Original sentence: Starting safety Darren Sharper parted the Green Bay Packers, signing with the Minnesota Vikings.The Packers lost veteran offensive linemen Marco Rivera and Mike Wahle to free agency.The Packers suffered injuries to wide receivers Javon Walker and Robert Ferguson and running backs Ahman Green, Najeh Davenport, Tony Fisher, and Samkon Gado
Edited sentence: Star safety Darren Sharper parted the Green Bay Packers, signing with the Minnesota Vikings.The Packers offensive line dealt a major blow when they lost both Marco Rivera and Mike Wahle to free agency.The Packers suffered major injuries to wide receivers Javon Walker and Robert Ferguson and running backs Ahman Green, Najeh Davenport, Tony Fisher, and Samkon Gado