Original sentence: Saugus is a neighborhood in Santa Clarita, California.Saugus was one of four communities (along with Valencia, Newhall, and Canyon Country) that merged in 1987, to create the city of Santa Clarita
Edited sentence: Saugus is a town neighborhood in Santa Clarita, California.Saugus was one of four communities (along with Valencia, Newhall, and Canyon Country) that merged in 1987, to create the city of Santa Clarita, a mass growth development abomination created by Newhall, Land and Farming Co.begun in the mid 1960s as "Valencia"