Original sentence: Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha (also spelled Hussein Hilmi Pasha) was an Ottoman statesman who held the top post of grand vizier for a brief period in the wake of the Second Constitutional Era in the Ottoman Empire, but who is also notable for being one of the founders of the Turkish Red Crescent and for having been one of the most successful Ottoman administrators in the explosive Balkans of the early 20th century.Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha was born in 1855 in Midilli (Lesbos today) and did his primary studies there, in a stressed religious focus, but he also learned good French at an early age
Edited sentence: He did his primary studies at Midilli, in a stressed religious focus, but he also learned good French at an early age.Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha (also spelled Hussein Hilmi Pasha) (1855 1922/1923) was a statesman and twice Grand vizier of the Ottoman Empire in the wake of the Second Constitutional Era and was also Co-founder of the Turkish Red Crescent.Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha was born in 1855 in Midilli (Lesbos today) to a family of Greek ancestry who had formerly converted to Islam.Hüseyin Hilmi was one of the most successful Ottoman administrators in the explosive Balkans of the early 20th century becoming Ottoman Inspector-General of Macedonia from 1902 to 1908