Original sentence: Boland has been one of the most forceful voiced concerning admissions controversy at the University of Illinois, where it was revealed that relatives of politicians close to ex-governor Rod Blagojevich were being being admitted by university officials.Boland has called on them to resign, including B.Boland's wife of 40 years, Mary, currently works as a Township Trustee in the largest township in Rock Island County,and is also a member of the Illinois Sate Democratic Central Committee from the 17th Congressional District.Born on August 20th, 1942 Mike was raised in Davenport, Iowa, one of seven children.In my eyes, they failed in that regard and they should resign.Joseph White, saying "They were trusted to protect our university.Together, Mike and Mary have two daughters.in a hardworking, low-income family, Mike grew up knowing the meaning of struggle
Edited sentence: A proud family man, Mike shares his philosophy of wanting to build a better world through politics with his wife of 40 years, Mary.Barbara’s husband Kevin is a former teacher and coach at UTHA.Born on August 20th, 1942 Mike was raised in a culturally diverse neighborhood in Davenport, Iowa.Currently in her 16th year as a Township Trustee in the largest township in Rock Island County, Mary is also a member of the Illinois Sate Democratic Central Committee from the 17th Congressional District.Of course, the greatest joy of Mike’s life is his two young grandchildren, 6 years old Nicholas and 2 years old Madeline.One of seven children in a hardworking, low-income family, Mike grew up knowing the meaning of struggle.Their eldest daughter, Susan, is currently an Associate Professor of Law.Their younger daughter Barbara is the CEO of the Alpha XI Delta Sorority.Together, Mike and Mary have raised two daughters.given a chance for an education.“My father was a very wise man, who was never