Original sentence: Crime rate is very low.Parrish Acres- Parrish Acres is a desired neighborhood contains many nicer homes in Carbondale, being home to many middle to upper middle class residents.There are many uncommon kinds of homes in this neighborhood including Dutch Revival, Italianate, Greek Revival, and Tutor
Edited sentence: Parrish Acres- Parrish Acres, developed in the late 1970s, is a desired neighborhood contains many nicer homes in Carbondale, being home to many middle to upper middle class residents.The New Life Center operated by the Park district, has an indoor swimming pool, large soccer fields, and other recreational facilities, is in this neighborhood