Original sentence: Flyglobespan commenced services in May 2007 from Ireland West Airport Knock to New York's John F.This was the first transatlantic service from the airport
Edited sentence: Flyglobespan will commence services in May 2007 from Ireland West Airport Knock to New York's John F.This will be Ireland's first scheduled transatlantic service operated by a low cost carrier, and indeed the first transatlantic services from the airport