Original sentence: Fochabers is a village in the Moray region of north-east Scotland, not far from the cathedral city of Elgin and located on the east bank of the river Spey.For some time the people of Fochabers have been campaigning for a town bypass, as the village is situated on the A96, the only direct route from Aberdeen to Inverness, and consequently suffers from a serious traffic problem.The decision follows an Inquiry in 2003, which focused on the loss of part of the designed landscape of Gordon Castle and the environmental impacts on adjacent properties.The village is also home to Baxters, the family-run manufacturer of foodstuffs
Edited sentence: Fochabers is a village in the Moray region of North-East of Scotland, not far from the cathedral city of Elgin and located on the bank of the river Spey.For some time the people of Fochabers have been campaigning for a town bypass, as the village is situated on the A96, the only direct route from Aberdeen to Inverness, and consequently suffers from a serious 'bottleneck' traffic problem.The decision follows an Inquiry in 2003, which focused on the loss of part of the designed landscape of Gordon Castle and on the environmental impacts on adjacent properties.The village is also where Baxters is situated, the world-famous family-run manufacturer of fine foodstuffs