Original sentence: Passengers are able to transfer between the Canada Line and the Expo and Millennium Lines (the latter two serving Granville Station) by walking through Pacific Centre or Vancouver Centre and the Hudson's Bay Company department store, although the only official transfer point is Waterfront.The station is also be within walking distance of such amenities as Robson Square (home of Vancouver Art Gallery, the provincial courthouse, and a satellite campus of the University of British Columbia), Orpheum Theatre and Vancouver Library Square.The station is due to open when the Canada Line opens, in 2009.The station servea the shopping and entertainment districts along Granville and Robson Streets, and Pacific Centre and Vancouver Centre (both office and shopping complexes).Vancouver City Centre Station is be located on Granville Street, between the intersections of West Georgia and Robson Streets
Edited sentence: Passengers are able to transfer between the Canada Line and the Expo and Millennium Lines (the latter two serving Granville Station) by walking through Pacific Centre or Vancouver Centre and the Hudson's Bay Company department store, although the only direct transfer point is at Waterfront.The station is also within walking distance of such amenities as Robson Square (home of the Vancouver Art Gallery, the provincial courthouse, and a satellite campus of the University of British Columbia), the Orpheum Theatre and Vancouver Library Square.The station serves the shopping and entertainment districts along Granville and Robson streets, and the office and shopping complexes of Pacific Centre and Vancouver Centre.Vancouver City Centre Station is located on Granville Street, between West Georgia Street and Robson Street