Original sentence: Leibner is the face of the company, perhaps best known for beginning the trend of big news salaries in the 1980's by playing the networks against one another and getting big deals for Dan Rather and Diane Sawyer.Richard Leibner -- not long out of New York University's business school -- took up that part of the business and built it.The company began in the 1940's as the small, New York City life insurance business of Nate Bienstock, whose client list included a number of journalists, including Walter Cronkite, Charles Collingwood and Eric Sevareid
Edited sentence: Leibner is the face of the company, perhaps best known for beginning the trend of big news salaries in the 1980s by playing the networks against one another and getting big deals for Dan Rather and Diane Sawyer.Richard Leibner—not long out of New York University's business school—took up that part of the business and built it.The company began in the 1940s as the small, New York City life insurance business of Nate Bienstock, whose client list included a number of journalists, including Walter Cronkite, Charles Collingwood and Eric Sevareid