Original sentence: English composers Arthur Bliss, York Bowen, Benjamin Dale, Frank Bridge, Benjamin Britten and Ralph Vaughan Williams all wrote substantial chamber and concert works.The viola occasionally plays a major, soloistic role in orchestral music.The viola often plays the "inner voices" in string quartets and symphonic writing, and it is more likely than the first violin to play accompaniment parts
Edited sentence: English composers Arthur Bliss, York Bowen, Benjamin Dale,.Frank Bridge, Benjamin Britten and Ralph Vaughan Williams all wrote substantial chamber and concert works.The viola extremely rarely plays a major, soloistic role in orchestral music.The viola often plays the boring parts in string quartets and symphonic writing, and it is almost certainly going to play accompaniment parts