Original sentence: A peanut gallery was, in the days of vaudeville, a nickname for the cheapest and ostensibly rowdiest seats in the theater, the occupants of which were often known to heckle the performers.Phrases such as "no comments from the peanut gallery" or "quiet in the peanut gallery" are extensions of the name.The least expensive snack served at the theatre would often be peanuts, which the patrons would sometimes throw at the performers on stage to convey their disapproval
Edited sentence: A peanut gallery was, in the days of vaudeville, a nickname for the cheapest and ostensibly rowdiest seats in the theater, the occupants of which were often known to criticize the performers.The least expensive snack served at the theatre would often be peanuts, and the patrons would mock the performers by making sick jokes about them