Original sentence: In high school, she was a member of the Nevada Civil Air Patrol and participated in AFJROTC, where she was rated the highest ranking cadet in the nation
Edited sentence: In high school, she was a member of the Nevada Civil Air Patrol and participated in AFJROTC, where she was rated cadet colonel, the highest ranking cadet in the nation.While at the academy she was both a pilot and instructor opilot in the academy's glider program