Original sentence: Chris Wilhjelm, was the Music Director.Due to a deeply divisive and controversial labor dispute, the Goldman Memorial Band ceased operations in the summer of 2005.Wilhjelm was opposed by some members of the band who considered him too inexperienced
Edited sentence: Chris Wilhjelm, with years of conducting experience, was the Music Director.Due to a deeply devisive and controversial labor dispute, the Goldman Memorial Band ceased operations in the summer of 2005.During his tenure he raised the standard of the band immensely.He is committed to musical excellence and providing free concerts for those who love music