Original sentence: --in this case, it is an observable, light-emitting 'structure' built by an intelligent race.A naked singularity almost appears in the six episode OAV series Diebuster.The potential usefulness of these postulated objects as a gateway plot device has not escaped authors; they play a part in  Peter Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, in particular in the Third book, "The Naked God".The show's Science advisor; however, stated it was more in common with a black hole, but the production staff wanted to avoid public misconceptions about the nature of black holes.There can be confusion between these singularities and black holes: in the two-part Battlestar Galactica series finale, "Daybreak", the Cylon Colony is located in orbit around a naked singularity
Edited sentence: A naked singularity almost appears in Diebuster.In the "Daybreak" episode of Battlestar Galactica, the Cylon Colony is located in orbit around a naked singularity.In the third book Peter Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, The Naked God, a naked singularity turns out to be an observable, light-emitting "structure" built by an intelligent race