Original sentence: Kim, Schooler and Sorsoli demonstrated “that adolescents’ perceptions of parental caring are an important mechanism in the association between parental television involvement and adolescents’ self-esteem, body image and sexuality”.Parental involvement is desirable when viewing sexual behaviour on TV; the shared experience enables parents to clarify what is seen.Parents and peers both influence adolescent sexuality.Since parents are role models for their children, it is critical to understand parental behaviour in the context of adolescent sexuality.The fact that a parent smokes increases the likelihood of an adolescent engaging in problem behaviour, including risky sexual behaviour.The idea that risk is reproduced in generations is evident; parental behaviour is mirrored by the adolescent.Unsafe parental behaviour (such as smoking) are linked to adolescent engagement in risky behaviour
Edited sentence: Because this shared experience allows the parents to clarify the images being seen and to help the adolescent  understand them better.Kim, Schooler and Sorsoli  showed that “that adolescents’ perceptions of parental caring are an important mechanism in the association between parental television involvement and adolescents’ self-esteem, body image and sexuality”.Parental monitoring in TV watching also predicts less sexual engagement.Parents are role model for their children, thus it is critical to understand the behaviours of the parents in sexual behaviours of the adolescence.Parents influences adolescent sexuality and so do peers as this stage of life.Parents involvement is necessary even when it comes to viewing sexual behaviour on TV.The fact that a parent smokes increases the likelihood of an adolescent engaging in problem behaviour and risky sexual behaviour is at the top of list.The notion that risk is reproduced in generations is evident in the behaviours that the parents participate are more likely to be same behaviours that adolescence does themselves.Unsafe parental behaviours such as smoking are linked to adolescents engagement in risk behaviours