Original sentence: Andy Dick - actor-comedian (The Andy Dick Show).Anthony Rapp - actor (Rent).Charlie Adams, drummer/percussionist (Chameleon, Yanni).Jimmy Chamberlin, drummer (The Smashing Pumpkins)
Edited sentence: Andy Dick - One of Joliet West's most famous alumnus is most probably actor-comedian Andy Dick, who won the title of Homecoming King with the slogan, "Vote for A.Anthony Rapp - Good friends with Andy Dick, he later went on to star in RENT and write a memoir- partly about his experiences in Joliet.Brent Snyder Football, NFL former NFL Quarterback Bears & Jets.Charlie Adams (drummer), Drummer/percussionist for Yanni and various motion picture tracks.Jimmy Chamberlin, Drummer, The Smashing Pumpkins