Original sentence: Though it is not the first Bible to be published by the group, it is their first original translation of ancient Classical Hebrew, Koine Greek, and Old Aramaic biblical texts
Edited sentence: Dana, and Julius R.In 1964, renowned biblical scholar Bruce M.Metzger stated that "the Jehovah’s Witnesses have incorporated in their translation of the New Testament several quite erroneous renderings of the Greek.Metzger, H.The reliability of the translation, however, has been questioned by scholars such as Bruce M.Though it is not the first Bible to be published by the group, it is their first version which claims to be a translation of ancient Classical Hebrew, Koine Greek, and Old Aramaic biblical texts