Original sentence: At some point afterwards, most-likely early 1997, Eminem created the Slim Shady and Marshall Mathers (his real name was used in occasions) concepts.However, these reports contradict another eye-witness who states otherwise.On April 11 2006, Proof died after suffering a gunshot wound to the head at approximately 4:30am EDT (08:30 UTC) at the CCC Club on 8 Mile Road in Detroit, Michigan, after fatally shooting Keith Bender, Jr.. Proof fired the first shots into Bender's head after taking his pistol and striking Bender several times in the face.Proof decided, in order to have 12, the six members would create an alter-ego.Proof formed D12 as a rap collective of local Detroit MCs including Bizarre, Eminem, Eye-Kyu, Killa Hawk, Fuzz Scoota, and Proof himself.Proof was then allegedly shot by the bouncer Mario Etheridge, Bender's cousin
Edited sentence: At some point afterwards, most-likely early 1997, Eminem created the Slim Shady concept.On April 11, 2006, Proof died after suffering a gunshot wound to the head at approximately 4:30am EDT (08:30 UTC) at the CCC Club on 8 Mile Road in Detroit, Michigan, after fatally shooting Keith Bender, Jr.Proof decided, in order to have 12, the six members would each create an alter-ego.Proof fired the first shots into Bender's head after taking his pistol and striking Bender several times in the face.Proof formed D12 as a rap collective of local Detroit MC's including Bizarre, Eminem, Eye-Kyu, Killa Hawk, Fuzz Scoota, and Proof.Proof was then shot by the bouncer Mario Etheridge, Bender's cousin