Original sentence: For over two decades Keshavrao was closely associated with the reform movement of Arya Samaj in Hyderabad.He decided to pursue law as a career; in 1889 he passed both law and judiciary exams and started his law career at Hyderabad in 1896.He was one among the five sons of Santukarao, a Maharashtrian
Edited sentence: For over two decades Keshavrao was closely associated with the Hindu reform movement of Arya Samaj in Hyderabad.He decided to pursue law as a career; in 1889 he passed both law and judiciary exams, and started his law career at Hyderabad in 1896.He was one among the five sons of Santukarao, a religious Maharashtrian Brahmin