Original sentence: On May 12, 2021, a Cirrus SR22 N416DJ and Key Lime Air Flight 970, a Swearingen SA-226-TC Metro II N280KL operating a charter cargo flight, collided on approach to Centennial Airport in Colorado.The Cirrus made a safe off-airport parachute-assisted landing, while the Key Lime pilot landed safely at Centennial despite the loss of a section of the cabin roof, damage to the empennage, and failure of one engine
Edited sentence: On May 12, 2021, a Cirrus SR22 N416DJ collided with Key Lime Air Flight 970, Swearingen SA-226-TC Metro II N280KL operating a charter cargo flight, which was on approach to Centennial Airport in Colorado.The Cirrus made a safe off-airport parachute-assisted landing, while the Key Lime pilot landed safely at Centennial despite the loss of several feet of the cabin roof, damage to the empennage, and failure of one engine