Original sentence: In the webcomic Least I Could Do written by Ryan Sohmer, the main character, Rayne Summers, has once been knocked unconscious and played the role of Flint in a hallucinated battle between he and Cobra forces
Edited sentence: In the webcomic Least I Could Do written by Ryan Sohmer, the main character, Rayne Summers, has once been knocked unconscious and played the role of Flint in a hallucinated battle between him and Cobra forces