Original sentence: Born in a small town of Almora district, in present state of Uttarakhand, Pande completed his primary and secondary schooling there.Ghananand Pande (1 January 1902 – before 1995) was an Indian scientist.He not only served at key positions in the Government of India but also made significant contribution towards nurture and education of young talents.He then did completed B.He then moved to Allahabad where he passed his undergraduate examination from Allahabad University in first division of 1922.in Civil Engineering from Thomson College of Civil Engineering, Roorkee (now the IIT Roorkee) in 1925
Edited sentence: An excellent academician himself, he not only served at key positions in the Government of India but also made significant contribution towards nurture and education of young talents.Born in a small town of Almora district, in present state of Uttarakhand completed his primary and secondary schooling there.Ghananand Pande is an eminent Indian scientist known for his scientific acumen, and contribution to academic as well as administrative institutions throughout the country.He then did his B.He then moved to Allahabad where he passed his undergraduate examination from Allahabad University in first division in year 1922.in Civil Engineering from Thomson College of Civil Engineering, Roorkee (now the IIT Roorkee) in year 1925