Original sentence: As the world's largest zipper manufacturer, YKK Group is most famous for making zippers.However it also manufactures other fastening products, architectural products, and industrial machinery.YKK developed a line of environmentally friendly zippers, following the company's philosophy "The Cycle of Goodness" which means that one prospers when the person renders benefit to others.YKK is the first zipper company to promote environmental protection measures.YKK produces some of the highest quality sewing products that include zippers, metal snaps and buttons, hook and loop systems, plastic buckles and notions, webbing and even machines and systems specifically designed to attach fasteners
Edited sentence: They have some of the highest quality sewing products that include zippers, metal snaps and buttons, hook and loop systems, plastic buckles and notions, webbing and even machines and systems specifically designed to attach fasteners, all under the famous YKK name.Today the YKK Group is most famous for making zippers, although it also manufactures other fastening products, architectural products, and industrial machinery.YKK developed a line of environmentally friendly zippers - always following the company's philosophy "The Cycle of Goodness" which means that one prospers unless he renders benefit to others.YKK is the first zipper company to take a stand in favor of our planet by promoting environmental protection measures.YKK is the world's largest zipper manufacturer