Original sentence: Harold Gleason, then President, wanted Mr.Harold Gleasson then became Chairman and Chief Executive Officer, inviting Laurence Tisch to join as Vice Chairman as he was a 22% shareholder.His removal was precipitated by press accounts of his son Donald's connection with land deals in Suffolk County.In July 1968, Arthur Roth was removed from his position as chief executive due to growing loan losses and a shrinking stock price
Edited sentence: Harold Gleason then President wanted Mr.His removal was precipitated by exadurated press accounts of his son Donald's connection with land deals in Suffolk County.In July 1968 Arthur Roth was removed from his position as chief executive due to growing loan losses and a shrinking stock price.harold Gleasson then became Chairman and Chief Executive Officer, inviting Lawrence Tisch to join as Vice Chairman as he was a 22% share holder