Original sentence: In 2007, Wesley was aiming to win the PSA Interschool Swimming for the fourth consecutive time, leading for most of the night, until the final scores came in and saw Wesley come second by only 5.5 points due to a disqualification
Edited sentence: In 2007, Wesley was aiming to win the PSA Interschool Swimming for the fourth consecutive time, leading for most of the night, until the final scores came in and saw Wesley come second to Trinity College by only 5.5 points due to a disqualification