Original sentence: England's highest mountain, [[Scafell Pikem lies just four kilometres away to the north west.From the summit, Great Langdale, Eskdale and Dunnerdale can be seen, along with the estuaries of the rivers Duddon and Esk as they enter the Irish Sea.The shortest and quickest route requires the use of a car to the top of the Wrynose Pass motor road
Edited sentence: In his series of pictorial guides to the mountains of the Lake District, Alfred Wainwright describes Crinkle Crags as.The ascent from Eskdale is very good, but that is at least a 15 kilometre round trip (depending on where in Eskdale one starts), and many people will think that this too far to "bag" just one fell.The shortest and quickest route requires the use of a car to the top of the Wrynose Pass motor road; this allows the walker to “cheat” and save three hundred metres of climbing, making it possible to climb to the summit of the Crinkles in a round trip of less than three hours.The traverse of the summit ridge with its series of undulations is an exhilarating experience for the fell walker; the ridge includes the so called “Bad Step” which is a steep declivity which catches out many walkers when travelling from north to south; however, the obstacle can be by-passed without too much trouble.The view from the summit is superb: there are magnificent airy views of Great Langdale, Eskdale and Dunnerdale, with the estuaries of the rivers Duddon and Esk well seen as they enter the Irish Sea.There is a very good view of England’s highest mountain Scafell Pike which lies just four kilometres away to the north west.“Much too good to be missed ... this is a climb deserving of high priority”