Original sentence: Chrissa, a fourth grade girl, starts school on the day before Valentine's Day but her efforts to make new friends are stalled by the "Mean Bees", a clique of three girls led by a rich girl named Tara James (Adair Tishler), taunts Chrissa and convinces fellow Bee Sonali Matthews (Ariela Barer) to steal Chrissa's valentines (which Sonali later returns and gets punished for a week
Edited sentence: Chrissa, a fourth grade girl, starts school on the day before Valentine's Day but her efforts to make new friends are stalled by the "Mean Bees", a clique of three girls who rule the grade led by Tara James (Adair Tishler), taunts Chrissa and convinces fellow Bee Sonali Matthews (Ariela Barer) to steal Chrissa's valentines (which Sonali later returns and gets punished for a week