Original sentence: He has called upon supporters of John Tasini-Hillary Clinton's anti-war opponent in the Democratic primary-to vote for him in the general election, should Tasini lose his primary challenge
Edited sentence: Hawkins has had no success attracting progressive Democratic votes in his numerous prior campaigns, largely due to his open hostility towards their efforts.He has called upon supporters of John Tasini-Hillary Clinton's anti-war opponent in the Democratic primary-to vote for him in the general election.However, Hawkins' regular attacks upon progressive Democrats for harming the peace movement, as evidenced in his campaign website's citation of the recent Joshua Frank article "How Jonathan Tasini Helped Hillary Clinton and Distracted the Antiwar Movement" () have led to accusations of insincerity and opportunism