Original sentence: In the album, Taupin and John describe their early days as struggling songwriters and musicians in London and its environs.That year, Elton released the pop album Don’t Shoot Me I’m Only the Piano Player which produced the hits "Crocodile Rock" and "Daniel", and the more thoughtful, album-oriented double LP Goodbye Yellow Brick Road which produced the hits "Goodbye Yellow Brick Road" and "Saturday Night's Alright for Fighting.With the release of the 1975 autobiographical album Captain Fantastic and the Brown Dirt Cowboy Elton John revealed his previously ambiguous personality,
Edited sentence: Many people viewed Elton John's output as having great musical personality and commercial success, but embodying no common thread and revealing little of his own personality or inner self in the early '70s.That year, Elton released the pop album Don’t Shoot Me I’m Only the Piano Player which produced the hits "Crocodile Rock" and "Daniel", and the more thoughtful, album-oriented double-LP Goodbye Yellow Brick Road which produced the hits "Goodbye Yellow Brick Road" and "Saturday Night's Alright for Fighting.This was addressed by the 1975 autobiographical album Captain Fantastic and the Brown Dirt Cowboy, where Taupin and John describe their early days as struggling songwriters and musicians in London and its environs