Original sentence: In addition to traditional core subjects, students can choose from a wide variety of Advanced Placement offerings for college credit, such as AP English Language and Composition, and AP American Studies, which combines APs for both English and History classes.Penfield offers numerous electives in arts, music, engineering, business and more.The foreign language department includes Spanish, French, German, and Latin, although Latin is likely to be discontinued soon
Edited sentence: Hardy, and AP American Studies, which combines APs for both English and History classes.In addition to traditional core subjects, students can choose from a wide variety of Advanced Placement offerings for college credit, such as AP English Language and Composition, taught by the distinguished teacher Mr.Penfield has numerous electives in arts, music, engineering, business and more.The foreign language department includes Spanish, French, German, and Latin, which is likely to be discontinued soon