Original sentence: A contributing factor to this, again resulting from the charismatic movement is the creation of numerous new churches (such as the Vineyard churches), which have experienced significant growth and dramatically altered the composition of Protestant christianity.Firstly, contemporary worship music is now prevalent in many churches, including those which do not take a charismatic approach (and is even occasionally found within Roman Catholicism).In virtually all Christian traditions, regular public worship is complemented by other forms of worship, such as individual meditation, prayer and study, small group prayer (often linked with Bible study), and formal ceremonies on special occasions, including weddings, funerals, baptisms and events of Church or state.Secondly, a new style of worship, known as contemporary worship is now commonplace.These new churches are outside of established denominations and adopted contemporary forms of worship from the outset.Vestments are less elaborate or absent, and in some traditions services may be led by laity
Edited sentence: A contributing factor to this, again resulting from the charismatic movement is the creation of numerous new communities (such as the Vineyard churches), which have experienced significant growth and dramatically altered the composition of Protestantism.Firstly, contemporary worship music is now prevalent in some modernist Christian communities, including those which do not take a charismatic approach.In virtually all Christian traditions, regular public worship is complemented by other forms of worship, such as individual meditation, prayer and study, Biblical studies, and formal ceremonies on special occasions, including weddings, funerals, Baptisms, Confirmations, and events of Church or state.Secondly, a new approach, which suggests that church must be "modernized" and made "relevant", and which makes use of so-called "contemporary worship" is now commonplace in evangelical communities.These new communities are outside of established denominations, and interpret the Bible without any reference to traditional Christianity, and adopted modernist and secularist viewpoints from the outset.Vestments are less elaborate or absent, and the service is not led by a priest in Apostolic Succession, but rather a "minister" chosen by the congregation or is denominational decision