Original sentence: Ollila has also received Honorary Doctorates from both the University of Helsinki and Helsinki University of Technology.Ollila studied during high school with the help of a scholarship at the United World College of the Atlantic, where he earned his International Baccalaureate Diploma
Edited sentence: Ollila has also earned Honorary Doctorates from both the University of Helsinki and Helsinki University of Technology.Ollila studied during high school with the help of a scholarship at the renowned United World College of the Atlantic, where he earned his International Baccalaureate Diploma