Original sentence: Backyard Festival - On May 2, 2007 a festival was held to celebrate the diversity of St.Festivities included an ultimate frisbee tournament in which team Russia played
Edited sentence: An ultimate frisbee tournament took place in which team Russia owned.Backyard Festival - On May 2nd a festival was held to celebrate the diversity of St.This team featured renowned, star player Phillip Kapune.Unfortunately, player Zachary Heuthorst had butterfingers and brought shame to the team