Original sentence: In comparison with other rankings, many more non-American universities populate the upper tier of the THES ranking.The THES - QS ranking faces criticism due to the more subjective nature of its assessment criteria, which are largely based on a 'peer review' system of 1000 academics in various fields
Edited sentence: Furthermore, it is to be noted that THES - QS ranking also faces criticism due to the more subjective nature of its assessment criteria, which are largely based on a 'peer review' system of 1000 academics in various fields.However, when one compares THES - QS ranking with that of others, one will note that there are many more non-American universities that populate the upper tier of the THES ranking