Original sentence: On May 14, 2008 Jessica Alba posted a response to Youtube user Kevjumba, who challenged her to a staring contest.The video of her staring into the camera got over 2 million hits in less than 3 days
Edited sentence: In just a short ammount of time, she has attracted a new fan base who respect her for interacting with gerenal public, unlike many celebrities who wish to keep to themselves.On May 14 ,2008, Jessica Alba posted a response to Youtube user Kevjumba, who challenged her to a staring contest.The video"" of her staring into the camera got over 2 million hits in less than 3 days