Original sentence: He was born malformed, limbless and without any facial features and internal organs, as the result of his birth father daimyo Daigo Kagemitsu forging a pact with 48 sealed demons to rule the world in return that each demon could obtain a piece of his unborn child's body, enabling them to roam free and commit arocities along the countryside.Honma, a medcine man who used alchemical methods to gave him prostheses crafted from the children who died in the war, making the boy near-invincible against any mortal blow, along with a blade that kill supernatural enities.On the day his father died, the young man learned of the curse on him and that by killing the demons, he can reclaims one piece of his body and regain his humanity
Edited sentence: He was born malformed, limbless and without facial features or internal organs, as the result of his birth father daimyo Daigo Kagemitsu forging a pact with 48 sealed demons to rule the world in return that each demon could obtain a piece of his unborn child's body, enabling them to roam free and commit atrocities along the countryside.Honma, a medicine man who used alchemical methods to give him prostheses crafted from children who died in the war, making the boy nearly invincible against any mortal blow, along with a blade that kills supernatural entities.On the day his father died, the young man learned of the curse on him and that by killing the demons, he can reclaim one piece of his body and regain his humanity