Original sentence: The Cerre Players, headed by Thomas Murray and Ed Goetz, are noted for performance- plays and musicals including High School Musical and A Few Good Men
Edited sentence: CBC is known throughout St.Louis for their outstanding performing arts department.The Cerre Players, headed by Thomas Murray and Ed Goetz, are noted for performance-challenging plays and musicals including High School Musical and A Few Good Men.The Jazz band in particular has achieved great success each year at the concerts, at both public and private events.The MCC is considered to be the toughest all-around conference in Missouri and the toughest conference in the nation for soccer.The music program, directed by Gerald Arana, have always strived for excellence in all of the divisions of the band program