Original sentence: Events and organizations that have womyn-born-womyn only policies bar access to any persons who were assigned male at birth, including trans women and the young male children of women attendees.The festival has publicly declared that it is intended for womyn-born womyn.The term was developed during second-wave feminism to designate spaces for, by, and about women who were identified as female at birth, then raised as girls, and then who chose to live as women.There have been several instances where transgender women have been denied access to or even been evicted from women's spaces.Though transgender and intersex people have been present in women's only spaces for decades (often in the closet), the term garnered wider attention in response to the exclusion of trans women from the Michigan Womyn's Music Festival.Vancouver Rape Relief & Women's Shelter
Edited sentence: Events and organizations that have womyn-born-womyn only policies generally bar access to any persons who are male, including trans women, and the male children of women attendees over the age of five.The festival has always publicly declared that it is intended for womyn-born womyn and has asked all attendees to respect and honor a female centered space..  Trans activists assert that there is no such thing as a female experience, or more specifically, that all trans women are, in fact female, and thus that the concept of living as a female has no specific relevance.The term became the object of scorn and derision in response to Nancy Burkholder, a trans woman, being asked to leave the Michigan Womyn's Music Festival in 1993.The term was developed during second-wave feminism by females to designate spaces for, by, and about women who were identified as female at birth, then raised as girls, and then who chose to live as women.There have been less than five instances where transgender women have been denied access to or even been evicted from women's spaces, none of which have occurred in the past 10 years.This was a specifically lesbian attempt--the logical outgrowth of the feminist consciousness raising movement--to define and center the material circumstances of the female body under patriarchy, particularly given the social exclusion and specific biological oppression experienced by females as a direct result of misogyny and homophobia