Original sentence: Other scholars maintain that the definition of the Holocaust also includes the systematic murder of millions of people, including ethnic Poles, Romani, Soviet civilians, Soviet prisoners of war, people with disabilities, homosexuals, Jehovah's Witnesses, and other political and religious opponents.The Holocaust (from the Greek  []: hólos, "whole" and kaustós, "burnt"), also known as the Shoah (Hebrew): , Romanized ha'shoah; Yiddish: , Romanized churben or hurban, also known as Porajmos, is the term sometime used to describe the genocide of approximately five - six million European Jews during World War II, a programme of systematic state-sponsored extermination by Nazi Germany
Edited sentence: Some scholars maintain that the definition of the Holocaust should also include the Nazis' systematic murder of millions of people in other groups, including ethnic Poles, Romani, Soviet civilians, Soviet prisoners of war, people with disabilities, homosexuals, Jehovah's Witnesses, and other political and religious opponents.The Holocaust (from the Greek  []: hólos, "whole" and kaustós, "burnt"), also known as the Shoah (Hebrew): , Romanized ha'shoah; Yiddish: , Romanized churben or hurban is the term generally used to describe the genocide of approximately six million European Jews during World War II, a programme of systematic state-sponsored extermination by Nazi Germany