Original sentence: All-American trap and skeet shooter; twice National and twice International duck calling champion; Adolph Topperwein's protégé and successor; Trapshooting Hall of Fame, Cody Firearms Museum and Tennessee Sports Hall of Fame inductee; Herb Parsons (1908-1959) of Somerville, Tennessee, was Winchester's SHOWMAN SHOOTER for 30 years.Considered by many to be the greatest exhibition shooter of shotguns and rifles in history, his signature feat was throwing by hand and individually breaking seven clay targets with a Winchester Model 12, 12 gauge pump shotgun
Edited sentence: Herb Parsons (1908-1959) of Somerville, Tennessee, was Winchester's SHOWMAN SHOOTER for 30 years and was Adolph Topperwein's protégé and successor.His impressive list of honors includes: All-American Trap and Skeet Shooter; twice National and twice International Duck Calling Champion; and inductee to Trapshooting Hall of Fame, Cody Firearms Museum and Tennessee Sports Hall of Fame.His signature feat was throwing by hand and individually breaking seven clay targets with a Winchester Model 12, 12 gauge pump shotgun.Parsons is considered by many to be the greatest exhibition shooter of shotguns and rifles in history