Original sentence: In fact, Damn Yankees seemed to be following a similar course pursued by Jack Blades’s prior band, Night Ranger, developing an overall hard rock sound in the studio, but relying heavily on power ballads to sell their albums.Jack Blades’s leading single "Coming of Age," hit #64, while Tommy Shaw’s "Come Again" received extensive AOR airplay
Edited sentence: In fact, Damn Yankees seemed to be following a similar course pursued by Jack Blades’ prior band, Night Ranger, developing an overall hard rock sound in the studio, but relying heavily on power ballads to sell their albums.Jack Blades’ leading single "Coming of Age," hit #64, while Tommy Shaw’s smoldering "Come Again" received extensive AOR airplay