Original sentence: In particular, Richmond Hill High School ((the high school of Queer Canadian Youth Writer Jesse Stong (FAB MAGAZINE/Buddies in Bad Times Theater)) faced considerable opposition for the past four years with the excuses "Topics like this do not belong in our schools," or "We have a very conservative community," or even "It is not safe for students to identify themselves as gay
Edited sentence: In particular, Richmond Hill High School (the high school of Queer Canadian Youth Writer Jesse Stong (FAB MAGAZINE/Buddies in Bad Times Theater)) faced considerable opposition for the past four years with the excuses "Topics like this do not belong in our schools," or "We have a very conservative community," or even "It is not safe for students to identify themselves as gay