Original sentence: The primary focus was on standardizing technical data definitions during the handover from the EPC Contractor to the owner/operators.The program was sponsored by The Research Council of Norway, Aker Maritime, DNV, Kværner, Norsk Hydro, Saga Petroleum and Statoil.The scope were facilities and equipment associated with onshore and offshore oil and gas production
Edited sentence: The primary focus was on standardizing technical data definitions at the handover from the EPC Contractor to the owner/operators of onshore and offshore oil and gas production facilities.The program was sponsored by The Research Council of Norway, DNV, Aker Maritime, Kværner, Norsk Hydro, Saga Petroleum and Statoil