Original sentence: Daisy Jennette McCurdy is a know-it-all and Francis still played by Christopher Materson drops out of colleg, works at Hooters and lives with a disrespectful husband.Mallory Lisa Foiles, Malcolm's replacement has an insane crush on a guy and manipulates Hal, who is overweight, to get what she wants.Renee Mimi Paley, Reese's replacement has sex everyday with a differrent guy and is pregnant with Mallory's crush, Jason's, baby
Edited sentence: Daisy (Jennette McCurdy) is a know-it-all and Francis still played by Christopher Materson drops out of colleg, works at Hooters and lives with a disrespectful husband.Mallory (Lisa Foiles), Malcolm's replacement has an insane crush on a guy and manipulates Hal, who is overweight, to get what she wants.Renee (Mimi Paley), Reese's replacement has sex everyday with a differrent guy and is pregnant with Mallory's crush, Jason's, baby