Original sentence: Also, the band have been working with and writing for Take That, resulting in the track "Here" on 2008's The Circus, Pete Lawrie, Andy Steele Dido and Lisa Mitchell
Edited sentence: Also, the band have been working with and writing for Take That, resulting in the bonus-track "Here" on 2008's The Circus.They also worked with Pete Lawrie, Andy Steele, Dido and Lisa Mitchell