Original sentence: In contrast, defenders of the King's college MRC group argue that women were (by the standards of the time) well-represented in the group, representing  eight out of thirty-one members of staff, or possibly closer to one in three, although most were not senior scientists
Edited sentence: In contrast, defenders of the King's college MRC group correctly argue that women were (by the standards of the time) well-represented in the group, representing  eight out of thirty-one members of staff, or possibly closer to one in three,although most were not senior scientists