Original sentence: A redevelopment at a cost of AU$23.6 million was completed in 2005.Australian rules football has been played at York Park since 1923, and other sports such as cricket, tennis, bowling, cycling and foot-racing have all since been staged.Long before the upgrade, York Park hosted major events such as an Ike & Tina Turner concert and a Billy Graham religious revival meeting.Since then, it has hosted two Crusty Demons performances as well as an Elton John concert in November 2007
Edited sentence: Australian rules football has been played at York Park since 1923, and other sports such as cricket, tennis, bowling, cycling and foot-racing have been staged.Throughout its history, York Park has hosted major pop concerts and other entertainments A redevelopment at a cost of AU$23.6 million was completed in 2005