Original sentence: He held many official positions in the Nizam's Darbar, Army and Administration Offices.He was a poet in Farsi and was very fond of playing Shikaar.He was given military training to learn various arts and technique of military officers in command to serve the Nizam's Army Forces.His education was given privately by English speaking teachers and professors.Jahangir Jung died in Hyderabad, before 9th November 1915.Nawab Mir Khudrath Nawaz Jung Bahadur (1896–1971) was the youngest son of Nawab Mir Jahangir Ali Khan Bahadur, Jahangir Jung Bahadur who received Delhi Durbar silver medal in 1911
Edited sentence: He held many prestigious official positions in the Nizam's Darbar, Army and Administration Offices.He was an excellent poet in Farsi and was very fond of playing Shikaar.He was given Military training to learn various arts and technique of Military Officers in command to serve the Nizam's Army Forces.His education was given privately by the prominent English teachers, professors and by Moallim-e-Urdu and Farsi and since his early childhood he was the most favorite student of his teachers.Jahangir Jung died at Hyderabad, before 9th November 1915.Nawab Mir Khudrath Nawaz Jung Bahadur (1896–1971) He was the youngest son of Nawab Mir Jahangir Ali Khan Bahadur, Jahangir Jung Bahadur who received Delhi Durbar silver medal in 1911