Original sentence: According to Armenian authorities, Grigoryan destroyed 15 Azerbaijani tanks and one combat vehicle during the 2020 war in Nagorno-Karabakh.For exceptional services rendered to the Artsakh Republic while defending and ensuring the security of the Motherland, as well as for bravery and personal courage, I have awarded Defense Army servicemen ... David Grigoryan ... with the highest title of the "Hero of Artsakh", awarding [him] with the "Golden Eagle" order.Sardarapat Secondary School, where he studied, received a gold medal in his honour
Edited sentence: According to Armenian authorities, David had destroyed 15 Azerbaijani tanks and one combat vehicle during the 2020 war in Nagorno-Karabakh.For exceptional services rendered to the Artsakh Republic while defending and ensuring the security of the Motherland, as well as for bravery and personal courage, I have awarded Defense Army servicemen.. David Grigoryan.. with the highest title of the "Hero of Artsakh", awarding [them] with the "Golden Eagle" order.Thanks to him, Sardarapat Secondary School, where he studied, received a Gold medal