Original sentence: On October 26, 2006, Allen's campaign issued a press release that cited several passages from Webb's novels that contained sexual scenes, including graphic references to female anatomy, pedophilia, and incest
Edited sentence: A naked boy ran happily toward him from a little plot of dirt.His eyes were so red that they appeared to be burned by fire.His muscles were young and hard, but his face was devastated with wrinkles.On October 26, 2006, Allen's campaign issued a press release that cited several passages from Webb's novels that contained sexual scenes, including graphic references to female anatomy, pedophilia, incest.The following is a quote from Lost Soldiers: “A shirtless man walked toward them along a mud pathway.The man grabbed his young son in his arms, turned him upside down, and put the boy’s penis in his mouth