Original sentence: The polls showed that James (D) was likely to win the election (and she did) in the overwhelmingly Democratic state, however Wofford (R) wasn’t lagging too far behind, with a fair amount of undecided voters or voters who don’t know either candidate
Edited sentence: James however did win the election by a insurmountable percentage.The polls showed that James (D) was likely to win the election in the overwhelmingly Democratic state, however Wofford (R) was not lagging too far behind, with a fair amount of undecided voters or voters who don’t know either candidate