Original sentence: In Apocrypha, a group of rebellious watchers are described as fallen angels.In the Book of Daniel, a watcher is referred to as a holy one coming down from heaven.Watcher (Aramaic, עִירִין iyrin, Theodotian trans: ir, from the v.ur, "to watch"; Hebrew, er, "being watchful") is a term used in connection with angels, only occurring once in the Hebrew Bible
Edited sentence: In Daniel, these are obedient angels, in the Book of Enoch they are referred to as fallen angels.The Watchers (Aramaic, עִירִין iyrin) is a term found in the Old Testament Book of Daniel, and later sources, which is connected to angels