Original sentence: Bill's pizza and Basil's pizza, at one time run by loosely connected families, have produced consistent, good quality food for decades.The Contented Cow is a british-styled pub offering a variety of beer and wine.The Reub-N-Stein is that one bar from Trivial Pursuit and also has a variety of beer, although not as high quality, can be quite loud and is usually pretty smoky.The buildings in downtown Northfield are a reasonably well preserved example of late 19th/early 20th century architecture.The determination as to whether the festival commemorates the outlaw, or his capture, is left to the reader.This is, to the pleasure of many, no longer true
Edited sentence: Bill's pizza, and Basil's pizza, at one time run by loosly connected families, have produced consistent, good quality food for decades.The Contented Cow is a british (sort of) pub offering a variety of beer and wine.The Reub-N-Stein is that one bar from Trivial Pursuit and also has a variety of beer, although not as high quality, can be quite loud and is usually pretty smokey.The buildings in downtown Northfield are a resonably well preserved example of late 19th/early 20th century architecture.The determination as to whether the festival commemorates the outlaw, or his capture, is something we will leave to the reader.This is happily no longer true