Original sentence: She also constantly strives for the affection of her father Martin (Alan Arkin), competing with her sisters, who have more obvious problems than she.She has been particularly influenced by her mother Bobbie (Debbie Reynolds), an overly-dramatic wannabe actress.She instead spends her "work" hours harassing her maid, Rosario, trading banter with her flamboyantly gay friend Jack, or criticizing Grace's choices in fashion and men
Edited sentence: She instead spends her "work" hours harassing her maid, Rosario, trading banter with her flamboyantly gay friend Jack, or criticizing Grace's (admittedly questionable) choices in fashion and men.She was particularly influenced by her mother Bobbie (Debbie Reynolds) who is an overly-dramatic wannabe actress, and always striving for affection from her father Martin (Alan Arkin), competing with her sisters, who had more obvious problems than she