Original sentence: According to its editors, they were collecting papers for an upcoming issue dedicated to the science wars, and his was the only article submitted by a "real scientist".They claim that they had a number of concerns about the quality of the writing, and requested changes which Sokal refused.They further claim they decided to publish it anyway, considering Sokal to be an example of a "difficult, uncooperative author," noting these were "well known to journal editors"
Edited sentence: The editors had a number of concerns about the quality of the writing, and requested changes which Sokal refused.They decided to publish it anyway, considering Sokal to be an example of a "difficult, uncooperative author," noting these were "well known to journal editors".They were collecting papers for an upcoming issue dedicated to the science wars, and his was the only article submitted by a "real scientist"