Original sentence: At the age of nine, she began sending out tapes to television shows leading her to perform on three of them.Due to this television appearance, she was discovered by German music producer Bob Arnz.She is the youngest of two children: she has an older brother, Andreas
Edited sentence: At the age of nine, she began sending out demo tapes to television shows leading her to perform on three of them.Her older brother is called Andreas.It was this television appearance, that lead to her being discovered by German music producer Bob Arnz.She is the younger of two children