Original sentence: Following her debut success in the U.in late 2005, singer-songwriter Chantal Chamandy—a longtime resident of Montreal who was born on the Nile in Alexandria, Egypt—is bringing her uptempo sounds to the U
Edited sentence: Following her resounding debut success in the U.in late 2005, singer-songwriter Chantal Chamandy—a longtime resident of Montreal who was born on the Nile in Alexandria, Egypt--is bringing her sensual uptempo sounds to the U