Original sentence: In his first year with the team, Manuel came under fire from Philadelphia fans for his perceived acceptance of mediocre play, lack of toughness with players, questionable decision making, and his often incomprehensible manner of speaking in his post-game press conferences and interviews
Edited sentence: In his first year with the team, Manuel came under fire from Philadelphia fans for his perceived acceptance of mediocre play, lack of toughness with players, questionable decision making (such as his seeming inability to master fundamental aspects of National League play, such as the double switch), and his often incomprehensible manner of speaking in his post-game press conferences and interviews