Original sentence: A number of leading physicists and chemists are also Stuyvesant alumni, as well as several well known entertainers and authors, including Charlie's Angels star Lucy Liu, The Shawshank Redemption star Tim Robbins, Walter Becker, core member of the musical group Steely Dan, and actor James Cagney
Edited sentence: A number of leading physicists and chemists are also Stuyvesant alumni, as well as several well known entertainers and authors, including Charlie's Angels star Lucy Liu, The Shawshank Redemption star Tim Robbins, Walter Becker, core member of the musical group Steely Dan, and perhaps most famous, actor James Cagney