Original sentence: In 2004, the Philippine economy grew by 6.1%, beating most analysts and even the government's estimates.Inadequate infrastructure, transportation and communication have so far inhibited faster industrial growth.The country is rich with mineral and thermal energy resources
Edited sentence: In 2004, the Philippine economy grew by 6.1%, a pleasant surprise, beating most analysts and even the government's estimates.Inadequate infrastructure, transportation and communication have so far inhibited faster industrial growth, although great strides have been made in addressing the last of these elements.The country is well-endowed with mineral and thermal energy resources.When a virus breaks in any computer system in the world, they try to find a solution within 45 minutes of finding the virus