Original sentence: Earlier, Muhammad Ali Jinnah played pivotal role in the awareness struggle on the Palestine issue in the Subcontinent.He attended deliberations of UN Ad Hoc Committee over Palestine and vividly declared Balfour Declaration as illegitimate and clearly rejected partition of Palestine that Pakistan would not accept  that  unjust  plan.In post  Khilafat  Movement scenario, All India Muslim League (AIML) kept staunch support to Palestine and rights of the Arabs.Jinnah and Allama Muhammad Iqbal put Palestine issue on top of agenda list of the meetings and  sessions and opined  that  'Balfour  Declaration  was  unjust'.Just a few days after partition, Jinnah announced to send a delegation to Cairo under Abdur Rehman Siddiqui to participate in Inter-Parliamentary World Congress on Palestine to be held in last week of August 1947.League,  under  Jinnah,  not  only  broadened  its  basis among  the  masses  but  also  took  up  Palestine  issue  through various  measures  inside  and  outside  India.The  decade  of  1930's  witnessed  significant developments on Palestine under leadership of Muhammad Ali Jinnah.The duo would later break news headlines as the first open Israeli-Pakistani partnership anywhere, which was positively received in both Israel and Pakistan alike albeit criticized by Pakistan's conservative religious parties.This information first surfaced in a WikiLeaks publishing one year after the 2008 Mumbai attacks were carried out by Lashkar-e-Taiba, a Pakistan-based Islamist terrorist organization.When the Lahore Resolution was passed in March 1940 by the AIML, Jinnah also permitted a resolution on the status of Palestine to be moved, whereby support for the Palestinian cause was reaffirmed
Edited sentence: Albeit was criticized by Pakistan's majority of people because of Israel's stance against Palestine and Pakistan's nuclear program.During the post - Khilafat  Movement scenario, All India Muslim League (AIML) gave staunch support to Palestine and rights of the Arabs.Earlier, Muhammad Ali Jinnah played a pivotal role in the awareness struggle on the Palestine issue in the Subcontinent.He attended deliberations of UN Ad Hoc Committee over Palestine and vividly declared the Balfour Declaration as illegitimate and clearly rejected the partition of Palestine, andthat Pakistan would not accept such an unjust  plan.Jinnah and Allama Muhammad Iqbal put the Palestine issue at the  top of the agenda list of their meetings and sessions, and opined  that the 'Balfour  Declaration  was  unjust'.Just a few days after partition, Jinnah announced to send a delegation to Cairo under Abdur Rehman Siddiqui to participate in the Inter-Parliamentary World Congress in Palestine to be held in the last week of August 1947.The 1930's  witnessed  significant developments in Palestine under the leadership of Muhammad Ali Jinnah.The League,  under  Jinnah,  not  only  broadened  its  basis among  the  masses,  but  also  took  up the Palestine  issue  through various  measures  inside  and  outside  India.The duo would later break news headlines as the first open Israeli-Pakistani partnership anywhere, which was differently perceived in both Israel and Pakistan.This information first surfaced in a WikiLeaks publishing one year after the 2008 Mumbai attacks were carried out by Lashkar-e-Taiba, a Pakistan-based terrorist organization.When the Lahore Resolution was passed in March 1940 by the AIML, Jinnah had permitted a resolution on the status of Palestine, whereby support for the Palestinian cause was reaffirmed