Original sentence: For example, the Christian apostles' martyrdom is cited as strong evidence that their experience of the resurrection was no hoax or conspiracy.The Witness argument is an argument that is meant to help prove the existence of God based on the fact that many people of supposed tremendous integrity have claimed to have personal experience with God
Edited sentence: For example, the Christian apostles' martyrdom is cited as strong evidence that their experience of the resurrection was no hoax or conspiracy; or, as Josh McDowell put it, "who would die for a lie.The Witness argument is an argument that is meant to help prove the existence of God based on the fact that many people of tremendous integrity have claimed to have personal experience with God