Original sentence: Mueller's book was received with confusion by many terrorism experts, who felt--like most members of the public--that terrorism does matter.Mueller's central argument is that an American is more likely to die of drowning in the bath than in a terrorist attack, and that the rational response to terrorism is to treat it rather as shoplifting is treated--by trying to minimize its impact and otherwise getting on with life
Edited sentence: Mueller's book was received with confusion by many terrorism experts, who felt—like most members of the public--that terrorism does matter.Mueller's central argument is that an American is more likely to die of drowning in the bath than in a terrorist attack, and that the rational response to terrorism is to treat it rather as shoplifting is treated—by trying to minimize its impact and otherwise getting on with life