Original sentence: Robert Gerard Sands (; 9 March 19545 May 1981) was a member of the Provisional Irish Republican Army (IRA) who died on hunger strike while imprisoned at HM Prison Maze (also known as Long Kesh) in Northern Ireland
Edited sentence: Robert Gerard Sands (; 9 March 19545 May 1981) was a Irish poet, freedom fighter for the rights of Irish catholics to live and prosper on the island of Ireland under harsh British imperialism and was also a member of the Provisional Irish Republican Army (IRA) who died on hunger strike while imprisoned at HM Prison Maze (also known as Long Kesh) in Northern Ireland