Original sentence: However, the practice of selective adherence to the magisterium of the church has been repeatedly condemned through the teaching of the Popes:.It should be noted that the this epithet is not created, used, or endorsed by official church teaching.Some of those who employ the term in their vocabulary accuse those who view the term pejoratively of believing dissent from the constant teaching of the Church to be a form of devoutness.The term Cafeteria Catholic (also à la carte Catholic or CINO = "Catholic In Name Only") is a pejorative or an insulting characterization and is used to describe people who dissent from certain teachings of the Roman Catholic Church while maintaining an outward identity as Catholics.The term is typically applied to those who blatently dissent from the Catholic Church's teaching on moral issues, such as abortion, contraception, premarital sex, and homosexuality.These people are said to view the Church much like a "cafeteria", where one picks and chooses only those items that appeal to them
Edited sentence: It should be noted that the term is not endorsed by official church teaching.Many who view the term pejoratively, foolishly believe dissent from the constant teaching of the Church to be a form of devoutness.Such people view the Church much like a "cafeteria", where one picks and chooses only those items that appeal to them.The term Cafeteria Catholic (also à la carte Catholic or CINO = "Catholic In Name Only") is a critical term used to describe people who dissent from certain teachings of the Roman Catholic Church while maintaining an outward identity as Catholics.The term is typically applied to those who blatently dissent from the Catholic Church's teaching on gravely moral issues, such as abortion, contraception, premarital sex, and homosexuality.Whether the practice of Cafeteria Catholicism is an epithet or a descriptive phenomenon can be summed up authoritatively  through the teaching of the Popes: