Original sentence: Biographer David Dutton noted that "some observers believed that Clarissa was excessively protective and tended to exacerbate Eden's natural volatility" but also remarked on her devoted companionship and that "during the dark days of the Suez Crisis, [she] was at his side, supportive throughout".Even so, her knowledge of the inner workings of Government was such that she was able to record in her diary the precise stance, at a critical point of the Suez operation, of every member of the Cabinet:[E]ach was asked in turn what they felt about going on
Edited sentence: Even so, her knowledge of the inner workings of Government was such that she was able to record in her diary the precise stance, at a critical point of the Suez operation, of every member of the Cabinet:.Similarly, David Dutton, a biographer generally less sympathetic to Eden than Thorpe, while noting that "some observers believed that Clarissa was excessively protective and tended to exacerbate Eden's natural volatility", nevertheless remarked on her devoted companionship and that "during the dark days of the Suez Crisis, [she] was at his side, supportive throughout".[E]ach was asked in turn what they felt about going on