Original sentence: Aside from Babe Ruth, the Yankees have picked up players Wade Boggs, Johnny Damon, Kevin Cash, Doug Mientkiewicz, and Alan Embree, while the Red Sox have picked up David Cone, Ramiro Mendoza, Nick Green and Mike Lowell, among others
Edited sentence: Aside from Babe Ruth, the Yankees have picked up players Wade Boggs, Johnny Damon, Kevin Cash, Doug Mientkiewicz, and Alan Embree, while the Red Sox have picked up David Cone and Ramiro Mendoza, among others