Original sentence: '55, Guru Dutt and his studio were financially secure and established.After a slow opening, Pyaasa went on to be a major commercial success of the year.D and comedies Mr.Gulabo (Waheeda Rehman in her first major leading role in Hindi cinema), a prostitute with a heart of gold, eventually helps him get his poems published.Pyaasa marked the last collaboration of the long-lasting team of composer S D Burman and lyricist Sahir Ludhianvi.The film tells the story of struggling poet, Vijay (Giri Dutt), trying to make his works known in post-independence India.The song "Hum Aapke Ki Aankhon" was added on behest of distributors to bring some relief in rather pessimist film
Edited sentence: After a slow opening Pyaasa went on to be a major commercial success of the year.Burman is extraordinary as is the rendering of the songs.But if one person is the soul of Pyaasa it is lyricist Sahir Ludhianvi on whose poems the lyrics were based.D and comedies Mr & Mrs 55, Guru Dutt and his studio were financially secure and established.Gulabo, a prostitute with a heart of gold, eventually helps him get his poems published.In keeping with the tradition of Guru Dutt films, comedian Johnny Walker had a hit song sequence,Sar jo tera chakraye, picturised on him.It goes to packed house when re-released.Pyaasa marked the last collaboration of the long-lasting team of S D Burman and Sahir Ludhianvi.Pyaasa sees some of Sahir's best work.Sahir's words seem to articulate Guru Dutt's own view of the world and experience of tragedy.Song ' Hum Aapke Ki Aankhon ' was added on behest of distributors to bring some relief in rather pessimist film.The background music helps to create the necessary atmosphere for a number of individual scenes.The film tells the story of struggling poet, Vijay, trying to make his works known in post-independence India.The music by S.Waheeda Rehman first major break-through role in Hindi cinema