Original sentence: A truly Mannerist work of art, it seeks, not to please, but to astonish, and like many Mannerist works of art, its symbolism is arcane: instead, a large sculpture of one of Hannibal's elephants, mangles a Roman soldier, a giant mermaid lounges incongruously on the bare ground — a vase of verdure perched on her head.Bomarzo is a town and comune of Viterbo province (Lazio, central Italy), in the lower valley of the Tiber at , 263 m (863 ft) above mean sea level, with 1609 inhabitants according to the 2003 census.It is the work of Pier Francesco Orsini, Duke of Bomarzo (1528–1588), a patron of the arts and greatly devoted to his wife Julia Farnese; when she died, he created the gardens
Edited sentence: A truly Mannerist work of art, it seeks, not to please, but to astonish, and like many Mannerist works of art, its symbolism is arcane: instead, one of Hannibal's elephants, larger than life, mangles a Roman soldier, a giant mermaid lounges incongruously on the bare ground — a vase of verdure perched on her head.Bomarzo is a town and comune of Viterbo province (Lazio, central Italy), in the lower valley of the Tiber at 42°29N 12°15E, 263 m (863 ft) above sea‑level, with 1609 inhabitants according to the 2003 census.It is the work of Pier Francesco Orsini, Duke of Bomarzo (1528‑1588), a patron of the arts and greatly devoted to his wife Julia Farnese; when she died, he created the gardens