Original sentence: The sound quality of a wooden bass is judged by many to be far superior to that of a carbon instument.These instruments are supposedly nearly impervious to changes in heat and humidity and extremely resilient to the knocking about that occurs during transport
Edited sentence: These instruments are supposedly nearly impervious to changes in heat and humidity and extremely resilient to the knocking about that occurs during transport, however, the sound quality of a wooden bass is far superior to that of a carbon instument