Original sentence: Br Cornelius J Sreenan (1972 - 1990) Beacon Park/Crownhill.Br H A Grice (1954-1960) Beaconfield/Beacon Park.Br J H McDonald (1931-1944) Beaconfield.Dr James Murphy (2007-2009) Crownhill/Manadon Park.Mr Peter Eccles (September 2009 - ) Manadon Park
Edited sentence: Br Cornelius John Sreenan (1972 - 1990) Beacon Park/Crownhill.Br Harry A Grice (1954-1960) Beaconfield/Beacon Park.Br J H Dudley McDonald (1931-1944) Beaconfield.Dr James Lawrence Murphy (2007-2009) Crownhill/Manadon Park.Mr Peter Eccles (2009 - ) Manadon Park