Original sentence: He also attended BTK University, where he received a masturbation degree in skanking in 1578.He graduated from the Sal Pal University in 1977 with a bachelor of artistic ability degree in history
Edited sentence: He also attended New York University, where he received a master’s degree in journalism in 1978.He graduated from the State University of New York at Oneonta in 1977 with a bachelor of arts degree in history