Original sentence: Elliott, a college track runner of short and middle distances, graduated from Villanova University in 1935 and returned to coach the track team in 1949 until his death in 1981.He produced a total of 28 Olympic competitors, five of whom won gold medals: Ron Delany (1956, 1500m), Charles Jenkins (1956, 400m), Don Bragg (1960, pole vault), Paul Drayton (1964, 4x100m relay), and Larry James (1968, 4x400m relay).He was inducted into the Track and Field Hall of Fame in 1981.His achievements include producing five gold medals between 1956 and 1968.In that period, his teams won eight national collegiate team titles, while his athletes won 82 NCAA crowns and set 66 world records.James (Jumbo) Elliott (August 8,1915-March 22,1981) was an American athletics coach, often considered to be one of the greatest of all time
Edited sentence: Elliott, a college track runner of short and middle distances, graduated from Villanova in 1935 and returned to coach the track team in 1949 until his death in 1981.He produced a total of 28 olympic competitors, five of which won gold medals - Ron Delany (1956, 1500m), Charles Jenkins (1956, 400m), Don Bragg (1960, pole vault), Paul Drayton (1964, 4x100m relay), and Larry James (1968, 4x400m relay).He was inducted into the USA Track & Field Hall of Fame in 1981.In that period, his track teams won eight national collegiate team titles, and his athletes won 82 NCAA crowns and set a total of 66 world records.James (Jumbo) Elliott (August 8,1915-March 22,1981), track coach at Villanova University, is considered one of the greatest of all time, producing five gold medalists between the years of 1956-1968