Original sentence: Cadbury Crunchie is a chocolate bar, that is made by Cadbury UK and was launched by J.Fry & Sons in 1929, however later became a Cadbury product through a corporate merger
Edited sentence: Cadbury Crunchie is a milk chocolate bar with a "honeycombed" sugar centre.Fry & Sons in 1929.Fry had merged with Cadbury in 1919 and Crunchie later became a Cadbury brand.It is made by Cadbury UK and was originally launched by J