Original sentence: (Sal was best friends with Jim when they attended Villanova University together, and later discovered Maury when he was teaching at Glassboro State College in New Jersey.) Sal, along with Tommy West and Terry Cashman, brought this duo together in the Cashman and West production office in New York City
Edited sentence: (Sal was best friends with Jim when they attended Villanova University together, and later "discovered" Maury when he was teaching at Glassboro State College in New Jersey.) Sal, along with Tommy West and Terry Cashman, brought this magical duo together in the Cashman and West production office in New York City