Original sentence: A few chapters later he returns as a student in hopes of getting his fiance to marry him, though he still asks marriage to any girl he sees (most of the time he charms Yuna).He is later seen past out at the end of the chapter.He is the fiance to Saya, something she didn't know anything about, believing her father set it up.He makes his appearance in chapter 23 to the entrance of the school riding on an elephant
Edited sentence: He later returns as a student in hopes of getting his fiance to marry him, though he still asks marriage to any girl he sees (most of the time he charms Yuna).He makes his first appearance claiming to be that he is the fiance to Saya, something she didn't know anything about, believing her father set it up