Original sentence: "  The head of the British army, General Richard Dannatt, said on 30 April, 2007 that he had personally decided that the Prince will serve with his unit in Iraq.The province, known to Coalition forces as Iraq’s "Wild West", has been described as "a dangerous wilderness that is being used by Iraq’s Shia extremist groups as a testing ground for their latest explosive devices.The regiment which may soon include Prince Harry will be responsible for patrolling the Maysan province, trying to stop Iranian smugglers bringing hi-tech weapons across the border of desert and marshes
Edited sentence: It is known as Iraq’s “Wild West”, trying to stop Iranian smugglers bringing hi-tech weapons across the border of desert and marshes.The head of the British army, General Richard Dannatt, said on 30 April, 2007 that he had personally decided that the Prince will serve with his unit in Iraq.The regiment which may soon include Prince Harry will be responsible for patrolling the Maysan province.province is a dangerous wilderness that is being used by Iraq’s Shia extremist groups as a testing ground for their latest explosive devices