Original sentence: Auerbach explained the conclusions their research brought them to:We have found that the stability of the emotional connection and the predictability of the caretaking relationship are the significant variables that predict positive child adjustment.Critics, including feminists, dispute studies, and conclusions drawn from studies, of the behaviour of children from fatherless homes labelling them as misleading and alarmist and refer to counter-research to support their claims:Research on the impact of father involvement on children provides evidence that high levels of paternal participation tends to increase children's cognitive competence, empathy, and internal locus of control.In an article released in the American Psychologist (June 1999) , feminist psychologist and researcher Louise B.In his discussion paper Fatherhood and fatherlessness he uses research to argue that it is the quality of parenting and the child's relationship with the parents that plays the main role.Silverstein and psychologist and researcher in coding and analysis Carl F.They state also that, "[O]ur research with divorced, never-married, and remarried fathers has taught us that a wide variety of family structures can support positive child outcomes
Edited sentence: Feminists dispute studies, and conclusions drawn from studies, of the behaviour of children from fatherless homes labelling them as misleading and alarmist and refer to counter-research to support their claims:Research on the impact of father involvement on children provides evidence that high levels of paternal participation tends to increase children's cognitive competence, empathy, and internal locus of control.In his discussion paper Fatherhood and fatherlessness he argues that it is the quality of parenting and the child's relationship with the parents that plays the main role