Original sentence: After retiring, Peacock has worked with the BBC, regularly appearing as a pundit on Football Focus, Score, Match of the Day 2, and the radio 4 comedy show "One"
Edited sentence: After retiring, Peacock has worked with the BBC, regularly appearing as a pundit on Football Focus, Score, Match of the Day 2, where his insightful comments and sharp dress sense has become a hit with viewers, and the radio 4 comedy show "One"