Original sentence: After another broadside in Libertador direction, two Mexicans lay dead, a few more wounded aboard the brig-of-war.Independence of eight guns total, raised her colors followed by Libertador which then fired the first broadside which had no affect.Vincedor del Alamo of sixteen 8 pound guns and 140 men sailing with Libertador of six 12 pound guns and one 18 pounder, crewed by about 100 men
Edited sentence: After another broadside in Libertador direction, two Mexicans lay dead and a few more wounded aboard the brig-of-war.Independence of eight guns total, raised her colors followed by Libertador which then fired the first broadside that had no affect.Vincedor del Alamo of sixteen 8 pound guns and 140 men, sailing with Libertador of six 12 pound guns and one 18 pounder, crewed by about 100 men