Original sentence: Although the entire survey is not viewable by the public (it still exists) the conclusions of the survey are presented by Technocracy Incorporated mainly in the Technocracy Study Course (which contains a lengthy synopsis of the Energy survey) after the Technate design for North America chapters in the back of the Technocracy Study Course.Technocracy Incorporated.The current digital copy extant does not contain the energy survey however it is present in all the paper copies of the Technocracy Study Course.When this survey was completed Technocracy Incorporated was started to inform the public of the findings of the survey in order to create a Technate as the basis of a new type of society
Edited sentence: Although the entire survey is not viewable by the public (it still exists) the conclusions of the survey are presented by Technocracy Incorporated mainly in the Technocracy Study Course (which contains a synopsis of the Energy survey).Technocracy movement.When this survey was completed, the Technocracy movement was started to inform the public of the findings of the survey in order to create a Technate as the basis of a new type of society