Original sentence: During her administration of OSHA notable regulatory activity included revised occupational lead exposure standard and promulgation of regulations on workers' "right to know" about workplace hazards.Eula Bingham is an American scientist who is best known as an Assistant Secretary of Labor for Occupational Safety and Health.In recognition of her numerous accomplishments, she has received honors and awards including:.President Jimmy Carter appointed her to head OSHA and she served through his administration, between 1977-1981.She began her career at the University of Cincinnati as a researcher who did pioneering work on chemical carcinogenesis
Edited sentence: At OSHA she was known as a champion for workplace safety.Eula Bingham is an American scientist who is best known as the first head -- Assistant Secretary of Labor of the U.In recognition of her numerous accomplishments she is the recipient of many honors and awards including:.Occupational Safety and Health Administration between 1977-1981.Particularly under her administration much progress was made on controlling toxic chemicals in the workplace, reducing occupational lead exposure and advancing workers' "right to know" about workplace hazards.President Jimmy Carter appointed her and she served through his administration.She began her career at the University of Cincinnati as a research who did pioneering work on chemical carcinogenesis