Original sentence: During the 2010 production at least two of the 16 scenes depicted "persecution and murder of Falun Gong practitioners" in contemporary China, including the beating of a young mother to death, and the jailing of a Falun Gong protester.Each touring company consists of about 40 male and female dancers, who mainly perform classical Chinese dance, which has been passed down through thousands of years and makes extensive use of acrobatic and tumbling techniques, forms and postures.Some reviews of the performances have been written by Gish Jen in The New Republic:, the San Francisco Civic Center, Rita in Arts & Entertainment, and Jessica Gelt in the La Times
Edited sentence: , including scenes depicted "persecution and murder of Falun Gong practitioners" in contemporary China, such as the beating of a young mother to death, and the jailing of a Falun Gong protester.Each touring company consists of about 40 male and female dancers, who mainly perform classical Chinese dance...Reviews of the performances have emphasized the proselytizing nature of this Falun Gong production: Gish Jen in The New Republic:, the San Francisco Civic Center, Rita in Arts & Entertainment, and Jessica Gelt in the La Times.[citation needed]