Original sentence: By the end of the twentieth century, many historians automatically presumed that Pearse, like Roger Casement and other figures associated with the independence movement (notably Eoin O'Duffy) was gay.Conor Cruise O'Brien claims that the influence of one of the Brothers, Brother Canice Craven, was central to Pearse's radical nationalism.Following the collapse of the Rising, Pearse along with his brother and the leaders of the Rising were executed.In 1915 he joined the Irish Republican Brotherhood and was the architect of the new proclamation proclaimed by the leaders of the Easter Rising of 1916.Patrick Henry Pearse in 1879 in Dublin, his father being a Cornish artisan/stonemason who held moderate home rule views.Patrick Pearse (also known as Pádraig Pease or in the Irish language Pádraig Mac Piarais) (1879-1916) was a teacher and writer who led the Irish Easter Rising in 1916.Pearse was educated by the Christian Brothers
Edited sentence: By the end of the twentieth century, many historians automatically presumed that Pearse, like Casement and other figures associated with the independence movement (notably Eoin O'Duffy) was gay.In 1915 he joined the Irish Republican Brotherhood and was the architect of the new constitution proclaimed by the leaders of the Easter Rising of 1916.Patrick (Pádraic, Pádraig) Pearse (Mac Piarais), teacher, writer, and Irish nationalist leader, was born Patrick Henry Pearse in 1879 in Dublin, his father being a Cornish artisan/stonemason.Pearse was educated by the Christian Brothers, and Conor Cruise O'Brien writes that the influence of one of the Brothers, Brother Canice Craven, pushed young Patrick towards a nationalist zealotry that might otherwise not have been inculcated, particularly since Pearse's father was only a moderate Home Rule supporter at best, and the degree of Pearse's mother's nationalism while his father was alive was apparently quite limited