Original sentence: Greasby is a small village/town in the Wirral, England.It has four primary schools, (namely Greasby Infant School, Greasby Junior School, Our Lady of Pity Primary School and Brookdale Primary School), three churches, (St.Nicholas' Church of England, Our Lady of Pity Catholic Church, and Greasby Methodist Church), and several pubs (such as The Greave Dunning).The earliest known human settlement in Merseyside has been found at Greasby.There are also nine hairdressers
Edited sentence: , Our Lady of Pity Catholic Church, and Greasby Methodist Church), and several pubs.At the last count, there were 9 hairdressers....Greasby (mostly harmless) is a small village/town in the Wirral, England.It has 4 primary schools, (namely Greasby Infant School, Greasby Junior School, Our Lady of Pity Primary School and Brookdale Primary School), 3 churches, (St.Nicholas' - C.The Greave Dunning is the most notable pub in Greasby.The earliest known human settlement in Merseyside has been found at Greasby, Wirral.of E