Original sentence: Allegedly following his advice, the King could win the battles after he lost so many times.Ek Nath Dhakal, former Minister for Co-operatives and Poverty Alleviation and Minister for Peace and Reconstruction, Government of Nepal who born in Borlang, Gorkha is a great-grandson of Kulananda Dhakal.Kulananda Dhakal was the most famous priest and astrologer of Prithvi Narayan Shah who united Nepal
Edited sentence: Ek Nath Dhakal, former Minister for Co-operatives and Poverty Alleviation and Minister for Peace and Reconstruction, Government of Nepal who born in Borlang, Gorkha is a great grandson of Kulananda Dhakal.Following his advice, the King could win the battles after he lost so many times.Kulananda Dhakal, was the most famous priests and astrologers of Prithvi Narayan Shah who united Nepal