Original sentence: However the following year she was involved in a domestic accident that left her seriously injured.This was a disappointing result for her as she went in as the 2nd favorite behind Maria Mutola, and beat Mutola, but ended up losing the gold to the much less favored Svetlanta Masterkova
Edited sentence: However the following year she was involved in a horrific domestic accident that left her seriously injured.It was her last chance for the Olympic Gold medal, and she is generally regarded as the best 800 metre runner in history to never achieve this lofty title.This was a dissapointing result for her as she went in as the 2nd favorite behind Maria Mutola, and beat Mutola, but ended up losing the gold to the much less favored Svetlanta Masterkova