Original sentence: He stood down in 1992, and was made a life peer that same year, as Baron Weatherill, of North East Croydon in the London Borough of Croydon, but only after a vote forced by 17 left-wing members of Parliament who objected to the terms of the motion calling for Weatherill to receive a "Royal Favour"
Edited sentence: He stood down in 1992, and was made a life peer that same year, as Baron Weatherill, of North East Croydon in the London Borough of Croydon, but only after an unseemly protest by 15 left-wing members of parliament who objected to anyone at all being added to the House of Lords