Original sentence: At the time that the band began writing their next release, they were now a four piece, featuring Evan (Razz), Jess, Susan and Timothy.During the time that Lestat was promoting their first release, Timothy was in another band in Cleveland at the time called Nation of Teflon Souls, which he left to become Lestat's full time drummer.In 1991, Lestat released their second cassette LP entitled Grave Desires on Jevan Records.The release consisted of 8 original tracks.They began creating a sound heavier industrial elements brought by Timothy and darker lyrics
Edited sentence: As he grew to be closer friends with Lestat and its members, he soon split from his band to join Lestat and become their full time drummer.As their cult-like influence spread, Lestat began writing their third CD, while attempting to form Jevan Records into a contender in the Goth and Industrial label community.By the time that writing was in full swing for their next release, they were now a four piece, featuring Evan (Razz), Jess, Susan and Timothy.During the time that Lestat was promoting their first release, Timothy was in another band in Cleveland at the time called Nation of Teflon Souls.In 1991, Lestat released their second cassette LP (also now out of print) entitled Grave Desires.Lestat began to branch out from their hometown, playing in cities such as Chicago, Columbus and even the now deceased CBGB’s in New York City.Now however, Jevan Records was becoming a real business entity for Lestat.The release consisted of 8 original tracks, also appearing on Jevan Records.They began creating a far more insidious sound, with heavier industrial elements brought by Timothy and darker lyrics.They would go on to sign several local acts such as Fragment.and Bath