Original sentence: Organizations that seek to profit from mass-marketing, may view public relations as a valuable aspect of an overall business and marketing strategy.Public relations (PR) deals with the control or manipulation of public opinion, through processes that control the presentation of image and message presented by a client.Public relations agents or "officials" make use of media and other mediums to convey messages to the public on behalf of a private client, with the intention of influencing public opinion and action
Edited sentence: Organizations that seek to profit from the mass market, may view the public relations as a valuable aspect of an overall business and marketing strategy.Public relations (PR) is the aspect of mass-marketing that deals with the control or manipulation of public opinion, through processes that control the presentation of the image and message presented by a client.Public relations agents or "officials" make use of media to convey messages to the public on behalf of a private client, with the intention of influencing public opinion and action