Original sentence: Foley's computer based conversations with a 16 year old, who worked as a congressional page, is being investigated by the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) and the state of Florida Department of Law Enforcement.The Mark Foley scandal occurred in late September and early October of 2006 when ABC News reported that Republican congressman Mark Foley had  engaged in instant message conversations with and sent e-mails to subordinate adolescent boys
Edited sentence: Foley's computer based conversations with these boys, who worked as congressional pages, is being investigated by the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) and the state of Florida Department of Law Enforcement.The Mark Foley scandal occurred in late September and early October of 2006 when ABC News reported that Republican congressman Mark Foley had repeatedly engaged in sexually explicit instant message conversations with and sent suggestive e-mails to subordinate adolescent boys