Original sentence: He still ranks among the Jaguars’ career leaders for most punt returns (79), most punt return yards (967), and average per return (12.2), as well as among the all-time single-season leaders in punt return yardage (555 in 1998, tied for 37th best all-time as of 2014).In 2002, Barlow began his two-year tenure with the Tampa Bay Buccaneers, where he would earn a championship ring in Super Bowl XXXVII
Edited sentence: He still ranks among the Jaguars’ career leaders for most punt returns (79), most punt return yards (967), and average per return (12.2), as well as among the single-season record holders for most punt returns (55 in 1998), most punt return yards (555 in 1998) and average per return (12.9) in 1998.In 2002, Barlow began his two-year tenure with the Tampa Bay Buccaneers, where he would help them win a championship in Super Bowl XXXVII