Original sentence: A younger male believed to be related (they shared a rare hereditary anomaly, namely that both had calcaneonavicular coalition (fusing) of the calcaneus and of the navicular tarsal foot bones) was interred nearby.Had he lived near the Stones, the calibrated radiocarbon dates for his grave and dating of Stonehenge suggest the sarsens and trilithons at Stonehenge may have been raised by the time he was born, although a new bluestone circle may have been raised at the same time as his birth.He is nicknamed the "archer" because of the many arrowheads that were among the artifacts buried with him, although he was also dubbed the King of Stonehenge in the British press due to the proximity of the famous monument three miles away.The Amesbury Archer is an early Bronze Age man whose grave was discovered in Amesbury during excavations at the site of a new housing development.The grave was uncovered in May 2002, and the man is believed to date from about 2300 BC
Edited sentence: A younger male believed to be related (they shared an rare hereditary anomaly, namely that both had calcaneonavicular coalition (fusing) of the calcaneus and of the navicular tarsal foot bones) was interred nearby.He is nicknamed the "archer" because of the many arrowheads that were among the artifacts buried with him.His elevated stature and proximity in both time and place to Stonehenge have lead some experts to speculate he was one of the earliest people involved in its building, perhaps using his advanced metalurgical skills brought from Central Europe.The Amesbury Archer, dubbed the King of Stonehenge in the British press due to the proximity of the famous monument three miles away, is an early Bronze Age man whose artifact-rich grave was discovered in Amesbury during excavations at the site of a new housing development.The calibrated radiocarbon dates for the first bluestone circle of Stonehenge shares the same estimated date of existence as the archer at 2400 BC, plus or minus 100 years.The grave was uncovered in May 2002, and the man is believed to date from about 2400 BC, plus or minus 100 years