Original sentence: A celebration known as the Cultural Olympiad was established to include all cultural events of the Olympic Movement.This Olympiad is a period most recently held in Athens from 2001-2004, where artists from around the world come and exhibit their art
Edited sentence: A world renowned celebration known as the Cultural Olympiad was established  to include all cultural events of the Olympic Movement.This Olympiad is a period most recently held in Athens from 2001-2004, where artists from around the world travel and exhibit their art