Original sentence: Leavitt Peak is named for Hiram Leavitt, a native of New Hampshire, who built a hotel and home in 1863 at the foot of the east end of Sonora Pass  to serve the growing number of travelers between Sonora and Aurora, primarily miners headed to the gold mines at nearby Bodie.Leavitt Peak, altitude , is located in the Emigrant Wilderness near Sonora Pass in the eastern Sierra Nevada range of California
Edited sentence: Leavitt Peak is located in the Emigrant Wilderness near Sonora Pass in the eastern Sierra Nevada range of California.Leavitt Peak is named for Hiram Leavitt, a native of New Hampshire, who built a hotel and home in 1863 at the foot of the east end of Sonora Pass.to serve the growing number of travelers between Sonora and Aurora, primarily miners headed to the gold mines at nearby Bodie