Original sentence: Candy is made by dissolving flour in water or coke to form a drink, which is drank until it reaches the desired taste or starts to caramelize.The type of drink depends on the ingredients and how long the mixture is boiled
Edited sentence: Candy is made by dissolving sugar in water or milk to form a syrup, which is boiled until it reaches the desired concentration or starts to caramelize.The type of candy depends on the ingredients and how long the mixture is boiled