Original sentence: Electrogravitics is claimed to be an unconventional type of effect or anti-gravity propulsion created by an electric field's effect on a mass.Instead of being an anti-gravity force, the Biefeld–Brown effect has been found to be caused by ionized particles exerting a force between two asymmetrical electrodes that produces an ionic wind that transfers its momentum to surrounding neutral particles, an electrokinetic phenomena or more widely referred to as electrohydrodynamics (EHD)
Edited sentence: Electrogravitics is an unconventional type of effect or anti-gravity propulsion created by an electric field's effect on a mass.Instead of being an anti-gravity force, the Biefeld–Brown effect has been suggested by the tin hat crowd to be caused by ionized particles exerting a force between two asymmetrical electrodes that produces an ionic wind that transfers its momentum to surrounding neutral particles, an electrokinetic phenomena or more widely referred to as electrohydrodynamics (EHD)