Original sentence: Her number “Pass The Peace Pipe” was a standout.She is said, by her biographer, to have been the inspiration for the protagonist Holly Golightly in Truman Capote's novel, Breakfast at Tiffany's, although this can be disputed.She was married to Jack Dunphy and then to dancer and choreographer Bob Fosse from 1951 to 1959.Unfortunately, her movie career never took off
Edited sentence: According to her biographer, she told Truman Capote about her reactions to her brother's death, and he  "used her violent tantrum in the Bloomer Girl dressing room as the model for a scene in his popular novel Breakfast at Tiffany's".Her number "Pass The Peace Pipe" was a standout, but her movie career never took off.She was married to Jack Dunphy, who she divorced on March 6, 1951, and then to dancer and choreographer Bob Fosse from December 1952 to 1959