Original sentence: With some elements of the university's administration, alumni, and students desiring the removal of the Virginia Pep Band for many years, followed by the banning of that band from all future Continental Tire Bowls, the Athletics Department received emails and phone calls, some of which called for the end of the pep band and the establishment of a university marching band
Edited sentence: With some elements of the university's administration, alumni, and students desiring the removal of the Virginia Pep Band for many years, followed by the banning of that band from all future Continental Tire Bowls, the Athletics Department became inundated with emails and phone calls, some of which called for the end of the pep band and the establishment of a university marching band