Original sentence: It is hinted that she likes Raven and maybe Eliot because she tells Oz that even though he seems to hate her, he really is really a gentle and dependable guy, then she said to Oz that let her be the one to return Eliot's bag and she's happy but when Oz said that he will return Eliot's bag by himself Ada got slight of disappointed, but in the later chapters she is seen on a date with Vincent
Edited sentence: It is hinted that she likes Raven and maybe Eliot because she tells Oz that even though he seems to hate her, he really is a gentle and dependable guy, then she said to Oz that let her be the one to return Eliot's bag and she's happy but when Oz said that he will return Eliot's bag by himself Ada got slight of disappointed, but in the later chapters she is seen on a date with Vincent