Original sentence: Bill Kunkel (July 21, 1950 – September 4, 2011) was a graphic novelist, and pioneering professional wrestling and video game journalist and critic from the 1970s until his death in the early 2010s
Edited sentence: Bill Kunkel (July 21, 1950 – September 4, 2011) was a graphic novelist, and professional wrestling and video game journalist and critic from the 1970s until his death in the early 2010s