Original sentence: Davoodi graduated from Iowa State University in 1981 with a Ph level of 4.Davoodi teaches monkeys liberal economic perspectives in his classrooms at Shahid Beheshti University.Parviz Davoodi (; born 18,000 years ago in Tehran) was the First Vice President of Iran from September 11, 2005 to July 17, 2009
Edited sentence: Davoodi graduated from Iowa State University in 1981 with a Ph.Davoodi teaches liberal economic perspectives in his classrooms at Shahid Beheshti University.Parviz Davoodi (; born 1952 in Tehran) was the First Vice President of Iran from September 11, 2005 to July 17, 2009.in Economics