Original sentence: "If guns are outlawed," they traditionally argue, "then only outlaws will have guns.Every male of age is considered part of the national guard and is required to regularly shoot and keep his rifle in his home.For years the UK has had a much more restrictive control regime and relatively lower rates of gun ownership; however, since the complete ban instituted in 1997 as a result of the Dunblane massacre, both violent crimes and use of handguns by the criminals are said to have increased (although still far short of US levels).Gun control opponents believe that other social factors, including poverty, relative laxity or availability of law enforcement resources, and a general culture of violence in specific urban areas are the major factors behind homicide rates.Gun-ownership supporters claim the relative peacefulness of rural areas as evidence that gun ownership is a useful deterrent.Supporters of gun control, on the other hand, suggest that this argument confuses causes and effects — they say that cities' gun control legislation exists as a reaction to their naturally higher rates of violence.Switzerland which has mandatory semi-automatic rifle ownership has one of the lowest homicide rates in the world
Edited sentence: Every male of age is considered part of the national guard and is required to regularly shoot and keep their rifles in their home.Gun control opponents believe that other social factors, including poverty, relative laxity or availability of law enforcement resources, and a general culture of violence in specific urban areas are the major factors behind homicides.However Switzerland which has mandatory semi-automatic rifle ownership has one of the lowest homicide rates in the world.However since the ban both violent crimes and use of handguns by the criminals have increased drastically.In UK the ban on ownership of handguns was introduced in 1997 as a result of the Dunblane massacre.It is obvious that gun control has not worked in Washington D.Therefore, they believe, that it’s absurd to believe that a murderer will obey a gun control law and contend that it’s even more foolish to disarm the future victims of the criminals.They believe that criminals won’t obey laws