Original sentence: During his career accumulated a total of five hundred league appearances.He took a position as coach of the Tulsa Roughnecks in the early 1980s, when in 1983 they won the championship of the North American Soccer League (NASL).He was forced to retire at the end of the 1972–73 campaign and initially went into coaching.Hennessey was switch from inside forward to wing half, quickly gaining his first team place and, in 1962, his first full Welsh cap against the Republic of Ireland.His role on the field varied.In November 1965, he was transferred to Nottingham Forest and became their captain.It was two months before he made his debut at St Andrews.Throughout 1963–64 he helped Birmingham avoid relegation by a single point, forfeiting another Welsh cap to assist his club at a critical period during the season.William Terrence Hennessey (born 1 September 1942) was a Welsh international footballer
Edited sentence: A hard working and during his career accumulated a total of five hundred league appearances.Andrews, and then he didn't think he would make the grade.He was forced to 'hang up his boots' at the end of the 1972 - 1973 campaign and initially went into coaching.His role on the field varied, but he was always alive to the chance of creating goal scoring opportunities for others.In November 1965 he was transferred to Nottingham Forest and became their captain.It was two months before he got a kick of a ball at St.Terry did not click until he switched from inside forward to wing half, but then he quickly gained his first team place and, in 1962, his first full Welsh cap against the Republic of Ireland.Terry took a position as coach of the Tulsa Roughnecks in the early 1980s, when in 1983 they won the championship of the North American Soccer League (NASL).This tall wing half dominated his area of the field, continually prodding his forwards into the attack with a series of perfect passes, that more than one critic has hailed Terry as a second Danny Blanchflower.Throughout 1963-1964 he fought like a lion in a struggling Birmingham team to help avoid relegation by a single point, forfeiting another Welsh cap to assist his club at a critical period during the season.William Terrence Hennessey (born September 1, 1942 in Llay, Wales) was a Welsh international footballer