Original sentence: Escaping from the Cultural revolution in China, the Grand Master Lin Pin Zhang(林品章) first started teaching Taiji plum blossom style in Korea in Chinese-Korean schools, which was passed on to only four Chinese-Korean disciples, including another Grand Master Su Xin Tang(蘇新堂), one of the most influential figures in Korean Kung-Fu history.Though traditionally by the rule it was forbidden to teach the mantis to Koreans, Master Su had made tremendous effort to spread the Taiji plum blossom style in all over Korea
Edited sentence: Escaping from the Cultural revolution in China, the Grand Master Lin Pin Zhang(林品章) first started teaching Taiji plum blossom style in Korea in Chinese-Korean schools, which was passed on to only four Chinese-Korean disciples.Especially, the most infamously known player, Su Xin Tang(소신당) has never appeared in his training center and only forced students to treat him drinks, which has shaped the typical atmosphere of the Kung Fu culture in Korea.However, since most of martial-artists in Korea have been significantly idiotic and only have wished to earn a living by cheating innocent students, the stream of the Taiji Plum Blossom has been declining and now went almost extinct.Learners who wish to train this style must seek for the masters in China, not Korea.These days, still Seo Mu Guan(서무관) who claims to be his best student still follows the disgusting legacy of Su