Original sentence: Dave Kopel has compiled a list of 59 alleged deceits in Fahrenheit 9/11, and Slate.Moore's style has also come under fire from those who claim that when making his films, he unfairly edits and re-sequences events in order to twist or misrepresent the words of his targets or interviewees
Edited sentence: Dave Kopel has compiled a list of 59 deceits in Fahrenheit 9/11, and Slate.Moore's style has also come under fire from those who believe he unfairly edits and re-sequences scenes in his film to twist or misrepresent the words of his targets or interviewees