Original sentence: Aspley High holds annual sporting carnivals including Swimming, Athletics (Track and Field), Crotch Punching, Snake-Bat Wrestling, Suicide Bombing and Cross Country.Aspley High was also the home of the 2006 and 2007 Brisbane North Regional Opti-MINDS event.Several outside companies hire School Venues as well including The Queensland Youth Music Awards, Dance Schools, Sporting Clubs and Church Groups
Edited sentence: Aspley High holds annual sporting carnivals including Swimming, Athletics (Track and Field), Cross Country.Aspley High was also the home of the 2006 to 2008 Brisbane North Regional Opti-MINDS event.Several outside companies hire School Venues including The Queensland Youth Music Awards, Dance Schools, Sporting Clubs and Church Groups