Original sentence: During the 1930s, the position of the Serb minority deteriorated as Serb schools were closed down by King Zog.Millosh Gjergj Nikolla (October 13, 1911 - August 26, 1938) (aka Miđoni/Migjeni, Miloš Đoka Nikolić/Милош Ђока Николић) was born in Shkodër, Albania to a Serb family.Thus, the author had to Albanize his name and chose the nom-de-plume Mi-Gje-Ni in order to preserve his heritage
Edited sentence: (aka Miđoni/Migjeni, Miloš Đoka Nikolić/Милош Ђока Николић) (October 13, 1911 - August 26, 1938) was born in Shkoder (also now known as Skadar/Скадар in Serbian) to a Serb family that traced its roots to Bitolj.-Nikolić attended elementary school in Shkoder (Albania) at the Serbian-language school there and later at St.After some time in a sanatorium there, he was transferred to the Waldensian Hospital in Torre Pellice where he died at the age of twenty-six.During the 1930's, the position of the Serb minority deteriorated, Serb schools were closed down by king Zog and an overt campaign of Albanization was carried out to the detriment of the Serb, Greek, Bulgarian and Vlach minorities.Having contracted tuberculosis, which was then endemic in Albania, he went for treatment to Turin in northern Italy where his sister Olga was studying mathematics.John's Orthodox Seminary in Bitola (Bitolj/Битољ, Manastir), Republic of Macedonia.Millosh Gjergj Nikolla (October 13, 1911 - August 26, 1938).Thus, the author had to Albanize his name and chose the nom-de-plume Mi-Gjo-Ni in order to preserve his heritage