Original sentence: A notable ad for "Ike" Eisenhower was an issue-free feel-good animated cartoon with a soundtrack song by Irving Berlin called I Like Ike.Because Eisenhower's 1952 election victory was due, in large part, to winning the female vote, there were a plethora of "housewife" focused ads
Edited sentence: The most notable ad for "Ike" Eisenhower was the plethora of "housewife" focused ads, as his 1952 election victory was due, in large part, by winning the female vote