Original sentence: VMI has graduated more Rhodes Scholars than all the other state military colleges in the United States combined, graduating ten Rhodes Scholars since 1921
Edited sentence: A rigorous academic program has long been a hallmark of the VMI experience.The Institute has produced more Rhodes Scholars per number of graduates than any other state supported college or university in the United States.VMI has graduated more Rhodes Scholars than all the other state "military colleges" in the United States combined, graduating ten Rhodes Scholars since 1921