Original sentence: Cruach nan Capull is a mountain within the Arrochar Alps, near Loch Fyne.It is located at NS0797 (55°58'N;5°3'W).It is located in the region of Argyll and Bute, Scotland, UK.It stands on the southern side of Hell's Glen.It's height is 611m (2005ft)
Edited sentence: Cruach nan Capull is a mountain within the Arrochar Alps, near Loch Fyne, Argyll and Bute, Scotland.It stands on the southern side of Hell's Glen and rises to a height of 611m (2005ft)