Original sentence: In 2012, MCNY re-opened its doors in the Bronx after more than five years.The college was founded in 1964 by educational pioneer Audrey Cohen as the Women's Talent Corp and was renamed the College for Human Services in 1970, when it was granted a charter by the New York State Board of Regents
Edited sentence: In 2012, with a warm welcome from the community and public officials such as Deputy Bronx Borough President Aurelia Greene, Metropolitan College of New York (MCNY) re-opened its doors in the Bronx after more than five years.The college was founded in 1964 by educational pioneer Audrey Cohen as the Women's Talent Corp and was renamed the College for Human Services in 1970, when it was granted a Charter by the New York State Board of Regents