Original sentence: After her parents' divorce, fourteen-year-old New York City dweller Veronica "Ronnie" Miller (Miley Cyrus) becomes rebellious and distances herself from her parents, especially her father.Three years later, Steve Miller (Greg Kinnear), Ronnie's father, gets the chance to reconnect with his daughter when Ronnie's mother (Kelly Preston) sends Ronnie to spend the summer with him
Edited sentence: After her parents' divorce, fourteen-year-old New York City dweller Veronica "Ronnie" Miller (Miley Cyrus) becomes rebellious and alienates herself from her parents, especially her father, Steve Miller (Greg Kinnear).In the novel, Ronnie describes the summer as "the summer she’d been betrayed, the summer she’d been arrested, the summer she’d fallen in love" and remembers "the fire and subsequent rebuilding of the church, the stained glass window, the song she’d finally finished.Three years later, Steve is given the chance to reconnect with his daughter when her mother (Kelly Preston) sends Ronnie to spend the summer with him