Original sentence: Women are often uncomfortable with their physical changes after birth, and often want sleep or to have time for themselves and this leads to a changed sexual pattern, and discordance of sexual desire with their partner is frequent
Edited sentence: Discordance of sexual desire with their partner is frequent.More than a third of first-time mothers report a loss of libido at 8 months, though only 1 in 7 of experienced mothers have a loss of libido.Women are often uncomfortable with their physical changes after birth, and often want sleep or to have time for themselves and this leads to a changed sexual pattern