Original sentence: After being waylaid by the barrow-wights, he lost his lighter, summer-weight clothes and was left in a burial shrift.He was forced to wear heavier woollen clothing packed on his pony the rest of the way to Rivendell
Edited sentence: After being waylaid by the barrow-wights, he lost his lighter, summer-weight clothes and was left in a burial shift.He was forced to wear heavier woolen clothing packed on his pony the rest of the way to Rivendell