Original sentence: Hereleased Turf, his first comic book, in 2010, with American artist Tommy Lee Edwards.Ross is also an fan of comic books and co-owned a comic shop in London with Paul Gambaccini
Edited sentence: Ross is also an ardent fan of comic books and he has even co-owned a comic shop in London with Paul Gambaccini and released Turf, his first comic book, in 2010, with American artist Tommy Lee Edwards