Original sentence: Schilling gave up a two-out single to Oakland's Shannon Stewart, who lined a 95-mph fastball to right field for the A's only hit.Schilling had threw three balls in an at bat to only one batter, and finished with his third career one-hitter
Edited sentence: Schilling had outstanding control, throwing three balls to only one batter, and finished with his third career one-hitter.Using an assortment of pitches, more off-speed with the 40-year old becoming more of a control and command pitcher, Schilling gave up a two-out single to Oakland's Shannon Stewart, who lined a 95-mph fastball to right field for the A's only hit