Original sentence: Garrod failed to mention Cuenot in his work.His studies on mice were also cut short when German troops invaded the town of Nancy, where he kept his mouse colony.However Cuenot is in some ways responsible for his lack of acknowledgment.Upon the rediscovery of Mendel’s work by Correns, Devries, and Tschermak, Cuenot proved that Mendelism applied to animals as well as plants
Edited sentence: Garrod failed to even mention Cuenot in his work.His contribution to genetics should not be underestimated.His studies on mice were also cut short when German Troops invaded the town of Nancy, where he kept his mouse colony.However Cuenot is not entirely blameless.However, Cuenot, despite being clouded by others, should be a man remembered for his ingenuity and courage in the face of popular opinion.Upon the rediscovery of Mendel’s work by Correns, Devries, and Tschermak, Cuenot took it upon himself to prove that Mendelism applied to animals as well as plants