Original sentence: He toured with that band for two years, before leaving in 1970.In 1968, Barry joined a band called The Kingsmen
Edited sentence: During this time he spent the majority of the time touring with the group.He was only a member of the band for two years, before leaving in 1970.In 1968, Barry joined the 1960s Beat/garage rock band, The Kingsmen.In 1984 he mixed a track for Julio Iglesias & Willie Nelson titled "To All the Girls I've Loved Before"