Original sentence: Dzifa Gomashie is a Ghanaian female movie actress and also was the Deputy Minister of Tourism in the National Democratic Congress(NDC) Political Party during their term in office
Edited sentence: Dzifa Gomashie is a Ghanaian female actress who has made a difference in the movie industry considering the kind of roles she plays and also was the  Deputy Minister of Tourism in the National Democratic Congress(NDC)  Political Party during their term in office