Original sentence: As a testament to the work produced by students in Hirschi’s multimedia program, four Telly Awards, aN award honoring creativity in business commercials and visual productions, have been presented to the school in the past five years
Edited sentence: As a testament to the work produced by students in Hirschi’s multimedia program, four Telly Awards, a prestigious award honoring creativity in business commercials and visual productions, have been presented to the school in the past five years