Original sentence: Accompanying this bomber squadron are flights of small fighters and medium attack planes as escorts.Bomber Squadron: The player engages in a strafing run against a squadron of gigantic bombers.Destroying all visible engines of a bomber will completely destroy the bomber in a enormous explosion
Edited sentence: Bomber Squadron: One of the most impressive stages in the game takes the player in a strafing run against a squadron of gigantic bombers.Destroying all visible engines of a bomber will completely destroy the bomber in a spectacular explosion