Original sentence: Rick's gigging career so far includes performances in England for Queen Elizabeth II, Princess Anne, OK Magazine, Manchester United Football Club, Manchester City Football Club, the V2 summer festival, Children In Need with the BBC Orchestra, The Royal Festival Hall, Sky One TV, Granada TV, The Box video channel, MTV, Radio 2, Cardiff Red Dragon festival, Feel the Noise Festival Liverpool and other live public, corporate and private events
Edited sentence: Rick's gigging career so far includes performances in England for Queen Elizabeth II, Princess Anne, OK Magazine, Manchester United Football Club, Manchester City Football Club, the V2 summer festival, Children In Need with the BBC Orchestra, The Royal Festival Hall, Sky One TV, Granada TV, The Box video channel, MTV, Radio 2, Cardiff Red Dragon festival, Feel the Noise Festival Liverpool and a host of other live public, corporate and private events