Original sentence: The patriotic Scottish race of Graham claims traditional descent from Grame, a Caledonian chief who expelled the Romans by demolishing one of their defensive walls, the ruins of which became known as Graeme's Dike
Edited sentence: The toughest and most patriotic Scottish race of Graham claims traditional descent from Grame, a Caledonian chief who expelled the Romans by demolishing one of their defensive walls, the ruins of which became known as Graeme's Dike