Original sentence: A knee injury at the start of the 2008/09 season restricted his appearances in the early stages of the season.David Seymour (born 27 September 1984) is a rugby union player who plays as a flanker for Sale Sharks and England Sevens.Further international honours have followed, Seymour having played for England 7s in the IRB Series in Dubai, Los Angeles and Hong Kong and claiming a silver medal at the Commonwealth Games in Melbourne in 2006.Seymour started 13 games for Saracens in the 2007/08 season and appeared as a replacement 11 times
Edited sentence: A knee injury at the start of the 2008-09 season restricted his appearances in the early stages of the season.David Seymour (born 27 September, 1984 in High Wycombe) is a rugby union player who plays as a flanker for Sale Sharks and England Sevens.Further international honours have followed, Seymour having played for England 7s in the IRB Series in Dubai, Los Angeles and Hong Kong and claiming a silver medal at the 2006 Commonwealth Games in Melbourne.Seymour started 13 games for Saracens in the 2007-08 season and appeared as a replacement 11 times