Original sentence: 2010 was a successful year for Ciro and the band, a new album went double platinum, a tour of the interior of the country, and Luna Park, but the best news for the musician was that it Paul McCartney requested that it be an opening act for the concerts that would give the former Beatle in the River Plate Stadium in November.The band had its first performances in December 2009 in Rosario and Cordoba
Edited sentence: The band had it's first performances in December 2009 in Rosario and Cordoba.Without doubt 2010 was a successful year for Ciro and the band, a new album went double platinum, a tour of the interior of the country, and Luna Park, but without a doubt, the best news for the musician was that it Paul McCartney requested that it be an opening act for the concerts that would give the former Beatle in the River Plate Stadium in November