Original sentence: Following a promising show early in the 2006 season, he suffered a season ending leg injury.Jason Winderlich (born October 20, 1984) is an Australian rules footballer, currently a young midfielder for Essendon.The 22 year old is being touted by coaching staff as a big improver after recovery, for the upcoming 2007 season in which Jason has earned a place in the Don's starting midfield group
Edited sentence: Following a promising show early in the 2006 season, he suffered an unfortunate season ending leg injury.Jason Winderlich (born October 20, 1984) is an Australian rules footballer.Jason Winderlich is a young midfield player for Essendon.Since the 07 season has began jason has earned a place in the dons starting midfield group, a showing of the talent he contains.The 22 year old is being touted by coaching staff as a big improver after recovery, for the upcoming 2007 season