Original sentence: Although the ACWA made significant gains on the behalf of worker's rights, weeks without income proved challenging for David's family.David accompanied Joseph on a horse and wagon while his father sold goods to their neighbors during strikes.David aspired to become a medical doctor, but opted to join the work force instead to continue helping to support his younger siblings.David was the son of parents Sophie and Joseph Rappaport.Joseph often tried to supplement the family's earnings by selling produce from block-to-block
Edited sentence: Although the ACWA made significant gains on the behalf of worker's rights, weeks without income proved challenging for the Rappaport family.David accompanied Joseph on a horse and wagon while his father sold goods to their neighbors during.David aspired to become a medical doctor, but opted to join the work force instead to join the work force to help support his younger siblings.David was the son of Sophie and Joseph Rappaport.Joseph often tried to supplement the family's earnings by selling produce from block-to-block during strikes