Original sentence: The Old-timers is a South African Christian hardcore band that primarily plays hardcore punk and punk rock
Edited sentence: The Old-timers is a Christian hardcore band from South Africa.The Old-timers is a South African Christian hardcore band that's purpose is to give glory to God.They both had a deep love for Jesus and punk rock music and so a fast friendship was formed.They primarily play hardcore punk and punk rock.They started making music together when Dave met Don through a mutual friend