Original sentence: "..some possible applications [with] electromagnetic wormholes include the creation of invisible fiber optic cables, for example for security devices, and scopes for MRI-assisted medical procedures for which metal tools would otherwise interfere with the magnetic resonance images.A large building, which is obstructing a view of the bay, could be "cloaked".A metal mesh screen could be used to shield sensitive equipment.As the technology progresses, with materials that enable more and more precision directing and controlling the electromagnetic field, which includes light, advanced lenses could be developed for cameras.It could improve microwave transmissions, antennae design, and optical components.The effectiveness and implementation of [this technology] in practice, however, are dependent on future developments in the design, investigation, and production of metamaterials.The invisible optical fibers could even make three-dimensional television screens possible in the distant future.The same theory applies to sound waves so any structure could be protected from vibrations, sound, or seismic waves.This technology can be used in other applications, such as wireless communications, defense and radar applications.This would not only enhance the view, but also improve wireless communications.Unwanted reflections from objects could be attenuated.When the technology is fully developed, an object can avoid detection by infrared, radar or radio waves
Edited sentence: As the technology progresses, with materials that enable more and more precise control of the electromagnetic field, advanced lenses could be developed for cameras, and unwanted reflections from objects could be attenuated.It could improve microwave antennae design, and optical components.Structures that would otherwise disrupt wireless signals could route the signals around the structure, improving reception nearby.This technology can be used in other applications, such as wireless communications, defense and radar.When the technology is fully developed, it may be possible to prevent detection of objects by infrared, radar and radio waves