Original sentence: Ganon manipulates the course of events across the game to lead Link to take the Master Sword from its undersea resting place, releasing his power and to lure Link to him in order to steal both Link and Zelda's respective Triforce pieces to put the Triforce back together again and bring Hyrule to the surface, becoming its complete ruler (when called upon by the King of Hyrule, the Triforce ultimately separated and left its former hosts, including Ganondorf).Ganon reveals to Link that he grew up in a harsh environment; where the wind was a destructive force that brought only death, while the wind in Hyrule was life-giving.Ganon then turns into stone, and his body stays as Hyrule is flooded with water.Link and Princess Zelda retaliate with force, eventually defeating Ganondorf by impaling his head with the Master Sword, despite his impressive sword skills
Edited sentence: Before uniting the Triforce, Ganondorf reveals to Link that he grew up in a harsh environment; where the wind was a destructive force that brought only death, while the wind in Hyrule was life-giving.Ganondorf then turns into stone, and his body stays as Hyrule is flooded with water.Ganondorf's plan is foiled however, as the King of Hyrule manages to touch the Triforce before he does.He then kidnaps Princess Zelda to lure Link to his tower, where he hopes to steal both Link and Zelda's respective Triforce pieces in order to put the Triforce back together and bring Hyrule to the surface, becoming its ruler.Taking place after the events of Ocarina of Time, The Wind Waker features an older-looking and more cunning Ganondorf.They retaliate with force, eventually defeating the him by impaling his head with the Master Sword, despite his impressive sword skills.Throughout the game, he manipulates events, leading Link to draw the Master Sword from its undersea resting resting-place, thereupon releasing his sealed power.Upon realizing this, Ganondorf challenges Link and Zelda to a final duel