Original sentence: During an intense firefight with the IRA, a Corporal Buckley of the King's was mortally wounded, though attempts to rescue him were made, the Corporal died almost immediately.In 1969 the regiment was deployed to Minden in West Germany as part of the British Army of the Rhine (BAOR), however their deployment was to be relatively brief, for the following year the regiment was dispatched to Northern Ireland by 1970.It took several days for the Kingsmen to dislodge the IRA gunmen from the area around the bases at Turf Lodge and Ballymurphy.Their duties included patrolling Northern Ireland.This was not the only death the King's experienced in their 1972 tour
Edited sentence: During an intense firefight with IRA terrorists, a Corporal Buckley of the King's was mortally wounded, though brave attempts to rescue him were made, the Corporal died almost immediately.In 1969 the regiment was deployed to Minden in West Germany as part of the British Army of the Rhine (BAOR), however their deployment was to be relatively brief, for the following year the regiment was dispatched to Northern Ireland, by 1970 a very troubled place.It took several days for the Kingsmen to carefully dislodge the IRA gunmen from the area around the bases at Turf Lodge and Ballymurphy.They perfomed the usual internal security (IS) duties, going to great lengths to keep the two main warring religions apart, as well as patrolling against terrorist attacks.Unfortunately, this was not the only death the King's experienced in their 1972 tour-of-duty