Original sentence: The film concerns how Lilo befriends a strange and destructive blue alien whom she calls "Stitch" and how she tries to teach him how to behave using Elvis Presley music as exemplars.The message conveyed throughout the film is essentially that families must remain united, that there is an innate goodness in all children, that people should take pride in their own culture, and the importance of good behaviour
Edited sentence: The film concerns how Lilo befriends a Elvis Presley music as exemplars.The message conveyed throughout the film is essentially that families must strange and destructive blue alien whom she calls "Stitch" and how she tries to teach him how to behave using remain united, that there is an innate goodness in all children, that people should take pride in their own culture, and the importance of good behaviour