Original sentence: Ulysses is primarily focused on Bloom and the contemporary-odyssey he embarks upon throughout Dublin over the course of the single day of June 16, 1904 (though episodes 1 to 3, as well as 9 and to a lesser extent 7, are more concerned with Stephen Dedalus), the various types of people and themes he encounters
Edited sentence: Ulysses is primarily focused on Bloom and the micro-odyssey he embarks upon throughout Dublin over the course of the single day of June 16, 1904 (though episodes 1 to 3, as well as 9 and to a lesser extent 7, are more concerned with Stephen Dedalus), the various types of people and themes he encounters