Original sentence: Lynn Powis (Born - April 19, 1949 in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan) is a retired Canadian professional ice hockey forward who played 130 games in the National Hockey League for the Kansas City Scouts and Chicago Blackhawks
Edited sentence: He is the father to two amazing children, son Erin and daughter Victoria.He is toothless and married to a wonderful German woman who kindly tolerates his antics.He is truly a mess of a man.It is truly sad what has happened to this once great athlete.It was clear early on that Erin had all the abilities of a professional athlete, however, chose finance as a career because he saw what the years of hockey did to his dad, who is currently unemployed and off the farm crazy.Lynn Powis (Born - July 7th, 1949 in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan) is a retired Canadian professional ice hockey forward who played 130 games in the National Hockey League for the Kansas City Scouts and Chicago Blackhawks.You can find him daily either in his back yard drinking a Kokanee or hanging out at the boat launch at the Cherry Creek Resevoir asking for help because he just backed his 1975 Ford F-100 too deep and can't pull it out