Original sentence: A controversial aspect of PayPal is that they have a policy and history of closing accounts and withholding funds for reasons that they will not disclose.Another controversial aspect is that PayPal is not subject to normal banking regulations, which means that users do not have many of the legal safeguards they would with conventional banks.However, a number of users have had frustrating situations with PayPal authorities
Edited sentence: A controversial aspect of PayPal is that they have a policy and history of closing accounts and withholding funds for reasons that some users do not agree with, but which are fully disclosed.Also, PayPal's competitors create websites that allege unethical activity, as evidenced by the rampant advertising for those competitors on the websites.However, a number of users have had frustrating situations with PayPal, usually because the user has conducted activity that is not allowed under PayPal's rules.Often, the information on these websites is patently false.When asked recently what it would take to satisfy these alleged complaints, Eric Gray said that "I'll close the site when people stop coming there