Original sentence: Depite Bellatrix's devotion Voldemort does not repay her the same level of love as she gives to him
Edited sentence: Though Dumbledore points out that many Death Eaters see themselves as Voldemort's "closest" servant, Bellatrix's devotion and service may well make her worthy of that title, though Voldemort, of course, does not repay her the same level of love as she gives to him