Original sentence: This was commissioned by top Mobile providers like Deutch Telekom (German T mobile) and Orange with music artists -Djs and Mobile youth street teams that not only drove instant purchases of event tickets sales but also drove the sales of purchase of three different viable youth products to over 200,00 thousand end-users in 8 days
Edited sentence: This was commissioned by top Mobile providers like Deutch Telekom (German T mobile) and Orange with music artists -Djs and Mobile youth street teams that not only drove instant purchases of event tickets sales but also drove the sales of purchase of three different viable youth products to over 200,000 end-users in 8 days