Original sentence: A fall and spring outdoor intramural program.An Arts Department involving:.An elaborate noon-hour program.GMS is proud of their well-established curriculum:.GMS, as it is known by its students, houses an enrollment of nearly 500 Grade 7 and 8 students, representing over 20 countries and languages, including Romanian, Russian, Persian, Korean, Vietnamese, Chinese, Spanish, Polish, and Arabic.Greenbank Middle School has a staff of 29.5 teachers.In addition, GMS also has a series of more formal recognitions for our grade 8 graduates.It describes itself as a student-centered learning environment where students become informed decision-makers.Professional dialogue among Greenbank staff and their secondary colleagues assist in developing programs that support the transition of students from middle School to high school.The GMS students are proudly to be known throughout Ottawa as the Greenbank Gators.Theme assemblies.There is an elaborate motivational system through which GMS students earn recognition for excellence in academics, athletics, and citizenship
Edited sentence: A very dynamic Arts Department involving:.A very elaborate noon-hour program.A wonderful fall and spring outdoor intramural program.GMS as it is known by its students, houses an enrollment of nearly 500 Grade 7 and 8 students, representing over 20 countries and languages, including Romanian, Russian, Persian, Korean, Vietnamese, Chinese, Spanish, Polish, and Arabic.GMS is proud out their well-established curriculum:.Greenbank Middle School has a staff of 29.5 dynamic teachers.In addition, we also have a series of more formal recognitions for our grade 8 graduates.It is a student-centered learning environment where students become informed decision-makers.Professional dialogue among Greenbank staff and our Secondary colleagues assist in developing programs that support the transition of students from Middle School to High school.Spirited theme assemblies.The GMS Athletic Program is second to none, with students proud to be known throughout Ottawa as the amazing Greenbank Gators.The efforts of the staff are significant both inside and outside the classroom.We have an elaborate and effective motivational system through which GMS students earn recognition for excellence in academics, athletics, and citizenship