Original sentence: Elisabeth traveled with few bodyguards, as she was adored by the populace in general.It is generally held that while she was boarding a steamship to Montreux on September 10 1898 in Geneva, Lucheni stabbed her with a needle file (which is now part of the Vienna Sisi Museum's exhibition).Not realising she was hurt and wanting to board as quickly as possible, Elisabeth got to her feet straight way and walked onto the ship, where she later collapsed and died
Edited sentence: Due to her rebellious nature, Elisabeth often refused the aid of police and bodyguards and she was adored by the populace in general.Not realising she was hurt due to her extremely tight corset and wanting to board as quickly as possible, Elisabeth got to her feet straight way and walked onto the ship, where she later collapsed and died.While the Empress and her Lady in Waiting were boarding a steamship to Montreux on September 10 1898 in Geneva, Lucheni ran over to the former and slammed his body against hers, penetrating her chest with a sharp needle file (which is now part of the Vienna Sisi Museum's exhibition)