Original sentence: According to some accounts, there were no Iraqi forces nearby only Bedoin.As Bravo Two Zero retreated, the two Bedoin men reportedly fired warning shots over their heads.The goatherd told his father and grandfather -- both former Iraqi Special Forces members -- of the SAS soldiers' position.The poorly-equipped patrol then attempted a gruelling march of nearly 300 km (over 186 miles) to exfiltrate northwest to the Syrian border
Edited sentence: As the patrol retreated, these two men fired OVER their heads.It is true there were some Bedouin near where Bravo 2-0 were based, but there were no Iraqi forces to be seen near them.The Iraqi army had no reason to be in this vacinity, in fact the nearest Iraqi column was a good three hours away.The patrol then attempted a gruelling march of nearly 300 km (over 186 miles) to exfiltrate northwest to the Syrian border.The young lad did, indeed, come to investigate, however the only people he reported this to were his father and grandfather, both of whom were ex-special forces