Original sentence: "  However, Auschwitz survivors did not paint such a nice picture of death by starving, and it was universally regarded as one of the intensely cruel practices of Nazi Germany.Additionally, he stopped donating and attending his Southern Baptist congregation, Calvary Baptist Church, in Clearwater because they opposed dehydrating a woman to death, and the church suggested that he might be better to leave formally.Also, the same newspapers who reported claims that starvation is "blissful" have also reported on starving people in India "clutching their stomachs in pain".The efforts of Schiavo's husband to discontinue food and water have prompted a fierce debate over bioethics, euthanasia, legal guardianship, federalism, and civil rights, as well an active counter-effort to keep her alive.This is consistent with known cases of death by dehyration
Edited sentence: Additionally, he has been asked to leave his Southern Baptist congregation, Calvary Baptist Church, in Clearwater.In a news conference the following day, Michael Schiavo's attorney, George Felos, disputed that there was bleeding, saying "she looked beautiful.In all the years I've seen Mrs.Schiavo, I've never seen such a look of peace and beauty upon her.The efforts of Schiavo's husband to discontinue life support have prompted a fierce debate over bioethics, euthanasia, legal guardianship, federalism, and civil rights, as well an active counter-effort to keep her alive