Original sentence: On 16 August 2011, director Karan Johar took the Mahurat shot and Mumbai socialite Parmeshwar Godrej rolled the cameras.The external view of the school was taken from Kasiga School Dehradun, whose name was changed to St
Edited sentence: On 16 August 2011, director Karan Johar took the Mahurat shot, and famous Mumbai socialite Parmeshwar Godrej rolled the cameras.The external view of the school was taken from Kasiga School, Dehradun whose name was changed to St