Original sentence: "  While typically attributed to Marie Antoinette, the original source is not settled among historians.Before Antoinette ascended to the throne, some believe Jean-Jacques Rousseau used the phrase while writing about an insensitive aristocrat who offered this advice to peasants unable to afford bread.The line has also been attributed to Maria Theresa of Spain, dating it before Antoinette was born
Edited sentence: "  While typically attributed to Marie Antoinette, the actual source is not settled among historians.Before Antoinette ascended to the throne, Jean-Jacques Rousseau used the phrase while writing about an insensitive aristocrat (who offered this advice to peasants unable to afford bread).The line has also been attributed to Maria Theresa of Spain, dating it long before Antoinette was even born