Original sentence: Later, Virat expresses his wish for Sai to stay with him and asks Pakhi to leave as she is his brother's wife, thus, breaking Pakhi's heart.On learning Virat's condition Sai rushes to the hospital but is stopped by Pakhi.Sai Joshi, who aspires to be a doctor, lives with her father Police Inspector Kamal Joshi in Gadchiroli.Virat Chavan, a Nagpur-based IPS Officer gets his first posting in Gadchiroli.When Virat learns of this, he tried to stop the marriage and arrest him but due to lack of evidence he was unable to do so and expelled Sai from Chavan Nevas at midnight
Edited sentence: Circumstances brought Sai and Virat together again and more closer.He tried to apologise to Sai and bring her back home but Sai reluctant to forgive him.On the other hand, Virat Chavan, a honest and dedicated Nagpur-based IPS Officer gets his first posting in Gadchiroli.Sai Joshi, a fearless, honest, kind-hearted and studious girl, who aspires to be a doctor, lives with her father Police Inspector Kamal Joshi in Gadchiroli, a village in Maharashtra.When Virat learns of this, he tried to stop the marriage and arrest him because of misunderstandings created by his family but due to lack of evidence he was unable to do so and expelled Sai from Chavan Nivas at midnight