Original sentence: At the time of his death, he had eleven grand-children and five great-grand-children.Goldup was later transferred to the the Cleveland Barons of the AHL, playing a full season in 1946–47
Edited sentence: At the time of his death, he had eleven grandchildren and five great-grandchildren.Goldup was later transferred to the Cleveland Barons of the AHL, playing a full season in 1946–47