Original sentence: " It was while reading National Geographic magazine that he first saw the unusual hairstyle, which he would adapted as his trademark, on an African Mandinka warrior.For about 10 years, he was a bodyguard who provided additiional security to such personalities as Muhammad Ali, Michael Jackson, Steve McQueen, and Diana Ross when they were in Chicago.He charged around $3,000 a day.He has said that adopting the style was a statement about his African heritage.His business card read, "Next to God, there is no greater protector than I"
Edited sentence: " He always boasts that he never lost a client, saying, "I got hurt worse growing up in the ghetto than working as a bodyguard." It was while reading National Geographic that Mr.For about ten years he was a bodyguard to the stars, protecting such well-known personalities as Muhammad Ali, Michael Jackson, Steve McQueen, and Diana Ross.He charged around $3,000 a day and his business card famously read, "Next to God, there is no greater protector than I.He has states that adopting the style was a statement about his African heritage.T first saw the unusual hairstyle, which he adapted as his trademark, on an African Mandinka warrior