Original sentence: Kishori Amonkar was born in Mumbai to Mogubai Kurdikar, a renowned classical vocalist and Madhavdas Bhatiya
Edited sentence: According to a book on Kishori Amonkar, written by Datta Marulkar, her father's name was Madhavdas Bhatia.Kishori Amonkar was born in Mumbai to Mogubai Kurdikar, a renowned classical vocalist