Original sentence: As a result, tourism became the centerpiece of the Orlando economy.In the hurricane season of 2004, Hurricanes Charley, Frances, and Jeanne battered the Orlando area, causing widespread damage and flooding and impeding tourism to the area.It seems, however, that Orlando Reeves (sometimes Rees) operated a sugar mill and plantation about thirty miles to the north at Spring Garden in Volusia County, and pioneer settlers simply found his name carved into a tree and assumed it was a marker for a grave site.They thus referred to the area as "Orlando's grave" and later simply "Orlando
Edited sentence: Another important event was the hurricane season of 2004, when Hurricanes Charley, Frances, and Jeanne battered the Orlando area, causing widespread damage and flooding.But, this is a gross distortion of the historical record, as the real Orlando Reeves/Rees operated a sugar mill and plantation about thirty miles to the north at Spring Garden in Volusia County.Pioneer settlers found his name carved into a tree, and assumed it was a marker for a grave site.They thus referred to the area as "Orlando's grave," and later simply "Orlando