Original sentence: Claude Vorilhon then allegedly meets the same Eloha he first met almost two years ago (December 13, 1973) whose spacecraft landed behind a bush.He is supposedly taken up in that spacecraft with the Eloha and sent to a remote base relatively close to the solar system where he is given a resort-style relaxation treatment.On the morning of October 8, Yahweh Elohim gives a lecture to Claude Vorilhon about his current achievement towards the foundation of MADECH, the need for geniocracy, Buddhism, and about the ideas of God and Soul.On the morning of October 9, Claude Vorilhon takes a scented bath and that soon after, Yahweh Elohim (an extraterrestrial) presents Claude Vorilhon to a machine which maximized his faculties
Edited sentence: Claude Vorilhon then meets the same Eloha he first met almost two years ago (December 13, 1973) whose spacecraft landed behind a bush.He is taken up that spacecraft with the Eloha and sent to a remote base relatively close to the solar system where he is given a resort-style relaxation treatment.In the morning of October 8, Yahweh Elohim gives a lecture to Claude Vorilhon about his current achievement towards the foundation of MADECH, the need for geniocracy, Buddhism, and about the ideas of God and Soul.In the morning of October 9, Claude Vorilhon takes a scented bath and that soon after, Yahweh Elohim (an extraterrestrial) presents Claude Vorilhon to a machine which maximized his faculties