Original sentence: Azra is the son of the international Kanun player, Salim Azra, who contributed to much of the success of Samy Elmaghribi  and Salim Halali
Edited sentence: Azra is the son of the renowned international Kanun player, Salim Azra, who contributed to much of the success of Samy Elmaghribi  and Salim Halali