Original sentence: " His vocals are featured in Avenged Sevenfold's “A Little Piece of Heaven”, “Brompton Cocktail”, "Critical Acclaim", “Gunslinger”, “Lost”, and “Afterlife.His piano-playing can be heard on the track "Warmness on the Soul.In high school, he started playing in bands.Later in life he was influenced by drummers Vinnie Paul, Mike Portnoy, Dave Lombardo, Lars Ulrich, and Terry Bozzio.The Rev was also a vocalist, songwriter, and pianist for Avenged Sevenfold.The band won the MTV Music Award for Best New Artist in 2006, beating out Rihanna, Panic
Edited sentence: " Drumming Company Drum Workshop endorsed the Rev and said he could have any drum set he wanted, so he chose a double bass drum set, which he preferred over a double bass pedal.He had always kept up with his lessons and six years later, in high school, he started playing in bands.His skill as a pianist can be heard on the track "Warmness on the Soul" where his piano part is the main focus of the song which includes a solo written by the Rev.His vocals are featured in Avenged Sevenfold's “A Little Piece of Heaven”, “Brompton Cocktail”, "Critical Acclaim", “Gunslinger”, “Lost”, and “Afterlife.In a recent DRUM.In just one year, he was playing The Black Page with college students in a percussion ensemble conducted by his teacher.Later on in his life he was influenced by drummers Vinnie Paul, Mike Portnoy, Dave Lombardo, Lars Ulrich, and Terry Bozzio.The Rev didn't only play the drums, he was a vocalist, songwriter, and pianist for Avenged Sevenfold as well.The band became extremely popular and won the MTV Music Award for Best New Artist in 2006, beating out Rihanna, Panic.magazine transcription of “Crossroads”, The Rev revealed to the name of the trick as the "Double Octopus