Original sentence: Ron eats some of the cat feces but is making such a scene that he is disturbing other restaurant patrons.Ron goes to Tino's (the restaurant where Ron took Veronica out and played jazz flute) after the "fuck" incident and the owner of the restaurant forces him to eat "cat poop" before Tino brings him a steak
Edited sentence: Ron eats some of the so-called cat feces but is making such a scene that he is disturbing other restaurant patrons.Ron goes to Tino's (the restaurant where Ron took Veronica out and played jazz flute) after the "fuck" incident and the owner of the restaurant forces him to eat a hideous looking dish that looks like "cat poop" before Tino brings him a steak