Original sentence: He currently ranks as the school's fourth all-time quarterback in terms of completion percentage, fifth in completions, seventh in total offensive yards, and he is tied for 11th in terms of touchdown passes
Edited sentence: He currently ranks as the school's fourth all-time quarterback in terms of completion percentage, fifth in completions, seventh in total offensive yards, and he is tied for 11th in number of touchdown passes.He has also expressed a desire to pursue a professional playing career in the National Football League (NFL) if possible.The NFL Draft Scout assessed Turner as the 16th-ranked quarterback out of the 135 available for the 2010 NFL Draft and projected him as a possible seventh round selection