Original sentence: After this he begun to avoid the American troops in his conveys, diminished his appearance in public especially after his speech in the city of Afik in which the people had hit him with shoes.He complained at the time of being blindfolded and strip-searched.He continues for leadership of the South portion of Iraq.He has strongly favoured a federalism for Iraq, giving Shiites more control in the south.The battle in Karbala forced the closure of a major religious pilgrimage and sparked reprisal attacks against Supreme Council offices across Baghdad.They incensed a crowd of Mahdi militia men and sparked fighting between two rival militias that claimed the lives of at least 50 and left parts of the city smouldering
Edited sentence: After this he begun to avoid the american troops in his conveys,diminished his appearance in public especially after his speach in a city named Afik in which the people had hitted him with shoes ,never the less he continues his way toward the leadership of the South portion of Iraq leading a revolution to get the autonomy and make the dream of making a free Iraq besides he is continued his visits to the Universities in the South ,makes interveiws with the girls in order to be very close to the hearts of Iraqi poeple building a new glory for the next generations who became free because of his holly family help to the Iraqi nation.He complained at the time of being blindfolded and searched down without underwear.He has strongly favored a federalism for Iraq, giving Shiites more control in the south.The battle in Karbala menitoned earlier forced the closure of a major religious pilgrimage and sparked reprisal attacks against Supreme Council offices across Baghdad.They incensed a crowd of Mahdi militia men and sparked fighting b etween two rival militias that claimed the lives of at least 50 and left parts of the city smouldering