Original sentence: Despite its name, a ripe wax apple only resembles an apple on the outside in color.It doesn't taste like an apple, and it has neither the fragrance nor the density of an apple.Its flavor is similar to a snow pear, and the liquid to flesh ratio of the wax apple is comparable to a watermelon.The color of its juice depends on the cultivar of the fruit; it may be purple to entirely colorless.This mesh is edible but flavorless
Edited sentence: A ripe wax apple only resembles an apple on the outside in color.Despite its rather plain name, a wax apple is anything but plain.It doesn't taste like an apple.It has neither the fragrance nor the density of an apple.It's remarkably refreshing and juicy.The color of its juice depends on the cultivar of the fruit.The flavor is a bit like a snow pear.The liquid to flesh ratio of the wax apple is comparable to a watermelon.The mesh is edible but flavorless