Original sentence: According to the British Department for Education and Skills, Canterbury University of the Seychelles is neither a Recognised Body for UK Degree awards,  nor is it a Listed Body.. It is listed by the Oregon Office of Degree Authorization in their list of unaccredited degree suppliers maintained by ODA for the protection of the citizens of Oregon and their post-secondary schools by identifying those degree suppliers that do not meet the requirements of ORS 348.609(1)...Canterbury University of the Seychelles is a degree-granting institution widely considered by international credentialing bodies to be a diploma mill.It has been discussed in an article on the World Education News & Reviews website, "Fighting Credential Fraud", as being towards what the article writer calls the "illegal" end of the continuum of legitimacy, and towards the "no acceptability" end of a continuum of acceptability.Though its name is very similar, Canterbury University of the Seychelles is affiliated with neither the [University of Canterbury]] in New Zealand nor Canterbury Christ Church University in England
Edited sentence: Canterbury University of the Seychelles is a diploma mill.So far as the UK Department for Education and Skills is concerned, it is neither a Recognised Body for UK Degree awards,  nor is it a Listed Body.. It is listed by the Oregon Office of Degree Authorization in their list of unaccredited degree suppliers maintained by ODA for the protection of the citizens of Oregon and their post-secondary schools by identifying those degree suppliers that do not meet the requirements of ORS 348.609(1).. It is discussed in an article, "Fighting Credential Fraud", on the World Education News & Reviews website, as being towards the "illegal" end of a continuum of legitimacy, and towards the "no acceptability" end of a continuum of acceptability