Original sentence: "This is an extremely thought-provoking and inspiring piece that, in the course of one short minute, reminds the viewer that they are all a small part of a larger scheme of things.About "I Have Learned" - Avid Competition Winner, the judging panel stated:
Edited sentence: About "I Have Learned" - Avid Competition Winner.The judging panel was impressed by Cosentino’s entry stating: "This is an extremely thought-provoking and inspiring piece that, in the course of one short minute, reminds the viewer that they are all a small part of a larger scheme of things