Original sentence: "  It is used extensively as a treatment to revive transplanted plants.It helps plants recover and helps cuttings to grow roots.Packaged in bright colors, it claims to have many adherents, including professional horticulturists, greenhouses, and, according to its packaging, "US Departments of Agriculture, Army, Navy, States, cities, counties, universities.The packaging says that it should simply be added to the normal fertilization or watering regimen
Edited sentence: "  It most emphatically denies being "fertilizer", saying it should simply be added to the normal fertilization or watering regimen.It is used extensively as a treatment for dying plants, with many claims that, whether it works otherwise, it does help plants recover, and cuttings grow roots.Packaged in bright colors, it is claimed to have many adherents, including professional horticulturists, greenhouses, and, according to its packaging, "US Departments of Agriculture, Army, Navy, States, cities, counties, universities.The company proclaims that this product provides something vaguely described as "extra life" to plants, flowers, seedlings, fruit, bulbs, seeds, lawns, et cetera.The packaging claiming "SUPERthrive saves plants from waiting to make many life-process complexes, carbon-hydrogen-oxygen groups