Original sentence: Provo is a city in Utah and the county seat of Utah County, located about 50 miles south of Salt Lake City along the Wasatch Front.Tahitian Noni International is a health and skin care manufacturer whose products are based on the Tahitian fruit called noni
Edited sentence: Provo is a beautiful city in Utah and is the county seat of Utah County, located about 50 miles south of Salt Lake City along the Wasatch Front.Tahitian Noni International is a health and skin care manufacturer whose products are based on the Tahitian fruit called noni and are distributed by direct sales independent consultants.The Provo area has continued to have the highest approval ratings for President Bush