Original sentence: Finally, Paul kills the injured shopkeeper to prevent him from bringing other hunters by using his shotgun.James DeBello  Jeff.Joey Kern  Bert.Mambo, and savagely rended apart.When the hunters find the cabin, they enter and shoot Bert, killing him, but Paul hits one in the head with a shovel, shooting the shopkeeper accidentally on the way down
Edited sentence: Finally, Paul kills the injured shopkeeper to prevent him from bringing other hunters.James DeBello  Bert.Joey Kern  Jeff.Mambo, and savagely ripped apart.When the hunters find the cabin, they enter and shoot Bert, killing him, but Paul hits one in the head with a hammer, shooting the shopkeeper accidentally on the way down