Original sentence: During the course of appearing in several of the Ma and Pa Kettle movies during the 1950s as Susie Kettle, one of the titular couple's numerous children, Jackson also appeared in The Breaking Point with John Garfield, the actor's penultimate role before his sudden death two years later.On the latter program, she made one of her more memorable portrayals as the android "Andrea" in the episode "What are Little Girls Made Of
Edited sentence: During the course of appearing in several of the Ma and Pa Kettle movies during the 1950s as Susie Kettle, one of the titular couple's numerous children.Ironically, the Peter Gunn TV series on NBC had been scheduled opposite Make Room For Daddy on CBS for two seasons.Jackson also appeared in The Breaking Point with John Garfield, the actor's penultimate role before his sudden death two years later.On the latter program, she made one of her more memorable portrayals as the android "Andrea" in the episode, "What are Little Girls Made Of