Original sentence: Constantine offers Garrett a fortune for the job of retrieving a gemstone known as The Eye.Evading the Assassins, Garret counters by robbing his mansion, thus humiliating Ramirez.Garrett accepts, but later leaves to put his skills to thievery.He is caught attempting to pickpocket a man, but the stranger reveals himself to be a Keeper, and notes Garret is gifted, as it is unusual for a Keeper to be seen.She contracts Garrett to steal a magical sword from the eccentric nobleman Constantine.This display of skill attracts the attention of Viktoria, a somewhat mysterious independent fence.Upon Garret's successful return from Constantine's bizarre mansion, Viktoria reveals that she and Constantine are old associates who were testing Garrett
Edited sentence: Afterwards, he is approached by a woman named Viktoria, who claims to represent a client impressed by his abilities.Constantine explains that Viktoria is an affiliate, and that Garrett was being tested.Evading the Assassins, Garrett counters by robbing his mansion, thus humiliating Ramirez.Garret accepts, but later leaves to put his skills to thievery.Garrett is contracted to steal a magical sword belonging to Constantine, an eccentric nobleman and collector who had recently arrived in the City.He is caught, but the stranger reveals himself to be a Keeper, who says that Garrett is gifted, for it is unusual that a Keeper be seen.He notices a person whom the crowd ignores as if he were not there, and attempts to pickpocket him.He offers Garrett a fortune for the retrieval of a gemstone called The Eye.Upon Garrett's completion of the mission, Viktoria leads him to Constantine