Original sentence: Gaiman's first full-length children's novel since the bestselling and widely acclaimed Coraline, The Graveyard Book won the 2009 Newbery Award and the 2009 Locus Award for best YA novel, and was shortlisted for both the Hugo Award and World Fantasy Award
Edited sentence: Gaiman's first full-length children's novel since the bestselling and widely acclaimed Coraline, The Graveyard Book won the 2009 Newbery Award and the 2009 Locus Award for best YA novel, and was shortlisted for the Hugo, World Fantasy, and Locus Award Awards.The Graveyard Book at Worlds Without End