Original sentence: On January 15, 1984, after recently meeting Aitken and Stock, Waterman decided to sign them to his recently formed record label Pete Waterman Limited (PWL).Pete Waterman is now accepted as having had no musical or lyrical contribution whatsoever to any of the songs, but for many years tried to take credit for writing the hits for Kylie Minogue, Rick Astley, etc.Stock Aitken Waterman, sometimes known as SAW, were a British songwriting and record producing trio who had great success during the late 1980s and early 1990s with many of their productions.They were considered by many to be the most successful UK songwriting partnership of all time, scoring over 200 top 40 UK hits in the mid 80s to early 90s
Edited sentence: Considered by many to be the most successful UK songwriting partnership of all time, scoring over 200 top 40 UK hits in the mid 80s to early 90s.On January 15, 1984, after recently meeting Aitken and Stock, Waterman decides to sign them to his recently formed record label Pete Waterman Limited (PWL).Pete Waterman is now accepted as having had no musical or lyrical contribution whatsoever to any of the songs, but for many many years tried to take credit for writing the hits for Kylie Minogue etc.Stock Aitken Waterman, sometimes known as SAW, were a British songwriting and record producing trio who had great success during the late 1980s and early 1990s with many of the songs they wrote