Original sentence: "On Yet Another False Claim by McIntyre and McKitrick" RealClimate, 6 Jan 2005.(1998) reconstruction" RealClimate, 4 December 2004.Barton celebrated a global-warming skeptic" by Paul D.Thacker’s “Sources” by McIntyre
Edited sentence: "On Yet Another False Claim by McIntyre and McKitrick", RealClimate (a blog opposed to McIntyre), 6 Jan 2005.(1998) reconstruction", RealClimate (a blog opposed to McIntyre), 4 December 2004.A blog comment by McKitrick claiming that Thacker violated journalistic ethics.Barton celebrated a global-warming skeptic", Paul D.Thacker’s “Sources” by McIntyre, claiming Thacker made several factual errors