Original sentence: Finally trapped on the banks of the Sankuru River, he was captured by soldiers loyal to Colonel Mobutu.Further humiliation followed at Mobutu's villa, where soldiers beat the elected prime minister in full view of television cameras.Lumumba was beaten again on the flight to Elizabethville on 17 January 1961.The Belgians demanded a more decisive ending - they wanted Lumumba delivered into the hands of his sworn enemy, President Tschombe of Katanga.The UN refused on orders from headquarters in New York
Edited sentence: Finally trapped on the banks of the impassable Sankuru River, he was captured by soldiers loyal to Colonel Mobutu.Further humiliation followed at Mobutu's villa, where delighted young soldiers whooped with joy as they beat the elected prime minister in full view of television cameras.Lumumba was beaten again on the flight to Elizabethville on January 17th, 1961.The Belgians demanded a more decisive ending - they wanted Lumumba delivered into the hands of his most sworn enemy, President Tschombe of Katanga.The UN refused on direct orders from headquarters in New York