Original sentence: " He can be seen standing in a boat, fishing, when Craig rides by on his jet ski.Blake released his album, Pure BS, on May 1, 2007.He has followed up with two more number one songs and several other top 20 songs.In 2005 he toured extensively in support of the album, including a coveted opening spot on Rascal Flatts's sold-out Here's to You tour, which also featured Shelly Fairchild.On December 18 2005, several of Shelton's songs, including "Nobody But Me", appeared on the TV movie The Christmas Blessing, starring Neil Patrick Harris, Rebecca Gayheart, Angus T.The jet ski causes a large wave which splashes Blake
Edited sentence: " He can be seen standing in a boat, fishing, when Craig rides by on his Jet Ski.Blake released his new album, Pure BS, on May 1, 2007.In 2005 he toured extensively in support of the album including a coveted opening spot on Rascal Flatts's sold-out Here's to You tour which also featured Shelly Fairchild.On December 18 2005, several songs of Shelton's, including "Nobody But Me", appeared on the TV movie The Christmas Blessing, starring Neil Patrick Harris, Rebecca Gayheart, Angus T.The Jet Ski causes a large wave which splashes Blake.The following singles, however, were less successful