Original sentence: Board games, like Chess, Go, Mahjongg, and the like, also have many in-world incarnations.First-Person-Shooter combat is also a popular gaming choice in Second Life, with many in-world military groups battling each other, vying for prestige
Edited sentence: Board games, like chess, Go, and Mahjongg, also have many in-world incarnations.First-person shooter combat is also a popular gaming choice in Second Life, with many in-world military groups battling each other, vying for prestige