Original sentence: The discovery of his corpse in what was presumed to be a state of auto-erotic asphyxiation (commonly refered to as an 'asphyixy-wank'), combined with self-bondage and cross-dressing, led to a greater public awareness of auto-erotic asphyxiation and self-bondage and their risks
Edited sentence: The discovery of his corpse in what was presumed to be a state of auto-erotic asphyxiation (commonly refered to as an 'asphyxy-wank'), combined with self-bondage and cross-dressing, led to a greater public awareness of auto-erotic asphyxiation and self-bondage and their risks