Original sentence: Born Virginia (nicknamed "Ginny" as a child) Patterson Hensley on September 8, 1932, in Gore, Virginia, she was the daughter of Sam and Hilda Hensley, a blacksmith and a seamstress; Hilda was only 16.Patsy was the eldest of three children, which included a brother, Sam, and a sister, Sylvia
Edited sentence: Because of this, Cline and her mother were very close to each other.Born Virginia (nicknamed "Ginny" as a child) Patterson Hensley on September 8, 1932, in Gore, Virginia, she was the daughter of Sam and Hilda Hensley, a blacksmith and a seamstress.Her mother had Cline when she was only 16, which made the two very close in age.She was the eldest of three children, which included a brother, Sam, and a sister, Sylvia