Original sentence: "  Fogelberg's official website lists an updated release date for this project as August 2009.Dan's second effort was much more successful—the 1974 Joe Walsh–produced album Souvenirs and its hit song "Part of the Plan" made him a major star.Daniel Grayling Fogelberg (August 13 1951 Peoria, Illinois – December 16 2007 Deer Isle, Maine) was an American singer, songwriter and multi-instrumentalist, whose music was inspired by sources as diverse as folk, pop, classical, jazz, and bluegrass music.He performed as an opening act for pop-folk artists such as Van Morrison.She further announced that this song would be included in a collection of eleven previously unpublished songs (nine originals) that will be released later in 2008 on a CD that Dan titled "Love In Time.Soon after his death, Jean announced that a song written and recorded for her by Fogelberg for Valentine's Day 2005, "Sometimes a Song," would be sold on the Internet and that all proceeds would go to the Prostate Cancer Foundation
Edited sentence: Daniel Grayling Fogelberg (August 13, 1951, Peoria, Illinois – December 16, 2007, Deer Isle, Maine) was an American singer, songwriter and multi-instrumentalist, whose music was inspired by sources as diverse as folk, pop, classical, jazz, and bluegrass music.Fogelberg's official website lists an updated release date for this project as August 2009.Fogelberg's second effort was much more successful—the 1974 Joe Walsh–produced album Souvenirs and its hit song "Part of the Plan" made him a star.He performed as an opening act for Van Morrison.She further announced that this song would be included in a collection of eleven previously unpublished songs (nine originals) on a CD that entitled Love In Time.Soon after his death, his widow announced that a song written and recorded for her by Fogelberg for Valentine's Day 2005, "Sometimes a Song," would be sold on the internet and that all proceeds would go to the Prostate Cancer Foundation