Original sentence: supporting same-sex marriage (although other denominations have affirmed committed relationships for LGBT people in other forms).to make a statement of support for same-sex marriage, and is hitherto the largest Christian denominational entity in the U
Edited sentence: supporting equal marriage rights (although other denominations have affirmed committed relationships for LGBT people in other forms).to make a statement of support for equal marriage rights for all people, regardless of gender, and is hitherto the largest Christian denominational entity in the U