Original sentence: Duke and Ripcord are rescued by Scarlett (Rachel Nichols), Snake Eyes (Ray Park), Heavy Duty (Adewale Akinnuoye-Agbaje) and Breaker (Saïd Taghmaoui).He declares McCullen to now be Destro, and the Doctor reveals that he himself is the new Cobra Commander, using the nano-mites to force McCullen to obey him.He then encounters Storm Shadow, and they both fight.Joe locates the secret base and fly to the Arctic, meanwhile McCullen loads three missiles with nano-mite war-heads and launches them.Meanwhile, the rest of the Joes stage an attack on McCullen's base.Ripcord takes off in a prototype jet and destroys the second missile before it reaches Moscow.Scarlett and Breaker manage to capture the base's control room, while Snake Eyes goes to disable the base's sonic cannon.Snake Eyes is victorious and manages to kill his nemesis.The nano-mites eat through part of the tower, causing it collapse, before Duke hits the kill switch, but in doing so he is captured and taken to McCullen's base under the Arctic.They then cause the base to self destruct in a last ditch effort to kill the Joes, but all of them manage to escape.While Heavy Duty leads a submarine force to create a diversion, Scarlett, Snake Eyes, and Breaker infiltrate the base and attempt to sabotage it from the inside
Edited sentence: Duke and Ripcord are rescued by Scarlett (Rachel Nichols), Snake Eyes (Ray Park) and Heavy Duty (Adewale Akinnuoye-Agbaje).Duke and the Baroness pursue him while Scarlett, Heavy Duty and Snake Eyes attempt to stop the missiles and shut down the Arctic base.He declares McCullen to now be Destro, and the Doctor reveals that he himself is the new Cobra Commander.Joe locates the secret base and fly to the Arctic, meanwhile McCullen loads three missiles with nano-mite war-heads.Ripcord pursues the missiles while Scarlett and Snake Eyes rescue Duke.Ripcord takes off in a prototype jet, and destroys the second missile before it reaches Moscow.The nano-mites eat through part of the tower before Duke hits the kill switch, but in doing so he is captured and taken to McCullen's base under the Arctic