Original sentence: Vinayak Damodar (veer) Savarkar (; 28 May 1883 – 26 February 1966), commonly known as  Swatantryaveer Savarkar or simply  Veer Savarkar in Marathi language, was an Indian independence activist and politician who formulated the Hindu nationalist philosophy of Hindutva
Edited sentence: Vinayak Damodar (veer) Savarkar (; 28 May 1883 – 26 February 1966), commonly known as  Swatantryaveer Savarkar or simply  Veer Savarkar in Marathi language, was a revolutionary Indian freedom fighter and an Indian independence activist who formulated the Hindu nationalist philosophy of Hindutva