Original sentence: Patrice  fought for the independence of the African Congo.Pauline Opango Lumumba, also known as Pauline Opangu, was born in the year of 1937, on January 1st.Pauline was married to Patrice Lumumba, and together they shared four children named Patrice, Julienne, Roland and Marie-Christine
Edited sentence: In 2014, at seventy-one years old, she died while sleeping.Patrice was a brave and inspiring man who fought for the independence of the African Congo.Pauline Opango Lumumba also known as, Pauline Opango was born in the year of 1937, on January 1st.Pauline was married to a man named  Patrice Lumumba, together they shared four children named Patrice, Julienne, Roland and Marie-Christine