Original sentence: After receiving the greenlight from Warner Bros.He dropped the character to avoid the perception that his show was imitating Deep Space Nine.He pitched the series to Paramount (owners of the Star Trek franchise), but it was rejected.Michael Straczynski recently released his original pilot script for Babylon 5, which included a shape-shifting security officer.to produce the Babylon 5 pilot, Straczynski learned that Paramount was developing a new Star Trek series involving a space station and a shape-shifting security officer
Edited sentence: 's pilot script there was a Changeling security officer.He removed the character after hearing of this, having finally gotten the greenlight to make the Babylon 5 pilot, so his show didn't seem like a rip off.Michael Straczynski, creator of Babylon 5, recently released his original pilot script for his show.One of which was at the time he was trying to get the show running he handed the script over to Paramount (owners of the Star Trek franchise) to see if they would produce it.Originally in J.Several months afterwards Straczynski found it odd when he heard they were making a new Star Trek series involving a space station and a changeling.Severe changes were made and under dubious reasons.Their response was no way