Original sentence: Jeffery Smith is a baritone jazz vocal recording artist.Jeffery Smith is perhaps best known for his albums on Verve, among them his distinctive debut release produced by Shirley Horn, and his self-produced records, including Down Here Below and  A Little Sweeter, which was praised in a full page review in TIME as being "the most vital album of the year"
Edited sentence: 1998: A Little Sweeter (Verve).1999: Down Here Below (Verve).Jeffery Smith is a baritone jazz vocal recording artist, perhaps best known for his albums on Verve, among them his distinctive debut release produced by Shirley Horn, and his self-produced records, including Down Here Below and  A Little Sweeter, which was praised in a full page review in TIME as being "the most vital album of the year"