Original sentence: Furthermore its author expresses personal animosity toward Moore due to Moore's not helping him liberate his father, imprisoned in Iran.However, the FrontPage article does not cite any sources that can be independently verified
Edited sentence: Furthermore, note that its author exposes his personal animosity toward Moore due to Moore's not helping him liberate his father, imprisoned in Iran.It should be noted, however, that this FrontPage article doesn't cite even a single source that can be independently verified; as such, it is an op-ed piece at best and unsubstantiated rumor at worst