Original sentence: Ginger and Bill Warbis own the "Fornits' Home for Wayword Web Fora", where they host a rather critical message board for HLA alumni
Edited sentence: Ginger and Bill Warbis own the "Fornits' Home for Wayword Web Fora", where they host an extremely negative message board for HLA alumni where anyone who supports the school is harassed and cursed in a very immature manner