Original sentence: After the Partition of India in 1947, Breem returned to England and held a variety of jobs which included labourer in a tannery, assistant to a veterinary surgeon, and rent-collector in the East End of London.Breem was a founder member of ([ BIALL (British and Irish Association of Law Librarians), and at various times held the offices of Secretary, Treasurer, Chairman, Vice-President, and President in that organization.Wallace Breem (1926–1990) was a British librarian and author, the Librarian and Keeper of Manuscripts.of the Inner Temple Law Library at his death, but perhaps more widely known for his historical novels, including the classic Eagle in the Snow (1970)
Edited sentence: A military adventure, set in North-West India (now Pakistan) in 1919.A political intrigue, set in Rome and North Africa in 24/23BCE.After Partition in 1947, Breem returned to England and held a variety of jobs which included labourer in a tannery, assistant to a veterinary surgeon, and rent-collector in the East End of London.Breem was a founder member of the British and Irish Association of Law Librarians (BIALL), and at various times held the offices of Secretary, Treasurer, Chairman, Vice-President, and President in that organization.It is set on Hadrian’s Wall and around Mainz (Moguntiacum), and dramatizes the events leading up to the Germanic crossing of the frozen Rhine at the end of 406CE.The main character, Maximus, together with Quintus and many other details from the book, probably  inspired the opening sequence of the film  Gladiator, which won five Academy Awards in 2001.This classic has been described as the most powerful work of English historical fiction.Wallace Breem (1926–1990) was a British librarian and author, the Librarian and Keeper of Manuscripts of the Inner Temple Law Library at his death, but perhaps more widely known for his historical novels, including the classic Eagle in the Snow (1970)