Original sentence: One of the features of the book is that its chapters may be read out of order without confusion.The language used in the book is deliberately informal and aims to convey the beauty of the city and the poignancy of the stories
Edited sentence: One of the greatest features of the book lies in each of its chapters being capable of being read randomly without confusion.The language used in the book is deliberately informal and it brilliantly succeeds in directly conveying the beauty of the city and the poignancy of the stories