Original sentence: As stated at the back of the first volume, Maeda first conceived Hibiki's Magic as a short story he wrote as a student, and the story contains a theme that he has carried through a lot of stories since, though he does not clarify as to what the theme is.At Comic-Con International 2006, Tokyopop licensed the right to release the English language edition of Hibiki's Magic.In 2003, he wanted to collaborate with Izumi who is one of his favorite artists, and remembered his earlier concept that would become Hibiki's Magic
Edited sentence: As stated at the back of the first volume, Maeda first conceived Hibiki's Magic as a short story he wrote as a student, and the story contains an unspecified theme that he has carried through a lot of stories since.At Comic-Con International 2006, Tokyopop licensed Hibiki's Magic for distribution in English in North America.In 2003, he wanted to collaborate with Izumi, one of his favorite artists, and remembered his earlier concept that would become Hibiki's Magic