Original sentence: It is on the western edge of the Atlantic Coastal Plain, with low hills rising in the western part of the city.The climate is mild subtropical, moderated by the warming influence of the bay and nearby ocean, with hot summers, chilly winters, and moderate precipitation
Edited sentence: It is on the western edge of the Atlantic Coastal Plain, with gentlly rolling hills rising in the western part of the city.The climate is mild subtropical, moderated by the warming influence of the bay and nearby ocean, with hot summers, mild winters, and moderate precipitation