Original sentence: However, the ROC military administration on Taiwan under Chen Yi, was viewed by many as corrupt.This view, compounded with a period of hyperinflation, unrest due to the Chinese Civil War, and distrust due to political, cultural and lingual differences that had developed between the Taiwanese and the newcomers, quickly led to the loss of popular support for the new administration
Edited sentence: However, the ROC military administration on Taiwan under Chen Yi,  was extremely corrupt.This corruption, compounded with a period of hyperinflation, unrest due to the Chinese Civil War, and distrust due to political, cultural and lingual differences that had developed between the Taiwanese and the newcomers, quickly led to the loss of popular support for the new administration