Original sentence: Born in Bombay (Mumbai), India, Kapoor attended the Doon School, located in Dehra Dun, India.Kapoor represented Britain in the 1990 Venice Biennale, where he was awarded the Premio Duemila; the following year, he won the Turner Prize
Edited sentence: Born in Bombay (Mumbai), India, Kapoor attended the prestigious Doon School, located in Dehra Dun, India.Kapoor represented Britain in the 1990 Venice Biennale, where he was awarded the Premio Duemila; the following year, he won the prestigious Turner Prize