Original sentence: " Garber concludes that MacDonald's "rambling who-is-who-isn't roundup of Jews responsible for the 'Jewish Problem' borders on the irrational and is conducive to misrepresentation.MacDonald has been highly critical of the SPLC's investigation of him, including the November 2006 visit to his university's campus by the SPLC's Beirich.Shortly after the visit, the University issued a statement supporting MacDonald's academic freedom.Steven Pinker acknowledged that he had "not plowed through MacDonald's trilogy and therefore run the complementary risks of being unfair to his arguments, and of not refuting them resoundingly enough to distance them from my own views on evolutionary psychology", but states that MacDonald's theses are unable to pass the threshold of attention-worthiness or peer-approval, and contain a "consistently invidious portrayal of Jews, couched in value-laden, disparaging language
Edited sentence: " Garber claims that MacDonald's "rambling who-is-who-isn't roundup of Jews responsible for the 'Jewish Problem' borders on the irrational and is conducive to misrepresentation.Almost all the criticism of MacDonald’s works takes the approach of showing that his ideas are well received by objectionable people and groups, rather than addressing the validity of his arguments and the accuracy of his facts.MacDonald has been critical of the SPLC's attack on him, including the November 2006 incursion to his university's campus by the SPLC's Beirich.Shortly after her attempt to destroy his employment, the University issued a statement supporting MacDonald's academic freedom.Steven Pinker admitted that he had read MacDonald's works declaring that he had "not plowed through MacDonald's trilogy and therefore run the complementary risks of being unfair to his arguments, and of not refuting them resoundingly enough to distance them from my own views on evolutionary psychology", yet alleged that MacDonald's theses are unable to pass the threshold of attention-worthiness or peer-approval, and contain a "consistently invidious portrayal of Jews, couched in value-laden, disparaging language