Original sentence: In April 2008, Evian created the Evian Water Protection Institute to work on three water and wetlands management projects with the Ramsar Convention.” Evian feels that the environment is very important as well, and they have taken steps to preserve its health by establishing three new environmental initiatives that pertain to wetland and water management, recycled plastic, and encouraging consumers to recycle
Edited sentence: ”  In April 2008, Evian created the Evian Water Protection Institute to work on three water and wetlands management projects with the Ramsar Convention