Original sentence: Gladly, the gradual shift towards greener capitalism, aka ethicism, promises to make good the globalization movement, and bring more unity to an often too divided world.It is summised*  that gradual ethical steps in three main areas (animals and the environment, employees, and consumers), are what will turn the tide in a favourable direction.The three stakeholders responsible for these changes are: governance, industry, and consumers
Edited sentence: Gladly, the gradual shift towards greener capitalism, aka ethicism, promises to make good the globalization movement, and bring more unity to a yet still divided world.It's summised  that gradual ethical steps in three main areas (animals and the environment, employees, and consumers), are what is needed to turn the tide in a favorable direction.The three stakeholders essentially responsible for these changes are: governance, industry, and consumers