Original sentence: He also fortified in 1624 Lima against pirate attacks, included Jacques l'Hermite, also known as Jacques l'Hermite, a Dutch merchant, explorer and admiral known for his journey around the globe with the Nassau Fleet (1623–1626) and for his blockade and raid on Callao in 1624 during that same voyage in which he also died.In 1629, Viceroy Diego Fernández de Córdoba gave up his charge and returned to Spain, where he died the following year, aged  52
Edited sentence: 1582 – June 2, 1624), also known as Jacques l'Hermite, a Dutch merchant, explorer and admiral known for his journey around the globe with the Nassau Fleet, (1623–1626) and for his blockade and raid on Callao in 1624 during that same voyage in which he also died.He also fortified in 1624 Lima against pirate attacks, included Jacques l'Hermite, a.In 1629, Viceroy Diego Fernández de Córdoba y López de las Roelas gave up his charge and returned to Spain, where he died the following year, aged only 52.Jacques de Clerck,  (c