Original sentence: Colum's victories were in the Junior B grade.Successes in 2007 include the 2006 Junior C SW football title, won in extraordinary circumstances after 3 games against rivals Caheragh and the under 21 C SW, incredibly defeating Goleen by a single point after losing by 8 points at the half time stage
Edited sentence: Colum's great victories were in the Junior B grade.Successes in 2007 include the 2006 Junior C SW football title, won in extraordinary circumstances after 3 games against rivals Caheragh and the under 21 C SW, incredibly defeating plucky Goleen by a single point after losing by 8 points at the half time stage