Original sentence: Jackie's company was in danger of going bankrupt so she mergered Jackie M Boutiques and M Fashions into one company called Jackie M Designs.Nick is appalled at the relationship, beleiving that Owen is simply after Jackie's money.Owner and CEO of M Fashions (the former Spectra Fashions) (mergered with Jackie M Boutiques to form Jackie M Designs).Owner of Jackie M Boutiques (mergered with M Fashions into Jackie M Designs).When Bridget realised that Owen was planning on marrying Jackie, she told Nick, who rushed out in order to prevent the wedding from going through.When she realised Nick was in love with Brooke Logan (Katherine Kelly Lang), she was overjoyed when a paternity test revealed that Brooke was carrying Nick's baby
Edited sentence: Jackie's company was in danger of going bankrupt so she merged Jackie M Boutiques and M Fashions into one company called Jackie M Designs.Nick is appalled at the relationship, believing that Owen is simply after Jackie's money.Owner and CEO of M Fashions (the former Spectra Fashions) (merged with Jackie M Boutiques to form Jackie M Designs).Owner of Jackie M Boutiques (merged with M Fashions into Jackie M Designs).When Bridget realized that Owen was planning on marrying Jackie, she told Nick, who rushed out in order to prevent the wedding from going through.When she realized Nick was in love with Brooke Logan (Katherine Kelly Lang), she was overjoyed when a paternity test revealed that Brooke was carrying Nick's baby