Original sentence: Judge was one of the seventeen co-founders of the Theosophical Society.When Olcott and Blavatsky left the United States for India, he stayed behind to manage the Society's work, all the while working as a lawyer
Edited sentence: A vigorous, imaginative, and idealistic young man, he was among the seventeen people who first put the Theosophical Society together.When Olcott and Blavatsky left the United States for India, Judge stayed behind to manage the Society's work, all the while working as a lawyer