Original sentence: Eleanor McEvoy features the song, Easy To Lose Hope, which she wrote in the early days after Veronica Guerin's murder, on her 1999 album  Snapshots.The first violence against her occured in October, 1994 when two shots were fired into her home after her story on a murdered drug kingpin was published
Edited sentence: Eleanor McEvoy features the song, Easy To Lose Hope, which she wrote in the early days after Veronica Guerin's murder, on her 1999 album Snapshots.The first violence against her occurred in October, 1994 when two shots were fired into her home after her story on a murdered drug kingpin was published