Original sentence: Creigiau is a dormitory settlement near Cardiff, in Wales, U.Creigiau is now a village of a type common around the edges of British cities, seen by some as lacking individuality and at odds with its surroundings.For decades Creigiau was a tranquil retreat, popular with day-trippers from Cardiff and Barry (to which it was linked by a railway later torn up by Dr Beeching).Further expansion took place in the late 1980s and early 1990s.In the mid 1970s, housing estates sprang up to accommodate commuters and pensioners.The crime rate is low, and this is almost certainly as a result of the responsible interest people take in the village.The village in its modern form was predicated on universal access to a motor car, and public transport became expensive and infrequent.There is also a small local Tesco shop which brings people in from miles around (with the concomitant congestion) together with a Post Office, surgery, and local pub known as The Creigiau Inn
Edited sentence: Creigiau is a village near Cardiff, in Wales, U.The crime rate is low, and this is almost certainly as a result of the responsible interest people take in this beautiful village.There is also a small local Tesco shop which brings people in from miles around, together with a Post Office, surgery, and local character inn known as The Creigiau Inn.There is little question that there cannot be many better places to live within this area