Original sentence: ARE YOU SCARED OF DROWNING....After being sentenced to death by the courtroom judge visitors are taken to an execution dock.GET READY TO GET YOUR HAIR CUT....This show is almost in complete darkness, and visitors are given no idea of what is about to happen.ITS THE DEATH SENTENCE FOR YOU....This feature opened at the end of March 2007.LOST.... A large mirror maze is themed around the crypt of All Hallows Church in London.SCARED, GET READY TO BE FRIGHTENED....This is an exhibit based on the gruesome serial killings of five prostitutes in Whitechapel, in the year 1888.SEE FOR YOURSELF.....This show is set in 1665 during the Great Plague of London, and London is depicted as riddled with bubonic plague, with thousands dying in agony.WATCH YOUR SELF....This exhibit is set in the year 1666, when much of London burnt to the ground in the relentless Great Fire of London that started down in Pudding Lane, from the Royal bakery
Edited sentence: A large mirror maze is themed around the crypt of All Hallows Church in London.After being sentenced to death by the courtroom judge visitors are taken to an execution dock.This exhibit is set in the year 1666, when much of London burnt to the ground in the relentless Great Fire of London that started down in Pudding Lane, from the Royal bakery.This feature opened at the end of March 2007.This is an exhibit based on the gruesome serial killings of five prostitutes in Whitechapel, in the year 1888.This show is almost in complete darkness, and visitors are given no idea of what is about to happen.This show is set in 1665 during the Great Plague of London, and London is depicted as riddled with bubonic plague, with thousands dying in agony