Original sentence: <ref name=Gilbertson120506>Dawn Gilbertson, Losing Intel a blow to school, Arizona Republic, Dec 5, 2006</ref>  A degree from UoP is perceived by some employers such as Intel, as inferior, and that some graduates have discovered that their degree did not offer the job advancement they anticipated
Edited sentence: <ref name=Gilbertson120506>Dawn Gilbertson, Losing Intel a blow to school, Arizona Republic, Dec 5, 2006</ref>  UoP's tuition cost is disproportionate to the educational value it gives to its students.A degree from UoP is perceived by some employers such as Intel, as inferior, and that some graduates have discovered that their degree did not offer the job advancement they anticipated