Original sentence: Because of the dangers of elemental Sodium and the high temperatures and pressures involved, many of the experiments were done outside on the ’86 Field.Hunter believed titanium might have a high melting point and might be able to replace the carbon filaments that were used in light bulbs at the time
Edited sentence: Because of the dangers of elemental Sodium and the high temperatures and pressures involved, many of the experiments were done outside on the football field of the RPI campus.Hunter believed titanium might have a high melting point and would be able to replace the carbon filaments that were used in light bulbs at the time