Original sentence: Collegiate is the oldest school in the United States, founded in 1628 by the Reformed Protestant Dutch Church as a school for the children of Dutch colonists.It is also considered one of the finest preparatory school in the United States
Edited sentence: Collegiate is not, as many like to theorize, the oldest school in the United States, founded in 1628 by the Reformed Protestant Dutch Church as a school for the children of Dutch colonists.It is considered mediocre at best as a preparatory school in the United States