Original sentence: 1907 the first poured concrete building in the world, now the Robert Gordon School, was built in Roselle Park using Thomas Edison's revolutionary process.Eddie Cantor made regular appearances on Marconi's radio station WDY.First known settlement within what is now the Borough was by Samuel Williams, in 1700.Galloping Hill Road was continually used by revolutionary war scouts, delivering messages to and from General George Washington and Governor Livingston.The first store in the world to be lit by electric light was Stone's Store on Westfield Avenue, lit by Thomas Edison's carbon filament prototype
Edited sentence: 1907 the first poured concrete building in the world, now modern day Robert Gordon School, is built in Roselle Park using Thomas Edison's revolutionary process.First known settlement within what is now our Borough was by Samuel Williams, in 1700.First store in the world to lit by electric light was Stone's Store on Westfield Avenue, lit by Thomas Edison's carbon filament prototype.Galloping Hill Road was continually used by revolutionary war scouts, delivering messages to/from General George Washington and Governor Livingston.Home to a significant number of soldiers in World War I, World War II, Korea, and Vietnam.Major star Eddie Cantor made regular appearances on Marconi's radio station WDY