Original sentence: As well as anchoring programmes in the studio, he regularly presents on location.He is an occasional presenter of the BBC Six O'Clock News, and he has also fronted the BBC One O'Clock News.He joined the BBC Breakfast team in 2001 as one of the programme's main presenters, and over the last five years he has presented alongside Sophie Raworth, Sian Williams, Tanya Beckett, Natasha Kaplinsky, Mishal Husain, Kate Silverton, Susanna Reid and a number of others.He joined the BBC and Breakfast as a reporter in 1988, before becoming a correspondent for BBC News.In 1997 Turnbull moved back to the UK and into the studio to become one of the main presenters on BBC News 24.In 2005, he was a contestant in the third season of the BBC dancing competition Strictly Come Dancing, paired with Karen Hardy.Knocked out of the competition after a seven weeks.The pair performed entertaining routines, and he made it to the later stages of the competition despite sustaining a serious ankle injury in the second week, which then flared up at various points in the series.Turnbull's career in journalism began at Scottish local station Radio Clyde, and later he freelanced for a number of years in the USA
Edited sentence: As well as anchoring programmes in the studio, Bill regularly presents on location.Bill is an occasional presenter of the BBC Six O'Clock News, and he's also fronted the BBC One O'Clock News.Bill joined the BBC and Breakfast as a reporter in 1988, before becoming a correspondent for BBC News.Bill's career in journalism began at Scottish local station Radio Clyde, and later he freelanced for a number of years in the USA.In 1997 Bill moved back to the UK and into the studio to become one of the main presenters on BBC News 24.In 2005, Bill was a contestant in the third season of the BBC dancing competition Strictly Come Dancing, paired with Karen Hardy.Knocked out of the competition after a creditable seven weeks.The pair performed entertaining routines, and made it to the later stages of the competition despite Bill sustaining a serious ankle injury in the second week, which then flared up at various points in the series.Turnbull joined the BBC Breakfast team in 2001 as one of the programme's main presenters, and over the last five years he has presented alongside Sophie Raworth, Sian Williams, Tanya Beckett, Natasha Kaplinsky, Mishal Husain, Kate Silverton, Susanna Reid and a number of others