Original sentence: Members and supporters are concerned about the sociopolitical problems associated with sharia law in Australia; as well as religiously-motivated human rights abuses against women and indigenous religious minorities in Organization of Islamic Cooperation (OIC) member countries.Q Society circulated a petition to object to the proposed increase and re-dedication, which was supported by about 600 signatories, including members of the local orthodox Jewish community.Since most members of the prayer group were not local residents but taxi drivers from across Melbourne, locals were concerned about the ramifications of this planning proposal.The movement was developed in support of a Palestinian state, but many people who are not anti-semites state it actually has the declared aim to isolate, deligitimize and ultimately destroy the modern Jewish State of Israel.The prolific Islamic researcher, blogger and best-selling American author Robert Spencer is a board member and the international patron of the association.The single-storey 3-bedroom house was used mainly by local mother groups and other social activities
Edited sentence: Members and supporters are concerned about the sociopolitical problems associated with sharia law in Australia; as well as religiously motivated human rights abuses against women and indigenous religious minorities in Organization of Islamic Cooperation (OIC) member countries.Q Society circulated a petition to object to the proposed increase and rededication, which was supported by about 600 signatories, many being members of the local orthodox Jewish community.Since most members of the prayer group were not locals but taxi drivers from all over Melbourne converging on the quiet neighbourhood, locals were concerned about the ramifications of this planning proposal.The modern day BDS campaign was developed in support of a Palestinian state, but many people who are not anti-semites state it actually has the declared aim to isolate, deligitimize and ultimately destroy the modern Jewish State of Israel.The prolific Islamic researcher, blogger and best selling American author Robert Spencer is a board member and the international patron of the association.This is a single story 3-bedroom house used mainly by local mother groups and other social activities