Original sentence: Hoppers Crossing has many gyms and sports grounds.Recreation for young people is hampered by a relatively poor transport system, but for younger children in the area there is the Wonderland Indoor Play Centre, near the Bible College and next to Hoppers indoor-sports were there are indoor soccer teams operating.Recreation reserves mostly exist along drainage reserves and the local Skeleton Creek.There is a fish and chips outlet at the Plaza as well as a KFC.They previously played at Mossfield Reserve which is now a rugby field.This is often speculated as being due to the area having such a large population of people under 15 and new migrants
Edited sentence: Also, it is rather difficult to find work without use of a car, which is the case in many outlying suburbs of Melbourne.Hoppers Crossing has plenty of gyms and sports grounds.Hoppers Crossing is also the home of Victoria's largest Australian Rules Football and cricket clubs, located at Hogans Road Reserve.Recreation for young people is hampered by a relatively poor transport system, but for younger children in the area there is the Wonderland Indoor Play Centre, near the Bible College and next to Hoppers indoor-sportz were you can hit up a indoor soccer team.Recreation reserves mostly exist along drainage reserves.The club known as 'the reds' are renowned for their family atmosphere and loyal fans.The previously played at Mossfiel Reserve which is now a rugby field.There is a fish and chippery at the Plaza and a KFC as well.This is probably due to the area having such a large population of people under 15 and new migrants.and the local Skeleton Creek