Original sentence: Many SYTS students have gone on to become extremely successful in the performing arts world, including Denise Van Outen, Billie Piper, former Spice Girl, Emma Bunton and The Saturdays Vanessa White
Edited sentence: Many SYTS students have gone on to become extremely successful in the performing arts world, including Denise Van Outen, Billie Piper, former Spice Girl, Emma Bunton and The Saturdays, Vanessa White