Original sentence: He had received the permission of Pope Urban VII before publishing, under the condition that the book portayed the church's theory on the cosmos as correct, yet he was allowed to mention Copernicus fleetingly.On July 9th 1737, Gian Gastone died, forever ending the once great House of Medici
Edited sentence: He had received the permission of Pope Urban VII before publishing, under the condition that the book portrayed the church's theory on the cosmos as correct, yet he was allowed to mention Copernicus fleetingly.On July 9 1737, Gian Gastone died, forever ending the once great House of Medici