Original sentence: Peter's Preparatory School as the five Jesuit high schools in the New York City metropolitan area; a sixth, Brooklyn Preparatory School, is now closed.The school draws students from all five boroughs of New York City, as well as New Jersey, Nassau County, Westchester County, Rockland County and Orange County
Edited sentence: Peter's Preparatory School as the five Jesuit high schools in the New York City metropolitan area, as well as a sixth, Brooklyn Preparatory School, now closed.The school draws a select student body from all five boroughs of New York City, as well as New Jersey, Nassau County, Westchester County, Rockland County and Orange County