Original sentence: CCNM has lobbied extensively for open birth records, and supports the Ontario Adoption Information Disclosure Act.In 2005 it published a position paper disputing the claims of Ontario Privacy Commissioner Ann Cavoukian with regards to past privacy commitments made to women placing children for adoption.Membership is open to all adoptees and blood relatives of adoptees, especially birth parents.The Canadian Council of Natural Mothers (CCNM) is a Canadian lobby group for the rights of women who have placed children for adoption
Edited sentence: CCNM has lobbied extensively for open birth records,and its then Vice-President, Sandra Jarvie, was instrumental in opening records in Alberta in 2004.CCNM has worked with the Coalition for Open Adoption Records (COAR) in Ontario to open Ontario’s records, which occurred on June 1, 2009.CCNM supports the Ontario Adoption Information Disclosure Act.In 2005 it published a position paper disputing the claims of Ontario Privacy Commissioner Ann Cavoukian with regard to past privacy commitments made to women placing children for adoption.Membership is open to all mothers who have lost children to adoption, their children and other natural family members.Others who support the aims of the organization may also join.The Canadian Council of Natural Mothers (CCNM) is a Canadian organization with charitable status which supports mothers who have lost children adoption, and which works to promote the rights of mothers who have lost children to adoption.To support mothers, CCNM maintains an email group which discusses issues which pertain to those who have experienced adoption loss and those who may be in reunion with lost family members