Original sentence: " The door opens, and a bellhop is standing in the doorway to greet you." The lights flicker as the elevator goes all the way back up to the top, it is then that the top floor doors open and riders are treated with a sky high over view of both Disneyland and California Adventure.It pauses there a moment and falls to place between the load levels (so that both load levels give the same ride) and a door opens again and you see an elevator door.Then your ghostly elevator drops, and then a second later, the passenger elevator begins its drop sequence: a drop from the show scene to the first floor, then a rise to the "13th" floor
Edited sentence: " The door opens, and a bellhop is standing in the doorway to greet departing passengers." The lights flicker as the elevator goes all the way back up to the top, it is then that the top floor doors open and riders are treated with a sky-high view of both Disneyland and California Adventure.The elevator pauses there a moment and falls to a place between the load levels (so that both load levels give the same ride) and a door opens again and passengers see an elevator door.Then the "ghostly" projected passenger elevator drops, followed a second later by the actual passenger elevator beginning its drop sequence: a drop from the show scene to the first floor, then a rise to the "13th" floor