Original sentence: So yet another legend without much substance.The Bambrough family died out because of the lack of male heirs, but the Wentworth intermarried with the Bambroughs and they did not became extinct.The family that became owners next, the Cholmelys also still around, and the Stricklands who succeeded them are still plentiful and inded still living on the estate
Edited sentence: The Bambrough family died out.The curse continues.The family that became owners next, the Cholmelys died out, and the Stricklands; all the males in the family have died and the only surviving member of the family is a female