Original sentence: Every December, "Oaklands" hosts an invitational hockey tournament named after Brother Arthur Brockman (1915-1979), the tournament began a year after his death and is held annually to this day
Edited sentence: Every December, "Oaklands" hosts an invitational hockey tournament named after Brother Arthur Brockman (1915-1979), a gifted athlete who wanted his students and athletes to always display fair play and sportsmanship at all times on the ice and on the campus.The tournament began a year after his death and is held annually to this day