Original sentence: The Ewenny River () is a small river in south Wales with a length of ten miles or sixteen kilometres.There is no sufficient way to cross the rivers from the northern bank; a bridge to the Penybont works is inaccessible, and the next bridge is many miles upstream
Edited sentence: It must be noted that this is very frustrating for those trying to cross the rivers from the northern bank, because there is no sufficient way to cross; a bridge to the Penybont works is inaccessible, and the next bridge is many miles upstream.The Ewenny River() is a small river in south Wales with a length of ten miles or sixteen kilometres