Original sentence: At the top of the silos, the "Gold Medal Flour" sign still shines at night upon the Mississippi and across that the eternal competitor, the Pillsbury "A" Mill, next to the decorous water tower, which defiantly shines its message of "Pillsbury's Best Flour
Edited sentence: At the top of the silos, the "Gold Medal Flour" sign still shines at night upon the Mississippi and across that the eternal competitor, the Pillsbury "A" Mill, next to the decorous water tower, which defiantly shines it message of "Pillsbury's Best Flour