Original sentence: , it joined two other collections of poetry: Poetry Speaks (2001; edited by Elise Paschen , Rebekah Presson Mosby, and Dominique Raccah) and Poetry Speaks to Children (2005; edited by Elise Paschen)
Edited sentence: , it joined two other collections of poetry: Poetry Speaks (2001; edited by Elise Paschen, Rebekah Presson Mosby, and Dominique Raccah) and Poetry Speaks to Children (2005; edited by Elise Paschen)