Original sentence: In accordance with the "imperialist" attitudes of the time, Speke despised Africans and Asians, as well as the indiscriminate hunting and killing of animals.Several reasons explain the estrangement that later occurred between Burton and Speke: the two men were very different in character, with Speke's attitude in alignment with the prevailing morality of Victorian England and imperialism; an intensive and obvious professional rivalry has also been documented
Edited sentence: In accordance with the imperialist attitudes of the time, Speke despised Africans and Asians, as well as the indiscriminate hunting and killing of animals.The two men were very different in character, with Speke being more in tune with the prevailing morality of Victorian England and imperialistic attitude to other cultures.There are several reasons why they became estranged.There was obviously a great element of professional rivalry