Original sentence: In the end, the rocket re-entered over the Arabian peninsula on the morning of 9 May, landing in the Indian Ocean west of the Maldives according to the China Manned Space Engineering Office (CMSEO), with much of it having reportedly burned up prior the surface.US Space Command confirmed the re-entry location but could not determine whether any debris hit land or water, although NASA administrator Bill Nelson criticised the Chinese for "failing to meet responsible standards"
Edited sentence: In the end, the rocket re-entered over the Arabian peninsula, landing in the Indian Ocean west of the Maldives according to the China Manned Space Engineering Office (CMSEO), with much of it having reportedly burned up prior the surface.US Space Command confirmed the re-entry location, although NASA administrator Bill Nelson criticised the Chinese for "failing to meet responsible standards"