Original sentence: Another memorable resident of the town was "Uncle" Charlie Porter, born in slavery, who lived to be 122 years old.He was a frequent sight on the streets of Folsom with his burlap sack slung across his back.Incorporated in 1853, Elba saw its fist public school established in 1863
Edited sentence: Incorporated in 1853, Elba saw its first public school established in 1863