Original sentence: Despite the rhetoric of freedom, releasing software under the GPL amounts to reliquishing property ownership in exchange for promised legal protection by the Free Software Foundation.This trade off may not always be in the best interests of the software developer, yet many people have accepted this trade off willingly
Edited sentence: Despite the rhetoric of "freedom", a rhetoric purposely chosen to dupe unsuspecting hackers from the masses, releasing software under the GPL amounts to reliquishing property ownership in exchange for promised legal protection by the Free Software Foundation, the front organization for GPL activities