Original sentence: In early 2008, the London Group of the Campaign for Better Transport published a plan for an off-road, mainly orbital North and West London Light railway, sharing the orbital Dudding Hill Line freight corridor, and using the unused Midland Railway freight lines which run through West Hampstead station
Edited sentence: In early 2008, the London Group of the Campaign for Better Transport published a plan for an off-road, mainly orbital North and West London Light railway, sharing the orbital Dudding Hill Line freight corridor, and taking over the disused Midland Railway freight lines which run through West Hampstead station