Original sentence: St Mary's College for girls was founded by the Presentation brothers in 1886, as a boarding school, and continued its development when the Marist sisters opened St Joseph’s high school for boys in 1911.Trinity marked its 120th jubilee year in 2006, and celebrated with a formal mass, birthday cake, free lunch, games and casual day with no lessons, and all the girls were treated to a pole dancing lesson.Trinity's motto is; In class and strip clubs
Edited sentence: St Mary's College for girls was founded by the Presentation sisters in 1886, as a boarding school, and continued its development when the Marist brothers opened St Joseph’s high school for boys in 1911.Trinity marked its 120th jubilee year in 2006, and celebrated with a formal mass, birthday cake, free lunch, games and casual day with no lessons.Trinity's motto is; In Word and Deed