Original sentence: According to Fortune, funding for female venture capital founders was 2.2% of all venture capital dollars in 2018.Although women-founded venture capital firms are far less prevalent than male-founded firms, the disparity of the disbursement of venture capital dollars is high.Eileen Lee, cofounder of Cowboy Ventures, one of the most prominent women in venture capital in Silicon Valley, started a group with fellow women in venture capital who seek "to both mentor and increase the number of women founders and women in venture capital".The most plausible solution to this issue is to provide more funding for venture capital funds led by women.Tthere are steps that can be taken within the venture capital field to help women in the industry.Winn says that one of the main problems women face is a lack of funding or capital for their ventures.”, one-third of the individuals enrolled in graduate school business programs were women
Edited sentence: According to Fortune, funding for female venture capital founders was only 2.2% of all venture capital dollars in 2018.Although gender issues need to be addressed by society as a whole, there are steps that can be taken within the venture capital field to help women in the industry.Although women founded venture capital firms are far less prevalent than male founded firms, the disparity of the disbursement of venture capital dollars is high.Eileen Lee, cofounder of Cowboy Ventures, one of the most prominent women in venture capital in Silicon Valley, started a group with fellow women in venture capital who seek "to both mentor and increase the number of women founders and women in venture capital,".Joan Winn says that one of the main problems women face is a lack of funding or capital for their ventures.To solve this issue, the most plausible solution is to provide more funding for venture capital funds led by women.” only one-third of the individuals enrolled in graduate school business programs were women