Original sentence: Asians and African-Caribbeans are five times more likely to get type 2 diabetes.Obesity is found in approximately 55% of patients diagnosed with type 2 diabetes, and as many as 85% are overweight.There are numerous theories as to the exact cause and mechanism in type 2 diabetes, but being overweight and inactive are considered the main risk factors.Type 2 diabetes, once thought of as a problem for primarily adults, is now being diagnosed with greater frequency in children
Edited sentence: Obesity is found in approximately 55% of patients diagnosed with type 2 diabetes.There are numerous theories as to the exact cause and mechanism in type 2 diabetes