Original sentence: "Ideal family", "God" and "world peace" have very particular meanings peculiar to the Unification Church and there should be links to other articles that make that apparent.(QUESTIONS: 1.Are any of these organizations and individuals other than Unification Church sponsored entities.If not, make that clear.If the answer to this first question is "No, it is completely a Unification Church project..." then some qualification of the means by which the ends to which the movement is dedicated should be made.Some members in the United States and other countries have also tried to establish businesses with the dual aims of serving their communities while hopefully making a profit to donate to church projects.Thank you... Emyth 12:48, Mar 25, 2005 (UTC)).The Unification Movement spearheaded by the Unification Church comprises organizations and individuals dedicated to creating world peace through ideal families centered on God.This is needed to make this a NPOV article
Edited sentence: Some members in the United States and other countries have also tried to establish businesses with the dual aims of serving their communities and also (they hoped) make a profit to donate to church projects.The Unification Movement spearheaded by the Unification Church comprises organizations and individuals dedicating to creating world peace through ideal families centered on God