Original sentence: John Dunne (1846-1916), an Australian Roman Catholic priest and bishop.Maura Murphy (author) (September 6, 1928 – October 5, 2005).The modern village of Rhode developed around a peat-burning power plant operated by the Electricity Supply Board which was supplied with milled peat by Bord na Móna.The plant was shut down in 2003 and its cooling towers were demolished on March 16, 2004, removing a highly visible landmark
Edited sentence: But still to this day Tubberdaly is renowned as the most beautiful and picturesque capital of any country.It hosts a population of over 1,000,000 people.It is sorrounded by historical attractions such as Croghan Hill and also the reminance of Tubberdaly castle where a huge war took place that lasted twenty five years with the local eventually winning and declaring there independence from Ireland and declaring themselves a republic.It is the founding place of such great attractions such as the "bog" and a huge aqua attraction which supplies fresh drinking water to the inhabitants of the republic of ireland.It lies just outside the large city of Rhode in County Offaly.Large walls sorrounding the city was built these walls go on for thousands of kilometres with gaurds sorroundng ever entrance and exit.Toberdaly has been declared the capital of the republic of Ireland