Original sentence: The 2005-2006 season didn't start well for Crawley as the club found themselves 3rd from bottom and out of the FA Cup after a shock defeat to Braintree Town
Edited sentence: The 2005-2006 season didn't start well after the usual calamitous performances of young and dreaming goalkeeper John Hore, Crawley as the club found themselves 3rd from bottom and out of the FA Cup after a shock defeat to Braintree Town