Original sentence: He won the 2nd prize for web design and multimedia at the 7th Biennale of Iranian Graphic Designers, which was followed by his participation in graphic competitions and exhibitions in Iran, France, Germany, South Korea, and Japan.In addition, he has directed audiovisual projects with Iranian rock bands, such as Meera, D.While studying toward a bachelor degree in graphic design, he became interested in a range of artistic possibilities offered by multi-media techniques
Edited sentence: He won the 2nd prize for web design and multimedia at the 7th Biennale of Iranian Graphic Designers, which was followed by his participation in many graphic competitions and exhibitions in Iran, France, Germany, South Korea, and Japan.In addition, he has directed many audiovisual projects with Iranian rock bands, such as Meera, D.While studying toward a bachelor degree in graphic design, he became interested in wide range of artistic possibilities offered by multi-media techniques