Original sentence: " Peter Bradshaw of the Guardian was also critical, stating "Renée Zellweger's rabbity, dimply pout - surely the strangest facial expression in Hollywood - simpers and twitches out of the screen in this moderate girly flick that adheres with almost religious fanaticism to the feelgood romcom handbook.Allan Hunter of the Daily Express has said, "Predictable and uninspired, it is one more example of the dumb comedies that Hollywood is churning out at an alarming rate
Edited sentence: Its predictable plot, horrible acting, and offensively stereotypical portrayal of Minnesota come together in a virtual symphony of disaster