Original sentence: His other descriptions (often simply a German rendition of the Latin binomial name) are of the species of earlier authors such as Johann Hieronymus Chemnitz, Friedrich Wilhelm Martini and Martin Lister but with references to existing descriptions and figures making these names also valid, since they are unequivocally recognizable, and were after Röding adopted by many later authors.It is a sale catalogue and was ignored until William Healey Dall recognized that it introduced new valid taxa, though with long names and short descriptions.Museum Boltenianum sive Catalogus... is a rare book.Pars secunda contens Conchylia…and was publihed in Hamburg.Peter Friedrich Röding (1767–1846) was a German malacologist.So Röding is credited with many names of his own.This was entitled  Museum Boltenianum sive Catalogus cimeliorum e tribus regnis naturae.Very little is known about this naturalist who lived in Hamburg
Edited sentence: Museum Boltenianum sive Catalogus..., the sale catalogue, is a rare book.Pars secunda contens Conchylia… and was published in Hamburg.Peter Friedrich Röding (1767–1846) was a German malacologist who lived in Hamburg.Röding's other descriptions (often simply a German rendition of the Latin binomial name), are of species which were first named by earlier authors such as Johann Hieronymus Chemnitz, Friedrich Wilhelm Martini and Martin Lister.Röding's references to pre-existing descriptions and figures make these names also valid, since they are unequivocally recognizable, and were (after Röding) subsequently adopted by many later authors.The catalogue was entitled  Museum Boltenianum sive Catalogus cimeliorum e tribus regnis naturae.This was in fact a sale catalogue, and it was ignored as a taxonomic work until William Healey Dall recognized that it introduced new valid taxa, though with long names and short descriptions.Thus Röding is credited with naming many taxa.Very little is known about this naturalist