Original sentence: John and Holly thank Powell, and are driven off by Argyle, their relationship renewed by their expierences.When one of Holly's coworkers, Harry Ellis (Hart Bochner), tries to negotiate McClane's return of the detonators to the terrorists, reveealing McClane's name in the process, he refuses, and Hans proceeds to kill Ellis
Edited sentence: John and Holly thank Powell, and are driven off by Argyle, their relationship renewed by their experiences.When one of Holly's coworkers, Harry Ellis (Hart Bochner), tries to negotiate McClane's return of the detonators to the terrorists, revealing McClane's name in the process, he refuses, and Hans proceeds to kill Ellis