Original sentence: After graduation, Willard joined her family in the Arizona Territory where her four brothers operated a ranch in the Verde Valley with her father's former business partner, Willard Munds (Joel Willard had died in 1879).Munds was born Frances Lillian Willard in Franklin, California on June 10, 1866, the eighth child of Joel and Mary Grace Vinyard Willard
Edited sentence: After graduation, Willard joined her family in the Arizona Territory, where her four brothers operated a ranch in the Verde Valley with her father's former business partner, Willard Munds (Joel Willard had died in 1879).Munds was born Frances Lillian Willard in Franklin, California, on June 10, 1866, the eighth child of Joel and Mary Grace Vinyard Willard