Original sentence: Yukmouth (born 1974 in Oakland, California), is a rapper from East Oakland, CA.Yukmouth was mentored by notorious Oakland mobster Felix Mitchell and his family (and is until this day) affiliated with the infamous violent Oakland street gang "The Flowerboys"
Edited sentence: Yukmouth (born 1974 in Oakland, California), is a multitalented rapper who came out from the rough streets of East Oakland, CA.Yukmouth was mentored by Oakland notorious mobster Felix Mitchell and his family (and is until this day) affiliated with the infamous violent Oakland street gang "The Flowerboys"