Original sentence: 4437, a bill in Congress to toughen immigration checks.5,000,000.A 36km ring surrounding Paris facing outwards, symbollically calling for peace.Across United States.August 23, 1989.Called for independence for Estonia, Latvia, and Lithuania.Charitable event to raise money to fight hunger.February 28, 2004.Hands Across America.July 25, 2004.May 1, 2006.May 25, 1986.Was followed by a similar chain on August 23, 1991, with people holding candles
Edited sentence: 4437, a bill in Congress that would make illegal immigrants into felons.A 36km ring surrounding Paris turned outwards symbolising the hope that mankind will come together and build a world of Peace.August 23 1989.Called for independence for Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania.February 28 2004.July 25 2004.May 1 2006.Was followed by a similar chain in August 23, 1991, with people holding candles