Original sentence: He is also an Honorary Admiral of the Fleet of the Royal Navy of the United Kingdom, a title given to him by Queen Elizabeth the Second when he took the salute at the passing out parade of the 2001 summer term at Britannia Royal Naval College, Dartmouth, the Royal Navy's Officer training school in the United Kingdom.The Sultan holds an honorary commission in the Royal Air Force of the United Kingdom as an Air Chief Marshal
Edited sentence: He is also an Honorary Admiral of the Fleet of the Royal Navy, a title given to him by Queen Elizabeth the Second when he took the salute at the passing out parade of the 2001 summer term at Britannia Royal Naval College, Dartmouth, the Royal Navy's Officer training school in the United Kingdom.The Sultan holds an honorary commission in the Royal Air Force as an Air Chief Marshal