Original sentence: BoxRec has come under some criticism for it listing of John Duddy as a British boxer when in fact Duddy holds Irish nationality.Boxrec have warn a number of members of the website that they may be expelled from the Boxrec website for engaging in discussions with regard to Duddy's nationality despite other boxing authorities such as IBF, WBO and WBC all listing Duddy as Irish
Edited sentence: - BoxRec has come under some criticism for it listing of John Duddy as a British boxer when in fact Duddy holds Irish nationality.- Some members of the Boxrec website have been warned that they may be expelled from the Boxrec website for engaging in discussions with regard to Duddy's nationality despite other boxing authorities such as IBF, WBO and WBC all listing Duddy as Irish.Any Criticisms should be backed with valid sources...Internet Message Boards are not considered valid sources and the comments below fit that category so read it with high suspicion as it is the personal view of only a couple of people and it certainly does not represent the rest of Wikipedia, nor does it speak for all Wikipedians