Original sentence: The first shop was launched by Jane Taylor in 1984, located in Covent Garden, London, and there are now branches worldwide, including two in Belgium, located in Brussels and Bruges, and one in France, located in Montpellier
Edited sentence: The first shop was launched in 1984, located in Covent Garden, London, and there are now branches worldwide, including two in Belgium, located in Brussels and Bruges, and one in France, located in Montpellier