Original sentence: George Strong VC (April 7, 1833 – August 25, 1888) was an English soldier in the Crimean War, who was awarded the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces.Strong died August 25, 1888
Edited sentence: George Strong VC (7 April 1833 – 25 August 1888) was an English soldier in the Crimean War, who was awarded the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces.Strong died on 25 August, 1888