Original sentence: As of the end of 2003, ETA had killed 817 people in the name of their political struggle, 339 of which were not members of any armed or police service.ETA is considered by Spain, France, the European Union and the United States to be a terrorist organization.Euskadi Ta Askatasuna, or ETA (IPA: [ˈɛːta]), is an armed Basque separatist organisation that seeks to create an independent socialist state for the Basque people, separate from Spain and France, the countries in which Basque-populated areas currently lie
Edited sentence: As of the end of 2003, ETA had killed 817 people in the name of their political struggle, 339 of which were not members of any armed or police service, including civilians and children which is why it is considered by Spain, France, the European Union and the United States to be a terrorist organisation.Euskadi Ta Askatasuna, or ETA (IPA: [ˈɛːta]), is a Basque terrorist organisation that seeks to create an independent socialist state for the Basque people, separate from Spain and France, the countries in which Basque-populated areas currently lie