Original sentence: Bedford Avenue is the longest street in Brooklyn, New York City, stretching  and 132 blocks from Greenpoint south to Sheepshead Bay, and passing through the neighborhoods of Williamsburg(where it is a main street and the quintessential hipster Williamsburg), Bedford-Stuyvesant, Crown Heights, Flatbush and Midwood
Edited sentence: Bedford Avenue is the longest street in Brooklyn, New York City, stretching  and 132 blocks from Greenpoint south to Sheepshead Bay, and passing through the neighborhoods of Williamsburg(where it is a main street), Bedford-Stuyvesant, Crown Heights, Flatbush and Midwood