Original sentence: Peter, Sarah, and Judy follow him to a department store where they fight him, causing chaos in the process, but they manage to retrieve the game, but when the four return to the mansion — now completely overrun by jungle wildlife — they release one calamity after another, until finally an earthquake destroys the house.When Alan accidentally damages a machine, Sam's employee and Alan's friend Carl is dismissed
Edited sentence: Peter, Sarah, and Judy follow him to a department store where they fight him, causing chaos in the process, and a marvelous shootout ensues, but Alan rescues them and they manage to retrieve the game, but when the four return to the mansion — now completely overrun by jungle wildlife — they release one calamity after another, until finally an earthquake destroys the house.When Alan accidentally damages a machine, Sam's employee and Alan's friend Carl takes the blame and is fired