Original sentence: Carmen Diaz -  A dancer who is determined to make it big.Goodman 'Goody' King - A trumpet/saxaphone musician.Grace 'Lambchops' Lamb - A rock chick who plays the drums.Greta Bell - Dance teacher with a big passion for all styles of dance.Iris Kelly - Ballet dancer who is believed to be extremely wealthy.Jose 'Joe' Vegas -  Comedian who has feelings for Carmen.Mabel Washington- A  chubby, dancer who is desperate to lose weight.Miss Esther Sherman - Academic English teacher.Myers - Drama teacher.Nick Piazza - Ambitious, enthusiastic, classical actor.Schlomo Metzenbaum - Shy violinist.Serena Katz - Actress, in love with Nick.Shienkopf -  European Music tutor.Tyrone Jackson - Illiterate hip-hop and jazz dancer
Edited sentence: Carmen Diaz - Hispanic, sexy, determined and cocky dancer.Determined to make it big and revolves her life around wanting fame.Enthusiastic to make it as a drummer in the rock band.Goodman 'Goody' King - A gay and funny trumpet/saxaphone musician.Grace 'Lambchops' Lamb - A loud and lively punky, tomboy, rock chick.Greta Bell - Graceful, artistic dance teacher with a big passion for all styles of dance.Her part in fame revolves around her love for Nick Piazza.In the band with Lambchops and Schlomo.Iris Kelly - An amazing, elegant ballet dancer who is believed to be extremely wealthy until she comes clean to Tyrone.Jose 'Joe' Vegas - Hispanic, extrovert, crude comedian who has feelings for carmen.Love-interest for Iris.Mabel Washington- A plump, chubby, funny dancer who is desperate to lose weight.Miss Esther Sherman - No slack, dedicated, academic English teacher.Myers - No nonsense, serious Drama teacher who is big on human phycology.Nick Piazza - Ambitious, enthusiastic, classical actor who is determined to make it as a real actor.Schlomo Metzenbaum - Jewish, musically talented, shy violinist who is under pressure of his musical-genius father despite wanting to start up a rock band with friends Grace Lamb (Lambchops) and Goodman King (Goody).Serena Katz - A shy, timid yet enthusiastic actor.Shienkopf - Multi-musical, European Music tutor'''''.The comic of the show.Tyrone Jackson - Sexy, hip-hop and jazz dancer yet illiterate