Original sentence: The film posits that while some of the men, such as Carter, Begin and Sadat, were driven by deeply held faith and conviction, others were military men hawks who in their later years came to see peace as the only viable option
Edited sentence: The film posits that while some of the men, such as Carter, Begin and Sadat, were driven by deeply held faith and conviction, others were military hawks who in their later years came to see peace as the only viable option