Original sentence: Allen Klein (born December 18, 1931) is an American businessman and record label executive.Allen Klein then took over from him, as business manager of The Rolling Stones.He is best known (and somewhat notorious) for his tenacious management of rock and roll performers in the 1960s, and the acquisition and control of their works.When "Bittersweet Symphony" was nominated for a Grammy Award, Mick Jagger and Keith Richards were named as the nominees, and not The Verve)
Edited sentence: Again, it is a surprise that the Beatles did not hire a hitman to finish this leech off.Allen Klein (born December 18, 1931) is a horrible American businessman and record label owner.Allen Klein then took over from him, as business manager of The Rolling Stones and procceeded to steal from these lad who had no idea real idea or practical experience about business.He is best known (and somewhat notorious) for his tenacious management of rock and roll performers in the 1960s, and the dubious acquisition, control and exploitation of both the works and the artists.In his book "Stone Alone" Bill Wyman details Klein's theft and mishandling of the band's fortune, rendering the Rolling Stones broke through much of the late sixties and early seventies.It is a wonder the Stones never hired a hitman to finish him off.It was later revealed Klein had stolen five million pounds from the Beatles.Klein also acquired the Rolling Stones catalogue of sound recordings from Oldham in a dubious move.Klein is best known for his theft of millions of dollars from the Rolling Stones and his theft of five million pounds from the Beatles.When "Bittersweet Symphony" was nominated for a Grammy Award, Mick Jagger and Keith Richards were named as the nominees, and not The Verve) Again, its a surprise that The Verve did not hire a hitman to finish this leech off