Original sentence: A real East End spirit — an inward looking quality, a distrust of strangers and authority figures, a sense of territory and community that Holland and Smith summed up as 'Hurt one of us and you hurt us all'.In 2001 EastEnders went head to head with Coronation Street for the first time, EastEnders won the battle with 8.4 million viewers (41%) while Coronation Street attracted 7.3 million (36%).Smith and Holland were both Londoners — Holland was from a big East End family, but when they researched Victoria Square they found massive changes in areas they thought they knew well.The first people to whom David Reid, then head of series and serials, turned were Julia Smith and Tony Holland, a well established producer/script editor team who had first worked together on Z-Cars.The project had a number of working titles  — Square Dance, Round the Square, Round the Houses, London Pride, East 8.Within weeks the headline they had all dreaded had appeared — EASTENDERS STAR IS A KILLER — setting the tone for relations between the Albert Square and the press for the next 20 years
Edited sentence: A real East End spirit - an inward looking quality, a distrust of strangers and authority figures, a sense of territory and community that Holland and Smith summed up as 'Hurt one of us and you hurt us all'.In 2001 EastEnders went head to head with Coronation Street for the first time, EastEnders won the battle with 8.4 million viewers (41%) while Coronation Street lagged behind at 7.3 million (36%).Smith and Holland were both Londoners - Holland was from a big East End family, but when they researched Victoria Square they found massive changes in areas they thought they knew well.The first people to whom David Reid, then head of series and serials, turned were Julia Smith and Tony Holland, a well established producer/ script editor team who had first worked together on Z-Cars.The project had a number of working titles  - Square Dance, Round the Square, Round the Houses, London Pride, East 8.Within weeks the headline they had all dreaded had appeared - EASTENDERS STAR IS A KILLER - setting the tone for relations between the Albert Square and the press for the next 20 years