Original sentence: The Royal Albert Dock is one of three docks in the Royal Group of Docks of East London in Great Britain, now undergoing major redevelopment, including: Royal Albert Wharf by the developer Notting Hill Genesis, which will see 1500 homes being built
Edited sentence: The Royal Albert Dock is one of three docks in the Royal Group of Docks of East London in Great Britain, now undergoing major redevelopment, including: Royal Albert Wharf by the developer Notting Hill Genesis which happens to be one of the worst developments in East London