Original sentence: " Today Hickson is still with Everton as a guide on the tours of the club's ground, Goodison Park.Hickson made 243 appearances and scored 111 goals and in the process became to Everton.However, he left Everton in 1955 to join Aston Villa for £17,500
Edited sentence: " The word legend is overused in the world of football, but this great man truly deserves this status.For Everton, Hickson made 243 appearances and scored 111 goals.Hickson left Everton in 1955 to join Aston Villa for £17,500.Today Hickson is a guide on the tours of Everton's ground, Goodison Park