Original sentence: In contrast, there exist pro-gun groups that take a harder line than the NRA.Second Amendment Sisters, Jews for the Preservation of Firearms Ownership, and Gun Owners of America are among the groups in this category.There are a some pro-gun advocacy groups who serve gun enthusiasts who see some of the NRA's positions as extremist.These groups critize the NRA's silence on legislation ranging from armor-piercing projectiles to point-of-purchase background checks.These groups have gained prominence since Wayne La Pierre became the de facto policy maker at the NRA, bringing with him a more hard-line stance
Edited sentence: " has become a common theme among most significant gun-rights groups in direct reponce to the NRA compromises.Organizations such as:.Second Amendment Sisters, Jews for the Preservation of Firearms Ownership and Gun Owners of America, just to name a few, are continually complaining that although the NRA is powerful because of it's large membership of voters, and yet the NRA all too often chooses to supprt gun-control laws which serve only the interests of the gun-contorl lobby.The slogan "A no-compromise gun-rights group.There are a some pro-gun advocacy groups who serve gun enthusiasts who see some of the NRA's positions as extremist, and certainly the gun-control lobby takes every opportunity to demonise the NRA, however, the majority of national gun-rights advocacy groups view the NRA as too moderate and all too willing to compromise away gun-owners rights