Original sentence: Little Mo and Sean were rescued by their neighbour Tom Banks, who, along with Trevor, but they stayed up until midnight.and was killed when he went back into the burning house for Trevor and the flames ignited a can of oil, which resulted in an explosion that rocked the Square.november 1st
Edited sentence: Little Mo and Sean were rescued by their neighbour Tom Banks, who, along with Trevor, was killed when he went back into the burning house for Trevor and the flames ignited a can of oil, which resulted in an explosion that rocked the Square