Original sentence: (Boxing info provided by Mike DeLisa, www.He finished his amateur career with 17 wins, no losses and 12 kayos.com) Convinced by boxing manager Art Freeman that he was a better prospect than Rocky Marciano, Hodge decided to become a professional boxer rather than pursue the opportunity to complete as a boxer and a wrestler at the 1960 Summer Olympics in Rome, Italy
Edited sentence: Convinced by boxing manager Art Freeman that he was a better prospect than Rocky Marciano, Hodge decided to become a professional boxer rather than pursue the opportunity to complete as a boxer and a wrestler at the 1960 Summer Olympics in Rome, Italy.He finished his amateur career with 17 wins, no losses and 12 kayos (boxing info provided by Mike DeLisa, www