Original sentence: "Clark's Station" in Wawona, California, for example, had several more employees than required for the number of guests and its short season.Clark did not seek to enrich himself from Yosemite Valley or the Sequoia Trees.Galen Clark (March 28,1814-March 24,1910) is known for his discovery of the Mariposa Grove of Giant Sequoia trees and for his role as Guardian of Yosemite National Park for 21 years.He left out his personal role in the discovery, popularization, and protection of the Mariposa Grove of Big Trees as hotel keeper, guide, and Guardian of Yosemite and Mariposa Grove.He wrote three books on Yosemite.His lungs healed and he subsequently explored and climbed much of the area.In 1853, Clark had a severe lung infection and moved to the Wawona, California area as a homesteader.These include Indians of the Yosemite (1904) and The Yosemite Valley (1910).Toward the end of his life Clark was desperately poor
Edited sentence: "Clark's Station" in Wawona, for example, had several more employees than required for the number of guests and its short season.Clark didn't seek to enrich himself from Yosemite Valley or the Sequoia Trees.Clark was desperately poor.Galen Clark is famous for his discovery of the Mariposa Grove of Giant Sequoia trees and for his role as Guardian of Yosemite National Park for several years.He did try to make a living though.He wasn't a great book writer, but due to his popularity and need to make a living, wrote three books on Yosemite.One only wishes he would have included accounts he gave or wrote in his letters or other books.The other two are Indians of the Yosemite (1904) and The Yosemite Valley (1910).Toward the end of his life Mr.Unfortunately, he left out the most important part--his personal role in the discovery, popularization, and protection of the Mariposa Grove of Big Trees as hotel keeper, guide, and Guardian of Yosemite and Mariposa Grove