Original sentence: Thompson Valley High School (TVHS) is a secondary school located in Loveland, Colorado.Thompson Valley High School web page
Edited sentence: --Speedy07 23:16, 11 October 2006 (UTC).Also a hazard of the hallway, as some students have discovered, is the remaining ceiling tiles breaking and smashing to the floor, narrowly missing unsuspecting students on their way to class.Hoffman's english classroom),  and windows that break easily if someone were to, lets say, punch it out of anger, or throw a friend through the window while screwing around at lunch.In the schools 29th year of existence, the school district has still not found funding to replace the original chairs and desks the school used when it was opened.Loveland High School (LHS), Thompson Valley's crosstown rival, dubbed "The School by the Lake" by many, is known for showing dis-respect for TVHS in most aspects.Many students have found that walking down the hallways can be very hazardous to ones health, as underclassmen enjoy grouping together in the middle of the hallway during passing periods to discuss pointless things, such as attending their first high school party, or almost being run over by an upperclassmen while they were walking down the middle of the road on their way to King Soopers.Many students will lean back in a chair only to have the backrest snap off cleanly, accidentally rip off a desktop while trying to move it for group work, or sit on a lunchtable bench and have it break in half.Mountain View High School, the third-largest high school in Loveland, is looked over by both LHS and TVHS, even though they have the most success in sports out of the three schools.Other facility issues include leaky roofs (Example: Mr.Thompson Valley High School (TVHS), located in Loveland, Colorado, is currently the best high school in America.Thompson Valley is known for having the richest students in town, yet the school lacks sufficient funds to pay for basic needs (AKA Ceiling/Floor tiles, or a working plumbing system, for that matter).With just under 2,000 students, it is the largest high school in Loveland as of 2004.however, the students remain upbeat about school despite the lack of up-to-date facilities