Original sentence: The Fall of Troy are a three-piece post-hardcore progressive rock outfit from Mukilteo, Washington.The Fall of Troy play a brand of rock music that falls somewhere in between the prog-influenced post-hardcore of At the Drive-in and the hardcore-influenced prog of The Mars Volta, while maintaining an experimental edge that establishes their music firmly as their own
Edited sentence: The Fall of Troy are a shitty ass three-piece post-hardcore progressive rock outfit from Mukilteo, Washington.The Fall of Troy play an uncompromising but tuneful brand of energetic rock music that falls somewhere in between the prog-influenced post-hardcore of At the Drive-in and the hardcore-influenced prog of The Mars Volta, while maintaining an experimental edge that establishes their music firmly as their own