Original sentence: " In 1919, she left Lloyd, desiring greater dramatic aspirations., tails is San Diego"), he and Harold moved West.When he was a child, his parents divorced and Harold chose to stay with his father who was always dreaming up grand get rich quick schemes that ended in disasters
Edited sentence: " In 1919, she left Lloyd to pursue her dramatic aspirations., tails is San Diego"), he and Harold moved west.When he was a child, his parents divorced and Harold chose to stay with his father who was always dreaming up grand get-rich-quick schemes that ended in disasters