Original sentence: Bobby Baccalieri's father Bacala, Sr.Inspired by a story from Ralph about how Tony, his father, and Silvio Dante got made, Jackie and his friends Dino Zerilli and Carlo make a similar move and attempt to rob Eugene Pontecorvo's Saturday night card game, so they can gain recognition from the family, possibly getting them respected and made as well
Edited sentence: Bobby Baccalieri's father Bobby Baccalieri, Sr.Inspired by a story from Ralph about how Tony, his father, and Silvio Dante got made, Jackie and his friends Dino Zerilli and Carlo Renzi.make a similar move and attempt to rob Eugene Pontecorvo's Saturday night card game, so they can gain recognition from the family, possibly getting them respected and made as well