Original sentence: A side story involves a sexually confused local mechanic (Yudis, the film's producer and director) and his probably intentional delay in fixing Henry's car, in order to seduce him.College student Henry (Andrews) arrives from New Orleans at a desert ranch owned by his father, Hezekiah (Sandeen) to help out.Henry and Cheryl are caught by Hezekiah having sex, Cheryl and Hezekiah have a fight, then she leaves the ranch that night.Henry calls a care facility because he thinks his dad has gone crazy.In the few days of waiting for the next victim to show up, Patty and Henry decide to while away the time by having sex.Soon after arriving, Henry is hit on by Hezekiah's wife, Cheryl (Carey), and starts having nightmares
Edited sentence: A side story involves a sexually confused local mechanic (Yudis, the film's producer and director) and his probably intentional delay in fixing James's car, in order to seduce him.College student James (Andrews) arrives from New Orleans at a desert ranch owned by his father, Hezekiah (Sandeen) to help out.In the few days of waiting for the next victim to show up, Patty and James decide to while away the time by having sex.James and Cheryl are caught by Hezekiah having sex, Cheryl and Hezekiah have a fight, then she leaves the ranch that night.James calls a care facility because he thinks his dad has gone crazy.Soon after arriving, James is hit on by Hezekiah's wife, Cheryl (Carey), and starts having nightmares