Original sentence: Horst, Georgia O'Keeffe, Gore Vidal, Sidney Lumet, Salvador Dali, James Stewart,  Marlon Brando, Orson Welles, Norman Mailer, Evelyn Waugh, Erskine Caldwell, Ella Fitzgerald, Beverly Sills, Alfred Stieglitz, Truman Capote, Billie Holiday, James Baldwin, Cesar Romero, Tallulah Bankhead, and Sir Laurence Olivier
Edited sentence: Horst, Georgia O'Keeffe, Gore Vidal, Sidney Lumet, Salvador Dali, James Stewart,  Marlon Brando, Orson Welles, Norman Mailer, Evelyn Waugh, Erskine Caldwell, Ella Fitzgerald, Beverly Sills, Alfred Stieglitz, Truman Capote, Billie Holiday, James Baldwin, Cesar Romero, Tallulah Bankhead, Alfred Lunt, Lynn Fontanne, and Sir Laurence Olivier