Original sentence: Also recent attention has focused on his family who have followed him into right-wing extremism, including two of his granddaughters, Rachel Pendergraft, who have recently formed a "white nationalist" band called Heritage Connection
Edited sentence: Also recent attention has focused on his family who have followed him into right-wing extremism, such as his daughter Rachel Pendergraft and his granddaughters, Charity and Shelby Pendergraft, who have recently formed a "white nationalist" band called Heritage Connection