Original sentence: Columbus Circle - This traffic circle at the intersection of Broadway, Central Park West, Central Park South and Eighth Avenue, was debuilt in 2005.Isidor and Ida Straus Memorial - the centerpiece for this couple lost on the Titanic, sits in triangular Straus Park at Broadway, West End Avenue and West 106th Street.Its centerpiece is a statue of the explorer Christopher Columbus erected in 1906, a gift of Italian-American immigrants made possible through donations solicited by the newspaper Il Progresso Italo-Americano.Two other similarly-financed monuments hold forth on Broadway - writer Dante Aligheri in Dante Park between 63rd and 64th Streets at Columbus Avenue, now heralds Lincoln Center; composer Giuseppe Verdi anchors Verdi Square, girded by 72nd and 73rd Streets at Amsterdam Avenue
Edited sentence: Columbus Circle - Traffic circle at the intersection of Broadway, Central Park West, Central Park South and Eighth Avenue.Isidor and Ida Straus Memorial - remembers a couple lost on the Titanic, in triangular Straus Park at Broadway, West End Avenue and West 106th Street.Its centerpiece is a statue of the explorer Christopher Columbus erected in 1906.Two other similarly-financed monuments on Broadway include those to writer Dante Aligheri in Dante Park between 63rd and 64th Streets at Columbus Avenue, now heralds Lincoln Center; and composer Giuseppe Verdi anchors Verdi Square, girded by 72nd and 73rd Streets at Amsterdam Avenue