Original sentence: Andrés Guardado – Football (soccer) player.Anette Michel – Television actress and model.Jorge Matute Remus – Engineer.Pavel Pardo – Football (soccer) player.Pedro Fernández – Singer and actor
Edited sentence: Andrés Guardado – La Coruña Football player.Anette Michel – Television actress, and model.Carlos Salcido – PSV Football player.Jorge Matute Remus – Engineer who moved a telephone company building while operators were working inside.Pavel Pardo – Stuttgart Football player.Pedro Fernández – Singer, and actor.Rafael Marquez – Barcelona Football player