Original sentence: According to the Pontifical Yearbook of 2009, the number of catholics in the world increased from 1,131 million to 1,147 million between 2006 and 2007, a growth of 1.4 percent
Edited sentence: According to the Pontifical Yearbook of 2009, the number of Catholics in the world increased from 1,131 million to 1,147 million between 2006 and 2007, a growth of 1.4 percent