Original sentence: At Port Famine on the Strait of Magellan he locked himself in his cabin for 14 days, then on 2 August 1828 shot himself and died in delirium 10 days later.DarwinandSedgwick (talk) 14:06, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
Edited sentence: At Port Famine on the Strait of Magellan he locked himself in his cabin for 14 days, then on 2 August 1828 shot himself and died in delirium 12 days later