Original sentence: After a scrape with Wesley's henchmen for refusing to re-hire Pat (caught stealing earlier), an injured Dalton admits himself to the hospital, medical file in hand, where he meets and is treated by Dr.Not a particularly physically imposing man and with a philosophy degree from New York University and a preference for peacefully resolving confrontation, Dalton seems the antithesis of the nightclub bouncer.That evening local business owner, and Doc's uncle, Red Webster's (Red West) store, is destroyed by a coincidental fire after he refuses to give ground to Wesley's persistent extortion demands.Unknown to Dalton at this point Clay turns out to be Wesley's ex-girlfriend.Upon arriving in Jasper Dalton anticipates his popularity among some of the local townsfolk and buys a battered old 1965 Buick Riviera, filling the trunk with spare tires
Edited sentence: After a scrape with Wesley's henchmen for refusing to re-hire Pat (caught stealing earlier), an injured Dalton admits himself to the local hospital, medical file in hand, where he meets and is treated by Dr.Not a particularly physically imposing man and with a philosophy degree from New York University and a preference for peacefully resolving confrontation, Dalton seems the antithesis of a nightclub bouncer.That evening, local automotive parts and supplies business owner (Doc's uncle) Red Webster's (Red West) store, is destroyed by a coincidental fire after he refuses to give ground to Wesley's persistent extortion demands.Unknown to Dalton at this point, Clay turns out to be Wesley's ex-girlfriend.Upon arriving in Jasper, Dalton anticipates his popularity among some of the local townsfolk and buys a battered, old 1965 Buick Riviera, filling the trunk with spare tires