Original sentence: The prince's correspondence reveals that the couple only had sexual intercourse three times: twice the first night of the marriage, and once the night before her International cricket debut.While Caroline's mother was concerned for their safety, Caroline was unfazed, knowing the accuracy of the cannon was similar to that of Duke Stephen Harmison
Edited sentence: The prince's correspondence reveals that the couple only had sexual intercourse three times: twice the first night of the marriage, and once the second night.While Caroline's mother was concerned for their safety, Caroline was unfazed