Original sentence: " Also Ryder in the original film and book is portrayed as a normal looking business men while in the 2009 film he looks like he's adopted prison life, wearing very visible prison related tattoos and very laid back modern style of a biker.In the book and original film, Ryder is "cold-blooded and calculating", but in the 2009 film he's a "loose cannon willing to kill innocents not out of necessity but out of spite.Ryder also ask for 10 million US Dollars instead of the 1 million as in the original film and book and 5 million in the made for TV movie.Ryder doesn't use the "Mr.Whereas the novel is told from more than 30 perspectives — keeping readers off balance because it's unknown which characters the writer might suddenly discard — the two films focus on the lead hijacker and the Metropolitan Transportation Authority employee with whom he communicates by phone
Edited sentence: " Also Ryder in the original film and book is portrayed as a normal looking businessman while in the 2009 film he looks like he has adopted prison life, wearing very visible prison related tattoos and very laid back modern style of a biker.In the book and original film, Ryder is "cold-blooded and calculating", but in the 2009 film he is a "loose cannon willing to kill innocents not out of necessity but out of spite.Ryder also ask for 10 million US Dollars instead of the 1 million as in the original film and book and 5 million in the made-for TV movie.Ryder does not use the "Mr.Whereas the novel is told from more than 30 perspectives — keeping readers off balance because it is unknown which characters the writer might suddenly discard — the two films focus on the lead hijacker and the Metropolitan Transportation Authority employee with whom he communicates by phone