Original sentence: Critics took to  Twitter who denounce Qureshi’s comments.In May 2021, during the 2021 Israel–Palestine crisis, Golodryga came under spotlight on social networking service Twitter for her interview of Shah Mahmood Qureshi, the current Pakistani Minister of Foreign Affairs.Now, what balances that is the citizen journalist who has been reporting, sharing video clips, and that has jolted people, and woken up people, and people who were sitting on the fence are today speaking up".Pakistani government officials and social media commentators have defended Qureshi’s remarks.They are losing the media war, despite their connections,” in reference to the global condemnation of Israel's high-handed campaign of airstrikes against Gaza
Edited sentence: In May 2021, during the 2021 Israel–Palestine crisis, which had resulted in deaths of approximately 232 Palestinians - including 65 children - in Gaza by Israeli airstrikes, and approximately 12 deaths in Israel including one child, Golodryga came under spotlight and received flak on social networking service Twitter for her interview of Shah Mahmood Qureshi, the then Pakistani Minister of Foreign Affairs.Now, what balances that is the citizen journalist who has been reporting, sharing video clips, and that has jolted people, and woken up people, and people who were sitting on the fence are today speaking up.The twist given by Golodryga to Qureshi's remarks of being antisemitic did not go down well with Twitter users who called out Golodryga for the media bias against Palestine.They are losing the media war, despite their connections,” in reference to the global condemnation of Israel's high-handed campaign of airstrikes against Gaza, which - according to the United Nations - had demolished an estimated 94 buildings in Gaza, comprising 461 housing and commercial units, including schools and hospitals