Original sentence: Following this, Sanaya graduated from Sydenham College and considered pursuing an MBA degree but instead became a model.She is known for her roles in the television serials Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon.While she was born and raised as a Mumbaikar, Sanaya is of Persian descent
Edited sentence: Following this, Sanaya graduated from the famous Sydenham College and wanted to pursue an MBA degree but upon her mothers advice, she entered the glamour world with ads and modelling.She is famous for her popular roles in television serials Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon.While she was born and raised as a Mumbaikar, Sanaya is of the Persian descent