Original sentence: It is possible to surf almost all year round except for the middle of the winter (July and August) when weather conditions are non-conducive to surfing.The scenery is notable, including scenic forests and panoramic views
Edited sentence: It is practically possible to surf all year round except for the middle of the winter (July and August) when weather conditions are non-conducive to surfing.The scenery is normally spectacular, some passing beautiful forests and some with breathtaking panoramic views