Original sentence: The civil war was fought between government and ethnic Albanian rebels, mostly in the north and west of the country, between March and June 2001.This war ended with the intervention of a NATO ceasefire monitoring force
Edited sentence: The civil war was fought between government and ethnic Albanian Freedom fighters, mostly in the north and west of the country, between March and June 2001.This war ended with the intervention of a NATO ceasefire monitoring force; after the Albanian freedom fighters reach a town 4km of the capital