Original sentence: At Suan Kularb School, Bangkok, Thailand, Chaibul during his adolescence, started to be interested in Buddhism.Dhammajayo and a group of devoted Buddhists transform the site into a wooded parkland with a system of canals.Having matriculated from Suan Kularb Secondary School in 1963, Chaibul was enrolled in the Faculty of Agriculture, Kasetsart University.It was here that he first met  the Buddhist nun Chandra Khonnokyoong, one of the most respected Buddhist Meditation teachers at that time.Phrarajbhavanavisudh influenced millions of people within Thailand and worldwide to practice meditation form of Dhammakaya.Sc (Economics), he was ordained at Wat Paknam Bhasicharoen on the 27th of August 1969.Under Kuhn Yay's supervision, Chaibul attained a certain level of knowledge of Buddhism
Edited sentence: At Suan Kularb School, Bangkok, Thailand, Chaibul during his adolescence, started to be interested in Buddhism, Having matriculated from Suan Kularb Secondary School in 1963, Chaibul was enrolled in the Faculty of Agriculture, Kasetsart University.Dhammajayo and a group of devoted Buddhists shared in their efforts to transform the site into a wooded parkland with a system of canals.He was ordained at Wat Paknam Bhasicharoen on the 27th of August 1969.His students were many and from all walks of life.It was here that he first met his mentor and spiritual guardian, the Buddhist nun Chandra Khonnokyoong.Phrarajbhavanavisudh succeeded in influencing millions of people within Thailand and worldwide to practice meditation form of Dhammakaya.Sc (Economics), Chaibul made it known to his family that he intended to spend the rest of his life as a Buddhist monk.She was one of the most respected Buddhist Meditation teachers at that time.Since his early childood, Chaibul had developed a quality of self-confidence, strong determination and leadership.Under Kuhn Yay's close supervision, Chaibul attained a certain level of knowledge of Buddhism