Original sentence: Del Valle considers himself a hardcore boxing fan and has become a recurrent TV commentator in various boxing cards.He is now fully bilingual which allows him to connect directly with his New York fan base as well as with his Puerto Rican fan base mostly through his social media activity
Edited sentence: He is now fully bilingual which allowes him to connect directly with his New York fan base as well as with his Puerto Rican fan base mostly through his social media activity.The charismatic Del Valle considers himself a hardcore boxing fan and has become a recurrent TV commentator in various boxing cards