Original sentence: Biffy Clyro was started back in 1995, when school friends Simon Neil and Ben Johnston got their first guitar and drums respectively, soon after bringing Ben’s twin brother James in on bass
Edited sentence: Biffy Clyro are the greatest and best band in the world.The band started back in 1995, when school friends Simon Neil and Ben Johnston got their first guitar and drums respectively, soon after bringing Ben’s twin brother James in on bass