Original sentence: However, Return to Oz is considered by fans as a more faithful adaptation of the book series than the 1939 MGM film, and has since acquired a large cult following.The film begins with Dorothy's return to the Land of Oz, and her discovery that the land has been destroyed.Upon her return, Dorothy, alongside her chicken Billina, is befriended by a group of new companions, including Tik-Tok and Jack Pumpkinhead, who help her restore Oz to its former glory
Edited sentence: However, Return to Oz is considered by Oz fans as a more faithful adaptation of the book series than the 1939 MGM film, and has since acquired a large cult following, thus giving it more recognition.The film focuses on Dorothy Gale's second trip to the Land of Oz, and her discovery that everything has been destroyed since her departure six months prior.Upon her return, Dorothy, alongside her chicken Billina, is befriended by a group of new companions, including Tik-Tok and Jack Pumpkinhead, who help her save Oz from extinction and restore its inhabitants to their former glory