Original sentence: Catholics were denied the right to vote and sit in the Westminster Parliament for over 100 years after this.It is sometimes called the Bloodless Revolution, although to do this is Anglo-centric as it ignore the three major battles in Ireland and the fighting in Scotland.The expression "Glorious Revolution" was first used by John Hampden in the autumn of 1689, and is an expression that is still used by the Westminster Parliament
Edited sentence: Catholics were denied the right to vote and sit in the Westminster parliament for over 100 years after this.It is sometimes called the Bloodless Revolution, although to do this is to ignore the three major battles in Ireland and the fighting in Scotland.Many modern historians prefer the term "Revolution of 1688", as "Glorious" or "Bloodless" reflect the biases of whig historians.The expression "Glorious Revolution" was first used by John Hampden in the autumn of 1689