Original sentence: At the 2000 MTV VMAs, bass player Tim Commerford climbed to the top of the stage set and nearly brought the left stage down, it was in protest of the fact that Limp Bizkit's [Break Stuff]] won Best Rock Video instead of Rage Against the Machine's "Sleep Now in the Fire"
Edited sentence: At the 2000 MTV VMAs, bass player Tim Commerford climbed to the top of the stage set and nearly brought the left stage down, it was in protest of the fact that Limp Bizkit, whose video was merely other celebrities lip-synching the words to the song "Break Stuff" in front of the band performing, won Best Rock Video instead of Rage Against the Machine's "Sleep Now in the Fire"