Original sentence: According to the offical Soviet statistics, Finland lost 2,377 men as prisoners of war, and their mortality rate was 17 percent.The result is different from the Soviet statistics, where officals mainly checked only prisoners, who survived to a prisoner camp
Edited sentence: According to the official Soviet statistics, Finland lost 2,377 men as prisoners of war, and their mortality rate was 17 percent.The result is different from the Soviet statistics, where officials mainly checked only prisoners, who survived to a prisoner camp