Original sentence: He has now shown himself to be an arrogant rookie demanding more money or he won't play the 2009-2010 season.He learned to play football, he just didn't learn how to play the real game of life.He obviously didn't major in common sense or math in college, since he stands to lose a lot of money while he sits out and does nothing with his life.He will likely never recover from the millions he could have made.He would prefer to sit out the season hoping he will get selected next year for a higher salary.It will truly be his undoing.Michael Crabtree (born September 14, 1987 in Dallas, Texas) is an American football wide receiver that was drafted by the San Francisco 49ers of the National Football League as the 10th overall pick in the 2009 NFL Draft.Sad to see such arrogance so early in his career.This will likely prove to be a pivotal moment in his life, in which he will learn the hard reality of business and finance
Edited sentence: He was drafted by the 49ers with the 10th overall pick in the 2009 NFL Draft.Michael Crabtree (born September 14, 1987 in Dallas, Texas) is an American football wide receiver for the San Francisco 49ers of the National Football League