Original sentence: Among them Thomas W.Bethesda is an urbanized, but unincorporated, area in southern Montgomery County, Maryland, near Washington, D.Bethesda's primary public high schools were ranked by Newsweek Magazine in 2006 as among the best in the country.Bethesda-Chevy Chase High School was ranked 34th nationally, Walter Johnson High School ranked 101st and Walt Whitman High School was ranked 116th.Pyle Middle School
Edited sentence: Among them are North Bethesda Middle School Bethesda's primary public high schools were ranked by Newsweek Magazine in 2006 as among the best in the country.Bethesda is an urbanized, awesome, but unincorporated, area in southern Montgomery County, Maryland, near Washington, D.Bethesda-Chevy Chase High School was ranked 34th nationally, Walter Johnson High School ranked 1st and Walt Whitman High School was ranked 116th