Original sentence: Kelly Brianne Clarkson (born April 24 1982 in Fort Worth, Texas) is an American singer-songwriter who has enjoyed success in the pop and rock music genres.With the release of her multi-platinum second album Breakaway (2004), Clarkson moved to a more pop rock-oriented style of music, and won two Grammy Awards
Edited sentence: Kelly Brianne Clarkson (born April 24 1982 in Fort Worth, Texas) is a Grammy award winning American singer-songwriter who has enjoyed success in the pop and rock music genres.With the release of her multi-platinum second album Breakaway (2004), Clarkson moved to a more pop rock-oriented style of music