Original sentence: Kendo, a swordsmanship-based sport art, and Iaido, the art of drawing the sword and re-sheathing it, as well as cutting an opponent with it, are of note here
Edited sentence: Kendo, a swordsmanship-based sport art, and Iaido, the way of drawing the sword and re-sheathing it, as well as cutting an opponent with it, are of note here