Original sentence: He made his Celtic debut on 10 February, scoring the final goal with his first touch of the ball in a 5-1 victory at Aberdeen, after only 63 seconds coming off the bench
Edited sentence: He made his Celtic debut on 10 February, coming off the bench, and crowned the occasion, scoring the final goal in a 5-1 rout at Aberdeen, just 63 seconds into his Celtic career, and with his first touch of the ball