Original sentence: Ghazala Javed also appeared in stage-shows in Dubai.Her songs “Za lewaney da mena”, “Za da cha khqula ta fikar wari yem”, and “Mena ba kawo Janana mena ba kawo” had a positive critical reception.In 2008, her family also moved to Peshawar due to Taliban rule and subsequent military operations against them by the Pakistan Army.Later in her career, she sang more melodious songs and became known amongst the people of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa and even amongst Pakhtun living abroad.Many people anticipating persecution at the hands of Taliban moved to larger cities of Pakistan to continue their professions.They settled in Peshawar and while there, Ghazala started singing in Pashto Language and subsequently recorded the songs "Baran dy baran dy" and “Lag rasha kana”
Edited sentence: Ghazala Javed also appeared in stage-shows in Dubai and Pakhtun living there welcomed her.Her songs “Za lewaney da mena”, “Za da cha khqula ta fikar wari yem” and “Mena ba kawo Janana mena ba kawo” had delightful effects on her fans.In 2008, her family also shifted to Peshawar due to hardcore Taliban rule and subsequent military operations against them by Pakistan Army.In the later years she sang more melodious songs and became known amongst the people of Khyber Pakhtunkhwa and even amongst Pakhtun living abroad.Many people  anticipating persecution at the hands of Taliban moved to larger cities of Pakistan to continue their professions.People were soon enraptured by her sweet and melodious voice and anxiously waited for her next album.She received listeners from her songs "Baran dy baran dy" and “Lag rasha kana”.They settled in Peshawar and there Ghazala started singing in Pashto Language.Violence erupted in early 2008 and gradually engulfed the whole valley