Original sentence: " Two local public officials, including Madison Mayor Dave Cieslewicz, expressed concern that Walker's comments could be considered ethics violations.During the 20 minute call, Walker discussed a method of getting the absent Senators to return, and that he spoke daily with like-minded Ohio Governor John Kasich.On February 23, 2011, Buffalo Beast editor Ian Murphy placed a prank telephone call to Walker claiming to be billionaire David Koch, a proponent to drive civil service unions out of government and one of Walker's largest corporate supporters
Edited sentence: " Several local public officials, including Madison Mayor Dave Cieslewicz,  expressed concern that Walker's comments could be considered ethics violations.During the 20 minute call, Walker discussed a method of tricking the absent Senators into returning, and that he spoke daily with like-minded Ohio Governor John Kasich.On February 23, 2011, Buffalo Beast editor Ian Murphy placed a prank telephone call to Walker claiming to be billionaire David Koch, a union opponent and one of Walker's largest corporate supporters