Original sentence: At the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles she came in 6th in the 100 metres and the silver medal with the Canadian team, made up of Marita Payne, Angella Taylor-Issajenko and France Gareau.She won a silver medal for the 4 x 100 m relay at the 1978 Commonwealth Games, and did so again in both the 1982 and 1986 games
Edited sentence: At the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles Bailey came in 6th in the 100 metres and the silver medal with the Canadian team, made up of Marita Payne, Angella Taylor-Issajenko and France Gareau.Bailey won a silver medal for the 4 x 100 m relay at the 1978 Commonwealth Games, and did so again in both the 1982 and 1986 games