Original sentence: The "barbarians" would come back more than 200 years later strengthened by industrialization, and end Japan's isolation, with the forcible opening of Japan to trade by an American military fleet under the commandement of Commodore Perry in 1854
Edited sentence: The "barbarians" would come back more than 200 years later strengthened by industrialization, and end Japan's splendid isolation, with the forcible opening of Japan to trade by an American military fleet under the commandement of Commodore Perry in 1854