Original sentence: 14-15) and went onto form his own party, Mana Moutahake, a precursor to the Maori Party.His approach to the Moyle and O'Brien 'affairs' was heavy-handed and unnnecessary.Mat Rata rightly complained about the 'insensitivity' of Labour's Maori policy (Henderson, pp
Edited sentence: His approach to the Moyle and O'Brien 'affairs' was heavy-handed and unnecessary.Matiu Rata rightly complained about the insensitivity of Labour's Maori policy and went onto form his own party, Mana Moutahake, a precursor to the Maori Party