Original sentence: 1997: Dixon Opie Deputy: Byron Wilson.2001: Duncan  Deputy: David Dewar.2002: Hayden Baker Deputy: Christopher Pointer.2003: Sam Denman Deputy: Joseph Dewar.Former School Captains:
Edited sentence: Despite these stunning attributes, he remains humble even in the face of 640 admiring followers.He is kind, intelligent, good-looking, and athletically adept.He is much more important that everyone else, so their names do not deserve to be mentioned.Nick, in many ways, epitomises what it is to be HIBS gentlemen.These characteristics - combined with his charisma and brilliant personality - allow him to lead HIBS students to guaranteed success