Original sentence: Paula is in Letter CVIII.Paula married her daughter, Paulina (d.They were involved in the events of the day, first the controversy concerning Origenism which influenced their relations with Bishop John II of Jerusalem , and later Paula's need of money, she having been ruined by her generosity
Edited sentence: A devoted mother, she married her daughter, Paulina (d.Paula is in Letter CVIII, which, though somewhat rhetorical, is a wonderful production.Their peace was disturbed by constant annoyances, first the controversy concerning Origenism which disturbed their relations with Bishop John II of Jerusalem , and later Paula's need of money, she having been ruined by her generosity