Original sentence: After losing a tennis match to Serena Williams on May 25th, 2008, Ashley told reporters she will appear in the August 2008 issue of Playboy, a decision she made while convalescing from ovarian cyst surgery in March, 2008
Edited sentence: After losing a tennis match to Serena Williams on May 25th, 2008, Ashley told reporters she will be posing in the August 2008 issue of Playboy in a decision made supposedly while being medicated during recovery from internal surgery