Original sentence: His father's voting record has traditionally been opposite the gay cause, according to the 2004 Congressional Scorecard, which is a record of congressional voting on gay issues that is published by the Human Rights Campaign.One of them, Stephen Knollenberg, is a gay  interior designer with offices in Birmingham, Michigan, and Washington, D
Edited sentence: His father's voting record on gay rights issues is poor, according to the 2004 Congressional Scorecard, which is a record of congressional voting on gay issues that is published by the Human Rights Campaign.One of them, Stephen Knollenberg, is an interior designer with offices in Birmingham, Michigan, and Washington, D.Stephen Knollenberg is gay