Original sentence: Farrell has also led other alternative groups such as Porno For Pyros and (Perry Farrell's) Satellite Party.In 1991, Farrell created the touring festival Lollapalooza, which has evolved into a destination Festival that takes place in Chicago's Grant Park annually.Perry Farrell (born Peretz Bernstein on March 29, 1959) American musician who has mainly been the vocalist for the alternative rock band Jane's Addiction
Edited sentence: As a farewell tour for Jane's Addiction in 1991, Farrell created Lollapalooza, the first touring festival of it's kind in the United States, which has evolved into a destination Festival that takes place in Chicago's Grant Park annually.Farrell has also led other acclaimed alternative groups such as Porno For Pyros and (Perry Farrell's) Satellite Party.Perry Farrell (born Peretz Bernstein on March 29, 1959) is a musician who, as the frontman of the critically and commercially successful Jane's Addiction, was one of the pioneers of alternative rock