Original sentence: His ensuing performance justified the selection as he has not only won the hearts of moviegoers all over the world, he has also been nominated for, and won a number of awards including a Best Newcomer Award and then a Best Male Performance at the BAFTA awards.His own story parallels that of Billy Elliot in that Jamie kept his dancing a secret from his friends at school.Jamie landed the title role of Billy Elliot (2000), winning the role in an audition that included more than 2000 boys from the northeastern England
Edited sentence: As a star on the rise, we should expect to hear more from Jamie in years to come, but first he needs to finish his homework.He has proven a lot by landing the role of Billy Elliot (2000), winning the role in an audition that included more than 2000 lads from the northeast of England.His ensuing performance certainly justified the selection as he has not only won the hearts of moviegoers all over the world, he has also been nominated for, and won a number of awards including a Best Newcomer Award and then a Best Male Performance at the BAFTA awards.His own story parallels that of Billy Elliot in that Jamie kept his dancing a secret from his mates at school