Original sentence: Echoing growing internet use, PrivateCommunities.Great Recession.It was the first website to present information about master-planned communities to retirement and second home buyers.com jumped from 2.2 million unique visitors in 2005 to attracting 3.6 million unique visitors in 2008, even given the number of foreclosures during the U.com was founded in 1996 by Marie Roberts and Elisabeth Miller-Fox, both experienced real estate developers
Edited sentence: In 2012, self-proclaimed “real estate nut” Elisabeth Miller-Fox was appointed second vice president of the National Association of Real Estate Editors.This fact was evidenced by PrivateCommunities.Today, nine out of 10 homebuyers search for real estate via the Web, according to a joint study by Google and the National Association of Realtors (NAR).com was founded in 1996 by real estate development veterans Marie Roberts and Elisabeth Miller-Fox, operating as the first website to present information about master-planned communities to retirement and second home buyers.com which jumped from 2.2 million unique visitors in 2005 to attracting 3.6 million unique visitors in 2008, even as the number of foreclosures multiplied throughout the United States