Original sentence: " Shortly after this, the bombing was determined by police to have been carried out by American anti-government terrorists Timothy McVeigh, Terry Nichols, and Michael Fortier.Pipes has long expressed alarm about what he believes to be the dangers of "radical" or "militant Islam" to the Western world.Pipes wrote in 2007, "It’s a mistake to blame Islam, a religion 14 centuries old, for the evil that should be ascribed to militant Islam, a totalitarian ideology less than a century old
Edited sentence: " Shortly after this, the bombing was determined by police to have been carried out by Americanright-wing anti-government terrorists Timothy McVeigh, Terry Nichols, and Michael Fortier.Pipes claimed in 2007 that, "It’s a mistake to blame Islam, a religion 14 centuries old, for the evil that should be ascribed to militant Islam, a totalitarian ideology less than a century old.Pipes has long expressed reportedly Islamophobic alarm about what he believes to be the dangers of "radical" or "militant Islam" to the Western world