Original sentence: A total of 81 horses were "pulled" at various vet-checks along the Western States Trail by the team of expert equestrian veterinarians.A webcast kept everyone informed of the progress throughout the 100-miles.Barbara White earned her 29th Tevis buckle, and she remains the all-time leader.The ride ended at 5:15 AM on August 2, and 88 riders (=52 percent) successfully completed the 2009 Tevis Ride
Edited sentence: A total of 82 horses were "pulled" at various vet-checks along the Western States Trail by the team of expert equestrian veterinarians.A webcast by Karen Chaton kept everyone informed of the progress throughout the 100-miles.Barbara White earned her 29th Tevis buckle, and she remains the all-time leader for successful completions of the 100-mile ride.The ride ended at 5:15 AM on August 2, and 87 riders (=51 percent) successfully completed the 2009 Tevis Ride