Original sentence: During his first four months with Málaga, Demichelis was sent off twice, but also started in all the matches he was available, being essential – as another January 2011 signee, Júlio Baptista – as the club eventually avoided relegation
Edited sentence: During his first four months with Málaga, Demichelis was sent off twice, but also started in all the matches he was available, being essential - as another January 2011 signee, Júlio Baptista - as the club eventually avoided relegation.His FIFA World Cup 2010 profile describes him as a commanding presence who is "strong in the air and also possesses the ability to time covering tackles to perfection"