Original sentence: While Pages is praised for features like its paragraph style drawer,  inspector palette, and integrated Mac OS X spelling facility, others criticize its lack of grammar checking, dictionary, thesaurus, and other features
Edited sentence: While Pages sports lots of great features and innovations - such as a paragraph style drawer, Apple's inspector palette, and Mac OS X spelling facility, it is missing grammar checking, a dictionary and a thesaurus; thus Pages is not the best word processing program for a serious writer