original: His baptism followed on May 3 in the river Lark, at Isleham.
simplifications: His was baptised on May 3 in the river Lark, at Isleham. He was baptized on May 3 in Lark river. His baptism followed on May 3. It took place in the river Lark, at Isleham. His baptism went after on May 3. It was in the river Lark, at Isleham. His baptism was on May 3 in the river Lark, at Isleham. He was baptized on May 3 in the river Lark. His baptism followed on May 3. He was baptized in the river Lark, at Isleham. He was baptized at river Lark, Isleham on May 3. He was baptized on May 3 at Isleham, in the river Lark. His baptism was on May 3  and at the river Lark, Isleham