Original sentence: During the Vietnam War (1955–75), North Vietnam and its communist allies, including the Soviet Union and China fought against the military of the Republic of Vietnam government and its anti-communist, Free World allies.Soon after the Japanese surrender at the end of World War II, the Vietminh entered Hanoi and Hồ proclaimed the Democratic Republic of Vietnam on September 2, 1945.The war ended with the total victory of the North Vietnamese forces, not long after American troops withdrew from the South
Edited sentence: During the Vietnam War (1955–75), North Vietnam andVietcong backed by the Soviet Union and China fought against the military of the South Vietnam government and USA.Soon after the Japanese surrender at the end of World War II, the Vietminh entered Hanoi and Hồ Chí Minh proclaimed the Democratic Republic of Vietnam on September 2, 1945.The war ended with the total victory of the North Vietnamese forces and Vietcong, not long after American troops withdrew from the South