Original sentence: Cobb Track, Angell Field, and Avery Stadium Pool are considered world-class athletic facilities.Stanford athletes are also world class; fifteen athletes affiliated with Stanford University participated in the 2004 summer Olympic Games, winning a total of seventeen medals
Edited sentence: At 2004 Olympic Games 15 Stanford affiliates finished with 17 Medals.Cobb Track and Angell Field and Avery Stadium Pool are considered world-class athletic facilities