Original sentence: Parallels were made with respect to a previous launch in May 2020  which reportedly caused some damage in the Côte d'Ivoire.Some concerns were raised over possible damage from debris of the uncontrolled re-entry: observations showed the rocket was tumbling, which complicates predictions about an eventual landing area, although the most likely outcome was a maritime impact.US Space Command confirmed the re-entry location but did not determine the debris impact location
Edited sentence: Parallels were made with respect to a previous launch in May 2020  which had caused damage in the Côte d'Ivoire.Some concerns were raised over possible damage from debris of the uncontrolled re-entry: observations showed the rocket was tumbling, which complicates predictions about an eventual landing area, although the most likely outcome is a maritime impact.US Space Command confirmed the re-entry location but did not determine the debris impact location (although NASA administrator Bill Nelson criticised the Chinese for "failing to meet responsible standards")