Original sentence: " He is the medical adviser for The Grace Charity for M.He has stated his concerns over initial studies that concluded miscarriages and children with physical abnormalities are more common in pregnacies of wives and partners of male Gulf war veterans than those not sent to the region.He is best known for his advocacy on behalf of Gulf War syndrome, chronic fatigue syndrome, and autism patients.Hooper served on the General Synod of the Church of England between 1970 and 1980 and he continues to be a Christian lay preacher.Hooper states that soldiers were harmed by exposure to depleted uranium during the war, and that the British Ministry of Defence does not take Gulf War syndrome seriously.In 2002, The Guardian reported on what it called a "bitter feud" between pro-organic disease advocates such as Hooper, De Merleir and Komaroff and pro-functional somatic syndrome advocates such as Professor Simon Wessely over the nature of the illness and whether there is or is not an ongoing pathological process.Malcolm Hooper is Chief Scientific Advisor to the British Gulf Veterans Association.Malcolm Hooper is a British biochemist and emeritus professor of medicinal chemistry at the University of Sunderland.and has authored an academic review on the subject which was published in the Journal of Clinical Pathology
Edited sentence: " As a CFS activist, he is the medical adviser for The Grace Charity for M.He feels the British Ministry of Defence does not take the alleged Gulf War syndrome seriously.He is best known for his activism related to Gulf War syndrome, chronic fatigue syndrome, and autism.In 2002, The Guardian reported on what it called a "vendetta" by Hooper and other activists against chronic fatigue syndrome expert Simon Wessely over the physiological, social, and psychological components of the illness.Malcolm Hooper is a former British biochemist and emeritus professor of medicinal chemistry at the University of Sunderland.Malcolm Hooper is a medical advisor to British Gulf veterans who has alleged that deformed children were born to British Gulf veterans and that soldiers were harmed by exposure to depleted uranium.and published an academic review on the subject