Original sentence: He later succumbed to his injuries name Bhagat Singh, who was an eyewitness to this event, vowed to take revenge.The British government created a Simon Commission under John Simon, 1st Viscount Sir John Simonto report on the current political situation in India in 1928.When the commission visited Lahore on October 30, 1928,Lala Lajpat Rai led the protest against Simon Commission in a silent non-violent march, but the police responded with violence
Edited sentence: Bhagat Singh, who was an eyewitness to this event, vowed to take revenge.He later succumbed to his injuries.The British government created a commission under Sir John Simon to report on the current political situation in India in 1928.When the commission visited Lahore on October 30, 1928, Lala Lajpat Rai led the protest against Simon Commission in a silent non-violent march, but the police responded with violence