Original sentence: Garfunkel earned a Bachelor of Arts degree majoring in Art History, followed by a Masters degree in Mathematics.In August 2005, Garfunkel received his second marijuana posession charge after a police trooper found a marijuana cigarette in his ashtray.The combination of Garfunkel's voice with Simon's song-writing capacities caused the duo to be among the top acts of the 1960s
Edited sentence: In August 2005, Garfunkel was hit with his second marijuana charge after a police trooper found a marijuana cigarette in his ashtray.The combination of Garfunkel's sweet and melodic voice with Simon's song-writing capacities caused the duo to be among the top acts of the 1960s