Original sentence: Patrick later visits Amanda and Helene as Helene is about to leave on a date with someone she met because of the publicity - at the same time making a play for Patrick himself, stating "If your girlfriend does not change her mind, I'll take you"
Edited sentence: Patrick later visits Amanda and Helene as Helene is about to leave on a date with someone she met because of the publicity - at the same time making a play for Patrick himself, stating "If she don't get smart, I'll take you"