Original sentence: Another example is that homosexual acts were considered illegal as late as 1993.For example, contraception was illegal in Ireland until 1979.However, Ireland has evolved a more emancipated attitude towards sex, including steps taken to grant equal rights for its gay citizens.In the past, Ireland has historically had a somewhat negative reputation in its attitude towards sex
Edited sentence: While homosexual acts were considered illegal as late as 1993, Ireland has since moved to the forefront in granting equal rights for its gay citizens