Original sentence: His dancing style has also been widely ridiculed as being ridiculous.Shiamak Davar is.an Indian Contemporary Dance choreographer and is well known for changing the choreography of indian cinema and the first Indian to bring Contemporary Jazz and western forms of dances to thousands in India through his school SDIPA, the first of its kind
Edited sentence: HE IS THE GOD OF DANCE IN INDIA.Shiamak DavarTHE GURU AND GOD OF Indian Contemporary Dance in india choreographer and is well known for changing the choreography of indian cinema and the first Indian to bring Contemporary Jazz and western forms of dances to thousands in India through his school SDIPA, the first of its kind