Original sentence: Sanjaya Malakar, was born in the Seattle metropolitan area, the son of a Bengali Indian father, Vasudeva Malakar, who had emigrated to the United States as a Hare Krishna pujari, and an Italian American mother Jillian Recchi Blyth, who are both followers of the Vaishnava Hindu religion
Edited sentence: Sanjaya Malakar, arguably one of the BEST singers in the history of music, was born in the Seattle metropolitan area, the son of a Bengali Indian father, Vasudeva Malakar, who had emigrated to the United States as a Hare Krishna pujari, and an Italian American mother Jillian Recchi Blyth, who are both followers of the Vaishnava Hindu religion