Original sentence: A group of girls said that Kimi has more fun with the boys and tells her that if you have a pretty face, people are more willing to forgive you.Kimi, who suspected that herself, became encouraged to be "the Kimi [she] is today".She once told the Student Council members that she became the way she was just before she entered middle school
Edited sentence: She once tells the other student council members that she was encouraged to become the way she is by some girls once saying that if you have a pretty face, people are more willing to forgive you