Original sentence: Fimian attended The College of William and Mary in Williamsburg, Virginia where he graduated with a Bachelor of Business Administration in Accounting.Fimian is, in fact, listed as a co-inventor, along with three other individuals, of a radon detection device patent filed under an applicant name of record of "Gemini Research, Inc.On a video sharing website, Fimian labels himself an "inventor," notes his one United States patent, and notes that, if elected, he would be only the fourth patent holder in congress
Edited sentence: Fimian attended one of Virginia's top public schools The College of William and Mary in Williamsburg, Virginia where he graduated with a Bachelor of Business Administration in Accounting