Original sentence: Danielle was adopted by Andy Jones (Aneirin Hughes) and his wife, Danielle told she was adopted when she was 5 years old and when her adoptive mother, Lizzie Jones, died in 2007,  she decided to try and locate her birth mother
Edited sentence: Danielle was adopted by Andy Jones (Aneirin Hughes) and his wife, and when her adoptive mother, Lizzie Jones, died in 2007, she decided to try and locate her birth mother