Original sentence: Entertainment acts include minstrels, mimes, jugglers, musicians, acrobats, mud beggars, stilt walkers, life-size puppets, dancers, exotic animals and the King’s powerful knights jousting on horseback.It is a recreation of a 16th century marketplace with hand-made crafts, tantalizing foods, musicians, singers, dancers, minstrels, mimes, jugglers, magicians, comedians, puppeteers, gymnasts, exotic animals, Knights jousting on horseback, a royal court and of course King Richard himself.King Richard’s Faire is a Renaissance Festival held in Carver, Massachusetts.King Richard’s Faire runs for eight consecutive weekends (18 days) from the first week-end in September through the fourth week-end in October (including Labor Day and Columbus Day).King Richard’s Faire was founded in 1982 by the late Richard Shapiro and his wife Bonnie.The Faire is operated on 80 acres of beautiful pine forest.The faire has 10 stages that pound with song and dance
Edited sentence: It is a recreation of a 16th century marketplace with hand-made crafts, tantalizing foods, musicians, singers, dancers, minstrels, mimes, jugglers, magicians, comedians, puppeteers, gymnasts, exotic animals, knights jousting on horseback, a royal court and of course King Richard himself.King Richard’s Faire is a Renaissance fair held in Carver, Massachusetts.King Richard’s Faire runs for eight consecutive weekends from the first week-end in September through the fourth week-end in October (including Labor Day and Columbus Day).King Richard’s Faire was founded in 1982 by Richard Shapiro and his wife Bonnie.The Faire is operated on 80 acres of pine forest.The faire has 10 stages, with entertainment acts including minstrels, mimes, jugglers, musicians, acrobats, mud beggars, stilt walkers, life-size puppets, dancers, exotic animals and the King’s knights jousting on horseback