Original sentence: He has also won the Kamal Patra Award for the Young Businessman for the year 2002 and also bagged several awards including Yuva Prathiba Award (2004), All India RAPA Award (2003) and vivekananda award for his contributions to the Tourism and education sector
Edited sentence: He is also the proud winner of the prestigious Kamal Patra Award for the Young Businessman for the year 2002 and also bagged several awards including Yuva Prathiba Award (2004), All India RAPA Award (2003) and vivekananda award for his prestigious contributions to the Tourism and education sector