Original sentence: He points out "The only criterion of the truth of a statement that someone has had a certain dream is, essentially, his saying so.Lucidity Letter, 7(2)67-78;1988.Meijer - An Historical View of Dreams and the Ways to Direct Them; Practical Observations by Marie-Jean-Léon-Lecoq, le Marquis d'Hervey-Saint-Denys.Revised Edition in: Lucidity,10 (1&2)311-322;1991.den Blanken & E
Edited sentence: Him and his incredibly attractive business partner in crime Billy "The Real Deal" Meade from Chapman University point out "The only criterion of the truth of a statement that someone has had a certain dream is, essentially, his saying so