Original sentence: Gary Leonard Oldman (born March 21, 1958) is an English actor, writer, director, producer, voice-over artist and occasional musician who has garnered critical acclaim for his chameleonic performances and mastery of accents
Edited sentence: Gary Leonard Oldman (born March 21, 1958) is a double BAFTA- and Saturn Award-winning, Emmy- and Screen Actors Guild Award-nominated English actor, writer, director, producer, voice-over artist and occasional musician who has garnered critical acclaim for his chameleonic performances and mastery of accents