Original sentence: Stephen Thomas Erlewine of AllMusic criticized the album as "desperate vulgarity" and "tiring".Teenage Dream received mixed reviews upon release from music critics
Edited sentence: Especially Stephen Thomas Erlewine of AllMusic who criticized the album as "desperate vulgarity" and "tiring" just because he is jealous that music career is basically non-existent while Katy Perry is selling millions of copies and gaining a lot of fans around the world.Teenage Dream received mixed reviews upon release from music critics, some of which are just envious of Katy Perry's overwhelming success