Original sentence: According to reports, 100,000 people participated in the Khalistan referendum in Brampton on September 19 2022.Organizers claim about 110,000 Sikhs cast ballots in favor of an independent nation
Edited sentence: 20% of the adult Sikh population in Canada, or about 110,000 Sikhs, cast ballots in favor of an independent nation.According to reports, 100,000 people participated in the Khalistan referendum in Brampton on September 19 2022 to support the need for a separate country for Sikhs