Original sentence: Britannica claims that it is established in 247 countries and territories; represents over 2,100 ethnic, racial, and tribal groups; has scriptures translated into over 800 languages; and has seven million adherents worldwide [2005].The Bahá'í writings emphasize the essential equality of human beings, and the abolition of prejudice.Under the leadership of his son, `Abdu'l-Bahá, the religion gained a footing in Europe and America, and was consolidated in Iran, where it still suffered intense persecution.the All-Powerful, or the All-Loving), and there is a substantial emphasises on monotheism, rejecting such doctrines as the trinity
Edited sentence: Britannica claims that it is established in 247 countries and territories; represents over 2,100 ethnic, racial, and tribal groups; has scriptures translated into over 800 languages; and boasts approximately seven million adherents worldwide [2005].The Bahá'í writings emphasise the essential equality of human beings, and the abolition of prejudice.Under the leadership of his son, `Abdu'l-Bahá, the religion gained a strong footing in Europe and America, and was significantly consolidated in Iran, where it still suffered intense persecution.the All-Powerful, or the All-Loving), and there is a substantial emphasises on monotheism, rejecting such doctrines as the trinity,