Original sentence: Juan Sebastián Elcano (1476, Getaria, Gipuzkoa, Spain — 4 August 1526, Pacific Ocean) was a Spanish-Basque explorer who completed the first circumnavigation of the world
Edited sentence: Juan Sebastián Elcano (1476, Getaria, Gipuzkoa, Spain — 4 August 1526, Pacific Ocean) was a Spanish  explorer who completed the first circumnavigation of the world