Original sentence: Jim Thome currently lives in Hinsdale, Illinois.Stretching behind Thome, all with averages greater than 14, are such hall-of-famers as Ralph Kiner, Harmon Killebrew, Ted Williams, Mickey Mantle, Jimmie Foxx, and Mike Schmidt, in that order.Thome rounded the bases pointing upward in homage to his late mother, who passed away from breast cancer in January 2005
Edited sentence: Thome currently lives in Hinsdale, Illinois.Thome rounded the bases pointing upward in homage to his mother, who died from breast cancer in January 2005