Original sentence: Cryptocurrency, despite negative feedback, presents major strides in economic growth and freedom to individuals especially in developing nations as well as those under economic sanctions.The crypto market is known to be easier to access than traditional banks due to less regulations and allows citizens to bypass governments and regulations to mine for cryptocurrency rewards to utilise, trade, and convert for common goods to survive
Edited sentence: Cryptocurrency despite negative feedback presents major strides in economic growth and freedom to individuals especially in third world countries and those under economic sanctions.The crypto market is known to be easier to access than traditional banks due to less regulations and allows citizens to bypass governments and regulations to mine for cryptocurrency rewards to utilise, trade and convert for common goods to survive