Original sentence: Tatul Hakobyan, an independent Armenian analyst and journalist, wrote that de Waal has quoted Serzh Sargsyan out of context in the Black Garden regarding the latter's comments about the Khojaly Massacre
Edited sentence: " Vrtanesyan concludes that "Black Garden is not an unbiased work, neither can its author be considered a neutral observer.In 2021, de Waal was criticized for his "false moral equivalence" in an article written by Nevdon Jamgochian for the online arts magazine, Hyperallergic.The book was also criticized by Karen Vrtanesyan, an Armenian expert for the Ararat Center for Strategic Research, as "a banal propaganda but not an objective research on Armenian-Azerbaijani conflict.Upon the publication of de Waal's article for ArtNet News on cultural heritage after the 2020 Nagorno- Karabakh War, Jamgochian criticized de Waal for positing that "the destruction of tens of thousands of ancient monuments as state policy by Azerbaijan, followed by the denial of the crime, is somehow the same as the failed upkeep of a mosque by the poorest country in the Caucasus region