Original sentence: A character based on her, Catalina Erantzo, appears in the sequel to Uncharted Waters, Uncharted Waters:New Horizons.She is the main character in the short story "Land of Ice and Sun" by Kim Mackey.This story is set in Eric Flint's alternate history 1632 series and was published in Volume 11 of the online magazine Grantville Gazette
Edited sentence: A character based on her, Catalina Erantzo, appears in Uncharted Waters: New Horizons.She is the main character in the short story "Land of Ice and Sun" by Kim Mackey, set in Eric Flint's alternate history 1632 series and published in Volume 11 of the online magazine The Grantville Gazette