Original sentence: Ali Merdan (1904 - 1981), born in the city Kerkuk, Kurdistan, is known as a talented singer of the Maqam.Ali Merdan past away on 21 January 1981 and was buried in his hometown of Taparash/Kerkuk.During his time, he helped the careers of fellow singers like Hasan Zirak, Tahir Tofiq, Shamal Saeb and others
Edited sentence: Ali Merdan was a complete singer, to many, the greatest singer Kurdistan ever produced.Born 1904 in the city Kerkuk/Kurdistan, Ali Merdan is known as the Greatest singer of the "Maqam" in it's History.During his time, he helped fellow singers become Legends like "Hasan Zirak", "Tahir Tofiq", "Shamal Saeb" and many others.He past away in 21-1-1981 and was buried in his hometown of Taparash/Kerkuk.His music will live on forever, even in this day, it's a singer's dream to re-sing his songs or even get a mention next to his name