Original sentence: "    John Lindsay, ACORN, and other opponents of admission through an objective and scholastic examination have argued that standardized tests like the SAT and SSHSAT are biased against African and Hispanic Americans.The Stuyvesant Standard.The test score necessary for admission to Stuyvesant has been the highest of the schools since its relocation to its present Battery Park City campus
Edited sentence: "While Stuyvesant accepts students purely on their performance on the SSHSAT, John Lindsay and ACORN have argued [2] [3] that, like the SAT and other standardized exams, the exam may be biased against African and Hispanic Americans.For further information, see the articles on Stuyvesant's student body and standardized testing.Like Led Poisoning, this could cause potential brain damage as well as respiratory issues.See also: Bronx Science, Brooklyn Technical High School,.The Stuyvesant Standard | (THE SPECTATOR NO LONGER HAS WEBSITE).The studies are with students still taking classes in a potentially harmful waste hazard.The test score necessary for admission to Stuyvesant since its relocation to its Battery Park City campus has been the highest thus far of the schools.There has been many issues that Stuyvesant students and parents have not been made fully aware of including, the asbestos in the air , and long term exposure risks.There has been many issues that Stuyvesant students and parents have not been made fully aware of including, the asbestos in the air , and long term exposure risks  due to 9/11 (Stuyvesants close vicinity to the World Trade Center)