Original sentence: Elsie Tu (Chinese: 杜葉錫恩; June 2, 1913-), GBM, CBE, (previously known as Elsie Elliott, nee Hume) is a prominent social activist, former elected member of the Urban Council of Hong Kong, and former member of the Legislative Council of Hong Kong
Edited sentence: Elsie Tu (Chinese: 杜葉錫恩; June 2, 1913-), GBM, CBE, (previously known as Elsie Elliott, née Hume) is a prominent social activist, former elected member of the Urban Council of Hong Kong, and former member of the Legislative Council of Hong Kong