Original sentence: Bellsquarry is a small area in the south of Livingston next to Murieston, Scotland.Bellsquarry still has a village hall and old buildings, however, there are no shops.The area has several fields surrounding it.There is a children's playpark and a wooded area with trails connecting Bellsquarry to Murieston, and a primary school
Edited sentence: Bellsquarry is a small area in the south of Livingston next to Murieston.Bellsquarry still has a small 'village' like feel to it, with its village hall and old buildings.However, there are no shops.Like Murieston, Bellsquarry is a highly regarded area in Livingston, with a good primary school.The area has several fields surrounding it, giving a country feel.There is a children's playpark and a wooded area with trails connecting Bellsquarry to Murieston