Original sentence: " On October 20, 2009 experts from the Council of Europe stated "in the last five years the experts from the Council of Europe who monitor Ukraine have expressed practically no concerns regarding the important [process of the] formation of a civil society in Ukraine.After the early 2010 election of President Viktor Yanukovych international organizations start to voice there concern.Factory owners where seen as still able to pressure their workers to vote according to the owners’ preferences.In Reporters Without Borders Press Freedom Index 2010 Ukraine had fallen from 89th place to 131.Neighboring Russia’s position is 140.There where no limits seen on NGO activities.Trade unions function, but strikes and worker protests where infrequent observed, even though dissatisfaction with the state of economic affairs was pervasive in the fall of 2008.Ukraine had been labeled as "free" by organizations such as Freedom House in recent years.” Among the recent negative developments, they mentioned “a more restrictive environment for the media, selective prosecution of opposition figures, worrisome intrusiveness by the Security Service of Ukraine, widely criticized local elections in October 2010 … and erosion of basic freedoms of assembly and speech
Edited sentence: After the election of President Yanukovych early 2010 international organisations start to voice there concern.Among the recent negative developments, they mentioned “a more restrictive environment for the media, selective prosecution of opposition figures, worrisome intrusiveness by the Security Service of Ukraine (SBU), widely criticized local elections in October 2010 … and erosion of basic freedoms of assembly and speech.Factory owners are still able to pressure their workers to vote according to the owners’ preferences.In Reporters Without Borders Press Freedom Index, issued on 20 October 2010, Ukraine has fallen from 89th place to 131.On October 20, 2009 experts from the Council of Europe stated "in the last five years the experts from the Council of Europe who monitor Ukraine have expressed practically no concerns regarding the important [process of the] formation of a civil society in Ukraine.There are no limits on NGO activities.Trade unions function, but strikes and worker protests are infrequent, even though dissatisfaction with the state of economic affairs was pervasive in the fall of 2008.Ukraine has been labeled as "free" by organizations such as Freedom House in recent years.”  In the 2011 report by Freedom House its authors pointed to deterioration in the human rights and democracy after electing President Viktor Yanukovych in early 2010