Original sentence: 40 people have been picked for the two series and warriors for series 9 will fly to Aviemore on the 4th July, they will choose their warrior names on the 5th and filming will start on the 6th
Edited sentence: 40 people have been picked for the two series and warriors for series 9.They arrived at Aviemore on the 4th July, they chose their warrior names on the 5th and filming began on the 6th