Original sentence: In a speech given in front of city hall, Young presented her populist platform and some of Coalition Vancouver's policies, such as cancelling what she called "luxury" bike lanes, increasing community consultation, and eliminating paid parking on Sundays.Young's opposition to bike lanes was a frequent talking point during the 2018 municipal election campaign, a position which earned her harsh criticism from some local commentators
Edited sentence: In a speech given in front of city hall, Young presented her populist platform and some of Coalition Vancouver's policies, such as cancelling what she called luxury bike lanes, increasing community consultation, and eliminating paid parking on Sundays.Young's opposition to bike lanes was a frequent talking point during the 2018 municipal election campaign, a position which earned her harsh criticism from many local commentators