Original sentence: Concerns have been raised for his willingness to allow those with less-than-spotless public lives to be represented at leadership summits.Like many influential and innovative leaders, Hybels has faced criticism from those in both more conservative and liberal leaning camps.Notably in 2000, Hybels was criticized by some conservative pastors for inviting and interviewing President Bill Clinton at his summer leadership conference at Willow Creek
Edited sentence: In 2000, Hybels was criticized by some conservative pastors for inviting and interviewing President Bill Clinton at his summer leadership conference at Willow Creek