Original sentence: Elma High School serves the rural communities of McCleary, Elma and Satsop.In September 2003, Elma High School made news when the administration banned cheerleaders' short skirts in classrooms or hallways.Programming is provided 24 hours a day, seven days week, 365 days a year using computer automation.Some parents argued that the new rule devalues the work the girls put into practicing and maintaining their grades.The school argued that the dress code was being applied equally and that uniforms were in clear violation of the dress code
Edited sentence: About Elma Schools (updated 3/10/09).Elma High School serves rural communities of McCleary, Elma and Satsop.In September 2003, Elma High School made news when the administration banned cheerleaders' short skirts.Parents argued that the new rule devalues the hard work the girls put into practicing, keeping up good grades, and raised money to buy the expensive uniforms.Programming is provided 24 hours a day, seven days week, 365 days a year by using computer automation.Short skirts are allowed only at games and performances, not the hallways or classrooms.The school argued that the uniforms are in clear violation of the dress code