Original sentence: Animal rights groups protested, citing the declining shark population in global waters.Disney plans to serve shark fin soup, a traditional Chinese delicacy, at wedding banquets.In June 2005, Disney removed shark's fin soup from its menu, and provided leaflets about shark conservation to these clients.They still offer the soup if ther clients insist on having it served at their wedding banquet
Edited sentence: Disney has stated that shark fin soup, a traditional Chinese delicacy, would be served to guests of wedding banquets.In June 2005, Disney reacted by taking shark fin soup off the menu, and only offering soup made from fins landed whole, to clients that insist on having the soup served at their wedding banquet.It will also provide leaflets about shark conservation to these clients.This has brought significant criticism from animal welfare groups in Hong Kong and around the world because of the cruel practise of "finning", where a fisherman cuts the fins from a live shark then throws the animal back into the sea where, unable to swim or breathe properly, it slowly dies