Original sentence: Flutie has a 37-28 record as an NFL starter, including an 22-9 record in home games.Flutie's 1984 "Hail Mary" pass, and the subsequent rise in applications for admission to Boston College, gave rise to the admissions phenomenon known as the "Flutie Factor.Television football commentator John Madden once said, "Inch for inch, Flutie in his prime was the best QB of his generation
Edited sentence: Flutie has an impressive 37-28 record as an NFL starter, including an astounding 22-9 record in home games.Flutie's 1984 Hail Mary pass, and the subsequent rise in applications for admission to Boston College, gave rise to the admissions phenomenon known as the "Flutie Factor.John Madden once said "Inch for inch, Flutie in his prime was the best QB of his generation