Original sentence: Slowly, however, Brooke starts getting along with Peyton after Lucas hurts her by hooking up with Nicki (Emmanuelle Vaugier), a mysterious woman who would turn out to be the mother of Jake Jagielski's (Bryan Greenberg) daughter, Jenny
Edited sentence: Slowly, however, Brooke starts getting along with Peyton after Lucas hurts her by hooking up with Nikki (Emmanuelle Vaugier), a mysterious beauty who would turn out to be the mother of Jake Jagielski's (Bryan Greenberg) daughter, Jenny