Original sentence: Kelly Rowland (born Kelendria Trene Rowland on February 11, 1981) is an American R&B singer, songwriter, dancer, and occasional actress, who rose to fame as one of the founding members of the successful R&B girl group Destiny's Child, the world's best-selling female groups of all time selling over 50 million records worldwide and having 4 Billboard Hot 100 number 1 singles.The album became a commercial success, eventually selling more than 2 million copies woldwide
Edited sentence: Kelly Rowland (born Kelendria Trene Rowland on February 11, 1981) is a Grammy Award-winning American R&B singer, songwriter, dancer, and occasional actress, who rose to fame as one of the founding members of the successful R&B girl group Destiny's Child, the world's best-selling female groups of all time selling over 50 million records worldwide and having 4 Billboard Hot 100 number 1 singles.The album became a commercial success, eventually selling more than 2 million copies woldwide,