Original sentence: After reaching a peak weight of around 26, 800 kg (1,316 lb) and being unable to leave his bed since 2001, Brendan attempted to diet in late 2003 but his body rejected these attempts by what doctors call a counter-gain.Brendan "Fatt1" Hanney (born June 11, 1965) is a man from Penrith, NSW, Australia, and was one of the heaviest people in medical history.Brendan drew worldwide attention when he appeared on the Televisa television network in January 2006, but turned down offers for a guest appearance on The Simpsons and The Oprah Winfrey Show.In late 2006 with help from NASA some of the greatest doctors in the world grouped together taking many tests on Brendan saying it would be impossible for him to die because of the mass body weight on him organ failure would be impossible as his body is using the fat to regenerate lost cells
Edited sentence: After reaching a peak weight of around 597 kg (1,316 lb) and being unable to leave his bed since 2001, Uribe lost approximately 400 lbs (one third of his body weight) with the help of doctors and nutritionists, and by following the Zone diet.Manuel Uribe Garza (born June 11, 1965) is a man from Monterrey, Nuevo León, Mexico, and was one of the heaviest people in medical history.Uribe drew worldwide attention when he appeared on the Televisa television network in January 2006, but turned down offers for gastric bypass surgery in Italy