Original sentence: On his flagship "SMS Stein" on 4 September 1894 as Rear Admiral chief of the Second Squadronhe he took part in a Fleet Review before the Kaiser (Paraden und Manöver vor dem Kaiser) at Swinemünde
Edited sentence: On his flagship "SMS Stein" on 4 September 1894 as Rear Admiral and chief of the Second Squadron he took part in a Fleet Review before the Kaiser (Paraden und Manöver vor dem Kaiser) at Swinemünde