Original sentence: Activities include dark sky observing and imaging, an astrophotography contest, guest speakers, tours of McDonald Observatory, commercial vendors, and the opportunity to view numerous  home built telescopes and gadgets.In 1982 TSP was reorganized as a week long event and was held at the Prude Guest Ranch near Fort Davis, Texas.It was a weekend gathering of amateur astronomers at Davis Mountains State Park near McDonald Observatory in far west Texas.TSP was started by Deborah Byrd, members of the Austin Astronomical Society, and McDonald Observatory in August of 1979.That asteroid, 4932 Texstapa (), was discovered on March 9, 1984 and was named for the Texas Star Party on the occasion of its 18th anniversary in May 1996.The Texas Star Party (TSP) is one of the largest annual  star parties in the United States.While at TSP 1996, Brian A
Edited sentence: Activities include dark sky observing and imaging, an astrophotography contest, prominent guest speakers, tours of McDonald Observatory, numerous commercial vendors, and the opportunity to view hundreds of  home built telescopes and gadgets.At TSP 1996, Brian A.By 1982 TSP was a week long event with 535 attendees and was moved to the Prude Guest Ranch near Fort Davis, Texas.It was a weekend gathering of 50-100 amateur astronomers at Davis Mountains State Park near McDonald Observatory in far west Texas.That asteroid, 4932 Texstapa (1984 EA1), was discovered on March 9, 1984 at the Anderson Mesa Station of the Lowell Observatory and was named for the Texas Star Party on the occasion of its 18th anniversary in May 1996.The Texas Star Party (TSP) was founded by Deborah Byrd, long-time producer and host of the radio series Earth & Sky in August of 1979.The Texas Star Party is one of four major annual  star parties in the United States,  the others being Stellafane, the Winter Star Party and the RTMC Astronomy Expo.This support has included funding public information vehicles regarding light pollution, efficient lighting practices, exterior lighting ordinances, and street light fixture replacements in the west Texas area