Original sentence: The resulting sound was an innovative and compelling combination of gospel and psychedelic rock music, with loud drums, distorted electric guitar, clapping hands, and tambourines.The song's arrangement came together in the studio in San Francisco where lead guitarist Russell DaShiell, bass player, Doug Killmer and drummer Norman Mayall worked with Greenbaum
Edited sentence: The resulting sound was an innovative and compelling combination of gospel and psychedelic rock music, with loud drums, distorted electric guitar, clapping hands, tambourines, and a female gospel backing chorus.The song's arrangement came together in the studio in San Francisco where Lead Guitar player, Russell Dashiell, Bass player, Doug Killmer and Drummer, Norman Mayall combined their musical talents with Greenbaums