Original sentence: Adrianne Curry, model (America's Next Top Model, The Surreal Life).Ann Nesby, Grammy award-winning vocalist, Sounds of Blackness Gospel ensemble.Charlie Adams, drummer (Chameleon, Yanni), ASA Spokesman.Daniel Ruettiger, college football player, motivational speaker, of whom the movie Rudy was written.Roger Powell - basketball player (Utah Jazz).Scott Spiezio, baseball player.Tamara Siuda, founder of Kemetic Orthodoxy, a religion under the name House of Netjer.Tyler Christopher, actor (General Hospital)
Edited sentence: Adrianne Curry, model/television personality who appeared in "America's Next Top Model" and "The Surreal Life".Ann Nesby, Two-time Grammy award-winning vocalist, member of the Sounds of Blackness Gospel ensemble.Daniel Ruettiger, college football player, motivational speaker, the movie Rudy was about him.Notre Dame.Roger Powell - Professional Basketball player for the Utah Jazz.Scott Spiezio, Famous Baseball Player.Sue Bruno, former Dean of Students Joliet Catholic Academy, rector Univ.Tamara Siuda Founder of Kemetic Orthodoxya religion under the name House of Netjer.Tyler Christopher, an American actor, currently on the soap opera General Hospital as Nikolas Cassidine