Original sentence: She captures Michael herself to find out what the Lycans are up to, and along the way she discovers many shocking events about the Vampires, Lycans, and even herself.She discovers that the Lycans are persuing a human, Michael Corvin for experimentation
Edited sentence: Along the way, Selene not only discovers a mutinous plot to destroy the Vampire Elders, but also a shocking revelation about her father-like Elder, Viktor.She discovers that the Lycans are persuing a human, Michael Corvin for experimentation; Selene captures Michael herself to find out what the Lycans are up to