Original sentence: Incarnate Word Academy is a Roman Catholic, private, secondary school for women.Soccer, volleyball, and basketball are sports which the school has won state championships in.The first year, the school enrolled thirty-five students
Edited sentence: Incarnate Word Academy is a Roman Catholic, private, secondary school for young women.Incarnate is a school which has a history of great athletic programs.Soccer, volleyball, quidditch, and basketball are sports which the school has won state championships in.The first year, the school only included thirty-five students