Original sentence: The Instinct has received mostly positive reviews
Edited sentence: Other pieces of software have advertising built in to them.Services, like the live TV, that were used to entice people to purchase this phone have been cut down to very few channels.The Instinct has received mostly positive reviews from the press.The actual user experience for this phone has had lack luster results.This advertising to paying customers would be the equivalent of a premium cable channel showing advertisements in the middle of their shows.Updates that fail to fix problems or cause new problems continue to plague the device