Original sentence: After gaining attention in her hometown of Chicago, she became an international celebritybefore leaving the public spotlight as a teenager.Testimony was given to give the impression that Kane adopted her singing style after watching Baby Esther perform in a New York nightclub several years before the creation of the Betty Boop character
Edited sentence: After gaining attention in her hometown of Chicago, she became an international celebrity before leaving the public spotlight as a teenager.Testimony was given that Kane adopted her singing style after watching Baby Esther perform in a New York nightclub several years before the creation of the Betty Boop character