Original sentence: Thriller (Cebu, Philippines Inmates' Video) caught global attention due to the originality of the prisoners' dance exercises produced by Filipino Bryon Garcia right at the thick stone walls surrounded by electric wires of the Cebu Provincial Detention and Rehabilitation Center, south of Manila
Edited sentence: Thriller (Cebu, Philippines Inmates' Video), one of YouTube's hottest video hit, caught global attention dued to the originality of the prisoners' dance exercises produced by Filipino Bryon Garcia right at the thick stone walls surrounded by electric wires of the Cebu Provincial Detention and Rehabilitation Center, south of Manila