Original sentence: On the 21st of July a deal was completed to bring back Joel Lynch, who spent a large amount of time on loan at Forest last season, along with Forest's payment, Matt Thornhill was sent out on loan to Brighton and Hove Albion for 6 months
Edited sentence: On the 21st of July a deal was completed to bring back Joel Lynch, who spent a large amount of time on loan at Forest last season.along with Forest's payment, Matt Thornhill was sent out on loan to Brighton & Hove Albion for 6 months