Original sentence: Gilad Shalit (, born 28 August 1986) is an Israeli soldier who was captured on 25 June 2006 by Hamas in a cross border raid from the Gaza Strip on the crossing Kerem Shalom (in Israel) and has been held hostage by Hamas since
Edited sentence: Gilad Shalit (, born 28 August 1986) is an Israeli soldier who was captured on 25 June 2006 by Palestinian militants in a cross border raid from the Gaza Strip on the crossing Kerem Shalom (in Israel) and has been held hostage by Hamas since