Original sentence: Steven Scott Ritchie (born February 13, 1950) is an American pinball and video game designer holding the record for best-selling pinball designer in history, and has been called "The Master of Flow" by pinball aficionados due to the emphasis in his designs on ball speed, loops, and long smooth shots
Edited sentence: Steven Scott Ritchie (born February 13, 1950) is an acclaimed pinball and video game designer holding the record for best-selling pinball designer in history, and has been called "The Master of Flow" by pinball aficionados due to the emphasis in his designs on ball speed, loops, and long smooth shots