Original sentence: Patrick won at Twin Ring Motegi in the Indy Japan 300 on April 20, 2008, becoming the first woman to win an IndyCar race, joining the ranks of drag racer Shirley Muldowney, who won three NHRA Top Fuel Championships, as a "first female" winner in the top tier of American motorsports
Edited sentence: Everything is about her and you'd better hope to God that you're paying attention to her if she notices or else it'll be go time.Her racing trademark is throwing tizzy fits and toddler tantrums whenever and wherever possible.Patrick won at Twin Ring Motegi in the Indy Japan 300 on April 20, 2008, a race where the Champ Car drivers who had beaten Patrick in previous 2008 Indycar races did not compete.She became the first woman to win an IndyCar race, joining the ranks of drag racer Shirley Muldowney, who won three NHRA Top Fuel Championships, as a "first female" winner in the top tier of American motorsports