Original sentence: Barlow is thought to have died in poverty, and the date of his death is unknown; he was buried on August 11, 1704.Barlow's first major work was the illustraton (via 12 plates) of Edward Benlowe's Theophila (1652).He published and illustrated an edition of Aesop's Fables in 1666 and also illustrated Aesopic's (or Aesopics, 1668), another edition of the fables, and an augmented 1687 edition of his earlier work, whereupon he may have given up work on illustration.However, each of these birds, animals, et cetera, are often very well observed.In terms of composition, his paintings tend to be filled with the animals and so forth that he depicts.– 1704) was an English painter, etcher, and illustrator
Edited sentence: , are often very well observed.Barlow is thought to have died in poverty and the date of his death is unknown; he was buried on 11 August 1704.Barlow's first major work was as the illustrator (via 12 plates) of Edward Benlowe's Theophila (1652).He published and illustrated an edition of Aesop's Fables in 1666, and also illustrated Aesopic's (or Aesopics, 1668), another edition of the fables, and an augmented 1687 edition of his earlier work, whereupon he may have given up work on illustration.However, each of these birds, animals, etc.In terms of composition, his paintings tend to be weak, overly filled with the animals and so forth that he depicts.–1704) was an English painter, etcher, and illustrator