Original sentence: Ambassador Haqqani mentioned that since the fighting commenced, the results have been a success.Furthermore, when President Zardari was with President Obama in Washington, Zardari secretly explained the plan to President Obama.He told the Obama administration that he did the deal to try and prove to those within Pakistan and to the rest of the world that the Taliban could not be negotiated with, because the ignorant Taliban will break the deal.Pakistan's gamble paid off and as soon as the Taliban broke the deal, the army was back in and commenced the offensive to eradicate the Taliban once and for all
Edited sentence: "[President Zardari] did something very smart.And as soon as they broke the deal, the army is back in, the fighting is going on, and you can see the results.He actually told the American government that I’m going to do this deal to try and prove to those within Pakistan, and in Pakistan’s state apparatus, who think that these guys can be negotiated with — I will negotiate with them only to prove that you can’t negotiate with them, because they will break the deal.When he was with President Obama recently, he explained it