Original sentence: However, in Journey Through England, Priestley identifed himself a Little Englander because he despised imperialism and the effect that the capitalist industrial revolution had on the people and environment
Edited sentence: However this is an inaccurate representation of Priestley's views; in Journey Through England Priestley identifed himself a Little Englander because he despised imperialism and the effect that the capitalist industrial revolution had on the people and environment