Original sentence: On account of his devotion to the Church on two continents, his godly personality and services to young men some of his former pupils have suggested that the case for commencing the process by which Father Candon might ultimately be declared an Irish Saint be initiated
Edited sentence: On account of his devotion to the Church on two continents, in Europe at Newbridge College and in India as Rector of St Charles in Nagpur, his godly personality as shown by his devotion and saintly behaviour, his services to young men by serving them as teacher,Rugby coach and by his gentle discipline and as a consequence some of his former pupils have suggested that the case for commencing the process by which Father Candon might ultimately be declared an Irish Saint be initiated to prove the true value of Catholicism in Ireland which far too often has been ignored when consideration has been given to those who merit sainthood