Original sentence: Forty of the individuals are below the poverty level, and there are thirty four individuals who have not completed high school.Forty three percent of the residents are single with an average salary of forty six thousand dollars.Half of the residents are married and have an average income of sixty four thousand dollars.However, one hundred ninety five of the residents have completed college and received a degree.In the latest census, the Evergreen is made up of four hundred ten residents.It is a predominately white neighborhood, with ninety-seven and a half percent of the people being white.The majority of the people do not have kids (though there is a considerable upward trend of young children since the census), and the median age is thirty five years
Edited sentence: 43 percent of the residents are single with an average salary of $46,000 per year.About half of the residents are married.According to the 2000 census, the Evergreen neighborhood is made up of 405 residents.Forty of the individuals are below the poverty level, and there are 34 individuals who have not completed high school.However, 195 of the residents have completed college, with 115 stopping at a bachelor's degree and 80 holding a graduate or professional degree.It is a predominately white neighborhood, with 97.5 percent of the people being white.The majority of the residents do not have children under 18 years old living in their households (though there is a considerable upward trend of young children since the census), and the median age is 35 years.The median family income is about $65,000 per year.The most common occupations among residents are considered management and professional roles