Original sentence: In addition, the film expands on the story by detailing Scrooge's rise as a prominent businessman who was corrupted by a greedy new mentor that had lured him away from the benevolent Mr.In this film it is revealed that she works with the homeless and sick.The film also explains what happened to Scrooge's old girlfriend from his younger days
Edited sentence: In addition, the film expands on the story by detailing Scrooge's rise as a prominence businessman who was corrupted by a greedy new mentor that had lured him away from the benevolent Mr.In this film it is revealed that she became a helper to homeless people, and in a completely different city far away, ensuring that Scrooge and her can never rekindle their love, ever.This film also explains what happened to Scrooge's old girlfriend from his younger days