Original sentence: In total, there are about 17,000 Canadian farms that operate under Supply Management; this is about 8% of all farms in Canada.While these two parties negotiate the relative split of the profits between themselves, it is the consumer who ultimately has to pay the entire bill
Edited sentence: In total, there are about 17,000 Canadian farms that operate under Supply Management; about 8% of all the farms.While these two parties negotiate the relative split of the spoils between themselves, it is the consumer who ultimately has to pay the entire bill