Original sentence: "  The building won the top design award given out by Learning by Design, which honors and showcases school design and construction projects.A large amount of money was spent on construction of the football field behind the building, but because of construction errors, the football team does not use the field.During the 2005-2006 school year, Cass Tech students were moved to a new building just some fifty yards from the old building.The new Cass Technical High School was designed by TMP architecture.The school’s interior is characterized by an abundance of natural light, inspirational views, and a sense of order throughout
Edited sentence: "  The building won the top design award given out by Learning by Design, which honors and showcases marvelous school design and construction projects.A huge amount of money was spent on construction of the football field behind the building, but because of construction errors, the football team does not use the field.As a whole, exterior materials express Detroit’s industrial history while reflecting the school’s forward-thinking curriculum.During the 2005-2006 school year, Cass Tech students were moved to a new, state-of-the-art building just some fifty yards from the old building.The building was designed by TMP architecture.The new Cass Technical High School is a 21st-century urban high school of excellence.The new school will preserve its proud traditions while it sets new standards of excellence.The school’s interior is characterized by an abundance of natural light, spectacular and inspirational views, and a strong sense of order throughout