Original sentence: As a predominantly working class community, the Falls Road has historically had a strong socialist tradition.His office was in Divis Street and displayed the Irish tricolour alongside the Starry Plough of James Connolly's Irish Citizen Army in the office window
Edited sentence: As a predominantly working class community it is not surprising that the Falls Road has historically had a strong socialist tradition.His office was in Divis Street and proudly displayed the Irish tricolour alongside the Starry Plough of James Connolly's Irish Citizen Army in the office window