Original sentence: It is often considered to be an excellent mix of the rawness of Shame and the polished, produced sound of Interiors.Recorded in roughly 20 days, with many tracks taken from in-studio jam sessions, Shame is an eclectic mix of styles and a raw, vital recording.The distinctive vocals of Shawn Smith (also a member of Pigeonhed and Satchel) are a major factor in this sound.The single from Interiors, "The Day Brings", is song featuring Shawn Smith on piano and Mike McCready of Pearl Jam on lead guitar
Edited sentence: It would prove to be an excellent mix of the rawness of Shame and the polished, produced sound of Interiors.Recorded in roughly 20 days, with many tracks taken from in-studio jam sessions, Shame is an eclectic mix of styles and quite a raw, vital recording.The powerful and soulful vocals of Shawn Smith (also a member of Pigeonhed and Satchel) are a major factor in this sound.The single from Interiors, "The Day Brings", is a beautiful song featuring Shawn Smith on piano and Mike McCready of Pearl Jam on lead guitar