Original sentence: Linus Roache as Thomas Wayne: Bruce Wayne's father, killed by Joe Chill when his son is 10 years old.Michael Caine as Alfred Pennyworth: The trusted butler to Bruce Wayne's parents, who continues his loyal service to their son after their deaths
Edited sentence: " He is killed by Joe Chill when his son is 10 years old.Linus Roache as Thomas Wayne: Bruce Wayne's father, a physician and philanthropist who leaves the running of his family's business to "better men.Michael Caine as Alfred Pennyworth: The trusted wise butler to Bruce Wayne's parents, who continues his loyal service to their son after their deaths