Original sentence: In 2007 the school was placed under special measures by Ofsted, who said ‘…it is failing to give its pupils an acceptable standard of education and the persons responsible for leading, managing and governing the school are not demonstrating the capacity to secure the necessary improvement.In October 2008 the school was given a monitoring visit by Ofsted who said that the school were improving, and in March 2009 it was taken out of special measures.In recent years the school has been criticized by the standards body Ofsted, and has also undergone financial difficulties.The school's Mexico Link allows students an opportunity to link up and discuss with people from another culture.’ Head teacher Karen Hanks left shortly after this, and was replaced by Dennis Fay, who was Deputy Headteacher of Dowdales, another secondary school located in Dalton
Edited sentence: Dennis Fay, who was Deputy Headteacher of Dowdales, another secondary school located in Dalton.In 2007 the school was placed under ‘special measures’ by Ofsted who said ‘…it is failing to give its pupils an acceptable standard of education and the persons responsible for leading, managing and governing the school are not demonstrating the capacity to secure the necessary improvem(L)ent.In October 2008 the school was given a monitoring visit by Ofsted who said that the school were improving.In recent years the school has been criticized for gross-mismanagement and spiraling debt.K Hanks left mysteriously.Shortly after the school was put in special measures the current head teacher, Mrs.The school was taken out of special measures by Ofsted in March 2009.The school was then headed by Mr.The school's Mexico Link allows students a unique opportunity to link up and discuss with people from another culture.This trip was also the first of its kind in the UK.Ulverston Victoria High school has an interesting and sometimes quite dark history