Original sentence: Israel prefers the term disputed territories, claiming it comes closer to a neutral point of view; this viewpoint is not accepted by most other countries, which consider "occupied" to be the neutral term.It is currently controlled by Israel though much civil control over substantial areas was granted to the Palestinian Authority; together with the Gaza Strip it forms the Palestinian territories at the center of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.Some people, especially those who support Israeli settlement in and annexation of the territory, prefer the term Judea and Samaria, and the name Cisjordan is also used for the region in some languages (e.The West Bank is a territory in the Middle East constituting the area west of the Jordan River annexed by Jordan at the end of the 1948 Arab-Israeli War.The West Bank is inhabited by Arabs, Jews, and other ethnic groups (see Palestinians)
Edited sentence: Israel prefers the term disputed territories, claiming it comes closer to a neutral point of view; this viewpoint is not accepted by almost every other countries, which consider "occupied" to be the neutral term.It constitutes the area west of the Jordan River annexed by Jordan at the end of the 1948 Arab-Israeli War.It is currently mostly controlled by Israel though much civil control over substantial areas was granted to the Palestinian Authority.Some people, especially those who support Israeli settlement in and illegal (according to international law) annexation of the territory, prefer the term Judea and Samaria, and the name Cisjordan is also used for the region in some languages (e.The West Bank is a territory in the Middle East that, together with the Gaza Strip, forms the Palestinian territories at the center of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.The West Bank is inhabited mostly by Palestinians, though Jews and other ethnic groups live there