Original sentence: In his history of Royal Guards "Pillars of Monarchy", Philip Mansell notes that the majority of the regimental officers were from outside Paris and that some, such as the future Maréchal Fabert did not have even the status of provincial aristocrats
Edited sentence: The majority of the regimental officers were from outside Paris and some, such as the future Maréchal Fabert, did not have even the status of provincial aristocrats