分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：我的小文，　改改？Withthedevelopmentofthe 
Wh the development of the high-tech, people receipt the fact that man cannot live without internet. People have got used to do business and relax themselves with internet and, even have used it to hunt the opposite (partner). Through the internet, we can see and talk with eachWh the development of the high-tech, people receipt the fact that man cannot live without internet. People have got used to do business and relax themselves with internet and, even have used it to hunt the opposite (partner). Through the internet, we can see and talk with each other freely, like ordering and having a lunch with your lover. More and more people have succeeded in getting married through internet now, the process of which is, first talking and seeing on line, then making a date under line. Some of them set up a web site for their marriage to thank the net’s help. But the issue on hunting a partner on line is how to identified the unrealistic from his or her face and words. So the insurant way to know his or her is asking the person to offer the accurate certification. There are some web sites that can help people demonstrate themselves and offer the service to found the believable friendship. In conclusion, if you are dreaming a happy marriage, you can opt the internet to find your love and, you should keep an eye on how to prevent the risk of it. You can identify the certification by yourself or by some believable web site.     
回答：With the development of MODERN TECHNOLOGY (the 去掉,modern technology 前面不加 the, 还有high-tech一般作形容词用), IT BECOMES A MATTER OF FACT (....老兄,receipt是发票的意思啊~~~) that MEN(用复数,表示泛指) cannot live without internet. People have got used to DOING business and RELAXING(get used to 后面加动名词)themselves with internet and, even have used it FOR DATE-HUNTING(不知道你想写的是什么,还是参考河马叔叔的回答好了). Through the internet, we can see and talk with each other freely, like ordering and having lunch with your lover(同意河马叔叔,a要去掉,还有,你逗号前讲的是可以聊天,逗号后的like表明你要举例,怎么扯上和爱人吃饭了?). More and more people have succeeded in getting married through internet NOWADAYS(我比较倾向于这么说,now有点拘泥于这个时刻,nowadays可以用作比较泛指的”现在”). (这里开始另起一句,因为两句话意思大不相同,也没什么联系)The process of INTERNET DATING(这里因为which指代的东西隔得太远,只好再写一遍可以让人看清你说的是什么) is, first talking TO and seeing EACH OTHER ONLINE, then DATING OFFLINE(这些是词汇问题,see后面要加宾语,talk后面也必须加to, online/offline是用语). Some SUCCESSFUL COUPLES(them指的是什么?) set up WEBSITES(要用复数就都用复数,website是一个词) for their marriage to thank the net’s help.But the issue OF DATE-hunting ONLINE is how to IDENTIFY(这个不用我说了吧?) the FAKE IDENTITIES (unrealistic是不现实的意思). The SECURE way to know his or her is TO ASK the person to offer the accurate certification (比较习惯用ID: individual identification, but anyway). There are some websites that can help people demonstrate themselves and offer the service to FIND A TRUSTABLE friendship(这句话怎么又扯上友谊了?).In conclusion, if you are dreaming OF a happy marriage, you can FIND YOUR LOVE VIA THE internet, AND you should keep an eye on the risk. You can identify the certification by yourself or by some believable websiteS.