Original sentence: According to the Center for Diseas Control and Prevention, more than 300 people in the United States got sick from drinking raw milk or eating cheese made from raw milk in 2001, and nearly 200 became ill from these products in 2002.Despite warnings by public health officials worldwide, some people advocate consumption of raw milk products.Most healthy people recover from such food-borne illness within a short period of time, but others may have symptoms that are chronic, severe, or life-threatening.Proponents say that beneficial components of milk are destroyed by pasteurization, specifically immunoglobulins and the enzymes lipase and phosphatase, which are inactivated by heat
Edited sentence: Advocates claim that beneficial components of milk are destroyed by pasteurization, specifically immunoglobulins and the enzymes lipase and phosphatase, which are inactivated by heat.Despite the stated dangers of bacterial contamination and warnings by public health officials worldwide, some people prefer raw milk products.More than 300 people in the United States got sick from drinking raw milk or eating cheese made from raw milk in 2001, and nearly 200 became ill from these products in 2002, according to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention.Most healthy people recover from food-borne illness within a short period of time, but others may have symptoms that are chronic, severe, or life-threatening