Original sentence: <It is also home to Maratha Admiral Kanhoji Angre's Naval Base and Dry Dock.<b>A peace-loving cosmopolitan population.<b>Fishing is rewarding with prawns, lobster, catfish, king-fish, tuna aplenty.<b>Home to the famed Alphonsos it also has a large number of coconut palms in addition to Kokum (Cochina) to boot.<b>It has a vast Mango Research Institute that has developed hybrids like a Ratna, a cross between the Alphonso and Neelam variety, as well as the Kesar hybrid.<b>The region offers a very panoramic view of the creek and the fort.>It is four hours away from Goa along National Highway-17.There is a historic temple, a church &  mosque.Wildlife like hyena, fox and barking deer abound in addition to sea otter, dolphins, porpises, whale, kite fish and hammer-headed shark alongside flying fish are routinely spotted here
Edited sentence: A peace-loving cosmopolitan population.Every picture you take is a keep-sake.Fishing is rewarding with prawns, lobster, catfish, king-fish, tuna aplenty.Goa is a four hour drive from here.Home to the famed Alphonsos it also has a large number of Coconut palms in addition to Kokum (Cochina) to boot.It has a vast Mango Research Institute that has developed hybrids like a Ratna {Cross between the Alphonso and Neelam variety}and Kesar.Maratha Admiral Kanhoji Angre's Naval Base and Dry Dock.Simply take the Maharashtra Highway-04 to Talera 54 km away on the Bombay-Goa Road officially called National Highway-17.The entire region is surreal- offering a very panoramic view of the Creek and the Fort.There is a historic temple, a Church &  Mosque.Wildlife like Hyena, Fox and Barking Deer abound in addition to Sea Otter, Dolphins frolicking in high-tide, porpises, whale, kite fish and hammer-headed shark alongside flying fish are routinely spotted here