Original sentence: Ballinhassig GAA has a senior hurling team.The Marion Hall has recently been rennovated.The nearest airport is Cork International Airport.There are two primary schools in Ballinhassig (Ballyheada and Goggins Hill), several public houses, a shop, two churches and a co-op.Traditionally farming based, the area has seen economic growth in other areas, matched by the construction of new houses and buildings
Edited sentence: ,kelly,madden,lee and cashy.Ballinhassig has a senior hurling team which im sure if you ever talk to someone from the local area wont fail to mention it to you.It is finally branching out from the farms and now boasts several new houses and businesses.Many of the 12-20 year old boys can regularely be found loitering outside cottrells shop probably hoping for a glimpse of some of the shop assistants.Nearest airport Cork International Airport.The Ballinhassig Parish is in the early stages of getting a dib vebulator.The Ballinhassig economy is currently booming.The marion hall has recently been done up and everyone is very proud of it.The most common animal is the cow.There are many cars, lorries and trucks but the main mode of transport is the tractor.There are several public house a shop, two churches and a co-op.There are two primary schools, Ballyheada and Goggins Hill between which there is quite a rivalry.normally seen in fields from april-october