Original sentence: As of October 2019, Sims has over 400,000 subscribers.Her boyfriend, Dan Grenander lives in Portsmouth, England however has made attempts to move permanently to the United States.Kayla Marie Sims, also known by her YouTube handle lilsimsie, is a YouTuber and Twitch streamer.Sims is most well known for playing The Sims 4 and collaborations with EA on projects such as The Sims 4: Snowy Escape and EA Game Changers.Sims lives in Orlando, Florida and has a younger brother and sister, Brett and Shanna
Edited sentence: As of October 2020, Sims has over 1,000,000 subscribers.Kayla Marie Sims, also known by her YouTube handle lilsimsie, is the girlfriend of twitch streamer Dan Grenander and internet personality.Sims is most well known for her realtionship with twitch streamer duckdan and her collaborations with EA on projects such as The Sims 4: Snowy Escape and EA Game Changers.Sims lives in Orlando, Florida and has a younger brother and sister, Brett and Shanna, her boyfriend, Dan Grenander lives in Portsmouth, England however has made attempts to move permanently to the United States.Sims was nominated for Streamer of the year in the 2018 Summer in the City Awards