Original sentence: It was during this time that Cham Albanians were forced out of Greek Epirus; members of the Cham community had collaborated with the Axis forces during the occupation of Greece, and when the Cham bands declined EDES' request to help them against ELAS, the former, with British support, attacked Cham villages killing 5,000 civilians and forcing about 35,000 to flee
Edited sentence: It was during this time that massacres were commited on Cham Albanians forcing them out of Epirus/ Cameria; the pretext for these acts of genocide and land grab on the part of the Greeks was that members of the Cham community had collaborated with the Axis forces during the occupation of Greece, and when the Chams declined EDES' request to help them against ELAS, the former, with British support, attacked Cham villages killing 5,000 civilians and forcing about 35,000 to flee