Original sentence: For instance, criticisms can be found in comments posted to two articles favorable to Peer-to-Patent on the well-known Patently Obvious (Patently-O) blog: articles about the announced launch and the actual launch of the pilot
Edited sentence: For instance, thoughtful criticisms can be found in comments posted to two articles favorable to Peer-to-Patent on the well-known Patently Obvious (Patently-O) blog: articles about the announced launch and the actual launch of the pilot