Original sentence: " "ref name=Williams> </ref>.Spong's ideas have received strong criticism from some other theologians, notably the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams (when Williams was the Bishop of Monmouth), describing his 'twelve theses' as embodying "confusion and misinterpretation
Edited sentence: Spong's ideas have received strong criticism from some other theologians, notably the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams (when Williams was the Bishop of Monmouth), describing his 'twelve theses' as embodying "a level of confusion and misinterpretation that I find astonishing," "the sort of questions that might be asked by a bright 20th century sixth-former