Original sentence: " The Refugee Council of Australia.190 – 213</ref whom live in grinding poverty.5 Iss 2 pp.<ref>Sander G.According to Human Rights Watch, "Over.People of Bhutan are known to be amongst the happiest people in the world.Tideman (2016), Gross National Happiness: Lessons for Sustainability Leadership South Asian Journal of Global Business Research, Vol.Under the guidance of their benevolent king Bhutan has achieved Gross National Happiness.the King at the time
Edited sentence: " The Refugee Council of Australia stated that "it is extraordinary and shocking that a nation can get away with expelling one sixth of its people and somehow keep its international reputation largely intact.According to Human Rights Watch, "Over 100,000 or 1/6 of the population of Bhutan of Nepalese origin and Hindu faith were expelled from the country because they would not integrate with Bhutan's Buddhist culture.Before then, the government practiced massive ethnic cleansing of non-Buddhist population of ethnic Nepalese of Hindu faith in the name of GNH cultural preservation.GNH has been described by critics as a propaganda tool used by the Bhutanese government to distract from ethnic cleansing and human rights abuses it has committed.In an article written in 2004 in the Economist magazine, "The Himalayan kingdom of Bhutan is not in fact an idyll in a fairy tale.It is home to perhaps 900,000 people most of whom live in grinding poverty.Other criticism focuses on the standard of living in Bhutan.Some researchers state that Bhutan's GNH philosophy "has evolved over the last decade through the contribution of western and local scholars to a version that is more democratic and open.The Bhutanese democratic government started from 2008.The Government of Bhutan should be known not for Gross National Happiness but for Gross National Hypocrisy.Therefore, probably, the more accurate historical reference is to mention the coining of the GNH phrase as a key event, but not the Bhutan GNH philosophy, because the philosophy as understood by western scholars is different from the philosophy used by the King at the time