Original sentence: A growing number of facilities are owned by the company Bevans of Hemsby Limited.A variety of seaside-style cafes and restaurants are available, offering sit down meals, take-away fish and chips and chinese food.At the beach end of the road are a number of cafes, shops and amusement arcades.Hemsby is well-known for its amusement arcades.The major arcades include the Oasis, Sands, Saturn Palace, The Mirage and Crystals.The tourist-based part of the village lies along Beach Road and is commonly known as Hemsby Beach.This area comprises of a number of tourism industries and reaches from the centre of the village to the beach and dunes.Today there is still a wide variety of games and services on offer including 10 pin bowling, bingo, a play area and many different machines
Edited sentence: A growing number of facilities are owned by the company Bevans of Hemsby Limited, and operate under names Bevans, Mrs B and Mr B.A variety of seaside-style cafes and restaurants are available, offering everything from sit down meals to take-away fish and chips.At the beach end of the road are a large number of cafes, shops and amusement arcades.Hemsby is renowned for its amusement arcades, and at the peak of arcade video gaming in the 1980s and 1990s had a huge selection of games on offer.Many of the arcades have cafes inside them, offering snacks and ice creams as well as hot food.The main part of the village centre lies along Beach Road, approximately 1.5 miles long and running from the residential part of the town right to the beach.The major arcades include the Oasis, Sands, Saturn Palace, The Mirage, Crystals.Today, as with virtually all of the other amusement arcades, the video games are nearly all gone now, with just fruit machines taking their place