Original sentence: Contrastingly, in a notable jump, the MPAA in 1996 claimed that the film industry employed 750,000 Americans, a number that remains on the MPAA’s Web Site for 2006
Edited sentence: Be that as it may, a survey of these numbers is revealing, if not frustrating.Finally, in 1996, the MPAA, seemingly out of nowhere, claimed that the film industry employed 750,000 Americans, a number that remains on the MPAA’s Web Site for 2006.Gathering and analyzing employment statistics on the motion picture industry is the most challenging and perplexing part of studying runaway production.The numbers vary greatly depending on the source and its reliability