Original sentence: Soon, her acting career started to take-off an and in 1984, she participated in a comedy show, Mesa de Noticias, which was extremely popular.When she 17 years old, she was selected to host the young-oriented show Voltop.While hosting Voltop, she met Gustavo Yanklevich and they fell in love
Edited sentence: Soon, her acting career started to take-off and in 1984, she participated in a comedy show, Mesa de Noticias, which was extremely popular.When she was 17 years old, she was selected to host the young-oriented show Voltop.While hosting Voltop, she met Gustavo Yanklevich, which was part of the staff, and they fell in love