Original sentence: " However, she has caused dissent among pupils by deciding to change the uniform and abolish halls.Despite problems with the construction firm, the new buildings opened on 12 July 1885.Pupils have set up a Facebook campaign on this issue.The new headteacher at Lymm High School, Miss Angela Walsh, was commended in January 2009 for her ‘clear vision’ in maintaining the school’s excellent standards
Edited sentence: Despite problems with the construction firm, the new buildings opened on the 12th July 1885.However this view was not taken up by pupils  when she decided to change the uniform and abolish halls.If YOU are reading this page in June-August 2009 sign up to the facebook campaign.The new headteacher at Lymm High School, Miss Angela Walsh, was commended for her ‘clear vision’ in maintaining the school’s excellent standards