Original sentence: Approximately 100 international students participate in College of Marin's International Student Program.College of Marin has been providing exceptional opportunities since 1926.In addition the College provides 35 two-year vocational and career programs, as well as providing basic skills, English as a Second Language (ESL) education, and community education classes.Nearly 6,000 students take advantage of the College's community education and community services classes
Edited sentence: Approximately 100 international students participate in College of Marin's International Student Program, making for a culturally diverse educational experience.College of Marin has been providing exceptional educational opportunities since 1926.In addition the College provides thirty-five two-year vocational and career programs, as well as providing basic skills, English as a Second Language (ESL) education, and community education classes.Nearly 6,000 students take advantage of the College's many outstanding community education and community services classes.Whether the goal is career advancement, career change, or entering the workforce for the first time, the College offers a range of programs to help students succeed