Original sentence: In August 2007, Southern Illinois University-Carbondale’s student newspaper, the Daily Egyptian, published evidence that Poshard had plagiarized passages in his doctoral dissertation, completed in the University’s Department of Higher Education in 1984.This was the most dramatic in a series of plagiarism cases at SIU
Edited sentence: In August 2007, Southern Illinois University-Carbondale’s student newspaper, the Daily Egyptian, published evidence that Poshard had allegedly taken passages in his doctoral dissertation from other sources without attribution, completed in the University’s Department of Higher Education in 1984