Original sentence: The program is designed for rigorous college preparation, a program designed to develop someone who is versed in mathematics, science, language, history, literature, the arts and one who is physically fit -- the modern version of the "Renaissance" person
Edited sentence: The program is designed for rigorous college preparation, a program designed to develop someone who is versed in mathematics, science, language, history, literature, the arts and one who is physically fit—the modern version of the "Renaissance" person