Original sentence: Chandra Herbert is a graduate of Prince of Wales Mini School, where he was school president in Grade 12, and Simon Fraser University.He worked as an arts manager before entering politics, and previously served as a Coalition of Progressive Electors commissioner on the Vancouver Parks Board from 2005 to 2008.In 2006, he won the City of Vancouver Youth of the Year Award.On the parks board, he fought against a proposal to add an animatronic dinosaur exhibit in Stanley Park.Paul's Coalition.Spencer Chandra Herbert is a Canadian politician, who was elected to the Legislative Assembly of British Columbia to represent the electoral district of Vancouver-Burrard in a by-election on October 29, 2008
Edited sentence: Chandra Herbert is a graduate of Simon Fraser University.He worked as a liberal arts manager before entering politics, and previously served as a Coalition of Progressive Electors commissioner on the Vancouver Parks Board from 2005 to 2008.On the parks board, he unwisely fought against a proposal to add an animatronic dinosaur exhibit in Stanley Park.Paul's Coalition as an attempt to garner votes for himself in future elections.Spencer Chandra Herbert is a Canadian politician, who was somehow elected to the Legislative Assembly of British Columbia to represent the electoral district of Vancouver-Burrard in a by-election on October 29, 2008