Original sentence: , first opened in 1926 for theater-circuit owner Alexander Pantages.In 1998, there was a $20 million renovation completed to make the Orpheum more suitable for Broadway shows (the Orpheum, as well as the Golden Gate and Curran theatres in San Francisco, are part-owned by Tony Award-winning producer Carole Shorenstein Hays and partner James Nederlander); this was after a previous renovation in the 1970's
Edited sentence: , first opened in 1926 as one of the many theaters designed by architect B.In 1998, there was a $20 million renovation completed to make the Orpheum more suitable for Broadway shows (the Orpheum, as well as the Golden Gate and Curran theatres in San Francisco, are part-owned by Tony Award-winning producer Carole Shorenstein Hays and partner James Nederlander); this was after a previous renovation in the 1970s.Marcus Priteca for theater-circuit owner Alexander Pantages