Original sentence: While not part of the original Rosary or in the original text of the vulgate, many Roman Catholics chose to add it after the Glory Be to the Father after the Blessed Virgin Mary was said to have requested its use during her apparition at Fatima, a miracle deemed "worthy of belief" by the Church
Edited sentence: While not part of the original Rosary or in the original text of the vulgate, many Roman Catholics chose to add it after the Glory Be to the Father after the Blessed Virgin Mary requested its use during her apparition at Fatima, a miracle deemed "worthy of belief" by the Church