Original sentence: Hipango and her husband have three children.Hipango graduated from University of Auckland in 1991, with a Bachelor of Laws.Hipango practiced as a lawyer in Whanganui for more than 25 years.Hipango was a member of the Whanganui District Health Board.Hipango was baptised a Catholic, and still identifies as a Christian.Hipango was involved in the 1995 Pākaitore occupation as a lawyer, and in 2004 participated in the march against the Foreshore and Seabed legislation.Hipango went to Queen's Park School, convent school at St Mary's Primary, St Joseph's Intermediate and Sacred Heart College.Hipango's father, Hoani Hīpango, is Māori and her mother, Eileen Shaw, is Pākehā.In 2011 Hipango was appointed as an additional member of the Legal Aid Tribunal.Other family members include World War II pilot John Pohe and the chieftainess Rere-ō-maki, one of few women to sign the Treaty of Waitangi.She is the great-great granddaughter of Hoani Wiremu Hīpango, and the great granddaughter of Waata Hipango who gifted land to the people of Whanganui, which is now known as Hipango Park
Edited sentence: Her father, Hoani Hīpango, is Māori and her mother, Eileen Shaw, is Pākehā.She graduated from law school in 1991 and was a lawyer for more than 25 years and was a member of the Whanganui District Health Board.She is a Christian and is married with three children.She is the great-great granddaughter of Hoani Wiremu Hīpango, and World War II pilot John Pohe was her great uncle