Original sentence: It currently serves 70,000 morning subscribers and 80,000 on Sundays.The Modesto Bee has about 150 employees and is delivered throughout central California, reaching places such as Manteca, Merced, Patterson and Sonora
Edited sentence: It appears to be a biased newspaper and has a bad public image in the community it serves.It currently serves 40,000 morning subscribers and 50,000 on Sundays.The Modesto Bee has about 100 employees and is delivered throughout central California, reaching places such as Manteca, Merced, Patterson and Sonora.The Modesto Bee has lost subscribers over the past few years and is known to be a newspaper with few real journalists