Original sentence: In November The Bonzos released their second album The Doughnut in Granny's Greenhouse (the title being a euphemism for an outside toilet), which showcased a marked change in musical direction from Gorilla
Edited sentence: In November The Bonzos released their second album The Doughnut in Granny's Greenhouse (the title being a quaint euphemism for an outside toilet), which showcased a marked change in musical direction from Gorilla