Original sentence: Known for yearly participation in the National History Day competition, an annual United Service Organizations (USO) show,   and its ArtSplash festival,   RBV boasts award-winning programs in theater, graphic design/digital arts, speech and debate, and a 6A class marching band (currently directed by Eric Weirather and Mark Wadleigh).Many students participate in a large internship programme, AVID (Advancement Via Individual Determination), the Regional Occupational Program (ROP), IB Diploma and Certificate Programmes and Advanced Placement (AP) classes
Edited sentence: Known for yearly participation in the National History Day competition, an annual United Service Organizations (USO) show,   and its ArtSplash festival,   RBV boasts award-winning programs in theater, graphic design/digital arts, speech and debate, and a 6A class marching band (currently directed by Eric Weirather and Mark Wadleigh) The Marching Band is one of Rancho Buena Vista's greatest programs.The Marching Band has won countless awards and performed all around the world.These dedicated students dedicate over 250 hours in a 5 period.. Many students participate in a large internship programme, AVID (Advancement Via Individual Determination), the Regional Occupational Program (ROP), IB Diploma and Certificate Programmes and Advanced Placement (AP) classes