Original sentence: It was focused on the database of turtle ecology establishment, which includes distribution and migration patterns of turtles into it and ion the threats to them – like nature and extent of direct exploitation, bycatch rate, impact of coastal management, pollution and others
Edited sentence: It was focused on the database of turtle ecology establishment, which includes distribution and migration patterns of turtles into it and on the threats to them – like the nature and extent of direct exploitation, by-catch rate, impact of coastal management, pollution and others