Original sentence: Dutch started to resent his prized protege; after Coll pulled a robbery at the Sheffield Farms dairy in the Bronx without his authorization, Shultz upbraided the young gangster.Rather than back down, as might have been expected, Coll had the audacity to demand that Shultz cut him in as an equal partner
Edited sentence: Dutch started to resent his prized protege; after Coll pulled a robbery at the Sheffield Farms dairy in the Bronx without his authorization, Schultz upbraided the young gangster.Rather than back down, as might have been expected, Coll had the audacity to demand that Schultz cut him in as an equal partner