Original sentence: After this the United States and other Western powers, including Great Britain and Russia, imposed what became known as "unequal treaties" on Japan which stipulated that Japan must allow their citizens to visit or reside on Japanese territory but must not levy tariffs on their imports or try their citizens in Japanese courts.Matsuo Bashō, generally considered Japan's greatest haiku poet, was active during the first century of Tokugawa rule
Edited sentence: After this the United States and other Western powers, including Great Britain and Russia, imposed so-called "unequal treaties" on Japan which stipulated that Japan must allow their citizens to visit or reside on Japanese territory but must not levy tariffs on their imports or try their citizens in Japanese courts.Matsuo Bashō, often considered Japan's greatest haiku poet, was active during the first century of Tokugawa rule