Original sentence: The book reached #1 on several best seller lists (Including Border's, The Washington Post, and the Boston Globe) and appeared on the New York Times Best Seller List
Edited sentence: It achieved great critical and commercial success, reaching #1 on many best seller lists (Including Border's, The Washington Post, and the Boston Globe), as well as making it onto the New York Times Best Seller List, as well as earning accolades from writers such Dan Brown, as well as numerous critics