Original sentence: Concrete was pouring on the 31st level above ground on May 20, 2010.Construction has begun with the removal of the sales centre in September 2007, but the official groundbreaking was Friday, October 12, 2007.It is named for real estate developer Donald Trump, who is a minority shareholder in the project.The suggested completion date for the hotel portion of the tower is 2010.The tower will be in the financial district, at 311 Bay Street, on the southeast corner of Bay and Adelaide
Edited sentence: Construction has begun with the removal of the sales centre in September 2007, but the official groundbreaking was Friday, October 12, 2007 with Donald Trump and his golden shovel.Construction is well underway with concrete pouring on the 31st level above ground as of May 20, 2010.It is named for famed real estate developer Donald Trump, who is a minority shareholder in the project.The suggested completion date at this time for the hotel portion of the tower, is scheduled for 2010.The tower will be located at the heart of the financial district, at 311 Bay Street, on the southeast corner of Bay and Adelaide