Original sentence: He hails from Ushongo Local Government Area of Benue State.Orhii has over 20 years cumulative working experience in the field of medicine in Nigeria and the United States of America.Orhii is a Russian trained doctor and he recently acquired a Juris Doctor  degree from the Thurgood Marshall  School of Law at the Texas Southern University.The problem of fake drugs was so severe that neighboring countries such as Ghana and Sierra Leone officially banned the sale of drugs made in Nigeria
Edited sentence: He hails from Ushongo Local Government Area of Benue State..Dr.Orhii   is a Russian trained doctor and he recently acquired a Juris Doctor  degree from the Thurgood Marshall  School of Law at the Texas Southern University.Orhii  has over 20 years cumulative working experience in the field of medicine in Nigeria and the United States of America.The problem of fake drugs was so severe that “neighboring countries such as Ghana and Sierra Leone officially banned the sale of drugs made in Nigeria.Though he has lived in the US for a number of years and his family still lives there,Orhii's accent is not polished-he speaks English with a Tiv accent