Original sentence: Barrett-Hamilton - zoologist, grew up in the family home in Kilmanock.Chris de Burgh (born Christopher John Davison) - Singer-songwriter and musician.Dermot Desmond - Entrepreneur.Des Bishop - American-Irish Comedian.Hall) - Author.John Redmond - Politician.Michael Balfe - musician, grew up in Wexford.Thomas D'Arcy McGee - Author, journalist and historian
Edited sentence: Barrett-Hamilton - zoologist, grew up in Kilmanock.Chris de Burgh - Argentinian-born singer-songwriter, based in Co.Des Bishop - London-born comedian, based in Co.Hall) - 19th century novelist, raised in Bannow.John Redmond - 19th/20th century nationalist politician.Major G.Michael Balfe - 19th century composer, grew up in Wexford