Original sentence: He also coached the Newtown Jets, Balmain Tigers, Western Suburbs Magpies and the Newcastle Knights after an earlier career where he played for the St.He coached the Canterbury Bulldogs to three Grnad Final appearances in four seasons between 1984 and 1987.In April 2006 Ryan came to wider attention when his son, Matthew died of heart failure at age 24 following an overdose of the party drug, gamma hydroxybutyrate (GHB).Many notable current and former first grade coaches including Phil Gould, Tom Raudonikis, Chris Anderson, Steve Folkes, Andrew Farrar, Wayne Pearce and Michael Hagan, played in Ryan-coached sides.Ryan is currently a member of the ABC Grandstand rugby league commentary team.Warren Ryan is an Australian former rugby league player and a highly regarded former coach who enjoyed considerable success in the 1980s.With his record of two premierships and seven grand finals with three different teams in the 1980s Ryan is regarded as one of the great coaches of that era
Edited sentence: He also coached the Newtown Jets, Balmain Tigers, Western Suburbs Magpies and the Newcastle Knights after a career where he played for the St.In April 2006 Ryan came to wider public attention when his son, Matthew died of heart failure at the age of 24 following an overdose of the party drug, gamma hydroxybutyrate (GHB).Many future first grade coaches, including Phil Gould, Tom Raudonikis, Chris Anderson, Steve Folkes, Andrew Farrar, Wayne Pearce and Michael Hagan, played in Warren Ryan-coached sides.Ryan is currently a member of the ABC Grandstand Rugby League Commentatory Team.Warren Ryan was one of the most successful coaches in the history of the Canterbury Bulldogs, coaching the team between 1984 and 1987.With his record of two premierships and seven grand finals with three different teams in the 1908s Ryan is regarded as one of the great coaches of that era