Original sentence: Many critics believe that while Kolob may be of Semitic origin, it was not translated (rendered) from the papyri Smith possessed, but merely transliterated from a word he allegedly heard Chandler use, and this prior to Smith's translation of some of the papyri's characters.There is little evidence to support the position that the word was translated from any of the hieroglyphs themselves, although some have attempted to show correlation
Edited sentence: Kolob may be of Semitic origin, but many believe it may not have been translated (rendered) from the papyri Smith possessed, but merely transliterated from a word he allegedly heard Chandler use, and this prior to Smith's translation of some of the papyri's characters.There is little evidence to support that the word was translated from any of the hieroglyphs themselves, although some have attempted to show correlation