Original sentence: In 1988 it charted at number twenty-one in the United Kingdom.It was only a moderate hit in the UK at the time of its release, peaking at #21 and becoming the only single from Bad not to reach the UK Top 20 on first release.The song garnered massive airplay  and topped the Billboard Hot 100 for two weeks.This song has been included in most of Jackson's compilation albums, but was notably absent in the Visionary: The Video Singles box set
Edited sentence: Curiously, it was only a moderate hit in the UK at the time of its release, peaking at #21 and becoming the only single from Bad not to reach the UK Top 20 on first release.In 1988 it charted lowered than expectations at number twenty-one in the United Kingdom.It is widely believed to be one of Jackson's greatest songs.The mid-tempo track is well known for its dramatic flourishes and Jackson's passionate delivery of its poignant lyrics.The song garnered massive airplay and topped the Billboard Hot 100 for two weeks.This song has been included in most of Jackson's compilation albums, but was notably absent in the Visionary: The Video Singles box set, most likely due to its poor UK chart performance