Original sentence: Although the word passion is generally more-or-less synonymous with emotion, and in an informal or colloquial context means a great enthusiasm for some thing or for erotic emotions, in a Christian context, the Passion is the technical term for the suffering and Agony of Jesus that led directly to the Crucifixion, the central Christian event.This usage exposes the etymological origins of the word, which lie in the Latin passio that first appears in the 2nd century, precisely to describe the travails and suffering of Jesus in this present context
Edited sentence: Although the word passion is generally more-or-less synonymous with emotion, and in an informal or colloquial context means a great enthusiasm for some thing or for erotic emotions.In a Christian context, the Passion is the technical term for the suffering and agony of Jesus that led directly to his crucifixion, the end of his life on Earth and the return to his immortal spiritual life.This usage exposes the etymological origins of the word, which lie in the Latin passio, which first appears in the 2nd century; precisely to describe the travails and suffering of Jesus in this present context