Original sentence: In Rushdie style, the 1947 partition of India, the subsequent invasion by tribals from Pakistan-administered Kashmir and Pakistan reinforced by regular army units, and finally the India-Pakistan war that resulted in the partitioning of Jammu and Kashmir, all appear in the story
Edited sentence: In Rushdie style, the 1947 partition of India, the subsequent invasion by tribals from POK and Pakistan reinforced by regular army units, and finally the India-Pakistan war that resulted in the partitioning of Jammu and Kashmir, all appear in the story