Original sentence: E Street initially rated poorly in Australia, but early audience research indicated that it had attracted both a significant proportion of the 14–35 audience, and, unusually for a soap, a large male viewership – both demographics are highly prized by advertisers.Later, after a radical overhaul, improved storylines and characters targeting the niche demographics, the ratings steadily climbed.The series won several Logie awards.The soap opera, Richmond Hill, which was produced by the Grundy Organisation, was cancelled by Network Ten to make way for E Street
Edited sentence: E Street initially rated somewhat lower than Richmond Hill in Australia, but early  audience research indicated that it had attracted both a significant proportion of the 14–35 audience, and, unusually for a soap, a large male viewership – both demographics are highly prized by advertisers.Later, after a radical overhaul, improved storylines and characters targeting the niche demographics, the ratings steadily climbed, eventually eclipsing the figures that Richmond Hill had attracted.Richmond Hill was at the time rating quite well in the high-teens, so it was seen as a gamble by Network Ten replace it with the untried, new series, E Street.The moderately successful soap opera, Richmond Hill, which was produced by the Grundy Organisation, was surprisingly cancelled by Network Ten to make way for E Street.The series was very popular for a short period in the early 1990s and won several Logie awards