Original sentence: He capped off the 2006 season with 2nd place in the Crichton Medal voting.Initially predicted to be a key forward at Essendon, the 191 cm Watson started 2006 with a leaner physique and earned himself a permanent midfield position
Edited sentence: He capped off an impressive 2006 season with 2nd place in the Crichton Medal voting.Initially predicted to be a key forward at Essendon, the 191 cm Watson started 2006 with a leaner physique and stunned critics with an impressive claim on a permanent midfield position, so much so, that as of round 6, he is ranked the 15th most popular player in AFL Dream Teams