Original sentence: In Who Stole Feminism, and the War on Boys, Hoff Sommers examines what she describes as shoddy research and academic dishonesty in a number of important feminist works (see feminism), including those by Carol Gilligan, Naomi Wolf, among others
Edited sentence: In “Who Stole Feminism”, and the “War on Boys”, Hoff Sommers exposes shoddy research and academic dishonesty in a number of important feminist works (see feminism), including those by Carol Gilligan, Naomi Wolf, among others