Original sentence: All classes of people seek the best tattoo artists, and this rise in popularity has placed tattooists in the category of "fine artist".For a time, it was difficult to get a tattoo in New York because it was rendered illegal.He was put on exhibition as a money-making attraction, and became the rage of London.In 787 CE, Pope Hadrian banned tattooing.In the 1920s, with prohibition and then the depression, Chatham Square lost its appeal.In the late 1700s, Captain James Cook made several trips to the South Pacific.It had been 600 years since tattoos had been seen in Europe and it would be another 100 years before tattooing would make its mark in the West.Tattooing has made a strong comeback; it is more popular and accepted than it has ever been.The Ainu people of eastern Asia used tattooing to show social status, girls coming of age were marked to announce their place in society, as were the married women.Then, in 1961 there was an outbreak of hepatitis because few tattoo shops used sterilization machines, though most had them.There is evidence that the Maya, Incas, and Aztecs used tattooing in the rituals
Edited sentence: All classes of people seek the best tattoo artists.For a time, it was difficult to get a tattoo in New York because it became illegal.He is handsome, charming, interesting and knows how to use the media.He was put on exhibition as a money making attraction, and became the rage of London.In 787 AD, Pope Hadrian banned tattooing.In the 1920s, with prohibition and then the depression, Chathma Square lost its appeal.In the late 1700s, Captain Cook made several trips to the South Pacific.It had been 600 years since tattoos had been seen in Europe and it would be another 100 years before tattooing would make it mark in the West.It is more popular and accepted than it has ever been.Tattooing has made a strong comeback.The Ainu people of western Asia used tattooing to show social status, girls coming of age were marked to announce their place in society, as were the married women.Then, in 1961 there was an outbreak of hepatitis because, though most tattoo shops had sterilization machines, few used them.There is evidence that the Mayan, Incas, and Aztecs used tattooing in the rituals.This rise in popularity has placed tattooists in the category of "fine artist"