Original sentence: "My mother's two brothers, James Dunwody Bulloch and Irvine Bulloch, came to visit us shortly after the close of the war.After her death, he married Hariott Cross Foster in 1857, and they had five children.After his death in 1849, Martha Bulloch still held 31 enslaved African-Americans, according to the Slave Schedules.Bulloch married Elizabeth Caskie in 1851.Bulloch was born near Savannah, Georgia, the only child of Major James Stephens Bulloch and Hester Amarintha Elliot.He was the half-brother of a distinguished Confederate naval officer, Irvine Bulloch and of Martha "Mittie" Bulloch Roosevelt.James Dunwody Bulloch (25 June 1823 – 7 January 1901) was the Confederate States of America's chief foreign agent in Great Britain during the American Civil War.James and Martha had four children: Anna Bulloch; Martha Bulloch; Charles Irvine Bulloch, who died at age two years 9 months; and Irvine Bulloch.Martha "Mittie" Bulloch sister and mother of Theodore Roosevelt.Mittie was the mother of future U.When it was completed in 1839, the major and his family moved into Bulloch Hall.fr:James Dunwody Bulloch
Edited sentence: "My mother's two brothers, James Dunwoodie Bulloch and Irvine Bulloch, came to visit us shortly after the close of the war.After her death, he married Hariott Cross Foster in 1858, and they had five children.After his death, in 1849 Martha Bulloch still held 31 enslaved African-Americans, according to the Slave Schedules.Bulloch married Elizabeth Caskie in 1852.Bulloch was born near Savannah, Georgia, the only child of Major James Stephens Bulloch and Esther Amarintha Elliot.He was the half-brother of a distinguished Confederate naval officer, Irvine Bulloch and of Martha Bulloch Roosevelt.James Dunwoody Bulloch (25 June 1823 – 7 January 1901) was the Confederate States of America's chief foreign agent in Great Britain during the American Civil War.James and Martha had four children: Anna Bulloch; Martha Bulloch; Charles Irvine Bulloch, who died at age three; and Irvine Bulloch.Martha Bulloch sister and mother of Theodore Roosevelt.Martha was the mother of future U.When it was completed in 1842, the major and his family moved into Bulloch Hall.fr:James Dunwoody Bulloch