Original sentence: Carmópolis of Mine' is a city Brazil EIRO of the  state of Minas Gerais.The name - "City of Caramel ( polis )" - honors its patron Our Lady of Caramel and refers to Mount Caramel by its mountainous topography
Edited sentence: Carmópolis of Mine' is a city Brazil EIRO of the state of Minas Gerais.The name - "City of Caramel (polis)" - honors its patron Our Lady of Caramel and refers to Mount Caramel by its mountainous topography