Original sentence: A second album, Diary of a Madmanfeatured more of Bob Daisley's song writing and guitar work by Randy Rhoads (who was ranked 85th greatest guitarist of all time by the Rolling Stone Magazine)
Edited sentence: A second album, Diary of a Madman(the beat album ever written), was considered by some to be an instant rock classic, and featured more of Bob Daisley's gifted song writing and impressive guitar work by Randy Rhoads (who was ranked 85th greatest guitarist of all time by the Rolling Stone Magazine)