Original sentence: Critics believe that insufficient evidence in the pre-Columbian archaeological record for horses, cattle, swine, goats, wheat, steel swords, possibly wheeled chariots and other elements mentioned in the Book of Mormon casts doubt on the authenticity of the Book of Mormon.Supporters of the Book of Mormon believe that a variety of evidence exists that supports the historicity of the Book of Mormon, including plausible locations for Nahom, Bountiful, the Valley of Lemuel, the hill Cumorah/Riplah, the River Sidon, the "stretch of wilderness", the "narrow stretch of land" and some cities; silk, weights and measures, and names with possible Hebrew or Egyptian roots.These civilizations, including Ancient Egypt, Ancient Greece, and Ancient Rome have very developed archaeological records and have received much more attention from the archaeological community than Mesoamerican civilizations
Edited sentence: Critics believe that the lack of evidences in the pre-Columbian archaeological record for horses, cattle, swine, goats, wheat, steel swords, possibly wheeled chariots and other elements mentioned in the Book of Mormon casts doubt on the authenticity of the Book of Mormon.Supporters of the Book of Mormon believe that some evidence exists that supports the historicity of the Book of Mormon, including plausible locations for Nahom, Bountiful, the Valley of Lemuel, the hill Cumorah/Riplah, the River Sidon, the "stretch of wilderness", the "narrow stretch of land" and some cities; silk, weights and measures, and names with possible Hebrew or Egyptian roots.These civilizations, including Ancient Egypt, Ancient Greece, Ancient Rome, Maya and Inca have left vast amount of ruins of buildings, temples, houses, roads, statues, arches, frescoes, stellaes and many other archaeological artifacts which can be seen both on the ground and in numerous museums.This can not be said about Book of Mormon civilizations - as no artifacts undoubtedly attributed to them were ever found