Original sentence: After moving to California, he was put under contract by Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer, who showcased him in films such as Home from the Hill, All the Fine Young Cannibals, Light in the Piazza and Two Weeks in Another Town.His elder half-brother, William Potter, became an interior decorator for such prestige firms as Eva Gabor Interiors in Palm Springs where Hamilton also owned a home a few streets away from Elvis Presley and his manager Colonel Tom Parker, who became his good friend
Edited sentence: After moving to California, he was put under contract by Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer, which showcased him in films such as Home from the Hill, All the Fine Young Cannibals, Light in the Piazza and Two Weeks in Another Town.His elder half-brother, William Potter, became an interior decorator for such prestige firms as Eva Gabor Interiors in Palm Springs, where Hamilton owned a home a few blocks away from Elvis Presley and his manager Colonel Tom Parker, who became his good friend