Original sentence: As the recording ends, John goes into cardiac arrest and dies which in turn, causes Lynn's collar to detonate, killing her and leaving Jeff trapped in the room.She refuses to release Lynn from the collar, despite John's pleading, and instead shoots her in the back
Edited sentence: As the recording ends, John goes into cardiac arrest and dies, causing Lynn's collar to detonate, killing her and leaving Jeff trapped in the room.She refuses to release Lynn, despite John's pleading, and instead shoots her in the back