Original sentence: At fifteen, he appeared at Fontainbleu, and then Berlin before Frederick II and his brother Prince Henry of Prussia.He composed Les Caprices de Galathée and garbed his dancers in tiger skins and shoes made of tree bark.He continued to supervise dance spectacles under Garrick but without billing.He first performed at Fontainebleau in 1743, and in 1747 composed his first ballet for the Opéra-Comique.He married the actress Marie-Louise Sauveur.He moved to Strasburg for one year in 1754, and returned to the Opéra-Comique where Les Fêtes was staged with great success.He then went to Lyon.In 1747, Noverre became ballet master in Marseilles and created the exotic Les Fêtes Chinoises.In 1748 he was invited to Berlin by Prince Henry of Prussia, but went to Strasbourg where he stayed until 1750.In 1755 he was invited by Garrick to London, where he remained for two years.In 1755, he went to London with his wife, his sister, and his company.Noverre was born in Paris on 27 April 1727 to Marie Anne de la Grange and Jean Louys, a Swiss soldier.Noverre's first professional experience as a dancer may have occurred at Jean Monnet's Opéra-Comique in Paris on 8 June 1743 in Favart's vaudeville Le Coqu du village.There, he worked with David Garrick of the Drury Lane Theatre, learning new concepts of theatre and a natural style of performance
Edited sentence: He composed Les Caprices de Galathée, for example, and garbed his dancers in tiger skins and shoes made of tree bark.He continued to supervise dance spectacles at Drury Lane but without billing.He is believed to have married the actress Marie-Louise Sauveur while employed in Marseilles.He moved to Strasbourg where he remained until 1750 before moving to Lyon.He moved to Strasburg for one year in 1754, and returned to the Opéra-Comique where Les Fêtes was staged with great success on 1 July 1754.His first professional appearances occurred as a youth in Paris at the Opéra-Comique, at Fontainebleau, in Berlin before Frederick II and his brother Prince Henry of Prussia, in Dresden and Strasburg.In 1747, Noverre became ballet master in Marseilles and created his first success, the exotic Les Fêtes Chinoises.In 1751, he composed his first great work, Les Fêtes Chinoises for Marseilles.In 1755, he was invited by Garrick to London, where he remained for two years.In 1755, he went to London with his wife, his sister and brother, and his company.In his middle and late teenage years, Noverre  performed at Fontainbleu, and in Berlin before Frederick II and his brother Prince Henry of Prussia.Noverre was born in Paris on 29 April 1727 to Marie Anne de la Grange and Jean Louys, a Swiss soldier.Noverre's first professional experience as a dancer probably occurred at the Opéra-Comique in Paris on 8 June 1743 in Favart's vaudeville, Le Coqu du village.The work was revived in Paris in 1754 to great acclaim.There, he worked with David Garrick of the Drury Lane Theatre, learning new concepts of theatre and the then developing natural style of performance