Original sentence: Carlos Cardona (born 07 March 1974) Carlos an internet entrepreneur best known for his Web 1.0 star-up Yupi Internet, he started his first company at the age of 18
Edited sentence: Carlos Cardona (born 7 March 1974) Carlos an internet entrepreneur best known for his Web 1.0 star-up Yupi Internet, he started his first company at the age of 18