Original sentence: Faced with a mishandled oil crisis, a consequent world-wide economic downturn, and a badly suffering British economy.In the event, the devaluation, and austerity measures succesfully restored the balance of payments into a surplus by 1969
Edited sentence: Faced with a mishandled oil crisis, a consequent worldwide economic downturn, and a badly suffering British economy.In the event, the devaluation, and austerity measures successfully restored the balance of payments into a surplus by 1969