Original sentence: During a performance at Velour in Salt Lake City, Utah on September 6, 2006, frontman Dave Elkins made the following statement before the band performed "Mistakes We Knew We Were Making" (transcribed from video previously posted on YouTube):
Edited sentence: During a performance at the Avalon Theater in Salt Lake City, Utah on September 6, 2006, frontman Dave Elkins made the following statement before the band performed "Mistakes We Knew We Were Making" (transcribed from video previously posted on YouTube):