Original sentence: Wesley College, informally known as Wesley, is an independent School for boys situated in South Perth, a suburb of Perth, Western Australia
Edited sentence: The school has grown to become one of Australia's leading boys schools and has around 8000 Members of its Old Boys Association, with around 3000 currently part of the Wesley Family today.Wesley College, informally known as Wesley, is an private school for boys situated in South Perth,in Perth, Western Australia