Original sentence: Pullman was born in Springfield,Illinois, the son of Avalon (née Blaas), a nurse, and James Pullman, a physician.When he was 40, he moved to New York City to pursue an acting career
Edited sentence: Pullman was born in New York City,New York, the son of Avalon (née Blaas), a nurse, and James Pullman, a physician.When he was 40, he moved to Hornell to pursue an acting career