Original sentence: "Bart (Sibrel) has misinterpreted things that are immediately obvious to anyone who has extensively read Apollo history and documentation or anyone who has ever been inside an Apollo command module or (an) accurate mockup," says Birmingham News columnist Jim McDade.McDade accuses Sibrel of rehashing old theories; "the only thing new and weird" in A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Moon is the inference that the video views of Earth were actually filmed through a small hole to give the impression that Apollo 11 was not in low earth orbit
Edited sentence: "Bart (Sibrel) has misinterpreted things that are immediately obvious to anyone who has extensively read Apollo history and documentation or anyone who has ever been inside an Apollo command module or (an) accurate mockup," says Birmingham News columnist Jim McDade who, notably, is not a scientist nor privy to NASA-proprietary information.McDade accuses Sibrel of rehashing old theories; "the only thing new and weird" in A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Moon is that the video views of Earth were actually filmed through a small hole to give the impression that Apollo 11 was not in low earth orbit