Original sentence: ) The main thrust of the military movement on the ground was across the waterway which was the stage for most of the military battles between the two armies.In the 2003 invasion of Iraq, the waterway was a key military target for the Coalition Forces
Edited sentence: ) The main thrust of the military movement on the ground was across the Shatt al Arab which was the stage for most of the military battles between the two armies.In the 2003 invasion of Iraq, the Shatt al Arab was a key military target for the Coalition Forces