Original sentence: Many animal welfare campaigners denounce it as a barbaric bloodsport, while many proponents and participants view it as a crucial part of rural history in the British Isles, vital for conservation, and a method of pest control
Edited sentence: Many animal welfare campaigners object to it, describing the bloodsport as barbaric, while many proponents and participants view it as a crucial part of rural history in the British Isles, vital for conservation, and a method of pest control