Original sentence: Finkelstein went into a close examination of all of Peters' notes and sources, and argued that her work persistently misrepresented or distorted the primary documents.His systematic critique of the book, attacking the two major pillars of Peters’ thesis, which he regarded as a 'threadbare hoax' supported by the 'American intellectual establishment', had a major impact of later reviews of the book, especially those in Great Britain
Edited sentence: Finkelstein mounts a systematic critique of the book, attacking the two major pillars of Peters’ thesis, which he regarded as a 'threadbare hoax' supported by the 'American intellectual establishment'