Original sentence: Peters, a creative entrepreneur educator, and a business development consultant played a very significant role in the official kick off of the GCAP Make Poverty History in Nigeria.Professor Pat Utomi sits as the one of the patron of the initiative
Edited sentence: Peters, an international advocacy specialist, diplomat, computer analyst and a creative business development consultant played a very significant role in the official kick off of the GCAP Make Poverty History in Nigeria.Professor Pat Utomi sits as one of the patrons of the initiative