Original sentence: Following stints with Coleridge Davis and Stuff Smith in the 1940s, in the early 1950s Pate was recording on Chess Records with Eddy South and His Orchestra, credited on bass and arrangements
Edited sentence: Following stints with Coleridge Davis and Stuff Smith in the 1940s, in the early 1950s Pate was recording on Chess Records with Eddie South and His Orchestra, credited on bass and arrangements