Original sentence: American photographer Carl Van Vechten noted that the ballet was "the most exquisite specimen of [Pavlova's] art which she has yet given to the public.Kirov-trained Natalia Makarova commented:Of Fokine's original choreography [...] only scattered fragments remain [...] he created only the bourées for Pavlova.Pavlova made the dance popular via her many tours around the globe over a twenty year period and asked to be buried in the swan costume.The 1917 Russian film The Dying Swan by director Yevgeni Bauer tells the story of an artist who strangles a ballerina
Edited sentence: " Pavlova made the dance popular via her many tours around the world over a twenty year period and asked to be buried in the swan costume.American dance critic and photographer Carl Van Vechten noted that the ballet was "the most exquisite specimen of [Pavlova's] art which she has yet given to the public.At a later date, Kirov-trained Natalia Makarova commented:Of Fokine's original choreography [...] only scattered fragments remain [...] he created only the bourées for Pavlova.The 1917 Russian film The Dying Swan by director Yevgeni Bauer, for example, tells the story of an artist who strangles a ballerina.The ballet has been variously interpreted and adapted