Original sentence: In 1941, just days before the opening of her first major solo show in Lahore, she became seriously ill and slipped into a coma , and later died around midnight  on December 6th, 1941, leaving behind a large volume of work, and a mystery behind the real reason for death has never been ascertained, something expected in view of the overly sensationalised accounts of Amrita's life in the words of her contemporaries
Edited sentence: In 1941, just days before the opening of her first major solo show in Lahore, she became seriously ill and slipped into a coma , and later died around midnight  on December 6, 1941, leaving behind a large volume of work, and a mystery behind the real reason for death has never been ascertained, something expected in view of the overly sensationalised accounts of Amrita's life in the words of her contemporaries