Original sentence: Queensland trailed 6-18 at half-time after a solo effort by Jarryd Hayne led to a try just before the break, then recovered with 3 converted tries after Darren Lockyer intercepted a wild pass made by Hayne near the New South Wales goal line
Edited sentence: Queensland trailed 6-18 at half-time after a spectacular solo try by Jarryd Hayne just before half time, then recovered with 3 converted tries after Darren Lockyer intercepted a wild pass made by Hayne near the New South Wales goal line