Original sentence: It has an up market restaurant, called "Burlingtons" (owned by Bruce M Westwood),and also an Indian restaurant called "The Gate of Bengal", which was formerly the "Bay Tree" restaurant, having been converted from a pub called "The Golden Ball"
Edited sentence: It has an up market restaurant, called "Burlingtons", and also an Indian restaurant called "The Gate of Bengal", which was formerly the "Bay Tree" restaurant, having been converted from a pub called "The Golden Ball"