Original sentence: After the dramatic events that preceded the novel, Delaware and his girlfriend Robin are invited to take a trip to an exotic island where he can help a doctor collect and organize his works.However, this is only a pretext.It worries and upsets her, a condition that continues and grows in future novels.This novel is also the first time that Robin sees first hand Delaware's experience with danger
Edited sentence: A complicated plot, laced with ever-present murder, and a weird experiment gone terribly wrong is woven through the uneven writing, uncharacteristic for Kellerman.After the dramatic events that preceded the novel, Delaware and his girlfriend Robin travel to an exotic island where Delaware helps a doctor collect and organize his works