Original sentence: BM also has had numerous gigs at venues like Razzberry Rhinoceros, Cyclone, etc.They played at the first gig at JRO 2004 and also came third at Blitzkrieg 2004 – the IIT Delhi competition
Edited sentence: BM also has had numerous gigs at venues like , Cyclone, etc.However, the first gig with Vinay as the front man was JRO 2004 and also came third at Blitzkrieg 2004 – the IIT Delhi competition.They played at the first gig at Razzberry Rhinoceros and second at SIES Sion college festival