Original sentence: Africa himself was functionally illiterate, but he persuaded Glassey to begin writing down Africa's ideas.Eleven MOVE members, including John Africa, died in the fire
Edited sentence: Africa himself ,  he persuaded Glassey to begin writing down Africa's ideas.Eleven MOVE members, including John Africa and small children were burned alive in the fire.The Philadelphia Police shot at anyone who would try to leave the Burning West Philadelphia Row Home