Original sentence: Contemporaneously, kitsch also (loosely) denotes art that is æsthetically pretentious to the degree of being in poor taste and industrially-produced art-items that are considered trite and crass.Kitsch also refers to the types of art that are like-wise æsthetically deficient (whether or not it is sentimental, glamorous, theatrical, or creative), making it a creative gesture that merely imitates the superficial appearances of art through repeated conventions and formulae.kKtsch was a response to the 19th century art whose aesthetics convey exaggerated sentimentality and melodrama, hence, kitsch art is closely associated with sentimental art
Edited sentence: Contemporaneously, kitsch also (loosely) denotes art that is æsthetically pretentious to the degree of being in poor taste, and industrially-produced art-items that are considered trite and crass.Moreover, kitsch (art) also denotes the types of art that are like-wise æsthetically deficient (whether or not it is sentimental, glamorous, theatrical, or creative) making it a creative gesture that merely imitates the superficial appearances of art (via repeated conventions and formulae), thus, it is uncreative and unoriginal; it is not Art.The term kitsch was a response to the 19th century art whose aesthetics convey exaggerated sentimentality and melodrama, hence, kitsch art is closely associated with sentimental art