Original sentence: Abdul Kalam, who cited evidence and data to prove his point.In 2009 it was reported by the BBC that a retired atomic scientist, K.Santhanam who was closely associated with the tests claims that the 1998 test were not a success that the then BJP government had claimed they were.These claims were widely dismissed in India, including a specific dismissal by former Indian President and Nuclear Physicist A
Edited sentence: In 2009 it was reported by the BBC that a single rogue scientist who once worked on the Pokhran-II tests now claims that the 1998 test were not a success that then BJP government had claimed they were.These claims were widely dismissed in India, including a specific dismissal by former Indian President and Nuclear Physicist Abdul Kalam, who cited evidence and data to prove his point