Original sentence: From August 16 to August 27 1944, during the Battle for Paris, small units of the Resistance Network shot on location, developed and edited l'insurrection Nationale inséparable de la Libération Nationale ("the national insurrection inseparable from the national liberation") which was re-named La Libération de Paris ("the liberation of Paris") when released in French theaters on September 1, 1944
Edited sentence: From August 16 to August 27 1944, during the Battle for Paris, small units of the Resistance Network shot on location, developed and edited l'insurrection Nationale inséparable de la Libération Nationale ("the national insurrection inseparable from the national liberation") which was then re-named La Libération de Paris ("the liberation of Paris") for its release in French theaters on September 1, 1944