Original sentence: A former editor of The Daily Telegraph, as well as various academic commentators, have criticised the report for treating allegations as facts.The Director of Public Prosecutions described the report as marking a "watershed moment" and apologised for "shortcomings" in the handling of prior abuse claims
Edited sentence: The Director of Public Prosecutions apologised for "shortcomings" in the handling of prior abuse claims, while a former editor of The Daily Telegraph, as well as various academic commentators, have criticised the report for treating allegations as facts