Original sentence: 1 claiming that the report was critical of the cavalier approach taken by senior HSU officials to signing blank cheques, sharing electronic passwords for expenditure, and approving union spending with verbal authorisations rather than putting these matters in writing.In April 2009 , Brad Norington in an opinionated editorial in The Australian reported that accounting, auditing and advisory firm Pitcher Partners undertook a report into the financial affairs of the Victorian HSU branch No
Edited sentence: In April 2009, accounting, auditing and advisory firm Pitcher Partners undertook a report into the financial affairs of the Victorian HSU branch No.The report was critical of the cavalier approach taken by senior HSU officials to signing blank cheques, sharing electronic passwords for expenditure, and approving union spending with verbal authorisations rather than putting these matters in writing