Original sentence: Oh well.The lo-fi noise rock added to the mix of their sound evidently caused the dork who originally wrote this article to hate them.The second Liars album, They Were Wrong, So We Drowned, is a vaguely coherent concept album about the Salem Witch trials
Edited sentence: It has been said that someone who vows they love this album is either lying or clinically insane, and should be avoided at all costs.It is a complete mess of noise that is so pretentious it is completely unlistenable.It was reviled by critics for good reason.The second Liar's album, They Were Wrong, So We Drowned, is supposed to be a concept album about the Salem Witch trials