Original sentence: Bell boys gymnastics team has won over 20 state titles since it was founded by Coach Emil Millan in 1966.The Bell boys team, currently coached by Sean Sims, has been the district and regional champions for the past two years, and placed 3rd as a team in the 2006 state championship.The Bell girls are currently coached by Debbie Williams.The Bell girls have claimed the first place spot at both district and regionals for at least the past six years, claimed state titles from 2000 to 2005, and placed second in the 2006 state championships
Edited sentence: Bell boy's gymnastics team has won well over 20 state titles since it was founded by the great Emil Millan in 1966.The Bell girls are coached by Debbie Williams.The Bell girls have an equally if not more outstanding record of district, state, and regional titles as the boy's team, claiming the first place spot at both district and regionals for at least the past six years, state from 2000 to 2005, and placing second in the 2006 state championships.The boy's gymnastics team is coached by Sean Sims.The current district and regional champions for two years running, the Bell boy's team hopes to win yet another state title in 07, after placing 3rd as a team in the 2006 state championship