Original sentence: By the end of Morial's second term, New Orleans was no longer viewed by corporate decision-makers as a viable location for large-scale white collar employment, economically impactful entrepreneurial activity was negligible, and city's economy had arrived at a condition of dangerous over-reliance on the tourism sector
Edited sentence: By the end of Morial's second term, New Orleans was no longer viewed by corporate decision-makers as a viable location for large-scale white collar employment, economically impactful entrepreneurial activity was negligible, and the city's economy had arrived at a condition of dangerous over-reliance on the tourism sector.The number of households within the city limits stabilized for the first time since beginning their decline in the 1960s, a significant accomplishment.These real gains enabled a resugence of interest and investment in the city's older historic neighborhoods, and New Orleans did benefit from the nation's increasing interest in urban living