Original sentence: There are also rare instances when Raistlin feels genuine regret that he cannot return to the times of his childhood, when he was capable of feeling love, a common lament throughout the series
Edited sentence: There are also rare instances when Raistlin feels genuine regret that he cannot return to the times of his childhood, when he was capable of feeling love.This is somewhat of a regular occurrence throughout the saga, and to a large degree adds to his relative depth