Original sentence: A very prominent man in society, he was also Chairman of the Commercial Bank, and received the Sri Lankan National Award by President Junius Richard Jayewardene.Justice Manicavasagar, Former Chancellor of The University of Jaffna
Edited sentence: Justice Manicavasagar, former chancellor of The University of Jaffna, he was also Chairman of the Commercial Bank, and was awarded the Sri Lankan National Award by President Junius Richard Jayewardene