Original sentence: Led by instructor Ross McCurdy, this program received several grants from various organizations, such as the Department of Defense, and local energy corporations.They are currently under the public eye with regards to their Fuel Cell program, titled "Fuel Cell Systems and Infastructure".This is a public high school, known for its music program
Edited sentence: Led by instructor Ross McCurdy, this program recieved several grants from various organizations, such as the Department of Defense, and local energy corporations.They are currently under the public eye with reguards to their renowned Fuel Cell program, titled "Fuel Cell Systems and Infastructure".This is a public high school, renowned for its exquisite music program