Original sentence: But after the officials picked through the pile, it was determined that Bradshaw had made the recovery.Then on the Giants' next drive, rookie running back Ahmad Bradshaw fumbled a Manning hand-off and it looked as though Patriots' linebacker Pierre Woods had recovered the ball at the Giants' 30
Edited sentence: Then on the Giants' next drive, rookie running back Ahmad Bradshaw fumbled a Manning hand-off and it was initially clearly recovered by Patriots' linebacker Pierre Woods, but the referees failed to whistle the play dead and instead allowed the Giants players to flip Woods over and rip the ball from his hands, after which the referees decided to whistle the play over.This play turned out to be a major game changing event in a contest that would eventually be decided by only 3 points