Original sentence: Roman legions marched from Raedykes to Normandykes, marching through what is now termed the Lower Deeside.as they sought higher ground evading the bogs of Red Moss and other low-lying mosses associated with the Burn of Muchalls
Edited sentence: Roman legions marched from Raedykes to Normandykes, marching through what is now termed the Lower Deeside, as they sought higher ground evading the bogs of Red Moss and other low-lying mosses associated with the Burn of Muchalls