Original sentence: Despite New South Wales' dramatic 16-14 loss to Queensland.Gallen is now rated among the top players  in the NRL at present with his high workrate and powerful runs
Edited sentence: Despite New South Wales' dramatic 16-14 loss to Queensland, Gallen didn't look out of place and has been highly considered by selectors for the 2007 series.Gallen is now rated among the top players in the NRL at present with his high workrate and powerful runs