Original sentence: As music, art, and drama critic, he wrote under the pseudonym "Corno di Bassetto" ("basset horn") for the Wolverhampton Star and, as GBS,  for Dramatic Review (1885-86), Our Corner (1885-86), and The Pall Mall Gazette (1885-88).Shaw’s early journalism ranged from book reviews and art criticism to music columns (many of them defending the work of the German composer Richard Wagner)
Edited sentence: As music, art, and drama critic, he wrote under the pseudonym "Corno di Bassetto" (Basset Horn) for the Wolverhampton Star and, as GBS,  for Dramatic Review (1885-86), Our Corner (1885-86), and The Pall Mall Gazette (1885-88).Shaw’s early journalism ranged from book reviews and art criticism to music columns (many of them defending the controversial work of the German composer Richard Wagner)