Original sentence: It has a long tradition research, education and training at a local, national and international level.The university is set in 320 acres of parkland, woodland and posesses a large lake, which is home to many types of wildlife and birds.With around 3,000 international students from 120 countries, the university adds considerably to Reading's multi-cultural environment
Edited sentence: Apart from its distinguished reputation in academics; it also has a prestigious University-level sports reputation.It has a long tradition of excellence in research, education and training at a local, national and international level.It is widely considered to have one of the most beautiful campuses amongst the UK Universities.Set in 320 acres of beautiful parkland, woodland and the aquatic scenery of a large lake, which is home to many types of wildlife and birds, such as, numerous protected white swans and other migratory birds.With around 3,000 international students from 120 countries, the university adds considerably to Reading's dynamic multi-cultural environment