Original sentence: Kidd, senior officer of the fleet, and Captain Franklin Van Valkenburgh, commander of the USS Arizona, both rushed to the bridge of Arizona and organized the defense until killed by a bomb that hit the bridge
Edited sentence: Kidd, senior officer of the fleet, and Captain Franklin Van Valkenburgh, commander of the USS Arizona, both courageously rushed to the bridge of Arizona and organized the defense until killed by a bomb that hit the bridge