Original sentence: Although the pharaoh, and in some instances, other members of the Royal Family, are depicted in unorthodox ways, he did not alter standard practices of Egyptian art outside of depictions of the human body and depicted non-royals in the classical style.It is very unlikely that an artist would have voluntarily produced such an image of the king in such a different style without it being commissioned by the pharaoh himself.Some scholars characterize the style of art during the reign of Akhenaten as ‘expressionistic’ and find a relation between representations such as the colossi and the religious revolution of the time, which were supported by Akhenaten
Edited sentence: However, it is important to note that although the pharaoh, and in some instances other members of the Royal Family, are depicted in such unorthodox ways, such distortions were not seen throughout the period.In other words, Akhenaten did not altar standard practices of Egyptian art outside of depictions of the human body, and only to the Royal Family.Some scholars characterize the style of art during the reign of Akhenaten as ‘expressionistic’ and find relation between distorted representations such as the colossi and the religious revolution of the time, which were supported by Akhenaten.What is certain is that no artist would have voluntarily produced such an unflattering image of the king without it being commissioned by the pharaoh himself