Original sentence: About 70 percent of the people in Taiwan also speak Taiwanese, a variety of Min-nan.About half of the Taiwanese population can be considered religious believers, most of whom identify themselves as Buddhists or Taoists.Taiwan's culture is a blend of traditional Chinese with significant Japanese and Western influences including Dutch, Spanish and American.The island of Taiwan (Traditional: 臺灣, Simplified: 台湾, Pinyin: Táiwān, Wade-Giles: T'ai-wan, Taiwanese: Tâi-oân) is located off the coast of mainland China in the Pacific Ocean
Edited sentence: About 70 percent of the people in the country of Taiwan also speak Taiwanese, a variety of Min-nan.Taiwan's culture is a blend of traditional Chinese with influences from the rest of the world.The majority of the Taiwanese population can be considered religious believers, most of whom identify themselves as Buddhists or Taoists.The self-governing, independent country of Taiwan (Traditional: 臺灣, Simplified: 台湾, Pinyin: Táiwān, Wade-Giles: T'ai-wan, Taiwanese: Tâi-oân) is located off the coast of mainland China in the Pacific Ocean