Original sentence: In 1968, Al Brodax once again contracted Ron from London, where he was producing The Beatle’s feature length animated motion picture, Yellow Submarine.Ron Campbell’s careerbegan in 1958 animating various commercials for Australian television
Edited sentence: In 1968,Al Brodax once again contracted Ron from London, where he was producing The Beatle’s feature length animated motion picture, Yellow Submarine.Ron Campbell’s career began in 1958 animating various commercials for Australian television