Original sentence: Goa's main rivers are the  Mandovi, the  Zuari, the  Terecol,  Chapora and the  Betul.The month of May is the hottest, seeing day temperatures of over 34°C (99°F) coupled with high humidity.The regions of Goa, called talukas ("Conselhos" in Portuguese), are organised into two groupings, called the Velhas Conquistas, or Old Conquests, abbreviated VC, and the Novas Conquistas, abbreviated NC.The three inner Conselhos of Tiswadi (formerly and still often known as "Ilhas da Goa"), Bardez and Salsette form the Velhas Conquistas, and support the bulk of the population
Edited sentence: Goa's main rivers are the  Mandovi (called "Mandvi" by the Indians), the  Zuari, the  Terecol (called "Terekhol" by the Indians),  Chapora and the  Betul.Many of these homes are built by destroying forests and on ecologically sensitive hill slopes.The mining industry is another notorious culprit, dumping wastes in stream channels, thereby causing flooding during the rains.The month of May is the hottest, seeing day temperatures of over 39°C (99°F) coupled with high humidity.The regions of Goa, called "Conselhos" ("talukas" according to the Indians), are organized into two groupings, called the Velhas Conquistas, or Old Conquests, abbreviated VC, and the Novas Conquistas, abbreviated NC.The result of Indian occupation has been something of an ecological disaster, with forest cover reduced drastically, particularly in the Velhas Conquistas.The three inner Conselhos of Ilhas da Goa ("Tiswaddi", according to the Indians), Bardez and Salsette form the Velhas Conquistas, and support the bulk of the population.Under the occupation, the communidade lands have been seized and given up for setting up homesteads, largely for the Indian civil servants imported into Goa