Original sentence: Ely railway station serves the city of Ely in Cambridgeshire, England.It is a busy station with services to a variety of destinations.On Friday 22 June 2007 a goods train derailed at Newmarket Bridge northeast of Ely station, at the point where the Ipswich line crosses the Great Ouse.Photographs showed derailed wagons on their side, only prevented from plunging off the embankment by subsidiary structures and their attachment to the rest of the train.Three other non-electrified lines meet at Ely:
Edited sentence: Ely railway station is a railway station serving the city of Ely in Cambridgeshire, England.It is a surprisingly busy station with excellent services to a variety of destinations.On Friday, 22nd June, 2007, there was a goods train derailment at Newmarket Bridge, where the Ipswich line crosses the Great Ouse, south of Ely.Photographs show the derailed wagon on its side, only prevented from plunging into the river by some subsidiary structures and its attachment to the rest of the train.There are also three other non-electrified lines that meet at Ely