Original sentence: Lester met his future wife Sumithara in Paris but they did not fall for each other unitl Sumithra returned to Sri Lanka to work as an assistant in Lester's first movie "Rekava".On Mr Keene's insistance returning to Sri Lanka in 1952, Lester joined the Government Film Unit as the assistant to the chief producer, Ralph Keene
Edited sentence: Lester met his future wife Sumithara in Paris but they did not fall for each other until Sumithra returned to Sri Lanka to work as an assistant in Lester's first movie "Rekava".On Mr Keene's insistence returning to Sri Lanka in 1952, Lester joined the Government Film Unit as the assistant to the chief producer, Ralph Keene