Original sentence: His Gorse Trilogy - three novels about a devious sexual predator and conman - are not generally well thought of critically, although Graham Greene said that the first was 'the best book written about Brighton' and the second (Mr
Edited sentence: His Gorse Trilogy - three novels about a devious sexual predator and conman, the character of whom owes something to the  psychopath Neville Heath - are not generally well thought of critically, although Graham Greene said that the first was 'the best book written about Brighton' and the second (Mr