Original sentence: An estimate by the Pentagon figures, in an analysis of over 1,000 insurgents captured in Fallujah (as stated by U.Ground Commander General George Casey) found only 15 non-Iraqis.Though more recently, such as on September 7, 2005, American and Iraqi forces in operations around Tal Afar found 150 non-Iraqi Arabs (in addition to 50 Iraqis with fake documents).occupation in Iraq are from outside the country, it hgas been proposed that foreign fighters make up a small percentage of the insurgency
Edited sentence: Ground Commander General George Casey found only 15 non-Iraqis.This estimate is bolstered by the Pentagon's own figures; in an analysis of over 1,000 insurgents captured in Fallujah, U.Though, on September 7, 2005, American and Iraqi in raids around Tal Afar found 150 non-Iraqi Arabs (in addition to 50 Iraqis with fake documents).occupation in Iraq are from outside the country, it is generally agreed that foreign fighters make up a small percentage of the insurgency