Original sentence: In September 2005, Pombo helped rewrite the 1973 Endangered Species Act.Pombo has likewise pushed for oil drilling in the ANWR, despite concerns about the fragile ecosystem and opposition from moderate Republicans
Edited sentence: In September 2005, Pombo helped rewrite the 1973 Endangered Species Act in an attempt to rebuild levies and remove undue burdens on private land owners.One Pombo purposed freeway would reduce a 3-4 hour commute from Stockton to the San Jose area to 1-2 hours and service more than 1 million vehicles per day.Pombo also held multiple round table discussions to address the need to develop alternative forms of energy such as solar and wind.Pombo has likewise pushed for oil temporary drilling in the ANWR, despite concerns about the fragile ecosystem and opposition from moderate Republicans