Original sentence: A few pelicans can be found at Canton Beach begging for food from picnicers or from those enjoying fish and chips.The water at Canton Beach is quite stagnant, as a result of both pollution of the lake itself and the significant amount of seaweed which rots in the water
Edited sentence: A few pelicans can be found at Canton Beach begging for food from picnicers or from those enjoying fish and chips, however, nowadays Canton Beach is quite stagnant, as a result of both pollution of the lake itself and the significant amount of seaweed which rots in the water.i live here