Original sentence: For both reasons her historiography has been sharply criticized by Hindu nationalists.She has taken a strong stance against communalism and the communalisation of history textbooks
Edited sentence: For this reasons her historiography has been sharply criticized by self-aware Hindus.However she completely ignores the plight of the hindus during the muslim and christian rule and concenterates solely on hindu baiting.She has taken a strong stance against potrayal of Hinduism is a positive and neutral light in Indian school text books saying that the changes are communal in nature