Original sentence: After more than a month of negotiations, Yugoslavia refused to sign the prepared agreement, primarily, it has been argued, because of a clause giving NATO forces access rights to not only Kosovo but to all of Yugoslavia (which the Yugoslav side saw as tantamount to military occupation).Among numerous other things, the following important objects were destroyed because they represented Albanian, as well as Muslim and Catholic cultures:.During the Kosovo War, Serbs allegedly also engaged in a deliberate campaign of cultural destruction and rampage.However, according to the German newspaper "Berliner Zeitung," Finnish pathologist Helena Ranta, who was assigned by the EU as the head of the team sent to investigate the Racak incident, "...expressed lack of comprehension regarding the work of the UN's Hague tribunal in the case of the so-called massacre of Racak.The Racak Massacre was instrumental in increasing the pressure on Serbia in the following conference at Rambouillet.The United Nations' Hague Court accused the Serbian forces, headed by Slobodan Milosevic, of these murders; the Hague trial ended without a conviction, due to Milosevic's death
Edited sentence: " The so-called Racak Massacre was instrumental in increasing the pressure on Serbia in the following conference at Rambouillet.According to the German newspaper "Berliner Zeitung," Finnish pathologist Helena Ranta, who was assigned by the EU as the head of the team sent to investigate the Racak incident "...expressed lack of comprehension regarding the work of the UN's Hague tribunal in the case of the so-called massacre of Racak.After more than a month of negotiations Yugoslavia refused to sign the prepared agreement, primarily, it has been argued, because of a clause giving NATO forces access rights to not only Kosovo but to all of Yugoslavia (which the Yugoslav side saw as tantamount to military occupation).Among numerous other things, the following important objects were destroyed because they represented Albanian as well as Muslim and Catholic cultures:.During the Kosovo War, Serbs also engaged in a deliberate campaign of cultural destruction and rampage.The Western countries accused the Serbian forces for these victims, namely Slobodan Milosevic in Hague trial, but the trial never ended having Milosevid died in the Hague court