Original sentence: During  the [[Dissolution of the Monasteries] the local commissioners were instructed to ensure that, where abbey churches were also used for parish worship, they should continue or could be purchased by  parishioners.Several theories explain the actual founding  of the religious community.The first prior was Aldwyn, who founded the monastery on the bishop's advice  and by 1135 the monastery included thirty monks.The most marketable fabric of the monastic buildings  were sold off  an withe the exception of the church building, all  that  remains of Malvern's monastery is the Abbey Gateway, that houses today's Malvern Museum
Edited sentence: During  the Dissolution of the Monasteries the local commissioners were instructed to ensure that, where abbey churches were also used for parish worship, they should continue or could be purchased by  parishioners.Several slightly  different  histories explain the actual founding  of the religious community.The first prior was Aldwyn, who founded the monastery on his bishop's advice  and by 1135 the monastery included thirty monks.The most marketable fabric of the monastic buildings  was sold off  an with the exception of the church building, all  that  remains of Malvern's monastery is the Abbey Gateway that houses today's Malvern Museum