Original sentence: Earning the distinction of College of the Year 2000 by TIME magazine and The Princeton Review, roughly half of the university's students volunteer in community-service programs in neighborhoods around campus and throughout Los Angeles
Edited sentence: Roughly half of the university's students volunteer in community-service programs in neighborhoods around campus and throughout Los Angeles.USC's role in making visible and sustained improvements in the crime-plagued neighborhoods surrounding both the University Park and Health Sciences campuses earned it the distinction of College of the Year 2000 by TIME magazine and The Princeton Review