Original sentence: As a result of the war, more than 45 million people died across Europe.By the end of the war, Hitler's racial policies had culminated in the killing of approximately 11 million people, including the genocide of some six million Jews, in what is now known as the Holocaust
Edited sentence: As a result of the war, an estimated 45 million people died across Europe.By the end of the war, Hitler's racial policies had resulted in the deaths of an estimated 6 million people most of which were Jews, in what is now known as the Holocaust.The number of deaths in this genocide is hotly debated with claims that the number should be closer to 10,000 or to the other extreme, 12 million