Original sentence: At the time, [JD Walsh], a former player for the University of Maryland and current basketball coach, had been looking to expand his basketball school into India when he was approached by the board of Child Nurture and Relief (CHINAR), an organization that runs an orphanage in Srinigar, Kashmir.Walsh ran by some accounts (Times of India: May 28th, 2007) the first ever American-style basketball camp in India for the two hundred participants in Pune (Fergusson College), sponsored by the Maharashtra State Basketball Association
Edited sentence: At the time, [JD Walsh], a former player for the University of Maryland, College Park and current basketball coach, had been looking to expand his basketball school into India when he was approached by the board of Child Nurture and Relief (CHINAR), an organization that runs an orphanage in Srinigar, Kashmir.Walsh ran by some accounts (Times of India: May 28, 2007) the first ever American-style basketball camp in India for the two hundred participants in Pune (Fergusson College), sponsored by the Maharashtra State Basketball Association