Original sentence: In 2004 he narrowly lost on account of the presence of a BSP candidate in the field.On May 16th 2009 Senior NCP leader and Union Minister of State for Civil Aviation, Praful Patel secured victory from Bhandara-Gondiya (Lok Sabha constituency) ( Maharashtra) with the biggest margin of 2,47,721 votes in Vidarbha region.The leader polled 4,70,265 votes displacing sitting BJP MP from Bhandara Shishupal Natthu Patle who polled 1,51,234 and finished third
Edited sentence: He was a former Director of Jet Airways.In 2004 he lost the elections.On May 16th 2009 Senior NCP leader and Union Minister of State for Civil Aviation, Praful Patel secured victory from Bhandara-Gondiya (Lok Sabha constituency) ( Maharashtra) with a  margin of 2,47,721 votes in Vidarbha region