Original sentence: After this, he became "Action Chief" of the Commodore's Messenger Organization a position "responsible for missionaire activities of the Church".Although Religious Technology Center is a separate corporation from the Church of Scientology, Miscavige is officially described as "worldwide ecclesiastical leader of the Scientology religion".He was later appointed to disband the Guardian's Office and took part in reworking the corporate structure of the Scientology network.Miscavige stated that extraterrestrial beliefs (see Space opera in Scientology doctrine) are not as important as people believe or not important at all.Miscavige was interviewed at length by Ted Koppel of ABC News in 1992 and attempted to dispel misconceptions about Scientology.Petersburg Times, in the 1998 article "The Man Behind Scientology", states: "During two heated encounters, Miscavige persuaded Mary Sue Hubbard to resign.Ron Hubbard’s religious technologies"
Edited sentence: " Although Religious Technology Center is a separate corporation from the Church of Scientology, Miscavige is officially described as "worldwide ecclesiastical leader of the Scientology religion." He was later appointed to disband the Guardian's Office and took part in reworking the corporate structure of the Scientology network.After this, he became "Action Chief" of the Commodore's Messenger Organization a position "responsible for missionaire activities of the Church.Miscavige claimed that extraterrestrial beliefs (see Space opera in Scientology doctrine) are not as important as people believe or not important at all.Miscavige was interviewed at length by Ted Koppel of ABC News in 1992 and attempted to dispel what he described as misconceptions about Scientology.Petersburg Times, in the 1998 article "The Man Behind Scientology," states: "During two heated encounters, Miscavige persuaded Mary Sue Hubbard to resign.Ron Hubbard’s religious technologies