Original sentence: Pontypridd RFC experienced a successful period during the mid-nineties, referred to as the club's "Golden Age", Pontypridd saw a resurgence during the 2000/01, 2001/02 and 2002/03 seasons
Edited sentence: Pontypridd RFC experienced a successful period during the mid-nineties under head coach, Dennis John, referred to as the club's "Golden Age", and saw a resurgence during the 2000/01, 2001/02 and 2002/03 seasons with the appointment of head coach, Lynn Howells