Original sentence: Hispanic or Latino persons of any race made up 90.6% of the population and 53.9% of the population spoke a language other than English at home.The racial makeup of the city was 20.9% White (including white hispanics), 1.5% African American, 1.6% Native American, 1.3% Asian, 0.2% Pacific Islander, 16.2% from other races and 4.4% from two or more races
Edited sentence: Hispanic or Latino persons of any race made up 35.6% of the population and 22.9% of the population spoke a language other than English at home.The racial makeup of the city was 74.9% White, 1.5% African American, 1.6% Native American, 1.3% Asian, 0.2% Pacific Islander, 16.2% from other races and 4.4% from two or more races