Original sentence: A wonderful asset to Sudbury's living is the fantastic assisted living facility located off Sudbury's rte.While on the pricy side, Orchard Hill assisted living, owned by a lifetime Sudbury resident, is a 40+ resident assisted living on a former apple orchard
Edited sentence: " While on the pricy side, Orchard Hill assisted living, owned by a lifetime Sudbury resident, is a 40+ resident assisted living on a former apple orchard.A wonderful asset to Sudbury's living is "sitting high on a hillside, just down the road from the historic Wayside Inn, Orchard Hill brings the very best in assisted living to Sudbury and the surrounding area.Reminiscent of a New England farm-house mansion, Orchard Hill presents the perfect atmosphere to enjoy all the comforts of home with family and friends