Original sentence: He also made an appearance on 'So You Wanna be a Popstar', hosted by Oliver Driver, and starring Katrina Hobbs.Strang was once married to Katrina Devine
Edited sentence: He also made an appearance on 'So You Wanna be a Popstar', hosted by the much more attractive and much taller Oliver Driver, and starring the even more attractive Katrina Hobbs.Strang was once married to Katrina Devine, before she realised she was far too good for him and buggered off