Original sentence: As he struggles, Charlie gets bitten and lets out a piercing howl; King Gator hears the voice and rushes to his aid.At Carface's hideout, Charlie finds Anne-Marie but Carface knew he would come and planed a trap Charlie then  fights his way through a horde of henchmen, but soon gets captured and tied to an anchor, ready to be thrown into the water.Charlie here his name being said softly and awakes to find the pups shaking him awake and the fact that he is holding on the top of a broom.Charlie leaps to save both his life watch and Anne-Marie, but is unable to get to both ; faced with the choice, he pushes the piece of wood Anne-Marie is laying on out of the wrecked tanker.Charlie meanwhile has taken Anne-Marie to the collie at the abounded church.Itchy limps into the church badly beaten and bruised.the pups inform him that Anne-Marie has left to return the wallet he stole, and goes after her
Edited sentence: As he struggles, Charlie gets bitten and lets out a piercing howl.At Carface's hideout, Charlie finds Anne-Marie but Carface knew he would come and planned a trap.Charlie hears his name being said softly and awakes to find the pups shaking him awake and the fact that he is holding on the top of a broom.Charlie leaps to save both his life watch and Anne-Marie, but is unable to get to both.Charlie meanwhile has taken Anne-Marie to the collie at the abandoned church.Charlie then fights his way through a horde of henchmen, but soon gets captured and tied to an anchor, ready to be thrown into the water.Faced with the choice, he pushes the piece of wood Anne-Marie is laying on out of the wrecked tanker.Itchy limps into the church, badly beaten and bruised.King Gator hears the voice and rushes to his aid.The pups inform him that Anne-Marie has left to return the wallet he stole, and goes after her