Original sentence: In late 1968, at least 28 Muslim volunteers from Sulu who were being trained for a covert mission Sabah were massacred by Philippine Government troops in the Jabidah Massacre.In the late 1960s, an independence movement was founded in Mindanao, the Philippines to separate the Muslim majority-Moro areas from the rest of the Philippines.On March 27, 2014, a comprehensive peace deal was signed between the Government of the Republic of the Philippine, or GRP, and the Moro Islamic Liberation Front.Subsequent break-away groups include the Moro Islamic Liberation Front or MILF and the [[Bangsamoro Islamic Freedom Figthers] or BIFF.The area is now called the Bangsamoro.The first organization of the independence movement was Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF) founded by Nur Misuari.This was after two decades of negotiations started during the administration of former President Fidel V
Edited sentence: In late 1968, at least 28 Muslim volunteers from Sulu who were being trained for a covert mission Sabah were massacred by government troops in what would popularly be known as the Jabidah Massacre, which is widely considered as the catalyst that birthed the Islamic separatist movements in Mindanao, a pioneer of which was Nur Misuari’s Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF).In the late 1960s, a geopolitical revolutionary movement in the Philippines arose from the atmosphere of activism that characterised that decade.On March 27, 2014, a comprehensive peace deal was signed between the administration of Philippine President Benigno Aquino III and the Moro Islamic Liberation Front, closing two decades of negotiations started by the administration of former President Fidel V