Original sentence: The Southeastern Rugby Club, which includes members from both Fishers High School and Hamilton Southeastern High School, won the Division II State title in 2008 with a 12-2 record.Throughout the main season, they were never scored on at home, and they went undefeated against other Division II teams
Edited sentence: In their playoff run, the Royals shut out all opponents and outscored them 82-0.The Southeastern Rugby Club, which includes members from both Fishers High School and Hamilton Southeastern High School, won the Division II State title in 2008 with an amazing 12-2 record.Throughout the entire main season, they were never scored on at home, and they were undefeated against other Division II teams