Original sentence: (See also, Deir Yassin massacre, Qibya massacre, Kafr Qasim massacre - all occured prior to 1956 ).Pro-Palestinian groups and individuals often refer to the IDF as the "Israeli Occupation Force" (IOF).This epithet expresses their belief that the primary role of the IDF is maintaining the "Occupation" of the Palestinian territories, rather than "Defense" of Israeli citizens
Edited sentence: (See also, Deir Yassin massacre, Qibya massacre, Kafr Qasim massacre.Anti-occupation groups and individuals often refer to the IDF as the "Israeli Occupation Force" (IOF).This expresses their belief that the primary role of the IDF is maintaining the "Occupation" of the Palestinian territories, rather than "Defense" of Israeli citizens