Original sentence: " This was the second of three singles of of the critcally acclaimed, but commercially dissapointing, Tao LP.It was originally recorded by Australian rock group Mondo Rock for their 1980 album Chemistry, and written by the group's guitarist Eric McCusker.Mondo Rock's version was a commercial success in their native land of Austrailia.Springfield also performed this single live at Live Aid in Philadelphia PA in July of 1985, in front of over 500,000 people.Springfield took the liberty of writing an enhanced version of the guitar solo and gave the song a moody synthesiser - driven sound.While commercial sales were dissapointing, the LP did spawn 2 top 40 hits (State of the Heart and Celebrate Youth)
Edited sentence: " This was the second of three singals of of the critcally acclaimed, but commercially dissapointing Tao lp.Both versions are well received and many fans of both Springfield and Mondo Rock are hard pressed to select one over the other.It was originally recorded by Australian rock group Mondo Rock for their 1980 album Chemistry, and written by the group's guitarist Eric Mcusker.Mondo Rocks version was a commercial success in there native land of Austraillia and is considered one of the top love songs from the 1980's Australlia.Springfield also performed this single live at Live Aid in Philadelphia PA, in July of 1985 in front of over 500,000 people.Springfield's cover while similar, took the liberty of writing an enhanced version of the guitar solo as well as giving it a moody synth driven sound.This single is also a very popular amongst avid Springfield fans and he still plays it live today.While commercial sales were dissapointing, the lp did spawn 2 top 40 hits ( State of the Heart), and ( Celebrate Youth)