Original sentence: The Japanese version of pilot episode The End (which is based on the remastered edition of the show) was included as a bonus feature on the English language DVD release of Series I, featuring a truncated title sequence and Japanese dubbing
Edited sentence: The Japanese version of pilot episode The End (which is based on the remastered edition of the show) was included as a bonus feature on the English language DVD release of Series I, featuring a truncated title sequence and, of course, Japanese dubbing