Original sentence: On May 2010, Lee participated in the "Freedom Flotilla" effort, organized by the Free Gaza Movement, to hand out a load of 10,000 tons of humanitarian aid to Gza and to protest against the blockade imposed by Israel and Egypt to the territory
Edited sentence: Israel, in a defensive position, boarded the ship as the ship tried to illegally resupply a government which declared war on Israel.On May 2010, Lee participated in the "Freedom Flotilla" effort, organized by the Free Gaza Movement, to hand out a load of 10,000 tons of humanitarian aid to Hamas government and to protest against the blockade imposed by Israel and Egypt to the territory.Several of the dead had stated before the departure of the flotilla it was their desire to become martyrs for their faith.The flotilla was using ships illegally flagged and was attempting to enable a government which has vowed to destroy Israel and to kill every Jew  on Earth