Original sentence: 60.9%.For example, according to the census report on Asian Americans issued in 2004 by the US census bureau, 64% of Indian Americans had a Bachelor's degree or higher, the second highest for all national origin groups, behind Taiwanese-Americans and slightly ahead of Pakistani-Americans.In the United States, the term was invented to describe Japanese-Americans, although it has evolved to become associated with American Jews and Asian Americans, but more specifically with East Asians (Chinese, Japanese, and Korean) and the South Asian community such as Indians and Pakistanis.Similar cultural tendencies and values are found in South Asian American families, whose children similarly face extra pressure by parents to succeed in school and to achieve high-ranked jobs
Edited sentence: For example, according to the census report on Asian Americans issued in 2004 by the US census bureau, 64% of Indian Americans had a Bachelor's degree or higher, the second highest for all national origin groups, behind Taiwanese-Americans.In the United States, the term was invented to describe Japanese-Americans, although it has evolved to become associated with American Jews and Asian Americans, but more specifically with East Asians (Chinese, Japanese, and Korean) and the South Asian community such as the Indians.Similar cultural tendencies and values are found in South Asian American families hailing from the Indian subcontinent (such as Indian people), whose children similarly face extra pressure by parents to succeed in school and to achieve high-ranked jobs