Original sentence: Cartoon Network (Pakistan) was totally changed (Updated/Upgraded)) from 1st September 2008 with.It also has mostly the same timings but according to PST (GMT +5).Not only this but also the way of announcing break during cartoons was recreated as from 1st september when break comes during the cartoons it was totally change from the old one.Nowadays Cartoon Network (Pakistan) is too different from the CN India because of the new programmes like Naruto was aired in April on CN India but on Cartoon Network (Pakistan) it was aired on 9th June 2008.The major difference between CN India and Cartoon Network (Pakistan) are advertisements and contest's address.There is also a difference in the schedule of Cartoon Network (Pakistan) and CN India because the episodes of Dragon Ball Z firstly airs On Cartoon Network (Pakistan) then they air on CN India
Edited sentence: Cartoon Network Pakistan was totally changed (Upgraded) from 1st September 2008 with.It also has mostly the same timings but are in PST (GMT +5).Not only this but also the way of announcing break during cartoons was recreated as from 1st September when break comes during the cartoons it was totally change from the old one.Nowadays Cartoon Network Pakistan become too different from the Cartoon Network India because of the new programmes like Naruto was aired in April on Cartoon Network India but on Cartoon Network Pakistan it was aired on 9th June 2008.The major difference between Cartoon Network India and Cartoon Network Pakistan are timings, advertisements and contest's address.There is also a difference in the schedule of Cartoon Network Pakistan and Cartoon Network India because the episodes of Dragon Ball Z firstly airs On Cartoon Network Pakistan then they air on Cartoon Network India