Original sentence: Jammu and Kashmir () is a state in northern India.Jammu and Kashmir has an international border with China in the north and east, and the Line of Control separates it from the Pakistani-controlled territories of Azad Kashmir and Gilgit–Baltistan in the west and northwest respectively
Edited sentence: Jammu and Kashmir (), commonly referred to as Indian held Kashmir, is an Indian occupied territory in northern India.Jammu and Kashmir has an international border with China in the north and east, and the Line of Control separates it from the Pakistani-administered territories of Azad Kashmir and Gilgit–Baltistan in the west and northwest respectively