Original sentence: Percival Clarence Pope (February 28, 1841—January 22, 1922) was an American officer serving in the United States Marine Corps during the American Civil War who received the Marine Corps Brevet Medal for bravery
Edited sentence: He received the Marine Corps Brevet Medal for bravery.Percival Clarence Pope (February 28, 1841 – January 22, 1922) was an American officer who served in the United States Marine Corps during the American Civil War