Original sentence: This benefit is doubtful at the present because the bridge project has been stopped.This project would also attract Singaporean tourists to Johor Bahru and the rest of Johor because of the improved transportation link which increases convenience and decreases travelling time besides improving the overall image of the country
Edited sentence: This benefit is doubtful at the present because the bridge project has been stopped and the eight-lane permanent link is still under early phase of construction.This project would also attract Singaporean tourists to Johor Bahru and the rest of Johor because of the improved transportation link which increases convenience and decreases travelling time