Original sentence: " This angered many blacks in the United States, prompting many black leaders to demand an apology from Fox.Al Sharpton requested a formal apology from Fox to the black community and called for an economic boycott of Mexican products until an apology was received; he and many blacks felt that Fox's comments were insensitive and racist.Jesse Jackson, during a news conference concerning Fox's statement about blacks, said that he felt that the comments were, "unwitting, unnecessary and inappropriate" and added that "[Fox's] statement had the impact of being inciting and divisive
Edited sentence: " This angered many African-Americans in the United States, prompting many black leaders to demand an apology from Fox.The Reverend Al Sharpton requested a formal apology from Fox to the African-American community and called for an economic boycott of Mexican products until an apology was received; he and many African-Americans felt that Fox's comments were insensitive and racist.The Reverend Jesse Jackson, during a news conference concerning Fox's statement about African-Americans, said that he felt that the comments were, "unwitting, unnecessary and inappropriate" and added that "[Fox's] statement had the impact of being inciting and divisive