Original sentence: "Long ago in the year 1939, Eolo Pons introduced himself into the the surrealist garden with the same discipline and respect he had given his academic training.In the landscapes of Eolo Pons, and in his figures, come and go the evocation of a mystery--a mystery that, perhaps, opens to us the doors of the landscape and brings us into the souls of the people
Edited sentence: "Long ago in the year 1939, Eolo Pons introduced himself into the surrealist garden with the same discipline and respect he had given his academic training.In the landscapes of Eolo Pons, and in his figures, come and go the evocation of a mystery—a mystery that, perhaps, opens to us the doors of the landscape and brings us into the souls of the people