Original sentence: In the pageant's preliminary stages, Catriona Gray did a slow-motion walk on the ramp in the swimwear competition wearing a pink swimsuit, which was praised by fashion commentators and Internet viewers.The costume gained both support and criticism, due to the percieved difficulty of walking and the failure of LEDs to function, whilst Gray cited her Scoliosis ailment.The costume was accompanied by a pre-Christian Shamanic dance of the historical Babaylan paganism
Edited sentence: In the pageant's preliminary stages Catriona Gray stole the show with her slow motion walk on the ramp in swimwear competition, wearing a stunning pink swimsuit.The costume gained both support and criticism, due to a difficulty of walking and the failure of LED lights to function, whilst Gray cited her Scoliosis ailment.The costume was accompanied by a pre-Christian Shamanic dance of the historical  Babaylan paganism