Original sentence: After that is 172 when Hayate cries about her when Izumi asks him what his first girlfriend was like.Also in chapter 178-188 when Hayate met her and finally in chapter 196 when Hanabishi ask if he want to confess to a partner.Athena's earliest appearance is in chapter 88 when Hayate explains the reason why he doesn't deserve a girlfriend to Hinagiku and the others.In chapter 234, it is also revealed that she is also friends with Hinagiku, but didnt talk to her for a while because Hinagiku also gave her the nickname "A-Tan".She appears again 144 when Hayate remembers her after saying he's not good with girls
Edited sentence: Athena's earliest appearance is in chapter 88 when Hayate explains the reason he doesn't deserve a girlfriend to Hinagiku and the others.In chapter 234, it is also revealed that she is also friends with Hinagiku, but didn't talk to her for a while because Hinagiku also gave her the nickname "A-Tan".She then appears in chapter 144 when Hayate remembers her after saying that he's not good with girls, in chapter 172 when Hayate cries about her when Izumi asks him what his first girlfriend was like, in chapters 178-188 when Hayate meets her as a child, and in chapter 196 when Hanabishi asks if Hayate wants to confess to a partner