Original sentence: The Gaza flotilla raid, code named, according to different translations, Operation Sea Breeze or Operation Sky Winds by the Israel Defense Forces (IDF), was the boarding and seizure of six ships of the Gaza Freedom Flotilla in May 2010 that resulted in the deaths of nine passengers
Edited sentence: The Gaza flotilla raid, code named, according to different translations, Operation Sea Breeze or Operation Sky Winds by the Israel Defense Forces (IDF), was the boarding and seizure of six ships of the Gaza Freedom Flotilla in May 2010 that resulted in the deaths of nine civilians