Original sentence: offers twenty-six leather cradle-seats with 54 inch pitches, individual handheld DVD players offering ten entertainment choices through noise-reducing headsets, menus including chocolates and champagne cocktails, and personal phones, reading lights, and laptop power ports
Edited sentence: offers twenty-six spacious leather cradle-seats with a 54 inch pitch, individual handheld DVD players offering ten entertainment choices through noise-reducing headsets, new menus including chocolates and champagne cocktails, as well as personal phones, reading lights, and laptop power ports