Original sentence: In 1692, a number of MacDonalds were killed in the Massacre of Glencoe when an initiative to suppress Jacobitism was entangled in the long running feud between Clan MacDonald and Clan Campbell.The slaughter of the host MacDonalds at the hands of their guests was a major affront to Highland customs of the day
Edited sentence: A Duke of Argyll, chieftan of Clan Campbell, is sometimes credited with developing a popular dog breed, the West Highland White Terrier, in the 19th century.Animosity toward the Campbells still lingers in the Highlands and among the kin of the MacDonalds.In 1692, the MacDonalds of Glencoe were murdered in the Massacre of Glencoe when an initiative to suppress Jacobitism was entangled in the long running feud between Clan MacDonald and Clan Campbell.Several Campbells and soldiers of their regiment visited the MacDonalds for several nights, drank their whiskey, supped at their tables, and then killed them while they slept.The slaughter of the host MacDonalds at the hands of their guests was a major affront to Highland traditions of honor