Original sentence: The disaster, involving a leaking deep water oil well, has devastated a vast area of America's marine environment, killed sealife and has a serious impact on the local fishing industry
Edited sentence: BP has born the brunt of the criticism, especially in the USA even though the disaster even though it was not directly responsible for the disaster.The disaster, involving a leaking deep water oil well has devastated a vast area of America's marine environment, killed sealife and had a serious impact on the local fishing industry