Bisbee daily review., 1918-11-13
FOCH'S TERMS HARDER THAN
 FIRST DRAFT
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the occupation is under the control
 of the allied and United States armies,
 and the occupation is to be carried
 out by" instead of determined by" by
 allies and United States garrisons
 holding strategic points and the prin-
 cipal crossings of the Rhine. Thirty
 one days instead of 25 are allowed for
 completion of the evacuation.
 Article 6. Providing that no damage
 or harm shall be done to persons and
 property in territory evacuated by the
 Germans has a sentence added speci- fically stipulating that no person shall
 be prosecuted for offenses of partici- patton in war measures prior to the signing of the armistice.
 Article z. Providing for the aban- donment or delivery in good order to the associated powers of al roads and means of communication and trans portation in evacuated territory calls for 150,000 wagons (railroad car riages) instead of 50,O0O; 5000 motor iorries instead of 10000, and requires that all civil and military personnel at present employed on such means VI including waterways, shall remain. Thirty-one instead of 25 days are al- lowed for handing over the materials. Thirty-six days are allowed for the handing over of the railways in Al sace-Lorraine, together with the pre- war personnel
 Article s. Forty-eight hours is given the German command to reveal de- structive measures, such as polluted springs and wells and to reveal and assist in discovering and destroying mines or delayed action fuses on evacuated territories. No time limit was fixed originally.
 Article g. Providing for the right of requisition by the United States and allied armies in occupied territory has the clause added, subject to reg ulation of accounts with those whom it may concern"
 Article 10. Providing for the re- patriation without reciprocity of all allied and United States prisoners of war. including persons under trial or convicted had the following added
 This condition annuls the previous conventions on the subject of the ex- change Of prisoners of war, including the one of July, 1918, in course of ratification. However, the repatria- tion of German prisoners of war in- termed in Holland and in Switzerland shall continue as before. The repatria- tion of German prisoners of war shall be regulated at the conclusion of the preliminaries of peace
 Article 12. Providing for the with drawal of German troops from terri tory which belonged before the war to Russia, Rumania and Turkey, was rewritten. Territory which belonged to Austria is added to that from which the Germans must withdraw immedi- ately, and as to territory which be- longed to Russia it is provided the German troops now there shall with draw within the frontiers of Ger many ''as soon as the allies, taking into account the internal situation or those territories, shall decide the time for this has come"
 Article Is. Pronunciation" is sub stuted tor abandonment" in stipulat- ing the treaties of Bucharest and Brest-Litovsk are nullified.
 Article 16. Providing free access for the allies into territory evacuated through the German eastern frontier, is changed so as to declare such ac- cess is for the purpose of conveying supplies to the populations and for the purpose of maintaining order," in- stead of "or for any other purpose"
 Article IF. Originally providing for the unconditional equalization" with in one month of all German forces operating in east Africa, is substituted by a clause requiring only "eyacua- tion by all German forces operating in east Africa within a period to be fixed by the allies"
 Article IS. Providing for the re- patriation of all civilians belonging to the allies or associated powers other than those enumerated Tn Article 8, is amended to eliminate a reservation that any future claims or demands by the allies and the United States shall unaffected.
 Article 22. Providing for the sur render of 16O German submarines is NAoA6C0 NO lCdO HUN existing" with the added stipulation that those which cannot take the sea shall be jisarmed of the material and personnel and shall remain under the supervision of the allies and she United States" Further provisions are added requiring all the conditions of the article shall be carried into effect within II days. That subma- rines ready for sea shall be prepared 10 leave German ports immedlately upon orders by wireless and the re- Inalnder at the earliest possible mo- ment
 Article 23 Providing for the dispO- sition of German surface warships, ! mas additional clauses requiring that vessels designated for internment, l shall be ready to leave German ports 1 within seven days upon direction by and that the military arma- ment of all vessels of the auxiliary fleet shall be put on shore.
 Article 26. Providing that the allied l blockade remains unchanged has this ]