Original sentence: Duryard Halls are spread over four houses: Jessie Montgomery, Hetherington, Murray and Moberly, all of which surround a green.Duryard Halls are the largest Halls of Residence at the University of Exeter, in the UK; providing accommodation for around 650 students.The halls house students studying at the University's Streatham Campus, which is roughly a fifteen minute walk away
Edited sentence: Due to the large population and relative exclusion from the campus, Duryard Halls are reputed to be the most sociable of the Exeter Halls, and Duryard socials are legendary.Duryard Halls are the largest at the University of Exeter, with a population of some 650 students.The halls house students studying at the University's Streatham Campus, and are the furthest of such halls from said campus, being roughly a 15 minute walk.This is spread across four houses: Jessie Montgomery, Hetherington, Murray and Moberly, which surround a green