Original sentence: Considered to be the biggest youth festival of Central India, Aarohi attracts more than 1500 participants in elimination rounds of various contests.Events include a Personaliy Contest, Singing, Quiz, Debate, Treasure Hunt, Dumb charades etc.It is organised every year during winter in December.Students from technical institutes in the city take part in many of the events organised.The event runs for 3 days, while the elimination round for various contests begins 10-15 days in advance.The festival is sponsored by many big firms and businesspeople in the city which is the main souce of fund for the event.This festival has more than 5000 viewers every year
Edited sentence: Among events which are organised include Personaliy Contest, Singing , Quiz, Debate, Treasure Hunt,Dumb charades etc.Considered to be the biggest youth festival of Central India Aarohi attracts more than 1500 participants in elimination rounds of various contests.It is organised every year during winter in Dec.Students from technical istitutes in the city take part in myriad of events organised.The event runs for 3 days while the elimination round for various contests begins 10-15 days in advance.The festival gets the sponsorship from many big firms and businessmen in the city which is the main souce of fund for this extravaganza.This festival with many technical institutes around lures more than 5000 viewers every year