Original sentence: He began his pro career with Detroit then was traded to Minnesota and then Buffalo.He played in 392 WHA games, scoring 218 goals and adding 204 assists.He scored 28 goals and added 29 assists.He was selected to the First Team WHA All Star Team for the 1972-73 season.His best season was his last 1967-68 when he scored 52 goals and led the team in points.In his NHL career, Lawson appeared in 219 games.Next season he acted as trainer with SV Bayreuth.While having had a five-year career in the NHL under his belt it was not until Danny Lawson moved to the WHA that his scoring abilities were fully realized
Edited sentence: His best season was his last, 1967-68, when he scored 52 goals and led the team in points.In the NHL, Lawson appeared in 219 games, scoring 28 goals and 29 assists.In the WHA he played in 392 games, scoring 218 goals and adding 204 assists.Lawson began his pro career with the NHL Detroit Red Wings where he spent two seasons before being traded to Minnesota and then Buffalo.Lawson capped that season by being selected to the WHA All Star Team's First Team.Next season he acted as trainer/coach with SV Bayreuth.While having had a five-year career in the NHL under his belt it was not until Danny Lawson jumped to the upstart WHA in 1971 that his scoring abilities were fully realized