Original sentence: Edward Behr (food specialist who became famous by authoring The Artful Eating) wrote that "the combination of cultural and aesthetic illiteracy, rigid Marxist-Leninist orthodoxy and an innate taste for gigantism was… devastating "  for the architecture of the edifice
Edited sentence: Edward Behr (sensation journalist of russian origin whose aristocratic parents narrowly escaped from the 1917 revolution) wrote (among other errors) that "the combination of cultural and aesthetic illiteracy, rigid Marxist-Leninist orthodoxy and an innate taste for gigantism was… devastating "  for the architecture of the edifice