Original sentence: Bagger moved to Australia in 1979.In 1995, she had sex reassignment surgery.In 1998, she returned to golf, as an amateur in Australia
Edited sentence: However, this policy is extremely invasive of a persons privacy and, like the IOC's Stockholm Consensus, is not based on medical science or fact and does not conver differences related to males and females.Mianne started playing golf in Denmark at the age of 8, and moved to Australia with her parents in 1979