Original sentence: Due to the popularity of the website (over 45 million users), it has been suggested that a unique culture, mostly within the alternative scene, is developing within the MySpace network.This has also lead to many major artists, such as Madonna and Green Day, getting a MySpace profile
Edited sentence: Due to the popularity of the website (over 45 million users), it has been suggested that a unique culture, mostly alternative, emo kids, and scenesters , is developing within the MySpace network.This has also lead to many major artists, such as Madonna and Green Day, and also an abendance of local bands getting a MySpace profile