Original sentence: At the Catalyst Schools–Howland Charter, at least 55% of students in 2009 met or exceeded the scoring standards of the Illinois Standards Achievement Test.For example, the students are met at the front door each school day by a teacher or administrator who shakes their hands and gives a word of encouragement.The Catalyst Schools teach values in addition to core subjects like reading and math
Edited sentence: At the Catalyst Schools–Howland Charter, Staff has been standoffish to new parents 'because we don't know you' since my daughter transferred from another charter school.For example, your child will not get homework over the weekend.Her grades have gone down to C's.Howland creates dummies, not scholars.I was SHOCKED to learn my child watched an illegal movie, SELMA, while in school.If you have your child in another school, DON'T make the mistake I did.She was on the Honor Roll every year at her other school.The Catalyst Schools Do NOT teach core subjects like reading and math.They do not provide enough REAL instruction, no homework over the weekends, busy-work, and bootleg movie viewing.They will be allowed to watch illegal bootleg movies in the classroom.This school alienates people with disabilities and will not clean the handicapped ramp so that I can enter the school.at least 55% of students in 2009 met or exceeded the scoring standards of the Illinois Standards Achievement Test.the students are met at the front door each school day by a teacher or administrator who shakes their hands and gives a word of encouragement