Original sentence: He began his professional football career, playing for his hometown club, Teraktor Sazi, following footsteps of his brother, Hossein Khatibi.He continued to play well, giving himself a chance to join Hamburg in Bundesliga along with felow Iranian internationals Mehdi Mahdavikia and Vahid Hashemian.He soon returned to Iran, back to his old club, Pas.He was able to impress, and after scoring many goals for his club, he was transferred to Pas Tehran.In June of 2006 he signed a two year contract with UAE club, Sharjah FC, after rejecting an offer from Spanish second division side CD Tenerife.In the 2005/06 season, he was able to score ten goals, completing his impressive record in Sepahan with 32 goals in three seasons.While playing in Hamburg, he only had a couple of appearances, and was not able to make good use of his chances
Edited sentence: He began his professional football career, playing for his hometown club, Teraktor Sazi.He continued to play well and along with many other Iranian footaballers at the time he transferred to a Bundesliga club.He missed three panalties and was on the starting postion of the club in nearly every game.He only had a couple of appearances, and was not able to make good use of his chances, even missing a goal-scoring opportunity from two yards out.He soon returned to Iran and returned to his old club, Pas.He was able to impress, and after scoring many goals for his club he was transferred to Pas Tehran.He was also noted for not scoring any goals for Sepahan during the time he was their.He was joined by Mehdi Mahdavikia and Vahid Hashemian in Hamburg.He was joined by his brother, Hossein Khatibi.In June of 2006 he signed a two year contract with UAE club, Sharjah FC for $19.8 Million, after rejecting an offer from Spanish second division side CD Tenerife.In the 2005-06 season he was able to score ten goals.Sephan where delighted to sell him after the huge amount of money they got let them sign better ranking players