Original sentence: A follow-up revue, The Billy Barnes People, opened at the Royale Theatre June 13, 1961 and closed four days later after only seven performances.Several of the original cast members (Berry, Joseph, Jameson and Regan) returned to Los Angeles and began work on a new show, The Billy Barnes People, which ran for only seven performances on Broadway in June 1961
Edited sentence: Several of the original cast members (Berry, Joseph, Jameson and Regan) returned to Los Angeles and began work on a new revue, The Billy Barnes People.The Billy Barnes People opened on Broadway at the Royale Theatre on June 13, 1961 and closed four days later after only seven performances