Original sentence: Amrita Bazar Patrika (); is one of the oldest daily newspapers in South Asia and the oldest in Bangladesh.It was started by Sisir Ghosh and Moti Lal Ghosh, sons of Hari Naryan Ghosh, a rich merchant from Magura, in Jessore District during the Bengal Presidency of the British Raj (present day in Bangladesh)
Edited sentence: Amrita Bazar Patrika was one of the oldest daily newspapers in India.It was started by Sisir Ghosh and Moti Lal Ghosh, sons of Hari Naryan Ghosh, a rich merchant from Magura, in District Jessore, in Bengal Province of British Empire in India