Original sentence: A number of factors should increase ones suspicion of the presence of an infection.In children these are: fever > 38.5 C, non weight bearing, serum WCBs > 12 x 10^9, ESR > 40 mm/hr, CRP > 20 mg/dL, a previous visit for the same
Edited sentence: A number of factors should increase one's suspicion of the presence of an infection.In children these are: fever > 38.5 C, non-weight-bearing, serum WBCs > 12 x 10^9, ESR > 40 mm/hr, CRP > 20 mg/dL, a previous visit for the same