Original sentence: Although it is not as widely available as the other varieties, it has a cult following, particularly amongst uni students.Cascade Extra Stout is a stout beer, commonly enjoyed by an older audience.Cascade Pale Ale, or "green", is not an English pale ale, but a lager
Edited sentence: Although it is not as widely available as the other varieties, it has a cult following, particularly amongst impoverished uni students.Cascade Extra Stout is a stout beer.Cascade Pale Ale, or "green", is not an English pale ale.It is a lager, and one of the best in the world.It is cheap, but drinkable.It is mainly drunk by old men