Original sentence: She is informed shortly after her death that, rather than moving on to the "great beyond", she will become a grim reaper in the "external influence" division, responsible for reaping souls of people who died in accidents, suicides and homicides
Edited sentence: She is informed shortly after her death that, rather than moving on to the "great beyond," she will become a grim reaper in the "external influence" division, responsible for reaping souls of people who die in accidents (many of which are of Rube Goldberg-style complexity), suicides, and homicides