Original sentence: Anderson has signed on to become a series regular in the Ten Network Cop Drama series Rush.Her character, Shannon Henry, made her debut in the serie's second season which premiered on July 16, 2009, at 8:30pm AEST.She has signed a three year deal with the show and her contract will expire in 2012
Edited sentence: Anderson has signed on to become a series regular in the Ten Network cop drama series Rush.Her character, Shannon Henry, made her debut in the series's second season which premiered on July 16, 2009, at 8:30 pm AEST.She has signed a three-year deal with the show and her contract will expire in 2012