Original sentence: A fight ensued that continued until evening, when the Christians managed to turn the position and the Muslims retreated to the Gebalfaro fortress.Ferdinand left Velez on 7 May 1487 and advanced along the coast to Bezmillana, about six miles from Málaga, where the road led between two heights defended by the Muslims.However, after three months the Christians managed to take possession of an outlying tower attached with a bridge of four arches to the city wall,.Seeing their extreme suffering, Hamet el Zegrí eventually agreed to withdraw with his forces to the Gebalfaro, and let the population make terms with the Christians.The Christians received two Flemish transports with military supplies sent by the Emperor of Germany.The Muslims attacked and destroyed the towers, counter-mined and drove out the Christians, and sent out armed vessels against the Christian fleet.The Muslims kept up fire from the city on the Christian lines, and made repeated sallies, sometimes in strength.The first Christian attack was against the landward suburb.The landward height was converted into a Christian strong point, and they began construction of works encircling the city.They breached the wall, and after strong resistance the Muslims were driven back into the city
Edited sentence: A fight ensued that continued until evening, when the Spanish managed to turn the position and the Moors retreated to the Gebalfaro fortress.Ferdinand left Velez on 7 May 1487 and advanced along the coast to Bezmillana, about six miles from Málaga, where the road led between two heights defended by the Moors.However, after three months the Spanish managed to take possession of an outlying tower attached with a bridge of four arches to the city wall,.Seeing their extreme suffering, Hamet el Zegrí eventually agreed to withdraw with his forces to the Gebalfaro, and let the population make terms with the Spaniards.The Moors attacked and destroyed the towers, counter-mined and drove out the Spaniards, and sent out armed vessels against the Spanish fleet.The Moors kept up fire from the city on the Spanish lines, and made repeated sallies, sometimes in strength.The Spanish received two Flemish transports with military supplies sent by the Emperor of Germany.The first Spanish attack was against the landward suburb.The landward height was converted into a Spanish strong point, and the Spanish began construction of works encircling the city.The wall was breached by the Spanish ordnance,.and after strong resistance the Moors were driven back into the city