Original sentence: " William Baue cautioned the readers to take his findings with the same grain of salt as he sprinkles on others' research as Lane excluded mutual funds outside the purview of his study in his book for practical reasons."Lane made the case that the way to do right by your conscience and your portfolio is to drop the typical SRI strategy of 'negative screening.' Instead, Lane's way is to match the specific values of an investor with companies that have similar operational values.An Institutional Investor's Guide.Lane undertook an eight-year research project to determine how investment choices can be utilized to communicate clients' values, along with their money, to heirs.Lane's approach was discussed with both affirmative and skeptical views by the mainstream media.Lane's investment strategy generated a result that beat the Russell 3000 benchmark by an annual return of 2.53% over the eight years ending December 31, 2003.The Wall Street Journal commented that Lane's theories added a new variation to the socially responsible theme
Edited sentence: " Stasia Swisler, President and CEO for the Giving Trust praised the approach by stating that "In the wake of ethics and governance scandals, this guide boldly takes socially responsible investing to a new level."Lane made the case that the way to do right by your conscience and your portfolio is to drop the typical SRI strategy of ‘negative screening.An Institutional Investor’s Guide.Lane undertook an eight-year research project to determine how investment choices can be utilized to communicate his clients' values, along with their money, to heirs.Lane’s approach was discussed with both affirmative and skeptical views by the mainstream media.Lane’s investment strategy generated a result that beat the Russell 3000 benchmark by an annual return of 2.53% over the eight years ending December 31, 2003.The Wall Street Journal commented that Lane’s theories added a new variation to the socially responsible theme.William Baue cautioned the readers to take his findings with the same grain of salt as he sprinkles on others’ research as Lane excluded mutual funds outside the purview of his study in his book for practical reasons.’ Instead, Lane’s way is to match the specific values of an investor with companies that have similar operational values