Original sentence: However, the show finds flaws in the religion's founding, which especially concerns Stan---for example, that Joseph Smith offered no proof of his revelations, or how obvious it should have been that his claims were falsified.The episode is noteworthy for its theological knowledge---throughout the episode, characters ask questions about Mormonism, and the story then breaks off to a sub-story about Joseph Smith and the founding of the religion (which includes musical naration and graphics unusually advanced for South Park)
Edited sentence: However, the show finds flaws in the religion's founding, which concern especially Stan---for example, that Joseph Smith offered no proof of his revelations, and how obvious it should have been that everything was falsified.The episode is noteworthy for its theological knowledge---throughout the episode, characters ask questions about Mormonism, and the story then breaks off to a sub-story about Joseph Smith and the founding of the religion (which includes crummy musical naration and graphics unusually advanced for South Park)