Original sentence: He played baritone sax, wrote Jeru, Venus De Milo, and Rocker, and arranged Godchild and Darn That Dream.In the late 1940s, Mulligan worked with the Claude Thornhill band as an arranger and baritone sax player.It was there that he met fellow arranger Gil Evans.Later Mulligan joined with Miles Davis on the ground-breaking album Birth of the Cool.Mulligan was a versatile musician, playing piano, and clarinet, although he was best known for his baritone saxophone playing, but early in his career, his reputation was built as an arranger
Edited sentence: Mulligan was a versatile musician, playing piano, and clarinet, although he was best known for his saxophone playing, but early in his career, his reputation was built as an arranger.Mulligan's first important recording contribution was on Miles Davis' ground-breaking Birth of the Cool on which he played a brilliant baritone sax, he also wrote Jeru, Venus De Milo, and Rocker and arranged Godchild and Darn That Dream