Original sentence: After giving birth to her daughter, Nevis, she released her third studio album, Loose, which produced the hits "Promiscuous", "Maneater", "Say It Right" and "All Good Things (Come to an End)".She then released her second studio album, Folklore, which was less commercially successful and produced two international singles: "Powerless (Say What You Want)" and "Try"
Edited sentence: After giving birth to her daughter Nevis, her second studio album, Folklore was released.In summer 2006 she released her third studio album, Loose, which produced the hits "Promiscuous", "Maneater", "Say It Right" and "All Good Things (Come to an End)".It produced two international singles: "Powerless (Say What You Want)"(FIFA World Theme) and "Try".It was less commercially successful in the US