Original sentence: As originally conceived in the early 20th century, secular humanism rejects revealed knowledge, theism-based morality and the supernatural.However, the vast majority of people hold some form of belief in the supernatural or spiritual.The Spiritual Humanism movement is a response to the percieved failure of the original humanist organizations to recruit new membership and address these spiritual needs
Edited sentence: As originally conceived in the early 20th century, humanism rejects the religious traits and needs of the vast majority of the population.Rather than being an oxymoron Spiritual Humanism is a response to the stark failure of the original humanist organizations to grow or recruit any new membership.Recognizing the diminishing influence of humanism and the explosive growth of revelation based religions in American society were catalysts in the formation of the Spiritual Humanist movement