Original sentence: Steven has also appeared on Noggin's Jack’s Big Music Show, with Daily Show host Jon Stewart, and original Blue's Clues host Steve Burns.While his style is deeply influenced by the big drum sounds of the 70's, his youth spent playing in his father's polka band developed a keen sense of taste and syncopation, allowing for seamless transitions through an articulate and dynamic touch
Edited sentence: Steven has also appeared on Noggin's Jack's Big Music Show, with Daily Show host Jon Stewart, and original Blue's Clues host Steve Burns.While his style is deeply influenced by the big drum sounds of the 1970s, his youth spent playing in his father's polka band developed a keen sense of taste and syncopation, allowing for seamless transitions through an articulate and dynamic touch