Original sentence: Born in New York City, New York, Hilton is the oldest of four children of Richard Hilton and Kathy Richards.She attended her freshman year of high school in Rancho Mirage, California at the Marywood-Palm Valley School and her sophomore and junior years of high school at the Dwight School in New York, but dropped out, and eventually earned a GED
Edited sentence: Born in New York City, New York, Hilton is the oldest of four children and is a spoiled rich brat  of Richard Hilton and Kathy Richards.She attended her freshman year of high school in Rancho Mirage, California at the Marywood-Palm Valley School and her sophomore and junior years of high school at the Dwight School in New York, but dropped out because of how dumb she is and can't handle life even though it was handed to her on a silver plate, and eventually earned a GED