Original sentence: After taking an Honours Degree in Drama at Manchester University, Joanna was fortunate to spend the next 10 years working in London and the provinces and in both theatre and television, in a variety of parts, allowing her to explore and stretch her versatility.At the very beginning of her career she was an ASM and played small parts at Pitlochry.Clare Scott in 1973, The Omega Factor as Julia Crane in 1979 and The Tomorrow People as Mrs Boswell.Her roles have included Ibsen's "Hedda Gabler", Adelaide in "Guys and Dolls" and the Old Woman in Edward Bond's "Bingo".She appears regularly on BBC Scotland and has also acted on radio dramas.She has appeared at the Citizens Theatre as Jocasta in "Oedipus The King" and as Helen in "A Taste of Honey" and as Mrs.She has appeared in many TV programmes  including Emmerdale Farm as Dr.She married a Glaswegian and lives in Scotland
Edited sentence: ) at Pitlochry and she is very happy to have married a Glaswegian and to have returned to live in Scotland.After taking an Honours Degree in Drama at Manchester University, Joanna was fortunate to spend the next 10 years working in the provinces and London in both theatre and television, in a variety of parts, allowing her to explore and stretch her versatlity.At the very beginning of her career she was an A.Favourite roles include Ibsen's "Hedda Gabler", Adelaide in "Guys and Dolls" and the Old Woman in Edward Bond's "Bingo".She has appeared at the Citizens Theatre as Jocasta in "Oedipus The King" and as Helen in "A Taste of Honey" and Mrs.She has appeared in many TV programmes over the years including Emmerdale Farm as Dr Clare Scott in 1973, The Omega Factor as Julia Crane in 1979 and The Tomorrow People as Mrs Boswell.and played small parts (no such thing