Original sentence: African Renaissance.However, it is disputed whether the government of South Africa is that advanced as problems such as  unemployment, crime and the scourge of AIDS remain unresolved.Pax Praetoriana (or Pax Pretoriana) refers to the relative stability of modern South Africa and the foreign policy of the modern Republic of South Africa at dominating the African continent (economically and politically) and attempting to make other countries to adopt the South African style of government, which is seen as stable (the term itself derives from Pax Romana, the Roman peace).South African leadership (African National Congress) sees the country as the most advanced in Africa, and the type of government as efficient – unlike governments of those countries in Africa which are plagued by civil wars
Edited sentence: However it is vry disputed werether the government of South Africa is that advanced - the good economical situation is primarilly there due to the decades of white rule; after the fall of white rule, no problems were solved (such as unemployment) and new problems appeared or became more powerful (AIDS, highest crime in the world), which caused heavy emmigration; discrimination as well did not disappear, only that it was reversed - formerly it was against blacks and now it is against whites (e.Pax Praetoriana (or Pax Pretoriana) refers to the relative stability of modern South Africa and the foreign policy of the modern Republic of South Africa at dominating in the African continent (economically and politically) and attempting to make other countries to adopt the South African style of government, which is seen as stable (the term itself derives from Pax Romana, the Roman peace).See as well: African Renaissance.South African leadership (African National Congress) sees their country to be the most advanced in Africa, and as well sees their type of government to be efficient - unlike governments of those countries in Africa which are plagued by civil wars.it is much harder for the whites to get jobs, the Afrikaans language is removed from everywhere, etc