Original sentence: Although there are multiple sources indicating that the track length is just under one mile, the track length is actually 3,223.10 feet (982.40 meters), according to an e-mail from Great Yarmouth Pleasure Beach itself.It has a very long track length; in the top twenty of wooden roller coasters in the world with a track length of just under one mile
Edited sentence: However, although there are multiple sources indicating that the track length is just under one mile, the track length is actually 3,223.10 feet (982.40 meters), according to an e-mail from Great Yarmouth Pleasure Beach itself.It has a long track length that is in the top twenty of wooden roller coasters in the world, often quoted as being just under one mile