Original sentence: " or may opt to use the title "Miss" ("Miss Jane Smith")." with her married surname ("Mrs.An unmarried woman may use "Ms.In practice, of course, it is polite to honor any person's personal preference once it is made known.Jane Doe") or with her husband's first and last name ("Mrs.Jane Smith"), or with her married surname ("Ms.John Doe")
Edited sentence: " or "Miss" ("Ms." with her given name, as in "Mrs." with her husband's full name ("Mrs./Miss Jane Smith").An unmarried woman may use the title "Ms.In practice it is polite to honor any person's personal preference once it is made known.Jane Doe.Jane Smith"), or with her husband's surname ("Ms.John Doe"), which is the traditional form.Though some consider it contrary to traditional etiquette, a woman often uses the title "Mrs