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问题：请高手帮助“校对”我给老外写的一封商务信函，多谢中文内容：尊敬的 
内容：尊敬的***董事长：您好！很抱歉这段时间没有和您直接联系，不知道您近况如何？我已经收到并认真阅读了AAA先生3月18日的来信，了解了信中所转达的您的意见。我想向您表明的是，我方非常认可BBB公司的知名度及丰富的项目运作经验，非常欣赏BBB公司所作的优秀的规划方案，我坚信它的实施，必然能将***项目做成***市的一座著名建筑，成为我们中意双方两国友谊的良好见证。董事长先生，项目可观的经济效益及社会效益毋庸置疑，已经得到市场商家、权威机构的认可，这是我们合作的基础所在，也是能够使我们双方共赢的良好合作机遇。正是因为这些原因，我们双方之内容：尊敬的***董事长：您好！很抱歉这段时间没有和您直接联系，不知道您近况如何？我已经收到并认真阅读了AAA先生3月18日的来信，了解了信中所转达的您的意见。我想向您表明的是，我方非常认可BBB公司的知名度及丰富的项目运作经验，非常欣赏BBB公司所作的优秀的规划方案，我坚信它的实施，必然能将***项目做成***市的一座著名建筑，成为我们中意双方两国友谊的良好见证。董事长先生，项目可观的经济效益及社会效益毋庸置疑，已经得到市场商家、权威机构的认可，这是我们合作的基础所在，也是能够使我们双方共赢的良好合作机遇。正是因为这些原因，我们双方之前进行的多次商谈接触，都是非常有诚意的进行的，我们彼此都可以感受得到。因此，我方非常希望能够与您就**项目合作成功，并且本着这一想法，到目前为止，我方仍然为贵公司保留着独家谈判权。对于目前项目合作进程中遇到的困难和问题，我认为都是暂时的，只要我们双方合作的诚意仍在，在**市政府的大力支持下，我们一定会克服解决这些问题。所以，我诚挚的邀请您来中国，商谈地点可以选在**或者**，我们双方面对面、开诚布公地进行商谈。我希望您能够安排时间促成此行，不知道您是否同意我的建议？期待着您的回复。祝顺利！=====================以下为英文信函：Dear Mr.***I am sorry for not directly contacting you this period, how is it going? I have already received and read Mr. AAA’s email of March 18, I knew your opinions which conveyed in his email. I want to express that, I very approbate the reputation and the abundant project experience of BBB, I also very enjoy the excellent programming and design Plan by BBB, I think if it can be operated, It must become one of the most famous building in***, and it must become the favorable witness of the friendship between China and Italy. Dear Mr. ***, It’s indubitable that the economy benefit and society benefit are good and considerable, and they are already ratified by the market and authoritative organization. It is the base of our cooperation, and it is also the favorable opportunity that can make us double win. Just because of the above reasons , we all can feel the sincerity during the progress of our former cooperation. So, I eagerly want to make our cooperation to success. Following this thinking, as far as now, I still keep and grant to Policentro the exclusive right of negotiation. As for the difficulties and questions which present to us at present, I think they are all temporary, as long as we still have the cooperative sincerity, and under the support of the *** municipal government, we can finally overcome and solve the difficulties and questions. I cordially invite you to come to China, the negotiation locality can be ***or***, we’ll face to face and speak frankly and sincerely make the negotiation, I hope you can arrange time to this travel, do you agree with my suggestion? I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earlist convenience.Thank you very much.Best RegardsYours truly,===============我的英文水平实在一般，所以为了避免信函中出现重大的错误，我恳请高手能够帮我修改一下文章，多谢了！期待着您的帮助
回答：文章太过口语化，不是专业术语，是很有礼貌，但有点降低自己身份的倾向，给人的感觉是太过谦虚的感觉，外国人不是中国人这样的，要显示自己的实力，但又能谦虚，从一开头已看出，外贸函电中一般是不能用sorry的，这不是你的错，根本用不着道款。总体来说，这样的文章不适合发给外国人，最后请专业一点的人写，这样才能显示自己的实力，又不会伤害对方。