Original sentence: Attempts to incorporate the area are in progress, in order to re-instill civic pride.Cabazon thus became the first and, so far, only community to give up cityhood in Riverside County
Edited sentence: Cabazon thus became the first and, so far, only community to give up cityhood in Riverside County, or, for that matter, in California.. Attempts to incorporate the area are in progress, in order to re-instill civic pride