Original sentence: 1998: From Dayton With Love (Reviews: Youthworker, Phantom Tollbooth).Dayton features some electronic elements - keyboard and drum machine - and moves their sound to an even more sugary guitar based pop sound, which one reviewer found lacking of "solid melodies"
Edited sentence: " Some found this sound to be lacking of "solid melodies," while others found the voice of Sydney Rentz layered over the background lively and fluid.1998: From Dayton With Love (Reviews: Youthworker, Phantom Tollbooth, 7ball, Cornerstone).Dayton features some electronic elements - keyboard and drum machine - and moves their sound to an even more sugary guitar based pop sound, which one reviewer referred to as "space age garage pop