Original sentence: Gloria Bromell Tinubu is an applied economist, educator, self-proclaimed "community activist",  and political figure.The focus of her Master's thesis addressed the problems associated with clouded title property, known as "heirs property", which today continues to plague her hometown and many other rural communities in South Carolina
Edited sentence: Gloria Bromell Tinubu is an applied economist, educator, and political figure.Her focus in her Master's thesis was to address the problems associated with clouded title property, known as heirs property, which today continues to plague her hometown and many other rural communities in South Carolina