Original sentence: Linguistic determinism proposes that language determines (or at least limits) the things that humans can think and say and thus know.Technological determinism is the theory that a society's technology drives the development of its social structure and cultural values
Edited sentence: Linguistic determinism claims that our language determines (at least limits) the things we can think and say and thus know.Technological determinism is a reductionist theory that presumes that a society's technology drives the development of its social structure and cultural values