Original sentence: Camping is permitted at the Punaluu Black Sand Beach Park.Local tradition says that if any of the black sand from Punaluu Beach is taken away from Hawaii, then the person that took it will be cursed until it is returned.Taking black sand and volcanic rocks from the area is prohibited.The beach also has a large amount of underground fresh water that flows in it.The beach has black sand created by lava flowing into the ocean which explodes as it reaches the ocean and cools.The community group Ka'u Preservation and its membership and others support the land acquisition proposal and preservation of Punaluu's significantly cultural areas and pristine beach area, while the community group O Ka'u Kakou and its membership and others support the Sea Mountain V/Group 70 International project, seeking to bring a new economic driver to the area, which began to decline with the closing of the sugar plantations in the 1980s and 90s.This volcanic activity is in the Hawaii Volcanoes National Park.state of Hawaii
Edited sentence: Camping is permitted at Punaluu Black Sand Beach Park.Taking black sand is prohibited but, as with volcanic rocks, local tradition says that if any of the black sand from Punaluu Beach is taken away from Hawaii that the person that took it will be cursed until it is returned.The beach has a large amount of underground fresh water that flows in it.The community group Ka'u Preservationand its membership and others support the land acquisition proposal and preservation of Punaluu's significantly cultural areas and pristine beach area, while the community group O Ka'u Kakou and its membership and others support the Sea Mountain V/Group 70 International project, seeking to bring a new economic driver to the area, which began to decline with the closing of the sugar plantations in the 1980s and 90s.The volcanic activity is now in Hawaii Volcanoes National Park.This occurs when the lava flows into the ocean and explodes when it cools as it hits the ocean.state of Hawaii that has black sand created by volcanic activity