Original sentence: Although it was considered a model for the nation, Rybak closed it down partly because of funding concerns (he had inherited a situation requiring $5 million to be shaved from the city's budget).In 2001, Rybak defeated Sharon Sayles Belton, the first African-American and first female mayor of the city.Rybak ran a populist campaign, listening to the concerns of residents while he brought his message door-to-door.State transportation officials hope to open the replacement bridge by the end of 2008.The mayor is seen at public events in the city on a regular basis
Edited sentence: Considered a model for the nation, Rybak closed it down partly because of funding concerns (he had inherited a situation requiring $5 million to be shaved from the city's budget).Many residents eagerly follow Rybak's taste in music.Rybak's election in 2001 was a shock to many political observers, as he defeated Sharon Sayles Belton, the first African-American and first female mayor of the city, without the help of campaign consultants or a vast war chest of funding.State transportation officials hope to open the replacement bridge in 16 months.The mayor is seen at events all across the city on a regular basis.To win, Rybak ran an energetic and highly populist campaign, listening intently to the concerns of residents while he brought his message door-to-door