Original sentence: Between March 6 and August 15, 1919 Shchors again led the 1st Ukrainian Soviet division in its impetuous offensive and took control of Zhytomyr, Vinnytsia, and Zhmerynka from Petlyura.In March–April, 1918 he commanded a joint detachment of Novozybkovsky district that fought against the Ukrainian Army and German army as a part of the 1st Insurgent Division.Shchors attempted to hold the line near Sarny - Novohrad-Volynsky - Shepetivka, but was forced to retreat east by the superior numbers of the Polish army.Then he decisively defeded the main forces of Petlyura near Sarny - Rivne - Brody - Proskuriv
Edited sentence: Between March 6 and August 15, 1919 Shchors again led the 1st Ukrainian Soviet division in its impetuous offensive and liberated Zhytomyr, Vinnytsia, and Zhmerynka from Petlyura.In March–April, 1918 he commanded a joint detachment of Novozybkovsky district that fought against the Ukrainian Army and German invaders as a part of the 1st Insurgent Division.Shchors attempted to hold the line near Sarny - Novohrad-Volynsky - Shepetivka, but was forced to retreat east by the superior numbers of the enemy.Then he smashed the main forces of Petlyura near Sarny - Rivne - Brody - Proskuriv