Original sentence: Because of this, the athletic teams competed at a lower division (due to less enrollment) in their first two years.The girls track team won the Missouri State Title in 2002
Edited sentence: Because of this, the athletic teams competed at a lower division (due to less enrollment) in their first two years, which led to early athletic successes.The girls track team won the Missouri State Title in 2002, and other sports such as soccer, swimming, tennis, volleyball and cross country have dominated their conferences and have made strong showings in State Playoffs