Original sentence: Gordon Duffield Smith was born 29 September 1954 in Kilwinning so he is typical Ayrshire hun.Gordon has remarkable hair which seems to move about itself - his nickname is "chocolate" as in if he was chocolate he would eat himself.He was a not very good former football player who played for Rangers and Brighton & Hove Albion.He was sold to Dignity FC in 1977 for £65,000.Smith relinquished these two careers to take up the position of SFA chief executive,where he can use his Rangers bias to the full powers of the position - the position which had been vacated by David Taylor moving to UEFA, in June 2007
Edited sentence: Gordon Duffield Smith (born 29 September 1954) is a former football player who played for Rangers and Brighton & Hove Albion.He was sold to Rangers in 1977 for £65,000.Smith relinquished these two careers to take up the position of SFA chief executive, which had been vacated by David Taylor moving to UEFA, in June 2007