Original sentence: She died in Sacramento, California in 2001, aged 60, from melanoma, and was survived by her parents, stepmother, husband, Dennis Revell, and their adopted Ugandan-American daughter, Rita Mirembe Revell
Edited sentence: She died in Sacramento, California in 2001, aged 60, from melanoma, and was survived by her parents, stepmother, husband Dennis, and their adopted Ugandan-American daughter, Rita Mirembe Revell