Original sentence: The whole album is designed so that the listener should bear its creator's sense of humor in mind.This Dollar Saved My Life At Whitehorse symbolizes the typical rock'n'roll dream, which is a side to Edlund that doesn't fit in with the familiar Tiamat image; which is why he also come up with the new name: Lucyfire
Edited sentence: The whole album is thoroughly enjoyable, and the listener should bear its creator's sense of humor in mind.This Dollar Saved My Life At Whitehorse symbolizes the typical rock'n'roll dream, which is a side to Edlund that doesn't fit in with the familiar Tiamat image; which is why he's also come up with a new name: Lucyfire