Original sentence: In 1909, with statehood appearing eminent, Munds struck a deal with the Western Federation of Miners were the labor union would support woman's suffrage in exchange for the woman's organization's support in labor issues
Edited sentence: In 1909, with statehood appearing eminent, Munds struck a deal with the Western Federation of Miners in which the labor union would support woman's suffrage in exchange for the woman's organization's support in labor issues