Original sentence: Johnny Stroia and Bobby Kovach were injured for the Mountaineers in that game as well.Major Harris separated his shoulder on the third play, and couldn't throw as well for the rest of the game.The pass he threw when separating his shoulder fell off of the receiver's hands, dropping a sure-score.West Virginia never posed a threat to the Irish for the rest of their game, losing 34-21, and suffered their first loss of the season for the national championship.West Virginia was doomed from the third play of the game
Edited sentence: Harris was sacked on the third play of the game and was buried into the turf by Irish Linebacker Michael Stonebreaker.John Stroia and Bob Kovach were injured for the Mountaineers in that game as well.Major Harris separated his shoulder on the third play, and couldn't throw for the rest of the game.Two late Touchdowns by WVU made the score closer than it really was.WVU suffered their first loss of the season for the national championship.West Virginia never posed a threat to the Irish as Notre Dame raced out to an early lead and never looked back.West Virginia was overmatched and doomed from the third play of the game.When it was over, WVU lost 34-21