Original sentence: Alberto Marcicano - Zither in "Demais".Another attempt on a Reggae-crossover hit, Jimmy Cliff's The Harder They Come was translated as They Want My Blood, in Portuguese, Querem Meu Sangue.Branco Mello's affiliations with São Paulo's underground scene are eloquently shown in theatrical Pop fashion (the loony social commentary (Babi Índio).The album featureas also Pena Schmidt's (an underground producer known for his bare-bone works) heavy-handed production, polishing the edges to the vanishing clear-cut point and burying instruments over layers of synths and electronic drumming typical of the age.The record sold quite bad, only 22.000 copies, when artists just as Kid Abelha and Os Paralamas do Sucesso managed to get multiple gold records
Edited sentence: Alberto Marcicano - Zither in "demais".Another attempt on a Reggae-crossover hit, Jimmy Cliff's The Harder They Come was bizarrely translated as They Want My Blood, in Portuguese, Querem Meu Sangue.Branco Mello's affiliations with São Paulo's underground scene are eloquently shown in theatrical Pop fashion (the loony social commentary Babi Índio).Judging by their debut, a miraculous leap forward.The record sold unexpectably quite bad, only 22.000 copies, when artists just as Kid Abelha and Os Paralamas do Sucesso managed to get multiple gold records.You wouldn't notice it given Pena Schmidt's (an underground producer known for his bare-bone works) surprising heavy-handed production, polishing the edges to the vanishing clear-cut point and burying instruments over layers of synths and electronic drumming typical of the age