Original sentence: After being injured in battle, he continued to hone his magic skills in hospital.Although one of the most imitated magician the world has ever known, his skill and talent could never be duplicated.Cardini enhanced his performance by incorporating his magic tricks into a skit.He joined the British Army during World War I where he passed time in the trenches by practicing card manipulations.Richard "Cardini" Pitchford (1895-1973).This is the only known footage of Cardini at work
Edited sentence: After being injured in battle he continued to hone his magic skills in hospital.Although possibly the most imitated magician the world has ever known, his skill and talent could never be duplicated, thus making him one of the world's greatest magicians.Cardini perfected his craft with hard work and perseverance.He joined the British Army during WW1 where he passed time in the trenches by practicing card manipulations.It is easy to forget the high standard to which this master held the magic industry.Richard "Cardini" Pitchford - (1895-1973).The act was not merely a magician performing tricks but an actor with strange and unexplained things happening to him.This is the only known footage of the master at work