Original sentence: Shoemaker  believed that Buchman had strayed  from his prinicpals where "Buchmanism"  was meant to make Baptists better Baptist, Catholics better Catholics and  believed Buchman wanted to start a sect.Sir Patrick Joseph Henry Hannon a Member of British Parliament and at one time a Group supporter derided the "Buchmanites"  for making claim that they  settled three impending work stoppages in the Midlands by promoting the groups principles on management and labor.Sir Patrick's investigations found the trouble had been cured by by pay raises and and  better working hours
Edited sentence: Shoemaker  believed that Buchman had strayed  from his prinicpals where Buchmanism made Baptists better Baptist, Catholics better Catholics and wanted to start a sect.Sir Patrick Joseph Henry Hannon a Member of British Parliament and at one time a Group supporter derided the "Buchmanites" claims that they  settled three impending work stoppages in the Midlands by promoting the groups principles on management and labor.Sir Patrick's investigations found the trouble had been cured by "sordid means like better pay and better hours