Original sentence: "  According to his press release, “Absent this bill, California’s assault weapon ban is significantly weakened.For the safety of the general public, we must close this loophole.In May 2012, Senator Yee proposed legislation to close "a loophole" in assault weapon law in California.”  Senator Yee is quoted as saying, "It is extremely important that individuals in the state of California do not own assault weapons
Edited sentence: " However SB249 would likely shutter firearm dealers, sporting goods retailers, and accessory vendors.""CBS 5 Report Inspires New Legislation To Ban ‘Bullet Button’".According to his press release, “Absent this bill, California’s assault weapon ban is significantly weakened.CBS San Francisco.California already has some of the most stringent gun laws in the nation.For the safety of the general public...”"YEE INTRODUCES BILL TO CLOSE LOOPHOLE IN ASSAULT WEAPON LAW".Further impacting unemployment and putting an end to many small businesses.I mean that is just so crystal clear, there is no debate, no discussion.In May 2012, Senator Yee proposed legislation that would turn tens of thousands of law-abiding California gun owners who currently comply with California's assault weapon law into criminals.In May 2012, Senator Yee proposed legislation that would turn thousands of law-abiding California gun owners who currently comply with California's assault weapon law into criminals.Senator Yee has said, "It is extremely important that individuals in the state of California do not own assault weapons.Senator Yee shows his contempt of the constitution by saying, "It is extremely important that individuals in the state of California do not own assault weapons.The proposed SB 249 which would ban "conversion kits" for Assault Weapons