Original sentence: During the storm controversy began on Senator Ted Cruz's flight to Mexico, and representatives Alexandria Ocasio-Cortez and Beto O'Rourke crowdsourced humanitarian aid to Texans in the storm.Over 3 million Texans were without power and over 4 million were under boil notices
Edited sentence: Food and water shortages plagued the state and severe criticism was dealt to ERCOT.Over 3 million Texans were without power (some for days at a time) and over 4 million were under boil notices.Representative Alexandria Ocasio Cortez and Beto O'Rourke began efforts to raise money and goods for Texans in the storm.Senator Ted Cruz came under scrutiny when it was released that his family traveled to Mexico during Winter Storm Uri