Original sentence: Finally, after decades of careful testing and tasting, he created the now great dinosaur pluot(plew-out).Floyd Zaiger (1920- 2001) was a biologist who is most noted for his work in fruit genetics.He also founded Zaiger's Genetics.He was born in Nebraska and grew-up in Iowa.It troubled him on a daily basis, until it came to him; this world needs a new fruit, an incredible fruit, comprising two already great fruits: the plum and the apricot
Edited sentence: Finally, after decades of careful testing and tasting, he birthed the now great dinosaur pluot(plew-out).Floyd Zaiger 1920- 2001.It troubled him on a daily basis, until it came to him.Like most great geniuses, he was unable to witness the inspiring impact that his fruit would have on our great country.Since the plum, as everyone knows, is a 2/3 superior fruit, he created the hybrid as such.This world needs a new fruit, an incredible fruit, comprising two already great fruits: the plum and the apricot