Original sentence: However, in more moderate nations, where these dress codes are not obligatory, there are still many Muslim women who practice it.Whether they choose to wear such clothes of their own free will because they believe it is the will of Allah, or due to community and social pressures is a contraversial question
Edited sentence: However, in more moderate nations, where these dress codes are not obligatory, there are still many Muslim women who practice it, where most of them choose to follow it because they believe it is the will of Allah