Original sentence: After the invasion of the Soviet Union, Seeger returned to his earlier stance as a strong proponent of military action against Germany; he was drafted into the Army, where he served in the Pacific.An example of Seeger's  pro-Soviet and pro-Stalin  attitude can be seen during the period of the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact, the short-lived alliance between the Soviet Union and Nazi Germany.As a member of the Old Left, Seeger is known for his communist political beliefs, formed before the crimes of Stalin were admitted to by the Soviet Union.Seeger left the Communist Party in 1950, five years before Nikita Khrushchev's Secret speech revealed Stalin's crimes and led to a mass exodus from the Party
Edited sentence: After the invasion of the Soviet Union, Seeger returned to his earlier stance as a strong proponent of military action against Germany; he was drafted into the Army, where he served honorably in the Pacific.An example of Seeger's pro-Soviet attitude can be seen during the period of the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact, the short-lived alliance between the Soviet Union and Nazi Germany.As a member of the Old Left, Seeger is known for his communist political beliefs, forged before the crimes of Stalin came to light.Seeger left the Communist Party in 1950, a good five years before Nikita Khrushchev's Secret speech revealed Stalin's crimes and led to a mass exodus from the Party