Original sentence: Upon its release, critical response to Alone with Everybody was generally positive - NME concluded its review by stating that "Ashcroft's newly discovered stability has done nothing to blunt his powers of communication or reduce his belief in the apocalyptic potential of music"
Edited sentence: NME concluded its review by stating that "Ashcroft's newly discovered stability has done nothing to blunt his powers of communication or reduce his belief in the apocalyptic potential of music".Upon its release, critical response to Alone with Everybody was generally positive