Original sentence: In the context of a discussion about other schools who allegedly have the same policy, the superintendent said, "If they get a pass, we want a pass.On June 8, 2009, the Illinois State Board of Education Director of Assessment informed superintendent Sobocinski that all juniors had to take the assessment
Edited sentence: In the context of a discussion about other schools who allegedly have the same policy, the superintendent expressed his ethical position by saying, "If they get a pass, we want a pass.On July 8, 2009, the Illinois State Board of Education Director of Assessment informed superintendent Sobocinski that all juniors had to take the assessment