Original sentence: In round 18, 2008 against the Western Bulldogs, he kicked a career-high 6 goals
Edited sentence: As of late McVeigh has proved to be the shining light that the Swans were looking for in the absence of Barry Hall, Michael O'Loughlin and Adam Goodes.He is known for being a hack.In round 18, 2008 against the Western Bulldogs, he kicked a career-high 6 goals, however the Bulldogs still managed to win by 16 points