Original sentence: Before EMF, he was a member of Gloucester based band Apple Mosaic who were signed to Virgin Records After leaving EMF, he found some independent success with the band Whistler signed to Wiiija Records.He was nominated in the same category for Unbelievable in 1991.Ian Dench was the guitarist and principal songwriter for EMF, who scored a major international hit reaching number 1 in the US with "Unbelievable" in 1991.Ian began his music career as a punk musician although his father, Harold Dench a classical guitarist, later taught Ian classical guitar.Ian lives in London with his wife and son.Ian was also a promising artist who dropped out of Ruskin Art College, Oxford University to pursue a full time career in music.Ian won his first Ivor Novello award for Beautiful Liar in the Best Selling British Song Category in 2008.They have been working together since 1995 when they started writing for Amanda's "Ghost Stories" album which was released in 2000 on Warners Brothers Records.Whistler released 2 albums "Whistler" and "Faith in the Morning"
Edited sentence: After leaving EMF, he found some independent success with the band, Whistler, signed to Wiiija Records.Before EMF, he was a member of Gloucester based band Apple Mosaic, who were signed to Virgin Records.Dench began his music career as a punk musician although his father, Harold Dench a classical guitarist, later taught Ian classical guitar.Dench was also a promising artist who dropped out of Ruskin Art College, Oxford University to pursue a full time career in music.Dench was the guitarist and principal songwriter for EMF, who scored a major international hit reaching number 1 in the United States with "Unbelievable" in 1991.Dench won his first Ivor Novello Award for "Beautiful Liar" in the Best Selling British Song Category in 2008.He had been nominated in the same category for "Unbelievable" in 1991.He lives in London with his wife and son.They have been working together since 1995 when they started writing for Ghost's, Ghost Stories, album which was released in 2000 on Warner Bros.Whistler released a couple of albums, Whistler and Faith in the Morning