Original sentence: It is feared that the farm might eventually be the site of a Kabbalah retreat, a religion popularised by celebrities such as Madonna and Gwyneth Paltrow.The farm, formerly used as a stationary factory and warehouse, scrap car dump, and even a Cannabis factory, is currently being developed into a luxury B&B/Guest House.The necessity of planning permission for a small B&B has been disputed by the owner
Edited sentence: It is feared that the farm might eventually be the site of a Kabbalah retreat, a controversial esoteric religion popularised by celebrities such as Madonna and Gwyneth Paltrow.The farm, formerly used as a stationary factory and warehouse, scrap car dump, and even a Cannabis factory, is currently being developed into a B&B/Guest House without planning permission, the necessity of which has been disputed by the owner but not the National Park Authority