Original sentence: After failing out from the University of Missouri, Snyder attended William Jewell College.He also won or shared four Big 12 North titles.His 136 wins are as many as his 11 predecessors won from 1935 to 1988 combined.His overall coaching record at Kansas State was 136 wins, 68 losses, and 1 tie.Instead, Snyder chose to remain at Kansas State.It was the first of 11 consecutive bowl games, including six wins.Snyder first made a splash in 1991, when the Wildcats finished 7-4 and narrowly missed a bowl bid.Snyder retired at Kansas State on November 15, 2005.Snyder's legacy at K-State also includes winning the Big 12 championship in 2003--the school's first conference title of any kind since 1934, the longest such drought in Division I.They also finished with their third winning conference record since 1934.Two years later, Snyder led the Wildcats to only their second bowl game ever--the Copper Bowl (now the Insight.While Snyder was sometimes criticized for scheduling weak opponents, his tenure at Kansas State is still considered one of the most successful rebuilding projects in collegiate history.com Bowl) and their first bowl win
Edited sentence: After a systematic building of the football program from JUCO players and mediocre scheduling Snyder led Kansas State to eleven consecutive bowl games (1993-2003), including six wins.After failing out from the University of Missouri- Columbia, Snyder attended William Jewell College.His 136 wins (many against directional schools) are as many as his 11 predecessors won from 1935 to 1988 combined.His overall coaching record at Kansas State was 136 wins, 68 losses, and 1 ties.Instead, Snyder chose to remain at Kansas State where JUCO schools abound.Snyder retired at Kansas State on November 15, 2005, capping the end of one of the greatest turnarounds in the history of college athletics.Snyder's legacy at K-State also includes winning the Big 12 championship in 2003 and sharing four Big 12 North titles since conference play began in 1996