Original sentence: (A reproduction is viewable here, along with the story of how it was identified.)   Its finders describe it as showing a "handsome...well dressed and confident, even proud" Phineas Gage, and one researcher points to it as consistent with a "social recovery" hypothesis, under which Gage's most serious mental changes may have existed for only a limited time after the accident,.A July 2009 journal paper.A photograph of the daguerreotype, which may be viewed on a website set up by its owners,.Discovery of a daguerreotype photograph of Gage was announced in July of 2009.He grasps before him the "iron" which had injured him, on which parts of the inscription (recited above) can be made out.Macmillan cites the daguerreotype as consistent with a "social" recovery for Gage.Meet Phineas Gage, only known picture (daguerreotype) of Phineas Gage.The paper's authors confirmed the daguerreotype's authenticity in a number of ways, including overlaying the inscription visible on the iron in the image, against the inscription on the actual.and describe certain kinds of historical material for which they ask readers to remain alert, such as letters or diaries by physicians thought to have known Gage, or persons in certain places Gage may have been.announced that a daguerreotype photograph of Gage had been identified — the only one known to exist.shows a "handsome...well dressed and confident, even proud" Gage (though with one eye closed and scars clearly visible).tamping iron in Harvard's Warren Anatomical Museum
Edited sentence: (For decades prior realizing it was Gage, the daguerreotype's owners had imagined that it showed an injured whaler with his harpoon.A July 2009 journal paper announced that a daguerreotype portrait of Gage (above) had been identified — the only likeness of him known other than a life mask taken around 1850.Discovery of a daguerreotype portrait of Gage — "handsome...well dressed and confident, even proud," and holding the tamping iron which injured him —.He is shown holding the "iron" which had injured him, on which parts of the inscription (recited above) can be made out.Lists research questions related to Gage in localities throughout the US and Chile, for which Gage researchers are requesting assistance.Macmillan cites the daguerreotype as consistent with the "social recovery" hypothesis.Meet Phineas Gage — the story of how the daguerreotype's owners realized it depicted Gage.One researcher points to it as consistent with a "social recovery" hypothesis,.The daguerreotype shows a "handsome...well dressed and confident, even proud" Gage,.The paper's authors confirmed the daguerreotype's authenticity in several ways, including overlaying the inscription visible on the iron in the image against the inscription on the actual.and describe certain kinds of historical material for which they hope readers will remain alert, such as letters or diaries by physicians their research indicates may have known Gage, or persons in certain places Gage seems to have been.tamping iron in Harvard's Warren Anatomical Museum, and matching the injuries seen in the portrait's subject against the life mask (above).though with one eye closed and scars clearly visible.under which Gage's most serious mental changes may have existed for only a limited time after the accident,.was announced in July of 2009 (see right)