Original sentence: It is the most easy garter snake to tame even a wild one can become tame in a few days when handeled carefuly.Marcy, who lead surveying expeditions to the frontier areas in the mid 19th century.They will rarely bite, instead they release a smelly liquid onto your body
Edited sentence: It is the most easy garter snake to tame; even a wild one can become tame in a few days when handled carefully.Marcy, who led surveying expeditions to the frontier areas in the mid 19th century.They will rarely bite; instead they release a smelly liquid onto your body