Original sentence: Harry Helmsley died of pneumonia at a hospital in Scottsdale, Arizona and left all of his empire ($5.5 billion) to his wife Leona.Helmsley (March 4,1909 – January 4, 1997) was a real estate mogul who built a company that became one of the biggest property holders in the United States
Edited sentence: Harry Helmsley died of pneumonia at a hospital in Scottsdale, Arizona and left all of his empire ($5.5 billion) to his beloved wife Leona.Helmsley (March 4,1909 - January 4, 1997) was a real estate mogul who built a company that became one of the biggest property holders in the United States