Original sentence: Philippina "Pina" Bausch (27 July 1940 – 30 June 2009)  With a blend of movement, sound, and prominent stage sets, and with performers during the development of a piece (a style now known as ), she became an influence in the field of modern dance from the 1970s on
Edited sentence: Philippina "Pina" Bausch (27 July 1940 – 30 June 2009)  With her unique style, a blend of movement, sound, and prominent stage sets, and with her elaborate collaboration with performers during the development of a piece (a style now known as ), she became a leading influence in the field of modern dance from the 1970s on