Original sentence: Young is survived by his wife, Arlene; his children, Neil, Arleen, Ron (Lisa), Guy (Bobbi), Lauren, Rachel (Jose); and his eight grand-daughters, Allison, Caitie, Darcy, Morgan, Riley, Jordan, Allie and Piper
Edited sentence: Young is survived by his wife, Arlene; his children, Neil, Arleen, Ron (Lisa), Guy (Bobbi), Lauren, Rachel (Jose); and his eight granddaughters, Allison, Caitie, Darcy, Morgan, Riley, Jordan, Allie and Piper