Original sentence: Although they believe their stance regarding blood transfusion to be based on the Bible, rather than on medical concerns, many Witnesses are highly critical of those who attempt to paint a picture of "life-giving blood transfusions" versus "death due to refusing a transfusion
Edited sentence: Although their stance regarding blood transfusion is based on the Bible, rather than on medical concerns, many Witnesses are highly critical of those who attempt to paint a picture of "life-giving blood transfusions" versus "death due to refusing a transfusion