Original sentence: Accounts from elderly Okinawans may verify that the men had made frequent trips to the village to rape the women that lived there but were ambushed and killed by men from the village on one of their return trips.While there are no official documents from US or Japanese sources that mention any instances of rape atrocities, there are anecdotal accounts that such acts may have occurred
Edited sentence: Accounts from elderly Okinawans suggest that the men had made frequent trips to the village to rape the women that lived there but were ambushed and killed by men from the village on one of their return trips.While there are no official documents from US or Japanese sources that mention any instances of mass rape, there are numerous anecdotal accounts that such acts may have occurred