Original sentence: In an attempt to redeem themselves amongst the media and some of their fans, Katagory V would make the decision to not promote the album with any live performances in 2004 and spend a majority of that year writing and rehearsing material for the follow up to A New Breed of Rebellion.They entered the studio in October 2004 with producer Mike Fowkes and would spend the next six months recording the bands third album, The Rising Anger.Trevor Asire would make the decision to part ways with the band for unrelated personal matters in January 2004, and would be replaced by Marc Hanson
Edited sentence: In an attempt to redeem themselves amongst the media and some of their fans, Katagory V would make the decision to not promote the album with any live performances in 2004 and spend a majority of the year writing and rehearsing material for the follow up to A New Breed of Rebellion.It was at this time that guitarist Trevor Asire would make the decision to part ways with the band for unrelated personal matters, and would be replaced by Marc Hanson.They entered the studio in October 2004 with producer Mike Fowkes and would spend several months recording the bands third album, The Rising Anger