Original sentence: At the Newfrontiers Brighton conference in 2008, prominent evangelical pastor Mark Driscoll raised issues such as Newfrontiers' apparent lack of clear strategy for post-Terry Virgo leadership and the dearth of clear expressions of their beliefs regarding basic doctrines such as ecclesiology and the Holy Spirit
Edited sentence: At the Newfrontiers Brighton conference in 2008, prominent evangelical pastor Mark Driscoll consturctively criticised Newfrontiers' apparent lack of clear strategy for post-Terry Virgo leadership and the dearth of clear expressions of their beliefs regarding basic doctrines such as ecclesiology and the Holy Spirit