Original sentence: Also, her powers are enhanced due to blood exchanges—with a werewolf called Trayton she gains the ability to call fire when angry, when Vayl takes her blood, her abilities are hightened exponentially, though temporarily.At the beginning of his and Jaz working relationship he was distant and formal, but eventually reveals he is her sevheramin and they are bound togeather.During the course of the series she is forced to come to terms with the night when her fiance, her brother's fiance and almost everyone she cared about (her teamates) are killed in a vampire attack, after which she is inexplicably paired with Vayl and moved from vampire hunting to assassination.He is also one of only two vampires to escapre from a vampere household alive, and has fathered one fledgling.She gains more powers as the books continue—she has somthing called an "Inner Eye" which gives her more gifts as it opens further
Edited sentence: Also, her powers are enhanced due to blood exchanges—with a werewolf called Trayton she gains the ability to call fire when angry, when Vayl takes her blood, her abilities are heightened exponentially, though temporarily.At the beginning of his and Jaz working relationship he was distant and formal, but eventually reveals he is her sevheramin and they are bound together.During the course of the series she is forced to come to terms with the night when her fiance, her brother's fiance and almost everyone she cared about (her teammates) are killed in a vampire attack, after which she is inexplicably paired with Vayl and moved from vampire hunting to assassination.He is also one of only two vampires to escape from a vampere household alive, and has fathered one fledgling.She gains more powers as the books continue—she has something called an "Inner Eye" which gives her more gifts as it opens further