Original sentence: Branigan's rendition earned her a Grammy nomination for Best Female Pop Vocal of the year.and peaking at #2 on Billboard's Hot 100's top 40 and remaining on the chart for 22 weeks, Branigan's version did well on charts around the world, peaking at #6 in the UK and remained at #1 for seven weeks in Australia
Edited sentence: Branigan's gutsy belt drove the song to the top of the charts and earned her a Grammy nomination for Best Female Pop Vocal of the year.and peaking at #2 on Billboard's Hot 100's top 40 and remaining on the chart for 22 weeks, Branigan's hit topped charts around the world, peaking at #6 in the UK and notably entrenched at #1 for seven weeks in Australia