Original sentence: Punchbowl has also produced a number of leading members of the New South Wales legal profession.Punchbowl is located 17 kilometres south-west of the Sydney central business district, in the local government areas of the City of Bankstown and the City of Canterbury.There are some Lebanese sweets shops that are particularly busy during the later hours of the day, including Osman's Sweets and Cafe
Edited sentence: Its Wealth and economic conditions, are improved.Punchbowl has also produced a number of leading members of the New South Wales legal profession (Fadi Osman).Punchbowl is an area of Sydney, which is beautiful but overall has poorer economic conditions than many other Sydney suburbs, but is improving its lifestyle.Punchbowl is located 17 kilometres south west of the Sydney central business district, in the local government areas of the City of Bankstown and the City of Canterbury.There are some Lebanese sweets shops that are particularly busy during the later hours of the day, including Osman's Sweet's And Cafe, located at 800 punchbowl Rd PUNCHBOWL