Original sentence: Some Russian media and individual opposition journalists have also criticised the developments.The business daily Vedomosti noted the name of the Commission leaves the way clear for the falsification of history in favor of Russia, establishing a "cult of victory"similar to the civil religions upon which authoritarian and totalitarian states have been built in the past
Edited sentence: The  daily Vedomosti noted the name of the Commission leaves open the falsification of history in favor of Russia, establishing a "cult of victory"similar to civil religions upon which authoritarian and totalitarian states have been built in the past.The opposition press in Russia has also criticised the developments