Original sentence: A rock song, “Baby Universal” echoes some of Bowie’s Ziggy Stardust era lyrics, and musically shows the influences of bands such as The Pixies on Bowie at this time
Edited sentence: A slickly-produced rock song, “Baby Universal” echoes some of Bowie’s Ziggy Stardust era lyrics, and musically shows the influences of bands such as The Pixies on Bowie at this time