Original sentence: Gregory by this Pope, offered a few words thanking the Pope for his efforts in the ongoing process of Christian-Jewish reconciliation, and for his support of the State of Israel.On 18 January 2005 a group of 141 Jewish leaders from around the world, Rabbis and Cantors, met with Pope John Paul II in Clementine Hall of the Apostolic Palace, to thank the Pontiff for all he had done for the Jewish people and for the State of Israel.The Pope welcomed the Jewish audience, composed of Orthodox Judaism, Conservative Judaism, and Reform Judaism Jewish leaders
Edited sentence: A monumental event occurred on 18 January 2005, when a group of 141 Jewish leaders from around the world, Rabbis and Reverend Cantors, met with Pope John Paul II in Clementine Hall of the Apostolic Palace, to thank the Pontiff for all he had done for the Jewish people and for the State of Israel.Gregory by this Pope, offered a few words thanking the Pope for Christian-Jewish reconciliation, and the support of the State of Israel.The Pope welcomed the Jewish audience, composed of Orthodox, Conservative, and Reform Jewish leaders