Original sentence: In 2003, at the age of 18, amidst her blooming career, Goodrem was diagnosed with Hodgkin's Lymphoma, a form of cancer which affects the immune system
Edited sentence: In 2003, at the age of 18, amidst her blooming career,(ITS AMAZING) Goodrem was diagnosed with Hodgkin's Lymphoma, a form of cancer which affects the immune system