Original sentence: Sites founder Ryan Schreiber became the source of Internet criticism (and subsequent parody) in 2009 when a review that he had written in the 1990s for John Coltrane's album Live at the Village Vanguard was rediscovered in a page cache on the site's servers; the review had long since been deleted from the website itself, presumably due to its content.The review, written from the perspective of an African-American man in the 1960s, included racial stereotypes
Edited sentence: The review, written from the perspective of an African-American man in the 1960s, included many racial stereotypes and questionable comments from the author.The site's founder, Ryan Schreiber, became the source of Internet criticism (and subsequent parody) in early 2009 when a review he had written in the 1990s for John Coltrane's album, Live at the Village Vanguard, was rediscovered in a page cache on the site's servers (the review had long since been deleted from the website itself, presumably due to its content)