Original sentence: It was only a category one hurricane, but it passed just miles west of Kauai, moving at a speed of nearly 50 mph (80 km/h).July 1982: Hurricane Daniel passed through the Islands as a tropical depression, causing little, if any, damage.July 1986: Waves caused by Hurricane Estelle caused $2 million dollars in damage when they destroyed five houses and damaged several others.July – August 1983: Hurricane Gil passed over northern Hawaii a tropical storm, causing minor damage
Edited sentence: Although it was only a category 1 hurricane, it passed just miles west of Kauai, moving at a speed of nearly 50 mph (80 km/h).July 1982: Hurricane Daniel passed through the islands as a tropical depression, causing little, if any, damage.July 1986: Waves caused by Hurricane Estelle caused $2 million in damage when they destroyed five houses and damaged several others.July – August 1983: Hurricane Gil passed over northern Hawaii as a tropical storm, causing minor damage