Original sentence: After the American Revolutionary War, the two towns were united and renamed to honor General La Fayette, a French military hero who significantly aided the American Army during the war.Flora MacDonald (1722–1790), a Scots Highland woman known for aiding Bonnie Prince Charlie after his Highlander army's defeat at Culloden in 1746, lived in North Carolina for about five years.She was a staunch loyalist and aided her husband to raise the local Scots to fight for the King against the Revolution
Edited sentence: After the American Revolutionary War, the two towns were united and renamed in honor of General La Fayette, a French military hero who significantly aided the Continental Army during the Revolution.Flora MacDonald (1722–1790), a Highland Scots woman known for aiding "Bonnie" Prince Charlie after his Highlander army's defeat at Culloden in 1746, lived in North Carolina for about five years.She was a staunch Loyalist and aided her husband to raise the local Highalnd Scots to fight for the King against the forces of the Revolution.The change of name from Campbelltown was also arguably done to punish the Highland Scots community in the local area, most of whom had held Loyalist sympathies