Original sentence: November 24, 1859 - On the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, or the Preservation of Favoured Races in the Struggle for Life is first published by English naturalist Charles Darwin becoming one of the pivotal works in scientific history and biology,  overturning a supposition of direct separate creation of each species
Edited sentence: November 24, 1859 - On the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, or the Preservation of Favoured Races in the Struggle for Life is first published by English naturalist Charles Darwin becoming one of the pivotal works in scientific history and biology, overturning the concept of Biblical Creation