Original sentence: Although Longabaugh was reportedly fast with a gun, and often referred to as a gunfighter, Longabaugh is not known to have killed anyone prior to a later shootout in Bolivia, where he and Cassidy were alleged to have been killed themselves.It is generally accepted that both Butch and Sundance were later killed by soldiers in Bolivia in November 1908, after the two of them heisted a Bolivian mining company payroll
Edited sentence: But Longabaugh was fast with a gun, he was often referred to as a gunfighter, Longabaugh is not known to have killed anyone prior to a later shootout in Bolivia, where he and Cassidy were alleged to have been killed themselves.But sadly both Butch and Sundance were later killed by soldiers in Bolivia on November 4, 1908, after the two of them heisted a Bolivian mining company payroll.He was also one of the greatest outlaws there ever was