Original sentence: Baruch Goldstein was responsible for killing 29 Muslim civilians and injuring approximately 100 in a 1994 attack.During the period 1937-1939, the Irgun conducted a campaign of marketplace bombings and other acts of violence that killed many people, though exact numbers are unclear.This article deals with actions described by some as terrorist acts by Zionists other than the Israeli government
Edited sentence: Baruch Goldstein was responsible for killing 29 Muslim civilians and injuring approximately 100 in a 1994 mass shooting attack.During the period 1937-1939, the Irgun conducted a campaign of marketplace bombings and other acts of violence that in total killed hundreds of Arabs.This article deals with actions described by critics as terrorist acts by Zionists other than the Israeli government