Original sentence: Other libertarians would argue that the empirical evidence demonstrates that property enforcement is necessary to the functioning of society, that various redistributionist schemes and, in particular, state ownership of the factors of production are all bound to fail, and that capitalism ultimately provides a more optimal and equitable distribution of goods to members of society.Some libertarians would support this form of capitalism even if one could demonstrate that other economic systems are more efficient from an economic perspective, arguing that the right to property, including ownership of oneself and, by extension, in one's labor, supercedes efficiency
Edited sentence: Bush made "personal accounts," another term for privatization, an important part of his agenda during his second term.Others would argue that the empirical evidence demonstrates that various redistributionist schemes and, in particular, state ownership of the factors of production are all bound to fail, and that capitalism ultimately provides a more optimal and equitable distribution of goods to members of society.President George W.Some libertarians would support this form of capitalism even if one could demonstrate that socialism is more efficient from an economic perspective, arguing that the right to property, including ownership of oneself and, by extension, in one's labor, supercedes efficiency