Original sentence: Again, he suffered low run support in 1905, when he went 17-20 with a 2.35 ERA.Before the 1904 season, Hughes was sent to the Highlanders in exchange for Jesse Tannehill in an unpopular trade in Boston.Despite his 10-23 mark, in part due to low run support, he recorded a 3.24 earned run average while striking out 225 opponents, the third-best ever for a National League rookie.He died of pneumonia in Chicago, Illinois at age 77.The next three seasons he averaged a 2.89 ERA, with a career-best 2.21 in 1908, and a 18-15 mark the same year
Edited sentence: Again, he suffered his usual low run support in 1905, when he went 17-20 with a 2.35 ERA.Before the 1904 season, Hughes was sent  to the Highlanders in exchange for Jesse Tannehill in an unpopular trade in Boston.Despite his 10-23 mark, in part for a low run support, he recorded a 3.24 earned run average while striking out 225 opponents, the third-best ever for a National League rookie.He died of pneumonia in his homeland of Chicago at age 77.Hughes was one of these unfortunate major league pitchers who pitched considerably better than their records indicate, but he was let by bad teams with awful defenses.The next three seasons he averaged a 2.89 ERA, with a career-high 2.21 in 1908, and a 18-15 mark the same year