Original sentence: As reported in the Manchester Evening News on 29 July 2009, Michael is currently training with Stockport County FC.He is attempting to impress new boss Gary Ablett and will be playing in Stockport Countys 2009 pre-season friendlys
Edited sentence: After failing to obtain the required match fitness for Stockport's pre-season friendlies with Real Valladolid and Linfield, an unimpresed Gary Ablett revealed he had ended his trial