Original sentence: Because of this the cabezas de barangay were forced to issue dues to people who were already dead or no longer there.Crisóstomo, the gobernadorcillo of Malolos at that time, proclaimed Quiroga's decree by means of a parade led by a brass band.In 1885, del Pilar urged the cabezas de barangay of Bulacan to oppose the government decree empowering the friars to change the list of taxpayers.In the record of the friars it appears that there were about three thousand people who had to pay taxes.The first success of the movement was in 1884, when the liberal Manuel Crisóstomo was elected gobernadorcillo by the citizens of Malolos.The list includes people who were already dead, are over age or have moved elsewhere
Edited sentence: Del Pilar denounced the practice wherein the cabezas payed, from their own pockets, the uncollectible taxes caused by the friars' intervention in the statistical operations.In 1885, del Pilar sided with the cabezas de barangay of Bulacan when they refused to compare their tax lists with the parochial lists.Manuel Crisóstomo, the gobernadorcillo of Malolos at that time, proclaimed Quiroga's decree by means of a parade led by a brass band.The first evidence of the success of the movement was in 1884, when the liberal Manuel Crisóstomo was elected gobernadorcillo by the citizens of Malolos