Original sentence: Starting in September 2007, KGV will be replacing the traditionally British A Level with the International Baccalaureate, offering the Diploma Programme.The class of 2009 is the first year to do the IBD
Edited sentence: Starting from September 2007, KGV replaced the existing British A Level Program with theInternational Baccalaureate, offering the Diploma Programme.The class of 2009 was the first year to do the IBD, and results were outstanding; one student recevied 45 while another two received 44 out of the maximum 45