Original sentence: Following some good form with Ħamrun Spartans, Bencini re-joined his home town club Sliema Wanderers for the 2003-04 season.He spent one season with Sliema Wanderers, making five appearances, and winning his third Maltese Premier League, Maltese Cup and MFA Super 5 Lottery Tournament
Edited sentence: Following some good form with Ħamrun Spartans, Bencini re-joined his home town club Sliema Wanderers in January, 2004.He spent half a season with Sliema Wanderers, making five appearances, and winning his third Maltese Premier League, as well as the Maltese Cup and the MFA Super 5 Lottery Tournament