Original sentence: Bob suggests his brother, Buck, despite Cindy's objections.Buck does the best he can; Miles and Maizy come to love him, but he must repeatedly assert his authority over the rebellious Tia
Edited sentence: In spite of Cindy's objections, they are forced to settle on Bob's brother Buck: an unemployed slacker who lives in a rundown apartment, drives a barely-functional 1978 Mercury Grand Marquis, smokes cigars, spends his free time in bowling alleys, and makes his living by placing large bets and cheating on fixed horse races.The loutish but well-meaning and sensitive Buck does the best he can; Miles and Maizy quickly bond with and adore him, but he repeatedly buts heads with the rebellious Tia