Original sentence: The first three volumes have had three different releases; they were initially published in a single abridged volume titled "1-555-GODDESS" on November 1, 1996, and were later re-released in unabridged volumes, with volume 1 re-released on June 5, 2002, and volume 3 re-released on October 7, 2002.The third re-release of volume 1 was on December 7, 2005, and the re-release has reached volume 11, which was released on February 25, 2009.Volume 21 was published by Dark Horse on July 6, 2005, and volume 31 was released on January 7, 2009
Edited sentence: The first three volumes have had three different releases; they were initially published in a single abridged volume titled "1-555-GODDESS" on November 1, 1996, and were later re-released in unabridged volumes between June 5 and October 7, 2002.The third re-release of volume 1 was on December 7, 2005, and the re-release has reached volume 12, which was released on June 24, 2009.Volume 21 was published by Dark Horse on July 6, 2005, and volume 32 was released on April 29, 2009