Original sentence: He first moved to his current hometown of Portland, OR to enter college at the Westport School of Art and Design (KCMO) in the summer of 1996; there, he studied foundations in art.This was followed by additional semesters at Pacific Northwest College of Art (PNCA), Portland campus, where he attended through 1997
Edited sentence: He first entered college Westport School of Art and Design in Kansas City the summer of 1996; there, he studied foundations in art.This was soon followed by his inaugural move to Portland, where he began additional semesters at the Pacific Northwest College of Art (PNCA), of which he attended through 1997