Original sentence: Geoff Southern and Denise Carroll stood for Senator, but were unsuccessful polling 10th and 13th of the fifteen candidates with the top six elected.Geoff Southern was re-elected to serve St Helier district 2, Judy Martinretained her seat in St Helier district 1, and Shona Pitman topped the poll in St Helier district 2, but Denise Carroll was fifty votes short of taking a seat in St Helier district 3&4
Edited sentence: Geoff Southern and Denise Carroll stood for Senator, but failed were not successful.Geoff Southern was re-elected to serve St Helier district 2, Judy Martinretained her seat in St Helier district 1, and Shona Pitman topped the poll in St Helier district 2 but Denise Carroll was fifty votes short of taking a seat in St Helier district 3&4