Original sentence: About 60 people confessed to the killing, mostly men, as well as a few women.Although popular myth and many crime books portray her as a call girl, a report by the district attorney's office for the Los Angeles County Grand Jury states that she was not a prostitute.At the age of 19, she went to Vallejo, California to live with her father, and they moved to Los Angeles in early 1943.Born in Hyde Park, Massachusetts, Short was raised in Medford by her mother, Phoebe Mae, after her father, Cleo, abandoned her and her four sisters in October 1930.Her unsolved killing has been key to the perception of Los Angeles as a dystopian land of broken dreams.In August 1946, she came to Hollywood to try her luck in the film business.On January 15, 1947, her body was discovered in a vacant lot of the 3800 block of South Norton Avenue in the Leimert Park neighborhood of Los Angeles, cut in half at the waist and mutilated.She was interred in Mountain View Cemetery in  Oakland rather than Medford because her oldest sister lived in  Berkeley and because she loved California.The crime was never solved but has remained the subject of intense speculation.The investigation by the LAPD was the largest since the killing of Marian Parker in 1927 and involved hundreds of officers borrowed from other law enforcement agencies
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