Original sentence: A 10-minute standing ovation followed the concert; the DVD shows a sprinkling of rock luminaries in the crowd, such as Roger Daltrey, Paul Weller, Sir George Martin and Sir Paul McCartney.After an opening set of Beach Boys classics, he climbed back on stage for a rousing performance of the album.With the improvements in his mental health, Wilson found himself able to contemplate returning to the Smile project
Edited sentence: A 10 minute standing ovation left Brian stunned centre stage surrounded by the musicians who had made this moment real.After an opening set of Beach Boys classics, he climbed back on stage to front the most breathtaking performance of his life.Critical acclaim was unanimous, and the emotional presence of rock luminaries such as Roger Daltrey, Paul Weller, Sir George Martin and Sir Paul McCartney added to the sense that, finally, a weight had been lifted from Brian's shoulders.He need not have worried.With the improvements in his mental health, Wilson found himself finally able to contemplate returning to the Smile project