Original sentence: It features the band playing in a - presumably - underground venue when a dancing werewolf (whose dancing is reminiscent of Michael Jackson's) appears on stage.The music video contains some mockery of horror in general; instead of blood there is glitter and confetti and Karen O somehow keeps singing with her head separated from her body
Edited sentence: It features the band playing in a – presumably – underground venue when a dancing werewolf (whose dancing is reminiscent of Michael Jackson's) appears on stage.The music video contains some mockery of horror in general; instead of blood there is glitter and confetti and Karen O keeps singing with her head separated from her body