Original sentence: He signed for Sunderland on the 5 August for a initial fee of £10 million plus potential additional payments.He travelled to Sunderland to sign for the club after they agreed a fee of £16.5 million with Tottenham subject to a medal test which Bent passed
Edited sentence: He travelled to Sunderland to sign for the club after they agreed a fee with Tottenham, and after passing a medical, Bent signed for Sunderland on 5 August for an initial fee of £10 million plus potential additional payments, which could possibly rise to £16.5 million