Original sentence: After Simone Signoret in 1959, Marion Cotillard is the second French cinema actress to win an Academy Award for Best Actress, though French expatriate Claudette Colbert was given an Oscar in 1934.Marion Cotillard (born September 30 1975) is a two-time César Award-,BAFTA-,Czech Lion-,Golden Globe- and Academy Award-winning French actress who has appeared in over fifty films in France.On February 10, 2008, Cotillard became the first French actress to be awarded the BAFTA Award for Best Actress in a Leading Role since the BAFTAs in 1969 combined the Best British and Best Foreign actress award into one Best Actress category
Edited sentence: After Simone Signoret in 1959, Marion Cotillard is the second French cinema actress to win an Academy Award for Best Actress, though French-born expatriate and American citizen Claudette Colbert was given an Oscar in 1934.Marion Cotillard (born September 30 1975) is an Academy Award for Best Actress winning French actress who has, due to her historic Academy Award victory, quickly become France's most celebrated actress and an inevitable legend of French cinema.On February 10, 2008, Cotillard became the first ever French actress to be awarded the BAFTA Award for Best Actress in a Leading Role since the BAFTAs in 1969 combined the Best British and Best Foreign actress award into one Best Actress category