分类：教育/科学-外语学习
问题：初学英文，靠翻词典，不知道2段英文里语法和用词是不是很不协调？请? 
In our dailylife,There are a lot of external adverse factors and hful toxins,Someof these adverse factors include: the pressures of life,the airpollution,the water pollution,a lot of the dangers of pharmaceutics,theprocessed foods we eat.Damage our digestive system, tIn our dailylife,There are a lot of external adverse factors and hful toxins,Someof these adverse factors include: the pressures of life,the airpollution,the water pollution,a lot of the dangers of pharmaceutics,theprocessed foods we eat.Damage our digestive system, the immune system,lymphatic system. Start may not find any adverse reactions,Slowly,accumulated a lot of toxins and adverse factors.You will get sick,thebody can produce will not ease the pain.Our body and spirit still suffering from lifepressure, pollution from bad environment, and we don't understand the damagefrom the medication and processing food 
回答：你的文章里有很多中式英语，我改了一下，你自己看一下，但是我不太懂你想表达什么，所以改得也不是很好，建议多看文章，作文就好。其次，你写的句子基本没有完整性，因为一个句子有且只有一个主语一个谓语一个宾语，这是组成句子的基础，在此基础上才可添加状语之类的成分，建议在句子结构上下点功夫，这也不是三言两语说得清楚的，可能一开始会有点困难，那么就先从被句型开始吧，在网上可以搜到很多句型的，背多了你就懂什么是句子结构了，祝你学习进步哦。