Original sentence: Currently, Luongo and his agent, Gilles Lupien are talking with Canucks GM, Mike Gillis about a long-term contract extension for Luongo to stay on the Canucks for at least five more years
Edited sentence: During the 2009 offseason, Luongo and his agent, Gilles Lupien were talking with Canucks GM, Mike Gillis about a long-term contract extension for Luongo to stay on the Canucks for at least five more years