Original sentence: After the Spanish Grand Prix he became the youngest man to lead the Formula One World Championship, taking that distinction from McLaren team founder Bruce Mclaren.He repeated this effort at the Spanish Grand Prix but this time, Alonso finished 3rd while Hamilton finished second.Massa (Brazil) who drives for Ferrari, won the race
Edited sentence: After the Spanish Grand prix he became the youngest man to lead the formula one world championship taking that distinction from McLaren team founder Bruce Mclaren.He repeated this effort at the Spanish Grand Prix but this time,Alonso finished 3rd while Hamilton finished second.Massa(Brazil) who drives for Ferrari,won the race