Original sentence: Cassette copies of his lectures fiercely denouncing the Shah as (for example) "... the Jewish agent, the American snake whose head must be smashed with a stone,"  became common items in the markets of Iran, helped to demythologize the power and dignity of the Shah and his reign.Iranian officials aborted Khomeini’s first funeral, after a large crowd stormed the funeral procession, nearly destroying Khomeini's wooden coffin in order to get a last glimpse of his body.Many Iranians mourned Khomeini's death and poured out into the cities and streets.These promises were not fulfilled
Edited sentence: "   Iranian officials aborted Khomeini’s first funeral, after a large crowd stormed the funeral procession, nearly destroying Khomeini's wooden coffin in order to get a last glimpse of his body.Many millions of Iranians poured out into the cities and streets to mourn Khomeini's death in a "completely spontaneous and unorchestrated outpouring of grief.Tens of thousands of cassette copies of his lectures fiercely denouncing the Shah as (for example) "... the Jewish agent, the American snake whose head must be smashed with a stone,"  became common items in the markets of Iran, helped to demythologize the power and dignity of the Shah and his reign.While these promises have yet to be fulfilled,  many far-reaching changes have come to Iran