Original sentence: He successfully completed his studies and entered the civil service in Diyarbakir influenced by an ideology similar to the PKK, Abdullah Öcalan became an active member of the Democratic Cultural Associations of the East, an association promoting the rights of the Kurdish people
Edited sentence: He successfully completed his studies and entered the civil service in Diyarbakir.Influenced by the situation of the Kurdish people, who were denied the right to live accoring to their own identity by the Turkish state, Abdullah Öcalan became an active member of the Democratic Cultural Associations of the East, an association promoting the rights of the Kurdish people