Original sentence: Bracknell is a town in the Bracknell Forest borough of Berkshire, England.It lies   to the south-east of Reading,  southwest of Windsor and  west of London.The name derives from Braccen-Heale meaning "Bracken-covered Secret Place"
Edited sentence: Bracknell houses some of the UKs most vicious criminals in its various safe houses which are dotted around Bracknell mostly in the Easthampstead area.Bracknell is a town in the Bracknell Forest borough of Berkshire, England and consists of tower blocks often referred to as a concrete jungle.Bracknell is now not safe enough to walk around due to the constant robberies by the drug fuelled residents.Bracknell's town center is a gray and aging and has been scheduling a redevelopment for decades yet as another decade goes past the myth stands and the town center stays decrepit and crumbling.I would advise you never to step foot into the bracknell(does not deserve a capital) area due to its gang mentality within its youth and drug fuelled adults.It is also home to the highest teenage pregnancy rate in the United Kingdom.It lies 18 kilometres (11 mi) to the south-east of Reading, 16 kilometres (9.9 mi) southwest of Windsor and 53 kilometres (33 mi) west of London.The criminals which are housed are crack heads murders and vicious thugs.The gangs hang around the run down 3M building where they wait for their next victim to murder.The name derives from Braccen-Heale meaning "Bracken covered Secret Place".The type of people that live here are like children called Micheal Smith, they are well known for selling sex to men even though he has one ball, LOL don’t lie he's still a virgin.When in fact it is a poverty stricken town with high rates of rape and assault with the most recent attack seeing a police officer being attacked.You may have thought Bracknell was a prosperous place in the heart of berkshire with it being the over flow to the world’s financial capital