Original sentence: On August 29, 2005, levees in metropolitan New Orleans breached in 53 different places and caused flooding when Hurricane Katrina came ashore and passed east of New Orleans.The Industrial Canal breach in the Ninth Ward residential neighborhood destroyed some vehicles and homes
Edited sentence: On August 29, 2005, levees in metro New Orleans breached in 53 different places and caused catastrophic flooding when Hurricane Katrina came ashore and passed east of New Orleans.The Industrial Canal breach in the Ninth Ward residential neighborhood tossed cars and homes