Original sentence: Almeder is critical of the academic and scientific community for not taking Stevenson's work seriously because of a mistaken understanding of the nature of his work and confusing it with the diminished respect for religion.Quine and subscribed to Cartesian dualism, broadly rejecting scientism and materialism
Edited sentence: Almeder is critical of the academic and scientific community for not taking Stevenson's work seriously because of a mistaken understanding of the nature of his work and confusing it with the diminished respect for religion that has been associated with the rise of scientism.Quine and subscribes to Cartesian dualism, broadly rejecting scientism and materialism