Original sentence: A notable feature of the area is the modern church of Notre Dame de Toute Grace, begun in 1937 and consecrated in 1950.It was designed by the architect Maurice Novarina, and the artists who contributed to its decoration, include Fernand Léger, Jean Lurçat, Germaine Richier, Marc Chagall, Jacques Lipchitz, and Georges Rouault.The plateau is at an altitude of 3,450 feet (1,050 meters) in the foothills of Mont Blanc.The plateau, situated below the Fiz mountain range, is popular with paragliders and hang-gliders, and hosts the largest paragliding school in France
Edited sentence: It was designed by the architect Maurice Novarina, and many outstanding modern artists contributed to its decoration, including Fernand Léger, Jean Lurçat, Germaine Richier, Marc Chagall, Jacques Lipchitz, and Georges Rouault.The most notable feature of the area is the modern church of Notre Dame de Toute Grace, begun in 1937 and consecrated in 1950.The plateau, at an altitude of 3,450 feet (1,050 meters) in the foothills of Mont Blanc, is noted for its beautiful scenery and healthful climate.The plateau, situated below the Fiz mountain range, is very popular with paragliders and hang-gliders, and hosts the largest paragliding school in France