Original sentence: Beresford, Maurice W, 'Six New Towns of the Bishop of Winchester' Medieval Archaeology 3, pages 200-202 (1959).Dewhurst, Richard,The Church in Hindon  Hindon: Hindon Publishing (2000).Hindon is a village and civil parish in Wiltshire, England, about  west of Salisbury and  south of Warminster.Hindon seems to be an example of a planned settlement, unlike most English villages which have evolved piecemeal over the millennia.Hindon was a market town but is now a village.It is in the Cranborne Chase and West Wiltshire Downs Area of Outstanding Natural Beauty.Sheard Norah, The History of Hindon Printed by The Shaston Printers Ltd, Shaftesbury, Dorset, UK (1979).The 2001 census recorded a parish population of 511.Victoria County History: A History of the County of Wiltshire: Volume 11, pages 98-103
Edited sentence: Beresford, Maurice W, 'Six New Towns of the Bishop of Winchester' Medieval Archaeology 3, 200-2  (1959).Dewhurst, Richard,The Church in Hindon  Hindon: Hindon Publishing  (2000).Formerly a thriving small town with its own market, Hindon is now a quiet country village, favoured by commuters, retired people and weekenders.Hindon appears to be an example of a planned settlement, unlike most English villages which have evolved piecemeal over the millennia.Hindon is a medium-sized village in Wiltshire, England,  west of Salisbury and  south of Warminster.It lies within the Cranborne Chase and West Wiltshire Downs Area of Outstanding Natural Beauty.Its current population is around 500.Sheard Norah, The History of Hindon Printed by The Shaston Printers Ltd, Shaftesbury, Dorset, UK.Victoria County History of Wiltshire Volume XI, 98-103