Original sentence: Many thousands died in the attack, while thousands more were allegedly raped and tortured by Police in a withhunt of separatists, and several Sikh reference libraries were destroyed across Punjab, in addition to other gurdwaras (places of prayer)
Edited sentence: Many thousands died in the attack, while thousands more were raped and tortured by Police, and several Sikh reference libraries were destroyed across Punjab, in addition to other gurdwaras (places of prayer)