Original sentence: " His longtime mistress and model, Dot, sings of the frustrations of her vocation in the opening number, Sunday In The Park With George.Act I.Act II.After most of the museum's patrons have vacated, Marie sings about the significance of leaving a legacy, Children And Art.In 1884, a fictional George Seurat is painting what is considered by many to be his (Seurat's) masterpiece, "Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte.In a surreal moment, a fantasy Dot appears and discusses 'her' book with George
Edited sentence: After most of the museum's patrons have vacated, Marie sings about the significance of leaving a legacy, in a moving number, Children And Art.His longtime mistress and model, Dot, sings of the frustrations of her vocation in the opening number, Sunday In The Park With George.In 1884, George Seurat is painting what is considered by many to be his (Seurat's) masterpiece, "Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte.In a surreal moment, Dot appears and discusses 'her' book with George