Original sentence: Four years after the first battle of Narva, Tsar Peter I marched again in an attempt to capture Narva.General Horn, several officers and a large number of Swedish soldiers were captured, with about 3,200 casualties while the Russians lost up to 3,000 men during the siege and the battle.Sheremetev then besieged Narva, where the garrison was under the Commandant Major-General Henning Rudolf Horn af Ranzien and consisted of 3,800 infantry and 1,300 cavalry.The Russians captured Narva on August 20, 1704, and massacred some of its Swedish inhabitants before Peter I stopped them
Edited sentence: Four years after the first battle of Narva, Tsar Peter marched again in an attempt to capture Narva.General Horn, several officers and a large number of Swedish soldiers were captured, with about 3,200 casualties while the Russians lost over 10,000 men during the siege and the battle.Sheremetev then besieged Narva, where the garrison of Narva was under the Commandant Major-General Henning Rudolf Horn af Ranzien and consisted of 3,800 infantry and 1,300 cavalry.The Russians took Narva on 20 August 1704 and begin to massacre the population before Peter stops them