Original sentence: James the 'Publishing Person of the Year', which, according to The Christian Science Monitor, caused an "outcry from the literary world"
Edited sentence: " asked Los Angeles Times writer Carolyn Kellogg, while a New York Daily News headline read, "Civilization ends: E.For example, "What was Publishers Weekly thinking.James named Publishers Weekly's ‘Person of the Year’.James the 'Publishing Person of the Year', causing an "outcry from the literary world"