Original sentence: This is perhaps a new frontier for naivety when it comes to aspiring rock/indie/pop/bands, it may prove best to clear the air with a nose-dive and (hopefully) build from the foundations upwards
Edited sentence: This is perhaps a new frontier of naivety when it comes to aspiring rock/indie/pop/bands, it may prove best to clear the air with a nose-dive and (hopefully) build from the foundations upwards