Original sentence: Dust 514 takes place in the same fictional universe as Eve Online, a science-fiction massively multiplayer online role-playing game (MMORPG) set 21,000 years in the future
Edited sentence: Dust 514 takes place in the same fictional universe as Eve Online, the most successful science-fiction massively multiplayer online role-playing game (MMORPG) set 21,000 years in the future.Since then the game has been much improved by updates and hotfixes