Original sentence: "  The website Consumerama similarly panned Mays' style, comparing his appearance to "a bouncer in a cut-and-shoot' bar" and describing his delivery as "rat-a-tat-a-tat-a-tat....".Mays is also a member of the Lake Robinson "Polar Bear Club
Edited sentence: Mays is often seen in the area driving his Mercedes-Benz SLR McLaren or Ferrari..  Mays is also a proud member of the Lake Robinson "Polar Bear Club.The website Consumerama similarly panned Mays' style, comparing his appearance to "a bouncer in a cut-and-shoot' bar" and describing his delivery as "rat-a-tat-a-tat-a-tat...."