Original sentence: Bernard Fall records in his book Street Without Joy, "he was only twenty-five years old, but he looked fifty; he kept on walking like an automaton to the centre of the post before he was stopped by some of the men staring at him as at a ghost
Edited sentence: Bernard Fall recorded in Street Without Joy, "he was only twenty-five years old, but he looked fifty; he kept on walking like an automaton to the centre of the post before he was stopped by some of the men staring at him as at a ghost