Original sentence: Its track, formation, and timing were relatively similar to  Tropical Storm One in 1940.The depression had formed about 400 miles (640 km) east-northeast of the Outer Banks of North Carolina.The season started early with the formation of Tropical Depression One on May 28th, however, for the second consecutive year, no storms formed in June
Edited sentence: Its track, formation, and timing were relatively similar to Tropical Storm One in 1940.The depression had formed about 400 miles (640 km) east-northeast of the Outer Banks of North Carolina.The season started early with the formation of Tropical Depression One on May 28, however, for the second consecutive year, no storms formed in June