Original sentence: It contains a poetic expression of respect for the dead, which is considered significant as the Turks followed Tengrism, in which there is a cult of the ancestors
Edited sentence: Comparing the two proposed translations, the ancient Turkic translation is markedly more coherent semantically, and contains a poetic expression of respect for the dead, which is considered significant as the Turks followed Tengrism, in which there is a cult of the ancestors; thus it may be deemed more appropriate as an inscription at a grave site, compared to the Khotanese translation which reads roughly like a food recipe