Original sentence: It also received the "Editor's Choice Award" from Team Xbox, Game Pro, and IGN, as well as the "Top Pick Award" by Game Vortex,<refname=GV></ref>, and the "Silver Award" from Advanced Media Network
Edited sentence: It also received the "Editor's Choice Award" from Team Xbox, Game Pro, and IGN, as well as the "Top Pick Award" by Game Vortex,, and the "Silver Award" from Advanced Media Network