Original sentence: Instead, it offered point, focus, and shoot convenience to appeal to beginner SLR photographers, plus manual controls and system accessories to appeal to more experienced photographers
Edited sentence: However it was made to have relatively staightforward camera controls and automatic aperture for newcomers, with various manual controls and system accessories to appeal to more experienced photographers.In terms of image, history and it's central place in both the world of SLRs and Canon legacy, this camera is arguably a classic