Original sentence: Many Catholics inreasingly disagree with the official position of the Roman Catholic hierarchy on homosexuality, and in many locations, such as North America, Northern and Western Europe, as well as the Southern Cone, show growing and stronger support for gay rights (such as same-sex marriage, or protection against discrimination) than the general population
Edited sentence: Catholic Church is most hypocritical in its condemnation of homosexuality, since it was in Catholic monasteries and churches that homosexuality was practiced more than in any other religion.Many Catholics increasingly disagree with the official position of the Roman Catholic hierarchy on homosexuality, and in many locations, such as North America, Northern and Western Europe, as well as the Southern Cone, show growing and stronger support for gay rights (such as same-sex marriage, or protection against discrimination) than the general population