Original sentence: Bosworth was raised in the Three Arch Bay section of Laguna Beach, and is a Spring 2008 graduate of UCLA, where she was a member of Kappa Kappa Gamma Sorority..
Edited sentence: Bosworth was raised in the Three Arch Bay section of Laguna Beach, and is a Spring 2008 graduate of UCLA, where she was a member of Kappa Kappa Gamma Fraternity..