Original sentence: Police Chief: Steve Parent (Interim).The Alpena News is the daily newspaper of record for much of northeastern lower peninsula of  Michigan.The City is on Tawas Bay, Michigan, and Tawas Point State Park is nearby, which is considered to be an especially good locale for birding
Edited sentence: Police Chief: Steve Parent (interim).The Alpena News is the daily newspaper of record for much of northeastern Lower Peninsula of  Michigan.The city is on Tawas Bay, Michigan, and Tawas Point State Park is nearby, which is considered to be an especially good locale for birding