Original sentence: )  The music is an original score by Brian Easdale, who conducted most of it the film, but not the Ballet of the Red Shoes; the ballet itself was conducted by Sir Thomas Beecham, who received prominent screen credit.A young woman sees in a shop window a pair of red shoes, which are offered to her by the demonic shoemaker.Finally she falls into the netherworld of the demimonde, where she dances with a piece of newspaper which turns briefly into her boyfriend.Her boyfriend, now a priest, offers to help her.The ballet was choreographed by Robert Helpmann, who plays the role of the lead dancer of the Ballet Lemontov and danced the part of the boyfriend, with Léonide Massine creating his own movement for his role as the shoemaker
Edited sentence: )  The music for the whole film, including for the ballet, is an original score by Brian Easdale, who conducted most of the music in the film, but not the Ballet of the Red Shoes; the ballet itself was conducted by Sir Thomas Beecham, who received prominent screen credit.A young woman sees a pair of red shoes in a shop window, which are offered to her by the demonic shoemaker.She falls into the netherworld of the demimonde, where she dances with a piece of newspaper which turns briefly into her boyfriend.The ballet was choreographed by Robert Helpmann, who plays the role of the lead dancer of the Ballet Lemontov and danced the part of the boyfriend, with Léonide Massine creating his own choreography for his role as the shoemaker.The priest offers to help her