Original sentence: He is critical of some other doctors for not encouraging their patients to adopt plant-based diets and to avoid animal-based products and has criticized the USDA, claiming "a conflict of interest right in their mission statement" protects the economic interests of food producers in lieu of clear dietary guidelines.Michael Herschel Greger (born October 25, 1972) is an American physician, author, and professional speaker on public health issues, best known for his advocacy of a whole-food, plant-based diet, and his opposition to animal-derived food products
Edited sentence: He is critical of some other doctors for not encouraging their patients to adopt plant-based diets and to avoid animal-based products and criticizes the US government for giving watered-down advice about healthy eating in its guidelines, in order to protect the economic interests of food producers—especially those who make junk food and animal-based food.Michael Herschel Greger (born October 25, 1972) is an American physician, author, and professional speaker on public health issues, particularly the benefits of a whole-food, plant-based diet and the harms of eating animal-derived products