Original sentence: Clair was CEO of a company who's goal was to develop electronics products that would be bought by consumers to replace used and damaged electronic devices.Their Mission statement was simple: "Our challenge is to assertively network economically sound methods of empowerment so that we may continually negotiate performance based infrastructures".These  new electronic devices were manufactured with the intent of Planned obsolescence (which was designed to be shortly after purchase of the Multivenplex Inc
Edited sentence: Clair was CEO of a company who's goal was to develop electronics products that would be bought by consumers to replace used, damaged, and worn out electronic devices.These  new Multivenplex Inc.electronic devices were manufactured with the intent of Planned obsolescence (which was designed to be shortly after purchase of the new products) Their Mission statement was simple: "Our challenge is to assertively network economically sound methods of empowerment so that we may continually negotiate performance based infrastructures"