Original sentence: Daniel Pipes is an internationally known journalist, author, and activist, and expert on Islamism and terrorism.Doctor Daniel Pipes, a PhD holder from Harvard University , is the founder and director of the Middle East Forum, a former member of the presidentially-appointed board of the U.Doctor Pipes founded the Middle East Forum,  an independent 501(c)3 organization, in 1994 in order to “promote American interests” through publications, research, consulting, media outreach, and public education.Doctor Pipes is frequently invited to discuss terrorism and Middle East affairs on American network television, has appeared on the BBC and Al-Jazeera, and has had articles published in many newspapers across North America, including the Los Angeles Times, New York Times, Wall Street Journal, and Washington Post
Edited sentence: Daniel Pipes is an internationally known journalist, author, and activist, and expert on Islamism and terrorism, widely criticised as an Islamophobe.He is the founder and director of the Middle East Forum, a former member of the presidentially-appointed board of the U.Pipes founded the Middle East Forum,  an independent 501(c)3 organization, in 1994 in order to “promote American interests” through publications, research, consulting, media outreach, and public education.Pipes is frequently invited to discuss terrorism and Middle East affairs on American network television, has appeared on the BBC and Al-Jazeera, and has had articles published in many newspapers across North America, including the Los Angeles Times, New York Times, Wall Street Journal, and Washington Post