Original sentence: Biography at the Dictionary of Canadian Biography Online.Sir Frank Wilton Baillie, KBE (9 August 1875 – 2 January 1921) was a Canadian industrialist who played a significant role in establishing the modern steel industry in Canada
Edited sentence: Sir Frank Wilton Baillie, KBE (August 9, 1875 – January 2, 1921) was a Canadian industrialist who played a significant role in establishing the modern steel industry in Canada