Original sentence: " Sher Shah's Mughal army then attacked the fort of Kalinjar, captured it, killing every person inside that fort.As with theologians and court officials of Delhi Sultanate, his advisors counseled in favor of religious violence.If you be slain you become a martyr, if you live you become a ghazi.Shaikh Nizam , for example, counseled, "There is nothing equal to a religious war against the infidels
Edited sentence: He also built the Rohtas Fort on the way.He was the architect of the Grand Trunk Road , connecting Kabul to Chittagong in Bangladesh (he expanded the much older Mauryan era road which still exists today.It is his monetary system of rupiya that we follow and he may have even laid the foundation of the Indian postal service.Sher Shah Suri’s reign was a short chapter in a period dominated by the Mughals, but the greatness of the man is in the fact, that in the 7 years that he was in power, he left a lasting impact