Original sentence: HRW's report also contends that the extensive destruction of roads, water, and sewage networks by D9 bulldozers is not plausible as an antimine technique, as most of the destruction is wrought using the rear blade of the bulldozer, which would do nothing to protect bulldozers from improvised explosive devices.Human Rights Watch has published a report criticizing the mass demolition in Rafah, in which it argues against many of the IDF's justifications for the destructive activities carried out by D9s.Instead, HRW claims that the IDF destruction of roads, utilities and civilian structures is vindicative, punitive and illegal
Edited sentence: HRW's report also demonstrates that the extensive destruction of roads, water, and sewage networks by D9 bulldozers is not plausible as an antimine technique, as most of the destruction is wrought using the rear blade of the bulldozer, which would do nothing to protect bulldozers from improvised explosive devices.Human Rights Watch has published a report criticizing the mass demolition in Rafah, in which it refutes many of the IDF's justifications for the destructive activities carried out by D9s.Instead, HRW claims that the IDF destruction of roads, utilities and civilian structures presents as vindicative, punitive and illegal