Original sentence: He has won the annual Banzai Pipeline line event a record 11 times, from which 8 earned him the world title, and has been crowned the Pipeline Bodysurfing Classic champion a record 10 times
Edited sentence: He has won the annual Banzai Pipeline event a record 11 times, from which 8 earned him the world title, and has been crowned the Pipeline Bodysurfing Classic champion a record 10 times