Original sentence: " After getting drunk and jamming for an hour, Sixx and Lee hired Mars, and Mick fired the band's guitarist.During the "Crüesing Through Canada Tour '82," there were several widely-publicized incidents.Mötley Crüe is one of the best-selling American heavy metal bands, having sold over 45 million albums worldwide and 25 million records in the US alone.The band has cultivated a myth was that they were "banned for life" from the city
Edited sentence: " After getting drunk and jamming for an hour, Sixx and Lee hired Mars, and Mick fired the band's guitarist, who was a musician known only as Robin (a "pansy" according to Lee).During the 'Crüesing Through Canada Tour '82' (dubbed the 'I'm in Hell' tour by the band members), there were several widely-publicized incidents.Mötley Crüe is considered one of the most successful American heavy metal bands, having sold over 45 million albums worldwide and 25 million records in the US alone.Popular myth was that the band were "banned for life" from the city