Original sentence: The remarkable during the first half of the 17th century development of artillery resulted in the 1650 publication of the Artis magnae artilleriae pars prima book by Casimir Siemienowicz, a pioneer also in the science of rocketry
Edited sentence: The remarkable during the first half of the 17th century development of artillery resulted in the 1650 publication in Amsterdam of the Artis Magnae Artilleriae pars prima book by Kazimierz Siemienowicz, a pioneer also in the science of rocketry