Original sentence: It also serves major cities in the northern United States, such as Minneapolis, Chicago, and New York.On November 7, 1885 the last spike was driven at Craigellachie, British Columbia, making good on the original promise, albeit four years late.The Canadian Pacific Railway (CPR) is a freight railway corporation in Canada, operating a network of rails stretching from Vancouver to Montreal.The railway was foundering until March of 1884 when the Railway Relief Bill was passed, providing a further $22,500,000 in loans to the CPR Company.The story of the railway's construction was most famously told in popular history books by Pierre Berton, The National Dream and The Last Spike which were adapted into a popular CBC television series called The National Dream
Edited sentence: On November 7, 1885 the last spike is driven in Craigellachie, British Columbia, making good on the original promise, albeit four years late.The Canadian Pacific Railway (CPR) is a freight railway corporation in Canada, exploiting a network of rails stretching across the country.The railway was foundering until March of 1884 the Railway Relief Bill was passed, providing a further $22,500,000 in loans to the CPR Company.The story of the railroad's construction was most famously told in popular history books by Pierre Berton, The National Dream and The Last Spike which was adapted into a popular CBC television series called The National Dream