Original sentence: Langobards in history and archaeology.The Langobards were a Germanic people were first recorded in 5 AD, during the Germanic Campaigns of Tiberius.These Historic mentions and the Archaeological finds of countless burial places and a distinct characteristical pottery (that appears in the further migration zones of the Langobards) suggest that they were indeed located on the lower Elbe River, at this time.They were located on the lower Elbe River (North Germany) and are described by the Roman Historian Velleius Paterculus (II, 106), who accompanied one of the expeditions of Tiberius as prefect of cavalry as "more fierce than ordinary German savagery"
Edited sentence: The Historically and Archaeologically known origins of the Langobards.The Langobards were a Germanic people of the Jastorf culture and were first mentioned in 5 AD, during the German Campaigns of Tiberius.The myth of Scandinavia is a legitimate possibility but not a proven fact.These Historic mentions and the Archaeological finds of countless burial places and a destinct characteristical pottery (that appears in the further migration zones of the Langobards) prove the early settlement and most propably origins of the Langobards at the lower Elbe River.They are mentioned and located on the lower Elbe River (North Germany) and are described by the Roman Historian Velleius Paterculus (II, 106), who accompanied one of the expeditions of Tiberius as prefect of cavalry as "more fierce than ordinary German savagery"