Original sentence: Abdurehman (ab-dur-reh-maan) is a retired major from the pakistani army and a politician in Jaranwala, the city of Faislabad , Punjab, Pakistan.He did a lot of construction work, made the severage system better,built new governmental official buildings.He was a Tehsil Nazim Muncipal Administrator of Tehsil city or sub division Jaranwala.In February 2008 he ran for and won a seat on the Punjab Assembly.In next election terms he did not got seat from his party PML-Q and had to run as an independent
Edited sentence: Abdurehman (ab-dur-reh-maan) is well known retired major from pakistani army & politician in Jaranwala, the city of Faislabad , Punjab, Pakistan.But he didn't gave up he came in the race of politics again but not on as higher level as he was before so the he ran for to be the Member of Punjab Assembly in Feburary 2008 and he won the elections and became the MPA.He was not just successful in his elections but also his goals and agendas.In next election terms he didnot got seat from his party PML-Q.So he had to run in election all by his self which was the major cause for him to loose the elections for next term for Tehsil Nazim.he did a lot of construction work, made the severage system better,built new governmental official buildings.he have been a Tehsil Nazim Muncipal Administrator of Tehsil city or sub division Jaranwala