Original sentence: It is most prominently represented by the Church of Scientology, claimed by its critics to be a commercial organization with a long history of defending its teachings by use of copyright and trade secret law, and sometimes using high pressure sales techniques to extract money from its members.See also: Scientology controversy.The nature of Scientology is hotly debated in many countries, regardless of the official position.com - Article from The New York Times on Tom Cruise and his involvement with the church, March 22, 2005
Edited sentence: It is most prominently represented by the Church of Scientology.Scientology controversy.The nature of Scientology is hotly debated in many countries, regardless of official statements