Original sentence: Considerable controversy exists over the use of animal fur to make clothing.For more information, see fur farming.Fur once served as an important source of clothing for humans, especially in cold climates
Edited sentence: Despite the best efforts of the animal protest industry to shroud the wearing of animal fur in  controversy using hyperbole, graphic images and celebrities eager to heighten their own profiles and that of their products fur continues to be seen as a natural and relatively environmentally friendly fashion commodity.Fur has  served as an important source of clothing for humans thousands of years, especially in colder climates