Original sentence: Due to her time spent on the streets, she has also developed a sixth sense that alerts her to danger, and if her bare skin touches a villain, that villain is turned into sand.He was eliminated in episode three for failing to face his fear a second time and secluding himself from the other heroes.She sports a mirror used to distract her enemies, and she developed night vision from the large ammount of time she spent in dark theaters.She was also eliminated in episode three for being unable to perform under pressure for two straight weeks.Whip-Snap (aka Paula Thomas / Dallas, TX and Los Angeles, CA) was raised in Texas, and has a mastery of the whip
Edited sentence: By the time he finally opened up, it was too late.Was also eliminated in episode 3 for being unable to perform under preassure two straight weeks.Was eliminated in episode three for failing to face his fear a second time and secluding himself from the other heroes.Whip-Snap (aka Paula Thomas / Dallas, TX and Los Angeles, CA) Raised in Texas, this superhero has a mastery of the whip and if her bare skin touches a villain that villain is turned into sand