Original sentence: Bush administration in the United States to describe methods of torture and other ill-treatment amounting to torture used by US military intelligence and the Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) to extract information from captives as part of the "War on Terror"
Edited sentence: Bush administration in the United States to describe what some would consider methods of torture and other ill-treatment amounting to what some consider torture used by US military intelligence and the Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) to extract information from captives as part of the "War on Terror"