Original sentence: Critics of the viewpoint of Goodall and other such advocates hold that it trivializes the term genocide, offends human dignity, and distracts attention from key human issues.Goodall has been a consistent advocate of great ape personhood, that is, treating all hominids as "persons", and not as "animals".National Geographic produced a poignant piece on the social life of Great Apes, entitled "Social Climbers" that supported the view that the extinction of man's nearest relatives would certainly lead to ignorance of human origins and thus of the nature of human conflict, and in so doing might extinct man himself.The United Nations itself may be tending towards this view.This was in response to the crisis of African "bushmeat" including Chimpanzee, Bonobo, and Gorilla flesh, presently being sold in African cities
Edited sentence: Critics of her views, and those of other such advocates, hold that it trivializes the term genocide, offends human dignity, and is one of many unreasonable animal rights positions that distracts human attention from key human issues.Despite its extreme assumption of causality, the United Nations itself may be tending towards this view.Goodall has been a consistent advocate of great ape personhood, that is, treating all hominids as "persons" not as "animals".National Geographic produced a poignant piece on the social life of Great Apes, entitled "Social Climbers" that stated bluntly that the extinction of man's nearest relatives would certainly lead to ignorance of human origins and thus of the nature of human conflict, and in so doing might tend to extinct man himself.This was in response to the crisis of African "bushmeat" including Chimpanzee and Bonobo and Gorilla flesh, presently being sold in African cities