Original sentence: Also the first ever men's rugby, which is a club sport, not a varsity sport, team won state in 2008, and then the following two years as well, in 2009 and 2010.In 2009 and 2010, the women's Swimming & Diving team scored top 2 at the state meet overall, state runner-up in 2010.The men's and women's Swimming/Diving coach Steve Bowyer is a repeat winner of the Coach of the Year award for his consecutive successful seasons.The men's baseball program has achieved Conference Championship status back to back in 2009 and 2010.The men's team broke the 200 yard Medley Relay Division 1 State Record at the State Meet in 2010.The rugby team has won the Division 1 State Championship twice in its three years in existence.Though success is found in the men's and women's swimming/diving programs, emphasis is put on the failing football program
Edited sentence: Also the first ever mens Rugby, which is a club sport, not a varsity sport, team won state in 2008, and then the following two years as well, in 2009 and 2010.In 2009 & 2010, the Women's Swimming & Diving team scored top 2 at the state meet overall, state runner up in 2010.The Men's Baseball program has achieved Conference Championship Status back to back in 2009 and 2010 and will have another great run this year (2011).The Men's and Women's Swimming/Diving coach Steve Bowyer is a repeat winner of the Coach of the Year award for his consecutive successful seasons.The Men's team broke the 200 yard Medley Relay Division 1 State Record at the State Meet in 2010.The Rugby team has won the Division 1 State Championship twice in it's three years in existence.Though success is found in the Men's and Women's Swimming/Diving programs, emphasis is put on the failing football program