Original sentence: Abhay Kumar (; Russian: Абхай Кумар) (also known as Abhay K) is an Indian author, poet, artist and diplomat.His book River Valley to Silicon Valley tries to draw the portrait of a modern young Indian
Edited sentence: Abhay Kumar (; Russian: Абхай Кумар) (also known as Abhay K) is an Indian author, poet, artist and diplomat who represents a dynamic and young new India.His book River Valley to Silicon Valley  tries to draw the portrait of a modern young Indian