Original sentence: Adam Applegarth - former Chief Executive Officer of the Northern Rock bank.Dame Elisabeth Hoodless (King's) - is the Executive Director of Community Service Volunteers.David Sproxton (Collingwood) - co-founders (together with Peter Lord) of the Aardman Animations.David Walton, (Van Mildert) - former member of the Bank of England's Monetary Policy Committee.Julian Knight - former Chairman and Chief Executive Officer of climate change campaign Global Cool.Leslie Ferrar - Treasurer to the Prince of Wales.Lord Anthony Crichton-Stuart - head of Old Master Paintings, at Christie's New York.Michael Warrender, 3rd Baron Bruntisfield - former director of Jardine Fleming Investment Management and Atlas Capital
Edited sentence: Adam Applegarth - Chief Executive Officer of the Northern Rock bank.Dame Elisabeth Hoodless (King's) - Executive Director of Community Service Volunteers.David Sproxton (Collingwood) - co-founder (together with Peter Lord) of the Aardman Animations.David Walton, (Van Mildert) - economist, member of the Bank of England's Monetary Policy Committee.Julian Knight - Chairman and Chief Executive Officer of climate change campaign Global Cool.Leslie Ferrar - Treasurer to Charles, Prince of Wales.Lord Anthony Crichton-Stuart - head of Old Master Paintings, at Christie's, New York.Michael Warrender, 3rd Baron Bruntisfield - director of Jardine Fleming Investment Management and Atlas Capital