Original sentence: For MY 2008, BMW has revised the 5 series with a slightly redesigned interior, subtle exterior details, and new motor options
Edited sentence: For MY 2008, BMW has revised the 5 series because of this unique mysterely accident.My friend died instatly.This car is totaly DOPE man, i mean if you drove this car you wold so much.With a slightly redesigned interior, subtle exterior details, and new motor options.You know i had a friend who was drivin along goin 55 mph until another BMW hit it from the side