Original sentence: Amnesty International has reported several alleged cases of excessive electroshock gun use, that possibly amount to torture, including the death of an individual after being struck 12 times with a Taser in Orange County, Florida.They have also raised extensive concerns about the use of other electro-shock devices by American police and in American prisons, as they can be (and according to Amnesty International, sometimes are) used to inflict cruel pain on individuals without leaving the telltale markings that a conventional beating might
Edited sentence: "  They have also raised extensive concerns about the use of other electro-shock devices by American police and in American prisons, as they can be (and according to Amnesty International, sometimes are) used to inflict cruel pain on individuals without leaving the telltale markings that a conventional beating might.Amnesty International has reported several alleged cases of excessive electroshock gun use that possibly amount to torture, including the death of an individual after being struck 12 times with a Taser in Orange County, Florida, and a death involving a pre-trial inmate in Gwinnett County, Georgia, shocked 5 times in 43 seconds while hand-cuffed and restrained, where local police later blamed Taser International for "intentionally mislead law enforcement with their marketing and training tools