Original sentence: His television appearances include a season as a Saturday Night Live cast member (1985-1986), the role of real-life gunslinger John Wesley Hardin in the miniseries Streets of Laredo, and a starring role in The Brotherhood of Poland, New Hampshire (2003)
Edited sentence: His television appearances include a season as a Saturday Night Live cast member (1985-1986), the role of real-life gunslinger John Wesley Hardin in the miniseries Streets of Laredo, and a starring role in the awkwardly-titled The Brotherhood of Poland, New Hampshire (2003)