Original sentence: Although it is in the Dublin 6W postal district, Terenure has a reputation as an upper-class suburb, and is strongly associated with the rugby-playing school, Terenure College, but the village has always had a bohemian side too, with many actors and writers (including Austin Clarke and Máirtín Ó Direáin) having lived there; with Rathgar and the area around Portobello in Dublin 8 it has also traditionally been the home of many of Dublin's relatively sparse Jewish population
Edited sentence: Although it is in the Dublin 6W postal district (rather than the more (in)famous Dublin 4), Terenure has a reputation as an upper-class suburb (though not quite so much so as the neighbouring Rathgar), and is strongly associated with the rugby-playing school, Terenure College, but the village has always had a bohemian side too, with many actors and writers (including Austin Clarke and Máirtín Ó Direáin) having lived there; with Rathgar and the area around Portobello in Dublin 8 it has also traditionally been the home of many of Dublin's relatively sparse Jewish population