Original sentence: Avenue Square along Magsaysay Avenue is Bicol's first and only lifestyle center.In 2006 Naga won the Most Business-Friendly City award for the third consecutive year...It is the religious and cultural center of the Bicol region.Naga City has more than 50 bank branches.Naga City has several shops that open 24 hours a day.Naga City offers a wide range of specialty restaurants such as Hokkien (casual Chinese), Makiyaki (Japanese), Peaberry (fine dining), Resto di San Giuseppe (casual yuppie), and Green Earth Cafe (health food).With a relatively smaller land area compared to other cities in Bicol which accounts for its being the most densely populated city in the region, Naga City is locally known as the "Heart of Bicol"
Edited sentence: Accordingly, the City has been elevated by the Philippine Chamber of Commerce and Industry (PCCI) to its hall of fame, having been awarded as Most Business-Friendly City in the country for three successive years.It is the only chartered city and the educational, financial, business, religious and cultural center of the Bicol region.Naga City is also the first locality in the Bicol region where one can find a wide range of specialty restaurants such as Hokkien (casual Chinese), Makiyaki (Japanese), Peaberry (fine dining), Resto di San Giuseppe (casual yuppie), and Green Earth Cafe (health food).Spankingly-new Avenue Square along Magsaysay Avenue is Bicol's first and only lifestyle center.With a relatively smaller land area compared to other cities in Bicol which accounts for its being the most densely populated city in the region, Naga City is undeniably Bicol's most progressive city popularly referred to as the "Heart of Bicol".With an economy that has continuously outpaced other local economies in Bicol, Naga City is acknowledged as the business center of the region, accounting for over 30% of total business investments in Bicol in 2006 alone.With an economy that moves 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, Naga City is the only city in Luzon south of Metro Manila that continues to attract a wide variety of 24/7 shops and eateries that cater to the city's daytime and nighttime population.With more than 50 bank branches, Naga City is undoubtedly the financial center of the Bicol Region