Original sentence: On the other hand, Parker himself is highly critical of  "industrial wines with little flavor and no authenticity.This is the view promoted of some of the interviewees in the motion picture Mondovino.Wine Parkerization refers to the stylization of wines by some wineries to please the taste of influential wine critic Robert M
Edited sentence: On the other hand, Parker is highly critical of  "industrial wines with little flavor and no authenticity.This is the view promoted in the motion picture Mondovino.Wine Parkerization refers to the stylization of wines by many wineries to please the taste of influential wine critic Robert M