Original sentence: From the refinery, Petron move their products mainly by sea to 32 depots and terminals in the country.Petron is expanding non-fuels businesses which include convenience store brand “Treats.Petron's largest client is in the power sector.The company's ISO-14001-certified refinery processes crude oil into a full range of petroleum products including LPG, gasoline, diesel, jet fuel, kerosene, industrial fuel oil, solvents, asphalts, and mixed xylene.They also sell their LPG brand Gasul to households and other consumers through an extensive dealership network.They operate a state-of-the-art lube oil blending plant at their Pandacan Terminal, where it manufactures lubes and greases.Through their nationwide network, they supply fuel oil, diesel, and LPG to various industrial customers.With their lube oil blending plant, they are also able to produce mechanical lubricants and grease.” They have partnered with major fast-food chains, coffee shops, and other consumer services to give customers a one-stop full service experience
Edited sentence: From the refinery, Petron move their products mainly by sea to our 32 depots and terminals situated­­­ all over the country.Our ISO-14001-certified refinery processes crude oil into a full range of petroleum products including LPG, gasoline, diesel, jet fuel, kerosene, industrial fuel oil, solvents, asphalts, and mixed xylene.Petron is expanding our non-fuels businesses which include our convenience store brand “Treats.The power sector is our largest customer.They also sell our LPG brand Gasul to households and other consumers through an extensive dealership network.They operate a state-of-the-art lube oil blending plant at our Pandacan Terminal, where it manufactures lubes and greases.Through this nationwide network, they supply fuel oil, diesel, and LPG to various industrial customers.” They have partnered with major fast-food chains, coffee shops, and other consumer services to give our customers a one-stop full service experience