Original sentence: The Vibrato literary magazine showcases the works of upper school students and for the second year in a row has been awarded the Pacemaker Award.While the school is noted for its students' continuing on to a variety of universities today, early on the school sent many girls to Smith College
Edited sentence: The Vibrato literary magazine showcases the works of upper school students and for the second year in a row has been awarded the prestigious Pacemaker Award.While the school is noted for its students' continuing on to a variety of prestigious universities today, early on the school sent many girls to Smith College