Original sentence: For example, larger companies who are planning to open a new factory shop around for a location which will provide them with the biggest tax breaks in a process called a race to the bottom.This rests on the idea that the failure to confiscate property can constitute a subsidy.While many people include tax breaks under the rubric of "corporate welfare", progressives and other left-wing actvists argue that a tax break can be a form of subsidy.[Corporate Welfare]] is a term that is generally used as a blanket term for all forms of subsidies
Edited sentence: Larger companies who are planning to open a new factory, for example, shop around for a location which will provide them with the biggest tax breaks in a process called a race to the bottom.Some people argue that tax breaks are another form of subsidy.Some people include these tax breaks in the rubric of "corporate welfare", although that term is also used as a blanket term for all other forms of subsidies.This is a left-wiog idea that rests on the idea that when the government does not confiscate a person or legal entity's property, it has given them that property