Original sentence: After the music started again, both Ben Harper and The Flaming Lips were able to perform.The 2006 event was marked by a hailstorm on the afternoon of the second day, Saturday, May 27th, which forced Neko Case and her band off stage, and threatened to shut down the show
Edited sentence: After the music started again, both Ben Harper and The Flaming Lips gave impassioned performances that thrilled the soaked crowd.The 2006 event was marked by a ferocious hailstorm on the afternoon of the second day, Saturday, May 27th, which forced Neko Case and her band off stage, and threatened to shut down the show