Original sentence: Although it is not recognized as a government by any other nation, it has received a large amount of sympathy in the West largely through the leadership of the Dalai Lama.legitimate government of Tibet, which is currently considered to be under control of the People's Republic of China
Edited sentence: Although it is not recognized as a government by any other nation, it has received a large amount.legitimate government of Tibet, which is currently considered to be under Chinese occupation.of sympathy in the West largely through the leadership of the Dalai Lama