Original sentence: ) Victims and survivors of rape, and their allies, may find this type of usage pejorative and deeply offensive, since it normalizes the term "rape" to cover mundane events.A contrasting view is given by Lewis Thomas in his "Lives of a Cell: notes of a biology watcher", that rape is not only not an evolutionary benefit to the rapist but that it is strongly maladaptive and therefore selected against.Buller considers that rape as a biological imperative doesn't add up.Examples include:-.In his recently-published book (Adapting Minds: MIT Press) David Buller tackles the whole of evolutionary psychology noting that theories in this field are often provably based on faulty research and heavily biased data.Mens' Rights lobbyists are pushing for tougher "male rape" laws, and have gained some success--for example, fellating a man without his permission is grounds for a charge of second degree rape in the United States
Edited sentence: ) Victims and survivors of rape, and their allies, may find this type of usage pejorative and deeply offensive.Counter-argument: Lewis Thomas in his "Lives of a Cell: notes of a biology watcher" notes a strong argument of how rape is not only not an evolutionary benefit to the rapist but that it is strongly maladaptive and therefore selected against.Examples of this sort of unwelcome word usage are:-.For Buller rape as biological imperative doesn't add up.Furthermore, in his just published book (Adapting Minds: MIT Press) David Buller tackles the whole of evolutionary psychology noting that theories in this field are often provably based on faulty research and heavily biased data.Mens' Rights lobbyists are pushing for tougher "male rape" laws, and have gained some success--for example, fellating a man without his permission is grounds for Rape in the Second Degree.This derogatory implication is that the term "rape" has been redefined to mundane and simplistic events, and therefore demeans the experiences of those who have been raped in the sexual sense