original: The moon is very elongated, with its short axis 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis.
simplifications: The moon is oval, with its short axis 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis. The moon's short axis is 0.5 ± 0.1 times it's long axis The moon's shape is elongated. Its short line is 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long line. The moon is very elongated. Its short axis is 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis. The moon is very elongated. Its short axis is 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis. The moon is elongated, with a short axis 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis. The moon is very long. The moon is very elongated as its short axis is 0.5 ± 0.1 times longer than the long axis. The moon is very elongated. It has a short axis that is 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis. The moon is very curved, with a short axis of 0.5 ± 0.1 times the long axis.