Original sentence: He also hosted the "Tairy Greene Acting Seminar For Children" in which he did not teach the children to become different people through holding the nose, and never wants this said to him.He is a graduate of James Sprunt Community College, and also studied under the tutelege of Randy Tutelege.Launched the successful career of legendary Hollywood actor Fixedthe Fernback
Edited sentence: As a graduate of James Sprunt Community College and having studied under the tutelege of Randy Tutelege, he often embellishes his acting credentials and abilities usually to the dismay of the children.He also hosts the "Tairy Greene Acting Seminar For Children".Terry stresses in his lessons the importance on fern placement and subsequent replacement as it provides excellent stage names