Original sentence: Newton (1942–1989), co-founder of the Black Panther Party
Edited sentence: Newton (1942–1989),  Leader and Organizer of the Black Panther Party for Social Change; credited for establishing the child breakfast program now run by the Department of Education; advocated for Equal Civil Rights for Black Americans; b pieces assassinated in 1989 after trying to reorganize drug trafficking in Oakland to feed his newly acquired crack habit