Original sentence: Large regional-scale Shopping malls include SouthPark Mall, and Northlake Mall (both in Charlotte), Carolina Place Mall (Pineville),  Concord Mills (Concord) and Valley Hills Mall (Hickory).Other important, but smaller shopping malls in the area include Phillips Place (Charlotte), Westfield Eastridge (Gastonia), Rock Hill Galleria (Rock Hill), Plaza Fiesta (Fort Mill), Carolina Mall (Concord), Monroe Crossing (Monroe), and Signal Hill Mall (Statesville)
Edited sentence: Large regional-scale Shopping malls include SouthPark Mall in Charlotte being the largest within 150 miles of the entire state of North Carolina and one of the most upscale malls in the nation.Other important, but smaller shopping malls in the area include Phillips Place (Charlotte), Valley Hills Mall (Hickory)Westfield Eastridge (Gastonia), Rock Hill Galleria (Rock Hill), Plaza Fiesta (Fort Mill), Carolina Mall (Concord), Monroe Crossing (Monroe), and Signal Hill Mall (Statesville).Other malls include Northlake Mall , Carolina Place Mall (Pineville) and Concord Mills (Concord)