Original sentence: MSMS, along with its recently created sister school, the Mississippi School for the Arts, are currently being threatened by closure due to the state's ailing budget as of March 2005
Edited sentence: MSMS, along with its recently created sister school, the Mississippi School for the Arts, are currently being threatened by closure (or possible creation of tuition, destroying the MSMS dream) due to the state's ailing budget as of March 2005