Original sentence: A result of this is Game 5 of the 2007 Eastern Conference Finals between the Ottawa Senators and Buffalo Sabres.Finally, Bettman has been criticized for being anti-Canadian, and his moves support this claim.Furthermore, many believed that the late 1990s expansion diluted the talent pool, thus resulting in a lower quality of play and the introduction of the neutral-zone trap, designed to allow teams with lower-skilled players to keep up with teams with higher-skilled players.Many suggest that the result is declining TV ratings, including a catastrophic 1.1 rating during Game 3 of the 2007 Stanley Cup Finals between the Anaheim Ducks and Ottawa Senators, lowest in NBC broadcasting history.NBC cut the broadcast of overtime (with the exception of the greater Buffalo area) in order to show the pre-race show for the Preakness Stakes.When Canadian billionaire Jim Balsillie signed a letter of intent to purchase the Pittsburgh Penguins, Bettman soon discovered that Balsillie had intentions of moving the team to Hamilton, Ontario if an arena deal can't be reach with the city of Pittsburgh
Edited sentence: A negative result of this can be seen in Game 5 of the 2007 Eastern Conference Finals between the Ottawa Senators and Buffalo Sabres.Finally, Bettman has been criticized for being anti-Canadian.Furthermore, many believed that the late 1990s expansion diluted the talent pool, thus resulting in a lower quality of play and the introduction of the neutral-zone trap, designed to allow teams with lower-skilled players to keep up with teams with higher-skilled players by slowing the pace down and making the game less exciting to watch.In addition, Bettman's fighting instigator rule, designed to curb fighting, has resulted in more stick infractions.Many suggest that the result of over-expansion and the fighting instigator rule is declining TV ratings, including a catastrophic 1.1 rating during Game 3 of the 2007 Stanley Cup Finals between the Anaheim Ducks and Ottawa Senators, lowest in NBC broadcasting history.NBC cut the broadcast of overtime (with the exception of the greater Buffalo area) in order to broadcast the pre-race show for the Preakness Stakes.So far, some of his moves support this claim.When Canadian billionaire Jim Balsillie signed a letter of intent to purchase the Pittsburgh Penguins, Bettman soon discovered that Balsillie had intentions of moving the team to Hamilton, Ontario if an arena deal can't be reached with the city of Pittsburgh