Original sentence: Paul to New York's JFK Airport, Dallas/Fort Worth, Denver, and Seattle-Tacoma and a few other U.Sun Country operates a modern fleet of Boeing 737-800 aircraft, with leather seats in all classes and complimentary sandwiches served on every flight.Sun Country uses nearby Minneapolis-Saint Paul International Airport as its main hub, and flies regularly-scheduled and charter flights from the recently remodeled Humphrey terminal of that airport to destinations in the United States, Mexico, and the Caribbean
Edited sentence: Paul to New York's JFK Airport, Dallas/Fort Worth, Denver, and Seattle-Tacoma in addition to many other major cities.Sun Country operates a modern fleet of quiet and efficient Boeing 737-800 aircraft, with leather seats in all classes and complimentary sandwiches served on every flight.Sun Country uses nearby Minneapolis-Saint Paul International Airport as its main hub, and flies regularly-scheduled and charter flights from the recently completed Humphrey terminal of that airport to destinations in the United States, Mexico, and the Caribbean