Original sentence: After walking up the mountain to the protest site, many decided to descend the opposite side, crossing through a minefield that was laid by Israel during the 2006 Lebanon War.At least 12 Palestinians and their supporters were killed by Israeli Army gunfire in various border incidents.Media reported that the 2011 Nakba Day demonstrations were given impetus by the revolutions and uprisings taking place in the Arab world.Members of the Lebanese army fired into the air in a failed effort to deter them.On May 15th, groups of Palestinians and Arabs from the West Bank, Gaza Strip, Syria, and Lebanon marched toward their respective borders with Israel.The American and Israeli governments claim the marches were coordinated by the Iranian and the Syrian governments to shift public attention from domestic unrest.The Israeli army used live fire against the protestors killing ten Palestinian refugees and injuring more than 100.The protestors only left after the Lebanese army began firing assault rifles and tear gas to disperse them.When they reached the border fence, they threw stones over it and chanted for their right of return
Edited sentence: 12 rioters were killed as a result of the Israeli Army response.After walking up the mountain to the protest site, many decided to descend the opposite side, breaching the border in several locations and starting a riot.On May 15th, groups of Palestinians and Arabs from the West Bank, Gaza Strip, Syria, and Lebanon marched toward their respective borders with Israel breaching the border in several locations and starting a riot.Several days before the border incidents, in an interview with the New York Times, Syrian official threatened that if the pro-democratic protests in Syria continue, Israel will have to share the consequences of such an instability.The American and Israeli governments have claimed that the incidents in Syria and Lebanon were coordinated by the Iranian and the Syrian governments in order to shift public attention from the revolutions and uprisings taking place in Syria and Iran.The American and Israeli governments have claimed that the marchings were coordinated by the Iranian and the Syrian governments in order to shift public attention from the revolutions and uprisings taking place in Syria and Iran