Original sentence: Smith was raised during the Second Great Awakening, a time in United States history where there was a considerable revival of interest in Christianity, in reaction to the more secular Age of Enlightenment which preceded it
Edited sentence: Smith was raised during the Second Great Awakening, a time in United States history where there was a considerable revival of interest in a more invididual and emotionally-charged Christianity, in reaction to the more rational and secular Age of Enlightenment which preceded it