Original sentence: It was on his suggestion that the Dubliners work with London Irish band the Pogues in the mid 80’s thus giving them their biggest UK hit to date ("The Irish Rover") and an appearance on Top of the Pops
Edited sentence: Eamonn is also one of the best Music Producers in Ireland.It was on his suggestion that the Dubliners work with London Irish band the Pogues in the mid 80’s thus giving them their biggest UK Hit to date (The Irish Rover) and an appearance on Top Of the Pops