Original sentence: >Union heavies join Labor's star recruits.The Advertiser, 5 May 2007
Edited sentence: Instead of running in a marginal seat to try and win seats to help the ALP win government, Combet has been dropped into a safe seat so he can spend the last of his working days earning a substantial income at the taxpayer's expense, whether the ALP win or lose the election.This shows the hypocrisy of Combet and the broader union movement in the claims of helping the people and fighting the Liberal Party