Original sentence: While Keats was writing Ode on a Grecian Urn and the other poems, Brown transcribed copies of the poems and submitted them to Richard Woodhouse
Edited sentence: During this time, Benjamin Haydon, Keats's friend, was given a copy of "Ode to a Nightingale", and he shared the poem with the editor of the Annals of the Fine Arts, James Elmes.Elmes paid Keats a small sum of money and the poem was published in the July issue.While Keats was writing "Ode on a Grecian Urn" and the other poems, Brown was transcribed copies of the poems and submitted them to Richard Woodhouse