Original sentence: Also, a Western Pahari Corridor from Shimla to Murree has also been proposed under the Aman ki Asha initiative to link the similar Western Pahari language-based regions of Himachal Pradesh, Jammu, Azad Kashmir and Pothohar Plateau for boosting commercial and cultural ties.The crossing allows devotees from India to visit the gurdwara in Kartarpur,  from the India–Pakistan border on the Pakistani side without a visa
Edited sentence: Also, a Western Pahari Corridor from Shimla to Murree has also been proposed under the Aman ki Asha initiative to link the similar Western Pahari language-based regions of Himachal Pradesh, Jammu, Pakistan occupied Kashmir (PoK) and Pothohar Plateau for boosting commercial and cultural ties.The crossing allows devotees from India any religion to visit the gurdwara in Kartarpur,  from the India–Pakistan border on the Pakistani side without a visa