Original sentence: Biggs's son by de Castro, Michael Biggs, eventually became a member of the children's programme and music band Turma do Balão Mágico, bringing a new source of income to his father
Edited sentence: Biggs's son by de Castro, Michael Biggs, eventually became a member of the successful children's programme and music band Turma do Balão Mágico, bringing a new source of income to his father