Original sentence: One of the most famous examples is the Gimli Glider, a Boeing 767 that ran out of fuel in Canada in 1983 due, in large part, to confusion at Air Canada during Canada's metrication
Edited sentence: One of the most famous examples is the 1983 Gimli Glider incident, where a Canadian|Canada Boeing 767 ran out of fuel due, in large part, to confusion at Air Canada during Canada's metrication