Original sentence: Non-Scientologists, however, view his ideas about psychotherapy as pseudoscientific and point to Hubbard's own words describing "religion" as a simple means of making money.Ron Hubbard and intended as an alternative to psychotherapy, then recharacterized in 1953 as an "applied religious philosophy".Scientology is a new religious movement established in 1951 by science-fiction author L
Edited sentence: " The first Church of Scientology was established in 1954.(and) Scientology embraces the various activities of man.Hubbard stated, "Scientology would be the study of.Hubbard's taped lecture of that date was titled:  Scientology: Milestone One.Ron Hubbard in Wichita, Kansas on March the third, 1952.Scientology is a word introduced by author L.its a study of knowledge, not a study of therapy.knowledge rather than the small segment of therapy