Original sentence: Fifi Box (now hosting the Fifi Box show on the today network and the weather presenter for sunrise), Marty Sheargold, Tony Martin, Ed Kavalee, Brian Carlton, Andrew Denton, Drew Chapman, Zoe Sheridan, Adam "Bar Rat" Barratt, Wil Anderson, Laura Cross, Sam Mac (now hosting the Em and Sam Mac show on 92.9), Turbo, Drew Chapman, Kim Blair, Jamie Row, Tom Gleeson, Subby Valentine, Amanda Keller, Mick Molloy, Anthony Maroon, Tony Moclair (used to host Man United), Peter "Scooter" Carter, Leigh "Leigh Dogg" Kuhlmann (currently nova937's Programming director), Justine McKell, Byron Webb, Chaz (from Chaser's War on Everything) and Rob Duckworth
Edited sentence: Fifi Box (now hosting the Fifi Box show on the today network and the weather presenter for sunrise), Marty Sheargold, Tony Martin, Ed Kavalee, Brian Carlton, Andrew Denton, Drew Chapman, Zoe Sheridan, Adam "Bar Rat" Barratt, Wil Anderson, Laura Cross, Sam Mac (now hosting the Em and Sam Mac show on 92.9), Turbo, Drew Chapman, Kim Blair, Jamie Row, Tom Gleeson, Subby Valentine, Amanda Keller, Mick Molloy, Anthony Maroon, Tony Moclair (used to host Man United), Peter "Scooter" Carter, Leigh "Leigh Dogg" Kuhlmann (currently nova937's Programming director), Justine McKell, Byron Webb, Russell Barwick, Chaz (from Chaser's War on Everything) and Rob Duckworth