Original sentence: In June, 2007 Sony announced a drop in the price of the PS3 by $100.In comparison to its greatest rival the Xbox 360 it has around about the same amount of power and however the cell can be pushed and optimised further than the 360's cpu and this will give it a possible edge in the long run if the developers can make use of its odd design, the 360's cpu is far more general and slightly less powerful but far easier to develop for
Edited sentence: In June 2007, Sony announced a drop in the price of the PS3 by $100.In comparison to its greatest rival, the Xbox 360, it has around the same amount of power.It allows faster processing power than the 360's CPU, utilizing 7 SPEs to process more information and calculations.It's Cell processor can be utilized further than the 360's CPU