Original sentence: Catherine Deneuve (French ), (October 22, 1943, in Paris, France), is an Academy Award-nominated French actress who made her reputation playing a series of beautiful ice maidens for directors such as Luis Buñuel and Roman Polanski
Edited sentence: A model of French elegance, cultivated lust object for art house filmgoers everywhere, and one of the best-respected actresses in the French film industry, Catherine Deneuve made her reputation playing a series of beautiful ice maidens for directors such as Luis Buñuel and Roman Polanski.Catherine Deneuve (French ), (October 22, 1943, in Paris, France), is an Academy Award-nominated French actress