Original sentence: A passage from Emma's Encomium provides a picture of Cnut's fleet:.According to the Peterborough manuscript of the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, early in September 1015 "[Cnut] came into Sandwich, and straightway sailed round Kent to Wessex, until he came to the mouth of the Frome, and harried in Dorset and Wiltshire and Somerset", beginning a campaign of an intensity not seen since the days of Alfred the Great
Edited sentence: A passage from Emma's Encomium paints a colourful picture of Cnut's fleet:.According to the Peterborough manuscript of the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle, early in September 1015 [Cnut] came into Sandwich, and straightway sailed round Kent to Wessex, until he came to the mouth of the Frome, and harried in Dorset and Wiltshire and Somerset, beginning a campaign of an intensity not seen since the days of Alfred the Great