Original sentence: Fraser married Margaret Sharp 11th October 1683.Fraser was born on 11th November 1654 in the small town of Fraserburgh.He ultimately voted against the final ratification of the Treaty in the Scottish Parliament on 16th January 1707.This was in direct contradiction with the first article of Union, and threatened to end the Regal Union of 1603 which would have severed all ties bewteen the Kingdoms of Scotland and England
Edited sentence: Fraser married Margaret Sharp 11 October 1683.Fraser was born on 11 November 1654 in the small town of Fraserburgh.He ultimately voted against the final ratification of the Treaty in the Scottish Parliament on 16 January 1707.This was in direct contradiction with the first article of Union, and threatened to end the Regal Union of 1603 which would have severed all ties between the Kingdoms of Scotland and England