Original sentence: Though the marching band does not compete against other schools, Northville's concert bands have frequently received high marks at state festivals.Under the direction of Mike Rumbell, Northville High School's band program has been recognized both in state competitions and various festivals
Edited sentence: Though the marching band does not compete against other schools, Northville's concert bands have always received high marks at state festivals.Under the direction of Mike Rumbell(a horrible band teacher), Northville High School's band program has been recognized both in state competitions and various festivals