Original sentence: Minnesota writer Bruce Bethke coined the term originally in 1980 for his short story "Cyberpunk", although the story was not actually published until November 1983, in Amazing Science Fiction Stories, Volume 57, Number 4
Edited sentence: Minnesota writer Bruce Bethke claims to have coined the term originally in 1980 for his short story "Cyberpunk", although the story was not actually published until November 1983, in Amazing Science Fiction Stories, Volume 57, Number 4