Original sentence: On July 4 2009,The Coronas played in hte Donegal Music Festival 2009.The Coronas are set to play the feile festival in derry northern ireland on August 2nd with a variety of local bands and acts such as The Reverb Lost expectations and a few others
Edited sentence: On July 4 2009,The Coronas played in the Donegal Music Festival 2009.The Coronas are set to play the feile festival in Derry,  Northern Ireland on August 2nd with a variety of local bands and acts such as The Reverb Lost expectations and a few others