Original sentence: A new police chief, Donald Grady 2d, was hired in an effort to modernize and bring a community policing philsophy to the Santa Fe Police Department, whose previous chief had been a target of Jaramillo's criticism
Edited sentence: A new police chief, Donald Grady 2d, was hired in an effort to modernize and bring a community policing philosophy to the Santa Fe Police Department, whose previous chief had been a target of Jaramillo's criticism