Original sentence: The University of Wollongong Student Association produces the magazine Tertangala, and many other services including representation, advocacy and student support
Edited sentence: The University of Wollongong Student Association produces the magazine Tertangala, and many other services including representation, advocacy and student support, however, it is looked down upon by the majority of the student body due to a lack of focus on the original focus (less so on the students and moreso on protests which waste student fees awarded to them, thank god for VSU