Original sentence: Born on January 23, 1872 in  Kilkis (Кукуш; Kukush), present day Greece, Delcev finished the local Bulgarian junior high school and the Bulgarian high school "St Cyril and Methodius" in Thessaloniki.Delchev's remains were transferred to Bulgaria in 1915 (or 1919) where they rested until after the Second World War.They were transferred to the People's Republic of Macedonia on October 10, 1946
Edited sentence: Born on January 23, 1872 in  Kilkis (Кукуш; Kukush), present day Greece(However this was a Macedonian city before Turkish occupation within the Balkan States, Delcev finished the local Bulgarian (However he was a Proud Macedonian)junior high school and the Bulgarian high school "St Cyril and Methodius" in Thessaloniki.Goce's remains now lie in the Republic of Macedonia on October 10, 1946