Original sentence: Initial extensions to the Red Line were planned to the neighborhoods of Neve Yaakov in northern East Jerusalem and Ein Karem (near Hadassah Hospital) in the southwest.It runs from Pisgat Ze'ev in northern East Jerusalem, south along Road 1 (intercity) to Jaffa Road (Rehov Yaffo).The maintenance and storage depot is on a  site near French Hill in northern East Jerusalem
Edited sentence: Initial extensions to the Red Line were planned to the neighborhoods of Neve Yaakov in the northeast, and Ein Karem (near Hadassah Hospital) in the southwest.It runs from Pisgat Ze'ev in the northeast, south along Road 1 (intercity) to Jaffa Road (Rehov Yaffo).The maintenance and storage depot is on a  site near French Hill in north Jerusalem