Original sentence: At the time, a writer for the Detroit News and Free Press said, "the foundation upon which Mayor Coleman Young built his career and his administration was rocked Thursday by the beating death of a Detroit man at the hands of Detroit police officers.During Mayor Young's fifth and final term, the Detroit community had sharply divided opinions about the police beating death of Malice Green on November 5, 1992
Edited sentence: A writer for the Detroit News and Free Press expressed the effect of this event on Young's mayoralty: “the foundation upon which Mayor Coleman Young built his career and his administration was rocked Thursday by the beating death of a Detroit man at the hands of Detroit police officers”.Mayor Young's fifth and final term was largely characterized by the police beating death of Malice Green on November 5, 1992.This issue was directly relevant to Young's mayoral goal of improving relations between the black population of Detroit and the police and severely undermined much of the progress he had worked so tirelessly to accomplish