Original sentence: Bush, carried out an extremely controversial and unpopular war in Iraq, The opposing Democratic Party, now in power under President Barack Obama, condemned this war, and now has a plan to end it
Edited sentence: Bush, carried out a controversial war in Iraq, The opposing Democratic Party, now in power under President Barack Obama, condemned this war, and claim to have a plan to end it.However, in the first few months of Barack Obama's presidency more troops have been ordered into Afghanistan, calling in to question these plans