Original sentence: " Pizzey said that most domestic violence is reciprocal, that means that both parteners are equally violent towards each other, she reached this conclusion when she asked the womens in her refuge about their violence and she concluded that most of the women were equally violent or more violent as their husbands.Pizzey says it was after death threats against her, her children, her grandchildren, and the killing of her dog, all of which she states were perpetrated by feminist activists , that she left England for North America.Some internet sources make the claim that Prone to Violence was suppressed by feminists (a search of all libraries in the world that could be accessed from the US Library of Congress through the Inter-Library Network in 1996 revealed a total of only thirteen listings in the worldwide), however there is no evedence to support the assertion
Edited sentence: " Pizzey said that most domestic violence is reciprocal, that means that both parteners are equally violent towards each other, she reached this conclusion when she asked the womens in her refuge about their violence and she found that most of the women were equally violent or more violent as their husbands.After death threats made by feminist activists against her, her children, her grandchildren, and the killing of her dog,, Pizzey left England for North America.Some internet sources make the claim that Prone to Violence was suppressed by feminists (a search of all libraries in the world that could be accessed from the US Library of Congress through the Inter-Library Network in 1996 revealed a total of only thirteen listings in the worldwide)