Original sentence: Liman enjoyed further commercial and creative success when he helmed the action thriller The Bourne Identity  (2002), an adaptation of author Robert Ludlum's potboiler.The film, his most commercially-successful to date, is also well known for the off-screen romance between stars Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie, who developed a high-profile relationship after making the film
Edited sentence: Liman enjoyed his most potent commercial and creative success when he helmed the action thriller The Bourne Identity  (2002), an adaptation of author Robert Ludlum's potboiler.The film, while commercially successful, is better known for the off-screen romance between stars Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie, who developed a high-profile relationship after making the film