Original sentence: It was an 85 foot S&S Space Shot Turbo Drop combo tower that rocketed 12 riders up to the top for a panoramic view of the 27 miles of beach front property, before dropping them at high speed again into a soft landing
Edited sentence: It was an 85 foot S&S Space Shot Turbo Drop combo tower that rocketed 12 riders up to the top for a breathtaking view of the 27 miles of beach front property, before dropping them at incredible speeds again into a soft landing