Original sentence: Called Shin or Shin-Shin by her friends, Rachelle's interest in singing started at a very young age.In 2003, Rachelle auditioned for the second season of a talent search show on television, Search for a Star.Rachelle passed the auditions and made it as one of the twelve finalists.She ended up receiving the runner-up award singing Céline Dion's version of "All By Myself".She joined and won several contests
Edited sentence: Fondly called Shin or Shin-Shin by her friends, Rachelle's interest in singing started at a very young age.In 2003, along with a thousand hopefuls, Rachelle auditioned for the second season of the Philippines' leading talent search, Search for a Star.Rachelle Ann Go Forums.Rachelle breezed through the preliminary rounds and found herself among the top twelve contenders vying for the coveted recording prize during the finale.She became a veteran of singing competitions and has consistently won several contests.She ended up receiving the runner-up award but was highly praised for her take on a Céline Dion classic, "All By Myself".She has since gone to have established a very successful recording career