Original sentence: On March 9, 2008, Zimbabwe's President, Robert Mugabe signed the Indigenization and Economic Empowerment Bill into law.The bill was passed through parliament in September of 2007 by President Mugabe’s party, Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF), in spite of resistance by the opposition party, Movement for Democratic Change (MDC)
Edited sentence: On March 9, 2008, the autocratic President of Zimbabwe, Robert Mugabe signed the Indigenization and Economic Empowerment Bill into law.The bill was basically forced through parliament in September of 2007 by President Mugabe’s party, Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF), in spite of furious resistance by the opposition party, Movement for Democratic Change (MDC)