Original sentence: About 10:15PM, while Margaret was taking clean baby bottles to the maternity wing, 16-year-old Jennie McMinn, was able to force open and squeeze through a hinged window in her cell door.As Margaret was opening the third inmate's cell to investigate she was jumped from behind by the two lying in wait.Margaret is buried at the Union Cemetery in Waterdown, Ontario.Margaret was 64 years old at the time of her death.Margaret was born June 1, 1860 and was raised in Waterdown, Ontario, Canada, a small town west of Toronto.Margaret would be the only staff member on duty throughout the night.On Sunday, May 25th, 1925 Margaret arrived for work at 8:00PM, unaware that three inmates were planning an escape.When James died in the late 1890s, Margaret moved with her three children to Toronto where she went to work as a matron in the Andrew Mercer Reformatory for Women
Edited sentence: About 10:15PM, while Mick was taking clean baby bottles to the maternity wing, 16-year-old Jennie McMinn, was able to force open and squeeze through a hinged window in her cell door.As Mick was opening the third inmate's cell to investigate she was jumped from behind by the two lying in wait.Mick is buried at the Union Cemetery in Waterdown, Ontario.Mick was 64 years old at the time of her death.Mick was born June 1, 1860 and was raised in Waterdown, Ontario, Canada, a small town west of Toronto.Mick would be the only staff member on duty throughout the night.On Sunday, May 25th, 1925 Mick arrived for work at 8:00PM, unaware that three inmates were planning an escape.When James died in the late 1890s, Mick moved with her three children to Toronto where she went to work as a matron in the Andrew Mercer Reformatory for Women