Original sentence: , The United Norwegian Lutheran Church of America, A Historical Sketch (Rolvaag Library.Clifford, The Lutherans in North America (“The Predestination Controversy”, pp.Fortress Press, Philadelphia,PA.Grose, I.Nelson, E.Northfield, MN).Olaf College.Olaf College founding pastor,  Bernt Julius Muus
Edited sentence: Kildahl and Thorbjorn N.Mohn (both St.Olaf College Presidents) together with Luther Seminary Professor M.Olaf College founding pastor,  Bernt Julius Muus, J