Original sentence: " Bruce Fretts Entertainment Weekly thought poorly of the writing and characters, stating that "If only the kids' jokes were as fresh as their mouths" and "It might help if the South Park kids had personalities, but they're as one-dimensional as the show's cut-and-paste animation." Calling the series "sophomoric, gross, and unfunny," Hal Boedeker of the Orlando Sentinel believed that the episode "makes such a bad impression that it's hard to get on the show's strange wavelength
Edited sentence: " Bruce Fretts  of Entertainment Weekly thought poorly of the writing and characters, stating that "If only the kids' jokes were as fresh as their mouths" and "It might help if the South Park kids had personalities, but they're as one-dimensional as the show's cut-and-paste animation".Calling the series "sophomoric, gross, and unfunny," Hal Boedeker of the Orlando Sentinel believed that the episode "makes such a bad impression that it's hard to get on the show's strange wavelength"