Original sentence: Brian Mujati, Stormers, prop.Takudzwa Ngwenya, wing, has played for United States national rugby union team, and Biarritz moved to USA at high school age.Tendai Mtawarira, aka "the Beast", prop, plays for South Africa, and Sharks.Tonderai Chavhanga, arguably the fastest player in modern rugby
Edited sentence: Brian Mujati, Springboks and Stormers, prop.One of the candidates for the unofficial title of "fastest player in modern rugby", he moved to the USA at high school age.Takudzwa Ngwenya, wing, currently plays for the USA and Biarritz.Tendai Mtawarira, aka "the Beast", prop, plays for South Africa and the Sharks.Tonderai Chavhanga, another candidate for "fastest player in modern rugby", has also played for the Springboks, and is currently with the Stormers at Super Rugby level