Original sentence: After rejecting the fame he had gained as the messiah figure of the Theosophist society, he traveled all over the world speaking and writing to audiences.As such, he attempted to transcend all man-made boundaries of religion, nationality, ideology, and sectarian thinking in his works.Krishnamurti, (May 12, 1895–February 17, 1986) was a well-known writer and speaker on fundamental ethical, philosophical and spiritual subjects.Though he dealt with contemporary issues, his answers were rooted in the view that the problems he addressed 9and subsequentely their solutions) were not new to society
Edited sentence: As such, his teachings transcend all man-made boundaries of religion, nationality, ideology, and sectarian thinking.For nearly sixty years he traveled all over the world, pointing out to people the need to transform themselves through self knowledge, by being aware of their thoughts and feelings in daily life.Krishnamurti, (May 12, 1895–February 17, 1986) was a well-known writer and speaker on fundamental philosophical and spiritual subjects.Though he was very alive to contemporary issues through the decades, his answers were rooted in his timeless vision of life and truth