Original sentence: As she is reflecting on that day, she recalls an event two months prior, in October, where she had accidentally come across a hidden stairwell that led to a flat ledge on the roof.It addresses a supernatural subject matter, it explores the uncanny and domestic abjection, the setting is in disrepair and there is mention of darkness and shadows throughout, the past rears its ugly head, there are repressed/denied secrets, and the architectural setting deals with hidden passages.The story falls under the American Gothic style because it addresses several Gothic tropes
Edited sentence: 11 Summary 11.As she is reflecting on that day, she recalls an event two months prior, in October, where she had accidentally come across a  hidden stairwell that led to a flat ledge on the roof.It addresses a  supernatural subject matter, it explores the uncanny and domestic abjection, the setting is in disrepair and there is mention of darkness and shadows throughout, the past rears its ugly head, there are repressed/denied secrets, and the architectural setting deals with hidden passages.The story falls under the American Gothic style because it addresses several  Gothic tropes