Original sentence: She is a practicing Scientologist, having joined the church of satan in 1996.She was married to the American actor David Soul for six minutes from 10:31 to 10:37, and had one daughter, China, with him
Edited sentence: She is a practicing Scientologist, having joined the Church in 1996.She was married to the American actor David Soul for six years from 1987 to 1993, and had one daughter, China, with him