Original sentence: Around 1804, the valley of Patrick's Cove, then known as Devil's Cove was settled by a young man from County Tipperary, Ireland.Coffey became the first resident of this community.Coffey had moved to Newfoundland from County Waterford, Ireland to work at Placentia's Saunders and Sweetman firm (often referred to as Sweetman's).Coffey married a woman name Catherine McGrath, daughter of Bartholomew McGrath.In 1911 the population was 40, in 1951 there were 141 and in 1956 there were 166 people there
Edited sentence: Around 1804, the picturesque valley of Patrick's Cove, then known as Devil's Cove was settled by a young man from County Tipperary, Ireland.In 1911 the population was 40, in 1951 there were 141and in 1956 there were 166 people there.James had moved to Newfoundland from County Waterford, Ireland to work at Placentia's Saunders and Sweetman firm (often referred to as Sweetman's).James married a woman name Catherine McGrath, daughter of Bartholomew McGrath.James, excited at this possibility, became the first resident of this community