Original sentence: HMS Cochrane was a Duke of Edinburgh class armored cruiser launched on 28 May 1905 at Fairfield Shipbuilding and Engineering, Govan, Scotland.She served in the First World War, where she was part of the Second Cruiser Squadron under Rear Admiral Scott Martin, taking part in the Battle of Jutland in 1916
Edited sentence: HMS Cochrane was a Duke of Edinburgh class armoured cruiser launched on 28 May 1905 at Fairfield Shipbuilding and Engineering, Govan, Scotland.She served in the First World War, where she was part of the Second Cruiser Squadron under Rear-Admiral Scott Martin, taking part in the Battle of Jutland in 1916