Original sentence: Located near the Eastern Harbour Crossing, Sceneway Garden also has an outlet to Hong Kong Island.Sceneway Garden is built on top of the Lam Tin MTR Station and Lam Tin Bus Terminus, providing transport to residents.Situated on a platform above Route 2, the underlying layer of the platform houses a shopping mall, Sceneway Plaza, and a link to the MTR station.Two other major shopping plazas in Hong Kong, APM and Laguna Plaza are close by
Edited sentence: As the estate is near the shore of Victoria Harbour, high-level residents can enjoy the harbourview.Located near the Eastern Harbour Crossing, Sceneway Garden also has a fast outlet to Hong Kong Island.Sceneway Garden is built on top of the Lam Tin MTR Station and Lam Tin Bus Terminus, providing efficient transport to residents.Situated on a platform above Route 2, the underlying layer of the platform houses a shopping mall, Sceneway Plaza, and a   link to the MTR station.Within 10 minutes' walk, two other major shopping plazas in Hong Kong, APM and Laguna Plaza can also be reached