Original sentence: After being disillusioned with the band, he along with another member, Mike Elliott, left The Foundations in 1968 just after recording a version of "It's All Right", a song that they had been belting out live to crowds for some time.After having found success with The Foundations, two hit singles and releasing two albums, some problems started with their songwriter producer Tony Macaulay as well as some problems within the group.After losing their original lead singer Ramong, taking on board Arthur Brown temporarily for a few weeks, going through a few name changes they became The Foundations and emerged in January 1967 with Clem Curtis as their lead singer.Curtis at this time was a former pro boxer and his singing experience was limited to singing with his uncle when he came around the house with the guitar.Curtis felt that after their hit a couple of The Foundations members were taking things a little too easy thinking that they didn't need to work so hard now that they'd scored a hit.He joined the group after hearing from his uncle that Ramong, the lead singer of the group, was looking for backing singers and he should give it a try.This was probably helped along by the encouragement of Sammy Davis, Jr
Edited sentence: After being disillusioned with the band, he along with another member Mike Elliott left The Foundations in 1968 just after recording a fantastic version of "It's All Right", a song that they had been belting out live to crowds for some time.After having found success with The Foundations, two hit singles and releasing two albums some problems started with their songwriter producer Tony Macaulay as well as some problems within the group.Clem felt that after their hit a couple of The Foundations members were taking things a little too easy thinking that they didn't need to work so hard now that they'd scored a hit.Curtis at this time was a former pro boxer and had his singing experience was limited to singing with his uncle when he came around the house with the guitar   After losing their original lead singer Ramong, taking on board Arthur Brown temporarily for a few weeks, going through a few name changes they became The Foundations and emerged in January 1967 with Clem Curtis as their lead singer.He joined the group after hearing from his uncle that Ramong, the lead singer of the group was looking for backing singers and he should give it a try.This was probably helped along by the encouragment of Sammy Davis, Jr