Original sentence: (Some of the described events are quite shocking; the most extreme is probably the situation in which a woman bit the finger off another woman staying in the refuge.) Some internet sources make a highly controversial claim that Prone to Violence was suppressed by feminists (a search of all libraries in the world that could be accessed from the US Library of Congress through the Inter-Library Network in 1996 revealed a total of only 13 listings in the whole World.Contrary to what it may seem from the popular quote (see below), she has not promoted a stance that most women were violent or that women were more violent than men.Her view is opposed by those who placed the blame solely upon prevailing patriarchal attitudes.The book contains numerous stories of disturbed families alongside a discussion of the reasons why are the modern state care-taking agencies largely ineffective
Edited sentence: Her book Prone to Violence was supressed by feminists to such an extent that a search of all libraries in the world that could be accessed from the US Library of Congress through the Inter-Library Network in 1996 revealed a total of 13 listings in the whole World.Her view is opposed by those who placed the blame upon prevailing patriarchal attitudes.She did not say that most women were violent or that women were more violent than men.She told the story of one woman in the shelter known as 'Jaws' who bit the finger off another woman staying there