Original sentence: Disappointing sales and reviews, and a tour with disappointing turn out ensued, and in 2002, a disappointed Ian Astbury ended The Cult once more, when an offer to sing with The Doors came his way
Edited sentence: Dissapointing sales, dissapointing reviews, and a tour with dissapointing turn out ensued, and in 2002, a dissapointed Ian Astbury ended The Cult once more, when an offer to sing with The Doors came his way