Original sentence: On May 31, 2010, Shayetet 13 took part in operation Sea Breeze against a flotilla trying to break the blockade of Hamas-controlled Gaza; resulting in the death of 9 pro-Palestinian activists.The successful interception early 4 November 2009 of the MV Francop, an Antiguan-flagged vessel purportedly carrying arms from Iran to Hezbollah in Lebanon, was credited to Shayetet 13 naval commandos
Edited sentence: At the photos it is clearly seen that 3 beaten Israeli Shayetet 13 soldiers are criying because of the fear they had.But the officials could not answer the legitimacy of the operation which is done at international area of Mediterranian sea and why the necessity of the usage of real weapons against the civilian activists who are triying to defend themselves.Israeli officials declared that Shayetet commandos opened fire as the activits had beaten their elite commandos by using wooden and metal bars.On May 31, 2010, Shayetet 13 took part in operation Sea Breeze against a flotilla trying to break the blockade of Hamas-controlled Gaza to deliver foodstuff and health products ; resulting in the death of international activists.Several days after the operation, some photos that Israel tried to erase took part in several newspapers.That event also had an importance by questioning the strength of the elite forces of Israel.The operation was done 90 miles away from the land which made that operation illegal as it is done at international area of the sea