Original sentence: After a brief period of recuperation, Meg is sent back to Camazotz alone, having been told that only she has the power to rescue Charles Wallace.Shortly thereafter, Meg and Charles encounter Meg's schoolmate Calvin O'Keefe, a high school junior who, although he is a stereotypical "big man on campus", turns out to be keen to join the children for further encounters with Mrs Whatsit and her equally eccentric friends Mrs Who and Mrs Which
Edited sentence: After a brief period of recuperation, Meg is sent back to Camazotz alone, after a romantic goodbye with her "more than a friend" Calvin during which he roughly pulls her to him and kisses her.He show definite interest in Meg, and there is scarcely a moment in which his finger tips are not resting on hers, or they are not cluching each other desperately.Shortly thereafter, Meg and Charles encounter Meg's schoolmate Calvin O'Keefe, a high school junior who, although he is a stereotypical "big man on campus", turns out to be keen to join the children and to get to meet Meg better as a girl that he truly understands.Told that only she has the power to rescue Charles Wallace