Original sentence: In these memoirs, Zateyev criticised the rushed production of Russia's first nuclear ballistic submarine, while their actions on July 4 1961 earned the surviving crewmembers a joint nomination for the Nobel Peace Prize in March 2006
Edited sentence: His and his crew's actions on July 4 1961 earned the surviving crewmembers a joint nomination for the Nobel Peace Prize in March 2006.In these memoirs, Zateyev criticised the rushed production of Russia's first nuclear ballistic submarine