Original sentence: Among Steinbeck's friends are some of the city's more colorful characters, including Ed Ricketts, a marine biologist, and Bruce Ariss, artist and theatre enthusiast who desigened and built the Wharf Theater
Edited sentence: Among Steinbeck's friends are some of the city's more colorful characters, including Ed Ricketts, a marine biologist, and Bruce Ariss, artist and theatre enthusiast who designed and built the Wharf Theater