Original sentence: Hava Nashira draws the prominent modern Jewish musicians, including Debbie Friedman, Craig Taubman, Dan Nichols, and Josh Nelson to lead specialty tracks.The workshop is open to URJ camp songleaders as well as to temple music specialists and all those with a serious interest in Jewish songleading and music
Edited sentence: Hava Nashira draws the best of modern Jewish musicians, including Debbie Friedman, Craig Taubman, Dan Nichols, and Josh Nelson to lead specialty tracks.The workshop is open to URJ camp songleaders as well as to temple music specialists and all those with a serious interest In Jewish songleading and music