Original sentence: "experienced as a sense of being controlled by frozen block-universe determinism with a single, pre-existing, ever-existing future.(Some may agree, for example, with the poet who said, "after the first death, there is no other.According to egodeath.Also, "ego death" in the sense of transending the notion that one even has an "ego" in the first place would be something more consistent with the teachings concerning Moksha (in Hinduism) and Nirvana (in Buddhism).In some cases, this experience may be in part characterized by the perceived loss of boundaries between self and environment, a sense of loss of "control," or the loss of the accustomed feeling of existing as a personal agent.In this sense, it should be noted, ego death is a temporary state of mind which can be stabilised and reverted.There are in fact, though, at least as many points of view about the nature of "ego death" as there are mystics, psychonauts, etc.com, it can be.who have had the experience
Edited sentence: In some cases, it may be experienced as a sense of being controlled by frozen block-universe determinism with a single, pre-existing, ever-existing future.It may be in part characterized by the perceived loss of boundaries between self and environment, a sense of loss of "control," or the loss of the accustomed feeling of existing as a personal agent.It should be noted that ego death is a temporary state of mind which can be stabilised and reverted.This concept of disintegration and Oneness with the universe is also part of the spiritual aspiration called Moksha in Hinduism and Nirvana in Buddhism