Original sentence: In the previous weeks Preliminary Finals, Essendon defeated Cartlon, while Melbourne defeated North Melbourne.The following Monday saw Melbourne's Shane Woewodin awarded the Brownlow Medal with 24 votes, ahead of Western Bulldogs midfielder Scott West and Adelaide midfilder Andrew McLeod
Edited sentence: In the previous weeks Preliminary Finals, Essendon defeated Carlton, while Melbourne defeated North Melbourne.The following Monday saw Melbourne's Shane Woewodin awarded the Brownlow Medal with 24 votes, ahead of Western Bulldogs midfielder Scott West and Adelaide midfielder Andrew McLeod