Original sentence: After successfully completing her tour with the USAF Thunderbirds in November 2007, after approximately 140 performances, Major Malachowski served as Deputy Chief of the Air Force Warfare Center Commander's Action Group at Nellis Air Force Base, Nevada, from November 2007 to June 2008.Malachowski is rated a Senior Pilot with more than 2,100 flying hours, including more than 1,000 hours in the F-15E
Edited sentence: After successfully completing her tour with the USAF Thunderbirds in November 2007, including approximately 140 performances, Malachowski served as Deputy Chief of the Air Force Warfare Center Commander's Action Group at Nellis Air Force Base, Nevada, from to June 2008