Original sentence: However, this does not indicate that gun controls precede totalitarianism, because many districts have them, without becoming totallitarian.Location and capture of such records is a standard doctrine taught to military intelligence officers.Personal guns are an avoidable source of domestic accidents.Some criminals have asserted that they do not obey gun control laws.Some persons oppose registration or guns or licensing of gun owners because if captured, the associated records would provide military invaders with a means for locating and eliminating law-abiding, (i.Some scholars claim to have discovered a positive correlation between gun control legislation and crimes in which criminals confront citizens.The likelihood of invasion is often dismissed.The sequence is supposed to be gun registration, followed some time later by confiscation.There may be a historical regularity in that totalitarian regimes pass gun control legislation as a first step of their reign of terror.patriotic) resistance fighters
Edited sentence: Another issue is the historical regularity with which totalitarian regimes pass gun control legislation as a first step of their reign of terror.Careful scholarship has discovered a positive correlation between gun control legislation and crimes in which criminals confront citizens.Guns are an avoidable source of domestic accidents.It is interesting to note that Israel has no laws that disarm law-abiding citizens