Original sentence: Kim Jong-il (born February 16, 1942) has been the de facto head of state of North Korea since 1994.Some of these stories, come from defectors from the DPRK, and are considered more credible by some
Edited sentence: Kim Jong-il (born February 16, 1942) has been the dictator of North Korea since 1994.Some of these stories, however, come from defectors from the DPRK whose accounts have some credibility