Original sentence: Life aboard her during her service in this role was chronicled in John Winton's 'We Joined the Navy'.Postwar, she was converted to the Royal Navy's cadet training ship in 1947, in which role she served until 1953
Edited sentence: Life aboard her during in this role was hilariously chronicled in John Winton's 'We Joined the Navy'.Postwar, she was converted to the royal Navy's cadet training ship in 1947, in which role she served until 1953