Original sentence: 259 — nearly 100 points lower than his league-leading.Cardinal outfielder Vince Coleman had been injured during the NLCS.Had Lasorda not made that decision, it might have been the Dodgers who played the Royals, and Cardinal fans wouldn't have cared if Denkinger had hurt the Dodgers by making the same mistake.Then Lasorda put in Niedenfuer, who had only a fastball, to face Jack Clark, one of the game's top fastball hitters, in the ninth inning of Game 6, resulting in a home run that scored the runs that won the pennant.Tom Herr didn't drive in a run after leading the Cardinals with 110 RBIs during the regular season.Tommy Lasorda, manager of the Los Angeles Dodgers, kept using Tom Niedenfuer to relieve in the NLCS
Edited sentence: 259—nearly 100 points lower than his league-leading.Cardinal outfielder Vince Coleman had been injured during the League Championship Series.Forever after, Cardinals fans cry like babies over this world series which they got soundily beat in.Had Lasorda not made that mistake, it might have been the Dodgers who played the Royals, and Cardinal fans wouldn't have cared if Denkinger had hurt the Dodgers by making the same mistake.Then Lasorda put Niedenfuer, who had only a fastball, to face Jack Clark, one of the game's top fastball hitters, in the ninth inning of Game 6, resulting in a home run that scored the runs that won the pennant.Tom Herr didn't drive in a run after leading the Cardinals with 110 RBI's during the regular season.Tom Lasorda, manager of the Los Angeles Dodgers, kept using Tom Niedenfuer to relive in the NLCS