Original sentence: Senior devotees Shri Gangarambhai, Sundarjibhai and others from the Bhuj region of Kutch had gone to Gadhada as Shriji Maharaj was gracing Gadhada for a Fuldol festival.The model of Satsang in the Kutch region was nursed by Late Guru Ramanand Swami by his constant visits to Bhuj and other places in Kutch.There in that festival, the devotees of Bhuj, submitted their prayer to Shriji Maharaj and requested him to construct a temple in Bhuj
Edited sentence: Senior devotees Shri Gangarambhai, Sundarjibhai and others from the Bhuj region of Kutch had gone to Gadhada as Shriji Maharaj was gracing Gadhada to give blissful pleasure of Fuldol festival to his devotees.The model Satsang in the Kutch region was nursed by Late Guru Ramanand Swami by his constant visits to Bhuj and other places in Kutch.There in that festival, the faithful devotees of Bhuj, submitted their prayer to Shriji Maharaj and requested him to construct a temple in Bhuj