Original sentence: Following the War in Afghanistan, it lost control of the majority of the country to the Islamic Emirate in the summer offensive of 2021, culminating in the loss of Kabul on 15 August 2021
Edited sentence: Following the War in Afghanistan, it lost control of the majority of the country to the Islamic Emirate in the summer offensive of 2021, culminating in the loss of Kabul on 15 August 2021; although the state did not surrender