Original sentence: Slocombe's "pussy" (a sexual double entendre which became a byword for vulgar humour) or John Inman's parody of an effeminate gay man, offensive to many gay people
Edited sentence: Slocombe's "pussy" (a sexual double entendre which became a byword for unfunny vulgar humour) or John Inman's parody of an effeminate gay man, offensive to many gay people