Original sentence: Apostates of cults and NRMs have greatly benefited from the Internet.Before the popularity of the Internet, apostates of NRMs had far more difficulty coming into contact with other ex-members and gathering and spreading information.Many new religious movements are now the targets of web sites on which they warn the public of their purported dangers and harm.These opponents typically disclose unflattering perspectives, testimonials, and information that, purportedly the religious movements they belonged to do not disclose
Edited sentence: Before the popularity of the Internet, ex-members had far more difficulty coming into contact with other ex-members and gathering and spreading information.Critical former members of cults and NRMs have greatly benefited from the Internet.Many new religious movements are now the targets of web sites on which disaffected ex-members warn the public of their purported dangers and harm.These opponents typically disclose unflattering perspectives, testimonials, and information that these religious movements themselves do not disclose