Original sentence: --Styrous® 18:54, 4 August 2009 (UTC).Jingletown is the thriving center of an arts community adjacent to the Oakland Estuary and part of the area called Fruitvale (formerly, Brays and Fruit Vale)  in south Oakland.. There are a large number of residential artists living in the converted lofts that are situated between the Park and the Fruitvale street bridges along the estuary that separates Oakland from the island of Alameda
Edited sentence: Jingletown is a neighborhood in the San Antonio district of Oakland, California.Jingletown is a thriving art community adjacent to the Oakland Estuary and part of the area called Fruitvale (formerly, Brays and Fruit Vale)  in south Oakland.There are a large number of residential artists living in the converted lofts that are situated between the Park and the Fruitvale street bridges along the estuary that separates Oakland from the island of Alameda