Original sentence: Bobby received his first "Touchdown" from Mark Holden in Week 5 (Disco Week) of the Finals, for his off-beat interpretation of Rick James' hit "Superfreak"
Edited sentence: A reluctant yet impressive participant in the television series, Bobby Flynn has gathered much support from the Australian public.Bobby received his first "Touchdown" from Mark Holden in Week 5 (Disco Week) of the Finals, for his off-beat interpretation of Rick James' hit Superfreak