Original sentence: "  Paul Drennan Cravath, who joined the firm in 1899, developed and instituted the "Cravath System", which combines a distinctive approach to the hiring, training, and compensation of lawyers.Cravath has represented high-profile American inventors Samuel F.Morse, in the late 1840s; Cyrus McCormick, Elias Howe, and Charles Goodyear in the 1850s; and George Westinghouse in the 1880s
Edited sentence: "  Paul Drennan Cravath, who joined the firm in 1899, developed and instituted the "Cravath System", which combines a distinctive way of approaching the hiring, training and compensation of lawyers.Cravath has represented some of America’s great inventors, from Samuel F.Morse in the late 1840s, Cyrus McCormick, Elias Howe, and Charles Goodyear in the 1850s, to George Westinghouse in the 1880s