Original sentence: This is called being "multiple", or "polywere", by some people.This raises a question whether an automatic diagnosis of otherkin as clinical lycanthropes or schizotypals would necessarily be accurate or appropriate, since clinical mental disorders are often characterized by various maladaptive behaviors.While it is true that some otherkin experience mental illness, a number of otherkin carry on stable, functional lives
Edited sentence: This is called being "multiple" by some.While it is true that some otherkin experience mental illness, a number of otherkin carry on stable, functional lives, which would make a diagnosis of otherkin as clinical lycanthropes or schizotypals unnecessary (and, quite possibly, incorrect, as mental disorders are usually characterized by maladaptive behavior)