Original sentence: " It was called "Save Our Children," the start of an organized opposition to gay rights that spread across the nation, and the beginning of what came to be known as the religious right.In 2004, a federal appellate court upheld Florida’s anti-gay adoption law against a constitutional challenge.These rationales are heavily disputed both by the American Psychological Association and by the American Psychiatric Association as being false
Edited sentence: " She did.In fact, in 2004, a federal appellate court upheld Florida’s anti-gay adoption law against a constitutional challenge.It was called "Save Our Children," the start of an organized opposition to gay rights that spread across the nation, and the beginning of what came to be known as the religious right