Original sentence: At UCLA Salmon studied primarily under Alonzo Church, David Kaplan, and Saul Kripke.He received his Ph.Salmon's first book, Reference and Essence (his doctoral dissertation) won the 1984 Gustave O
Edited sentence: At UCLA Salmon studied primarily under leading philosophers/logicians Alonzo Church, David Kaplan, and Saul Kripke.Frequently ranked as the leading philosopher of language of his generation, he received his Ph.Salmon's first book, *Reference and Essence (his doctoral dissertation) won the 1984 Gustave O