Original sentence: Candid photography, though, isn't reserved for hobbyists.Candids are the kinds of pictures taken at childrens' birthday parties and on Christmas morning, opening the presents; the pictures a wedding photographer takes at the reception, of people dancing, eating, and socializing with other guests.It could be argued that candid photography is the purest form of photojournalism
Edited sentence: Candid photography, though, isn't reserved for amateur shutterbugs or hobbyists.Candids are the kinds of pictures we take at our childrens birthday parties and on Christmas morning, opening the presents; the pictures a wedding photographer takes at the reception, of people dancing, eating, and socializing with other guests.Indeed, candid photography is really the purest form of photojournalism