Original sentence: He has testified for water rights, for taro growers, for the elimination of the landfill, and has helped the field of culture and arts.His numerous awards and honors include:.His nutrition science works have been published in scientific journals such as the American Journal of Clinical Nutrition.Terry Shintani, MD, JD, MPH, KSJ is a physician, an attorney, a nutritionist, and a community advocate
Edited sentence: All the while he has selflessly used his expertise to serve the community.For example has testified for water rights, for taro growers, for the elimination of the landfill, and has helped the field of culture and arts when he can.He has been unafraid to work in the areas where there is great poverty and few resources such as Waianae.He has dedicated his career to truly bringing health to the people.His numerous awards and honors speak for themselves:.His nutrition science works are published in scientific journals such as the American Journal of Clinical Nutrition.In doing these things, he has consistently demonstrated outstanding professionalism and brought honor and recognition to Hawaii in all these fields.Shintani has dedicated his career to truly bringing health to the people.Terry Shintani, MD, JD, MPH, KSJ is a unique combination of physician, attorney, nutritionist, and community advocate.There are also many intangibles that he does for the community.Yet he has created world-class programs despite these disadvantages