Original sentence: He made his first-grade début in 2010, starting on the right wing against Bradford Bulls in round 16 of 2010's Super League XV.McGillvary was sent out on loan to Batley Bulldogs for the 2009 Co-operative Championship, a season which saw him progress as a talent and earned him selection in the 2009 Championship team of the season
Edited sentence: He made his first grade début in 2010, starting on the right wing against Bradford Bulls in round 16 of 2010's Super League XV.His talent in his position along with his cousin and fellow Giants player Leroy Cudjoe are outstanding and together the lads are quite the unstoppable pair.In 2011 Jermaine has put together a whole seaon of impressive performances and has quickly established himself as one of the games top players.McGillvary was sent out on loan to Batley Bulldogs for the 2009 Co-operative Championship, a season which saw him progress as a talent and earn him selection in the 2009 Championship team of the season.So far in the 2012 rugby league season, Jermaine has continued to shine through the wing for the Giants