Original sentence: His accomplishments caught the attention of the Ultimate Fighting Championship, where he began his mixed martial arts career less than a year later in 2001.Penn knocked Stevenson down seconds into the first round with a right uppercut, then took Stevenson down, eventually inflicting a serious cut near Stevenson's hairline later in the round
Edited sentence: His numerous and very much impressive grappling prowess caught the attention of the Ultimate Fighting Championship, where he began his mixed martial arts career less than a year later in 2001.Penn knocked Stevenson down seconds into the first round with a right uppercut, then took Stevenson down, eventually inflicting a serious cut (vivid photos of the excessive amounts of blood oozing from Stevenson can be found on "mmaweekly.com") near Stevenson's hairline later in the round