Original sentence: The Army Gold Medal (1808 - 1814), also known as the Peninsular Gold Medal, with an accompanying Gold Cross, was a British campaign medal in recognition for field officers' successful commands in recent campaigns, predominately the Peninsular War
Edited sentence: The Army Gold Medal (1808 - 1814), also known as the Peninsular Gold Medal, with an accompanying Gold Cross, was a British campaign medal awarded in recognition of field and general officers' successful commands in recent campaigns, predominately the Peninsular War