Original sentence: It has been welcomed by both the Palestinian Authority and the left-wing in Israel, as well as by many abroad, including the United States and the European Union, as a step towards a final peace settlement.While some believe that his recent efforts have been damaging to the peace process, he has embarked an a risky course of unilateral withdrawal from the Gaza Strip, while maintaining control of its borders and airspace
Edited sentence: If it is completed, heaven forbid, it will be the largest mass expulsion of Jews since the Holocaust.While some believe that his recent efforts have been damaging to the peace process, he has embarked on the totalitarian course expelling Jewish citizens from their home in the Gaza Strip as a reward to Palestinian terrorists