Original sentence: Defended by outworks overlooking the plains and.It is a town in erstwhile Udaipur State in Rajputana.Thakur of Roopnagar holds the Jagir of 27 villages on both sides of Aravali Mountains.the Desuri pass on the west and south
Edited sentence: Defended by outworks overlooking the plains and the Desuri pass on the west and south.Roopnagar is a town in erstwhile Udaipur State in Rajasthan.Thakur of Roopnagar held the Jagir of 27 villages on both sides of Aravali Mountains