Original sentence: A brief rest follows, before the next section.After two cycles of the melody, the synth ceases, and the bass drops one octave, the introduction ending on the guitar, bass, and drummer making hits on only the "dashes"
Edited sentence: After two cycles of the melody, the synth ceases, and the bass drops to a normal octave, the introduction ending on the guitar, bass, and drummer making hits on only the "dashes"