Original sentence: "  After the editors obtained the disciplinary letter, the English professor's factual mistakes and fraudulent signatures were then circled in red ink and printed on page 18 of the October 2005 issue.The magazine gives sarcastic "awards" to faculty and students for holding views which the staff of the Centurion consider "liberal".The radio show hosts shared the views of the students and pledged to help the Centurion on the issue.This occurred after they confronted Professor Dienst with a video camera and asked him if he believed in the United States Constitution, since he supposedly told a dissenting Republican student "You have no first amendment rights.Unsatisfied with the response, the students created a video , which caught the attention of the Jersey Guys on 101.5 FM
Edited sentence: " After the editors obtained the disciplinary letter, the English professor's factual mistakes and fraudulent signatures were then circled in red ink and printed on page 18 of the October 2005 issue.But most controversial are the paper's sarcastic "awards" given to faculty and students for holding different views than the staff of the Centurion.The famed radio show hosts shared their disgust and outrage over the situation, and have pledged to help the Centurion in their fight to fly the American flag at Rutgers.This occurred after they confronted Professor Dienst with a videocamera and asked him if he believed in the United States Constitution, since he supposedly told a dissenting Republican student "You have no first amendment rights.Unsatisfied with the response, the students created a video available on Video Google, which caught the attention of the Jersey Guys on 101.5 FM