Original sentence: Alvarez claimed that the audit included violations of internal audit standards and requested that the audit be reviewed by an independent third party, like the Bureau of State Audits or the Institute of Internal Auditors.Doris Alvarez, and academic adviser Phil Ensberg were placed on leave.Later UCSD Vice Chancellor Paul Drake said on National Public Radio that the audit was "never able to exactly prove who had done what or why".. On June 9, 2008, Alvarez made public an official statement and detailed rebuttal of the UCSD Audit.UCSD's office of audit and management advisory services was assigned to investigate the accusations, and the school's principal, Dr
Edited sentence: After not being  allowed  to include her statements along the audit on the UCSD Web Site, Dr Alvarez made her statements public available at her own site:  http://dorisalvarez.Alvarez described and documented numerous violations of internal audit standards and requested that the audit be reviewed by an independent third party, like the Bureau of State Audits  or the Institute of Internal Auditors.Doris Alvarez made public an official statement and detailed rebuttal of the UCSD Audit.Later UCSD Vice Chancellor Paul Drake said on National Public Radio (NPR) that in the audit "they were never able to exactly prove who had done what or why".. On June 9, 2008, Dr.UCSD's office of audit and management advisory services was assigned to investigate the accusations, and the school's principal, Doris Alvarez, and academic adviser Phil Ensberg were placed on leave