Original sentence: He communicated with the entertainments staff through frequent sarcastic, hectoring semi-literate letters which Jeffrey Fairbrother would read to the staff stopping at what the audience were left to presume were profanities that he awkwardly rephrased in more moderate language
Edited sentence: He communicated with the entertainments staff through frequent sarcastic, hectoring semi-literate letters which Jeffrey Fairbrother would read to the staff stubling awkwardly around sections that the audience were left to presume were profanities that he awkwardly rephrased in more moderate language