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Evidence: Giannis Antetekumpu, a NBA player from Greece dropped out of high school in Greece and wanted to work. Giannis had a great relationship with one of the teachers, that teacher made Giannis go to school again and play basketball, than he became a MVP in the NBA because of that teacher. At Towson University people 30% of the people who took the LSAT

from studying online failed because there was no communication, and first hand learning. 70% of the people who took the test while attending school passed. This shows that going to school gives you those relationships and communication skills that is needed to be well off in the future.

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