Original sentence: ACL expressed amazement that the Inquiry "recommended more prostitution, with less controls", with the ACL's Mr Wallace stating, "an inherently dangerous occupation [has been] put ... on the same level as selling fries at McDonalds
Edited sentence: ACL expressed amazement that the Inquiry "recommended more prostitution, with less controls", with the ACL's Mr Wallace noting, "an inherently dangerous occupation ... put ... on the same level as selling fries at McDonalds