Original sentence: On 23 August 2004, Tiscali disposed of its Norwegian branch, Tiscali AS, to Telenor Telecom Solutions AS.On December 31 2008, Tiscali shut down its IPTV service in Italy.On May 27, 2009, Tiscali sold its International arm, Tinet to BS Private Equity firm.On October 11 2006, Tiscali announced that it was to focus on the UK and Italy as its prime ISP targets, with plans to introduce new services to them including a mobile network operator and new IPTV products to the United Kingdom by its acquisition of Homechoice
Edited sentence: On 11 October 2006, Tiscali announced that it was to focus on the UK and Italy as its prime ISP targets, with plans to introduce new services to them including a mobile network operator and new IPTV products to the United Kingdom by its acquisition of Homechoice.On 23 August 2004, Tiscali disposed of its Norwegian branch, Tiscali AS, to Telenor Telecom Solutions.On 27 May, 2009, Tiscali sold its International arm, Tinet to BS Private Equity firm.On 31 December 31 2008, Tiscali shut down its IPTV service in Italy