Original sentence: The player is depicted as a fat character on-screen performing at a non-public venue.The words to the song scroll right-to-left at the bottom of the stupid screen, above a piano roll representation of the relative pitches at which they are to be sung (the game calls these "note tubes")
Edited sentence: The player is depicted as a character on-screen performing at a public venue.The words to the song scroll right-to-left at the bottom of the screen, above a piano roll representation of the relative pitches at which they are to be sung (the game calls these "note tubes")