Original sentence: The Heart of Walton is the name given to the re-development of Walton town centre.The old town centre was constructed in the 1960s and had become very run down.The re-development will include a shopping mall and 279 apartments.The shopping mall is planned to open on 1 November 2006
Edited sentence: As of today it is one month until the grand opening of the new shopping centre, which is going to bring lots more business to the small shops that are there at the moment.Hopefully it will mean more business for the small local stores that exist, such as TREE HOUSE TOYS, little poppets and light effects, all at the end of the high street who aren't as appreciated as the bigger well known stores.Shops which are confirmed include next, debenhams and carphone warehouse, as well as many others