Original sentence: At the age of five she meets her future husband eight year old Richard Plantagenet who is studying under the tutelage of her father.Richard enthralls young Anne with tales of his brother, and the Wars of the Roses.The Reluctant Queen is a novel by historical novelist Jean Plaidy which tells the tale of Anne Neville the reluctant wife of Richard III King of England.This leads to her reminiscing of happier days.Unmentioned in the novel is Richard's eventual downfall and death at the battle of Bosworth and Elizabeth's rise as consort of the new King, and mother of a new dynasty, and the fate of Isabel's children Edward and Margaret who were executed in 1499, and 1541
Edited sentence: At the age of five she meets her future husband, eight-year-old Richard Plantagenet who is studying under the tutelage of her father.Richard enthralls young Anne with tales of his brother and the Wars of the Roses.The Reluctant Queen is a novel by historical novelist Jean Plaidy which tells the tale of Anne Neville, the reluctant wife of King Richard III of England.This leads to her reminiscing on happier days.Unmentioned in the novel are Richard's eventual downfall and death at the battle of Bosworth and Elizabeth's rise as consort of the new King, and mother of a new dynasty, and the fate of Isabel's children Edward and Margaret who were executed in 1499 and 1541 respectively