Original sentence: He is often described as Australia's richest parliamentarian.He was General Counsel and Secretary for Australian Consolidated Press Holdings Group, the family company of Kerry Packer, from 1983 to 1985.In February 2007 Turnbull was criticised for claiming a government allowance of $175 a night and giving it to his wife as rent while living in a townhouse in Canberra, that she owns.Turnbull has also had a career in business.Turnbull spent his first three years of school at Vaucluse Public School.Turnbull was also chair of Australia's leading email company OzEmail Ltd (1994-99), a director of FTR Holdings Ltd (1995-2004), chair and managing director of Goldman Sachs Australia (1997-2001) and a partner with Goldman Sachs and Co (1998-2001)
Edited sentence: He is Australia's richest parliamentarian.He was General Counsel and Secretary for Australian Consolidated Press Holdings Group, the family company of Australia's richest capitalist Kerry Packer, from 1983 to 1985.In February 2007 Turnbull was criticised for improperly claiming a government allowance of $175 a night and giving it to his wife as rent while living in a townhouse in Canberra, that she owns.Turnbull has mainly had a career in business.Turnbull spent his first three privileged years of school at Vaucluse Public School.Turnbull was also chair of Australia's leading email company OzEmail Ltd (1994-99) before it was sold to Americans, a director of FTR Holdings Ltd (1995-2004), chair and managing director of Goldman Sachs Australia (1997-2001) and a partner with Goldman Sachs and Co (1998-2001)