Original sentence: In Early October 2006 the North American version of the game was leaked out onto the internet less than a month before the planned release date.Square-Enix has apparently taken legal action against the pirates as site hosting the files and torrents are being removed
Edited sentence: Even though a number of people eager to play the game downloaded it, most real fans are waiting for the retail version of the game...On October 6, 2006 the entire english version of the game was leaked out onto the internet, a shock to Square Enix