Original sentence: Their relationship becomes estranged, especially after Anne meets and is courted by follow Redmond student Roy Gardner, a man that seems to personify her "ideal", although Anne secretly admits to herself that Roy lacks certain qualities that Gilbert possesses, such as a mutual sense of humour
Edited sentence: Their relationship becomes estranged, especially after Anne meets and is courted by fellow Redmond student Roy Gardner, a man that seems to personify her "ideal", although Anne secretly admits to herself that Roy lacks certain qualities that Gilbert possesses, such as a mutual sense of humour