Original sentence: It attemptd to be a refreshing alternative to other UK film magazines such as Empire.Neon also championed lesser known films like Mike Leigh's Naked and ran in-depth profiles of films such as Steven Soderbergh's Out of Sight and Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas.Started in 1996, Neon included latest film news, actor profiles, interviews and contemporary movie profiles all written with a characteristic sense of humour.The circulation numbers diminished and Neon was eventually cancelled
Edited sentence: It proved to be a refreshing alternative to trite English film magazines such as Empire.Neon also championed lesser known films like Mike Leigh's Naked and ran in-depth profiles of box office flops like Steven Soderbergh's Out of Sight and Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas.Started in 1996, Neon included latest film news, actor profiles, interviews and contemporary movie profiles all written with a characteristic sense of humor.The quality diminished and Neon was eventually canceled