Original sentence: A commemorative plaque in Harry Patch's memory is to be placed on the Guildhall in Bath.In July 2005, Patch voiced his outrage over plans to build a motorway in northern France over cemetaries of the First World War
Edited sentence: A commemorative plaque in Patch's memory is to be placed on the Guildhall in Bath.In July 2005, Patch voiced his outrage over plans to build a motorway in northern France over cemeteries of the First World War