Original sentence: "It [a national sales tax, now called by some the the "FairTax"] was originally devised by the Church of Scientology in the early 1990s as a way to get rid of the Internal Revenue Service, with which the church was then at war.In this article, Bartlett was highly critical of this proposal
Edited sentence: "It [the "FairTax"] was originally devised by the Church of Scientology in the early 1990s as a way to get rid of the Internal Revenue Service, with which the church was then at war.In this article an unusually misinformed Bartlett was highly critical of this proposal.This statement was proven false in the August 28th issue of the Atlanta Journal Constitution