Original sentence: According to ABC News, the conclusion of an MSNBC non-scientific on-line survey was that Ron Paul appeared to win the debate, which they attributed to supporters' viral marketing skills.In the six part MSNBC debate vote Paul with over 40% came in ahead of the other candidates with the highest positives and lowest negatives of the top 4 candidates, out of approximately 70,000 votes per May 9.On May 9, 2007 "Ron Paul" was listed as the #1 top Internet search term by Technorati.Ron Paul participated along with nine other Republican presidential candidates in the Ronald Reagan Presidential Library's 2008 Republican Presidential Candidates Debate on May 3, 2007 sponsored by MSNBC.The C-SPAN debate vote had similar results with over 70 percent casting their votes for Paul
Edited sentence: According to ABC News, the conclusion of an MSNBC non-scientific on-line surveywas that Ron Paul appeared to win the debate, which they attributed to supporters' viral marketing skills.In the six part MSNBC debate vote Paul with over 40% came in way out in front and far ahead of the pack with the highest positives and lowest negatives of the top 4 candidates, out of approximately 70,000 votes per May 9.Individuals can join the grass root's cause and make contributions via this web site.Per May 9, 2007 "Ron Paul" was listed as the #1 top Internet search term by Technorati.Ron Paul participated (along with nine other Republican presidential candidates) in the Ronald Reagan Presidential Library's 2008 Republican Presidential Candidates Debate on May 3, 2007 sponsored by MSNBC.Ron Paul, M.The C-SPAN debate vote had similar results with over 70 percent casting their votes for Dr.The official campaign web site is