Original sentence: " Furthermore, they strongly challenged Gray's assertion that the poor had all chosen their lifestyle, arguing that some wanted to move up the socioeconomic ladder.HOME argued that Over-the-Rhine was on path to become a "permanent low income, one-race ghetto—a stagnant, decaying 'reservation' for the poor at the doorstep to downtown.No one seriously challenged the 1985 plan until 1992 when Housing Opportunities Made Equal (HOME) noted that it did not yield balance in the composition of Over-the-Rhine's population, nor did it produce any significant commercial or industrial development in the area
Edited sentence: " Furthermore, HOME strongly challenged Gray's assertion that the poor had chosen their lifestyle, arguing that some wanted to move up the socioeconomic ladder.No one seriously challenged the 1985 plan until 1992 when Housing Opportunities Made Equal (HOME) noted that Over-the-Rhine was on path to become a "permanent low income, one-race ghetto—a stagnant, decaying 'reservation' for the poor at the doorstep to downtown