Original sentence: Note: The name Intifada is common usage in English as the popularised name for two Palestinian campaigns directed at ending the Israeli military occupation (see First Intifada and Al-Aqsa Intifada)...The Independence Intifada (intifada is Arabic for "uprising") is a Saharawi Polisario activist coinage for a series of disturbances, demonstrations, and riots that broke out starting in May 2005  in the Moroccan-held parts of Western Sahara
Edited sentence: Note: The name Intifada is common usage in English as the popularised name for two Palestinian campaigns directed at ending the Israeli military occupation (see First Intifada and Al-Aqsa Intifada).The Independence Intifada (intifada is Arabic for "uprising") is  a Saharawi Polisario activist coinage for a series of disturbances, demonstrations and riots that broke out in May 2005  in the Moroccan-held parts of Western Sahara.The usage of Independence Intifada for the Western-Sahara conflict is not widely adopted outside separatist activist circles