Original sentence: Field Marshal Lord Byng of Vimy GCB GCMG MVO (1862–1935), an officer who served with distinction during World War I and as Governor General of Canada, lived in Thorpe-le-Soken during his retirement and died at the demolished Thorpe Hall.The village hosts several shops, pubs and eateries.The village used to have a Post Office, but this was closed in a round of government cuts.Thorpe-le-Soken has Rolph CofE Primary School in the High Street, and the Thorpe Campus of Tendring Technology College (Years 7, 8 and 9) in Landermere Road.Thorpe-le-Soken's history can be traced back to Saxon times
Edited sentence: Field Marshal Lord Byng of Vimy GCB GCMG MVO (1862–1935), an officer who served with distinction during World War I and as Governor General of Canada, lived in Thorpe-le-Soken during his retirement and died at Thorpe Hall (recently demolished).For education, Thorpe-le-Soken has Rolph CofE Primary School in the High Street, and the Thorpe Campus of Tendring Technology College (Years 7, 8 and 9) in Landermere Road.Its history can be traced back to Saxon times.Rolph Primary School Education League Table Page from BBC Site.The village is popular with locals and visitors, with a reasonable selection of shops, pubs and eateries.This is one of the biggest comprehensive schools in North Essex with around 1,700 pupils.Unfortunately the Post Office was closed in the last round of Government cuts and the High Street becomes extremely busy in summer with coastal traffic