Original sentence: Her father was a Portuguese, and her mother Chinese.However, she created controversy when she withdrew from the Miss Universe pageant due to "personal reasons".Michelle's early stage image is one of angelicism and purity, and Michelle was widely thought to be the most beautiful Miss Hong Kong
Edited sentence: " Alas, Michelle was thought to be the most beautiful Miss Hong Kong.However, she created controversy when she withdrew from the Miss Universe pageant due to "personal reasons.Michelle's stage image is one of angelicism and purity, though her acting is quite questionable