Original sentence: A 5.4 magnitude earthquake occurred near Alum Rock on October 30, 2007, the strongest to hit the region since the Loma Prieta Earthquake in 1989.Alum Rock is a census-designated place (CDP) in Santa Clara County, California, United States and a neighborhood of San Jose.During that time, Alum Rock Avenue passed through the town on its way into Alum Rock Park.Formerly a separate town, there have remained some unincorporated pockets surrounded by incorporated San Jose which are now part of a city/county agreement to annex the remaining pockets.James Lick High School (which is part of the East Side Union High School District), Joseph George Middle School and other schools in the Alum Rock Union School District serve the neighborhood.The population was 13,479 at the 2000 census
Edited sentence: Alum Rock is a census-designated place (CDP) in Santa Clara County, California, United States and a community of San Jose.During that time, Alum Rock Avenue and a passenger railroad passed through the town on the way to Alum Rock Park.Formerly a separate town, much of the community is unincorporated surrounded by incorporated San Jose; neighborhoods between White Road and Capitol Avenue are part of a city/county agreement for annexation.James Lick High School (which is part of the East Side Union High School District), Joseph George Middle School, Pala Middle School, and other schools in the Alum Rock Union School District serve the neighborhood.Near the center of the community is a small neighborhood commercial strip along Alum Rock Avenue at White Road.The 5.4 magnitude “Alum Rock earthquake” occurred just northeast of the community on October 30, 2007, the strongest to hit the region since the Loma Prieta Earthquake in 1989.The CDP, which excludes all annexed areas, had a population of 13,479 at the 2000 census