Original sentence: Sagal was born Catherine Louise (Hottie) Sagal in Hollywood, California, to a Jewish show business family; she is the daughter of director Boris Sagal, best known for his work on 1960s television dramas, including The Twilight Zone
Edited sentence: Sagal was born Catherine Louise (Hottie) Sagal in Hollywood, California, to a show business family; she is the daughter of director Boris Sagal, best known for his work on 1960s television dramas, including The Twilight Zone