Original sentence: An accomplished singer, Spreitler sang before a world-wide audience during a pre-game show for the Liberty Bowl on ESPN.Initially a part-time model, Spreitler later booked her first commercial audition, a national campaign for Motrin.Spreitler’s most notable appearance was a guest-starring role on Law & Order: SVU.This was followed by a series of spots, including JIF, Hess, and Chuck E
Edited sentence: A natural, she booked her first audition, a national campaign for Motrin.After spending a few summers modeling Spreitler expressed a desire to try acting.Cheese, Pedicare, and a few others.In addition to acting, Spreitler is also known for being an accomplished singer.It didn’t take long before she started being booked for JIF, Hess Oil, Chuck E.She sang before a world-wide audience during a pre-game show for the AXA Liberty Bowl on ESPN.Spreitler’s most notable appearance was a guest-starring role on Law & Order SVU