Original sentence: He has drawn attacks for sending his children to a private school, leading some critics to allege that he doesn't fully support the Minneapolis public schools.Rybak attended the same school as a child.Rybak was elected in 2001 in the biggest upset of an incumbents in the city's history, defeating Sharon Sayles Belton, the first African-American and first female mayor of the city, with 65% of the vote to Sayles Belton's 35%
Edited sentence: After the venue closed temporarily because of bankruptcy later that year, he promised to do another stage dive on the first night of reopening.He has drawn attacks for sending his children to a private school, giving the impression to some that he doesn't fully support the Minneapolis Public Schools.He one of probably a very small number of mayors to have ever crowd surfed—he dove from the stage during a "Rock for Democracy" event at the popular Minneapolis club First Avenue in July 2004.However, he postponed it after finding out that Gwar was performing that night, later completing the feat at a concert by The Frogs.In the 2001 election, he won 65% of the vote to Belton's 35%—the widest margin in city history for a challenge to an incumbent.Rybak went to the same school when he was growing up because his mother had been given a job there during a difficult period, so he has said that sending his own children there is paying back a debt as much as anything else.Rybak's election was a shock to many political observers, as he defeated Sharon Sayles Belton, the first African-American and first female mayor of the city, without the help of campaign consultants or a vast war chest of funding.The mayor is seen at events all across the city on a regular basis.To win, Rybak ran an energetic and highly populist campaign, listening intently to the concerns of residents while he brought his message door-to-door