Original sentence: Also available are Federal Financial Aid, Federal Financial Loan, University Loan as well as Work-Study programs.However, top universities as well as local colleges give full scholarships to those judged to have need.Students of different races come from all over the world as well as from every state and territory to obtain an education.Therefore, making a college education in the United States affordable and available to anyone having the capability to study.Tuition fees at top rate institutions are very high.Universities in the United States range from the top level Harvard (founded in 1636) to local community colleges, where any person can get an education
Edited sentence: However, innacurate statements on education costs have caused controversities about the quality of education in the United States.Student of different races come from all over the world as well as from every state and territory to obtain an education.The United States boasts the largest education system in the world and is ranked #1 in Collegiate education system worldwide.There are also available Federal Financial Aid, Federal Financial Loan, University Loan as well as Work-Study programs.Therefore, making a college education in the United States affordable, top-rate, and available to anyone that wants to study.Top Universities as well as local colleges give full scholarships to those judged to have need.Universities in the United States range from the un-rivaled Harvard (founded in 1636, with $23.1 billion endowment) to local community colleges, where any person can get an education