Original sentence: Shah got his film breakthrough from Nai Nabhannu La 4.Since then has made an appearance in the romantic drama Ma Yesto Geet Gauchu, action film Johnny Gentleman and family drama Shatru Gate
Edited sentence: Shah got his film breakthrough from Nai Nabhannu La 4, which was a commercial success.Since then has made an appearance in the commercially successful romantic drama Ma Yesto Geet Gauchu, action film Johnny Gentleman and family drama Shatru Gate