Original sentence: Jonathan returns to ARI with Detective Williams to shutdown the weather-controlling technology system to save the world.The Storm centers on billionaire Robert Terrell (Treat Williams), who has made history with "weather creation" technology though his own business: Atmospheric Research Institute
Edited sentence: Jonathan returns to ARI with Detective Williams to shutdown the weather-controlling technology system to save the world from annihilation because the weather is out of control manipulations.The Storm centers on billionaire Robert Terrell (Treat Williams), who has made history to control the weather technology though his own business: Atmospheric Research Institute