Original sentence: A second album Jeff Beck Group (1972) was recorded at TMI studios in MemphisTenessee, using the same personnel and Beck employed Steve Cropper as  producer.During October 1973 Beck recorded tracks for Michael Fennelly's album Lane Changer and attended sessions with  Hummingbird, a band derived from The Jeff Beck Group, but did not to contribute to their eponymous first album
Edited sentence: A second album Jeff Beck Group (1972) was recorded at TMI studios in MemphisTenessee, using the same personnel and Beck employed Steve Cropper as producer.During October 1973 Beck recorded tracks for Michael Fennelly's album Lane Changer and attended sessions with Hummingbird, a band derived from The Jeff Beck Group, but did not to contribute to their eponymous first album