Original sentence: "Dawkins the Dogmatist", negative review of Dawkins' latest book, The God Delusion, Andrew Brown, Prospect, October, 2006."Lunging, Flailing, Mispunching" another negative review of the God Delusion by Terry Eagleton, London Review of Books, October 2006
Edited sentence: "Dawkins the Dogmatist", scathing review of Dawkins' latest book, The God Delusion, Andrew Brown, Prospect, October, 2006."Lunging, Flailing, Mispunching" another scathing review of the God Delusion by Terry Eagleton, London Review of Books, October 2006