Original sentence: " Atheists dispute this claim by citing examples of "atheists in foxholes"; also, atheist organizations of military personnel have been created in response.It is also asserted that atheists are quick to believe in God in times of crisis—that atheists make deathbed conversions, or that "there are no atheists in foxholes
Edited sentence: " Atheists dispute this absurd claim by referring to their personal experience to the contrary and more formally, citing examples of "atheists in foxholes"; also, atheist organizations of military personnel have been created in response.It is also asserted (most consistently by the religious), that atheists are quick to believe in God in times of crisis—that atheists make deathbed conversions, or that "there are no atheists in foxholes