Original sentence: "I was never into anything trendy.It has frequently been donned by celebrities; musician Pharrell Williams actor Ashton Kutcher in particular helped make the hat fashionable.These companies typically had a rural clientele – such as the local feed store or John Deere tractors
Edited sentence: I was never into anything trendy.It has frequently been donned by celebrities; musician Pharrell Williams and actor Ashton Kutcher in particular helped make the hat fashionable.These companies typically had a rural clientele, such as the local feed store or John Deere tractors