Original sentence: One of the lesser-known, but most vaunted of the D&D computer games was Planescape: Torment, lauded for its storyline.The game experienced mediocre sales
Edited sentence: One of the lesser-known, but most vaunted of the D&D computer games was Planescape: Torment, a game considered one fo teh most storyline rich roleplaying computer games ever.The game has a large following, but suffered from low sales owing to being so text-heavy