Original sentence: Garden City Plaza is a strip mall in the recently rennovated commercial downtown district.The Big Pool has fifty-meter Olympic swimming lanes, three water slides, a zero entry-depth kiddie pool, shade umbrellas, picnic tables.To pay for all the improvements in recent years, the pool is no longer free, but at $1 per person, or $2 for use of the slide also
Edited sentence: Garden City Plaza is a strip mall in the recently rennovated commercial downtown of Garden City, KS.It also has a minimum of fourteen lifeguards, two slide assistants, three admission clerks, two concession workers and a pool manager on duty each day.The Big Pool has fifty-meter Olympic swimming lanes, three water slides, a zero entry-depth kiddie pool, shade umbrellas, picnic tables, and everything else you'd expect from a modern swimming pool.To pay for all the improvements in recent years, the pool is no longer free, but at $1 per person ($2 if you want to use the water slides) this pool is great family fun at a low price