Original sentence: Many monkeywrenchers do not know any other monkeywrencher, and perform monkeywrenching alone.Many monkeywrenchers feel they are highly ethical; that think their destructive activities are not merely justified, but laudable and necessary.Monkeywrenching is economic warfare, often by illegal means, used to slow down or halt an undesired government-sanctioned activity.Monkeywrenching is usually an unorganized activity.The object of this destruction is generally limited to equipment that supports allegedly destructive logging, mining, and hunting activities
Edited sentence: Monkeywrenching is also unorganized: most monkeywrenchers do not know any other monkeywrencher, and they perform monkeywrenching alone.Monkeywrenching is economic warfare, often by illegal means, used to slow down or halt an undesired, and often destructive, yet government-sanctioned activity.Monkeywrenching is nonviolent.People who engage in monkeywrenching do so out of duty to one's country, one's environment, and life; monkeywrenchers therefore feel they are highly ethical, and think their destructive activities are not merely justified, by laudable and necessary.The object of this destruction is limited to all equipment that supports allegedly destructive logging, mining, and hunting activities.The target of monkeywrenching is machinery and equipment, not people