Original sentence: Clothing in the ancient world has changed dramatically in the modern age.The advant of industrialization resulted in factory equipment, production lines and the mass production of textiles.The timeline of clothing and textiles technology includes major changes in the manufacture and distrubtion of clothing
Edited sentence: From clothing in the ancient world into modernity the use of technology has dramatically influenced clothing and fashion in the modern age.The advent of industrialization included factories, specialized and technologically advanced equipment, and production lines for the mass production of textiles.The timeline of clothing and textiles technology includes major changes in the manufacture and distribution of clothing