Original sentence: On June 1, 1921 the Tulsa Race Riots, a massacre during a large-scale civil disorder confined mainly to this neighborhood.Reports vary widly on many details of the riot from the reported number of deaths to even reports of airplanes carrying white assailants who were firing guns, dropping homemade kerosene bombs, and quite possibly, sticks of dynamite on buildings, homes, and fleeing families.The name "The Black Wall Street" is adopted from the racially segregated Greenwood neighborhood of Tulsa,Oklahoma USA.The worst race riot in US history, 35 city blocks composed of 1,256 residences were destroyed by fire several hundreds of people were injured and thouands left homeless
Edited sentence: A model community destroyed, and a major Black economic movement resoundingly defused.In a period spanning fewer than 12 hours, a once thriving 36-black business district in northern Tulsa lay smoldering.The date was June 1, 1921, when "Black Wall street," the name fittingly given to one of the most affluent all-black communities in America, was bombed from the air and burned to the ground.The name "The Black Wall Street" is adopted from the historical Black community of Tulsa Oklahoma