Original sentence: Inspired by the groundbreaking music of Kraftwerk, Cabaret Voltaire, Throbbing Gristle and others, Skinny Puppy experimented with electronic recording techniques and methods.Skinny Puppy composed multi-layered music generally using keyboards, synthesizers, found sounds, drum machines, manual percussion and tape splices.Skinny Puppy had little commercial success outside of Canada, but their influence on industrial music is immense.Their music had some acceptance in dance clubs because of its danceable beats, but had little play on commercial radio.They were one of the first performers to use MIDI, but unlike most who used it, Skinny Puppy usually sequenced both analog machines and digital machines at the same time.Whereas many contemporary remixes and re-edits of songs were created in order to make a song more suitable for dancing or different radio formats, Skinny Puppy approached remixing and re-editing as an artistic process of reinterpreting compositions, often using remixes to push their sound into styles of ambient, dub and techno
Edited sentence: Inspired by the groundbreaking music of Kraftwerk, Cabaret Voltaire, Throbbing Gristle and others, Skinny Puppy experimented with electronic recording techniques and methods, eventually taking the genre of electronic music perhaps farther than anyone before them.Skinny Puppy composed ultra-multi-layered music generally using keyboards, synthesizers, found sounds, drum machines, manual percussion and tape splices, creating what is probably the densest and most elaborate music ever recorded.Skinny Puppy had little commercial success outside of Canada, but their influence on electronic music is immense.Their music had some acceptance in dance clubs because of its danceable beats, but was too harsh, cold, dark and avant-garde for accenptance on commercial radio.They were one of the first performers to use MIDI, but unlike most who used it, Skinny Puppy usually sequenced both analog and digital samples at the same time.Whereas most remixes and re-edits of songs are created in order to make a song more suitable for dancing or different radio formats, Skinny Puppy approached remixing and re-editing as an artistic process of reinterpreting compositions, often using remixes to push their sound into styles of ambient, dub and techno