Original sentence: " He assisted Starfire during a mission in Russia and quickly became a friend and ally to her and the Titans; he is also one of the few superheroes in the series to be addressed by his real name, and is addressed as a Captain by Raskov, a former general in charge of the program.A leakage in the containment unit made the radiation melt up the snow outside which would seep into a pond, where it eventually created a plasma monster which wreaks havoc on the surrounding settlements, acting out Red Star's latent resentments.Before his departure, however, the Titans have made Red Star an honorary member, and his fellow people, who have previously shunned and feared him, now view him as a hero.Encouraged by Starfire to embrace his power instead of fighting it back, Red Star fights the creature and destroys it by pumping it full with an overdose of radioactive energy.How he survived is never explained, though given his new flight ability he could have simply flown back after the explosion.However, the energy within his body thus rises to uncontrollable levels, and he asks Starfire to take him into space, where his power is released in a gigantic explosion.Red Star appeared in the Teen Titans animated series episode "Snowblind.Red Star gets blamed for the creature's actions, partly because of the destruction he had inadvertently caused when his powers went berserk the first time.Red Star reappears in "Titans Together", now flight-capable, along with Starfire and Bumblebee in the headquarters of the Brotherhood of Evil to help the Titans fight the assembled supervillains.Red Star was granted superior strength, stamina, and the ability to generate radiation in a government experiment for creating super-soldiers
Edited sentence: " He assists Starfire during a mission in Russia and quickly becomes a friend and ally to her and the Titans; he is also one of the few superheroes in the series to be addressed by his real name, and is addressed as a Captain by Raskov, a former general in charge of the program.A leakage in the containment unit makes the radiation melt up the snow outside which seeps into a pond, where it eventually creates a plasma monster which wreaks havoc on the surrounding settlements, acting out Red Star's latent resentments.Before his departure, the Titans have make Red Star an honorary member, and his people (who previously shunned and feared him) now see him as a hero.Encouraged by Starfire to embrace his power instead of fighting them back, Red Star fights the creature and destroys it by pumping it full of an overdose of radioactive energy.How he survives is never explained, though his newly aquired flight ability would allow him to return easily after the explosion.However, this causes energy within his body to rises to uncontrollable levels; leading him to ask Starfire to take him into space, where his power is released in a gigantic explosion.Red Star appeares in the Teen Titans animated series episode "Snowblind.Red Star gets blamed for the creature's actions, partly because of the destruction he inadvertently causes when his powers go berserk the first time.Red Star is granted superior strength, stamina, and the ability to generate radiation in a government experiment for creating super-soldiers.Red Star reappears in "Titans Together", along with Starfire and Bumblebee, in the headquarters of the Brotherhood of Evil to help the Titans fight the assembled supervillains