Original sentence: Boca are particularly popular in Japan because of the club's success in recent years at the Intercontinental Cup held in Japan.Boca holds the international record of 17 international titles, including six Copa Libertadores and three World Club crowns (Copa Intercontinental) and one Copa Oro and Supercopa Masters.Club Atlético Boca Juniors is a popular Argentine sports club, best known for its football team.There is a society which dedicates its entire life to the team which is known as la número 12 or La Doce (player number Doce or 12, meaning "the 12th player")
Edited sentence: Also in Japan because of the club's success in recent years at the Intercontinental Cup held in Japan.Because of the influence they have on rival teams -- especially in home games -- where the stadium literally pulsates with their cheering.Boca fans are known for valuing sacrifice and loyalty in good times and bad ones.Boca holds the international record of 17 international titles, including six Copa Libertadores and three World Club crowns (Intercontinental Cup) and one Copa Oro and Supercopa Masters.Club Atlético Boca Juniors is the most popular Argentine sports club, best known for its football team.There is a society which dedicates its entire life to the team which is known as la número 12 or La Doce (player number Doce or 12, meaning "the 12th player"), please keep in mind that not all Boca supporters are members of this society for it is not a very genuine firm