Original sentence: (The first original song ever recorded by the Beatles, somewhat ironically, was an instrumental homage to the Shadows entitled "Cry for a Shadow.Bennett and Licorice were friends from the 2I's and had all played together, mainly with The Krew Kats.The tour was not artistically successful, and the live LP is not held in high regard, though it does feature a long version of "Slaughter on Tenth Avenue" in which Marvin plays acoustic and electric guitar.This Shadows line-up produced seven hits, two of which, "Dance On" and "Foot Tapper" topped the charts
Edited sentence: (The first original song ever recorded by the Beatles was an instrumental homage to the Shadows entitled "Cry for a Shadow.Bennett and Licorice were friends from the 2I's who had both previously been in Marty Wilde's backing group The Wildcats who also recorded instrumentals as The Krew Kats.The live LP of the tour features a long version of "Slaughter on Tenth Avenue" in which Marvin plays acoustic and electric guitar.This Shadows line-up also produced seven hits, two of which, "Dance On" and "Foot Tapper" topped the charts