Original sentence: As WPI research director, Mikovits attempted to find a connection between CFS and infections, but was initially unsuccessful.In 2009 in the journal Science, the WPI reported an association between CFS and XMRV.In 2009, Mikovits and co-workers reported in the journal Science that they had detected XMRV DNA in 68 of 101 (67%) CFS patients, versus 8 of 218 (3.7%) healthy control subjects.Judy Mikovits was introduced to the Whittemores and hired as the research director of WPI in 2006.Mikovits then met Annette Whittemore at a scientific conference
Edited sentence: As WPI research director, Mikovits attempted to find a connection between CFS and infections.In 2009 in the journal Science, researchers from WPI, the National Cancer Institute and Cleveland Clinic reported an association between CFS and XMRV.In 2009, researchers from the WPI, the NCI and Cleveland Clinic reported in the journal Science that they had detected XMRV DNA in 68 of 101 (67%) CFS patients, versus 8 of 218 (3.7%) healthy control subjects.Judy Mikovits was introduced to Annette Whittemore at an HHV-6 Foundation conference in the spring of 2006, and soon after was hired as the research director of WPI