Original sentence: In 2002, Wal-Mart announced that it would not carry magazines it claimed to be "inappropriate", thus applying pressure on editors to change it the way WalMart considered "appropriate".The target of persistent unionizing efforts, Wal-Mart aggressively (and at times illegally) resists union attempts.Wal-Mart has been accused of allowing right wing conservative values to influence its product selection:
Edited sentence: In 2002, Wal-Mart announced that it would not carry magazines it alleged to be "inappropriate" or about which the company claimed to have received complaints, thus applying pressure on editors to change their magazines in a way WalMart considered "appropriate".The target of persistent unionizing efforts, Wal-Mart aggressively (and allegedly at times illegally) resists union attempts.Wal-Mart has been criticized for allowing right wing conservative values to influence its product selection: