Original sentence: Korean stars have now become familiar faces throughout Asia - for example Choi Ji Woo, Kwon Sang-woo, Song Seung Heon, Bae Yong Joon, Won Bin, Hyun Bin, Bi/Rain, Lee Young Ae, Song Hye Kyo, Jang Dong Gun, Yoon Eun-hye, Joo Ji Hoon, Gong Yoo, Kim Tae Hee, Koo Hye Sun, Lee Min Ho,  Kim Bum, Jeon Ji Hyun , and Lee Jun Ki
Edited sentence: Korean stars have now become familiar faces throughout Asia - for example Choi Ji Woo, Kwon Sang-woo, Song Seung Heon, Bae Yong Joon, Won Bin, Hyun Bin, Bi/Rain, Lee Young Ae, Song Hye Kyo, Jang Dong Gun, Yoon Eun-hye, Joo Ji Hoon, Gong Yoo, Kim Tae Hee, Koo Hye Sun, Lee Min Ho,  Kim Hyun Joong, Jeon Ji Hyun , and Lee Jun Ki