Original sentence: He attended Berklee College of Music in Boston, MA in 2004 until he dropped out to persue a more active music career.Known for his speed and strength as a drummer, Steven is the youngest and newest member of the band replacing the previous drummer, Ed Klinger.Steven Vaiani (born March 1985) is the current drummer in the progressive, noise rock band An Albatross of Wilkes-Barre, PA
Edited sentence: He attended [Berklee College of Music] in Boston, MA in 2004 until he dropped out to persue a more active music career.Known for his speed and strength as a drummer, Steven is the youngest and newest member of the band replacing the talented Ed Klinger.Steven Vaiani (born March 1985) is the current drummer in the progressive, [noise rock] band [An Albatross] of [Wilkes-Barre PA]