Original sentence: Four members of the Hasty Pudding Club at 12 Holyoke St, popular for its all-male, burlesque musical theatre productions, began singing popular hits of their time in four-part harmony
Edited sentence: Four members of the Hasty Pudding Club at 12 Holyoke Street, popular for its all-male, burlesque musical theatre productions, began singing popular hits of their time in four-part harmony