Original sentence: Billy Connolly as Billy Bones: An ex-pirate, previously a member of Captain Flint's crew who witnessed the burial of gold and other men on Treasure Island and tells Jim he still has the map to the treasure before he suffers a fatal heart attack
Edited sentence: Billy Connolly as Billy Bones: An ex-pirate, previously one of Captain Flint's first mates on the voyage to Treasure Island and tells Jim he still has the map to the treasure before he suffers a fatal heart attack