Original sentence: Mortally wounded near Fenway Park when an FN 303 blunt trauma / pepper spray projectile - classified as a less-lethal weapon - hit her in her eye, causing her to bleed excessively.Victoria Snelgrove (October 29, 1982 - October 21, 2004) was an American college student who was accidently killed by Boston police while she and others were celebrating the Boston Red Sox' victory over the New York Yankees in the 2004 American League Championship Series
Edited sentence: Mortally wounded near Fenway Park when a FN 303 blunt trauma / pepper spray projectile - classified as a less-lethal weapon - hit her in her eye, causing her to bleed excessively.Victoria Snelgrove (October 29, 1982 - October 21, 2004) was an American college student who was killed by Boston police while she and others were celebrating the Boston Red Sox' victory over the New York Yankees in the 2004 American League Championship Series