Original sentence: Also, the Jevons Paradox only applies to technological improvements that increase fuel efficiency: corporate or government policies that impose efficiency standards increase costs, and so do not display the Jevons Paradox.However, this ignores other benefits from increased efficiency, such as better quality of material life and mitigation of problems associated with peak oil.The Jevons Paradox has been used to argue that energy conservation is futile, as increased efficiency may not reduce fuel use
Edited sentence: Also, the Jevons Paradox only applies to technological improvements that increase fuel efficiency; corporate or government policies that impose efficiency standards normally increase costs, and so do not display the Jevons Paradox.However, this ignores other benefits from increased efficiency, such as a better quality of material life and mitigation of problems associated with peak oil.The Jevons Paradox has been used to argue that energy conservation is futile, as increased efficiency may actually increase fuel use