Original sentence: Critics of Neowin claim there is an obvious bias towards pro-Microsoft sentiment, as well as equally negative sentiment regarding Sony Linux adopters.In spite of this, Neowin browsers include a significant number of Firefox and Mac users.Similar to such criticisms levied against Slashdot methodology, Neowin is likened to ablog-based site with the news presented without proper opinion
Edited sentence: Although this, Neowin have some concentrations of Firefox and Mac fans.In 24 December 2005 Neowin updated their slogan to "Where Christmas looks better than that Xbox 360 under your tree" in clearly pro-Microsoft bias.The forums and news comments is very commonly seen as Microsoft's Fanboyism, Anti-Sony and Anti-Linux adopters.Very similar with Slashdot methodology, Neowin is considered a superficial blog-based site with resumes of the news without proper opinion