Original sentence: In addition, the company used income generated by advertising, television deals, and tape sales to secure talent from rival promoters.In an interview with Sports Illustrated, McMahon noted:.McMahon gained significant traction when he hired AWA talent Hulk Hogan, who had achieved popularity outside of wrestling, notably for his appearance in Rocky III as Thunderlips.Seeking to make the WWF the premier wrestling promotion in the world, he began an expansion process that fundamentally changed the industry.The WWWF operated in a conservative manner compared to other pro wrestling territories; it ran its major arenas monthly rather than weekly or bi-weekly, usually featuring a babyface champion wrestling various heels in programs that consisted of one to three matches.The younger McMahon bought his father's stock in the WWF in 1982, effectively seizing control of the company.Upon taking over the company, McMahon immediately worked to get WWF programming on syndicated television all across the United States
Edited sentence: Against his father's wishes, McMahon began an expansion process that fundamentally changed the industry.He had long since recognized that professional wrestling was more about entertainment than actual sport.McMahon was able to secure television deals, and WWF was being shown across the United States.McMahon's vision for his promotion was starting to become possible when he hired AWA talent Hulk Hogan, who had achieved popularity outside of wrestling, notably for his appearance in Rocky III as Thunderlips.The WWWF operated in a conservative manner compared to other pro wrestling territories; it ran its major arenas monthly rather than weekly or bi-weekly, usually featuring a babyface champion wrestling various heels in programs the consisted of one to three matches.The elder McMahon had long since established the northeastern territory as one of the most vibrant members of the NWA.The syndication of WWF programming forced other promotions to come into direct competition.To make matters worse, McMahon used the income generated by advertising, television deals, and tape sales to poach talent from rival promoters