Original sentence: Arundel Lido is situated in the town of Arundel within the South Downs National Park.The golden age of lidos in the United Kingdom was in the 1930s, when outdoor swimming became popular, and 169 were built across the UK as recreational facilities by local councils
Edited sentence: Arundel Lido is situated in the picturesque town of Arundel within the South Downs National Park.The golden age of lidos in the United Kingdom was in the 1930s, when outdoor swimming became  popular, and 169 were built across the UK as recreational facilities by local councils