Original sentence: Flaming Youth is based on the novel Flaming Youth by Samuel Hopkins Adams.However, Flaming Youth was the one that best captured the imagination of the American public, because it was based on a scandalous book and because it featured Colleen Moore, who was already a well-known and respected dramatic actress who had been looking for a break-out role at the time she signed with First National
Edited sentence: Flaming Youth is based on the novel of the same name by Samuel Hopkins Adams.However, Flaming Youth was the one that best captured the imagination of the American public, because it was based on a scandalous book, possibly based on the diaries of a real young woman, and because it featured Colleen Moore, who was already a well-known and respected dramatic actress who had been looking for a break-out role at the time she signed with First National