Original sentence: Bendahara Tun Mutahir inspired Sultan Mahmud Shah's ire as he aspired to surpass the Sultan's wealth.By the time of his death, Sultan Ahmad Shah and his father had already run to Bentan (now Indonesia) and back to Johor to set up the Sultanate of Johor.He bestowed the death sentence upon the Bendahara Tun Mutahir and his family as he was told to by his father Sultan Mahmud Shah without even checking into the charges against the man.Kingdom of Malacca entry on MSN Encarta.Realizing his mistake, Sultan Mahmud Shah gave the reins to his son Ahmad Shah (1511-1513).Sultan Ahmad Shah of Malacca was a ruthless leader in 16th century of what is now Malaysia.Sultan Ahmad Shah was a poor leader and this led to his death in 1513 in the war against the Portuguese, in Malacca.Sultan Mahmud Shah ascended the throne again after his son's death
Edited sentence: Ahmad Shah of Malacca (died 1513) was a sultan of what is now Malaysia.Ahmad Shah's rule began in 1511 when his father stepped aside.He was succeeded in rule by his father.His father was Sultan Mahmud Shah.It ended in 1513 when he died during the kingdom's war with Portugal.Kingdom of Malacca from MSN Encarta