Original sentence: Bangkok Airways Flight 266 was a scheduled domestic service to Samui Airport, Thailand which overran the runway on landing and crashed into a disused control tower on 4th August 2009.This translates as METAR for Samui Airport, issued on the 4th of the month at 07:00 UTC, wind at 15 knots, direction 290° visibility 9 km, few clouds at 2,000 ft, scattered clouds at 12,000 ft, broken clouds at 30,000 ft, temperature 31°C, dewpoint 25°C, altimeter 1007 millibars or 29.74 inches, towering cumulonimbus to north west.ms:Bangkok_Airways_Flight_266
Edited sentence: Bangkok Airways Flight 266 was a scheduled domestic service to Samui Airport, Thailand which overran the runway on landing and crashed into a disused control tower on 4 August 2009.This translates as METAR for Samui Airport, issued on the 4th of the month at 07:00 UTC, wind at 15 knots, direction 290° visibility 9 km, few clouds at 2,000 ft, scattered clouds at 12,000 ft, broken clouds at 30,000 ft, temperature 31°C, dewpoint 25°C, altimeter 1007 millibars or 29.74 inches, towering cumulonimbus to north west.ms:Bangkok Airways Flight 266