Original sentence: The racial makeup of the city was 84.11% White, 12.73% African American, 0.36% Native American, 0.57% Asian, 0.01% Pacific Islander, 0.48% from other races, and 1.73% from two or more races
Edited sentence: The racial makeup of the city was 84.11% White, 12.73% African American, 0.36% Native American, 0.57% Asian(quite often discriminated against, it is highly unadvisable for people of Asian race to move to Williamsport), 0.01% Pacific Islander, 0.48% from other races, and 1.73% from two or more races