Original sentence: In San Francisco, Callard found a rich artistic community including Jim Vincent, Bonnie O'Neill, Baylor Trapnell, Mac Becket, Carol Williams, Reese Williams, and Robin Winters.She graduated from highschool at Hingswood School Cranbrook in 1968 and continued her education (1968-1970)at Washington University's School of Fine Arts in St
Edited sentence: In San Francisco, Callard found a rich [artistic community]] including Jim Vincent, Bonnie O'Neill, Baylor Trapnell, Mac Becket, Carol Williams, Reese Williams, and Robin Winters.Kingswood School Cranbrook in 1968 and continued her education (1968-1970)at Washington University's School of Fine Arts in St.She graduated from highschool at