Original sentence: Biotherm originated from mineral water.Biotherm was acquired by L'Oreal in 1970.He applied for intellectual property rights on this discovery, and, in 1952, acquired the IP right and used it in skin care product.In the early of 19th century, a French biologist discovered that mineral water under Pyrenees mountain in the southern part of France has "Thermal Plankton", a key to beautifully healthy skin, a potent skin rejuvenator.The Bio comes from the profession of the founder; biologist.Thus, the therm in Biotherm's name comes from Thermal Plankton, an ingredient found in every Biotherm product
Edited sentence: An extension of Biotherm is BIOTHERM HOMME.Biotherm's pricing and market position is of a prestige skincare line.It's made by  L'Oréal.Its product line includes Source Therapie Superactiv Moisture Intense Guard (Aquasource Superserum in Europe and other parts of world); and Celluli-Peel.The company claims that men have thicker skin than women, and need differnet, more expensive, products