Original sentence: In World War Two, the Falie was inducted into the Royal Australian Navy and renamed HMAS Falie.Initially she was used as an inspection vessel, but later she was acting as a watchdog outside Sydney Harbour, when on the night of 31 May she struck one of three Midget Submarines trying to gain access to the harbour through the anti submarine nets.She was bought by the Spencer’s Gulf Transport Company Limited in 1922, and sailed to South Australia in 1923, where she was renamed as the Falie and participated in the extensive ketch trade to isolated towns along the coast of South Australia
Edited sentence: In 1923, sailed to South Australia where she was renamed as the Falie and participated in the extensive ketch trade to isolated towns along the coast of South Australia.In World War Two, Royal Australian Navy inturned the Falie, renaming her as HMAS Falie.Initially she was used as an inspection vessel.On the night of 31 May, she was acting as a watchdog outside Sydney Harbour, when  she struck one of three Midget Submarines trying to gain access to the harbour through the anti submarine nets.She was bought by the Spencer’s Gulf Transport Company Limited in 1922