Original sentence: Although Lightyear were committed to the independent ethos of punk rock, they  also gained fans and a reputation in the underground scene for their riotous antics.The  venue was the Darwin Suite of the Derby Assembly Rooms, and the benefit show took place on Friday the 2nd of November 2007.and Jerry-built (whom bassist Bars joined following Lightyear's split),  running from 14 July to 2 August
Edited sentence: Although Lightyear were committed to the independent ethos of punk rock, they also gained fans and a reputation in the underground scene for their riotous antics.The venue was the Darwin Suite of the Derby Assembly Rooms, and the benefit show took place on Friday the 2nd of November 2007.and Jerry-built (whom bassist Bars joined following Lightyear's split), running from 14 July to 2 August