Original sentence: During the semifinal of 2012 against Italy, he left the goal to join his team players on the field in a desperate attempt to shoot a another goal and thus secure Germany a chance of winning
Edited sentence: During the semifinal of 2012 against Italy, he left the goal to join his team players on the field, against Italy, in  a desperate attempt to shoot a another goal and thus secure Germany a chance of winning.His passion to win almost got Germany the equaliser but the referee was on the side of the italians