Original sentence: A "true inorganic life form" as dubbed by Mbadi, it is a nanomachine-based monstrosity born from unknow origine, but supposed from the surface of Mercury years after the whole planet became covered in uncontrollable nanomachines
Edited sentence: A "true inorganic life form" as dubbed by Mbadi, it is a nanomachine-based monstrosity born from unknown origin, but supposed from the surface of Mercury years after the whole planet became covered in uncontrollable nanomachines