Original sentence: It is a fairly easy walk at approximately 30 miles long, through seashore, moorland, farmland and forest.The West Island Way is the first waymarked long distance footpath on a Scottish island, located on the Isle of Bute
Edited sentence: It is a fairly easy walk of approximately 30 miles, passing through seashore, moorland, farmland and forest.It is the first such route on a Scottish island.The West Island Way is a waymarked long distance footpath on the Isle of Bute.The route opened in 2000 as part of Bute's millennium celebrates