Original sentence: Early on, their material contained attacks on manufactured pop, including the live favourite 'Louis Walsh' (Louis Walsh being the svengali behind  Westlife and Boyzone, amongst others.They followed this up with the stand-alone singles Tuesday, Monday and Loaded before the debut studio album Suck in February 2003.They formed on the eve of the millennium with an aim to "change the face of Irish music"
Edited sentence: Early on, their material contained attacks on manufactured pop, including the live favourite 'Louis Walsh' (Louis Walsh being the svengali behind embarrassing exports Six, Westlife and Boyzone, amongst others.They followed this up with the stand-alone singles Tuesday, Monday and Loaded before the debut studio album Suck in February 2003, with the message behind it ("The Revs suck") being a modest nod to the non-fans.They formed on the eve of the millennium with an aim to change the face of Irish music