Original sentence: PCLinuxOS Gnome 2008, a remastered, community edition of PCLinuxOS featuring the GNOME 2.24.2 desktop (and sporting a look similar to Microsoft's Windows Vista), was released on March 21, 2008, and is currently hosted at linuxgator
Edited sentence: PCLinuxOS Gnome 2008, a remastered, community edition of PCLinuxOS featuring the GNOME 2.24.2 desktop was released on March 21, 2008, and is currently hosted at linuxgator