Original sentence: Additionally, Nesbit attended law school part-time at the Western Michigan University in Lansing, Michigan and graduated Magna Cum Laude in 2004.Following law school, Nesbit spent a year clerking for the Honorable John C.In the late 1990s Nesbit and his family moved back to Grove City and he began working for Nick Strimbu, Inc
Edited sentence: Cooley Law Review.Cooley School Law School in Lansing, Michigan.Each weekend for three years, Tedd commuted to Lansing while maintaining a full-time job.Following law school, Tedd spent a year clerking for the Honorable John C.He also won the Intraschool Moot Court competition, was on the National Moot Court team and was named assistant editor of the Thomas M.In 2001, Tedd began his weekend commute to Thomas M.In 2004, Tedd graduated Magna Cum Laude and was named the alumni association distinguished student of his graduating class.In the late 1990s Tedd and his family moved back to Grove City and he began working for Nick Strimbu, Inc.Tedd was named to the Dean’s list every term he was at Cooley where he won the Siegel Award for academic excellence