Original sentence: Warne initially claimed that he took only one of what he called a "fluid tablet" – the prescription drug Moduretic – on his mother's suggestion, in an attempt to improve his appearance (Warne has battled weight problems throughout his career)
Edited sentence: In a public relations blitz, Warne initially claimed that he took only one of what he called a "fluid tablet" – the prescription drug Moduretic – on his mother's suggestion, in an attempt to improve his appearance.This justification was believable, as Warne has battled weight problems throughout his career