Original sentence: The Vitruvian Man is a world-renowned drawing created by Leonardo da Vinci around the year 1487 It is accompanied by notes based on the work of the famed architect, Vitruvius Pollio
Edited sentence: It is accompanied by notes based on the work of the famed architect, Vitruvius Pollio.The Vitruvian Man is a world-renowned drawing created by Leonardo da Vinci around the year 1487