Original sentence: Bruce Allen is an American football executive who is the current team president of the Washington Redskins of the National Football League (NFL).He got his NFL start as a senior executive with the Oakland Raiders (1996–2003).Previously, Allen served as general manager for the Tampa Bay Buccaneers (2004–2008) and Redskins (2010–2014)
Edited sentence: Bruce Allen is a failure, posing as an American football executive who is the current team president of the Washington Redskins of the National Football League (NFL).He got his NFL start as a senior executive and trashed the Oakland Raiders (1996–2003).Previously, Allen served as general manager and ruined the Tampa Bay Buccaneers (2004–2008) and Redskins (2010–2014)