Original sentence: The River Severn runs through the middle, with the city's large cathedral overlooking the river.Worcester (pronounced ) is a city in the West Midlands of England, and is the county town of Worcestershire
Edited sentence: It is the county town of Worcestershire.The River Severn runs through the middle of the city and the splendid cathedral overlooks the river.Worcester (pronounced ) is a city in the West Midlands of England