Original sentence: He decided to accept the offer and he was stuck on sailboat called the Beaver for several weeks with an expierenced sailor, Hamilton.National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship for Creative Writing,m fiction.They tried to argue that Jack had no involvement other then sailing the boat, but the people he had sold to were in custody already and were ready to testify against him
Edited sentence: He decided to accept the offer and he was stuck on sailboat called the Beaver for several weeks with an experienced sailor, Hamilton.National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship for Creative Writing, m fiction.They tried to argue that Jack had no involvement other than sailing the boat, but the people he had sold to were in custody already and were ready to testify against him