Original sentence: Author Sara McGill states, in her book Kwanzaa (2005):.Its leader, a convicted felon is often criticized
Edited sentence: According to Camille Jackson, Staff Writer at www.Although it has established a hold in American society, it is often attacked by proxy through its founder, a convicted felon who has a checkered past.Author Sara McGill sums it up most succinctly, in her book Kwanzaa (2005), when she says,.org, this is done as a means to undermine its powerful message