Original sentence: He is considered a decadent poet, although he perhaps professed to more vice than he actually indulged in, a fact which Oscar Wilde notably and acerbically commented upon.His mastery of vocabulary, rhyme and metre arguably put him among the most talented English language poets in history, although but his work has also been criticized for its florid style and arbitrary word choice to fit the rhyme scheme rather than contribute to the meaning of the piece
Edited sentence: He is considered a decadent poet, albeit that he professed to perhaps rather more vice than he actually indulged in, a fact which Oscar Wilde notably and acerbically commented upon.His vocabulary, rhyme and metre arguably make him one of the best poets of the English language; but his poetry has been criticized as overly flowery and meaningless, choosing words to fit the rhyme rather than to contribute towards meaning