Original sentence: At the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, she won the Women's All-Around Gymnastics gold medal, also earning silver medals in the all-around team competition, the uneven bars final, and the balance beam final, as well a bronze medal in the floor exercise final....
Edited sentence: At the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, she won the Women's All-Around Gymnastics gold medal, also earning silver medals in the all-around team competition, the uneven bars final, and the balance beam final, as well a bronze medal in the floor exercise final