Original sentence: As is thy arm ready to wield the sword,.So also is it ready to carry the cross.Thy brow is wreathed with a glorious garland of flowers.Thy history is an epic.Thy valour steeped in faith
Edited sentence: For your arm is able to wield the sword,.It is able to carry the cross.Your brow is wreathed with a garland of glorious flowers.Your history is an epic.Your valour, steeped in faith,