Original sentence: Opinion weblogger Felix Salmon wrote that by 2014, Netflix couldn't "afford the content that its subscribers most want to watch" and lost several contracts for streaming movies, to the point where, according to journalist Megan McArdle, "its movie library is no longer actually a good substitute for a good movie rental place"
Edited sentence: By 2014, Netflix couldn't "afford the content that its subscribers most want to watch" and lost several contracts for streaming movies, to the point where, according to journalist Megan McArdle, "its movie library is no longer actually a good substitute for a good movie rental place"