Original sentence: Buthelezi inherited the chieftainship of the large Buthelezi tribe in 1953: a position he still holds today.His older brother Mceleli would have taken the post if he had not run foul of the law
Edited sentence: Buthelezi inherited the chieftainship of the large Buthelezi tribe in 1953 (a position he still holds today), though not without controversy — his older brother Mceleli would have taken the post if he had not run afoul of the law