Original sentence: He worked with a Toronto-based television musicial variety show, Music Machine, for approximately two years, after which he worked with Garry Peterson (drummer for The Guess Who) in an unrecorded R&B band, Delphia.band, Law (not to be confused with the later Paul Rodgers - Kenney Jones band of the same name)--and recorded two albums them, on the Goldhawke record label, owned by Roger Daltrey
Edited sentence: Following his time with The James Gang, Kenner worked with a Toronto-based television musicial variety show, Music Machine, for approximately two years, after which he worked with Garry Peterson (drummer for The Guess Who) in an unrecorded R&B band, Delphia.band, Law, and recorded two albums them, on the Goldhawke record label, owned by Roger Daltrey