Original sentence: It reflected and reinforced the popular perception of superheroes as childish entertainment.The live action Batman series of the late 1960s, starring Adam West and Burt Ward, made playful use of many of the conventions of superhero comics, including colorful costumes, visual sound effects, implausible escapes, and heavily expository dialog.The series helped sell color televisions and introduced the characters to millions of viewers
Edited sentence: The live action Batman series of the late 1960s, starring Adam West as Batman and Burt Ward as Robin, was a ratings phenomenon.The psychedelically colored series helped sell color televisions and introduced the characters to millions of viewers, but it was extremely campy and goofy and many comic book experts agree that it had a mostly negative effect on the public's perceptions of superheroes