Original sentence: According to his followers, he represents the essence of Hinduism, leading an austere life of complete celibacy, without personal wealth or comfort.His compassion for humanity, universal wisdom and striking simplicity have touched many world religious and national leaders
Edited sentence: He leads an austere life of lifetime celibacy, without personal wealth or comfort.Representing the essence of Hinduism, his compassion for humanity, universal wisdom and striking simplicity have touched many world religious and national leaders