Original sentence: " from My Fair Lady; the judges reacted positively with Simon Cowell commenting that Bessie's audtion was the most professional in the whole competition.Bessie and her family were on holiday in India when the auditions for the show were being held, but, along with her father, she made the trip back to the UK to take part in them.Bessie lost in the final to Paul Potts, who won the competition as an opera singer.In the semi-final, Bessie performed "Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" from the musical Mary Poppins.The judges commented that she had managed to improve on her previous performance
Edited sentence: " from the classic My Fair Lady; the judges reacted positively with Simon Cowell commenting that Bessie's audtion was the most professional in the whole competition.Bessie and her family were on holiday in India when the auditions for the show were being held, along with her father she made the long trip back to the UK as her dream is to perform in the West End.Bessie lost in the final, to Paul Potts, who won the competition as an opera singer.In the semi-final, Bessie performed "Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" from the hit musical Mary Poppins.The judges commented that she had managed to further improve on her previous performance