Original sentence: Hope is a teenager who lives with her aunt, Addie in Brooklyn, where Addie works as a chef and Hope works as a waitress.Hope lives with her aunt because her mother (who named Hope "Tulip", but Hope didn't like it, so she changed it to Hope) didn't think herself to be a suitable parent
Edited sentence: Hope is a teenager who lives with her aunt, Addie, in Brooklyn, where Addie works as a chef and Hope works as a waitress.Hope lives with her aunt because her mother, Deena, (who named Hope "Tulip", but Hope didn't like it, so she changed her name to Hope) didn't consider herself to be a suitable parent