Original sentence: He has engaged in various business activities, specifically timber and cattle, which were handed down to him by his late father
Edited sentence: He attended the public National Honduran University (UNAH) which he eventually dropped out of, due to poor performance.Later he engaged in various business activities, specifically timber and cattle, which were handed down to him by his late father.Official school records show that during his engineering studies in UNAH, Mel Zelaya was well below the average performance mean for a Honduran university.This has entitled many to criticize his ability to foster and garner a nation while not having any type of superior academic achievements to his curriculum