Original sentence: His Atlantic Hotel was built in 1892 following which he intended to build an upmarket estate, with another luxury hotel, on the headlands of Newquay but lack of money hampered his plans
Edited sentence: Travail's first grand hotel was the Atlantic was built in 1892 after the success of the Atlantic Hotel  he intended to build an upmarket estate, with another luxury hotel, on the headlands of Newquay but lack of money hampered his plans