Original sentence: Bin Laden's death was welcomed throughout the world as a positive and significant turning point in the fight against terrorism, including the United Nations, European Union, NATO, and moderate Muslim countries including Indonesia and Turkey.However, the killing was condemned by Venezuela, the Hamas administration of the Gaza Strip,  Taliban.The governments of most Arab and Muslim countries maintained official silence; Iran and the Muslim Brotherhood stated their view that bin Laden's death removed "the last excuse" for western forces to remain in the Middle East and urged for their withdrawal
Edited sentence: However, the killing was condemned by Venezuela, the Hamas administration of the Gaza Strip,  and the Taliban.The United Nations, European Union, NATO, and many countries welcomed bin Laden's death as a positive and significant turning point in the fight against terrorism and for the security of the world.The governments of most Arab and Muslim countries maintained official silence; Iran and the Muslim Brotherhood said that the action should be followed by western withdrawal from the Middle East