Original sentence: A very popular series, recommended by some as the intro to this subgenre is David Weber's on-going Honor Harrington series, which comes with 'reasonably' (as much as anything in science fiction) logical technology, believable plot, and good character depth.Another of the defining authors of the genre is David Drake, with many of his works, especially the Hammer's Slammers series.Military science fiction is a subgenre of science fiction where interstellar or interplanetary conflict and its armed solution (war) make up the backdrop of the story
Edited sentence: A very popular series, and a recommended intro to this subgenre is David Weber's on-going Honor Harrington series, which comes with 'reasonably' logical technology, believable plot, and (disputed by some) outstanding character depth.Another of the defining authors of the genre is David Drake, especially with his Hammer's Slammers series, but also with many of his other works.Military science fiction is a subset of science fiction where interstellar or interplanetary conflict and its armed solution make up the backdrop of the story