Original sentence: Acceptances included.Auburn University,.Purdue University,.Rice University,.Students graduating from FBA in 2008 were accepted to 22 colleges and universities in the state of Texas and 19 outside the state of Texas.Texas A&M University,.Texas Tech University,.The Citadel,.United States Air Force Academy,.University of Alabama,.University of Notre Dame,.University of Texas at Austin, and.Vanderbilt University
Edited sentence: Acceptances included Auburn University, Belmont University, Biola University, Clemson University, Dallas Baptist University, DePaul University, John Brown University, Oklahoma Baptist University, Pepperdine University, Samford University, Savannah College of Art and Design, Texas A&M University, Texas Tech University, University of Alabama, University of Colorado, University of Florida, University of Georgia, University of Oklahoma, University of Southern California, and the University of Texas at Austin.Students graduating from FBA in 2009 were accepted to 25 colleges and universities in the state of Texas and 41 outside the state of Texas