Original sentence: Model Town Greens, Nawab Academy, Model Town Club(Aisam ul Haq is the famous Tennis Player Of Pakistan and he is from Model Town Club), Amir Mehmood's Club and International Cricket Academy (LDA) are famous sports facilities in the Area
Edited sentence: Model Town Greens,Model Town Whites a new club in E-Block, Nawab Mansoor Academy, Model Town Club(Aisam ul Haq is the famous Tennis Player Of Pakistan and he is from Model Town Club), Amir Mehmood's Club and International Cricket Academy (LDA) are famous sports facilities in the Area