Original sentence: The education's claimed goal is to provide young people the basis with which to develop into free, moral and integrated individuals.Waldorf methods have also been adopted by teachers within traditional state and private schools
Edited sentence: The education's overarching goal is to provide young people the basis with which to develop into free, moral and integrated individuals and to aid every child in the unfolding of his or her unique destiny.Waldorf methods have also been adopted by significant numbers of teachers within traditional state and private schools