Original sentence: 1973) is a senior editor for allmusic.Erlewine studied at the University of Michigan where he majored in English and was music editor (1993-94) and then arts editor (1994-95) of the school paper The Michigan Daily.He has also appeared on VH1.He has contributed to a number of books, such as All Music Guide to Rock: The Definitive Guide to Rock, Pop, and Soul, All Music Guide to Hip-Hop: The Definitive Guide to Rap & Hip-Hop, etc.He is the author of thousands of brief artist biographies and record reviews, as well as a freelance writer, and has written several liner notes
Edited sentence: 1973) is a senior editor for allmusic, and has appeared on VH1.. He is an author of artist biographies and record reviews, as well as a freelance writer, and has written several liner notes.He has contributed to a number of books, including All Music Guide to Rock: The Definitive Guide to Rock, Pop, and Soul, and All Music Guide to Hip-Hop: The Definitive Guide to Rap & Hip-Hop.He studied at the University of Michigan where he majored in English and was music editor (1993-94) and then arts editor (1994-95) of the school paper The Michigan Daily