Original sentence: Steven Langdon, professor of Anthropology, University of Alaska, Anchorage.Trajan has travled with his father, on many anthropological trips within southeastern Alaska, his father studied the Tlingit of Alaska
Edited sentence: His father studied the Tlingit of Alaska.Steven Langdon, professor of anthropology at the University of Alaska, Anchorage.Trajan has traveled with his father on many anthropological trips within southeastern Alaska