Original sentence: However, the revenue did fund projects such as secondary evacuation routes and fuel reduction zones.In August 2018, three months before the  fire, fire safe councils in the Paradise region were awarded $5 million in grants from this program for fuel reduction and education projects
Edited sentence: However, the revenue did fund important projects, such as secondary evacuation routes and fuel reduction zones.In August 2018, three months before the  fire, fire safe councils in the Paradise region were awarded $5 million dollars in grants from this program for fuel reduction and education projects