Original sentence: A new outdoor bus station will be built adjacent to the centre in between the old underground bus station and the present Haymarket bus and Metro station.A relatively new extension to the complex called Eldon Garden was build in the late 1990s in a more contemporary style than the main centre.Eldon Leisure is a leisure centre built above the shopping areas that offers sporting, health and beauty facilities.Eldon Square is a shopping centre in Newcastle upon Tyne in the United Kingdom.It was officially opened in 1977 by Queen Elizabeth II and is named after the original Eldon Square which the shopping centre was built around.Plans are also well advanced to relocate market traders from the Green Market section of the centre to the Grainger market to allow for redevelopment of this area into a new department store and additional bus station.Reconstruction work began in June 2005 that will eventually turn the underground bus station into new shopping oulets.The bus station itself will close to the public in early 2006.The construction of the nearby MetroCentre in 1986 provided competition for Eldon Square, however, both are now owned by the Capital Shopping Centres group, thus resolving any serious commercial conflicts
Edited sentence: Eldon Leisure is a leisure centre built above most of the shopping centre offering sports facilities.Eldon Square is a shopping centre in Newcastle upon Tyne in the UK it was officially opened in 1977 by Queen Elizabeth II.It is named after the original Eldon Square which the shopping centre was built around.The bus station will be relocated and replace the existing Haymarket bus station into the Haymarket Bus and Metro interchange.There is also Eldon Garden which is more of a contemporary style of shoppping centre.There will be some reconstruction work to Eldon Square starting in 2006 with the conversion of the bus station to more retail outlets as the bus station has a bad reputation of being as dark and dangerous as it is underneath the shopping centre and there has been limitations of pollution in the bus station as buses must switch off their engines whilst stopping to pick up or drop off passengers.When the nearby MetroCentre was built in 1986 it meant competition for Eldon Square but now they are all owned by Capital Shopping Centres and the two shopping centres work together rather than being competitors