Original sentence: As of March 2009 Etihad Airways serves 54 destinations and Etihad Crystal Cargo serves 10 destinations in 38 countries across Africa, Asia, Europe, North America and Oceania
Edited sentence: As of August 2009 Etihad Airways serves 54 destinations and Etihad Crystal Cargo serves 10 destinations in 38 countries across Africa, Asia, Europe, North America and Oceania