Original sentence: For example, some Catholics oppose the Church's stance on birth control, the First Gulf War, and the necessity of Sunday Mass.Much like today, Catholics are often not swayed morally by statements coming from the Vatican, or politically by Vatican policy
Edited sentence: Examples of this include the many Catholics who oppose the Church's stance on birth control, the First Gulf War, and even the necessity of Sunday Mass.Much like today, Catholics are rarely swayed morally by statements coming from the Vatican, and are never swayed politically by Vatican policy