Original sentence: During the course of its existence, KOHAR has become an important cornerstone in the unique musical rendition of Armenian musical favorites for the Armenian Diaspora, with the aim of reviving and promulgating the Armenian alphabet and culture, and bringing its share to preserving Armenian heritage for future generations at home and abroad
Edited sentence: Aiming at reviving and promulgating the Armenian alphabet and culture, and bringing its share to preserving Armenian heritage for future generations at home and abroad.During the course of its existence, KOHAR has become an important cornerstone, with its unique musical renditions of Armenia's favorite songs, for the Armenian Diaspora.KOHAR has continued to spread its message when touring the middle-east, commencing with the Syrian Arab Republic, and a first appearance on July 9th 2009, at The Opera Theater of Damascus, followed by successful performances on the 15th, 16th and 17th July 2009, inside the ancient fortress of the renowned world-heritage site of the Citadel of Aleppo