Original sentence: Battle of Panjwaii7/200610/2006Panjwaii districtBattle: Decisive Canadian victory, Panjwaii cleared of Taliban.Operation Haven Denial2003/07/022003/07/06the Paktika and Khost provincesCounter Insurgency: Targeted against Taliban remnants and Al Qaeda fighters.Operation Herrick2002.Operation Hoover2007/05/242007/05/25Kandahar Province district of ZhariCounter Insurgency: Was a Canadian-led offensive against the Taliban.throughout AfghanistanContingency: The codename for all the British operations in Afghanistan
Edited sentence: Battle of Panjwaii07/200610/2006Panjwaii districtBattle: Decisive Canadian victory, Panjwaii cleared of Taliban.Operation Haven Denial07/02/200307/06/2003the Paktika and Khost provincesCounter Insurgency: Targeted against Taliban remnants and Al Qaeda fighters.Operation Herrick2002Presentthroughout AfghanistanContingency: The codename for all the British operations in Afghanistan.Operation Hoover05/24/200705/25/2007Kandahar Province district of ZhariCounter Insurgency: Was a Canadian-led offensive against the Taliban