Original sentence: All four of her daughters, Nora Ephron, Delia Ephron, Hallie Ephron and Amy Ephron, also became notable writers.Phoebe Ephron (January 26, 1914-October 13,1971, born Phoebe Wolkind in New York, New York) was a playwright and screenwriter who often worked with her husband, Henry Ephron
Edited sentence: All four of her daughters—Nora Ephron, Delia Ephron, Hallie Ephron and Amy Ephron—also became notable writers.Phoebe Ephron (January 26, 1914 – October 13,1971; born Phoebe Wolkind in New York, New York) was a playwright and screenwriter who often worked with her husband, Henry Ephron