Original sentence: At the age of fifteen, he had earned profits of over $1000, a significant amount of money in the early 1890's.However, as is often the case with massive success, Livermore had a great deal of turmoil in his life.Livermore was curious mixture of New England Calvinist and lecher – he could recite the Bible and yet liked to cruise through Manhattan at night in one of his canary-yellow Rolls Royces, picking up girls to satisfy his considerable sexual appetite.There, after analizing the trends in the prices he frequently posted, he decided to make his instinct work for him
Edited sentence: A curious mixture of New England Calvinist and lecher – he could recite the Bible and yet liked to cruise through Manhattan at night in one of his canary-yellow Rolls Royces, picking up girls to satisfy his considerable sexual appetite.At the age of fiftheen, he had managed to earn profits of over 1000$, a significant amount of money in the early 1890's.However, as is often the case with massive success, Livermore had a great deal of turmoil in his life which eventually lead to his demise.There, after anaylzing the trends in the prices he frequently posted, he decided to make his instinct work for him.Unlike the faceless corporate raiders of the nineties, he was a character