Original sentence: Thomsen is married to Steuart Hill Thomsen, himself a partner in the law firm Sutherland Asbill & Brennan LLP, whose clients include hedge funds, broker-dealers, & investment advisors for securities enforcement matters
Edited sentence: Thomsen is married to Steuart Hill Thomsen, a partner in the law firm Sutherland Asbill & Brennan LLP, whose clients include hedge funds, broker-dealers, & investment advisors for securities enforcement matters