分类：教育/科学-外语学习
问题：可以帮忙我改一下语法吗？不知道这样写对吗？谢谢！Iwakeupa 
I wa up at 6.30a.m, then I turn off a alarm clock. I brush my teeth and wash my face. I take a cold shower ever day. I put on my clothes and comb my hair. At 7.30a.m. I make breakfast and wake the children. At 8.00a.m I eat breakfast and read the newspaper. After breI wa up at 6.30a.m, then I turn off a alarm clock. I brush my teeth and wash my face. I take a cold shower ever day. I put on my clothes and comb my hair. At 7.30a.m. I make breakfast and wake the children. At 8.00a.m I eat breakfast and read the newspaper. After breakfast, I check my emil and turn on the radio. At 9.00a.m I put on my shoes ang go to work.
回答：I wake up at 6.30 a.m. everyday, then I turn off a alarm clock. I brush my teeth and wash my face.
I take a cold shower every morning.
I put on my clothes and then comb my hair.
At 7.30 a.m., I make breakfast and wake up the children.
At 8.00 a.m., I eat breakfast and read the newspaper.
After breakfast, I check my email and turn on the radio.
At 9.00 a.m. I put on my shoes and go to work.