Original sentence: He married Marie Goupil (1842-1912), the daughter of the international art dealer Adolphe Goupil.Jean-Léon Gérôme (pronounced zhon  lay on  zhay rome) was born at Vesoul (Haute-Saône), he went to Paris in 1840 where he studied under Paul Delaroche, whom he accompanied to Italy (1843-1844).Jerome in the church of  St.This work was seen as the epitome of the Neo-Grec movement that had formed out of Gleyre's studio (such as Henri-Pierre Picou (1824-1895) and Jean-Louis Hamon), and was championed by the influential French critic Theophile Gautier
Edited sentence: He married Marie Goupil (1842–1912), the daughter of the international art dealer Adolphe Goupil.Jean-Léon Gérôme (pronounced zhon  lay on  zhay rome) was born at Vesoul (Haute-Saône), he went to Paris in 1840 where he studied under Paul Delaroche, whom he accompanied to Italy (1843–1844).Jerome in the church of St.This work was seen as the epitome of the Neo-Grec movement that had formed out of Gleyre's studio (such as Henri-Pierre Picou (1824–1895) and Jean-Louis Hamon), and was championed by the influential French critic Theophile Gautier