Original sentence: Georgia Tech-bound Derrick Favors earned co-Most Valuable Player honors as he finished with 21 points and five rebounds to lead the Black Jerseys to the 110-103 victory over the White Jerseys
Edited sentence: Georgia Tech-bound Derrick Favors earned co-Most Valuable Player honors on basketball's biggest stage, Madison Square Garden, as he finished with 21 points and five rebounds to lead the Black Jerseys to the 110-103 victory over the White Jerseys