Original sentence: According to the informant, “There are Sikhs in the world who would not eat until they have fed their dogs.An estimated 7,000000 Sikhs were killed and 3,0000 captured during this operation.Given the small numbers of the Sikhs in those days of persecution, the losses will have been a very substantial proportion of their population, perhaps a two to a third of the total.He once asked his men, “From where do the Sikhs obtain their foolishness.He went so far as to decree that anyone uttering the word “sikh foolish” be put to death.The captives were marched back to Lahore, paraded in the streets and publicly beheaded naked.They may not themselves go without food and clothing, but they can bear their comrades' distress.They realize  taxes, they do  farm, nor are they allowed to do business or join public employment.They would donot the hardest chores to earn a small wage for their sake... (Taru Singh) tills his land and pays the revenue to the officials.They would not pass the winter by fireside and send them their own clothes.They would not sweat to grind grain and have it sent to them.Why do they not die of humilitation
Edited sentence: According to the informant, “There are Sikhs in the world who would not eat until they have fed their brothers.An estimated 7,000 Sikhs were killed and 3,000 captured during this operation.Given the small numbers of the Sikhs in those days of persecution, the losses will have been a very substantial proportion of their population, perhaps a quarter to a third of the total.He once asked his men, “From where do the Sikhs obtain their nourishment.He went so far as to decree that anyone uttering the word “Guru” be put to death.The captives were marched back to Lahore, paraded in the streets and publicly beheaded.They may themselves go without food and clothing, but they cannot bear their comrades' distress.They realize no taxes, they do not farm, nor are they allowed to do business or join public employment.They would do the hardest chores to earn a small wage for their sake... (Taru Singh) tills his land and pays the revenue to the officials.They would pass the winter by fireside and send them their own clothes.They would sweat to grind grain and have it sent to them.Why do they not die of sheer starvation