Original sentence: Edward Paul "Eddie" Youds (born 3 May 1970) is an English former footballer who played as a defender.He retired in 2005.He was born in Liverpool.Whilst at Charlton, he played in their dramatic win over Sunderland in the 1998 play off final, winning 7-6 on penalties after a 4-4 draw
Edited sentence: During his career, Youds played for Everton FC, Cardiff City, Wrexham FC, Ipswich Town,  Bradford City, Charlton Athletic, Huddersfield Town and Grays Athletic, retirng in 2005 at 35.Edward Paul "Eddie" Youds (born 3 May 1970 in Liverpool) is a former English footballer, who played as a defender.Whilst at Charlton, he played in the club's dramatic win over Sunderland in the 1998 promotion play-off final, winning 7-6 on penalties after a 4-4 draw