Original sentence: Clancy’s interweaving of the storylines is quite comfortable, without the inconsistencies that sometimes occur when authors try to connect two separate stories.Many of the central characters from Without Remorse reappear in this story, which is set about 15 years later, but actually published 4 years before.The book was made into a movie (1994), starring Harrison Ford as Ryan, with several significant alterations to the plot.This is raised on all levels, from Ding Chavez shamefully considering that he just killed a peasant, not a trained enemy soldier, to the President realizing the potential political costs of having killed the wife and children of one of the drug lords
Edited sentence: All in all, the writing of this book was executed with military precision worthy of Mr.Clancy’s interweaving of the storylines is quite comfortable to the reader; it doesn’t feature any of the inconsistencies that sometimes occur when authors try to connect two separate stories.Many of the central characters from Without Remorse are reappearing is this story set about 15 years later, but actually published 4 years before.The book was made into a movie (1994), starring Harrison Ford as Ryan, which made several significant alterations to the plot.This is raised on all levels, from Ding Chavez shamefully considering that he just killed a peasant in one of the covert raids, not a trained enemy soldier, to the President realizing the potential political costs of having killed the wife and children of one of the drug lords that was set for elimination