Original sentence: She died in Chicago  in 1954 of pneumonia, at the age of 34, and is buried in Oak Hill Cemetery in Gary, Indiana
Edited sentence: He was singing the song "Why don't you" in a new vision.Lil Green was famous as singer.She died in Chicago  in 1954 of pneumonia, at the age of 34, and is buried in Oak Hill Cemetery in Gary,.the first original vision of the song "Why don't you" was Gramophonedzie