分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：请帮忙看一下这篇英语作文时候有错误~谢谢！！！Hello,Tom 
Hello, Tom,Welcome to our cy! Shanghai is a modern and international city. The people here are very friendly. The cinemas, theaters, pubs and restaurants are really nice. Autumn is the best season in Shanghai. It’s neither hot nor cold. However, Shanghai is over-crowded; iHello, Tom,Welcome to our cy! Shanghai is a modern and international city. The people here are very friendly. The cinemas, theaters, pubs and restaurants are really nice. Autumn is the best season in Shanghai. It’s neither hot nor cold. However, Shanghai is over-crowded; it has too many people, too many cars and too many bicycles. We are trying to improve the situation. Come and visit.See youXiaoyan
回答：1 同个单词分行要打连词号,且要根据读音
2 and用在此不太好,可在modern和international间加个行容词,如:
modern,international and beautiful
3 there are so many cars bicycles and people here.
4 总体不是很有层次,可多用连词