Original sentence: Knightley approves deeply of Emma's recognition of her wrongdoing and attempt to atone, revealing a foreshadowing of more meaningful affection for Emma.Knightley scolds her for a thoughtless insult to Miss Bates, Emma is privately ashamed, and tries to atone.Martin; Jane and Emma reconcile; and everyone lives happily
Edited sentence: Knightley is surprised but deeply impressed by Emma's recognition of her wrongdoing and attempt to atone, revealing a foreshadowing of more meaningful affection for Emma.Knightley scolds her for a thoughtless insult to Miss Bates, Emma is privately ashamed, and tries to atone by going to visit Miss Bates.Martin; Jane and Emma reconcile; and everyone lives happily ever after