Original sentence: 1851 - "football" noted in a public demonstration in Hobart on 12th and 13th February.1853 - "football" in Richmond, Tasmania advertised in The Courier on July 18th.1854 - "football" in Richmond, Tasmania advertised in the Courier on October 25th.A match in Hobart on 23rd October 1858 at Queens Domain was notable for attracting a "large crowd"
Edited sentence: 1851 - "football" noted in a public demonstration in Hobart on 12 and 13 February.1853 - "football" in Richmond, Tasmania advertised in The Courier on July 18.1854 - "football" in Richmond, Tasmania advertised in the Courier on October 25.A match in Hobart on 23 October 1858 at Queens Domain was notable for attracting a "large crowd"