Original sentence: Around the village there are a number of schools, including Ewell Grove Infant and Nursery School, Glyn Technology School and Ewell Castle School (a past pupil was Oliver Reed), as well as the North-East Surrey College of Technology
Edited sentence: Around the village there are a number of schools, including Ewell Grove Infant and Nursery School, Glyn Technology School and [Ewell Castle School] (a past pupil was Oliver Reed), as well as the North-East Surrey College of Technology