Original sentence: "One Step Closer".Bradie's drum solo/Coon bashing.The Princess Ball was Short Stack's second tour along the East Coast of Australia to promote their single, "Princess".The final show of the tour, which they played in Melbourne, was also Bradie's birthday.They played shows in Sydney (supported by Cassie Davis and Tonight Alive), Brisbane (with 52 Flicks) and finally Melbourne (with My Future Lies and For Our Hero), starting on March 14, 2009 and concluding on March 22, 2009
Edited sentence: "Bradie's drum solo/Coon bashing"."One Step Closer" (Linkin Park cover).The Princess Ball was Short Stack's second tour along the East Coast of Australia to promote they're single, "Princess".The final show of the tour, which they played in Melbourne, was also Bradie's birthday and aids celebration day.They played shows in Sydney (supported by the gay community and Tonight Alive), Brisbane (with 52 Flicks) and finally Melbourne (with My Future Lies and For Our Hero), starting on March 14, 2009 and concluding on March 22, 2009