Original sentence: His commercials typically were of him in various "cool" poses around Tokyo, or in a comedically unfortunate situation (such as a salaryman running while eating or a accidentally toppling a group of bicycles), with his new songs serving as background music and his own voiceovers rather than on-camera talking
Edited sentence: His commercials typically were of him in various comedically unfortunate situations (such as a salaryman running while eating or a accidentally toppling a group of bicycles), with his new songs serving as background music and his own voiceovers rather than on-camera talking.It took him several years to pay off the debt