Original sentence: Bureaucracies are criticized when they become too complex, inefficient, or too inflexible.But even Weber saw unfettered bureaucracy as a threat to individual freedom, in which an increase in the bureaucratization of human life can trap individuals in an "iron cage" of rule-based, rational control.Others have defended the necessity of bureaucracies
Edited sentence: Bureaucracies are criticized for their complexity, their inefficiency, and their inflexibility.But even Weber saw bureaucracy as a threat to individual freedom, in which the increasing bureaucratization of human life traps individuals in an "iron cage" of rule-based, rational control.Others have defended the existence of bureaucracies