Original sentence: Angelica King is the baby daughter of already established characters Jimmy King and Nicola De Souza.She was born on the 06 August 2009; but had to be rushed off to the special baby unit because of difficulties of breathing
Edited sentence: Angelica King is the daughter of Jimmy King and Nicola De Souza.Angelica is born on 6 August 2009 and is immediatley rushed off to the special baby unit because of difficulties of breathing.She has appeared since 6 August 2009