Original sentence: Alamosa photovoltaic power plant, is a 8.22 MWp photovoltaic power plant located in San Luis Valley, Colorado, USA.Colorado Xcel customers pay approximately 2% more for electricity to subsidize renewable energy projects.The plant has received some criticism, saying that the amount of land used is large in comparison to the amount of power generated.The power plant was developed by SunEdison, sells all output to Xcel Energy, and was completed in December 2007
Edited sentence: Alamosa photovoltaic power plant, is a 8.22 MWp photovoltaic power plant located in San Luis Valley.Colorado Xcel customers pay about 2% more for electricity to subsidize renewable energy projects.The plant has received some criticism, saying that the amount of land used is too large to produce such a small amount of power.The power plant was constructed by SunEdison for Xcel Energy, and completed in December 2007