Original sentence: Rudy Marcozzi acted as Interim Dean during the 2008-2009 school year until Henry Fogel, the former President of the Chicago Symphony,  assumed the post of Dean of CCPA in the Fall of 2009
Edited sentence: Rudy Marcozzi acted as Interim Dean during the 2008-2009 school year until Henry Fogel, the 'glib' and 'controversial' former President of the Chicago Symphony,  assumed the post of Dean of CCPA in the Fall of 2009