Original sentence: Platoon Sergeant Finnis McCleery was awarded the Medal of Honor for his valiant efforts on Hill 352.The Americal, in Vietnam, suffered an important defeat at the Battle of Kham Duc but gave a solid performance during TET, The Battle of LoGiang and the Battle of Nui Hoac Ridge (Hill 352)
Edited sentence: Platoon Sergeant Finnis McCleery was awarded the Congressional Medal of Honor for his valiant efforts on Hill 352.The Americal, in Vietnam, suffered a major defeat at the Battle of Kham Duc but was noted for its exemplary performance during TET, The Battle of LoGiang and the Battle of Nui Hoac Ridge (Hill 352)