Original sentence: In the 2008 continuation of the original trilogy, Carnby's appearance is again drastically changed.In the original trilogy, he is depicted as a middle-aged PI during his late twenties or early thirties.The New Nightmare depicted him as a younger adult in the present day
Edited sentence: In the 2008 continuation of original trilogy, Carnby's appearance is again drastically changed.In the original trilogy, he is depicted as a middle-aged PI during the late 20s/early 30s.The New Nightmare depicted him as a younger adult in the present day, a character similar to Fox Mulder