Original sentence: Black Lamb and Grey Falcon (1941), an 1,181-page classic of travel literature, pro-Serb in its point of view, giving an account of a trip to Yugoslavia in 1937, interwoven with Balkan history and ethnography
Edited sentence: Black Lamb and Grey Falcon (1941)  This 1,181-page classic of travel literature is a rather pro-Serb  account of a trip to Yugoslavia in 1937