Original sentence: Natalie Powers began acting at the age of seven when she played the youngest orphan in the first run of the hit musical Annie.Natalie toured around the country, and between the ages of seven and 14, she starred in many musicals and pantomimes, working with popular entertainers such as Michael Barrymore and Les Dawson amongst others.Natalie was brought up with her two brothers in Sutton Coldfield in the West Midlands.Natalie's parents, Peter and Gloria, recognised her talent and took her to audition for the lead role in Annie.She later starred alongside Kim Wilde in Tommy at the Shaftsbury Theatre before returning to Starlight to play an even bigger role.Upon leaving college, Natalie moved into the West End to take a principal role in the all-singing, all roller-skating extravaganza Starlight Express at the Apollo Victoria Theatre
Edited sentence: Natalie Powers began her path to fame at the age of seven when she played the youngest orphan in the first run of the hit musical 'Annie'.Natalie toured around the country, and between the ages of 7-14, she starred in many musicals and pantomimes, working with popular entertainers such as Michael Barrymore and Les Dawson amongst others.Natalie was born on the 26th July 1977 and was brought up with her two brothers in Sutton Coldfield in the West Midlands.Natalie's parents, Peter and Gloria, recognised her talent and took her to audition for the lead role in 'Annie'.She later starred alongside Kim Wilde in 'Tommy' at the Shaftsbury Theatre before returning to 'Starlight' to play an even bigger role.Upon leaving college, Natalie moved into the West End to take a principal role in the all-singing, all roller-skating extravaganza 'Starlight Express' at the Apollo Victoria Theatre