Original sentence: The first decade of commercials (1989-1999) consisted primarily of disjunctive verbal descriptions, such as "relentless," "pursuit," and "perfection" while the vehicles were used to claim superiority in braking, handling, idling, and interior quiet & comfort on camera
Edited sentence: The first decade of commercials (1989-1999) consisted primarily of disjunctive verbal descriptions, such as "relentless," "pursuit," and "perfection" while the vehicles were used to illustrate superiority in braking, handling, idling, and interior quiet & comfort on camera