Original sentence: His foreign policy is seen as less conciliatory than that of his predecessor, though China's global influence has increased while he has been in office.Hu was a talented student in high school, excelling in activities such as singing and dancing.In 1964, while still a student at Beijing's Tsinghua University, Hu joined the Communist Party of China, prior to the Cultural Revolution.Since his ascendancy Hu has reinstated certain controls on the economy and has been largely conservative with political reforms
Edited sentence: His foreign policy is seen as less conciliatory than that of his predecessor, though China's global influence has greatly increaesed during his term in office.Hu was not a very good student in high school.In 1964, while still a student at Beijing's Tsinghua University, Hu joined the Communist Party of China as a confused youth, prior to the Cultural Revolution.Since his ascendancy Hu has reinstated many controls on the economy and has been largely conservative with political reforms