Original sentence: Critics from Square Enix Music Online were also approving of the album, citing the album's "real emotion" and "extremely enchanting themes".While one reviewer named it "one of the best arranged albums ever", another felt that, though it was in his opinion one of Mitsuda's best works, some of the vocal performances, especially in "Two Wings" and "Spring Lullaby", held the album back
Edited sentence: Another reviewer felt that, though it was in his opinion one of Mitsuda's best works, some of the vocal performances such as "Two Wings" and "Spring Lullaby" held the album back.Critics from Square Enix Music Online were also approving of the album, citing the album's "real emotion" and "extremely enchanting themes", with one reviewer naming it "one of the best arranged albums ever"