Original sentence: He was a son of Miles Dewey and Mary (Luster) Davis.Miles Dewey Davis (March 1, 1898—1962) was a prominent American dentist and father of jazz legend Miles Davis.Miles Dewey Davis was born on March 1, 1900 in Noble Lake, Arkansas
Edited sentence: Davis was born on March 1, 1900 in Noble Lake, Arkansas.He was a son of Miles D.Miles Henry Davis (March 1, 1898—1962) was a prominent American dentist and father of jazz legend Miles Davis.and Mary (Luster) Davis