Original sentence: In February of 2004, she began a highly publicized 2-year relationship with, and thought by some to be engaged to, popular Mexican singer Luis Miguel, but after about 2 years, the couple privately ended their relationship
Edited sentence: In February of 2004, she began a highly publicized 2-year relationship with, and thought by some to be engaged to, Mexican star Luis Miguel, but after about 2 years, the couple privately ended their relationship