Original sentence: Fox News and the conservative, Weekly Standard argue that NOW neglects issues related to women in fundamentalist Islamic countries.It also works on other issues of importance to women and children globally.These issues include genocide in Africa, we well as Sharia and other radical Islamic practices harming women
Edited sentence: (All search results are as of 1 February 2008.Bush (677 references), and Wal-Mart (154 references).NOW claims to work on other issues of importance to women and children globally, including genocide in Africa, as well as Sharia and other radical Islamic practices harming women.This is a somewhat spurious claim, however: A search of NOW's web site reveals only 12 references to the term "sharia", 22 references to the term "genocide", and 45 references to the term "genital mutilation" - key issues related to global feminism.This is in stark contrast to the site's plentyful references to issues not directly related to women's rights, such as Iraq (a search term which reveals 342 references), George W