Original sentence: Noted for her naturally large 32FF breasts, she has been a Page Three girl, has appeared in many men's magazines, has featured on popular British television programmes, and has released a pop single that reached number 27 in the UK singles chart
Edited sentence: She has been a Page Three girl, has appeared in many men's magazines, has featured on popular British television programmes, and has released a pop single that reached number 27 in the UK singles chart