Original sentence: The story is not a comprehensive (nor wholly accurate) account of the attempts to break the sound barrier, giving only a fictional and parochially British view, albeit considered an entertaining and visually stunning depiction, especially at the time of release
Edited sentence: The story is not a comprehensive (nor wholly accurate) account of the attempts to break the sound barrier, giving only a fictional and parochially British view, albeit an entertaining and visually stunning one, especially at the time of release