Original sentence: Others argue that calling the language Kiswahili when speaking English only makes sense if you would also habitually refer to European languages as Deutsch, Russki, Svensk, Magyar, and so forth (in preference to German, Russian, Swedish and Hungarian).When speaking English, some hold that Kiswahili is a more respectful or politically-correct term than Swahili
Edited sentence: For lingistic purists, calling the language Kiswahili when speaking English only makes sense if you also habitually refer to European languages as Deutsch, Russki, Svensk, and Magyar.When speaking English, some hold that Kiswahili is a more respectful or politically correct term than Swahili