Original sentence: Clifton was previously the editor of Ceefax, and before joining the BBC was a news and sports reporter at the Chronicle and Echo in Northampton, a sports journalist at the Exchange Telegraph national news agency, chief sports sub at the UK's Press Association (PA) and editor of the PA's Teletext service.He assumed the role on October 18 2005 following Richard Deverell's 2005 July move to CBBC, first as Chief Operating Officer then as controller.Pete Clifton's post on edits to Wikipedia.The News Interactive department includes BBC News Online, the BBC News website; CBBC Newsround; the Ceefax teletext service; the digital text service; On This Day; BBC's Interactive TV; the Action Network and a variety of news services to mobile phones and other mobile devices.final post from Pete Clifton as editor
Edited sentence: Clifton was previously the editor of Ceefax, and before joining the BBC was a news and sports reporter at the Chronicle and Echo in Northampton, a sports journalist at the Exchange Telegraph national news agency, chief sports sub at the Press Association (PA) and editor of the PA's Teletext service.He assumed the role in October 2005 following Richard Deverell's move to CBBC.The News Interactive department includes BBC News Online, the BBC News website; the Ceefax teletext service; the digital text service; On This Day; the Action Network and a variety of news services to mobile phones and other mobile devices.The final 'From the editor's desktop'