Original sentence: An accomplished performer, Stevens was the original sousaphone soloist in the Broadway production Barnum and is a member of Symphonia, the world's first professional tuba ensemble.Stevens (born 1951) is an American composer/arranger, tubist, and brass pedagogue.Stevens' compositions include several major works for the tuba, including Journey, Power, Moondance, City Suite, Dances, Manhattan Suite, Triumph of the Demon Gods, Suite for Two and a Euphonium Concerto and Sonata
Edited sentence: An accomplished performer, Stevens was the original sousaphone soloist in the Broadway production "Barnum" and is a member of Symphonia, the world's first professional tuba ensemble.His compositions include several major works for the tuba, including Journey, Power, Moondance, City Suite, Dances, Manhattan Suite, Triumph of the Demon Gods, Suite for Two and a Euphonium Concerto and Sonata.Stevens (born 1951) is an American composer/arranger, tubist, brass pedagogue.Stevens is a master of creating grand intensity and sublime repose, using intricate rhythm and succinct melodies to tell a story