Original sentence: After receiving his basic infantry training, he reported to the 60th Infantry at Fort Bragg in North Carolina where he served as an Assistant Operations Officer in September of 1940.Army in June of 1939.Following his training in May of 1942, he joined the newly formed 503rd parachute infantry battalion as Company Commander.His work was in cardiovascular responses and measurement tools critical for tests of g-force and near-vaccume survival.Hoping for a chance to ride in the planes more often, Fife transferred to the Air Force in November of 1947 where he was immediately sent to the Defense Language Institute to learn Russian
Edited sentence: After receiving his basic infantry training, he reported to the 60th Infantry at Fort Bragg in North Carolina where he served as an Assistant Operations Officer in September 1940.Army in June 1939.Following his training in May 1942, he joined the newly formed 503rd parachute infantry battalion as Company Commander.His work was in cardiovascular responses and measurement tools critical for tests of g-force and near-vacuum survival.Hoping for a chance to ride in the planes more often, Fife transferred to the Air Force in November 1947 where he was immediately sent to the Defense Language Institute to learn Russian