Original sentence: In may 1945, 4,650 Greek refugees, mostly male members of ELAS, settled in the Maglic village with the help of Yugoslav government.They worked at the Serbs vineyards and in the homes of the jewish merchant families
Edited sentence: In May 1945, 4,650 Greek refugees, mostly male members of ELAS, settled in the Maglic village with the help of Yugoslav government.They worked at the Serbs vineyards and in the homes of the Jewish merchant families