Original sentence: Next, Solange jumps onto a life sized CGI keyboard (wearing a yellow dress), and plays it with her feet.Solange then lays atop of a stringed instrument, and then slides down a microphone (like a firemen's pole) and moves to the next stage.The sunsets and a moon rises as Solange (wearing a brown dress) sits atop of a can of "Solange's, Can I Sing" (parody of Campbell's) Soup
Edited sentence: Next, Solange jumps onto a life-sized CGI keyboard (wearing a yellow dress), and plays it with her feet.Solange then lies atop of a stringed instrument, and then slides down a microphone (like a firemen's pole) and moves to the next stage.The sun sets and a moon rises as Solange (wearing a brown dress) sits atop of a can of "Solange's, Can I Sing" (parody of Campbell's) Soup