Original sentence: Following Totenberg's allegation that she had been sexually harassed at the National Observer, Al Hunt of the Wall Street Journal brought up the then-nearly 20 year old plagiarism incident in his column.The criticism also came from Republican senators on the Judiciary Committee.Totenberg's reporting made her the target of criticism
Edited sentence: Criticism came from Republican senators on the Judiciary Committee.Following Totenberg's allegation that she had been sexually harassed at the National Observer, Al Hunt of the Wall Street Journal brought up the then-nearly 20 year old plagiarism incident in his column, and relatedly, of giving the impression that she had been fired because of sexual harrassment