Original sentence: However, the judging panel thought that she had extreme modeling potential.She is the second America's Next Top Model winner from Jacksonville, Florida; the other is Yoanna House Cycle 2.She was selected as the ninth finalist to enter the house
Edited sentence: Although Anya Kop, the runner-up, had delivered better pictures, she failed to deliver at the runway finale whereas Whitney had a huge success.Furthermore, she is the second America's Next Top Model winner from Jacksonville, Florida; the other is Yoanna House Cycle 2.However, the judging panel, as they correctly saw it, thought that she had extreme modeling potential.She was selected as the ninth finalist to enter the house, and consistently took good photos.Therefore, she was declared winner due to her runway performance and her first-class, best Covergirl beauty shot