Original sentence: " and (2) "The greatest inward danger of man is his giving way to contempt as a means of establishing his own personality.Aesthetic Realism is the philosophy founded in 1941 by Eli Siegel.Its teachers and students describe it as a new way of seeing the arts, the social sciences, and the self.Opponents have compared it to a cult.The poem “Hot Afternoons Have Been in Montana” ([1924) is also an early form of the Aesthetic Realism way of seeing the world.Two of its principle ideas are: (1) "The deepest desire of every person is to like the world on an honest basis
Edited sentence: " and (2) "The greatest inward danger of humanity is giving way to contempt as a means of establishing one's own personality.Aesthetic Realism is a philosophical movement founded by Eli Siegel.Critics have compared it to a cult.Promoters call it a new way of seeing the arts, the social sciences, and the self.The poem “Hot Afternoons Have Been in Montana” (1924) is also an early form of the Aesthetic Realism way of seeing the world.Two of its principal ideas are: (1) "The deepest desire of every person is to like the world on an honest basis