Original sentence: As of 2006, CAU Long Beach, CAU San Diego, and Cal Poly SLO are impacted for both new freshmen and for transfer students, while CSU Fullerton, Cal Poly Pomona, and CSU Sonoma are impacted for new freshmen
Edited sentence: As of 2006, CSU Long Beach, CSU San Diego, and Cal Poly SLO are impacted for both new freshmen and for transfer students, while CSU Fullerton, Cal Poly Pomona, and CSU Sonoma are impacted for new freshmen