Original sentence: The Ibanez Super 58  pickup has a warm vintage sound and the Axis one has a brighter and more aggressive sound.The JTK2 second edition got a multi-piece neck like most Ibanez guitars.The second and most popular edition of the JTK 2 (black and white and red and white) has only one Super 58 pickup for the neck and one Axis pickup for the bridge
Edited sentence: The Ibanez Super 58 pickup has a warm vintage sound while the Axis has a brighter and more aggressive sound.The second and most popular edition of the JTK 2 (black and white and red and white) has only one Super 58 pickup for the neck and one Axis pickup for the bridge and a multi-piece neck like most Ibanez guitars