Original sentence: Although ethological work tended to be in agreement with Bowlby, work like that just described led ethologists to disagree with Bowlby and Ainsworth on some of the details of the child's interactions with its mother and other people and press for further observational data.Ethologiets objected to psychologists writing as if there was an "entity which is 'attachment'", existing over and above the observable measures
Edited sentence: Although ethologists tended to be in agreement with Bowlby, work like that just described led ethologists to disagree with Bowlby and Ainsworth on some of the details of the child's interactions with its mother and other people and press for further observational data.Ethologists objected to psychologists writing as if there was an "entity which is 'attachment', existing over and above the observable measures