Original sentence: During the initial training, NST recruits are given a marketing survey and sometimes paid to sit through interviews and answer questions for the purpose of overseas recruitment.For new NSTs, there are a substantial amount of unpaid hours spent with documentation and grading in addition to the teaching hours, because teachers are reimbursed by the hours actually taught only.This includes an apartment deposit, the first months rent, a scooter, and household appliances.Three types of documentation must be filled in order for pay to be received: a class book that must be signed, a homework folder, and a sheet which must be filled in with the specific number of hours taught per class level
Edited sentence: Besides survival Chinese phrases and accustoming themselves to a new area and culture, professional demands are also high.During the initial training, NST recruits are  given an extensive marketing survey and sometimes paid to sit through interviews and answer questions for the purpose of overseas recruitment.Fresh NSTs during this first month often accustom themselves rigorously to new conditions.Half of this 20 percent for the six months of the following tax year will be refunded, but only during the  year after the following year.If the card is not punched, or punched late, a fine will be deducted from the salary each time.If the teacher completes six months of work during a given tax year, then half of this is always reimbursed, but if there does not exist six months to work upon arrival during a given tax year- for example, the NST arrives in August, then there is no refund for that tax year and additionally, the NST must continue to pay 20 percent for the first six months of the following tax year.The Hess curriculum is intense and required to be taught extremely quickly.There is a class book that must be signed, a homework folder which must be filled in, and a sheet which must be filled in with the specific number of hours taught per class level.There is a substantial amount of unpaid hours spent with documentation and grading in addition to the teaching hours, because teachers are reimbursed by the hours actually taught only.This includes an apartment deposit, the first  months rent, a scooter, and household appliances, although beds are usually provided.Three types of documentation must be filled in order for pay to be received