Original sentence: Stripe karst tends to be discontinuous and because the rocks have been subjected to a high degree of metamorphism, they are often folded and highly contorted.The technical gear required, combined with the depth of the entrance shaft, means passing mountaineers in the last few decades are unlikely to have explored it either.Today, the glaciers have receded, but still deliver a massive amount of water to the cave.Winter may be the only practical season to explore the cave due to low base flow; in spring, meltwater flow of between  cubic metres per second () prevents entrance
Edited sentence: Stripe karst tends to be discontinuous  and because the rocks have been subjected to a high degree of metamorphism, they are often folded and highly contorted.The technical gear, combined with the depth of the entrance shaft, required to descend the massive pit means passing mountaineers in the last few decades are unlikely to have explored it either.Today, the glaciers have receded, but still deliver a massive amount of water to the impressive cave.Winter may be the only way to explore it due to low base flow; while in spring, meltwater flow of between  cubic metres per second () also prevents entrance