Original sentence: A prolonged and mostly non-violent struggle for independence, the Indian independence movement, followed, eventually led by Mahatma Gandhi, the father of modern India
Edited sentence: A prolonged and mostly non-violent struggle for independence, the Indian independence movement, followed, eventually led by Mahatma Gandhi, considered by many to be the father of modern India.The development of a large scale 'Aryan' civilization, intermixing with non-Aryan cultures, gave rise to a vast Vedic, proto-Hindu, culture