Original sentence: The plot follows John Kelly, a U.Without Remorse (also known as Tom Clancy's Without Remorse) is a 2021 American action thriller film based on a 2010s modernized version of 1993 novel of the same name by Tom Clancy
Edited sentence: The plot, that bears no relation to Tom Clancys original novel, follows John Kelly, a U.Without Remorse (also known as Tom Clancy's Without Remorse) is a 2021 American action thriller film supposedly based on a 2010s modernized version of 1993 novel of the same name by Tom Clancy