Original sentence: As a cabinet minister, Stelmach suggested that switching the slow and fast lanes could help reduce repairs on major highways.The proposal was criticized as dangerous and ineffective, and Stelmach ultimately dropped the proposal
Edited sentence: It was universally panned as dangerous and ineffective; Stelmach quickly reversed his position and not the lanes.One of the most notable is his belief that switching the slow and fast lanes could help reduce repairs on major highways.Stelmach has had few policies