Original sentence: Hermie and Oscy spend the entirety of the movie (Now, Voyager - an anachronism, as that film wasn't released until October of 1942) attempting to "score" with Miriam and Aggie, Oscy aggressively pursuing Miriam to the point that she strikes him, although Oscy soon learns that she is the island "hussy" and simply playing hard to get.Nothing from the first day I saw her and no one that has happened to me since, has ever been as frightning and and as confusing, for no person I've ever known has ever done more to make me feel more sure, more insecure, more important and less significant
Edited sentence: Hermie and Oscy spend the entirety of the movie (Now, Voyager - an anachronism, as that film wasn't released until October 1942) attempting to "score" with Miriam and Aggie, Oscy aggressively pursuing Miriam to the point that she strikes him, although Oscy soon learns that she is the island "hussy" and simply playing hard to get.Nothing from the first day I saw her and no one that has happened to me since, has ever been as frightning and as confusing, for no person I've ever known has ever done more to make me feel more sure, more insecure, more important and less significant