Original sentence: A notable argument for this theory is the lack of information available on the internet regarding these toys.It is believed that one of the major failures to Space Pets' success was the odd choice of names like "Hoomdorm" and "Floomdorm"
Edited sentence: It is believed that one of the major failures to Space Pets success was the odd choice of names like "Hoomdorm" and "Floomdorm".One of the most powerful arguments for this theory is the astounding lack of information available on the internet regarding these fascinating toys, as if they were simply forgotten