Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: Also if you have your cell phone on you instead of taking notes in class some cell phones have a camera and the ones with cameras could take a picture of their notes. If you need to find out what a word means you can just look it up on your phone. If you turn them off when they are supposed to be turned off then there are no problems. Also some people forget to bring lets say there gym clothes they could just call or text there parents and they could bring them.

Score: 1