Original sentence: A brilliant student, his mother wanted him to study medicine, but he instead started working for Maritime Life, a company that was co-founded by his great-grandfather, The Hon.He and Lorraine have been married for 29 years.He was recognized as the candidate of ideas, which were often attacked by his more politically-experienced, but less-specific, opponents.Their daughter Renée works for Intrawest, a resort and travel company in Vancouver, son Anthony is an actor and director in Halifax, and son Andrew studied to become a teacher, also in Halifax
Edited sentence: He started working for Maritime Life, a company that was co-founded by his great-grandfather, The Hon