Original sentence: Additionally, the Hawks have Josh Childress, Josh Smith, Salim Stoudamire, and nearly $25 million in cap space for 2005 free agent market.Despite their league worst-record, though, the Hawks only landed the number two pick in the 2005 NBA Draft (the first pick went to the Milwaukee Bucks).In the 2004-2005 season the Hawks gained the notorious reputation of the league's worst team with a mere 13 victories (five less than even the expansion Charlotte Bobcats).In the summer of 2005, the Hawks completed a sign-trade deal with the Phoenix Suns that landed Atlanta Joe Johnson in return for Boris Diaw and 2 future 1st round picks.These changes occurred after an ugly power struggle between the owners for nearly 3 weeks before the moves were made
Edited sentence: Along with Josh Childress, Josh Smith, Salim Stoudamire, and nearly $25 million in cap space for 2005 free agent market.Despite their league worst-record, though, the Hawks only landed the number two pick in the 2005 NBA Draft (the first pick went to the Milwaukee Bucks.In the 2004-2005 season the Hawks gained the notorious reputation of the league's worst team with a mere 13 victories (five less than even the expansion Charlotte Bobcats.In the summer of 2005, the Hawks have completed a sign-trade deal with the Phoenix Suns, that landed Atlanta Joe Johnson, in return for Boris Diaw and 2 future 1st round picks.The Atlanta Hawks are quickly becoming one of the NBA's hottest and most exciting young teams.These changes occurred after an ugly power struggle occurred between the owners for nearly 3 weeks before the moves were made