Original sentence: At this time there would have been no way of knowing whether the President himself was in danger.During times of national crisis, the behavior of the president will undoubtedly be analyzed by critics and supporters alike.However, after the second plane struck the World Trade Center, the Secret Service permitted the President to continue, for at least the five minutes documented in the "Booker Video," reading a story about a pet goat in a Florida schoolroom, before giving a speech to the nation from the same school.Regarding 9/11, the president's supporters argue that he did an excellent job in his role of displaying an image of strength and calm while surrounded by an unfolding chaos, while many of his critics argue that he failed at his more important duty of acting as commander in chief and defending the country.The President's whereabouts on the morning of the attacks was highly publicized
Edited sentence: During times of national crisis, the President is often looked upon to display an image of strength and calm while surrounded by an unfolding chaos.His behavior, if under the watchful eye of a camera, will undoubtedly be critiqued by critics and supporters alike