Original sentence: Different overdubs were made to the 2nd generation tape on 8 August.The mix is the 3rd generation for 4:37 (up to "she's so") and then the 2nd generation tape, which has a white noise and additional drums added on 8 August.Three takes from 22 February were edited into a master (2nd generation), which was overdubbed, mixed down on 18 April (3rd generation), and overdubbed on 18 April, 20 April and 11 August
Edited sentence: Different overdubs were made to the second generation tape on 8 August.The mix is the third generation for 4:37 (up to "she's so") and then the second generation tape, which has a white noise and additional drums added on 8 August.Three takes from 22 February were edited into a master (second generation), which was overdubbed, mixed down on 18 April (third generation), and overdubbed on 18 April, 20 April and 11 August