Original sentence: She became the National treasurer of the CPC, from 2011 - 2013, and then Interim National Treasurer of the APC from 2013-2014 before her appointment as Member, All Progressives Congress Presidential Campaign Council where she served in the directorates of election planning and monitoring, field operations, and fund raising, in preparation for the 2015 general elections which the APC won.She worked as Operations Manager at Pinnacle Travels and Tours Ltd (a Nigerian travel agency) between 2001 - 2003 before joining the  National Assembly Service Commission as an Administrative Officer II in 2003 where she rose to the Position of Principal Administrative Officer before leaving the commission in 2010 to pursue her political ambitions
Edited sentence: In 2010 Farouq began her political Journey as an ardent follower of Gen.Muhamadu Buhari.She became the National treasurer of the CPC, from 2011 - 2013, and then Interim National Treasurer of the APC from 2013-2014 before her appointment as Member, All Progressives Congress Presidential Campaign Council where she served in the directorates of election planing and monitoring, field operations, and fund raising, in preparation for the party's outing at the 2015 general elections which her party the All Progressives Congress emerged victorious at the presidential polls.She worked as Operations Manager at Pinnacle Travels and Tours Ltd (a Nigerian travel agency) between 2001 - 2003 before joining the  National Assembly Service Commission as an Administrative Officer II in 2003 where she rose to the Position of Principal Administrative Officer before leaving the commission in 2010 to purse her political ambitions