Original sentence: Troward has been credited as a major influence on secular New Thought as well as on the religious organizations of Religious Science.Troward's theories have also been said to have influenced the history of Alcoholics Anonymous.Troward's work on mental science and religion contributed to the philosophy of Ernest Holmes who founded Religious Science and wrote many of its important texts, including The Science of Mind
Edited sentence: According to Alcoholics Anonymous (AA) archivist Nell Wing, early AA members were strongly encouraged to read Thomas Troward's Edinburgh Lectures on Mental Science