Original sentence: When Frykholm requested evidence of conversion from the publisher, Tyndale submitted only seven cases; four were reportedly hearsay and three were reportedly readers that had reaffirmed their lapsed faith in Christianity.While both the authors and the publisher have claimed that thousands of readers have experienced a Christian conversion due to the novels, scholars such as Frykholm have been unable to document even a single case in which a reader experienced a Christian conversion
Edited sentence: Both the authors and the publisher have claimed that thousands of readers have experienced a Christian conversion due to the novels; however, scholars such as Frykholm have been unable to document even a single case in which a reader experienced a Christian conversion.Neither the publisher nor Frykholm were able to produce any cases in which a reader converted from any other religion, agnosticism or atheism.Perhaps most problematic, is that the benefit professed by both the authors and publisher, conversion to Christianity, are not in evidence.When Frykholm requested evidence of conversion from the publisher, Tyndale submitted only seven cases; four were hearsay and three reported that the readers had reaffirmed their lapsed faith in Christianity