Original sentence: Bali also was inhabited in Paleolithic times (1my BCE to 200.000 BCE), testified by the finding of ancient tools such as hand axes were found in Sembiran and Trunyan villages in Bali.Even today, the two islands are only separated by a 2.5km strait.Most estimates suggest that at least 500,000 people were killed across Indonesia, with an estimated 80,000 killed in Bali, equivalent to 5 per cent of the island's population.The highest volcano is the active strato-volcano Mount Agung, at 3,142 m (10,308 ft)
Edited sentence: Bali also was inhabited in Paleolithic times (1 my BCE to 200.000 BCE), testified by the finding of ancient tools such as hand axes were found in Sembiran and Trunyan villages in Bali.Even today, the two islands are only separated by a 2.5 km strait.Most estimates suggest that at least 500,000 people were killed across Indonesia, with an estimated 80,000 killed in Bali, equivalent to 5% of the island's population.The highest volcano is the active strato-volcano Mount Agung, at 3,142 m (10,308 ft)