Original sentence: He was a three foot high, cigar smoking man with an overcoat and four tiny pink wings, and a member of the Elves, Leprechauns, Gnomes, and Little Men's Chowder & Marching Society.O'Malley's conceit was matched only by his inability to grant the simplest childhood request, and his misguided attempts to help never failed to get Barnaby into hot water
Edited sentence: He was a three foot high, cigar smoking man with an overcoat and four tiny pink wings, and was a member of the Elves, Leprechauns, Gnomes, and Little Men's Chowder & Marching Society.O'Malley's conceit was matched only by his inability to grant the simplest childhood request, and his misguided attempts never failed to get Barnaby into hot water