Original sentence: In recent years, Atlanta and Minnesota, who had previously lost NHL franchises, recieved expansion teams.Out of the remaining possibilities for a potential NHL franchise, Winnipeg is one of the strongest
Edited sentence: If another city with a failed NHL franchise deserves a second chance it's Winnipeg.In recent years Atlanta, and Minnesota who both had failed NHL franchises before both recieved expansion teams.Out of the remaining possibilities for a potential NHL franchise Winnipeg is one of the strongest