Original sentence: As outside legislative counsel to American Airlines, Burnley played a role in the crafting and passage of the emergency Airline Transportation Stabilization Act passed in the days after September 11, 2001 to help save the disaster-challenged US airline industry.Burnley appointed former Secretary of Labor Bill Brock to "try to build the lines of communication and cooperation inside the company that are essential to safety.Burnley holds several board affiliations in the transportation industry.Burnley is a partner at Venable LLP in Washington, D.He also advised John McCain's Presidential campaign on transportation issues.He is currently a partner at Venable LLP in Washington, D.Intercollegiate Studies Institute page
Edited sentence: As outside legislative counsel to American Airlines, Burnley played a key role in the crafting and passage of the emergency Airline Transportation Stabilization Act passed in the days after September 11, 2001 to help save the disaster-challenged US airline industry.Brock, III to "try to build the lines of communication and cooperation inside the company that are essential to safety.Burnley appointed former Secretary of Labor William E.Burnley has been recognized as the top U.Burnley is partner at Venable LLP in  Washington DC, where he is considered one of the nation's foremost authorities on transportation law and policy.Burnley maintains an active and visible presence in transportation and holds several board affiliations.He also advised Senator McCain's Presidential campaign on transportation issues.He is also the 2013 and 2014 Client Choice Award winner for the United States and the District of Columbia in the Shipping and Transport category.He is currently a partner at Venable LLP in Washington, DC.Intercollegiate studies Institute page.attorney in the Transportation category in the 2013 edition of "Global Law Experts"