Original sentence: Carole was the youngest of five children, though two of her brothers died in childhood (Jerome was burned by scalding water and Lewis was accidentally shot).Landis married a neighbor named Irving Wheeler in January 1934 but this marriage was annulled in February 1934 (they later remarried on 25 August 1934, but divorced in 1939)
Edited sentence: Carole was the youngest of five children but tragically two of her brothers died in childhood (Jerome was burned by scalding water and Lewis was accidentally shot).Landis had married a neighbor named Irving Wheeler in January 1934 but this marriage was annulled in February 1934 (they later remarried on 25 August 1934, but divorced in 1939)