Original sentence: Among the most important were: big business, farmers and landowners, nationalists, and reactionaries, but also disaffected World War I veterans, intellectuals of the caliber of Gabriele D'Annunzio, Curzio Malaparte and Martin Heidegger to name a few, some conservatives and small businesspeople, and many poor and angry unemployed individuals.Fascism attracted political support from diverse sectors of the population
Edited sentence: Among the most important are: big business, farmers/landowers, nationalists, conservatives and reactionaries, but also.Fascism, unfortunately, attracted political support from many diverse sectors of the population.disaffected WWI veterans, intellectuals.of the caliber of Gabriele D'Annunzio, Curzio Malaparte and Martin Heidegger to name a few, and many poor and angry unemployed individuals