Original sentence: Grief would then send the the clones back to the parents, and when the parents died the clones inherit their businesses.He is very reluctant to take on these assignments, even though he is very capable of succesfully completing them, and usually has to be blackmailed into them.He owned a computer company and a string of unsuccesful racehorses.Jones also has a cat named Q, presumably reffering to the gadget expert from the James Bond series.She and Turner dislike Alex because he is a minor, and believe he is unnecassary and could put their mission in danger.They often ignore his opinions and treat him as a hinderance, even after Alex saves Turner from The Salesman
Edited sentence: Grief would then send the clones back to the parents, and when the parents died the clones inherit their businesses.He is very reluctant to take on these assignments, even though he is very capable of successfully completing them, and usually has to be blackmailed into them.He owned a computer company and a string of unsuccessful racehorses.Jones also has a cat named Q, presumably referring to the gadget expert from the James Bond series.She and Turner dislike Alex because he is a minor, and believe he is unnecessary and could put their mission in danger.They often ignore his opinions and treat him as a hindrance, even after Alex saves Turner from The Salesman