Original sentence: During his playing days he was often referred to as "the Ty Cobb of hockey.Frederick Wellington "Cyclone" Taylor, OBE, (June 23, 1884 – June 9, 1979) was a Canadian professional ice hockey forward who played for the Ottawa Senators, Renfrew Creamery Kings, Vancouver Millionaires and Vancouver Maroons
Edited sentence: Acknowledged as the first stars of hockey, Taylor was one of the most prolific scorers of his era.After his career in hockey, Taylor continued working for the Canadian government, becoming Commissioner of Immigration for British Columbia and the Yukon.Frederick Wellington "Cyclone" Taylor, OBE, (June 23, 1884 – June 9, 1979) was a Canadian professional ice hockey forward who played for the Ottawa Senators, Renfrew Creamery Kings of the National Hockey Association (NHA) and the Vancouver Millionaires (later renamed the Maroons) of the Pacific Coast Hockey Association (PCHA) from 1910 to 1923.He was inducted into the Hockey Hall of Fame in 1947.He won several scoring championships, and won the Stanley Cup twice, once in 1909 with Ottawa and again in 1915 with Vancouver.Prior to joining the NHA, Taylor played in several different leagues, including the International Professional Hockey League, the first professional hockey league.This made him the highest paid Canadian athlete and he made more money than the Canadian prime minister