Original sentence: "Discotheque" sounded just "foreign" enough to catch on as something sophisticated in America in the late-60s / early-70s, where it was immediately accepted and joyously promoted by gay male dance audiences.Music with proto-"disco" elements appeared in late 1960s, with "Tighten Up" and "Mony, Mony," "Dance to the Music," "Love Child"
Edited sentence: "Disco" began to sneak in in the late '60s, with "Tighten Up" and "Mony, Mony," "Dance to the Music," "Love Child" and the culmination of the Temptations / Motown / Supremes conquest of the world's dancefloors with irresistiblly danceable playlists."Disco" lasted from the early '70s to the early '80's."Discotheque" sounded just "foreign" enough to catch on as something sophisticated in America in the late-60s / early-70s, where it was immediately accepted and joyously promoted by gay male dance audiences, reaching its pinnacle with Donna Summer's quintessential disco album streak, produced by the brilliant Giorgio Moroder.Thirty years after "Disco" began, gay clubs internationally "Vogued" to Madonna