Original sentence: Also during the 16th century, under the reign of Elizabeth the town had become large and prosperous enough to send its first two members to Parliament in 1586.In October 1889, 5000 Salvationists and 12 Salvation Army bands demonstrated in the town Square at Whitchurch.It is a Grade 2* Listed Building and the oldest remaining structure in the town.Meetings were held in the town hall each year, in October, to elect a mayor and burgesses.People who live IN it call it a town.The River Test provided the power for at least four watermills, located every half mile along the river through the town.The earliest written record of the town dates from 909 AD in a charter by which King Edward the Elder confirmed the manor of Whitchurch to the monks of Winchester as England recovered from the Viking onslaught of the previous fifty years.The town hall was built during the reign of Queen Anne.The town mill was the source of power for milling corn, and other mills were used for finishing wool, weaving silk and dressing cloth.This records the town's name as 'Witcerce', occupying  in the 'Hundred of Evingar' and also records that Witcerce was 'owned' by the monks at Winchester
Edited sentence: Also during the 16th century, under the reign of Elizabeth the village had become large and prosperous enough to send its first two members to Parliament in 1586.In October 1889, 5000 Salvationists and 12 Salvation Army bands demonstrated in the village Square at Whitchurch.It is a Grade 2* Listed Building and the oldest remaining structure in the village.Meetings were held in the village hall each year, in October, to elect a mayor and burgesses.People who live IN it call it a village.The River Test provided the power for at least four watermills, located every half mile along the river through the village.The earliest written record of the village dates from 909 AD in a charter by which King Edward the Elder confirmed the manor of Whitchurch to the monks of Winchester as England recovered from the Viking onslaught of the previous fifty years.The village hall was built during the reign of Queen Anne.The village mill was the source of power for milling corn, and other mills were used for finishing wool, weaving silk and dressing cloth.This records the village's name as 'Witcerce', occupying  in the 'Hundred of Evingar' and also records that Witcerce was 'owned' by the monks at Winchester