Original sentence: In the Hermetic Lunar Week Calendar, months are observably related to the phases of the Moon.Official site Hermetic Lunar.This connection which was removed by Julius Caesar in 46 BCE when he ordered the adoption of a calendar whose months had 28, 29, 30 or 31 days.Thus, the calendar lacked any correlation with the lunar cycle
Edited sentence: In the Hermetic Lunar Week Calendar, months are observably related to the phases of the Moon, a connection which was removed by Julius Caesar in 46 BCE when he ordered the adoption of a calendar whose months had 28, 29, 30 or 31 days, and thus totally lacked any correlation with the lunar cycle, encouraging an alienation from Nature which was reinforced by other historical factors in succeeding centuries, and which has reached an extreme degree in the modern world.[] Hermetic Lunar Week Calendar