Original sentence: He flew eleven missions as an aerial photographer and tail gunner, and he was awarded a Distinguished Flying Cross in 1952.McCarthy was commended by Admiral Chester Nimitz for flying despite an injury.entered World War II, although his judicial office exempted him from compulsory service, McCarthy enlisted as a private in the United States Marine Corps
Edited sentence: McCarthy was commended by Admiral Chester Nimitz for flying despite an injury, but others who served with him told investigators working for his opponents that his injuries (a broken foot) resulted from a shipboard hazing incident.Wartime log entries list eleven missions under McCarthy's name as an aerial photographer and tail gunner, and he was awarded a Distinguished Flying Cross in 1952, although opponents who have investigated McCarthy question the Navy's decision to make the award.entered World War II, although his judicial office exempted him from compulsory service, McCarthy resigned his judgeship and enlisted as a private in the United States Marine Corps