Original sentence: In addition to the world-famous rock climbing, Smith Rock State Park is host to many miles of hiking trails, the meandering Crooked River and views of the volcanic peaks of Oregon's Cascade Range.Partial filming for the 1997 feature The Postman took place on location, while it additionally appeared in both Mission: Impossible II and Swordfish in following years.Smith Rock State Park is a state park located in central Oregon's high desert near the town of Terrebonne
Edited sentence: In addition to the world-famous rock climbing, Smith Rock State Park is host to many miles of hiking trails, beautiful scenery including the meandering Crooked River and views of the volcanic peaks of Oregon's Cascade Range.Partial filming for the 1997 feature The Postman took place on location, while it additionally appeared in both M:I-2 and Swordfish in following years.Smith Rock State Park is a popular climbing spot in the Pacific Northwest located in central Oregon's high desert near the town of Terrebonne