Original sentence: " It explains how Belly believes the war in Iraq shouldn't have occurred.At the end of the song, a paragraph appears stating different things about billions of wasted dollars.It has already peaked at 45 on the Billboard Canadian Hot 100 chart.It is a protest song against the US government
Edited sentence: " It deeply explains how the war in Iraq shouldn't have occurred.At the end of the song, a paragraph appears.Belly seems intent on highlighting a different side of his talents here, and in that regard the song and its video succeed.But in the larger context of his career so far, it is suspicious watching a rapper who has made a name for himself indulging the excesses of capitalist society (materialism, wealth, womanizing) suddenly grow a conscience and speak up for the world’s impoverished.It has already peaked at 45 on Billboards Canadian Hot 100 chart.It presents a bit of a conflict of values.Many different things about billions of wasted dollars are stated.The statement above expresses an opinion and should be stated as such, as it is seemingly unfounded and more suited to a discussion rather than a biography.This explains that it is a protest song against the US government