Original sentence: However, the book's happy ending pages are ripped out by several Disney Villains, namely Captain Hook from Peter Pan; The Wicked Queen from Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs; The Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland and the Ringmaster from Dumbo, who alter the stories to their advantage, without the presence of happy endings.In the altered stories, the Wicked Queen has built a giant house resembling her infamous poisoned apple and has put Snow White to sleep and intends to do the same to the seven dwarves.The player uses the book as a shield to deflect the villains' attacks and defeats each one (Hook is sent flying by a reflected cannonball, the Wicked Queen is seemingly frightend to death by her own reflection, the Queen of Hearts surrenders when a hedge maze topiary statue she hides in is destroyed and the Ringmaster is knocked unconscious by a well aimed custard pie)
Edited sentence: However, the book's happy ending pages are ripped out by several Disney Villains, namely Captain Hook from Peter Pan; The Wicked Queen Grimhilde as Old-Hag Witch from Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs; The Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland and the Ringmaster from Dumbo, who alter the stories to their advantage, without the presence of happy endings.In the altered stories, the Wicked Queen Grimhilde as Old-Hag Witch has built a giant house resembling her infamous poisoned apple and has put Snow White to sleep and intends to do the same to the seven dwarves.The player uses the book as a shield to deflect the villains' attacks and defeats each one (Hook is sent flying by a reflected cannonball, the Wicked Queen Grimhilde as Old-Hag Witch is seemingly frightend to death by her own reflection, the Queen of Hearts surrenders when a hedge maze topiary statue she hides in is destroyed and the Ringmaster is knocked unconscious by a well aimed custard pie)