Original sentence: A spectator (believed to be John Green; he awaits trial) then threw a cup of beer at Artest.Though not directly related to what happened in Detroit the night before, Clemson head coach Tommy Bowden, son of Florida State University head coach Bobby Bowden, said his players had stayed up the night before, watching what had happened in Detroit
Edited sentence: A spectator (John Green) then threw a cup of beer at Artest.It Should Also be Noted That While The City of Detroit's Name is routinely invoked in reference to the brawl, the brawl itself occurred 30 Miles North of the City and all of the major perpetrators in the Brawl were not residents of Detroit.Though not directly related to what happened in Detroit the night before, Clemson head coach Tommy Bowden, son of Florida State University head coach Bobby Bowden, made a ludicrous statement, saying his players had stayed up the night before, watching what had happened in Detroit