Original sentence: Argued that a warm and positive outlook to the secular pioneers (halutzim) would win loyalty and greater respect for Orthodox Judaism.He was regarded as a guide to the Mizrachi Religious Zionist movement.He was steeped in Kabbalah, Talmud, and philosophy.Won much trust of the secular Jewish leadership in London, Europe, and Palestine
Edited sentence: He served as a guide to the Mizrachi Religious Zionist movement.He was steeped in Kabbalah, Talmud, and philosophy, and was an adroit politician.His warm and positive outlook to the secular pioneers (halutzim) won their loyalty to him and greater respect for Orthodox Judaism.Perfected the art of winning the trust of the secular Jewish leadership in London, Europe, and Palestine