Original sentence: Rachel Sherman, an American author.Rachel Sherman, an American sociologist and labor historian.Rachel Sherman, daughter of American Civil War General William Tecumseh Sherman and one of the first students at Mount Notre Dame High School.Rachel Sherman, former editor-in-chief of the Critical Review at Brown University, and now a physician at the Bronx VA Medical Center
Edited sentence: Rachel Sherman (author), American author.Rachel Sherman (sociologist), American sociologist and labor historian.Rachel Sherman, daughter of American Civil War General William T.Rachel Sherman, former editor-in-chief of the Critical Review (Brown) at Brown University, and now a physician at the Bronx VA Medical Center.Sherman and one of the first students at Mount Notre Dame High School