Original sentence: The 'jagged edges' (akin to Anton Webern) and use of free dissonance by each composer while (simultaneously) writing across the Atlantic from one another are notable.There is some notable lyrical playing by members of the Kenton orchestra in this final movement
Edited sentence: The fascinating aspect are the 'jagged edges' (akin to Anton Webern) and use of free dissonance by each composer while (simultaneously) writing across the Atlantic from one another.There is some stunningly beautiful lyrical playing by members of the Kenton orchestra in this final movement