Original sentence: Andrew Michael Baron, born 1970, is the co-creator of Rocketboom.Audio interview with Baron and Amanda Congdon on The Sound of Young America.Baron directed a portion of "Killer," an episode of CSI: Crime Scene Investigation which aired February 2, 2006.Baron holds a BA in Philosophy from Bates College and an MFA in Design and Technology from Parsons School of Design.BusinessWeek retracted a previous story "cutting in half the original estimate... to 78,500 downloads" and noted that Rocketboom refused "to let any third party... verify these stats.In April 2006, Baron claimed 300,000 Rocketboom viewers.In March 2007, Baron stated his frustration in being unable to sell ads or monetize Rocketboom.In November 2006, an analysis by BusinessWeek revealed that Baron provided incorrect web viewership statistics
Edited sentence: A year later in March 2007, Baron reported that Rocketboom was down to 200,000 daily downloads and stated his frustration in being unable to monetize Rocketboom.Andrew Michael Baron, born 1970, is best-known as the creator of the popular daily newscast Rocketboom, hosted by Joanne Colan.Audio interview with Baron and Congdon on The Sound of Young America.By April 2006, Baron claimed 300,000 Rocketboom viewers.He hired Amanda Congdon for $50 a show as Rocketboom's anchor-host, later making her a partner with a 49% share in Rocketboom.He holds a BA in Philosophy from Bates College and an MFA in Design and Technology from Parsons School of Design.In Austin during the 1990s, Baron played in bands, ran an art gallery and worked a variety of tech jobs.In the summer of 2004, he posted an ad for an actress on Craigslist and received 450 responses.Using his own equipment, Baron directed a portion of "Killer," an episode of CSI: Crime Scene Investigation which aired February 2, 2006