Original sentence: In the highest paying fight of his career, Hopkins fought six-division titleholder Oscar de la Hoya, another welterweight for the undisputed middleweight championship on September 18, 2004, in Las Vegas
Edited sentence: Bernard Hopkins took up boxing while he was incarcerated.Furthermore,judges can be sometimes persuaded by the crowds reaction to punches.He is known for being a crafty boxer in the ring.In the highest paying fight of his career, Hopkins fought recently beaten six-division titleholder Oscar de la Hoya, another welterweight for the undisputed middleweight championship on September 18, 2004, in Las Vegas