Original sentence: City of Subarus is the second album from the indie pop band Tullycraft.On this sophomore release, Tullycraft introduced electronic beats and a punk-ish sound contrasting with their debut Old Traditions, New Standards
Edited sentence: City of Subarus is the second album from the indiepop band Tullycraft.On this sophomore release, Tullycraft introduced electronic beats and a somewhat surprising punk-ish sound that wasn't present on their much beloved debut Old Traditions, New Standards.Tollefson posted about the experience of making City of Subarus on the band’s website