Original sentence: Buffy and Giles figure out The First Evil has been driving Angel insane.It's Christmas in Sunnydale and Angel is haunted with dreams of the people he murdered over the years as Angelus, but when Buffy starts appearing in his dreams, they realize something is not right.They have a tense and heartbreaking conversation in which Buffy punches him and he throws her to the ground.Visions of his past victims, including Jenny Calender, appear to him and try to get him to kill Buffy,saying that he will be released from the pain if he does so.With tears in both vampire and slayer's eyes, looking at each other, the heatwave Sunnydale has been suffering from breaks and the first drops of snow start to fall.With the weather report saying the sun shouldn't be expected to be seen at all today, Buffy and Angel take a romantic walk through the town
Edited sentence: Angel's dreams are haunted by people he murdered over the years as Angelus,but when Buffy starts appearing in his dreams, they realize something is not right.Buffy and Giles figure out what's getting in Angel's head.It is The First Evil.It's Christmas in Sunnydale but all is not well.The End.They have a tense and heartbreaking conversation in which Buffy even punches him and he throws her to the ground.Visions of his past victims (including teacher Jenny Calender) appear to him and try to get him to kill Buffy,saying that he will be released from the pain if he does so.With tears in both vampire and slayer's eyes,looking at each other, the heatwave Sunnydale has been suffering from breaks and the first drops of snow start to fall.With the weather report saying the sun shouldn't be expected to be seen at all today, Buffy and Angel take a romantic walk through the town in a touching moment