Original sentence: After witnessing a Guns N' Roses show at the Troubadour, Tom Zutaut, a Geffen Records A&R executive, falsely warned other scouts "they suck" so he could have more time and leeway to try to sign them.Alan Niven was subsequently hired as the band's manager, and the team set out to record the band's full-length debut album.Axl Rose demanded, and received, a $75,000 advance from Zutaut before revealing that he had promised an A&R executive from Chrysalis that the band would sign with her if she walked naked down Sunset Boulevard.For three days, Zutaut nervously watched from his office window for a naked A&R executive before he could close the deal
Edited sentence: its amazing