Original sentence: "  In the 1988 Ottawa election she faced a strong challenge from Alex Cullen but won reelection with a solid majority.A small controversy developed when she reversed her earlier position and backed the official recognition of Gay Pride Day.Her first term as mayor was relatively uneventful.Her second term was also mostly uneventful.One major debate was over the mayor's desire to add an expensive unity tower to the new city hall.She also worked hard for the yes side in the Charlottetown Accord referendum.She later was criticized for supporting cuts to AIDS benefits as "people who have AIDS are going to die anyway.She was accused of arrogance for planning an expedition to China under the assumption she would win reelection.She was expected to face a difficult election against city councillor Jim Watson.The tower was eventually left unfinished, as it remains today
Edited sentence: Her first term as mayor of the city was filled with new beginnings for the city.Holzman also worked hard for the yes side in the Charlottetown Accord referendum.In the 1988 Ottawa election she faced a strong challenge from Alex Cullen but won reelection with a solid majority.She is a firm believer that every citizen must give back to the community and it is with these words that she has guided much of her life.The Ottawa Senators and Ottawa Lynx both began their respected franchises in the city and the city went through a period of economic growth.To this day, Holzman continues to be a dedicated citizen and volunteer