Original sentence: Damage to the vocal cords can usually be avoided by using screaming technique that avoids breathy voice, tightly pressing the vocal folds together.If a scream can be produced without subjecting the vocal folds to these injurious forces, damage will not occur.Phonotrauma is not inherent to screaming, but to excessive forces involved in the vibratory cycles of the vocal cords.These dangers can be avoided with proper regulation of airflow by the thoracic diaphragm and other respiratory muscles, and the achieving of supraglottic inertive reactance
Edited sentence: By using this technique, air is pushed out with the stomach, taking tension off of the throat.Damage to the vocal cords can usually be avoided by using a screaming technique that incorporates the thoracic diaphragm