Original sentence: India emerged as a modern nation-state in 1947, when the subcontinental populace expelled all British rulers in an intense movement of social reforms and forged it into a single nation, thus restoring the glory of the past Indian empires.India has become self-sufficient in agricultural production, and is now the tenth industrialised country in the world and the sixth nation to have gone into outer space to conquer nature for the benefit of the people.India is one of the oldest civilisations in the world with a kaleidoscopic variety and rich cultural heritage.It has achieved multifaceted socio-economic progress during the last 58 years of its Independence.Modern India's population, wildlife, geographical terrain and climate system are among the most diverse in the world, and India is now considered a possible candidate to be an  emerging superpower
Edited sentence: India emerged as a modern nation-state in 1947, when the subcontinental populace expelled all non-native traders in an intense movement of social reforms and forged it into a single nation, thus restoring the glory of the past Indian empires.India is now self-sufficient in agricultural production, the tenth industrialised country in the world, one of the six-nuclear-deterrent capable countries, and the sixth nation to have gone into outer space to conquer nature for the benefit of the people.Modern India's population, wildlife, geographical terrain and climate system are among the most diverse in the world, and India is now considered an  emerging superpower