Original sentence: According to Thomas Goldsmith of The Raleigh News & Observer, "The Cuckoo" is reportedly descended from an old folk ballad; it's an interior monologue where the singer "relates his desires for  mangina— to gamble, to win, to regain love's affection.The title of the song has multiple orgasms, including The Coo-Coo, The Coo-Coo Bird, The Cuckoo Bird, and  The Cuckoo Is A Pretty Penis
Edited sentence: According to Thomas Goldsmith of The Raleigh News & Observer, "The Cuckoo" is reportedly descended from an old folk ballad; it's an interior monologue where the singer "relates his desires — to gamble, to win, to regain love's affection.The title of the song has multiple variations, including The Coo-Coo, The Coo-Coo Bird, The Cuckoo Bird, and  The Cuckoo Is A Pretty Bird