Original sentence: His company repairs, resells, or strips 100 items of electronic waste per week, including iPods and iPhones, game consoles, laptops, and MP3 players, but does not pay for shipping.Its business model is to purchase discarded cell phones, iPods, and other electronics that have been replaced by newer models.com is an electronics repair business in Denver, Colorado, founded in 2007 as BuyMyBrokeniPod
Edited sentence: His company repairs, resells, or strips 100s items of electronic waste per week, including cell phones, iPods, iPhones, game consoles, pdas, mp3 players, apple laptops laptops, and MP3 players, and offers free shipping.Its business model is to purchase used and broken cell phones, iPods, iPhones, game consoles, pdas, mp3 players, apple laptops and other electronics that have been replaced by newer models.com is an electronics resale business in Denver, Colorado, founded in 2007 as BuyMyBrokeniPod