Original sentence: Free Republic has been previously criticized for the actions of select members who posted death threats against former President Clinton.When owners of a restaurant notified authorities that an underage Jenna Bush had attempted to purchase liquor, their personal information was widely distributed, with similar threats of violence and death following soon thereafter
Edited sentence: Free Republic has also been criticized for the actions of a minority of members who posted death threats against former President Clinton and threats against the owners of a restaurant who notified authorities when an underage Jenna Bush attempted to purchase liquor illegally at the establishment