Original sentence: He died on 26th October, 1955, at the young age of 34 years.He was only ten years old when his father died, and was subsequently trained by Pandit Vinayakrao Patwardhan and Pandit Narayanrao Vyas
Edited sentence: He passed away on 26th October, 1955, at the young age of 34 years.He was only ten years old when his father passed away, and was subsequently trained by Pandit Vinayakrao Patwardhan and Pandit Narayanrao Vyas