Original sentence: As a startup, Juniper received $6 Million in Funding from AT&T, Anschutz in 1997.It garnered the financial support of over $40 million of Northern Telecom; 3Com; UUNET Technologies, a subsidiary of WorldCom; the Siemens AG/Newbridge Networks alliance; and Ericsson
Edited sentence: As a startup, Juniper received $6 Million in funding from AT&T and the Anschutz Corporation in 1997.It garnered the financial support of over $40 million of Northern Telecom, 3Com, UUNET Technologies, a subsidiary of WorldCom, the Siemens AG/Newbridge Networks alliance; and Ericsson