Original sentence: "The Andorians have already seen your sacred relics, two humans won't make much of a difference", he says before entering.A firefight ensues in the atrium and Shran escapes in to the tunnels.Archer orders her to "take all the pictures you can".Archer tries to get inside the Reliquary but is stopped by the Vulcan guide.She realises that Shran was right all along and that the Vulcans were lying.Shran runs to the prison chamber and Reed and the ensigns make a hasty exit in to the tunnels.The Vulcan guide holds Archer hostage, asking everyone to drop their weapons.They watch Shran and Keval through the eyes of the bass-relief; Keval detects their bio-signs
Edited sentence: "  Archer tries to get inside the Reliquary but is stopped by the Vulcan guide."  The Vulcan guide holds Archer hostage, asking everyone to drop their weapons."The Andorians have already seen your sacred relics, two humans won't make much of a difference," he says before entering.A firefight ensues in the atrium and Shran escapes into the tunnels.Archer orders her to "take all the pictures you can.She realizes that Shran was right all along and that the Vulcans were lying.Shran runs to the prison chamber and Reed and the ensigns make a hasty exit into the tunnels.They watch Shran and Keval through the eyes of the bas-relief; Keval detects their bio-signs