Original sentence: He served as Chairman of a House Government Reform Committee,,  spearheading a probe in 2012 into  gifts received by then President Bill Clinton and First Lady Hillary Clinton.Ose held hearingins to promote legislation to change rules governing gifts to presidents.To combat illegal immigration, Ose voted to use new technology and additional agents to secure America’s borders, and fought efforts to block construction of a border fence
Edited sentence: He served as Chairman of a House Government Reform Committee, where former President Bill Clinton and former First Lady Hillary Clinton were exposed for failing to properly report over $190,000 in jewelry, furniture and other personal gifts.In addition, to combat illegal immigration, Ose voted to use new technology and additional agents to secure America’s borders, and fought efforts to block construction of a border fence.This act led to legislation expanding presidential disclosure requirements