Original sentence: In 1980, when a majority of Republicans favored President Jimmy Carter's proposal to reinstate the draft, Paul argued that their views were inconsistent, stating they were more interested in registering their children than they were their guns
Edited sentence: In 1980, when a majority of Republicans favored President Jimmy Carter's proposal to reinstate the draft, Paul pointed out their views as inconsistent, stating they were more interested in registering their children than they were their guns