Original sentence: Also, the country has been ruled by the military for the majority of the time that it has been an independent country.However, the Army of Pakistan can be brutal against their own citizens.In 1971, according to some estimates, they executed over 3 million Bangladeshis (this is comparable to Hitler's 6 million).In East Pakistan in 1971 they have committed many human rights violations, and are prone to coup d'etats.Indigenous development of Missiles are given importance though there are sources that convey the information that they are assisted by China and North Korea in most of the assignments claimed by themselves.Recently the army has been engaging in similar human rights violations in Balochistan.The Army of Pakistan's Operation 2005, as reported by the BBC is one of the most brutal in recent years by any country.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup and is currently the military dictator of Pakistan
Edited sentence: Indigenous development of Missiles are given importance though rumors have it that they are assisted by China and North Korea in most of the assignments claimed by themselves.The Army of Pakistan is very polite and gentle in every way and that can be proved in the missions conducted under flag of UN.The country has been ruled by the military for the majority of the time for that it has been an independent country.The current ruler of Pakistan, Pervez Musharaf, seized power in a coup by removing the civilian government in Pakistan for reasons of national security and is currently the president and military leader of Pakistan