Original sentence: Although this film was originally planned to be released on 23 July 2009 in South Korea, it was actually released on 22 July 2009.of 4 August 2009, Haeundae had received a total of 5,160,639 admissions in South Korean theatres
Edited sentence: As of 4 August 2009, Haeundae had received a total of 5,160,639 admissions in South Korean theatres.The film was released in South Korea on 22 July 2009