Original sentence: At the same time, HAES advocates espouse that sustained, large-scale weight loss is difficult to the point of effective impossibility for the majority of people, including those who are obese.Its main tenet involves rejection of the scientific consensus regarding the health effects of excessive caloric intake, a sedentary lifestyle, improper nutrition, and greater body weight.Proponents view the common wisdom that obesity is unhealthy as part of a general stigmatization of the obese, and especially of obese women; thus, the movement has strong connections with feminism.The benefits of lifestyle interventions such as nutritious eating and exercise are presumed to be real, but independent of any weight loss they may cause
Edited sentence: At the same time, HAES advocates espouse that sustained, large-scale weight loss is difficult to the point of effective impossibility through lifestyle alone for the majority of people, including those who are obese.Its main tenets involve acceptance and respect of the inherent diversity of body shapes and sizes and rejects the idealizing or pathologizing of specific weights, supporting health policies that improve access to information and services and practices that improve human well-being, acknowledging our biases and working to end weight discrimination, stigma, and bias, and promotion of eating for well-being and life-enhancing movement for all bodies.The benefits of lifestyle interventions such as nutritious eating and exercise are presumed to be real