Original sentence: Minister Davenport was an Oxford-educated intellectual, and he set up a grammar school and wanted to establish a college.New Haven was a Bible Commonwealth; the Bible was the only law book.The settlers had no official charter or permissions, and did not buy any land rights from the local Indians.They established a theocracy; unlike the Connecticut Colony, they made no pretense of rule by the will of the people
Edited sentence: Minister Davenport was in Oxford-educated intellectual, and he set up a grammar school and wanted to establish a college.New Haven was a Bible Commonwealth; the The Bible was the only law book.The settlers had no official charter or permissions, and did not by any land rights from the local Indians.The they set up a theocracy in control; unlike the Connecticut Colony, they made no pretense of  rule by the will of the people