Original sentence: Drama continues to be important at the School, and recent OMTs include Luke Aikman (the young Paul Ashworth in Fever Pitch) and Rizwan Ahmed (The Road to Guantanamo and Britz)
Edited sentence: Drama has been a cultural high-point over the last decade,fittingly for a school that numbers Kyd and Webster amongst its old boys and recent OMTs include Luke Aikman (the young Colin Firth in 'Fever Pitch') and Rizwan Ahmed ('Road to Guanatanamo', 'Britz').This vibrant list of activities outside the curriculum perhaps accounts for the creative bent of some recent OMTs like Conn Iggulden ('The Dangerous Book for Boys') and Martin Rowson (whose Chandleresque take on 'The Wasteland' is a graphic novel classic)