Original sentence: From January, 2002 to December 15, 2003, while still in college, Love was a kernel hacker at MontaVista Software.Later he became the Chief Architect of SUSE Linux Enterprise Desktop.Love began work at Ximian, by then a part of Novell, on December 15, 2003, where he first served as an engineer in the Linux desktop group.Love is also active in the GNOME community, working on NetworkManager, GNOME Volume Manager, Project Utopia and Beagle.Love resigned from Novell on May 4, 2007 to work at Google, where he works on their mobile device platform, Android.Love transferred to Google Web Server team in June 2009.Robert Matthew Love (born c
Edited sentence: After Ximian's acquisition by Novell, he became the Chief Architect of SUSE Linux Enterprise Desktop.From January, 2002 to December 15, 2003, while still in college, Love was employed as a kernel hacker at MontaVista Software.In June of 2009, Love began work on the Google Web Server.It was with his preemptive kernel work that he launched his upward ascent.Love (born c.Love began work at Ximian on December 15, 2003, where he first served as Senior Engineer in the Linux Desktop Group.Love is also active in the GNOME--working on NetworkManager, GNOME Volume Manager, Project Utopia and Beagle--and the Android communities.Love resigned from Novell on May 4, 2007 to work at Google, to work on their mobile device platform, Android.Robert M