Original sentence: Opinion polls have regularly shown that Queen Elizabeth II has an excellent approval rating; coinciding with her Diamond Jubilee, the Queen experienced an approval rate in the United Kingdom of 90% in 2012
Edited sentence: Always a popular figure in the UK and many other countries, opinion polls have regularly shown that she has an excellent approval rating.Coinciding with her Diamond Jubilee, the Queen experienced an approval rate in the United Kingdom of 90% in 2012