Original sentence: In 1901, upon the advice of Rafael Kubelik, she went to Sevcik, in Prague.Marie Hall (born April 8, 1884 - died 1956) was an English violinist.Ralph Vaughan-Williams wrote 'The Lark Ascending' for Marie Hall, and dedicated it to her.She also received instruction from Edward Elgar in 1894, from August Wilhelmj, in London, in 1896; from Max Mossel, in Birmingham, in 1898, and from Professor Kruse in 1900.She played for the first time at Prague in November, 1902; Vienna in January, 1903, and made her London debut on February 16, 1903, scoring a success in all these places.She played the Viotti Stradivarius, which is now among the exhibited instruments in the Ashmolean Museum, Oxford.She possessed a technique, which she believed was entirely due to Sevcik's teaching.She was born at 15 Victoria Street in Newcastle-on-Tyne, England.While she appeared to be not very strong physically, she proved herself strong enough to engage upon long tours and perform exacting programs without fatigue
Edited sentence: In 1901, upon the advice of Kubelik, she went to Sevcik, in Prague.Marie Hall died in Cheltenham in 1956.Marie Hall was born on April 8, 1884, at 15 Victoria Street in Newcastle-on-Tyne, England.Ralph Vaughan-Williams wrote the exquisite 'The Lark Ascending' for Marie Hall, and dedicated it to her.She also received instruction from Edward Elgar in 1894, from Wilhelmj, in London, in 1896; from Max Mossel, in Birmingham, in 1898, and from Professor Kruse in 1900.She played for the first time at Prague in November, 1902; Vienna in January, 1903, and made her London debut on February 16 1903, scoring an instantaneous success in all these places.She played the wonderful Viotti Stradivarius, which is now among the prized instruments in the Ashmolean Museum, Oxford.She possessed a most remarkable technique, which she believed was entirely due to Sevcik's wonderful teaching.She was also successful on her visit to America.She was easily the foremost living English woman violinist of her time.While she appeared to be not very strong physically, she possessed a wonderful tone and proved herself strong enough to engage upon long tours, and perform exacting programs without fatigue