Original sentence: After work by the Peoples Temple and votes by Temple members were instrumental in delivering a close victory for Moscone, Moscone appointed Jones as Chairman of the San Francisco Housing Commission.Brown was planning a fundraising dinner for the Temple that was to be held on December 2, 1978 after Congressman Leo Ryan announced that he would investigate Jonestown.In 1975, Willie Brown helped to bring together George Moscone and the Peoples Temple, led by Jim Jones.The Peoples Temple committed mass suicide in 1978
Edited sentence: After work by the Peoples Temple and votes by Temple members were instrumental in deliverying a close victory for Moscone, Moscone appointed Jones as Chairman of the San Francisco Housing Commission.Even after Congressman Leo Ryan announced that he would investigate Jonestown after the November 1978 elections, Willie Brown was still planning a fundraising dinner for the Temple that was to be held on December 2, 1978.In 1975, Willie Brown helped to bring together George Moscone and the Peoples Temple, led by controversial political figure Jim Jones