Original sentence: He also studied video production at MIT, with documentarian Richard Leacock.He began producing TV shows for cable, network, and pay-per-view in 1989, winning awards including the Cable Ace and the Imagen Award.McLaren was born in the United Kingdom and emigrated to the United States when he was six years old.McLaren's controversial marketing slogan “There Are No Rules” along with his notorious interview in the New York Times, "Death is Cheap: Maybe It's Just 14.95," launched the franchise and delivered a high pay-per-view buyrate.Public interest and the popularity of the UFC increased leading to its appearance on Friends (The One with the Ultimate Fighting Champion), on the cover of Mad Magazine, which featured McLaren as the promoter “Marky D Sodd,” and in the Denzel Washington film, Virtuosity
Edited sentence: He also studied video production at MIT, with legendary documentarian Richard Leacock.He began producing highly rated TV shows for cable, network, and pay-per-view in 1989, winning awards including the Cable Ace and the Imagen Award.McLaren was born in the United Kingdom and emigrated to the United States when was nearly seven years old.McLaren's controversial marketing slogan “There Are No Rules” along with his notorious interview in the New York Times, "Death is Cheap: Maybe It's Just 14.95," launched the franchise and delivered spectacular pay-per-view buyrates.Public interest and the popularity of the UFC increased leading to its appearance on Friends (The One with the Ultimate Fighting Champion), on the cover of Mad Magazine, which featured McLaren as the promoter “Marky D Sodd,” and in the Denzel Washington Film, Virtuosity