分类：教育/科学-外语学习
问题：改正英语演讲搞这个是我3分钟的演讲搞。因为水平实在是很差。可不可 
这个是我3分钟的演讲搞。因为水平实在是很差。可不可以帮我改正一下？Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.I am very glad to ma a speech here.Today my topic is"Ou icons is ouselves."Many of us have icons.Who is you icon?Maybe you will say"My icon is O'Neal,because he was cool when he played basketball."Or you 这个是我3分钟的演讲搞。因为水平实在是很差。可不可以帮我改正一下？Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.I am very glad to ma a speech here.Today my topic is"Ou icons is ouselves."Many of us have icons.Who is you icon?Maybe you will say"My icon is O'Neal,because he was cool when he played basketball."Or you might say"My icon is Zhou Jielun,because he sings well".We always woship them.You know Nash joined the Suns.You know what Jolin size is.But what do you know about yourself？Think a minute that what can you do.Ah,you will think"I can play basketball"."I can play the piano".or"I can clean the kitchen".You will find many merit in yourself.We are so good.Why don't we worship ouselves.I think we should love ouselves.We should be good at finding merit in ourselves.It can help you to do things better.You will confidence in you.Just like me.I was nervous befoe I came hee,but when it's time fo me to make my speech,I told my self" I am the best".So I am confident to give a talk to you.   Our icons should be ourselves.Because each of us are special.All of us can do well on something but the othe can't.All of us have something special but the other havn't.Believe this!You will be confident.And you will do things bette.The future can be anything we want to make it.Please love youself.And you can changethe futue.  Our icons should be ouselves.Because we need to confidence in ourselves.If we win,we will have more happy.If we lost,we can tell ouselves"I am the best".Then you will not be so sad.And you can walk down the road of life.  We're just beginning.Don't always think about other people is bette than you.Our icouns is ourselves!We are the best!Thank you for your listening
回答：icon 指的是上崇拜，这里的偶像应该用idol.(someone that you admire very much）给你纠正了下语法和用词上的一些错误，有些句子根据你的中心思想进行了重写，以便更符合文章的结构。Our idol is ourselves.Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.I am very glad to make a speech here. My topic today is"Our idol is ouselves."Most of us have our idols.Who is your idol?Maybe you will say"My idol is O'Neal,because he was cool when he played basketball."Or you might say"My idol is Zhou Jielun,because he sings well".We always worship someone popular. You know Nash joined the Suns.You know who Jolin Size is. But what do you know about yourself？Think a minute that what you can do.Ah,you will think"I can play basketball"."I can play the piano".or"I can clean the kitchen".You will find many merits in yourself.We are so good.Why don't we worship ourselves.I think we should love ourselves.We should be good at finding merits in ourselves.It can help you do things better.You will be confident. Just like me. I was nervous before I came here, but when it's time for me to make my speech, I told myself" I am the best”. So I am confident to address you. Our idol should be ourselves, because each of us is special. All of us can do well on something but can't on another. All of us have something special that the other doesn’t have. Believe me! You will be confident. And you will do things better. The future can be anything we want to be. Please love yourself. You deserve a better future.Our idol should be ourselves because we need to be confident in ourselves. If we success, we may feel joyous. But if we fail, we can tell ourselves “I am the best and I can give it a try again”. Then you may not be that sad and can get up from the frustration immediately and continue walk down the road of your life.It’s just the threshold to our successful palace. Don’t always think about other people is better than you. Our idol is ourselves! We are the best! Our idol is ourselves.Thanks so much for your listening.