Original sentence: He was educated at Stonyhurst College, and Magdalen College, Oxford.Paul Johnson (born Paul Bede Johnson on November 2, 1928 in Manchester, England) is a British Roman Catholic journalist, historian, speechwriter and author
Edited sentence: He finished his lower second-class honours degree at Stonyhurst College, and Magdalen College, Oxford in the Jesuit method.Paul Johnson (born Paul Bede Johnson on November 2, 1928 in Manchester, England) is a British Roman Catholic journalist, speechwriter and author