Original sentence: Alyssa Reid, age 15.Amanda Rowland, age 14.Briar Gillis, age 14.Christina LeClair, age 13.Dunnery Bond, age 14.It was soon announced that 11 year old Charlotte Kosc had been diagnosed with viral meningitis and pneumonia in her right lung and therefore couldn't continue in the competition (she had be chosen to carry on as one of the top six).Maranda Thomas, age 11.The other five who didn't make the cut were Chloe Lloyd, Kieran Jacobs, Moises Duot, Savannah Boyko, and Andrea Macasaet
Edited sentence: Alyssa Reid, age 15 (now age 15).Amanda Rowland, age 14 (now age 15).Briar Gillis, age 14 (now age 15).Christina LeClair, age 13 (now age 14).Dunnery Bond, age 14 (now age 15).It was soon announced that 11 year old Charlotte Kosc (now age 12) had been diagnosed with viral meningitis and pneumonia in her right lung and therefore couldn't continue in the competition (she had be chosen to carry on as one of the top six).Maranda Thomas, age 11 (now age 12).The other five who didn't make the cut were Chloe Lloyd (now age 17), Kieran Jacobs (now age 11), Moises Duot (now age 15), Savannah Boyko (now age 15), and Andrea Macasaet (now age 15)