Original sentence: Terrorists attempt to set off five suitcase nuclear devices in the United States, although only succeed with one; however, after a deal made to rescue Audrey Raines puts a Russian-made component from one of the devices into the hands of the Chinese, Jack must recover it in order to prevent war between the U
Edited sentence: Terrorists attempt to set off five suitcase nuclear devices in the United States, although only succeed with the first (to some extent); however, after a deal made to rescue Audrey Raines puts a Russian-made component from one of the devices into the hands of the Chinese, Jack must recover it in order to prevent war between the U