Original sentence: The term is likely derived from the  proper name Guido, and is used in various cities associated with large Italian-American populations (such as in Brooklyn,Long Island,Queens, The Bronx, Staten Island, South Philadelphia, Federal Hill, ect
Edited sentence: The term is likely derived from the  proper name Guido, and is used in various cities associated with large Italian-American populations (such as in Brooklyn, Long Island, Queens, The Bronx, Staten Island, South Philadelphia, Federal Hill, ect