Original sentence: A follow up demonstration in Auckland along with the Christian Life Centre and the City Impact churches took place in March 2005.In August 2004, it attracted considerable criticism from gay-activists for its protest against a bill creating civil unions which gives the right to hetrosexual and homosexual couples to join in a civil union.This demonstration gathered close to 5,000 people marching up the main street of New Zealand's biggest city
Edited sentence: A follow up demonstration in Auckland organised by other prominent churches in New Zealand and supported by many including Destiny Church took place in March 2005.In August 2004, it attracted considerable criticism from gay-activists for its protest against a bill creating civil unions which gives the right to hetrosexual and homosexual couples to join in a Civil Union.This demonstration gathered even more support for Christian moral values with close to 5,000 people marching up the main street of New Zealand's biggest city