Original sentence: A series of exercise videos that she made were successful — more so than her acting pursuits.After working for photographer Victor Skrebneski in Chicago and becoming a success, Cindy moved to New York City in 1986.Crawford is happily married to Rande Gerber (club owner) with two young children, Presely & Kaia.Her performance was dismissed by critics, and the film was a financial failure, with expenses of $50 million and $11 million takings at the box office.Thanks to two summers of modelling, she was able to study chemical engineering at Northwestern University on a scholarship.The former high school valedictorian achieved the same exceptional grades in college as in high school, but didn't complete her studies.The photo and the positive feedback she received were enough to convince her to take up modelling
Edited sentence: A series of exercise videos that she made were successful; her acting pursuits were not so.After working for photographer Victor Skrebneski in Chicago and becoming a success, Cindy took her supermodel assets to New York City in 1986.Crawford is now happy in her second marriage to Rande Gerber (club owner) with two young children, Presely & Kaia.Fair Game took $11 million at the box office.Her performance was dismissed by critics, and the greenlighting of a $50 million film on the assumption that she would be a good actress was described in the magazine Total Film in 2004 as the 7th "dumbest decision in movie history".In contrast, one of Crawford's last covers was an issue of W featuring a black-and-white nude of her very-pregnant profile, echoing a similar color cover photo years earlier by Demi Moore on the cover of Vanity Fair in August 1991.Thanks to two summers of modelling, represented by Elite Model Management in Chicago, the All-American beauty proved to also have brains -- she traded in the glamorous life of a model (at least temporarily) to study chemical engineering at Northwestern University, on scholarship.The former high school valedictorian pulled off the same exceptional grades in college as in high school, but she didn't stick around long enough to see where a degree in engineering would have taken her.The photo and the positive feedback surrounding Cindy's photogenic talents were enough to convince her to quit her day job and take up modelling