Original sentence: She lives in an apartment with Heidi, and the two spend their nights as socialites.The Hills is an MTV reality drama spinoff of Laguna Beach: The Real Orange County.The show documents the life of Lauren Conrad and several of her affluent friends in Los Angeles, California after leaving home in Laguna Beach, California
Edited sentence: All struggle to balance responsibilities between school, work, friends, love, and nightlife.She lives in an apartment with Heidi, and the two spend their nights as socialites,spending thier parents money.The Hills is an MTV "reality" drama spinoff of Laguna Beach: The Real Orange County.The show documents the new independence of Lauren Conrad and several of her affluent friends in Los Angeles, California and her new—but no less vapid and insipid life after leaving home in Laguna Beach, California