Original sentence: Admiral Sir William Parker, 1st Baronet (January 1, 1743 at Harburn, Warwickshire, England - October 31, 1802), was a British naval commander.Audacious at the Battle of The Glorious First of June and was promoted to Rear-Admiral.Centurion during the capture of Louisbourg and the capture of Quebec the following year.In 1794 he commanded H.William Parker entered the navy about 1756 and in 1758 was on H
Edited sentence: Admiral Sir William Parker, 1st Baronet (1 January 1743 at Harburn, Warwickshire, England - 31 October 1802), was a British naval commander.In 1794 he commanded HMS Audacious at the Battle of The Glorious First of June and was promoted to Rear-Admiral.William Parker entered the navy about 1756 and in 1758 was on HMS Centurion during the capture of Louisbourg and the capture of Quebec the following year