Original sentence: In 2015, his appointment as a Knight of the Order of Australia, on the advice of Prime Minister Tony Abbott, was criticized by Opposition leader Bill Shorten of the Australian Labor Party and Adam Giles, Northern Territory chief minister and Country Liberal Party leader at the time of the appointment.The inhabitants of some villages on the island of Tanna, Vanuatu also worship Prince Philip as a god; the islanders possess portraits of the Duke and hold feasts on his birthday.Upon his wife's accession to the throne in 1952, the Duke was appointed Admiral of the Sea Cadet Corps, Colonel-in-Chief of the British Army Cadet Force, and Air Commodore-in-Chief of the Air Training Corps
Edited sentence: In 2015 his appointment as a Knight of the Order of Australia, on the advice of Prime Minister Tony Abbott, was criticized by Opposition leader Bill Shorten of the Australian Labor Party and Adam Giles, Northern Territory chief minister and Country Liberal Party leader at the time of the appointment.On his wife's accession to the throne in 1952, the Duke was appointed Admiral of the Sea Cadet Corps, Colonel-in-Chief of the British Army Cadet Force, and Air Commodore-in-Chief of the Air Training Corps.The inhabitants of some villages on the island of Tanna in Vanuatu also worship Prince Philip as a god; the islanders possess portraits of the Duke and hold feasts on his birthday