Original sentence: She received her masters and doctorate degrees in philosophy from Pacific Western University in 1991, where she wrote her doctoral thesis on “Being A Woman: A Philosophical Analysis of the Four Aspects of Female Psychology According to Toni Wolff
Edited sentence: She received her masters and doctorate degrees in philosophy from Pacific Western University (a non-accredited "diploma mill") in 1991, where she wrote her doctoral thesis on “Being A Woman: A Philosophical Analysis of the Four Aspects of Female Psychology According to Toni Wolff