Original sentence: On her way back to Edinburgh Mary was abducted, willingly or not, by Bothwell and his men and taken to Dunbar Castle where she was raped by Bothwell and became pregnant with twins, which she later miscarried while imprisoned
Edited sentence: Because Darnley came from a Protestant family, the first marriage ceremony were according to his family's wishes.Bothwell escorted his new wife to Dunbar Castle where she became pregnant with twins, which she later miscarried while imprisoned.However, once Mary received word of the dispensation, they were married in the Catholic Faith and Bothwell became a practicing Roman Catholic.On her way back to Edinburgh, Mary was escorted by Lord Bothwell and his men to Dunbar castle because it was becoming increasingly dangerous for the queen to remain with her "privy" council, mostly jealous Protestants who wanted to eliminate the Catholic Faith and the Catholic Monarchy in Scotland.The Protestant Lords hated her because she threatened to make concessions for Catholics, while the Catholic Lords hated her because they she had been married in the Protestant church when in fact it was more or less a "common law marriage" while she awaited a Papal Dispensation to marry Lord Darnley, who was also the great-grand child of Henry VII.The Protestant and Catholic Lords had proposed Bothwell in a marriage contract known as the "Ainslie Tavern Bond" thus making Lord Bothwell the third and last husband of Mary Stuart.There had already been threats on Mary's life such as the explosion at Kirk-O-Field which was actually intended to kill Mary and Darnley, but resulted in the death of Lord Darnley when he was strangled by one of the Protestant Douglas's