Original sentence: Although 74 passengers sought medical treatment, only 1 major injury occurred and all passengers survived.The aircraft suffered a bird strike shortly after takeoff and made an emergency landing in a cornfield less than  from the runway with its landing gear up
Edited sentence: As a result, all passengers survived, 74 passengers sought medical treatment, only 1 major injury occurred.The aircraft suffered a bird strike, this led to the failure of both engines.The pilots made the right decision to land the plane in a cornfield less than  from the runway with its landing gear up