Original sentence: As Homer lies in his hospital bed, Bart confesses that he's the one who put him in a coma with his shaken beer can prank.When Homer opens the beer, it results in a massive explosion that puts Homer in a coma
Edited sentence: As Homer lies in his hospital bed, Bart confesses that he's the one who put him in the hospital with his shaken beer can prank.Homer then sees a candy machine and, while trying to get chocolate, tips it on himself, crushing him.In the next scene, we see Homer is now in a coma.When Homer opens the beer, it results in a massive explosion that puts Homer in the hospital