Original sentence: He also boldly attempted the conquest of Western Tibet (Ngari Khorsum) but was killed in battle of To-yo during the Dogra-Tibetan war.Zorawar Singh Kahluria (1784–12 December 1841) was a military general of Dogra Rajput ruler Gulab Singh of Jammu,  He served as the governor (wazir-e-wazarat) of Kishtwar and extended the territories of the kingdom by conquering Ladakh and Baltistan
Edited sentence: He also boldly attempted the conquest of Western Tibet (Ngari Khorsum) but was killed in battle of To-yo during the Sino-Sikh War.Punjab (present-day Himachal Pradesh, India).Zorawar Singh Kahluria (1784–12 December 1841) was a military general of Dogra ruler Gulab Singh under Sikh Empire of Jammu,  He served as the governor (wazir-e-wazarat) of Kishtwar and extended the territories of the kingdom by conquering Ladakh and Baltistan.{{Infobox military person.| allegiance    = Gulab Singh of Jammu (subsidiary to the Sikh Empire).| battles       = Sino-Sikh War|.| birth_place   = Ansar, Kahlur.| caption       = A statue depicting Zorawar Singh Chandel.| death_place   = Tibet.| honorific_prefix = Wazir General.| image         = Zorawarsingh.| name          = Zorawar Singh Kahluria