Original sentence: Editors, please DO NOT move this page, see here Talk:Incorporation of Crimea into the Russian Federation#DO NOT MOVE THIS PAGE for more details.Russia granted the request almost immediately by signing an adoption treaty together with the newly formed nation.So does the majority of the international community who has condemned Russia's actions as illegal.Thank you.The Incorporation of Crimea into the Russian Federation, also called the Annexation of Crimea by the Russian Federation by the majority of United Nations, the United States, the European Union, and their allies—or the Accession of Crimea to the Russian Federation by Russia and her allies—is a disputed diplomatic process that began after the Autonomous Republic of Crimea and the city of Sevastopol unilaterally declared their independence from Ukraine.The Treaty on the Adoption of the Republic of Crimea to Russia was signed between representatives of the Republic of Crimea and the Russian Federation on March 18, 2014 to lay out terms for the immediate admission of the Republic of Crimea and Sevastopol as federal subjects of Russia and part of the Russian Federation.The accession, however, was ratified separately: one for the Autonomous Republic as a republic and another for Sevastopol as a federal city, resulting in establishment of two new federal subjects of Russia.The current title perfectly meets our WP:NPOV policy.The regions joined together as a single nation afterwards and requested to be acceded to Russia as such, in accordance with a referendum that reflected such desire.Ukraine, however, disputes the treaty as it does not consider the independence of the Autonomous Republic and Sevastopol as legitimate, nor the accession itself
Edited sentence: Russia granted the request almost immediately by signing an adoption treaty with the newly formed nation.The Secretary General of NATO, Anders Fogh Rasmussen, and several world leaders condemned Russia's actions as an illegal annexation.The accession of the Republic of Crimea to the Russian Federation is a disputed diplomatic process that began after the Autonomous Republic of Crimea and the city of Sevastopol unilaterally declared their independence from Ukraine.The accessions, however, were ratified separately: one for Crimea as a republic and another for Sevastopol as a federal city, resulting in the establishment of two new federal subjects of Russia.The regions joined together as a single nation afterwards and requested accession to Russia, in accordance with a referendum that reflected such desire.Ukraine, however, disputes the treaty, as it does not recognize the independence of Crimea and Sevastopol or the accession itself as legitimate