Original sentence: The zoo has also been criticised by Ben Goldacre, a prominent atheist  and by Alice Roberts, a Distinguished Supporter of the British Humanist Association, who said the zoo had "absolutely nothing to do with science education".The zoo has been criticised by the British Centre for Science Education, who have the goal of "countering creationism within the UK", for "contradicting vast swaths of science needed to pass public examinations" contrary to its claim that it supported the National Curriculum
Edited sentence: The zoo has also been criticised by Ben Goldacre, author of the Bad Science column of The Guardian  and by Alice Roberts, professor of Public Engagement in Science at the University of Birmingham, who said the zoo had "absolutely nothing to do with science education".The zoo has been criticised by the British Centre for Science Education for "contradicting vast swaths of science needed to pass public examinations" contrary to its claim that it supported the National Curriculum