Original sentence: April 5 - Brick, Santana, Rufus w/Chaka Khan.February 27 - Bruce Springsteen and The E Street Band.February 4 - Target, Bob Seger and The Silver Bullet Band, Black Sabbath.July 1 - The Micheal Stanley Band, Foreigner, Ted Nugent.July 10 - Southside Johnny and The Asbury Jukes, Boz Scaggs.May 29 - Emerson, Lake and Palmer (ELP).November 2 - Pockets, Deniece Williams, Earth, Wind and Fire.November 4 - Crosby, Stills and Nash
Edited sentence: April 5 - Brick, Santana, Rufus w/Chaka Kahn.February 23 - Atlanta Rhythm Section, ZZ Top.February 27 - Bruce Springsteen & The E Street Band.February 4 - Target, Bob Seger & The Silver Bullet Band, Black Sabbath.July 1 - The Michael Stanley Band, Foreigner, Ted Nugent.July 10 - Southside Johnny & The Asbury Jukes, Boz Scaggs.May 29 - Emerson, Lake & Palmer (ELP).November 2 - Pockets, Deniece Williams, Earth, Wind & Fire.November 4 - Crosby, Stills & Nash