Original sentence: A simpler layout that is claimed to accentuate the grade one listed architecture including the Castle Keep.New retail space in the portico area, which was glazed to provide weather protection as well as retail units replacing the existing ticket office and travel centre.New taxi rank to the east side of the former portico.Previous access points to the station were  moved to make it easier to enter and leave the station.Sand-blasting of the walls and new lighting were fitted.The line of sight across the concourse was also  improved.The redevelopment plan also included a number of changes to the area surrounding the station, including:.The redevelopment plans contained a number of changes, including:.The travel centre and ticket office were reduced in size and relocated to the area beyond the Sainsbury's Local store.This double the previous  retail space to make it equivalent to that of  King's Cross Station
Edited sentence: A simpler layout that accentuates the grade one listed architecture including the Castle Keep.New retail space in the portico area, which will be turned into glazed arches to provide weather protection as well as retail units replacing the existing ticket office and travel centre.New taxi rank to the east side of the portico.Sand-blasting of the walls and new lighting to be fitted.The current access points to the station will be moved to make it easier to enter and leave the station.The line of sight across the concourse will also be greatly improved.The redevelopment plan also includes a number of improvements to the area surrounding the station, including:.The redevelopment plans contain a number of improvements, including:.The travel centre and ticket office will be reduced in size and relocated to the area beyond where the current Sainsbury's Local store is.This will double the current amount of retail space to make it equivalent to that of the new King's Cross Station