Original sentence: Many advocacy journalists claim that they can reject objectivity while holding on to the goals of fairness and accuracy, and claim that corporate journalists often lack both.Muckrakers are often claimed as the professional ancestors of modern advocacy journalists; for example: Nellie Bly, Ida M.Tarbell, Lincoln Steffens, Upton Sinclair, George Seldes, and I
Edited sentence: Many advocacy journalists claim that they can reject objectivity while holding on to the goals of fairness and accuracy, and claim that corporate journalists often lack both; thus the critical media reform group Fairness and Accuracy in Reporting.Muckrakers are often claimed as the professional ancestors of modern advocacy journalists: Nellie Bly, Ida M.Tarbell, Lincoln Steffens, Upton Sinclair, George Seldes, I