Original sentence: Savarkar coined the term Hindutva (Hinduness) to create a collective "Hindu" identity as an essence of Bharat (India).Vinayak Damodar Savarkar (), (28 May 1883 – 26 February 1966) was an Indian political leader, barrister and writer, known for his ideas to stand for Hindus
Edited sentence: Vinayak Damodar Savarkar (), (28 May 1883 – 26 February 1966) was an Indian political leader, barrister and writer, known for his extreme narrow minded ideas to stand for Hindus..  Savarkar coined the term Hindutva (Hinduness) to create a collective "Hindu" identity as an essence of Bharat (India)