Original sentence: Cornell University is a research university based in Ithaca, New York.Cornell is particularly known for its strengths as a school of engineering and of hotel administration.The youngest of the Ivy League universities, Cornell was founded in 1865 by Ezra Cornell, a self-made businessman involved in the formation of the Western Union Telegraph Company , and Andrew Dickson White, a respected scholar and politician
Edited sentence: Alumni of Cornell occupy some of the top business, governmental, and non-profit leadership posts in the United States.Cornell University is a world-renowned research university based in Ithaca, New York.Cornell is one of the preeminent research universities in the world, boasting a prestigious group of faculty and alumni.Cornell was founded in 1865 by Ezra Cornell, a self-made businessman involved in the formation of the Western Union Telegraph Company , and Andrew Dickson White, a respected scholar and politician.The faculty represent international leaders in a variety of fields, with many participating in prestigious governmental and private sector advisory positions.The university is particularly known for its strengths as a school of engineering, hotel administration, law, and labor relations.The youngest of the Ivy League universities, Cornell enjoys a reputation as one of the foremost research universities in the world