Original sentence: Stepping into the children's book marketplace, Everett authored The One That Got Away (1992), an illustrated book for young readers that follows three cowboys as they attempt to corral "ones", the mischievous numerals
Edited sentence: Stepping into the children's book marketplace, Everett authored The One That Got Away (1992), a beautifully illustrated book for young readers that follows three cowboys as they attempt to corral "ones", the mischievous numerals