Original sentence: After 1993 the main outlet for raves in the UK were a number of licensed venues, amongst them Helter Skelter, Life @ Bowlers (Trafford Park, Manchester), The Edge (formerly the Eclipse [Coventry]), The Sanctuary (Milton Keynes) and Club Kinetic.American underground rave DJs from that time who would go onto international celebrity include artists like Moby, Josh Wink, DJ Keoki, Frankie Bones, Doc Martin, Barry Weaver and others.Organizations such as Fantazia, Universe, Raindance & Amnesia House were by 1991/92 holding massive legal raves in fields and warehouses around the country.The upsurge in popularity of rave culture in the United States at a certain period in time often lends it characteristics common to a 'movement' or subculture
Edited sentence: After 1993 the main outlet for raves in the UK were a number of licensed venues, amongst them Helter Skelter, Life @ Bowlers (Trafford Park, Manchester), The Edge (formerly the Eclipse [Coventry]), The Sanctuary (Milton Keynes) and Club Kinetic (Stoke on Trent).American underground rave DJs from that time who would go onto international celebrity include artists like Moby, Josh Wink, DJ Keoki, Frankie Bones, Doc Martin, Barry Weaver and others -- all of whp found fame in europe before returing to America.Americans understanding of rave is limited because they don't understand music with out guitars and fat middle aged singers.Organizations such as Fantazia, Universe, Crunch (Jon Hollis), Raindance & Amnesia House were by 1991/92 holding massive legal raves in fields and warehouses around the country.The upsurge in popularity of rave culture in the United States at a certain period in time often lends it characteristics common to a 'movement' or subculture - American rave is widely renowned to be an inferior to Eurpoean rave culture and especially UK based rave