Original sentence: Critics of Thatcherism claim that its successes were obtained only at the expense of great social costs to the British population.During her government Britain's Gini coefficient reflected this growing inequality, going from 0.25 in 1979 to 0.34 in 1990.For it is our party which is dedicated to good housekeeping—indeed, I would not mind betting that if Mr.Industrial production fell sharply during Thatcher's government, which critics believe increased unemployment — which tripled during her premiership.Reduction in the power of the trades unions was made gradually, unlike the approach of the Heath Government, and the greatest single confrontation with the unions was the NUM strike of 1984 to 1985, in which the union eventually had to concede.Thatcher also was blamed for spurring a doubling in the poverty rate
Edited sentence: Critics of Thatcherism claim that its successes were obtained only at the expense of great social costs to the British population, a claim made by many  Marxists.During her government Britain's Gini coefficient reflected this growing "inequality", going from 0.25 in 1979 to 0.34 in 1990.For it is our party which is dedicated to good housekeeping and mash;indeed, I would not mind betting that if Mr.Industrial production fell sharply during Thatcher's government, which critics believe increased unemployment — which tripled during her premiership, this is however counter-argued by the fact that Thatcher revitalised the British economy.Reduction in the power of the trades unions was made gradually, unlike the approach of the Heath Government, and the greatest single confrontation with the unions was the Miners strike of 1984 to 1985, in which the union eventually had to concede.Thatcher also was blamed for spurring a doubling in the poverty rate,  however only those on the left contest the fairness of the A hard days pay for a hard days work mantra