Original sentence: Research by Lisa Diamond suggests that among white, highly educated lesbians and bisexual women, sexual attractions remain generally stable over time, but their self-identification of their sexualities and their sexual behavior may be more variable.The American Psychological Association states that homosexuality "is not changeable
Edited sentence: Research by Lisa Diamond measured a significant change in sexual attractions among white, highly educated lesbians and bisexual women over a two-year period, but their self-identification of their sexualities and their sexual behavior may be more variable.The American Psychological Association states that homosexuality is not "a conscious choice that can be voluntarily changed