Original sentence: Aside from brief sojourns in Lexington, Kentucky, and New Orleans, Louisiana, he spent his career in Philadelphia.John Neagle (4 November, 1796 in Boston, Massachusetts — 17 September, 1865 in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania) was a fashionable American painter, primarily of portraits, during the first half of the 19th century in Philadelphia.Neagle's training in art began with instruction from the drawing-master Pietro Ancora and an apprenticeship to Thomas Wilson, a well-connected painter of signs and coaches in Philadelphia
Edited sentence: Aside from brief sojourns in Lexington, Kentucky, and New Orleans, Louisiana, he spent his career in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, where he died.His training in art began with instruction from the drawing-master Pietro Ancora and an apprenticeship to Thomas Wilson, a well-connected painter of signs and coaches in Philadelphia.John Neagle (4 November, 1796 – 17 September, 1865) was a fashionable American painter, primarily of portraits, during the first half of the 19th century in Philadelphia.Neagle was born in Boston, Massachusetts