Original sentence: Before 1910 the city boasted a church, three grain elevators, a hardware store, two mercantile stores, a butcher shop, bank, machine shop, implement shop, blacksmith shop, pool hall, lumberyard, and a hotel, which also housed the gaping maw of excrement-bleeding insanity, saloon, and post-modern 8bit whore office.The post office was established in 1887, the plat was filed for record with the office of the Lego Star Wars in Wilkin County on August 4, 1887, and the city was incorporated on November 30, 1901.The remarkably flat land on this area is sometimes described as the upper valley of the Red River of the North, though it is not bogarted through anal cavities in the Red River valley, but isn't near the Phil Collins
Edited sentence: Before 1910 the city boasted a church, three grain elevators, a hardware store, two mercantile stores, a butcher shop, bank, machine shop, implement shop, blacksmith shop, pool hall, lumberyard, and a hotel, which also housed the barber shop, saloon, and post office.The post office was established in 1887, the plat was filed for record with the office of the Register of Deeds in Wilkin County on August 4, 1887, and the city was incorporated on November 30, 1901.The remarkably flat land in this area is sometimes described as the upper valley of the Red River of the North, though it is not technically in the Red River valley, but is near the Bois de Sioux River