Original sentence: He  defended the work of the Holy See and the Church in England and Wales on this, and expressed the hope that the Vatican would become more open and transparent in its treatment of victims and perpetrators.In April 2010, Bishop McMahon appeared on the BBC's Hard Talk to discuss the Church's response to the sexual abuse of children
Edited sentence: He explained and defended the work of the Holy See and the Church in England & Wales in this regard, and expressed the hope that the Vatican would become more open and transparent in its treatment of victims and perpetrators.In April 2010, Bishop McMahon appeared on the BBC's Hard Talk, which was broadcast on TV and radio across the world, to discuss the Church's response to the sexual abuse of children.Recent initiatives under Pope Benedict XVI and Pope Francis have indicated that Bishop McMahon's hope is being realised