Original sentence: He has also recently appeared in commercials for Sprint/Nextel as fictitious British rock star Ian Westbury.Keating also does commercial and voiceover work, perhaps most famously on an early 1990s Vidal Sassoon commercial, where his British pronunciation of "salon" brought him some notice as well as a spoof on Saturday Night Live
Edited sentence: He has also recently appeared commercials for Sprint/Nextel as fictitious British rock star Ian Westbury.Keating also does commercial and voiceover work, perhaps most famously on an early 1990s Vidal Sassoon commercial, where his pronunciation of "salon" and dashing good looks brought him some notice as well as a spoof on Saturday Night Live