Original sentence: Around Ewell Village there are a number of schools, most notably Glyn Technology School and Ewell Castle, as well as the North-East Surrey College of Technology.Around the site of this spring is Bourne Hall, the centre of Ewell.Bourne Hall serves as the local library as well as being the host of regular gatherings such as Yoga and Karate lessons, as well as frequent "Psychic Fayres", and the large hall downstairs is the hub of Ewell's music scene which includes the 1889 'Father' Henry Willis organ in the parish church.Ewell forms part of the suburbs of London and is located 12.2 miles (19.6 km) south south-west of Charing Cross.Ewell is the location of the parish church (Saint Mary the Virgin, Ewell), which was consecrated in 1848.The borough of Epsom and Ewell was voted in August 2005 by the British television programme "Location Location Location" as the most desirable place to live in the United Kingdom
Edited sentence: Around Ewell Village there are a number of schools, most notably Glyn Technology School and Ewell Castle, as well as the North-Easy Surrey College of Technology.Around the site of this spring is Bourne Hall, the centre of Ewell Village.Bourne Hall serves as the local library as well as being the host of regular gatherings such as Yoga and Karate lessons, as well as frequent "Psychic Fayres", and the large hall downstairs is the hub of Ewell's tiny, but great, music scene, the jewel in the crown of which is the magnificent 1889 'Father' Henry Willis organ in the parish church.Epsom and Ewell was voted in August 2005 by the British television programme "Location Location Location" as the most desirable place to live in the United Kingdom.Ewell has a fine parish church (Saint Mary the Virgin, Ewell), consecrated in 1848.Though effectively part of the suburbs of London and located 12.2 miles (19.6 km) south south-west of Charing Cross, it retains a village feel to it