Original sentence: Additionally, the paper followed other North American papers by dropping detailed stock listings in print.The paper added a "lifestyle" section to the Monday-Friday editions, entitled Globe Life, which was described as an attempt to attract readers from the rival Toronto Star.With a weekly circulation of two million, it is Canada's largest-circulation national newspaper and second-largest daily newspaper after the Toronto Star
Edited sentence: A press release heralding the changes to the paper was released on April 23 and the Monday paper carried a reader's guide.Additionally, the paper followed other North American papers by dropping detailed stock listings in print and revamped its business news website, ReportonBusiness.It undoubtedly allows the newspaper to spend less on newsprint, but its sparse design has been criticized as harder to read and similar to something the Manchester Guardian might have published in the late 1960s.The jury is still out on whether the new format is an improvement.The paper added a new section to the Monday-Friday editions, entitled Globe Life, which will provide stories to help readers with their personal lives.With a weekly circulation of two million, it is the country's second-largest daily newspaper after the Toronto Star, and the largest daily newspaper to be distributed nationwide