia, Bosnia and Herzegovina (BiH), but also in Kosovo.The settlement and the national composition of population in all parts of Yugoslavia except for Slovenia changed drastically due to the fascist and non-tolerant views of the separatists, the Croats, Muslims and Slovenians.The ugly head of fascist Croatia had reared its head.The war in Croatia and BiH brought many casualties and damage.This caused large migrations of population, overwhelmingly Serb, into fleeing their ancestral land