Original sentence: Grace later made his way onto the county’s senior panel and made his debut in 1939.That year he won a Leinster title in the top grade of inter-county hurling befor elate rlining out in his first seniro championship decider.The 1939 All-Ireland final between Cork and Kilkenny has gone down in history as the ‘thunder and lightning final.’  Played on the day that World War II erupted the climax of a very close game was played in a tremendous thunderstorm
Edited sentence: Grace later made his way onto the county's senior panel and made his debut in 1939.Played on the day that World War II erupted, the climax of a very close game was played in a tremendous thunderstorm.That year he won a Leinster title in the top grade of inter-county hurling before later lining out in his first senior championship decider.The 1939 All-Ireland final between Cork and Kilkenny has gone down in history as the ‘thunder and lightning final'