Original sentence: However, some critics feel that the terms are interchangeable, and apply the following critique to both.It has been argued that none of the vegetarian organizations recognize "semi-vegetarianism" as a category of vegetarianism.It is also asserted that people who partake in diets such as pescetarianism and pollotarianism may not accept the term "semi-vegetarian" to describe their diets.It is noted that "semi-vegetarianism" is not the topic of this page.Some say that the term is largely a "media based phenomenon".Some who partake in such diets consider them entirely independent diets and do not want to be associated with vegetarians
Edited sentence: Many who partake in such diets consider them entirely independent diets and do not want to be associated with vegetarians.None of the vegetarian organizations recognize "semi-vegetarianism" as a category of vegetarianism, nor do people who partake in diets such as pescetarianism and pollotarianism accept the term "semi-vegetarian" to describe their diets.The term is largely a media based phenomenon