Original sentence: Bush responded by stating "Jesus Christ", because "he changed my life".During his Presidency, Bush has generally shown tolerance of other religious belief systems, including festivals such as Hanukkah and Ramadan on the White House calendar
Edited sentence: Bush responded by stating "Jesus Christ" — implying that Jesus was the philosopher who had "changed his life".During his presidency, however, Bush has shown tolerance of other belief systems, including festivals such as Hanukkah and Ramadan on the White House calendar