Original sentence: An English major at the University of Notre Dame, Chamney was able to use his literary talents and his personality to build a loyal fanbase of American readers who embraced the aggressively cocky yet often self-deprecating sense of humor which "the Chamdawg" possessed.Chamney developed a cult following on the Internet amongst both track fans and non-fans when he began posting training journals on the college track and field site TrackShark
Edited sentence: An English major at the University of Notre Dame, Chamney was able to use his literary talents and his unique charismatic personality to build a loyal fanbase of American readers who embraced the aggressively cocky yet often self-depricating sense of humor which "the Chamdawg" possessed.Chamney developed a cult following on the internet amongst both track fans and non-fans when he began posting training journals on the popular college track and field site, TrackShark