Original sentence: Byeon Hee-bong (; born 8 June 1942) is a South Korean actor and producer best known for his role in the smash hit The Host for which he won awards at the Asia-Pacific Film Festival and Blue Dragon Film Awards
Edited sentence: Byeon Hee-bong (; born June 8, 1942) is a South Korean actor who is best known for his role in the smash hit The Host for which he won awards at the Asia-Pacific Film Festival and Blue Dragon Film Awards