Original sentence: The album is often criticised by hardcore Pink Floyd fans for its lack of material from More, Atom Heart Mother and Obscured By Clouds, as well as its shorter versions of Echoes, Shine On You Crazy Diamond, and Marooned
Edited sentence: The album tends to be despised by hardcore Pink Floyd fans, for it's lack of material from More, Atom Heart Mother, and Obscured By Clouds, as well at it's shortening of Echoes, Shine On You Crazy Diamond, and Marooned(which was only 5 minutes long in the first place)