Original sentence: According to Bad Wisdom, he was born and raised in Manchester (although there are rumours that Gimpo himself says he's from Mold in Wales), and is a 'brother-in-law' to Mark Manning
Edited sentence: According to Bad Wisdom, he was born and raised in the UK's third city of Manchester (although there are rumours that Gimpo himself says he's from Mold in Wales), and is a 'brother-in-law' to Mark Manning