Original sentence: The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching and The New York Times have criticized Yale for using its teaching assistants to lead discussion sections and to teach some introductory science and language classes.The Yale Alumni Magazine has detailed this practice and its ramifications.The press and some members of the University have criticized Yale's admissions policies.Yale practices legacy admission, though it also practices affirmative action in its admissions decisions.Yale, like many of its peer universities, has been criticized for the occurrence of grade inflation
Edited sentence: Admissions to Yale also has been a target of criticism by the press and by members of the University.The Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching and The New York Times have criticized Yale for having its teaching fellows (known as TFs) teach sections and lead some classes.The Yale Alumni magazine also details this problem.The article mentions this is a problem affecting many Ivy League Universities.Yale continues to practice legacy admission, though it also practices affirmative action.Yale has been criticized, like many comparable universities, of grade inflation