Original sentence: Proponents claim feeding a raw diet with bones eliminates the need for dental cleanings, helps strengthen the animal’s immune system and gives them a more natural diet.The typical treatment for allergies is cortisone or steroids, which with long term can damage the pet’s liver and kidneys.Two common areas advocates claim a raw food diet makes a significant difference are allergies and digestive problems, which they believe are related to the increase in use of processed pet foods
Edited sentence: Feeding a raw diet with bones eliminates the need for dental cleanings, helps strengthen the animal’s immune system and gives them a more natural diet.Long term, these can damage a pet’s liver and kidneys.The typical treatment is cortisone or steroids.These are two areas in which we have seen a raw diet make a huge difference.Two very common problems that we have seen increase with the advent of processed pet food are allergies and digestive problems.We have all seen the cases of a pet with terrible allergies that constantly scratches itself raw and creates hot spots, no matter what kibble or canned food the owner used