Original sentence: Ignoring the occasional negative criticism, Dylan's rapid output (some say fuelled by rapid amphetamine intake) continued unabated through 1965 and 1966.That summer, Bob Dylan guaranteed the mythological nature of his legacy by performing his first electric set with the Paul Butterfield Blues Band at the Newport Folk Festival, remembered ever since as a watershed event
Edited sentence: But he clearly gravitates towards imagery associated with Mercury and Hermes--cf his quote about the sound in his head being "thin" and "wild" and "mercury.Dylan is a Gemini, which sign in astrology is said to be ruled by Mercury--and Dylan has been thought of and called a modern day Mercury, which may be overstating things a bit, from an astrological/astronomical perspective.Ignoring the occasional negative criticism, Dylan's rapid output (some say fuelled by rapid amphetamine intake, others say fuelled by hard work) continued unabated through 1965 and 1966.Olympus to Hades--ie, the basement.That summer, Bob Dylan guaranteed the somewhat dubiously mythological nature of his legacy by performing his first electric set with the Paul Butterfield Blues Band at the Newport Folk Festival, remembered ever since as a watershed event.This song's subterranean imagery, if understood in the context of Dylan's career in general, relates to the myths of Hermes running back and forth from Mt