Original sentence: Falooda or randi faluda is an Indian version of a cold dessert made with noodles.How To Make Falooda (Indian Dessert Drink).In idiomatic Hindustani,  is sometimes used as a reference to something that has been shredded, which is an allusion to the vermicelli noodles.It has origins in the Persian dish faloodeh, variants of which are found across West, Central, and South Asia.It is also a well known part of Sri Lankan modern culture.The Persianate rulers who succeeded from the Mughals patronized the dessert with their own adaptations, specifically in Hyderabad Deccan and the Carnatic areas of present-day India.The present form of falooda was developed in the Mughal Empire and spread with its conquests.This dessert is now a major part of Pakistani and Bangladeshi culture, specially served on Islamic holidays, weddings and other occasions
Edited sentence: Falooda or rabri faluda is a South Asian version of a cold dessert made with noodles.Falooda originated in the Mughal Empire by Muslims and spread with its conquests.In Maldives the drink, Faloodha (ފަލޫދާ)  has a similar variant which is commonly made similar with rose syrup, basil leaves and condensed milk.It has also a well known part of modern Sri Lankan cuisine.It originated from the Persian dish faloodeh, variants of which are found across West, Central, and South Asia.Sometimes served with vanilla essence or vanilla ice cream.The Persianate rulers who succeeded from the Mughals patronized the dessert with their own adaptations, specifically in Hyderabad.This dessert is a major part of Pakistani and Bangladeshi culture, specially served on Islamic holidays, weddings and other occasions.is sometimes used as a reference to something that has been shredded, which is an allusion to the vermicelli noodles