Original sentence: Openly questioning official doctrine, by anyone—even members of the Governing Body—carries the most severe penalties of any offense within the religious community.Their view of morality often reflects conservative Christian views.Witnesses are perhaps best known for the vigorous efforts by all memebers to spread their beliefs throughout the world
Edited sentence: Openly questioning official doctrine, by anyone—even members of the Governing Body, is arguably the most serious offense within the religious community.Their view of morality reflects conservative Christian views.Vigorous efforts are made to spread their beliefs by all members throughout the world