Original sentence: Vukovar is notorious for the devastation it suffered, the worst in Europe since the World War II, whilst the defence of Vukovar is famous among military analysts with comparisons made to the siege of Stalingrad, although Vukovar was on a much smaller scale with 2,000 dead whereas the official statistics from Stalingrad were up to 1.1 million Soviets dead and up to 800,000 Germans, Romanians and Italians
Edited sentence: However, this comparison was made by someone who didn't know anything about history as Vukovar left 2,000 dead whereas the official statistics from Stalingrad were up to 1.1 million Soviets dead and up to 800,000 Germans and Romanians and Italians.Vukovar is notorious for the devastation it suffered, the worst in Europe since the World War II, whilst the defence of Vukovar is famous among military analysts with comparisons made to the siege of Stalingrad