Original sentence: However, an identical poll taken by the same group in June 2006 found a rise in those opposed to same-sex marriage, with 56% disapproving of the practice.In the poll, when asked if marriages between homosexuals should be recognized by law as valid, with the same rights as traditional marriages, 58% (down 1 point from Aug 2005, and 9 points from March 1996) of Americans responded that they should not be recognized.While poll numbers go up and down, it is clear that a significant majority of Americans remain opposed to same-sex marriage
Edited sentence: However, an identical poll taken by the same group in June 2006 found a rise in those opposed to same-sex marriage, with 56% disapproving of the prospect.In the poll, when asked if marriages between homosexuals should be recognized by law as valid, with the same rights as so-called "traditional" marriages, 58% (down 1 point from Aug 2005, and 9 points from March 1996) of Americans responded that they should not be recognized