Original sentence: Auroville emphasises a non-authoritarian learning free of any dogma, a consequence of that philosophy is that children living in Auroville can attend school if they wish, but it is not required in any form.Basically the shape is fashioned after a spiral galaxy, symbolising life and humankind's existence.Contrary to a view sometimes voiced, Auroville is not a sect or a cult.Disgusted with a perceived betrayal of the values of Aurobindo of peace and harmony, many members became disillusioned and left Auroville.Nevertheless many chose to stay and continue to work towards achieving the values and goals
Edited sentence: As opposed to sometimes held belief, Auroville is not a sect or a cult.Basically the shape is going to be like a spiral galaxy, symbolising life and humankind's existence.Disgusted about the perceived betrayal of the values of Aurobindo of peace and harmony, many members became disillusioned and left Auroville.It emphasises a non-authoritarian learning free of any dogma, a consequence of that philosophy is that children living in Auroville can attend school if they wish, but it is not required in any form.Nevertheless many chose to stay behind and make the best out of the situation