Original sentence: Elsewhere, the album performed better: it placed four singles on the UK charts, and did go platinum in Canada.With an influence more on making a sensational Asian-pop metal than on producing a pop/hard metal album, fans remain divided on whether it was a great idea or not, with many agreeing that it was only a great album made at the wrong time
Edited sentence: Elsewhere, the album performed better: it placed four singles on the UK charts, and did go platinum in Canada(although it shouldn't have).With an influence more on making a sensational Asian-pop metal than on producing a pop/hard metal album, fans remain divided on whether it was a great idea or not, with many agreeing that it was a great album made at the wrong time