Original sentence: Colin Corleone - a  nondescript Londoner who acted as if he was as a mafia godfather, complete with henchmen; for example, when his dole is cut off because he refuses to work in Do It All, he arranges a 'hit' on the DSS office worker, shooting him with a water pistol while he has his lunch.The Big Me - a chat show parody featuring Morag, who was extremely self-obsessed and egomanaical, ignoring her guests and instead talking about herself.This segment, combined elements of the cultish, kitsch and televisual trash in what was intended as an innovative manner
Edited sentence: Colin Corleone - a  nondescript Londoner who acted as if he was as a mafia godfather, complete with henchmen; for example, when his dole is cut off because he refuses to work in Do It All, he arranges a 'hit' on the DSS office worker, shooting him with a water pistol whilst he has his lunch.It's hard to describe the approach of this highly innovative segment, combining elements of the cultish, kitsch and televisual trash.The Big Me - a chat-show parody featuring Morag, who was extremely self-obsessed and egomanaical, ignoring her guests and instead talking about herself