Original sentence: The final episode of Enterprise, entitled "These Are the Voyages ...", aired May 13 in the United States, and was one of the most heavily criticised heavily criticized episodes the series ever aired as it doubled as both a series and a franchise finale
Edited sentence: Described by Rick Berman as a "valentine" to Star Trek fans, it has actually become one of the most controversial and heavily criticized episodes the series ever aired.The final episode of Enterprise, entitled "These Are the Voyages ...", aired May 13 in the United States