Original sentence: He is seen by some civil rights activists, among them with Otto Schily and Günther Beckstein, as one of the most rigid, authoritarian politicians in Germany.His declared attendance of LinuxTag 2007 drew a boycott from parts of the OSS community.Schäuble is criticised by some for his strong conservative views and his pursuing of law and order politics; his remarks about the 2006 football world cup's security (demanding to put tanks in front of the stadiums if necessary) and his decision to opt out of the Schengen agreement during the world cup were frowned upon by some
Edited sentence: He is commonly seen by civil rights activists, together with Otto Schily and Günther Beckstein, as one of the most rigid, authoritarian politicians in Germany.His declared attendance of LinuxTag 2007 drew a massive boycott from the OSS communtiy.Schäuble is criticised by many for his strong conservative views and his pursuing of law and order politics; his remarks about the 2006 football world cup's security (demanding to put tanks in front of the stadiums if necessary) and his decision to opt out of the Schengen agreement during the world cup were frowned upon by many