Original sentence: On 21 January 2005, during a silence in the Saxon state assembly in Dresden to mark the 60th anniversary of the liberation of the Nazi Auschwitz concentration camp, twelve members of the NPD walked out in protest.The NPD protested that a moment of silence was being held for those who died in the Auschwitz camp and that none was being given for those who died during the fire-bombing of Dresden in World War II, with the anniversary of both events falling relatively close to each other.This tactic is seen by opponents and the mainstream media as an attempt by the NPD to circumvent their marginal electoral status
Edited sentence: On 21 January 2005, during a silence in the Saxon state assembly in Dresden to mark the 60th anniversary of the liberation of the Nazi relocation camp at Auschwitz, twelve members of the NPD walked out in protest.The NPD protested that a moment of silence was being held for those who allegedly died in the Auschwitz camp and that none was being given for those who died during the fire-bombing of Dresden in World War II, with the anniversary of both events falling relatively close to each other.This tactic is seen by the anti-German groups as an attempt by the NPD to circumvent their marginal electoral status