Original sentence: Fox News advisor David Rhodes and the network's commentators Sean Hannity and Bill O'Reilly have also stated that MoveOn.MoveOn was criticized for running a print ad in The New York Times that questioned the personal integrity of General David Petraeus, saying "General Petraeus or General Betray Us.The House passed a similar resolution by a 341-79 vote on September 26.This stems from a 2004 e-mail composed by Eli Pariser, among others, stating that, in regards to the Democratic Party; "grassroots contributors like us ... bought it, we own it, and we're going to take it back.org "owns" the Democratic Party
Edited sentence: MoveOn was criticized by some right-wing war apologists for running a print ad in The New York Times that questioned the credibility of General David Petraeus, saying "General Petraeus or General Betray Us.The House passed a similar resolution by a 341-79 vote on September 26, resulting in many Democrats criticizing the courage of their Congressional leadership