Original sentence: Brother of Thomas Simonds.Matthew Simonds  -  Sword of the Faithful (commander-in-chief), Masadan military
Edited sentence: He died in a space battle with Honor Harrington.He held the rank of Sword of the Faithful (commander-in-chief) of the Masadan military, and led Masada's assaults on Grayson.Matthew Simonds  -  He was the younger brother of the Masadan head of state, Thomas Simonds, and an elder of the Church of Humanity Unchained