Original sentence: Brisbane had kicked 5.11 at the half time break.Brisbane's poor kicking for goal almost put them out of the game in the second quarter as Essendon blew their lead out to 20 points late in the second quarter
Edited sentence: Brisbane had kicked an inaccurate 5.11 by the half time break.Brisbane's poor kicking for goal almost put them out of the game in the second quarter as Essendon blew their lead out to 20 points late in the term