Original sentence: A month later, in October of 2003 at the first Bloggercon weblogger conference, organized by Winer and friends at Harvard, CDs of Lydon's interviews were distributed as an example of high-quality mp3 content; Bob Doyle demonstrated the portable studio he helped Lydon develop; Harold Gilchrist presented a history of audioblogging, including Curry's early role, and Kevin Marks demonstrated a script to download RSS enclosures and pass them to iTunes for transfer to an iPod.After the conference, Curry offered his blog readers an RSStoiPod script that moved mp3 files from   Userland Radio to iTunes, and encouraged other developers to build on the idea
Edited sentence: A month later, in October of 2003 at the first Bloggercon weblogger conference, organized by Winer and friends at Harvard, CDs of Lydon's interviews were distributed as an example of high-quality mp3 content; Bob Doyle demonstrated the portable studio he helped Lydon develop; Harold Gilchrist presented a history of audioblogging, including Adam Curry's early role, and Kevin Marks demonstrated a script to download RSS enclosures and pass them to iTunes for transfer to an iPod.After the conference, Curry genorously offered his blog readers an RSStoiPod script that moved mp3 files from   Userland Radio to iTunes, and encouraged other developers to build on the idea.This whole article was a lie, Adam Curry did EVERYTHING