Original sentence: Soma , a young hunter and the leader of the group sings with his young wife Mihipaba ( the Glitter of the Earth ) and expresses  desire to see a better world with the shinning sun , change of seasons and trees full of flowers
Edited sentence: Soma , a young hunter and the leader of the group sings with his young wife Mihipaba ( the Glitter of the Earth ) and expresses  desire to see a better world with the shining sun , change of seasons and trees full of flowers