Original sentence: He went on to achieve his first taste of radio success in Pittsburgh, as host of a Top 40 music radio show on station KQV, using the name "Jeff Christie.Limbaugh dropped out of college after only one year.This would have normally made him eligible for the draft, but he was classified 1-Y due to some sort of medical problem, most likely a pilonidal cyst
Edited sentence: Despite heavily criticizing Clinton as a 'draft dodger', Limbaugh himself was found to have avoided military service due to a pilonidal cyst.Limbaugh achieved his first taste of radio success in Pittsburgh, as host of a Top 40 music radio show on station KQV, using the name "Jeff Christie