Original sentence: He goes back to the station where he had left Del and sees Del sitting alone at the empty Union Station, after they finally make it back to Chicago.The bond between the two men strengthens further when Neal invites him into his home for the holidays
Edited sentence: He goes back to the train station where he had left Del and sees Del sitting alone, inside an empty station, after they finally make it back to Chicago.The bond between the two men strengthens further when Neal invites him into his home for Thanksgiving