Original sentence: experience before playing minor and major league baseball.was a fourth round pick, and in the year of 2000, he recieved the second team All-American pitcher award
Edited sentence: From the year of 2001-2005, Zach Miner.experience before playing miner and major league baseball.was a fourth round pick, and in the year of 2000, he recieved the second team all american pitcher award.worked his way up from A-AAA baseball, to finally get the once in a lifetime opportunity to play major leage baseball