Original sentence: Apart from those bands which achieved international success, one of the well known aussie rock bands of the 2000's was Grinspoon.They first achieved success in the music industry a few years ago with their hit "Chemical Heart" and have since recorded a new album which is proving to be popular with teenagers
Edited sentence: Apart from those bands which achieved international sucess, one of the well known aussie rock bands of the 2000's was Grinspoon.They first achieved sucess in the music industry a few years ago with their hit "Chemical Heart" and have since recorded a new album which is proving to also be very sucessful and popular amoung teenagers especially