Original sentence: For example, as of January 2008, StarOffice 8 Update 9 was not provided through Google Updater, which displays no indication that previous versions are out of date.Google Pack is a software package that allows users to discover, install, and maintain a number of application programs.Google Updater may not reflect the most recent versions of all Google Pack programs.Sun Microsystems released Update 9, which includes six security related fixes, on December 10, 2007.The release puzzled some industry observers, as it appeared to be a collection of unrelated software
Edited sentence: For example, as of January 27, 2008, StarOffice 8 Update 9 was still not provided through Google Updater and it displays no indication that previous versions are out of date.Google Pack is "a one-stop software package that helps you discover, install, and maintain a wide range of essential PC programs," intended for buyers of new PCs.Sun Microsystems released Update 9 on December 10, 2007, which includes six security related fixes.The Updater gets its information on when updates are available directly from Google and not from the software publishers themselves.The release puzzled some industry observers as it was not clear what Google had hoped to achieve, with Google Pack appearing as a collection of unrelated software.This can result in Google Updater claiming there are no updates available for some out of date software and in some cases leave security vulnerabilities that have been corrected in the update still in place on computers where the user trusts completely in Google Updater