Original sentence: It is an example of Golden Age American.The course was a late-career Charles Blair Macdonald and Seth Raynor collaboration that featured their situational use of template holes based on original examples in Scotland and England, including the Road and Eden holes at the Old Course at St Andrews, the Redan hole at North Berwick  and the Alps hole at Prestwick.The size of some of the greens and the depth of certain bunkers was rarely equaled in that era.Yale is notable for its scale.Yale ranked 83rd in Golf Magazines 2020-2021 Top 100 Courses in the World   while maintaining its #1 spot in the 2019 Top 30 Golfweeks Best Campus Courses.golf course design, with large undulating greens, deep bunkers and wide rolling fairways that frequently present blind drive and approach shots
Edited sentence: It is a renowned example of Golden Age American.The course was a late-career Charles Blair Macdonald and Seth Raynor collaboration that featured their situational use of template holes based on famous original examples in Scotland and England, including the Road and Eden holes at the Old Course at St Andrews, the Redan hole at North Berwick  and the Alps hole at  Prestwick.The size of some of the greens and the depth of certain bunkers was rarely equaled in that era, or even since.Yale is notable for its enormous scale.Yale ranked 83rd in Golf Magazine's 2020-2021 Top 100 Courses in the World   while maintaining its #1 spot in the 2019 Top 30 Golfweek's Best Campus Courses.golf course  design, with large undulating greens, uncommonly deep bunkers and wide rolling fairways that frequently present blind drive and approach shots