Original sentence: Born into a working-class family, Mario Borrelli had to leave school at the age of nine to support his family.During these years, he reaches the most remote suburbs of the city with his “flying church”, a  second-hand Austin car he had acquired when thge Allies in departed from Naples.For three years he worked as a metal gilder  and as a lad in a barber shop.He converted the boot of the car into an altar for   Mass and a puppet theatre to teach catechism to the children.He founded   the first section of the “Gioventù Operaia” (Young Labourers) and promoted “ONARMO” Opera Nazionale per l'Assistenza Religiosa e Morale degli Operai (National Labour for the Religious and Moral Assistance of Workers), becoming the factory chaplain of several companies.He returned to education aged 12 when he was accepted at the Apostolic School, with support of Father Nobilione, a priest who attended the barber shop where he used to work,  who paed the school fees for the first year.His mother and father were artisan goldsmith's in Napleswith five children.In 1946, Mario was consecrated as a priest.In 1949, he was appointed to teach  religion at the Jacopo Sannazaro High School of Naples.With his seminary companion, Father Ciccio (Francesco) Spada, he decides to carry out an enterprise among the street children, commonly called in Naples “scugnizzi” (street urchins)
Edited sentence: Born in a family of the working-class, Mario Borrelli interrupts his education at the age of nine for economic needs and works, for three years, as a metal gilders and lad in a barber shop.During these years, he reaches the most remote suburbs of the city with his “flying church”, a little second-hand Austin car he had bought by the Allies in departure from Naples, whose trunk he had transformed in an altar for the Mass and in a puppet theatre to teach catechism to children.Eager to resume his studies, at the age of twelve, he decides to stop working and is accepted at the Apostolic School, thanks to the efforts of his mother and financial support of Father Nobilione, a priest who attended the barber shop where he used to work and who will pay the school fee for the first year.His mother and father are modest artisan goldsmith's in Naples and have other four children.In 1946, Mario is consecrated priest and immediately stands out in his vocation for the poor and discriminated: in Naples he founds the first section of the “Gioventù Operaia” (Young Labourers) and is one of the promoters of “ONARMO” Opera Nazionale per l'Assistenza Religiosa e Morale degli Operai (National Labour for the Religious and Moral Assistance of Workers), becoming the factory chaplain of various companies.In 1949, the young priest teaches religion at the Jacopo Sannazaro High School of Naples although he is not a common religion teacher since he knows the most remote corners and streets of Naples and, together with his seminary companion, Father Ciccio (Francesco) Spada, he decides to carry out an enterprise among the street children, commonly called in Naples “scugnizzi” (street urchins)