Original sentence: But after John uses the numbers to correctly predict another disaster — a Manhattan subway train derailment which John tries and fails to prevent — Diana seeks out John, and together they go to investigate Lucinda's old remote mobile home trying to find further clues to Lucinda's predictions.Having noticed that the last date on the paper is not accompanied by coordinates, further clues in Lucinda's home (scratched under her bed) lead John and Diana to realize that the "33" listed as the death toll for the final disaster is actually "EE" reversed, which Lucinda meant to represent "Everyone Else.His colleague casts doubt on the theory as there are still numbers in the sequence that do not appear to have any relevance.John and a fellow professor forecast that a massive solar flare will soon reach Earth, having reviewed previous scientific literature and the final disaster on Lucinda's paper will indeed be worldwide and apocalyptic.John approaches as colleague at MIT and informs him of his discovery.John finds Diana in the abandoned ambulance and confirms that the date Diana's mother predicted Diana would die is correct
Edited sentence: But after John uses the numbers to correctly predict another disaster — a Manhattan subway train derailment which John tries and fails to prevent — Diana seeks out John, and together they go to investigate Lucinda's old remote mobile home.Having noticed that the last date on the paper is not accompanied by coordinates, further clues in Lucinda's home lead John and Diana to realize that the "33" listed as the death toll for the final disaster is actually "EE" reversed, which Lucinda meant to represent "Everyone Else.John and a fellow professor forecast that a massive solar flare will soon reach Earth, and the final disaster on Lucinda's paper will indeed be worldwide and apocalyptic