Original sentence: As a defenceman, he played for the Edmonton Oilers and the New York Rangers.Kevin Hugh Lowe (born April 15, 1959)  is a retired defenceman and coach in the National Hockey League and the current President of Hockey Operations for the Edmonton Oilers
Edited sentence: As a defenceman, he played for the Edmonton Oilers and the New York Rangers and has 6 stanley cup rings also knows a little bit about winning if there's ever a concern.Kevin Hugh Lowe (born April 15, 1959)  is a retired defenceman and coach in the National Hockey League and the current President of Hockey Operations for the Edmonton Oilers and the reason for the downfall of the franchise the past 8 years