Original sentence: Fantasy Warlord featured some unusual game mechanics such as simultaneous movement and fog of war rules.However the combat system was prone to throwing up statistical irregularities.It also featured balanced magic and troop choice systems
Edited sentence: Fantasy Warlord featured some unusual game mechanics that were superior to Warhammer such as excellent simultaneous movement and fog of war rules.However other aspects of the game did not work so well, notably the combat system which was prone to throwing up statistical irregularities.It was also featured better balanced magic and troop choice systems than the 3rd edition Warhammer rules that were around at the time