Original sentence: Before that he was a counterterrorism adviser to prime ministers Yitzhak Shamir and Yitzhak Rabin from 1988-93, and the acting head of the Civil Administration in Judea and Samaria and its adviser on Arab affairs from 1977-82.Carmon served as a colonel in IDF Intelligence from 1968-88.MEMRI has been criticized primarily for its choice of the content it selects for translation.MEMRI's has a vast and highly trained staff  which, according to Carmon includes "people of the Jewish, Christian and Muslim faiths [who] hold a range of political views".Prior to founding MEMRI, Carmon was a delegate to Israeli peace negotiations with Syria in Madrid and Washington in 1991-92.She was one of the contributors to the 1996  Clean Break document
Edited sentence: Carmon's career prior to founding MEMRI was summarized by the Jerusalem Post: "Carmon served as a colonel in IDF Intelligence from 1968-88; as acting head of the Civil Administration in Judea and Samaria and its adviser on Arab affairs from 1977-82; as counterterrorism adviser to prime ministers Yitzhak Shamir and Yitzhak Rabin from 1988-93; and as a delegate to Israeli peace negotiations with Syria in Madrid and Washington in 1991-92".MEMRI's has a "vast and highly trained staff" which, according to Carmon includes "people of the Jewish, Christian and Muslim faiths [who] hold a range of political views".She is probably best-known as "one of the authors of the now-infamous  Clean Break document which proposed reshaping Israel's 'strategic environment' in the Middle East, starting with the overthrow of Saddam Hussein".Translation Inaccuracy