Original sentence: However, it has been argued that a menstrual leave policy brands all menstruating women as as ill and perpetuates sexism; and that such a policy could increase the bias in hiring and promoting women.In Europe, currently there is no country whit a national menstrual leave policy.One of the strategies of the EU Member States, as well as the WHO European policy framework, Health 2020, is to address the health and safety issues that affect women
Edited sentence: One of the strategies of the EU Member States is to address the health and safety issues that affect women.The European policy framework, Health 2020, acknowledges that in order to achieve gender equality it is necessary to identify health, social and environmental determinants that affect women