Original sentence: A former member of Danzig and of Rob Halford's post-Judas Priest band Fight, Chaussee brought an "old-school" heavy metal sound to Marilyn Manson's live performance, in contrast to John 5's polished hard rock influences.Mark Chaussee is tall, with long and thick blonde hair; onstage, during the AAG tour,he wore makeup similar to black metal corpsepaint
Edited sentence: A former member of Danzig and of Rob Halford's post-Judas Priest band Fight, Chaussee brought an "old-school" raw,aggressive and with-attitudeheavy-thrash metal sound to Marilyn Manson's live performance, in contrast to John 5's polished but soft, country influences.Mark Chaussee is tall,with long and thick blonde hair; onstage,during the AAG tour,his facepainting was remarkable of common "black metal corpsepainting",and he made several "metal moves",from headbanging to the "horns sign"