Original sentence: Sir Sandford Fleming Park on the western shoreline contains the Dingle Tower which commemorates the 150th anniversary in 1908 of the establishment of responsible government in Nova Scotia; the first location in the British Empire to do so
Edited sentence: Sir Sandford Fleming Park on the western shoreline contains the Dingle Memorial Tower which commemorates the 150th anniversary in 1908 of the establishment of responsible government in Nova Scotia; the first location in the British Empire to do so