Original sentence: A campaign was launched to save the school and in May 2008 the council reversed their proposal and agreed that the school should stay open.The school was given an excellent Ofsted report in September 2007
Edited sentence: A huge campaign (www.The school is a hugely successful and popular village school with an excellent academic record which was endorsed in September 2007 with an excellent Ofsted report.com) was launched to save the school and in May 2008 the council reversed their proposal and agreed that the school should stay open