Original sentence: Alan Dilkes (Christopher Ettridge), Neville's father and a the local community policeman.Edith Figgis,  71-year-old cook, maintenance person, rock-and-roller and admirer of all things male.Neville Dilkes (Martin Freeman), a 28-year-old teenager and would-be cool dude who in fact still lives with his parents
Edited sentence: Alan Dilkes (Christopher Ettridge in series 1), Neville's father and a the local community policeman.Edith Figgis (Lill Roughley),  71-year-old cook, maintenance person, rock-and-roller and admirer of all things male.Neville Dilkes (Martin Freeman in series 1), a 28-year-old teenager and would-be cool dude who in fact still lives with his parents