Original sentence: She has five children, one with Jonathan, Benjamin Crawford West Knight (born June 1996) and four with Scott, Joseph Peter DeFreitas (born March 29th, 2000), Katherine Marie DeFreitas (born January 9th, 2002), Basil John DeFreitas (born January 31st, 2007) and Birdie West DeFreitas (born June 16th, 2009)
Edited sentence: She has five children, one with Jonathan, Benjamin Crawford West Knight (born June 1996) and four with Scott, Joseph Peter DeFreitas (born March 29th, 2000), Katherine Marie DeFreitas (born January 9th, 2002), Basil John DeFreitas (born January 30th, 2007) and Birdie West DeFreitas (born June 16th, 2009)