Original sentence: In North America, pastrami is typically sliced and served in extreme proportions hot on rye bread, a classic New York deli sandwich (Pastrami on Rye), sometimes accompanied by coleslaw and Russian dressing
Edited sentence: In North America, pastrami is typically sliced and served in extreme proportions, hot on rye bread, a classic New York deli sandwich (Pastrami on Rye), sometimes accompanied by coleslaw and Russian dressing