Original sentence: Facts: Often mistaken for TVXQ's U-know Yunho's girlfriend, but they are just really good friends.In April 2007, a teaser video of TSZX The Grace was released, revealing a new "sexy upgrade" to their look for their first full album; the video was aired on various Korean music channels.Learned ballet for 11 years, major in ballet when she was still in America.TSZX is slated to release their first Japanese-language album on July 12
Edited sentence: At 5 years old her family moved to San Diego, California.In April 2007, a teaser video of TSZX The Grace was released, revealing a new "sexy upgrade" to their look for their first full album.Info: Stephanie Kim was born on October 16th, 1987.She is very fluent in English and has become known as one of Korea's dancing queens.She was offered a scholorship to the prestigious Boston Ballet University but she turned it down when the famous SM Entertainment came knocking.She was signed after participating and winning the annual Southern California "Teen Best Competition" in 2004.Shortly after being signed, she moved back to Korea to train before debuting with TSZX in April 2005.Stephanie became a promising ballet star in the the States and the lead parts in many American musicals.Stephanie whos Korean name is Bo Kyung started studying ballet at and early age.TSZX The Grace's sales are competitive to those of other Korean female groups.TSZX is slated to release their first Japanese language album on July 12.The new image showcased an edgy twist to their graceful image from 열정 (My Everything).The teaser video was aired on various Korean music channels and immediately received positive response from netizens.Though sales seem disappointing, it should be noted that Korean album sales have dropped by over 50% from 2004 alone, with girl groups usually at the bottom of the spectrum