Original sentence: "  The legal structure of a public authority made it impervious to influence from mayors and governors."'Robert Moses'" (1888 - 1981) was a master builder of New York City.A Brooklyn Battery Bridge would have destroyed Battery Park and harmed the financial district.He built the Throngs Neck, the Bronx-Whitestone, the Henry Hudson, and the Verrazano Narrows bridges.His only peer is Baron Haussmann of Third Empire Paris].Moses built Shea Stadium, Lincoln Center, and contributed to the United Nations building.Moses reputation suffered a further blow in 1973 with the publication of The Power Broker by Robert Caro.None went very far, but Moses, due to his intelligence, did catch the notice of Belle Moskowitz who happened to be friends with Al Smith.The case of the Brooklyn Battery Bridge may illustrate this
Edited sentence: "  The legal structure of a public authority mae it impervious to influence from mayors and governors."Robert Moses," 1888-1981.A BB Bridge would have destroyed Battery Park and harmed the financial district.As a master builder of New York City a major city, his only peer is Baron Haussmann of Third Empire Paris.He built the Throngs Neck, the Bronx-Whitestone, the Henry Hudon, and the Verrazano Narrows bridges.Moses built Shea Stadium, Lincoln Center, and contributed to the UN building.Moses reputation suffered a further blow in 1973 with the publication of the Power Broker by Robert Caro.None went very far, but Moses, due to his intelligence, did catch the notice of Belle Moskowitz who happened to be friends with [Al Smith].The case of the Brooklyn Battery _Bridge_ may illustrate this