Original sentence: Members include primary vocalist andkeyboardist Gwilym Gold, Ben Moorhouse on bass guitar and backing vocals, and Alexis Nunez on drums and further backing vocals.The band gained recognition by winning Glastonbury's prestigious New Talent competition in 2008 and performed on The Other stage that year
Edited sentence: Members include primary vocalist and keyboardist Gwilym Gold, Ben Moorhouse on bass guitar and backing vocals, and Alexis Nunez on drums and further backing vocals.The band gained considerable recognition by winning Glastonbury's prestigious New Talent competition in 2008 and performed on The Other stage that year