Original sentence: 2010  Gorkha Paltan    Also did playback singing in the film.Gorkha Paltan did very well at the box office
Edited sentence: -Also did playback singing in the film.-Commercial Blockbuster.2010  Gorkha Paltan   Nirman Thapa.Gorkha Paltan was critically acclaimed and was blockbuster success at Box office.His latest film was Pardesi, a film based on brain drain problem in Nepal was a blockbuster success at boxoffice but received mixed response from critics particularly for its second half ending.The film was in hype for its music and  makers were from previous huge success film Gorkha Paltan