Original sentence: Justin sees Leila breaking up with with Gilly and takes the opportunity to ask her out, instead Leila turns him down saying the only reason he is asking her out is because he is shallow.Macki encourages Justin to distract the others in their class including Justin's step-brother Ali and his friend Nicole Owen.Over the years, Justin has experienced a lot of heartache including the deaths of sisters, Mel and Sophie Burton, step-brother, Ali and the love of his life, Becca
Edited sentence: Justin sees Leila breaking up with Gilly and takes the opportunity to ask her out, instead Leila turns him down saying the only reason he is asking her out is because he is shallow.Macki encourages Justin to distract the others in their class including Justin's stepbrother Ali and his friend Nicole Owen.Over the years, Justin has experienced a lot of heartache including the deaths of sisters, Mel and Sophie Burton, stepbrother, Ali and the love of his life, Becca