Original sentence: After attending Torquay Boys' Grammar School in Devon, Lintott read for a degree in Natural Sciences from the University of Cambridge and a PhD in astrophysics from University College London, where his thesis was on the subject of star formation.Chris Lintott is an astrophysicist
Edited sentence: Christopher John Lintott (born 1980, Torbay) is an astrophysicist.Guardian article in August 1999.He attended Torquay Boys' Grammar School in Devon, whilst living in Churston Ferrers.Lintott read for a degree in Natural Sciences from the University of Cambridge and a PhD in astrophysics from University College London, where his thesis was on the subject of star formation.This came from a six week project at the University of Hertfordshire funded by a Nuffield bursary.Whilst at school, in 1999, he won a $500 Earth and Space Sciences award and the Priscilla and Bart Bok Honorable Mention Award at the Intel International Science and Engineering Fair for an article on Dust Around Young Stellar Objects