Original sentence: It is not a University facility at all but a municipal sports arena whose naming rights were bought by UOP for advertising purposes.The 73,000-capacity University of Phoenix Stadium in Glendale, Arizona is a multipurpose retractable dome best known as the home of the NFL's Arizona Cardinals and the site of the NCAA's Tostitos Fiesta Bowl
Edited sentence: A multipurpose retractable dome best known as the home of the NFL's Arizona Cardinals and the site of the NCAA's Tostitos Fiesta Bowl, it is not a University facility at all, but rather a municipal sports arena whose naming rights were bought by UOP for advertising purposes.The 73,000-capacity University of Phoenix Stadium in Glendale, Arizona is a rather unusually named sports facility