Original sentence: He enjoyed an association with the literary group centered on Archibald MacLeish.In 1946, Vazakas moved to Cambridge, Massachusetts, where he lived for the next 16 years.The following year he won an Amy Lowell Traveling Scholarship for 1962-63, renewed for 1963-64, and went to England.Vazakas continued writing poetry and gave occasional lectures and readings at Harvard University
Edited sentence: He enjoyed an association with the literary group centered on Archibald MacLeish that included John Ciardi and Richard Wilbur.He gave occasional lectures and readings at Harvard University and one at Brown Universtiy.He visited Paris and Majorca, but chiefly spent his time in southern England.In December 1945, a high point for Vazakas while awaiting publication of Transfigured Night was a joint reading with Tennessee Williams in the YMHA Poetry Center in New York.The following year Vazakas moved to Cambridge, Massachusetts, , where he lived for the next 16 years, although always maintaining close ties with Reading.The following year, on the recommendation of Archibald MacLeish, he won an Amy Lowell Traveling Scholarship for 1962-63, renewed for 1963-64, and went to England.Vazakas continued writing poetry and having it published in an increasing number of periodicals and some anthologies