Original sentence: Haysom, Geoffrey David L679 RAFDSO, DFC.Hugo, Petrus Hendrick 22615 and 41 RAFDSO, DFC**.Human, J Daniel William 51, 2 and 5 SAAFDSO, DFC*
Edited sentence: Haysom, Geoffrey David Leybourne 679 RAFDSO, DFC.Hugo, Petrus Hendrick "Piet"22615 and 41 RAFDSO, DFC**.Human, Daniel William "Johnny" 51, 2 and 5 SAAFDSO, DFC*