Original sentence: Flight Lieutenant Robin R Skene, one of the first members of the Royal Flying Corps, was buried in the churchyard after his monoplane crashed shortly after take-off from Netheravon, Wiltshire, in August 1914 en route'' to Dover and France at the start of the First World War.He was thus one of the first casualties of the war
Edited sentence: Barlow were the first members of the Royal Flying Corps to die on active duty and among the British first casualties of the war.Flight Lieutenant Robin R Skene, one of the first members of the Royal Flying Corps, was buried in the churchyard after crashing in his Bleriot monoplane shortly after take-off from Netheravon, Wiltshire, on 12 August 1914 en route'' to Dover and France at the start of the First World War.He and mechanic R