分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：写了一篇英语作文，帮忙修改一下。关于奥运的作文，也许会拿去参赛的 
关于的作文，也许会拿去参赛的。The Olympic Games   The Olympic Games are held every four years. Now the games have a long history of hundreds years. The 27th Olympic Games were held in Athens. This time the team of China got more than 50 gold medals. Now China is good at sports.   In 关于的作文，也许会拿去参赛的。The Olympic Games   The Olympic Games are held every four years. Now the games have a long history of hundreds years. The 27th Olympic Games were held in Athens. This time the team of China got more than 50 gold medals. Now China is good at sports.   In today's world,the Olympic spirit has been Flourish. The Olympic motto is "swifter,higher,stronger." The Olympic Games promoted the countries' friendship.   In July 17th, 2001, Olympic Committee's decision to hold the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing. People in China are all happy. They use their own ways to celebrate.   I hope in 2008, China will have more gold medals.
回答：你几年级的?我给你润色一下.The Olympic Games The Olympic Games are held every four years. Now, the games have a long history of more than a hundr years (几百年就太多了). During the 27th Olympic Games that were held in Athens, the Chinese team won more than 50 gold medals, an obvious proof of China's improvement in sports. In today's world, the Olympic spirit has been flourishing. While the Olympic Games induce the countries to compete for being "swifter, higher, stronger" as said in the motto, they also promote friendship among countries. On July 17th, 2001, when Olympic Committee made the decision to hold the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing, the whole country was elated.  People get onto the streets to celebrate in their own ways. I hope in 2008, China will win more gold medals.