Original sentence: "Serbia denounces Kosovo PM plan", BBC News, March 3, 2006.Although the international community insisted the KPC was a civilian organization, Ceku and its membership said they believed the KPC should evolve into the future Army of an independent Kosovo.When the Kosovo War broke out in March 1999, the KLA initially did very badly against Serbian/Yugoslav forces, due in part to poor leadership under its senior commander Suleiman "Sultan" Selimi, a militarily inexperienced individual who had been given the post largely because of his influence in the Drenica region (the KLA's heartland).Çeku developed contacts with the Kosovo Liberation Army (KLA), a guerrilla group fighting Serbian rule in Kosovo, some time in the mid-1990s
Edited sentence: "Serbia denounces Kosovo PM plan",.BBC News, March 3, 2006.The KPC is technically a civilian organization, however, Ceku and its membership believe that the KPC could evolve into the future army of an independent Kosovo.When the Kosovo War broke out in March 1998, the KLA initially did very well against Serbian forces as Serbia seemed unsure how to handle the upstart insurgency with the international community scrutizing its every move; later as the summer of 1998 wore on, the Serb war machine sprang into action and began to inflict heavy casualties on the KLA, and tragically on the Albanian population.Çeku developed contacts with the genocidal Kosovo Liberation Army (KLA), a guerrilla group whose stated purpose was to liberate Albanians from Serbian oppression and to kill as many Serbs as possible, some time in the mid-1990s