Original sentence: Following a series of terrorist attacks on Israelis perpetrated by Palestinian terrorists during a three-day period in March 2002, Lieberman proposed issuing an ultimatum to the Palestinian Authority to halt all terror activity or face wide-ranging attacks
Edited sentence: Following a series of attacks on Israelis perpetrated by Palestinian militants during a three-day period in March 2002, Lieberman proposed issuing an ultimatum to the Palestinian Authority to halt all militant activity or face wide-ranging attacks