Original sentence: In addition, unusual time signatures, and Kyle Howard's high pitched-voice are also present in the music.Their lyrics are often constructed into a short story format.They have gained a local fanbase in Arizona and are attracting national attention after playing nationwide tours and appearing on the Vans Warped Tour
Edited sentence: In addition, unusual time signatures, and Kyle Howard's incredibly high pitched-voice all make the band perceptively unique.Their lyrics are incredibly abstract, colorful, original, and poetic, often constructed into a short story format.They have gained a solid local fanbase in Arizona and are attracting national attention after playing nationwide tours and appearing on the Vans Warped Tour