Original sentence: An important fact is that the occupation forces included German punitive bataillon, the famous 999 units, in this case the 999th Light Afrika Division (Wehrmacht) and its Afrika Schützen Regiment 963 (later Festungs Infanterie Bataillon 999).It had 74 villages, three of them inhabited by Turkish Muslims.The hillsides afford pasture for sheep, and Lemnos has a strong husbandry tradition, being famous for its Kalathaki Limnou (PDO), a cheese made from sheep and goat milk and melipasto cheese, and for its yogurt.The main crops are wheat, barley, sesame; in fact Lemnos was Constantinople's granary after the Byzantine Empire lost its Anatolian possessions in the 1320s.Troops intended for Gallipoli had to train in Egypt, and the port found it difficult to cope with casualties of the Gallipoli campaign
Edited sentence: An important fact is that the occupation forces included German punitive bataillon, the famous 999 units, in this case the 999th Light Afrika Division (Wehrmacht)  and its Afrika Schützen Regiment 963 (later Festungs Infanterie Bataillon 999).It had 74 villages, three of them  inhabited by Turkish Muslims.The hillsides afford pasture for sheep, and Lemnos has a strong husbandry tradition, being famous for its Kalathaki Limnou  (PDO), a cheese made from sheep and goat milk and melipasto cheese, and for its yogurt.The main crops are wheat, barley, sesame; in fact Lemnos was Constantinople's granary after the  Byzantine Empire lost its Anatolian possessions in the 1320s.Troops intended for Gallipoli had to train in Egypt, and the port found it difficult to cope with casualties of the ill-starred Gallipoli campaign