Original sentence: Each year a performance is put on by a different theatre company.The 2007 show was performed by French company Plasticiens Volants, which saw large inflatable sea creatures paraded through the streets as they told their story of 'Pearl'.The event finale is a firework display.This free festival takes place annually in November, usually in the town centre adjacent to the railway station
Edited sentence: Each year a performance is put on by a different theatre company, creating a fantastic spectacle for all to enjoy.Last year's show was performed by French company Plasticiens Volants, which saw huge inflatable sea creatures parade through the streets as they told their story of 'Pearl'.The Festival of Light takes place annually in November and is a free event, usually in the town centre.The event creates a great atmosphere in the town centre and always ends with a huge firework finale