Original sentence: Because the BC/AD notation is based on the traditional year of the conception or birth of Jesus, some Christians are offended by the removal of the reference to him in era notation.Some oppose the Common Era notation for explicitly religious reasons
Edited sentence: Because the BC/AD notation is based on the traditional year of the conception or birth of Jesus, many Christians are offended by the removal of the reference to him in era notation.Many oppose the Common Era notation for religious reasons.This change hijacks and renames the dating convention used in the Western world for centuries.Yet it comes neatly disguised as science