Original sentence: Genesis, Peter Gabriel principally, wrote the rock opera The Lamb Lies Down on Broadway, about a juvenile delinquent called Rael who lives in New York and enters in the underground world, searching for a missing part of himself, the story rolls into lust, deep creatures, madness and redemption
Edited sentence: Genesis band, Peter Gabriel principally, wrote a masterpice called The Lamb Lies Down On Broadway, about a juvenile delinquent called Rael who lives in New York and enters in the underground world, searching for a missing part of himself, the story rolls into lust, deep creatures, madness and redemption