Original sentence: The annual Hungry Ghost Festival, celebrated in Greater China (including Hong Kong and Macao Special Administrative Regions and Taiwan), Malaysia, Singapore, and elsewhere in the Chinese diaspora, is dedicated to performing rituals to honor and remember the spirits of the dead
Edited sentence: The annual Hungry Ghost Festival, celebrated in China (including Taiwan province, Hong Kong and Macao Special Administrative Regions), Malaysia, Singapore, and elsewhere in the Chinese diaspora, is dedicated to performing rituals to honor and remember the spirits of the dead