Original sentence: Despite growing up in Chicago, Butkus wasn't much of a Bears fan at the time, preferring to go to some Chicago Cardinals games at Comiskey Park and enjoyed watching Thanksgiving games between the Detroit Lions and Green Bay Packers
Edited sentence: Despite growing up in the great city of Chicago, Butkus wasn't much of a Bears fan at the time, preferring to go to some Chicago Cardinals games at Comiskey Park and enjoyed watching Thanksgiving games between the Detroit Lions and Green Bay Packers