Original sentence: He was killed on 14 July 1865 in the notorious accident on the Matterhorn, being dragged off the north face of the mountain together with Lord Francis Douglas and Michel Croz by the rope of Douglas Hadow
Edited sentence: He was killed on 14 July 1865 in the notorious accident on the Matterhorn, being dragged off the north face of the mountain together with Lord Francis Douglas and Michel Croz by the rope of the hapless Douglas Hadow