Original sentence: 28.3 km² (10.9 mi²) of it is land and 1.5 km² (0.6 mi²) of it (4.89%) is water.In 1956, Clinton gained national attention when segregationists opposed the desegregation of Clinton High School
Edited sentence: 28.3 km² (10.9 mi²) of it is land and 1.5 km² (0.6 mi²) of it (4.89%) is water, approximately 1% will soon be rock quarry, asphalt plant and cement plant.In 1956, Clinton gained national attention when segregationists there opposed the desegregation of Clinton High School