Original sentence: After showing the clips, Shepherd was summoned to a meeting with Nathan Rambukkana, her academic supervisor; Herbert Pimlott, head of her academic program; and Adria Joel, acting manager of gender violence prevention in the university's Diversity and Equity Office.where it was reported that a student had expressed concern about the clips to a university LGBTQ support group, Shepherd recorded the meeting, during which she was told that showing the clips could be viewed as "threatening" and "counter to the Canadian human rights code"
Edited sentence: After a student allegedly expressed concern about the clips to a university LGBTQ support group, Shepherd was summoned to a meeting with Nathan Rambukkana, her academic supervisor; Herbert Pimlott, head of her academic program; and Adria Joel, acting manager of gender violence prevention in the university's Diversity and Equity Office.Shepherd recorded the meeting, during which she was told that showing the clips could be viewed as "threatening" and "counter to the Canadian human rights code"