Original sentence: Eeyore, Rabbit, Roo and Tigger are now stood by the edge of the ravine, next to the waterfall, but the log inside which Pooh and Piglet were trapped has fallen far into the waters below.It is revealed that he rebuilt the house himself, but the location remains as Pooh Corner, since Pooh "would call it Pooh and Piglet Corner, if Pooh Corner didn't sound better, which it does, being smaller and more like a Corner".Just as they ask who can help, Piglet arrives and helps haul Pooh to safety... just as the log begins to collapse.The next day they hold a party, but Pooh interrupts, taking Piglet to Eeyores' house, where he has changed the sign to read Pooh and Piglet Corner; "the least [they] could do for a little Piglet, who has done such big things.The survivors begin to cry and are joined by sad-looking Pooh and Piglet, who have managed to escape
Edited sentence: Eeyore, Rabbit, Roo and Tigger now stand by the edge of the ravine, next to the waterfall, but the log inside which Pooh and Piglet were trapped has fallen far into the waters below.It is revealed that he rebuilt the house himself, but the location remains as Pooh Corner, since Pooh "would call it 'Pooh and Piglet Corner', if 'Pooh Corner' didn't sound better, which it does, being smaller and more like a corner".Just as they ask who can help, Piglet arrives and attempts to help haul Pooh to safety... just as the log begins to collapse.The next day they hold a party, but Pooh interrupts, taking Piglet to Eeyores' house, where he has changed the sign to read "Pooh and Piglet Corner"; "the least [they] could do for a little Piglet, who has done such big things.The survivors begin to cry but are soon joined by a sad-looking Pooh and Piglet, who have managed to escape