Original sentence: On September 4, 1829, two days after the signing of a peace treaty that ended the war, Madatov died from a pulmonary disease, which was sharply aggravated as a result of the burdens of marching during the war
Edited sentence: On September 4, 1829, two days after the signing of a peace treaty that ended the war, Madatov passed away from a pulmonary disease, which was sharply aggravated as a result of the burdens of marching during the war