Original sentence: While all members receive the ability to use the prescribed styles of the order the top two levels grant titles of knight or damehood, while all accord distinct post-nominal letters the Royal Victorian Order's precedence amongst other honours differs from realm to realm, and admission to some grades may be barred by government policy
Edited sentence: While all members receive the ability to use the prescribed styles of the order the top two levels grant titles of knight or damehood, and all accord distinct post-nominal letters the Royal Victorian Order's precedence amongst other honours differs from realm to realm, and admission to some grades may be barred by government policy