Original sentence: Alfa Romeo's return to United States was confirmed on 5 May 2006 by Fiat CEO Sergio Marchionne.The Alfa Romeo 4C will be the first car to re-entry US market in 2012 (if 8C not counted), orders for the 4C will be taken in the fourth quarter of 2012, and deliveries will begin in early 2013..
Edited sentence: Even more dissaponiting,the brilliant Alfa Romeo 4C will be the first car to re-entry US market in 2012 (if 8C not counted), orders for the 4C will be taken in the fourth quarter of 2012, and deliveries will begin in early 2013...Sadly Alfa Romeo's return to United States was confirmed on 5 May 2006 by Fiat CEO Sergio Marchionne