Original sentence: The Receiving end of Sirens album 'The Earth Sings Mi Fa Mi' is a direct reference to Johannes Kepler's work.The album also features a song called 'Music of the spheres'
Edited sentence: Post-Hardcore band The Receiving End Of Sirens's album 'The Earth Sings Mi Fa Mi' is a direct reference to Johannes Kepler's work.The song 'Pale Blue Dot' references the system in its entirety from afar, whilst 'Music Of The Spheres' references the work directly