Original sentence: An anime adaptation that will be produced by A-1 Pictures and Satelight is expected to be released in Japan in fall 2009.It is expected to be produced by Japanese anime studios, A-1 Pictures and Satelight.The individual chapters are being collected and published in tankōbon volumes by Kodansha, with 12 released as of October 2008
Edited sentence: An anime adaptation that will be produced by A-1 Pictures and Satelight is expected to be released in Japan in October of 2009.It has also won  The Society for the Promotion of Japanese Animation's Industry Awards for best comedy manga.It is to be produced by the Japanese anime studios, A-1 Pictures and Satelight.The individual chapters are being collected and published in tankōbon volumes by Kodansha, with 16 released as of August 2009