Original sentence: Ah Louis, entrepreneur.Allen Fox, athlete (tennis) and author.Chuck Liddell, mixed martial artist (UFC).Ernie Ball, entrepreneur.Hannah Marks, actress.Jack Kerouac.Jon Anderson, musician.Mike Krukow, athlete (Major League Baseball) and sportscaster.Paul Rachubka, Goal Keeper for (Blackpool FC)
Edited sentence: Ah Louis, Chinese American pioneer and businessman.Allen Fox, tennis player and coach.Chuck Liddell, champion mixed martial artist.Ernie Ball, guitarist and entrepreneur.Jack Kerouac, writer.Jon Anderson, musician (Yes).Mike Krukow, baseball player and sportscaster.Paul Rachubka, soccer player