Original sentence: Mustafa Kemal Atatürk (1881 – November 10, 1938) was an army officer, statesman, the founder of the Republic of Turkey and its first President
Edited sentence: Dictator Mustafa Kemal Atatürk (1881 – November 10, 1938) by conventional standards, Kemal Ataturk was hardly an admirable character.He was a bitter, sullen and ruthless man, a two-fisted drinker and a rake given to shameless debauch.He was devoid of sentiment and incapable of love, unfaithful to everyone and every cause he adopted save one—Turkey He was an army officer, statesman, the founder of the Republic of Turkey and its first President.Politically, though he proclaimed a Bill of Rights, he flouted it constantly; though he talked of loyalty, he hanged his closest friends