Original sentence: Hampton is also home to a small water/recreational park entitled Cedar Park.Hampton is also home to the Darlington sports arena and Night Sky Tours.It has two convenience stores, one of which has an LCBO and The Beer Store located inside.There are also three auto garages, one local pizza store, two coffee shops; Paddy's Market, a new and used appliances store, is also located in Hampton
Edited sentence: Hampton is also home to the Darlington sports arena, Night Sky Tours and Cedar Park (a small water/recreational park).It has two convenience stores, one of which has an LCBO and The Beer Store located inside, three auto garages, one local pizza store, two coffee shops, and Paddy's Market (a new and used appliances store)