Original sentence: In addition to the day program, undergraduate and graduate programs are offered through the College of Graduate and Professional Studies in the evening; its purpose to further stimulate the college's focus on academics as well as the Corps.Located in picturesque Charleston, South Carolina, the institution offers a classic military education for young men and women who seek a college experience that is intense, meaningful and academically strong.Men and women are admitted to the undergraduate, residential Corps of Cadets.The Citadel is considered by many to have the longest and hardest first-year military college experience.You are Citadel Men, you have no pension for failure, you wear the Ring, you never let a friend down, you will be good fathers, husbands, and leaders in the armed forces and industry, you are strong in heart, body, and mind
Edited sentence: In addition to the day program, undergraduate and graduate programs are offered through the College of Graduate and Professional Studies in the evening; its purpose to further stimulate the college's focus on academics as well as the corp.Located in picturesque Charleston, South Carolina, the institution offers a classic military education for young men and women who seek a college experience that is intense, meaningful and academically strong; considered by most, the longest and hardest first-year experience.Males and females are admitted to the undergraduate residential Corps of Cadets.The South Carolina Commission on Higher Education recognizes The Citadel as the only specialized four-year college in the state.You are Citadel Men, you have no pension for failure, you Wear the Ring, you never let a friend down, you will be good fathers, husbands, and leaders in the armed forces and industry, you are strong in heart, body, and mind