Original sentence: Through an executive order in 2011, President Obama laid out a student loan plan, “Pay as you Earn,” that would allow students to pay off debts as they acquire funds
Edited sentence: Through an executive order in 2011, President Obama laid out a student loan plan that allows students to pay off debts as they acquire funds, suitably titled “Pay as you Earn”, so that student loans could be paid off without placing too much of a burden of debt on students