Original sentence: About 6.0% of families and 8.8% of the population were below thehi poverty line, including 9.0% of those under age 18 and 12.9% of those age 65 or over
Edited sentence: About 6.0% of families and 8.8% of the population were below the poverty line, including 9.0% of those under age 18 and 12.9% of those age 65 or over