Original sentence: Sky News has lost out recently to BBC News 24 -  with BBC News head Peter Horrocks saying in November 2005 that Sky News should no longer be the first choice for 'key opinion formers'
Edited sentence: Sky News is facing increasing competition from BBC News 24, however the BBC Head of News, Peter Horrocks, admitted in November 2005 in a leaked email that it was Sky News that was the first port of call for 'key opinion formers', not the BBC