Original sentence: In this period, the Imperial Japanese Army often discriminated, tortured, plundered, raped, summary executed and mass murdered millions of Koreans without a valid reason; major cultural genocides and war crimes done by the Japanese include forced labour and military conscription of Korean men for Imperial Japan, forced sex slavery and kidnapping of young Korean girls and women for the Japanese army, human experiments on live Koreans, burying of live Koreans, burning down of Korean villages, censorship of media and banning of the Korean language and religions, unfair confiscation of land, food and cultural assets, forced name changes and Imperial education, which lead to a strong rise in anti-Japanese sentiment and Korean nationalism, still strongly persistent to this date in both South Korea and North Korea
Edited sentence: "comfort women", human experiments on live Koreans, burying of live Koreans, burning down of Korean villages, censorship of media and banning of Korean language newspapers and Korean traditional religions , confiscation of land, food and cultural assets, forced name changes and denial of Korean history in education, which led to a strong rise in anti-Japanese sentiment and Korean nationalism, still strongly persistent to this date in both South Korea and North Korea.In this period, major war crimes attributed to the Japanese Empire against Korea include forced labour, forced sex slavery with the kidnapping of young Korean girls and women for the Imperial Japanese Army (i