Original sentence: Many alternative medicine practitioners promote various other types of detoxification, such as diet detoxification; the health benefits of dietary detoxification have been questioned by some mainstream health professionals.Other mainstream health professionals have advocated various dietary detoxification practices, including fasting.Sense About Science, a UK-based charitable trust, determined that most commercial products' "detox" claims lack any supporting evidence and can be considered a "waste of money"
Edited sentence: Furthermore, Sense About Science, a UK-based charitable trust determined that most commercial products' "detox" claims lack any supporting evidence and can be considered a "waste of money".Many alternative medicine practitioners promote various other types of detoxification such as "diet detoxification," but there is no evidence that detox diets have any health benefits