Original sentence: Canada is more permissive, granting abortion on demand, while Australia restricts it far more.abortion law, in terms of how late an abortion may take place, is far more permissive than that of other nations such as France, Germany, and the United Kingdom, for example
Edited sentence: Canada is more liberal granting abortion on demand, while Australia restricts it far more.abortion law, in terms of how late an abortion may take place, is considered more liberal than that of other nations such as France, Germany, and the United Kingdom, for example