Original sentence: , Racing Through Paradise - about a Pacific passage.Alan Villiers, Cruise of the Conrad (Scribner's, 1937.Doane, Handbook of offshore cruising: The Dream and Reality of Modern Ocean Cruising [].Elbert Maloney, Dutton's Navigation and Piloting - classic, professional reference, continuously updated.Eric Hiscock, Cruising Under Sail.Jevne Haugan, Sailing With The Winds of History : a Pacific Coast Chronicle (International Online Library Bloomington.Jim Howard, Charles J.Lawrence and Lin Pardey, The Self-Sufficient Sailor.Lin Pardey, Care and Feeding of Sailing Crew.Lin and Larry Pardey, Storm Tactics Handbook.Michael Carr, Weather Prediction Simplified.Reprinted, Seafarer Books, 2006).Robin Lee Graham, Dove - The story of a 16-year-old boy who sails around the world in a  sloop in the nineteen sixties
Edited sentence: , Racing Through Paradise - etc.Alan Villiers, Cruise of the Conrad.Elbert Maloney, Dutton's Navigation and Piloting - a classic, professional reference, continuously updated.Eric Hiscock, Cruising Under Sail - just the facts, a classic.Lawrence and Lin Pardey, The Self-Sufficient Sailor -.Lin Pardey, 'Care and Feeding of Sailing Crew'.Lin and Larry Pardey, "Storm Tactics Handbook.Michael Carr, "Weather Prediction Simplified".Reprinted, Seafarer Books, 2006.Robin Lee Graham, Dove - The story of a 16-year-old boy who sails around the world in a  sloop in the nineteensixties.Scribner's, 1937.about a Pacific passage