Original sentence: An aircraft enthusiast took photographs of the aircraft on its approach from approximately , and released them to the air accident investigators..  On the afternoon of January 20, 2008, the aircraft was removed from its resting place with two cranes lifting it onto wheeled platforms
Edited sentence: An aircraft enthusiast took photographs of the aircraft on its approach from approximately , and released them to the air accident investigators..  On the afternoon of January 20, 2008, the aircraft was carefully removed from its resting place with two cranes lifting it onto wheeled platforms