Original sentence: Amarinder Singh, in recognition of the services rendered by 62nd Cavalry personnel who hail from Punjab apart from Lt Gen GD Singh, Deputy Chief of Army Staff (P&S), the Colonel of the Regiment of 62 CAVALRY.In its ninth year, the 62nd Cavalry took part in the 1965 War against Pakistan.The Regiment  celebrated its Golden Jubilee with a mounted parade reviewed by the Chief of Army Staff on 31 March 2006.The Regiment was honoured by President Neelam Sanjiva Reddy during its silver Jubilee when he presented a Guidon to them on 31 March 1981.The celebrations were attended by the Chief Minister of Punjab, Capt.The regiment, equipped with obsolete Sherman tanks fought modern Pakistani Patton tanks and outgunned and out-tanked them
Edited sentence: And a fight that what was initially perceived as an unequal struggle between the humble Sherman and the potent Patton would take the world by surprise, as 62 CAVALRY outgunned and out-tanked the might of modern metallurgy.In its ninth year, the 62nd Cavalry took on the elite of Pakistan’s Armour head on in the 1965 operations.The Regiment  celebrated its Golden Jubilee with in an impressive mounted parade reviewed by the Chief of Army Staff on 31 March 2006.The Regiment was honoured by the President during its silver Jubilee, when Late Shri Neelam Sanjiva Reddy presented a Guidon to the Regiment on 31 March 1981.The celebrations were graced by the Honourable Chief Minister of Punjab, Capt Amarinder Singh, in recognition of the services rendered by 62 CAVALRY personnel who hail from Punjab apart from Lt Gen GD Singh, Deputy Chief of Army Staff (P&S), the Colonel of the Regiment of 62 CAVALRY