Original sentence: Carl Thompson is a renowned instrument-builder who specializes in custom instruments of all kinds.He has handcrafted basses for Les Claypool, the bass player of Primus.This article is a stub.You can help Wikipedia by fixing it
Edited sentence: Carl Thompson is an instrument-builder of reknown, who specializes in making all sorts of custom made instruments.He has handcrafted basses for Les Claypool, The bass player of Primus.This is a stub article; you can help Wikipedia by improving it