Original sentence: Bret Stephens, former editor of the Jerusalem Post, lists a number of individuals as being members of an "anti-Israel lobby," including John Mearsheimer, Professor of Political Science at the University of Chicago, and Stephen Walt, Professor of International Relations at the Kennedy School of Government at Harvard University, including David Duke, [[Pat.Buchanan]], Noam Chomsky, Tony Judt, Alexander Cockburn, Scott McConnell, unnamed wealthy Saudi Arabians, Michael Moore, Cindy Sheehan, HAMAS, the Sunni Muslim Brotherhood, Hezbollah, large segments of the [[United States State Department and a number of publications worldwide.In an Wall Street Journal Op-Ed titled Anti-Semitism and the Anti-Israel Lobby, former US Secretary of State Edward Stettinius was named, based on his opposition to the creation of Israel, because he believed, "It would seriously prejudice our ability to afford protection to American interests, economic and commercial.Writing in Foreign Policy, David Rothkopf lists Jimmy Carter and his former national security advisor Zbigniew Brzezinski as members of the anti-Israel lobby, as well as "celebrity activists like Richard Gere, and many members of the media
Edited sentence: ", former US Secretary of State Edward Stettinius was named, based on his opposition to the creation of Israel, because he believed, "It would seriously prejudice our ability to afford protection to American interests, economic and commercial.Bret Stephens, former editor of the Jerusalem Post, lists a number of individuals as being members of an "anti-Israel lobby," including John Mearsheimer, Professor of Political Science at the University of Chicago, and Stephen Walt, Professor of International Relations at the Kennedy School of Government at Harvard University, including David Duke, Pat Buchanan, Noam Chomsky, Tony Judt, Alexander Cockburn, Scott McConnell, unnamed wealthy Saudi Arabians, Michael Moore, Cindy Sheehan, HAMAS, the Muslim Brotherhood, Hezbollah, large segments of the United States State Department and a number of publications worldwide.Jeff Robbins, in a Wall Street Journal opinion piece titled Anti-Semitism and the Anti-Israel Lobby writes that the billions of petrodollars Arab states spend in the U.Writing in Foreign Policy, David Rothkopf lists former United States President Jimmy Carter and his former National Security Advisor Zbigniew Brzezinski as members of the "anti-Israel lobby," as well as "celebrity activists like Richard Gere, and many members of the media.for defense and business contracts has influenced U.politicians including United States Secretary of State Edward Stettinius, Jr.throughout the area.who opposed the creation of a Jewish state in the Middle East, stating, "It would seriously prejudice our ability to afford protection to American interests, economic and commercial