Original sentence: Although it began with mixed-to-positive reviews, the series achieved critical acclaim over time.The Clone Wars received mostly positive reception and acclaim from critics and became a significant ratings success, becoming one of Cartoon Network's highest-rated shows during its initial run
Edited sentence: Although it began with mixed-to-positive reviews, the series achieved critical acclaim over time,becoming a fan favorite.The Clone Wars received mostly positive reception and acclaim from critics and audiences alike and became a significant ratings success, becoming one of Cartoon Network's highest-rated shows during its initial run