Original sentence: In 2007, Rome Snowboards has their office in a building that Derby used to occupy.The Village of Waterbury was incorporated in 1882 with a population of over 2000.Waterbury had a ski factory in the 1940s, The Derby Ball Company
Edited sentence: Ironically, Rome Snowboards currently has their office in a building that Derby used to occupy.One interesting note, Waterbury had its very own ski factory in the 1940s (The Derby Ball Company).With a population of over 2000, the Village of Waterbury was incorporated in 1882