Original sentence: Michael Scott was married three times, and died at the age of 80 in 1959
Edited sentence: He attended Winchester College.In 1918, he was invested as an Officer of the Order of the British Empire.Michael Scott was married three times, had at least one daughter, and died at the age of 80 in 1959.Scott fought in World War I, and was decorated with the Order of Aviz of Portugal and the Order of the Black Star of France