Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: Example: say if Generic_Name was very shy to talk in front of a class, but he really want to become a business man and it requires talking in front of is business partners about business, but he still to shy to talk; so he does a extracurricular activity about debating and he found confidence in his self, and now he can talk in front of class presentations and it will help him to become a better business man. that's an example of the effects that it do to a student's character.

Score: 1