Original sentence: George Blumenthal, UCSC's tenth Chancellor, largely to allay community concerns, intends to mitigate growth constraints in Santa Cruz and further extend UCSC's influence by developing off-campus sites in Silicon Valley.Plans for increasing enrollment over the next 14 years to 19,500 students, adding 1,500 faculty and staff, and, secondarily the anticipated environmental impacts of such action have encountered opposition from the city, the local community, and the student body
Edited sentence: " George Blumenthal, UCSC's tenth Chancellor, largely to allay community concerns, intends to mitigate growth constraints in Santa Cruz and further extend UCSC's influence by developing off-campus sites in Silicon Valley.Plans for increasing enrollment over the next 14 years to 19,500 students, adding 1,500 faculty and staff, and, secondarily the anticipated environmental impacts of such action have encountered opposition from the city, the local community, and the student body which could be argued as "anti-growth