Original sentence: " After his fellow announcers learned his middle name was Braxton, they also took to referring to him by his complete name.After the game, Flemming acts as the moderator to discussions with veterans Miller, Krukow, and Kuiper.During the game Flemming often acts be the foil to one of Jon Miller's tangential stories.He also fills in on  sports talkshows on KNBR.However, as he was making the call, his microphone went dead.There were no technical problems, however, on September 23rd of the same year
Edited sentence: After the game Flemming is the ringmaster to the veterans Miller, Krukow, and Kuiper's postgame circus.Already in his young career Fleming has shown he has it all.During the game Flemming can make an extremely astute observation, then be the deft foil to one of Jon Miller's wacky tangents, all in the same at-bat.Fortunately there were no technical problems on September 23rd of the same year.He also fills in on  sports talkshows on KNBR, where he handles even the silliest callers with intelligence, and entertains without any of the mean-spirited edginess that seems to be mandatory of most radio today.His intellect, tact, independence, and radio smoothness can be compared only to one other baseball broadcaster I've heard: Vin Scully.However, as he was making the call, his microphone "inexplicably" went dead