Original sentence: December 23, 1933: Rear-end collision of Paris-Nancy express and Paris-Strasbourg fast train between Lagny-sur-Marne and Pomponne (Seine-et-Marne), 17 mi (23 km) out of Paris.May 8, 1842 – Meudon (Versailles), France: During the inauguration ceremonies of the Paris to Saint-Germain railway, a returning train caught fire at Meudon after the locomotive broke an axle and the train derailed
Edited sentence: December 23, 1933, Lagny-Pomponne Railroad Disaster: Rear-end collision of Paris-Nancy express and Paris-Strasbourg fast train between Lagny-sur-Marne and Pomponne (Seine-et-Marne), 17 mi (23 km) out of Paris.Versailles rail accident May 8, 1842 – Meudon (Versailles), France: Following the King's fete celebrations at the Palace of Versailles, a train returning to Paris crashed at Meudon after the leading locomotive broke an axle, the train derailled and caught firen