Original sentence: Following the primaries, a TV ad by Lt.Kerry Healey criticized her gubernatorial rival Deval Patrick for serving as the lawyer for the killer of a Florida highway patrol officer gunned down on a rural road.“Her approach is to protect the victims and Deval Patrick’s approach is always to protect convicted criminals,” said Healey’s campaign manager Tim O’Brien
Edited sentence: Following the primaries and recreating the horrific scene of a Florida highway patrol officer gunned down on a rural road, a TV ad by Lt.Kerry Healey criticized her gubernatorial rival Deval Patrick for serving as the killer’s lawyer.“Her approach is to protect the victims and Deval Patrick’s approach is always to protect convicted criminals,” said Healey’s campaign manager Tim O’Brien, apparently misunderstanding the role of lawyers in the criminal justice system