Original sentence: In Diamond and Pearl, the Poké Radar can be used to "chain" Pokémon of the same type, improving the odds of a shiny Pokémon with each link (up to 40 links, when the odds are 1 in 205)
Edited sentence: In Diamond,Pearl, and Platinum, the Poké Radar can be used to "chain" Pokémon of the same type, improving the odds of a shiny Pokémon with each link (up to 40 links, when the odds are 1 in 205)