Original sentence: Consequently, some Jehovah's Witnesses have been persecuted and their activities are banned or restricted in some countries.The group reports a worldwide membership of approximately 8.58 million adherents involved in evangelism and an annual Memorial attendance of over 20 million
Edited sentence: Consequently, some Jehovah's Witnesses have been apprehended and their activities are banned or restricted in some countries.The group reports a worldwide membership of approximately 8.59 million adherents involved in evangelism and an annual Memorial attendance of over 20 million.This May end up being fatal for them