Original sentence: A fight ensues on the shuttle between Sharpe and Stamper over whether to shut it off.Stamper convinces the Colonel that he can make the depth of 800 feet.The crew begins their project anyway but quickly figures out that the drilling will be nearly impossible: they destroy one drill bit and a transmission in the first two hours.They also determine that they have overshot their landing site and are sitting on an area comprised of iron, making it extremely difficult to drill
Edited sentence: Afterwards, a scene of the aftermath is shown, in a shockingly realistic shot.Meanwhile a fight ensues on the shuttle between Sharpe and Stamper to shut it off.Stamper convinces the colonel that he can make the depth of 800 feet.The crew starts their project anyway and quickly figure out that the drilling will be nearly impossible; they destroy one drill bit and a transmission in the first two hours.They also determine that they've overshot their landing site and are sitting on an area comprised of iron, making it extremely difficult to drill