Original sentence: He serves as the Observer's restaurant critic.His first novel The Marble Kiss published in 1994 was won the Author's Club First Novel Award and his second Day of Atonement published in 1998 for the Jewish Quarterly Prize for Fiction.Jay Rayner is a British journalist, writer and broadcaster born in 1966
Edited sentence: He is currently restaurant critic of [[The Observer.His first novel The Marble Kiss published in 1994 won the Author's Club First Novel Award and his second Day of Atonement (1998) the Jewish Quarterly Prize for Fiction.Jay Rayner (born 1966) is a British journalist, writer and broadcaster