Original sentence: Compared to other Presidential diary recordings innermost thoughts, Reagan did not reflect as deeply as some others did.Former First Lady Nancy Reagan made the diaries available to be transcribed in 2005 and the Reagan Library Foundation partnered with HarperCollins to print the diaries.The head archivist at the Reagan Library, Mike Dugan, describes Reagan's writing as saying, "I wouldn't call it an introspective diary, but he states his position.Those who admire him will find that he didn’t have much of a dark side; he doesn’t curse and plot against enemies; he doesn’t agonize and fall prey to insecurity; he keeps a couple of key principles–taxation is bad and Communism is evil–clearly in mind at all times and doesn’t get mired into details
Edited sentence: " Anyone hungering for historical disclosure and nuance in Ronald Reagan's presidential diaries will have to settle for a prosaic and amiably unrevealing drone in the daily ruminations of the private Reagan.Compared to other diaries recording innermost thoughts, what is missing is the deeper form of reflection that might have elevated "The Reagan Diaries" to the first tier of presidential writing.Even the head archivist at the Reagan Library, Mike Dugan, describes Reagan's writing as "I wouldn't call it an introspective diary, but he states his position.Former First Lady Nancy Reagan made them available to be transcribed in 2005 and the Reagan Library Foundation partnered with HarperCollins to print the diaries.Those who adore him will find that he didn’t have much of a dark side; he doesn’t curse and plot against enemies, like the Richard Nixon; he doesn’t agonize and fall prey to insecurity, like Lyndon Johnson; and keeps a couple of key principles—taxation is bad and Communism is evil—clearly in mind at all times and doesn’t get mired in details