Original sentence: On 2006-03-05, a Protection Technology employee posted a link to an unauthorised download source of Galactic Civilizations 2, a game developed by StarDock which does not use mandatory copy protection, as a demonstration of what a lack of protection can lead to.StarForce later issued an apology for this act after it received a great deal of attention on the Internet
Edited sentence: In an incredibly gauche display of commercial ethics (or lack of), on 2006-03-05, a Protection Technology employee posted a link to an unauthorised download source of Galactic Civilizations 2, a game developed by StarDock which does not use mandatory copy protection, as a demonstration of what a lack of protection can lead to.StarForce later issued a meaningless "apology" for this act after it received a great deal of attention on the Internet