Original sentence: Almost all British gamers have read White Dwarf, nicknamed by some as "Waste Drain", regularly at some point in their lives and some of them develop an opinion as to when White Dwarf was "good".For its critics the current successor to White Dwarf is Valkyrie and there are hopes that this magazine will replace the hole left in the hobby by this well-remembered magazine.Not manyare happy with the current incarnation, which is often little more than a house catalogue, though it still maintains a fanbase
Edited sentence: Almost all British gamers have read White Dwarf, nicknamed by some as "Waste Drain", regularly at some point in their lives and pretty much all of them have an opinion as to when White Dwarf was "good".Few are happy with the current incarnation, which is often little more than a house catalogue.For British role-players the current successor to White Dwarf is Valkyrie and there are hopes that this magazine will replace the hole left in the hobby by this well-remembered magazine