Original sentence: Construction may begin in late 2009.In January 2009, Disney announced that a theme park will be made in Shanghai by 2013.Scouts are looking for a suitable site for a Disney resort on mainland China, possibly near Shanghai.The park will receive three new themed lands, they are Grizzly Trail, Mystic Point and Toy Story Land
Edited sentence: Construction may begin in late 2009 and will take 5 years to be built.In January 2009, Disney announced that a theme park will be made in Shanghai by 2014.Scouts are looking for a suitable site for a Disney resort on mainland China, possibly in Shanghai.The park will receive three new theme lands, they are Grizzly Trail, Mystic Point and Toy Story Land