Original sentence: As planned, Damodar Hari waited at the gate of the Government House, and as Rand's carriage emerged, ran 10 - 15 paces behind it.Collector of Pune and Chairman of Special Plague Committee, Pune and British army officer Lt Charles Egerton Ayerst,  were assassinated on the Ganeshkhind road, Pune, on their way back from a Government house party celebrating the diamond jublee coronation anniversary of Queen Victoria.It was Lt Ayerst whom he had killed.Rand of the ICS was appointed to take charge of the Plague control measures and had successfully contained the epidemic; but his methods of evacuating the people, of fumigating their dwellings and burning the contaminated articles evoked tremendous hatred amongst certain sections of the society which led to his assassination.The behaviour of the military which was called out to deal with the situation arising from the pestilence in the caused great indignation, on the 22nd of June in 1897, British officer Charlse Walter Rand Asst.While Lt Ayerst was killed on the spot, Rand died in hospital on July 3 1897
Edited sentence: As planned, Damodar Hari waited at the gate of the Government House, and as Rand's carriage emerged, ran 10–15 paces behind it.Ayerst was killed on the spot, and Rand died in hospital on 3 July 1897.It was Ayerst whom he had killed.Rand of the ICS was appointed to take charge of the plague control measures and had successfully contained the epidemic; but his methods of evacuating the people, of fumigating their dwellings, and burning the contaminated articles, evoked tremendous hatred amongst certain sections of the society, which led to his assassination.The behaviour of the military which was called out to deal with the situation arising from the pestilence in the caused great indignation, on 22 June in 1897, British officer Charlse Walter Rand Assistant Collector of Pune and Chairman of the Special Plague Committee, Pune, and British Army officer Lieutenant Charles Egerton Ayerst, were assassinated on the Ganeshkhind road, Pune, on their way back from a Government house party celebrating the diamond jublee coronation anniversary of Queen Victoria