Original sentence: In May 2010, she became the youngest person to sail non-stop and unassisted around the world, although her route did not meet World Sailing Speed Record Council (WSSRC) criteria for circumnavigation of the globe.Jessica Watson (born 18 May 1993) is an Australian sailor.The second of four children of New Zealand couple Roger and Julie Watson, who moved to Australia in 1987, she has dual Australian and New Zealand nationality.Watson departed from Sydney on 18 October 2009, heading eastbound over the Pacific Ocean, Atlantic Ocean and the Indian Ocean
Edited sentence: Jessica Watson (born 18 May 1993) is an Australian sailor, unofficially hailed as the youngest individual to sail non-stop and unassisted around the world despite her route not meeting World Sailing Speed Record Council (WSSRC) criteria.She departed from Sydney on 18 October 2009, heading eastbound over the Pacific Ocean, Atlantic Ocean and the Indian Ocean.The second of four children of New Zealand couple Roger and Julie Watson who moved to Australia in 1987, she has dual Australian and New Zealand nationality