Original sentence: The headteacher, Mr Hassett, has led the school since 2010.There are currently 173 children in the school
Edited sentence: The headteacher, Mr Hassett, has led the school since 2010 and has a fabulous team of staff who put the care of the children at the forefront of all that they do.There are currently 173 children in the school who are the best children that any school could ever hope for.Unfortunately, the current Y5 class are the naughtiest ever and have received more negative dojos than any other class in the history of the world