Original sentence: A "Me" section show the phone user's own social networks status and wall, allow the user to update his or her status, and allows users to check-in to Bing and Facebook Places.A "What's New" section shows a user's Facebook news feed and a "Pictures" section show pictures from those social networks
Edited sentence: A "What's New" section show news feed and a "Pictures" section show pictures from those social networks made by status and wall, allow the user to update his status, and check-in to Bing and Facebook Places.The main criticism of Windows Phone is still the lack of applications when compared to iOS and Android