Original sentence: The player controls a high school student named Makoto Naegi who finds himself involved in a battle royale in Hope's Peak Academy, where the robot bear Monokuma gives the 16 students the chance to escape from the establishment if they murder another student and not be voted as the killer in a trial
Edited sentence: The player controls a high school student named Makoto Naegi who is an EXTREME pushover and annoying as heck finds himself involved in a battle royale in Hope's Peak Academy, where the robot bear Monokuma gives the 16 students the chance to escape from the establishment if they murder another student and not be voted as the killer in a trial