Original sentence: Cedric Edwin Peerman is the crappiest football player to ever even try to play because he never gets more than negative 40 yards last seasonfootball player for the Baltimore Ravens.Peerman was selected because he lied about his crappy stats and said that he is actually good when everyone knows all he does is fumblehttp://www.com/ratings/dsprofile.pyid=57134&draftyear=2009&genpos=RB Cedric Peerman - Virginia, RB], NFL Draft Scout, retrieved 22 January 2009
Edited sentence: Cedric Edwin Peerman is an American professional football player for the Baltimore Ravens.NFL Draft Scout had rated him 14th out of 176 prospective running backs for the 2009 NFL Draft.Peerman was selected in the sixth round of the 2009 NFL Draft by the Baltimore Ravens as the 185th overall pick