Original sentence: The Battle of Chamdo (), or officially in China as the Liberation of Tibet, was a military campaign by the People's Republic of China (PRC) against a de facto independent Tibet in Chamdo after months of failed negotiations.The campaign resulted in the capture of Chamdo and further negotiations between the PRC and Tibetan representatives, eventually resulting in the incorporation of Tibet into the People's Republic of China.The purpose of the campaign was to capture the Tibetan army in Chamdo, demoralize the Lhasa government, and to thus exert enough pressure to get Tibetan representatives to agree to attend negotiations in Beijing and sign terms recognizing Chinese sovereignty over Tibet
Edited sentence: The Battle of Chamdo (), or officially in China as the Liberation of Tibet, was a military campaign by the People's Republic of China (PRC) against a fake independent Tibet in Chamdo after months of failed negotiations.The purpose of the campaign was to beat the Tibetan army in Chamdo, demoralize the Lhasa government, and to thus exert enough pressure to get Tibetan representatives to agree to attend negotiations in Beijing and sign terms recognizing Chinese sovereignty over Tibet-and to finally stop slavery in Tibet