Original sentence: John Berry is a of well known vocalist in country music.With multiple gold and platinum albums and nominations from the Country Music Association, the Academy of Country Music, and the Grammys, he has forged an appreciation from the music industry and fans alike
Edited sentence: It’s a stunningly rich, majestic tenor that he uses to its full effect.John Berry has one of the most powerful and distinctive voices in country music.With multiple gold and platinum albums and nominations from the Country Music Association, the Academy of Country Music, and the Grammys, he has clearly forged an appreciation from the music industry and fans alike