Original sentence: Along the way he meets a wounded American Air Force helicopter pilot, James "Rhodey" Rhodes.He was an inventor, an adventurer, a multi-billionaire, a ladies' man and finally a nutcase";  While Lee intended to write the story himself, he eventually handed the premier issue over to Lieber, who fleshed out the story.However, his time with the Asian scientist Yin Sen is consistent through nearly all incarnations of the Iron Man origin, depicting Stark and Yin Sen building the original armor together.Initially, Stark welcomes this "living" armor, as it has improved tactical abilities, but soon the armor's behavior begins to grow more aggressive, and it even kills.Iron Man (Anthony Edward "Tony" Stark) is a fictional character, a comic book superhero appearing in publications from Marvel Comics.Throughout most of his career, Iron Man has been a member of the superhero team the Avengers and has been featured in several incarnations of his own various comic book series
Edited sentence: Along the way he meets a wounded American Marine Corps helicopter pilot, James "Rhodey" Rhodes.He was an inventor, an adventurer, a multi-billionaire, a ladies' man and finally a nutcase"; this allusion is also referenced in the name of Tony Stark's father, Howard.However, his time with the Chinese scientist Ho Yinsen is consistent through nearly all incarnations of the Iron Man origin, depicting Stark and Yinsen building the original armor together.Initially, Stark welcomes this "living" armor, as it has improved tactical abilities, but soon the armor's behavior begins to grow more aggressive, and even commits murder.Iron Man (Anthony Edward "Tony" Stark) is a comic book superhero appearing in publications from Marvel Comics.Notably, Stark has been retroactively referred to as having Asperger Syndrome, which would explain a certain degree of skills and interests.Swedish band, The Cardigans included a song Iron Man on their 1996 album, First Band on the Moon.The character of Xander Crews in the animated series Frisky Dingo is mostly based on Tony Stark and his alter ego Awesome X is based on Iron Man.Throughout most of his career, '''Iron Man''' has been a member of the superhero team the Avengers and has been featured in several incarnations of his own various comic book series.While Lee intended to write the story himself, he eventually handed the premier issue over to Lieber, who fleshed out the story