Original sentence: It is most popular with young Asian women living in Western countries.This procedure has been criticised by some people as being anti-Asian, suggesting that the patient wishes they were white, or that Asian eyes are unattractive.Transracial transformation
Edited sentence: It is most popular with asian girls living in "western" countries who may suffer from identity problems.This procedure has been criticised by some people as being anti-Asian, suggesting that the patient wishes they were white, or that asian eyes are unattractive