Original sentence: The UN Committee on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination in its report released in 2005 expressed concern about the abolishment of ATSIC; proposed reforms to HREOC that may limit its independence; the practical barriers Indigenous peoples face in succeeding in claims for native title; a lack of legislation criminalising serious acts or incitement of racial hatred in the Commonwealth, the State of Tasmania and the Northern Territory;.and the inequities between Indigenous peoples and others in the areas of employment, housing, longevity, education and income
Edited sentence: The UN Committee on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination in its report released in 2005 expressed concern about the abolishment of ATSIC; proposed reforms to HREOC that may limit its independence;the practical barriers Indigenous peoples now face in succeeding in claims for native title; a lack of legislation criminalising serious acts or incitement of racial hatred in the Commonwealth, the State of Tasmania and the Northern Territory;.and the extreme inequities between Indigenous peoples and others in the areas of employment, housing, longevity, education and income