Original sentence: A great deal of its development occurred between the wars, with a few houses built between the 1940s and 1970s, and some newer redbrick development.The area retains a rural feel as the sprawl of Birmingham is concealed by hills to the north
Edited sentence: A great deal of the village's development occurred between the wars.The area retains a rural feel as the sprawl of Birmingham is concealed by some well-appointed hills.There are a few houses built between the forties and the seventies, and a rash of newer red brick houses