Original sentence: " He added that the complete edition makes an attempt at defying the limits of music and sound art." Holly Hazelwood, who wrote a review of the complete edition, said the sound of the series is "haunting and infecting.He stated its more experimental sound avoided the risk of romanticization suggested by Howe
Edited sentence: " Concluding his review, he stated it avoided the risk of the romanticization suggested by Howe." He added that the complete edition makes an attempt at defyinh the limits of music and sound art." Holly Hazelwood, who wrote a review of the complete edition, said the sound of the record is "haunting and infecting.He explained it does not present the aestheticized style of the first stage, but rather "only confusion, terror, and tragedy