Original sentence: After leaving the University of the South in Sewanee, Tennessee he worked a wide variety of jobs, including sailor and insurance salesman, and doing a stint in a slaughterhouse.Cabot was born Etienne Pelissier Jacques de Bujac in Carlsbad, New Mexico, USA to French Colonel Etienne de Bujac and Julia Armandine Graves, who died shortly after giving birth to him
Edited sentence: After leaving the University of the South in Sewanee, Tennessee, Cabot  worked at a many jobs, including as a sailor insurance salesman, and in a slaughterhouse.Cabot was born Etienne Pelissier Jacques de Bujac in Carlsbad, New Mexico, to French Army Colonel Etienne de Bujac and his wife Julia Armandine Graves, who died shortly after giving birth to him