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Concluding Statement: To reiterate, students should be required to perform a community service because it will give them a chance to put their "self love" on low by helping others. The way I see it, students are on one side of the fence, and because they've never left that one side, they have been led to believe that it is all sunshine and rainbows. However, by requiring of them to take the fence down, they will realize that the grass is much greener in the other side. Don't you want to lead your students to greener grasses?

Score: 2