Original sentence: Also, Adam is speculated to be working alongside Mel Gibson (of Gibson Guitars) to build a cross between a Les Paul and a banjo which will be called a Les Banjo.The band embarked on a seven-date tour to support the new album in March 2010 playing at Aberdeen, Newcastle, Glasgow, Nottingham, Birmingham, Manchester, Sheffield and London.These ceremonies included 30 minutes of entertainment from the evening's host province/territory, 30 minutes of medal presentations, and a one hour performance by a musical talent
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