Original sentence: Louis Cardinals in 4 games, they beat the New York Yankees 4 to 3 in the ALCS after falling to 0 and 3.Not only did the Red Sox win the series after a decades-long drought by sweeping the St.The 2005 Boston Red Sox Season comes on the heels of their 2004 World Series championship
Edited sentence: As of June the Red Sox were doing well in their division.Louis Cardinals.Not only did the Red Sox win the series after a decades-long drought, they beat the New York Yankees 4 to 3 in the ALCS after falling to 0 and 3.The 2005 Boston Red Sox Season comes on the heels of their spectacular win in 2004.They punctuated this incredible achievement with a 4 game World Series win against the St