Original sentence: They were relegated to Division Two after two seasons, but in 1996-97 won promotion to Division One again by finishing third.This move sideways, effectively moved them up a place in the pyramid
Edited sentence: They were relegated to Division Two after two seasons, when current Vice Chairman John PArk was in charge before but in 1996-97 won promotion to Division One again by finishing third.This move sideways, effectively moved them down a place in the pyramid