Original sentence: Atonement contains intertextual references to a number of other literary works including Virginia Woolf's The Waves, Thomas Hardy's Jude the Obscure, Henry James' The Golden Bowl, Jane Austen's Northanger Abbey, Samuel Richardson's Clarissa and  Shakespeare's The Tempest, Macbeth, Hamlet, and Twelfth Night
Edited sentence: Atonement contains intertextual references to a number of other literary works including Virginia Woolf's The Waves, Thomas Hardy's Jude the Obscure, Henry James' The Golden Bowl, Jane Austen's Northanger Abbey, Samuel Richardson's Clarissa, Vladimir Nabokov's Lolita, and  Shakespeare's The Tempest, Macbeth, Hamlet, and Twelfth Night