Original sentence: Located at the top of Market Square, just off Castle Street, the terrace contains five of the most distinctive examples of Georgian houses in Letterkenny.The honour of formally launching the town fell to Sir George Marbury who married Patrick Crawford's widow, - Crawford having died suddenly while on a return visit to his native Scotland.The markets - started by Patrick Crawford with only a few animals - grew into much busier mart days of the recent past which are sadly not present today
Edited sentence: Located at the top of Market Square, just off Castle Street, the terrace contains all five of the most distinctive examples of Georgian houses in Letterkenny.The honour of formally launching the town fell to Sir George Marbury - famed in his time for his luxuriant locks of russet hair - who married Patrick Crawford's widow, Crawford having died suddenly while on a return visit to his native Scotland.The markets - started by Patrick Crawford with only a few animals (Jojo the wonderchimp, and Bongo, and dog of fine intellectual capabilities) - grew into much busier mart days of the recent past which are sadly not present today