Original sentence: Her grandfather used to be an elite four member, but left his gym so then he could write poetry.Her hair and eyes are red
Edited sentence: Flannery has now the burning passion of fire pokemon that burns with a lovely rage.Her grand father used to be and elite four member but left his gym and elite position so then he could write poetry.Her hair and eyes are as red as the sun and she is by far most the prettiest pokemon gym leader in Hoenn