Original sentence: Author - Richard DiLello (ISBN 1841956023).Both have released albums entitled Live at the Inferno: the US version releasing theirs in 1969.Don't Bother Knockin' -- This Town's A Rockin''', Buffalo Sounds Press (October 20, 2000), authors Patti Meyer Lee and Gary Lee, (ISBN 097017490X).Once Life Matters: A New Beginning'' - Impact Publishers (2005-2006), author Marty Angelo, (ISBN 0961895446).Raven toured England in 1969.Raven were offered a recording contact by George Harrison via Peter Asher with Apple Records but turned it down to instead sign with Columbia Records.The Longest Cocktail Party - An Insider's Diary of the Beatles, Their Million Dollar 'Apple' Empire and Its Wild Rise and Fall.The band played throughout the United States, appearing at such popular venues as the Electric Circus (nightclub), the Fillmore East, Steve Paul's Scene, Unganos, the Grande Ballroom, the Kinetic Playground and many others
Edited sentence: (ISBN 1841956023)., appearing at such popular venues as the Electric Circus (nightclub), the Fillmore East, Steve Paul's Scene, and Unganos in New York City, the Grande Ballroom in Detroit, Chicago's Kinetic Playground and many others.Both have released albums entitled Live at the Inferno, the U.ISBN 097017490X.Marty Angelo, Once Life Matters: A New Beginning'' (Impact Publishers, 2005-2006), ISBN 0961895446.Patti Meyer Lee and Gary Lee,Don't Bother Knockin' -- This Town's A Rockin''' (Buffalo Sounds Press, October 20, 2000).Raven toured England in 1969 and were offered a recording contact by George Harrison via Peter Asher with Apple Records but turned it down to sign with Columbia Records instead.Richard DiLello, "The Longest Cocktail Party" - An Insider's Diary of the Beatles, Their Million Dollar 'Apple' Empire and Its Wild Rise and Fall.The band played throughout the U.band releasing theirs in 1969