Original sentence: Critics accuse it of recruiting and exploiting naive college students to sell their newspaper and fund the organization.It publishes a weekly paper called (Socialist Worker) and a magazine, the International Socialist Review.See also the International Socialist Organisation (Australia) or the International Socialist Organization (New Zealand).The ISO focuses most of its efforts on college campuses, however there are branches in cities without colleges.The International Socialist Organization (ISO), is a Trotskyist organization in the United States, claiming to have approximately 1,300 members.This has led critics to charge that the ISO frequently latches on to more popular causes, such as the anti-war movement, at both the national and the local level, as a way to recruit members, and sometimes attempts to take over related organizations
Edited sentence: Critics particularly accuse the ISO of exploiting naive college students to sell their newspaper and fund the organization.However, there are branches in cities without colleges.It claims to have about 1300 members and publishes a weekly paper called (Socialist Worker) and a magazine, the International Socialist Review.See also the International Socialist Organisation (Australia) or the International Socialist Organization (New Zealand) for groups with.The ISO focuses most of its efforts on college campuses.The International Socialist Organization (ISO) was until very recently the most active, the most visible, and possibly the largest single Trotskyist organization in the United States.They don't seem to make a point of recruiting specificallly amongst the working class.This has led critics to charge that the ISO frequently latches on to more popular causes, such as the anti-war movement, at both the national and the local level as a way to recruit members, rather than working honestly with  people over the long term to generate true, heartfelt respect for their line