Original sentence: Lusk attended Reverend Albert Spooner's school in preparation for attending Yale College, then for the winter of 1853–1854, he attended Anthon's Grammar School at Murray Street, New York City, because his uncle believed that him learning the old version of grammar from Spooner would get him rejected from Yale.Then for the winter of 1854–1855, Lusk was sent by mother to Russell's Military School in New Haven so that he could gain physical toughness through gymnastics
Edited sentence: For the winter of 1854–1855, Lusk was sent by mother to Russell's Military School in New Haven, Connecticut to gain physical toughness through gymnastics.However, his uncle believed that him learning the old version of grammar from Spooner would get him rejected from Yale, and for the winter of 1853–1854, he attended Anthon's Grammar School at Murray Street, New York City.Lusk attended a school run by local Reverend Albert Spooner in preparation for attending Yale College