Original sentence: If he has been harmed is unclear, but, from what the Minister tells Alex, that writer has been denied the ability to write and produce “subversive” material critical of the incumbent government and meant to provoke political unrest
Edited sentence: However, the Minister tells Alex that writer has been denied the ability to write and produce “subversive” material that is critical of the incumbent government and meant to provoke political unrest.It is unclear whether or not he has been harmed