Original sentence: In December of 1947 Tamplin was not only selected to play for Wales but would captain his country against the touring Australian in 1947.Wales enjoyed a high scoring victory, and Tamplin himslef scored two conversions and a penalty goal
Edited sentence: In December 1947 Tamplin was not only selected to play for Wales but would captain his country against the touring Australian in 1947.Wales enjoyed a high scoring victory, and Tamplin himself scored two conversions and a penalty goal