Original sentence: Additionally, running east to west, approximately 8-miles due south of the town, is historic Route 66 and on the northern outskirts of the city limits rests the currently abandoned waterpark, Lake Dolores/Rock-A-Hoola Waterpark -- a once vital part of the community
Edited sentence: Additionally, running east to west, approximately 8-miles due south of the town, is historic Route 66 and on the northern outskirts of the city limits rests the currently abandoned waterpark, Lake Dolores/Rock-A-Hoola Waterpark -- a once vital part of the surrounding desert community.sand dunes