Original sentence: According to a March 2007 survey, Kurds and Zaza people together comprise an estimated 13.4% of the adult population, and 15.68% of the whole population in Turkey.Even though Zazaki is an Iranian Language, it is recently influenced by Turkish language.Moreover, after restrictions are removed on local languages in Turkey thanks to European Union, the state owned TRT television lanched a Zazaki TV program and a radio program on Fridays.Moreover, the US State Department "Background Note" lists Zaza as one of the languages of Turkey, along with Turkish (official), Kurdish, Armenian, Greek, and Arabic However, Britannica lists Zazaki as a subdialect of Kurdish language
Edited sentence: According to a March 2007 survey published by a Turkish newspaper which is open to contreversy of its objectivism, Kurds and Zaza people together comprise an estimated 13.4% of the adult population, and 15.68% of the whole population in Turkey.. The ethnic divisions of Turkey is highly controversial and often difficult to understand due to Turkification, historic interpretation of the sociological definition of ethnicity (e.Britannica lists Zazaki as a subdialect of Kurdish language.Moreover, after restrictions are removed on local languages in Turkey due to the pressure of the European Union, the state owned TRT television lanched a Zazaki TV program and a radio program on Fridays.the Alevi definition as ethnicity) and the Turkish governments suppression to other ethnicities in the region