Original sentence: Brett was not in his best form for the first half of the season, slightly under his 2008 form and his inability to shake a tag was quite evident.He also believes that Ben Cousins should be offered another contract to play on for the Richmond Tigers as Ben has been a great idol and inspiration to the team, especially the midfield.The 2nd half of 2009 has shown him play pretty much what is almost his career best form, making match winning decisions and showing his want for the ball by getting his highest average tackles over the past month and getting far more contested possessions
Edited sentence: He also believes that Ben Cousins should be offered another contract to play on for the Richmond Tigers