Original sentence: Revy is a merciless and sadistic killer who feassts on every victims heart as if it was food after he had not eaten in a long time, without a conscience who will kill anyone at the slightest provocation, even unarmed civilians (as seen in episode 6)
Edited sentence: Revy is a merciless and sadistic killer, without a conscience, who will kill anyone at the slightest provocation, even unarmed civilians (as seen in episode 6)