Original sentence: Pro-Palestinian groups and individuals often refer to the IDF as the "Israeli Occupation Force" (IOF).This epithet expresses their belief that the primary role of the IDF is maintaining the "Occupation" of the Palestinian territories, rather than "Defense" of Israeli citizens
Edited sentence: Many anti-occupation activist groups and individuals often refer to the IDF as the "Israeli Occupation Force" (IOF).This alternative title expresses their belief that the primary role of the IDF is maintaining the "Occupation" of the Palestinian territories, rather than "Defense" of Israeli citizens