Original sentence: In Rhythm Heaven(Rhythm Tengoku Gold),there are various referances to it's predessecor,Rhythm Tengoku.In the game,Shoot-'Em-Up,there is a moon in the game with three rabbits,reffering to the "Rabbit Bounce" game in Tengoku.The beets in Crop Stomp bear a resembalance to the beets in the second game of Tengoku.The last game before Remix 6,Karate Man,is an upgraded version of the first game in Rhythm Tengoku.The minigame,Samurai Slice in the Medal Corner,was a game in Tengoku.The same model was used for Tengoku,but a new "kick" move was added that was used by flicking on the Touch Screen
Edited sentence: In Rhythm Heaven (Rhythm Tengoku Gold), there are various references to its predessecor, Rhythm Tengoku.In the game,Shoot-'Em-Up, there is a moon in the game with three rabbits, referring to the "Rabbit Bounce" game in Tengoku.The beets in Crop Stomp bear a resemblance to the beets in the second game of Tengoku.The last game before Remix 6, Karate Man, is an upgraded version of the first game in Rhythm Tengoku.The minigame, Samurai Slice in the Medal Corner, was a game in Tengoku.The same model was used for Tengoku, but a new "kick" move was added that was used by flicking on the touch screen