Original sentence: On October 13, 2006, Rodriguez's plane overshot a runway at Burbank's Bob Hope Airport -- a mere two days after his Yankee teammate, Cory Lidle died when his plane crashed into a high-rise building in New York City, a tragic event which itself invoked ghostly images from 3 decades earlier when former Yankee Captain Thurman Munson died in a plane he was piloting in Ohio
Edited sentence: On October 13, 2006, in an eerily bizarre incident, Rodriguez's plane overshot a runway at Burbank's Bob Hope Airport -- a mere two days after his Yankee teammate, Cory Lidle died when his plane crashed into a high-rise building in New York City, a tragic event which itself invoked ghostly images from 3 decades earlier when former Yankee Captain Thurman Munson died in a plane he was piloting in Ohio