Original sentence: On 22 May 2014, the day before year 11 students were due to finish, all year 11 students were told they must not return to school for their final day
Edited sentence: A further text message, sent to parents on the morning of 23 May 2014, reiterated that year 11 students "should not be on school premises, only when they have an exam [sic]".At 14:30 on 22 May 2014, while all year 11 students were sitting an external examination, parents were notified by text message that students will "start their study leave at the end of today".Many students preparing for exams would have relied on the day for a last-minute opportunity to seek advice of teachers.On 22 May 2014, the day before year 11 students were due to finish, all year 11 students were told they must not return to school for their final day, a school day which is traditionally seen as important to students, when they traditionally celebrate the end of their compulsory education, and many see one another for the last time.On 23 May 2014, on what was originally believed to be the students' last day, many went to the school hoping to say goodbye to teachers and schoolmates, only to be told they were trespassing, and "forced out", with staff behaviour described as "intimidating".Some students took to social media to voice their dissatisfaction.Some students, quoted in local press, described not being allowed "to speak to teachers", and a parent, said she was "appalled" at the treatment of children.Students were told this at the end of their examination at 15:30, with a student stating "they tried to say it was a good thing but we knew it wasn't", as it was, for some students, "the last time we saw each other".The school refused to comment on the incident to local press