Original sentence: Supernova's first album is to be released just before the new band hits the road in 2007
Edited sentence: Reviewers claim that the singer Lukas Rossi was holding back the other talented musicians.Supernova's first album was released and was a perpetual failure.The album sold only 50,000 copies, which led to Gilby Clark leaving the band.The future for Rockstar Supernova seems very slim