Original sentence: Modulating and developing to a classic Schubert V7 transition, the C section segues into a full repeat of the preceeding ABA, with a final shattering C section modified to end the piece in E-flat minor.There is little interruption in the fluttering harp-like broken triad accompaniment, creating a tense contrast with the spacious and languid melody -- an antipication of Felix Mendelssohn's Songs without Words
Edited sentence: Modulating and developing to a classic Schubert V7 transition, the C section segues into a full repeat of the preceding ABA, with a final shattering C section modified to end the piece in E-flat minor.There is little interruption in the fluttering harp-like broken triad accompaniment, creating a tense contrast with the spacious and languid melody—an antipication of Felix Mendelssohn's Songs without Words