Original sentence: David was involved with the creation of the NHL colors line and supports them publicly, Aaron who works in advertisement has helped out with PR work and marketing...In 2013 Jaime, David and their friends Melissa and Aaron Ravo started a nail polish line called Chrome Girl Nails.The two wives run the day-to-day operations while their husbands help with the overall business
Edited sentence: David was involved with the creation of the NHL colors line and supports them publicly, Aaron who works in advertisement has helped out with PR work and such.In 2013 Jaime, David and their long time friends Melissa and Aaron Ravo started a nail polish line called Chrome Girl Nails The two wives run the booming business that has taken Hollywood and the rest of the world by storm