Original sentence: Carson died at Fort Lyon, Colorado, of an aortic aneurysm on May 23, 1868.His adventurous life has been described in many biographies and fictional works
Edited sentence: He died at Fort Lyon, Colorado, of an aortic aneurysm on May 23, 1868.He was a widely respected celebrity during his early years as a mountain man, and was made famous through his deeds of selfless heroism and gallantry described in newspapers, dime novels, and other published materials