Original sentence: Complete state of the art environmental and energy systems, the final development is likely to consist of a Marriot hotel, apartments, green spaces, a niche shopping centre, a public space intended to house Birmingham's historic John F Kennedy memorial and two refurbished cold storage buildings which will be redeveloped as creative industries business incubation and innovation hubs
Edited sentence: Complete state of the art environmental and energy systems, the final development is likely to consist of a Marriot hotel, apartments, green spaces, a niche shopping centre, a public space intended to house Birmingham's historic John F.Kennedy memorial and two refurbished cold storage buildings which will be redeveloped as creative industries business incubation and innovation hubs