Original sentence: Dr William Albert "Bill" Dembski (born July 18 1960) is a controversial American mathematician, philosopher and theologian known for advocating the idea of intelligent design in opposition to the theory of evolution through natural selection.His work is controversial; his ideas are not accepted as valid by the mainstream scientific community, with leading scientific organizations such as the National Academy of Sciences describing intelligent design as pseudoscience
Edited sentence: Dr William Albert "Bill" Dembski (born July 18 1960) is a controversial American mathematician, philosopher and theologian known for advocating the idea of intelligent design in addition to the theory of evolution through natural selection.His work is controversial; his ideas are not accepted as valid by many in the scientific community, with leading scientific organizations such as the National Academy of Sciences describing intelligent design as pseudoscience