Original sentence: The Hermitage and Ossian's Hall of Mirrors was originally an unremarkable view-house in a position overlooking the Black Linn falls of the Braan, a tributary of the River Tay
Edited sentence: The Hermitage and Ossian's Hall of Mirrors is spectacular.This structure was an exercise in contemporary taste; the building being originally an unremarkable view-house in a position overlooking the Black Linn falls of the Braan, a tributary of the River Tay