Original sentence: It could be realily and beneficially be reduced to one-half of its current length in early August 2009.These two cities are the only control cities on I-27; other cities and towns served by I-27 include (from south to north) New Deal, Abernathy, Hale Center, Plainview, and Canyon.This entire article is much too long ang detailed for any reasonable benefit for a minor and short Interstate Highway
Edited sentence: These two cities are the only control cities on I-27; other cities and towns served by I-27 include (from south to north) New Deal, Abernathy, Hale Center, Plainview, Kress, Tulia, Happy, and Canyon