Original sentence: It honors Orville Redenbacher, a former resident who built a popcorn factory there.Redenbacher participated in most of the festival's parades until his death in 1995.The Popcorn Festival is held on the first Saturday after Labor Day.The Porter County Fair consists of carnival attractions and hosts a variety of shows such as a demolition derby, motocross races, and live musical performances.The city holds two major festivals every year: the Popcorn Festival and the Porter County Fair.The festival also features racing events and a balloon launch in addition to typical fair activities
Edited sentence: It holds a variety of shows such as the demolition derby, motocross races, and even live performances from famous singers.The dunes is an amazing place to go if you want to go hiking, swimming, and even relax.The fair has many different attractions in it itself, things for every type of person.This festival consists of a parade, tons of amazing unhealthy food, games, and even rides.This is a great place to go during all seasons.This is held in the fair grounds every year towards the end of the summer.Valparaiso also hosts the Porter County Fair every year.Valparaiso has its annual popcorn festival which is held every year in downtown Valparaiso.Valparaiso is also only a short drive from Lake Michigan and the dunes.We have the popcorn festival because Orville Redenbacher lived in Valparaiso