Original sentence: Don Estridge High Tech Middle School is a technology magnet school named for Don Estridge, the leader of a small group of engineers who developed the IBM Personal Computer in Boca Raton
Edited sentence: Don Estridge High Tech Middle School is a technology magnet school named for Don Estridge, which has experineced many dru related issues with students and sucks(This post was made by Omni Gang), the leader of a small group of engineers who developed the IBM Personal Computer in Boca Raton