Original sentence: DreamlandLive are about to launch their  new plans for the comprehensive regeneration of the site including full occupation of the cinema building (Dreamland Studios), a public park and amusements (Dreamland Contemporary) and a development of a high quality residential quarter
Edited sentence: DreamlandLive are about to launch their exciting new plans for the comprehensive regeneration of the site including full occupation of the cinema building (Dreamland Studios), a public park and amusements (Dreamland Contemporary) and a development of a high quality residential quarter