Original sentence: Danny was killed aboard American Airlines Flight 11 during the September 11, 2001 terrorist attack.It is reported that he may have attempted to foil the hijacking according to a 2002 FAA memo, but this is in dispute
Edited sentence: Danny was intelligent, brilliant and intensely passionate about his life and work.Danny was the first victim and hero aboard American Airlines Flight 11 during the September 11, 2001 terrorist attack.He valiantly attempted to stop the terrorists from attacking the flight attendants and crew and was killed by the terrorists before the plane hit the first tower.His family, friends, community and country are greatly affected by his life and death