Original sentence: He died in a San Francisco Bay Area convalescent hospital on the day that the U.He was assisted in the succeeding years by a number of able associates including, but not limited to, Bill Heidrick, Ebony Anpu, Patrick King, Alan Cabal, Jerry Cornelius, Lola de Wolfe, James Graeb, Chandria, and Rusty Sporer (in the S.bay region), Lon Milo DuQuette and James Eshelman (southern California), Kris Dowling and James Wasserman (New York), David Rietti (England), and Legradic Oliver (Yugoslavia).had more than seven hundred members in several different countries.has grown to some four thousand members in more than twenty-five countries
Edited sentence: McMurthy died in a San Francisco Bay Area convalescent hospital on the day that the U.claimed to have more than seven hundred members in several different countries.has allegedly grown to some four thousand members in more than twenty-five countries