Original sentence: Makerere College School is a school in Uganda that shares a campus with Makerere University.Makerere college school is listed among Africa's top 100 schools shares fame with other traditional schools as Namilyango college, Gayaza High school, Rainbow international school and Lincoln international to mention a few
Edited sentence: Makerere College School is a prestigious school in Uganda which shares a campus with Makerere University.Makerere College School is also one of the few Ugandan schools that send students to the prestigious United World Colleges.Makerere college school is listed among Africa's top 100 schools shares prestigious fame with other traditional schools as Namilyango college, Gayaza High school, Rainbow international school and Lincoln international to mention a few