Original sentence: Des Plaines Public Library is a public library in Des Plaines, Illinois.It is located in the downtown area of Des Plaines which has seen a regrowth in the past several years.It was moved from its old location (which had been in service since 1957) several years ago.Official website.They broke ground on a new downtown building on April 15, 1999 and opened the library on August 14, 2000 with a Grand Opening on September 24, 2000
Edited sentence: Des Plaines Public Library moved from its old location (which had been in service since 1957) several years ago.It is located right in the downtown area of Des Plaines, IL which has seen an amazing regrowth in the past several years.They broke ground on a huge new downtown building on April 15, 1999 and opened the library on August 14, 2000 with a Grand Opening on September 24, 2000