Original sentence: Kahuta is a scenic place, of many mountain ranges, panoramic views, snow-capped mountains, forests, rivers and a cool climate, cold winters, wildlife, and tribes of people living off the land, keeping livestock
Edited sentence: Kahuta is a beautiful place, of many mountain ranges, breathtaking views, snow-capped mountains, forests, gushing rivers and a cool climate hot in the summer with more rainfall just giving it that coolness, cold winters, different spices of wildlife, different tribes of people living off the land, keeping livestock