Original sentence: 2-3 pulldown is used by 60 Hz versions of Canon camcorders (PF24 mode), the Panasonic HS300/TM300/SD300 camcorders (Digital Cinema) and the Panasonic GH1 hybrid digital still/video camera for recording 24 frame/s progressive video.Some 1080i AVCHD camcorders offer capturing of progressive video and recording it within interlaced stream, borrowing techniques from television industry
Edited sentence: Some 1080i AVCHD camcorders can capture progressive video and record it within an interlaced stream, borrowing techniques from the television industry.The 2:3 pulldown technique is used by 60 Hz versions of Canon camcorders (PF24 mode), the Panasonic HS300/TM300/SD300 camcorders (Digital Cinema) and the Panasonic GH1 hybrid digital still/video camera for recording 24-frame progressive video