Original sentence: The original castle had a French keep (Scolland’s Hall) but this was superseded by a 100 foot high keep constructed at the end of the 12th century by Conan the Little and completed by King Henry II.William the Conqueror put down the 1069 rebellion in the “harrying of the North” and as a punishment divided out the lands of north Yorkshire among his most loyal followers
Edited sentence: The original castle had a French keep (Scolland's Hall) but this was superseded by a 100 foot high keep constructed at the end of the 12th century by Conan the Little and completed by King Henry II.William the Conqueror put down the 1069 rebellion in the "harrying of the North" and as a punishment divided out the lands of north Yorkshire among his most loyal followers