Original sentence: She has also spoken in Parliament on the housing in Brent , the NHS funding in Brent, , funding for Brent Schools , saving local post office services  and discrimination against Muslims.She used her maiden speech to speak of the great diversity of her constituency, and to voice her opposition to university tuition fees
Edited sentence: She has also spoken in parliament on the Brent housing crisis , the impact of NHS cuts in Brent , fairer funding for Brent Schools , saving local post office services  and ending discrimination against muslims.She used her maiden speech to speak of the great diversity of her constituency, and to highlight the unfairness of top up fees