Original sentence: At some point, Hill was given the alias "L Boogie," as she began to convert her poetic writing into rap verses.The Refugee Camp ("Fugees") formed after Prakazrel "Pras" Michel approached Hill in high school about joining a music group he was creating
Edited sentence: At some point, Lauryn Hill was given the alias "L Boogie," as she began to convert her poetic writing into impressive rap verses.Since her emergence, Lauryn Hill has made her presence known as one of the few artists in the industry who can both sing and rap skillfully, and being dominant & respected in both styles.The Refugee Camp ("Fugees"), formed after Prakazrel "Pras" Michel approached Hill in high school about joining a music group he was creating