Original sentence: President Mbeki and Health Minister Tshabalala-Msimang dismissed Deputy Health Minister Nozizwe Madlala-Routledge in early August, 2007.The incident has been criticized by the Freedom of Expression Institute and the Democratic Alliance, a South African political party, commented that they are closely watching the situation
Edited sentence: Adding fuel to the fire, President Mbeki and Health Minister Tshabalala-Msimang recently dismissed Deputy Health Minister Nozizwe Madlala-Routledge in early August, 2007.The entire controversy will likely lead to more criticism of the government by the international community.The incident has been criticized by the Freedom of Expression Institute and the DA commented that they are closely watching the situation