Original sentence: Aurangabad got its name from one of the king of Mughal dynasty ,Aurangzeb.Fort of Ser Sha Suri, the Mughal king near Sasaram attracts historain and visitors.The Magadh region was one of the oldest and strongest empires of the world in the Ancient period and its boundaries (600-250 BC) spread across to parts of the (now present) countries of Burma, Pakistan, Indonesia, Sri Lanka & Bangladesh, apart from India.This was the region about Megasthenes (3rd Century BC), a Greek writer, traveller and scholar wrote with much awe and inspiration about his empire and the people.the blocks ; Daudnagar ,Dev & kutumba are great historical place.where daudnagar is surrounded by Qila's (Forts) of mughal era , Dev is having Historical temple of Lord Sun which attracts a lot of devotees from all over india & Kutumba is related with one of king who was not expended its ruling area in more broader way
Edited sentence: Aurangabad got its name from one of the kings of the Mughal dynasty.Aurangzeb;the blocks; Daudnagar;Dev and Kutumba are great historical places.The Magadh region was one of the oldest and strongest empires of the world in the Ancient period and its boundaries (600-250 BC) spread across to parts of the (now present) countries of Burma, Pakistan, Indonesia, Sri Lanka and Bangladesh, apart from India.The fort of Ser Sha Suri, the Mughal king near Sasaram attracts historain and visitors.This was the region about which Megasthenes (3rd Century BC), a Greek writer, traveller and scholar wrote with much awe and inspiration about his empire and the people.Whilst daudnagar is surrounded by Qila's (Forts) of mughal era, Dev has a historical temple of Lord Sun which attracts a lot of devotees from all over India and Kutumba is related with one of king who was not expended its ruling area in more broader way