Original sentence: However, most other reviewers have not made similar statements and Twilight Princess has received criticism for, among other things, outdated graphics and "tacked on" Wii controls, and it's average score on both Metacritic and Gamerankings is lower than that of Ocarina of Time.Some reviewers have also stated that they felt the game world was empty.com, and Game Informer called it the greatest Zelda game ever made
Edited sentence: Twilight Princess has a higher average than that of Ocarina of Time on toptenreviews.and higher voting average than that of Ocarina of Time on Metacritic and gamerankings.com, Game Informer, CVG, GamesRadar, NGamer, PALGN, GameBrink, Gaming Nexus, Next Level Gaming, and The Wiire regarded it as the greatest Zelda game ever made