Original sentence: O'Brien has asthma and is a keen Middlesbrough Football Club fan; she has been involved in charity work with the club, including the Premier Leagues' Creating Chances program.She also frequently claims to hold the world record for wearing 42 socks on one foot and another record for tapping (
Edited sentence: She claims to hold the world record for wearing 42 socks on one foot, and another record for tapping.She has asthma.She is a keen Middlesbrough Football Club fan; she has been involved in charity work with the club, including the Premier League's Creating Chances program