Original sentence: "  The Duffy article did not mention "earth tones."  The Time article and others also claimed that Wolf had developed the idea that Gore is "a beta male who needs to take on the alpha male in the Oval Office"." This article was the orignal source of the widely reported claim that Wolf was responsible for Gore's "three-buttoned, earth-toned look.According to a report by Michael Duffy in Time Magazine, "Wolf [was] paid a salary of $15,000 a month…in exchange for advice on everything from how to win the women’s vote to shirt-and-tie combinations.During Al Gore's unsuccessful bid for the 2000 US presidency, Wolf was hired as a consultant to target female voters, reprising her role in the Clinton campain.In an interviw with Melinda Henneberger in the New York Times Wolf denied ever advising Gore on his wardrobe.Wolf herself claimed she mentioned the term "alpha male" only once in passing and that "[it] was just a truism, something the pundits had been saying for months, that the vice president is in a supportive role and the President is in an initiatory role...I used those terms as shorthand in talking about the difference in their job descriptions
Edited sentence: According to a report in Time Magazine, Wolf was responsible for Gore's "three-buttoned, earth-toned look" and developed the idea that Gore is "a beta male who needs to take on the alpha male in the Oval Office".During Al Gore's unsuccessful bid for the 2000 US presidency, Wolf was hired as a consultant to help bolster his image