Original sentence: He provides outrageous pick-up lines and fancies himself a ladies man, with suitably unimpressed reactions from Penny; however, he has shown some success with other women.Howard's work has included the design a satellite that is currently orbiting a moon of Jupiter taking high-resolution photos.Though he insists to the contrary, he lives with his overbearing mother, who has only been heard shouting from off-camera, and makes him packed lunches and tells him not to have sleep-overs on school nights — but he assures her he is an adult
Edited sentence: Howard's mother, who has only been heard shouting from off-camera, makes him packed lunches and tells him not to have sleep-overs on school nights, but he assures her he is an adult.Howard's work includes designing a satellite that is currently orbiting a moon of Jupiter taking high-resolution photos.Though he insists to the contrary, he lives with his overbearing mother