Original sentence: Daniel Landa (born November 4, 1968 in Prague) is a Czech musician.He graduated from the Prague Conservatory in the area of Music and Drama.He used to be interested in autocross, now he's interested in rallying.His current initiative, "Ordo Lumen Templi" was compared to the nacist "Ordo Novi Templi".In 2003 he founded a with Roman Kresta a foundation Malina which promotes safe driving.Landa began his musical career in 1987 when he along with David Matásek founded the oi.Landa claims to have grown out of his racistically slanted debuts, and nowadays pronounces himself as a patriot, although his critics call his opinions excessively nationalistic.Much of his earlier music was focused around skinheads and obviously racistic (particularly against gypsies, a large minority in Czech Republic) and nationalistic.They have a daughter Anastázie and twin daughters Roxana and Rozálie
Edited sentence: Daniel Landa began his musical career in 1987 when he along with David Matásek founded the oi.He graduated from the Prag Conservatory in the area of Music and Drama.He used to be interested in autocross, now he's interested in ralley.In 2003 he founded with Roman Kresta foundation Malina.Landa claims to have grown out of his racistially slanted debuts, yet his current initiative, "Ordo Lumen Templi" seems too close to comfort to the nacist "Ordo Novi Templi".Much of his earlier music was focused around skinheads and particularly against gypsies, a large minority in Czech Republic.They have a daughter Anastázie and twins Roxana and Rozálie