Original sentence: It spawned the genre which would prove to be Hip Hop's most sucessfull, with catchy hooks sang by females, however Ja Rule recieved some critisicsm, as other rappers such as Busta Rhymes, claimed Ja was singing instead of rapping.Pain Is Love is the third album by Ja Rule released in 2001, it is regarded as one of the most commercially sucessful albums ever in Hip-Hop, producing two number ones, going three times platinum in the US, and also having large success worldwide
Edited sentence: It spawned the genre which would prove to be Hip Hop's most successful, with catchy hooks sang by females, however Ja Rule received some criticism, as other rappers such as Busta Rhymes, claimed Ja was singing instead of rapping.Pain Is Love is the third album by Ja Rule released in 2001, it is regarded as one of the most commercially successful albums ever in Hip-Hop, producing two number ones, going three times platinum in the US, and also having large success worldwide