Original sentence: " The university concentrates its expertise on issues of management, organisation and policy in the public and private sectors on the one hand, as well as on the field of sickness and health care.Erasmus University Rotterdam describes itself as an "international knowledge workshop for critical thinking and academic training, driven by a strong focus on current social issues
Edited sentence: Erasmus University Rotterdam is an international knowledge workshop for critical thinking and academic training, driven by a strong focus on current social issues.The university concentrates its expertise on issues of management, organisation and policy in the public and private sectors on the one hand, as well as on the field of sickness and health care