Original sentence: China is also preparing to vastly expand its nuclear power program.China is predicted to surpass the United States as the world's largest economy by 2020 (in terms of GDP per capita however, the US is expected to still have the lead, due to the large population of China).China's military power is also growing.Critics claim that it is possible for China and the United States to be equal superpowers by 2030.In terms of technology, the Chinese space program intends to execute a manned landing on the Moon by 2025
Edited sentence: China is building a blue-water navy--the People's Liberation Army Navy--to enforce its demands on Taiwan.China is predicted to surpass the United States as the world's largest economy by 2020 (however, due to the large population of China, the GDP per capita would not surpass the one of the United States).China is preparing to vastly expand its nuclear power program.The Chinese space program intends to execute a manned landing on the Moon by 2025.The People's Republic of China has stated it intends to take back Taiwan under Chinese rule at latest by 2020 and has notified Taiwan regarding this deadline.Thus it appears that it is possible that by 2030 China and the United States could be equal superpowers.With this vast expansion of China's economic power, its military expenditures are steadily growing