Original sentence: Berlin - The Downfall 1945 has encountered criticism in Russia
Edited sentence: Beevor's treatment of this issue was well-sourced and not especially controversial outide Russia.Berlin - The Downfall 1945 has encountered strong criticism in Russia.This criticism centres on the book's discussion of widespread atrocities committed by the Red Army against German civilians - in particular, extremely widespread rape of German women and also female Russian forced labourers, both before and after the end of the war