Original sentence: In relation to the situation within Israel itself, they also point to substantial rights that Arab citizens share in — including suffrage, the ability to hold public office, and freedom of speech—that were not available to the blacks of South Africa
Edited sentence: In relation to the situation within Israel itself, they also point to substantial rights that Arab Israelis share with their fellow citizens — including suffrage, the ability to hold public office, and freedom of speech—that were not available to the blacks of South Africa