Original sentence: The Lovely House takes place in a huge  and over decorated house that is set among lavish grounds, a park, a river, and a wooded hill and starts off when the narrator Margaret arrives to stay at "the lovely house" owned by her friend, Carla Montague's family
Edited sentence: " By the end of the part of the story Margaret is still curious about the tower she has not explored yet and the and tile portrait of the tile girl.In part one, the main character Margaret spends her summer vacation with her friend Carla Montague.It is at this point in the story that the reader realizes that the Captain is Carla's brother and that Paul is just a mere ghost.She is later told by Carla that the tapestries have been made by several generations of the female Montagues and her mother continues to carry out the tradition.The Lovely House consist of three main parts.The reader is left wondering what the relationship between Paul, Margaret and the elderly Margaret is.When entering the huge  and over decorated house that is set among lavish grounds, a park, a river, and a wooded hill Margaret starts to narrate and states that she arrived to stay at "the lovely house" owned by her friend, Carla Montague's family