Original sentence: Xinjiang got back to be ruled by a centralized Chinese government officially by the Qing dynasty in the 1750s, a historical Chinese kingdom, led by a Manchu regime, with 1759 being the year of the establishment of the original form of the modern day administrative region.Xinjiang had been under control of a Chinese regime since the Han Dynasty (2,000 years ago)
Edited sentence: Xinjiang got back to be ruled by a centralized Chinese government officially by the Qing dynasty in the 1750s, a historical Chinese kingdom, led by a Manchu, with 1759 being the year of the establishment of the original form of the modern day administrative region.Xinjiang had been under control of China since the Han Dynasty (2,000 years ago)