Original sentence: Ma'ale Levona () is a Jewish communal settlement in the Land of Israel.Ma'ale Levona overlooks the ancient mountain pass noteworthy as the site of the Battle of Wadi Haramia, the first battle of the Maccabees against the Selucids
Edited sentence: Ma'ale Levona () is an Israeli settlement organized as a communal settlement in the West Bank.Ma'ale Levona overlooks the ancient mountain pass noteworthy as the site of the Battle of Wadi Haramia, the first battle of the Maccabees  against the Selucids.The international community considers Israeli settlements in the West Bank illegal under international law, but the Israeli government disputes this