Original sentence: B/CS is conveniently located in the heart of Texas, approximately equidistant from three of the 10 largest cities in the United States.Local unemployment hovers under two percent, among the lowest in the nation, and cost of living is very affordable.The cities have gained national recognition as one of the most liveable metropolitan areas in the United States.With a combined population of over 130,000, B-CS boast many of the amenities of a large city while maintaining a small town atmosphere
Edited sentence: B/CS is located in the heart of Texas, approximately equidistant from three of the 10 largest cities in the United States.Despite a relatively high standard of living for many residents, the area has struggled for many years to create an adequate number of professional level, high paying jobs.Lake Bryan, a utility cooling lake, offers opportunities for boating and features a fairly extensive trail system popular with mountain bikers.Local unemployment hovers under two percent, among the lowest in the nation, and cost of living is relatively affordable.Much of the local economy is driven by Texas A&M, and the university is the region's single largest employer.Noteable tourist attractions include the George Bush Presidential Library, Texas A&M University, and Messina Hoff Winery.Popular local venues include a proliferation of student oriented bars, country western dancing, and movie theaters.Recreational opportunities are also limited.The next largest employers are the city school districts and local hospitals.With a combined population of over 130,000, B-CS boasts many of the amenities of a large city while maintaining a small town atmosphere