Original sentence: Around 1680, the French physicist Denis Papin, with the help of Gottfried Leibniz, built a steam digester for softening bones, in other words, he invented the first pressure cooker.In 1663, he published designs for, and installed, a steam-powered engine for pumping water at Raglan Castle in Vauxhall.The person who is regarded to have invented the machinery which was to start the Industrial Revolution was Edward Somerset, 2nd Marquess of Worcester
Edited sentence: In 1663 he published designs for, and installed, a steam-powered engine for pumping water at Raglan Castle in Vauxhall.In about 1680 the French physicist Denis Papin, with the help of Gottfried Leibniz, built a steam digester for softening bones, in other words, he invented the first pressure cooker.Probably the person with the best single claim to have invented the machinery which was to start the Industrial Revolution was Edward Somerset, 2nd Marquess of Worcester.These individuals proposed practical ideas which were never realised or built upon