Original sentence: " In November 2008, without warning customers, the GameZnFlix website was taken offline for non-payment of data center charges.GameZnFlix  was a video game rental and online DVD rental  subscription service offering flat rate rental-by-mail to customers in the United States.Retail stores such as Circuit City offered one month prepaid subscriptions of GameZnFlix for new customers, and gift certificates that could be sent to friends and family
Edited sentence: " The company's home page went dark on approximately November 8, 2008.Circuit City (now defunct) offered one month prepaid subscriptions of GameZnFlix for new customers, and gift certificates that could be sent to friends and family...GameZnFlix was a video game rental and online DVD rental subscription service offering flat rate rental-by-mail to customers in the United States