Original sentence: , when she was little.Afterwards, she came back from San Francisco to compete in the Miss Hong Kong 2002 pageant.She immigrated to San Francisco, U.She studied in San Francisco for many years, including attending the University of California, Davis.Tiffany was born in Hong Kong during 1981
Edited sentence: Lam was born in Hong Kong in 1980.She immigrated to San Francisco, California, when she was a child.She studied in San Francisco for many years, then attended the University of California, Davis.She then returned to Hong Kong to compete in the Miss Hong Kong 2002 pageant