Original sentence: 1889-1961) was a vaudeville actor in the 1910s who was the inspiration for the movie For Me and My Gal.Army right before him and Hayden were going to play at The Palace in New York City.In September 1917, Jo Hayden's good friend Danny Metcalf who was supposed to become a doctor and finish medical school was drafted into the U.Palmer and Hayden returned to vaudeville in 1919 and also got married that year however did not do many shows anymore.Palmer tried enlisting, but all armed forces would not except him
Edited sentence: 1889-1962) was a vaudeville actor in the 1910s who was the inspiration for the movie For Me and My Gal.Army shortly before he and Hayden were going to play at The Palace in New York City.In September 1917, Hayden's good friend Danny Metcalf who was supposed to finish medical school was drafted into the U.Palmer and Hayden returned to vaudeville in 1919 and also got married that year however did not do many shows afterward.Palmer tried enlisting, but all armed forces would not accept him