Original sentence: Firestar asks Leafpaw to follow him, as well as Onewhisker, at Tallstar's request.That night, while every other cat is sleeping, Barkface, the WindClan medicine cat goes to Firestar and tells him that Tallstar is dying.The five cats return and announce their findings to all of the other cats
Edited sentence: Firestar asks Leafpaw to follow him, as well as Onewhisker, at Talstar's request.That night, while every other cat is sleeping, Barkface, the WindClan medicine cat, goes to Firestar and tells him that Tallstar is dying.The five cats return and announce their findings to all of tBue other cats