Original sentence: Into Nottinghamshire, the road by-passes Sutton-in-Ashfield, dropping to a single carriageway configuration of 1980s construction, including multiple traffic light controlled junctions - such as the Mansfield, Ashfield Regeneration Route ("MARR")
Edited sentence: Into Nottinghamshire, the road by-passes Sutton-in-Ashfield with a woefully inadequate single carriageway configuration of 1980s construction, including multiple traffic light controlled junctions - such as the Mansfield, Ashfield Regeneration Route ("MARR")