Original sentence: (He went on to become known as the Father of the Nation, with Pakistan officially giving him the title Quaid-e-Azam or "Great Leader".) Politicians and community leaders on both sides whipped up mutual suspicion and fear, culminating in dreadful events like the Muslim League's "Direct  Action Day" riots of August 1946 in Calcutta, in which more than 4000 people, mostly Hindus, were killed and many more injured.A number of different scenarios were proposed at various times.Among the first to make the demand for a separate state was the writer/philosopher Allama Iqbal, who, in his presidential address to the 1930 convention of the Muslim League said that he felt that a separate nation for Muslims was essential in an otherwise Hindu-dominated subcontinent.At the 1940 AIML conference in Lahore, Jinnah made clear his commitment to two separate states, a position from which the League never again wavered:.By 1930, Jinnah had despaired of Indian politics, particularly getting mainstream parties like the Congress (of which he was a member much longer than the League) to be sensitive to minority priorities.Iqbal, Jauhar and others then worked hard to draft Mohammad Ali Jinnah to lead the movement for this new nation.Many historians believe that this was Jinnah's doing and that he used Pakistan as a pretext to get the maximum in bargain for Muslims rather than a nation itself, and it was the intransigence of his interlocutors that made Pakistan an inevitability.Right uptil 1946, the definition of Pakistan as demanded by the League was so vague that it could have been interpreted as a sovereign nation or a nation within a nation.See Mohammad Ali Jinnah#A "Secular" Jinnah.The Sindh Assembly passed a resolution making it a demand in 1935
Edited sentence: ) Politicians and community leaders on both sides whipped up mutual suspicion and fear, culminating in dreadful events like the Muslim League's "Direct  Action Day" riots of August 1946 in Calcutta, in which more than 4000 people, mostly Hindus were killed and many more injured.A number of different scenarios were proposed at various times, but at the 1940 AIML conference in Lahore, League leader Mohammad Ali Jinnah made clear his commitment to two separate states, a position from which the League never again wavered: