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Evidence: Going to school will get you a far in life, and will get you through a lot of the obstacles that you go through. I go through anxiety, because I go to school though being around all these people taught me how to fight the anxiety. Whenever I would feel nervous or intense I know that I can get through it. If I did school at home, I would have never taught my self how to go through that because I would not have that communication and in school life to help me adapt to it. In the show the Fosters,

Aiden homosexual in the show did not go to school for three weeks because he was scared, but when he went to school everyone clapped for him and showed him that he was loved

Score: 1