Original sentence: "Thirteenth-stepping" is a disparaging euphemism referring to AA members who approach new member dates or sex.The Journal of Addciton Nursing reported that 50 percent of the women that participated in a survey (55 in all) experienced 13-stepping behaviors
Edited sentence: "Thirteenth-stepping" is a disparaging euphemism referring to AA members who seek to seduce new vunerable members.The Journal of Addciton Nursing reported that 50 percent of the women that participated in a survey experienced this type of behavior