Original sentence: Assosiated Press.Assosiated Press, Philadelphia, Pennslyvania.August 1, 2009.Cigarettes are known to provoke health issues, as well as harm innocent civilians to breath "secondhand smoke".Cigarettes could also be a cause of damaging the ozone layer, a thin covering over the earth to help keep out hamful UV rays from the Sun.Dan Harris.If a vast majority votes the new "cut out the smoke" law, smoking will be prohibited everywhere including outside, in homes, bars, cars, etc.James Resolbe of the Philadelphia Police Department (PPD) stated in a report on Monday, "If anyone is caught smoking after this law takes place, they will be fined and possibly serve jail time.No More Cigarettes.Philadelphia, Pennslyvania.The law could go into effect as early as January of 2010.The new law to quit production of cigarettes will be voted on in November by the United States Legislative Branch.This is a serious law that affects everyone and we will be on high alert to moniter all illegal selling and smoking of cigarettes after the law goes into effect
Edited sentence: Coming off of a 6–5 season in both 1988 and 1989, the Rockets found quick success under Nick Saban by going 9–2.Saban left Toledo after one season to become defensive coordinator of the National Football League's Cleveland Browns under then head coach Bill Belichick.Saban was hired to lead the Toledo Rockets in 1990.The two games that the Rockets lost all season came by narrow margins: one point to Central Michigan, and four points to Navy.With the 9–2 season, Toledo was co-champion of the Mid-American Conference