Original sentence: On April 25 2009, filming the Top Gear Race to the North, from London Kings Cross Station to Edinburgh Balmoral Hotel between the new steam locomotive A1 class 60163 Tornado , a Jaguar XK120 and a Vincent Black Shadow motorbike, instead of choosing the car (driven by James May) he chose the Tornado and rode on the footplate throughout even firing the locomotive at points
Edited sentence: On 25 April 2009, while filming the Top Gear Race to the North, from London Kings Cross Station to Edinburgh Balmoral Hotel between the new steam locomotive A1 class 60163 Tornado , a Jaguar XK120 and a Vincent Black Shadow motorbike, instead of choosing the car (driven by James May) Clarkson chose the Tornado and rode on the footplate as the stoker