Original sentence: Jonathan Stead, Liam Lawrence and Grant Leadbitter were the scorers, giving Sunderland an unbeaten pre-season record scoring ten goals, and not conceeding any goals.Sunderland finished their pre-season scheduele with a 3–0 win over Carlisle United
Edited sentence: Jonathan Stead, Liam Lawrence and Grant Leadbitter were the scorers, giving Sunderland an unbeaten pre-season record scoring ten goals, and not conceding any goals.Sunderland finished their pre-season schedule with a 3–0 win over Carlisle United