Original sentence: Edward Oliver Wheeler (1890 in Ottawa, Ontario - March 19, 1962 in Vernon, British Columbia) was an accomplished mountain climber from Canada.His father, Arthur Oliver Wheeler, a Dominion Land Surveyor, co-founded the Alpine Club of Canada and mapped British Columbia’s Selkirk Mountains and the British Columbia-Alberta border.His mother was Clara (nee Macoun)
Edited sentence: As Brigadier in the British Army was appointed Surveyor General of India in 1941.Edward Oliver Wheeler (1890 in Ottawa, Ontario - March 19, 1962 in Vernon, British Columbia) participated in the first topographical survey of Mount Everest in 1921.He was an accomplished mountain climber.His father,.His father, Arthur Oliver Wheeler was designated a National Historic Person in 1995.His mother was Clara (nee Macoun), daughter of Canadian botanist John Macoun.a Dominion Land Surveyor, co-founded the Alpine Club of Canada and mapped British Columbia’s Selkirk Mountains and the British Columbia-Alberta border