Original sentence: He died suddenly at his residence in Oxford of an affection of the heart on 11th March 1906 and was buried in Holywell churchyard.He vacated his fellowship at Hertford on his marriage in 1895 and on 29th June 1905 was elected to an official fellowship at St John’s College.On 29th March 1907 a civil pension of £75 was granted to his widow “in consideration of his services to the study of Roman Law and History” but she too died of a lonely heart on 9th July 1907.The Greenidge family trace their ancestry in Barbados to John of Greenwich who left London on 2nd May 1635 on the ship Alexander.The third volume was intended to be up to the death of  Caesar, the fourth was to cover the Civil War and the rule of Augustus, while the fifth and sixth were to deal with the Emperors up to Vespasian.This work was designed to extend to the assession of Vespasian and to fill six volumes, indeed a Magnus Opus, but no second volume (which was to end with with the first consulship of Pompey and Crassus) was issued
Edited sentence: He died suddenly at his residence in Oxford of an affection of the heart on 11 March 1906 and was buried in Holywell churchyard.He vacated his fellowship at Hertford on his marriage in 1895 and on 29 June 1905 was elected to an official fellowship at St John’s College.On 29 March 1907 a civil pension of £75 was granted to his widow “in consideration of his services to the study of Roman Law and History” but she too died of a lonely heart on 9 July 1907.The Greenidge family trace their ancestry in Barbados to John of Greenwich who left London on 2 May 1635 on the ship Alexander.The third volume was intended to be up to the death of Caesar, the fourth was to cover the Civil War and the rule of Augustus, while the fifth and sixth were to deal with the Emperors up to Vespasian.This work was designed to extend to the assession of Vespasian and to fill six volumes, indeed a Magnus Opus, but no second volume (which was to end with the first consulship of Pompey and Crassus) was issued