Original sentence: At the same time, Liverpool awarded McWatt the first PhD specifically concerned with the subject.In 2005, Dr Anthony McWatt at Liverpool University, England, organized the first conference on Robert Pirsig's Metaphysics of Quality.Proceedings of 2005 conference at the University of Liverpool, devoted to Pirsig's work
Edited sentence: At the same time, Liverpool awarded, under threat of legal action, McWatt the first PhD specifically concerned with the subject.In 2005, Dr Anthony McWatt at Liverpool University, England, organized, co-edited, and praised as, 'High Quality' a fake and contribution to the first conference on Robert Pirsig's Metaphysics of Quality.Proceedings of 2005 conference at the University of Liverpool doctored to remove any mention of McWatt's praise of a fake paper.This work is considered inadiquate due to its lack of critical thinking