Original sentence: "Seven billion years after Earth has been shattered by its exploding sun, alien being regenerate lost humanity.In the Chalco-Doror system (solar system) - itself a vast machine created by the Rimstalker-the reborn children of Earth build mighty civilizations, worship terrifying gods, and choose sides for the titanic final battle.The Rimstalker intends humans as bait for marauding spiderlike zōtl, remorseless predators that feed on the pain and suffering of the intelligent life-forms
Edited sentence: "Seven billion years after Earth has been shattered by its exploding sun, an alien being regenerates lost humanity.In the Chalco-Doror system (solar system) - itself a vast machine created by the Rimstalker, the reborn children of Earth build mighty civilizations, worship terrifying gods, and choose sides for the titanic final battle.The Rimstalker intends humans as bait for the marauding spiderlike zōtl, remorseless predators that feed on the pain and suffering of the intelligent life-forms