Original sentence: In Bold textMothers Day She went on a mission with Kim and saved kim from being swallowed by a glob of green goo by usig her comunicater to send pulses to it.Kim's mother, who was not only a brain surgeon, but also a great mother to Kim, and seemed to be more understanding toward her daughter
Edited sentence: In Bold textMothers Day she went on a mission with Kim and saved Kim from being swallowed by a glob of green goo by using her communicator to send pulses to it.Kim's mother is not only a neurosurgeon (usually referred to as a brain surgeon in the series), but also a great mother to Kim, and seemed to be more understanding toward her daughter