Original sentence: He died there on February 9, 1969, in the arms of his granddaughter and only surviving relative, Norma Priday, at the age of eighty-three.They had one granddaughter, Norma Priday, who dedicated her life to "Gabby's" memory, while pursuing a career as a high-profile Canadian litigation lawyer
Edited sentence: He died there on February 9, 1969, at the age of eighty-three