Original sentence: György Ligeti, for example, published an article that examined its patterns of durations, dynamics, pitch, and attack types in great detail, concluding that its "ascetic attitude" is "akin to compulsion neurosis", and that Boulez "had to break away from it
Edited sentence: György Ligeti, for example, published an article that examined its patterns of durations, dynamics, pitch, and attack types in excruciating detail, concluding that its "ascetic attitude" is "akin to compulsion neurosis", and that Boulez "had to break away from it