Original sentence: During the 1970's and the early 1980's, the towns of the Upper Galilee were frequently attack by PLO terrorists from Lebanon.Hizbullah claims that a place on the border of the Golan Heights and Lebanon called the Shaba Farms is Israeli-occupied Lebanon.Israel and the UN claim that the Shaba farms are part of the Syrian Golan Heights.On 2000 Israeli prime-minister Ehud Barak unilaterally withdrew entirely from south Lebanon and deployed Israel on the international border, recognized by the UN.The "Finger of the Galilee" (Etzba ha-Galil) is a region of the upper Galilee and contains the towns Metula and Qiriyat Shemona and the rivers of Dan and Banias.Up to 2000, this was the most unquiet region in Israel were Israeli Defence Forces battled Hizbullah and Amal (which often shelled Upper Galilee communities and town with Katyoosha rockets)
Edited sentence: During the 1970's and the early 1980's, the settlements of the Upper Galilee were frequently attack by PLO terrorists from Lebanon.On 2000 Israeli prime-minister Ehud Barak withdrew entirely from south Lebanon and deployed Israel on the international border, recognized by the UN.The "Finger of the Galilee" (Etzba ha-Galil) is a region of the upper Galilee and contains the setlements Metula and Qiriyat Shemona and the rivers of Dan and Banias.Up to 2000, this was the most unquiet region in Israel were Israeli Defence Forces battled Hizbullah and Amal (which often shelled Upper Galilee settlements and town with Katyoosha rockets)