Original sentence: At Cambridge, he had been a friend of Julian Bell, the English poet who was killed while driving an ambulance in that conflict.Burgess and the other members of the "Five" were divided with regard to the impact of the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact, which compromised their hard left ideals
Edited sentence: At Cambridge, he had been a friend of Julian Bell, the English poet who was tragically killed driving an ambulance in that conflict.He, and apparently the other members of the "Five" were also very divided about the impact of the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact, which compromised their hard left ideals