Original sentence: She and her husband Boris Katz have three grown children, four grandsons and one granddaughter.She is a Past President of the National Association for the Education of Young Children, and is editor of the first on-line peer reviewed early childhood journal, Early childhood Research & Practice
Edited sentence: She is a past president of the National Association for the Education of Young Children, and is editor of the first on-line peer reviewed early childhood journal, Early Childhood Research & Practice