Original sentence: Aurangabad got its name from one of the kings of the Mughal dynasty.Aurangzeb;the blocks; Daudnagar;Dev and Kutumba are great historical places.Famous GT Road, which is made by Ser Sha Suri is crossed through Aurangabad.The fort of Ser Sha Suri, the Mughal king near Sasaram attracts historain and visitors.There is only need to explore these places in a broader way.Whilst daudnagar is surrounded by Qila's (Forts) of mughal era, Dev has a historical temple of Lord Sun which attracts a lot of devotees from all over India and Kutumba is related with one of king who was not expended its ruling area in more broader way
Edited sentence: Aurangabad got its name from one of the kings of the Mughal dynasty, Aurangzeb.Famous Grand Trunk Road (NH - 2), starting from Kabul in Afghanistan and ends at Calcutta in West Bengal, built by Sher Shah Suri crosses through Aurangabad.However, the famouse Gate school holds the same grand reputation as ever.It has a large government hospital in a good position with a capacity of hundreds of people.It is a clean and peaceful city, having 2 cinema halls, 1 Town Hall, and some good market complexes.The blocks; Daudnagar, Dev and Kutumba are great historical places.The city has TV Station, Mobile, Landline and Internet connectivity.The fort of Sher Shah Suri, the Mughal king, near Sasaram attracts lot of historians and visitors.The main service providers of telecommunication here are Airtel, Reliance and BSNL.The railway station is 10 km away from the city and the name of the railway station is Anugrah Narayan Road.The roads are good and the weather condition is always optimal.There are a lots of school and colleges in the city and the district.There is a need to explore these places in a broader way.This school was built at the time of British government and is now called Anugran Inter College.While Daudnagar is surrounded by Qila's (Forts) of mughal era, Dev has a historical temple of Lord Sun which attracts a lot of devotees from all over India and Kutumba is related with one of king who's kingdom was not expanded its ruling area in more broader way