Original sentence: As a result of his insistence that UFO sightings should not be dismissed without some form of proper scientific study, the Department set up  the Flying Saucer Working Party (or FSWP)
Edited sentence: As a result of his insistence that UFO sightings should not be dismissed without some form of proper scientific study, the Department set up arguably the most marvellously-named committee in the history of the civil service, the Flying Saucer Working Party (or FSWP)