Original sentence: It has a student population of over 1,000 and now enrolls girls
Edited sentence: Another thing is that she has a short fuse, for example walking in the halls with food she will storm down at you and start screaming.It has a student population of over 1,000 and now enrols girls.The Principal, Anne Fox, has saved the school from bankruptcy and is sending the school on its way to one of the top schools in the country.This being said she also has her faults, for one she seems to despise people being people i.e she has banned the sport uniform and has now banned people from wearing hats outdoors