Original sentence: My Santa Clarita - Your City, Your Site for Newhall and Santa Clarita.Newhall was the site of theNewhall Incident, in which four California Highway Patrol officers were shot to death on April 6, 1970 during a traffic stop of two heavily armed career criminals.This led to increased emphasis on officer safety both within the CHP and across the nationna d currenlty working afer going bankrup to build new master plan community of Newhall Ranch, California.com, Your Neighborhood News, covering Newhall
Edited sentence: Newhall was the site of the Newhall Incident, in which four California Highway Patrol officers were shot to death on April 6, 1970 during a traffic stop of two heavily armed career criminals.This led to increased emphasis on officer safety both within the CHP and across the nation