Original sentence: British forces brought in a small Dutch military contingent which it termed, perhaps misleadingly, the Netherlands Indies Civil Administration (NICA).The Indonesian National Revolution or Indonesian War of Independence is the name of the four-year conflict btween Indonesia and Netherlands after which Indonesia achieved is independence.When a member of the NICA raised a Dutch flag on a hotel in Surabaya, there was an emotional outburst by the Indonesian nationalists who overran the Japanese proxies guarding the hotel and tore the blue stripe off the flag, forming the Indonesian red-white flag.When the last Dutch were expelled from Indonesia in 1958, and their businesses taken, the Indonesian economy took a nose dive, because it caused an exodus of much needed expertise which could have been used to help the country, a phenomenon not uncommon in the history of many former colonial nations
Edited sentence: British forces brought in a small Dutch military contingent, which is misleadingly called the Netherlands Indies Civil Administration (NICA).The Indonesian National Revolution or Indonesian War of Independence is the name of the four-year struggle by Indonesia to win its independence from the Netherlands.When a NICA personnel hoisted a Dutch flag on a hotel in Surabaya, there was an emotional outburst by the Indonesian nationalists who overran the Japanese proxies guarding the hotel and tore the blue stripe off the flag forming the Indonesian red-white flag.When the last Dutch were expelled from Indonesia in 1958, and their businesses taken, the Indonesian economy took a nose dive, because it caused an exodus of much needed expertise which could have been used to help the country