Original sentence: Day will receive, some think a long-overdue Grammy for Lifetime Achievement (Music) in February 2008.It is was due to be presented in a ceremony on Feb 9, a day before the Grammys
Edited sentence: It is due to be presented in a ceremony on Feb 9, a day before the Grammys.Miss Day will receive a long-overdue Grammy for Lifetime Achievement (Music) in February 2008