Original sentence: As early as 1970, there were some skinheads in the White Nationalist National Front.However, during the late 1970s and early 1980s, a large number of skinheads, suedeheads, ex-skinheads and proto-casuals in the United Kingdom rejected the dogma of both the left and right, as typified by the views and actions of Oi.However, there had also been anti-racist and leftist skinheads from the beginning, especially in areas such as Scotland and Northern England.In an attempt to counter the stereotype of skinheads as racists or neo-Nazis, some skinheads formed anti-racist organizations.In the late 1970s some openly neo-Nazi groups were comprised of skinheads, and the general public and mass media came to view skinheads exclusively as a subculture promoting white power.Those organizations' positions against blacks and Asians appealed to many working class skinheads who blamed non-white immigrants for economic and social problems.bands such as the Cockney Rejects, the 4-Skins and their followers
Edited sentence: However as early as 1970 there were already many Skinheads in the White Nationalist National Front and there had also been anti-racist and leftist skinheads from the beginning, especially in areas such as Scotland and Northern England.However during the late 1970's and early 1980's a large number of skinheads, suedeheads, ex-skinheads and proto-casuals did reject the dogma of both the left and right, as typified by the views and actions of bands such as the Cockney Rejects, the 4-Skins and their followers.In an attempt to counter this perception some skinheads formed anti-racist organizations.In the late 70's several openly Nazi groups which were comprised of skinheads emerged and because Skinheads who embraced the Nazi ideology became predominant in the sub-culture the public and media came to view the skinheads exclusively as a sub-culture promoting White Power.Those organizations' positions against blacks and Asians appealed to many working class skinheads who blamed non-white immigrants for economic and social problems such, as an increase of social tensions in urban areas, and who disliked the growing appeal of Communism to Western Europe