Original sentence: Alumni of the RGS are known as Old Wycombiensians, or OWs, and include Chris Grayling, UK Secretary of State for Transport, the singer Ian Dury, the comedian Jimmy Carr and the philosopher Roger Scruton
Edited sentence: Alumni of the RGS are known as Old Wycombiensians, or OWs, and include Chris Grayling, UK Secretary of State for Transport, the singer Ian Dury, the comedian Jimmy Carr and the distinguished philosopher Roger Scruton