Original sentence: Pimple Saudagar  is a suburb in  Pimpri-Chinchwad, India.Situated  from Chinchwad and centered in between the suburbs of Baner and Aundh, the locality is a developing residential area that attracts the newer population of the city.The Pavana River cutting through the northern areas of the locality is the major source of water, however water shortage is being experienced in the recent years due to the expanding population and water usage
Edited sentence: It is considered safest area for working women and has low crime rate in Pune and PCMC area.New highway connecting to Nashik phata has provided much needed connectivity to Mumbai Pune express way.Pimple Saudagar  is a top most suburb in  Pimpri-Chinchwad, India.Situated  from Chinchwad and centered in between the suburbs of Baner and Aundh, It has theaters, schools and shopping malls.The Pavana River cutting through the northern areas of the locality is the major source of water, no water shortage is being experienced in the recent years due to the expanding infrastructure and storage facilites.The locality is a developed into premium residential area that attracts the top notch population of the city