Original sentence: Generally, there are religious meditation, in which one meditates on or in communion with the Divine, and focus meditation, in which one meditates to improve health or mental faculties.Many report improved concentration, awareness, self-discipline and equanimity through meditation.The 'divine' need not be any specific deity and may be unknown; 'focus' need not include concentration on any specific item and may include intuitive inner 'quantum leaps'.The two positions often overlap in meditative traditions
Edited sentence: Generally, there is religious meditation, where one meditates to commune with or on the Divine, and focus meditation, where one meditates to improve health or mental faculties (the former doesn't have to be any specific 'devine' and many times can be 'unknown' and the latter does not need to include 'focusing' as in concentrating and can include intuitive inner 'quantum leaps').Many have found improved concentration, awareness, self-discipline and equanimity through meditation.Very often there is significant overlap between these two positions in many meditative traditions