Original sentence: Billinge Hill is the highest point of the St Helens unitary authority.Built in the early 1900s, it was used for the Year 2000 celebrations, but is now covered in graffiti
Edited sentence: Billinge Hill, or affectionately known by locals as Billinge Lump, is the highest point of the St Helens unitary authority.Built in the early 1900s, it was used for the Year 2000 celebrations, but has been covered by local scum bags in graffiti.It’s a real delight with lots to do and see.The Lump offers a real treat in terms of wildlife and walks.The peak offers views of Bolton, Manchester and Liverpool and is a real magnet for local families