Original sentence: It is one of the few American conservatories to be completely attached to a liberal arts college, allowing students the opportunity to pursue degrees in both music and a traditional liberal arts subject via the five year Double-Degree program.It was founded in 1865 and is the second oldest conservatory and oldest continually operating conservatory in the United States.Like the rest of Oberlin College, the student body of the conservatory is almost exclusively undergraduate.The Oberlin Conservatory of Music is a music conservatory in Oberlin College in Oberlin, Ohio
Edited sentence: It is one of the few American conservatories to be completely attached to a liberal arts college (Oberlin College).Oberlin College and Conservatory pride themselves on being almost exclusively undergraduate.Students of Oberlin Conservatory enter a very broad network within the music world, as the school's alumni can be found in most major professional ensembles.The Oberlin Conservatory of Music, located on the campus of Oberlin College in Oberlin, Ohio, was founded in 1865 and is the second oldest conservatory and oldest continually operating conservatory in the United States.This allows students the opportunity to seriously pursue degrees in both music and a traditional liberal arts subject via the five year Double-Degree program