Original sentence: Cecil Choudhry under the leaderships of Wing Commander Anwar Shamim and Wing Commander Mervyn Middlecoat, destroyed the amritsar Radar Station succesfully and destroyed the IAF aircraft as well as killing their pilots on the station
Edited sentence: Cecil Choudhry under the leaderships of Wing Commander Anwar Shamim and Wing Commander Mervyn Middlecoat, destroyed the amritsar Radar Station successfully and destroyed the IAF aircraft as well as killing their pilots on the station