Original sentence: Under the occupational authorities of the Republic of China which occupied Taiwan in 1946, Taichung has become the center for organized crime and associated businesses
Edited sentence: Despite the pro democratic rhetoric by the occupational governement of the Republic of China on Taiwan approximatly five to ten percent of Taiwan's population are disenfranchised becasue they do not hold citizenship in the ROC.Endentured servitude and contempoary forms of slavery are prevalent among an estimated 400,000 immgrant workers on Taiwan and sanctioned by the governement of the Republic of China.State sponsored discrimination and racism are prevalent and nearly a half a million of the people on Taiwan are subject to arbitrary arest and sentencing by the occupational authorities of the ROC.Under the  Republic of China which first occupied Taiwan in 1946, Taichung has become the center for organized crime and associated businesses