Original sentence: He also discussed a journalist's use of what he claimed to be a completely coincidental occurrence of him unknowingly walking past a player with an anti-Semitic username and avatar in a video game to paint him as normalizing white supremacy and anti-Semitism.On 17 December, PewDiePie posted a video entitled My Response S02E01, in which he criticized what he described as the reporting of misinformation by the media and other notable online personalities, he also denounced the claims that he had previously tweeted about the Charlottesville car attack as false, and stated that his endorsement increased E;R's subscriber count by 150,000 rather than 15,000
Edited sentence: He also discussed a journalist's use of a completely coincidental occurrence of him unknowingly walking past a player with an anti-Semitic username and avatar in a video game to paint him as normalizing white supremacy and anti-Semitism.On 17 December, PewDiePie posted a video entitled My Response S02E01, in which he criticized the reporting of misinformation by the media and other notable online personalities, including false claims that he had previously tweeted about the Charlottesville car attack, and that his endorsement increased E;R's subscriber count by 150,000 rather than 15,000