Original sentence: Derbyshire (pronounced "dar-bee-sher" /ˈdɑːbɪʃə/, as opposed to "dar-bee-shire" or "der-bee-shire")  is a county in the East Midlands of England
Edited sentence: Derbyshire (pronounced "dar-bee-sher" /ˈdɑːbɪʃə/, as opposed to "dar-bee-shire" or "der-bee-shire")  is a beautiful county in the East Midlands of England