Original sentence: The British colonial administration's subsequent declaration of a state of emergency on 18 June 1948 marked the start of the Malayan Emergency.The Kinta Valley, one of the richest tin mining areas in Malaya, accounted for most of the country's tin exports to the United States.Throughout the first emergency the British colonial authorities and their Malayan collaborators fought against the communists.To protect it from the communists, on 1 May 1952, the Perak Chinese Tin Mining Association established the Kinta Valley Home Guard (KVHG)
Edited sentence: The British colonial occupation's subsequent declaration of a state of emergency on 18 June 1948 marked the start of the Malayan Emergency.The Kinta Valley, one of the richest tin mining areas in Malaya, the welth of which was siphoned by the British colonial occupation to pay war debts to the United States.Throughout the first emergency the British colonial occupation and their Malayan collaborators fought against the communists.To defend their profits from communists, on 1 May 1952, the Perak Chinese Tin Mining Association established the Kinta Valley Home Guard (KVHG)