Original sentence: " A common misperception is that Burning Man's organizers forced the artists to remove it, giving rise to charges of censorship and homophobia from a number of quarters, but the installation was actually removed voluntarily by its creators.Over the years, numerous restrictions have been put in place, such as bans on fireworks, firearms, dogs, and driving non-art cars.The only commerce that has been allowed are sales of coffee and ice at Center Camp, which benefit the local Gerlach-Empire school system
Edited sentence: " Burning Man's organizers pressured the artists to remove it, giving rise to charges of censorship and homophobia from a number of quarters.Over the years, numerous restrictions have been put in place, such as bans on fireworks, firearms, dogs, gay-themed art and driving non-art cars.The only commerce that has been allowed are sales of coffee and ice at Center Camp, which benefit Burning Man organizers and the local Gerlach-Empire school system