Original sentence: As a Wofford coach he was passionate about his players being strong men and students and doing it “the right way”, and his players have succeeded as students and in life to an exceptional degree.Wofford moved up to NCAA Division I-AA in 1995 and joined the Southern Conference in 1997
Edited sentence: As a Wofford coach he was passionate about his players being strong men and diligent students at this Phi Beta Kappa college, and doing it “the right way”; his players have succeeded as students and in life to an exceptional degree.Wofford moved up to NCAA Division I-AA in 1995 and joined the Southern Conference in 1997, at 1100 students becoming the smallest D-1 college competing in football