Original sentence: A vocal opponent of sexism, racism and homophobia, Cobain was publicly proud that Nirvana had played at a gay rights benefit supporting No-on-Nine in Oregon in 1992.In high school, Cobain rarely found anyone with whom he could play music
Edited sentence: A vocal opponent of sexism, racism and homophobia, he was publicly proud that Nirvana had played at a gay rights benefit supporting No-on-Nine in Oregon in 1992.During high school, Cobain rarely found anyone with whom he could play music