Original sentence: The official count records 2,986 deaths in the attacks including the hijackers.While the commission's work has been criticized, the September 11th attacks are certainly among the most significant events to have occurred so far in the 21st century in terms of the profound economic, social, political, cultural and military effects that followed in the United States and many other parts of the world.severely{|align=right
Edited sentence: The official count records 2,986 deaths in the attacks including the alleged attackers.While the commission's work has been severely criticized, the September 11th attacks are certainly among the most significant events to have occurred so far in the 21st century in terms of the profound economic, social, political, cultural and military effects that followed in the United States and many other parts of the world.thumb|A sequential look at United Flight 175 crashing into the south tower of the World Trade Center