Original sentence: Editing edits the articles for the Working Paper, and Speakers finds people to speak at the conference.The UNIS-UN Organizing Committee is split up into several committees (Visiting Schools, Finance and Resource, Technology and Public Information & Communications, Debate, Editing, and Speakers) to ease the organization process.The conference also endeavors to give students a platform to express and debate their own opinions and views.The conference is also broadcast live on the Internet, via a webstream on the UNIS-UN website.The organizing committee has grown over the years (to its current number of approximately seventy).These committee heads make up the UNIS-UN Executive Committee; however there are a selective few students who are not the heads of the commissions, but are prominent members of the commissions
Edited sentence: ) to ease the organization process.), however there are a selective few students who are not the heads of the commissions, but are prominent members of the commissions.Editing edits the articles for the Working Paper, and Speakers finds people to speak at the conference, which is why it's so important.The UNIS-UN Organizing Committee is split up into several committees (Visiting Schools, Finance and Resource, Technology and Public Information & Communications, Debate, Editing, and, perhaps the most important, Speakers.The conference also endeavors to give students a platform to express and debate their own opinions and views in arguably the most internationally significant gathering place on earth.The conference is also broadcasted live on the Internet, via a webstream on the UNIS-UN website.The organizing committee has grown tremendously over the years (to its current number of approximately seventy).These committee heads make up the UNIS-UN Executive Committee (EXCOMM - borrowed from President Kennedy's EXCOMM during the Cuban Missile Crisis