Original sentence: Double-J and Joey both take turns with Annette, but Annette starts to cry and struggle after she comes down from the drugs she had been given and realizes she does not want to have sex with them.Dragging Stephanie with him, he attempts forcing a crude pass on her in the car until she fights him off and escapes.He then sullenly takes off with the gang, along with a drunk and high Annette, whom Joey says is going to "give everybody a piece".Nevertheless, Tony and Stephanie take the top prize, which Tony immediately dismisses (realizing they didn't deserve it), claiming the contest was rigged in his favor (because of his popularity at 2001).The last couple to compete, however, is a Puerto Rican duo whom Tony realized that him and Stephanie were outclassed by, after seeing their spectacular performance.committed suicide, Tony responds, "There are ways of killin' yourself without killin' yourself"
Edited sentence: " Double-J and Joey both take turns with Annette, but Annette starts to cry and struggle after she comes down from the drugs she had been given and realizes she does not want to have sex with them.After seeing their spectacular performance, Tony realizes that he and Stephanie have been outclassed.Dragging Stephanie with him, he makes a crude pass on her in the car, forcing himself on her until she fights him off and escapes.He then sullenly takes off with the gang, along with a drunk and high Annette, who Joey says is going to "give everybody a piece.Nonetheless, Tony and Stephanie take the top prize, which Tony immediately dismisses (realizing they didn't deserve it), claiming the contest was rigged in his favor (because of his popularity at 2001).The last couple to compete, however, is a dazzling Puerto Rican duo.committed suicide, Tony responds, "There are ways of killin' yourself without killin' yourself