Original sentence: Locking, originally called Campbellocking, was created in LA by Don Campbell in the early 1970's and spread across the country by his crew The Lockers.Other than providing an online community for dancers to create profiles and interact, Dance Jam also provides a place for people to compete in online dance battles and view online tutorials and lessons on how to do popular dance moves.Pinguin" (Rerun on the 1970’s TV sitcom What's Happening.Popping and electric boogaloo were created by Sam Solomon in the 1970s in Fresno, California and performed by his crew the Electric Boogaloos.Some of the original members were "Mr.West Coast Poppin is another social networking site but its focused toward poppers and lockers
Edited sentence: Funk styles refers to a group of dance styles that originated in California in the 1970's during the funk era.Locking, originally called Campbellocking, was created in Los Angeles by Don Campbell and introduced to the country his crew The Lockers.Other than Don Campbell, some of the original members were Fred "Mr.Other than providing an online community for dancers to create profiles and interact, Dance Jam also provides a place for people to compete in online dance battles and view online tutorials and lessons on how to do popular hip hop dance moves.Pinguin" Berry (Rerun on the 1970’s TV sitcom What's Happening.Popping and electric boogaloo were created by Sam Solomon in Fresno, California and performed by his crew the Electric Boogaloos.These mainly include popping, electric boogaloo, and locking.West Coast Poppin is a social networking site focused toward poppers and lockers