Original sentence: An intimate friend of the latter, Cigani became Albani's most famous disciple.Cignani had some of the defects of his masters: his elaborate finish and his audacious artificiality in the use of color and in composition mark Albani's influence.Despite that, he imparted to his work a more intellectual character than either of his models, and is not without other remarkable merits of his own.For instance, his Assumption of the Virgin, round the cupola of the church of the Madonna della Fuoca at Forli, is inspired from the more renowned fresco of Correggio in the cupola of the cathedral of Parma.He was born in Bologna to a noble family.He was, however, also strongly and deeply influenced by the genius of Correggio.In Bologna, he studied under Battista Cairo and later Francesco Albani.On his removal to Forli, where he died, members of the school he had founded at Bologna considered following him.This painting, which occupied Cignani for some twenty years, is perhaps his most famous
Edited sentence: Cignani had some of the defects of his masters; his elaborate finish, his audacious artificiality in the use of color and in composition, mark the disciple of Albani; but he imparted to his work a more intellectual character than either of his models, and is not without other remarkable merits of his own.He was born of a noble family at Bologna, where he studied under Battista Cairo, and afterwards under Francesco Albani.His greatest work, moreover, the Assumption of the Virgin, round the cupola of the church of the Madonna della Fuoca at Forli, which occupied him some twenty years, and is in some respects one of the most remarkable works of art of the 17th century, is obviously inspired from the more renowned fresco of Correggio in the cupola of the cathedral of Parma.On his removal to Forli, where he died, the school he had founded at Bologna was fain in some sort to follow its master.Though an intimate friend of the latter, and his most famous disciple, Cignani was yet strongly and deeply influenced by the genius of Correggio