Original sentence: During the WWI Ottoman government also faced difficulties on the home front, including isolated Armenian rebellions in eastern Anatolia that led for first April 24 circular and then the Tehcir Law deportations of June 1-1915 to February 8-1916.However, there has been a great deal of dispute between Western scholars, who consider it the first genocide of the 20th century and the second most studied case of genocide, and Turkish authorities.Most academics define the events of this period as the Armenian Genocide.See main Armenian genocide article for more in-depth information on the dispute.The Turkish goverment claims that the Tehcir Law was not the main contribution to total Armenian mortality during the WWI and the claim for an organized crime against the Armenians by Teşkilati Mahsusa or the special organization were also in dispute, even if the very poor conditions of the Armenians (also some Muslims) were not.The result of conditions that had effect on World War I casualties, and the civil war within the historical roots of the region, which pushed Armenian and Muslim population, back-and-forth within the war zone.These claims are criticized as being  historical revisionism, often compared to holocaust denial
Edited sentence: Assassinations of CUP members of the period by members of Armenian Revolutionary Federation, which were either acquitted or intentionally not caught, are perceived by some as extrajudicial punishment to April 24 circular.During the WWI Ottoman government also faced difficulties on the home front, including Armenian rebellions in eastern Anatolia that led for first April 24 circular and then the Tehcir Law of June 1-1915 to February 8-1916.Most academics define this period as the Armenian Genocide.The result of conditions that had effect on World War I casualties, and the civil war within the historical roots of the region, which pushed Armenian and Muslim population (mortality=2.500.000),  back-and-forth within the war zone.Turkish authorities also claim that Tehcir Law was not the main contribution to total Armenian mortality during the WWI and the claim for an organized crime against the Armenians by Teşkilati Mahsusa or the special organization were also in dispute, even if the very poor conditions of the Armenians (also some Muslims) were not