Original sentence: Apart from urban and night life Bangalore has a number of elite clubs, like the Bangalore Golf Club, Bowring Institute, Karnatka Golf Association, the Karnataka State Cricket Club (which boasts several of members of the Indian cricket team) and the Bangalore Club which is so exclusive it has a 25 year waiting list and counts among its previous members Winston Churchill and the Maharajah of Mysore.Bangalore has an active night culture and is home to over 200 clubs and bars.In fact it's also referred to by many as the Pub Capital of India.The film industry is suffering due to Piracy and Cable Television
Edited sentence: Bangalore has a number of elite clubs, like the Bangalore Golf Club, Bowring Institute, Karnatka Golf Association, the Karnataka State Cricket Club (which boasts several of members of the Indian cricket team) and the Bangalore Club which is so exclusive it has a 25 year waiting list and counts among its previous members Winston Churchill and the Maharajah of Mysore.Bangalore has pretences to a night culture and is home to over 200 clubs and bars, largely hyped and noisy.It is referred to by many as the Pub Capital of India.The film industry is suffering primarily due to a lack of creative content and artistic honesty, though the industry claims to be sufferring frmo Piracy and Cable Television