Original sentence: Ann Elizabeth Packer MBE (born 8 March 1942 in Moulsford, Oxfordshire, UK) is a former British sprinter, hurdler and long-jumper.She broke the world record with a time of 2min 1.1sec.She was in the 4 x 100 metres team that won a silver medal in the 1962 Commonwealth Games and a bronze medal in the 1962 European Championships
Edited sentence: Ann Elizabeth Packer MBE (born 8 March 1942 in Moulsford, Oxfordshire, UK) is a former British sprinter, hurdler and long jumper.She broke the world record with a time of 2:01.1 minutes.She was in the 4 x 100 metres relay team that won a silver medal in the 1962 Commonwealth Games and a bronze medal in the 1962 European Athletics Championships