Original sentence: The (literal) cliffhanger at the end of episode 1 where the Doctor hangs himself off a ledge by his umbrella for apparently no reason at all is often criticised by some fans for being ludicrous
Edited sentence: The (literal) cliff hanger at the end of episode 1 where the doctor hangs himself off a ledge by his umbrella for apparently no reason at all is frequently reviled by fans for it's sheer stupidity