Original sentence: A separate but related claim is that John Paul's administration spread an unproven belief that condoms do not block the spread of HIV; between these two claims, many critics have blamed him for AIDS epidemics in Africa and elsewhere.Accordingly, he argued that using a contraceptive was an immoral act.His beliefs about contraception were particularly controversial to many people.John Paul followed traditional Catholic teaching and believed that the essential purpose of sex for a potentially fertile couple is procreation.Many people disagreed with this belief, but even some who agreed suggested that it was impractical to condemn use of condoms when sexually transmitted AIDS is spreading
Edited sentence: His intractable stance on condoms has also come under criticism; many claim that the Vatican's position on contraception has abetted the spread of AIDS in developing countries in which the Catholic Church has a strong presence, for example the Philippines, Nicaragua and Kenya.In 2003, the BBC's Panorama investigations found that in all three continents, Catholic-dominated communities adhered the Vatican position that condoms have holes in them which let the Aids virus through.The WHO has repeatedly voiced its objection to the proliferation of this scientific untruth.The president of the Vatican's Pontifical Council for the Family, Cardinal Alfonso Lopez Trujillo, explained that the Vatican's scientific committee had proved this - but despite promises, never produced the committee's evidence