Original sentence: The Odyssey is a large sports and entertainment centre situated at Queen's Island, Belfast, Northern Ireland.The Pavilion – contains bars, restaurants, nightclubs and a Vue 12–screen multiplex.W5 is a much praised science exhibition demonstrating the powers of science
Edited sentence: The Odyssey is a large sports and entertainment centre in the city of Belfast.The Pavilion is almost like a town in itself.The Pavilion – contains many shops and a Warner Village Cinemas 12–screen multiplex.W5 is a fascinating science exhibition demonstrating the powers of science