Original sentence: Although Haile used the term "Twinkle" to refer to a "back-together-forward" triple step, the 1971 edition of the "Encylopedia of Social Dance" defined "Coaster Step" as "back-together-forward" in its decription of "Western Swing"
Edited sentence: Although Haile used the term "Twinkle" to refer to a "back-together-forward" triple step, the 1971 edition of the "Encyclopedia of Social Dance" defined "Coaster Step" as "back-together-forward" in its decription of "Western Swing"