Original sentence: The Moberly-Jourdain incident, or the Ghosts of Petit Trianon or Versailles was an event that occurred on 10 August 1901 in the gardens of the Petit Trianon involving two school teachers, Charlotte Anne Moberly and Eleanor Jourdain
Edited sentence: The Moberly-Jourdain incident, or the Ghosts of Petit Trianon or Versailles was an event that occurred on 10 August 1901 in the gardens of the Petit Trianon involving two respected school teachers, Charlotte Anne Moberly and Eleanor Jourdain