Original sentence: 9 days after the cyclone, the military government is still refusing to grant visas and access for aid workers into the area.The UN has called for an air or sea corridor to be opened to channel large amounts of aid, and the HMS Westminster has been sent to the area, alongside French and United States military assets
Edited sentence: Therefore, UN has called for an air or sea corridor to be opened to channel large amounts of aid, and HMS Westminster has been sent to the area, alongside French and United States military assets.Until 9 days after the cyclone, the military government is stills in a stronghold, refusing to grant visa and access aid workers into the area