Original sentence: A Fulbright Scholar, Strassberger's fellowship enabled him to study scenic design at La Scala in Milan in 2001.Strassberger is a graduate of The Cooper Union for the Advancement of Science and Art in New York City
Edited sentence: He went on to graduate from The Cooper Union for the Advancement of Science and Art in New York City.He won a Fulbright Fellowship which enabled him to study scenic design at La Scala in Milan in 2001.Strassberger grew up in Tulsa, Oklahoma where he graduated from Booker T.Washington High School in 1994