Original sentence: There is a one o clock club for young children and carers and an impressive paddling pool (although currently not in use for much of the year) - however, there is an excellent one reasonably close by on Streatham Common.This is quite a hilly park and therefore not used to its full potential by many but there are some hidden delights
Edited sentence: There is a one o clock club for young children and carers and an impressive paddling pool (although sadly currently not in use for much of the year) - however, there is an excellent one reasonably close by on Streatham Common.This is quite a hilly park and therefore sadly not used to its full potential by many but there are some hidden delights