Original sentence: In the United States, the "deep state" is a conspiracy theory which suggests that collusion and cronyism exist within the US political system and constitute a hidden government within the legitimately elected government.The term was originally coined to refer to a relatively invisible state apparatus in Turkey "composed of high-level elements within the intelligence services, military, security, judiciary, and organized crime" and similar alleged networks in other countries including Egypt, Ukraine, Spain, Colombia, Italy, Israel, and many others
Edited sentence: In the United States, the "deep state" refers to the network of lifetime politicans along with their wealthy donors and unelected bureaucrats who exert direct or indirect influence on the country's politics both at the national and international levels.Some public figures have argued that the deep states in the United States has been exposed during the 2016 elections and after, when the administration of President Trump has suffered illegal surveillance and sabotage to prevent it from achieving economic and political goals that could lead to the re-election of Trump.The term was originally coined to refer to a relativelyinvisible state apparatus in Turkey "composed of high-level elements within the intelligence services, military, security, judiciary, and organized crime" and similar alleged networks in other countries including Egypt, Ukraine, Spain, Colombia, Italy, Israel, and manyothers