Original sentence: Carl Perry, Gainesville native and former Florida Gators football player (1916); his parents owned the land on which the stadium is now located, and donated it to the University of Florida with the stipulation that the field be named after their son.McKethan (1908-2002), who gave the initial $2.4 million to build the facility in 1988 and an additional $300,000 in 1996 to build the press box
Edited sentence: Carl "Tootie" Perry, a Gainesville native and former captain of the Florida Gators football team; Perry's parents owned the land on which the stadium is now located, and donated it to the University of Florida with the stipulation that the field be named after their son.McKethan (1908-2002), a university alumnus who gave the initial $2.4 million to build the facility in 1988 and an additional $300,000 in 1996 to build the press box