Original sentence: Self-trained entomologist Charles Pomerantz asked permission to search the site and found the mites at various sites throughout the building, with blood engorged mites found near chutes leading to the incinerator.The mites were collected and brought to a laboratory of the United States Public Health Service, which found in the mites an organism that had also been isolated from the mice and in the blood of individuals infected with the disease.The organism was given its name by physician Robert Huebner, one of the scientists who had tracked down the source of the original 1946 epidemic, with the akari portion of the bacteria's name representing the Greek word for "mite"
Edited sentence: Self-trained entomologist Charles Pomerantz asked permission to search the site and found the mites at various sites throughout the building, with blood-engorged mites found near chutes leading to the incinerator.The mites were collected and brought to a laboratory of the United States Public Health Service, which found in the mites an organism that had also been isolated from the mice, and from the blood of individuals infected with the disease.The organism was given its name by physician Robert Huebner, one of the scientists who had tracked down the source of the original 1946 epidemic; the akari portion of the bacteria's name represents the Greek word for "mite"