Original sentence: As there is absolutely no information about Altayech other than hearsay, and no official documents or record of her whatsoever, little is known about this alleged relationship with her, beyond that it allegedly occurred when Haile Selassie (then Tafari) was in his late teens.Haile Selassie also had an older daughter, Princess Romanework Haile Selassie, who was born from an alleged earlier union to Woizero Altayech; however this is disputed by living members of the royal family, who state that Romanework is the oldest daughter of Menen.Haile Selassie never once mentioned any previous marriage, either in his autobiography, My Life and Ethiopia's Progess, nor in any other writings.Romanework Haile Selassie is nonetheless counted as a daughter of 'Altayech' by some scholarly sources.Romanework was granted the title of Princess and given the dignity of "Imperial Highness" upon Haile Selassie's coronation, along with his other children
Edited sentence: Haile Selassie also had an older daughter, Princess Romanework Haile Selassie, who was born from an earlier union to Woizero Altayech; her name is alternatively transliterated "Romane Worq".Haile Selassie never once mentioned any previous marriage, either in his Autobiography or in any other writings.Little is known about his relationship with Altayech beyond that it occurred when Haile Selassie (then Tafari) was in his late teens.Romanework Haile Selassie is nonetheless counted among his offspring by most scholarly sources.She was granted the title of Princess and given the dignity of "Imperial Highness" upon Haile Selassie's coronation, along with his other children