Original sentence: She maintains an apartment on the Upper East Side of Manhattan.This is the now infamous building where Pale Male hangs out, and where MTM had an altercation with co-resident Paula Zahn over Zahn's support for the destruction of the hawk's nest on the building
Edited sentence: She maintains an apartment at 927 Fifth Avenue (at East 74th Street) on the Upper East Side of Manhattan.This is the now infamous building where Pale Male hangs out, and where MTM bitch-slapped her co-resident Paula Zahn for evicting this glorious hawk