Original sentence: It was the first time in São Paulo state's History that a Governor was elected in the first round of elections, what shows notable popular approval.José Serra is often considered a skilled administrator and a learned politician, however lacking charisma
Edited sentence: It was the first time in São Paulo state's History that a Governor was elected in the first round of elections, what shows notable popular approval at this time.José Serra was often considered a skilled administrator and a learned politician, however lacking charisma.Political analists says that he digged his own political grave with these acts.The workers of the University also joined the movement.These universities are responsible for more than 50% of brazilian scientific production.This resulted in a tremendous institutional crisis culminating in the invasion of the University of São Paulo rectory by the students.Unfortunately, at the very first day of his governorship, he made a big mistake by issuing edicts allowing him to take over the autonomy of the three state universities of São Paulo