Original sentence: Crazy Horses was the band's first really personal statement.They wrote all the songs and played all the instruments with Alan on rhythm guitar, Wayne on lead guitar, Merrill on lead vocals and bass, Jay on drums, and Donny on keyboards
Edited sentence: As a rock band, their line-up was Alan on rhythm guitar, Wayne on lead guitar, Merrill on lead vocals and bass, Jay on drums, and Donny on keyboards.The Crazy Horses album was a testament to the brothers' talent--they played all the instruments on the album--and it featured some serious songwriting, singing, and playing chops