Original sentence: 1 August – Monsignor James Horan, Parish Priest of Knock, County Mayo & Builder of Knock Airport, dies suddenly aged 75 in Lourdes.2 June – Fire destroys Loreto Convent, St.June (date unknown) – Mick Flavin becomes a new star to country music or a King Of Country.Stephen's Green; six nuns die in the blaze
Edited sentence: 1 August - Monsignor James Horan, Parish Priest of Knock, County Mayo & Builder of Knock Airport, dies suddenly aged 75 in Lourdes.2 June - Fire destroys Loreto Convent, St.June (date unknown) - Mick Flavin becomes a new star to country music or a King Of Country.Stephen's Green; six nuns die tragically in the blaze