Original sentence: Although Gran Turismo is widely considered the best driving simulation available for the PlayStation or PlayStation 2, it is not without its drawbacks
Edited sentence: Although Gran Turismo is widely considered the best driving simulation (Though most experienced race drivers scoff at the use of "simulation" in relation to an arcade-like driving game such as GT4) available for the PlayStation or PlayStation 2, it is not without its drawbacks.For the more discerning player, it is apparent that several of the engine sounds are incorrect, notable turbo sounds in normally-asperated cars, V-8 sounds in inline-sixes and vice-versa, etc