Original sentence: Early in the second quarter, Nate Davis thew a pass to Myles Trempe for a 31 yard touchdown that gave the Cardinals a 14–0 lead.On the next play, Nate Davis attempted to dive into the end zone, but fumbled the ball and was recoverd by Buffalo's Mike Newton, who ran the ball back 92 yards for a touchdown
Edited sentence: Early in the second quarter, Nate Davis threw a pass to Myles Trempe for a 31 yard touchdown that gave the Cardinals a 14–0 lead.On the next play, Nate Davis attempted to dive into the end zone, but fumbled the ball and was recovered by Buffalo's Mike Newton, who ran the ball back 92 yards for a touchdown