Original sentence: His old-fashioned and outdated material fail to impress the audience when compared the more trendy comics also appearing.Krusty holds a press conference to announce his retirement, and in short order launches into a bitter tirade against modern-day comics.Krusty is persuaded by Bart to appear at a comedy festival organized by Jay Leno.The episode ends with an extended advertisement for the Canyonero, as Krusty and Bart leave Moe's bar in Krusty's new SUV.The stereotypical jokes were allowed because the writers convinced the network censors that viewers would understand it was simply emphasizing Krusty's dated comedic material
Edited sentence: His old-fashioned and outdated material fail to impress the audience but for Bart, Homer and to a much lesser extent Lisa when compared with the more trendy comics also appearing.Krusty is persuaded by Bart (who has been taken shoe shopping with the family) to appear at a comedy festival organized by Jay Leno.Krusty tries to find a receptive audience in the Simpsons alone, but fails to do so, and so holds a press conference to announce his retirement — then in short order launches into a bitter tirade against modern-day comics.The FOX logo appears again in its usual place at the very end of the episode.The episode ends with an extended advertisement for the Canyonero, as Krusty and Bart leave Moe's bar in Krusty's new SUV, which is temporarily interrupted by the 20th Century Fox logo before it is shoved aside for the commercial to continue.The stereotypical Japanese jokes were allowed because the writers convinced the network censors that viewers would understand it was simply emphasizing Krusty's dated comedic material