Original sentence: File sharing (both audio and video), and the ready availability of cheap CD writing equipment, has largely signalled the demise of the for-profit bootlegging industry.In fact a nearly comprehensive set of Beatles BBC appearances circulates amongst collectors; the set comprises 11 discs, and the source quality of many tracks is superior to that of the official release.Most bootlegs are now circulated between fans on the internet.Much of the material from the official Live at the BBC was in fact sourced from a Great Dane bootleg set
Edited sentence: ) discs, and the source quality of many tracks is superior to that of the official release.File sharing (both audio and video) has largely signalled the demise of the for-profit bootlegging industry; in fact most of those involved with Beatles bootleg collecting and propagation are in it for the love of the music.In fact a nearly comprehensive set of Beatles BBC appearances circulates amongst collectors; the set comprises 11(.In fact much of the material from the official Live at the BBC was in fact sourced from a Great Dane bootleg set