分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：看看这篇能打几分，谢谢。TWE29，人类活动是破坏地球还是改善地 
TWE29，人类活动是破坏还是改善地球。It seems difficult for people to reach assent on whether Earth is being harmed by human activities or not. As far as I am concerned, I think human are doing harm to our homeland. And eventually, Earth will do harm to people too.As is known to all, polTWE29，人类活动是破坏还是改善地球。It seems difficult for people to reach assent on whether Earth is being harmed by human activities or not. As far as I am concerned, I think human are doing harm to our homeland. And eventually, Earth will do harm to people too.As is known to all, pollution is a big problem confronted by humans. Notwithstanding every country advocate people to protect environment, pollution is going on day after day. I believe many people use batteries, which contain elements that can harm the soil continuously for centuries, but how many people do recycle these poisons to Earth? Only a few did so. People pollute the Earth while they assert to protect the Earth. How ridiculous!Batteries-littering is just one sort of pollution. By many other means can people do harm to Earth. Not only do humans pollute natural resources, but they also waste them. For example, it is common in China to see water running from a water tap with nobody using it. Besides, electricity, oil, and food are also wasted everyday. Instead of keeping resources, humans develop their technologies to inquire more. Therefore, a day may come soon when people used up resources on Earth and make Earth a dead planet.With Earth being polluted, resources being wasted, the population of human race is increasing rapidly. More and more people are becoming harmful to Earth. Though increasingly numbers of people begin to realize that Earth is in grave danger now, they are still doing damage to it. It is really a shame!We all understand the importance of protecting Earth, and we indeed have done many things to improve it. However, the improvements are far from enough. So, considering all of those above, I think we should face the fact that Earth is being harmed by human activities.多谢指点。
回答：少用一些I,比如第一段的I think就可以去掉不要.第2段有个I believe可以改成it is believed that.有一些句子要改一改,比如with nobody using it可以改为without using it. 文章大体还行,就是太主观,太多单句(来两三句复合句也好啊),还有要避免一些小错误. 这篇大概4.5分左右把