Original sentence: According to Swedish Statistics, relative unemployment in May 2009 was 9% in the general population and 30% amongst 15-25 year olds.Still, Swedish unskilled employees are relatively well-paid while well-educated Swedish employees are low-paid compared to those in competitor countries in Western Europe and USA.Sweden is a world leader in privatized pensions and pension funding problems are relatively small compared to many other Western European countries
Edited sentence: According to Swedish Statistics, unemployment in May 2009 was 9% in the general population and 30% amongst 15-25 year olds.Still, Swedish unskilled employees are well-paid while well-educated Swedish employees are low-paid compared to those in competitor countries in Western Europe and USA.Sweden is a world leader in privatized pensions and pension funding problems are small compared to many other Western European countries