Original sentence: Emmett Louis "Bobo" Till (July 25,  1941 – August 28, 1955) was an African-American teenager from Chicago, Illinois who was killed in a region of Mississippi known as the Mississippi Delta in the small town of Money in Leflore County.Till's mother had an open casket funeral to let everyone see how her son had been killed
Edited sentence: Emmett Louis "Bobo" Till (July 25,  1941 – August 28, 1955) was an African-American teenager from Chicago, Illinois who was brutally murdered in a region of Mississippi known as the Mississippi Delta in the small town of Money in Leflore County.Till's mother had an open casket funeral to let everyone see how her son had been brutally killed