Original sentence: Enid, Lady Jones (27 October 1889 – 31 March 1981), known by her maiden name as Enid Bagnold, was a British author and playwright, best known for the 1935 story National Velvet which was filmed in 1944 with Elizabeth Taylor
Edited sentence: Enid Bagnold, Lady Jones (October 27 1889 – March 31 1981) was a British author and playwright, best known for the 1935 story National Velvet which was filmed in 1944 with Elizabeth Taylor.Surprisingly, she was never knighted (granted a Damehood) herself, neither for her war efforts nor for her contribution to literature