Original sentence: Critique of original AP report on the incident.Hebron: Past, Present, and Forever - dedicated to Shalhevet hy"d 2001.Israeli Department of Education profile.Israeli investigators  believed the snipers were intentionally targeting the baby.On that day, Shalhevet Pass () was shot in the head and killed by a Palestinian sniper while seated in her stroller on the streets of Hebron, where she and her family lived.Shalhevet's father, Yitzchak Pass, who was pushing the stroller, was also seriously wounded in the leg by two shots, and rushed to hospital.The murder of Shalhevet Pass was the killing of a ten-month-old Israeli infant by a Palestinian gunman on March 26, 2001
Edited sentence: Israeli investigators  believed he was shot by Palestine snipers that were intentionally targeting the baby.On that day, Shalhevet Pass () was shot in the head and killed while seated in her stroller on the streets of Hebron, where she and her family lived.The bullet which killed Shalhevet then hit the leg of her father, Yitzchak Pass, who was pushing the stroller.The murder of Shalhevet Pass was the gunning down of a ten-month-old Israeli infant on March 26, 2001