Original sentence: According to an author's note, Takaya initially designed Rin's appearance with very short hair but changed this to long hair to mimic the blowing of a horse's mane in the wind.Ren offers to help if Rin steals a treasure (a black box) from Akito, but Rin is caught by Akito and confined in the cat's prison; after she is released by Kureno, she reconciles with Hatsuharu, accepting his support.She also accepts Tohru's assistance, because of her kindness, and grows as protective of her as of Hatsuharu, and gets angry when someone upsets or hurts her.She is tall and initially has hip-length dark hair, which is later cut off; in an author's note, Natsuki Takaya described her as "the character in charge of sexiness.She only appears in the manga
Edited sentence: Ren offers to help if Rin steals a treasure (a black box) from Akito, but Rin is caught by Akito, who confines her in the cat's prison and cuts off her hair; after she is released by Kureno, she reconciles with Hatsuharu, accepting his support.She also accepts Tohru's assistance because of the latter's kindness, and grows as protective of her as of Hatsuharu, getting angry when someone upsets or hurts her.She appears only in the manga.She is tall and initially has hip-length dark hair; according to an author's note, Natsuki Takaya initially designed her with very short hair but then made it long to mimic the blowing of a horse's mane in the wind.Takaya described Rin as "the character in charge of sexiness