Original sentence: In the English-speaking world, Bosniaks are most commonly known as Bosnian Muslims.Using information from the CIA World Fact Book, it can be seen that Bosnian Muslim is an imprecise synonym for Bosniak, because in Bosnia, Bosniaks make up 48% of the population, but only 40% of the population is Muslim
Edited sentence: In the English-speaking world, Bosniaks were known as Bosnian Muslims, however using information from the CIA World Fact Book, it can be seen that Bosnian Muslim is an imprecise synonym for Bosniak, because in Bosnia, Bosniaks make up 48% of the population, but only 40% of the population is Muslim