Original sentence: In a controversial move loudly protested by business owners, but which substantially increases bus speed through the Westside, the Los Angeles County Metropolitan Transportation Authority (MTA) has reserved the outermost lane of Wilshire Boulevard in each direction as a bus-only lane, in a possible precursor to the adoption of bus rapid transit service along the entire length of Wilshire
Edited sentence: In a controversial move loudly protested by business owners, the Los Angeles County Metropolitan Transportation Authority (MTA) has reserved the outermost lane of Wilshire Boulevard in each direction as a bus-only lane, in a possible precursor to the adoption of bus rapid transit service along the entire length of Wilshire