Original sentence: At least 4 demonstrators were killed at the scene, with another 5 dying later of their injuries.The May 30 Movement or May 30 incident ( May 30, 1925) was a labor and anti-imperalist movement during the middle-period of the Republic of China era.The Second Zhili–Fengtian War of 1924 was more destructive than previous factional turmoil and bankrupted the Beijing government
Edited sentence: At least fourth demonstrators were killed at the scene, with another five dying later of their injuries.The May Thirtieth Movement ( May 30, 1925) was a labor and anti-imperalist movement during the middle-period of the Republic of China era.The Second Zhili–Fengtian War of 1924 was more destructive than previous military turmoil and bankrupted the Beijing government.The victory of the pro-Japanese Zhang Zuolin alienated nationalists