Original sentence: Meanwhile, after he harvests some fresh honey Hal fights back against a bee who is out for revenge for killing the rest of his hive, and Reese attempts to mail himself to China in a crate, and Dewey has him convinced that he has been in there for months
Edited sentence: Meanwhile, after he harvests some fresh honey, Hal fights back against a bee who is out for revenge for killing the rest of his hive.Reese attempts to mail himself to China in a crate and Dewey has him convinced that he has been in there for months