Original sentence: Although this was an American production subject to American animal cruelty laws, scenes like this filmed in the Philippines were not policed or monitored, and the American Humane Association gave the film an "unacceptable" rating
Edited sentence: Although this was an American production (ostensibly subject to American animal cruelty laws), scenes like this filmed in the Philippines were not policed or monitored.Still, after conducting an investigation, the American Humane Association gave the film an "unacceptable" rating