Original sentence: He explains that the theory offers proof of the age of Rama and Krishna and other important historical Indian figures than other dating methods, which make some of these figures out to be millions of years old, too old for the accepted chronology of human history on Earth.The theory of the Sun's binary companion expounded by Sri Yukteswar in The Holy Science has attracted the attention of Dr
Edited sentence: He explains that the theory offers better proof of the age of Rama and Krishna and other important historical Indian figures than other dating methods, which make some of these figures out to be millions of years old, too old for the accepted chronology of human history on Earth.One of these is Dr.The theory of the Sun's binary companion expounded by Sri Yukteswar in The Holy Science is attracting the attention of more and more Western writers and researchers