Original sentence: In addition to on-campus study the University also operates a number of distance learning programmes and has one of the most extensive offerings of off-campus e-Learning programmes of any UK University.In the Atrium, the SU has a shop called Keddies.It also includes a range of catering facilities, serving hot meals, salads, light snacks, and drinks, provided by Upper Crust.It has now moved to to near the SUB bar.The SU has two bars — the SUB Bar (opened in late April 2006 at a cost of £500,000), which is next to the western-end of the Atrium concourse and opposite the Blends coffee shop, and the Lonsdale Bar (on the site of the Lonsdale student halls)
Edited sentence: Brief History Of The Buxton Campus From Buxton.D:One — student radio station.Derby city centre has a wide range of clubs and bars, within walking distance of most of the halls.Dusted — student newspaper.For more entertainment, Nottingham city centre has 350 bars, with a late night hourly bus on Fridays and Saturdays.In addition to on-campus study the University also operates a number of distance learning programmes and has one of the most extensive offerings of off-campus e-Learning programmes  of any UK University.In the Atrium, the SU has a shop called Keddies, which is convenient though marginally value for money.It also includes a range of catering facilities, serving hot meals, salads, light snacks, and drinks, provided by Upper Crust, usually found at airports and Moto service stations.It has now moved to tp near the SUB bar.The SU has two bars — the much-praised SUB Bar (opened in late April 2006 at a cost of £500,000), which is next to the western-end of the Atrium concourse and opposite the Blends coffee shop, and the Lonsdale Bar (on the site of the Lonsdale student halls).These include First Floor Fat Cat, Varsity, Mosh and The Friary on Friargate, Blue Note and Vine's on Sadlergate, Zanzibar on London Road (opposite the new Eagle Centre), Blu Bambu on Colyear Street and Walkabout on the Market Square.University of Derby Students' Union