Original sentence: And instead of going through a slight left hander and a wide, sharp right hander through the town of Stavelot, a shortcut was built that became a very fast, very wide right handed turn that went past Stavelot
Edited sentence: And finally, instead of going through a slight left hander that went into the town of Stavelot and a sharp right hander through a traffic circle in the center of Stavelot, a shortcut was built that became a very fast, very wide right handed turn that went past Stavelot.The slight right hander that was originally Holowell (the corner before Stavelot after the second Masta Straight) was eliminated