Original sentence: Born to John Ernest Phythian and Ada Crompton Prichard in Manchester, her father was a solicitor, local politician and a lay preacher, with a great interest in the arts and education.Dame Dr Mabel Tylecote, née Phythian, DBE (4 February 1896 - 1987) was a British Labour Party politician, activist and adult educationist from Manchester, England.The League had its own publishing company, Inside Nazi Germany, and a major artist, John Heartfield, producing most of its illustrative material
Edited sentence: Born on 4 February 1896 to John Ernest Phythian and Ada Prichard Phythian, née Crompton, her father was a Manchester solicitor, local politician and a lay preacher, with a great interest in the arts and education.Dame Dr.Mabel Phythian grew up in a background of concern with adult education, with cultural opportunities for the population at large, and with voluntary work in the community, all of them major factors in her own life and career.Mabel Tylecote, née Phythian, DBE (1896 - 1987) was a British Labour Party politician, activist and adult educationist from Manchester, England.The League had its own publishing company,Inside Nazi Germany, and a major artist, John Heartfield, producing most of its illustrative material