Original sentence: "  Nonetheless, the legacy of the War on Poverty remains in the continued existence of such Federal Programs as Head Start and Job Corps.Again the Orshansky method of measuring poverty not being updated for modern costs requires emphasis.As a part of the Great Society, Johnson's view of a federally-directed application of resources to expand the government's role in social welfare programs from education to healthcare was a continuation of Franklin Delano Roosevelt's New Deal and Four Freedoms speech from the 1930s and 1940s.Deregulation, growing criticism of the welfare state, and an ideological shift to reducing federal aid to impovered people in the 1980s and 1990s culminated in the Personal Responsibility and Work Opportunity Reconciliation Act of 1996, in which Democrat Bill Clinton "end[ed] welfare as we know it.However, President Johnson's 'War on Poverty' speech was delivered at a time of recovery (the poverty level had fallen from 22.4% in 1959 to 19% in 1964 when the War on Poverty was announced) and it was viewed by critics as an effort to get the United States Congress to authorize social welfare programs.The OEO was established in 1964 and quickly became a target of both left-wing and right-wing critics of the War on Poverty.The concept of a war on poverty waned after the 1960s
Edited sentence: Deregulation, growing criticism of the welfare state, and an ideological shift to reducing federal aid to impoverished people in the 1980s and 1990s culminated in the Personal Responsibility and Work Opportunity Reconciliation Act of 1996 by Bill Clinton.It should be noted, however, that the Orshansky method of measuring poverty has not been updated for modern costs.Nonetheless, the legacy of the War on Poverty remains in the continued existence of such programs as Head Start and Job Corps.President Johnson's 'War on Poverty' speech was delivered at a time of recovery (the poverty level had fallen from 22.4% in 1959 to 19% in 1964 when the War on Poverty was announced) and it was viewed by some critics as an effort to get the United States Congress to authorize social welfare programs.See Great Society