Original sentence: Technically, the term "nationality" is incorrect and misleading, rather "ethnicity" is correct, in that none of these groups have their own nation, and thus self-determination
Edited sentence: Technically, the term "nationality" is incorrect and misleading, rather "ethnicity" is correct, in that none of these groups have their own nation, and thus self-determination, and the use of the word "nationality" is a word to downplay the fact the PRC is an empire