Original sentence: "...decided to postpone (the story's) publication until we had worked with Vice to prevent easily-avoided overlap in some particular details.Among those who believd Vice did wrong was writer Robert Clark Young, who later published a journalistic article claiming to expose an additional case of plagiarism.Further, the heart of the story we believed, then and now, to be the invention of Brad Vice, even though elements of its drama is placed in the familiar setting.In response to this, some of Young's supporters said that a smear campaign was being conducted against Young by Vice's advocates.Michael Curtis, who edited and published the short story which Young said proved an additional case of plagiarism, later said he.Still, there were commentators who felt that Vice was indeed guilty of plagiarism and received the punishment he deserved.The story of Bear Bryant’s first A&M football team seemed to us well-known and not the property of (the author of Vice's source material) or anyone else.Vice's supporters mentioned that Young had previously had a run in with Hannah and Vice at the Sewanee Conference and suggested that his article about Vice was an attempt at revenge.Young said he discovered this new evidence by reading Vice's dissertation draft of The Bear Bryant Funeral Train.Young's article also featured a lengthy attack on the Sewanee Writers' Conference and Barry Hannah
Edited sentence: Michael Curtis, who edited and published the story by Vice which Young claimed proved an additional case of plagiarism, also refuted Young's claim.Other commentators mentioned that Young had an altercation with Vice and others at the Sewanee Writers' Conference and suggested his article was possibly an attempt at revenge.Still, there were a few commentators who felt that Vice was indeed guilty of plagiarism and received the punishment he deserved.Writer Robert Clark Young later published a journalistic article claiming to expose an additional case of plagiarism, which Young said he discovered by reading Vice's dissertation draft of The Bear Bryant Funeral Train