Original sentence: In hindsight, the Nehruvian model ultimately failed in most of its objectives;  many Indian economists — particularly among Nehru's contemporaries — believe Nehru's emphasis on central planning was the right policy for India of that time.It is also worth noting that India's trend growth rate in GDP stayed above 4% for all the years that Nehru was PM; some recent studies for instance by Goldman Sachs have claimed that India, had the potential to grow faster in the 1960-1980 timeframe, but that opportunity was wasted because of what appears to be, in hindsight, a misplaced faith in the power of economic planning.Nehru is considered to have written rather well, but he was not a scholar, and he was conditioned by his strong views as a Fabian.The British left behind civic institutions including the judicial system, parliament and universities, all of which continued to retain vigour during Nehru's tenure
Edited sentence: In hindsight, the Nehruvian model ultimately failed in most of its objectives;  many Indian economists—particularly among Nehru's contemporaries—believe Nehru's emphasis on central planning was the right policy for India of that time.It is also worth noting that India's trend growth rate in GDP stayed above 4% for all the years that Nehru was PM; some recent studies for instance by Goldman Sachs have claimed that India, had the potential to grow faster in the 1960-1980 timeframe, but that opportunity was wasted because of what appears to be, in hindsight, a touching but misplaced faith in the power of economic planning.Nehru is considered to have written rather well, but he was not a scholar, and he was conditioned by his strong views in as a Fabian.The British left behind civic institutions including the judicial system, parliament and universities, all of which continued to retain the vigour during Nehru's tenure