Original sentence: The Edge had also gotten a new program director, ushering in a substantial change in the station's programming, going from playing "harder" music, like Slipknot, Korn, and Five Finger Death Punch to contemporary pop artists like Coldplay, Three Doors Down and many 90's acts, such as Bush and The Toadies.The changes also proved controversial due to the loss of local DJs for more generic remote DJs, broadcasting from Florida, Colorado, or California
Edited sentence: Buck and Dex still make an effort to play hard rock, as they have more freedom to choose some of the music.The Edge had also gotten a new program director, ushering in a substantial change in the station's programming, going from playing "harder" music, like Slipknot, Korn, and Five Finger Death Punch to contemporary pop artists like Coldplay, Three Doors Down and many 90's acts, such as Bush, The Toadies, and The Offspring.The changes also proved controversial due to the loss of local DJs for remote DJs, broadcasting from Florida, Colorado, or California, often called "generic" by listeners