original: He commanded the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong and was promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910.
simplifications: He commanded the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong.  He was promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. He ordered India and Hong Kongs 25th Punjabis. He was promoted to Lieutenant-Colenel in 1910. He led the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong and was made a Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. He commanded the Punjabis and was promoted to Lieutenant Colonel in 1910. He commanded the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong. He was promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. He commanded the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong. He was promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. He commanded the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong. He was promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. He was the leader of the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong. He became Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910. Promoted to Lieutenant-Colonel in 1910, he oversaw the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong. He became Lieutenant -Colonel in 1910 after commanding the 25th Punjabis in India and Hong Kong.