Original sentence: Ingo Swann, one of the founders of remote viewing.Joseph McMoneagle, one of the early remote viewers.Paul Smith, remote viewer credited with authoring/editing the original CRV training manual.Remote viewing (RV) is a procedure developed by parapsychologists at the Stanford Research Institute to allegedly perform clairvoyance under controlled conditions.Remote viewing allegedly allows a viewer  to use his or her clairvoyant abilities to "view", i.Somewhat similar to astral projection, the phenomenon involves a belief in the projection of consciousness to remote locations, and is considered a pseudoscience by mainstream scientists
Edited sentence: Ingo Swann, the founder of remote viewing protocols now in widespread use.It is essentially based on the belief that all data exists in a matrix and this matrix can be accessed by the human mind using a protocol that allows the viewer to remain fully conscious while targetting the place, time or event.Joseph McMoneagle, one of the early remote viewers and the most successful.Remote viewing  allows a viewer  to use his or her clairvoyant abilities to "view", i.Remote viewing (RV) is a procedure developed by parapsychologists at the Stanford Research Institute to  perform clairvoyance under controlled conditions.Somewhat similar to astral projection, the phenomenon involves a belief in the projection of consciousness to remote locations.Targetting an event in time is done as easily as targetting in location or space.The classic definition of remote viewing is the acquisition of data and impressions using other than the five known senses