Original sentence: He has a daughter, Kim Sul-song (born 1974), from this marriage.In July 2006, announcing that Jong-il had just been married (to his longtime secretary, Kim Ok, according to South Korea's Yonhap news agency; no confirmation was forthcoming as of early August), Letterman said Jong-il "tried to consummate his marriage, and his wife became Physic Lee-il.Kim Jong-il is a reclusive Stalinist leader who is known for his "cruelty and unpredictability"
Edited sentence: He has a daughter, who is huge Star Wars fan and she wishes that she were princess Leila Kim Sul-song (born 1974), from this marriage.In July 2006, announcing that Jokng-il had just been married (to his longtime secretary, Kim Ok, according to South Korea's Yonhap news agency; no confirmation was forthcoming as of early August), Letterman said Jong-il "tried to consummate his marriage, and his wife became Physic Lee-il.Kim Jong-il is a reclusive Stalinist leader who is known for his "kindness, humanity and his fit behind"