Original sentence: In 2008, TELUS acquired Emergis, a Canadian Health e-Business company, at $8.25 CAD per share, granting TELUS 94% of available stock on the initial bid run
Edited sentence: In 2008, TELUS acquired Emergis, a Canadian Health e-Business company, for $8.25 CAD per share (a premium of 17% to Emergis’ average closing price on the Toronto Stock Exchange over the past 30 days as of November 29, 2007) granting TELUS 94% of available stock on the initial bid run