Original sentence: Hines is a Houston, Texas-based real estate developer and founder of Hines Interests that has developed over 205 million square feet in more than 650 properties worldwide, including skyscrapers, corporate headquarters, mixed-use centers, industrial parks, and master-planned resort and residential communities throughout the United States and in 11 other countries including: the United Kingdom, France, Spain, Mexico, Poland, Russia, Germany, Brazil, Italy, Argentina, and China.The Urban Land Institute gave their Award for Excellence to Hines' famed Houston Galleria, designed by Hellmuth, Obata & Kassabaum; and to Norwest Center in Minneapolis, which was designed by Cesar Pelli
Edited sentence: Hines is a Houston, Texas-based real estate developer and founder of Hines Interests that has developed over 205 million square feet in more than 650 properties worldwide, including stunning skyscrapers, premier corporate headquarters, mixed-use centers, industrial parks, and master-planned resort and residential communities throughout the United States and in 11 other countries including: the United Kingdom, France, Spain, Mexico, Poland, Russia, Germany, Brazil, Italy, Argentina, and China.The Urban Land Institute bestowed their Award for Excellence to Hines' famed Houston Galleria, designed by Hellmuth, Obata & Kassabaum; and to Norwest Center in Minneapolis, which was designed by Cesar Pelli