Original sentence: Although it is strongly opposed by the Guild, there are many UWA students who support VSU as it will allow students to only pay for those services that they wish to use.Currently, the UWA Guild and many other student unions around Australia are facing the challenge of Voluntary Student Unionism, or VSU, a legislation proposed by the Howard Government that will see student union membership become voluntary.Many of these students also believe that the Guild should not use compulsorily-acquired student money to organise certain (primarily left-wing) political activities, such as pro-Palestinian and refugee rallies
Edited sentence: Currently, the UWA Guild and many other student unions around Australia are facing the challenge of Voluntary Student Unionism, a legislation proposed by the Howard Government that will see student union membership become voluntary.Despite the Guild's frenzied opposition, it is thought that the majority of UWA students support Voluntary Student Unionism as this will enable students to only pay for those services that they desire.Left wing political activities, such as Palestinian and refugee rallies, that the UWA Guild has organised in recent years, will no longer be funded by compulsorily acquired student money