Original sentence: Alcohol stimulates insulin production, which speeds up the glucose metabolism and can result in low blood sugar, causing irritability.Alcoholism has more and more serious effects on health than moderate drinking.Alcoholism is a major concern for public health; like other kinds of addiction, it is also viewed as a form of immorality.Chronic effects of alcohol consumption include effects of its metabolism in the liver, its carcinogenity, its effects on the brain, and effects of addiction (alcoholism).For example, cirrhosis is stereotypically found in heavy drinkers.In excess, the poisoning can be severe, even lethal.Propensity to alcoholism is partially genetic; individuals with such propensity may have a different biochemical response to alcohol.Some forms of cancer have been linked to excessive consumption of alcohol.The condition is called alcohol intoxication or drunkenness, and eventually subsides.This is about six times the level of intoxication (0.08%), but vomiting and/or unconsciousness are triggered much sooner in people with a low tolerance, among whom such high levels are rarely reached unless a large amount of alcohol is consumed very quickly
Edited sentence: Alcohol stimulates insulin production, which speeds up the glucose metabolism and can result in low blood sugar.Also, some forms of cancer have been linked to excessive consumption of alcohol.In excess the negative effects can be severe, even lethal.Propensity to addiction (alcoholism) is genetic.This is only about six times the level of intoxication (0.08%), but vomiting and/or unconsciousness are triggered much sooner in people with a low tolerance, among whom such high levels are rarely reached unless a large amount of alcohol is consumed very quickly