Original sentence: A second edition discusses modern Pohnpeian culture and the changes that occurred on Pohnpei in the 30 years between Ward's visits.Ethnographer Martha Ward's most recent work on the Pohnpeians and their culture is the 1989 test Nest in the Wind.The islanders of Pohnpei have a reputation as being the most welcoming of outsiders among residents of the island group, and the island contains  a wealth of biodiversity
Edited sentence: A 2nd edition with appended chapters at the end tell of modern Pohnpeian culture and the changes that happened in the 30 years between Ward's visits.An ethnography called "Nest in the Wind" was written about Pohnpeians and their culture by Martha Ward in 1989.It is also considered to be the most friendly of the group, and it is widely regarded as the most beautifully diverse island in all of Micronesia