Original sentence: Johnson (born June 18, 1940) is a retired UC Berkeley law professor, opponent of evolutionary science, co-founder of the pseudo-scientific intelligent design movement, author of the "Wedge strategy" and co-founder of the Discovery Institute's Center for Science and Culture (CSC).Phillip Johnson has developed what is called the 'Intelligent Design' movement ..." In Christianity Today, she reveals Johnson's religious beliefs and his criticism of evolution and affirms Johnson as "The unofficial spokesman for ID" The scientific community views intelligent design as unscientific, pseudoscience and junk science.The scientific community considers Johnson's defense of intelligent design to be pseudoscientific
Edited sentence: Almost the entire scientific community considers Johnson's defense of intelligent design to be pseudoscientific.Johnson (born June 18, 1940) is a retired UC Berkeley law professor, opponent of evolutionary science, co-founder of the intelligent design movement, author of the "Wedge strategy" and co-founder of the Discovery Institute's Center for Science and Culture (CSC).Phillip Johnson has developed what is called the 'Intelligent Design' movement ..." In Christianity Today, she reveals Johnson's religious beliefs and his criticism of evolution and affirms Johnson as "The unofficial spokesman for ID" Almost the entire scientific community views intelligent design as unscientific, pseudoscience and junk science