Original sentence: Also just north of Whitehaven is Lowca, which was shelled by a German submarine during World War One; an event which the Germans made much of at the time, and Lowca has made much of ever since.Located on the west coast of the county, outside the Lake District National Park, Whitehaven is made up of a number of former villages, estates and suburbs, such as Kells, Mirehouse and Hensingham.Villages close by which are not suburbs include St Bees and Beckermet to the south and Distington to the north.Whitehaven also plays host to a maritime festival which started in 1999 and is held every two years with the 2007 festival taking place on the 15th-17th June
Edited sentence: Also just N of Whitehaven is Lowca, which was shelled by a German submarine during World War One; an event which the Germans made much of at the time, and Lowca has made much of ever since.Bees and Beckermet to the south and Distington to the north.It is made up of a number of former villages, estates and suburbs, such as Kells, Mirehouse and Hensingham.Located on the west coast of the county, outside the Lake District National Park.Villages close by which are not suburbs include St.Whitehaven also plays host to a maritime festival which started in 1999 and is held every 2 years with the next one taking place on the 15th-17th June 2007