Original sentence: About 20 companies participated in the work, including telephone, communication equipment, and home networking technology companies.Although these rates are not media specific, it is expected that the higher code rates will be used in cleaner media (such as coaxial) while the lower code rates will be used in noisy environments such as power lines.Although this is not media specific, it is expected that ARQ-less operation is sometimes appropriate for cleaner media (such as coaxial) while ARQ operation is appropriate for noisy environments such as power lines.ITU-T Recommendation (the ITU's term for standard) G.It is usual for many CE products to include Internet connectivity using technologies such as Wi-Fi, Bluetooth or Ethernet.The work was done in the ITU Telecommunication Standardization Sector, Study Group 15, Question 4.hn is the common name for a home network technology family of standards developed under the International Telecommunication Union's Telecommunication Standardization sector (the ITU-T) and promoted by the HomeGrid Forum
Edited sentence: Although these rates are not media specific, it's expected that the higher code rates will be used in cleaner media (such as coaxial) while the lower code rates will be used in noisy environments such as power lines.Although this is not media specific, it's expected that ARQ-less operation is sometimes appropriate for cleaner media (such as coaxial) while ARQ operation is appropriate for noisy environments such as power lines.ITU Recommendation (the ITU's term for standard) G.It's usual for many CE products to include Internet connectivity using technologies such as Wi-Fi, Bluetooth or Ethernet.More than 20 companies participated in the work, including telephone, communication equipment, and home networking technology companies.The work was done in the ITU-T Telecommunication Standardization Sector, Study Group 15, Question 4.hn is the common name for a home network technology family of standards developed under the International Telecommunication Union's Standardization arm (ITU) and promoted by the HomeGrid Forum