Original sentence: It peaked at number eight in Australia.It stayed in the top 10 for fifteen weeks and in the top one hundred for thirty-two weeks.The single was released to radio while "I Don't Wanna" was still at radio.The song went to number one on the Billboard charts, received favorable reviews, and won several prestigious awards.The video placed seventh on BET's year-end special Notarized: Top 100 Videos of 2000 and ranks Aaliyah at 41 on Channel Max's Top 100 Sexiest Women
Edited sentence: It peaked at number 8 in Australia.It stayed in the top 10 for a massive fifteen weeks and in the top one hundred for thirty-two weeks.The single was released to radio while "I Don't Wanna" was still at radio, "Try Again" had peaked by the time "I Don't Wanna" was phasing out.The song went #1 on the Billboard charts, received favorable reviews, and won several prestigious awards.The video placed 7th on BET's year-end special Notarized: Top 100 Videos of 2000 and ranks Aaliyah as 41 on Channel Max's Top 100 Sexiest Women