Original sentence: Martinez ignored that advice and instead enrolled in the University of Texas at Austin.Vilma Socorro Martínezwas born to a Mexican American family in San Antonio, Texas, in 1943, and was raised in a climate of certain racial hostility
Edited sentence: Martínez ignored that advice and instead enrolled in the University of Texas at Austin.Vilma Socorro Martínez was born to a Mexican American family in San Antonio, Texas, in 1943, and was raised in a climate of certain racial hostility