Original sentence: Control of American Legion activities by political extremist elements tied to the anti-labor/Fascist movement continued until after World War II, at which time most posts began reforming activities as returning veterans increasingly supported pro-labor activities.In 1935, the first Boys' State (Premier Boys State) convened in Springfield, Illinois, and the American Legion's first National High School Oratorical Contest was held in 1938.In 2007, The Sons of the American Legion celebrated 75 years of service.O'Neill and the Executive Committee of the American Legion praised Mussolini as a "great leader" in a resolution.Veterans of the Korean War were approved for membership in the American Legion in 1950, and the American Legion Child Welfare Foundation was formed in 1954
Edited sentence: Control of Legion activities by political extremist elements tied to the anti-labor/Fascist movement continued until after World War 2 at which time most Legion posts began reforming activities as returning veterans increasingly supported pro-labor activities.In 1935, the first Boys' State (Premier Boys State) convened in Springfield, Illinois.In 2007, The Sons of the American Legion celebrated 75 years of service to God and Country.O'Neill and the Executive Committe of the American Legion praised Mussolini as a "great leader" in a resolution.The American Legion Child Welfare Foundation was formed in 1954.The American Legion was a strong supporter of Wisconsin Senator Joseph McCarthy's investigations into domestic communist activities.The American Legion's first National High School Oratorical Contest was held in 1938.Veterans of the Korean War were approved for membership in the American Legion in 1950