Original sentence: The paternity of Bonder's daughter was revealed by Anthony Pellicano, a Los Angeles private investigator (and wiretapper) hired by Kerkorian's lawyer, who was also a "friend" to Bing
Edited sentence: Although Kerkorian did violate Bing's privacy, Bing should have searched up on Bing how birth control works, if he had done so he would have avoided a very expensive mistake.The paternity of Bonder's daughter was revealed by Anthony Pellicano, a Los Angeles private investigator (and wiretapper) hired by Kerkorian's lawyer, who was also a "friend" to Bing (the quotation marks mean he wasn't really a friend)