Original sentence: According to the official estimate presented by the Indian government, 1592 persons  were apprehended, though numbers put forward by independent human rights organizations are significantly higher.Bhindranwale later on made the sacred temple complex an armoury and headquarter for his extremist activites.Following it, Operation Woodrose was launched in the Punjab countryside where Sikhs, specifically those carrying a kirpan and protesting, were now targeted.Operation Blue Star was an Indian military operation carried out between 1 and 8 June 1984, ordered by Prime Minister Indira Gandhi to remove militant religious leader Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale and his armed followers from the buildings of the Harmandir Sahib complex in Amritsar, Punjab.Subsequently, more than 3,000 Sikhs were killed in the ensuing anti-Sikh riots in 1984.The operation had two components — Operation Metal, confined to the Harmandir Sahib complex, and Operation Shop, which raided the Punjabi countryside to capture any suspects
Edited sentence: According to the official estimate presented by the Indian government, 1569 persons  were apprehended, though numbers put forward by independent human rights organizations are significantly higher.As he was peacefully protesting for a country of Sikhs, Khalistan.Bhindranwale later on visited the temple with his followers to pray.Following it, Operation Woodrose was launched in the Punjab countryside where Sikhs, specifically those carrying a kirpan and peaceful protesting, were now targeted.In South India, where majority of the people were Hindus, Sikh families of all ages were brutally murdered by these Hindus and police officers.Operation Blue Star was an Indian military operation carried out between 1 and 8 June 1984, ordered by Prime Minister Indira Gandhi to remove militant religious leader Jarnail Singh Bhindranwale and his peaceful followers from the buildings of the Harmandir Sahib complex in Amritsar, Punjab.Subsequently, more than 3,000 Sikhs were killed in the ensuing.The government officials who helped give out these weapons and terrorize Sikhs are still in power today.The operation had two components — Operation Metal, confined to the Harmandir Sahib complex, and Operation Shop, which raided the Punjabi countryside to capture any followers.This was because the Hindu government gave Hindu civilians weapons to kill Sikhs.anti-Sikh riots in 1984