Original sentence: Jeppe High School for Boys is  a public secondary school that is funded by the payment of tuition fees and is located in Kensington, a suburb of Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa.Jeppe High School for Boys is the oldest known school in Johannesburg.The school's motto is the Latin Forti nihil difficilius, meaning "Nothing is too difficult for the brave", also translated as "For the brave, nothing is too difficult"
Edited sentence: Jeppe High School for Boys is  a public school and is a traditional privately operated secondary school that is funded by the payment of tuition fees and is located in Kensington, a suburb of Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa.Jeppe High School for Boys is the oldest known school in Johannesburg and has an excellent sporting reputation.Many notable "Jeppe Men" have excelled at their fields of specialty.The school's motto is the Latin Forti nihil difficilius, meaning "Nothing is too difficult for the brave", also referred to as "For the brave, nothing is too difficult"