Original sentence: Bill Huffman's Derek Smart pages at werewolves.D  is an independent software designer and Internet personality living in Florida.He is also the President and Lead developer of his company 3000ad.He is the creator of the Battlecruiser 3000AD video game series, now Universal Combat.In late 1998 in a statement released by both parties, the then Take Two president Ryan Brant announced that the matter had been resolved.The game received average ratings in several game magazine reviews.The product which was prematurely released according to Smart  was found to contain many bugs that made it unplayable.org (Compendium of information critical of Derek Smart)
Edited sentence: He is the creator of the Battlecruiser 3000AD and Universal Combat video game series and the President/Lead Developer of 3000AD, Inc.In late 1998 in a statement released by both parties, the then Take Two president Ryan Brant lauded Smart's work and efforts and further announced that the matter had been resolved.The game received a better score average in several game magazine reviews.The prematurely released  product was found to contain many bugs that made it unplayable.a Florida corporation.is an independent software designer and Internet personality