Original sentence: Christened Martha Helen Kostyra in Jersey City, New Jersey, she is the first daughter of Edward and Martha Kostyra.Martha Stewart (née Kostrya, born August 3, 1941) is an American business magnate, entrepreneur, and homemaking advocate
Edited sentence: Christened Martha Helen Kostyra (she later took the name "Grace" at confirmation) in Jersey City, New Jersey, she is the first daughter of Edward and Martha Kostyra.Martha Stewart (née Kostrya, born August 3, 1941) is an American business magnate, convicted felon, entrepreneur, and homemaking advocate