Original sentence: Being an early version, the player models were low quality and out of proportion, giving rise to being commonly described as having "peanut-heads".By the time of its official release almost two months later, Valve had eliminated numerous bugs and added several updates and patches.It is currently available in the Source Multiplayer Pack.Pre-loading of Counter-Strike: Source to cybercafe owners (as part of the Cyber Cafe program) began on 9 August 2004, being released for play two days later.The game was also bundled along with Half-Life 2 on Steam, and was sold along with the boxed retail version of that game.This was followed by the addition of the Leet and SAS player models on March 1 2006, and the GSG9 and Arctic models on April 12 2006.Valve released several successive versions of the two original characters.Vouchers for the pre-release game were available with the purchase of ATI Radeon video cards and with Counter Strike: Condition Zero; the pre-load for these users began on 16 August 2004, with the game again becoming available two days later
Edited sentence: Being an early version, the player models were low-poly and out of proportion, giving rise to the infamous "peanut-head" description.By the time of it's official release almost two months later, Valve had eliminated numerous bugs and added several updates and patches.Eager to keep their customers happy, Valve released several successive versions of the two original characters, as well as the missing models.It is now available in the Source Multiplayer Pack.Pre-loading of Counter-Strike: Source to cybercafe owners (as part of the Cyber Cafe program) began on August 9th, 2004, being released for play on August 11th.The game was also part of the Half-Life 2 bundles available on Steam and with the boxed retail version of the game.The pre-load for ATI/CZ owners began on August 16th, with the game available to play two days later.The pre-release game was also available to ATI Radeon Voucher holders and gamers who purchased Condition Zero to receive the upgrade voucher.This was followed on March 1st, 2006, with the addition of the Leet and SAS player models, and on April 12th, 2006, Valve released the last of the missing player models from Counter-Strike, the GSG9 and Arctic