Original sentence: And don't people notice that Amelle is brilliant more often.But this is in a WHOLE OTHER LEAGUE.But with beats.Fraser McAlpine of BBC Chart Blog critically praised the song giving it 5/5 stars:.I NEED MORE OF THIS IN MY LIFE.I mean I liked 'Number One' well enough...it had N-Dubz on it...I LOVE N-DUBZ..."nah nah NAIII", right.I mean, WHY DO PEOPLE NOT MAKE MORE SONGS LIKE THIS.IT'S OVERWHELMING.It's sort of got that enormous, over-emotional 'Battlefield' thing going on, yeah.Like, what an EPIC PRODUCTION.She's got to be the best Sugababe who ever lived.Stryder's back with summer smash-in-waiting 'Never Leave You', it finds him sticking to the Europoppy sound of his previous singles, but this time he's drafted in his starriest sparring partner yet - Sugababes singer Amelle Berrabah.THAT IS SO CLEVER, TINCHY STRYDER.This is like, AMAZING.here's your toddler review... OMGOMGOMG
Edited sentence: "Rewind eight months and the name Tinchy Stryder would have been met with blank expressions by all but a core of grime fanatics in East London.Building on the momentum of his recent chart-topper 'Number One', Stryder's back with summer smash-in-waiting 'Never Leave You'.It finds him sticking to the Europoppy sound of his previous singles, but this time he's drafted in his starriest sparring partner yet - Sugababes singer Amelle Berrabah.Now, having bypassed the critics and trend-setters, the 22-year-old rapper has become one of the year's biggest success stories thanks to a winning combination of pop hooks and hip-hop rhymes