Original sentence: * Johnson was released by the Chicago Bears on June 25, 2007.As of August 24, 2007, Goodell has suspended four NFL players concerning their off-field conduct.In April 2007, following a year of significant scandal surrounding some NFL players' actions off-the-field, Goodell announced a new NFL Personal Conduct Policy.In November 2006, amid rumors that the NFL may expand outside of the United States, Goodell stated "I don't know if it will become a reality, but it is certainly a possibility
Edited sentence: *: Johnson was released by the Chicago Bears on June 25.As of August 23, 2007, after learning that Vick pled guilty to dogfighting charges, the commissioner placed him on "indefinite suspension" instead of firing him and has not amended the code of conduct for NFL Players.As of June 25, 2007, Commissioner Roger Goodell has suspended four NFL players concerning their off-field conduct.Goodell has come under criticism for failing to respond promptly to the dogfighting scandal that began with the allegations against Michael Vick.In April 2007, following a year in which players' problems off the field were at an all-time high, Goodell announced a new NFL  Personal Conduct Policy.In November 2006, Goodell stated "I don't know if it will become a reality, but it is certainly a possibility," in regard to expanding outside the US.Jones was banned from the league for one year, while Henry was suspended for 8 games.Most recently, Mr