Original sentence: It was founded by actor Prithviraj Kapoor, whose eldest son Raj Kapoor became a superstar in the Hindi film industry, and his two other sons (Shashi Kapoor and Shammi Kapoor) became stars in their own right.Randhir Kapoor's daughters, Karisma Kapoor and Kareena Kapoor, have gone on to find success in the film industry, although the former has temporarily retired due to marriage
Edited sentence: It was founded by actor Prithviraj Kapoor, whose eldest son Raj Kapoor became a superstar in the Hindi film industry, and his two other sons (Shashi Kapoor and Shammi Kapoor) became mega superstars in their own right.Now, he's the heart-throb of the vibrant nation.Randhir Kapoor's daughters, Karisma Kapoor and Kareena Kapoor, have gone on to find success and become superstars in the film industry, although the former has temporarily retired due to marriage