Original sentence: The story combines gunfighting instead of swordfighting, disguise, misunderstanding, tragedy, humor, and some of the most romantic language found in literature and movie.The story of a pair of star-crossed lovers in modern time
Edited sentence: I'm sure everyone knows the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet, but here is just a brief overview.The story combines swordfighting, disguise, misunderstanding, tragedy, humor, and some of the most romantic language found in literature all in the name of true love.The story is, of course, about a pair of star-crossed lovers