Original sentence: After meeting Ash and Brock, she becomes rivals with another coordinator, Zoey, as well as her childhood friend, Kenny and goes on to win the Floaroma Ribbon, the Wallace Cup's Aqua Ribbon, the Celestic Ribbon and the Chocovine Town Ribbon against a new rival, Ursula.Dawn has also a cruch on him, and he seems to feel the same thing toward her.He is best friends with Kenny, and he's in love with Leona, a young trainer from Twinleaf Town.In the Tatsunami Pokemon Contest, he deafeated dawn and won his 4th ribbon.Kenny has been recently elected the ugliest character in the anime so far, along with his feminine counterpart Leona.is a Pokémon coordinator from Snowpoint City and Dawn's main rival
Edited sentence: After meeting Ash and Brock, she becomes rivals with another coordinator, Zoey, as well as her childhood friend, Kenny and goes on to win the Floaroma Ribbon, the Wallace Cup's Aqua Ribbon, the Celestic Ribbon and the Chocovine Town Ribbon.He is best friends with Kenny.is a Pokémon coordinator from Snowpoint City and Dawn's rival and best friend