Original sentence: The roots of this violence lie in India's history, stemming from lingering resentment toward the Islamic domination of India during the Middle Ages, policies established by the country's British colonizers, the violent partition of India into a Muslim Pakistan, and India with a large but minority Muslim population
Edited sentence: The roots of this violence lie in India's history, stemming from lingering resentment toward the Muslim conquest in the Indian subcontinent and atrocities by muslim invaders in India during the Middle Ages, policies established by the country's British colonizers, the violent partition of India into a Muslim Pakistan, and India with a large but minority Muslim population