Original sentence: , Hardcore Superstar, Jackviper, Malice in Wonderland, Private Line, Bullets and Octane, Endeverafter, Blessed by a Broken Heart, Lordi , Dirty Penny and Steel Panther borrow elements from glam metal
Edited sentence: , Hardcore Superstar, Jackviper, Malice in Wonderland, Private Line, Bullets and Octane, Endeverafter, Blessed by a Broken Heart, Lordi and Steel Panther borrow elements from glam metal