Original sentence: After resigning a record deal with Columbia France, Arena recorded a new entirely French album, called Un Autre Univers (Another Universe).On November 17th 2005, Arena and partner Vincent Mancini became parents, with the birth of a son, Gabriel Joseph, in Paris.The album was co-written by Arena and an assortment of French and English writers and producers.The first single "Aimer jusqu´a l´impossible" (Love Till The Impossible) received airplay across French radio and debuted on the French national charts at #3
Edited sentence: After resigning a record deal with Columbia France, Tina recorded a new entirely French album, called Un Autre Univers (Another Universe).It has debuted on the french national charts at #3, a great acheivement for any artist and a prediction of how the soon-to-be-released album will be recieved.On November 17th 2005, Tina became mother for the first time with partner Vincent Mancini.The album was co-written by Tina and an assortment of French and English writers and producers.The first single "Aimer jusqu´a l´impossible" (Love Till The Impossible) has received airplay across French Radio and TV with Tina due to make live TV performances there over the coming months.Their first son, Gabriel Joseph, was born in a hospital in Paris, a happy and healthy 3.4kg