Original sentence: Sattar Khan (; , ) (1868—November 9, 1914, ), honorarily titled Sardār-e Melli (Persian: سردار ملی meaning National Commander), born in Tabriz (Janali village), located in Iranian Azerbaijan, was a key figure in the Iranian Constitutional Revolution and one of the greatest heroes of Persia (Iran)
Edited sentence: Sattar Khan (, ,) (1868—November 9, 1914, ), honorarily titled Sardār-e Melli (Persian: سردار ملی meaning National Commander), born in Tabriz (Janali village), located in Iranian Azerbaijan, was a key figure in the Iranian Constitutional Revolution and one of the greatest heroes of Persia (Iran)