Original sentence: "  Wilkins has performed in concerts with the EMS VCS 3 synthesizer, as used by Brian Eno of Roxy Music, and others.According to a concert review of band in the New York Times, "Wilkins succeeded in the difficult role of synthesizer wizard, originally held by the legendary Brian Eno.Lucy Wilkins is a violinist and keyboardist from Nottingham, England.She has received critical acclaim for her violin solos while touring with Roxy Music.She has toured with Roxy Music and performed with James Blunt and Snow Patrol
Edited sentence: "  Born in the 1970s, Wilkins has performed in concerts with the legendary VCS3 synth, which has been recognized for its impact on popular music and used by Pink Floyd when they recorded Dark Side of the Moon.According to the New York Times, "Wilkins succeeded in the difficult role of synthesizer wizard, originally held by the legendary Brian Eno.Lucy Wilkins is a British musician who has toured with Roxy Music and performed with other leading musicians and bands such as James Blunt and Snow Patrol.She was earned high-level critical acclaim for her violin solos while touring with Roxy Music.The Nottingham, England, native plays synthesizers, keyboards and violin