Original sentence: Five members of Beauchamp's company corroborated his article.In a note published on their website on August 2, the editors of The New Republic wrote that they had confirmed that the conversation about the disfigured woman occurred, but that it had happened at a training base in Kuwait, before Beauchamp had reached Iraq
Edited sentence: After questions about Beauchamp's writing arose, The New Republic began its own investigation of the statements.In a note published on their website on August 2, the editors wrote that they had confirmed that the conversation about the disfigured woman occurred, but that it had happened at a training base in Kuwait, before Beauchamp had reached Iraq.Regarding the story about a soldier who had marched around with a piece of a child's skull, The New Republic found a fellow soldier who confirmed the story.TNR found five members of Beauchamp's company that corroborated his anecdotes.The New Republic also found a fellow soldier who confirmed the story about a Bradley driver who ran over a dog