Original sentence: Danny Wayland "Dan" Seals (February 8, 1948 – March 25, 2009) was an American musician.He first gained fame as the "England Dan" half of the soft rock duo England Dan and John Ford Coley, which charted nine pop singles between 1976 and 1980, including "I'd Really Love to See You Tonight"
Edited sentence: Danny Wayland "Dan" Seals (born February 8, 1948 in McCamey, Texas; died March 25, 2009 in Nashville, Tennessee) was an American musician.He first gained fame as the "England Dan" half of the soft rock duo England Dan and John Ford Coley, which charted nine singles between 1976 and 1980, including the #2 pop hit "I'd Really Love to See You Tonight"