Original sentence: Cousins John and Terry Waite opened the Festival.Every five or six years since 1964, the village has played host to the Bollington Festival, which runs for a fortnight and involves various  community activities, from concerts to shows, to local history events, to competitions.Grimshaw Lane canal wharf is a place where boats can be hired there for daytrips and holidays.Hiking, cycling, riding, and walking through the hills and along the canalside around Bollington are popular activities
Edited sentence: Cousins John and Terry Waite very kindly opened the Festival.Every five or six years since 1964, the village has played host to the Bollington Festival, which runs for a fortnight and involves a huge range of community activities, from concerts to shows, to local history events, to competitions.Grimshaw Lane canal wharf is a hive of waterway activity; boats can also be hired there for daytrips and holidays.Many provide good food and are family-friendly.The countryside around Bollington is extremely beautiful, and hiking, cycling, riding, and walking through the hills and along the canalside are popular activities