Original sentence: Germany and Berlin were occupied and partitioned by the Allies, with West Germany and West Berlin being controlled by the Western allies and East Germany and East Berlin by the Soviet Union.The war resulted in territorial losses and the expulsion of millions from Silesia, Prussia and Pomerania
Edited sentence: At least 3 million German civilians lost their lives, and an even higher number of soldiers.Germany and Berlin were occupied and partitioned by the Allies, with West Germany and West Berlin being controlled by the Western allies and East Germany and East Berlin by the Soviet Union, of which the eastern part was unilaterally annexed to Poland and the Soviet Union.The war resulted in territorial losses and the brutal ethnic cleansing of millions from Eastern Germany