Original sentence: According to Dahr Jamail, an unembedded and independent journalist, most Iraqis he has talked to view the occupiers as the "foreign fighters,"  however the term is primarily used by the Western media to refer to mostly non-Iraqi Arabs and Muslims from neighbouring countries, who have entered Iraq, primarily through the porous desert borders of Syria and Saudi Arabia, to assist the Iraqi insurgency in repelling the Occupation of Iraq
Edited sentence: The term "foreign fighters" is primarily used to refer to non-Iraqi Arab or Muslim fighters who have entered Iraq, primarily through the porous desert borders of Syria and Saudi Arabia, to assist the Iraqi insurgency in repelling the Occupation of Iraq