Original sentence: Most front-line child welfare organisations, such as Plunket, Barnardos, Save the Children, Unicef, Women's Refuge, CPAG, Epoch and Jigsaw believe the referendum question is misleading, and are encouraging their supporters to vote "yes".Murray Edridge, Chief Executive of Barnardo's, noted that the question "presupposes that smacking is part of good parental correction" which he described as "a debatable issue".Sue Bradford has introduced a Private Members' Bill designed to prevent future referenda from having poorly worded questions, and the government is currently considering adopting it
Edited sentence: Most front-line child welfare organisations, such as Plunket, Barnardos, Save the Children, Unicef, Women's Refuge, CPAG, Epoch and Jigsaw, believe the referendum question is misleading, and are encouraging their supporters to vote "yes".Murray Edridge, Chief Executive of Barnardos New Zealand, noted that the question "presupposes that smacking is part of good parental correction" which he described as "a debatable issue".Sue Bradford has introduced a private member's bill designed to prevent future citizens-initiated referenda from having poorly worded questions, and the government is currently considering adopting it