Original sentence: Going East after descending from Echo Summit and getting to the south end of Lake Valley, it headed southeast over  Luther Pass into Hope Valley where it connected up with the main Carson Trail through Carson River canyon to get over the Carson Range
Edited sentence: <ref> Going East after descending from Echo Summit and getting to the south end of Lake Valley, it headed southeast over  Luther Pass into Hope Valley where it connected up with the main Carson Trail through Carson River canyon to get over the Carson Range