Original sentence: Landis has successfully completed the 6.5 hour  kayaking trip around Kauai's Na Pali coastline, and she also enjoys raising orchids, playing the ukelele, and quilting
Edited sentence: Landis has successfully completed the 6.5 hour kayaking trip around Kauai's Na Pali coastline, and she also enjoys raising orchids, playing the ukelele, and quilting