Original sentence: It is in observance of Pakistan’s support of and unity with the people of Indian-administered Kashmir, the nationalists' efforts to separate from India, and to pay homage to Kashmiris who have died in the conflict.Kashmir Day was first proposed by the Jamaat-e-Islami party in Pakistan in 1990.Solidarity rallies are held in Azad Kashmir, Pakistan and by overseas Kashmiris in the United Kingdom
Edited sentence: It is in observance of Pakistan’s support and unity with the people of Indian-administered Kashmir, their ongoing freedom struggle, and to pay homage to Kashmiri martyrs who lost their lives fighting for Kashmir’s freedom.Kashmir Day was first proposed by Jamaat-e-Islami party in Pakistan in 1990.Solidarity rallies are held in Azad Kashmir, Pakistan and by Kashmiri diaspora in United Kingdom