Original sentence: In 2003, after J.Michael Bailey's book The Man Who Would Be Queen was published, McCloskey, along with Lynn Conway wrote a letter to Northwestern University, Bailey's employer, accusing him of grossly violating scientific standards "by conducting intimate research observations on human subjects without telling them that they were objects of the study
Edited sentence: In 2003, after the book The Man Who Would Be Queen was published, McCloskey participated in a campaign of harassment against its author, J.Michael Bailey.Together with Lynn Conway she wrote a letter to Northwestern University, Bailey's employer, accusing him of grossly violating scientific standards "by conducting intimate research observations on human subjects without telling them that they were objects of the study