Original sentence: Glen Cove is a Sikh Gurdwara or temple and it is located in Glen Cove, New York.It has a total area of 15 acres surrounded by water.It was a bank foreclosure property whereby the Uni-bank took a loss of about $7 Million by foreclosing on their mortgage loan of $ 8.34 million and sold this property for $1.20 million to make a Gurdwara.The main building is 30,000 sq.There is also a secondary building with a 5 bedroom house as the residence of sewadars.built-up area, 20 rooms an 3 halls
Edited sentence: Glen Cove is a beautiful Sikh Gurdwara or temple and it is located at 100 Lattingtown Road, Glen Cove, New York with total Area: 15.43 acres surrounded by water.In order for the Gurdwara to obtain a certificate of occupancy and approvals for the premises from the city and county, there have been huge legal costs and a lot of money is required for the renovation needs to be spent before the sadh sangat can attend every day programs.It   was basically a bank foreclosure property,  whereby the Uni-bank took a loss of about $7 Million by foreclosing on their mortgage loan of $ 8.34 million and amazingly sold this property for only $1.20 million to make a beautiful Gurdwara.Main Building: 30,000 sq.There is also a Secondary Building with 5 bedroom house as the residence of sewadars.built-up area, 20 large rooms an 3 big halls