Original sentence: In early 2008, the Kwinana Desalination Plant in Perth, very simmilar to the proposed Wonthaggi plant, was shutdown on two occasions due to reduced dissolved oxygen levels in Cockburn Sound
Edited sentence: In early 2008, the Kwinana Desalination Plant in Perth, very similar to the proposed Wonthaggi plant, was shutdown on two occasions due to reduced dissolved oxygen levels in Cockburn Sound