Original sentence: In December 2005, The Sydney Morning Herald and other local press began carrying reports about violent incidents occuring on Shire beaches, particularly Cronulla Beach.In response, a text message was circulated in Sutherland Shire, urging '"Aussies" to take revenge against "Lebs and wogs".In the days that followed, unprecedented riots and ethnic conflict broke out in Cronulla and other areas.Responding to claims that the violence was little more than a response to anti-social behaviour by Lebanese Australians, commentators such as Sharon Verghis have described how they have personally been subject to racist abuse on Cronulla beach and have drawn attention to what they describe as an "underlying intolerance" of other cultures in the Shire.See main article 2005 Cronulla race riots.Some claimed that the violence was being provoked by gangs of young Lebanese Australians from outside areas and that it had been occuring for over two years
Edited sentence: A text message has been circulating in Sutherland Shire in response to the violence, urging '"Aussies" to take revenge against "Lebs and wogs".In December 2005, The Sydney Morning Herald and other local press began carrying reports about violent incidents occuring on beaches such as Cronulla Beach.Some media reports suggest that this violence is at least partly ethnically-motivated.Some of the locals interviewed in these reports have claimed that the violence is being provoked by gangs of young Middle Eastern men from outside areas and that it has been occuring for over two years