Original sentence: Asan ( ) is the main market center in Kathmandu valley.Asan is center to the Newar cultural festivities, specially the Tuladhars who form the majority of Newars residing at Asan.Asan is the historical,cultural, religious and commercial center of Kathmandu.Asan is well known as the market place for commodities ranging from daily grocery(vegetables) to special spices used during festivals
Edited sentence: Asan ( ) an ancient bazaar is the historical,cultural, religious and commercial center of Kathmandu Valley.Asan is well known as the bazaar for commodities ranging from daily grocery(vegetables) to special spices used during festivals.The Tuladhars form the majority of Newars residing at Asan