Original sentence: Bernard has worked in an effort to contribute to his community and assist families in need, and has taken a special interest in the organization, Feeding America.Now a member of the Entertainment Council, Bernard chose Feeding American because he is passionate about ending the hunger crisis in America
Edited sentence: Bernard has worked tirelessly in an effort to contribute to his community and assist families in need, and has taken a special interest in the organization, Feeding America.Berrian has gained respect from his peers and fans, not only for his amazing feats on the field, but for his fervent desire to give back.He believes that no one should go hungry, and is honored to have been given the opportunity to make a difference through a council, with others who desire to contribute to society and help others.Now a memeber of the Entertainment Council, Bernard chose Feeding American because he is passionate about ending the hunger crisis in this country