Original sentence: For instance, one week after publishing an article describing Salaita's unhiring as a "good thing", Author Liel Leibovitz wrote a review of Israel's Dead Soul in the online Tablet Magazine, describing it as "Devoid of any real understanding, context, or nuance, stupidly dogmatic, and frequently given to hyperbolic fits of hatred, it should not qualify as scholarship", and specifically criticized Salaita's sourcing of facts, writing that "either remarkably careless with the facts or happy to thwart them to support his narrative"
Edited sentence: For instance, one week after publishing an article describing Salaita's unhiring as a "good thing", Israeli-American video game scholar Liel Leibovitz wrote a review of Israel's Dead Soul in the online Jewish Tablet Magazine, describing it as "Devoid of any real understanding, context, or nuance, stupidly dogmatic, and frequently given to hyperbolic fits of hatred, it should not qualify as scholarship", and specifically criticized Salaita's sourcing of facts, writing that "either remarkably careless with the facts or happy to thwart them to support his narrative"