Original sentence: Comprised of Joey LaRocca (vocals), Jason LaRocca (guitar), Charlie Curtis (Bass), and Chris X (drums), they blaze a new trail in the modern punk rock scene, by following the old ways of punk bands such as The Ramones and The Clash
Edited sentence: Comprised of the talented Joey LaRocca (vocals), Jason LaRocca (guitar), Charlie Curtis (Bass), and Chris X (drums), they blaze a new trail in the modern punk rock scene, by following the old ways of punk bands such as The Ramones and The Clash