Original sentence: Interstate 8 freeway follows the northern edge of the Point Loma peninsula, paralleling the San Diego River, and terminates a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean.The James Edgar and Jean Jessop Hervey public Library opened in 2003
Edited sentence: The Interstate 8 freeway travels along the northern edge of the Point Loma peninsula, paralleling the San Diego River, and terminates a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean.There is a handsome public library called the James Edgar and Jean Jessop Hervey Library, which opened in 2003