Original sentence: Blake Snyder (1957-2009) was an American screenwriter based in Los Angeles, who became one of the most popular writing mentors in the film industry.Blake Snyder passed away unexpectedly August 4, 2009.Born October 3, 1957, Snyder began his Hollywood career early in life.The author of several books on screenwriting and story structure, Snyder lead international seminars and workshops for writers in various disciplines, as well as consultation sessions for some of Hollywood's largest studios
Edited sentence: Blake Snyder (October 3, 1957-August 4, 2009) was an American screenwriter based in Los Angeles, who became one of the most popular writing mentors in the film industry.Blake Snyder died unexpectedly August 4, 2009.Snyder began his Hollywood career early in life.The author of several books on screenwriting and story structure, Snyder led international seminars and workshops for writers in various disciplines, as well as consultation sessions for some of Hollywood's largest studios