Original sentence: Supporters of Pinochet credit him with staving off the beginning of Communism, fighting terrorism, and for implementing Capitalist-Neoliberal market policies that laid the groundwork for rapid economic growth that continued into the 1990s.The coup, which ended a period of strained relations between the United States—which had actively sought Allende's removal—and the South American country, allowed Pinochet to implement profound Neoliberal economic reforms while at the same time  committing human rights violations both at home and abroad
Edited sentence: Supporters of Pinochet credit him with staving off what they saw as the beginning of communism, fighting terrorism, and for implementing capitalist-neoliberal market policies that laid the groundwork for rapid economic growth that continued into the 1990s.The coup, which ended a period of strained relations between the United States—which had actively sought Allende's removal—and the South American country, allowed Pinochet to implement profound neoliberal economic reforms while at the same time  committing gross human rights violations both at home and abroad