Original sentence: Tyler Rules.When Tyler was a little over a year old, his parents were murdered by the powerful Dark Wizard, Lord Voldemort; however, Harry survived Voldemort's Killing Curse, which rebounded and ripped Voldemort's soul from his body
Edited sentence: When Harry was a little over a year old, his parents were murdered by the powerful Dark Wizard, Lord Voldemort; however, Harry survived Voldemort's Killing Curse, which rebounded and ripped Voldemort's soul from his body