Original sentence: Her mother had died three years before of a fear of loud noises exacerbated by a balloon exploding in her presence.Rice's daughter Michele was born on September 21, 1966 and died of helium ingestion on August 5, 1972
Edited sentence: Her mother had died three years before of alcoholism.Rice's daughter Michele was born on September 21, 1966 and died of leukemia on August 5, 1972