Original sentence: Snead hit his final opening tee shot in 2001, a year before he too died.This trio continued until 1999 when Sarazen died, while Nelson discontinued in 2001.Tragically, MacKenzie died before the first Masters Tournament began
Edited sentence: Snead hit his final opening tee shot in 2001, a year before he too passed away.This trio continued until 1999 when Sarazen passed away, while Nelson discontinued in 2001.Tragically, MacKenzie passed away before the first Masters Tournament began