Original sentence: The series featured, among other things, two consecutive postseason blown saves by Yankee closer Mariano Rivera and two consecutive game winning hits from Red Sox slugger and admitted steroid user David Ortiz in Games 4 and 5
Edited sentence: The series featured, among other things, two consecutive postseason blown saves by Yankee closer Mariano Rivera and two consecutive game winning hits from Red Sox slugger David Ortiz in Games 4 and 5