Original sentence: Coupled with this change, Motorola stressed on design and brand image.Motorola had a 22% market share in July 2006, but this declined in 2007 and 2008.Motorola tried to pay more attention to the user experience, and models such as the v300, v400 and v600 (called the triplets) were among the first to attempt an easy user interface.The areas of significant improvement were hardware design, marketing/promotion, and brand
Edited sentence: Coupled with this improvement, Motorola stressed on design and brand image.Motorola is a strong number two with a 22% market share as of July, 2006.Motorola started paying more attention to the user experience, and models such as the v300, v400 and v600 (called the triplets) were among the first to boast an easy user interface.Three areas of significant improvement were user friendliness, design and brand