Original sentence: A comparison of secularism in India and United states is given in the following article.Also they point out to Dalai Lama a Buddhist and Khan Abdul Gaffar Khan, a muslim as evidence that secularism and religion are not mutually exclusive and the idea of secularisn in India is not entirely different from the western idea of secularism.In South Asia, Right wing nationalists in most parts of South Asia consider that Secularism refers to a political group of people and think that Secularists in South Asia consist of only Communists.Some people argue that Secularism has a different meaning in South Asia than it does in other parts of the world.The right wing nationalists in India who are often critical of the secularists say that the Secularists in India often take positions that would be considered as anti-secularist in the West.They point out that Secularism is defined through history in different ways [Secularism].Where as critics point out to people like Nehru, Gandhi and Subash Chandra Bose all of whom were non-communist hindus championed secularism
Edited sentence: Critics say that the Secularists in India often take positions that would be considered as anti-secularist in the West.However, the so-called 'secularism' rampant in India is a perversion of that reasonable idea: in India it is contrived to mean the active involvement of the State in supporting certain religions (Islam, Christianity and Marxism) and oppressing others (Hinduism, Sikhism, Buddhism, Jainism).In South Asia, Secularism refers to a political group of people.Rajeev Srinivasan wrote about Indian Secularism: "Thus the concept of secularism was born: a separation of Church and State, so that religious considerations could be excluded from civil affairs and public education.Secularism also is a symbol of religious tolerance.Secularism has a different meaning in South Asia than it does in other parts of the world.Secularism is defined through history in different ways [Secularism].Secularists in South Asia consist of Hindu-born Marxists, Muslims and other people