Original sentence: In July 2006, an LCD screen was raised in the square for the viewing of the semifinals and finals of the FIFA World Cup of soccer
Edited sentence: In July 2006, a huge LCD screen was raised in the square for the viewing of the semifinals and finals of the FIFA World Cup of soccer.The atmosphere was similar to that of actually being at the games, with devoted fans of all teams coming in droves with painted faces, signs, and their favorite teams jerseys.Thousands of fans turned out despite blistering heat