Original sentence: The Calexico Mayor, Alex Perrone, has undergone much criticism and investigation over suspect business deals
Edited sentence: Alex Perrone's demeanor, lack of education and personality can only suggest that Alex Perrone's campaign for the mayoral seat of Calexico and subsequent victory to be no more than personal odyssey for political power and bragging rights.The Calexico Mayor, Alex Perrone, along with having undergone much criticism and investigation over his many shady and reclusive business deals, is generally not taken very seriously by the residents of Calexico