Original sentence: While Millen viewed his move to New York City as an escape from his Pennsylvania Dutch heritage, he returned to the topic of the Pennsylvania Dutch late in life, writing the text to accompany George Tice's photographs for Fields of Peace: A Pennsylvania German Album, and Local Lives (1975), a book of poems about the Pennsylvania Dutch
Edited sentence: While Millen viewed his move to New York City as an effective escape from his Pennsylvania Dutch heritage, he returned to the topic of the Pennsylvania Dutch late in life, writing the text to accompany George Tice's photographs for Fields of Peace: A Pennsylvania German Album, and Local Lives (1975), a book of poems about the Pennsylvania Dutch