Original sentence: " It was reported in the ODOT's employee newspaper, TranScript, that when 41 sperm whales beached nearby in 1979, state parks officials burned and buried them.If the sand isn't deep enough, they are relocated to another beach
Edited sentence: " When 41 sperm whales beached nearby in 1979, state parks officials burned and buried them.If the sand is not deep enough, they are relocated to another beach