Original sentence: He later joined the ill-fated Blues Council, another Scottish band.In the sixties Leslie Harvey was asked to join the Animals by Alan Price but chose to stay with his brother Alex in the Alex Harvey Soul Band.It was while on stage with Stone The Crows at Swansea Top Rank on in 1972 that he was killed, electrocuted by a live microphone.Leslie (Les) Harvey (1945, Glasgow, Scotland - May 2, 1972, Swansea, Wales) (brother of Alex Harvey) was a guitarist in several Scottish bands of the late 1960s and early 1970s, most notably Stone the Crows- previously known as 'Power'.Strangely enough, the only previous band to record this track were an American group who all also died shortly after recording.The Blues Council made one record, Baby Don't Look Down before a car crash killed most members of the band
Edited sentence: And he died at an age befitting a man of his talents and the same age to his more famous peers including Jimi Hendrix - yes, Leslie Harvey was in that league, he was 27.For anyone who saw Leslie Harvey play guitar they would regard him as a virtuoso guitar player up there with the VERY best that the world could offer at that time.He later joined the ill fated 'Blues Council' another utterly amazing Scottish band.In the sixties Leslie Harvey was asked to join the Animals by Alan Price but preferred to stay with his brother Alex in the Alex Harvey Soul Band.It was while on stage with Stone The Crows at Swansea Top Rank on May 2nd 1972 that he was killed, electrocuted by a live microphone.Leslie (Les) Harvey (born in 1945, in the Gorbals, Glasgow, Strathclyde, Scotland) (brother of Alex Harvey) was a guitarist in several Scottish bands of the late 1960's and early 1970s, most notably Stone the Crows- previously known as 'Power'.Strangely enough the only previous band to record this track were an American group who all also died shortly after recording.The Blues Council made one record 'Baby Don't Look Down' before a car crash killed most members of the band