Original sentence: Sport plays a large part of community life; Gaelic games are very popular in Kilgarvan and both Hurling and Gaelic football are played; with Kilgarvan often fielding two or three teams in a season
Edited sentence: Despite the negatives Kilgarvan has a great community spirit and sport plays a large part of community life, Gaelic games are very popular in Kilgarvan and both Hurling and Gaelic football are played; with Kilgarvan often fielding two or three teams in a season