Original sentence: In 2004, about 60 percent of people with AIDS live in Africa, mostly heterosexual women and men.In The United states and Europe, AIDS remains confined to the orignal risk groups of men who have sex with men, and intravenous drug users
Edited sentence: By the 1990s the syndrome had become a global pandemic and in 2004, 58 percent of those with AIDS were women.While in industrialized nations the highest numbers of infection occur when men have sex with men, in African populations, and in the developing world most victims are heterosexual women and men, and children