Original sentence: On November 22, 1967, the Security Council adopted Resolution 242, the "land for peace" formula, which called for the establishment of a just and lasting peace based on Israeli withdrawal from territories occupied in 1967 in return for the end of all states of belligerency, respect for the sovereignty of all states in the area, and the right to live in peace within secure, recognized boundaries
Edited sentence: On November 22, 1967, the Security Council adopted Resolution 242, the "land for peace" formula, which called for the establishment of a just and lasting peace based on Israeli withdrawal from territories occupied in 1967 in return for the end of all states of belligerency, respect for the sovereignty of all states in the area, and the right to live in peace within secure, recognised boundaries.The land for peace formula has since been shown to be bankrupt following continued Palestinian attacks on Israeli civilians, such as the assassination of the Israeli Olympic team in Munich in 1972, the Entebbe Raid of 1976, the Two Intifadas, and all oter attacks on Israelis up until the present day, with Kassam rockets being fired at civilians in Southern Israel.The land for peace formula has since been shown to be bankrupt following continued Palestinian rocket attacks on Israeli civilians, especially in the city of Sderot