Original sentence: The marching band is one of the best known extra-curricular activities at West Charlotte.West Charlotte is known throughout the Charlotte area for its athletic programs
Edited sentence: The Mighty Lions football team has not missed a showing at the North Carolina state playoffs in over three decades, the track team averages one athlete at the nationals every year, and the marching band is one of the best known extra-curricular activities at West Charlotte.The athletics at the school are exceptional