Original sentence: Critics of N.In addition, critics claim that the main members of N.P are unemployed and therefore rely on unemployment benefits from the Australian Government to enable then to pursue their protest activities.P candidates polled less than 100 primary votes between them which critics maintain reflects their low level of popular support.P ran 3 candidates in a total of 25 electorates.P state that it has very limited support from the people of the Northern Territory
Edited sentence: I believe that this is an accurate representation of their support within the general community.P candidates polled less than 100 primary votes between them.P has very limited support from the Population of the Northern Territory.P organisation are unemployed and rely on the generous unemployment benefits supplied by the Australian Government to enable then to pursue their protest activities.P ran 3 candiates out of a total of 25 electorates.The main members of the N.This is a very one sided description of the activities of the group known as N