Original sentence: In March 2017, Bowling Green was co-named Evacuation Day Plaza, which was marked by the erection of an illuminated street sign, commemorating the location of a pivotal event in the American Revolutionary War that ended a seven-year occupation by British troops.On November 25, 1783, a U.The park was described in 1926 as having "walks, benches, sumac trees and poorly-kept [sic] lawns", as well as a fountain in the center used by local children to cool off in the summer.The pool and fountain in the park were modified temporarily when the park was used as a filming location for The Sorcerer's Apprentice in early June 2009.The renovation faced a lack of funds during the 1975 New York City fiscal crisis but was completed in the late 1970s.soldier managed to rip down the British flag at Bowling Green and replace it with the Stars and Stripes—an apparently difficult feat, since the British had greased the flagpole
Edited sentence: In March 2017, Bowling Green was co-named Evacuation Day Plaza, which was marked by the erection of an illuminated street sign, commemorating the location of a pivotal event in the American Revolutionary War that ended a brutal seven-year occupation by British troops.On November 25, 1783, a U.The park was described in 1926 as having "walks, benches, sumac trees and poorly-kept lawns", as well as a fountain in the center used by local children to cool off in the summer.The pool and fountain in the park were temporarily modified when the park was used as a filming location for The Sorcerer's Apprentice in early June 2009.The renovation faced a lack of funds during the 1975 New York City fiscal crisis, but was completed in the late 1970s.soldier managed to rip down the British flag at Bowling Green and replace it with the Stars and Stripes — an apparently difficult feat, since the British had greased the flagpole