Original sentence: In 1875 a school chapel was opened in his memory.The foundation of Trent College was proposed In 186 by Francis Wright at a meeting of the Midland branch of the Clerical and Lay Association.The school opened in April 1868 with 53 boys on  roll and within four months later, the number had risen to 118, and by 1870, 225 boys were registered as pupils.Wright was an influential man, a partner in the Butterley Company – the greatest industrial concern in Derbyshire by the time of his death – as well as High Sheriff of Nottinghamshire (1842) and Deputy Lieutenant in the counties of Nottinghamshire and Derbyshire
Edited sentence: Four months later, the school roll had risen to 118 and, by 1870, 225 boys were registered as pupils.Francis Wright was an influential man, a partner in the Butterley Company – the greatest industrial concern in Derbyshire by the time of his death – as well as High Sheriff of Nottinghamshire (1842) and Deputy Lieutenant in the counties of Nottinghamshire and Derbyshire.However, the school experienced a new peak of success in 1875 when the chapel was opened in his memory.In 1865, Francis Wright proposed the foundation of Trent College at a meeting of the Midland branch of the Clerical and Lay Association.The School opened its doors in April 1868 to the first contingent of 53 boys.The first boy registered was H