Original sentence: Consequently, their marriage may be vulnerable or even short-lived, which could lead to an increase in divorce rates.However, some critics think that their lack of material basis may exacerbate stress and other relationship-related problems over time, leading to diminishing romantic feelings.The quote from ancient Chinese poet Yuan Zhen(Chinese: 元稹), "Everything goes wrong for the poor couple (Chinese: 貧賤夫妻百事哀)" is sometimes referenced in this regard.Young couples choosing Naked Marriage appear Utopian since they are firmly convinced of love, which pertains to spiritual comfort, rather than economic and often materialistic foundations
Edited sentence: As an ancient Chinese poet Yuan Zhen(Chinese: 元稹) put, "Everything goes wrong for the poor couple (Chinese: 貧賤夫妻百事哀)", their weak material basis could worsen the problem, thus deepening the conflicts between the couple.Consequently, their marriage may be vulnerable or even short-lived, leading to an increase in divorce rates.Nevertheless, as time passes, trifles will emerge, stress can accumulate, and these couples may find the intensity of love will spontaneously attenuate.The breakdown of marriage resulting from idealism has brought doubts and debates about the feasibility of Naked Marriage.Young couples choosing Naked Marriage appear Utopian since they are firmly convinced of love, which is of spiritual comfort, rather than an economic foundation of real substance