Original sentence: Her repitoire includes jazz, pre-rock pop and gospel.Lalah Hathaway is a contemporary R&B singer and the daughter of soul musician Donny Hathaway.She has appeared on Black Entertainment Television performing jazz and fusion
Edited sentence: Her stage shows included jazz, pre-rock pop, and even gospel, and Hathaway later appeared on Black Entertainment Television doing jazz and fusion.She not only displayed poise, confidence, and good technique, but was also versatile enough to do more than just light urban contemporary ballads.The daughter of the great Donny Hathaway, Lalah Hathaway made a good impression with her debut recording Lalah Hathaway in 1990