Original sentence: The First Edition was a Country/Rock group, stalwart members being Kenny Rogers, Mickey Jones, (formally with Bob Dylan among others) and Terry Williams.The band formed in 1967 with Mike Settle and Thelma Camacho completing the group
Edited sentence: (formally with Bob Dylan among others) and Terry Williams.The First Edition was a superb and sadly overlooked Country/Rock.band formed in 1967 with Mike Settle and Thelma Camacho completing.group, stalwart members being Kenny Rogers, Mickey Jones.the group