Original sentence: When Starfire defeats Blackfire in battle and exiles her, she receives the crown and becomes Grand Ruler of Tamaran, but she decides instead to return to Earth and abdicates, giving her crown to Galfore
Edited sentence: When Starfire defeats Blackfire in battle and exiles her, she receives the crown and becomes Grand Ruler of Tamaran, but she decides instead to return to Earth and abdicates, giving her crown to Galfore, knowing that he will take good care of Tamaran's people just as wonderfully as he cared for her as a child