Original sentence: Common criticisms of the decade include a bad economy, the slowing of the tech boom even despite innovations such as broadband Internet and the Ipod, pop music, television, and movies lacking creativity, the disappointing similarity with the 1990s the decade holds, and the War on Terror and criticisms of President George W
Edited sentence: Common criticisms of the decade include a bad economy, the slowing of the tech boom even despite innovations such as broadband Internet and the Ipod, pop music, television, and movies lacking creativity, the disappointing similarity with the 1990s the decade holds, and of course the so-called War on Terror and criticisms of President George W