Original sentence: Affirmative action (US English), or positive discrimination (British English), is a policy or a program providing special treatment for people of a minority group who are seen to have traditionally been discriminated against, with the aim of creating a more egalitarian society
Edited sentence: Affirmative action (US English), or positive discrimination (British English), is a policy or a program providing advantages for people of a minority group who are seen to have traditionally been discriminated against, with the aim of creating a more egalitarian society