Original sentence: Consideration of the songs for TV and film have been coming in and a national tour and album are on the way as of April 2009.Her new band, the MojoWire has begun headlining shows in the LA area due to the overwhelming response to the four demos posted on MySpace in 2008 (www.In addition to Starpool, Brian Mashburn plays guitar for Power Serge and PopBritannica.You can see Powell in her new band "The Mojo Wire" , she has stated that the "Mojo Wire is nothing like Save Ferris", but "...still so much fun.com/mojowiremusic)
Edited sentence: Consideration of the songs for TV and film have been coming in and a national tour and album were planned in April 2009.Her new band, The Mojo Wire began headlining shows in the LA area after an overwhelming response to the four demos posted on MySpace in 2008.In addition to Starpool, Brian Mashburn plays guitar for [[[Power Serge][ and PopBritannica.Powell later joined the band "The Mojo Wire".She has stated that the "Mojo Wire is nothing like Save Ferris", but "still so much fun"