Original sentence: According to a 2007 assessment, only 37 percent of streets in San Diego are in acceptable driving condition and the proposed budget falls $84.6 million short of bringing the city's streets to an acceptable level
Edited sentence: According to a 2007 assessment, only 37 percent of streets in San Diego are in acceptable driving condition and Mayor Jerry Sanders' proposed budget falls 84.6 million short of bringing the city's streets to an acceptable level