Original sentence: The school is highly competetive and ranks among the top high schools of the country, the Hankuk Academy of Foreign Studies is still far from being the best, although its name attracts many students who are currently studying abroad
Edited sentence: Although so-called "experts" believe that the Hankuk Academy of Foreign Studies will become the next leading global school, few people accept this statement because that it has no supporting evidence whatsoever.Rather, it is commonly held that while the school is highly competetive and ranks among the top high schools of the country, the Hankuk Academy of Foreign Studies is still far from being the best, although its name attracts many students who are currently studying abroad