Original sentence: In August 2010, as a part of Fifth Avenue Live, SCSU will open a new residence hall that will house 455 students in high-amenity, high-security apartments with underground parking.Joining in allows students to mingle with other 17,000 that attend SCSU and meet the on-campus population of more than 3,000 living in residence halls.Nearly 20% of SCSU students live in 1 of the 8 traditional residence halls or in an apartment-style hall on campus.SCSU allows students to join an array of 250 student organizations from Accounting to Skydiving.Students at SCSU are exposed to a vibrant culture of life and activities at the University.Students can also join one of the nine house that represent the Greek population at SCSU.The University Chronicle is the SCSU Student paper that's published twice a wekk and has been reporting SCSU news since 1921
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