Original sentence: Researchers participate in international conferences and are published in professional publications.The location’s proximity to the University and the Technion are said to indicate the Labs’ ties with the academic world.Today, the IBM Haifa Research Lab describes itself as having the highest number of employees in Israel’s hi-tech industry who hold doctorate degrees in science, electrical engineering, mathematics, or related fields
Edited sentence: Researchers participate actively in international conferences and are frequently published in professional publications.The location’s proximity to the University and the Technion are a clear indication of the Labs’ strong ties with the academic world.Today, the IBM Haifa Research Lab boasts the highest number of employees in Israel’s hi-tech industry who hold doctorate degrees in science, electrical engineering, mathematics, or related fields