Original sentence: At the Systems Building, Texas A&M leaders erected pictures of the deceased students.There, over a dozen seniors left behind their hard-earned Aggie rings, permanently donating them to the students who did not live long enough to earn their own
Edited sentence: The most moving tribute to the fallen students was left at the Systems Building, where A&M leaders had erected pictures of the deceased students.There, over a dozen seniors left behind their hard-earned Aggie rings, permanently donating them to the lost students who did not live long enough to earn one of their own