Original sentence: The Jersey Shore shark attacks of 1916 were a series of shark attacks along the coast of New Jersey between July 1 and July 2, 1916, in which one person was killed.They took him to a doctor but it was to late, his sister and father were in shock.it took four people to pull the attacked person out of the water
Edited sentence: The Jersey Shore shark attacks of 1916 were a series of shark attacks along the coast of New Jersey between July 1 and July 12, 1916, in which four people were killed and one injured