Original sentence: According to Bernie Cho, the president of the DFSB Kollective (a Seoul-based agency specializing in the marketing of international K-pop acts), Korean entertainment companies are "aggressively steering their efforts to go international via the Internet".In 1999, a Korean wave in Japan, China, Taiwan, Vietnam, Hong Kong, Philippines and other Asian countries emerged.In recent years, Korean entertainment companies have recognized YouTube as a key component for spreading Korean culture.Konghanzheng (aka Koreaphobia).Korean dramas continued to spread throughout Asia, achieving mainstream success in Japan, China, and Southeast Asia, as well as establishing niche markets in Europe and North America.The Korean wave, () refers to the spread of South Korean entertainment in Asia and other parts of the world.The term was coined in 1999 by Beijing journalists, as they observed a growing popularity of Korean entertainment in China
Edited sentence: According to Bernie Cho, who, as of June 2012, is the president of the DFSB Kollective (a Seoul-based agency specializing in the marketing of international K-pop acts),  Korean entertainment companies are "aggressively steering their efforts to go international via the Internet".In 1999, a Korean wave in Japan, China, Taiwan, Vietnam, Hong Kong, Philippines and other Asian countries began to emerge.In recent years, Korean entertainment companies have recognized YouTube as a key component in the international dissemination of Korean culture.Konghanzheng (a.Korean cuisine.Korean dramas continue to spread throughout Asia, having achieved mainstream success in Japan, China and Southeast Asia; niche markets have also been established in Europe and North America.Korean language.Korean martial arts.Koreanology (Korean studies).The "Korean wave" () is the term given to the spread of South Korean entertainment throughout the rest of the world.The term was coined in 1999 by journalists in Beijing, China, as they observed the growing popularity of Korean entertainment in their home country