Original sentence: Arsenal won 3-2, pipping the Lilywhites to the First Division championship by a slender 0.1 of a goal.Many expected this to be when Finney showed off his mercurial talents to the nation, but the expectation was much too great as he struggled in a 3-2 loss.The occasion was an emotional one in front of almost 30,000 supporters after a 2-0 victory over Luton Town, with the 'Preston Plumber' making a speech on the pitch and those present belting out a rendition of 'Auld Lang Syne'
Edited sentence: Naturally, everyone expected this to be when Finney showed off his mercurial talents to the nation, but the expectation was much too great as he struggled in a 3-2 loss.Naturally, the occasion was an emotional one in front of almost 30,000 supporters after a 2-0 victory over Luton Town, with the 'Preston Plumber' making a speech on the pitch and those present belting out a rendition of 'Auld Lang Syne'.Unfortunately, Arsenal won 3-2, pipping the Lilywhites to the First Division championship by a slender 0.1 of a goal