Original sentence: As Pope, he officially made public apologies for over 100 of these alleged "wrongdoings", including:.John Paul II apologised to Jews, Galileo, women, victims of the Inquisition, Muslims killed by the Crusaders, and almost everyone who had ever supposedly suffered at the hands of the Catholic Church through the years.This recieved much criticism from traditional Catholics, who saw it as an act of servility, based on a distorted premise, to the enemies of the faith
Edited sentence: As Pope, he officially made public apologies for over 100 of these wrongdoings, including:.John Paul II apologised to Jews, Galileo, women, victims of the Inquisition, Muslims killed by the Crusaders, and almost everyone who had suffered at the hands of the Catholic Church through the years