Original sentence: John Jackson (born November 18 1977 ), better known as Fabolous, is a Grammy-nominated rapper of Guyanese descent  from Brooklyn who became a mainstream star after his debut single "Can't Deny It" (a remake of Tupac Shakur's "Ambitionz Az a Ridah" from All Eyez on Me) from 2001
Edited sentence: A Grammy-nominated rapper of Guyanese descent  from Brooklyn who became a mainstream star after his debut single "Can't Deny It" (a remake of Tupac Shakur's "Ambitionz Az a Ridah" from All Eyez on Me) from 2001.John Jackson (born November 18 1977 ), better known as Fabolous, has effectively brought NY into the rap game once again, reincarnating the old days of Biggie Smalls and Diddy