Original sentence: It was first started in the October, 1997 and continues to be held every year since then, attracting large number of foreign and domestic tourists.Sindhu Darshan Festival is a festival of India held every year on full moon day (on Guru Purnima) in June.The Sindhu Darshan Festival is a celebration of River Sindhu, also known as the Indus
Edited sentence: It was first started in the October, 1997 and continues to be held every year since then, attracting large number of foreign as well domestic tourists.Sindhu Darshan Festival is a festival of India held every year on full moon day (on Guru Purnima) in month of June.The Sindhu Darshan Festival, as the name suggests, is a celebration of River Sindhu, also known as the Indus.The festival is also a symbolic salutation to the courageous soldiers of the country, who endanger their life to save ours