Original sentence: A notable location on the dome is the Diving Board, where Ansel Adams took his photograph, "Monolith, The Face Of Half Dome (1926).The summit offers views of the surrounding areas, including Little Yosemite Valley and the Valley Floor
Edited sentence: A comradery is formed by those who reach the top, it is definetely an accomplishment that cannot be overlooked.Atop Half Dome, one almost feels like they have reached the top of the world.Don't forget your camera.If the weather permits it, one can take some spectacular pictures of the surrounding area.One can get a great veiw of the surrounding areas, including Little Yosemite Valley and the Valley Floor.Some places to visit atop Half dome include the Diving Board, where famed photographer Ansel Adams took his photograph, "Monolith, The Face Of Half Dome (1926)