Original sentence: Aesthetic Realism most certainly does not consider homosexuality a mental illness; in fact, Eli Siegel always objected to homosexuality’s being seen that way.Meanwhile, as is well known, there is now intense anger in America on the subject of homosexuality and how it is seen.Michael Bluejay writes: “AR says that homosexuality is a mental illness” and “AR professed to have the ‘cure’ for homosexuality.Siegel or any Aesthetic Realism consultant, whether in writing or in speech—Aesthetic Realism never presented itself as having a “cure.Similarly, Aesthetic Realism never saw homosexuality as something to “cure,” and—whether through Mr.Since this subject is by no means central to Aesthetic Realism, and since the Aesthetic Realism Foundation has not wanted to be involved in that atmosphere of anger, in 1990 the Foundation discontinued its public presentation of the fact that through Aesthetic Realism people have changed from homosexuality, and consultations to change from homosexuality are not being given.So for the record, I quote the following statement by the Aesthetic Realism Foundation; it is what anybody inquiring about this matter has been told since 1990, and people have found it very clear:.That is because we do not want this matter, which is certainly not fundamental to Aesthetic Realism, to be used to obscure what Aesthetic Realism truly is: education of the largest, most cultural kind.Then Bluejay says, about “positions” he has made up: “AR no longer takes these positions publicly—a wise move for them considering the increasing acceptance of homosexuality in society.“Aesthetic Realism is for full, equal civil rights for everyone.“It is a fact that men and women have changed from homosexuality through study of Aesthetic Realism.” He wants people to think that there is something hidden going on.” Not only does Bluejay misrepresent Aesthetic Realism on the subject, but he actually puts the word “cure” in quotation marks to make readers think he’s directly quoting some statement of Aesthetic Realism, when he is not.” This is completely untrue
Edited sentence: " This is completely untrue.... Similarly, Aesthetic Realism never saw homosexuality as something to "cure," and--whether through Mr.Michael Bluejay writes: "AR says that homosexuality is a mental illness" and "AR professed to have the 'cure' for homosexuality.Siegel or any Aesthetic Realism consultant, whether in writing or in speech--Aesthetic Realism never presented itself as having a "cure