Original sentence: A film about Weberman, entitled The Ballad of AJ Weberman  won the Raindance Award at the British Independent Film Awards (BIFAs).He also did research for a book by Peter Lance  on an al-Qaeda triple agent who penetrated the FBI and CIA
Edited sentence: A film about Weberman, entitled The Ballad of AJ Weberman won the Raindance Award at theBritish Independent Film Awards (BIFAs).He also did research for a book by Peter Lance on an al-Qaeda triple agent who penetrated the FBI and CIA