Original sentence: A relief train was sent up from Pennsylvania with rescue personnel experienced in coal-mine fires.An inquiry into the disaster recommended that mine rescue stations be set up in major mining camps.By the end of the 20's the Hollinger was the largest gold mine in the British Empire and paid annual dividends of more than $5 million.Stompin' Tom Connors, the famous Canadian patriot, troubadour, and recipient of the Order of Canada, composed and recorded a ballad about the disaster with Lord Thomson's "CKGB Recording" entitled "Fire in the Mine".The three room homes were designed and built identical to each other in every respect with the exception of the impregnated tar paper the covered them
Edited sentence: (A relief train was sent up from Pennsylvania with rescue personnel experienced in coal-mine fires).By the end of the "Roaring Twenties" the Hollinger was the largest gold mine in the British Empire and paid annual dividends of more than $5 million.In reference to Stompin' Tom Conner's recording of " Fire in the Mine " This song was regarding the fire underground in the MacIntyre Mine in February 8, 1965.Many a miner on a Saturday night made it into the wrong house and bed because of this colour combination.My Father was one of the local mine rescue members fighting the fire.Out of suffering often comes some good, an inquiry into the disaster recommended that mine rescue stations be set up in major mining camps.Stompin' Tom Connors, the famous Canadian patriot, troubadour, and recipient of the Order of Canada, composed and recorded a ballet about the disaster with Lord Thomson's "CKGB Recording" entitled "Fire in the Mine".The three room homes were designed and built identical to each other in ever respect with the exception of the impregnated tar paper the covered them