Original sentence: When John died in January of 2003,[auto accident fatality] he owned a large collection of cars he had acquired, all of them restored, including but not limited to, a ford Model A, an Alfa Romeo, a Fiat, a few Mercedes', a quarter midget race car, a Buick, and his prized possession, a Red 1984 Ferrari GTO with only a few thousand original miles
Edited sentence: When John passed away in January of 2003,[auto accident fatality] he owned a large collection of cars he had acquired, all of them restored, including but not limited to, a ford Model A, an Alfa Romeo, a Fiat, a few Mercedes', a quarter midget race car, a Buick, and his prized possession, a Red 1984 Ferrari GTO with only a few thousand original miles