Original sentence: In the second series, after getting a artifical limb, Louise becomes a member of the A-Laws after Regene Regetta, escorts her from a hospital to meet with Ribbons Almark, who channels her intent for revenge and world peace by making her the first true Innovator with pills that enhance her physical capabilities despite the side-effect of causing slow bodily deterioriation.She becomes an acquaintance of Setsuna F Seiei when the later becomes Saji's neighbor.When he becomes pilot of the GNR-010 0 Raiser, Saji learns of Louise being in the A-Laws and chooses to fight and save her.While Louise is attending her cousin's wedding, Gundam Throne Meister Nena Trinity attacks the wedding party killing Louise's entire family and causing Louise to lose her left hand, unable to be regenerated due to the red GN particle
Edited sentence: In the second series, after receiving an artifical limb, Louise becomes a member of the A-Laws after Regene Regetta escorts her from a hospital to meet with Ribbons Almark, who channels her intent for revenge and world peace by making her the first true Innovator with pills that enhance her physical capabilities despite the side-effect of causing slow bodily deterioriation.She becomes an acquaintance of Setsuna F Seiei when the latter becomes Saji's neighbor.When he becomes pilot of the GNR-010 0 Raiser, Saji learns of Louise being in the A-Laws and chooses to fight to save her.While Louise is attending her cousin's wedding, Gundam Throne Meister Nena Trinity attacks the wedding party killing Louise's entire family and causing Louise to lose her left hand, which is unable to be regenerated due to the red GN particles