Original sentence: The city itself has such notable stops, including the Great Mosque of Xining (qīngzhēn dà sì) and North Mountain Temple (bĕishān sì).The surrounding area is made up of rolling grasslands and populated by ethnic Tibetans
Edited sentence: The city itself has many worthwhile stops, including the Great Mosque of Xining (qīngzhēn dà sì) and North Mountain Temple (bĕishān sì).The surrounding area is made up of beautiful rolling grasslands and populated by ethnic Tibetans.Xining, a vibrant city of 700,000, is squeezed between a long valley, offering an amazing blend of culture from Tibetan, Hui, and other minorities along with the Han majority