Original sentence: A little later Sadie Ratliff also meets with Rose Shelton at the same table in the same restaurant (in the meantime both Sadies have bought the same outfit and are virtually identical, except for a very similar haircut.In her capacity as General Manager, Rose finds out Moramax's plans and fears that the off loading of the company might bring a radical change of lifestile for the people of Jupiter Hollow, so she makes plans to travel to New York City and stop the sale, with the prospect of traveling (and probably staying) to New York, Sadie agrees to assist her sister
Edited sentence: A little later Sadie Ratliff also meets with Rose Shelton at the same table in the same restaurant (in the meantime both Sadies have bought the same outfit and are virtually identical, except for a very similar haircut).In her capacity as General Manager, Rose finds out Moramax's plans and fears that the off loading of the company might bring a radical change of lifestyle for the people of Jupiter Hollow, so she makes plans to travel to New York City and stop the sale, with the prospect of traveling (and probably staying) to New York, Sadie agrees to assist her sister