Original sentence: Perhaps, the most famous song on Yoko Ono/Plastic Ono Band is "Why", which features Ono repeating the word "Why" for five minutes.Some punk banks, including Public Image Ltd)  consider this album (and other early albums by her) as laying the foundation for punk.The first half of their performance consisted of rock standards, and during the second half, Ono took the microphone and along with the band performed what may be one of the first expressions of the avant garde during a rock concert.The two albums have almost identical covers: Ono's featured a photo of her leaning on Lennon, and Lennon's had a photo of him leaning on Ono
Edited sentence: Certainly Ono was one of the first women to perform deliberately in a powerful style, over the highly amplified musical instruments that had been a barrier to the female voice in rock.However, while Lennon's utilized mostly conventional songwriting, Ono's was an all-out assault.In some circles, people consider this album (and other early albums by her) as laying the foundation for punk, and some punk bands (including Public Image Ltd) have said so themselves.Perhaps, the most famous song on Yoko Ono/Plastic Ono Band is "Why", which features Ono screaming the word "Why" for five minutes.Some critics were receptive of the work, declaring her voice "the most interesting instrument since the Moog".The first half of their performance consisted of rock standards, but during the second half, Ono took the microphone and along with the band performed what may be one of the first expressions of the avant garde during a rock concert.The two albums have almost identical covers, but Ono's featured a photo of her leaning on Lennon, and Lennon's had a photo of him leaning on Ono