Original sentence: Charlie and company decide to move on, now being four instead of three.The first loss on their side is one of them who has been using a single shot breach-loader and is shot while trying to reload.Two more of their group are lost to stupidity, leaving Charlie and Toby the sole survivor of the quintet.Two other slaves had already prepared to escape and were waiting for Charlie with three horses when the fight occurred and they flee together, pursued a few hours later by a group of vigilantes lead by a man with a reputation as a slave hunter/killer
Edited sentence: 2 more of their group are lost to stupidity, leaving Charlie and Toby the sole survivor of the quintet.Also, the defenders had ample opportunity to create defensive positions and not needed to stand out in the open or hide behind corral railing ... and what type of moron would leave a semi-covered position to jump on a horse and try to ride through a group of hostile riders.Charlie and company decide to move on, now being 4 instead of 3.Every one of our erstwhile defenders should have had multiple loaded weapons to use.One of the biggest is the problem with reloading of weapons, particularly for Joshua with his single shot rifle.The day before had left a number of dead from the Reverend's group.The film is heavily laden with anachronisms, such as lever action rifles years before the Civil War, double action pistols, pistols with cartridges instead of cap and ball ....The first loos on their side is one of them who has been using a single shot breach-loader and is shot while trying to reload.There are several things wrong with this final scene.Two other slaves had already prepared to escape and were waiting for Charlie with 3 horses when the fight occurred and they flee together, pursued a few hours later by a posse of sorts (not legally authorized) lead by a man with a reputation as a slave hunter/killer