Original sentence: Also, the hall was formerly the home of the Collyer familly.Watercolour paintings have been done of several architectural landmarks in Hurworth-on-Tees, inluding the Old Hall; making up the village poster (the artist being Alfred M
Edited sentence: Also, the hall was formerly the home of the Collyer family.Watercolour paintings have been done of several architectural landmarks in Hurworth-on-Tees, including the Old Hall; making up the village poster (the artist being Alfred M