Original sentence: He has led his team to many accomplishments both major and minor, including a recent CAA Tournament championship in 2005 and subsequent birth in the NCAA Tournament, where the twelfth-seeded Monarchs lost to fifth-seeded Michigan State in the first round
Edited sentence: An excellent and skilled coach, he has led his team to many accomplishments both major and minor, including a recent CAA Tournament championship in 2005 and subsequent birth in the NCAA Tournament, where the twelfth-seeded Monarchs lost to fifth-seeded Michigan State in the first round