Original sentence: Accounting, Auditing and Accountability 3.Apart from Deans offices, work spaces are cramped with little speech privacy in most offices and all open work areas due to low background noise levels (Chilled Beam system not providing enough sound masking).Applied Economics 3.Banking, Finance and Investment 4.Business and Management 3.But the building has problems such as the latest teaching aids and technologies often fail.Economics 4.Finally, the too few toilets are often overworked and under maintained.Five research directors in the last two years speak to the dynamic and unsettled nature of these programs.Frustration for both the faculty and students is the permanent lock-down of all faculty offices.In UWA's 2009 Working Life Survey , the Business School scored above average in facilities and average or below average relative to other schools in most categories.In the Australian Research Council's (ARC) February 2011 ranking of research quality , ranging from 5 as excellent, 3 as average and 1 as poor, the ARC ranked UWA Business programs as follows.Marketing 2.Other Economics 3.Students may not access these areas without permission, which makes dropping in on a prof problematic.The School is the only Western Australian business school with three-year provisional EQUIS accreditation and says it is pursuing AACSB accreditation.The School scored poorly in Entrepreneurship, Change/Innovation, Processes and Involvement.The UWA Business School Fundraising Campaign was one of the few and thus amongst the most successful campaigns, by Australian standards, in Australia's tertiary education sector, raising $25 million.Tourism 2
Edited sentence: The School is the only Western Australian business school with EQUIS accreditation and is pursuing AACSB accreditation.The UWA Business School Fundraising Campaign was one of most successful campaigns, in Australia's tertiary education sector, raising $25 million