Original sentence: Henderson was deeply impressed by Charles Mott, who was later killed in the war.In the regimental concert party were other well-known baritones, including Charles Mott, Percy Heming and Clay Thomas
Edited sentence: Henderson was deeply impressed by Mott, who was later killed in the war.In the regimental concert party were other well-known baritones, including Charles James Mott, Percy Heming and Clay Thomas