Original sentence: Music school (formerly Junior School) has two main teaching rooms, a hall and 4 smaller individual teaching rooms, used for individual music lessons.The eating area, able to stand all weather conditions, is situated close to the tuck shop
Edited sentence: Music school has two main teaching rooms, a hall and 4 smaller individual teaching rooms, used for individual music lessons.The eating area, able to stand all weather conditions, is just what the pupils need and is seen as a modern canteen area, as it is situated a stone throw away from the ultra healthy, sleek, cafè