Original sentence: According to a Wall Street Journal report "American Dream Finds Chinese Spiritual Leader," on November 1, 1999, Li was offered a house in New York worth $293,500 in 1998 shortly after immigrating to the US, then was offered another worth $580,000 in New Jersey in 1999.John Sun, a wealthy New York Falun Gong practitioner, asserted in a letter to the editor of Wall Street Journal that he bought the house in Mr
Edited sentence: According to a Wall Street Journal report "American Dream Finds Chinese Spiritual Leader," on November 1, 1999, Li was offered a house in New York for $293,500 in 1998 shortly after immigrating to the US, then was offered another for $580,000 in New Jersey in 1999.John Sun, a wealthy New York Falun Gong practitioner, pointed out in a letter to the editor of Wall Street Journal that he bought the house in Mr