Original sentence: In comparison, Waterhouse says the NKT-IKBU "is very good at marketing its product," with Centers and branches producing leaflets that advertise local NKT-IKBU groups in their respective towns, a level of publicity that according to Jones is comparatively more "forceful and extroverted" with regard to some other Buddhist groups, but nevertheless has helped the NKT-IKBU to achieve "a phenomenal increase in membership and centres
Edited sentence: In comparison, Waterhouse says the NKT-IKBU "is very good at marketing its product," with Centers and branches producing leaflets that advertise local NKT-IKBU groups in their respective towns, a level of publicity that according to Jones is comparatively more "forceful and extroverted" with regard to other Buddhist groups, and has helped the NKT-IKBU to achieve "a phenomenal increase in membership and centres