Original sentence: Days later bella ask is edward to have sex and then edward grants bellas wish as time goes by, Bella realizes that she is pregnant and that her condition is progressing at an unnaturally accelerated rate.The first part details  Bella's marriage and honeymoon with Edward, which they spend on a private island off the coast of Brazil which Carlisle gave to Esme as a present
Edited sentence: Days later, Bella realizes that she is pregnant and that her condition is progressing at an unnaturally accelerated rate.The first part details Bella's marriage and honeymoon with Edward, which they spend on a private island off the coast of Brazil which Carlisle gave to Esme as a present