Original sentence: "Some of the problem is in how he characterizes news reports.- David Corn, "When 9/11 Conspiracy Theories Go Bad".- Norman Solomon.Columnist Divid Corn has also criticized the methodology of Ruppert, and dismissed the idea that conspiracy theorizing is useful: "In fact, out-there conspiracy theorizing serves the interests of the powers-that-be by making their real transgressions seem tame in comparison.Columnist Norman Solomon has argured that Ruppert has a flawed analytical model.His critics claim he is a conspiracy theorist.Ruppert graduated from UCLA in 1973 and became a narcotics investigator for the LAPD.The paper reported on the claim, but that doesn't mean the claim is true.These citations can be narrowly factual yet presented in a misleading way.Yes, such--and--such newspaper reported that thus-and-so claim was made by so-and-so
Edited sentence: He graduated from UCLA in 1973 and became a narcotics investigator for the LAPD