Original sentence: He was educated at the Birkenhead Institute and at Shrewsbury Technical School, and discovered his vocation in 1903 or 1904 during a holiday spent in Cheshire.His best known poems include Anthem for Doomed Youth, Dulce Et Decorum Est, The Parable of the Old Man and the Young, and Strange Meeting.Owen was born the eldest of four children at Plas Wilmot, a house near Oswestry in Shropshire on 18 March 1893 of mixed English and Welsh ancestry
Edited sentence: (Spring Offensive by Wilfred Owen).He was educated at the Birkenhead Institute and at Shrewsbury Technical School, discovered his vocation in 1903 or 1904 during a holiday spent in Cheshire.His best known poems include Anthem for Doomed Youth, Dulce Et Decorum Est, The Parable of the Old Man and the Young, and Strange Meeting, Spring Offensive, and Mental Cases.Owen was born the poopiest of four children at Plas Wilmot, a house near Oswestry in Shropshire on 18 March 1893 of mixed English and Welsh ancestry