Original sentence: Other bands, most notably Suicidal Tendencies (from Los Angeles), and DRI (from Austin, Texas), played music similar to that of Stormtroopers of Death, eventually resulting in it being dubbed Crossover.Though it bore similarities to Thrash metal, such as a characteristic bass-heavy guitar sound, and fast tempos and chord changes, the album was distinguished from Thrash metal in its lack of guitar solos and heavy use of crunchy chord breakdowns (a New York hardcore technique) known as "mosh parts"
Edited sentence: Its right-wing politics, although not serious, were controversial.Other bands, most notably Suicidal Tendencies (from Los Angeles), and DRI (from Austin, Texas -- formerly considered among the fastest and most uncompromising of thrash bands), played music similar to that of Stormtroopers of Death, eventually resulting in it being dubbed Crossover.Though it bore similarities to Thrash metal, such as a characteristic bass-heavy guitar sound, and fast tempos and chord changes, the album was distinguished from Thrash metal from its lack of guitar solos and heavy use of crunchy chord breakdowns (a New York hardcore technique) known as "mosh parts"