Original sentence: The plot starts to speed up when "Kyle" and "Mac" fall in love (Romeo and Juliet style).The two must race to gain their freedom from a scorn leader "Monster" (inspired by the energy drink) of a rival biker gang
Edited sentence: After the completion of this inferior film.In a world fueled by knock off energy drinks and low self esteem.The plot starts to speed up when "Kyle" and "Also Kyle" fall in love (Romeo and Juliet style).The two must race to gain their freedom from a scorn leader rival bike gang leader; "Monster" (inspired by the energy drink).Torque fails to deliver in anyway.Torque puts you right in the driver's seat.While being a obvious rip off of a far superior franchise.You will be wondering why you sat and just let this happen to you