Original sentence: Ben tells Locke that this is the answer to his earlier question regarding where he came from, saying that they're all the Dharma Initiative, and admitting he was born elsewhere.Then, Ben pulls out a gun and shoots Locke in the stomach, and Locke falls into the pit
Edited sentence: He said that they are the Dharma Initiative, and that he wasn't actually born on the island.He then tells Locke that this is the answer to his earlier question regarding where he came from.Then, in a shocking turn of events, Ben pulls out a gun and shoots Locke in the stomach, and Locke falls into the pit