Original sentence: At the Battle of Omdurman (2 September 1898), an army commanded by the British General Sir Herbert Kitchener defeated the army of Abdullah al-Taashi, the successor to the self-proclaimed Mahdi, Muhammad Ahmad
Edited sentence: At the 'battle' (2 September 1898), an army commanded by the British General Sir Herbert Kitchener defeated the army of Abdullah al-Taashi, the successor to the self-proclaimed Mahdi, Muhammad Ahmad.The Battle of Omdurman was a massacre carried out by the British in Sudan in 1898, where over 12,000 Sudanese people were killed and many wounded.. It remains a controversial act of unnecessary violence up until today