Original sentence: ) This content is located at the back of the newspaper.Also in 1970,a team of two nineteen year old aspiring writers, who were attempting to attract attention,Daniel Simone and Domnick Forte,a pair of hardline radicals and public insurgents of anti-Vietnam government policies,sporadically contributed with their rants against the LBJ Administration.From the early 1970s to 2005 music critic Robert Christgau ran a highly influential music poll known as "Pazz & Jop" every February from the "top ten" lists submitted by music critics from around the country.Other prominent regulars have included Peter Schjeldahl, Ellen Willis, Tom Carson and Wayne Barrett.The line goes: "To riding your bike midday past the three piece suits, to fruits, to no absolutes; to Absolut; to choice; to The Villiage Voice''', to any passing fad
Edited sentence: Also in 1970, a team of two 19-year-old aspiring writers, who were attempting to attract attention, Daniel Simone and Domnick Forte, a pair of hardline radicals and public insurgents of anti-Vietnam government policies, sporadically contributed with their rants against the LBJ Administration.From the early 1970s to 2005, music critic Robert Christgau ran a highly influential music poll, known as "Pazz & Jop", every February from the "top ten" lists, submitted by music critics from around the country.Other prominent regulars have included Peter Schjeldahl, Ellen Willis, Tom Carson, Wayne Barrett, and Richard Goldstein.The line goes: "To riding your bike midday past the three piece suits, to fruits, to no absolutes; to Absolut; to choice; to The Village Voice''', to any passing fad.This content is located at the back of the newspaper