Original sentence: During the re-election campaign against Sam Katz, the FBI acknowledged that it had placed listening devices in the Mayor's office as part of a corruption investigation of Street's friend and fund raiser Ron White, who died before going to trial.Former city treasurer Corey Kemp, a member of Street's administration, was sentenced to 10 years in jail after being found guilty on 27 corruption-related charges in May 2005.He grew up as a member of farming household, and is a Seventh-day Adventist.In a 2002 address at a convention of the NAACP, Street said that “the brothers and sisters are running the city.The magazine cited the low number of athletic facilities and high number of fast-food restaurants.The murder rate in Philadelphia hit a seven-year high during Street's tenure.” This observation attacted some criticism and charges of racial divisiveness
Edited sentence: During the re-election campaign against Sam Katz, the FBI acknowledged that it had placed listening devices in the Mayor's office as part of a corruption investigation.He grew up as a member of farming household, the son of a white father and African-American mother.He is a Seventh-day Adventist, and well known for his evangelical approach to weight loss and healthy living.In his infamous speech to a NAACP convention, he was scorned by many and got little if any support for saying, “the brothers and sisters are running the city.The magazine cited the low number of athletic facilities(Seemingly at odds with Philadelphia being a haven for joggers and cyclists because of its large Fairmount Park) and high number of fast-food restaurants.There has been no evidence that Street himself is corrupt, but federal prosecutors say the mayor's close friend and fund raiser, Ron White, partially took control of city contracting and used the process to find donations for Street's 2003 re-election campaign.While in office, the murder rate in Philadelphia is at a seven-year high.White died before going to trial, but former city treasurer Corey Kemp, a member of Street's administration, was sentenced to 10 years in jail after being found guilty on 27 corruption-related charges in May 2005