Original sentence: In 2006 both she and her daughter moved to London in the UK where Jennifer has been continuing working on a new album.Jennifer surprised her fans with a new box set—"Stronghold, The Collector's Hit Box"—in August 2007
Edited sentence: In 2006 both she and her daughter moved to London in the UK where Jennifer has been continuing working on a highly anticipated new album.In the most impressive of these, Jennifer surprised her fans with an exciting new box set—"Stronghold, The Collector's Hit Box"—in August 2007