Original sentence: Iron Man orders Peter to take a trip to Los Angeles to clear his head while he takes care of unfinished buisness.Peter wakes Aunt May and Mary Jane, and as he explains his concerns about which side he is on and tells them to get away from the potentially unsafe Stark Tower, Iron Man bursts through the wall attacking Peter, questioning Peter's loyalties
Edited sentence: In addition, a new character apparently related to the Other events surface in Peter's life: Miss Arrow, the school nurse, after stabbing Quentin Beck with the same poisonous stingers Spider-Man displayed during his "resurrection", is trying to convince Flash Thompson to make Peter stay at school, to better survey him on behalf her still unknown "superiors".Iron Man orders Peter to take a trip to Los Angeles to `clear his head` while he takes care of unfinished buisness.Peter changes into the Iron costume as Iron Man bursts through the wall, and an epic fight starts.Peter wakes Aunt May and Mary Jane and explains his concerns about which side he is on, and tells them to get away from Stark Tower, because it is `not safe`.Spider-Man works alongside Tony Stark through the Civil War, on the lawside and round up the other uregistered superheroes