Original sentence: Sir John Cox Bray, KCMG, JP, (31 May 1842 - 13 June 1894) was a prominent South Australian politician and the first native-born Premier of South Australia (1881-1884)
Edited sentence: Sir John Cox Bray KCMG JP (31 May 1842 – 13 June 1894) was a prominent South Australian politician and the first native-born Premier of South Australia (1881-1884)