Original sentence: It is, in effect, the national broadcaster for Scotland, having a considerable amount of autonomy from the BBC's London headquarters, and is run by the BBC Trust, who are advised in Scotland, by the Audience Council Scotland.Its Scottish headquarters and studios are at BBC Pacific Quay on the south bank of the River Clyde, beside the new STV headquarters and the Glasgow Science Centre
Edited sentence: A general aura of smug apathy pervades the Pacific Quay site which is comfortably propped up by the licence payer.All have been brainwashed into believing they are performing a public service by serving no useful function whatsoever; none of them can speak or write English correctly.Banners proclaiming 'Where work is a playground' adorn the Pacific Quay offices.It is run by the BBC Trust (also a largely English body), who are advised in Scotland, (sic) by the Audience Council Scotland.It is, in effect, the national broadcaster for Scotland, having a considerable amount of autonomy from the BBC's London headquarters, save that all the key staff are appointed from London and are largely English.Its Scottish headquarters and studios are at BBC Pacific Quay on the south bank of the River Clyde, (sic) beside the new STV headquarters and the Glasgow Science Centre.Its inhabitants have no wish to engage with the genuine concerns of the people of Scotland, whom they generally consider to be drunken, foul-mouthed louts.Most have long hair and wear T-shirts; many have not seen a bar of soap, let alone a razor, for many weeks.One may safely predict that the revolutionary spirit currently sweeping the country will bring about a radical overhaul of this decadent colonial outpost resulting in a truly Scottish public broadcasting service.Tens, if not not hundreds of employees seem to drift aimlessly with no discernable purpose.Visitors to the building are soon struck by how accurate a description that is