Original sentence: In recent years Richard Hill has had varied results in League Tables which has been blamed locally on the rough transition between headteachers.Thurcaston residents go to the Anstey Martin High School in the neighboring village of Anstey from the age of 10 to 13, and onto either Rawlins Community College, or Longslade Community College (in neighboring Birstall)
Edited sentence: In recent years Richard Hill has had varied results in League Tables which has been blamed locally on the rough transition between the headteacher... Mrs Sheperd.Thurcaston residents go to the Anstey Martin High Schoolwhich has a very nice headteacher, Mr Furniss, this amazing school is located  in the neighboring village of Anstey from the age of 10 to 13, and onto either Rawlins Community College, or Longslade Community College (in neighboring Birstall)