Original sentence: Shaffer's book, "Borders and Brethren: Iran and the Challenge of Azerbaijani Identity" received criticism from Touraj Atabaki, a professor of social history at the University of Amsterdam and a senior research fellow at the International Institute of Social History, who wrote that:
Edited sentence: Shaffer's book, "Borders and Brethren: Iran and the Challenge of Azerbaijani Identity" received some criticism.Touraj Atabaki, a professor of social history at the University of Amsterdam and a senior research fellow at the International Institute of Social History, critically challenged Shaffer in his review of her book concluding that: