Original sentence: Alavi was also a very close friend of Iran's famous writer Sadegh Hedayat; these two created a literary group.Although Her Eyes is considered his masterpiece, Alavi also wrote many other books, such as the novel chemdan which was written under the influence of Freudian psychology.He did return to Tehran after the revolution but did not stay too long and decided to head back to Germany.His other novels mirza, 53 nafar and gilemard are used in Iranian high-school textbooks.when they were residing in Paris called "sab'e group"
Edited sentence: Alavi was also a very close friend of Iran's famous writer Sadegh Hedayat, these two created a literary group.although his novel "her eyes" is considered his masterpiece, Alavi also wrote many other books which indeed are also perfect in their own style ; an example of this is the novel "chemdan" which was written under the influence of freudian psychology.he did return to tehran after the revolution but did not stay too long and decided to head back to Germany.his other novels "mirza", "53 nafar" and "gilemard" which is used in Iranian textbooks for high-school.when they were residing in paris called "sab'e group"