Original sentence: Augustus wrote a small work on agriculture entitled Künstlich Obstund Gartenbüchlein.He was famous for his various museum collections, including the finest collection of arms and weapons in Northern Europe, paintings, and an extensive collection of tools
Edited sentence: Augustus was a covetous, cruel and superstitious man, but these qualities were redeemed by his political caution and his wise methods of government.He was also famous for his various museum collections, including the finest collection of arms and weapons in Northern Europe, paintings, and an extensive collection of tools.He wrote a small work on agriculture entitled Künstlich Obstund Gartenbüchlein