Original sentence: It is generally acknowledged that Peresson's finest instruments were crafted from about the mid 1970's to the early 1980's.Peresson sends a message on her late husband's behalf: My instruments are my own model, and in my opinion the principal qualities of an ideal violin, viola or violincello are beauty, quality, eveness and clarity of tone, rich sonority, powerful projection, and quick and easy response
Edited sentence: It is generally acknowledged that Peresson's finest instruments were crafted from about the mid 1970's to the early 1980s.Peresson sends a message on her late husband's behalf: My instruments are my own model, and in my opinion the principal qualities of an ideal violin, viola or violincello are beauty, quality, evenness and clarity of tone, rich sonority, powerful projection, and quick and easy response