Original sentence: After September 11, 2001 attacks, a Sikh gas station owner in Arizona was fatally shot}} and hate crime in USA and UK against Sikhs has increased.In cases where people are unfamiliar or ignorant with the Sikh religion, Sikhs have been subjected to negative comments and sometimes worse in the form of hate crime.It is also common to see followers who don't keep the basic external features of the religion.Of the Indian ones over 60% of Sikhs live in the Northern Indian State of Punjab, where they form about two-thirds of the population.Originally, in the early 1800's they were followers of outstanding Sikh general, Akali Phula Singh, who was in the service of the Sikh ruler Maharaja Ranjit Singh.Sikh military personnel and Sikh non-military people commemorate the battle around the world every year on September 12th, it is referred to as "Saragarhi Day".They have won significant court battles to be allowed to keep their turbans in many of these professions, most notable being RCMP (Canada)
Edited sentence: A large majority of Westerner's are unfamiliar with the sikh religion and confuse the sikhs with middles easterner's or muslims.After Sept 11, a sikh gas station owner in Arizona was fatally shot.Hate crime in USA and UK against sikhs increased after Sept 11.It is also common to  see follower's  who  don't keep the  basic external features of the religion.Of the Indian ones over 60% of Sikhs live in the Northern Indian State of Punjab (India), where they form about two-thirds of the population.Originally, in the early 1800's they were followers of outstanding sikh general,  Akali Phula Singh, who was in the service of the sikh ruler Maharaja Ranjit Singh.Sikh military personnel and Sikh non-military people commemorate the battle around the World every year on September 12th, it is referred to as "Saragarhi Day".Sikhism Website for Youngsters - Young Sikhs Network.Sikhs are sometimes subjected to negative comments,  and sometimes worse in the form of hate crime.They have won significant court battles to be allowed to keep their turbans in many of these professions, most notable being RCMP(Canada)