Original sentence: 4, and MacArthur.East Oakland's crime rate is pretty high, and the mayor is attempting to create new projects to make the area a better place to live in.The area contains the Fruitvale district which is developing into shopping area, and fun place to go for locals.The main streets in the East side are E
Edited sentence: 4, and MacArthur, but I aint puttin down those other streets that "people" hang, or live on.East Oakland's crime rate is pretty damn high, and the mayor is putting new projects to make the area a better place to be.That aint gon work dough.The area contains the Fruitvale district which is developing into a nice shopping, and fun place to go for locals.The main streets in the Eastside is E.quit editing my stuff maann