Original sentence: A famous scene from the book, detailing the Running of the bulls in Pamplona, Spain helped popularize that event in American culture.The Sun Also Rises is a novel by Ernest Hemingway, following a group of expatriate Americans in Europe during the 1920s.The novel is in a narrative style, and the plot has been said to meander widely, but Hemmingway's vivid style and the detail with which he describes each scene is well-regarded
Edited sentence: A great novel about a bunch of ex-pat Americans in Europe during the 1920's.The narrative style of the book can be quite annoying, and the plot lacks any real direction, but the vivid style and detail with which Hemmingway describes each scene is marvelous.The settles to its best when the gang are in Pamplona, Spain for the fiesta and the running of the bulls.This book helped start to create the legend surrounding the running of the bulls in Western society