Original sentence: Starting on October 11th, 2006, a pre-sale will start at midnight (EST) and the first 400 people to sign up will receive a poster designed by the band's dear friend, Rohner, whom also did the band's web design
Edited sentence: Starting on October 11th, 2006, a pre-sale will start at midnight (EST) and the first 400 people to sign up will receive a beautiful poster designed by the band's dear friend, Rohner, whom also did the band's web design