Original sentence: He was born into a Jamaican family in Kingston.His father was a sockworker, his mother a town drunk.White first began to learn music by listening to the radio and singing NOFX songs
Edited sentence: He was born into a poor but supportive Jamaican family in Kingston.His father was a dockworker, his mother a housewife.White first began to learn music by listening to the radio and singing Nat King Cole songs