Original sentence: Following declining VisiCalc sales and low revenues from VisiOn, in November, 1985 the company merged with Paladin Software.In a market where computers were generally used for only one or two tasks, the whole r'aison de etre for VisiOn was seriously diluted.The new company kept the Paladin name.The press continued to laud the product, going so far as to claim it represented the end of operating systems.These were bundled, all three for $990
Edited sentence: Basically nothing was heard from them again.In  market where computers were generally used for only one or two tasks, the whole r'aison de etre for VisiOn was seriously diluted.The company soon entered a death-spiral, and merged in November with Paladin Software, taking their name.The one-two punch of declining VisiCalc sales and low revenues from VisiOn were never addressed.The press continued to laud the product, going so far as to claim it represented the end of operating systems, whatever that was supposed to mean.These were bunded, all three for $990