Original sentence: Vampire hunter Edgar Frog is destitute and nearly friendless, when vampire-romance novelist Gwen Lieber offers him a small fortune to go on a vampire hunt and rescue her son from vampires
Edited sentence: After losing best friend and fellow vamp fighter, Sam, he has started to let himself slide.Before the battle is over Edgar will discover there is a greater evil at work and must face his most haunting fear.Gwen shows Edgar a vial of the The Thirst, explaining DJ Dusk must be a head vampire and he’s using his parties to raise an undead army.He’s down to selling his prized comic book collection just to pay rent on a decrepit trailer when stunning vampire novelist Gwen approaches with an offer.In a last, frantic message he mentioned being given a new party drug known as The Thirst, which turned out to be a mixture of ecstasy and vampire blood.She needs him to find her brother who has gone missing after getting sucked into a series of underground raves, called “The Gathering”, held by an enigmatic spinner named DJ Dusk.The thankless life of a vampire hunter has taken its toll on Edgar Frog.With the last rave, “The Final Gathering”, only days away Edgar must assemble a vamp-hunting team worthy of crashing the party, and hopes to include his reclusive brother who’s dealing with his own dark past