Original sentence: 3,000 delegates from the member states, observers and human rights organizations.It is composed of 53 member states and meets yearly in Geneva for its regular sessions with c.The Commission on Human Rights aims on examine, monitor and publicly report on human rights situations in specific countries or territories (known as country mechanisms or mandates) as well as on major phenomena of human rights violations worldwide (known as thematic mechanisms or mandates).The United Nations Commission on Human Rights (UNCHR) is an advisory body dedicated to advancing human rights.Website of the Commission on Human Rights.While in most democratic countries the work of the UNCHR and the UN High Commissoner for Human Rights, to whom the Commission advises, is seen as helpful for the worldwide human rights situation, critics, particular in the USA, charge that the UNCHR permits the world's worst human rights violators to be members of the commission and argue that by so doing they make a mockery of the cause of human rights
Edited sentence: Critics, particular those from democratic countries, charge that the UNCHR permits the world's worst human rights violators to be members of the commission and argue that by so doing they make a mockery of the cause of human rights.The United Nations Commission on Human Rights (UNCHR) is an advisory body avowedly dedicated to advancing human rights.They accuse the commission of having deteriorated into a charade whose primary function is to whitewash human rights atrocities by UN members.UN Human Rights Commission: Reporters Without Borders Status - US State Department