Original sentence: "  Concerned, Rinoa goes to the Edea, a former soreceress herself, for advice.An evil sorceress from the future, Ultimecia intends to compress all of time into one single moment.She has the power to control sorceresses from her past, and uses them to enact her plan.Ultimecia is the main villain of the Square Co.Ultimecia's past is only hinted out throughout the course of the game, as are the exact motivations for her goals, and her seemingly pathological hatred of all SeeDs.computer role-playing game Final Fantasy VIII
Edited sentence: "  Concerned, Rinoa goes to the Sorceress Edea for advice.An evil sorceress from the future, she intends to compress all of time into one single moment.Critics often cite the lack of a compelling villain as a major reason why Final Fantasy VIII is sometimes considered a weak point in the Final Fantasy series.In a game series known for such memorable villains as Sephiroth and Kefka, Ultimecia was a major disappointment.In particular, no possible motivation for her desire to achieve a goal as bizarre as time compression is ever even suggested.In the English-language version of the game, words normally spelled with a hard "C" are spelled with a "K" in her dialogue; the significance of this is unclear, and it struck many players as simply ridiculous.She does not appear until the very end of the game, the player does not even learn of her existence until halfway through, and she receives little to no characterization.She has the power to control sorceresses from her past, and uses them to carry out her plan to achieve time compression.Ultimecia has the dubious distinction of being arguably the single least popular villain in the entire Final Fantasy series.Ultimecia is the ultimate villain of the Squaresoft video game Final Fantasy VIII.When she does finally appear, she appears to be simply insane, reacting to the protagonists with stereotypical grandiose threats and maniacal laughter