Original sentence: After four years she returned to Israel and continued working in public relations for a private company.After her reign as Miss Universe, Rina Messinger stayed in New York City, where she worked in public relations for the Jewish Agency and the Bonds.In 1991, she started studying law in Tel Aviv University.In 2002 after six years in the Netherlands, the family returned home to Israel.In the years 1989 and 2004 she was a judge in the Miss Israel contest.Messinger is a family lawyer in Tel Aviv, working on her doctorate and appearing every week in the morning show of Channel 10, where she gives advice in family law.There she met her soon-to-be husband, a businessman
Edited sentence: After four years she returned to Israel and continued working in Public Relations for a big business company.After her reign as Miss Universe, Rina Messinger stayed in New York City, where she worked in Public Relations for the Jewish Agency and the Bonds.In 1991, she decided to fulfill her dream and started studying law in the Tel-Aviv University.In 2002 after six years in the Netherlands, the family returned home to Israel, Messinger is a family lawyer in Tel Aviv, working on her doctorate and appearing every week in the morning show of Channel 10, where she gives advice in family law.There she met her soon-to-be husband, a very successful businessman.in the years 1989 and 2004 she was a judge in the Miss Israel contest