Original sentence: Amity University in the National Capital of New Delhi is one of India's first private universities, to be defined as such.In India, private institutes offering management education (like Xavier Institute of Labour Relations, and The Indian Institute of Planning and Management) have been around since the 1940s and the 1970s respectively.It was established by state legislature and was so recognized under the University Grants Commission (India).Jaypee University of Information Technology at Waknaghat, Mangalayatan University at Aligarh  and Lovely Professional University in Punjab are other private universities
Edited sentence: Amity University in the National Capital of New Delhi is one of India's first private Universities.In India, private institutes offering management education have been around since the 1940s.It is established by State Legislature and recognised under the University Grants Commission (UGC) Act.Jaypee University of Information Technology at Waknaghat is one of private Universities.Mangalayatan University at Aligarh is one of the best private Universities in India