Original sentence: It was originally developed for Intel 386 microprocessors but now supports a variety of computer architectures.Linux has made considerable progress in server and special-purpose markets, such as image rendering and Web services, and is beginning to make inroads into the high volume desktop market.Linux is a computer operating system and its kernel.Once viewed as an operating system only computer geeks could use, Linux supporters say that Linux has become a user-friendly system, with many graphical interfaces and applications
Edited sentence: It was originally developed for Intel 386 microprocessors and now supports a variety of computer architectures.Linux has made considerable progress in server and special-purpose markets, such as image rendering and Web services, and is now making inroads into the high volume desktop market.Linux is a popular computer operating system and its kernel.Once viewed as an operating system only computer geeks could use, Linux has become a user-friendly system, with many graphical interfaces and applications