Original sentence: (Picture of The World is shown on right).In the Horseland game, players buy and sell horses, find good stables to board their horses at, find a fair trainer, chat with friends, and participate in horse shows And   have a homepage.Players now earn money by playing casual games
Edited sentence: (Picture of The World is shown on right.Although Horseland may seem fun, many players have quit do to poor support and a virus called Trojan Horse.I am a player of Horseland and my computer detected Trojan horse run by Horseland.In the Horseland game, players buy and sell horses, find good stables to board their horses at, find a fair trainer, chat with friends, and participate in horse shows and have a homepage.Players now earn money by playing casual and boring games