Original sentence: According to the Washington Post, Fernando Londoño, a former Interior Minister, criticized Moncayo in an opinion column for El Tiempo, the country's main daily.As he approached the city of Popayán, his walk started to be covered by the media and his name became increasingly known by the Colombian public opinion.He accused Moncayo's son Pablo Emilio of being an incompetent soldier and said that his father was spreading "Marxist venom through Colombia's veins"
Edited sentence: As he approached the city of Popayán, his walk started to be covered by the media and his name became known by the Colombian public opinion, who mystified became interested in his saga.His criticism of Uribe has been considered as treasonous by the media.In the main national newspaper Fernando Londoño, a former interior minister, belittled Moncayo's son, Pablo Emilio Moncayo, as an incompetent soldier and accused the father of spreading "Marxist venom through Colombia's veins".This happens in  a country where calling someone Marxist or communist is equivalent to a death threat