Original sentence: A small landscaped park with a waterfall and a lighted brick walkway surrounds the monument.The Miner's Memorial in Richlands, Tazewell County, Virginia was named the "Official Coal Miner's Memorial for the Commonwealth of Virginia" on 22 June 2009
Edited sentence: A small landscaped park with a waterfall and a lighted brick walkway surrounds the monument and provides a quiet place for reflection by the viewers of the monument.The Miner's Memorial in Richlands VA, Tazewell County, was named the "Official Coal Miner's Memorial for the Commonwealth of Virginia" on 22 June 2009, a singular honor for southwestern Virginia coal miners