Original sentence: Some RC'ers in turn believe that whilst some of Jackins' distresses were not adequately challenged by the organisation during his lifetime, the core theoretical basis of the organisation is correct.Taken together, these form a damaging critique of Jackins' work and of RC, since they suggest that the implied commitment to honest, open and fair dealings with each other combining as "integrity" in the basic structure of the movement's views are open to manipulation by its leadership if facts are considered detrimental to the organisation
Edited sentence: Taken together, these form a very damaging critique of Jackins' work and of RC, since they suggest that the implied commitment to honest, open and fair dealings with each other combining as "integrity" in the basic structure of the movement's views are open to manipulation by its leadership if facts are considered detrimental to the organisation