Original sentence: Finally, however, the English witnesses traveled to the Republic in 1630 in the suite of the embassy of Sir Henry Vane the Elder of that year.In the summer of 1623 the Englishmen who had been pardoned and acquitted, sailed to Batavia, and complained to the Dutch governor-general Pieter de Carpentier and the Council of Defence about the Amboyna affair, which they said was a false accusation based upon a fantasy, to which the confessions were obtained by atrocious torture only.The directors of the EIC asked that the English government would demand reparations from the VOC and exemplary punishment of the Amboina judges from the Dutch government.The draft-verdict of the court (an acquittal of the accused) was presented to the new English king Charles I in 1632 for approval (as agreed beforehand by the two governments), but, not surprisingly rejected.When the English could not get redress there, they traveled to England, accompanied by the English factor at Batavia
Edited sentence: In the summer of 1623 the Englishmen who had been pardoned and acquitted, sailed to Batavia, and complained to the Dutch governor-general Pieter de Carpentier and the Council of Defence about the Amboyna affair, which they said was a false accusation based upon a fantasy and the confessions had been obtained only by atrocious torture.The English witnesses finally traveled to the Republic in 1630 in the suite of the embassy of Sir Henry Vane the Elder.The directors of the EIC asked that the English government demand reparations from the VOC and exemplary punishment of the Amboina judges from the Dutch government.The draft-verdict of the court (an acquittal of the accused) was presented to the new English king Charles I in 1632 for approval (as agreed beforehand by the two governments) but, not surprisingly, rejected.When the English could not get redress in Batavia, they traveled to England, accompanied by the English factor at Batavia