Original sentence: Baron Cohen's maternal family were German Jews, emigrants to Israel.His maternal grandmother, who lived in Haifa, Israel, trained as a ballet dancer in Germany.His mother, photographer Daniella Naomi (née Weiser), was born in Israel
Edited sentence: Baron Cohen's maternal family were German Jews, emigrants to Palestine.His maternal grandmother, who lived in Haifa, Palestine, trained as a ballet dancer in Germany.His mother, photographer Daniella Naomi (née Weiser), was born in Palestine