Original sentence: Named after Sorrento on the Bay of Naples, the allure of Sorrento Terrace is its situation and the view across Killiney Bay to the Wicklow Mountains, the Great Sugar Loaf taking the place of Mount Vesuvius
Edited sentence: Named after Sorrento on the Bay of Naples, the allure of Sorrento Terrace is its situation and the breathtaking view across Killiney Bay to the Wicklow Mountains, the Great Sugar Loaf taking the place of Mount Vesuvius