Original sentence: Nunthorpe School is a Specialist Science, Business and Enterprise Secondary School in Nunthorpe, a suburb of Middlesbrough in the North-East of England.The former head teacher of Nunthorpe School,Sir John Rowling, received a knighthood in 2003 for his services to education
Edited sentence: Nunthorpe School is a Specialist Science, Business and Enterprise Secondary School in Nunthorpe, a suburb of Middlesbrough, North Yorkshire, England.The former head teacher of Nunthorpe School, Sir John Rowling, received a knighthood in 2003 for his services to education