Original sentence: In 2007 he composed the trailer music for Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, and in late 2007 Mark was contracted to compose the score for LucasArts' title The Force Unleashed.In addition to Griskey's work with Disney, he has also scored several other games for various publishers including:  Rayman Raving Rabbids 1 2 and 3; Ubisoft, Iron Man and The Incredible Hulk 2; Sega and Marvel Ultimate Alliance; Activision.The score for Narnia was well received, and led to two additional game contracts with Disney; Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End (2007), and The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (2008)
Edited sentence: In 2007 he composed the trailer music for Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, and in late 2007 Mark was contracted to compose the score for LucasArts' highly anticipated title The Force Unleashed.In addition to Mark's work with Disney, he has also scored several other games for various publishers including:  Rayman Raving Rabbids 1 2 and 3; Ubisoft, Iron Man and The Incredible Hulk 2; Sega and Marvel Ultimate Alliance; Activision.The score for Narnia was extremely well received, and led to two additional game contracts with Disney; Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End (2007), and The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (2008)