Original sentence: Beat to the mat in a footrace by Brian & Greg.Brian & Greg - Investigated wrong water tower; at pit stop, they wore only shorts and sunglasses.Debbie & Bianca - Eliminated due to getting lost on a Chilean highway at start of leg.Lynn & Alex - Finished roadblock in fourth place, but proceeded to wrong palace for pit stop and had to backtrack.Megan & Heidi - Arrived in Santiago last; eliminated a minute after Brian & Greg arrived.Ray & Deana - Team-relations trouble completing Detour.Ryan & Chuck - Eliminated 10 seconds after Ron & Kelly arrived at pit stop.Susan & Patrick - Team-relations breakdown, due to Roadblock in leg 4; also, a faulty boat in leg 5
Edited sentence: Brian & Greg - Eliminated due to getting arrive in a wrong water tower; Before they went to pit stop, They wore only shorts and sunglasses.Debbie & Bianca - Eliminated due to out course in a Chilean highway before they went to next destination.Lynn & Alex - While finishing in roadblock in fourth place; They arrive in a wrong pit stop and there is no people.Megan & Heidi - Arrived in Santiago last; Eliminated a minute after Brian & Greg arrived.Ray & Deana - In a surprise detour leg, They finished 6th in detour; After they arrived in pit stop, Phil asked Brian & Greg to call them.Ryan & Chuck - Eliminated 10 seconds after Ron & Kelly arrived in pit stop.Susan & Patrick - They started to breakdown in leg 4; Patrick decided to quit roadblock in previous leg, he was going to decided to eat