Original sentence: However only 4% of blogs on MSN Spaces are updated on a daily basis.MSN Spaces is one of the fastest growing blogging communities in the world with 4.5 million (4,500,000) blogs
Edited sentence: Launched in December 2004 the service is now competing against Google's Blogger service.MSN Spaces is one of the fastest growing blogging communities in the world with a staggering 4.5 million (4,500,000) blogs.The bad fact is that only 4% of blogs on MSN Spaces are updated on a daily basis