Original sentence: Israel captured the land from Syria during the Six-Day War and still occupies it.Many Jews and some zionist organizations consider the Golan Heights to be liberated Jewish land, although this view has very little support from gentiles and non-zionists.Neither the UN or any country has recognised this annexation and they officially consider the Heights to be Syrian territory under Israeli military occupation.The Israeli army occupied the heights and placed it under military administration from 1967 until 1981, when the Knesset annexed the land with The Golan Heights Law
Edited sentence: Israel captured the land from Syria during the Six-Day War and still controls it.Many Jews and some Zionist organizations consider the Golan Heights to be liberated Jewish land, although this view has very little support from Gentiles and Non-Zionists.Neither the UN or any country has recognised this annexation, and as a result, they officially consider the Heights to be Syrian territory under Israeli military occupation.The Israeli army conquered the heights, bringing it under military rule from 1967 until 1981, when the Knesset annexed the land with The Golan Heights Law