Original sentence: Guide to applying to PhD - Covers selecting the right program, taking tests, recommendations, and statement of purpose from a professor who has been on the admissions committee for CMU, MIT, Berkeley
Edited sentence: Excellent guide to applying to Ph.Graduate School Application Help - Tips, strategies, and a few sample Statements of Purpose for getting accepted into graduate school.from CMU Professor - Covers everything from selecting the right program, taking tests, recommendations, and statement of purpose from a professor who has been on the admissions committee for CMU, MIT, Berkeley