Original sentence: Heading north from Ramnicu Valcea to Sibiu, the trunkroad passes along the Olt River Valley.Passes by several fortified cloisters/churches and through the scenery of northern Moldavia
Edited sentence: Heading north from Ramnicu Valcea to Sibiu, the trunkroad passes along the beautiful Olt River Valley.Passes by some beautiful fortified cloisters/churches and through some beautiful scenery in northern Moldavia