Original sentence: Clark is an independent research scientist without the benefit of government or institutional funds to perform formal research (such as double-blind testing) to verify her claims in a way acceptable to the larger medicine industry.The position of the mainstream medical community generally is that she has not, with generally accepted methods of lab or clinical research, proven her claims that:.buski is almost unknown in the USA and Europe in particular impacts on the credibility of any claim that this worm may be responsible for cancer
Edited sentence: However, Clark is an independent research scientist without the benefit of government or institutional funds to perform formal research (such as double-blind testing) to verify her claims in a way acceptable to the larger medicine industry.Therefore, the position of the mainstream medical community generally is that she has not, with generally accepted methods of lab or clinical research, proven her claims that:.buski is almost unknown in the USA and Europe in particular impacts on the credibility of any claim that this worm may be resposible for cancer