Original sentence: " Briere argues that when the culture moves from accepting “lower-level violence,” of children, to making it intolerable, we will see changes within the victimization and police protection of children.According to Hosin (2007), "a considerable number of traumatized abused children do not gain access to protective child protection strategies.Resources for child protection are sometimes restricted
Edited sentence: According to Hosin (2007), “a considerable number of traumatized abused children do not gain access to protective child protection strategies.Children are considered disposable among society and can be easily targeted as victims.Each case involving children as victims should have a higher priority in order to prevent victimization.Increased protection, regard for the child’s wellbeing, and increased resources will help lower the victimization of children.Resources are often restricted and the children in need go without.Taking away the accessibility of a child as a victim will increase the risk the abuser getting caught for their crime.The lack of support in the protection of children is partly to blame.Until children are recognized as valuable members of our society, they will continue to be targeted.”  When our culture moves from accepting “lower-level violence,” of children, to making it intolerable, we will see changes within the victimization and police protection of children