Original sentence: Both dancers and DiOrio received strong and emotional praises from judges Nigel Lythgoe, Mary Murphy (choreographer), Mia Michaels, and special guest Ellen Degeneres.Due to the songs inclusion in "Extras", the song entered the UK chart once again in January 2008.The Maxwell cover of This Woman's Work was used on the July 22, 2009 episode of So You Think You Can Dance.The dancers of the piece were ballerina Melissa Sandvig and contemporary dancer Ade Obayomi.The song was used as a backdrop to a contemporary dance choreographed by Tyce DiOrio and used the subject of Breast Cancer as the story line
Edited sentence: Both dancers and DiOrio received strong and emotional praise from judges Nigel Lythgoe, Mary Murphy, Mia Michaels, and special guest Ellen Degeneres.Due to the song's inclusion in Extras, the song entered the UK chart once again in January 2008.The Maxwell cover of "This Woman's Work" was used on the July 22, 2009 episode of So You Think You Can Dance, as a backdrop to a contemporary dance choreographed by Tyce DiOrio with the subject of breast cancer as the story line, danced by ballerina Melissa Sandvig and contemporary dancer Ade Obayomi