Original sentence: After one crosses the Belen Pass, one can see Bagras Castle, held in succession by the Byzantines, the Crusaders and the Mamluks.In the plain of Issos is Dortyol where Alexander the Great finally defeated Darius II's large Persian army.Iskenderun is a bustling, modern city with many restaurants and cafes on a palm-fringed bay at the foot of the towering Amonos Mountains.Off the coastal highway that skirts the Gulf of Iskenderun lies Yakacik (Payas) which has a 16th century Sokullu Mehmet Paşa Complex, including a mosque, bath, bazaar, caravanserai and an ancient school.Off the main road on this route is the mountain resort of Sogukoluk - popular in the summer with people wanting to escape from the heat of the sun
Edited sentence: After you cross the Belen Pass, stop at Bagras Castle, held in succession by the Byzantines, the Crusaders and the Mamluks.In the plain of Issos is Dortyol where Alexander the Great finally defeated Darius II and his much larger Persian army.Iskenderun is a bustling, modern city with great restaurants and relaxing cafes in a fine location on a palm-fringed bay at the foot of the towering Amonos Mountains.Off the coastal highway that skirts the Gulf of Iskenderun lies Yakacik (Payas) which has a splendid 16th century Sokullu Mehmet Paşa Complex complete with mosque, bath, bazaar, caravanserai and an ancient school.Off the main road on this route is the mountain resort of Sogukoluk(GuzelYayla) - popular in the summer with people wanting to escape from the heat of the sun