Original sentence: Human evolution is the evolutionary process that led to the emergence of anatomically modern humans, beginning with the evolutionary history of primates – in particular genus Homo – and leading to the emergence of Homo sapiens as a distinct species of the hominid family, the great apes.This process involved the gradual development of traits such as  human bipedalism and language, as well as interbreeding with other hominins, which indicate that human evolution was not linear but a web
Edited sentence: Acoording to this theory, the process involved the gradual development of traits such as  human bipedalism and language, as well as interbreeding with other hominins, which indicate that human evolution was not linear but a web.Human evolution is a worldwide accepted theory, presented by Charles Darwin that claims it led to the emergence of anatomically modern humans, beginning with the evolutionary history of primates – in particular genus Homo – and leading to the emergence of Homo sapiens as a distinct species of the hominid family, the great apes