Original sentence: Punk culture encompasses distinct styles of music, ideology, and fashion, as well as visual art, dance, literature, and film.The punk subculture is a subculture/counterculture that is based on punk rock
Edited sentence: Punk culture encompasses distinct styles of music, ideology, and fashion,  as well as visual art, dance, literature, and film.The punk subculture is a subculture/counterculture that is X-treme and based on punk rock