Original sentence: Our mission is to be a premier school recognised for our rich tradition of excellence, and our ability to groom upright and balanced individuals with leadership qualities.Victoria School provides a stimulating environment that promotes life-long learning for high-calibre students from Singapore and abroad, as well as inculcates in them the values to be responsible and effective individuals.We are dedicated to instilling in Victorians a spirit of achievement, and nurturing them into becoming innovative and respectable leaders
Edited sentence: It is dedicated to instilling in Victorians a spirit of achievement, and nurturing them into becoming innovative and respectable leaders.The school states its mission to be a premier school recognised for a rich tradition of excellence, and its ability to groom upright and balanced individuals with leadership qualities.Victoria School aims to provide a stimulating environment that promotes life-long learning for high-calibre students from Singapore and abroad, as well as inculcating in them the values to be responsible and effective individuals