Original sentence: Angered that Tony Stark and others used his DNA to create a Thor clone, Thor accepts an offer by Stark for Asgard to be considered a foreign embassy, with diplomatic immunity granted to its inhabitants.Thor rebuilds Asgard in Oklahoma (paying for the land with Asgardian treasure)  and learns of the events of the Civil War
Edited sentence: Thor accepts an offer by Stark for Asgard to be considered a foreign embassy, with diplomatic immunity granted to its inhabitants.Thor rebuilds Asgard in Oklahoma (paying for the land with Asgardian treasure)  and learns of the events of the Civil War and is angered that Tony Stark and others used his DNA to create a Thor clone