分类：教育/科学-外语学习-英语考试
问题：我写的一篇6级作文我底子差希望能帮我改一下谢谢！Thereisn 
There is no denying the fact that job hunting has been a grave blem. In recent years, college graduates' job hunting obviously become harder than before. More graduates can not search a work matching with their professional knowledge, and even more graduates can not find a joThere is no denying the fact that job hunting has been a grave blem. In recent years, college graduates' job hunting obviously become harder than before. More graduates can not search a work matching with their professional knowledge, and even more graduates can not find a job.With the development of economy and society, job hunting being hard is caused by many things. For one thing ,this is a technological and industrialized times, one computer or one robot can replace a number of people .For another thing, too many college graduates are fighting for the handful positions in big cities,it may not be enough jobs for them Last but not least, the increase of population also lead to it.The phenomenon is a serious problem which our government must take measures to solve. On the one hand, our government should encourage college graduates working as village official; on the other hand, college graduates can continue to study for their major as well. In addition, going abroad may also a good idea.
回答：第一句：job hunting has been a grave blem-->job hunting has become a grave social problem.第二句：-->it obviously becomes harder than before for college graduates to hunt a job.第三句：More and more graduates can't get a work relating to their professional knoweledge, and even a job.第四句：the difficulty in job hunting is caused...... r one thing-->One thing, 6.times-->time r another thing-->Another thing,  may not be enough for them--->they maybe not enough for them.9.lead--->leads10.on the one hand--->on one hand llage officials12 study for their major--->study their majors 13.going abroad may also be a good idea.以上是我的拙见！仅供参考！