Original sentence: Although he is arguably one of the bestselling Danish authors, possibly second only to Hans Christian Andersen, his work is excluded from the collections of Danish public libraries,.Sven Hassel was the pen name of the Danish-born Børge Willy Redsted Pedersen (19 April 1917 – 21 September 2012) known primarily for his novels focusing on stories of German combatants during World War II
Edited sentence: Although he is arguably one of the bestselling Danish authors, possibly second only to Hans Christian Andersen, Danish public libraries,.Sven Hassel was the pen name of the Danish-born Børge Willy Redsted Pedersen (19 April 1917 – 21 September 2012) who wrote novels set during World War II