Original sentence: Arnold - confused man who spends his days wandering around town and inquiring of people, "Are you looking for me.Charlie - old man who spends his days at his wife Grace's tombstone in an effort to relive the past.Margie - friendly donut shop owner who employs Alvina and pays her in donuts.Tom - later on in the book, Arnold decides to get his own pet rat
Edited sentence: Arnold - Confused man who spends his days wandering around town and inquiring of people, "Are you looking for me.Charlie - Old man who spends his days at his wife Grace's tombstone in an effort to relive the past.Margie - Friendly donut shop owner who employs Alvina and pays her in donuts.Neva - Mother of Perry who works in Margie's Donut Shop after Alvina gets fired.She gives birth to Clarissa, Perry's new sister.Tom - Later on in the book, Arnold decides to get his own pet rat