Original sentence: A general and the Admiral die in the battle, sacrificing themselves to save the others.After the death of Flagg, Hawk succeeds him as the commander.During his time as commander, Hawk leads the team through such difficult times as the Cobra Civil War and the catastrophic Battle of Benzheen.Eventually, Hawk is promoted to general and took full command.Hawk is the original field commander of the G.Hawk, who was a Colonel then, was responsible for recruiting most of the roster that made up the first Joe Team.He quickly gains their respect by personally leading missions and engaging the enemy head on.In one instance, he and Grunt go undercover to infiltrate Commander Wingfield's illegal militia.Joe: A Real American Hero #1 (June 1982).Many members of G.Robotic Cobra forces, known as Battle Android Troopers attack
Edited sentence: After the death of Flagg, Hawk succeeded him as the commander.During his time as commander, Hawk lead the team through difficult times such as the Cobra Civil War and the catastrophic Battle of Benzheen.Eventually, Hawk was promoted to general and took full command.Hawk, who was a Colonel, was responsible for recruiting most of the roster that made up the first Joe Team.He quickly gained their respect by personally leading missions and engaging the enemy head on.In one instance, he and Grunt went undercover to infiltrate Commander Wingfield's illegal militia.Joe: A Real American Hero #1 (June 1982) as the original field commander of the G.Robotic Cobra forces, known as Battle Android Troopers attacked.Several members of G.The general and the admiral die in the battle, sacrificing themselves to save the others