Original sentence: Although the couple split up numerous times, they ended up marrying one another in four separate ceremonies, one being titled as "the most sumptuous wedding seen on daytime television up to that date".For over twenty years, the duo held the record for the most number of marriages to each other on a soap opera
Edited sentence: For over twenty years, the pairing held the record for the most number of marriages to each other on a soap opera.Within the story, although the couple split up numerous times, they end up marrying one another in four separate ceremonies, one being titled as "the most sumptuous wedding seen on daytime television up to that date"