Original sentence: "Yo ho, yo ho,/ What’s the weather going to be./  Here is Captain Sandy with the weather he has found, for Savannah/ and for Chatham/ and the counties all around./ Here's the man who knows,/ let's take a look and see.Captain Sandy’s big thermometer was temperamental and would fidget before revealing the next day’s high and low temperatures.The "Captain" would then begin his weather forecast with a loud, "Ahoy there, matey.The comedy elements of the forecast included the thermometer and the clam.When Captain Sandy opened Davey Jones’s locker to get the tide information (a crucial component of any weather forecast in the region) out of Calamity Clam, the puppeteer always tried to bite the captain's hand
Edited sentence: "Yo ho, yo ho, what’s the weather going to be.Captain Sandy’s big thermometer was temperamental and would fidget before revealing the next day’s high.Here is Captain Sandy with the weather he has found, for Savannah and for Chatham and the counties all around.Here's the man who knows, let's take a look and see.The fun part came when Captain Sandy opened Davey Jones’ locker to get the tide information (a crucial component of any weather forecast in the region) out of Calamity Clam, who always tried to bite the captain