Original sentence: Hence, we have precursory model to the term motive power.In 1698, based on Papin’s designs, mechanical designer Thomas Savery build the first engine.to “move” buckets of water vertically out of mine
Edited sentence: Hence, we have the precursory model to the term motive power.In 1698, based on Papin’s designs, mechanical designer Thomas Savery built the first engine.to “move” buckets of water vertically out of a mine