Original sentence: However, his finished script for The Wizard of Oz was revised by Florence Ryerson and Edgar Allan Woolf, revisions that Langley himself strongly objected to, but which appear in the finished film.Langley lamented the final cut upon first seeing it, but later revised his opinion
Edited sentence: However, his finished script for The Wizard of Oz was somewhat revised by Florence Ryerson and Edgar Allan Woolf, revisions that Langley himself strongly objected to, but which appear in the finished film.Langley is on record as saying that he hated the completed product, an opinion not borne out by the general critical and public consensus.The Wizard of Oz has become one of the best-loved films ever made