Original sentence: He is best known for inventing the first completely electronic television.Modern CRT-based television, however, is completely electronic, has essentially no moving parts, and is directly based upon the work of Farnsworth, rather than that of Baird.Philo Taylor Farnsworth (August 19, 1906 – March 11, 1971) was an American inventor.Television broadcasts using an electro-mechanical system were demonstrated earlier by the Scottish inventor, John Logie Baird.The subject of the invention of television has often been a contentious issue, with claims by Baird, Farnsworth, and Zworykin having modern supporters
Edited sentence: However, a Scottish inventor at the same time, John Logie Baird, although using an electromechanical television system was the first person to demostrate working television broadcasts.Philo Taylor Farnsworth (August 19, 1906 – March 11, 1971) was an American inventor best known for being a person to demonstrate and patent a working electronic television system.Philo Taylor Farnsworth demonstrated a completly different system later on, a system which still serves as the basis for all modern television devices due to the fact that his was electronic.The credit however for the first working television system and so the inventor of the television goes to the British inventor, John Logie Baird