Original sentence: Another author who criticized the treatment of Hamsun was Jens Bjørneboe, who among other things said "Other Norwegian writers are only world-famous in Norway, but Hamsun is so the world over"
Edited sentence: Another author who criticized the treatment of Hamsun was Jens Bjørneboe, who sarcastically remarked "Other Norwegian writers are only world-famous in Norway, but Hamsun is so the world over"