Original sentence: Benjamin Urrutia, co-author with Guy Davenport of The Logia of Yeshua (the Sayings of Jesus) agrees completely with Maccoby and others who aver that Yeshua Bar Abba or Jesus Barabbas must be none other than Jesus of Nazareth, and that the choice between two prisoners is a fiction.Of course, in the Hebrew Bible and in Judaism in general, human sacrifice is strongly condemned, so Drew's theory would seem to require atr least some further explanation
Edited sentence: " This is the sort of inconsistent fabrication that gives inconsistent fabrications a bad name.Benjamin Urrutia, co-author with Guy Davenport of The Logia of Yeshua (the Sayings of Jesus)agrees completely with Maccoby and others who aver that Yeshua Bar Abba or Jesus Barabbas must be none other than Jesus of Nazareth, and that the choice between two prisoners is a fiction.Of course, in the Hebrew Bible, and in Judaism in general, human sacrifice is strongly condemned, so Drew's theory seems to be nothing more than an anti-Semitic fantasy with no basis in reality