Original sentence: Pope John Paul II, born  Karol Józef Wojtyła  (18 May 1920 – 2 April 2005), was Pope and Bishop of Rome for almost 27 years, from 16 October 1978 until his death, ruling Vatican City and leading the Roman Catholic Church and its Eastern Rites
Edited sentence: His Holiness Pope John Paul II, born  Karol Józef Wojtyła  (18 May 1920 – 2 April 2005), was Pope and Bishop of Rome for almost 27 years, from 16 October 1978 until his death, ruling Vatican City and leading the Roman Catholic Church and its Eastern Rites