Original sentence: The Republican Party, winning control of the Executive branch in the controversial 2000 election by a very close margin of votes in Florida.The alleged use of administration approved torture.The designation of "enemy combatants" by the administration and the use of military courts like the Combatant Status Review Tribunal to bypass the normal rule of law
Edited sentence: The  use of torture.The Republican Party, after winning control of the Executive branch in the controversial 2000 election by a very close margin of votes in Florida, acted with haste to enact the agenda of the Project for the New American Century.The designation of "enemy combatants" by the administration and the use of kangaroo courts like the Combatant Status Review Tribunal to bypass the normal rule of law