Original sentence: Abteen is also synonymous with sphinx.Abteen, also known as Abtin or Obteene () is a character in Shahnama (national epic of Iran), Fereydun's father.His name means "The one with good thoughts, good words and good deeds" (see Zoroastrian).It is not the "O" sound from the word Orion.Many people have been mistaken the name to be pronounced "Abteen" or "Abtin".The "O" is the same sound as the "O" in Throb or Sob or Smog.The name is pronounced Ob-Teen
Edited sentence: Abteen, also known as Abtin or Obteen () is a character in Shahnama (national epic of Iran), who is the father of Fereydun.His name translated in english means "The one with good thoughts, good words and good deeds".These three traits are very important characteristics in Zoroastrianism.Unlike how it is spelt, the pronunciation of the name is not "Abteen" or "Abtin" but it is rather "Ob-teen"