Original sentence: After landing on the coast of Egypt, Napoleon and his forces found a hotel to stay in for 4 days.In fact, they enjoyed it so much that they decided to stay an additional 2 nights.In the end there was no Battle of the Pyramids and every one lived happily ever after, except for Napoleon when he was defeated by the Duke of Wellington and when all of his troops froze to death in Russia.Napoleon was eternally grateful to the Egyptian people for this gift.The Egyptian people were kind and hospitable, and decided to give their glorious country to Napoleon as a farewell gift.They all had a great time.They went on sight seeing tours, laughed together, and shared pricelss moments with each other
Edited sentence: 40,000 Mameluk soldiers stayed away from the battle) approximately nine miles (15 km) from the pyramids.After landing on the coast of Egypt, Napoleon's force of 25,000 fought off a force of about 21,000 Mamelukes in the Battle of the Pyramids (appr.All but two of the French vessels were captured or destroyed.He defeated the Mamluk cavalry using a larger version of the common infantry square, with cannons and supplies safely on the inside.His goal of strengthening the French position in the Mediterranean Sea was thus frustrated, but his army nonetheless succeeded in consolidating power in Egypt, although it faced repeated nationalist uprisings.However, during the Battle of the Nile the arriving British fleet under Horatio Nelson managed to slip half of their ships in between the land and the French line, thus attacking from both sides.In all 300 French and approximately 6,000 Egyptians were killed.Napoleon became land-bound.On August 1, the British fleet found these battleships anchored in a strong defensive position in the Bay of Abukir.The French believed that they were open to attack only on one side, the other side being protected by the shore.The ships that had dropped off Napoleon and his army had sailed back to France, but a fleet of ships of the line that had come with them stayed and supported the army along the coast.While the battle on land was a resounding victory for the French, the British navy managed to compensate at sea