Original sentence: Following the annual celebration "Ivy Day" on Howard campus in Spring 1912, founder and former Basileus Nellie Quander learned that several other newly initiated members of the sorority planned to change the colors, letters, and constitution of the sorority, and to make it more active outside Howard University.On January 13, 1913, the entire twenty-two-member undergraduate chapter voted to transform the original Alpha Kappa Alpha into Delta Sigma Theta.Quander actively worked to maintain the integrity and tenets of Alpha Kappa Alpha.Quander set up a three-person committee that successfully petitioned to incorporate ΑΚΑ as a perpetual entity.She, along with the women who had become ΑΚΑs during the four years of the sorority's existence who had since graduated, elected to remain Alpha Kappa Alpha
Edited sentence: However, following the annual celebration known as "Ivy Day" on the campus of Howard University in the spring of 1912, founder and former Basileus Nellie Quander came to the realization that several other newly initiated members of the sorority elected to make fundamental changes to the colors, letters, and constitution and to make the sorority more active outside the walls of Howard University.Nellie Quander set up a three-person committee that successfully petitioned to incorporate ΑΚΑ as a perpetual entity.Nellie Quander was steadfast in her efforts to maintain the integrity and tenets upon which Alpha Kappa Alpha was founded.On January 13, 1913, the twenty-two women of the entire undergraduate chapter voted to transform the original Alpha Kappa Alpha into Delta Sigma Theta.She, along with the women who had become ΑΚΑs during the four years of the sorority's existence, and had now graduated, elected to remain Alpha Kappa Alpha.These women, twenty-two in total, claimed that they wanted to change the sorority and that they wished for the organization to have a greater impact beyond the walls of Howard University