Original sentence: But after making an error in an Edinburgh derby, Makalambay was replaced by Grzegorz Szamotulski at half-time due to a hamstring injury.Despite making two bad errors in a 3–3 draw with Aberdeen, Makalambay then made a penalty save in his next match, a 1–0 win over Inverness.Makalambay has received some criticism at times for his performances for Hibs, but he claimed during an interview with the Daily Record during December 2008 that he is under greater scrutiny than goalkeepers of other Scottish Premier League clubs.Makalambay signed for Chelsea as a youth.Watford manager Aidy Boothroyd suggested that he was interested in signing Makalambay in some capacity for the 2006–07 season, but this did not come to fruition
Edited sentence: But after making an error in an Edinburgh derby, Makalamby was replaced by Grzegorz Szamotulski at half-time due to a hamstring injury.Despite making two bad errors in a 3–3 draw with Aberdeen, Makalamby then made a penalty save in his next match, a 1–0 win over Inverness.Makalamby has received some criticism at times for his performances for Hibs, but he claimed during an interview with the Daily Record during December 2008 that he is under greater scrutiny than goalkeepers of other Scottish Premier League clubs.Makalamby signed for Chelsea as a youth.Watford manager Aidy Boothroyd suggested that he was interested in signing Makalamby in some capacity for the 2006–07 season, but this did not come to fruition