Original sentence: Peter Boylan, one of Ireland's most well known obstetricians, resigned from the board over the influence of the Sisters on the new hospital.The trust ownership of the hospital associated with the Sisters of Charity (an order of Catholic nuns) caused controversy
Edited sentence: Peter Boylan, one of Ireland's most respected obstetricians, resigned from the board over the influence of the Sisters on the new hospital.The decision to give the ownership of the hospital to its founders, the Sisters of Charity (an order of Catholic nuns) caused controversy