Original sentence: McLaughlin's version was supposed to appear on his album OK Now, however, Mathew Knowles suggested that her daughter Beyoncé should be the singer to release it.Originally recorded by artist Jon McLaughlin in the form of "Smack Into You", this version was never released commercially (however, on McLaughlin's official site, the original interpretation can be heard).The song was retooled by the producers The Dream and renamed by Beyoncé, in what appears as the final version on the album release, which makes Beyoncé part of the songwriters of the song, after changing "Smack" into "Smash"
Edited sentence: McLaughlin's version was supposed to appear on his album OK Now but was instead bought to be included on Beyonce's album.Originally recorded by Jon McLaughlin in the form of "Smack Into You", it was never officially release by either artist (however, on McLaughlin's official site, the original interpretation can be heard).Producer, The Dream has re-tooled the melody whilst Beyoncé is listed as having writing contribution to the song having changed "Smack" into "Smash" during the chorus