Original sentence: As of October 15, 2006, the 2007 musical is set to be Urinetown: The Musical.In 2006, SJR presented the world high school premiere of Miss Saigon.It was nominated for multiple awards in the 10th Annual Drama Festival at Fairleigh Dickinson University, as well as the Helen Hayes Theater Awards, and the Paper Mill Rising Star Awards.Only 20 members allowed per year.SJR, while being a very sports-oriented school, is relatively famous for its theater program.The SJR varsity football team has a current streak of seven league titles
Edited sentence: As of 10/15/06, the 2007 musical is set to be Urinetown: The Musical.In 2006, SJR presented the world high school premiere of Miss Saigon which was undoubtable the biggest musical success of SJR history thus far.It is known for it's antics, like Hijacking the Green Knight statue on a regular basis, and for it's "inside joke" style of programming.It was nominated for multiple awards in the 10th Annual Drama Festival at FDU, as well as the Helen Hayes Theater Awards, and the Paper Mill Rising Star Awards.SJR, while being a very sports oriented school, is relatively famous for it's theater program.The SJR varsity football team has a current streak of 7 titles, making "7-PEAT" an unofficial slogan of the school.WSJR is a very exclusive, tight knit group, with only 20 members allowed per year.WSJR is hilarious for SJR students, but not particularly amusing for out of school viewers