Original sentence: In this sense, the term "acoustic mode" would be more accurate.The acoustic scale appears sporadically in the works of Debussy and Ravel (Tymoczko 1997), as well as in the works of recent composers such as Steve Reich (see, in particular, the Desert Music)
Edited sentence: In this sense, the term "altered mode" would be more accurate.The altered scale appears sporadically in the works of Debussy and Ravel (Tymoczko 1997), as well as in the works of recent composers such as Steve Reich (see, in particular, the Desert Music)