Original sentence: Based on the success of Cheaper by the Dozen, Gilbreth and Carey wrote a follow-up to their book entitled Belles on Their Toes which was also made into a movie by 20th Century Fox
Edited sentence: Because of the success of Cheaper by the Dozen, Gilbreth and Carey wrote a follow-up to their book, entitled Belles on Their Toes, which was also made into a movie by 20th Century Fox