Original sentence: In 2016 there were approximately 8,000 migrant deaths, with about 63% of deaths occurring within the Mediterranean.Many undocumented immigrants are migrants who originally arrive in a country lawfully but overstay their authorized residence (overstaying a visa).Some undocumented immigrants seek to live with loved ones, such as a spouse or other family members.Undocumented immigrants are not impoverished by the standards of their home countries
Edited sentence: Illegal aliens are not impoverished by the standards of their home countries.In 2016 there were approximately 8,000 illegal alien deaths, with about 63% of deaths occurring within the Mediterranean.Many illegal aliens are migrants who originally arrive in a country lawfully but overstay their authorized residence (overstaying a visa).Some illegal aliens seek to live with loved ones, such as a spouse or other family members