Original sentence: Fransisco Aupa Indongo (born January 15 1936), is a Namibian businessman and former politician.He is the father-in-law of lawyer Sisa Namandje and banker Wosman Hamukonda.Indongo owns a large number of properties across Namibia, including locations in Swakopmund, Tsumeb, Walvis Bay, Otjiwarongo and Windhoek as well as holdings in the sugar and fishing industries
Edited sentence: Fransisco Aupa Indongo (born January 15 1936), is a prominent Namibian businessman and former politician.He is a very well known successful entrepreneur.He is the father-in-law of prominent lawyer Sisa Namandje and prominent banker Wosman Hamukonda.Indongo owns a large number of properties across Namibia, including prominent locations in Swakopmund, Tsumeb, Walvis Bay, Otjiwarongo and Windhoek as well as holdings in the sugar and fishing industries