Original sentence: Menesius came from an old wealthy Scottish family, of Catholic and traditional background, which was forced to emigrate in 1639.Paul Menesius (latinized from Menzies, Russian transliteration Павел Гаврилович Менезиус or Менезий or Миннюст, 1637 - 1694) was a Russian soldier and diplomat, of Scottish origin
Edited sentence: Menesius came from an old wealthy Scottish family of Aberdeen, of Catholic and traditional background, which was forced to emigrate in 1639.Paul Menesius (latinized from Menzies, Russian transliteration Павел Гаврилович Менезиус or Менезий or Миннюст, 1637 - 1694) Scottish soldier and diplomat, who spent most of his life in the service of Russian Tsar Alexei