Original sentence: It will serve the Oakridge area—comprised of a residential neighbourhood, streetside stores along Cambie Street, as well as the Oakridge Centre complex—and will be within walking distance of Queen Elizabeth Park.Oakridge-41st Avenue Station is a station on the Canada Line, to be located at the intersection of West 41st Avenue and Cambie Street in Vancouver, Canada.The station entrance is planned to be located on the southwest corner of the intersection, adjacent to the entrance to Oakridge Centre.The station will be located 6 meters underground.This station will be served by the #15 bus providing local surface service along Cambie Street, as well as the #41 bus and a new B-Line service (replacing the current #43 bus), both operating east to Joyce-Collingwood Station and west to the University of British Columbia
Edited sentence: It serves the Oakridge area—comprised of a residential neighbourhood, streetside stores along Cambie Street, as well as the Oakridge Centre complex—and is within walking distance of Queen Elizabeth Park.Oakridge-41st Avenue Station is a SkyTrain station on the Canada Line, located at the intersection of West 41st Avenue and Cambie Street in Vancouver, Canada.The station entrance is located on the southwest corner of the intersection, adjacent to the entrance to Oakridge Centre.The station is located 6 meters underground.This station is served by the #15 bus providing local surface service along Cambie Street, as well as the #41 bus and a new B-Line service (replacing the current #43 bus), both operating east to Joyce-Collingwood Station and west to the University of British Columbia