Original sentence: As well as being an educated man, able to compose poetry in French and Provençal, he was also very attractive; blond, blue-eyed, his height is estimated at six feet four inches (1.93 m) tall
Edited sentence: As well as being an educated man, able to compose poetry in French and Provençal, Richard was also a magnificent physical specimen; blond, blue-eyed, his height is estimated at six feet four inches (1.93 m) tall