Original sentence: It has been recorded by many artists, ranging from Louis Armstrong to Lester Young.It is one of the most famous and best selling rag of the ragtime era.The piano recording by Pee Wee Hunt was the Billboard number one single for 1948, selling over three million copies
Edited sentence: It has been recorded by many, many artists, ranging from Louis Armstrong to Lester Young.It is perhaps the most famous and best selling rag of the ragtime era.The recording by Pee Wee Hunt was the Billboard number one single for 1948, selling over three million copies