Original sentence: Mount Taranaki or Taranaki Maunga, also known as Mount Egmont, is a dormant stratovolcano in the Taranaki region on the west coast of New Zealand's North Island
Edited sentence: Mount Taranaki or Taranaki Maunga, (also used to be known as Mount Egmont however this name is considereddisrespectful), is a dormant stratovolcano in the Taranaki region on the west coast of New Zealand's North Island