Original sentence: Arthur Edward Waite appears as a villain named Arthwaite.Cyril Grey is generally accepted as beinga somewhat idealized version of Crowley himself, perhaps as he was in his Golden Dawn days, while Simon Iff has been seen as either an idealized version of an older Crowley, or perhaps as Allan Bennett.It has also been suggested that Bennett may appear as Mahatera Phang
Edited sentence: Arthur Edward Waite appears as a villain named Arthwaite, while Allan Bennett appears as Simon Iff