Original sentence: 73.3% of Weymouth residents have qualifications, which is slightly below the Dorset average of 73.8%.8.8% of residents have higher qualifications (Level 4 +), about half the Dorset average of 18.3%.In 2006, 31% of students at Wey Valley, and 58% of students at All Saints' and Budmouth, attained five or more A* to C GCSEs including English and mathematics.Some secondary and A-Level students commute to Dorchester to attend The Thomas Hardye School; in 2007, 79% of Hardye school students received five or more A* to C GCSEs, and 78% of all A-Level results were A to C grades
Edited sentence: 73.3 % of Weymouth residents have qualifications, which is slightly below the Dorset average of 73.8 %.8.8 % of residents have higher qualifications (Level 4 +), about half the Dorset average of 18.3 %.In 2006, 31 % of students at Wey Valley, and 58 % of students at All Saints' and Budmouth, attained five or more A* to C GCSEs including English and mathematics.Some secondary and A-Level students commute to Dorchester to attend The Thomas Hardye School; in 2007, 79 % of Hardye school students received five or more A* to C GCSEs, and 78 % of all A-Level results were A to C grades