Original sentence: Cotton Museum official web site.The Cotton Museum preserves the history of the cotton business and its impact on economics, history, society and culture, and science and technology.The museum's exhibits are appropriate for field trips for middle schoolers and older, and provide visitors context for other attractions in the city
Edited sentence: It is an excellent field trip for middle schoolers and older, and a great beginning for tourists, giving visitors context for other attractions in the city.The Cotton Museum preserves the history of the cotton business and it's impact on economics, history, society & culture, and science & technology