Original sentence: Some believe the novel to be a 20th century look at the pastoral, involving the intersection of nature and technology (for example, the iDEATH building seems to have been constructed around nature, rather than displacing it; the building houses many trees, rocks, a creek, and a trout hatchery).Some believe the novel to be about communal experiments in the 1960s.Some critics believe the book to be about a new Eden in a post-apocalyptic world: the old destroyed world is represented by the Forgotten Works.The narrator and his lover Pauline become the new Adam and Eve in a new paradise
Edited sentence: For example, the iDEATH building seems to have been constructed around nature, rather than displacing it; the building houses many trees, rocks, a creek, and a trout hatchery.It can be seen as a new Eden in a post-apocalyptic world, with the old destroyed world represented by the Forgotten Works, connecting the narrator and his new lover to Adam and Eve.The concept of iDEATH is subject to various interpretations.The novel alludes to communal experiments of the 1960s, involving the intersection of nature and technology