Original sentence: He then performed a two-week London West End run at the Wyndham's Theatre, 1-13 November 2004.His 'What It Is' tour was then extended into 2009.In June 2008, Dylan Moran appeared with Ardal O’Hanlon & Tommy Tiernan at the Liverpool Arena in 'The Three Fellas', a one-off comedy event, part of the city's 'European Capital of Culture 2008' celebrations.In October - December 2008, Moran embarked on a new UK tour entitled 'What It Is', starting at the Grand Opera House in York, and ending in Oxford's New Theatre.It will be released on DVD in winter 2009
Edited sentence: He then performed a two-week London West End run at the Wyndham's Theatre, 1–13 November 2004.In June 2008, Dylan Moran appeared with Ardal O'Hanlon & Tommy Tiernan at the Liverpool Arena in 'The Three Fellas', a one-off comedy event, part of the city's 'European Capital of Culture 2008' celebrations.In October to December 2008, Moran embarked on a new UK tour entitled What It Is, starting at the Grand Opera House in York, and ending in Oxford's New Theatre.The tour was extended into 2009 and will be released on DVD in winter 2009