Original sentence: As one of the ships in Amphbious Forces, Atlantic, she earning more Battle E awards than most of the other ships in that command.In September 1970, Terrebonne Parish steamed in company with the flagship of Commander, Amphibious Forces, Atlantic -- amphibious force command ship USS Pocono (AGC-16) -- and USS Spiegel Grove -- to Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada, and encountered a confluence of two storms in which she took "green water" on occasion 25 feet, (7.6 meters) over her bows, heavily damaging many weather deck fixtures and equipment
Edited sentence: As one of the ships in Amphibious Forces, Atlantic, she earning more Battle E awards than most of the other ships in that command.In September 1970, Terrebonne Parish steamed in company with the flagship of Commander, Amphibious Forces, Atlantic -- amphibious force command ship USS Pocono (AGC-16) -- and USS Spiegel Grove—to Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada, and encountered a confluence of two storms in which she took "green water" on occasion 25 feet, (7.6 meters) over her bows, heavily damaging many weather deck fixtures and equipment