Original sentence: Cyclists can reach South Bay by turning to the East and following the class 2 lane until passing Palawan Way.Following the rotary leads to a class 1 path on the right, which leads to an extension of the Ballona Creek bicycle path.The Santa Monica bicycle path is an 8.5 mile Class 1 path in Los Angeles County running from the North at Temescal Canyon to the South at Washington Boulevard.The South end links to the South Bay bicycle path through a series of class 2 and class 1 paths beginning where the path ends at  Washington Boulevard.The entire path is on the beach, affording beautiful views, mixed with the hazard of beachgoing pedestrians who do not respect the boundaries of the path.There is a small class 1 path on the right, across from the bird sanctuary on the left, which travels along Admiralty Way.Turning left on the bridge, crossing the water, and turning right leads to the North end of the Class 1 South Bay bicycle path.Turning onto this class 1 path and crossing to the library leads to Fiji Way, which has a class 2 lane again that can be followed through Fisherman's Village and to a rotary at the end.Turning right on Ballona Creek leads to a bridge at Pacific Avenue
Edited sentence: As the path ends @ Washington blvd.As the path turns onto fiji way you will find yourself on a class 2 lane again.As you pass the bird sanctuary on your right you will see a small class 1 path.Follow this through Fisherman's Village and to the rounadabout at the end.Follow this to an extension of the Ballona Creek Path.Following the roundabout you will see an access to a class 1 path on the right.The entire path is on the beach, affording beautiful views, and the hazards of pedestrians wandering along your path.The south end will link you to the South Bay path through a series of class 2 and class 1 paths.This is an 8.5 mile class one path running from the North @ Temescal Canyon to the South @ Washington Blvd.Turn left on the bridge, cross the water and turn right.Turn right and follow this path as it meanders along admiralty way, crossing over at the library.Turn right here and follow this to the bridge at Pacific.You are now on the North end of the Class 1 South Bay Path.turn to the east and follow the class 2 lane until you pass Palawan Way