Original sentence: Even though Solid HarmoniE was not officially over until late 2002 or early 2003, Onslow started working on her solo record from a lot earlier than that and her first solo single "Wake up" was released on January 15, 2002 released by Logic Records/BMG, composed along with DJ/producer Guido and remixed by Johnny Vicious.Onslow has moved to the United States of America after getting married to her boyfriend, an American policeman, and is now working hard to make a name for herself as a solo artist in America
Edited sentence: Beki has migrated to America after getting married to her boy friend, an American cop and is now working hard to make a name for herself as a solo artist and realize an American Dream.Even though Solid HarmoniE was not officially over until late 2002 or early 2003, Beki started working on her solo record from a lot earlier than that and her first solo single "Wake up" was released on January 15, 2002 released by Logic Records/BMG, composed along with DJ/producer Guido and remixed by Johnny Vicious