Original sentence: During the following 30-plus years Mathieson slowly developed the Concorde into one of the finest entertainment centres in the South.Its standing in the UK jazz world has been recognised by the August 2009 award of the inaugural (Kind of) Blue Plaque, following a nationwide vote organised by the Brecon Jazz Festival
Edited sentence: During the following 30-plus years Mathieson slowly developed the Concorde into an all-round entertainment centre.Its standing in the UK jazz world has been recognised by the August 2009 award of the inaugural (Kind of) Blue Plaque, following a nationwide vote among jazz followers and musicians organised by the Brecon Jazz Festival