Original sentence: A man who attended the church for 6 years claimed the church solicited him to buy albums3.There are many members and especially ex-members who were solicited, not forced, to buy the albums, regardless of their personal genre preferences
Edited sentence: However, there are many members and especially ex-members who were solicited, not forced, to buy the albums.Some people, who are conservative/shy and are not in favor of pop culture (who are usually favor the culture they associated with such as secular-post-renaissance classical music or sentimental love songs) were solicited.The claim of one man named Poon, who is not a church member, was widely mentioned in the media