Original sentence: His music was used in 1999 to launch computer company iOmega's Hip Zip, a predecessor of the iPod.On New Year's Eve 2006, Peter appeared as a guest with the Mormon Tabernacle Choir in an event broadcast worldwide by satellite
Edited sentence: His music was used in 1999 to launch computer company iOmega's Hip Zip, a technological predecessor to the iPod.On New Year's Eve 2006, Peter appeared as a guest with the Mormon Tabernacle Choir in an event broadcast worldwide