Original sentence: As chief executive, Berlowitz won praise for increasing Academy revenues, expanding the scope of programs, and raising the Academy's national profile, though questions about her management style and  allegedly poor treatment of employees followed her for years.In June 2013, The Boston Globe reported that Berlowitz had claimed to hold a doctorate in English from NYU in three applications for federal grants from 2003 to 2012, but that NYU had no record of her receiving that degree
Edited sentence: As chief executive, Berlowitz won praise for increasing Academy revenues, expanding the scope of programs, and raising the Academy's national profile