Original sentence: Capsizing repeatedly in rough waters, wife became unable get back onto kayak due to fatigue, was attacked at dusk by "large shark" while hanging onto kayak treading water.Nahid Davoodabai, 29  March 18, 1999  Unconfirmed, probable Tiger shark  Fatal attack in channel waters off west side of Maui, Hawaii
Edited sentence: Capsizing repeatedly in rough waters, wife became unable get back onto kayak due to fatigue, was attacked at dusk by "large shark with blunt head" while hanging onto kayak treading water.Nahid Davoodabai, 29  March 18, 1999  Tiger shark  Unconfirmed fatal attack in channel waters off west side of Maui, Hawaii