Original sentence: As a result of their isolation and lonliness, Inle and Abbata become passionate friends and then lovers, able to comminicate empathically.Possession by spirits is an integral part of Yaruba and other African spritual traditions.Santería and Candomblé are snycretic religions derived from Yoruba diasporic beliefs and catholicism, most prevalent in South Americas, including Cuba and Brazil.The possessed are usually women, but can also be men, and both genders are regarded as the "bride" of the diety while possessed
Edited sentence: As a result of their isolation and lonliness, Inle and Abbata become passionate friends and then lovers, able to communicate empathically.Possession by spirits is an integral part of Yaruba and other African spiritual traditions.Santería and Candomblé are snycretic religions derived from Yoruba diasporic beliefs and Catholicism, most prevalent in South Americas, including Cuba and Brazil.The possessed are usually women, but can also be men, and both genders are regarded as the "bride" of the deity while possessed