Original sentence: Early in his career Stevenson became a controversial figure within the field of psychoanalysis.Stevenson's conclusions gained little or no support within the scientific community, although in 1977 the Journal of Nervous and Mental Disease did devote most of one issue to his work.Stevenson's research is a 'minimalist' model of reincarnation and makes no religious claims.Stevenson’s conclusions gained little support from the scientific community, although Stevenson supporter Eugene Brody has suggested many of them dismiss ideas like reincarnation.While Stevenson regularly published his research in peer-reviewed scientific journals, and a small number of scientific commentators have stated that he rigorously followed the scientific method in conducting his research, Stevenson felt that for the most part the scientific community simply ignored his work
Edited sentence: Early in his career Stevenson became a controversial figure amongst psychoanalysts.Stevenson's conclusions gained little or no support within the scientific community, although in 1977 the Journal of Nervous and Mental Disease (JNMD) did devote most of one issue to his work.Stevenson's research has been associated with a 'minimalist' model of reincarnation that does not make any religious claims.Stevenson’s conclusions gained little support from the scientific community, although Stevenson supporter Eugene Brody has suggested many of them simply dismiss ideas like reincarnation.While Stevenson regularly published his research in peer-reviewed scientific journals, and a small number of scientific commentators have stated that Stevenson rigorously followed the scientific method in conducting his research, for the most part the scientific community ignored Stevenson's reincarnation work