Original sentence: The civilian, Francis McCloskey, was killed under disputed circumstances, with many blaming the RUC; all the other deaths were the responsibility of republican paramilitary groups, with the Irish Republican Army killing three soldiers and a RUC officer, and the Irish National Liberation Army killing one RUC officer and one soldier
Edited sentence: The civilian, Francis McCloskey, was apparently killed by the RUC, and all the other deaths were the responsibility of republican paramilitary groups, with the Irish Republican Army killing three soldiers and a RUC officer, and the Irish National Liberation Army killing one RUC officer and one soldier