Original sentence: He is caught, but the stranger reveals himself to be a Keeper, who says that Garrett is gifted, for it is unusual that a Keeper be seen.He notices a person whom the crowd ignores as if he were not there, and attempts to pickpocket him.He offers Garrett a chance to leave his life behind, and enter the Keeper training.The game opens with Garrett telling of his youth spent surviving on the streets of the City
Edited sentence: Garrett is caught, but the man reveals himself to be a Keeper.He lived on the streets of the City, and was forced to steal to survive.He says that Garrett is gifted, as it is rare for one of their order to be seen, and offers him a chance to be trained as a Keeper.One night, he notices a man whom the crowd seems not to notice, and attempts to pick his pocket.The game begins with Garrett telling of his youth