Original sentence: Le Corbusier was in fact the official architect of the city, which was commissioned by Jawaharlal Nehru, the first prime minister of independent India, to reflect the new nation's modern outlook and to look towards the future
Edited sentence: Le Corbusier was in fact the official architect of the city, which was commissioned by Jawaharlal Nehru, the first prime minister of independent India, to reflect the new nation's modern outlook and to look towards the future rather than towards the poverty and teeming, toiling masses, which everyone else was pointing towards