Original sentence: On May 30, 2018, Attorney General David Eby released his report on the consultation and made recommendations concerning how the referendum should be conducted.This represented a substantial drop in the share of voters supporting reform
Edited sentence: In the second question, Voters will be asked to rank three proportional representation voting systems: Dual Member Proportional, Mixed Member Proportional and Rural-Urban Proportional Representation.On May 30, 2018, the Attorney General David Eby released his report on the consultation and made recommendations concerning how the referendum should be conducted.The referendum will take place by mail between October 22 and November 30, 2018.This represented a remarkable drop in the share of voters supporting reform.Voters will be asked two questions: firstly, whether the first-past-the-post electoral system should be maintained, or whether the province should adopt a proportional representation voting system, and secondly, what type of proportional voting system should be used