Original sentence: The Socialist Federal Republic of Yugoslavia (which separated into the states of Bosnia and Herzegovina, Serbia, Montenegro, Former Yugoslav Republic Of Macedonia, Croatia, and Slovenia) was a socialist state.The war for independence changed this, but has led to break up into independent states, which have all adopted EU integration as an aim of foreign policy
Edited sentence: The Socialist Federal Republic of Yugoslavia (which separated into the states of Bosnia and Herzegovina, Serbia, Montenegro, Former Yugoslav Republic Of Macedonia, Croatia, and Slovenia) was a non-democratic communist state, with a relatively benign regime compared to Soviet satellites.The war for independence changed this, but has led to independent democratic states, which have all adopted EU integration as an aim of foreign policy