Original sentence: After the fall of Mecca in july 1916 the fall of Taif was a major blow for Turks who were fighting in first world war against Britain.Battle of Taif happened between ottoman forces and Syed Hussien bin Ali Sharif of Mecca in 1916
Edited sentence: After the fall of Mecca in july 1916 the fall of Taif was a major blow for Turks who were fighting in First World War against Britain.The Battle of Taif was fought between ottoman forces and Syed Hussien bin Ali Sharif of Mecca in 1916