Original sentence: Others dislike the standards and view them as legalistic.Students are "campused" (not allowed to leave campus) for two weeks when they accumulate 75 demerits in a semester, with two more weeks of restriction for each additional 25 demerits
Edited sentence: Others dislike the standards and view them as "legalistic".Students are restricted to campus for two weeks when they accumalate 75 demerits in a semester, with two more weeks of restriction for each additional 25 demerits