Original sentence: Finally, in 1999, he put together a group that bought the Montreal Expos.Loria is an art dealer and the owner of the Florida Marlins of the National League, and the former owner of the Montreal Expos of the National League.With the largest stake in the group (24%), he became the team's managing partner
Edited sentence: He finally succeeded by purchasing 24% of the Montreal Expos in 1999 for 12 million dollars and became their Managing Partner.He is widely considered one of the most detrimental owners to the interests of Major League Baseball.Loria is an art dealer and the owner of the Florida Marlins of the National League