Original sentence: Although it is generally perceived having both video of the funeral and a live noontime show to be aired simultaneously, the criticisms were founded on how Willie Revillame made such request on air and his supposed wrong choice of words
Edited sentence: Although it is generally perceived having both video of the funeral and a live noontime show to be aired simultaneously is in bad taste, the criticisms were founded on how Willie Revillame made such request on air and his supposed wrong choice of words