Original sentence: In August 2011, Netflix raised their prices in a verbal outcry from customers who disagreed with the changes.Netflix has since abandoned plans to split the services in two, despite advising it's customer base that it does plan to sunset it's DVD/BluRay-by-Mail business over time in favor of Internet Streaming
Edited sentence: In August 2011, Netflix raised their prices and began losing customers to Blockbuster.Netflix has since abandoned plans to split the services in two