Original sentence: All Hallows' Parish School, Domremy College, Five Dock Public School, Lucas Gardens School, Rosebank College.The Five Dock retail and commercial centre is made up of a long line of shops, banks, restaurants and other services which run for about 500 metres along Great North Road in a section between Lyons Road and Queens Road.The major regional roads that run through or adjoin Five Dock include Parramatta Road, Lyons Road, Queens Road, Great North Road and the City West Link
Edited sentence: All Hallows' Parish School.Despite being a major thoroughfare, the shopping area along Great North Road is one of the area's main attractions.Despite traffic, the shopping district is a popular meeting place for locals.Domremy College.Five Dock Public School.Lucas Gardens School.Rosebank College.The hub is a retail and commercial centre made up of a long line of shops, banks, restaurants and other services which run for about 500 metres along Great North Road in a section between Lyons Road and Queens Road.The major regional roads that run through or adjoin Five Dock include Parramatta Road, Lyons Road, Queens Road, and the City West Link