Original sentence: Cunningham's next major assignment took him back across the North Sea and well into the Arctic circle to the port of Tromsø on 7 June in order to rescue King Haakon VII, Crown Prince Olav, and other members of the Norwegian royal family, along with government ministers and 50 tons of the country's gold reserve.Under strict instructions not to break radio silence, Cunningham in the Devonshire, had picked up his evacuees and was on the return journey to the United Kingdom when they received a distress call from the British carrier HMS Glorious, only some 70 miles away, which was being engaged by vastly superior enemy forces
Edited sentence: Cunningham's next major assignment took him back across the North Sea and beyond the Arctic circle to the port of Tromsø on 7 June to evacuate King Haakon VII, Crown Prince Olav, and other members of the Norwegian royal family, along with government ministers and 50 tons of the country's gold reserve.Under strict instructions not to break radio silence, Cunningham in the Devonshire, had picked up his evacuees and was on the return journey to the United Kingdom when they received an enemy sighting report from the British carrier HMS Glorious, only some 70 miles away, which was being engaged by vastly superior forces