Original sentence: " The "Rat" experience, called the Ratline, is intended to instill pride, discipline, brotherhood, and a sense of honor in the students.The Honor System at VMI has one, and only one, punishment for an honor offense: immediate expulsion.The Virginia Military Institute (VMI), located in Lexington, Virginia, is the oldest state military college in the United States.The freshman student is known as a "rat", and walks a prescribed line in barracks while in an exaggerated form of attention known as "straining.Unlike any other U.military academy or college, however, the Institute requires that female cadets adhere to the same strict physical regimen as male cadets
Edited sentence: The "Rat" experience, called the Ratline, is intended to instill pride, discipline, brotherhood, and a sense of honor in the students.The Honor System at VMI is second to none in that there is one, and only one, punishment for an honor offense: immediate expulsion.The Virginia Military Institute (VMI), located in Lexington, Virginia, is known as the oldest and toughest "state military college" in the United States.The freshman student is known as a "rat", and walks a prescribed line in barracks while in an exaggerated form of attention known as straining.Unlike any other military academy or college, however, the Institute requires that female cadets adhere to the same strict physical regimen as male cadets