Original sentence: In the summer of 2008, Illinois state senator James Meeks made a public plea for parents of Chicago public school students to assist their children in skipping the first day of school (September 2), and instead attend a protest at New Trier that will involve attempting to mass enroll students there.The protest is over perceived inequities in school funding between schools in Chicago and New Trier
Edited sentence: In the summer of 2008, Illinois state senator James Meeks made a public plea for parents of Chicago public school students to assist their children in skipping the first day of school (September 2), and instead attend a protest at New Trier that involved attempting to mass enroll students there.The protest was over perceived inequities in school funding between schools in Chicago and New Trier