Original sentence: A later US Army report criticized Preysler and the battalion commander—Lieutenant Colonel William Ostlund—citing the lack of supplies, equipment, and drinking water for troops stationed in Wanat.At the same time, the report noted the incredible performance of the unit under fire
Edited sentence: A later report by the US Army repeatedly criticized Preysler and 2nd Battalion commander Lieutenant Colonel William Ostlund, citing the lack of supplies, equipment, and even drinking water for troops stationed in Wanat while noting the incredible performance of the unit under fire despite their regimental commands failures