Original sentence: He was the father to JonJon Hernandez, Luchi Salvador Joson, and actress  Maja Salvador.His Father is Luis "Lou" Salvador was a Filipino basketball player, stage actor and talent manager.Several of his 58 children became personalities in the Philippine entertainment scene
Edited sentence: He is the father to JonJon Hernandez, Luchi Salvador Joson, and actress  Maja Salvador.Several of his 58 children became notable personalities in the Philippine entertainment scene.[1][2] His Father is Luis "Lou" Salvador was a Filipino basketball player, stage actor and talent manager