Original sentence: However, about halfway through the movement the cellos begin to play an expressive melody that is eventually taken up by the entire orchestra.The first movement, which is unnamed, begins with the repetition of chords in E minor in minimalist fashion.The work ends with a triumphant affirmation of tonality with an "empty" fifth chord on E.These chords form a recurring theme throughout the movement, inerspersed with motoric episodes which use Schoenberg's harmonic progressions as chordal "gates"
Edited sentence: However, about halfway through the movement the cellos begin to play an expressive melody that is eventually taken up by the entire orchestra, and it could not be farther from the minimalist aesthetic in its long-breathedness and expressivity.The first movement, which is unnamed, begins with the rapid repetition of chords in E minor in standard minimalist fashion.The work ends with a triumphant affirmation of tonality on the chord of E-flat