Original sentence: HRW claims that some Kurds in the same family became citizens while others became foreigners suggesting an inaccuracy in the Syrian government's process; HRW also alleges that some of the Kurds who had served in the Syrian army lost citizenship while those who bribed officials kept theirs.In Syria, other than in the governorate of Al-Hasakah, foreigners cannot be employed at government agencies and state-owned enterprises; they may not legally marry Syrian citizens.Stateless Kurds also do not have the option of legally relocating to another country because they lack passports or other internationally recognized travel documents
Edited sentence: In Syria, foreigners cannot be employed at government agencies and state-owned enterprises.Many Kurds who had served in the Syrian army lost citizenship while families who could bribe officials kept theirs.Some Kurds in the same family became citizens while others became foreigners proving the inaccuracy in the Syrian government's process.Stateless Kurds also do not have the option of relocating to another country because they lack passports or other internationally recognized travel documents.They are not issued passports or other travel documents, and thus may not legally leave or return to Syria.They may not legally marry Syrian citizens