Original sentence: The second wave of black metal started in the later 1980s/early 1990s, primarily in Norway, but by this time this essentially Scandinavian (mainly Norwegian) movement, had garnered criticism from mainstream media
Edited sentence: Also such Swedish bands as Marduk, Dark Funeral, Dissection, Mörk Gryning, Lord Belial and Abruptum had a large influence of the second wave of black metal.The second wave of black metal started in the later 1980s/early 1990s, primarily in Norway and Sweden, but by this time this essentially Scandinavian (mainly Norwegian and Swedish) movement, had garnered criticism from mainstream media