Original sentence: Her performance is more emotionally charged than even Celine Dion's later version, but might be viewed by some, as altering the focus of the song (lyrically it is a positive love song, but Branigan's vocal hints at heartache)
Edited sentence: Her performance is more emotionally charged than even Celine Dion's later version, but might be viewed by some, as altering the focus of the song (lyrically it is a positive love song, but Branigan's impressive vocal somehow hints at heartache