Original sentence: Cheltenham College is an English co-educational independent school, located in Cheltenham, Gloucestershire, England.It was included in the 1893 book Great Public Schools, written by E.James, Henry Churchill and Maxwell Lyte, which included a chapter on each of what they regarded to be England's ten greatest public schools
Edited sentence: Cheltenham College is a famous English co-educational independent school in Cheltenham, Gloucestershire, England.It was included in the 1893 book Great Public Schools (written by E.James, Henry Churchill and Maxwell Lyte) which included a chapter on each of what they regarded to be England's ten greatest public schools