Original sentence: It focuses on the lives of nine college students (four guys and four girls) (nine its first season, 10 for the intern season and 9 for the South Beach Season) who live together in a house for one semester, as cameras record and follow them as they live, learn, love, laugh, and experience life as young adults together under one roof
Edited sentence: It focuses on the lives of eight college students (four guys and four girls) (nine its first season, 10 for the intern season and 9 for the South Beach Season) who live together in a house for one semester, as cameras record and follow them as they live, learn, love, laugh, and experience life as young adults together under one roof