Original sentence: Wee Shu Min, daughter of parliament member Wee Siew Kim and a then-eighteen year-old student on Raffles Junior College's scholarship programme, found herself in controversy   after posting on her blog what were viewed by some Singaporeans to be elitist, naïve, and insensitive statements against heartlanders
Edited sentence: Wee Shu Min, daughter of parliament member Wee Siew Kim and a then-18 year-old student on Raffles Junior College's scholarship programme, found herself in controversy   after posting on her blog what were viewed by some Singaporeans to be elitist, naïve, and insensitive statements against heartlanders