Original sentence: They look to repeat such success in the 2006 season, but with key senior losses of All-State 2nd team and British super-star Jon Pike, All-State honorable mention Alex Brand, and the underrated talent of goalkeeper Justin Postal, forward Michael Hoy, and midfield Jordan Savitz, it will be very difficult
Edited sentence: They look to repeat such success in the 2006 season, but with key senior losses of All-State 2nd team and British super-star Jon Pike, All-State honorable mention Alex Brand, and the underrated talent of goalkeeper Justin Postal, forward Michael Hoy, and midfield stud-muffin Jordan Savitz, it will be very difficult