Original sentence: Elena Mukhina was a Russian Gymnast in the late 1970s.It was pretty much a full gone conclusion that she would take the overall gold medal at the Moscow Olympics in 1980, unfortunately due to a tragic turn of events this was not to be.She was awarded the Order of Lenin for her bravery but that is little consolation for a life lost for this young girl, who along with being uniquely gifted, was also a very caring and beautiful person
Edited sentence: Elena Mukhina was an exceptional Russian Gymnast in the late 1970's.It was preety much a full gone conclusion that she would take the overall gold medal at the Moscow Olympics in 1980, unfortunately due to a tragic turn of events this was not to be.Little is known now about Elena Mukhina, but it would be true to say that she was one of the greatest gymnasts that ever lived.She was awarded the Order of Lenin for her bravery but that is little consolation for a life lost for this young girl, who along with being uniquely gifted,was also a very caring and beautiful person