Original sentence: " MacArthur fought in three major wars (World War I, World War II, Korean War) and was one of only five men ever to rise to the rank of General of the Army.Douglas MacArthur (January 26 1880 - April 5 1964), was an American Field Marshal and general who played a prominent role in the Pacific theater of World War II.He is credited with this military dictum: "in war, there is no substitute for victory
Edited sentence: Douglas MacArthur (January 26 1880 - April 5 1964), was an American Field Marshal (only in the Philippines) and general who played a prominent role in the Pacific theater of World War II.He is credited with this military dictum: "in war, there is no substitute for victory".He was also a noted egotist, and this ultimately helped lead to his dismissal.MacArthur fought in three major wars (World War I, World War II, Korean War) and was one of only five men ever to rise to the rank of General of the Army