Original sentence: In McDaniel’s first year as chairwoman, the RNC posted record-breaking fundraising numbers totaling $132.5 million dollars.In just December of 2017, the RNC raised $11.1 million in comparison to the Democratic National Committee’s total contributions of $4 million.McDaniel spends up to six hours daily calling donors.Under McDaniel’s leadership, the RNC would have what the Washington Post described as “a huge financial edge heading into the 2018 midterm elections
Edited sentence: " Under McDaniel’s leadership, the RNC would have what the Washington Post described as “a huge financial edge heading into the 2018 midterm elections.According to the Washington Times: "While the monumental total is credited in part to small-dollar donations support of President Trump, Ms.In McDaniel’s first year as chairwoman, the RNC posted record-breaking fundraising numbers totaling $132.5 million dollars.In just December of 2017, the RNC raised $11.1 million in comparison to the Democratic National Committee’s total contributions of $4 million.McDaniel has logged 88,000 miles for fundraising and remains in constant contact with donors, according to a Republican insider.McDaniel is a prolific fundraiser who spends up to six hours daily calling donors