Original sentence: A third biographer, William Hillcourt, makes no mention of any homosexual tendencies and wrote of Baden-Powell's courtship of his future wife, "From the moment Baden-Powell met Olave [aboard the ship Arcadia in 1912], his mind was filled with thoughts of her.After an extensive review of the available material, Jeal presents the case that Baden-Powell was a "repressed homosexual.His whole being was stirred as it had never been before.Robert Baden-Powell's sexuality has been studied by two principal modern biographers, who have concluded that Baden-Powell was attracted to youthful men and to boys
Edited sentence: After an exhaustive review of the available material, Jeal presents the case that Baden-Powell was a "repressed homosexual.Robert Baden-Powell's sexuality has been brought into question by his principal modern biographers, who have found a great deal of evidence indicating he was attracted to youthful men and to boys