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Concluding Statement: If you get behind my idea, I know students and teachers will follow us and make a huge difference in our community.

We could even send out e-mails to each student's parents telling them of this idea.

If the parents find out about this, I believe they will certainly force their kids to take part in a small amount of community service.

All I am asking from you, is to just enforce this one little rule into our school.

It could change lives.

I am not asking for everybody to do a whole lot, just 24 hours of your life to help out the community.

There are so many opportunities for our students to help out our community.

Who knows, maybe you could save somebody's life while doing the community service.

Score: 2