Original sentence: According to Scott, "more often than not, it is the understanding of Nirvana as supreme happiness that is underscored in dhammakāya practice, rather than its traditional rendering as the cessation of greed, hatred and delusion", though other Dhammakaya practitioners equate these.Many practitioners of the Dhammakaya movement's equate Nirvana to be true, ultimate, permanent happiness (Sanskrit: nibbanam paramam sukham).This positive description of Nirvana as a state of supreme happiness may have contributed to the popularity of Wat Phra Dhammakaya to new members, states Scott.This view is unorthodox when compared to the orthodox Theravada via negativa description of Nirvana being "not Samsāra"
Edited sentence: Besides the unorthodox definition of Nirvana as true happiness, permanent and essential, it is also described by the movement from a more orthodox perspective, as the absence of greed, hatred and delusion.Religion scholar Rachelle Scott, however, has argued that the positive description of Nirvana as happiness, permanent and essential, is what has contributed to the popularity of the method and its proponents