Original sentence: A keen traveller, Mr Joyce has never appeared outside of the top two highest travel-spending MPs since being voted into Parliament in 2000 , citing the United States, Africa and Kuwait as his favourite longitudes to visit.After being commissioned as an army officer in 1987 he continued his studies part-time and has an MA in Education from Bath University and an MBA from Keele University
Edited sentence: A keen traveller, Mr Joyce has never appeared outside of the top two highest travel-spending MPs since being voted into Parliament in 2000,  citing the United States, Africa and Kuwait as his favourite longitudes to visit.After being commissioned as an army officer in 1987 he continued his studies part-time and has an MA in Education from the University of Bath and an MBA from Keele University.Critics of both Mr Joyce and Mr Connarty allege that this is simply an early attempt to gain some sort of position of power in Mr Brown's impending Government reshuffle, this after both were overlooked continually for positions of responsibility in Tony Blair's Government.Despite his staunch Blairite past, Mr Joyce recently released a joint statement with fellow central Scotland MP Michael Connarty in which both praised Gordon Brown and threw their full support behind him in the forthcoming Labour leadership election.Mr Joyce was branded a "simpleton" by the delightful, well-educated journalist Marina Hyde, of the Guardian newspaper