Original sentence: Factory worker 18-year-old Martin Denham, who was said to have a mental age of 13, committed suicide five days after the programme aired.He left a note reading "if there are ghosts I will be ... with you always as a ghost"
Edited sentence: 18-year-old Factory worker Martin Denham, who apparently had a mental age of 13, committed suicide five days after the programme aired.He left a suicide note reading "if there are ghosts I will be ... with you always as a ghost"