Original sentence: "  Kathy Keen has reported that Ellen Woodall, writer and nudist researcher, wrote in her MA dissertation, "The naked truth about the American nudist movement is its failure to live up to the ideal that everyone is treated the same, despite social standing or the shape of their bodies"
Edited sentence: "  Ellen Woodall, writer and nudist researcher, says, "The naked truth about the American nudist movement is its failure to live up to the ideal that everyone is treated the same, despite social standing or the shape of their bodies"