Original sentence: Freeman High School is a public high school located in the West End of Henrico County, Virginia, near the intersection of Three Chopt Road and Parham Road.Instead of having spaces for everyone, a lottery was held at the beginning of the year for seniors to win parking spots.The men's tennis team of 2007 played in the State Finals, but was defeated by James W.The school, operated by Henrico County Public Schools, opened in 1954, slightly more than one year after Dr.The two schools meet during the regular sports seasons and often play each other in district, regional and state final matches
Edited sentence: Freeman High School is a public high school located in the West End of Henrico County, Virginia, United States.Instead of having spaces for everyone, a lottery was done at the beginning of the year for seniors to win parking spots.Specifically, it is located near the intersection of Three Chopt Road and Parham Road.The mens Tennis team of 2007, stocked with veteran leadership and young talent, soared all the way to the State Finals, until a crushing defeat at the hands of James W.The school, operated by Henrico County Public Schools, opened its doors in 1954, slightly more than one year after Dr.The two schools meet during the regular seasons of all sports (which causes sellouts, intense crowding and taunts from both teams), and often play each other in district, regional and state final matches (especially in boys tennis).Those who did not receive spots, juniors, and sophomores must park in the Ridge Baptist Church parking lot on Eastridge Road