Original sentence: Despite their lack of chart success, the Platters were a profitable touring group--successful enough that The Penguins, coming off their #2 single "Earth Angel", asked Ram to manage them as well.However, Bennett never recieved any of the money
Edited sentence: Despite their lack of chart success, the Platters were a profitable touring group—successful enough that The Penguins, coming off their #2 single "Earth Angel", asked Ram to manage them as well.However, Bennett never received any of the money