Original sentence: Alex and Brett began at the age of 16 to desire to serve God in way completely counter-cultural.Not long after they were finding themselves being interviewed,  well viewed across the on-line world and gaining popularity around the teenage circles of America and the world.Soon after, they were starting a blog called "the Rebelution".The Rebelution is by definition, a rebellion against low expectations set by the secular world.Though God closed the door on their original idea to be movie producers, he had a bigger plan than they could even imagine.com, they were higher on the teen sales list than Twilight
Edited sentence: Alex and Brett began at the age of 16 to desire to serve God in way competely counter-cultural.God opened up many oportunities.Learning from this, all are motivated to pursue excelence in all that they do, and encourage the teens in their lives toward a higher calling.Not long after; however, they where finding themselves being interviewed,  well viewed across the on-line world and gaining popularity around the teenage circles of America and the world.Soon after, they where starting a blog called "the Rebelution".The Rebelution is by definition, a rebelion against low expectations set by the secular world.The saying "when God closes a door, He opens a window" was very true in their case.This was the case for these twin brothers.Though God closed the door on their original idea to be movie producers, he had a bigger plan then they could even amagine.com, they where higher on the teen sales list than Twilight