Original sentence: Ali Bongo UK - Adviser to British TV magicians David Nixon (1970s) and Paul Daniels (1980s).James Freedman (Magician) UK - Invented magic for Robert Vaughn, Roman Polanski and Edward Norton.Jim Steinmeyer US - A world-renowned illusion designer/inventor.Paul Kieve UK - Leading magic consultant for theater, adviser for Harry Potter films.Ricky Jay US - Actor and magician who has produced magic for film and theatre through his consulting firm Deceptive Practices.Scott Penrose UK - Current magic consultant for Cirque Du Soleil and UK-based Objective Productions
Edited sentence: Ali Bongo UK - Advised British TV magicians David Nixon (1970s) and Paul Daniels (1980s).James Freedman (Magician) UK  - Invented magic for Robert Vaughn, Roman Polanski and Edward Norton.Jim Steinmeyer US - The pre-eminent illusion designer/inventor in the world.Paul Kieve UK - Leading magic consultant for theater, and the only magician ever to advise on a Harry Potter film.Ricky Jay US - Actor and magician who has produced magic for film and theatre.Scott Penrose UK - Currently magic consultant for Cirque Du Soleil, and UK-based Objective Productions