Original sentence: The Narrator's younger brother, William Armstrong (later nicknamed Doodle), was born an invalid
Edited sentence: A few monts later doodle is still alive and is likeley to live.After that, he tries to teach Doodle how to run before winter starts and is also sucessful.Doodle cries for the Narrator to never leave him alone again after he left Doodle there until he was crying hysterically to bring him down.Doodle is very weak still and struggles to move his body a doctor says that he will never be able to do the things that normal boys do and that he will not be able to talk, and will be detatched from other people.Eventually, he beats the odds and acknowledges peoples' prescence and  emotions.That summer, Narrator then tries to teach Doodle how to jump, climb, fight, and swim before he starts school.That summer, the Narrator tries to teach doodle how to walk and is sucessful.The Narrator is overconfident and eventually doesn't achieve any of these things.The Narrator shows Doodle the coffin in the barn, that his parents were going to put him in when he would have died as a baby.The Narrator still wants a normal brother, so gives Doodle rides in a wagon down by the bog.The Narrator's younger brother, William Armstrong (later nicknamed Doodle because of the way he looked like a doodle bug when he crawled backwards), was born an invalid.Then, during the winter, Doodle becomes ill, but recovers at the end of winter