Original sentence: Island embarked on a national tour entitled Men's Stories, which began in Seoul, South Korea.Island while Lee Hong-ki was filming You're Beautiful and while Song Seung-hyun was attending variety shows.Island, becomes a guitarist and the lead vocalist; Choi Jong-hun plays the piano and Choi Min-hwan continues to play the drums.Some of the reasons behind this move were to showcase more of the members' skills and to prevent lead singer, Lee Hong-ki, from overstraining his voice again.triple, Lee Jae-jin, originally in charge of bass for F
Edited sentence: For their concert, F.Island embarked on a national tour entitled, "Men's Stories" which began in Seoul, South Korea.Island emphasized their growth as a band as they begin to shed their boyish charms for a more mature and masculine appeal.Island while Lee Hongki was busy filming the South Korean drama "You're Beautiful" and while Song Seunghyun was busy with variety shows.Island, becomes a guitarist and the lead vocalist; leader Choi Jonghun plays the piano and Choi Min-hwan continues to play the drums.Some of the reasons behind this move were to showcase more of the members' skills and to prevent lead singer, Lee Hongki, from overstraining his voice again (Gayo Daejun Incident 2008).Their hit single from the album, I Hope, was very well received by their fans and the five members planned on showing their life behind the stage along with strong visuals and sounds on a more personal level for the fans.triple, Lee Jaejin, originally in charge of bass for F