Original sentence: This direction is believed to have emanated from senior BBC Scotland journalist and self flagellator David Kerr, a member of the controversial extreme right wing Opus Dei, who is currently the SNP's controversial choice of by-election candidate for catholic ghetto, Glasgow North East
Edited sentence: This direction is believed to have emanated from senior BBC Scotland journalist and self flagellator David Kerr, a member of the extreme right wing Opus Dei, who is currently the SNP's controversial choice of by-election candidate for catholic ghetto, Glasgow North East