Original sentence: Pitt Meadows Secondary has a Work Experience program.Pitt Meadows has numerous teams and programs, including football (Grade 8, Junior Varsity and Varsity) soccer, volleyball, golf, and track and field.The school has a music program which includes a band and choir
Edited sentence: Pitt Meadows Secondary has a strong Work Experience program.Pitt Meadows is a highly athletic school with numerous teams and programs, including football (Grade 8, Junior Varsity and Varsity) soccer, volleyball, golf, and track and field.The school has an excellent music program which includes a band and choir