Original sentence: The squad consists of Private Preston Marlow, the game's protagonist (put in B-Company for taking a joy-ride in one of his installation's helicopters, damaging the helicopter and a general's limousine)
Edited sentence: The squad consists of Private Preston Marlowe, the game's protagonist (put in B-Company for taking a joy-ride in one of his installation's helicopters, damaging the helicopter and a general's limousine)