Original sentence: During the takeover procedures, Sir Martin Sorrell, the founder of WPP, was described by Ogilvy as an "odious little shit", and he promised to never work again
Edited sentence: During the takeover procedures, Sir Martin Sorrell, the founder of WPP, who already had a tarnished reputation in the advertising industry following a similar successful takeover of J.Walter Thompson, was described by Ogilvy as an "odious little shit", and he promised to never work again