Original sentence: West Vancouver is home to many attractions, which includes Cypress Bowl Mountain, one of the venues for the 2010 Winter Olympics.West Vancouver is well known for its parks like Cypress Bowl Mountain Provincial Park, which offers scenic views of Howe Sound and the Greater Vancouver area.While Ambleside Park is also popular spot for cyclists, Whytecliff Park is regarded as one of the best SCUBA diving spots in Western Canada
Edited sentence: As well, West Vancouver has some of the best SCUBA diving in Western Canada in Whytecliff Park, a marine park.It is one of the venues for the 2010 Olympic Games.Recently a West Vancouver student took top honours at a Regional spelling bee.West Vancouver has many attractions, the most famous being Cypress Mountian, which offers world class skiing and snowboarding.West Vancouver has one of the best public education systems in British Columbia.West Vancouver is also famous for special programmes such as being the first in Canada to offer; Computer Immersion, Sentinel's Hockey Academy, Sentinel's Soccer Academy as well as numerous exchange possibilites.West Vancouver is also popular with cyclists, who are often seen roaming both on road and off road.West Vancouver is well known for its parks like Cypress Bowl Mountain provincial park, which offers scenic views of Howe Sound and the Greater Vancouver area