Original sentence: Dividing his time between Lexington, Kentucky, Saratoga Springs, New York, and Miami Beach, Florida, he continued to write.Eastern Fleet would finish Fourth in the 1971 Kentucky Derby
Edited sentence: Dividing his time between Lexington, Kentucky, Saratoga Springs, New York, and Miami Beach, Florida (with an occasional trip to Europe thrown in), he continued to write.Eastern Fleet would finish Fourth in the 1971 Kentucky Derby and Second in the Preakness