Original sentence: In fact A Roof Over My Head was a pilot, also successful, broadcast the week before the Citizen Smith pilot on 5 April 1977, it starred Brian Rix and Lynda Baron and was written by Barry Took based on the book The Art of Course by Michael Green and was about the trials and tribulations of buying a new home, this pilot led to one series, with the same title, of 7 episodes in August/September 1977
Edited sentence: In fact A Roof Over My Head was a pilot, also successful, broadcast the week before the Citizen Smith pilot on 5 April 1977, it starred Brian Rix and Lynda Baron and was written by Barry Took based on the book The Art of Coarse Moving by Michael Green and was about the trials and tribulations of buying a new home, this pilot led to one series, with the same title, of 7 episodes in August/September 1977