Original sentence: Many opponents argue that Turkey's current and past governments do not respect key principles expected in a liberal democracy because of discrimination against ethnic minorities, particularly Kurds, non-Sunni Muslim religious minorities, political dissidents and critics of the 'Kemalist' nationalism and by preventing freedom of religion through enforced-secularism
Edited sentence: First and most important, many opponents argue that Turkey's current and past governments do not respect many key principles expected in a liberal democracy because of discrimination against religious minorities, political dissidents (and critics of the 'Kemalist' nationalism), discrimination of ethnic minorities like the Kurds, and maintaining an extreme form of forced-secularism, often targeting its own Muslim majority, while at the same time massively favouring Sunni Islam