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Evidence: and communty service is if people that not doing what there not post to do and outhers can do it to help this community and this world will be ok we wont have to find an new home we will just be fine we need to stop all the killing and more help people get back on there feet we need to find pets homes keep people of the streets the crime that's happing we need to try to stop it help people that in need help them like feed them and outhere stuff to make this place an better place we need to help each outher we just need to get to geathere and get alone with one and anthere and bring this world togeathere when we do that then we can stand up for our self and help outhere that need help and save the needes we can do this we cant be scard to do it ya we need some of it but we can help when we get it then when we have the stuff we need we can give the rest to needes that would give them a lot to live for and us to so that what we need to do to this community but we cant do this becouse some people is greaty over money thay will try to teas us with it so we can be just like them but i don't care i share my stuff be when im out i go work for my money then when i get what i need ill give the rest away to the needes i donat food to needes every day to help so those that is in need of help i pray for them and i help an lil girl find her famely she was lost for 20 days i let her stay at my house till we found her famely then i found 200 on the ground i was think for an min what im going to do so i save it and i still got it till this day till i need it

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