Original sentence: Its lofty (236 feet) spire and white magnesian limestone exterior stand as a very personal statement in 13th century French style of the mill owner Colonel Sir Edward Akroyd, who paid solely for its construction as the centre-piece of a purpose-built model village ("Akroydon").The pair of gothic organ cases by John Oldrid Scott now house the four-manual instrument by Harrison & Harrison.The spire of Square Church, not far from the Parish Church at the bottom of the town, paid for by the carpet manufacturing Crossley family, is all that remains of the gothic congregational church built by Joseph James in 1856-8 as a rival design to All Souls' Haley Hill
Edited sentence: Its lofty (236 feet) spire and white magnesian limestone exterior stand as a very personal statement in 13th century French style of the mill owner Colonel Sir Edward Akroyd, who paid solely for its construction as the centrepiece of a purpose-built model village ("Akroydon").The eye catching spire of Square Church, not far from the Parish Church at the bottom of the town, paid for by the carpet manufacturing Crossley family, is all that remains of a mighty gothic congregational church built by Joseph James in 1856-8 as a rival design to All Souls' Haley Hill.The pair of wildly romantic gothic organ cases by John Oldrid Scott now house the four-manual instrument by Harrison & Harrison