Original sentence: Zox's third album, Line In the Sand was released in January 2008, receiving favorable reviews from many underground rating sites02/20/08
Edited sentence: " (, 02/20/08).Zox's third installment, Line In The Sand, was released in January 2008, receiving favorable reviews from many underground rating sites.net's review of Line In The Sand" stated, "this record is one of the first records in 2008 you should be picking up