Original sentence: A plan proposed by the Israeli tourism minister Binyamin Elon and popular with the Israeli right-wing advocates the transfer of the Palestinian population from the West Bank into Jordan.Accompanied with the expansion of Israel up to the Jordan River and the "recognition and development of Jordan as the Palestinian State".Lebanon and Syria came under French control, while Iraq, Palestine and Transjordan came under British control.Palestine and Transjordan were formally part of the same  League of Nations mandate, but from the beginning they were administered as separate terrorities in almost all respects
Edited sentence: A forced transfer of the population is not part of the plan.A plan proposed by the Israeli tourism minister Binyamin Elon (and popular with the Israeli right-wing) advocates the formal annexation of the disputed territories (up to the Jordan River).Lebanon and Syria came under French control, while Iraq and Palestine came under British control.Palestine (which contains the West Bank and the East Bank) were formally part of the same  League of Nations mandate, but from the beginning they were administered as separate terrorities in almost all respects.The question what happens with the Palestinians in the territories will be negotiated with Jordan.This solution proposal underlines the recognition and development of Jordan as the Palestinian State