Original sentence: Congregations are further organized into circuits of about twenty congregations each.Directly appointed by the Governing Body, branch committees supervise administrative functions for congregations in their jurisdiction.Each branch office oversees the activities of Jehovah's Witnesses in a particular country or region, and may include facilities for the publication and distribution of Watch Tower Society literature.Elders take responsibility for congregational governance, pastoral work, setting meeting times, selecting speakers, conducting meetings, directing the public preaching work, and forming judicial committees to investigate and decide disciplinary action in cases where members are believed to have committed serious sins.Headquarters representatives visit groups of branch offices and report the branch's activities to the Governing Body.Jehovah's Witnesses are organized hierarchically, and are led by the Governing Body of Jehovah's Witnesses from the Watch Tower Society's headquarters in Brooklyn, New York.The Governing Body directly appoints circuit overseers as its representatives to supervise activities within circuits.The Governing Body, along with other "helpers", are organized into six committees responsible for various administrative functions within the global Witness community, including publication, assembly programs and evangelizing activity
Edited sentence: Congregations are also organized into circuits of about twenty congregations each.Directly appointed by the Governing Body, branch committees supervise administrative functions for congregations in their branch.Each branch office oversees the activities of Jehovah's Witnesses in a particular country or region, and may include facilities for the publication and distribution of Jehovah's Witness literature.Elders take responsibility for congregational governance, pastoral work, setting meeting times, selecting speakers, conducting meetings, directing the public preaching work, and forming judicial committees to investigate and decide disciplinary action in cases where members are believed to have committed immoral acts.Headquarters Representatives visit groups of branch offices to provide pastoral care and report to the Governing Body on activities within that branch.Jehovah's Witnesses are organized hierarchically, and are led by the Governing Body of Jehovah's Witnesses from their world headquarters in Brooklyn, New York.The Governing Body directly appoints circuit overseers as its representatives to supervise activities in circuits.The Governing Body, along with other "helpers", are organized into six committees responsible for various administrative functions within the global Witness community, including publication of written materials, assembly programs and the global evangelizing activity