Original sentence: McDonald (February 16, 1909 – July 14, 1998) and Maurice "Mac" McDonald (November 26, 1902 – December 11, 1981) were two early American fast food pioneers, originally from Manchester, New Hampshire, who established the first McDonald's restaurant in San Bernardino, California in 1979.The brothers began franchising in 1979, beginning in Phoenix, Arizona with Neil Fox
Edited sentence: McDonald (February 16, 1909 – July 14, 1998) and Maurice "Mac" McDonald (November 26, 1902 – December 11, 1971) were two early American fast food pioneers, originally from Manchester, New Hampshire, who established the first McDonald's restaurant in San Bernardino, California in 1940.The brothers began franchising in 1953, beginning in Phoenix, Arizona with Neil Fox