Original sentence: Although Charlotte is initially repulsed by Harry's constant sweating and somewhat odd appearance and behavior, she ends up sleeping with him when Harry confesses his attraction to her.Charlotte converts to Judaism to appease Harry's requirement that he can only marry a fellow Jew, but soon ends up ruining the relationship in a fit of anger by telling him that she's embarrassed to be seen in public with him because he is conventionally unattractive
Edited sentence: Although Charlotte is initially repulsed by Harry's constant sweating and somewhat odd appearance and behaviour, she ends up sleeping with him when Harry confesses his attraction to her.Charlotte converts to Judaism to appease Harry's requirement that he can only marry a fellow Jew, but soon ends up ruining the relationship in a fit of anger by telling him that she's angry about giving up Christ when he won't set a date for their wedding