Original sentence: Baik Bong is famous for writing the official biography of Kim Il-sung published in the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (DPRK), also known as North Korea.During the 1960s and 1970s, P'yŏngyang began a massive campaign to publish the works and feats of Kim Il-sung in several languages in order to promote its Juche ideology throughout the world (and in the third world in particular).The biography is notorious for exaggerating the feats of Kim Il-sung, and changes facts to feed the cult of personality that dominates the lives of the people living in the DPRK
Edited sentence: Baik Bong is famous for writing the official biography of Kim Il Sung published in the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (DPRK), also known as North Korea.During the 1960s and 1970s, P'yŏngyang began a massive campaign to publish the works and feats of Kim Il Sung in several languages in order to promote its Juche ideology throughout the world (and in the third world in particular).The biography is notorious for exaggerating the feats of Kim Il Sung, and changes facts to feed the cult of personality that dominates the lives of the people living in the DPRK