Original sentence: He later studied composition at Hartt School of Music in Hartford, Connecticut with Robert Carl and Ingram Marshall, though is generally regarded as an autodidact in terms of his technical aptitude in electronic/digital music production, for which his “orchestrated loops” musical vocabulary—a real-time overlaying of guitar, voice and found objects designed to stimulate an ensemble in situ—has largely been considered influential
Edited sentence: He later studied composition at Hartt School of Music in Hartford, Connecticut with Robert Carl and Ingram Marshall.His “orchestrated loops” involve real-time overlaying of guitar, voice and found objects, designed to simulate an ensemble