Original sentence: After breaking into the Sunderland first team in the 2003-2004 season he ended up finishing as their joint top goal scorer with 16 goals, after he won over fans with his whole hearted performances
Edited sentence: After breaking into the Sunderland first team in the 2003-2004 season he ended up finishing as their joint top goal scorer with 16 goals, after he won over fans with his whole hearted performances, and never say die attitude.At the moment he is sorely missed from the Sunderland team, as they need a striker who can score.He is now loved by the fans