Original sentence: Governor Bauer served in the South Carolina House from 1996 to 1999.The duties of the Lieutenant Governor were expanded in 2004 when Bauer became the elected official who oversees the Office on Aging
Edited sentence: Governor Bauer served in the South Carolina House from 1996 to 1999, he gained a reputation for hard work and tireless constituent service.The Lieutenant Governor’s Office on Aging directly aids the needs of over 34,000 seniors and works to enhance the quality of life for over 717,000 South Carolina senior citizens.Today, Lieutenant Governor Bauer is the leading advocate on behalf of South Carolina’s senior citizens.Under Bauer’s leadership, the duties of the Lieutenant Governor were expanded in 2004 when he became the elected official who oversees the Office on Aging