Original sentence: Abna al-Balad, is a movement founded in the late sixties by fairly young Palestinians to revive their Palestinian national identity and awakening the same dormant identity of their fellow Palestinians in the areas of Palestine ; The Triangle (al-Muthallath), Galillee (al-jaleel), the Negev (al-Naqab, and the major Palestinian depopulated cities ; Akka (aker), Haifa, Yafa (Jafa), beir Sheba (bier al-Sabia), and other locations.Aljaleel, and al-Naqab, and most of the cities were occupied, destructed and depopulated by Israel in 1947-1950.All the mentioned areas of Palestine were designated to be part of the Palestinian State according to the UN Partition Resolution of 1947.Thus the Palestinians of these areas were ruled directly by Israel for two decades before the occupation of the West Bank, and Gaza (the remaining unoccupied Palestinian territories) in 1967
Edited sentence: Abna al-Balad, is a terroristic movement founded in the late sixties by fairly young Palestinians to revive their Palestinian national identity and awakening the same dormant identity of their fellow Palestinians in the areas of Palestine ; The Triangle (al-Muthallath), Galillee (al-jaleel), the Negev (al-Naqab, and the major Palestinian depopulated cities ; Akka (aker), Haifa, Yafa (Jafa), beir Sheba (bier al-Sabia), and other locations.Aljaleel, and al-Naqab, and most of the cities were freed by Israel in 1947-1950.All the mentioned areas of Palestine were designated to be part of the Palestinian State according to the UN Partition Resolution of 1947, but after War of Israel Independence, started by six arab contries, was annexed by Israel.The population of this area fled to Jordan, Egypt and Lebannon.The remaining polulation got Israeli citizenship.Thus the arabs of these areas were ruled directly by Israel for two decades before the Six Days War 1967.United Nations Committee on the Exercise of the Inalienable Rights of the Palestinian People