Original sentence: By translating the commentaries of the 18th century Taoist sage Liu Yiming, Cleary has unearthed a veritable Rosetta stone of Taoism, which explains the often impenetrable metaphoric coding of the main Taoist texts in readily understandable language dealing with the transformation of consciousness accompanying spiritual enlightenment.Cleary's also translated the monumental Avatamsaka Sutra / Huayan Jing / Flower Ornament Scripture.Cleary's recent translation of the Qur'an has been praised by Muslims who know English and Arabic.Cleary's work has also been occasionally by some criticised for idiosyncratic and loose translation.Early in his career, he was sponsored by the abbot Zentatsu Richard Baker of the San Francisco Zen Center while conducting his translation work.His most popular translation has been of the Chinese classic Sunzi Bingfa / The Art of War by Sun Tzu
Edited sentence: By translating the commentaries of the 18th century Taoist sage Liu Yiming, Cleary has unearthed a veritable Rosetta stone of Taoism, which explains the often impenetrable metaphoric coding of the main Taoist texts in readily understandable language dealing with the transformation of consciousness.Cleary's recent translation of the Qur'an has been hailed by Muslims who know English and Arabic for its unique success in conveying something of the poetic power and beauty of the original.Cleary's translation of the Chinese classic Sunzi Bingfa / The Art of War has been widely read and studied by practical people who ordinarily would have no time for ancient texts.Cleary's translation of the monumental Avatamsaka Sutra / Huayan Jing / Flower Ornament Scripture will be seen as a landmark in making Buddhism in its full universal presentation accessible to Western readers