Original sentence: After the story was published Zuckerman became the target of personal attacks on the basis of his sexual orientation.For instance, Zuckerman was accused of having a bias against the Boy Scouts of America and the Mormon Church.He received criticism and praise for the series.In addition, for work on the series Zuckerman received the 2006 Livingston Award and the Post-Register won the Scripps Foundation's 2005 National Journalism Award for distinguished service to the First Amendment.Zuckerman, 27, is visiting faculty at the Poynter Institute
Edited sentence: After the story was published Zuckerman said he was the target of personal attacks on the basis of his sexual orientation.He also received recognition for the work when in the form of the 2006 Livingston Award.He received criticism for the series and accused of having a bias against the Boy Scouts of America and the Mormon Church