Original sentence: Spread over the books of Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers, and Deuteronomy, it tells of the enslavement that befell the children of Israel in Egypt, their liberation through the hand of Yahweh and the revelations at Sinai, and their wanderings in the wilderness up to borders of Canaan, the land their God has given them.The Exodus is the founding myth of the Israelites
Edited sentence: Both of which would have been glaringly obvious to anyone who was actually there and certainly worthy of mentioning.Moses certainly never existed.Spread over the books of Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers, and Deuteronomy, it tells of the enslavement that befell the children of Israel in Egypt, their liberation through the hand of Yahweh and the revelations at Sinai, and their wanderings in the wilderness up to the borders of Canaan, the land their God has given them.The Egyptians kept detailed records from this era and such data has busted the exodus myth as surely it has the Noah's Ark myth.The Exodus is the founding story of the Israelites.The parting of the red sea and other miracles are clearly fairy tales and the camels ridden in this fantastical story hadn't even been domesticated yet according to archaeologists.There is no evidence that the Jews were even slaves in ancient Egypt and the old testament makes no mention of either the Sphynx or Pyramids