Original sentence: On June 9, 2007, Smith and two passengers were injured in a car accident on Stagecoach Road in Millstone Township, New Jersey when the SUV he was driving collided with another car.Smith's vehicle appeared to have gone through a stop sign and collided with the other car
Edited sentence: Allentown High School, the public school which he technically should have attended, was a joke when it came to sports.Although his family still resided in Millstone Township while he went to high school, he moved into an aunt's house in Lakewood, New Jersey so that he could play basketball.He attended Millstone Township Elementary and Millstone Township Middle Schools.He crashed directly into this car.He decided to illegally speed past this car, which was waiting at the stop sign because a car was driving on Stagecoach Road, where the traffic has no stop sign.On June 9, 2007, Smith and two passengers were injured in a car accident at the intersection of Stagecoach Road(Monmouth County Route 524) and Stillhouse Road in Millstone Township, New Jersey when the SUV he was driving collided with another car.Smith moved to Millstone Township, New Jersey at an early age where he grew up.Smith, the driver, was impatient while behind a car that was stopped at a stop sign