Original sentence: After receiving an anonymous tip in Colorado about a young mutant endangering a small town, Dani and Shan are sent to investigate and calm the locals.Unbeknown to them, one of Legion's personalities has the ability to project himself and is stalling them while he prepares to kill Dani (who Sam left trapped in the cell) but is stopped my Magik and Magma.Upon her return she informs Sam and Roberto, Shan and Dani are in trouble and it will result in their deaths.While searching for them, Sam and Roberto come across a tied up and unconcious Shan in the back of a bar, while Magik and Magma are tricked into freeing Legion from a box
Edited sentence: After receiving an anonymous tip in Colorado about a young mutant endangering a small town, Dani and Xian are sent to investigate and calm the locals.Unbeknownst to them, one of Legion's personalities has the ability to project himself and is stalling them while he prepares to kill Dani (who Sam left trapped in the cell) but is stopped my Magik and Magma.Upon her return she informs Sam and Roberto, Xian and Dani are in trouble and it will result in their deaths.While searching for them, Sam and Roberto come across a tied up and unconcious Xian in the back of a bar, while Magik and Magma are tricked into freeing Legion from a box