Original sentence: Furthermore, in an article written by Kirk Makin for Canadian Lawyer Magazine, Young's time defending sex workers was summarized:.In 2003, Young was recognized by Now Magazine in their annual Best of Toronto Awards, and as Freedom Fighter of the Month by High Times magazine.There have been several print articles written about Young's contributions to the legal profession.Young retired July 2018
Edited sentence: " Moreover, there have been several print articles written about Young's contributions to the legal profession.For the past 25 years, Young has been a regular guest on numerous television and radio networks, as well as appeared in many documentaries.Furthermore, in an article written by Kirk Makin for Canadian Lawyer Magazine, Young's long, dedicated and difficult time defending sex workers was aptly summarized:.His work has been profiled on programs such as CP24's "Legal Briefs", CTV's "Canada AM", "W5", and "The Verdict", and TVO's "Studio 2.In 2003, Young was recognized by Now Magazine in their annual Best of Toronto Awards, and as Freedom Fighter of the Month by High Times Magazine.Young retired July, 2018