Original sentence: He has many fans among the Persian-speaking people of Afghanistan.He is also popular because he sang Ghazal of Iqbal (Allama Iqbal).Nashenas (Persian:ناشناس) (also spelled as Nashnaz and Nashinas) (born Sadiq Fitrat- صادق فطرت) is a popular singer whose albums consist of Pashto, Persian and Urdu songs.Though he is a native of Afghanistan, he is popular among the populations of both Afghanistan and Pakistan specially in Pashto-speaking areas like the North West Frontier of Pakistan (NWFP) province and Quetta and its suburban Pashto speaking areas Balochistan Province of Pakistan
Edited sentence: Even if he is also popular becasue he has also sing Ghazal of Iqbal (Allama Iqbal)  He has many fans among the Persian-speaking people of Afghanistan.Nashenas (Persian:ناشناس) (also spelled as Nashnaz and Nashinas) (born Sadiq Fitrat- صادق فطرت) is a popular  singer whose albums consist of Pashto, Persian and Urdu songs.Though he is a native of Afghanistan, he is popular among the populations of both Afghanistan and Pakistan specially in pushto speaaking areas like North West Frontier of Pakistan (NWFP) province and Quetta and its suburbian Pushto speaking areas Balochistan Province of Pakistan