Original sentence: Andrew Jackson (March 15, 1767 – June 8, 1845) was an American soldier and statesman who served as the seventh president of the United States from 1829 to 1837.Andrew Jackson was born on March 15, 1767, in the Waxhaws region of the Carolinas
Edited sentence: Andrew Jackson (March 15, 1767 – June 8, 1845) was an American military hero and statesman who served as the seventh president of the United States from 1829 to 1837.Andrew Jackson was born on March 15, 1767, in the Waxhaws region of North and South Carolina