Original sentence: Despite the fact that all six previous Final Fantasy games had been published on Nintendo systems, the series' producer, Squaresoft chose to release VII on the Sony Playstation, offering a highly-publicized denounciation of Nintendo's cartidge-based system which proved deeply embarassing for Nintendo.Much of this success was credited to Nintendo's strong first-party franchises, such as Mario and Zelda, which had strong name brand appeal yet appeared exclusively on Nintendo platforms
Edited sentence: Despite the fact that all six previous Final Fantasy games had been published on Nintendo systems, the series' producer, Squaresoft chose to release VII on the Sony Playstation, offering a highly-publicized denounciation of Nintendo's cartidge-based system which proved deeply embarassing for Nintendo, if not appalling, revolting, and not to mention, devestating.Much of this success was credited to Nintendo's extremely strong first-party franchises, such as Mario and Zelda, which had strong name brand appeal yet appeared exclusively on Nintendo platforms