Original sentence: In May 2020, a commentary article in Global Public Health researchers in Hong Kong examined the possible inaccuracy of China's death toll due to political censorship and manipulation, concluding that though there was discrepancy in the death toll during the initial outbreak, and that the reported figures could hypothetically not be close to the actual figures
Edited sentence: In May 2020, an article in the journal Global Public Health examined the possibility of inaccurate death counts due to alleged political censorship, but came to the conclusion that due to the lack of any known deaths of Hong Kong or Taiwan residents in Mainland China, which would be newsworthy, the official numbers probably do not form a particularly large discrepancy from the actual death numbers