Original sentence: Glodwick is a multi-ethnic residential area to the south of the Oldham town centre.The area has a large British Pakistani community but there are also many Bangladeshi and African residents living in the area aswell
Edited sentence: Glodwick is a multi-ethnic residential area in the south of the Metropolitan Borough of Oldham, home particularly to a large community of people of Pakistani heritage.There is also a considerable but much smaller community of people of Bangladeshi and African heritage