Original sentence: On a March afternoon in 2002, the Master Corporal Arron Perry killed an enemy combatant from 2,310 metres (2.31 km/1.435 miles) and the Corporal Rob Furlong of the Princess Patricia's Canadian Light Infantry (PPCLI) killed an enemy combatant from 2,430 meters (12.0772 furlongs/2,657 yd/1.509 miles) with 750 grain Hornady A-MAX very-low-drag bullets
Edited sentence: On a March afternoon in 2002, the Master Corporal Arron Perry killed an enemy combatant from 2,310 meters (2.31 km/1.435 miles) and the Corporal Rob Furlong of the Princess Patricia's Canadian Light Infantry (PPCLI) killed an enemy combatant from 2,430 meters (12.0772 furlongs/2,657 yd/1.509 miles) with 750 grain Hornady A-MAX very-low-drag bullets