Original sentence: For Israel, which holds these territories, they are not considered "Palestinian" but rather "disputed territories", until a permanent settlement is acheived.The Palestinian people seek to found an independent Palestinian state in these non-sovereign areas.This term is seen by supporters of Israel as connoting much more than a definition, but a host of related propositions that amount to a preventive political argument about the disposition and status of the land:
Edited sentence: As for Israel, which holds these territories, they are not considered as "Palestinian", but rather as "questioned territories", until a permanent settlement is acheived.The Palestinian people seek to found an independent Palestinian state in these areas, currently gouverned by Israel.This term is seen by Israel and by supporters of Israel as connoting much more than a definition, but a host of related propositions that amount to a preventive political argument about the disposition and status of the land: