Original sentence: He has also written a script, Personal Effects (based on Rick Moody's book, Masion on the Hill) which is currently being shopped around.He has written, is directed and is executive producer of the television movie Heartland currently in pre-production
Edited sentence: Good luck Mr.He has also written a script, Personal Effects (based on Rick Moody's book, Masion on the Hill) which is currently getting shopped around.He has written, is directed and is executive producer of on the television movie Heartland currently in pre-production