Original sentence: "  In the Introduction bonus DVD that comes with the game's soundtrack, it's revealed that Tommy has inexplicably began to avoid Ken as he has stopped taking his calls." She then retorts saying, "You, Carl Johnson, are jealous.After escaping from the Mafia in Las Venturas and faking his death (courtesy of CJ), he settles with working as a businessman with Madd Dogg, along with Maccer and Kent Paul.He then leaves Tenpenny with these words: "Be seeing you around...Officer.Jizzy is the biggest pimp in San Fierro who owns a club dubbed the "Pleasure Dome" in Juniper Hollow, San Fierro
Edited sentence: "  In the bonus DVD that comes with the game's soundtrack, it's revealed that Tommy has inexplicably began to avoid Ken as he's stopped taking his calls." She then retorts saying (perhaps even in delusion), "You, Carl Johnson, are jealous.After escaping from the mafia in Los Venturas and faking his death (courtacy of CJ), he settles with working as a buisnessman with Madd Dogg along with Maccer and Kent Paul.He then leaves Tenpenny with these words: "Be seeing you around... Officer.Jizzy is the biggest pimp in town who owns a club dubbed the "Pleasure Dome" in Juniper Hollow, San Fierro