Original sentence: Nestled among these prestigious private schools is the top-ranking Roland Park Elementary/Middle School, part of the Baltimore City Public School System.The K-8 school is widely considered a crown jewel in Maryland and has earned the Blue Ribbon for Academic Excellence from the state department of education.The neighborhood is home to several private schools:  Friends School of Baltimore, Gilman School, Roland Park Country School, the Bryn Mawr School, and Boys' Latin School of Maryland (collectively known as the Roland Park Five to locals)
Edited sentence: Nestled among these private schools is the Roland Park Elementary/Middle School, part of the Baltimore City Public School System.The K-8 school has earned the Blue Ribbon for Academic Excellence from the state department of education.The neighborhood is home to several private schools:  Friends School of Baltimore, Gilman School, Roland Park Country School, the Bryn Mawr School, and Boys' Latin School of Maryland