Original sentence: Kate Sheppard was born Catherine Wilson Malcolm in Liverpool, England to Scottish parents.Realising thats much of the support for temperance came from women, the Temperance Union gradually became active in advocating the cause of women's suffrage, an area in which Sheppard quickly became prominent
Edited sentence: Realising that much of the support for temperance came from women, the Temperance Union gradually became active in advocating the cause of women's suffrage, an area in which Sheppard quickly became prominent.Sheppard was born Catherine Wilson Malcolm in Liverpool, England to Scottish parents