Original sentence: Serbs, Jews, and Roma in the neighboring Independent State of Croatia (Nezavisna Država Hrvatska, or NDH, or Kingdom of Croatia) were subjected to a large-scale genocide, particularly in the infamous Jasenovac concentration camp, for not complying with the Nazi and Ustaše racial policies.. Estimates of the numbers of ethnic Serbs killed at Independent State of Croatia  range from 300,000 and 700,000, with the most reliable estimates falling in the range of 330,000-390,000 (Yugoslav Federal Government after the war estimated around 700,000 victims)
Edited sentence: Serbs, Jews, and Roma in the neighboring Independent State of Croatia (Nezavisna Država Hrvatska, or NDH, or Kingdom of Croatia) were subjected to a large-scale genocide, particularly in the infamous Jasenovac concentration camp, for not complying with the Nazi and Ustaše racial policies.. Estimates of the numbers of ethnic Serbs killed at the camp range from 300,000 and 700,000, with the most reliable estimates falling in the range of 330,000-390,000 (Yugoslav Federal Government after the war estimated around 700,000 victims)