Original sentence: Bands such as The Who, Deep Purple, Led Zeppelin, Black Sabbath, Alice Cooper, Aerosmith, Queen, Kiss, Judas Priest and AC/DC, played highly amplified, guitar-driven hard rock
Edited sentence: Bands such as The Who, Deep Purple, Led Zeppelin, Black Sabbath, Alice Cooper, Aerosmith, Queen, Kiss, Judas Priest and AC/DC played highly amplified, guitar-driven hard rock