Original sentence: An official British census in 1844, however, showed that in Jerusalem, Jews were more numerous than Muslims and Christians.Immediately following the adoption of the Partition Plan by the United Nations General Assembly, the Palestinian Arab leadership rejected the plan to create the as-yet-unnamed Jewish state and launched a guerilla war.Recent archeological evidence suggests that the Kingdoms of David and Solomon may have existed.The surrounding Arab states supported the Palestinian Arabs in rejecting both the Partition Plan and the establishment of Israel, and the armies of six Arab nations attacked the State of Israel
Edited sentence: An official British census in 1844, however, showed that in Jerusalem, Jews were more numerous than Muslims and Christians, although Muslims were the vast majority of Palestine and Christians were 28%.Immediately following the adoption of the Partition Plan by the United Nations General Assembly, the Palestinian Arab leadership rejected the plan to create the as-yet-unnamed Jewish state on the grounds that it was their land and they were the majority.The surrounding Arab states supported the Palestinian Arabs in rejecting both the Partition Plan and the establishment of Israel