Original sentence: Multiple F/A-18 Super Hornets pilots lead by the commander of Strike Fighter Squadron 41 communicated that they saw something, and radar signals were seen by United States Navy ships and aircraft in the area
Edited sentence: The encounter included a visual engagement with the UFO by multiple F/A-18 Super Hornets lead by the commander of Strike Fighter Squadron 41 as well as radar tracking by United States Navy ships and aircraft in the area