Original sentence: 'Soul In The City London' was a 2004 outreach mission in which 20,000 young people from all over the world gathered [together] to show the love of God through practical projects and evangelistic events.At present, three separate Soul Survivor festivals run every year within the United Kingdom:.Momentum - A short festival based near Shepton Mallet in Somerset aimed at students and those in their twenties.Passion For Your Name - A short festival based in Somerset, focussing on worship.Soul Survivor is a Christian cult based in Watford, England.The Soul Survivor Church is based in a converted warehouse in Watford, UK
Edited sentence: "Soul In The City London" was a 2004 outreach mission in which 20,000 young people from all over the world gathered to show the love of God through practical projects and evangelistic events.At present, four separate Soul Survivor festivals run every year within the United Kingdom:.Momentum - A week long festival based at the ‘Bath and West Showground’ near Shepton Mallet in Somerset aimed at students and those in their twenties.Passion For Your Name - A short festival based in Somerset, focusing on worship.Soul Survivor is a Christian movement based in Watford, Hertfordshire.The Soul Survivor Church is based in a converted warehouse in Watford, Hertfordshire