Original sentence: Additionally, the plane's lift-off from the runway was ruled to be premature.Among several causes, the NTSB determined that the crash was largely due to pilot error.The NTSB further determined that Last Days Ministries, as lessee of the aircraft, had not complied with their insurance company's requirement that the pilot attend a Cessna pilot training school before operating the aircraft
Edited sentence: Among several causes, the NTSB determined that the crash was largely due to overload.Marine Corps pilot, should have refused to take five more passengers than there were seats on the plane.The pilot, who was an experienced U.Thunderstorm activity in the area also left suspicions of windshear as a contributing factor