Original sentence: A charity screening of the documentary was held on March 11, 2010, the money raised going to fund the conservation of the SS United States.Lady in Waiting was praised by critic Kristiane Schmitt of Professional Mariner magazine saying "The film truly takes off when it launches into the ship's fascinating story" while Booklist reviewer Candace Smith called it "fascinating for ship and history buffs and anyone who enjoys glimpsing the glamorous past.The film also focuses on the lighting up of the vessel by artist Robert Wogan while also showing footage of her years in service
Edited sentence: A charity screening of the documentary was held on March 11, 2010, the money raised going to the cause of saving the endangered SS United States.Lady in Waiting was well received, with critic Kristiane Schmitt of Professional Mariner magazine saying "The film truly takes off when it launches into the ship's fascinating story," Booklist reviewer Candace Smith said "Fascinating for ship and history buffs and anyone who enjoys glimpsing the glamorous past.The film also focuses on the lighting up of the vessel by artist Robert Wogan while also showing footage of her glamorous years in service