Original sentence: Rock My World is the name of a 1988 hit single by British pop group Five Star, peaking at UK #28 in August of that year and becoming their last ever UK Top 40 chart entry.The b-side to the single "Sweetest Innocence" received a BPI award for best instrumental
Edited sentence: Rock My World is the name of a 1988 hit single by British pop group Five Star, peaking at UK #28 in August of that year and sadly becoming their last ever UK Top 40 chart entry.The b-side to the single "Sweetest Innocence" recieved a BPI award for best instrumental