Original sentence: "Many people believe that the general use of the term 'man' is offensive, or at least inaccurate.Although reading history as if every use of 'man' or 'he' was a deliberate insult to women is probably excessive," some people seek alternatives.Phrases like 'no man is an island' or 'every man for himself' seem to exclude women
Edited sentence: Although reading history as if every use of "man" or "he" was a deliberate insult to women is probably excessive, today's culture is said to call for alternatives.Many people believe that the general use of the term "man" is offensive, or at least inaccurate.Phrases like "no man is an island" or "every man for himself" seem to exclude women