Original sentence: Purchases are made which traditionally are associated with high return on investment and portfolio diversification.Spatial awareness is thought to play a key role as does ambient sound and music.The consumer's decision-making consciousness is enhanced by cognitive psychology and neuroadaptational evolutionary influences.The effect is marked by a slower walking pace and glazed eyes
Edited sentence: Spatial awareness of their surroundings play a key role, as does the surrounding sound and music.The Gruen transfer refers to the moment when a consumer enters a shopping mall, and, surrounded by an intentionally confusing layout, loses track their original intentions.The effect of the transfer is marked by a slower walking pace and glazed eyes