Original sentence: Pomeroy's classroom are re-inserted: Donnie reading his own poetry, the banning of Graham Greene's "The Destructors," and its replacement with Watership Down, and the class later watching the animated adaptation of Watership Down.While watching the football game, Donnie follows an opaque sphere; the sphere does not form a finger and beckon him, as in the original
Edited sentence: Pomeroy's classroom are re-inserted: Donnie reading his own poetry, the banning of Graham Greene's "The Destructors" and its replacement with Watership Down, and the class later watching the animated adaptation of Watership Down.While watching the football game, Donnie follows an opaque sphere; the sphere does not form a finger and beckon him, as in the original (many thought the beckoning finger was out of place and that the sphere better suits the film's atmosphere)