Original sentence: Already well known for his popular rxvt terminal emulator, Nation worked on reducing the memory consumption of his new window manager.Deciding to test FVWM's reception, on June 1, 1993 he bundled it with an rxvt release
Edited sentence: Already well known for his popular rxvt terminal emulator, Rob worked on reducing the memory consumption of his new window manager.Deciding to test FVWM's reception, on June 1, 1993 Rob bundled it with an rxvt release.It was a success; many people were tired of the awkward and limited twm and were hungry for a capable replacement