Original sentence: Industrial salt firing continues.Modern [Studio pottery|studio potters]] using traditional salt processes are working in many areas of the world.The technique was promoted in the 20th century art and craft sector by English potter and artist Bernard Leach
Edited sentence: Although industrial salt firing continues, the technique was promoted in the 20th century art and craft sector by English potter and artist Bernard Leach.Modern studio potters using traditional salt processes are working in many areas of the United States and Europe.The unique salt glaze finish entices potters as it provides an opportunity to capture spontaneous changes in atmosphere and color and is a tool for ongoing experimentation and creativity.These include Alfred University in New York and Utah State University in Logan, Utah