Original sentence: He did not speak French when he arrived, but later became fluent and served as the team's captain.He finished the 2001–02 QMJHL season with 40 points, good for the sixth in scoring on his team.He was awarded the Karcher Plaque as the QMJHL Humanitarian of the Year in 2004.Hennessy played in the 2003 Memorial Cup, but Quebec was eliminated at the after round-robin tournament losing all three games.Hennessy was drafted 17th overall in 2001, by the Quebec Remparts in the Quebec Major Junior Hockey League draft.In the 2004–05 QMJHL season, Hennessey led the team in scoring, and played with prospect Alexander Radulov
Edited sentence: During his third year, Hennessy, now fluent in French, was named captain of the Remparts.Expectations were higher, especially since he was playing with top prospect, Alexander Radulov.Hailing from New England, Hennessy did not speak French when he arrived.He finished the 2001–02 season with 40 points, good for the sixth in scoring on his team.Hennessey recorded approximately the same numbers for the third straight year, but ended up first in team scoring that season.Hennessy is one of the reasons why so many New England hockey players such as Joey Ryan, Andrew Andricopoulos and Jordan LaVallee joined the Remparts the following years.Hennessy was drafted 17th overall by the Quebec Major Junior Hockey League (QMJHL)'s Quebec Remparts at the 2001 QMJHL draft.However, during his first year, he made an effort to learn which started to put him in a leadership role.In the 2004–05 season, coaching staff had high hopes for him and his development.Karcher Plaque as the QMJHL Humanitarian of the Year in 2004.That season, Hennessy and his team qualified for the 2003 Memorial Cup, but Quebec was eliminated at the after round-robin tournament losing all three games.That year, Hennessy scored well and put up a decent amount of points, however an injury ended his season and knocked him out of the playoffs.The team rewarded his efforts by giving him the assistant captain's role in his second year with the team