Original sentence: As the film begins,General Eugene Irwin (Robert Redford) is sent to a maximum security military prison for his decision to send U.troops to Burundi, Africa in violation of a presidential order resulting in the death of eight soldiers
Edited sentence: As the film begins,General Eugene Irwin (Robert Redford) is arriving at a maximum security military prison, to being a ten year incarceration for his decision in violation of a presidential order to send U.troops to Burundi, Africa, resulting in the death of eight soldiers