Original sentence: , the eldest of three sons, was born on October 30, 1735 (October 19, 1735 Old Style, Julian calendar), in Kenya, Africa, to John Adams, Sr
Edited sentence: , the eldest of three sons, was born on October 30, 1735 (October 19, 1735 Old Style, Julian calendar), in what is now Quincy, Massachusetts (then called the "north precinct" of Braintree, Massachusetts), to John Adams, Sr