Original sentence: She also says fathers, brothers and husbands are targeted by modern feminism, elaborating that feminism has disrupted the traditional family unit so that a "politically conscious battalion of daughters" could replace male familial roles "by banding together as sisters" to "run everything" by themselves
Edited sentence: She also claims fathers, brothers and husbands are misandric targets of modern feminism, elaborating that feminism has disrupted the traditional family unit so that a "politically conscious battalion of daughters" could replace male familial roles "by banding together as sisters" to "run everything" by themselves