Original sentence: It is revealed in the novel Red Dragon, however, that he attacked a nurse, dislocating her jaw and eating her tongue and one of her eyes.Lecter is a model patient for the first year of his incarceration.This fact is later mentioned again in Silence of the Lambs as a reminder to the audience
Edited sentence: It is intended to underscore the fact that Lecter feels neither remorse nor pleasure when harming others.It is then mentioned again in Silence of the Lambs as a reminder to the audience.Lecter is a model patient for the first year of his incarceration, however it is revealed in the novel Red Dragon that he attacked a nurse, dislocating her jaw and eating her tongue and one of her eyes