Original sentence: From the mouse plot when he went to Llandaff Cathedral School, to the removal of young Roald’s adenoids without any form for pain-relievers, the book covers a variety of subjects.Many of Dahl’s descriptions are grotesque and lifelike,  however, these descriptions are insight into what the situation was like in the twenties.This book follows important, and some smaller events of Roald’s childhood
Edited sentence: From the mouse plot when he went to Llandaff Cathedral School, to the removal of young Roald’s adenoids without any form for pain-relievers.However, these descriptions are very important to illustrate what the situation was like in the twenties.Many of Dahl’s descriptions are rather grotesque and lifelike, therefore one might feel uncomfortable when reading some of his passages.This book folows some important, and some smaller, events of Roald’s childhood