Original sentence: It must be acknowledged that many of Szasz's arguments, especially those pertaining to the proliferative labeling as "mental illness" a vast array of unacceptable or unusual behaviors, have been appropriated by more traditional psychiatrists and others in a variety of mental health fields..
Edited sentence: " It is obvious Dr.It must be acknowledged that many of Szasz's arguments, especially those pertaining to the proliferative labeling as "mental illness" a vast array of unacceptable or unusual behaviors, have been appropriated by more traditional psychiatrists and others in a variety of mental health fields.Meneire or Kawasaki did not need the approval of their peers before definitively describing their disease.Szasz was clearly referring to the need for agreement, consensus, before a mental illness is defined.Szasz was not just referring to symptom clusters.The common cold has a cluster of symptoms, runny nose, fever, coughing etc.There was no need for consensus, as in the meetings to expand the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) published by the American Psychiatric Association.They reported their results in medical journals and it was defined.This retrenching of mental health orthodoxy without crediting Szasz has been discussed in several publications, including Richard E