Original sentence: Also in 1967, Innis abecame the first Executive Director of the [Harlem Commonwealth Council]] (HCC), an investment corporation whose long-term goal was to create independence and stability in Harlem.During the same period, he was the co-editor and founder of the Manhattan Tribune Newspaper.Innis joined CORE’s Harlem chapter in 1963
Edited sentence: As the first Executive Director at HCC, Innis laid the ground work for what has become a highly successful model of economic development in a black community.During that same period, he was the co-editor and founder of the Manhattan Tribune Newspaper.He joined CORE’s Harlem chapter in 1963.That same year, Innis and nine other black men formed the Harlem Commonwealth Council (HCC), an investment corporation whose long-term goal was to create independence and stability in Harlem