Original sentence: In 1930, after being editor of the university's yearbook, freshmen class president, student body president, and winner of the Rocky Mountain Oratory Award, In 1930, Reitz received his bachelor's degree from Colorado State University, where he had become a member of Sigma Chi
Edited sentence: In 1930, after being editor of the university's yearbook, freshmen class president, student body president, and winner of the Rocky Mountain Oratory Award, In 1930, Reitz received his bachelor's degree from Colorado State University, where he had become a member of Sigma Chi Fraternity