Original sentence: Tagame's depiction of men as muscular and  hairy has been cited as a catalyst for a shift in fashion amoungst gay men in 1995, away from the clean-shaven and slender bishonen stereotypes and towards a tendency for masculinity and chubbiness
Edited sentence: Tagame's depiction of men as muscular and  hairy has been cited as a catalyst for a shift in fashion amongst gay men in 1995, away from the clean-shaven and slender bishonen stereotypes and towards a tendency for masculinity and chubbiness