Original sentence: Following the 2004 election cycle, Clinton began what critics saw as a movement to the political center, even aligning with Contract with America architect and former adversary Newt Gingrich in expressing a desire for health care reform.Many conservatives believe that these actions are an election ploy
Edited sentence: Detracters, conservatives, and moderates alike are worried that her recent move from the left wing of the Democratic party is simply an election ploy.Yet following the 2004 election cycle, Clinton began a movement to the political center even aligning with Contract with America architect and former adversary Newt Gingrich in expressing a desire for health care reform