Original sentence: "All Gold Canyon" follow a Jack London story by the same name.Adapted from Jack London's short story "All Gold Canyon," the segment features a grizzled prospector who arrives in a pristine mountain valley and decides to dig for gold in a grassy meadow beside a river.The film was based on Western-themed short stories which were written by the Coens over a period of 20 to 25 years (accounts vary) that differ in mood and subject
Edited sentence: "All Gold Canyon" follows, almost word for word, a Jack London story by the same name.Adapted almost word for word from Jack London's short story "All Gold Canyon," this segment of the film features a grizzled prospector who arrives in a pristine mountain valley and decides to dig for gold in a grassy meadow beside a river.The film was based on Western-themed short stories, most of which were written by the Coens over a period of 20 to 25 years (accounts vary) that differ in mood and subject