Original sentence: Proponents of Section 28 frequently pointed to various polls which seemed to demonstrate that public opinion favoured keeping Section 28.The main argument used in support of Section 28 was that it protected children from predatory homosexuals and advocates seeking to indoctrinate vulnerable young people into homosexuality.Various other arguments were also used in support of Section 28 which are summarised as follows:
Edited sentence: Proponents argued that Section 28 protected children from predatory homosexuals and advocates seeking to indoctrinate vulnerable young people into homosexuality.Proponents of Section 28 frequently pointed to the fact that various polls carried out during the repeal process seemed to demonstrate that most people supported keeping Section 28