Original sentence: Additionally, they claim that the process of translation would make identifying Chiasmus from the original Reformed Egymption difficult.Critics point out that presence of Chiasmus in Strang's writing as well as the literature of other cultures implies that the source could be non-Hebrew.See Ancient Chiasmus Studied or Chiasmus and the Book of Mormon.This includes the Doctrine and Covenants, The Pearl of Great Price, and Joseph's own diary
Edited sentence: 17, no.26, no.3, Fall 1993, "Apologetic and Critical Assumptions about Book of Mormon Historicity," by Brent Metcalfe, p.4, Winter 1984, "Ancient Chiasmus Studied," by Prof.A handfull of sources:.Chiasmus is not specific to Hebrew writing forms and is present in many cultures literature.David Wright, “The Fallacies of Chiasmus: A Critique of Structures Proposed for the Covenant Collection.Dialogue, vol.Dialogue: A Journal of Mormon Thought, vol.Google definition of Chiasmus.John Kselman, p.Mormonism—Shadow or Reality.Smith asserted a literal translation and whether Chiasmus would survive the "translation" is in question.The existence of Chiasmus in the supposed Reformed Egyptian calls into question the existence of Reformed Egyptian.This includes the Doctrine and Covenants, Pearl of Great Price, and Joseph's own diary.Through linguistic assumptions one can not guarantee the Chiasm would remain intact.the Tanners Chiasmus article for sources and detail