Original sentence: During Greer's studies at Florida State University, he was for a time a roommate of Jim Morrison's, who later became lead vocalist of The Doors.He has received substantial attention in the American national  and around the world, as well as criticism from conservative groups, for his involvement in the Terri Schiavo case, and specifically for his ruling that her feeding tube could be removed.However, it must be noted that the legal and moral issues in Schiavo's case are substantially different, as the primary debate was whether her husband's decision to take her off life support represented her wishes; Greer had found it consistent.article in the St
Edited sentence: During Greer's studies at Florida State University, he was for a time roommate to Jim Morrison, known as lead vocalist of The Doors.He has received substantial in the United States and around the world attention following his involvement in the Terri Schiavo case.However, it must be noted that the legal and moral issues in Schiavo's case are substantially different, as the primary debate was whether her husband's decision to take her off life support represented her wishes; Greer had indeed found it consistent.Judge Greer received attention from the American national , as well as criticism from conservative groups for his ruling that Terri Schiavo's feeding tube could be removed.Quiet judge persists in Schiavo maelstrom—article in the St