Original sentence: Jean Smart, Jennifer Esposito, and Melissa McCarthy are set to co-star in the comedy about a 30-year-old psychiatrist who, after a hit-and-run accident, develops amnesia and has to rediscover her life, her relationships and herself.She persuaded the producers to rescind their decision, and on April 18, 2005, she made her Broadway debut
Edited sentence: Jean Smart, Jennifer Esposito,  and Melissa McCarthy are set to co-star in the comedy about a 30-year-old psychiatrist who, after becoming the victim of a hit and run, develops amnesia and has to rediscover her life, her relationships and herself.She persuaded the producers to rescind their decision, and on May 4, 2005, she made her Broadway debut to moderately good reviews