Original sentence: In April 2007, Malaysia, one of the major planters and producers of palm oil, expressed concern about the "media campaign" initiated by some NGO against the increasingly worrying environment impact of the industry : massive destruction of the ecosystem of species like orangutan, badly controlled logging and land-clearing by large timber companies, threatening the livelihood of minority tribes such as the Iban in Sarawak - Borneo island-,  (International Herald Tribune, April 16th 2007 : "Malaysia says activists trying to harm palm oil industry by highlighting orangutan woes").The best professional estimates state that if the industry is not regulated then within 12 years we may witness the disappearance of orangutans from the wild
Edited sentence: In April 2007, Malaysia, one of the major planters and producers of palm oil, expressed concern about the "media campaign" initiated by some NGO against the increasingly real and worrying environment impact of the industry : massive destruction of the ecosystem of species like orangutan, badly controlled logging and land-clearing by large timber companies, threatening the livelihood of minority tribes such as the Iban in Sarawak - Borneo island-,  (International Herald Tribune, April 16th 2007 : "Malaysia says activists trying to harm palm oil industry by highlighting orangutan woes").It will only take up to two or three years of rain forest destruction if the current rate continues to determine the fate of the orangutan.People should ensure that the Palm oil in their products is from Orangutan Friendly plantations, and not from plantations that have relied on the burning of rainforests.The best professional estimates state that if the industry is not regulated then within 3 years we may witness the disappearance of orangutans from the wild.The genetic pool of the orangutan will be too small to ensure the survival of the species.The populations of orangutans that will still exist in 2008 will not be viable anymore and the damage done will be irreversible