Original sentence: Crusher, However, her personality creates an interesting conflict with Lieutenant Commander Data, as she is wary of technology and he must prove his worth to her.Pulaski's appearance may have contributed to some fans' negative reaction to the episode.She is more businesslike and less friendly than Dr
Edited sentence: However, her personality creates an interesting conflict with Lieutenant Commander Data, as she is wary of technology and he must prove his worth to her.More businesslike and less friendly than Doctor Crusher, Pulaski was one of the series' least-liked characters among fans.Pulaski's appearance may have contributed to fans' negative reaction to the episode