Original sentence: It consists of two huge grilles which resemble stereo speakers, and a central concrete flue-like structure.Seacombe is a village in Wirral, Merseyside,England.The first of these - and the only one with anything like a claim to international fame - is the ferry depot for the Mersey Ferry, the legendary "Ferry 'cross the Mersey" immortalised in song by Gerry and the Pacemakers.The second of these is the parish church of St Paul.The third is a building housing some of the ventilation systems for the Mersey tunnel; a colossal  structure which faces the river
Edited sentence: It consists of two huge grilles like stereo speakers, and a central concrete flue-like structure.Seacombe is a village on Wirral, Merseyside,England.The first of these, and the only one with anything like a claim to international fame, is the ferry depot for the Mersey Ferry, the legendary "Ferry 'cross the Mersey" immortalised in song by Gerry and the Pacemakers.The second of these is the dour and unremarkable parish church of St Paul.The third is a building housing some of the ventilation systems for the Mersey tunnel; a colossal and bizarre structure which faces the river