Original sentence: Based on accounts by detransitioners, Marchiano states that transition magnifies, rather than remedies, gender dysphoria.Some researchers perceive there to be an atmosphere of censorship around studying the phenomenon
Edited sentence: Marchiano states, based on unspecified "Numerous blog posts by detransitioners", that transition magnifies, rather than remedies, gender dysphoria.There is perceived to be an atmosphere of censorship around researching the phenomenon