Original sentence: Although it has been outlawed in some European countries, most legal systems permit parents to discipline their children however they see fit, implying a distinction between reasonable punishment and abuse.In the modern world, corporal punishment remains a common way of disciplining children
Edited sentence: Although this has been outlawed in some European countries, most legal systems defend the rights of the parent to discipline their child however they see fit, distinguishing between reasonable punishment and abuse.In the modern world corporal punishment remains a common way of disciplining children