Original sentence: She went to New York to pursue a career in entertainment and started out as a model for toothpaste ads.This was followed by a bit part in the musical comedy Li’l Abner (1959) and the role of a secretary in the comedy/romance Lover Come Back (1961) starring Rock Hudson and Doris Day
Edited sentence: She went to New York City to pursue a career in entertainment and started out as a model for toothpaste ads.This was followed by a bit part in the musical comedy Li'l Abner (1959) and the role of a secretary in the comedy/romance Lover Come Back (1961) starring Rock Hudson and Doris Day