Original sentence: A new Eurovision version of the song was revealed live at the contest itself, a version that is not intended to be released commercially.If only jury votes were given, Soraya would have finished last, despite being a pre-contest favourite.The new version started more slowly with a violin solo and will reached higher notes by the end
Edited sentence: A new Eurovision version of the song was revealed live at the contest itself, a version that not intended to be released commercially.If only jury votes had been given, Soraya would have finished last, despite being a pre-contest favourite.On the other hand, if only televotes had been given, Spain would have finished 21st.The new version started more slowly with a violin solo and reached higher notes by the end