Original sentence: "Says Kabeer, those humble people become pure - they become Khalsa - who know the Lord's loving devotional worship"and again in a hukmanama (order) by Guru Har Gobind (the sixth Guru), which refers to a sangat as "Guru ka khalsa" ("Guru's own Khalsa").In Pre-Sikh tradition, the term is first used by Kabir and later incorporated in the Guru Granth Sahib.The word Khalsa is derived from Arabic word khālisa[h] خالصة ("pure/devoted")
Edited sentence: Consequently, Khalsa Sikhs are those who owe allegience to God alone and should reject all sources of Temporal authority.God himself asks Sikhs: "What do you want from me.Here am I.In the Sikh tradition, the term first appears in a hukmanama (order) by Guru Har Gobind (the sixth Guru), which refers to a sangat as "Guru ka khalsa" ("Guru's own Khalsa").It connotes one who is purified by God.The Sikhs reply: "Lord.The term is also mentioned in Guru Granth Sahib in a verse written by Kabir refering to purity of worship.The term was long prevelant in India and was a common revenue term under Mughal administration.The word "Khalsa" is a term equivalent to a state or common-wealth.The word Khalsa is derived from Arabic word khālisa[h] خالصة ("pure/devoted") and is also associated with the Persian word khālis ("pure").The word Khalsa when written in Persian script consists of five letters.The word represents The Five and Sikh tradition translates it as the Sikhs of Guru Gobind Singh engaged in pleasant coversation.These are khe (it represents Oneself), alif (it represents God), lam (signifies Labbaik), swad (alludes to master), last letter is again alif pointing to azadi (freedom).What would you have.give us liberty"