Original sentence: In its newest Pocket PC OS, Windows Mobile 5.0, Microsoft eliminated the ability to sync the PDA with a PC remotely (via WiFi, GPRS or other mobile service) by any means other than through an Exchange server, along with omitting key productivity components, such as the ability to reply to an email received from a direct sync via WiFi or GPRS without utilising an Exchange server.This, along with several other highly suspicious changes and reductions in functionality from the previous version, Windows Mobile 2003 have been unpopular by some and are thought to have been made specifically to force businesses to choose between purchasing an otherwise unnecessary Exchange server, or losing much of the mobile functionality of their Pocket PC PDAs
Edited sentence: In its newest Pocket PC OS, Windows Mobile 5.0, Microsoft eliminated the ability to sync the PDA with a PC remotely (via WiFi, GPRS or other mobile service) by any means other than through an Exchange server, along with omitting key productivity components, such as the ability to reply to an email recieved from a direct sync via WiFi or GPRS without utilising an Exchange server.This, along with several other highly suspicious changes and reductions in functionality from the previous version, Windows Mobile 2003 have been consistently unpopular and are thought by many to have been made specifically to force businesses to choose between purchasing an otherwise unnecessary Exchange server, or losing much of the mobile functionality of their Pocket PC PDAs