Original sentence: According to Cincinnati Police, the majority of violent crimes in Over-the-Rhine are drug-related.Crime, while down, has not been eliminated.There have been several instances where children have been killed in the cross fire of gunfire, although witnesses of such crimes have refused to speak in fear of retaliation
Edited sentence: According to Cincinnati Police, 80% of those arrested in Over-the-Rhine do not live in the community, and the majority of violent crimes in Over-the-Rhine are drug-related.There have been several instances where children have been killed in gun cross fire, although witnesses of such crimes refused to speak because of fear of retaliation