Original sentence: During the manifesto launch on his first day back on the campaign trail after the birth, Kennedy struggled to remember the details of a key policy (replacing the Council Tax with a Local Income Tax) at an early morning press conference, which he later blamed on a lack of sleep due to his new child
Edited sentence: During the manifesto launch, Kennedy struggled to remember the details of a key policy (replacing the Council Tax with a Local Income Tax), which he later blamed on a lack of sleep due to his new child