Original sentence: However, this argument was rejected because the pressure put on individual Scientologists to disconnect means it is not voluntary.In the United States, the Church has tried to argue in court that disconnection is a constitutionally-protected religious practice.The Church of Scientology has repeatedly denied that such a policy exists, though as of May 2011 its web site acknowledges the practice and describes it as a human right
Edited sentence: The Church of Scientology openly acknowledges and protects the human right of members of its community to disconnect