Original sentence: In 2008, Stern was named one of Venus magazine's "Greatest Female Guitarists Of All Time", Spring 2008 issue  and was nominated "Female Artist Of The Year" and "Punk Album Of The Year" for the 2008 Plug Music Awards.It was well received by critics, and most favorably The New York Times, citing it as "The year’s most exciting rock ’n’ roll album
Edited sentence: In 2008, Stern was named one of Venus magazine's "Greatest Female Guitarists Of All Time", Spring 2008 issue and was nominated "Female Artist Of The Year" and "Punk Album Of The Year" for the 2008 Plug Music Awards.It was well received by critics, and most favorably The New York Times, citing it as "The year's most exciting rock 'n' roll album