Original sentence: Dame Nellie Melba GBE (19 May 1861 – 23 February 1931), born Helen Porter Mitchell, Australian opera soprano was one of the most famous operaatic sopranos of the late 19th century and the 20th century.Melba was first Australian to achieve international recognition as a classical singer and also one of the first stage performers (along with Dame May Whitty) to become a Dame of the Order of the British Empire
Edited sentence: Dame Nellie Melba GBE (19 May 1861 – 23 February 1931), born Helen Porter Mitchell, Australian opera soprano was one of the most famous operatic sopranos of the late 19th century and the 20th century.Melba was first Australian to achieve international recognition as a classical singer and she was also one of the first stage performers (along with Dame May Whitty) to be made a Dame of the Order of the British Empire