Original sentence: It follows the lives of Ally Hilfiger and her best buddy, Jaime Gleicher.The show also shows episodes of the duo travelling to Ally's Nantucket home and her tropical estate.They are portrayed on camera shopping and gossipping
Edited sentence: It follows the lives of Ally Hilfiger and her best buddy, Jaime Gleicher, as they putzed around the city.Showing no regard for the standards of decency, they are portrayed on camera as ditzy rich snobs whose sole purpose in life is to shop and gossip.This sitcom also shows enlightening episodes of the dynamic duo travelling to Ally's Nantucket home and her tropical estate