Original sentence: In recent years, Michigan Tech has experienced financial troubles (along with many universities in Michigan).Michigan Tech opened a campus in India in 2003.The university has also been concerned with recruiting a diverse student body, as Michigan Tech is a large distance from the nearest population centers
Edited sentence: In addition, there is concern that the declining population of  students in rural Michigan high schools that have historically sent students to Michigan Tech suggests that Michigan Tech will have trouble maintaining both its already low admissions standards (in 2004 94% of applicants were accepted according to Peterson's) and student population.Michigan Tech opened a campus in India.Some question why the State of Michigan should continue to financially support an institution so far from modern-day population centers