Original sentence: Lyons wrote on the Times's blog The Lede'' that many on the internet were skeptical about her suicide, ranging from reader's impressions to conspiracy theory minded writers
Edited sentence: Lyons wrote on the Times's blog The Lede'' that many of those disinclined to believe that Ms.Palfrey’s death was suicide, because she had often said the opposite — that she was not the kind to kill herself, unlike one of her former employees, Brandy Britton, a onetime university instructor who took her own life in February 2007 while awaiting trial on prostitution charges