Original sentence: In 2011, a 370-pound (168 km) tiger was photographed holding his paw up to the glass wall to meet the hand of a small child, appearing to play patty-cake, resulting in an picture which was picked up by news services
Edited sentence: In 2011, a 370-pound tiger was photographed holding his paw up to the glass wall to meet the hand of a small child, appearing to play patty-cake, resulting in an interesting picture which was picked up by news services