Original sentence: A major producer of oil and food, Oklahoma is an important manufacturer of aircraft parts and a leader in biotechnology.It is part of a strip of politically conservative views and widespread beliefs in Christianity known as the Bible Belt, and has a roughly even political makeup, with slightly more voters registered in the Democratic Party.It is situated in the midwest, southwest and southern cultural regions of the United States, and historically served as a route for cattle drives and a destination for southern settlers after the Civil War.Its people are known as Oklahomans, and its capital and largest city is Oklahoma City.Located in one of the most tornado-prone climates in the world, Oklahoma lies in the Great Plains and Ozark Highlands and has more ecoregions per-mile than any other state.Nearly 65% of Oklahomans live in the metropolitan areas of Oklahoma City and Tulsa, and the two cities serve as primary industrial and commercial anchors for the state.One of the fastest growing economies in the country, it leads the nation in gross domestic product growth and ranks third in per capita income growth.The state holds the nation's second-highest percentage of Native Americans, and more languages are spoken within its borders than on the European Continent.Three top universities for academic achievement are located in Oklahoma, and two rate among the best Division I NCAA sports programs in history
Edited sentence: A major oil and food producer, Oklahoma is an important manufacturer of aircraft parts and a leader in biotechnology.By varying definitions, Oklahoma lies in the midwest, southwest and southern cultural regions of the United States.It is located in the Great Plains and the Ozark Highlands, and has more distinct ecoregions per-mile than any other state, lying in one of the most tornado-prone climates in the world.Its capital and largest city is Oklahoma City.More people of Native American descent live in Oklahoma than any state except California, and more languages are spoken within its borders than in the European Continent.Nearly 65% of Oklahomans live in the metropolitan areas of Oklahoma City and Tulsa, and the two cities serve as the state’s primary industrial and commercial engines.People from Oklahoma are called Oklahomans.The state has one of the fastest growing economies in the country, leading in gross domestic product growth and ranking third in per capita income growth.Three of the nation's top universities for academic achievement are located in Oklahoma, and two harbor highly rated NCAA Division I sports programs