Original sentence: It was made by 20th Century Fox who also produced McDowall's next film How Green Was My Valley (1941), where he met and became lifelong friends with actress Maureen O'Hara.McDowall's American career began with a part in the 1941 thriller Man Hunt, directed by Fritz Lang.The film won the Academy Award for Best Picture, and McDowell's role as Huw Morgan made him a household name
Edited sentence: It was made by 20th Century Fox who also produced McDowall's next film, the one that really established his reputation: playing Huw Morgan in How Green Was My Valley (1941), where he met and became lifelong friends with Maureen O'Hara.McDowall's American career began well with a good part in a thriller directed by Fritz Lang, Man Hunt (1941).The film won the Academy Award for Best Picture, and made him a household name