Original sentence: Eddie confesses he was only pretending, in order to better fit in with the Titans.For many months, Eddie says that he's in close contact with and making multiple daily calls to Blue Devil as his way of confirming that "everything is fine".He also tries rekindling his bond with Blue Devil, but the man does not show up to a meeting Eddie invited him to.Robin confronts Eddie about his relationship with the Blue Devil, who claims not to have heard from Eddie for two years.The Chief's manipulation is stopped by both the Titans and the other members of the Doom Patrol, which makes Eddie as if he is finally accepted as a Titan since they stood up for him.The new Doom Patrol arrives and take Kid Devil to their HQ for treatment, where the Chief heals Eddie, while also attempting to manipulate him into joining the Doom Patrol (as he has done to the other DP members)
Edited sentence: Durign his initial months with the group, Eddie claims that he's in close contact with Blue Devil.Eddie confesses that he was only pretending, in a misguided attempt to better fit in with the Titans.Eddie then tries rekindling his bond with Blue Devil, however Eddie is stood up.He pretends to call his mentor multiple times a day to confirm that "everything is fine".Robin confronts Eddie about his relationship with the Blue Devil, who claims not to have hear from Eddie for two years.The Chief's manipulation is stopped by both the Titans and the Doom Patrol, and Eddie realizes that he has been accepted as a Titan.The new Doom Patrol arrives and take Kid Devil to their HQ for treatment, where the Chief heals Eddie, while also manipulating him into joining the Doom Patrol (as he has done to the other members)