Original sentence: He has been disciplined by prominent Queensland LNP member and former dentist John-Paul Langbroek for these comments, as well as receiving a critical editorial from the courier mail.He runs a bodybuilding supplements business, Bodyzone sports supplements, and is Managing Director of supplement importing company International Brands Direct
Edited sentence: (Edit by Jason, note that the only people sort for comment were pro fluoride people, as usual a left wing paper prints only what they want, and like last time when i tried to update this page with some truth about myself, it will be deleted.(Edit by Jason, this statement is wrong, it is not at odd's with my maiden speech, read my other speech's and know that fluoride is a poison and has no place in our water.)  He has been disciplined by prominent Queensland LNP member and former dentist John-Paul Langbroek for these comments, as well as receiving a critical editorial from the courier mail.He ran a bodybuilding supplements business, Bodyzone sports supplements, and was Managing Director of supplement importing company International Brands Direct