Original sentence: 30 on the Information Week magazine's annual listing of the most innovative users of information technology in the  United States.9 on the Electronic Design magazine's ranking of the top 100 employers of electronic designers that have the most influence on today's engineering careers.Emerson consistently ranks among the top companies within the electronics industry category in the definitive report card on corporate reputation, and is currently ranked #2 in FORTUNE America's Most Admired Companies.Emerson has been featured on the Forbes 400 list for the past 8 years.Emerson has more than 270 manufacturing locations, of which approximately 170 are located outside the United States.Emerson is among the FORTUNE's Global 500 list of the world's largest companies, as ranked by revenues.Emerson is ranked among the country's 400 best of the biggest publicly traded companies.Emerson was awarded a record 486 patents worldwide in 2005
Edited sentence: 117 on the Information Week magazine's annual listing of the most innovative users of information technology in the  United States (September 2008).15 on the Electronic Design magazine's ranking of the top 100 employers of electronic designers that have the most influence on today's engineering careers (June 2008).350 on FORTUNE's Global 500 list of the world's largest companies, as ranked by revenues.Emerson has 255 manufacturing locations, of which approximately 165 are located outside the United States.Emerson is ranked No.Emerson was awarded a record 655 patents worldwide in 2008