Original sentence: Once her time here was finished, she received yet another a scholarship to the New York Medical College, where she was required to graduate in only three years due to World War II.She received her medical degree with honors in 1945
Edited sentence: However, this did not hinder Wright, for she graduated with honors in 1945 and earned a medical degree.Once her time here was finished, she received yet another scholarship to the New York Medical College, where she was required to graduate in only three years due to World War II