Original sentence: Even if the students want to revolt,, they couldn't because of such great risk like expulsion.This caused a silent comotion among the students.This program invited other schools to learn abouth this program.This result made the principal abolish some traditional occasions of the school which dissappointed all of the students
Edited sentence: Even if the students want to revolt, they couldn't because of such great risk like expulsion.This caused a silent commotion among the students.This program invited other schools to learn about this program.This result made the principal abolish some traditional occasions of the school which disappointed all of the students