Original sentence: EDT on the evening of September 11, 2001.On the morning of September 11, 2001, ten terrorists affiliated with al-Qaeda crashed passenger airliners into the World Trade Center in New York City.Soon afterward both buildings collapsed and irreparable damage to nearby buildings occurred.Though not hit by a plane, it collapsed at about 5:20 p
Edited sentence: EDT on the evening of September 11, 2001, 7 World Trade Center collapsed completely to the ground at freefall speed, leaving a small heap of rubble.However, at about 5:20 P.On the morning of September 11, 2001, nineteen terrorists affiliated with al-Qaeda crashed passenger airliners into the World Trade Center in New York City.Soon afterward both towers collapsed, causing heavy damage to nearby buildings.The structure was not hit by a plane