Original sentence: Adem Jashari (November 28, 1955 – March 7, 1998) was born in Prekaz, in the Drenica region of Kosovo, at the time part of Yugoslavia.As a matter of fact, there was only one bullet wound in his right jaw, showing that Adem possibly shot himself.Jashari was a chief commander in the Drenica operation zone of the Kosovo Liberation Army, which was officially a terrorist organization at the time.Local villagers say that Adem shot himself.Serbs mostly consider him to be a war criminal
Edited sentence: ''In one village, Donji Prekaz, lived a local tough called Adem Jashari.Adem Jashari (November 28, 1955 – March 7, 1998) was born in Drenica, of Kosovo, at the time a part of Yugoslavia.He is considered to be one of the chief architects of the KLA, along with Zahir Pajaziti.He is known as (Albanian "Komandanti Legjendar" or (English) the Legendary Commander.He is renowned around Kosovo as a symbol of the ultimate martyr, he fought for 36 hours from his house against the regular Serb amy, leading to the death of dozens of his family members.Jashari was a chief commander in the Drenica operation zone of the Kosovo Liberation Army.Jashari was a patriot, risking his entire families life in order to achieve freedom from the oppressive Slobodan Milosevic, a convicted war criminal.Several years before he had killed a Serbian policeman and been convicted, but the Serbs were frightened to get him because he would shoot at them from his house.The honor "Hero of Kosovo" was awarded to him in 2008 by the Prime Minister of Kosovo.They had tried in January but were forced to retreat