Original sentence: According to Raëlian beliefs, on the morning of December 13, 1973 (Julian Date 2442029), Claude Vorilhon — who was at the time a professional test driver for the Autopop Magazine which he founded as an automobile journalist — had a first meeting with an extraterrestrial humanoid, an Eloha (plural: Elohim), who landed a UFO within an inactive volcano called Puy de Lassolas near the capital of Auvergne, France (Clermont-Ferrand)
Edited sentence: In the morning of December 13, 1973 (Julian Date 2442029), Claude Vorilhon—who was at the time a professional test driver for the Autopop Magazine which he founded as an automobile journalist—had a first meeting with an extraterrestrial humanoid, an Eloha (plural: Elohim), who landed a UFO within an inactive volcano called Puy de Lassolas near the capital of Auvergne, France (Clermont-Ferrand)