Original sentence: Many, including administrators at UCI, considered this an "endorsement of terrorism".On March 13, 2010, Malik Ali, as a guest of the Muslim Student Union at UC Irvine, gave a speech on the campus and made remarks concerning Jewish involvement in September 11 attacks, as well as indicating his support for what he considers Hamas' struggle against Israeli oppression
Edited sentence: On March 13, 2010, Malik Ali, as a guest of the Muslim Student Union at UC Irvine, gave a speech on the campus and made remarks concerning Jewish involvement in September 11 attacks, and some thought to expressly endorse terrorism.. Malik Ali was invited as a speaker for a theme week sponsored by the Muslim Student Union at UC Irvine, and follows the controversial interruption of the Israeli Ambassador to America, Michael Oren, by the group on February 8, 2010