Original sentence: Leon Bates (born 1949) is am American pianist.Leon Bates was born in Philadelphia, where by the age of six he had excelled in the study of music, specifically at playing the piano and violin
Edited sentence: Bates is considered something of a renaissance man, and enjoys a wide variety of performance arts including dance, theater and music.He also enjoys watching and following sports programs.He has performed with numerous orchestras and symphonies.He used a gym for two hours at a time as much as six days a week despite his rigorous and demanding performance schedule.Leon Bates likes to spend some of his time in an endeavor quite unusual for a concert pianist: he was an avid body builder.Leon Bates was born in 1949 in Philadelphia, where by the age of six he had excelled in the study of music, specifically at playing the piano and violin