Original sentence: O'Hagan was married to Kaye Tully, had three children (Catharine, Susan and Michael) and two grandchildren (Clare and Molly) when he died at the age of 65 in Brooklyn, New York on January 2, 1991
Edited sentence: O'Hagan was married to Kaye Tully, had three children (Catharine, Susan and Michael) and two grandchildren (Clare and Molly) when he passed away at the age of 65 in Brooklyn, New York on January 2, 1991