Original sentence: Miracle Giants Dome-kun (also written Miracle Giants Domu-kun) is an anime series based on a manga by Shotaro Ishinomori, which follows the adventures of Dome Shinjo, a 10 years old boy who is son of a deceased legendary player of the Yomiuri Giants
Edited sentence: Miracle Giants Dome-kun (also written Miracle Giants Domu-kun) is an anime series based on a manga by Shotaro Ishinomori, which follows the adventures of Dome Shinjo, a 10 years old boy who is son of a passed away legendary player of the Yomiuri Giants