Original sentence: Charles formed a  penchant for extra-marital affairs.Charles would marry Princess Marie Thérèse of Savoy in November 1773.Charles' father died in 1765,  which left Charles' oldest surviving brother, Louis Auguste, to succeed their father as the Dauphin, the French equivalent to a crown prince or heir apparent.Charles' mother, Marie Josephe, never recovered from the loss of her husband, and she died in March 1767 from tuberculosis.The new Comtesse d'Artois was thought to be quite ugly by most contemporaries, but the marriage, unlike that of Marie Antoinette's and Louis Auguste, was consummated almost immediately, despite the initial protests from Charles, who thought that his new wife was disgusting.This left Charles an orphan, at the age of 9, along with his siblings Louis Auguste, the Comte de Provence,Clothilde, and Elisabeth
Edited sentence: Charles formed a penchant for extra-marital affairs as a result.Charles married Princess Marie Thérèse of Savoy in November 1773.Charles' father died in 1765, which left Charles' oldest surviving brother, Louis Auguste, to succeed their father in the capacity of Dauphin, the French equivalent to a crown prince or heir apparent.Charles' mother, Marie Josephe, never recovered from the loss of her husband and she died in March 1767 from tuberculosis.Despite the initial protests from Charles, who thought that his new wife was disgusting.The new Comtesse d'Artois was thought to be quite ugly by most contemporaries.This left Charles an orphan at the age of 9, along with his siblings Louis Auguste, the Comte de Provence,Clothilde, and Elisabeth.hTe marriage, unlike that of Marie Antoinette and Louis Auguste, was consummated almost immediately