Original sentence: " Approximately one month after the attacks the United States led a broad coalition of international forces into Afghanistan in pursuit of al-Qaeda forces and to topple the Taliban Government for harboring what the United States government refers to as a terrorist organization.According to the official 9/11 Commission Report, nineteen men, allegedly affiliated with Osama bin Laden and Al-Qaeda, simultaneously hijacked four U.Law enforcement and intelligence agencies, such as the Department of Homeland Security, arrested people that they labeled terrorist suspects for the stated purpose of breaking up militant cells around the world.New Video Documentary of WTC Collapse.The United States government introduced "anti-terrorism" legislation and froze the bank account of businesses and individuals that they suspected of having al-Qaeda ties.Two of the airplanes were crashed into the World Trade Center in Manhattan, New York City — one into each of the two tallest towers, about 18 minutes apart — shortly after which both towers collapsed
Edited sentence: " Approximately one month after the attacks the United States led a broad coalition of international forces into Afghanistan in pursuit of al-Qaeda forces and to topple the Taliban Government for harboring what  referrs to as terrorist organization., simultaneously hijacked four U.According to the official 9/11 Commission Report, nineteen men affiliated with Osama bin Laden and Al-Qaeda, a loose network of Sunni Islamist terrorists.Countries such as  introduced "anti-terrorism" legislation and froze the bank account of businesses and individuals that they suspected of having al-Qaeda ties.Law enforcement and intelligence agencies, such as , arrested people that they labeled terrorist suspects for the stated purpose of breaking up militant cells around the world.Two were crashed into the World Trade Center in Manhattan, New York City — one into each of the two tallest towers, about 18 minutes apart — shortly after which both towers collapsed