Original sentence: -built but poorly manned fleet.For almost two hours before withdrawing, McDougal sank one Japanese vessel and severely damaged the other two, along with some forty Japanese casualties, while the Wyoming suffered extensive damage with fourteen crew dead or wounded.frigate USS Wyoming under Captain McDougal sailed into the strait and single-handedly engaged the U
Edited sentence: -built but poorly manned rebel fleet.For almost two hours before withdrawing, McDougal sank one enemy vessel and severely damaged the other two, along with some forty Japanese casualties, while the Wyoming suffered extensive damage with fourteen crew dead or wounded.frigate USS Wyoming under Captain McDougal himself sailed into the strait and single-handedly engaged the U