Original sentence: In relation to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, critics of Israeli government policies have claimed that Israel seeks to implement a "bantustan model" for the Palestinian territories   (See Allegations of Israeli apartheid for a fuller discussion of this analogy
Edited sentence: In relation to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, critics of Israeli government policies have claimed that Israel seeks to implement a "bantustan model" for the Palestinian territories   (See Allegations of Israeli apartheid for a fuller discussion of this controversial parallel