Original sentence: Other networks are more skeptical of Leno's chances for success at 10 pm, and have planned their 2009-2010 schedules accordingly; for example, CBS's popular procedural The Mentalist will compete with it on Thursdays
Edited sentence: CBS's popular procedural The Mentalist, for example, will compete with Leno on Thursdays, joining fellow successes CSI: Miami, CSI: NY, and Numb3rs.Other networks are more skeptical of Leno's chances for success at 10 pm, and have planned their 2009-2010 schedules accordingly