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The 2016 Nobel Prize in physics has been awarded to David Thouless from the University of Washington, Duncan Haldane from Princeton University, and to Michael Kosterlitz from Brown University. Their work involved using the mathematical field to look at unusual states of matter, such as superconductors and superfluids. This work will give rise to new developments in material science and electronics, including in quantum computing.  
  
In 1980, the consensus as that superconductivity could not occur in thin layers, but Thouless and Kosterlitz showed that was wrong and used topology to explain why. They found that thin conductive layers could actually appear in materials by taking the form of discrete topological steps. Duncan Haldane also explains the magnetic properties of some materials. Initially the work "seemed very abstract" said Haldane, but as time went by more and more properties could be explained by topology.
Hello Yonathan,  
  
Their work involved by using the mathematical (...) superconductors and ~~superfluids~~super-fluids.  
  
~~This~~ Those/these work will give to rise ~~to~~a new developments in material ...  
  
but Thouless and Kosterlitz showed that (need subject/pronoun ) was wrong and used ...  
  
... layers could actually appear in materials by taking the form of discrete topological steps (need verb after gerund) so you can write: by taking the form of discrete has needed in topological steps  
  
Duncan Haldane also ~~explains~~explained (past tense) the magnetic properties ...  
  
hope these help
**The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.  
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?**  
  
There are several reasons why the internet could make a problem instead of making life easier Firstly, Internet may have several websites which are containing inappropriate content for children or even for adults. For example, research showed that 62 percent of parents say age-inappropriate content is their top concern such as pornographic material and content containing swearing. Secondly, the internet would be a problem if people don't have awareness about computer virus which hiding in many contents on the internet. Finally, the internet give so much information for many people but the validity of information are still questioned, many websites containing irresponsible and hoax information.  
  
On the other hand, I would suggest some solutions to prevent the problems which are caused by the internet. Firstly, educate yourself and your children with a large of information about how to use the internet properly and prevent particular inappropriate content or click bait which are some ads or contents containing viruses and malware if someone clicks it. The government also have to set some restrictions for some dangerous websites. Bitdefender research showed that about 10 percent of 10 years old children already search porn websites, and based on result government banned some website containing pornography and terrorism material. Finally, many peoples can use software such as antivirus and internet security to prevent malware which potentially damages your computer.  
  
In conclusions, the internet problem can be prevented with education, government and technology aspects.
hello yonathan, this some correction from me. Feel free to correct me too!  
  
*..... that 62 percent of parents **said that** age-inappropriate....*  
  
*.....content **being** their top concern such as....*  
  
*....if people **do not** have awareness about computer....*  
  
*....the internet **gives** so much information for many people...*  
  
*....which ~~are~~ caused by the internet.*  
  
Thanks, keep practice and write!
Helllo Brother  
Let me give you some advices  
  
Please pay attention with your singular or plural.  
  
... and your children **to know**~~with a large of information about~~ how to use ...  
  
~~Bitdefender~~**goerge michael** research showed  
  
Dear Jonathan  
I have some advice, you may need to add more solutions to overcome such problems. you can add solution in education point of view, such as involving schools and public figure to educate society.  
  
overalll it is good
Password Is Important for privacy your computer data. Password that your hear something to protect your data from unusable person. If you have account at hundreds different system we must think to have policy for you system. Old Password requerment is only one character system. New password at 1995 have a complex with Eight character example Uppercase, Lowercase, Digit, Symbol, No more than three of any character, Dictionary check. Result from 470 survey people want get more security from password and we also found new policy is annoying, New policy makes people feel more secure, 13% wrote down new password and 80% reuse password. A lot of people stealing password at internet. we should password not easy to guess. A lot of password using same type like name of animal, most popular artist or born date. We make must password base of things happy or something another person can not guess.
Hi..  
your essay is quite brief..  
I have something for you..  
  
Password Is Important for ~~privacy your computer data~~[the computer data privacy] . Password that your hear something[it is rather confusing, try to arrange simple and good sentences] to protect your data...  
  
... hundreds different system[,] we must think to have policy for you[the] system.  
  
I hope it helps..  
keep writing...
Autophagy, the process of recycling cells to provide energy needed to keep a starving cell alive, is the subject of this year's Nobel prise winner for physiology or medicine for Yoshinori Ohsumi of the Tokyo Institute of Technology.  
  
He began to conduct his research in 1988 as a well-studied organism intensively used by biologist in their work. He dealt with the difficulties of the finding and the detailed observation in order to find the process of autophagy. Eventually, the result was published in 1992 that became the first to be elucidated in its entirety as part of the Human Genome Project.  
  
Moreover, Dr. Oshumi was able to construct a complete picture of the process for his finding as it is a fundamental cellular process as well as this work has cast a light on diseases including Parkinson's and some sorts of diabetes.
Hello Korbansuspendcuy, I want to you gain some suggestion from me  
  
here we go  
  
Autophagy, the process of recycling cells to provide energy needed to keep a starving cell alive, **[you need conjunction or subject, if you reducing it, you should have verb-ing or to infinitive, depend on you type of clause]** is the subject of this year~~**'s**~~ Nobel **p**rise winner for ...  
  
**the "p" on "Prize" should be capital, during to in the fact that it is the name of this annualy event.**  
  
... as well as this work ~~has~~ cast**ing** a light on diseases including ...  
  
**I was read the Economist's article same like yours, in my opinion your essay it is too short summary, please lets myriad words out from your hands**.  
  
note: keep writing and go ahead.
Twitter has taken apart of America vice presidential debate of the 2016. Two candidates, Tim Kaine and Mike Pence are debating to grab American's voters. Along session, Kaine interrupted a lot while Pence was calm. Americans who was attended in venue which it predict Pence sixty percent won as vice president. This debate was successful because twitter gave real-time power in US democracy. Mike Pence spent much time not defending Donald Trump whereas Pence was brought out and stand in Hillary Clintons' campaign. He has only need material to win the race. On the other hand, for Donald Trump, he promised to tweet his running debate yesterday and ensured that many journalists are able to watch his feed in twitter. In the end, the debate was over and the election will be postponed for more than a month.
Hi PHA  
Let me give you some correction  
  
... vice presidential debate of ~~the~~ 2016.  
Along(with) session, Kaine ~~interrupted~~Interrupting a lot while Pence was calm. Americans who was attended ina venue which it ~~predict~~predicts Pence sixty ~~percent~~ won as vice president.  
  
He ~~has~~is only need material to win the race.  
... he promised ~~to~~from his tweet ~~his~~ running debate yesterday and ensured ...  
  
Thank you...
A research from MIT indigenous Language Initiative showed that the total of language in the world today is 6000 and it will be predicted to decrease significantly into only 600 in about a century to go. While the language begins to disappear, at the same time, English becomes an undisputed global language.  
  
This situation is likely a normal occurrence for our life now as the best education is found in the western county -UK and US-. Therefore, everybody wants to have western education and they attempt to learn English to pass the enrolment requirement of English test. It results in the notorious opinion that English language is changing from mutually beneficial practice into a massive international business and this condition is truly incorrect if the educational institution rejects applicants just because of their linguistic skill.  
  
In conclusion, people should celebrate the diversity, keep all of native languages and use it to spread the great ideas.
**The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.**  
  
Some people have a tendency that free trade agreement among countries will threaten local industries. I keenly agree with such opinion that free flow of goods is one the principal of international trade that should be supported due to its merit. These will be obviously explained in the paragraphs below.  
  
On the one hand, I agree that free flow of goods among countries will beat local products. Since local brands cannot rival with exported products which have better standard and more economical price. Therefore, the foreign goods are readily absorbed in the local market. For example foreign country has been producing LED TV with advanced technology as well as it is more affordable than home country products. When the products are exported to the domestic market, people tend to choose those products rather than domestic brands due to its quality and cost.  
  
Apart from previous explanations, I more like to agree that free trade agreement is necessary for those who are willing and eager to have the more competitive market. Having aggressive market competition is compulsory in order industries perform more competitive. It aims to provide an array of alternative and affordable products for the customers, for instance, it helps buyers to choose the best products with cheaper quality.  
  
In conclusion, while free trade agreement certainly beat local industries. I extremely believe that free flow of goods has more upsides than its drawbacks. In my opinion, free movement of goods across national borders has long a great idea to create the competitive market.  
  
**NOTE: Fell free to writing any comment, it must be followed by clear explanation**
Hi Lincoln.  
In this meeting with you, I only focus on contents of your essay. Please, meet my notes and deal with them.  
  
Some people have a tendency that free trade  
SOME ARE LIKELY TO STATE FREE TRADE  
Actually "have a tendency" and "BE likely to" virtually have the same meaning. However, you should order the word more proper. Its way is rereading your sentence. Make sure yourself whether that is proper or not.  
  
Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth  
when you wanna paraphrase statements of the question, you must do it totally. You did not include the first opinion of people.  
  
I agree that free flow of goods among countries will beat local products  
Be careful of the prompts in the question. You should not directly seem your position in the statement because the task response asks you to discuss two opinions. You are supposed to focus reviewing the reason why the matter can raise the economics and beat the local products. Because the prompt also asks your opinion personally, you can display at the last sentence in the body paragraph.  
  
For example foreign country has been producing LED TV with advanced technology ...  
The example of countries which you mean should be mentioned to strengthen your opinion. It is going to seem the layman's opinion.  
  
to have the more competitive market  
you should mention the point of the second opinion, the economic growth. After that, you reveal the reason why can raise the economics pace. Actually, you have had the reason, but you have to demonstrate that with the better flow so that readers know its topic idea.  
  
has more upsides than its drawbacks  
As we know, the question does not ask you to explain advantages and disadvantages. It will make you out of your topic.  
  
Keep Fighting  
GOOD LUCK
**TED 7, WHY YOU SHOULD TALK TO THE STRANGERS**  
  
Kio Stork made an explanation about how we can create an exquisite relationship with strangers we meet. To say hello and how are you to neighbors, greet people on the street, smile to them are such weird and avoid things to do by majority of people nowadays. It is a dangerous act to do especially for the kids who have no sense when they have to talk to the strangers or not to be to close. Basically, the simple words like hello and how are you seems too stereotype and nothing but, it seems completely different to the strangers you try to greet to, existence, a social meaning, is a great feeling to start a day. Noticing by people we do not know, smile to us, do not ignore us and spend time to have a chit chat with us is a form of merit of the world. A huge benefits will be felt by people who like to meet new people and build a short contact with the unknown human being around such as a liberating feeling and intimacy condition. These effects give a sense that it feels much better to talk to the strangers than families or friends, or even spouses. This feeling comes as talk to the people we meet only once in life is a quick interaction with no consequences in the long run. However a variety of cultures in diverse countries in the world raised different effects related to why we are suggested to talk to the unknown human. For example, in America it is a normal habit to be independent and ignore people around us, people will look away if they have to stand close one each other, they do that to give space to the person close to. In Denmark people will let their bus stop pass by to avoid of saying excuse me to go through a crowded bus to go down, while Egypt has a contrary habit of this thing, people will invite you to have a cup of coffee if you ask a direction to him. And it will be so rude to ignore people we meet out of home. Some steps people can follow to talk to the strangers, make an eye contact, smile, notice someone's shoes, or talk about something probably both of you see at that time. At the last time, she stressed thatwe could make a space for change.
......, smile to them are such weird and avoidED things to do by majority ...  
It is a dangerous act to ~~do~~ PERFORM especially for the kids who have no sense [Sense of what? incomplete information ] when they have (...) or not to be toO close.  
  
Basically, the simple ~~words~~ GREETINGS like hello (...) seem~~s~~ too stereotype and *nothing but, it seems completely different to the strangers you try to greet to, existence,...*confusing sentence. = basically, the simple greetings like hello and how are you seem to stereotype and nothing but for the strangers, it is totally different since it contains social meaning, a great feeling to start a day.  
  
~~Noticing~~ NOTICED by people we do not know, smileD to us, do not ignore us ...  
~~A~~ huge benefitS SUCH AS LIBERATING FEELING AND INTIMATE CONDITION will be felt by ~~people~~ THOSE who like to meet new (...) human being around ~~such as a liberating feeling and intimacy condition.~~  
  
This feeling comes as WE talk to the (...) once in life ~~is~~ AS a quick interaction with no ...  
However [NEED COMMA] a variety of cultures in diverse (...) talk to the unknown ~~human~~ ONES.
**Internet-based social networking sites are designed to help bring people together. However, they have a negative effect on the way we communicate with one another.  
  
Do you agree or disagree?**  
  
Most of people tend to use internet-based networking sites to communicate with others. Undoubtedly, this is because such sites provide easier ways to maintain human relationships. However, i agree that such communications should deteriorate individual ability to establish relationships offline and to have face-to-face interaction.  
  
Building a networking online diminishes individual skill to socialize in the real condition. People who rely their relationships on the internet-based media accept less support in which they confront serious problem. A study performed by Jean Twenge, a professor of psychology at San Diego State University, has proven that using Line results in an increase of stressful level in people aged 21-45-year old. Despite this, a positive effect of online interactions is that people can obtain higher communication access to their family.  
  
Another aspect which is affected by the Internet-based relationships is that teenagers are likely to have an online chat rather than real interaction. It is considered as a harmful effect because most of young people will face some difficulties when they want to have a direct speech with other. A study executed by the National Institute of Health found that youths who spend more than 10 hours on Facebook and twitter are more risky to fight other teenagers when they meet in the real situation. Meanwhile, other teens may be a good friendship with foreign youths via internet-based social media.  
  
In conclusion, modern society may not be able to refuse the new way of establishing relationships like the Internet-based social networking, but they also have to aware with its drawbacks. I suggest that the Internet users should have better attitude and behaviour in order to create better online communities.
Hi,  
  
Here's some comment from me:  
  
However, i agree that such communications ~~should~~ deteriorate individual ...  
  
.., has proven that using Line, AN INSTANT MESSAGING APPLICATION(it may not all of reader know about line) ~~results in an~~ increase ~~of stressful~~ level of stress ...  
  
Despite this, a positive effect of online interactions is that people can ... ( this line does not support previous lines a.k the negative effect of social media.  
  
I hope this helps,  
  
Cheers.
**The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries.  
  
Discuss both views and give your own opinion**  
  
It becomes clear that free movement goods across national borders has become common in some countries. However, it becomes controversial because this act may cause damage to local industries. Many local industries have many issues like lack of capital, low standard products, and unskilled worker. If other countries send goods which are higher quality and cheaper the local industries will hard to compete and collapse. If the government do not calculate the advantages and drawbacks carefully the free trade will trigger economic fell.  
  
In the other hand, the free trade also has several advantages if local industries are able to send local products to other countries. For example, the big local industries will send goods to other countries with just a little cost and have bigger merit. Otherwise, if a country decided to make a free trade among other countries surely because this act has several advantages than disadvantages for the home country. A free trade generally considered will increase economic growth and as a solution to overcome rarity of general good which caused inflation.  
  
In my opinion, I agree if the free trade occurred because it is hard to increase economic growth if government always give much protection toward local industry. For example, many local industries never think their unique product will have a customer from other countries, and the free trade will enforce them to think in the bigger way. The free trade will make local industries more competitive and force them to improve their advantage. The free trade also allows local industries to think creatively.  
  
In conclusions, I would agree that the advantages of free trade to other countries overweight the disadvantages.
Hello jojo  
let me give you some advices  
  
However, it becomes controversial because this act may ... >> (......) controversial or debatable issue because it might (....)  
  
... many issues ~~like~~such as lack of capital, low standard ...  
  
if other countries ~~send~~ produce good which ~~are~~have higher quality with~~and~~ cheaper price, the local industries will ~~hard~~comfort difficulties to compete ~~and collapse~~in the market and finally they will be collapse.  
  
If the government do not (...) the free trade will trigger economic fell. >>the free trade will be trigger to economical crisis.  
  
... industries will send goods to other countries with just a little cost ... >> with more efficient production cost and they earn bigger profit  
  
Keep writing
Hello Brother  
let me give you some advices  
  
it becomes controversial issue .  
  
Many local industries have many issues >> many local industries comfort many problems such as  
  
Unskilled workers  
  
If other countries send goods ~~which are~~have  
  
... will hard to compete and afterwards, collapse.  
  
the free trade will enforce them to think >> the free trade will impose local industries to have creative and innovative mind.  
  
Keep writing
The pie charts compare the data from survey between the relationship at work and relationship with working partner in the year of 2005 and 2009. Overall, in the relation at work, there are distinction in data of all type of answers toward the questionnaire between 2005 and 2009, while the differences of replies also recognize in those years.  
  
In the data response of survey of relationship with supervisor, almost three by four of employees are very satisfied in working with their chief, which were shown by increasing of answer "very good" from 61 percent to 65 percent in four years period. As the participants in 2009 loved to answers all the questions in surveys, the replies of 'no answer" was not present in the data, in consequence there would be an increase in all categories answers in 2009, for instance, "don't have supervisor" increases from 1% to 5%.  
  
On the other hand, the response towards relationships with co-workers had various differences in comparison of data between 2005 and 2009, which included the decline and climbed up in number of group of answers, for instance, increase from 63% to 70% of satisfaction working with their partners and decrease in answering "good" from 28% to 25%.  
  
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