Original sentence: She devised a protocol known as the Strange Situation Protocol, still used today to assess attachment patterns in children, as the laboratory portion of a larger study that included extensive home visitations over the first year of the child's life
Edited sentence: She devised a protocol known as the Strange Situation Protocol, still used today to assess attachment patterns in infants and todlers, as the laboratory portion of a larger study that included extensive home visitations over the first year of the child's life