Original sentence: Reading through the manual, he discovers that he and the rest of his family members have special powers; Bart uses his "Bartman" powers to stop Jimbo Jones, Kearney and Dolph from stealing from the Natural History Museum, Homer uses his ability to become a huge ball to win an eating contest, Lisa uses her powers of meditation to stop a deforestation project, and Marge with her powers to influence crowds to stop the release of "Grand Theft Scratchy" in Springfield.The game opens with Homer Simpson dreaming about the land of chocolate, but is interrupted as Bart asks him for money to buy the latest video game "Grand Theft Scratchy"
Edited sentence: Reading through the manual, he discovers that he and the rest of his family members have special powers; Bart uses his "Bartman" powers to stop Jimbo Jones, Kearney and Dolph from stealing from the Natural History Museum, Homer uses his ability to become a huge ball to win an eating contest and wins it(yay), Lisa uses her powers of meditation to stop a deforestation project and puts 200 hard working amircans out of a job, and Marge with her powers to influence crowds to stop the release of "Grand Theft Scratchy" in Springfield and starts a mob with flanders and snake.The game opens with Homer Simpson dreaming about the land of chocolate,