Original sentence: After Thurmond was traded to the Chicago Bulls in return for center Clifford Ray prior to the 1974-75 campaign, Barry and the Warriors experienced a truly remarkable season.Considered to be no better than the third- or fourth-best team in the Pacific Division prior to the regular season, the Barry-led Warriors captured the division crown
Edited sentence: After Thurmond was traded to the Chicago Bulls in return for center Clifford Ray prior to the 1974-75 campaign, Barry and the Warriors experienced a truly magical season.Considered to be no better than the third- or fourth-best team in the Pacific Division prior to the regular season, the Barry-inspired Warriors captured the division crown