Original sentence: <ref"Scholarships" Rugby School web site</ref> The school's new Arnold Foundation has been established to enable it to offer similar support to children from outside the Rugby area.Rugby School continues to offer scholarship places for outstanding students from the local community, who come from state (maintained) primary schools in the immediate vicinity of Rugby
Edited sentence: Rugby School continues to offer a large number of scholarship places for outstanding students from the local community, who come from state (maintained) primary schools in the immediate vicinity of Rugby.The school's new Arnold Foundation has been established to enable it to offer similar support to children from outside the Rugby area