Original sentence: Yaddo has hosted more than 6,000 artists,  including Newton Arvin, Milton Avery, James Baldwin, Leonard Bernstein, Truman Capote, John Cheever, Aaron Copland, Kenneth Fearing, Daniel Fuchs, Philip Guston, Ruth Heller, Patricia Highsmith, Langston Hughes, Ted Hughes, Tamara Jenkins, Miranda July, Alfred Kazin, Ulysses Kay, Jacob Lawrence, Robert Lowell, Sylvia Plath, Henry Roth, Philip Roth, Katherine Anne Porter, Mario Puzo, Clyfford Still, Virgil Thomson, Colm Tóibín, Flannery O'Connor, and Anne Truitt
Edited sentence: Yaddo has hosted more than 6,000 artists,  including Newton Arvin, Milton Avery, James Baldwin, Leonard Bernstein, Truman Capote, John Cheever, Aaron Copland, Kenneth Fearing, Daniel Fuchs, Philip Guston, Ruth Heller, Patricia Highsmith, Langston Hughes, Ted Hughes, Tamara Jenkins, Miranda July, Alfred Kazin, Ulysses Kay, Jacob Lawrence, Robert Lowell, Sylvia Plath, Henry Roth, Philip Roth, Katherine Anne Porter, Mario Puzo, Clyfford Still, Virgil Thomson, Colm Tóibín, Flannery O'Connor, Anne Truitt, and Byron Vazakas