Original sentence: " He declared his birthday "World Patriarchy Day.In a Breitbart article titled, "Birth Control Makes Women Unattractive and Crazy", he argues that the combined oral contraceptive pill causes women to become hysterical, sexually promiscuous and obese
Edited sentence: In a Breitbart article titled, "Birth Control Makes Women Unattractive and Crazy", he asserts that the combined oral contraceptive pill causes women to become hysterical, sexually promiscuous and obese