Original sentence: Sherman marched 60,000 Union troops over 650 miles in less than 100 days, and lost only 600 men along the way.The march introduced a new concept to the already brutal Civil War: total war, where the distinctions between combatants and civilians is blurred
Edited sentence: "glory, glory, halelujia"....Sherman marched 60,000 Yankee troops over 650 miles in less than 100 days, and lost only 600 men along the way.Sherman's march introduced a new concept to the already brutal Civil War: total war, where the neccesary distinction between combatants and civilians is ignored, resulting in the slaughter of innocent men, women, and children alike.the war of northern agression was brought to an end through the ruthless acts of a murderer.yet the yankees still call him a hero