Original sentence: Criticism of the research and typology has come from some trans activists, including developmental biology researcher Julia Serano, Jaimie Veale, Larry Nuttbrock, and some physicians, including Charles Allen Moser and John Bancroft, and others who say that the typology is poorly representative of trans women
Edited sentence: Criticism of the research and typology has come from trans activists, including developmental biology researcher Julia Serano, Jaimie Veale, Larry Nuttbrock, and some physicians, including Charles Allen Moser and John Bancroft, and others who say that the typology is poorly representative of trans women