Original sentence: Palestinian and international sources allege that the camp and its dwellings were attacked indiscriminately by Israel with heavy military equipment, combat helicopters, rockets and missiles, and raised allegations of war crimes and massacre, which were reported in the international media, and led to increased criticism of the Sharon government.The allegations of massacre were subsequently challenged, and the Palestinian death toll revised downward to 52, with 23 Israeli soldiers killed in the fighting
Edited sentence: Palestinian sources alleged that the camp and its dwellings were attacked indiscriminately by Israel with heavy military equipment, combat helicopters, rockets and missiles, and raised allegations of war crimes and massacre, which were reported in the international media, and led to increased criticism of the Sharon government.the allegations of massacre were subsequently refuted, and the Palestinian death toll was estimated at 52, while 23 Israeli soldiers were killed