Original sentence: Samuel Hynes described the Edwardian era as a "leisurely time when women wore picture hats and did not vote, when the rich were not ashamed to live conspicuously, and the sun really never set on the British flag
Edited sentence: " He forgot to mention that women in New Zealand were allowed to vote from 1909.Samuel Hynes described the Edwardian era somewhat erroneously as a "leisurely time when women wore picture hats and did not vote, when the rich were not ashamed to live conspicuously, and the sun really never set on the British flag