Original sentence: Edouard "Newsy" Lalonde (October 31, 1887, Cornwall, Ontario - November 21, 1970) was a Canadian professional ice hockey forward in the National Hockey League (NHL) and a professional lacrosse player, regarded as one of hockey's and lacrosse's greatest players of the first half of the 20th century and one of sport's most colorful characters
Edited sentence: Edouard "Newsy" Lalonde (October 31, 1887, Cornwall, Ontario - November 21, 1970) was a Canadian professional ice hockey forward in the National Hockey League (NHL) and a professional lacrosse player, widely regarded as both hockey's and lacrosse's greatest player of the first half of the 20th century and one of sport's most colorful characters