Original sentence: Box office success and favourable notices from critics at Passe Muraille led Mirvish to finance further development of the script and produce a mainstage version at Toronto's 1000-seat Winter Garden Theare, as part of a subscription season, in 2001.Near the end of that engagement (July 28, 2001), Paul Mack invited producer Roy Miller, of The Paper Mill Playhouse, a U
Edited sentence: Box office success and favourable notices from critics at Passe Muraille led Mirvish to finance further development of the script and produce a mainstage version at Toronto's 1000-seat  Winter Garden Theare, as part of a subscription season, in 2001.Near the end of that engagement (July 28, 2001), Paul Mack invited producer Roy Miller, of The Paper Mill Playhouse, a leading U