Original sentence: {cn} An incident in 2008 was quite disturbing when Kenyan supporters had some of their personal team symbols taken away from them.{cn} No drinking is permitted in the stand and this causes a vast exodus to the beer tent whenever South Africa has just played.{cn} Souvenir stalls sell little in the way of international supporter's flags or shirts; South African attire and the rainbow emblem being in abundance.{cn} The corresponding mass return to their seats prior to South Africa's next game, is very disrupting for the games enjoyment.{cn} The organizers fail to allow for foreign visitors having different approaches to Rugby.{cn} These items were thrown away and not returned to their owners.{cn} This was  because it had the name of a company on it that was not a sponsor of the George Sevens.{cn} With a little direction, the organizers could possibly get it right and it could develop to challenge the best
Edited sentence: An incident in 2008 was quite disturbing when Kenyan supporters had some of their personal team symbols taken away from them.No drinking is permitted in the stand and this causes a vast exodus to the beer tent whenever South Africa has just played.Souvenir stalls sell little in the way of international supporter's flags or shirts; South African attire and the rainbow emblem being in abundance.The corresponding mass return to their seats prior to South Africa's next game, is very disrupting for the games enjoyment.The organizers fail to allow for foreign visitors having different approaches to Rugby; the game of the gods.These items were thrown away and not returned to their owners.This was  because it had the name of a company on it that was not a sponsor of the George Sevens.With a little direction, the organizers could possibly get it right and it could develop to challenge the best