Original sentence: On July 14, Hamas started to shell Israeli settlements inside and outside the Gaza Strip with dozen of Qassam rockets, killing an Israeli woman.The Israeli Defence Force also started to build-up armored forces around the Gaza Strip in response to the shelling
Edited sentence: On July 14, Hamas started to shell Israeli settlement inside and outside the Gaza Strip with dozen of Qassam rockets, killing an Israeli woman.The Israeli Defence Force started to build-up armored forces around the Gaza Strip in an ultimatum for terrorists to stop firing Qassams and disarm terror groups