Original sentence: After the war, she returned to the jazz world.Among these recordings are Bigard's original hit version of "Caravan", Hodges' "Jeep's Blues" and Williams' "Dooji Wooji" (all written or co-written by Ellington).Dance was one of the earliest contributors to DownBeat magazine.Following the death of her brother during the Second World War, she joined the Women's Army Corps and later did secret operations with the Office of Strategic Services.In 1987, she wrote Stormy Monday: The T-Bone Walker Story.Mills had two record labels, Master and Variety
Edited sentence: After the war she returned to the jazz world.Dance was one of the earliest contributors to Downbeat Magazine.Downbeat went on to become a significant publication about jazz music.Following the death of her brother during the Second World War she joined the Women's Army Corps and later did secret operations with the Office of Strategic Services.In 1987, she wrote Stormy Monday: The T-Bone Walker Story, arguably among the best regarded biographies of a blues musician.Irving had two record labels, Master and Variety.Notable among these recordings are Bigard's original hit version of "Caravan", and jazz classics such as Hodges' "Jeep's Blues" and Williams' "Dooji Wooji" (all written or co-written by Ellington)