Original sentence: He went on to graduate from Bard College in 2004.Ronan Seamus Farrow, son of Mia Farrow and Woody Allen, enrolled at the age of 11 in September 1999, making him the youngest student in Simon's Rock history
Edited sentence: Ronan Seamus Farrow, son of Mia Farrow and Woody Allen, enrolled at the age of 11, the youngest student in Simon's Rock history