Original sentence: Newspaper outlets include The Glaswegian a free paper covering the greater Glasgow area, The Extra which is another local free paper covering Glasgow South and Eastwood and lastly Eastern Eye Scotland is a tabloid relating news of Asian showbiz businesses, such as Bollywood.Radio Ramadan is another station broadcasting during the beginnings of the religious months of Ramadan when Eid is about to commence.This is the story of a second generation Asian man, who falls in love with a white girl
Edited sentence: Newspapers include The Glaswegian a free paper covering the greater Glasgow area, The Extra which is another local free paper covering Glasgow South and Eastwood and lastly Eastern Eye Scotland, which is a tabloid relating news of Asian showbiz businesses, such as Bollywood.Radio Ramadan is another station broadcasting at the beginning of the religious months of Ramadan when Eid is about to commence.This is the story of a second-generation Asian man, who falls in love with a white girl