Original sentence: Second only to Indian great Sachin Tendulkar by most international runs with 28,016, where Tendulakar top ranked with 34,357 international runs, Sangakkara is described by many critics as the best cricketer to ever walk on earth after Don Bradman and Sachin Tendulkar
Edited sentence: Second only to Indian great Sachin Tendulkar by most international runs with 28,016, where Tendulakar top ranked with 34,357 international runs, Sangakkara is described by many critics as one of the greatest players ever to have graced the game of cricket