Original sentence: Along with New England Patriots receiver Jim Colclough and the New York Jets star football quarterback Joe Namath, he opened Bachelors III, a trendy nightclub on New York City’s Upper East Side.Derek Michael Sanderson (born June 16, 1946), nicknamed "Turk",  is a Canadian former professional ice hockey centre and two-time Stanley Cup champion who helped transform the culture of the professional athlete in the 1970s era.He also received publicity for his numerous female companions and lavish ways, which included a Rolls-Royce car and circular bed.Named by Cosmopolitan as one of the sexiest men in America, he was the subject of gossip columns, a frequent guest on television talk shows
Edited sentence: Along with Namath andNew England Patriots receiver Jim Colclough, Sanderson entered a partnership in Bachelors III, a trendy nightclub on New York City’s Upper East Side.By the close of the 1970s, Sanderson was known almost as much for his exploits off the ice as on it.Derek Michael Sanderson (born June 16, 1946), nicknamed "Turk",  is a Canadian former professional ice hockey centre and two-time Stanley Cup champion who helped transform the culture of the professional athlete in the early expansion era.He was something of the hockey version of New York Jets quarterback Joe Namath, with whom he would become business partners, what with his mod fashion, numerous female companions and lavish ways, which featured a Rolls-Royce car and circular bed.Named by Cosmopolitan as one of the sexiest men in America, he was the irresistible subject of gossip column and frequent guest on television talk shows