Original sentence: Scott Makela and Laurie Haycock Makela, Fumihiko Maki, Fred Mitchell, Michael Monroe, Mark Moskovitz, Eric Nederlander, Gyo Obata, Hani Rashid, Eero Saarinen, Kim Salander, Nancy Skolos,  Peter Stathis, Toshiko Takaezu, Ralph Rapson, Martin Venezky, Harry Weese (City Planning fellowship, 1938-39), Lycia Trouton and Lorraine Wild
Edited sentence: Scott Makela and Laurie Haycock Makela, Fumihiko Maki, Fred Mitchell, Michael Monroe, Mark Moskovitz, Gyo Obata, Hani Rashid, Eero Saarinen, Kim Salander, Nancy Skolos,  Peter Stathis, Toshiko Takaezu, Ralph Rapson, Martin Venezky, Harry Weese (City Planning fellowship, 1938-39), Lycia Trouton and Lorraine Wild