Original sentence: Amnesty International considers worrysome the high unemployment -- 12.9% in 2005 -- among people belonging to ethnic minorities, in contrast to only 5.3% among ethnic Estonians during the same period.However, Amnesty International has expressed concern that ethnic Russians living in Estonia may face official discrimination and enjoy limited linguistic and minority rights.The European Centre for Minority Issues has also criticised what is sees as Estonia's harsh treatment of its Russian population, and has condemned the ostensible lack of legal protection offered to minorities
Edited sentence: Amnesty noted that Russians in Estonia face de facto exclusion from the labour market and educational system and limited possibilities in minority languages in higher education.However, Amnesty International has declared that Russians living in Estonia face official discrimination and enjoy very limited linguistic and minority rights.The European Centre for Minority Issues has also criticised what is sees as Estonia's harsh treatment of its Russian population, and has condemned the lack of legal protection offered to minorities