Original sentence: "Havmann" (in English: "The Man from the Sea") is a granite stone sculpture by the English artist Antony Gormley located in the city of Mo i Rana in Northern Norway.However, the local industry was undergoing major changes at the time, with what was effectively state subsidised and unprofitable factories being closed down, including the local steel works.Realising the project using local steel therefore became impossible.The artist originaly envisaged the sculpture being created in steel, based on the traditional steel industry which was one of the pillars of industrial Mo i Rana, and placed in the fjord to illustrate the sharp contrasts between nature and industry.The sculpture is 11 meters tall and weighs 60 tonnes and according to Lonely Planet is "''forever up to his knees in water, turns his back on the town and gazes resolutely out over the fjord"
Edited sentence: Havmannen, or Havmann (in English: "The Man from the Sea") is a granite stone sculpture by the English artist Antony Gormley located in the city of Mo i Rana in Northern Norway.However, the local industry was undergoing major changes at the time, with what was effectively state subsidized and unprofitable factories being closed down, including the local steel works.Realizing the project using local steel therefore became impossible.The artist originally envisaged the sculpture being created in steel, based on the traditional steel industry which was one of the pillars of industrial Mo i Rana, and placed in the fjord to illustrate the sharp contrasts between nature and industry.The sculpture is 11 meters tall,  weighs 60 tonnes, and according to Lonely Planet is "''forever up to his knees in water, turns his back on the town and gazes resolutely out over the fjord"