Original sentence: At the 2006 census the population was approximately 52,230, with the city covering an area of , under the administrative control of the Hervey Bay City Council.The 'Bay' has a sub-tropical climate with no real extremes (average 30 degrees Celsius in summer and 23 degrees in winter) and has been voted in the top three of 'best climates' in the world
Edited sentence: At the 2006 census the population was approximately 52,230, with the city covering an area of 2,356 square kilometres, under the administrative control of the Hervey Bay City Council.The 'Bay' benefits from a fantastic sub-tropical climate with no real extremes (average 30 degrees Celsius in summer and 23 degrees in winter) and has been voted in the top three of 'best climates' in the world