Original sentence: (Lettre à Paul Demeny, mai 1871)  On the other hand, director Jean Renoir's La règle du jeu was inspired by Musset's play, Les Caprices de Marianne.) he won the Latin essay prize in the Concours général.He entered the collège Henri-IV at the age of nine, where in 1837(.Musset received the Légion d'honneur on April 24, 1845, at the same time as Balzac, and was elected to the Académie française in 1852 (after two failures to do so in 1848 and 1850)
Edited sentence: (Lettre à Paul Demeny, mai 1871)  On the other hand, director Jean Renoir's La règle du jeu was inspired by his play, Les Caprices de Marianne.He entered the collège Henri-IV at the age of nine, where in 1837 he won the Latin essay prize in the Concours général.Musset received the Légion d'honneur on April 24 1845, at the same time as Balzac, and was elected to the Académie française in 1852 (after two failures to do so in 1848 and 1850)