Original sentence: Like most busy towns, Buxton had two stations, but one was demolished in the 1960s to make way for the spring gardens shopping centre
Edited sentence: Journeys to more distant locations like Manchester are easier to make than to many local villages.Like most busy towns, Buxton had two stations, but unfortunately the other station was demolished in the 1960s to make way for a shopping centre- the sping gardens shopping centre.Some locals consider the public transportation system poor because of its lack of reliability and limitations in making local travel (e.to the Hope Valley area)