Original sentence: However, the latest short-story, Beyond Between, showed that the Pernese do in fact have a highly developed belief in the afterlife, generally firming up the science fiction aspects of Pern in establishing Pernese society as a fleshed-out and agrarian construct where religion has been shown through history to provide the central societal fabric.Pern created an interesting example in that it is an agrarian society portrayed without a considerable organized religion
Edited sentence: Fortunately, however, the latest short-story, Beyond Between, showed that the Pernese do in fact have a highly developed belief in the afterlife, generally firming up the science fiction aspects of Pern in establishing Pernese society as a fleshed-out and agrarian construct where religion has been shown through history to provide the central societal fabric.Pern creates an interesting problem in that it is an agrarian society portrayed without a considerable organized religion