Original sentence: A few months after joining APOEL, he was crowned champion as his team won the Cypriot First Division title for a fourth consecutive time.He spent the vast majority of his career with Apollon, where he won one championship, two cups and one super cup
Edited sentence: A few months after joining APOEL, he crowned champion as his team managed to win the Cypriot First Division title for a fourth time in the row.He spent the vast majority of his career with Apollon, where he managed to win one championship, two cups and one super cup