Original sentence: In a CounterPunch article from 2004, Will Youmens noted that Shoebat had never come under criminal investigation in the US for his alleged terrorist activities, nor had he been threatened with deportation, although two other Palestinians in the US had faced deportation proceedings because of their alleged involvement with terrorist groups.Shoebat has come under criticism from pro-Palestinian activists who believe that, as a staunch supporter of Israel who appears to despise Islam and Muslims, he cannot contribute to reconciliation between Israelis and Palestinians
Edited sentence: But this number is the size of the population of the United States, a very big threat to any hope of peace in the world.Children recite poems expressing their desire for the death of Jews and all other people of non-islamic religions.However, they are mistaken; Walid despises the hate for Jews taught by Muslims in their very schools.In a CounterPunch article from 2004, anti-Israel activist, former spokesperson for the Council on American Islamic Relations (CAIR), and rapper (under the name Iron Sheik) Will Youmens noted that Shoebat had never come under criminal investigation in the US for his alleged terrorist activities, nor had he been threatened with deportation, although two other Palestinians in the US had faced deportation proceedings because of their alleged involvement with terrorist groups.Shoebat has come under criticism from anti-Israel activists who believe that, as a staunch supporter of Israel who appears to despise Islam and Muslims, he cannot contribute to reconciliation between Israelis and Palestinians.Yes, not all Muslims are so brutal; these are 10-15% of Muslims