Original sentence: Captain Richard 'Dickie' Robinson of Workington, was persuaded to leave the Fiery Cross to take charge of the new clipper.Launched in July 1865 for service in the China trade was typical of all of Steele's ships, celebrated for their beauty of model, perfection of build, superb finish
Edited sentence: Captain Richard 'Dickie' Robinson of Workington was persuaded to leave the Fiery Cross to take charge of the new clipper.Launched in July 1865 for service in the China trade was typical of all of Steele's ships, celebrated for their beauty of model, perfection of build, and superb finish