Original sentence: In Hong Kong Queen Victoria's statue can be seen on the east side of Victoria Park in Causeway Bay.The statue once sat in Statue Square in Central, but was removed during Japanese occupation of the territory during World War ll.With the return of Hong Kong to the British in 1945 the statue was recovered and placed in the park
Edited sentence: In Hong Kong, a statue of Queen Victoria is located on the east side of Victoria Park in Causeway Bay, Hong Kong Island.The statue once sat in Statue Square in Central but was removed and sent to Tokyo during Japanese occupation during the World War II.With the Japan's defeat and retreat in 1945, United Kingdom recovered Hong Kong and the statue was retrieved and placed in the park