Original sentence: Cowasji Shavaksha Dinshaw (Adenwalla), (1827-1900), was a Parsi trader who emigrated from Surat/Bombay to Aden around 1855, and went on to develop that town into a thriving port city
Edited sentence: Cowasji Shavaksha Dinshaw (Adenwalla) (1827–1900) was a Parsi trader who emigrated from Surat/Bombay to Aden around 1855, and went on to develop that town into a thriving port city