Original sentence: After repair works had been completed on Ellen House and furniture procurred, Accra Academy was officially opened on 20th July, 1931.The impressive results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1st January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school.The impressive results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1st January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary schoolrecorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1st January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school
Edited sentence: After repair works had been completed on Ellen House and furniture procurred, Accra Academy was officially opened on 20 July, 1931.The impressive results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1 January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school.The impressive results recorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1 January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary schoolrecorded by the school soon caught the attention of the Department of ducation and in 1947, a recommendation was made to the Director of Education to place Accra Academy on the list of government assisted schools and from 1 January, 1950, Accra Academy became a government assisted secondary school