Original sentence: BBC News has often been accused of 'systematic anti-Israel bias'.Firstly, because the time-period over which it conducted (August 2005 to January 2006) surrounded the Israeli withdrawl from Gaza and Ariel Sharon's stroke, he believed the Israeli side should naturally get more positive coverage.Martin Walker of United Press International was sceptical of the independent inquiry in an opinion piece published in The Times.The commission's report suggested that the BBC's news reporting was not sufficiently covering the suffering of Palestinian civilians, and was too focused on the Israeli perspective of events
Edited sentence: Firstly, because the time-period over which it conducted (August 2005 to January 2006) surrounded the Israeli withdrawl from Gaza and Ariel Sharon's stroke, he believed the Israeli side should natuarally get more positive coverage.For decades, those sypathetic to Israel have accused BBC's news coverage of 'systematic anti-Israel bias'.Martin Walker of United Press International was skeptical of the independent inquiry in an opinion piece published in The Times.The commission's report suggested that the BBC's news reporting was not sufficiently covering the suffering of Palestinian civilians, and was too focussed on the Israeli perspective of events