Original sentence: By April, reports showed Clinton gaining upstate and generally outworking Giuliani, who stated that his duties as mayor prevented him from campaigning more.He gave priority to city duties over campaign activities.In addition, Giuliani pounded at the carpetbagger charge, such as making a quick one-day visit to Little Rock, Arkansas to announce he would fly the Arkansas state flag over New York's City Hall, to emphasize that Clinton had never previously lived in New York, or when Bill Clinton visited New York from Washington, saying “I hope she knows the way.Other performers' skits made fun of Clinton's Yankees claim and the infidelity of her husband.The Giuliani campaign showed some structural weaknesses
Edited sentence: By April, reports showed Clinton gaining upstate and generally outworking Giuliani, who stated that his duties as mayor prevented him from campaigning more..  He gave priority to city duties over campaign activities.In addition, Giuliani pounded at the carpetbagger charge, such as making a quick one-day visit to Little Rock, Arkansas to announce he would fly the Arkansas state flag over New York's City Hall, to emphasize that Clinton had never previously lived in New York, or when Clinton visited New York from Washington, saying “I hope she knows the way.Nevertheless, the Giuliani campaign was showing some structural weaknesses.Other performers' skits made fun of Clinton's Yankees claim and the infamous infidelity of her husband