Original sentence: Chris Jasper (born Christopher Jasper, 30 December 1951, New Jersey, Cincinnati, Ohio) was a member of both the Isley Brothers and Isley-Jasper-Isley
Edited sentence: Chris Jasper (born Christopher Jasper December 30, 1951 inCincinnati, Ohio) was a member of both the Isley Brothers and Isley-Jasper-Isley