Original sentence: He has a twin brother, Jerome Witkin, a painter, and a son, Kersen Witkin, also a painter.His favorite artist is Giotto.His techniques include scratching the negative, bleaching or toning the print, and using a hands-in-the-chemicals printing technique.{[cn}} His complex tableaux often recall religious episodes or famous classical paintings
Edited sentence: At the place where I stood at the curb, I could see something rolling from one of the overturned cars.He also has a son named Kersen Witkin who is a talented painter in his own right.He employs a highly intuitive approach to the physical process of making the photograph, including scratching the negative, bleaching or toning the print, and an actual hands-in-the-chemicals printing technique.He has a twin brother, Jerome Witkin, who also plays a significant role in the art world for his realistic paintings.His art was often marginalized because of this challenging aspect.His complex tableaux often recall religious episodes or famous classical paintings.His favourite artist is Giotto, but the most obvious artistic influences on his work are Surrealism (particularly Max Ernst) and Baroque art.I bent down to touch the face, to speak to it -- but before I could touch it someone carried me away.It happened on a Sunday when my mother was escorting my twin brother and me down the steps of the tenement where we lived.It stopped at the curb where I stood.It was the head of a little girl.Somehow, in the confusion, I was no longer holding my mother's hand.The accident involved three cars, all with families in them.We were going to church.While walking down the hallway to the entrance of the building, we heard an incredible crash mixed with screaming and cries for help