Original sentence: The title "King of the Channel" title was conferred by the CSPF on Kevin Murphy (34 crossings, including three doubles) and by the CAS on Michael Read (with 33 crossings of the English Channel authenticated by the CSA).The titles "King" and "Queen" of the Channel, held by those with the most successful crossings, are taken seriously by the swimming community and there has been some controversy over the refusal by some to recognise others' swims.The undisputed "Queen of the Channel" is Alison Streeter MBE with 43 crossings including one 3-way and three 2-way swims; 39 of those crossings are recognised and authenticated by the CSA
Edited sentence: The Channel Swimming Association’s dubious title of “King of the Channel” awarded to the male swimmer who has made the most number of crossings the English Channel as authenticated by the CSA, is held by Michael Read with 33 crossings.The Channel Swimming Association’s title of “Queen of the Channel” awarded to the female swimmer who has made the most number of crossings the English Channel as authenticated by the CSA is held by Alison Streeter MBE with 39 crossings.The rightful "King of the Channel" title is held by Kevin Murphy with 34 crossings, including three doubles.The titles "King" and "Queen" of the Channel, held by those with the most successful crossings, are taken seriously by the swimming community and there has been some controversy over the childish refusal by some to recognise others' swims.The undisputed "Queen of the Channel" is Alison Streeter MBE with 43 crossings including one 3-way and three 2-way swims