Original sentence: His stage act in a Phoenix, Arizona, nightclub caught the eye of manager Jay Levey, who was "blown away".Levey asked Yankovic if he had considered creating a full band and doing his music as a career
Edited sentence: " Levey asked Yankovic if he had considered creating a full band and doing his music as a career.His stage act in a Phoenix, Arizona, nightclub caught the eye of manager Jay Levey, who was "blown away.The show was not successful at all