Original sentence: A group of 10 elite swimmers will compete to qualify for the NCAA-D3 championships.Alumnus Michael Caruso is the head coach.The Bridgewater State Swimming and Diving team is successful.They are part of the NEISDA division and will celebrate 50 years as a program in the Fall of 2020.They swim Co-Ed, however compete separately.the swimmers are excited to have this oppurtunity
Edited sentence: A group of 10 elite swimmers will be competing for a chance to make NCAA-D3 championships.Both the 200 medley relay and the 200 freestyle relay are strong this year, and the swimmers are excited to have this oppurtunity.Head coach and alumni Michael Caruso does an excellent job keeping the team moving towards their goals both individually and team goals.The Bridgewater State Swimming and Diving team is one of the very succesful teams on campus.The team is extremely strong and continues to excel year after year.They are part of the NEISDA division  and will be celebrating 50 years as a program in the Fall of 2020.They swim Co-Ed, however compete seperately