Original sentence: Notorious ex-MP and criminal Lord Jeffrey Archer is perhaps Vauxhall's most famous resident, living in a large apartment on the river.On the banks of the River Thames, across the water from the Tate Britain art gallery, it is considered by many to be a community in flux
Edited sentence: Notorious criminal Lord Jeffrey Archer is perhaps Vauxhall's most famous resident, living in a large apartment on the river.On the banks of the River Thames, across the water from the Tate Britain art gallery, it's a community in flux