Original sentence: In December 2002 HM Queen Elizabeth II approved the awarding of the Battle Honour "Kosovo" to squadrons of the RAF that particiapted in the conflict.On 10 June, after a bombing campaign that had began on 24 March, the Serbians agreed to withdraw its forces from Kosovo and the boming campaign was halted the following day.On 12 June the British 1st Royal Gurkha Rifles and The Parachute Regiment and French forces spearheaded the NATO forces entering Kosovo as part of Operation Joint Guardian.Several flaws in Nato's campain and warring style was revealed.Squadrons that are boldened are authorised to have the battle honour emblazoned on their Colours.The British Royal Air Force operated the Harrier (and RN Sea Harrier FA2) and Tornado fighter jets as-well as an array of support aircraft.The Serbs used several tactics for disguising their tanks, including balloon-tanks and old tires to make tank-looking objects, which Nato bombed.The fighters were armed wih guided missiles, including the Paveway series, and were also armed with unguided 'dumb' bombs.The operation saw the first use of cruise missiles by the British Royal Navy (RN), operated off of the nuclear submarine HMS Splendid.The real tanks were well hidden.The squadrons were: Nos 1,7, 8, 9, 14, 23, 31, 51, 101, and 216 squadrons.The war also saw the first time that the German Luftwaffe actively participated in combat operations since the end of the Second World War and the American B-2 Spirit stealth bomber also saw its first combat.While Nato believed it had destroyed about 200 Serbian tanks, only 1 was destroyed
Edited sentence: After about a month of bombing the european forces run out of their cruise missiles, embarrassed having to ask usa to use their inventory for not having to use old "dumb" grenades....Several flaws in nato's campain and warring style was revealed.The real tanks where well hidden.The serbs used several tactics for disguising their tanks and used ballon-tanks and old tires to make tank-looking objects, which nato bombed.While nato believed it had destroyed about 200 serbian tanks, only 1 was destroyed