Original sentence: " According to the LDS publication The Contributor, Smith later said: "The same God that has thus far dictated to me and directed me and strengthened me in this work, gave me this revelation and commandment on celestial and plural marriage, and the same God commanded me to obey it.Smith is attributed with a revelation of July 12, 1843, published by the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (LDS) in Utah in 1852, that outlined the requirements to live in the highest glory of the celestial heaven.Though the LDS church teaches that Joseph Smith taught plural marriage, some of the smaller branches of the Latter Day Saint movement reject this position
Edited sentence: " Smith later said: "The same God that has thus far dictated to me and directed me and strengthened me in this work, gave me this revelation and commandment on celestial and plural marriage, and the same God commanded me to obey it.Smith is attributed with a revelation of July 12, 1843, published in Utah in 1852, that outlined the requirements to live in the highest glory of the celestial heaven.Though the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (LDS) Church teaches that Joseph Smith taught plural marriage, some of the smaller branches of the Latter Day Saint movement reject this position