Original sentence: They were teacher's pet Joe (Lawrence), tough guy Mitchell (Wernham), wheelchair-user emo Rem Dog (Binstead), inappropriately flirtatious Chantelle (Runeckles), feminine homosexual Stephen (Williams), the studious yet rebellious Jing (Alexander) and outwardly fiery Cleopatra (Opia)
Edited sentence: They were teacher's pet Joe (Lawrence), tough guy Mitchell (Wernham), wheelchair-user emo Rem Dog (Binstead), inappropriately flirtatious Chantelle (Runeckles), camp gay Stephen (Williams), the studious yet rebellious Jing (Alexander) and outwardly fiery Cleopatra (Opia)