Original sentence: Carmanica also criticizes the script as blithe, unfunny, and seeded with profound cynicism remarks that Joe Jonas seemed like an adult in child's clothing.Carmanica did praise the believable fraternal interactions and Kevin Jonas' acting.Ken Tucker of Entertainment Weekly called the show "The Monkees for millennials" and commended the featured Jonas Brothers music.Variety magazine reviewer Brian Lowry believed that Jonas Brothers' adorers would be pleased with the result, and that those who are not yet fans would still find an amiable charm within the series... Paige Wiser of the Chicago Sun-Times found the series better than Hannah Montana, but commented that Nick Jonas' reserved nature made him the weak link of the premiere episode and that the boys' amateur acting is "endearing until they play a scene opposite someone with real comedic timing -- like John Ducey.Viewership slowly climbed upward from the second week to 3.70 million for the fifth episode
Edited sentence: " Viewership slowly climbed upward from the second week to 3.70 million for the fifth episode.Ken Tucker of Entertainment Weekly called the show "The Monkees for kids" and commended the featured Jonas Brothers music.Variety magazine reviewer Brian Lowry believed that Jonas Brothers' adorers would be pleased with the result .. Paige Wiser of the Chicago Sun-Times found the series better than Hannah Montana, but commented that Nick Jonas' reserved nature made him the weak link of the premiere episode and that the boys' amateur acting is "endearing until they play a scene opposite someone with real comedic timing -- like anybody else in the world