Original sentence: However, the Army of Pakistan can be brutal against their own citizens.Recently the army has been engaging in similar human rights violations in Balochistan.The Army of Pakistan's Operation 2005, as reported by the BBC is one of the most brutal in recent years by any country.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup and is currently the military dictator of Pakistan
Edited sentence: However, the Army of Pakistan can be brutal against treacherous citizens.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup and is currently the military leader of Pakistan