Original sentence: Some consider the statues to be 'pornographic' whilst others see them as beauiful pieces of art which have brought increased tourism revenue to the local area.The debate continues as to whether the town should be able to keep them until 2008, the city's year as Capital of Culture.The event will be their largest feat yet, with carols by torchlight, live bands and a firework display in the hope the council agree to keep the iron men in Crosby.Whilst those who use the front for watersports voice the strongest resistance to the iron men staying (the men create a hazardous environment for these people to practice their hobby), lovers of art and local businesses are lobbying for them to stay, as are the local churches who stage plays amongst the men and see them as a perfect opportunity to unite the different denominational faiths
Edited sentence: As are the local churches who stage plays amongst the men - who see the men as a perfect oppertunity to unite the different denominational faiths.Some consider the statues to be 'pornographic' whilst others see them as beauiful pieces of art which has brought increased tourism revenue to the local area.The debate still rages as to whether the town should be able to keep them till 2008, the city's year as Capital of Culture.The event will be their largest feat yet, with carols by torchlight, exciting bands and a firework display in the hope the council agree to keep the iron men in crosby.Whilst those who use the front for watersports are the strongest resistance to the iron men staying (the men create a hazerdous envionment for these people to continue their hobbie) lovers of art and local buisnesses are lobbying for them to stay