Original sentence: While her detractors dismiss the veracity of her forecasts, proponents believe Faith is a true seer, and that she and her company are able to accurately predict changes in consumer behavior by closely following societal patterns.{fact}  She and her company have successfully transformed many major brands, including Pepsico  and Tylenol.{fact}  A Los Angeles Times entertainment section article, following Faith's predictions over a period of five years, indicates that she was the first to herald such cultural trends as Food Coaches, Mannity, Life Lifting, Belly Babies, and Transcouture
Edited sentence: A Los Angeles Times article, following Faith's predictions over a period of five years, indicates that she was the first to herald such cultural trends as Food Coaches, Mannity, Life Lifting, Belly Babies, and Transcouture.She and her company have successfully transformed many major brands, including Pepsico  and Tylenol.While her detractors dismiss the veracity of her forecasts, many proponents believe Faith is a true seer, and that she and her company are able to accurately predict changes in consumer behavior by closely following societal patterns