Original sentence: France started his career at Alfreton Town and after an impressive start to the season scoring 5 goals in 7 games he was signed for Hull City by then manager Peter Taylor on 26 September 2003 for a fee of £15,000.Ryan France (born 13 December, 1980 in Sheffield) is a professional footballer currently playing for Sheffield United
Edited sentence: Born in Sheffield, France started his career at Alfreton Town and after an impressive start to the season scoring 5 goals in 7 games he was signed for Hull City by then manager Peter Taylor on 26 September 2003 for a fee of £15,000.Ryan France (born 13 December 1980) is an English professional footballer currently playing for Sheffield United