Original sentence: After intense hardship, first blown down the Irish Sea then to the East along the English Channel, they were wrecked on the east side of Portland Bill on June 4, 1949, where Frank drowned.Ann managed to scramble ashore.Ann's second book, Home was an Island, describes their life after the sale of their airfield and before the purchase of Reliance, during which time they bought and farmed the small islands of Inchmurrin and then Inchfad on Loch Lomond.But the main part of the book, and the title, is about their ill-fated purchase of Reliance.In her first book, Last Voyage, she describes her life in the early 1930s as an aviator, delivering mail around the UK, and her marriage to Frank Davison, another aviator, with whom she bought and ran a small commercial airfield at Hooton on the Wirral which had to be closed at the start of the Second World War.The boat, which was alongside at Fleetwood, Lancashire, required more refurbishment than anticipated and Frank was unwilling to compromise on standards
Edited sentence: According to the Museum of Yachting, Newport, Rhode Island, Ann and Frank Davison worked as civilian flight instructors during World War II.After intense hardship, first blown down the Irish Sea then to the East along the English Channel, they were wrecked on the east side of Portland Bill on June 4, 1949, where Frank drowned but Ann managed to scramble ashore.Ann had nieces and nephews back in the UK.But the main part of the book, and the title, is about their ill-fated purchase of "Reliance".Her second book, Home was an Island, describes their life after the sale of their airfield and before the purchase of Reliance, during which time they bought and farmed the small islands of Inchmurrin and then Inchfad on Loch Lomond.Her sister occasionally made visits to Florida and participated in some of Ann's adventures.In her autobiographical book Last Voyage, however, Davison did not mention any such occupation.In her first book, Last Voyage, she describes her life in the early 1930s as an aviator, delivering mail around the UK, and her marriage to Frank Davison, another aviator, with whom she bought and ran a small commercial airfield at Hooton on the Wirral (now a car factory) which had to be closed at the start of the Second World War.The boat, which was alongside at Fleetwood on the Lancashire coast, required more refurbishment than anticipated and Frank was unwilling to compromise on standards