Original sentence: Avoca was founded in 1869 in connection with the construction of the Chicago, Rock Island and Pacific Railroad through the area.It is named after Avoca in Ireland.It quickly developed as a regional service center for the surrounding farms
Edited sentence: Avoca was founded in 1969 by the legend himself- Ricky Miedl.Ricky then went on to create AHSTW High School, which would quickly turn into a athletic dynasty.The rumor has it if you visit the Avoca pool at 3:00 a.you can see the phantom of Ricky Miedl doing backflips off of the diving boards