Original sentence: Since the scandal in 2006, many of Haggard's detractors have claimed that he preached against homosexuality, but the only reference found in this regard comes from his statement in the documentary Jesus Camp, where a scene shows him saying, "we don't have to debate about what we should think about homosexual activity.Under Haggard's leadership, the NAE released "For the Health of the Nation: An Evangelical Call to Civic Responsibility" in late 2004, "a document urging engagement in traditional culture war issues such as abortion and gay marriage but also poverty, education, taxes, welfare and immigration
Edited sentence: Since the scandal in 2006, many of Haggard's detractors have espoused that he preached against homosexuality, but the only reference to be found in this regard comes from his statement in the documentary Jesus Camp, where a scene shows him saying, "we don't have to debate about what we should think about homosexual activity.To this end, under Haggard's leadership, the NAE released "For the Health of the Nation: An Evangelical Call to Civic Responsibility" in late 2004, "a document urging engagement in traditional culture war issues such as abortion and gay marriage but also poverty, education, taxes, welfare and immigration