Original sentence: Cunningham commented that newspapers were more interested in Screaming Lord Sutch's death - whom she felt had contributed nothing to politics nor society - whilst the papers, she claimed, had ignored the death that same week of the leader of England and Wales' Roman Catholics, Cardinal Basil Hume whom she felt had done more.There were also however some not-so-complimentary comments, such as those of Roseanna Cunningham, at the time the Scottish National Party MP for Perth and a columnist for the Scottish Sunday Mail
Edited sentence: Cunningham huffed that newspapers were more interested in Screaming Lord Sutch's death - whom she felt had contributed nothing to politics nor society - whilst the papers had ignored the death that same week of the leader of England and Wales' Roman Catholics, Cardinal Basil Hume (in fact most had given long obituaries) whom she felt had done more (albeit she was unable to name a single noteworthy achievement).Cunningham was at the time the Scottish National Party MP for Perth and a columnist for the Scottish Sunday Mail (which, confusingly, is in fact the Sunday edition of Scotland's Daily Record newspaper).The worst came from the embittered Roseanna Cunningham.There were also however some not-so-complimentary comments