Original sentence: DConE approaches back-off in a similar fashin to Carrier_sense_multiple_access_with_collision_detection.WANdisco designed DConE based on the Paxos Algorithm, a protocol for solving consensus in a network of unreliable systems
Edited sentence: DConE approaches back-off in a similar fashion to Carrier sense multiple access with collision detection.The DConE design is based on the Paxos Algorithm, a protocol for solving consensus in a network of unreliable systems.Without this the proposer could immediately initiate a new round and new agreement number, which can lead to extended periods of thrashing and result in performance degradation