Original sentence: "  The Latter-day Saints currently use and publish an edition of the King James Version of the Bible, with footnotes including cross-references and the JST.According to the Latter-day Saints (LDS; see Mormonism), the Bible was incorrectly translated in several places, some of which differ from the book "The Book of Mormon: Another Testament of Jesus Christ" and other new or newly-discovered revelations.Because of this belief, Joseph Smith re-translated some portions of the Bible, known as the JST (Joseph Smith Translation).Joseph Smith did not use ancient manuscripts to support these revisions, but translated by "revelation" or "inspiration.Like the JST, the translation was more of an inspired revelatory process than a direct translation from Egpytian
Edited sentence: (Modern Egyptologists have since deciphered these texts; they state that Smith's "translation" was a total fabrication, although it seems that Smith himself was quite convinced of their genuineness.According to Latter Day Saints (LDS) Founder Joseph Smith (see Mormonism), the Bible was incorrectly translated in areas that differ from the book "The Book of Mormon: Another Testament of Jesus Christ" and other new or newly-discovered revelations.However, there are no known ancient Biblical manuscripts to support these revisions, and Smith indeed made them directly to the English bible without consulting any material in the original languages Hebrew and Greek.This claim was then supported by their own translation of the Bible, the JST (Joseph Smith Translation).This translation has made perhaps the most direct re-editing of the widely publicized Bible without actually rewriting it entirely