Original sentence: A cousin of Henrik Bull’s grandfather, also named Henrik Bull, designed several of Oslo’s landmark civic buildings at the end of the 19th century.Johan Bull, a native of Norway, was an illustrator who regularly contributed to the New Yorker magazine from its first year in 1925.This earlier Henrik Bull was nephew of the famed violinist Ole Bull, who started the ill-fated utopian community of Oleana in Pennsylvania in 1853
Edited sentence: A cousin of Bull’s grandfather, also named Henrik Bull, designed several of Oslo’s landmark civic buildings at the end of the 19th century.Johan Bull, a native of Norway, is an illustrator who has regularly contributed to New Yorker magazine since its inception in 1925.This earlier Henrik Bull was nephew of the famed violinist Ole Bull, who began the utopian community of Oleana in Pennsylvania in 1853