Original sentence: According to the Fox News service, the Yucatan government (a state of Mexico) also produces educational materials (a comic book and DVD) to instruct its citizens on how to cross the border and how to avoid notice as an illegal immigrant once the border has been crossed.Grayson, Professor of Government at the College of William and Mary, has published an article on the website of the Center for Immigration Studies, a group seeking immigration restriction, that says, Many Mexican officials enjoy princely lifestyles, while expecting the United States to solve their social problems by allowing the border to serve as a safety-valve for job seekers..Mexico's elite has failed through omission and commission to make the difficult decisions necessary to use its country's enormous wealth to benefit the 50 percent of people who live in poverty
Edited sentence: According to the Fox News service, the Yucatan government (a state of Mexico) also produces educational materials (a comic book and DVD) to instruct its citizens on how to sneak across the border and how to avoid notice as an illegal immigrant once the border has been crossed.Grayson, Professor of Government at the College of William and Mary, has published an article on the website of the Center for Immigration Studies, that says, Many Mexican officials enjoy princely lifestyles, while expecting the United States to solve their social problems by allowing the border to serve as a safety-valve for job seekers..Mexico's elite has failed through omission and commission to make the difficult decisions necessary to use its country's enormous wealth to benefit the 50 percent of people who live in poverty