Original sentence: Pardeep was born in a Jat family at  Rindhana, Sonepat, Haryana where he started playing kabaddi.Soon he become the sensation in the field of Kabaddi
Edited sentence: At age of 16 while playing a regional tournament he attracted Kabaddi legends like Randhir Singh Sherawat and Manjeet Chhilar by his talent and skills.He started playing Kabaddi firstly under the guidance of his brother who is also a Kabaddi player.He was enthusiastic about the game since his childhood because kabaddi was a popular sport in his village.Later he was drafted by Bengaluru Bulls whose coach was Randhir Singh Sherawat and Manjeet Chhilar was captain.Pardeep was born in a Jat family in Rindhana,Sonepat,Haryana