Original sentence: Furthermore, many academic and scientific terms were borrowed from Japanese, which had created a large body of  Sino-Japanese terms by coining or reusing Chinese words to translate Western terminology (mainly English and German).However, a small number of Sino-Korean words were coined by the Koreans themselves.Much like Japanese, a great deal of Sino-Korean vocabulary was directly borrowed from Chinese vocabulary
Edited sentence: Many academic and scientific terms were borrowed from Japanese, which had created a large body of  Sino-Japanese terms by coining or reusing Chinese words to translate Western terminology (mainly English and German).On the other hand, a small number of Sino-Korean words were coined by the Koreans themselves