Original sentence: A report by the Croatian Commission of the Defence Council found that Šušak was responsible for the fall of the Bosnian Posavina in September 1992 and had handed over territory strategically vital to the Bosnian Serb forces.After Tuđman became President of Croatia in 1991, Šušak was appointed defence minister, an office he held throughout the Yugoslav Wars.He helped to raise large amounts of money among the Croatian diaspora in North America, which helped Tuđman finance his rise to power in Croatia.In 1979, Šušak, other like-minded Croatian emigrants, planned to place a piglet in a coffin in front of the Yugoslav Embassy, with either the intention of letting it loose on embassy grounds or possibly killing it.In 1990, he returned to Croatia.In 1997, fearing that Washington would punish an uncooperative Croatia, Šušak helped arranged the surrender of 11 Bosnian Croat war crimes suspects to the Hague Tribunal
Edited sentence: A report by the Croatian Commission of the Defence Council found that Šušak was responsible for the fall of the Bosnian Posavina in September 1992 and handed over territory strategically vital to the Bosnian Serb forces.Following the adoption of multi-party democracy in 1990, Šušak returned to the country, and after Tuđman became President of Croatia in 1991, Šušak was appointed defence minister, an office he held throughout the Yugoslav Wars.In 1979, Šušak with his immigrant friends, planned to place a piglet in a coffin in front of the Yugoslav Embassy, with either the intention of letting it loose on embassy grounds or possibly killing it.In 1997, fearing that Washington would punish an uncooperative Croatia, Šušak helped arranged the surrender of 11 Bosnian Croat war crimes suspects to The Hague tribunal.Šušak helped to raise large amounts of money among the Croatian diaspora in North America, which helped Tuđman finance his rise to power in Croatia