Original sentence: Before leaving, Thanos states that though Galactus' intent was noble, his arrogance nearly destroyed the universe, that his continued consumption of inhabited worlds will eventually unite the universal population against him, and on that day Thanos will stand among his enemies.Bitter at being an outsider, Thanos becomes fascinated with nihilism, embarking on his quest to "please" death, and begins by conducting a nuclear bombardment of Titan that kills millions of his race.Thanos is a fictional character that appears in comic books published by Marvel Comics.Thanos is also found as a character inside of the board game Heroscape.Thanos matures to adulthood, and via the use of bionics and mysticism augments his abilities to become the most powerful of the Titanian-born Eternals, and is often referred to as the Mad Titan.Unknown to Thanos, two of the family members in the vehicle survive — the father's spirit is preserved by the Titanian cosmic entity Chronos and is given a new form as Drax the Destroyer while the daughter is found by Thanos' father Mentor and is raised to become Moondragon
Edited sentence: Before leaving, Thanos states that though Galactus' intent was noble, his arrogance nearly destroyed the universe, and that should they encounter each other again, it would be as enemies.Bitter at being an outsider, Thanos is driven insane and becomes fascinated with nihilism, embarking on his quest to "please" death, and begins by conducting a nuclear bombardment of Titan that kills millions of his race.Thanos is a character that appears in the fictional Marvel Universe.Thanos matures to adulthood, and via the use of bionics and mysticism augments his abilities to easily become the most powerful of the Titanian-born Eternals, and is often referred to as the Mad Titan.Unknown to Thanos, two of the family members in the vehicle survive—the father's spirit is preserved by the Titanian cosmic entity Chronos and is given a new form as Drax the Destroyer while the daughter is found by Thanos' father Mentor and is raised to become Moondragon