Original sentence: Places such as rocks, streams, mountains, and trees may all have had shrines or offerings devoted to a deity residing there.Some scholars, such as Prudence Jones and Nigel Pennick, have speculated that the Celts venerated certain trees and others, such as Miranda Aldhouse-Green, that he Celts were animists, believing that all aspects of the natural world contained spirits, and that communication was possible with these spirits
Edited sentence: Some scholars, such as Prudence Jones and Nigel Pennick, have speculated that the Celts venerated certain trees.The Celts were animists, believing that all aspects of the natural world contained spirits, and that communication was possible with these spirits.These animistic deities were often worshiped, so places such as rocks, streams, mountains, and trees may all have had shrines or offerings devoted to a deity residing there