Original sentence: In the wake of the Deepwater Horizon Disaster, many Floridians have taken a sharp turn against offshore drilling, although Rubio's campaign still supports drilling off the coast of Florida, and has pushed for more wells, distancing himself from former Republican challenger Charlie Crist who does not support additional offshore drilling.Recently Rubio has been criticized for his support of offshore drilling, and his support for drilling in the past in close proximity to Florida's Reef
Edited sentence: In the wake of the Deepwater Horizon Disaster, Floridians have taken a sharp turn against offshore drilling, but Rubio's campaign still supports drilling off the coast of Florida, and even has even pushed for more wells, closer to the shore and the reefs; distancing himself from former Republican challenger Charlie Crist who does not support additional offshore drilling.Recently Rubio has come under fire for his support of offshore drilling, and his support for drilling in the past in close proximity to Florida's Reef, the 3rd largest in the world