Original sentence: By 2008, billions of barrels of oil will be exported.In addition, investors will gain greatly being that it is petroleum.Investors should take responsibility to develop São Tomé now and invest in the country as a conservancy of an abundant and pristine tropical ecologic system that is the last place on this planet not to be corrupted.Large reserves of oil are in the ocean between Nigeria and São Tomé.The European and American investors should now begin the process of building up São Tomé and Príncipe in real estate, infrastructure of hydroelectricity and hospitals, schools and small businesses to improve Sao Tomeans lifes and to offer foreigners a share in this little nation.The environmental remediation holding company was formed in 1997 to address the economic potential and then was transferred to the Chrome energy Company which is staffed by Nigerians and has offices in Texas
Edited sentence: (august 8 2003)Large reserves of oil are in the ocean between nigeria and sao tome.By 2008 billions of barrels of oil will be exported.Investors should take responsibility to develope sao tome now and invest in the country as a conservancy of an abundant and pristine tropical ecologic system that is the last place on this planet not to be corrupted.The european and american investors should now begin the process of building up sa tome and principe in real estate,infrastructure of hydroelectricity and hospitals,schools and small businesses to improve sao tomeans lifes and to offer foreigners a share in this little nation.plus , investors will gain greatly being that it is petroleum.the environmental remediation holding company was formed in 1997 to address the economic potential and then was transferred to the Chrome energy Company which is staffed by Nigerians and has offices in Texas