Original sentence: Milloy's close financial and organizational ties to tobacco and oil companies have been the subject of criticism from a number of sources, as Milloy has consistently criticized the science linking secondhand smoke to health risks and human activity to global warming.com and runs the Web site junkscience
Edited sentence: Milloy's close financial and organizational ties to tobacco and oil companies have been the subject of criticism from a number of sources, as Milloy has consistently attacked the science linking secondhand smoke to health risks and human activity to global warming.com and runs the Web site Junkscience