Original sentence: It is now available in VHS and DVD and is in the public domain and the score, script, and narration by Leonard Graves retain their appeal.Some gimlet eyed critics have found fault with the film editing such as a scene of 1943-45 ships and aircraft in a 1941-42 segment
Edited sentence: As an example, 1943-45 ships and aircraft in 1941-42 segments.Though the score, script, and narration by Leonard Graves retain their appeal, some of the film editing is criticized by knowledgeable viewers for anachronistic sequences.Victory at Sea is now available in VHS and DVD and is in the public domain