Original sentence: As a result, he had her placed in a hospice.Most polls show that a large majority of Americans believe that Michael Schiavo should have the authority to make decisions on behalf of his wife and that the United States Congress overstepped its bounds with its intervention in the case.Schiavo says his wife would not have wanted to live as a vegetable, and that he was fighting for her right to die.When the Schindlers arrived, Michael maintains that Bob Schindler began to demand money, became belligerent, and stormed out of the room.While conversing about financial issues, the Schindlers suggested that they could now afford specialized care for Terri with the money from the malpractice suit
Edited sentence: " As a result, he had her placed in a hospice.In fact, nurses for Terri during that time have testified that Michael Schiavo stated that he did not know what she wanted, "we were young.It is equally probable that the inital cause for Terri's injuries were the results of attempted strangulation.Later polls, asking if the respondent would want to be deprived of food and water to the point of death, show that the large majority of Americans actually want to live.Most polls using questions which did not accurately portray the facts of the case show that a large majority of Americans believe that Michael Schiavo should have the authority to make decisions on behalf of his wife and that the United States Congress overstepped its bounds with its intervention in the case.Schiavo says his wife would not have wanted to live as a vegetable, and that he was fighting for her right to die, after he had won $1.5 million for the purpose of her rehabilitation as a result of a lawsuit during which he never once mentioned her desire not to be rehabilitated or kept alive.We never talked about that stuff.When the Schindlers arrived, Michael maintains that Bob Schindler began to demand money for Terri's care, became belligerent, and stormed out of the room.While conversing about financial issues, the Schindlers suggested that they could now afford specialized care for Terri with the money from the malpractice suit which was awarded specifically for her care