Original sentence: After the elections, Navaz arrived to Islamabad where he met with large crowd of spontaneous and jubilant people supporting for Nawaz, it took more than 13 hours for Nawaz Sharif to reach to Islamabad in order to take the oath.As commentary, 1997 election resulted to boost Navaz popularity and was mandate onerous task to improve the country's economy.Commenting on his victory, the Pakistan media and the people of Pakistan hoped that Sharif would provide a conservative but a stable government benefit for Pakistan as he promised earlier.Navaz defeated Benazir Bhutto with overwhelmingly voting numbers and it was the worst defeat of Bhutto and People's party since its inception.With the passing of the 14th amendment, Sharif emerged as the most powerful elected Prime Minister in the country since its independence in 1947, and no other leader has enjoyed the his level of extreme popularity
Edited sentence: Navaz defeated Benazir Bhutto with overwhelmingly voting numbers and it was the worst defeat of Bhutto and People's party since its inception, many investigative journalists of the time also leaked reports that widespread fraud in the polling stations throughout the country was being carried out especially in the South of Punjab and northern Sindh regions which are a key stronghold of Pakistan Peoples Party, however as the media was not as free and independent as it is today the rumors were suppressed so that no one could challenge the legitimacy of the government and the elections.With the passing of the 14th amendment Sharif secured his government at the price of democracy being stained in Pakistan