Original sentence: Glimmer is a hardworking young woman who sincerely believes in peace and justice and overthrowing the Horde to restore such ideals
Edited sentence: Although she has a bit of an ego, she is only eager to prove herself.Glimmer can also be a little too skeptical, however with the Horde and their tricks, it's hard to blame her.Glimmer is a beautiful and hardworking young woman who sincerely believes in peace and justice and overthrowing the Horde to restore such ideals