Original sentence: The majority of professional criticism concerned the decision to have Ramsay rape Sansa on their wedding night, with most critics describing the scene as gratuitous and artistically unnecessary
Edited sentence: The majority of professional criticism concerned the decision to have Ramsay rape Sansa on their wedding night, with most critics describing the scene as gratuitous and artistically unnecessary - as Sansa doesn't even meet Ramsay Bolton in the novels, but continues her storyline in the Vale