Original sentence: Raj has worked with Christian groups to proselytize Christianity and convert away from Hinduism.Sometimes these prosetylizations are often illegitimate
Edited sentence: He has not laid out any plans for emancipating the condition of the Dalits other than their conversion.However, Raj asserts that conversion alone is enough.Many Dalits live in poverty because of a poor family background.Raj has worked with Christian groups to proselytize Christianity and turn them away from Hinduism.The prosetylizations are often illegitimate