Original sentence: " In Two to Conquer, it is stated that each Renunciate wears a dagger across her breasts in token that any man who attempts to rape her does so at risk of his life, and that should he succeed and not be killed, others of the Sisterhood are sword to track down and kill both the rapist and his victim
Edited sentence: " In Two to Conquer, it is stated that each Renunciate wears a dagger across her breasts in token that she will kill any man who tries to enslave and/or rape her; and that should she fail to kill him, others of the Sisterhood are sworn to track down and kill both the rapist and his victim