Original sentence: Flagg's second appearance is in the 1986 novel The Eyes of the Dragon, as an evil wizard causing havoc in the medieval country of Delain.His appearance is hidden under a dark cloak, and most of his magic comes from performing spells and using a complex variety of potions and poisons
Edited sentence: Flagg makes his next appearance in the 1986 novel The Eyes of the Dragon as an evil wizard causing havoc in the medieval country of Delain.His appearance and mannerisms are slightly different and more understated than they were in The Stand; he is hidden under a dark cloak, and most of his magic comes from performing spells and using a complex variety of potions and poisons