Original sentence: According to a study by Human Rights Watch, there is a rape once every two hours and a gang rape every eight.Honor killings, burnings, and rapes in Pakistan can be seen as indicating inadequate legal protection for women.In 2002, 30-year-old Mukhtaran Bibi was gang raped on the orders of the village council as an "honor rape" after allegations that her 12-year-old brother had had sexual relations with a woman from a higher caste.Rape in Pakistan came to international attention after teh politically sanctioned gang rape of Mukhtaran Bibi.The group War Against Rape (WAR) has documented the severity of the rape problem in Pakistan and of police indifference to it.The prevalence of rape in Pakistan, including "honor rapes" and cases of officially sanctioned rape, rapes by police and members of the armed forces, and official failure to punish rape, is a concern in the international human rights and women's rights communities, particularly since the case of Mukhtaran Bibi in 2002
Edited sentence: According to a study carried out by Human Rights Watch there is a rape once every two hours and a gang rape every eight.In 2002 a 30-year-old woman was gang raped on the orders of the village council as an "honor rape" after allegations that her 12-year-old brother had had sexual relations with a woman from a higher caste.Rape in Pakistan came to international attention after the politically sanctioned rape of Mukhtaran Bibi.The group War Against Rape (WAR) has documented the severity of rape in Pakistan, and the police indifference to it.The legal system in Pakistan does not give adequate protection to women and as such Honor killings, burning and rape are prevalent