Original sentence: Bear River is affectionately known as "the Switzerland of Nova Scotia" because of the steep hills which surround the village.Bear River is noted for its picturesque old buildings on stilts along the riverside.Bear River was an important shipbuilding location in the late 1800s.One of many large vessels built in the village was the brigantine Dei Gratia, the vessel which discovered the famous mystery ship Mary Celeste in 1872.The scenery has made it popular with photographers and a tourism destination
Edited sentence: Bear River had a history of ship building in the late 1800s and is affectionately known as the Switzerland of Nova Scotia because of the hills which surround the village.It is a photographer's paradise and a very popular stopping place for the tourists that visit the area.The village is extremely picturesque with old buildings on stilts into the river