Original sentence: Although Kerry attended elite schools throughout Europe and New England, the tuition was paid by a wealthy great-aunt, as Richard Kerry's salary could not accommodate the schools attended by the Kerry children.However, Kerry did mix and mingle with the upper class.In truth, the Forbes family enjoyed a great fortune, but Kerry's parents themselves were upper-middle class.Kerry's father, Richard John Kerry, was born on July 28, 1915 in Massachusetts.Summers were spent at the Forbes family estate in France, and Kerry enjoyed much greater extravagance there than he had come to know back in Massachusetts.Two of Ida Kohn's siblings, Otto Loewe and Jenni Loewe, died in the Nazi extermination camps (Theresienstadt and Treblinka, respectively), after being deported from Vienna in 1942
Edited sentence: Although John attended elite schools throughout Europe and New England, the tuition was paid by a wealthy great-aunt, as Richard Kerry's salary could not accommodate the schools attended by the Kerry children.However, John did mix and mingle with the upper class.In truth, the Forbes family enjoyed a great fortune, but John's parents themselves were upper-middle class.Richard John Kerry, John's father, was born on July 28, 1915 in Massachusetts.Summers were spent at the Forbes family estate in France, and John enjoyed much greater extravagance there than he had come to know back in Massachusetts.Two of Ida's siblings, Otto Loewe and Jenni Loewe, died in the Nazi extermination camps (Theresienstadt and Treblinka, respectively), after being deported from Vienna in 1942