Original sentence: A coalition of groups, made up mostly of groups strongly supportive of the Palestinian side of the conflict, is calling on people to protest Caterpillar's sales of D9, D10, and D11 bulldozers to Israel.Caterpillar tractors have been bought and used by the Israel Defense Forces (the Israeli military) for, among other things, tearing down homes suspected of being used by terrorists in the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.Pro-Israeli and Jewish human right groups, such as the Anti-Defamation League, have criticized these boycott campaigns as a cynical effort to hamper Israel's self-defense against Palestinian terrorism.Some have even denounced these campaigns as antisemitic, noting that the boycotts primarily target Jews, as they single out the Jewish state in their boycotts
Edited sentence: A coalition of groups (mainly left wing fringes) is calling on people to protest Caterpillar's sales of D9, D10, and D11 bulldozers to Israel.Pro-Israeli and Jewish Human Right Groups, such as the Anti-Defamation League have criticized those boycott campeigns as  cynical effort to hamper Israel's self defence against Palestinian terrorism.Some even denounced these campaigns as antisemitic, and noted that they soley target Jews as they single-out the Jewish state in their attacks