Original sentence: Freeman decided to shutdown several nuclear plants that may have contributed to several rate increases with TVA.He had done a similar job at the Tennessee Valley Authority (TVA), after President Jimmy Carter appointed him to head the TVA board in 1977, changing the TVA focus from growth to conservation
Edited sentence: Freeman decided to shutdown several nuclear plants that lead to the several rate increases with TVA.He had done a similar job at the Tennessee Valley Authority (TVA), after President Jimmy Carter appointed him to head the TVA board in 1977, changing the TVA focus from growth to conservation In doing he caused possible millions of dollars in lost power