Original sentence: In addition, unlike other members of this family, finless porpoises have lived under captivity for over 15 years.The finless porpoise was widely hunted in Japan by guns and fishforks but are now placed under protection by International law
Edited sentence: Also, this porpoise is widely hunted in Japan by guns and fishforks.In addition, unlike other members of this family, Finless Porpoises have been captured and placed on live display in Japan for over 15 years