Original sentence: Altrusa International, Inc (Altrusa) is an international non-profit organization focused on community service, founded in 1917 by Dr.Altrusa is a NGO with consultative status on the Roster of ECOSOC.As of January 2008, Altrusa has around 10,000 members in 383 clubs from 13 countries around the world, including Canada, New Zealand and the United States, and is an official observer to the United Nations
Edited sentence: Altrusa International, Inc (Altrusa) is an international non-profit organization focused on community service.As of January 2008, Altrusa had around 10,000 members in 383 clubs from 13 countries around the world, including Canada, New Zealand and the United States.It is an official observer to the United Nations, and an NGO with consultative status on the Roster of ECOSOC.It was founded in 1917   by Dr