Original sentence: Abbotsford  is home to the University of the Fraser Valley and Abbotsford International Airport, which hosts the Abbotsford International Airshow.Abbotsford is the largest city by area in British Columbia and 89th largest in Canada.It has the third highest proportion of visible minorities of all metropolitan areas in Canada, after the Greater Toronto Area and Metro Vancouver.It is the 5th largest municipality in British Columbia and the 37th largest in Canada, home to 123,864 people (2006)
Edited sentence: Abbotsford is the largest city by area in British Columbia.It  is home to the University of the Fraser Valley and Abbotsford International Airport, which hosts the Abbotsford International Airshow.It has the 3rd highest proportion of visible minorities of all Census Metropolitan Areas in Canada, after the Greater Toronto Area and Metro Vancouver.It is the 5th largest municipality in British Columbia, home to 123,864 people (2006)