Original sentence: After a few days without air strikes, on May 4 a flight of three Sea Harriers armed with cluster bombs raided Goose Green.Examination of the wreckage of ZX450 yielded the panel for the launch of Sea Eagle missiles, it has been suggested that the Argentines concluded that Sea Eagle had been made operational and this was another factor that kept the Argentine navy in port.However this time potential targets were well camouflaged, and the air base had been put under a 24-hours full alert.However, behind the lead was Sea Harrier XZ450 piloted by Lt Nick Taylor, this particular aircraft lacked a Radar Warning Receiver (RWR) as it had been removed before the war to fit instrumentation for a new missile, Sea Eagle, that was undergoing trials.The 35 mm cannons were relocated to the north and south of the small Goose Green peninsular from their original position west of the airstrip.The crash was caught on the gun camera film, of Flt Lt Ted Ball, which showed a large explosion in the region of the fuselage that was clearly unsurvivable.The third aircraft, piloted by Flt Lt Ted Ball, released its bombs but no targets were hit and returned back to Hermes.XZ450's fuselage was hit and caught fire, losing the left wing in the process, it then cartwheeled in the air and crashed at a 10º angle
Edited sentence: 2nd Lieutenant Claudio Braghini relocated the 35 mm cannons to the north and south of the small Goose Green peninsular from their original position that was west of the airstrip.After a few days without air strikes, an attack three Sea Harriers armed with cluster bombs raided Goose Green again on May 4.His plane's fuselage was hit and caught fire, losing the left wing in the process, it then cartwheeled in the air and crashed at a 10º angle.However this time their potential targets were well camouflaged, and the air base had been put under a 24-hours full alert.However, behind the lead was Sea Harrier XZ450 piloted by Lt Nick Taylor, this particular aircraft lacked a Radar Warning Receiver (RWR) as it had been removed before the war to fit instrumentation for a new missile, the Sea Eagle, that the British were trialling.The third aircraft, piloted by Flt Lt Ted Ball, dropped its bombs without hitting any targets and returned back to Hermes