Original sentence: " Then out of nowhere a man standing at 183cm, brown hair, beard and a peculiar accent approached him and said "Ive been expecting you Joe.His main drive for this victory is the half day the school will recieve at the end of the term.Then one day he recieved orders from Allan Shearer, to go to the river Thames where he lay in a basket amongst the reeds
Edited sentence: " Then out of nowhere a man standing at 183 cm, brown hair, beard and a peculiar accent approached him and said "Ive been expecting you Joe.His main drive for this victory is the half day the school will receive at the end of the term.Then one day he received orders from Allan Shearer, to go to the river Thames where he lay in a basket amongst the reeds