Original sentence: Frank Mullen, born January 1970, is the singer of the American death metal band Suffocation.On later releases, notably Pierced from Within, his range was extended above a monotonal grunt
Edited sentence: Frank Mullen Born January 1970, is the singer of the American death metal band Suffocation.He is well known for being a charismatic frontman on stage and is famous for "twitching" his hand along to blast beats.On later releases notably Pierced from Within his range was extended above a monotonal grunt