Original sentence: The plan was opposed by residents, who requested a secondary school in their own area, concerning about their children travelling for 2-3 hours a day to reach other schools, and thought that the campus should be reserved for them.They think that there is a lack of due process for the placement of the college on the site, citing four other applications by other organizations rejected without clear reasons
Edited sentence: Firstly their objection to the lack of due process for the placement of the Christian Zheng Sheng College on the site - four other applications have been made by other organisations to turn the site into a local school.However these have been rejected without any clear reason being given.However, in many cases this labelling of Mui Wo residents has ignored the deeper root causes of their resistance to the loss of their school.Many residents feel that these conditions are not conducive to the welfare and development of their own children and feel that their children's well being is being ignored.Secondly, many Mui Wo residents are concerned about the welfare of their own children, many of whom would have to continue to travel for 2-3 hours a day to reach alternative school sites.The plan was opposed by residents, who requested a secondary school in their own area and thought that the campus should be reserved for them.This lack of due process could be considered dangerous since if accepted it would allow the Hong Kong government to push through any future agenda without due consultation