Original sentence: Edgar Evins, Burgess Falls and Rock Island State Parks contain portions of the lake's shoreline, the rest of which has been relatively underdeveloped until recent years.Lately, the area surrounding Center Hill Lake has been the target of land developers, who have begun construction on several upper-middle-class vacation homes and condos.Some locals protest that these actions are destroying the beauty of nature that make it such an attractive locale for such developments
Edited sentence: Edgar Evins, Burgess Falls and Rock Island State Parks contain portions of the lake's shoreline, the rest of which is relatively underdeveloped.Lately, the area surrounding Center Hill Lake has been the target of land developers, who are scarring the landscape with upper-middle-class vacation homes and condos, threatening the very beauty they aim to profit from