Original sentence: The larger Societies include: the paper-reading society situated in the Graduates' Memorial Building (GMB): the University Philosophical Society (Trinity College, Dublin), more commonly known as "The Phil"; and the debating society that shares the building: the College Historical Society, more commonly known as "The Hist"; the Vincent de Paul society, which organises a large number of activities in the local community; and Dublin University Players which is one of the most prolific drama societies in Ireland, hosting up to 50 shows and events a year in its own theatre in the Samuel Beckett Centre
Edited sentence: The larger Societies include: the paper-reading society situated in the Graduates' Memorial Building (GMB): the University Philosophical Society (Trinity College, Dublin), more commonly known as "The Phil"; and the debating society that shares the building: the College Historical Society (founded in 1770, making it the world's oldest debating society), more commonly known as "The Hist"; the Vincent de Paul society, which organises a large number of activities in the local community; and Dublin University Players which is one of the most prolific drama societies in Ireland, hosting up to 50 shows and events a year in its own theatre in the Samuel Beckett Centre