Original sentence: During his career, Kenny has played with many jazz greats such as Miles Davis, Freddie Hubbard, Woody Shaw, McCoy Tyner, Pharoah Sanders, Brian Blade, Bobby Hutcherson, Ron Carter, Elvin Jones, and Mulgrew Miller.From there, his career has included 11 albums as a leader and numerous Grammy nominations.Garrett's music sometimes exhibits Asian influence, an aspect which is especially prevalent in his 2006 recording, Beyond the Wall.In 1984, he recorded his first album as a bandleader, Introducing Kenny Garrett
Edited sentence: "  Kenny Garrett is regarded as one of the top jazz saxophonists of the current era.During his career Kenny has played with many Jazz greats such as Miles Davis, Freddie Hubbard, Woody Shaw, McCoy Tyner, Pharoah Sanders, Brian Blade, Bobby Hutcherson, Ron Carter, Elvin Jones, and Mulgrew Miller.From there, his career has exploded into 11 albums (as a leader) and numerous grammy nominations.His playing style is best described as incredibly strong while at the same time very melodic.In 1984 he earned a shot at his first album as a band leader, "Introducing Kenny Garrett".Much of Garrett's music also contains influence from Asia, as is especially prevalent in his 2006 recording, "Beyond the Wall