Original sentence: After a pilgrimage to Mecca in 1987, Trad decided to become a much more strict Muslim, rather than to follow the more liberal form of Islam that he observed around him in Lebanon and Australia.Keysar Trad is a spokesperson for a section of the Australian Muslim community
Edited sentence: After a pilgrimage to Mecca in 1987, Trad decided to become a much stricter Muslim, rather than to follow the more liberal form of Islam that he observed around him in Lebanon and Australia.Keysar Trad is a controversial spokesperson for a section of the Australian Muslim community