Original sentence: Cambridge profile.Virgo graduated from Downing College in 1987 after obtaining a BA in Law.Virgo is a  member of the Cambridge Faculty of Law
Edited sentence: Graham Virgo is a respected member of the Cambridge Faculty of Law, he is one of the youngest people to become Professors in Cambridge and is a well referred academic amongst the judiciary.He graduated from Downing College in 1987 after obtaining a BA in Law.He then points a water pistol at him, declaring that this constituted assault, and then squirts some water into his face, explaining that this constitutes battery.They are both amazing.Virgo is known for his entertaining and involving style of lecturing.When introducing new students to the difference between assault and battery, he selects a student who has turned up late to the lecture as a volunteer, (usually a willing victim from his own college)