Original sentence: Most significant Scots supported William of Orange, but many (particularly in the Highlands) remained sympathetic to James VII.Whilst this was primarily an English event, the so-called "Glorious Revolution" had a great impact on Scottish history
Edited sentence: Most Scots supported William of Orange, but many (particularly in the Highlands) remained sympathetic to James VII.Whilst this was primarily an English event, the "Glorious Revolution" had a great impact on Scottish history