Original sentence: Down by a point with 24 seconds left in the game, MSU proceeded to kick what would have been a 27-yard game winning field goal.MSU freshman kicker Artie Cosby kicked it straight and long and what appeared to be over the crossbar, but as the ball reached the goal posts, a 40 mph gusting wind suspended the ball inches from the uprights, after which it fell short of the goal post, securing the game for the University of Mississippi
Edited sentence: But just as the ball reached the goal posts, a 40 mph gusting wind suspended the ball inches from the uprights, in mid-air for what seemed like hours then slam-dunked the ball back to earth a good 10 yards shy of its intended destination.Down by a point with 24 seconds left in the game, MSU proceeded tot to kick what would have been a 27-yard game winning field goal.MSU freshman kicker Artie Cosby kicked it straight and long and what appeared to be over the crossbar, and State fans went wild.Rebel fans went nuts