Original sentence: Adopted at the age of fifteen by his great uncle and aunt the surname "Rux" (of German derivation, also the name of a city near Breslau (Wroclaw) Poland, formally of Bohemia, Austria, Prussia and Germany situated on the Oder river in Lower Silesia)</ref> was added to his name after his adoption.After the death of his maternal grandmother when he was four , he grew up in foster care.Born Carl Stephen Hancock in Harlem, New York, Rux's mother was institutionalized for schizophrenia while he was still an infant
Edited sentence: Adopted at the age of fifteen by his great uncle and aunt the surname "Rux"was added to his name after his adoption(of German derivation, also the name of a city near Breslau (Wroclaw) Poland, formally of Bohemia, Austria, Prussia and Germany situated on the Oder river in Lower Silesia).Born Carl Stephen Hancock in Harlem, New York, Rux's mother was institutionalized for schizophrenia.. After the death of his maternal grandmother he entered the New York foster care system at the age of four