Original sentence: He also plays in a band called Cranky George.He played cello in the song 'Place Your Hand' from Melissa Etheridge's 1992 album Never Enough, on the EP for Rain Phoenix's band papercranes, and on the score to Mission: Impossible III (2006).In 2007, Mulroney voiced Green Lantern Hal Jordan in the animated series The Batman in the season 5 episode "Ring Toss".Mulroney (cello and mandolin) and his brother Kieran (violin and accordion) were both members of the punk-folk band Low and Sweet Orchestra which included members of The Pogues and The Circle Jerks.Mulroney is an accomplished cello player, and in 2005 appeared alongside Boyd Tinsley for Alanis Morissette's show at the House of Blues in Hollywood
Edited sentence: He also plays in a band called  Cranky George.He played cello in the song 'Place Your Hand' from Melissa Etheridge's 1992 Album 'Never Enough', on the EP for Rain Phoenix's band papercranes, and on the score to 'Mission: Impossible III' (2006).In 2007, Mulroney voice famous Green Lantern Hal Jordan in the animated series The Batman in the season 5 episode "Ring Toss".Mulroney (cello and mandolin) and his brother Kieran (violin and accordion) were both members of the punk-folk band Low and Sweet Orchestra which included members of the Pogues and the Circle Jerks and released one of the mid-ninety's under heard gems "Good-bye to All That".Mulroney is an accomplished cello player, and in 2005 appeared alongside Dave Matthews Band violinist Boyd Tinsley for Alanis Morissette's American Express sponsored show at the House of Blues in Hollywood