Original sentence: Although they continued to play well, they could not keep up with the Tampa Bay Lightning, the future Stanley Cup champions, or other teams in the league.During that time Ilya Kovalchuk became only the second Thrashers' player to score in the NHL All-Star Game, an exciting overtime loss to the Red Wings occured on New Years Eve, Ronald Petrovicky broke Brian Boucher’s shootout streak, Dany Heatley returned to the ice, and an all-out brawl against the Edmonton Oilers took place.Kari Lehtonen started his NHL career with 4 wins and 4 starts, including one shutout
Edited sentence: Although they continued to play well, they couldn’t keep up with the Tampa Bay Lightning, the future Stanley Cup champions, or other teams in the league.However it wasn’t all bad:  during that time Ilya Kovalchuk became only the second Thrashers' player to score in the NHL All-Star Game, an exciting overtime loss to the Red Wings occured on New Years Eve, Ronald Petrovicky broke Brian Boucher’s shootout streak, Dany Heatley returned to the ice, and an all-out brawl against the Edmonton Oilers took place.Kari Lehtonen started a certainly glorious NHL career with 4 wins and 4 starts, including one shutout