Original sentence: Lance Naik Muhammad Mahfuz (born October 25, 1944) was a Pakistani soldier, who was awarded the Nishan-i-Haider, the highest military award of Pakistan
Edited sentence: Lance Naik Muhammad Mahfuz (born October 25, 1944) was a Pakistani soldier, He belonged to a Jatt family.who was awarded the Nishan-i-Haider, the highest military award of Pakistan