Original sentence: Characteristics of the Brownsville Revival movement, as with other Christian religious revivals, included acts of repentance by parisheners and a call to holiness, said to be inspired by the manifestation of the Holy Spirit.Evangelist Steve Hill was the guest speaker for that day, having been invited by Pastor John Kilpatrick.It was claimed  that hundreds of those who attended services that day were moved to renew their faith during Hill's sermon, said to be moved by the Holy Spirit
Edited sentence: Characteristics of the movement included repentance, a call to holiness and manifestations of the Holy Spirit.Pastor John Kilpatrick had invited evangelist Steve Hill to be the guest speaker for the day, and while Hill was ministering, the Holy Spirit began to manifest His power and that hundreds of people came to faith in Christ