Original sentence: He did his primary studies at Midilli, in a stressed religious focus, but he also learned good French at an early age.He was buried in Beşiktaş, İstanbul.Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha was born in 1855 in Midilli (Lesbos today) to a family of Greek ancestry who had formerly converted to Islam.Hüseyin Hilmi was one of the most successful Ottoman administrators in the explosive Balkans of the early 20th century becoming Ottoman Inspector-General of Macedonia from 1902 to 1908, Ottoman  Minister for the Interior from 1908 to 1909 and Ottoman Ambassador at Vienna from 1912 to 1918.The same year, he was appointed as inspector general with responsibility over virtually all Balkan territories of the Ottoman Empire at the time (the vilayets of Selanik, Kosovo and Manastır).This first vizierate had had to be suddenly interrupted because of 31 March Incident which, despite its name, had occurred on 13 April 1909 and for up to a month fundamentalists had reigned in the streets of İstanbul till the arrival of an extraordinary army from Selanik
Edited sentence: He did his primary studies in Lesbos, and he also learned good French at an early age.He was buried in Beşiktaş, Istanbul.Hüseyin Hilmi Pasha was born in 1855 on Lesbos (Midilli) to a family of Greek ancestry who had formerly converted to Islam.Hüseyin Hilmi was one of the most successful Ottoman administrators in the explosive Balkans of the early 20th century, becoming Ottoman Inspector-General of Macedonia from 1902 to 1908, Ottoman  Minister for the Interior from 1908 to 1909 and Ottoman Ambassador at Vienna from 1912 to 1918.The same year, he was appointed as inspector general with responsibility over virtually all Balkan territories of the Ottoman Empire at the time, namely the vilayets of Salonica, Kosovo and Manastir (Bitola).This first vizierate had had to be suddenly interrupted because of the so-called 31 March Incident, when for a month fundamentalists had reigned in the streets of İstanbul till the arrival of an extraordinary army from Salonica