Original sentence: In May 2005, the developer enjoyed yet another massive influx of attention and interest, both positive and controversial, after the release of a real-time trailer of its upcoming Killzone sequel, Killzone 2 for the PlayStation 3, at the unveiling of the new console at Sony's press conference during the E3 video game trade show that year
Edited sentence: In May 2005, the developer enjoyed yet another massive influx of attention and interest, both positive and controversial, after the release of a pre-rendered trailer of its upcoming Killzone sequel, Killzone 2 for the PlayStation 3, at the unveiling of the new console at Sony's press conference during the E3 video game trade show that year