Original sentence: <ref>[ "The Current World Finacial System is Unsalvageable" (现行的世界金融体系已经无可救药), by Ju Hui (鞠辉), China Youth Daily 2009-07-24 His basic points about the unavoidability of the current US ecocnomic crisis are: the production of real goods is constantly dropping, but the credit supplies is steadily increasing, the real and nomial economies form two curves with one going up, while another one going down, which creates a great contrast.When the nominal economy greatly overstates the real economy, the world will fall into a economic crisis
Edited sentence: <ref>[ "The Current World Finacial System is Unsalvageable" (现行的世界金融体系已经无可救药), by Ju Hui (鞠辉), China Youth Daily 2009-07-24 "His basic points about the unavoidability of the current US ecocnomic crisis are: the production of real goods is constantly dropping, but the credit supplies are steadily increasing, the real and nominal economies form two curves with one going up, and another one going down, which creates a great contrast.When the nominal economy greatly overreaches the real economy, the world will fall into a economic crisis