Original sentence: He was born on september 24 in New Mexico United states in 1915.In early July of 1947, a UFO crashed in Roswell, New Mexico.Moses Burrola has been dead for many years, but before he passed away, he discussed with his wife that unforgettable day that he was part of the four man team who picked up Montoya at Hangar P-3
Edited sentence: He was born on September 24 in New Mexico United states in 1915.In early July 1947, a UFO crashed in Roswell, New Mexico.Moses Burrola has been dead for many years, but before he died, he discussed with his wife that unforgettable day that he was part of the four man team who picked up Montoya at Hangar P-3