Original sentence: A few months after Zenon, Raven released her sophomore album, Undeniable, in which she worked with Stevie Wonder.A year after ...Cooper she appeared in Dr.Disney executives decide to re-arrange the show around her.Raven-Symone then auditioned once again for Disney for a TV series orginally called, Absolutely Psychic.She is an African-American actress, singer, dancer, producer, and model.She is best known for the show That's So Raven and as Olivia Kendall on The Cosby Show.The Cheetah Girls, a made for tv Disney movie, was the first in which she was able to sing and dance.This Is My Time was released in 2004 and she is planning on a recording a new album for a 2006 release
Edited sentence: A few months after Zenon, Raven released her sophomore album, Undeniable.A year after Cooper she appeared in Dr.After almost 16 years of hard work, Raven-Symone auditioned once again for Disney for a TV series orginally called, Absolutely Psychic.Disney executives realized the talent that Raven possessed, and re-arranged the show around her.It is also obvious that it was her most popular.Packed with hot songs and cool moves, these darling divas steal the show in this hit Disney Channel movie.She is a multi-talented African-American actress, singer, dancer, producer, and model.She is best known for her silly on-screen behavior in the show That's So Raven and as the cute but impish Olivia Kendall on The Cosby Show.She was fortunate enough to work with legendary Stevie Wonder.The Cheetah Girls was Raven's first movie where she was able to sing and dance.This Is My Time was released in 2004 and she is planning on a recording a new one for a 2006 release