Original sentence: Believing that Sandman is dead, Spider-Man leaves in satisfaction; but unbeknownst to him, Sandman, who is washed out to the river, is able to eventually reconstitute himself.Sensing that Marko is telling the truth, and understanding the importance of forgiveness over revenge, Spider-Man forgives him, and Marko shapeshifts and flies away.Working together, the two manage to save Mary Jane and defeat Sandman and Venom, though at the cost of Harry's and Eddie's lives
Edited sentence: Believing that Sandman is dead, Spider-Man coldly leaves in satisfaction; but unbeknownst to him, Sandman, who is washed out to the river, is able to eventually reconstitute himself.Sensing that Marko is telling the truth, and understanding the importance of forgiveness over revenge, Marko is reddemed by Spider-Man, then shapeshifts and flies away.Working together, the two manage to save Mary Jane and defeat Sandman and Venom, though Harry is fatally impaled by his own glider and Eddie is supposedly killed in the explosion that destroys the symbiote