Original sentence: Intelligent dance music (commonly IDM) is a genre of electronica derived from dance music of the 1980s and early 1990s which uses weird sounds, defies rhythmic convention, and can't be danced to.. IDM is originally applied to musicians like FSOL, Orb, Orbital, Richard James (aka Aphex Twin), Black Dog, B12, and various others from Warp's Artificial Intelligence series
Edited sentence: Intelligent dance music (commonly IDM) is a genre of electronica derived from dance music of the 1980s and early 1990s which uses weird sounds, defies rhythmic convention, presents an academic image, and can't be danced to.. IDM is originally applied to musicians like FSOL, Orb, Orbital, Richard James (aka Aphex Twin), Black Dog, B12, and various others from Warp's Artificial Intelligence series