Original sentence: The coolest person to come from Fort Richmond is Brian Harrison who now works at a low pay rent a cop position dealing with criminals of whom he takes advantage of daily.This is the perfect example of how people fail in life
Edited sentence: The coolest person to come from Fort Richmond is Brian Harrison also known as the toughest man is west can he is master of the phoenix fist of fury punch which is match for no man even Greg Scott who left town cause he was so scared