Original sentence: During its brief two year history, with regular appearances by Miles Davis, John Coltrane, Dizzy Gillespie, Cannonball Adderly and the like, the popular night spot was more successful than any other similar venue in the region.During that time, the student body of the world re-nown Western Reserve University was predominately white, and these students and others from sDay Street (talk) 03:16, 4 August 2009 (UTC)urrounding universities accounted for 80% of the club’s clientele.Jan 3, 2000 ... Jazz Temple, 13141 Mayfield Road near Euclid Avenue Opened in 1962 by Winston Willis who presented Art Blakey and his Jazz Messengers, ....Jazzed in Cleveland - Part 49.Opened in 1962, the Jazz Temple was the dream and creation of 21-year-old Winston E.The Jazz Temple was a coffeehouse/nightclub located in the culturally prestigious University Circle area of Cleveland Ohio.Then, quickly putting his idea into action, he secured a lease on a vacated building, a former Packard Motor Car dealership showroom, and immediately began remodeling, with careful attention devoted to acoustics.Web References.Willis, an African-American wunderkind entrepreneur who was also a jazz enthusiast
Edited sentence: During its brief two-year history, with regular appearances by Miles Davis, John Coltrane, Dizzy Gillespie, Cannonball Adderly and the like, the popular night spot was more successful than any other similar venue in the region.During that time, the student body of Western Reserve University was predominately white, and these students and others from surrounding universities accounted for 80% of the club’s clientele.Jazzed in Cleveland - Part 49 Jan 3, 2000 ... Jazz Temple, 13141 Mayfield Road near Euclid Avenue Opened in 1962 by Winston Willis who presented Art Blakey and his Jazz Messengers, ....Opened in 1962, the Jazz Temple was the creation of 21-year-old Winston E.The Jazz Temple was a coffeehouse/nightclub located in the University Circle area of Cleveland, Ohio.Then, quickly putting his idea into action, he secured a lease on a vacated building, a former Packard showroom, and immediately began remodeling, with careful attention devoted to acoustics.Willis, an African-American entrepreneur who was also a jazz enthusiast