Original sentence: Altrincham (pronounced "Oltringum") is a town in the Metropolitan Borough of Trafford in Greater Manchester and within the historic boundaries of Cheshire in the north-west of England.Altrincham lies approximately eight miles south-west of the city of Manchester
Edited sentence: Altrincham (pronounced "Oltringum") is a town in the Metropolitan Borough of Trafford in Greater Manchester, England.Historically part of Cheshire, Altrincham lies approximately eight miles south-west of the city of Manchester