Original sentence: From 1942 until 1945 during the Pacific War, large numbers of U.The city was fortified, schools were closed, crime increased and many families sold up and moved.military forces were stationed at various locations throughout eastern Australia
Edited sentence: From 1942 until 1945 during the Pacific War, up to one million U.The city was fortified, schools were closed, crime increased and many families sold up and moved inland.military personnel were stationed at various locations throughout eastern Australia