Original sentence: At the issue of the war, the State of Israel kept most of the area that had been allocated by the U.Israel also took control of a portion of the area allocated to the proposed Arab state, including the Jaffa, Lydda and Ramle area, Galilee, Negev, a strip along the Tel-Aviv-Jerusalem road and some territories in the West Bank.No Arab Palestinian state was created.The 1948 Arab–Israeli War after May 15, 1948, marking the end of the British Mandate and the birth of Israel, in which Transjordan, Egypt, Syria and Iraq sent expeditionary forces into Palestine.Transjordan took control of the remainder of the West Bank, putting it under military rule, and the Egyptian military took control of the Gaza Strip.partition plan
Edited sentence: At the issue of the war, the State of Israel kept most of the area it had been allocated by the partition plan.Israel also took control a significant portion of the area allocated to the proposed Arab state, including the Jaffa, Lydda and Ramle area, Galilee, Negev, a strip along the Tel-Aviv-Jerusalem road and some territories in the West Bank.No Arab Palestinian state was created: the remainder of the West Bank was under military rule by Jordan and the Gaza Strip was placed under Egyptian military rule.The 1948 Arab–Israeli War after May 15 marking the end of the British Mandate and the Birth of Israel, in which Transjordan, Egypt, Syria and Iraq sent expeditionary forces into Palestine