分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：英语写作检查，虚心学习Thefirstpointisthatth 
The first point is that the restaurant has to hear the views form the suppliers. Because the prevus owners did not pay all the money to them, the suppliers will be upset with that. We know that how important to establish agreed contract with relevant stakeholders (suppliers). The first point is that the restaurant has to hear the views form the suppliers. Because the prevus owners did not pay all the money to them, the suppliers will be upset with that. We know that how important to establish agreed contract with relevant stakeholders (suppliers). Develop the good and long cooperative relationships with suppliers, setting the win-win approach for the final target. No one can deny that suppliers are essential part for any food business.Equally important, the restaurant must be aware of that the Restaurant’s liquor license would be another trouble. From my perspective, Chris needs to negotiate with stakeholders (Local council inspectors & Food safety and OH&S officers), negotiating with stakeholders to develop mutually agreed policy positions. Also, negotiate with stakeholders that to develop mutually agreed implementation processes. 我的语法是弱点，还有写句子不够地道，希望大家指出问题所在，谢谢
回答：The first point is that the restaurant has to (a for advice from)the suppliers.(the suppliers will not be happy because the previous owner of the restaurant didn't make the full payment to all the supply) .We know () how important (it is)to establish agreed contract with relevant stakeholders (suppliers), (to develop )the good and long cooperative relationships with suppliers (and to set) the win-win approach for the final target. No one can deny that suppliers are essential part (in) any food business. (Most importantly), the restaurant must be aware () that (the liquor license of  the restaurant) would be (an)another trouble. From my perspective, Chris needs to negotiate with stakeholders (Local council inspectors & Food safety and OH&S officers), (consulting) with stakeholders to develop mutually agreed policy positions. Also, (a negotiation with stakeholders is necessary to ) develop mutually agreed implementation processes.