Original sentence: The Twelve men, all of whom have been nominated by their respective girlfriends, initially think they are taking part in a competition for the title of "Mr.Tool Academy 2 is a competitive reality television show featuring nine "unsuspecting bad boys" who have been sent to "relationship boot camp"
Edited sentence: The men, all of whom have been nominated by their respective girlfriends, initially think they are taking part in a competition for the title of "Mr.Tool Academy 2 is a competitive reality television show featuring twelve "unsuspecting bad boys" who have been sent to "relationship boot camp"