Original sentence: Bordered to the north-east by Laund Hill, Weather Hill and Low Hill and to the south-west by the natural scar of Longwood Edge, above the suburb of Longwood.Huddersfield New College and Salendine Nook High School are both situated at Salendine Nook, with their playing fields extending out to Longwood Edge.Longwood Edge affords a panoramic view across the Colne Valley to Crosland Moor on the other side
Edited sentence: Bordered to the north-east by Laund Hill, Weather Hill and Low Hill and to the south-west by Longwood Edge.Huddersfield New College and Salendine Nook High School are situated at the natural scar of Longwood Edge, affording a view across the Colne Valley which for much of the late 20th Century was punctuated by explosions associated with the testing of Fireworks at Crosland Hill