Original sentence: Gaining experience under the Duke of Wellington in the Peninsular War and forged into a disciplined, honed weapon of war, they advanced to become a very prominent force in the Napoleonic Wars.The Allied Forces of the Napoleonic Wars was composed of Napoleon Bonaparte's enemies, Britain, Russia, Austria, and Prussia.The British forces consisted of 320,000 troops at their height, a notable 2% of the entire British population at the time.The redcoats, as they were called, principally employed tactics such as disciplined volley fire and bayonet charges and saw much success through these methods
Edited sentence: 2% of the entire British population.Heroics under the Duke of Wellington in the Peninsular War and forged into a disciplined, honed weapon of war, they advance to become one of the greatest military forces ever to take the field.Strength of 320,000 at its height.The Allied Forces of the Napoleonic Wars was composed of Napoleon Bonaparte's enemies, Britain, Russia, Austria and Prussia.Undefeated on the battlefield, the British redcoats took on the best Europe could throw at them and, if disciplined volley fire did not see them off, then the bayonet charge would