Original sentence: The town's secondary schools include Mount ST Joseph Business and Enterprise College Known as the best of all the school's in the bolton district Canon Slade School, Withins School, Sharples School, Ladybridge High School, Thornleigh Salesian College, Turton High School Media Arts College and Smithills School, which boasts a world champion brass band
Edited sentence: The town's secondary schools include Canon Slade School, Withins School, Sharples School, Ladybridge High School, Thornleigh Salesian College, Turton High School Media Arts College and Smithills School, which boasts a world champion brass band