Original sentence: Although EarthLink has reduced its expenses from $283,357,000 in 2003 to $227,285,000 in 2005, their earnings are shrinking.EarthLink cut 2,600 jobs in 2003 and 2004
Edited sentence: EarthLink cut 2,600 jobs in 2003 and 2004  Although EarthLink has reduced its expenses from $283,357,000 in 2003 to $227,285,000 in 2005, their earnings are shrinking