Original sentence: Dronfest, a music festival, also takes place in the town in the summer months of the year.Dronfield is situated roughly midway between the town of Chesterfield to the south and the city of Sheffield to the north, for which it is a commuter town
Edited sentence: Dronfest, a popular music festival, also takes place in the town in the summer months of the year.Dronfield is situated roughly midway between the town of Chesterfield to the south and the city of Sheffield to the north, for which it is a popular commuter town