Original sentence: He blamed the re-writing of the Wisconsin Idea on a "drafting error", even though there was evidence that he was aware of the revisions.On February 3, 2015, Walker delivered a budget address to the Wisconsin Legislature, in which he recommended reducing the state's funding for the University of Wisconsin system by $300 million, placing the system under the direction of a "private authority", governed by the Board of Regents (all the governor's appointees), and re-writing the Wisconsin Idea, so as to eliminate the university's fundamental commitment to the search for truth.Walker was criticized by numerous sources, including fellow Republicans
Edited sentence: On February 3, 2015, Walker delivered a budget address to the Wisconsin Legislature, in which he recommended reducing the state's funding for the University of Wisconsin system by $300 million, placing the system under the direction of a "private authority," governed by the Board of Regents (all the governor's appointees), and re-writing the Wisconsin Idea, so as to eliminate the university's fundamental commitment to the search for truth.Walker was condemned by numerous sources, including fellow Republicans, and ultimately blamed the re-writing of the Wisconsin Idea on a "drafting error," even though there was evidence that he was perfectly aware of the the revisions