Original sentence: Choper manages and plays in five bands working in different genres, including jazz, rock, funk, klezmer and Israeli music.The book provides advice based on Choper’s years of experience as a performer, band manager, agent, consultant and business owner
Edited sentence: Choper manages and plays in five bands featuring a diverse combination of genres, including jazz, rock, funk, klezmer and Israeli music.The book provides advice based on Choper’s many years of experience as a performer, band manager, agent, consultant and business owner