Original sentence: After Wired Magazine picked up on work from Rogers Cadenhead, Wales confirmed that he had edited his own bio on Wikipedia, a practice generally frowned upon within the Wikipedia community.The History of Wikipedia started on January 15, 2001, Larry Sanger, Wales, and several others set up Wikipedia (despite Wales' initial objections), a similar wiki-based site intended for collaboration on early encyclopedic content before submitting it to Nupedia for peer review
Edited sentence: After Wired Magazine picked up on work from Rogers Cadenhead, Wales confirmed that he had edited his own bio on Wikipedia, a practice generally frowned upon within the wiki community.On January 15, 2001, Wales, Larry Sanger and several others set up Wikipedia, a similar wiki-based site intended for collaboration on early encyclopedic content before submitting it to Nupedia for peer review