Original sentence: In 2006 a Fatwa issued by the Islamic Commission of Spain, and supported by Muslim leaders from various Islamic countries, which denounced him for his acts of violence and terrorism, and declared him an apostate of Islam.In conjuction with several other Islamic militants with no Islamic clerical accreditation, in 1998 bin Laden issued a politico-religious proclamation which he, and later the media, commented to be a Fatwa, or religious Islamic edict, that Muslims should kill civilians and military personnel from the United States and allied countries until they withdraw support for Israel and military forces from Islamic countries
Edited sentence: In conjuction with several other Islamic militants, in 1998 bin Laden issued what he and the media have commented to be a Fatwa, that is, a religious Islamic edict, that Muslims should kill civilians and military personnel from the United States and allied countries until they withdraw support for Israel and military forces from Islamic countries