Original sentence: A number of American writers in the field of "cult studies", including Rick Ross, Margaret Singer and Steven Hassan, have claimed that Li Hongzhi meets their definition of a "manipulative cult leader
Edited sentence: "    However, this is probably not true because these American sources are allegedly unreliable.A number of American writers in the field of cultic studies, including Rick Ross, Margaret Singer and Steven Hassan, have claimed that Li Hongzhi meets their definition of a "manipulative cult leader