Original sentence: , and traditional Korean culture suffered heavy losses by the modern culture that Japan had introduced.According to the investigation of the South Korea government, There are 75,311 cultural assets that were taken from Korea.During World War II, more than 100,000 Koreans served in the Japanese army as officers and soldiers.For more than 30 years under the Japanese occupation, To make a Korean peninsula a Asia front base, Japan did an enormous investment to a Korean peninsula.Gojoseon was founded in 2333 BC, according to the Dungun legend.He ordered the Jeju massacre, which slaughtered between 30,000 to 80,000 South Korean citizens.Infrastructure of a Korean peninsula has developed very much.Japan has 34,369, The United States has 17,803.Numerous Korean cultural artifacts were numbered and managed(This numbering system has been left in South Korea), destroyed or taken to Japan.The rule of Syngman Rhee was more brutal than Japanese occupation.Therefore, A lot of Korean capitalists were born by the modernization of Japan.destroyed or taken to Japan
Edited sentence: According to one investigation by the South Korea government, they were able to easily identify 75,311 cultural assets that were taken from Korea.During World War II, more than 100,000 Koreans were conscripted into the Japanese army as officers and soldiers.For more than 30 years under the Japanese occupation, Korea underwent western style modernization for the purposes of Japan's exploitative needs, and traditional Korean culture suffered heavy losses.Gojoseon was founded in 2333 BC, according to the Dangun legend.Most art historians estimates that Japan has hundreds of thousands of stolen Korean arifacts.Numerous Korean cultural artifacts were destroyed or taken to Japan.Syngman Rhee ordered the Jeju massacre, which slaughtered between 30,000 to 80,000 South Korean citizens.The study showed that Japan has 34,369, and the United States has 17,803