Original sentence: Bushman cites the absence of women in leadership roles, sexual abuse, lack of career opportunities, and poor family planning policies as evidence of sexism.Claudia L.Richard and Joan Ostling argue that the LDS Church treats women as inferior to men.She further claims that, rather than increasing the responsibilities of women, the LDS church has recently decreased the autonomy that Mormon women had in areas such as welfare, leadership, training, publishing, and policy setting
Edited sentence: Critics claim that, rather than increasing the responsibilities of women, the LDS church has recently decreased the autonomy that Mormon women had in areas such as welfare, leadership, training, publishing, and policy setting.Other critics claim sexism in the LDS church is demonstrated by absence of women in leadership roles, sexual abuse, lack of career opportunities, and poor family planning policies.Some critics argue that the LDS Church treats women as inferior to men