Original sentence: In 1865, police superintendant John A.Most New York concert saloons of the 1860s were not nearly as grand as the [[Canterbury.Music Hall]], which presented lengthy variety bills in a theatrical setting with a small orchestra rather than a mere piano player
Edited sentence: In 1865, police superintendent John A.Most New York concert saloons of the 1860s were not nearly as grand as the Canterbury Music Hall, which presented lengthy variety bills in a theatrical setting with a small orchestra rather than a mere piano player