Original sentence: As a sign of gratitude, several months before his birth, France was dedicated by his father, Louis XIII, to the Virgin Mary, who, many believed, had interceded for the perceived miracle.However, the text of the dedication does not mention the royal pregnancy and birth as one of its reasons and, also, Louis XIII himself is said to have expressed his skepticism with regards to the miracle after his son's birth.Louis-Dieudonné also received the title Premier fils de France ("First Son of France") as well as the more traditional title Dauphin
Edited sentence: As a sign of gratitude, several months before his birth, France was dedicated by his father, Louis XIII, to the Virgin Mary, who, many believed, had interceded for the perceived miracle; however, the text of the dedication does not mention the royal pregnancy and birth as one of its reasons.He also received the title Premier fils de France ("First Son of France") as well as the more traditional title Dauphin