Original sentence: By definition, outsider music has very few outlets and most outsider musicians (save those such as Syd Barrett and Skip Spence who became popular before becoming recluses) come to be known through word of mouth, usually among communities of music collectors.Examples include Florence Foster Jenkins, an American soprano who sang ear-splitting renditions of compositions far outside her range and Eilert Pilarm, a Swedish Elvis impersonator known for his utter lack of resemblance to Elvis Presley.Lyrics are often bizarre or emotionally stark and songs may show a great ignorance or disregard for structural conventions or popular trends in mainstream music.Outsider music reflects these conditions in various ways.Some outsider musicians are famously awful and most of their audience considers them to be a surreal comedy act, something many of these performers realize and embrace.The Shaggs, a 1960s rock band of sisters with only rudimentary musical skill, whose ineptitude became semi-legendary
Edited sentence: By definition, outsider music has very few outlets and most outsider musicians (save those such as Syd Barrett and Skip Spence who became popular before becoming recluses) come to be semi-well known through word of mouth, usually among communities of obsessive music collectors.Examples include Florence Foster Jenkins, a American soprano who sang ear-splitting renditions of compositions far outsider her range and Eilert Pilarm, a Swedish Elvis impersonator known for his utter lack of resemblance to Elvis Presley.Lyrics are often bizarre or emotionally stark and songs show a great ignorance or disregard for structural conventions or popular trends in mainstream music.Outside music reflects these conditions in various ways.Some outsider musicians are famously awful and most of their audience considers them to be a surreal comedy act, something most of these performers realize and embrace.The Shaggs, a 1960s rock band of sisters with no musical skills whatsoever, whose awfulness became semi-legend