Original sentence: Dorothy's appearance at the 1969 Big Sur Folk Festival was captured on film; with the Combs Sisters, she sang "All God's Children Got Soul", her only song to make the Billboard Top 100
Edited sentence: Dorothy's appearance at the 1969 Big Sur Folk Festival is seen in the film Celebration at Big Sur; with the Combs Sisters, she sang "All God's Children Got Soul", her only song to make the Billboard Top 100