Original sentence: A 1967 article in Time Magazine asserts that the foundation of the hippie movement finds historical precedent as far back as the counterculture of the Ancient Greeks, espoused by philosophers like Diogenes of Sinope and the Cynics.The article also claims that the Hippies were influenced by the ideas of Jesus Christ, Hillel the Elder, Buddha, St
Edited sentence: Hippies were also influenced by the ideas of Jesus Christ, Hillel the Elder, Buddha, St.The foundation of the hippie movement finds historical precedent as far back as the counterculture of the Ancient Greeks, espoused by philosophers like Diogenes of Sinope and the Cynics