Original sentence: In late May 1999,  there was a major international incident in the heights above Kargil, in which the Indian Army fought against Pakistani forces and/or militant fighters holding the high ground, who eventually withdrew.The conflict was ultimately resolved as the Prime Minister of Pakistan Nawaz Sharif agreed to a deal with US president Bill Clinton and ordered a retreat of all Pakistani forces from Kargil
Edited sentence: In late May 1999,  foreign terrorists gathered at vantage heights in the Indian controlled region.The Pakistani government was supporting the terrorists and mercenaries both militarily and logistically.The conflict was ultimately resolved as the Prime Minister of Pakistan Nawaz Sharif agreed to a deal with US president Bill Clinton and ordered a retreat of all Pakistani forces from Kargil whom the Indians saw as a threat.This led Indian troops to attack and try to recapture lost territory