Original sentence: General Motors Place, the Canucks' arena, will be known as "Canada Hockey Place," for being the primary ice hockey venue.The Olympics will also affect the Vancouver Canucks, as they'll be faced with the longest road trip in NHL history, having to play 14 straight road games from January 27 to March 13, 2010 so that GM Place could be prepared for the Olympics
Edited sentence: General Motors Place, the Vancouver Canucks' home arena, will be known as "Canada Hockey Place," for being the primary ice hockey venue.The Olympics will also affect the Canucks, as they will be faced with the longest road trip in NHL history, having to play 14 straight road games from January 27 to March 13, 2010 so that GM Place could be prepared for the Olympics