Original sentence: Rowayton is a village on Long Island Sound in the city of Norwalk, 45 miles from New York City in Fairfield County, Connecticut.The wealthy village is often compared to nearby Darien and New Canaan
Edited sentence: It is located on Long Island Sound and is 45 miles from New York City.It is often compared to the wealthier towns of Darien and New Canaan.Rowayton is a seaside village located in the city of Norwalk in Fairfield County, Connecticut.The village benefits from a picturesque location on the water and a very involved local populace