Original sentence: Gene prevalence and therefore selection, however, can be influenced by increasing the reproductive success of individuals with whom we share genes in common.Many of these people seek scientific proof that homosexuality is not determined by genetics or other innate means and interpret scientific results warily.Most objections to the idea of a genetic or innate cause of homosexuality come from religious groups and others opposed to homosexuality.Most scientists agree that it is unlikely that there is a single "gay gene" that determines something as complex as sexual orientation, and that it is more likely to be the result of a collection of factors, some of which may be genetic.One common type of twin study compares the monozygotic (or "identical") twins of people possessing a particular trait to the dizygotic (non-identical) twins of people possessing the trait.The man considered the "dean of American sexologists", Johns Hopkins University psychologist John Money, concerning LeVay's studies, says, "Of course it [sexual orientation] is in the brain.They believe that homosexuality is determined by purely psychological factors, and, that a person's sexuality is a matter of personal choice or of poor upbringing
Edited sentence: Gene prevalence, however, and therefore selection, can be influenced by increasing the reproductive success of individuals with whom we share genes in common.Most objections to the idea of a genetic or innate cause of homosexuality come from religious groups and others in the anti-gay lobby.Most scientists agree that it is unlikely that there is a single 'gay gene' that determines something as complex as sexual orientation, and that it is more likely to be the result of a collection of factors, some of which may be genetic.One common type of twin study compares the monozygotic (or 'identical') twins of people possessing a particular trait to the dizygotic (non-identical) twins of people possessing the trait.The man considered the "dean of American sexologists," Johns Hopkins University psychologist John Money, concerning LeVay's studies, says, "Of course it [sexual orientation] is in the brain.They believe that homosexuality is determined by purely psychological factors, and, more so, that a person's sexuality is a matter of personal choice or of poor upbringing.They seek scientific proof that homosexuality is not determined by genetics or other innate means and interpret scientific results warily