Original sentence: Critics have also hypothesized long term adherence could increase one’s risk of developing certain cancers, non-alcoholic fatty liver disease, complications from chronic kidney disease, eating disorders and other psychological issues.In the late 2010s fad dieters reported following extreme variations of the diet where only red meat, salt and water are consumed.Individuals following carnivorous diets also admitted to a worsened social life.Medical experts have warned that the diet can cause vitamin deficiencies and followers run the risk of raising their LDL cholesterol, which can increase the risk of cardiovascular disease.People following a carnivore diet consume large amounts of meat, such as beef, pork, poultry & organ meats and some may include dairy products and eggs.Proponents of plant-free diets proclaim various health benefits including; weight loss, reduced fatigue, betterments in cognition & mood, improved digestion, increased insulin sensitivity and even protection from autoimmune conditions.There is no clinical evidence that the carnivore diet is safe or provides any health benefits and the diet has attracted criticism from physicians and nutritionists as being potentially dangerous to health.These claims are very reliant on anecdotal evidence and the reported benefits may be influenced by survivorship bias
Edited sentence: Adherents of the diet consume large amounts of meat, such as beef, pork, poultry & organ meats and some may include dairy products and eggs.In mid-20th century the artic explorer Vilhjalmur Stefansson explored an all-meat diet.In the late 2010s carnivore diet adherents reported following extreme variations of the diet where only red meat, salt and water are consumed.Proponents of plant-free diets reported via anecdotal evidence various health benefits, that may be influenced by survivorship bias, including: weight loss, reduced fatigue, improvements in cognition & mood, improved digestion, increased insulin sensitivity and even protection from autoimmune conditions, however they also admitted to a worsened social life.Safety concerns from physicians and nutritionists include vitamin deficiencies, risk of raising LDL cholesterol, cardiovascular disease as well as, when adhered to longer term, risk of developing certain cancers, NAFLD, CKD complications, eating disorders and other psychological issues.The carnivore diet lacks clinical evidence of its safety and healthy benefits