Original sentence: HMS H33 was one of the seven H class submarines to survive until the end of World War II.HMS H33 was scrapped in Troon on 19 May 1944.In March 1937 the submarine navigated the Gloucester and Sharpness Canal in the company of HMS H49 who’s commander had arranged the trip.She was laid down on 20 November 1917 and was commissioned on 17 May 1919
Edited sentence: HMS H33 was scrapped at Troon on 19 May 1944.In March 1937 the submarine navigated the Gloucester and Sharpness Canal in the company of HMS H49 whose commander had arranged the trip.She was laid down on 20 November 1917 and commissioned on 17 May 1919