Original sentence: He then worked as a pundit for the BBC at the 2006 FIFA World Cup, and also worked for Sky Sports and ESPN before returning to management with Thailand in 2008.He was appointed manager of Coventry City in 2004 but his tenure lasted less than a year
Edited sentence: He then worked as a full-time pundit for the BBC at the 2006 FIFA World Cup, and also worked for Sky Sports and ESPN before returning to management with Thailand in 2008.He was appointed manager of Coventry City in 2004 but his tenure lasted less than a year; some said he was doomed from the start when he was laughing about the step down he'd made during his TV work during the European Cup.It was thought by many fans that he should have been concentrating on his new club and not sharing his time as a pundit