Original sentence: Akef obtained his Primary Certificate of Education at Al Mansoura Primary School, and obtained his Secondary Certificate of Education  at Cairo- Fuad 1st Secondary School.Akef was born in 1928 in Kafr Awad Al Seneita –Aga -Dakahleya Province, in the north of Egypt.He first became involved with the Muslim Brotherhood in 1940, which was then led by Hassan al-Banna.He then joined the Higher Institute of Physical Education and graduated in May 1950, after which he worked as a teacher at Fuad 1st Secondary School.His title is usually translated as "president".Mohammed Mahdi Akef (born July 12, 1928) is the head of the Muslim Brotherhood, an Egypt-based Islamic political movement.Of the sheiks he loved most was Sheikh Mohebeddin al Khatib.The year of his birth was the year of the founding of the Muslim Brotherhood Movement was founded
Edited sentence: After graduation, he worked as a teacher at Fuad 1st Secondary School.After that he joined the Higher Institute of Physical Education and graduated in May 1950.He got his Primary Certificate of Education at Al Mansoura Primary School.He knew Muslim Brotherhood in 1940 and was brought up at the hands of the Brotherhood "s sheiks and  scholars, at the top of whom was the martyr mam Hassan al Banna –May Allah be pleased with him.He was born on 12th July 1928 in Kafr Awad Al Seneita –Aga -Dakahleya Province –north of Egypt.Mohammed Mahi Akef (born July 12, 1928) is Muslim Brotherhood General Guide.Of the sheiks he loved most   was Sheikh Mohebeddin al Khatib.The year Akef was born was the same year in which the Muslim Brotherhood Movement was founded –March 1928.Then he obtained his Secondary Certificate of Education  at Cairo- Fuad 1st Secondary School