Original sentence: Sher Shah Awan VC (14 February 1917 - 20 January 1945) was a British Indian Army soldier from the village of Chakrala, about 30 Km east from Mianwali, Punjab region that is now Pakistan, who received the Victoria Cross which is the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces
Edited sentence: Sher Shah Awan VC (14 February 1917 - 20 January 1945) was a British Indian Army soldier from the village of Chakrala, about 30 km east from Mianwali, Punjab region that is now Pakistan, who received the Victoria Cross which is the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces