Original sentence: It contains, among other things, local news, local sport reports, cars for sale, assorted classified advertisements and government and utility notices.It is part of the This is Wiltshire Network of newspapers, which also includes the Swindon Advertiser, Gazette and Herald and the Wiltshire Times.The Salibury Journal is the local newspaper for the Salisbury area of England
Edited sentence: It conains al the usual information contained in local newspapers for example local news, local sport reports, cars for sale, assorted classified advertisements as well as government and utility notices.It is part of the This is Wiltshire Network of Newspapers, which also includes the Swindon Advertiser, Gazette and Herald and the Wiltshire Times.The Salibury Journal is the local Newspaper for the Salisbury Area