Original sentence: Some feel that such claims, presented uncritically, serve to undermine Zerzan's credibility.Zerzan has on occasion quoted claims that appear unlikely to be based in fact, such as that “the Bushmen… can see four moons of Jupiter with the unaided eye” or that there is “telepathic communication among the
Edited sentence: Such claims are difficult to take seriously and cast doubt on the more facially plausible claims Zerzan makes.Zerzan occasionally approvingly quotes sources who say things like “the Bushmen… can see four moons of Jupiter with the unaided eye” or that there is “telepathic communication among the