Original sentence: Although they become separated in a subway, trying frantically to find one another, they reunite by returning to the place at which they met for their first date--the clock at the Astor Hotel, Having fallen in love, Joe asks Alice to marry him, and she consents
Edited sentence: Although they become separated in a subway, trying frantically to find one another, they reunite by returning to the place at which they met for their first date--the clock at the Astor Hotel.Having fallen in love, Joe asks Alice to marry him, and she consents