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问题：急求修改初二英语作文，万分感谢！IfIamteacherIfIa? 
                        急求修改初二作文，万分感谢！                                                          If  I am  teacher   If  I am  teacher,I do will in tcach students. I work sh onlde better and better.Make they are grade better and better too. Althovgh become a teach                        急求修改初二作文，万分感谢！                                                          If  I am  teacher   If  I am  teacher,I do will in tcach students. I work sh onlde better and better.Make they are grade better and better too. Althovgh become a teacher work is very tried,but I am afraid,because this all for children in good health,study very much,If I am teacher,I will be serions and do not give up everyone childrens chidren all over clever.
回答：                 If  I am  teacher(1－－ am  改成 were，并加a）   If  I am  teacher（同上）,I do will in tcach students（2－－do will in tcach students改成will do well in teaching students）. I work sh onlde better and better.（3－－work sh onlde 改成should work）Ma they are grade better and better too（4－－.Make they are grade 改成and make them grade ，并在too 前面加逗号）， Althovgh become a teacher work is very tried,（5-- become a teacher work 改成 becoming a teacher will be very tired）but I am afraid,because this all for children in good health,study very much（6--study very much改成and study very hard，并去掉but或because），If I am teacher（同“1”）,I will be serions and do not give up everyone childrens chidren all over clever.（7--原句改成I will be not give up everyone children , because chidren all over clever）. 原因：1  表示虚拟语气，用过去时were表示2  do  well in 表示在某方面作的好，由于是介词in ，所以动词用ing形式3  情态动词should放在实义动词后面4  make sb do sth，too 表示“也”，放在句末用逗号隔开。5  动名词作主语6  表示学习努力用study very hard，but和beacause不能共存。7  句意不符合语境。