Original sentence: He urges her to escape, but a journalist gets a photographer of him kissing her – a scandal for him.In Paris in 1893, the dance-hall in Montmarte owned by La Môme Pistache, Bal du Paradis, is being threatened with closing by a self-righteous judge, Aristide Forestier.The judge is struggling with his the conflict between his moral scruples and his love for La Môme
Edited sentence: He urges her to escape, but a journalist gets a photograph of him kissing her – a scandal for him.In Paris in 1893, the dance-hall in Montmartre owned by La Môme Pistache, Bal du Paradis, is being threatened with closing by a self-righteous judge, Aristide Forestier.The judge is struggling with the conflict between his moral scruples and his love for La Môme