Original sentence: Her name is Jeeva Rachelusun Pragash, known for her good english language skill but poor in socializing with other students.On January 2014, Kolej had made a historical moment after receiving first Indian race student after 35 years of its establishment.She moved out from Kolej on early 2015 for an unknown reason
Edited sentence: February 17 2014, Kolej had  a historical moment after receiving first Indian race student after 35 years of its establishment.Her name is Jeeva Rachelusun Pragas, known for her good english language skill but amazing in socializing with other students.She had many friends and all of them miss her dearly.She moved out from Kolej on early 2015 due to her awesomeness that was overwhelming.She was also famous for having a relationship with an idiot who shall not be named