Original sentence: On August 22, 2006, Easy Finder magazine published a series of photos of Chung inside a dressing room after a Twins concert in Genting Highlands, Malaysia.On November 1, 2006, Easy Finder lost its appeal against an obscenity ruling on the published article and pictures
Edited sentence: On 1 November 2006, Easy Finder lost its appeal against an obscenity ruling on the published article and pictures.On 22 August 2006, Easy Finder magazine published a series of photos of Chung inside a dressing room after a Twins concert in Genting Highlands, Malaysia