Original sentence: He later went on to create a total of four: The Tin Man, The Cowardly Lion, The Scarecrow, and  Dorothy & Toto.In 1974, the the Chicago Park District acquired the land and began constructing a park.Melamerson, interested in childrens' physical well-being, donated enough money in 1994 to create an athletic field with basketball courts, an asphalt volleyball court and tennis courts.She passed away, however, before the park approved the project four years later
Edited sentence: He later went on to create a total of four: The Tin Man, The Cowardly Lion, The Scarecrow, and Dorothy & Toto.In 1974, the Chicago Park District acquired the land and began constructing a park.Melamerson, interested in children's physical well-being, donated enough money in 1994 to create an athletic field with basketball courts, an asphalt volleyball court and tennis courts.She died, however, before the park approved the project four years later