Original sentence: As a book, it is highly representative of Williams's early writing.However, this poetic improvisation produced remarkable language, which is evident in "A Widow's Lament in Springtime".Like most of Williams' early works, Sour Grapes was ignored by most critics at the time, but it was well received by Kenneth Burke in The Dial in February 1922.Published in 1921, the collection includes poems such as "A Widow's Lament in Springtime", "The Great Figure", "Complaint", and "Queen-Ann's-Lace".The book is filled out with improvisational pieces that Williams seems to have thrown together in the spare moments that he stole from his medical practice.Williams was still struggling to find his audience at the time that he published Sour Grapes and he was forced to pay for some, if not all, of the publishing expenses himself.and "Complaint"
Edited sentence: As a book, it is highly indicative of Williams' early writing.However, this poetic improvisation produced remarkable language, which is evident in "A Widow's Lament in Springtime," and "Complaint.It is filled out with improvisational pieces that Williams seems to have thrown together in the spare moments that he stole from his medical practice.Like most of Williams' early works, Sour Grapes was ignored by most critics at the time, but it was well received by Kenneth Burke in The Dial'' in February 1922.Published in 1921, it includes some of his best early poems: "A Widow's Lament in Springtime," "The Great Figure," "Complaint," and "Queen-Ann's-Lace.Williams was still struggling to find his audience at the time of Sour Grapes''' publication and was forced to pay for some, if not all, of the publishing expenses himself