Original sentence: It allows creators and artists to earn a monthly income by providing exclusive rewards and perks to their subscribers, or "patrons".Memberships are billed on the first of each month.Patreon (, ) is a membership platform based in the United States that provides business tools for creators to run a subscription content service.Patreon charges a commission of 5 to 12% of creators' monthly income, in addition to payment processing fees
Edited sentence: In return for the service, Patreon charges a commission of 5/8/12% of monthly income (depending on plan) and transaction fees of 2.9% + $0.30 for payments over $3 or 5% + $0.10 for payments of $3 or less.Patreon (, ) is a membership platform based in the United States that provides business tools for creators to run a subscription content service, with ways for artists to build relationships and provide exclusive experiences to their subscribers, or "patrons"