Original sentence: The museum contains a large collection of stuffed exotic animals collected by the late Major Powell-Cotton on his travels in Africa, and also houses artifacts unearthed in and around Birchington by his daughter, the late Antoinette Powell-Cotton, a keen archeologist
Edited sentence: The museum contains a large collection of stuffed exotic animals collected by Major Powell-Cotton on his travels in Africa, and also houses artifacts unearthed in and around Birchington by his daughter, Antoinette Powell-Cotton, a keen archeologist