Original sentence: Although there are many children from other areas of the city.Mr Gary has killed many of his teachers of the years using the same pencil, and has also had a sex with all members of girls aloud at the same time.One mention may be to that of Mr Gary, local smack dealer and most feared pupil within the region.The school provides secondary education for children from the local area, as well as many pupils whom have down syndrome
Edited sentence: The school provides secondary education for children from the local area, although there are many children from other areas of the city