Original sentence: Lagos' presidency has been characterized by such achievements as the signing of Free Trade Agreements with the European Community, the United States and South Korea (thought some of its supporters in the Coalition of Parties for Democracy consider that those agreements contribute to the ecnomic globalization and might have negative effects over the country); improvements in infrastructure and transport; the creation of an unemployment insurance; the AUGE health program; the Chile Barrio housing program; extending compulsory schooling to 12 years; the approval of the first divorce law in Chile; monetary compensation to victims of torture under the Pinochet regime identified in the Valech Report; and, recently, the signing of a new Constitution
Edited sentence: Lagos' presidency has been characterized by such achievements as the signing of Free Trade Agreements with the European Community, the United States and South Korea (thought considering this an achievement is highly debatable with the negative affects globalization has proven to have on the economy and well-being of many countries); improvements in infrastructure and transport; the creation of an unemployment insurance; the AUGE health program; the Chile Barrio housing program; extending compulsory schooling to 12 years; the approval of the first divorce law; monetary compensation to victims of torture under the Pinochet regime; and, recently, the signing of a new Constitution