Original sentence: CCHS's entry at Rate My Teacher - CCHS is on the leadership board for highest rated schools.The first fall by a pupil into a school pond was in 2004
Edited sentence: As with everything, CCHS is on the leadership board for highest rated schools.CCHS's entry at Rate My Teacher.No-one's ever going to let her forget though.The first fall by the pupil into a school pond was in 2004