Original sentence: It often associated with the first appearance of Celtic-speaking Indo-Europeans.One of the most distinctive types of European pottery, Beaker or Bell-Beaker ware, made its appearance in Ireland during the Bronze Age.The Bronze Age properly began once copper was alloyed with tin to produce true Bronze artifacts, and this took place around 2000 BC, when some Ballybeg flat axes and associated metalwork was produced.These are found in many places throughout Europe; there is a representation of one lying by the side of the famous “Dying Gaul” by the Greek sculptor Epigonus
Edited sentence: It is thought to be associated with the first appearance of Celtic-speaking Indo-Europeans in Europe.Metallurgy arrived in Ireland with new people, generally known as the Bell Beaker People, from their characteristic pottery, in the shape of an inverted bell.The Bronze Age began once copper was alloyed with tin to produce true Bronze artifacts, and this took place around 2000 BC, when some Ballybeg flat axes and associated metalwork was produced