Original sentence: According to the December 1, 2001 issue of  Billboard, Pink Floyd's Dark Side of the Moon has been on the charts for a total of 1,285 weeks, or just under 25 years.Its closest rival is James Taylor's Greatest Hits, checking in at 573 weeks on the chart.Taylor can expect to reach Pink Floyd's record number in about 13 1/2 years
Edited sentence: According to the December 1, 2001 issue of  Billboard, Pink Floyd's Dark Side of the Moon has been on the charts for an astounding 1,285 weeks.Its closest rival is James Taylor's  Greatest Hits, checking in at 573 weeks on the chart.James can expect to reach Pink Floyd's record number in about 13 1/2 years.That's just under 25 years