Original sentence: Falcon Northwest also offers a small form factor (SFF) PC called the FragBox, a miniature system intended for LAN parties.Falcon Northwest's magazine advertisements over the years have usually consisted of game art and its characters surrounding one of their systems.In 2000, the company added the Talon line, at a lower price than the Mach V line.Later, the company brought out the Fragbook line of laptops.The Mach models were built with components that Falcon Northwest believed to offer the highest performance in PC games.Their earliest ads played off the company's Falcon name and related it with the F-16 Fighting Falcon fighter plane, perhaps relating to the  Falcon series of simulations
Edited sentence: A detail of note is the attention to detail the machines receive during assembly.Each macine is hand-built and tested rigorously, and the workmanship of the interior assembly is impressive right down to the organization of the wires and cables.Falcon Northwest also offers a small form factor (SFF) PC called the FragBox, a miniature system with no-holds-barred gaming componentry designed with mobility in mind for LAN parties.Falcon Northwest's magazine advertisements over the years have usually consisted of a much-anticipated game's art and its characters surrounding one of their systems.Falcon stands by their machines with an impressive warranty and service guarantee.Financial reports are unavailable and credit rating is unknown.If anything breaks in a Mach V machine, and their 24/7 phone support can't fix it, they will overnight ship the machine from the user to them and back again, for free.In 2000, the company added the Talon value line to address their image of being luxury-only.Later, to compete in the gaming notebook category, the company brought out the Fragbook line.Talon was still a formidable machine, but it was priced substantially lower than the Mach V line.The Mach models were built with only the top-of-the-line components that Falcon Northwest believed to offer the highest performance in PC games.The company's computers are known for their top-quality construction, quality components, and excellent service guarantee.Their earliest ads played off the company's Falcon name and related it with the F-16 Fighting Falcon fighter plane, perhaps relating to the genre-defining Falcon series of simulations