Original sentence: Kwanzaa is a controversial concept and is challenged by some due to its lack of authenticity, it slinks to communism, and its exclusivity
Edited sentence: ..."While the observance of Kwanzaa has spread to other countries, there are many people of African descent who do not know the purpose of Kwanzaa or how to celebrate it.According to Camille Jackson, Staff Writer at www.Although it has established a hold in American society, it is often attacked by proxy through its founder, a convicted felon who has a checkered past.Author Sara McGill sums it up most succinctly, in her book Kwanzaa (2005), when she says,.Kwanzaa is a holiday not without controversy, as various segments of American society challenge it on grounds of its authenticity and relevance.Others refuse to celebrate Kwanzaa because it is not a true African tradition.Yet, for the millions who observe it, the holiday emphasizes the strength of African history and the beauty of African culture" (Jackson, p.org, this is done as a means to undermine its powerful message