Original sentence: Along with other heavy passenger vehicles Hummers have very poor fuel economy.The intense animosity that Hummer inspires in many people is a psychological consequence of it's success in projecting this sense of dominance, because most people do not like being bullied and react negatively to the car and it's driver.While design of heavy pickup trucks is intended for transporting large objects in construction work, for instance, or an SUV van can be viewed as an alternative to a mini-van for transporting large groups of people, the main appeal of a Hummer is that it looks big and dominant
Edited sentence: Along with many other heavy passenger vehicles Hummers have very poor fuel economy.And numerous vehicles are used(and not used) for many purposes.Criticisms of hummer focus on fuel economy and symbolism.Critics tend to be from left-wing groups and show their criticism with everything from "blogs" to illegal vandalism.Ignoring the fact that numerous vehicles have similar fuel economies.While design of heavy pickup trucks is intended for transporting large objects in construction work, for instance, or an SUV van can be viewed as an alternative to a mini-van for transporting large groups of people, the main appeal of a Hummer according to activists is that it looks big and dominant.Yet again numerous vehicles,including Lincoln Navigators, Dodge Vipers and even old VW Buses could have the same complaint.Yet looking "dominant" is more of a sign of a critics schema or insecurities