Original sentence: Ken,  National League Most Valuable Player, an 11-time Major League Baseball All-Star and five-time Gold Glove Award winner, had a 15-year big-league career with the Cardinals, New York Mets, Chicago White Sox and Los Angeles Dodgers; Cletis won only one Gold Glove because of the presence of Brooks Robinson, but played all or parts of 16 MLB seasons for the Athletics, New York Yankees and Atlanta Braves
Edited sentence: Ken,  National League Most Valuable Player, an 11-time Major League Baseball All-Star and five-time Gold Glove Award winner, had a 15-year big-league career with the Cardinals, New York Mets, Chicago White Sox and Los Angeles Dodgers; Cletis—one of the top defensive third baseman of his time, although he won only one Gold Glove because of the dominant presence of Brooks Robinson—played all or parts of 16 MLB seasons for the Athletics, New York Yankees and Atlanta Braves