Original sentence: A new 'Goals' soccer centre has opened in 2007 and plans are afoot for other innovative leisure attractions.Although not an initial runaway success, Star City's popularity has slowly gained momentum and is attracting many people from outside Birmingham
Edited sentence: A new 'Goals' soccer centre has opened in 2007 and plans are afoot for other innovative leisure attractions early in the New Year.It is widely considered to be the Midlands premier leisure complex offering attractions to individuals, families and groups.Star City's popularity is gaining much momentum and is attracting many people from outside Birmingham