Original sentence: Politicalanalyst generally agree to explain  these  unexpected defeats with the fact  that SDP tend to represent more the urbanized population and score well as an alternative to the long-ruling HDZ, but  it still lacks a real rooting in croatian society and it is still seen  by large part of population as the heir of former Communist party.m In the subsequent croatian local elections of june 2009, the party lost also the majority of votes and the most of Zupanje, but managed to gain some majors in important croatian cities, due the new, direct election system
Edited sentence: In the subsequent croatian local elections of June 2009, the party lost also the majority of votes and the most of Zupanje, but managed to gain some majors in important Croatian cities, due to the new, direct electoral system.Politicalanalysts generally agree to explain these unexpected defeats with the fact that SDP tend to represent more the urbanized population and score well as an alternative to the long-ruling HDZ, but it still lacks a real rooting in Croatian society and it is still seen by a large part of the population as the heir of the former Communist party