Original sentence: For many centuries, Hunza has provided the quickest access to Swat and Gandhara for a person traveling on foot.From Hunza there are spectacular views of the beautiful and magnificent 7,788 m (25,551 ft) Rakaposhi.Hunza is the northernmost part of a region known as the Northern Areas of Pakistan-administered Kashmir.It comprises an area of 3,900 mi² (10,101 km²) and borders China.The region is claimed by India.This page is about the town of Hunza in northern Kashmir
Edited sentence: For many centuries, Hunza has provided the quickest access to Swat and Gandhara (in modern north Pakistan) for a person traveling on foot.From Hunza there are spectacular views of the beautiful and magnificent 7,788m (25,551 ft) Rakaposhi.Hunza is the northernmost part of a region known as the Northern Areas of Pakistan.It comprises an area of 3,900 mi² (10,101 km²) and borders China.This page is about the town of Hunza in northern Pakistan