Original sentence: 1991  Guggenheim Fellowship.She graduated from Goddard College, and moved from Vermont to the Iowa Writers’ Workshop.Shore met Howard Norman in 1981, and they married in 1984  They have a daughter, Emma (b
Edited sentence: 1991 Guggenheim Fellowship.She graduated from Goddard College, and moved from Vermont to the Iowa Writers' Workshop.Shore met Howard Norman in 1981, and they married in 1984  They have a daughter, Emma (born 1988)