Original sentence: Girls Aloud have had a number of celebrity fans including Bono, Noel Gallagher, Chris Martin, the Jonas Brothers, Matt Helders, Duff McKagan, Gabriella Cilmi Neil Tennant, Emma Bunton and Geri Halliwell.The band themselves are known to be fans of artists such as Oasis , Ne-Yo, Michael Jackson, and Radiohead
Edited sentence: Girls Aloud have a number of celebrity fans including Bono, Noel Gallagher, Chris Martin, the Jonas Brothers, Matt Helders, Duff McKagan, Gabriella Cilmi Neil Tennant, Emma Bunton and Geri Halliwell.The band themselves are known to be fans of artists such as Oasis , Ne-Yo and Michael Jackson