Original sentence: On June 3, 2018, Reuss crashed the Corvette ZR1 pace car in the first corner of the first pace lap of the second race at the 2018 Detroit Grand Prix, leading to a lengthy delay
Edited sentence: Broadcast live, nationwide, on network television June 3, 2018, while serving as IndyCar's honorary celebrity pace car driver, Reuss looped the  ZR1 Corvette pace car exiting turn two of the Belle Isle Circuit on the initial pace lap of the second heat race at the 2018 Detroit Grand Prix, nerfing it hard enough into the wall for a dual air bag deployment, littering the circuit asunder with enough debris to prompt a race stoppage, an hour long delay to the race start, and a firestorm of criticism on social media.His incompetence at the wheel adversely affected the outcome of at least two of Indycar's competitors