Original sentence: After school she started modeling, a career which lasted two years.Internationally, she also acted for many Pakistani Tv serials, among which Kuch Dil Se is most credited.Nausheen Ali Sardar is an Indian.Sardar also appeared in video album (Ocean Queen), Altaf Ali's Pehle to Kabhi Kabhi Gum Tha, Star best Sellers' X-zone and as a TV host.Sardarwas a commerce graduate from MM College and was raised in Mumbai, India by a Punjabi Muslim father and an Iranian mother.She starrted in  Ekta Kapoor's daily soap opera, Kkusum, which aired on Sony Entertainment Television.television actress and model
Edited sentence: Besides modeling Nausheen Sardar, also appeared in video album (Ocean Queen), Altaf Ali's Pehle to Kabhi Kabhi Gum Tha, Star best Sellers' X-zone and as a TV host.During her school years, she was devoted to elocution fancy dress and various other competitions.Her modeling carreer lasted for only two years.In her life, Nausheen have always found herself fully-inclined towards acting.Internationally, she also acted for many Pakistani Tv seriels, among which Kuch Dil Se is most credited.Nausheen Ali Sardar, have earned the heart of every Indian family after playing the leading role in Ekta Kapoor's daily  soap, Kkusum aired on Sony Entertainment Television.Nausheen, a commerce graduate from MM College, was raised in Mumbai, India by a Punjabi Muslim father and an Iranian mother, who are worlds aprat from the modern media and industries.Soon after the school years past by and she started modeling.This, however, opened a gateway to her brilliant future successes including her leading role in Kkusum