Original sentence: Animators used 120 terabytes of data to complete the film.Several hundred Hewlett-Packard xw8600 workstations were used, along with a 'render farm' of HP ProLiant blade servers with over 9,000 server processor cores, to process the animation sequence.They used 6 TB for an explosion scene
Edited sentence: Several hundred Hewlett-Packard xw8600 workstations were used, along with a large and powerful 'render farm' of HP ProLiant blade servers with over 9,000 server processor cores, to process the animation sequence.The movie demanded 120 terabytes of data to complete, with one explosion scene alone requiring 6 TB