Original sentence: 1985 - Friedman is first introduced to Hip-Hop moguls to be, Rick Rubin and Russell Simmons, after creating some Beastie Boys photos.Friedman's childhood was largely spent skating in the West Los Angeles schoolyards of the area called "Dogtown
Edited sentence: 1985 - Friedman is first introduced to Hip-Hop moguls to be, Rick Rubin and Russell Simmons, after creating some memorable Beastie Boys photos, before they were known to the masses.Friedman is an active political activist, shuns intoxicants, and follows a strict vegan diet.Friedman's childhood was largely spent skating in the famous West Los Angeles schoolyards of the area called "Dogtown