Original sentence: About a month later, Savage died from his injuries.After a short and muted victory lane celebration, Johncock went to visit Savage at the hospital.Afterwards, the celebratory victory banquet was cancelled, and Johncock and his team instead grabbed a fast-food supper at Burger King.At the 1973 Indianapolis 500, Johncock was racing for the STP/Pat Patrick team.Foyt when the car's crankshaft broke on with sixteen laps to go.In discussing the 1973 race, Johncock appeared to have made peace with the circumstances
Edited sentence: After a short and muted victory lane celebration, Johncock went to visit his friend and teamate Savage at the hospital.Afterwards, due to the tragic circumstances, the celebratory victory banquet was cancelled, and Johncock and his team instead grabbed a somber fast-food supper at Burger King About a month later, Savage died from his injuries.At the time, Johncock was racing for the STP/Pat Patrick team.Foyt comfortably when the car's crankshaft broke on with sixteen laps to go.In discussing the tragic 1973 race, Johncock appeared to have made peace with the tragic circumstances.The 1973 Indianapolis 500 win was a bitter-sweet victory