Original sentence: On September 5, 2017, under the efforts and persistence of many parties, the Korean disability classification system was finally cancelled
Edited sentence: A vivid example is enough to explain the irrationality of the grading system.Although in this case, he is still not qualified to have a person who looks after him at any time, because his disability level is three, there are no compliance and two conditions.Finally, on September 5, 2017, under the efforts and persistence of many parties, the Korean disability classification system was finally cancelled.He can do simple labour, but he can't pick up his rice bowl because of illness.He cannot use his right side of the body.His family and other activists believe his death is related to the grading system.In many medical institutions, if patients are classified as one level, they will not be valued, so many patients hope that they can win more than three levels.Song Guk-Hyun has been suffering from hemiplegia from his 3 years old because of spondylitis.Song Guk-Hyun, 52, was burned to death in a fire at home because he could not escape the wheelchair