Original sentence: The foundation has come under criticism from various pro-life groups over its monetary contributions to organizations focusing on family planning, such as donations to Planned Parenthood in excess of $34 million over the years , an organization in which Bill Gates' father, William H
Edited sentence: The foundation has come under fire from various pro-life groups over its relatively significant monetary contributions to organizations in the abortion industry , such as donations to Planned Parenthood in excess of $34 million over the years , an organization in which Bill Gates' father, William H