Original sentence: Dave Epstein would become one of the leaders of Nexgen, a company that helped AMD regain competitive footing against Intel.Instead of management having to coerce labor to work harder, labor volunteers to complete the project on-time.Instead of top-down management, many of the innovations are started at the grass-roots level.Many of the engineers state that "They don't work for the money", meaning they work for the challenge of inventing and creating.The book opens with a turf war between two computer design groups within Data General Corporation, a very successful minicomputer vendor in the 1970s.The book's portrayal of engineers avoids the stereotypes of either mindless drones or of propeller-heads working on James-Bondian gadgets
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