Original sentence: Unlike other parts of the men's movement, pro-feminists have been reluctant to focus too much on how men are also the victims of patriarchy
Edited sentence: Bill Clinton's affair with Monica Lewinsky is a prime example in recent history but there are other instances going back to the 1970s and before wherein politicians have appeared to be male feminist hypocrites.Unlike other parts of the men's movement, pro-feminists have been reluctant to focus too much on how men are also the victims of patriarchy, largely because this has often made men's suffering the focus of debate to the exclusion of women's issues