Original sentence: After John Critchinson died, Robin Aspland joined the quartet on piano.At the same time, he began two and a half years of private saxophone tuition with saxophonist Vic Ash, then a member of the BBC Big Band.By the age of 21, he had turned professional.His stage presentation skills combine dry humour, anecdotes about jazz history and self-deprecating wit.Simon Richard Spillett (born 4 November 1974, Chesham, Buckinghamshire, England) is an English jazz tenor saxophonist.Spillett began playing gigs aged seventeen with bands playing mainstream jazz
Edited sentence: At the same time he began two and a half years of private saxophone tuition with saxophonist Vic Ash, then a member of the BBC Big Band.By the age of 21 he had turned professional.Following Critchinson's death, Robin Aspland joined the quartet on piano.He is well regarded for his on-stage presentation skills, which combine dry humour, anecdotes about jazz history and self-deprecating wit.Simon Richard Spillett (born 4 November 1974, Chesham, Buckinghamshire, England) is a multi-award winning English jazz tenor saxophonist.Spillett began playing gigs aged seventeen with a variety of bands playing mainstream jazz