Original sentence: Stryker, better known as Tim Stryker or Stryker to friends (9 December1954 – 6 August 1996) was a computer programmer, best known as the creator of MajorBBS, a computer bulletin board software package
Edited sentence: Stryker, better known as Tim Stryker or Stryker to friends (9 December 1954 – 6 August 1996) was a computer programmer, best known as the creator of MajorBBS, a computer bulletin board software package