Original sentence: McGlynn and Josh Kennedy were traded to the Sydney Swans at the end of the 2009 season.McGlynn excelled for Box Hill at VFL level and is a centre clearance specialist who will only improve as he builds his fitness to AFL standards
Edited sentence: A speedy small player he had an impact on the games for the beginning and middle of the season but slipped slightly in form in the end of the season.He excelled for Box Hill at VFL level and is a centre clearance specialist who will only improve as he builds his fitness to AFL standards.McGlynn and fellow hawk Josh Kennedy were traded to the Sydney Swans at the end of the 2009 season.McGlynn is a courageous midfielder with balance, speed and strength.McGlynn lacks height and polish with his disposal, but is hard at it and good in close