Original sentence: According to his account, the Holocaust for Radasky began one morning on his way to work at his coat shop.Once rejuvenated back to good health, Radasky explains that  he headed to a town in Germany named Feldafing which was a known place to look for missing persons
Edited sentence: Once rejuvenated back to good health, Radasky headed to a town in Germany named Feldafing which was a known place to look for missing persons.The Holocaust for Radasky began one morning on his way to work at his coat shop