Original sentence: Aerosmith is a prominent American rock band.However, in 1984, chiefly due to the efforts of Joe Perry's then manager, Tim Collins, to reform the original band, Aerosmith was born again.Their evolution over the years has led them through musical genres including hard rock, pop, glam, blues, and rap, and has inspired many later rock artists
Edited sentence: Aerosmith is a prominent American rock band, regarded by some as "America's Greatest Rock and Roll Band".Aerosmith's longevity, durability, and adaptability have allowed them to sustain high levels of popularity, acclaim, and success for the better part of the 37 years they have been active.However, in 1984, chiefly due to the tireless efforts of Joe Perry's then manager, Tim Collins, to reform the original band, Aerosmith was born again.Their musical evolution over the years has made them major innovators in American hard rock,  pop, glam, blues, and rap, and has inspired legions of rock artists that came after them