Original sentence: In response to the surge of COVID-19 in India in spring of 2021, Prime Healthcare supplied ventilators, bipap machines, oxygen concentrators and associated equipment
Edited sentence: In response to the overwhelming surge of COVID-19 in India in spring of 2021, Prime Healthcare sent much-needed emergency health care equipment to the South Asian country.Prime sent ventilators, bipap machines, oxygen concentrators and associated equipment to care for thousands of people in Dr.Reddy's native country