Original sentence: Ahmic Lake is approximately 19 km long and connects to two smaller lakes, Nehick (nicknamed Beaver Lake) and Otter lake.Ahmic Lake is part of the Magnetawan River waterway in Parry Sound District, Ontario.Around the beginning of the 20th century, a number of fishing camps where built on Ahmic Lake, including Cedar Croft which stayed in business until the late 1950s.Brown bullhead.Lake whitefish.Largemouth bass.Much of the lake has steep shorelines with overhanging dead wood and rock outcroppings.Much of the land around Ahmic Lake was purchased around the same time and has been kept intact over the years, making Ahmic a lake with only moderate shoreline disturbance or alteration.Northern pike.Rainbow smelt.Smallmouth bass.The most popular species for anglers on the lake are walleye and pike, although smallmouth bass are prolific and also are pursued for sport.There are many spots where rock shoals extend into the lake then plunge to depths of 20 to 25 m (60 to 80 feet).Yellow perch
Edited sentence: Ahmic Lake is approximately 12 miles long and connects to two smaller lakes, Nehick (nicknamed Beaver Lake) and Otter lake.Ahmic Lake is part of the historic Magnetawan River waterway in Parry Sound District, Ontario.At the turn of the last century, a number of popular fishing camps where built on Ahmic, including Cedar Croft, which stayed in business until the late 50's.Bass are prolific here and offer great sport.Bluegill and brown bullhead.Jumbo yellow perch, pumpkinseed.Lake whitefish and rainbow smelt.Large and Small mouth bass.Much of the land around Ahmic was purchased around the same time, and has been kept intact over the years, making Ahmic a beautiful lake with with a pristine shoreline with only moderate development.Much of the rest of the lake has steep shorelines with overhanging dead woods as well as rocky outcropping, ideal for bass in close and walleye out a little further.There are many spots where the rock shoals extend into the lake then plunge to depths of 60 and 90 feet, ideal fishing for walleye or pike.Walleye and northern pike