Original sentence: Madonna has 33 #1 singles on Billboard Dance/Club Play Chart proving her dominance in US, more than twice the number of her nearest rival Janet Jackson
Edited sentence: Her world wide dance single sales prove her dominance in the world on this genere.In the UK, Madonna's The Immaculate Collection is the highest selling album ever by a female artist at 12x Platinum for shipments of over 3.6 million copies.Madonna is the most successful dance artist in music history; Madonna has 33 #1 singles on Billboard Dance/Club Play Chart proving her dominance in US, more than twice the number of her nearest rival Janet Jackson.Overall it is the 7th highest selling album ever in the UK