Original sentence: He retired from dancing, and starting doing temporary jobs making cakes and designing shop windows in the United States.He was discovered and mentored by Martha Stewart who saw one of his cakes in a window.Ron gives credit to his Israeli military training for his success, saying it gave him discipline and yet precision in his work
Edited sentence: And that was it.Ben-Israel on becoming a Sweet Genius said, "I had to eventually retire from dancing, and I wanted to stay in America [where he had moved].I always was comfortable in the kitchen.I saw the hydrangeas she had there, and said I could do hydrangeas in sugar.One day, Martha Stewart walked by the window at Mikimoto on Fifth Avenue and saw the cakes I had done.Ron gives credit to his Israeli military training for his success, saying it gave him discipline and yet precision in his "fantastical works".She called me because she was starting a wedding magazine.She invited me over to her famous house for breakfast.So I started doing temporary jobs