Original sentence: His second book, Holding Pattern, won the Archibald Lampman Award.His third book, The Bindery, is with NeWest Press in 2007
Edited sentence: His second book, Holding Pattern, won the 2003 Archibald Lampman Award.His third book, The Bindery, was published by NeWest Press in 2007 and won both an Alberta Book Award and the Lampman-Scott Award in 2008.Rhode's poetry also has been featured in the anthologies New Canadian Poetry, Breathing Fire II, Decalogue, and Seminal