Original sentence: At age ten, she moved with her parents and younger sister, Laura, to the suburb of Levittown, New York.Greenwich (pronounced "GREN-itch") was born Eleanor Louise Greenwich in Brooklyn, New York, to a Roman Catholic father, William, an electrical engineer and former painter, and a Russian Jewish mother, Rose (née Baron), a department store manager, She was reportedly named for Eleanor Roosevelt and was not raised in either parent's religion.She wrote or co-wrote "Be My Baby", "Christmas (Baby Please Come Home)", "Da Doo Ron Ron",  "Leader of the Pack", "Do Wah Diddy Diddy", and "River Deep, Mountain High", among others
Edited sentence: At age ten, she moved with her parents and younger sister, Laura, to Levittown, New York.Greenwich (pronounced "GREN-itch") was born Eleanor Louise Greenwich in Brooklyn, New York, to a Catholic father, William, an electrical engineer and former painter, and a Jewish mother, Rose Baron, a department store manager, both were of Russian ancestry.She discovered Neil Diamond and sang backing vocals on several of Diamond's hit songs.She was named for Eleanor Roosevelt and, despite her parent's religious beliefs, she was not raised Catholic or Jewish.She wrote or co-wrote "Be My Baby", "Christmas (Baby Please Come Home)", "Da Doo Ron Ron",  "Leader of the Pack", "Do Wah Diddy Diddy", and "River Deep, Mountain High", among many others