Original sentence: </ref> The new campus in Monticello is for the expanding college.George Wythe College is a private, unaccredited liberal arts college in Cedar City, Utah.Hawkins, attorney and candidate for various political offices in Utah.Official website.Oliver DeMille, author.The college expects to know whether or not their attempt has been successful by Spring of 2009.The college will eventually be named "George Wythe University"
Edited sentence: " While outsiders and several former students have criticized the institution as "A Scam," and "Extremely, dangerously over-conservative.- George Wythe College website.- How to spot an unaccredited college (features George Wythe College).An investigative report from KNXV-TV in Phoenix, Arizona that focuses on George Wythe College points out that "an unaccredited degree doesn’t only waste your money.George Wythe College does not publish or release any data on alumni, as is standard in accredited, reputable, higher education institutions.George Wythe College is a private, unaccredited  liberal arts college in Cedar City, Utah.Hawkins, attorney, and several time candidate for various political offices in Utah.If you use it to gain employment, you could be accused of fraudulently misrepresenting yourself.It is not uncommon for several students to completely rent an entire house together, and house up to fifteen people.Most students who stay at the college, when asked, describe their interest in the school as "A desire to escape a standardized education in pursuit of a 'Life Mission'.Notable alumni:.Oliver DeMille, founder and author of several books on homeschooling and what he has called "A Thomas Jefferson Education.Over half of the faculty hold, or are pursuing graduate degrees from George Wythe College.The American Academy for Liberal Education requires a rigorous evaluation of the credentials of faculty members.The Comanity website states that the new campus in Monticello is for the expanding college.The college expects to know whether or not their attempt has been successful by Spring, 2009.The college will eventually be named "George Wythe University.There are no known alumni organizations.Therefore, it is difficult to tell if alumni are in the work force