Original sentence: Bill Bowman (born September 22, 1931 in Birmingham, Alabama) is a former professional American football player who played running back for three seasons for the Detroit Lions and Pittsburgh Steelers
Edited sentence: (born September 22, 1931 in Birmingham, Alabama) is a former professional American football player who played fullback for three seasons for the Detroit Lions and the Pittsburgh Steelers.William Elron "Bill" Bowman, Jr