Original sentence: An advert was placed in TES, for which 4 potential sponsors expressed interest, these were The Ormiston Trust, Academies Enterprise Trust, Kunskappskolan (UK) and the Church of England.As well as this the Academy will open in September 2010, only one and a half years after it was first announced to the community.Due to mounting opposition the council announced it was going to work with the schools Governing Body to come to joint decision.In 2008 the school got its best ever results at 31% 5+ A-C including English and Maths.In mid 2009, it was announced that Kunskappskolan (UK) was chosen as the preffered sponsor for the school, however the decision was made without much consultation with the local community, the students were never told who would be the preffered sponsor, many students are still are not sure what an Academy is.Suffolk County Council announced in 2008 its intentions to turn the school into an Academy, at which point it was met with opposition from both Students and Staff, as well as Govenors and the local Community, this was due to the preffered sponsor put forward, Church of England
Edited sentence: An advert was placed in TES, for which four potential sponsors expressed interest, these were The Ormiston Trust, Academies Enterprise Trust, Kunskappskolan (UK) and the Church of England.As well as this the academy will open in September 2010, only one and a half years after it was first announced to the community.Due to mounting opposition, the council announced it was going to work with the school's governing body to come to joint decision.In 2008 the school got its best-ever results at 31% 5+ A-C, including English and Maths.In mid-2009, it was announced that Kunskappskolan (UK) was chosen as the preferred sponsor for the school, however the decision was made without much consultation with the local community, the students were never told who would be the preferred sponsor, many students are still are not sure what an academy is.Suffolk County Council announced in 2008 its intentions to turn the school into an academy, at which point it was met with opposition from both students and staff, as well as governors and the local community, this was due to the preferred sponsor put forward, Church of England