Original sentence: Bipolar disorder is a psychiatric condition defined by extreme, often inappropriate, and sometimes unpredictable moods.Some studies have suggested a significant correlation between creativity and bipolar disorder, although the relationship between the two is still very unclear
Edited sentence: Bipolar disorder is sometimes referred to by it's older name, manic-depression.Despite all the negative aspects of the disorder, studies have suggested a fascinatingly high correlation between creativity and bipolar disorder, although the relationship between the two is still very unclear (for more, see the List of people believed to have been affected by bipolar disorder).In it's most basic description, it is a psychiatric condition defined by extreme, often inappropriate, and sometimes unpredictable moods