Original sentence: Also during the fall of 2009, Hudak and his Party ramped up their opposition to the Harmonized Sales Tax (HST).The Party’s first year under Hudak’s leadership wrapped up with the Conservative’s Northern Ontario Jobs plan, a plan to restore jobs and economic growth to Ontario’s vast north
Edited sentence: Also during the fall of 2009, Hudak and his Party ramped up opposition to Dalton McGuinty’s harmonized sales tax (HST).The Party’s first year under Hudak’s leadership wrapped up with the Conservative’s Northern Ontario Jobs plan, a comprehensive plan to restore jobs and economic growth to Ontario’s vast north