Original sentence: Activists like Medha Patkar had been trying to uncover the problems since at least 2004.In 2010, the Indian media brought to public the alleged violations of rules at various phases of construction in the Adarsh Society.The Adarsh society high-rise was constructed in the Colaba locality of Mumbai, which is considered a sensitive coastal area by the Indian Defence forces and houses various Indian Defense establishments.The alleged exposure of the nexus between politicians, bureaucrats and builders in this scam is said to be only the tip of the iceberg
Edited sentence: In 2010, the Indian media brought to public the violations of rules at various phases of construction in the Adarsh Society.Many activists like Medha Patkar had been trying to uncover this scam since a long time.The Adarsh society high-rise was constructed in the posh Colaba locality of Mumbai, which is considered a sensitive coastal area by the Indian Defence forces and houses various Indian Defense establishments.The exposure of the infamous nexus between politicians, bureaucrats and builders in this scam is said to be only the tip of the iceberg