Original sentence: After a seven-week illness, Hoople died on Friday, 29 September 1922 in Brooklyn, and after a funeral at 2pm on Sunday, 1 October at the John Wesley Church of the Nazarene in Brooklyn, was buried at the Sleepy Hollow Cemetery in Westchester County, New York
Edited sentence: After a funeral at 2pm on Sunday, 1 October at the John Wesley Church of the Nazarene in Brooklyn, was buried at the Sleepy Hollow Cemetery in Westchester County, New York.After a seven-week illness, Hoople died on Friday, 29 September 1922 in his home at 277 Brooklyn Avenue, Brooklyn of war-related injuries