Original sentence: Despite a great start with three straight victories against Greece, Andorra, and Macedonia, England could not avoid an embarrassing 0-0 draw against Macedonia on home ground, nor a 2-0 defeat to Croatia in Zagreb, which ended Paul Robinson's run of six consecutive clean sheets for his country
Edited sentence: Despite a great start with three straight victories against Greece, Andorra, and Macedonia, England could not avoid an embarrassing 0-0 draw against Macedonia on home ground, nor a shocking 2-0 defeat to Croatia in Zagreb, which ended Paul Robinson's run of six consecutive clean sheets for his country