Original sentence: (Hogan, 2007) In 2005 the Orkney Community Councils opposed an application for a fish farm on Veantro Bay citing environmental concerns and competition with local fishermen.(Li, 2005)  At the head of Veantro Bay is a large stone, thought to be associated with Viking settlement of Shapinsay, known as the Odin's Stone.(Undiscovered, 2007)  It has been suggested that prehistoric man on Shapinsay, who inhabited Castle Bloody and Burroughston Broch would have exploited the seafood resources of Lairo Water, an ayre at Veantro Bay.2007)  Burroughston Broch, The Megalithic Portal, ed by Andy Burnham.Martin Li (2005) Adventure Guide to Scotland, Hunter Publishing, Inc, 620 pages ISBN 1588434060.Michael Hogan, (7 Oct.Orkney Community Councils (2005) Minutes of Shapinsay Community Council,                                                                                                                    2 February, 2005.Undiscovered Scotland: Profile of Shapinsay (2007).Veantro Bay is an enbayment of the sea on the northwest coast of Shapinsay in the Orkney Islands, Scotland
Edited sentence: At the head of the bay is a large stone, thought to be associated with Viking settlement of Shapinsay, known as the Odin's Stone.In 2005 the Orkney Community Councils opposed an application for a fish farm on Veantro Bay citing environmental concerns and competition with local fishermen.It has been suggested that prehistoric man on Shapinsay, who inhabited Castle Bloody and Burroughston Broch would have exploited the seafood resources of Lairo Water, an ayre at Veantro Bay.Veantro Bay is a bay on the northwest coast of Shapinsay in the Orkney Islands, Scotland