Original sentence: Like its patients, its sales people drive millions of miles a year as they visit doctors' offices.That has meant trying to prevent problems from happening, rather than just responding to one.The clean up GlaxoSmithKline has had environmental impact and has motivated the company to try to protect its reputation as an environmental leader.The company has begun to ponder whether it can sell drugs and communicate with physicians in more efficient ways this is another example of GlaxoSmithKline seeking ways to better our environment.These days, for example, a team of scientists assesses the "total lifecycle impact" of each drug that GlaxoSmithKline produces.They measure everything from waste produced during manufacturing to the amount of residual chemicals that patients who take the drugs excrete
Edited sentence: Eutophication causes the oxygen to be reduced and it kills other organisms in the water.GlaxoSmithKline has been polluting our wayers with nitrates.GlaxoSmithKline has many factories around the world.GlaxoSmithKline is not a safe place for workers or the environment with new technology it has it has proof that the dangerous chemicals it uses are let out into the environment and they have also been found in human tissue.In September of 1992 the Ulverston factory dumped chemical waster into the river Leven without permission.The factory in Ulverston alone made up 10% of the nations caricinogens being emitted in 2001.The factory in Ulverston is labeled by its use of deadly carcinogenic emissions and by environmental regulations that they violate.Ulverston again in May of 1994 did the same thing without permission.With the mass amount of nitrates used in the chemicals that GlaxoSmithKline uses the waste is dumped into rivers that causes eutrophication.You are required by law to aware authorties that you are dumping waste 24 hours before it is dumped but the company did not say anything to them until 6 days after it was dumped