Original sentence: " Hearst was already established in the newspaper business in San Francisco and ventured to New York to expand his empire.Beginning in 1938, Max Kase (1898-1974) was the sports editor for 28 years, and the fashion editor was Robin Chandler Duke.Both were published by Hearst from 1895-1937.The Journal American was the product of a merger between two New York newspapers owned by William Randolph Hearst: The New York American (originally the New York Journal, renamed American in 1901), a morning paper, and the New York Evening Journal, an afternoon paper.The New York Journal American was a newspaper published from 1937 to 1966
Edited sentence: " Hearst, the privileged and entitled son of a wealthy mining tycoon, was already established in the newspaper business in San Francisco and ventured to New York to expand his empire.(Washingtonians, on the other hand, knew all too well that Hearst's death was a major factor in the 1954 merger of Hearst's Washington Times-Herald with the Washington Post.)  Although the Journal-American continued to operate out of a decrepit building on Manhattan's Lower East Side using ancient printing presses, its layout remained snazzy.Beginning in 1938, Max Kase (1898-1974) was the sports editor for 28 years,   and the fashion editor was Robin Chandler Duke.Subscribers and newsstand customers had no reason to doubt that the paper had survived admirably the 1951 death of William Randolph Hearst Sr.The Journal American was the product of a merger between two New York newspapers owned by William Randolph Hearst: The New York American (originally the New York Journal, renamed American in 1901, published by Hearst 1895-1937), a morning paper, and the New York Evening Journal, an afternoon paper, published 1895-1937.The New York Journal American was a newspaper published from 1937 to  1966.The masthead often was adorned with red ink