Original sentence: A 4.8 acre memorial park, the Ox Hill Battlefield Park lies adjacent to the Fairfax Town Center shopping area, and includes the site of the battle.The intersection of the modern thoroughfares of Route 50 (also known as Lee-Jackson Memorial Highway) and Ox Road intersect near the location of the battle.The park is under the jurisdiction of the Fairfax County Park Authority; in January, 2005, the Authority approved a General Management Plan and Conceptual Development Plan which sets forth a rather detailed history and future management framework of the site.The site of the battle, once rural farmland, is now surrounded by suburban development in Fairfax County
Edited sentence: A two acre (8,000 m²) memorial park lies nearby.Nowadays, Route 50 (also known as Lee-Jackson Memorial Highway) and Ox Road intersect at the location of the battle.The site of the battle has been overtaken by urban sprawl