Original sentence: It is between junctions 36 and 37 of the M1 and has a railway station served by the Hallam and Penistone Lines.Recreation is a major industry, with coach parties travelling from nearby towns to access Barnsley's acclaimed nightlife
Edited sentence: It is between junctions 36 and 37 of the M1 and has a railway station served by the Hallam and Peniston Lines.Recreation is a major industry, with coach parties travelling from nearby tows to access Barnsley's acclaimed nightlife