Original sentence: An active presence in the Bay Area for nearly 35 years, the organization evolves in response to the needs of artists and the community, engaging the public in the artists’ work.SoEx supports emerging artists and youth in a dynamic environment in which they can develop and present new work and ideas.Southern Exposure (aka SoEx) is not-for-profit arts organization and alternative art space founded in 1974 in the Mission District of San Francisco, California
Edited sentence: An active presence in the Bay Area for since 1974, the organization evolves in response to the needs of artists and the community, engaging the public in the artists’ work.SoEx supports visual artists and youth in a dynamic environment in which they can develop and present new work and ideas.Southern Exposure (SoEx) is a not-for-profit arts organization and alternative art space founded in 1974 in the Mission District of San Francisco, California