Original sentence: Based on a structural model provided by the Alvin Ailey Dance Foundation as a template for camps across the country, the AileyCamp program is designed to help develop students self-respect, confidence, discipline and imagination while fostering an appreciation for the joy of dance
Edited sentence: Based on a structural model provided by the Alvin Ailey Dance Foundation as a template for camps across the country, the AileyCamp program is designed to help develop low-income students self-respect, confidence, discipline and imagination while fostering an appreciation for the joy of dance.The camp celebrated its tenth anniversary at its closing performance on Thursday, August 6th, 2009