Original sentence: " when non-Christians were killed.The packages were slated to include copies of Left Behind: Eternal Forces, which The Nation responded to by posting a blog entry claiming that the game included "kill or convert" violence against non-Christians and that characters shouted "Praise the Lord
Edited sentence: " when non-Christians are killed.The packages were slated to include copies of Left Behind: Eternal Forces, which The Nation responded to by posting a blog entry citing that the game included "kill or convert" violence against non-Christians, and characters shouting "Praise the Lord