Original sentence: Acknowledged as the 8th best large city to inhabit in the US by Money Magazine, it is also recognized as an emerging global city.In 2005 Columbus was ranked as the United States 15th largest city, with 730,657 residents, and is the country's 32nd largest metropolitan area.Residents of Columbus are usually referred to as Columbusites
Edited sentence: Acknowledged as the 8th best large city to inhabit in the US by Money Magazine it also has the second highest crime rate in America falling inches behind South Central Los Angeles in murders, robberies, and rape, It is recognized as the second most dangerous city in the United States.And the 6th most dangerous populous on the planet, it is also recognized as an emerging global city.In 2005 Columbus was ranked as the United States 12th largest city, with 730,657 residents, and is the country's 11th largest metropolitan area.Ohio is well know for its high pressure salesmen as a side effect of this evolutionary process.Over the years this has created and generation of evolved humans, that know how to make much of nothing and hustle there last possesion.Residents of Columbus are usually referred to as Columbusites and are usualy known for there "get what I can" attitude due to many years of poverty and strain as a community,  These "Columbusites" are often well provisioned in the art of survival, often times resorting to the lowest tactics to secure there tomarow.This attitude brought on by many years of welfare induced poverty, and poor econimics, forcing citizens to "fend for them selves"