Original sentence: It was an invader from Farghana, named Babur, descendant of Genghis Khan and of the nomadic leader Tamerlane, laid the foundation for the Mughal empire in India, who introduced sophisitcated weapons that the Indians had never witnessed
Edited sentence: He introduced sophisitcated weapons that the Indians had never witnessed.It was an invader from Farghana, named Babur, descendant of Genghis Khan and of the nomadic leader Tamerlane, who laid the foundation for the Mughal empire in India