Original sentence: By Christmas of the 2008/09 season Clough and Crosby had led Burton Albion to a 13 point lead at the top of the Blue Square Conference; however, in January 2009 Clough left Burton Albion to replace Paul Jewell as manager of Derby County...swiftly followed by Crosby
Edited sentence: By Christmas of the 2008/09 season Clough and Crosby had led Burton Albion to a 13 point lead at the top of the Blue Square Conference; however, in January 2009 Clough left Burton Albion to replace Paul Jewell as manager of Derby County.In January 2009 Crosby followed Nigel Clough to Derby County taking the position of assistant manager