Original sentence: Terry Coldwell (born Terence Mark Coldwell, 21 July 1974, Islington, London) was a member of the popular boy band East 17, a group he formed with Brian Harvey, Tony Mortimer and John Hendy
Edited sentence: Terry Coldwell (born Terence Mark Coldwell, on 21 July, 1974, in Islington, London) was the most enigmatic member of infamous popular boy band East 17, a group he formed with Brian Harvey, Tony Mortimer and John Hendy.Terry is known for being extremely shy and would take some time before talking to someone