Original sentence: The Mormon version of the Lord's Prayer is the one found in the Book of Mormon that was said to be have been translated by Joseph Smith from an actual eye-witness account of the Resurrected Jesus's sermon to a group of Native Americans in or around the year 34 CE.This version is an almost word-for-word copy of the King James Version of the New Testament that included a phrase added centuries later by Christian scribes copied from The Didache of the Twelve Apostles
Edited sentence: It includes a doxology generally considered to be a later interpolation to Matthew from The Didache of the Twelve Apostles.The Book of Mormon includes a version of the Lord's Prayer, said to derive from an eye-witness account of the Resurrected Jesus's sermon to a group of Native Americans in or around the year 34 CE.The English phraseology strongly resembles the King James Version of the New Testament