Original sentence: Additionally, larger commercial fields in the vicinty of Wanaka and Queenstown are easily accessible within a comfortable day's return drive.Benmore Peak Observatory is located approximately 13 km from Omarama, atop the nearby Benmore Range.In ideal conditions, it is possible for gliders to reach distances in excess of 1000km.Large  centre pivot irrigators and private canal networks now dominate much of the landscape
Edited sentence: Additionally, larger commercial fields in the vicinity of Wanaka and Queenstown are easily accessible within a comfortable day's return drive.Benmore Peak Observatory is located approximately 13 km from Omarama, atop the nearby Benmore Range.In ideal conditions, it is possible for gliders to reach distances in excess of 1000 km.Large centre pivot irrigators and private canal networks now dominate much of the landscape