Original sentence: Jia Baoyu (賈寶玉)—the main protagonist.Jia Xichun (賈惜春)—Baoyu's younger second cousin from the Ningguo House, but brought up in the Rongguo House.Jia Yuanchun (賈元春)—Baoyu's elder sister by about a decade.Lin Daiyu (林黛玉)—Jia Baoyu's younger first cousin and love interest.Xue Baochai (薛寶釵)—Jia Baoyu's other first cousin
Edited sentence: Jia Baoyu (賈寶玉)— (also Pao-Yu) the main protagonist.Jia Xichun (賈惜春)— (Pervading Fragrance) Baoyu's younger second cousin from the Ningguo House, but brought up in the Rongguo House.Jia Yuanchun (賈元春)— (Cardinal Spring) Baoyu's elder sister by about a decade.Lin Daiyu (林黛玉)— (Black Jade) Jia Baoyu's younger first cousin and love interest.Xue Baochai (薛寶釵)— (Precious Virtue) Jia Baoyu's other first cousin