Original sentence: He has not been shy about sharing his views about the built environment in public forums.His popularity has fluctuated, but he is one of the most active Prince of Wales in centuries, and has devoted his time and effort to charity work and working with local communities.The Prince grows and promotes organic food, although he drew some ridicule when he joked about sometimes talking to his houseplants.The Prince of Wales has a wide array of interests and activities, some of which has not been fully appreciated by the public
Edited sentence: More controversially, he has not been shy about sharing his views about the built environment in public forums.The Prince is also keen on growing and promoting organic food, although he drew some ridicule when he joked about sometimes talking to his houseplants.The Prince of Wales has a wide array of interests and activities, much of which has perhaps been underappreciated by the public because of the somewhat splashy details of his personal life.The full scope of his activities is hard to convey in a brief entry.While his popularity has fluctuated, he remains the most active Prince of Wales in centuries, and has devoted his time and effort to charity work and working with local communities