Original sentence: According to its critics, they pointed out in an article1 that Rev.In Jan 2005, Rev.Kong Hee and Ho Yeow Sun recently have a son named Dayan Kong Yi, after dovish Moshe Dayan, Israel's defense minister during the Six-Day War and architect of Camp David Accords2.Kong Hee spoke of leaving his former Anglican Church as an ordained deacon in his early days because of disputes between the Anglican Church and himself on both sides.Ministries Today Magazine (Dec 2003)
Edited sentence: He is father to a a son named Dayan Kong Yi.His wife is a professional counsellor and singer and had scored a number of musical and international awards, including the "Outstanding Youth of the World" at Denmark, for her outstanding contribution to society and community work through a non-profit organisation founded by her.She also topping the Billboard chart in the United States