Original sentence: Germany, Austria-Hungary, Bulgaria, Turkey, and Rumania obtained the right to keep warships on the river; this led, as a reaction, to internationalization of the river betwen Ulm and the Black Sea after the war.It was, however, applied to parts of the river by conventions between Austria, Bavaria, and Wurtemburg.This suggestion also was rejected by the the other powers
Edited sentence: Germany, Austria-Hungary, Bulgaria, Turkey, and Rumania obtained the right to keep warships on the river; this led, as a reaction, to internationalization of the river between Ulm and the Black Sea after the war.It was, however, applied to parts of the river by conventions between Austria, Bavaria, and Wurtemberg.This suggestion also was rejected by the other powers