Original sentence: She was killed when she tried to obstruct an Israel Defense Forces (IDF) Caterpillar D9 armoured bulldozer operating in Hai as-Salam, a Palestinian area of Rafah, close to the border with Egypt.The official Israeli Government Report and the IDF deny that, stating that her death was accidental and that she was interfering with important Israeli security operations
Edited sentence: Falling debris pushed over by the bulldozer.She was killed when she tried to obstruct an Israel Defense Forces (IDF) Caterpillar D9 armoured bulldozer operating in Hai as-Salam, a Palestinian area of Rafah, close to the border with Egypt - an area the IDF had designated a security zone and in which the IDF was attempting to contain a network of smuggling tunnels connecting Egypt to the Palestinian side of Rafah.That Corrie was interfering with security operations designed to uncover the tunnels used by Hamas and other groups for smuggling weapons from Egypt.That the bulldozer driver did not see her.That the bulldozer was clearing brush and not engaged in a demolition.The official Israeli Government Report and the IDF deny that, and state that factors contributing to Corrie's death included: