Original sentence: First Lady McKinley ordered two of the cats drowned (the ones named after the governor of Cuba and the Spanish Ambassador) when war broke out with Spain.Ida hated the color yellow, she removed nearly everything yellow from the White House, and even made the gardener cut down every yellow flower in the garden
Edited sentence: First Lady McKinley unfortunately ordered two of the cats drowned (the ones named after the governor of Cuba and the Spanish Ambassador) when war broke out with Spain.Ida hated the color yellow; she removed nearly everything yellow from the White House, and even made the gardener cut down every yellow flower in the garden