Original sentence: By the late 1990's, Elgindy had gained an Internet following as a stock picker, and sold stock tips for $600 a month to online subscribers.Concurrently, Elgindy defrauded an insurance company by collecting disability benefits while working at Texas brokerage offices from 1994-1995.His picks featured short selling stocks of companies that he purported to have negative information about, especially concerning company officials and pending SEC investigations
Edited sentence: At the same time though, Elgindy defrauded an insurance company by collecting disability benefits while working at Texas brokerage offices from 1994-1995.By the late 1990's, Elgindy had gained a loyal Internet following as a stock picker, and sold stock tips for $600 a month to online subscribers.His picks mostly emphasized short selling stocks of companies that he purported to have negative information about, especially concerning company officials and pending SEC investigations