Original sentence: On 24 April 2005, thousands gathered at the front steps of the Arkansas State Capitol to honor the 33 men who died while serving with the 39th Infantry Brigade in Iraq during Operation Iraqi Freedom II from 2004-2005
Edited sentence: On April 24, 2005, thousands gathered at the front steps of the Arkansas State Capitol to honor the 33 men who died while serving with the 39th Infantry Brigade in Iraq during Operation Iraqi Freedom II from 2004-2005