Original sentence: Conservative critics in Japan accuse Onishi of having a strong bias which, they suggest, helps foster a vilified image of Japan abroad.. For example, his New York Times article, LETTER FROM ASIA: Why Japan Seems Content to Be Run by One Party provoked an official objection statement from the Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan for being "an incorrect article
Edited sentence: Conservative critics in Japan accuse Onishi of having a strong bias which, they suggest, helps foster a vilified image of Japan abroad.For example, his New York Times article, LETTER FROM ASIA: Why Japan Seems Content to Be Run by One Party provoked an official objection statement from the Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Japan for being "an incorrect article.Some non-conservatives in Japan have also criticized Onishi