Original sentence: Hairston attended Canyon del Oro High School in Oro Valley, AZ and was a letterman in baseball.Scott Hairston graduated from Canyon del Oro High School in 1999
Edited sentence: Hairston attended Canyon del Oro High School in the Tucson suburb of Oro Valley, AZ and was a letterman in baseball.Hairston graduated from Canyon del Oro High School in 1999.While there he was a teammate of current All Star second baseman Ian Kinsler