Original sentence: In 2005, he took the unusual step of seeking admission to a college fraternity well after the traditional age of inductees, and on 22 January 2006 was admitted to the Cornell University chapter of Zeta Psi..
Edited sentence: Dizzy has said his joining came from a motivation to feel young, a feeling he has lost since Axl Rose effectively took control over Guns N' Roses.In 2005, he took the unusual step of seeking admission to a college fraternity well after the traditional age of inductees, and on 22 January 2006 was admitted to the Cornell University chapter of Zeta Psi