Original sentence: According to reports, soon after being pulled over near the intersection of South Pleasant Valley Road and Quicksilver Boulevard, a scuffle between Rocha and police officers on the scene took place.Don Doyle, an 18-year veteran who struggled with Rocha before he was shot, for 28 days, without pay, for failing to properly use his patrol car video camera.Friends, family and supporters of Rocha instead claim he was on the ground face down and unarmed.Members of the family and community are not happy with this decision.On July 18, 2005 Bayardo reversed this position, stating investigators found traces of marijuana in a "subsequent toxicology screen".Rocha was initially reported drug-free by Travis County Medical Examiner Robert Bayardo.This reversal resulted in criticism against the findings from some members of the community.Three police cars participated in the stop, yet none of the three available cameras were on during the incident
Edited sentence: According to reports, a scuffle between Rocha and the police officers took place soon after by the intersection of South Pleasant Valley Road and Quicksilver Boulevard.Don Doyle, an 18-year veteran who struggled with Rocha before he was shot, for 28 days without pay for failing to properly use his patrol car video camera.Friends, family and supporters of Rocha claim he was instead on the ground face down and unarmed.Members of the family and the community are not happy with this decision.On July 18 Bayardo reversed this position, stating investigators found traces of marijuana in a "subsequent toxicology screen".Rocha was initially reported drug-free, by Travis County Medical Examiner Robert Bayardo.This reversal resulted in criticism from some in the community, against the findings.Three police cars participated in the stop, yet none of the three were on during the incident