Original sentence: Her political activism has been praised by some liberals and progressives, while her stance on the Israeli–Palestinian conflict, including her support for Boycott, Divestment and Sanctions against Israel, have been criticized by mainstream and conservative Jewish leaders and organizations, along with segments of the American right wing.Sarsour, "one of the most recognizable Palestinian American women" in the United States according to Haaretz, has publicly advocated for the rights of Palestinians in the Israeli-occupied territories, in addition to expressing criticism of the Israeli government and Zionism
Edited sentence: Her political activism has been praised by some liberals and progressives, while her stance and remarks on the Israeli–Palestinian conflict, including her support for the Boycott, Divestment and Sanctions campaign against Israel, have been criticized by some Jewish leaders and organizations and conservatives.Sarsour has been called "one of the most recognizable Palestinian American women" by Haaretz and has publicly advocated for Palestinians in the Israeli-occupied territories, in addition to expressing strong criticism of the Israeli government and Zionism