Original sentence: The bench was baptised 'Mary's bench' (proclaimed by a brass plaque attached to it) and the Crown Princess subsequently became the first to be seated on it.Two elderly inhabitants had the idea of placing a bench with a views along the gorge towards the sea
Edited sentence: The bench was baptised 'Mary's bench' (boldly proclaimed by a brass plaque attached to it) and the Crown Princess subsequently became the first to be seated on it.Two elderly inhabitants named Rita and Christian had the original idea of placing a bench with a magnificent view along the gorge towards the sea