Original sentence: All incoming PSU freshman applicants are required to submit official copies of ACT scores and a high school transcript.Applicants are required to have a composite ACT score of 21 or greater, or rank in the top one third of their high school graduating class, or complete a pre-college curriculum with a grade point average of 2.0 or higher for state residents and 2.5 for out-of-state students.Applicants who submit a GED must have scored at least 50 overall on the GED exam and have an ACT score of 21 or more.Home schooled students are held to the same requirements, but must also submit a portfolio to the Director of Admission.Pittsburg State requires all applicants under the age of 21 to complete the ACT exam prior to submitting an applications.The admissions office provides applicants with online practice exams for both the ACT and the GED.The average grade point average and  score for an admitted freshman was 3.30 and 21, respectively according to Princeton Review.The pre-college curriculum consists of four units of English, three units of natural science, three units of mathematics, three units of social science, and one unit of computer technology
Edited sentence: In order to be accepted into PSU, you must have a 21 or higher on your ACT, be in the top 1/3 of your class, complete the pre-college curriculum with at least a 2.0 GPA on a 4.0 scale (out-of-state residents must have at least a 2.5 GPA on a 4.0 scale), or have 24 or more transferable college credit hours with at least a 2.0/4.0 cumulative grade point average.The average grade point average and ACT score for an admitted freshman was 3.30 and 21, respectively according to Princeton Review