Original sentence: It included a number of new features, such as some new high-color icons, a renaming of the Professional theme to "Watercolor", minor changes to the simplified Start Menu, a new sample UI skin, some tweaks and fixes and the inclusion of Internet Explorer 6.0 with the new Media and IM Explorer bars, Outlook Express 6.0, Windows Movie Maker 1.1, Windows Media Player 8.0, MSN Explorer 1.1, and Internet Information Services 5.1
Edited sentence: It included a number of new features, such as some new high-color icons, a renaming of the Professional theme to "Watercolor", minor changes to the simplified Start Menu, a new sample UI skin, some tweaks and fixes and the inclusion of Internet Explorer 6 with the new Media and IM Explorer bars, Outlook Express 6, Windows Movie Maker 1.1 (not included with server editions), Windows Media Player 8.0, MSN Explorer 1.1 (not included with server editions), and Internet Information Services 5.1