Original sentence: It is a traditional pub with a Victorian decor, dark wood ceilings and panelling, booths with leather benches, tiled floors, and brass oil lamps.The traditional top floor room features a display of barometers and Venetian mirrors
Edited sentence: It is a traditional pub with a Victorian atmosphere, featuring dark wood ceilings and panelling, snug booths with buttoned leather benches, tiled floors, old brass oil lamps, and a real coal fire in each room.The traditional top floor room features a quirky display of barometers and beautiful Venetian mirrors