Original sentence: A lot of new development has been situated along the small river, the Garavogue, most notably the regeneration of J.and Rockwood Parades, consisting of houses, bars and a number of apartments as well as a new footbridge over the river itself
Edited sentence: A lot of new development has been situated along the small river, the Garavogue, most notibly the regeneration of J.It has had to reject the opening of Argos and other high street stores.Other developments in the town include housing estates and apartments.Retail development in the town is not at the high standard of other nearby towns such as the vastly advanced urban centre of Letterkenny.Sligo has not got in its possession enough space to develop.This has led to most of the street appearing vacant and unused.This has not gone down well with the locals who have to travel to Letterkenny to fall into their shopping paradise.Today many people still walk on the footpaths of the street as there is enough room to move without having to walk out onto the street.and Rockwood Parades, consisting of houses, bars and a small number of apartments as well as a new footbridge over the river itself