Original sentence: After graduation, Willard joined her family in Arizona Territory where her four brothers operated a ranch in the Verde Valley with her father's former business partner, Willard Munds (Joel Willard had died in 1879).She worked as a school teacher in the communities of Pine, Payson, and Mayer before marrying John Lee Munds, youngest son of Willard Munds in 1890
Edited sentence: After graduation, Willard joined her family in the Arizona Territory where her four brothers operated a ranch in the Verde Valley with her father's former business partner, Willard Munds (Joel Willard had died in 1879).She worked as a school teacher in the communities of Pine, Payson, and Mayer before marrying John Lee Munds, youngest son of Willard Munds, in 1890