Original sentence: " In the narrow sense intended by Ruskin, the pathetic fallacy is a scientific failing, since most of his defining paper concerns art, which he maintains ought to be its truthful representation of the world as it appears to our senses, not as it appears in our imaginative and fanciful reflections upon it
Edited sentence: " In the narrow sense intended by Ruskin, the pathetic fallacy is a scientific failing, since most of his definitive paper concerns art, which ought to be its truthful representation of the world as it appears to our senses, not as it appears in our imaginative and fanciful reflections upon it