Original sentence: God knows it wasn't perfect, but it didn't deserve this.It was a village of approx 2000 inhabitants with all the usual facilities,A park,  Infant school, Junior school, library, Co-op, Butchers,2 fish and chip shops,the usual array of grocers, off licences, hairdressers, bookies cobblers etc, 2 pubs (The Stourton Hotel and The Queen), 2 working mens clubs, a couple of chapels, and St Mary's Church.It was also the home of some significant industy.It was brutal and uneccessary.Leeds City Council gained control in the mid 70's, and by 1981 the village had disappeared.{{WestYorkshire-geoUntil the local boundary changes in the 1970's, Stourton was a village in the Rothwell Urban District attached to the southernmost border of Leeds, yet governed by the old West riding County Council
Edited sentence: It was a village of approx 2,000 inhabitants with all the usual facilities, a park, Infant school, Junior school, library, Co-op, Butchers, two fish and chip shops, the usual array of grocers, off licences, hairdressers, bookies, cobblers etc, 2 pubs (The Stourton Hotel and The Queen), 2 working mens clubs, a couple of chapels, and St Mary's Church.It was also the home of some significant industry.It was brutal and unnecessary.Leeds City Council gained control in the mid 1970s, and by 1981 the village had disappeared.Until the local boundary changes in the 1970s, Stourton was a village in the Rothwell Urban District attached to the southernmost border of Leeds, yet governed by the old West Riding County Council