Original sentence: After serving for two terms, Hammons commenced studies in summer 2012 at the University of Oklahoma College of Law.He gained national attention as he was elected on May 13, 2008, as a 19-year old freshman at the University of Oklahoma, after winning 70% of the vote in a runoff election against 70-year-old, three-time former Muskogee mayor Herschel McBride
Edited sentence: After serving for two terms with strong accomplishments in economic development and street improvements, he returned to his academic pursuits.He became a media sensation as historic groundbreaker as he was elected on May 13, 2008, as a 19-year old freshman at the University of Oklahoma, after winning 70% of the vote in a runoff election against 70-year-old, three-time former Muskogee mayor Herschel McBride.In the summer of 2012, Hammons commenced studies at the University of Oklahoma College of Law