Original sentence: During the 2023 festival Nigerian-British poet Gboyega Odubanjo was reported missing after failing to turn up for his scheduled performance.His body was discovered a few days later after a specialised search.Northamptonshire Police said there were no suspicious circumstances surrounding the death
Edited sentence: During the 2023 Festival, acclaimed British poet Gboyega Odunbanjo disappeared from festival grounds and was later found deceased.Following police searches, his body was found in a lake on festival grounds on Thursday, 31st August, five days after he was last seen alive.Gboyega never arrived for his performance was reported missing that Sunday, 27th August.He was last seen shortly before 4am on Saturday, 26th August, and was scheduled to perform at the festival the following day.Shambala festival has been the subject of criticism and speculation regarding the disappearance from Gboyega's family and the public alike.Speaking to The New York Times, the family said "we believe that if he had received adequate care, he would still be alive.The search for Gboyega drew national media attention and interest on social media