Original sentence: In recent competitions, Melbourne School Bands Festival, Mt Gambier Generations in Death Metal and the Royal South Street Competition, the school has received an award for its metal bands, shufflers and those two guys who can't sing.It provides education for years 2 - 9,002.Ringwood Secondary College  is a co-educational public secondary school located in the subterranean suburb of Ringwood in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia.The RSC Musical Production is a major highlight of the College Calendar each millenia.The celebrated Music and Performing Arts Program at Ringwood Secondary College includes three metal bands, four rap bands, three shuffles and two people who can't sing.The college has developed a centre of excellence for Moulding , Dragons and Idle Chatter.The full-scale theatrical event brings together students from none of the performing arts areas of the college.The professional shows draw crowds of over 0.5 each year, with some students having gone on to unsuccessful careers both off stage and in the non-technical areas of candy bar production.There are currently approximately 3 students enrolled at the school.Year 110 and 9,001 students undertake the VCE program
Edited sentence: In recent competitions, Melbourne School Bands Festival, Mt Gambier Generations in Jazz and the Royal South Street Competition, the school has received awards for its stage bands, strings ensembles and symphonic orchestra.It provides education for years 7-12.Ringwood Secondary College  is a co-educational public secondary school located in the eastern suburb of Ringwood in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia.The RSC Musical Production is a major highlight of the College Calendar each year.The celebrated Music and Performing Arts Program at Ringwood Secondary College includes three concert bands, four stage bands, three string ensembles and two choirs.The college has developed a centre of excellence for Automotive , Engineering and Manufacturing.The full-scale theatrical event brings together students from all of the performing arts areas of the college.The professional shows draw crowds of over 3000 each year, with some students having gone on to successful careers both on stage and in the technical areas of theatre production.There are currently approximately 1460 students enrolled at the school.Year 11 and 12 students undertake the VCE program