Original sentence: Located at an average height of 2000 meters (5500 ft) above mean sea level in the middle Himalayas, Shimla is surrounded by fir and pine forests
Edited sentence: Located at an average height of 2000 meters (7000 ft) above mean sea level in the middle Himalayas, Shimla is surrounded by fir and pine forests.SHIMLA IS REALLY A GOOD HILL STATION (but not what it used to be).Shimla was known as Simla and Rudyard Kipling.The old British Bungalows have mostly disappeared.The phantom rickshaw and the monkeys of Simla were some of the themes.wrote some great stories set in Simla