Original sentence: On July 25, 1969, 21-year-old "Family" member, musician and aspiring actor Bobby Beausoleil left Spahn Ranch, accompanied by Brunner and another group member named Susan Atkins to pay a visit to an associate named Gary Allen Hinman at his home in Topanga Canyon, just north of Malibu
Edited sentence: On July 25, 1969, 21-year-old "Family" member, musician and aspiring actor Bobby Beausoleil left Spahn Ranch, accompanied by Brunner and another group member named Susan Atkins to pay a visit to an associate named Gary Allen Hinman at his home in Topanga Canyon, just south of Malibu