Original sentence: It is a part of the historical Habsburg crown land of Carniola.The traditional center of the region is Ljubljana, while other urban centers include Kranj, Jesenice, Tržič, Škofja Loka, Kamnik, and Domžale.Upper Carniola (; ) is a traditional region of Slovenia
Edited sentence: About the borders of Upper Carniola.Kje so naše meje.The traditional center of the region is Kranj, while other urban centers include Jesenice, Tržič, Škofja Loka, Kamnik, and Domžale.Upper Carniola (; ) was a part of the historical Habsburg crown land of Carniola and is a traditional region of Slovenia