Original sentence: She is also writing her memoirs for publishing, Smokey Robinson owns his own food corporation, Smokey Robinson Foods and continues to tour and record as a solo artist
Edited sentence: He continued to do so for another 36 years, before he finally retired in 2008.His wife of many years, Sylvia, died in 2004.She is also writing her memoirs for publishing,Marv Tarplin,after leaving the group, contunued to write songs, tour,and record with Smokey.Smokey Robinson owns his own food corporation, Smokey Robinson Foods and continues to tour and record as a solo artist