Original sentence: Bruce is then shown waking up years later from his nightmare of the events as prisoner in an unnamed Asian country.That night, at Bruce's 30th birthday party, he is confronted by his enemy - Henri Ducard, who reveals himself to be the real Ra's Al Ghul, and has now arrived in Gotham personally to destroy the city - he has conspired with Crane to poison Gotham's water supply with the toxin, vaporizing it with a stolen device from Wayne Enterprises.When Bruce is 22, Joe Chill is murdered immediately after agreeing to testify against mob boss Carmine Falcone
Edited sentence: At 24, Bruce wakes up years later from his nightmare of the events as prisoner in an unnamed Asian country.That night, at Bruce's birthday party, he is confronted by his enemy - Henri Ducard, who reveals himself to be the real Ra's Al Ghul, and has now arrived in Gotham personally to destroy the city - he has conspired with Crane to poison Gotham's water supply with the toxin, vaporizing it with a stolen device from Wayne Enterprises.When Bruce is 18, Joe Chill is murdered immediately after agreeing to testify against mob boss Carmine Falcone