Original sentence: From its summit there is an excellent view of the ring of fells known as the Eskdale Horseshoe: Sca Fell, Scafell Pike, Broad Crag, Great End, Esk Pike, Bow Fell and Crinkle Crags
Edited sentence: The summit offers one of the best views in the Lake District.There is an excellent view of the ring of fells known as the Eskdale Horseshoe: Sca Fell, Scafell Pike, Broad Crag, Great End, Esk Pike, Bow Fell and Crinkle Crags