Original sentence: He is Britain's most prominent campaigner against the construction of wind farms in undeveloped areas.He is the originator, along with David Shreeve and The Conservation Foundation (which he also founded), of the Ford European Conservation Awards and has published over 80 scientific papers
Edited sentence: He is Britain's most prominent campaigner against the desecration of wilderness areas by wind farms.He is the originator along, with David Shreeve and The Conservation Foundation (which he also founded), of the Ford European Conservation Awards and has published over 80 scientific papers