Original sentence: After her boyfriend, Mike Toddwell (Bradley Whitford), cancels their anniversary date, 17-year-old Chris Parker (Elisabeth Shue) volunteers to babysit for the Andersons, 15-year-old Brad (Keith Coogan) and his younger sister Sara (Maia Brewton).Bleak stops inadvertently on the floor of the party, and his second in command Graydon (John Davis Chandler) discovers Sara and attempts to climb outside with her as she dangles precariously on the glass side.But enroute to Dawson's garage, he gets a call that his wife is cheating on him, and he diverts violently to his home.She is spotted by the head car thief Bleak (Ron Canada) who then proceed to chase her to the Smurfit-Stone Building office building that her parents are due to have a party
Edited sentence: After her boyfriend, Mike Toddwell (Bradley Whitford), cancels their anniversary date, 17-year-old Chris Parker (Elisabeth Shue) reluctantly volunteers to babysit for the Andersons, 15-year-old Brad (Keith Coogan) and his younger sister Sara (Maia Brewton).Bleak stops inadvertently on the floor of the party, and his second in command Graydon (Ron Canada) discovers Sara and attempts to climb outside with her as she dangles precariously on the glass side.But enroute to Dawson's garage, he gets a call on his CB that his wife is cheating on him, and he diverts violently to his home.She is spotted by the head car thief Bleak (John Davis Chandler) who then proceed to chase her to the Smurfit-Stone Building office building that her parents are due to have a party