Original sentence: In 16th century Spain, Grand Inquisitor Silecio (Stephen McHattie) demonizes the Spanish queen Queen Isabella (Weisz) as a heretic.Maya warriors attack the conquistadors, and Tomas's men are killed in battle.Seeing the wound heal, Tomas drinks the sap, only to collapse and have leaves and flowers bursting from his body, burying him beside the tree.The conquistador finds the Tree of Life and extracts sap to apply to his abdominal wound.The future Tom finally passes into the heart of the nebula and enters Xibalba at peace with his imminent death as the star explodes and the tree blooms once more.The present day Tommy is seen planting a tree seed over Izzi's grave
Edited sentence: Encouraged, Tomas drinks the sap, collapsing seconds later as leaves and flowers burst from his body.Entering Xibalba, Tommy is at peace with his imminent death.Extracting its sap, he applies it to his abdominal wound.He lay buried beside the tree until the future Tomas finally passes into the heart of the nebula.In 16th century Spain, Grand Inquisitor Silecio (Stephen McHattie) demonizes the Spanish queen Queen Isabella (Weisz) as a heretic (ironically, he himself is a Manichaean heretic).Maya warriors attack the conquistadors, and Tomas's men are killed attempting to flee the battle.The conquistador finds the Tree of Life.The loop is closed and the story ends as present day Tommy plants the seed, that will become the tree, over Izzi's grave.The sap quickly heals the wound.The star within the nebula explodes and the tree blooms once more