Original sentence: However the protesters with Internet access started protesting at home via Social Networking sites and blogs.Media personnel were barred from covering these incidents, with the CRPF (Central Reserve Police Force) officially issued curfew passes.The Indian Authorities imposed curfew on the movement of protesters and the circulation of newspapers.The protesters came out on streets raising slogans against the Indian Government.The term evolved in the Kashmir against the alleged killing of civilians by the Indian Security Forces in the summer of 2010
Edited sentence: Even media personnel were barred from covering these incidents, with the CRPF (Central Reserve Police Force) disregarding officially issued curfew passes.However, Kashmiris with Internet access, especially those in the demographic of 18-35.Kashmiris used black pictures with tagline as 'I Protest' and kept it as their profile pictures on Facebook.The Indian Authorities imposed curfew on the movement of people and even the circulation of newspapers.The people of the valley came out on streets raising slogans against the forcible rule of the Indian Government claiming Jammu and Kashmir a part of it.The term evolved in the Kashmir against the killing of innocent people by the Indian Security Forces in the summer of 2010 (see table below).at started protesting at home via Social Networking sites and blogs