Original sentence: Joining forces with friends John Reed and Tony Knight, he formed Jug Trust (as in The National Trust) in 1962, a trio renowned for their humour, and their interpretation of rarely heard jug band music from outfits like the Memphis Jug Band, Clifford Hayes Jug Band, King David's Jug Band and Gus Cannon's Jug Stompers.The band evolved again into The Brian Cookman Band (BCB) – including the former Chicken Shack guitarist Rob Hull – which toured with groups including Gallagher and Lyle
Edited sentence: Joining forces with friends John Reed and Tony Knight, he formed the legendary Jug Trust (as in The National Trust) in 1962, a trio renowned for their humour, and their interpretation of rarely heard jug band music from outfits like the Memphis Jug Band, Clifford Hayes Jug Band, King David's Jug Band and Gus Cannon's Jug Stompers.The band evolved again into The Brian Cookman Band (BCB) – including the former Chicken Shack guitarist Rob Hull – which toured with such luminaries as Gallagher and Lyle