Original sentence: His theory was brilliantly confirmed by poetical writings of his archenemy, Mikhail Lomonosov.The son of a poor priest, Trediakovsky became the first Russian not of the nobility to receive a humanistic education abroad, at the Sorbonne in Paris (1727-30) where he studied philosophy, linguistics and mathematics.Vasily Kirillovich Trediakovsky (;  in Astrakhan —  in Sankt Petersburg) a Russian poet, essayist and playwright who helped lay the foundations of classical Russian literature
Edited sentence: Mikhail Lomonosov, who "created the basis of the modern Russian literary language".The son of a poor priest, Trediakovsky became the first Russian not of the nobility to receive a humanistic education abroad, at the Sorbonne in Paris (1727–30) where he studied philosophy, linguistics and mathematics.Vasily Kirillovich Trediakovsky (;  in Astrakhan –  in Sankt Petersburg) was a Russian poet, essayist and playwright who helped lay the foundations of classical Russian literature