Original sentence: Victoria Park Southport, Merseyside, England, is a public park
Edited sentence: It is now used a lot of the year as a large caravan park, which the SFS profits from.They have recently exercised this right by stopping the woodvale rally.Victoria Park Southport, Merseyside, England, is a public park but run by the Southport flower show (SFS) which makes large profit and can stop anyone they want from using it