Original sentence: Home treatment is recommended for the initial treatment of those with acute leg DVT (1B) who feel "well enough to be treated at home (eg, [those without] severe leg symptoms or comorbidity)" as long as there is an adequate home environment, which is described as "well-maintained living conditions, strong support from family or friends, phone access, and ability to quickly return to the hospital if there is deterioration
Edited sentence: As an unattractive option to many DVT sufferers, these individuals are then led to comply with graduated compression stockings which have shown low user compliance due to lack of comfort.Emerging technology has created modern compression devices like the Venowave that allows individuals to receive comfortable and mobile usage showing clinically proven results in preventing DVT symptoms from worsening.Individuals who are treated at hospitals are hooked up to large pneumatic compression pumps that force their patients to remain bed-ridden in order to receive the proper treatment