Original sentence: After the 1967 Six Day War Israeli leaders warned against turning the cease-fire lines into permanent borders on the grounds of Israeli security:.In the Knesset then Foreign Minister and future Prime Minister Moshe Sharett called the cease-fire lines "provisional boundaries" and the old international borders which the armistice lines, except with Jordan, were based on, "natural boundaries".The agreements left about 78% of 1948 mandatory Palestine in Israeli hands (another figure sometimes used is 17.5% of the original Mandate territory, which also included Jordan)
Edited sentence: However, after the 1967 Six Day War Israeli leaders warned against turning the cease-fire lines into permanent borders on the ground of Israeli security:.In the Knesset then Foreign Minister and future Prime Minister Moshe Sharett called them "provisional boundaries" and the old international borders which the armistice lines, except with Jordan, were based on,  "natural boundaries".In the years following the agreements, Israeli, but not Arab, leaders  publicly construed the armistice lines as international borders for practically all intents and purposes.Israel, Jordan and Syria offered peace treaties to each other which made only at most minor changes to these lines, but these treaties unfortunately did not materialize.The agreements left about 78% of 1948 mandatory Palestine in Israeli hands