Original sentence: According to Ruth Solie, the origins of feminist music came from religion, where Goddess traditions expressed the inner lives of those who lived.She also stated that this type of music has always been creatively challenging and that the changing cultural standards throughout the years made it difficult to create standards in production.Solie's research found that this early form of music wasn't near the artistic form of some of the more famous musicians, notably Beethoven and Bach,  and that this kind of feministic music was created to please the men and lived up to an entirely different standard of beauty
Edited sentence: From this, however, it can be seen that since the beginning, music has never been permissive to complete female creativity.The origins of feminist music came from religion, where Goddess traditions expressed the inner lives of those who lived.This type of music has always been creatively challenging; the changing cultural standards throughout the years have made it difficult to create standards in production.While this early form of music was in no way near the artistic form of some of the more famous musicians, notably Beethoven and Bach, this kind of feministic music was created to please the men and lived up to an entirely different standard of beauty