Original sentence: Students may join one of RCA's three band programs and begin individual lessons starting in fourth grade.Students may take private voice lessons that are taught by the academy's music faculty.The school offers a strings program after school four days each week
Edited sentence: Raleigh Christian Academy offers a strings program after school four days each week with students choosing from a number of stringed instruments.Students may join one of RCA's three band programs and begin individual lessons as early as fourth grade.Students wishing to concentrate on their singing abilities may take private voice lessons that are taught by the academy's music faculty