Original sentence: Kenya's economic policies have been subjected to criticism by western donors - especially when the policies do not ultimately benefit the West.There is debate as to the validity of, and motivations behind, such criticism
Edited sentence: At times western involvement takes the form of covert racism, with the west taking measures that would indirectly lead to significant harm to African people and their economies.Kenya's economic policies have been subjected to persistent heavy criticism by western donors - especially when the policies do not ultimately benefit the West.Such criticism is sensationalized and exaggerated - often with misrepresentation of statistics