Original sentence: In 2011, 24 Indian soldiers died on the Siachen glacier from the climate and accidents.On 11 February 2010, an avalanche struck an Indian army post in the Southern Glacier, killing one soldier
Edited sentence: In 2011, 24 Indian soldiers Martyred on the Siachen glacier from the climate and accidents.On 11 February 2010, an avalanche struck an Indian army post in the Southern Glacier, Martyred one soldier