Original sentence: A Cochrane review found the evidence to recommend for or against its use in children to be weak.Honey may be a minimally effective cough treatment.Honey's use as a cough treatment has been linked on several occasions to infantile botulism and accordingly should not be used in children less than one year old
Edited sentence: A Cochrane review found the evidence to recommend against its use in children to be weak.Honey has been found to be a somewhat effective cough treatment for many, at least as effective as other cough medications.Raw Honey's use as a cough treatment has been linked on some occasions to infantile botulism and accordingly should not be used in children less than one year old