Original sentence: Despite the site's advocacy tag, its reporting is considered to be unbiased and fair.On November 14, 1998, MozillaZine merged with MozBin, which brought its webmaster, Jason Kersey, onboard.The site boasts the most active Mozilla forums on the web and hosts a number of weblogs by Mozilla developers.The site was founded by Chris Nelson on September 1, 1998, (just a few months after mozilla.org, which was created on February 23 of that year), and quickly grew in popularity
Edited sentence: Despite the site's advocacy tag, its reporting is unbiased and fair.On November 14th 1998, MozillaZine merged with MozBin, which brought its webmaster, Jason Kersey, onboard.The site also boasts the most active Mozilla forums on the web and hosts a number of weblogs by Mozilla developers.The site was founded by Chris Nelson on September 1st 1998 (just a few months after mozilla.org, which was created on February 23rd), and quickly grew in popularity