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问题：给我英语短文提一点意见，或找出错误~谢谢Oneday,mymot 
eday,mymothertookmetoarestaurantbycar.Suddenly,awomanfalldowninfrontofmymother’scar,butit’snotmymother’sbusiness.Mymotherimmediatelyrushedtoher. :Ifeelpainhere.Mymotherdecidedtotakehertogotoseeadoctor.Thenwegotothenearlyhospital.Thed ’tbeworry,sheisOK.Thewomanwasveryhappyforoueday,mymothertookmetoarestaurantbycar.Suddenly,awomanfalldowninfrontofmymother’scar,butit’snotmymother’sbusiness.Mymotherimmediatelyrushedtoher. :Ifeelpainhere.Mymotherdecidedtotakehertogotoseeadoctor.Thenwegotothenearlyhospital.Thed ’tbeworry,sheisOK.Thewomanwasveryhappyforourhelp.Sheboughtaflowerforus.Wearealsohappy.Becausewehelpother.
回答：第1行,a woman fall改为fell
第3行,she said....改为she said,"Are .....
      the woman said ...应直接接问话;还有touch要用过去式
第4行,lift应该是left;还有the woman说的话不要这样说,可以说"My leg aches”
      还有,My mother decided....不要to go 了,太罗嗦
第5行,Then we go to 应改为 went to,nearly改为nearest；
　　　The doctor said后接逗号　
第6行，We are 改为were
最后一行,other 后加s