Original sentence: A 2013 Cochrane Review reviewed six randomized controlled trials which investigated the effect of four types of chest physiotherapy (including OMT) as adjunctive treatments for pneumonia in adults and concluded that "based on current limited evidence, chest physiotherapy might not be recommended as routine additional treatment for pneumonia in adults.In the UK, the National Institute for Health and Care Excellence only recommend osteopathy for the treatment of persistent lower back pain.In the United Kingdom, the National Institute for Health and Care Excellence only recommend osteopathy for the treatment of persistent lower back pain.Its practitioners claim that the wellbeing of an individual depends on their bones, muscles, ligaments and connective tissue functioning smoothly together.Osteopathy has generally not been found an effective therapy.The use of osteopathy is not always based on science, and there is limited evidence that osteopathy is effective in treating any medical condition other than lower back pain.There is no compelling evidence that osteopathic manipulation is effective for the treatment of musculoskeletal pain, or for pediatric conditions.There is no good evidence that osteopathy is effective for non-musculoskeletal conditions and limited evidence that osteopathy is an effective treatment for neck pain, shoulder pain, or limb pain.They believe that their treatments, which primarily consist of moving, stretching and massaging a person’s muscles and joints, help allow the body to heal itself.They say there is no good evidence that osteopathy is effective for non-musculoskeletal conditions and limited evidence that osteopathy is an effective treatment for neck pain, shoulder pain, or limb pain
Edited sentence: The wellbeing of an individual depends on their bones, muscles, ligaments and connective tissue functioning smoothly together.Treatments, which primarily consist of moving, stretching and massaging a person’s muscles and joints, help allow the body to heal itself