Original sentence: Michele Gonzales — Michele is the sister of Peter's roommate Vin Gonzales, and his temporary roommate while Vin serves time for his involvement in the Spider-Tracer Killings frame-up.She went as Peter's date to Aunt May's wedding
Edited sentence: Michele Gonzales — Michele is the hot-tempered sister of Peter's roommate Vin Gonzales, and his temporary roommate while Vin serves time for his involvement in the Spider-Tracer Killings frame-up.She went as Peter's date to Aunt May's wedding where the two of them got drunk and had a one-night stand.When Peter can't remember, Michele is furious