Original sentence: In the West Bank, Palestinians are not Israeli citizens and therefore cannot vote in Israeli elections; different areas of the West Bank are under  varying levels of Israeli control.settlers to Area C (and their offspring) retain their citizenship, and can continue to vote
Edited sentence: Disenfranchisement still occurs within these territories as a result of the PNA's often undemocratic behavior.However they are given the right to vote within their territories for their local authorities as they are not under Israeli jurisdiction but rather they are under the jurisdiction of the Palestinian National Authority (PNA) which they have elected democratically.In Israel non-Jewish residents of the occupied territories are not Israeli citizens, and therefore cannot vote in Israeli elections.Israel have often attempted to intervene in order to preserve the democratic rights of the Palestinians in these areas, but have in doing so been accused of tampering with democracy and have thus been forced to leave the Palestinians to the authority of the PNA