Original sentence: Percy later makes an appearance in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, where he has apparently seen the error of his ways and pays a visit to his family with new Minister Rufus Scrimgeour during the Christmas Holidays, although it is later revealed that this is a mere opportunity for Scrimgeour to speak to Harry alone
Edited sentence: Percy later makes an appearance in Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, where he has apparently seen the error of his ways and pays a visit to his family with new Minister Rufus Scrimgeour during the Christmas Holidays, although it is later revealed that this is a mere opportunity for Scrimgeour to speak to Harry alone