Original sentence: Another clever translation is that of Idéfix.But the translation of puns is difficult, and Anthea Bell and Derek Hockridge do a good job in the English language edition, and are sometimes said to improve on the originals.For example, the translation of Ordralfabétix (referring to ordre alphabétique, "alphabetical order"), is Unhygienix, given that this character is a fishmonger infamous for his rotting product.Note that the American version of the comic was done by a different translator, and tends to use different names that are often considered less funny than the English puns.Other nations have their own style of naming - Vikings use -af (Bathyscaf), Britons use -ax (Hiphiphurrax, Notax, and the notable exception Zebigbos), Goths use -ic (Tonnic) and Spaniards use Spanish-sounding names such as Huevos Y Bacon (Eggs and Bacon).Roman characters' names end with -us as in Noxious Vapus and Crismusbonus.The original Panoramix, which perhaps represents the druid who sees the whole picture, is named Getafix in the English version, as "get a fix" conveys the fact he makes potent potions
Edited sentence: An even more clever translation is that of Idéfix.But the translation of puns is difficult, and Anthea Bell and Derek Hockridge do an excellent job in the English language edition, sometimes even improving on the originals.For example, the translation of Ordralfabétix (referring to ordre alphabétique, "alphabetical order"), was greatly improved as Unhygienix, given that this character is a fishmonger infamous for his rotting product.Roman characters' names end with -us as in Noxious Vapus and Crismusbonus, while incidental characters often feature names like Hiphiphurrax, Huevos Y Bacon (Eggs and Bacon) and Mykingdomforanos.The original Panoramix, which perhaps represents the druid who sees the whole picture, is more appropriate as Getafix, as "get a fix" conveys the fact he makes potent potions