Original sentence: After two seasons, he moved to England for a five-month spell as the overseas player for club side Cannock CC, and helped them win the Birmingham Cricket League in 2000.He impressed members of the Nasser Hussain's England side when playing for KwaZulu Natal in 1999; he took four top-order wickets and, despite batting at number nine, scored 61 not out off 57 balls, hitting four sixes.His childhood, growing up with three brothers, was strict and well-disciplined, and Pietersen learned valuable lessons from this "fantastic" approach to parenting, saying: "Discipline is good.Hussain recommended that Pietersen secure a contract with an English county side.Pietersen felt that this was due to the country's racial quota system, in which provincial sides had to include a certain number of non-white players.Pietersen made his first-class cricket debut for Natal's B team in 1997, aged 17, and was regarded predominantly as an off-spinner and a hard-hitting lower-order batsman
Edited sentence: After two seasons, he moved to England for a 5–month spell as the overseas player for club side Cannock CC, and helped them win the Birmingham Cricket League in 2000.He impressed members of the Nasser Hussain's England side when playing for KwaZulu Natal in 1999, taking four top-order wickets and, despite batting at number nine, scoring 61 not out off 57 balls, hitting four sixes.His childhood, growing up with his three brothers, was relatively strict and well-disciplined, and Pietersen learned valuable lessons from this "fantastic" approach to parenting, saying: "Discipline is good.Hussain went on to recommend that Pietersen secure a contract with [an English] county side.Pietersen felt that this was due to the country's racial quota system, in which provincial sides had to include a certain number of non-white players, and which led to him being frequently dropped or forced to bat late in the order.Pietersen made his first-class cricket debut for Natal's B team aged 17 in 1997 and was regarded predominantly as an off-spinner and a hard-hitting lower-order batsman