Original sentence: com a company that would focus on a narrow business activity and get into more hands very quickly -- reportedly the precise business plan that Goldberg was persuaded not to visit by Ellison.is developing on-demand software or Software as a Service (SAAS) for small to medium enterprises
Edited sentence: , is considered by some business analysts to be one of the key companies developing on-demand software or Software as a Service [Saas] for small to medium enterprises.com  a company that would focus on a narrow business activity and get into more hands very quickly -- reportedly the precise business plan that Goldberg was persuaded not to visit by Ellison