Original sentence: On March 8, 2006, two popular Chinese blogs shut themselves down to observe the International Women's Day and to protest their opinion that reporting on their blogs by Western media disproportionally focused on censorship
Edited sentence: On March 8, 2006, two popular Chinese blogs shut themselves down to observe the International Women's Day and to protest the fact that reporting on their blogs by Western media disproportionally focused on censorship.Wang Jianshuo, another famous Chinese blogger, was so annoyed to be manipulated to fit BBC's political agenda that he refused to comment on censorship; but his refusal was also used to support BBC's opinion