Original sentence: After this, Cootes army attempted to take the formidable fortress of Charlemont, which was defended by the remenants of the Ulster army, but his soldiers suffered huge casulties before the stronghold surrendered.Charles II enobled him Earl of Mountrath in 1660 as a reward for his support however he died the following year.The elder Charles Coote was active in the supression of the Irish insurgents in 1642, until he was killed in action defending Trim in May 1642
Edited sentence: After this, Cootes army attempted to take the formidable fortress of Charlemont, which was defended by the remnants of the Ulster army, but his soldiers suffered huge casulties before the stronghold surrendered.Charles II ennobled him Earl of Mountrath in 1660 as a reward for his support however he died the following year.The elder Charles Coote was active in the suppression of the Irish insurgents in 1642, until he was killed in action defending Trim in May 1642