Original sentence: - The Case for the Soldier- A Commentary on Critics Scribner's Magazine 1935.In 1917 Thomason married Leda Bass and had one son, John "Jack" W Thomason III born in 1920.John Thomason or Lieutenant Colonel John Williamson Thomason Jr born in Huntsville, Texas 28 February, 1893-died 12 March, 1944 in San Diego, California was a United States Marine, author and illustrator of several books and magazine stories.Marine Corps on 6 April 1917 and served until his death in 1944.Serving as a Marine in World War II, Jack died in an airplane crash in Calcutta, India in 1947.The Army, as the buffalo and the Indian, subsists remotely on reservations.The professional soldiers and sailors of this country are a singularly self-contained and inoffensive group, connected in no way with any one religion or caste, but constituting in fact a cross section of the whole population.The son of a physican and the grandson of Confederate General James Longstreet's chief of staff Major TJ Goree, John W.Thomason enlisted in the U
Edited sentence: (Huntsville, Texas, 28 February, 1893 - 12 March, 1944, San Diego, California) was a Lieutenant Colonel in the United States Marine Corps, as well as an author and illustrator of several books and magazine stories.In 1917 Thomason married Leda Bass; they had one son, John "Jack" W Thomason III, born in 1920.John William Thomason, Jr.Serving as a Marine in World War II, Jack died in an airplane crash in Calcutta, India, in 1947.The son of a physican and the grandson of Confederate General James Longstreet's chief of staff Major TJ Goree, John Thomason enlisted in the United States Marine Corps on 6 April 1917 and served until his death in 1944