Original sentence: Joseph was vizier for one or more pharaohs whose identity is not established with certainty, but some have cited evidence that these were Kakaure Senuseret III and his later co-regent Nimaatre Amenemhat III, who ruled from Avaris, though fringe theories state that he lived in the Old Kingdom, and some further evidence from non-fringe sources supports him living in the Hyksos period or the New Kingdom.The Israelite sojourn in Egypt is sometimes said to have lasted 210 years.The identity of the pharaoh of the Exodus is likewise uncertain; the prevalent view among scholars today is that it was either Merneptah or his predecessor Ramses II, but others have been suggested as well, including Ahmose I (in The Exodus Decoded), Thutmose III or his son Amenhotep II, or Horemheb and Ramses I, by a smaller minority of scholars
Edited sentence: Joseph was vizier for one or more pharaohs whose identity is not established with certainty, but some have cited evidence that these were Kakaure Senuseret III and his later co-regent Nimaatre Amenemhat III, who ruled from Avaris, though fringe theories state that he lived in the Old Kingdom, and some further evidence supports him living in the Hyksos period or the New Kingdom.The Israelite sojourn in Egypt is said to have lasted 400 years, but some scholars suggest 210 as more likely