Original sentence: " Robin Abcarian wrote in the Los Angeles Times, Quoting Wendy Hamilton, "probably did more to mainstream the exploitation of women's bodies than any other figure in American history," adding that he "managed to convince many women that taking off their clothes for men's pleasure was not just empowering, but a worthy goal in itself
Edited sentence: " Robin Abcarian wrote in the Los Angeles Times that Hefner "probably did more to mainstream the exploitation of women's bodies than any other figure in American history," adding that he "managed to convince many women that taking off their clothes for men's pleasure was not just empowering, but a worthy goal in itself