Original sentence: The butterfly is found in the Himalayas in Afghanistan, and the Himalayas from Shingarh, Zhob, Safed Koh, Kurram, Gilgit, Chitral, Kashmir, Kumaon, Bhutan, Sikkim and Chumbi valley eastwards across to Abor valley and southeast Tibet
Edited sentence: The butterfly is found in the Himalayas  from Shingarh, Zhob, Safed Koh, Kurram, Gilgit, Chitral, Kashmir, Kumaon, Bhutan, Sikkim and Chumbi valley eastwards across to Abor valley and southeast Tibet