Original sentence: It is common practice in St John to issue rank to those in a position of authority.It is mainly a Youth focus, and is not considered a great deal in "Operations".Order of St John Rank insignia.The officers of the Order of St John are to receive the same marks of respect (e.While the order is not a Government organisation, since the recognition of the Order by Queen Victoria as a Royal Order of Chivalry, the ranks of order of St John have carried the equivalent of British Army Rank.salute) as their other service equivalents, as do the officers of the Order of St John salute their other Service equivalents
Edited sentence: It is common practise in St John to issue rank to those in a position of Authority, It is mainly a Youth focus, and is not considered a great deal in "Operations"'''.Order of St John Officer's are to recieve the same marks of respect (Salute) as their other service equivilents, as do the Order of St John Officer's Salute to their other Service equivelents.While the order is not a Government based organisation, The order of St John has carried the equivilent of British Army Rank, since the recognition of the Order by Queen Victoria as a Royal Order of Chivalry