Original sentence: Beth Elohim was the first Jewish congregation stablished in Brooklyn and the first on Long Island.In 1860 a former  church building on South First Street was purchased and remodeled foruse as a synagogue, it was afterwards used as a school offered elementary education in English and German, in both secular and religious subjects.The congregation first worshipped in a private hoe on Marcy Avenue
Edited sentence: Beth Elohim was the first Jewish congregation established in Brooklyn and the first on Long Island.In 1860 a former  church building on South First Street was purchased and remodeled for use as a synagogue, it was afterwards used as a school offered elementary education in English and German, in both secular and religious subjects.The congregation first worshiped in a private home on Marcy Avenue