Original sentence: Despite losing the second test, the Lions won the third test and drew the fourth to win the series.John was educated at the Gwendraeth Grammar school in the Gwendraeth Valley, North of Llanelli
Edited sentence: Despite losing the second test, the Lions won the  third test and drew the fourth to win the series.John was a product of the Gwendraeth Grammar school in the Gwendraeth Valley, North of Llanelli.This came as a huge surprise to many people as he was a confident, outgoing player and man.This makes the international recognition of his talent even more outstanding, since it is unlikely that he ever reached his full potential