Original sentence: The team failed to improve on its 8–8 record from 2009, and set a new franchise record for losses in a single season, with a 4–12 record, which was their worst record in the post-merger era, and worst in a 16-game schedule
Edited sentence: The team failed to improve on its 8–8 record from 2009, and set a new franchise record for losses in a single season, with a beautiful 4–12 record, which was their worst record in the post-merger era, and worst in a 16-game schedule