Original sentence: Her recipes often include fresh herbs, which she hand-harvests from her backyard garden.Often, her recipes will require an excursion, where one can witness her visiting various East Hampton specialty stores, like her own Barefoot Contessa.Sometimes she might ask Jeffrey or her guest to pick up various ingredients or prepared desserts from one of the local shops
Edited sentence: Her recipes often include fresh herbs, which she hand-harvests from her perfectly manicured garden.Often, her recipes will require an excursion, where one can witness her driving in her BMW or Mercedes-Benz to various East Hampton specialty stores, like her own Barefoot Contessa.Sometimes she might ask Jeffrey or her guest to pick up various ingredients or gourmet desserts from one of the local shops