Original sentence: On June 24, 2021, a woman posted a video to Instagram in which she had confronted staff at Wi Spa, a Korean spa in Los Angeles, about the presence of a nude individual with a penis, most commonly believed to be a trans woman, in the women's changing area of the spa.The video went viral, attracting significant attention from trans-excluding feminists ( gender-critical feminists or TERFs) online and right-wing media, which led to protests and counter-protests on July 3 and 17 over the alleged access
Edited sentence: On June 24, 2021, a woman posted a video to Instagram in which she had confronted staff at Wi Spa, a Korean spa in Los Angeles, about the ostensible presence of a nude individual with a penis, most commonly believed to be a trans woman, in the women's changing area of the spa.The video went viral, attracting significant attention people concerned about preserving single-sex spaces online and right-wing media, which led to protests and counter-protests on July 3 and 17 over the alleged access