Original sentence: Established in 2001, the intention of the School of Media Arts (SOMA) is to promote collaboration, synergy, and resource maximization between programs with a similar mission: applied communication, visual literacy and digital media.SBCC works as a partner in the effort to attain these collaborative goals.The music department at Santa Barbara City College is offers an eclectic and in depth course of study.The student newspaper is named The Channels; its website is at [thechannelsonline.com The Channels online]
Edited sentence: Check out the award-winning student newspaper The Channels, thechannelsonline.Established in 2001, the intention of the School of Media Arts (SOMA) is to promote collaboration, synergies and the opportunity to maximize resources between programs with a similar mission: applied communication, visual literacy and digital media.SBCC's  works as strong partner in the effort to promote the need for art fundamentals in attaining these collaborative goals.The music department at Santa Barbara City College is the finest on the central coast, offering an extremely eclectic and in depth course of study