Original sentence: Although there is a layer of charcoal, it is associated with the iron works, and the main evidence for slighting of defenses comes from the collapse of an entranceway to the fort.He believed a legion wreaked destruction on the site, butchering men, women, and children, before setting fire to the site and slighting its defenses
Edited sentence: Although there is a layer of charcoal, it is associated with the iron works, and the main evidence for slighting of defences comes from the collapse of an entranceway to the fort.He believed a legion wreaked destruction on the site, butchering men, women, and children, before setting fire to the site and slighting its defences