Original sentence: As multiple efforts by BP failed, some in the media and public expressed confusion and criticism over various aspects of the incident, and stated a desire for more involvement by Obama and the federal government.Obama visited the Gulf on May 2 among visits by members of his cabinet, and again on May 28 and June 4.On May 27, he announced a 6-month moratorium on new deepwater drilling permits and leases, pending regulatory review
Edited sentence: As multiple efforts by BP failed, some in the media and public expressed confusion and criticism over various aspects of the incident, and stated a desire for more involvement by Obama and the federal government...At least one national poll shows that more people give the federal government's response to the oil spill a negative rating than did the response to Hurricane Katrina.Bush's administration handling of Hurricane Katrina.Critics have also labeled this incident "Obama's Katrina," in reference to President George W.On May 27, he took full responsibility for the federal-government's response to the oil spill and announced a 6-month moratorium on new deepwater drilling permits and leases, pending regulatory review.Twelve days after the explosion, Obama visited the Gulf on May 2 among visits by members of his cabinet, and again 26 days later on May 28 and June 4