Original sentence: E Degree from Manhattan College 1956 with honors.From 1974 to 1978, he served as a part-time lecturer in the Department of Electrical Engineering at Polytechnic Institute of New York.Hayes also worked as a professor at McGill University, in the Department of Electrical Engineering, where he served a professor from 1978 to 1984, and as adjunct professor from 1984 to present.Hayes also works as a professor at the University of Canterbury in Christchurch, New Zealand, where he was recognized as an Erskine Fellow in 1996.Hayes is an American professor of electrical engineering.Hayes later joined the University of Victoria as an adjunct professor from 2005 to present.Hayes received  his B.Hayes was an instructor in the Department of Electrical Engineering at UCB from 1962 to 1964, and returned as assistant professor in 1966.He graduated with a PhD from University of California, Berkeley with distinction in 1966; his Ph.He later received a M.He received the Canadian Award for Telecommunications Research in 1996.Jeremiah F
Edited sentence: E Degree from Manhattan College 1956 with honor, later he received a M.Furthermore, Hayes works as a professor at the University of Canterbury, Christchurch, NZ, where he was recognized as an Erskine Fellow in 1996.Hayes also worked as a professor at McGill University in Canada, in the Department of Electrical Engineering, where he served a professor from1978 to 1984, and as adjunct professor from 1984 to present.Hayes got his B.Hayes has abundance academic experiences, and he has served as professor in many institutes across the world.Hayes later jointed the University of Victoria as an adjunct professor from 2005 to present.Hayes served as instructor in the Department of Electrical Engineering at UCB from 1962 to 1964, and returned as assistant professor in 1966.Hayes' graduated at University of California, Berkeley qualified with distinction in 1966, his Ph.Jeremiah F Hayes received Canadian Award for Telecommunications Research in 1996.Then from 1974 to 1978, he served as a part-time lecturer in the Department of Electrical Engineering at Polytechnic Institute of New York