Original sentence: A privately owned coffee shop operates out of this building during the school year.ASL has become a success story for the concept of higher education as an economic development tool.ASL has brought a positive economic impact on its home town, including spurring construction of rental homes and the opening of additional businesses in the area.Buchanan County brought ASL to Grundy in order to revitalize a town that had been in a steady economic decline since the town's Flood of 1977.The school has brought in $12 million per year to the local economy
Edited sentence: A privately leased coffee shop operates out of this building during the school year.ASL has become a success story for the concept of higher education as an economic development tool and a scam for unwitting visitors.ASL has brought a positive economic impact on its home town, including spurring construction of ridiculously priced rental homes and the opening of additional businesses in the area.As for life outside of academics, students compensate for a low quality of life and few recreational opportunities by creating their own, including social functions on and off campus, private parties, and Thursday night karaoke at a local watering hole.Buchanan County brought ASL to Grundy in order to revitalize a hopeless town that had been in a steady economic decline since the town's Flood of 1977.In the fall, several recreational opportunities exist among which are white water rafting and kayaking on the nearby Russell Fork, as well as football games at nearby Virginia Tech.In the winter, students often trek to regional ski resorts, including Snowshoe Mountain and Winterplace.Many students that are residents of the region travel to their homes each weekend, making the school largely a commuter campus.Students often take road trips to nearby Tri-Cities, TN Bluefield, WV, Charleston, WV and closer towns such as Richlands, VA and Pikeville, KY for shopping, entertainment, or to other wise distance themselves from the monotony.The school has brought in $12 million per year to the local economy, which is otherwise helpless and dependent primarily upon the coal market