Original sentence: Augusta Longbottom is Neville Longbottom's paternal grandmother and is also a friend of Minerva McGonagall.Rose "Rosie" Weasley is Ron and Hermione's daughter and elder child.Whilst competing in the Triwizard Tournament, he takes to visiting the Hogwarts library in order to try to talk to Hermione
Edited sentence: Augusta Longbottom is Neville Longbottom's paternal grandmother.Rose Weasley is Ron and Hermione's daughter and elder child.Whilst competing in the Triwizard Tournament, he takes to visiting the Hogwarts library in order to try and talk to Hermione