Original sentence: As Llorenna was travelling from Oldham to Kevin O'Toole's house, fifteen minutes away in Shaw and Crompton, to meet with the rest of the group, Lewis, Longworth and O'Toole had quickly wrote the song "Set You Free", to provide her with a track to sing.Following the interest from [record labels, the band and their manager decided a new band name was needed.Mike Lewis had gone to Oldham College in search of a singer and after some recommendations, he found sixteen year old Kelly Llorenna, with friends in the common room of the college.Unfortunately, problems with the sample clearance prevented "Back To The Bass" from ever being released as a single
Edited sentence: As Llorenna was travelling from Oldham to Kevin O'Toole's house, fifteen minutes away in Shaw and Crompton, to meet with the rest of the group, Lewis, Longworth and O'Toole had quickly written the song "Set You Free", to provide her with a track to sing.Following the interest from record labels, the band and their manager decided a new band name was needed.However, problems with the sample clearance prevented "Back To The Bass" from ever being released as a single.Mike Lewis went to Oldham College in search of a singer and after some recommendations, he found sixteen year old Kelly Llorenna, with friends in the common room of the college