Original sentence: British Asian emcee I-Kompleate, pays homage to Rakim on his  song "Rhymes", with the bars "No one can be in the state of mind that Rakim is in" and "Aware of the first, 'who's flow was submerged, in the fountain of youths' where the age is diverse" both lines which has Rakim in the background
Edited sentence: British Asian emcee I-Kompleate, pays homage to Rakim on his  song "Rhymes" which can be heard on his Myspace, with the bars "No one can be in the state of mind that Rakim is in" and "Aware of the first, 'who's flow was submerged, in the fountain of youths' where the age is diverse" both lines which has Rakim in the background