Original sentence: (1887-1895), Captain and Quartermaster, 29th Northumberland Fusiliers, Killed in action (England RFC & British Lions).* Abbey, C.* Adam, J.* Adamson, C.* Adamson, F.* Adamson, R.* Affleck, R.* Aitken, A.* Aitken, W.* Alderson F.* Alderson G.* Alderson W.* Allan D.* Allan R.* Allwork, Rev
Edited sentence: (1887-1895), Captain and Quartermaster, 29th Northumberland Fusiliers, Killed in action (England RFC & British Lions.Abbey, C.Adam, J.Adamson, C.Adamson, F.Adamson, R.Affleck, R.Aitken, A.Aitken, W.Alderson F.Alderson G.Alderson W.Allan D.Allan R.Allwork, Rev