Original sentence: Some Japanese politicians have argued that the former comfort women's testimony is inconsistent and unreliable, making it invalid.Some Japanese, such as historian Ikuhiko Hata, deny that there was organized forced recruitment of comfort women by the Japanese government or military
Edited sentence: Some Japanese historical revisionists, such as historian Ikuhiko Hata, deny that there was organized forced recruitment of comfort women by the Japanese government or military.Some censervative Japanese politicians have argued that the former comfort women's testimony is inconsistent and unreliable, making it invalid