Original sentence: Her second husband, Ted Dushinski, Hall of Fame football player for the CFL (Canadian Football League) Saskatchewan Roughriders, died on October 24th, 2005 at the age of 61, following a battle with lung cancer
Edited sentence: Her second husband, Ted Dushinski, Hall of Fame football player for the CFL (Canadian Football League) Saskatchewan Roughriders, passed away on October 24th, 2005 at the age of 61, following a battle with lung cancer