Original sentence: Many Nationalists and Republicans in Northern Ireland have derided Ulster Scots as a 'DIY language for Orangemen', arguing that it is a reaction by Unionists and Loyalists to the promotion of the Irish language in Northern Ireland.The revival of a vernacular largely unheard of before the 1990s by the Ulster-Scots Agency is regarded as an attempt to keep funding away from the promotion of the Irish language
Edited sentence: Many Nationalists and Republicans in Northern Ireland have derided Ulster Scots as a 'DIY language for Orangemen'.The  revival of a vernacular, largely unheard of before the 1990s by the Ulster-Scots Agency is seen as an attempt to keep funding away from the promotion of the Irish language in Northern Ireland by mimicking one facet of Irish identity by promoting a distinct native Ulster Protestant language