Original sentence: Changes were also made to the DVD releases of Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace and Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones; all six movies were modified again for the 2011 release of Star Wars: The Complete Saga Blu-ray edition.The changes are controversial, with opponents claiming that the changes detract from the character arc of the films and tend to be more distracting than expedient.The commercial success of Star Wars gave George Lucas the opportunity to alter the original films of the trilogy: Star Wars, The Empire Strikes Back, and Return of the Jedi
Edited sentence: Damages were also made to the DVD releases of Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace and Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones; all six movies were modified again for the 2011 release of Star Wars: The Complete Saga Blu-ray edition.The changes are controversial and rightfully so, with opponents claiming that the changes detract from the character arc of the films and tend to be more distracting than expedient.The commercial success of Star Wars gave George Lucas the opportunity to ruin the original films of the trilogy: Star Wars, The Empire Strikes Back, and Return of the Jedi