Original sentence: It prides itself in the excellent results achieved by its students in both systems as well as its 100% NCEA pass rate.The school offers the International Baccalaureate exams as well as the New Zealand NCEA exams.There are also many other cultural activities offered at the school
Edited sentence: It prides itself in the excelent results achieved by its students in both systems as well as its 100% NCEA pass rate.Students are taught to a very high standard and achieve well in exams right from grade one to LTCL level.The school has fantastic staff who are very dedicated and the co-heads of music are a perfect example of this.The school offeres the International Baccalaureate exams as well as the New Zealand NCEA exams.There are also many other cultral activites offered at the school