Original sentence: Industrial Light & Magic (ILM) is an Academy-Award winning motion picture visual effects company that was founded in May 1975 by George Lucas and is owned by Lucasfilm.They have since gone on to produce special effects for over two hundred films, including the Indiana Jones series, the Harry Potter franchise, the Jurassic Park franchise, the Back to the Future trilogy, many of the Star Trek films, Ghostbusters II, Pirates of the Caribbean Trilogy and the 2007 live-action Transformers movie
Edited sentence: Industrial Light & Magic (ILM) is a motion picture visual effects company that was founded in May 1975 by George Lucas and is owned by Lucasfilm.They have since gone on to produce special effects for over two hundred films, including the Indiana Jones series, the Harry Potter franchise, the Jurassic Park franchise, the Back to the Future trilogy, many of the Star Trek films, Ghostbusters II, "Pirates of the Caribbean Trilogy" and the 2007 live-action Transformers movie