Original sentence: Carousel was an opportunity for Oscar Hammerstein II, a liberal, to explore attitudes of society and prejudice in a musical play.The main themes of Carousel are social class and conduct; Julie and Billy are both working class, whereas Enoch and (ultimately) Carrie are middle class, and the differences between these two families are touched on during the second act.The ultimate conclusion is that anybody can go far, no matter what his or her class, and that everybody, even a rough fairground worker who beats his wife, can be redeemed
Edited sentence: Carousel is the first opportunity for Oscar Hammerstein II, a forward thinking liberal, to explore attitudes of society and prejudice in a musical play.The main theme of Carousel is that of class; Julie and Billy are both working class, whereas Enoch and (ultimately) Carrie are middle class, and the differences between these two families are touched on during the second act.The ultimate conclusion is that anybody can go far, no matter what their class, and that everybody, even a rough fairground worker who beats his wife, can be redeemed