Original sentence: A magician who reveals a secret, either purposely or through insufficient practice, may typically find themself without any magicians willing to teach them more secrets.Exposure is claimed to "kill" magic as an artform and transforms it into mere intellectual puzzles and riddles.It is argued that once the secret of a trick is revealed to a person, he or she can no longer fully enjoy subsequent performances of the trick, as the amazement is missing.Once sworn to The Oath, one is considered a magician, and is expected to live up to this promise
Edited sentence: A magician who reveals a secret, purposely or through insufficient practice, may typically find themself without any magicians willing to teach them more secrets.Exposure obviously "kills" magic as an artform and transforms it into mere intellectual puzzles and riddles.Once sworn to The Oath, one is considered a magician, and is expected to live up to their promise.Once the secret of a trick is revealed to a person, he or she can no longer fully enjoy subsequent performances of the trick, as the amazement is missing