Original sentence: Sikandar Hayat Khan, the Chief Minister of the Punjab region, drafted the original Lahore Resolution, which was placed before the Subject Committee of the All India Muslim League for discussion and amendments.The Resolution was adopted on 23 March, 1940
Edited sentence: Sikandar Hayat Khan, the Chief Minister of the Punjab, drafted the original Lahore Resolution, which was placed before the Subject Committee of the All India Muslim League for discussion and amendments.The Resolution was adopted on 23 March, 1940 with great enthusiasm