Original sentence: A self-described intuitionist, and an adherent to a number of alternative practices, she "assisted" the MCD with one of their cases.Avery): The medical examiner that Brenda and her team most commonly deal with.Clay Johnson (Barry Corbin): Brenda's father.Ricardo Ramos (Stephen Martines): Rreporter from The LA Times, who is expected to ease the tension between the media and the LA Police Department.Willie Rae Johnson (Frances Sternhagen): Brenda’s mother
Edited sentence: A self-described intuitionist, and an adherent to a number of alternative practices, she "assisted" the MCD with one of their cases, or did she.Avery): The grumpy and terse medical examiner that Brenda and her team most commonly deal with.Clay Johnson (Barry Corbin): Brenda's bluff, but loving father.He appears to have a more-than-professional interest in Sgt.Ricardo Ramos (Stephen Martines): Our friendly reporter from The LA Times, who is expected to ease the tension between the media and the LA Police Department.Willie Rae Johnson (Frances Sternhagen): Brenda’s steel-magnolia mother