Original sentence: At 0915 the enemy destroyers which were kept at bay by the daring and almost singlehanded exploits of the USS Johnston launched a premature torpedo attack from 10,500 yards.Butler, USS Raymond, and USS Dennis (which picked up 434 survivors.During the surface engagement, Taffy 3 lost the USS Gambier Bay, destroyers USS Johnston and USS Hoel, and destroyer escort USS Samuel B.Lo Avenger torpedo bomber, piloted by Ltjg Waldrop, strafed and exploded two torpedoes in the wake of sister ship USS Kalinin Bay.Roberts, all to enemy gunfire.The survivors were rescued from the water by the USS Heermann, USS John C.USS Fanshaw Bay were damaged
Edited sentence: At 0915 the enemy destroyers which were kept at bay by the daring and almost singlehanded exploits of the USS Johnston (DD-557) launched a premature torpedo attack from 10,500 yards.Butler (DE-339), USS Raymond (DE-341), and USS Dennis (DE-405) (which picked up an astounding 434 survivors.During the surface engagement, Taffy 3 lost the USS Gambier Bay (CVE-73), destroyers USS Johnston (DD-557) and USS Hoel (DD-533), and destroyer escort USS Samuel B.Lo Avenger torpedo bomber, piloted by Ltjg Waldrop, strafed and exploded two torpedoes in the wake of sister ship USS Kalinin Bay (CVE-68).Roberts (DE-413), all to enemy gunfire.The survivors were rescued from the water by the USS Heermann (DD-532), USS John C.USS Fanshaw Bay (CVE-70) were damaged