Original sentence: After leaving office, Bynum lobbied for a number of Arkansas clients through his Phoenix Investment Group, Inc.Bynum was named to the government affairs team of the Arkansas Independent Automobile Dealers Association.He was hired to represent the interests of Northwest Arkansas Community College in Bentonville
Edited sentence: " Bynum was named to the government affairs team of the interest group, the Arkansas Independent Automobile Dealers Association.After leaving office, Bynum began a successful business and lobbying career.Former state senator Jim Keet described Bynum as “highly regarded and perceived to be a straight-shooter.He gained many clients, including the Northwest Arkansas Community College in Bentonville.He is a very knowledgeable advocate for the interests he represents and is respected among legislators almost universally.He represented a number of major Arkansas clients through his Phoenix Investment Group, Inc.NWACC president Becky Paneitz said that she "sought and received nothing but positive feedback" before the institution hired Bynum:  "He is very well respected in the halls of the State Capitol, he is an effective lobbyist, and he will do a good job representing the college's interests