Original sentence: " At that time a portion of the property was dedicated as the site for a temple, and cornerstones were laid.A meditation chapel with paintings by Jack Garnier of the Sacraments being performed around the world opens onto a Japanese style meditation garden and serves the needs of individuals or small groups of visitors.The entry to the sanctuary is through an etched glass archway depicting the Sacred Grove where Joseph Smith had his initial revelatory experience.The temple was designed by Gyo Obata and evokes the spiral shell of the nautilus with a stainless steel spire that rises.This leads to the gently ascending worshipper's path of textured stone which spirals around its periphery
Edited sentence: "  At that time a portion of the property was dedicated as the site for a temple, and cornerstones were laid.A meditation chapel with paintings by Jack Garnier  of the Sacraments being performed around the world opens onto a Japanese style meditation garden and serves the needs of individuals or small groups of visitors.The entry to the sanctuary is through a beautifully etched glass archway depicting the Sacred Grove where Joseph Smith had his initial revelatory experience.The temple was designed by Gyo Obata and evokes the spiral shell of the Nautilus with a stainless steel spire that rises.This leads to the gently ascending worshiper's path of textured stone which spirals around its periphery