Original sentence: Groundwater from onsite wells was used for its water supply source, supplemented by water purchased from the Lenox water department.The Kripalu Center formerly operated its own water supply.There were regulatory agency concerns about the water supply's potential vulnerability to contamination, and as of 2009 the center's water supply had been converted to rely solely on purchased water obtained from surface water sources
Edited sentence: " A half-century later at a well-attended town hearing concerning a proposed expansion, "no one in the room disputed that the present building is an eyesore." Author F.Kripalu formerly operated its own water supply system using onsite wells  supplemented by water purchased from Lenox.Shea called its "overall effect...artistically dismal.There were regulatory agency concerns for at least five years  about the system's vulnerability to contamination, and as of 2009 Kripalu relied solely on purchased surface water.This building's architecture was criticized  at the outset by a number of its senior Jesuit residents, including Father William Carroll, who called it "a monumental mendacity