Original sentence: Also Russian regular army forces entered the fighting on August 8 and drove deep into Georgia proper, occasionally accompanied or followed by South Ossetian militia who allegedly commited serious human rights violations, particulary in the Georgian villages of South Ossetia
Edited sentence: Also Russian regular army forces entered the fighting on August 8 and drove deep into Georgia proper, occasionally accompanied or followed by South Ossetian militia who commited serious human rights violations, particulary in the Georgian villages of South Ossetia