Original sentence: After Savtiri ji's death, in her memory Panditji had built "Savitri Nikunj"(an exotic garden, with indegenious and rare plants and trees)  at Raj Bhawan of Bhopal.He was a strict but good father and a loving husband, but above all he was a true Indian and patriotic freedom fighter.He was also appointed as a Governor of Orissa and Madhya Pradesh in 30 April 1980 to 14 May 1984.His cremation took place at Beri,Distt [[Jhajjar], State Haryana.Panditji was a family person.Savitri Sharma was a supporting wife, humble home maker, marvellous mother and above all source of insipirataion and constant support to Panditji.Sharma was popularly known as Panditji.Shri B.Shri Bhagwat Dayal Sharma was the first Chief Minister of Haryana of Independent India
Edited sentence: After his wife Savtitri's death, Panditji had built in her memory "Savitri Nikunj", an exotic garden, with indigenious and rare plants and trees, at Raj Bhawan of Bhopal.He was Governor of Orissa and Madhya Pradesh from 30 April 1980 to 14 May 1984.His cremation took place at Beri, Jhajjar, Haryana.Shri Bhagwat Dayal Sharma (died 1992), popularly known as Panditji, was the first Chief Minister of Haryana of Independent India