Original sentence: After less than six months in power, Károlyi admitted the failure of his policies, resigning in favor of the young Hungarian Communist Party.Károlyi intended to leave the communists in power in order to pass onto them the responsibility of dealing with the difficult matter of the Entente's territorial requests.Meanwhile, the government's agricultural policies alienated many peasants, and its secular nature greatly offended the clergy.Revolutionary tribunals ordered 590 executions of people who were suspected of having been involved in the attempted coup.The Hungarian Communist Party thus had a meteoric, if precocious, rise to political power.The party was very small at this time, but its members were very active and it grew rapidly
Edited sentence: After less than six months in power, Károlyi was dismissed by a coalition of Socialist Democrats and Communists.Communist detachments, called Boys of Lenin started to terrify, to robb and to execute Rightists and other maverick people.It had a meteoric, if precocious, rise to political power.The Hungarian Communist Party was very small at this time, but its members were very active and it grew rapidly.The government was divised: in general, communists acclaimed red terror, but social-democrats not, and finally they managed to formally dissmiss detachments.The government's agricultural policies alienated many peasants, and its secular nature greatly offended the clergy