Original sentence: This point also works in with another of Baudrillard's claims—that the war was so heavily edited when it was shown on television that what Americans saw wasn't even close to the real war
Edited sentence: All this finally comes back to the title of the book, which we now see as his claim that, despite the massive bloodshed in the Gulf in 1991, no war took place there.However, it is also important to note that even if it were not a war, it was a situation of violence, and people were killed and wounded during its course of events, regardless of those events' names.That the 'Gulf War' did not take place (and, one could argue, is still not taking place) is an important and controversial point to make.This point also works in with another of Baudrillard claims that the war was so heavily edited when it was shown on television that what Americans saw wasn't even close to the real war