Original sentence: There are two secondary schools in Mirfield: Mirfield Free Grammar and Sixth Form and Castle Hall School
Edited sentence: It's occupied mainly by the elderly, chavs and the occasional normal person.There are two secondary schools in Mirfield: Mirfield Free Grammar and Sixth Form and Castle Hall School which is due to close in the next 5 years.Within the town there are 3 co-ops, a lidle, some terrible shops and a club that nobody goes to