Original sentence: Also, the fate of Indigenous Australians has been a source of harsh criticism abroad and often domestically as well - specifically the accounts of the Stolen Generation and the Tasmanian Aborigines.Australians seeing the detention policy as unnecessary are divided into two camps: one group believes the detainees should be included in the Australian community, while the other group believes that the detainees should be promptly sent back to their point of origin.Many East Timorese, including the political leaders; and indeed some Australians — see this state of affairs as exploitative and unfair, especially since East Timor desperately needs money to further its development and has few other valuable resources.The Australian government has received much criticism regarding this policy
Edited sentence: (though the program (Sixty minutes on the Nine Network) which represented this view is known for its shock spin stories and lack of professional journalism and is even regularly mocked).Also, the fate of Indigenous Australians has been a source of harsh criticism abroad and domestically as well - specifically the accounts of the Stolen Generation and the Tasmanian Aborigines.Australians seeing the detention policy as unnecessary are divided into two camps: one group believes the detainees should be included in the Australian community, while the other group believes that the detainees should be promptly sent back to their point of origin, this situation is was at least aggravated or created by the allegedly rascist immigration minister Amanda Vanstone under the Howard government.However it should be noted that Australia with its close military and political ties to America at least notified if not consulted America, there is also a opinion expressed that there was an CIA or American foriegn policy involvement at the time.Many East Timorese, including the political leaders; and indeed many Australians — see this state of affairs as exploitative and unfair, especially since East Timor desperately needs money to further its development and has few other valuable resources.The Howard government has received much criticism regarding this policy