Original sentence: Elected to the Hockey Hall of Fame in 1988.He has five children and at current four grandchildren.Park and Orr occasionally fought each other on ice, and fans fueled the rivalry making frequent comparisons, not least as the Rangers and Boston Bruins were bitter opponents.Park'ss offensive skill, stickhandling and pugnacity attracted much attention from fans
Edited sentence: Elected to the Hockey Hall of Fame in 1988, in this first year of eligibility.He has five children and four grandchildren.Park and Orr occasionally fought each other on ice, and fans and sportswriters fueled the rivalry by making frequent comparisons, not least as the Rangers and Boston Bruins were bitter opponents.Park's offensive skill, stickhandling and pugnacity attracted much attention from fans