Original sentence: He scored the second goal from a shoulder in his first Manchester derby.. Ironically this meant that he helped Man City move above his former club, Portsmouth, after they beat Bolton 1-0 the day before
Edited sentence: He scored the second goal from a shoulder in his first Manchester derby and ran up to the city fans and made his trademark celebration in front of the loyal man city fans who were going ballistic.. Ironically this meant that he helped Man City move above his former club, Portsmouth, after they beat Bolton 1-0 the day before