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Evidence: We could do so much if we were to put this rule into our school program.

I do community service every year just to help out the community without being required to do it.

I have cleaned up the park, helped make sandwiches for the homeless, helped kids with disabilities.

I can only imagine how much this could change our community if everybody in our school were required to do this.

People that we would be helping would be so grateful.

We as a school could become the school that everyone talks so greatly about.

We could start promoting this idea around school by hanging posters up, handing out flyers, reminding people on the morning and afternoon announcements.

Score: 2