Original sentence: The supernatural nature of the band's rise to success, coupled with the equally uncanny misfortunes of destruction and death which follow in the band's wake, have caught the attention of an Illuminati-style council, known as The Tribunal.When the series begins, Dethklok is ranked as the world's 12th largest economy, and it is noted by The Tribunal sometime during the second season that the band has moved up to seventh.With their widespread commercial success and lucrative sponsorship contracts, the band is an economic juggernaut
Edited sentence: The band's actions and uncanny misfortune have caught the attention of an Illuminati-style council, known as The Tribunal.With their widespread commercial success and lucrative sponsorship contracts, Dethklok is ranked as the world's seventh largest economy (in the series)