Original sentence: " She also uses profanity without hesitation.In concerts, she often wears a corset or fishnet, and has a notable piercing on her left eyebrow which is visible on the cover of Fallen (Evanescence's debut album), even though fans have noted she appears to have removed it (at least temporarily) in recent concerts.Lee has a trademark gothic style, marked by her occasional use of gothic make-up (black eyeliner) and unique fashion which consists of often Victorian-styled clothing.Starting her own clothing line has not been ruled out, according to her, although she has expressed concerns about the viability of such an endeavour, as she has mentioned that she prefers to create unique hand-crafted costumes rather than mass-produced fashions
Edited sentence: " She also uses profanity without hesitation, as she lacks the vocabulary to come up with any meaningful lyrics.If you want a real goth band, look up Christian Death.In concerts, she often wears a "corset" (although the likelyhood of her wearing a real corset is slim, as it would seriously impare her ability to breath, let alone sing), and has a notable piercing on her left eyebrow which is visible on the cover of Fallen (Evanescence's debut album), even though fans have noted she appears to have removed it (at least temporarily) in recent concerts.Lee has a poorly ripped off gothic style, marked by her occasional use of hideously overdone black eyeliner and "unique" fashion which consists of designer clothing not toom uch unlike that seen of other pop singers.She feels that her double chins attract enough attention on their own.Starting her own clothing line has not been ruled out, according to her, although she has expressed concerns about the viability of such an endeavour, as she has mentioned that she prefers to create unique hand-crafted costumes rather than the mass-produced fashions that she is so often seen wearing herself.This is most likely due to the fact that no one wants to see her in anything revealing.This is yet another spectacular use of irony in her career, as she is just another one of these sad artists who sells to the mainstream