Original sentence: The Magical Midway also includes a clairvoyant caravan, a variety of carnival concession games, cookhouse,a Grab Joint and Candy Joint, a vintage 1920s high striker, and the Congress of Wonders Museum (featuring items from Patty Conklin’s Carnival Artifacts Museum and the North American Carnival Museum and Archives )
Edited sentence: The Magical Midway also includes a clairvoyant caravan, a variety of carnival concession games, cookhouse,a Grab Joint and Candy Joint, a vintage 1920s high striker, and the Congress of Wonders Museum featuring items from Patty Conklin’s Carnival Artifacts Museum and the North American Carnival Museum and Archives ()