Original sentence: KRV is noted for its protests regarding the Kaveri River Water Dispute, insistence on job quotas in IT companies for the native, Kannada-speaking population of Karnataka state in conformance with the Sarojini Mahishi report  and demonstrations against the release of non-Kannada films on the same day as Kannada films during the days when the Kannada film industry was ailing in Karnataka
Edited sentence: KRV is noted for its protests regarding the Kaveri River Water Dispute, insistence on job quotas in IT companies for the native, Kannada-speaking population of Karnataka state  and demonstrations against the screening of non-Kannada films in Karnataka