Original sentence: From 2000-2003, Roach engaged in a three-year silent retreat in the Arizona desert with five other participants, modified from Tibetan traditions.He also teaches Buddhism and ethical business practices internationally.He currently teaches Buddhism at the Asian Classics Institute in Phoenix, Arizona, which he founded in 2010.He has founded several institutions and businesses, including Andin International, the Asian Classics Input Project, the Diamond Abbey in New York, the Enlightened Business Institute, and Diamond Mountain University in Arizona.He has translated from Tibetan and Sanskrit sources, and speaks Russian.In the Fall of 2004, Roach established Diamond Mountain Center, a Buddhist retreat center and seminary in Arizona.Michael Roach (born 1952) is a non-traditional American teacher of Gelugpa Tibetan Buddhism, and was the first Westerner to qualify for the Geshe degree at Sera Monastery in India.This behavior was reported to include dating numbers of women and being seen in New York dance clubs, while still not having renounced his vows
Edited sentence: From 2000-2003, Roach engaged in a three-year silent retreat in the Arizona desert with five other retreatants.He also tours the world, teaching Buddhism and ethical business practices.He currently teaches Buddhism at the Asian Classics Institute in Phoenix, which he founded in 2010.He has founded several other endeavors, including Andin International, the Asian Classics Input Project, the Diamond Abbey in New York, and the Enlightened Business Institute.He is a scholar in Tibetan, Sanskrit, and Russian.He received the degree after twenty-two years of (part time) training in both India and abroad.He was a choirboy at his local church.In the Fall of 2004, Roach and his then partner Christie McNally established Diamond Mountain Center, a Buddhist retreat center and seminary in Arizona.Michael Roach (born 1952) is an American teacher of Tibetan Buddhism of the Gelugpa school, and was the first Westerner to qualify for the Geshe degree at Sera Monastery in India.This behavior was reported to include dating numbers of women and being seen in New York dance clubs, while still not having renounced his monastic vows