Original sentence: Among the early patrons were Sir Hugh Low, formerly British Resident of Perak, William Edward Maxwell, Assistant Resident, and Major Paul Swinburne.The clubhouse overlooks the cricket and football grounds and the Taiping Hills.The clubhouse was erected by the government, and is still kept in repair by the Public Works Department
Edited sentence: Among the early patrons were Sir Hugh Low, formerly British Resident of Perak, Mr.The capacious clubhouse was erected by the government, and is still kept in repair by the Public Works Department.The clubhouse overlooks the cricket and football grounds, and affords a magnificent view of the Taiping Hills.William Edward Maxwell, Assistant Resident, and Major Paul Swinburne