Original sentence: The battle is seen entirely from the perspective of the British ships, plus that of prisoners (captured from nine merchantmen) held on Graf Spee.The film pays particular attention to detail, including the bells ringing before each salvo, the scorching on the gun barrels after the battle, and the accurate depiction of naval procedures
Edited sentence: The attention to detail is impressive, including the bells ringing before each salvo, the scorching on the gun barrels after the battle, and the accurate depiction of naval procedures.The only omission is that the battle is seen entirely from the perspective of the British ships, plus that of prisoners (captured from nine merchantmen) held on Graf Spee