Original sentence: David Semenovich Nemirovsky (born August 1, 1976 in Toronto, Ontario) is a Canadian/Russian professional ice hockey player who currently plays for SKA Saint Petersburg of the Kontinental Hockey League.Nemirovsky was drafted 84th overall by the National Hockey League's Florida Panthers in the 1994 NHL Entry Draft and play four seasons there, playing 91 games for the Panthers and scoring 16 goals and 22 assists for 38 points, he also picked up 42 penalty minutes
Edited sentence: David Semenovich Nemirovsky (born August 1, 1976 in Toronto, Ontario) is a Canadian/Russian professional ice hockey player who currently plays for Barys Astana of the Kontinental Hockey League.He played four seasons here, playing 91 games for the Panthers and scoring 16 goals and 22 assists for 38 points, he also picked up 42 penalty minutes.Nemirovsky was drafted 84th overall by the National Hockey League's Florida Panthers in the 1994 NHL Entry Draft