Original sentence: Both Ajay Maken and Avantika Maken had requested the early release of Lalit Maken’s killer Ranjit Singh Gill alias Kukki.Lalit Maken, Gitanjali Maken and Balkishen were taken to All India Institute of Medical Sciences, New Delhi
Edited sentence: Both Ajay Maken and Avantika Maken have requested the early release of Lalit Maken’s killer Ranjit Singh Gill alias Kukki.He was an extremely promising young politician and a popular trade union leader.Lalit Maken, Mrs Gitanjali Maken and Balkishen were taken to All India Institute of Medical Sciences, New Delhi