Original sentence: Richards photographed the faces of the male attendees, published the photograph on Twitter, and included a shaming statement in the tweet.The following day, the employer of one of the photographed individuals, a software developer, terminated his employment because of the joke
Edited sentence: Richards photographed the male attendees, published the photograph on Twitter, and included a shaming statement in the tweet.The following day, the employer of one of the photographed individuals, a software developer, terminated his employment because of the offensive joke