Original sentence: Ptolemy I Soter (367 BC–283 BC) was a Macedonian Greek who became the ruler of Egypt (323 BC - 283 BC) and founder of the Ptolemaic dynasty
Edited sentence: Ptolemy I Soter (367 BC–283 BC) was a Macedonian who became the ruler of Egypt (323 BC - 283 BC) and founder of the Ptolemaic dynasty