分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：英语好的来检查下Youknow...whenyou'reyoun 
You know...when you're young,everything feels li the end of the world.It's not.It's just beginning.You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated.Like the sun rises and sets with you.!帮You know...when you're young,everything feels li the end of the world.It's not.It's just beginning.You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated.Like the sun rises and sets with you.!帮看下有没单词错误或语法错误,或者有没有地方可以用更好的句子来表达句子里的意思
回答：你的这段话比较口语,可以不那么讲究,我把最显然的给你挑一挑,因为英文好了以后,不会犯一些简单错误是不犯的.

You know...when you're young,ANYthing(WILL MAKE YOU) feels like (IT IS )the end of the world. It's not. It's just(THR) beginning. You might have to meet a few more jerks...but one day you're going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated. Like the sun rises and sets with you.!