Original sentence: At 15 years of age, Murray entered the Halifax Royal Naval College
Edited sentence: At 15 years of age, Murray entered the Royal Naval College of Canada in Halifax.His father Simon Dickson Murray (1859-1936) was a direct descendant of the Scottish immigrants who travelled to Pictou County on the Hector in 1773.Leonard Warren Murray was born at Granton, Nova Scotia, on 22 June 1896.Simon was mid-level manager in various enterprises in Pictou Landing, and Leonard grew up close to the water