Original sentence: There is criticism that using the style of "moe" trivializes the situation
Edited sentence: However, at the same time, there is criticism that using the style of "moe" to express this harsh reality is trivializing it, or at least simplifying a complex situation.Nevertheless, taking it an educational book, the facts that it breaks down complex historical facts to explain them simply, and that the characters are easy to get to know and like, speak in its favor.The above criticism, that it "over-simplifies" events, could be applied to any explanation aimed at a general audience, and cannot necessarily be said to be a shortcoming