Original sentence: "  Jeffrey Masters, Chief meteorologist for Weather Underground, writes: "Crichton presents an error-filled and distorted version of the Global Warming science, favoring views of the handful of contrarians that attack the consensus science of the IPCC."Michael Crichton’s latest blockbuster, State of Fear, is also on the theme of global warming and is likely to mislead the unwary.Hansen, head of the NASA Goddard Institute for Space Studies, wrote "He (Michael Crichton) doesn’t seem to have the foggiest notion about the science that he writes about.James E.Several scientists whose research had been referenced in the novel stated that Crichton had distorted it in the novel.Sixteen of 18 top U.The Union of Concerned Scientists devote a section of their website to what they describe as misconceptions readers may take away from the book.This novel received criticism from climate scientists, science journalists and environmental groups for inaccuracies and misleading information.climate scientists interviewed by Knight Ridder said the author was bending scientific data and distorting research
Edited sentence: "Michael Crichton’s latest work, State of Fear, is also on the theme of global warming and is likely to mislead the unwary.Jeffrey Masters, Chief meteorologist for Weather Underground, writes: "Crichton presents an error-filled and distorted version of the Global Warming science, favoring views of the handful of contrarians that attack the consensus science of the IPCC.This novel received criticism from a few climate scientists, science journalists and environmental groups for alleged inaccuracies and misleading information