Original sentence: The artisans was organised on co-operative lines with a view to make it (1) serves as an instalments for generating employment (ii) to offer the public variety of artistic products (iii) extent financial assistance and various common facilities and other benefits to promote production and marketing of products
Edited sentence: (1) serves as an instalments for generating employment.(ii) to offer the public variety of artistic products.(iii) extent financial assistance and various common facilities and other benefits to promote production and marketing of products.The artisans was organised on co-operative lines with a view to make it