Original sentence: As it stands the class are launching with many systems not fitted or non-functional.The Type 45 (or Daring) class will be an advanced air-defence warship once the class is eventually fitted-out for purpose, though when budgetary constraints will ease to permit this remains uncertain.The Type 45 has comparatively comfortable accommodation for crew, including e-mail and entertainment system access
Edited sentence: The Type 45 (or Daring) class will be the most advanced air-defence warship in the world.The Type 45 is has frequently been cited by the British press as being the first class of warship to include e-mail and entertainment systems (including iPod charging points) within the messdecks.These reports relate to 240-volt domestic supplies and access to external e-mail, both of which have been common features in most RN vessels for several years