Original sentence: According to the 2006 census there are 1,775 people living in Cobble Hill.Cobble Hill is a small community on Vancouver Island, British Columbia (BC), Canada.Frances Oldham Kelsey - FDA Pharmacologist.It is located approximately 45 km north of Victoria  in the Cowichan Valley Regional District, and is known for its agricultural surroundings, and for Cobble Hill Mountain itself, which gave the village its name
Edited sentence: According to the 2006 census, there are 1,775 people living in Cobble Hill.Cobble Hill is a small community on Vancouver Island, British Columbia, Canada.Frances Oldham Kelsey - FDA pharmacologist.It is located approximately  north of Victoria  in the Cowichan Valley Regional District, and is known for its agricultural surroundings, and for Cobble Hill Mountain itself, which gave the village its name.The settlement is served by the Malahat VIA Rail service