Original sentence: Hermann Duckek, who had his birthday shortly before the opening of the Sydney 2000 Olympic Games September 15th 2000, was happily surprised when his wife gave him his birthday present, a tree in Aachen including a plate inscribed with his name.Members of the International Dressage Trainer Club in 2001, the year its President and Co-Founder, Hermann Duckek, passed away
Edited sentence: Hermann Duckek, who had his birthday shortly before the opening of the Sydney 2000 Olympic Games September 15 2000, was happily surprised when his wife gave him his birthday present, a tree in Aachen including a plate inscribed with his name.Members of the International Dressage Trainer Club in 2001, the year its President and Co-Founder, Hermann Duckek, died