Original sentence: " 32% of Canadians responded that they believe abortion should be legal in all circumstances, 52% that it should be legal in certain circumstances, and 14% that it should be legal in no circumstances.Canada: A recent poll of Canadians, conducted in April 2005 by Gallup, found that  52% of those polled want abortion laws to "remain the same," 20% want the laws to be "less strict," and 24% would prefer that the laws become "more strict
Edited sentence: " 32% of Canadians responded that they believe abortion should be legal in all circumstances (a shy comparison to the 52% in the Gallup poll who felt the same way), 52% that it should be legal in certain circumstances, and 14% that it should be legal in no circumstances.Canada: A recent poll of Canadians, conducted in April 2005 by Gallup, found that  52% of those polled want abortion laws to "remain the same" (no restrictions), 20% want the laws to be "less strict," and 24% would prefer that the laws become "more strict