Original sentence: " This drew criticism from a number of Palestinians as well as some media watch groups.As of 2002, 40,000 people reside in the neighborhood, making it one of the largest in the city.Gilo () is a neighborhood in southern Jerusalem which was established on land annexed to the municipality after the 1967 Six-Day War.In 2001, CNN issued a memorandum to its staff stating that "We refer to Gilo as a 'Jewish Neighborhood on the outskirts of Jerusalem'... We don't refer to it as a settlement.Some of Gilo's land was owned by Jewish institutions prior to the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, though because the neighborhood is located in territory captured by Israel during the Six-Day War in 1967, it is often considered an Israeli settlement
Edited sentence: " This drew criticism from a number of Palestinians as well as some more independent media watch groups.As of 2002, 40,000 people reside in the settlement, making it one of the largest areas in the city and one of Israel's largest illegal Settlements.Gilo () is an Israeli Settlement located in southern occupied Jerusalem established on land annexed by Israel in the 1967 Six-Day War.In 2001, following pressure from HonestReporting.Some of Gilo's land was owned by Jewish institutions prior to the 1948 Arab-Israeli War, though because the neighborhood is located on territory captured by Israel during the Six-Day War in 1967, it is considered an illegal settlement by both international law and the majority of the international community.The Israeli Government and many residents of Gilo however, adamantly deny its illegality.com, a pro-israel watch group, CNN issued a memorandum to its staff following pressure from stating that "We refer to Gilo as a 'Jewish Neighborhood on the outskirts of Jerusalem'... We don't refer to it as a settlement