Original sentence: Also a new perfume called "JL2" is planned to be introduced in October 2003.Her line is the most successful clothing line of artists on the industry market.In others news she would be launching a new clothing line called "Sweetface" which hits stores in October 2003.Jennifer Lopez owns a clothing line called "J.Lo By Jennifer Lopez".Lo has done a photoshoot to represent the Louis Vuitton winter campaign, in which the pictures would be seen all over the world through TV commercials, billboards, ads, newspapers, magazines and more.Lo includes clothing for men and a cologne line for men due for release in winter 2004/05.Lo is in talks to represent Tommy Hilfiger.Lo is planning to launch a jewelry line, hats, gloves, and scarves line in August 2003.Other merchandise from J.The campaign will start August 2003.The video is expected to be released in August 2003
Edited sentence: Also a new perfume called "JL2" would hit stores in this October 2003 Too.Expect it to see it sometime late 2004, early 2005.Her Line is the most successful Clothing Line of artists on the Industry Market.In others news she would be Launching a new Clothing Line called "Sweetface" Which hits stores in this October 2003.Jennifer Lopez owns a Clothing Line called J.Lo By Jennifer Lopez.Lo has done a photoshoot to represent the Louis Vuitton Winter Campaign, in which the pictures would be seen all over the world through T.Lo is a Clothing Line for Mens, and a Cologne Line for Mens Too.Lo is extending her talent more into launching a Jewelry Line, Hats, Gloves, and Scarves Line hitting stores this August 2003.Lo is in talks to represent TOMMY HILFIGHER Line, or own the Line.Other stuff, coming soon from J.The pictures will hit the public eye on August 2003.The video is expected to hit sometime during August 2003.V Commercials, Billboards, Ads, Newspapers, Magazines and more