Original sentence: The Hooples had one daughter and five sons: Ruth Agnes Hoople (born 14 January 1892 in New York; died July 1972 in Syracuse, New York), who graduated from Syracuse University in 1914, after three years of social service, was as a missionary with the YWCA in China (1917-1928), serving in Mukden, and later as a chaplain at the university, and as the executive secretary of the Syracuse-in-China programme (1941-1952); William Clifford Hoople (born October 1893 in New York; died 1936 in New York); Gordon Douglass "Gymp" Hoople (born 19 February 1895 in New York; died June 1973 in New York), who after completing his Bachelor of Science at Syracuse University in 1915 and his M
Edited sentence: The Hooples had one daughter and five sons: Ruth Agnes Hoople (born 14 January 1892 in New York; died July 1972 in Syracuse, New York), who graduated from Syracuse University in 1914, after three years of social service, was as a missionary with the YWCA in China (1917-1928), serving in Mukden, and later as a chaplain at the university, and as the executive secretary of the Syracuse-in-China programme (1941-1952); William Clifford Hoople (born October 1893 in New York; died 1936 in New York), who became an artist; Gordon Douglass "Gymp" Hoople (born 19 February 1895 in New York; died June 1973 in New York), who after completing his Bachelor of Science at Syracuse University in 1915 and his M