Original sentence: Also known by fans as ST: TMP, the movie was considered by many critics and and fans as overlong and boring, with a tedious and uninspired plot.Star Trek: The Motion Picture, released in 1979 was the long-awaited first film in the Star Trek science fiction series
Edited sentence: Also known by fans as ST: TMP, the movie was considered too long and very boring.The long-awaited first movie in the Star Trek series.The plot was tedious and inispid