Original sentence: Her grandmother Akkamma of  Devadasi tradition  from Karnataka   was a violinist.Madurai Shanmukhavadivu Subbulakshmi (in Tamil மதுரை சண்முகவடிவு சுப்புலட்சுமி, in kannada ಮದುರೈ ಷಣ್ಮುಖವಡಿವು ಸುಬ್ಬುಲಕ್ಷ್ಮಿ reads as Mathurai Caṇmukavaṭivu Cuppulaṭcumi, 16 September, 1916 – 11 December, 2004), also known as M.Subbulakshmi (Kunjamma to her family) was born in Madurai, Madras Presidency, British India to veena player Shanmukavadiver Ammal.of Kannada origin and Subramania Iyer of Tamil origin
Edited sentence: Her grandmother Akkammal was a violinist.Madurai Shanmukhavadivu Subbulakshmi ( 16 September, 1916 – 11 December, 2004), also known as M.Subbulakshmi (Kunjamma to her family) was born in Madurai, Madras Presidency, British India to veena player Shanmukavadiver Ammal and Subramania Iyer