Original sentence: Lelaine also meets Michael (Ben Stiller) after she throws a cigarette into his convertible causing him to crash into her.Lelaine's friends include the somewhat eccentric and promiscuous Vickie (Janeane Garofalo), the intelligent but lazy Troy (Ethan Hawke), and the shy, quiet and gay Sammy (Steve Zahn).The two agree to go on a date, which makes Troy upset because he loves her but is incapable of admitting it
Edited sentence: Lelaine also meets the yuppie Michael (Ben Stiller) after she throws a cigarette into his Convertible causing him to crash into her.Ryder's friends include the somewhat eccentric and promiscuous Vickie (Janeane Garofalo) the lazy slacker/genius Troy (Ethan Hawke) and the shy, quiet and gay Sammy (Steve Zahn).The camera work is decent at best, however the acting, dialogue, and entertaining quality of the film more than make up for it's inadequacies.The film is your basic pity-me-I'm-twenty-something-and-I-don't-know-what-to-do-with-my-life-and-I-love-my-bestfriend story line to it.The two agree to go on a date, which makes Troy upset because, you guessed it he loves her but is incapable of admitting it