Original sentence: "  The military forces of the United States invaded Afghanistan and then Iraq." Approximately one month after the attacks the USA led a wide coalition of international forces into Afghanistan in pursuit of al-Qaeda forces and to topple the Taliban Government for harboring the organization.A detention center at Guantanamo Bay Cuba was set up to house alleged terrorists captured on the field of battle in the "War on Terrorism" worldwide.According to the official 9/11 Commission Report, nineteen men affiliated with Osama bin Laden and Al-Qaeda, a loose network of Sunni Islamist militants, simultaneously hijacked four U.Many countries introduced tough anti-terrorism legislation and froze bank accounts suspected of being used to fund terrorism.The Bush administration subsequently ushed in a new "War on Terrorism," claiming that "the truth of the matter is, they hate us, and they hate freedom, and they hate people who embrace freedom.The book follows the narrator, 9-year old Oskar Schell, whose father was in the upper floors of the World Trade Center when jets crashed into the Twin Towers
Edited sentence: " Approximately one month after the attacks the USA led a wide coalition of international forces into Afghanistan in pursuit of al-Qaeda forces and to topple the Taliban Government for harboring the terrorist organization.A detention center at Guantanamo Bay Cuba was set up to house terrorist captured on the field of battle in the War on Terrorism world wide.A new War on Terror was subsequently ushered in by the Bush administration because, among other reasons offered, the perpetrators of terror were said to hate the freedom of Americans.According to the official 9/11 Commission Report, nineteen men affiliated with Osama bin Laden and Al-Qaeda, a loose network of Sunni Islamist terrorists, simultaneously hijacked four U.Many countries introduced tough anti-terrorism legislation and took action to cut off terrorist finances, including the freezing of bank accounts suspected of being used to fund terrorism.The book follows the narrator, 9-year old Oskar Schell, whose father was in the upper floors of the World Trade Center when terrorists crashed jets into the Twin Towers.The military forces of the United States went on the offensive in Afghanistan and then Iraq