Original sentence: His most notable works are the English scripts for Vagrant Story and Final Fantasy X.Smith is an video game translator, best known for his work for Square Enix.The Vagrant Story localization, in particular, is widely regarded as a masterpiece
Edited sentence: Most notable among his translations are the Japanese to English script for Final Fantasy X, and the script of the Playstation game Vagrant Story.Smith is an exceptional translator, best known for his work for Square-Enix.The Vagrant Story localization is widely recognised as a masterpiece, incorporating antique English and poetic dialogue