Original sentence: , after a doctors examination and x-ray he was found to have suffered no broken bones.According to the Daily Ardmorite (an Ardmore, Oklahoma newspaper) at age two Pody fell out of his fathers vehicle at a reported speed of 65 M.After Poe's senior year at Classen High School he took a job with a friend building a road in El Dorado, OK and every night they would play pool at the local pool hall, after the summer job was complete Poe had acquired some skill in pool, and in order to save money, he hitch-hiked to the local pool hall near his home in Oklahoma City from El Dorado.Born Tracy Coy Poe in Oklahoma City on November 29, 1932 of parents Coy Poe songwriter/promoter and Dorothy Minter daughter of J.Oak Minter territorial judge in Madill, OK.Pody Poe (29 November 1932 - 1 November 2006) was a local Oklahoma City Gambling crime figure Tracy Coy Poe whom an estimated 13 to 17 million dollars were spent to affiliate him with an organized crime syndicate under the organized crime control act of 1971.Pody Poe: From tinhorn Gambler to Kingpin of Organized Crime ISBN 0-9764134-O-X.Poe spent his early years in depression era Hollywood with his father who worked at Metro-Goldwyn-Meyer as a producer and managed Pinky Tomlin, after a downturn of luck and an argument with Bing Crosby about recording a song, Poe's father took the family to Kansas City, MO.Poe was a caddie at the Oklahoma City Golf and Country Club, he hitch-hiked from his aunt's to and from, while working as a caddie he became friends with Ken Rogers (Rogers was a west point graduate and married to Winnie Mae Fain namesake of the Wiley Post airplane) who inspired him to be a great short game golfer
Edited sentence: According to the Daily Ardmorite (an Ardmore, Oklahoma newspaper) at age two Pody fell out of his father's vehicle at a reported speed of 65 M.After Poe's senior year at Classen High School he took a job with a friend building a road in El Dorado, Oklahoma and every night they would play pool at the local pool hall.After a doctor's examination and x-ray he was found to have suffered no broken bones.After a downturn of luck and an argument with Bing Crosby about recording a song, Poe's father took the family to Kansas City, MO.After the summer job was complete Poe had acquired some skill in pool, and in order to save money, he hitch-hiked to the local pool hall near his home in Oklahoma City from El Dorado.Born Tracy Coy Poe in Oklahoma City on November 29, 1932 of parents Coy Poe, a songwriter/promoter and Dorothy Minter daughter of J.Oak Minter, a territorial judge in Madill, Oklahoma.Pody Poe (29 November 1932 - 1 November 2006) was a local Oklahoma City gambling crime figure for whom an estimated 13 to 17 million dollars were spent to affiliate him with an organized crime syndicate under the organized crime control act of 1971.Pody Poe: From Tinhorn Gambler to Kingpin of Organized Crime ISBN 0-9764134-O-X.Poe spent his early years in Depression era Hollywood with his father who worked at Metro-Goldwyn-Meyer as a producer and managed Pinky Tomlin.Poe was a caddie at the Oklahoma City Golf and Country Club, he hitch-hiked from his aunt's to and from.While working as a caddie he became friends with Ken Rogers (Rogers was a West Point graduate and married to Winnie Mae Fain namesake of the Wiley Post airplane) who inspired him to be a great short game golfer