Original sentence: " However, there are many instances where Usagi and Chibiusa show their love and concern for one another, such as when Sailor Moon breaks down crying after Mistress 9 takes Chibiusa's pure heart crystal, or when she dives off a balcony to save her,and in the finallie of sailor moonR when Chibiusa is prepareing to leave."She then heads for home.Chibiusa runs into Usagi's arms and the two cry.Chibiusa then stll tearful says "Thankyou for everything mommy.Neither are able to say anything and seem to be on the brink of tears.She says googbye to the other senshi, and lastly says goodbye to Usagi
Edited sentence: " However, there are many instances where Usagi and Chibiusa show their love and concern for one another, such as when Sailor Moon breaks down crying after Mistress 9 takes Chibiusa's pure heart crystal, or when she dives off a balcony to save her