Original sentence: Vladimir Grigoryevich Shukhov (), ( - February 2 1939) was a Russian engineer-polymath, scientist and  architect renowned for his pioneering works on new methods of analysis for structural engineering that led to breakthroughs in industrial design of world's firsts  hyperboloid structures, shell structures, tensile structures, oil reservoirs, pipelines, boilers, ships and barges
Edited sentence: Vladimir Grigoryevich Shukhov (), ( - February 2 1939) was a great Russian engineer-polymath, scientist and  architect renowned for his pioneering works on new methods of analysis for structural engineering that led to breakthroughs in industrial design of world's firsts  hyperboloid structures, shell structures, tensile structures, oil reservoirs, pipelines, boilers, ships and barges