Original sentence: After the war Manny returned to architectural studies, first with a brief stint as an apprentice of  Frank Lloyd Wright at Taliesin and then with two years under Mies van der Rohe  at the Illinois Institute of Technology  in Chicago.In 1995 Carter Manny married Maya Moran, nee Uyterhoeven, an artist and writer.Papers, a collection of archival materials, is held by the Ryerson & Burnham Libraries at the  Art Institute of Chicago.With war clouds gathering in mid-1941, he shifted to a special war production program at the Harvard Business School Harvard Business School  where he obtained a degree in Industrial Administration in 1942
Edited sentence: After the war Manny returned to architectural studies, first with a brief stint as an apprentice of  Frank Lloyd Wright at Taliesin and then with two years under Mies van der Rohe  at the Illinois Institute of Technology in Chicago.In 1995 Carter Manny married Maya Moran, née Uyterhoeven, an artist and writer.Papers, a collection of archival materials, is held by the Ryerson & Burnham Libraries at the Art Institute of Chicago.With war clouds gathering in mid-1941, he shifted to a special war production program at the Harvard Business School Harvard Business School where he obtained a degree in Industrial Administration in 1942