Original sentence: After being featured on the NME website under the title "The Video That Made Me Laugh Until I Cried Today" and The Guardian website under the subhead: "The world sinks to a new low", Sony BMG issued a take-down notice for the video, leading to accusations that they were attempting to shield the band from criticism
Edited sentence: After being featured on the NME website under the title "The Video That Made Me Laugh Until I Cried Today" and The Guardian website under the subhead: "The world sinks to a new low", particularly mocking the lead singers comment of "We might have mojitos at 11am in the morning.I mean, what the hell, man.Sony BMG issued a take-down notice for the video, leading to accusations that they were attempting to shield the band from criticism