Original sentence: SAFE had been listed as one of the 50 most promising strategy programs to prevent domestic violence, and has been publicized by Dear Abby (in her 3/22/02 column).SAFE has made appearances at national conferences on domestic violence, media coverage, and presentations to government entities in the United States.Stop Abuse For Everyone is an organization that professes to advocate for the plight of abused men and other "underserved" domestic violence groups, such as LGBT victims.They state that their focus is on groups that are "lacking in services", such as abused men, gay, lesbian, and transgender victims, and the elderly
Edited sentence: SAFE has had been listed as one of the 50 most promising strategy programs to prevent domestic violence, has been publicized by Dear Abby (in her 3/22/02 column).SAFE has had made many appearances at national conferences on domestic violence, media coverage, and presentations to government entities in the United States.Stop Abuse For Everyone is one of only a couple of organizations that has advocated for the plight of abused men and other "underserved" domestic violence groups such as LGBT victims.They focus on groups that are "lacking in services", such as abused men, gay, lesbian, and transgender victims, and the elderly