Original sentence: After choreographing music videos for Janet Jackson, Abdul became a choreographer at the height of the music video era and soon thereafter she was signed to Virgin Records.Her debut studio album Forever Your Girl (1988) became the successful debut album at that time, selling 7 million copies in the United States and setting a record for the most number-one singles from a debut album on the Billboard Hot 100 chart: "Straight Up", "Forever Your Girl", "Cold Hearted", and "Opposites Attract"
Edited sentence: After choreographing music videos for Janet Jackson, Abdul became a highly respected choreographer at the height of the music video era and soon thereafter she was signed to Virgin Records.Her debut studio album Forever Your Girl (1988) became the most successful debut album in history at that time, selling 7 million copies in the United States and setting a record for the most number-one singles from a debut album on the Billboard Hot 100 chart: "Straight Up", "Forever Your Girl", "Cold Hearted", and "Opposites Attract"