Original sentence: However all of Central Avenue, some street-blocks on the main hill (the Nagornaya part) between Pushkina Prospekt and Embankment, and sections near Globy and Shevchenka parks have been untouched for 150 years, retaining their historical character.In the heart of the city is Zhovtneva square, which includes the majestic cathedral founded by order of Catherine the Great in 1787.It is visible from many points in Dnepropetrovsk.The Dnieper River keeps the climate mild and the air fresh.The central streets of the city were renamed during the Soviet era in honor of Marxists, the central thoroughfare itself known as Karl Marx.The city features a variety of theaters, museums, parks, restaurants and beaches, many of which may be of interest to tourists
Edited sentence: An evening walk through those parts of the city is very pleasurable....However all of Central Avenue, some street-blocks on the main hill (the Nagornaya part) between Pushkina Prospekt and Embankment, and sections near Globy and Shevchenka parks have been untouched for 150 years.In the nucleus of the city is Zhovtneva square, on which is the majestic Cathedral that was founded by order of Catherine the Great in 1787.The Dnieper River is a wonderful creation of nature that keeps the climate mild and the air fresh.The central street of the city has the name of Karl Marx.The central streets of the city were renamed during the Soviet time in honor of the outstanding revolutionaries.The variety of theaters, museums, parks, restaurants and beaches will exceed any expectations of the most sophisticated visitor.You can see it from many points in Dnepropetrovsk