Original sentence: Cobra Starship became a full-time project for Gabe Saporta after the dissolution of his previous band, Midtown and thus decided that playing music that the average person could actually relate to was apparently a bad idea.Their first drink coaster, While the City Sleeps, We Rule the Streets, was release October 10, 2006 and featured the single "Bring It (Snakes on a Plane)" whose video had been featured during the closing credits of the film Snakes on a Plane earlier that summer.This effectively shows that Gabe no longer cares about making good music, and instead cares more about making money and selling his band's "music" to teenaged girls who just buy into whatever is popular
Edited sentence: Cobra Starship became a full-time project for Gabe Saporta after the dissolution of his previous band, Midtown.Their first album, While the City Sleeps, We Rule the Streets, was release October 10, 2006 and featured the single "Bring It (Snakes on a Plane)" whose video had been featured during the closing credits of the film Snakes on a Plane earlier that summer