Original sentence: (as listed on the Roll of Honour Britain at war).Nambal  also known as Nambel, Nambal Shareef, is a village located on the outskirts of the small town Doberan Kalan in the Kallar Syedan Tehsil of  Rawalpindi district of Pakistan.Nambal in line with Rajput tradition and being part of Rawalpindi District has provided many soldiers for the British army namely: JAHAN DAD of nambel   Sepoy,19007.The Ranials of this village can trace their ancestry back to the Muslim Janjua Rajpoot's  who were a war-like clan and till this day are addressed as raja
Edited sentence: 'Nambal  also known as Nambel, Nambal Shareef is a village located on the outskirts of the small town Doberan Kalan in the Kallar Syedan Tehsil of  Rawalpindi district of Pakistan.(as listed on the Roll of Honour Britain at war) but to mention a few.- - Raja Ibrahim the famous poet of potowahar is related to this family.- - Raja Irshad Hussain who is a famous poet in the UK is the son in law of Raja Ali Asghar.- - Raja Mohammad Irshad of Islamabad who is also related to this family is the owner of Nambal Poultry farms.- - Raja Rabnawaz well known personality of Maniyanda is the first cousin of Raja Mushtaq Hussain and Raja Ali Asghar.- - Some of the third generation of the UK-migrated Ranial Rajas have achieved high levels of education and become Barristers, Doctors, Pharmacists, Chemical Engineers, Lecturers & Technology Consultants.- His sons Raja Mushtaq Hussain and Raja Ali Asghar have settled in the UK whereas his other son Doctor Raja Liaquat Ali has settled in Canada.His youngest son Master Raja Akhtar Ali is still settled in Nambal.Nambal in line with Rajput tradition and being part of Rawalpindi District has provided many brave soldiers for the British army namely: JAHAN DAD of nambel   Sepoy,19007.Subedar Raja Zaman Ali of Nambal was a well known local personality.The Ranials of this village can trace there ancestry back to the Muslim Janjua Rajpoot's  who were a war-like clan and till this day hold high office and are addressed as raja