Original sentence: (Bucrep,2006).Bisoro Balue is a small village in Cameroon.Bisoro is located inside the Rumpi Hills of Ekondo titi subdivision in the Ndian Division of Cameroon's Southwest Province.It is situated some 37 km southeast of the Bakassi Peninsular in the Gulf of Guinea.There is an earth road link from Bisoro balue to Kumba town which is the main economic town of the province.With aid from the German Government,organized by the Partnership between the Church districts Schopfheim and Lörrach and Dikome-Balue Presbytery (PCC), the village has a 15000 l pipe borne water system, a primary school that was created in 1958, a Health Centre created in 1982 and a secondary school created in September 2007 (Minesec, June,2007)  The recent population and housing census of 2005 estimates that, Bisoro balue has a population of about 5000 people
Edited sentence: Bisoro Balue is a small village located in Cameroon.Bisoro is located inside the Rumpi Hills of the Ekondo titi subdivision in the Ndian Division of Cameroon's Southwest Province.It is situated 37 km southeast of the Bakassi Peninsular in the Gulf of Guinea.The recent population and housing census of 2005 estimates that, Bisoro balue has a population of about 5000 people (Bucrep,2006).There is an earth road link from Bisoro balue to the town of Kumba which is the main economic town of the province.With aid from the German Government, organized by the Partnership between the Church districts Schopfheim, Lörrach and Dikome-Balue Presbytery (PCC), the village has a 15000 l pipe borne water system, a primary school that was created in 1958, a Health Centre created in 1982 and a secondary school created in September 2007 (Minesec, June, 2007)