Original sentence: In Canada the baby boom is usually considered to have begun in 1947 (Canadian overseas troops were repatriated a year later than American troops).The Baby Boom generation includes persons born in certain countries after the end of WWII (1945) but before the end of 1964.William Strauss and Neil Howe in their book Generations called this generation the Boom generation (they are no longer babies) and put the birth years of [[United States members of this generation at 1943 to 1960, not based on parental fecundity, but because of a common peer personality
Edited sentence: The Baby Boom generation includes persons born after the end of WWII (1945) but before the end of 1964.William Strauss and Neil Howe in their book Generations called this generation the Boom generation (they are no longer babies) and put their birth years at 1943 to 1960, not based on parental fecundity, but because of a common peer personality