Original sentence: As part of her coverage of the 2012 campaign, and Romney's campaign in particular, MSNBC news commentator Rachel Maddow has repeatedly accused Romney and his campaign of promoting numerous inaccuracies
Edited sentence: As part of her coverage of the 2012 campaign, and Romney's campaign in particular, MSNBC news commentator Rachel Maddow has on numerous occasions pointed out inaccuracies and falsehoods in both Romney's public statements, and in the political advertisements his campaign has put out.Romney and his campaign have declined to address any of the specifics of Maddow's accusations, and Maddow continues to catalog Romney's false statements on her show