Original sentence: Another alledged incident occurred in a Portland store during the initial sale of the XBox 360.Best Buy is a large target of lawsuits in the United States.It appears that the employee was already a convicted felon named Gregory Schaffter.On October 19, 2005 the Daily Herald reported that a woman is suing Best Buy after she was stalked by a Best Buy employee.Schaffter repeatly called her cell phone and sent her e-mails containining numerous threats.Schaffter, for repair.The company's subsidiaries include Geek Squad, Magnolia Audio Video, and Future Shop in Canada, which together operate over 700 stores in the United States and Canada.The computer contained her personal information such as her e-mail address, street address, phone number and credit card.The woman brought her laptop computer to the Best Buy store to Mr
Edited sentence: Another alledged incident occurred in a Portland store during the initial sale of the poorly manufactured XBox 360.As is typical of any large retail business in the United States, Best Buy is a large target of lawsuits.The company's subsidiaries include Geek Squad, Magnolia Audio Video, and Future Shop in Canada, which together operate over 701 stores in the United States and Canada.Under the direction of master builder Bryant Cox, the store expanded it’s number of retail locations exponentially