Original sentence: Critical reaction to Orphan has been mostly mixed to negative, with the film earning a rating of 51% on Rotten Tomatoes (whose consensus is "While it has moments of dark humor and the requisite scares, Orphan fails to build on its interesting premise and degenerates into a formulaic, sleazy horror/thriller") and 41 out of 100 on Metacritic
Edited sentence: Critical reaction to Orphan has been mostly mixed to negative, with the film earning a rating of 52% on Rotten Tomatoes (whose consensus is "While it has moments of dark humor and the requisite scares, Orphan fails to build on its interesting premise and degenerates into a formulaic, sleazy horror/thriller") and 41 out of 100 on Metacritic