Original sentence: 22 July, 2005, a Brazilian immigrant living in the Tulse Hill area of south London named Jean Charles de Menezes was shot and killed at Stockwell tube station on the London Underground by unnamed Metropolitan Police officers.The policy under which British police use firearms has resulted in controversy
Edited sentence: 22 July, 2005, a Brazilian illegal immigrant living in the Tulse Hill area of south London named Jean Charles de Menezes was shot and killed at Stockwell tube station on the London Underground by unnamed Metropolitan Police officers.The policy under which British police use firearms has, on rare occasions, resulted in controversy for some sections of the British population