Original sentence: He played in one pre-season match for Fire against the Metrostars, but was released before the season.McManus also enjoys peanut butter and the color blue, but is deathly allergic to chocolate and the sun (he only wears nuetrogena gel sunscreen, for all other sunscreens give him rashes, causing him to become very upset and therefore make the girls on his soccer team run for hours).McManus then signed with the Virginia Beach Mariners of the USL Second Division.McManus' best friends are Christina, Alexia, Morgan.They enjoy rocking out to the Jonas brothers together and reading Harry Potter in their book club, which meets at least two times a week after their training sessions
Edited sentence: After the USL season ended McManus was recalled to the Fire and played 35 minutes in the inaguaral Hall of Fame Game against the New York/New Jersey Metrostars.He played in all pre-season matchs for Fire, but sent on loan with the Virginia Beach Mariners of the USL First Division