Original sentence: It is later revealed that Tal is one of the seperatists.Meanwhile, Harry Kim becomes intimate with Varro scientist Tal, and develops a physiological bond with her, one that is standard in the Varro.The parasites that Tal helped create were made to separate the individual pods of the Varro ship without destroying the ship itself.The physiological connection alters his behavior and sways him from his duties aboard Voyager.Voyager stops to assist a xenophobic species known as the Varro.While the crew works on the Varro ship, Voyager is infested with synthetic ship-eating parasites that had been released on the Varro ship by dissident Varro
Edited sentence: It is later revealed that Tal is one of the terrorists.Meanwhile, Harry Kim contracts a sexually transmitted disease from Tal, one of the Varro, which alters his behavior and sways him from his duties aboard Voyager.The parasites that Tal helped create were made to separate the individual pods of the Varro ship.Voyager stops to assist a species known as the Varro.While the crew works on the Varro ship, Voyager is infested with synthetic ship-eating parasites that had been released on the Varro ship by dissident terrorists