Original sentence: Galis was eventually selected by the Boston Celtics in the 4th round of the 1979 NBA Draft, 68th overall.Galis' agent, Bill Manon, who also managed Diana Ross, did not have Galis work out with any NBA teams.In his fourth and final year, Galis, by now a shooting guard, saw his points average reach 27.5 and his name ranked third among the leading NCAA Division I scorers, behind Larry Bird and Lawrence Butler
Edited sentence: Being an injured player that had an agent with a poor reputation he could not get an NBA contract immediately.He slipped from being a first round projected draft pick to being drafted 4th.He was selected by the Boston Celtics in the 4th round of the 1979 NBA Draft, 68th overall.However, circumstances did not favor the young player.In his fourth and final year, Galis, by now a shooting guard, saw his points average reach 27.5 and his name ranked third among the leading NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Championship scorers, behind the great Larry Bird and Lawrence Butler.This poor move by Manon may have ruined Galis' career.Unfortunately, Galis' agent Bill Manon who also managed Diana Ross made a huge mistake before the NBA draft and did not have Galis work out with any NBA teams