Original sentence: Hillsong has also come under some fire from Evangelical leaders, most notably from the conservative Anglican Diocese of Sydney, regarding its prosperity teachings as well as other aspects of Pentecostal theology such as faith healing and baptism in the Holy Spirit
Edited sentence: Hillsong has also come under some fire from Evangelical leaders, most notably from the ultra-conservative Anglican Diocese of Sydney, regarding its prosperity teachings as well as other aspects of Pentecostal theology such as faith healing and baptism in the Holy Spirit.Hillsong is a Pentecostal church, and therefore draws much critisism about its teachings