Original sentence: However the rise of religious fundamentalism in Muslim-dominated Kashmir, Hindu-dominated Jammu and Buddhist-dominated Ladakh poses a grave danger to the security of the region where mixed populations live in regions such as Doda and Kargil.Pakistan views the entire Kashmir region as a disputed territory while India refuses to accept Kashmir as a disputed territory and claims Kashmir is an integral part of India according to the Indian constitution, since at the time of India's division Kashmir was given to India based upon a vote of the people and the King's will
Edited sentence: However the rise of religious fundamentalism in Muslim-dominated Kashmir, Hindu-dominated Jammu and Buddhist-dominated Ladakh poses a grave danger to the security of the region where mixed populations live in regions such as Doda.Pakistan views the entire Kashmir region as a disputed territory while India refuses to accept Kashmir as a disputed territory and claims Kashmir is an integral part of India according to the Indian constitution, since at the time of India's division Kashmir was given to India based upon the King's (hindu) will, how ever the majority muslim population of kashmir wanted to be a part of Pakistan (Pakistan ascerts) but the referendum never took place as indian army started flooding into the valley (3 months after independence of India and Pakistan from the British Raj) after indian leaders said the king of kashmir had invited them for security and have yet to leave Kashmir []