Original sentence: Another close musical resemblance occurs in the scene of Commodus's triumphal entry into Rome, accompanied by music clearly evocative of two sections - the Prelude to Das Rheingold and Siegfried's Funeral March from Götterdämmerung - from Wagner's Ring of the Nibelungs.The music for many of the battle scenes has been noted as similar to Gustav Holst's "Mars: The Bringer of War", and in June 2006, the Holst Foundation sued Hans Zimmer for allegedly copying the late Gustav Holst's work
Edited sentence: Among other musical resemblances too close to be mere coincidence, Commodus's triumphal entry into Rome is accompanied by music clearly evocative of two sections - the Prelude to Das Rheingold and Siegfried's Funeral March from Götterdämmerung - from Wagner's Ring of the Nibelungs.Many of the battle scenes rely off a mixture of original composition and variations of Gustav Holst's "Mars: The Bringer of War", so in June 2006, the Holst Foundation sued Hans Zimmer for allegedly copying the late Gustav Holst's work