Original sentence: But once she moves in, Lucy's father Ian Beale explained that she should live with her dad.Lauren does so as she went to Bianca Jackson's house with Jane.Lauren moved to Walford with her parents and sister Abi Branning in July 2006.Max left his wife List of minor EastEnders characters (2006)#Rachel Branning and young son Bradley Branning to marry Tanya and be a father to Lauren.On 5 December 2008, Lauren decided to move in with Lucy Beale and her family when she thought Jack might not be able to cope with her.Unbeknownst to Ian and Jane Beale when they were arguing, Lauren stood in the kitchen in the dark and had listened to their conversation involving her not staying at the house.When Max grounded Lauren for planning to attend a music concert with Tony, she asked her uncle Jack Branning if she could move in with him, telling her father she wished he had died
Edited sentence: But once she moves in, Lucy's father Ian explained that she should live with her dad.Lauren does so as she went to Bianca's house with Jane.Lauren moved to Walford with her parents and sister Abi in July 2006.Max left his wife Rachel and young son Bradley to marry Tanya and be a father to Lauren.On 5 December 2008, Lauren decided to move in with Lucy and her family when she thought Jack might not be able to cope with her.Unbeknownst to Ian and Jane when they were arguing, Lauren stood in the kitchen in the dark and had listened to their conversation involving her not staying at the house.When Max grounded Lauren for planning to attend a music concert with Tony, she asked her uncle Jack if she could move in with him, telling her father she wished he had died