Original sentence: In February 2020, the New Zealand Cabinet proposed several changes to the country's secondary school curriculum National Certificate of Educational Achievement (NCEA) including according equal status to mātauranga Māori (indigenous knowledge).In July 2021, in the context of a review of the secondary school curriculum National Certificate of Educational Achievement (NCEA), seven University of Auckland Professors and Emeritus Professors (known informally as the Listener Seven) published a letter "In Defence of Science" in the current affairs magazine New Zealand Listener, which generated considerable controversy for claiming indigenous knowledge (or Mātauranga Māori) "falls far short of what can be defined as science itself
Edited sentence: In February 2020, the New Zealand Cabinet proposed several changes to the country's secondary school certificate National Certificate of Educational Achievement (NCEA) including according equal status to mātauranga Māori (indigenous knowledge).In July 2021, in the context of a review of the NCEA (New Zealand's National Curriculum), seven University of Auckland Professors and Emeritus Professors (known informally as the Listener Seven) published a letter "In Defence of Science" in the current affairs magazine New Zealand Listener, which drew considerable for claiming indigenous knowledge (or Mātauranga Māori) "falls far short of what can be defined as science itself