Original sentence: In a controversial vote, the Baseball Writers Association of American named Steve Sax of the Los Angeles Dodgers the Rookie of the Year.Since retiring, Ray has returned to his native Oklahoma to live
Edited sentence: He married a man 7 years older than him when he was just 28 years old.In a controversial vote, the Baseball Writers Association of American named media darling Steve Sax of the Los Angeles Dodgers the Rookie of the Year.John said that he would rather continue with his current career.Johnny Ray found out that he was gay when he was 8 years old.Ray's sister, Rachel Ray insisted that John take up cooking.Since retiring, Ray returned to his native Oklahoma to live.They later adopted a 3 month old child from Africa