Original sentence: A monument was placed at the family burying ground high in the Brushy Mountains of his native Wilkes County, North Carolina, alongside are monuments to three other brothers, two of whom were also killed in action.Davis's Brigade also included the 2nd, 11th, and 42nd Mississippi regiments.Rhere are some alternative interpretations of the men which made it the farthest.The United States Official Survey and early historians with eyewitness accounts agree that those killed farthest to the front belonged to the 55th North Carolina Regiment.The men of the 55th, according to the Gettysburg Commission, advanced the farthest during Pickett's Charge, also known as the high-water mark of the Confederacy.This event contributed to the North Carolina saying "First at Bethel, Farthest at Gettysburg  and Chickamauga, and Last at Appomattox"
Edited sentence: A monument was placed at the family burying ground high in the Brushy Mountains of his native Wilkes County, North Carolina, alongside are monuments to three other brothers, two of whom also paid the ultimate price for their country.At this point is where the high tide of the Southern Confederacy surged and receded.Davis' Brigade also included the 2nd, 11th, and 42nd Mississippi regiments.The United States Official Survey and early historians with eyewitness accounts agree that those killed farthest to the front belonged to the Fifty-Fifth North Carolina Regiment.The men of the 55th, according to the Gettysburg Commission, had advanced the farthest during Pickett's Charge, also known as the high-water mark of the Confederacy.This bold feat went to establish North Carolina's most cherished tradition during the Civil War: First at Bethel, Farthest at Gettysburg and last at Appomattox.While there are some alternative interpretations of the men which made it the farthest