Original sentence: The official toll of excess deaths recorded in China for the years of the GLF is 14 million, but scholars have estimated the number of famine victims to be between 20 and 43 million
Edited sentence: The official toll of excess deaths recorded in China for the years of the GLF is 14 million.Western writers using demographic assumptions and other manipulations have estimated the number of famine victims to be between 20 and 43 million