Original sentence: However, the shroud of secrecy widely associated with Scientology's day-to-day operations as well as its numerous ongoing controversies have resulted in many Clearwater residents retaining their skepticism towards the church.Only members of the church's elite Sea Organization man the base.The topic has nevertheless remained a 'hot-button' issue, particularly when and if the Super Power Building is finally opened after several years of unexplained delays
Edited sentence: Only members of the church's elite Sea Organization, man the base.The topic has nevertheless remained a hot-button issue, particularly when and if the Super Power Building is finally opened after several years of unexplained delays.Unfortunately there is still a shroud of secrecy that encompasses the church and the people of Clearwater are still very skeptical of the church