Original sentence: As the leader of the Telepath Rebellion and with funding from Garibaldi though Edgars Industries, Lyta launched a successful campaign against the Psi Corps.In an unspecified year, Lyta laid an ambush for Bester and his 200 most loyal supporters (telepaths).Many of the the Psi Corps's command were inprisoned and the rest melted into the new Psi Corps.The Psi Core split into two factions.The Saga ended with the capture of Bester and his final days in prison.The first faction supported Bester and the Second was sympathetic to Lyta
Edited sentence: As the leader of the Telepath Rebellion, possessing funding from Garibaldi though Edgars Industries, Lyta launched a successful campaign against the Psi Corps.In an unspecified year, Lyta laid an ambush for Bester and his 200 most loyal telepath supporters.Many of the the Psi Corps's command were imprisoned and the rest melted into the new Psi Corps.The Psi Corps split into two factions.The first faction supported Bester and the second was sympathetic to Lyta.The saga ended with the capture of Bester and his final days in prison