Original sentence: CGS Alumni are admitted to the highest tertiary institutions, including Harvard, Cambridge and Oxford Universities in September 2006.Chittagong Grammar School (CGS) was founded in 1992, to satisfy the need for a truly international school in Chittagong.In addition to maintaining an excellent academic record the school boasts a wide range of extracurricular programmes including: Aerobics, arts & crafts, badminton, basketball, chess, computers, community service, cricket, dance, debating, drama, elocution, embroidery, environmental conservation, excursions/expeditions, fitness training, general knowledge instrumental music, karate, literary magazine, newspaper, photography, soccer, swimming, table tennis, taekwondo, track and field, vocal music, volleyball, yearbook, yoga.The school rapidly gained an excellent reputation within the community and is an associate member of Round Square Organization, driven by the philosophy of Kurt Hahn promoting service to the community and all-round character development.The school’s mission is to enable children to achieve the highest standards of which they are capable; academically, physically, morally and socially
Edited sentence: CGS alumni have been admitted to universities including Harvard, Cambridge and Oxford.Chittagong Grammar School (CGS) was founded in 1992, to satisfy the need for an international school in Chittagong, Bangladesh.The school has a extracurricular programmes including: aerobics, arts and crafts, badminton, basketball, chess, computers, community service, cricket, dance, debating, drama, elocution, embroidery, environmental conservation, excursions/expeditions, fitness training, general knowledge instrumental music, karate, literary magazine, newspaper, photography, soccer, swimming, table tennis, taekwondo, track and field, vocal music, volleyball, yearbook, yoga.The school is an associate member of Round Square Organization, driven by the philosophy of Kurt Hahn