Original sentence: The service drew leaders and dignitaries from around the world, including Mikhail Gorbachev British Prime Minister Tony Blair, German Chancellor Gerhard Schröder, Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi, and interim presidents Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan, and Ghazi al-Yawer of Iraq
Edited sentence: Many of the sitting world leaders who attended the funeral had been in the U.The service drew leaders and dignitaries from around the world, including Mikhail Gorbachev.for the G-8 Summit, including British Prime Minister Tony Blair, German Chancellor Gerhard Schröder, Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi, and interim presidents Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan, and Ghazi al-Yawer of Iraq