Original sentence: His introduction into martial arts came in 1975 at the University of South Carolina, where he was awarded his first black belt after two years.His number of wins landed him an honored place in Black Belt Magazine's Black Belt Hall of Fame in 1981.Over the course of the next ten years, Vitali competed in a large number of martial arts tournaments, winning most of them, as well as being ranked the "#1 Karate Fighter in the USA".The magazine also named Vitali as one of the ten best fighters of all time.Trajen Pictures was scheduled to shoot the film in 2012
Edited sentence: " His outstanding number of wins landed him an honored place in the Black Belt Magazine's Black Belt Hall of Fame in 1981.His introduction into martial arts came in 1975 at the University of South Carolina, where he was awarded his first black belt after only two years.Over the course of the next ten years, Vitali competed in a large number of martial arts tournaments, winning most of them, as well as being ranked the "#1 Karate Fighter in the USA.The magazine also named Master Vitali as one of the ten best fighters of all time.Trajen Pictures is schedule to shoot the film in 2012