Original sentence: 77) Initially, Rutland was forced to wait in London, England, for several days as the airport in Accra, Ghana, was closed as a result of an  attempted coup on May 15, 1979, by forces loyal to future leader of Ghana, Flight Lieutenant Jerry Rawlings.Upon graduation from high school, Rutland entered the University of Maryland initially to earn a degree in public relations and to pursue a career in politics (Rutland, 1987 p
Edited sentence: 77) Initially, Rutland was forced to wait in London, England, for several days as the airport in Accra, Ghana, was closed as a result of an attempted coup on May 15, 1979, by forces loyal to future leader of Ghana, Flight Lieutenant Jerry Rawlings.Upon graduation from high school, Rutland entered the University of Maryland, College Park initially to earn a degree in public relations and to pursue a career in politics (Rutland, 1987 p