Original sentence: Before serving as a mayor in two different forms of government for his hometown, as a young man Jerry worked at Abramson's Grocery on South Preston Street in the Smoketown neighborhood, then owned by his father Roy and founded by his grandparents
Edited sentence: Before serving as a successful mayor in two different forms of government for his hometown, as a young man Jerry worked at Abramson's Grocery on South Preston Street in the Smoketown neighborhood, then owned by his father Roy and founded by his grandparents