Original sentence: The 'USS Billfish is a nuclear powered 'Fast Attack' submarine.The Billfish, along with her sister submarines serving in all parts of the world, provide the United States military with valuable intelligence
Edited sentence: The Billfish, along with her sister submarines serving in all parts of the world, provide our military with pieces of a sophisticated jigsaw puzzle which give us a vital edge over enemies of the United States.The Original Billfish.The USS Billfish is a nuclear powered 'Fast Attack' submarine