Original sentence: September 17 - The New York Stock Exchange reopens following the attacks in New York.September 21 - Sports return to New York for the first time since the attacks with the New York Mets/Atlanta Braves game at Shea Stadium
Edited sentence: September 17 - The New York Stock Exchange reopens following the terrorist attacks in New York.September 21 - Sports return to New York for the first time since the terrorist attacks with the New York Mets/Atlanta Braves game at Shea Stadium