Original sentence: His weapon of choice is a straight razor, with which he cuts his victim's throats; in some versions of the story his friend and accomplice, Margery (sometimes Nellie or Claudette) Lovett, bakes the carcasses into meat pies
Edited sentence: His weapon of choice is a straight razor, with which he cuts his victim's throats; in some versions of the story his friend and accomplice, Margery Lovett, bakes the carcasses into meat pies.It is actually a true storry, but was made in to a play