Original sentence: Abrogast's spectacular rescue and survival received extensive coverage in the 24 hour news cycle which was renewed (and then redoubled) with each subsequent report of a shark incident.It is often used as a negative example when criticizing media; reminding people that prior to 9/11 the shark attacks had been deemed the 'most important' story of the summer.The epidemic of shark attacks became the #1 news story of the summer going into September, and had a cover story on the July 30th issue of Time magazine.The summer of 2001 was dubbed Summer of the Shark by American newsmedia outlets capitalizing on a June 2001 bull shark attack that severed the arm of 8 year old Jessie Arbogast (later reattached) and subsequent shark attacks worldwide.The term "Summer of the Shark" is a misnomer, shark attacks in the summer of 2001 had actually been down 15% from the previous year worldwide
Edited sentence: Abrogast's spectacular rescue and survival received extensive coverage in the 24-hour news cycle which was renewed (and then redoubled) with each subsequent report of a shark incident.It is often used as a negative example when criticizing media; reminding people that prior to September 11 attacks the shark attacks had been deemed the 'most important' story of the summer.The so-called "epidemic" of shark attacks became the top news story of the summer going into September, and had a cover story on the July 30th issue of Time magazine.The summer of 2001 was dubbed the Summer of the Shark by American newsmedia outlets capitalizing on a June 2001 bull shark attack that severed the arm of 8-year-old Jessie Arbogast (later surgically reattached) and subsequent shark attacks worldwide.The term "Summer of the Shark" is a misnomer, as shark attacks in the summer of 2001 had actually been down 15% from the previous year worldwide