Original sentence: The racial policies that Hitler directed culminated in a massive number of deaths, commonly cited as at least 11 million people – including about 6 million Jews – in a genocide now known as the Holocaust
Edited sentence: His racial policies were ruthless and have been widely accepted as inhumane – they gave no value to the freedoms, or lives, of what he considered to be the inferior peoples (such invalids, Jews, Slavs, Poles,  Czechs, and many more).The deaths which occured as a direct consequence of these polices are commonly cited as at least 11 million people – including about 6 million Jews – in a genocide now known as the Holocaust