Original sentence: "Statistical divisions" are defined by the Australian Bureau of Statistics as areas under the unifying influence of one or more major towns or a major city.An example of these is the city of Newcastle, New South Wales.Each State's capital city and the Federal capital of Canberra forms its own statistical division, and the population of the statistical division is the figure most often quoted for that city's population.Others can be found in the Gold Coast, Queensland and in Cairns, Queensland.Statistical districts are defined as non-capital but predominantly urban areas
Edited sentence: "Statistical Divisions" are defined by the Australian Bureau of Statistics as areas under the unifying influence of one or more major towns or a major city.By far the most important of these is the city of Newcastle, New South Wales , and others can be found in the Gold Coast, Queensland, and in Cairns, Queensland.Each State's capital city and the Federal capital of Canberra forms its own Statistical Division, and the population of the Statistical Division is the figure most often quoted for that city's population.Statistical Districts are defined as non-capital but predominantly urban areas