Original sentence: Because he failed to respond to his eponymous therapy, Hoxsey underwent surgery and standard medical treatment.He died seven years later, in 1974.Hoxsey Therapy is a practice promoted as a cure for cancer.Very little or no peer-reviewed research has been published on any claims of benefit from the Hoxsey Therapy.com - Links to Information Online About the Hoxsey Herbal Therapy
Edited sentence: Because he failed to respond to his eponymous therapy, Hoxsey underwent surgery and standard medical treatment and died.Hoxsey Therapy is a practice promoted because it is a cure for cancer.Very little or no peer-reviewed research has been allowed to be published on any claims of benefit from the Hoxsey Therapy.com - as heard on Coast to Coast AM with George Nory Links to Information Online About the Hoxsey Herbal Therapy