Original sentence: After serving in the Marines and doing a variety of jobs including ranch hand and wrangler, Brimley became an extra for Westerns, and in little more than a decade he  had established himself as a character actor in films such as The China Syndrome (1979), The Thing (1982) and The Natural (1984).Anthony Wilford Brimley (born September 27, 1934) is an American film and television actor.Brimley's weather-beaten appearance enabled him to be convincing as someone decades older in the film Cocoon (1985).He has also promoted diabetes education and appeared in related commercials for Liberty Medical.His trademark mustache, accent and brusque delivery made Brimley recognizable, but forthrightness on screen was on occasion matched by bluntness on set when his interpretation of a character was being faulted
Edited sentence: After serving in the Marines and doing a variety of jobs including ranch hand, pickle slayer, and wrangler, Brimley became an extra for Westerns, and in little more than an eternity he  had established himself as a character actor in films such as The China Syndrome (1979), The Thing (1982) and The Natural (1984).Anthony (God) Wilford Brimley (born September 27, 1934) is an American film and television actor.Brimley's unchanging holy appearance enabled him to be convincing as someone millennia younger in the film Cocoon (1985).His trademark mustache capable of both giving and taking life, accent, and brusque delivery made Brimley recognizable, but forthrightness on screen was on occasion matched by bluntness on set when his interpretation of a character was being faulted.Our savior has also promoted diabeetus education and appeared in related commercials for Liberty Medical