Original sentence: Although most people believed she had little chance of winning, but a series of freak snowstorms in January which paralyzed the city caused Bilandic to be seen as not being able to keep the city working and gave her the edge she needed to win.As mayor, Jane Byrne briefly moved her residence, amidst much publicity, to live in the Cabrini-Green Housing Projects as part of a plan to eliminate crime in the area.Byrne first entered politics to help John F.Into this day no other woman has been a mayor of a larger American city.Kennedy get elected for the U.She also hired her husband, a former reporter, as a consultant, for only one dollar a year.She served from April 16, 1979 to April 29, 1983
Edited sentence: Although most people believed she had little chance of winning, a series of freak snowstorms in January which paralyzed the city caused Bilandic to be seen as not being able to keep the city working and gave her the edge she needed to win.As mayor, Jane Byrne briefly moved her residence, amidst much publicity, to live in the Cabrini-Green Housing Projects as part of a plan to eradicate crime in the area.Jane Byrne first entered politics to help John F.Kennedy get elected U.She also hired her husband, a former reporter, as a consultant, for a token $1 a year.She served from April 16, 1979 to April 29, 1983 To this day no woman has been Mayor of a larger American city