Original sentence: Several Democratic politicians and activists have alleged that Bush skipped over a waiting list to receive a National Guard slot, that he did not report for required duty from 1972 to 1973, and that he was suspended from flying after he failed to take a required physical examination and drug test.These issues were publicized during the 2004 Presidential campaign by the group Texans for Truth and other Bush critics
Edited sentence: Bush skipped over a waiting list to receive a National Guard slot, also he did not report for required duty from 1972 to 1973, and he was suspended from flying after he failed to take a required physical examination and drug test.These issues were publicized during the 2004 Presidential campaign by the group Texans for Truth and others