Original sentence: Patricia Van Cleve Lake (June 18, 1923—October 3, 1993), known as Patricia Lake, was an American socialite, stage actress and radio comedienne, who received early noteriety as reportedly being the illegitimate daughter of actress Marion Davies and publisher William Randolph Hearst
Edited sentence: Patricia Van Cleve Lake (June 18, 1923—October 3, 1993), known as Patricia Lake, was an American socialite, actress and radio comedienne, who received early noteriety as reportedly being the illegitimate daughter of actress Marion Davies and publisher William Randolph Hearst