Original sentence: Kenji settles down with Raikōji Chizuru, who originates from Watsuki's original short stories; this girl appears strong willed and energetic and bears a striking physical and characteristical resemblance to his mother, Kaoru
Edited sentence: Kenji settles down with Raikōji Chizuru, who originates from Watsuki's original short stories; this rather pretty girl appears strong willed and energetic and bears a striking physical and characteristical resemblance to his mother, Kaoru