Original sentence: It takes time for any couple to develop mutual trust and understanding, and this difficulty is aggravated by the challenges facing any long-distance relationship, especially the unusual circumstances of the mail-order bride relationship.Some conduct private investigations into the woman's background without discussing their concerns to their potential bride.Some men use these services as a diversion and have no intention of making such women their wives, and they may distort key information about their relationship history.Without the normal process of meeting and getting to know a new partner, some men feel they cannot trust a mail-order bride
Edited sentence: It is not uncommon for these men to make in excess of $100,000, own their own homes and businesses.Some men use these services as a diversion, being, perhaps, previously married and having no intention of making such women their wives, and sometimes, key details such as the reasons for previous divorces and existence of previous relationships are not disclosed, like all dating activities the parties need time to develop an understanding of each other, but the circumstances around these long distance relationships make it difficult for either party to learn significant facts about the other party so some of the men may conduct private investigations into the woman's background out of fear and not disclose their lack of trust in this situation.There is also a growing field of gay men who are turning to the internet to find their significant others and they may also fall prey to misrepresentations by their potential male partners who fail to disclose important facts to them before they immigrate or change their lifestyle for a foreign born mate; this is particularly true in countries such as Canada that now allow homosexuals to marry and sponsor their unmarried homosexual partners for immigrant visas.These men are leery of trusting American women who are older and more cynical.They look to young foreign brides because they still hope to find love without the bitterness so common with old American women