Original sentence: " features several hooks, from the call and response ending of each verse with the counterpoint of the backing vocals to the repetitive structure in the chorus sung in falsetto.An example of the melodic type discussed above is the theme from Mozart's Piano Concerto No.Cream's "Sunshine of Your Love" contains a hook whose popularity arises from its simplicity.Slash's (guitarist from Guns N' Roses) guitar intro to Sweet Child O' Mine is an example of a guitar hook.The Four Seasons song "Let's Hang On.The drum fill on Blue Monday by New Order is another example of a rhythmic hook
Edited sentence: A good example of the melodic type discussed above is the theme from Mozart's Piano Concerto No.Cream's "Sunshine of Your Love" contains a hook whose genius lies in its simplicity.Slash's (guitarist from Guns N' Roses) guitar intro to Sweet Child O' Mine is a good example of a guitar hook.The drum fill on Blue Monday by New Order is a good example of rhythmic hook