Original sentence: Danimals yoghurt is a dairy product marketed for children, advertised as calcium-enriched and to strengthen bone development in children.It is a lowfat yoghurt in the form of a drink
Edited sentence: 60% of American children don't get enough calcium.Danimals yogurt is a dairy product that help kids grow strong bones.It is a lowfat yogurt in the form of a drink.It's advertising slogan is "Trade in your breakfast for a Dannon Frusion smoothie.They are fully loaded with calcium