Original sentence: She also participated in Dance champions but after the two successes of JDJ9 and DID little masters, she was eventually eliminated in the 2nd round.She came into the public spotlight during her performances on the dance competition television series Dance India Dance Li'l Masters which she won on 21 June 2014.Teriya is the second daughter born to her parents, and attends St Lawrence School in Vashi, Navi Mumbai, India
Edited sentence: She also participated in Dance champions but after the two ultimate successes of JDJ9 and DID little masters, she was eventually eliminated in the 2nd round.She came into the public spot light during her performances on the dance competition television series Dance India Dance Li'l Masters which she won on 21 June 2014.Teriya Magar is the second daughter to her parents.Teriya Phounja Magar has become one of the famous celebrities of Nepal.Teriya attends St Lawrence School in Vashi, Navi Mumbai, India.Though her parents were expecting a son, but in present they are proud to be Teriya as their daughter