Original sentence: The new facade on 17th Street and the five floors of galleries take cues from Tibetan Art and were conceived by the New York-based museum architects, Celia Imrey and Tim Culbert  The graphic identity was conceived by the noted designer Milton Glaser
Edited sentence: The new facade on 17th Street and the five floors of galleries take cues from Tibetan art and were conceived by the New York-based museum architects, Celia Imrey and Tim Culbert  The graphic identity was conceived by the noted designer Milton Glaser