Original sentence: Bishop J.Delano Ellis Celebrates 45 Years in Ministry.Delano Ellis, II, an African American prelate, is a leader in African-American Pentecostalism in the United States and is the founding President/Chairman of the Joint College of African-American Pentecostal Bishops
Edited sentence: Delano Ellis, II, an African American prelate, is a formidable leader in African-American Pentecostalism in the United States and is the founding President/Chairman of the Joint College of African-American Pentecostal Bishops