Original sentence: The round 17 grand final rematch saw Selwood collect a career high 42 disposals - 19 kicks, 23 handballs, 10 marks, 11 tackles and one goal
Edited sentence: The round 17 grand final rematch saw Selwood collect a career high 42 disposals—19 kicks, 23 handballs, 10 marks, 11 tackles and one goal