Original sentence: After the elections, 567 civilians are alleged to have been killed by Sri Lanka Army alone, and 283 civilians by paramilitaries operated by the army.Sri Lanka Armed Forces have commuted various human rights abuses especially against Tamil civilians , including various massacres, rapes, murders even in religious establishments  and orphanages
Edited sentence: Sri Lanka Armed Forces have commuted various human rights abuses especially against Tamil civilians , including various massacres, rapes, murders even in religious establishments