Original sentence: Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp.It involved what Israel, termed a large-scale counter-terrorist offensive in the West Bank by IDF forces.The Battle of Jenin, also referred to as the Jenin Massacre, took place between the 3rd and 11th of April 2002 in Jenin's Palestinian refugee camp as part of Israel's Operation Defensive Shield
Edited sentence: A series of suicide attacks by Palestinian militants on Israeli civilians, which culminated in the March 27, 2002 Passover massacre in which 30 Israelis were killed, followed by six others in a span of two weeks, prompted the Israel Defence Forces (IDF) to conduct what it termed a large-scale counter-terrorist offensive in the West Bank.Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, referred to as "the martyrs' capital" by Palestinians, charging that the it was a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against Israeli civilians, including 28 suicide bombers.Palestinian and some international sources alleged that the camp and its dwellings were attacked indiscriminately by Israel with heavy military equipment, combat helicopters, rockets and missiles, and raised allegations of massacre, initially reported in the international media and subsequently rejected by outside observers, and of war crimes, which major human rights organizations maintained had taken place on both sides.The Battle of Jenin, previously referred to as the Jenin Massacre, took place between the 3rd and 11th of April 2002 in Jenin's Palestinian refugee camp as part of Israel's Operation Defensive Shield.The Palestinian death toll was estimated at 52 (including 22 civilians), while 23 Israeli soldiers were killed