Original sentence: A self-made man, Mahadev was from a humble family.After the foundation of Indian national congress in 1885, Namjoshi complained about the lack of representative committee.As an active fund-raiser he persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.He explored the possibility of active cooperation from the local municipal boards in this regard.He was a close associate of Lokmanya Tilak since 1880s.His contribution to establishment of industrial conference and the industrial association in Pune was significant.However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry and for this he often sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.In 1888, Namjoshi approached the government for help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines and also work out who and how would goods be transported.Namjoshi was part of the formation of New English school and was also an elected member of the Pune municipality.With this in mind, he started new periodicals like Kiran, Deccan Star, Shilpa kalavidnyan and the Industrial review
Edited sentence: A self-made man, Mahadev came from humble background.After the foundation of Indian national congress in 1885, Namjoshi was one of the first to complain about the lack of representative committee.He also explored the possibility of active cooperation from the local municipal boards in this regard.He started new periodicals like Kiran, Deccan Star, Shilpa kalavidnyan and the Industrial review.He was also a close associate of Lokmanya Tilak since 1880s.He was an active fund-raiser and persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.He was part of the formation of New English school and was also an elected member of the Pune municipality.His greateast contribution was establishment of industrial conference and the industrial association in Pune.However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry and the sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.In 1888, Namjoshi sought government help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines.and also work out who and how would goods be transported