Original sentence: Interviewed about an attempt to remove a book from a suburban Boston middle school in 2006, Deborah Caldwell-Stone, then deputy director of the ALA's Office for Intellectual Freedom, said, "Our hope is that books are retained rather than removed
Edited sentence: Interviewed about an attempt to remove a book from a suburban Boston middle school in 2006, Deborah Caldwell-Stone, then deputy director, said, "Our hope is that books are retained rather than removed