Original sentence: By cutting the bandages, Henry splits open the baby's body and exposes its vital organs.Henry goes back into his apartment, takes a pair of scissors, and cuts open the baby's bandages, which turn out to be part of its flesh (or simply what is holding all of its organs together).In a dream sequence, Henry’s head detaches from his body, sinks into a growing pool of blood on a tile floor, falls from the sky, and, finally, lands on an empty street and cracks open.The planet explodes, and through the hole in it we see the Man in the Planet struggling with a series of levers.These include bizarre encounters with the Lady in the Radiator (Laurel Near), a woman with grotesquely distended cheeks who appears in his radiator doing song and dance routines; visions of the ominous Man in the Planet (Jack Fisk); and a sexual liaison with his neighbor, the Beautiful Girl Across the Hall (Judith Anna Roberts)
Edited sentence: By cutting the swaddling, Henry splits open the baby's body and exposes its vital organs.Henry goes back into his apartment, takes a pair of scissors, and cuts open the baby's swaddling, which turn out to be part of its flesh (or simply what is holding all of its organs together).Henry's head sinks into a growing pool of blood on a tile floor, falls from the sky, and, finally, lands on an empty street and cracks open.In a dream sequence, Henry’s baby's head comes up from under Henry's head, popping it off of his neck, and replaces it.The planet explodes, and through the hole in it we see the Man in the Planet struggling with a series of levers which sparks shoot from them when he pulls them, visibly burning his face.These include bizarre encounters with the Lady in the Radiator (Laurel Near), a woman with grotesquely distended cheeks who appears in his radiator first doing a dance routine in which she shuffles and stomps sperm-resembling creatures that fall, and then later singing a song that goes "In Heaven, everything is fine/ You've got your good things, and I've got mine" (with subtle variations); visions of the ominous Man in the Planet (Jack Fisk); and a sexual liaison with his neighbor, the Beautiful Girl Across the Hall (Judith Anna Roberts)