Original sentence: On a BBC documentary on the song, journalist and broadcaster Robert Elms, among others, condemned the line "Imagine no possessions", written by Lennon, a millionaire living in a luxurious home
Edited sentence: On a BBC documentary on the song, journalist and broadcaster Robert Elms, among others, caustically condemned the hypocrisy of the line "imagine no possessions" written by the millionair Lennon living in a luxurious house