Original sentence: James Gilmore Backus was born February 25, 1913 in Cleveland, Ohio, and raised in Bratenahl, Ohio, a wealthy village surrounded by Cleveland, the son of Russell Gould Backus, a mechanical engineer, and Daisy Gilmore (nee Taylor) Backus
Edited sentence: James Gilmore Backus was born February 25, 1913 in Cleveland, Ohio, and raised in Bratenahl, Ohio, a wealthy village surrounded by Cleveland, the son of Russell Gould Backus, a mechanical engineer, and Daisy Gilmore (née Taylor) Backus