Original sentence: Newport has a lively night life for a town of its size, Mainly due to the students form the University and other students from Newport, the nightlife is mainly restricted to weekends.The most used Venues in the town are scattered mainly along the High street, starting in the lower bar by the Shrewsbury Canal is the Newport Cosy Hall which is used for the *Newport music festival along with Royal Victoria Hotel in St Mary's street which was named after Princess Victoria in 1832 after she stayed at the hotel.Two new bars in the town have opened up, one is a  wine bar and the other a sports themed bar and a third cafe/bar
Edited sentence: Newport has a lively night life for a town of its size, Mainly due to the students form the University and other students from Newport, the nightlife is at it's most lively during the weekends, as well as Monday and Wednesday nights during 'term time'.The most used Venues in the town are scattered mainly along the High street, starting in the lower bar by the Shrewsbury Canal is the Newport Cosy Hall which is used for the *Newport music festival along with The Royal Victoria Hotel in St Mary's street which was named after Princess Victoria in 1832 after she stayed at the hotel