Original sentence: Medieval weapons were still in service during the Renaissance and Civil war
Edited sentence: In ruler of the Kingdom of Mysore's based in South India, Tipu Sultan pioneered a number of advanced weapons, including the rocket artirellery and the Mysorean rockets, which were later used by Napoleone Bonaparted and the British Empire.Medieval weapons were still in service during the Renaissance, period of the Islamic Gunpowders, and Civil wars