Original sentence: Prominent WAGs of 2006 included Victoria Beckham, wife of former England captain David Beckham, whom the New Yorker described as "Queen of the WAGs"  and the Sunday Times as "the original Wag" ; Cheryl Cole, née Tweedy (sometimes referred to as "Chezza"), of the group Girls Aloud, who married Ashley Cole in July 2006 ("Wag weds" <ref>Mirror, 16 July 2006</ref>); Coleen McLoughlin, girlfriend of Wayne Rooney, who was described as a "chavette" and, according to the tabloid newspaper The Sun, a "super WAG" ; and Carly Zucker, fiancée of Joe Cole, who was a fitness instructor, described by Susie Whally in the Sunday Times as a "new WAG on the block [who] has set the tone for the season's most wanted muscles"
Edited sentence: Prominent WAGs of 2006 included Victoria Beckham, wife of former England captain David Beckham, whom the New Yorker described as "Queen of the WAGs"  and the Sunday Times as "the original Wag" ; Cheryl Cole, née Tweedy (sometimes referred to as "Chezza"), of the group Girls Aloud, who married Ashley Cole in July 2006 ("Wag weds" <ref>Mirror, 16 July 2006</ref>); Coleen McLoughlin, girlfriend of Wayne Rooney, who was a noted "chavette" and, according to the tabloid newspaper The Sun, a "super WAG" ; and Carly Zucker, fiancée of Joe Cole, who was a fitness instructor, described by Susie Whally in the Sunday Times as a "new WAG on the block [who] has set the tone for the season's most wanted muscles"