Original sentence: In the end, Billy suggests celebrating Christmas by getting drunk and watching porn.On Christmas Eve, Jamie decides to ditch celebrations with his family to fly to Portugal and propose to her in his recently learned Portuguese
Edited sentence: In the end, perhaps to negate the mild homoeroticism of their touching moment together, Billy suggests celebrating Christmas by getting drunk and watching porn.On Christmas Eve, Jamie decides to ditch celebrations with his family to fly to Portugal and propose to her in his broken but recently learned Portuguese