Original sentence: Dairy, poultry, hog and fish farming persist and range from large scale commercial operations to subsistence type family farms.However, when smoking habits began to change in the 1980s, the economy slipped into decline.Most high school age students now attend Paris District High School, Brantford Collegiate or Assumption and St.The building was then revamped to become Burford District Elementary School and drew students from three elementary schools which were closed around the same time, Maple Avenue, Coronation and Harley-Northfield.The community has lost population since the 1970s and is eager to attract new investment.There are, however, few visible minorities except for migrant workers from Jamaica, Mexico and elsewhere
Edited sentence: Accordingly, the community has lost population since the 1970s and is eager to attract new investment.Dairy, poultry, hog and fish farming persist, but range from large scale commercial operations to subsistence type family farms.However, when smoking habits began to change in the 1980s, the entire economy slipped into decline.Material abundance, swollen by the cancer-causing crop, gave the region a sense of independence and self-sufficiency.Moreover, there is often a competitiveness bordering on prejudice towards residents of other towns in the region.Most students now attend Paris District High School, Brantford Collegiate or Assumption and St.Nevertheless, there are few if any visible minorities, except for migrant workers from Jamaica who are not readily welcomed into the community.The township of Burford includes the communities of Burford, Harley, Princeton, and Cathcart.These attitudes are often exacerbated by funding decisions made by the County of Brant, and The Grand Erie District School Board