Original sentence: Former pupils include former England rugby captain Martin Corry, Nick Brown, Labour MP for Newcastle-upon-Tyne and Wallsend and Gary Brazil former professional footballer
Edited sentence: A (From some crumby University).Former pupils include Labour MP for Newcastle-upon-Tyne and Wallsend and Gary Brazil former professional footballer.He takes scaring all the children in the school witless seriously, and definitely does not have a life outside of the school.He wears the same suit day in day out, so his suit is always creased and is obviously not of a good make.Matthews B.The school would not be the same without him, with him there is fear and repression of younger boy’s attempts to express themselves, so without him the school (and the world) will be a better place.The schools resident police officer (in his mind) is Mr.This is not enforced by all staff, only those who have too much time on their  hands.Those who don't like him and wish to remove him from the school make your peers aware and protest on the school playground after break, and boycott 2nd period on march 3rd, if we all do this then they cannot ignore us, and cannot expel us all, there will be no clear ring leaders, so when you find this make your peers aware and we will remove Matthews from his position of tyranny and evil forever.To be a member of the sports clubs, you must first 'get in' with the sports staff (otherwise known as poorly educated monkeys) by being good at football, those who are not good at football are usually ignored by staff and not included on other sports teams.While being a prefect is obviously 'beefed up' on ones c.v the position requires very little input and isn't as prestigious as it is made to seem