Original sentence: "  This quotation is attributed to Lambton, but scholars now believe the remarks are apocryphal.In 2007, the Green Day slogan was "Keep on Rockin' For a Green World" and the focus was on  Climate Change and Global Warming.Police haven't yet found the people responsible for the offence.Students have achieved above state level in all tested areas.The celebration includes a "concert" which usually involves performances by the staff and students, competitions and a "best dressed" contest which awards prizes to the students who are wearing the most green.The principal of Lambton High School is Julia Caunce.The school has several state-of-the-art facilities including a full-size Olympic pool, three basketball courts, badminton courts, a minature golf course and a library containing over 7000 printed works.Two 15 litre drums of hydrochloric acid were spread around the school's quadrangle, on outside equipment, in the swimming pool and in the entrances to school buildings
Edited sentence: " This quotation is attributed to Lambton, but scholars now believe the remarks are apocryphal.All students are encouraged to enter the competitions that will be held for the day.George Aiskoulopolis.Green Day 2007 will be held on the 22nd of June with the slogan "Keep on Rockin' For a Green World".Police haven't had any luck in finding the people responsible for the offence.Students achieve above state level in all tested areas.The celebration incorporates a "concert" which usually involves performances by the staff and students, competitions, and a "best dressed" contest which awards prizes to the students who are wearing the most green.The focus is on  Climate Change and Global Warming.The principal of Lambton High School is believed to be Julia Caunce, though this cannot be confirmed as she rarely leaves her office.The school boasts about several state-of-the-art facilities including a full-size Olympic pool, 3 basketball courts and badminton courts, a minature golf course, and a library containing over 7000 printed works.These facilities have been able to be provided thanks to the outstanding financial management of the school's Bursar, Mr.Two 15 litre drums of hydrochloric acid were spread around the school's quadrangle, on outside equipment, in the swimming pool, and in the entrances to school buildings