Original sentence: A free-lance writer, she has also written feature articles on controversial books for Lit and Music Review magazine.She is the Playmate of the Month for the June 2008 issue of Playboy magazine
Edited sentence: A freelance writer, she has also written feature articles on controversial books for Lit and Music Review magazine.She is the Playmate of the Month for the June 2008 issue of Playboy magazine, and unusually wrote the article text that accompanied her pictures