Original sentence: After taking some time off from her modeling and acting career, Shoshan is back to work.She is now married and is a mother to 2 girls.She stays busy by attending many sci-fi conventions around the world
Edited sentence: After taking some time off from her modeling and acting career, Orli is back to work.Lately Orli has added real estate broker & home stager to her resume at one of Chicago's top agencies; she enjoys beautifying and designing interiors of homes on the market.She also loves staying busy by attending many Sci-fi conventions around the world.She is now married and is a wonderful mother to two beautiful girls.She is very happy with her current career path and looking towards a bright future