Original sentence: In 2005, Cezar, described by the eminent sportswriter Ronnie Nathanielsz as like a gazelle who is graceful and fluid in motion , was part of the twelve (12) initial inductees to the PBA Hall of Fame alongside fellow Crispa players Atoy Co and Bogs Adornado, and Toyota stalwarts Jaworski, Francis Arnaiz and Fernandez together with former PBA Commissioners Leo Prieto, Emerson Coseteng and Atty
Edited sentence: In 2005, Cezar, described by the eminent sportswriter Ronnie Nathanielsz as like a gazelle who is graceful and fluid in motion , was part of the twelve initial inductees to the PBA Hall of Fame alongside fellow Crispa players Atoy Co and Bogs Adornado, and Toyota stalwarts Jaworski, Francis Arnaiz and Fernandez together with former PBA Commissioners Leo Prieto, Emerson Coseteng and Atty