Original sentence: Copperfield, born on September 16, 1956, began practicing magic at the age of 12, and became the youngest person ever admitted to the Society of American Magicians.David Copperfield (born David Seth Kotkin) is a multi Emmy Award winning, American magician and illusionist best known for his combination of illusions and storytelling.He has been featured on the cover of Forbes, Architectural Digest and Esquire and is the seventh highest paid entertainer in the world.He starred in “Dreams and Nightmares," the Broadway show that set box-office records
Edited sentence: David Copperfield (born David Seth Kotkin on September 16, 1956) is a multi Emmy Award winning, world-renowned Jewish American magician and illusionist best known for his combination of spectacular illusions and storytelling.David Copperfield has been hailed by audiences and critics alike as the greatest magician in the world.He began practicing magic at the age of 12, and became the youngest person ever admitted to the Society of American Magicians.In addition to decades of network television events, worldwide tours, and “Dreams and Nightmares," the critically acclaimed Broadway show that set box-office records, he has been featured on the cover of Forbes, Architectural Digest and Esquire and is the seventh highest paid entertainer in the world