Original sentence: As the paratroopers begin their attack and begin rounding up the townspeople, a small group of teenagers grab their weapons and supplies and flee to the nearby mountains where they had previously hunted with their fathers
Edited sentence: As the paratroopers begin their attack and begin rounding up the townspeople, a small group of teenagers escape in a truck, obtain weapons and supplies from a store and flee to the nearby mountains where they had previously hunted with their fathers