Original sentence: Blatchington Mill School, formed in 1979 from the Hove County Grammar School, Knoll Boys School and Nevill Secondary School, lies in the centre of West Blatchington.The British village of West Blatchington is often seen as subsumed in the shadow of its larger neighbour Hangleton.The area grew rapidly in the inter-war period, but unlike Hangleton it had more infrastructure, with St Peter's church, a working farm, a windmill and the proto-industrial area grouped around the Goldstone pumping station and its workers' cottages.The school's band "The Millstones" has toured to Germany and the USA, as well as playing at events in the UK.While it does have a similar landscape (a downland dip-slope parish lying north of Hove) West Blatchington has some more substantial and immediately noticeable buildings as its core
Edited sentence: Blatchington Mill School, formed in 1979 from the Hove County Grammar School, Knoll Boys School and Nevill Secondary School, lies in the centre of West Blatchington and boasts success in many areas, especially the arts.But while it does have a similar landscape (a Downland dip-slope parish lying north of Hove) West Blatchington has some more substantial and immediately noticeable buildings as its core.It grew rapidly in the inter-war period, but unlike Hangleton it had more infrastructure, with St Peters church, a working farm, a windmill and the proto-industrial area grouped around the Goldstone pumping station and its workers' cottages.The area is one of quiet suburban respectability.The school's band "The Millstones" has toured to Germany and the USA, as well as playing at prestigious events in the UK.West Blatchington is often seen as subsumed in the shadow of its larger neighbour Hangleton