Original sentence: Eleven objections were received by the Cirencester and Chippenham registry offices and were all rejected by the Registrar General (and National Statistician) Len Cook
Edited sentence: Although all eleven objections were rejected by the Registrar General (and National Statistician) Len Cook , the very existence of the complaints casts a shadow on the dignity of the monarchy in the opinion of some.Eleven objections have been received by the Cirencester registry office.One of the legal complaints was filed by Rev Paul Williamson, the vicar of St George’s Church in Feltham, West London