Original sentence: Alan Lowe won re-election in the 2005 elections
Edited sentence: Additionally, the fact that in America he is merely an intern at a film production company is a textbook example of the sad state of Canadian politics.Alan Lowe won  re-election in the 2005 elections.His ability to commute to the "States" every week stands as a testament to his 'iron fist' ruling policy, where dissent is quickly and efficiently crushed