Original sentence: These comments regarding the effectiveness of the armoured flight deck design are taken from the USS Franklin's damage report after Franklin was severely damaged and 1/3 of the crew killed or wounded
Edited sentence: These comments regarding the effectiveness of the armoured flight deck design are taken from the USS Franklin's damage report where Franklin was ripped apart and 1/3 of the crew killed or wounded by bombs which could not have penetrated the armoured flight deck of a Royal Navy aircraft carrier.This excerpt is an eloquent testimony as to why the USN decided to adopt armoured flight decks on all aircraft carriers starting with the Midway