Original sentence: According to most accounts, the Beit Yaakov served the school going population universally until the 2007 school year, when parental pressure resulted in the school building a fence essentially splitting the school in two.Detractors claim that the segregation was between Ashkenazi and Sephardi/Mizrahi students and the school was motivated to model itself like the Haredi schools in Jerusalem which have allegedly practiced similar segregative policies.Supporters assert that the separation was purely based on level of Haredi observance, and the more strictly Haredi students tended to be Ashkenazi, many of whom were Hasidic
Edited sentence: According to most accounts, the Beit Yaakov served the schoolgoing population universally until the 2007 school year, when parental pressure resulted in the school building a fence to separate the entry for Ashkenazi and Sephardi/Mizrahi pupils.Detractors claim that the segregation was between Ashkenazi and Sephardi/Mizrahi students, while supporters assert that the separation was purely based on level of Haredi observance, and the more Haredi students tended to be Ashkenazi, many of whom were Hasidic.The school was motivated to model itself closer to the model of older Haredi schools in Jerusalem which have practiced similar segregative policies between Ashkenazi and Sephardi/Mizrahi students