Original sentence: After the start of his second term, Bush received increasingly heated criticism, from colleagues, many Democrats and surprisingly many fellow Republicans, and is also subject to the an impeachment movement against him, due to a failed handling of the Iraq War and other issues such as: the slow Government response to Hurricane Katrina, the failure of the No Child Left Behind Act, the NSA warrantless surveillance controversy, record budget deficits, the CIA leak scandal, the Dismissal of U.His domestic approval declined from 89 percent (the highest ever recorded by The Gallup Organization) immediately after the September 11, 2001 attacks to 26 percent (in a Newsweek poll taken in June 2007), the lowest level for any sitting president in 35 years.Running as a self-described "war president" in the midst of the Iraq War,.attorneys controversy and the Bush White House e-mail controversy, the events surrounding the death of Pat Tillman and story of POW Jessica Lynch, and the Black site controversy
Edited sentence: After his re-election, Bush received increasingly heated criticism.His domestic approval has declined from 90 percent (the highest ever recorded by The Gallup Organization) immediately after the September 11, 2001 attacks to 26 percent (in a Newsweek poll taken in June 2007), the lowest level for any sitting president in 35 years.Running as a self-described "war president" in the midst of the Iraq War, Bush was re-elected in 2004; his presidential campaign against Senator John Kerry was successful despite controversy over Bush's prosecution of the Iraq War and his handling of the economy