Original sentence: The 'Jimi Hendrix Experience' were an English/American rock band famous for the guitar work, original songs, outrageous style and performance of its eponymous frontman Jimi Hendrix on songs such as 'Hey Joe', 'Purple Haze', 'Foxy Lady', 'Fire', 'Little Wing', 'Spanish Castle Magic', 'All Along the Watchtower' and 'Voodoo Child (Slight Return)'
Edited sentence: The 'Jimi Hendrix Experience' was a powerfully influential, though short lived English/American rock band famous for the guitar work, original songs, outrageous style and performance of its eponymous frontman Jimi Hendrix on songs such as 'Hey Joe', 'Purple Haze', 'Foxy Lady', 'Fire', 'Little Wing', 'Spanish Castle Magic', 'All Along the Watchtower' and 'Voodoo Child (Slight Return)'