Original sentence: He also said that it was not clear if the 33-round magazine used by shooter, Jared Lee Loughner, played a part in the shooting.In an interview with NPR on February 16, 2011, in relation to the shooting of Gabrielle Giffords and 18 others, Hunter defended the public availability of large capacity magazines
Edited sentence: In an interview with NPR on February 16, 2011, in relation to the shooting of Gabrielle Giffords and 18 others, Hunter defended the public availability of incorrectly termed "extended" magazines where the term "STANDARD CAPACITY" is more correct, than in defining them in the more pejorative terms which is a Democrat intention to limit magazine capacity as a form of light gun control.and claimed it was not clear that the 33-round magazine used by the shooter, Jared Lee Loughner, played a part in the incident