The Hawaiian star. [volume] (Honolulu [Oahu]) 1893-1912, 1911-05-29
ELABORATGNG PRESS cABLEGRAMs.


Some of the Stars readers have complain this
paper does publish much cable do its rivals We have
until withheld discussion of this subject privately butt
only journal and friends explain the case
The Star and Bulletin get the Associated Press report and anl
difference between e two and the morning PAPERS rendering
matter editing We may add that the full the Star
always appears edition and sometimes in the first
To illustrate Saturday May following Associated
Press kilograms from New York the Star and Bulletin Wei
give the text of the cable
New, York Dreamland coneyilqnd DESTROYED fire sixty
crowd Tiddod policeman eight
There the whole story The Star rendered in this
ae Sw T9 By May S s % st p S2a 9R Tas
riddied BY the bullets Of policemen. The burned
GS loss 'sn be 99S tT0 a %d three millions %
The reader will see that the begram printed
but that contained all the the excepting for
We now come to the Bulletins presentation of the same dispatch
FSs ma: aS%S9 !'2os
has @ s aoa a5i Of ' Rso aso % s6 1s %
tendants who succeeded getting
@Sl rs a ANIMALS death 9sst e s n he s.ee
@ o The D zoo ssSs nGfd e s6 9So so WAS 6s
g hD emen on 5rok we're o Sa'if cage and
chase and drawing their revo3ers hddd frghtened
ANIMAL h wn bullets q3G eoPPeS Ggaa and two hundred
buildings destroyed The loss S estima
Here have added the facts given in the Star effort to
heghen the interest of the reader The incubator babies which
probably place by the alarm
sounded subject daring sensational by fire
danger in the nick of time This made the cabegra much longer
than the paid for but the bald narrative had been highly adorned
animals, "among
animals that be replaced said Of 1T
sad by the Bulletin only and endorsed by the Advertiser which did
not receive the dispatch all Then entirely gratutous
the big in the path the flames and the great
good luck by which number of the inhabitants of the mnagere
saved In the original cabgram nothing of the kind appeared
Honolulu does not know unless private kilograms have been received
whether animals saved
The lion which broke from his cage and dded the only
beast escape
fine for the story and made the thrilling.
Now the Advertisers rendition of that condensed little
cabgram which precisely the Bulletins except
embelshed with picture OF the neghboood Probably our
morning contemporary did think of fresh details add
Here examples:
On the day, 27t this dispatch came to the Star and Bull
letin from Vera Cruz
attacked thirty killed
The TR F published gRz d,E Ee9erng . n nn. pr,
Ras HERE sd atsd by rebels 5a nss y of whom
Below is the Bulletins Interpretation of the telegram:
VERA CRUZ Mex May 275While on his way to the
coast the train containing eTPTdent Diaz was attacked
desperate fight ensued Thirty rebels killed Diaz
The above carry establishment you'll
think of this from the Advertiser which afternoon service
VERA CRUZ May 28.-whue o city from
BY bandits Who held up the train he travelling in
The guards on the train defended it, and band of
pionists in the vicinity to the rescue and drove off
It 5 State saif Spain Wednesday
and that it is doubtful if he will Mexico
the above cbgram rebels changed bandits
band of revoutons' invented the and kill
the robbers And there you are One but admit that the morning
than the original abgram Possibly follow dispatch in the
ing brought additional news in which only
PLANTATION which fair to the afternoon press and the public and which
the coast morning papers of the date would confirm,
Meanwhile let the public understand that depend upon
Star and the Star only print the Associated Press
and il the cabegam are not SO yomnous with with
tempoaes that because the Star does add anything them
except the connecting words and signs.
to AVE npedO on