Original sentence: In the wake of artillery duels during Operation Parakram, however, he noted that the Pakistani soldiers at Point 5353 were unable to do so, because the Indians preemptively blew up the Pakistani positions on Point 5353 using Bofors howitzers from the surrounding heights of Point 5165, Point 5240 and Point 5100
Edited sentence: In the wake of artillery duels during Operation Parakram, however, he noted that the Pakistani soldiers at Point 5353 were unable to do so, and were, in fact, on the receiving end of artillery bombardment from three Indian posts, namely Point 5165, Point 5240 and Point 5100