Original sentence: In October 2006, she appeared on the BBC celebrity panel show QI (D series, episode 4, 'Dictionaries'), and showed herself to be an adept improvisor, giving a very humorous performance.She won the show, finishing in front of Alan Davies, Phill Jupitus and Rory Bremner
Edited sentence: ) eating her dust.In October 2006, she appeared on the BBC celebrity panel show QI (D series, episode 4, 'Dictionaries'), and showed herself to be an astonishingly adept improvisor, giving a very humorous performance.She ran away with the victory, leaving Alan Davies, Phill Jupitus and Rory Bremner (and even host Stephen Fry