Original sentence: After high school, Mike began working with Ingenia Communications, an Ottawa-area computer consultancy.He currently serves as the Technology Strategist for the Mozilla Corporation where he helps determine what projects Mozilla should support.His efforts saw him rise from a summer student who worked as a system administrator and software developer to chief systems architect and eventually CTO.Shaver eventually left to work at Netscape Communications
Edited sentence: After high school, Mike began working with Ingenia Communications, an Ottawa area computer consultancy.He currently serves as the Technology Strategist for the Mozilla Corporation where he helps determine what projects Mozilla should be supporting in order to promote innovation and progress on the world wide web.His efforts saw him rise from a humble summer student who worked as a system administrator and software developer to chief systems architect and eventually CTO.Shaver then began work at Netscape Communications