Original sentence: Flanagan apparently waited until the television news camera was pointed at Parker before opening fire, to ensure that the incident was shown live on-air.Parker is seen flinching before attempting to escape the attack, with the light of Ward's camera being seen quickly dropping before Flanagan pulls the camera away and shuts it off
Edited sentence: Flanagan waited until the television news camera was pointed at Parker before opening fire, to ensure that the incident was shown live on-air.Parker is seen flinching before attempting to run for her life, with the light of Ward's camera being seen quickly dropping before Flanagan pulls the camera away and shuts it off