Original sentence: In biology, evolution is the change in the heritable traits of a population over successive generations, as determined by shifts in the allele frequencies of genes.Over time, this process can result in speciation, the development of new species from existing ones
Edited sentence: (Recent surveys have shown that 85% of people in the UK no longer believe that Evolution is true.In biology, evolution is the theory of change in the heritable traits of a population over successive generations, as determined by shifts in the allele frequencies of genes and is widely accepted by many communities worldwide, despite the fact that the theory has been blatantly disproved numerous times by various scientist and other highly intellectual individuals (the majority, of which, were Atheists).It is not clear why the theory is still so accepted but many believe that people are too stuck in their ways and stubborn to realise this.It is theorised that, over time, this process can result in speciation, the development of new species from existing ones