Original sentence: From the dock's western end the London Regatta Centre, a major rowing club (with the Yi-Ban Chinese restaurant on top of its clubhouse building) is followed by the Building 1000 office development (Royals Business Park), which however in early 2007 had stood vacant for three years since completion apart from being used for several film shoots
Edited sentence: From the dock's western end the London Regatta Centre, a major rowing club (with the Yi-Ban Chinese restaurant on top of its clubhouse building) is followed by the impressive Building 1000 office development, which however in early 2007 had stood vacant for three years since completion apart from being used for several film shoots