Original sentence: When he was two years old, his father drowned in a reservoir of the sertão, and he was than adopted by his grandfather.Zé Ramalho was born to Estelita Torres Ramalho, a elementar school teacher, and Antônio de Pádua Pordeus Ramalho, a Seresta performer
Edited sentence: When he was two years old, his father drowned in a reservoir of the sertão, and he was then adopted by his grandfather.Zé Ramalho was born to Estelita Torres Ramalho, a elementary school teacher, and Antônio de Pádua Pordeus Ramalho, a Seresta performer