Original sentence: Palestinians insist that it is not fair or realistic to expect the kind of control Israel demands from the PA to curtail terrorism, as the PA has no where near the resources of the Israeli state, and they claim that the infrastructure of their many security apparati were severely damaged by vastly superior IDF forces in various confrontations during the Al Aqsa Intifada
Edited sentence: Palestinians complain that it is not fair or realistic to expect the kind of control Israel demands from the PA to curtail terrorism, as the PA has no where near the resources of the Israeli state, and has been severely hobbled by vastly superior IDF forces in various confrontations during the Al Aqsa Intifada, in which the infrastructure of the security apparatus was severely damaged