Original sentence: Clink’s collaboration with Guns N’ Roses lasted for five albums which sold a combined total of around 90 million copies.com writes about one of Clink’s earliest production experiences: "…after a series of failed attempts, a young band named Guns N' Roses asked Clink to produce their debut album, Appetite for Destruction…"
Edited sentence: com writes about one of Clink’s earliest production experiences: "…after a series of failed attempts, a young band named Guns N' Roses asked Clink to produce their debut album, Appetite for Destruction…" Channeling the unruly GNR's energy into a cohesive, landmark album was no easy task, and because of it Clink is regarded as a man who knows how to get the best results from the acts he works for.” Clink’s collaboration with Guns N’ Roses lasted for five albums which sold a combined total of around 90 million copies