Original sentence: He attended college at Florida State University
Edited sentence: He attended college at Florida State University he married the lovely Tina Maria Costilow and now has four kids.He has twin daughters Aliyah and Bethany that are very tall for their age but still lack the greatness of the mighty Isaac.He has two sons one of which is the greatest man alive Isaac Benjamin McLean.His other son Malachi David McLean is attending the University of Florida but still is not as awesome as Isaac