Original sentence: In spring, 2008, Maruge was forced to withdraw from school and relocate to a retirement home for senior citizens.. However, soon after, on June 10th 2008, Maruge enrolled once again into grade 6 at the Marura primary school located in the Kariobangi area of Nairobi.Kimani Ng'ang'a Maruge holds the Guinness World Record for being the oldest person to start primary school -- he enrolled first grade in 2004 aged 84.On Sunday May 24, 2009 Maruge was baptised at Holy Trinity Catholic Church in Kariobangi and took a christian name Stephen
Edited sentence: In spring, 2008, Maruge was forced to withdraw from school and relocate to a retirement home for senior citizens.. However, soon after, on June 10 2008, Maruge enrolled once again into grade 6 at the Marura primary school located in the Kariobangi area of Nairobi.Kimani Ng'ang'a Maruge holds the Guinness World Record for being the oldest person to start primary school—he enrolled first grade in 2004 aged 84.On Sunday May 24, 2009 Maruge was baptised at Holy Trinity Catholic Church in Kariobangi and took a Christian name Stephen