Original sentence: After stopping for unknown periods of time on the levels devoted to his childhood, he begins racing towards the top.As he opens that last door, he realizes he has done this before, countless times, but is unable to stop.In the last few scenes, Roland ascends the Dark Tower, discovering on each level mementos and other things representing each year of his very long life.It patrially addressed this by bringing in Ted Brautigan from Hearts in Atlantis and reintroducing Sheemie Ruiz from Wizard and Glass.Roland was doomed to repeat his life over and over again, with no knowledge of it, until he changed one vital moment: on the battlefield where his childhood friends fell, he had to retrieve the Horn of Eld.The nearer he gets to the final door, the more he is struck with a feeling of deja vu.The series' final sentence is the opening sentence of The Gunslinger.This book aimed to wrap up some of the loose ends from the Dark Tower series and other related books
Edited sentence: A series that once had so much potential as the sucessor toTolkien's work now seems like a wasted effort.It addressed this by bringing in Ted Brautigan from Hearts in Atlantis and reintroducing Sheemie Ruiz from Wizard and Glass.It does not tie in with any of the previous books and indicates that Stephen King wanted to finish the series so badly that he forgot about credibility and decided to have Roland of Gilead resume his quest because he forgot to retrieve the Horn of Eld, the horn of his forefathers.The ending of the series is very disappointing.The series' final sentence is the opening sentence of The Gunslinger , which to most fans will dissapoint.This book was supposed to wrap up some of the loose ends from the Dark Tower series and other related books