Original sentence: According to its critics, the church was soliciting the church members (including non-chinese members) to buy Ho Yeow Sun's secular chinese pop music albums.Ho also received the Outstanding Youth of the World Award in 2003 at Denmark.Ho won numerous musical awards, including topping the Billboard dance chart in the United States.In 2003, the public in Singapore caught the attention of Ho Yeow Sun in a sensationalized local media.She is a professional counselor with an M.She is popular among the world’s chinese communities.They alleged that she called herself a pastor and portrayed her action negatively, despite the fact that pastor refers to those who have served higher ministerial responsibilities, in which she served on.in Counseling, and frequently offers counseling over radio and magazines in China, Taiwan and Singapore
Edited sentence: CHCSA is a non-profit charitable organisation with 800 volunteers and 25 full-time staff.CHCSA was also the first international aid-relief team to reach Banda Aceh to offer aid during the Boxing Day Tsunami.In March 1996, Sun Ho founded the City Harvest Community Services Association to reachout to people from all walks of life.She is a professional counsellor with a M.She is among the world’s chinese communities.She won numberous musical awards, including topping the Billboard dance chart in the United States.Sun Ho also received the Outstanding Youth of the World Award in 2003 at Denmark.These include the elderly, terminally-ill, youths and children.Through CHCSA's services, more than 5,000 people are being reached on a regular basis.in Counselling, and frequently offers counselling over radio and magazines in China, Taiwan and Singapore