Original sentence: However, both its geographical situation and its 'melting pot' aspect make it a town with a lot of potential that remains untapped by the local authorities so far.Legend has it that Robinson Crusoe sailed off from the mouth of Salé river.Modern Salé is a highly polluted, badly planned, rapidely expanding town.Rural exodus has made it the second largest city in Morocco after Casablanca.Salé had a rich and determinig part in the Moroccan history.Salé people, the Slawis, have always had a 'tribal' sense of belonging, a sense of pride which developed into a feeling of superiority towards the 'berranis' i.The first demonstartions for independance against the French sparked off in Salé.The town is now a large size dormitory town with no real community life
Edited sentence: However, both its geographical situation and its 'melting pot' aspect makes it a town with a lot of potential that remains untapped by the local authorities so far.Legend has it that Robinson Crusoe sailed off from the Salé river mouth.Modern Salé is however a highly polluted, badly planned, rapidely expanding town.Rural exodus has made it the second largest city in Morocco after Casablanca - a little known fact - with no corresponding economical equivalence.Salé had a rich and determinig part of the Moroccan history.Salé people, the Slawis, have always had a 'tribal' sense of belonging, a sens of pride which developped into a feeling of superiority towards the 'berranis' the 'foreigners' which are the non Slawis.The town is now large size dormitory town with no real community life.the first demonstartions for independance from the French sparked off in Salé