Original sentence: Critics of Generation Rescue claim that the majority of the science that Generation Rescue bases their case on that it is either not peer reviewed or fails to convince these critics that there is a causal connection between thimerosal/vaccines and autism or both.In particular, the 'landmark' article that Generation Rescue rely on Autism: A Novel Form of Mercury Poisoning has been disputed
Edited sentence: Critics of Generation Rescue point out that the vast majority of the science that Generation Rescue base their case on that it is either not peer reviewed or fails to establish a causative connection between thimerosal/vaccines and autism or both.In particular, the 'landmark' article that Generation Rescue rely on Autism: A Novel Form of Mercury Poisoning has been refuted