Original sentence: Teach the Controversy is the name of a Discovery Institute intelligent design campaign to promote intelligent design by manufacturing the controversy they want to teach.The American Association for the Advancement of Science and other science and education professional organizations say that Teach the Controversy proponents seek to undermine the teaching of evolution while promoting intelligent design, and to advance an education policy for US public schools that introduces creationist explanations for the origin of life to public-school science curricula.The advocates then offer Creationism as an alternative to science.They promote the false perception that evolution is a theory in crisis with scientists criticizing evolution and claim that fairness and equal time requires educating students about the alleged scientific controversy
Edited sentence: Teach the Controversy is the name of a Discovery Institute intelligent design campaign to promote intelligent design that seeks to portray evolution as a theory in crisis.The American Association for the Advancement of Science and other science and education professional organizations say that Teach the Controversy proponents seek to undermine the teaching of science while promoting intelligent design, and to advance an education policy for US public schools that introduces creationist explanations for the origin of life to public-school science curricula.The advocates then offer creationism as an alternative to science.The campaign claims that a significant number of scientists criticize evolution, and argues that fairness and equal time require educating students about the alleged scientific controversy