Original sentence: Naima Mora: has modeled for various magazines and is lead vocalist for the band Chewing Pics
Edited sentence: Naima Mora:collected all her prizes and is signed with Basic Model Managment and 301 Model Managment.She has also modeled for various magazines  and is lead vocalist for the band Chewing Pics.She has recieved a show card in fashion week SS09 and walked in Project Runway