Original sentence: The first spot aired on January 1, 2000, introducing the strikingly handsome  Jared and his moving story, complete with a disclaimer: "The Subway diet, combined with a lot of walking, worked for Jared
Edited sentence: The first spot aired on January 1, 2000, introducing Jared and his moving story, complete with a disclaimer: "The Subway diet, combined with a lot of walking, worked for Jared