Original sentence: He continued working in the recording industry as a vocalist throughout the 1970's, featured on albums by Ted Nugent ( Nugent by Nugent), Alan Clarke former lead singer of the Hollies, Billy Thorpe (Children of The Sun), Carmine Appice/Rick Derringer (Doctors of the Universe), Peter Noone (Herman of Herman's Hermits), The Orchids,  The Runaways, Staying Alive soundtrack album (platinum selling status), and Rand Bishop and the Underdogs
Edited sentence: He continued working in the recording industry as a vocalist throughout the 1970s, featured on albums by Ted Nugent ( Nugent by Nugent), Alan Clarke former lead singer of the Hollies, Billy Thorpe (Children of The Sun), Carmine Appice/Rick Derringer (Doctors of the Universe), Peter Noone (Herman of Herman's Hermits), The Orchids,  The Runaways, Staying Alive soundtrack album (platinum selling status), and Rand Bishop and the Underdogs