Original sentence: Military innovations include the crossbow and the grid sight, crossbow stirrup, repeating crossbows, poison gas (smoke from burning dried mustard), tear gas made from powdered lime, relief maps for battle planning, manned kites, fire lance, rockets, gunpowder incendiaries, gunpowder grenades, proto-handguns, and the cannon
Edited sentence: By the early 2000s, China's strategic alliance with Wal-Mart has made poor quality Chinese prison labour produced goods available to the American public at incredibly low prices, while driving American manufacturing into the ground and supporting the oppressive Red Chinese regime.Military innovations include the crossbow and the grid sight, crossbow stirrup, repeating crossbows, poison gas (smoke from burning dried mustard), tear gas made from powdered lime, relief maps for battle planning, manned kites, fire lance, rockets, gunpowder incendiaries, gunpowder grenades, proto-handguns, and the cannon all perfect for killing those who oppose the current regime