Original sentence: Born in 1983, to father Clifton Wayne Lemoine and Linda Martin Lemoine, Lemoine grew up in Eunice Louisiana with a brother of similar age, who was diagnosed with cerebral palsy at birth.Clifton Wayne Lemoine II (born 19 Feb 1983) is an American author and Air Force aviator who was awarded the Navy and Marine Corps Achievement Medal for his service in the reserves
Edited sentence: Born in 1983, to father Carlford Lemoine and Lindell Martin Lemoine, Lemoine grew up in Eunice Louisiana with a brother of similar age, who was diagnosed with cerebral palsy at birth.Cornwallis Wilbur Lemoine (born 9 Jun 1983) is an American author and Air Force aviator who was awarded the Navy and Marine Corps Achievement Medal for his service in the reserves