Original sentence: On October 3, 2017, the Trump administration voted against a UN resolution to condemn the Death penalty, thus making the United States one of only 13 countries to vote against the resolution (including Saudi Arabia where the death penalty for gay sex is practiced)
Edited sentence: On October 3, 2017, the Trump administration voted against a UN resolution to condemn the execution of homosexuals, thus making the United States one of only 13 countries to vote against the resolution (including Saudi Arabia where the death penalty for gay sex is practiced)