Original sentence: Milton George Gustavus Sills (January 12, 1882 – September 15, 1930) was an American stage and film actor of the early twentieth century.Sills was born in Chicago, Illinois into a wealthy family
Edited sentence: Milton George Gustavus Sills (January 12, 1882 – September 15, 1930) was a highly successful American stage and film actor of the early twentieth century.Milton Sills was born in Chicago, Illinois into a wealthy and highly regarded family