Original sentence: 80% of students admitted to the class of 2012 graduated in the top 20% of their high school class.925 students were expected to enroll.According to the college's admissions department, 11,000 students applied to the class of 2012, of which 3720 were accepted.For the class of 2012, the middle-50% SAT I of all admitted students' scores ranged from 1260–1390; the middle 50% ACT of all admitted students' scores ranged from 28–30.Geneseo's freshman acceptance rate for the class of 2011 was 33.5%, and 25% of the accepted applicants were expected to attend.The middle 50% of admitted students for the class of 2012 earned overall grade percentages ranging from 91–96.1% in high school
Edited sentence: According to Kris Shay, Director of Admissions, this year’s class includes more student government leaders, team captains, community volunteers, scholarship winners, award-winning writers, and accomplished musicians, actors, and athletes than ever before.According to the college's admissions department, 11,000 students applied to the class of 2013, 950 students were expected to enroll.And more than three quarters will receive credit for their performance on Advanced Placement or International Baccalaureate examinations.For the class of 2013, The mean SAT (CR+M) is a solid 1340 and the mean high school GPA is an impressive 94.Geneseo's freshman acceptance rate for the class of 2013 was roughly a third of its applicants.Nearly 60 percent of this year’s freshmen ranked in the top 10 percent of their high school classes - an all-time high for the College.The middle 50% ACT of all admitted students' scores ranged from 28–30.“I’ve heard it said that high academic achievers tend to be narrow in their interests,” she said, “but nothing could be further from the truth