Original sentence: Her colleagues included the notable researchers Jane Brotherton Walker and Harry Hoogstraal.In 1939 she lectured at Rhodes University College, before accepting a research post in the entomology section at Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute, where she studied ticks for the following 25 years, becoming well known around the world in her field
Edited sentence: In 1939 she lectured at Rhodes University College, before accepting a research post in the entomology section at Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute, where she studied ticks for the following 25 years, becoming well known around the world in her field and counting among her colleagues such luminaries as Jane Brotherton Walker and Harry Hoogstraal