Original sentence: Millar's comments have become a firestorm of controversy, as many people have pointed out that Iron Man still is portrayed negatively at best, or outright villainous at worst in the main book
Edited sentence: Millar's comments have become a firestorm of controversy, as many people have pointed out that Iron Man still is portrayed negatively at best/outrigth villainous at worst in the main book, as well as the fact that because of countless plotholes in the main mini-series (most notably, Millar's decision to omit a crucial plotpoint, mainly Spider-Man's decision to reject Iron Man and join the anti-registration side upon learning that Iron Man means to permenantly imprison all captured heroes in the Negative Zone) negate his criticism of fan response