Original sentence: He is renowned for his intricate use of the double bass (sometimes similar to death metal basswork) and this can be heard in all of his albums.His ability to play controlled 32nd notes with both his hands and feet in the context of a song has made him known throughout the drum scene.Joey Jordison's approach to tackling a drumset is often described as unique.The slipknot songs People = Shit, The Heretic Anthem, and The Nameless are often said to exemplify his ability behind a drumkit
Edited sentence: His ability to play controlled 32nd notes with both his hands and feet in the context of a song that has made him known throughout the drum scene.Joey Jordison has a unique approach to tackling a drumset.Joey is renowned for his intricate use of the double bass and this can be heard in all of his albums.The slipknot songs People = Shit, The Heretic Anthem, and The Nameless beautifully display his ability behind a drumkit as well as being perfectly suited to the song