Original sentence: Although it is not widely known some Unificationists claim to have found themes in American Pie having resonance to the theology and recent history of the Unification Church.From "the day to the music died" to "fire is the devil's only friend", these enigmatic lyrics have sparked a myriad of associations for UC members
Edited sentence: Although it is not widely, known some Unificationists claim to have found themes in American Pie having uncanny resonance to the theology and recent history of the Unification Church.From "the day to the music died" to "fire is the devil's only friend", these enigmatic lyrics have sparked a myriad of associations which strike a chord in the hearts of UC members