Original sentence: After spending time in India teaching English, Allsopp returned to the UK and began a series of positions, working for Country Living, Food & Homes Magazines and her mother's business, Hindlip & Prentice Interiors, and studying at Christie's.Allsopp founded Kirmir Property Search, and in 1996 founded (and joined) Garrington Homefinders, but does not have any formal training or belong to professional property associations, such as the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors.The other participants on "The Girls" team were Clare Balding, Jacqueline Gold, Louise Redknapp and Lisa Snowdon
Edited sentence: After spending time in India contributing to teaching English, Allsopp having yet to admit to receiving any formal training to teach (such as the PGCE Postgraduate Certification of Education) Allsopp returned to the UK and had a series of temporary jobs, working for Country Living, Food & Homes Magazines and her mother's business, Hindlip & Prentice Interiors, and studying at Christie's.Allsopp founded Kirmir Property Search, and in 1996 founded (and joined) Garrington Homefinders.Although other participants on "The Girls" team were Clare Balding, Jacqueline Gold, Louise Redknapp and Lisa Snowdon, viewers whom watched noted infighting between Allsopp and other members including with her peer, the boss of Ann Summers Jacqueline Gold over who should be in charge.However, Allsopp has yet to admit to any formal training leading to membership of Professional Bodies.Such a body is typified by the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors, an organisation having a global remit with 140,000 members operating out of 146 countries, professed to be the leading organisation in the workd for professionals of property, and enabling practioners to gaine membership through both non-graduate and graduate routes.Whereas viewers heard Allsopp saying to Jacqueline Gold "You clearly don't think I'm capable of anything", before walking out, Allsopp returned the following day