Original sentence: By sometime in 1888, he had already done three Caesarian sections with the past year.In 1876, Lusk published "Nature, Causes and Prevention of Puerperal Fever," which was one of the first papers to come out in support of germ theory.In March 1887, Lusk performed the second one in the United States where both the mother and child survived.Lusk also recognized authority on gynecology.Lusk was also one of the few physicians to have successfully performed a Caesarian section.Lusk wrote many medical papers.The Science and Art of Midwifery achieved great sales in America and England, and was translated into many languages, including French, Italian, Spanish, Arabic.. The book went through four editions.The fourth edition is practically a rewrite, and the fifth edition is in planning stages
Edited sentence: By sometime in 1888, he had already performed three fully successful Caesarian sections within the past year.In March 1887, Lusk performed the second Caesarian section in the United States where both the mother and child survived.Lusk was also one of the first physicians to successfully perform a Caesarian section.Lusk was also recognized authority on gynecology.Lusk was either planning to or in the process of writing a fifth edition when he died.Lusk wrote many medical papers, including his 1876 paper, "Nature, Causes and Prevention of Puerperal Fever," which was one of the first papers to come out in support of germ theory.The book achieved great sales in America and England, and was translated into many languages, including French, Italian, Spanish, Arabic.. It went through four editions, the last of which was practically a rewrite