Original sentence: Measures that opposers of this call draconian, such as the closure of all gay saunas are being considerd by the Singaporean authorities.Reintroduction of police entrapment at public indoor and outdoor venues would consequently could probably happen again.Should this happen, the position of gay bars and discoes would also could possibly be totally removed.The fate of gay venues in Singapore is under threat as the Ministry of Health is considering measures to curb the exponential increase in HIV infection amongst local MSM's
Edited sentence: Draconian measures such as the closure of all gay saunas may be in the offing.Reintroduction of police entrapment at public indoor and outdoor venues would consequently not be inconceivable.Should this happen, the position of gay bars and discoes would also become precarious.The fate of gay venues in Singapore hangs in the balance as the Ministry of Health is considering measures to curb the exponential increase in HIV infection amongst local MSM's