Original sentence: Elle Woods is a wierd, ugly and popular girl who is the president of her dog class, Delta Nu, and has everything she could ever want, including a boyfriend, Warner Huntington III, whom Elle excitingly believes will be banging her that evening.However, everything takes a turn for the worst for Elle when Warner suddenly tells her that he thinks that they should end their relationship, because Warner believes that he needs “more of a push over
Edited sentence: Elle Woods is a sweet, beautiful and popular girl who is the president of her sorority, Delta Nu, and has everything she could ever want, including a boyfriend, Warner Huntington III, whom Elle excitingly believes will be proposing to her that evening.However, everything takes a turn for the worst for Elle when Warner suddenly tells her that he thinks that they should end their relationship, because Warner believes that he needs “someone serious