Original sentence: Amongst the many objectives of these programs, some clearly delineate the relationship between the province's labour market needs and its higher education.Interestingly, of those receiving the Yukon Grant only three out of ten were studying at Yukon College; 44% of the recipients were studying at universities; 4% at university colleges outside of Yukon; and 22% studied outside the province in programs that may be similar to local alternatives.Like all Canadian provinces, Yukon also encourages immigration.Loan programs include Canada Student Loans, funded by the federal government and administered by the province.That is, the educational needs of 68% of the Yukon Grant recipients were served outside of the province, but financially assisted by the province.Yukon students attending these out of province institutions have to observe the credit transfer and articulation agreements within and among the institutes of these provinces
Edited sentence: Amongst the many objectives of these programs, some clearly delineate the relationship between the territory's labour market needs and its higher education.Interestingly, of those receiving the Yukon Grant only three out of ten were studying at Yukon College; 44% of the recipients were studying at universities; 4% at university colleges outside of Yukon; and 22% studied outside the territory in programs that may be similar to local alternatives.Like all Canadian provinces, Yukon (a territory) also encourages immigration.Loan programs include Canada Student Loans, funded by the federal government and administered by the territory.That is, the educational needs of 68% of the Yukon Grant recipients were served outside of the territory, but financially assisted by the territory.Yukon students attending these out-of-territory institutions have to observe the credit transfer and articulation agreements within and among the institutes of these provinces