Original sentence: Yekaterina Alexeyevna Furtseva (; 7 December 1910 – 24 October 1974) was a Soviet politician and the second woman to be admitted as secretary of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union (the first being Yelena Stasova, member of the 7th Bureau)
Edited sentence: Yekaterina Alexeyevna Furtseva (; 7 December 1910 – 24 October 1974) was probably the most influential woman in Soviet politics and the second woman to be admitted as secretary of the Central Committee of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union (the first being Yelena Stasova, member of the 7th Bureau)