Original sentence: "  Speaking concerning Red John's signature, Jane says "... the first thing that anyone sees is the face on the wall.Both of these victims were female, the first being Patrick Jane's wife to spite Jane.His victims are usually female, with one exception - a man Jane helped to be released from prison on the condition he would give Jane information as to the whereabouts of Red John after his own release.The second time Red John painted the victim's toenails, it was solely to draw Jane's furies out into a trap at the end of Season 1
Edited sentence: "  Speaking about Red John's signature, Jane says "... the first thing that anyone sees is the face on the wall.Both of these victims were female.His victims are usually female.The exception was a man Jane helped to be released from prison on the condition he would give Jane information as to the whereabouts of Red John after his own release.The first was Patrick Jane's wife to spite Jane.The second time Red John painted the victim's toenails was solely to draw Jane's furies out into a trap at the end of Season 1.There was one exception