Original sentence: Haileybury's Keysborough Campus caters for students in  Pre-Prep to Year 12, with its Brighton, Victoria and Berwick, Victoria campuses catering for students in Pre-Prep to Year 10.In 2000 Haileybury admitted the first girls into the Junior School and plans were announced to  develop parallel education for boys and girls from year 5 on all campuses.In 2006, The Age newspaper published stories regarding a campaign by Haileybury Girls College to offer scholarships to girls in  schools across Melbourne in order to fill its 2007 classes in Years 10 to 12.Robertson Girls' High School had students leave to attend Haileybury College The campaign was criticised by these schools, with two Catholic girls' schools - Killester and Kilbreda Colleges - vowing to submit a formal complaint to the Uniting Church, with which the school is affiliated..  It has also been alleged that Haileybury has been "unethically" hiring teachers from other schools
Edited sentence: Haileybury's Keysborough Campus caters for students in Pre-Prep to Year 12, with its Brighton, Victoria and Berwick, Victoria campuses catering for students in Pre-Prep to Year 10.In 2000 Haileybury admitted the first girls into the Junior School and plans were announced to develop parallel education for boys and girls from year 5 on all campuses.In 2006, The Age newspaper published stories regarding a campaign by Haileybury Girls College to offer scholarships to girls in schools across Melbourne in order to fill its 2007 classes in Years 10 to 12.It has also been alleged that Haileybury has been "unethically" hiring teachers from other schools.Robertson Girls' High School had students leave to attend Haileybury College The campaign was criticised by these schools, with two Catholic girls' schools - Killester and Kilbreda Colleges - vowing to submit a formal complaint to the Uniting Church, with which the school is affiliated