Original sentence: Anugrah Narayan Sinha,a great freedom fighter and thefirst Deputy Chief Minister cum Finance Minister of Bihar from 1946-1957.Balmiki Prasad Singh eminent scholar,  Indian Civil Servant, and present Governor of Sikkim
Edited sentence: Anugrah Narayan Sinha,a great freedom fighter and the first Deputy Chief Minister cum Finance Minister of Bihar from 1946-1957.Balmiki Prasad Singh eminent scholar, Indian Civil Servant, and present Governor of Sikkim