Original sentence: " Even though she and Harry had stopped trying for another baby, Charlotte finds out she is pregnant, much to her joy.On vacation, whilst in the shower, Charlotte accidentally swallows some water and then not long after "craps herself
Edited sentence: Even though she and Harry had stopped trying for another baby after they had adopted Lily, Charlotte finds out she is pregnant, much to her joy.On vacation, whilst in the shower, Charlotte accidentally swallows some water and then not long after, accidentally gets diarrhea