Original sentence: The agency that was constantly in touch in order to persuade the potential escort to “register” may then suddenly become very difficult to contact.The tell-tale signs given above can allow those wanting to enter the industry to distinguish between genuine and fake agencies and find work provided that they are actually suitable
Edited sentence: The agency that was constantly in touch in order to persuade the potential escort to “register” will suddenly become very difficult to contact.The tell-tale signs given above will allow those wanting to enter the industry to distinguish between genuine and fake agencies and find work provided that they are actually suitable