Original sentence: [Last updated May 24, 2007]
Edited sentence: Coach Ron Benevides, the long time coach of the storied Mt.Eden Monarchs, has arrived to revive the husky pride.He is the Phil Jackson of the MVAL league.His advisor, Ron Benevides, stresses discipline and looks similiar to Bobby Knight.Hopefully the allibies will stop and they will conquer the Newark Memorial Cougars and bring home the league title.However, the focus is now on discipline.Lesser goals were accomplished in 2007, which was Simba Nassty and Raj's premier season.Seniors Sayed 'Papz' Pirzada, Mark 'Kease' Song, Ernest 'Flash' Fonacier and Chris 'Petey' Peterson will try to lead the path for the 'young guns', talented Jack 'Zack' Veronin, Justin O'bryant, hard working Borat, and John 'Shuking and Jiving' Song.[Last updated June 23, 2007]