Original sentence: In this sitcom, she played a charming and bubbly woman named Fran Fine who casually became the nanny of Margaret "Maggie", Brighton, Brighton Sheffield and Grace Sheffield; with her wit and her charm, she endeared herself to their widower father Maxwell Sheffield, a stuffy, composed, proper British gentleman and a Broadway producer (played by British actor Charles Shaughnessy)
Edited sentence: In this sitcom, she played a charming and bubbly woman named Fran Fine who casually became the nanny of Margaret "Maggie", Brighton, and Grace Sheffield; with her wit and her charm, she endeared herself to their widower father Maxwell Sheffield, a stuffy, composed, proper British gentleman and a Broadway producer (played by British actor Charles Shaughnessy)