Original sentence: Ones to look out for include, Turismo, Mr Beasley, The Favours, The Neat, The Johnsons, 59 Violets, The Talks, Fonda 500, Windum Earl, Last People On Earth, The Ivy Sins, Ernest and Kill Surf City and many many more
Edited sentence: Ones to look out for include, Turismo, Mr Beasley, The Favours, The Neat (The Neat will be playing Leeds Festival 2007.They're THAT good), The Johnsons, 59 Violets, The Talks, Fonda 500, Windum Earl, Last People On Earth, The Ivy Sins, Ernest and Kill Surf City and many many more