Original sentence: " Maxwell's and other scientistss interest with so-called "cat turning" was reputed to have caused the death of many cats after being dropped from windows of multi-storied buildings.Maxwell in particular was interested in discovering the precise height that a cat needed to be dropped from so that the cat would be incapable of using its righting reflex to land on its feet, an endeavor in which he eventually succeeded
Edited sentence: " Maxwell's as well as other scientist's fetish with so-called "cat turning" was reputed to have caused the death of many cats after being dropped from windows of multi-storied buildings.Maxwell in particular, was interested in discovering the precise height that a cat needed to be dropped from so that the cat would be incapable of using its righting reflex to land on its feet, an endeavor in which he eventually succeeded