Original sentence: The indecisive response by French President François Hollande to the ensuing crisis has led to heavy criticism from all sides, including from his own Socialist Party, and is viewed as having further weakened his stance in front of the growing popular support for his minister of Internal Affairs, Manuel Valls
Edited sentence: The indecisive response by French President François Hollande to the ensuing crisis has led to heavy criticism from all sides, including from his own Socialist Party, and is viewed as having further weakened his stance in front of the growing popular support for his ambitious minister of Internal Affairs, Manuel Valls