Original sentence: Each year, the annual AAEC convention is held in a different North American city, allowing cartoonists and other association members -- including publishers, writers, historians and collectors -- the chance to meet face-to-face, talk shop and generally kvetch
Edited sentence: Each year, the annual AAEC convention is held in a different North American city, allowing cartoonists and other association members—including publishers, writers, historians and collectors—the chance to meet face-to-face, talk shop and generally kvetch