Original sentence: Critics accuse Raymond of hijacking the free software movement for the sake of self-promotion.He has been accused of selling out.Raymond initially became famous for his "adoption" of the Jargon File.Raymond's supporters counter that nobody has stepped forward to fork the jargon file and then act as maintainer of the forked version
Edited sentence: Critics accuse Raymond of hijacking the free software movement for the sake of self promotion.ESR initially became famous for his "adoption" of the Jargon File.He has also been accused of directly selling out