Original sentence: Bemidji continues to try to take advantage of this with the "City As A Park" concept and the construction of the Bemidji Regional Events Center, which began in March 2009.It is generally accepted that Bemidji serves an area of 60 miles radius from the city center, this fact places the Bemidji area population at around 160,000
Edited sentence: Bemidji continues to try to take advantage of its status as a regional center with the "City As A Park" concept and the construction of the Bemidji Regional Events Center, which began in March 2009.It is generally accepted that Bemidji serves an area of 60 miles radius from the city center.This fact places the Bemidji area population at around 160,000