Original sentence: William Copeland Borlase MA, FSA (1848 – 31 March 1899) born at Castle Horneck, near Penzance in Cornwall, was a well known antiquarian and Member of Parliament (MP) for the St Austell division of Cornwall
Edited sentence: William Copeland Borlase MA FSA (1848 – 31 March 1899), born at Castle Horneck, near Penzance in Cornwall, was a well known antiquarian and Member of Parliament (MP) for the St Austell division of Cornwall