Original sentence: A week after Christ's ascension, the Holy Spirit descended on the disciples, prompting them to proclaim the Gospels to the people of Jerusalem, who had witnessed the crucifixion of Christ.According to the scriptural account in the Gospels of Matthew, Luke, Mark and John, the Christian Church began with the Ascension of Christ, 40 days after Easter.From this point on, Christ's mission was carried out on earth by his disciples and Apostles.In the tradition of the Catholic church, Christ commanded Peter to lead his Church, giving him the the keys to the Kingdom of Heaven, and promised him that whatever he will bind on earth shall be bound in heaven, and whatever he looses on earth shall be loosed in heaven.This beginning of their public ministry is known as Pentecost, where the Holy Spirit not only assisted the disciples in reaching the people, but also enabled them to speak in languages they did not know
Edited sentence: According to the scriptural account in the Gospels of Matthew, Luke, Mark and John, the Origin of the Catholic church began with the Ascension of Christ, 40 days after Easter.From this point on, Christ's mission was carried out on earth by his former disciples who were now known as Apostles.In the tradition of the Catholic church, Christ commanded Peter to lead his Church, giving him the the keys of Heaven, and promised him that whatever he will bind on earth shall be bound in heaven, and whatever he looses on earth shall be loosed in heaven.In this the tradition of the Catholic church records the beginning of their public ministry.One week after Christ's ascension, the Holy Spirit descended on the Apostles, prompting them to proclaim the Gospels to the people of Jerusalem, who had witnessed the crucifixion of Christ.This proclamation is known as Pentecost, where the Holy Spirit not only assisted the disciples in reaching the people, but also enabled them to speak in languages they did not know