Original sentence: It was around this time that she met an IRA Volunteer named Bobby Storey, who persuaded her to join the IRA.Scenes relayed on television showed the two corporals being cornered by black taxis and dragged from their car before being taken away by the IRA to be beaten, stripped, and then shot (see Corporals killings).This meant that prisoners refused to slop-out and would smear excrement and menstrual material on the walls of their cells instead of risking being attacked by the guards.Upon her release from jail, Farrell enrolled at Queen's University, Belfast to do a course in Political Science and Economics, although she rapidly lost interest and dropped out to play a larger role in the IRA's armed campaign
Edited sentence: It was around this time that she met a IRA Volunteer named Bobby Storey, who persuaded her to join IRA.Scenes recorded on video by an army helicopter showed the two corporals being cornered by black taxis and dragged from their car before being taken away by the IRA to be beaten, stripped, and then shot (see Corporals killings).This meant that prisoners refused to slop-out and would smear excrement and menstrual material on the walls of their cells instead of risking beatings and humilitation from the guards.Upon her release from jail, Farrell enrolled at Queen's University, Belfast to do a course in Political Science and Economics, although she rapidly lost interest and dropped out to play a larger role in the campaign of violence