Original sentence: Illegal immigration to the United States and crime.On November 6, 2006, the press reported the arrest of a 19-year-old construction worker, Diego Pillco, an illegal immigrant to the United States who, according to police, had confessed on tape to attacking Shelly, and then staging the fake suicide by hanging her
Edited sentence: On November 6, 2006, the press reported the arrest of a 19-year-old construction worker, Diego Pillco, who according to police had confessed on tape to attacking Shelly, and then staging the fake suicide by hanging her