Original sentence: Afternoon: Shoeburyness High School, ASDA North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Ashingdon Schools, Golden Cross Post Office, Rochford East Street, Southend Airport Warners Bridge, Hobleythick Lane (for Southend Hospital), Civic Centre Victoria Avenue, Southend Travel Centre, Shoeburyness High School, ASDA North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown
Edited sentence: Afternoon: Shoeburyness High School, Asda North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown.Ashingdon Schools, Golden Cross Post Office, Rochford East Street, Southend Airport Warners Bridge, Hobleythick Lane (for Southend Hospital), Civic Centre Victoria Avenue, Southend Travel Centre, Shoeburyness High School, Asda North Shoebury, Shoeburyness Renown