Original sentence: In September 2009, Dance Gavin Dance will tour with Emarosa on Rise Records' "Squash The Beef" tour, with supporting acts  Of Mice & Men, Of Machines, and Tides of Man.Kurt Travis - lead vocals (Age 25).Matt Mingus - drums, percussion (Age 20).Tim Feerick - bass (Age 21).Will Swan - guitars, screams (Age 23).Zac Garren - guitars (Age 20)
Edited sentence: In September 2009, Dance Gavin Dance will tour with Emarosa on Rise Records' "Squash The Beef" tour, with supporting acts Of Mice & Men, Of Machines, and Tides of Man.Kurt Travis - lead vocals.Matt Mingus - drums, percussion.Tim Feerick - bass.Will Swan - guitars, screams.Zac Garren - guitars