Original sentence: He attained Mahā-samādhi(died) in 1757 at Shirali.He had been under Swami Parijñānāshram for only 14 days after which Swami Parijñānāshram died.With these words, Swami Shankarāshram attained Mahā-samādhi(died) on the 6th day of the month of Ashwina in 1757
Edited sentence: He attained Mahā-samādhi(passed away) in 1757 at Shirali.He had been under Swami Parijñānāshram for only 14 days after which Swami Parijñānāshram passed away.With these words, Swami Shankarāshram attained Mahā-samādhi(passed away) on the 6th day of the month of Ashwina in 1757