Original sentence: A Hong Kong nonprofit, Students and Scholars Against Corporate Misbehavior, has written numerous negative reports on Foxconn's treatment of its employees.The Fair Labor Association audit in 2012 used interviews with 35,000 Foxconn employees.These typically find far worse conditions than the 2012 Fair Labor Association audit did but rely on a far smaller pool of employee informants–100 to 170
Edited sentence: According to Hong Kong worker rights advocates Students and Scholars against Corporate Misbehavior (SACOM), Chinese workers are still subject to abuses despite reform measures such as pay raises.Foxconn bosses seem to be prone to verbal abusing production staff to vent fustrations.In a report they note that, workers faced unusual disciplen measures as writing self critism and having these papers posted or recited.The SACOM report: describes the living quarters as spartan 30 workers crammed into 3 bedroom flats, "nimble chairs" sitting in a uncomfortable posture as to remain nimble