Original sentence: Following the successful operation by the Indian army, the Telugu speaking area was joined to Andhra Pradesh while the western portion was merged with Karnataka state.Main Articles: Political Integration of India, Partition of India.Operation Polo was the military operation of annexation of the independent Hyderabad state into India, by the Indian Army in September 1948
Edited sentence: Following the successful operation by the Indian army, the telugu speaking area was joined to Andhra Pradesh while the western portion was merged with Karnataka state.Operation Polo was the military operation of annexation of the independent Hyderabad state by the Indian army in 1948.There were wide spread atrocities committed by both Muslims and Hindus during this period.When Indian Army moved in, and Razakars lost their control, and were disarmed, Hindus retaliated.While Razakars were in control, they bullied, murdered, raped and commited arson against Hindus