Original sentence: Alfredo Tomassini (29th June 1964 - December 8 1987) is often considered the greatest player of Alianza Lima 1987, with the finest technique and talent.The only survivor is the pilot Edilberto villar, who escaped to Australia.The truth is that this very talented football player lost his life in unknown circumstances
Edited sentence: Alfredo Tomassini 29th June 1964 - December 8 1987.Greatest player of Alianza Lima 1987, with the finest technique and talent.The truth is that this very talented football player lost his life in unknown circumstances.. The only survivor is the pilot Edilberto villar, who escaped to Australia