Original sentence: American Revolution.Because of this, when England began to burden the colonies with taxes, such as the Stamp Act, Sugar Act, and Tea Act, the Americans reacted with great indignation, which eventually led them to break away from England and become the United States
Edited sentence: Because of this, when England began to burden the colonies with taxes, such as the Stamp Act, Sugar Act, and Tea Act, the Americans reacted with great indignation, which eventually led them to break away from England and become the United States, however the actual tax they payed was 1/8 th of that payed by an Englishman and they already had considerably more freedom