Original sentence: Scissor Sisters are an American band who formed in 2001, whose style draws from disco, glam-rock/pop and the gay-club scene of New York City
Edited sentence: Scissor Sisters are an American band who formed in 2001 and have had massive success in the UK and Ireland; their US record sales are modest compared with their UK sales, where they are now one of the decade's biggest-selling acts.Their influences are disco, glam-rock/pop and the gay-club scene of New York City