Original sentence: , who led the Latter Day Saints to Nauvoo to escape religious persecution in MIssouri.After Joseph Smith's martydom in 1844, the Latter Day Saints were forced to leave their beloved Nauvoo for the Great Salt Lake Valley led by Brigham Young
Edited sentence: , a convicted felon who led the Latter Day Saints to Nauvoo to escape prosecution everywhere from New York to Missouri.After Joseph Smith's cowardly death in 1844, in which he killed two men while trying to escape jail, the Latter Day Saints were forced to leave their beloved Nauvoo for the Great Salt Lake Valley led by Brigham Young, because they did not want to give up polygamy, which was illegal in the US