Original sentence: Cooper does say in her book that slavery was worse in South America and in the southern United States than in Canada under the French and British, but points out that it was still a horrible and cruel practise.For example, the English stated in the Treaty of Paris that slavery in Lower Canada would continue under them as it had under French rule.While Angélique was convicted and executed by the French colonial government, historians such as Cooper show that slavery in Upper Canada (now Ontario) and in Lower Canada (now Quebec) under both English and French rule was a terrible institution, and it is unlikely Angélique would have been treated fairly under either
Edited sentence: Cooper does say in her book that slavery was worse in South America and in the United States than in Canada under the French and British, but clearly states that it was still a horrible and cruel practise.For example, the English clearly stated in the Treaty of Paris that slavery in Lower Canada would continue under them as it had under French rule.While Angélique was convicted and executed by the French colonial government, historians such as Cooper clearly show that slavery in Upper Canada (now Ontario) and in Lower Canada (now Quebec) under both English and French rule was a terrible institution, and it is unlikely Angélique would have been treated fairly under either