Original sentence: In conservative Christian eschatology, rapture is the name given to an event in which Jesus Christ descends from Heaven, accompanied by the spirits of all the saints of God, both from the pre-incarnation period and after, who have passed on prior to this event, and then the bodily remains of these saints are transported from the Earth to meet the Lord and be rejoined with their corresponding spirits in the air
Edited sentence: In conservative Christian eschatology, rapture is the name given to the event in which Jesus Christ will descend from Heaven, accompanied by the spirits of all the saints of God, both from the pre-incarnation period, as well as after, who have passed on prior to this event, and then the bodily remains of these saints will be transported from the Earth to meet the Lord and be rejoined with their corresponding spirits in the air