Original sentence: Her daughter and son-in-law came from US to take care of her as she battled cancer and suffered from a bout of pneumonia.Her director was the famous Shakti Samanta, and her leading man was the equally famous Kishore Kumar, and she replaced Kumar's real-life ailing wife, the megastar Madhubala,.However, she shared screen space with two other leading ladies Nanda and Simi Garewal, so she didn't have the kind of stature she would have,.It was her third film Professor (1962) that turned out to be the biggest hit of her career.Kalpana's first film "Pyaar Ki Jeet" lasted only a week in theatres.Preeti and Harish settled in United States of America with their two children.She was a good swimmer and knew Horse riding as well.as the heroine.if she been the sole leading lady
Edited sentence: Her childhood dream was to become an actress.Her daughter and son-in-law came from the US to take care of her as she battled cancer and suffered from a bout of pneumonia.Her director was the famous Shakti Samanta, and her leading man was the equally famous Kishore Kumar, and she replaced Kumar's real-life ailing wife, the megastar Madhubala, as the heroine.However, she shared screen space with two other leading ladies Nanda and Simi Garewal, so she didn't have the kind of stature she would have if she were the sole leading lady.It was her third film Professor (1962) that turned out \to be the biggest hit of her career.Kalpana's first film "Pyaar Ki Jeet"  with Mahipal lasted only a week in theatres.Preeti and Harish settled in the United States of America with their two children.She knew swimming and Horse riding as well.She was a very caring and protective mother