Original sentence: It was more warmly received whenQ Magazine gave Standing on the Shoulder of Giants 4/5 stars and the B-side to "Go Let It Out", "Lets All Make Believe", was featured in Q's top 500 lost tracks and said that if "Lets All Make Believe" were on the album "it probably would have carried the album to another star"
Edited sentence: It was more warmly received when Q Magazine gave Standing on the Shoulder of Giants 4/5 stars and the B-side to "Go Let It Out", "Lets All Make Believe", was featured in Q's top 500 lost tracks and said that if "Lets All Make Believe" were on the album "it probably would have carried the album to another star"