Original sentence: Cardinal, took on the bulk of the former Museum of Man collection - becoming the Canadian Museum of Civilization, and allowing the previous natural history collection co-located with the Museum of Man to expand to occupy the whole building.External Link
Edited sentence: Cardinal, took on the bulk of the former Museum of Man collection - becoming the more palatably named Canadian Museum of Civilization, and allowing the previous natural history collection co-located with the Museum of Man to expand to occupy the whole building.External Links