Original sentence: The extent of this mobilisation of women offers evidence of the political nature and potential of a supposedly "unpolitical hearth".The film's focus is on personal accounts rather than the wider context of the women's movement, class struggle and politics.The film's interviews with descendants of the strikers establish the link between the Glasgow Rent Strike and the women's movement of the 1910s.The interviewees describe their own lives and education as an informed and highly conscious political upbringing
Edited sentence: The astonishing extent of this mobilisation of women offers dramatic evidence of the political nature and potential of a supposedly unpolitical hearth, although the intimacy of the film's scope, and its focus on particular and personal accounts, prevents it from describing interactions between the women's movement, class struggle and the politics of European nation states.The film's interviews with descendants of the strikers establish the link between the Glasgow rent strike and the women's movement of the 1910s.The interviewees do, however, describe their own lives and education as an informed and highly conscious political upbringing