Original sentence: Critics accused the report of bias, stated that the members of the Comitee who worked on the report were supporters of the sex industry, and thus not neutral, and that in reality the situation was worse than presented in the report.The most recent Human Rights Report on New Zealand (released on February 25, 2009) states that "Illegal commercial sexual exploitation of children remained a problem", and describes several cases involving the prostitution of minors, which have occured both on the streets and inside brothels.They declared that the decriminalization of brothels and pimping had negative efects, increased criminal activities, and wasn't succesful in achieveing its goals
Edited sentence: Critics accused the report of bias, stated that the members of the Committee who worked on the report were supporters of the sex industry, and thus not neutral, and that in reality the situation was worse than presented in the report.The most recent Human Rights Report on New Zealand (released on February 25, 2009) states that "Illegal commercial sexual exploitation of children remained a problem", and describes several cases involving the prostitution of minors, which have occurred both on the streets and inside brothels.They declared that the decriminalization of brothels and pimping had negative effects, increased criminal activities, and wasn't successful in achieveing its goals