Original sentence: A number of religious academecians and scholars and have pointed to similarities between Imhotep and Joseph (Hebrew Bible) son of Jacob (also  known as Israel), although few have specifically concluded they are the same person.Imhotep and Joseph both were second in command to a Pharoh, died at the age of 110, were involved in seven year food-storage projects just prior to famine years, built cities, studied astronomy, had 11 other siblings, were in charge of master building projects, among other similarities.Some have also suggested that the legend of Joseph may have been embelleshed by the Dueteronomists under the reign of King Josiah who allegedly revised and recorded the Books of Moses.With this theory, these Hebrew historians may have drawn from available historical records about Imhotep, assuming he was the same as Joseph
Edited sentence: One fringe theory, supported by a very few amateur egyptologists, is that Imhotep has a similarity to Joseph (Hebrew Bible) son of Jacob (also  known as Israel)