Original sentence: Before the competition, his height and weight were recorded as 6'3" and 200 lbs.In 2006, Paul participated in the Japanese televised obstacle course Sasuke, currently syndicated in the United States as Ninja Warrior on the G4 network.Terek surpassed most of the other competitors but ultimately failed on the 3rd-stage obstacle, the Cliff Hanger, which requires traversal over a water pit with only small fingerholds to keep the competitor from the water
Edited sentence: Paul participated on the Japanese show Sasuke, currently airing as Ninja Warrior on the G4 Network.Terek did well, but ultimately failed on the 3rd-stage obstacle, the Cliffhanger, where one needs to traverse a water pit with only small fingerholds keeping the competitor from the water