Original sentence: Evidence shows those most at risk for suicide are those who previously attempted suicide, with research showing that they can have anywhere from a 40 to over a 100 times higher chance of dying by suicide compared to the general population
Edited sentence: Evidence shows that the primary suspects for suicide are those who failed in their original attempts at suicide, with research claiming that those previously attempting suicide can have anywhere from a 40 to over a 100 times higher chance of dying by suicide compared to that of the general population