Original sentence: Due to her small size Miss Dyris was discouraged about studying for a career in opera.In 1925 the actress appeared in White Collars.Jacqueline's most noted movies are The Man Who Saw Tomorrow (1922).She had recently married actor John Gilbert.The setting was a flat in Harlem.This was a sophisticated comedy-drama which was the first talking motion picture for Claire.and The Godless Girl (1929)
Edited sentence: Due to her demure size Miss Dyris was discouraged from studying for a career in opera.In 1925 the actress appeared in the stage play,White Collars.Jacqueline's most noted movies are The Man Who Saw Tomorrow (1922) and The Godless Girl(1929).The setting was a flat in Harlem,NY.This was a sophisticated comedy-drama which was the first talking motion picture for Claire who had recently married actor John Gilbert