Original sentence: Another running gag is when speaking to either Daisy or Rose on the telephone, she asks them to tell Onslow (Daisy's husband, Hyacinth's brother-in-law) to put a shirt on because it makes her nervous if she is talking when Onslow is not suitably dressed
Edited sentence: Another running gag is when speaking to either Daisy or Rose on the telephone, she asks them to tell Onslow (Daisy's husband, Hyacinth's brother-in-law, one of the funniest characters in the series) to put a shirt on because it makes her nervous if she is talking when Onslow is not suitably dressed