Original sentence: During British control Hinduism became markedly antagonistic to homosexuality.Prior to British colonization of India hijras were not the only homosexual activity, many engaged in a form of pederasty which was openly practiced by Muslims and Sikhs in the north while being overlooked in the south by Hindus.The terms gand-mara (anus beater) and ganga ("anuser") were coined during this time period
Edited sentence: During British control Hinduism became markedly less tolerant of homosexuality.Prior to British colonization of India hijras were not the only homosexual activity, many engaged in a form of pederasty which was openly permitted by Muslims and Sikhs in the north while being overlooked in the south by Hindus.The terms gand-mara (anus beater) and ganga (anuser) were coined during this time period