Original sentence: Philippine Science Centrum - This is the Philippines largest  and well-maintained science centrum and it is one of the most visited amenities inside Riverbanks Center especially the field trips of students came from different schools in Metro Manila
Edited sentence: Philippine Science Centrum - This is the Philippines largest and well-maintained science centrum and it is one of the most visited amenities inside Riverbanks Center especially the field trips of students came from different schools in Metro Manila.The passersby describe OLOPSC as one with the castle-like design structure which is pleasing into the eyes of toddlers