Original sentence: Alongside Launceston Church Grammar School and Scotch Oakburn College it has one of the highest academic performances of any school in Tasmania.Friends' School regularly outperforms all other schools in Tasmania in the Tasmanian Certificate of Education, for years 11-12
Edited sentence: Alongside the well renowned state leader in academics, Scotch Oakburn College and Launceston Church Grammar School it has one of the highest academic performances of any school in Tasmania.Friends' School on occasions outperforms all other schools in Tasmania in the Tasmanian Certificate of Education, for years 11-12