Original sentence: After high school Handel forwent college and immediately went to work for Hallmark Cards.As Chief Executive for the state's largest and most populous county, Handel tackled a multi-million dollar budget deficit and was able to balance the budget.Handel discovered that the GNDC Chamber was near fiscal insolvency, and managed the once-troubled organization through financial turbulence.Handel worked as an executive with several companies including global eye care company CIBA Vision and international accounting firm KPMG.She has also served as President and CEO of the Greater North Fulton Chamber of Commerce, been an executive with several corporations, and held positions in a number of community and civic organizations, including the Governor's Transportation Task Force, co-chair of the Atlanta Regional Commission's 50-Forward steering committee and the American Cancer Society
Edited sentence: After graduating from high school Handel forwent college and immediately went to work for Hallmark Cards.As Chief Executive for the state's largest and most populous county, Handel tackled a multi-million dollar budget deficit and was able to balance the budget without raising taxes.Handel discovered that the GNDC Chamber was near fiscal insolvency, and successfully managed the once-troubled organization through financial turbulence.Handel worked as an executive with several major companies including global eye care company CIBA Vision and international accounting firm KPMG.She has also served as President and CEO of the Greater North Fulton Chamber of Commerce, been an executive with several major corporations, and held leadership positions in a number of community and civic organizations, including the Governor's Transportation Task Force, co-chair of the Atlanta Regional Commission's 50-Forward steering committee and the American Cancer Society