Original sentence: (See Interesting Notes.)   The outcome was the same in the end.As their battle progresses, Palpatine appears to err in an attack, allowing Windu to disarm him with a kick to the jaw.Realizing the full enormity of his actions, Skywalker knows there is no turning back, and so pledges himself fully to Palpatine's teaching, believing it is the only way to save his wife, Padmé.Using their disagreement as an opportunity, Palpatine blasts Windu with a torrent of Force lightning.Was it a mistake in the heat of battle, or a clever machination
Edited sentence: As their battle progresses, Palpatine seemingly errs in an attack, allowing Windu to disarm him with a kick to the jaw.But was it a mistake or a clever machination.Realizing the full enormity of his actions, Skywalker knows there is no turning back, and so pledges himself fully to Palpatine's teaching, thinking it is the only way to save his wife, Padmé.Using their disagreement as an opportunity, Palpatine blasts Windu with torrents of Force lightning