Original sentence: Peverill was drafted from the 2001 Rookie list, and got his first break after he was elevated to the senior list due the long-term injury of the prominent midfielder Joe Misiti.Peverill was drafted officially onto the senior list for 2002 and has since impressed with his crafty footwork and ball skills
Edited sentence: Nevertheless, Peverill was drafted officially onto the senior list for 2002 and has since impressed with his crafty footwork and ball skills.The local boy was drafted from the 2001 Rookie list, and got his first break after he was elevated to the senior list due the long-term injury of the prominent midfielder Joe Misiti