Original sentence: He wrote both the libretto and music of the three-act comic opera "Im Namen des Gesetzes" (Hamburg, 1888); two operettas; duets for soprano and alto; male choruses; vocal canons; and several books of songs.It arguably became the greatest choral society in Berlin and was distinguished for its helpful patronage of young musicians.Many musicologists also maintain that Ochs was both composer and lyricist of the aria "Dank sei Dir, Herr", still widely believed to be by Handel.Siegfried Ochs (April 19, 1858 in Frankfurt – February 6, 1929 in Berlin) was a German choir-leader and composer.whose compositions were performed for the first time
Edited sentence: He wrote both the libretto and music of the three-act comic opera Im Namen des Gesetzes (Hamburg, 1888); two operettas; duets for soprano and alto; male choruses; vocal canons; and several books of songs.It arguably became the greatest choral society in Berlin and was distinguished for its helpful patronage of young musicians, whose compositions were performed for the first time.Many musicologists also maintain that Ochs was both composer and lyricist of the aria Dank sei Dir, Herr, still widely believed to be by Handel.Siegfried Ochs (19 April 1858 in Frankfurt – 6 February 1929 in Berlin) was a German choir-leader and composer