Original sentence: And so on January 17, 1969, "The Lady Triskelions''" were born, although the name Sedarum Saudara Sorority or "SexSlaveSucks"  was first chosen to mark the formation of a new organization in the campus, it quickly became one of the most popular sorority in UP.Redfordwhite, and the Tresehudas, the Palito and movie Actress Suzette Ranillo, siblings of Philippine movie Actor Mat Ranillo III
Edited sentence: And so on January 17, 1969, "The Lady Triskelions" were born, although the name Sedarum Saudara Sorority or "SexSlaveSucks" was first chosen to mark the formation of a new organization in the campus, it quickly became one of the most popular sorority in UP.Redfordwhite, and the Tresehudas'', the pretty Palito and movie Actress Suzette Ranillo, siblings of Philippine movie Actor Mat Ranillo III