Original sentence: The basis of feminist ideology is that rights, privilege, status and obligations should not be determined by gender
Edited sentence: It has been posited that while the nominal basis for feminist ideology is the need to ensure that rights, privilege, status and obligations be not determined along gender lines, the central motivating factor remains displacement of anger resulting from either the lack of being physically appealing to men or unresolved emotional issues with a woman and her father (see Electra Complex).While feminist epistemology is dynamically controversial, the need for the total assimilation of women into the power structure of modern society is both relevant and neccesary