Original sentence: In this usage, it is a synonym of such terms as LGBT or lesbigay and carries the connotatian of being oppressed merely for being who they are.Queer is an inclusive term for people of an unorthodox sexual orientation or gender identity, such as gay men, lesbians, bisexuals, and transgendered people
Edited sentence: In this usage, it is a synonym of such terms as LGBT or lesbigay.Queer is an inclusive term for people who are oppressed due to their sexual orientation or gender identity, such as gay men, lesbians, bisexuals, and transgendered people