Original sentence: Haileybury along with many other APS schools denied these allegations and agreed that scholarships would be handed out on a purely academic merit
Edited sentence: Fact is Haileybury are a disgrace to fair play and all there failures will be greeted with smiles among the upper echelons of the APS hierachy.Haileybury along with many other APS schools denied these allegations however one may ask themselves "how did Haileybury win the football 2 years in a row, as well as other numerous sports without poaching players".Haileybury is a school that enriches boys lives through sport and extra curricular activites, however it is bizarre that Haileybury would take part in such a practise.It is a shame for someone who has attended the school all there life to be ignored and left out in the cold for some hot shots who come in for year 11 and year 12, getting paid to play school sport.What has become a favourite past time for Haileybury, is to offer scholarships to boy nearing the end of there secondary schooling in order to get an advantage over other APS schools