Original sentence: A month later, on October 10th, he married Isabella Mitchell, his housekeeper for the past five years, and formerly co-founder of his dance troupe.There were then two daughters; Gwendolyn (also known as Gwyneth), who died of appendicitis before Ewan's birth and Margaret, who later became a decorated member of the Women's Auxiliary Air Force in the Second World War and a a Justice of the Peace, before dying in a car accident in 1966
Edited sentence: A month later, on October 10, he married Isabella Mitchell, his housekeeper for the past five years, and formerly co-founder of his dance troupe.There were then two daughters; Gwendolyn (also known as Gwyneth), who died of appendicitis before Ewan's birth and Margaret, who later became a decorated member of the Women's Auxiliary Air Force in the Second World War and a Justice of the Peace, before dying in a car accident in 1966