Original sentence: However, Popular Science sent the prize to TheRooster.The mistake was caught and rectified.There has been much debate about the handling of the mistake as well as the contests for the following month(s)
Edited sentence: However, in another example of poor management, Popular Science sent the prize to TheRooster.However, there has been much debate about the handling of the mistake as well as the contests for the following month(s).The mistake was finally caught and rectified