Original sentence: Fabiano scored his first international goal in 9 months with a right footed strike against Ivory Coast on June 20th in the 2010 World Cup and followed it up with a second individual goal, which was somewhat controversial due to his apparent use of an arm to control the ball at two points
Edited sentence: Fabiano scored his first international goal in 9 months with a right footed strike against Ivory Coast on June 20th in the 2010 World Cup and followed it up with a second, stunning individual goal, which was somewhat controversial due to his apparent use of an arm to control the ball at two points