Original sentence: He was appointed Comapnion of the Order of the Bath in 1982, and was on the verge of retirement when the Commandant General Royal Marines, Lieutenant-General Sir Steuart Pringle, was badly injured by a bomb planted by the IRA.He was promoted to Knight COmmander of the Order of the Bath in 1982 after his command in the Falklands, and left the Marines in 1983
Edited sentence: He was appointed Companion of the Order of the Bath in 1982, and was on the verge of retirement when the Commandant General Royal Marines, Lieutenant-General Sir Steuart Pringle, was badly injured by a bomb planted by the IRA.He was promoted to Knight Commander of the Order of the Bath in 1982 after his command in the Falklands, and left the Marines in 1983