分类：教育/科学-学习帮助
问题：求帮改一篇英语短文改错一行一错（有一行全对）Atalenting 
  一行一错（有一行全对）A talenting young ian has a difficult pathto follow.           1If you wish to sign up with a recording company,first all            2you must make a demonstration tape.This is an expensive            3business,but you have to hire a recording s  一行一错（有一行全对）A talenting young ian has a difficult pathto follow.           1If you wish to sign up with a recording company,first all            2you must make a demonstration tape.This is an expensive            3business,but you have to hire a recording studio and pay       4for the technical staff.Then you have                       5to send copies round to all the recording companies hope       6that the executive will listen it and willlike                 7that he or she hears.The problems                     8are over even when you have found a companythat                 9likes your music.It is a good idea that makessure you have       10a good lawyer because there are a lot of sharks in the music industry!
回答：1, talenting 改为 talent 2, first (of) all 3, 对 4，but 改为 and         5,  去掉for6, hope 改为 hoping    7, listen （to） it8，that 改为 what9，are (not) over 10, makes改为make 注： （4）这里不是转折关系，所以用and（6） hope变成hoping动名词形式就可以把句子意思连起来了，因为一句话只能有一个动词。（10） that make sure …在这里做it的同位语，就相当于that make sure you have a good lawyer is a good idea. 原文即为：A talented young musician has a difficult path to follow.If you wish to sign up with a recording company,first of all you must make a demonstration tape.This is an expensive business,and you have to hire a recording studio and pay the technical staff.Then you have to send copies round to all the recording companies hoping that the executive will listen to it and will like what he or she hears.The problems are not over even when you have found a company that likes your music.It is a good idea that make sure you have a good lawyer because there are a lot of sharks in the music industry!