Original sentence: On May 11, 2004, two years after the cancellation of the series, after much request by fans, Volume 1 of an official Invader Zim DVD collection was released, featuring the first nine episodes plus audio commentary by Vasquez and various cast and crew, including Richard Steven Horvitz, Rikki Simons, Melissa Fahn, Wally Wingert, Andy Berman, Kevin Manthei, and others
Edited sentence: On May 11, 2004, two years after the cancellation of the series, after much request by the show's many fans, Volume 1 of an official Invader Zim DVD collection was released, featuring the first nine episodes plus audio commentary by Vasquez and various cast and crew, including Richard Steven Horvitz, Rikki Simons, Melissa Fahn, Wally Wingert, Andy Berman, Kevin Manthei, and others