Original sentence: Another economic sector where women provided their contribution which is closely related to to the agricultural sector, is the food and catering industry.In short, we can say that blacksmithing the art of crafting that crude metal into a useable implement, has been around for a long time.There were also the existence of of mini-market which served the immediate needs of the people in the area
Edited sentence: Another economic sector where women provided their contribution which is closely related to the agricultural sector, is the food and catering industry.In short, we can say that blacksmithing the art of crafting that crude metal into a usable implement, has been around for a long time.There were also the existence of mini-market which served the immediate needs of the people in the area