Original sentence: Born into a south Indian Tamil family, Trisha Krishnan started modelling at a young age, and appeared in advertisements for many firms.Krishnan then started working in the Indian movie industry, and her performance in Saamy (2003) was critically acclaimed.Runner-up in the Miss Chennai 1999 competition, she was favorite to win the Miss India title, which she did as Miss Beautiful Smile 2000.She is a leading actress in Tamil and Telugu film industry and first woman actor to cross the one crore mark for a movie.She won the Screen best female débutant award for her role in Lesa Lesa (2002)
Edited sentence: Born into a traditional south Indian Tamil family, Trisha Krishnan started modelling at a young age.Crowned Miss Chennai 1999 runner-up, she was a hot favorite to win the Miss India title, which she did as Miss Beautiful Smile 2000, and her beauty and charm made her Tamil Nadu's darling.Her performance in Saamy (2003) was critically acclaimed, and she bagged the Screen best female débutant award for her role in Lesa Lesa (2002).She is dead gorgeous and surely has lots more to offer and perform.She is the reigning heroine in Tamil and Telugu film industry and first woman actor to cross the one crore mark for a movie.This beauty with next-door girl look appeared in advertisements for many prestigious firms.Trisha has now stormed into the Indian movie industry, where she's out to prove that she is a good actress, too