Original sentence: That year they released "Unfinished Sympathy" as a single [an obvious pun on Unfinished Symphony], a grandiosely string-arranged track at Abbey Road studio, scored by Will Malone, that would go on to be voted the 10th greatest of all time, with a one-take video that also become iconic and much-imitated (by The Verve amongst others)
Edited sentence: That year they released "Unfinished Sympathy" as a single [an obvious pun on Unfinished Symphony], a grandiosely string-arranged track at Abbey Road studio, scored by Will Malone, that would go on to be voted the 10th greatest of all time, with a one-take video that also became iconic and much-imitated (by The Verve amongst others)