Original sentence: If trends continue unabated the town will consist of little else than restaurants, bank branches, real-estate brokers and cellphone stores.The population of "newcomers" or "yuppies", as they are typically called in the local press, consists of college and post-graduate students, bi-nationals, older artists and, increasingly, well-to-do commuters to Manhattan
Edited sentence: The population of "newcomers" or "yuppies", as they are typically called in the local press, consists of college and post-graduate students, bi-nationals, older artists, recent New York immagrants, and, increasingly, well-to-do commuters to Manhattan