Original sentence: Together with then husband Edward Anhalt, screenwriter Edna Anhalt (born 1914) enjoyed some considerable success in a ten year stretch from 1947 to her retirement in 1957
Edited sentence: Together with then husband Edward Anhalt, screenwriter Edna Anhalt (April 10, 1914 – 1987) enjoyed some considerable success in a ten year stretch from 1947 to her retirement in 1957