Original sentence: A few months prior to the baby's birth, Maldonado began to work with an adoption attorney to place the child with Matthew Capobianco and Melanie Duncan Capobianco of James Island, South Carolina.Although Oklahoma law requires that an Indian tribe be informed if an Indian child is to be adopted, Maldonado's attorney misspelled Brown's name and provided an incorrect date of birth.As a result, the tribe was not notified about the proposed adoption.Brown and Maldonado became engaged to be married in December 2008, and Maldonado informed Brown that she was pregnant in January 2009.Brown served in the United States Army at Fort Sill, Oklahoma.Christina Maldonado was a non-Indian single mother of two.Dusten Brown is a member of the Cherokee Nation.In May 2009, Maldonado broke off the engagement by text message and cut all communications with Brown.On learning that Maldonado was pregnant, Brown began to press her to go ahead and marry him, and refused to provide any financial support until after the two had married
Edited sentence: A few months prior to the baby's birth, Maldonado began to work with an adoption attorney who arranged for her to place the child with Matthew Capobianco and Melanie Duncan Capobianco of James Island, South Carolina.Although Oklahoma law requires that an Indian tribe be informed if an Indian child is to be adopted, someone involved in the case misspelled Brown's name and provided an incorrect date of birth.As a result, the tribe was not alerted to the proposed adoption.Brown and Maldonado got engaged in December 2008 and one month later Maldonado told Brown she was pregnant.Brown met Christina Maldonado, a non-Indian woman.Dusten Brown, a member of the Cherokee Nation, served in the United States Army at Fort Sill, Oklahoma.In May 2009, Maldonado broke off the engagement by sending Brown a text message and cut all communications with Brown.She had two other children who were living with her parents.When he learned Maldonado was pregnant, Brown wanted to marry her but refused to provide any financial support until they were married