Original sentence: (An overview from a neutral perspective, slightly tongue-in-cheek).(An overview written from an orthodox perspective).(Concerned with the 'academic authorship debate' surrounding Shakespeare's collaborations and apocrypha, not with the false identity theories).(Influential book that criticizes orthodox scholarship and promotes the Oxford theory).(London: Thames and Hudson, 1999).(New York: Dodd, Mead & Co.(Oxfordian introduction to the supposed evidentiary problems of the orthodox tradition).(Stratfordian debunk of the Oxford theory).(The first book to promote the Oxford theory).,	The Mysterious William Shakespeare: The Man Behind the Mask.Diana Price, Unorthodox Biography: New Evidence of An Authorship Problem (Westport, Ct: Greenwood, 2001).Gibson, The Shakespeare Claimants (London, 1962).ISBN 0-500-28113-0.ISBN 0826409288.Irvin Leigh Matus, Shakspeare, in Fact (London: Continuum, 1999).John Michell, Who Wrote Shakespeare.Jonathan Hope, The Authorship of Shakespeare's Plays: A Socio-Linguistic Study (Cambridge University Press, 1994).Thomas Looney, Shakespeare Identified in Edward de Vere, Seventeenth Earl of Oxford (London: Cecil Palmer, 1920)
Edited sentence: (Excellent introduction to the evidentiary problems of the orthodox tradition).(Probably the best general book on the Oxford case; certainly the most influential).(Westport, Ct: Greenwood Press, 2001.(orthodox, but a good overview).(the mother of all books on the authorship question.:	The Mysterious William Shakespeare: The Man Behind the Mask.Diana Price:	[Shakespeare’s Unorthodox Biography:] New Evidence of An Authorship Problem.Gibson: The Shakespeare Claimants, London 1962.ISBN 0-500-28113-0 (paperback 1999) (neutral, slightly tongue-in-cheek).ISBN 0826409288 (paperback 1999) (Stratfordian vs.Irvin Leigh Matus: Shakspeare, in Fact, Continuum.John Michell: Who Wrote Shakespeare.London: Cecil Palmer, 1920.New York: Dodd, Mead & Co.Thames and Hudson, London.Thomas Looney 	[“Shakespeare” Identified] in Edward de Vere, Seventeenth Earl of Oxford