Original sentence: The resolution received support from organizations around the world including an open letter of support from the President of South Africa's trade union leader and apartheid opponent Willie Madisha
Edited sentence: CUPE's campaign led by Ryan, placed the spotlight on the plight of pensioners living in poverty.Cosatu was one of the main architects that brought down apartheid in that country.The resolution received support from organizations around the world including an open letter of support from the President of South Africas powerful trade union leader Willie Madisha