Original sentence: Homer and Lisa have opposite personalities and he usually overlooks Lisa's talents, but when made aware of his neglect, does everything he can to help her; "Daddy" was her first word
Edited sentence: Although Homer has often tried to bond with Maggie, he sometimes forgets that she even exists; Also, despite being annoyed by Homer's stupid, Maggie herself is very fond on him, evident that "Daddy" was her first word.Homer and Lisa have opposite personalities and he usually overlooks Lisa's talents, but when made aware of his neglect, does everything he can to help her