Original sentence: (The English above is also unusual: "the Jewish community *at* Offenburg"; "civilians" (as opposed to the military.) I cannot find any indication on the web, other than this claim, either in German or English that murders took place "in and around" the medieval bathhouse.) in the city; and numerous misspellings.A very unknown fact about the town of Offenburg is that the Jewish Bath or Mikwe in Offenburg is haunted according to natives of Offenburg.By 1945, over 50 were murdered right within it.C, has rated it as one if its Top 100 Most Haunted places in the World.Descriptions of sitings have included voices crying for help and complete or partial views of spirits.During the holocaust, many Jews were murdered in and around the medieval bathhouse.In addition, The Society for Paranormal Investigation, located in Washington, D.It is now believed within the Jewish community at Offenburg that the spirits have come back to haunt the medieval bathhouse.It should be noted, however, that the above paragraph is at best factually inaccurate and at worst completely unfounded.Such occurrences have also been documented by leading Paranormal Investigator Matthew Didier as well as many other civilians in the city of Offenburg
Edited sentence: Descriptions of sightings have included voices crying for help and complete or partial apparitions.It should be noted, however, that the facts do not bear out the claims made by local folklore.Local folklore claims that the Jewish Bath at Offenburg is haunted due to a series of murders in and around the medieval bath house.The Society for Paranormal Investigation has rated it as one if its Top 100 Most Haunted places in the World