Original sentence: In 1957, her outspoken criticism of the harsh regime of Major-General Iskander Mirza and the forced resignation of Huseyn Shaheed Suhrawardy, the great political hero India and Bangladesh, culminated in a six-month government ban on the Mirror, issued on November 9th
Edited sentence: In 1957, her outspoken criticism of the harsh regime of Major-General Iskander Mirza and the forced resignation of Huseyn Shaheed Suhrawardy, culminated in a six-month government ban on the Mirror, issued on November 9th