Original sentence: He has also had a hand in the professional training of notable boxers Pito Cardona, Matt Godfrey, Ray Olivera, Scott Pemberton, Lawrence Clay-Bey and Matt Remillard.Known for his insightful takes on the sport of boxing, Scully has written a highly praised boxing book entitled, The Iceman Diaries that details his life in boxing.Since 2003, he been successful as a professional trainer, guiding three boxers to world championships (Liz Mueller, Jose Antonio Rivera and Mike Oliver)
Edited sentence: Known for his insightful takes on the sport of boxing, especially his corner work between rounds of televised fights, Scully has written a highly praised boxing book entitled, The Iceman Diaries that details his life in boxing.Scully has also had a hand in the professional training of notable boxers Pito Cardona, Matt Godfrey, Ray Olivera, Scott "The Sandman" Pemberton, Lawrence Clay-Bey and Matt Remillard.Since 2003, has been successful as a professional trainer, guiding three boxers to world championships (Liz Mueller, Jose Antonio Rivera and Mike Oliver).The crowning moment may have been when he masterfully guided Rivera to the WBA Junior Middleweight Championship with a clear points victory on Showtime over defending champion Alejandro "Terra" Garcia