Original sentence: Rear-Admiral Henry James Raby VC, CB (September 26, 1827 - February 13, 1907) was a recipient of the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces
Edited sentence: Rear-Admiral Henry James Raby VC, CB (26 September, 1827 - 13 February, 1907) was a recipient of the Victoria Cross, the highest and most prestigious award for gallantry in the face of the enemy that can be awarded to British and Commonwealth forces