Original sentence: A suicide bomber blew himself up next to a car in which Aziz was travelling, killing his chauffeur and eight others.His term as Finance Minister has been associated with accelarating growth in the Pakistani economy and making it one of the fastest growing in the world.However, Aziz continued campaigning.However, Pakistan no longer receives assistance from the IMF and has substantially reduced its reliance on foreign borrowing.It was during his studies at the IBA that he secured an internship at Citibank and began his banking career.Shaukat Aziz (Urdu: شوکت عزیز) (born March 6, 1949 in Karachi, Pakistan) is the current Prime Minister and Finance Minister of Pakistan
Edited sentence: A suicide bomber blew himself up attacking a car in which Aziz was travelling.Aziz showed great courage in continuing his campaign.Aziz was nothing but a local office manager and later money laundering kingpin laundering money for corrupt officials form third world countries.Citibank pled guilty and informed the Federal Reserve that it will not tolerate people such as Aziz.Despite the the President having fluctuating popularity with the electorate, Shaukat Aziz remains very popular within Pakistan and has skillfully managed the economy.His chauffeur and eight others were killed.His term as Finance Minister has been associated with accelarating growth in the Pakistani economy.However, Pakistan no longer receives assistance from the IMF and has substantially reduced its reliance on foreign borrowing, thus debunking these theories.In fact Aziz name is no where to be found in the annual reports for this time frame.It was during his studies at the IBA that he secured an internship at Citibank which was to be a start of an illustrious banking career.Pakistan has recently  become one of the fastest growing countries in the world.Shaukat Aziz (Urdu: شوکت عزیز), born March 6, 1949 Karachi, Pakistan is the current Prime Minister and Finance Minister of Pakistan.Thus Mr.this is not verified by the Annual report of Citibank