Original sentence: They are now on a short tour in austrlia.They came to the palace in Melbourne on August 3rd and are going to be at The Enmore in Sydney on August 5th.They will then head to Japan to tackle the Summersonic Festival, and then will be in Kuwait to play the Pukkelpop Festival before finally going to the U
Edited sentence: Afterwards, they will head to Japan to participate in the Summersonic Festival, and then will be in Kuwait to play the Pukkelpop Festival before going to the U.They are currently on a short tour in Australia.They are touring to The Palace in Melbourne on August the 3rd and will then move on to The Enmore in Sydney on August the 5th