Original sentence: A few students in this band even take on the responsibility of producing the annual Dos Pueblos High School Jazz Festival, which will be in its 37th year this coming March.The Dos Pueblos HS Jazz Ensemble is an award winning group of musicians who play a variety of jazz styles, from the swing and big band music of Duke Ellington to the cool and mild tones of Miles Davis to modern jazz-funk
Edited sentence: A few students in this band even take on the responsibility of producing the annual Dos Pueblos High School Jazz Festival.The Dos Pueblos HS Jazz Ensemble is an award winning group of outstanding musicians who play a variety of jazz styles, from the swing and big band music of Duke Ellington to the cool and mild tones of Miles Davis to modern jazz-funk.which will be in its 37th year this coming March