Original sentence: More recently, author John Brodie commented "...the gunplay of the Shoreline Crips and the V-13 is as much a part of life in Venice as pit bulls playing with blond Labs at the local dog park
Edited sentence: More recently, author John Brodie commented on the failure of gentrification saying that "...the gunplay of the Shoreline Crips and the V-13 is as much a part of life in Venice as pit bulls playing with blond Labs at the local dog park