Original sentence: Energy Australia Stadium is the home ground of the Newcastle United Jets and the Newcastle Knights.It also broke the record set against the same club earlier in the season on New Years Day, where a crowd of 20,980 turned up to see a 2-0 loss..
Edited sentence: Energy Australia Stadium is the homeground of the Newcastle United Jets and the Newcastle Knights.It also broke the record set against the same club earlier in the season on New Years Day, where a regular-season record crowd for the A-League outside of Sydney, Melbourne or Queensland of 20,980 turned up to see a 2-0 loss.. Energy Australia Stadium is in drastic need of an upgrade to be able to host international match for various sports and wrold cup matches for Football.Prime Minister John Howard is seen in the majority of News South Wales as being conflicted as he gives money for upgrades of his teams he supports but not to others