Original sentence: According to the Pentagon, if Zarqawi is indeed killed or seriously injured, this would be a huge blow to the insurgency.The hope is that his death would be devastating, because he was the "mastermind" of multiple attacks.Zarqawi is the most wanted man in Iraq.military operations in Iraq, perhaps with the tacit support of terrorist elements who wish to use him as a propaganda tool or as a distraction
Edited sentence: As the most-wanted man in Iraq, his death would be devastating, because he was the "mastermind" of multiple attacks.If Zarqawi is indeed injured or killed, this would be a huge blow to the insurgency, according to the Pentagon.military operations in Iraq