Original sentence: Carnival joins the Ex General Shion and creates with him a bandit group.Carnival nearly kills One-Arm Jack when he is stopped by Michael who fights with him while the rest of the Temple Mercenaries go onward to fight Shion.Previously an A Soldier of the Temple Mercenaries Carnival was kicked out for being too merciless
Edited sentence: Carnival joins an ex-general of Chronos, Shion, and creates with him a bandit group.Carnival nearly kills One-Arm Jack when he is stopped by Mikael who fights with him while the rest of the Temple Mercenaries go onward to fight Shion.Carnival was previously an A-Rank soldier for the Temple Mercenaries and their top fighter.He was known to be merciless and was kicked out for killing a comrade over a trivial matter.He was nicknamed "Bloodmaster"