Original sentence: After enrolling in 1966, Charles Foster became the first African-American cadet to graduate from the Citadel in 1970.Its evening and graduate programs are offered in a traditional civilian environment.Its primary undergraduate program is based on a military model and all full-time undergraduate students are members of the Corp of Cadets.The Citadel (full name: The Citadel, The Military College of South Carolina) is a college in Charleston, South Carolina.The Citadel was founded as the South Carolina Military Academy in 1842 along the lines of West Point and the Virginia Military Institute.The Citadel, like the US military, has adopted gender norming for physical fitness tests.This means, for example, that while a male cadet of age 17 will have to run two miles in thirteen minutes to achieve the maximum score, a female of the same age will have to run the two miles in fifteen minutes and thirty-six seconds to achieve the same score
Edited sentence: After enrolling in 1966, Charles Foster became the first black cadet to graduate from the Citadel in 1970.Charleston, South Carolina.It was founded based on the models of West Point and VMI as the South Carolina Military Academy in 1843.The Citadel is a military/civilian college infamous for being among the toughest senior military colleges in the country.The Citadel, like the US military, has adopted gender norming of physical fitness tests.This means that while a male cadet of age 17 will have run two miles in thirteen minutes to achieve the maximum score, a female of the same age will only have to run two miles in fifteen minutes and thirty-six seconds to achieve the maximum score