Original sentence: As the FGS was also a boarding school, it attracted a number of girls from surrounding communities, including Jerusalem, Lydda, Jaffa, and Beirut.It was declared a city in 1908 and had an elected municipality as well as partnership projects with the adjacent town of al-Bireh
Edited sentence: As the FGS was also a boarding school, it attracted a number of girls from surrounding communities, including Jerusalem, Lydd, Jaffa, and even far away Beirut.It was declared a city in 1908 and had an elected municipality as well as partnership projects with the adjoining town of El-Bireh