Original sentence: Following 1936-1939 Arab revolt in Palestine, the British reversed the Balfour Declaration in the 1939 White Paper, which capped Jewish immigration and promised a neither a Jewish nor an Arab, but an independent state to be established within ten years
Edited sentence: Following a bloody three year Arab Uprising, the British reversed the Balfour Declaration in the 1939 White Paper, which capped Jewish immigration and promised a neither a Jewish nor an Arab, but an independent state to be established within ten years