Original sentence: The portion of industrial water usage that is consumptive varies widely, but as a whole is lower than agriculural use.Water released for whitewater rafting may not be available for hydroele generation during the time of peak electrical demand
Edited sentence: The portion of industrial water usage that is consumptive varies widely, but as a whole is lower than agricultural use.Water released for whitewater rafting may not be available for hydroelectric generation during the time of peak electrical demand