Original sentence: According to The Stratocaster Chronicles , Mr.Channing Ward is the lead designer of the 2009 Stratocaster.The core of its instrument line — the Telecaster, Stratocaster, Precision Bass and Jazz Bass — remains largely unchanged from the 1950s and 1960s originals.William (Bill) Mendello is Chairman of the Board of Directors and Chief Executive Officer
Edited sentence: (The Stratocaster Chronicles, by Tom Wheeler; Hal Leonard Pub., Milwaukee, WI;  2004, p., Milwaukee, WI; 2004, p.108), Mr.According to The Stratocaster Chronicles (a book by Tom Wheeler; Hal Leonard Pub.American Basses:A Illustrated History).Channing Ward is the lead designer of the 2009 stratocaster.The core of its instrument line — the Telecaster, Stratocaster, Precision Bass and Jazz Bass — remains largely unchanged from the 1950s and 1960s originals (Roberts, Jim.William (Bill) Mendello is Chairman of the Board of Directors and Chief Executive Officer and Richard Kerley is Chief Financial Officer