Original sentence: He stated that he had grown bored of the "The" band names, so he had decided to combine them.The band's name is a combination of the title of a song Andrew McMahon wrote, "Dear Jack", and a band name he considered, The Mannequins
Edited sentence: In a radio interview, McMahon said that he combined the idea with a song he had written called "Dear Jack" simply because it rhymed.The band's name is a combination of the title of a song Andrew McMahon wrote, "Dear Jack", and a band name he considered, Black Mannequins.When walking in a city he noticed that there were very few black Mannequins and wrote it down as an idea for a band name.Whenn having to decide a name for the band when the recording process took greater shape and the project became more realised, he went back to the name, deciding against Black Mannequins because of any racial issues that may occur