Original sentence: Boulder High School has a strong academic reputation with one of the most extensive Advanced Placement programs in the state, offering 28 AP level courses for the 2008-2009 school year.The school has an extensive foreign language program that includes instruction in Japanese, Latin, French, German, and Spanish
Edited sentence: Boulder High School has a strong academic reputation and one of the most extensive Advanced Placement programs in the state, offering 28 AP-level courses.The school has a broad foreign language program that includes instruction in Japanese, Latin, French, German, and Spanish