Original sentence: Hipperholme is a thriving village with many local shops, and is also home several pubs, including the Whitehall,the Travellers, the Country House, the Hare and Hounds and the White Horse
Edited sentence: Hipperholme is a thriving village with many local shops, and is also home to one of the best pubs in West Yorkshire, the Whitehall, located on the Crossroads.Other pubs in the area are the Travellers, the Country House, the Hare and Hounds and the White Horse