Original sentence: New properties have been built though, the latest addition being on Gorton Street at the end of 2004.Up until the 1980's there was a great deal of heavy industry in Peel Green, with Gardeners Engine makers on Hardy Sreet and a large industrial unit on Clifford Street.With the loss of the industrial base, Peel Green is seeking new types of investment to aid in renewal of the area
Edited sentence: New properties are being built though, the latest addition being on Gorton Street at the end of 2004.Sadly, Peel Green is now run-down and is really in need of some type of investment.Up until the 1980's there was alot of heavy industry in Peel Green, with Gardeners Engine makers on Hardy Sreet and also a large industrial unit on Clifford Street