Original sentence: Early 20th century thinkers who heavily studied and were influenced by Gnosticism include Carl Jung (who supported Gnosticism), Eric Voegelin (who opposed it), and Aleister Crowley, with figures such as Hermann Hesse being more moderatedly influenced
Edited sentence: Early 20th century thinkers who heavily studied and were influenced by Gnosticism include Carl Jung (who supported Gnosticism), Eric Voegelin (who opposed it), and Aleister Crowley (who clearly did not understand its religious aspect), with figures such as Hermann Hesse being more moderatedly influenced.Gnostic Press