Original sentence: He also writes his own blog and has appeared in magazines including Men's Health, and Sidetracked magazine.Ketchell has received coverage in national and local mediasuch as The Telegraph, The Times and The Guardian
Edited sentence: He also writes his own blog and has appeared in many magazines including Men's Health, and Sidetracked magazine.Ketchell has received extensive coverage in the national and local media for his various challenges.The national press follows his adventures and he has featured in numerous articles in The Telegraph, The Times and The Guardian