Original sentence: An inquest jury ruled that he was unlawfully killed when a police officer struck him on the leg with a baton, then pushed his back forcefully, causing him to collapse and subsequently die minutes later.Ian Tomlinson (7 February 1962 – 1 April 2009) was an English newspaper vendor who died during the 2009 G-20 summit protests
Edited sentence: Ian Tomlinson (7 February 1962 – 1 April 2009) was an English newspaper vendor who was unlawfully killed during the 2009 G-20 summit protests, when a police officer struck him on the leg with a baton, then pushed his back forcefully, causing Tomlinson to collapse and subsequently die minutes later