Original sentence: By 1909 the school library had 6,000 books valued at $3,500, and Ray D.During November of that year the library received new furniture as Eaton Hall opened and many departments were moved to it from Waller Hall
Edited sentence: By 1909 the school library had 6,000 books valued at $3,500 and Ray D.During November of that year the library received new furniture as Eaton Hall opened, and many departments were moved to it from Waller Hall