Original sentence: In January 2004, on the subject of visors, Cherry said on Coach's Corner: "Most of the guys that wear them are Europeans and French guys.Over his career on television, Cherry has generated significant controversey about both hockey and politics
Edited sentence: " On the subject of visors, Cherry is particularly outspoken.After questionable gestures on the part of Atlanta Thrashers' star winger Ilya Kovalchuk, Cherry fumed: "Someone should have broken [Kovalchuk's arm], but they didn't.Cherry has a strong dislike of the "European style" of hockey, and has often insulted French Canadian hockey players on his show, blaming them for bringing diving, high-sticking and the introduction of visors into the league, while taking the jobs of "good-old Canadian boys.Don Cherry has also had a habit of mispronouncing player names.Famous examples are "Yammie Yagger" for Jaromir Jagr and "Pat Roy" for goaltending legend, Patrick Roy (the word "Roy" being pronounced as "boy" instead of the French pronunciation, "Roo-ah").In January, 2004, he said on-air: "Most of the guys that wear them are Europeans and French guys.Over his career on television, Cherry has been described as "racially insensitive and nonsensical", and a "xenophobic clown.The alleged mispronunciation occurs when it comes to players of European or French-Canadian origin, indicating that these "mishaps" may be intended on his part