Original sentence: Although intelligent design is a pseudoscientific religious idea, the film presents it as science-based, without giving a detailed definition of the concept or attempting to explain it on a scientific level.It portrays the scientific theory of evolution as a contributor to communism, fascism, atheism, eugenics and, in particular, Nazi atrocities in the Holocaust.Other than briefly addressing issues of irreducible complexity, Expelled examines intelligent design as a political issue
Edited sentence: Besides than briefly addressing issues of irreducible complexity, Expelled examines intelligent design as a political issue.Of couse, evolutionists scientists portrait intelligent design as a pseudoscientific religious idea, the film presents it as science-based.Some see as it portrays the scientific theory of evolution as a contributor to communism, fascism, atheism, eugenics and, in particular, Nazi atrocities in the Holocaust