Original sentence: He has a BA in Latin American Studies from the University of Texas at Austin and a Doctorate Jurisprudence from the South Texas College of Law.He is a graduate of University of Texas at Austin and  was awarded his Doctorate by the South Texas College of Law.He was a member of the Aviation Committee and the  Finance Committee.He was raised in a military family, moving every two to three years.He was the recipient of the Political Courage Award in late 1991 from the Harris County Republican Party.Radford High School in Honolulu, Hawaii in 1981.Rob Todd was born on October 23, 1963 in Kirksville, Missouri.Todd is an adjunct professor of law for the South Texas College of Law where he has taught a course on the passage of legislation since 2003.Ultimately  Metro enacting a public policy position to not initiate major light rail projects in the greater Houston area unless there was strong evidence that they would reduce air pollution or result in a major reduction in traffic congestion which was also sponsored by United States Congressman Tom DeLay
Edited sentence: He has a BA in Latin American Studies from the University of Texas at Austin and a Doctorate of Jurisprudence from the South Texas College of Law.He was also a member of the Aviation Committee and the  Finance Committee.He was awarded the Political Courage Award in late 2001 from the Harris County Republican Party.Radford High School in Honolulu, Hawaii in 1981, from the University of Texas at Austin,  and  was awarded his Doctorate by the South Texas College of Law.Rob Todd was born on October 23, 1963 in Kirksville, Missouri into a military family and moved every two to three years.Todd is an adjunct professor of law at the South Texas College of Law where he has taught a course on the passage of legislation since 2003.Ultimately  Metro enacted a public policy position to not initiate major light rail projects in the greater Houston area unless there was strong evidence that they would reduce air pollution or result in a major reduction in traffic congestion which was also sponsored by United States Congressman Tom DeLay