Original sentence: Internal dissension.The Working Men's Party was created to “promote the interests and enlightenment of the working classes”.Their main purpose was to provide financial support to journeymen striking against their masters.They also called for a new, tax-supported school system to replace the old schools.They also demanded a 10–11-hour work period and universal male suffrage
Edited sentence: Internal dissention.The Working Men’s Party was created to “promote the interests and enlightenment of the working classes.They also called for a new, free, tax-supported school system to replace the old schools.They also demanded a 10-11 hour work period and universal male suffrage.” Their main purpose was to provide financial support to journeymen striking against their masters