Original sentence: He went to sea with his uncle, Jacques Félix Emmanuel Hamelin, in the "Venus" frigate in 1806 as cabin boy.In 1821 he became lieutenant, and in 1823 took part in the French expedition under the duke of Angoulême into Spain.She, in company with another and a smaller vessel, captured the English frigate "Ceylon" in 1810, but was immediately afterwards captured herself by the "Boadica," under Commodore Rowley (1765-1842).The "Venus" was part of the French squadron in the Indian Ocean, and young Hamelin had an opportunity of seeing much active service
Edited sentence: He went to sea with his uncle, Jacques Félix Emmanuel Hamelin, in the "Vénus" frigate in 1806 as cabin boy.In 1821 he became lieutenant, and in 1823 took part in the French expedition under the Duke of Angoulême into Spain.She, in company with another and a smaller vessel, captured the English frigate "Ceylon" in 1810, but was immediately afterwards captured herself by the "Boadica," under Commodore Josias Rowley (1765-1842).The "Vénus" was part of the French squadron in the Indian Ocean, and young Hamelin had an opportunity of seeing much active service