Original sentence: )   l/4/1929  29/5/1931.)  9/2/1925  31/3/1929.1/6/1931  25/10/1931.AA & QMG (QuarterMaster General) & IGC 4 Div (What's AA and IGC   1/10/1932  28/2/1933.Comd Base Arty 3 DB (temp) (What's a DB.Instr 2 Svy Coy AGA (officiating) - 2 Survey Coy - What's AGA.SO "G" Bch AHQ (What was "G" Branch
Edited sentence: AA & QMG (QuarterMaster General) & IGC 4 Div  1/10/1932  28/2/1933.Comd Base Arty 3 DB (temp)  l/4/1929  29/5/1931.Instr 2 Svy Coy AGA (officiating) - 2 Survey Coy  1/6/1931  25/10/1931.SO "G" Bch AHQ (Army HQ Melb)  9/2/1925  31/3/1929