Original sentence: The competition benefited The Princess Project, a Bay Area charity that gives free prom dresses to high school students who can’t afford to buy them on their own.While promoting the book in the Bay Area in May 2007, Gunn joined the judging panel of Project FiveFour 07, to judge gowns designed by 12 students from San Francisco’s Fashion Institute of Design & Merchandising
Edited sentence: The competition benefited The Princess Project, a Bay Area charity that gives free prom dresses to high school students who can't afford to buy them on their own.While promoting the book in the San Francisco Bay Area in May 2007, Gunn joined the judging panel of Project FiveFour 07, to judge gowns designed by 12 students from San Francisco's Fashion Institute of Design & Merchandising