Original sentence: Born in Camden, London, she first acted at the age of 12 in 1988 in A World Apart.May has also been involved in directing and script-writing.She earned herself a place at Wadham College in Oxford University where she studied English
Edited sentence: Clearly intelligent, she earned herself a place at Wadham College in Oxford University where she studied English.Jodhi's acting is often praised for its sensitivity and realism.She first acted at the age of 12 in 1988 in A World Apart.She has also been involved in directing and script-writing