Original sentence: Austen's treatment of the two sisters is complex and multi-faceted.The plot revolves around a contrast between Elinor's sense and Marianne's emotionalism
Edited sentence: Austen clearly intended to vindicate Elinor's sense and self-restraint, and on the simplest level, the novel may be read as a parody of the full-blown romanticism and sensibility that was fashionable around the 1790s.The plot revolves around a contrast between Elinor's sense and Marianne's emotionalism; the two sisters may have been loosely based on the author and her beloved elder sister Cassandra, with Austen casting Cassandra as the restrained and well-judging sister and herself as the emotional one.Yet Austen's treatment of the two sisters is complex and multi-faceted